Forge of Destiny(Xianxia Quest)

Cultivator-2
Cultivator -2: Worm/Forge of Destiny

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The sudden appearance of parahuman-in-origin beasts (shortened to parabeasts, and then Beasts) all across the globe was filed and labeled under Case-107 by the PRT. Thousands, if not tens of thousands died during the first week - a true accounting of the toll might never be possible, due to the global nature of the invading catastrophe. There was no pattern to their occurrence: it could be as large a city as Shanghai (pop. 18 million+), or as small as Solca, Romania (pop. 1,818) as pointless as Antarctica, or as helpful as the Great Pacific Garbage Patch wherein a flock of silver-gray eels were seen consuming it with gusto.

But come they did: once open, the transdimensional portals that deposited Beasts never fully closed, providing a steady trickle of Parabeasts to menace a world already reeling from daily disaster.

Most saw this as yet another trial to overcome, yet another senseless act of spite from a universe overflowing with them.

These people were normal.

Some saw it not as disaster, but as Rockefeller enthusiasts or high school art teachers might say, opportunity.

These people were dangerous.

One, or two saw it as a source of salvation.

These people were gods.

Fortunately for us, this is not yet a story about gods, which are, in any case, a rather troublesome and tiresome bunch, but those who strive to reach those storied heights. This is a story of cultivators.

Look, here comes one now.

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Ling Qi licked her lips.

The metal carriages before her looked, there was no other way to put it, they looked like money. It had thus come as quite a shock when she lifted one up to search for her storage ring and heard a sr-kruh-unch of protest and discovered that the soft metal at its base had crumpled around her fingertips.

Fingers waggling with the effort at keeping them soft and supple she carefully lifted the next one up.

It seemed to hold. Phew.

Quickly, she scanned the ground, hurriedly searching. It was undignified, squatting on the ground, one arm brushing aside various pieces of wet mucky-muck as she looked for her storage ring. It had been been flung hither and thither during the squabble with the self-proclaimed 'Dragon', but, between a moment of indignity and losing the multitude of treasures contained within, Ling Qi would not just pick indignity any day of the week, she would pick indignity for a year.

Well, maybe not a year. Cai would probably disown her or whatever it was Duchesses did to their vassals who acted like common street sweepers.

Admittedly, she could also do without the heckler.

"What a ridiculous pose you find yourself in, Cultivator Ling! Where is your pride?"

Ling Qi glanced backwards. With one forelimb thrust upon and trapping an unconscious 'Lung', Heizui was clearly feeling much like his old self and was currently arranging himself so that he looked to his best advantage in front of the mortals. She couldn't really criticize him for that: at least he was paying them some attention, Ling Qi, meanwhile baldly ignored them and their protests against her vehicular displacements. Still, she had an excuse. Even the bearded one in armor who seemed to speak - with difficulty - a near-comprehensible dialect, was only nearly comprehensible.

Wherever they were, it was unlikely to be the Empire.

"You could help look," she said, after setting the carriage down and patting her robes.

Heizui sniffed. "You must be joking."

She winced as she heard the boom, rattle, crunch as a carriage was tossed to the side. Zhengui was rather more enthusiastic about the game of seek-the-ring than she was. Also rather less cautious.

She was about to chide him when she felt a spike of excitement from him and saw Zhengui toddle triumphantly towards her, something shiny held atop his nose.

"Big Sis~! Look what Gui found!"

"Zhen spotted it!" his snake half snapped, surly.

"But only Gui could pick it up without damaging it!"

She welcomed him with open arms and then patted both of them on the head, before affectionately rubbing her cheeks against theirs. "You're such good little brothers!"

Both rumbled their contentment.

"He really has no pride," Heizui said conversationally, causing Zhengui to stick both his tongues out at the river dragon.

Someone cleared their throat.

Ling Qi turned.

The red armored one, who moved with impressive speed despite his lack of qi was speaking his queer jabber at her again. She did not understand his art in the least, but it appeared amazingly flexible. She'd seen him push Zhengui out of the way of a fireball, without the little Xuanwu being able to offer so much as a hint of resistance. Indeed, Heizui had first assumed him to be an enemy, and before he'd made his allegiances clear, the river dragon's waters had splashed against him without effect.

She gave him a tentative smile, cocking her head curiously. He laughed and gave her a thumbs up.

Well, a nice enough fellow, whoever he was.

The blue armored man who was attempting to speak to Heizui was much his opposite. He was dour looking and sounding, voice harsh and guttural when attempting to speak a proper language. He had arrived, riding upon some form of steel steed. Whatever formations gave it life were about as cunningly hidden as whatever source of qi powered it. To her senses he was as wispy and insubstantial as any mortal, but then, perhaps he was like this 'Lung' fellow, or the red one, possessing a fearsomely effective art of some sort.

It was a pity that he spoke so poorly.

Heizui reared up - Ling Qi had felt the qi too, and was happier for the discovery.

"Li!" she waved. "Li Suyin!"

Then she pursed her lips and beetled her brows. Li was running towards her, face ashen, yet another strangely dressed mortal held in her arms. She was running parallel to the ground, her feet sticking to the walls like a spider's might. "Ling! H-help!"

Of course she was several blocks away, but that hardly meant anything except that Ling had to rely more on her eyes than on the powerful abilities of Argent Mirror. And while in their natural habitat they might have had cover, here, Rimefur Wolves stood out like snow in summer.

Ling Qi expressed her bow, causing both blue and red to whirl towards her.

She clucked her tongue. Slow.

"Don't let him escape," she told Heizui.

"He is my prey," the dragon told her, affronted, dragging Lung a little closer to himself. She was reminded, awkwardly, of a child with a doll.

She shrugged. So long as he didn't kill him, she didn't much care what happened to him.

"Come, Zhengui," she said. "Time to hunt."

"Time to hunt!" he echoed, vanishing into her dantian. Although it was a little flashier than necessary, as her little brother vanished, so did she.

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Assault.

"Oh my fucking god - the turtle can teleport too."

Armsmaster.

"Noted."

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Li Suyin ran, every step echoing in time to her breaths.

Before all the… thisness had happened, Ling Qi had solemnly informed her that she had been starting to get a little pudgy. Although her friend had quickly backtracked, claiming it to be a joke, Li Suyin now truly understood where Ling had been coming from.

There was nothing like getting chased by a pack of ravenous rimefur wolves to help jog one's 'if I get out of this, I will work on my physical cultivation for ten hours a day' promises that one tended to make in these kinds of situations. If not for Senior Sister Bao's movement art that would have allowed her to scale the sheer walls as easily as the ground, she was sure she'd already have been eaten.

As it was, it was still a close thing. Rimefur wolves might not have been the deadliest of the more common spirit beasts in the Argent Peaks, but their pack instincts were second to none and they were certainly phenomenal hunters. A village whose wards failed and came to the attention of such a pack would be destroyed in the blink of an eye, leaving nothing more than a cairn.

It was horrible to admit, but carrying away the mortal was not mere altruism - in the worst case scenario, she would have to…

Well, it was a good thing it hadn't come to that.

The arrow that sparked and crackled tore through the lead rimefur wolf's flank startled the mortal so badly that Li Suyin was afraid she'd hurt herself trying to escape.

She released her technique, dropping to the ground. Above her, Ling Qi soared into the sky, her bow releasing arrow after arrow, even as her flying sword came from behind, preventing retreat.

"It's okay," she reassured the mortal, legs and arms trembling with exertion. Sweat slicked her hair and ran in icy rivulets down her back despite the relatively short run. "Everything's going to be-"

She shrieked as something long and sinuous wrapped itself around her legs and tugged her backwards into the darkness. A needle appeared in her hand and she stabbed down, hitting-

"Ow?" said a voice.

"...Zhengui?"

"Why'd you do that, Sister… Sister?" Gui asked reproachfully, trying to cover his stumble at her name by continuing on with an accusatory: "Big Sister told me to protect you!"

"She told me to protect her. Slow Gui couldn't protect anyone."

"Hmpf! Lazy Zhen would fall asleep!"

In her dantian, Zhenli hissed and chittered. She sent the young spider some wordless reassurance as she awkwardly explained her surprise to the young Xuan Wu.

"Oh! Like the funny fox girl!"

"...yes," said Li Suyin, vowing never again to dismiss Su Ling's complaints about Zhengui's stealthiness being unnatural.

"Well - oops!"

One of the Rimefur wolves, apparently understanding how futile their fight was, was attempting to flee. Zhengui, who Li Suyin remembered as a tiny thing, barely larger than the palm of her hand, put two of his feet down on the ground, causing roots to grow, twining around the thing's legs.

It howled piteously, cowering before him.

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"You have a what now?" asked Ling Qi.

Zhengui, who was busy at work eating one of the rimefur wolves - Ling Qi had saved the carcass of another two for Hezui - pointed to the Rimefur wolf currently cowering on the ground, grinning.

"I have a minion! I'm going to call him Spot. Because he has spots!"

"That's just blood."

"Hrrrm. How about… Wolf?"

The Rimefur Wolf continued to cower. An early second grade beast, Ling Qi doubted it was much older than Zhengui.

"Well, if you're sure," she said doubtfully. "It's a big responsibility."

"I know!" he chirped cheerfully. Gore covered both his mouths, dripping icily as he turned towards 'Wolf.' "You'll be good, right, Wolfy?"

The rimefur wolf vigorously nodded its head, eyes wide, breaths escaping in little clouds of ice.

"Mmm, that's good then." He patted the ground next to him. "Come eat."

Leaving Zhengui to torture the new recruit into line, Ling Qi went to see Li Suyin. The mortal was kind of just... there. Ling Qi wasn't too sure how to treat it. Er, her.

"One of the wolves escaped, do you think you'll be alright-"

Li Suyin turned to her and said, very seriously: "No. I really have to pee."

"Ah," said Ling Qi.

"Do you think you could-"

Ling Qi scratched her cheek, embarrassed, as she dismissed her bow and took out her flute.

"Sure."

As she began to play and mist filled the area, she thought to herself, surely one unaccounted for Rimefur Wolf could only do so much damage, right?

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Bitch.

"Its name is Spot."

Grue.

"Put that thing back where you found it."

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@yrsillar: I continue to be really sorry. OTL
 
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Cultivator-3
Cultivator - 3: Worm/Forge of Destiny

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Heizui was deeply unimpressed by the Rimefur wolf. The same could not be said in reverse: Ling Qi had seen her best friend knock birds dead out of the sky through the power of her fear alone, and was half-certain that the Rimefur wolf, surrounded on all sides by powerful potential enemies, was about to fall victim to a heart attack or an aneurysm. Ice seemed to be sublimating right off the poor mutt, transforming into steam that blew straight off.

A mortal animal would probably be pissing in fear.

"Wolf's going to be my minion!" announced Zhengui brightly, both minds in sync for once, trundling before it.

The Rimefur Wolf instantly lay down and exposed its belly, whimpering.

"It…" Heizui glanced towards her and huffed slightly, "…is a big responsibility."

"I know," Gui chirped. Though chirp could not really describe his bass growl anymore, it still sounded cheerful and spritely to her. Zhen added: "Why does everyone keep mentioning that?"

A forked tongue flickered out, licking long fangs. "Because it is the truth. It is weak, lesser breed of spirit animal - hardly worth your consideration."

Ling Qi could see a long strands of drool start to drip between those giant teeth, so before Heizui got it into his head that the rimefur wolf was only worth becoming a snack food, she expressed one of the corpses in her ring, depositing it right in front of him with a dull 'thud'.

The mortals were complaining again. There seemed to be more of them than before too, some in obsidian-dark armor. Also, was it her imagination or were the insects in the area unusually active? The dry heat emanating from Zhengui's shell usually kept the mortal variety at a goodly distance, and yet here they persevered.

"Well, we saved you one or two regardless."

Heizui sniffed daintily, but Ling Qi didn't miss how his tail put a dent in road as it wiggled in anticipation - nor did she miss how the mortals didn't miss it. "A thoughtful gesture, Cultivator Ling. But-"

"They taste like ice!" said Gui happily, head dipping forward to grab one of the corpses. "If you don't want-"

"It is only appropriate that I accept," the dragon said hastily, one clawed appendage snaking forward to grab the corpses, dragging them towards himself. Already he was opening his mouth in that preposterously wide fashion that Ling Qi had once observed Meizhen do. "Raise your mutt well."

"Hrmpf," said Zhen, as Gui dolefully watched the corpse disappear into the dragon's gullet, the horse-sized beast disappearing at incredible, and incredibly messy, speed.

Well, to be fair to Heizui, Zhengui was still messier.

Ling Qi turned to Li Suyin who was rooted to the spot.

"Suyin?"

The little blue-haired bookworm snapped out of whatever trance she had gone into. She stared at Ling Qi, her face ashen. "Qi… th-that's - that's a river dragon."

Ling Qi cocked her head. "…yes?"

"I thought… I thought they were extremely proud and," her voice lowered to near inaudibleness, even for Cultivators, "territorial?"

Ling Qi looked to the river dragon currently gorging on the Rimefur Wolf and then looked back to Li Suyin. She swallowed, then blinked back an unexpected tear: she had forgotten that, of her friends, only Li Suyin really reacted anymore to what really were her awe-worthy exploits. It was like being given a precious gift she hadn't known she had lost. "Yes."

"But then, how…"

Ling Qi patted Li Suyin on the head. "If I told you, you would stop being you."

"Ehhh?"

"Remember, Suyin, you are perfect the way you are."

"Ehhhh?!"

"Now put the mortal back where you found her, I need you to help me talk to the cultivators in charge."

"Eh? Ling - Ling Qi!" She looked over her shoulder to the dragon and then hurried after the departing third realm. "Please explain!"

She didn't.

Forgotten beneath one prodigious foot, Lung stirred feebly as the dragon above him splattered him in cold, lupine gore.

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"It's of no known language that I have heard of," said Li Suyin apologetically after their second attempt to communicate failed to pass go and both sides retreated to confer. "Though given our proximity to water… perhaps it is a kin-speech to that of the Sea Folk? As far as I know, it has never been successfully translated."

Ling Qi pointed to the blue-armored one, who was gesturing economically as he spoke to the red armored one and a bunch of black armored ones that Ling Qi somehow instantly identified as mooks. Their cultivation felt the same, but Ling Qi somehow knew - mooks were mooks.

"He can kind of speak a proper language."

"His pronunciation is completely atonal, and a dialect besides," said Li Suyin. Then she frowned: "Ling, all languages are proper languages."

Ling Qi shrugged, unwilling to pursue that particular tangent. "How long do you think it'd take us to learn their language?"

"A week?" said Li Suyin. "Maybe less with a teacher. We already have this 'A Ma Si Ma Shi Ta' to compare notes to - it could be as little as two days!"

The project seemed to excite her, as did anything that involved studying.

Fortunately, Ling Qi had an alternate proposal and pointed triumphantly to the cultivator, still snug under Heizui's foot. "He can-"

It was at this point Lung exploded.

Fire flared around his body, licking up at Heizui, singing the ground to a sinster black. All cultivators and spirit beasts present and accounted for looked on politely as Heizui kept the enemy cultivator firmly pressed to the ground. It was far less powerful than Ling Qi remembered, clearly he was running on fumes.

"He can what?" asked Li Suyin.

Unfortunately, the mortals were quite a bit more excitable. The mooks in black armor immediately whipped out these odd… hoses.

Foam came out of them.

Heizui, released Lung, and leaped backwards in one continuous, sinuous motion, unwilling to let his food be contaminated. Gui said 'ow!' as lucky dollop covered one eye and began to expand, covering a quarter of his face in seconds, almost making it look like he had hair and an odd idea at styling it.

"It won't come off…" he said miserably, clawing at it with a tangle of roots that emerged from a crack in the pavement only for the roots to get stuck. The impression he was wearing a wig redoubled.

"You dumb c-" screamed Lung. The next word was muffled, as the foam went into his open mouth, making him cough and sputter. The stream of foam was, by now, thick and quickly expanding.

"You want such a… vulgar man to be our translator," said Li Suyin, a little flatly.

Within the foam egg Ling Qi could detect an incredible amount of heat - but curiously, no fire qi. It had thrown her, the first time she had fought with him. Such formidable control over one's qi was not easy to maintain, as she knew herself. She had been meaning to get a combat stealth art for forever, but… with everything that had happened, it had simply never occurred. He was clearly a prisoner in this scenario and if her aid could be bartered in the form of his arts, she would consider herself richly rewarded.

"Yes."

"Isn't there… anyone else?"

From within the foam bubble, some actually melted, despite its heat-resistant properties.

"I WILL KILL ALL OF -" he was sprayed with yet more foam, "MRRRFRGLE."

Ling Qi considered the other masked fellow, the one who could teleport and leave behind ashy copies.

"No?"

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"They want what?" asked Director Piggot, staring at the motley collection of new capes through the one-way mirror. There was a tiny, pink spider on the blue haired one's shoulder that appeared to be giving her the stink eye. She was reserving judgment about it, but that reserved judgment was tending towards 'rude'.

"For Lung to interpret for them," Armsmaster repeated patiently.

Director Piggot inserted a finger into her ear and then squeaked it back and forth a few times, much in the way an unoiled doorjamb squeaked when played with by small children.

"I'm sorry, I must have misheard. I thought you said-"

"-they want him to interpret for them, yes." He paused, staring at the villainously attired one. "Well, except for the insect master cape, I am actually not sure why she's still here."

"Why Lung?" she asked, staring at the remaining… quartet? she wasn't even sure how to count the with two heads. It and the eastern dragon had shrunk to what could best be described as 'fun mode' sizes. It was suspiciously convenient. Also convenient? No one was entirely sure where the remaining giant ice wolf had gone, nor why the one with sparkly hair had brutally slaughtered the other half-dozen or so that had appeared.

It was all questions. And the answers she was getting? Not. Helping.

Speaking of-

Armsmaster said: "He speaks Chinese."

"Yes, but why him? I'm sure we have someone on our payroll that speaks Chinese."

Shadow Stalker, who had up until that point been waiting patiently to the side, idly fiddling with her crossbow, and in theory getting lessons on what management looked like from at the Protectorate level, turned to the two of them, incredulous.

"Have you seen his abs?"

Piggot sighed, massaging the bridge of her nose. "If I could fire you, Shadow Stalker, you'd be-"

Then the Endbringer alarms started.

No, not those alarms. They weren't under attack, but somewhere in the world an attack was happening.

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"He does have very nicely developed muscles," Li Suyin admitted.

"Right?" said Ling Qi, a little anxiously. While she knew that Li Suyin would not crush her little bro, it was still really weird to see her balance on Zhen's head when Zhen's head was the size of a baby's fist.

"I told you I was strong!" Zhen huffed, his voice genuinely a little chirpy. Okay, no, it wasn't just chirpy, if she had known about Nitrous Oxide, that's what Ling Qi would have compared his voice to. It was astoundingly funny.

The only thing that was harder to keep a straight face about was Heizui's mini-mode voice.

"And I am stronger," he hissed. Ling Qi struggled not to break out into a fit of giggles.

Off to the side, Taylor wondered what she was doing here. By now her dad would might be worrying-

In creepy synchronicity, all of the other people in the room turned quiet and stared at the sole mirror in the room.

"我妈啊,他们就这样急急忙忙走了?" Sparkles said, breaking it.

"嗯,"said the blue-haired one.

"这些人没礼貌,"said the mini-dragon.

"那样子,我们也走吧。"Sparkles replied.

Then, to Taylor's absolute horror, she gestured - and the door opened itself. Taylor blinked - but Sparkles and the turtle were already gone.

She stood up hurriedly, hoping to forestall - "Guys, we need to - guys?"

She cursed and followed them.

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The Situation Room, also known as the War Room, also known as Snack Central was grim. All available cape personnel had already relocated to it. An unexpected guest had made a surprise appearance via online telepresence.

"It's been confirmed, Simurgh is moving, almost two months ahead of schedule," said Dragon. "I've re-tasked every satellite I have access to look in her direction."

They all stared at the grainy image.

"Why," Clockblocker finally said, his usual attempt at wit smothered by honest confusion, "is the Simurgh attacking the moon?"

"That," said Dragon, "I don't know."

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My Chinese is pretty awful, but a rough translation would be:

"我妈啊,他们就这样急急忙忙走了?"

"The hell? They just up and left?"

"嗯,"said the blue-haired one.

"En," said the blue-haired one.

"这些人没礼貌,"said the mini-dragon.

"These people are impolite," said the mini-dragon.

"那样子,我们也走吧。"Sparkles replied.

"Well, if it's like that, let's go," Sparkles replied.
 
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Hong Lin 1-Progress report
Hong Lin - 1 - Progress Report

Hong Lin ran with a lithe runner's grace breath puffing as it escaped her mouth. The pebbles beneath her feet were slippery with runoff, and her torn slippers let in splashes of icy wet every time her feet pounded against the ground. Her left arm throbbed, blood flowing liberally out of the gash in her shoulder even as her gown repaired itself above the wound, the stitches joining together, hiding the red from view.

Behind her, the Black Steel Bear roared as it crashed through the dirt and forest.

Lin grunted as she sent a burst of qi through the meridians in her legs, lending her an instant of impossible speed that sped her through the clearing and to the trees on the other side.

Trees were a problem. A branch approached her head, thick as her arm.

Her guai flicked through the air, tearing it off at the trunk, leaving a trail of devastation as she entered the area of denser foliage. Stone Giant Cavalcade was a potent closer, but it lacked the refinements of older, more polished movement arts. That which existed in-between her and her destination could not be avoided: it had to be dealt with or the technique canceled.

Mother had called it a duelist's art, not a soldier's, something akin to a toy, but she had liked its philosophy. She could work with its shortcomings before she chose something more suitable.

"It's coming!" she shouted.

A pulse of wood qi let her know she'd been heard and understood.

Behind her the bear finally made it into the clearing. It bellowed again, thunder qi lacing its furious roar so that even as far as she was, leaves tore from their branches, water and dirt sprayed across the ground and saplings fell over, roots exposed.

Hong Lin barely felt it, but she doubted the same would hold true closer to the beast.

Still, the pink-haired girl tripped, as if overcome by the attack. It was a piece of subterfuge that wouldn't have fooled a mortal child, but against a mere beast… well, it worked. The bear grunted in clear self-satisfaction and its awesome weight cracked the stone beneath its paws as it flung itself forward once more.

Hong Lin leaped up and continued to run.

It caught up quickly. She was weaker than the bear, slower than it too. The wound decorating her arm had been honestly received: she'd put as much of a defense up as she possibly could in that instant and still it had torn though the protective qi to reach the meat and muscle.

However, despite the danger, she didn't feel pressured.

This was nothing more than a Black Steel Bear. Why the Zhus would want it-

Another burst of speed took her to and past a small cliff: for a moment her legs whirled without purchase, the forest below her extending vertiginously below her feet and then she began falling. Behind her the Black Steel Bear hit the same sudden drop: the scrape of its claws against stone squealed mightily, making her grimace. She turned in mid-air, saw its mouth opening, strands of saliva

"Boom," she whispered.

The side of the cliff exploded. The bear fell.

Hong Lin landed in the treetops, heel hitting a trunk and bouncing off, spinning like an acrobat as she grabbed a lower branch and hoisted herself up. The bear, while stronger than her, was not nearly as graceful: it crunched as it hit the ground, accompanied by the crack and patter of stone.

She jumped again, landing softly.

Beside her, the Zhu twins emerged from the undergrowth.

Since that time they'd cooperated at the end of the truce to - her mind shied away from that shameful memory, anger bubbling away even now, all these months later - the Zhus had changed a great deal. Fong had lost his blades, and replaced them with a different set. Whether his original ones had been broken or lost in a different duel Hong Lin didn't know and did not care to ask. Qing still wielded her staff, though her hand had sprouted a set of formation tattoos shaped like curling vines. They both wore armor now, and not the light, tasteful robes that were so in fashion, but actual armor, crudely fashioned from the remains of beasts like the one before them.

Those were light changes though. Cosmetic. It was the look in their eyes - more confident, more self-assured.

Hong twirled her guai before letting it disappear back into her ring. In front of them, within a cloud of expanding dust, the Black Steel Bear was rising to its feet, great grunts issuing from its mouth as it shook its head this way and that, as if trying to reach something only it could see.

"Enough?" she asked.

Qing answered, her staff tapping the ground lightly. Lin could dimly perceive the wood qi that sought to bind the Black Steel Bear's legs. "Yes, thank you. We are in your debt."

"Hardly," Hong Lin said. She took a breath. "You truly wish to bind one of these?"

"They are worthy companions," Qing said, her voice a little strained.

"If ornery," added Fong. He laughed good naturedly as his sister jammed the heel of her foot on his instep. "Owch."

"So I see," Hong Lin replied neutrally. Then she shifted back a foot, avoiding a spray of dirt and spittle as the bear roared once more, its long claws tearing at the roots with such violence that the ground trembled. So long as it was kept in place, the Black Steel Bear's qi would be drained by the trap formation beneath it, rendering it amenable to binding. Evidently, the Black Steel Bear would hardly stand idly by while its qi was sucked away: Hong Lin could see its muscles bulge as it prepared itself for yet another furious charge.

"Brother, could you-?"

"I thought the entire point of Hong Lin roughing it up and leading it here was so that it formed a less intensely negative first impression of you?"

Qing sighed. Hong Lin was tempted to copy her.

"Brother."

He strode forwards, flourishing his twin swords with a theatrical shwing. Air whirled across the finely patterned blades. "Fine, fine. But if it tries to eat me when I'm sleeping, I'm going to-"

Hong Lin put an end to their conversation by leaping past them, sandal-clad feet pushing down, then out, leaving deep grooves in the pebbly dirt, her robes fluttering about her knees as she spun tightly and, in mid-air, smashed a qi-infused fist into its side.

Her fist, wielded by her small, tomboyish physique met a beast that, conservatively, weighed five or six tons. The impact nearly tore it out of the grasping branches of Qing's art and broke at least three ribs.

It fell over, coughing blood, the impact of its fall echoing far past the event.

Hong Lin stood over it, her fist dripping blood.

"Well, I suppose that's one way to get it done," said Fong as the Black Steel Bear sought relief, or perhaps a route away from the murderous pink tomboy, and accepted Qing's figuratively outstretched hand, vanishing into a dark purple mist that Qing seemed to inhale. The sudden absence was disconcerting: something so large, so physically present, should not have so easily vanished.

A moment of baited breath, and then Fong said: "So?"

Zhu Qing frowned. "It's, um, crying."

"Kind of disappointing. But not surprising. We did ask for help from the Red Rose of-"

He wisely stopped speaking. Whoever had given her that nickname would rue the day they were born. Hong Lin would have hit Zhu Fong, but that would have only proven his point. She stared pointedly at his direction instead.

"No, I mean it's crying a lot," Zhu Qing turned to her. "Are you sure it was alone when you found it?"

"Yes?" said Hong Lin. "I would not have missed something as obvious as a second bear."

"Well, I guess that is alright th-"

There was a crack.

All three of them turned. The hair on Hong Lin's arms began to slowly stand on end.

In the shadow of a copse of trees, unnoticed until now, a boulder began to shift and turn. Dirt and debris fountained off what wasn't stone at all, but a shell. A thick, fire-blackened vine transformed into the rippling, scaled body of a snake. It stood up on four legs and a small head, like something made of lumps of coal and dark pottery, fired together, emerged from a crevice in which it had hid itself.

"Oops," it said, shame-faced.

'Huh,' thought Hong Lin.

"Gui," sighed the other. "We were supposed to stay quiet. Don't you remember how Big Sis played the hidey game?"

"But I got itchy. And hungry."

"As did I."

"Big Sis doesn't get itchy."

"Big Sis getting itchy - ugh, of course Big Sis doesn't get itchy! I apologize on behalf of Gui, Disciples," the snake half of the legendary Xuan Wu said politely before whacking the turtle half with its own. "Now, let's go."

The three of them watched it amble off and disappear, apparently arguing with itself.

"I can't decide," said Zhu Fong. "If I'm more or less embarrassed by how we lost to her."

Hong Lin did punch him this time.
 
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Fan Yu: Peggy Su III
Omake: Fan Yu, the Peggy Sue Chronicles part III


AN/: Guess who's back? That's right, the most handsome and charismatic protagonist of them all! Or as a certain someone (*cough* Xiulan *cough*) would say: A lazy, oafish, untalented fool with all the social grace of a bull in a china shop. Take your pick, either works.


All in all, the past month could be qualified as a reasonably successful one, Fan Yu thought as he carefully sorted through the various spirit beast cores arranged on the stone floor before him, the latest haul of his frequent hunts for resources.

His allowance was generous, at least for the moment, but it was not endless, and though Yu planned to not only maintain it, but to even increase it, there was still was much to be gained from the rich and relatively safe stomping grounds of the Outer Argent Sect, if one knew where to look.

Which Fan Yu did. Not only had he spent three whole years on this nostalgic mountain, but he had many years of experience in hunting, tracking and warfare. The mountain which contained the Outer Sect held dangers and obstacles meant mostly for young cultivators at the beginning of their journey, not a third realm cultivator who had survived much deadlier ordeals.

'Although, I am hardly a third realm cultivator right now, am I? Even if I possess all of my memories and as much of my former abilities as my frail golden physique can support'.

None the less, advantages of superior knowledge, experience and information were no small matter. Wars were often won based on less. Fan Yu, and through him the Golden Fields coterie, had a potent edge over their competition.

Case in point, his current placement in the advanced class of physical cultivation.

Fan Yu had managed to achieve a much better showing in Zhou the Indomitable's test, and was thus able to win a spot in the Elder's advanced class alongside his companions from Golden Fields. It was a victory filled with an almost (but not quite) guilty pleasure for Yu, especially as his original failure to get into the advanced class had long been one of the sorer spots linked to his troubled time in the Outer Sect.

In truth, Fan Yu sometimes felt that it had been then that all went wrong in his life.

Suffice to say, this time around, Yu had purposefully pursued a significantly more amiable working relationship with the lowborn Ling Qi, and had consequently successfully avoided any attempts by Bai Meizhen to temporarily cripple him and thus lose precious weeks of cultivation.

It helped his clan's painful diplomacy training had stuck at least somewhat, and he actually hit it off relatively well with the talented girl from the start.

While content to have merely a stable alliance at first, and more than a bit wary of her potential to be a seed of discord in the group, Fan Yu eventually decided to make an attempt at bringing her more fully into the fold.

Her friendship with Xiulan had contributed to the violent disintegration of their little band originally, but Fan Yu hoped that the camaredie he was encouraging between himself and Ling Qi, and the tentative friendship that Ling Qi and Fang seemed to be developing through the increased exposure to each other, would lead to a better resolution this time around.

Having an additional cultivator, especially a cultivator as resourceful as Ling Qi, at their side could be helpful indeed in the times to come.

'Hm, that reminds me. Only four weeks remaining until the end of ceasefire. I really have to start preparing.'

With a sigh, the stocky boy stood up ungraciously from the floor, having finished his perusal of the diverse materials which he intended to latter exchange for the Sect points, and stored them with a grumble into his ring talisman.

Fan Yu idly popped his neck as he considered his plans for the following month. On the one hand, being of late red soul cultivation stage was the optimal time bar none to build qi and to prepare one's foundation in myriad ways.

The sheer ease of this task, especially compared to the latter stages, was frankly astounding. That so many cultivators (his earlier self included) squandered this advantage in their impatient zeal to advance as fast as possible to the yellow realm was loathsome to say the least. Truly, the youth was wasted on the young.

On the other hand, a higher cultivation realm advantage was no small matter. Especially in the chaos that awaited the Outer Sect. Additional experience or not, Fan Yu grimly suspected that his potential breakthrough remained a harrowing proposition. He would likely need some time indeed to advance his cultivation, as before.

The prestige benefits, or rather the political and social ones, that could be earned from a higher cultivation rank were nothing to be dismissed. Many useful connections, information and allies could be gained by a more advanced cultivator who knew how to use his status and power. This was doubly so in light of Lady Cai's plans for the Outer Sect in the near future. A position at her council was worth much.

Fan Yu mulled this thought over in his head as he started preparing various supplies for the task ahead, wanting to be ready to set off immediately when Han Jian returned to their home. The taller boy had went to retrieve Fang, Xiulan and Ling Qi from their customary training field on eastern side of the mountain, near the mineral spring that the two girls liked to frequent.

They needed every advantage they could get if they were to have any chance of obtaining access to the Mountain's Heart.

Its twin fiery second realm guardians were a real threat at this stage of their cultivation. Hopefully, between five of them (six if Heijin could be finally convinced to accompany them) they should have more than enough strength to overcome them.

Thankfully, the five of them worked well together, and with valuable experience under their belt gained on multiple similar expeditions undertaken in the last few weeks (if none quite so dangerous as this one), their chances of success were good, and Fan Yu had discouraged the others from truly drastic measures such as asking Bai Meizhen for help.

It was maybe petty of him, But Yu was in no way willing to advance the serpent scion's cultivation further, not unless there was no other way for his plans to succeed. The pale girl was formidable enough as it was, and was not an ally to the Golden Fields, even if she was not an enemy either. Yu was prepared to face some slight increase in risk instead of her help and the consequences of her help.

'After all, the one who risks, gains the spoils'.

And the spoils of the last several weeks were tremendous indeed for their little group. Already, Fan Yu could notice the improved pace of cultivation in his childhood friends, fuelled as they were by the various potent cultivation sites of the Mountain. Both Jian and Xiulan were ready to begin their spiritual breakthrough, and already had a firmer grasp on their family arts than the first time they ascended to the second realm. Han Fang also seemed to prosper, his more physical talents shining in the rigorous pace they had set for themselves, with little time for anything other than cultivation, training, hunting and exploring.

'No,' concluded Fan Yu with a snort 'I will not waste this golden opportunity for forging a superior foundation. Collectively, we are too strong for almost anyone to threaten us when the Outer Sect finally erupts, second realm or not, and I refuse to threaten my long-term development for short-term gain. If there remains opportunity for the ascension to the second realm in time for Cai's council, well, all the better. If not, it will be up to Jian to represent our interests there. Again.'

It was funny, that he was trusting yet again the man who had failed him so. But that was the decision Fan Yu had decided to stick to when he had revealed his "hidden proficiency" with "his family's arts of tracking and sensing" to Jian and Fang, and it was a decision he didn't regret (yet).

'Things are different now. Better. I am better than I was. To abyss with me and all my noble lineage if I can't make this right even with all the advantages I have.'

"No more second-guessing. And no more regrets." growled the thick-set noble only to be interrupted.

"Yu? Are you talking to yourself gain? It's well that you are dedicated so, but you sometimes worry me." remarked somewhat distractedly Han Jian while standing at the entrance to their house.

Fan Yu could feel his cheeks colour slightly more at his hideous lack of attention, 'Did I really let a first realm cultivator sneak up to me?', than any real embarrassment at being heard out loud, and started to reply before being again interrupted by the other young man.

"Actually, never mind that. You should come outside, we may have something of a situation soon at our hands, and I could use your help with defusing XIulan.

'Since when am I the one defusing Xiulan, and not the other way around?' thought Yu idly as he left their home, and saw Ling Qi standing sheepishly with two other girls at her side, a blue-haired waif with plain but pleasant face and big eyes, and a savage-looking girl with fox traits showing her unusual ancestry unceasingly roving her gaze here and there, looking like she would bolt any second.

Immediately, Fan Yu recognized the two girls.

'Oh. Xiulan won't like this at all.'
 
Fan Yu: Peggy Sue IV
Omake: The Fan Yu Peggy Sue Chronicles, part IV


AN/: You thought that was Yrs with an update, but it was I, Horium, with more of Fan Yu!
No, please don't throw the rocks, I am fragile.


"An interesting idea, Yu. I must admit that I've never really thought about approaching those kind of disciples. Father's advice on making allies in the Sect always stressed the importance of building connections with the more... established players, rather than investing time and energy into unknown entities."

The four of them were sitting at a round wooden table on a small flat hill overlooking what was either a tiny river, or a very large stream. It was one of the more obscure private training fields on the mountain, that Yu had 'accidently discovered'. Once a week, the four young cultivators hailing from the Golden Fields would hold a meeting, where they would exchange news, recent experiences and future plans. They most often elected to hold those informal meetings at that particular training field, as they were able to converse freely there, safe from eavesdroppers and other unwanted guests due to even their presence being hidden by the local privacy formation. They had unanimously decided to keep their meetings secret from Ling Qi, at least for now. She was an ally, but she was not of the Golden Fields. Yet.

Fan Yu observed Han Jian as the boy, the de-facto leader of their little band, responded to his proposition. Jian was fully in the second realm, having gotten lucky and successfully broken through in the single week. Yu could feel the pride and contentment akin to that of a well-fed cat almost radiating from the boy.

'Still, no reason to waste an opening.'

"And yet you approached Ling Qi." Yu needled his childhood friend teasingly.

"Truth be told, she approached me." parried Han Jian calmly at his comrade's comment, seemingly unperturbed.

"In any case," continued the tall boy, refusing to be side-tracked, all the while thoughtfully stroking his chin. "I did not mean to say that your proposal doesn't have merit. I am just surprised that you of all people are advocating for playing nice with the commoner-born. Are you certain you are not being possessed?" joked the general's son weakly, his affected joviality turning more real when he beheld the scowl on Fan Yu's face.

"Oh, har, har, very funny, Jian. It is truly a shame that you were born to high nobility, and not in an entertainer clan. Such a comedic wit is wasted on a cultivator." snarked the broad boy to the amusement of Jian and Fang, but impatience of the last member of their little group.

"Nonetheless, Yu, Jian has a point. You are hardly the one to turn to more unorthodox solutions. What prompted your change of heart? Is it your misplaced sympathy to that little mouse acting up again?" finished Xiulan darkly.

Gu Xiulan had successfully broken to the yellow soul stage of cultivation, as well, but she was lagging behind somewhat when it came to the physical cultivation. It was earlier than she had previously ascended, but the time traveller was unsure by how much earlier.

Fan Yu wisely forced down the laughter that threatened to bubble up from his stomach. Xiulan had disliked Li Suyin since she first moment she saw her at the boys' doorstep, and Yu's apparent friendliness towards the petite and shy girl that was Ling Qi's friend, as well as the fact that Yu had actually spent some of his time encouraging the hopeful healer and bothered to give her some cultivation tips only seemed to incense his fiancée further.

Despite himself, Yu couldn't help but be at least somewhat entertained by Xiulan's temper. Suyin was frankly adorable, in the same way that a little lamb was. While sweet and demure, she held no womanly attributes that Yu ordinarily preferred. The very thought that he could be attracted to her was laughable, even were he not decades her elder in mind and soul, and the fact that Xiulan of all people was on the edge of throwing a temper tantrum because of jealousy was both funny and strangely pleasing.

'To think that you would ever be jealous on my behalf, Xiulan. How ironic. Of course, knowing her, it's more of a toddler's indignity that someone else would dare to play with her toys.'

Out loud, Fan Yu affected a mighty harrumph and disagreed.

"Hardly. Li Suyin didn't even cross my mind. I was thinking more about those production disciples who already showed some promise in the art of crafting pills and talismans. Useful as a cultivator talented in battle-ready medicinal arts would be, the girl is far off yet."

Han Fang took that moment to intercede, gesturing in that sign language he used to communicate:

"Why commoners? Noble cultivators more advanced. Better pills. Better talismans."

Fang was proceeding nicely, Yu judged privately in his thoughts. The rugged young man seemed to have taken a page out of Yu's book, and had concentrated on cultivating his qi and opening meridians, fortifying his foundation in the process nicely.

Even more impressively, despite all of that, Yu could feel him closing in to the peak of the golden physique. After thinking how to express his thoughts clearly, the scion of the Fan clan replied:

"Because their need is lesser. It would be better if we could approach Xuan Shi, or even some of the older disciples known for their crafting skill. But the problem is that we have little to offer them. What do the production specialists need the most? Protection and resources. We can't offer meaningful protection to older students because they are all stronger than us. Even Xuan Shi is stronger than us. That boy is frankly ridiculous, he is already somewhere in the middle of the second realm, while being a formations specialist at that. So, protection's a bust. As for resources, I don't think we can compete with the already entrenched older students who have had more than a year to establish their economic base, especially if they are nobles. And Xuan Shi is from a Great Clan. There's almost nothing we can trade with him. The fact of the matter is, they simply don't need us." concluded Fan Yu calmly.

"Tasks? Services? Cultivation sites?" asked Fang in his own silent language, his hands making vague little motions.

"I doubt we can perform any service that would be valuable to senior cultivators. We are not advanced enough to hunt stronger spirits or to gather remote exotic materials. And to perform low-level task in bulk would be hell on our time. It is not worth it. The elder years have no use for cultivation sites, they are barred from them, and I am loath to share them in any case unless as a last resort. Thanks to Yu we found some truly powerful ones. We will need that edge. I see what you meant when you mentioned commoner craftsmen." Han Jian mused before finishing his train of thought.

"None of them is likely to be even close to our strength, as they had little time to cultivate, and just our separate allowances is more wealth than they would have ever seen in their lifetime."

"Both of you are forgetting one tiny detail. It is mere ten weeks since the start of our stay in the Outer Sect. Do the non-noble disciples even know how to craft something useful? And even if they know, how are we to find out which of them has talent this early on? I am hardly an artisan to be able to judge a craftsman's current skill, let alone his future skill, by just looking at the petty trinkets he is able to make right now, nor is anybody here to my knowledge." challenged Xiulan the other boys.

"Well, I might know a thing or two." temporized Fan Yu, to growing curiosity from the others.

"Oh? I see that you have become a man of many diverse and hidden talents, oh fiancé of mine." said the beautiful raven-haired girl with a small, sharp smirk on her lips and a strange look in her eye that made Fan Yu nervous. Out of all his companions, Xiulan had been the most surprised and most unnerved by his recent changes. Sometimes when she thought he wasn't looking, Yu would notice her watching at him speculatively, her eyes as dark as the desert nights.

"The many brilliant Artificers of the Fan are one of the three mighty pillars that uphold the whole noble edifice that is my clan. While I do not belong to their august number, what with me being of the Protector path, I would be an embarrassment to my clan indeed were I not familiar with the very basics of crafting." exclaimed Fan Yu pompously, hoping to distract her by playing up the more colourful aspects of his persona.

'Of course, it helps that I already know who are the disciples to watch out for. Heh, helps. What makes it possible at all for us to headhunt talents, actually.'

Thankfully, his antics seemed to do the trick, making Fang snort while Jian resignedly shook his head and Xiulan tossed her hair in vague exasperation.

"Right. Well, I still feel it's a fool's errand, but I won't resist if the rest of you are set on this course of action. Jian?"

'The only one of us here whose opinion actually matters to Xiulan.'

The handsome boy idly gazed somewhere in the distance before turning to his bigger cousin.

"I would first like to hear what you think of this, Fang. Yu is obviously for, Xiulan is against, what is your opinion?"

The large boy shuffled from one leg to another, his face a rictus of concentration for a couple of moments before abruptly shrugging and inclining his head in a sharp nod.

Han Jian serenely smiled at the rest of them and confirmed their plan of action.

"Well, that's settled then. For what is worth, I am also intrigued by Yu's plan. I can think of several things we can gain, and we stand little to lose except a little time on our part for it."

"If you say so, Jian." shrugged the female cultivator.

"Where do we start? Any suggestions, Yu? You are the one on whose shoulders this is mostly riding."

Fang, Xiulan and Jian all turned expectantly to him.

'Where indeed?'

The first and obvious choice, was Qiao Shui. Despite not being a true commoner, but rather a son of a Yellow Soul master herbalist in employ of a nearby viscount house, Qiao was an extraordinarily talented craftsman who disdained most nobles and who preferred the company of other "humble-born", and who was known for specializing in strong spiritual medicines that greatly aided one's efforts in opening the meridians and in physical cultivation. The medicines were so potent, that many of his customers were ready to excuse his rather terrible manners and foul disposition. He had advance to the Inner Sect in Yu's second year, apparently stymied in their first year by his lack of connections and the more expensive materials.

The second option was Fatty Hao. A savvy businessman of friendly disposition and a frightingly resourceful cultivator in many fields, Fatty Hao had once upon a time been a main supplier of the "Second Council", as the paltry remnants of the Cai's council remaining in the second year of his time at the Argent Sect came to be known. The boy had managed to rise meteorically among the ranks of the Outer Sect students in little over a year, growing rich thanks to his self-forged connections and industriousness, even electing to skip over the production track in his second year, in order to better entrench his little merchant empire.

Fatty Hao dabbled in virtually everything, when not selling the creations of his many and diverse friends, but his own specialty were exotic consumables and disposable talismans. If Qiao Shui was a fanatical artist obsessed with his creations and not much else, Fatty Hao was an innovative and eccentric trader who had a penchant to make friends in both high and low places. Getting him on their side early on could only prove useful.

The third and last obvious candidate, Tan Yating, was a daughter of a mortal scribe, who was an absolute prodigy of the formations and talisman creation. Fan Yu knew about her the least, since she had managed to get to the Inner Sect already in her first year, but he had accidently befriended her former (future?) lover and had heard a lot of things, indeed, much more than he needed, about her from her jilted former lover.

Apparently Yating was rather promiscuous and "treacherous", fond of manipulating people and using them for her own ends. However, not even the distraught boy could deny that she was frighteningly intelligent and competent, held back only by her meagre background and resources.

Actually, the boy even once claimed that the only thing stopping Yating from overtaking even Xuan Shi in the field of formations was the boy's overwhelming material advantage.

Given the biased source, Fan Yu took that little tidbid of a opinion with a shovel of salt, but even a quarter of that was true, she was an investment worth looking into.

Of course, all of this happened in less than a blink of an eye (sorry guys, I couldn't resist), and Yu firmly replied:

"I might have an idea or two."
 
Snowballing
A possible outcome of Snowballing

He was going to die. He was going to die, hunted like dog, all because the goddamn Sun princess couldn't let a grudge die!

Ru Xing dodged an arrow, leaped up a tree and across a relatively short ravine, and kept running. It was unnatural, the way these Sun supporters weren't fighting each other at all in favour of concentrating on hunting him and his down. Well, he assumed the other enforcers of Lady Cai were getting hunted too, given the enthusiasm of his own pursuit. But it was pretty clear that the redheaded jungle bitch had ordered her own forces to make sure every one of Lady Cai's men were hunted down and killed like dogs before they even thought of trying to secure their own positions.

Ru Xing's stamina was running out, and given how few of his comrades were here, he doubted he'd be running into backup any time soon. He had hoped to hear the sound of eerie flutes and despairing darkness, but the mountain was oddly silent of that particular song, so Ru Xing was on his own. Jumping across the ravine had bought him some time, but he could hear his pursuers catching up. With heart pounding in his throat and qi dropping with every minute he kept up his movement art, he was gonna have to make his stand soon. Just a little further... There!

A narrow gully, overlooked by trees, too deep to jump down to or up from. A dead end, but it meant he'd have three sides covered and his opponents would have to come at him one at a time. It was the best he was going to get. Ru Xing ran right up the ravine and used the brief respite to start chugging down pills. He was going down here, but he was absolutely going to take as many Sun bastards as he could down with him.

With a thunderous boom, a boy laced in lightning crashed down at the end, and Ru Xing hesitated. Could he take the lone enemy down before his allies arrived? But it would mean leaving the safety of his cover and he might get surrounded...

Before he could decide either way, the shadows around the boy came to life and wrapped around him like a living thing, smothering his lightning and drowning him in darkness. Seconds later, the boy dropped soundlessly, and Lady Ling coalesced from the shadows. She was smiling.

"Don't be afraid," she said, and it was only then that Ru Xing realised he had his back pressed against the rock behind him like he was hoping to sink into it. "It's just me, Ling Qi." She was still smiling.

"L-Lady Ling!" Ru Xing immediately stepped forward and bowed, trying not to let on how his heart was still hammering like a frightened rabbit, or how his blood was still trying to freeze in dread. Yes, he had been hoping for the sounds of her signature melody earlier, but that was more in the sense of hoping for an environmental hazard to run into. It was rather different when said environmental hazard was actively paying attention to you. "Lady, we should go, the mountain is crawling with Sun supporters, I counted at least ten on my trail just now..."

"Oh don't worry," Lady Ling replied, starlight glimmering in her hair and inhuman grace in every movement as she approached. Ru Xing willed himself not to back up again. "I took care of those already. Come with me, I'm rounding up our side and wiping out all Sun's people I can find. After that, we're going to go after the other Green in this bracket, and then there will be a second spot open for one of you. How does that sound?"

It sounded like Lady Ling was wiping out all the dogs on their tails so she could throw them to the wolves. Of course, Lady Ling was rather less... kind, compared to Lord Gan. It was no surprise that she'd saved Ru Xing for a purpose. On the bright side, at least Lady Ling wasn't siding with the other Green and choosing to wipe them all out? Ru Xing could feel the cold sweat beading his brow, but he made himself bow again anyway. "I am ready to serve, Lady Ling!"

After all, what other choice did he have?
 
Moonlit Villa
Moonlit Villa

Zhen Chao stood at attention in the morning sun with all of the other chosen from Lord Gan's troop. Each and every one of the ten cultivators here was solidly in the second realm, with some even beginning to break through into the third realm. Within the eight months of training under Lord Gan's instruction, even he, a commoner who had no prior experience in cultivation, had reached the end of the second realm.

They were the elites, and beginning today each one of them would receive special instruction, treatment, and resources to ensure that all of them were prepared to excel in the tournament. Zhen Chao had heard from some of the older sect brothers and sisters about Lord Gan's… failure in the preliminaries last year and how it had changed him.

Well into the third realm, Lord Gan's presence felt like a blinding insurmountable mountain. Strength and power could be felt with every movement Lord Gan made, and that power swelled every time Lord Gan participated in the training until it was an immovable and unstoppable force. He was exceedingly demanding on others in his instruction, and upon himself, and the progress his troop had made was evident that he had chosen well and his expectations were being met.

Today, however, Lord Gan came accompanied by two other individuals. Lady Ma Jun and Lady Ma Lei. While not strictly part of Lord Gan's troop, Lord Gan had requested on numerous occasions for their expertise on spiritual attacks and to provide differing combat training for dealing with two highly coordinated opponents. It was still disgusting to Zhen Chao how a simple melody could induce sleepiness and cause a lack of coordination. However, it was an effective reminder that not all threats could be dealt with physically.

Lord Gan stopped in front of Zhen Chao and the other elites. The Ma sisters stayed a step behind Lord Gan, but something seemed amiss. A quick glance at their faces revealed a hint of anticipation. Anticipation on your instructors never pointed to good things occurring.

"Greetings," boomed Lord Gan's voice, "I am pleased to see that all who received my invitation decided to be present and submit themselves to the higher demands and expectations I will be placing upon you. Fear not, however, for with the higher expectations come greater rewards for accomplishing them. I have been given leave to increase your stipend and provide more potent medicinal aids for your cultivation. Now is the time to hone our skills, strengthen our cultivation, and secure a place within the Inner Sect. To that end, I have been able to secure the assistance of Lady Ling to test and strengthen us for the upcoming trials. Present yourselves to Lady Ling!"

Lord Gan's shadow bulged upward and formed into a strikingly tall woman. As she glided around Lord Gan, Zhen Chao's voice joined the others in welcoming her. He could see her, but her presence was imperceptible, like a shadow cast upon an empty night. So this was the rumored terror of last year, a commoner deemed so powerful and potent that even the Sun Princess had been forced to acknowledge her as a worthy adversary during their duel in last year's Inner Sect Tournament.

"Greetings," Lady Ling began in a voice sounding like windchimes composed of the purest crystal, "it is a pleasure to meet those that Lord Gan deems worthy of my instruction. I shall be instructing you in spiritual defense, and giving pointers on how to begin a spiritual attack of your own. Now attend, and prepare yourself."

Time seemed to slow for Zhen Chao as Lady Ling brought a flute up to her lips and a single crystal note rang out. Darkness slammed into him as he crumpled and entered a dreamless sleep.

Jolting awake, Zhen Chao looked at the scenery surrounding him. No longer in a meadow, he and his comrades were in a misty forest, with the moon hanging low in the black starless sky. A paved path led forward, twisting and turning to accommodate the trees along its route. Moments later, the world twisted and everyone was in front of a mansion, seemingly carved from glacial ice and ancient wood. On the patio stood the Ma Sisters, Lord Gan, Lady Ling, and an iridescent man who seemed to shift and change with every passing second.

"Welcome," Lady Ling greeted them, "to the 'Moonlit Villa.' A work in progress I must admit, but this art will greatly assist us by lengthening the short time we have together. Now, we will divide into teams in order to best instruct you."

For the first time, Zhen Chao understood absolutely what the elder Sect Brothers and Sisters said when talking about Lady Ling, and her terrifying reputation.


Moonlit Villa
The beginnings of an art crafted by Lady Ling. At the moment, the bare framework has been completed, but actually invoking the art requires the assistance of Lady Ling's spirit companion and the co-creator of the art, Sixiang.

Sleepless Dream
Cost: 50 qi
A short note filled with potent qi, meant to put allies into a slumber and place their dreaming minds into a single dream world. Upon final creation of the dream world, all cultivators affected by this technique "wake up" inside the dreamworld. Up to 15 cultivators can be joined using this technique.

The Dreaming World
Cost: 100 qi
This world is crafted from the dreams of Ling Qi and Sixiang. Always shifting and always changing, this world can be filled with the memories or fantasies from either of its creators. Nothing here is real though, and so cannot affect anyone trapped within the world. Cultivators, on the other hand, are capable of affecting the world and each other. The one constant, it seems, is that time moves faster inside the dream world than outside of it.

A/N
Welp, here's another omake for the Omake Throne @yrsillar!

Not my longest work or my finest work but I think it gets the idea across. I wanted to do an omake where Ling Qi gets invited by GG to train his troops using his accumulated Sect points, and I also wanted to do an omake exploring a theoretical art idea I've had recently. None of those omakes would really be long enough on their own though, so I joined the two.

Again, I feel that I struggled to keep the same perspective throughout the omake as I was writing it, but I think it is acceptable. While I didn't write this one as seriously as the last one, comments and criticisms are always welcomed.

I hope you all can enjoy the read
 
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Green
Green
In the dark of his barracks, Wang Lei sat and breathed, trying to focus qi into his dantian. Although basic training was over, he had yet to unlock his qi, and he refused to let this stand, no matter how long it took. But to correct it, he needed to meditate. He ignored the snoring of his bunkmate. He ignored that he needed the rest for his patrol tomorrow, and the months of work with no progress at all and that he still wasn't sure what a dantian feels like and. He sat and breathed. Finally, he felt something. At first it was so small he believed that he had imagined it, but then the feeling grew as energy suffused his body until it was as if his steps could shake the mountains and his fists could split the heavens. Even as he collapsed, one thought remained. 'I want to keep feeling like this'

Over the following weeks, Lei had adjusted to life as a cultivator, and found it to his liking. He could move more easily, think faster, and was, if not good, at least decent at everything he tried. Civilians on the street respected his authority. He felt powerful. He was powerful. Even if he couldn't shake mountains, this was enough.

Looking at the broken body of the spirit beast before him Lei realized that he had been wrong, his strength was nowhere near enough. This beast was not exceptional, merely grade 2, if a powerful example of such, and yet it had carved a swathe through the guards who had confronted it, until it had finally been brought down by several officers working together. If he hadn't been patrolling on the other side of the city at the time, he would be dead. He needed to get stronger. Fortunately, he knew just how to accomplish that.


Every day Lei's squad would go out drinking together. While not every member would attend every time, most showed up a few times a week. Despite this he had refrained from attending all week, drawing concern from his friend, Feng De.

"Wang, are you sure you don't want to come? You've been shutting yourself in all week"

"Yes, I need to keep cultivating. I can't let myself stay this weak."

"You know that you're never going to be stronger than the beast was, right?

"That's only true if I stop trying."


Finally, after years of effort, cutting costs to afford just one more spirit stone and spending every spare moment cultivating, he could feel his dantian surging with energy. Joyfully he pushed his qi against its walls and could feel it start to give. He kept pushing until… Pain! He collapsed to the floor crying tears of blood. As he slowly crawled to the medic's office, he finally understood the real reason so few reach yellow.

As he attacked his bottleneck, refilling his dantian only to be wracked with pain and start again, Lei expanded his focus. Although he refused to give up when he was so close, there were other paths he could also follow. He spent endless hours practicing with his spear, ironing out inefficiencies in his gait, and otherwise trying to perfect his every action. After years of blood, sweat and tears his efforts were recognized, and he was promoted to second in command of his squad, with a corresponding increase in salary which he fed back into his cultivation.

As he meditated, his dantian refilled for the tenth time, Lei realized something. True strength is the ability to keep walking. No fist, no matter how strong, accomplishes anything if not swung. No leg, no matter how sturdy, accomplishes anything if it takes no step. Then, as if striding forward, his power surged. Finally, he had broken through!


Lei sat, nursing a drink, as his squad partied around him, celebrating his breakthrough to yellow, his imminent promotion, and probably that his replacement would likely be more lenient than he. There was something about the whole thing that bothered him, but he couldn't figure out just what it was. As he sat, Feng De approached holding out a stronger drink

"Stop brooding Lei, this is supposed to be a celebration. Now that you've reached yellow you can live the good life. Unless you do something really bad they won't dare fire you just so they can have another yellow guard, and they'll pay you better too."

"You say that as if I'm as lazy as you, De." Lei grumbled, taking the drink

"True, you wouldn't do that, but that attitude of yours just means you'll soon be at the top instead." Feng De laughed as he walked off.

Sighing, Lei realized why everyone's attitude annoyed him. They were acting like this was the biggest thing he would ever accomplish, that going further wasn't even a possibility. He supposed he would just need to prove them wrong. "Although" he mused "delaying just one day wouldn't hurt. This is a milestone after all." Taking a swig, he moved to join the party.


Over the next decades, Wang Lei advanced through the ranks of the Shaohai city guard, until his friend's prediction came true and he advanced to become captain. In that position, he applied the same relentless determination that he had learned from his cultivation, improving the training and organization of those under him. His refusal to give up also inspired those under him causing a small but significant increase in the yellow cultivators within the guard. Even as time after time his body and qi rebelled against him he still refused to give anything less than his best into everything he could do, attempting to break through again and again until…

As he pushed once again against the walls of his dantian, Wang Lei found himself drawn into a vision. He stood on a steep slope, extending far beyond his ability to perceive. To his left was a mysterious cave, to his right was a plateau where his friends were laughing and drinking together, and below was a peaceful lake. As he looked across the mountain and the choices arrayed before him, Lei laughed. He already knew what he was going to do, he had known for years by now. He was going to climb, and then he was going to keep climbing, because even if the path was too hard to finish, he refused to be so weak as to give up.




AN: This was inspired by the realization that even someone at talent 2 can reach green in a few decades with minimal resources.
 
Moonlit Superiority
AN: A stupid little thing I put together because it amused me, most assuredly not serious. Behold the ramblings of Snake Book.

Ling Clan Methods of Moonlit Superiority
Written by the humble scholar She Shu at the behest of Her Most Moonlit Personage, Viscount Ling Qi
In the twentieth year of Her Reign
The most honorable and resourceful ruler of our fair lands is well known for her many magnificent methods to crush interlopers, wrongdoers and the savage spirit beasts. Like the Great Moon our Most Musically Magnificent Viscount has many faces and forms upon which to visit the enemy. This most humble scholar has himself seen seven upon seven of these techniques. For the edification of the masses as to the glorious wonder of our Liege this most humble of scholars begged in kowtow to be told of those most illustrious days our Lady spent in the august peaks of the Argent Peak Sect with the Most Terrifyingly Handsome Bai Meizhen, her redoubtable acquaintance and our Fairest, Most Just, Clear Eyed Font of the Highest Heavens and the Illuminator of the Darkest Crimes, Heir to the Province, the radiant Cai Renxiang as her liege.

Our merciful Lady of Moonlit Sonatas deigned to give this one's request answer and so told this one of her techniques developed against her foes.

The first of these graceful techniques is thus.

"The Blizzard of One Thousand Screams and Sudden Drops", Learned from a spirit of ceaseless cold, Our Dearest Viscount described to me a field of endless cold blackness which cloaked itself in mist and music to make the heart strings stop in mortal terror. The pits of hunger summoned within sucked all life giving Qi into our Ethereal Lady of Moonlight. But they were as tinder our Liege said to me. Fuel for her to strike the true enemy hidden within the masses.

Truly a most terrifying technique, this one shuddered as the image of cold nearly overcame me just imagining the terror incarnate sucking the life from my old bones, only the warm hearthfire presence of our Liege stemming the awful tide.

Truly we are most blessed of the Empire's citizens to have the Most Kind and Beneficent Viscount Ling Qi as our Lady.

The next astounding technique of battle our Lady shared with me was thus.

"The Call of the Hell Mist and Meteor Tortoises", Developed in the heart of her own genius Our Most Loved Viscount described to me the image of a moonlit star rising into the heavens and singing a stormcloud of raw musical might into being above the base earth. To her breast our loving Lady clutched her Most Massive and Astounding brother. Upon the proper signal her brother then descended from the heavens 'pon a seat of flame as our Fervent Moonlit Lady's herald.

This most pathetic insect was overwhelmed by the magnificence described even obliquely. But this one will carry on! This one's duty commands it be so!

And so we come to the last technique.

"The Sticky Tendriled Hurricane and River of Endless Greed", Many enemies were set before Our Most Dearly Beloved Lady of Song in the peaks of the Sect and she was beset with a conundrum of resources which were rightfully hers being in the clutches of most malodorous malignants. And so with the grace of a thousand shadows the Great Viscount slipped beneath the fool's noses and selected the choicest of pieces, taking them back as her rightful property.

These were but the first three of many endless tales of Her magnificent adventures in her Glorious life. For now this one must shamefully beg for forgiveness at the brevity and beg for the reader's trust that many more tales lie upon the beauteous lips of our most Honored, most mysterious and Knowledgeable Lady.


So I found this guy who wanted to write memoirs about my techniques in the sect, and since I found him quite funny I thought you might enjoy it, my oldest friend. -Ling Qi

Bai Meizhen groaned quietly as she read the short pamphlet she had received by formation, her hand rising involuntarily to her brow, desperately massaging at the ache therein.

It was a good thing the darkness hid her twitching lips.
 
From Far Away: The Red Winter
You know... when that writing bug bites, it bites hard.

From Far Away: The Red Winter

My story ends far away from the lands you are accustomed to. Where the stars trace differing patterns in the sky, and wizened astrologers perceive prophecies far different from your own. This is the end of my tale, the tale of Merek Eis, the eldest son and heir apparent to the House of Eis.



I trudged through the snow, slowly stomping towards the Heart of Ice. The forest here was dead, dark, and dreary. No leaves hung on the boroughs of trees, and no flowers peaked through the deep snow. However, the path was familiar to me, and soon I reached a still pond, covered in ice for as long as I could remember. The magics of the place were strong, and even now began to steep into my flesh with every breath I took. Magics of cold, of ice, of hunger, and of peace.

I gazed into the pond and saw my reflection for the first time in a week. My silver blue armor completely blacked with blood. My reflection was of a man who had swum and bathed in blood. It was a sobering reminder of what had happened a week ago, and what would be finished today.

Sitting down at the edge of the pond, I meditated, steeling my resolve for what was to come. The tortured screams of my family ringing in my ears, and the anguish of the villagers I had sworn to protect weighing on my shoulders. I remembered the look of dedication and determination of Ulric, as my great white bear lay down in a deepening pool of his own blood and began to activate the ancient defenses of Castle Eis.

I saw the flames of the village dancing behind my eyes, dwarfed only by the inferno that had become Castle Eis, my home. I also heard the whispers of the dragon blood in my veins. Plusing and raging at what had transpired. The whispers were ignored, for it had nothing useful to impart to me this day, no nugget of wisdom or pearl of forgotten knowledge. This was the final day, an inevitable confrontation, and it had nothing left to offer me.

A familiar sensation tickled at the edge of my perception. It was like the feeling of being safe, that the family had come to defend and protect, it was the feeling of my younger brother. My brother, my sweet, clever, genius brother. How naive you are, how ignorant. No matter, it was time to end this.

Fendrel came to a rest behind me, wheezing for breath. I stood and turned towards him. He was clothed in the armor of his order, the Order of the Wolf. The foundation of his soul was still being developed, but it was progressing quite nicely. It was… unfortunate that it was dwarfed by the strength of my soul.

"Why Merek!" My brother screamed, "Why did you kill Father! Why did you kill Mother and Ellyn! Why did you kill the villagers, every man, woman, and child!"

My chuckle was dark. I looked Fendrel in the eyes and spoke softly, like velvet being stroked under the light of a bloody moon. "Fendrel, knowing why won't bring them back. Knowing the reasons, the excuses, and the lies won't let them walk amongst the living. There is one thing you should know though, that by the time dawn graces this damnable land with its warmth, there will only be one member of House Eis alive. Steel yourself and fight."

With a breath, a tremble of the legs, and unshed tears in his eyes, Fendel nodded. In a flash, Dirn, his dire wolf, was at his side, and the estoc and shield of his order were in his hands. Smoke began to exude from him, as he made his soul manifest. Dozens of ephemeral wolves joined at his side, all prepared to die for his cause.

I drew my sword from my ring, it still being caked in the blood of the family and villagers I had slain. My zweihander was a thing of beauty and was created for the sole purpose of dealing out death as quickly and efficiently as possible. I focused the weight of my soul upon myself and drew forth the blood ice I was known for. With creaks and groans, it enveloped me, becoming a second skin, an impenetrable glacier made from ice and blood in equal measure.

My brother charged, with the baying of his wolves a step behind him, giving him strength and surety. He knew of my renown for my defenses and knew its weakness, that I still required time to fully become enveloped.

I waited, patiently, and then I twisted my sword and swung, the flat of the blade coming straight for his shoulder. Fendel was already committed, however, and drove his estoc right through my blood ice, through my armor, and into my heart.

And so there I was, standing above my younger brother with the flat of my blade resting against Fendel's shoulder and his blade driven straight through my heart. It was over, and I could finally rest. I let go of my sword with one hand and used it to drag Fendel closer to me, incidentally driving his sword deeper into my chest.

Fendel was too shocked to resist my hug, I saw it in his posture. If I had actually fought, then he would never have reached me, and his death would be another notch in my belt… not that there was actually room anymore. He was confused, but confused was far, far preferable to being dead or associated with our accursed family.

My head bent down, and I whispered in his ear, "With my death, your renown in your order will flourish. The resources given to the man who can kill another a full two foundations above his own will be astounding. Your talent and your drive will be fueled by the glory of this battle. But we will both know the truth, and your branch head and the head of your order will know the truth, a letter is being delivered to them you see, that I let you kill me. Now the sins of our forefathers, of our father, and my own can be washed away. The insanity and accursed blood within our line and lurking in our village has been cleansed away by fire and entombed by ice. I was always thankful that you were spared the family ritual because you joined your order. So now you are free, and the last man who could have the knowledge to revive Vetur er Heifit will be slain by your hand."

"Is that why… you gave me Dirn? To keep me away from our family?" Fendel whispered.

"Now that.." I stumbled, falling backward into the snow. The magic of Fendel's sword and the poison I had taken earlier that evening combining to kill me quicker than I anticipated. Ice began creeping through my veins, traveling away from my heart. Exhaustion crashed down on me and as my eyes closed, I saw my younger brother for the last time, holding my head in his arms and weeping.

The last thing I heard though, was the raging obscenities of the dragon Vetur er Heifit as his millennia-long plans on reviving collapsed with my death. And with the screaming of a dead god in my ears, I died. Smiling.

A/N: This omake was inspired by;
Savage Seas is the only province to have any peaceful contact with another state, and they have their own set of laws to handle that.
Reminding me that there are other people out in the world, with other traditions, other strengths and methods of cultivating, and other demons to face. Some background to the story:

Vetur er Heifit is Icelandic for "Winter's Fury." I used Google Translate because I refuse to learn Icelandic just to write an omake.

Eis is German for Ice (via google translate again), and the ancient defenses of Castle Eis run with that theme. A glacier forms and entombs the castle with mystical protection preventing any harm from being done to the castle until the formations are disabled, as well as preventing anyone from entering or leaving. It is... unfortunate then that Ulric was the last being inside of the castle and died in order to leave the castle permanently entombed in a glacier.

Merek killed all the villagers because they were in on the plan to revive Vetur er Heifit as well, and he burned both the castle and the village to destroy any of the mad scribbling and written plans on how to revive Vetur er Heifit.

Should Vetur er Heifit be revived, he would attempt to encase the entire region in an eternal winter where it would reign supreme. Everything else in the region would simply be a snack or a food bank.

Anyways, I hope you enjoyed the read, and as always critiques and critisims are welcomed.
 
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