Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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There are four fields you need to fill out.

Omake Link, which is just a link to your first omake for the turn. This makes it easier for me to read them as I do the update - without this it's tough to know off the bat which omake were written this turn, and to properly

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Wow, that imagery and meaning. I kinda feel like a scrub now (even more then usual). My Good Seed's Dao Pillar was just Zenga + a coating of metal.
Glad to hear that you liked my imagery. It helps make me feel better as I feel like I am one of the worst omake writers in this quest, but hearing someone say that they liked my writing is helpful to say the least.
 
Would it be possible to get a better description of what the palace is supposed to be? Is it a library? A room where you automatically learn a tech if you meditate inside it? A cube that you touch?
 
@occipitallobe

Would it be helpful to add another 2 columns to the sheet?:
  • Cool thing bonuses (items, starting bonus, fate granted effects)
  • Effective fighting level/heaven stage (for easy tracking)
Edit: Also good lord we've got around 3000 words of introduction alone in the saving junior omake.
 
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So like, i made a new seed, is it registered?
I don't really make omakes so i hope it's good enough.:V
Being 1st lvl of any realm in the turn where hunters arive? Well someones going to die.
@occipitallobe

Would it be helpful to add another 2 columns to the sheet?:
  • Cool thing bonuses (items, starting bonus, fate granted effects)
  • Effective fighting level/heaven stage (for easy tracking)
Edit: Also good lord we've got around 3000 words of introduction alone in the saving junior omake.
I imagine the bonus will be insane if what you say is true. That kind of coopuration is somthing specal.
 
@occipitallobe

Would it be helpful to add another 2 columns to the sheet?:
  • Cool thing bonuses (items, starting bonus, fate granted effects)
  • Effective fighting level/heaven stage (for easy tracking)
Edit: Also good lord we've got around 3000 words of introduction alone in the saving junior omake.
Current age would probably be useful, too. I just made my Seed last turn, she's already up to 6th Heavenstage, but I don't know how much time she has left. I'm wondering if it's worth trying to reach 13th Heavenstage, or at least 11th for the doubled Qi.

Do our cool thing bonuses include techniques, or should it be assumed that my character already has mystical peace powers?
 
Current age would probably be useful, too. I just made my Seed last turn, she's already up to 6th Heavenstage, but I don't know how much time she has left. I'm wondering if it's worth trying to reach 13th Heavenstage, or at least 11th for the doubled Qi.

Do our cool thing bonuses include techniques, or should it be assumed that my character already has mystical peace powers?
The cultivation spreadsheet (with lifespan) is here (check under the "cultivation realm information" thread mark. So it looks like you'll live to 160 at present.

Looking back at your initial good seed idea, I'm not sure what you took for your starting bonus (I know @Mochinator suggested easier tribulations to you but I'm not sure if you took that). Otherwise you can have standard "magic peace powers" that relate to your Dao but if you want a specific technique that punches beyond your level then you probably want to spend a bonus reward on that.
 
I'm sure this will have been thought of before, but are higher tier clan cultivators able to get away with taking a look at lower realm invading cultivators, work out their weaknesses, and then coach their peers amongst our own forces in how best to deal with them?
 
The cultivation spreadsheet (with lifespan) is here (check under the "cultivation realm information" thread mark. So it looks like you'll live to 160 at present.

Looking back at your initial good seed idea, I'm not sure what you took for your starting bonus (I know @Mochinator suggested easier tribulations to you but I'm not sure if you took that). Otherwise you can have standard "magic peace powers" that relate to your Dao but if you want a specific technique that punches beyond your level then you probably want to spend a bonus reward on that.
I took an extremely powerful work ethic, to the point where Juturna doesn't stop working while she sleeps. I don't know how this will translate into cosmic powers. Maybe her Dao will help her with Tribulation, as a trade-off for her blunted offense. Really, it's up to the GM, we'll see where Lobe takes it.

The question is mostly whether or not Juturna is ahead of schedule and has time left to go for stuff above 9th.

I'm writing up a short piece now, I'm not sure what I want for it. It'd probably be either a life-saving treasure or a peace technique, something like Defy the Bloody Heavens: A World Without Violence (name to be workshopped), a technique which turns aside aggression by conveying what the world could look like if the basic rules of nature were changed.
 
To be fair a big portion of that is @TehChron 's work. Plus we have 11 separate good seeds in there, so it isn't that surprising that we've taken up a lot of wordcount already. At least Xiao Yi isn't likely to get horribly mauled like the rest of us this turn.
Well, considering how i tried to establish him so far, that's going to bring the GUILT TRAIN. That be a interesting challenge to try and write about.
Current age would probably be useful, too. I just made my Seed last turn, she's already up to 6th Heavenstage, but I don't know how much time she has left. I'm wondering if it's worth trying to reach 13th Heavenstage, or at least 11th for the doubled Qi.

Do our cool thing bonuses include techniques, or should it be assumed that my character already has mystical peace powers?
Personally, what i do is tracked it on my Good Seed background sheet. So i edit it with the updated info once every Good Seed Report. Considering it's just been 1 turn, it would be about 30 - 40 depending on how old you think the starting age for your Good Seed is

As a example of how i keep things straight for myself:

Current Age: 77
Current Lifespan: 500

Cultivation - Transcended the realm of Qi Gathering. Now stands as an Early Foundation Establishment Expert.
Health - Currently healthy.
Treasures - The Axe-Fragment of Hell-Sender ( Fighting Across Realms )
Items - Wood Fairy Lance(empowers strikes from horseback)

Current Goals as of Turn 4 = Xiao Yi is heading into the Qiguai Secret Realm for Qi Condensation Cultivators.
Omake Reward Sheet = For requesting Omake Rewards per turn + Goal for the turn

Good Seed Bonus: Ability to form/include Spirit Beasts tamed using his Clan Arts into Formations and if possible talent with coming up and using such Man/Beast formations starting from personal and scaling up to groups (in the long term)
 
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Festus Sarantpechos 1 - The Forging of Bronze
The Forging of Bronze
Festus Sarantpechos
Breath in for four heartbeats.
Hold breath for four heartbeats.
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Hold breath for four heartbeats.
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Hold breath for four heartbeats.
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Hold breath for four heartbeats.
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Remain empty for four heartbeats.
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Hold breath for four heartbeats.
Breath out for four heartbeats.
Remain empty for four heartbeats.
Breath in for four heartbeats.
Hold breath for four heartbeats.
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Remain empty for four heartbeats.​
Raise the hammer high.
Find the point to aim.
Bring the hammer down.
Listen to the metal ring.
Raise the hammer high.
Find the point to aim.
Bring the hammer down.
Listen to the metal ring.
Raise the hammer high.
Find the point to aim.
Bring the hammer down.
Listen to the metal ring.
Raise the hammer high.
Find the point to aim.
Bring the hammer down.
Listen to the metal ring.
Add the sapping sand.
Stoke the furnace
Work the billows
Fold the metal
Quench the metal
Brush the scales
Grind the edges.
Polish​
The hammer is the heavens.
The flames are their disdain.
The blow is their fury.
The sparks are their victims.
The hammer is the heavens.
The flames are their disdain.
The blow is their fury.
The sparks are their victims.
The hammer is the heavens.
The flames are their disdain.
The blow is their fury.
The sparks are their victims.
The hammer is the heavens.
The flames are their disdain.
The blow is their fury.
The sparks are their victims.
The sand is their hunger.
The flames are their disdain.
The winds are "righteous" words.
But the spirit is our own.
And the blood is our own.
And the will is our own.
And the metal is our own.
Thus we are forged.​


Note: the "sapping sand" is qi absorbing sand from the desert barrier. And the metal is quenched in the smith's own blood.

@occipitallobe @Zephias
 
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Juturna Cerintha 1 - Defy the Bloody Heavens
Swish. Swish. Swish.

A piece of mud stuck to the walkway fragments, each particle gently separating from its brethren and swirling away into the air with the broom's passing. So too it is with us. We apply force to solve our issues, inflict violence upon that which offends us. We scatter and separate, uproot and are uprooted. Force and violence is inherent to this world. Contemplate this with every sweep, and gather will to defy the heavens.

Swish. Swish. Swish.

These gutters are to fill with blood. These streets are choked with dust. With effort invested, now this patch is clean. So too it is with us. The past is unchanged and the future is destruction. Before birth, life was not. After death, life will be naught. Life is now, and now is peaceful. Contemplate this with every sweep, and gather will to defy the heavens.

Swish. Swish. Swish.

A world without pain, a world without death. A world without blood, a world without loss. A world without fear, a world without shame. A world without destruction, a world without violence. This is not that world. Contemplate this with every sweep, and gather will to defy the heavens.

Swish. Swish. Swish.



Against the will of her father, Castrum Ce whose own Peace Dao had been broken by a conceptual attack, Juturna does not give up her Peace Dao as also unviable. She will not be defending the walls, which would be her first choice, acquiescing to her father's will in this alone. She will not be joining hunter-killer squads, as killing would be conceding to the nature of the world, nor will she be fleeing alone, as allowing people to be killed would be conceding to the nature of the world. She will be using her organizational skills, dedication and her techniques to stall, delay, and blunt enemies hunting her group.



Omake request: Something like Defy the Bloody Heavens: A World Without Violence (name can be changed to something that sounds cooler), a sutra which turns aside all forms of violence by powerfully conveying a distortion of the world in which the basic rules of nature are changed.

I don't know what would work for balance, but I'd like something that helps her survive or stop battles without actually attacking. @occipitallobe
 
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Chen Rong 1 - Countdown
Chen Rong

Countdown

T-3 Years​

As he sat at the desk in his study Chen Rong contemplated the last 2 years of his life. From the exhausting journey across the sands with the Legionnaires, to arriving at the regional outpost Thamugadi. He remembered the majestic sandstone walls seeming almost a mirage in the desert as they slowly grew in size the nearer their party drew. The gobsmacked looks on the faces of his siblings without a doubt reflected on his own as they drew up to the enormous Bronze gates, with engravings carved into the surface he would later learn told the story of the clans history.

He remembered the journey through the city, the enormously wide red brick road standing out beautifully against the white spirit grain marble buildings lining the main thoroughfare. Passing grand estates, elegant merchant stores and the multiple public baths he would soon find it hard to imagine living without. The party made their way along the path, lined with marble busts of famous clan members and filled with people from all walks of life, from the laborer cleaning the red bricks ensuring they looked brand new to the exotic foreign merchant passing through during his journey on the scorpion road the eventually reached its end at the main city square; a huge thing meant for the gathering of the cities forces in times of war.

Surrounding the square were the many Clan edifices he would soon come to know. From the small squat contribution hall where one might take on a task for the betterment of the clan and themselves, the many lecture theaters wherein merited cultivators espoused their Dao, to the Grand City administration building, from which the city was run and Clan proclamations flowed through. And of course, the Amphitheater. Where one might test their mettle against their fellow cultivators or beasts in return for prizes and the notoriety one may gain from the populace.

This place was to become his home.

Lieu Chao went above and beyond anything expected of him. He brought Rong directly to Cheng Fai, overseer of new disciples and demanded an entrance exam then and there before settling him and his siblings in a lovely courtyard not far from the centre of town, paying for it out of his own pocket whilst also providing a stipend to ensure his family would be well fed and educated until they came of age.

Rong had not expected such generosity and he swore he would one day see it returned in kind.

Since then it had been one amazing experience after another. From that first experience of feeling that very primal force of life itself flowing through his meridians, then learning his first technique, a simple body enhancement. From listening to an elder in the 9th​ level of Qi-Condensation tell his juniors the mistakes he made so that they may not, to fighting a scorch lizard during his first foray into the desert in search of a blood cacti in return for contribution points.

In many ways this life of his seemed almost a dream, a fantasy he would tell himself in his younger years to escape the fear of his future.

Of course, this life was not all sweet bread and lily's. There was a darkness to the cultivation world, for it was full of experiences of blood and horror, of living life on the edge not knowing if today could be your last. The golden devils sought to bring a degree of normalcy to this world, a degree of control, of civilisation. And yet not even the Grand Elder himself could protect them from the dangers of this world.

Having wondered at the pitying looks he received after first joining, Rong soon discovered his bad luck. For in less than 5 years into his journey the Trials would begin. Wherein cultivators from a far away land would arrive out of thin air to destroy that which the clan had built. To kill as many of the Clan's cultivators as they could in a twisted trial to prove their worth.

Lower stage cultivators often ended up getting the worst end of the stick in the Trials and thus many expected him to die.

But Chen Rong refused to leave this world so easily, not when he had just discovered what it truly meant to live.



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T – 2 years


Underneath a scorching sun all is silent except for the wind whistling across this barren landscape, with no one in sight and nothing but endless dunes on the horizon. A soft sniffle breaks the silence and for one with sharp senses you might notice a star shaped nose displacing a small section of sand. The nose twitches getting the scent of the land, and determining nothing is amiss a snout soon follows, preceding a grey and white fluffy head.

The star nosed raccoon emerges in its totality soon after before a swift shake removes all the sand from its body. It then turns around and digs its head back into the hole it just emerged from, removing the large gem it had risked entering this barren land for.

Chuffing in excitement it begins to make its way towards the mountains in the distance, already imagining entering the burrow with its prize to the envy of his nursery. Head filled with starry thoughts of his future growth and riches the starry nosed raccoon fails to notice a shadow passing across the sand where one shouldn't exist.

The shadow continues its journey, slowly and methodically until it links up with the raccoons own shadowy self. For a moment the desert silence seems to freeze, an ominous intent interrupting the previously peaceful moment. The shadows surrounding the raccoon seem to come alive, large spears of hardened darkness flicker in the space of a moment and with a sudden "shirk" the racoon freezes in place before toppling to the ground.

The silence returns to the desert, only to be broken by the soft footsteps of a man.

Chen Rong appears behind the star nosed raccoon, satisfaction in his eyes at a job well done. He had come across the raccoon by chance whilst on a mission for the Clan. Carrying a sack with a precisely removed head in it, Rong had already been quite happy with the contribution points he was soon to receive for the bandit's removal. Coming across a Star Nosed Raccoon which rarely forayed into the desert and usually only when its famed nose had caught the scent of an enticing treasure had seemed too good to be true.

Catching it as it came up above the sands to replenish its Qi even more so.

Taking out jade container Rong placed the Raccoons body inside. The rare beast was sure to fetch a good price from the Clan alchemists and enable Rong to provide the investment required for his brother to open his own store. He had only just gotten some fire back in his eyes after discovering he did not have the talent for cultivation and having enough to support his new passion for being a merchant would lift him up out of that depression.

Next, he lifted the gem. Raising it high in the sky allowing the sun's rays to pass through the gems azure faceted brilliance. Already cut and shaped, with tiny engravings decorating it's sides the gem must have been the lost possession of a fellow cultivator. Channelling Qi through the gem Rong felt his own Qi boil in response, passing through the fractals and returning to his channels refined and all the more potent for it.

This little Gem would surely be a great help to his cultivation.

All in all a productive few days thought Rong, whistling as he placed the gem inside one of the many folds of his robes and made his way back towards Thamugadi.



Omake Request: Stronger in Realm due to Refined Qi. Also potentially leading to ease of breakthrough due to the same?
 
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Magnus Centenius 10 - Refining poisons, Improving puppets, Saving Lives
Magnus Pt.10 - Refining poisons, Improving puppets, Saving Lives

Truly, the reward for hard work was even more work. Magnus had 20 years before the start of the next trials and he needed 60 to finish getting ready. Magnus had to finish work on his puppets, improve the poisons for them, make some pills, and start planning with the group of seniors working to protect all the juniors in the clan.

The first project on his list was actually the easiest one. Improving the puppets was surprisingly simple thanks to the new sticky and flammable poison made my Minervina. First, the hedgehog's quills were coated in the new sticky poison while some pouches of it were also placed just inside the skin of the puppet. now the puppet can spray the poison napalm on any enemy that damages it and shoots flaming quills that trail poison when it explodes. One more modification Magnus had made was the mouth area how held more fire wine so the hedgehog can spit some out to light attackers on fire, especially the ones covered in sticky poison.

The sticky poison was also added to the metal spikes of the snake. Now the snake's poisonous spikes can also cause enemies to have a higher chance of getting lite of fire. The more fun effect is with the sticky poison, the snake can be lit on fire and turn into a Flaming, Poisoned, Spiked, Steel Snake. Magnus ended up replacing the eyes of the Snake with glass balls filled with fire wine so that snake can light itself on fire whenever it wants.

The next project was a little bit harder as Xiao had an idea to disguise a poison to have similar effects to the White-Backed Scorpion poison, but gets stronger with the scorpion poison's antidote. Scorpion poison is a pretty standard neurotoxin, it causes muscles to go out of control, weakness, nausea and vomiting, and pain. Many poisons can have these effects and all Magnus had to do was test which of these poisons had a bad reaction to the antidote. After a month of testing different mixes in the bodies of mice, Magnus found that Devil Bee Poison Pollen reacted the worst to the scorpion anti-venom. Magnus loved the irony that their most recent attacker will be helping defend his clan now, as well as the fact that the pollen that attached to the dead bees was rather light and could spread father when released from the Osprey puppet.

This was about the time that it was announced that the clan would be buying a Cultivation Palace to strengthen Qi Cultivators, but not Live-Saving Pills. This threw out all the plans Magnus had for experimenting to make a healing wine that could use the alcohol in it to kill off diseases and infections while healing the body. This normally would take one pill to heal the wound and another to remove any infection or poison. With the little time left before the senior meet, Magnus thought it better to work on making more normal Life-Saving Pills. Unfortunately, Magnus was only at the journeyman level and could only make a few healing pills before the meeting date. These could be useful in helping with minor to moderate injuries and probably save a few lives, but it would not help with major problems like internal organ damage.

There was one creation of note during his weeks of pill forging. Working towards the end of weeks without sleep, during a fugue state he was able to make the Dead Rebirth Pill. This life saving treasure is to be taken when seriously injured and near death. The pill absorbs all the available Qi in the body and then puts the user into a death like state. While in this state, the brain and heart are preserved, but to the outside world the user has no Qi, heartbeat, or mind. The pill keeps the body in this state for 24 hours while continuously absorbing any Qi produced by the body. After the time is up, the pill uses the gathered Qi to repair all the damages on the body including replacing destroyed organs or limbs. The time in the death state can be longer if the body is more seriously damaged like several limbs being pulp instead of just cut off.

Magnus proudly walks towards the meeting ready to do what he can to help his fellow clansmen.

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@occipitallobe so I'm going with an extra life saving treasure since I'm going to help juniors.

@Mochinator @Katana1515 Thanks for the ideas on how to improve the puppets, what do you think about how I used the ideas?

If anyone has any ideas on how to improve my puppet forces let me know, also my puppets are free to use for anyone
 
Aaaand, that's the new batch of threadmarks done.

Whew, that was a big one. Though, given the recent circumstances, I suppose it only makes sense that it was like this.
 
Minervina Barda 10 - Seeking a Hidden Dragon part 1
Minervina Barda 10: Seeking a Hidden Dragon part 1

I sat in my speeding carriage as it pounded down the Scorpion Road, desperately trying to dull the pain in my soul.

I knew going in that lighting a Fire Pillar in my Dantian was a risky move. My first Dao Pillar had manifested as a huge, life-giving tree. It had come as no surprise that wood and flame couldn't co-exist harmoniously. I could see them now in my minds eye, two islands in a purple lake of Qi. My beloved tree looked singed at the edges and nearby waters were stained with ash. Still it was a font of Life and it continued to thrive despite my Fire Pillars bombardment.

It just fucking hurt.

I'm still certain that it was the right decision. My research indicated the third pillar bottlekneck is where many stall out. Getting three pillars in strong enough alignment to provide a sturdy enough foundation for further development is a perilous process. Eventually I would have the resources to add in a Water Pillar to the mix, which should bring things into a strong and harmonious balance.

In the meantime I just had to deal with that persistant ache as my soul burned itself. Getting a handle on the conflagration took so much of my concentration I didn't even notice as the coach slowed to a stop.

"We are here milady" My assistant called out from the drivers seat. It had been a pleasure to see Long Bi again after I finally got free of military service. While she was still only in the middle of Qi Condensation, the girl had blossomed into a capable woman with good administrative skills. She had become invaluable to me as a link to the everyday world as I spent more and more time in seclusion.

I stepped out of my new coach regretfully. It really was a comfortable ride. I had claimed it as spoils of war after the siege on Night Devil Fortress was broken. It had probably belonged to some hapless Great Hua nobleman originally, but no one had come forward to claim it or the team of jet black Spirit Horses before the auction.

I tapped one of the steeds on the shoulder fondly as I eyed our destination. The Three Corners Inn was a little bit of a misnomer these days, but from all the hustle and bustle trade was as good as ever. The massive spa complex was built just over the border into Oasis territory. A monstrous edifice of red brick and pipework, it was the only structure for miles around.

Rumour was the terrifying old hag who owned it had substantial influence with each of the powers of the Organ Meat Desert. Precisely positioned on the boundary between the three powers it was infamous as a rendezvous for spies, turncoats, merchant adventurers and diplomats. All gathering under an assurance of neutrality from the mistress of this place, the Great Witch Töregene.

And here I am, just another covert courier looking to pick up a package. What could go wrong.

This task required I ditch my usual practical black dress for something more eye-catching. I admit I would have been utterly lost without Long Bi. With surprising sternness she had taken me to task for having a lacking wardrobe and I swiftly lost any control of what I got to wear on this trip.

The result was a ridiculously elaborate affair that I am told is meant to bring to mind the image of a pheonix in flight. Dozens of cloth streamers, edged in gold and dyed a thousand shades of crimson, outlined my every motion. A three metre long trail picked out with feather patterns was meant to suggest a fiery trail. Those were matched with a trio of real Pheonix feathers that gleamed in my hair, which had been dyed a coppery red to match. Those valuable relics were a token from the sponsor of this little jaunt, and the signal to my contact that we should meet.

At least it was modest. I incinerated the first two designs Long Bi brought me. That girl is shameless when it comes to clothes.

We made our entrance, Long Bi a demure three steps behind my left shoulder. From all the glances we got the outfit seems to be making a positive impression.

I let Bi deal with the frog-faced little man at reception while I sauntered through the foyer and eyed the other guests. I blanched a little inside as I saw she checked us in under the name 'Mistress Crimson.' Why exactly did the mission require a pseudonym that made me sound like a low class courtesan?

Cultivators from a dozen major sects and clans dotted the room. The Demon War and the increased traffic on the Scorpion Road had brought all kinds of characters to the desert.

I was quite curious, in over a hundred years of living I had never actually had an opportunity to mingle socially with Righteous Path Cultivators. With a false identity and my (always subtle) bloodline traits covered in high end cosmetics, I finally had a chance to see what polite society was like on the 'right' side of the fence. Its not like I had anything better to do until my contact emerged anyway.

Opportunities are to be seized! Mustering my courage, I grabbed a glass of wine from a passing waiter and headed towards a trio in the distinct uniform of the Great Mountain Bell Sect.

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I slammed the door of my room closed so hard and fast it made the reinforced frame shudder alarmingly.

"CONCEITED, LECHEROUS, PIG-HEADED BASTARDS"

Bi had followed me into the room. She must have used some kind of movement Art to avoid getting a door to the face. She had a sour expression that didn't improve my mood at all.

"Did you really have to throw him into the fountain? I think he was an important emmisary from the Saber Palace."

"The pig almost shoved his hand down my dress. A dunking is the least he deserves!"

The argument would have likely raged on for some time if we hadn't been interrupted by a firm rap on the door.

The door opened to reveal an anxious looking young man in plain brown robes. He was almost painfully ordinary to look at. The only distinctive thing about him was the single red rose in his hands. The contact from the Yuan Clan.

He stepped into the room and I shut the door behind him. His anxiety seemed to peak at being shut in with the two Devil Women and he stumbled over his words. "I... have ... a package for you?"

"Just hand it over" I said brusquely. My temper flared more easily these days.

He tossed a Jade Tablet to me, I caught and quickly scanned its contents. An in depth breakdown on the Great Treasure. It would take greater minds than mine to judge if it was a forgery, but that wasn't my mission.

"Here" I tossed my own corresponding Jade back at him. "A breakdown of what we are offering and where you will find it if your Clan keeps its word."

He nodded jerkily, put the Jade away and visibly mustered his courage before he asked. "Is it true you knocked that Honoured Elder into the Koi Pond? I heard him asking about it at reception, he seemed.... displeased."

It was my turn to stumble over my words. "He was..... an Elder?"

At that point a hot wave of sensation hit them all as a Core Formation level existence unveiled its full aura in a blaze of anger. The shout was audible throughout the entire building. "I DEMAND TO KNOW WHICH ROOM THAT SCARLET STRUMPET IS STAYING IN."

I ran to the window and.... shit.... we were four floors up. Foundation Establishment or not I would probably break something and poor Bi didn't have a hope. I looked at all that flowing high end cloth on my dress and felt a brief sense of mourning. It really had been a pretty thing.

"Hurry up Bi, you get the bed linens together. I hope we can get to the coach, I don't fancy running through the desert in half a dress."

The Yuan man wisely scarpered as the two women got to work making a long enough rope.

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I am so full of flu and fever today that I can't promise any of this makes sense, but the enemies at the gate and I didn't want to be left out!

Despite being on the lowest end of her Realm, Minervina will be Saving Juniors as much as possible. I trust that if she goes down, it will be in a poisonous blaze of glory!

And I will have fun writing about the year she spends as a tree while regenerating.
 
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@LordEdric

Looks pretty awesome to me! I'm looking forward to the update where we see the things in action!

One thing I was thinking of was the possibility of using the things like landmines. Bury them in the sand behind retreating groups of juniors and then set them off under the pursuers feet, ideally a few seconds before a kill team counter-attacks them.
 
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Ferenike 14 - Coffins
Ferenike 14 - Coffins

The smell of Bronze Oxen and Giant Steel Horses surrounded her as Ferenike stepped into the shop room of the caravanners. The room was cavernous, stretching ten times above her head to the roof of the enormous wagon and it was at least forty meters long, a building on wheels.

And in racks down the walls, stacked four high, were coffins of every shape and design. She walked past them unperturbed as she followed the man she had come to see down the central aisle towards the negotiation desk at the front of the wagon. A morbid thought passed through her head that the man moving to sit behind the desk must have a booming business in recent times, as people prepared for the Trials.

At least he wasn't crass enough to make small talk on his business.

The man in front of her was a tallish individual of a thin and wiry form, graceful in his bright yellow and white robes. On his head he wore a large circular hat in a similar style to Ferenike's favorite, shining green and white. It reminded her of the hats her mother liked to wear, like her own.

She was shaken out of her memories by a voice.

"Come, sit, sit madame. Would you like some tea?" He asked genially, his yellow robe fluttering as he gestured with both hands at his tea set set out on the desk, gently steaming.

She resisted the urge to smile. With her injuries she looked like she constantly was anyway and it pulled painfully at her remaining flesh.

"That would be quite nice Sir Rouhe." She rasped, sparks grinding on her tongue.

He smiled even wider, he hadn't stopped this whole time, as he set about serving the both of them tea. While he occupied himself thus, her gaze swept over his left shoulder to take in the two meter tall rectangular object leaning against the wall covered by a golden sheet of silk. She could feel the power emanating from it even here more than five meters away.

That'd be the Coffin she was here for.

With a clink of fine porcelain Rouhe set her teacup in front of her on a little saucer. He nodded, clean face creasing as he settled himself and took a drink. She took her own when he didn't show any ill signs and then set hers aside. It was damn good tea, she regretted she was here to only get her business done.

"Where did you find this device Sir Rouhe?" She opened, she'd prod him for his providence on the Coffin first.

"Ah, bit of a winding trail for it. I obtained it from a fellow traveler who went by the name Lady Tian at the time. She didn't stay long in these lands after that, heading north. Can't imagine why." The man said with a smug lit to his voice as he leaned forward conspiratorially.

Ferenike rolled her eyes good-naturedly. As the Trials approached travelers and traders fiercely competed to sell their products to the Golden Devils as the Clan bought up everything they could to prepare. Many were driven out entirely in the competition and only the best were left behind.

She smiled, glass teeth glinting. "I can't imagine either, but there's more to this story isn't there?" She asked him leadingly.

He nodded. "So in our little comradely talks, I found out from the Lady that she'd acquired it from a fellow roaming the Hong Xuan lands, a Flood Dragon Gang member actually. Hmmm, his name was 'Gong Rencao' and he apparently had no use for such a device himself after receiving it as a gift from the Sorrowful Blacksmiths." He said as he refilled their cups with a hand, the other pulling a stack of papers from within a desk drawer and slapping it down beside their tea.

Ferenike blinked at the name. "Huh. Small world."

Then she looked at the papers and saw the hammer and broken mask sigil of the Sorrowful Blacksmiths, with sketches of parts of a coffin-like device surrounding them.

Rouhe perked up, eyes sharpening as he looked at her. "You know this man?" He asked.

She chuckled. "I traveled with him for about a year hunting a Blood Path Villain near the Burnished Crags."

He rubbed his chin in interest. "Small world indeed. This sounds like a fascinating story, please, share!" He said with a wave of his hand.

Ferenike spent the next few hours telling it, as that was the way of things out here among the travelers. Gossip was almost as valuable as gold or Spirit Stones which were themselves half as valuable as reliable sources of food and drink.

They were deep into their sixth cup of tea, and second tray of snacks by the time she was done. She'd figured she'd done well enough in the telling, as when it came time for the negotiations of funds changing hands Sir Rouhe didn't strangle her for coin as hard as he very well could have.

The purchasing price was still mind-bogglingly expensive, and the activation price horrific enough to clean her out to the small amounts of scrip she had tucked away for emergencies. But she had a good and fair deal and a happy business partner.

He bowed from across his desk at her, the golden shine of the device behind him, reflected light illuminating his back and shoulders. "I hope it meets to your satisfaction Lady Ferenike."

She bowed in return. "You are certainly well traveled Sir Rouhe," She complimented him. "I will recommend you to some of my Clan Brothers and Sisters if they require use of your connections."

"Thank you. Do you require a porter for your purchase?" He asked as he straightened, eyes glittering happily.

She shook her head and waved her hand in the direction of the coffin. It disappeared with a whoosh of air into her storage ring, leaving him nonplussed. "That will not be necessary." She said and then with a small bow turned to leave.

"Blessed travels Ferenike of the Golden Devils." He said to her as she went.

"You as well Sir Rouhe." She said back to him as the swish-swish of her robes faded from hearing.



Her manor was quiet, Ales leading the others to secure it as best they could and to ready the arrays that would guard her as she slept. She stood in her workshop of grey-black stone and before her lay the shimmering gold device.

It was two meters in length and about a meter and a half tall, a rectangular coffin carved from gold and white marble. On the sides were carved scenes of forests and mountain valleys which slowly transitioned into the writhing shapes of serpents as the carvings passed onto the lid. Carved in the lid was a sleeping figure of ambiguous gender, with long and flowing hair, sleeping peacefully as the snakes sunk black jade fangs into their veins. Their face was almost mask-like, carved from white jade with green jade needles a handspan in length jutting from the acupoints on the forehead, cheeks and eyes.

Ales already knew what she needed from him, and so her servants were busy training. If she strained her ears she could hear the old man directing them through routines and katas through the ceiling above her bare head.

In her hand she held her favorite hat, a golden thing with a pattern of white flowers around the rim which reminded her of the style her mother used to wear. What lay before her, out the other side of this device was terrifying. But what lay behind her kept her back straight and a small confidence. Things would work out in her little corner of the world, all she had to do was heal and make it so.

She set it aside and clothed only in a linen shift began to activate the Seven Venoms Serpent Coffin. Pain slowed her down as did grinding glass joints but soon its lid had eased open and the dark cushions within beckoned her. Levering herself in she pulled the lid closed. As darkness descended she felt herself be cast into the center of her mind where her crimson sea rested.

Within she could feel a change. A whispered question, floating to her on the airless void, in the snapping tongue of the flame at her heart.

What was patience?

Why did she follow it?

And she didn't know. She thought she followed it because it was her way to win, every breath a victory torn from the Heavens. And that was true, she knew that. But she was following something she didn't know, and that made her reasons for following suspect.

In that darkness she stewed, her frustration fuel for her fire as she meditated.

Time passed, her hair growing slowly longer, the only sign of its passage in this place. The only changing thing, as it hung down to her shoulders. Until something else changed. Subtly colors changed slow enough she missed it until she looked up from wrestling with the idea of patience perhaps being a facet of the need for vengeance and saw, emerging onto the surface of her glass sea, blue and green glass mixed with her normal rose and pink. Shimmering.

And it felt exactly the same. Without her spiritual eyes staring directly at the change which had overtaken her entire sea, to leave her standing atop a glimmering brass sphere, she wouldn't know it existed at all. Around her the questions plaguing her fell silent, her flames quieting. Carefully she reached out for her Qi, was the coffin done with its ministrations, she wondered?

She nearly lost consciousness as her Qi slammed into her in a wave, gunmetal colored light blinding her as it rushed out in rays from her fire and she felt a massive force grab her and slam her back into awareness.

She awoke with a scream as she tipped out of the Coffin, its light going dim as it expended the last of its energy. She landed on the flagstones of her workshop floor with a clang, that was different, and blinked grit from her eyes. Her blurry vision cleared and she saw a lake of iridescent purple and yellow fluids all around her, having spilled from the Coffin.

She hastily backed away from it, the warnings about the device repeating like a mantra in her head and backed up into her work desk. Then she blinked as she tried to wipe away the poisons still on her flesh, but leaving her unharmed. Her hands were whole, she was whole and there was no pain.

She looked at them in relieved amazement, watching as the lamp light shimmered off her gunmetal skin. Brassy reds and blues and greens, just like what she had seen in her mind. Now clothing her glass bones in metallic flesh. Her nails glinted in the light, now made entirely of rose glass. They clicked pleasantly on the palm of her hand as she watched her flingers flex without any of the grinding agony that had haunted her for years.

Slowly she stood and half in a daze walked around to one of the array mirrors standing on one of her workshop's walls. In it was a beauty with cockatiel yellow hair, gunmetal brass skin and brown eyes with a red spark in her pupils. When she smiled in glee her teeth were red glass, and glinted in the light.

"So coooool..." She squealed as she patted at her face.

She hadn't looked this awesome in decades.

"My Lady? Are you hungry?" An elderly voice asked behind her. She whirled.

"HAH! I feel great Ales!" She said and leapt to hug him, lifting him clean off his feet as he let out a whumpf of air.

"Good to see you in high spirits my Lady!" He said happily as she spun him around and then set him down in front of her, her hands on his shoulders.

She hadn't stopped smiling, it'd been so long since that hadn't hurt dammit she was going to be smiling as much as she could.

"Would you like some food?" Ales asked again. She blinked.

Then her stomach made its cavernous desires known and she winced. "Yes, please whatever you have." She said urgently.

"Right away my lady!" He said and then trotted out of view.

She walked, wincing and uncomfortable to her chair in front of her desk and sat carefully. Sweet Imperator why didn't the warning pamphlet talk about how hungry you got?

She nearly bowled Ales over when the smell of sweet and spicy rice, chicken and stir fried vegetables preceded him down the corridor outside her workshop. The man however adroitly dodged out of the way and handed her plates which she gladly took. Together they managed to ferry the great number of them to her desk where she began to dig in ravenously.

In between bites she asked Ales, "What happened while I slept Ales?"

The old man chuckled and shook his head. "Preparations for the Trials, such as they are." He said with a quiet discontent.

She paused from chewing on a piece of chicken, confused.

He sighed. "Old Gold has made a gamble, purchasing a Technique Palace suitable for us in Essence Gathering. From what I hear you yourself and the other good seeds won't benefit much as you are already well suited to what you practice or have discovered. There will be no other protections this Trial."

She paused, laying down her utensils as she processed that. Why would he...?

"Will it finish before the Trials begin Ales?" She asked cautiously.

"Yes, and so some will benefit from it. But very little, compared to the last Trials." He said, hands clenching in front of him.

She thought. The Hunters only broke fortifications if the Clan used them to prevent them from hunting, and they had little interest in what the Clan built if they abandoned it. They would not destroy the Palace, more than likely.

She started eating again as she thought laying out what she knew of the Clan's major assets. Full strength of the previous Trials, the Golden Eye Array to seek out the Hunters and assist the Shattering Glass Spears, limited wealth as the Palace would have been absurdly expensive to purchase, the Technique Palace providing some benefits before the Trials.

She finished her meal, contemplative and weary silence. She sighed. "I am troubled by his decision Ales." She told her servant.

He sighed. "I believe I can see a little of his aims mistress. Do you have further wisdom?" He asked.

She nodded. "I can see it as well." Her eyes skated over to her Coffin, now dormant. "The same reason I felt troubled by taking this chance to heal when I could have made something to save lives, and yet still did. A part of me does not and will not agree with it, not until this is over."

She stood and turned to face her servant fully. "I think he believes that Heaven cannot strike us down in one blow here, not with how we have grown. And as I said to my friend Xiao Yi, if we cannot be killed now, we will come back stronger than ever before for the next Trials." Her eyes sharpened.

Her servant smiled wanly and nodded as he pulled a letter of bronzy paper from his robes. "Yes mistress. It seems you are not the only one who won't simply lay down before the challenge the Archegetes has set before us. That Golden Child, Callista sent me this message a short while ago." He said as he handed it to her.

Ferenike took it and unfolding it carefully she read. When she was done she was smiling, a fierce and fanged thing as her mind raced.

"Bring me my arms and a horse Ales. We won't be facing the challenge of the Archegetes alone." She said as she looked up at him.

The old man smiled confidently, hope burning in his eyes. "Good. I trust you my lady. Do us proud out there." He said.

She bowed to him. "I will Ales. Tell the rest to prepare for battle and train them till they drop. Now be about it!" She said with a smile.

He bowed back. "As you will." He said and then left on a puff of displaced air.

She hadn't stopped smiling. She could feel the weight of what stood before her, worse even than the War but this time, this time she felt her spirit rising to meet it.

She had so much training to do and a great many Juniors to save.


@occipitallobe have another Omake for you! Smaller one than my usual, please put this towards my Fate Bonus for this turn.
 
Well, ok, yes. When a cultivator breaks through to Core Formation they are given their own Legion and spot on the Legion Contribution Board. Some Core Formation elders choose not to form a Legion at all - taking on regalia, name, and words, but no Legionnaires. This is rare, though. More common are the Elders who form a Legion, turn it over to a senior Foundation Establishment expert, and leave things alone, only to emerge for major problems.

Does Manuel have his own legion? Are they The Emperor's Finest?
 
Oh O.O the Collab omake has risen to nearly 8k words with just the introductions and we have 13 of the 40 Good Seeds here.
 
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