He didn't invest in us.Han Jian invested. He just couldn't make everyone happy, period
EDIT: Also, you forgot the period.
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He didn't invest in us.Han Jian invested. He just couldn't make everyone happy, period
Han Jian's was strong in compassion, but weak in courage. He couldn't fix what was wrong with his world, so he kept trying to sort of patch the symptoms without ever being willing to put in the effort and take the risks necessary to make it right. Some of it fell apart around him, some of it he salvaged, and when he does make it to the Inner Sect next year (near-guaranteed), he'll be much stronger for having had to confront those things.
The Han Jian route wasn't ever going to work out. Once we got to the point where he was no longer way too far above us, he was way too far below us. He does not have what it takes to be the man that we will need.
He very much did invest time and attention on us, bringing us into group training, sharing team missions, at the expense of his group integrity as it turns out we stirred the pot of superheated water and it boiled over.
Probably. It'd have kicked the issues down the road to be dealt with later however, which given how cultivation works, might not exactly be doing him any favors either.Thinking is over, Han Jian is one of the biggest losers from Ling Qi's presence in the sect. Without her the Golden Fields group would have had to stick together for safety in the face of the general chaos caused by the Sun-Cai conflict. This would also have given Han Jian the motivation he needed to get stronger to protect his retainers, as well as the time to deal with the intra-group issues.
Sure - he directed some attention and energy our way back when we were in Red, which is why tried to keep interacting with him at all. The rest of the year, he expressly rebuffed any attempts at strengthening ties.He very much did invest time and attention on us, bringing us into group training, sharing team missions, at the expense of his group integrity as it turns out we stirred the pot of superheated water and it boiled over.
Sure - he directed some attention and energy our way back when we were in Red, which is why tried to keep interacting with him at all. The rest of the year, he expressly rebuffed any attempts at strengthening ties.
Probably. It'd have kicked the issues down the road to be dealt with later however, which given how cultivation works, might not exactly be doing him any favors either.
Remember that these are fourteen year olds. Adolescent crushes are problems that solve themselves with age. As are many of the groups other issues. As they'd become more mature, with the pressure of circumstances giving them strong reasons to work together and get alone, they'd tend to simply grow out of their problems, which would end up just being amusing adolescent anecdotes of their days in the sect when they were adults.
Any chance you can add a link back to the quest/SV? Would be nice to gave a pointer back to this site for once (compared to people who dump a fic from Royal Road on SB/SV and without any author-reader interaction wonder why it dies)Nevermind! My support ticket was replied to almost immediately! :lol
The rerelease can be found here
yrsillar has a hilariously large back-log of content to post, most of the popularity on RoyalRoad is cemented by ensuring consistent and regular release schedules.Page 3 actually. And the real question is if it can maintain that rating. After all, the reason it's so high up is the threadgoers here have been bombarding it with high ratings just as it came out. Once the wave of ratings and positive reviews calms down and the story starts to hit its stride is when we can really see if it can continue to maintain its spot or climb up. The most important thing to maintain this is to get new readers in.
There is already one in the story summary, actually.Any chance you can add a link back to the quest/SV? Would be nice to gave a pointer back to this site for once (compared to people who dump a fic from Royal Road on SB/SV and without any author-reader interaction wonder why it dies)
Under 'show more'.royalroadl said:In the Celestial Empire, a land ruled by Immortals and stalked by Spirits and Beasts, a young girl from the slums of an unimportant city is found to have the Talent. In the great Sect of Argent Peak, she will take her first unsteady steps upon the way.
Can she learn to not only survive, but thrive on her journey?
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Original, unedited Quest found here
It is under the "show more", which gets added after ~3 sentences depending on which view you see the fic in. It actually hacks up the summary a pile.There is already one in the story summary, actually.
Under 'show more'.
Any chance you can add a link back to the quest/SV? Would be nice to gave a pointer back to this site for once (compared to people who dump a fic from Royal Road on SB/SV and without any author-reader interaction wonder why it dies)
yrsillar has a hilariously large back-log of content to post, most of the popularity on RoyalRoad is cemented by ensuring consistent and regular release schedules.
@yrsillar please keep that cover image handy for SV. Once the site moves to XF2 there will be a place to put it
It is under the "show more", which gets added after ~3 sentences depending on which view you see the fic in. It actually hacks up the summary a pile.
It's very much not the only thing, but it is very popular.So after browsing Royal Road, it seems like it's mostly about fics with explicit rpg mechanics? Is that all stories on the site, or is it the just the most popular?
Basically, the Xianxia genre (and the quest) works of a narrative where the stronger your foundation is (E.G, how good you are at low level) the stronger you will be once you rank up.Hi. I'm reading though the quest for the first time, but i had a question that made me post.
I'm just after the mountain fight with Sun, and I notice that the voters held off on a Breakthrough attempt to the next cultivation stage. Some of the nuances of the leveling system elude me, so I was curious about it. I'd think that attempting the breakthrough at as soon as it was available was good? It's the level up for the character right?
Breaking through when you've reached certain milestones gives you some extra permanent bonuses. For example breaking through when you've maxed out dexterity will give dexterity bonuses and increase the cap. Breaking through with enough mastery in Fire Arts, will give bonuses to using and training fire.Hi. I'm reading though the quest for the first time, but i had a question that made me post.
I'm just after the mountain fight with Sun, and I notice that the voters held off on a Breakthrough attempt to the next cultivation stage. Some of the nuances of the leveling system elude me, so I was curious about it. I'd think that attempting the breakthrough at as soon as it was available was good? It's the level up for the character right?