Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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@occipitallobe

1. Can I write-in 'Hunting Down 5th Sea Good Seed Hunters for their stuff' for Savvas? You said that they were the best of the 5th Sea, and so they must have good shit on them right?
2. When do we use 'Fighting Across Realms' bonuses? Now seems like a good time.
 
...So @Alectai I have some questions.

Gathering elites into kill teams was already described as the way to preserve their lives. The issue is that the weaker cultivators will die BECAUSE the elites are separated from them and they won't be defended.

"Saving Juniors" is not an action of hunting the enemy. It's an action of staying with these weaker groups and defending them.

Is that what we're planning in that Hammer of Heaven thing?
 
...So @Alectai I have some questions.

Gathering elites into kill teams was already described as the way to preserve their lives. The issue is that the weaker cultivators will die BECAUSE the elites are separated from them and they won't be defended.

"Saving Juniors" is not an action of hunting the enemy. It's an action of staying with these weaker groups and defending them.

Is that what we're planning in that Hammer of Heaven thing?

My impression is that it's a bit of both. The first phase of the Trials usually begins with the enemy scattered, and so we dispatch Kill Teams to headhunt as many of them as we possibly can while they reorganize, while the tower defense stuff is a later phase that can be made easier depending on how well phase one goes.

More importantly, if there's a fast moving Aquila Formation filled with a murderblob rolling in and fucking shit up, it encourages them to group up first or else they just die in pieces.

Truthfully speaking though, if this becomes a bunch of sieges, casualties are going to mount up very quickly. They'll keep fighting until we run the clock or they all die. But the fewer of them running after our Juniors, the less damage they can do--while our Juniors are still moving and so interference can often buy time for them to get away from a kill-team.

It's a dynamic defense thing that gets the best results, really. We can't save everyone even if we make sure every group has a buddy--because if we're not interfering with them--there's nothing stopping them from preparing a murderball and jumping our people en-masse, which means they start racking up kills no matter what we do. If they're too concerned about a giant two-headed eagle going SCREE!!! and eating them alive though, that forces them to stay separated--which means that they get fewer kills before being overwhelmed by numbers or formations.
 
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Xiao Yi [Through the eyes of others]

Let's get down to business, to defeat -

The shrieking whine of the Alarm Arrays woke Wu Gui from his slumber. Getting up with a groan, he turned his head towards the approaching Head of the Night Duty Detail and barked out a sharp order.

" Report "

Wait, who's this guy? Also, I really think the readability would be improved a lot by even a single editing pass, the missing period here is painful. This is the last time I'm gonna harp about grammar though, I'm pretty sure you're already aware of it.

Snapping to attention, the Cultivator burst into a brief report: " Boss, the Arrays detected the presences of cultivators approaching out position from 5 Li away, i've dispatched Yang to scout for their numbers and cultivation levels with his Spirit Bird "

" Hmrph, get the Cattle to serve me some wine while we wait " so saying, Wu Gui sat on his traveling chest as his subordinate hastened to fulfill the order, commanding the nearest mortal he could spot to bring wine.

Within a few minutes, the wine was brought to Wu Gui by a young girl about 10 years in age who served him with trembling hands as she poured it into the goblet Wu Gui held out to her. Sniffing the wine in appreciation and embracing the metallic aroma waffling from the goblet, Wu Gui gulped down the goblet of Blood Wine, enjoying the rich iron taste it left on his tongue as well as the unique flavors added to it from the souls of the mortals added during the distillation process.

Savoring the aftertaste, Wu Gui couldn't help but muse about his current situation. Ever since the Civil War between the Blood Cannibal's 2 Nascent Souls started, Wu Gui saw the writing on the wall and knew that with his 9th Heavenstage Cultivation he would serve as nothing but cannon fodder to both powers. Quickly fleeing the sect with some trusted juniors as well as the Clan's stock of Quality Human Cattle, he managed to avoid being drafted by either power and within a decade into the conflict managed to established himself as a purveyor of Quality Cultivation materials to both sides.

For 40 years, the war allowed him to raise generations of Human Cattle who knew nothing but the fate of being slaughtered, their docility and the needs of the war allowed him to quickly amass resources, enough resources to even begin preparing his attempt to challenge the Foundation Establishment Tribulation. But it was all ruined when Corpse Gulper was killed, within a year of his death, Wu Gui found himself fleeing his Farm and culling his stock, only bringing with him the cattle that had the spark for cultivation.

I'll make it all back! Once i make it to the Devil Bees lands, i'll be able to sell these cattle to them as Cultivation Furnaces, with the wealth i get, i'll ascend to Foundation Establishment and seek entrance into the Devil Bees!

The sensation of something warm and sticky on his hand woke Wu Gui from his thoughts, snapping to attention he noticed that the young mortal girl had spilled some of the wine onto his hand while refilling his cup. Growling in anger, Wu Gui hit the girl with a quick backhand knocking her to the ground. With his hand still raised, he channeled his Qi towards it making it take a reddish glow as he prepared to kill the girl for her mistake.

Before he could strike, his attention was caught by the return of his subordinate who quickly reported his findings. " Boss, Yang reports that there seems to be about 10 Cultivators mounted on Spirit Beasts approaching our convoy, he thinks the strongest is 9th heavenstage like you, but seems to have just entered it. They seemed to be Golden Devils, most of them have that golden hair on their heads. "

" Shit. I was prepared to bribe them with some of the cattle if it was Old Cannibal or Corpse Gulper's men. If it's the Golden Devils, we'll have to fight. Get the men here and bring all the cattle into the center of our camp. Tell Yang to wake up all his Spirit Scorpions and get Wei to start laying down arrays to protect us. " Quickly snapping out orders that stirred the camp into a frenzy, Wu Gui ignored the trembling girl before him and return to his tent to dress for battle.

Okay, I think I get it. You're setting the scene.

The guy's a bad guy. A little cartoonish, but that's fine, not every cannibal needs to be a well-rounded individual, and, if anything, it's probably better for a cannibal not to be a well-rounded individual. I learned about the Donner Party today, and geez Louise, that final survivor to be rescued did not need to be as real as he was: I was spooked.

At the same time though, it's a tricky balance: xianxia falls on its face a lot because its villains are incapable of elevating the story. One Piece and shounen in general has some amazing villains, and it's probably at least half the reason why any given shonen title is so successful.

I've just read your omake and I guarantee you that I've already forgotten who he is.

I do appreciate the PG treatment here though where the girl survives. You could have just as easily killed her to make it clear how evil the dude is, but you didn't. I like your restraint. :V

The sun had just started to rise by the time the Golden Devils came into view. Wu Gui now wielding his Ghost Banner, quickly gathered his men around him as a sole member of the force rode out towards him.

" Child-Eating Butcher Wu Gui, surrender now and we'll give you a quick death! Don't and we'll kill you and ensure your soul is used to refine pills! " The arrogance of the Golden Devil Clansman drove Wu Gui into a rage, yelling back in response

" You think just 10 of you can take me and my boys! We survived being a merchant to both sides of the War and drove away countless attempts to take our goods, you think a Greenhouse flower like you can take us !? Come then! Your flesh will allow me to ascend into Foundation Establishment ! "

Okay, first interesting point: there are greenhouses and they're apparently common enough for a Blood Path cultivator to know about them. I find that reasonable seeing as there are probably all sorts of rare herbs and plants that need very specific temperatures and environments, and while I'm not sure the Blood Path is super aware of this, the guy is a merchant.

Second: I didn't realize that Blood Path cultivators were respected enough to be treated as... essentially... people. This wasn't a sudden, vicious attack, the Golden Devils walked up to them and told them to surrender first. Interesting characterization. I 100% would have played it as Keiros just straight out going: okay, let's first mine the road, bait them into walking into those mines, then kill them all.

But yeah, even Manuel trucked with that other cannibal dude. Makes sense.

I mean I would personally regard them as monsters, but when if you gotta talk to a monster to make it go away, it behooves you to be polite.

Without further words, the Golden Devil returned to his group and within seconds the cavalry troop started making it's way towards Wu Gui and his men. As the unit started to break into a canter, a translucent golden armored horseman started taking form over the riders, growing more and more solid as they made their way towards Wu Gui.

" Steady. Steady. Steady Boys... We dealt with this before! We just need to take their first charge! The blows will weaken after that. Yang! Get your scorpions ready, i want them to begin ambushing the Golden Devils from the sands the minute they let this Formation fade. Wei! Grab a few of the cattle and use them to augment the Arrays to wreck havoc after the scorpions separate them from each others. "

After snapping out his orders, Wu Gui prepared himself to receive the charge. Standing in the back with the cattle, he stationed his men in front of him, with a majority of them working in tandem to call froth a blood red barrier to blunt the charge while the rest prepared themselves to launch a counterblow the moment the barrier was breached.

" KILL " With a shout like thunder the Armored horseman hit the barrier with a resounding crash, shattering it and throwing most of the defending cultivators back except for 1 poor soul who found himself impaled through the chest.

" NOW! " At the shouted command, the remaining cultivators launched into an attack launching waves of spells and Sword Qi slashes at the formation before it could recover from the Qi intensive charge. Wu Gui knew what he would see when the dust and debris from the attacks faded, dead and dying Golden Devils and a flicking insubstantial Armored Horseman.

The years of war had taught the Cannibals that once the Horseman's Charge was defended against, as long as it was prevented from riding off the formation was easy prey to any retaliation attacks launched. However, contrary to Wu Gui's expectations he was greeted with the sight of a Golden Soldier holding a Greatshield that was still smoking slightly from the attacks.

Panicking slightly, Wu Gui bellowed at Yang, " Send in your Scorpions! It's impossible to switch Formations so quickly without any drawbacks! Get the Queen Scorpion to focus on shattering the formation and it's brood to kill them when it shatters! "

With the sound of a shrill whistle, a enormous scorpion burst from the sands and charged at the Golden Soldier, It's claws grappling at the Soldier's limbs and it's tail flickering into a flurry of strikes. The Soldier took a brief step back to dodge the grasping claws before dropping to a kneel and covering it's body with it's shield as it blocked the Scorpion's stinger. As the tail strikes started to slowdown, the Soldier lunged from it's position, deflecting the Stinger away from it with it's shield and stabbed with the spear held in the other hand, punching it through the beast and causing it to collapse with a groundshaking quake.

" Shit. Yang, get it back up! Yang. " Turning towards Yang, Wu Gui found himself stunned by the sight before him. The Scorpion's stinger had been deflected so that it pierced through Yang, ripping him into shreds. Feeling a chill on his spine, he turned back and noticed that the Golden Soldier had faded away revealing the 10 Golden Devils each individually attacking the smaller scorpions with golden glowing weapons.

Watching as they carve away at the scorpions with ease and made their way towards him, Wu Gui have out another order. " Wei! Activate the arrays now! Blow them to bits! " Upon hearing the command, Wei ripped his dagger through the throats of the two cattle kneeling before him and activated the prepared array, causing a sea of fire to slam into the Golden Devils.

Panting from the effort of bellowing his last few orders, Wu Gui couldn't help but plead softly under his breath " Die you monsters, Die! i don't believe the blood augmented Corpse Fire Array can't burn you all. " As the sea of flame burned without any signs of stopping, Wu Gui felt the tension leaving his shoulders at the sight of the dead Golden Devils. Turning back to his men, he started preparing them to move out before a search party was sent for the dead cultivators.

" Good Job Wei, Let's pack up. Get the Cattle ready to move and kill the older ones and those that can't walk on their own. We need to leave now and travel into Devil Bee lands before noon. " Just as Wu Gui was about to head towards his tent to prepare for departure, a flicker of motion among the flames caught his eye.

" No. No. Nonononononno! That's Impossible! " Wu Gui's cry of despair caught the attention of everyone, as all attention was turned to the flames, the sight of 10 Golden Devils riding out of the flames with glowing golden armor on them and their mounts drove the camp into a panic.

" Wei! Hit them again! " However, before Wei could do anything a Golden Devil burst into motion striking down at him with a wave of Saber Qi. Seeing Wei attacked was the straw that broke the camel's back, without any words to each other, the cultivators present each brought out their escape techniques, each seeking to flee the Golden Devils.

A classic mook horror show.

While I do like how thorough you were in demonstrating, their efforts to fight back, because it's the first real fic I've read of yours, the feeling is a bit odd. Why was this scene so one-sided? What purpose did it serve? Your villain's supposed to be of the Ninth HS, he just plays the role of coward and bully.

" Go. Let none escape. " At that simple command, the remaining 8 Golden Devils and their mounts charged at the fleeing cultivators, with some shooting glowing arrows and some flinging shards of glass at the cultivators that got the furthest away from the chaos.

Staring in terror as the sole remaining Golden Devil started making his way to him, Wu Gui's trembling hands gripped his Ghost Banner and with a flush of Qi called forth all the Spirits remaining within it. As the ghosts started to stream out of the banner and take shape in the form of indistinct silhouettes wielding spears, Wu Gui felt his confidence start to return as the numbers seemed to grow to hundreds.

" Let me go Golden Devil! Even you can't fight off a hundred ghosts by yourself! Before i was a merchant i was a Beast Cultivator on the Ghost Path, I have arts that will enhance these ghosts to even greater heights! Not even your 9th Heavenstage cultivation can fend them all off! Let's call things even. You can have everything in the camp, keep the Cattle. Just let me go, when i'm 2 Li away i'll command the Ghosts to return to my banner. "

Instead of a reply, the Golden Devil and his Spirit Beast just continued their slow predatory stalk towards him. As he approached, Wu Gui observed a golden glow start to manifest over the Golden Devil's Ji and the Claws of his Spirit Beast while Jade scales appeared to overlay itself over his body. Gritting his teeth at the Golden Devil's inflexibility, Wu Gui gave the command to attack to his Ghosts with a wave of his banner, using his mental bond with the artifact to reach out to all the ghosts present.

As the ghosts charged at the Golden Devil, Wu Gui observed as the Clansman fought in harmony with his beast. The claws of the Qilin mount striking at the weaker ghosts to clear a path while the mounted cultivator landed devastating thrusts at the ghosts who still had enough sense of self to attack with their weapons instead of just swamping the duo.

Wu Gui hastily gave the ghosts another command, commanding the weaker ghosts to surround and pin the duo down so that the stronger ghosts could stab at them with their spears. However, without a single word being said, the duo changed their behavior. The Qilin moved with guile, ensuring that only 2 or 3 ghosts faced it anytime, always moving to a new position whenever it looked like they would be surrounded while the Golden Devil focused fully on attacking the ghosts in question, striking at them with a series of stabs from his Ji and palmstrikes from his hands.

Horrified with the ease that the duo used to work their way through his strongest technique, Wu Gui reached within his robes and took out his Life Saving Treasure. A blood red horsetail whisk that he stole from the Sect Treasury before he fled. Hitting himself in the chest and spitting out a mouthful of heartblood, Wu Gui forcefully activate the Treasure, using the heartblood to call froth the ghosts of the cultivators sacrificed to create the whisk.

A sense of dread filled the air as the ghosts took form, each as red as blood and radiating cultivation levels of Foundation Establishment and Core Formation. Letting a shriek of mad glee, Wu Gui gloated in triumph. " You should have accepted my offer Golden Devil! Now know despair and DIE ! You ruined my life-saving treasure, i'll be sure to use you and your beast to forge a new one! "

With a wave of his hand, Wu Gui commanded the ghosts to attack, his eyes glinting with malice at the thought of the duo before him being torn by the blood ghosts. As the ghosts approached the duo, to the confusion of both Wu Gui and the Golden Devil they slowed and gradually came to a halt. The blood ghosts surrounded the Golden Devil and after a moment all so opened up a path through the ghost horde towards Wu Gui who's maniacal laugh died with a whimper.

Sweating badly as the Golden Devil made his way along the path opened up by the blood ghosts, Wu Gui sacrificed another mouthful of heartsblood to forcefully activate another layer of restrictions on the whisk, torturing the blood ghosts souls with it in an attempt to force them to protect him from the Golden Devil. Despite the flashes of pain that appeared on the faces of the blood ghosts, not a single one wavered in their decision panicking Wu Gui even further as the Golden Devil sped up at the looks of pain on the faces of the Blood Ghosts.

One by one the Blood ghosts started to collapse and dissipate, the souls maintaining their form extinguishing from the pain. However, regardless of how many of them disappeared the path towards Wu Gui remained opened. Dropping to his knees as the Golden Devil approached within the range to strike at him with his Ji, Wu Gui began kowtowing and begging for his life

" Please Great Lord, spare me! I swear i'll change. i will enter a Buddhist sect and pray of the souls of my victims, I'll devote myself to charity! I'll save 10 times the number of souls that i killed, only have mercy on me Great Lord! "

Okay, I'll be honest, this kind of ridiculous, cowering behavior is usually the moment where you put down the xianxia and go: noooope, but switching perspectives does make it feel somewhat more natural.

Like, at the end of the day, he tried everything he could think of, and nothing worked. He's a survivor at his core and if he needs to beg, he'll beg.

I'm giving this a very cautious pass: if you keep writing scenes where the villain begins begging for their lives I'mma gonna ask you to stop: you're getting into self-indulgent power fantasy territory.

" No. " With the only word spoken to him since the battle began, the Golden Devil thrust his JI through Wu Gui's back pining him to ground in his begging posture before pulling out a Yin stone and capturing Wu Gui's soul as it left his body.

" We'll keep our words. Your soul will go to the forges. "

Ice cold. I like it.

Gotta run for now, but I'll get back to it soon.
 
My impression is that it's a bit of both. The first phase of the Trials usually begins with the enemy scattered, and so we dispatch Kill Teams to headhunt as many of them as we possibly can while they reorganize, while the tower defense stuff is a later phase that can be made easier depending on how well phase one goes.

More importantly, if there's a fast moving Aquila Formation filled with a murderblob rolling in and fucking shit up, it encourages them to group up first or else they just die in pieces.
Hmm.

I guess my question is just, what is the alternative to joining this initiative? What do elites who aren't saving juniors do different?
 
Hmm.

I guess my question is just, what is the alternative to joining this initiative? What do elites who aren't saving juniors do different?

You're part of the escape groups, which is to say "Split up and hide in the deepest holes you can find for a year until the time-out is called"

Which is what everyone else is doing. "Saving Juniors" means when we get to that phase, we keep doing what we were doing in phase one, which is a hell of a lot harder once they've gotten their shit together and we can't rely on throwing ten dudes at every one of theirs while we're in a formation but also has more impact because we're engaging enemy groups and so victories count for a lot more than they did in phase one.
 
That... changes things. I need to think about this.

How do the legions and joining them work for non-clan cultivators (guest-cultivators/elders) like Wei Feng? Obviously there is some method for joining as the commander of one of the fortresses in the Hua war that initiated the hilarious backstab mess up was a guest cultivator.


Aargh. Ok, in character I have to take this, but I'm terrified for poor 'average luck' Wei Feng.

Well I suppose if this turn goes well I can write the clan seriously looking into roping in Wei Feng permanently.
I'm assuming that guest cultivators/Mercs are trusted after years of service? As for Wei Feng, there is this
The vote we had treated them as 'As Guest Elders or Guest Cultivators'. What this means in practice is instead of making them part of the Clan and drawing them in, the Clan instead offers them payments in kind for their services, and may hire them on for decades or centuries at a time. They are ultimately guests, however, and will never command anything important, take on the most crucial missions, and certainly will never be moving large quantities of troops around. They're more honored allies, but definitely not a part of the Clan structure.

Usually if someone is inducted into the Clan it's by marriage, or by rituals infusing small (ritual) amounts of the Blood of Bronze into their very being. (Clan cultivators have at least traces of the Blood of Bronze in their lineage, even if it's one ancestor fifty generations back)

Not every Clansman has the pure Bronze blood, but I expect every Good Seed (unless it's made extremely explicit this isn't the case) has the lineage of the Clan somewhere in their history, and suffers from the Curse the entire Clan suffers from.

So i guess bringing him in will be via him doing enough service to the Clan that he was added in a ritual

Welp, same here. I wanted a lifesaving treasure so badly but I need to have this technique for Eirene to develop correctly and there's no physical way the character I'm writing isn't going to be Saving Juniors.

I think it depends. If you use a Cool thing bonus the tech is 100% a success with a Advantage. But i think you can set it as a Goal and depending on the rolls for that turn the tech can succeed or cause drawbacks.

At the same time though, it's a tricky balance: xianxia falls on its face a lot because its villains are incapable of elevating the story. One Piece and shounen in general has some amazing villains, and it's probably at least half the reason why any given shonen title is so successful.

I've just read your omake and I guarantee you that I've already forgotten who he is.
So personally speaking, that the point. I found it easier to convey what i imagine via using disposable POVs. Like the name for him is Chinese for Turtle which can also mean coward. So his entire existence here was for me to convey what i was seeing in my head.
Okay, I'll be honest, this kind of ridiculous, cowering behavior is usually the moment where you put down the xianxia and go: noooope, but switching perspectives does make it feel somewhat more natural.

Like, at the end of the day, he tried everything he could think of, and nothing worked. He's a survivor at his core and if he needs to beg, he'll beg.

I'm giving this a very cautious pass: if you keep writing scenes where the villain begins begging for their lives I'mma gonna ask you to stop: you're getting into self-indulgent power fantasy territory.
I'm just going to say it out loud, i can't write a decent fight scene. I'm utterly unable to imagine and choreograph one. Writing Xianxia or wuxia gives me a cop-out in the sense that Power Levels are uncross-able to the majority, so by making all the enemies weaker or equal to Xiao Yi, it's easier for me to write in the sense that i'm basically describing Dynasty Warrior levels of combat.

Like i try to make the Omakes be more about Xiao Yi as a person but i do sometimes want to express cool scenes or one-liners that appear in my head, hence the crappy 1 hit kill scenes.

The back-and-forth fighting that some of the other writers here can do is not something i can do. So just a warning, future fight scenes are all going to be one-liners or one shots because i make sure to justify it via introducing foes that statswise Xiao Yi can beat.

Ice cold. I like it.

Gotta run for now, but I'll get back to it soon.
lastly, for this omake itself, i wrote it entirely for that scene of the souls helping him because i had the idea of it being a pretty cool LST/RSB. The other stuff was built around that concept.

So the villain was to establish something to fight to get it and to balance it so i can write the fight in a way i'm comfortable with, it has to be someone that got the treasure + position in a opportunistic manner instead of pure strength. I mean i give the line by line breakdown of why Wu Gui behaved in that fashion, but if the core style of One Punch is something that isn't your cup of tea, then theres not much i can do since my ability only goes so far with my writing.
 
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You're part of the escape groups, which is to say "Split up and hide in the deepest holes you can find for a year until the time-out is called"

Which is what everyone else is doing. "Saving Juniors" means when we get to that phase, we keep doing what we were doing in phase one, which is a hell of a lot harder once they've gotten their shit together and we can't rely on throwing ten dudes at every one of theirs while we're in a formation but also has more impact because we're engaging enemy groups and so victories count for a lot more than they did in phase one.
Hmm, the QM's description is not completely clear...

Lastly, the Clan takes the most promising, and retains them as kill-teams. Those with growth potential are allowed to strike only where victory is likely, drawing down enemy numbers. They are kept as safe as possible, and while some die, tempering these good seeds is a must if the Clan is to survive.

So the difference is that we'll be taking bigger risks than normal?

meanwhile
The second is to withdraw into cities and fortresses, demanding that they break our fortifications before hunting us. This only works with lesser fortifications - if a fortification should be unbreakable by their Core Formation cultivators, their Spirit Severing Dao Guardians are happy to break such fortresses open. As such, only so many fortresses can be invested, and the greatest fortresses of all are left without garrison. However, for slower cultivators, or those who have reached the end of their road, this is where they are called on to make a sacrifice.

After all, these fortresses fall invariably. Despite the clan losing perhaps a third of its cultivators with each Trials, the vast majority of those are the cultivators who have no further to walk on their path, and who give up their lives to protect the young talents - the future of the Clan. Cultivators are the shields and spears of the people, it is said. To give up your own life for the good of the Clan - for the good of human beings who rely on the Clan's protection, this is the best way to die.

Of course, the Clan looks upon such cultivators as great heroes. For their sacrifice their families are given many Contribution Points - it is incredibly common after the Trials for many orphans to arise in the Clan, pushed to greatness by the sacrifices of their fathers and mothers.

Holing up is said to be the sacrifice route

The third is to scatter. Fortresses and hardpoints are all well and good, but the Trials only last thirteen months, thirteen days, and thirteen hours. The faster cultivators, and the youngsters who are better with the Double-Headed Eagle flee, drawing enemy cultivators after them. Those of moderate promise flee, and the Clan uses them to draw out enemy hunters, hoping to preserve as many as possible.

...and this is what you're saying the Good Seeds would be normally doing? Or that first one?
 
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Hmm, the QM's description is not completely clear...



So the difference is that we'll be taking bigger risks than normal?

meanwhile


Holing up is said to be the sacrifice route



...and this is what you're saying the Good Seeds would be normally doing? Or that first one?

The latter option is the one that the standard option takes. "They can't kill you if they can't catch you" (But sometimes they catch you anyway).

Saving Juniors means you're taking the first option. Or rather, we keep doing the first option after it becomes actually dangerous instead of a relatively managed risk.
 
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@occipitallobe

1. Can I write-in 'Hunting Down 5th Sea Good Seed Hunters for their stuff' for Savvas? You said that they were the best of the 5th Sea, and so they must have good shit on them right?
2. When do we use 'Fighting Across Realms' bonuses? Now seems like a good time.

1. Yes. You'd need a super good Fate roll to kill them and take their stuff, but if you get it, you can happily get some cool Indian-themed cultivation stuff.
2. Normally I apply them to contested problems and rolls. If you want to deliberately deploy yours, though, feel free.

So the difference is that we'll be taking bigger risks than normal?

This is essentially it. If you defend a city, you'll be at the core of the defense. If you're in an escape team, you'll prowl to find more fights to take and enemies to kill, and move more readily to assist others escaping. It's not a specific thing so much as it is pushing your luck really hard in order to save lives. It's not deliberately sacrificing yourself - the Clan won't let you go fight in a city if you're a great talent - it'd be considered mocking the sacrifices of the less talented cultivators at the end of their paths to throw yourself to certain death - it's just taking more and larger risks to save your fellow Clan members, regardless of where you're assigned.

 
Aretaphila Myia 6 - Qi Sounding Meditations
Aretaphila Myia
Qi Sounding Meditations
It is said that Qi is the fundamental building block of the world. The basest unit of creation, whereupon all is made and all is returned to. It's variations infinite, manifold, mysteries impenetrable and open simultaneously. However, what it is not - as many scholars have similarly postulated and "proven" - is sapient. Qi is a building block; it has no will of it's own to speak of. All the better for us, truly, how else would we be able to form the necessary Pillars to ascend further up the ranks of Cultivation were we all merely the extensions of a singular ur-soul, controlling us all in some vast and incomprehensibly complex puppet-show?

Thus, in the absence of a will of it's own, why does Qi move? Take shape? Form?

Though we debate endlessly on the source of this guidance, it's instrument is indisputable - for at the very most base is formless motion, the force that causes all things to move. The emanations which gather and mold Qi, fit it to purpose and intent. All a unique frequency, on a scale beyond the measurement of any Cultivator yet known, for surely one who has achieved a Demonic Tune that resonates with the very Qi of the universe is one who can sing the song that shakes the Heavens themselves! And this humble scholar believes that such a change would not go unnoticed!

But still, the climb up Mt. Tai begins with a single step! And thus, this humble scholar has endeavored to create a method by which one can sense the vibrations which shape the Qi of our world, and shape them to further their cultivation as a Demonic Tunes wielder! My completed prototype, though lacking in potency beyond the Qi Condensation Stage, is this simple Zhuge, made in the old style it carries two frequencies to interact with. The first note to gather qi, and the second to refine it for consumption by it's user!

Running off principles based off of observations of Tribulation Lightning and the emanations released into a Cultivators body...


"So it's a Cultivation Aid, huh?" Aretaphila Myia mused, glancing up from the scroll that had been set besides the bronze bell and mallet in the chamber. Forged of bronze fish scales, the Zhong of Deep Waters shined with an unexpected sheen - the patina that covered it closer in pigmentation to the tanned bronze of her own skin - displaying the high level of craftsmanship that had gone into it. She winced, clutching the wound in her side threatening to loosen her grip on her own cultivation even as she struggled to heal from the damage dealt by Unfelt Passing Wind.

At the very least, this chamber was hidden beneath stone and water. Something which the Bandit was unlikely to find her through easily.

"Still," The young cultivator mused, if only to drive away the quiet of isolation, "I kinda hoped for something more down here." It was a treasure, of that there was no doubt. But it begged the question of why something like this was hidden in so innocuous a place. Perhaps the "mere scholar" who had made it had hoped that the Temple - as a place that easily raised Qi Condensation Cultivators almost en masse - would eventually produce someone capable of taking the treasure and making the most use of it? From the sound of things it had been the lesser work. A limited proof of concept.

It made her wonder where the later works were. If there were even any in the first place? Where did the craftsman come from? Were they a wandering Cultivator of the Blacksmith Sects? An associate of the ones who had constructed this temple in the first place?

Or perhaps in front of her was the proof of concept of what would later become the nightmare of every member of the Myia Clan?

Cautiously, Aretaphila reached out to lift the bell, wincing as she took the weight in her hands. A vague cylinder, in the fashion of those outside of the Golden Devils, but where it differed from most was that rather than having a clapper in the manner she was familiar with, it instead had two notes etched into the outer shell of it. One on the Crown, and another at the height of the Waist.

She set it down, and with another grunt of pain and effort, gripped the mallet that accompanied the bell, and contemplated the treasure for a moment, before considering the scrolls notes on it producing two different sounds.

Aretaphila had never heard of a bell producing two entirely different kinds of notes before.

She swung the mallet.

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It bears mentioning, but the Clear Summer's Bell Physique is a mutation of the Blood of Bronze, developed over the course of the Sea Conquering Army's campaign, born of introducing the blood of the local inhabitants of the Turtle Sea into the Clan. In exchange for the prodigious physicality and potential of the Blood of Gold that could be reached by the paragons of the Clan, the Clear Summer's Bell was a peerless tuner of sound.

But this process was difficult, for though the Myia carried the Mark of Bronze, their own Physique took different forms, and as a result lacked the incredible regenerative powers for which most of the Golden Devil Clan were known. Casting was the process of awakening the Physique, the mold of mortality being shaken off as the Myia awakens as a Cultivator proper. Yet, just like any bell, though the form is made it is not yet refined. Not yet tuned. And though the physique is awakened and benefits are already present, the Casting stage of the Clear Summer's Bell physique is also its most fragile, easily cracked and terrifyingly brittle.

And oh so hard to repair.

Especially when the Myia in question lacks healing Arts or healing treasures with which to recover from the wound. Injuries dealt by a Foundation Establishment Cultivator are not things easily fixed by recovery pills intended for those still progressing through the Heavenstages. Thus, between the pain of her wounds, the persistence of the Qi that acts upon them, and the strain of absorbing the lessons of the Zhong of Deep Waters, Aretaphila cultivates deep beneath the earth, striking her bell, and desperately pushing back against the Qi of Unfelt Passing Wind, the boon of her surroundings only serving as enough to maintain a fragile equilibrium.

Unknowing of time passing, Aretaphila strikes the bell.

The Qi is gathered.

She strikes the bell.

The Qi is refined, shaken into purer form within the Zhong itself.

And the third ring, one rougher and more muted, as the young girl takes the Qi within herself.

Time passes, uncountable and unknowable, and what was once a fragile equilibrium shifts. The third note begins to clear up. It begins to synchronize with the first two, and form a steady rhythm that is not quite a song.

The equilibrium breaks, and on every third ring the Qi of Unfelt Passing Wind is drawn out of Aretaphila's wound, refined, and then taken back in to further the process.

"So, that's where you were."

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To the layman, Wind and Sound are deeply intertwined. After all, was not the Wind that which carried Sound from place to place? Of course, at higher levels of cultivation, this became less and less true, as Sound and Song were expressions of one's own Soul, and any one of the Five Elements could serve as a medium to conduct Demonic Tunes. One of the many mysteries of the world, there were many who considered it to be a simple function of Qi. A unique expression of strength in it's niche, much like the Dao of the Sword was inevitably the greatest at single combat - as befitting the Emperor of Weapons.

Unfelt Passing Wind had not been pleased to see that his precious meal ticket had disappeared, not after he had taken great pains to identify the leader of her merry little band. So much for negotiation in good faith! Truly, the insurance of a surreptitious stab wound perilously close to the lower dantian had been the correct move!

What he had not anticipated, however, was that the blood trail of the Golden Devil Girl would vanish so quickly and easily. Even the bloodstained cables that she had left behind were nearly clean when Unfelt Passing Wind had come back to find them, the life fluid drying and flaking away into dust far too quickly to be natural. It had lead him on another harrowing chase through the Temple, playing cat and mouse with the Golden Devils who remained, seeking him and his little wayward hostage out, but the days passed, eventually becoming a month, and their Foundation Establishment leader eventually took his remaining two minions out with him.

It was then, as he waited alone within his meditation chamber, that he heard it:

Carried on the wind was a faint ringing. A three-note beat, repeating endlessly. And as Unfelt Passing Wind listened, gradually, he noticed something about it. That third note was shifting, ever so gradually. Growing stronger. Growing clearer. That was when his memory was jogged. A rumor, perhaps. A standing bounty by the Demonic Tuner Sects and the Sorrowful Blacksmiths; among the Golden Devil Clan are a special type of physique, one ideally suited for the crafting of treasures with which to channel and amplify Demonic Tunes.

The Clear Summer's Bell Constitution.

Prized for their rarity and their potency as material, the rumor said that one had not been acquired from the Golden Devil Clan in over a century, and there were many Demonic Tuners who sought out an instrument forged from their perfectly tuned bodies. With such wealth in hand, why, Unfelt Passing Wind wouldn't need to deal with the Golden Devils! He'd be set for life! What great fortune, to be rid of the millstones that were his underlings and provided with a way to finance the lifestyle that a great de jure Noble such as he deserved!

The wind guided him deep. Deeper into the temple than he went to. The three beat tune continued to carry, the third note growing ever stronger, even as the bandit crossed that short distance into that hidden grotto beneath the desert. From there it was simplicity itself to find out where the sounds were coming from.

A tiny aired hole, nestled within the stone.

Unfelt Passing Wind's form dissolved into wind, carried on a conjured breeze into that Spirit Stone lined chamber where a young girl meditated, tapping an ancient bronze hammer twice before breathing in and out, all three notes finally clear and beautiful.

"So, that's where you were." The bandit says to his meal ticket, "Awfully rude of you to break your word like that."

The girl's eyes snap open, and for a single instant there is a tremble of fear before it gets covered by a false bravado, "I thought you were going to bring me to my commander?" One of her eyes closes, the remaining pupil looking him in the eye cockily, "You just took so long that I figured it'd be faster if I looked for him myself."

"Heh, that's a good point." The oversized turban shifted on the bandits head as he shook it with regretful expression, "Unfortunately, because I had to spend time looking for you, your Commander apparently wrote you off and left! So much for being able to negotiate, I guess." He smiled at her, taking satisfaction in the cracking of her façade, the girl's expression trembling ever so slightly in that great way stupid people did right before you stuck a knife in 'em, that look of fearful disbelief was just the best!

Immaculate white leather slippers stepped forward on the polished stone, making no sound as the wind let none pass through it. Unfelt Passing Wind always did enjoy himself a little showmanship when going for the kill, so to speak! You can't just off someone! If you're gonna ever be more than a two-bit bandit, you gotta have some pop! Some personality! Let the audience know just who it is they're dealing with, even if the audience is one person that won't be around for long enough to really appreciate it!

"Now Little Miss, I was so disroot," The little girl winced for some reason, "To find out that your Golden Devil fellows were so uninterested in your well being, it made me realize that I couldn't negotiate with them, and so I was about to call the whole thing a wash." In an instant, Unfelt Passing Wind crossed the distance, snatching up the little mallet she'd been using on the bronze bell, "But then, imagine my shock when I heard a little..." He taps the bell, sending out a wharbled sound, "Ring." And there's the wince! That moment when they put together 'oh yes, I am indeed about to die to this fashionable man in front of me, alas!'

The bandit takes a moment to drink in the expression, "And then I remembered this rumor about a specific bounty for a specific type of Golden Devil." He bends down, looking the short little girl in the eye, pressing the mallet back into her hand as gently as you please, "And you see, Young Miss, you just so happen to match the description."

Unfelt Passing Wind flares his Qi then, the full strength of an Early Foundation Building Cultivator.

"I can't exactly do the easy way, Little Miss." The robes on his right side fall limp, the arm there dissolving into gaseous wind that he controlled as easily as a more solid limb, "So I'll be taking that body of yours in the best condition!"

But the little girl still has some fire in her! "That's not happening!" The Golden Devil Girl breathes deeply, not even wincing, and Unfelt Passing Wind smirks while running his Qi through his ear meridians. Demonic Tune Cultivators can't do a thing when their Techniques couldn't travel through your ears properly! The unearthly note that messed up so many of the bandit's henchmen carries through the air, easily ignored by the strength of his cultivation!

The note is joined by a second one, and then a third, the attack abating as the girl taps the bell in her hands before taking another breath.

"Done yet, Little Miss?" Unfelt Passing Wind asks, relishing in the feeling of superiority.

She breathes in, and he decides he's played around enough. The gaseous limb seeps into the girl's open mouth, intent to strangle her so as to leave the body as undamaged as possible.

This proves to be a mistake.

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Aretaphila looks on, panting heavily as Unfelt Passing Wind collapses to the stone floor, his body jerking wildly as dark stains of impurity ruin his pristine white clothes, the oversized turban crumbled and ruined by the convulsions the bandit is undergoing, his right arm still dissipated. The air is a good conductor of sound, though not as good as water.

But if the air just so happens to be filled with the exact same Qi Aretaphila had spent the past few days learning to chip away at and refine with her own Qi enhanced by her physique and the Zhong of Deep Waters? Well, it proved sufficient to transmit the Brown Note directly into the Meridians of the Bandit Cultivator before her. And unlike properly trained Cultivators like those who were in the Clan or at least one of the major powers of the Desert, the foundation and cultivation of Unfelt Passing Wind was amateurish and incomplete at best. His Meridians were heavily clogged with impurity, and his physique was in no condition to shake off the effects of her technique.

For a moment, Aretaphila looked on silently as the bandit convulsed, his throat seemingly choking on itself, but as far as she could tell that for all the agony that the man was experiencing he would not die from just this.

But he wouldn't be able to chase her either.

With a sigh, Aretaphila grabbed her treasures and returned to the entrance to the chamber, securing the scroll within her clothes, and hoping that it was sufficiently waterproof.

It would be a long journey back to the Clan Hall to report back in. At least it would give her time to finish reading the scroll to investigate more into how to refine her Cultivation.

A.N.: Wew, that took longer than I expected. But now Aretaphila has finally concluded her Turn 1 Storyline! After a full month! There ya go, @occipitallobe . Please let this get added on to Aretaphila's Fate Bonus!
 
So i'm thinking 9th princece... Hornestly he is one guy that could pull off somthing vaigly similar to infiltration (basicly gueanteed end with him dead but still a chance) amongst the hunters. If not that the 100 year trails also serve as a way for him to posibly get some info on some common knowlige stuff he is missing in memory.

Hornestly he likely will have a unique set of goals for the trails. Really looking foward to that seed omake series.
 
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1. Yes. You'd need a super good Fate roll to kill them and take their stuff, but if you get it, you can happily get some cool Indian-themed cultivation stuff.
2. Normally I apply them to contested problems and rolls. If you want to deliberately deploy yours, though, feel free.
Man am I tempted. Fighting Across Realms (poison of instant death for Qi Condensers!), maybe even the lifesaving treasure thrown (Qi Stealth Oil.. sounds like excellent synergy there!) in + Turn 5 Omake reward.. Well, if nothing else, I'll go out with a bang, that's for sure.
 
By the way.

I would like to collaborate with other overachieving super experts of the Clan to write a preparation omake series for the Trials

docs.google.com

The Hammer of Heaven - JOINT OMAKE

PARTICIPANT RULES: Choose a text color for your character, write in below this section. You must use that color for your parts of the joint omake so we can distinguish between everyone. Players should be among the Elite of the Qi Condensation branch of the Clan, (Combat Strength comparable to Ni...

Qi Condensation, Ninth Heavenstage combat strength or above. This is separate to our own Omake but just a tilt to our Fate rolls.

I'll have to pass for this one and have Aris crawl into the hidey-holes, on account of the entire being crippled thing. Godspeed to you brave souls bringing the fight to the foe.
 
I'm gonna take Saving Juniors since I have a lifesaving treasure. At the very least, if Achille Adephos dies I can start again with a new good seed.
 
Morgraine 7 - The Soul is Metal
What is the soul? Was the question that Morgraine was pondering, with thick ancient tomes of lore scattered all around him. Each and every single writer of the clan, and those without had their own ideas of what the soul truly was. The writings of the Nascent Soul Barak, from several thousand years ago, spoke of the soul as the true self and in reaching the level of the Nascent soul and above one could truly become that which they already were. Yet, another Nascent Soul, Nefeli of a later era spoke of the soul as a simple energy construct, created by the mind being infused with Qi energy and as such nothing more than a simple improvement to the mind.

Yet, others had wildly different views on the soul and even some ancient writings contradicted each other, so the question remained. What is a soul? Was it a simple energy construct forged by a human mind using a little understood energy source, or was it something already present within the person from birth and only at a certain point able to truly become manifest? Such issues plagued Morgraine for he had learned of his fate in having to forge nine daos, eight of which were to be built upon the fundamental nature of the eight metals of his bloodline.

With a sigh, he picked up the sheet of paper that held the insights that the master of the hospital had had with his vision quest. And yet again nothing made sense to Morgraine, for the golden stature had called to him as the first to be completed, yet its paths were narrow and firm, with little to flex within the normally flexible metal. Yet, one of the paths was of the soul and that had called the most to his mind, yet now after years of study, he was no closer to knowing what a soul truly was.

However, he realized that the writings of the ancient were not his, but others and as such they would have no place by default within his decision. With a flick of a finger, a small amount of energy was expended to snap close the massive tomes and prepare them for their imminent return to the selfs from which he had gathered them. Blinking, to clear his eyes of strain and stress, he recentered himself and began to focus upon what he believed to be the Soul.

Turning inward towards the center of self and mind, letting his mind dance along the golden threads that bound his body in harmony with eight other strands, each pulsating with life and each calling forth their own individual drive and unchangeable nature. From gold came radiating waves of perfection, body, mind and something far more ephemeral than the others. Where perfection was clear and easy to comprehend, and both body and mind reverberated along similar pathways, none of them truly called to him. Their notes taken by other metals such as Tin which sang a song of wisdom and mental power, yet Gold was to be the first forged and yet only the last and least understood path remained.

Underlying all of Gold, was the core of perfection, yet by definition Gold shared its other traits with the other metals, thus implying that Gold was not the prime vector for such ideals. Instead only that which was its own would be viable, and if perfection was the sign of Gold and it bore the mark of only one form alone, then didn't that imply that that last form to be the most perfected form possible. Thus, implying that the unknown element, which was known as Soul, to be the most perfect form possible.

Morgraine's eyes snapped open, as he came to the simple yet profound conclusion. The nature of Gold was Perfection, yet other metals held the secondary traits of Gold alike, thus Gold would not be Perfect in those realms, thus the only one it could truly be Perfect in would be the one that was its alone. In a singular moment it all became clear, the Soul was Perfection itself, for that singular ideal unified all the dispute and contradictory writings of long dead ancients. For if the Soul was the truest self, or an emergent energy construct it was still the most perfect form of life possible. Able to grow and evolve with time, gather still greater power, yet beyond the reach of those below in all but the most twisting of circumstances.

Knowledge fell into place in the light of this realization, of course cultivation would result in a Soul becoming manifest. For what was cultivation if not the ongoing perfection of self, and if the Soul was the most perfect form of life possible, then of course it would serve as the final point of ascension. The mark of true mastery of self and realized perfection was the leaving behind mortal form, for a life as an unbound Soul. Unfettered by the chains of mundane life, forever able to grow without limit, able to bend the laws of the world by the very weight of self and conviction. There was no doubt, the Soul was by all measures the ultimate expression of life, perfect beyond all other forms imaginable.

He could feel his body responding to his new conviction, as energy poured from his body almost to the point of completely draining him, yet this was needed for the creation of his first False Dao Pillar. Golden energy poured forth in a torrential flood as he grasped the Gold Stature that stood in front of the golden wall, and forced it into a new shape. Ephemeral yet invincible, untouchable yet manifest, Perfect yet capable of growing yet more. More and more such paradoxical natures were infused into that which had once been unrefined Gold and now became something far more. As the energy poured forth to allow the shaping to continue, the first of nine Dao pillars slowly took form within his heart, and so began the Pillar of Soul.

Chains flickered into existence as the False Pillar rose into being, lashing the parts of the pillar together, readying them to be forged as one in times to come. Straining to complete the work with his rapidly draining resources Morgraine drew from the other metals, to support the completion of Gold and its evolution into its final form, and a moment that seemed to stretch to infinity and back the False Pillar was forged. Yet, imperfections littered the surface and shards broke away refining the pillar ever more, as Morgraine began to smile a stab of pain forced him to bend over as his heart burned with fury and pain. Looking within, he saw that a shard of Gold had found its way to the empty pedestal, where his personal Dao would one day reside.

Reaching forth with his mind, he touched the shard and knew in his heart and mind that he would forever be bound to the truth that the Soul was Perfection. No longer were his convictions a momentary thing, but now his very life blood. Every day he would work to perfect his soul in tandem with his body, readying for the day in which he would shed mortal flesh to become Soul and Soul alone, to take his place among the ascended Masters of life.

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A shorter than normal omake for me, but needed this posted fast.
 
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Wei Feng 6 - Trials and choices.
Trials and choices

The leadup to the trials was an awful period.

Wei Feng had not even been born when last the catastrophe had come to the Golden Devils. Neither had most of the people he knew. Yet the air was full of feeling. A stilted and broken sadness, a shadow of grief yet awaiting. Like a family gathered round the sickbed of an ailing relative, not knowing when the end would come only that it would be soon.

They were holding funerals for those who still lived. The streets were clogged with great processions for those who had seen the end of their road and chosen to use their last days to cast forward a light to the future.

Even if many of the clan observed different traditions, enough funerary money burned to send a constant corona of smoke spiralling skyward.

He hated it, for it felt like defeat had already come. Wei Feng had spent 40 years fighting to save people against the odds. Even in the stalemate that the Hua war had become, he had beaten the odds, saving many innocent lives.

Perhaps he was finally coming to understand the feelings of those who had seen their leader killed in cruel ambush. Taken back to the days as a peasant boy, watching a father cower before his arrogant son, simply because he was a cultivator.

He hated it.

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In an effort to escape the atmosphere, he hurried his pace before ducking into the shopfront of little Irene Komnene. He had first met her as a girl in the village of Naissus, which he had protected from the depredations of an immature colony of bronze fiend desert ants some decades ago. A lucky thing to have caught early. Fully mature bronze fiend ants were astonishingly fast, with beasts in the late qi condensation realm almost as fast as foundation establishment cultivators. A mature colony would have hundreds or thousands of these. A plague that would require disciplined formations or higher realm strike squads to eliminate. Their deep desert cousins, the Silver fiend ants were even worse, being fully realm breaking in speed. Fortunately, they tended to dwell deep within the desert, far from human inhabited territory.

It had been a lucky find for himself as well as the village. Bronze fiend ants were prized among the Golden Devil clan as a source of powerful cultivation aids, with the similarities of their bronze infused physiques to the clan's bloodline abilities making strong ingredients for medicines made from their flesh, and strong weapons or armour made from their mandibles and carapace. Whilst as an outsider Wei Feng lacked even a hint of the blood of bronze, he had earned many contribution points from returning their corpses to the clan.

Irene ran a small apothecary with her husband. Whilst it lacked the powerful reagents that cultivators often needed, it was excellently stocked for a mortal non-cultivator shop. They also sold a variety of teas that Wei Feng enjoyed. In the cosmopolitan heart of the Verdant South an apothecary selling tea might seem strange, but out in the desert drinking tea from strange leaves you don't know that were sold by a merchant caravan held a significant chance of death. For mortals, who better to trust than someone who already dealt with strange and dangerous herbs?

Wei Feng frowned internally at himself. As he grew towards his ninety-third year he had increasingly found himself unconsciously thinking of non-cultivators by the standard denigrating term of mortals. He didn't want to fall into that trap, which treated them as lesser simply because he was stronger and longer lived.

"Good afternoon Irene. Do you have any of the Deep desert scorpion tea?"

Irene practically tripped over herself behind the counter, before rushing to bow.

"Of course, Master cultivator. Let me just get that for you." She began bustling about the store.

"Irene, please. You've known me for years. You can call me by name." He took the time to examine her while she rustled about the store searching for his tea. He hadn't had occasion to come here for a year or two, and even that short time had aged her. Her usually plump figure had thinned slightly. Her black hair was pinned back strictly, and she wore a proper head covering to help avert the hazards of her trade. Still, her eyes looked tired, though she obscured it well with cosmetics. The dread in the atmosphere was likely getting to her as well.

"How are your children? Little Anna and Theodora?" he asked. Asking people about children was usually a good way to brighten up a conversation. Irene adored her children.

"Oh, they're wonderful. Theodora's almost 8 now. We've started teaching her the basis of herb identification and she's taken to it like sand to the desert." She babbled away.

Wei Feng nodded along, relaxing and leaning against the wall. This was what he needed. To remind himself of the ordinary struggles of life rather than dwell on the behemoth ahead of him.

"Anna has been progressing really well with her studies as well. She's doing so well we were thinking about letting her help out in the shop more openly, even if it might swell her head up so much it might burst, but…." She trailed off, her tone going from irritated cheeriness to real worry.

"But..?" he prompted gently.

"The clan recruiter came around recently. They tested Anna, they said she has the potential to be a cultivator.."

"That's wonderful news!" He burst out, smiling widely. "I'm so happy for you all. Why didn't you say so to begi….. Ah." His smile drained away. "You're worried about the trials."

Irene nodded, her jaw tight and eyes on the ground.

"You cultivators, you're stronger than us, but… the stories of the trials are awful. Last time even our previous grand Elder was supposedly struck down." She looked up at him, her voice raising "How can I send Anna into that! But..but…"

"How could you deny her the opportunity this represents." He finished quietly. "Perhaps we should talk about this over some tea?" She nodded gratefully gesturing him towards a backroom door covered with a sheet. Behind it lay a small area with a hearth and a couple of chairs. Good for breaks, but close enough that any customers could easily be heard entering.

He considered what to say as the tea boiled.

Irene's dilemma was not a unique one. Everyone knew that the trial was coming, but none knew the precise date. For parents like Irene, it meant an agonising choice. Allow their children to start their journey and hope that the trials would not take them. Or at least not begin until they had at least given their children enough time to complete basic legion training to give them the best chance to survive. Or hold them back, denying them the improvement in their quality of life that cultivation could bring for years.

Technically anyone with an appropriate level of receptiveness to qi could cultivate, no matter their age. Practically however, cultivation extended life by slowing aging, not reverting it. It was theoretically plausible for a seventy-year-old to discover a heaven defying talent and cultivate to nascent soul, but it was vastly unlikely.

There being no real upper limit had not stopped the ideal age to begin cultivation being a subject of much scholarly debate. Some scholars felt that the body released its hold on its primal chi during a girl's first flow or a male's awakening to the physical attraction of others and that beginning after this would leave a cultivator forever weakened. Other scholars held that as long as the process was begun before the peak of adolescence had passed then it made difference when a cultivator begun as they would still benefit from the greatest extension to their life and youth. And of course a strong or weak talent receptiveness to qi could have its own impact on the process.

Wei Feng held to the position that, as every person's reflection of the Dao differed, so too did the ideal starting age for cultivation. If one held strongly to the ideas of purity and aestheticism, then that understanding of the dao would naturally reflect back onto your cultivation path.

Thus, a temple sect whose members would swear a vow of chastity might ideally recruit younger candidates than other sects.

Regardless of their opinions on the ideal starting age every, clan or sect was much less likely to offer greater resources to cultivators who started too late unless they demonstrated truly heaven defying talent. The return on investment was simply to poor. Still, how to convey that.

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"… but I do not think Anna is so old that you should fear that her chances would be permanently damaged by waiting. You should speak to your daughter and involve her in the decision; but as unpleasant as it is, I am told that talents who have held off beginning their journeys have often made up a sizable portion of new recruits after previous trials." He sighed, rubbing his eyes.

"Cultivation is an intensely personal journey, and what effects it for the better or worse can vary wildly from person to person, which is why I ask you to talk to Anna. For some, missing out on the chance to serve the clan during the trials might damage their self-confidence and self-image irreparably. For others, the chance to be part of the rebuilding might spur them on to greater heights.

I can't tell you what is best here, Irene. But either way, I am certain that the clan will be glad to have Anna's help in the future."

He sat quietly for another few minutes, but Irene seemed lost in her own thoughts, so he took his leave.

Outside, once he had gained some distance from Irene's shop, he stopped and rubbed his face again, breathing out a long sigh. His attempt to cheer himself up had backfired stupendously.

Still, perhaps that had been what he needed. Seeing something of the people who would continue on, not just the ones who would make their sacrifice. He would use this experience as a whetstone to sharpen his resolve.

He held his head higher and stepped off down the street with renewed vigour.

He made it another five streets before he realised that he had forgotten his tea. Laughing at himself, he carried that cheer back to his lodgings.

Around him, the trial preparations continued unabated.

AN: The bronze fiend ants and their cousins are based on the silver ants, the fastest known ant species, who are terrifyingly fast for their size. They can travel almost a meter a second. Anna is named after Princess Anna Komnene, who wrote the Alexiad. A biography of her father Alexios I.

I think this takes me over the 10,000 word line for omakes written for this quest. Which I am very happy about. I may not be nearly as prolific as BungieOni or Alectai but I think that's pretty respectable.

Edit: Fixed a couple of errors.
 
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Xiao Yi 16 - [The Drums Of War]
Xiao Yi [The Drums Of War]

The Ji whirled through a dizzying pattern with the ease of long practice, simultaneously deflecting the lunging sword with the shaft and driving the head of the JI through the heart of the sword's wielder. As it was withdrawn from the gruesome sheath with a flourish, the blood flowing out of the now open wound turned into a Array pattern that flared with a red glow before dissipating and leaving neither Array nor Blood behind.

The owner of the Ji couldn't help but give a slight grin at his success and quickly prepared himself for what was to come. As the successful effects of the Blood Array took hold, Xiao Yi felt the world start to slow and gradually come to a standstill. Taking full advantage of the frozen world and knowing that it won't last long, Xiao Yi moved from the body of his latest kill and into the encirclement the masked men had formed around Qing Yun who had intentionally drawn their attention at the start of the fight with a thunderous roar.

Thanks to that, Xiao Yi had been able to chase down the one masked man who had made an attempt to flee. And now with the first part of the mission " Prevent anyone from escaping " completed, it was time to complete the second part as well " Leave no survivors ". Making his way through the gaps of the encirclement until he stood back to back with Qing Yun, Xiao Yi found himself focusing on the 2 cultivators in the act of swinging their sabers in a scissoring fashion at what would be Qing Yun's back if it wasn't for his new position.

As the frozen world start to gradually speed up again, Xiao Yi watched as the faces of the two saber wielders changed from cold focus to surprise at his sudden appearance and to desperation as they tried to redirect the path of their swings. Taking advantage of the last few moments of the Array, Xiao Yi positioned his Ji so it would be able to intercept any changes in direction that the two cultivators could have theoretically move their Sabers in.

Time resumed and the JI leapt into action, striking out to parry the closest saber and using the momentum from knocking the saber away to drive a Qi enhanced strike with the butt of the Ji into the other saber wielder, shattering his ribs and throwing him back. Before the first saber wielder could recover, a flick of Xiao Yi's wrist brought the head of the Ji back before a light thrust buried it into his neck.

This time beyond the blood sprouting out briefly taking on a red glow, the Array's failure causing Xiao Yi to let out a brief curse. Looking around, Xiao Yi found that Qing Yun had taken advantage of the Masked Men's surprise at his arrival and had charged into the enemy knocking him away from his comrades. As Qing Yun's horns started to give off Lighting Qi that set the air humming, Xiao Yi threw himself at one of the two remaining cultivators before they could come to the aid of the one Qing Yun was goring with his horns.

Easily parrying the panicked thrust Xiao Yi twisted his Ji and trapped the shaft of the enemy's spear before giving it a sharp yank, pulling the masked man off his feet and within range of a palmstrike that sent lightning Qi through his veins. As the body dropped to the ground with spasms from the residual lighting qi, Xiao Yi looked back and found that just as expected, the first target Qing Yun had gored was already dead while the second one was trying to hold back Qing Yun's horns with his left arm while his right stabbed repeatedly with a small dagger.

Despite the frenetic stabbing the man's dagger only slid repeatedly against Qing Yun's glowing green scales in a shower of metallic sparks before finally shattering into shards. By the time Xiao Yi walked over, the masked man was as dead as his friends. Rolling his eyes at the bloody grin Qing Yun was giving him, Xiao Yi started to kneel down to search the body when just as he expected, it burst into flames in unison with the other bodies of his group.

In a act that was quickly becoming routine, Xiao Yi fished out the Communication Jade handed to him at the start of the mission and sent off a brief message to his handler.

Xiao Yi reporting. 6th group of ambushers dead. Like the previous 5 groups, group contains 6 members and all the bodies burst into flames when killed. All accounted for and none escaped.

Excellent work. You may return to Clan HQ, the objective has been delivered and all Clansmen are to now return.


The Order to return came as a surprise to Xiao Yi, the entire mission had been conducted with secrecy and overwhelming force. For Xiao Yi, it was his first mission as a Foundation Establishment Cultivator and despite the tradition of the first mission being a milkrun to let the Cultivator get used to his new cultivation, the need for secrecy and strength had been so overwhelming that Xiao Yi had been tapped for it along with all the other Foundation Establishment cultivators not assigned a specific post.

All the information that was given for the mission was to accompany a group of Clansmen to the Yuan Mountain Array and on the trip back split into small groups carrying a sealed box. The Foundation Establishment cultivators were all instructed to reveal their full cultivation but when ambushed only fight with the Qi of a Qi Condensation cultivator without letting any escape or survive.

Scuttlebutt among the more experienced cultivators had hinted that the mission was to act as a decoy to bait out enemy scouts and eliminate them before they could report back to their masters, but the objective itself remained a mystery.

This mission had came as a blessing to Xiao Yi, it allowed him to test out the Blood Array art he had inadvertently picked up during his time in the Qiguai secret realm and now as he made his way back, he did so with data gathered from combat on the validity of the art.

- The Blood Array only successfully takes shape in about every 1 in 5 attempts.

- Arrays created with it work best if their purpose is to grant the user beneficial effects such as greater strength or speed

- The art has to be done at the exact moment of death, any later and the Qi in the blood would have faded

- It requires immense concentration to do and for now cannot be done while in combat

- The speed of drawing the blood out and forming it into Arrays can be hasten with the aid of the Fragment of Hell-Sender.


Looking at the data gathered, Xiao Yi couldn't help but let out a frown at the many flaws that appeared.

Much work appears to still be needed before the art is ready, i hope i can do it before the Trials begin...

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The news of what the objective truly was first spread among the clan as a rumor of a treasure that would make the Clan stronger. More rumors soon followed up claiming that it was s secret library that the Yuan Clan had sold to the Clan or that it was a gift given by the Verdant South for avenging the losses they sustained from the Devil Bees.

As the rumors got more and more outrageous, the truth was soon revealed in the form of a Official Statement from the Grand Elder

The Clan has purchased a Broken Eight-Hundred and Eighty-Hundred Technique Cultivation Palace that will offer techniques suited to almost every disciple, helping them progress in their cultivation. However, until it is fixed, only Qi Condensation juniors will be able to benefit from the techniques within. It will grant them enough strength to make them equal to the juniors of other Sects and Clans.

Such a treasure came to the Clan at great cost. The clan will not be able to purchase any Lifesaving Pills or Formation Plates for the Trials like in previous years. As such the Clan calls on every cultivator to do their duty! Know that each one of you that falls does so for the future of the clan.

The revelation that the Clan had no Lifesaving Pills or Formation Plates for the coming Trial spread like wildfire. Within just days, all Xiao Yi heard was discussion on if the purchase was worth forsaking the current generation. The arguments and duels fought because of the differing opinions among the usually close-knit Clan were shocking to Xiao Yi, in a way it underlined the deadliness of the Trials to him in a manner that the records were unable to convey.

As the palatable sense of dread filled the air, a new rumor soon began to spread. The rumor claimed that now that the Clan had forsaken the current generation for the next, the only way surviving the Trials was possible would be if the current generation made their own luck by seizing the opportunities that could be found in the Qiguai Secret Realm.

Despite being nothing more then wishful thinking, it struck enough of a chord among the Qi Condensation Cultivators that the amount of cultivators applying for the Qiguai Secret Realm were the highest in centuries. The stories and warnings from survivors of the realm were ignored, each of the Qi Condensation cultivators convinced that they would be the next Rina Callista, ignoring the fact that she made years of preparation before challenging the Secret Realm.

Feeling helpless at being unable to stem the tide, Xiao Yi decided that he could only do whatever he could to help his Juniors. After all as a Foundation Establishment Cultivator, he could no longer help them on the battlefield, which lead him to his current situation of staring at five puppets that Magnus had lent him and racking his brains on coming up with a Formation to use them.

As the frustration started to buildup, Xiao Yi couldn't help but curse out loud at Magnus and his 5 poison puppets that were all different enough that no one Formation could cater for all. He still remembered what that bastard said when asked on why there were 5 puppets.

" Don't be a fool! Each puppet works in different roles just like how an army consists of units that serve different roles. The snakes works like heavy Calvary or heavy infantry, big, tough and pointy, able to take hits until they can deliver the payload for maximum effect, causing chaos among the enemy that our Clan can take advantage of.

The bird is good with long range attacks, it's able to fly over enemies and release colorless poison as a mist to poison them without anyone even knowing they have been poisoned. The puppet after some testing proved to be able to fly higher then most normal Qi attacks can reach

The scorpions work well as siege weapons and as a trap. By tunneling into enemy camps and fortifications, it will release a poison powder that is light enough that a simple step will cause a good amount to float into the air. And when used with the hedgehog, the burst of wind caused by it's explosion will spread the poison powder even further.

As a poison master, i make sure my poisons fit the targets they're made for. My puppets will behave in the same way, they will each be specialized in certain roles and do it well instead of trying to do everything and doing nothing well! "


Recalling the words once more, something caught Xiao Yi's attention.


" Trying to do everything and doing nothing well... "


Murmuring the words out loud, Xiao Yi pulled out his notes on the Blood Array Art and the Fragment of Hell-Sender.

Article:
- The speed of drawing the blood out and forming it into Arrays can be hasten with the aid of the Fragment of Hell-Sender.


The train of thought that sparked to life from Magnus' words started to churn in Xiao Yi's head.

The Fragment of Hell-Sender helps me with drawing the blood out and forming it into Arrays, two of the problems i found while using the Art. Instead of doing everything myself, i should let the Fragment do the job of drawing the blood out and forming it into the Arrays i want.

The only problem would be that I can't use it in combat because my weapon is a Ji and i need both hands to wield it. By the time i killed a foe and take out the Fragment it's too late. But what if i seek out a Refining master to forged the Fragment into my Ji? There's no reason it won't work. The Fragment is less metal and more solid blood Qi with Arrays within it optimized for manipulating the blood of those slain by it.


The conundrum solved, Xiao Yi looked at the puppets with fresh eyes and a hint of gratitude when further inspiration struck. Quickly dashing off a letter and sending it to Magnus, Xiao Yi made his way to the Clan Library intent on finding out where such a Refining master can be found.

Article:
Magnus,

Had an idea for a Formation for the Bird Puppet.

Formation Of Philoctetes Variant: Osprey - Qi is gathered and used to power and launch arrows that are Hollow in shape, in each arrow, a Osprey Puppet can be placed. By borrowing the power of the Formation to launch the puppets, they can fly even higher then usual and spread the poison within over a wider range. As the arrow itself is made of poison Qi, the enemies first assumption would be to treat the poison as coming from the White-Backed Scorpion. Would suggest that the poison used in the Osprey produces the same symptoms as that of the White-backed Scorpion Poison but increases with lethality when antidotes for White-Backed Scorpion poison is used.

Notes on how to modify the original Formation to this are included. Will be busy and not in Clan to help personally. Seeking out a Refining master for help with improving my Ji.

Regards,

Xiao Yi.



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Since the Palace won, i can write this omake now! Rough idea i had was that the Clan knows that our enemies will be sure to attempt to stop the sale from going through. How i saw it was that the enemies will use Qi Condensation cultivators with a focus on stealth and speed to scout before launching their full strike team on the group escorting the Palace Core parts back. Qi Condensation so they can cover a large range of paths that the Clan could use.

The Clan knows that so they had plans to counter via the usage of Foundation Establishment Cultivators as decoys and bait. The idea being to pretend the Clan is trying to keep it low by using a Foundation Establishment cultivator and conducting the sale while the Yuan Secret Realm draws most of the attention + presences of the Higher levels. Since i think the Yuan Array is the kind of event that most of cultivators will make a appearance to cheer on their disciples.

The Foundation Establishment Cultivators were tasked to eliminate this scouts with minimal Qi consumption so other scouts cannot detect the battle. And the decoy mission was so important that anyone who can do that was sent for it.

Following that is the revelation of the Palace and i borrowed some elements from @FixerUpper on the fallout of there being no pills and the general mood of the clan to act as a backdrop that inspire's Xiao Yi to work on the Puppet Project.

@LordEdric i kinda paraphrase the info you wrote in thread on the puppets and their use so it comes across as a something spoken, lemme know if i got any details wrong! Also, it help me by allowing me to link specialization to adding the Fragment of Hell-Sender to his Ji as a IC reason

Lastly, that is the only Formation i can come up with for now! It's basically a cluster missile where the main body files up before it opens and drops the Osprey from a unexpected height. @occipitallobe I like this to go to Fate Roll for the turn.
 
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Reaching forth with his mind, he touched the shard and knew in his heart and mind that he would forever be bound to the truth that the Soul was Perfection. No longer were his convictions a momentary thing, but now his very life blood. Every day he would work to perfect his soul in tandem with his body, readying for the day in which he would shed mortal flesh to become Soul and Soul alone, to take his place among the ascended Masters of life.
Wow, that imagery and meaning. I kinda feel like a scrub now (even more then usual). My Good Seed's Dao Pillar was just Zenga + a coating of metal.
Wei Feng had not even been born when last the catastrophe had come to the Golden Devils. Neither had most of the people he knew. Yet the air was full of feeling. A stilted and broken sadness, a shadow of grief yet awaiting. Like a family gathered round the sickbed of an ailing relative, not knowing when the end would come only that it would be soon.

They were holding funerals for those who still lived. The streets were clogged with great processions for those who had seen the end of their road and chosen to use their last days to cast forward a light to the future.

Even if many of the clan observed different traditions, enough funerary money burned to send a constant corona of smoke spiralling skyward.

He hated it, for it felt like defeat had already come. Wei Feng had spent 40 years fighting to save people against the odds. Even in the stalemate that the Hua war had become, he had beaten the odds, saving many innocent lives.

Perhaps he was finally coming to understand the feelings of those who had seen their leader killed in cruel ambush. Taken back to the days as a peasant boy, watching a father cower before his arrogant son, simply because he was a cultivator.

He hated it.
Oof. That imagery is a punch to the gut. But i really like all the different Omakes way of showing it! I think it really shows a nice snapshot of the Clan as a whole as they deal with this calamity

Like just with this, i can see that the POV here is from people who are already biding farewell while i tried to make mine to be about that mounting tension driving people insane and desperate. So you know, really cool to see!
"The clan recruiter came around recently. They tested Anna, they said she has the potential to be a cultivator.."

"That's wonderful news!" He burst out, smiling widely. "I'm so happy for you all. Why didn't you say so to begi….. Ah." His smile drained away. "You're worried about the trials."

Irene nodded, her jaw tight and eyes on the ground.

"You cultivators, you're stronger than us, but… the stories of the trials are awful. Last time even our previous grand Elder was supposedly struck down." She looked up at him, her voice raising "How can I send Anna into that! But..but…"
Ah, the Human Perspective. I like how it really shows the dilemma the Mortals of the Clan face
Irene's dilemma was not a unique one. Everyone knew that the trial was coming, but none knew the precise date. For parents like Irene, it meant an agonising choice. Allow their children to start their journey and hope that the trials would not take them. Or at least not begin until they had at least given their children enough time to complete basic legion training to give them the best chance to survive. Or hold them back, denying them the improvement in their quality of life that cultivation could bring for years.
Really a chilling example on how the Trial can affect traditions. Excellent showing good sir!
I think this takes me over the 10,000 word line for omakes written for this quest. Which I am very happy about. I may not be nearly as prolific as BungieOni or Alectai but I think that's pretty respectible.
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Let's hope all our Omakes are enough to tilt the Fate Rolls in our Good Seeds favor!
@occipitallobe on the spreadsheet it mentions cultivation aims. If it says default does that mean you are aiming for foundation establishment?
I believe the interpretation was that at Default, the Good Seed will go for FE at 9th Heavenstage. So if they get a boon that increases their cultivation, Default will move them to FE at 9th while other goals will move them to 10th and so on until they hit the goal.
 
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