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Aliki Floros 18 - Ruminations on the Future
Aliki Floros
Ruminations on the Future

Aliki Floros, humanoid weapon, devourer of all things, and recently heroine of the Underworld Palace Campaign had found herself in something of a pinch.

Namely, her complete failure to achieve what she actually wanted to do.

"It was just so much! I figured I could have just grabbed the bronze-bits in me and go bouncy bouncy bouncy and just snip off little bits and have lots left for later!" She complained to an increasingly incredulous group of ankle biters–mostly the orderlies, minders, and nurses that she had been assigned as her official staff now that they had finished their basic training–as her rank had risen to such a point that they couldn't actually deny her a century without raising further questions.

Of course, that most of them were new recruits from the new territories and thus, wouldn't cause great offense if/when the Red Queen finally went mask-off and became a supervillain by murdering them all in a thoughtless ritual evil was just an added bonus. But it was okay, it meant that they could grow accustomed to her!

"But Centurion Floros?" One of the Aspirants in the group raised his hand. "What were you going to do with it afterwards?"

Aliki tilted her head, glancing at the one who questioned. "What kind of silly question is that?" She asked. "The point is to have enough to nibble on later that won't run out." She sighed, rocking her chair forward, even if she was sitting on it backwards–it still let her prop her chin up. "But unfortunately, I couldn't really snip enough off to form a self-sustaining source of power, just some shavings–ones I admittedly put to pretty good use of course, but the principle is important, you know?"

It was probably a bit silly to think she could meaningfully reduce a source of power of that magnitude. She had gotten really upset at the damage it dealt, and hoped to just get rid of the whole thing, but the best she could do was hold onto it for a while, then drop it in Lady Duca's little trap. They were almost definitely going to use it to do something terrible, but maybe it would be terrible things done to bad guys? That would be the least bad way of using it anyway."

The group of senior aspirants mulled that over for a moment, she had made her feelings on the existence of that Light Qi very clear in past lectures, and sure, she managed to use it to shore up her pillars of Hunting and Satisfaction, bringing her back up to par for her age after her recent languishing. She was even showing signs of getting her Pillar of Growth together too!

Still, there was a lot to do, and there was another batch of the Trials looming on the horizon. It would be Aliki's second bid with the Hunters of the Fifth Sea, and she got quite a bit done--magic blasts notwithstanding–but with any luck, she'd be able to top her performance by the weight of greater cultivation and more friends!

Who she was doing a good job passing her own knowledge onto–her studies of anatomy, the notes she cribbed from Qian Chao during the trip to the Thousand Song City, and every other little bit of insight she had acquired on the nature of Vitality and how to maximise transfers while minimising the impact to one's future prospects.

After all, while most people aren't her, lacking the Voice's masterpiece to serve as an intermediary layer to directly generate blank vitality from other sources of energy (And then to transfer it freely without signs of corruption), she still managed to learn a lot in her adventures, and knowing exactly where the line was could open a lot of options for stabilising people who might otherwise die.

Golden Devils are pretty hardy after all, as long as you can prevent someone from dying or being crippled, they'll mend eventually, and if you can nudge them over that line with a carefully measured transfusion of Vitality, purified as much as possible to reduce impact… Well, a 10% reduction in cultivation affinity to preserve a Cultivator who might otherwise be wounded beyond recovery is a bargain price.

On the whole, things were looking pretty promising! There was another of those big fancy postings for the best and brightest of the generation, and while most of them seemed boring or a bit on the icky side, the mission to go looking for reagents needed to craft some horrible concoction was appealing for a very simple reason.

How many of those reagents were edible?

She grinned, something a little concerning to her aspirants–probably just a reflex from training anyway–and let her thoughts continue to wander. They were probably mostly liquids, right? There was talk about the item in question being a 'Drop' of something, so it was probably going to be powders or other fluids involved. But would there be enough to snack on after acquiring her contribution to the project?

It would be worth trying out, maybe some of them could be delicious! And if she could secure a source too, she might have a delicious new spice to add to things too!

She couldn't wait to see how all of this unfolded! Provided she didn't get blown up again anyway, that would be a sad and disappointing thing, even if she replaced the one she lost when the Light Qi cooked off the first time, it was the principle of the thing, and that technique was just super painful to use anyway.

She'd just have to take things as they went, and hope it all worked out well. Which was the way she had handled everything up until now anyway, so at the end of the day, nothing had really changed, had they?

The most important thing, after all, was to have a full belly, a warm place to sleep, and peace of mind, knowing that you'd have no problems repeating the first two steps whenever they became necessary.

These were happiness, these were satisfaction, and at the end of the day, did it really matter reaching for the very tip top of everything?

The Voice might disagree, but The Voice was also kind of a villainess too, who would probably be causing a lot of trouble if she could just do whatever she wanted.

Maybe that was why she got stuck?

Who knew, all that Aliki knew was that she was on the right path, whatever comes of it.
 
Aliki Floros Good Seed Background #2 (Adopted)
Aliki Floros
Aliki Floros is a Monster.

This is objectively, biologically correct--spat out in the aftermath of the Trials in the deserts of the borderlands, lost and halfway feral--she was discovered by a crippled, wounded Legionnaire who couldn't make it to safety, and adopted in the aftermath as the eldest of three children. It was perhaps not the wisest choice in the eyes of the orthodoxy, but something about the ragged girl tugged on the heartstrings.

Even in her youth though, Aliki Floros was never normal. She bore black hair of great weight, resisting all attempts to style or cut it. Her canines were large and extended, and her smiles held the promise of a predator sizing up her prey. Her eyes were a brilliant scarlet--her very namesake--and shone slightly in dim light.

And yet she was also a sleepy girl, affectionate with those who gained her trust--a hard worker who wasn't very bright but compensated with a certain inherent insight.

Yet her nature was not something that could be hidden. She could not eat normal food--only fresh meat would satisfy her hunger--and that only for a short time. Her senses were sharp, and she had a nose that could sniff out all manner of strange things in time. She was brought in to Doctor Hermod's practice--a Foundation Establishment Cultivator of the Clan who retired to the secular world to live out his final days--for analysis, and possible treatment.

What he found caused him to nearly discard a life of medical study.

The girl bore a constitution never seen before in the Clan's records. Blood in the form of a clear, viscous fluid, pumped in and out from one of seven mysterious organs, aligned with her Chakra points. Her troublesome hair was nothing less than an extension of some unknown plant matter.

And it hungered.

She was simultaneously a great opportunity, and a great risk--these were body modifications seen usually only on the most extreme Blood Path adherents--upon a mortal child not even of majority yet.

He took her in as an apprentice--both to watch her, and to further study her strange constitution. He found the child an apt pupil--compassionate without being foolish, diligent without being excessive. Though her understanding of the medical field was rooted in a simple 'It's better for people to live than not, right?' philosophy instead of something higher-minded, her sharp senses led her to diagnosing many tricky problems--and the extra money brought in helped cover the cost of feeding her.

But only to a point.

As she matured, the meat of mortal creatures no longer did much to push back against her hunger. Magic Beast meat was effective--but far beyond what could be justified paying her. She needed greater backing if she were to survive--and only the Golden Devils had the funding to support such an appetite. Doctor Hermod sent her along with the recruitment caravan, carrying letters of recommendation and copies of his research into what he had dubbed the 'Clear Yin Constitution'

It was sufficient that the Clan was willing to adopt her into their numbers, accepting her as an Aspirant who sought to master the medical field.

But as many would say--the innate nature of a person can never be changed, a fate set in stone by the Heavens.

Whether she can overturn this or not? Is anyone's guess.

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Overall High Concept: Biological Monstrosity given a good upbringing and nurturing to establish a love of medicine and a firm grasp of right and wrong. This doesn't change the fact she was engineered to be an apex predator by a fossilized yandere who wanted Senpai to notice her ever so much. Impact enhancements will bounce between medical breakthroughs and further atavistic evolution of her horrific constitution, and its perfect affinity to the Blood Path.

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Current Status as of Turn 16: 196 Years Old, Initial Pillar of Foundation Establishment
Additional Impact: 14 + 9 (Tenth Heavenstage Breakthrough) = 23
Life-Saving Treasures: 1x Mother's Will Charge
Special Treasures: 'Mister Spoon': A fragment of Demonic Soup Chef's spoon, a morphic weapon that consumes blood and flesh of any living being it makes contact with. Aliki often uses it as the handle for her favorite scalpel, the weapon she's most familiar with.
Tribulation Enhancements: 1
Starting Perk:
Clear Yin Constitution: The masterpiece of an ancient Cultivator, who sought to reincarnate through it. The Clear Yin Constitution is a heaven defying symboitic fusion of human and spirit, creating a cycle that foils the eyes of Heaven. Practicing the Blood Path with the Clear Yin Constitution does not lock out other methods of Cultivation. This is backstopped by seven special organs, each linked to a single potent Divine Ability when enough power and the right catalysts can stir them to wakefulness
Cultivation Goal: Foundation Establishment Progression
Plot Coupons: None

The Sanguine Reaping Angel's masterpiece, a symbiotic lifeform bound with a clone of herself--originally intended as a vessel for her reincarnation, the degradation of her lingering Will prevented a successful transference, and she let the host walk free to see what came of it. This is the true nature of the Clear Yin Constitution, and in the Seven Immortal Apertures embedded throughout Aliki's body can be found Seven Divine Abilities. Transcendent feeding methods beyond that of the ordinary Blood Path.

The Soul Rending Claws
--The First Divine Ability, the hands are surrounded by sanguine tendrils, fingers extending each into a razor sharp blade of finely wrought Celestial Bronze. On contact with any living being, it siphons their Blood Essence and absorbs it, fueling rapid regeneration in Aliki while vastly enhancing the damage done compared to an ordinary claw technique. Foes slain by this are reduced to ashen skeletons, smoking on the ground below

The Black Weave
--The Second Divine Ability, the hair extends out to great lengths, piercing and infusing targets. Used discreetly, these threads can slowly drain the vitality from Aliki's foes and add it to her own, using strands too thin to be seen by most--used more aggressively, can bind foes within them and crush them to bits. Aliki has also experimented in using the Weave supportively, to transfuse her own transcendent Ichor into allies as a safe method of bolstering their strength in a pitched battle, recouping her losses at the expense of her foes.

The Ruby Carapace
--The Third Divine Ability, chitinous plates emerge from beneath Aliki's skin, forming a seamless armor of scarlet and bronze, concealing her features from the world at large. A powerful defensive option, and one of the few Divine Abilities that does not have immediate feeding applications--being a necessary compromise to ensure the survivability of the Sanguine Reaping Angel's progeny.

The Red Queen: It's not enough to consume, to ensure that one does not go hungry, one must take great pains to save as many lives as you take, so that there will always be something to keep your heart and body satisfied. A Dao balanced between Consumption and Preservation, most Blood Path adherents would claim it to be missing the point--but hunger remains Aliki's great fear, and she has adapted the orthodoxy to fit her own talents and constitution.
Pillars: Hunger

Turn Six Fate: The Tri-Tailed Scorpion: A novice Cultivator, with a strange physique and concerning habits--it would not be strange for her to fall to obscurity, her talents poorly utilized--but a salvage expedition into one of the greater battlegrounds of the previous Trials saw her catching a strange scent on the winds, tangy with a hint of sharpness to it. She followed her nose, and discovered the remains of a Tri-Tailed Scorpion slain as an afterthought in the Trials. It just seemed like such a waste to leave it lying around, but early attempts to eat it resulted in delicious food but also making very little headway. So she did what came naturally and extended countless stabbing tendrils from her arm, greedily infiltrating the beast's remains and licking it clean, to the point where even the bones were cracked for marrow. Satisfied for the first time in her life, Aliki took a nap in a nice, sunny place, then returned home with the stinger, earning enough Points in its redemption to have a piece of it designed into a convenient set of Scorpion-Poison Needles, good for self-defense and for questionable medical practices!

Turn Seven Fate: Journey into Qiguai: As is the habit of many experts of the Clan who rise to power quickly and greedily, Aliki was tempted to set foot into the infamous Secret Realm, to test her skills and her knowledge against its dangers and learn what she could. It turned out to be something of a mixed bag, securing a strange wooden fragment that could turn to any form she desired, hungering and devouring her foes with aplomb. She made use of this hunting in the floating sky-seas of the Secret Realm's bordermarches, devouring many a fish in her quest, her power swelling to the point where the first of the Divine Abilities of her Clear Yin Constitution manifested itself. Her luck turned against her in the end however, as she first lost an arm to the gullet of a rather fast and clever fish, and while limping her way to safety, was ambushed by a forgettable Young Master who turned a terrible Life Saving Treasure on her, scattering her to the four winds... Or so the world thought.

Turn Eight Fate: Jin Fulong's Caravan: Saved by the activation of a contingency spell implanted into Aliki's soul from birth, she was revived within the confines of the secret laboratory in the heart of the Blood Mask, and given a lecture on her nature and potential from the ghost residing within as her body healed. With the power she had gained in the depths of the Qiguai Secret Realm, she joined an escort caravan commanded by Jin Fulong, and fought three powerful Cultivators of the Battle Blood Cannibals, suppressing them and preventing them from running rampant against the weaker experts present. While she had little time to spend furthering her skills as a healer, she grew more familiar with her new tools and Divine Ability in this endeavour, and the mission was ultimately a success.

Turn Nine Fate: Parakoimomenos' Merchants: Taking some relative downtime while she began preparing for her Tribulation, Aliki signed on with the spy mission to Jingshen Lands--posing as an itinerant cultivator from the newly claimed lands, she gained a reputation as a beautiful and intimidating Immortal Doctor going by the name Cinnabar, practicing her craft to save those who were injured by some of the many new and interesting ailments spat out from the former lands of the Blood Cannibals... And several other issues that were more annoying than anything else but that her arts made her well suited to curing at limited cost. She earned a stool that aided patients in recovery--and managed to capture several valuable bits of intel to inform the greater strategies of the Clan!

Completed Omake:
Prologue: The Sleeping Princess (5,813 Words, Detailed Backstory and Initiation -- Turn Six Bonus is a Life Saving Treasure)
A Young Monster's Daily Life (3,090 Words, Aspirant Initiation and remedial education -- Turn Six Supplemental)
Delicious Scorpion You Must Eat It (2,535 Words, The Tri-Tailed Scorpion -- Turn Seven Bonus is a Life Saving Treasure)
Into The Abyss (1,524 Words, Entering Qiguai -- Turn Seven Supplemental)
And Into the Fire (1,727 Words, Still in Qiguai --Turn Seven Supplemental)
Qiguai is a Silly Place (2,384 Words, End of Qiguai -- Turn Seven Supplemental)
An Education on Murder (1,323 Words, Mom Has Words -- Turn Eight Bonus is Healing)
A Pleasant Ride with the Caravan (2,138 Words, Defending Jin Fulong's Caravan -- Turn Eight Supplemental)
Subtractive Medicine (3,134 Words, Parakoimomenos's Merchants entry -- Turn Nine Bonus is a Life Saving Treasure)
The Red Queen (2,666 Words, Tribulation into Foundation Establishment -- Turn Ten Bonus is a Tribulation Boost)
In the Thick of It (1,313 Words, The Hundred Year Trials -- Turn Ten Supplemental
Potentially Ominous Long-Term Plans (1,953 Words -- Turn Eleven Bonus is a Life Saving Treasure)
The Doctor Will See You Now! (2,026 Words -- Turn Eleven Supplemental)
Trauma Care (2,140 Words -- Turn Eleven Supplemental)
To Feed the Hungry (1,724 Words -- Turn Twelve Bonus is a Life Saving Treasure)
Out of the Frying Pan (1,142 Words - Turn Twelve Supplemental)
A Day in the Limelight (1,046 Words - Turn Thirteen Bonus is a Life Saving Treasure)
Ruminations on the Future (1,124 Words - Turn Fourteen Bonus is a Cultivation Boost)
 
Aliki Floros 19 - Yuan Tasting Adventure
Aliki Floros
Yuan Tasting Adventure

Aliki was finding her time with the clan war in Yuan not that great in all honesty if anyone bothered to ask her, but certainly more manageable and productive then the embarrassing and painful attempt at close door cultivation she just recently recovered from.

In preparation for what she thought was an upcoming trial, she at first tried to hunt some spirit beast to advance herself and stockpiled on some yummy food for any long siege like last time. BUT try as she might she couldn't find any! It was like they all knew in advance and hid to spite her!

Luckily for her she was already richly rewarded in Contribution Points for her role in helping to acquire the Seven Ingredients for whatever the elder wanted it for, so she rented a private chamber full of arrays on the walls that she didn't understand a single thing about and took the traditional position but turns out her qi didn't like her sitting still in one spot for too long whoopsie.

Although thinking back on that mission leaves bad memories for her, that encounter with the big old dumb rude meanie ladle back in those caves was so unfair! How was a random symbol so strong? Anyway, thankfully for her the hunters never came this time meaning nobody died!

Now she was in Yuan just trying to do her duty and keeping her eyes open for any quick snacks opportunities, she already ate a delicious amaranthine Hawk lizard and there were reports that a nest of Stellar ice owls was sighted ten li from where her Century were currently stationed, nearby a watchtower on the outskirts of Twinbone Undercity.

Oh, hey a messenger was arriving. "Centurion Floros? I'm Legionnaire Diokles here to deliver new orders from Legate Koragos to all Century north of the city" he said. "Yep, that's me Centurion Aliki Floros, what's the order?".

"Notorious Noble knowledge Core formation elder Brain taker has been spotted heading to the Man As Mountain Array with a gathering of junior following him and multiple reported stolen tokens, your order is to join up with Legate Koragos fifteen li in the northeast and intercept them before they reach the array, now I must inform the others Century's" with that he left although Aliki noticed he was running a little bit faster than when he arrived but oh well she has a job to do and who knows maybe she'll be allow to keep one of the tokens! The Yuan Man as Mountains Array was right there full of opportunities and yummy beasts.


Author note I would like to thank Alectai for letting me adopt Aliki. I hope I can do her justice in the future.

I would like a LST for this turn and for Aliki to go into the Yuan SR.
 
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Amaranth Castellanos - Good Seed Background
Amaranth Castellanos

Compared to the other members of his clan, Amaranth Castellanos's Bronze has always been pitifully weak. Even someone who hadn't reached the first level of Qi Condensation could shrug off a ten foot fall easily, while Amaranth would have bled for the same. For them, a punch might crack stone, while Amaranth would crack first.

For many, that wouldn't be an issue, as they would just dedicate their efforts outside of tempering their body. However, Amaranth was stubborn. He enjoyed the path of physical combat, of trading blows with an opponent with your fists, even if he lacked that crucial advantage over others that his clan had. That being said, stubbornness can only go so far, and he was looked down on for foolishly hanging on to a role that he was unsuited for. He tried his best to ignore that, but he still felt a deep envy when he looked at others who could replicate what he did with far less effort.

One day, Amaranth was headed with a caravan to another kingdom when some members of the Blood Cannibal sect attacked. Thankfully, the guards were sufficient to hold them off, but not without several casualties. When he saw the Blood Cannibals absorb the life-force from the fallen guards, he felt a strange resonance in his body and faintly felt an urge to join in on the slaughter, but was immediately repulsed by the thought of having anything to do with those monsters. The rest of the trip went comparatively normally.

Now that Amaranth has joined the sect and finally become a cultivator, he's excited to go into combat to contribute to his sect!

Overall High Concept: My initial idea was of a character who didn't have their Good Seed bonus unlocked yet for whatever reason, and after giving the Blood Demon path a look-through, it turned into this. When Amaranth finally discovers that he could improve his constitution which had hindered him for so long, he'll almost certainly heavily lean to only killing the enemies of the sect, but the temptation to slaughter unrestrictedly will probably exist to some extent due to his old envy and the instincts of his constitution, suppressed by disgust it may be. (Ofc that route would end up with him being quickly put down.) We'll see how that ends up.

Good Seed Bonus: Variant Bronze Bloodline - Bloodsoaked Bronze Body: The initial bonuses from the Blood of Bronze is vastly diminished compared to a typical member of your clan. Your body naturally strengthens the more people you kill, but you must physically touch the blood to fully absorb the power. Stronger foes result in greater gains. Unlike the Path of the Blood Demon, this doesn't strengthen your spiritual cultivation.

Current Status as of start of Turn Seventeen: 316 years old. King-class Cultivator, currently in Single Pillar Stage 3.(Earth Below)

Unorthodox Bonuses:
10th Heavenstage - Body Purification: +9 Impact. Impurities are expunged, considerably increasing strength, speed, and toughness. Body is far better at having Qi channeled through it, undoubtably useful for a body cultivator.
11th Heavenstage - Qi Purification: +4 Impact. Gains Pure Qi that flows through a Pure Body, which is twice as potent per unit compared to ordinary Qi. This allows for more powerful techniques to be used. Notably, Amaranth used this to enhance the techniques he redirected back at his opponents.
12th Heavenstage - Soul Purification: Purified Soul grants passive resistance to soul attacks and Dao effects, a large boost to ALL soul arts, and improves cultivation speed by 1.5x in Nascent Soul. Without this, Manuel's lectures wouldn't have gone nearly as smoothly.
13th Heavenstage - Dao Purification: Dao is purified in the same manner that forming a Core requires, permitting one to follow the Single Pillar path, which contains many benefits. When unleashed, Dao Emanations automatically overwhelm anyone in Foundation Establishment without an appropriate countermeasure, and with the right matchup, may even crack Cores.

The Single Pillar Path:
Stage 1 (Enormity of Heaven and Earth): Dao Emanations, normally restricted to those within Nascent Soul, can be employed a full two Great Realms earlier. As such, the vast majority of individuals within the same Realm have no answer to them, which makes their use assure victory. For this reason, Amaranth tends to hold external manifestations back during spars, preferring to instead use them to enhance his techniques.
Stage 2 (Heaven Above): Grants increased Dao benefits. A Single Pillar adept at this stage may extend the reach of their Emanation to hundreds of kilometers, granting them the broad-spanning strategic influence of someone in Core Formation on the battlefield. The cultivator's Dao is less offensive to the Heavens, and can spread more rapidly. When fighting a great deal of foes, Amaranth often uses this to impose his [Consumption] over a vast range, draining strength and vitality from those present on the night of bloodstained roses to fuel his own rampage. To those inside, the sky grows dark and cloudy, the earth is swirled with mists, while a full moon stained a crimson hue gazes down on the lands.
Single Pillar 3 (Earth Below): Grants more powerful Dao effects usable by the cultivator in their immediate surroundings. These abilities are short ranged, but the impact is incredible compared to the prior stages, comparable to a full-fledged Nascent Soul using their Dao effects at range. In short, true [Dao Magic] can be performed at this level of the Pillar's development, with a significantly higher degree of refinement in interpretations of the overarching Dao. While Amaranth could previously use his Dao to do things like consume the sounds he makes, at this stage he can even consume his sense of presence, making him significantly harder to detect for targets. If something can abstractly be described as being performed by consuming some property of reality or another, it may be possible for Amaranth himself to perform.

Impact: +26 (Invincible under Core Formation. If Emanations are used, can conditionally clash with and defeat Core Formation enemies.)
-Toad Foot Boots: Allow him to jump much higher than he otherwise would be able to, and land safely. One boot was destroyed during his tribulation. The second was destroyed in his duel with Rashni Voidheart.
-Sticky Toad Saliva Droplet: Allows him to stick and slow down foes in the same realm and even allow fighting Early Foundation Establishment. Consumed.
-Hungering Fist: A self developed technique that allows him to absorb the Qi of enemies with his constitution at a highly accelerated rate. It has been developed to also permit the absorption of the qi of techniques and to fire them back on the attacker. Used as the foundation of a new style.
-Mist-Command Pendant: A pendant that allows him to control mists, allowing him to sneak around and strike from concealment. It is also useful for escaping from dangerous situations. Consumed.
—Subsumed into the still developing Art, the Decoherence Shroud.
-Arm and Foot of Living Flame:
These replacement limbs let him use fire techniques with far more effectiveness, as even a portion of the body of a Fire Spirit is much more conducive towards such things than one of a human.
-First Principle of Annihilation: After his mind, heart and body were rended into by Rashni's Dao-Sorcery of Annihilation, Amaranth was finally able to use his understanding of the cycle of Consumption to grasp some comprehension of Rashni's techniques. He can now, at great risk to himself, apply the property of Annihilation to his limbs of flames, bypassing the defenses of enemies to directly erase the part it contacts.
-Grand Stirring Gravity Technique: A secret cooking technique that allows Amaranth to twist the gravitational forces in a small area to stir soups, stews, and any number of dishes, just as well as the innards of his foes.
-Admixture Technique: A more advanced cooking technique that permits Amaranth to fuse things together, from ingredients to improve one's cooking, to life itself with nonliving or living objects. A chair might be combined with a horse, or a bird with a man, or a sword with the aforementioned chair, each combination taking on unusual unique characteristics of both progenitors. If Amaranth could break a thing, he can likely fuse it with another thing.

Tribulation Treasures: 0
Life-Saving Treasures: Two
Current Maximum Lifespan: 500 years. (1000 years is the highest you can extend your lifespan to within Foundation Establishment.)

Turn Two Fate: Served in a support role against a Core Formation Bandit by providing Qi to a Core Formation Elder. The kill sprayed blood all over Amaranth which his constitution absorbed, resulting in a meteoric rise in cultivation to the Ninth Heavenstage. However, his cultivation is shaky, and cannot currently advance.
Turn Three Fate: 3 Turns away from the 10th Heavenstage. Was contracted to kill many toads. One had eaten a large magical boot filled with Spirit Stones, and fused with the item to form something new. When the toad was killed it granted a pair of Toad-Foot Boots in the shape of flippers, allowing Amaranth to jump many times his height and land safely.
Turn Four Fate: Entered the Qiguai Secret Realm. Upon first entering, was challenged by a 10th Heavenstage cultivator, who promptly beat him badly, robbed him of his gains and Wounded him. He managed to find an excellent treasure. An ancient Battle-Trained Thousand-Tongue Toad found him, drawn by the aura of his magical boots. It gifted him with a Sticky Toad Saliva Droplet. A powerful treasure allowing him to stick and slow down anyone in the same realm, and would even allow him to temporarily fight an enemy in Early Foundation Establishment. After this, a series of other cultivators chased him, Badly Wounding him, willing to kill a Golden Devil for the luck boost. They hunted him down like an animal, and at the very last were about to kill him. Without his Infernal Eagle Pendant, he would have surely died, but at least managed to escape from the Qiguai Secret Realm with his life, losing his Pendant.
Turn Five Fate: Who does not know of the Burning Bronze Demon, the igniter of his own bloodline, the first to stand against impossible odds fist to fist? Who can gainsay what he has done? Who can heal his crippled body? (Healed but then immediately Crippled. Consumed his own bloodline with a forbidden art in a crucial moment in order to delay multiple Foundation Experts for thirty seconds. Without his efforts, the Miracle at Pleuron, which had to thread through a needle to slay that Core Elder, would surely not have gone nearly as well.)
Turn Six Fate:
Healed, and cultivated. To say Amaranth was not famous after his deeds at Pleuron would be a lie, but it took many years for him to recover. After a decade, he pursued his cultivation with incredible vigour, but made only ordinary progress. With few adventures and the like to speak of, he was bent on making up the time he had lost.
Turn Seven Fate: Hunted by bandits for a year, he trapped them and killed them, seizing a Mist-Command Pendant (+1 Impact) from the leader, allowing him to summon mists to hide within or escape through.
Turn Eight Fate: Amaranth blazed into glory. There was little other way to say it. None knew what he discovered in the Xin Kingdom, but he left a man in the 10th Heavenstage, and returned with the heads of three Cannibals, as well as a cultivation of the 12th. (+80 cultivation years.) Radiating power, he slew more and more Dervishes, and in the end merely puttered out - at the end of the raid he found no particularly amazing kills, nothing absurd or ridiculous, his moment to shine having since passed.
Turn Nine Fate: Amaranth had a rather ordinary time at the Fearless Line, if it could be called that. Whether other men fought great battles, he was put in the rear-guard, and found himself stoically cleaning up the messes of others. Several attacks by genius talents from the Saber Palace left a great rent in their lines, and he was consequently forced to rescue mortals who should've been safeguarded many times, taking blows and moving out of position to do so. While he survived without incident, there were many close calls, and despite his work he was constantly taunted by the Saber Palace talents for not fighting in the front-line.
Turn Ten Fate: Amaranth faced down the Trials as he had done before, and found himself almost wounded. Using his treasure in a fit of paranoia to avoid it, he stood at the very edge of the 13th Heavenstage.
Turn Eleven Fate: Through some obscene stroke of luck, our Clan gained multiple Kings in a single decade. This is a statistical anomaly of such an extreme level that many believe foul play to be involved in our fate. Nevertheless, let it be known that Amaranth succeeded in his endeavors, though perhaps not as perfectly as the last two.
While he successfully endured the tribulation and forged a single unified pillar, near the end of the ordeal, Amaranth's entire right arm and his right foot were destroyed, along with a chunk of his upper chest. He survived thanks to the same sort of priceless treasures which enable anyone to take on a Thirteenth Heavenstage tribulation with a chance of victory. Fastening some hastily-forged prosthetics, Amaranth rushed to Hong Xuan to participate in the mission, having heard of how undermanned it was and wishing to test out his bizarre new powers for himself.
His role in Demetrius' plan was simple: eat. Once Xiuying cut the fire spirit into pieces, he would consume said pieces while it was unable to effectively fight back, killing the monster and feeding his eldritch appetite for a time. This almost worked, but not quite: Xiuying, badly injured as she was, didn't quite cut deep enough - not all of the pieces were cleanly separated, and Amaranth could only take in less than a quarter of the spirit's mass before it reformed and fled. From this power, he grew himself an arm and foot of living flame, useful for all sorts of fire techniques. (+2 Impact)

Current Objective: To destroy the enemies of the Clan, as Amaranth usually does— though this time, not in open warfare, but to search out saboteurs lurking in captured cities and fortresses, waiting for their moment to strike at the Golden Devil Clan.

It isn't his typical style, but he wanted to learn how to use his Emanations in a less obvious manner instead of what they easily lend to, so this seemed like a good choice.

Amaranth is also looking to Teach some Juniors. While age isn't backing him against the wall anymore, he's still keenly aware of his own mortality, so he's looking to pass some of his knowledge down. He doesn't really have a proper clan behind him, as the Castellanos are strewn all over the place, so he'll have to search them out himself.

A/N: This is my first fanwork ever, so it's pretty trash. I'm thinking of expanding out that caravan visit to a full omake soon, because right now it's very outline-y. There's also very good odds that I'll give up on this entirely and this'll be in my cringe flashbacks in the future, but we'll see how it goes. I'm genuinely tempted to wipe this off the face of the internet before anyone sees it, but if I don't plunge into the water I'll never improve anyway. (EDIT: Turns out that I didn't abandon this idea. Nice. For my first omake, I expanded out the caravan visit.)
Omakes:
Bandit Attack during Caravan to Shen Kingdom! - 1788 words (Boost to Constitution Growth.)

The Terrifying Titanic Toad! - 2393 words (Hungering Fist Technique.)

Fortuitous Encounter - 3333 words (Lifesaving Treasure.)

Crisis in the Qiguai Secret Realm! - 2242 words (Healing Treasure.)

Mysteries of Metal! - 2080 words (Second Omake for Turn 5.) (Fate Bonus.)

The Burning Bronze Demon! - 1687 words (Healing Treasure)

The Long Recovery - 2100 words (Tribulation Treasure. Also picking up Tribulation Treasures for Turn 7 and 8, since I did enough threadmarking to not feel bad doing so.)

Researching the Qi Draining Desert - 2100 words (Second Omake for Turn 9.)

A Simple Recipe - 2347 words (First Omake for Turn 14)

Testing of the Devouring King - 5000 words (First Omake for Turn 15) (LST)

Kainos and Amaranth In - Amaranth Robs a Dude - 2308 words (First Omake for Turn 16) (Tribulation Boost)
 
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Amaranth Castellanos 1 - Bandit Attack during Caravan to Shen Kingdom!
Amaranth Castellanos
Bandit Attack during Caravan to Shen Kingdom!​

He woke to the sound of feet shuffling around in the sand. Amaranth rubbed his bleary eyes and got out of his tent. Were they traveling again this soon? The caravan usually started traveling after a break a little later than this, he could have sworn, but he supposed that catching the majority of the hours before noon for travel meant that getting up before sunrise wasn't a bad idea. Amaranth stretched out his limbs, and got himself as awake as he could this early in the middle of the desert. Well, if he was going to be awake anyway, he might as well chat. He was traveling to Shen Kingdom for the experience of meeting people in a place where bronze was uncommon anyway, so he might as well enjoy the journey as well as the destination. He headed over to where the guard Chen Wuming was, along with several other guards.

Chen Wuming was a body cultivator who looked like a middle-aged mortal, and unlike the many body cultivators Amaranth knew from his Clan, he lacked the bloodline of bronze. It made sense. After all, he wasn't part of the Clan, so naturally he wouldn't. Still, Amaranth marveled at that ordinary fact. For the vast majority of Amaranth's life, he'd only seen body cultivators with the power of bronze backing up their motions— unlike him. Amaranth, with bronze so weak that a fall that shouldn't have left a scratch made him bleed, Amaranth, whose fists couldn't even crack stone. Lacking that, the path of body cultivation should have been the last spot he placed his efforts, yet it was. He didn't back down from the challenge, because inefficient as it may be, he loved to fight with his fists. Amaranth trained as hard as he could to keep up, but in the end clan members who spent just as much effort would dumpster him in a spar. He remembered the jeers from those who believed that he was just wasting his time doing what he did. Amaranth brushed it off as best as he could, but he couldn't deny that he didn't envy them for their natural ability. Still, he knew that there were many powerful body cultivators out there who didn't have bronze in their bones at all. He couldn't give up. He wouldn't give up.

So, when Amaranth saw a person who was a successful body cultivator even without bronze, it made him smile, since it made that intangible knowledge in his head feel like it had some weight to it beyond the weight of books and rumors.

Still, as much as he tried to suppress it, he couldn't help but remember. Remember that there were those in his clan at the very same stage as Chen who would have much more combat power, which made him uncomfortable, to put it lightly. A smile, but then a frown.

After some banal chatter about the day-to-day issues of the caravan, Amaranth mentioned his experiences to Chen, and if he'd have any advice. Chen only had one thing to say.

"That's just how Fate is at times, so you've just got to settle with it. A person with a bloodline is always going to—"

Suddenly, a dull red flash appeared in the distance. Chen quickly became alert.

"Get to your tent," he said curtly.

"What is it?"

"The Battle Blood Cannibal Sect. Now, get to your tent if you want to live."

Amaranth quickly nodded, and rushed to his tent, but watched what was happening from the opening.

He still can remember exactly what happened to this day if he just closes his eyes.

The guards try to reason with them, saying that the locals already paid the tribute so they should have no reason to do this, but the Blood Cannibals just laugh.

"Tribute? Do you honestly think that'd actually stop us?", the one in the front finally says. "Besides, all I see are some particularly juicy slices of meat, ready for the eating. What's wrong with taking advantage of that?"

And then the battle ensues.

The Blood Cannibals burst into blurs of frenzied motion, and one slashes at Chen Wuming with claws the shade of congealed blood. The guard retaliates with arms that shift to solid ice in the middle of the counter, parrying the strike and returning the attack. The cannibal takes a battering ram of freezing power to the stomach, turning the point of impact into a mess of frozen and shattered flesh and bone. He's staggering now, face twisted in a rictus of rage and hateful promise. However, Chen can't care less. After a strike like that, the guard is confident that he's got him done for, and moves in for the finishing blow. Just one more job completed, and he's gonna retire from this. As exciting as this life is, there is such a thing as too much of it. With thoughts like these in his head, he makes a rookie mistake. He's taken his focus off a cornered foe. With a look of madness in his eyes, the cannibal bites his tongue and burns his life force to boost his ability for a final, suicidal lunge. Chen hastily moves into a defensive stance, his arms like a wall of ice glinting under the light of the moon, but a crimson flare shears straight through the barrier and into his neck. His last thoughts are of regret. He was so close... The cannibal exults in his kill, sending his claws into the heart of his foe while roaring in triumph. A red haze emanates from the corpse, traveling into his body and stitching his wounds together. As the cannibal turns around to rejoin the melee, his head is crushed like an overripe watermelon by a bronze fist and sliced in half by a silvery arc of sword intent to confirm the kill.

Amaranth watches this completely horrified, but as he sees the red haze get absorbed by the cannibal, he feels a strange resonance in his body, and a faint eagerness to join in on the murder. The much larger portion of him is utterly repulsed, which intensifies even further when he sees the face of the person who just got killed. It was the guard he was talking to! Those damned Blood Cannibals, I'll tear them apart for what they've done! I'll kill them, I'll kill them, I'll KILL THEM ALL!!! There is blood everywhere. On the ground, on the swords of the clashing combatants, and unbeknownst to him, in his own eyes as he tenses to strike.

However… he can't join in. He knows that he can't join in, as much as he hates the fact, because he's just a mere mortal while these are full cultivators. He'd just get slaughtered, so he shouldn't try it, or so he repeated to himself again and again, while his body twitched and his eyes impotently glared.

The fight continues. Many guards fall, just like Chen Wuming did. Valiantly, but ultimately to the end. But, for every fallen guard, another Blood Cannibal meets the grave, and there are many more guards than Blood Cannibals. Slowly, realization comes to the eyes of the remaining Blood Cannibals, and they head to flee. The guards don't stop them. They've taken enough losses as is, and can't— won't spend more just to wipe out the rest. The Blood Cannibals aren't worth that anyway, and keeping the caravan safe is paramount, which means advancing to kill them off would be counterproductive. Still, it's not like the guards like doing this anyway. Throughout their careers, they've seen Blood Cannibals, bandits, and all sorts of others try to rob caravans, and end the lives of comrades and even close friends in the process, so the resentment can grow deep. Oftentimes, there are lone guards that break from the group to chase them, but they just as often get killed. But in the end, keeping the caravan safe is paramount, or so they repeat to themselves again and again.
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The rest of the trip wasn't nearly as exciting. Amaranth visited the stalls of the streets of Shen where there were some pretty tasty local foods that he hadn't tried out before. And of course, there was the experience of having the vast majority of people he saw not have that distinctive bronze in their skin and hair, which was nice. However, his thoughts always returned to the face of that guard, and the sound of those wretched claws shearing through the ice. He remembers the flow of the red mist strengthening the cannibal, and that strange feeling in his body when he saw it happening. He remembers that final bronze fist that ended the cannibal.

That final bronze fist. He looks at his own hands, as weak a shade of bronze as a member of the bloodline could have. Even here, the weakness of his bronze blocked him off from his dreams. With a bloodline as thin as this, how could he ever hope to pay back the Battle Blood Cannibal Sect? A memory bubbled to the surface.

"That's how fate is sometimes kid, you just got to settle with it."

No. He refused. If fate had decided that he'd have to settle with being mediocre compared to the others of his family, then he'd defy fate. He stood up in his bedroom. He hadn't noticed the details of the feeling before, but the bronze of his own fists sung to be sunk into the flesh of his enemies. Perhaps with this, he'd be able to make his body match, no, surpass the rest of his clan.

Or maybe he was just hallucinating from the stress of the battle between so many cultivators. A mortal's physique with the barest tinges of bronze would probably be feeble enough to fall to mundane ills like that. Honestly, that was probably much more likely than him awakening to some secret power. His shoulders slumped. What was he thinking? But the hope refused to be crushed by practicality. (Or was it that he just didn't want the hope to be crushed?) Either way, he resolved to test out his theory at the sect. He'd soon join and finally become a cultivator, so he might as well see if killing one of the sect's enemies on a mission would do anything special. If not? Well, he'd just keep on doing what he did. The hard route is still a route, after all.

A/N: As you might have guessed, Amaranth misunderstood what Chen meant, and it certainly doesn't help that he was interrupted in the middle of his spiel. Though, motivations born of misunderstandings can still be fun nonetheless. If it seems to you that Amaranth's character is different than described in my Good Seed blurb, you're probably correct. This is just what ended up as my end result. @occipitallobe, I'd like my bonus to be to his constitution, so his baseline isn't low enough to lead to an early death. Kind of like that cultivation bonus giving 10 years worth, but to his constitution instead. (So, considering how it grows, offscreen it would be explained by killing more enemies of the sect.)

(BTW, this was my real first omake ever. My Good Seed blurb was more like of an outline than a true omake, TBH. I hope that I managed to make a 4-5/10 one at least, but that's probably too optimistic tbh.)
 
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Amaranth Castellanos 2 - The Terrifying Titanic Toad!
Amaranth Castellanos
The Terrifying Titanic Toad!

Year 14 since he joined the Sect. Prior to the Core Formation Bandit incident.

Amaranth flooded his fist with Qi and struck the boulder one more time. It splintered into pieces, and he smiled. It'd been over a decade since he had become a real cultivator, and he still marveled at the little things like this. His bloodline hadn't shown much improvement from the influx of the spiritual energy that now ran through his body, and his cultivation speed wasn't exactly extraordinary, but even this was a huge jump from his previous abilities as a mortal. Then why, might you ask, was he happy in the first place? Surely that disparity that marked him as one of the weakest of the Bronze would hold, if not increase as the cultivation stages rose? Had he finally accepted his place in the world to be forever below? And normally, that'd be a fair assumption to make, but not all was how it seemed.

He looked at the back of his hand, a faint bronze, but deeper than it had ever been in his life.

That old, fanciful theory of his bronze strengthening through the blood of his foes seemed not to be a stress-driven delusion after all.

He still remembered the terrifying mission he recently went on that brought it to its current level.

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This is a story from many years ago. A local Spirit Cane plantation placed on one of the rare oases in the Organ Meat Desert had been suffering from a terrible infestation, with vast swathes of the crop being ravaged by swarms of cane beetles. The situation started mundane enough, so they decided to increase the use of pesticides to counteract the issue and tilled the earth in an attempt to wipe out the eggs. Normally, this should have been sufficient, but due to a stroke of misfortune, some were missed, so natural selection meant that that over a few generations during this extermination, the beetles developed an adaptation to increase their odds of survival. Specifically, they developed an affinity to the rich spiritual energy within the Spirit Cane, allowing them to develop into proper spirit beasts that could easily shrug off the pesticide.

However, the plantation managers weren't overly worried. After all, while some of them may have become spirit beasts, they were pretty pathetic ones to be frank, so a small group of cultivators of Qi Condensation cultivators should have been more than enough to exterminate them. So, they waited, and waited, and waited for a response, but the cultivators never came back.

Later, when they sent a search party, the only evidence of the earlier group was scattered fragments of bone. Turns out, even though the beetles only made it to the first level of Qi Condensation at best, a disturbingly large amount had also grown to sizes between an apple and a watermelon, so their bodily strength was greater than it should have been. Combined with the numbers advantage, the small group never had a chance.

At this point, the plantation managers were panicking. The beetles would begin to snowball, and snowball, and after a point there'd be much more problems than just having a plantation gone. They considered calling in high level experts to deal with the issue, but ultimately it was judged to be an unnecessarily high expense. Instead, they looked at nature for their solution. There was a species of toad, dubbed the cane toad, that was the natural predator of the mortal versions of these Cane Beetles.

If they fed a large population of Cane Toads on spirit stones and beast cores, then surely even the spirit beetles would be wiped out. Thanks to their reserve wealth, it was possible to bring all these Toads to the second level of Qi Condensation, which should take these Beetles some time to get to. So, they did so, and it didn't just work. In fact, it worked absolutely fantastically. The Cane Toads gulped down beetles like competitive eaters at a particularly renowned tournament. The few that tried to put up a fight were quickly put down. A spirit beetle might be able to defeat an ordinary Cane Toad, but when spiritual energy was even on both sides, the oversized Spirit Cane Toads were the clear winner in the martial field. Even if somehow a group of beetles defeated a single cane toad, the potent poison in their bodies quickly brought them to their end.

And for a time, all was well. Harvests were going as they should, and the dread Cane Beetle had been vanquished. Only a few of the old wave of spirit beetles still lived, and those had reached a terrifyingly high level of power from the carnage either way, so people were hesitant to go after them. Besides, they hid away now, so the plantation managers were content.

However, the plantation managers forgot one, crucial detail. Remember all that spirit energy which was causing that problem in the first place? It's still there, just concentrated in the far less numerous Cane Toads, many of whom took the opportunity to surpass the second stage to the third stage, the fourth, or even in very rare occasions, the fifth Heavenstage of Qi Condensation. At this point, you could see Cane Toads as tall as a fully-grown man.

Worse, while the Cane Toads weren't nearly as prolific as the Cane Beetles due to not being insects, they still were very much so by non-insectoid standards.

What ended up happening is that the population began to expand and expand, and while they ignored the spirit cane, they ate many of the local species causing ecological havoc, harming the people who lived in the area. Eventually, one of the outlying villages had called cultivators from the Golden Devil Sect themselves to help them exterminate the toady pests that were in the vicinity at least.

Amaranth was one of them. At this point, he had recently broken through the Third Heavenstage, also known as the Acupoint Awareness stage. It had taken him a fair bit more time in comparison to the prior stages to get all them open so he wouldn't sabotage his future cultivation, but eventually he had succeeded. Now at the Fourth Heavenstage, he was confident he could participate in this mission.

After resting in the village for a day, he headed out alongside several others to start killing toads. The majority were comparatively young, only at the second Heavenstage, and Amaranth's fists easily burst through their bodies, spraying crimson. His constitution responded to the source of nourishment, and started assimilating the power in the blood. (As a side-bonus of his constitution, the poison in the membranes wouldn't harm him unless he ingested it internally. For that reason, he kept his mouth clamped down when the blood sprayed.) However, to his currently fourth-stage self, it was comparatively paltry, and he'd have to kill an unfeasibly large amount to expect a breakthrough. He felt like his body was groaning in disappointment, but it continued to absorb what it could.

After a week or so of this, Amaranth himself began to grow bored. Where were the strong toads, the one that struck fear in the hearts of the plantation managers? But it seemed that only their whelps that had probed outside of that area were over here. He really shouldn't have gotten his hopes up. Why had he prepared so much for this in the first place if it had all come to just this? He was never going to surpass the others with ordinary Bronze and have the power to strike at the rapidly-growing adherents of the Blood-Path like this.

And so, Amaranth decided to do something reckless. And dumb, and foolish, and most probably ending in his death, but he did it. He bought some particularly strong spirit-beast bait with his saved merit points and tossed it into the field. The few that remained near the village after the dedicated efforts of the sect members dashed at it, but were easily dispatched. Annoyed, he shouted at the sky, "Is this all you have for me, toads?! If all of you are just this pathetic, then I should have just headed over to the beetles!"

Now, statements like these are generally foolish to make when you're near a cluster of enemies in the first place, but Amaranth just assumed that they were too dumb to understand him either way. Now, while that might be true, they sure as hell can comprehend the tone, and more importantly the volume of your voice.

A deep croak resonated through the earth, and Amaranth's eyes darted to the being that made it. It was a big, bulbous mass, with eyes the size of grapefruits, scaly folds all across its body, a peculiar large red line on its left side, and three-toed limbs that seemed like they were tensing with power.

It was looking straight at him.

Amaranth gulped, and began to slowly back away when it rapidly hopped, blurring straight forward to where he was! Amaranth threw himself to the side, barely dodging the behemoth which landed with the force of a boulder tossed onto a fortress wall by a catapult on to where he formerly was. Amaranth quickly scanned it with his Spiritual Sense, and while it seemed to be just in the fourth Heavenstage like him, this seemed to be some mutant variant with fleshly body power that clearly exceeded its stage!

Well, at least he finally got that fight he wanted. Bemoaning his fate would be worse than useless right now, so he prepared to strike back. Looking carefully at the toad, it seemed that the strange red line he saw from a distance was actually a rather deep wound left by a sword cultivator. If he struck there, he might be able to do significant damage. Though, why did the toad attack him if it was already— Because it saw him as just weak enough to risk it. Beasts are able to consume humans for power without consequences after all, and this'd be a useful way to heal.

He didn't intend on becoming just another meal. He gathered a large amount of his Qi to his left hand the next time it charged at him, and struck right there. Yeah, that was a brilliant plan, he was a—

Pain. Sky, then earth, then sky, then earth, then a crash. He felt completely disoriented, but forced himself to struggle on his feet. If he was too slow, he'd just get swallowed up. He rubbed his head. What? He could have sworn he landed that punch right on the wound, that should have stopped it clean, right? Vision still blurry, he saw the toad a few dozen feet away, preparing to charge again, wound the same but with a fist imprint right on it. Green blood was oozing out smeared with red, but when he looked at his own arm the blood looked like his— A sudden stab of pain hit him. It was cracked.
He swore. Was this the end? Was he going to die right now, right here, since he was foolish enough to try to catch a fish that was too big for his hook? Probably. He noted that it was terribly ironic that he was fighting someone with a superior constitution naturally and getting his ass whooped like usual. Maybe this was just the fate of Amaranth Castellanos.

But did this mean he'd just sit down and take it? HELL NO! Amaranth Castellanos isn't gonna go down that easy. He'd already decided that his ability wouldn't always be inferior, and this mutant Toad would be no different. He'd blow this obstacle apart.

Besides, despite the situation, his constitution ached for the power for this toad, and it felt ready and eager to him. He was happy to oblige.

He focused his desire to survive, his constitution's hunger for power, and all the dregs of Qi that he had left into his fist, and the bronze of his fist dulled, but not with weakness. It was a dullness that hungered for the power of foes to raise it beyond all who sought to oppose it. The dullness of the Oric******— his mind blanked and the memory disappeared.

When the toad charged again, Amaranth sidestepped and landed a haymaker right into the place where his fist had imprinted its flesh before, straight into its body. He tore straight through, breaking the wound completely open and expanding it some more, showering him with strangely green blood. However, he didn't pull his fist out. Amaranth seized the flesh with all of his might, and his constitution greedily drunk in the power. The green blood over his body didn't break into a haze at all, but his skin absorbed it like a sponge nonetheless. It was like his body had gone into overdrive. The thrashing of the toad weakened, but with a heave it shoved Amaranth away. Murder filled its amphibious eyes, and it bled freely from the gigantic wound that the previous injury had become. It fully intended on killing him today, as gruesomely as possible in return for this injury.

It was still badly injured, much worse than Amaranth was, but it was still a mutated Spirit Cane Toad. It instinctually burned its power like dross, shedding it away in a verdant cascade of light, and made its final suicidal lunge. Amaranth had a split second to make a choice, and decided that he'd respond in kind. Amaranth took the newfound power he had stolen, and burnt away the greater part of the toad's former power to empower his counterstrike.

The toad ripped apart in an explosion of gore, splattering the field and Amaranth with it.
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Amaranth broke out of his reminiscing. While he had lost over half of what he had gained from the Cane Toad, the increase to his bronze was still fairly noticeable. Small, incremental steps were important in this long road, and he'd cherish each one of them. More importantly… He focused once again, and his fist dulled. His hand snapped back at a Spirit Tree, draining its vitality. He had gained something much more valuable anyway.


A/N: So, I was trying to write out the one with the Core Formation Elder @occipitallobe, but I felt like I didn't have enough bits yet with Amaranth before he skipped to the Ninth so I decided to write on this one instead. It's funny, because I was certain I wanted to get a Life-Saving Treasure, but this is where the idea-mill decided to go instead. Well, time to roll the dice once more.

Make no mistake, that was a really awesome prompt, and it'll probably be the next one I write.

My omake-reward for this one is the technique he used in this story. It's a fist-strike that enhances his constitution's energy-theft ability for the duration of the attack, though ofc it has the restriction of requiring contact with blood. The qi is ripped away with such ravenousness that the attack deals extra damage. I can't think of a name right now, so I'll probably think of one later. (Or maybe you could make one? IDK.)

(BTW, the burning away the immediate gains he got for a burst of power was an idea based on the traditional "burning away your cultivation base for power" thing. It was also to be consistent with the fact that he only had average advancement until the Core Formation Bandit incident.)
 
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Amaranth Castellanos 3 - Fortuitous Encounter!
Amaranth Castellanos
Fortuitous Encounter!

(The Core Bandit Incident, 40 years ago.)

Amaranth sat down in the building, watching the Scorpion Road. Guard outposts like these were common here, since this trade-route guaranteed the flow of trade through the Golden-Devil Sect and its affiliated cities. After all, the wealth of spirit stones from the mines meant a lot less if it couldn't be traded, so it was vitally important to keep this passage safe and secure from the myriad bandits who wanted the wealth the merchants carried and the hungry spirit beasts and other dangerous creatures that sought to kill them. That way, people kept on coming, and the Golden Devils benefited.

As for the small-scale, Amaranth was taking a mission as a guard now for three main reasons. One, it paid fairly well in contribution points, which were always useful. Two, because it was a job where he could have a reliable source of foes to kill, to feed his body. Three, and most importantly in his view, from time to time it got him really good fights, where he was pushed to the edge of his ability. Combat was one of the great joys of his life, after all. (The other being eating good food, of course. One of the side-benefits of killing spirit beasts often is that you'd have fairly good meat to sell if he made the kill clean enough, and he had been making some forays into the field himself, considering how much free time he had. At the moment, he was pretty much a novice, though.)

Fortunately or unfortunately, depending on one's perspective, while the poor luck of his Clan often meant that the Scorpion Road was more dangerous than it should be, often the major tides of misfortune struck elsewhere, and even the few difficult fights were beginning to dry up.

He could still remember the last one. It was one of the Organ Meat Desert's classic Sand Worms that had decided that it would try to gobble up the caravan. Unusually stealthy even for a Sand-Worm, they hadn't realized it was poised to strike even when it was barely a cart-length away. Even with the help of the other guards, without his Fist of the Hungering Beast, he'd surely have been a goner.

Though he tried to dodge, he had ended up taking some bad wounds from its opening strike. His hand hovered over his left side, healed at this point, and he winced in reminiscence. Without the Qi he stole he wouldn't have been able to ablate enough of the Worm's dying attack to keep him alive, or at least not heavily injured.

All of that being said, it still had been years since a fight of that level, and he was starting to grow antsy. He itched to sink his fists into an opponent of power once more instead of the myriad chaff that attacked the roads, and other than that...

Well, he noted as a general tendency, the stronger a spirit beast was, the richer the flavor of their flesh would be. It was a side effect of the sheer spiritual energy permeating and perfecting their form, he thought.

That wasn't to say all spiritual beasts were delicious, of course. That Worm wasn't exactly palatable after being cooked, though to be fair that could just have been a matter of his personal dislike for its texture. He had heard from rumors that people from far off, near the Third Sea, ate the limbs of a strange creature called a squid that lived in the waters. It was a chewy, rubbery dish, and he thought that the gigantic spirit worm that he ate pieces of might have had a similar mouthfeel.

Of course, all of that was simple speculation to say the least. He'd never even seen the Third Sea in his life beyond pictures, after all. Anyways, while that may have not been to his taste, there was that wonderful Spirit Ostrich a few years even before the Worm that he did enjoy.

It was a blazingly fast beast, with wind-aspected qi naturally permeating through its feathers, pushing air aside and behind into jets to hasten its pace. The guards had worked together to hold it off despite its vastly superior speed. The power of formations really was something else. It was bleeding badly, and looked like it was going to get taken out quietly, but then it vanished. His next feeling was a stab of pain as it speared straight through his shoulder with its talon. At the time, he hadn't blinked an eye, since the rush of battle-thirst through his body had been so eager that even as his wound leaked crimson, he emptied his other arm to fell it with a Hungering Strike.

To an average person, this situation might seem peculiar. Normally, Spirit Ostriches weren't aggressive to the caravans that crossed the Scorpion Road, since they'd usually content themselves with the spirit lizards and insects that wandered across the desert without caring enough about the caravans to make such an attack, so one might wonder what happened.

That time, things had been different. A foolish traveler had decided that stealing the Ostrich's eggs straight out of its nest for breakfast would be a smart idea, and he failed to consider the fact that their mother might come looking back to check for them.

Worse yet, the traveler had already started to scramble one of the eggs into a gigantic omelet when the ostrich arrived to attack, so there wasn't even the possibility of avoiding the conflict entirely.

Either way, at the end, it turned out fine. Amaranth and the other guards demanded an egg each in recompense for the traveler's mistake, and he acquiesced.

With one of the remaining eggs and some chopped cooked pieces of the ostrich's meat, some stored pepper and salt, as well as some boiled cactus leaves, Amaranth made himself an omelette the next day. It was pretty rough in shape considering he didn't have much experience with eggs of this size, but while the appearance can matter, in this situation the actual taste mattered a whole lot more. Amaranth loved it, and he fondly thought of that omelet in his days ahead. It was too bad he didn't see an ostrich of that level since. That probably meant his memory of that omelet likely was slightly exaggerated by longing and nostalgia, but he firmly still believed that it probably was mostly as good as he remembered it like.

As he relaxed and watched the latest passing caravan, a sudden pressure descended upon the area. It was the aura of a vast amount of Qi of incredible density, guided into a point by a single unswerving ideal. In other words, it was the aura of a Core Formation expert releasing the power of their cultivation base. Amaranth jerked up in alarm, and rushed alongside the other guards to see what was happening.

There wasn't one Core Formation Cultivator. There were two. One was a woman with the unmistakable bronze of the Golden Devil Clan holding a sword of spirit-forged bronze, and the other seemed to be a man in the clothes of someone from the Turtle-World. They both seemed to have taken quite a bit of damage at this point, and their reserves felt like they were half-eaten away despite their might. The fight was looking like it'd close out in an hour now, which Amaranth knew to mean it'd end soon, considering the duration Core Formation fights normally took.

Worse, Amaranth didn't know who would win. If the bandit won, Amaranth and the rest of the Qi Condensation guards would be absolutely slaughtered. That couldn't be allowed. But what could they do? It's not like they could contribute directly to the fight, after all. A Qi Condensation level cultivator would get wiped out easier than swatting a fly by this foe. Something felt off about that thought. No, there definitely was something that he could do. He started to search his memories when a guard shouted out.

"Channel power to the Qi-Pooling Formation!"

At this point, the numerous guards from this outpost and the ones that were relatively close had gathered, forming a crowd that watched the fight in front. Most were wary, some were vaguely excited to have something cut up their tedium, but there certainly was an undercurrent of fear running through.

That being said, they were members of the Golden Devil Clan. They wouldn't break so easily. The cultivators poured their Qi into the Formation, which shot an invisible beam of energy to the Clan Core Formation Expert. Immediately, the flagging reserves of the Core Formation Expert was bolstered, and rose up. Taking advantage of the increase of Qi, the woman poured more power into her techniques. The gleaming Sword Qi that blasted with each stroke of her blade started emerging with greater force and speed, and the bandit found it difficult to cope, as exhausted as he was. The sword weaved a maze of cutting force which was rapidly but barely dodged.

Finally, the bandit made a misstep. When a blast from below was dodged by leaping above, the bandit lined up in the path of a blast that bisected his head and shoulders right off his body. Stunned, the bandit didn't move in time to prevent the rest of his body from being roughly chopped into pieces by the incoming sword intent. Blood spewed out from the remains of his body, a significant amount launched at the nearby crowd as an aftershock of the attack.

Amaranth was focusing his whole mind on giving Qi to the Clan Cultivator, so he didn't notice the stream of blood aimed in his general direction until it nearly hit. He turned, but his speed wasn't nearly sufficient to get out of the way. The blood completely drenched his clothes, his face, and the rest of his body.

For a second, his constitution was just in shocked awe. Even though the Core Formation bandit was exhausted, its blood was a source of powerful Qi that far surpassed anything it had consumed in the past. The moment of shock didn't last long, though.

The hunger of his constitution had been fully awakened, and the entirety of his skin flashed grey. The crimson fluid streamed into his body at a rapid pace as if it turned into a vortex, and grey sparks danced across his skin as impurities were pushed out and vaporized. The rich Qi of Core Formation was on a completely different level, and the boundaries that kept him in the Fifth Heavenstage were being shattered open. He had been trying his best to open Meridians in this stage, but it was a time-consuming process. However, the impurities in his meridians were nothing compared to the sheer electric force that this Qi possessed, and were wiped away like it with the ease of someone flicking their sleeve. In seconds, the channels that he had spent so long trying to laboriously open were completely unblocked, and his Qi rushed straight through, bringing Amaranth to the Sixth Heavenstage. The power soon rapidly thickened and deepened, bringing him to the Seventh, and then the Eight. At this point, Amaranth was just feeling utter euphoria. But then, he remembered something, and his thoughts came down to earth.

The Eighth Heavenstage was infamous for being a barrier to many a Qi Condensation cultivator in terms of preventing advancement to the Foundation Establishment stage. The Dantian had to be carefully shaped and expanded so it would be able to fit Dao Pillars in the first place, and then further so the traditional set of Seven could be fit so breaking through to Core Formation would be a possibility in the future.

It was well known among the Golden Devils that if one took the laborious path to make Eight Dao-Pillars, the so-called True Dao Pillars, one's future breakthroughs would be eased and the holder would even get a much coveted boost to their luck, which was a rare thing for the Golden Devils indeed. Amaranth had long resolved to take this path, as he wanted to seize advantages to prevent a situation where he's inherently at a disadvantage compared to the others from occurring again. However, the current issue was that the sheer amount of power rushing through his body right now wasn't exactly good for the precise control that it took to shape the Dantian.

He gathered his will, and clamped it as best as he could onto the Qi. If it was any other circumstance, this Qi would have probably thrown him off as easily as a stallion would throw off a baby trying to ride it. However, the fact that this Qi had been processed by his body gave him some level of authority over it. Not enough to completely bring it to a stop, but enough to guide the process. He carefully circulated the power evenly throughout the edges of his Dantian in the traditional technique of the Golden Devils.

Normally, this'd be a much slower process, but that wouldn't be possible in the current situation. He felt flares of pain as he tried to make his dantian adapt to becoming larger at a much faster rate than it should, like a pressure in his chest. To be honest, he was surprised that he hadn't torn it apart by now, but unbeknownst to him, that too was a feature of the Bloodsoaked Bronze Body. It'd be awfully bad at assimilating power if the wielder's spiritual organs couldn't deal with an influx like this, after all.

That being said, it wasn't omnipotent, and trying to assimilate power two great stages above in a safe manner was difficult, to say the least. Holding the Qi felt like he was trying to chain lightning, and although somehow, paradoxically, it was working right now, it was beginning to slip from his grasp. Blasts of Qi started irregularly coming from the jagged, twisting mass, and his dantian started stretching dangerously, alongside a piercing pain like if someone stabbed him in the heart. Amaranth's eyes widened in shock, and pulled the power away. He used what remained to bring him to the Ninth Heavenstage, fortifying his Dantian, but even that made it feel like it was about to creak.

Amaranth grimaced. While this was a fortuitous encounter for sure, that mistake would make his cultivation unsteady. Maintaining this level would take effort on its own, and properly stabilizing it enough to make a breakthrough might take him multiple decades longer than expected. Oh well, he thought. He did have to establish and refine a proper Dao before breaking through to Foundation Establishment, so he had the time for that. While this did complicate his hope for breaking through to the 10th Heavenstage for his body cultivation, and maybe even trying for the 13th, the years in advance that this opportunity had bought were still valuable, even if overall his advancement speed would still be average since he'd be stalled out at the 9th while others would be advancing towards it.

There were also some more immediately relevant benefits of this. The combat power of the 9th Heavenstage would serve him very well in defending his life during the next time the Sects from the Fifth Sea invaded for their so-called Trials.

Besides, he was excited to see what sort of Spirit Beasts that he could challenge now. That Ostrich that took a team of cultivators his level back then could probably be slain by just himself this point. What a grand thought that was, really.

Still, there's a long road to go, and Qi Condensation is a small step in the long run.

The Clan Core Formation Expert had seen all of this happening, and was intrigued. With her powerful spiritual sense, the phenomenon was clear to see. She had just rummaged through the bandit's valuables in his bag of holding, and found a lifesaving treasure suitable for the Qi Condensation stage. The treasure was useless for the bandit himself, so he must have stolen it comparatively recently. No matter. This kid seemed sort of interesting, so might as well pass it over to him. Good Seeds got wiped out too often in this Clan, which wreaked havoc on the Golden Devil's ability to sustain power and grow, so helping prevent that sounded good to her.

"Hey, you! Take this." She tossed over what looked to be a pendant of some sort to Amaranth. "It'll save your life once when you're in trouble."

"Thank you! Could I ask you for your name—" And the Clan cultivator flew away. Well, he guessed that as a Core Formation-tier cultivator, she must be quite busy since there weren't that many in the whole Clan. Amaranth looked at the pendant. He could sense a variety of qi aspects on it, but he couldn't discern their overall purpose. He was never a item-crafter anyway, so that was expected. He placed it over his neck. Well, this should be quite useful to protect him from those Trials in sixty years. Good to be careful, especially against cultivators who were inherently better than others within their Heavenstage after all. Well, time to just relax into the sect-mission life and solidify his Dao.
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40 years later.

Amaranth was still in the 9th Heavenstage. At this point, this just rankled. He knew that he'd need to recover from his error years ago, but this was just kind of excessive. He had went on many sect-missions throughout the years, and now even had a pair of magic Toad Boots that let him take great leaps and land safely. They were quite useful, and had helped him on many different occasions. The utility of being able to reach high places, especially for a Qi Condenser who naturally has no flight capabilities, is something that's applicable to a surprising amount of tasks. Outside of the utility, in combat the degree of three-dimensional motion that it allowed made evasion possible in situations where he'd otherwise be completely surrounded. To say the least, he was quite grateful for finding it inside that Toad he killed so long ago.

However, at the moment, he wasn't really thinking about that, but his poor cultivation progress. Over the last four decades, he had solidified his Dao. He had decided to take on the path of the Devourer, since that's what he did to the power of his foes with his primary technique as well as his constitution. A Dao that synergized with that would be quite useful. That being said, Amaranth may have still considered a different Dao, due to the uncomfortable connection it had to the Blood Path, if it wasn't his more innocent expression of a facet of Dao through his love of delicious food. On the Dao end of things, he was feeling pretty confident. The primary issue was the bottleneck he was stuck at right now. At this current pace, even the 10th Heavenstage would be a risky move to make.

Giving up on that just felt wrong. So, Amaranth researched, and researched, when he found a book speaking of a secret Realm that could be visited for great opportunity, but also great peril. It could be entered through a magic doorway that the Qiguai Clan held. Normally, he'd have never taken such a risk, but with this pendant, things were more uncertain.

He held the pendant up to his sight. It might actually be possible to gain something that would let him power through his bottleneck.

It was also possible that he'd get permanently crippled. However, if he didn't take this chance, he'd almost certainly have to break into Foundation Building from the 9th Heavenstage, with 10th being the best he'd be able to reach. Without seizing those advantages, it'd be guaranteed he'd be inferior despite his efforts, just as he was before. No.

He'd do it. No matter what happened, Amaranth swore that he'd not languish in the well-trodden route, even if it meant death would be the alternative.

AN: I'd like to take a Lifesaving Treasure as my omake bonus for this turn, @occipitallobe, and try out the Qiguai Secret Realm. Ofc, I'll write it in the Google Sheets as well.

This'll probably end up with him getting crippled, since I doubt the lucky streak will continue, but that might be fun to write about too.

(I'm looking this over, and wow, my characterization sucks. Well, that's how practice goes I guess.)
 
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Amaranth Castellanos 4 - Crisis in the Qiguai Secret Realm!
Amaranth Castellanos
Crisis in the Qiguai Secret Realm!

Roughly 20 years ago

Amaranth Castellanos traveled alongside a fairly large group which mostly radiated the auras of Qi Condensation, all heading towards the vaunted magic doorway of the Qiguai Clan. The secret realm of the Qiguai was said to be a place of marvel and terror, a place where opportunity could be found hand in hand with imminent death. You could find a secret legacy of an ancient cultivator, or you could be trapped, forever falling downwards, through infinitely twisting and turning worlds until you died from dehydration. You could find an ancient weapon, with powers that would shock and awe those of the same stage, or you could be slain by opportunistic trial-goers who saw the luck of slaying a Golden Devil as just one more prize to be found here. The Hundred-Year Trials were bad as it was, Amaranth thought. Having to deal with that nonsense even here really grated, but he supposed it was an inevitable consequence of that particular bounty set upon them by the Heavens. How troublesome.

This particular Secret Realm was said to be born from a Scale of the Heavenly Emperor Turtle, so he supposed that facing issues caused by the curse of the Heavens wasn't so strange. Though, it didn't seem to be deliberate manipulation on part of the Secret Realm, or at least if it existed it was subtle. It had a lot more to do with the social norms imposed by the reputation of the Golden Devils as well as the incentives for their death, which would apply to any secret realm. Being a Golden Devil, this was rather unfortunate, especially considering the extant risk of the particular realm he was about to enter as-is.

That all being said, the risk was still worth it. Amaranth had been stuck at the 9th Heavenstage for over 40 years, now. If he ever would have even the slightest hope of reaching the stages above before his demise, he'd have to take risks. As he walked across the path to the doorway, standing affixed to nothing but the air, he traced his fingers around his pendant. Quite some time ago now, he had asked around to check what it would do, and apparently it could be broken to summon a great flaming eagle that would seize him and bring him to safety. Amaranth could imagine many situations that he could encounter that would be convenient to have in.

The door creaked open, and the crowd ran through, with Amaranth soon following. The opening seemed to be a flat, pitch black, but when he crossed through—

The world broke into a kaleidoscope of color, reds and blues and greens all dancing around in patterns, and then his body hit the ground. His eyes were closed, but he hadn't closed them. Bizarre. He carefully opened his eyes and stood, looking around. It seemed to be a lush forest, with tall trees all around him, obscuring his sight. Amaranth sent out his spiritual sense to sweep the area to check if anyone was nearby, and it seemed that the area within his senses was free of other cultivators.

The Qi here had a strange feel to it, but it was certainly still denser than the Qi of the Desert. (Not like that was that high of a bar to clear.) With each breath, he could feel his cultivation being buoyed. Not enough for it to increase, but more than enough for the decline to be curtailed.
It seemed that he was lucky today. He had been expecting a tough fight from the onset, so this was certainly a stroke of fortune. Well, as he was here, there looked to be some spiritually rich herbs on the forest floor, so he might as well take a few.

Amaranth kneeled to scoop a few of the ones that seemed promising enough to sell for a solid amount of contribution points, and for a few minutes, things went peacefully enough.

Suddenly, he felt a higher level aura enter his range, and he tensed in preparation. It seemed to be stronger than him, but still in Qi Condensation, so that meant the Olympian Keystones. However, this cultivator didn't seem like they had greater reserves of Qi than him, from a rough estimate, so it had to be the 10th Heavenstage. It may not be hopeless, then.

The cultivator finally came within sight. It looked to be a man from the Qiguai sect, dressed in fairly fancy robes. Considering that and his Heavenstage, he must be fairly wealthy, Amaranth thought.

"Stop right there, Golden Devil! I challenge you to a duel! If I defeat you, you have to give me all of what you got from here." said the cultivator in a loud voice.

"Sure, I'm fine with that. And if I win, you have to give me what you found in this realm." Considering his apparent wealth, he may have known some secret Qiguai method to get more gains from this realm as well, so this might be profitable.

"As if. You're only in the Ninth Heavenstage. You should have just surrendered from the moment I challenged you. You've already lost, fool." The cultivator burst into motion, and punched him in the face. As Amaranth reeled from the force, he realized something crucial. While the body purification stage was said to only give a relatively minor boost to physical strength, it was noted to be one of the stages that gave a significant boost to speed. This was bad.

Amaranth had prepared his guard and was going for a Hungering Strike to counterattack, but the Qiguai cultivator just dodged. Still, the strike managed to bleed off some of the Qi radiating off him, adding to his reserves. If he played this right, he might be able to outlast— No, it wouldn't be possible. He wouldn't be able to deal enough damage before he took too much, not without a dedicated defensive technique. But did he have any other option?

The rest of the fight went exactly as expected. While Amaranth tried his best to turn it into a battle of attrition, the superior strength of the 10th Heavenstage was enough to make it so that Amaranth ended up getting beaten badly. The Qiguai cultivator gave him one last punch, sending him flying, and snatched away all the whole pile of herbs that he had gathered.

Woozily, Amaranth staggered to his feet, and started walking in a different direction. After a few minutes, his mind was cleared again, and he started taking large leaps with his magical boots to get more distance. Eventually, he reached a stretch of land that was just open field, when he saw a bizarre creature approaching him. A toad? Again? He groaned at the sight. It seems like he wouldn't escape his duties even here.

However, as it approached, he felt an aura that surpassed Qi Condensation by a magnitude, if not more. It must be a Foundation-Building sacred beast, then, and not one in the Early stage either. After the prior fight, he wasn't in great shape, but even if he was in perfect shape there would be no hopes of him defeating this creature. Just as he was about to flee as fast as he could, the toad spoke.

In a deep and resonating tone, it said, "I sense the aura of a Toad treasure in your presence." Amaranth tensed. Would this toad slaughter him for his crimes against all toad-kind? His eyes flitted to escape routes, but he stayed for now. Now that it was up close, he noticed something very strange about this Toad's mouth. Unlike other Spirit Toads which only had one tongue, this Toad had a thousand! The toad spoke again. "No, don't be afraid. I am a Battle-Trained Thousand-Tongued Toad, so I am an ally of humans. Let me guess. Were the toads you killed non-sentient and overrunning the place with their sheer numbers?"

Amaranth was shocked by its intuition, but he answered. "Yes, they were. The Cane Toads had multiplied to tremendous levels, and were causing widespread damage across the villages. It had to be done."

The great Toad croaked in dissatisfaction. "Ugh, Cane Toads. I knew I sensed the aura of one of those on your toad treasure. Don't worry, I don't care about you slaughtering a bunch of those. In fact, I'd have preferred you to have killed more. Anyways, this isn't the time to talk about that feud. That's a long, long story that you don't have the time for."

"What feud, if I may ask? I have plenty of time here anyways, so I can wait." Or so Amaranth thought. Barring a sudden sudden bout of misfortune, he should be fine here for a good amount of time.

"No, you don't. Trust me about that." After those words, the Toad simply stood still for a few seconds, and appeared to be deliberating about something. Then, the Toad opened its mouth, and took one of its legs and pulled off a viscous glob of saliva off a cluster of tongues. The Toad looked at the glob with its beady eyes, and it began to glow with a pale green light. Amaranth watched in horrified fascination. The saliva now seemed to possess a potent aura of Qi within it. "This Sticky Toad Saliva Droplet will let you stick and slow anyone within your realm, and even allow you to temporarily fight Foundation Establishment, if the situation calls for it. To activate it, simply channel your intent into the droplet." The Toad tossed the Droplet casually at Amaranth, who hastily caught it. Thankfully, it didn't burst, and the aura of Qi seemed to prevent it from sticking to his hand. Amaranth placed it in a bag of holding that he had prepared for this trip.

"Apologies, elder Toad, but why are you giving me such a gift?" Amaranth was confused. This seemed rather sudden, to say the least.

"Call it a reward for the good work. Besides, you Golden Devils tend to die off easily, so some security like this seemed like the greatest prize that I could give you. Well, your time is up. I'm off. Good luck with dealing with the oncoming perils!" The Toad bounded off with its powerful limbs, shooting up and away with speed that exceeded the limit of his perception.

Oncoming perils? Wait a moment. He sensed some cultivators in his range. The levels seemed to vary, but the important part was that there was a large amount, and they were not that far away from him. He began to hear voices in the distance.

"We must kill him! The heavens themselves reward someone with luck for slaying one of these accursed beings, so they must be one of the most wretched beings in the world! This is only justice!" After a bit of hesitance and squabbling among the group, it started to head straight at him.

Amaranth clenched his pendant once more. He had gotten something, so shouldn't he just leave when he was ahead? But no, it was much too early. He would die from regret if he could have gotten some amazing treasure and missed out due to cowardice. When the group started to chase him, Amaranth started by trading a few blows. However, their superior numbers meant that Amaranth was always the one who took more damage in these skirmishes, so he quickly abandoned that route. He hid under trees and boulders so he couldn't be found, and tried to slip away, but the group kept on hunting him and hunting him. With each skirmish, his injuries kept on piling up faster than he could heal them and Amaranth was slower and slower to slip away. But he couldn't give up, not here, not now, not when he had only found a single treasure.

After a point, Amaranth had injured his arm badly enough that he swore he could see the bone. When the group banded around him once more to aim for the kill, Amaranth knew that if he continued to try to evade, he would just die. So, he finally gave up. He crushed the pendant in his fingers, pieces falling to the ground and turning into specks of flame, that came together into an orb of heat that shone with the light of a great bonfire. The group shouted in panic and backed away from Amaranth, and the orb rapidly expanded into a great flaming eagle that snatched Amaranth by his shoulders, flying straight into the sky. With each beat of its wings, it moved a tremendous distance, until the ground was like a speck, and then—

Amaranth tumbled out of the doorway, and landed on his injured arm. He winced in pain, but one of the perks of being a body cultivator was pain tolerance, so he soon got back up. He had to pay a third of his gains, he dimly recalled. Thankfully he had a decent amount of lower grade herbs he picked up here stashed away in his pouch, so that ought to suffice. After giving it to the Qiguai clan member that stationed the door, Amaranth began the long walk home.

As he trudged through the sand, Amaranth thought about his experience. While he ended up worse than he thought he would at the end, he did at least end up benefitting from this trip, so it didn't turn out as bad as he thought it could. Besides, this was arguably more suitable for his constitution than an ordinary Lifesaving treasure anyways considering this would allow him to defeat foes that he'd never be able to otherwise. The future was looking bright.

A/N: So, after seeing the Secret Realm results, I thought about doing an expanded version in omake form, and this is it. For this turn's omake reward I'd like a healing treasure to get rid of the Badly Wounded penalty. It'd be that dried up herb Amaranth mentioned in the collab omake, BTW. I'll just add it to the spreadsheet. Well, hopefully the trials go well.
 
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Amaranth Castellanos 5 - Mysteries of Metal!
Amaranth Castellanos
Mysteries of Metal!

In the middle of Turn 5.

One strike, then a second, and the toad hit the earth, twitching. It was Toad Extermination duty, just like usual for Amaranth. Now that he was healed from his injuries from his trip to the Qiguai Secret Realm, he was able to take missions again, so he was working hard to earn Sect Points in preparation for the Hundred-Year Trials.

The toad righted itself, fury in its bulbous eyes and a technique prepared on its webbed feet. Without a second to spare, a dull bronze fist blazed straight at the Toad. Amaranth was going to kill one more Toad with a Hungering Strike. After years of practice, he had begun to recognize the "flavor" of the Qi he absorbed and turned back at its user. The Qi of Cane Toads had a distinct feeling of tension, of the preparation before the movement, of anticipation, but also of stickiness. When he reversed the power back at the Cane Toad, that last quality had made it more difficult to manipulate, since it tended to stick to the sides of his meridians instead of flowing easily. However, that particular flaw had been ironed out decades ago. A useful side effect of killing thousands of Toads meant that he was particularly good at dealing with them, so Amaranth twisted the Toad's Qi against it with barely a hitch.

Amaranth expected this time to go much like the rest, so he was pretty surprised to see the Toad manage to get its technique off before it was slain. Perhaps he was growing complacent, or perhaps he was tired after killing dozens of other Toads in the seventh to ninth Heavenstage range. Either way, despite having Amaranth's arm piercing through it, the toad blazed upwards and charged like a wild boar into Amaranth at full speed. While it still ended up getting ripped apart, the force of the attack managed to break off several pieces of his skin in the process, which flew behind Amaranth and hit a rock with a distinctly un-skin-like clang.

Amaranth grunted in pain, and looked at his arm, slathered in toad guts and dripping green and now red blood as well. The collision had gotten it all over him, unfortunately. The green blood vanished away, sinking into his body, but that still left him with the rest. He directed his Qi in a familiar pattern, and the detritus slipped off as if his body was frictionless. Little techniques like these made day-to-day life as a toad hunter much easier. Amaranth remembered having to scrub it all off for almost a decade until a fellow guard he met while working at the Scorpion Road had taught him this. He only wished he had learned it earlier. He wrapped up the injury with a quick bandage, and channeled a bit of Qi to the wound to help with healing. This'd go away in less than a day, he reckoned. One of the perks of being a body cultivator.

When he turned around to see what had happened to the pieces of his skin, he saw three chips of torn dull bronze, still coated with his blood, on top of a relatively flat rock. Peculiarly enough, unlike the skin on his body, it hadn't brightened back up to the traditional luster that an individual with the Blood of Bronze possessed, but remained the color that his skin took whenever he used the Hungering Strike technique. He scooped up the fragments and put them in his bag of holding. It may not be a bad idea to get these checked out, Amaranth thought. If it was something malicious, it'd be wise to find out sooner than later.

After returning from the outskirts of the villages, he headed over to the local public terminal of the Contribution Points Board. He had more than enough points saved up to set up a request for a spirit blacksmith to examine them, and in a day, someone showed up. It was a member of his Clan that practiced some sort of constant perception-filter technique, so any of their distinguishing features couldn't be examined at all. A strange art for a blacksmith to practice, that was certain, and Amaranth was suspicious when he had first read the details in the message they had sent in advance. However, the blacksmith was also well reputed for dealing with living metal, so he pushed aside his worries and told them the story.

The person nodded once, and said that they'd be running an analysis on the metal chunks to get a better picture of the situation. They took the pieces, and vanished somewhere. After a few hours, Amaranth was worried that he had been scammed, but the blacksmith came back not long after, and explained what they had discovered. It turned out that the bronze in his skin during his Hungering Fist technique temporarily increased the amount of copper in the alloy, which is why it was dull in comparison. As for why the pieces remained dull even after the technique was complete, it turned out that separated from the flow of his Qi, the chunks of his transmuted flesh remained in that state.

"But why copper? What does that have to do with stealing Qi from a foe?" Amaranth was rather puzzled.

"I can't say anything definite. Bloodlines tend to have less hard rules than you'd think. Though, if I had to guess? I'd say that your constitution's uncanny ability to channel foreign energy probably has to do with copper's innate conductivity. I think you said that after you absorbed a large amount of Qi from that Core Formation Bandit's blood, your body was lighting up with grey sparks? That's a Qi-metal interaction if I've ever seen one, and that's something that I could bet my name as a blacksmith on." The blacksmith spoke with a certainty that was born from long experience, it was clear, and Amaranth believed them. "As for the hunger, though? No clue, but that feeling of emptiness in the rhythm of the metal definitely plays a part." The blacksmith looked pensive. "That motif almost reminds me of the Qi-Draining desert on a vastly lesser scale, but that isn't quite right. No matter, it's probably nothing."

"Hold on, rhythm of the metal? What is that exactly? I've heard of several spirit blacksmiths talk about that before, but I was never really clear about what it was. I mean, if you're willing to tell me, of course."

"Oh, it's fairly common knowledge, don't worry. It's just a spiritual exercise that some spirit blacksmiths do. You gradually hone your spiritual sense in a manner that's said to help you deal with metals by being better able to pick up on the subtleties in their Qi. It's a divided matter in the spirit blacksmith community on if it's worth using. Some swear that they'd never do as well as they would without learning it, and others say that the sounds are a crutch and a person training with their standard spiritual sense would be just as effective without hindering themselves in certain situations. Personally though, I think it's rather effective, and more than worth the occasional inconvenience." The blacksmith seemed to be smiling in reminiscence now. Or, perhaps they were furious? It was hard to tell under that perception-filter what was the truth.

Amaranth thanked the blacksmith for their help, and headed off to the house he was staying temporarily at for this mission. He thought he might have an idea. The Hungering Fist already rent apart the Qi of opponents through its rapid drain effect, but it could only be used to accelerate absorption into his Dantian and thus raise his cultivation if he had contact with the blood of his foe, or at least close proximity, which was a bit of flexibility his constitution wouldn't have otherwise allowed. Though, efficiency tended to scale inversely with the distance to the foe, so the furthest he could do would be to skim off their aura, which would end up giving dregs at best.

Without even that, his Hungering Fist was largely ineffective. Trying to absorb ranged techniques ended up with barely any of the power being actually absorbed, and the majority hitting him like standard. He had learned that little fact the hard way, against a vicious Sand Armadillo that had struck with a scouring sandstorm. While his technique was useful, it definitely had its limitations.

However, if lightning would conduct through his limbs, he might be able to do something about those attacks.

The next day, Amaranth trudged through the Desert. He had heard rumors of a Lightning Lizard at the Sixth Heavenstage living nearby, which were quickly confirmed when he checked the local public terminal that listed a bounty for its Beast Core. A spirit beast three Heavenstages below him should be a safe enough fight for him to test this idea, he thought.

After walking for dozens of li, he saw the Lizard. It had sighted him, and was beginning to spark wildly already. An instant later, a bolt of power rushed at him nearly quicker than he could see, and he instinctively dodged. Fast! But Amaranth supposed that it made sense, considering the counterparts of lightning-aspected techniques in the clouds. Thankfully, this wasn't nearly as fast as a natural lightning bolt, since it was fueled by the power of Qi Condensation, but the point stood.

Now that he was ready, he suppressed his natural habits and stood still, as the lizard prepared to unleash another blast. It zipped across the air once more, but Amaranth had timed his Hungering Fist to be active right in time. The bronze dulled, and the lightning struck the metal with a boom of thunder. Instead of electrocuting Amaranth, the bolt began to sink into his skin with breakneck force. Once more, his meridians churned with the power of lightning, but it wasn't a metaphor this time. As he cycled it through his body, the hostile power refused to turn into usable Qi. His meridians began to strain from the effort, and trying to place it within his dantian as it was would deal severe spiritual damage. Once Amaranth got some measure of control over it, he was forced to expel it out of his body.

Amaranth frowned, and he quickly dispatched the Lizard. While the conductivity did solve the issue with absorption, it seemed that the power itself was unusable with the current edition of his technique. He technically could use it to disrupt lightning attacks, but the time it took to cycle the power to get the control to eject it made it unusable in an actual fight, since it'd leave him completely open for attacks. Though, he supposed it could be useful in group combat since he'd have the others to cover him, so there was some value in it for the Trials. That, by itself, was enough to make even this prototypical version a worthwhile use of time.

Overall, there was work to be done. Not an unexpected result, considering that his technique hadn't been refined towards the goal he had been seeking at all yet. With time, he might be able to make it more viable. And who knows, maybe with enough work, it could even function against the lightnings of the Heavens when he had his Tribulation! If he was ever going to go above the Ninth Heavenstage, he'd need measures like that for sure.

If he could even get past the Ninth Heavenstage, he thought darkly. Though, one side bonus of these Trials being as perilous as they were was that his constitution meant that he'd advance more than normal. Maybe he'd even advance past the Ninth Heavenstage, given some fortune. There was also a chance that he'd simply die in the process. His only lifesaving measures had been expended in the last trials, and he was planning to use his Droplet to save more people alongside his peers who had banded together to save junior members in Qi Condensation. In the end, a lot of this came down to luck, which the Golden Devils didn't have much of. Did that mean he'd just give up? Well, did the Golden Devils give up? No, they didn't, and no, he wouldn't.

Let the Fifth Sea come. If they'd expected that the Golden Devils would fold easily just because of the lack of preparation compared to earlier Trials, they'd be sorely disappointed.

A/N: I vaguely had this idea when I was writing that earlier, but I fleshed it out a bit more here. This is largely just building the foundation for later efforts, really. @occipitallobe, this is my second one this turn, so it's an addition to my Fate bonus I think.
 
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Amaranth Castellanos 6 - The Burning Bronze Demon!
Amaranth Castellanos
The Burning Bronze Demon!

During the Miracle at Pleuron.

The difference between Foundation Establishment and Qi Condensation truly was something to behold. Amaranth could barely match his enemy's movements even as he flooded his body with all the Qi it could handle, and the vaunted strength of the 10th Heavenstage that he had chased after for decades was casually fended off. Power was radiating off his body like a metaphorical bonfire to all who could sense it, straining his meridians from the effort, but they hadn't even used a quarter of their reserves. He tried his best to skim off Qi from the clash so he could hold on for longer, but the richer Qi of a higher great realm was resistant to such tricks.

The worst part? Amaranth was fairly sure they were toying with him.

No matter. The plan had always been for those who engaged in close-combat to delay, delay, delay, so Magnus could move through the chaos with Minervina's ShatterDao-Four-Step Poison in his hand to finish off the enemy healer. (And wasn't that a whopper of a name? Though, he supposed it only fit for something as grand as a poison that could slay Core Formation with a touch.) Amaranth didn't need to win here for the plan to work. However, if he lost too early and these Foundation experts went for Magnus, all of this would be for naught. Pleuron would certainly fall with the Core Formation healer backing the Fifth Sea's forces unimpeded, and thousands, no, tens of thousands would die in the process.

And right now? It seemed like exactly that would happen. There were hardly dregs of Qi remaining in his body now, and it seemed that his foe was tiring of this game of back and forth. Another Foundation Establishment cultivator strode forth into the melee, almost casually, and he knew that it would be the end. Without any Qi left to draw on, all he had was this body that he had honed over eight decades, and that would be no match for two Foundation-level Fifth Sea cultivators. All he had was his body… Wait.

"Go!", Amaranth shouted, and reached within with his senses, falling below the spiritual right back into the physical. Crimson blood (he had not reached Tin Veins yet, naturally) churned forcefully throughout his vessels and capillaries to supply his body with energy. Looking closer, he could see grains of grey-flecked bronze metal, almost too small to detect, weave its way throughout his body and accumulate into his flesh. Switching back to his spiritual sense, Amaranth could feel the build-up of Qi within each grain, the reason why his body had the strength of spiritual bronze. He sensed the hunger within them, the same thing that had let him absorb power from beasts and bandits in the past.

Amaranth took this hunger and his will and cycled it in the well-practiced pattern for preparing for a Hungering Strike, but this time he turned it inwards. The power escaped the metal, but returned to his body where it would be re-assimilated. No, this could not be permitted. The power gushed from the metal faster and faster, until it couldn't be taken back in, and Amaranth heard a horrible screeching noise in his ears that was dwarfed by the sound of his body erupting into true flames. His bronze flesh swelled and ripped open with spurts of blood that quickly vaporized in the heat, and Amaranth moved.

The Foundation experts were staring in shock now, but quickly mastered themselves and matched Amaranth's blows. Power that should have crushed him under their heel was bashed aside with violent force, and speed that should have been invisible to his eyes was exceeded. The muddy green of his Toad boots were glistening now, and each bound shot him with the building-shattering force of the mutant Toads that he had fought throughout his life. Now, he began to grow confident. He'd do better than just delay these invaders, he'd make sure they wouldn't harm any more of the Clan ever again! The boots shone with blinding light now, and Amaranth prepared for a killing lunge to take one of the experts out of the battle.

That was when things went wrong.

The rush of power began to slow and the flames began to sputter out, revealing what had been consumed in exchange for this (half) minute of power. Weakness filled his body, and Amaranth landed several feet off his target. He resisted, but his body refused to respond, and was struck to the earth by an attack that he was too slow to dodge. With blurry eyes, Amaranth saw them walk away, but with a final surge of strength, he grabbed onto their legs. He could vaguely see one of them look down at him, but at this point he was so dizzy that he couldn't tell their expression. Then, a sudden explosion of pain, and his ribs cracked audibly, and he coughed up what bits of blood he had left. He realized in the back of his mind that the crack sounded awfully strange, more like the sound of shattering bone than the groan of metal, but he couldn't think too deeply on it before he collapsed, unconscious.

When he woke up, it was to the sight of the brown cloth of the interior of a medical tent. Amaranth tried to lift his arm to bring himself up, but even that effort felt like there were boulders weighing them down. He heard a faint ringing sound in his ears, and someone who was saying that he should rest and that he hadn't recovered much from the blood loss yet? Something like that, but he couldn't tell what they said next, since he proceeded to faint again.

It was a long time later when he woke up fully. He was in a proper hospital now, and it seemed that days had passed based on the calendar on a nearby shelf, yet he didn't feel hungry at all. Amaranth supposed it may have been the effect of some sort of variant of the traditional fasting pill, which were commonly consumed before long periods of secluded cultivation. But then again, perhaps not. He wasn't sure how well that would interact with an exsanguinated patient, after all, and Amaranth was no alchemist. His only experiences with fasting pills in the past were when he had to cultivate for days on end to digest masses of Qi after defeating especially strong opponents. He had his experience with destabilizing his foundation that way already, and he didn't really feel like repeating it. (Not like he could anymore— and he suppressed the thought.)

There was a note on that same shelf alongside a small box, now that he looked at it. It read, Take one of these pills daily until they run out, and rest for the next few weeks. We've dealt with the immediate effects of you losing most of the blood in your body, but there is still damage to your organs that needs to be dealt with. That made sense. To be honest, he was surprised he felt as well as he did even now. You may feel fine now, but that's because of the pain-suppressants you're currently under. Don't be fooled into thinking that you don't need to rest. Amaranth did feel a bit numb, now that he focused on it. Remarkably subtle stuff, really. As for the results of the battle, do not worry. The group managed to successfully get Magnus Centenius to deliver the poison to kill the enemy Core Formation healer, which has been instrumental in ending the siege. Amaranth let out a breath he didn't realize he had been holding in, and relaxed. So, the slaughter at Pleuron was finally over. He didn't know how many had died throughout that long siege when the enemies could constantly go after them without impunity, but it was far too many.

It had all been worth it, then. Even this. Amaranth held up his arm to his face, and saw plain tanned human skin. He had expected something like this to happen when he had made that choice, he supposed, but that didn't make him feel much better. He pressed a nail to his skin, which parted with an uncomfortable amount of ease, oozing red. It really was sort of a pointless thing to do, but he still couldn't fully believe it. It had been almost a century, now, with bronze in his flesh to the point that it actually did something. Now, there weren't even traces, which was even worse than when he had started.

Though, that was just looking at bronze. He still did have the strength of ten heavenstages in his body, after all, and it wasn't like bronze couldn't be regained— Oh, that was troublesome. The tenth was the stage of bodily purification, and he wasn't sure how it would interact with trying to re-integrate bronze into his body. It may make it easier, or more difficult, or maybe not even matter at all. Amaranth was barely a dabbler in the mechanics of bloodlines, after all, so he probably was just worried about nothing. Though, if there was one thing he was seriously concerned about, it was trying to replicate that exact strain, considering it was the foundation for his path. Maybe he could revisit that mysterious blacksmith who analyzed his bronze? Yes, that sounded like that would work. Maybe he could even make some revisions? But no, he shouldn't get his hopes up this early.

While it initially may have seemed grim, the future seemed like it was going to be bright indeed.

A/N: That idea isn't gonna work. I'm just writing this in advance if I don't get to write the sequel(s) to this one in time, by the way, and I'm going to delete it once I get that out.

If it wasn't for my stats project (Damn you stats!), I'd have probably gotten this one out a week ago and then I'd have a couple omakes with him trying out different methods and failing, where he then falls into despair for a while, but that's life. At this point, I was just rushing to get at least one out so Amaranth wouldn't instantly die considering he's crippled tbh, so even one is good. Though, I suppose I could still write Turn 6 omakes during Turn 7 since the timelines don't have to match up perfectly, so I'll probably do that anyways.
 
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