Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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[X] Yes - Send her what she wishes. It should allow her to prosecute the war reasonably successfully. You will bleed for the Hua, but you won't die for them.
[X] Don't - Let them fight it out. If a Nascent Soul chooses to intervene, do so as well - on your home ground, prepared and ready. You are too valuable to the Clan to risk at this point. Not to valuable to risk, of course, just not at this moment.
 
I dont know why you keep insisting that it's a concrete answer in your favor. Its demonstrably a jazz hand.

Theres limits to being a contrarian.


It's perfectly possible they have a second living Nascent Soul. We just have no evidence of that. I wouldn't be surprised if they do, but I would not dare to claim they have, like you are doing.

I mean, extraordinary claim without any evidence should be taken with a grain of salt. I'm not against acknowledging one exists. I'm against making empty claims without any evidence.

I'm against claiming this specifically:
Ergo, at the time of that Early Nascent Soul's death, they would have not only been their third Nascent Soul, but also a represented significant investment of the Devil Bee's existing wealth. Likely a not-inconsiderable chunk of what they got from sacking the Seven Divine Saber Palace in the first place.

Which ironically, is a contrarian claim by itself. Since it bases itself on assumptions and presents itself as evidence. And it has been pointed out it's likely it's only one.

That is problematic.

Honestly, not sure if there is any point in continuing this discussion. You seem to be missing my point, and I'm rather tired of explaining it.
 
Ninth Prince PIcture - King Cobra, Raj
I had a 15k omake talking about the various Spirit Snakes the Ninth Prince came across, field guide style. And then it got deleted because I decided to write it on wordpad and it didn't save.
As you might expect, I haven't exactly been in the mood to write another omake, but I didn't want to just do nothing.

As such, I spent basically the entirety of yesterday doing this:


If you didn't guess from the title, this is the Ninth Prince's snake-controlling king cobra, Raj.

@occipitallobe If this counts as an omake for bonus purposes, I'd like a fighting across realms treasure if that's okay.
 
Constans Herculius 1 - Hobbies: Wine and Murder
Title: Hobbies: Wine and murder.
@occipitallobe

Constane had been sent out to a village of mortals that had issues with a handful of people turning up with all blood drained out of their bodies. However, he village stood within one of the most potent qi detecting formations the sect had. Even someone as weak as a cultivator of the 1st heavenstage would have been the detected. It was suspected that a mortal serial killer had performed the murders rather than one of the blood path, and for some reason Constance was ordered to go investigate.

It was expected finding the killer would be easy, that basic detective work combined with the mental acuity of a cultivator would be sufficient to untangle the web of personalities and relationships and thereby discover the killer. Unfortunately, the size of the settlement had been misrecorded in the archives (paperwork demons are ever insidious), and instead of a few dozen houses what greeted him was a small mountainside town of upwards of 3000 individuals by the name of.

Having given the whole thing up as a lost cause and resolving to return to the sect with another failure, Constance just went to one of the towns many bars instead. It was apparently normal for the towns inhabitants to take their breakfasts in a bar and while it wasn't full there were still plenty of people eating sweet honey pastries or olive oil and bread with their brandy reinforced tea. The locals seemed to be on their guard in the face of the large rough looking young man, understandably so considering he was armed and clearly a cultivator. There was not much he could do about that except show that he wasn't there for any sort of trouble, so he went up to the bar and ordered.

"I am new in town, and I am not familiar with the local food. What sort of drinks you got?" he said. The bartender had been watching him carefully since he came in relaxed minutely. "Well, if you don't think it's too early for it, we're known for our grape wine here. If you want something harder, we do have a distillery in town, and the brandy they make there is excellent. If that's too much, then—" "Grape Wine will do fine. What alternatives do you have?" Constance interrupted. The bartender frowned at him, but answered "Well, I make some of my own, everyone does. It'll cost you nothing more than a copper for each cup. We also have old man Chen's winery, he buys up grapes that we don't have time to deal with ourselves but his standards are high. His most popular wine is called the Karmino. Now, I assure you it's quality, merchants travel hundreds of miles to get it, but if you want something truly special there's this." With that, the bartender retrieved a clay jar, placing it on the bar counter. "My cousin makes this. Sometimes, in perfect years when mists that are neither to wet or too dry rise from the lake and sprit fungus covers the vines. If it's too dry, then you get too little fungus, but if it's too wet or if the moisture lingers for too long, the fungus make the grapes rot. But every so often you get to make this, a sweet wine with many positive qualities. The fungus dries out the grape, and both concentrates and intensifies the flavor, as well as adding entirely new dimensions. This particular harvest was of such quality that a cultivator such as yourself bought out a large part of my cousins stock for actual spirit stones, but for a good person like you, one gold will suffice." Constance looked at him questioningly "Are you cheating me?" He asked. "No no, I assure you it's a fair price" the bartender replied. "Honestly, even if you were and I found out later, tracking you down wouldn't be worth a mere gold coin."

At that, Constance utilized one of the most sacred of cultivator arts: retrieving money as from nowhere in order to hide were you keep you money. "Let us see if this wine lives up to the hype. Do you have glasses? Special products need neutral vessels, I find. No palate is so refined that it can totally shut out any distractions. True of everything, I would argue." With a polite smile, the bartender pulled out a bulbous glass and put it on the table. Pouring himself a drink, Constance began analyzing the aroma "First of all, this is some serious intensity. I am surprised I couldn't smell it right in the jar. In terms of fruit, I detect yellow pear and apple, peach and apricot. The peach and apricot tastes dried, but it seems to coverall youthfulness of the wine, is this the effect of the fungus? Almonds and honey. Finally, we have some floral and herbal characteristics characteristics. Acacia and elder flower, as well as a hint of mint. Now to taste. Incredibly sweet, as you said, but also extremely sour. Maybe not to the point of lemon juice but not too far off either. Alcohol levels are higher than I expected, too, even considering the qi imbued into the wine. Extremely heavy in terms of texture, of course. In conclusion, this is wine that will outlive you, and maybe even me, a cultivator, and while already outstanding, it will reach it's peak first a hundred years from now."

By this point, the bartender was figuratively glowing with reflected glory from his cousin. "I hear you know your stuff! It's always nice to serve an expert" he said. "Does he have a stockpile he's willing to sell me? Where does he live?" Constance asked. "He does, and if you leave the shop, turn right, continue until you hit the main street, right again, and then seventh left, at around 300 spans down the road there's a well. Take next right and you'll find his house at the end. There's not a lot of work this, so he's not very busy. He'll probably be meditating, he's actually a cultivator now from the success he had recently, but he's never minded being interrupted, wants the excuse I imagine."

Giving his regards, Constance left the bar, tried to follow the directions, got lost, asked for help, and eventually found a large two story fieldstone house next to set of terraced vineyards. With his wine trained nose, he was smelling something. Fresh blood. Someone had died here so recently that there was no doubt the killer was still at the scene of the crime. Constance crouched and considered his next mo— The wooden shutters that served as windows blew open and darkly dressed figure flew out, rolling across the hard soil on the ground. "Yooooo, Golden Devil come out!" the figure carried a vast saber, taller than a man, but nevertheless a normal mortal weapon. There were no qi diffusions. He looked directly in Constance's direction. "Will the real Golden Devil please stand up?" he said.

Constance, stood, tossed off his shoes and began slowly circling the strange man while channeling energy to his feet, weapon and shield in hands. "Why the hell you taking off your shoes, man?" The strange man asked. "To make it easier to move around, yeah?" Constance bullshitted. "Ah, I get it, it lets you control space and move closer or further away without moving your legs. Now that I look, you're way closer now than when you started circling me, real sneaky. It's nice to see another cultivator taking interest in mortal martial arts rather than training how to shoot explosive fumes out their ass better, even if you're 1st of condensation trash." The man seemed utterly calm and controlled, like this was just a friendly discussion rather than the prelude to a deathmatch "Condensation trash? I mean, I get we're not a big deal to say the least, but you don't seem to be a cultivator at all." Constance was not quite as nonchalant, but he was still quite collected even if he was getting some light adrenaline shivers. "You have the honor of speaking to someone in the great circle of foundation establishment, or well, this one is a mere clone of the mortal level, but with clones like this I have slain tens of golden devils like yourself, you know. Over a thousand years of experience and greater insights into the dao counts for a lot, though it's not gotten me as much fuel for my blood path as I hoped. You're not going home today, that's for sure" The clone said. "I haven't really been interested in cultivating that much, since it feels like fights at higher cultvation get boring. I just want to hit things, not faff around with dumb energy. Does senior have any insights?" Constance asked. "Yes and no, like many things. It's mostly that most people have daos that let them do other things and aren't interested in hitting or slashing people as such. Even sword cultivators, often prefer energy. If you prefer differently, however, your dao most likely does involve getting close. Maybe you'll even get an art that forces other people to fight with their bodies, though that's less likely."

At that, the clone frowned "Wait, what the hell am I saying, you're dying today!" At that, he did some peculiar movement that seemed slow but accelerated him to speeds that Constance could barely follow—until a large amount of almost transparent heavy chains materialized, bound to the clone's body, stopping him short "How can this be?" he asked. "We've been talking for more than the time it takes to boil a cup of tea. I just made a binding circle while we were talking" Constance said. "Your feet, that's why you went barefoot, not for mobility, but so that you could send your qi into the ground. I am afraid it's my loss." Constance ran forward but had dodge under a chain flying towards him "Your loss, my ass!" "Well, you can't blame an old man for trying." Constance had to deflect a weak, weighted down saber blow, but his mace struck true and broke the clone's arm. "You know, even if you kill me, I'll can make more clones. I'll just lose a bit of cultivation base." Constance smiled in response. "The golden devils are of the demonic path too, you know" he said, and crushed the clones skull.

He felt the hammer he had hidden away in his pack thrum with energy and went into the house. A dead and partially eaten corpse lay there, with features somewhat close to the bartender. "Rest in peace, winemaker." He then called his sandworm, carefully loaded it up with over five hundred bottles and told it to meet him on the other side of town. He then went back to tell the major what had happened, and gave him three times the market of the wine he had "borrowed". He explained it was for the next of kin as payment for the wine, since he didn't have time to contact them about buying the wine directly and departed homeward to report a successfully completed mission with a few complications.

Before that, however, he loaded the bottles off into his wine cellar (but not before opening one to celebrate success and survival), and went to his forge. Listening to the fragment in the hammer, he forged a bronze effigy, which he believed would create a decoy and teleport him away just before he would be hit with a killing attack. It would then shatter, possibly as a consequence of being harvested from a clone, he supposed.

Bonus: Lifesaving treasure

Authors note: Concentrating grape must with fungus is a real wine making practice. Historically, the single most prestigious type of wine was made this way (well, eszencia is it's own beast, even among botrytized wines) and though it has unfairly fallen in prestige, they still make excellent wines this way in (among others) Austria, Hungary and Germany. It's possible to find as "cheaply" as 30€ per liter and as expensively as 2000€ a liter, depending on the origin, type and quality. Barrier to entry is very high, since the harvest often fails. The Tokaji Aszu appellation from Hungary and (technically) Slovakia is the standard example and it comes highly recommended from me. The tasting portion is a pretty representative as to how a tasting of this "type" of wine might go down.
 
[X] Yes - Send her what she wishes. It should allow her to prosecute the war reasonably successfully. You will bleed for the Hua, but you won't die for them.
[X] Don't - Let them fight it out. If a Nascent Soul chooses to intervene, do so as well - on your home ground, prepared and ready. You are too valuable to the Clan to risk at this point. Not to valuable to risk, of course, just not at this moment.
 
[X] Yes - Send her what she wishes. It should allow her to prosecute the war reasonably successfully. You will bleed for the Hua, but you won't die for them.
[X] Don't - Let them fight it out. If a Nascent Soul chooses to intervene, do so as well - on your home ground, prepared and ready. You are too valuable to the Clan to risk at this point. Not to valuable to risk, of course, just not at this moment.
 
Keiros Cole Emendator: Challenge I

Tavi was an idiot.

On the surface, his cousin didn't seem it - glib of tongue, quick of wit, charming as only a born philanderer could be, he seemed every inch a proper Emendator, graceful and gracious; cunning and strong. One would think keeping watch over a simple measuring array would not be beyond his meager powers of intellect. A child could do it. A child had done it.

And yet. Here they were.

The doors to the Third Workshop exploded open as the force of his rage bowed them inwards. Father had had the animating arrays carved after the last... couple of incidents.

"OCTAVIAN ATTICUS EMENDATOR," he roared, voice echoing in the sudden pin-drop silence, the man himself caught mid-word and suppressing a wince as Keiros strode past the softly vibrating hinges, "I NAME YOU FECKLESS AND FAITHLESS. YOU DESERTED YOUR POST DESPITE MAKING AN OATH TO HOLD FAST. I DEMAND THE RESTITUTION OF HONORABLE COMBAT."

The silence rang with his words, until a small, papery sigh broke it.

"Again?" it ventured, but no one listened to Mistress Xu, she was not Clan and kept on a short leash, allowed so far only due to her sterling ability and many accomplishments and injuries in defending their lands.

Of all present, she was ironically the most tolerable, but only just.

"Yes," he snarled and she rolled the glass beads she called eyes heavenwards and whispered something about heathen eggs in her barbarian tongue.

Tavi, like a man finding a chicken bone lodged in his throat and not expecting it there, stared at him, wide-eyed. A dozen eyes followed Keiros as he paced forwards, black robes billowing ominously behind him, the more delicate instruments and stoppered liquids left shuddering in his wake.

"What say you, Octavian Atticus Emendator?" he asked.

Octavian Atticus Emendator blinked, still gobsmacked.

It was satisfying, slightly.

Then the train of thought, once stalled, started up again and it was so unutterably, buffoonishly annoying.

"Cuz, cuz, look, stop, calm down," Tavi said, hands up, palms outward, fingers spread in surrender, stepping backward in small, halting steps- towards the project of his rival, Keiros' idly noted, whether on purpose, or coincidence he couldn't really come to care, either way, it would not be affected by the events taking place here, "I - I took my eyes off of it for one second to tend to the purifying arrays and then it stopped working and I figured-"

"What say you, Octavian Atticus Emendator?" he repeated, drawing closer.

The small workshop - one of many of the Emendators, as suggested by its name - held its breath. Among members of the main Emendator bloodline, a challenge given thrice, could not be refused. But thrice given, and the challenger gave away the right to name the where, the when and the how of the duel. A potent sacrifice in exchange for mere satisfaction.

A sign of arrogance - or ability.

"Will you just shut up and listen?" Tavi squawked, his voice pitched such that anyone not better informed would have thought it breaking like a mortal child's. "Your array isn't even that complicated, it's like half a day of progress at most, we can-"

"What say you, Octavian Atticus Emendator?" he repeated, a final time, looming over Tavi, staring down the bridge of his large, hooked nose at the shorter man.

His cousin was nearly two years his senior, and, according to the standards of the Clan, talented, having reached Second Heavenstage at the mere age of eighteen. The purity of his blood was undeniable: although he disdained the beard that older generations put such attention into maintaining, his jaw purposefully bare, his scalp overflowed with curly, bronzen locks and his face had the classic, aquiline nose, square jaw and strong, symmetrical cheekbones associated with strength, virility and good looks. The rest of his body helped with that association.

In comparison, well, if Tavi was a stallion, Keiros was a giraffe: tall, lanky and strange to look at, his features seeming to work at cross-purposes. He had also taken but his first step into Heaven, and at a clear disadvantage.

"You're seriously going to offer me a three-fold challenge over fourteen seconds of inattention?" Tavi asked incredulously, head craned upwards.

Keiros said nothing.

The silence stretched.

Tavi nodded, breathing out. His hunch straightened and his panicked expression veered subtly towards a small, one might even go so far as to call crafty, grin, that flickered before going out.

"You know, for a washout, you always did have a perplexing reputation, cuz. Fine. I accept your challenge."

He looked around, apparently trying to gauge the effect of his words.

"I shall allow you to name the place and time as well as your weapon," Keiros said frostily.

A knife dropped into Tavi's palm.

"Here and n-"

He might have mentioned it before, but.

Tavi was an idiot.

Mistress Xu rapped the ground with her cane, qi rippling out before forming beautifully precise projections of force that blew Tavi backwards, and brought Keiros up short. "Not here, you headstrong idiots." She jerked a thumb. "Outside."

Keiros bowed perfunctory. "Of course, Mistress Xu."

Tavi flipped to his feet, incensed. His knives had vanished. A second later, he had collected himself enough to banish the anger that should have left with his weapons. "My apologies, Mistress Xu."

She flicked a contemptuous hand at them both.

"Out."

They outed.

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Author's Note: Minor edits for lore and readability.
 
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@occipitallobe

Would it be possible to get some info about the difference of treatment between a guest Cultivator and a clan member? The vote was equally , but with the clans interesting history, where is the line that separates them?
 
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Keiros Cole Emendator: Challenge I (1/?)
@occipitallobe

Tavi was an idiot.

On the surface, Keiros' cousin didn't seem it - glib of tongue, quick of wit, charming as only a born philanderer could be, his dear cousin could spin off lies faster than a duneorb spider could weave sandsilk nets. One would think keeping watch over a simple measuring array would not be beyond even his happenstance intellect. A child could do it. A child, in fact, had done it until the mother complained, informed by some jealous snitch that the array being tested was 'dangerous' and 'experimental' and definitely not worth three copper coins and a small bauble per day.

And yet. Here they were.

The doors to the Third Workshop exploded open as the force of his rage bowed them inwards. Father had had the animating arrays carved after the last... couple of incidents.

"OCTAVIAN ATTICUS EMENDATOR," he roared, voice echoing in the sudden pin-drop silence, the man himself caught mid-word and suppressing a wince as Keiros strode through the softly vibrating hinges of the wine-wood circular doors, "I NAME YOU FECKLESS AND FAITHLESS. YOU DESERTED YOUR POST DESPITE MAKING AN OATH TO HOLD FAST. I DEMAND THE RESTITUTION OF HONORABLE COMBAT."

The silence rang with his words, until a small, papery sigh broke it.

"Again?" it ventured, but no one listened to Mistress Xu, she was not Clan and kept on a short leash, allowed so far only due to her sterling ability and many accomplishments and injuries in defending their lands.

Of all present, she was ironically the most tolerable, but only just.

"Yes," he snarled and she rolled the glass beads she called eyes heavenwards and whispered something about heathen eggs in her barbarian tongue.

Tavi, like a man finding a chicken bone lodged in his throat and not expecting it there, stared at him, wide-eyed. A dozen eyes followed Keiros as he paced forwards, black robes billowing ominously behind him, the more delicate instruments and stoppered liquids left shuddering in his wake.

"What say you, Octavian Atticus Emendator?" he asked.

Octavian Atticus Emendator blinked, still gobsmacked.

It was satisfying, slightly.

"Cuz, cuz, look, stop, calm down," Tavi said, hands up, palms outward, fingers spread in surrender, stepping backward in small, halting steps- towards the project of his rival, Keiros' idly noted, whether on purpose, or coincidence he couldn't really come to care, either way, it would not be affected by the events taking place here, "I - I took my eyes off of it for one second to tend to the purifying arrays and then it stopped working and I figured-"

"What say you, Octavian Atticus Emendator?" he repeated, drawing closer.

The small workshop - one of many of the Emendators, as suggested by its name - held its breath. Among members of the main Emendatorvbloodline, a challenge given thrice, could not be refused. But thrice given, and the challenger gave away the right to name the where, the when and the how of the duel. A potent sacrifice in exchange for mere satisfaction.

A sign of arrogance - or ability.

"Will you just shut up and listen?" Tavi squawked, his voice pitched such that anyone not better informed would have thought it breaking like a mortal child's. "Your array isn't even that complicated, it's like half a day of progress at most, we can-"

"What say you, Octavian Atticus Emendator?" he repeated, a final time, looming over Tavi, staring down the bridge of his large, hooked nose at the shorter man.

His cousin was nearly two decades his senior, and, according to the standards of the Clan, talented. The purity of his blood was undeniable: although he disdained the beard that older generations put such attention into maintaining, his jaw purposefully bare, his scalp overflowed with curly, bronzen locks and his face had the classic, aquiline nose, square jaw and strong, symmetrical cheekbones associated with strength, virility and good looks. The rest of his body helped with that association.

In comparison, well, if Tavi was a stallion, Keiros was a giraffe: tall, lanky and strange to look at.

"You're seriously going to offer me a three-fold challenge over fourteen seconds of inattention?" Tavi asked incredulously, head craned upwards.

Keiros said nothing.

The silence stretched.

Tavi nodded, breathing out. His hunch straightened and his panicked expression veered subtly towards a small, one might even go so far as to call crafty, grin, that flickered before going out.

"You know, for a washout, you always did have a perplexing reputation, cuz. Fine. I accept your challenge."

He looked around, apparently trying to gauge the effect of his words.

"I shall allow you to name the place and time as well as your weapon," Keiros said frostily.

A knife dropped into Tavi's palm.

"Here and n-"

He might have mentioned it before.

Tavi was an idiot.

Mistress Xu rapped the ground with her cane, qi rippling out before forming beautifully precise projections of force that blew Tavi backwards, and brought Keiros up short. "Not here, you headstrong idiots." She jerked a thumb. "Outside."

Keiros bowed perfunctory. "Of course, Mistress Xu."

Tavi flipped to his feet, incensed. His knives had vanished. A second later, he had collected himself enough to banish the anger that should have gone with it. "My apologies, Mistress Xu."

She flicked a contemptuous hand at them both.

"Out."

They outed.

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Author's Note: I got this far and realized I really don't have a grasp on what either of these two idiots should be capable of so I'm stopping here for a moment and asking for tips. :V

@BungieONI help. wut do i do nao.
Cool this is awesome!

So! Now that you have an omake introducing Keiros, who I love and is adorable, I'm going to link you what you need to do:

Good Seeds

Keiros will start at the 1st Heavenstage, basically bottom of the barrel start, there's a spreadsheet in the informationals about what that means in terms of some loose capabilities. Linking it here.

Cultivation Realm Information.

He will also have one bonus. You picked an enhanced intellect for him.

So what you need to do is create a Good Seed Background sheet which can basically act as a character sheet where you note down for occipitallobe the stuff you have and the bonuses you want from your Omakes. There are several examples of how this might work in the sidestory threadmarks, mine is one potential example.

You've kind of gone about it backwards in that most made the sheet first and then an omake exploring them. But that isn't necessarily an issue. You can just use this Omake you have written here to claim your Omake Bonus for this turn, if and when occipitallobe approves it.

Basically what happens is that Good Seeds are made, their background sheet made up, and the player selects a Starting Bonus. Then they can write an Omake and claim an Omake Bonus for that turn. The Good Seed info post I linked details what sort of bonuses those can be. You get one of those a turn. Any further omakes you make can be designated to either go to your Good Seed's cultivation roll, or their Fate roll.

Basically, when you're done with Keiros's background sheet and first omake you should have two bonuses: Your starting bonus which you chose to be enhanced intellect IIRC, and one other thing from this Omake here.
 
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Keiros Cole Emendator [DEAD, Turn 5] - Good Seed Background
Whoops, gotta say, for some reason I thought First Heavenstage was a bit higher above scrub than 'literally, a scrub'. In that case, their ages can go down drastically. So, borrowing other terminology, first Heavenstage is 'Lv. 1 Starting Immortal' and not yet a 'Good Seed.' (?)

Well, I'll put the omake into a WIP spoiler as I tinker with the voice and other details.

Anyway, something like this?

Name: Keiros Cole Emendator
Background: Fifth child and third son of the esteemed Lucianus Mannus Emendator, Core Formation Elder and Patriarch of the sprawling Emendator name, Keiros grew, as the elders called it, strong, but crooked. Ferociously intelligent, even at the tenderest of mortal ages, he never seemed to understand why it was that his peers could not keep up with him and grew contemptuous of and derisive of any who were not his intellectual equals. Unable to see why his attitude might be off-putting, he grew up largely alone, unable to communicate properly with even his siblings. Only with his father and mother, who did dote on him, could he hold a proper conversation.

Then, while travelling on the road, he was kidnapped.

As luck would have it, his kidnappers knew neither his origin nor importance. Slaughtering his bodyguards and supping on their blood, the blood cultivators, they merely saw him as one of the masses that would feed their filthy appetites, adding him to the thousands they already had. He was, as luck would further see to, rescued, a passing troop of cultivators delaying the enemy long enough for further reinforcements to drive the blood cultivators away.

He would return, changed, throwing himself at challenges and always attempting - and always failing failing - to connect with others.

Cool Thing: Enhanced Intelligence.
 
Whoops, gotta say, for some reason I thought First Heavenstage was a bit higher above scrub than 'literally, a scrub'. In that case, their ages can go down drastically. So, borrowing other terminology, first Heavenstage is 'Lv. 1 Starting Immortal' and not yet a 'Good Seed.' (?)

Well, I'll put the omake into a WIP spoiler as I tinker with the voice and other details.

Anyway, something like this?

Name: Keiros Cole Emendator
Background: Fifth child and third son of the esteemed Lucianus Mannus Emendator, Core Formation Elder and Patriarch of the sprawling Emendator name, Keiros grew, as the elders called it, strong, but crooked. Ferociously intelligent, even at the tenderest of mortal ages, he never seemed to understand why it was that his peers could not keep up with him and grew contemptuous of and derisive of any who were not his intellectual equals. Unable to see why his attitude might be off-putting, he grew up largely alone, unable to communicate properly with even his siblings. Only with his father and mother, who did dote on him, could he hold a proper conversation.

Then, while travelling on the road, he was kidnapped.

As luck would have it, his kidnappers knew neither his origin nor importance. Slaughtering his bodyguards and supping on their blood, the blood cultivators, they merely saw him as one of the masses that would feed their filthy appetites, adding him to the thousands they already had. He was, as luck would further see to, rescued, a passing troop of cultivators delaying the enemy long enough for further reinforcements to drive the blood cultivators away.

He would return, changed, throwing himself at challenges and always attempting - and always failing failing - to connect with others.

Cool Thing: Enhanced Intelligence.
They are pretty scrub tier yeah, but you do count as a Good Seed for the purposes of this quest because you have the potential to go far. That's what marks them really.
 
He would return, changed, throwing himself at challenges and always attempting - and always failing failing - to connect with others.
Hmm, maybe i need more but he doesn't come across as arrogant to me in the latest omake. The impression i got is more of short-tempered. And honestly, i'm on his side regarding the arrays since it could literally be a matter of life and death.

I mean, i guess it's not really arrogance and not knowing Mt Tai if Keiros can back it up ?
 
Ferenike 9 - Scorplings
Ferenike 9 - Scorplings​

The smells of the Trainee Barracks in the an hour before Dawn brought her back to memories of Lu Zhiang, Liao Bu and Cassandra, her trainers of years ago. Sweat and blood and Qi and the greenery supported by the Clan's arrays. And that effervescent scent of newbie misery.

She wondered where they were now? Lu Zhiang had probably ascended to a Centurion position at this point, becoming an expert of Foundation Establishment. Liao Bu, that spear man, might have as well and been sent somewhere on the recommendation of Dragoumis.

She didn't know where Cassandra Agata was, no news had reached her ears. She blinked slowly... perhaps she had died in the raids with the Devil Bees.

Her Maniple, the 40 men and women who made up half of a Century were buzzing about the Dawn Fortress on an endless number of tasks about the core territories in their squads of five. Everyone but her under-strength squad, and how that thought was sore, was covering for those being sent to the Night Devil Fortress as raids slowly began to increase in intensity.

Her mind whispered in the murmur of gears and flame, war was coming. Soon. And the small flames she nurtured would go out and die. Consumed. She sighed, rubbing her aching left hand. The bones were still healing, fractures sealed by glass lining them, some glass rising to the surface of her skin and leaving it lined with pinkish cracks. Her breath was a rasp still, small glass grains acting like soldiers repairing her lungs like they were a dam, slowly healing the scarring.

Enough melancholy, Dragoumis had given her four squads to train and she had just the idea to start their day.

She walked casually to the Third Barrack, hands behind her back and hidden in the sleeves of her travelling robe. It was a small building all things said and done, only four stories and meant for twenty people to live comfortably, built as a long rectangle with arrow slits for windows. Other fortifications dotted it, the door recessed and small enough to only fit two people shoulder to shoulder. Above it would be murder holes.

Around one side lay its assigned garden... she paused to examine it. It was dying. The beets looked sickly and the grain was stunted and brown. Sweet gods Lu Zhiang would have murdered her for this sacrilege.

Right. Slight change of plan for these hopeless juniors. They'd be gardening today.

A moment of rummaging around in her storage talisman later and she produced a massive silver gong hung suspended from a frame of beast bones. On its surface was embossed a design of a fearsome Screech Bear. Some favor trading and the passing of Spirit Stones into the right hands on Gallius's advice had landed her this little beauty. A few moments pushing the gong around and tweaking its position had it perfectly aimed at the doors of the training hall.

With a flourish she produced the Striking Baton, its fabric covered head covered in the woven thread design of an eagle.

"Hup." She grabbed the handle in both hands, a painful grind in her back and hand as she raised the Baton high. Investing it with Qi she then brought it around in a single swoop to strike the Gong!

YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

The thing howled like a dying scream, rising in pitch till her ears rang from the teakettle shriek. Waves of sound hit the doors and blew them open to bounce against the inner walls, blowing in a cloud of dust in its wake.

There was an enormous ruckus, cries of alarm rising from within the building as she watched doors fly open, clan juniors rushing out of them and down the stairs, trailed by a horrific mass of feathers, pillows, blankets, and clothing in a panicked stampede. A quick hop relocated her to the top of the peaked roof to watch the courtyard in front of the door before any of them could notice her.

"ATTACK! ITS AN ATTACK! WE'RE UNDER ATTACK!" A trainee yelled from inside and the cry was taken up the others as they pushed and rampaged towards the doors.

She sighed.

When the first trainee popped out, a boy of maybe 16 with bright pale hair and embroidered robes, she stepped off and fell onto him in a flash of gold. There was a squeaky grunt and then he faceplanted under her, lightened, weight. The trainees behind him stopped dead and eyed her in terror.

"Well if we were under attack you'd certainly be dead Trainee Pleminon." She said sardonically as she sat crouched on his back. Her pipe popped into her hand and she took a pull of some sweet leaf. "Though I do have to wonder who would be foolish enough to attack the Golden Devils in the heart of their own territory, and why I didn't know about it."

There was a weak, sand muffled groan from the boy beneath her feet. She stood up and stared at the motley mess before her from beneath the wide brim of her hat for an eyeblink. All of them were young, less than half her age at best, children. None of them were above the first Heavenstage, though none were still mortal. Their names and faces and families flashed through her mind as she assessed their ability, comparing them to the documents Dragoumis had handed her. They stood in a loose crowd, mingling like confused birds as they tried to avoid her gaze, still stunned.

The moment passed and she clapped her hands as she stepped off of Trainee Pleminon, and credit to him he had the presence of mind to scuttle away from her back towards his friends.

"FORM UP! Four ranks, five each!" She shouted at them, her lungs twinging. She was glad she had those Contribution Points from killing Zu Jing and wrapping up his cult, she would love for the healing to complete quickly, though she was willing to wait. It'd come when it came and she'd done what she could.

The trainees bunched up and shouts rose as they tried to organize themselves. About a minute of jostling and shoving occurred before they stopped in a... facsimile of proper ranks. The lines weren't straight, they were slouching with only a few straight backs amongst them, and some squads were mixed up. Plus they had no uniforms on, but she wasn't going to blame them for something that far beyond them. Yet.

This time she let them hear her sigh.

"Absolutely disgraceful!" She shouted as she approached them. Her hands reached out and she started smacking chests, kicking legs, and snatching people by the shoulders to push them where they needed to go.

"Stand straight!"

"Feet shoulder width apart!"

"You are not in squad 1! Go to squad 2 you idiot! Get more sleep!"

This went on for about two minutes until she was satisfied. Multiple trainees were smacked with a crimson glass pipe as she poked and prodded them into place.

Now the lines were basically straight and each five man squad was standing together and they were straightbacked and as proud as they could be in their night clothes.

With a huff she returned to her place in front of them and shook her head in disapproval. "Terrible. To you helpless juniors I am Ferenike of the Golden Devils! Eighth Heavenstage cultivator of the Clan, and one of your new trainers. Don't go complaining to Centurion Dragoumis, he will not care."

The trainees all flinched at her proclamation, cries and sighs of despair echoing over the front yard.

"We'll have a long and useful relationship over these coming years, I'm sure of it," She said ominously, more despondent expressions and noises emerging from her rapt crowd. "But let it never be said that I am not generous. The two best amongst you, and who I like best, will become a part of my squad and receive commensurate status and cultivation resources." She said with a smile.

"Oooooh, damn do you think..."

"...is she serious..."

"Imagine it!"

Like she planned, that got them talking. She let them have a few moments of that before she clapped and shouted again. "Enough jaw wagging! Run that way!" She said and pointed to her left.

To her happy surprise they took off immediately, the idea of rewards driving their brains into gear. There was pushing, shoving and almost a few trips on their night clothes in the darkness, but they gave an admirable effort at running.

Then she lit up bright red behind them and screamed at them in the voice of a horrifying blast furnace. "RUN FASTER! RUNNING WILL SAVE YOUR LIFE!" She roared, and then jogged after them at an easy pace. For her at least. For these poor juniors it was enough to have them screaming in fear and pushing themselves to their limits as they moved at a dead sprint.

Some started to straggle, slowing, panting with effort. "Faster! Stay in formation!" She roared at them as she prodded those who fell out with a blunt stick. One person almost fell before they caught themselves, and their squad kept going without them.

She howled in rage. "LEAVE NO ONE BEHIND! GRAB THEM AND CARRY THEM IF YOU MUST, BUT DO NOT LEAVE THEM AND DO NOT STOP RUNNING!"

The stragglers were snatched up, supported by their fellows and with red and sweaty faces they pushed themselves to their utmost. And to her delight she saw the formation speed up as a whole.

"UNITY!" She screamed.

"UNITY!" Her little trainees screamed back.

"DUTY!" She yelled.

"DUTY!" They yelled back.

"FOR THE CLAN!" She roared.

"FOR THE CLAN!" They roared as loud as they could.

And by the hells even in night clothes and covered in dust and sweat, with red faces and tired eyes, she could actually see some promise in these juniors. Except for their garden.

By the time they stopped, the Sun was high in the morning and they were all completely exhausted. Some were teetering on the edge of collapse and held up by their fellows, while others were blankly staring, uncomprehending beyond the simplest instructions.

"Right then!" She said as her light show dimmed and she clapped her hands as she stood before them. Looking at them haggard and weary, holding their fellows and covered in scrapes, bruises, and dirt she was proud to see them standing as tall as they could with faint expressions of stubborn defiance on their faces. She fixed this scene in her mind. It would serve as the core of her Oasis.

Stubborn defiance. Stamina and perseverance.

Within, there was a shift, linkages unspooling between her vision and her small and still growing Dao of Patience. Yes, this was a good work.

"Now that you are all warmed up properly here are your Spirit Stones for Cultivation! I took the liberty of retrieving them from your rooms last night while you slept."

There were looks of intense dismay that flashed through their faces as they realized what she meant. Those looks were quickly replaced by mixed relief at her next words. "Take a break to cultivate and rest. Drink some water but do not eat your ration now, you will puke." she said from painful experience as she watched them collapse to the ground and huddle together in their squads, some leaning against each other.

They all flinched and shuddered as she walked between them, pipe in her mouth trailing a pungent sweet smoke and her hands folded behind her. Good, they would learn fear and under her guidance how to cast it away as fuel for their Cultivation.

No one was, miraculously, stupid enough to try eating. They were probably too tired to be hungry.

So she walked amongst them, prodding those who weren't focusing properly because of the pain of cultivation, and opened her senses to the flows of Qi in these juniors. She wanted to see how their Qi moved, the faint coiling patterns that might emerge in this period of recovery. How did tired cultivators cultivate Qi? What did they think felt right?

She would try not to make the honest mistake of her honorable senior Xiao Yi when making her Oasis. It could not rely on her or the strong. It was a tool of the weak to survive.

After a few minutes she smacked the baton on the bones of the gong, causing a loud thud to ring out and everyone to open their eyes and look at her. A few twitched seeing her in proximity to the device. "Up! We're gardening today!" She said brightly.

They blinked at her in confusion as they leaped to their feet. Too slow but they'd work on that. Had to get the worst failures dealt with first. Like their pitiful physical conditioning.

One's hand shot into the air. She snorted. "This ain't a schoolyard, ask!"

The junior, a gangly girl as tall as her with red hair asked in confusion. "Master Ferenike, why are we gardening?"

Ferenike pinched the bridge of her nose. "Not a question that stupid. What is the PURPOSE of the Golden Devils?" She roared.

"To defeat our enemies!"

"To grow strong!"

"To protect the mortals and cultivators in our care!"

She got a jumble of responses and clapped, stopping the cavalcade as she pointed at a boy with brown hair and features more like a Third Sea native, with an interesting scorpion brooch on their clothing. "You. That is almost right."

She stared at them. "The purpose of the Golden Devils is to throw down Heaven and bring order to this world. Helping mortals is one result strive to for and a tool we use for that purpose. Now! Go! Get in that garden!"

They got in the garden and she began to direct them on how to repair their faulty arrays, how to water their plants properly and how to repair the decaying beds. As they began their work she lectured them.

"Think of this garden like the mortals and lessers you will have to protect, your family and future. You must nurture it with gentleness, patience, and strength..." She began, trying to impart to them the ethos of the Legions. It'd take a lot of effort to get it through their thick skulls, gods know it took her a while. Negligence of ones garden was not unlike negligence of much more important things, like ones friends and their defense.

She stood easily as she watched them, her lecture having wound down. The sun was high in the sky now, beating down on them as they worked, bent backed in the dirt. Fiddling with a small glass sphere in her hand out of sight she finished inscribing her words onto it and then, flung it.

Clunk! "OW!" The fist sized red orb smashed into Trainee Pleminon's forehead as he stood to stretch from his work. He caught it on reflex and peered fiercely at her for a moment, then seemed to note the weight in his hand and looked down on it. She had carved a message for him, in some paltry imitation of what the Archegetes was said to have done once. Though her advice did not pertain to Cultivation, but instead the Legion itself.

Be Considerate of your Comrades.

His face dipped slightly in shame, remembering how he called an attack erroneously, and met her gaze. He understood. She nodded. With a straightening of his back he nodded and put it away carefully in a pocket.

Similar such scenes played out over the course of the day as she passed on advice to her juniors. She was perhaps fortunate to not be so removed from them as to be almost completely out of their perspective as the Grand Elder or a Core Formation trainer might be.

When she was done with them for the day she shepherded them off to their barrack, watching them clean it and ensuring they more properly secured their rooms against intrusion.

When she was done it was dark, the twinkling stars above her head, and a weighty feeling had settled into her chest. It settled in her stomach, pushed on her shoulders, and weighed her heart. These small flames were now in her care and this weight felt somewhat like responsibility. But even more so.

She stared up at the Third Barrack and pondered the possibility of this building being cold, empty and her trainees buried beneath the sands.

She would do more than her best for these children.



@occipitallobe another omake for youuu! This training arc will go for sometime and I hope to have a few omakes for it, and fighting the Devil Bees. I'd like to have my Fate supplemental for this specific Omake go either to the clans rolls against the Devil Bees, since its leading into set up of Ferenike training some of the people who will fight against them and takes place in about year 61 before the big invasion, or if that isn't possible to have it be a Fate roll supplemental for Ferenike herself.

This is also my start of setting up the Oasis formation plotline, which will be making appearances for it as she continues teaching her juniors. It won't get primary focus until next turn but it felt right to set it up like this first.
 
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"ATTACK! ITS AN ATTACK! WE'RE UNDER ATTACK!" A trainee yelled from inside and the cry was taken up the others as they pushed and rampaged towards the doors.

She sighed.

When the first trainee popped out, a boy of maybe 16 with bright pale hair and embroidered robes, she stepped off and fell onto him in a flash of gold. There was a squeaky grunt and then he faceplanted under her, lightened, weight. The trainees behind him stopped dead and eyed her in terror.

"Well if we were under attack you'd certainly be dead Trainee Pleminon." She said sardonically as she sat crouched on his back. Her pipe popped into her hand and she took a pull of some sweet leaf. "Though I do have to wonder who would be foolish enough to attack the Golden Devils in the heart of their own territory, and why I didn't know about it."
Welcome to hell, Trainee! Credits to his instinct though, being able to react like that will probably save his life one day.
Her mind whispered in the murmur of gears and flame, war was coming. Soon. And the small flames she nurtured would go out and die. Consumed. She sighed, rubbing her aching left hand. The bones were still healing, fractures sealed by glass lining them, some glass rising to the surface of her skin and leaving it lined with pinkish cracks. Her breath was a rasp still, small glass grains acting like soldiers repairing her lungs like they were a dam, slowly healing the scarring.
That must be a intimidating sight to the trainees. This battle-scarred woman with glowing scars ordering them about with a voice like metal grinding, signs that its in their best interest to not do anything funny.
"We'll have a long and useful relationship over these coming years, I'm sure of it," She said ominously, more despondent expressions and noises emerging from her rapt crowd. "But let it never be said that I am not generous. The two best amongst you, and who I like best, will become a part of my squad and receive commensurate status and cultivation resources." She said with a smile.

"Oooooh, damn do you think..."

"...is she serious..."

"Imagine it!"
Oh carrot and the stick! This will be interesting since those who aim for it would be the ones that push through all the training Ferenike is getting them to do and still don't mind more.
She howled in rage. "LEAVE NO ONE BEHIND! GRAB THEM AND CARRY THEM IF YOU MUST, BUT DO NOT LEAVE THEM AND DO NOT STOP RUNNING!"

The stragglers were snatched up, supported by their fellows and with red and sweaty faces they pushed themselves to their utmost. And to her delight she saw the formation speed up as a whole.

"UNITY!" She screamed.

"UNITY!" Her little trainees screamed back.

"DUTY!" She yelled.

"DUTY!" They yelled back.

"FOR THE CLAN!" She roared.
Haha, training through Fear is looking to be a success. Can't wait for the scene where they realize the intent behind the training and develop a sense of respect for her.
So she walked amongst them, prodding those who weren't focusing properly because of the pain of cultivation, and opened her senses to the flows of Qi in these juniors. She wanted to see how their Qi moved, the faint coiling patterns that might emerge in this period of recovery. How did tired cultivators cultivate Qi? What did they think felt right?

She would try not to make the honest mistake of her honorable senior Xiao Yi when making her Oasis. It could not rely on her or the strong. It was a tool of the weak to survive.
👍 I forsee great success with the Formation, and that the Clan might even put in work to elevate it to a level everyone can use due to how useful it would be
 
Welcome to hell, Trainee! Credits to his instinct though, being able to react like that will probably save his life one day.

That must be a intimidating sight to the trainees. This battle-scarred woman with glowing scars ordering them about with a voice like metal grinding, signs that its in their best interest to not do anything funny.

Oh carrot and the stick! This will be interesting since those who aim for it would be the ones that push through all the training Ferenike is getting them to do and still don't mind more.

Haha, training through Fear is looking to be a success. Can't wait for the scene where they realize the intent behind the training and develop a sense of respect for her.

👍 I forsee great success with the Formation, and that the Clan might even put in work to elevate it to a level everyone can use due to how useful it would be
It's always super fun to read your reactions.

Pleminon's instincts will likely save him from death at some point yeah, though right now it leans too close to cowardice and caused him to erroneously call an attack and potentially demoralize his fellow trainees which is what Ferenike's whole message was about.

I am having a shitload of fun using stuff a training sergeant friend of mine has described about his escapades training stupid newbies, and putting stupid newbie behavior (the garden) onto the screen as it were and Ferenike's reactions. The really hilarious shit for me is that she's like twice their age at best, but by all accounts is a baby herself in terms of immortal age. Its a very funny contrast to me.

The even funnier image to this intimidating battle scarred woman is that they get to imagine her getting into their rooms while they slept, completely unnoticed and looting all of their Spirit Stones.

I'm going to have a lot of fun using the build up in this training arc to work on the Oasis formation in turn 5.
 
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It's always super fun to read your reactions.

Pleminon's instincts will likely save him from death at some point yeah, though right now it leans too close to cowardice and caused him to erroneously call an attack and potentially demoralize his fellow trainees which is what Ferenike's whole message was about.

I am having a shitload of fun using stuff a training sergeant friend of mine has described about his escapades training stupid newbies, and putting stupid newbie behavior (the garden) onto the screen as it were and Ferenike's reactions. The really hilarious shit for me is that she's like twice their age at best, but by all accounts is a baby herself in terms of immortal age. Its a very funny contrast to me.

The even funnier image to this intimidating battle scarred woman is that they get to imagine her getting into their rooms while they slept, completely unnoticed and looting all of their Spirit Stones.

I'm going to have a lot of fun using the build up in this training arc to work on the Oasis formation in turn 5.

Worldbuilding Omakes make it easy for me! I like the new stuff that gradually builds a picture of the Clan as a whole especially when viewed in a nonchalant manner from the establishing POV. It sparks my imagination!

And as someone from a country with mandatory military service, i will say that some of the behavior and punishment for it brought back certain horrifying memories 😅

Lastly, i can't wait for the scene where the night raid get's escalated to them being turned out by Ferenike and scolded for their lack of attention. Thanks to the rasp you gave her, i now imagine it as them being awoken by the sound of Darth Vader breathing before looking up and finding her looming at them.

😱Really, they should count their blessings that she wasn't going to penalize them for losing the Spirit stones. The real-world equivalent that sprung to my mind was losing the assigned rifle. The punishment was *shudders...😱
 
Hmm, maybe i need more but he doesn't come across as arrogant to me in the latest omake. The impression i got is more of short-tempered. And honestly, i'm on his side regarding the arrays since it could literally be a matter of life and death.

I mean, i guess it's not really arrogance and not knowing Mt Tai if Keiros can back it up ?

The problem with a House or Sherlock Holmes type of asshole is that so long as you have ringside seats to their antics they're entertaining and persuasive: after all, they're smart and self-assured and that sells a lot.

However, I do think this kind of character should at best be a supporting character. I forget which work this nugget of anime wisdom came from, but being correct does not always mean you are right. My vague plan is to introduce him to formations work and being utterly unsuited to it, being both far more capable than his peers as well as far too inflexible, ruining his unit's cohesion and lowering morale.

Arrogance isn't always an unjustified belief in your own superiority, it's also believing your superiority gives you a blank check to not having to deal with social niceties. Well, imo anyway, we'll see how he turns out.
 
[X] Yes - Send her what she wishes. It should allow her to prosecute the war reasonably successfully. You will bleed for the Hua, but you won't die for them.
[X] Don't - Let them fight it out. If a Nascent Soul chooses to intervene, do so as well - on your home ground, prepared and ready. You are too valuable to the Clan to risk at this point. Not to valuable to risk, of course, just not at this moment.

@occipitallobe so out of the original force of attacking bees, is the 100,000 what is left, our the numbers of the original force?

It's approximately what's left. It's hard to know exact numbers against a hypermobile force mounted on giant bees.

The Devil Bees are blood cultivators, hmm?

Been having an idea sprout in my head for awhile now.. Poison the corpses.

Manuel actually did this in his fight against Child Corpse Gulper!

Were the Golden Devils part of the Six-Power Pact at the last time, or not?

No. No Righteous Power would ever ally with a Demonic one formally.

@Raron, your Good Seed is added to the index.

@occipitallobe I have a question! When a major force losses their only Nascent Soul cultivator due to freak accident so they are otherwise as strong as normal what happens to them? Like if the devil bees Nascent Soul cultivator dies does the sect just get annihilated by 6 Righteous path Nascent Soul cultivators? Or alternatively if say The Great Drunkard Sect Nascent Soul guy dies does their sect get extorted for enough resources that they never recover?

Sometimes. Righteous Powers tend to have webs of treaties and can obligate other Righteous Powers to lend them the resources to raise a new Nascent Soul. There's a reason they're so dominant. Often a power just ends, though. Sometimes a power conquers enough land to easily support two Nascent Souls and they end up at odds, and powers split up.

@occipitallobe will the combat experience our forces gain from this fight make our cultivators more effective on average?

Yes - at least for the moment.

@occipitallobe I just wanted to double check if Festus has been accepted as a good seed.

He's been added.

Oh look, treachery what are the odds

The defenders rolled a 4. I was like 'man, welp, nobody's perfect, you expect losses here and there' Attackers rolled a 2. The only thing that made sense was a comedy of backstabbing to the point where each side were their own worst enemy.

Well, I think it's a reasonable assumption that if they had a Nascent Soul to spare, they would have sent it along for the alpha strike.

If you think of your average Sect or Clan as a united army with a single person in charge dispatching resources for maximum effect, yes. In reality, bullying your junior Nascent Soul into going and alpha striking somewhere is extremely hard, as you usually don't have a huge amount of leverage against them and nobody in Early Nascent Soul is that excited about the notion of going and exposing themselves to being ganked by some in Mid Nascent Soul. If the Clan had a junior Nascent Soul they might do this, but the Clan are the single most unified faction on the map by no small margin.

Their max unity status actually caused me to discard an earlier quest mechanic where dealing with your Council was difficult because they all had political demands, and failing to meet them would mean passive resistance or even semi-active sabotage of your orders, so balancing those competing needs was key. The Clan just do what Manuel orders and they try to follow the spirit of those orders, which is a remarkable thing.

@occipitallobe

Would it be possible to get some info about the difference of treatment between a guest Cultivator and a clan member? The vote was equally , but with the clans interesting history, where is the line that separates them?

The vote we had treated them as 'As Guest Elders or Guest Cultivators'. What this means in practice is instead of making them part of the Clan and drawing them in, the Clan instead offers them payments in kind for their services, and may hire them on for decades or centuries at a time. They are ultimately guests, however, and will never command anything important, take on the most crucial missions, and certainly will never be moving large quantities of troops around. They're more honored allies, but definitely not a part of the Clan structure.

Usually if someone is inducted into the Clan it's by marriage, or by rituals infusing small (ritual) amounts of the Blood of Bronze into their very being. (Clan cultivators have at least traces of the Blood of Bronze in their lineage, even if it's one ancestor fifty generations back)

Not every Clansman has the pure Bronze blood, but I expect every Good Seed (unless it's made extremely explicit this isn't the case) has the lineage of the Clan somewhere in their history, and suffers from the Curse the entire Clan suffers from.

@occipitallobe another omake for youuu! This training arc will go for sometime and I hope to have a few omakes for it, and fighting the Devil Bees. I'd like to have my Fate supplemental for this specific Omake go either to the clans rolls against the Devil Bees, since its leading into set up of Ferenike training some of the people who will fight against them and takes place in about year 61 before the big invasion, or if that isn't possible to have it be a Fate roll supplemental for Ferenike herself.

This is also my start of setting up the Oasis formation plotline, which will be making appearances for it as she continues teaching her juniors. It won't get primary focus until next turn but it felt right to set it up like this first.

Broadly speaking, you can offer a bonus to the Clan, but as a Qi Condensation character that's roughly equivalent to a 1/10th chance of a tiebreak on one roll if it's tied (and I decide the roll beforehand as well!). The war is just too broad and the participants too powerful for weak Good Seeds to make much of a difference. Usually I'll just offer Fate bonuses - once a character is in Foundation Building (and this is a mechanic I mean to make more explicit in future) they can start to assist the Clan a little, and once they're in Core Formation they need to start making a very real choice between boosting their own cultivation or assisting the Clan with significant bonuses that could over time push the Clan over the line from destruction to survival.
 
Broadly speaking, you can offer a bonus to the Clan, but as a Qi Condensation character that's roughly equivalent to a 1/10th chance of a tiebreak on one roll if it's tied (and I decide the roll beforehand as well!). The war is just too broad and the participants too powerful for weak Good Seeds to make much of a difference. Usually I'll just offer Fate bonuses - once a character is in Foundation Building (and this is a mechanic I mean to make more explicit in future) they can start to assist the Clan a little, and once they're in Core Formation they need to start making a very real choice between boosting their own cultivation or assisting the Clan with significant bonuses that could over time push the Clan over the line from destruction to survival.
Oh yeah, HYPED! I super excited for this part! Gives me the feeling that the Good Seeds are repaying the Clan.
@occipitallobe can you threadmark this ? And as mentioned, if the Fate bonus is not applicable to Xiao Yi since the focus is on someone else, i like to direct it to a Clan Roll for whatever minor help it's worth
 
Minervina Barda 7- A taste of war PART 1
Minervina Barda 7- A taste of war PART 1

The First Siege of Night Devil Fortress- Day 6

"I wasn't even supposed to be here." The Poison Mistress moaned as the latest wave of demonic insects approached the Night Devil Fortress. She should never have started that little feud with the Elder in charge of the Contributions board.

It seems that with each passing second a score of the monstrous bee's fall from the sky, skewered by glass lances, incinerated in bronze spell fire or destroyed in a dozen other ways by the canny defences the Golden Devils are so famed for. But it also seems like two more appear for each one that falls and from the looks of ecstatic glee she briefly glimpses on their riders faces, the Devil Bee Cultivators morale is unshaken. Clearly they were determined to show their fellow Demons that their Blood Arts were superior to the Bronze Bloodline once and for all.

She grimly notes the Blood Cultivators don't lack for convincing arguments in this exchange of pointers. Arrows and javelins fall like rain alongside the occassional flashy spell and basket of dropped stones. Aerial assaults make a mockery of most walls.

She spots one such volley of viciously barbed throwing spears flying towards her cohort and shouts a warning. With practiced precision they ducked behind granite crenallations and array-wrought force barriers to weather the storm. Soon arrays all over her cohorts section of the first wall respond with a torrent of glass lances and targetted wind blasts, forcing the demons back for a moment. Fortunately these were not 'most walls.'

Her cohort... that should tell you how desperate things are. Oh she had passed the requisite training courses after breaking through, but everyone knew she didn't have the temperament for command. But there weren't enough Foundation Stage Cultivators to go around, so here she was, trying to look like she knew what she was doing in front of a 500 strong cohort of Qi Condensators. And what a cohort it is. An even split between stalled out old has been's with so much Bronze in their blood its a miracle they can still move and fresh saplings who barely looked old enough to be out from behind their mothers skirts. Whats more she can feel that they doubt her too, this odd little woman who was just passing through at the wrong time didn't look like she had it in her to keep them safe.

'I have lost two of them already and I don't even know their names.'

Another pack of aerial predators swings around to make a pass at them. This one features a larger specimen, 8 meters long and covered in spiked barding made from some odd green metal. A tall female figure stands proudly on its back. Foundation Establishment.

Minervina taps the parapet of the wall and confirms what she already knows. The Blasting Arrays haven't recharged yet, their already strained from heavy use and trying to rush them would be disastrous. She couldn't trust the unfamiliar squad to handle such a threat. She would have to tap her reserves.

She reaches into the miraculous pouch that has been her most trustworthy tool for decades and pulls out five shining yellow pills. She holds them deftly between her fingers and frowns at the oncoming onslaught, this would be all about timing.

The buzz of wings is deafening as the attackers come in low and fast, 12 metre long lances shining in the riders hands. Clearly they were aware that the best of their defenses were temporarily expended and intended to reap a bloody harvest.

Without thinking to spare a word to her panicking troops, the Poison Master mutters an incantation and flicks the pills into the air towards the bees with swift smooth actions of the thumb and forefinger of her left hand. She finishes a set of incantation gestures with her right hand in the same moment and then snaps her fingers. The sound is eerily loud, carrying easily across their small part of the cacophonous battlefield. The Poison Pills burst in unison, releasing a vast wall of murky yellow fog directly in front of the enemies vanguard.

The Bee Riders attack is instantly throw into chaos as they desperately try to jink and pull away from the suddenly appearing hazard. Momentum is a cruel mistress though and of three score beasts only a handful at the back manage to escape the fog.

Minervina smiles cruelly as her work shows immediate results. Originally envisaged as a pesticide, this concoction first gums up membranous wings, making flight difficult. On contact with air it rapidly starts to harden, forcing the target out of the sky.

Most of the attacking flight instantly lost several meters of height. Many smacked into the wall with a series of fatal thuds. Those lucky enough to avoid that fate were far too distracted to attack effectively as they tried to steer their ailing steeds out of danger. A few fell to opportunity attacks from her juniors, and others lost their remaining altitude rapidly soon after. Those would crash land in the space between walls 1 and 2 and could be disposed of easily.

Her opposing number is clearly not without some talent though. Min and her troops watch as the Foundation Establishment Bee Tamer rallies her remaining forces, some sort of powerful spell field emerges from her, exhorting them to gain altitude again. Slowly, around two score Devil Bee's turn for home, trying to escape.

"My lady, should I signal a request to the grand Spear Thrower Array for fire support. We should strike now while they are wounded." The request comes from a grizzled 12th Heavenstage Centurion who radiates dissatisfaction. Clearly he thinks a competent officer would have given that order already.

"No need ... " She really needed to get better with names "good fellow, the resin on their wings is a potent but slow acting insecticide. Within the hour those beasts will be in enough pain to lash out at their handlers. The Tamers will have to choose between spending a mountain of spirit stones worth of medicinal pills or putting down their own mounts. Either serves us well, let the grand array spend itself elsewhere for the moment."

A shiver of fear and respect runs through the cohort. She might be tiny and talk to herself at odd moments, but their new leader was certainly imposing in her own unique way.


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My 2nd Omake of the turn and hopefully the first of a few that recount Minervina's experience of the Golden Bee war, in which she is reluctantly forced to work with others.

Not sure if I am 100% happy with this one yet, so would be interested if anyone wants to critique or give feedback.

@occipitallobe sorry can I get a threadmark? I forgot to ping you in this one!
 
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Broadly speaking, you can offer a bonus to the Clan, but as a Qi Condensation character that's roughly equivalent to a 1/10th chance of a tiebreak on one roll if it's tied (and I decide the roll beforehand as well!). The war is just too broad and the participants too powerful for weak Good Seeds to make much of a difference. Usually I'll just offer Fate bonuses - once a character is in Foundation Building (and this is a mechanic I mean to make more explicit in future) they can start to assist the Clan a little, and once they're in Core Formation they need to start making a very real choice between boosting their own cultivation or assisting the Clan with significant bonuses that could over time push the Clan over the line from destruction to survival.
Good to hear! This is useful context for me and is an encouragement to get to Foundation Building :D

Given this and my own ruminations on how connected my newest omake is to the upcoming war I'll just ask for this to be a normal Fate bonus then to Ferenike and I won't be donating a Fate bonus to the clan as of yet.
 
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Without thinking to spare a word to her panicking troops, the Poison Master mutters an incantation and flicks the pills into the air towards the bees with swift smooth actions of the thumb and forefinger of her left hand. She finishes a set of incantation gestures with her right hand in the same moment and then snaps her fingers. The sound is eerily loud, carrying easily across their small part of the cacophonous battlefield. The Poison Pills burst in unison, releasing a vast wall of murky yellow fog directly in front of the enemies vanguard.

The Bee Riders attack is instantly throw into chaos as they desperately try to jink and pull away from the suddenly appearing hazard. Momentum is a cruel mistress though and of three score beasts only a handful at the back manage to escape the fog.

Minervina smiles cruelly as her work shows immediate results. Originally envisaged as a pesticide, this concoction first gums up membranous wings, making flight difficult. On contact with air it rapidly starts to harden, forcing the target out of the sky.
Nice, that's a poison master for you! What i really like is that contrary to other Xianxia cultivator's experiences this is not poison they would be used to. Xianxia poisons usually come along the lines of poison leading to internal effects and then death. Even their AOE poisons work in that fashion, so i think Chemical Warfare would be a surprise! :D
"No need ... " She really needed to get better with names "good fellow, the resin on their wings is a potent but slow acting insecticide. Within the hour those beasts will be in enough pain to lash out at their handlers. The Tamers will have to choose between spending a mountain of spirit stones worth of medicinal pills or putting down their own mounts. Either serves us well, let the grand array spend itself elsewhere for the moment."
And there's that hidden bite! Look beyond the underneath never felt more appropriate! Could i perhaps introduce the lovely lady Minervina to that new Poison Arrow formation that delivers poison Qi ?

I'm sure that with her expertise in poison, she can modify the base poison to this glorious version! :D
 
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