Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Amaranth Castellanos:

Omake reward -
Obtained a simple Infernal Eagle Pendant, allowing him to summon a massive fiery eagle to escape upon..
Fate - Entered the Qiguai Secret Realm. Upon first entering, was challenged by a 10th Heavenstage cultivator, who promptly beat him badly, robbed him of his gains and Wounded him. He managed to find an excellent treasure. An ancient Battle-Trained Thousand-Tongue Toad found him, drawn by the aura of his magical boots. It gifted him with a Sticky Toad Saliva Droplet. A powerful treasure allowing him to stick and slow down anyone in the same realm, and would even allow him to temporarily fight an enemy in Early Foundation Establishment. After this, a series of other cultivators chased him, Badly Wounding him, willing to kill a Golden Devil for the luck boost. They hunted him down like an animal, and at the very last were about to kill him. Without his Infernal Eagle Pendant, he would have surely died, but at least managed to escape from the Qiguai Secret Realm with his life, losing his Pendant.
Cultivation - 9th Heavenstage. 3 turns from breaking through.
Health - Currently Badly Wounded. 40 years to fully recover. (Fun note. Without a Fate bonus this would've been a crippling.)
Hey nice! Honestly, I expected a crippling, so avoiding that feels pretty great. Also, Stage-Jumping Treasures are pretty useful in a pinch. While Amaranth probably won't use this in the Hundred-Year Trials against Foundation, it'll assure his life against any Qi Condensation, I think that's fair to say.

Hm, the question is, should I spring for another LST to be extra-safe, or should I push for healing the wounds? I'll have to think about it.

(Or, I could finally make that movement tech I was thinking about while Amaranth's cultivation is stalled out.)

BTW, @occipitallobe, Amaranth was 3 turns from breaking through last turn. Did the recent wounds slow down his cultivation this turn to a halt, or is it a mistake?
 
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Xiao Yi 13 - [Fallout]
Xiao Yi [Fallout]

The sound of a crack caught Parmenion mid-sip. Setting his cup down and directing his Qi so that it examined it in minutiae, a small almost unnoticeable crack flared it's presence to him. Frowning slightly at the crack on his favorite cup and what it meant, Parmenion threw his will outwards and let it soar to each of the small fragments that were split off from it and given to promising youngsters.

Number 7

Number 3

Number 15


As his Will bounced from fragment to fragment, it was brought to a sudden halt before it could reach one of the newer fragment he gave out. Focusing his will, Parmenion spread out his senses and found himself just outside the Qiguai Clan Lands. Deciding not to take his chances with the Qiguai Clan's defenses, Parmenion begun to wait knowing that any Qi Condensation Cultivator that had to use a Core Formation Cultivator's Will would count their blessings from escaping death and leave the realm.

As he waited, Parmenion started pondering on which Clansman it could be, a task much harder for this Opening of the Qiguai Secret Realm considering the number of Golden Devil Clansmen who had chosen to take their chances with the Realm this round. As the sealed doors of the Qiguai Clan Grounds opened, Parmenion found himself gazing at the flow of Qi Condensation cultivators exiting the realm.

Spotting a few Golden Devils among the crowd, he focused his will on them, ignoring the looks of joy on some and the wounded limping state of others. His Will moving on the moment he felt no sense of a bond between him and them. As each scan returned without detecting a bond, Parmenion felt his frown started to grow as he started seriously contemplating on if the youngster he gave the Will too was so arrogant as to continue exploring the realm despite the brush with death.

Hrmph! Have i gotten so old that my judgement on who is worthy has gotten so bad ? If the youth of today are so reckless and have such a lack of understanding towards their own weaknesses, it's best for them to die. They're not worth the Clan's resources.

Just as he was about to send his Will back, a commotion caught his attention. Sending a brief probe, Parmenion found to his slight surprise that despite the Turtle World look of the Man arguing with the Qiguai clan cultivator, there was a shadow of a bond between them. Moving his will closer, further details started to pop up, each giving him a sense of familiarity such as the Ji the man was holding, the battered armor he wore and lastly the Jadeish green Qilin growling as the man argued with the Qiguai Clansman.

" I'm telling you, I GOT NOTHING PHYSICAL FROM THE REALM. i had to leave before getting anything substantial, the only thing i received was this broken fragment of an axe. And since it's the only thing i got from the Realm, i'm entitled to keep it as long as i pay your clan one third of it's worth in Spirit Stones as agreed upon by the rules your Clan set forth before i entered the realm!

But look at it! It's just a fragment! I just want it as a souvenir of my time in your Secret Realm, so that it can drive me to cultivate more so that i will be readier then i was this round when the Secret Realm next opens. "

Giving a sigh of exasperation, the man reached into his armor and pulled out a small Spirit Stone and handed it to the Qiguai Clansman.

" Alright, look. You're twisting my arm here, but here a Small Spirit Stone. Is that enough for my souvenir? Just split of the actual value from it and you can keep the rest. I'm tired, slightly wounded and hungry, let me go to a inn and rest !? "

As the obvious bribe was given to the Qiguai Clansman and the Cultivator was given leave to depart, Parmenion swept his will across the fragment, gave a quick mental rise of his brow and directed his Will into the cultivator's head and left a message

Interesting piece you got there Junior. Excellent work on pulling the wool over that Qiguai Clansman. If his Elders know that he allowed you to leave with it for the low price of one small spirit stone, they will tear this soul to shreds.

Thank you for the praise Senior Parmenion, and thank you for the Sealed Fragment of your Will, it saved me from death.
Thrown slightly aback at the unexpected mental reply, Parmenion sent his will towards the other's core and found to his slight surprise Qi forced into a tall but lumpy Pillar.

Interesting. Interesting. That you're able to reply to my Will. It seems that your cultivation has improved while you're in the realm and you managed to hit the Early Foundation Establishment Stage. The unsightly appearance of your Dao Pillar however, tells me that you have yet to temper it under Tribulation lighting. It's nothing but a pile of loose sand for now. Make your way back to the Clan and to the Tatika Bureau. I'll assist you in tempering that Dao Pillar of yours.

Upon giving the command, Parmenion pulled his Will back and in the blink of an eye returned to his body. Picking up his forgotten cup of tea and giving it a sip, his face made a slight wince as he flare his Qi so that it burned the contents of the cup to ash. With another twirl of his Qi, he brought forth water from the air to rinse his cup and filled it again before he tossed in a pinch of tea leaves and send his Qi once more to bring it to a boil.

Sipping at the warm and fresh cup of tea he just made in a matter of seconds, Parmenion allowed a slight grin to touch his lips before giving out an order to the unseen servants attending to his residence.

" I am going to Cultivate. Do not disturb me until that youngling Cultivator returns to the Tatika Bureau and seeks me out. " Closing his eyes and crossing his legs, Parmenion send his Will within as he began his cultivation.

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It felt like it was just the blink of an eye before the soft tones of one of the Bureau servants hit his ears and woke him from his mediation.

" Strategos Parmenion, the young cultivator you're waiting for has arrived. He's currently waiting in the Arrival Hall of the Bureau. "

" Hrmph. Not bad. He made it back in just a week. Looks like it wasn't just him, his Beast Companion advanced as well. Tell them to make their way to Tribulation Grounds 10, I'll meet them there. "

Ignoring the servant's slight acknowledgement, Parmenion got to his feet and made his way to the Bureau's storeroom, taking out a few Array Flags and precious materials that he no longer needed before leaving the Bureau.

Making his way to the grounds via a steady and calm pace, Parmenion found to his approval that the youngling and his Spirit Beast were already there and wonders of wonders seemed to have put up some defenses for the Tribulation lightning. Obviously what was gathered was trash in Parmenion's humble opinion, but considering the youngling's lack of background or backing it was a pretty good effort. In fact, Parmenion expected it to give the duo a maybe 60% chance of clearing the Tribulation.

" Senior, thank you again for the help. "

Waving off the thanks, Parmenion busied himself with planting the Array flags and fixing the laid out Array with the materials he brought before he gave a reply.

" No thanks are needed. It is a reward for taking my words to heart and risking your life for the Clan. I can tell that you are no longer the Greenhouse flower from before. You have faced Death, Danger, Opportunity and loneliness, and yet your will stood firm enough to form a Dao Pillar.

In my eyes, you have proven worthy of what i am about to do for you. But remember this. I do this not for you but for the Clan. Remember that all your opportunities came from the Clan and that they're meant to be used for the Clan. If you ever forget and start to cultivate for yourself, i will be the first to smash your head in.

Now let's get back to it. "

Wiping the scowl of his face with the ease of long practice, Parmenion set down the last Array flag and gestured for the duo to get into the center of the Array. With a raised eyebrow, he watched as the youngling got on his Beast Companion and brought forth the Hoplite Formation over them so that the shield rested on the side while the spear overlayed with the youngling's Ji.

As Jade Scales started to appear around the duo, Parmenion decided that enough was enough. Clearly the doubt they had in his prepared Array had to be overcome through personal experience! Sending his Will into the duo and disabling the firm grip they had on their Qi, Parmenion called down the waiting tribulation lightning.

Finding a nice bench nearby, he sat on it with a grunt of satisfaction before turning his gaze back towards the duo and their overly prepared defenses as they faced off against the tribulation lighting. As bolt after bolt of Tribulation lighting rained down on the prepared Array with murderous intent, the bolts were absorbed into the array before being spitted out on the other end as bolts of lightning with the intent removed.

As the purified bolts of lighting continued bouncing off the Hoplite Formation, Parmenion let out a groan at the obliviousness of the youth of today.

Do you remember that you need the Tribulation Lighting to temper your Dao Pillar ? Pray tell me how is your Dao Pillar going to be tempered if you stop all lighting from reaching it ? REMOVE YOUR DEFENSES! I told you that i will take care of it and i'll thought you would have noticed the effects of the lighting that went through the prepared array by now!

Rolling his eyes as the duo's defenses fell with hilarious speed, Parmenion kept one eye on the duo as he made himself another cup of tea just so that the urge to smack the idiot duo would be given the chance to fade.

It took the time needed for a incense stick to burn itself out before the tribulation came to a halt. Reaching out with his Will, Parmenion found that the lumpy uneven Dao Pillar in the youngling was now a straight even bronze pillar. Getting up from his seat and strolling over to the duo who were reveling in the new found sensation of a Dao Pillar, Parmenion caught their attention with a sharp clap.

" Alright, that's enough. Go. You two are not the only ones that need the Tribulation Grounds. Leave, celebrate and get yourself back to taking Clan missions as soon as you can control your new strength. "

Words of advice given, Parmenion left the duo without a backwards glance and made his way back to the Tatika Bureau where reports of the Devil Bee's new Formation while waiting his attention.

Hope that lad prepares himself, we still have this War to finish and the Trials are approaching...

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As the Strategos made his way out of the Tribulation grounds, Xiao Yi couldn't help but bow his head in thanks at what the Strategos just did for him and Qing Yun. Deciding to fulfill the " Orders " the Strategos gave him, he left the grounds with haste and made his way towards Magnus' residence to both provide him with some unique fruits he got from the QIguai Secret Realm as well as to beg for another jar of Ice Peach Wine to fulfill the vow he made to Ferenike in his last letter.

Making his way through the streets, Xiao Yi noticed to slight puzzlement that it was less crowded then what he expected. And despite his new level of Cultivation, the only cultivators weaker then him that he could detect were all of the 1st or 2nd Heavenstage. Not a single 5th or 6th Heavenstage cultivator could be found despite them being the backbone of the Clan's legions.

I'm sure things are fine. The last news i heard was that the new Protostrator Aikaterine was leading a force of 33,000 Cultivators and that another 60,000 cultivators were about to be sent to reinforce her. With those numbers and our fortifications, we will be able to crush them between hammer and anvil.

Feeling comforted by the numbers, Xiao Yi ignored the slight trace of unease that filled his mind as he continued on his way. Reaching the Cave Residence after few more minutes, Xiao Yi soon found the hours slipping away as he traded stories with Magnus of his experience within the Qiguai Secret Realm while knocking back some of Magnus' newest concoctions.

As the sun started to slip down the horizon and the air started to grew chilly, Xiao Yi got to his feet in a unsteady fashion as his right arm grabbed for the Ice Peach Wine Magnus was more then glad to trade for the fruits Xiao Yi managed to sneak out of the Qiguai Secret Realm.

" Alright, I gotta start making my way off. Still gotta visit Ferenike! I swore that i'll give her a toast to celebrate the kill of Bloodpath Scum that took her squad. See ya friend! "

" You haven't heard ? Xiao Yi. She wounded. She's wounded bad. The group of Juniors she was leading were shattered by the Bee Devils trick with the Formation. I heard that she managed to lead them to the City of Guo Wo but before the Grand Elder and his troops could reach the city, it fell to the Devil Bees. I heard rumors that she singlehandly held a chokepoint so her troop could flee, that she just won't fall despite the wounds. The relief troops that got them out said that they found her on a pile of bodies impaled with Glass Spears with her hand crushing the heart of a Early Foundation Establishment Cultivator. They thought she was dead until they heard her groan. "

Xiao Yi didn't feel his grip loosen. He didn't feel the jar of wine drop and break with a shatter. All he felt was a sense of breathlessness as the truth behind the lack of cultivators he observed hit him like a hammer.

As Magnus continued his explanation of the reversal the Clan faced in the War before the Grand Elder took over, all Xiao Yi could feel was a sense of iciness creep up his spine as the facts hammered at him over and over, reminding him that for all his good fortune and success in the Secret Realm, his juniors had none.

Fingers curling into a fist and ignoring the broken shards being driven into his flesh, Xiao Yi got to his feet (When did he fall?) and bowed his head in thanks at Magnus.

" Thank you for telling me old friend. I'm sorry for dropping the Wine. Could you please help me send another Jar over to Ferenike as well as any other drinks you have that might help with healing? I have to step up my training. The Trials are coming and this time, this time i'll be waiting for it. "

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Thanks to @LordEdric for Magnus and his wines and i hope you don't mind me using him to give some truths to Xiao Yi! Thanks to @BungieONI for Ferenike. It's not really a good thing that she was wounded that badly, but it did let add impact to the cost Xiao Yi paid to go to the secret realm. I like the idea of the true cost for him would be not being able to help defend the clan.

I think Fallout is a very appropriate title for this since it shows both the beneficial Fallout from his Secret Realm Journey and the horrifying Fallout of the war turns. Hopefully, i will be inspired to elaborate on the stuff that happen within the realm although i'm very bad with writing stuff where Xiao Yi is the only character.

@occipitallobe Apologies if i made to many assumptions on how Ferenike got to her current wounded state. For the Omake bonus this turn, can i have the Tassel of Souls i mentioned in this omake (it's mentioned all the way at the bottom) converted into a Life Saving Treasure ? Maybe that the Extra Qi within allows Xiao Yi to flee faster.
 
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Ferenike:
Omake Reward:
Bloodline boost to combat as per omake. Fights as the 10th Heavenstage.
Fate - Sent south to the war. With her group of trainees, she was involved in the disastrous defeat where the Elder of War was killed. Wounded, she managed to shepherd most of her trainees into a southern city, only to find it under siege by the Devil Bees. After months of siege, the city of Guo Wo fell, and the remaining garrison of the city were driven out. They were rescued by a column of relief troops, but Ferenike was Badly Wounded, trying to save what little remainder of her command. The only bright point in her past decades was her ability to break through cultivation-wise prior to heading south.
Cultivation - Rose from 8th Heavenstage to 9th Heavenstage. 3 turns from breaking through. Cannot advance further while Wounded.
Health -
Currently Badly Wounded. 40 years to fully recover. (Fun note. Without a Fate bonus this would've been considerably, considerably worse. Ferenike's Fate bonus was big.)
Oh boy oh boy. I have Ideas.

There's gonna be a fun dilemma next omake.


" You haven't heard ? Xiao Yi. She wounded. She's wounded bad. The group of Juniors she was leading were shattered by the Bee Devils trick with the Formation. I heard that she managed to lead them to the City of Guo Wo but before the Grand Elder and his troops could reach the city, it fell to the Devil Bees. I heard rumors that she singlehandly held a chokepoint so her troop could flee, that she just won't fall despite the wounds. The relief troops that got them out said that they found her on a pile of bodies impaled with Glass Spears with her hand crushing the heart of a Early Foundation Establishment Cultivator. They thought she was dead until they heard her groan. "

Xiao Yi didn't feel his grip loosen. He didn't feel the jar of wine drop and break with a shatter. All he felt was a sense of breathlessness as the truth behind the lack of cultivators he observed hit him like a hammer.

As Magnus continued his explanation of the reversal the Clan faced in the War before the Grand Elder took over, all Xiao Yi could feel was a sense of iciness creep up his spine as the facts hammered at him over and over, reminding him that for all his good fortune and success in the Secret Realm, his juniors had none.

Fingers curling into a fist and ignoring the broken shards being driven into his flesh, Xiao Yi got to his feet (When did he fall?) and bowed his head in thanks at Magnus.

" Thank you for telling me old friend. I'm sorry for dropping the Wine. Could you please help me send another Jar over to Ferenike as well as any other drinks you have that might help with healing? I have to step up my training. The Trials are coming and this time, this time i'll be waiting for it. "
Oh boy oh boy.
 
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@FixerUpper I LOVE CAMEOS

The continuity of this is kinda questionable, because see: Eirene's omake #3. She has not exactly spent a lot of time wandering the streets of big cities before. Her caravan stuck to smaller settlements.

BUT it doesn't say that she wasn't anywhere even a single time, so. Totally canon now. Happened once and she doesn't remember. <3 <3 <3

(Didn't see this earlier, OOPS)

Also she was practicing a role for a perfomance or something because "you arrogant" would NOT be Eirene's reaction to someone wounded and telling her to fuck off. Even as a kid that's not where her mind have tone AT ALL. Her reaction would be something like "our medicine tent is at -" "yeah okay you insist on being rude but just in case, we take all comers"

(Flouncing off is like super in-character tho)
 
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Aretaphila Miya 4 - Clear Ambitions
Aretaphila Miya
Clear Ambitions

Aretaphila does not know how long she has been unconscious. A sense of displacement, brought about by the sudden affliction of unconsciousness. She'd been lax. Inattentive. Focused on supporting her fellow squadmates that she'd forgotten the obvious necessity of watching her own back.

"Awake, are you?" A languid voice chuckles, clear and clean with weight of power, "Don't feel too bad girlie, I'm a pretty sneaky fellow when I put my mind to it." Aretaphila cracked open an eye, seeking out the source of her voice. What she found was...what she had imagined whenever one of the passing mortals had described the nobility of the Golden Devil's vassal kingdoms. Ostentatious, overly clean, clothes ill-suited to the dry heats of the Organ Meat Desert, suffused with an overwhelming fragrance.

It made the fact that he had been able to ambush her without alerting the senses of her companions all the more discomfiting.

But a Miya doesn't show fear, and young though she might be Aretaphila was a Miya, "Who are you?" No matter what, an individual like this was dangerous. Far moreso if he somehow found a way to advance further, if the apparent Foundation Building potency of his aura was any indication. When she escaped, she would need as much intelligence on this bandit as possible for a more appropriate strike team to lash out.

The bandit, once content to languidly sit opposite her, proceeded to rise in a smooth, flowing motion, doffing a turban larger than the head it sat upon. With effortless grace and a breeze of qi-laced air billowing the man's thick and glittering robes Aretaphila realized that she was still within the hidden enclave, and the amused smile on his face told the younger girl that this show had been deliberate, "Unfelt Passing Wind, Lord of Zha Fei Chang Hills, gives greeting to the honorable scion of the Golden Devil Clan." So named, Unfelt Passing Wind bows to the tied up girl before him, fists raised in sincere respect.

"And leader of the Screaming Sausage Bandits?" Said girl asks, brows raised.

The self-described Lord raises an eyebrow back as he straightens up, "What bandits? Surely you see no bandits here, young lady?"

An astute observation, Aretaphila realized with a scowl, "And I suppose those carriages that were attacked passing through the region just imagined being attacked?"

A soft, uncalloused hand like dark jade caressed a short and well-groomed beard, "How terribly rude, to try and sow the seeds of conflict by declaring a toll to be mere banditry." Unfelt Passing Wind tutted, "Honestly, Merchants are such an uncouth and shameless lot, don't you agree?"

The bronze-skinned girl remained silent.

"Hmph," The bandit's eyes narrowed, "Down to business then. How do you feel about returning back to your fellows? I'm sure that you can explain to your fellows that this has all just been a misunderstanding," Two arms spread out, the cloth obscuring them fluttering in the breeze, "As a loyal vassal to the regions true rulers, I'm sure that an agreement can be reached with the Golden Devil Clan."

"What kind of agreement?" Aretaphila asked, one eye closed as she focused on the man before her.

"Merely an acknowledgement of reality." Unfelt Passing Wind answered, "Dominion over the hills that I already control being formally recognized, and in exchange for such I provide a tithe of cultivators to the Golden Devil Clan's ever-stretched armies."

"What cultivators?" The girl made a show of looking around even as she remained bound upon the floor, "I don't believe there are any others left but you and my companions."

A cruel chuckle came in response, "And that is the genius of it!" The bandit stuck a finger out, "Surely you've felt the qi lacing the air here? Why, for no additional cost, I can turn anyone into a Cultivator, elevating them as far as second Heavenstage without ever needing to touch a spirit stone! If the Golden Devils so wished, I could send them a hundred such warriors every year as tithe!"

Every year, one hundred scum like those that had populated this temple, sent to join the Golden Devil Clan's armies? Aretaphila had heard enough, and an idea came into her head. Barbarians were an uneducated lot, especially the ones that were unaffiliated even with her people's vassals.

"That's a pretty clever idea," Aretaphila began, "The Clan is always looking for warriors to fill it's fortifications for the day when our enemies strike again, and a hundred additional Second Heavenstage warriors every year would cover for a lot." Qi cycled through the Mysia girl's body, the empty ringing of her Clear Summer's Bell Constitution amplifying the Demonic Tunes slowly taking shape within it as once more Aretaphila closed one eye to stare at the barbarous bandit appraisingly, "You might want track down my commander before we continue though."

Unfelt Passing Wind stared back at her, "And why would I do that, Young Miss?"

"I have no idea where they could be," Aretaphila shrugs carelessly, "And if you bring me along...well." She pauses, before speaking in a whisper that is not a whisper, "We don't negotiate with hostage takers. Besides," The sonorous, entrancing toning waves of Demonic Tune Qi lace her words, "I'm sure you can move undetected more easily without me dragging you down, and when you find him, I'll go with you so that I can make proper introductions." The technique involved was a simple one, laced with good feelings and confidence, a simple, subtle emotional nudge with all the strength the young 4th Heavenstage girl could put behind it.

But against the loose foundation of a mere barbarian? It is enough to cross the divide between realms.

The bandit's eyes glaze for an instant, before an easy, satisfied smirk crosses his features, "Not a bad idea, Young Lady. I'd rather not be skewered by your scary leader before we get a chance to come to our mutually beneficial arrangement." Beneath the oversized turban, Unfelt Passing Wind winks, "I'll be back shortly." With a hazy shimmer, his form vanishes, and Aretaphila is left alone.

She exhales, before shimmying out of her bindings with unexpected ease, the ropes seeming oddly lubricated.

Her blue eyes widen in shock as she lurches upright, weeping blood pouring from a deep gash in her side. Almost harmless while still, but one that activity would cause to bleed out more as she would move, accelerating the flow of blood. It seemed that Unfelt Passing Wind hadn't been as careless as she'd thought.

"...Dammit."

Without another word, the young girl stumbles towards the source of the qi-laced breeze. Even if it was a dead end, at the very least the scent of clean water that was carried upon it would give Aretaphila something to work with while she came up with some kind of way to turn this around.

A.N.: Not as comprehensive as I would've liked, but I beat this out before getting ready to work and this is as good a place as any to cut off at @occipitallobe ! I'd like for this to go towards another Life-Saving Treasure of some kind if at all possible!
 
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BLOOD IS STICKY NOT SLIPPERY

PET PEEVE

ANYTHING WITH BLOOD ON IT IS THE EXACT OPPOSITE OF LUBRICATED

AAAAAA
 
@occipitallobe just wanted to make sure I understood correctly on how long it will take Ferenike to heal, she won't be done healing until the start of turn 8?
 
I added another section to Savvas' omake here @occipitallobe.

It was originally going to be a separate one, but eh, it hasn't been thread-marked yet anyway, and they both turned out shorter than I thought they would actually turn out.

Now if I have the time for actually writing out his first arc..
 
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@Mochinator

I want to give Xiao Yi a cameo in my next Omake, but I am not sure how to do that. The best I got was Julius and Demetrius finding Xiao Yi's body while his mind was trapped in that dream realm. It was unclear to me if it was just his mind, or both his mind and his body that was stuck in the dream realm.

Any idea on what else Xiao Yi did other than finding an ax piece, or having a trip in a dream realm?
 
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@Mochinator

I want to mention Xiao Yi in my next Omake, but I am not sure how. The best I got was Julius and Demetrius finding Xiao Yis body while his mind was trapped in that dream realm. Didn't know if his body å was also in that realm.

Any ideas on what else your guy did inside the realm.
Honestly, i'm a bit stuck on how to show the happenings of the Secret Realm. But i did think that the dream in question was the Soul Severing cultivator's since it was mentioned that he was stuck in it for 50 years.

Maybe since the record was found in a temple, they could have gone there and hear his voice, they can't see him or maybe see but cannot interact with him ? And then you can just go hog wild with what he says. Can be random stuff, creepy stuff or even murderous stuff. Mainly, i see him going partially mad from the time spent aloneish with just QIng Yun for 50 years.

After all at the start of this turn he was only 56 years old. That means the time he spend in there is the same amount he lived. And as a Qi Condensation cultivator, he still has the mortal train of thought. Not yet at the stage where the years can just be skipped.

P.S: Maybe they can also see him go partially mad via the image, like one moment he's neat and tidy, the next his hair is grown and messy etc.
 
Minervina Barda 8 - A Taste of War Part 2
Minervina Barda - A Taste of War Part 2

Military Leadership was a lot more stressful than refining poisons. A mistake while refining might cost you a small fortune in spirit stones, inflict terrible injuries or even take your life if you really fucked up. When she screwed up her command, scores of lives were lost.

These were Minervina's thoughts as she inspected her depleted cohort. Of the 500 she had started with only 368 remained. Her unit wasn't the worst off, but she had to admit that more would have survived if they had a more experienced commander.

The siege had worn on for many weeks and even the old veterans in the unit were starting to fray around the edges. It was their regulation recuperation period and she had subtly indicated that the Centurions should keep drills and equipment checks to a minimum. Let the poor sods get a chance to eat and catch a few hours sleep before their Spirit Stone ration was brought out and they had to focus on replenishing their Qi. She would have to let Grisaldus and the other Centurions off the leash then. Supplies were running low and they couldn't afford to let any be wasted because of sloppy technique.

She on the other hand, would get no break. Foundation Stage Experts were expected to go much longer without any kind of rest. After insuring her officers had everything in hand she retired to her tiny office to complete a seemingly endless tide of reports.

It seemed almost tawdry to fill in requisition requests and complete engagement reports when she could literally hear the sounds of slaughter out at the fourth wall. Yet such was the reality of organising a war on this scale and complexity. Thousands of reports just like hers would flow to the Clan Elders, who needed these details to make the right calls, judge where victory and defeat was most likely and make the right sacrifices.

She shuddered over one report as she sketched out the details of losing a dozen men in the previous days air raid. The Bee's had tried a new, suicidal tactic. Low tier cultivators, rumoured to be POWs or tribute from slave sects, strung in groups of 4 or 5 to the abdomens of their mounts. These slave warriors where clearly dosed with some hideously effective combat drug, they flung themselves through the air and onto the ramparts without a moments concern for their lives. Most visibly broke bones on landing only to fight on with the strength of mad men.

It was a costly, messy tactic but it had proved effective. After weeks of monotony, her troops hadn't been prepared for a sudden close quarter battle with blood mad berserkers.

At the memory she reaches out and unconsciously taps the hilt of her xiphos. In all her years she had never killed with cold steel before, as opposed to spellcraft or poison. She had blasted from marauder to marauder at the peak of her Foundation Building speed, no time or space on the overcrowded rampart for anything more elaborate. She was still too slow to save every one of her soldiers though. She was sure they cursed their ill luck at having her for a commander as they passed on.

It hadn't all been tragedy, she reflects as she puts the finishing touches on a different report. She had brought enough reagents to repeat her stunt with what she had dubbed the Wing-Killer-Resin another half a dozen times, each time with strong results. The Bee's had seemed stumped as to a decent solution, particularly since the higher ups had the foresight to keep changing her position on the wall, making it impossible to predict where the yellow death clouds might appear.

That matter had come to a head when a powerful Blood Cultivator had come hunting for her personally. A grim little smile emerged on her face as she dug through a pile of scrolls, looking for the one that had his name on it. Here it was, Guyuk The Great. Said to have gone mad with rage after being forced to put down his beloved mount. No doubt he thought his status as Mid Foundation Establishment Expert would make a quick night attack on her post easy pickings. She had disabused him of that notion with a torrent of conjured serpents. Reinforced by her Life Pillar, her Ash-Born-Vipers had evolved into a much more terrifying existence. A single smashed pill now gave life to a trio of the beasts, each 3 metres wide and 60 long, eyes and teeth glittering with intelligence and venom.

The report recounted that Guyuk had died of his injuries out in the siege camps three days later. Few of his followers had lasted that long.

After a moments thought, Minervina folded up that report and tucked it in her spatial pouch for safekeeping. That had been a good night, none of her men had died.

The sudden call of trumpets woke her from her reverie. Stunned, she listened with all her being for the pattern. Six more blasts rang out in a staccato rhythm and she leapt from her seat.

Reinforcements! After so many long months the relief force led by the Elder Callista had arrived. They would be needed on the walls immediately.

She paused only to place a paperweight on the last report before she fled the office, her voice calling out for her centurions to gather.

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@occipitullobe I think I squeezed this one in before the deadline. 3rd Omake of the turn!
 
Fierce Fang:
Omake Reward:
His new Flying Fish movement technique. As a creature of the sea, he can leap into the air and escape.
Fate - In a great moment of failure, did not manage to integrate his new technique properly. He found a magical Technique-to-Flesh-Fusing Pill in the Sand Whirlpool Tower Secret Realm, allowing him to integrate a technique with his body more fully, enhancing it beyond measure. However, he failed, and the pill enhanced his failure tenfold. Now transformed into a hideous half-fish half-man, he is Crippled until he manages to resolve this horror. He is far weaker, and requires constant water running over him to remain alive.
Cultivation - Remains at 7th Heavenstage.
Health -
Currently Crippled by Transformation. Will require Heavenly Treasures to recover.
Fuck.

So two questions first can I properly use my new technique despite the super failure?

Second are there any major rivers and lakes in Golden Devil Territory that I can do missions in to take at least some advantage of my freaky fishmanness?
 
Honestly, i'm a bit stuck on how to show the happenings of the Secret Realm. But i did think that the dream in question was the Soul Severing cultivator's since it was mentioned that he was stuck in it for 50 years.

Maybe since the record was found in a temple, they could have gone there and hear his voice, they can't see him or maybe see but cannot interact with him ? And then you can just go hog wild with what he says. Can be random stuff, creepy stuff or even murderous stuff. Mainly, i see him going partially mad from the time spent aloneish with just QIng Yun for 50 years.

After all at the start of this turn he was only 56 years old. That means the time he spend in there is the same amount he lived. And as a Qi Condensation cultivator, he still has the mortal train of thought. Not yet at the stage where the years can just be skipped.

P.S: Maybe they can also see him go partially mad via the image, like one moment he's neat and tidy, the next his hair is grown and messy etc.
Got some good ideas. Now, Lets see if I have the ability to write it.

A lot of fun can be had in temple of unknown origin.
 
Chen Rong [DEAD] - Good Seed Background
Good Seed Background

Chen, Rong


Growing up in a small destitute town in the lands of the Golden Devils Rong did not have much. He never knew his father and his mother was a lady of the night, serving at the town brothel to keep a roof over the head of Rong and his little brother and sister. Having just turned 16 Rong had spent the last year working with the lumberjacks at the edge of the forest surrounding town with the goal of earning enough to allow his mother to quit her "job" and give his siblings a better chance at life.

A passing band of Blood Path Bandits passed through town decimating half of its population in a night of violence and debauchery only sparing the rest due to a squad of soldiers from the Golden Devils being hot on their tail. For Rong this turned out to be the worst night of his life. His mother, Chen Ling, being one of the prettier women in town was not able to escape the bandit's sight and was defiled and drained of her life force.

Left with no home, no prospects, his younger siblings to take care of and a burning hatred for the bandits who murdered his mother Chen, Rong despaired at his future.

A day later the Golden Devils arrived asking for information on the bandits. Rong, wanting vengeance on his mother's killers stepped forward to tell them everything he knew. Yet out of adversity came opportunity. For the leader of the soldiers saw something in Rong, believing he had the potential to become a great cultivator.

Within the week the Golden Devils returned victorious having destroyed the Blood Bandits to the last man. The leader, one Lieu Chao approached Rong, telling of the demand the clan had for new talents with great resources being committed to their growth and offering a place for his brother and sister whilst he entered the world of cultivation.

Like a drowning man thrown a rope, Rong accepted the offer. His childhood dreams of becoming a cultivator was soon to be a reality.
Yet the cost…

Rong, wishing that no family should ever have to suffer at the hands of blood cultists as his did, decided to become the best cultivator he could possibly be to destroy such devils and provide a better future for his family.

Gathering what little belongings they had, he and his brother and sister joined the band of Golden Devils and set off for a new life of adventure, opportunity and power.



Good Seed Bonus: Hidden Bloodline – Chen, Rong does not know who his father was. Yet after awakening to the 1st​ level of Qi Condensation he felt his blood sing and his shadow seemed to move. With that hint of talent, he requested a darkness attribute cultivation manual from the clan. For if his enemies couldn't even see him they'd be much easier prey.



@occipitallobe this ok for a good seed?
 
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Rina Callista 12 - Meditations on Fate and Heaven
Rina Callista
Meditations on Fate and Heaven
Inhale.

Exhale.

Focus the lake of energy to the tip of the fist, inching from the meridians in the wrist into each of the fingers, reinforce the body with the stuff of creation.

Inhale.

Strike

The stone pillar cracked, shuddering as Rina's fist darted out and slammed into it, rocked back, but unbroken.

Exhale.

She had thought she was coming a long way--her success in the Secret Realm bringing her to the utmost height of power that Essence Gathering can allow for. Indeed! The training methods useful for ordinary scions of this rank had limited effect now, and she had to make use of training facilities intended for those in Pillar Construction--those experts who were the foundation of the Clan's power projection.

And yet, while her physical strength could be said to match those who had already begun assembling their Pillars, she was inferior in virtually every other regard to a neophyte in that rank. She could provide merely thirty full power strikes in a ten second period, to the sixty expected. She could maintain this pace for merely three hours, where an expert could endure for a full day. Her power--while great--was terribly unfocused, without the tyranny of a Pillar to solidify it.

The power of her blood helped, but in the end, the truth was that she could barely even count as a soldier at this point. Oh, to be truthful, even soldiers had a valuable role to play.

But for all of her efforts, seeking the Four Olympian Keystones in hopes of becoming a Champion of the Clan--a shield against all that would seek its ruination. She wasn't there yet.

Lady Aikaterine was there, she was an expert. And from out of nowhere, a band of swarming barbarians somehow managed to cast a spell, to slay her where she stood! Through the power of the Hoplite Formation no less! A pillar of the Clan was torn down by murderous thugs with a great spell, that somehow had not become a rumor!

There wasn't even any excuse about it, the amount of times she heard some snot nosed Young Master ordering their servant to "Investigate their background!" And in literal days, coming up with every known feat of skill and arms that person had ever executed. She could only attribute the failure of the Clan to learn of a Formation capable of threatening a Nascent Soul with the nature of the world literally altering itself, solely for the purpose of hurting the Clan.

Hadn't they suffered enough? How many years had passed since the Sea Conquering Army had been broken under the machinations of the Heavens? How is it that their acts, and their mandate was so much more offensive then the successors of the entity that murdered the continent?

She had received the letters from her friends in the Battlefield--the Demon-Suppressing War was well under way, and as per usual, the Demonic Altar Sect was roaring from battle to battle, losing some--but then winning enough in other fields that their loss may never have been. What does it say for the world that it's willing to look the other way with destroyers, simply to kick the Invaders while they were down?

"Hiyah!"

Rina shouted out as she struck out at the pillar again. Sending further cracks through it. This strength training exercise wasn't going to be very helpful for her--but it was good to have something to take out her anger upon. Why were the Heavens so capricious? Was Father's theory true? That the Heavens even favor butchers and atrocities over opposition because at least the former are doing their jobs?

She had heard the literature of the Righteous Path in her travels with the other members of the Five. The Blessings of Heaven invariably falling on those who follow righteous ways, who protect the mortals under their rule while allowing them to govern themselves. The power of Karma invariably gathers, providing Luck to those who take such a measure.

Then why was it that the Golden Devils--who had made a home in the darkest, most ruined section of the Region--created realms that were no less well governed than those of the Verdant South, despite the great labor and effort required--were still hated by the Heavens? Why were these Karmic Blessings denied to the Clan when they were doled out dutifully to all others?

Why was it that Lady Aikaterine had to die to such a pathetic tactic?!

Her Essence flared with her anger, and the next blow shattered the training block. Her fist dripped with blood, and she clutched it with a wince. That... Might have been a bit too much.

The evidence though was clear no matter how she looked at it. The Heavens would never accept the Golden Devils. Even if they had adhered to the dogma of the Righteous Path--such would have been no shield against the greed of mortals, and the Blood Path was ever mighty and willing to take advantage even if the others could not. The game--such as it is--was rigged.

The Heavens allowed only two options, become a monster and be put down like one, or compromise your thoughts and hopes to settle into a slowly declining stasis, until the next great upheaval arrived. It was strange to her--after all--to see how consistent it was that the older ways were invariably superior to the ways that were invented more recently. Logically, talent should build on talent, and each generation should be a little better.

And yet even disregarding the death of the continent and the dessication of its husk, it was usually the opposite. Skill itself steadily seemed to decline over the years. Was it because many elites refused to pass on their teachings and died with their knowledge? That strange obsession with leaving ruins lying around in strange places when one felt cornered? Offering power to the lucky one who stumbles upon it?

Even the Golden Devils were not immune to this--though the degradation appeared to be more in the form of happenstance invariably denying resources to them.

How were people supposed to break out of this spiral of madness, when the laws of the world themselves seemed to bury any insights over time?

She paused at that point, looking down again at her injured fist. Something about that thought rung true to her. She felt like she was on the cusp of something.

It was the laws of the world, wasn't it?

Her fist throbbed with pain, intensifying as her thoughts began to zero in on the insight. The World couldn't be better than it was, because it was the nature of the world to suppress learning, to suppress insight. Those who thought to explore the philosophies for their own sake would invariably be out-competed by those who sought philosophy for the sake of converting it to battle power. But battle is a chancy thing--against any who were remotely capable, one would often die, and the other be terribly wounded, barring extreme power disparity.

And yet, denying battle was perilous as well, because to do so would be to suggest weakness, which is enough to encourage a foe to escalate in turn--to take all that they could instead of mere fractions of it.

So, philosophy is rendered subordinate to strength in battle.

"I... I should be writing this down..." Her fist hurt, but the pain concentrated her thoughts instead of distracting them--the echo of the Ancient One's voice rattling around her heart. "If the Heavens put a wall in your path, you know that they fear where it is going"

She moved towards her gear, set aside in the grassy field of one of the Dawn Fortress' staging ground, rummaging through her satchel and withdrawing a notepad.

"Oh?" Muqin Guo roused to wakefulness as she percieved Rina's rummaging. "Struck by an insight?"

"I don't know..." Rina muttered, flipping her notebook open to an empty page, and withdrawing the Ever-Dark Quill from where it was strapped to the binding, sketching out her initial thoughts. "But... It feels like it's important."

Philosophy is rendered subordinate to strength in battle, but strength in battle invariably leads to the loss of life and knowledge. Those who do not take this path are outcompeted by those who do, as those who are not strong in battle are held in contempt by all experts.

It is a... Law... of the World.

"No wonder..." Rina whispered. "No wonder everything is always trending downward."

The Heavens placed a test in the face of all those who ascend, requiring strength in battle to pass. None are ever challenged to Tribulations of wit and skill, none are challenged to Tribulations that test their knowledge and study. The Tribulation always takes a single form. Lightning striking the physical body, and scouring the will for weaknesses. Those who have not gained a great deal of strength in battle don't even get a chance to test their Path for its integrity--they are simply reduced to ash by the wrath of Heaven.

In short, the only ones who have the time and--to be honest--raw intellectual muscle to truely and genuinely advance the cause of philosophy are those who have already been pre-selected to have weaponized their Path. Weapons can be good to advance knowledge in the short term--but having nothing but weapons invariably leads to stagnation--and as there is never an extended break in the struggle, few can settle back and simply take time to contemplate philosophy, law, and how this interacts with humanity.

The Heavens didn't allow peaceful philosophers to rise in Cultivation!

Whether it through malice, or mere disinterest, the only ones who rise to power are those who have yoked their high ideals to an engine of war!

And...

She was very nearly the same way.

Her fist seared at that thought, but it felt true to her heart.

"Hah, of course." She laughed. "Tearing down all the walls in my path... Even if I had taken that route, even if I walked it to the end... I'd have just been another warlord, wouldn't I? That wouldn't have made a better world at all, would it?"

She felt a frisson in the air, a crackling of static on her limbs, and she Knew that this was the way.

"It's got to be the other way around." She shook her head. "Not the ideals subordinate to strength in battle. But Strength in Battle subordinate to the ideal."

An ideal of a better world, a happier one, where people could be free to explore the wonders of creation without needing to fear being slaughtered by thugs who simply took the fastest, most direct course--and damned be the consequences. It was not something that would come peacefully--the Heavens had declared the rule as the most ruthless were the ones most favored by it, the ones who are most willing to inflict suffering to achieve their goals.

Her Path would be different. To be Good, but not Meek. To forge an emblem of a World as it Could Be, and to challenge the World that Is with it--to craft it with such peerless skill that all the lightnings and all of the rage of Heaven cannot shake it.

The Olympian Keystones were still a necessity for this matter. An ideal this heavy wasn't one that could be distributed across multiple elements, important things would surely be lost in the transition. But it felt right, it felt good.

And judging by the crackling she felt--it was absolutely the answer the Heavens didn't want to hear from her.

She grinned at that, accepting the pain of their displeasure, and knowing that as cruel and arbitrary as the Heavens were--even they couldn't unleash their Lightnings save in response to the Tribulation. She raised her hands in the air, and felt the weight of expectation fall from her shoulders.

This would not be an ambition wrought in a day, but a saga centuries in the making--if it could be done at all. She would draw the ire of the Heavens at every turn, as trial and tribulation sought to dissuade her from this path. Champions would be directed from all corners of the realm, given cause to strike her down in the bud.

But she welcomed it--because that which must be done was rarely easy, and overturning an eon of stagnation and barbarity was a feat beyond reason. Some might even call it madness.

But it was said that to Cultivate is to Defy the Heavens.

How could she possibly let herself be swayed by the act being hard?

For the first time in years, Rina Callista laughed, freely and clearly, tears streaming from her eyes at the wonder of her insight.

"Thank you, Lady Aikaterine" She whispered after she calmed down, content in her heart. "Thank you for supporting me on this path. I'll carry on your work once I've matured a bit more... I'll make a world that's more fair--more just than this one... And there'll be a place for us there. Let the Heavens rage and cast down their fury upon me, for I will stand as guardian over this ideal until my last breath is spent."

It wasn't, perhaps, the most eloquent eulogy to the former Elder. But it was what Rina had to offer.

That would have to be enough.
 
Honestly, i'm a bit stuck on how to show the happenings of the Secret Realm. But i did think that the dream in question was the Soul Severing cultivator's since it was mentioned that he was stuck in it for 50 years.

Maybe since the record was found in a temple, they could have gone there and hear his voice, they can't see him or maybe see but cannot interact with him ? And then you can just go hog wild with what he says. Can be random stuff, creepy stuff or even murderous stuff. Mainly, i see him going partially mad from the time spent aloneish with just QIng Yun for 50 years.

After all at the start of this turn he was only 56 years old. That means the time he spend in there is the same amount he lived. And as a Qi Condensation cultivator, he still has the mortal train of thought. Not yet at the stage where the years can just be skipped.

P.S: Maybe they can also see him go partially mad via the image, like one moment he's neat and tidy, the next his hair is grown and messy etc.

You wouldn't mind if Demetrius tried to seal off the temple? He ended up being a little spooked, and the short snippet I intended to write is snowballing into its own omake.
 
@occipitallobe

After you've completed the good seed report could you give us a bit more detail about how the trials will be handled from a good seed perspective? I.e. does it get treated a bit like entering a hidden realm except only negative outcomes are magnified?

Do we get trial miniturns and treat it separately from turn 5 or do we just treat it as part of the turn?

That sort of thing.

I also ask because I'm not sure how the trial interacts with timed secret realms. For example, the Yuan clan secret realm is opening up next turn for the first time and while I'm tempted to send Wei Feng in there I'm assuming that there would be a significant chance that even if he came out of there with good fortune if he lost a lifesaving treasure then he'd be at serious risk of getting ganked by the trials immediately afterward. Is this correct?
 
Syntyche Theophylaktos [RETIRED] - Good Seed Background
Feels a bit bad to throw in the turn of the trials, but I'd rather commit now than wait and forget or something. @occipitallobe here's my good seed entry.

Good Seed Background
Syntyche Theophylaktos​

It is said that in the heights of the clan, the Theophylaktos were not assassins and spies but actors and playwrights, dedicating essence not towards war but towards works of art remembered and replayed for centuries. Through them runs the Blood of Bronze, as with any other family of the Golden Devils, but where the traditional blood is solid, unmovable bronze, the Theophylaktos line has blood of Liquid Bronze, able to be cast to fill any mold. Through this they may mimic other beings, at higher levels becoming completely indistinguishable from the real thing to any and all senses.

Syntyche appears little different from others within her line, which is perhaps evidence enough of her outstanding nature. Skilled in the clan arts and blessed in bloodline, she flits between a traditional barbarian cultivator and a bronzed icon on a whim. While any novice in Qi sensing can decipher her true form for now, it speaks to the potential she may fulfill in the future.

Overall High concept: shifty assassin/spy type.

Starting Perk: Liquid Bronze: The Blood of Bronze is modified, losing it's resilience and some strength for the ability to physically change body shape.
 
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Peta Condos and Wajo 5 - The Girl and the Beartiful Island
The Girl and the Beartiful Island
Peta Condos and Wajo 5

Peta tried to control her breathing as they approached the mystical doorway. She was riding Wajo, attached by a leather strap that housed her spear and shield, and her own considerable grip strength. They didn't want to get separated when they stepped through, as was frequently the case.

She was second, third, and four hundredth guessing herself. They needed to take risks to fulfill her grand ambition, but she was a cautious person by nature. Would it be worth it? Was she risking her brother for nothing?

It will be fine, her brother reassured her in her mind, I have a good feeling about this

Peta smiled with relief. She'd learned to trust bear feelings. Wajo stepped through with confidence.

She saw waves of color and a felt a great rush around her ears, like she was falling from a long distance. She saw an enormous lush island beneath her. She peered down at the qi-condensation region, where she could already see tiny cultivators fighting battles to the death over very little. Soon she'd have to join them. With her brother beside her she was more than a match for anyone in her realm, and she was nearly at the foundation establishment stage. Still, she knew it would be a terrible struggle to earn the fruits of this realm.

Then she felt a harsh tug to the right, then another. She could feel something trying to pull her and Wajo apart. She held on to him with all her strength, and after some more insistent tugging the mysterious force seemed to give up on separating them. She sighed with relief. At least they would be able to face the challenges together. Then she felt a powerful push. And another. She could see their momentum change. They were heading away from the qi-condensation realm!

Correct Course! Iron Sky Burst! She yelled to her brother over the bond.

I'm trying, it's too strong.

Where are we going?!?

I don't know, it's covered in mist. I'll try to guide us to a soft landing.


True to his word, Wajo expended a burst of wind chi to clear a patch of mist beneath them, then another to slow their descent. The place they landed was unnatural, contradictory. The group was warm desert sand, but the air was cool mist. She could see spike covered trees at the edge of the clearing, soon covered in a wave of returning mist.

"If this isn't the qi-condensation region we need to get out of here right now. Border should be west of here, right?"

Right… But…

As the mist flooded back, Peta saw the problem. How could they navigate their way back in this gray nothing?

She breathed in uncomfortably dense qi and felt near instant empowerment. Well, they came here for good fortune, maybe this could be it?

They wandered for some time in the misty desert. Peta jumped at every shadow, only Wajo's stoic presence kept her from panicking. They put one foot in front of the other and soon lost track of time and could only guess at their direction.

I've never smelled that before

Peta grimaced and tried to see something, anything, through the oppressive mist.

It's coming closer.

She raised her shield and set her spear. There was nothing else to do.

Finally, the mist parted in front of her, too close. A truly bizarre beast stepped forward. It had the scuttling body of a great scorpion, the kind she'd fought time and again on road duty. Its head, however, had a kind face and wise eyes to match her brother. A bear headed scorpion? She'd never heard of such a thing. She tried to sense its Qi, but couldn't gauge its true strength.

"Hello?" she ventured.

"Hello" It answered. The bear head sniffed at them curiously, while the great stinger bobbed menacingly.

Good. Peaceful communication. In her experience scorpions were very unreasonable creatures, but it had a bear head, and bears were wonderful. The head is what really matters, right? She decided to trust the strange bear for now.

"We're lost. Can you please guide us to safety?"

The scorpion bear considered for some time before answering.

"Yes. I will take you to a place that is safe and where there is much great fortune for you two. But first, you must answer a question: you are being held captive by a mad cultivator. She is much higher in cultivation than either of you, and you have no means to escape. She requires your consent to test a dangerous mutagen. The mutagen will only function as she wishes if you do not resist it. She separates you, and you cannot communicate in any way. She promises on a binding treasure that if one of you consents she will release the other. If both of you consent, she will experiment on you both. If neither of you consent, she will kill you both. What do you do?"

Peta tried to answer but something seized her throat.

"The bear must answer first," the scorpion explains.

Wajo answered by twisting the air around the other bear's ear, he never mastered the trick of mimicking human speech with his throat. As usual, Peta couldn't hear it. She tried to communicate through the bond, but she's met with a strange silence. The scorpion bear must be at least at the Core Formation level to block the bond like that.

"Interesting," the scorpion bear nods, "you may speak now, human."

"I will consent," Peta answered without hesitation, "I would never risk my brother's life."

"Then I will guide you."

They followed the scorpion-bear into the mist. After a while, long enough to be tiring but not enough to be truly exhausting, Wajo spoke in the bond.

You should prepare yourself. The scorpion is going to sting you.

Peta tensed and eyed the beast in front of them, why? She asked.

I betrayed you in the question. I told it I wouldn't consent. I trusted you to consent, so there was no reason to expose myself to the mutagen. Better I remain strong to protect you, then we both become ill.

Peta nodded. She made the choice to protect her brother without thought, but her brother had always been wiser than her. In the case the scorpion gave them, Consent/Refuse was the ideal result for the pair, not Consent/Consent. The only worry was whether or not she would chose to sacrifice herself. If she'd been selfish, they would both die.

But why does that mean the scorpion-bear is going to sting me?

Bears don't have the energy to bother with hypotheticals and scorpions are dicks. It wants to help us but it has to sting us, so this is the best it can do. It's too strong to fight, it will just kill us. You'll have to take the poison and hope your bloodline is strong enough to fight it off. I'll protect you in the meantime.


Peta forced herself to relax. She just had to trust her brother when the scorpion bear inevitably betrayed them. When the scorpion bear told them to sleep, she closed her eyes and held as still as she could.

She felt the sharp pain of the stinger jab her foot. Everything after that was burning pain. She could feel the venom invading her channels like a branching river of fire. She could feel it trying to burn through her first meridian gate. Rather than fight it until the meridian collapsed, she let the poison course through her body. She could feel the poisonous fire transforming her. It was a terrible power, but she focused on reinforcing her body around it instead of stopping it.

The poison became her world. She had vague impressions of the outside, of Wajo carrying her, bringing her water, and feeding her his own vitality through the bond. Finally, the poison was spent, and there was only soothing darkness.

Peta awoke to the sound of playful splashing. She opened her eyes to peaceful islands, lazy rivers and placid ponds… Floating through the sky without a care for the laws of heaven and nature. Rivers flowed up and sideways, islands spun lazily with fruit trees in orbit. Titanic bears with flippers for feet swam with equal grace through the water, air, and land. They had a dreamlike quality, as if they barely touched the solid world.

Her brother rushed to her side, carrying a strange fruit in his mouth. He spat it out in front of her, and she eagerly dug in. He shook a bucket of water off his back for her to drink.

Where are we? She asked through the bond. Her mouth had better things to do than talk.

The Glade of the Flipper Bears, Wajo answered, the bears here play, eat, sleep, and take in the natural power of this place. They've been doing it forever.

Forever?

Far as I can tell,
her brother mentally shrugged.

The flipper bears didn't talk much, but they didn't seem to mind guests either. As far as Peta could tell, they didn't mind anything. Like the scorpion-bear, their strength was beyond her ability to measure. They floated, they played, they ate, they slept. Their power allowed them peace.

Peta recovered easily in the glade. The fruit trees were forever in season, their bounty renewed each day. The rivers teemed inexhaustibly with fish. The air was dense with a pleasant qi that soothed away all pain.

The flipper bears didn't speak. They didn't seem to need to. All they did was sleep, eat, play, and naturally cultivate. Nothing else was necessary. They were whole. They were content.

Peta and Wajo spent their days as the flipper bears did, and the wounds in their bodies, and spirits, healed. Peta could feel the flipper bear seep into her soul. With it, she could let go of everything. She could be free from strife, free from worry, and free from the very bonds of heaven and earth. She learned the secrets of freedom and serenity, and flew with the bears in a dream.

One day, a plague of bees attacked the glade. With a lazy slap, the flipper bears dismissed their purpose. Without purpose, a bee is nothing. They fell to the earth, lazed in the sun, and enjoyed serenity until they were dust.

Peta stared at the giant lazy bee. It wiggled languidly on the ground. It was happy. It was waiting to die.

"Are we those bees?" she said

We are at peace, Wajo replied, don't you want peace?

"I want it. I want it so bad. But I want it for more than me."

If we return. It will be to a world of strife. We have found paradise.

"I don't want to find paradise. I want to make it."

She turned to the largest of the flipper bears. It was soaring lazily high above.

"Hey big guy! How do we leave?"

The bear drifted towards them curiously. She felt another wave of serenity threaten her newfound resolve, but she struggled against it. There refused peace when the world suffered.

"No. I don't want to chill. I want to leave. Show me the way out."

The bear landed and shook its shoulders. Peta took that as a que to climb on board, "you coming?"

Her brother stared mournfully up at her. She could feel he wanted to stay. But she could also feel his resolve firm. He would not abandon her.

They flew on the back of the flipper-bear. It flew for hours before finally reaching the center of the turtle shell realm. In the exact center there was an island. In the island, there was a hut. In the hut, there was a small turtle.

The turtle eyeballed Peta and Wajo.

"Bear with me, just let me get my bearings. I'm a bit embearassed. Are you pawsitive you want to leave? Couldn't bear to leave your clan?"

Peta huffed, "did you send us to that bear island?"

The turtle just giggled.

"Feel a bit underkoalified?"

"Please stop."

"But I've bearly begun!"

Several unbearable hours later, the turtle agreed to let them go. It even gave them a piece of its shell. They could use it to summon him to their rescue… So long as they were willing to sit through another set of bear puns after. Peta resolved to save it for only the most dire straits.

Omake Bonus: Life Saving Treasure (Eternal Turtle Shell)
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Not that I mind @occipitallobe because I had a lot of good fortune in the secret realm, but I don't think the scorpion's poison did anything? I was already at the 9th heavenstage 3 turns from breaking through. So the poison rocketed me to the same heavenstage. After a turn, I'm 1 turn from breaking through instead of 2. It might have bumped me up a turn from breaking through, but then the Flipper Bear Dao didn't do anything?
 
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