While looking things up, I noticed that at the end of OVERWHELM DRIVE, Red Rose cried
tears of blood. Which is entirely appropriate and has interesting implications, but how does she get stuff out of her eyes?.
Could have been that one scaled to current Health and the other to max Health. (Speaking of, how would they work against someone like Grey Champion, who has no max HP?)
I don't think so? Are the rest of the "variable"s in parentheses?
I don't feel like doing an exhaustive search, but Civvie's and Prisma Drake's are. Though you're right that it's not the same as other parenthesized things, which tend to be an Ability/Affinity that either isn't really there or doesn't belong to the person (the Dragon Affinity from the Power Armor, undead having a (Necromancy) Affinity or the Moores' (Brand craft), things like (Offline), replaced Affinities like the Radiances'). Still, the way the Moores have them it looks like an Ability
called Variable rather than a variable Ability, so… either put them in parens, or a different kind of bracket, or make an Ability which stands for a variable Ability? …Actually, according to Summit's sheet that last one is exactly what Protean is, though it seems a little different in its operation.
Also noticed this:
Melee attack. The spear is an even 2 meters long, so subtract some to account for the fact that she's not waving it around like a baseball bat...
Doesn't look like that to me:
In a single motion, Red Rose's legs unwind and the force of her jump propels her into the air! A blast of displaced air, and she is in the sky, dozens of feet out of Lunar Radiance's reach! Red Rose shines red, a blood-colored light that seems to subsume everything into itself.
"Avatar..."
Everything changes in an instant.
-snip combat calculations-
"...of Victory."
Red Rose's movement from point A to point B is too fast for you to follow. One heartbeat, she is in the air. The next, she is kneeling on the ground on the far side of Lunar Radiance's snake form. A third heartbeat passes in silence, as if reality was trying to figure out what had just happened.
And then, in a pillar of sudden red light, a roar consumes everything!
Oh, one last thing: Abilities have their own Affinities, which are relevant for Affinity interactions and
Affinity Kill. What Affinities does
Overwhelming Presence have? All of the holder's, none, variable?