Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Demetrius Ceres and the young master
Demetrius Ceres and the young master

a/n
Skipping this Omake is not only acceptable, but it's actively encouraged.

It was my 200th birthday, and I was having a pleasant evening. On the table in front of me, I had a bottle of wine brewed by Magnus Centenius himself, together with a meal prepared by a wandering chef.

I knew people who would envy me for this, and sadly for them, they were too busy prepping for the trial. I had done my part, and since I had to avoid every Qi cultivator in the region due to the "rules," I may as well enjoy myself. I deserved it. I had killed everything needing killing in this region.

I relaxed my shoulders and enjoyed a sip of wine. I had obtained many memories as a Foundation Builder.

The first breath after the Tribulation. The feeling of moving my newly forged body after leaving the 12th stage. It had been incredible. The difference was like night and day.

The face of a Righteous Cultivator after presenting him with the heads of eight fallen foundation building "experts." They hadn't believed me at first, and I had to resort to the aggressive kind of negotiation to receive what I deserved.

The ruins of Sha Yu. The broken walls and destroyed land. The remains of a battlefield created by two angry gods. It had been a bastion of civilization, and now it was gone.

The teaching of Grand Elder Old Gold and the pain I had suffered. It had been an unrelenting agony, and I could still fill it in my soul, but the benefits had been worth it.

I looked at the pendant I had placed on the table. The Blood-Burst pendant. A trinket forged by smelting the blood of hundred beasts into metal. It was an art piece, and knowing its cost only made it more valuable.

A bell rang, and I felt a group of Cultivators appear behind me.

***

In front of me, there was a runt. He was a young, ambitious, and full of potential kind of runt. He was also a Qi Cultivator, which meant I could not bury him deep down in the sand as punishment for disrespecting my table.

How do I deal with this? Fighting was not an option, and any hostile action would not be possible. I could talk with him, but I had yet to master their tongue well enough to not make a fool of myself. Well, I had other options.

Once upon a time, a legionnaire had decided to write a manual on insult the invaders in their language. Within, you could find a chapter on how to mock them in sign language.

I moved my hands in the correct pattern and informed him that he was the son of an apple tree and a Naag. I had no idea what a Naag was, but that wasn't important.

The cultivator's face twisted as if I had hit him, and I could see blood start leaking out of his mouth. I could sense the sky lighting up in warning. It seems insulting them also was off the table.

I looked at the runt's minions. They had many valuables, and several of them could be considered valuable to me despite being in another realm. Such a shame I couldn't take it as payment for sparing their lives.

I would have to keep ignoring this gnat until the next bell rang. It was a waste of time, but I will not flee from someone so far beneath me.



A/N
I can't say I am satisfied with this, but I felt I needed to produce at least one text based Omake.
 
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Wei Feng 21 - At the Fearless line
The Fearless line

Weak

Objectively, he knows he is strong. Terrifyingly strong, for a qi condensation cultivator.

Useless

There are none in qi condensation who can match him, though with her new technique, Maria could come close. Yet his higher cultivation would still tell.

Pathetic

He could even make that rarest of claims, that he could truly fight across realms. Fight against early Foundation establishment as a Qi Condensation and not be crushed.

And yet

He could not stop the destruction around him.

He was cut down. And the mortals died even as he healed.

No matter how much he stood up.

Die, and heal.

No matter how much he fought.

Intercept a fang of qi with his right arm. Block a sword thrust with left. Regenerate.

Itchy Fang cut down his mortal charges all the same.

A giant qi construct in the form of a jackal's head with a snake's fangs flashed out. His flames burn at it even as it crushes him to death, but it still crunches on three wagons of mortals before his flames can spread far enough to dissipate the construct.

All he can do is stand up, and die. Again. And again. Buying miles with his life.

"Do you feel it? That itch beneath your skin. Like ants wiggling inside your bones? Does it hurt yet? Does it burn? Whatever technique or inheritance or bloodline you are using, you will come to know regret. Can you end it of your own will, I wonder? Or will you still live, even as you claw your own flesh from your bones in a desperate attempt to. make. it. stop."

But his life alone cannot buy them. And slowly, when he is too slow, when he dodges the wrong way, when the attacks are spread too wide or are too numerous to overcome, the number of refugees dwindles.

==

It takes many miles, and far too many lives for Itchy Fang to give up the chase. Perhaps he was concerned about running into more experts at foundation level having expended so much qi. Perhaps he feared another would feast on the remains of his victims, stretched out over so many miles. Perhaps he simply grew tired of the endless chase, when his quarry showed no sign of succumbing to his art.

All that mattered was that he was gone. Those that remained, the survivors, would live. Objectively, this was victory.

Yet, as he looked back across the remains of the caravan he had tried to protect, at the terrified faces of his charges, and the hollow, shattered trail of wagons left behind them, all Wei Feng could feel was that same impotent anger he had felt facing Itchy Fang.

There would be a reckoning for this.

Then he turned his back on the trail of the broken. He would see his remaining charges to the lines. Place them into another's charge. Then? Then he would test his Dao heart against the rage of Heaven.

It was time for him to step into the next realm.

==

On the back of a broken wagon in the middle of a ravine full of corpses, whole in body, but empty of Qi, Wei Feng meditates.

Overhead, dark clouds gather.

It is said that a heavenly tribulation is eight parts vital force to two parts killing intent. In the transition to Foundation building, the vital force serves to purify the burgeoning dao pillar the cultivator seeks to build. But the heavens bear a great deal of hate for the Golden Devils. For them, a tribulation is instead eight parts killing intent to two parts vital force.

On the fearless line, where tens of thousands of cultivators fight and die, tribulation clouds are never far from the horizon. Breakthroughs are regular occurrences, and from sheer experience, many could tell the strength of the cultivator attempting breakthrough by the density and colour of the clouds.

No one looking at the clouds above would have said this was tribulation targeting a qi condensation cultivator. At least, no-one who did not know how much Heaven abhorred those who dared to step beyond the ninth heavenstage. Combined with their hatred of the Golden Devil clan, it made for a truly terrifying sight. Many times stronger than a regular tribulation, and glowing with killing power.

Surrounded by a vital force intensification array, made to force the killing power of the heavenly lightning back into vital force, Wei Feng focuses.

What am I?

Am I a phoenix? Destined to die and rise again?

What am I?

Am I the boy, watching in horror as a cultivator beats his sister and denies his kinship to mere mortals?

What am I?

Am I the horrified adolescent, watching as a village is butchered? Watching as the survivors are obliterated, their fates irrelevant compared to the chance to destroy their butcher. Watching treasure burst forth from the earth, as heaven smiles down on the annihilator?
What am I?

Am I the wanderer? Enduring the mockery reserved for one who could barely reach the second heavenstage after over two decades of cultivation. Enduring the endless torture of the Cauldron. Who would sell the very clothes from my back to save another mortal life?

Who am I?

Am I the soldier at war? Reliant on cunning and stealth, knowing the legion cannot arrive in time to help?

Who am I?

Am I the Phoenix of Pleuron? Who entered as probably the most ordinary among the Thirteen and emerged broken, but Legend.

Who am I?

Am I the
cripple, searching desperately for a cure?
Am I the
playful senior, sporting with his comrades?
Am I the
teacher offering wisdom?
Am I the
uncle doting on his junior?

Who am I?


I am Wei Feng. I am all of them.

What do you believe?

I believe in Justice.

And the lightning rained down.

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Justice? Let us see.

The rage of the heavens arced through his body, electricity ravaging and tearing at his body even as the true power of the strike sought out the cracks in his spirit, hoping to shatter the newly forming pillar.

Show us justice.

It arced through his thoughts, its touch birthing demons of doubt to assail him.

The mortals cower beneath the wrath of the cultivator. An unloved and much maligned son of the village returned to repay all the slights and cruelties visited on him in his boyhood.

Show us.

A village, houses torn apart by something much larger and stronger than a human. Corpses litter the streets, torn apart and half eaten. A trail of bones stretches out to the east, scattered like rain.

Almost worse are the obvious signs of looting. This had been no beast attack. At least, not alone. Some beasts might care for one precious metal or another, but those that sought out such things to integrate into their bodies were oddly discerning. This had been a raid by the Abyssal Devil bees.

And he could not hope to catch up to them.


The lightning arced through his heart, seeking heart demons to awaken.

Show us.

A child clutched in his mother's arms. Both screaming as Itchy Fang's qi burrowed through their bodies. They die in agony and terror.


It struck his newly formed Dao Pillar.

Show us.

'Watch.'

The young cultivator, adrift in their own arrogance, suddenly begins to tremble as another presence overcomes his. He is sent for discipline. Chastened, he stands in the town square to apologise. It is clear he is only following the form of his punishment, he does not believe his own words.

Then to his decurion. Slowly, they draw out his history. They find the scars on his spirit and help them fade. Eventually, that young cultivator stands again in that town square. This time his apology is truly meant.


'See'

He could not hope to catch the ones who did this. But perhaps he didn't need to. Why else did the legions exist, if not to do what one cultivator alone could not. Drawing a talisman from his belt, he began composing a message giving his location and the heading of the Devil Bees. Minutes later, a paper crane leaps into the sky, flying far faster even than a devil bee.

Three months later, he receives the news that the raiding party he had reported had been intercepted and destroyed by a legion detachment.


'Know'

A great bird of fire immolates Itchy Fang.

Is this truly enough? This paltry understanding?


'No.'

'Oh?'

Lightning flared, purple and white crashing through into the Dao pillar itself-.

'It is a foundation. Nothing more'

-and dispersed, dancing about the pillar and reinforcing it.

You will fall, as so many others have.

'Then I will just have to rise again.'

==

He opened his eyes, and felt blinded. A storm of lightning was still raging around him, but no longer did he feel his own death approaching. Instead, the lightning was filled with vital energy, flowing into his new Dao pillar and back out again, flooding his body and refining it, elevating it with the power of his nascent dao.

Vital energy flooded out into his body, seeking flaws and impurities to wash away even as it strengthened him. Yet he had passed through the tenth heavenstage of body purification. There were no flaws to be found, and so instead of first expending itself to fix the flaws in his body, all the energy could go to improvement of the base.

His Dao pillar, now truly established, could contain far more qi than even his expanded Dantian. Power flooded into his Dantian and Pillar. Five times as much volume as he could have possibly contained as a qi condensation. Yet he had purified his qi in the great trial of the eleventh heavenstage, allowing him a much greater efficiency with his techniques. The purity of qi he had achieved did not leave him as he stepped into the Foundation building realm.
With these benefits alone, a cultivator stepping from the eleventh heavenstage into foundation building could fight equally against a 4th Pillar expert. But with his phoenix salamander constitution and his ability to call upon the true power of the phoenix and transform for an instant, he was far more than even that.

As a newly born First Pillar, he could stand against a great circle of Foundation building.

For a moment, he simply breathed. Exulting in the euphoric sensation of being so much more than he had been.

Then he looked to the west and moved.

==

Itchy Fang barely had time to scream as an enormous firebird engulfed him, rendering him to ash.



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AN: Feedback appreciated. Typo hunting later. I didn't have a big concluding fight with Itchy Fang because frankly, once Wei Feng ascended, he just wasn't strong enough to need one.
 
Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 65 - [Turn 7] [Conflict Resolution]
I think this is the first Antonius Omake I've done in a while, wow. Feeling lots of inspiration for this atm. Wanted to do more XY, but I'm getting bored of her and with the turn ending it feels better to turn attention here. I might come and edit this later when I have time so feedback is as always, welcome. Otherwise, enjoy!

Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 65
[Turn 7]
[Conflict Resolution]

Yahwen walked up to the weapon rack and paused, her hand hovered over a staff. She took a deep breath and shook her head, and reached for the sword instead. Her hand paused over it. Come on, Yahwen. You can do it. She took another breath and picked it up, swinging it out of habit before she stopped herself.

She sighed and shook her head, trying to focus. Wooden and lacking in weight but it was sturdy enough. It was also shaped like a jian instead of a gladius and she wondered who she would have to thank for that. Most of the other weapons here weren't ones she would have been as comfortable with.

Her eyes went over to the physician's assistant - Oriana - who gave her a small nod. She returned a hesitant smile before turning to Corvina who had her own battle-gear equipped - an over-garment woven from bronze that she could manipulate to be both armor and weapon, trinkets of grave-bronze with various functions she could activate as needed it and a new head-gear that the seer hadn't shown her before.

They exchanged looks and Yahwen found herself blinking at the intensity of her eyes. She gulped and turned away. I need to finish this quickly, she realised. Her heart beat faster in anticipation of a battle with a sword in hand. It almost felt like the Sword Qi in her blood was burning. She breathed once more, trying to temper her instincts.

She looked to their opponent seated on the other side of the sparring hall. Her eyes flashed over his body, knowing that - no. She shook her head to clear her thoughts. She couldn't afford any sympathy or distractions. She needed to think of him as an enemy right now. She settled into her battle stance and nodded.

Orina glanced from her to Corvina, then to the other side of the sparring ring. Then she raised her hand and she began to count - three seconds before her hand dropped, signalling the start of the battle. Yahwen only paid it half a moment's thought, instead her gaze focusing entirely on her foe. Before the physician's assistant could even finish counting the first number, Yahwen moved.

In one moment, the storm cloud wreathed her form and her thoughts were shrouded from her enemy. In the next moment, the winds touched her feet and pushed her back, lending her their agility. She moved low and cut through the air when it resisted her motion.

She needed to finish this quickly. Take advantage of the moment of surprise.

Unfortunately, he had expected it or had been able to react fast enough. He raised a single bronze hand in response and thrust it at her, palm first. A wave of water appeared between them, growing in volume as it rushed towards her fast enough to knock her off her feet.

Yahwen shifted her footwork and raised her sword to defend.
The winds twisted at her feet and the twisted gale escaped, pushing her to the side just before the wave struck her. She narrowly avoided his sudden defence, but it left her out of balance. Half-falling from the dodge, Yahwen leaned into it and turned the fall into a handstand that she used to flip forward into the air towards her opponent.

She bore down on her enemy on gale-force winds with her blade raised high overhead.

He raised his hand once more, fingers splaying outwards and summoned another wave in her path. She was close enough to nearly touch him and if she dodged the sudden wave, she'd leave herself open to his next attack. Instead, she moved her sword to her side and swung at the wave with the flat of her blade. With a roar akin to a clap of thunder, the water was smashed apart.

Fluidly, she turned the smashing motion into a cutting one.

The storm cloud surging around her leapt to her blade and wreathed it in lightning as she moved closer. The winds leapt to her back to push her forward as she held up the blade with both hands to bring it down upon him. Then she saw the look in his eyes - the quiet intensity born of bringing a plan to fruition.

Abruptly, her senses expanded and she felt the motion in her surroundings.

The wave she had smashed apart had dispersed from the force and she was now directly in the centre of the drops still floating around her. Then the open bronze palm closed into a fist and those drops rushed back together clinging to her and weighing her down. She forced herself to move even faster in the hopes of reaching him before they stopped her completely.

The lightning of her blade discharged into a bolt -

Blocked by a wave of water blooming in front of her -

She cut through it, trying to cover the last few inches she needed -

Then the water surged around her, growing in mass to cover her sword and all and holding her in place with sheer power. She held her breath as the water covered her face and he looked at her for a moment, before reaching for her sword, the water no obstacle for him. He was close enough to grab but try as she might, she couldn't move.

He casually pulled it from her grasp while she couldn't do anything. Yahwen struggled but she was helplessly caught, her storm snuffed out. He glanced away from her and his eyes widened. Corvina had likely taken advantage of her distraction.

With a wave of his hand, he sent her flying out of the bounds of the match and she found herself on the floor as an entire sandstorm bloomed above her. She couldn't bring herself to lift her head and watch the rest of the battle. She knew how each of them fought now and she knew it would end in the way she had hoped it wouldn't.

She sighed. Why do I feel so tired?

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Corvina winced as Yahwen looked away from her. I could stop this here… She took in a breath and then she let it out, pushing her doubts into the back of her mind to deal with after the battle. She looked at Oriana and nodded, signalling that she was ready for the battle. After a moment, the body cultivator began to count.

Corvina took a moment to center herself as the countdown began…

...and then Yahwen charged before even the first number was finished.

Corvina froze for a moment as her thoughts went awry and then instinctively, her hands went up to the prominent crest upon her headwrap. It was something she reached for many times since she had received it in exchange for the Navigator's Compass. Forged from the optical nerve of her late great-grandmother - it let her draw the three Aspects of the late Legate's Dao.

Three potentials expanded in her mind and she swiftly dismissed the Maiden. It would sempower her with the strength of youth and let her fight directly but she wasn't a direct brawler. As she saw Yahwen so easily slip past a wave of water, she knew she lacked the skill and experience to truly bring out it's full potential.

The Mother was dismissed next. It suited her better but it wasn't meant for battle but for command, drawing on the connection between the blood of bronze to coordinate an army. Then she made her choice and the Wisdom of the Crone flowed into her, sharpening her Sight and letting her see the battle with an understanding that she had never achieved before.

The world seemed to slow and become clearer as if a veil was lifted from her vision. She saw the entire hall clearly now, all at once. To the side, Oriana stood trying to impassively survey the battle. Perhaps before Corvina would have been fooled, but with the insight she could see the minute signs of stress on her and a complete lack of surprise at Yahwen ignoring the countdown.

She was on their side for this conflict… no, she was invested in their win. A part of Corvina grappled with that, trying to understand all the reasons and implications behind that but after a moment's consideration, she dismissed that line of thought. It didn't matter right now, all that mattered was the information that the referee was on their side.

The battle continued as her thoughts raced. She saw Yahwen smash past a second wave and even as her friend moved in for the metaphorical kill, Corvina spotted the drops of water in the air hovering unnaturally - if only for a moment - and she knew that even as her friend moved, she would fail.

She could see the twitch of readiness in his fingers and he knew that he already had a plan in mind for the swordswoman. She reached towards the treasure that could aid Yahwen's rush but found her hand moving slower than it should be - that was the downside, the Weakness of the Crone taking effect.

She shifted seamlessly to another treasure as Yahwen became caught in his trap, a ball of water that halted all movement. This treasure was the Sea-Drinking Pin, made from the remains of a legionnaire who had died of dehydration. His stomach had been smelted into an item that would absorb large amounts of water as soon as they came within its radius of effect.

She knew that he would recognise her treasure from prior use. He would know that it could negate at least one attack from him for certain, letting her get close enough to threaten him or even free Yahwen who he couldn't expect to be caught again. Immediately, he did what she had expected - he used his Sand-Spitting Marble to summon a sandstorm to obscure himself.

She smiled to herself as she held her hand up to shield her eyes. It was a test to see if she could predict him and it worked splendidly. With a thought, she summoned her Sand-Viewing Mirror and adjusted it carefully to catch him in it's reflection where the sands were no hindrance.

As she did so, her mind raced ahead to form a plan.

First, observe. Did he move or remain in place? Bluff or Double Bluff?

As expected, he had not even moved from his seat but he had tossed Yahwen aside - out-of-bounds for the purposes of the duel - and she could either attempt to attack him or try to catch Yahwen and ensure she stayed in battle. But that would leave her open for his attack and she knew he could see her clearly in the sandstorm.

Second, predict. He had three heavenly treasures, but would he use the third now?

Unaffected by the sandstorm that had covered the sparring room, he pulled out the Fishbone Flute. Could he even use it with one available hand? No matter, it would preoccupy him enough for her to move in close to defeat him.

Third, Act. Before the enemy could make their move.

As she had expected, he fumbled. Her mind mapped the movement she needed and her body burst into action, putting the plan into motion. Her hand touched the Wind-Thief's Ring - a storage ring formed from a tiny piece of a Nascent Soul Thief. Once a month, It could whisk her away to anywhere the wind was blowing.

Within this sandstorm, the wind was blowing everywhere. In a moment, her world blurred and she found herself behind him. One hand was on the Sea-Drinking Pin and as soon as she appeared, she felt the wetness of water drops as he attempted to summon a wave to stop her.

But it was ultimately futile. With his injuries, he couldn't hope to move away from her and with his only uninjured hand preoccupied, he couldn't summon a wave strong enough to inconvenience her. Any wetness in the air was gone, as the water was drunk away leaving only the dry winds of the sand-storm.

She drew the Jade Serpent's Knife - a paralytic and cure in one - and she struck him blindly, unable to see through the sandstorm. She felt it dig in deep and she relaxed, knowing that even a nick was enough poison to reach the heart and freeze his body.

But he didn't freeze.

She felt him move, bring the Fishbone Flute to his lips.

Then the Fishbone Flute's Dao-Shaking Melody filled the air.

Her mind struggled…extrapolating how this had happened. Finally she realised what had occurred - he'd blocked it with his injured hand, the hand that was still only mostly stitched to his body. It would slow down the spread of the poison for minutes - long enough to disable her and take the antidote from the hilt of the knife.

She would lose.

The first broken notes of the flute reached her ears as if the roaring winds of the sandstorm weren't even there. It was a song played by a novice using his non-dominant hand. She struggled to resist as her mind raced to understand what had happened. How couldn't she predict this?

Because I couldn't bear to think of the tragedy that hurt Antonius. Because I couldn't bear to consider what this battle truly meant to him.

She found herself falling to her knees, her hands flailing uselessly by her sides.

He's lost his mother and his father. He's lost nearly all chance of saving them because of his injuries. Now I want him to prove he can take care of himself? It was all my fault. Because I let him go through the Doorway first even though I was the Senior Sister.

She fell to her back, pushed down by the sandy winds. Her great insight told her about his terrible melody. But it also told her exactly why that melody was terrible.

Because I let him take my place. Because I couldn't save his arm and heal him.
Even though she told herself all the reasons for why this battle was important, they suddenly felt hollow.

She knew exactly why his melody was terrible.

Because it was all my fault.


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Once the sand-storm covered the sparring hall, Oriana found that she could no longer follow the battle. She covered her eyes with a hand to shield it and focused on her spiritual sense in order to understand what was going on - but it was difficult. The sand-storm seemed to dull the qi in the air, leaving her unable to feel her surroundings. She had no idea what was going on and she was left alone with her thoughts.

"Oriana!" Her captain called for her, catching up to her after an afternoon for squad training. "I heard you got into a fight with a mortal at the gates."

She blushed as she recalled the rumours that were already spreading. "No!" She said, before freezing as she realised she'd just raised her voice at a captain. "...sir, it wasn't a fight. I was just dealing with a kid who thought he could walk in here and demand to join the legion."

Rather than reprimand her, Captain Emmanuel looked sheepish. "I'm really sorry about that." He replied, sighing. "He was my son, Antonius. He's… had a difficult childhood."

She blinked. "That was your son, sir? She asked, surprised. "Isn't your wife a cultivator too? I would have thought he knew how to join."

He shook his head. "He's always wanted to be like us, but we raised him to be mortal. At least for a few decades." He explained. "You know… the trials."

Oriana nodded in understanding. "So this was him acting up? Trying to join without your permission?"

"No, he's not like that." Emmanuel defended. "It's… his bloodline. It's a mutation that seems to be killing him. He needed to be a cultivator or he would have died. We weren't sure what to do so he just tried to step up."

She blinked. "I'm sorry, sir." She replied, looking down despondently.

"It's fine," He said, waving it off with a smile. "Just look out for him, yeah? Just in case."

She blinked up at him and hastily nodded. "Of course, sir!"

It was akin to a genuine natural disaster near the qi-draining desert - and Antonius had simply spit it from his mouth. Just how far had he come from that brat she used to know? With a sigh, she drew out a pill designed to sharpen her spiritual vision and popped it into her mouth. Then the flute song played and she grimaced at the sound of the Fishbone Flute.

She had heard it when Antonius had first gotten it, but that had been an impromptu performance, not a battle like this one. It hadn't been dao-shaking then, simply a wonderful performance. Now, hearing it for the first time she felt her heart waver at the echoes of despair within the sound. She took a breath and centred herself, counting the moments for the pill to take effect.

"Captain Emmanuel and Auxiliary Eleanora were ambushed by a blood traitor." Those were the words that led to her rushing to the medic's tent. Someone of their clan betraying them for the lure of the blood path… how could they target someone like her captain?

But then they had come by such fortune, a cynical side of her remarked. Why wouldn't a villain be tempted? She prayed that they were alright as she rushed to the tent's entrance. "They are alive," A deep voice spoke, as if answering her question. She froze at the sound before relaxing at the words.

That was Legate Alcaeus and he was speaking to a familiar aura she knew belonged to Antonius, even if the power of the tenth heavenstage was as strange as ever. "But they are still unconscious." She heard him continue, dashing any hopes that she had. "Though they were also healed by your Life-Saving Treasure, the poison damaged them far more than it did you. I don't know if or when they will wake up."

Realising that if she stayed longer, it would be eavesdropping she turned and left. But she swore to herself then that she would find Antonius later and as her captain had asked, she would look out for him to the best of her ability.


To lose his parents so young and to then have their safety fall on his head, it was a terrible burden for someone so young. She had wanted to help him, she really did. Then the trials happened and her legion was decimated. She had to step up. She simply didn't have the time to look after one single legionnaire.

As the world became visible to her once more as she began to sense the battlefield. Corvina was on the ground, her aura thoroughly broken - did the flute affect her that badly? She was a seer, so she would be sensitive but she was usually strong enough that these things didn't matter. She turned and sought out Antonius, grimacing as he put the flute away. She noticed an aura of poisoned jade in his injured arm.

Xiao Yingzi had come back first from Qiguai and she had come alone. The first thing the girl did was find her. Oriana had been the one to recommend her to Antonius so of course the girl thought she had to report her progress. "Where are the others?" Oriana remembered herself asking. The girl had simply nodded at her question and launched into an incredible tale.

"...and so, I departed with Senior Corvina and Senior Yahwen heading inside in an attempt to find Brother Antonius and bring him back." She had finished.

"Why did you decide to leave?" Oriana asked, trying to keep her emotions under control. It wasn't her fault that Antonius was most likely dead, she told herself.

"I had achieved my objective and though regrettable, risking myself again did not seem like the optimal decision." She explained, only reminding Oriana how young she was. "Was that the wrong decision?"

Oriana shook her head. "No, it was.. Optimal." She replied. "Thank you for letting me know what happened. You may go."


She had been ready when they returned and she had herself assigned as their physician. Antonius had been in… terrible shape. It had taken him months merely to become aware and months more to acclimate to his new situation. The entire time he had burned with a quiet intensity that had scared her.

When he had decided to venture out again to find a cure for his parents while still badly wounded, Corvina had objected. She was likely motivated by her psychological trauma compounded by meeting a Nascent Soul, Oriana had her own concerns about Antonius' choice and had taken the opportunity to set a duel for them to convince each other.

She looked around for the other fighter - the swordswoman Yahwen but she was out of bounds. Oriana had just met the woman but she seemed incredibly skilled. That Antonius caught her so quickly wounded as he was… it truly put into perspective how far he had come. He was already beyond her.

She sighed as she raised her hand and Antonius nodded in understanding. "Antonius wins." She declared as the sandstorm began to clear. She wasn't entirely certain how to feel here. Captain Emmanuel, She found herself thinking. I have done all that I could. He's strong enough that his fate is his own, for both good and for ill.

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"Antonius wins."

Some part of him relaxed at that, but then he forced himself to focus. It wasn't over yet. As the sandstorm cleared, he drew out the jade serpent knife from his right hand. He winced at the echoes of pain but it wasn't healed enough that he felt more than phantom echoes. Pointing the hilt to his mouth with his left hand, he pulled out the end with his teeth and spit it away before ingesting the cure hidden inside.

As the grainy awareness of the sand disappeared entirely, he looked downto Corvina and flinched as he realised that she had passed out from the battle. He could see the remnant of tears coming down her closed eyes, mixed in with the sand from his sandstorm. It hurt seeing her like that. And he was the one who caused it.

He wanted to reach out to her and help her up but… He rose to his feet, pushing himself up from the chair he was sitting in. His body ached as the movement reminded him of injuries he couldn't remember getting. All of the period of time after the Doorway was a blur to him, darkness and a sense of motion before simply settling down.

He nearly lost his balance, still not used to the bronze replacements for his left big toe. Drawing upon the Silver Fin, he summoned a small amount of water in front of him. Too small for anyone to notice, but enough that no one noticed his lack of balance. He carefully knelt down next to Corvina, every movement deliberate.

First, he checked her pulse and breathed a sense of relief. He could sense her qi, but the strong flow of blood and qi under her skin reassured him. She moved at his touch and awoke. "Antonius." She said, moving away from him.

"Corvina." He replied, his face hardening as he took a step away.

She reached for her face and grimaced. "You won then." She replied, carefully wiping the tears and sands from her face with the sleeve of her overcoat. "Tell me," She said, her words turning sharp. "How does that feel?"

"The same as usual." He replied in the same tone. "Now that I've won and demonstrated my ability, I assume you don't have any objections to me leaving to find a cure for my comatose parents?"

She looked at him and winced, before looking away. "Do what you want." She replied, getting up. He stared at her for a moment as she struggled to her feet and then turned towards the entrance, not looking at him even once.

"I..." He hesitated and so did she, turning back to him. He suddenly realised he wasn't sure what he wanted to say. He swallowed and reached for the first thing that came to his mind. "Your Jade Serpent Knife." He said, holding it out. "You forgot it."

She looked down at it for a moment and then snatched it from his hands. "Thank you." She said curtly. Then she hesitated again. "Good luck," She whispered, so lightly that he might not have heard it. And then even lighter. "Sorry."

But he was in the tenth heavenstage and his hearing wasn't damaged. "Me too." He replied, nodding at her. "On both counts."

They regarded each other for a few moments, before she nodded and turned towards to physician's room. Antonius watched her go, with a strange sensation like this might be the last time he might ever be seeing her again.

"I'll go with her." Oriana's voice cut in behind him. Then a little more softly. "Don't worry, I'll take care of her. You go do what you need to do."

Antonius bowed his head at her. "Thank you, Senior Sister."

"So polite now." She noted, grinning at him though there was a touch of melancholy behind it. "Take care of yourself, yeah? I don't want old Manuel to wake up and come after me because I didn't take care of his kid."

He froze at the mention of his father's name before realising what she meant. "I will." He swore, nodding at her. "I will bring both my parents back and I will be there to see them wake up."

She studied him for a moment and Antonius found himself meeting her eyes, not wanting to look away. Finally, she sighed and nodded. Dismissing him, she turned towards Corvina and began to take care of the young woman.

Antonius stood there for a few minutes before turning to Yahwen, who was still on the ground but had pulled herself up and was holding a knee with the other leg extended. Her eyes were distant, mind lost in thought. Taking a breath, he held her sword and walked over to her.

"Hi." He said, not able to think of anything to say. She blinked and looked at him, studying him for a second but not responding to him in any manner. "Are you doing okay?"

She sighed. "How are you doing, Antonius?" She asked him. Then she looked past him to Corvina. "How is she doing? I'm fine. You guys are the ones I should be worried about."

"I'm fine too." He replied, even though he strictly wasn't. "Or at least, I will be." He glanced at Oriana who was picking up Corvina to carry her to bed and winced. "I didn't want to go that far."

"She wouldn't have." Yahwen remarked, looking back to him. "I don't think she knows what she's doing right now." She looked him right in the eye. "I don't think any of us do."

He felt himself step back at her expression and he willed himself to stay where he was. "We all do what we have to." He replied tightly, before relaxing a little. "I don't begrudge Corvina that." She just cocked her head and continued looking at him. Studying him like he was some arcane curiosity. "What?"

She just turned away. "You know, when Xiao Yingzi left us without even bothering to rescue you, I was so pissed." She replied. "How dare she abandon her friend?"

"Um." He blinked, unsure of what to make of the change in topic. "I don't begrudge her either? I'm glad you guys came and helped me, but if you wouldn't have... I can't say I'd have loved that decision but I would have accepted it."

"I guess I don't dislike her either. Not now, anyways." She said, shaking her head. She sighed again and leaned back, looking up at the ceiling. "I'm tired, Antonius."

He frowned as he considered that statement. "Tired in what sense?" He asked her.

She sat up straight and spread her hands. "I'm tired of this life." She replied, looking at him with strange fervent eyes. "I'm tired of this cultivator's life of struggle and struggle and even more struggle." At the end, she closed her eyes and turned her head up again. "Antonius, I'm just so tired."

"Then..." He said, hesitantly. "...why don't you rest?"

Her eyes snapped to his and then she nodded. "I need a break." She replied. "I really, really need a break."

"Ah." He replied, trying to think of anything else to say. "Any plans then?"

She looked at him and sighed again. "You were hoping I would come with you, weren't you?" She asked, looking at him suddenly torn.

"No," He lied, smiling brightly. "I mean if you want to come, that would be very reassuring but I'm planning to recruit people for expeditions anyway so I'll have people to watch my back."

She hesitated for a moment, studying his face before nodding firmly. "If you say so." She took a deep breath and let it out, giving him a sort of relaxed smile he didn't think he'd seen from her before. "I don't think I have any plans as such. I think I'll just take things as they come."

He nodded back. "I wish you the best of luck, Yahwen." He told her with a smile.

"You too." She replied, smiling back.

Antonius took a breath of his own and got up. "I'll see you later hopefully." He replied, waving at her. "I have work to do and I should probably do it before Corvina wakes up and tries to stop me again."

She gives him a light smile. "I'll be here, Antonius." She replied. "You don't have to worry."

Returning it for a moment, he turned around and walked away. It was nice talking to her. It made his heart feel light despite his pain. But as he struggled to walk, the pain returned and the lightness grew heavier with every step. By the time he left the sparring hall, there was no smile on his face, only grim resolve.
 
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Maria 36 - Maria and the Three Masters (Part Four)
Maria and the Three Masters (Part Four)
Maria Turn 10 Fifteenth Omake
144 E.K. (Era Konstantinos)
The Dawn Fortress.


The students file in, one after another, in as close to good legionary order as they can manage. The Centurion's stone-faced frown makes it clear how far that is from acceptable. Still. They're young yet. Given time, they'll get it. So they sit at their desks and wait, faces calm and attentive. Most have the earliest hints of the bronze showing through – the warm, dusky skin of the clan evident even under the thick layer of mortality still clinging to each of them.
Except for one.
That one has learnt already to sit at the back of the class. Her uniform is a sight to behold – bedraggled and poorly worn, cleaned roughly and with little skill. Instead of that dusky warmth, her skin is a flat corpse-white. She's not ostracized, exactly; her classmates seem comfortable enough to have her around. But she's different, and even here, different can be awkward.

The Centurion waits for her to settle, and closes the door.
They start with meditation, and group cultivation, as they always do. Then begins the lecture.
"Today's topic is the Reflected Purities technique," he says without preamble. There's a hushed susurrus of whispered excitement at that. There always is. He lets what could be charitably called a smile run across his face. "Yes, yes. I know. Exciting. Now shut up. We have a great deal to do and little time to do it in. Who knows how it works?"

A forest of hands shoot up. He picks at random.
"Thrake?"
"Uses closed meridian circuits to push qi through our bone marrow, veins and arteries to stimulate the Blood of Bronze, then magnifies the result with reactive sub-techniques to express it to a much higher degree than normal."
"Correct. And why is that important?"
"Helps strengthen the Blood and increases the chance of high-level natural expression."
"Good. Now, with that said, why don't we use it all the time? Hand down, Thrake."
He eyes the second forest and smiles a little.

"Nike?"
"The Reflected Purities technique is complicated. Its results are very powerful, and it must be accessible to early heavenstage cultivators. Thus, it is impossible to use with techniques outside of formations and some spear forms."
"Good woman. It's a very nice beginner technique, but that's all it is."

The pale one has raised her hands. The Centurion points at her.
"Maria."
"Why?"
His lips thin.
"Weren't you listening?"
"Was, but… why? Thought techniques could be fixed. Changed."
The Centurion pauses. It's a reasonable question.
"They can, but it's rare to see the Reflected Purities used much beyond, at the latest, fifth heavenstage. By then, the Blood has either started manifesting itself, which is usually better and requires no qi, or it hasn't, and there's other styles and techniques that don't require as much work to pull off."
Maria nods. He glances around the room, and sees only eager faces. Best to capitalize on that.
"Start with the reactives. They're the hard part."

The next four hours are telling. It's not an easy technique, but then, nothing ever is this early in training. Most of them get it, and sit gleaming in skins of bright, shimmering bronze by the end of the class. Others are close; the meridians need tightening, usually, or the amplification isn't quite aligned.
There's only one who fails completely, and it's poor Pale Maria. By hour four, she's a frustrated, slouching mess, her lotus position looking more like a knot tied with a particularly lumpy piece of string. The Centurion tries not to single her out, but it's no good. The other students are starting to give her side-eyed glances, muttering to each other and smothering laughs.
"It's not an easy technique," growls the Centurion. They shut up. It doesn't matter. Maria's slouching even further, now. He gives in.
"Dismissed. Out, all of you. Formation practice tomorrow. Maria, stay back."

When they're gone, she finally untangles herself and flops into a chair. Her mood is written in every motion. The Centurion winces.
"Look. I realise this is frustrating," he says, reaching for something, anything, to help. "You must remember they have advantages you don't. Most of them are from clan families. They started practicing much earlier than you did."
She nods, not looking at him. He sighs.
"Not everyone has to be good at everything, Aspirant. Don't take it personally."
---

171 E.K.
Song Empire
Contested Territory


Shu Cangquiong sat back, spitting in bitter frustration as the divination array burnt itself out. The forth one in two hours, after months – literal months! – of preparation. Everything she'd ever learnt, she'd had to use, just to glimpse some ridiculous childhood memory that was near the Dawn Fortress. Even THAT had required careful timing, figuring out when Heaven's influence would be strongest, spending the Karma she'd managed to snatch from battlefield kills, and more rituals of obeisance than she'd ever had to do in her life. Her knees were aching wrecks, by the end of it. And still – STILL – the damn arrays kept breaking. How the fuck had they warded that place so strongly? What God had some ancient devil felated?

"Not going well?"
She glanced across. Lung Slice raised a polite eyebrow at her as he worked his way through a plate of his namesake. They'd come from a Flood Dragon he'd caught. Apparently that made them gamier.
"No," she growled. "It keeps showing me some… bloody… schoolday memory."
"And that isn't helpful?"
She liked Lung Slice. It wasn't his fault he was an idiot. She reminded herself of this, and tried not to snap at him for talking with his mouth full.
"No. I'm looking for a weakness. Something I can exploit to put that bitch into the ground."
"Or my plate."
"I'm dissecting her first. When I'm done, you can have her."
Lung Slice nodded agreeably. "Of course. Getting away from dinner plans, what do you want to do?"
Shu Cangquiong sat back and considered. She should shepherd her resources, she knew that. Wait for a better moment. But she'd been playing it safe for a while now. Perhaps a change in tactics was what she needed.
"Attack," she said. "Heavy skirmishers, and a few scouts. Let's see if we can shake something loose."

---

"I hate this route."
"Really," said Maria, tone droll. Priscian nodded.
"Yes captain. I realise that might be news to you. I have, after all, only said it four hundred and thirty two times in your presence."
"I will admit, I don't listen to what you're saying very often."
"Probably for the best. But I thought, in this circumstance, I'd bring it up again, see if, perhaps, you thought it might be relevant."
"Thank you. Priscian?"
"Captain?"
"It's not. Shut up."
"Captain."
Draconis was subtly radiating disapproval. He didn't like it when she was informal with the squad. Well, screw it. She was in a good mood today. For all Priscian hated it, she enjoyed Wolf. It was one of the few not to have been completely deforested, and trees, even eleven years into the deployment, were still a novelty to her. Plus, you had to climb them to check the route properly. That was just fun.

Chance of a fight?

The Red Place had a hopeful tone to its voice. She sympathized. It had been a while since any proper engagements.
Maybe.
So no.
Well-
Damn it.

She smiled, despite herself.
Come on. Maybe we'll get lucky?
And then, of course, they did. It started with an explosion.

Maria yanked her shield up and fell back into position for Hoplite, the squad surging in around her to lock their shields. The synch came almost without thinking, years of practice pulling their qi-construct into existence with precise, certain motions. It dropped into a defensive stance immediately as the second blast hit.
They'd gotten lucky first time around, in hindsight. Whoever was firing those off was not screwing around. The Hoplite's shield hadn't quite cracked, but she could feel the dent beaten into it. Another hit like that might split it. She scanned around, looking for the attacker. Path of the blast meant…
There.
I see 'em.


Six of the bastards. All Altar, by the look of it. Gao had been taking losses left and right, lately – they were getting rarer in the ranks. Still, the lack of variation didn't seem to be hurting them much. There were eight of the bastards, and big lads too – their bodies swollen with muscle and their skins shifting and twitching from Blood path techniques.
Robes-Freely-Given, growled the Red Place. Defence-offence technique.
That the one where they grow tentacles?
With the victim's faces on them, yeah. Close fast, no grapples.
Fair. The big one in the middle, he's the ranged fighter, right?

The big one in question was glaring at the Hoplite. He rooted himself, leaned back, and inhaled. She watched wind and fire qi spiral down into his lungs.
I'd say so.
Start there then.


"Draconis, take lead," she muttered, and bolted forward out of formation. Her sergeant has stepped into her spot before she was even fully out of it, the Qi Projection shimmering briefly as her system came loose. Good to work with competent people.
The Alliance force was half a mile away – possibly a little further – and didn't look interested in closing. Not a bad strategy for fighting the clan; keep your distance, shoot a lot, and rely on speed for defence. Most Devils would be caught. But then, she wasn't most devils. Time to make that clear.

Her mind stilled, then roared as rage ran through it. The Red Place eagerly lunged forward, their thoughts unifying into that singular state of pure wrath that had come to characterize their new style. The weight of the heavy Bull-Dance Sleeves seemed to evaporate, nothing more now than her own skin and muscle.

She lunged. There was a few seconds of travelling, gone in a heartbeat. Then she was there, arms spread, hands clenched into fists, her mouth open and roaring as fire started to spark in thick, wavy curtains around her face and chest.

The big one's eyes widened. Something halfway between shock and fury sparked across his face. He twisted, trying to follow her, get off one good shot-

But he'd been too late moments before.

One steel-clad hand snapped out to wrap around his neck. There was a dull, meaty *squish* as she crushed it, watching it well up between her fingers. Another spark of horror – but he wasn't dead yet.

Turned.

Ripped the throat loose.

Flung it, underhanded, into the face of one of the other ones. She saw his skin starting to bubble like boiling water, something gaunt and human rising up from the depths of his body to press through.

Shooter's throat already starting to grow back. Fuck that. She cycled her qi and pushed it out in a wave. Fire burst into hungry life around her. Shrieks. Screams.

Weak.

Hands lash out. Crush skulls. Burn. Shooter's about to fire. Cute. Punch down, once, hard – stomach opens like wrapping paper coming off a present. Inside, wind and fire. Lean back. Watch it come pouring out.

Just so fucking weak.

She can't stop smiling, she realizes. She just can't.

The one behind her tries to close.

Fuck him. Elbow goes back. Head goes back. Turn into him as he's reeling backwards. Tear at him, tear tear tear tear tear.

BURN. Flames lick out white and blue. Pretty scorching fire making such pretty ashes.

No thoughts at all.

Heavy footsteps. Turn, grinning, laughing – the Hoplite.

Good boys. Good girls. So kind of them to be here.

And she pulled herself back. Felt like cold water running over her every inch, scouring her awake. She registered, at last, the dead. Six, by her count. She looked at Draconis as the squad broke out of the Hoplite already.
"You get one?"
"No."
He was looking at her strangely. She looked down.
"What? Something wrong?"
"Maria. You're panting."
"What?"
She blinked. Focused. He was right. Her cultivation should, by now, have calmed her breathing. So why—
When had she sat down?
She blinked.
She blinked.
She bli-
---

Thirty years as a healer had shaped Aesklepios, and not necessarily for the better. He'd started as a bright-eyed, fresh faced child of the clan, eager to save lives. Then he'd lived through two of the worst trials in recent memory. That had taken a lot of the shine off of life. He wouldn't have really called himself cynical, though, until he'd gotten to the Fearless Line.
There was very, very little that ruined even the real and obvious moral good of healing quite as successfully as hearing a Righteous Path cultivator tell you why they were better than you.

"I understand," he said, for the fifth time, "that you would do it differently if the patient was a member of your sect, but I promise you, the Blood of Bronze-"
"SILENCE! I will not hear one more word of your heretical Blood of Bronze!" Dedicate Grizzly had come to cultivation late in life. This, Aesklepios was sure, was why she could shriek so horrifically and somehow have made it to the eighth Heavenstage without being killed. It would be too much like shanking your own grandmother. "The Bear Enslavement Sect has mastered the arts of hibernation and flesh realignment! THAT is the only way to treat a patient! *CERTAINLY* not hammering bones back into place with a sledgehammer!"
"The patient had manifested Tin Bones, they have to be quite forcibly corrected-"
"THIS IS HOW A DEMON TREATS THE WOUNDED! AS A TARGET FOR UNWARRANTED ATTACK!"

Aesklepios closed his eyes, and made himself count to ten.
"Dedicate. Flesh realignment is not going to work."
"Oh? And you know so very much, do you? Infinite is your wisdom?"
He made himself smile.
"In this circumstance, I do know quite a bit, yes. But I think I can explain it without too much difficulty. Flesh realignment normally requires flesh, yes?"
"Your foolishness is not amusing."
"Flesh made of meat?"
"And now you descend-"
"The patient is made at least partially of bronze, dedicate."

That stopped her. The satisfaction was extreme.
"What?"
"His flesh. It is composed of bronze. At least, fourteen percent of it is. Possibly more; he's a Callista. Your flesh realignment techniques would I'm sure work perfectly well on the rest, but the resulting hemorrhage would presumably still kill him given you would have disemboweled him."
"I- I-"
"The bones, too, in his case, are metallic. As I stated before, that one is tin. Attempting any techniques on them would, thankfully, cause no further injury. Niether, however, would it do much good. Because it would do absolutely nothing. Are we beginning to understand each other?"
Dedicate Grizzly seemed to flutter for a moment, before drawing herself up like the pompous set of bagpipes she so clearly must have been in a previous life.
"I will not be spoken to in this manner! I expect an apology, Healer Kostamenthes, and I expect soon."
With that, she flounced away. As retreats went, he had to admit he'd seen worse.

The assistants, to a man kowtowing in total silence, looked up at him enquiringly.
"He's stable," said Aesklepios. "Keep him that way for half an hour to let regeneration begin. I'll straighten him out afterwards. Who's next?"
The eldest of the juniors rose, just enough to draw his attention.
"This humble one is happy to inform the honoured healer, blessed be his name and house-"
Aesklepios closed his eyes again. This time he made himself count to twenty. Why, he wondered, did other sects feel so honourbound, so obsessed to the point of mania, with having their juniors blow smoke up their arses? Respect and filial piety were all very well and good, but Gods, he could be having a glass of Ghostspice right now.
"-honoured among men, raised up by the Gods and favoured by all that is just, that his next patient is the virtuous and praiseworthy Captain Maria, blessed be her name and-"
"Yes, fine, yes. Injury?"
The junior paused.
"The Captain's injury is unspecified. Some form of unusual reaction after battle ended, the details of which this humble one is not able to attain. I offer-"
"Stop. Please. Just stop. Where is she?"
"…Tent number three?"
"Good."
He didn't so much leave as flee. Tent Three was on the other side of the fort's medical quarter, so at least that gave him an excuse. Gods, he missed the desert. He'd started fantasizing about aspirant healers giving him shit. At least they weren't afraid to have opinions.

The patient – Maria – was sitting up already by the time he got there, with the impatient look of a longterm cultivator and a career legionnaire. It translated to trouble every time he saw it.
"Lie down, Captain."
"I'm fine," she protested.
"Sure you are. Lie down."
"Sklep, come on, it was just-"
"Captain. You can lie down, or I can lie you down with the aid of a mallet and enough sleepweed to kill a scorpion. Pick one."
She glared. It was a good one – years of practice had gone into it, and the single eye concentrated the same amount of hostility into a *much* smaller space. But Aesklepios had been doing this since before she was born. In the end, the stone-faced, dead-eyed stare wore everyone down.
Two seconds. Three. With a grumble, she lay down. Victory.

"Now, what happened?"
"Nothing."
"Try again."
"Fucking – I don't know. Some Altars managed to get close enough to hit us. Didn't manage it. Squad went into formation, I closed in and handled them."
"All of them?"
"One got away."
"Okay. Go on."
"Then, after, I fell down."
He raised an eyebrow. She reddened.
"…You fell down."
"I- my sergeant, Draconis-"
"The only sane man in your whole damn squad, yes."
"Don't. Anyway, he said I was breathing weird, and I was, and then I kind of fell over."

Aesklepios felt his brain working as he considered that. It sounded like… but no. No, she was at the tenth heavenstage. That was ridiculous.
…Except she did use fire techniques, didn't she? In the Xin style. That low level stuff they taught outsiders sometimes. And she didn't hold still while she used it, either. Moved around a lot, did Maria. He frowned.
"That martial art of yours," he said, slowly. "The fancy one."
"The Black Bull's Dance."
"Whatever. Lot of movement?"
"…It's a martial art, Sklep."
"Answer the question."
"Yes, there's a lot of movement. Running, jumping, tearing-"
"Tearing."
"Yeah. It's not subtle. What, everyone has to be a soft stylist now?"
"Lie back."

He knew, as he began his checkup, that he had to be wrong. She wasn't the first unorthodox cultivator he'd treated. That didn't happen past gods-damn fifth. It was ridiculous. He was thus deeply, DEEPLY irritated to find that he was right.
Gods damnit. Gods damnit, how the hell had THAT happened?
"…Typical," he muttered. Maria shot him a quizzical look. "Is this spite? Because I don't think I've pissed you off enough to justify this."
"Is what spite?"
"So no, then. Gods. Okay. You're a fucking idiot, and also congratulations. You overheated."
---

The new headquarters were, quite frankly, a dive. There was no other word for it – or at least none Shu Cangquiong felt comfortable using. It had apparently once been some sort of courthouse, but those days were clearly over. Still. She supposed there was a roof. And these chairs were proving exceptionally useful for her work.

Even if she didn't know why she was doing it.
"I really don't see why you can't just eat him," she said testily. "I thought you had an art for taking experiences."
"I do," he answered, calmly. "However, given *you* want the memories in question, I'd rather you took them directly from him. With all due respect, you can rather direct about these matters."
She was tempted to reply, but given she'd just shot the tenth syringe full of truth serum into the survivor of the attack, she decided not to bother. Context was, after all, important.

The Altar skirmisher was pale and shivering by now. His eyes had rolled almost completely back into his head. It was time.
"Listen," she said, her voice taking on the sing-song lilt that worked best in this situation. "I need you to think about what you saw. Be careful, now. Don't forget anything."
There was an awful noise coming from his throat. Some hybrid of a groan and a scream.
"Shhh, shh shh. It's alright. Just… think."
His eyelids shut. Beneath the lids, she watches his pupils flicker.
Time for a dive. She places her hand on the divination diagram she'd tattooed onto his skull… and the impressions come, thick and fast. The battle. The violence. The escape (and the second-hand pain from his wounds, stinging with each moment). And then…
Runrunrun
Gonenowgoneprettyfar
Almostsafe
Solookbacklookbackandsee-
(the drugs scorch his brain's pathways with each moment, but flow thick deep into the memory, pulling out details and sharpening them to mirror-clearness)
The captain blinks. Collapses. Eye isn't focusing. Skin is flushed. Breathing is wrong. The sergeant's face tightens in alarm.


She pulled her hand away, surprised, without bothering to disconnect properly. The technique spasmed inside his head, burning everything it touched, until the contents of his skull boiled out of his ears, mouth, nose, eyes. Lung-Slice wrinkled his nose in distaste.
"Seems a little excessive."
"Hush."
Shu put her hands to her temples, trying to make sense of what she'd seen.
"She's overheating," she said, slowly. Lung-Slice's brow furrowed.
"…How?"
"Because of the techniques. That has to be it. She's throwing around Xin fire techniques; those are just her own qi with the fire element emphasized. Flexible as all hell, and very effective, but it's going to be cooking her body. That's why the sorcerers use those handseals. On its own, she'd be fine, but the Black Bull's Dance isn't exactly easy on the body either, and that's before you factor in the movement."
"Which matters why?"
"More body-heat. Aerobic exercise. Put it all together, even with her clan's charming little healing factor, eventually she'll cook herself from the inside out."

Lung-Slice, considering, sat back on his chair.
"…Now, that sounds like a weakness."
"Yes. Yes, it does."
Her mind was whirling with designs and plans. She needed the lab, right now.
"I'm all done with him, in any case. Enjoy your lunch."
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Letha kicked open the dormitory door like it had personally offended her, and hit Maria with a glare so hot it almost burnt a hole through her.
"Why am I finding this out second-hand?"
"Finding out what?"
"Don't. Don't you dare."
Maria groaned.
"Because this whole thing is fuckin' stupid! I was fine."
"You collapsed," snapped Letha. Maria blinked. Her friend hadn't lost her temper in the four decades Maria had known her. "In the FIELD. That is not, by any definition, fine."
"Leeth-"
"If it was one of your squad, what would you say?"
Maria closed her eyes, winced. There was no comeback to that.

Letha visibly forced herself to breathe.
"Overheating is not an uncommon issue," she said, briskly. "Granted, at your level it's unusual, but we can at least start working out a solution."
"Who told you, anyway?"
"I work for Tactical, and I went to Alexandria Angelus's hen night. Everybody told me. Now. The problem are your fire techniques, yes?"
"Gods, don't I get any privacy?"
"We can therefore see about developing some low level heat-sinks-"
"It's not just the fuckin' fire techniques. The Bull Dance isn't helping."
Letha paused.
"Why?"
"Body heat. Something about wear and tear too. Fuck, I don't *know*, Letha. This is-"

"Hush."
Letha stared into the distance, thinking. Then, after a moment, she nodded sharply.
"Alright. We'll have to try something a little more drastic. How's your Reflected Purities?"
Maria felt her jaw set.
"Leeth."
"We'd have to hack it," mused her friend. "Alter the meridian flows. Then again, at your heavenstage you won't need it to reflect as strongly."
"Leeth."
"Honestly most of it's going to be countering the loss of speed-"
"LEETH."

Pause.
"Stop, now," growled Maria.
Poking her fucking nose where it isn't welcome, little fool, little BITCH-
She hadn't felt the Red Place like this for a long while. It must have been showing, too, because the anger drained out of Leetha quickly, and she took an uncertain step backwards.
"Realise," muttered Maria, "that you're trying to help. But stop."
"…I- you seem-"
"This. Was all. A fuss. Over nothing. Alright? The healer lost his shit because that's what healers do. As is, he's got me confined to bedrest for a day and a half. That's training time lost. Fuck, that's cultivation time lost. Don't need you henpecking me."
"That wasn't what-"
"Just – would you ever go away? Please? Pissed off enough as it is."
There was a long, uncomfortable silence. She saw her friend withdraw behind a wall of courtesy.
"Of course, captain."
She bowed a little, and left.
---

This is the first half of the last part of this series. Needed to find a natural breakpoint for the next one to show time passing. Nike refers to the Nike family that @DangerKitty 's old good seed, Ambrus, was from. Alexandria (who's hen night Letha went to) is @Juugo 's Zeno Angelus's wife. Ghostspice, also known as Te Qui La, is a drink first mentioned by @Mochinator in a Jin Muyi omake a while back - I figure it's been adopted as drink of choice by the Second Scorpions, especially considering it's one of the few alcoholic drinks in the desert that @LordEdric 's Magnus Centenius didn't invent. Finally, Aesklepios got invented wholecloth after a conversation I had with @Garlak on the Discord about Golden Devil healers. Anyway. @TehChron @ReaderOfFate @Kaboomatic may I have a threadmark please?
 
Good Seed Report Pt 1 - Going into the Trials with no omake? That's a bold move, Cotton. Let's see if it pays off for them.
Achille Adephos
Fate: Even Achille was not immune to Aasmi. One of the Indomitable Thirteen, nearly killed in a moment. Furious at the constant interruptions, Aasmi summoned a partial manifestation of her Star, scorching the earth around her, and nearly killing Achille before the gates of abandoned Pleuron. He escaped through use of a treasure, but only just.
Impact: 6 (+0)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment 2-Pillar
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 140 (+0)
Health: Healthy --> Dead --> Badly Wounded (LST Interrupt) --> Wounded (End of Turn)

Alastor Cheimos
Fate: Aasmi tore through the Foundation cultivators like paper, chasing Rina Callista. The other woman was unfortunate - never intending to flee towards her fellow cultivators, yet managing to come on them time and time again. Alastor almost died, and only the use of a treasure saved him.
Impact: 0 (+0)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment 1-Pillar
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 100 (+0)
Health: Healthy --> Dead --> Badly Wounded (LST Interrupt) --> Wounded (End of Turn)

Anastasia Outi
Fate: Anastasia like some many others suffered at the hands of Aasmi Bhardjav. The other woman merely looked at her, igniting her acupoints and sending fire down her meridians, nearly killing her. She managed to save herself, but was wounded and had to drag herself into hiding.
Impact: 1 (+0)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment 1-Pillar
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 100 (+0)
Health: Healthy --> Crippled --> Wounded (LST Interrupt) --> Lightly Wounded (End of Turn)

Aurelius Mancinus
Fate: Aurelius died, trying to save a young man he had befriended, another First Heavenstage cultivator. He died in moments, thankfully not seeing the death of his friend before he passed.
Impact: 0 (+0)
Cultivation: Dead
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 22 (+0)
Health: Crippled --> Dead

Daedalus Khimaira
Fate: Daedalus nearly died, hunted by a furious Fire Tortoise seeking goatmen. Saving himself with a treasure, he was then wounded by Trial Hunters, compounding bad to worse.
Impact: 3 (+0)
Cultivation: 10th Heavenstage
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 141 (+3)
Health: Healthy --> Crippled --> Wounded (LST Interrupt) --> Lightly Wounded (End of Turn)

Eirene of Nowhere
Fate: Eirene meditated on her Dao, seeking to break through. She was a very long time away, and shattered the tokens of many who sought her out to slay her. Still... ascension was so far away. Would she ever reach it?
Impact: 12 (+0)
Cultivation: 12th Heavenstage (12 turns from FB)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 209 (+0)
Health: Wounded --> Lightly Wounded

Jiang Chrysanthos/Chrys
Fate: Chrys managed to heal some more, and spent his time hidden away with a small tribe of goatmen who had migrated north. Fending off the advances of one particularly randy goatman, he made friends with several and saved them from a Fire Tortoise in return for their aid.
Impact: 1 (+0)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment 1-Pillar
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 100 (+0)
Health: Wounded --> Lightly Wounded

Juturna Cerintha
Fate: Juturna healed, most of her wounds melting away. In the Trials she was hunted, but escaped through paying a mortal boy to show her a secret pass through a nearby set of hills.
Impact: 1 (+0)
Cultivation: 10th Heavenstage
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 120 (+3)
Health: Wounded --> Lightly Wounded

Lihua Kokkinos
Fate: Lihua Kokkinos saw Rina Callista fleeing. With her newfound Foundation Establishment power, Lihua sought to help. A single motion batted her away, consuming a defensive treasure and leaving her near-dead. Only the intervention of Jin Muyi a few days later saved her from a wandering band of Trial Hunters.
Impact: 6 (+0)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment 1-Pillar
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 100 (+0)
Health: Healthy --> Crippled --> Wounded (LST Interrupt) --> Lightly Wounded (End of Turn)

Matthaias Outi
Fate: Matthaias Outi managed to master the Brief Winged Dash Art (+1 Impact), a transformation movement art that allowed one to dash quickly by gaining powerful wings for a moment. Using it, he escaped hunters with ease.
Impact: 9 (+1)
Cultivation: 10th Heavenstage
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 118 (+7)
Health: Healthy --> Healthy

Mildgyð Galene
Fate: Mildgyo snuck into an enemy camp, stealing a Three-Gem Fruit (+10 cultivation-years). He snuck out easily, as well, avoiding enemies for most of the Trials.
Impact: 5 (+0)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment True 1-Pillar (Fortified Pillar)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 127 (+27)
Health: Healthy --> Healthy

Mograine (Leon12431)
Fate: Mograine was badly hurt, and entered a Dao-contest with a Qi Condensation cultivator from the Fifth Sea. He lost, however, his will shaken and almost died in the aftermath, a treasure saving his life.
Impact: 9 (+0)
Cultivation: 10th Heavenstage
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 134 (+0)
Health: Healthy --> Badly Wounded --> Lightly Wounded (LST Interrupt) --> Healthy (End of turn)

Orphanos
Fate: Orphanos was the second Foundation cultivator to fall to Aasmi Bhardjav. The woman merely raised a hand - he challenged her to fight, and she scoffed at him. Her finger pointed at him, and scorching light scored through his heart, killing him instantly. She turned again to her hunt.
Impact: 6 (+0)
Cultivation: Dead
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 100 (+0)
Health: Crippled --> Dead

Peta and Wajo
Fate: Peta died of old age a few years before the Trials, her lifespan giving out. Her devoted bear, Wajo, wandered off into the wilderness, never to be seen again.
Impact: 4 (+0)
Cultivation: 12th Heavenstage (4 turns from FB)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 220 (+0)
Health: Healthy --> Dead

Shennong
Fate: Peculiarly, Shennong had no problems in the Trials. Assigned to a small village, no Hunters ever came, despite his worries.
Impact: 2 (+0)
Cultivation: 10th Heavenstage
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 139 (+18)
Health: Healthy --> Healthy

Shiro
Fate: Three of Aasmi's coterie faced him down, butchering him in instants. His life ended in moments.
Impact: 0 (+0)
Cultivation: Dead
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 114 (+0)
Health: Lightly Wounded --> Dead

Simon Euaerizo
Fate: Simon was lucky. The death of many of his clansmen meant he managed to recover the storage ring off a dead Elder, containing much wealth. While he returned most of it, an Ascension Stride Herb (+40 cultivation-years) let him break through several small realms.
Impact: 4 (+0)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment 3-Pillar (Mid)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 162 (+62)
Health: Healthy --> Healthy

Su Cheng
Fate: Su Cheng saw Aasmi for but a moment. Then there was blinding light, and then? Nothing. A bump in the road the Heavenly Star cultivator walked in her pursuit of her Unorthodox enemy.
Impact: 0 (+0)
Cultivation: Dead
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 100 (+0)
Health: Crippled --> Dead

Tasos Basilakes
Fate: Tasos had advanced only a little since the last Trials. Three women following Aasmi Bhardjav attacked him, and he managed to escape only through the use of his last lifesaving treasure.
Impact: 10 (+0)
Cultivation: 12th Heavenstage (6 turns to FB)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 209 (+0)
Health: Healthy --> Wounded --> Healthy (LST Interrupt)

Tharros Ateleioti
Fate: Aasmi of the Bhardvaj did not hunt Tharros. She merely swept him aside with a lazy blow while hunting down Rina Callista. A single strike and he was left for dead, the use of a protective treasure saving him, but leaving him desperately wounded for years to come.
Impact: 6 (+0)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment 1-Pillar
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 100 (+0)
Health: Healthy --> Dead --> Badly Wounded (LST Interrupt) --> Wounded (End of Turn)

Theoron Strophios
Fate: Theron was with Vitruvian. Failing to save him against a woman who moved like lightning, he fled. Hunted like an animal for a week, only the use of a treasure saved his leg - and his life. He hid in a cave for the remainder of the trials, weak, and barely able to move.
Impact: 3 (+0)
Cultivation: 10th Heavenstage (2 turns to FB)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 111 (+0)
Health: Healthy --> Crippled --> Wounded (LST Interrupt_ --> Lightly Wounded (End of Turn)

Vitruvian Anasc
Fate: Vitruvian was one of the first casualties of the Hundred-Year Trials. Crippled, unable to move all that far, and slow, he was hunted down ignomiously within days.
Impact: 0 (+0)
Cultivation: Dead
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 48 (+0)
Health: Crippled --> Dead
 
I'll Make Devils Out of You
I hereby present, made in collaboration with Mochinator,

I'll Make Devils Out of You



Let's get down to business
To survive the Trials
Did they send me mortals
instead of 'spirants?

You're the saddest bunch I ever met
But you can bet before we're through
Clansmen, I'll make devils out of you

Tranquil as the desert
with scorpions hiding
Once you find your dao
You are sure to win

You're a spineless, bronzed, pathetic lot
And you haven't got a clue
Somehow I'll make devils out of you

I'm never gonna catch my breath!
Say bye to my cultivation!
Boy, was I a fool for skipping formations

This guy got 'em scared to death!
Hope he doesn't see my treasure!
Now I wish that I knew how to make pills!

(For the Clan)
To be as swift as the charging Katopractoi,
(For the Clan)
To be as firm as the Steadfast Hoplite
(For the Clan)
To flee with the aid of the Twin Head Eagle
Mysterious as the Shadow of Heaven

Time is racing toward us
'Til the trials arrive
Recall your training
And you might survive

You're ain't surviving the dreaded trials
So pack up, go hide, you're doomed
How could I make a devil out of you?

You must be swift as the Twin Head Eagle
(For the Clan)
With all the force of a Steadfast Hoplite
(For the Clan)
With all the strength of your trusted Legion!
Mysterious as the Shadow of Heaven

You must be swift as the Twin Head Eagle
(For the Clan)
With all the force of a Steadfast Hoplite
(For the Clan)
With all the strength of your trusted Legion!
Mysterious as the Shadow of Heaven!

HIYAH!
 
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Aretaphila Myia 12 - Solo Act
Aretaphila Myia
Solo Act

Three shards.

That was all that was left of the wondrous treasure gifted to her by that awkward, young chieftain…Years ago, now. Three jagged pieces of broken Scrying Mirror remained in her worn pouch, patched endlessly with the poorly treated leather of the Qi Condensation beasts the young woman had been able to slay.

Much like those who had given her shelter had, in turn, been slain.

This was the fifth village now, the cultivator reminded herself. The fifth bastion she had set against the hungering, barbed notes that flit about the desert winds, seeking her own qi. An endless, incessant note that trilled in search of what she knew to be her own constitution. A personalized demonic tune, growing more and more resonant with the refinement of practice.

Yet, Aretaphila Myia frowned through the pains of cultivation, she too had been tempering herself in the face of this trial.

The Golden Devils, those who possessed the Blood of Bronze, were in many ways peerless body cultivators as a general rule. Their constitution of living bronze being the ill-disguised envy of all who practiced aesthetically similar ways of cultivation. For those among the clan born with strong enough concentrations of the Blood, refinement of it was the surest path to power even with the enhanced ire cast upon them by the Heavens.

Indeed, Rina Callista was one who had been considered an elite and immense potential off the concentration of her blood alone, the girl famous even now despite joining the Legions a mere 40 years hence.

It was for this reason that, unlike most others who necessitated the infusion of foreign qi into the dantian to advance their power, a sufficiently pure possessor of the Blood had-if not alternatives-options for the increase of might in the event that they were short on funds to progress the advancement of their cultivation base. The tempering of the Blood was akin to the cultivation of Intent, in that way. A strength wholly separate from the dantian, one's body and will could accomplish much that qi alone could not. In the case of the Clan, this was not limited merely to the enhancement of base physical capability, but also resonance with the Clan's cherished Formation arts. The purer the blood, the swifter the Kataphractoi, the louder the Aquila, and the mightier the Hoplite.

...Unfortunately, this was less so with the many divergent mutations of the Blood that existed among the Clans number. The mutability of physiques lending themselves well to the cultivation of specialities in exchange for giving up some of the benefits that the rest of the Clan benefited from. The strength of the broad and shallow sea versus the deep and narrow well.

The Myia were of the latter sort, the Clear Summer Bell Constitution sacrificing much of the Blood's strengths for peerless notes which carried the emanations of their techniques through countless li, faster and further than the senses of the Optimatoi's rivals had ever been capable of. Compared to the tempering of the Blood whom most of Aretaphila's clansmen could exercise, even on as anemic the environmental qi as the Organ Meat Desert offered...The Myia practiced sounding, the direct forging and carving and shaping of the body into ever more efficient forms. Relying upon external qi to temper and enhance their inherent constitution to produce ever more crisp, more beautiful notes to approach their families true potential.

A slow, expensive, laborious process. And one of many causes for the Myia's eventual decline; after all, when their corpses are so prized and the refinement of the body only serves to attract the predations of the strong, what other result could there be? To be hunted unceasingly, and replenished ever so slowly. Unlike the Blood, the Constitution was something that one could only inherit by birth, not be infused at something so menial as base stratavarton.

Ordinarily, at least.

The hammer hit the gong, and the wave of raw sound struck Aretaphila's body. The force of it sinking deeply into her bones, breaking and softening her physique under powerful vibrations, each strike reverberating within the Myia's body before being released into a new note. One adapted towards the hunting claws of the Devil's Music which hunted her across the sands even now.

As Aretaphila's mind sank deeply into meditation-painstakingly carving off and reshaping her own body under the forces the gong brought forth-her thoughts turned towards the first portion of the scroll that had accompanied the Fish-Scale Gong.

The first mistake those who step upon the road of Immortality make is not something so esoteric as one's purpose, or the nature of the Dao, or any other high minded ideals. It is something far more fundamental; that what they were before awakening and what they were after are to be something fundamentally different. The first lesson is that this is a misconception: We are all of the Dao, and as the Dao is Myriad and Infinite, so too are its shapes and emanations. From the grandest immortal to the smallest speck making up the smallest grain of sand within the corpse-desert of the Turtle Child.

Qi is merely the most elementary form of the Dao, and so too is it the most elementary block upon which the world is built. That which affects the Dao, affects the world. That which affects the World, affects the Dao. As one ascends the path towards Immortality, this does not change. Merely the nature of strength applying, and in turn the thresholds necessary to bring about those effects.

This brings us to the second mistake: The assumption that the Qi infused fist is unalterably superior to the one bereft of that energy. That by virtue of cultivation, one's stage of advancement determines strength. This, too, is false. Thus the second lesson: The stronger fist is the one that hits harder, and thus is indistinguishable from one infused with Qi. It is for this reason that the cultivation of the Body is inherently superior to the cultivation of Sorcery. For though the Sorcery is closer to the truth of the world, through the manipulation of its laws and emanations, the cultivation of the Body is one which acknowledges and embraces the simplicity of strength. Through strength is the Dao advanced. As the Dao is advanced, the gap between sorcery and base strength vanishes into nothingness.

Though Sorcerers attempt to embrace the Dao to the neglect of the body, they still manage to tap into the Dao of the world's laws for power. A shortcut, but not one wholly without merit. The Sorceror's methods are clumsy. Unfocused, save on the spectacle. Restrictive towards the expression of the Dao rather than the Dao itself. To wrest Qi with one's own Qi, and affect change to affect change is as inefficient as it is to describe, make no mistake! It is like the playing of a child, crudely smacking together two blocks to create sound.

Yes. Sound.

Demonic Tunists are the closest I have found. The manipulation of sound to weave Qi into their own kinds of sorcery, charging past the brittleness of sorcerous emanations to instead shape the Dao of the world directly. At the lowest levels of Cultivation, they are the gatekeepers to the only true method of creating Soul affecting arts. At Qi condensation, the precursor to Dao-affecting techniques.

Which brings us to the third mistake: That Cultivation of the Body is inherently superior. This is mistaken. Though the cultivation of the body is indeed superior to Sorcerous techniques, this is less to due with the efficacy of Body Cultivation, and entirely to the lack of it possessed by Sorcery. Thus the third lesson: Alone amongst cultivation methods, it is Demonic Tunists which come closest to grasping the Dao of the world. Though this is not without cost, for a Demonic Tunist must expend considerable effort to match the strength of another cultivator, even a Sorcerous one, in pitched battle. But should they manage to assert their techniques in their full power, there is little doubt that the less developed Dao of their peers will falter and crumble before their insight.

Why Demonic Tunists? What enables them to succeed where the Sorceries fail so miserably?

It is sound. That which we hear is not truly audible, but merely how one's senses interpret the movement of Qi as the world moves around us. For sound is not sound as is typically understood. It is movement. Vibration. If Qi is the fundamental building block of the World's Dao, then it is sound which is the principle manipulator of that Qi. And alone amongst Cultivators, Demonic Tunists are masters of that technique.


-Musings on the Efficacy of Vibrational Frequencies Upon the World-Dao, Preliminary Draft First Chapter
Author Unknown

Sounding was an arduous process even ordinarily. Though using Qi to soften the body and make it more malleable for the process had been, if not pleasant, at least less excruciating. But here, in order to get closer to understanding just how these vibrations the scroll described, Aretaphila continued hammering away. The amplified sound waves slamming directly into her body, softening and tempering her Clear Summer Bell's Constitution, the bell-bronze making up her physique becoming ever more pliant under its ministrations. The echoes of sound traveling through her skin, shaking even her bones into pliability before echoing within the Myia's core and reshaped into her protective aegis.Shoulder Smoothing was a stage of refinement normally not seen amongst the Family before the threshold of breaking through to Foundation Establishment, but even while Aretaphila desperately struggled to maintain the 4th Heavenstage, she found advancing her physique along with the Gong to be a simple matter.

Hit the gong.

Feel the flesh and bones be struck, softened.

Take in the note, sound the bell.

Release the song, and buy another minute, another second to grow stronger and remain hidden.

Ignore the pain, and spend every second buying just enough time to eat. Time enough to sleep. Time enough to accumulate resources in preparation for the day of her return.

No time for pain. No time for loneliness. Her lot was horrific and unfair beyond reason, but Aretaphila could not give up. Not now. Not ever.

Hit the gong.

And in such a manner, days and villages passed, the shards of scrying mirror shrinking from three, to two, and then to one as blood stained the sands of the Scarred Lands each time she had not been strong enough.

Hit the gong.

Even so
.

Even so, she would live on.

A.N.: And with that, first omake of the turn doneso. Still need to do a reaction to the lecturing and then that collab i wanted to do with Alectai let's gooooooooooooooo. Right, Tribulation Boost for this one. Let's call it an Inheritence from her family, a Thundrous Pacifying Note, only effective at the level of the first tribulation to be sure, but a secret technique passed down by the Myia for generations for those whose physique are developed enough to support singing it?
 
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Okay, so I'm very dumb, so could someone remind me who Aasmi is again? Or is she a high level cultivator coming from trial-lands that have yet to be introduced?
 
Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 66 - First Sea Omake 4: Hello John
Not entirely sure about this one, but hopefully it turned out well. Please enjoy.

Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 66
[First Sea Omake 4]
[Hello John]

Hello John,

You may be wondering what I've been up to since I disappeared on you so many decades ago. I was following the trail of our former classmate, Moriarty and to do so… I needed to do something particularly heinous. I had to finally give in and join Aberforth in becoming one of the Queen's Dogs. Yes, I do mean Queen and not Empress. The things I found in those archives would blow your mind - literally in some cases so I won't go further down this tangent.

The reason I am writing to you is to summon you to my side. I have urgent need of your expertise in medicine and warfare. I am a genius and a scholar of many fields, but in those particular ones I must admit that you surpass me greatly. The benefits of a specialist over a generalist, even if that generalist is me. Meet me in the Dragon Graveyard in a week's time. I know you can make it, I've kept track of your movements. Oh, and perhaps a sapphire would suit your fiance's wedding ring better? Just a suggestion.

Sir Sherlock Holmes

P.S: This letter will incinerate itself after a minute's time. Handy trick I picked up from the secret service. Those nobs are at least good for something after all.

....​

Hello John,

You didn't show up to our agreed-upon meeting. I am remarkably vexed at your truancy. The man I knew was never late for a meeting. I will let it slide just this once as I did say I was with the Secret Service and I know you've been up to a few things that might land you in hot water if it was found out. Personally, I'd say it's about time. Any alchemist worth his stone should be brushing against the edge of secular law, though ethical law is a different matter.

In fact, it is this matter. I do hope you can understand the gravity of the situation. I will explain in more detail once we meet face to face, but rest assured that it is worth one or two of your indiscretions coming to light. And in any case, it is highly unlikely that would happen. I am no true dog of the queen, I assure you. I already have plans in motion that upon the resolution of this matter will allow me to escape from these dreadful royal purples. Speaking of color, would you really pick that shade? Go and pick a lighter shade.

Sir Sherlock Holmes

P.S: It'll go off a little faster this time. I think they suspect my motives but I don't want them to get any physical evidence.

....
....
....​

Hello John,

I suppose I do owe you an explanation, John. I could easily grab some of Aberforth's goons and they'd work just as well for this. But this isn't any normal crime. It's personal. Moriarty was in many ways, my fault. I encouraged him back in Camelot. I even agreed with him on many counts. I just didn't expect him to go as far as he did. To bring his theory of the Metaphorical Chimaera into reality, he has gone as far as courting vampires. I don't know how much of it you are aware of but the vampiric ideal… the heretic truth of their ancestors echoes through their blood and allows them the ability to eventually shapeshift and consume any creature to assume their shape.

We faced the Hound of Baskervilles together in our sect days but that was just a creature that had forged it's philosopher's stone and had only mastered one form - that particular breed was called a werewolf. Some vampires attempt to shift into bats or other men or any choice of transformation, but the most fearsome of their kind have always chosen dragons as their form of choice. Perhaps in a mockery of the same power that Arthur had wielded in those ancient days. Any vampire would want to enact the rite of Vlad Tepes and consume a dragon.

But Moriarty is no ordinary vampire. The Empress' Secret Service is convinced that he will be at the Dragon Graveyard - one of the only places one may find living dragons. Ancient ones mourning the loss of their place in the world. It was where the Dread Vampire Vlad Tepes rose to power and marked his territory by impaling knights upon the ribs of the beast he had eaten. They expect him to re-enact the past and so they have prepared the Knights to slay him. But Moriarty is no fool. He would know this. He would know that as he reveals himself as a new Dracula, he would be slain immediately.

And power isn't Moriarty's goal. He seeks understanding. The man I knew and the demon I chased would not bet it all on mere power. There is something else… something more sinister at play. The Secret Service is not prepared and they will not heed my words. I can feel it. The patterns are shifting, leading to a conclusion that I can't quite fathom. I need more information. I've looked through everything I had available. It isn't enough. I need to chase the source, information that Moriarty couldn't have found within the bounds of secular law. I need to hunt vampires and find out everything that Moriarty knows so that I can predict him.

John, I need you with me. I don't have the expertise to do this alone.

Sir Sherlock Holmes

P.S: Please dispose of this.

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Sherlock,

I got my fiance - my wife soon, I suppose - the ring you suggested. She loved it. I've spoken to her about… everything. I don't think my marriage can survive another one of your cases. But we both agreed that… Well, I'm not married yet. Another case, one last time. For old time's sake.

Dr. John Watson

P.S: I have known that your familiar was there all along. We do feed the poor bird. But then, I suspect you'll just say something along the lines of 'I know.'
 
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Sherlock,

I got my fiance - my wife soon, I suppose - the ring you suggested. She loved it. I've spoken to her about… everything. I don't think my marriage can survive another one of your cases. But we both agreed that… Well, I'm not married yet. Another case, one last time. For old time's sake.

Dr. John Watson

P.S: I have known that your familiar was there all along. We do feed the poor bird. But then, I suspect you'll just say something along the lines of 'I know.'

DEATH FLAG.

The last will and testament of the late Dr Watson Time
 
Maria 37 - Maria and the Three Masters(Part 5)
Maria and the Three Masters (Part Five)
Maria Turn 10 Sixteenth Omake

They were late to the dispatch office. Maria set her teeth, fought down her rage, and turned back to the squad.
"We're taking wolf," she said, flatly. There was no response. It wasn't surprising; so far, she'd yet to hold eye contact from any of them for more than twenty seconds, let alone hear them speak. Gods knew why – it hadn't been them she'd snapped at.
…Snapped at any more than usual. Draconis was worse than her, anyway. Still. They shouldn't be so damn jumpy around her. They were fucking legionnaires, weren't they? Warriors and cultivators, not sniveling children.
Ugh. No. She wasn't dealing with this. Maria stalked away into the dispatch office, almost entirely empty at this hour. The only person there was Nameless, and for once, he wasn't smiling serenely.
"Captain," he said. She could see the reproach in his eyes. Letha had apparently been talking.
Well FUCK her, then.
Our damn business.
Yes.


"Here for the route," she muttered. "Not a lecture."
"I was unaware my conversation was so typical."
"It was one damn fight. They happen. Now give me the route, will you?"
Nameless tried to stare her into submission, but she'd been handling angry superiors most of her life. He had nothing on the Legate, or Centurion Ajax. Eventually he gave up, and with a defeated frown handed her a scroll.
Wolf. Well. One less fight to have.
"You are entitled to change-" he began, but she stopped him with a glare.
"I'll drop it back later."
"Your masters-"
"Will find me after I've done my duty, I'm sure."

He looked – hurt. This wasn't how he'd expected this to go, she realized. The Strength Purity tended to keep things very polite. Passive Aggressive, like all the Righteous sects. Her just being pissed off at him must not have lined up very well.
She drowned the flare of guilt that prompted. It wasn't her damn fault he'd tried to get involved in a private argument, OR that he didn't know how to handle an adult conversation. She stalked out.
Fuck them.
Fuck them all.
Yeah. Don't need any of them.


They patrolled in silence. The heat and sunlight bleached everything the same uncomfortably bright grey, burning into their eyes. To hell with it all. They were fucking cultivators. Some sunshine didn't matter.
On. On, along the slow curves of the road, alone by and large except for where hummingbird dipped back and forth against them, then up, into the greener pastures of the Line, where the trees jutted up like skeletal fingers, their greenery thinning under the scorching heat. No contact, yet. Nothing to distract her, to give her space to vent her temper. Only the splintered craters from the last assault – reminders of what had gotten her into this shit in the first place. Her mood, already grim, soured further.

Draconis drew forward to march beside her.
"Captain," he muttered. She snorted, but didn't reply. "Should we stop?"
"Why?"
"Perimeter sweep. Ensure we haven't missed anything."
She glared at him.
"Missed anything."
"The treeline's thick. We've been on the receiving end of attacks here before. It seems reasonable to assume they may try again."
…Damn it. It wasn't a bad point. Worse, she was only fighting it because she was angry. Any other day, she'd have ordered it herself.
"Fine," she growled. "Pris sweeps first, then expanding perimeter. We stop after a hundred square yards and Pris sweeps again."
"Captain."
Draconis nodded respectfully, and fell back. She heard him shouting out the orders.

Damnit. DAMNIT.
She was letting her emotions get in the way of her damn responsibilities. Gutless HEAVEN, what did she think she was doing? And over an argument? Was she a child? A muling, idiot brat, screeching behind her mother's skirts? No. Of course not. She was, supposedly at least, a captain of the Optimatoi, and a walker of the Loneliest Path. She was supposed to be better than this.
And yet, even though she knew it, it changed nothing. She was still deeply, utterly furious, and incapable of letting go of that. Draconis was going to have to run the damn squad.
…Gods, what did that say about her?

Priscian's scan swept over her. She closed her eyes, breathed, and forced some semblance of calm. She could at least bottle this rage until later, and not *radiate* her incompetence.
Draconis started breaking the squad up. "Take Georgy," Maria told him. "I'll manage a section alone."
She saw what, for a Kalokagathos, passed for concern as it darted across his features.
"Captain, with respect –" he began. She stopped him with a raised hand.
"Better for all of us if I'm alone for a while," she said. "Order's given, sergeant."
His face set, but he nodded. She left before anything else was said.

The forest was nice, honestly. Calm. When Maria had first made her way to the desert, far from the Plains, she'd spent a lot of time in places like this, to keep from being discovered. Heck, she might even have spent time here; it was far enough away from the main roads that she could have figured it was safe. Quiet, too. She could have climbed one of the trees at the end of a long day and just… listened. Breathed. Reached out for something like peace, for the first time in her life.
She didn't think about that part of her life often. Even less since she'd come to Song. Or back to Song, she supposed. There'd been too much to do. Gutless Heaven. What would that rangy, angry, frightened child have thought, if she could see Maria now?
Probably ask about why we don't have mud in our hair.
Or if we had friends.


She breathed. Closed her eyes. She did, was the thing. Good ones. Letha and Oyster and Gaius and Zeno. Draconis. The squad. Poor old Ganpei. Nameless. Book. Even Liming, in a distant, wary sort of way. People who'd fought for her, defended her. People she cared about. And yet, here she was, ignoring all of them because… because…
Ugh. She was a snivelling child, wasn't she. Or an idiot. Both were possibilities.
She dragged a hand through her hair, and sighed. This had to wait. She couldn't keep-

The fist collided with the back of her head so hard her skull rang. It took her a second to clear it, and then her attacker was baring down on her, fist cocked for another punch.
FUCK.
Okay, okay, where was she?

On her back, thirty feet away. Good punch – the momentum had thrown her. Lucky still to be alive. Need to move-
The punch came down, aiming for her head again. She cocked her head to the side, letting it slam into the ground a hairs-breadth from her ear. Okay. Good. Now respond. She slapped her hands backwards, over her shoulders and onto the ground, then kicked up into a hand-stand. A twist of her hips put a knee strike directly into the fucker's head.
*Crunch.*
Flickers of pain ran through her kneecap and out into the rest of her body. Fracture. Already healing, but Gods it wasn't fun. The attacker had barely moved, either. She snarled. Okay. She let the momentum carry her through into a twisting handspring, landing both feet, started to drop into the first Bull Dance kata-

And stopped. Fuck. No. No, whatever this fucking thing was, there'd be more. Lots more. She had to find her squad, now. Maria bit out a snarling curse and ran. Heavy thudding footsteps behind her tod her she was pursued.

The sounds of pitched fighting told her where to go. The squad, all eight of them, were split up, but they'd had the same idea she had. Five of these fucking things were advancing on each of them. She could see them now. Huge, hulking things – Altar, she had to assume, or at least they had been. The size and musculature suggested it, at least, by the way they moved. But layered over those masses of cannibalized, twitching muscle were thick, heavy plates of chitinous armour. From where she was, there didn't seem to be gaps, or catches. They'd been attached directly to their flesh.
Wonderful. Freaks.

"HOPLITE, CENTRE OF THE ROAD!" she bellowed, leaning forward into the sprint for those last few hints of speed. The squad were already dropping back before she'd finished their sentence, yanking back their spears and catching blows on their shields as they darted back to meet her. They circled, slammed their shields home, cycled-
Connection.
Project.

And the Hoplite rose above them, spear lashing out already. Alright. They were outnumbered, now, but they had the advantage in power. If they picked their targets right, they'd win handily. The one that had chased her was the first. Maria locked her eye on the thin seam between its shoulder and huge neck. That. That would do. The spearhead punched towards it-

But the damn thing had already moved. Not much – the armour was heavy, clearly, and what it had gained in defence it had lost in speed – but enough to catch most of the blade on its shoulder. The projected bronze cut a deep groove in the chitin before pulling loose again, but as it came away, she watched as the cut was already starting to close.
They healed, too. Wonderful. Big, heavily armoured hitters that had to be one-shotted or they'd start to regenerate. Whoever made these things either lucked out when the inspiration fairy showed up, or they'd designed them specifically for lone Hoplites. Maria knew which way she'd bet. But then, most Hoplites didn't have her. She started to pull her qi-system loose. Draconis's hand descended hard on her shoulder.
"Don't," he grunted.
"Short on options."
"We can still pull off a retreat. We can't if you're wounded."
She snarled. He wasn't wrong, but-

A scream, cut off immediately by the mouth it came from, rang out behind them. One of the bastards had punched the shield wall so hard Georgy's shoulder had dislocated. It was healing back in already, but the next hit was going to shred him.
She snapped back to Draconis.
"We don't have time for this," she growled, and tore loose.

The world slowed. Her qi-sense ranged out swiftly. Draconis was already knitting the gap closed in the Hoplite. Three of the armoured things were still closing, with the other two raining blows onto the shield wall. The Qi-Projection was lashing out with its spear to drive them back, aiming for the centre-mass. Not a bad strategy, but they healed too fast – if the blow was off by an inch, they'd get back up again.
Alright. She had to do this fast.
The two on the shields first. Get the armour off all together.
Rip it?
The Hoplite will actually be able to do some damage that way.
Then burn them all.
Fast as we can.


Last thoughts before the rage swept over them, and they vanished into its unthinking sea.
Out of the shield wall. Jump. Close. Hands out – Fingers meet at the thin line where plate meets plate and neck rolls up out of chest. Push. PUSH.
Red and grey fountains are born as she slides inside the flesh. Hooks her fingers.
RIP AND TEAR MY SWEET, FOR IN THE RIPPING AND THE TEARING IS THERE ANYTHING BUT GOOD?
Armour starts to come away. Inside, mad hybrid of human flesh and strange, white, flaky fibres, like crab or shellfish. Tendrils, roiling away, thick and juicy. And-
Teeth?
A mouth – no, a line of mouths, running down the chest, chewing gobbets of the strange white fish flesh. Tendrils snatching at the meat, feeding it in bite by bite.
Rage shot through briefly with incomprehension.
Tendrils reach.
Maria snarls, laughs, grins, weeps. Fingers close.
Weak.
Here's a red rope for to tie a pretty bow.
Armour's trying to close. Healing back into place. Fuck that.
Tear, again. Loose this time. Throw it.
Another plate on the neck. Rip. Throw.
One on the fa-

WHAM.
Blow catches her on the side of the head. Sends her cartwheeling through the air. The sea of rage roars.
You touch us?
YOU TOUCH US?!
DIE SCREAMING


Lands. Howls.
BURN
Sends a roaring curtain of flame across the gap. The open one screams from many mouths as he chars in the heat. The other – the one that TOUCHED HER – is silent, arms crossed.
That'll do.
She moves again. Hooks fingers on the face plate – such a pretty little face, let me see, beloved, let me see – comes away more easily.
Human face, once. Now, eye sockets are full of teeth, mouth is open impossibly wide. That strange white fish-flesh running across everything, torn and eaten by still-moving tongues.
Punches it.
Punches it.
Punches it.

Othersothersothersareclosing
Lookup
Threeothersstillunhurthitthemhitthemhitthem


She lunges away.
Fists are swinging again. Unexpected angles. Turns to luck. Charred one. Armour-
No. Nononononononono HOW?!
Armour growing back.

Slower, though. Thinner, too – a delicate web of chitin running across the torso first, then flattening out into a frail plate. Hit it again-
Another swung fist. She twists around-under-beneath it. The others have given up on the Hoplite and come after her.
Alright. Alright. That's it. That's the trick.
TAKE ME THEN, LITTLE SOLDIERS.
Jumps, lands, moves. Burns them. Twists back. Rip and tear at the shoulder of a new one, see the naked pseudo-flesh beneath. Rip and tear. Beneath the weirdness is normal meat. Digs through it. Down. Bone, ivory white, threaded with cartilage. Pretty, almost.
BURN IT.
Scorches and spoils and blackens. The cartilage is gone.
Heal that, lobster.
Grabs the bone.
Jumps.
The arm comes with her. The body does not.

Yes. Yes.
A strategy. This is a dead thing, now. The hoplite is stabbing its spear through the naked wound. The big thing gurgles. No healing THERE.
Again.
Close, tear, dig, tear, burn, tear, run. A leg this time. Throws it aside. Lands with a reassuring thump. Scream of pain. Ignore it. Again.
Close. Tear, dig, tear-
WHAM.
Straight up she goes. The rage outweighs the pain. Turns in the air.
burnburnburnburnburnburnBurnBurnBurnBurnBURNBURNBURNBURNBUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURN
Searing curtain of heat and flame, beautiful blue white like china and ivory and hate, catching all of them. Hoplite dances back, spears into cooked chitin.
She comes down like a comet, screaming bloody murder as she goes.
Four left.
Makewoundsmakewoundsmakelovelybloodywounds.

Hits the ground, then the nearest one. Goes for the neck. Rips the head loose, vomits fire down the neck, and is gone. The thing is still moving.
Will these bastards NEVER die?
Hits it with its own head, once, twice, three times. Chest is a web of fractures. Punches a hand through for good measure.
Hoplite's spear whistles as it cuts through the air behind her. Practiced move. Tilts her head, pulls her hand clear, watches with malicious glee as the spearhead dives into the flesh. Bet the fucker's dead now.
Moves.
Moves.
Moves.
Rips.
Tears.
Hates.
Bodies coming apart as she goes, like overripe fruit. Hoplite following after, taking advantage.
Yes.
YES.
DIE! ALL OF YOU DIE! DIE AND DIE AGAIN FOREVER!


But-
But she's forgotten something. She knows it. Something important.
What…
The sky is suddenly everywhere. Blue. Cloudless. She can see the trees reaching for it. Pretty.
She's sleepy. In fact. She's exhausted.
So she'll just lie here, for a minute.
Look at the nice, blue sky.

---

The instant Maria drops, they're fucked. Draconis is biting back curses in his head. Damnit. DAMNIT. She'd overheated. Worse, she's out of reach. Three of the damn things are still standing – not at their best, but a long way from dead, and starting already to crowd around her.
Alright.
Fuck.
Alright.

His mind spins out possibility after possibility, before settling on one. Fighting retreat. Maria was stronger than he was, and as much as it pains him to admit it she'd ended up a good captain, but the difference between them was slight. He could use that.
"Cecilia," he snaps. "Take lead. Pris. Go. Now."
He pulls loose before any of them can speak, forcing lead onto Cecilia as he goes. She almost fumbles it, and for a second, the Construct wavers, but then training kicks in and she has the damn thing. Shield wall closes again behind him.
All he can do for them now, except trust them to do their job. He runs. The big things haven't quite closed on Maria yet – the one missing a leg is dragging itself along the ground, and the other two are slowed by what must be the pain of absent arms. The Optimatoi bronze in his blood slows him down too, but not as much, and he's used to it.
He doesn't stop as he reaches her. One hand lashes out, catches her collar, and heaves. Keeps running. Their attackers probably can't turn for shit either. If he can outmanouever them-

THUD.
The blow misses him by a hair's breath – at the last moment, he manages to fling himself to one side as it skates past. Sheer luck. He rolls. Looks up.
A sixth one turns ponderously to face him, with two more behind.
Oh shit. Reinforcements.
He has seconds, if that, to get away. Shock and fear try to take them from him, but he doesn't let them. Instead, he yanks on Maria's collar. She swings up into his arms, the weight of her armour and the heavy Bull Sleeves dragging him down as she settles.
And he jumps.

There's no artistry to it. He was never good at the more delicate parts of qi manipulation. But he can manage power, at least, flooding his legs with all of the qi he can spare as he kicks off. It gives him the speed he needs, hurtling up and out of range before they can hit him. Keeps going.
Damnit. Overshot. He's over the treeline and still rising.
Alright. Well. He has a few moments. Looks down. He can see Priscian bolting back along the path. None of the things followed him. That's interesting. They'd clearly been waiting, and they must be able to cloak their qi signatures or they'd have shown up on the initial sweep. So why not leave a few in reserve along the route, stop any runners getting away?
Unless they were here for a reason.
…They'd gone after Maria as soon as she'd split off from the Hoplite. He snarled. This wasn't an attack, it was a fucking assassination.

They were descending again already. Damnit. No time to think about this now. Where are they landing?
He peers down and estimates. Behind the Hoplite. Alright. He can manage that. Push back into the shield wall, drop Maria, and hten… well, he'll cross that bridge when he comes to it. Three seconds to landing. Two. One. Thud. Rolling wave of shock runs up his legs. He ignores it, already running. The shield-wall parts as he reaches it – Georgy and quiet little Tasia reaching out to drag him bodily back inside, their shields slamming home after him.
The ponderous monsters are coming back towards them now.
Alright. Think.
He looks around. Weaker members of the squad are done, he can see it. Georgy's arm is still shaking from the last blow. Tasia's face is pale as her Qi starts to drain away. But the older ones are still going strong.
Maria's a burning, shivering wreck in his arms. Gods damnit. He couldn't even be angry at her, it'd been the right play in the circumstances. He thinks. He decides.
"Split up," he snaps. "Nikolas, take Georgy and Tasia. You fight backwards after Priscian. Take the captain. If it comes down to it, you get her back to the damn fort. Selene, Cecilia, on me. We're going to show these fat pricks exactly why you don't fuck with the Second Scorpions."

There's no argument. The squad splits, Nikolas and Selene shifting fluidly, Cecilia slipping lead back to him. He feels a moment of pride. Remembers, in one of the better moments of the last few years, on an evening of quiet kisses with Lan Hua, boasting how good his dawnies are.
He wonders, briefly, if he'll tell her about this, too, or if this is where it all ends. Puts it out of his mind. No time for that shit now.
The Hoplite splits like an Amoeba. He lets go of his body and begins lashing out with the construct's spear, watching blow after blow bite into the chitin. Maria's work was good. The wounded ones they can still drop. He proves his own point by hammering home blows into their open flesh. They still try to heal, he notes, but that strange grey-white flesh substance is gone now. That seems to slow their regeneration. They fall after a few strikes apiece. He can't be sure they're dead, but it's the best they'll get.

Other hoplite's backing away fast, but they're not going after it. Whatever they do for qi cloaking must have fucked up their qi-sense, too, then; they can't tell where Maria is. If he can keep the reinforcements on him, Selene and Cecilia, then the others might make it.
Except the Bigs are starting to spread out, using their numbers more effectively. Damnit. Damnit all to Heaven. Alright. He'll have to work fast. He gives up on his body – too much of a distraction – and slides purely into the construct. Show these bastards what an Optimatoi can do with a spear.
He sets himself into the Glass and Iron Stance.
"Come and die, little demons," he says, smiling a little. The construct sets his voice booming.

The Bigs look at each other. One of them laughs.
"Brave, for a dead man," it – he – says. "I'll raise a toast to you while I eat your tongue."
It strikes. So does he. Spearhead meets armoured fist.
The fight changes, then. Before, it was relentless. Desperate. They won or they died, on both sides. Now, though, it's shifted. Deadlier, on the one hand. More considered on the other. They have the power to crush him, certainly, but to do that they have to close with him, and he has the advantage on the defensive. Quick, sharp, tight little slices to the neck drive them back; they can heal, certainly, but a shredded artery would eat up a lot of that healing fishflesh. They can't get around him either. The geometry of the battle lets him lash out before they can get far enough to move out of spear range. It is driving the whole formation backwards, but that's not a problem for him; he has reinforcements coming.
Time, now. Time is the core of this. If they can just outlast them…

Except they can't, because the giant bastards clearly aren't the type to play fair. One of them steps back, snatches a tree, and flings it at them. Draconis curses, slices it in half, but that's all the other two need; they're on the shieldwall, hammering blows down. The formation reinforces it enough that it doesn't immediately shatter, but gods it hurts like heaven. He snarls.
"Back," he mutters. "Back, now, as far as we can manage."
Selene and Cecilia oblige, sending the entire formation speeding backwards, but not before another two massive blows land. He feels his shield crack. Shatter. Something hot is running down his chest. Draconis looks down through the eyes of the qi construct.
"Oh."
There's a hunk of his shield lodged in his chest. He's bleeding out.
So this is how he dies, is it? He thought it'd be more dramatic. Something would be on fire. The captain would presumably be killing people in a very intense and inspiring fashion. Perhaps Lan Hua would be weeping at his side. Instead, he's going to be crushed by an overweight flesh golem with no face and too many mouths, and that's if he doesn't just drown in his own blood. Gods, it's really just embarrassing.

"Fuck," mutters Cecilia. "FUCK. Okay. Serge, give me lead." He passes it over, slips back into his own body. The pain hits him like a cold wave. He grits his teeth. Alright. Stay upright. They can't loose your qi generation. He slaps his hands onto the interior of their shields, and they step in, slamming the gap closed on either side. Cecilia keeps hold of lead, which he admits isn't a bad idea. He can't spare the attention; what spare qi he has needs to be directed into the wounds to try and close them. It's working, but too damn slow. The blood's spilling too quickly. He needs a healer. He has a medical pouch. It'll have to do.

His fingers are starting to numb. He has to work fast while he still has the dexterity for it. Rips the shield fragment out. Digs around inside the pouch. Pulls out a heat compress. It should weld the wound shut for a while. Hurts like a bitch, but it'll do. Applying it one handed is going to be fun, but he's splitting his focus as is- trying to cycle into the formation with the aid of the shields would be lunacy.
Tears the paper loose. The sticky side immediately starts to glow. He slaps it against his chest along the wound, pulling his armour and tunic out of the way as best he can. Blood's still running out around the very edges; the damn compress isn't long enough. Gods damnit, it'll have to do. Should slow things at least. He turns back to the fight-
*whumph*

-as a blow hits against the shield wall again and they're knocked back a foot and a half, barely keeping their feet. Gods. Cecilia's next sergeant is going to have to drill her on her spearwork, because this is just depressing. The Big had managed to get past her guard. There's a second blow coming too.
"Give me-" he snaps, but Cecilia's given him back lead before he finishes so he doesn't bother. Alright. Fuck. Alright. Well, he can take the bastard with him at least. How?
…Ah. Yes. That'll work.

He lets the construct's arm sag a little. Hints at a weakness. The big takes it, darting in for another blow-
And thus has no idea that the spearhead's coming back around until its edge hacks into the back of his neck. Draconis smiles grimly. Leans back. The spearhead keeps going, through the chitinous plates and out the front of the Big's throat, ripping it open as it goes. His head comes loose. Draconis pays it no mind, lets it keep coming around, over the construct's leaning body, to snap back into place for guard. The Big is still coming, but a headless opponent is a blind one, and that's apparently still true for these bastards. The construct kicks out once, and sends the thing's fat body flying back into a tree.

It's a nice moment, but it's all Draconis has. Blood's still running down his chest. His body's starting to sink, he thinks; legs must be going. And the other two have started to cautiously advance.
Well. Still not too bad. Four out of eight squad members would make it back. Maria would probably make it. And he killed a lot of these fuckers. He makes his peace with death, now, and readies himself to die fighting.

Thus, it's both irritating and a pleasant surprise when the world is suddenly full of Divine Sabers in long lilac robes, their swords drawn. He can see Liming.
He can see Lan Hua.
Their swords are bright and searing, cutting swathes through the air as they go. It's beautiful. Even moreso when they literally eviscerate the remaining Bigs into fat, meaty chunks. He laughs.

Oh. Oh, he's fallen. Well, that's appropriate. He's on his back. He's dying.
Lan Hua is suddenly next to him.
"'Conis," she mutters desperately. " 'Conis, get up."
She's… done something to her hair. It's shorter than last time he saw it. It's nice. Kind of… he doesn't know. Just. Nice.
Tries to tell her, but he can't seem to get his mouth to move.
" 'Conis, please. 'Conis. 'Conis, don't you dare-"
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So. Draconis started life as a fun nod to @Siual 's good seed, because I think Aris is great. Now he's one of my favourite side-characters in Maria's stuff. Funny how that happens, I guess. Not quite as funny as this turning into a three part mini arc, though, that's just HILLARIOUS ISN'T IT?! Uuuuuuuugh. @Alectai @no. @ReaderOfFate , Threadmark please. PLEASE.
 
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Top Five Qi Condensation Techniques to help you survive the Trials!

We all know what is coming - the great sign of Heaven's malice and hatred that is the Hundred-Year Trials. And, if you've read the many other essays on this board on the subject, you will know that survival for most of us can be boiled down to three points 1. Stick with your formation 2. Follow your elders 3. Know how to live in the deep desert.

But we all know best laid plans never work out. It is very possible that any one of us will end up separated from our Formations and need to survive the Hunters alone. That demands a combat technique and arts of our own. But for those of us who don't serve on the frontline constantly - or even those who do and want to pick up a new trick - learning a new technique is expensive and time consuming. So I've learnt a wide selection for you, dear readers - so you can make an informed choice instead of just having the sales pitches from those techniques advocates to go off. I've judged each technique family on not just effectiveness, but also cost and easiness to learn as well! These all do require you have at least opened your meridians to start learning however, and of course will be more effective the higher your cultivation is.


5. Thunderous Tornado Sabre Art

For the sword cultivators among us, this Sabre art is a perfect addition to your arsenal for the kind of extended desert engagements the trials involve. Using your Sabre as a focus, this art focuses on summoning, controlling and riding the sandstorms that plague the deep desert. Truely, there is no better technique for when you have been separated from your formation and being hunted for escape, diversution and striking power.

The problem lies that to use it to its full potential, you must already have skill and talent wielding the Sabre and Sabre Qi. I spent a frankly unnecessary amount of contribution points trying to grasp the essence of Sabre Qi to fully grasp the Thunderous Tornado Sabre Art, and never managed to truly take this technique to it's peak. But if you already wield the sabre, give this technique a shot.


4. Path of the Living Wall

Path of the Living Wall is a Body Technique that has recently become available to us through the Technique Palace. It is a defensive focused technique that focuses on using Metal Qi to sustain and support the body through injury and hardship. When fed Bronze Qi by one with the Blood of Bronze however, it can keep Qi Condensation disciples up and fighting with monstrous endurance at peak, as Bronze Qi made manifest replaces wounded flesh and blood. Sadly, the strength techniques of the Living Wall are mediocre and do not synergize with the Blood of Bronze nearly as well - strengthening and reinforcing tendons does little when they are already made of Bronze. Its speed techniques are also lacking for the same reason. While it is the most effective technique for most Qi Condensation clansmen to learn to take a hit, it won't help you much in punching back or escaping pursuit.

It is, however, easy to learn - requiring less commitment to asceticism and bodily purity than other body cultivation techniques. And it still has the body cultivation benefits of lacking in material focuses or training aids. This is part of why it is not useful beyond Qi Condensation, but for many clansmen, that is all they need.


3. Mastership of the Mournful Mist

The Mournful mist is an emanation of Water and Death Qi that confounds and misleads any who walk into it. It is an easier illusion technique to learn than most as you yourself do not need to focus or control the illusion - the Death Qi is enough alone to conjure a woeful wail and visions of one's death. Especially against the Hunters and their cheating tokens, this can be an effective strategy. The mist can also be controlled to help flow between areas and give limited tactical mobility in battles.

One of the major downsides is that, sadly, most Hunters are aware that illusion techniques are a threat against them and allow us to resist their tyranny, so it is unfortunately common for hunters to have talismans or techniques that counter such attacks. But if they in their arrogance don't, this can be a fairly easy to learn and affordable backup technique.


2. Will of the Flame Eternal

One of many Fire Qi techniques available to the Clan, the Flame eternal is the best of the bunch for new Qi Condensation by my reckoning. While it's flames are nothing special from it's Qi Emanation attacks, lacking the destructive power of Fervent Wildfire or the Heaven-defying Rage Flames, it can still strike at a distance and ignite any insufficiently cautious Qi Condensations opponents. Its techniques for and focus on "stoking the internal fire" and "keeping within you the Flame Eternal" means that it excels in longer drawn out fights and in providing a much-needed speed boost, both useful aspects during the trials. These elements tie in well with the Body of Bronze, with the lack of defensive techniques other than a basic flame barrier no issue for us, especially if you can combine it with the Path of the Living Wall.

Fire treasures are needed to awaken your awareness and focus of Fire Qi, but as far as cultivation aids go they are fairly cheap, only being a few thousand contribution points. That, and a trip to the technique palace are all that you need to wield this technique - although I did pay for accelerated training for this article.


1. Qi-Beast Reviving Technique

My favorite technique of those I studied, and the one I felt most drawn to however, was the old Qi-Beast Reviving Technique. I found this myself in some dusty scrolls from before we were driven from the mountains by the greed of the "Righteous" powers. The core of the technique involves getting and shaping intact Beast Cores to receive Qi. Rather than using them to feed your cultivation, by infusing a Beast Core with your Qi, you can recreate the Beast you have defeated as a Qi-Beast, driven by your own Qi. This allows you to summon a wide variety of obstacles in the path of any potential hunters - Need to fight your attackers? Infuse your Qi and summon some Gold Skinned Lightning Rats in their path. Need to escape? Keep some Metal Feathered Soaring Hawks handy. Want to lose your pursuers in the Desert? Have some Sandstorm-spawning Armadillos ready. Need to heal fellow Clansmen? Bring out a Pink Puff Egg Healing Rabbit.

While this technique has many restrictions - cost of acquiring and summoning the Beast Cores being a large one- they are reusable in ways a Talisman is not. For more information, see my detailed essay on the Qi-Beast Reviving Technique (50 Points) , which outlines how you can use it yourself. Over the next decade, you can hopefully harness some of the spirit beasts you face into tools to protect against the trials if you utilize this technique, or sell their cores to those who can.

I hope that regardless of which, if any techniques you decided to pursue from this article, you survive and prospect against the Trials, and that you will Defy Heaven for many years to come!
 
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Seems odd that no techniques are mentioned as being especially good at shattering tokens. That would seem to be the obvious thing for trying to maximize effectiveness during the trials.

The third one- Mournful mist - is meant to be, for it if it works it the hunters will fear for their lives and shatter their tokens easier. If that's not clear might be my writing. But shattering tokens I gather is less about physically shattering them and making the hunter think they are going to lose so the hunter shatters it using the mental link they all have to their tokens (if close). That's my reading of it.
 
Okay, so I'm very dumb, so could someone remind me who Aasmi is again? Or is she a high level cultivator coming from trial-lands that have yet to be introduced?

She's the Final Boss of the Foundation Establishment Bracket of this set of Trials.

Needless to say, she kind of fucks us up.
 
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Minervina Barda 27 - Charge of the Scorpion Brigade
Minervina Barda 27: Charge of the Scorpion Brigade

In the years leading up to Minervina's second set of Trials being 'Sent To the Ranch' had become an idiom for a fate worse than death amongst her fellow disciples. It was most often bandied about in the Dawn Fortress, particularly in the canteens and bars popular amongst the rank and file of the Legions. A grim-faced warrior would relate a tale of how a brother in arms had come to some gruesome end, perhaps he was devoured alive by Yin Fang Cicada's or crucified by cruel 5th Sea Hunters. The listeners would nod solemnly, perhaps drink a toast to the fallen. Then someone will remark "well, at least he wasn't sent to the Ranch" and his peers would nod and finish their drinks, shivering all the while.

The Poison Witch spent very little time in Legion bars, but she got to find out how terrible the Ranch was first-hand.

----------------------The Ranch--------------------------------

Minervina sighed as another stinger pierced her bronze skin. Hissing a vicious war cry, the spirit beast wrapped its distinctive blue and black body around her, exerting enough pressure to snap a brick wall into splinters.

"No little one. You won't get fed if you can't behave." With practised motions, she extracts the cat-sized juvenile scorpion from her elbow and throws it back into the pen with the rest of its clutch. She had finished measuring it anyway. She put the corpse of the Yin Fang Cicada she had been using as a lure back in her storage pouch and pulls out a jade slip so she could record her findings, observing the dozen fresh hatched 'Nymphs' in their pen.

'Clutch 283 contains 32 juvenile subjects. The sixth generation bred from the bloodline originally collected from the Peng Kingdom. The Mistress's physical alterations have taken well. Looking at the musculature and chitin development I am confidently predicting a fourfold increase in the species normal size upon the specimens maturity. Should be plenty large enough for mission specifications.' How Destasia got funding for breeding an army of Spirit Scorpions big enough to ride was one of those mysteries a Foundation Establishment Junior didn't dare poke her nose in.

Observing the far end of the pen and pressing a few buttons on the nearby control array, Minervina released a dozen more fist-sized bug corpses at the end of one of Destasia's 'Test Gauntlets.' A mess of deadly acid traps, swift-moving saw blades and various other tricks, only a creature with modest intellect and incredible speed would be able to reach the nutritious treats in one piece. Starved beyond reason, the juvenile scorpions don't hesitate. They set off, streaks of chittering lightning.

The first six died swiftly, eviscerated by bronze blades, pierced by obsidian darts or melting in voracious acid. The others though learned caution surprisingly quickly. After devouring the remnants of their dead siblings, they approached with much more caution. Minervina actually applauded when one bright young arachnid discovered the trigger plate for the dart thrower and then tapped it repeatedly until the trap was expended. It took around a half-hour, but the remaining thirty eventually reached the end of the Gauntlet and started to feast.
Nodding, Minervina keeps up her monologue, talking to the Record Jade. "We have a new record. Subjects displayed a high level of physical coordination, seem comfortable with the enhanced speed and display impressive deductive skills. I recommend this batch be preserved for now while we attempt domestication."

She is about to end the recording and move on. She has twenty more such batches to judge before she had to present her findings to the Councillor this evening. On her way out of the room she remembered the most important part of today's assignment, Lady Duca had underlined it three times on the note she had got that morning. She turned around and squinted at the Scorpions as they tore into the mess of insect corpses.

"Chitin is a powder blue hue, with distinctive black markings that should help with telling them apart. It certainly reflects light in a way that's pleasing to the eye. I can conclude they are aesthetically suitable enough for the Lady to consider." What was the other part of the request? "Umm, I think that the way this species uses its pedipalps to communicate and point out threats and food sources could certainly be described as 'cute.'"

Boxes ticked, she hurries on to the next clutch of test subjects. "I can't believe I'm doing this. Why did this have to happen to me!?"

----------------------The Argent Pinnacle---------------------

Once her time as an Aspirant was done, Minervina had gone to quite some lengths to get herself recruited into the 698th legion. Infamously loosely organised and laissez-faire, the Three Starred Cauldron were unusual in that they didn't have responsibility for a specific district or territory. Their members tended to congregate in close-knit enclaves surrounding the largest forts and cities in Clan Territory instead. There they could best contribute with their focus on alchemical crafts and research, producing a notable percentage of the Cultivation aids and consumables.

Since such craft was vital to the Clans future growth, the Legion was rarely short on Contribution Points and adopted a more mercantile than military approach. Their unique sub-section of the Contribution board had been an incredible boon over the decades. It was the best network in the Clan for matching individual alchemists and Poison Masters with potential clients. It also offers heavily discounted supplies of raw materials collected from the Furnace's holdings in the Pill-Forge Forest. During the Trials and wartime, it would also use that infrastructure to post massive orders for the most essential drugs and toxins that Legionnaires across the entirety of Devil territory would feverishly work together to fulfil.

It had been a perfect fit for the better part of two centuries. Hardly a gregarious soul, Minervina had no trouble declining a post at one of cushier Enclaves. She had been largely left to her own devices to hone her craft with a ready source of work and reagents close at hand. Her occasional secondments to front line legions and tours of service at the Night Devil Fortress and the Xin Kingdom during the Blood Path Wars had won a fair share of renown for the mercantile Legion, which didn't often have a huge number of fresh battle honours to brandish. Now as she Ascended to the Great Circle of Foundation Building and set her eyes on the realms beyond, she had become something of a symbol to her Legion-Mates, many put about that she might soon become their first new Elder in three centuries.

"And that's why my Legate is trying to kill me" She reflected as she stood to attention in said Legates office.

----------------------The Ranch--------------------------------

Minervina sighed as 16 scorpions attacked her at once. She was immune to the venom, but those stingers were the size of a gladius and at least as sharp as spirit steel blades. They fucking hurt, even if they couldn't really harm her.

"NO" She let the power of her Intent Pillar soak into her voice and the word hit the horse-sized arachnids with obvious force. Her attackers are thrown back a few paces and freeze, uncertain what to do next.

"How many times do I have to tell you Batch 283. You won't get fed if you can't behave." Her words are met with a chorus of frustrated hissing as she puts the food she had out back in her pouch. She turns to walk back out of the pen. Another failed experiment, she would most likely have to declare this lot too unruly for further breeding and tag them for destruction.

She paused. "What happened to the last of you?"

This batch had been whittled down progressively as Lady Duca introduced ever more dastardly gauntlets and devious logic puzzles for them to face, but she was certain there had been 17 specimens left when she walked into the pen.

One of the Scorpions, a large female with rather pretty markings reminiscent of abstract strokes from a calligraphy brush, hadn't attacked her. Instead, it was stood a little distance away from its Clutch-Mates. It seemed utterly calm. Both pincers on the ground, no threat display, and its body low to the ground in a submissive pose.

Taking slow, deliberate steps, Minervina approaches the Spirit Beast and crouches down, deliberately exposing her back to the things deadly tail. With her left hand, she palms another giant bug and holds it out to the docile scorpion. With the right, her fingers form the gesture to summon a spell that will strike the thing down if it lashes out. She had been stung quite enough these last few months.

With ladylike grace, the scorpion scoops the treat out of her hand with its pedipalps and then starts to delicately strip it apart. It shudders for a moment as the Poison Mistress pats her on the head, but doesn't look up from its meal.

"Wonderful. I was at the utter end of my patience as well. I think I will call you Omega."

She leaves the pen a few minutes later. She waves a hand to get the attention of a Qi Condensation attendant. "Let the Lady know, I think we have a good prospect for the next round of the breeding program. If she doesn't look like she's listening or claims she's cultivating, tell her 'Barda says she's adorable.'"


----------------------The Argent Pinnacle---------------------

"I just want to be absolutely certain Furnace-Lord, you want me to volunteer for what?" She strived to keep incredulous outrage out of her voice. She failed.

Legate Auxillary Cassius Panopolis, a vain old man who revelled in the nickname 'The Peacemaker' stroked his verdigris stained beard with a knobbly hand and declaimed. "For the good of the Legion, we need to contribute to the Chartoularios Tou Kanikleiou's latest project. It's a great undertaking and the 689th must be seen to be doing its fair share.." His voice was striving for the role of All-Knowing Senior. Unfortunately, Minervina didn't really count him as a Senior now they were peers in cultivation and she was quick to talk over the older Cultivator.

She no longer bothered to try and keep her agitation to herself.

"You want me to be one of Destasia 'The Absent-Minded Demon' Duca's lab rats! We both know how that goes. I've spent years carefully not going anywhere near the damn woman. If she takes a fancy to my Constitution she will have me strapped to a slab and screaming under the knife before I can blink."

Cassius snorts noisily, His whispy, green-stained, beard vibrating with anger. "You're the only Expert we have who is immune to poison. You have a better chance of making it back in one piece than any of your peers. Moreover, I'm your Imperator damned Legate and you will do as I say, Centurion!"

-------------------------The Ranch-------------------------------

Minervina had quickly learned the most vital lesson to surviving as one of Lady Duca's subordinates.

Whenever you walk into her office, make sure you have something more interesting than yourself on hand.

She still cringed at the memory of the day she learned that lesson. The infamous researcher hadn't quite strapped her to a slab and cut her open as she feared, but in some ways, it had been worse. It was definitely more embarrassing. She had vowed to never just walk into the Disciple Mistress's office with forms to fill out ever again. The threat of paperwork seemed to stir terrible things in the darker parts of the Ladies mind.

Working out exactly what the Lady might find interesting had been something of a trial and error affair. Shiny trinkets worked well, the eccentric woman enjoyed jewellery, particularly if it gave her a chance to dissect exotic talismans or criticise foreign array work. Sometimes though, that would remind her of actual work and could backfire disastrously. Minervina really wasn't certain how someone so flighty could reach Core Formation, though her genius was certainly not in question.

Alcohol worked best, she had a strong taste for Venom Wines. Yet you could never catch her interest with the same vintage twice. Minervina had opened a substantial line of credit to the Centennius brewery in the last few years, making sure she had a stockpile of their latest experimental concoctions. She found she could get the Lady to focus on the actual task at hand around 80% of the time if she paired it with a well presented 'gift' of a few bottles.

Today though, she was utterly confident that Duca's full focus would be aimed at something other than her. She took a moment outside the office door to fuss over the little companion on her shoulder and feed it a few flies before letting herself in. You could knock for days without getting an answer if the Lady was in the middle of one of her 'experiments.'

Today it looked like the respected Master of Disciples was coming to the end of one of those experiments. She was sprawled across her desk and snoring loudly. 'Drug fuelled binge' might be a more accurate description than an experiment, but Minervina knew better than to entertain that thought, even if it looked like the older woman was dead to the world. Instead, she busied herself swabbing up the various glimmering powders off the table and organising the various papers that had been strewn across the room. She took a brief glance at the pages of hastily scrawled brushwork. How the Elder managed to write her thoughts in a new code each time she got…. Enlightened… was beyond her. She made sure they were stacked and dated neatly anyway, even if she could only guess at what the intended page order would be. In her experience, there was a roughly even chance that the work was some brilliant new alchemical discovery or more terrible erotic fiction about the Archgetes.

Minervina had long since given up cracking Lady Duca's codes. It wasn't worth the nightmares.

She had the room largely restored and a pot of tea brewing merrily by the time the older woman finally stirred from her stupor.

"Good Afternoon my lady, I hope you slept well." She handed over a cloth for the drool that marred the beautiful woman's features. She reached up for the baby scorpion that had been drowsing on her shoulder this entire time. "I have someone I would like you to meet."
----------------------The Argent Pinnacle--------------------

"I'm your Imperator damned Legate and you will do as I say, Centurion!" He slammed his hand on his hardwood desk, cracks emerging in the lacquer. His aura cut loose with his temper, an invisible wave of power that should make anyone below Core Formation pause. His erstwhile Centurion though refused to flinch, her own aura easily matching his own in intensity.

And that, Cassius reflected, was the entire problem in a nutshell. This stripling of a girl from a disgraced branch family refused to mind her place in the greater order of things. Minervina's rapid ascension meant that her presence in the 689th had become a destabilizing element, one that he needed to either control or remove.

"You set out tomorrow, at first light. I have promised Lady Duca a perfect candidate for the role of a personal assistant. You will perform that task to the best of your abilities, or I will see your accounts frozen for insubordination." He paused, watching how she would react to his challenge. It was theoretically possible for her to appeal such a sanction, but the Dawn Fortress was generally inclined to favour a Legate in any internal dispute. Moreover, between the oncoming Trials and the colonisation efforts, it could well be decades before an arbitrator would be appointed.

The Poison Mistress looked utterly livid, but after a few moments visibly calmed herself. She quirked an eyebrow and said. "Very well then. I see how it is." And then she left. No apology for her tone, no request for permission to leave, none of the required salutes or formalities. Her final words didn't even really commit to completing the task!

He slammed the desk again. This time there was an audible crunch as splinters bounced around the room.

He had worked too long and too hard for Family, Legion and Clan to lose face like this. Cassius knew he was the subject of unflattering gossip amongst the rank and file. 200 years. He had spent almost two centuries desperately trying to break through to Core Formation, to secure the legacy of the Panopolis family. In his youth, he had been hailed as a prodigy, his cultivation smooth and easy. Maybe that had become the problem, a lack of tempering and trials to hammer his Pillars into the correct shape? Whatever the exact nature of the blockage, something about this next step was utterly beyond him, no matter what technique he tried or treasures he expended.

He had given up on further advancement, refined his administrative and diplomatic skills and made himself indispensable to the Legion that way. His mother, Imperator Bless Her, had been young still. Perhaps another child of hers would achieve what he could not, take up the torch and carry the Furnace into the future. The Panopolis legacy would still be secure.

And then the Trials had struck. Worse than they had in the memory of anyone outside the Archgetes himself. His mother struck dead out of hand by some 5th Sea Nascent Soul. An entire generation of top tier Cultivators cut short in a single engagement. He had refused to believe the news when it reached him.

When the call for Legates Auxillary had gone out, it had spurred in him an ambition that he had long since given up for dead. He had traded in decades of stockpiled favours, spent a fortune on bribes and even indulged in some modest skullduggery to ensure he was the only suitable candidate. His family name was the driving force behind this urge to fight tooth and nail. He had been building up a vast reserve of contribution points ever since, going out of his way to solicit 'gifts' and 'tokens of appreciation' from juniors looking to climb the ranks of the Legion. In the depths of the Dawn Fortress, there was a set of ancient Array Flags, The Lesser Key of Thanatos, with access to that array, even he should be able to break his Pillars from their lethargy and forge a Core. The ancient artefact can only be used once a millennium, so the price was astronomical, far beyond the means of any run of the mill administrator. As a Legate though, anything was possible. All he needed to do was keep hold of the Legate position and keep skimming just enough benefits from the job to avoid censure.

Then along comes Minervina Barda, the aggressive young Cultivator who crosses the span of the entire 2nd Realm in less than a century and is already knocking on the door of Core Formation. Mere Cultivation alone wouldn't have been enough to threaten Cassius's seat though, Alchemical skill had always been the way the Furnace decided its pecking order. Such a young Core might have been encouraged to form her own legion or to simply wait a century or two to hone their skills before taking up the mantle of Legate. But this was the Poison Witch, the woman whose skill with a pill furnace was feared the length and breadth of Clan Lands, Whose alchemical creations made the Miracle at Pleuron possible and had been the bane of the Growling Dervishes.

If she overtook him and broke through first, she wouldn't have to press the issue, his own subordinates would demand he step down in favour of her. Then his narrow road to saving the family legacy would be shut forever.

"Well, I just have to make sure that doesn't happen." He pulled out pen and paper and started drafting a letter to Lady Duca, explaining that he had a perfect candidate for a research assistant.

-------------------------The Ranch-------------------------------

It was always a little terrifying how swiftly the Mistress of the Disciples flipped from fun-loving hedonist to deadly serious scientist. She hadn't even finished wiping her face before she started asking questions. "Barda. Invading my rooms again I see." She focuses on the sleeping Nymph, her tone and expression becoming excited. "Who do we have here?"

With a tone reminiscent of a proud mother introducing her child Minervina explains. "This darling is the result of Omega's latest pairing. The one with the male we imported from Turtlebone mountain. Only a week old and she's already close to her first molting, I think this variety is going to be big enough to pull a wagon when it's full-grown, without losing any of its mother's speed or intellect. Your suggestion of adding a small infusion of the Blood of Bronze during gestation has worked beautifully. Not only has it refined the changes to their constitution but this is the most docile and agreeable breed I have ever seen." She demonstrates by gently stroking the creatures tiny chelicerae with her index finger, the scorpion responds by arching its back and nuzzling the Cultivator in a manner eerily reminiscent of a pleased cat. "I think just about any Clan member should be able to handle one with minimal training using the very basic Beast-Taming art that our specialists are putting together."

Destasia has stopped listening, instead, she scoops up the scorpion and hugs it, making various undignified sounds of excitement and pleasure. Startled, the scorpion does strike out with its pincers and stinger, but they could no more pierce the Elders skin than they could sting the sun, and she doesn't even notice.

"She's perfect Barda, put this lineage into production as quickly as possible. The Archgetes has arranged a little field test for our adorable babies. I was starting to worry I wouldn't be able to get Sheng Yu those mounts I promised him. Oh I can't wait to see the look on that crusty old fossils face!"

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The Bells ring once again.

This is the third time they have rung in her lifetime.

The first time, the conflict between Cultivators had dashed her plans for the future, cut her father's life short and set her on a path of vengeance and Cultivation.

The second time, she had saved countless lives, vented her hatred on the Hunters at Pleuron, and had crippled herself in the process. That crippling had set her on the path towards one of her greatest feats to date, her Poison Constitution.

The trials were monstrous, a cruel testament to the hatred the Heavens still harboured for the Optimatoi. Yet they were also a crucible, more than any other factor, the Clans current culture and outlook had been shaped and moulded in response to the Trials. Bronze was a metal that needed fire and force to bring out its best lustre.

She wondered what changes this set of Trials would bring to the Optimatoi.

Already, the first reports of Hunters arriving were coming in. Those with keen eyes could see the lightning-fast shimmer of great glass lances flying through the air as the Clan's greatest array strived to winnow their numbers. A task she shared today. Pulling herself from her musings, she patted Omega's grandaughter on her head fondly and had her pivot so she could review her troops. She strived for her best 'Command Voice.'

"Centuria! The time has come once again for us to be tested! Let's show these thugs what real Devils can do. We Ride!"

At her word, a hundred Cultivators set out into the Desert, their gigantic scorpion mounts making for an intimidating wall of chitin and anger as they devoured the miles in front of them.

They would not all return, but they would not go quietly or easily into the next life.

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Last Omake of the Turn, it's been cooking all week, so just happy to get it in under the deadline.

The Trials are upon us, fingers crossed everyone!

@Humbaba @Kaboomatic @ReaderOfFate
 
Gaius Antonius 50 - Goodbyes
Gaius Antonius Omake # 50: Goodbyes

"Just a month left..." Gaius sighed, laying flat on his back and staring up at the wooden ceiling of his and Axia's room.

"Can't sleep?" His fiance asked, turning over to entwine her legs with his.

The seeker's face fell into a pensive expression, but he otherwise didn't move. "How am I even supposed to? Lying still for three hours... it feels wrong to do."

Axia sighed, stroking his face. "Even when we work our very hardest, there's only so much that can be done. We prepare when we can, then fight to survive."

"Axia. Dear... If I..."

"Don't say it."

"Eh?"

Axia's voice took on a somewhat cold tone. "You are not an ordinary man, so don't say things like 'if I don't make it, blah blah blah'. You will make it, because you must. You're still needed."

Gaius buried his face into Axia's neck. "That's a very cruel way to look at it."

"No, it's the world that's cruel. I'm telling you truth because I know you can take it." Axia insisted, stroking Gaius' hair. "Don't say goodbye. We're both going to survive."

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The Beast-Raising Forest was primarily for purely business purposes, but there was also an entertainment aspect. When there was a surplus of spirit beasts beyond the Clan's needs, those left over would be displayed in zoos and exhibitions. Gaius had just come to one of these places.

Leaning over a wooden railing, he peered into a pit where a pair of Bronze Aurochs playfully butted their heads together.

"Even on the most peaceful of days, something feels just a little bit off, doesn't it?" Gaius asked the man next to him.

"Sure does." Jiang Li answered, drumming his fingers on the railing. "It's like everyone and everything is bracing to be punched."

"It's not just regular Clansmen either." Gaius lamented. "Everyone at the Quintia Manor had the same kind of aura."

"To think you really hooked up with the great-granddaughter of an Elder; that's absolutely wild." Jiang Li laughed, slapping the railing. "You were always an overachiever, never satisfied with anything normal. Who knew your penis was the same?"

Gaius grimaced. "Don't make jokes like that. I worry that 'Grandfather' might hear us."

"Fair enough." Jiang Li smirked. "Well, if that fiance of yours can even bear to look at commoners, then you should bring her over to visit me and the Missus sometime."

"I'll see what I can do. It's strange to think you've already gotten married, though."

The shorter man rolled his eyes. "Strange? Gaius, I'm almost halfway through my life. Of course I've gotten married."

Ah, that was right. After all this time, Jiang Li was only at the Seventh Heavenstage. He was genuinely an ordinary person. Obviously he would settle down in Qi Condensation; where else did he have to go?

Gaius lit a cigarette, and gave another one to Jiang Li. "I suppose we're not so young anymore. We've both crossed the Distortion Line, haven't we?"

Gaius old friend lit up as well, the twin trails of smoke bleeding together in the air. "Aye, we have. We're both ninety-four years old. Even if the Trial Hunters take my life, I'll be grateful that I got to live this long."

"Don't say that."

"Eh?"

Gaius expression grew hard and severe. "Don't enter the Trials with such an attitude. You must live. Each and every one of us must try to live. The Clan needs everything we can give."

Jiang Li blew out a lungfull of smoke and laughed. "You've changed, Gaius. You're talking like someone important now. You really are going to make it, aren't you?"

The Seeker reached out and put a firm hand on his friend's shoulder. "I am, so you'd better live to see me do it. That will be your penance for doubting me."

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The footsteps of a solitary man echoed back and forth along the damp walls of the cave system as he descended deep below the earth. With his abilities, taking this circuitous route down was no longer necessary, but when visiting a friend it's only polite to knock on their front door.

Gaius' boots produced a satisfying crunching sound as the sand ground into the bottom was rubbed off against the rocks, producing a trail which he would use to guide his way back up. With the way his senses had improved even further, the Guiding Magnesis Rod was no longer necessary.

Down here, it was peaceful. If he were not such a fool, Gaius could grab a group of weak Juniors and hide them down here for a year along with himself, surviving the onslaught with ease. That was unfortunately not an option, because he was as foolish as ever.

Before long, he reached the bottom. The thickness of the air down here was different than the surface in a way that was hard to describe. The traces of heavier elements in the air gave it an sour taste, one which lingered in the sinuses and on the tongue.

"Effigy, it's me, Gaius."

The pile of ore and stone quickly assembled into a humanoid shape. "Gaius? To think you'd visit me again so soon. Is there an occasion?"

"You could say that." Gaius sighed, pulling up a chair and slumping into it. "I might not live much longer; I wanted to see you one more time in case that happens. I didn't want you to wait for me for centuries, thinking I'd forgotten you."

Effigy plodded over with heavy, considerate steps before taking a seat themself. "Mmm, that's right, isn't it? Those of the Golden Devil Clan are purged every century, yes?"

Gaius leaned back in his chair, staring at the cieling. "That's correct. The last one was five years before my birth, so I haven't witnessed it in person before."

Effigy cleared their throat as they thought to themself, producing a rumbling sound which resembled an earthquake in miniature. "You know Gaius, if you ever want to live with me for a while, I wouldn't mind. You can protect yourself from the purge in here."

Gaius sighed and shook his head. "Thats true, but I'm not content with just surviving. To be frank, I am exceptional. As someone powerful, I can't stand by while my weaker Clansmen are slaughtered."

"And so you will put your life on the line to save others as well as yourself. Sounds like you need a drink." Effigy waved a hand, and an extra-large bottle of wine floated onto the table along with two cups.

"That sounds wonderful, friend." Gaius smiled fondly, pouring himself a glass. "In that case, why don't you tell me more about yourself, and I'll tell you about how my life has been."

"Hmm... no, I don't think I will." Effigy smirked, or came as close as they could with that crude, rigid face. "It is not yet time."

"Feh, spirits!" Gaius laughed, downing his cup in one go. "Alright, I'll just do the talking then!"

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Several ongoing things I need to finish and instead I put out this. I dunno what to tell you besides I wasn't confident in my ability to finish any of them in a satisfactory way within the day. So instead I threw together this. Your first Trial is a big deal after all - and as Gaius said, he's getting his affairs in order.

This ended up being a pretty fitting story for my fiftieth omake, too. Gaius is about to enter a major threshold in his life, after all.
 
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Paulus and Zeno playing games
Paulus and Zeno playing games
(Alternate title: Zeno, Paulus and the Quest for G.R.A.C.E)
Collab between @Juugo and @Falconis



[Zeno]
If someone saw the extent of my preparations for the tempering trials, they would assume that I didn't have the time to do anything else and they would be technically correct. Technically my time would be better spent cultivating or reinforcing even more of the clan's liminal presence with arrays, but that doesn't account for me as a person.

I simply don't want the constant and neverending preparation for another disaster to define my dao that much. My way should include time to widen my horizons so I can see why we fight or I fear I would lose the reason for it. I have seen the whole of the scorpion road, from the first settlements near the Colossus Footsteps, where my unit slew that scorpion blood cannibal cult decades ago, all the way to the heartlands of the Jingshen and beyond. The north of the desert is known to me, but what about the south and our myriad vassals?

There are many smaller vassals and kingdoms down there I barely know more than their name. The Xin kingdom and Hua empire supposedly fought over a mine a century ago, while Old Gold arbitrated that conflict. The Hong Xuan Clan meanwhile apparently earned significant land in the last cannibal war. All of these people there under our rule have dreams and aspirations of their own and I barely even acknowledged them until now. That will change from now on. After all, how can I dream of helping my clan surpass the heavenly cycle of violence through a better rule, if I don´t know the effects of our current rule?


Looking at the map, I can see a destination practically glowing at me. "Goatmen Tribes" they are called it seems. Where did I hear of them before?

Eh, it doesn't matter now. A mission through there should give me a good overview on everyone down there. Maybe I´ll even return with a new friend made along the way!

Though, on a closer look we'll have to plan our route carefully. The Hua Empire and Xin Kingdom would surely have a more tense relationship after so long, maybe they are even preparing for another war between them? That's not mentioning the territory of the Huang Xuan Clan, which is surely busy getting administration in their new region to start up. This could mean a more heavy bandit or beast presence along the way.

Well, nothing that can´t be solved by looking at the contribution board.
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Zeno Angelus of the 302nd Legion.

Welcome Aspirant,

This is a public terminal of the Contribution Points Board. You may request items, a total of your points, recommended tasks for Legionnaires with your skills, or record fulfilled tasks here. Please infuse a sliver of your will to access any function. If you are unable to properly separate a fragment of your will, you may use the Board further down. Please note there is a wait of approximately 5 hours to use the other Board at present. Note that at two bells past midnight this terminal will be taken down for maintenance. Please finish any business you have by the first bell.

Will accepted.

Purchasing an Essay?

Looking for a mission?

Recommended: The Hong Xuan Clan needs a caravan to head towards the capital City of the "Goatmen Tribes" called "Goatpen". The trader of the Hong Xuan Clan can´t make the journey this year from Clan territory, since he was called into the new territory of the Hong Xuan Clan on short notice and is willing to pay above market value for the goods to see his duty done.

Note 1: Clan members are advised to not take their naming scheme literally. As a vassal of our vassal they are not the clan's enemies and every interaction should happen with that in mind.

Note 2: The Caravan is heavily subsidized to ensure a stable and loyal presence in the far corners of the desert. Failure to fulfill this duty could lead to a gap in Clan records and is therefore heavily penalized.

Mission: G.R.A.C.E (Goatment Rescueplan to Assert the Clan's interest against the Enemy) Accepted.

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[Paulus]

The trials still loomed on the horizon, but there was still a lot of time between Then and Now, so I had to find something to do instead of lazing about. After the meeting with my friends I'd tried to give in and just sleep for a decade like my soul wanted but my body would have none of it. After one full night's sleep I found I was too full of energy to lay down for another second and so I'd found myself all the way to the Dawn Fortress and the Contribution Board.

I didn't want anything too difficult - I couldn't handle anything too difficult with this injury - but it couldn't be a complete waste of time. Connecting to the board was old hat by now - will accepted blah blah blah - and it went seamlessly even with my injury. I mentally shuffled through the missions and tried to find something that promised entertainment since money didn't seem to be that much of an issue anymore...and met with abject disappointment.

This close to the trials, most of the things in my usual section of the board were high risk, high reward; Really big moves that would get the clan ahead in time for the main event. There wasn't one interesting thing in my power bracket that I felt I could handle with my current injury. There were countless smaller jobs: carry this thing here, maintain this garden, find my cat, drive away this Hollow Skin Rhino (sounds interesting, really isn't), but nothing that really caught my interest.

Fine; Eenie, meenie, miney, you. I grabbed a mission to a place I'd never been, some kind of caravan to the goatmen lands. The details weren't that important for caravan guard missions. I'd done thousands of them by this point and they basically all boiled down to stand around and look imposing so wild spirit beasts remembered the status quo. Bandits were rarely something I'd had to deal with given how firmly the Devils controlled their territory and with the Blood Cannibals on the way out after their latest defeat I expected to see even less.

The goatmen themselves were at least somewhat interesting. I'd heard of them but never seen one. They were another one of those weird cases where we let someone be because they could do more with their territory than we could and they had some useful tricks besides. Maybe after this trip I'd figure out exactly what it is they're good with.

I accepted the mission, scanned the meeting day and location, and set off. I couldn't wait to be healthy again.


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[Zeno]

The meeting point was less furnished than I expected. Really, would a sign be really that much of an investment to show us which of these wrecks we had to drive across the sign? Anyway, I found the sandship without cargo before long and started to look for any holes to fill. We don't want to give any scorpions an easy meal after all.

"Now, how do I fill this front part?" Zeno wondered out loud to no one in particular.

"We can probably use some sealing plates." a voice called out from beside him.

A short man - not even two meters tall - came striding over the sands of the caravansary. He wore Legionnaire armour and carried a spear in hand and a massive arbalest almost as tall as himself strapped to his back. He looked around at the ships and quirked an eyebrow as his gaze settled on me.

"Guessing you're here for the goatman run too?" he asked with some amusement.

Turning fully towards the stranger. "You presume correctly, friend. Zeno of House Angelus is the name. With whom do I have the pleasure of traveling?"

Taking some sealing plates out of his back on his shoulders, he starts to graft them on the palm tree wooden sandship. Arrays making sure even the pincers of desert scorpions can't crush it so easily. His Bacchante, a particular armor favored by the clans wardancers, gleaming in the hot midday sun. A bright orange robe glimpsing out from underneath.

"Paulus, no House, or I guess Paulus of House Paulus now. I - uhh - it's complicated.We'll work on the name." Paulus looked over the ship as he answered, lips drawing into a frown at something he saw there.

"Given the time I'm guessing it's just the two of us? I expected more people and...not a ship. I thought this run was supposed to be kind of important?"

"Normally yes, but the trials make everything complicated. The recent land acquisitions by the Hong Xuan Clan just made a complicated situation just even more so. The end result is the usual trader calling in a favor for this mission with some elder and here we are. This is a mission to the goatmen tribes." Zenos hands wave to the empty dunes.

"The rewards alone wouldn't make it worth the hassle normally, but desperate times meant the elders were ready to solve it with the second most superpower of all, spirit stones. Do you still want to go, Paulus?"

The man scoffed and hopped up on the ship. "Yea, of course. I already signed up at the board and there's no way I'm messing up my mission completion score because of some politics. This kind of thing suits me just fine anyway, I was injured in that whole Jingshen business so a little run like this is just what I need to cooldown."

He pulls out a jade slip and taps it to his forehead as he begins going through the supplies.

"Pretty decent haul here. I think this is more than my own stipend so it must be pretty nice to be a goatman. Do you have any experience sailing one of these?"

"Hmpf, being a part of the goatmen tribes is anything but nice, sadly. Most of them die ignoble deaths in the wastes never knowing what point of their life even is." Zeno hops onto the deck, carefully avoiding the clam shelling, and heads to the pearl hovering at the far end of the sandboat.

"Our mission should at least change the destiny of a few of them. We just use the route these pearls show us and we can bring them their well deserved reward for guarding the one place no one wants to stay in for long!" With that statement of purpose the clam begins to glow faintly.

"Everything ready?

Paulus takes one last look over the goods and nods. "Looks good on my end. Everything is set in place and shouldn't fall off or anything." He says, putting the jade slip bearing the ship's manifest away. He turns and gives a big smile, clapping his hands together in eagerness.

"Let's go change some lives!"

The pearls glow intensifies, while the clams begin to hum in tune. After a moment the ship lurches forward, like a ballistae shot and sand dunes fly by, leaving the unimportant Caravansary in the dust storm behind.

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This sand ship was a thing of beauty. It cut across the desert with barely a sound save for the wind rushing past my ears and the way the light of the sun reflected off it's quite literally pearlescent hull was something I could have watched for days. It put me in mind of my old desire to acquire a flying carpet and so just a few minutes into the journey I was already set on having one of these ships for myself. Only, there was a problem.

This wasn't the only type of sand ship in Golden Devil lands. From what Zeno told me it was actually a rather common but recent bit of tech among the vassal clans that had been spreading like wildfire. And while that meant it was widespread enough that I wondered how I'd never seen one before, it also meant everyone had their own version.

This one used some kind of special property of the Motherlode Seeking Clams and the oases they occupied which meant they were of unfortunately local restriction. Still there must be some more general version I can get my hands on.

"Rocks ahead, shift towards the left!" Paulus shouted from the front.

Zeno held the fist sized pearl in hand to steer the ship, sending a steady stream of qi into the almost invisible array script across its surface, and the ship moved as he commanded.

The front lurched, making the fragile ship sail past the rock formation jutting out of the endless dunes.

"It's easier to command than I anticipated. Whoever wrote the intent searching array for this ship certainly knew what they were doing." With another thought they sailed past another rock formation, which had a curious hole in the middle of it.

"Hey, Paulus! Do you know any beasts who can spit so much concentrated acid they can melt turtle shelling?!" Zeno yells over the wind.

"A few." Paulus shouts back. "A few types of Cloudy Lake Ants, one specific type of Sandstorm Chaser, Jaeger Hounds if given enough time. Why?"

My own answer chokes in the back of the throat as we are thrown into the air mere breaths later. A quick pulse of dream qi rights the ship a few li away. Enough to gain a moment when fighting cultivators.

As the dust settles on the ambush spot, we can see the beast in all its grace. I have been kidnapped by hares, rats and scorpions, even punched through a dune by a frog, but a cat is something new even to me.

It stands tall, a full two meters at the shoulder. White fur waves in the wind and catches the sun's light in a way I can't help but think of as regal. It scans the area in a quick moment before slitted eyes lock on our now distant ship and begins approaching us. As it slowly advances towards us, we can see that more than dust swirls around it. Jade green scarabs hover around it like a circlet. I can´t help, but gulp. This is not going to be easy.

[ Combat Music: https://youtu.be/tQhbktFT7HI ]

"Ready for combat, we have a descendant of a white tiger to kill!" The combat maneuver arrays glow with my own qi beat, pulsing to the beat of combat.

"White what now?" Paulus yells but pulls out his spear anyway. The shadowy form of the Hoplite begins manifesting before he seems to think better of it and dismisses the formation. He instead leaps over to the mainmast and clambers up it with one hand and a hooked leg as he gazes back at our would-be ambusher.

"Are we turning to fight or outrunning it?" He shouts, whipping the arbalest off his back.

"WE run and shoot! This prince of the west mauls us, should it be able to sink its claws into our ship!" A pulse repels the first wave of scarabs, while the ship lurches for the biggest dune around. Leaving the cat behind momentarily.

"I've got it!" A golden light builds at the tip of the arbalest as qi floods the wire and it draws back of its own accord. The clap of thunder and the smell of ozone follow and a wave of scarabs is knocked out of the sky by a line of electric might.

The cat, of course, is hot on our stern. Whomever thought of these terms clearly didn't consider sandships!

Thankfully we crested the big dune before it can catch up and now we need a new course quick! Canyon full of spiky turtle rocks where we can crash and get mauled with only one mistake or the slow sloping dunes to our right, where the superior senses of divinely blooded descendant, no matter how thin-blooded, could sniff us out in a moment. Canyon it is!

"Prepare for a bumpy ride!" with another thought we fall down the sheer cliff. The Scarabs hot on our stern, slowing our descent with their wing beats. The cat gaining ground by the second behind us.

"I hope you know what you're doing!" Paulus answers, firing off another lance of lightning from the arbalest. He clambers the rest of the way to the top of the mast and begins firing on clouds of scarabs as quickly as his weapon can manage.

Clouds of scarabs weave through the rocks barely being slowed by their presence, but barely is far better than nothing at all. Shot after shot from the arbalest begins to whittle away the clouds of scarabs and for a moment I believe they're falling back until the first Black Cat leaps from behind and lands on one of our runners.

The cloud of scarabs in the shape of the massive cat chasing us is somehow far more solid than it should be and faster to boot. Two more of the imitations form out of the clouds behind and sprint along the canyon walls, quickly closing the distance between us.

"Oh no you don't!" Paulus releases his arbalest and in the blink of an eye the spear of the Hoplite is thrusting into the first Black Cat on the side of the ship before it can do too much damage.

"Is there any way to speed this thing up?"

"Damn good question. Kataphraktoi?!" Zenos shout resounding and reverberating in the pillar filled canyon. The cat runs overhead, the pillars mere perches.

Zenos eyes glow, giving us the second advantage necessary so we don't crash. The pillars come closer with each li we swallow in our chase with the small and nimble ship towards Goatpen.

"Let's try it!" Paulus dismisses the Hoplite, but not before giving another of the Black Cat's a good slap with the shield and then seconds later a thread of qi floats over, seeking my own. I complete Kataphraktoi with a thought and the shadows around the boat deepen and expand until the entire surface of the ship is covered. Shadowy hooves poke out the sides and begin flailing at the air. No, not like that.

A twist of will changes the formation to account for the ship at the same time Paulus adjusts his own side with a frown and the pearl glows bronze as things click into place. The ship lifts out of the sands on a wave of qi and quickly leaves our pursuers in the dust. Bronze armour manifests over the hull and oars of polished metal swing at the air, pushing us ever faster through the sky. A ramming horn slams into place at the prow, humming with violent intent for anything in our way.

With the first pillar becoming debris before our assembled might, we hear our blood singing. With each beat another pillar falls, taking another scarab with them or making the cat step aside to not get crushed. The beat of our singing blood gives way to an echo of a memory long forgotten by the clan, but like most things we cherish the blood remembers. WE are charging through the sea of enemies in a TRIREME and this cat shall become its latest victim!

The cat, not idling away, sits ready to pounce on the mouth of the canyon on a small rocky arch. It's mighty form waiting to pounce and shred us with its claws.

"Hit the arch!" Zeno shouts, sounding like a bell tolling through the connection they share.

The boat turns under the unity of two wills and crashes through the arch without pause. Rock crumbles, shatters, and becomes dust before the spiritual bronze ram and the force echoes far further than it should, cleaving a portion of the entire cliff apart.

The cat yowls and suddenly shifts from white to black, swapping places with one of its imitations seconds before it is crushed under tons of falling stone. The collapse seals the canyon behind us and the transformed ship only accelerates until the gathered energy gutters out and the Kataphrakoti begins to slip away, leaving only the ship we started with once more.

"Heads up and ready for combat, friend. This isn't over, I can feel it." Zeno cautions, hands still grasping the slightly cracked pearl tightly.

He is proven right seconds later as scarabs begin to pour out from amongst the stones. Streams of unnaturally coordinated insects burst from every gap, chittering like mad and cover the canyon walls in darkness. Three Black Cats rise from the formless tide and stride towards us. They make it barely three steps before they waver unstably and all three collapse, one of them becoming flesh and blood while the rest fade away.

The cat is wounded, one of its paws is crushed and a sizable gash has opened up across its ribs, but it does not retreat. If anything the aura of royalty has only grown stronger and the crown of scarabs around its head more glossy and beautiful.

For a moment the two parties stare at each other in silence. The boat rests on the ground, surrounded by a tide of scarabs that dare not draw any closer. The arrays are quiet now and the qi flooding through it has all but completely leaked out but Paulus remembers what it could be. The remnants of that moment still thrum through his veins like the basso voice of a mighty chorus; Of wars waged across regions, across realms, on land and on sea. Two voices are not enough, two hearts cannot beat this drum. He shakes his head, dismissing the insight for another time.

"Well that was flippin weird. Come on then you overgrown kitten. We don't have all day." He barks.

The remnants of qi on the boat gather in the hands of Zeno, the orb shining with prismatic lights in his left hand, the right wielding his fathers saber. His eyes search for a strategy in the masses of this enemy.

"You focus on the kitten, I'll take the rest." Zeno orders. The shining orb gathers interest by the scarabs. Their approach is slow, but steady and ready to melt us.

Paulus gets a talisman thrown at him. "Use it for your protection and take the shot."

He grabs the talisman from the air and slings the arbalest from his back once again. "Teach your grandmother to suck eggs. Go get em."

Thunder rumbles overhead and the arbalest thrums in his hands, building up a more powerful shot. The mechanism unfurls and reveals a spike of blackened copper already gathering qi on its tip.

With the lightning qi taking up the vision of the cat I start my work by dropping the orb. The dream qi of the orb making the scarabs dizzy before the next breath comes. Without pause I cut, relentlessly tearing through the horde and dancing around globs of acid thrown in my general direction. Their qi location sense thrown off, meant every third projectile melted an ally of theirs and all others created pits the size of small houses into the dusty rock. Before long I had the attention of the scarabs, their master of a cat forgotten by their monofocus on me.

The horde, already decimated by our chase, was nothing more than a small group by the end of the next breath. Without their master, their numbers can be cut apart in moments, their carcasses decorating the rock under my feet.

A flash of bright light illuminates the canyon as lightning, true lightning crashes down on the weapon in Paulu's hands. The copper spike grabs it all and redirects it in a powerful beam that melts everything between the instrument and its target. The cat collapses into a pile of some of the few remaining scarabs an instant before it's hit and its real body leaps with claws outstretched from the canyon walls. A deafening peal of thunder drowns out its yowls and kills even more scarabs as it zips through the sky. It chose its angle well, Paulus will not be able to turn in time.

The talisman glows and the everpresent sand beneath our feet springs up like a shield between Paulus and the beast, stopping the creature cold for just long enough for Paulus to swing the arbalest over and for lightning to sear its flesh and turn muscle to ash. The crown flickers but there are no scarabs remaining and the cat's real body falls to the earth surrounded by smoke and arcs of lightning. Even with a direct blow from the arbalest the cat does not die, but it can no longer avoid the Hoplite. A spear strike sends it off and the glossy crown tumbles from its head and rollsa short distance away.

Paulus frowns at the slightly melted arbalest and begins running his qi through it gently.

"This thing will take a while to fix. It regenerates but the lightning has been a bit stronger than normal recently. I think it has something to do with my breakthrough." he turns back to the boat in disgust and frowns even further at the damaged craft.

"How the heck are we gonna get this out of here?"

Sheathing his cleaned blade Zeno starts picking apart the shells of some scarabs. "Not every shell is melted. We can glue them together through sheer concentrated fire and hand pressure."

Taking a sewing Needle from his bag on the damaged boat, Zeno begins to sew shells into plates. "Can you get me the cat's spine intact? We can use that as a new spine for the ship."

"Uhh, I don't know about intact but I'll see what's left." Paulus says with a wince before leaving to do just that. The spine is somewhat singed but surprisingly whole when it's retrieved.

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With the Sandship repaired to something looking serviceable, we take that weird circlet and continue our journey.

"Paulus, a spirit stone for your thoughtful mug?" Zeno asks over the pearl, the boat slowly landing before the sprawling shanty town known as Goatpen. Our objective is obvious in this desert of cultivation and the locals make way for us as we walk.

The man in question humms wordlessly in answer as he visibly gathers his scattered thoughts. "Just...thinking about what happened in that fight you know. With the boat and things. Just another question on the giant pile I've built up about cultivation recently. Any idea what that was all about?"
"Which one, the divinely descended kitten or our blood singing, because I can assure you we would have been notified, if that cat was any more powerful?" A hobbling goat, falling from a roof, lands softly in the arms of family in a quick motion, while they walk. Dream qi helping to assure a soft fall.

"Both, either? I'm mostly thinking about the last one but a blessed cat was weird to run into too. And this thing." he replies, gesturing at the Scarab Shell Crown.

"This crown will be a good hunting treasure to show our goodwill for this continued arrangement. It not only shows our might, but also our benevolence. The Cat could have easily razed this town into the ground in an afternoon." his lecture caused another round of murmurs to spread among the citizenry.

Paulus sighs and flexes his cultivation, quickly locating the most powerful and beckoning them closer as he speaks. "Could be, could be. Definitely some kind of luck these guys are still here. Quite a bit of luck our boat jumped away from the ambush too. Guessing that was you?"

"Yeah, a lucky charm combined with an instinctive response array. Simple and effective. Especially, since it allowed me to gain a moment to right our landing." Zeno gets the agreed upon haul out of his bag.

"The rest was simple qi control every divinator of the clan knows by rote, just applied while in motion for once." While Zeno talks he makes sure to place every item upon a cloth on the ground, so all parties can see what will be exchanged.

Paulus watches the surroundings with a bored gaze, making sure nothing else is going to pop out of the sands. "Huh, I guess you should be the lookout next time then. I don't think my way of doing things is particularly suited to that."

"We`ll see, friend. First we should conclude our business. On that note, I would like to introduce ourselves. We are Paulus and Zeno, from the Golden Devil Clan, here to deliver the package."

The goatman regards us with an inscrutable look the way only the most stubborn and curmudgeonly of goats can manage and opens his mouth.

"Baaaaaaaah." He says. What a speech.

"Right. I don't know what I expected." Paulus says with a nod.

"They should be able to talk, at least if the clan's records are to be believed." Zeno scratches the back of his head in confusion.

Approaching the leader of this herd of goatmen he tries another approach. "Please, nod once if you accept the guaranteed upon things on the ground."

The goatman stares at Zeno in silence and pulls a surprisingly high quality Dream Seeking Reed from a pocket and begins chewing on the end.

"Baaaa." he assents with the slightest of nods.

"Good enough for me. Paulus?" A lifted left eyebrow from Zeno assuring everyone his intent.

"If anybody asks, we left it with them." Paulus shrugs

"Works for me."

As they leave the town plaza Zeno can't help but wonder. "Do you think we can find some good food for the road back?"

"Around here? Probably but only if you're into greens. I think I'll wait till we get back."

"Ha, suit yourself. While you stumble along with a rumbling stomach I`ll make my dream of good food a reality!" Zenos laughs for all to hear.

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AN: I hope you had fun reading the collab Falconis and I worked on this week! We sure didn´t plan a ship chase through a canyon when we started. :D

@Humbaba , @TehChron
 
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