I agree that this should probably have been multiple rounds of negotiation. Given that it had to juggle multiple internal GDI factions trying to present a position for negotiating with NOD who also has multiple internal factions it was going to be hard to model with 1 vote.
I think what I would do would be to take this vote as the treasuries initial position and have at least another round of negotiation.
Well, the one thing that was missing from this as a "Treasury initial position" vote is that the diplomats never really coordinated with us on what we could offer Nod in terms of secondary stuff.
For example, suppose we do coordination with Nod on tiberium abatement. From Nod's point of view, that's a concession; GDI is doing something that will help them. From our point of view, we have to spend some Political Support to ramrod the proposal through because it involves dangling our people out in a dangerous place, and because it reduces the pressure on Nod. The question is,
how much help, and on what timetable? The scale of what can be done and what we say can be done would influence just how big a concession this is. Commitments might look something like "complete five phases of
Red Zone Containment Lines by the end of 2065," for instance, possibly with the agreement unlocking more phases of the Lines than ever existed before.
Likewise, there might be other promises we could make, such as straightforwardly giving Yao a pile of Food (how much Food?) ourselves. If Yao is the one who presently controls Taiwan, for instance, she might be quite willing to write the island off plain and simple in exchange for a continuous +10 Food humanitarian relief and guaranteed peacetime access corridors to 'down south.'
Now, maybe these issues don't merit a phase of the vote in their own right, and I know I keep harping on this, but... it kind of weirds me out that this
wasn't part of the overall dialogue. Because it's the one area where in a major diplomatic conference in a society where the Treasury
wasn't an overpowered super-department, you might still expect the diplomats to be consulting with economic advisors.
Then I'd tell us what points the diplomats were aiming for and explain any discrepancies between out position and the diplomats. That way we can see what items the rest of GDI is pushing for. I'd also probably give an indication of how strongly the different factions are pushing for things so we have some idea of how much PS we'd need to spend to oppose them. You might have to give numbers for how much the different factions are pushing for things. I'm not sure how much political pressure an expenditure of say 25 PS is so personally I would find it very difficult to accurately compare the number of PS the treasury is spending with a description of how much the other factions are weighing in on the negotiations.
That would make a lot of sense.
Also, at least with a politically competent Treasury Secretary like Seo, you'd expect us to have more than a vague sense of just how badly people want things and are willing to push for them. Or rather, Seo would get a sense of that during the
internal GDI negotiations over what platform to present during the
external negotiations.
The goal of this we be to let us see which items we haven't gotten due to GDI internal politics and which we haven't gotten due to NOD not accepting so we'd know where we'd have to apply our PS to get closer to the deal we want and whether the concessions Wed need to make to get them would be worth it.
If you want the PS cost to be high it might be worth spreading out the negotiations over multiple turns so we have an opportunity to spend dice to acquire more PS in between rounds of negotiation.
That makes sense.
Though ehhh, our PS budget is basically maxed out as is. We couldn't realistically make enough PS in a single turn to significantly expand what we
could, in theory, spend. So it makes little difference whether we're recouping our PS investment after the (one turn) conference is over, or continuing to generate it during. The only thing we can do to gain PS that fast, really, is slabs of
Interdepartmental Favors, which I suppose
would make sense.