Covenant of the Force
I really approve of this one. Doesn't favor any particular style other than the fact we would remain separate parties united under a single banner. Seems the one that most orders could be coalesced, as all creeds have the chance to be accepted.
This sound a bit too spiritual in nature to me. Also, would harmony imply unity of creed in the sense that all orders and sects would become one?
That seems more applicable for the Abyss Walkers. Also it appears it's prime motive to be violent in nature.
I recommend not telling any more people of Mortis or what happened there.
Brotherhood of Bendu
Some sects may not be interested in associating with the Bendu, who were an ancient order of monks, or their ideals and philosophy.
May not want to establish to many ties to Ciaran. I imagine we want them to become their own thing.
Would we become pseudo-Jedi? Born of the wish to protect the lives of sentients all across known space from threats like Mngall-Mngall while securing our own assets? Coming together at the sign of a common threat? I like it.
 
...And back the drawing board. We really need to come up with a good name for that thing. (If only for this quest; I still need to brainstorm for my own quest down the road...)

Illuminati.

...Watch them be a real group who exist on Illum.

I had a few other suggestions for names, but they're all fairly crude and mostly exist so that someone can say "Welcome to the ____"
 
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While I'm around, I should probably comment on things shouldn't I?


As was famously said in the abridged anniversary movie: early Yu-gi-oh Duel Monsters was a broken, exploitable mess of a game. Lesee...I'm wondering if the inevitable conclusion of Card Games on Swoop Bikes would be a bit too silly. But then again I did canonize Space Curling...

Hm...

If it's all the same to you, I'm going to take a raincheck on declaring whether it's canonical or not while I see where you're going with this. Still have your sixtieth or whatever +10. (I have threadmark statistics now, holy shit man you have 55 marked omakes)


Love the banter here and I'm looking forward to where this is going. Canon, +10.

If we're going to master telekinetic combat, then we might as well commission some Funnels so we can be a Gundam. We've already got the beam sword so yeah, maybe some light beskar armor or try and find/make a set of either Revan's Robes or the Starforge Robes.

Look, if we're talking about using Funnels on foot at that point you'd basically be more along the lines of Nanoha Takamachi. Although to be fair, there's basically no difference between her and a Gundam to begin with soooo...

It's actually possible we added 7 omakes in this tally, depending on whether @Alex pears' list of lightsaber crystals should be considered omake-worthy.

Informative as it is it's not, unfortunately. As has been mentioned there's no real in-universe flavor in it for me to count it for a bonus.
 
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Informative as it is it's not, unfortunately. As has been mentioned there's no real in-universe flavor in it for me to count it for a bonus.
Eh, probably could fluff it up as a statement by someone on the various crystals (which given the current actions seems appropriate), but I fear I'd probably just get board.

I also don't know what you intend so it'd probably be non canon...

Ah, might try later, with pictures... zzz
 
If it's all the same to you, I'm going to take a raincheck on declaring whether it's canonical or not while I see where you're going with this. Still have your sixtieth or whatever +10. (I have threadmark statistics now, holy shit man you have 55 marked omakes)
... Nowhere near as bad as say, writing roughly 70 Omakes in a different quest, some of which being 10K in length/content.

But still, I almost envy you in a way, for having so many people willingly omake spam this quest, to the point where you had to put on brakes, to limited success...
 
If it's all the same to you, I'm going to take a raincheck on declaring whether it's canonical or not while I see where you're going with this. Still have your sixtieth or whatever +10. (I have threadmark statistics now, holy shit man you have 55 marked omakes)

That's not even counting the like 24 unmarked non-canon omakes.
 
Look, if we're talking about using Funnels on foot at that point you'd basically be more along the lines of Nanoha Takamachi. Although to be fair, there's basically no difference between her and a Gundam to begin with soooo...
Nanoha is gundam in a dress so yeah, no difference there. Though she didn't get Funnels until season three with the Blaster Bits for Raging Heart. She's also much more Wave Motion Spam than we can be due to technological limitations...

Though perhaps we can salvage some Rakatan tech to learn how to make Force-powered Wave Motion blasters.
 
... Nowhere near as bad as say, writing roughly 70 Omakes in a different quest, some of which being 10K in length/content.

But still, I almost envy you in a way, for having so many people willingly omake spam this quest, to the point where you had to put on brakes, to limited success...

*Remembers those Long Ass hell omakes*

...I know you said how you managed to do that, but I'm still trying to figure out how you get the free time for this sort of thing.
 
As was famously said in the abridged anniversary movie: early Yu-gi-oh Duel Monsters was a broken, exploitable mess of a game. Lesee...I'm wondering if the inevitable conclusion of Card Games on Swoop Bikes would be a bit too silly. But then again I did canonize Space Curling...
That was because the Duelist Kingdom arc was made before they had a card game. The manga was originally just about Yami competing in a variety of death games but focused on card games because the fans showed interest. The Duelist Kingdom arc was them making stuff up to keep interest while they had some game designer make an actual game that could function well.

Edit: Stuff up
 
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*Remembers those Long Ass hell omakes*

...I know you said how you managed to do that, but I'm still trying to figure out how you get the free time for this sort of thing.
... Frankly, one to many sacrificed nights I could have spent gaming, and vaguely 3~7 days if focused by 'burning passion' to polish the omake by 'seat of pants writing'.

But that's all off the top of my head, along with having vague if going THAT far, key 'event ideas' in mind on some/most of those omakes. But alas, in future I don't expect to have the time, or the ability to write/focus that much time on writing omakes, period.

... If nothing else, I suppose it was all a nice learning experience in writing, and all that. And hell knows if I did something like that on this quest, chances are... Now, if I'm THAT addicted to 10K's, I'd have probably thrown a sort of dunno? Shout out/cameo under a light assed guess on what Ciaren would have done on a Disgaea crossover opportunity?

But knowing my luck, it'd have likely ended with SEALS! And GTFO of that planet, likely, if not unleashing a Death Star likely... :p

*Angerly crosses out vaguely popping up notes, that'd have threatened the 'heavenly' AU of Star Wars.*
 
Eh, probably could fluff it up as a statement by someone on the various crystals (which given the current actions seems appropriate), but I fear I'd probably just get board.

I also don't know what you intend so it'd probably be non canon...

Ah, might try later, with pictures... zzz

It wouldn't be hard for me (or someone else) to find a way to spin it up and add some in-universe flavor (you've done most of the hard work already), if you're not opposed to that.
 
Just to be clear
What is Ciaran's view of the Jedi Order?
Despite her teasing, I would imagine that Ciaran does respect the Jedi Order considerably and realizes the Jedi are important for galactic peace?
 
From what I can tell, she thinks their sticks are too far up their asses, and that they've been on their high horse for too long, but ultimately doesn't view them as bad. They're just too rigid, restrictive and passive for her liking. She likes plenty of them on an individual basis, though. Anakin and Obi-Wan, of course, but really she's gotten along with most Jedi she's met.

However, she recognizes them as something of an obstacle. After killing Palpatine, even with major backing from the Senate after we install Bail or Seti or Padme as the new Chancellor, the Jedi are gonna want some real answers. Of course, the "we just saved you from extermination" line will be a good way to cut them off when needed, but the Jedi are still politically and culturally influential, and working around catching their ire is an annoying reality. Still, sidelining the Jedi is completely preferable to killing them off given that, when properly deployed and led, they can provide some real good for the galaxy. And genocide is bad, kids.
 
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