Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Festus Sarantpechos 3 - ETERNAL SHAME
ETERNAL SHAME
Festus Sarantpechos

"Ode To My Heart"
They say you're too ambitious
That your hungry for power
But really I'm the one who they should be suspscious
I'm a brute and you're a delicate flower

You wield a spirit flute
A fart is as close as I get to a toot.

Your songs draw people from far and near
I just hate how they leer

You want to see Lady and the Tramp
I'd rather make another fucking lamp.

We're nothing alike you and I,
But hey, tomorrow we're all probably going to die.

So there's no time to question just how we fit together
I just know it's so much better

To stare out across the oat farms
and hold you in my arms
Than wonder how you fell for my nonexistant charms.





"Ode to 'Ode To My Heart'"
Festus is not a poet.
He just wishes his friends didn't know it.
And didn't have this to show it.
He could live a hundred years and still woe it.
Because like hell are we letting him outgrow it.
@occipitallobe @Zephias
 
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Now I want to use indian movie tropes in omakes. South Indian movies are so absolutely ridiculous.
They really fucking are its nearly unreal. Fantastic Exalted inspiration, and Xianxia inspiration, because of it.

E:

[X] Hong Xuan Clan

Right there was a vote going on. Well Ferenike is from around here so I Wanna Knoooow.
 
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The main thoroughfare of Winding Pillar City opened up before her, a sinuous street that wound around the seventy two pillars the city got its name for. All along it there were a variety of buildings and small monuments, many of them smaller replications of the pillars turned into shrines for various deities. Close to the gate like she was there were tea houses and inns and several larger buildings that were probably warehouses of some kind or another. She was lead right, down an alley, and into the city's maze of side streets. The mortals they passed in silence looked fearful and weary, tired. Reviving old memories of the siege in the Golden Bee War. She spent the journey thinking and assessing.
Oh this is a interesting description of the City. Very easily conjures up a picture of a Temple City.
If the Hunter had managed to avoid the Shattering Glass Spear Array and the gate guards and their arrays, they were likely using some technique or array of their own that concealed them from sight and qi sense. Those would be the easiest senses to hide from for the most efficient cost and greatest effect. The mosaic model of her enemy shifted, incorporating this new conclusion. Powerful, uses blades, probably uses them from stealth, possibly an ambusher.

She assessed her stock of treasures. Her Amulet and Eight Silver Wind Binding were worn close, as they had been since she gained them, and flowing through her veins were sixty four invested shards. Each a little star in her blood. Her armor and her spear and shield, nothing that exceptional. She would simply have to do her best.
Hmm, the Batman vibes feels strong. More tools/treasures are needed though :V
Ferenike's thoughts shifted, the mosaic running together as the full impact hit her. "What else can you tell me Legionnaire?" She asked, concern tinging her voice as her brows furrowed.

Cincinnatus snorted. "The bastard seems to be waiting for something, probably more Hunters. There were only thirty of us for this city of ten thousand. Now there's twenty five. Myself and three others are the only ones at the fourth step. Our command structure and strongest cultivators have been decapitated."
Wow. i was not expecting a serial killer. I thought the Hunter was in reference to a smuggler or a Righetous cultivator causing trouble.
Mortal witnesses described a sudden deafening shout in a strange language and a silver blur diving in amongst the five cultivators that ripped them limb from limb as their Hoplite struggled to form and was then torn apart. The report went into some depth detailing their wounds, one of the pages providing a sketch, some of which matched those on the Jackals she had encountered. New however was a large circular rent with ragged edges, some what like a borehole or a wound from a rhino's horn.
Whelp, now it feels like the Clan is on the Opposide of a Assassin from AC. The sliver blur and wiping out of squad before leaving reminds me of doing the same when the first one came out.
"HO THERE RAKSHA! YOU FACE THE SILVER TIGER BAHUBALI RANDHAWA!" An absurdly fast silver blur exploded through the wall, her table and the cloud of splinters and dust. She wasn't done turning! Ripping pain tore across the middle of her back as something sliced through her armor and robes and metallic skin, and then her shield smashed into the blur and deflected it on instinct. Blood splashed against the wall of the balcony in a light spatter.

She leapt backwards, barely dodging the slash he sent next, tucked behind her shield as the wind pressure of his blow accelerated her lightened body. She flew down like an arrow to land in the street, skidding across the cobble, and looked up at the silver armored figure above her.

He leapt down, shouting in his tongue all the while. "With my last breath I will send you to Naraka!"
Poof goes that theory. He's chattier then i expected. I thought he would stick to the silent and deadly shitick, but now i see that he's just so good that he can gloat and still leave no trace.
In the brief moment she had Ferenike looked at him. His head was covered by a silver helm forged in the shape of a tiger's head, the lower half of his face and his grinning teeth visible in its roaring mouth. The rest of it was a silvery breastplate, pauldrons and arm guards which were all sculpted to resemble a heavily muscled man. On his right arm was a large gauntlet assembly with five forearm length and subtly curved spikes. They had her blood on them. And as he stepped forward two serrated and curving blades as long as swords extended from a bracer on his left arm. He was in the tenth stage, and that brief blow and sheer speed convinced her he was fighting with at least the strength of the twelfth. Fuck.

He snorted. "My Tiger's Mirror Armor won't be pierced by such weak blows."
The description + the tiger motiff really brings this to mind



So you know, that's my mental image now :D
She leapt forward, her own glassy armor growing around her and released a furious fusillade of blows, each one supplemented by blows from her soldiers. Dozens of spear blows rained down on the man as she attacked, fire building in her chest, her eyes pits of red flame. He hunkered down, parrying her blows equally as furiously, stepping back under the pressure as the clangor of their battle filled the streets.

Her stars gathered in her lungs and then she roared. Red flames shrieked from the hellish pit of her mouth and lashed out in a cone of destruction that tore the cobbles from the street, shattered windows and vaporized stone. The building behind him evaporated under the impact of her fury.

The man himself however, emerged from the flames, a shimmering silver aura surrounding him. He was not unharmed however, beating off flames on his neck and upper arms where his armor was beginning to warp and she could see faint blisters on his cheeks and the gaps of exposed skin between his pauldrons and forearm guards.

There were no more words after that, a terrifying exchange of attacks and parries and counters which lasts for at least a minute, many blows skittering and scraping off of their respective armor, before with a sudden burst of speed as great as his opening movements Ferenike was struck with a titanic hammerblow of a palm strike.

"Tiger Mountain Palm!" The Hunter shouted as she reeled, guard thrown open after a vicious exchange, and it crashed into her sternum. Her ribs cracked, shattering like her glass breast plate did and one of her lungs ruptured as she was lifted off her feet and propelled into a building like an arrow shot. She impacted and went through its wall with a crash of shattering stone and glass.
Ah yes! I always look forward to the inhuman portions of the Ferenike Fights! Makes me feel like i'm reading about a Kaiju battle or a Monster from MH wrecking the scrubs.
She breathed. Blood became red sparks between her clenched teeth. And then she ignited.

With a horrific shriek of red flame and molten glass, all sound was drowned out and the light of day was overwhelmed by a hellish red pillar of flame. The Silver Tiger leaped away from the wave of pyroclastic doom, flipping backwards across the street away from her. His arm flew up to shield his eyes from her radiance.
Go, Ferenike! Use Blastburn!

I guess, he has no weakness to Fire Nature moves.
Out of that flame stepped a devilish knight, glass body festooned with thorns and sharply plated joints, its fanged mouth and flaming eyes lit with infernal light under the wide brim of a circular hat of glass. It shined with a red flame, dancing right beneath it's skin.

Ferenike's dantian was a screaming hell-scape of energy as her glass roiled and churned. In an eyeblink she was in the air over Bahubali Randhawa and her spear stabbed down, one blade becoming ten as glass arms and glass spears sprouted from her shoulders. She struck with the hammer blow of a legion.

The Silver Tiger screamed in effort as he struck with his blades, parrying her rain of blows desperately. She smiled wider and wider as explosions consumed the street in a river of fire as she pushed him back. What a relentless enemy they both made a part of her mused. She wanted so desperately to live, her mind consumed with it and now all that was in his head was the same.
I really like how the Hat is so important to her that even in a fight, she make sure she does it in style. The sudden Push of Pike was cool as well! Especially considering he's a CQC expert since spears outrange arms.
Lack of comprehension of what he sensed did not prevent Randhawa from attempting to dodge on instinct, leaping away as a silver blur limned in silver fire. But Ferenike reacted faster and her empty hand caught his arm and flung him towards her Legionnaires for a crucial moment. The Kataphractoi leaped across the air as the Legionnaires descended and struck. Its lance was as large as a tower and the titantic weapon found its mark upon his chest and with a deafening bang stabbed him into the ground. There was a blinding flash of light and a roar of energy that shook her bones like mad as a plume of dust and debris was thrown twenty li into the sky. She blinked her eyes clear, spear held tightly.

The Kataphractoi beside her stood tall, its lance and great blow expended while the Legionnaires looked on warily at the massive pit dug into the plaza. Qi flickered inside of it, and a faint silver light.
Ah nice to read about the Kataphractoi from the ground level. Must be a pretty inspiring for the mortals
She breathed in a great torrent of air, ripping sand and flame free in a cacophonous howl, forming a cyclone of sand and molten glass and flames which extended more than two li into the air and swallowed the plaza entirely. She was reaching out with all her might for the Qi of the Sun and the Desert, the two massive diffuse coils, as she had decades ago. Now though, that well of energy pulled in by her great breath was supported by sixty four Qi invested shards which flowed into her right hand. She stood on shaking legs, left arm hanging limp. Her opponent was already a blur moving towards her.

She flew the plaza to meet the roaring, fiery form of the Silver Tiger, static lighting lashing out from the molten trail she left. Her hand seemed to hold a red sun beneath its flesh, washing out all detail with its radiance and leaving her as a shadow carrying its light.

Opposing her was a silver light, cutting through her radiance like a knife, whiting out everything in front of her. The Silver Tiger lashed out with claws as large as a tower and she rose to meet it, aiming for the shadow on his chest. All sound was gone in the roar of their power.
Now it's a full fledged Kaiju Fight! My mental picture now is of Tiger dude being like Aang, forming a transparent construct around him.
nvasion of Heaven!

She slipped between his claws, and her glowing hand of glass and gunmetal pierced his flesh like water. Her legions marched, each one led by one of her sixty four shards and they lit his meridians and chakras aflame. His aura guttered out, his cultivation base shattering under the tramping footsteps of her soldiers and their mighty centuria.

Her red light filled the plaza and illuminated the sandstorm from within in terrifying hues. As her vision cleared she saw him holding her arm, buried up to the wrist in his chest. He was smiling. He choked out a laugh, as blood poured from the hole in his chest.

"...most honorable demon I've ever met..." He murmured, his breath slowing as his voice faded. "...fight well."

And then he died, slumping on her arm as his hands fell into her lap.

She sighed, collapsing to her knees and struggling to breathe as he slipped off her arm to fall upon his side. She cradled her shattered arm and hunched her shoulders under the twin pains of her half collapsed chest and torn open abdomen. Fatigue grasped her and she drifted into sleep.

Her dreams were hopeful.
Well, nice to see that he's honorable at the end. Can really tell he isn't one of those who treat it solely has harvesting a crop. Instead, he came seeking a challenge that Ferenike met and crushed.

The Glass Soldiers Came, They Saw and They Conquered!

It would be cool if her cultivation gets a slight boost from doing this, to fit the idea of soldiers conquering and looting the enemy's base

Honestly reading it I am too, that came out pretty well!
I'm really grateful to hear that! Glad to hear that i did that snip justice and managed to not dilute the emotions that it brought up!
 
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Oh this is a interesting description of the City. Very easily conjures up a picture of a Temple City.
Yep that was intended! (funny how I keep making her visit temple cities)

It's also a reference to the Journey to the West and the Seventy Two Transformations of Sun Wukong and the Daoist thought that gods and saints and sages are masters of metamorphosis, ever changing and thus living forever, as well as an oblique reference to the Lesser Key of Solomon.

Thinking about it I'm actually considering having Ferenike get a powerful Scroll of Transformations so that she can follow in Monkey's footsteps.

Hmm, the Batman vibes feels strong. More tools/treasures are needed though :V
Wow. i was not expecting a serial killer. I thought the Hunter was in reference to a smuggler or a Righetous cultivator causing trouble.
Whelp, now it feels like the Clan is on the Opposide of a Assassin from AC. The sliver blur and wiping out of squad before leaving reminds me of doing the same when the first one came out.
Less serial killer and more Trial Hunter coming in to wreck our shit and deciding to pounce like the Tiger he is. And yeah I had the idea that, based off your Predator comment, he actually had a cloaking array which he used to sneak up on Ferenike and then attempted to attack her. She just heard his footstep as he set up the strike.

So you know, that's my mental image now :D
Lol, not far off! Can't see his face since the tiger helm is shaped like a tiger's head, but not far off!

Ah yes! I always look forward to the inhuman portions of the Ferenike Fights! Makes me feel like i'm reading about a Kaiju battle or a Monster from MH wrecking the scrubs.
Go, Ferenike! Use Blastburn!

I guess, he has no weakness to Fire Nature moves.
I'm writing a Cultivator, I sure as heck am going to have a ton of fun writing magic and EXPLOSIONS :D! Plus Shin Godzilla is a massive influence on my writing ever since I saw it. Fantastic visual inspiration in that movie, and in fact Ferenike's glows look like the red glow of the fourth form of Godzilla in that movie.

Seriously everyone should watch it, it's fantastic.

I really like how the Hat is so important to her that even in a fight, she make sure she does it in style. The sudden Push of Pike was cool as well! Especially considering he's a CQC expert since spears outrange arms.
This was the point in the omake where I went "Fuck it, we full Exalted now. BEHOLD MY SUPER SAIYAN MODE/TOTEMIC ANIMA BITCH LETS GO!"

The Hat is an incredibly important character Aesthetic, and I think the only time I've damaged the Hat is when she fought and nearly died against the Devil Bees. Didn't even remember Push of Pike as a thing, but yep I guess I did do it lol.

I was also drawing on the appearance of the Balrog of Moria stepping out of the flame for this.

Ah nice to read about the Kataphractoi from the ground level. Must be a pretty inspiring for the mortals
I haven't had a chance to really show case many of the other Formations in this story so I was like "No, I need a big hit and I have the perfect candidate!" Thus a Kataphractoi spanking.

Well, nice to see that he's honorable at the end. Can really tell he isn't one of those who treat it solely has harvesting a crop. Instead, he came seeking a challenge that Ferenike met and crushed.
The biggest thing here is that she crushed it while supported by The Noted Clan Representatives, because as Occipitallobe has noted the big deal with Ferenike's story is that she is a Clan cultivator. Trying to remove one from the other doesn't work on a thematic level, not after she's adopted their norms and manners so heavily.

Gonna make it fun when she gets to Foundation Building eventually and I send her out to poke around in the lands of the Verdant South. I have fun thoughts with her interacting with some folks down there.

Right. Wasn't able to finish up another actual omake, so I did this instead.

The Orb of Shesha (And associated snake spirit).



The reason the scales don't cover the full snake is because the Ninth Prince is in Qi Gathering and the spirit hasn't materialized yet.

Ooooooo. Doubly interested to see how it looks in Foundation Building.
 
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Plus Shin Godzilla is a massive influence on my writing ever since I saw it. Fantastic visual inspiration in that movie, and in fact Ferenike's glows look like the red glow of the fourth form of Godzilla in that movie.

Seriously everyone should watch it, it's fantastic.
Truly?

What streaming service should I get for it? My finances took a bit of a hit, but I should have my home entertainment setup completed before the end of the month.
 
Truly?

What streaming service should I get for it? My finances took a bit of a hit, but I should have my home entertainment setup completed before the end of the month.
*rubs chin* Hmm, can't remember what I used to watch it the first time. Whatever it was it was english subbed. You might be able to find it on Netflix (Might need a VPN) but you can snag an HD version off Amazon Video for like five bucks and some change (E: It's on sale right now).
 
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Yep that was intended! (funny how I keep making her visit temple cities)

It's also a reference to the Journey to the West and the Seventy Two Transformations of Sun Wukong and the Daoist thought that gods and saints and sages are masters of metamorphosis, ever changing and thus living forever, as well as an oblique reference to the Lesser Key of Solomon.

Thinking about it I'm actually considering having Ferenike get a powerful Scroll of Transformations so that she can follow in Monkey's footsteps.
Ah! Personally my favorite skill of his is the one where he transforms his hair into clones. I won't mind using a Cool Thing Bonus to grant that skill to Xiao Yi although i'm not sure what mechanical benefit it will bring. Literally, is a Cool Thing lol.
And yeah I had the idea that, based off your Predator comment, he actually had a cloaking array which he used to sneak up on Ferenike and then attempted to attack her. She just heard his footstep as he set up the strike.
Oo! I think i gotta reread. I missed that part of her catching the sound of the footstep.

I'm writing a Cultivator, I sure as heck am going to have a ton of fun writing magic and EXPLOSIONS :D! Plus Shin Godzilla is a massive influence on my writing ever since I saw it. Fantastic visual inspiration in that movie, and in fact Ferenike's glows look like the red glow of the fourth form of Godzilla in that movie.
Well, i say job will done since all her Omakes have that Kaiju feel. I'm just waiting for the Pacific Rim to be brought in where she facesoff against a Enemy formation.
I was also drawing on the appearance of the Balrog of Moria stepping out of the flame for this.
She needs a whip! Maybe one that allows her to inject the glass soldiers into the wounds left by each lash!
Gonna make it fun when she gets to Foundation Building eventually and I send her out to poke around in the lands of the Verdant South. I have fun thoughts with her interacting with some folks down there.
That be interesting! If i remember correctly, like Xiao Yi it's not obvious that they're of Clan blood from appearances so being more Clan then the actual bloodline would be a good way to show the pride in the clan.

For Xiao Yi, i probably make the reasoning a bit darker in the sense that the Clan is really all he got left.
 
Ah! Personally my favorite skill of his is the one where he transforms his hair into clones. I won't mind using a Cool Thing Bonus to grant that skill to Xiao Yi although i'm not sure what mechanical benefit it will bring. Literally, is a Cool Thing lol.
That's actually part of his 72 transformations IIRC. Thematically at least it touches on the same notes, and yeah its awesome.

Well, i say job will done since all her Omakes have that Kaiju feel. I'm just waiting for the Pacific Rim to be brought in where she facesoff against a Enemy formation.
Ooooo I now have ideaaaas. Heeeheheeh.

That be interesting! If i remember correctly, like Xiao Yi it's not obvious that they're of Clan blood from appearances so being more Clan then the actual bloodline would be a good way to show the pride in the clan.

For Xiao Yi, i probably make the reasoning a bit darker in the sense that the Clan is really all he got left.
Actually this is part of why I want to go there, because she has a strong Clan appearance, just a variation there of. Her skin is metallic and gunmetal/brassy which can look like bronze, her hair is bright yellow like them and she has the sort of facial structures common to the clan and a lot of the nomads kicking around in the clan lands like Grandfather Laosha's grandkids.

I have ideas for her going around in there and being recognized and the trouble that might cause, and also the not so much trouble as it kind of depends how she goes about it. Among other things I am having funny thoughts of her taking an apprentice on from the Verdant South while she's down there.
 
@occipitallobe a brief musing i had that i want to check with you.

With the latest Omake i managed to write thanks to @FixerUpper, i feel like it would be thematic for Xiao Yi to be more reckless and deathseeking after the loss of his love. Can i ask if the following is possible?

I want to send him to go to the Yuan Secret Realm even if he doesn't have a LST with the understanding that he might still die since it's a secret realm. But since timeline wise that comes before the Trials, can it be done so that if he dies in the Realm, the positive Fate he accumulated in the realm is given out to some of the other Good Seeds?

His death itself can be a result of wounds sustained during the Trial. Not to say i'm writing him off! I just feel that to fully embrace the RP aspect of the quest, he should be more reckless after such a loss

TLDR: Death in Trials covered by LST, Death in Yuan realm treated as Death from wounds sustained in Trials. I understand if it can't be done since i'm basically asking for a Fate Roll for the Ji + Trial and then more rolls for the SR. But thought i would just check with you first
 
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Fierce Fang 6 - Dragon Remnant Golden River
Fierce Fang
Dragon Remnant Golden River​

There is precious little that can be done as a freaky fishman in the middle of a desert Fierce Fang angrily thought. Not for the first time he cursed finding the Flying Fish Movement Art where as at first he naively thought himself blessed. For while he didn't really care for the continued fish theme the heavens seemed to be aiming him towards he believed the art was exactly what he needed for him to happily focus on cultivation. For the ancient technique of blocking what hits you can, dodging those you can't block and running away from those you can't block or dodge is a famous method of survival for a reason.

But for some heaven damned reason he couldn't integrate it maybe it didn't play well with his Deep Sea Starfish Body since starfish aren't known for flying or some other arcane explanation Fang didn't know. He didn't let an initial failure deter him though, even if in hindsight he should have, so Fang used his fortunate encounter from the Sand Whirlpool Tower, the Technique-to-Flesh-Fusing Pill, to make sure his second attempt succeeded. Instead he somehow failed even harder with the pill making that failure crippling by transforming his flesh to 'better' suit the art.

The pill made Fang's face more like a fish's in such a horrifying manner. His lips were now forever agape being mutely open like a dumb fish and he had weird yellow whiskers coming out of his cheeks. His hair was mostly replaced by a yellow fin cresting about on the top of his skull and his head was covered in red scales. As for the rest of the body there were few changes besides a red tinge to his skin with a few random scales and webbed fingers and feet.

If that was all that happened despite the horribly look Fang would learn to deal with the cosmetic change eventually but of course when it rains it pours. Not only was Fang's combat power now weaker than someone at the 5th heavenstage and worst of all he now had gills meaning he required constant water to merely breathe much less do anything. Fierce Fang would honestly had preferred to have died and used up his Starfish Regrowth Death Denial lifesaving treasure than this crippling since another treasure capable of saving his life could eventually be found the loss in cultivation time from the crippling both directly and indirectly would be hard to make up for.

This brings Fang back to his first thought that there is not a lot a fishman that had trouble breathing in a desert which was bad since Fang needed some way of fixing his crippling transformation. This would require doing enough work for the Golden Devils to use a valuable treasure on him or hope by chance he could come across one on his own neither option was particularly safe or risk free.

This is why Fierce Fang was now heading towards the famous Dragon Remnant Golden River for it was one of the few places he could earn contribution points from fast without undue risk in his current form. The river like its name implies is said to be the remains of a dragon and is gold colored. There are multiple myths telling about how the river came to be. One claims the river is liquid remains of a dragon's golden hoard before it ascended though this has been proven false since the river is water colored gold not liquid metal. Another story says that the river itself is the body of a Golden Dragon transformed into a river at the end of its natural life as many dragon stories go in the 3rd turtle sea. The most plausible story is that the river has a drop of dragon blood that was so pure and golden that it still effects the waters to this day.

Regardless of its mysterious origin the Dragon Remnant Gold River still has quite a few confirmed facts about it over the millennium it has existed. The river definitely has some connection to dragons for it has an undeniable draconic aura that is obvious to the senses. Normally this would mean the river would be dominated by a major sect and exploited since anything related to dragons has real value but the Gold River has a few things driving down its value. First is that the draconic essence is very low and thin that at most it influences mortal and 1st stage beasts (Qi Condensation level) having no effect on more powerful creatures and people so its only worth any value to Qi Condensation level cultivators. Further discouraging clans and sects is that the river gives off an air of discomfort separate from the natural feeling of unease the draconic essence gives off. This discomfort's source is unknown but it makes people disinclined to approach the river unless literally forced to and the feeling of discomfort only increases as one's cultivation increases so much that Nascent Souls have been said to give up chasing someone if they dive into the river. Finally the river's geographic location often changes as much like a serpent the river wiggles and slithers across the land with even the river's flow changing direction and speed by the month.

All this combined with Fang's new found dependence on water made the Dragon Remnant Gold River that was currently in Gold Devil lands a perfect fit for Fierce Fang for no mere discomfort could affect him when he was this desperate. It also helped that the river's various beasts and monsters tended towards the lower end of Qi Condensation threats since for some reason any creatures of the Foundation Stage or higher often left the river instead of staying in their home.

When Fang first laid eyes on the river he was struck by how the water truly looked gold albeit a dark amber-ish kind of gold. In fact the color seemed very familiar to Fang but his mind couldn't figure out the connection for some reason but whatever the case the thought of stepping into those waters and breathing them with his newfound gills instinctively made Fang shiver. A part of Fang felt that he would rather die than get closer to that golden river but he pushed through that imaginary discomfort and dived into the waters. He was struck by how sticky and unclean it made him feel and how he had to resist the urge the vomit his entire stomach out. But despite these hurdles Fang was stuck by how easy it seemed to move through the waters despite not having any real experience swimming before or after his transformation.

That's not to say he was an instant expert he still had to spend most of a week practicing all the different strokes he had read and heard about. Through this Fang not only got comfortable moving through water enough to start his task but also felt he was figuring out the reason for his failure of learning the Flying Fish movement technique. Fundamentally the Flying Fish technique is for a human shaped cultivator to imitate the movement and qi patterns of a flying fish in order to repeat their feat of moving in the sky. This naturally has some problems due to the sheer differences between the two body types but this is something the technique book is supposed to teach on its own but Fang had a sudden thought. Maybe the author of the book made some unmentioned assumptions about what readers and learners of his or her art would know. For it is only natural that before learning to fly like a fish one should know how to swim like a man or so Fang thought it sounded like the type of philosophical bullshit phrase that while nonsense helped a cultivator have a sudden enlightenment or breakthrough.

Anyways Fang quickly started to descend towards the bottom of the golden river now that he was properly prepared to get the materials he came to get. Things like Dragon Weed Kelp and Unclean Goldfish were plentiful and easy to find even if they were only useful in some obscure Qi Condensation level pills and recipes. But that was the low level stuff that would barely pay to keep him from regressing much less afford a treasure capable of fixing him. What Fierce Fang was really after were things like Gold Crystal Pearls protected by Goldsteel Mollusks or a Sinuous Inheritor of the Drake's Gifts a legendary eel who is said to have the barest connection to true dragon ancestry. Both of these beasts are full of valuable materials while also often being weak enough for a 5th stage Qi Condensation cultivator to beat provided they can properly fight in the water environment.

Fierce Fang had just started searching in earnest for these more powerful prey after filling his packs with the weeds and bottom feeders when he suddenly had a feeling of danger. Trusting his instincts Fang immediately dodged forward feeling a rush of water propel as he narrowly avoiding a lunging attack. But Fang didn't have time to catch his breath for whatever creature that was attacking him didn't let up even after the first strike missed and kept up a constant assault so much that Fang could only retreat upstream without even getting a glimpse of his foe.

So Fang swam and swam with death constantly a hair away. He put newly gained swimming skills to their limits dodging around grasping seaweed and house sized jutting rocks while also putting horse-sized carps between him and his attacker to slow it even a second more. This isn't to say that Fang continuing escape was unharmed for several times he had to use a burst of qi on the Flying Fish movement technique to jump ahead to avoid a foot from being trapped in his pursers jaws. Thankfully as the chase went on Fang's swimming skill kept improving from his desperation now he foresaw the eddies and currents of the water's movement allowing him to move with the flow without resistance.

Fang was feeling confident in his speed to be able to attempt to escape to the side and exit the river where the creature would hopefully be unable to follow on land. But just as he was preparing himself to make the jump he suddenly ran out of river to swim through. For without Fang noticing he had exited the desert and now entered the mountains where the river now was a raging waterfall pouring down with the top nowhere in sight. There was no way he could could escape to the sides in the time he had left before he reached the waterfall so the only path left to him was up.

Fighting against the forces of both gravity and the falling water took nearly everything Fang had and it was only because he pushed the Flying Fish art to its limit to make even a little progress. He had to slither and jump through the crushing liquid burning qi like oil dodging not only his predator (who thankfully seemed to have similar troubles climbing the fall) but also boulders that were constantly falling down as the waterfall eroded the mountain it was on.

Unknown to Fang as he ascended to higher and higher heights up the Dragon Remnant Gold River's waterfall a change was occurring in his body. It is said in legend that once there was a waterfall so grand in high that it started in Heaven itself and to swim up that waterfall was such a achievement that even a mere carp would become a Dragon if it reached the apex for while its body might had been mortal it must assuredly had a Dragon's soul. While the current waterfall Fang was climbing could in no way compare to one in legend it was still related to dragons enough that even the mortal creatures inhabiting it had taken some of draconic traits. So Fang's fishman appearance started to change regaining a more human appearance as fish scales were first dyed gold and then faded back into skin looking more like tattoos then anything. But despite these changes Fang's face still had an inhuman feel as his features became sharper and his eyes more lizard like.

Beyond the surface appearance Fang's body was also experiencing an evolution. Fang's body that was crippled by his transformation so much it he would have to struggle against foes a few stages weaker than him began to recover its previous strength. Then as Fang unconsciously used this returned strength to swim up even faster his body continued evolving which led to him moving faster yet again. This cycle continued until Fang finally reached the top of the waterfall, breaching out of the water almost like a roaring dragon.

Once at the top flying through the air directly above the waterfall Fang's previously narrowed vision now expanded once again. He saw how far he had come and how high he had risen. He saw the lesser mountains that lay below pointing up like spikes of stone and bone and he finally saw the creature that chased him as it's head breeched the top of the water trying to bite him even now.

It was a Sinuous Inheritor of the Drake's Gifts one of the prey he had come to hunt for and a surprising particularly powerful member of its species at that. It's head was as big as a chariot with its mouth having rows of yellow shattered glass-like teeth. It had spiked scales all around its head with some looking almost like horns for how far they protruded out. Its slimly skin was colored a bright golden yellow like the river though every now and then there were spots of green scales and eyes a shiny black that contained the faintest slit of a lizard. The Sinuous Inheritor 's true length was unable to be seen but the portion of its neck visible was easily over 30 feet long where it stuck out of the water trying to bite its escaping meal.

Fang saw all this but the only thought on his mind was outrage. What had chased for miles and nearly ate him multiple times was merely an over grown eel. It offended Fang so much he realized it felt unnatural but it wasn't an unwelcome feeling since it helped him decided his next course of action. He was going to kill that fucking eel no matter what even though he could easily escape it now.

Fang let himself fall back down towards the eel where it quickly tried to swallow him once again. Of course Fang easily dodged the attack and went to the creatures side where its scales where. Fang than wrapped his arms on the eels neck uses the scales as a grip to make up for the fact his arms couldn't even reach halfway across the semi-serpent's bulk. Then Fang called upon all his remaining qi to give one giant pull on the giant fish. Normally this would be a waste of qi and effort but the dumb eel had kindly dangled itself up in the air where one mighty yank would sending it tumbling below into the mountains below. The eel could do nothing to halt its sudden hurling and it fell upon the spiked hills which pierced it through, instantly killing it.

Fang meanwhile was through off the eel by the impact of its fall and rolled down the mountain which broke several of his bones without the qi to protect or heal them. Fang was so wounded that he couldn't even take the time to grab the eel's core since such a fresh kill would quickly bring some other beasts that he couldn't fight in his current state. So Fang could only limp back to the river to use as a shelter to rest until his injuries healed.

When Fierce Fang collapsed into the Dragon Remnant Golden River if one looked they would see him disappear into the waters. But that's a story for another time.

A/N: @occipitallobe Here's my omake about how I hope my crippling transformation is fixed albeit combined with hopefully a good fate roll. I just had the image of Fierce Fang looking like a Magikarp man freak and how that brings up dragon imagery. So I made the Dragon Remnant Golden River as the setting for the transformation as well as a rather crass joke.

I hope to have a sequel to this done before the turn is rolled as hinted by the abrupt ending of this omake. Hopefully it wasn't too weird cause I kind of just wanted to end the omake halfway through this cause I really felt a struggle to keep continuing this.
 
Fang let himself fall back down towards the eel where it quickly tried to swallow him once again. Of course Fang easily dodged the attack and went to the creatures side where its scales where. Fang than wrapped his arms on the eels neck uses the scales as a grip to make up for the fact his arms couldn't even reach halfway across the semi-serpent's bulk. Then Fang called upon all his remaining qi to give one giant pull on the giant fish. Normally this would be a waste of qi and effort but the dumb eel had kindly dangled itself up in the air where one mighty yank would sending it tumbling below into the mountains below. The eel could do nothing to halt its sudden hurling and it fell upon the spiked hills which pierced it through, instantly killing it.

Fang meanwhile was through off the eel by the impact of its fall and rolled down the mountain which broke several of his bones without the qi to protect or heal them. Fang was so wounded that he couldn't even take the time to grab the eel's core since such a fresh kill would quickly bring some other beasts that he couldn't fight in his current state. So Fang could only limp back to the river to use as a shelter to rest until his injuries healed.

When Fierce Fang collapsed into the Dragon Remnant Golden River if one looked they would see him disappear into the waters. But that's a story for another time.
I am here for Once Fish Man now Dragon Man Fierce Fang.

I very much liked the waterfall idea, that feels particularly inspired.
 
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@occipitallobe a brief musing i had that i want to check with you.

With the latest Omake i managed to write thanks to @FixerUpper, i feel like it would be thematic for Xiao Yi to be more reckless and deathseeking after the loss of his love. Can i ask if the following is possible?

I want to send him to go to the Yuan Secret Realm even if he doesn't have a LST with the understanding that he might still die since it's a secret realm. But since timeline wise that comes before the Trials, can it be done so that if he dies in the Realm, the positive Fate he accumulated in the realm is given out to some of the other Good Seeds?

His death itself can be a result of wounds sustained during the Trial. Not to say i'm writing him off! I just feel that to fully embrace the RP aspect of the quest, he should be more reckless after such a loss

TLDR: Death in Trials covered by LST, Death in Yuan realm treated as Death from wounds sustained in Trials. I understand if it can't be done since i'm basically asking for a Fate Roll for the Ji + Trial and then more rolls for the SR. But thought i would just check with you first

I think that's fine. Just leave it in your notes on the spreadsheet. Correct me if I have this wrong, but he'll go into the secret realm regardless of LST status?

Any sort of general eta on the end of the turn, by any chance?

Definitely within the next 12 weeks.

Hopefully sooner.

But no, I want to get started on it tomorrow. I'll see how it pans out, though, I have lot of stuff to do. Renovating a downstairs into a nice liveable area.

@NotteBoy97 can I just say fishman leaping over the waterfall is a great use of a classic trope?
 
Amaranth Castellanos 4 - Crisis in the Qiguai Secret Realm!
Amaranth Castellanos
Crisis in the Qiguai Secret Realm!

Roughly 20 years ago

Amaranth Castellanos traveled alongside a fairly large group which mostly radiated the auras of Qi Condensation, all heading towards the vaunted magic doorway of the Qiguai Clan. The secret realm of the Qiguai was said to be a place of marvel and terror, a place where opportunity could be found hand in hand with imminent death. You could find a secret legacy of an ancient cultivator, or you could be trapped, forever falling downwards, through infinitely twisting and turning worlds until you died from dehydration. You could find an ancient weapon, with powers that would shock and awe those of the same stage, or you could be slain by opportunistic trial-goers who saw the luck of slaying a Golden Devil as just one more prize to be found here. The Hundred-Year Trials were bad as it was, Amaranth thought. Having to deal with that nonsense even here really grated, but he supposed it was an inevitable consequence of that particular bounty set upon them by the Heavens. How troublesome.

This particular Secret Realm was said to be born from a Scale of the Heavenly Emperor Turtle, so he supposed that facing issues caused by the curse of the Heavens wasn't so strange. Though, it didn't seem to be deliberate manipulation on part of the Secret Realm, or at least if it existed it was subtle. It had a lot more to do with the social norms imposed by the reputation of the Golden Devils as well as the incentives for their death, which would apply to any secret realm. Being a Golden Devil, this was rather unfortunate, especially considering the extant risk of the particular realm he was about to enter as-is.

That all being said, the risk was still worth it. Amaranth had been stuck at the 9th Heavenstage for over 40 years, now. If he ever would have even the slightest hope of reaching the stages above before his demise, he'd have to take risks. As he walked across the path to the doorway, standing affixed to nothing but the air, he traced his fingers around his pendant. Quite some time ago now, he had asked around to check what it would do, and apparently it could be broken to summon a great flaming eagle that would seize him and bring him to safety. Amaranth could imagine many situations that he could encounter that would be convenient to have in.

The door creaked open, and the crowd ran through, with Amaranth soon following. The opening seemed to be a flat, pitch black, but when he crossed through—

The world broke into a kaleidoscope of color, reds and blues and greens all dancing around in patterns, and then his body hit the ground. His eyes were closed, but he hadn't closed them. Bizarre. He carefully opened his eyes and stood, looking around. It seemed to be a lush forest, with tall trees all around him, obscuring his sight. Amaranth sent out his spiritual sense to sweep the area to check if anyone was nearby, and it seemed that the area within his senses was free of other cultivators.

The Qi here had a strange feel to it, but it was certainly still denser than the Qi of the Desert. (Not like that was that high of a bar to clear.) With each breath, he could feel his cultivation being buoyed. Not enough for it to increase, but more than enough for the decline to be curtailed.
It seemed that he was lucky today. He had been expecting a tough fight from the onset, so this was certainly a stroke of fortune. Well, as he was here, there looked to be some spiritually rich herbs on the forest floor, so he might as well take a few.

Amaranth kneeled to scoop a few of the ones that seemed promising enough to sell for a solid amount of contribution points, and for a few minutes, things went peacefully enough.

Suddenly, he felt a higher level aura enter his range, and he tensed in preparation. It seemed to be stronger than him, but still in Qi Condensation, so that meant the Olympian Keystones. However, this cultivator didn't seem like they had greater reserves of Qi than him, from a rough estimate, so it had to be the 10th Heavenstage. It may not be hopeless, then.

The cultivator finally came within sight. It looked to be a man from the Qiguai sect, dressed in fairly fancy robes. Considering that and his Heavenstage, he must be fairly wealthy, Amaranth thought.

"Stop right there, Golden Devil! I challenge you to a duel! If I defeat you, you have to give me all of what you got from here." said the cultivator in a loud voice.

"Sure, I'm fine with that. And if I win, you have to give me what you found in this realm." Considering his apparent wealth, he may have known some secret Qiguai method to get more gains from this realm as well, so this might be profitable.

"As if. You're only in the Ninth Heavenstage. You should have just surrendered from the moment I challenged you. You've already lost, fool." The cultivator burst into motion, and punched him in the face. As Amaranth reeled from the force, he realized something crucial. While the body purification stage was said to only give a relatively minor boost to physical strength, it was noted to be one of the stages that gave a significant boost to speed. This was bad.

Amaranth had prepared his guard and was going for a Hungering Strike to counterattack, but the Qiguai cultivator just dodged. Still, the strike managed to bleed off some of the Qi radiating off him, adding to his reserves. If he played this right, he might be able to outlast— No, it wouldn't be possible. He wouldn't be able to deal enough damage before he took too much, not without a dedicated defensive technique. But did he have any other option?

The rest of the fight went exactly as expected. While Amaranth tried his best to turn it into a battle of attrition, the superior strength of the 10th Heavenstage was enough to make it so that Amaranth ended up getting beaten badly. The Qiguai cultivator gave him one last punch, sending him flying, and snatched away all the whole pile of herbs that he had gathered.

Woozily, Amaranth staggered to his feet, and started walking in a different direction. After a few minutes, his mind was cleared again, and he started taking large leaps with his magical boots to get more distance. Eventually, he reached a stretch of land that was just open field, when he saw a bizarre creature approaching him. A toad? Again? He groaned at the sight. It seems like he wouldn't escape his duties even here.

However, as it approached, he felt an aura that surpassed Qi Condensation by a magnitude, if not more. It must be a Foundation-Building sacred beast, then, and not one in the Early stage either. After the prior fight, he wasn't in great shape, but even if he was in perfect shape there would be no hopes of him defeating this creature. Just as he was about to flee as fast as he could, the toad spoke.

In a deep and resonating tone, it said, "I sense the aura of a Toad treasure in your presence." Amaranth tensed. Would this toad slaughter him for his crimes against all toad-kind? His eyes flitted to escape routes, but he stayed for now. Now that it was up close, he noticed something very strange about this Toad's mouth. Unlike other Spirit Toads which only had one tongue, this Toad had a thousand! The toad spoke again. "No, don't be afraid. I am a Battle-Trained Thousand-Tongued Toad, so I am an ally of humans. Let me guess. Were the toads you killed non-sentient and overrunning the place with their sheer numbers?"

Amaranth was shocked by its intuition, but he answered. "Yes, they were. The Cane Toads had multiplied to tremendous levels, and were causing widespread damage across the villages. It had to be done."

The great Toad croaked in dissatisfaction. "Ugh, Cane Toads. I knew I sensed the aura of one of those on your toad treasure. Don't worry, I don't care about you slaughtering a bunch of those. In fact, I'd have preferred you to have killed more. Anyways, this isn't the time to talk about that feud. That's a long, long story that you don't have the time for."

"What feud, if I may ask? I have plenty of time here anyways, so I can wait." Or so Amaranth thought. Barring a sudden sudden bout of misfortune, he should be fine here for a good amount of time.

"No, you don't. Trust me about that." After those words, the Toad simply stood still for a few seconds, and appeared to be deliberating about something. Then, the Toad opened its mouth, and took one of its legs and pulled off a viscous glob of saliva off a cluster of tongues. The Toad looked at the glob with its beady eyes, and it began to glow with a pale green light. Amaranth watched in horrified fascination. The saliva now seemed to possess a potent aura of Qi within it. "This Sticky Toad Saliva Droplet will let you stick and slow anyone within your realm, and even allow you to temporarily fight Foundation Establishment, if the situation calls for it. To activate it, simply channel your intent into the droplet." The Toad tossed the Droplet casually at Amaranth, who hastily caught it. Thankfully, it didn't burst, and the aura of Qi seemed to prevent it from sticking to his hand. Amaranth placed it in a bag of holding that he had prepared for this trip.

"Apologies, elder Toad, but why are you giving me such a gift?" Amaranth was confused. This seemed rather sudden, to say the least.

"Call it a reward for the good work. Besides, you Golden Devils tend to die off easily, so some security like this seemed like the greatest prize that I could give you. Well, your time is up. I'm off. Good luck with dealing with the oncoming perils!" The Toad bounded off with its powerful limbs, shooting up and away with speed that exceeded the limit of his perception.

Oncoming perils? Wait a moment. He sensed some cultivators in his range. The levels seemed to vary, but the important part was that there was a large amount, and they were not that far away from him. He began to hear voices in the distance.

"We must kill him! The heavens themselves reward someone with luck for slaying one of these accursed beings, so they must be one of the most wretched beings in the world! This is only justice!" After a bit of hesitance and squabbling among the group, it started to head straight at him.

Amaranth clenched his pendant once more. He had gotten something, so shouldn't he just leave when he was ahead? But no, it was much too early. He would die from regret if he could have gotten some amazing treasure and missed out due to cowardice. When the group started to chase him, Amaranth started by trading a few blows. However, their superior numbers meant that Amaranth was always the one who took more damage in these skirmishes, so he quickly abandoned that route. He hid under trees and boulders so he couldn't be found, and tried to slip away, but the group kept on hunting him and hunting him. With each skirmish, his injuries kept on piling up faster than he could heal them and Amaranth was slower and slower to slip away. But he couldn't give up, not here, not now, not when he had only found a single treasure.

After a point, Amaranth had injured his arm badly enough that he swore he could see the bone. When the group banded around him once more to aim for the kill, Amaranth knew that if he continued to try to evade, he would just die. So, he finally gave up. He crushed the pendant in his fingers, pieces falling to the ground and turning into specks of flame, that came together into an orb of heat that shone with the light of a great bonfire. The group shouted in panic and backed away from Amaranth, and the orb rapidly expanded into a great flaming eagle that snatched Amaranth by his shoulders, flying straight into the sky. With each beat of its wings, it moved a tremendous distance, until the ground was like a speck, and then—

Amaranth tumbled out of the doorway, and landed on his injured arm. He winced in pain, but one of the perks of being a body cultivator was pain tolerance, so he soon got back up. He had to pay a third of his gains, he dimly recalled. Thankfully he had a decent amount of lower grade herbs he picked up here stashed away in his pouch, so that ought to suffice. After giving it to the Qiguai clan member that stationed the door, Amaranth began the long walk home.

As he trudged through the sand, Amaranth thought about his experience. While he ended up worse than he thought he would at the end, he did at least end up benefitting from this trip, so it didn't turn out as bad as he thought it could. Besides, this was arguably more suitable for his constitution than an ordinary Lifesaving treasure anyways considering this would allow him to defeat foes that he'd never be able to otherwise. The future was looking bright.

A/N: So, after seeing the Secret Realm results, I thought about doing an expanded version in omake form, and this is it. For this turn's omake reward I'd like a healing treasure to get rid of the Badly Wounded penalty. It'd be that dried up herb Amaranth mentioned in the collab omake, BTW. I'll just add it to the spreadsheet. Well, hopefully the trials go well.
 
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The pill made Fang's face more like a fish's in such a horrifying manner. His lips were now forever agape being mutely open like a dumb fish and he had weird yellow whiskers coming out of his cheeks. His hair was mostly replaced by a yellow fin cresting about on the top of his skull and his head was covered in red scales. As for the rest of the body there were few changes besides a red tinge to his skin with a few random scales and webbed fingers and feet.

If that was all that happened despite the horribly look Fang would learn to deal with the cosmetic change eventually but of course when it rains it pours. Not only was Fang's combat power now weaker than someone at the 5th heavenstage and worst of all he now had gills meaning he required constant water to merely breathe much less do anything. Fierce Fang would honestly had preferred to have died and used up his Starfish Regrowth Death Denial lifesaving treasure than this crippling since another treasure capable of saving his life could eventually be found the loss in cultivation time from the crippling both directly and indirectly would be hard to make up for.
Oh wow. I can see why he prefers death.
Regardless of its mysterious origin the Dragon Remnant Gold River still has quite a few confirmed facts about it over the millennium it has existed. The river definitely has some connection to dragons for it has an undeniable draconic aura that is obvious to the senses. Normally this would mean the river would be dominated by a major sect and exploited since anything related to dragons has real value but the Gold River has a few things driving down its value. First is that the draconic essence is very low and thin that at most it influences mortal and 1st stage beasts (Qi Condensation level) having no effect on more powerful creatures and people so its only worth any value to Qi Condensation level cultivators. Further discouraging clans and sects is that the river gives off an air of discomfort separate from the natural feeling of unease the draconic essence gives off. This discomfort's source is unknown but it makes people disinclined to approach the river unless literally forced to and the feeling of discomfort only increases as one's cultivation increases so much that Nascent Souls have been said to give up chasing someone if they dive into the river. Finally the river's geographic location often changes as much like a serpent the river wiggles and slithers across the land with even the river's flow changing direction and speed by the month.
This is a interesting addition to the Quest's Worldbuilding! I can already picture the river banks being filled with small shacks built by fugitives who fled here. It can also even be a small black market where weaker cultivators come to trade stuff they stole.
A part of Fang felt that he would rather die than get closer to that golden river but he pushed through that imaginary discomfort and dived into the waters. He was struck by how sticky and unclean it made him feel and how he had to resist the urge the vomit his entire stomach out. But despite these hurdles Fang was stuck by how easy it seemed to move through the waters despite not having any real experience swimming before or after his transformation.
That's sounds horrible, but it was also an excellent way of showing Fang's determination!
What Fierce Fang was really after were things like Gold Crystal Pearls protected by Goldsteel Mollusks or a Sinuous Inheritor of the Drake's Gifts a legendary eel who is said to have the barest connection to true dragon ancestry.
I've always liked stuff like these! Trace of Dragon Ancestry is just so Xianxia!
Unknown to Fang as he ascended to higher and higher heights up the Dragon Remnant Gold River's waterfall a change was occurring in his body. It is said in legend that once there was a waterfall so grand in high that it started in Heaven itself and to swim up that waterfall was such a achievement that even a mere carp would become a Dragon if it reached the apex for while its body might had been mortal it must assuredly had a Dragon's soul. While the current waterfall Fang was climbing could in no way compare to one in legend it was still related to dragons enough that even the mortal creatures inhabiting it had taken some of draconic traits. So Fang's fishman appearance started to change regaining a more human appearance as fish scales were first dyed gold and then faded back into skin looking more like tattoos then anything. But despite these changes Fang's face still had an inhuman feel as his features became sharper and his eyes more lizard like.
Oh damn!! With a moment like this, i really hope he gets some dragonic traits to really emphasize that legend of Carp turning to a dragon!
I just had the image of Fierce Fang looking like a Magikarp man freak and how that brings up dragon imagery.
Like a Magikarp, he has evolved into a Gyarados. Please give him two whiskers!
 
I think that's fine. Just leave it in your notes on the spreadsheet. Correct me if I have this wrong, but he'll go into the secret realm regardless of LST status?
Yep and will do! I added a line saying " Yuan realm with or without LST "

Amaranth Castellanos traveled alongside a fairly large group which mostly radiated the auras of Qi Condensation, all heading towards the vaunted magic doorway of the Qiguai Clan. The secret realm of the Qiguai was said to be a place of marvel and terror, a place where opportunity could be found hand in hand with imminent death. You could find a secret legacy of an ancient cultivator, or you could be trapped, forever falling downwards, through infinitely twisting and turning worlds until you died from dehydration. You could find an ancient weapon, with powers that would shock and awe those of the same stage, or you could be slain by opportunistic trial-goers who saw the luck of slaying a Golden Devil as just one more prize to be found here.
I really like how the Qiguai Realm is so vague that everyone of us has a different interpretation of it. It really conveys that sense of being unbound by mortal rules.
"Stop right there, Golden Devil! I challenge you to a duel! If I defeat you, you have to give me all of what you got from here." said the cultivator in a loud voice.

"Sure, I'm fine with that. And if I win, you have to give me what you found in this realm." Considering his apparent wealth, he may have known some secret Qiguai method to get more gains from this realm as well, so this might be profitable.

"As if. You're only in the Ninth Heavenstage. You should have just surrendered from the moment I challenged you. You've already lost, fool." The cultivator burst into motion, and punched him in the face. As Amaranth reeled from the force, he realized something crucial. While the body purification stage was said to only give a relatively minor boost to physical strength, it was noted to be one of the stages that gave a significant boost to speed. This was bad.
Oh wow. Honestly, i can't wait for us to raise high enough that the weaker powers would have more hesitation when it comes to attacking us.
In a deep and resonating tone, it said, "I sense the aura of a Toad treasure in your presence." Amaranth tensed. Would this toad slaughter him for his crimes against all toad-kind?
This was pretty funny to me because it made me think of Toadman, Defender of Toadkind. :V
Then, the Toad opened its mouth, and took one of its legs and pulled off a viscous glob of saliva off a cluster of tongues. The Toad looked at the glob with its beady eyes, and it began to glow with a pale green light. Amaranth watched in horrified fascination. The saliva now seemed to possess a potent aura of Qi within it. "This Sticky Toad Saliva Droplet will let you stick and slow anyone within your realm, and even allow you to temporarily fight Foundation Establishment, if the situation calls for it. To activate it, simply channel your intent into the droplet." The Toad tossed the Droplet casually at Amaranth, who hastily caught it. Thankfully, it didn't burst, and the aura of Qi seemed to prevent it from sticking to his hand. Amaranth placed it in a bag of holding that he had prepared for this trip.
That sounds kinda gross, but i guess that is in the nature of Treasures. Usually they're all pretty gross in how they're obtained.
He crushed the pendant in his fingers, pieces falling to the ground and turning into specks of flame, that came together into an orb of heat that shone with the light of a great bonfire. The group shouted in panic and backed away from Amaranth, and the orb rapidly expanded into a great flaming eagle that snatched Amaranth by his shoulders, flying straight into the sky. With each beat of its wings, it moved a tremendous distance, until the ground was like a speck, and then—

Amaranth tumbled out of the doorway, and landed on his injured arm. He winced in pain, but one of the perks of being a body cultivator was pain tolerance, so he soon got back up. He had to pay a third of his gains, he dimly recalled. Thankfully he had a decent amount of lower grade herbs he picked up here stashed away in his pouch, so that ought to suffice. After giving it to the Qiguai clan member that stationed the door, Amaranth began the long walk home.
Shame the Eagle didn't choose to burn one or two of them!
 
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The Simmering Soup Sect, an Introduction by Mylanas Ephirotes

There are many scholars in the Clan, and many wiser than me. However, I am one of the few who has studied the Simmering Soup Sect in recent years.

That said, this work is considered a primer for the Aspirant, not a work for the serious scholar or Centurion. It involves the core arts of the Sect, its relationship to the Clan, and a brief sketch of the Sect's territory. It is a series of common questions and answers, so that you might not be completely ignorant of one of our allies.

Firstly you will require a map. Infuse your will into the jade slip further to access the map.

Who are the Simmering Soup Sect?

The Simmering Soup Sect are one of the Clan's most powerful allies. Vassals, others would term them, but we rule with a remarkably light hand. Note that outside the existence of Nascent Souls, the Sect maintains 15 Core Formation Elders - approximately one-quarter of the Clan's strength. We tread relatively lightly around them, though not fearfully. They give significant benefits in the forms of magical soups each year, and are currently an excellent source of life-enhancing magical soups for the Clan.

When were they founded and how?

The Sect is 700 years old, so fairly young. It was founded with an artifact of Demonic Soup Chef, and is considered to be a Demonic power despite said artifact simply being a great cookpot that they reside within. Their alliance with us is due to this - they cannot realistically reside within Righteous territory, and so are forced to ally with us.

What are their strengths and weaknesses?

They have remarkable Dao in growing Spirit Herbs and Vegetables, hunting Spirit Beasts, and turning them all into soups of various kinds. They are poor at combat for their relative realms, admittedly, but they have many utilities and abilities the Clan does not. Their airship fleet, their poison cures, and their doctors all make them an excellent ally. Their poor strength in combat is to our advantage - they cannot rise up against us, but have much to contribute to us.

How are they organised? Their culture?

They have fifteen Souplords, who would be termed Elders elsewhere. The ability to cook great soup confers status, and their Dao of Soup allows them to gain cultivation from it. Each leads a Recipe Book, an order of disciples who follow various techniques and recipes written in books passed down from Elder to Elder. All of them live in the Hundred-Li Soup Pot. As is normal for Sects, they are mostly separated from the mortal world, and merely protect the mortals from Blood Path as the Clan requires, spending almost all of their time in cultivator-only environments.

Their Experts are named Soup Masters, and their Disciples are named Kitchenhands.

What about their territory?

The Simmering Soup Sect has eleven points of great note I feel necessary to understand the Sect as a whole. I will go through these one by one.

Around the Sect are many high mesa rocks, called the Qi-Draining Scarab Mesas. Anyone attempting to cross on foot will find themselves rapidly drained of Qi and killed. A number of Qi-Draining Scarabs live there, able to endure the harsh conditions, hunting cultivators who seek to cross them. Interestingly, this Qi flows south to feed a forest - but more on that later.

The first three are the Ingredient Lands. Places of no consequence to the Clan, but of great worth to the Simmering Soup Sect.

Spider Gate - Relatively unimportant, excepting that the spiderwebs spun there grow ancient, and small fragments of them are necessary for the Sect to cook their Longevity Soup. The spiders in question are mere Foundation Establishment beasts, but their traps and poisons have killed even Core Formation cultivators. They do not like their webs disturbed, and many young cultivators die here every year.

Poison Waterfall Fields - Here is the border with Yuan Clan. The Poison Waterfall sprays mist for nearly a hundred li around it, killing any touched by a mere droplet. However, the fields it greens and the plants that grow there are of exceptional potency, and form the core of many recipes for the Sect. Gathering these herbs is extremely dangerous for them, but worthwhile. Many healing soups, the Limb-Regrowing Onion Soup, the Seven Flower Meridian Restoration Soup and so on have their key ingredients here.

Demon Ghost Graveyards - Ghost fibres and cores are key to the Sect's Soul Foundation Soups, and many exorcists gather here to carefully gather ingredients from these ghosts. Many are possessed by angry ghosts seeking vengeance on the living, as well.

The next three are the Trade Cities. Where the Sect trades its goods, as well as serving as fortresses to guard its borders.

Mogui City is the main Sect city, with a population of one million. It sees much trade with the Golden Devils and other powers, and is guarded well by Devil-built Arrays. Historically the Sect has defended Mogui City as a fortress against invasion from greater powers, and has many traps there.

Nan Men City is smaller, at six hundred and fifty thousand. The Twelve City Alliance is a firm friend of the Sect, and trades many things with them. While less fortified, Nan Men City is an excellent place to find inferior soups by lesser Chefs - if one has less ability, you do not sell to the Devils, but other powers.

Niao City is only three hundred and fifty thousand strong, a testament to the many raids and wars between the Sect and Peng Kingdom. More a fortress than a city, while merchants travel through here, it is poor and suspicious of outsiders.

Second-to-last is the Southern Green.

Key to the Soup Sect's powers is the Bountiful Grasslands. Here, while no Qi flows, Spirit Herbs and such grow with abandon somehow. No Spirit Stones are to be found, no Qi in the air, and almost no Spirit Beasts. A blessed land for mortals, and six million of them of them live here - three quarters of the Sect's mortal population. They tend to crops, grow herbs, and trade assistance from the Sect in return for the various cultivation herbs they can provide.

The reason the Grasslands remain pristine is the Spirit Bamboo Forest. Able to grow in moments and spear even a Core Formation elder to death, this forest is rich in Qi, though trying to meditate there is a death sentence. None pass. The Spirit Bamboo can be harvested for soup, of course, and often small shoots are used in various recipes. For the hafts of spears, this is a key resource for the Clan - a good spear made of Spirit Bamboo and headed with Spirit Bronze will serve even a Foundation Establishment expert, though it is difficult to gather.

To reach the Grasslands, the Sect maintains a rare Airship Fleet. Most who fly do so on their own, and the notion of simply moving goods en masse through the air is foolish indeed. However, Core Formation cultivators cannot fly without secret arts, and only then for a handful of seconds at most. To harvest those rare Spirit Herbs, they must be able to reach them, and so they maintain a fleet of fourteen flying ships. In times of war most of these can be requisitioned by the Clan to serve as emergency transport, a rare and useful ability. Though each can only transport five hundred cultivators, being able to move half a Legion at will is no small feat.

Lastly, are the Core Territories.

Immortality's End Spirit Mine
is a peculiar place. Many Spirit Mines are dangerous, filled with ghosts, beasts, or the like, attracted by the Qi in the stones. However, most such are dangerous on a specific level. Immortality's End is peculiar in that it is of great danger (and great worth) to Foundation Building experts, but of no danger (and little worth) to Core Formation elders. Consequently there is no obvious group of cultivators to mine here, and while the wealth is great, the output is less than it might be. It is a rich mine, however, and serves as the core to the Sect's strength. Many mortals and low-level cultivators are sent in by the great crane, plummeting to the depths in hope of recovering a medium or high-grade Spirit Stone to become rich. Most die.

The Hundred-Li Soup Pot is as it sounds. A Soup Pot one hundred li in height, buried in the sands. Almost all the cultivators of the Sect reside there, and it enhances soup-making arts and the learning of the Dao of Soup. Without their residence, they would be far weaker, easily destroyed. However, their ability to transform herbs, beast cores, ghost fibres, and even poisons into powerful and useful soups for cultivation and healing has made them a power to be reckoned with.

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Can I say how much I love the worldbuilding in this story?

I love it so much

Man though, I'm both really hyped and really scared about how the Trials are going to go. And I have to drive to work today so who knows if I'll be able to see how it goes before my first shift starts.

Wish I got my full vacation as I hoped, but alas, the best laid plans, amirite?

At least I sorted out the new place I'll be living starting november.
 
Demon Ghost Graveyards - Ghost fibres and cores are key to the Sect's Soul Foundation Soups, and many exorcists gather here to carefully gather ingredients from these ghosts. Many are possessed by angry ghosts seeking vengeance on the living, as well.
This is interesting! How are ghosts in the setting? Are they types of demons and monsters or all there ghosts of cultivators who can practice ghost cultivation?
 
Oooooooh wow. SO much trivia on the Contribution Point system!

Also very awesome worldbuilding, I love every single concept, especially the Grasslands.

But I'm hopelessly distracted by the Contribution Board!
 
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The real reason the Golden Devil Clan is considered Demonic: their absolutely extortionate journal access prices. :V
 
Castor Tyndaridae 4 - The Depths
It wasn't supposed to be like this. It was just going to be a some mildly amusing little omake about how Castor fought some big beaver and lost. Then I got seized with a fell mood or something, and it evolved into....this.

Criticism's appreciated, as usual.

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The Depths
Castor Tyndaridae


In the depths of the earth, mortals laboured, mindlessly, tirelessly, seeking to build a palace worthy of their master, a throne equal to his power. No power halted them, even spirit beasts were overwhelmed by their mindless, fanatic tides before the work resumed. This labour was all they knew, all that mattered. It would never end, as their master's glory and splendour was endless and infinite, and so their picks chipped away at the sandstone, their skin growing sallow and frail as their muscles withered and the light faded from their eyes, their movements unceasing and tireless until they simply keeled over, unable to work any longer, and were disposed of by their fellows, a fresh-faced replacement taking up their duty soon after. Such was the lot of the throne-builders.

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"So you want me to help kill a spirit beast?" Castor eyed the Senior Mechanikos skeptically. Usually it was Helios, or one of the other younger Senior Mechanikos that approached him with offers of tasks or missions. Typically, he dismissed those out of hand. Vulcus, though? Vulcus, more often then, not, was simply content to leave him to his work, answering questions only when spoken to. For the Senior Mechanikos to offer him a mission was…odd.

"Mhm. It's been causing quite a lot of troubles for one of our mortal vassals to the East. Disrupted their mining operations and cost them thousands of men. Not usually something we'd concern ourselves with, truthfully, that's what garrisons are for. But when the garrison we had stationed there sent in a team to deal with it, their singular Foundation Establishment expert included, only one cultivator, one of the rookies, returned alive. So, the responsibility falls to us. Young folk these days, I swear, can't even kill a single Spirit Beast…."

Tuning out the grumbling that followed, Castor mulled the idea over. Honestly, he wouldn't have been inclined to participate, usually. The Elastic Ape had been bad enough, and he wasn't exactly in the market for new parts to add to Pollux at the moment. His automated companion was, for the time being at least, at full functionality, and Castor himself was focused on finally breaking through. He'd delayed long enough, and he could tell he was almost ready to break through the bottleneck to the Second Heavenstage. If Vulcus was making the request of him though…

"Might I ask Senior to elaborate a bit on what exactly the mission entails?" It was the politest way he could think of to ask "What's in it for me?" without getting a whack on the head from the curmudgeonly Mechanikos.

"You'll be descending into Fractured Sky city's mines, alongside a team of various other Qi Condensation cultivators and three Foundation Establishment cultivators, a specialist included, to hunt down and kill this Spirit Beast so that the city can resume it's mining activities. Every participant in the mission will be rewarded with a considerable sum of contribution points, as well as a portion of the Spirit Beast's corpse, as we believe it to be at least in the Foundation Establishment stage of it's life-cycle."

Well, he could certainly see some benefits involved, when Vulcus put it like that. Even if he wasn't in the market for new parts, the materials from a Foundation Establishment Spirit Beast were usually well beyond his means, and would probably lead to a useful upgrade for Pollux, whichever parts he acquired. Working alongside three Foundation Establishment cultivators would also be a valuable learning experience, assuming they were open to questions and inquiries. Still though, there was something else. Fractured Sky City, the name sounded familiar to him, for some reason or another…ah.

"Wait, isn't Fractured Sky City where they've currently deployed the-"

"Astute, Castor. Indeed, Fractured Sky City's the current location of one of your family's ancestral works. I suspect you'll find examining it to be quite enlightening, even if it's not one of the more combat-oriented masterworks."

Well, if that was the case, then he simply had to go. Few of the truly exceptional automatons created and deployed by his family survived long past the death of their owners, an unfortunate consequence of the specialized nature of his family's array crafting skills and the fact that most such automatons accompanied their creators everywhere.

Those that did, though, could often be considered nothing short of valuable masterworks, exceptionally well-made and excelling in one area or another. Even if this one wasn't particularly powerful in combat, he was sure he'd be able to gain some valuable insight from observing it, one way or another.

It would be unfortunate to stall his cultivation, especially when he was so close to a breakthrough, but an opportunity like this was rare enough that, combined with the other possible benefits, it would be well worth the setback.

"I'll gratefully accept this offer then, Senior Mechanikos." Castor bent low at the waist. Vulcus certainly knew how to pick out the perfect mission for him.

"Hmph," Despite the annoyed harrumph Castor could see a gleam of satisfaction in his eyes. "The rest of the mission team will be assembled in the next few days, I'll send someone over when they're ready to depart. I suggest you prepare yourself as well, in the mean time." With that, Vulcus turns around, departing with nary a word.

"Very well, Senior Mechanikos. Farewell."

"Harrumph!"

Castor turned back to his work, excitement playing across his features. He couldn't help it, being able to observe, possibly even work on one of his family's masterworks would be a great opportunity to learn and improve, devise new ways to improve on Pollux using it's design.

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"Alright, now that you're all here, we'll elaborate a bit more on the exact nature of the mission. Nothing top secret, but there were a few details we didn't see as necessary information for those who hadn't accepted yet."

Castor really didn't see the need to clear out a muster yard for a small team of thirty cultivators, they could have done just as well with a corner of it, but protocol was protocol he supposed, even if the mission was nothing worth eavesdropping on. Putting the briefing into the back of his mind (something about a beaver? He was sure he'd find out later), Castor covertly looked around at the other Golden Devils he'd be fighting alongside for this mission. Nobody he recognized, unfortunately, though there were a few rather standout characters that he could see from his position in the center of the loosely organized crowd.

Off to the side right of the crowd, looking to all the world like a master class in brooding, was a cultivator almost entirely swathed in a black cloak. Even straining, Castor couldn't quite make out their face, though he something about their body language told him they weren't happy to be here. Either a shortage of contribution points had driven them to participate, or they had some secondary objective in Fractured Sky City, if he had to guess. It was a nominally mortal city, from the reports he'd read, but there were at least a few loose cultivators and extremely minor sects that were active there, even if none of the cultivators were even Foundation Establishment.

As far as their skills….a stealth specialist, maybe? They certainly didn't look like a frontline fighter, and while Mechanikos came in all stripes he didn't really get the vibe of a fellow academic from them either. An enigma, in any case.

Near the front of the crowd, standing more then a head above just about any cultivator in the mission crew, was a man that looked like he'd never taken a bath in his life. His skin was bronzed by both blood and sun, and his stringy blond hair was organized in a loose ponytail, which partially obscured the tattoos running all the way down his back and arms. He couldn't see all of him, but Castor'd bet drachma that he was tattooed in much the same way over most of his body. Many of the tattoos he could see, though, were marred by scars. The scratches of claws, bite marks, burns, his skin was a book that told tales of hundreds of different battles.

As for his clothing…well, there really wasn't much at all. A loose fitting leather vest and…some kind of kilt(?) seemed to be about all he had covering himself, outside of some cords around his arms that seemed to carry teeth, scales, and all other manner of bestial memorabilia. He did remember Vulcus mentioning a Foundation Establishment specialist would be participating in the mission, and this fellow certainly seemed to fit the bill. He'd have to consult him on the journey over, see if he knew any more about their quarry.

Finally, off to the left of Castor's position were a group of rather unremarkable female cultivators. Skin lightly bronzed, with neatly arranged white-blond hair and aquiline features, they looked the part of a traditional Golden Demon cultivator to a tee….all three of them. Exactly. Were they triplets? It would've been odd on it's own, though believable, but their Qi was like nothing he'd ever felt before, a shifting, roiling mass, a living thing that flowed freely though the three of them.

These….three(?), he wagered, were the three Foundation Establishment cultivators that would be accompanying them. A bit of a motley crew, if he was being honest, but cultivators did always seem to develop quite a bit more individuality once they finally escaped the Qi Condensation stages, so he supposed they were about par for the course, even if they didn't quite fill him with the same confidence as the two Foundation Establishment members that had accompanied the first caravan he'd ever been a part of had. Castor would need to see if he could meet them during the journey, especially that beast specialist. He'd likely be able to tell him more about this Spirit Beast they would be hunting then a mission scroll ever could.

As the mission briefing finally began to wind down, and the cultivators began to disperse, Castor followed suit, absorbed in his own thoughts. He wasn't particularly looking forward to another caravan journey, especially with how his last one had gone, but he'd hopefully have the chance to get the know these Foundation Establishment cultivators a little better. Small mercies.

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This caravan's journey was, thankfully, a good deal more peaceful then the one he'd been on before. No Blood Path cultivators or bandits hindered their path this time, only a few packs of spirit beasts, ignorant or reckless enough to test themselves against three Foundation Establishment cultivators and a sizable retinue of Qi Condensation disciples. These attacks had, at the very least, given Castor ample opportunity to see exactly how competent the comrades he would be fighting alongside were.

His fellow Qi Condensation cultivators were, if he was being honest, rather disappointing. They were hardly incompetent, by any stretch of the imagination. Most would label them fine examples of Golden Devil disciples. Still, though, they were just that, average. No interesting techniques or specialties, as far as he could tell, and despite the fact that most of them were multiple Heavenstages above him, he didn't think he'd be at much of a disadvantage in a fight, especially with the assistance of Pollux. The Foundation Establishment cultivators were, at least, quite a bit more interesting. The black cloaked figure hadn't removed that stuffy looking robe the entire journey, and any time Castor'd tried to approach them to speak, be it near the end of the day when everyone was bedding down or in the wake of battle, they always managed to quickly slip away.

Their combat ability remained a complete mystery as well. Outside of a couple of silvery flashes shooting from their robe, which Castor scarcely noticed in the heat of battle, they hadn't apparently taken any sort of action otherwise, never getting within a hundred meters of any of the Spirit Beast attackers. That said, though, every silvery flash seemed to herald a strange effect in some beast or another, Castor'd observed.

Sometimes they'd simply begin to foam at the mouth before keeling over, other times they'd turn their attention from the cultivator they were fighting and attack one of their comrades. In one instance he'd even noticed that, as some vaguely draconic, scaly Spirit Beast attempted to spew fiery breath from it's mouth it had suddenly snapped shut, bewilderment the only emotion in it's eyes before the fire, left with nowhere else to go, melted them from their sockets. The mystique surrounding the senior cultivator, much as it seemed to disturb many of his contemporaries, fascinated Castor. Still, all of his attempts to find out more about them had been rebuffed. Hopefully some kind of opportunity might present itself when they arrived at their destination, but in the meantime he was stumped.

The beast hunting specialist, who's name he'd learned was Persus, well, he was about as straightforward as they came. He was at the front during every Spirit Beast attack, ripping and tearing into enemies with his bare hands, not that Castor was particularly surprised. Despite the strength behind his blows, though, Castor had noticed a great deal of precision. Every strike seemed to rip into his enemy's with even greater ease then one would expect, and Castor suspected that he knew exactly where to strike to deal the most damage. Behind that meathead exterior, there was probably quite a lot of knowledge lurking. Most of the time, though, he appeared to avoid hanging around the caravan, mostly "scouting ahead", though if Castor had to hazard a guess he simply preferred the solitude. Asking around, none of the other Qi Condensation cultivators had heard of him, despite his seemingly young age, a fact that, to Castpr at least, spoke of someone that much preferred the wilds to civilization.

Finally, there was the triplets. Unlike the other two, Castor had actually had the opportunity to converse with them, and found them to be quite the interesting individuals, though a bit…odd. They weren't really three people, for one thing. The concept still rather confused Castor, he had to admit, but apparently they'd somehow fused their collective Qi and consciousness together, with one mind controlling three bodies. Geryis they called themselves, and the fusion had allowed their Qi to become even greater then the sum of it's parts, and reach foundation establishment. Castor'd certainly seen the fruits of their unique constitution during the Spirit Beast attacks. Elementalist attacks were where their specialties lay. By using all three of their bodies, they'd thus far been able to produce a variety of different combination attacks, electrifying and freezing water, creating and controlling scalding scene, and even, at one point, creating a flow of magma to melt a pride of many-eyed lions.

An interesting set of seniors, for sure, even if he'd only had the opportunity to actually converse with one.

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"Alright, we're only a few days away from Fractured Sky city. So, to refresh your memory and give some of my own input, I'll be briefing everyone here on the details of the mission."

From his position at the back of the group packed into the largest wagon in the caravan, Castor could nonetheless see that the Beast Hunter was all business. Boisterous but aloof was how Castor would best describe him for most of the trip, so this was a rather welcome change.

"Firstly, we're going to be meeting with the King of the city, Shang Hong. Ostensibly to officially render our services in dealing with the spirit beast that bested our garrison. Really, though, we're mostly going to be visiting the palace to get a quick briefing from him on any changes to the circumstances that might have happened since we set out. Better safe then sorry. After that, we're going to spend the rest of the day gathering intelligence of our own around town. Then, the day after that we're going to be descending into their mines, and hopefully completing our mission. Nice and simple, but easier said then done."

The Beast Hunter looked around, expression grave.

"Outside of my Foundation Establishment companions, most of you have, in all likelihood, never encountered a proper spirit beast."

At that, one of the Qi Condensation cultivators to Castor's right piped up, sounding a bit offended.

"Senior, we've been fighting Spirit Beasts for this whole-"

"Ah-ah-ah." The Beast Hunter wagged his finger, cutting the disciple off. "Let me finish, if you don't mind."

Though still looking mildly reluctant, the disciple fell silent, letting the Foundation Establishment cultivator continue.

"Right. Now, I'm sure plenty of you have encountered spirit beasts within their Qi Condensation equivalent. Probably fought and killed quite a number of them, as well. But it's only when an animal reaches their equivalent of Foundation establishment that a spirit beast truly becomes a Spirit Beast."

The Hunter looked around, locking eyes with every disciple in the wagon, expression deadly serious as most of them wilted away or looked elsewhere.

"A Qi Condensation spirit beast is simply an animal that's been exposed to some Qi, little different from their natural counterpart. A threat still, sure, but a minor one. A Foundation Establishment Spirit Beast, though, is an altogether different story. A Foundation Establishment Spirit Beast is a creature that has spent most of it's life saturated in Qi, internalizing and feeding off of it, growing, evolving beyond any natural creature. Their intelligence has far surpassed any normal animal's, and though they still lack a human intellect, they're not far off now. The little quirks caused by their Qi exposure have evolved into devastating attacks, their natural attributes evolving into deadly weapons. Just as much as a cultivator of their level, and in many cases even more so, a Foundation Establishment Spirit Beast is a foe to be feared by any fighter below Core Formation. So, the nature of the beast itself aside, I urge the utmost caution throughout this mission. Underestimating this thing could, in no uncertain terms, be the death of you.

For a moment, the carriage is silent and tense, disciples looking around at their peers, suddenly nervous. Even Castor felt a thrill of fear work it's way up his spine. He certainly had his fair share of experience with Spirit Beasts already, after the Elastic Ape, and fighting a creature in a whole different league from that monster….well, it didn't exactly excite him.

After a moment's pause, the Beast Hunter, satisfied that his point had gotten across, continued.

"Right, now, on to the beast itself. Throne-Building Deserts Beavers aren't a particularly well-documented Spirit Beast, normal Desert Beavers are rare enough, and for them to evolve to Foundation Establishment is even rarer. If it has any special abilities as a result of it's evolution, they aren't in any of our records. Still, we can infer it's general abilities, based off of what we know about normal Desert Beavers, and beavers in general."

At that, the Beast Hunter picked up a sketchbook from the table next to him, holding up an illustration for everyone in the carriage to see. It…wasn't the most intimidating creature he'd ever seen, if he was being honest, and his comrades seemed to agree, a ripple of poorly suppressed laughter passing through the crowd of Qi Condensation cultivators.

"Looks pretty ridiculous, I know, but these things are nothing to sneeze at. 300 pounds of fat and muscle, they're durable, and a slap from that tail can snap most other Spirit Beast's in their weight class's neck. As for the teeth, well, normal beaver species use them to chew through trees and logs, but Desert Beavers, on the other hand, with no wood to be found, use them to hew sandstone. I think that you can guess what they'd be able to do if they could sink those into even a durable cultivator's flesh.

That sobered the room up quickly enough, to be certain.

"The Throne-Building Desert Beaver, as an evolution of this, can be assumed to retain much stronger versions of these traits. It's likely increased a great deal in size and resilience, and it's teeth, if what the records say is correct, are capable of shredding steel like paper at this point in their lifespan. Like it's previous evolution, it's also a skilled digger, a tool it uses to work on and improve it's "life goal". Deserts Beavers, like normal beavers, build themselves sizeable homes of their material of choice, in this case sandstone. The Throne-Building variant, in turn, retains an obsession with expanding on it's home, working on it endlessly to create the massive sandstone maze it inhabits. It was likely hibernating underground when something in the Fractured Sky mines interrupted it's slumber. We can, as such, expect to be fighting this creature in a heavily fortified position location, on it's own turf. Myself and the other Foundation Establishment cultivators will do the vast majority of the work, so for the rest of you, the main objective is to make sure we aren't interrupted. Throne-Building Beavers become rather solitary after their evolution, supposedly, but still, we can't be entirely sure where a Foundation Establishment Spirit Beast is involved. That's about the long and short of it, I believe. I'll be going ahead to inform the remainder of the garrison about our arrival, so I'll see you all in the city. Dismissed."

As Castor left the carriage, he resolved to make sure Pollux was in top form for arrival in the city. This mission was, at the very least, obviously not going to be a simple matter.

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Fractured Sky City welcomed it's new arrivals gratefully. The normally murky skies, often stained with smoke and smoke that had earned the city it's name were clear now with no ore being smelted or refined, an affair that seemed to have the entire city in a panic. After they were escorted through the city in what practically amounted to a parade, and gave their official statement to the king that they would slay the spirit beast on the morrow, they were ushered into a side room and, after about thirty minutes, the king finally arrived, looking absolutely exhausted outside of all his court regalia. He carried himself with dignity, but his back was bent as if carrying a great weight, and what must have been a well groomed mustache and chin patch looked ill-maintained and drooping, a match for the dark bags under his eyes.

"Honoured cultivators. Pleasantries aside, I'm glad you're here. The situation has become almost untenable. Miners are vanishing left and right, even though we've closed off the mines themselves, and the citizens are on the brink of a panic. Apologies for not being more verbose but, well, we're desperate."

Stepping forward, Persus clasped his hands, giving a tight bow.

"We understand, you're majesty, and we plan to see to it that the threat to your city in eliminated first thing tomorrow. Has anything about the situation changed since the last report? The fewer unknown variables there are, the easier it well be to do our job."

"Yes, there's one major event that's taken place since the last report. The Under-Light Miner has vanished."

Persus blinked, confused. "The Under-Light Miner?"

"Ah, I can elaborate on that, sir." And that was the moment that Castor decided to step in. As Persus turned his gaze to him Castor hurried to elaborate.

"The Under-Light Miner's an automaton that was made by one of my family's Mechanikos, sir, one of our masterworks. It's owner passed away centuries ago, but it's still in good condition, so it's periodically deployed to different mining operations in the Golden Devil territories."

"One of your family's Automatons? Ah, if you've got an automaton as well, I take it you're a Tyndaridae then? I see, I see. How strong would you say it is, young Mechanikos? I've heard your family's masterworks are generally rather powerful."

He'd heard of Castor's family? Shaking the moment of surprise off, Castor continued.

"Yes sir. The Under-Light Miner's specialty lies in, well, mining, but it's combat abilities are still at around Foundation Establishment level, thanks to the materials it was made from and the skill of it's maker, sir."

"That strong? Damn, something like that could upset the whole mission. Alright Tyndaridae, I want you to head down to the garrison and speak with the Mechanikos there. Even if it's creator's long gone, I'm sure whoever does maintenance on and controls it will have some ideas about it's weaknesses."

"Yes sir."

"Oh, and Argent, you accompany him, if you don't mind."

"Hrm."

Castor almost jumped out of his skin at of his skin at the grunt behind him, barely holding back a shout as he slowly turned around to face the black cloaked, Foundation Establishment Cultivator. Scare aside, he'd been hoping for an opportunity like this. He got to learn about the Under-Light Miner and, hopefully, this mysterious cultivator? Perfect.

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How the hell were they this evasive?! The entire walk to the garrison, Castor had tried to get closer to the cultivator, to even get a word in, but they were like a damn shadow. He hadn't lost sight of them once, he was certain, but they always seemed to be more then a few meters away, no matter how Castor tried to close the distance. It was honestly getting a little infuriating. Still, now that they'd arrived at their garrison, there were other matters to attend to.

After introducing himself to the acting garrison commander, and learning of the location of the garrison's Mechanikos, he took off to find his workshop, a rather simple undertaking, as the squat, ugly building stuck out like a sore thumb. As Castor entered he was, privately, impressed. Mechanikos deployed to garrisons weren't exactly expected to introduce new innovations or designs, but this one certainly seemed to be giving it his best shot. Half finished array schematics and weapons were strewn about the room, and at the very center, in front of a massive forge, a burly figured, goggles concealing most of his face with the exception of the bushy black beard underneath, hammered away at what Castor, if he had to guess, took for a Ballista crossbow bolt.

"Excuse me. Are you the garrison's Mechanikos, by any chance?"

For a moment the man didn't respond, continuing to hammer away at the bolthead. No surprises there, Castor hated being interrupted in the middle of his work as well. Finally, though, he turned around, pulling up the goggles to reveal a pair of clear green eyes.

"Aye. Who's asking?"

"I'm with the Spirit Beast extermination team the sect deployed. One of the leaders asked me to find the garrison's Mechanikos and inquire about the Under-Light Miner, since I'm quite knowledge about in that area." Castor stepped aside, indicating Pollux. The man's eyes widened in surprise for a moment, then narrowed in interest.

"Oh ho, that's a fine automaton ye've got there, lad, 'specially for someone your age. You are Tyndaridae then?"

"Mmmhm, decided to come on the mission when I heard that the Miner was deployed here. I was quite interested in getting a look at it."

"HA! Bet you were, lad, she's a real fine piece of work, some 'o the finest artifice I've e'er laid eyes on. Shame she went missing a couple 'o weeks ago."

"I don't suppose you have any idea why?"

"Well, reckon it's pretty obvious it has somethin' ta do with that beaver down in tha mine, but I'm not exactly a foremost expert on Spirit Beasts, so couldn't say what caused it, exactly. Did notice a couple of things though, not too long 'fore it vanished."

"I'd appreciated any sort of insight you have, we'd really rather avoid anything cause the mission to go awry."

"Right, right, fair enough. Well, a week or so ago, before she vanished, she started goin' a bit…" The man gesticulated wildly, seemingly trying to find a good way to illustrate his point. "…haywire would be the best way ta put it, I s'pose."

"Haywire?"

"Aye, started wandering about when it wasn't told to, stopped and started suddenly, and almost brained a miner a day or two before she vanished. Couldn't find anything wrong with 'er parts or array though, so not much I could do 'bout it."

"Strange. Could you think of anything, anything at all that might have caused it?"

"Well…there was one thing tha' was a bit odd, I noticed."

Wandering over to a workbench in the corner, the man started rifling through vials and tubes, stacks of papers falling this way and that.

"Ah! Here we go."

Crowing triumphantly, the Mechanikos wound his way back through the mountain of blueprints and papers to Castor, handing him a vial. Holding it up to the light, all that Castor saw were…hairs?

"Every day when she came back from tha mine her, and a bunch 'o the miners besides, were covered in this stuff, no clue where it came from, and it didn't seem to be doin' any harm, so we just left it alone. Still, considering the Miner and a bunch 'o workers have vanished now…"

"Mm, yeah, it seems likely that they're linked. Thanks for your assistance senior, I'm sure this will help a lot. One last thing though, much as I hate to ask it. About the Miner, does it have any…weak points? I more then anyone would hate to damage one of my family's masterworks, but well, if something's happened to it…"

"Aye, aye, I understand. She's a fine piece 'o work, but lives're lives. Well, y'see, most of 'er body's heavily armoured, make sure she isn't damage by cave-ins and all tha', but here and here…"

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Castor'd been left with a lot to think about after he left the Mechanikos's office, and the quiet streets, now almost empty with night falling, were the perfect place to delve deep into his thoughts as he made his way towards the quarters the King had mentioned he'd prepared for them before Castor was sent on his errand. So, lost in his thought, he wasn't quiet able to conceal a shriek of terror this time as, from a very innocuous looking shadow, a sibilant voice rasped out.

"Let me take a look at that vial."

Castor, in the meantime, was panting, clutching at his chest as he stared at what he'd previously taken to be an empty shadow. He only began to relax as, finally, a black cloaked figure Castor'd kind of forgotten about in the excitement of automatons and strange hairs began to melt out of the shade.

"Geeez, don't scare me like that, I don't want to end up as some cultivation junior's ghost teacher just yet."

Taking the vial out of his pocket, he tossed it over to the Foundation Establishment cultivator as he stared at them curiously. Much as they'd startled him, he was pretty sure the voice was feminine, which…made sense he supposed, even bundled up like that they didn't seem particularly tall. Why all the secrecy though? The Golden Devil cultivator was, meanwhile, content to ignore Castor's pointed examination, removing the hair from the vial and examining it.

"…There's Qi in it."

Castor paused again at the quiet voice. It felt like it was coming from her figured, yet echoing all around him at the same time. "Hm? Qi? If there's Qi…the Beaver then, I guess?"

"Mm."

With that, she stepped back into the shadows and…vanished again. Castor sighed, staring at the spot where she'd disappeared. This concealment was really getting a bit troublesome, even if there was probably good reason for it. She'd taken the vial too. Well, he supposed she'd probably bring it back to Persus, at least, but still, she could've at least given it back, he'd rather wanted to examine it himself.

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The next morning, the whole mission team stood outside the primary entrance to the mine, the Qi Condensation cultivators lined up before their Foundation Establishment seniors, Persus at the front.

"Alright! Thanks to some helpful investigation on the part of Argent and Castor, we've learned at least a little bit more about our enemy. The beaver, according to Argent's examination of one of it's hair, appears to be able to conduct Qi through it's fur, and even retain a remote charge. With that remote connection, it can use it's Qi to seize and manipulate the Qi of those the fur's in contact with. It's pretty useless against any sort of cultivator, due to our refinement and control over Qi, but for a mortal it's impossible to resist. With some effort, the beaver was also able to take control over an automaton that was being used in the mine, known as the Under-Light Miner. It's not a combat specialized automaton, but it's an extremely well-made piece of artifice, so it's combat ability is apparently around the level of a Foundation Establishment cultivator. This would've been a major kink in the plan, since we would've needed to divert one of our number to deal with it, but junior Mechanikos Castor presented a plan that he believes would allow a few of you Qi Condensation cultivators to at the very least immobilize it. Castor, you're up."

Stepping out of the line and to the front, Castor hid a gulp. He could be social when he needed to, but speaking in front of crowds…well, he preferred a quiet workshop, to say the least.

"Well, the Miner's an extremely high quality automaton, which presents a lot of difficulties. Most of it's body is covered in heavy, spiritually reinforced bronze plate a foot thick. Most Foundation Establishment cultivators could barely dent it, let alone break through it, and with a body specialized for mining, it's extremely strong. It has one big weakness, though. Rather then legs, the Miner was fitted with treads, since they allow for easier movement in an enclosed space like a mine. A strength for mining, however, is a weakness for combat. If we can do something to damage or gum up it's treads, we can completely immobilize it."

Persus stepped up as Castor stepped back, nodding to the younger cultivator in acknowledgement.

"Thank you Castor. To that end, Geryis spent most of last night preparing a pair of talismans. They're single use, but the Frost Qi embedded into them is strong. As long as they're in physical contact with the treads when they're activated they should completely ice them over, immobilizing it."

One of the Qi Condensation cultivators spoke up at that.

"Er, sir, I respect your combat knowledge, but asking Qi Condensation cultivators to get that close to a Foundation Establishment level opponent is a bit…" The young man paled for a moment as many of his peers shied away from his position, evidently expecting a rebuke. The heavily muscled beast hunter, though, just nodded in acknowledgement.

"Yeah, you're not wrong, against a normal Foundation Establishment enemy, sending Qi Condensation fighters would just be asking them to die. In this case though, there's a chance. Castor?"

"Well, the Miner's incredibly strong, probably only a step or two below Core Formation in that regard. In terms of speed though, it's extremely slow. Not even at the peak of Qi Condensation. Not that that would normally matter, since it can wear down just about any opponent's stamina before they pierce it's defenses, but with a tactic like this one even Qi Condensation cultivators like us should be able to get in and out to deliver the talismans, though it's still a risky prospect."

"There you have it. Assuming there are no other objections I'll need two of our fastest Qi Condensation cultivators, to deliver these talismans. If you're confident in your speed, then step forward."

Slightly hesitatingly, two sect members stepped up. One of them, to Castor's surprise was the young man who'd questioned Persus earlier. The other was one of the other Golden Devil cultivators, a slim younger girl with straw blonde hair plaited down her back. Persus presented them with the talismans, then turned back to the rest of the group.

"Right! With all that said, it's time to descend. We'll step in if anyone looks like they're in serious danger, but for the most part the three of us are going to try and preserve our Qi for the fight with the beaver, so we'll be travelling in the middle of the group. Golden Devils, advance!"

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The silence in the mines was oppressive. Every breath Castor took, he felt as if he might awaken some ancient, unfathomable creature, a being that humanity hadn't laid eyes on for incalculable eons.

They'd been descending through the winding tunnels of the mine for a few hours now, and though things had begun jovially, cultivators talking excitedly amongst themselves about what they'd spend the mission's contribution points on, as the surface became further and further away, the damp, all consuming darkness began to weigh on hearts and minds. They began to whisper, then barely speak at all, as flickering lanterns that had been brought along for the trip to conserve Qi cast shadows that seemed to ebb and flow like ink, immediate surroundings brought into sharp relief but anything beyond them an invisible wall of pitch black that promised unknowable horrors.

It was only once they'd reached the deepths of the mines, hundreds of meters below the surface, with a rock mass that could kill a Nascent Soul cultivator hanging over their heads that they finally heard something. It could've been anything, some tiny spirit beast, or a bat, or even just a pebble, carelessly kicked ahead of them. Regardless, though, a pall settled over the group in an instant, quiet, whispered conversation fading out of existence as everyone in the group listened, straining their eyes in hopes of catching a glimpse of something, anything, in the darkness beyond the lanterns, something to dispel that ominous mystery of what lay ahead. Nothing made itself known, though, and hearts weighed even heavier then before, the mission team pressed on into the umbral abyss, hairs on end and nerves already frayed to their limits.

Finally, they came upon what could only be the entrance to the Throne-Building Desert Beaver's home, the rough tunnel stretch off past the range of their lanterns and hewed with distinct bite marks.

Then, in the distance, a patter. Almost imperceptible at first, it built up to a rumble. Something was coming up the tunnel. Weapons were readied, eyes straining once again until, to the belief of all, Geryis cast an incantation, illuminating the tunnel with soft but steady light. Castor almost wished she hadn't.

What was charging towards them could only be described as a tide of flesh. Hundreds of mortals charged down the wide, their clothes tattered and covered in reddish gold fur that glinted in the magical lack.

The miners themselves looked horrible. To a man they were horribly emaciated, flesh seeming glued on to thin, twiglike limbs and malnourished torsos, ribs poking prominently out of their chests. Many of them sported festering wounds and scars, unbandaged and unseen too, and some even lacked limbs, blackened, rotted stumps all that remained where their gangrenous limbs had once sat. They wielded pickaxes, looked as chipped and worn down as they were, with manic strength. The worst part for Castor, though, was their eyes. They weren't the eyes of human beings. Even the Blood Path cultivator Castor had fought's eyes couldn't even be compared to these lifeless glazed, milky white marbles, locked on to their targets yet at the same time seeming to look right through them. Not one of them uttered a sound as they charged, the only noise they made the patter of their shoeless feet against the sandstone floor of the tunnel.

As the two sides finally met, resolute cultivators against a mindless horde, what ensued couldn't even be called a fight. Every strike from the Qi Condensation cultivators killed or crippled, but their enemies didn't care in the slight. When they died their bodies seemed to simply curl up, dying as soundlessly as they'd attacked while two more of their fellows took their place, swinging their picks with wild abandon and no regard for their own comrades. When a blow was crippling they simply carried on without a sound. At one point Castor was almost brained with a pickaxe when a hand gripped on to his ankle with rictus force, one miner continuing his attack even after Castor had shattered both his knees. Still, though, they were in no true danger. Whenever a blow came too close one of the Foundation establishment cultivators stepped in. It was a surreal, silent battle, the dim blue magical light lending the scene and ethereal quality.

When the last of the miners finally fell, though, Castor only felt sickened. Already some of the other young Qi Condensation cultivators were doubled over, vomiting in disgust as the Foundation Establishment cultivators looked on, even their expressions (The ones not concealed by a black hood anyways) showing a disquieted disgust.

When calm had finally been restored, and gorges were no longer on the rise, the Foundation Establishment cultivators gathered everyone together, then pushed on. Argent scouted ahead, melting out of the shadows with a warning whenever another horde of mindless miners was imminent while Geryis kep the battlefield illuminated and the Qi Condensation cultivators alive, if only just. Persus directed the battle lines, occasionally stepping into the melee himself when the line became strained, though with none of the savage joy he had shown fighting beasts. It was the most grating, exhausting and brutal next few hours of Castor's life. Finally, though, it came to an end when, at the end of the longest tunnel yet, they emerged into what could only be described as an arena.

An almost perfect semicircle, the room stretched on for what Castor estimated to be a few kilometers, the ceiling stretching so high it almost vanished out of range of Geryis' light. It gave Castor the impression of being in a globe, especially with the loosely packed sand underneath his feet. And sitting in the dead center of the room, and a massive, raised sandstone dais, was their quarry.

The beaver was even bigger then Castor had expected it to be. It looked almost three meters tall, and nearly that wide, built like a massive, furry barrel. It's fur was wiry and thick, a lustrous, tawny red-gold. It's eyes, though, looked like malevolent black marbles. This wasn't a simple animal. Castor could feel the hatred in it's eyes as it sized up the intruders in it's throne-room, flashing bladelike front teeth as it almost barked at them, it's voice a feral, bass rumble. No words, but the intent was certainly clear enough. More so then even the beaver, though, it was the figure standing next to it that really seized Castor's attention.

The Under-Light Miner was everything Castor hoped for it to be, and more. Standing a meter taller then even it's current master, the Miner shone, it's burnished bronze form seeming undamaged by it's time without maintenance. It was armoured in a style Castor had only seen in books, heavy plate covering it's form in the approximation of some mortal knight, though the image was destroyed somewhat by the massive pickaxe resting on it's shoulder. Barely visibly under it's bronze visor, blue sensors gleamed in an approximation of eyes, zipping across the team of cultivators squaring off against it at the chamber's entrance. Just laying eyes on the treads, Castor felt his confidence in his plan begin to track. The thick bronze wheels looked as robust and strong as the rest of the automaton, the rubber tracks unblemished by the sand and sandstone. Still, his idea was their best change. They would just need to trust in Geryis's skill.

As the beaver glared down at the intruders, most of them glared right back. If any of them had simply seen it as a wild animal that doubt had vanished the minute they entered the creature's tunnels. Animal or not, even members of a "demonic" sect like the Golden Devils couldn't help but be disgusted by what they'd seen. After another moment of silent standoff, the three Foundation Establishment cultivators blurred into movement, Geryis taking to their air with talismans in all three sets of hands and chants on their lips as Persus charged the Spirit Beast directly, low to the ground in a dead sprint as a grin finally bloomed on his face. Argent seemed to just vanish into a blur and puff of sand. The beaver, in the meantime, leapt from it's throne, and, as it touched the sand the sand, seemed to simply sink in, slipping under the sand without even a ripple.

Their battle, though, wasn't Castor's concern. Half of the Qi Condensation cultivators had been assigned to guide the door while the other half, Castor included, would try and enact the plan to incapacitate the automaton. Quickly, those few among them equipped with ranged weapons opened fire one on the automaton, which had begun to move into the path of Persus. As arrows, spells, and other projectiles clanged off of it's helmeted head, though, the Miner turned it's attention away from him, and towards it's aggressors. It's advance was slow but deliberate, it's pickaxe poised for a devastating swing as it advanced towards them. Taking one of it's hit dead one was a non-option, even a mostly nullified blow from a foe as strong as this one might cripple them.

So, they split up. The ranged fighters continued to retreat backwards, sonorous incantations and the twang of bowstrings signifying their continued assault. Melee combatants, on the other hand, broke off the sides, many of them making their way all the way around to it's back. Castor himself, well, he mostly just stayed out of the way. Automatons didn't exactly have pressure points, and he doubted the pitiful amount of bronze blood he could focus into his fingertips would have a prayer of even scratching the thick plates.

Pollux, though, was on an all-out assault. A barrage of extendable jabs clanged into the automatons torso, the brazen front to the combined melee attack as swords, spear, clubs and various other weapons screeched and clanged into the automaton's arms, head and torso. He almost paid for it too, as Castor desperately directed his automaton to leap out of range, narrowly avoiding a swing from the pickaxe as it whistled through the air. It was slow by the standards of a Foundation Establishment cultivator, maybe, but to Qi Condensation cultivators like them, it was still quick as a whip. If they wanted to plant the talismans, they'd need to do better then this to grab it's attention. A risk would need to be taken. Luckily, much as it had been a slapjob when first developed, there was a weapon installed in Pollux that could do the deed.

Rushing over to a spear wielding Qi Condensation cultivator, Castor relayed his idea and asked him to help spread it around. They looked, well, skeptical to say the least, but it was obvious nobody else had a better idea so they reluctantly agreed. That done, the two of them were able to disseminate the idea quickly, and soon enough, Pollux stood alone, narrowly avoiding the Miner's ponderous swings, Castor wincing at every tortured shriek of metal on metal that signalled a close call. Then, the perfect opening arrived, a horizontal swing aimed directly at the side of Pollux's. Twisting to face the oncoming blow, though, Pollux didn't dodge.

Instead, with a series of whirrs and clicks Pollux's chest cavity opened, bronze jaws ready. As the tip of the pick sped into the opening they snapped shut, metal grinding against metal as Pollux was carried into the air, pick still caught on the bronze jaws. Castor grimaced as he saw the tip of the pick piercing out through Pollux's back, but he'd been more or less expecting that. Pollux's vitals had been rearranged shortly after he'd returned home from the Elastic Ape mission, wouldn't do to have such an obvious structural weak point.

As the pick's movement was finally arrested, Pollux still impaled on the tip, Castor feared, for a moment, that Pollux would simply be flung off by the moment. Thankfully though the jaws held, the pick, unlike the automaton, was hardly master artifice. Staring up at it's fellow automaton, impaled on the tip of it's weapon, the automaton's eye sensors blinked as it considered how to address this strange variable.

On cue, both of the cultivators holding the freezing talismans sprung into action, closing in and planting both on the burnished bronze wheels before quickly retreating. Distraction successful, Castor released the bronze jaws, Pollux pulling himself off the pick's tip with a metallic screech before dropping back to the ground and leaping out of range himself. In that same instant Geryis, who had been keeping just a sliver of her consciousness directed towards the other battle in the room, activated the talismans.

The effect was almost explosive, chilling air blast any too close to the Automaton back as ice and frost quickly crept over the treads. With a sickening grind, the Miner tried to move forward and attack one it's targets, but the treads were unresponsive, it was stuck fast. The Miner was, for the time being at least, no longer a threat. With a sigh of relief, a mixture of thankfulness that he hadn't needed to destroy one of his family's masterworks and that Pollux hadn't been too badly damaged, Castor turned his eyes to the other battle that had been taking place in the room in the meantime, and almost wished he hadn't.

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Damn it, he knew he shouldn't have trusted a report from some rookie. This beaver was easily near the peak of Foundation Establishment. Another decade or two, and it might reach Core Formation at this rate. They needed to kill this thing here, or it'd become a big enough issue that a major section of the clan's forces would need to be deployed to deal with it, and that couldn't be allowed. This damn beaver, of course, didn't particularly care how inconvenient it's existence was to the clan. Persus had been hunting Spirit Beasts for 80 years now, and he could honestly say this was one of his toughest quarries yet. His companions weren't too bad either, Geryis was excellent heavy artillery with her combination spells, and Argent's Qi needles were able to keep it somewhat disoriented, even if this thing was a terrible matchup for her. But damned if this Spirit Beast wasn't given them a run anyways. He threw himself out of the way of another high speed pillar of sand, cradling the massive bite in his side as he concentrated the bronze into his nails, charging forward to try and strike at it's haunch to try and arrest all it's movement, only to be met with a blast of air as it swung it's rudderlike tail. He needed something more then just his current backup if he wanted to do any more then keep it in check. If he could just land a crippling strike, anything to slow it down or bleed it, then he could turn the tables and bring it down.

Then, off to his right, he felt a slight blast of chill air. Persus looked over, hopeful, and sure enough, the Miner was stuck in place, pick swinging futilely at targets well out of it's range. They could count on the Miner not to join in now, at least, and tip the balance. Still, he needed a chance…

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The fight didn't look to be going well. Persus was clutching at wound in his side, and as resilient as body cultivators were even they couldn't regenerate blood at the speed he was using it. Geryis was still aloft, but all three of her bodies were sweating and panting, incantations coming out in laboured gasps. Castor didn't see Argent but well, he couldn't imagine her state was much better.

The beaver certainly hadn't emerged unscathed either. It's skin was marred with cuts and gouges, patches of burnt and frozen fur dotting it's frame. One of these baleful, glaring eyes even appeared to have been pierced by a precisely aimed fist. Still, though, none of the strikes looked grievous, and the beaver didn't look nearly as exhausted as it's opponents either.

One bow wielding cultivator, not thinking, blurted out what was nevertheless of everyone else's minds.

"They're losing."

The cultivators next to him cuffed him on the back of the head, but they all knew he was right. The Golden Devil cultivators were one wrong move away from a bad blow that would tip the scales in the beaver's favour. Still, what were they supposed to do? The fight they were watching now was in an entirely different league from the one they'd just gone through. Interfering would be tantamount to suicide.

"We've got to do something to give them a chance, anything."

"Are you kidding? If any of us got involved in that we'd die."

"If we don't step in they'll die, and then we'll just be next on the menu."

"…You're right, but what can we do? If any of us tried to attack it we'd just get in the way."

"…I don't know."

As discussion raged, Castor stood silent, mind whirling. They weren't wrong. The Miner might have been one thing, but this fight was an entirely different beast. The difference in strength was just way too big for them to even try and injure the beaver. But they still needed to do something. But there didn't seem to be anything they COULD do. Then, it hit him. They didn't need to do anything to the beaver, injuring it was simply outside their abilities. All they needed to do was give Persus, Argent or Geryis the opportunity to do the job themselves. The difference in power, in comparison with the beaver, was as much of a strength as it was a weakness in this situation, as long as he was willing to take the risk. And Castor was. It had one big weakness, something it hadn't had before, that Castor might be able to use to disrupt it.

So, Pollux in tow, Castor began to make his way towards the fighting. Slowly and deliberately, Castor approached, breathing quiet, steps light, trying to do as little as possible to make his presence known. Persus and Geryis both looked confused for a moment, he even saw a flash of anger on the Beast Hunter's face, until he saw Castor's angle of approach. It was no small risk, but still, an opening was exactly what they need, and this might provide one, however small. Persus dove in, redoubling his assault and keeping the beaver in place, attention focused on his as Geryis and Argent peppered it with spells and near-imperceptible flashes of silver. Close and closer Castor came, until, finally, he was only a meter or so away, even the blowback of the exchange forcing Castor to dig in his heels to remain in place. Then, in time with Pollux, he punched the beaver in the ruins of it's eye.

The reaction was instant. With a bark of pain, the beaver swung a paw out, smashing into Castor's chest, a purely reflexive reaction. Castor felt a crack, then a rush of air, and then…black.

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Apparently the opening he'd created had been just enough to do the job. In the same instant he'd been hurled away, Persus had struck with a punch to it's abdomen, burying his entire forearm into it's vitals as Geryis use her remaining major talisman, scorching the flesh from it's back with a massive fireball. Argent, in the meantime, had caught him before he was turned into a grease stain on the wall, something he was quite grateful for, much as it annoyed him that she'd vanished as soon as the mission was done, ostensibly to travel back to the clan compound and inform them of the mission's success.

The contribution point bonus was nice, Castor supposed, and considering how much of the beaver's body he was going to be given he was sure he'd be able to install something interesting into Pollux. For the time being, though, he certainly wouldn't be cultivating, with half the bones in his body broken and his meridians thoroughly out of balance.

On the plus side, stuck in the city as he was, he'd been given free reign to watch the resident Mechanikos work on and maintain the Under-Light Miner, which was why he was here in the first place. Something to look forward to. In the mean time, though, he was going to take a nap. Bones weren't going to heal themselves, and he needed to get done with this bedrest quickly, so he could redouble his cultivation efforts. Couldn't be falling behind.

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Would like to request a lifesaving treasure as my reward this turn, for, well, obvious reasons.
 
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Ghost fibres and cores are key to the Sect's Soul Foundation Soups,
Mmmm. Soul Food.

I wonder if this sect ever "processes" an enemy cultivator body/spirit? Seems like something that would make sense. Immortal fertilizer, or just broken down spirit of an enemy to help nourish the Demon Ghost Graveyards and ensure the place doesnt lose potency.

Also
Immortality's End Spirit Mine
do I understand this place right in that this is basically a Noob Mine? Is it just that effort is not worthwhile for higher level cultivators, or is there some sort of restriction?
 
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