So a thought went into my head today:

What if Second Impact truly was an accident? SEELE did not exist, no dead sea scolls and SI happened because Mankind decided to mess with things beyond their understanding, how much would the series change for our characters if there was no bad guy other than the Angels?

While not quite 100% following this exact premise, GobHobblin's Someplace Vast and Dry provides an alternative (and unfortunately discontinued) retelling of NGE where Second Impact was indeed an accident.

  • The 2015 UN Katsuragi Expedition was investigating an unusual atmospheric phenomena at the South Pole, rather than discovering and poking at an alien progenitor
  • Shinji Katsuragi's advance team was caught at the epicenter of "The Event" and exposed to fatal levels of radiation, but managed to warn Gendo, Yui, Kyoko and Naoko to evacuate the rest of the Expedition before they were vaporized by a high energy flux
  • A US naval task force evacuating the expedition's survivors was almost overrun by eldritch abominations emerging from the flux, before the portal was finally sealed with a nuclear weapon
  • Second Impact, aka "Arrival Day", occured when more eldritch abominations ("The Others") emerged from multiple fluxes worldwide, devastating population centers
  • Gendo and Yui adopted Misato, as per Dr. Katsuragi's dying request
  • In 2017, the US Army asked Yui to help examine an alien white giant dubbed "Lilith", which had appeared in a field; Lilith mentally communed with Yui, warning her of superior Others called "The Messengers" and bequeathing her own flesh to humanity, before dying due to complications
  • The NERV pact was formed by various major superpowers to develop a defense against the Others; Gendo was selected as director of NERV-Japan due to his own merits as an accomplished physicist and A.T. Field expert, as well as his leadership during the evacuation of the Katsuragi Expedition
  • NERV was actually part of a two-branch organization, with NERV focusing on applied R&D, intelligence and tactical operations, while the supervisory GEHIRN tended towards theoretical R&D, policy and finance
  • GEHIRN chairman Lorenz Kihl was a renowned physicist who had made a name for himself in advanced weapons R&D for NATO; Gendo and Yui disliked Kihl due to what they (correctly) perceived as some sort of ulterior ambition, as well as a subsequent feud over Lilith's remains
  • Yui and Kyoko created Rei and nine other human-lilithian hybrids, as human-sized prototypes of the actual biological weapons systems needed to fight the Others; Yui used frozen samples of her own ovum out of convenience, and grew the hybrids in LCL-filled artificial wombs
  • Gendo and Yui's natural-born son Shinji was named after their laate friend Dr. Katsuragi
  • Rei grew up alongside her older brother, and was incredibly resilient as a child, recovering from cuts and scrapes almost instantaneously; on the other hand, her nine other sisters would experience neurological decay and cardiac arrest unless constantly immersed in LCL
  • Misato was fairly close to Rei and Shinji as well, never feeling threatened or replaced
  • Gendo cultivated Shinji's love of music via his old SDAT player and watching symphony orchestras on TV together to distract themselves from the doom and gloom of the news
  • Kyoko's husband Martin Langley was a former staff sergeant in the Bundeswehr, and exceptionally devoted to his wife and daughter Asuka; Martin had grown up in an abusive household, and was actually illiterate for most of his adult life until he met Kyoko
  • Martin joined NERV's Security Department
  • Naoko raised Ritsuko as a doting single mother after her (unnamed) husband died many years ago
  • Naoko encouraged Ritsuko to seek her own path in life, although Ritsuko defaulted to studying Computer Science and Metabiology just like her mother
  • Ritsuko and Misato were close friends since their teenage years
  • Misato wanted to enlist in the military to fight the Others and avenge her biological father; Gendo persuaded her to join the JSSDF equivalent of ROTC, as well as emphasizing the importance of a good university education
  • Yui's former doctoral supervisor Kozo Fuyutsuki became good friends with Gendo, and the two would often bounce ideas off each other
  • Rei, Shinji and Asuka grew up as childhood friends, with Shinji and Asuka fighting over Shinji's stuffed penguin Pen-Pen, which the adults suspected was actually Asuka having a crush on Shinji
  • NERV staff also did their best to raise Rei's nine other sisters despite their handicap, dubbing them the "mermaids"; Gendo, Yui and Kyoko would take turns spending time in the tanks teaching them proper human interaction
  • The mermaids were also quite find of Fuyutsuki
  • The Evangelion units were developed based on research into Rei and her sisters; 00 was grown from a sample of Rei's cells, boosted more towards Lilith; 01 and 02 were similarly Lilithian-boosted versions of Yui and Kyoko
  • After a terrorist attack involving a stolen N2 device wipes out the city of Aomori, the Japanese government devises the controversial "Three Tokyos" plan to ensure continuity of government; Hakone becomes Tokyo-3
  • GEHIRN and NERV begins to fracture after Kihl demanded custody of Rei and her sisters
  • Yui survived her Contact Experiment with Unit 01, leaving behind a copy of her "soul"
  • Kyoko's own experiment with Unit 02 was sabotaged by mercenaries hired by Kihl as a prelude to a raid on NERV, rendering her senile
  • Kihl's mercenaries failed to kidnap Rei or any of the mermaids, but made off with some leftover cell samples
  • Kyoko eventually died of an apparent stroke, due to complications from a head injury after a mercenary struck her in the head to stop her nonsensical babbling
  • Minutes after Kyoko's death, Unit 02 finally achieved resonance
  • A heartbroken Martin resigned from NERV and moved to Switzerland with Asuka
  • Shinji gave Asuka his cherished Pen-Pen doll as a parting gift
  • Yui discovered Kyoko's intact and sane soul now lived on inside Unit 02; Gendo quietly put Kyoko's body on ice in the hopes they could reverse the process someday
  • Naoko tricked 00 into resonance without a Contact Experiment, using modified cell samples from Rei
  • The Evangelions slowly became semi-sentient, and started requesting Rei and Shinji to pilot them; Kyoko fought to keep her own urge for her daughter in check
  • Horrified, Gendo and Yui sent Shinji away for his own safety; Gendo took the time to explain to and reassure his son
  • Shinji was sent to live in Detroit with a trusted Section Two bodyguard, an Afrikaans man named Hunter Vaas
  • Gendo and Yui remained in touch with Shinji, visiting him in person when possible
  • Consequently, Shinji grows up to have a fairly normal self-esteem despite his living arrangements
  • After Misato was wounded fighting insurgents in Indonesia, Gendo convinced her to transfer to a joint JSSDF-NERV post back at the newly-constructed Geofront
  • Meanwhile, after the GEHIRN-NERV split, Kihl and his new SEELE agency secretly created Kaworu Nagisa using the stolen Lilith cells (and possibly Kihl's own DNA); presumably, SEELE is building its own Evangelions to fight the Others in Europe, while secretly pursuing a bioweapons arms race with NERV
  • With each incursion by the Others, the aliens became more biologically complex; NERV and SEELE would race to acquire their remains by negotiating with local governments
  • SEELE makes a clumsy attempt on Shinji's life, with the real aim to unsettle Gendo enough to have NERV miss out on acquiring the Other that attacked New York
  • Gendo, Yui and Fuyutsuki continue to grow their network of political, scientific and corporate allies to counter SEELE's influence
  • Gendo convinces Martin to move back to Tokyo-3 with Asuka, based on Yui and Naoko's theory that having the children in proximity instead of actually piloting may be enough to activate them
  • Rei and Asuka rekindle their childhood friendship, studying together while Rei teases Asuka about her lingering crush on Shinji
  • Gendo, Yui and Naoko continue to seek Kyoko's expertise, keeping her current disposition a secret
  • NERV continues to have trouble finding suitable adult pilot candidates
  • When an Other attacks Tokyo-3 for the first time, Rei and Asuka convince Naoko to let Rei try to pilot Unit 00
  • Rei defeats the Other, suffering excruciating pain despite no visible injuries and Unit 00's best efforts to protect her
  • Yui has a brief falling out with Naoko over her allowing Rei to pilot
  • Martin, still unaware of Kyoko's current disposition, cautiously grants Gendo permission to utilize Asuka as a pilot
  • At the mermaids' analysis and suggestion, Martin begins training Rei and Asuka in CQB
  • Kyoko tries to set Martin up with Naoko, as the former accepts she is legally deceased, but Naoko refuses out of respect for her friend
  • Gendo and Yui wonder if and when to bring Shinji home
  • (story discontinued from here onwards)
 
Rei either isn't part of the story
Yeah you can switch her out for Mari.
Kaworu might not exist at all.
Kaworu can still be here as his origin was never really explain in the series. Just say he's an Angel who did not cast of his human form.
it seems plausible that Kaworu winds up drawn to Rei rather than Shinji, as in Advice and Trust, due to their own similar natures.

but grows attached to Rei and maybe tries to resist his call. Or, heck, maybe he fails to and begs l Rei to end his life, only for Rei to find a way to contain him instead.
I prefer that Kaworu only really has a "thing" for Shinji.
 
In regards to ideas for future chronicles, here are two suggestions.

Samurai Jack Season 5

Final Fantasy 7 Advent Children Complete
 
Eh, let's give everyone a break from the extistential horror. Have either Girls und Panzer or the Star Trek reboot be dropped off.
While i approve of "lighter&Softer" series(having already gave two ideas via Velocity PM(How Not To Summon A Demon Lord and Mysteria Friends) how about something more a la Laggan in...reaction potential. Like Dxd; It's a ridicules story that still somehow does serous well and is about a guy getting a group of girls. All this has got to get a wide range of reactions from the cast.
 
"Oh. It appears I have returned to the cupcake timeline. I'm sure this is somehow the fish's fault."
R: "At least i'm not alone this time..."

S: "Yeah, uh... That probably isn't a good thing, seeing as the two of us had to use Unit-03 and a Dirac Sea to get you out the other times this happened."

A: "Eh, Misato'll think of something. Only other time I've felt this relaxed is--"

R: "Asuka, you're baked."

A: "...you don't say..."
 
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R: "At least i'm not alone this time..."

S: "Yeah, uh... That probably isn't a good thing, seeing as the two of us had to use Unit-03 and a Dirac Sea to get you out the other times this happened."

A: "Eh, Misato'll think of something. Only other time I've felt this relaxed is--"

R: "Asuka, you're baked."

A: "...you don't say..."
A: "Still, this isn't the worst scenario I had in mind."

R: "And that would be?"

A: "The plastic bottle timeline."

R: "…yeah, that."
 
I regards to the suggestions I made, I imagine that seasons 1-4 of Samurai Jack were aired before the second impact. Since the Playstation 1 was released in the 1990's, Then Final Fantasy 7 would have also been released before the second impact as well. I would not be surprised if Asuka and Shinji watched the show and played the game during their down time. By the way, I would take great pleasure in eating the Seele cupcake.
 
I regards to the suggestions I made, I imagine that seasons 1-4 of Samurai Jack were aired before the second impact.
Samurai Jack began airing in 2001, in August. 9 episodes aired before the date of Second Impact, on September 13th, making up about two-thirds of Season 1 of the show. Production on further episodes, including the following non-revival seasons, would have inevitably have been halted by the worldwide catastrophe, so it's unclear if it would have begun airing again after this. With it being American, and also with the chance that it not airing as many episodes might have meant it didn't become as well regarded, Asuka and Shinji having heard of it is, though not impossible, somewhat unlikely. If they reacted to Season 5, they'd probably need to react to everything else, too.
 
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"Oh. It appears I have returned to the cupcake timeline. I'm sure this is somehow the fish's fault."
Insert obligatory "sweet tooth" and "good enough to eat" jokes here.
A: "Still, this isn't the worst scenario I had in mind."

R: "And that would be?"

A: "The plastic bottle timeline."

R: "…yeah, that."
Chronicles should do SG-1 next. With a particular emphasis on this part of Episode 200. :lol
 
Samurai Jack began airing in 2001, in August. 9 episodes aired before the date of Second Impact, on September 13th, making up about two-thirds of Season 1 of the show. Production on further episodes, including the following non-revival seasons, would have inevitably have been halted by the worldwide catastrophe, so it's unclear if it would have begun airing again after this. With it being American, and also with the chance that it not airing as many episodes might have meant it didn't become as well regarded, Asuka and Shinji having heard of it is, though not impossible, somewhat unlikely. If they reacted to Season 5, they'd probably need to react to everything else, too.


oops. My bad.
 
Chapter 11.17
Alright, let's make this official. Update time. No more distractions... wait, I need to make dinner. BRB.

Ok, take two! Let's get our heroines moving towards their boys, and things that will happen at the hospital.

Art?




Chapter 11.17
Cards On The Table

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Eventually, they crawled out of bed.

Asuka had missed the luxuriant softness of the mattress Shinji had gotten her for Christmas, but sleeping next to Rei on a futon wasn't too bad. The faint sense of Rei's presence and warmth next to her had let sleep come a little easier. Though to be fair, it had mostly been a fight between exhaustion from the day and tension over all the things Rei had told her, with the exhaustion finally winning.

Rei's bed-head had provided a welcome moment of amusement that set things off on a happier note. It kept the weirdness of Rei's revelations at bay for long enough for them to rise and have breakfast. Asuka caught herself staring at Rei as they finished eating, however.

Rei noticed her stares, and quickly dropped her eyes away, saying nothing.

"Rei, look at me."

The bluenette reluctantly raised her head.

Asuka met her stare with an outward calm and confidence she could only partly back up. "I said it last night. You're still our Rei. Everything else... we'll deal with, once Shinji and I can talk about it. But never forget that part. Ancient alien whatsits, clones, whatever. You're still just the second person in my whole life to say you loved me, and I'm keeping that. Understand?"

Rei nodded, a tiny blush lighting her cheeks. "Understood." She fidgeted, then stood up to collect their breakfast plates and carry them to the sink, just trying to bleed of nervous energy. "What do we do now?"

Asuka took out her phone and glared at it. "No messages, no calls... and I'm out of patience for waiting. Come on. We're going to boot Misato awake and get her to drive us to the hospital. We have people to see." She stood up and headed for the door and their shoes.

Rei managed her first faint smile of the day. "You are eager to get back to Shinji's bedside, of course."

Asuka put her shoes on and turned around to face Rei. "And you're not looking forward to getting to see your stupid fish's face again? He is your boyfriend, after all."

Rei flushed and couldn't suppress an instinctive look around to see if anyone else had heard. "Asuka! He is not my boyfriend!"

Asuka rolled her eyes. "Boy, those reflexes you learned off me are a bitch. Ok, Rei, let's check. Has he said he loves you?"

"...yes."

"And you've said to his face you love him?"

"..........yes."

"And there's been some kissing, I bet?"

Rei shoulders hunched a little. "Um... yes. At Christmas, after the party. And New Year's. And... the movie. And in the hospital."

"And you called him patient, kind, selfless, and brave, ja? He's yours. You'd be surprised at some of the things he's said about you to us, Rei. He's gaga for you."

Rei gave a sheepish nod. "Maybe."

Asuka's sly grin peaked, then dimmed a little. "And we're all about to take on the world to make sure he lives and survives to be your Rainbow Trout for a good long while? And you're ready to do whatever you need to make that come true?"

Rei's hunch eased. "...yes."

Asuka's grin was back full force. "Then say it with me. 'I have a boyfriend.'"

"I have a... boyfriend."

"'I am going to see my boyfriend.'"

Rei's face was doing its best impression of Asuka's hair. "I am going to s-see my boyfriend."

"'And tell him I love him.'"

Rei twitched. "I... may have trouble... saying that so plainly."

Asuka laughed. "Trust me, Rei, it gets better every time you say it. Its great."

She took Rei by the hand. "Now come on. Let's go get Major Drinker and Kaji up, and make them drive us in, before I can't resist making you repeat one more thing."

"What?"

"'I am going to see my boyfriend, and explain why I spent a good part of last night kissing you,'" Asuka said with a shark-like grin.

"Asuka!"

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Asuka paused before knocking on Misato's bedroom door. Kaji was definitely in there with her. His shoes were still at the front door, and he certainly wasn't sleeping in her and Shinji's room. He wasn't on the living room couch, either. He theoretically could have been in Shinji's old room, but Asuka knew that wasn't likely. And while she once would have loved to have caught Kaji in undoubtedly gorgeous morning stubble, right now she really did not want to catch Kaji and Misato in bed together. Especially with what they had undoubtedly been doing once Asuka left last night. She'd managed to fall asleep before any audio confirmation could bleed through the wall Rei's apartment shared with this one, fortunately.

"They are both still asleep," Rei said very quietly from behind her. "Though Major Katsuragi is rousing at our footsteps."

Asuka glanced worriedly back at her friend. "You... can tell all that?"

Rei nodded.

Asuka shivered slightly and turned back to face the door. It was too early for her to have to start thinking about Rei's... abilities. 'Gott, I hope Shinji is awake to talk to before we go see Kaworu. I can't... I need you, Shinji.'

She raised her hand and rapped twice on the sliding door. "Misato, wake up. We need you to get us down to the Geofront hospital with all speed."

A displeased groan came from inside. "Asuka, it's too damn... what time is it, even? Just... get Section Two to drive you down."

Asuka crossed her arms in front of her chest and frowned. "Misato, I want you to say that last part again, slowly."

"Just get Sectio-.... fuck. Alright. Give me five minutes."

"That's what I thought."

"Just... go get me a bee-... damn it." Muffled cursing ensued, mingled with a more baritone grumble as Kaji stirred. "Go turn the coffee machine on, will you?"

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"Ready to fill me in on what you and Rei talked about last night, Asuka?"

Asuka looked at Rei. She was comfortably sitting next to Rei in the tight backseat of Misato's Renault, with Kaji up front with Misato. They'd managed to avoid any conversation so far on the drive towards the Geofront access tunnel thanks to the general air of 'it's too bloody early', but Misato had apparently woken up enough to start thinking now that they were about to reach the station, and lose their freedom to speak without fear of MAGI eavesdropping. "Er... I want to talk to Shinji and Kaworu first, Misato. Just... straighten a few things out first."

An idea struck her. The perfect Misato distraction bait. Rei would just have to take one for the team. "Oh, and you can start teasing Rei, now. She's finally admitted the Fifth Child is her boyfriend. Guess yesterday's attack pushed her across the line of admitting it."

Misato blinked, and her eyes lit up. She locked her eyes on Rei's reflection in the rear-view mirror. "Really? Is that so, Rei? Finally hooked your Fish, eh?" She shot a quick look back at Asuka. "I'm still going to want that brief later on, Asuka. But spill it, Rei."

Rei shot Asuka a blushing pout before turning her eyes back to Misato. "...Yes, Major. Kaworu and I have... come to an understanding."

"That's... pretty amazing. I thought you didn't remember him?"

"I do now. I remembered everything yesterday just before the shooting. I therefore did not have opportunity to mention it. This would be among the things Asuka and I discussed last night. As it is..." Rei shifted in her seat. "I am... eager to see him. And... talk."

"Well, well, well..." Misato hummed with amusement. "I can see we're going to have to have a special dinner tonight! We'll have to ask Shi-... ah. Sorry."

Asuka managed to make her flinch look like she was holding in anger. Pinching her eyes shut likewise helped. "Just... get us down there, Misato. I want to see him."

Misato nodded and stepped on the gas a little harder.

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Asuka stood at the turn in the hospital corridors that would lead to the isolated wing where Kaworu was being kept. She tried to make her feet move. She couldn't even blame the crutches as an excuse. They needed to go see Kaworu to verify what Rei had told her last night, to talk about 'Tabris' and averting the end of the world. But everything in her screamed to turn left and go down the hall to the room where Touji, Hikari, and Shinji were.

"Asuka?"

Rei's soft touch on her shoulder nearly made her jump. "I... we should..."

"It's alright. I can see you reaching for him right now. It is... good that you go see him first. It centers you," Rei said softly. "I do not mind." She looked up and to the right, apparently staring at a spot on the ceiling. "He is... calm. I will send him a text message that we are seeing Shinji first."

Asuka managed to keep her pang of guilt at her own selfishness to a minimum. "Thanks, Rei." She set off at the fastest she could swing the crutches, barely less than a run.

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"Asuka?"

Asuka halted in surprise at the weak voice greeting her. Hikari was laying partly elevated in her bed, the head end raised so she could pick at the tray of food in front of her with her left hand. Her right was still fully bandaged and bound to her chest. The Fourth Child looked wan and tired.

"Hikari!" Asuka hobbled to her bedside, but halted a hug before she could lay a hand on her. Hikari looked... fragile, in a way that was new and unsettling. "How do you feel?"

Hikari's smile was paper-thin. "I'm on enough painkillers I've got nearly no appetite, but I can tell my arm and leg are... well, I'm glad for the medication." She glanced worriedly to her left. "They... the nurses won't tell me anything, or even move the curtain. Is... is Touji alright?" Her lip trembled.

Asuka winced. She turned around, ignoring the stab of pain in her wounded foot, and angrily whipped the curtain between Hikari and Touji's beds aside. "This is stupid. There's respecting someone's privacy, and then there's just idiocy. He's right here, Hikari. I..." Asuka burst of energy dissipated.

Touji was there in the bed, alright. Still, eyes closed, and breathing into an oxygen mask. The quiet beep-beep-beep of the heart monitor was underlaid by the steady hiss of the oxygen feed to his mask. His normal tanned skin was as pale as Hikari, and his head was nearly hidden under a thick wrap of bandages.

"He... got hit trying to cover you, after you fell," Asuka reported numbly, not looking away. "The bullet glanced off his skull. They're... last thing I overheard was they were keeping him in a coma until the swelling on his brain went down."

Hikari began to cry quietly behind her. "He'll... he'll be ok, right? He'll get better and wake up?" she pleaded. On the far side of her bed, her heart monitor began to beep more rapidly.

"Yes," Rei reassured her. Her soft voice was rock certain. "Doctor Akagi is the best in the world at advanced tissue regeneration techniques. She will be able to heal you and Suzuhara-kun faster than anyone else. Trust me."

"You we trust just fine, Rei. It's that Hexendoktor we don't," Asuka growled. She sighed and rolled her eyes at Rei's quelling look. "Fine! You say she's... not as bad as I think." Asuka caught herself in time and managed not to look at the security camera in the corner of the room. "I still only tolerate her treating Shinji and my friends because you vouch for her. But if she can... fix this, it'll make me like her a little better."

"She will. Her skills have never been in question, Asuka," Rei pointed out. She fiddled with the wheel locks on Hikari's hospital bed and got it rolling. She pushed it towards Touji's bed, stopping only to move some of the medical equipment between them out of the way. She halted when the beds were side by side, then took Touji's hand and moved it close enough for Hikari to reach it with hers.

Hikari grabbed Touji's hand as soon as Rei's was out of the way. Her sobs subsided as soon as she made contact. Rei's soft sigh and small, contented smile as she stepped back was noticed only by Asuka.

Asuka turned around herself. Hikari and Touji would keep, under Rei's eye. Now it was her turn. She rapidly crutched her way to the other side of the room.

Shinji was looking better than Touji, if only a bit. He didn't have an oxygen mask, at least. He did have a large, nasty pad of bandages high on his chest visible through his open hospital gown. There were some hints of red in the center.

Asuka shivered. The exit wound. A handful of centimeters to the right, and...

'No. No. I refuse to think it. He's alive. He's alive.'

She settled awkwardly right back into the chair Misato had forced her to leave hours before. She put her hand on his chest and ever so gently caressed the parts of his skin she could reach under all the bandaging and medical tubing. Even that tiny contact was a balm to her heart. She could feel his heartbeat, feel his chest rise and fall.

She took his hand again, rubbing her fingers across his knuckles. She raised it to her lips and softly kissed it.

["I wish I could just lock the door to this room and make the world go away, even for a few minutes. Just five minutes when it's just you and me, by ourselves,"] she whispered. ["Just that little joy for us alone."] She smiled sadly. ["You clever ass. If I'd been three seconds faster, I'd have beaten you to it, and we'd be right here with our positions reversed. You watching me in a hospital bed, begging me to wake up and smile. Gott, Shinji... I am going to choke the shit out of you for your little stunt when you wake up. After I get done kissing you so hard your soul will be pulled right out of your body, of course."]

Shinji barely groaned and slowly rolled his head towards her. It was still more signs of life than she'd seen from him since the attack.

["You... you stupid ass,"] she whispered. ["How dare you? How dare you do this to me?"] She stomped her injured foot on the floor, hard, letting the spike of pain push the tears back. ["'I love you'? And then you run off just to draw fire? Shinji, you bastard..."] She stomped her foot again, harder. It wasn't working. The pain in her foot paled in comparison. ["You... you have to wake up, you stupid, stupid man. You can't leave me alone like this."]

Asuka scrubbed at her face, darting a look at the other side of the room to make sure no one could see. Rei was still watching Hikari and Touji. She looked back down at Shinji's sleeping face. ["I can't do this alone, Shinji. Our best friend just... flipped over the table on everything we thought we knew, and I can't do this without you. I need my Shinji, damn it. I need you so bad. I don't... I don't want to go talk to Kaworu about... any of this unless you're with me."] She pressed his hand to her face, trying to breath him in. ["Please, please wake up."]

His heart monitor kept up a steady beep beep beep.

Time flew past. Asuka barely sensed it. She must have kept up the whispered half-conversation with Shinji for most of an hour before Rei's touch on her shoulder broke her out of her fugue. "Asuka... I do not like to break your communion, but..." She flicked her eyes upward.

Asuka sighed, and nodded. She desperately wanted Shinji along for this, but he wasn't rousing, and she couldn't put it off any longer. Rei needed her reassurance too. She struggled to her feet. Her foot was throbbing. "Alright... let's go see a fish."

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Arrgh.... I need to be up early tomorrow. I have been writing this live since 2300. I wanted the scene in Kaworu's room to end this update. Alas, I'll have to hit it tomorrow. Enjoy this part!
 
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