Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Manuel thought for a moment. There was something screaming in the back of his mind. A trap. It wasn't his instincts, nor his Dao.

No.

His eyes opened wide, his face jolted by relevation. This was not him communing with Heaven's Shadow.

This was Heaven's Shadow communing with him.

Don't.... let him... we all end... don't... let...

The tiny, flickering voice ended, cut off without even an echo to remember it.
While it's interesting that Heaven's Shadow seems less and less likely to be just a quirk of Manuel's Dao, the actual advice is more interesting.

And I think I've figured it out: If the curse of heavens and the Trials are directly linked to the Golden Devil bloodline ... @occipitallobe are the Trials also linked to a bloodline on the other end? It didn't sound like they had full control over the phenomena of the Trial, so much as access to it and ways to manipulate it with the tokens.

Because if so, then intermingling that bloodline into the Clan via Ninth Prince (who is technically the one to inhereit) would mean that suddenly the Trials start summoning less and less enemies and more and more allies.

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For that matter, I suspect that once the Trials are over, Manuel is going to be pumping the Prince for information and probably posting guards.
 
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I'm assuming something different: we know this guy was all "once I finish exterminating the Naag, my grandfather won't be an issue anymore!" So I'm thinking that if the Ninth Prince is killed, this asshole gains/gets access to/releases something that'll eventually spell the doom of the Clan.
 
Let's see if this dupes the vote.

[x] [X] Collective Storypost

E: It did, but not in the way you'd expect.
[X] Collective Storypost
 
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I gather the Naag Bloodline are doing something important just by existing.

Huh. Ninth Prince used up his Life Sving Treasure and is also trying to save Juniors. He doomed.
 
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You know, if Ninth Prince was a Nascent Soul in the Third Sea and related to the people who run the trials then doesn't that mean he may have participated in the trials himself?😬
 
You know, if Ninth Prince was a Nascent Soul in the Third Sea and related to the people who run the trials then doesn't that mean he may have participated in the trials himself?😬
It's possible, but the Naag were enemies with the group we know in the trials so it's more likely they did not participate in the past.
 
[X] Collective Storypost

I am back, once my SB quest is done I'll get back to this. Somehow I still don't have that many index entries to make, despite being AWOL for a week!
 
Amaranth Castellanos 5 - Mysteries of Metal!
Amaranth Castellanos
Mysteries of Metal!

In the middle of Turn 5.

One strike, then a second, and the toad hit the earth, twitching. It was Toad Extermination duty, just like usual for Amaranth. Now that he was healed from his injuries from his trip to the Qiguai Secret Realm, he was able to take missions again, so he was working hard to earn Sect Points in preparation for the Hundred-Year Trials.

The toad righted itself, fury in its bulbous eyes and a technique prepared on its webbed feet. Without a second to spare, a dull bronze fist blazed straight at the Toad. Amaranth was going to kill one more Toad with a Hungering Strike. After years of practice, he had begun to recognize the "flavor" of the Qi he absorbed and turned back at its user. The Qi of Cane Toads had a distinct feeling of tension, of the preparation before the movement, of anticipation, but also of stickiness. When he reversed the power back at the Cane Toad, that last quality had made it more difficult to manipulate, since it tended to stick to the sides of his meridians instead of flowing easily. However, that particular flaw had been ironed out decades ago. A useful side effect of killing thousands of Toads meant that he was particularly good at dealing with them, so Amaranth twisted the Toad's Qi against it with barely a hitch.

Amaranth expected this time to go much like the rest, so he was pretty surprised to see the Toad manage to get its technique off before it was slain. Perhaps he was growing complacent, or perhaps he was tired after killing dozens of other Toads in the seventh to ninth Heavenstage range. Either way, despite having Amaranth's arm piercing through it, the toad blazed upwards and charged like a wild boar into Amaranth at full speed. While it still ended up getting ripped apart, the force of the attack managed to break off several pieces of his skin in the process, which flew behind Amaranth and hit a rock with a distinctly un-skin-like clang.

Amaranth grunted in pain, and looked at his arm, slathered in toad guts and dripping green and now red blood as well. The collision had gotten it all over him, unfortunately. The green blood vanished away, sinking into his body, but that still left him with the rest. He directed his Qi in a familiar pattern, and the detritus slipped off as if his body was frictionless. Little techniques like these made day-to-day life as a toad hunter much easier. Amaranth remembered having to scrub it all off for almost a decade until a fellow guard he met while working at the Scorpion Road had taught him this. He only wished he had learned it earlier. He wrapped up the injury with a quick bandage, and channeled a bit of Qi to the wound to help with healing. This'd go away in less than a day, he reckoned. One of the perks of being a body cultivator.

When he turned around to see what had happened to the pieces of his skin, he saw three chips of torn dull bronze, still coated with his blood, on top of a relatively flat rock. Peculiarly enough, unlike the skin on his body, it hadn't brightened back up to the traditional luster that an individual with the Blood of Bronze possessed, but remained the color that his skin took whenever he used the Hungering Strike technique. He scooped up the fragments and put them in his bag of holding. It may not be a bad idea to get these checked out, Amaranth thought. If it was something malicious, it'd be wise to find out sooner than later.

After returning from the outskirts of the villages, he headed over to the local public terminal of the Contribution Points Board. He had more than enough points saved up to set up a request for a spirit blacksmith to examine them, and in a day, someone showed up. It was a member of his Clan that practiced some sort of constant perception-filter technique, so any of their distinguishing features couldn't be examined at all. A strange art for a blacksmith to practice, that was certain, and Amaranth was suspicious when he had first read the details in the message they had sent in advance. However, the blacksmith was also well reputed for dealing with living metal, so he pushed aside his worries and told them the story.

The person nodded once, and said that they'd be running an analysis on the metal chunks to get a better picture of the situation. They took the pieces, and vanished somewhere. After a few hours, Amaranth was worried that he had been scammed, but the blacksmith came back not long after, and explained what they had discovered. It turned out that the bronze in his skin during his Hungering Fist technique temporarily increased the amount of copper in the alloy, which is why it was dull in comparison. As for why the pieces remained dull even after the technique was complete, it turned out that separated from the flow of his Qi, the chunks of his transmuted flesh remained in that state.

"But why copper? What does that have to do with stealing Qi from a foe?" Amaranth was rather puzzled.

"I can't say anything definite. Bloodlines tend to have less hard rules than you'd think. Though, if I had to guess? I'd say that your constitution's uncanny ability to channel foreign energy probably has to do with copper's innate conductivity. I think you said that after you absorbed a large amount of Qi from that Core Formation Bandit's blood, your body was lighting up with grey sparks? That's a Qi-metal interaction if I've ever seen one, and that's something that I could bet my name as a blacksmith on." The blacksmith spoke with a certainty that was born from long experience, it was clear, and Amaranth believed them. "As for the hunger, though? No clue, but that feeling of emptiness in the rhythm of the metal definitely plays a part." The blacksmith looked pensive. "That motif almost reminds me of the Qi-Draining desert on a vastly lesser scale, but that isn't quite right. No matter, it's probably nothing."

"Hold on, rhythm of the metal? What is that exactly? I've heard of several spirit blacksmiths talk about that before, but I was never really clear about what it was. I mean, if you're willing to tell me, of course."

"Oh, it's fairly common knowledge, don't worry. It's just a spiritual exercise that some spirit blacksmiths do. You gradually hone your spiritual sense in a manner that's said to help you deal with metals by being better able to pick up on the subtleties in their Qi. It's a divided matter in the spirit blacksmith community on if it's worth using. Some swear that they'd never do as well as they would without learning it, and others say that the sounds are a crutch and a person training with their standard spiritual sense would be just as effective without hindering themselves in certain situations. Personally though, I think it's rather effective, and more than worth the occasional inconvenience." The blacksmith seemed to be smiling in reminiscence now. Or, perhaps they were furious? It was hard to tell under that perception-filter what was the truth.

Amaranth thanked the blacksmith for their help, and headed off to the house he was staying temporarily at for this mission. He thought he might have an idea. The Hungering Fist already rent apart the Qi of opponents through its rapid drain effect, but it could only be used to accelerate absorption into his Dantian and thus raise his cultivation if he had contact with the blood of his foe, or at least close proximity, which was a bit of flexibility his constitution wouldn't have otherwise allowed. Though, efficiency tended to scale inversely with the distance to the foe, so the furthest he could do would be to skim off their aura, which would end up giving dregs at best.

Without even that, his Hungering Fist was largely ineffective. Trying to absorb ranged techniques ended up with barely any of the power being actually absorbed, and the majority hitting him like standard. He had learned that little fact the hard way, against a vicious Sand Armadillo that had struck with a scouring sandstorm. While his technique was useful, it definitely had its limitations.

However, if lightning would conduct through his limbs, he might be able to do something about those attacks.

The next day, Amaranth trudged through the Desert. He had heard rumors of a Lightning Lizard at the Sixth Heavenstage living nearby, which were quickly confirmed when he checked the local public terminal that listed a bounty for its Beast Core. A spirit beast three Heavenstages below him should be a safe enough fight for him to test this idea, he thought.

After walking for dozens of li, he saw the Lizard. It had sighted him, and was beginning to spark wildly already. An instant later, a bolt of power rushed at him nearly quicker than he could see, and he instinctively dodged. Fast! But Amaranth supposed that it made sense, considering the counterparts of lightning-aspected techniques in the clouds. Thankfully, this wasn't nearly as fast as a natural lightning bolt, since it was fueled by the power of Qi Condensation, but the point stood.

Now that he was ready, he suppressed his natural habits and stood still, as the lizard prepared to unleash another blast. It zipped across the air once more, but Amaranth had timed his Hungering Fist to be active right in time. The bronze dulled, and the lightning struck the metal with a boom of thunder. Instead of electrocuting Amaranth, the bolt began to sink into his skin with breakneck force. Once more, his meridians churned with the power of lightning, but it wasn't a metaphor this time. As he cycled it through his body, the hostile power refused to turn into usable Qi. His meridians began to strain from the effort, and trying to place it within his dantian as it was would deal severe spiritual damage. Once Amaranth got some measure of control over it, he was forced to expel it out of his body.

Amaranth frowned, and he quickly dispatched the Lizard. While the conductivity did solve the issue with absorption, it seemed that the power itself was unusable with the current edition of his technique. He technically could use it to disrupt lightning attacks, but the time it took to cycle the power to get the control to eject it made it unusable in an actual fight, since it'd leave him completely open for attacks. Though, he supposed it could be useful in group combat since he'd have the others to cover him, so there was some value in it for the Trials. That, by itself, was enough to make even this prototypical version a worthwhile use of time.

Overall, there was work to be done. Not an unexpected result, considering that his technique hadn't been refined towards the goal he had been seeking at all yet. With time, he might be able to make it more viable. And who knows, maybe with enough work, it could even function against the lightnings of the Heavens when he had his Tribulation! If he was ever going to go above the Ninth Heavenstage, he'd need measures like that for sure.

If he could even get past the Ninth Heavenstage, he thought darkly. Though, one side bonus of these Trials being as perilous as they were was that his constitution meant that he'd advance more than normal. Maybe he'd even advance past the Ninth Heavenstage, given some fortune. There was also a chance that he'd simply die in the process. His only lifesaving measures had been expended in the last trials, and he was planning to use his Droplet to save more people alongside his peers who had banded together to save junior members in Qi Condensation. In the end, a lot of this came down to luck, which the Golden Devils didn't have much of. Did that mean he'd just give up? Well, did the Golden Devils give up? No, they didn't, and no, he wouldn't.

Let the Fifth Sea come. If they'd expected that the Golden Devils would fold easily just because of the lack of preparation compared to earlier Trials, they'd be sorely disappointed.

A/N: I vaguely had this idea when I was writing that earlier, but I fleshed it out a bit more here. This is largely just building the foundation for later efforts, really. @occipitallobe, this is my second one this turn, so it's an addition to my Fate bonus I think.
 
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The toad righted itself, fury in its bulbous eyes and a technique prepared on its webbed feet. Without a second to spare, a dull bronze fist blazed straight at the Toad. Amaranth was going to kill one more Toad with a Hungering Strike. After years of practice, he had begun to recognize the "flavor" of the Qi he absorbed and turned back at its user. The Qi of Cane Toads had a distinct feeling of tension, of the preparation before the movement, of anticipation, but also of stickiness. When he reversed the power back at the Cane Toad, that last quality had made it more difficult to manipulate, since it tended to stick to the sides of his meridians instead of flowing easily. However, that particular flaw had been ironed out decades ago. A useful side effect of killing thousands of Toads meant that he was particularly good at dealing with them, so Amaranth twisted the Toad's Qi against it with barely a hitch.
I'm loling at the karma between Amaranth and Toads. I'm kinda expecting him to pull off a Toad Style Sage Mode like Jiraya.

Incidentally, if you ever want to lean into the Toad aspect, you can try taking inspiration from this
  • Ha Ma Gong (蛤蟆功) - Divine Toad Stance, it uses absorbed poison to increase internal energy for lethal blows.
Maybe change it to converting the absorbed Qi into poison?

For an idea of how it works, you can watch the Boss Fight in Kung Fu Hustle. Admittedly, it does look a bit ridiculous but it was strong in the original source
"I can't say anything definite. Bloodlines tend to have less hard rules than you'd think. Though, if I had to guess? I'd say that your constitution's uncanny ability to channel foreign energy probably has to do with copper's innate conductivity. I think you said that after you absorbed a large amount of Qi from that Core Formation Bandit's blood, your body was lighting up with grey sparks? That's a Qi-metal interaction if I've ever seen one, and that's something that I could bet my name as a blacksmith on." The blacksmith spoke with a certainty that was born from long experience, it was clear, and Amaranth believed them. "As for the hunger, though? No clue, but that feeling of emptiness in the rhythm of the metal definitely plays a part." The blacksmith looked pensive. "That motif almost reminds me of the Qi-Draining desert on a vastly lesser scale, but that isn't quite right. No matter, it's probably nothing."
The cause of the hungering strike being due to the Blood leaning towards Copper is a pretty interesting take! I like how it ties things back to the Clan's bloodline and shows that it's a mutation and not a whole new bloodline.

Incidentally, i literally just read an article about using copper coins to cool things down, so seeing that applied with a Xianxia twist made me guffaw.
Now that he was ready, he suppressed his natural habits, and stood still, as the lizard prepared to unleash another blast. It zipped across the air once more, but Amaranth had timed his Hungering Fist to be active at this point. The bronze dulled, and the lightning struck the metal with a boom of thunder, and instead of electrocuting Amaranth, it began to sink into his skin with breakneck force. Without metaphor, his meridians churned with the power of lightning, but as he cycled it through his body, the hostile power refused to turn into usable Qi. His meridians began to strain from the effort, and trying to place it within his dantian as it was would deal severe spiritual damage. Once Amaranth got some measure of control over it, he was forced to expel it out of his body.

Amaranth frowned, and he quickly dispatched with the Lizard. While the conductivity did solve the issue with absorption, it seemed that the power itself was unusable with the current edition of his technique. He technically could use it to disrupt lightning attacks, but the time it took to cycle the power to get the control to eject it made it unusable in an actual fight, since it'd leave him completely open for attacks. Though, he supposed it could be useful in group combat since he'd have the others to cover him, so there was some value in it for the Trials. That, by itself, was enough to make even this prototypical version a worthwhile use of time.
Man, if he can ever get this to work i can really seem him becoming like Sebastian Shaw from X-men. Absorbing Energy and channeling outwards to crush his foes is pretty cool especially if he can learn to convert the energy to heal him so he can be a Juggernaut/wolverine blend
 
Tasos Basilakes 7 - Defiance
Defiance
A Tasos Basilakes Omake.


The walk back towards his current hideout was one of thought for Tasos as he did his best to reconcile himself with the coming reality, and with what was discussed during Rina Callista's meeting - and yet, as he approached, thoughts faded towards the single-handed resolution of arriving.

Being an up-and-coming disciple had its perks - one of which was the freedom to travel by his own designs and guide his own cultivation. His base of operations had thus become a small hideaway that the Basilakes family had dug onto a mountainside near the south of the Clan's territories a while back - and which was staffed with family retainers, as well as Tasos's own servants. It had allowed him to rest up and set up his missions during the war - and now served as home.

Still, as he dropped his pack and possessions with one of the housekeepers, keeping his bow and a slinged sack, he headed straight for the building's clinic. Pushing the door, he was greeted by his head physician - and by the sight of the Sovereign Arrow still hanging over the bed.

"How is she?" He asked, not losing pace. The physician, an old cultivator who had lived between mortals and focused on synthesizing medicine, lowered his gaze.

"The poison is nearly purged from the young mistress's body - it is quite likely that the young master's prompt reaction saved her life. It was still... very close" The man answered. Tasos nodded and thanked the man, then pressed forward - dragging a chair behind him as he approached the bedside and sat beside it, placing the pack on his lap.

"I brought you a gift, Thea - s'not much, but it'll do until I find a better solution" He said, leaning forward so Theodora, still too weak to lift her head, could look back. She was sweating profusely, with a damp towel on her head and two more healers still constantly checking on her - but the blueish tint that had marked her veins and arteries was much lighter, compared to before he'd left for the meeting.

Theodora breathed in, gasping for air a little - then grinned.

"What are you doing here, you idiot" she slowly let out, each word clearly impeded by pain.

"Checking on you, what else?" Tasos answered. "I got back from the disciple meeting and we have a plan. Can't really do much, until they cue me for my part in it. And as I said, I have a gift"

He reached into the sack and pulled out an articulated petrified wood arm forearm and hand - a prosthetic.

"As soon as you flush out that poison, I want you to try this on. It should somewhat work - since the Arrow wasn't enough to regenerate it" He said - making Theodora scoff, then groan in pain as she tried to straighten up. One of the nurses reached out to hold her down - but Tasos waved her off and helped his fellow disciple up so her back was at least upright.

"I'm a crippled martial artist and the Trials are coming" Theodora stated, glaring at the ceiling, then lowered her gaze to Tasos. "I'm doomed, Tasos - and I'm not going to bring you down with me. Stop trying to help me - save yourself"

The sight of her bandaged stump brought Tasos back - to a different place, one he'd grown to hate.



They had been running for four months, and the ten-times-cursed Devil Bee cultivator refused to give up. As the stone exploded just above his head, an arm-long stinger digging into it, Tasos finally ran out of curses. He lashed out, kicking at the creature's head - and narrowly avoided yet another cut from its rider's spade. Theodora took his cue to body-slam the cultivator off the Bee, her fist racing to splatter his head like a grape against the stone wall - but the man screeched and suddenly vanished. The bee he'd been using as a steed let out a sickening wail before exploding in a shower of gore, out of which that same cultivator came flying out, stinger in hand like a spear, aiming at Tasos's shoulder.

Tasos was too late to dodge and lashed out, holding onto his Sand Spirit token as he went to drag the Devil Bee to the hells with him - but an arm flew out, the stinger-spear digging into the forearm and snapping through the bone with a sickening crack. Piercing through Theodora's arm threw it off-course, allowing Tasos's counter to weave under - and he seized on the opportunity, his axe kick wrapping around the man's head and slamming it against the rock wall, making it pop like a water balloon with shards of skull flinged like shrapnel all over the terrace. The now-headless body dropped, twitching.

Tasos lowered to one knee, breathing hard, and quickly recomposed himself - with the first thing he saw being a struggling Theodora, laying prone as she desperately tried to remove the stinger from her ruined arm. He didn't miss how the limb was rapidly purpling and rotting around the injury.

It took him a second to cross to her and get Theodora to rest against the rock wall. Tasos glanced at the stinger - and realized it wasn't coming out.

"You saved my life" He said.

"It was the mission - keep you alive" Theodora answered, still grinning even then. "'sides, I wasn't about to let you die on me like that, archer-boy. Stinger's *groan* poisoned - I won't make it to camp"

"I'm not leaving you here" Tasos stated, and after a quick glance around was back with the spade that the Devil Bee had been carrying as well as a strip of leather and an alcohol-dipped piece of cloth. He lifted the leather in front of Thea's mouth, and their eyes met. "Bite onto this - what I'm about to do is going to hurt"

Theodora did so, and lifted the injured arm to her side, struggling to keep it straight. Tasos breathed in, marked a line just below the elbow with a piece of charcoal, then swung down.




"I already told you - you saved me" The archer said as he reapplied the wet towel on Theodora's forehead with care, not looking at her anymore. "I'm not leaving you to die - and if the heavens plan otherwise, then they can go fuck themselves"

He left the infirmary when the sun was fully down - same resolve as before, but further tempered.



I'm back! And just in time to get an omake in! Bit of showing, bit of telling, and a lot of handwaving of events to create a nice character scene - but I think it works.
 
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Ferenike 19 - Many Grains of Sand
Ferenike 19 - Many Grains of Sand​

Dust lingered beneath her boot toe, scraping across the reddish glass surrounding them in this little shelter. Li Feiyan couldn't pull her eyes away from the stump of her leg, but she was at ease. The heat of the room and the smell of cinnamon was comforting, signs of the expert meditating across the shelter from her little group of injured Legionnaires. Many were sporting broken arms or legs, or partially caved in chests, and horrible cuts. She was the most injured though.

"Hey." Her savior's rough, quiet voice followed a metal skinned hand with pink glass nails entering her vision, fingers wrapped around a simple clay bowl full of rice. "You should eat." Ferenike said quietly.

Feiyan nodded tiredly and with two hands took the bowl and the offered clay spoon. The hand disappeared, leaving her sad, until exhaustion swallowed it up. As she scooped food into her mouth she dimly heard the other woman handing out supplies to the others.

This was how it had been for what felt like forever since she saved them. March for hours, reach a shelter, wait there, rest and eat, march again. Now they were waiting, moving slowly away from the mountains and deep into the desert.

It wasn't too much longer till they reached their goal, Ferenike apparently knew of an oasis a days march away from here, where they were now headed. They'd been marching for a week and it wore on Feiyan, but she kept going because Ferenike was unperturbed. Perhaps a little madly, she felt hope in her presence.

The only time the monotony was broken was when Ferenike diverted them around a breached tunnel or took another path after the group received a message. There was a clanging clap as they finished eating, cleaning and putting away their dishes. "Alright folks lets get going. Wei Guang, your turn to carry Li Feiyan." Ferenike ordered, voice echoing slightly in the dim shelter, lit only by red light.

Wei Guang was a taller fellow, the best off of their little group, with only comparatively minor injuries dotting his form. He walked over to her and nodded with a faint smile, his yellow hair turning reddish in the light. "Front or back?" He asked her. She set her her shoulders and propped herself up on the wall. This was so embarrassing, but ugh, necessary. She could barely balance upright and she didn't have enough qi to keep herself going on one limb, not after having dropped to the second Heavenstage from her injuries.

"Back please." She said quietly. It was more comfortable anyway. He nodded and knelt in front of her. Resting her arms on his shoulders she carefully hopped on. With a grunt he grabbed her thighs, what remained anyway and lifted her up.

Ferenike was looking over the gathered members impassively, at ease as she waited. Once all five were ready to go, those who couldn't walk unassisted leaning on those who could, she turned and led them away, her yellow swathed form guiding the way down the dimly lit tunnels.

After an interminable time walking the tunnel began to slope upward and Ferenike's pace slowed. They came to a bend and she signaled for them to wait, before disappearing around the corner herself.

Minutes ticked by, her heart starting to thump in her chest as her eyes fixed on the corner in front of them. Thoughts started to leak in of what terrible fates might await them if they were caught out. Alone, crippled. Wei Guang's hand tightening painfully on her uninjured thigh brought her back as she began to hyperventilate.

She saw a red light come around the corner. Ferenike followed it a moment later, and illuminated by the light in one outstretched hand gestured for them to follow with her other hand.

Energy surged through the group and they rounded the corner quickly and then emerged out into moonlight, the stars wheeling above their head, and at their feet. A square oasis pool. They'd emerged in an orchard, from between the roots of trees. As Li Feiyan watched Ferenike turned and whispered a spell that caused an array to flare and the roots and sand to flow back over the tunnel, hiding it completely.

She returned to the front of the group and led them on. "I was gifted this place by a nomad named Laosha. It's a temporary field hospital, where you can be more effectively treated for your injuries by an expert." She said as she led them to a small compound, slightly hidden under the boughs of the trees. The white tile of the plaza clicked under their feet quietly.

Ferenike approached the compound door and was greeted by a slightly stooped elderly man, at the peak of Qi Condensation. "Good girl, more patients?" He asked in a gentle voice.

She nodded. "Yes Ban Ao. Everyone, this is Doctor Ao. He'll treat you for a week, and then take you to the next temporary hospital." She said, voice melancholic.

Li Feiyan choked slightly, then spoke. "You're leaving?" She didn't want her to leave. Who'd protect them from those monsters? She scrambled off Wei Guang, balancing herself shakily on one leg as she stood in front of Ferenike.

"What are we going to do?" She nearly shouted, waving her arms as she wobbled.

A pink nailed hand fell on her shoulder, steadying her. "You need to heal, then fight to save who you can. I can't save everyone on my own. None of us can." She said, her voice calm. Li Feiyan looked into her savior's eyes, and saw a red flame. It twisted, burning, writhing with power and Will.

The words she'd said were bolstered by that flame, ringing in the cavern of Feiyan's mind. Her dantian shifted, a little flame awakening in the void above it.

She nodded. "Yes ma'am." She said fervently.

Ferenike smiled, glass teeth glinting in the moonlight. "Good girl." Wrapping one strong arm under her shoulders, she helped carry Feiyan into a bed.

Staring up at the ceiling Feiyan cradled her little flame close. She would heal, find a replacement for her leg, and fight, and do her damndest to live.

Ferenike left that night, the darkness swallowing her as she set off for the next city on her chosen path.



Months later.

Screams filled the air above the town of Little Zhao. Howling and wailing the air vibrated with misery as mortals fled their homes in a wave away from the battle occurring only a li outside of it. In amongst them were a handful of cultivators, children really only in the first and second Heavenstages, guiding them and fleeing with them.

A beaten and weathered Hoplite Formation was standing on the dunes outside the town, shield dented and spear cracked and leaking golden Qi. Twenty cultivators of the Clan fueled it's desperate fight against three dancing and capering enemies, slowly being pushed back towards the town, the desert pockmarked with signs of battle for five li. The Fifth Sea Hunters wore loose fitting tunics and pants, two wielding knives and wide bladed crescent swords and a third wielding a staff with a jingling golden bell at its top. The staff wielder was leading the dance with the beat of their feet on the sands and the jangle of their bell as the three cultivators hemmed in and harried the Hoplite. All were at the peak of Qi Condensation, and the best of the Clan members were at the Sixth Heavenstage.

The enemies were not entirely unharmed, one of the sword users was favoring a leg from a deep stab wound and the staff wielder was holding a broken arm close to their chest.

But the Dao-Heart of the Formation was wavering. The Hoplite flickered, fading away in fits and starts, and cries of panic sped its loss until the clan members were left exposed. Holding spears out they bunched up in a huddle desperately trying to counter the assault of the strange sound blasts of the staff user and the dozens of swords which seemed to follow the strikes of the sword and dagger users.

Three fell in the first exchange, clutching their ears and blood spurting wounds on their guts and legs. They were quickly pulled into the formation and it retreated while carrying them, falling back through the gate at the cries of their commander. Two of the Fifth Sea cultivators laughed and slowed for a moment in their pursuit, causing the third to look at them in annoyance.

"Guess without their Bronze Magic these Demons really are weak. If we were home that number would have been troublesome, eh Acharya?" The wounded sword user asked of the staff using man. The staff using man laughed at his younger sister's jest.

"Their courage is weak Lopamudra and the cry of my Karma Purifying Bell frightens them terribly." The staff using man responded.

The other sword user huffed. "If the both of you would focus? They're getting away." He said grumpily.

"Tch, really Agni?" Lopamudra scowled at the other man, slowing their pace even further as her grip on her sword and knife tightened. There was less than two hundred meters between the front of the Legion formation and the gate. Agni flicked a hand at the fleeing Clan members as he sped up, looking back over his shoulder at the other two.

"This will be a lot easier if we kill them all before they get behind their defensive arrays, you know that..!" He trailed off and his eyes became wide as saucers as a powerful aura on their level slammed into them and a shadow darkened the horizon. Every cultivator on the battlefield looked east as screaming winds blew across the desert, a sandstorm twenty li in diameter and ten li high swallowed the sky and eastern horizon.

"What the hell is that!?" Agni and Lopamudra shouted nearly simultaneously.

"Another Demon!" Acharya shouted.

There was a mighty crack and the innards of the sandstorm ignited, red light boiling within it as lightning flashed. The commander of the Legion detachment shouted then. "It's the Senior! Legionnaires, run for the sandstorm!" And gave a mad seeming order to the Fifth Sea cultivators.

The formation wheeled and sprinted for the storm. It was already only a li away, moving at incredible speed. A shadow appeared in the light as the Fifth Sea cultivators raised their weapons defensively and rushed to meet it and head off the Legion's escape into it.

The screaming rasp of the sandstorm became a thunderous boom, words echoing from the shadow on waves of burning Qi. "SLAY YOUR FEAR LEGIONNAIRES! HOPLITE FORMATION!"

The light of the sun became red and the scene became washed sharp light and sharper shadows, sand ripping free from the desert beneath the feet of the Fifth Sea Hunters, the Qi of the Desert answering a great breath. The world shifted.

BOOM!

An explosion of thunder met in the center of the sandstorm, the shadow raising a spear that crackled with power.

Acharya began to raise his bell, a spell on his lips, too late.

CRACK!

A massive red spear ten meters long flew out of the center of the storm as it swallowed them. Lopamudra screamed in fright as the spear, wrapped in horrific killing intent, soared for her guts and she vanished in a twist of heavenly Qi. Acharya howled in fury as the spear then exploded in a red star, shrapnel shooting from it and pinging off his hastily moved staff. She'd needed this Trial's Karma! Father would not be pleased with him.

As he lowered her hand he saw the shadow leap to meet them and a golden dome surrounded him and Agni. A ringing barrage of blows slammed into it as a glass Devil appeared, its terrifying face shielded by a large round hat of blood red glass. In one hand it wielded a spear, and three half-formed arms carried three more. In its other a massive shield.

That shield swung out and more arms and spears sprouted from its surface, pushing him back until Agni struck, shattering the arms in a spray of red glass as the storm howled around them.

It was sweltering like an oven in here, sweat evaporating directly off his skin as his eyes watered from the heat. Then there was a cry from the Clan members. "FOR THE LEGION!" A massive golden Hoplite swooped out of the grinding sands and its spear slammed down onto Acharya's magic dome as he and Agni stood beneath it.

The glass coated robes of the devil swirled as it leapt back from the shield and became one with the Formation. Ferenike laughed, a rasping howl of a blast furnace ripping it's way free.

"Charge!" She howled, the Hoplite crackling with their combined might.

The magic shield of the Fifth Sea cultivators cracked before her spears and the Hoplite's blows. The annoying tones of the bell man couldn't reach her mind over her roaring laughter and the sword and knife of the other man were turned aside with pillars and spears of glass and the Hoplite's shield.

The sandstorm shook around her as she reached out with her Qi to touch the Qi of the world around her again. She took in another great breath. The storm swirled compressing around her and her soldiers and grasping the Qi of the Hoplite she guided her soldiers to strike. The shield cracked the sword of Agni and then slammed into him, sending him flying up and away for thirty li before his token kicked in and took him away.

They had turned away Foundation Building experts with this Formation before and the enemies before her fell to their spear and shield. Acharya bat aside the spear once more and then with a scowl cursed her and then he turned and leapt, landing on a golden cloud and speeding away faster than the Hoplite could keep up. She considered launching a spear, but it was too fast for as well and so she called the Formation to a halt.

It faded around her as the storm did. She looked back at her soldiers. "Casualty report!" She shouted. One of the fourth heavenstage members sprung up like a rabbit and answered.

"Ma'am we have three badly wounded, and all of us are on the edge of Qi exhaustion." She said, wobbling slightly on her feet, saluting.

"At ease then. We'll rest and recover and then we're leaving this town through the tunnels." She ordered. Then she smiled, a horrifying expression in her current state as glass fangs ground against each other. "You did good as bait. I'll make sure you all get extra Contribution Points, and the wounded three will be getting a further bonus."

"Yes Tessarian!" They all responded, feverish smiles flitting across grim faces.



While Ferenike battles.

Nan Fuxi swung her spear in a whistling arc, knocking aside the burning beam about to slam into her with a thunk! Her aura of a Seventh Heavenstage cultivator snapped and crackled around her as her hawk spirit dived at the enemy again. Lightning flashed from her cracked, blackened and charred hand, breaking the battle into jagged shards of light and vision as Fuxi pushed her body beyond the breaking point. Her blood dripped from a dozen wounds in her bronze flesh and her silver hair was lank with sweat.

She was dying from a hole bored through her lung by her enemy's own spear, a gleaming thing of ivory tusk and bronze. Behind her stood the Golden Cloud Fortress, where her clanmates were being treated in a temporary field hospital.

The Hunter leapt out of the sea of lightning with a brazen cry, body smoking and weeping blood from a dozen small wounds. Before Fuxi could blink she was being harried back towards the entrance she was guarding, towards the courtyard where a solid dozen wounded clan members were recovering. She could hear the clamor of the medics trying to evacuate them. Behind her the mountains loomed, casting everything in their shadow.

Her enemy was a blisteringly fast and bulky woman with elephant themed leather armor, and wielded her spear and a brace of knives with incredible skill, possibly greater than even Fuxi's friend. Her aura in the tenth Heavenstage was overwhelming, the sound of temple gongs following her every mighty blow, rattling Fuxi's skull and disorientating her. Another flurry of blows and then Fuxi's spear was cast aside, shattered in the dirt.

"HAH!" The Hunter cried, stabbing forward for her heart as Fuxi frantically tried to leap to the side. There was an ear splitting cry and then her Twin-Tailed Thunder Hawk dove to meet the blow Fuxi could not avoid. There was a burst of lightning imbued blood and feathers as the hawk was impaled, screeching in pain as it turned aside the blow. Her heart froze as she continued moving, the shadows falling deeper upon her. She grasped her spear and attacked viciously, stabbing into her enemy's chest in the opening, her hand skating along the woman's rib's. The lightning imbued in Fuxi's fingers sparked off of her armor futilely.

The Hunter laughed and then with a flick of her spear cast aside the corpse of her hawk and struck. Fuxi was sent tumbling into the gate, rattling them with a massive boom, with a knife in her guts. She groaned, standing shakily, bracing herself on the door.

"Stubborn for a Demon." The woman said in accented Third Sea. She spun her spear casually and stepped forward. "I expected you'd take the offer I made to kill the Demons behind you and spare your life, if you let me pass."

Fuxi coughed, expression horrified as she looked at the Hunter. "You really are honorless. Unbelievable." She rasped with a broken voice.

The Hunter woman laughed. "What would you know of honor Demon? My grandfather taught me honor, and perpetuating affronts to heaven is about as honorless as you get."

Fuxi finished standing and smiled. "I'm protecting people. That's enough."

Her heart beat was slowing, even as adrenaline pumped through her, running out of blood to pump and she could feel the cracks running through her dantian burning with wild Qi. She was dead on her feet. She tried to raise her hands, shaking and weak. Thunder rumbled through the world, unheard by all but Fuxi.

Ferenike would be lividly pissed with her, and she was leaving her alone in this cruel world at Heaven's mercy. But the Heavens were bastards and she'd be proud she protected these people. Fuxi would be pissed if Ferenike followed too quickly. Hopefully that Xiao Yi fellow could help her. She entrusted her hopes to him and Ferenike, flung onto the wind.

The spear came for her and punched through her sternum. She stepped into it, sliding down the haft to smack into her Hunter's hands. The other woman gasped in surprise and tried to jerk back as Fuxi's sharp nailed hands wrapped around her throat. Lightning kindled in her heart as Fuxi grinned with bloodstained teeth, her thumbs digging into the meat of her enemy's throat and her hair rising ominously in a snapping cloud of static as her red eyes were swallowed by a burst of white light.

Kraka-THOOOM!

A horrifyingly large bolt of lightning exploded from Fuxi's chest and throat, scouring the enemy in front of her with radiant light. Her screams were swallowed in the thunder. The display lit the surrounding desert for only an eyeblink but when it was done all that remained were two figures.

On the sands before the fortress that would soon be renamed Fuxi's Stand stood a bronze statue polished to a golden shine with a beatific smile on her face, clutching the blasted remains of a human skeleton in its hands.


@occipitallobe another! Decided to show the trials from multiple perspectives to convey a more external perspective on Ferenike, all connected by being a part of Ferenike's personal sphere, and it was time to kill the last of her squad. Another Fate bonus please! Not sure if I'll make any more Omake until the storypost is posted.
 
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I want to comment on the the cool Omake, but I can stop thinking about what is happening with the trials and our seeds, and all these great trial Omakes aren't helping
 
Wish I had more time to write, but being dayshift is not conductive to good creativity outside of general sketching.
 
"Hey." Her savior's rough, quiet voice followed a metal skinned hand with pink glass nails entering her vision, fingers wrapped around a simple clay bowl full of rice. "You should eat." Ferenike said quietly.

Feiyan nodded tiredly and with two hands took the bowl and the offered clay spoon. The hand disappeared, leaving her sad, until exhaustion swallowed it up. As she scooped food into her mouth she dimly heard the other woman handing out supplies to the others.

This was how it had been for what felt like forever since she saved them. March for hours, reach a shelter, wait there, rest and eat, march again. Now they were waiting, moving slowly away from the mountains and deep into the desert.

It wasn't too much longer till they reached their goal, Ferenike apparently knew of an oasis a days march away from here, where they were now headed. They'd been marching for a week and it wore on Feiyan, but she kept going because Ferenike was unperturbed. Perhaps a little madly, she felt hope in her presence.
I like the more human scenes of Ferenike dealing with the result of a rescue! It shows that even with her best effort she can only do so much and that sometimes the only thing won is just a chance to flee and recover.
She nodded. "Yes Ban Ao. Everyone, this is Doctor Ao. He'll treat you for a week, and then take you to the next temporary hospital." She said, voice melancholic.

Li Feiyan choked slightly, then spoke. "You're leaving?" She didn't want her to leave. Who'd protect them from those monsters? She scrambled off Wei Guang, balancing herself shakily on one leg as she stood in front of Ferenike.

"What are we going to do?" She nearly shouted, waving her arms as she wobbled.

A pink nailed hand fell on her shoulder, steadying her. "You need to heal, then fight to save who you can. I can't save everyone on my own. None of us can." She said, her voice calm. Li Feiyan looked into her savior's eyes, and saw a red flame. It twisted, burning, writhing with power and Will.

The words she'd said were bolstered by that flame, ringing in the cavern of Feiyan's mind. Her dantian shifted, a little flame awakening in the void above it.

She nodded. "Yes ma'am." She said fervently.

Ferenike smiled, glass teeth glinting in the moonlight. "Good girl." Wrapping one strong arm under her shoulders, she helped carry Feiyan into a bed.

Staring up at the ceiling Feiyan cradled her little flame close. She would heal, find a replacement for her leg, and fight, and do her damndest to live.

Ferenike left that night, the darkness swallowing her as she set off for the next city on her chosen path.
Nice show on Ferenike motivating the juniors. It was great to see how their reliance on her and the fear of her not being there was channeled into motivation. This is how we make our next batch stronger!
"This will be a lot easier if we kill them all before they get behind their defensive arrays, you know that..!" He trailed off and his eyes became wide as saucers as a powerful aura on their level slammed into them and a shadow darkened the horizon. Every cultivator on the battlefield looked east as screaming winds blew across the desert, a sandstorm twenty li in diameter and ten li high swallowed the sky and eastern horizon.

"What the hell is that!?" Agni and Lopamudra shouted nearly simultaneously.

"Another Demon!" Acharya shouted.

There was a mighty crack and the innards of the sandstorm ignited, red light boiling within it as lightning flashed. The commander of the Legion detachment shouted then. "It's the Senior! Legionnaires, run for the sandstorm!" And gave a mad seeming order to the Fifth Sea cultivators.

The formation wheeled and sprinted for the storm. It was already only a li away, moving at incredible speed. A shadow appeared in the light as the Fifth Sea cultivators raised their weapons defensively and rushed to meet it and head off the Legion's escape into it.

The screaming rasp of the sandstorm became a thunderous boom, words echoing from the shadow on waves of burning Qi. "SLAY YOUR FEAR LEGIONNAIRES! HOPLITE FORMATION!"
This was cool. I got a very Rebel Alliance feel where they counter-attack the Storm Troopers. Really shows how important a inspiring commander/figurehead is because they can literally turn a battle around.
A massive red spear ten meters long flew out of the center of the storm as it swallowed them. Lopamudra screamed in fright as the spear, wrapped in horrific killing intent, soared for her guts and she vanished in a twist of heavenly Qi. Acharya howled in fury as the spear then exploded in a red star, shrapnel shooting from it and pinging off his hastily moved staff. She'd needed this Trial's Karma! Father would not be pleased with him.

As he lowered her hand he saw the shadow leap to meet them and a golden dome surrounded him and Agni. A ringing barrage of blows slammed into it as a glass Devil appeared, its terrifying face shielded by a large round hat of blood red glass. In one hand it wielded a spear, and three half-formed arms carried three more. In its other a massive shield.

That shield swung out and more arms and spears sprouted from its surface, pushing him back until Agni struck, shattering the arms in a spray of red glass as the storm howled around them.

It was sweltering like an oven in here, sweat evaporating directly off his skin as his eyes watered from the heat. Then there was a cry from the Clan members. "FOR THE LEGION!" A massive golden Hoplite swooped out of the grinding sands and its spear slammed down onto Acharya's magic dome as he and Agni stood beneath it.

The glass coated robes of the devil swirled as it leapt back from the shield and became one with the Formation. Ferenike laughed, a rasping howl of a blast furnace ripping it's way free.

"Charge!" She howled, the Hoplite crackling with their combined might.

The magic shield of the Fifth Sea cultivators cracked before her spears and the Hoplite's blows. The annoying tones of the bell man couldn't reach her mind over her roaring laughter and the sword and knife of the other man were turned aside with pillars and spears of glass and the Hoplite's shield.
The contrast between them being chased from the ones doing the chasing was great. I got slight looney tunes impression where Coyote chases Road runner until he notices a train coming at him.

BEEP BEEP!
"Stubborn for a Demon." The woman said in accented Third Sea. She spun her spear casually and stepped forward. "I expected you'd take the offer I made to kill the Demons behind you and spare your life, if you let me pass."

Fuxi coughed, expression horrified as she looked at the Hunter. "You really are honorless. Unbelievable." She rasped with a broken voice.

The Hunter woman laughed. "What would you know of honor Demon? My grandfather taught me honor, and perpetuating affronts to heaven is about as honorless as you get."

Fuxi finished standing and smiled. "I'm protecting people. That's enough."
Once again another excellent showing of how despite being able to communicate, the inbuilt bias against each other is too deep to be overcome. The Dehumanising moments on both side was really well done.
Ferenike would be lividly pissed with her, and she was leaving her alone in this cruel world at Heaven's mercy. But the Heavens were bastards and she'd be proud she protected these people. Fuxi would be pissed if Ferenikefollowed too quickly. Hopefully that Xiao Yi fellow could help her. She entrusted her hopes to him and Ferenike, flung onto the wind.

The spear came for her and punched through her sternum. She stepped into it, sliding down the haft to smack into her Hunter's hands. The other woman gasped in surprise and tried to jerk back as Fuxi's sharp nailed hands wrapped around her throat. Lightning kindled in her heart as Fuxi grinned with bloodstained teeth, her thumbs digging into the meat of her enemy's throat and her hair rising ominously in a snapping cloud of static as her red eyes were swallowed by a burst of white light.

Kraka-THOOOM!

A horrifyingly large bolt of lightning exploded from Fuxi's chest and throat, scouring the enemy in front of her with radiant light. Her screams were swallowed in the thunder. The display lit the surrounding desert for only an eyeblink but when it was done all that remained were two figures.

On the sands before the fortress that would soon be renamed Fuxi's Stand stood a bronze statue polished to a golden shine with a beatific smile on her face, clutching the blasted remains of a human skeleton in its hands.
Slight spacing problem between " Ferenike followed "

Also, i like the self-detonation involved. The statue is very awesome and feels like something Ferenike will keep with her as the last remnant of her friend. Really enjoyed the way the Omake presents 3 different experiences of the Trial.

First one is the neutral option where at least they survived, Second one is the best option where they beat them back, Last was the worst option because we lost a strong member of the clan.
 
Nice show on Ferenike motivating the juniors. It was great to see how their reliance on her and the fear of her not being there was channeled into motivation. This is how we make our next batch stronger!
I was having fun with that one. If you want something similar in other fiction, Gandalf using his Ring of Power to inspire courage and hope against tyranny is one of them.

E: It's also the basis for her Fourth Dao Pillar when I get to that point.

The contrast between them being chased from the ones doing the chasing was great. I got slight looney tunes impression where Coyote chases Road runner until he notices a train coming at him.

BEEP BEEP!
BEEP BEEP! This Sandstorm has your name on it!
 
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