Orc Quest; or, A Critical Examination of Agency Through in Interactive Fiction (Warcraft)

The Vilebranch got hurt bad this update.

Zul'Jin is unlikely to think well of Grok for beating up one the the Amani sub-clans so badly.

However, we did end the conflict with the Witherbark and are about to free the Revantusk.

Maybe this mix of actions will buy Grok some contemplation and the ability to explain himself if they ever meet.
 
zul'jin might not like this but maybe this could help him as well he shows up and absorbs the renenments who knows what he is doing beyond staying in zul'aman building his forces
 

I've been thinking about this. I'm not inclined to do it proactively, but you can certainly have an action to go and have a chat with Zul'jin. Grok would have a deep respect for him, and Zul'jin's thoughts on Grok would be dependant on Grok's further actions. After all, you're not here to destroy the Vilebranch, you've defeated 2 forces of theirs, (unknowingly) disrespected one of their shrines because the loa is offended that the trolls let her city get taken, and subsequently you've removed a big source of sacrifices. You're also allied with the Amani's enemies. However, you're also an Orc and that means there's always the opportunity to have a discussion with Zul'jin still because he's looking for allies.
 
I've been thinking about this. I'm not inclined to do it proactively, but you can certainly have an action to go and have a chat with Zul'jin. Grok would have a deep respect for him, and Zul'jin's thoughts on Grok would be dependant on Grok's further actions. After all, you're not here to destroy the Vilebranch, you've defeated 2 forces of theirs, (unknowingly) disrespected one of their shrines because the loa is offended that the trolls let her city get taken, and subsequently you've removed a big source of sacrifices. You're also allied with the Amani's enemies. However, you're also an Orc and that means there's always the opportunity to have a discussion with Zul'jin still because he's looking for allies.
I think he should out of respect for Vok'fon's original goals that were not possible because the option to go to Qul'Thalas was not taken.
 
However there was too much that you'd seen to know that Thrall was truly honourable, no, he had a hidden persona and that meant his honour might be just a front.
This has the opposite meaning from the one that was intended... I think? Grok has either seen too much to know Thrall wasn't truly honorable., or he has seen too much to think Thrall was truly honorable.

It is funny to see people thinking Grok has a Big Plan for the future when we barely know what we'll be doing next turn, much less five turns from now. :D

What was the story with Quel'thalas that the update is referencing?
 
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It is funny to see people thinking Grok has a Big Plan for the future when we barely know what we'll be doing next turn,
thrall/rend-see it was his master plan all along
grok (having gained thousends of blackrock, warsong, demonsword clans and ogres with him)- when did I become a warchief

What was the story with Quel'thalas that the update is referencing?
the story I think is about during the second war when the horde was on its last conquer and destroy everything to create land for ourselves under doomhammer, doomhammer was besieging quel'thalas and then left it to besiege capital city and zul'jin got angry cause his target was on site. orcs left trolls lost, zul'jin got captured and lost an arm and is now hidding in zul'aman bidding his time
 
Nevill’s musings on nation building
thrall/rend-see it was his master plan all along
grok (having gained thousends of blackrock, warsong, demonsword clans and ogres with him)- when did I become a warchief
That, at least, is not hard to see. Grok sees that his people aren't flourishing and seeks to "lead them" to something better as he understands it. His language doesn't have any other words for a leader popular enough to be followed by entire clans, not in the least because the ideas of martial strength and leadership are so closely intertwined in orcish culture. The clan heads wouldn't follow someone who isn't at the same time a military commander. It's not the first time we get asked "what else should we call you?"

But the philosophy we preach that differentiates us from other acting and would-be leaders is built on sand. Honour has no definition, and means something different to every orc. No one thinks themselves honourless except for some of the most egregious cases, so what does it really mean when we judge them thus? What alternative is Grok offering to his people? We don't have an answer to this question yet, and so it remains a vaguely defined ideal that will be gone with Grok's death, as his clans dissolve into infighting because there isn't anything binding them save for his personal charisma.

It's a self-referencing value. "This course of action is honourable, and therefore must be good." "This thing makes me feel good, and therefore it must be honourable". Except now it's being projected thousandfold, "our chief says it's good; I don't really understand it, but he's smart, so it must be".

We should start codifying the principles we want others to live by. At the moment even people who follow us do not know or understand them, trusting in our military knowledge more than anything else. That'll only hold until the first bump in the road.
 
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But the philosophy we preach that differentiates us from other acting and would-be leaders is built on sand. Honour has no definition, and means something different to every orc. No one thinks themselves honourless
Yes, this is a question that has been bouncing more and more as Grok'mash advances in the world.
Steadfastness? Compassion? The greater good? I expect there will be occasions to define this better. Especially as difficult circumstances will arrive, that can't always be solved with a Makgora
 
This has the opposite meaning from the one that was intended... I think? Grok has either seen too much to know Thrall wasn't truly honorable., or he has seen too much to think Thrall was truly honorable.
correct as written actually but is somewhat unclear so I've rewritten the paragraph slightly. Thanks for the spot

is funny to see people thinking Grok has a Big Plan for the future when we barely know what we'll be doing next turn, much less five turns from now. :D
Is indeed one of the things I find quite amusing to play around with in this quest, especially as I use limited perspective. It was the same with my Mallus quest where I was enjoying the massive differences in perception by the space marines vs everyone else
What was the story with Quel'thalas that the update is referencing?
Was just some exposition regarding the trolls, while I don't require previous knowledge of works to play the quests as long as players pay attention, I also don't want to just have grok exposit the wiki to the players. If there's plot relevant stuff you feel you need to know about which isn't in text feel free to ask about it
It's a self-referencing value.
Splendid examination of some of the themes of the quest and wider questions of groks characterisation
 
Splendid examination of some of the themes of the quest and wider questions of groks characterisation
Well, I wouldn't be squinting at it to examine it too closely if you didn't intentionally write Grok a bit... obtuse about it. This is what set me off:
"By what means do you do this thing?" asked Drum Fel one evening as you dined on dense wheat cakes, the rations of the Arathi forces.

"By word and deed, and by honour. These you have forgotten." you replied. "I do not say this to insult you, I genuinely believe it."

"Speak then. Your word and deed have earned you that much, even if you do insult me." Drum Fel complained.

"Thrall, you all, have forgotten honour. I don't know when, perhaps when Blackhand became Warchief, perhaps when we hunted the Gronn to extinction. I don't know…" you began, ruminating on matters that had haunted your mind in the quiet moments of the night, "There are twin impulses of our people. The first was to survive on Draenor among monsters and upon a hostile world. The second is honour, our customs and practices and the shared history of our people. You might kill a stranger to take his possessions, or you might offer him hospitality and share them. I think Thrall has forgotten this. I think the Horde has… Honour is enough, honour for honour's sake. Not for gain, not for reputation. To act, and to do what you must because it is right, not because you enhance your own reputation. I think that is what has been forgotten."
He gets asked a very specific question, and what does he tell in turn?
No, you dunce! This is not 'honour'! This is a set of policies, like 1) Be strong enough to discourage messing with you, 2) Don't be a dick to Alliance races so you could interact with them, and 3) Have more political weight to be considered more than another passing raider. That's what got us in and out of Stromgarde without an army and supplies.

Imagine setting Haomarush to this task with no other instructions than 'be honorable'. It is honorable to do battle with a worthy foe, so Stromic garrisons are killed off and looted. It is honorable to be strong and useful to the clan, so the infirm get left behind. Less supplies wasted, more use gained out of whoever survives. Give'em Fel for good measure, if any can't handle it no one needed the losers anyway, and turn the rest into peons to work for the common good.

Honour!

This will only work so long as Grok is there to define what is and isn't 'honorable', and he will find others would agree all too quickly if his definitions changed to... less strict ones. Grok thinks that Thrall has 'forgotten honour', but he needs to go further than that; he needs to point out the failings and their cause. If we define honour as a set of policies, does it mean that he has bad ones, or that they are fine but he is lax in enforcing them, or that they need pruning because they are in conflict with each other?

Steadfastness? Compassion? The greater good?
Eh. None of these are intuitive to your average Joe d'Orc. Leave it to scholars to quibble about the nuances, I'd settle for a comprehensive set of instructions we could give to, say... yeah, Haomarush would be a good example, then go away for 5 years and find everything not on fire upon return.

(How receptive would he be to abstract ideas like 'compassion' and 'greater good'?)

Although the idea of an orcish Constitution, or at least Bushido, tickles me funny. If we get to it, I hope to personally write in an entry that having a fleet ought to be considered very, very honorable. :D
 
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He should find some way to turn into an aspect of the Breaker.

Once that's then many orcs would be hear him out like they're divinity including using his elemental powers over earth to carve the rules on stone.
 
Well, we should do something with the Breakers, seeing how they are uniquely ours.

The policies of the Burning Blade are not ours to set while our father, the chief, yet lives. But the Breakers have no such limitations.

Shamans are traditional value conductors in orcish society, and most orcs receive spiritual advice from them. If we want our own priesthood to disseminate our values, we have the means.
 
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how about no, no need for that cause it could end very badly
Grok needs actual authority that would get orcs to listen to him plus since he's leaning into the legacy of the Breakers which are the spawns of a Titan creation just as certain dwarves can unlock an avatar mode to be like their original self the only conclusion to reach there for Grok's path to be stronger while relying on that legacy is to find a way eventually through the dwarven artifacts.
Well, we should do something with the Breakers, seeing how they are uniquely ours.

The policies of the Burning Blade are not ours to set while our father, the chief, yet lives. But the Breakers have no such limitations.

Shamans are traditional value conductors in orcish society, and most orcs receive spiritual advice from them. If we want our own priesthood to disseminate our values, we have the means.
You know you're on to something.

Grok has the means after more knowledge of the light's virtues and his own possible semi ascension to be akin to a demi god in theory or an ancestral demigod more like.
 
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So, like a Living Ancestor?^^...
The following is already there, the point is what to do with it / in which direction to go.
 
So, like a Living Ancestor?^^...
The following is already there, the point is what to do with it / in which direction to go.
The dwarves like to investigate their Titan heritage.

The orcs do ancestor worship coupled with shamans.

Orcs are spawned from the Breakers who spawned from Grond who was created by a Titan.

There are paths there and the rewards to be reaped especially if Grok wants to enact change. Getting demigod status in the ancestor sense gets him closer to doing that because he has the street cred to back it up and act the prophet.

He can proselytize the light or tell the orcs try following a new way.
 
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When religion and politics travel in the same cart, the riders believe nothing can stand in their way. Their movements become headlong - faster and faster and faster. They put aside all thoughts of obstacles and forget the precipice does not show itself to the man in a blind rush until it's too late.
I find the idea of Freorcs amusing, but not quite enough to get in line of wannabe demigods.
 
I find the idea of Freorcs amusing, but not quite enough to get in line of wannabe demigods.
Eh I envision more like Orlanthi culture or it's tribal structure though it's actually the part in six ages where you start a new thing by demonstrating divine sanction so as to convince others who are hidebound in the old ways to consider a new path because saying no to the orc who looks more like a rocky elemental is unwise.
 
so as to convince others who are hidebound in the old ways
these kinds of people would hate that anyway cause its changes the way things are meant to be done which is strong rule because strong not divine right we are not a king (granted no matter what grok does is gonna cause clashes cause 1- he treats with non orcs (and as garrosh showed theirs plenty of orcs who can think they are better then everyone) 2- protect others (demonsword first showed up burning down towns. and 3- orcs generally have a might makes right ideology)
 
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these kinds of people would hate that anyway cause its changes the way things are meant to be done which is strong rule because strong not divine right we are not a king (granted no matter what grok does is gonna cause clashes cause 1- he treats with non orcs (and as garrosh showed theirs plenty of orcs who can think they are better then everyone) 2- protect others (demonsword first showed up burning down towns. and 3- orcs generally have a might makes right ideology)
Even if they do they can't oppose the new ways as much if Grok reaches demigod mode.
 
Taking from The Dresden Files' philosophy: beings that have too much power are constrained by that power, and by their own nature that is connected to it. Beings with less power (e.g. humans in the setting) would have more free will, but instead are constrained by their lack of power and the circumstances.
I see a lot of will to amass power here, when Grok'mash 's fault is the lack of ideas on the direction to take, and the lack of information on what other entities/people/polities are doing, not the lack of power, given that he is a flurry-of-swordmanship Tasmanian Devil that can outduel about anyone.
 
Taking from The Dresden Files' philosophy: beings that have too much power are constrained by that power, and by their own nature that is connected to it. Beings with less power (e.g. humans in the setting) would have more free will, but instead are constrained by their lack of power and the circumstances.
I see a lot of will to amass power here, when Grok'mash 's fault is the lack of ideas on the direction to take, and the lack of information on what other entities/people/polities are doing, not the lack of power, given that he is a flurry-of-swordmanship Tasmanian Devil that can outduel about anyone.
He'll need it eventually and I definitely like the idea of him unlocking avatar form.

All the rest he can find along the way should the options allow it and the winning vote.

One of them though is to contact feldad and learn more from paladins.
 
if you didn't intentionally write Grok a bit... obtuse about it
Oh certainly. But that's important for the story really. Grok is Honourbound, and that's a great source of conflict and narrative for me as the writer to meditate on within the text.

He's not an idiot, but he's also certainly inclined to elements of self-delusion. He had a conversation with Kartha before about how they're both fairly sure the Burning Blade and Shattered Hand are working for someone, not the Horde, and that the only logical organisation in Grok's mind is the Burning Legion. Feldad is continually suspicious, though your lack of contact with him recently has decreased the opportunities for him to do stuff that might cause remarks.

However, he's also trained and socialised to go hit things with his sword, not to sit about remarking on things.

There's a tension in this sort of constitutional thinking that's very difficult for Orcs to do, especially one like Grok. It's difficult for him to identify the problem in the first place and not react in the traditional fashion.

Partly however this is a job for you as the players. This is interactive fiction after all, so it's partly up to you all to discuss these issues. If you want to do an action to have Grok sit down and think about constitutional matters you certainly can. However, I don't want to leave it up to individual actions etc or OOC ideas. Just like Grok is iterating his philosophy of Shamanism, so too would any constitutional issues be remarked on. I'd also say it would require Grok to have firm authority, for example, if he was to call a constitutional convention then if he only rules over a load of random guys that massively weakens any actions coming out of such a convention.

Then again, perhaps such a convention and his sponsorship of it would in fact increase his authority among others. Who knows.
This is not 'honour'! This is a set of policies,
I'll briefly go into the constitutionalism thing here. Basically, before modern constitutional forms, especially written and codified constitutions, you still have constitutional precedents. Magna Carta is the major one. The Orcs do indeed have a constitution, the problem is it's incredibly fractured and divergent because they've only recently needed to think about it. The institutions of the chief, the elders, the warchief, the mak'gora, the blood oath, these are all constitutional forms which are governed under the loose definition of 'honour'.

Indeed, if you asked an Orc, 'What governs the politics of the Orcish nation?', they may just respond 'Honour' because that's what they'd perceive it as.

Incidentally, this reminds me of a Beastmen fic in Warhammer. I will note in case anyone is wanting to google the text that it's also a smut fic so yknow fair warning:

The Code of Stone: A Stela with the four rules Maximillian laid out to his herd. The following rules are engraved upon it, and bear the threat of rulebreakers be broken beneath it:
1. Obey those above you. For your beastlord has set them above you just as the gods set your beastlord above them.
2. Do not kill or eat uncloven who have been brought into the herd. A corpse can't cook you a meal, repair your weapon, or (lol didn't remember this will have to remove that particular bit).
3. The herd's strength is your strength. Harm the herd and you harm yourself. Maim the herd through killing, and the herd will maim you.
4. Destroy not what can be put to use. Burn not what can be defiled. Kill not those that can be made to believe our glory. All deserve the chance to serve, regardless of their origin.

One issue is also that the ways in which the Constitutional arrangements of the Horde have developed. IRL constitutional tensions emerged between nobility, royalty, peasants and burghers. However, the Horde is 'primitive' in various senses of the word, technologically sure, but socially and politically. Taken from the Encyclopedia Britannica on this:

The key intellectual move of ancient constitutionalist arguments was usually to identify some exercise of central or royal power as novel, innovative, and disruptive of some long-established rule, custom, law, or practice and as therefore illegal or illegitimate. Thus, appeals to ancient constitutions were not always coherent or compatible with one another, much less historically accurate.

Anyway, we don't need to get into it too much now I suppose. I do find it very interesting though so am enjoy it being part of the quest. I get that it can be frustrating perhaps, but it's also an important part of the worldbuildign adn of Grok's character.

This will only work so long as Grok is there to define what is and isn't 'honorable', and he will find others would agree all too quickly if his definitions changed to... less strict ones. Grok thinks that Thrall has 'forgotten honour', but he needs to go further than that; he needs to point out the failings and their cause. If we define honour as a set of policies, does it mean that he has bad ones, or that they are fine but he is lax in enforcing them, or that they need pruning because they are in conflict with each other?

I don't think it's that bad. For example, Orcs do learn lessons. Broadly speaking OTL they've adopted technology fairly freely, there's not a big luddite movement or some sort or naturalist inclination against technological progress. In this quest, most of the Orcs who've fought alongside humans or been in peaceful proximity with them as part of the Crusade etc would now have different opinions about humans. THey understand, through Grok's exmaple, that humans can indeed be actually worked with, and can make good allies rather than just being either enemies or chattel. Similarly, Grok's duel against Mograine has and will continue to make him extremely famous, as has his association with powerful human 'chiefs' such as Dathrohan and Fordring. For an Orc seeking fame and fortune, they might now actually have an idea that they can walk up to the Crusade and ask for work, and that Dathrohan would think it was rather novel, but would accept them. Battle against the Scourge would give far more fame than just doing useless raids, and Grok has firmly demonstrated that it can be profitable.

Consider, for example, a little composition from a warrior returning home after service abroad :

The Scarlet Highlord, his steel I now bear,
A symbol of battles, his trust to declare.
Rings of honour upon my fingers adorn,
For in foreign lands, my name was known and sworn.
In distant realms, as battlers we strove,
But our hearts forever belong to Horde's trove.
Warriors, now home, with stories to share,
In Orcish blood, our legacy we declare.


He should find some way to turn into an aspect of the Breaker.

how about no, no need for that cause it could end very badly

certain dwarves can unlock an avatar mode

So apparently Magni spoke some sort of magic spell and that's what turned him into diamond for a few years. Would be quite amsuing to see what would happen if an Orc tried it. I'll be going into that a bit in the Ironforge interlude.

But, in general, this is totally an acheivable thing for the Orcs, once they know a bit more and do some more research. Orcs didn't come from Earthen in teh same way as the Dwarves did. Go have a chat with the Discs of Norgannon maybe.
The policies of the Burning Blade are not ours to set while our father, the chief, yet lives.
This somewhat reminds me of Dune:
Paul said. "Tell herthat Stilgar acknowledges me Duke of Arrakis, but a way must be found to make the young men accept this without combat."

Chani glanced at Stilgar. "Do as he says," Stilgar growled. "We both know he could overcome me . . .and I could not raise my hand against him . . . for the good of the tribe."
Here Paul is growing in power and acclaim among a tribal people, but he's never challenged the chief, Stilgar, to a duel which is the traditional method of leadership change. As such this creates a political tension because apparently other people in the tribe feel that this is necessary for legitimacy.

Grok can manage some aspects of his followers sure, but yes as you note significant policy issues are more difficult. In theory Grok is also in an extremely brittle position because only like 20 Orcs are actually from the Burning Blade really. Grok got reinforcements from Feldad from random other orcs when he set off, and he's absorbed others before he started absorbing larger numbers.

Feldad may indeed step aside for his more famous son and go back to intriguing in the background, but more importantly, a Warchief outranks a chief, which may make the issue irrelevant.
beings that have too much power are constrained by that power, and by their own nature that is connected to it
Indeed this seems to be the case with Magni and the Elemental Ascendants.
 
So apparently Magni spoke some sort of magic spell and that's what turned him into diamond for a few years. Would be quite amsuing to see what would happen if an Orc tried it. I'll be going into that a bit in the Ironforge interlude.

But, in general, this is totally an acheivable thing for the Orcs, once they know a bit more and do some more research. Orcs didn't come from Earthen in teh same way as the Dwarves did. Go have a chat with the Discs of Norgannon maybe.
It's a potentially rewarding thing to check into if Grok wants to lean hard into the Breaker legacy for an Breaker avatar.

While I have my wants it doesn't mean it'll be what I imagined but unlocking the avatar form will unlock more potential possibilities for Grok to take advantage of.
Indeed this seems to be the case with Magni and the Elemental Ascendants.
I had to look up what they were besides remembering the Ironforge king was messing with Titan artifacts to get petrified.

I wasn't really thinking of that and more on the ultimate ability for the dwarf hero in warcraft 3 that would be a neat ability to get in some fashion when Grok has been leaning into the Breaker legacy.
 
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Was just some exposition regarding the trolls, while I don't require previous knowledge of works to play the quests as long as players pay attention, I also don't want to just have grok exposit the wiki to the players. If there's plot relevant stuff you feel you need to know about which isn't in text feel free to ask about it
I was thinking about prospects of elves and trolls coexisting on the same continent. The enmity must be great indeed if trolls broke off the Horde for it.

Are there any troll tribes that would be receptive to treating with us given our stance on the Alliance?
If you want to do an action to have Grok sit down and think about constitutional matters you certainly can. However, I don't want to leave it up to individual actions etc or OOC ideas. Just like Grok is iterating his philosophy of Shamanism, so too would any constitutional issues be remarked on.
Nah, that'd be a weird action to take at this junction, because constitutions aren't usually written down by someone who sat down with some free time to spare and had an enlightened moment. But I'd like to see more choices that help us iterate on issues that Grok is struggling with. Some kind of mid-chapter dilemmas, maybe, that don't alter the outcome of the action in a significant way but make us take up a stance. For example, when integrating a clan with strongly divergent values, are we looking to make ourselves more like them, or them more like us? When dealing with the fallout of the Frostwolves treachery, do we tell the story as is, or bend it to avoid tensions back home; do we take control of the narrative, or trust our father to do with it as he pleases?

Alternatively, take the matter of Mak'gora. Grok has already declared that he will not seek a fight first, but there may come a time where it would be the easiest and most expedient way to solve the matter of contested leadership... and Rend is likely to give us cause sooner or later. Already Grok is thinking that Rend is lacking in honour. Will he take an excuse his honour would allow, or will he stick to his decision not to escalate even if it leads to more casualties down the line? He is Honourbound, yes, but what exact shape does his honour take?

(talking about it in those terms makes me feel like I am in an OGLAF comic)

Decisions we take are often either strategic (what we do from turn to turn) or tactical (how we do things mid-term). While all of them build our character to a degree, I feel like there is a missed chance with the latter when it comes to determining why we do the things we do.
 
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