Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Good point.

By the way how dose somthing like 9th Prince participating works? Like he was in the meating and all but he dose not in fact have a drop of blood of bronze. So how would he and others like him be treated by the contest? Or dose anyone that directly serves the clan counts for the trail.

@occipitallobe
Uhhhh you recall that his family was hunted nearly to extinction by the people running the Trials right

And then exiled and drove him to this specific region

They'd probably kill him on general principle for being a snake worshipping deviant
 
[X] Divided Mortal Kingdoms

[X] Simmering Soup Sect

One thing I would be interested in seeing one day is a detailed map and breakdown of our core territory, so we could get a sense of where Good Seeds might have originated or be based.
 
Wei Feng 8 - Foundation's fall (Year 70)
AN: Well. Over 6000 words this turn. Not counting my contributions to the Mega-omake collaboration. That's pretty good, right?

Shoutout to @LordEdric as I briefly mention Magnus Centinius' achievements with poison during the Devil bee war in this omake. If you have any problem with your mention please just ping me and I'll remove it.

Edit: @ReaderOfFate could you threadmark this and Wei Feng 7 (which seems to have gotten missed)? *Hope the ping works with edits.*

Wei Feng 8 - Foundation's fall (Year 70)

How do you deal with a cultivator who is of a greater realm than you?

There were several standard answers: 'Die' 'Run and hope they don't chase you', 'Beg for your life', 'threaten them with your connections' or 'Bribe them with your most expensive item and hope it amuses them enough to spare you'.

All of these recognise the truth. You cannot win.

Barring true monsters or rare treasures, the difference is really that insurmountable. Compared to a qi condensation on the verge of break through, a new foundation establishment cultivator would be almost twice as strong and tough, more than three times faster, and have over ten times the stamina.

Similar differences are seen between foundation establishment and Core formation, with the only difference being that toughness, not speed is the greater change. As for nascent soul? The gap between an early nascent soul and a peak core formation cultivator is wider than the gap between a core formation and a mortal.

To be the target of one above your realm is one of the greatest fears of all cultivators.

This is the situation Wei Feng contends with now.

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Wei Feng paces restlessly in his room. Thinking desperately of what he can do. He has no great treasures to use. The foundation establishment cultivator is still days away, but the Legion is too far to come to his aid in time. He is the only defence this place has, and if he fails then the town he is standing in will be reduced to a slaughterhouse.

The situation appears hopeless. The obvious, prudent answer is clear: Abandon this place to its fate.

Flee.

The arguments line up in his head, parade perfect soldiers marching across his mind.

No one would blame him. Facing a foundation establishment is far more than could be expected of him. His death would not save the town's inhabitants. A general who throws away his forces in a disadvantageous battle just because his enemy offers it is a fool, not a hero.

None of these arguments are wrong, and he hates it. It is wrong.

He rubs his chin, pinches and pulls on his nose. There must be something he can do. He is meeting the town's mayor soon and he cannot face telling him that he can do nothing. That thousands of lives are soon to be forfeit to the greed of the Devil bees.

'Greed'. Perhaps there is something there? Some clue to a way to salvage this situation? He stills himself, forcing his scattered thoughts into order.

The stock answers to the presence of higher realm cultivators were based on three things: Greed, Apathy, Fear.

Greed. Cultivators always needed more resources. Furthermore, easy loot was better than hard loot. Taking a bribe might guarantee a treasure came to them intact, whereas in a fight there was always a slim chance it might be damaged or expended.

'Apathy'. Most cultivators measured their worth by their strength, and lesser were rarely worthy of specific attention. Especially as resources that were valuable for lower realms became considerably less so in upper realms.

Fear. No cultivator could truly be called a coward, but as the higher they rose the farther they knew they had to fall.

There had to be something he could use here, yet nothing came to mind. He scowled, frustrated. He had felt the seed of an idea but lost it.

He shook his head, clearing his thoughts. He would speak to the Mayor. He was a former third heaven stage cultivator who had settled down to enjoy his remaining years in peace. Even with his cultivation gradually fading he was still a figure to be respected in the Hua empire. Perhaps mayor knew of something the town held beyond the lives of its inhabitants that he had overlooked.

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Nothing. The town was home to nothing more than an old dried-up Spirit stone mine.

More than ten thousand lives and he had nothing. No way to fight. No way to drive them off or lure them… away….

'Greed' A voice seemed to whisper in his head.

That the mine was well and truly dry was well known locally but… perhaps… if it could be made to seem as if a new vein had been found. Plundering a spirit stone mine was far more attractive prospect than a town of mortals, even for monsters like the Abyssal Bees.

He would need some spirit stones… No. He did not possess nearly enough spirit stones to convincingly fake such a thing. Perhaps he should speak with the Mayor again.

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Wei Feng spent hours in conference with the Mayor, hammering out a plan that he thought might work. It required the cooperation of a number of the town's mortals, as well as one or two of the very few Hua qi condensation cultivators present in the town. They were very weak, only of the first Heaven Stage, but they could still be useful.

The plan was thus.

Wei Feng lacked anything like the number of spirit stones required to convincingly fake a renewed and open mine. However, he might be able to fake a greedy governor.

He would sacrifice a portion of his spirit stones for the Mayor to 'conceal'. Sadly, these would probably have to be left behind as 'compensation' for the Mayor's help even should this work. In return, the Mayor would assign a number of 'trustworthy' mortals to dig again into a dead end of the old mine, with the entrance guarded by some of the few Qi Condensation cultivators.

Wei Feng would also be within the mine, radiating his presence. As the foundation building cultivator got closer. He would also send a small number of 'shipments' containing spirit stones to the Mayor with one of the qi condensation cultivators.

If the enemy cultivator was to scout cautiously, they may catch the signs of the mine being open again. The labourers, the small shipments of stones to the Mayor, his own presence. It points to a greedy cultivator trying to conceal a discovery of a new vein within a worked-out mine. If true, such a deception might not hold out long before needing to be declared, but much wealth could go 'missing' in such a period.

If the cultivator is less cautious, then his own obvious presence is still a threat worth investigating. The mine is close enough to the town that he is a threat in being. Whilst he could not challenge them in open battle, they would make themselves vulnerable when they began to feed upon the towns inhabitants.

Without knowing his speciality, they would have reason to fear what he might do. After all, both poison and formation cultivators were infamous for having reach far stronger than their cultivation might indicate and Magnus Centenius had given them reason to fear the poisonous expertise of the Golden Devils. They could not know that Wei Feng's only experience with poison was from the receiving end.

Either way, they would almost certainly come to investigate the mines. Wei Feng waited within. He had spent some time working to weaken the celling in specific areas. Though it was still strong to mortals, a single strong blow from him would bring it down. Blasting powder and spark formations would be laid and concealed enroute to where the ambush was planned, to collapse any route behind.

Even with all this he was unlikely to kill them outright. Still, many tonnes of rock would likely injure them, as well as be difficult to dig through, especially if they lacked proper leverage. It would buy time for him to call for legion reinforcements to send a kill team.

He tries not to think about the third possibility. That the Core formation cultivator would simply ignore his trap and attack the town. It would be the move of a complete fool.

For perhaps the first time, he hopes his foe is not a fool.

Deep beneath the earth, alone in the dim light of a lamp, he broods.

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He feels it when the foundation building cultivator arrives, their presence erupting into the air far, far closer than he was comfortable with and closing faster still. They clearly had some manner of stealth technique.

His hand reflexively twitches for his soul filling rasp. Its concealment has kept him alive many times over the decades. He forces his hands away. He needs to be visible, his qi a signal to follow. Besides, against a foundation establishment cultivator its powers would fail anyway.

Above him, he feels the Hua empire cultivators break and run. Good. With luck they would be ignored as irrelevant. The mortals are already gone, for it is deep in the night.

Swiftly Wei Feng begins to run towards his trap, qi flaring. He must seem like a cultivator moving to secure his loot before fleeing.

He runs down corridors of roughhewn stone, sometimes widened and tall, a main throughfares of a once great mine, others barely tall enough for a man. He dodges around a minecart, pressed back into service and pushed from the service to give the appearance of use. He has been down this tunnel many times recently, holding his meagre stock of spirit stones and spreading his qi freely into the air and walls. He knows not how strong the senses of a core formation are, but he hopes the trail obscures how few stones are actually present.

He feels his enemy's presence. An angry, hungry buzzing in that filters down into his bones and shakes him from the inside. A faint burning sensation, like echoes of acidic venom.

It is gaining.

He skids round a last corner and sees his place ahead. A small natural cavern. Placed against one wall is a small wooden table. A few pretty but ultimately worthless baubles are placed haphazardly on top. A simple ruse for the mortals.

Now for the difficult part. Wei Feng reaches out with his senses, spreading out his qi into the air, soaking it into the rock. At the same time, he takes hold of his soul filling rasp and begins to gradually shave away the outer portions of his aura.

It cannot fool a foundation establishment cultivator, but it is an obvious stealth technique. Mind still bound up with his qi, Wei Feng moves his body out the other exit of the cavern. A qi condensation foolishly trying to steal treasure and hide from a foundation establishment cultivator.

Behind him, the droning, acidic aura speeds up further.

This place is old. Water wearing away at rock for millions of years to form a natural cavern before it was disturbed by the metal picks of the miners. Deep beneath the desert, water still finds its way down from above, passing through sand and soil, carried on underground rivers. Drops of water pick up minerals and dip down through the ceiling, wearing away and building simultaneously. Over centuries, the rock may wear away, the minerals may form a stalactite.

His mind follows the water, qi permeating the liquid and tracing the faults in rock and earth made by time and by man's tools. He pauses by a wall.

Here.

He gathers himself, channelling water Qi into his fists. Above, his mind traces the path, thin threads of qi receding from extraneous areas. Traceries of qi follow the paths of water through rock

The buzzing is almost upon him. His teeth chatter in his head. Have to time it right. Wait. Wait…

NOW

He punches forward, double fisted. His enhanced strength pulverises part of the wall, sending shockwaves through the rock. His reserves plummet. The qi in his hands discharges, racing back along the thin line of qi linked to all the water in the fault, agitating it, forcing it to vibrate and expand.

The fault explodes, rocks detonating and crashing together in a chain reaction. In an instant the celling collapses straight onto the head of the Devil bee and its master as they emerge into the cavern.

Wei Feng runs. His lungs burn from the sudden discharge of qi. His legs wobble, but he wills himself to keep his balance. Reaching deep within himself he pulses his remaining qi higher and wide to set off the spark formations that blast the way behind the Devil bee shut.

As he goes, he punches at the supports on the walls with strength enough to bruise even his own supernaturally toughened skin. Occasionally he jumps to smash a ceiling buttress. Behind him he can hear the crashing of boulders as the roof and walls fall away, tonnes of rock falling in instants.

His breath comes in ragged gasps. A stabbing pain runs up the left side of his ribcage and he can no longer tell the difference between the thumping of his own heart and the sounds of a cave in. Yet he feels ecstatic. His mouth is stretched uncontrollably into a grinning rictus.

Racing his own destruction, Wei Feng sprints for the surface.

Success tastes like rock dust.

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AN2:
So this one was all about Wei Feng's adventure in trapping a Foundation establishment cultivator for later disposal while still a Qi condensation cultivator. Figuring out how the hell he'd do that given the stat differential was hard. Drop an avalanche on him was my initial thought, and it morphed into collapsing a mine after I looked at the map of the Hua territories and noted less mountains but a rather large spirit stone mine.

Still had to figure out how to get them there though. Wei Feng probably got over clever here but I thought it was still a fun idea and wanted to keep it in. Everyone's prone to overthinking sometimes so it's not a bad flaw to include. Especially given the stress my poor average boy is under.

PS:
And with that, coupled with my overflow from last turn. My Fate Wordcount Budget for the Hundred Year Trials stands at over 10,000 words!

snip

So why do I still feel so scared?
Stop making me feel inadequate damnit. :p
 
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nice work, that is a really smart way to trap a stronger enemy
I don't mind the reference, but Minervina would be a better one seeing as she killed one and drove away another formation realm while in the Qi realm
 
nice work, that is a really smart way to trap a stronger enemy
I don't mind the reference, but Minervina would be a better one seeing as she killed one and drove away another formation realm while in the Qi realm
Ah. Umn. :whistle:You see:

IC reason, that was before Wei Feng's time, and the Devil Bee's aren't likely to have heard of it anyway.

OOC reason. I actually forgot about that happening in turn 1. :oops: I remembered some really impressive work against the devil bees with poison and rechecked the turn 4 good seed reports.
 
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The recent batch of omakes have all been threadmarked and sorted. I noticed a few unsorted omake as well, which I placed into their correct spots.

(I don't even feel ashamed to hope openly at this point that I get a solid Fate bonus from all of this. Even with my slip-up this week from being busy, I think it's fair to say I threadmarked/sorted at least 80% of the omake since I was added as a collaborator. And that ain't a small amount, which I'm glad for. Active communities like this are wonderful.)
 
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The recent batch of omakes have all been threadmarked and sorted. I noticed a few unsorted omake as well, which I placed into their correct spots.

(I don't even feel ashamed to hope openly at this point that I get a solid Fate bonus from all of this. Even with my slip-up this week from being busy, I think it's fair to say I threadmarked/sorted at least 80% of the omake since I was added as a collaborator. And that ain't a small amount, which I'm glad for. Active communities like this are wonderful.)
Depending on how the trials go, there may be an even bigger wave, I'm sure some people have gotten an idea for even more seeds
 
The recent batch of omakes have all been threadmarked and sorted. I noticed a few unsorted omake as well, which I placed into their correct spots.

(I don't even feel ashamed to hope openly at this point that I get a solid Fate bonus from all of this. Even with my slip-up this week from being busy, I think it's fair to say I threadmarked/sorted at least 80% of the omake since I was added as a collaborator. And that ain't a small amount, which I'm glad for. Active communities like this are wonderful.)
This reminds me: I need to finish setting up templates on the wiki.

Infoboxes! (RIP in template hell)

Also, I've been doing copyedits on random pages, when I have the time. I need to find time to sort through the basic info pages and clean them up, though.
 
Sheesh, I'm cutting this way too close, 5.5k words in and I haven't even gotten to the main event. Should I post what I've got then edit the rest of it in when I finish, do you think?
 
How do you deal with a cultivator who is of a greater realm than you?

There were several standard answers: 'Die' 'Run and hope they don't chase you', 'Beg for your life', 'threaten them with your connections' or 'Bribe them with your most expensive item and hope it amuses them enough to spare you'.

All of these recognise the truth. You cannot win.

Barring true monsters or rare treasures, the difference is really that insurmountable. Compared to a qi condensation on the verge of break through, a new foundation establishment cultivator would be almost twice as strong and tough, more than three times faster, and have over ten times the stamina.

Similar differences are seen between foundation establishment and Core formation, with the only difference being that toughness, not speed is the greater change. As for nascent soul? The gap between an early nascent soul and a peak core formation cultivator is wider than the gap between a core formation and a mortal.

To be the target of one above your realm is one of the greatest fears of all cultivators.

This is the situation Wei Feng contends with now.
I like the start. It's a very heist movie feel. Establishing the act/idea is impossible before showing how it's done. I had the Mission Impossible theme playing in my head at this.
Greed. Cultivators always needed more resources. Furthermore, easy loot was better than hard loot. Taking a bribe might guarantee a treasure came to them intact, whereas in a fight there was always a slim chance it might be damaged or expended.

'Apathy'. Most cultivators measured their worth by their strength, and lesser were rarely worthy of specific attention. Especially as resources that were valuable for lower realms became considerably less so in upper realms.

Fear. No cultivator could truly be called a coward, but as the higher they rose the farther they knew they had to fall.
I really like this breakdown here. It fits really well and sums up the Cultivation Experience on why the fighting across Realms is such a impressive feat
He would need some spirit stones… No. He did not possess nearly enough spirit stones to convincingly fake such a thing. Perhaps he should speak with the Mayor again.

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Wei Feng spent hours in conference with the Mayor, hammering out a plan that he thought might work. It required the cooperation of a number of the town's mortals, as well as one or two of the very few Hua qi condensation cultivators present in the town. They were very weak, only of the first Heaven Stage, but they could still be useful.

The plan was thus.
Heist vibes intensifies! Except considering what's being planned, i guess it's more A Team
Now for the difficult part. Wei Feng reaches out with his senses, spreading out his qi into the air, soaking it into the rock. At the same time, he takes hold of his soul filling rasp and begins to gradually shave away the outer portions of his aura.

It cannot fool a foundation establishment cultivator, but it is an obvious stealth technique. Mind still bound up with his qi, Wei Feng moves his body out the other exit of the cavern. A qi condensation foolishly trying to steal treasure and hide from a foundation establishment cultivator.
Very cerebral. Is nice to read about Cultivators not being pure meatheads.
As he goes, he punches at the supports on the walls with strength enough to bruise even his own supernaturally toughened skin. Occasionally he jumps to smash a ceiling buttress. Behind him he can hear the crashing of boulders as the roof and walls fall away, tonnes of rock falling in instants.

His breath comes in ragged gasps. A stabbing pain runs up the left side of his ribcage and he can no longer tell the difference between the thumping of his own heart and the sounds of a cave in. Yet he feels ecstatic. His mouth is stretched uncontrollably into a grinning rictus.

Racing his own destruction, Wei Feng sprints for the surface.

Success tastes like rock dust.

The recent batch of omakes have all been threadmarked and sorted. I noticed a few unsorted omake as well, which I placed into their correct spots.

(I don't even feel ashamed to hope openly at this point that I get a solid Fate bonus from all of this. Even with my slip-up this week from being busy, I think it's fair to say I threadmarked/sorted at least 80% of the omake since I was added as a collaborator. And that ain't a small amount, which I'm glad for. Active communities like this are wonderful.)
Could you also threadmark my latest one when you're free? I'm rather proud of my first attempt at Romance/Tragedy
Sheesh, I'm cutting this way too close, 5.5k words in and I haven't even gotten to the main event. Should I post what I've got then edit the rest of it in when I finish, do you think?
My 2 cents would be to split it. Editing it in afterwards runs the risk of people missing the changes.

2 parts will at least net you some Boost if you can't get the 2nd part out.
 
Oh, my apologies, I must have accidentally missed that one. I'm getting to it now.

By the way, I quite liked that omake. It was rather poignant.

EDIT: And done, threadmarked.
Thanks very much! Both for the threadmark and the praise. My one intent was to make sure the emotions brought over by @FixerUpper's awesome snip was carried across throughout the entire omake, with a slight hope of making the bittersweet feeling stronger via the snippets of the moments shared together.

Was just unsure on if it came through or if i was just overhyping my own omake in my head.
 
Festus Sarantpechos 2 - Drilling it in
Drilling it in
Festus Sarantpechos


Right, now this is MY runechisel so I won't be giving it to you, I need it for my smithing, but I certainly can make one for you since you're looking to get into Array carving. As you can see the base substrate is bone, but what you probably can't tell at a glance is that the Gleamhorn Snake bone this was made from was soak in pressurized molten lead and then chipped out. That forced the lead into all the little hollow spaces inside which is why its so much heavier and sturdier than it looks.

The business end is the painstakingly sharpened spike of Nine Year Willow at the end. No that's not spirit bronze. It just looks like that because of just how heavensdamned many fucking tiny little sigils are carved there. It's a bitch to make and easily half the work of making these things goes into making the tip. The array sigils themselves are, as you'd expect, carved into the surface and then filled with corpsegoo ... I mean the molten spiritbronze we extract by burning and melting down the bodies of our venerable elders ... so yeah, fucking corpsegoo. Great stuff for spiritual smithing and holds an Array like nothing else. But more than a bit creepy and disgusting.

Anyway the Array modulates and focuses the Qi passing through the runechisel to form a point of rapidly spinning high density Qi right at the tip of the chisel. NEVER EVER TOUCH IT. It will burn through you like you aren't even there. And by the time you get strong enough not to worry about that, you'll be working with an even stronger chisel. Don't leave it running when you don't have to either because it burns through a lot of power to do that. Anyway, these sigils over here on the handle are how you specify the desired energy density, qi resonance, spin rate, and essence flavor.

You may be wondering about the line of bloodcopper you can see snaking around the handle and bottom of the chisel and then out to the tip. That's the qi-sink that acts as power storage and distribution. It passes right under your grip so that you can feel the flow of energy and cut it off immediately if need be. Speaking of power, the circular array at the very bottom of the handle is how you charge it. What you do is put spirit stones into this charging pouch over here and give it about an hour to digest, then press the circle on your runechisel to the circle on your pouch and you're good to go. The pouch will cling to the bottom of the chisel until it's out of qi and then fall off. It's set up like this so that you can have multiple charging pouches digesting in sequence and just keep regularly switching them out to keep your runechisel constantly powered.

So uhhh ... get the fuck out and let me get back to work. I'll have your chisel ready for you in a month. Oh and tell your sister I said hi and that we're on for dinner tomorrow.

@occipitallobe @Zephias
 
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The array sigils themselves are, as you'd expect, carved into the surface and then filled with corpsegoo ... I mean the molten spiritbronze we extract by burning and melting down the bodies of our venerable elders ... so yeah, fucking corpsegoo. Great stuff for spiritual smithing and holds an Array like nothing else. But more than a bit creepy and disgusting.
:D Festus telling it to us straight! No fancy words or corporate speak for him on the materials used! Just the hard facts!
So uhhh ... get the fuck out and let me get back to work. I'll have your chisel ready for you in a month. Oh and tell your sister I said hi and that we're on for dinner tomorrow.
The surly blacksmith is growing on me! His interactions are hilarious!
 
:D Festus telling it to us straight! No fancy words or corporate speak for him on the materials used! Just the hard facts!

The surly blacksmith is growing on me! His interactions are hilarious!
The part that amused me was that I didn't realize until I was halfway through writing this that I was describing a totally-not-a-power-drill. And that I had even painted it to kind of look like one.

Edit: though the runes kind of ate the shading that provided the texture and shape of the handle-joint
 
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Oooh. Same question, but specific to our hired Auxiliaries.

They largely retire to their kingdoms and such, but aren't hunted. This has the advantage of allowing us to not suffer vassal reductions in strength - but also the disadvantage of having us not not suffer vassal reductions in strength.

Good point.

By the way how dose somthing like 9th Prince participating works? Like he was in the meating and all but he dose not in fact have a drop of blood of bronze. So how would he and others like him be treated by the contest? Or dose anyone that directly serves the clan counts for the trail.

@occipitallobe

Rest assured, this will be addressed specifically and at length.
 
They largely retire to their kingdoms and such, but aren't hunted. This has the advantage of allowing us to not suffer vassal reductions in strength - but also the disadvantage of having us not not suffer vassal reductions in strength.



Rest assured, this will be addressed specifically and at length.
Any sort of general eta on the end of the turn, by any chance?
 
Ferenike 17 - Scorpions Lie In Wait
Ferenike 17 - Scorpions Lie In Wait​

Ferenike kneeled at the peak of a two hundred meter tall dune in a circle of fulgurites, where lightning had struck and liquified the sand into little knee high protrusions. It still smelled faintly of ozone and it was faintly warm to her touch, probably a day since the Hunter's arrival, maybe two if they were so faded even to her enhanced senses. The actinic Qi which wafted from this place on the howling winds was how she had found it in the first place, though it was fading quickly.

To complicate matters the sand was blowing fiercely in a sandstorm, not one of her own making, that spread for nearly a thousand li and rose more than three hundred li straight up. It had kicked up all at once a few hours ago, just before she had set out from her base camp, and she'd followed the scent it carried since.

No trace of footsteps or other tracks remained in the fiercely blowing sand, they'd have been wiped away in minutes even if there wasn't a sandstorm blowing this hard.

The one advantage this brought was that no one below the fourth Heavenstage would be out and about during this without some kind of covering or protection. They'd have the flesh scoured from their bones in half an hour otherwise from this monster. Her robe flapped around her and she adjusted the straps for her hat and the cloth covering her mouth. The red light of her pupils shone in the lenses of her goggles. She'd be fine out here. Her quarry would probably be at a disadvantage in terms of experience at navigating something like this.

They were smart enough to come prepared to hide their presence upon arrival, as their body wasn't staked out for the storm anywhere nearby by a giant glass spear from the great Array. And they weren't lying dead on the dunes, bleeding from flensed skin and flesh, so they were strong enough and prepared to survive. Depending on how confident they were feeling they either hunkered down or kept moving.

If she was a person smart enough to do research on what would be on the other side and to prepare for the defenses of the Clan, coupled to the assumption of being strong enough to survive this storm if caught by surprise and the greater strength held by the Fifth Sea's cultivators, she'd probably keep moving. Trying to find the nearest edge of the sandstorm, or a town.

As it happened the nearest edge wouldn't be too far, if Ferenike's read on the prevailing winds and their speed wasn't wrong. Things tended to slow down near the edge of a sandstorm in the Organ Meat Desert as the Qi vortices driving them diffused away from the eye.

She set off in towards where she thought the edge would be, her path cutting through the winds like a knife as she moved at an easy pace she could keep up for days, head down against the wind. It didn't take that long, only two or three hours for the winds and flying sand to slow and fade to the point she could see the horizon through a thin haze of disturbed sand, instead of an endless roiling field of brown.

The dunes were slowly sloping downwards, becoming smooth and flattening out as they approached one of the many badlands in the Desert. Good. She might be able to track them in terrain like that. Keeping a tight reign on her Qi, suppressing it to as close to first Heavenstage level as she could she followed the slope further and further down as the horizon opened up on an expansive salt flat. The wind howled high above her in distant fluting tones.

She started searching, cross hatched, seeking any hints of the actinic Qi released by the teleportation. None appeared but eventually she found tracks. Human ones, in thick soled boots, lightly disturbing the salt. She followed the path as the sun tracked across the sky, leaving only a tiny disturbance herself behind. Another element intruded as animal tracks approached and then turned to follow the Fifth Sea cultivator. Spirit Jackals. The beasts had come out of the flats and began to follow the cultivator's foot steps, so they probably weren't bound companions.

That idea was confirmed about an hour later when she found the rotting carcasses of six Wind Jackals, their pale coats splashed with their blood and their ribcages cracked open for their Beast Cores. Killed and used for supplies, the wounds looked like the long rending blows of a knife or small blade.

She continued onward, a gold and white blur and a tiny sliver of Qi. The sun set and the moon rose and she kept going. She needed to catch up. There was a town about a hundred li away, Winding Pillar City, if she remembered correctly. She took her pace patiently, conserving Qi. The Hunter would head for the town and start hunting there, and prepare to meet up with other Hunters.

The horizon shifted as Ferenike approached the town, pillars and tall walls rising out of the shadows of the flats. Their white rooves and silver walls glinted in the starlight and the lights from thousands of lamps hanging in their windows. Even at night they'd be able to see her coming. She'd have to announce her presence to anyone watching the gate. Nothing for it, she'd have to make use of it. As she sprinted towards the gate, a hand dug under her travel robes and armor to retrieve her emergency pass.

"Halt! Identify yourself!" A voice boomed from the gate house above the gate, silhouettes backlit by a light within. She aimed her pass and then flung it with two fingers into the hands of one of the two silhouettes she could see, still sprinting for the gate. There was a flash of light as her pass transmitted her credentials.

"Open the gate!" The voice shouted and the gate cracked open, the two doors sliding apart enough for her to dash through. There she skidded to a stop and saluted before one of the half dozen gate guards, hovering in the fourth level of Qi Condensation. "Legionnaire, I am Second Tessarian Ferenike. Ninth Century, Fifth Cohort of the Ninth Legion. Pursuing Hunters."

"Acknowledged." The man said as he held out a palm sized tile, hurrying her along as best as he could. "Please place your hand on this tile to verify your identity."

She laid her hand on it as the gate was pushed closed behind her. It flashed once briefly, red, then white. "You're clear. How can we help you?" The man asked, shoulders tense as an iron bar as he looked around. She had been looking around as well and the guards were all keeping an eye on the tunnel leading away from the gate into the city. They had a look about them like hunted animals staring out from their dens.

"Alright. Lead me to your headquarters and find someone to fill me in Legionnaire when we get there." She said, making a decision. She'd stick with them to help protect them for now, but once she learned what she needed to she'd be going out there as bait.

"Right this way ma'am." He said gruffly and lead her down the short tunnel and out onto the main street.

The main thoroughfare of Winding Pillar City opened up before her, a sinuous street that wound around the seventy two pillars the city got its name for. All along it there were a variety of buildings and small monuments, many of them smaller replications of the pillars turned into shrines for various deities. Close to the gate like she was there were tea houses and inns and several larger buildings that were probably warehouses of some kind or another. She was lead right, down an alley, and into the city's maze of side streets. The mortals they passed in silence looked fearful and weary, tired. Reviving old memories of the siege in the Golden Bee War. She spent the journey thinking and assessing.

If the Hunter had managed to avoid the Shattering Glass Spear Array and the gate guards and their arrays, they were likely using some technique or array of their own that concealed them from sight and qi sense. Those would be the easiest senses to hide from for the most efficient cost and greatest effect. The mosaic model of her enemy shifted, incorporating this new conclusion. Powerful, uses blades, probably uses them from stealth, possibly an ambusher.

She assessed her stock of treasures. Her Amulet and Eight Silver Wind Binding were worn close, as they had been since she gained them, and flowing through her veins were sixty four invested shards. Each a little star in her blood. Her armor and her spear and shield, nothing that exceptional. She would simply have to do her best.

She was guided to a building at the base of one of the eastern pillars. It was a stout building of three levels, progressively smaller cubes stacked up on top of each other. Her guide exchanged a brief word with the two weary guards on station outside the door and then lead her inside. However to her surprise, instead of handing her off to someone else, he gestured for her to follow and lead her up a flight of stairs to the second level and an office which was marked with the name 'Pentekontarches Antilles'.

They entered and she watched the man walk uncomfortably through the office before falling into the chair behind the desk with a tired sigh. He gestured at the seat on the other side of the desk. "Please sit Tessarian Ferenike. You wanted to talk to someone in charge, and I'm it. My name is Legionnaire Crispinus Cincinnatus of the Fourth Cohort of the Twelfth Legion, and everyone in this city who holds the Clan's blood and is above the fourth stage of Essence Gathering is dead."

Ferenike's thoughts shifted, the mosaic running together as the full impact hit her. "What else can you tell me Legionnaire?" She asked, concern tinging her voice as her brows furrowed.

Cincinnatus snorted. "The bastard seems to be waiting for something, probably more Hunters. There were only thirty of us for this city of ten thousand. Now there's twenty five. Myself and three others are the only ones at the fourth step. Our command structure and strongest cultivators have been decapitated."

He sighed again, a big gust of air as his bloodshot eyes under brown hair widened and he ran a hand over his face. "We're pretty well fucked at this point. None of us can find the Hunter and they took out the Pentekontarches last night along with four others in one fell swoop as they were patrolling the city."

"Any indications of how the Hunter killed them." She asked the exhausted man.

He blinked, processing and then nodding, his will starting to flag now. "Blades. Several of my mates were chopped up like they'd been attacked by beasts or large and serrated swords. The commander had his guts torn open by some kind of strange spiked weapon, I think. Our medic isn't entirely sure but I have the report on his injuries here... somewhere." He said, as he started pulling out drawers and looking for the report in question.

Ferenike gave him the time to find it before passing it on to her, a slim scroll that she unfurled and began to read. Details were sparse within but the patrol unit had been doing a routine check of the city under Trial protocols and post-battle examination of the site seemed to indicate they had been ambushed in a quieter cul de sac of the city not far from here. Mortal witnesses described a sudden deafening shout in a strange language and a silver blur diving in amongst the five cultivators that ripped them limb from limb as their Hoplite struggled to form and was then torn apart. The report went into some depth detailing their wounds, one of the pages providing a sketch, some of which matched those on the Jackals she had encountered. New however was a large circular rent with ragged edges, some what like a borehole or a wound from a rhino's horn.

A sixth Heavenstage and four supporting fifth stages killed like so many children. Concern settled like a stone in her throat.

She set down the report. "How ready are your forces for deployment Legionnaire?" She asked gently.

He hesitated, taking a deep breath. She gave him a moment to collect himself and straighten up in his chair. "We can help you kill the bastard. If that's what you're asking?"

"It is." She said. She could banish him back if it became truly desperate, potentially, but she found it far more fitting to set a trap to catch this Hunter and make use of his treasures to benefit the Clan.

Cincinnatus smiled darkly, energy slowly reinvigorating him as they sat down with a map of the city and began to plan.



The next morning Ferenike was seated on the third floor walled balcony of a tea house on the western side of the town. It was quiet down there in the streets and the building behind her. The mortals had been quietly told via networks of their friends and family to vacate the area as best they could. All across the city the mortals were moving into the siege shelters, slowly.

Tipping her hand a little, but that was the point. She carefully stirred her tea and then set down her spoon with a clank, and then took a sip. The tea was kind of bad here. Though that might have just been the tension she felt, straining all of her senses to the utmost, feeling like every single one of her little soldiers was looking out at the world with wariness.

Brought back old memories. Hopefully Cincinnatus and his men would be in position soon, ready to launch the Kataphractoi at the enemy when they appeared as she kept them busy. They had had the mortal minister of this town make a pronouncement from the balcony of his office this morning, amplified via the use of arrays to cover the whole town, declaring that an expert had come to slay the Hunter if they were courageous enough to face her.

Her breath was steady, deep and long to fuel the furnace in her chest which shone dimly through her robes and armor. Her aura was clear, a powerful expert a step away from Foundation Building. A powerful monster and devil for them to Hunt. Waiting to strike.

sssh.

She was moving before her mind processed the noise as grit shifting under a metal boot, diving away from her table and kicking it behind her as her spear and shield manifested.

BOOM!

"HO THERE RAKSHA! YOU FACE THE SILVER TIGER BAHUBALI RANDHAWA!" An absurdly fast silver blur exploded through the wall, her table and the cloud of splinters and dust. She wasn't done turning! Ripping pain tore across the middle of her back as something sliced through her armor and robes and metallic skin, and then her shield smashed into the blur and deflected it on instinct. Blood splashed against the wall of the balcony in a light spatter.

She leapt backwards, barely dodging the slash he sent next, tucked behind her shield as the wind pressure of his blow accelerated her lightened body. She flew down like an arrow to land in the street, skidding across the cobble, and looked up at the silver armored figure above her.

He leapt down, shouting in his tongue all the while. "With my last breath I will send you to Naraka!"

He landed with a weighty thud and a puff of dust.

Her soldiers aimed, fired, a lance of red and gunmetal glass racing off of her spear to smash into her opponent's breastplate armored chest. There was a sound like a windchime as the spear struck and shattered uselessly, a ring of silver light emanating from the impact point.

He laughed and entered a wide and aggressive stance.

In the brief moment she had Ferenike looked at him. His head was covered by a silver helm forged in the shape of a tiger's head, the lower half of his face and his grinning teeth visible in its roaring mouth. The rest of it was a silvery breastplate, pauldrons and arm guards which were all sculpted to resemble a heavily muscled man. On his right arm was a large gauntlet assembly with five forearm length and subtly curved spikes. They had her blood on them. And as he stepped forward two serrated and curving blades as long as swords extended from a bracer on his left arm. He was in the tenth stage, and that brief blow and sheer speed convinced her he was fighting with at least the strength of the twelfth. Fuck.

He snorted. "My Tiger's Mirror Armor won't be pierced by such weak blows."

She settled into a comfortable stance, feeling the bleeding from the rent on her back slow, and then stop as her veins and body reacted to her will. "I am the Golden Scorpion, Ferenike of the Ninth Legion."

He nodded. And then he struck, dashing across the street in the space between heartbeats to lash out with the twin blades. She parried, barely, with her spear and brought her shield up to block his blow with the claw like assembly. Screeches of metal and sparks filled her senses as she lashed out and kicked. Her glass reinforced leg, her hyper-awareness and bodily control radically enhancing her strength, bounced off with a clang and another flashing ring of light. The force launched them both back, flying away into two different fruit stalls across the street from each other.

She had papaya gunk in her face. "Ugh." She levered herself upright and found her enemy doing the same, wiping himself off as he rolled his neck. That armor really had to go.

She leapt forward, her own glassy armor growing around her and released a furious fusillade of blows, each one supplemented by blows from her soldiers. Dozens of spear blows rained down on the man as she attacked, fire building in her chest, her eyes pits of red flame. He hunkered down, parrying her blows equally as furiously, stepping back under the pressure as the clangor of their battle filled the streets.

Her stars gathered in her lungs and then she roared. Red flames shrieked from the hellish pit of her mouth and lashed out in a cone of destruction that tore the cobbles from the street, shattered windows and vaporized stone. The building behind him evaporated under the impact of her fury.

The man himself however, emerged from the flames, a shimmering silver aura surrounding him. He was not unharmed however, beating off flames on his neck and upper arms where his armor was beginning to warp and she could see faint blisters on his cheeks and the gaps of exposed skin between his pauldrons and forearm guards.

There were no more words after that, a terrifying exchange of attacks and parries and counters which lasts for at least a minute, many blows skittering and scraping off of their respective armor, before with a sudden burst of speed as great as his opening movements Ferenike was struck with a titanic hammerblow of a palm strike.

"Tiger Mountain Palm!" The Hunter shouted as she reeled, guard thrown open after a vicious exchange, and it crashed into her sternum. Her ribs cracked, shattering like her glass breast plate did and one of her lungs ruptured as she was lifted off her feet and propelled into a building like an arrow shot. She impacted and went through its wall with a crash of shattering stone and glass.

Her scream of agony choked in her throat as she landed, collapsing beams falling onto her, weakly deflected by her shield and spear.

She groaned, dazed as the cracked ceiling spun. Her breath was frozen, choking on coppery blood, the entire right side of her torso collapsed as her veins and muscles frantically tried to pull her bones back into shape.

"Ghhuk..." She coughed, reddish mist fountaining up as she pushed the fallen beams on top of her aside and wobbled to her feet. She spat, blood staining the floor in front of her and leaned on her spear. Then with a lurch and another splatter, her ribs temporarily realigned. "Ughhh!" Mother fucker.

She tightened her grip on her shield and stomped forward, her armor re-forging itself in the heat that surrounded her and providing support to her broken ribs and sternum. Fatigue weighed down her limbs, and her supernatural body control was the only reason her spear wasn't falling out of her hands.

BANG!

She felt her left arm shatter behind her shield as his foot slammed into her, a shockwave of wind blowing her back, out through the wall of the building. The sound of his laugh filled her ears as she soared through the air. She tumbled, spinning once before righting herself and skidding across the street to come to a stop with her back to one of the buildings across the way.

Out of the dust he emerged, the building beginning to lean precariously, shining bright and silver. She could feel her Qi beginning to dip. She was having difficulty gaining enough of an advantage to use her techniques. In a split second he was moving again and her shield was out of place.

She breathed. Blood became red sparks between her clenched teeth. And then she ignited.

With a horrific shriek of red flame and molten glass, all sound was drowned out and the light of day was overwhelmed by a hellish red pillar of flame. The Silver Tiger leaped away from the wave of pyroclastic doom, flipping backwards across the street away from her. His arm flew up to shield his eyes from her radiance.

She advanced, a trail of terrible destruction following her as stone melted in her presence, shield forgone for her spear of glass and bronze whose blade glimmered with shining white stars.

Out of that flame stepped a devilish knight, glass body festooned with thorns and sharply plated joints, its fanged mouth and flaming eyes lit with infernal light under the wide brim of a circular hat of glass. It shined with a red flame, dancing right beneath it's skin.

Ferenike's dantian was a screaming hell-scape of energy as her glass roiled and churned. In an eyeblink she was in the air over Bahubali Randhawa and her spear stabbed down, one blade becoming ten as glass arms and glass spears sprouted from her shoulders. She struck with the hammer blow of a legion.

The Silver Tiger screamed in effort as he struck with his blades, parrying her rain of blows desperately. She smiled wider and wider as explosions consumed the street in a river of fire as she pushed him back. What a relentless enemy they both made a part of her mused. She wanted so desperately to live, her mind consumed with it and now all that was in his head was the same.

No thought, no mind, she was bent only to the ideal of killing him. Further and further back he was pushed, his armor flaring with silver rings of light under her blows, causing the air to ripple with an unbroken silvery sheen around him. Buildings collapsed in their wake as fires started and the road melted into a river of molten glass behind Ferenike. Wholly focused on their fight the two experts did not comprehend the pack of Legionnaires upon the roof of a building overlooking the square plaza they had ended up in nor the mass of bronze Qi building up into a massive horse and rider.

Lack of comprehension of what he sensed did not prevent Randhawa from attempting to dodge on instinct, leaping away as a silver blur limned in silver fire. But Ferenike reacted faster and her empty hand caught his arm and flung him towards her Legionnaires for a crucial moment. The Kataphractoi leaped across the air as the Legionnaires descended and struck. Its lance was as large as a tower and the titantic weapon found its mark upon his chest and with a deafening bang stabbed him into the ground. There was a blinding flash of light and a roar of energy that shook her bones like mad as a plume of dust and debris was thrown twenty li into the sky. She blinked her eyes clear, spear held tightly.

The Kataphractoi beside her stood tall, its lance and great blow expended while the Legionnaires looked on warily at the massive pit dug into the plaza. Qi flickered inside of it, and a faint silver light.

No. Thought returned as Ferenike willfully threw herself in front of the blow that emerged from that pit. Her spear broke, her armor cracked and then shattered, and agony ripped through her body as foreign Qi and spirit silver ripped into her flesh. A roar of effort from the man preceded an explosive flex of muscle which flung her off of his claws to bounce across the plaza stones in a spray of blood.

Ranghawa was no longer clad in silver armor, it now having turned a dull and cracked black-grey as a gaping wound was carved into it and the flesh of his chest beneath it. Silver fire in the shape of a tiger skin cloak hung from his shoulders, his helmet having evaporated, revealing a handsome and exhausted face surrounded by thick black hair. His brown eyes were locked on Ferenike as she slammed an arm into the ground to prop herself up as the other tried to stem the gush of blood from her gut. His breathing was labored and he seemed unsteady on his feet. But even so he was standing after a blow that would have slain a Foundation Building expert outright, and his fancy armor had paid the price for it.

Ferenike looked at him but her thoughts were on the Legionnaires before her as she levered herself up on arms and knees, blood loss slowing as her veins sealed themselves under her mental touch. "Retreat Legionnaires." She rasped. What was coming would slay most of them, and no one else but this Tiger was dying today.

She heard Cincinnatus take a breath, hesitating for a moment, then quietly he responded. "Aye ma'am. Go! Retreat!" He shouted and she heard the clanging of quickly retreating Legionnaires behind her.

This wasn't as bad as the Bees. Worse than Zu Jing though. She hadn't been pushed this far in years. Bahubali Randhawa tensed and her patience became action.

She breathed in a great torrent of air, ripping sand and flame free in a cacophonous howl, forming a cyclone of sand and molten glass and flames which extended more than two li into the air and swallowed the plaza entirely. She was reaching out with all her might for the Qi of the Sun and the Desert, the two massive diffuse coils, as she had decades ago. Now though, that well of energy pulled in by her great breath was supported by sixty four Qi invested shards which flowed into her right hand. She stood on shaking legs, left arm hanging limp. Her opponent was already a blur moving towards her.

She flew across the plaza to meet the roaring, fiery form of the Silver Tiger, static lighting lashing out from the molten trail she left. Her hand seemed to hold a red sun beneath its flesh, washing out all detail with its radiance and leaving her as a shadow carrying its light.

Opposing her was a silver light, cutting through her radiance like a knife, whiting out everything in front of her. The Silver Tiger lashed out with claws as large as a tower and she rose to meet it, aiming for the shadow on his chest. All sound was gone in the roar of their power.

Invasion of Heaven!

She slipped between his claws, and her glowing hand of glass and gunmetal pierced his flesh like water. Her legions marched, each one led by one of her sixty four shards and they lit his meridians and chakras aflame. His aura guttered out, his cultivation base shattering under the tramping footsteps of her soldiers and their mighty centuria.

Her red light filled the plaza and illuminated the sandstorm from within in terrifying hues. As her vision cleared she saw him holding her arm, buried up to the wrist in his chest. He was smiling. He choked out a laugh, as blood poured from the hole in his chest.

"...most honorable demon I've ever met..." He murmured, his breath slowing as his voice faded. "...fight well."

And then he died, slumping on her arm as his hands fell into her lap.

She sighed, collapsing to her knees and struggling to breathe as he slipped off her arm to fall upon his side. She cradled her shattered arm and hunched her shoulders under the twin pains of her half collapsed chest and torn open abdomen. Fatigue grasped her and she drifted into sleep.

Her dreams were hopeful.

@occipitallobe and another for your mighty throne. Another Fate Bonus please.

I guess if my thesis of the previous omake was "Xianxia settings fucking suck to live in" then this is a very different and more hopeful statement.

Had a thought for a second that Bahubali (who is a reference to three different characters and kudos to who can get all three), would offer to return to the Fifth Sea if she let him go having proven her honor and then having her refuse but I realized it wasn't that in character or suitable with what I wanted to do with either of them.
 
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Could you also threadmark my latest one when you're free? I'm rather proud of my first attempt at Romance/Tragedy
Honestly reading it I am too, that came out pretty well!

Drilling it in
Festus Sarantpechos


Right, now this is MY runechisel so I won't be giving it to you, I need it for my smithing, but I certainly can make one for you since you're looking to get into Array carving. As you can see the base substrate is bone, but what you probably can't tell at a glance is that the Gleamhorn Snake bone this was made from was soak in pressurized molten lead and then chipped out. That forced the lead into all the little hollow spaces inside which is why its so much heavier and sturdier than it looks.

The business end is the painstakingly sharpened spike of Nine Year Willow at the end. No that's not spirit bronze. It just looks like that because of just how heavensdamned many fucking tiny little sigils are carved there. It's a bitch to make and easily half the work of making these things goes into making the tip. The array sigils themselves are, as you'd expect, carved into the surface and then filled with corpsegoo ... I mean the molten spiritbronze we extract by burning and melting down the bodies of our venerable elders ... so yeah, fucking corpsegoo. Great stuff for spiritual smithing and holds an Array like nothing else. But more than a bit creepy and disgusting.

Anyway the Array modulates and focuses the Qi passing through the runechisel to form a point of rapidly spinning high density Qi right at the tip of the chisel. NEVER EVER TOUCH IT. It will burn through you like you aren't even there. And by the time you get strong enough not to worry about that, you'll be working with an even stronger chisel. Don't leave it running when you don't have to either because it burns through a lot of power to do that. Anyway, these sigils over here on the handle are how you specify the desired energy density, qi resonance, spin rate, and essence flavor.

You may be wondering about the line of bloodcopper you can see snaking around the handle and bottom of the chisel and then out to the tip. That's the qi-sink that acts as power storage and distribution. It passes right under your grip so that you can feel the flow of energy and cut it off immediately if need be. Speaking of power, the circular array at the very bottom of the handle is how you charge it. What you do is put spirit stones into this charging pouch over here and give it about an hour to digest, then press the circle on your runechisel to the circle on your pouch and you're good to go. The pouch will cling to the bottom of the chisel until it's out of qi and then fall off. It's set up like this so that you can have multiple charging pouches digesting in sequence and just keep regularly switching them out to keep your runechisel constantly powered.

So uhhh ... get the fuck out and let me get back to work. I'll have your chisel ready for you in a month. Oh and tell your sister I said hi and that we're on for dinner tomorrow.

@occipitallobe @Zephias
Ngl this had me cackling. I love this blacksmith.

I've only seen the movie. 🤔
Good movie too, except for a few oof things.
 
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