Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Your all still monsters, I can barely write 7-800 words when I'm in a good place, and half of that is me expositing stuff
 
I manage it by way of having literally nothing else to do. Also limiting myself to one omake per turn so that I don't die
I'm probably going to take similar measures eventually, but in the meantime I'm rather behind the curve. Have to catch up somehow. Got to ask, you guys ever feel like you have some great overarching idea, but since you accidentally came up with the whole thing in advance you're having trouble actually connecting the whole piece together in a way that feels satisfactory? I'm about 2k words in now, but I feel like I'm not even halfway there yet. It's bloody exhausting.
 
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Man, this omake stuff is tough. I'm only 1.2k words into the second one and I'm already straining my creative meats to their limit. Don't know how Bungie, Alec and Kaboom do it.
I feel you sir lion. I'm literally relying on the Good Seed Reports for most of mine. Like i need that prompt to be able to generate something...
I'm probably going to take similar measures eventually, but in the meantime I'm rather behind the curve. Have to catch up somehow. Got to ask, you guys ever feel like you have some great overarching idea, but since you accidentally came up with the whole thing in advance you're having trouble actually connecting the whole piece together in a way that feels satisfactory? I'm about 2k words in now, but I feel like I'm not even halfway there yet. It's bloody exhausting.
Not really for me, i live from scene to scene. Overarching Narrative? No idea how to do that. Again, kinda why all my Omakes are about samish stuff with nothing particularly new to add to the world.

EDIT: Closest i had was my 5K word chap this turn all so i can fluff up my Realm Surpassing Treasure. I was lucky to come up with a plot to fit the treasure i thought would be cool to have
 
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I feel you sir lion. I'm literally relying on the Good Seed Reports for most of mine. Like i need that prompt to be able to generate something...

Not really for me, i live from scene to scene. Overarching Narrative? No idea how to do that. Again, kinda why all my Omakes are about samish stuff with nothing particularly new to add to the world.
Not really an overarching narrative, at least insofar as an overarching narrative to my good seed's life. More....I started out with a basic idea for how the omake should go, but I keep expanding more and more on that basic idea, and it feels like the goal's getting further and further away, even as I'm writing? But at the same time, the perfectionist in me isn't letting me just ignore those new ideas to add to the omake narrative.
 
Your all still monsters, I can barely write 7-800 words when I'm in a good place, and half of that is me expositing stuff
I can imagine novels of activity and descriptors, but writing them down somehow condenses them into a couple dozen words.

My current thought for Savvas is that he hybridizes into heavy poison usage, following in the footsteps of the mad bacterial poison genius. Hmm.
 
I can imagine novels of activity and descriptors, but writing them down somehow condenses them into a couple dozen words.

My current thought for Savvas is that he hybridizes into heavy poison usage, following in the footsteps of the mad bacterial poison genius. Hmm.
Don't follow the bacterial poison genius, he is an awkward loner who can't cook but makes his own booze. Follow the other poison expert genius girl, she has killed a person above her realm and forced another away, she is the scary good poison expert, and her images are better written

Why is it everyone seems to think their own Omakes are worse then others?( not mine, I know my Omakes aren't very good, I don't usually write, anything...ever)
 
Don't follow the bacterial poison genius, he is an awkward loner who can't cook but makes his own booze. Follow the other poison expert genius girl, she has killed a person above her realm and forced another away, she is the scary good poison expert, and her images are better written

Why is it everyone seems to think their own Omakes are worse then others?( not mine, I know my Omakes aren't very good, I don't usually write, anything...ever)
Writers are their own harshest critic.
 
Don't follow the bacterial poison genius, he is an awkward loner who can't cook but makes his own booze. Follow the other poison expert genius girl, she has killed a person above her realm and forced another away, she is the scary good poison expert, and her images are better written

Why is it everyone seems to think their own Omakes are worse then others?( not mine, I know my Omakes aren't very good, I don't usually write, anything...ever)
Nah, Bacterial Poison is the natural route since you can build immunity to it and use it with relative safety.
 
Anyhow, looking everything over, my impression is that despite losing our commander in literally her first field operation, the Devil Bees on the whole completely failed to achieve any of their wargoals, while our casualties--aside from the disaster that lost us Aikaterine--were insignificant?
 
The evacuation when Manuel first stepped in and the loss of the garrison at Seabreeze when the outside expert backstabbed us, in addition to the losses from the initial Night Devil siege had more significant casualties
 
Mmm.

Yeah though, just re-reading the post. They had a Formation that let mostly Qi Condensation Cultivators punch up hard enough to instant-kill a strong Core Formation--and threaten a Nascent Fucking Soul. Even through her own battle formation. Which is what's supposed to let our own Core Formations be relevant in a Nascent Soul-off.

Even with "Slow and easy to disrupt once you know it's coming", that's still an up-punch better than even the best options we had, and we're a clan that has Formations as being literally our thing. And it was perfectly designed for the Devil Bees given the aesthetic, which suggests a custom job as opposed to something they excavated from a ruin somewhere.

There's clearly Some absolute fucking unit of a Formations Master who's apparently stirring shit up in light of that. At least a strong Nascent Soul with that specialty.
 
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Mmm.

Yeah though, just re-reading the post. They had a Formation that let mostly Qi Condensation Cultivators punch up hard enough to instant-kill a strong Core Formation--and threaten a Nascent Fucking Soul. Even through her own battle formation. Which is what's supposed to let our own Core Formations be relevant in a Nascent Soul-off.

Even with "Slow and easy to disrupt once you know it's coming", that's still an up-punch better than even the best options we had, and we're a clan that has Formations as being literally our thing. And it was perfectly designed for the Devil Bees given the aesthetic, which suggests a custom job as opposed to something they excavated from a ruin somewhere.

There's clearly Some absolute fucking unit of a Formations Master who's apparently stirring shit up in light of that. At least a strong Nascent Soul with that specialty.
Curious if that would help us sniff out the culprits any. Do we know of any Formation Masters at the Nascent Soul rank, or that were to our knowledge close to it, among the possible culprits of this invasion? Don't think the leadership of the Saber Palace and the Devil Bees has been elaborated on as of yet.
 
I'm deeply suspicious of the Jingshen Clan based off very little evidence.

Their raid went a bit too well, and they keep coming up on top with recent events. We know they plan to dominate the region. Do they have a formations expert?
 
I'm deeply suspicious of the Jingshen Clan based off very little evidence.

Their raid went a bit too well, and they keep coming up on top with recent events. We know they plan to dominate the region. Do they have a formations expert?

If they do, we're in trouble, because it means they've either hit the 3x Nascent Soul wonderball and are just waiting to get one of them up to middle rank to sweep the Desert, or they have a hyper talent Core Formation who does nothing else but formationcraft.
 
There's clearly Some absolute fucking unit of a Formations Master who's apparently stirring shit up in light of that. At least a strong Nascent Soul with that specialty.
My inclination is that it's a Devil Bee Nascent Soul Elder that's recently taken power by virtue of monstrous talent and specialization in holding together a faction to work under themselves.

A sort of Queen Bee-foil to Manuel in the same way that Old Cannibal and the Seven Divine Saber Palace's Intrigue Elder are.
 
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Eirene of Nowhere - Good Seed Background/Intro Omake
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Good Seed Submission!
Eirene of Nowhere
because bards are cool
Specialty: "demonic" tunist / healer
Dao: Thousand Fragments
Starting bonus: increased qi perception (harder to take by surprise, higher chance to notice hidden treasures)
Starting turn: 4
4th turn omake bonus: increased qi regen from ambient qi when playing music (+1 Impact)
5th turn requested omake bonus:
Mesmerizing Dance illusion technique (+1 Impact)
5th turn Fate:
Glimmering Star Scarf, a treasure of renown. When used in soul-effecting powers like Eirene's, it empowers them greatly, allowing her to impose peace on those beyond her own level. (+3 Impact)
6th turn requested omake bonus:
Mesmerizing Cat Summoning Token. A statuette of a monstrous purple cat with an odd paper slip attached to it. The cat will come to Eirene's rescue one time, or more if she does more to please it. Life Saving Treasure. (used up at the end of Turn 7)
6th turn Fate: Qi Transferring Needle, a magical needle that can drain Qi from one and give it to another. Useless in combat, as it acts slowly, the sheer precision with which it can be used on a specific meridian or acupoint means that it allows Eirene to be even more precise and better at healing that she had been before. (+1 Impact)
7th turn Fate:
Truce Talisman, the power of the mediated peace able to force others to listen to her words and consider her cries for peace, no matter their original intentions. (+6 Impact)
8th turn requested omake bonus:
Mesmerizing Cat's Summoning Token, another use. Life Saving Treasure
omake list
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13th turn: Tribulation Treasure for omake bonus. Put Eirene on Secret of Underworld. Have Eirene drop to the 11th Heavenstage and break through to Foundation Establishment at Turn Start
14th turn: Eirene was the second to be forced back, facing the first Lightbeast. A tremendous creature of claws and fang, the massive Clawed Furious Light Wolf batted apart the party, smashing them towards dangerous eddies of Qi-drain. She managed to slow and distract the creature, letting them pass even as it chased her into one such eddy. There, both she and it were drained, though she managed to escape, using a greater velocity on entering to allow her to leave suddenly, while the wolf died. Her loss of Qi meant that she was forced to return to the expedition's entrance, though she managed to snag the wolf's peculiar Light Core, a Beast Core made from Light that she was able to trade for many useful cultivation resources (+20 CY).

4th turn 1 - intro (below)
4th turn 2 - can't stop won't stop
4th turn 3 - the air is different here
5th turn 1 - the sound of music
5th turn 2 - if the rules are unfair, cheat
5th turn 3 - the wheel turns ever onward
5th turn 4 - watch the hands
5th turn 5 - drugs. the answer was drugs
5th turn 6 - home and hearth
5th turn intermission art - an apparition in the sands
6th turn 1 - live another day
6th turn 2 - inside and out
6th turn intermission art - darkest hour
6th turn 3 - on matters of blood and bleeding
6th turn micro-omake - a legend. a myth. an Aliki
7th turn 1 - journeys of the mind
7th turn 2 - of mirrors and checkerboards
7th turn joint omake with Rina Callista - rebuilding
8th turn 1 - the teeth of the beast
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13th turn 1 - Two Old Biddies Talk Over Drinks
13th turn 2 - Mirror of Truth
14th turn 1 - Rest & Relaxation
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Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest] Original - Fantasy

TURN 15, OMAKE 1 [FERENIKE] Ferenike 39: Eirene of Nowhere & Ferenike – Meeting Old Teachers and Impossible Sights, Pt 1. Eirene held the tankard of spiced wine under her nose and closed her eyes as she breathed in the warm fragrance rising up from the hot beverage. As an Expert, her nose was...

Cultivation: Foundation Establishment (11th Heavenstage)
Impact: 12


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Age: 97 (as of end of turn 7)
Appearance: short, fat, long golden curly hair, greek nose, brown eyes with greenish tint, upon achieving 10th Heavenstage awakened Blood of Bronze - bronze, metallic skin. When walking among mortals employs illusions to make it look more like her old human skin, though somewhat darker.
Skills and abilities: flute playing, healing arts, master in mortal medicine, dabbler in most mundane professions; increased qi perception, increased qi gathering, Mesmerizing Dance illusion technique.
Inventory: an old flute, lovingly painted and lacquered; Glimmering Star Scarf; Mesmerizing Cat Summoning Token.
Background: unknown parents, Speckled Mirror Carnival adopted family.

Personality traits:
Cheer: moderate in good times, increasing to definitely excessive as she gets stressed;
Easy to offend: only if she thinks it's funny, otherwise water off a duck's back;
Helpfulness: whether or not you want it;
Curiosity: actual cat, probably with regenerating lives;
Dramatic: WHO, EIRENE? GASP! HOW COULD YOU! SUCH BASELESS ACCUSATION! SHE SHALL WEEP FOR A HUNDRED YEARS!
Stubbornness: depending on whether she likes where the story is going, anywhere between unshakable determinator to soft as grass;
Respect towards elders: hardcoded, no software overrides included*
*refers to manners, no guarantees about inner monologue

All cameos welcome <3 <3 <3 refer here for necessary information on where and when Eirene has been:
Recap:
- born to unknown parents, given to the carnival by legionaries pursuing the bandits who destroyed her home(?) settlement;
- until age 17 was with the carnival, wandering among the smaller settlements of the Golden Devil core territories, alternating playing to flute to accompany perfomances and healing poor people for free in the healer's tent under her teacher;
- became a cultivator on her own, meditating while playing her flute;
- after a legionary the carnival met told her she was a cultivator, went to the Golden Devils for training; spent the following years training and doing missions for the clan;
- after a fortunate encounter with a spirit of a long-dead non-Golden Devil music cultivator advanced quickly and developed her own illusion-based combat technique;
- has a loose friendgroup of 8th to 9th Heavenstage cultivators who spar together in the capital training halls, often or periodically;
- on the verge of Trials joined the Hammerhead Initiative - peak Qi Condensation cultivators forming a plan to save as many juniors as possible at the cost of personal risks;
- at Pleuron held off the opposing army with a dance for six hours before fainting, buying time for the others to brew up the poison that slew a Core Formation cultivator;
- leaned into healing afterwards, polishing her techniques, participating in research and helping teach a new generation of juniors;
- went into the Qiguai realm with a group of peers, to encounter incredible fortune both good and bad.

Dramatis personae:
- Healer Xia Fan, mortal teacher died of old age during Turn 6;
- Healer Han Jiao, mortal junior brother;
- unnamed music cultivator ghost in the mountains, teacher;
- Andronike Kairos, 9th Heavenstage, best friend died during Turn 5 Trials;
- Andromeda and Daphne, twins, friends;
- Diophantos, beastmaster, friend;
- Xia Zing, a friend from the Greensand Oasis (see the drugs omake);
- Mesmerizing Cat from an odd dreamscape.

Good Seed personal connections: the Indomitable Thirteen, mentor to Aliki Floros, friends with Rina Callista.

intro omake​

Eirene of Nowhere did not know who her parents were.

Nor did she know where she was from, although this one she could have found out if she wanted: her aunts and uncles would know at least the region where it so happened that legionaries pursuing some bandits that destroyed a settlement, handed off the settlement's lone survivor - a golden-haired baby - to a traveling circus passing by. But folks of the Speckled Mirror Carnival did not have a place of origin - no matter where the carnival happened to be when they were born, that didn't make them from there. Just because Eirene had the golden honey curls that were her pride and joy, and the name taken from the medallion that had been around the baby's neck - her sole possession, the cape of one of the legionaries having served as a blanket - did not mean she was any less one of them, or any more one of somewhere else.

Her evident relation to the bloodline of the rulers of the region - the Golden Devils themselves! - was a curiosity, nothing more. What's a carnival without curiosities?

She loved her life. Apprentice to the wandering healer who'd joined with the carnival some time before she was born - well, adopted, but some time before she would have been born as well; and a flutist - for healing was a calling she could not think of a superior to, yet one could not, in Eirene's opinion, live their life surrounded with the joy and frantic challenge of perfomance and not seek to join in. She split her time in the settlments between accompanying perfomances - mostly alongside other musicians, sometimes on her own if the story called for a solo piece, for her skill was acknowledged as sufficient to perform without needing others to muffle possible mistakes, an honor she was quite proud of - and assisting Healer Xia Fan in the white tent the carnival always set up at the edge of the grounds they claimed. The perfomances brought in money but the healing was usually free, unless there happened to be wealthy patrons - goodwill was far more valuable than coin for travelerrs such as them. An actor could, after all, make a very good conman, and the same nimble fingers that could pull a coin from behind someone's ear could just as easily cut a purse - and as they came and left, not returning to the same lands within a mortal's lifetime, they could outrun any bad karma, or so the locals figured the carnies would think. But bringing a healer who opened his tent for the most destitute and needy before, during and after perfomances softened hearts and faces, and coin flowed all the more generously towards even more questionable artistos, allowing the healer's expenses to be covered with ease.

Eirene loved her life and loved her path, her heart as set is it was perhaps possible for a mortal to be, spending her time on the road playing for the moon and stars in cold desert nights... and over time, ever more crisply feeling the energy in the air around her, still where nothing lived, swirling around people, and dancing to her perfomances, both around and within herself. It wasn't comfortable, but she felt cleansed, and for all of her body's discomfort it filled her soul with joy, and so she ever pushed herself, playing more and more sophisticated pieces and more and more precise ones, aligned with the energy of the heaven and earth.

"Hey," one day a legionary said, one of the patrol they came across in the middle of nowhere and stopped to entertain and invite to their fire. "Do not take this as offense by any means, a cultivator spends their time however they want - but just in case, have you undergone basic training with the Clan?"

"I'm a what now?" Eirene asked, the flute cluttering to the ground from her fingers, for the first time in her life seized with distraction enough to drop a tool.

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The Speckled Mirror carnival was now entering the capital, for the first time in the life of anyone within it. It was generally harder to please the crowd in the bigger settlements, that saw real magic from real cultivators walking around, but this was for Eirene - and the yearly intake of new disciples was a grand enough event a carnival couldn't help but make money anyway.

Eirene wasn't sure she wanted this. She'd loved her life... but everyone was so proud, Healer Xia Fan most of all. Cultivators were more - more of whatever path they walked, and if she was truly committed to hers, how could she not seize the opportunity when it presented itself? The Golden Devils valued good healers, and while she couldn't devote her entire life to that and music now, she'd have so much more of it she'd devote more years total to practice of either than if she'd spent her entire mortal lifetime doing just one.

Assuming she managed to ride the tiger and not die before she exceeded even a mortal's lifespan, anyway.

Still, it wasn't one of the cruel foreign Sects that she was going to enter, where disciples squablled and bled each other for power - even killed, she heard, and were not punished for it but encouraged - no, she was going to join the Golden Devils, kind and just. They were a family, she heard, a family her honey-colored locks were proof of belonging to, and Eirene of Nowhere knew the value of family like few outside of the carnival did.

Besides, as much as she believed that the strength in touching the hearts of people and denying death and disease their due was the greatest power possible, there was undeniable appeal to the more... direct kind of strength, too. The carnival had been lucky during its existence, barely ever forced to pay ruinous tribute to local powers, barely ever losing people, and every time Eirene herself felt greedy eyes on her, there was a strongman or gymnast around to glare right back.

It would be... nice, to be the one to glare back herself. There was power in music, she knew, to learn how to force it, and it was through cultivation that she'd figure it out. It was like doors opening - what was previously a mere idle fancy was now the truth of her life, the truth in front of her, the truth to be found and seized with both hands. A dream could now be a goal, and how could she strive for less, if more was possible?

That the Golden Devil Clan's strength was not in music would hardly be an obstacle, Eirene believed. What its strength was known to be, after all, was large amounts of people moving in unison to a single command; was that not a form of dance, was the strategist not a musician of sorts, setting the tune and rhythm of a battle?

She knew little of such things, of course. This was just idle wondering, her thoughts flickering back and forth as she rode on top of a wagon through the city. Then it was time to walk, mixing with the crowd of other seedlings, some wealthy, some poor - mostly wealthy, in truth, but it was not as though Eirene looked poor herself. The carnival might have had hard beds and watery soup some days, but their wealth lay in appearance, and so Eirene did not feel she looked any worse than even the most bejeweled of those present. Nobody gave her much of a second look, either - a plump blonde girl without much in terms of visible belongings, walking the same steps as everyone, face nervously drawn taut same as everyone's.

"You have some good talent there, girl," the person conducting the test said to her, when it was her turn. "Music, is it? Well, that's all fine and good, but combat training comes first, for one such as you. Come this way-"

Eirene followed where she was shown. Combat training first, then; music second and healing third. It was the most important of the three, but it could just be seen the way that that meant it didn't need to be rushed.

She had plenty of time for everything.
end omake​

(I've been reading the thread for the last several days and I was like BOILING with impatience since I saw the good seed mechanic. Wanted to see this combo since clan specialty was picked, BUT THIS IS EVEN BETTER. I love the Golden Devils and this quest so much already, I hope to write SO MUCH)

(My favorite good seeds so far, the ones I read despite impatience to catch up, are Rina Callista and the bear girl whose name I forgot but whose brother is Wajo <3)

(I hope someone likes Eirene, too!)
 
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I've started making wiki pages for the Shattering Glass Spear Array, the Vile Blood Searing Array and the Golden Eye Array, have I missed any?
 
I hope the formation is an outside job.

If the Devil Bees are the creator of the formation, then we have problem. This is the first time they have done something like this, which means it is an test, as much as it is a weapon. So despite losing, they got a proof of concept, which will be bad if they start investing more into it.
 
Castor Tyndaridae 2 - Teeth in the Dark
LOOK UPON MY WORKS, YE MIGHTY, AND DESPAIR!

Jokes aside, finished my second omake. Got a bit long-winded with this one, and honestly I'm not particularly satisfied with the quality. Probably going to make a lot of edits when I look at it tomorrow. But here it is. Warning to those of a weak constitution, it gets a tad bit gory near the end. Castor has to employ some...creatively brutal methods to bring down his target. Criticism is, as always, much appreciated.

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Teeth in the Dark
Castor Tyndaridae


Thread the bronze filament, tie it off in the simulated copper nerve endings, then connect those to the purified bronze humerus. Insert the end of the humerus into the glenoid, then begin to reinforce the connection with Brass-winged Eagle tendons-

"CASTOR MY BOY! FOUR MONTHS YOU'VE BEEN DOING NOTHING BUT SKULKING AROUND YOUR WORKSHOP! WE NEED TO GET YOU OUT FOR SOME FRESH AIR!" The boy in question swore, just barely suppressing the twitch of surprise well enough to finish soldering the tendon into the glenoid. His work put on hold, the Junior Mechanikos turned to face his senior, schooling his face in polite acknowledgement of the man and concealing his annoyance.

Senior Mechanikos Helios certainly wasn't a bad sort, per say. He was extremely knowledgeable in the field of conversion arrays, and his designs were used all over the Golden Devil territories, converting the heat of the desert that usually had one sweating through their tunic into spiritual energy that could be circulated into other arrays throughout the clan. And with his golden-red hair and beard frizzing out in great bushy waves from his ruddy face, he looked to all the world like a cheerful sun.

But. He was very, very VERY loud. All the time. If Helios had an off switch, Castor certainly hadn't found it yet. In casual conversation he found the Senior Mechanikos tolerable enough, but when he was hounding him almost non-stop, interrupting his research? Just thinking about all the near disasters made his eye twitch.

"I simply wish to perform my duties as a Mechanikos as efficiently as possible, senior." Castor hoped that, like the last four times, that would be enough to dissuade him.

"AND I ADMIRE THAT WORK ETHIC M'BOY, I REALLY DO! BUT-" Damn. "THE PERFECT OPPORTUNITY HAS COME UP TO EXPAND YOUR HORIZONS AS A MECHANIKOS! ONE CAN'T BECOME A TRUE EXPERT WITHOUT SOME TIME IN THE FIELD!" Castor very much disagreed with that sentiment. Surrounded by more resources then he'd seen in his entire life, with Mechanikos centuries his senior who he could call on for questions or advice, Castor felt as if he'd gotten more done in the last four months then he had in years.

Still, he really did need to get Helios off his back. Hopefully performing whatever task the Senior Mechanikos had in mind would get him off his back for a few months, at least. And excessive volume and can-do attitude aside, Helios was considered a genius Mechanikos. Whatever he had in mind, it probably wouldn't be a complete waste. Possibly. Hopefully.

"What sort of opportunity might that be, Senior?"

"I CAN SEE THAT YOU'RE REINFORCING THE JOINTS AND TENDONS OF THAT AUTOMATON OF YOURS! WELL, THE PROTOSTRATOR'S OFFICE HAS COME IN WITH A REQUEST TO WIPE OUT A SPIRIT BEAST THAT'S BEEN WREAKING HAVOC NEAR ONE OF OUR MORTAL HOLDINGS! THEY LACK THE MANPOWER RIGHT NOW, WITH THAT WHOLE TIZZY IN THE SOUTH, SO THEY'VE PUT THE REQUEST THROUGH TO US! YOU'D BE PERFECT FOR THE JOB!

Castor suppressed a groan. A beast suppression task? He'd likely be out of the compound for months just to make the journey there and back, not even taking account how long it would take to hunt whatever creature he needed to find.

The Senior Mechanikos leaned in, nudging the younger cultivator's shoulder in a conspiratorial way as Castor grimaced, preparing for the sensory overload.

"I EVEN HEARD THAT THE BEAST IN QUESTION WAS AN ELASTIC APE! A BIT ON THE STRONG SIDE FOR A FIRST HEAVENSTAGE CULTIVATOR, BUT I'M SURE A YOUNG GENIUS LIKE YOURSELF COULD HANDLE IT! AND I'M SURE YOU KNOW OF THE USES AN ELASTIC APE'S ARM AND LEG TENDONS HAVE!"

Ears ringing, Castor mulled the offer over. It was true, Elastic Apes, despite their relatively weak cultivation, were considered a premier choice for tendons in automatons, especially when preserved fresh after the kill. The Brass-winged Eagle tendons he'd been using were certainly serviceable, but an Elastic Ape's tendons would far outstrip them, in terms of quality. If it would get Helios off his back for a few months as well…

"I'll respectfully take you up on that offer, senior."

"FANTASTIC! I'LL GIVE YOU A FEW DAYS TO GET THAT POLLUX OF YOURS BACK INTO WORKING CONDITION, THEN I KNOW JUST THE CARAVAN YOU CAN HITCH A RIDE WITH! I'LL SEE YOU SOON, YOUNG CASTOR!"

As the Senior Mechanikos left Castor sighed in relief, turned back to Pollux' shoulder to continue soldering. Seemed things would be getting interesting in a couple of days…..

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Castor squinted as the sun shone down on him, sweat dripping from his brow. This had been a mistake. The first few weeks hadn't been so bad. Most of the caravan was made up of mortals, but they were interesting sorts, and in exchange for tales of what he'd seen as an cultivator of the immortal demons, they'd spoken to him of the different places they'd visited.

The depths of the Organ Meat Desert, where the sun glared down even more harshly then here, and vicious beasts could be found in every corner of the wastes, preying on travelers such as themselves. The Hard Shell mountains, with their soaring peaks and vicious avian spirit beasts. One even spoke of the great rolling hills of the Green Scale plains, inhabited by numerous "Righteous" sects, where lupine spirit beasts roamed in great packs, hunting herds of powerful ungulates of all shapes and sizes. A lot of their tales were of near death experience at the claws of spirit beasts, really. Wasn't exactly filling him with confidence, but the stories were intriguing nevertheless.

Eventually, though, people began to grow lethargic. Simply maintaining a decent pace became an exhausting task for the mortals, while the few cultivators travelling with the caravan, himself included, kept a wary eye on the dunes, watching for bandits or spirit beasts.

Already they'd had to repel a flock of Liver-spotted Spirit Vultures, driven by hunger to attack prey that was quite a ways from death, and a swarm of White Jade Scorpions, which had suddenly burst forth from the sands in the middle of the caravan, killing a number of pack animals with their deadly venom before they were driven off. Every day seemed to utterly exhaust him, the constant state of awareness draining all the energy from his body by the end of the day. At home, he would have consumed his resting hours with idle tinkering and maintenance on Pollux, but out here in the desert he had no tools or materials with which to craft that he could afford to waste on anything other then repairing Pollux. The journey had been, simply put, utterly exhausting.

"Ho there, cultivator!"

Turning his attention from the horizon, Castor looked at the mortal that had called out for him. He recognized this one. The organizer of this caravan, a merchant by trade apparently, who'd travelled wider and further then any other in the caravan, a fact clearly highlighted by the deep wrinkles, which seemed to make a map of his face, and his dark tan. Castor dropped down from the top of the caravan where he'd been keeping watch, and walked over to the man.

"You require something of me, oh illustrious caravan master?" Castor sketched a mock bow, grinning up at the man as he did so.

The caravan master just grunted in return, though Castor was sure he saw a gleam of amusement in his eyes for a moment before his face grew grave.

"I need to speak with you in my carriage for a moment, if you don't mind."

The humour began to drain out of Castor's face as well, at that. If something had the man looking this grim then the situation was probably dire.

"Lead on then, if you please."

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After letting Castor into his carriage, a homey little abode lined with all manner of knickknacks, the caravan master seated himself at the table in the center of the space, next to room's only other occupant, a young (looking) woman, her skin somehow milky white despite the desert sun, and clear of any blemishes, her raven black hair cascading down her cream white robes, unstyled and unadorned.

Castor recognized this woman. Before the caravan had set off she'd introduced herself as a member of the Water Mirror Sect, a small sect based near the Northern edge of the Golden Demon territory. They were renowned for their scrying magic and techniques, if he remembered right, and they'd based their sect around a massive, still oasis lake. He'd even heard tell that they performed a massive scrying ritual on the water's surface once every ten years, foretelling their portents for the coming decade.

"Fei Xuan here's been performing a scrying ritual for us every couple of days, keeping an eye out in advance for any major obstacles we might run into." The caravan master motioned to the bowl sat in front of the woman, filled with clear, still water, despite the rocking of the still moving carriage. "Things had been smooth sailing so far….until her scrying ritual yesterday." He glanced over at the female cultivator, and she picked up where he'd left off.

"During my scrying ritual last night, I saw…a river of crimson ichor sweeping away the caravan as a flayed, dancing skin in the shape of a man hid them from a great golden eye in the sky, and…a mouth filled with razor sharp teeth, crunching and gnawing in the darkness the flayed skin cast." The scryer visibly shuddered as Castor considered the strange imagery. He wasn't sure about the flayed skin or the mouth in the dark, but a river of ichor….

"It has to be Blood Path cultivators, right?" Castor looked to the caravan master for confirmation, who nodded in turn.

"That was the conclusion we reached, as well. Fei Xuan has a couple of ideas for how the other images might be interpreted, but she was certain about what the river of blood meant. Which means we'll likely come under assault by some Blood Path cultivators soon."

"Do we have any idea when?" Castor looked to the scryer, who, having recovered from her panicked fit, shook her head.

"The darkness cast by the flayed skin means they'll probably strike at night, but other then that I couldn't say, except that it will be soon."

Castor nodded, turning the information over in his head even as he turned back to the caravan master. "And I assume you've told the other cultivators guarding the caravan already?"

The caravan master nodded again, looking just the slightest bit sheepish this time. "No offense, but well, you being a young lad as you are-"

"I don't take offense, I'm certainly the most inexperienced cultivator in the caravan. It makes sense to inform me last. I guess we're going to be one guard for the next few nights, then?"

"Aye. Can't take any chances, where animals like those Blood Path bastards are involved. We're on full alert every night for the next week. With any luck, they might not be expecting us to be ready for them, and we'll be able to turn the tables."

"Right, I'm going to get a bit of work in on Pollux then. I imagine the sand's gotten into some of his joints." Castor opened the door of the caravan, stepping back out into the desert sun even as the caravan master's parting words drifted after him.

"Best of luck to you, cultivator. Try not to die."

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Bone Crunching Marrow Eater was fucking hungry, in more ways then one. He was sick of wandering around this fucking desert, eating tough, stringy spirit beast meat and hoping that a caravan would finally come their way. He was sick of living in fear of a Core Formation Golden Demon Cultivator or a massive glass spear descending from on high, even if Skin Flaying Heart Eater assured them that his Skin Skein Concealment Technique was hiding them from any Golden Devil Observation Arrays.

And now, with an opportunity to finally kill some Golden Devil cultivators and return in glory, success, and hope that Old Cannibal wouldn't execute him on the spot for siding with Child Corpse Gulper during the civil war, he was getting damn tired of waiting for nightfall to come.

Off to his right, he could hear Heart Eater giggling in his tent, stitching that abomination together in preparation for the ambush, and Marrow Eater gritted his teeth, imagining his Devouring Maw crunching down on the man's bones as he screamed and thrashed in an attempt to block out the maniac's cackling. Just one more day, one more day.

Then…he'd feast.

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Finally, on the third night after the caravan master issued his warning, the Blood Path cultivators attacked. Castor was watching the western side of the camp the caravan had set up for the night when, from the eastern side of the camp, a cry went up. Castor whipped his head around and, Pollux following close behind, rushed towards the cry. What confronted him as he and the other cultivators that had been accompanying the caravan arrived on the scene was unlike anything he'd ever encountered.

For a moment he mistook it for some sort of spirit beast, a chimera of some sort. Then he saw the stitching. Whatever the monster screeching and bellowing before him was, it wasn't made by natural means.

It's head appeared to be from sort of ram, large, thick horns curling out from the top of it's head as it attempted, unsuccessfully, to gore the cultivators facing off against it. It's torso looked to be made from some great cat, though he saw swathes of scales and feathers here and there, like a poorly patched together quilt. On it's back sat a pair of massive, rotting wings. He couldn't imagine them carrying anything aloft, let alone this great monstrosity, but there they were, flapping and buffeting the surround cultivators with wind. It's arms were scaly, and tipped with razor-sharp claws, though it's swings were slow, clumsy and uncoordinated, and the beast finally ended in shaggy, digitigrade legs, supported by massive black hooves.

The patchwork horror bleated, it's voice a garbled mix of different animal cries at it struck out against it's attackers. It…didn't seem to be doing much damage though. It was large and flashy, in a horrifying way, but it's attacks were slow, and easily avoided. Castor dove in for a strike on the creature himself, planting a fist into one of it's legs as Pollux mirrored him on the opposite side. It's skin felt drawn tight, like he was hitting a drum. No feedback from flesh or muscle underneath, just…skin…

Castor leapt back, screaming a warning, but it was already too late. After a powerful sword swing from Aegean Tabor, one of the two Foundation Establishment cultivators that had been accompanying the caravan, the abomination split open like a balloon, patchwork skin collapsing to the ground as insects buzzed forth in hungry, chittering waves. Cultivators screamed and swatted at the bugs as they bit and stung, and that was when the true attack began.

Blood Path cultivators exploded out of the dunes, cheering and hollering as they fell on the distracted cultivator guards like bloody rain. The first couple of minutes were brutal. The Blood Path cultivators faces were drawn, their limbs thin with hunger, but they fought with a desperation the Golden Demon cultivators struggled to match. One cultivator, his teeth bared in a crazed grin, barreled into Aegean, the two shooting off into the distance to the sound of clanging swords and clacking teeth.

Castor, in the mean time, was struggling to survive. Thankfully only one enemy had singled him out, but as Castor narrowly dodged another slash from the enemy cultivator's saber, he could tell that the swarthy, screaming man was at least a couple of Heavenstages above himself. This was going to be rough. Out of the corner of his eye, he watched as the swarm of insects began to form into a solid mass, coalescing into the form of a giggling cultivator, only for an arrows to seemingly sprout from said cultivator's skull. For an instant Castor's hopes skyrocketed, before the head seemed to explode into a swarm of insects again, letting the arrows clatter to the ground before reforming back into a manically cackling face.

Ducking under a swing, Castor was forced to direct his attention back to his immediate opponent, who was still screaming as he swung his saber in a flurry of blows. Quite the set of lungs on him. Castor sent a probing punch at him, which the sword cultivator easily directed upward with the flat of his blade before sidestepping a front kick from Pollux. Damn. His attacks were relentless, but his defenses weren't half bad either. He'd need an opening if he wanted to land a decisive strike.

Spinning out of the way of another thrust, Castor focused his efforts on defense, mind desperately working as he tried to figure out how to land a decisive strike. He'd have to use Pollux and the dart launchers. They wouldn't knock out a Third Heavenstage cultivator like they had Herak, but they'd hopefully disorient him enough to give Castor the opening he needed.

In an instant, Castor stopped his constant retreat, feigning exhaustion and desperation, and launched himself forward. He saw the Blood Path cultivator's eyes widen in triumph as he brought his saber down in an overhand swing, on a perfect path to split open Castor's skull.

Then, Pollux interceded, arm raised in a solid, side-armed block. Castor winced as he heard Soul Steel screech against bronze, saw the blade bite into his automaton's arm. Still, the risk had been a calculated one, and it was already paying off. The Blood Path cultivator struggled to pull his sword from it's temporary sheath, unwilling to abandon his weapon even at the sight of his impending peril, eyes widening instead in panic, now, as he saw Pollux' other arm come up. Then, with a quiet hiss, the dart launcher delivered it's payload in triplicate.

Castor saw his opponent's eyes grow hazy as he swayed drunkenly in place, and charged forward in earnest now. This would be his only chance. One after another, he delivered strikes to every vital point he knew. A fist to the face, a knee to the gut, and even a foot to the groin, much as he was ashamed to admit it, adrenaline driving him to desperation.

He continued the pummeling even as the Blood Path cultivator fell to the ground, thoroughly out of it, and only after he'd thoroughly exhausted himself did Castor straighten up, chest heaving, pupils dilated as he watched his downed opponent for any sign of movement. Finally satisfied that, no, the enemy cultivator would not be getting up any time soon, Castor turned his attention back to the enemy at large.

To his relief, the tide of the overarching combat seemed to be going in much the same way his had. Though frenzied hunger had buoyed the Blood Path cultivators onward in the opening moments of the fight, it had quickly begun to give ground to the bronze discipline of the Golden Demon aligned cultivators, most of whom had simply weathered their enemy's opening barrages before countering after they'd tired themselves out.

The giggling cultivator, too, had begun to look haggard. Whatever trick he had used to avoid fatal damage from the salvo of arrows that the second Foundation Establishment Cultivator accompanying the caravan, Cothus Callivus, had sent his way had clearly tired him out, and in between crazed laughter he could see that the madman was panting, skin streaked with sweat.

The only area in which the battle seemed to be going badly was the battle between Aegean and the unknown Blood Path cultivator. The swordsmen was swinging his sword wildly, desperately warding off his enemy's ravenous pursuit one handed as he cradled his other arm, the stump where his hand used to be periodically squirting blood. He hadn't caught exactly what had transpired there, but from the maw that had opened up in the man's bare chest, which was currently happily crunching away at the pulped remains of what he assumed to be Aegean's hand, he could hazard a guess.

Still, even with his own battle going well, he could see the Blood Path cultivator snarling in rage, as his eyes darted around, watching as his forces were beaten back and killed. Finally, with a howl of hate, he bit out a "RETREAT!" before taking off across the dunes himself. Castor saw Aegean step forward to pursue, face still screwed up in pain, but Cothus sprung to his side, laying a hand on his shoulder to restrain his compatriot even as he waved a medical cultivator over.

Abruptly, the adrenaline seemed to pour out of his veins, and Castor collapsed into a seated position on the sand, thoroughly exhausted. He felt like throwing up. He'd never fought the likes of Blood Path cultivators before and, well, after that experience he wasn't enthusiastic about a repeat. Still, the long night was over, and they could finally rest. Hopefully the rest of the journey would be less eventful.

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The remainder of the trip was, to Castor's relief, much more peaceful, though many of the mortals and cultivators remained subdued, eyes nervously scanning the horizon for any sign of the Blood Path cultivator's returns. Castor, to his own surprise, had been commended for his actions. The cultivator he'd defeated was the only member of the Blood Path to both survive the confrontation and not escape with his leader, and both Cothus and Aegean had spent the remainder of the trip grilling the prisoner on who his leaders were, why they'd been out here, and what their goal in assaulting the caravan had been.

He'd not taken long to crack, and after learning that the band of cultivators were simply deserters trying to get back into Old Cannibal's good graces, the two had become much more relaxed. A report would need to be filed, and a party of Core Formation cultivators deployed to hunt down the remainder of the band, but yet another Blood Path invasion was, thankfully, no longer a concern.

Castor, in the meantime, whiled away the days much as he had before the attack. Pollux took some time to repair, with the cut in his arm, but the limb was back to full working capacity after a week and a half or so of tinkering. After that, Castor decided to set himself to work on a little secret project, inspired by the confrontation with the Blood Path cultivators. Sickening though the leader of the Blood Path band had been, his technique had given Castor an idea for a secret weapon to install into Pollux that might, if his intuition was correct, serve as the perfect means to defeat the Elastic Ape.

Finally, a full month and a half after their journey began, the caravan arrived at their first, and Castor's final, destination: Jade Frog Village

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Jade Frog Village was, all things considered, a remarkably unremarkable mortal village. Situated on the edge of the Hard Shell Mountains, scarcely a hundred meters away from the dense foliage that marked the edge of the Golden Demon's territorial holdings, the village was made mostly from dried, dehydrated logs, roofed with thatch, and built around two main roads that intersected around halfways down their respective lengths to form a cross. The only really notable locations in the village were the town hall, a large, squat building at the end of one of the village's two streets, where the villagers gathered for meetings and celebrations, and the statue for which the village was named. At the end of one of the streets, as the centerpiece for a surprisingly well-made marble fountain, was a sizeable frog statue, made from pure reflective jade.

The villagers had a thousand different stories for how, exactly, the statue had come to be there, but the most generally agreed upon one was that, at some point in it's muddied history, the village had rendered aid to a Golden Demon cultivator, who had repaid them with the fountain and statue. As for whether this tale was true, well, the Golden Demons certainly weren't going to deny it.

Castor, of course, didn't particularly care for any of the town's history. His time there was only a brief stopover, wherein he consulted a couple of the village's more experienced hunters, who stalked the dense canopy of the jungles near the village, as to the possible locations of the ape that had been terrorizing them for the last couple of years.

Information attained, Castor quickly departed the town, Pollux drawing amazed stares from the awestruck villagers as he followed along behind, and made his way towards the jungle. At the very edge, Castor took a deep breath. This hunt wouldn't be easy. An Elastic Ape was an enemy more suited to an opponent multiple Heavenstages above Castor himself, even if the beast had likely grown cocky terrorizing normal mortals. With a sense of finality, Castor stepped over the threshold into the thick jungle, and sighed internally as his foot instantly sank a few inches into the fetid mud with a wet "schlorp". He was going to be cleaning mud out of Pollux's joints for the entire trip home, he suspected.

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Most of the day was quiet struggling through the undergrowth for Castor, even with Pollux placed ahead of him to destroy any offending roots or branches that might block his path. The jungle seemed to possess an almost physical weight, the shrill bird calls and distressing roars of distant beasts seeming to settle on his shoulders like a yoke. If he ever returned he resolved to finder clothing better suited to this environment. His robes seemed to snag on every branch and root, and only a couple of hours after his hike began he was already dripping in sweat. Finally though, just as night began to fall and Castor reached the final location the hunters has outlined as a likely spot for the ape to make an appearance, his quarry revealed itself.

Castor almost jumped out of his skin as, with a loud thump, a large, furred figured drop from the canopy in front of him. He hadn't even heard this thing coming. If it hadn't decided to reveal itself intentionally, well…best not to think about it. He'd have to invest in some sort of sensory technique, at this rate.

As the figure rose to it's full height after it's crouched landing, Castor's eyes followed it up, and up, and up. Geez this thing was tall. It was at least the same height as Herak's Heaven-defying Ogre, maybe even taller, and with it's barrel-like torso it looked to be even sturdier. It's arms and legs, though, were surprisingly lanky. The arms stretched down to it's ankles even at it's full height, and if what he'd read about Elastic Apes was corrected, they weren't even close to their full length at the moment. The ape's entire body was covered in coarse, reddish brown fur, with the exceptions of it's hand, feet, and face. Under the creature's jutting brow, eyes gleaming with cunning sized up Castor and Pollux curiously. He didn't detect a hint of fear there, just the confidence of a predator examining particularly odd-looking prey.

Castor readied himself in a combat stance, Pollux mirroring him a second afterward. The ape was still a few meters away, but he knew that it wouldn't even need to close the distance to strike at him. Still, it's cockiness was an opportunity he could seize. All it needed to do was strike at the right spot, and the trap he'd been preparing since the Blood Path attack would spring.

Castor's thoughts were cut off as, almost lazily, the Elastic Ape threw it's first punch at Castor. Even expecting it, he just barely leaned out of the way as, with a strange hum, the ape's limb extended almost three meters longer, crossing the distance between it and it's target in an instant and narrowly grazing Castor's jaw. This thing was fast, even faster then Castor had expected. He just had to hope that his quarry would fall for the trick. If it didn't….well, losing Pollux would be the best outcome he could hope for.

As the arm snapped back to it's previous length the ape actually had the gall to look offended that Castor had avoided it's punch, looking down it's nose at him for a moment before huffing in annoyance and turning it's attention towards Pollux, evidently deciding to eliminate what it assumed was the easier target first. This was it. All it had to do was throw that punch and Castor would have the opening he needed. He saw the ape wind back it's arm just slightly, it's shoulder tensing in preparation-

Then it paused, and Castor's heart almost leapt up into his throat. Something, he had no idea what, perhaps simply wild instinct, was warning the ape that something was wrong. The huge beast furrowed it's brow as it stared at it's intended quarry, then down at it's arm, still cocked to strike. Confidence and animal instinct warred in it's mind as it considered it's options. Then, with a quiet chuff, confidence won, and it's fate was sealed.

The punch the Elastic Ape threw was a textbook perfect punch. It whizzed through the air, dead centered on it's target's sternum. The ape had no intention of aiming for the head as it had with Castor, and having it's prey embarrass it again. Had Pollux been human, the blow might very well have been fatal. But, with a loud "KACHUNK", the trap was sprung.

The Automaton's sculpted chest split open, exposing it's internals as the two separated halves formed serrated bronze teeth. Then, as the fist soared into the opening that had been revealed, the teeth snapped shut with brutal force, biting in the Elastic Ape's arm and trapping it, even as they began to dig further and further into the fur and flesh.

For just an instant the ape's jaw dropped open in shocked, two rows of yellowed, razor sharp teeth exposed, before the predator shrieked in agony, thrashing and leaping around as it futilely tried to free it's arm from the vise it had been caught in. Pollux was unrelenting, though, heels dug into the ground as his new weapon bit further and further into the Elastic Ape's arm. The Bronze Jaws had been a risky gambit. A bit too slow to snap shut and the ape likely would have hit a vital part of Pollux's internals. Still, the risk had paid off, the ape's attention wholly diverted to the agony coursing down it's arm.

Castor, in the meantime, leapt into action. Wild animal though it was, the beast would likely recover from the pain soon enough to take proper action and free itself, something Castor couldn't allow. With only moments to spare he closed the distance to the Elastic Ape, which remained wholly focused on a level of pain it had never experienced before.

He needed to make this decisive. Punches wouldn't do it, he doubted even a groin shot would. It'd be gruesome, and hopefully something he'd never have to do again, but he knew a way he could end this definitively. Finally arriving in front of the ape, he could see in it's eyes that it was finally beginning to get over the haze of pain, instincts to seek out the threat that had inflicted this injury and eliminate it rapidly reasserting themselves. With an instant to act Castor leapt, straddling the beast's chest as it switched it's attention to him, shock and confusion showing in it's eyes.

Then Castor jammed his fingers into them. Trying to ignore the absolutely repulsive sensation he drove his fingers deeper and deeper, desperately hoping he'd be able to reach his target as he felt the ape's free arm pawing at his shoulder, it's fangs biting into his torso. Then, with another disgustingly wet squelch, it was over. Castor pulled his fingers out of the ape's eye sockets with a pop, landing on his feet with a slight stumble at the it's body slumped over, tension fleeing it's body in the same instant as it's life.

With a wince he prised the ape's jaws apart, freeing them from his torso. That was going to hurt, when the adrenaline wore off. It's arm, thankfully, hadn't gotten a solid enough grip on his shoulder to start squeezing. As he stared down at the Elastic Ape's lifeless body he zoned out for a moment, trying desperately to suppress the memories of that horrible feeling from his fingers as they-"Urp" Castor wretched, tearing his eyes from the ape's body as bile rose in his throat. The ape was a monster, one that had killed and eaten tens, even hundreds of humans. But still, the idea that he'd killed another living thing, snuffed out the light in it's-don't think about eyes, don't think about eyes-body was still making him sick.

For almost an hour Castor stood there, morals waging war against duty and purpose in his mind. Finally, though, resolve hardened, he turned his attention back to the ape's body, eyes carefully averted from it's face. He couldn't exactly dismantle the body here, and even with the assistance of Pollux it'd be a long hike back to the village. The caravan would be passing through again in a couple of months. He'd need to work fast, if he wanted to install the Elastic Ape's tendons and joints into Pollux in time, and already the clock was ticking on the freshness of the materials.
 
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Eirene of Nowhere 2 - can't stop won't stop
@occipitallobe
Eirene of Nowhere second omake: can't stop won't stop​

Eirene had always been short.

It never really bothered her. It was an occasional annoyance in a crowd - when she wasn't one of those drawing the crowd in the first place, anyway - and inconvenience when she needed to reach something too high up and no-one conveniently taller was at hand; on the other hand, she never needed to duck to avoid banging her head on low doorways, walking with her back straight and chin high; and even more importantly, she was cute.

She was still cute; unfortunately, that did not have any immediately useful combat applications.

Physical conditioning and formation drills were one thing; Eirene was a musician, one that pursued a second specialty at the same time at that, she was no stranger to hard work. She barely found time for music in between it all, but she still did and she was growing stronger and more capable of contributing in the meantime, that was all good.

Sparring, though...

It was one thing if she'd been losing for lack of training. She was younger than many of her cultivation peers, and most of them had been trained in combat from early age besides. She could come to terms with that, seek to catch up or not, that would just be fair. They were better at combat, she was better at music and healing, that was just how life was...

If only.

Instead, she was losing for lack of height.

One could argue that being smaller than the opponent could mean increased stamina or evasion; in practice, though... Her arms and stride were short. She could not reach her opponent when using equal length weapons, she could not get close enough or far enough with footwork they were taught in combat forms. She was below the average height for a mortal girl her age, already as a cultivator, and she was fine with that. Growing taller to overcome this problem was the last thing she wanted.

The implication that her (yes, decidedly short) height was somehow not perfect was offensive.

One way or another, this was not going to stand.
end omake​

(this is more of a setup for a cool thing i want next turn, but i figure to maximize Eirene's chances of surviving that long...)

(also, it was in my head)
 
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It's head appeared to be from sort of ram, large, thick horns curling out from the top of it's head as it attempted, unsuccessfully, to gore the cultivators facing off against it. It's torso looked to be made from some great cat, though he saw swathes of scales and feathers here and there, like a poorly patched together quilt. On it's back sat a pair of massive, rotting wings. He couldn't imagine them carrying anything aloft, let alone this great monstrosity, but there they were, flapping and buffeting the surround cultivators with wind. It's arms were scaly, and tipped with razor-sharp claws, though it's swings were slow, clumsy and uncoordinated, and the beast finally ended in shaggy, digitigrade legs, supported by massive black hooves.
Heh, I'm reminded of Monster Hunter, which is a great vibe to inspire! Very nice critter and a very nice distraction.

Castor, of course, didn't particularly care for any of the town's history. His time there was only a brief stopover, wherein he consulted a couple of the village's more experienced hunters, who stalked the dense canopy of the jungles near the village, as to the possible locations of the ape that had been terrorizing them for the last couple of years.

Information attained, Castor quickly departed the town, Pollux drawing amazed stares from the awestruck villagers as he followed along behind, and made his way towards the jungle. At the very edge, Castor took a deep breath. This hunt wouldn't be easy. An Elastic Ape was an enemy more suited to an opponent multiple Heavenstages above Castor himself, even if the beast had likely grown cocky terrorizing normal mortals. With a sense of finality, Castor stepped over the threshold into the thick jungle, and sighed internally as his foot instantly sank a few inches into the fetid mud with a wet "schlorp". He was going to be cleaning mud out of Pollux's joints for the entire trip home, he suspected.
Ooof. yes travel clothing is a Very Good idea. Boy needs legion training on proper equipment.

I'm also interested in the statue and I hope Castor uses its qualities in a thing at some point.

For just an instant the ape's jaw dropped open in shocked, two rows of yellowed, razor sharp teeth exposed, before the predator shrieked in agony, thrashing and leaping around as it futilely tried to free it's arm from the vise it had been caught in. Pollux was unrelenting, though, heels dug into the ground as his new weapon bit further and further into the Elastic Ape's arm. The Bronze Jaws had been a risky gambit. A bit too slow to snap shut and the ape likely would have hit a vital part of Pollux's internals. Still, the risk had paid off, the ape's attention wholly diverted to the agony coursing down it's arm.
An interesting move! I'm always a fan of torso mouths, and I like how Castor noted the issues with temporary vulnerability. I'm interested to see how he'll adapt to those weaknesses. There's probably a couple of ways he could do it, such as shifting around Pollux's internal structures to other parts of his body, or perhaps having a two layered torso which possibly might be able to be shed.

Tons of things you could do.

Then Castor jammed his fingers into them. Trying to ignore the absolutely repulsive sensation he drove his fingers deeper and deeper, desperately hoping he'd be able to reach his target as he felt the ape's free arm pawing at his shoulder as it's fangs bit into his torso. Then, with another wet squelch, it was over. Castor pulled his fingers out of the ape's eye sockets with a pop, landing on his feet at the ape's body slumped over, tension vanishing as life left it's body in an instant.
Oh damn. That made me wince and appreciate it.

And immediately think of Meti from Kill Six Billion Demons, so Very Good.

For almost an hour Castor stood there, morals waging war against duty and purpose in his mind. Finally, though, resolve hardened, he turned his attention back to the ape's body, carefully keeping his eyes off of it's face. He couldn't exactly dismantle the body itself, and even with the assistance of Pollux it'd be a long hike back to the village. The caravan would be passing through again in a couple of months. He'd need to work fast, if he wanted to install the Elastic Ape's tendons and joints into Pollux in time, and already the clock was ticking on the freshness of the materials.
I like this little reference as to how he'll get home.
 
Eurgh, my creative juices seem to have run completely dry this turn. Which is very concerning considering the war happened and how close we're getting to the trials.

Guess I'll try to struggle out something basic and hope my ideas pick up next turn.
 
Mmm.

Yeah though, just re-reading the post. They had a Formation that let mostly Qi Condensation Cultivators punch up hard enough to instant-kill a strong Core Formation--and threaten a Nascent Fucking Soul. Even through her own battle formation. Which is what's supposed to let our own Core Formations be relevant in a Nascent Soul-off.

Even with "Slow and easy to disrupt once you know it's coming", that's still an up-punch better than even the best options we had, and we're a clan that has Formations as being literally our thing. And it was perfectly designed for the Devil Bees given the aesthetic, which suggests a custom job as opposed to something they excavated from a ruin somewhere.

There's clearly Some absolute fucking unit of a Formations Master who's apparently stirring shit up in light of that. At least a strong Nascent Soul with that specialty.


Going to go through omake and threadmarking after this, but on this point:

The Clan could absolutely practice large-scale Formations of considerably greater power than it does, and could build something considerably most powerful to what the Devil Bees have if we really wanted to. However, the Clan optimises for a sort of 'jack of all trades' approach, where Clan Formations are easy to set up, hard to disrupt, useful, with defense and offensive qualities... and so on. Bear in mind the Devil Bees did have numerical superiority among Core Formation & Foundation Establishment cultivators for that battle as well.

Ultimately the reason they don't is that high-power Formations that are easy to disrupt and difficult to set up can be really good once, but are thereafter relegated to uselessness. The Clan Formations have remained useful for millennia.
 
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