Couple of points:
1. I'm generally pretty flexible regarding actions, as per previous exmaple like the Saptha stuff in Razor Hill in the first arc, I'm fine with combining actions for efficiency if there's a credible argument from voters. Currently you have several actions relating to Dalaran and the Kirin Tor. If you were in Dalaran to sort out the Violet Hold then you wouldn't need to take an additional action to negotiate the release of the forsaken. You wouldn't go there, then come back then go again, that would be silly.
2. Happy with the reception of the chapter so glad most people seem to have enjoyed it.
3. I've updated several of the sidestory posts which deal with military strength, character sheet etc. I need to do the quest summary one and the deeds one still.
And now onto the replies
Reading trough the interlude it actually shows that this is a very important turning point for Gork, now he have a very clear goal and no doubts, he also is not ignorant anymore wich is a boon.
Really I wonder with this new understanding of the Fel if he can't figure a variation of Soulfire that would allow the raw Fel to burn the demon bits away, not making it easier, hell if im reading it right would make it harder to control but making it not inherently corruptive. It would be big boon to the demonsword.
Indeed I'm glad it came off as significant. There was a danger of it feeling a bit flat but cool that it wasn't.
Re magic, lots of things are possible. Even if Grok has an academic understanding of the Fel, it's supposed to be sacrificial magic which is one reason he's never used it. I'm open to potentially him doing in future but you've also got an action to go learn about the light
A battle maniac from comics? Have to read up on this guy.
Tbh that's basically it, he's not a super complex guy in the comics.
I'm glad it was credible. I can understand why people have an issue sometimes just because of how I write stuff up, but I'll keep them in I expect.
Actually, come to think of it, the Orc Clan Numbers Informational only put the Burning Blade numbers at 8,000
I'll need to update it yea
I'm not really familiar enough with Warcraft lore to be certain, but Grok's been winning a lot more glory-covered victories than Rend has recently, which probably makes him a lot more appealing to at least a few Orcs.
They are indeed, so I'll probably need to roll to see if this provokes Rend in some way. Problem with him is also though that he's stuck doing garrison stuff and finds it difficult to project power meaningfully
Oh and of course he's also being mind controlled by a dragon and the Dark Horde being used as ablative armour to protect that dragonflight
I only just learned of Xerash Fireblade
Also Xerash is cool. Didn't even know Grok had a living grandad
Almost all the names characters are canon. Some of them are shifted about a bit or have slightly different names, but generally I draw from existing stuff or fit things in as necessary.
There's a few Fireblades about, like Arnak, who is probably Grok's uncle or cousin.
Despite this though there's very few women involved. Grok so far doesn't really have a mother for exmaple.
so I think that the orcs are living in nostalgia not fact. the orcs are not made for some grand purpose they have power and situations that lead them to be able to accomlise what they want. not to sure on this but some thoughts I had
very much so, but so are the Dwarves for exmaple given that their religion stems from Titan worship and their connection to the Earthen. It's nostalgia, it's a cultural history based on the past, but…
like the whole we were weak and frightened for so much of our history but see eventually we crushed these powers that were so above us clearly we are meant for greater
it's also a state building project which certain cultural figures use to unite their people. If the Hordes earliest people can represent the orcs as having a shared cultural legend for example they can be more effective in their stuff
Their society is still verry new and they still need to go past the point where streght of arms is the most valuable skill a orc can ever have.
This is also a problem yes, they have relatively little time as a cohesive society rather than merely a series of disconnected tribes
Grok has a pretty good academic understanding of the situation and can somewhat emphasize.
While I find it amusing sometimes to write ignorant or unreliable narrators, for this which is basically Feldad reading a wiki page, it is indeed useful not to have grok exclaiming 'oh wow I didn't know that' every few paragraphs.
d. I did not think we'd come out of this trying to look like a Legion agent. I knew we look that way to an outside observer, but thought Grok was oblivious to it and would be rather insulted at the idea. He couldn't muster deceit to save his life, and now look at his impersonation skills!
So while grok has always been aware that he needs to be a bit careful about such things, yes this is a circumstance where he's certainly finding it more difficult to honourably navigate. He's not going to go about winking at people and nudging them with his elbow, but yes he's certianly come to a more complex understanding of his situation.
Alas, this conversation didn't satisfy my immediate need for direction; instead it gave us a goal so big everything could be considered as moving towards i
If you need it, the main priorities currently are the Scourge and Rend externally, and managing the internal Alliance politics and the Alterac Horde's existence internally.
I understand the frustration with the size of the task, but I did want to give some general direction to the narrative.
For the moment the scourge are the immediate threat, then you've got Rend and the confrontation with him looming after that. But for now, just 'tidying up' is fine as the task of this arc.
It also follows Grok's general thoughts at the start of this arc. He's managed a lot in terms of diplomacy, so if he capitalised on that, much the better.
But what is happening that we must bail out Scarlets? The conflict won't see an end anytime soon, not in 1 turn, not in ten turns more. Next turn will bring in better rolls, and possibly better fortunes. I don't think it's so dire as to require our involvement. It's not decisive, and we already got more for our service than we can process.
You could certainly finish it in 10 turns, or less indeed. There are resurgent Scourge forces which need to be destroyed, and then you need to maybe go burn the Vrykul shipyards down in Howling Fjord. That would resolve the problem for now and allow Datheohan the time to prepare an expeditionary force. You can also negotiate for particular further rewards depending on what you'd like to do.
The situation generally is indeed much improved from before, but there's still stuff to be done and the Scourge have responded to the yours and Dathrohan's efforts with their own reactions