Y'all have way too many write-ins and I'm getting confused.
Okay, I do not have time to read the discussion. Just a bit of my own take on the actual post. I'll come back later this afternoonevening and try to parse the discussion.
Smothering the heat that flares behind your eyes takes a stern effort, but you manage it, and keep the calm in your voice. "Madam President, not protesting having major changes sprung on Starfleet without consultation would be disregarding my duty."
"I'm going to remind you that one of us was elected to our position, and the other is an appointee," says the President, tone dark and foreboding. "I may be a stranger to the 'Homo Sapiens Only Club' but the people of the Federation that you serve put me here."
"And you did not put me in my position to be a yes-man," you retort. "Or, if you did so, you made a poor study of my history when you chose me."
There is a crushingly long silence as the two of you regard each other in the room. In the end, the President breaks the silence. "I want to know if you intend to work with me. I expect you to resign if you can't."
"I can work with you," you reply. "And I will work with you. But I want there to be an emphasis on 'with'."
The President grimaces and waves a hand. "This meeting was where aimed to read you in. There was a consulting process planned. My team and I were busy preparing the plan so we didn't have something half-baked to hand you to cause yet another ruction for Starfleet brass to take to the other parties and undermine me again."
You give her a sharp look at that. "Madam President, your team isn't going to have to implement those plans. Without our experience, they're going to get anything in a row except other Councillors looking to attack."
President N'Gir falls silent again, taking time to pinch the bridge of her nose as if holding off a pounding headache. "Alright, let me lay this out. We in the Development faction have things we plan to achieve; things we are elected to achieve. Part of this is reducing the burden Starfleet poses on the member worlds."
It really does sound like N'Gir had a complete plan that she was planning to drop on Starfleet and say "this is what you're going to do, now don't undermine me," with maybe some modification around the edges.
I'm not sure how she expected that to work. And it is NOT clear from the text
@OneirosTheWriter actually wrote that N'Gir was ever really willing to change her plan
substantially to reflect Starfleet input.
It's also very obvious that she views "Starfleet disagrees with me about the merits of this poorly discussed plan" as "Starfleet is my enemy trying to undermine me personally, so I have to intimidate them into submission." In a way that, for example, Stesk would presumably not.
[X][CARGO] Implement a system of compensation (rental of ships) to member worlds
-[X][PAY] PP
[X][CARGO] Look to heavily expand Starfleet's Auxiliary Shipyard production
-[X][AUX] Surge supplemented by other Member yards
HELP I AM CONFUSED!
@OneirosTheWriter, I do NOT want to eat-cake-have-cake, but I DO honestly think it would be a good idea for us to compensate the member worlds for the heavy use of their ships in the short term. Among other things because it gives us an incentive to stop overusing their ships forever.
Would a write-in like "greatly expand Starfleet auxiliary production facilities, supplemented by member yards, with Starfleet offering compensation for the reliance on member world auxiliaries until such time as Starfleet can become transport-neutral" be okay?
And yes that means we get hit with a double-whammy political will cost, but I think that's only fair because it's obvious that are use of member world logistics really IS causing some problems.
[X][PEACE] Suggest an independent body
-[X][NEW] Organic Infrastructure
[X][GEAR] Should be more in line with Caitian Frontier Police
[X][SIZE] As Proposed, 9 battalions
[X][SUPPORT] Runabouts and shuttles (will require temporary access to Starfleet Shipyard Industrial Command resources, causing some delay)
I don't actually have a problem with the scale of the organization as proposed. I think they should be independent I
do think they should have organic ships and I do think we need a new yard for the purpose because we probably need a new DESIGN for the purpose- a fast troopship.