Crystalwatcher's Magical Girl Quest!

(Unified Light) Magical Girl Fluffy Puff

Aria Hepburn
Stats

Health: 1,500
Base Damage: 25
Base Resilience: 50
Magic Modifier: 200

Affinity: Tranquility | Cloud | Legend Maker
Weapon


Avgifernei

Level 1
Attacks Per Turn: 2
Affinities: Cloud
Ability: Unstoppable
Spells

Fogbank
Fluffy Puff fills the area with blinding fog.
Base Damage: N/A
Magic Modifier:N/A
Affinity: Cloud


Cushioning
Fluffy Puff creates a wall of cloud. All enemies who pass through are slowed and all attacks that pass through have their damage halved.
Base Damage: N/A
Magic Modifier: N/A
Affinity: Cloud

Soft Bedding
Fluffy Puff creates a small cloud. Any ally that sits on the cloud gains regeneration and resistance to mind spells.
Base Damage: N/A
Magic Modifier: N/A
Affinity: Cloud | Tranquility
Ability: Boost All

Cloud Form
Fluffy Puff becomes as intangible as cloud. She loses benefit of her resilience, but takes half damage from all attacks
Base Damage: N/A
Magic Modifier: N/A
Affinity: Cloud | Tranquility
Ability: Boost Self

Abilities

Flight
Level 1

Unrestrainable
Fluffy Puff cannot be bound, imprisoned or otherwise prevented from moving





So! An OC! Wanted something slightly silly and very much a peaceful support unit.

I made a list of affinities if anyone has a request for one they'd like to see next.

  • traps
  • Home
  • Doors
  • Keys
  • Data
  • Emotion
  • Savagery
  • Games
  • Toys
  • Breakfast
  • Clouds
  • Rainbows
  • Gold
  • Fragrance
  • Ceilings
  • Caves
  • Decay
  • Restoration
  • Travel
  • Stubbornness
  • Gravity
  • Atom
  • Numbers
  • Symbol
  • Paper
  • Height
  • Storage
  • Sun
  • Moon
  • Metamorphosis
  • Progression
  • Roads
  • Connection
  • Gifts
  • Wrapping
  • Decoration
  • Mud
  • Toes
  • Spikes
  • Entertainment
  • Wigs
  • Distance
She could have some large scale AoE tranquilizer cloud spell too. It would be surprisingly effective and fits to her theme.
 
(Unified Light) Magical Girl Cursed Slice

Akame Fitzpatrick
Stats

Health: 1,500
Base Damage: 600
Base Resilience: 120
Magic Modifier: 40

Affinity: Death |Toxin | Myth
Weapon


Murasame

Level 10
Attacks Per Turn: 4
Affinities: Toxin | Death
Ability: Murder
Spells

Trump Card
Cursed Slice sacrifices 20% of her maximum health to double her speed and gain an extra three attacks per turn. She can maintain this state by sacrificing another 10% of her maximum health per turn.
Base Damage: N/A
Magic Modifier:N/A
Affinity: Toxin
Ability: Boost-Self

Certain Death
If Cursed Slice successfully damages her opponent, she can curse them to lose 10% of their maximum health every turn until they receive medical treatment.
Base Damage: N/A
Magic Modifier: N/A
Affinities: Toxin | Death
Ability: Murder

Abilities

Toxic Metabolism
All curses and toxins have a positive rather than negative effect on Cursed Slice.

Chink Finder
If allowed to study her enemy uninterrupted for two turns, Cursed Slice can make an attack which treats her opponent's resilience as a quarter of what it normally is.





Okay. Before I make another OC, here's an Akame ga Kill expy. Had to make up a surname though.

EDIT:^ An excellent point.
 
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(Unified Light) Magical Girl Cursed Slice

Akame Fitzpatrick
Stats

Health: 1,500
Base Damage: 600
Base Resilience: 120
Magic Modifier: 40

Affinity: Death |Toxin | Myth
Weapon


Murasame

Level 10
Attacks Per Turn: 4
Affinities: Toxin | Death
Ability: Murder
Spells

Trump Card
Cursed Slice sacrifices 20% of her maximum health to double her speed and gain an extra three attacks per turn. She can maintain this state by sacrificing another 10% of her maximum health per turn.
Base Damage: N/A
Magic Modifier:N/A
Affinity: Toxin
Ability: Boost-Self

Certain Death
If Cursed Slice successfully damages her opponent, she can curse them to lose 10% of their maximum health every turn until they recievve medical treatent.
Base Damage: N/A
Magic Modifier: N/A
Affinities: Toxin | Death
Ability: Murder

Abilities

Toxic Metabolism
All curses and toxins have a positive rather than negative effect on Cursed Slice.

Chink Finder
If allowed to study her enemy uninterrupted for two turns, Cursed Slice can make an attack which treats her opponent's resilience as a quarter of what it normally is.





Okay. Before I make another OC, here's an Akame ga Kill expy. Had to make up a surname though.

EDIT:^ An excellent point.
What defines medical treatment?
 
(Unaligned) Magical Girl Clockwork Prism

Kirstine Clemensen
Stats

Health: 200
Base Damage: 100
Base Resilience: 100
Magic Modifier: 100

Affinity: Machinery | Rule | Myth
Weapon

Clockwork Angel's Wings
Level 1
Attacks Per Turn: 2
Affinities: Machinery
Ability: Double hit
Spells

Auxilium de Machina
-Summons a portion of The World Machine to help her fight. Result determined by Magic Modifier Roll.
Level 1
Base Damage: N/A
Magic Modifier: 100
Affinity: Machinery
Ability: Summon
Abilities

Clockwork Heart: Level 1
-controls HP and resilience.

Princess of Machinery
-Magical Girl Clockwork Prism can control any mechanical devices or components within 50 meters and those within Line of Sight as if they were extensions of her own body.

Mentes Cognatio Machinas
-Magical Girl Clockwork Prism can intuitively understand machinery and mechanical devices, but lacks comprehension of things like body language, emotional cues, and basic socialization outside of rote memorization.

Orbis Terrarum Machina: The World Machine
-Magical Girl Clockwork Prism has access to a sub-dimension known as The World Machine; A world of clockwork, steel and glass, filled with machines and mechanisms ranging from fantastical to mundane. Clockwork Prism may travel to and from this dimension at will, and withdraw resources and objects under a certain size from it.
With every turn of the clock, The World Machine grows larger. It grows slowly, but surely, steadily encroaching on neighboring Dimensions.


So, Clockwork Prism. She's fairly slow to grow, but her connection to The World Machine makes her scary, and letting her grow for too long would be a Bad Idea.
She's unaligned because she neither understands nor cares about the War, she just wants TWM to grow bigger and stronger, because it's basically the only thing she can understand completely.
TWM itself isn't really a part of her powers, but more of a Patron, like Siva-Sil for the Maidens, and Gaia for the WEAPONs, that her becoming a Magical Girl connected her to. As long as she helps catalyze its growth, it helps her with whatever she wants. It's also working on making Black Knight-esque Automata to field so it doesn't have to rely on just her.
 
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Fogbank
Fluffy Puff fills the area with blinding fog.
Base Damage: N/A
Magic Modifier:N/A
Affinity: Cloud


Cushioning
Fluffy Puff creates a wall of cloud. All enemies who pass through are slowed and all attacks that pass through have their damage halved.
Base Damage: N/A
Magic Modifier: N/A
Affinity: Cloud
These should have the abilities Blind and Slow, respectively.

Gain actual Flight of equal rank to Enhanced Jumping for the duration.
If Cursed Slice successfully damages her opponent, she can curse them to lose 10% of their maximum health every turn until they receive medical treatment.
typos
 
So a quick expy idea, that is simple in its execution, and broken by its abilites. Fate Assassin Jack The Ripper. Infamous murderer of woman and portrayed as a child, she would be a MG spect totally for taking out other MG's. Just can't make her now so the idea is up for grabs.
 
So a quick expy idea, that is simple in its execution, and broken by its abilites. Fate Assassin Jack The Ripper. Infamous murderer of woman and portrayed as a child, she would be a MG spect totally for taking out other MG's. Just can't make her now so the idea is up for grabs.
Vetoed, by the power of Why-would-you-do-this? Nightmares can already dip into hentai logic for their incapacitation techniques, so we don't need any more dangers for poor Anastasia.
 
(Unaligned Front) The World Machine

Orbis Terrarum Machina
Stats

Health: ????
Base Damage: ????
Base Resilience: ????
Magic Modifier: 33,222,111
Affinity: Machinery | Growth | Replication | Creation | Annihilation | Magic | Order | Logic | Reason | Rule | Judgement | World
Weapon

????
Level ??
Attacks Per Turn: ??
Affinity: Machinery | Replication | Annihilation | Order
Ability: Auto Assault | Juggernaut | Adaptive Recovery

Princess of Machinery
Level 1
Attacks Per Turn: N/A
Affinity: Machinery | Rule | Creation | Annihilation | World
Ability: Auto Assault | Autonomous Combat | Instant Recovery (yet to be unlocked)
Spells
Rage of the Machine
Level ??
Base Damage: ??
Magic Modifier: ??
Affinity: Annihilation | ???? | ????
Ability: ????

Ability

Mechanica Orbem
-The World Machine is capable of directly effecting anything and everything within Its sphere of influence to a minor degree. The more in line with Its intentions the object It influences, the more control It has over it.

Beyond Good and Evil

-The World Machine cannot be directly targeted by any attack that lacks sufficient range to effect a global change. Anything that falls short of such a scale is rendered ineffective and ignored.

Celestial Combat
-The World Machine is capable of waging combat against planetary bodies and godlike beings.

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@crystalwatcher There's no template for Divine Beings. Did I do okay?
 
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(Unaligned) Magical Girl Blue Dragon

???

Stats

Health: 250 (750)
Base Damage: 50 (200)
Base Resilience: 50 (150)
Magic Modifier: 500 (700)

Affinity: Water | Companionship | Myth
Weapon

Blue Dragon
Level 10
Attacks Per Turn: (Magic Modifier Roll/100) minimum of 1
Affinities: Water| Companion | Myth
Ability: Companion | Interceptor | Autonomous | Juggernaut


Spells

Summon
Level N/A
Base Damage: N/A
Magic Modifier: N/A
Affinity: Companion
Ability: Summon

Abilities

Two As One
Neither may die while the other survives. Blue Dragon will take (Blue Dragon's Health/MG Blue Dragon's health) days to reconstitute itself if he should die.
-Desperation of the Lonely: MG Blue Dragon may sacrifice 100 points of health per day to speed this up.

Never Alone
If Blue Dragon is not within sight or within 10 feet of Blue Dragon, or otherwise incapacitated, then Blue Dragon may summon Blue Dragon to their location as a free action instantaneously.

Traits of the Dragon: Level 1
Add 10% of Blue Dragon's Stats (Includes Abilities eventually) to your own. Take on mutations of Blue Dragon appropriate for current level of ability.


(Unaligned)Blue Dragon

???

Stats

Health: 5000
Base Damage: 1500
Base Resilience: 1000 (2000)
Magic Modifier: 1500

Affinity: Water | Companionship | Myth
Weapon

Claws
Level 1
Attacks Per Turn: 1
Affinities: None
Ability:

Fangs
Level 1
Attacks Per Turn: 1
Affinities: None
Ability: Piercing

Tail
Level 1
Attacks Per Turn: 1
Affinities: None
Ability: Unstoppable

Spells


Torrent
Level 5
Base Damage: N/A
Magic Modifier: N/A
Affinity: Water
Ability: Obscuring | Battle-field Changer (Weather Effect?)

Water Breath
Level 8
Base Damage: 1200
Magic Modifier: 400
Affinity: Water
Ability: Unstoppable
Abilities

Two As One
Neither may die while the other survives. MG Blue Dragon will take 1 week to reconstitute herself if she should die.
-Desperation of the Guardian: If Blue Dragon is aware of an incoming attack when MG Blue Dragon is dead, and it would otherwise kill him or leave him incapacitated, he may sacrifice any remaining life he has to revive her and send her to the nearest body of water that is safe.

Never Alone
If Blue Dragon is not within sight or within 10 feet of Blue Dragon or otherwise incapacitated then Blue Dragon may summon Blue Dragon to their location as a free action instantaneously.

Guardian
May Intercept any attack (even surprise) aimed at MG Blue Dragon no matter where from or where Blue Dragon currently is, excluding being dead. Block all damage that would have reached MG Blue Dragon even if the attack killed Blue Dragon

Dragon Scales
Double Base Resiliency

Being of Magic
Add Magic Modifier roll to all physical attacks

Flight: Level 6
Flight of up to 50 mph

High-Speed Combat: Level 1
Track targets moving up to 90mph

Underwater Movement: Level 9
Swim up to 50mph (5*Level)+5 in any large enough body of water.

Underwater Combat: Level 2
Track Targets moving up to 90mph underwater


... I think I like them. Essentially just wanderers who don't care about much because Trauma... well the MG doesn't. The Dragon's a Dragon. And her Guardian. She'd be UL favored I think if she had to choose, if just because she likes living as you may have noticed. Only matched by her want to not be alone.

I figured a Water dragon deserved underwater movement/combat, but I'm not sure what the descriptions would actually look like/be. Also, three weapons which I hope he can use all of them each round. Makes more sense to me that way. And yes, MGBD boosting him with her magic to allow him to attack multiple times a round like a normal weapon in a way. Only more random.

I... think that's everything I wanted to say on them
 
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I feel loved. Where to start...

Huh. So it looks like we've got a contradiction here. Nepgear says the Goddesses were the longest serving Magical Girls after White Soul, who incidentally died to Red Rose, here:


Yet here crystalwatcher says Red Rose is the longest living Magical Girl:


I suppose Nepgear could have just been wrong but you'd think if she knew the story about White Soul she'd have known Red Rose had been a Magical Girl for nine years to the Goddesses mere six years.

No, that says they're the second oldest group.

Eight years. Magic has been around for 8 years. And to anyone wondering, no, that's not necessarily a discrepancy, Red Rose could very well have only turned 21 recently.

And then immediately goes onto say the oldest is a single Magical Girl. It's pretty clearly meant to say the Goddesses are the longest serving Magical Girls still alive with the record going to a now dead girl.
Magic has been known to exist for 10 years.

As a group the Goddess are the oldest, while Red Rose is the individually oldest after White Soul before she died. Red Rose and White Soul are among the first Magical Girls to awaken after the advent of magic, they were friends actually: but WS went kookoo for cocoa puffs and decided she wanted to start killing and just keep going. No one was able to put her down until Red Rose resolved that the friend she had known was already gone so she put her down.

WS Held the title of oldest Magical Girl by nine weeks.

Okay. Third Nanoha expy done.
Might collect these three and edit for cannon-ism use. Under consideration.

Okay. I also wanted to try some Negima expies. Here's the first.

EDIT:^Done! Thanks.
Again, will probably use. Might need a bit of editing for cannon-ism.

I will use her for nothing more than an example of why girls like her wouldn't last long in this setting.

May I? PLEASE?!

Okay here is a serious original Magical Girl
Better and likeable.

Yeah, he asked for it, but just grabbing lists of anime characters, turning them into girls, and then giving them vaguely related names feels more like you're just writing an obituary than anything else...
... I want to point out the funeral jokes but that might be taking it too deep.

@crystalwatcher There's no template for Divine Beings. Did I do okay?
They're all roughly the same template, just different numbers.

Might add a Divine Being Template later, but until then: mind if use I do?
 
(Unaligned) Magical Girl Shining Key

Aqua

Stats


Health: 750 (???)
Base Damage: 210 (???)
Base Resilience: 150 (???)
Magic Modifier: 400 (???)

Affinity: Librarian | Keyblade| Legend Maker (?) | ???
Weapon

Keyblade
Level 4
Attacks Per Turn: 3
Affinities: Magic | Librarian | ???
Ability: Juggernaut | Interceptor | Multi-Cast

Spells

Fire
Level 1
Base Damage: 75
Magic Modifier: 100
Affinity: Fire | Magic
Ability: Tracking | Burn

Blizzard
Level 1
Base Damage: 100
Magic Modifier: 100
Affinity: Ice | Magic
Ability: Freezing | Straight-Shot

Thunder
Level 1
Base Damage: 120
Magic Modifier: 100
Affinity: Lightning | Magic
Ability: AOE | Multi-Target

Cure
Level 1
Base Damage: -100
Magic Modifier: 100
Affinity: Healing | Magic
Ability: Single-Target

Abilities

Keyblade
???
Grant Magic affinity. Double outcome of all Magic Modifier Rolls on spells cast. Allows for Evolution of 3rd Affinity up to the level of Divine.

???:
Keyblade Armor
???
Armor that quintuples Resilience and protects user from any effects cause by Dark, Evil, Horror, etc. Affinity based magic. If said magic would cause damage, then redouble Resilience Score again for the purposes of Damage Calculation.




So... Kingdom Hearts is bullshit. *Shrug* At least she needs to grow into that Divine affinity, and that's going to take a while.

So... I use the Librarian affinity to show she can use multiple types of magic as long as their spells, am I right in thinking like that?
 
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