Orc Quest; or, A Critical Examination of Agency Through in Interactive Fiction (Warcraft)

If you do take a couple of actions worth (so maybe 2xthe 2 action action), I'm open to pushing you up to the Master level of weapon competency. Also though I'm going to be giving you the option to get a Mightstone, which could represented pushing you up to a higher level of physical conditioning due to it being a buff. That would unlock the weapon competency, and subsequently I'll be throwing various things into the Andorhal battle which could push you up to Master level. I'm now thinking about a nice pathotic scene where you get proclaimed a blademaster and get your backbanner etc.
I mean I was going for just unlocking the ability not forcing it up to max level.

That would be very inefficient AP wise.

As for a mightstone...mmm might be neat, but honestly I'd rather stick it on Varak. Compound his strength. And yeah that'd be cool assuming we don't **** up the battle.

I was quite surprised it took you this long to get her actually, that's why she's been on the dramatis personae. Also yes, put another reference in to Grok being utterly immune to her lack of trousers. Not really meant to be a serious description :D
I know. Grah so many things to do so little time, hopefully we can make up for that now.

mmm...I suppose its a thing that you may not want to get into full stop, but the lack of reaction is in some ways weird given the rest of the lore. Trying to not get into the grim history (especially involving orcs specifically), but WoW has never shied away from the fantasy trope of "all races can be attracted to and have kids with each other."

I dunno its a personal thing, but I'd rather it be that Grok has big shonen energy and just does not notice the attractiveness of anyone around him regardless of race (+ lack of trousers certainly wouldn't phase him. That tabbard is another matter looks like she's going to trip). I would find it doubly funny though if it turns out him being of another race means that something that should buldoze through his normal brick wall of a brain doesn't due to being tuned for humans :D

A figure emerged from the hollow, an orc taller than Gorn. The orc had shaved his head, scars covered his face, and his eyes shone a deep crimson, as if bathed in blood. Still, Gorn recognized him. "Sesk! I thought you were dead!"

"Not dead, brother orc," Sesk grated. "Reborn. I have embraced our true heritage, a power greater than those pathetic ancestors you cling to."

A pit of cold horror opened in Gorn's stomach. "Sesk — no! Tell me you didn't drink demon blood!"

Sesk grinned and showed pointed crimson teeth.

"I see by your expression that you prefer your borrowed faith. So be it. Let us end this, then." Sesk's blade whispered from its sheath.

They charged.
How in the hell did he get all the way over to the Badlands?

Also Sesk FFS.

Also suprised that you haven't done this yet. Would be highly amusing to have Grok conquer Anderhol but because he doesn't really know how undead work he doesn't bother securing the phylactery and the Scourge manage to retreat with it. Think that would be unnecessarily cruel though so lets assume you know about it.
I assume that would have been in Tirion's common facts about the Scourge.

assume canon, ambushed by the Scourge. There's something going on in the background obviously because Fairbanks witnessed Renault killing his father, but that's not something Kartha would've been able to pick up.
Ohhhhh.

And yet Renault is still alive and in charge of the monastary. Ohh Balnazar you dill weed. Sigh. Welp certainly explains why Sally is no longer tight with him. Edit or at the very least not sticking to him like a super glued limpet.

Well they got pushed out because of the Blacks, and you happen to have an in with Ony now. Coincidentally Lady Prestor is especially interested in how Forneus broke out of Deepholm. I wonder why she'd be interested in that.
Yeah I noticed, that's one of the reasons I really did not want to talk to her.

But also we have no real IC reason not to talk to an important dignatry of Stormwind so I guess we're going to be dealing with Deathwing backed up by a Quraji Horde and C'thun.

Though as for how he broke out...did he? He was summoned, potentially drop kicked by his boss/the bosses daughter?

Also there's some ogres in Alterac, which you're going to anyway. One of them has the Crown of Will, which makes you immune to mental effects apparently.
Indeed, they're the ones that Sylvanus mind controls when fighting Varimathras, as the Eastern Kingdoms branch of the Stonemaul clan, the other branch of which serves the horde in Kalimdore.

Probably not eager to serve the horde.

That'll certainly be part of it, he's never had to put much effort into fighting, so yes, his default to solve problems is just to kill stuff, such as his argument about the Kul Tiran settlements in Kalimdor, but he has had to do unorcy things like make his own clothes because nothing fits him. It sort of started with the ridiculous image of him with needle and thread, and subsequently span out, yes he can go around krumpin' stuff, which he does indeed do, but he's also imaginative enough to use other tools like the bombs in arc 1. I think the Mok'Nathal (of which Vark is sort of one) would have this sort of mindset generally. They're smaller than orgres, they were created as a slave race, but when they ally with the orcs suddenly they're all the strongest people around, it would have been a new experience for them, and while some stayed in Outland and became pacifists, some would have come with Rexxar, who's another good example actually.
Actually Mok'nathal pacifism seems to predate Outlands, with Rexxar being against the pacifism of his clan eventually leading to him joining the horde.

And yeah he had a Mok'nthal mother you said? Or was it a full ogre mother? Either way he's part ogre.

Currently Grok has been coming to terms with his heritage and now even the blademasters are approving of him. They will find something to fight like the breakers of long ago and not be how Eitrigg believes they could be any ideas of "peaced" must be with how his companions see it.
Sesk thinks that, the other blade masters is another matter entirely. + Grok is the one who will likely help shape the new generation of blademasters and frankly I don't want to go down the path of the felblood man.

Can you explain that? Is it just taking the blademaster training action or is there more?
Presumably we can take the action twice for four AP to get max blade master, we can get an item to increase our strength so we don't need the action, but rely on the item or we can do the action, but get the XP needed for mastery via fighting.

Is that related to his brother's war with Ragnaros?
Nah. Deathwing is in Deepholm.
 
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Sesk thinks that, the other blade masters is another matter entirely. + Grok is the one who will likely help shape the new generation of blademasters and frankly I don't want to go down the path of the felblood man.
We shall see when Grok comes to it.
Presumably we can take the action twice for four AP to get max blade master, we can get an item to increase our strength so we don't need the action, but rely on the item or we can do the action, but get the XP needed for mastery via fighting.
I see.
 
We shall see when Grok comes to it.
I mean possibly.

Fundamentally I want to think Grok is smart enough to see that at the very least the orcs current way of life just ain't sustainable, so going back and doubling down on the old is not a viable option.

The issue with dealing with societal aggression by pointing it at the next threat is still what happens when you don't have a threat to fight for too long a period of time.
 
I mean possibly.

Fundamentally I want to think Grok is smart enough to see that at the very least the orcs current way of life just ain't sustainable, so going back and doubling down on the old is not a viable option.

The issue with dealing with societal aggression by pointing it at the next threat is still what happens when you don't have a threat to fight for too long a period of time.
He has to find more answers about that by going back to what's left of Draenor to see for himself the future of the orcs.

Still just from the known facts it was only when they were drunk on the fel kool aid the insatiable blood lust of the orcs was brought to the fore that they were ok killing each other until the Shadow Council pointed at Azeroth as their new target for more clay long after they took everything they could get from the ogre empire.
 
He has to find more answers about that by going back to what's left of Draenor to see for himself the future of the orcs.

Still just from the known facts it was only when they were drunk on the fel kool aid the insatiable blood lust of the orcs was brought to the fore that they were ok killing each other until the Shadow Council pointed at Azeroth as their new target for more clay long after they took everything they could get from the ogre empire.
This is true, but not the entire truth.

While the orcs hide behind Gul'dan as a scapegoat to deny his involvement is also wrong. They were violent, but they were seemingly not interested in genocide until Gul'dan gave them a shove by deliberately damaging Draenor the providing them "solutions" such as kill the Draenei, while the shadow council made certain to assassinate or humiliate anyone who spoke against it.

Durotan only survived due to Ner'zul managing to slip him a warning.

Tldr Grom should not be taken as indicative of all Orcs.
 
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This is true, but not the entire truth.

While the orcs hide behind Gul'dan as a scapegoat to deny his involvement is also wrong. They were violent, but they were seemingly not interested in genocide until Gul'dan gave them a shove by deliberately damaging Draenor the providing them "solutions" such as kill the Draenei, while the shadow council made certain to assassinate or humiliate anyone who spoke against it.

Durotan only survived due to Ner'zul managing to slip him a warning.

Tldr Grom should not be taken as indicative of all Orcs.
This isn't an all orcs issue. This is a fact. After drinking Mannaroth's blood after a slow road of corruption starting when Kiljaeden fooled Nerzhul into depriving the shamans of their power paving the way for Guldan to convince shamans to change classes to warlocks and eventually form the Shadow Council, the majority started fighting themselves in their bloodlust while the world was dying until Medivh contacted Guldan and the orcs had an outlet.
 
This isn't an all orcs issue. This is a fact. After drinking Mannaroth's blood after a slow road of corruption starting when Kiljaeden fooled Nerzhul into depriving the shamans of their power paving the way for Guldan to convince shamans to change classes to warlocks and eventually form the Shadow Council, the majority started fighting themselves in their bloodlust while the world was dying until Medivh contacted Guldan and the orcs had an outlet.
And? The blood curse is broken supposedly and according to blizzard their view was that it'd take at most 2 maybe even one generation for even the colour change to entirely dissipate from the orcs systems.

I'm not sure what your point is meant to be the only orcs that currently are all in on the "we live only to fight" thing are also the orcs who've been guzzling demon blood recently or are connected to Grommash mega arsehole hellscream.
 
@rx915, I had my response to your stuff but then copied something else so I've lost it now, but I think Wombat has covered most points.

Though as for how he broke out...did he? He was summoned, potentially drop kicked by his boss/the bosses daughter?
Kinda irrelevant. Forneus' transition from the elemental plane to Azeroth was destructive just like Rag's was, I assume powerful elementals like that can't go through without an extensive ritual or reasonable amounts of destruction. Deathwing and therefore Ony is obviously interested in this because that's exactly what he wants to achieve.
mmm...I suppose its a thing that you may not want to get into full stop, but the lack of reaction is in some ways weird given the rest of the lore. Trying to not get into the grim history (especially involving orcs specifically), but WoW has never shied away from the fantasy trope of "all races can be attracted to and have kids with each other."

I dunno its a personal thing, but I'd rather it be that Grok has big shonen energy and just does not notice the attractiveness of anyone around him regardless of race (+ lack of trousers certainly wouldn't phase him. That tabbard is another matter looks like she's going to trip). I would find it doubly funny though if it turns out him being of another race means that something that should buldoze through his normal brick wall of a brain doesn't due to being tuned for humans :D
That's a fair criticism I think, I'll make a fairly unstructured response for some of it with some thoughts.

I'll fully admit that I'm playing this particular thing as humour and an in joke about Whitemane's clothing, but equally I do have various opinions about fantasy sexuality. Firstly I think races as diverse as most fantasy settings have would be sufficiently different that Species A wouldn't be attracted to Species B under normal circumstances. LotR elves are supposed to be all ethereal, beautiful yes, but weird and not something which someone would say they'd be attracted to.

There's also a point on creationism. Lots of fantasy races (eg most of those in WoW) are created by the Titans. I assume the titans put in their coding 'breed with only your own species'. I would argue this could extrapolate to the feelings of various people on the subject, for example of things like homosexuality, I assume people would be even more homophobic because they'd have various cultural legends which would potentially be more easily verifiable about how the gods created two sexes and therefore anything that went against that was bad for whatever reason.

Also why I don't like how sexuality is represented in some other mediums. For example, something like WFB is meant to be various medival/renaissance things turned up to 11, and there's Slannesh who's all about weird sex stuff, I assume in such a world that sodomy would be even more harshly prosecuted and not tolerated at all like it sometimes was irl. Canonically the people of the Empire are suspicious of people with red hair, yet some authors which I'll not mention represent the Empire as being this cosmopolitan bastion where homosexuality is actually basically fine.

There's certainly ways you could do it, integrate various things in like having more focus on the sexual relationships of gods like TES sometimes does, but yes it's not really something I'm interested in representing in this fic. There's an open question of whether Grok would be noticing people currently given his various preoccupations. I enjoy worldbuilding and I like bringing in various realistic consequences of things. I've got war rape and a victim of said in my other quest, and I've got cannibalism in both that one and this quest (the 'unnamed meats' you were eating after Dreadmist), but generally sexuality isn't something I tend to focus on. Indeed, fantasy as a genre doesn't tend to focus on that sort of thing either. Garona and the Mok'Nathal are both products of deliberate rape, when the Orcs take Karabor they're narrated as abusing Draenei corpses in various ways, which might include sexual acts or might not, I can certainly see (some given their generally good treatment) Orc women being abused in the internment camps as per the treatment of Jewish women in concentration camps, but it's generally not been something the various companies who produce games like WoW are interested in. Apparently there's a gay couple in Ardenweald but they changed it for China? Haven't played it so not really sure.

Also to any mods, I've had an open ticket on how much genocide I'm allowed in my stories, any guidance on that or on representing the above things given the 'no hate toward fictional peoples' rule?

Oh and to answer the original premise, given I intend this to be a fairly long quest, there's the potential for love interests. There's not that many canon orc women who'd be of sufficient social rank to be potential partners (which presumably would be important), but some of them would be Zaela, Azuka Bladefury, Kaz the Shrieker. I could obviously also invent one.

I assume that would have been in Tirion's common facts about the Scourge.
Yea presumably, still though, amusing to think about Grok not really knowing about it
Actually Mok'nathal pacifism seems to predate Outlands, with Rexxar being against the pacifism of his clan eventually leading to him joining the horde.

And yeah he had a Mok'nthal mother you said? Or was it a full ogre mother? Either way he's part ogre.
Vark's father Tagar is a Mok'Nathal, making Vark a quarter ogre. We have no idea how the genes for such species work though, so Vark might be just as half-ogre as his father. The Mok'Nathal, being bred as warslaves of the Bladespire Ogres, seem to have said no to war after they were liberated, and most of them stayed in Outland, so their pacificism does indeed predate the BC expansion
The issue with dealing with societal aggression by pointing it at the next threat is still what happens when you don't have a threat to fight for too long a period of time.
Well they call it World of Warcraft for a reason lol. That's something to worry about once the Burning Legion and the Void Lords are defeated.
 
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Armed forces infopost
Armed forces infopost

This infopost lists the current forces in your forces to keep track of various people. Orc and Troll forces include non-combattants due to the nature of those populations and the lack of firm distinction between miltiary and civilian. As such, their true strength will vary, depending on levels of military participation and character of the differnet groups.
  • Grok'mash Fireblade, Blademaster, with his companion, the Blademaster Sesk, and guards led by Sorek, his standardbearer.
  • Azanoth, a trained war-drake of the Black Dragonflight
  • Approximately 25 Blademasters led by Rahjak
  • 8000 Burning Blade warriors, composed almost entirely by reinforcements from Desolace, but also including members from Grok's original warband as well as subsequent converts from Lordaeron. Led by Scorn.
  • 3700 Blackrock Orcs led by Tagorr the Dread and Jed Runewatcher.
  • 500 Warsong led by Shatterskull
  • 1700 New Clan led by Drum Fel
  • 200 Frostwoles led by Gol'dir
  • 2800 Demonsword Clan warriors, led by the Blademaster, Haomarush
  • 400 Dragonmaw warriors, former prisoners taken in fighting in the Wetlands and now sworn to Grok, led by Garneg Charskull.
  • Around 450 Boulderfist Ogres led by Vark, along with a Gilnean Ettin

  • 500 Snowgate Militia, a force raised by Lord Crowley to protect the Gilnean population of Alterac, and to better represent the community in thearmed forces of Alterac
  • 30 Artillery pieces and associated operators
  • 1000 Revantusk Trolls led by Primal Torntusk
  • 200 Stormpike Dwarves, including riflemen, sappers and ram riders
  • 2000 Alterac Royal Army soldiers

  • A small number of Scarlet Crusade attatched forces including Darion Mograine, equerry assigned by the Crusade to liaise with you, and Sally Whitemane, priestess of the Scarlet Crusade, and her attendants
  • Hundreds of shaman, warlocks and other magic users, led by Xerash Fireblade and Zaruk, formerly of the Twilight's Hammer
  • The scouts led by Kartha of the Shattered Hand
  • Black Dragons led by Broodmother Nyxondra and drake Velarok, attended by the Dragonspawn Jirakka and Moldarr as well as their forces.
 
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And? The blood curse is broken supposedly and according to blizzard their view was that it'd take at most 2 maybe even one generation for even the colour change to entirely dissipate from the orcs systems.

I'm not sure what your point is meant to be the only orcs that currently are all in on the "we live only to fight" thing are also the orcs who've been guzzling demon blood recently or are connected to Grommash mega arsehole hellscream.
You misunderstood me. I will clarify my views.

I doubt the idea of the horde settling down into something peaceful is doable when this affects more than just Grok's clan. Right now he's countering what Eitrig views and is doubling down on the legacy of the breakers which means more and more fighting as he refines that direction of fighting.

That is the truth given to him. I checked what the breakers are and it's not as clearcut. From each descendant of a breaker as they split off to their children's children they are not obedient to their ancestor and would even fight them which I doubt he knows the whole story when it's passed word of mouth from creation myths.

If he wants to be more steadfast in his views and future goals he must see the past and understand it preferably with the help of the bronze dragons.

They were a warlike people before and used the elements to destroy many ogres in their capital city which was to be fair self defense when he unleashed a bio weapon on them called the red pox so the elements agreed to massacre the ogres in the capital becuase their leader would tap into their elemental place of power and risk destabilising the planet's ecosystem with their reckless arcane experimentation. It freaked out the shamans with the intensity of the power who disbanded the pseudo horde of the day until Guldan restarted it. It was the slow corruption and the demon blood that culminated into fullblown bloodlust they turned on each other with no more enemies to fight other while the world was dying as the period they call the Dying Time until Medivh and Guldan opened the dark portal.

Warband infopost

This infopost lists the current forces in your warband to keep track of various people.

  • Grok'mash Fireblade, apprentice Blademaster
  • Sesk and Ishi, Blademasters
  • 15 Burning Blade aspirants, commanded by Sorek
  • 40 Burning Blade shieldbearers, commanded by Scorn
  • 40 Burning Blade skirmishers, commanded by Vark
  • 60 Lordaeron infantry, commanded by Carlin Redpath, with minor magical support
  • Sally Whitemane, priestess of the Scarlet Crusade, and her attendants
  • Targorr the Dread, executioner of the Blackrock Clan, and 20 Blackrock orcs
  • Castillian, mage of the Kirin Tor
  • Keldran, necrolyte of the Burning Blade
  • Vok'fon of the Darkspear
  • Kartha of the Shattered Hand
  • Darion Mograine, equerry assigned by the Crusade to liaise with you
  • Kalaran Windblade, knight of Stormwind, and his squire Maldrake, with several men-at-arms
We have a shield unit, skirmishers and blademaster aspirants.

Maybe with the blackrock prisoners they can be retrained into being double blade axe wielders and become like the Varangian guard.

Oh and to answer the original premise, given I intend this to be a fairly long quest, there's the potential for love interests. There's not that many canon orc women who'd be of sufficient social rank to be potential partners (which presumably would be important), but some of them would be Zaela, Azuka Bladefury, Kaz the Shrieker. I could obviously also invent one.
I'm flexible on the love interests. I have no stake in the shipping.


Well they call it World of Warcraft for a reason lol. That's something to worry about once the Burning Legion and the Void Lords are defeated.
There's always going to be fighting and I don't expect this quest to end. Grok won't live to see it.
 
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Kinda irrelevant. Forneus' transition from the elemental plane to Azeroth was destructive just like Rag's was, I assume powerful elementals like that can't go through without an extensive ritual or reasonable amounts of destruction. Deathwing and therefore Ony is obviously interested in this because that's exactly what he wants to achieve.
mmm.

I'd argue that the important difference is that both were being summoned for fighting explicitly. So a bit like an infernal dive bombing the earth it makes sense to turn even your emergence into a board clearer. Certainly there's examples of elementals of a similar level to Forneas emerging without causing widespread devestation (first one that springs to mind is Siamat, Lord of the South Winds.)

+ For all that she may wish it, there's a pretty big problem with comparing Deathwing to Forneas, that he isn't an elemental, but a dragon.

Forneas presumably has the "biology" to allow himself to be summoned, but Deathwing in canon had no other option but to blast his way out through deepholm and out the vortex.

That's a fair criticism I think, I'll make a fairly unstructured response for some of it with some thoughts.

I'll fully admit that I'm playing this particular thing as humour and an in joke about Whitemane's clothing, but equally I do have various opinions about fantasy sexuality. Firstly I think races as diverse as most fantasy settings have would be sufficiently different that Species A wouldn't be attracted to Species B under normal circumstances. LotR elves are supposed to be all ethereal, beautiful yes, but weird and not something which someone would say they'd be attracted to.

There's also a point on creationism. Lots of fantasy races (eg most of those in WoW) are created by the Titans. I assume the titans put in their coding 'breed with only your own species'. I would argue this could extrapolate to the feelings of various people on the subject, for example of things like homosexuality, I assume people would be even more homophobic because they'd have various cultural legends which would potentially be more easily verifiable about how the gods created two sexes and therefore anything that went against that was bad for whatever reason.

Also why I don't like how sexuality is represented in some other mediums. For example, something like WFB is meant to be various medival/renaissance things turned up to 11, and there's Slannesh who's all about weird sex stuff, I assume in such a world that sodomy would be even more harshly prosecuted and not tolerated at all like it sometimes was irl. Canonically the people of the Empire are suspicious of people with red hair, yet some authors which I'll not mention represent the Empire as being this cosmopolitan bastion where homosexuality is actually basically fine.

There's certainly ways you could do it, integrate various things in like having more focus on the sexual relationships of gods like TES sometimes does, but yes it's not really something I'm interested in representing in this fic. There's an open question of whether Grok would be noticing people currently given his various preoccupations. I enjoy worldbuilding and I like bringing in various realistic consequences of things. I've got war rape and a victim of said in my other quest, and I've got cannibalism in both that one and this quest (the 'unnamed meats' you were eating after Dreadmist), but generally sexuality isn't something I tend to focus on. Indeed, fantasy as a genre doesn't tend to focus on that sort of thing either. Garona and the Mok'Nathal are both products of deliberate rape, when the Orcs take Karabor they're narrated as abusing Draenei corpses in various ways, which might include sexual acts or might not, I can certainly see (some given their generally good treatment) Orc women being abused in the internment camps as per the treatment of Jewish women in concentration camps, but it's generally not been something the various companies who produce games like WoW are interested in. Apparently there's a gay couple in Ardenweald but they changed it for China? Haven't played it so not really sure.

Also to any mods, I've had an open ticket on how much genocide I'm allowed in my stories, any guidance on that or on representing the above things given the 'no hate toward fictional peoples' rule?

Oh and to answer the original premise, given I intend this to be a fairly long quest, there's the potential for love interests. There's not that many canon orc women who'd be of sufficient social rank to be potential partners (which presumably would be important), but some of them would be Zaela, Azuka Bladefury, Kaz the Shrieker. I could obviously also invent one.
I mean it is the kind of thing that does deserve a fair bit of ribbing.

And I do think that is fair, its just its something that needs to be established in some way and its usually not done properly. (LOTR elves however ain't the best example considering how important half-elves are to the over all plot even if they are very rare and that its the love stories and the effects there of between two different pairs of elf/human romances that arguably drives most of the plot in the latter bits of the Silmarilion.)

mmm...defo disagree on this one.

For a start the titans did not create the races of Azeroth, they created the entirely metallic or stone creatures like the Valkryr or Earthen who by my understanding are entirely incapable of reproduction like that. Not that those creations don't have at least romantic interests, Thorim married the Iron Valkyr Sif. And implied sexual ones as Sif would go on to have an affair with Loken (who killed her and said she was actually having an affair with the king of the giants!)

Point none of those involved were the same race, we have one ancestor to humans, 2 keepers and apparently a giant is believable!

Even then none of the fleshy races that emerged after the "curse" remember the titans, humans have dim legends of a big king man, but that's about it. It might explain the lack of human/dwarf/gnome pairings, but they'd have no creationism whatever telling them not to have relations with say the trolls who evolved naturally and then elves from trolls and so on. And while they don't pop up regularly hybrid are certainly a thing with the two most notable couples being (ironically I suppose) the Windrunner sisters.

Veressa and Rhonin, who have two children
Alleria and Tularyon also a child this one an adult.

Ironically the only one who doesn't have a confirmed non-elven lover is Sylvanus (it is merely heavily implied :p ) who got into a world of trouble because people thought she was with Nathanos.

Even then none that creationism would apply to orcs in any case.

Ok that's WHF, its lore is a mess that goes back decades where mixing and matching these things is entirely fine and a lot of the time you can make even the inconsistencies work.

Just to go on the Slaanesh point, no not necessarily. WHF is not a setting dominated by chaos (at least it wasn't) in the same way. It'd be entirely IC to have a Witch Hunter consider it a sign of Slaanesh, but also for them to be entirely incorrect. Similarly the red hair thing dates back to the grim derp days of 3E, nowadays its a superstitious thing primarily in Nordland, which is due to racism.

To go onto what I think you're getting at, well I think that's just cause the quest has called, but frankly there's logic too it even without GW awkwardly changing things. Ishernos has been around for ages now, and although they may have severed as a progenitor god to the later Taal and Rheya I think its far from unreasonable to make an explanation for how two of the biggest gods of the empire would have been associated with homosexuality and later protection of that sexuality in some parts of the empire.

Of course if you want to bring up the full implications of being gay in WHF then you can easily retool the setting to make it much harsher in that regard. Big advantage of the setting is that it is intensely modular.

And yeah I wasn't trying to imply that it was a big part of the setting nor should it be, merely wanted to clarify if its just Grok just doesn't think about these sorts of things at all for anyone, which I assume is the case. He's got too much on his mind to be admiring anyone's legs no matter how muscled :p

Well they call it World of Warcraft for a reason lol. That's something to worry about once the Burning Legion and the Void Lords are defeated.
Yeah, but that's cause Cottique wants money, not because it makes any form of sense :p

However my point wasn't that there won't be some kind of threat, its that sometimes there won't be a threat in time. If your society is built around taking aggression out on others, and an acceptable target doesn't emerge in say 5 years then eventually they're going to target the non acceptable ones.

Vark's father Tagar is a Mok'Nathal, making Vark a quarter ogre. We have no idea how the genes for such species work though, so Vark might be just as half-ogre as his father. The Mok'Nathal, being bred as warslaves of the Bladespire Ogres, seem to have said no to war after they were liberated, and most of them stayed in Outland, so their pacificism does indeed predate the BC expansion
Yeh.

I doubt the idea of the horde settling down into something peaceful is doable when this affects more than just Grok's clan. Right now he's countering what Eitrig views and is doubling down on the legacy of the breakers which means more and more fighting as he refines that direction of fighting.

That is the truth given to him. I checked what the breakers are and it's not as clearcut. From each descendant of a breaker as they split off to their children's children they are not obedient to their ancestor and would even fight them which I doubt he knows the whole story when it's passed word of mouth from creation myths.

If he wants to be more steadfast in his views and future goals he must see the past and understand it preferably with the help of the bronze dragons.

They were a warlike people before and used the elements to destroy many ogres in their capital city which was to be fair self defense when he unleashed a bio weapon on them called the red pox so the elements agreed to massacre the ogres in the capital becuase their leader would tap into their elemental place of power and risk destabilising the planet's ecosystem with their reckless arcane experimentation. It freaked out the shamans with the intensity of the power who disbanded the pseudo horde of the day until Guldan restarted it. It was the slow corruption and the demon blood that culminated into fullblown bloodlust they turned on each other with no more enemies to fight other while the world was dying as the period they call the Dying Time until Medivh and Guldan opened the dark portal.
I mean you could make a narrative out of the Grond that his goal was to defeat the wildgrowth then stop becoming the world's protector. But even then that's not really viable for a species, its barely viable for an individual. And the full story is likely muddled, but I would presume the orcs originally learned it from the furies that live out of Grond's head (the throne of the elements.) Also the whole descendend from Grond thing is weird cause they insist they emerged from his corpse, but that doesn't really make much sense unless its a lot more abstracted seeing the line of breaker descendents as progressively smaller bits of corpse.

And warlike yes, but not war full. That said you're getting the time line of that war mixed up.

1. Orcs emerge from underground, find the throne turn it into a temple, learn of the elements.
2. Ogres see Orcish shamen, go investigate the throne cause massive elemental damage in their experiments.
3. Pseudo horde is formed to stop them.
4. Ogres release the red pox stopping the horde from taking them down conventionally.
5. Lacking other options the shamen then call on the elements to destroy the city.
6. Freak out disband.

In general I don't think it was a slow corruption at all until Gul'dan came along. The orcs certainly held the potential to do this, and to be extremely cruel and evil without and pushes from him, but to use Grok's metaphore of a balancing beam he did shove them off it even if they were leaning in that direction.

I'm flexible on the love interests. I have no stake in the shipping.
No stake in shippin, I suppose at most I want to keep Grok's mind open?

I'm not sure there's a way to put that which doesn't sound creepy.
Targorr the Dread, executioner of the Blackrock Clan, and 20 Blackrock orcs
As I feared...

OH YOU BASTARD :p

I KNEW THAT NAME WAS FAMILIAR!
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Kalaran

Kalaran is a drake of the black dragonflight. His humanoid form is a human male named Kalaran Windblade.

I should not be so upset to have a dragon riding side saddle!

I suppose rejoice we got "THE ANNIHILATOR!" :p

Edit: No seriously that is his title.
 
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And warlike yes, but not war full. That said you're getting the time line of that war mixed up.

1. Orcs emerge from underground, find the throne turn it into a temple, learn of the elements.
2. Ogres see Orcish shamen, go investigate the throne cause massive elemental damage in their experiments.
3. Pseudo horde is formed to stop them.
4. Ogres release the red pox stopping the horde from taking them down conventionally.
5. Lacking other options the shamen then call on the elements to destroy the city.
6. Freak out disband.
No I didn't you just thought so. I know that was the order.

No stake in shippin, I suppose at most I want to keep Grok's mind open?

I'm not sure there's a way to put that which doesn't sound creepy.
I really don't know. I just assume it's going to be a vanilla romance.

In general I don't think it was a slow corruption at all until Gul'dan came along. The orcs certainly held the potential to do this, and to be extremely cruel and evil without and pushes from him, but to use Grok's metaphore of a balancing beam he did shove them off it even if they were leaning in that direction.
When Kiljaeden influenced Nerzhul and then Guldan came in to fill the void.

Before that they were just like any tribal civilisation in a harsh world.

At best the ones that got lost first were the pale orcs who later became the Twilight Hammers.
 
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If he wants to be more steadfast in his views and future goals he must see the past and understand it preferably with the help of the bronze dragons.
I tend to find the Bronze stuff a bit silly, but I've also got to acknowledge that Chromie is hanging about in Andorhal and you'll be going there.

Also, there's an interesting but ultimately futile question of whether this is the 'correct' timeline. If it's not then you might have random Bronzes showing up in 20 turns to kill you because you're changing things too much etc.
Forneas presumably has the "biology" to allow himself to be summoned, but Deathwing in canon had no other option but to blast his way out through deepholm and out the vortex.
Did he?

As far as I can tell from a quick reread, he was injured at Grim Batol shortly before Classic, and retreated to Deepholm to get replacements for his adamantium armour to make sure he could contain his power etc. Subsequently he seems to have been fine, and sending out various agents up until Cata, where he breaks out, which seems again to have been a deliberate part of the Hour of Twilight strategy.

He managed to get to Deepholme without significant disruption, presumably due to his command over the earth and magical ability, and therefore I assume his escape was deliberate. For elementals though because they're not 'meant' to be in Azeroth I assume they have to break past the Keepers' (or Titans don't recall) defences when they put all the elementals in the elemental planes
It might explain the lack of human/dwarf/gnome pairings, but they'd have no creationism whatever telling them not to have relations with say the trolls who evolved naturally and then elves from trolls and so on
Yea I mean it was really me trying to map stuff onto world building rather than being specific.

this is a good example of determinism in action I think, and while I don't think it's 'required' for authors if they aren't into worldbuilding, I do generally think there should be more consideration. There's some questions going around on various youtube channels currently about whether there should be 'evil' races or how to present people with disabilities given the Curse of Strahd revamp recently, and I tend to link it all nebulously together in terms of we as (broadly speaking) western nerds mapping our preferences onto worlds which are meant to be inspired by societies that are entirely unlike our own.

The video above is good as it presents how people would be determined by their biology (in that case), and while for example I don't think all orcs all the time need to be evil, I do think their usual background of fierce tribal people would make them insular and bellicose, which equates to 'evil' in various ways. I present this in this quest, the difficult Grok has with various issues stem from some deterministic factors, and while there's others too, the origins of the orcs and their background is still important and stuff.

Anyway I need to write those two action and post the next chapter so will do that now.
 
I tend to find the Bronze stuff a bit silly, but I've also got to acknowledge that Chromie is hanging about in Andorhal and you'll be going there.

Also, there's an interesting but ultimately futile question of whether this is the 'correct' timeline. If it's not then you might have random Bronzes showing up in 20 turns to kill you because you're changing things too much etc.
It is but the writers did it so I consider it an option.

Even if with every change some Bronze dragon gets antsy about a time paradox and has to correct it.

Heh....

Grok what have you done? You changed the future! You created a time paradox!
 
When Kiljaeden influenced Nerzhul and then Guldan came in to fill the void.

Before that they were just like any tribal civilisation in a harsh world.

At best the ones that got lost first were the pale orcs who later became the Twilight Hammer
Ah fair nuff.

Although I'd like to hope that they were managing to do OK for themselves. Orcs are a young race after all.

Did he?

As far as I can tell from a quick reread, he was injured at Grim Batol shortly before Classic, and retreated to Deepholm to get replacements for his adamantium armour to make sure he could contain his power etc. Subsequently he seems to have been fine, and sending out various agents up until Cata, where he breaks out, which seems again to have been a deliberate part of the Hour of Twilight strategy.

He managed to get to Deepholme without significant disruption, presumably due to his command over the earth and magical ability, and therefore I assume his escape was deliberate. For elementals though because they're not 'meant' to be in Azeroth I assume they have to break past the Keepers' (or Titans don't recall) defences when they put all the elementals in the elemental planes
Seems like.

He's active and sending out agents (or rather they're coming to him), but he seems to be stuck in Deepholm in no small part because he's hiding from all four other fully empowered aspects who'd jump him if he was anywhere else. + Gathering the materials for his armour and then preparing it takes a long time. Also getting empowered by the old gods so that he wouldn't just get hero balled upon reemergence. And waiting for the events that would set the hour of twilight in motion like the death of C'thun. Yeah there's a lot of things keeping him stuck there.

While blasting his way out could have been a calculated move, I think he may have also not had any other option either.

mmm? Keeper. There's even a device made by Ra to modulate it. The Highkeeper's Ward I'd assume the intent isn't to completely seal off the elementals, just make sure that its harder for the violent/OO aligned ones to get in. Perhaps even an attempt to repliciate the calming principle of the element of life artifically.

Also, there's an interesting but ultimately futile question of whether this is the 'correct' timeline. If it's not then you might have random Bronzes showing up in 20 turns to kill you because you're changing things too much etc.
I opt to ignore that in favour of "yes it is." Otherwise we'll be here forever :p

this is a good example of determinism in action I think, and while I don't think it's 'required' for authors if they aren't into worldbuilding, I do generally think there should be more consideration. There's some questions going around on various youtube channels currently about whether there should be 'evil' races or how to present people with disabilities given the Curse of Strahd revamp recently, and I tend to link it all nebulously together in terms of we as (broadly speaking) western nerds mapping our preferences onto worlds which are meant to be inspired by societies that are entirely unlike our own.

The video above is good as it presents how people would be determined by their biology (in that case), and while for example I don't think all orcs all the time need to be evil, I do think their usual background of fierce tribal people would make them insular and bellicose, which equates to 'evil' in various ways. I present this in this quest, the difficult Grok has with various issues stem from some deterministic factors, and while there's others too, the origins of the orcs and their background is still important and stuff.

Anyway I need to write those two action and post the next chapter so will do that now.
Oh I understand you, I've done it myself in the PF2E campaign I'm in (also involving vampires) and the implications of my character potentially turning into one. In the end I decided with the GM that while being a vampire does not make you inherantly evil, the relationship and implications vampirism forces onto a person for power/survival (ya know eating people) is such a difficult balance bar that even setting aside vampires self selecting for people like them to turn into vampires it'll weigh on a persons mental state.

...my character isn't a vampire yet so it was a moot discussion, but well there's always next time to have the entire party mown down by our dominated friend :p

Anyway main thing I was getting at is that if romance ever pops up dunno if it shouldn't be race locked, either way it'll probably fly far over Grok's head as he channels the power of the shonen protagonist :D

Heh different silly idea.
 
Although I'd like to hope that they were managing to do OK for themselves. Orcs are a young race after all.
They did ok for a harsh world. Not exactly a death world when Azeroth can be dangerous.

The orcs adapted like every race. It was until Kiljaeden came and like the many agents of the Burning Legion they corrupt them to and use them to despoil more.

They're as warlike as any tribal warrior.
 
It'll take them time to do so." your sergeant replies, "It took time for us to work without shaman and then with warlocks back years ago, it took us time to tolerate the Ogres when Blackhand brought them in. They've fought centaur and quillboar for a decade, and neither are fond of battle."
Is that about the taurens?

Edit: Got some Stormwind Boyz too. Prestor must have found Grok amusing.
 
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Is that about the taurens?
Not really, more a comment about the different methods of warfare the orcs have been fighting. Apart from Hyjal they've not fought a war for a while so Scorn is commenting that it'll take a while for them to properly get their tactics and discipline sorted. The Kolkar and Quilboar aren't too difficult to fight, and tend to run away a lot because they can't match the orcs.
 
Not really, more a comment about the different methods of warfare the orcs have been fighting. Apart from Hyjal they've not fought a war for a while so Scorn is commenting that it'll take a while for them to properly get their tactics and discipline sorted. The Kolkar and Quilboar aren't too difficult to fight, and tend to run away a lot because they can't match the orcs.
They're going to do more with the plan I see being made. Invade Andorhal by taking and holding a secure position so that elite soldiers can sneak in to take out the lich controlling the undead is going to be a challenge.

I just know a few extra Ikea ready fort kits would come in handy (joke).
 
They're going to do more with the plan I see being made. Invade Andorhal by taking and holding a secure position so that elite soldiers can sneak in to take out the lich controlling the undead is going to be a challenge.

I just know a few extra Ikea ready fort kits would come in handy (joke).
mmm...

Well we might be able to get the attention of Chromie and her associate Jeziba (who knows maybe they can identify a certain "annihilator" in our party for good measure). They need the scourge cleared out so they can deal with the time parasites there, which the scourge apparently are doing deliberatly.

So certainly a shared goal.

As for Andorhal itself...mmm its main enemies in game were elite abominations. Assuming similar that's not good, as far as taking and holding a position is concerned, but there are also wraiths as well.

Near as I can tell success or failure primarily depends on whether we can identify where the lich is and go straight for him after making a ton of noise.

Side note interestingly in game Araj seems to keep his phylactery on his person at all times and if we do beat him we can likely take his scarab, which will net us a key into Scholomance.
 
mmm...

Well we might be able to get the attention of Chromie and her associate Jeziba (who knows maybe they can identify a certain "annihilator" in our party for good measure). They need the scourge cleared out so they can deal with the time parasites there, which the scourge apparently are doing deliberatly.

So certainly a shared goal.

As for Andorhal itself...mmm its main enemies in game were elite abominations. Assuming similar that's not good, as far as taking and holding a position is concerned, but there are also wraiths as well.

Near as I can tell success or failure primarily depends on whether we can identify where the lich is and go straight for him after making a ton of noise.

Side note interestingly in game Araj seems to keep his phylactery on his person at all times and if we do beat him we can likely take his scarab, which will net us a key into Scholomance.
If increasing the warband's numbers mean something maybe it just might grant more actions temporarily.
 
If increasing the warband's numbers mean something maybe it just might grant more actions temporarily
More numbers? What gave you that idea?
As for Andorhal itself...mmm its main enemies in game were elite abominations.
After next turn, we are going to have less fewer numbers. The rolls will be 5 (for the warband) and 97 (for the Scourge), I know it^^.

Jokes aside, the narrative appears to shift towards being more "epic", like in the posture discussion previously. Almost towards triumph? In my prediction, I don't think this warband is going the way of the last one, which is good.
 
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