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Brockton's Celestial Forge (Worm/Jumpchain)

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LordRoustabout said:
The hyper-velocity rounds travel so fast that even over distances of two kilometers it is not necessary to lead targets to guarantee impact.
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Someone check my napkin math, because I'm getting speeds over mach 100 out of this with correspondingly absurd kinetic energy equivalent to hundreds of times the bullet's weight in explosives.
 
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Methed up divine war kitty had me laughing to the point that I had to take a break from the chapter to get myself under control again.
 
LordRoustabout said:
Oi! (Titanfall) Free:
The funny thing about accents is how divisive they are on the frontier. The IMC troops- who come from the Core Systems, all speak with a very distinct British accent. Meanwhile, the Militia have strong American accents, and strangely, any ex-IMC defectors seem to lose the accent in a matter of weeks. Now, you have the ability to alter your own accent, which seems to spread like wildfire to anyone that follows you, so it becomes an identifier of your faction.
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Anyone that follows you. And Tybalt has it.

So, if the Cat of War gets any disciples, he could start having them speak in Felyne? Or accented with Felyne.

*is imagining a group of rough warrior types buffed like Astartes speaking with cat noises thrown in here and there like they were catgirls, sipping on milkshakes given from their cat leader they all pay respect to*
 
I really don't think having Aisha stay for the whole year is a good idea, people change in that amount of time and being stuck with only 4 or 5 people isn't the healthiest for her or her relationships outside the celestial forge, just imagine how her relationship with Brian would change when she has "lived" more time than him

I really don't like the fact that the titans are being forcefully replicated for 3 reasons
1. They are subpar technology and will continue to come out as such
2. They are artificially intelligent and have the ability to grow, which could be fixed if they came out offline but they are all active when they come into being
3. They won't be able to be used much as they have a worse problem than the gundams in that they are too big for anywhere but a war zone and too numerous to use without declaring war

be careful utilising time compression because as I said before it screws with the socialisation of the participants with those that are outside, force power boosts (I'm still salty about that CF fic that turned the MC into a Saiyan) and prevent the story from progressing while forcing plot not to mention that age becomes an issue, which you seek sidestepped by only speeding up the soul, but the soul in fiction generally has a half life before it breaks down
 
Tackyseven said:
Uhuh so you're telling me that every other thinker power works normally except Jack's even though they all depend on sharing information with each other to do what they do, the ony difference between Jacks shards and others is that broadcast uses the communication every shard does to keep Jack alive, if not being in the shard network was enough then no precog power should work on him at all. Everything from Coil to dinah to PTV. But they do, and we know this because of the coil interlude early in the story where we see Garmet defend a half dead Joe. Even though no one knew she existed and the shards should have zero information on her since she wasn't in the network. Yet coils simulation of reality accurately showed her fighting to coil even though she should have been a total out of context problem in regards to the cycle shards as I understand it. But it's a moot point later looking at your spoiler
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I guess this comment got funny rated because I misspelled didn't write Garment -_- I'm not gonna change it! Accept your mistakes and move on Tacky! XD

otherwise I have no idea why, does it sound stupid a crackpot theory? For clarification I'm talking about the interlude where AFAIR the only thing Garment had done in public was ride a motorcycle, granted she must have met those empire capes in their civilian identities but she had not done anything close to being violent at the time, not even Joe knew she could do anything like that.

Brainstorm813 said:
March, as in March, April, May. That's the spelling of 'March', not Marsh. I think there was a Marsh in canon, but that could be fandom contamination.
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lol never mind ok I get why, I guess in my mind she's not March but a dirty disgusting Marsh filled with sewer water or something...at least that's my excuse
 
Anaja said:
Methed up divine war kitty had me laughing to the point that I had to take a break from the chapter to get myself under control again.
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Asmodemus said:
Anyone that follows you. And Tybalt has it.

So, if the Cat of War gets any disciples, he could start having them speak in Felyne? Or accented with Felyne.

*is imagining a group of rough warrior types buffed like Astartes speaking with cat noises thrown in here and there like they were catgirls, sipping on milkshakes given from their cat leader they all pay respect to*
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Tybalt: MEOW! (MERCHANTS! You will cease the sale of drugs to Brockton Bay citizens immediately… and instead, you will sell them to me!)

Skidmark: What the fuck, nya :3
 
Is Oi! one of the powers Joe can turn off? Because if not we're going to have people start finding Survey's civilian form even more hard-to-place what with her having an accent that's both natively ancient greek AND natively felyne.
 
Tackyseven said:
otherwise I have no idea why, does it sound stupid a crackpot theory? For clarification I'm talking about the interlude where AFAIR the only thing Garment had done in public was ride a motorcycle, granted she must have met those empire capes in their civilian identities but she had not done anything close to being violent at the time, not even Joe knew she could do anything like that.
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I know what interlude you're referring to and to clarify, Lord has ruled that Coil is weird and his power has some redundancies or something. Basically, it doesn't function like other entity precog. It'll come up later in the story
 
Tackyseven said:
otherwise I have no idea why, does it sound stupid a crackpot theory? For clarification I'm talking about the interlude where AFAIR the only thing Garment had done in public was ride a motorcycle, granted she must have met those empire capes in their civilian identities but she had not done anything close to being violent at the time, not even Joe knew she could do anything like that.
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I think this is one of those cases where Wildblow's inconsistent world-building meant LordR had to make a call, and erred on the side of 'Coil does in fact make multiple timelines and choose one' which means his 'test' realities did in fact have everything emulated including out-of-context things like the alternate 'fandom brain' passenger going apeshit at the sight of Coil mercenaries, and Garment turning into a blender of fabric death.
 
So can someone explain it to me? I don't get it
So Joe will train himself in a time dilation bubble? For an entire year? Or i just missed something?
If that's the case, i cannot imagine the consequences for psychology for Joe or even worse Aisha
 
Asmodemus said:
Anyone that follows you. And Tybalt has it.

So, if the Cat of War gets any disciples, he could start having them speak in Felyne? Or accented with Felyne.

*is imagining a group of rough warrior types buffed like Astartes speaking with cat noises thrown in here and there like they were catgirls, sipping on milkshakes given from their cat leader they all pay respect to*
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So uwu speak with cat puns thrown in?

Fur nya empurrur, uwu
 
GeekGod_of_Speed said:
I really don't think having Aisha stay for the whole year is a good idea, people change in that amount of time and being stuck with only 4 or 5 people isn't the healthiest for her or her relationships outside the celestial forge, just imagine how her relationship with Brian would change when she has "lived" more time than him
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True but she has made her choice, she could have back it out but she is determined to do it together. We just have the changes next week. I do like Aisha get more Mature than even her brother.
 
Tackyseven said:
Uhuh so you're telling me that every other thinker power works normally except Jack's even though they all depend on sharing information with each other to do what they do, the ony difference between Jacks shards and others is that broadcast uses the communication every shard does to keep Jack alive, if not being in the shard network was enough then no precog power should work on him at all. Everything from Coil to dinah to PTV. But they do, and we know this because of the coil interlude early in the story where we see Garnet defend a half dead Joe. Even though no one knew she existed and the shards should have zero information on her since she wasn't in the network. Yet coils simulation of reality accurately showed her fighting to coil even though she should have been a total out of context problem in regards to the cycle shards as I understand it. But it's a moot point later looking at your spoiler
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Actually it's the other way around. No thinker power except Coil's works on him since the villain meet-up but everyone thinks they do because he has a device that misleads thinker powers into believing that he'll be completely passive unless provoked.

Joe has received a hell of a lot of powers since Coil's first few attempts to discover Joe's identity and he hasn't even tried recently because Dinah has been unknowingly feeding Coil false information.

Edit: Also precog powers work by simulating events based on observations of the planet as a whole. If it only worked based on a person being connected to the shard network then no one would be able to predict non-parahumans, so predicting Garment is obviously something a shard could do as she has no protection against thinker powers herself.
 
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