Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Does anyone know the optimum age to begin cultivation and the cut-off age by which you basically have to begin to avoid wasting any talent you may have in this setting?

Writing an omake where these are relevant.

No official age as such, but cultivation slows aging - it doesn't reverse it. Past 40 you're really going to struggle to get anywhere, but it's not implausible for an 80-year old to start cultivating, turn out to be a Heaven-Defying Talent and make it to Nascent Soul.

Unlikely to the max, but not impossible.

It's nice to have the details for people who want to drop them, but generally speaking it's not needed--just I figure every Golden Devil has an official rank--but outside of full out musters they generally have a fair amount of freedom of activity as long as they're doing enough work to pay for their Cultivation Budget.

This is correct, but I'm sketching out broad societal structures for the Clan inspired by the last few posts now.
 
🙇‍♀️ I'm still a bit stumped on what Formation will be suitable. Honestly, the best i can come up with is a variant of the Philoctetes Formation where the Poison in it is replaced and enchanced by the poison in the puppets, maybe the Qi from the cultivators turning it into a aeresol weapon.
Each puppet works in different parts of the army, the snakes works like heavy Calvary or heavy infantry, big and tough and pointy. The bird is good with long range units, scorpions work well as siege weapons. The cactus is basically a trap so not really good in groups, and the hedgehog works well with the scorpion tunneling as a trap and directly as a formation breaker. Might need a new formation or system to use them well. Also the snakes can act as a Spiked shield for formations.
 
Keiros Cole Emendator 6 - The Hunt (Qiguai Secret Realm) - 1
The Hunt (Qiguai Secret Realm) - 1

It rained in the Qiguai Secret Realm.

It came down in great, sleeting sheets, each droplet a stone whipped through the dark. Even as Keiros watched, a tree fell, broken, to the ground, with a leaden crack, leaves and bark torn asunder.

To a cultivator – even a mere qi condensation cultivator of the sixth step – it was just water, falling from the sky.

Keiros had never seen rain before – Arin Lux was a desert city fed by underground aquifers – he had read about the phenomenon, of course, but it was still a challenge to not stick his tongue out like a child and taste that ever-used, and for desert-folk, ever-curious phrase: 'It was a dark and stormy night'. Jagged forks of lightning split a trembling sky, and every now and then, when the howling winds quieted, he could make out the rough, coiling forms of titanic sky serpents, the shadows they cast from behind the clouds hideously and soberingly huge.

Beneath his feet, water puddled and ran in strange, liquid lines, reminiscent of arrays. The ground was odd – in places, almost springy, and verdant with life, in others soggy, and noisy as it sucked at his boots. There were two swords on his back; fine, workmanlike tools, the scabbards more blood than leather at this point. At his chest, where the leather straps crisscrossed was another harness: this one for a book. It looked perfectly ordinary, but was one of the two truly heavenly treasures at his disposal. The Book of Ten Thousand Eyes, possessing within its oft-rewritten pages the wisdom of the Earth. No mere rain would harm it.

He was pretty sure, anyway. Normal water did little to it: he had checked.

At his side, on a chain, hung a small brass box: he opened it, and a needle, half-gold, half-silver, suspended over an obsidian interior, spun furiously beneath a clear glass dome, before settling on a direction. He snapped the case closed, nodding to himself.

A Compass of Fated Fortune. It would save his life once, he had been told, so long as he could open it before he died. It would do so, so The Book of Ten Thousand Eyes had claimed, under a very specific condition: he had to be following its directions.

Well, that direction was a good a direction as any to start his search.

Keiros began walking.

His shadow stalked the ground, appearing in fits and starts as the lightning continued to fall. Red eyed gazes peered out from behind the foliage, and disappeared just as quickly. Taking their example, Keiros broke out into a light run, air qi and physical conditioning lending speed to his steps before he leapt, without a sound, onto a low-hanging branch. It creaked, unexpectedly at his weight. He paused, his dark eyes thoughtful, before selecting his next branch.

This one made no sound, save for the tiny splash of moving water, masked by the rain.

Then he began moving, sharp and silent as a blade wielded in the dark. Minutes in, a pair of red-eyed shadow, shaped like eagles, but bristling with thorns, crossed his path, diving in from opposite angles. A flash of light later and it was over, a sword sliding back into its scabbard with a sh-nikt, and two bodies falling wetly to the ground, neatly quartered. He gestured. A pair of beast cores leapt, still sticky with blood, to his hand.

His jaw unhinged itself. He tossed them in -

And wrinkled his nose, not quite choking, but not quite not not choking.

Somehow, they tasted like flowers smelled.

Bah, whatever.

He swallowed, neck distending. It took a long, uncomfortable moment for the cores to reach his Beast Tempering Stomach.

And then it was like a bomb going off. He could feel his heartbeat thunder in his head, and the world became sharper, louder. Pain smacked him with a vicious, fishhook blow that pulled his stomach out through his nose and tried to shove his spine through a different orifice. He lost control of his sword aura – something he had not done in nearly a decade, his qi coloring the air around him gold, rain suddenly glancing off it, not him, before he got a grip on it and re-sheathed it in his body. Even so, steam rose in whisps from anywhere his skin was exposed as his blood boiled in his veins, and his heart threatened to explode.

Then it was over.

The rain washing over him sizzled quietly. When he opened his mouth, steam escaped as it would a kettle.

Ai ya, he could almost here Mistress Xu say, clucking her tongue. So smart, and yet so stupid.

He took a deep breath – and nearly choked at the feeling. It had been like breathing ice.

It was true what they said about the Secret Realm. Five minutes in and he had probably done more for his cultivation than the past five weeks. And he didn't need to consult the Book of Ten Thousand Eyes to know that those had been mere First or Second Step creatures: worthy prey would no doubt save him ten, no, twenty years of ceaseless, tireless cultivation.

Tempting. Oh, so very tempting.

And therein lay the trap. The power offered by the Secret Realm came at a price. He was thirty-six now, and of the Sixth Heavenstage – old enough and strong enough to know better. One did not enter the Qiguai Secret Realm on a whim. Not at the Sixth Step, not with one mere life-saving treasure, not for mere cultivation.

As the saying went: Three enter a Secret Realm; one returns. Two enter a Secret Realm, one might return. One enters a Secret Realm; none returns.

This was, by far, the stupidest thing he had ever done. And he had been a very, very stupid child.

Not his idea, this.

A… better person would not dwell on the events that had led him here. A better person would not feel resentment at the lost once-in-a-century opportunity that was the Yuan's Man-as-Mountain-Array, the Trials therein – not safe, but safer than those of the Qiguai Secret Realm. A better person would seethe at the fact he had spent the past fifteen years accumulating both the necessary wealth, experience, power and backing to purchase a slot that would see him take part. The Book of Ten Thousand Eyes would have made him a valuable companion to any group of Golden Devils partaking in the trials and he himself had planned on taking full advantage of it.

A better person. Sure, he was trying to be a 'better' person.

But, by the lords above and below, by all the ancestors that had come before him, could it be hard.

Yet, here he was. In the dark. In the rain. Risking death for a bunch of reckless, feckless, idiot children who were seeking death anyway.

Such was the price paid for a palace of power.

He understood. To an extent.

You could not tell children to sacrifice themselves for you, if they had never seen anyone sacrifice themselves for them. And they had not. They had but heard the rumors that their generation, was the Generation of Sacrifice, a youth led to the chopping block for a future that they would never get to see. There would be no life-saving Treasures, no pills, no reinforcements, no formations made to protect only them. No saviors. No heroes.

Just a Palace of Techniques for them to hone their craft.

And they were scared. So, they had come here. Come here, like children mimicking their parents, doing the same desperate gamble that the Archegetes had done when purchasing the Technique Palace and leaving little in the way of resources for the rest of the Clan. Either they would come out of the crucible that was this Secret Realm stronger – or they would not come out at all.

And they were not ready. First and Second Heavenstages without lifesaving treasures? Raw recruits, barely capable of holding a spear, let alone fighting in formation? One in ten might survive, if that. And that one in ten would be horribly maimed.

The Secret Realm itself was dangerous, but moreso than that –

He turned.

Already, he could feel them: other cultivators, attracted by his Sword Aura, making their way towards him. A gaggle of First and Second Heavenstage Golden Devils – of course, the others Sects and Clans partaking in the Qiguai Secret Realm would be hunting them down for sport. Cracking his neck, Keiros flexed his hands, rolled his toes, firmed his will, and then with a muffled boom that sent him soaring up towards the canopy of the forest, he leapt, landing on a branch perhaps fifty or sixty feet upwards. He reached into the pocket of his duster and took out a simple spyglass. Hard to use, especially in this weather, but he would only need to catch a glim-

There, maybe three li out, sword aura out like a raging white bonfire, was a Seven Saber Palace barbarian, riding a white stag, black hair whipping behind her like a pennant, sword already unsheathed, water curling about her in worrying streamers, riding like the wind itself.

She'd be here in less than a minute, Keiros estimated. There would be no outrunning her.

Flicking the latch open, Keiros took out The Book of Ten Thousand Eyes and flipped it open. Before his eyes, the pages began to ink themselves, details forming with unsurprising swiftness and precision.

One.

He turned, eye roving. He'd made the spyglass himself, carving arrays that would allow him to see through heat haze and solid rock: he'd have to add water, later. Ah, there, skulking against the night in black, an archer with an absurdly huge bow, clan or sect affiliation and even gender unclear, darting amongst the foliage in his general direction.

Two.

And – yes.

Yes, that would be perfect.

Within the eyeglass, he saw a huge, lumbering creature, made of wood and stone, shambling forth, carrying a club the size of buildings, less like a giant and more like a tree that happened to be able to move.

Three.

In the ten years with which he had had access to the jade-carved scrolls and technique slips, Keiros had picked out two arts from the Gemstone Justice Technique library: a sensory technique, one which gave up all specificity in favor of range and efficiency. Diamond Skin Sense provided a minor defensive boost, hardening one's epidermis, but could also allow the user to pick out the minutest vibrations made through the air as well as the earth. Useless, for the most part. Who would bother studying and memorizing the vibrational frequencies of hundreds, or even thousands of living things and then have the leftover brainpower to analyze that torrent of information in real-time and make extrapolations based on that prior information?

Well, other than him, that was.

It wasn't a perfect art. There were far better arts for a swordsman: ones that reacted to hostile intent, read the path and patterns of blade and qi, could see into the future by mere fractions of a second, provide total awareness within a certain sphereically bounded field, or infere experience, technique and skill through mere, momentary observation.

However, for someone like him, it was perfect.

What he needed was not immediate combat power, it was time to prepare. And the range of Diamond Skin Sense was truly second to none, a superlative technique if not for its downsides. He put away his spyglass and looked down, fingers swiping from left to right, eyes drinking in the information on the page in the time it took him to flip through them. He returned his book to its holster and latched it securely.

Below, the woman riding the white stag was already standing on the saddle, her eyes intent on his figure, one hand pointed at him, the other holding her sword up, at eye height, elbow drawn back, sword qi thrumming through her blade.

Keiros unsheathed both his blades, and running his thumbs across the a thorn stuck there for that very purpose, and felt his blood run along the hilts. Delicate arrays sprang to scarlet life beneath, while gold mandala-like patterns appeared across the blades of his swords before vanishing away, leaving but a faint golden glow. From both his sleeves, little bands of metal on ant-like legs crawled up his blades, before latching themselves securely to both, making them appear like they'd been covered in metal bandages.

An arrow flickered at him, covered in glowing, poisonous qi.

He batted it aside, contemptuous. A mere Third Heavenstage from a provincial little town no one had heard of, trying to get the drop on him?

Pathetic.

He leapt. Behind him, the tree exploded into splinters, the swordswoman's qi finally unleashed in a glowing, lambent arc of energy. Sword qi was not like other qi though: it had weight and presence, and had barely dispersed by the four foot thick trunk of wood. In that queer, queasy way the world sometimes went when in battle, things slowed, the tree and splinters moving so slowly you could count the raindrops as they splashed down onto them, see the crackle of heavenly energy behind it, threatening to take his head. He flipped in mid-air, and brought both his swords down against the Sword Technique and felt his arms tremble before the world righted itself in a tremendous clash of power which sent him hurtling away, hands stinging, new cuts opening up along his sleeves and gloves.

Right towards the Xiu clan's archer.

There were two ways to protect the young trainees. Find them and hide them, as a bodyguard might. Or hunt down everything which threatened them, tearing it out, root and branch. It was the conundrum faced by those much older, and much more powerful than himself.

How did one protect the Clan?

Keiros was well aware of his abilities - as well as the limits, of those abilities. He was not some hero out of a fairytale, able to single-handedly take on armies. He was, here, in this place, barely able to protect himself.

He corkscrewed in the air, rain falling off him in a spiral pattern, swords held before him.

But...

The Xiu archer had only a moment of surprise before he lost his head, the blood arcing against a tree trunk, the body toppling a moment after his head hit the ground, bow and arrow and other knick-knacks falling from nerveless fingers.

Keiros had fallen too, gracelessly, to the ground, mud smeared against his clothes and face. A half heartbeat later, she was there, lightning flickering at her feet, eyes wide and intense, lips curled into a snarl, her white, shining blade crashing into his, the streamers of water transformed into whips.

Keiros found his lips forming an answering snarl.

There was no 'but'.

It was time to get to work.

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Ten Thousand Eyes Compendium

Name: Ye Li

Species: Human

Cultivation: Eighth Heavenstage.

Details: A devout justicar, Little Ye comes from a well-to-do family of the Seven Saber Palace and has shown extreme promise, taking well to the Style of the Divine Lightning Dragon and the Divine Water Dragon. Her swordblows are flexible, quick, and penetrating; while she lacks little in the way of personal power, she is too young and too inexperienced to have built up a properly tactical frame of mind, being only twenty-three. A quirk of her mixed blood has made many otherwise wary beasts loyal to her, and though her gift only applies to beasts of a non-carnivorous lineage, it is still a formidable enough gift to have her given many cultivation aids to help her along her journey. She possesses an especially potent hatred for the Devil Bees and their allies and will sometimes lose reason when confronted with them. Hails from the Westernmost Province of the Seven Saber Palace, from the city of Cheng Jing.

She is currently intent on slaying Keiros Cole Emendator.

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Name: Snow

Species: North Wind Stag

Cultivation: Sixth Heavenstage.

Details: Snow was gifted to Ye Li when both were mere mortals. Possessing the rare 'air' attribute, the North Wind Stag is much lighter and weaker than it first appears - but also much faster too. Few creatures can match the dizzying pace it sets, and in the Forests of Shattered Spears from which it hails, Snow is accounted fast even among the other North Wind Stags. Snow adores Ye Li and has even taken blows for her in the past. However, like all North Wind Stags, Snow cannot stand the clans of South Wind Bears that occasionally stumble into the Forests of Shattered Spears: they are its natural enemy. Any scent of any bear is liable to either panic Snow, or incite Snow into an incredible rage.

It is currently intent on helping its master, Ye Li.

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Name: Xiu Ba Guang

Species: Human

Cultivation: Third Heavenstage

Details: A somewhat talented poison user, Xiu Ba Guang recently lost much of his cultivation due to debt, his qi siphoned away to pay for it. While he is an able archer, he is not especially formidable at Archery Arts, lacking both the qi and sensory arts that would make him a proper archer, capable of sniping other cultivators from afar, and instead relies on poisonous mists and other such gambits to bring down his foes when they try to close the range. Ironically, he is thus an archer weak against other archers, and strong at close range combat. A gambling addict, Xiu has decided to try his luck at the fabled riches of the Secret Realm, enticed to do so having seen many first and second heavenstage cultivators enter, not long ago. Hails from the Turtle Tailbone Village, a village in the Turtlebone Mountains.

He is currently deceased, having been separated from his head.

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Name: Moss That Falls into the Lotus Blossom

Species: Redbark Tree Tyrant

Cultivation: Ninth Heavenstage.

Details: Tree Tyrants are notorious for their strength and durability, each taking on the characteristics of the trees and forests that spawned them. A Redbark Tree Tyrant towers above even the mighty Oak Tyrants, and at its full height and age may even contest the supremacy of the Ancient Fire Giants, their natural foe. This specimen is young yet, having reached the equivalent of Ninth Heavenstage, and no more than fifty feet tall. Its bark will ward off even the sharpest of axes, and while it possesses little skill, its sheer mass gives it a power all of its own. Only Qi-infused blows or heavenly treasures will be able to inflict damage upon it. Being a Tree Tyrant, it is blind, using the rootsense it shares with other plants to understand where its foes are. Any who step upon the roots buried beneath loose soil, or the boughs or branches of trees in its vicinity are detectable – but those capable of flight, or standing upon 'dead' places are invisible to its senses.

It is currently angered by the presence of sword qi, considering it equivalent to a declaration of war.

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Author's Note: @occipitallobe, Life-saving Treasure, as described in the omake, a Compass of Fated Fortune. If the life-saving treasure has to be used up for the Trials, can I just... pretend the omake did happen, and get no rewards from it? His goal is to rescue the stupid teenagers who are trying to power up in time for the Trials, the actual rewards from the Qiguai Secret Realm are incidental to that goal.
 
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The Contribution Board, Social Organisation & the Legions
This is a post I've wanted to do for some time. I just haven't been quite able to make all the pieces fit together until now. They still don't fit perfectly, but I think my thoughts are finally coherent enough for a first draft. If there are any glaring faults, please let me know.

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Clan Society notes and FAQ:

The Clan were named the Imperial Optimatoi, in the Old Tongue - the Best Men. They are rightfully proud of this name, for somewhere in their history they were not only soldiers of the Imperator, but the best soldiers. This military structure has been passed down the years, and the Clan is the most military of all powers in the Region.

Sects tend to be more loosely organised, a group together for benefits, to pursue similar Dao. Clans tend to be more tight-knit, with circles of concern - those closest to the Elders and Experts being given more resources, and those with thin blood on the outside, contending for scraps.

The Golden Devils are more complex. At first, it looks similar to any standard cultivation Clan. That is to say that Clan blood - the blood of the Devils, or marriage into the Clan are the only true ways to join the Legions. Guest elders - or Foederati are permitted to assist for pay, but hold no true positions of authority. They might hold temporary command here or there, but it is a ephemeral thing and easily taken away.

So the first question is answered:

Who is a member of the Legions?

A Clan cultivator who chooses to join them. It is not required to join the Legions if you hold Clan blood and cultivate, but it is incredibly rare for a cultivator to do otherwise. Clan arts, Clan techniques, training methods, and so on are all optimised around the Blood of Bronze. If you are of Clan descent, joining the Legions is the easiest way to progress your cultivation.

There is a symbiosis here. Clan mortals who hold the Blood of Bronze hold the Legions in high esteem, and joining the Legions means resources for your family, your city, your guild - whatever you might choose. The Legions are scrupulously fair to the mortals in turn, demanding light tributes and rarely intervening in mortal affairs directly. While matters of cultivation resources are of course monopolised by the Legions, matters of civic governance for mortals are decided by mortals.

Cultivators rarely deal in mortal affairs, and can be punished for crimes like murder, torture, and so on of mortals. Theft as well - though all cultivation resources in Clan territory are de jure the property of the Legion (or Legion cultivators, vassals, or travelling cultivators), so for a mortal to hold cultivation resources and not be affiliated with the Legions in some fashion is unheard of.

All of Clan society is organised around the Legions in this sense. They are military forces, complete economic units, govern territories, run their own internal justice systems, and compete with one another for Legion Contribution Points.

What is a Legion?

At the heart of things, a Legion is a simple organisation within the Clan.

It is a group of cultivators under a Core Formation elder. Each elder has their own Legion, and tend to be referred to as a Legate. These Legions are not of fixed size, or of fixed composition, though average around ten thousand cultivators. Some Core Formation elders command twenty or even thirty thousand, and some command two or three, as befits differing purposes and strengths. Elders on the Council tend to command small Legions, primarily focused on administration, basic training, intrigue and the like. Elders on the periphery of Clan territory might command twenty thousand cultivators, the numbers necessary to keep down Blood Path rebellions and man fortifications.

Some Legions are mostly cultivators who build arrays and perform engineering works, some are mostly doctors, some scholars, some merchants. Each Legion is a society in microcosm, though, with doctors, merchants, scouts, soldiers, craftsmen, hunters, scholars, and bureaucrats all in one. It is not a solely military organisation, but rather the fundamental unit of the Clan.

There is only one rule for a Legion, and that is to be able to use the core arts of the Clan. All cultivators must be able to use the Hoplite Formation well. Outside of that, some name their commanders Centurions, others use the word for all Foundation Establishment cultivators. Some call their commanders Domestikos, some name them Tourmarches or Topoteretes. The Legions are diverse, and their purposes are many. They share a core strength, but cannot be said to be the same thing simply copied over tens of times.

How are Legions formed or destroyed?

No Legion is ever truly destroyed. The Clan holds records of three thousand, seven hundred and thirty-four Legion names, and numbers, and still retains eight hundred and two sets of Legion flags, standards, and other regalia. If a Legion is destroyed these items are attempted to be recovered, and held within core Clan territory. If a Elder should wish to form a new Legion, they pick from one of these, choosing one that suits their desires and personal ambitions. Most Elders tend to take on abandoned Legions - those who's previous Elder has died, though, allowing them to inherit a command structure and Contribution Points.

How does a cultivator join a Legion?

Usually they are assigned one after basic training. This is usually by bid - Legions pay Legion Contribution Points to gain their pick of varying disciples types, paying for what they need. A Legion in need of doctors and engineers will pay more in Points for them, and get more of them. This ensures Legions are requesting the types of cultivators they need, and that allocations work well.

So a Legion can say 'we'll pay more Contribution Points for more doctors', but the doctor candidates they get are assigned at random. They can also pay significant sums of Points to get specific cultivators allocated - if you want your son in your Legion, you'll need to pay through the nose. This makes some nepotism possible (as you can't stop nepotism), but allows the Clan to ensure nepotism is costly.

Can a cultivator switch Legions?

No. If a Legion's Elder dies and the Legion itself is dissolved after a new Elder cannot be found, yes. But broadly speaking Legions can assist one another (often paying Contribution Points - "please send your Foundation Building doctors to assist while we train our new doctors" to do so), but they cannot switch Legionnaires. A Legion is more than a military organisation. It is a subset of the Clan - your family, your friends, your social circles - for most cultivators their Legion is everything to them. You cannot switch Legions any more than you can switch mothers. This does not prevent temporary (or extended serving) under other Legions, of course, but to actually change your Legion is unheard of. You might go live with your family or not spend time with Legion (in the same way you might not live with your mother or spend time with her), but you can't change your Legion.

What about if they reach Core Formation?

Well, ok, yes. When a cultivator breaks through to Core Formation they are given their own Legion and spot on the Legion Contribution Board. Some Core Formation elders choose not to form a Legion at all - taking on regalia, name, and words, but no Legionnaires. This is rare, though. More common are the Elders who form a Legion, turn it over to a senior Foundation Establishment expert, and leave things alone, only to emerge for major problems.

Ok, so what about the Contribution Board? What is it? How does it work?

Contribution Points are simple enough. Every single cultivator has a score of Contribution Points. These can be exchanged for anything. Anything the Clan holds, anyway. Enough points and you can buy a visit from Old Gold himself to sort out your problem! (The price is prohibitive, though, so this is never done). The way this works is simple. All major resources are owned by the Clan. Not by the Legion, not by the cultivator, but by the Clan. Simply taking a Spirit Stone from a mine for your own use without paying for it is an offense.

In a sense the Clan is a little communist - it seizes the means of cultivation. Spirit Stone Mines, major Spirit Herb gardens, Qi gathering formations, concentrations of farmed Spirit Beasts - anything natural is owned by the Clan. Even if you were to cultivate your own garden, the Clan technically owns it. In practice these gardens are owned by the cultivator in question, who pay a sum of Spirit Stones to rent them out indefinitely.

Any unpaid-for natural resource is owned by the Clan. Once paid for (in some fashion), it is owned by that cultivator. This does not apply to manufactured goods (arrays, pills, items, etc), however.

However, Legions and cultivators are rewarded with contributions point for various tasks. For instance, a Legion overseeing a Spirit Stone Mine owns none of the Spirit Stones, but is given a stipend of Contribution Points for guarding the mine and producing the Spirit Stones - which they usually use on buying many of those Spirit Stones (at a lower price, too, as no transport is required).

So the Clan itself offers various resource-based 'missions', for harvesting resources of various kinds. These are set by the Elder of Administration. Her personal records are open to audit by any Elder who wishes to see them, to ensure corruption is kept to a minimum.

This is only the basic part of the economy, though. The other part is the individual cultivators themselves. Want something? You can trade Spirit Stones and items for Contribution Points and set missions yourself (or just use your Points you already have!). Ask for items, get things accomplished, etc, etc. The Contribution Points Board is like a big Spirit Internet, though limited in scope and scale for Qi Condensation cultivators. By recording your actions, you gain Points, and by spending Points you gain cultivation resources and useful items. While the basic prices for Spirit Stones and the like are set by the Clan, the majority of transactions are between individual cultivators - the Contribution Board facilitates a massive market economy for cultivators in resources, items, and missions.

Notably, the basic Contribution Board is only accessible to Qi Condensation and Foundation Establishment cultivators.

How about the Legion Contribution Board?

It's similar, but is comprised of actions taken by cultivators to benefit the Clan. Destroying Blood Path rebellions, helping protect cities, building up arrays to enrich mortals - these are missions given by the Clan Council, who desire certain things done. The Legion Contribution Board differs in that Core Formation Elders are able to purchase resources for both themselves and for their Legions here. They can also purchase sums of ordinary Contribution Points to encourage their Legionnaires to accomplish missions.

In economic terms, the basic Contribution Board essentially pegs a currency value (of Spirit Stones) and fixes various land value taxes (good land for Spirit Herb gardens, rights to hunt beasts of sorts in easy hunting grounds, better areas with superior Qi, and so on), and otherwise facilitates a market economy. The Council itself does not place important missions on the regular Contribution Board outside of rare occasions, though they do mandate various generous death benefits for cultivators.

The Legion Contribution Board gives incentive to Core Formation Elders to properly perform the key tasks needed to support the Clan. Fighting enemies, intelligence on various factions, training up better Legionnaires, protecting cities... the policy aims of the Clan are laid out here. In return for doing these tasks, Elders are given resources they need to progress their cultivation, points to buy more Legionnaires for their Legion - these Contribution Points are ultimately 'resources for Core Formation Elders' in some sense. So good management of a Legion means better progress for an Elder.

While filial piety and love of the Clan is good, ensuring correct behaviour is rewarded is better. The core function of the Council in a sense is giving the right missions and the right reward for those missions to the Clan Elders (or the Legates of the Optimatoi), to ensure even greedy and cowardly Core Formation Elders will work for the good of the Clan.
 
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This is really cool! It's an acknowledgement that wrangling your experts is a pain in the ass, and develops an entire society and system around encouraging your best to do their jobs without needing you standing over them with a club.

Which probably contributes as much as anything else to our ability to generally beat the snot out of numerically superior forces without getting crippled in the process, huh?
 
You could not tell children to sacrifice themselves for you, if they had never seen anyone sacrifice themselves for them. And they had not. They had but heard the rumors that their generation, was the Generation of Sacrifice, a youth led to the chopping block for a future that they would never get to see. There would be no life-saving Treasures, no pills, no reinforcements, no formations made to protect only them. No saviors. No heroes.

Just a Palace of Techniques for them to hone their craft.

And they were scared. So, they had come here. Come here, like children mimicking their parents, doing the same desperate gamble that the Archegetes had done when purchasing the Technique Palace and leaving little in the way of resources for the rest of the Clan. Either they would come out of the crucible that was this Secret Realm stronger – or they would not come out at all.

And they were not ready. First and Second Heavenstages without lifesaving treasures? Raw recruits, barely capable of holding a spear, let alone fighting in formation? One in ten might survive, if that. And that one in ten would be horribly maimed.
I really like this scene. The perspective on how the purchase of the Place of Technique would come across to the ones undergoing the trials and what they would do in their desperation was very interesting and definitely made me change a motivation Xiao Yi will have in a upcoming omake i was musing about.

I originally intended to have his reason to seek out strength to be due to improving himself because the Palace can't help him, but with this POV, i think i will change it to him seeking strength to better do his part to keep this generation alive so that as many survive as possible. I think that will fit better with what i have established on his devotion to the Clan.

There is only one rule for a Legion, and that is to be able to use the core arts of the Clan. All cultivators must be able to use the Hoplite Formation well. Outside of that, some name their commanders Centurions, others use the word for all Foundation Establishment cultivators. Some call their commanders Domestikos, some name them Tourmarches or Topoteretes. The Legions are diverse, and their purposes are many. They share a core strength, but cannot be said to be the same thing simply copied over tens of times.
This is a interesting take, it means that technically speaking any type of Rank names is possible since it can be counted as part of the Legion traditions.

More common are the Elders who form a Legion, turn it over to a senior Foundation Establishment expert, and leave things alone, only to emerge for major problems.
Hmm, with this i see opportunities for our Good Seeds to eventually become a commander of a legion for the Elder. This would be interesting to explore. I think for now to help me with making things more flexible i will just treat my Good Seed as constantly being on detached duties to other legions to help with Rapid Response Actions
 
This is really cool! It's an acknowledgement that wrangling your experts is a pain in the ass, and develops an entire society and system around encouraging your best to do their jobs without needing you standing over them with a club.

Which probably contributes as much as anything else to our ability to generally beat the snot out of numerically superior forces without getting crippled in the process, huh?

When I first thought about this quest there were three core things.

Focuses and Actions you know. The other third was basically Clan Wrangling - the constant effort of the top cultivator to actually get your guys to do the right stuff. Given the Clan went the 'ultramax unity' route I dumped that part of the system.

The absolute biggest advantage the Clan has is that it just sort of does the right thing. The Devil Bees lost a war and immediately fell into civil war. Herding cultivators is super tough, and the Clan is very good at it.

Most cultivation stories either ignore this problem (people are unfailingly loyal to people who extort, rule and mistreat them for no good reason) or embrace it (chronic cultivator backstabbing disorder)

One of my favourite organisations in a cultivation story is Heavenly Court from Reverend Insanity - occasionally the author just spends half a chapter describing Heavenly Court, its structure, and why it actually works instead of having constant backstabbing and betrayals. They're the supreme power in the world in part because they're very good at not doing that - in the latest arc where virtually all the other world powers are attacking them - Heavenly Court, despite being inferior in strength on paper is winning because they're willing to work together and sacrifice themselves in ways their enemies aren't.
 
Yeah, I knew that well, which is why I pushed for a route that maximizes our Loyalty at every turn.

I imagine that this is part of why despite everything going against us, we still inflict these ridiculous hundred to one kill ratios when someone has the stones to try picking a fight with us, huh? Maximum Loyalty + Formations + Emphasis on being steadfast + Hoplite Signature = UNGA BUNGA, right?
 
I really like this scene. The perspective on how the purchase of the Place of Technique would come across to the ones undergoing the trials and what they would do in their desperation was very interesting and definitely made me change a motivation Xiao Yi will have in a upcoming omake i was musing about.

I originally intended to have his reason to seek out strength to be due to improving himself because the Palace can't help him, but with this POV, i think i will change it to him seeking strength to better do his part to keep this generation alive so that as many survive as possible. I think that will fit better with what i have established on his devotion to the Clan.

The Palace is super cool! I love it. I also think that there must be some sort of weird cultural thing that happens the closer you get to the Trials.

Like, theoretically, there's going to be this population boom right after the Trials, because if you're a forward thinking type of person you go 'oh, it's pretty safe to have kids now' and people get started on those families they've always wanted. Now, maybe that's not true, maybe people wait until tennish, or twentyish years after the Trials once the local powers are repelled because they do their traditional 'is this the point at which the Golden Devils die? oh whoops, no, maybe next time.'

But the closer you get to the Trials the less people are gonna want to have kids. I mean, this disaster is cyclical, everyone knows what's coming, even the ones that aren't Golden Devils must have figured out what some of the rules are.

So that means the well-established leaders and elders and elite aren't going to be having kids so close to the Trials.

But people also aren't going to stop having kids. So there's gotta be this window of time where everyone knows that these recruits - maybe they're from poorer families or whatnot - are just being raised to be slaughtered, where it would literally be better to not cultivate and stay a mortal than to cultivate and face the Trials. Historically, the Clan must have provided something -be it treasures or pills to help blunt the Trials, but this time it didn't.

This time it simply said: hold the line.

Again, these aren't the elite. They don't have the resources to help protect themselves. They only have each other.

And I have to assume that teenagers being teenagers, some fucked off to a Secret Realm in order to a) rebel and b) have a fighting chance during the Trials because if the Clan ain't gonna support me, I gotta support myself.

Personally, I think it's a fun conceit to bring into the omakes because you get to write out a genuine generation gap and internal clan conflict while your character ages and becomes part of that previous generation. Idk, it's the kind of thing I like.
 
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Yeah, it's a nice conceit--and it actually inspired me.

So I'm going to be working on my first Rina Omake for the turn now. Please wait warmly until it's ready.
 
Year 80 Interlude - The Hammer-Blow of Heaven
Adhoc vote count started by cheesyme on Oct 2, 2020 at 6:12 AM, finished with 196 posts and 14 votes.

  • [X] Plan Old Dickory, Technique Palace Version
    -[X] Accept the Deal
    --[X] "It is regrettable that the Golden Devil Clan has little choice but to accept that their unjust demands of mere material wealth in the face of the noble and righteous efforts of the Strength Purity Sect are merely craven opportunism, the result of grasping too far to satiate their bottomless greed as members of the Demonic Powers. But given the Strength Purity Sect's many successes in the Ninth Demon Annihilating War, it is only natural that as the Golden Devils stand in awe of the Righteous Paths power and justice, that they give the Strength Purity Sect the necessary face of continuing to mete out Heaven-Sent justice upon the monstrous Blood Path Cultivators of the Demonic Altar Sect. And if some of their ill-begotten treasure, doubtless wrested from those poor innocents under their sway somehow leave their hands? It is only natural that they fall into those more needy than themselves, such as the paragons of justice: The ever-honorable Flood Dragon Gang, who's loss was the first shot in this tragic but necessary war."
    -[X] Kill Him
    --[X] "The Soul Draining Parasite is a subtle creature. It does not hatch, save when there is a great amount of ambient qi to nurture the egg and provide nourishment. From there it drains only a small amount, a droplet of qi from it's host to sustain itself in its larval form. Growing swiftly but steadily, matched to it's host like one of any number of parasites found in the wild. It remains, largely indistinguishable from it's hosts own Qi even as it draws more and more of its hosts energies into itself, fueling its growth until even a Nascent Soul is unable to sustain this burden without harm to themselves. What makes this all the more deadly, is that though the Soul Draining Parasite is a rare creature, to match its rarity and better enable the pursuit of its true hosts, why, this smallest of Demonic Beasts can - like the many insects in the world - reproduce and scatter its eggs upon the winds of Qi, and only requires that the prospective host take that Qi into themselves willingly, if not knowingly. Such a nefarious creature."
    -[X] Training Soldiers - Raising Disciples to higher Realms is all well and good, but training them to be perfect members of Formations is better. Ensure your Clan is trained and ready for war. Your readiness to go to war will increase significantly, though this fades over time.
    --[X] "Heraclius is a good man, if limited. Unfortunately, due to the needs of the moment and the desperation to consolidate our many gains these past few decades, it is necessity itself to integrate our command structure as thoroughly as possible to make up for the losses of two Protostrator within a century. The Trials are approaching, and thus we must do everything possible to retain as much strength as possible in order to take advantage of this newly chaotic landscape, where opportunity and danger await in equal measure. Ha! Just like always, in this unjust world of yours!"
    -[X] Hunt An Enemy (The Seven Divine Saber Core Formation Elder) - Why not? Hunt down enemies, see if you can kill someone. Usually used against an opposing Nascent Soul. Potentially very dangerous.
    --[X]"A most fortuitous circumstance in a larger tragedy, Lady Jiao. Preliminary investigations of the corpses condition have revealed that the poor man was afflicted with a fully matured Soul Draining Parasite. We have not performed an autopsy of course, but from all appearances it seems that this man was never intended to finish the journey to Jiangshen Clan along our Scorpion Road. Presumably the numerous efforts by our Golden Devils to renovate and improve the Road triggered the creature to hatch, and devoured the poor Elder to death before he completed his journey, though it seems odd to sacrifice an individual so valuable on such a poorly built frame job. Hmm? How do they reproduce you ask? Why, the eggs are implanted into a host by sending them along emanations of Qi, so it is all but impossible to implant one into an unwilling target you see, as they must be prepared to take in and integrate foreign Qi, a practice that is nominally restricted to the reproductive habits of certain-Is something the matter, Lady Jiao? You've gone rather pale all of a sudden."
    -[X] Purchase Broken Eight-Hundred and Eighty-Hundred Technique Cultivation Palace (20 Wealth)
    --[X]"A remarkable opportunity indeed. Ordinarily it would be a wiser choice to act on the opportunities already present, and prudence would stay our hand in favor of securing the lives of our fellows as much as possible. But here we have been presented an opportunity to gamble. Yes, our Juniors will be less prepared to weather the trials ahead of us. There is no helping that we have been immeasurably weakened by the conflicts we have already experienced this past hundred years. Yet. Here and now, lies an opportunity to permanently reverse the weakening of our Juniors. It is a strength that is not spent in one simple burst of power. A one-time expense of wealth made in desperation. This is a gamble, make no mistake, that our losses from these coming Trials will not be so ruinous as to destroy us. That the strength we can obtain from this coming Trial will mean that this is the weakest we shall ever be again. A renewed strength for our Qi Condensation Cultivators, and a new path. A new Grand Project. Should we repair this Technique Palace, all our Juniors shall benefit, new techniques, new power, and the retention of what would otherwise be lost in the greater investments of our Foundation Building and Core Condensing Cultivators. Let us take this gamble, a last, final pain to endure, for the sake of a far better tomorrow. That never again shall we fall so low as we have now."


I think it's reasonable to call this vote closed.

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Manuel delivered the last of his decision. It had been perhaps an hour of laying out his logic, his principles, what he thought the road ahead took.

""A remarkable opportunity indeed. Ordinarily it would be a wiser choice to act on the opportunities already present, and prudence would stay our hand in favor of securing the lives of our fellows as much as possible. But here we have been presented an opportunity to gamble. Yes, our Juniors will be less prepared to weather the trials ahead of us. There is no helping that we have been immeasurably weakened by the conflicts we have already experienced this past hundred years. Yet. Here and now, lies an opportunity to permanently reverse the weakening of our Juniors. It is a strength that is not spent in one simple burst of power. A one-time expense of wealth made in desperation. This is a gamble, make no mistake, that our losses from these coming Trials will not be so ruinous as to destroy us. That the strength we can obtain from this coming Trial will mean that this is the weakest we shall ever be again. A renewed strength for our Qi Condensation Cultivators, and a new path. A new Grand Project. Should we repair this Technique Palace, all our Juniors shall benefit, new techniques, new power, and the retention of what would otherwise be lost in the greater investments of our Foundation Establishment and Core Formation Cultivators. Let us take this gamble, a last, final pain to endure, for the sake of a far better tomorrow. That never again shall we fall so low as we have now."

"Archegetes, I don't disagree. But..."

Manuel looked at Euphrosyne. He had been facing stiff opposition. Three-fifths of his Council disagreed with him, and disagreed firmly. They had coalesced around Euphrosyne - being the strongest cultivator in the Clan aside from himself in terms of raw strength.

"It is my decision ultimately, Stratopedarches. I know what you are saying, though. I am condemning tens of thousands of juniors to death who would not otherwise die."

She shook her head.

"Such decisions are made. But is it truly wise? I am just not sure if the benefits outweigh the costs. To plan for a thousand years when a hundred is so difficult to endure alone... we have made such long-term choices and suffered for them. The Turtlebone Expedition. The Olympian Keystone Project. The Swords of Night and Day."

Manuel smiled.

"It is not that, Euphrosyne. The hammer-blow is coming. I can feel it, you know. The counterpart to the Will of Heaven, whispering in my ear. The last gathered blow of Heaven, waiting for an opportunity to destroy us. To strike us down once and for all. It is inevitable."

She reeled back in shock.

"And so you are inviting our doom? Are you mad with despair?"

He closed his eyes briefly, feeling. The force that remained, the blow to come. The potential end of the Clan, the end of their long and storied history. The ultimate victory of Heaven over Devil, of the immutable laws of the world proving themselves truly immutable.

"I am inviting our doom."

She rose up in anger, and Manuel raised a hand.

"Peace, Euphrosyne. I can feel the blow about to fall. It is coming. Nothing can stop it, though I have delayed it. Set traps, outfoxed it, bent my will to hiding from it. Do you think the current crop of geniuses are mere coincidence? Without Heaven oppressing them so cruelly, they have been able to rise as none before them. Have we seen any equal to the Callista girl in the last thousand years? Do you think we raise a Xiao Yi every century? The potential has been there, but the growth... these seedlings have grown like none before them. Do you deny it?"

She shook her head slowly.

"I have hidden them. Hidden us, perhaps. The Shadow of Heaven's Will cannot easily oppress Heaven, but it can win minor victories, prevent Heaven from bearing down on us so tyrannically. There is only a little of that ancient curse left, a scrap of power compared to what once was. Yet it remains, waiting for a final moment to expend its strength and end the Clan. I cannot stop it, nor can I slow it for much longer. But I have provoked it. And now? I am inviting it. Better a flesh wound than a fatal one."

The blood drained from her face.

"The damage to the Clan-"

"What damage is greater than Heaven opposing us? It can bring disaster on us as it chooses, and the next disaster will be great. I had considered inviting it out in the Devil Bee War, but felt uneasy. I realise now had I exposed myself I likely would have been wounded, perhaps even crippled. Maybe even dead. Imagine if I had been crippled during an invasion?"

Euphrosyne looked at him, still frightened, now a little furious.

"And so you send tens or even hundreds of thousands of juniors to their deaths to preserve your own life?"

Manuel looked at her. She wasn't thinking rightly, he knew. Her fear and anger were overwhelming her reason, though he did not blame her.

"Yes. If we had two Nascent Souls, I would have chosen differently."

"Coward!", she spat.

Manuel ran his hand over his head. He wanted so desperately to scream at her, to let her see that it was not cowardice, that dying was preferable to this. Who wanted to rule, truly? Running a Clan when your friends were all dead and your days were miserable? Only a madman or one obsessed with living over all other considerations would choose this life if it were not for duty, not for protecting your juniors and your people. It wouldn't help, though.

"Think as you like, Euphrosyne, and speak as you like - within Council. Will you obey my decision and hold your tongue outside it?"

She nodded.

"I am only inviting it. It may not take the bait. But I am saying to you now, we are in desperation. Enemies surround us, and we are weak. Heaven opposes us, and our old territories are lost to us. We retreated, and fled, and escape, and ran, and kept retreating for millennia. Our backs are against the wall, now. There is nowhere left to run. Nothing left to do but throw the dice. If I can tilt them a little in our favour... I hope our juniors would forgive me for such a choice. Still, think!"

He was more passionate now, losing the even tone in his voice.

"If we should survive, what better opportunity is there? Still we have peace with the Cannibals, the Devil Bees are in civil war. The Righteous Powers are in a war of their own, unable to easily send expeditions across the mountains! If there was ever a time to be weak, it is now! If I can invite Heaven to expend its curse of vile luck upon us, we will be much weakened, yes. But our foundations will be strong. We can raise up new cultivators, new juniors stronger than ever. Without Heaven working against us they can rise quicker, and we will be able to grow beyond our current bounds! I am staking much, but there is much to be won."

She looked at him, still angered.

"It is your decision, Archegetes. I can only hope as many as possible live to regret it."
 
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Again, these aren't the elite. They don't have the resources to help protect themselves. They only have each other.

And I have to assume that teenagers being teenagers, some fucked off to a Secret Realm in order to a) rebel and b) have a fighting chance during the Trials because if the Clan ain't gonna support me, I gotta support myself.

Personally, I think it's a fun conceit to bring into the omakes because you get to write out a genuine generation gap and internal clan conflict while your character ages and becomes part of that previous generation. Idk, it's the kind of thing I like.
I agree! And i think part of the reason i really like it is also because that's literally why i had my Good Seed go to the Secret Realm last turn. To look for resources & Opportunities to better survive the Trials, so this does resonate.

Except for this poor chaps, they don't have the luxury of a outside source funding them with loot. Like if i didn't prepare with a LST, my Good Seed would have been just as dead as the current batch, so their attempts to risk it all does strike a chord.

The Swords of Night and Day."

Manuel smiled.
Ayyy! You can't do this to me! The Swords of Night And Day!! I can feel my David Gemmell fanboy rising! Like i'm seriously considering setting future turn Goals now to " seek out info on the Swords of Night and Day "
Have we seen any equal to the Callista girl in the last thousand years? Do you think we raise a Xiao Yi every century? The potential has been there, but the growth... these seedlings have grown like none before them. Do you deny it?"
:cry: That Namedrop! I'm so Grateful that Manuel knows him!
I realise now had I exposed myself I likely would have been wounded, perhaps even crippled. Maybe even dead. Imagine if I had been crippled during an invasion?"
Oh wow, we really dodge a bullet there, Good Job those who voted to keep Manuel in Stealth Mode!
We retreated, and fled, and escape, and ran, and kept retreating for millennia. Our backs are against the wall, now. There is nowhere left to run. Nothing left to do but throw the dice. If I can tilt them a little in our favour... I hope our juniors would forgive me for such a choice. Still, think!"
I can feel the Epicness in the speech. In the movie, this will be when the BGM starts to get dramatic!
If there was ever a time to be weak, it is now! If I can invite Heaven to expend its curse of vile luck upon us, we will be much weakened, yes. But our foundations will be strong. We can raise up new cultivators, new juniors stronger than ever. Without Heaven working against us they can rise quicker, and we will be able to grow beyond our current bounds! I am staking much, but there is much to be won."
Climax of the BGM! I can hear the trumpets blaring! But yeah, this is really motivating in encouraging to help reduce the risk of the Trials via churning out as many Omakes as i can so that Xiao YI's Fate roll can hopefully play a bigger part with dealing with the Trials!
 
Ooof.

So, as expected, it was bait, but I guess our stunt was good enough that it at least partially mitigated the backlash?
 
better pump out those omakes :V

/boxer

I MUST WORK HARDER

A tide of work to shift our fate!

Ahahahahaha...

cripes though my heart's beating, this game is barely in its infancy and already, I've grown to love them. We cannot afford to lose this, and must do everything in our power to change this terrible fate.

Not to reconquest.

But to endure the last hammerblow.
 
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Oh damn I forgot to vote on this. Oh well.

I don't think I'll be doing any omake. Let Nicovas's fate be what it will. Writing brain has exhausted its juice on other things lately.
 
On another note, I'd like to comment a little bit on some meta meditations I've had.

While on the surface, Manuel is an unapologetic Xehanort reference by my original intent, there's another layer to it that I am beginning to see as the story unfolds, and his characterization develops.

Ultimately, this universe is a work of fiction. The rules are decided by the one who writes it.

It can be said then, that the Author represents the 'Heavens' They dictate the rules, they declare the actions and norms, and roll the dice--weighting them as desired to create a desired outcome

What then is its Shadow?

The shadow is what is formed by the influence of the Heavens.

We, the players and readers, are the Shadow of Heaven. We must abide by its rules, we cannot reach in and simply tell everyone what the correct answer is. Because we don't know--the Heavens guard their secrets well. But we can guess--we have perspective in a way that nobody who exists in the universe has. We do not know where fortune is going, and we cannot change the narrative.

Not on our own.

But in casting this Shadow, it gains power. The very act of shining light on this universe ensures that the Shadow grows. And so the Shadow gains little pieces it can play. Nothing too unreasonable--a push here, a nudge here, whispers into the ear of the right people, guiding them to places and treasures they wouldn't reach on their own. And we do this by highlighting parts of this world that are beneath the notice of the Heavens.

We are nothing without the light of the Heavens (Without the world being told to us by the author), but the Good Seeds mechanic is how we influence this world.

The Heavens seek to sear away this group with their light.

But that gives us all the more power to cast shade upon their target.

Friends of the thread, the time is now. The Shadow of Heaven cannot directly oppose the Will of Heaven--but we can influence matters ever so slightly.

If ever there was a time to bring your A-game, it is now, when Heaven is rearing up for its killing blow.
 
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Trial Mechanics For Good Seeds
This upcoming turn is the Hundred-Year Trials!

Good Seeds all get an exciting Fate roll - it's a normal Fate roll, but your chances of wounding, crippling, and death are much higher.

Still good stuff to be had on the top end.

However, for characters who want to take huge risks for no personal rewards you get a new option!

Saving Juniors.

Instead of merely saving your own life, you work to assist the Clan, saving lives, sending more Fifth Sea cultivators back to their Sea, taking risks to help Clan members, taking fights instead of running, etc, etc.

In-game this manifests as an extra bonus roll - each Good Seed that chooses Saving Juniors gets a bonus roll.

These bonus rolls become a boost to Clan rolls when it comes to each cohort of the Clan. So Qi Condensation cultivators can only save Qi Condensation and so forth. The stronger you are relative to your Realm the better the boost (or more specifically, the more bonus dice you'll get to roll) - if you're a new Good Seed at the 1st Heavenstage doing this you can't help much.

If you're at the peak of Qi Condensation you can possibly save hundreds of juniors (with good enough rolls).

Personally, it manifests as worse outcomes for your Fate roll - even worse than the current bad setup! More likely to be wounded, crippled, or slain. The top end of rolls still offer cool stuff, but the bottom end of rolls are... expanded.

Not advised for those without Lifesaving Treasures.

To opt-in, put 'Saving Juniors' in the Turn Notes section of the spreadsheet.
 
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This upcoming turn is the Hundred-Year Trials!

Good Seeds all get an exciting Fate roll - it's a normal Fate roll, but your chances of wounding, crippling, and death are much higher.

Still good stuff to be had on the top end.

However, for characters who want to take huge risks for no personal rewards you get a new option!

Saving Juniors.

Instead of merely saving your own life, you work to assist the Clan, saving lives, sending more Fifth Sea cultivators back to their Sea, taking risks to help Clan members, taking fights instead of running, etc, etc.

In-game this manifests as an extra bonus roll - each Good Seed that chooses Saving Juniors gets a bonus roll.

These bonus rolls become a boost to Clan rolls when it comes to each cohort of the Clan. So Qi Condensation cultivators can only save Qi Condensation and so forth. The stronger you are relative to your Realm the better the boost (or more specifically, the more bonus dice you'll get to roll) - if you're a new Good Seed at the 1st Heavenstage doing this you can't help much.

If you're at the peak of Qi Condensation you can possibly save hundreds of juniors (with good enough rolls).

Personally, it manifests as worse outcomes for your Fate roll - even worse than the current bad setup! More likely to be wounded, crippled, or slain. The top end of rolls still offer cool stuff, but the bottom end of rolls are... expanded.

Not advised for those without Lifesaving Treasures.
I think, unsurprisngly, i am done making omakes for ambrus nike. Just too busy and life and stuff. Can i request for him to die saving some juniors or maybe another players character from death or crippling (who i save is decided randomly by a die?)
 
This upcoming turn is the Hundred-Year Trials!

Good Seeds all get an exciting Fate roll - it's a normal Fate roll, but your chances of wounding, crippling, and death are much higher.

Still good stuff to be had on the top end.

However, for characters who want to take huge risks for no personal rewards you get a new option!

Saving Juniors.

Instead of merely saving your own life, you work to assist the Clan, saving lives, sending more Fifth Sea cultivators back to their Sea, taking risks to help Clan members, taking fights instead of running, etc, etc.

In-game this manifests as an extra bonus roll - each Good Seed that chooses Saving Juniors gets a bonus roll.

These bonus rolls become a boost to Clan rolls when it comes to each cohort of the Clan. So Qi Condensation cultivators can only save Qi Condensation and so forth. The stronger you are relative to your Realm the better the boost (or more specifically, the more bonus dice you'll get to roll) - if you're a new Good Seed at the 1st Heavenstage doing this you can't help much.

If you're at the peak of Qi Condensation you can possibly save hundreds of juniors (with good enough rolls).

Personally, it manifests as worse outcomes for your Fate roll - even worse than the current bad setup! More likely to be wounded, crippled, or slain. The top end of rolls still offer cool stuff, but the bottom end of rolls are... expanded.

Not advised for those without Lifesaving Treasures.

Does the saving juniors option replace the cool thing bonus or can we pick the cool thing bonus to be a LST and then go be Spiderman like my latest omake setup?
 
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