Forge of Destiny(Xianxia Quest)

For those keeping count there's something like 8-7 weeks left, each at 2-3 updates, baring events.

[X] Status Quo


But it will be interesting to see how many people vote for each option. @yrsillar it might be for the best that if a sizable part(a third or more) vote for acceleration that you do speed it up, just a bit, if not as much as you would have under if acceleration won. Something like making a plan for two weeks at a time, and merely shortening minors that are less relevant. That would still significantly reduce the time till tournament.

Also, everyone in agreement to make our domain blade from the Shard?

We can probably sell the mirror to pay for it, the question is should we ask Cai to arrange for the forging of the Blade or take it to some sect workshop? (Probably ask Cai for introductions)

I would not like to have the Blade acutally replace our free talisman. I would prefer to get a blade and use the mirror to pay for the blade.

EDIT: Basically, this should not be a yes/no vote, but a vote of degrees. At least in my opinion. A compromise vote, if you will.

[X] Status Quo

I wholeheartedly agree that this should be a partial accelerate, but don't remove all minors.

After the tournament a rebalance to make months pass per vote instead of weeks may be in order. Ideas?
 
Now I can't stop imagining Ling Qi running around in a fight with a skeleton horror in a backpack like a zombie jukebox.

Heck, if she gave it the art for her fog and a music art, she could literally have a party pack.
 
[X] Status Quo

I feel like we are in the home stretch and that we should wait until after the tournament to change things up.
 
To be fair, outsourcing the Domain Weapon commission probably makes it impossible to intercept. And it's the right choice anyway, because the Inner Sect doesn't usually have fourth realm crafters on hand, so they won't be able to work it to the fullest.

Use the Shard, commission a Domain Weapon through the Caimission, make sure that our buddy Renshu isn't going to be a problem in the future, and otherwise Git Gud.
 
As the Black Steel Bear's front paw found purchase on the jagged boulder in the center of the field, the ground beneath it erupted. Twisting, brown and green vines, some little more than pale creepers and others, the gnarled roots of centennial trees sprouted like worms, coiling about the beasts hind legs and yanking, even as the boulder it had trodden upon shifted and came to life itself.
Oh hello, welcome to my parlor bear. Dear lord Zhengui sounds like he's roughly sedan sized. His adorableness increases!

her cultivation had surged up to the peak of second realm again.
Interesting interesting. Sounds like she has one success stored. Wonder if she'll get bronze too before the tourney.

She was a little disapointed at the other girls lack of reaction when she informed her of what she had found.

"Oh, you've found more treasures then?" Meizhen asked calmly from her seat at the lakeside, her white gown somehow untouched by stains of dirt or grass. She glanced only briefly at Ling Qi as she sat down beside her friend, her own gown billowing around her legs in a faint breeze.

"It's less fun when you don't react you know," Ling Qi replied with a huff.

"I am no longer surprised by your fortune," Bai Meizhen replied. "And you did sound quite certain, when we left the market. As for the rest… I do not find it shocking that the Sect has access to a Weilu tomb, that clan left many ruins."
HAH! She's coming to expect it! Hah! Oooh so that was a cultivator? Intriguing. Huh. Cool. You know I am really getting these vibes that Emerald Seas are kinda like Xianxia Wales or Britannia what with all the Erlking and Fey imagery. Which is really freaking cool.

"After some studying, yeah," Ling Qi grimaced, reading the auras of objects in such detail was hard. "It's a fourth grade material, right?"
Ooo goodie we're getting practiced in identifying our shinies! And that it's only just in fourth grade makes it sound like It's first stage Cyan that will let us fully use it. Oh also REALLY BIG THING, throughout this Meizhen has been referencing our fief and how this Domain Weapon is a bit beyond what is expected of a new baronial clan. This will reflect well on us and on Cai on the political stage, except amongst any entrenched detractors we have(which is pretty close to none right now). She also said that the mirror should be auctioned for our fief and I am in full and TOTAL agreement with her since we're going to need the cash. I'm fine with feeding the Shard into the Domain Weapon offer Cai has given us.

Oh @yrsillar can we vote to get the talisman now in this vote or will that chance come later this week?

"That assumes my victory," Meizhen pointed out dryly.

"If you lose, it'll only be after you batter that top heavy, bloodthirsty bimbo to the edge of death," Ling Qi replied crassly. "Do you really think that won't count for anything?"

Ling Qi felt a thread of satisfaction as Meizhen gaped at her, the fishing pole in her hands drooping as she clapped a hand over her face. "Ling Qi you cannot speak of a princess in that way. Were you not paying attention to a single thing I have taught you?" Which was a little rich considering that she called Liling 'Barbarian', but Ling Qi supposed her friend was the one with higher status.
HAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAA we made Meizhen face palm! Wunderbar! Interesting talk on Life and Death qi, and the Bai cultivator eugenics program. Also interesting to get a more solid number on how big an Ancestor Clan can be population wise.

her friend Suyin poking her head out of the top, a bright expression on her scarred face. "Ling Qi! You made it, I'm so glad! I've made much progress on the scout formations, and I think the advanced form may have application in the guarding formation, but I need to review some portions of the manual before I can begin applying the transformative and fusion characters to the third layer of the power array, and..." her friends words came in a continuous stream, speaking of modifications more quickly than Ling Qi could easily keep track.

"Hold on Suyin," Ling Qi said, raising a hand to cut her off. "I get that you're excited, but maybe we should head inside first?"

Suyin blinked, and then looked sheepish. "...My apologies. It's just I've been very excited with my progress. Would you please come in?"

Ling Qi nodded, offering her friend a smile to show that she wasn't offended. The tunnel leading down into the workshop was kind of claustrophobic, and the feel of so many skittering spirit spiders all around them gave her a case of goosebumps, but otherwise their entry went by in comfortable silence. A quick walk down the rightmost tunnel at the three way intersection at the bottom of the ladder brought them to a room a bit bigger than Suyin's workshop at home, furnished with tabletops other worksurfaces glued to the walls, often at heights and angles left them impossible to reach from the floor. It was also positively saturated with the skeletons of birds, ranging from the tiny to the huge.

It was also occupied, Li Suyin's mentor, Bao Qingling, looked much like she had the first time Ling Qi had met her at the medicine hall. An unhealthily pale girl with dark circles under her eyes, with black hair gathered into a thick braid wrapped twice around her neck. Rather than a gown, she wore a set of dark brown, bulky leathers, including boots and gloves that left her looking a bit shapeless, especially with the thick work smock she wore, stained and scorched in many places.

Unlike before though, Ling Qi could feel her qi more clearly, she was at the fourth level of the third realm, and her aura felt… jagged and murky. Like a deep pit full of sharp stone, concealed by thick clinging mist and webs.

"Senior Sister Bao," Li Suyin greeted as she caught sight of the older girl. "Thank you for allowing me to bring my friend here today."

"Thank you for having me Senior Sister," Ling Qi added politely, offering a bow of her own.

The Inner disciple studied her for a moment, then nodded once crisply. "You are welcome. In this room at least. I ask that you remain in this room however," she said, her words uncolored by anything but polite disinterest. "It would be unfortunate if excessive curiosity were to cause us friction," she added bluntly. Ling Qi supposed she could understand, the story of what she had done to Yan Renshu was probably open knowledge at this point.

"I will of course respect Senior Sister Bao's privacy, it would be very rude for me to repay your kindness to my friend and hospitality with treachery," Ling Qi replied politely.

"Quite," Bao Qingling replied without humor, before nodding to Li Suyin. "Do not forget to your schedule, Junior Sister Suyin," she said simply. "Junior Sister Ling… give my regards to Lady Cai, if you would," she added, before stamping her foot once on the floor. A split second later, the webbing under her feet parted with an odd stretching sound, and the older girl vanished into the resulting hole. Ling Qi caught a glimpse of chitinous legs and gleaming eyes, as well as a pair of oddly human hands, composed of gleaming black chitin, in the moment before it closed again.

"Huh, I wonder what that was about," Ling Qi mused, eyeing the floor a bit more warily now.

"Ah, the Bao family is a count clan which administers the southwest under the Cai family directly," Li Suyin responded cheerfully. "Senior Sister was just offering her respects I'm sure."
Nice. Suyin is freaking adorable as a neeeerrrrd. Wonderful! Also interesting to see more info on the Bao. I like her actually, she seems polite and really chill under the really intense focus on her work. They're our technical superiors in noble ranking, but not to far above and I also don't think they'll be our direct superior when we get a fief. Not sure though.

Ossuary Horror: ooo (Unlearned 4/9)
Combat
Cost: Requires multiple ossuary scouts, see below. 10 Qi

The tiny scouts created by the Ossuary Scout Formation are but a small part of the whole, when the time for observation has passed, they can be gathered to fight on their masters behalf. The construct created by the activation of this formation has a cultivation level equivalent to the number of scouts used to create it divided by three. Eg. A Horror created from 15 scouts would have a cultivation level of 5. The constructs cultivation level cannot exceed it's creators.

The horror has a movement of 21 and an initiative of 15. It's base combat statistics are as follows.

Offensive Clashes: 15 dice, plus 3 for every cultivation level above 4
Defensive Clashes: 12 dice, plus 3 for every cultivation level above 4
Armor 2 Durability 5(increases to 3 and 8 at cultivation 7)
DV 4 Armor Piercing 2
Health 4+1 for every cultivation level above 4

No more than one horror may be commanded at a time, on creation, the horror may be assigned one arm based and one spine or leg based technique from the users roster, each of which it may use up to three times. Techniques must be two dots or below.
Ohhhh I love this thing already. Pricy, but within our means to make one equivalent to our level if we wished and can find the time to make 21 of them. Jeeves pass me the Awesome Sauce! I must delight upon this for some time!

Even better though is that Suyin has finally dropped the insecurities which plauged her. Reading that she thinks we're beyond transactions at this point is probably going to be one of my favorite things in this quest!

Awesome all around.

As for time and accel vs qou I don't have an opinion either way.
 
[X] Status Quo
[X] Ask Cai to commission you a Domain Weapon with the Void Shard


Guys. Yrsillar specifically said we can vote for a talisman right now. So... we should? I don't think anyone has proposed any reason not to, and the earlier the sword is commissioned, the earlier we get it. Hell, this was one of the main reasons we went for a normal cultivation week instead of an SLP week. So vote:
[] Ask Cai to commission you a Domain Weapon with the Void Shard

 
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[X] Ask Cai to commission you a Domain Weapon with the Void Shard

Right! Wasn't sure.
Adhoc vote count started by BungieONI on Apr 13, 2018 at 8:54 AM, finished with 320 posts and 112 votes.
 
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[X] Accelerate
[X] Ask Cai to commission you a Domain Weapon with the Void Shard

 
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[X] Accelerate
[X] Ask Cai to commission you a Flying Sword with the Void Shard


Let's get the party started.

Was there anything else we wanted to commission before the tournament? This seems like a good time to get those projects going.
 
[X] Accelerate
[X] Ask Cai to commission you a Flying Sword with the Void Shard


Let's get the party started.

Was there anything else we wanted to commission before the tournament? This seems like a good time to get those projects going.
Stuff for Zhengui. Talismans, one for Zhen, one for Gui.

Mobile Oppression Fort/Arms Fort Zhengui with the Silk Guards will take more research. Thankfully we have inclination to do that with the Horror being amazing.
 
"Like with your own sword," Ling Qi mused, she knew her friend was still teasing out abilities, but her sword came from the scale of a seventh ranked spirit beast, so that was to be expected

I wonder if Lady Cui was something Cui made Zhen call her or was it his idea?

[X] Ask Cai to commission you a Domain Weapon with the Void Shard
 
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"Life and Death mark a cultivator more deeply than other elements, and with less investment. I will say no more on the matter," she replied with a note of finality.
I suppose this is why Jiao looks as ashen-grey as a corpse? He had to bind a Death spirit to be an agent for the Ministry of Integrity, and possibly learn MoI-exclusive Death aspected arts as part of their anti-cultivator suite?

"Despite my dilute blood, I bear the colors of the Serpent Queen. I am expected to have the ability to lead," she said quietly. "Yet I would much prefer to simply cultivate in peace, rather than taking part in struggles for rank. Until now, I was largely able to do so, because of my circumstances."
Oooh, the name of one of the Eight Ascended children of Grandmother Serpent! If Meizhan is any indication -- unlikely, given her own proclivities -- the Serpent Queen is a spirit of fear and domination, who used a strategy of debuffing her enemies to oblivion.

...I wonder how much of the Bai's social control strategy of Absolute Fear was due to their leaders' emulation of their Ascended ancestor?

[X] Accelerate
I really want to advance all our friends' storylines (Gan!!! Han Jian!!!1!11!). Seems like that'll be easier if all we had to vote for is who we get screentime.
 
Regarding the Accelerate vs Status Quo vote - I wanted to think over a concrete example of what it would mean. So lets look at the current update.

We've had three scenes in this update:
- Zhengui eats Bear
- we chat with Meizhen about our treasures and her family
- we meet Suyin in her mentor's creepy workshop, where she shows off her formation improvements


What would have changed if we were using an accelerated format instead of the Status Quo?

Well, the Zhengui scene would have been entirely cut. Frankly, the scene is mostly just slice-of-life, and isn't important to the plot. The only new things that it established about the characters from what I can tell is that Zhen calls Cui Bai "Lady Cui", and that is basically it. It shows Zhengui's progress and that he is mastering the size change technique, but that could be done without a scene for it.

Meizhen's encounter would probably have been preserved entirely, or had part of the Treasure exposition cut. The rest of the talk sheds light on Meizhen's character and the current state of our relationship, so I expect it would stick around.

Suyin's talk is somewhere in-between. I think her point about "I do not feel as if there needs to be transactions between us" is a valuable part of the narrative, and for that we would have had to see Suyin showing off at least a little bit to get a cohesive scene, but at the very least the first half the scene (everything having to do with Senior Sister Bao) could have been cut.




So the question is, would those cuts make for a better story and a more interesting read? Or would they be dropping content that is fun and interesting to see?

(@yrsillar - if you could confirm or deny the accuracy of the above breakdown, it would be much appreciated.)
 
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Adhoc vote count started by Kian on Apr 12, 2018 at 2:11 PM, finished with 52 posts and 35 votes.

  • [X] Accelerate
    [X] Status Quo
    [X] Ask Cai to commission you a Flying Sword with the Void Shard
    -[X] Overflow to Qi, vent drip to AC, Moon successes to SCS
    -[X] Buy/use stuff
    --[X] Use two YSS, two virtual YSS
    --[X] Heavy Rains Pill (15 RSS), 10 Dice Wood Pills (30 RSS), 5 Dice Water Pills (10 RSS), 5 Dice Darkness Pills (15 RSS)
    --[X] Total: 70 RSS, 2 YSS
    -[X] (MAJOR) Train Music arts with Zeqing
    --[X] FSS
    --[X] (attached minor) Zeqing wanted to speak with you about something aside from your lessons, indulge her?
    -[X] (MAJOR) Train with Gu Xiulan
    --[X] TRF
    -[X] (MAJOR) Take a job
    --[X] Haunted Mansion
    -[X] (MAJOR) Cultivate in the White Room
    --[X] Leg meridian
    --[X] With Xiulan
    -[X] (MAJOR) Visit the Archive
    --[X] Look into the items you found during your quest
    --[X] (attached minor) Meizhen has been withdrawing a bit again. See what you can do to talk her back out of her shell, and ask about what has been bothering her
    -[X] (minor) Playing music with Sixiang was fun, even if you didn't get to do as much fun composing as you might have liked. See if the muse has any suggestions.
    -[X] (minor) Zhengui did a good job, take him out on a hunting trip, and maybe start working on getting him ready to introduce to your family.
    -[X] (minor) It's time for testing! You should work for some prototypes. Suyin has invited you to join her in her mentors workshop to do some more experimentation
 
[X] Status Quo
[X] Ask Cai to commission you a Domain Weapon with the Void Shard


Guys. Yrsillar specifically said we can vote for a talisman right now. So... we should? I don't think anyone has proposed any reason not to, and the earlier the sword is commissioned, the earlier we get it. Hell, this was one of the main reasons we went for a normal cultivation week instead of an SLP week. So vote:
[] Ask Cai to commission you a Domain Weapon with the Void Shard
Wasn't the Cai commission vote also supposed to specify what sortd of abilities we wanted the result to have?
 
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