Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Anyway, if the new turn hasn't started, I'll probably wrap up Rina's character arc from this turn with one final omake tomorrow, and then start planning Turn Five.

I'm not sure if I want to take a poke at the Yuan Clan secret Realm. On the one hand, it's safer than the previous run, but on the other hand, this run was dangerous as shit even if I had great rolls for it! Do I want to push my luck? (I should be though, if I want my ambition to be fruitful, hrm)

But based on how it's described, it's also good for Cultivation Boosts and Lifespan Boosts, which are what I want the most right now to grab Thirteenth Heavenstage (Twelfth is in range next turn pretty much no matter what, because it requires 20 more years of cultivation, meaning even mediocre rolls will spit that out next turn).

But if it doesn't go well, I'm one less LST when the Trials hit, and that is very much something I want to hedge my bets for, decisions decisions.
 
Dude just do it lmao, you've likely got a sufficient Fate backlog to mitigate even the worst possible elements on top of the defensive and Life Saving Treasures you already have.
 
Anyway, if the new turn hasn't started, I'll probably wrap up Rina's character arc from this turn with one final omake tomorrow, and then start planning Turn Five.

I'm not sure if I want to take a poke at the Yuan Clan secret Realm. On the one hand, it's safer than the previous run, but on the other hand, this run was dangerous as shit even if I had great rolls for it! Do I want to push my luck? (I should be though, if I want my ambition to be fruitful, hrm)

But based on how it's described, it's also good for Cultivation Boosts and Lifespan Boosts, which are what I want the most right now to grab Thirteenth Heavenstage (Twelfth is in range next turn pretty much no matter what, because it requires 20 more years of cultivation, meaning even mediocre rolls will spit that out next turn).

But if it doesn't go well, I'm one less LST when the Trials hit, and that is very much something I want to hedge my bets for, decisions decisions.
You know, it occurs to me that people inside secret realms will probably be safe from the dangers of the trial. Given the Yuan Secret realm is not as dangerous as the other one, maybe it's actually safer to have our good seed and talented junior go there?
 
One more omake to wrap up the training arc and transition to the war, then an omake all about the War. :D I have Plans.
I can already hear the drum beats of the War Drums and the legion preparing to set off!
But if it doesn't go well, I'm one less LST when the Trials hit, and that is very much something I want to hedge my bets for, decisions decisions.
Hmm, depending on how the Trials are handled you might be able to make it ? Since technically the end of Turn 5 is before the start of Turn 6, you might be able to make Turn 6's boon a LST for use for the Turn 6 Good Seed Report where we know the result of the Trials.

Of course that is only if the Trial results are treated the same way as Fate Rolls.
You know, it occurs to me that people inside secret realms will probably be safe from the dangers of the trial. Given the Yuan Secret realm is not as dangerous as the other one, maybe it's actually safer to have our good seed and talented junior go there?
Eh, i mean pros and cons are probably about even i think. In the realm they won't face the Trial participants but have all the risks of the Secret Realm. Outside, the Trial but the Clan will try to protect the Good Seed + Jolly cooperation with your peers.

Although judging from the timespan involved, i feel that both can still happen since Enter + Exiting the realm in turn 5, while the Trial starts at Turn 6 since it's 26 years away
 
Eirene of Nowhere 3 - the air is different here
@occipitallobe
Eirene of Nowhere third omake: the air is different here​

Eirene of Nowhere, as can be guessed from her name, grew up in the desert.

Oh, the carnival visited areas fortified by the Golden Devils from time to time, the smaller of the larger settlements - big enough to be protected from the desert, small enough for Speckled Mirror to visit. But those were all frantic events - grander perfomances for larger audiences, the healer's tent inundated with patients so Eirene could barely even carve out time to play once a day or so, when Healer Xia Fan sent her to rest and get her mind off rotting flesh, bile and the smell of herbs.

Her memories of those places generally just ended up a jumbled mess of highlights, an overall impression of elation at success or of fear if something went wrong and they ended up driven out, and a lot of sickness for her to face and help defeat.

Most of her life was the carnival trudging between settlements, or even stopping some distance from one to refine their perfomance before entering. Children ran around on roads of hard packed sand and stumbled around the dunes; the caravan mostly stayed covered during the day and moved at night. It was a harsh life, but one she loved every bit of, the jarring alternating cold and warm air and rare moments of non-campfire-non-wagon comfort at nightfall and daybreak; the small critters furtively darting here and there; the larger beasts sometimes looming in the distance, especially when she played. The endlessly quiet loneliness if you just went a minute away from the circle of wagons; the loud and loving family immediately inside them.

Now she lived here, and everything was different. The air, the water, even the clothes everyone wore were completely different, suited to the environment the Golden Devils' arrays created here, not to the harshness of the desert. It wasn't nearly as cold here at night; the sun's rays weren't nearly so merciless during the day. People were everywhere, and it was the small nooks where they weren't, the reverse of what Eirene's instincts told her. Duck inside and you'll be alone - it was absurd, and yet it made perfect sense in the new context she now found herself in.

She knew almost no-one and almost no-one knew her; crowds offered a comforting, relaxing solitude of their own. She'd barely caught glimpses of this feeling before: safe because you are surrounded by people, on your own because none of them care where you go. In the rare moments she carved out for herself these days she would often climb on rooftops, sitting there and playing; some would notice and look at her, most just moved about their day.

She knew, in abstract, that other territories that weren't governed by the Golden Devils directly had even large settlements like this one unprotected from the desert. She had a hard time imagining that: the smaller villages were too drastically different from the cities, imagining one that was the capital while still being a village was... confusing.

But she was learning, she was listening and hearing, picking up manners and terminology used around here, bits and pieces, odds and ends of how the Golden Devils saw themselves and everyone else. She was one of them now; it was odd, to be accepted among cultivators as one of their own without question. Well, and she was a cultivator; her music apparently was cultivation, the way she meditated and directed the energies around her with the tune and her will. That was as it should be, but that others would recognize it without challenge...

Eirene wasn't used to outsiders giving her trust for free.

Wasn't like she wasn't going to live up to it, though, anyway.
end omake​
 
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I can already hear the drum beats of the War Drums and the legion preparing to set off!

Hmm, depending on how the Trials are handled you might be able to make it ? Since technically the end of Turn 5 is before the start of Turn 6, you might be able to make Turn 6's boon a LST for use for the Turn 6 Good Seed Report where we know the result of the Trials.

Of course that is only if the Trial results are treated the same way as Fate Rolls.

Eh, i mean pros and cons are probably about even i think. In the realm they won't face the Trial participants but have all the risks of the Secret Realm. Outside, the Trial but the Clan will try to protect the Good Seed + Jolly cooperation with your peers.

Although judging from the timespan involved, i feel that both can still happen since Enter + Exiting the realm in turn 5, while the Trial starts at Turn 6 since it's 26 years away

Rina needs to be around for the Trials, she's going to be a key factor of DA PLAN.

Namely, having something who's combat strength is described as 'Invincible within Qi Condensation' to start going to town against the enemy's Qi Condensation block.
 
I got no Omakes left in me this turn, but i do have some musings!

Idle Musing: Cool Thing Bonus, a Cultivation Art that allows for the creation of clones like the Monkey King Sun Wukong. I mean the idea of combat clones are cool although given how Xianxia power levels work, i'm not sure if it counts as a Attk, defence or utility boost...

I do see ways to build up on it though for each. Attk is probably the weakest since Xianxia is all about concentration of power, but maybe the clones can use Formations or something. Defencewise, most obvious would be the way bunshin are used in Naruto. Utility will probably be scouting and searching.

And if i want to go deeper into the legend, i can probably fluff the next stage as a defensive boost since the Monkey King's body was born from a rock etc.
Rina needs to be around for the Trials, she's going to be a key factor of DA PLAN.

Namely, having something who's combat strength is described as 'Invincible within Qi Condensation' to start going to town against the enemy's Qi Condensation block.
True. Again i think it really depends on how @occipitallobe chooses to depict the trials. If it's the Turn 5 and Turn 6 way i listed out, i would probably aim for the Yuan Secret Realm next turn if my good seed makes it out intact this turn since i like the idea of him throwing himself into greater risks to squeeze out every chance he has to become stronger for the Clan.

But if it's part of Turn 5, i'll skip the Secret Realm regardless of his condition this turn since it doesn't suit the narrative i have for him if he isn't here when the Clan needs him.
 
Personally, i'm of this thought as well. The moment I saw that they attempted to use Child Gulper as a borrowed Knife, i knew that we're dealing with a Xianxia faction with all the cliches listed in the genre.

After all it is a staple that regardless of how direct or honorable the sect is, the Top tier are always schemers. It's the reason they got so far and how they survive their peers.

Well. Time to decide my Good Seed's Life Or Death!

Aiii, Ferenike going to WAAARRR!!! i am ready to read about the crushing of our foes and the lamentations of their Bees!


So erm, technically speaking. Your 2nd omake onwards just grants a Fate Roll to your Good Seed's fate. The Omake Boons are only applicable to 1 omake per turn to prevent just stacking Omake boons.
Ahh, I see, I see. Hm. That throws a wrench into what I had in mind for the third omake, admittedly. Ah well, I'm only a thousand words in, I'll shelve it until after the coming report and throw together something else for the final omake this turn.
 
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Savvas Nicolidis 2 - Conversations with an Elder
Savvas Nicolidis - Conversations with an Elder

Some decades ago..

"Breaking through is always the worst." Grigoris grumbled.

"What's it like?" Savvas inquired, eyes full of curiosity and interest.

"It's having all the doubt in the world thrown at you, it's what it is! All the flaws and weakness in your beautifully sculpted beliefs!" Grigoris said.

"The Dao, right?" Savvas asked.

"The Dao. The path you walk. Your beliefs. Who you are inside. Heaven spends it's time tearing it all down. Like having your heart ripped out over and over, it's what it is." Grigoris added.

"So how do you know when you're ready to breakthrough?" The young Savvas asked.

"Pesh. You'll know when you're ready, not a moment before. When you're willing to die for it is when you're ready. When nobody can make you change your mind, is when you're ready." Grigoris declared.

"I was just thinking, maybe you'd have debates, over how your Dao is the exact right one. Figure out all the flaws before you breakthrough? That'd make it easier?"" Savvas wondered.

"Ha! You're lucky I follow the Dao of the Architect. That's exactly what I would do. Except of course, you see, people can't ever admit they're wrong, and that's even truer the higher up you go. Admitting you're wrong means backsliding! You have to reason out how exactly you're right and the other person is wrong." Grigoris said.

"Is that why cultivators fight each other so often?" Savvas opined.

"Hmph. If I was building cultivation and I wanted people to fight, that'd be something to do. Pesh, damn heavens.. Who makes a world where compromise makes you weak?" Grigoris grumbled. "If I build this damn system, it'd be all different, I tell you. The part where it hurts like hell to cultivate definitely has to go, for starters.."

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Now

"Savvas! Still alive?" Came the call from Grigoris. "Got your cultivation base maimed or what? I'm seeing you stuck in the 4th Qi heavenstage still. Did you give up on building to your future already?"

"I was researching cultivation, damnit. How to make it easier. Instead I made one-time use stealth ointment."

"Take my advise. Don't sidetrack on any of this. Just cultivate."

"Really? Grigoris, the one who constantly is out there building and building?"

"When I was your age, Savvas, I cultivated near every waking hour! That's how I got to Foundation Establishment to begin with! When everyone else were running around getting married, I was cultivating. While the others were farming herbs, I was cultivating. While they were slacking off, I was cultivating. Now look where I am now! Now, I contribute to the clan far more than I ever could have."

"That's all there really is to cultivation?"

"At your rate of questioning to cultivating, you won't even make the 9th Heavenstage before you're 200, my boy."

"You know what? I'll get to the 9th by the time I'm 80. Actually, you know what? I'll get to the 13th! Then I'll access one of those secret ultimate pillars stage that's around somewhere and knock you flat on the floor."

"Hah! That's the spirit. I'll look forward to that day where it happens."

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(Takes place during Turn 2, when Savvas was a 1st heavenstage Qi Condenser, then on Turn 4, while Savvas was stagnating in his cultivation.)

Bonus: Uhh, TBD for now. Maybe a cultivation boost. QM's Choice! Gacha rolls ahoy!
 
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Amaranth Castellanos 3 - Fortuitous Encounter!
Amaranth Castellanos
Fortuitous Encounter!

(The Core Bandit Incident, 40 years ago.)

Amaranth sat down in the building, watching the Scorpion Road. Guard outposts like these were common here, since this trade-route guaranteed the flow of trade through the Golden-Devil Sect and its affiliated cities. After all, the wealth of spirit stones from the mines meant a lot less if it couldn't be traded, so it was vitally important to keep this passage safe and secure from the myriad bandits who wanted the wealth the merchants carried and the hungry spirit beasts and other dangerous creatures that sought to kill them. That way, people kept on coming, and the Golden Devils benefited.

As for the small-scale, Amaranth was taking a mission as a guard now for three main reasons. One, it paid fairly well in contribution points, which were always useful. Two, because it was a job where he could have a reliable source of foes to kill, to feed his body. Three, and most importantly in his view, from time to time it got him really good fights, where he was pushed to the edge of his ability. Combat was one of the great joys of his life, after all. (The other being eating good food, of course. One of the side-benefits of killing spirit beasts often is that you'd have fairly good meat to sell if he made the kill clean enough, and he had been making some forays into the field himself, considering how much free time he had. At the moment, he was pretty much a novice, though.)

Fortunately or unfortunately, depending on one's perspective, while the poor luck of his Clan often meant that the Scorpion Road was more dangerous than it should be, often the major tides of misfortune struck elsewhere, and even the few difficult fights were beginning to dry up.

He could still remember the last one. It was one of the Organ Meat Desert's classic Sand Worms that had decided that it would try to gobble up the caravan. Unusually stealthy even for a Sand-Worm, they hadn't realized it was poised to strike even when it was barely a cart-length away. Even with the help of the other guards, without his Fist of the Hungering Beast, he'd surely have been a goner.

Though he tried to dodge, he had ended up taking some bad wounds from its opening strike. His hand hovered over his left side, healed at this point, and he winced in reminiscence. Without the Qi he stole he wouldn't have been able to ablate enough of the Worm's dying attack to keep him alive, or at least not heavily injured.

All of that being said, it still had been years since a fight of that level, and he was starting to grow antsy. He itched to sink his fists into an opponent of power once more instead of the myriad chaff that attacked the roads, and other than that...

Well, he noted as a general tendency, the stronger a spirit beast was, the richer the flavor of their flesh would be. It was a side effect of the sheer spiritual energy permeating and perfecting their form, he thought.

That wasn't to say all spiritual beasts were delicious, of course. That Worm wasn't exactly palatable after being cooked, though to be fair that could just have been a matter of his personal dislike for its texture. He had heard from rumors that people from far off, near the Third Sea, ate the limbs of a strange creature called a squid that lived in the waters. It was a chewy, rubbery dish, and he thought that the gigantic spirit worm that he ate pieces of might have had a similar mouthfeel.

Of course, all of that was simple speculation to say the least. He'd never even seen the Third Sea in his life beyond pictures, after all. Anyways, while that may have not been to his taste, there was that wonderful Spirit Ostrich a few years even before the Worm that he did enjoy.

It was a blazingly fast beast, with wind-aspected qi naturally permeating through its feathers, pushing air aside and behind into jets to hasten its pace. The guards had worked together to hold it off despite its vastly superior speed. The power of formations really was something else. It was bleeding badly, and looked like it was going to get taken out quietly, but then it vanished. His next feeling was a stab of pain as it speared straight through his shoulder with its talon. At the time, he hadn't blinked an eye, since the rush of battle-thirst through his body had been so eager that even as his wound leaked crimson, he emptied his other arm to fell it with a Hungering Strike.

To an average person, this situation might seem peculiar. Normally, Spirit Ostriches weren't aggressive to the caravans that crossed the Scorpion Road, since they'd usually content themselves with the spirit lizards and insects that wandered across the desert without caring enough about the caravans to make such an attack, so one might wonder what happened.

That time, things had been different. A foolish traveler had decided that stealing the Ostrich's eggs straight out of its nest for breakfast would be a smart idea, and he failed to consider the fact that their mother might come looking back to check for them.

Worse yet, the traveler had already started to scramble one of the eggs into a gigantic omelet when the ostrich arrived to attack, so there wasn't even the possibility of avoiding the conflict entirely.

Either way, at the end, it turned out fine. Amaranth and the other guards demanded an egg each in recompense for the traveler's mistake, and he acquiesced.

With one of the remaining eggs and some chopped cooked pieces of the ostrich's meat, some stored pepper and salt, as well as some boiled cactus leaves, Amaranth made himself an omelette the next day. It was pretty rough in shape considering he didn't have much experience with eggs of this size, but while the appearance can matter, in this situation the actual taste mattered a whole lot more. Amaranth loved it, and he fondly thought of that omelet in his days ahead. It was too bad he didn't see an ostrich of that level since. That probably meant his memory of that omelet likely was slightly exaggerated by longing and nostalgia, but he firmly still believed that it probably was mostly as good as he remembered it like.

As he relaxed and watched the latest passing caravan, a sudden pressure descended upon the area. It was the aura of a vast amount of Qi of incredible density, guided into a point by a single unswerving ideal. In other words, it was the aura of a Core Formation expert releasing the power of their cultivation base. Amaranth jerked up in alarm, and rushed alongside the other guards to see what was happening.

There wasn't one Core Formation Cultivator. There were two. One was a woman with the unmistakable bronze of the Golden Devil Clan holding a sword of spirit-forged bronze, and the other seemed to be a man in the clothes of someone from the Turtle-World. They both seemed to have taken quite a bit of damage at this point, and their reserves felt like they were half-eaten away despite their might. The fight was looking like it'd close out in an hour now, which Amaranth knew to mean it'd end soon, considering the duration Core Formation fights normally took.

Worse, Amaranth didn't know who would win. If the bandit won, Amaranth and the rest of the Qi Condensation guards would be absolutely slaughtered. That couldn't be allowed. But what could they do? It's not like they could contribute directly to the fight, after all. A Qi Condensation level cultivator would get wiped out easier than swatting a fly by this foe. Something felt off about that thought. No, there definitely was something that he could do. He started to search his memories when a guard shouted out.

"Channel power to the Qi-Pooling Formation!"

At this point, the numerous guards from this outpost and the ones that were relatively close had gathered, forming a crowd that watched the fight in front. Most were wary, some were vaguely excited to have something cut up their tedium, but there certainly was an undercurrent of fear running through.

That being said, they were members of the Golden Devil Clan. They wouldn't break so easily. The cultivators poured their Qi into the Formation, which shot an invisible beam of energy to the Clan Core Formation Expert. Immediately, the flagging reserves of the Core Formation Expert was bolstered, and rose up. Taking advantage of the increase of Qi, the woman poured more power into her techniques. The gleaming Sword Qi that blasted with each stroke of her blade started emerging with greater force and speed, and the bandit found it difficult to cope, as exhausted as he was. The sword weaved a maze of cutting force which was rapidly but barely dodged.

Finally, the bandit made a misstep. When a blast from below was dodged by leaping above, the bandit lined up in the path of a blast that bisected his head and shoulders right off his body. Stunned, the bandit didn't move in time to prevent the rest of his body from being roughly chopped into pieces by the incoming sword intent. Blood spewed out from the remains of his body, a significant amount launched at the nearby crowd as an aftershock of the attack.

Amaranth was focusing his whole mind on giving Qi to the Clan Cultivator, so he didn't notice the stream of blood aimed in his general direction until it nearly hit. He turned, but his speed wasn't nearly sufficient to get out of the way. The blood completely drenched his clothes, his face, and the rest of his body.

For a second, his constitution was just in shocked awe. Even though the Core Formation bandit was exhausted, its blood was a source of powerful Qi that far surpassed anything it had consumed in the past. The moment of shock didn't last long, though.

The hunger of his constitution had been fully awakened, and the entirety of his skin flashed grey. The crimson fluid streamed into his body at a rapid pace as if it turned into a vortex, and grey sparks danced across his skin as impurities were pushed out and vaporized. The rich Qi of Core Formation was on a completely different level, and the boundaries that kept him in the Fifth Heavenstage were being shattered open. He had been trying his best to open Meridians in this stage, but it was a time-consuming process. However, the impurities in his meridians were nothing compared to the sheer electric force that this Qi possessed, and were wiped away like it with the ease of someone flicking their sleeve. In seconds, the channels that he had spent so long trying to laboriously open were completely unblocked, and his Qi rushed straight through, bringing Amaranth to the Sixth Heavenstage. The power soon rapidly thickened and deepened, bringing him to the Seventh, and then the Eight. At this point, Amaranth was just feeling utter euphoria. But then, he remembered something, and his thoughts came down to earth.

The Eighth Heavenstage was infamous for being a barrier to many a Qi Condensation cultivator in terms of preventing advancement to the Foundation Establishment stage. The Dantian had to be carefully shaped and expanded so it would be able to fit Dao Pillars in the first place, and then further so the traditional set of Seven could be fit so breaking through to Core Formation would be a possibility in the future.

It was well known among the Golden Devils that if one took the laborious path to make Eight Dao-Pillars, the so-called True Dao Pillars, one's future breakthroughs would be eased and the holder would even get a much coveted boost to their luck, which was a rare thing for the Golden Devils indeed. Amaranth had long resolved to take this path, as he wanted to seize advantages to prevent a situation where he's inherently at a disadvantage compared to the others from occurring again. However, the current issue was that the sheer amount of power rushing through his body right now wasn't exactly good for the precise control that it took to shape the Dantian.

He gathered his will, and clamped it as best as he could onto the Qi. If it was any other circumstance, this Qi would have probably thrown him off as easily as a stallion would throw off a baby trying to ride it. However, the fact that this Qi had been processed by his body gave him some level of authority over it. Not enough to completely bring it to a stop, but enough to guide the process. He carefully circulated the power evenly throughout the edges of his Dantian in the traditional technique of the Golden Devils.

Normally, this'd be a much slower process, but that wouldn't be possible in the current situation. He felt flares of pain as he tried to make his dantian adapt to becoming larger at a much faster rate than it should, like a pressure in his chest. To be honest, he was surprised that he hadn't torn it apart by now, but unbeknownst to him, that too was a feature of the Bloodsoaked Bronze Body. It'd be awfully bad at assimilating power if the wielder's spiritual organs couldn't deal with an influx like this, after all.

That being said, it wasn't omnipotent, and trying to assimilate power two great stages above in a safe manner was difficult, to say the least. Holding the Qi felt like he was trying to chain lightning, and although somehow, paradoxically, it was working right now, it was beginning to slip from his grasp. Blasts of Qi started irregularly coming from the jagged, twisting mass, and his dantian started stretching dangerously, alongside a piercing pain like if someone stabbed him in the heart. Amaranth's eyes widened in shock, and pulled the power away. He used what remained to bring him to the Ninth Heavenstage, fortifying his Dantian, but even that made it feel like it was about to creak.

Amaranth grimaced. While this was a fortuitous encounter for sure, that mistake would make his cultivation unsteady. Maintaining this level would take effort on its own, and properly stabilizing it enough to make a breakthrough might take him multiple decades longer than expected. Oh well, he thought. He did have to establish and refine a proper Dao before breaking through to Foundation Establishment, so he had the time for that. While this did complicate his hope for breaking through to the 10th Heavenstage for his body cultivation, and maybe even trying for the 13th, the years in advance that this opportunity had bought were still valuable, even if overall his advancement speed would still be average since he'd be stalled out at the 9th while others would be advancing towards it.

There were also some more immediately relevant benefits of this. The combat power of the 9th Heavenstage would serve him very well in defending his life during the next time the Sects from the Fifth Sea invaded for their so-called Trials.

Besides, he was excited to see what sort of Spirit Beasts that he could challenge now. That Ostrich that took a team of cultivators his level back then could probably be slain by just himself this point. What a grand thought that was, really.

Still, there's a long road to go, and Qi Condensation is a small step in the long run.

The Clan Core Formation Expert had seen all of this happening, and was intrigued. With her powerful spiritual sense, the phenomenon was clear to see. She had just rummaged through the bandit's valuables in his bag of holding, and found a lifesaving treasure suitable for the Qi Condensation stage. The treasure was useless for the bandit himself, so he must have stolen it comparatively recently. No matter. This kid seemed sort of interesting, so might as well pass it over to him. Good Seeds got wiped out too often in this Clan, which wreaked havoc on the Golden Devil's ability to sustain power and grow, so helping prevent that sounded good to her.

"Hey, you! Take this." She tossed over what looked to be a pendant of some sort to Amaranth. "It'll save your life once when you're in trouble."

"Thank you! Could I ask you for your name—" And the Clan cultivator flew away. Well, he guessed that as a Core Formation-tier cultivator, she must be quite busy since there weren't that many in the whole Clan. Amaranth looked at the pendant. He could sense a variety of qi aspects on it, but he couldn't discern their overall purpose. He was never a item-crafter anyway, so that was expected. He placed it over his neck. Well, this should be quite useful to protect him from those Trials in sixty years. Good to be careful, especially against cultivators who were inherently better than others within their Heavenstage after all. Well, time to just relax into the sect-mission life and solidify his Dao.
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40 years later.

Amaranth was still in the 9th Heavenstage. At this point, this just rankled. He knew that he'd need to recover from his error years ago, but this was just kind of excessive. He had went on many sect-missions throughout the years, and now even had a pair of magic Toad Boots that let him take great leaps and land safely. They were quite useful, and had helped him on many different occasions. The utility of being able to reach high places, especially for a Qi Condenser who naturally has no flight capabilities, is something that's applicable to a surprising amount of tasks. Outside of the utility, in combat the degree of three-dimensional motion that it allowed made evasion possible in situations where he'd otherwise be completely surrounded. To say the least, he was quite grateful for finding it inside that Toad he killed so long ago.

However, at the moment, he wasn't really thinking about that, but his poor cultivation progress. Over the last four decades, he had solidified his Dao. He had decided to take on the path of the Devourer, since that's what he did to the power of his foes with his primary technique as well as his constitution. A Dao that synergized with that would be quite useful. That being said, Amaranth may have still considered a different Dao, due to the uncomfortable connection it had to the Blood Path, if it wasn't his more innocent expression of a facet of Dao through his love of delicious food. On the Dao end of things, he was feeling pretty confident. The primary issue was the bottleneck he was stuck at right now. At this current pace, even the 10th Heavenstage would be a risky move to make.

Giving up on that just felt wrong. So, Amaranth researched, and researched, when he found a book speaking of a secret Realm that could be visited for great opportunity, but also great peril. It could be entered through a magic doorway that the Qiguai Clan held. Normally, he'd have never taken such a risk, but with this pendant, things were more uncertain.

He held the pendant up to his sight. It might actually be possible to gain something that would let him power through his bottleneck.

It was also possible that he'd get permanently crippled. However, if he didn't take this chance, he'd almost certainly have to break into Foundation Building from the 9th Heavenstage, with 10th being the best he'd be able to reach. Without seizing those advantages, it'd be guaranteed he'd be inferior despite his efforts, just as he was before. No.

He'd do it. No matter what happened, Amaranth swore that he'd not languish in the well-trodden route, even if it meant death would be the alternative.

AN: I'd like to take a Lifesaving Treasure as my omake bonus for this turn, @occipitallobe, and try out the Qiguai Secret Realm. Ofc, I'll write it in the Google Sheets as well.

This'll probably end up with him getting crippled, since I doubt the lucky streak will continue, but that might be fun to write about too.

(I'm looking this over, and wow, my characterization sucks. Well, that's how practice goes I guess.)
 
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Ahh, I see, I see. Hm. That throws a wrench into what I had in mind for the third omake, admittedly. Ah well, I'm only a thousand words in, I'll shelve it until after the coming report and throw together something else for the final omake this turn.
I mean a thousand words is what i call a good run for me, so ya know ;). But yeah, bonuses to Fate Roll are good as well since if the rolls are good you're essentially getting a random boon from the list.


Well, he noted as a general tendency, the stronger a spirit beast was, the richer the flavor of their flesh would be. It was a side effect of the sheer spiritual energy permeating and perfecting their form, he thought.

That wasn't to say all spiritual beasts were delicious, of course. That Worm wasn't exactly palatable after being cooked, though to be fair that could just have been a matter of his personal dislike for its texture. He had heard from rumors that people from far off, near the Third Sea, ate the limbs of a strange creature called a squid that lived in the waters. It was a chewy, rubbery dish, and he thought that the gigantic spirit worm that he ate pieces of might have had a similar mouthfeel.
We do have a winemaker, so spirit beast cuisine cultivator would be interesting as well!
Either way, at the end, it turned out fine. Amaranth and the other guards demanded an egg each in recompense for the traveler's mistake, and he acquiesced.

With one of the remaining eggs and some chopped cooked pieces of the ostrich's meat, some stored pepper and salt, as well as some boiled cactus leaves, Amaranth made himself an omelette the next day. It was pretty rough in shape considering he didn't have much experience with eggs of this size, but while the appearance can matter, in this situation the actual taste mattered a whole lot more. Amaranth loved it, and he fondly thought of that omelet in his days ahead. It was too bad he didn't see an ostrich of that level since. That probably meant his memory of that omelet likely was slightly exaggerated by longing and nostalgia, but he firmly still believed that it probably was mostly as good as he remembered it like.
🤤 Tasty! I'm kinda waiting for some Shokugeki stuff come out like the egg yolk exploding and filling the mouth with Qi
The hunger of his constitution had been fully awakened, and the entirety of his skin flashed grey. The crimson fluid streamed into his body at a rapid pace as if it turned into a vortex, and grey sparks danced across his skin as impurities were pushed out and vaporized. The rich Qi of Core Formation was on a completely different level, and the boundaries that kept him in the Fifth Heavenstage were being shattered open. He had been trying his best to open Meridians in this stage, but it was a time-consuming process. However, the impurities in his meridians were nothing compared to the sheer electric force that this Qi possessed, and were wiped away like it with the ease of someone flicking their sleeve. In seconds, the channels that he had spent so long trying to laboriously open were completely unblocked, and his Qi rushed straight through, bringing Amaranth to the Sixth Heavenstage. The power soon rapidly thickened and deepened, bringing him to the Seventh, and then the Eight. At this point, Amaranth was just feeling utter euphoria. But then, he remembered something, and his thoughts came down to earth.
Oh wow, if he's that susceptible to stuff, he might need to go full armored/covered up since it'll be bad if he gets overwhelmed during a battle.
AN: I'd like to take a Lifesaving Treasure as my omake bonus for this turn, @occipitallobe, and try out the Qiguai Secret Realm. Ofc, I'll write it in the Google Sheets as well.

This'll probably end up with him getting crippled, since I doubt the lucky streak will continue, but that might be fun to write about too.
Welcome, Welcome! May the dice be in our favor and may we make the Qiguai clan salt at the amount of loot we get from their secret realm
 
To be fair, one third of our gains goes to them, so I'm pretty sure they're happy with anyone who walks out in good standing.

Also to be fair, given the difficulty of those rolls. Anyone who walks in there without at least two LSTs is literally courting death. It's highly lucrative but ones shouldn't take superlative rolls as an excuse to pile in.
 
Quick question, @occipitallobe. With regards to the omake rewards sheet, should we link the specific omake that's relevant to the reward we selected, if there is one, or just link our first omake of the turn?
 
We do have a winemaker, so spirit beast cuisine cultivator would be interesting as well!
Yeah, I was thinking of making that a major secondary focus for him, tbh. It started out because I thought that making food might be a funny way to showcase the Dao of the Devourer.
🤤 Tasty! I'm kinda waiting for some Shokugeki stuff come out like the egg yolk exploding and filling the mouth with Qi
I heard good things about that anime before, but I never got around to watching it. You know what? I might as well binge-watch it soon. Who knows, I might learn to make my food descriptions less lackluster.
Oh wow, if he's that susceptible to stuff, he might need to go full armored/covered up since it'll be bad if he gets overwhelmed during a battle.
Nah, this is mainly an outlier situation tbh. It's not every day that you get to absorb Qi from a whopping two great realms above you, after all, so he was physically stunned for a while. With enemies closer to his level, it can be shrugged off.

Welcome, Welcome! May the dice be in our favor and may we make the Qiguai clan salt at the amount of loot we get from their secret realm
That'd be really great if it happened, tbh. Realistically though, with one LST the situation is pretty risky. I just hope if I roll badly, Amaranth will be crippled instead of straight out dying.

Thanks for your well wishes, though. I'm sure Xiao Yi will do really well in the Secret Realm. Maybe he'll encounter some inspiration for a Formation?
 
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To be fair, one third of our gains goes to them, so I'm pretty sure they're happy with anyone who walks out in good standing.

Also to be fair, given the difficulty of those rolls. Anyone who walks in there without at least two LSTs is literally courting death. It's highly lucrative but ones shouldn't take superlative rolls as an excuse to pile in.
True. Personally speaking, while i did underestimate the danger due to the past 2 positive results, i still pretty satisfied with the decision Storytelling-wise. Part of the reason i tried to squeeze out omakes was to make up for it, so i hope i have enough.

If my good seed dies, he dies. I'm happy that he already has a legacy enshrined in the Clan Library

Also, luck test.

EDIT: Welp. Time to prepare that funeral
Mochinator threw 1 100-faced dice. Reason: luck test Total: 3
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Yeah, I was thinking of making that a major secondary focus for him, tbh. It started out because I thought that making food might be a funny way to showcase the Dao of the Devourer.

I heard good things about that anime before, but I never got around to watching it. You know what? I might as well binge-watch it soon. Who knows, I might learn to make my food descriptions less lackluster.
Personally, i found it good till the last 2 season where the more shonen aspects start overshooting the Cooking aspects. The first few were better in the sense that they provided enough details that you could actually replicate the dishes.

That'd be really great if it happened, tbh. Realistically though, with one LST the situation is pretty risky. I just hope if I roll badly, Amaranth will be crippled instead of straight out dying.
Yeah, same for me. But then again, it's the risk involved that will lend a sense of gravitas to the decision. Kinda like the Cultivators in Xianxia itself, risking it all for wealth. Like the saying goes, Human beings die in pursuit of wealth, birds die in pursuit of food (人为财死,鸟为食亡).
Thanks for your well wishes, though. I'm sure Xiao Yi will do really well in the Secret Realm. Maybe he'll encounter some inspiration for a Formation?
Haha maybe! I'm hoping more for Cultivaton boons or defensive treasures since the only treasure he has right now is his lance.
 
Ferenike 11 - Settling your Grave
Ferenike 11 - Settling your Grave​

Thousands of feet were marching. Boom boom thundered the marching drums, in lockstep with sandaled feet.

Golden and glinting spear tips loomed like a forest above the heads of the Legionnaires, marching from the Dawn Fortress into the green around it and then the desert beyond.

Ten thousand men and women at arms. One spear among many.

She wondered at these marching men as she drank her sweet citrus tea. Ninth Legion was preparing to mobilize, following after the Third and Fifth Legions. Her eyes followed their red banners with golden symbols, horses and lions, and their ancient clan numerals III and V. Soon the snake banner with its numeral of IX would be down there too, spears and swords raised towards the south and seeking the blood of their enemies.

Soon she would head south, with tens of thousands of others. Which was why Dragoumis had called her to his office.

"You and your friends have a month." He had said to her.

"You're a generous man Centurion." Ferenike said quietly. He sighed.

"I'm sending you off to quite possibly die alongside me. Its the right thing to do. I've already had this talk with Optio Kafatos, and Tessarians Augustan and Rongnu. Tell your trainees to settle their accounts, say goodbye to their families, then go. Do what you need to, you're strong enough." He said quietly, hands clasped in his lap as he sat in a chair across from her, leaning forward as his tea sat half drunk on the table between them.

Ferenike nodded and set down her half finished tea. They'd need to finish this drink when the war was over. She stood. He rose to match her and saluted. "Don't die until you can stand next to me again." He ordered.

She saluted in return. "I'll be back sir." She promised.



The Trainees stood before her in front of their building, twenty men and women in neat ranks, with bright and well-kept uniforms. Their spears in hand and their shields glinting in the sun, armor and helm polished to a golden shine. Some of them had even risen into the Third Heavenstage by now.

She stood before them, clad in her preferred golden robes over which she wore her lamellar armor. Her hat sat atop her own small helmet, secured firmly. Her hands were held behind her, clasped tightly together as a tightness in her chest tried to spread.

"I've trained you for years. You are some of the best I have ever seen. Against the Abyssal Devil Bees, you will die, ignominiously, if you fight alone. Remember the words of the Legion!" She said, the wind carrying her voice to them as she watched them. Their faces were hard, confident. They knew what they were supposed to do. They were each alone a grain of sand, weak. Together they were still weak, but the bronze she had made of them together would hold, and those who did die would die with glory and purpose.

"Unity!" They cried.

"Unity!" She shouted with them.

"Duty!" They bellowed.

"Duty!" She bellowed with them.

"FOR THE CLAN!" They roared, Qi flaring and sending the wind into a frenzy.

"FOR THE CLAN!" She roared with them, the furnace heat of her voice blasting their faces.

She smiled. "Centurion Dragoumis has given you leave to settle your accounts, and say goodbye to your families. Use it, and return to us with no lingering regrets. You have a month."

"Understood ma'am!" They shouted.

She waved a hand. "Dismissed!"

They began to disperse at her words. She watched them go, noting Pleminon and Agha and Deimos and Agrippa...

Some came to talk to her, asking for last bits of advice on this or that technique or philosophical musing. She stayed for more than two hours to talk to them and in their own way, soothed their nerves. Their first battles would be soon. Eventually, the courtyard was empty.

She stared up at the empty building for a long moment and then turned to leave. One more student to say goodbye to.

She found Katerina Salviati training amongst towering stones twice the height of a man. Ferenike could taste the concentrated Qi in the air as the Green Legion Training Field summoned up semi-translucent enemies for her student to fight, as she took in the gathered Qi it provided. The simulacra broke with a sound like wind chimes as her fists and feet shattered them easily. Hmmm, she'd have to make a note to study these arrays later, they might be useful. Strange that it had never occurred to her... She shook her head.

Minor distraction dispelled she returned to examining her student.

The girl had risen to the Fourth Heavenstage in a flurry of progress. Now she was a bit stuck again, needing time to settle and her foundations to cure properly.

Ferenike entered the array and as Katerina turned with a back hand to strike at one of the illusions, Ferenike's fist shot through it and caught her hand with a whumpf of air. Sand kicked up around them, some dispersed away from them by her Qi.

"Student." She said simply and let go.

Katerina's hand zipped back to her hip and she bowed. "Teacher." Then she straightened.

Hmm, she'd gotten a lot taller and her face had a more weathered sheen to her bronzey skin. Her eyes were more focused, no longer darting around wildly looking for a fight in everything, now looking at the fight right in front of her.

She grimaced. "You're deploying with the Ninth aren't you?" She asked.

Ferenike put her hands in her sleeves. "I am, your parents have been very thankful for my service so far and to you." She smiled. "Told me they were pretty proud of you."

Katerina snorted and then laughed. "That's... good. Yeah. That's good."

Then she glared at Ferenike. "Want to fight?" She asked hotly.

Ferenike smiled, and answered with a fist screaming towards her sternum.

And then they were off, exchanging blows in a lightning fast flurry, the sound of ringing gongs flying out from the array circle as fist met palm and forearm and guts.

She could tell her student was frustrated, frustrated to be kept back from the Legions to defend the Salviati holdings. Frustrated that her parents were proud of her, but didn't let her go. Not something... Ferenike could really understand if she was honest. She'd give a lot to live with her parents again...

Perhaps in her next life?

She didn't know.

"You're distracted. Are you afraid teacher?" Katerina asked bluntly.

Ferenike caught her kick on a forearm and countered with a punch to her extended hip, speaking as the girl dodged away. "... yes." She said.

Katerina backpedaled, making space as she looked at Ferenike in subtle shock and curiosity. "Really? Are you afraid of dying?" She asked, seeming incredulous.

Ferenike nodded. "Yes. Some for myself, but mostly, for my students. The Heavens will kill them if they are weak and they give them no time to become strong."

She looked meaningfully at Katerina.

"Even me, huh." She said thoughtfully as they circled each other.

Ferenike nodded.

"You got friends who can help?" She asked.

"Hah! Yes, I do. We'll do our best." She said with a smile.

"Don't fucking die out there teacher, you need to live so I can beat you eventually." Katerina said with a grumble.

"Oh? Like I'd just sit still for you to wallop me over the head! Silly girl!" She shouted as she leapt through the air and kicked Katerina in the gut, propelling her out of the array with a whoosh of displaced air.

"You still need to learn how to dodge!" She shouted as she chased after her student.



She took Fuxi and Gallius with her the following day.

They rode on Iron-Backed Horses, crossing a thousand li every day as they rode them down the glimmering blue South Road. Bred as courier horses the Iron-Backs needed barely any rest, only an hour every night and then they were back to their gallop. They reached the border in a blink of the eye, and after several more days of searching found the many small communities of mortals who moved with the seasons and between the oases, much like the ancestors of her people. These were the people they had tracked down once before, years ago.

Now the three of them were gathered in a quiet home, served tea and simple rice, their travelling robes and armor out of place in this small adobe and petrified cactus building. Apparently the peoples here built these homes to live in for months at a time, and then left them empty for months more, slowly built up by the generations passing through until they became small compounds in their own right drawing from what little water they could find.

Sitting before them at the other side of his kitchen table was the local village hetman, an elderly man whose appearance hearkened from the clan, with bright red eyes indicating some other people in his line. His hair was as white as the illustrations of snow she had seen in books, and distantly on the peaks of the Hardshell Mountains, and it was thinning under his desert clothing.

"We hadn't called you because the Scarred Scorpion never truly hunts more than one or another of us in a given year. A cautious beast, half blind and vicious. We around here spread the burden of staying out of the way of the damned thing, and well... its peaceful around here..." He trails off, seeming uncomfortable.

Ferenike exchanged glances with Fuxi and Gallius. They all had the same dubious expression on their faces. Peaceful, this close to a beast and so far out into the desert? That sounded like they sometimes fed bandits to the thing.

Fuxi laid her hands on the table and fixed the man with her red eyes, a deeper and sharper shade than his. "And would you be... harmed... if we were to slay it?" She asked cautiously.

The man laughed and waved his hand. "Don't worry girl, its not like that, not anymore at least." He leaned closer and began to gesture as he spoke.

"See, back in my grandfather's time this area was right there on the edge of Cannibal Lands. We've never been worth much but it was worse back then. Your Centurion Regas's outpost was all that kept us from being torn to shreds by them. When that beast showed up the canny thing extorted a deal from my grandfather and in return for feeding it Battle Blood Cannibals and hiding its location it left us alone. It was never enough of a problem for Regas to hunt the bloody thing down then and was actually helpful. Never did figure out why the thing hated them so much it was willing to give up on eating us..." He mused, and then shrugged as he clasped his hands on the table and finished his story.

"With the Cannibals gone, the deal with the Scorpion died, along with the first member of our community. However it had been wounded at some point in the time between the Grand Elder's Polishing of the Cliffs and the first colonization wave, probably by folks from your Clan if I don't miss my guess. It's stayed out of sight since, only hunting from ambush and Regas has had his plate busy securing the caravans heading south east. From what a passing cultivator of the Hong Xuan clan said after escaping the beast, its spear scarred shell has grown so thick that it can't molt anymore and is soon to die." He shifted uncomfortably, and then his gaze hardened.

"Kill that damned thing and you'll make me a happy man for avenging my son and daughter. Even without its "protection" we're worth nothing to bandits, and in another few generations my children's children will have wandered away from these dunes to better lands. Possibly those new Burnished Crags." He said, tone vicious and vengeful.

Ferenike bowed her head. "As you wish grandfather. We'll do as you ask. Please go to Regas if trouble strikes." She said sincerely.

He laughed, smiling. "Aye girl, aye we will. Don't worry about us here, we'll do fine." He said with a bow in return. "Now, eat, drink. Then fight."

They dug into the simple meal and finished quickly, chatting with the elder about the weather and his family of several dozen grandchildren.

Soon though they left, directions towards its approximate lair in hand. An old and ruined temple complex spanning many li in the desert, most of it sunk beneath the sands. When they reached it they found a forest of pillars, each large enough you couldn't circle your arms around them, inscribed with faded Third Sea glyphs and paintings of river and valleys. The faded green and blue paint indicated a fertile land once.

Perhaps it was a place from before the creation of the Desert? The once fertile seat of some lost kingdom?

They didn't know and there was no one to tell them.

Between the pillars slumped many sandstone buildings, crumbled and decayed, some slumped entirely onto their sides in the shifting sands. Towering dunes were built up on their windward sides, the desert slowly fighting to swallow this place entirely and sink it beneath its endless grasp.

They proceeded into it cautiously, holding themselves close in formation as they maneuvered their mounts deeper between the pillars and ruined buildings. To her left Fuxi was sitting snugly in the Fifth Heavenstage, and to her right Gallius had climbed back to the third, the acupoints in his restored leg giving him trouble.

The wind howled fitfully through the stones, sometimes whistling, sometimes groaning like a dying man. The sun beat down upon them like a thousand hammers, dry and sucking the sweat from their skin.

Eventually, following a mostly obscured road they reached a central plaza of sorts. A circular space with three roads intersecting here and around it in a ring were more of the pillars. To the west was a smaller building with a small door they could just squeeze their mounts through, where the Scorpion couldn't get at them. Here would do.

"Fuxi, Gallius, I think in there will work," She said as she gestured at the small pile of rubble. "Hide in there while we use your plan Gallius to draw it out."

Gallius looked at her, concerned. "You sure? We don't have to you know." He said quietly.

She shook her head. "I need to fight it for a moment on my own, so keep an eye out for a chance to back me up. I'll use one of those pillars to stun it, then we can enter the Hoplite together and slay it."

They both nodded. "Alright Ferenike." Fuxi told her quietly with a pat on her shoulder.

They took the time to dismount and tie off Fuxi and Gallius's horses in the building and then they took Ferenike's into the middle of the plaza and as Ferenike held it still and Fuxi kept watch, Gallius took a belt knife and carved open a long but shallow cut in its side. As the beast whinnied and kicked wildly the scent of its blood suffused the air. They made sure to smear it around the south side of the plaza.

Tying it off near one of the pillars to the north, where the horse pulled and struggled for a time before settling and turning to nurse at its wound, she sat before it facing into the center of the plaza. With an effort of will she forced veins to emerge from the palm of her hand and holding it out over the ground sprayed a fine mist of her blood to join the mélange of blood scent already present.

Then with shield in hand she waited.

The sun crawled across the sky, the forest of shadows from the pillars rotating across the ground like the hands of a clock. Her breath was steady and her mind abuzz with the marching of her legions in her body. Glass rising to just below the surface of her skin and her muscles readying themselves as her hyper aware eyes scanned every minute shift of sand, her Qi senses prickling in the wind.

It came with a boom of thunder.

With a terrible shriek the pillar behind her was ripped into a sandy whirlpool, a lashing stinger piercing her horse clean through. And then the eight footed thudding that haunted her dreams came, as the horse was flung into the gnashing circular furnace maw of the creature. Ferenike leaped away from the distracted beast at a dead sprint. Not a moment too soon as she heard the thunk of a gigantic spear sized stinger slam into stone and the hiss as that stone evaporated into red hot dust.

In her heart she laughed as she beheld the killer of her master.

It was twenty meters long, each leg the size of a small pillar, each pincer thrice her size, its flesh a scintillating crystal glass, and at its front over its rotating maw of glass blades it had eight eyes and pedipalps like a long mustache flexing around it. Scoring across five of its eyes was a massive scar, pulping them and leaving deep cracked craters in half of its face. The other three were green faceted crystals that stared at her with hatred. Its shell was thick and crusted with scars, and she could see the dark shadows of its firelit organs through it. And up on its top was the craters of spear blows she remembered well.

"You! Human whelp! I remember you! I, Old Jingzhi, shall savor your eye flesh for what your master did to me!" An old, hissing voice echoed through the plaza as it paused and stared at her.

Her breath stopped and she noted its cultivation. Ninth Heavenstage, a hair's breadth from the Foundation Building realm.

Ah.

She smiled. Not unexpected.

With a roar Old Jingzhi barreled forward, the sound of his steps rumbling like an earthquake. Light burst from him, the refraction of the sun intensified a hundred fold into a wash of white light.

There was an answering blast furnace roar, as a glorious red light unfolded from her. They swallowed the plaza in their radiance, two massive shadows looming in the burning glow.

Ferenike's heart beat wildly, a glowing beacon on her chest as Qi burned through her. In the enthusiastic screaming of her mind she could almost swear she felt the soft touch of her old master.

As Jingzhi charged she whirled and struck at the pillar behind her with the edge of her shield. The stone came apart like sand and the pillar toppled.

Leaping into the air she grasped it with both hands, fingers cracking the stone as they dug into it. Wielding it like a giant club she twisted in mid air and swung it at the charging Scorpion, every muscle, every bone, every vein, every flake of glass soldier in her blood screaming in effort!

BANG!

The pillar met the Scorpion's charge and smashed into his side with a mountain shaking sound, his dodge to the side failing with a spurt of clear ichor glinting in the sun. He was lifted up off his feet and flung across the plaza as the pillar disintegrated from the blow and he shrieked like an exploding steam geyser.

"Foul damnable demon child!" He howled as he wriggled on his back and flipped back over, hissing as his barbed stinger, a black and evil looking thing loomed above his enormous body.

"Now!" Ferenike shouted as her spear manifested in her hand and she brought up her shield, her glass armor bubbling into being.

Two golden blurs joined her on either side and then there was a thrumming boom as the Hoplite surged into existence, casting its shadow in her light.

Their shield caught the spear-stinger of the Scorpion with a clang. Lashing again and again and again, faster than the eye could follow the clever old beast sought out their weaknesses. But Ferenike was the Hoplite and so were her friends, and together their eyes saw the truth.

With a howl of frustration Jingzhi reared, one of his great pincers coming to grip the shield as he almost crawled onto it, wrestling with Ferenike! The other swooped low, a dark blade heading for her guts!

Clang!

Her spear jabbed into the soft meat of the pincer and it jerked back, clamping shut on the spear. Leaving them open to the stinger.

With a roar Gallius's own spear emerged from the Hoplite to meet it for a moment. Then a bolt of lightning raced down the shaft and head and exploded where it met the stinger, sending it careening to the side.

Arcs of stone dissolving poison melted the stone behind them into a lake of sizzling dust as they ducked.

Ferenike fixed her feet. Pulling from the depths of her Dantian, that great glass sea where unholy fire burned deep below, she ripped free a massive pillar of Qi and wrapped it around the spear of the Hoplite. Fuxi released another bright blast, dazzling the Scorpion's remaining eyes. She felt Gallius's Qi wrap around hers, draining him terribly, and the mighty surge of glass wrapping around the spear of their formation surged even further, its inner light brightening with blues to match her reds.

The royal purple spear crashed into Old Jingzhi's belly and he was cast away with a burst of near blinding light and breath stealing heat, a splatter of molten ichor ripping its way free to burst against their shield and hiss against it evilly. He crashed through a building to the south, tumbling in a tangle of legs and a flailing stinger. His shrieks of raged echoed over the temple ruins and was met by the crashing clang of the Hoplite advancing at a sprint.

"Hah! Foolish!" He barked and then dozens of house sized stones erupted from the dust cloud left in his wake. Ferenike saw him picking them up and throwing them with his great pincers, each nearly half as large as he was.

Gallius's hand helped guide hers as Fuxi watched for further trickery, and the Hoplite's glass infused spear stabbed forward three dozen times. Gigantic stones were split cleanly, the cuts glinting in the sun as the rock melted under the heat of her blows, instantly rendered into a clear glass.

All around them Ferenike could see the battlefield becoming molten from the heat of the combatants. Mortals would be dead now, boiled alive by the heat.

Then they were upon the old Scorpion and he clacked his pedipalps in glee.

Then his mouth seemed to swell, and glow, and then there was a rush of superheated glass and flame from his maw. There was no thought as Ferenike reacted, drawing on the Qi invested into the Hoplite and forcing it into her own throat. She screamed in return, the sound drowning out the roar of the Scorpion's own blast as her stream of molten glass and heat slammed into his. For a moment the two blasts mixed, Qi struggling against Qi until with a huge thunderclap her own flaming breath overwhelmed the Scorpion's and slammed into his face.

"AHHHHHHHHHH!" Old Jingzhi wailed, as his green eyes shattered and ran like tears down his face. "BLIND! BLIND! BLINDED BY MERE CHILDREN! CURSE YOU HEAVEN!" He screamed as he thrashed wildly, his Qi flaring in a wild storm as sand and molten glass kicked up around his flailing limbs.

Ferenike and her friends caught a dozen blows from his stinger, hundreds from his feet and massive blows from his pincers as they advanced upon the ailing Scorpion.

"No no! NO! JINGZHI THE MIGHTY WILL NOT FALL TODAY!" He babbled, then a bright light erupted from him as a searing heat hot enough to crisp the edges of Ferenike's hair blew into her face.

"BRACE!" Gallius shouted, and she felt him and Fuxi's Qi surging into her as she ducked behind the great shield of the Hoplite.

There was a deafening boom and blinding light, stabbing bright even through screwed shut eyelids.

A flickering shadow shot across her gaze, but Fuxi and Gallius were already moving as she recovered, guiding her Qi.

Clang!

"Curse you..." The old voice muttered.

Ferenike blinked her eyes clear and beheld her enemy.

His carapace was cracked, yellow flames burning up from within his body, his legs riddled with cracks and his stinger drooping near his face as he hunched on the ground.

With a kiai that shook the air Ferenike struck with scorpion swiftness with her friends, Qi draining precipitously as she felt Gallius and Fuxi both just barely hanging on, and in a flash there was a horrible grating screech of glass and a hot explosion of splattering molten glass. With a ground shaking thud Jingzhi's tail fell to the sand and stones and wriggled there like a snake.

His cry of agony as his back spurted superheated ichor rocked their ears and through squinted eyes she saw him wheel away and skitter into the city.

She pursued, the shadowy feet of the Hoplite carrying them as they raced after the fleeing predator.

He wove between buildings, knocking down pillars and entire edifices into their path. They just leapt over or forced their way through until eventually they came to the mouth of a sandstone cave.

Maddened with pain the Scorpion dived in heedless of danger and Ferenike heard the crack of its legs. She tossed them in after it, ghostly hands on her shoulders pushing her forward.

All she could here in her mind was single word. Now.

She led with her spear, glowing bright red as it split the dark and below she saw the glint of her enemy's flesh. With a great crunch the spear punctured his carapace and slammed him into the ground with a shockwave of dust and a mighty tremor.

They landed beside him with another, smaller, tremor and ripping her spear free Ferenike drove it again into his head. It came free and rolled into the darkness of the cave as his body slumped, unmoving.

She waited for a long moment, breathing heavily, chest aching. But her enemy did not move, all life having left his corpse.

She coughed and slumped to a knee, hissing as seared flesh on her hands and knees touched the sandy floor of the cave, the Hoplite dispersing. Her body was screaming at her, the damage suppressed by adrenaline. She could feel bones in her arms and legs fractured, and her lungs felt scoured from the hot air she had breathed in.

Looking around her friends were little better, though they had been better protected by not being the focus of the Hoplite.

She grimaced. "Can you two stand?" She rasped.

Fuxi coughed as she levered herself upright. "Yeah." She stared up at the towering corpse glimmering in the shaft of sunlight shining down from the cave mouth far above. Her silver hair was singed black in places and she looked terrible, burns covering a good percentage of her body.

Gallius groaned, and slowly, agonizingly levered himself upright. "I'll live, ow..." He said, leaning on his knees. His back was a searing red mass.

Ferenike was glad they had medicines purchased with their Contribution Points on hand, other wise they were going to be laid up for a while.

She nodded. "I'm going into the cave to find this bastard's head." She said tiredly, slowly standing and walking past her friends, who found rocks to sit on and start treating themselves.

Already her remaining Qi was surging into her skin, prickling and painful. They'd heal relatively quickly from these wounds she thought, as many of them were rather superficial. Fortunate. But she was still glad she had time before the Ninth marched, and reached the front.

Her Qi enhanced eyes pierced the darkness, and within it she followed the glint of her enemy's head. Slowly a pile of things was revealed, the head leaning against its base.

Bones, glimmering gold, swords, and books of all things bound in metal. She looked down at the giant skull, staring vacantly up at her from the shattered pits she had made of its remaining eyes.

She sighed.

The wind brushed lightly against her cheek, and then was gone.

She said goodbye, a final time.

Peace descended and she walked past the head and scaled the pile, carefully examining the things within, her body aching and her hands grumbling at her.

She didn't care, she was tough enough that a bit of poking around wouldn't make her wounds worse. She felt something odd in the pile.

Eventually, buried deep within the pile she found it, the source of the strange Qi signature. There were three golden scrolls, each the length of her forearm, the rod was made of shiny black jade capped in dark grey iron marked by strange triangular symbols. The material of the scrolls itself looked like gold foil, but was much stronger and thicker and far more flexible, like cloth or paper. When she began to unroll one, glimmering gold symbols burned their way into her eyes, waves like eroded mountains and those same repeating triangular glyphs. She flinched away and shook her head, blinking as her eyes teared up. She didn't know what these were but they looked interesting, and she had uses for strange lore. Tucking them away into her storage ring she grabbed up the head of Jingzhi and returned to her friends.

Over a long several hours they took the body apart and carried away the most valuable pieces of the monster and his hoard, and returned home.

When they returned, the Ninth was gathering in its final preparations and Dragoumis welcomed them with a smile. With their loot traded for Contribution Points, they joined the Legion, and with it set off into the Desert with the sun at their backs, rising bright red over the Dawn Fortress.


Here you go @occipitallobe the last omake of the Training arc! I'd like to put this towards a Fate supplemental for Ferenike. Now, we head to war, with all of our loose ends from her origin wrapped up once and for all, as a marker from her transition from girlhood to womanhood.

Fun trivia - Jingzhi can mean 'Exquisite', 'Refinement', 'Delicacy', 'Daintiness', 'Delicateness', 'Preciosity', and 'Fastidiousness' depending on the spelling. I decided he would be called Old Exquisite.
 
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Fierce Fang 4 - The Birth of Fierce Fang
Fierce Fang
The Birth of Fierce Fang​

The one who would later be known as Fierce Fang was born in a normal mortal village of which there are literal millions of its like in the desert. The kind of place where even Qi Condensation Cultivators are rare events that only the elderly remember the last time one honored immortal came to it. It was here a child was born no different from any other besides being stronger that average. He was a quiet and mature kid who while showed proper filial respect to his parents and family wasn't exactly close to them either. He was brimming with curiosity always asking questions about the world around him some questions of which surprised even the Village Elder in how simple yet profound they were.

Many in the village expected that the boy would eventually leave their village to explore the sands and dunes in order to fulfill his lust for knowledge. Some even argued he would become a mythical cultivator like the benevolent Golden Devils. As for the boy himself he was just happy to spend each day as it came without care for the future and these idyllic days would had continued for several more years if the Rite of Karma Purification hadn't happened.

The trial of a hundred years at first seemed like wondrous festival to the villagers. For a mere 3 generation old village had no clue that a vicious battle would soon take place. All they saw where balls of flame and spears of glass arced across the sky in beautiful and captivating displays. The boy however saw these sights and worried realizing that immense power must be fueling these attacks and feared that if they ever landed within a thousand miles of the village everyone would die without question.

These fears would soon come to pass when one day the entire village was shrouded in shadow. Naturally the villagers looked up expecting to see a giant cloud blocking the sun but were surprised to see it was a bird. The bird's features were impossible to tell for while it appeared to be a small bird barely a thousand feet in the sky everyone quickly realized that for it to cast a shadow over the entire village the bird must be a tremendous size and at a dizzying height. Despite this difference and the bird's body blocking sight the boy sensed that there was a person standing on top of this no doubt legendary bird through some unknown means.

Just as the boy was wondering what kind of man could command such a beast the bird suddenly accelerated out of sight while a glass spear of towering size passed through where the creature once was. Though this sudden disappearance seemed like it would be the end of things such a mass leaving at such a speed without care for its surroundings shook Heaven and Earth itself. Even being so far below the shock waves left by the beast rocked the village not knocking down the simple buildings they lived it and gravely injuring the people. Just that itself would be recoverable but the worst was yet to come. For not even a day later a gigantic sand wave that reached towards the Heavens came following the path of the cursed bird and all the villagers could do was look at it with despair as it quickly approached and buried the village doomed not an immortal attack but by a mere dodge.

The boy who would become Fierce Fang didn't know how he survived that sand tidal wave. Maybe the Heavens smiled at him or maybe it just wasn't his time yet the boy didn't know. What he did know was that after waking up in a small pocket of air under tons of sand before even thinking about his surely dead village and family was that he never wanted to experience such powerless again. Where he could do nothing to increase his odds of survival against the mere after effects of one person moving. And so in that little cave hidden in the sand the boy vowed not to the heavens but to himself that he would curse his previous weak self and seek out enough power to never be put in this type of situation again. This resolve would only be strengthened as the boy clawed his way back to the surface over the course of 3 days forced to scrounge food and water from where ever he could from the wreckage that the tide had caused.

A/N: @occipitallobe Here's a short omake I drudged up to get a bonus since my other omake was taking too long to finish and I was worried that the Good Seed post would pass me by. Hope people like it.

As for my bonus I would like a Movement Art, one whose focus is primarily on running away and secondarily on dodging. With this my build should basically be complete since combined with by Deep Sea Starfish Body I should be able to take hits without going down, dodge attacks that would kill me and run away from things I can't beat. Not the most glorious of builds but hopefully one that will let me stay alive even if I can't punch up and get massive rewards like some good seeds can. Basically I imagine Fierce Fang be suited to taking risky plays without losing his life in the hopes one of the risks will pay off even if he as to run away 9 times out of 10.

Also for a thing I want to do this turn I would like to enter the Sand Whirlpool Tower Secret Realm. I know its a trash tier secret realm but I don't want to take a risk for the big name secret realms currently. So I thought might as well explore a minor secret realm for the experience even if Fang's time would be better spent doing something else cause might as well have fun even if it isn't optimal.
 
Year 79 - The Wary Peace
As a note, the vote is tied between Heraclius Staurakius, and Heraclius Staurakius but with replacement immediately after the trials. I'll leave the vote open for now to determine his final fate, but I think it's fair to say Heraclius is the new Protostrator.

I've very unhappy with the below and my brain is not supplying good words to my hands. Take it as a snippet before I do the Good Seed update tomorrow.

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It had been five years, Manuel mused. Not especially long or painful years, just... years.

They had gone by like a blink, as the war in the south ended with little fanfare. That was typical, though. Wars among lesser powers and sects often went for longer, but for great Sects and Clans a war was always a precursor to a Nascent Soul battle - if an advantage could be gained sufficiently to lure one out, perhaps matters would escalate. If not, what else could be done? The Devil Bees could not win an advantage, and there was nothing keeping them there. In truth, he suspected the promised benefits must have been considerable from the Saber Palace. Still, the Saber Palace had won an adroit victory. A massive consumption of resources from their perennial enemies, a weakening of their ability to exert strength within the Verdant South.

Given the Devil Bees had overcome no fortifications, they wouldn't even be getting paid. He let out a chuckle for the misfortune of one enemy, before scowling at the thought of the fortune of another. If it were not for the Trials, he would almost countenance pushing further into the mountains and seizing some fortresses, but it was not the time.

Heraclius had taken command, though only as well as could be expected. He was abandoning much reform and planned extra training, ceaselessly labouring to simply have his command structure work, and to ensure that the Legions would function properly in twenty years when they were desperately needed.

The remainder of things had gone well, though.

Firstly, the unveiling of the Golden Eye Array. To those not attuned to Bronze Qi, it was an invisible great eye, sitting in the sky. Watching.

It could not penetrate most defenses, but in truth, it did not need to. At the moment it was mostly trained on the borders of the Devil Bees. Nothing much had happened, but it had allowed them to draw down their forces a little more, with slightly longer patrols outside of them.

The military had been built up, and ever-more cultivators were given more and more generous supplies of Contribution Points, Qi Condensation juniors sent to scour villages and overlooked towns for new recruits. Despite the war, they would reach their target by the Trials.

The core of the Clan effort had been given over to colonisation, an effort that had gone surprisingly well. With new camps set up where cities would soon be, the Legion itself found its logistical efforts becoming the core of new towns, the former forts becoming villages, rebuilt hardpoints into manors for more powerful cultivators. Not for the first time he thanked the Clan for producing such a wonder as Euphrosyne. She had seamlessly taken the wealth of colonisation and used it for war while fulfilling her primary purpose. Legionnaires who were wounded or had found their cultivation faltering were settled in the new lands on favourable terms - old veterans were an excellent defensive measure.

She had even paid for wives to come north. While cultivators fought heedless of gender, mortals were more limited. If you could not cultivate Qi, a man was stronger than a woman, just as a tiger might be stronger than a lion. With Qi, all things changed, but the mortal conscripts of Hua Empire - usually armed with crossbows and fielded en masse to try and slow down enemy Qi Condensation cultivators - were nearly all men.

He himself did not find the prospect appealing, but Euphrosyne had somehow gotten Clan men to pay for the privilege of additional wives, costing Contribution Points to meet some fine young women from Hua Empire. Which meant more children, which was in the end precisely what her mandate had been. Fascinating.

All in all, things were proceeding as could be expected.

Manuel turned again to cultivation. A touch more strength had appeared in his hands in the past few decades. Nothing extreme, of course, but an ever-so-slight increase in power. Something to be noted, as perhaps it would make a difference in future.
 
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