Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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(Whistle)

Boy, that's escalating quickly!

Like, this is way the fuck more prep than one guy who's on the run should be capable of. I'm inclined to believe the theory that the Devil Bees did, in fact, set all this up.

The dream scenario of course is Old Cannibal dying and Manuel surviving, which will effectively break the back of the Blood Cannibals when combined with the damage they've already taken from the civil war, but I doubt that's going to happen despite how this ends.
 
(Whistle)

Boy, that's escalating quickly!

Like, this is way the fuck more prep than one guy who's on the run should be capable of. I'm inclined to believe the theory that the Devil Bees did, in fact, set all this up.

The dream scenario of course is Old Cannibal dying and Manuel surviving, which will effectively break the back of the Blood Cannibals when combined with the damage they've already taken from the civil war, but I doubt that's going to happen despite how this ends.
Wouldn't that mean another faction goes and eats the territory?
 
Wouldn't that mean another faction goes and eats the territory?

If it's the Devil Bees? No chance, they're an attrition vulnerable faction running into the "NO WAY NO HOW" attrition zone, across ... our... pro..p...

(Looks at the geography)

Oh those cheeky motherfuckers!

Was that their plan? They were going to blitz across those weak territories and fucking colonize the old Blood Cannibal lands after arranging the death of their Nascent Souls?

Draws a line from Devil Bee Territory... Notes it comfortably goes through both of the regions that were declared to have particularly weak defenses, and then contacts Blood Cannibal lands.

Christ, we might have to use our Nascent Will to swat that plan out of the sky.
 
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If it's the Devil Bees? No chance, they're an attrition vulnerable faction running into the "NO WAY NO HOW" attrition zone, across ... our... pro..p...

(Looks at the geography)

Oh those cheeky motherfuckers!

Was that their plan? They were going to blitz across those weak territories and fucking colonize the old Blood Cannibal lands after arranging the death of their Nascent Souls?

Draws a line from Devil Bee Territory... Notes it comfortably goes through both of the regions that were declared to have particularly weak defenses, and then contacts Blood Cannibal lands.

Christ, we might have to use our Nascent Will to swat that plan out of the sky.
Personally, the ideal situation is the Old Man Cannibal gets crippled but otherwise survives.

We know his secret.
 
Rina Callista 8 - The Five Against the Falling Star
Rina Callista
The Five Against the Falling Star

"So" Xu Zhen mused, kneeling at the head of the circle--the group of volunteers who had agreed to put their lives on the line to stop this menace. "This could be worse, we could be finding out about this after he's finished his ritual... How long do we have on that?"

The androgynous looking girl, clad in a black robe takes a moment to think. "... Three days if I'm not mistaken." She's calmed down greatly--though the subsequent interrogations revealed her to be some kind of "Holy Maiden" from the Noble Knowledge Sect--a Demonic Sect of the western coast, known for their powerful divinations and terrible curses that have warded off all comers since the dawn of their history. 'Really, all it means is that I get a fancy title and then get to compete with all the other Holy Sons and Daughters of the Sect and try not to get my soul ripped out and turned into a treasure by someone, I was trying to get away from that business when this all started!' "Should be pretty accurate, they weren't shy about talking about how the master is going to devour the falling star and control all the Qi of the Sea, as long as he has enough vengeful spirits and heart's blood of young geniuses to propel him to it."

"Heretic Sundown, Foundation Establishment" Came one of the newest of your company, a sharp eyed youth in a slightly cut down version of the robes everyone was wearing except Rina, one arm left bare as it cradled a newly constructed bow. "Killer of a dozen cities throughout the Great Battlefield, and highly placed on the Great Demon Catalog" His name was Leafsplitter, disciple of the Thousand Arrows and Flower Sect. "He would be a terrible foe, beyond any of us."

"And thanks to that realm he's working in, he's untouchable to anyone who could beat him." The... Last of Rina's allies of the moment noted, Bright Iron--of the Sorrowful Blacksmith Sect, here to seek rare materials, only to be kidnapped by Heretic Sundown's subordinates.

"It could be worse." Rina chimed in, optimistically. "He can't really be fighting at his best while he's doing that ritual, not without getting a big cultivation backlash and probably bursting. There's five of us here, and none of us are weak."

"Chancy though, none of us are weak--and yeah, he won't be able to bring any assistants with him in the realm he's casting this spell in--but he's still Foundation Establishment--if only the earliest reaches of it." He closed his eyes, and considered it for a moment. "Practically speaking, we should be kicking this upstairs, and getting our Elders involved to nip this in the bud."

Rina gives him a flat look.

"... But it's also true that we're not weak in ourselves, and our skills work together nicely. With a little bit of hard work and cleverness--I think we can make this work." He claps his hands, and opens his eyes. "Here's what we're going to do...

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The dawn of the third day rose, the realm not yet understanding the calamity it was about to undergo.

Fools! Heretic Sundown had been waiting for his grand chance, all this time! The descent of a Star Wyrm to earth was a truely heaven defying opportunity! He had read the prophecies included in the legacy he was granted that spoke of this--a beast of enormous power would descend as an infant! The first who could seize it would monopolize its power, and rise to the heavens in a single step! None else were aware of his plan, and the Spine Bone Valley was a realm that could repel anything above the Qi Condensation stage!

While his own power was impaired somewhat due to his comparably low cultivation, he could compensate with the oceans of blood he had spilled in preparation for this day! As the grand meteor descended to the earth, he raised his hands in welcome.

"My Destiny!" He laughed. "It has finally come! The Heavens truly have eyes!"

The meteor halted as it set down to earth, slowing to a crawl as it descended, setting down roots. The shell opened after a moment, blossoming like a lotus as the small--yet fully formed dragon stirred in its place, breathing deeply the Qi of the world. Heretic Sundown licked his chops, and raised his hand--the Soul and Fate Binding Array he had laid in place for this winking into being. The drake blinked, and snarled--but it was bound momentarily.

"Your fate is mine! Beast!" He laughed, a chain of sanguine light connecting him with the auspicious beast. "Surrender it to me!"

"Yeah... That seems a spot premature..."

"Who?!?" Heretic Sundown snarled, turning to the direction of the voice. A richly adorned expert lounging on a boulder, inhaling smoke from a pipe at his side. "You?!? I paid good money to have you captured!" He wrinkled his nose. "The blood of an expert of the Strength Purity Sect would have been enough to compensate for a hundred lesser sacrifices!" His expression changed though to one more sinister. "Still, it is not too late, I suppose this is the Heavens rewarding me for my diligence." He gestured and a dozen flying awls flickered into view, arranging into a battle array. "If you lay down and surrender, out of recognition for your courtesy, I will kill you swiftly!"

"Mmm... No." Xu Zhen tilted his head. "You're strong, yeah--and you're right that nobody higher than Qi Condensation--except yourself--can get in here with that array." He tapped his cane against the ground. "But you've also been really focused on this whole thing. You really think I came alone?"

"Whether you came alone or at the head of an army of thousands, the difference is the same!" He cackled. "Qi Condensation cannot defeat Foundation Establishment! To defy this is to defy the heavens themselves!"

"Good thing we make a habit of that, isn't it?"

The azure blade-light crashes against Heretic Sundown's neck, sparks flying as blue glass collides with divinely empowered flesh. He smirks as the Qi of his formerly concealed attacker comes into view. "Did you think that having a Golden Devil willing to make common cause with you was enough? I will admit, the Tenth Heavenstage is a surprise--but the benefits for such diligence do not come into effect until breakthrough!"

"Whoever said this was as hard as I could hit?" Rina smirks, and steps into her cut. Sparks rain off the point of contact and Heretic Sundown is sent flying. a scratch torn into his neck. "How?!?" He screeches, stabilizing himself after giving two paces of ground. "Such strength!" He stabilizes his injuries and sneers. "But strength alone is not enough! Your preparations were impressive indeed Xu Zhen! But if this is all you can muster, it will hardly be enough!" His form flickers and he turns to a ray of light, careening towards the lackadaiscal cultivator. "I will kill you first! All the world knows the speed of a Golden Devil can never jump ranks!"

Xu Zhen sits, unperturbed. At the last moment, Heretic Sundown senses danger, jumping backwards. "A spell array? You had time to carve this?" He examined it, and scoffed. "A Five Metal Devourer array, dangerous indeed! But your trap is noticed! It will have no effect if I simply avoid it!" He laughs and begins to phase out again.

"You think I'm satisfied with just one trap?" Xu Zhen asks--and Heretic Sundown knows pain as he crosses a further line, great roots erupting from the earth and binding him in place. "This is... How? When?!"

"Hiiiiii" Came a girlish voice, and the third member of the company appeared, carrying a great broom in both hands. "Millet here!" She did a little twirl. "We've been here for a while now setting traps! You were just too busy watching the sky to pay attention to your feet below you!"

"This is... The curses of the Noble Knowledge Sect?" Power pulses through the roots. "Agh!" He snaps his gaze to Xu Zhen. "Not merely one, but two Demonic whelps? Where is your pride, boy?"

"What is pride?" He asks, tapping his cane. "Does it mean letting a murderous beast live and get what he wants simply because the only help around aren't approved allies?" He wonders. "Is it surrendering at the first sign of problems? Or failing because my pride is more important than my Dao?" He shakes his head. "I take a reasonable and well calculated approach to my life, if that means working with shady people to beat a demon safely and cleanly, at no real cost to anyone? That's a bargain."

"Kekeke" He laughed. "Good, Good, Good!" he says it three times. "I will admit, you have put up a better fight than expected... But this trickery--what of it? In the end... Greater power overcomes all clever tricks!" His Cultivation base soared, and he strained against his bonds--vines fraying and snapping.

"Forget about me?" Rina added though, descending on him from above and crashing against his flesh--he falters to his knees. "You! Persistent..."

"We don't need to beat you after all." Xu Zhen explained. "We just need to pressure you for a little bit, and then the loose sand beneath your feet will cave in naturally."

"That is... What?"

The ringing of a gong fills the valley, and all eyes turn to the source of the noise. Bright Iron with both hands wrapped around his great maul, standing at the base of the struggling Star-Drake. It screams in fury and hate as the maul withdraws, revealing the cracks left within its reverse-scale.

"No... You wouldn't!" Heretic Sundown redoubles his efforts, but finds himself tackled by Rina. "This opportunity here... You wouldn't dare!"

"Oh I would dare" Xu Zhen smirks, and snaps his fingers.

An arrow--faultlessly aimed, perfectly shot flashes through the air, burying itself in the cracks put in the Drake's most vulnerable spot. Power lashed through it, and how it screamed in rage and hate.

But bound so well, in this ritual, it could do nothing but die in the face of such trespass.

"NO!!!" Heretic Sundown screamed, the backlash pouring into him, his Cultivation Base collapsing. From Early Foundation Establishment, he fell to the Ninth Heavenstage... And further still.

By the time he had finished writhing, new wrinkles had appeared on his face--barely above the third heavenstage, all of the power cultivated in a life of cruelty. All vanished.

"I think..." Xu Zhen began, when the show was over. "You have much to explain to the Sects of this region." He steps up, and smirks. "Did you really think you'd get away with all this?"

Heretic Sundown whimpered--he knew there was little enough mercy to be had for a Cultivator who dared be caught alive after committing such crimes.

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And so it was that the Five Against the Falling Star established the base of their reputation. Considered by many to be the best of the younger generation, they make up an eclectic mix of paths and origins, both Righteous and Demonic in origin. Their names went unspoken, but their deeds and legends would be widely renowned in the many years to come, as each would find their own measure of notoriety.

Yep! I just made a Cultivator universe Adventuring Party, I hope to bring them out here and there in later story arcs rather than just have Rina do everything on her own. Nothing major on the macro level until we're looking at Elder level content, but a fun little note that the younger generation doesn't necessarily carry the same grudges as the older one.

Just a hair's breadth from 20,000 words total for Rina! Almost 10,000 for this turn alone.
 
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I think this is a deep play by the saber sect. They backed child gulper to destabilize the cannibals and he went for it for the personal power.
Same. In addition, i think there is an element of 2 bird 1 stone as well. The Golden Devils are right in the path of the cannibals and already have a grudge with them, so the ripples will hit us as well.

I see it as the kind of background intrigue to keep the region destablised, plus with a additional bonus of squashing us.
And so it was that the Five Against the Falling Star established the base of their reputation. Considered by many to be the best of the younger generation, they make up an eclectic mix of paths and origins, both Righteous and Demonic in origin. Their names went unspoken, but their deeds and legends would be widely renowned in the many years to come, as each would find their own measure of notoriety.

I like the personalities involved! I also kinda have a lowkey hope that if they ever get fallout from it they might choose to flee to our Clan for sanctuary. Improving the Cultivation Mindset 1 cultivator at a time!
 
Fierce Fang 3 - Cultivating the Breath of the Heavens
Fierce Fang
Cultivating the Breath of the Heavens​
A/N: Takes place during turn 1


Breath in. Hold for 5 heartbeats. Breath out. This is the fundamentals of the cultivation art that Fierce Fang practices, the Breath of the Heavens. The art worked by treating qi as like the air its name implies. The qi would come with the air through the mouth and into the throat where the qi would be split into two opposite halves and enter the lungs. This separation was more than just splitting two into 2 ones but more yin and yang or light and dark. Of course like any technique such separation was imperfect and so some of the qi in the lungs was impure. It was because of this impurity that it took 5 heartbeats to rejoin the two qi to the users dantian between the lungs for the care needed to be taken to keep the impure bits out. Finally the user breathed out the remaining useless qi out before starting the process again. This was unlike the more conventional way of cultivating of simply absorbing the qi directly into the dantian.

The Breath of the Heavens despite its impressive name a mostly subpar art that no clan or sect scion would be caught dead using but it was what Fang had to work with. Being a poor wandering cultivator meant you had to settle for paying for over priced and shitty arts since only stories have you get heaven defying techniques without a backer. Sure Fang could probably buy a new cultivation art from the Golden Devil Archives with some of his contribution points but Fang was bit stubborn about things like this and didn't want to use hard earned points to get something others got for free.

That is not to say that the Breath of the Heavens didn't have anything going for it. It was actually a fairly decent quality in the plains apparently due to the abundance of qi in the air mitigating its flaws but in the qi dry desert it was much less effective. In the Organ Meat Desert one using the Breath of the Heavens could inhale until their lungs exploded and not even fill their lungs halfway with qi. This greatly reduced the cultivation speed of its user though this wasn't exactly an uncommon problem in the desert. What really hurt the cultivation technique was its inability to directly absorb Spirit Crystals requiring them to processed in special ways in order to be used.

About the only useful thing about the art to Fierce Fang is that it didn't require one to meditate to use and cultivate if one could make the breathing pattern natural. This greatly pleased Fang for while he definitely had the patience for meditation he vastly preferred to be able to move around and do stuff instead of having to be stuck sitting still for a quarter a day. Gods Fang could hardily imagine what being a Nascent Soul must be like since they apparently needed to spend an entire day for a 'short' cultivation session. Fang would have to think really hard about whether he wanted to reach such heights, assuming he gets there of course. Since while the amazing power it offered was nice Fang cultivated not for strength but the ability to properly enjoy life.

So Fierce Fang didn't really care that much if the way he cultivated was trash or inefficient for he had the ability to enjoy himself. He especially liked the Spirit Crystal Filter Sticks he 'smoked' in order to cultivate faster even if it costed him points to learn the recipe and get the herbs and paper to make them.

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Had a fun idea for what my cultivation method was and thought I would show it along with sneaking a fun excuse to let my character 'smoke' a cigarette since I like the image of someone in a xianxia smoking like he's in a western.
 
Had a fun idea for what my cultivation method was and thought I would show it along with sneaking a fun excuse to let my character 'smoke' a cigarette since I like the image of someone in a xianxia smoking like he's in a western.


This was what came to mine when i imagine how a Cultivation Bonus for Fierce Fang will appear as! Cigars for that huge boost! :D

Any chance of him picking up crossbows to go full western ? 🤭
 
Minervina Barda 5 - The Thousand Blooms Oak.
Minervina Barda 5: The Thousand Blooms Oak.

The journey out to the Scarred Lands had been utterly dreadful.

I had expected the region recently ripped from the blood soaked hands of the Cannibals to be desolate and had packed accordingly. My treasured pouch contained enough supplies for a half year of prudent desert travel, my preferred black gowns had been exchanged for a rugged brown burlap shawl and a broad brimmed hat to keep the fierce desert rays at bay and help hide my Bronze blessed features from my fellow travelers. I shouldered a large leather pack full of clothes, waterskins, hard tack and a few mortal trade goods (spices mostly) to complete the image.

I was travelling incognito and I can tell you it's a lot less romantic than the novels make it out to be.

I took these precautions because while their Blood Cannibal overlords were in the process of withdrawing, the vassal cultivators they had appointed to handle the mundane details of governance clung on in places. They were poor, pitiful little clans and houses having been bled all but dry in recent years. Few could claim a single Foundation Stage Master to their name. They would be supplanted soon once the country fully came under the Golden Aegis but in the meantime they were like starving desert wolves, twice as violent and dangerous as they might otherwise have been. I would not risk my chance at the Sap of a Thousand Blooms Oak by drawing the attention of these deadly dregs.

The influence of the Blood Cannibals had left a lasting mark on the region's culture. It was common practice in most places to extort a cup of blood from each traveller along with their road tolls. I watched trash Cultivators hands shake in raw desire as they carefully poured the precious liquid into scripted stone urns to in turn give in tribute to their so called 'elders.' I am eternally grateful my clan has never turned to such arts, no matter how many undeserved tribulations the heavens pillory us with.

I managed to avoid confrontation until the final leg of my journey. I was following a mortal caravan, not as a formal member, just a wanderer who happened to be going in the same direction. The sun was close to setting as we reached a collection of stone hovels that bore the absurdly proud name "Jade Peacock City."

I found this encouraging. According to the maps and travellers tales I had gathered this was the flag of a very minor local sect dubbed The Iron TIgers. The tales had agreed that my prize was located in their territory.

According to the most reliable records I and my reluctant research assistant could gather, the 'ravine' this little city sheltered in was actually the results of an earth shattering palm strike exchanged in a duel of honour between Hong Zhi Lung and Song Ma, two venerable Nascent Souls of a previous era. If my histories could be believed, the Thousand Blooms Oak had sprung up from the spot where the Ancient Song Ma had been forced to cough up blood after receiving the cataclysmic blow. Whatever the truth of the matter, a potently supernatural grove of trees with razor sharp leaves and impossibly durable bark had sprung up around the Oak. By all accounts not even a Core Formation Expert could force his way in without some special trick or magic.

Of course the Iron Tigers knew all this quite well. The pathway to the oak only opened every 66 years and I understood they would routinely let a few of their inner disciples compete for the prize.

I would ensure this year's competition would have a bit of an upset.

I paid my toll in coins and blood after swallowing a 'Soul Veiling Pill' I had concocted to hide my cultivation base, and entered the city. I felt the venom coil through my bloodstream and my Core grow sluggish. The Sea of Qi in my Dantian stopped its endless churning and stilled, like a calm pond. Drawing on my powers would be painful and difficult, but I should appear mortal to the Spiritual Sense of anyone below Core Formation.

I refrained from poisoning the offered blood, it would have been easy enough, but I didn't want to risk my cover with a petty strike at these vile practitioners.

I took a room in an inn of middling quality and spent a few days asking around. It looked like I was early, the tree would not bloom for a few months yet. In order to raise funds, the Iron Tigers were turning the competition into a grand tournament, charging the locals for a chance to see their local Cultivators compete in magical duels. The Sects' need for funds must have been deep, they were even offering a few slots in the tourney to travelling Cultivators if they could bid enough Spirit Stones. I considered it briefly, but decided to stick to my original plan. A tournament wasn't exactly playing to my strengths and no doubt it would be helplessly rigged in favour of the locals.

Instead I got a job at The Silk Swan, the only tavern and restaurant of any note in the city and favourite drinking den of the Iron Tigers noble heirs and young masters.

How did a stranger without references walk into a job at such a wealthy establishment? Why it was simplicity itself! I got the manager to sample my cooking.

Why so surprised? My mother would have died of shame if I had dared to leave home unable to prepare a feast from a few handfuls of rice, seaweed and half of a two day old fish. Combine that with four decades of experience as a refiner of obscure ingredients and the heightened dexterity, perception and reaction speed of a Cultivator and it should be obvious I would put even the finest mortal chef to shame. You have not savoured true umami flavour until you have sat at a professional poisoners dinner table.

I am not so arrogant as to suggest my skills would rival a true Spirit Chef, those rare individuals who follow a Dao of Cooking and who's meals are worthy and much more pleasant alternatives to a refiners pills, but such folk would never set up shop in a tiny place like this.

In any case, my dishes proved something of a hit with the locals and word soon got around that the Silk Swan was the place to be. This gave me ample opportunity to mark the four competitors in the coming tournament and devise a suitable foil for each and every one.

First there was Mua Ho. A swaggering fellow, the grandson of Mua Dong, one of the Sects Elders. He never came into the restaurant without at least a half dozen sycophants and he could not be convinced to stop getting handsy with the serving girls. I took no small pleasure in spiking several of his meals in the days leading up to his 'Grand Day of Reckoning.' While each 'extra ingredient' was harmless in and off itself, altogether they developed into a great foulness in his system. I spent more time and energy than was probably reasonable to ensure that things came to a head at the most embarrassing moment possible. As he stepped out onto the grand fighting arena, massive jade war hammer in hand, he started to shit himself uncontrollably, wept like a tiny child and then proceeded to vomit up what little liquids remained in his body. He would live, though I suspect he might wish he hadn't.

Second was a more sinister man, for whom I concocted a more sinister fate. Blood Cultivation was seen as a common and easy path to advancement amongst the Iron Tigers but Khulud Jian took it to an extreme even by the locals standards. A thin, wretched snake of a man, I witnessed him slip into mortal homes, slaughtering and consuming their inhabitants. A small under the table bribe to the guards and no questions would ever be asked. For him, I slipped finely diced Opalescent Tortoise Pearls into his dumplings the night before the tournament. As he drew on his Cultivation Base for strength in his first match (This was a few seconds before Mua Ho's unfortunate accident), the whole crowd heard a mighty BANG as he collapsed, a hand sized hole in his stomach. The purity of the pearls had come into contact with the festering corruption in the man's Dantian and had an explosive reaction.

Third was the greatest challenge. Smiling Leopard wasn't a member of the Iron Tiger Sect, but a wandering cultivator who had wagered a great fortune in spirit stones for a chance in the tournament. He was an avowed Ascetic and would never come to my restaurant, eschewing any meal more flavoursome than plain rice or a heel of bread. I spent a whole week unsuccessfully trying to tempt him into tasting my products, subtly following him and leaving various delicious treats in his path. His Dao was unwavering though and I was not successful.

Eventually though Smiling Leopard was brought down by man's traditional weakness; Woman. The monkish Cultivator was still a very young man, and in my stalking I had realised he was secretly smitten with one of the local beauties. A few subtle hints to the girl about the powerful man's interest and I had my unwitting agent. It was a simple matter to send her to him armed with a 'gift' of my increasingly famous dumplings to break the ice. Confronted by the girl of his dreams, how could he turn aside her generosity? I felt a warm feeling of satisfaction as he bit into the dumplings, and I could tell that he enjoyed them too, the stubborn fool. He didn't seem to be a particularly bad sort, so I had laced the dumplings with a simple paralytic. At the appropriate time, he turned into a statue for a few hours, utterly unable to move his body. Its not painless but I later heard he married the young woman I sent his way, so I think we are probably even.

Last was Liu Zhe. I might have sighed a little over Liu Zhe and daydreamed of him a little too frequently during my many long shifts at the Silk Swans stove. In many ways he was the perfect image of a man. Scholarly and wise, he dispensed with the blood arts favoured by the locals and excelled anyway, having mastered the sword beyond any of his peers. He had perfect manners and could debate philosophy with men five times his age. If i'm honest, I strongly considered abducting him in the night and bringing him back to the clan as my prize instead of the priceless treasure I came here seeking.

It's probably for the best that I discovered he much preferred the company of his favourite stablehand to going on walks with the local women before I did anything foolish, though it did break my heart a little. With a heavy sigh I drizzled a potent draught into his soup. He slept blissfully through the entire affair.

Between one of the star competitors' total absence, another dropping dead for no clear reason and the final pair going into terrible and hideous fits, the Iron Tigers grand tournament rapidly descended into farce. With all eyes elsewhere, stealthily making my way through the gap that had opened in the sword sharp leaves was a simple task. I scattered a few simple snares and traps behind me, so I would be warned of any interlopers.

Altogether I had spent almost two years of my life researching, travelling and infiltrating to reach this destination. The sight of the Thousand Blooms Oak made it all worthwhile. Resplendent in leaves of iron, jade and ruby with bark made of living silver, the tree seemed at once to be a marvel of metallurgic artistic expression and utterly natural. The 'Blooms' that gave the tree its name looked like sapphires, each a glowing blue crystal budding from a silver-wood branch.

Its Qi filled the air, a heady combination of Wood and Metal, with a strong Yang alignment. It was a most unusual combination, which was part of what drew me here. I had been planning for some time now for my first Dao Pillar to take the form of a mighty tree. It would be my testament to the incredible powers of Life, one of the great crucibles of my Dao of Transformation. Life is a force that is ever mutable, constantly taking in dead matter and reforming it in new and unique ways. As well as Treasure, I hoped that my proximity to this majestic entity might give me a seed for my own mighty tree.

I didn't have long to admire the sight though. The gathering ritual was moderately complex. I began with a ritual prayer to the spirit of the tree, an old song of admiration and respect. My voice is average at best, but I had been practicing and my words were earnest even if they weren't in tune.

Next was a sacrifice. I offered blood from three sources. My blood, fresh from a vein. An enemies blood, carefully gathered from a dead cannibal years ago against just such a moment. And the blood of my family, It hadn't taken much cajoling to get a great-niece of mine to make the donation, though it had been awkward. The rest of the Barda's remained unwilling to Cultivate and they viewed my rare visits with an awkward mix of awe and fear. My heart ached in longing for the family I had outlived in that moment. I spilt the blood, drop by drop, onto an exposed root of the tree and watched as it was absorbed almost instantly.

The tree's branches swayed backwards and forwards gently, though there was no wind. A sign of permission I hoped. No mortal knife would harm this tree. Its precious sap could only be freely given. I took out the stone scripted bowl I had prepared, placed it against the trunk of the tree and waited. It only took a moment, a section of the unbreachable metal bark shivered and then ran like molten silver. It pooled perfectly into the bowl.

A wooden snap and cursing tells me the Iron Tigers are making their way up the Path. I have seconds remaining. Feeling reckless after my months of undercover work I put the bowl to my lips and drank the silver nectar. I felt the miraculous liquid suffuse every cell of my being in an instant. I knew instantly that it would work as promised. If I was struck down, a seed would be born from whatever remained of my body, even if it were but a splash of blood or a gush of breath. The wind would carry the seed to a safe place, and their it would grow into a mighty tree with unnatural rapidity. A year and a day after my death, I would step out of the tree, new again, just as I had been. Fresh life born from death. It was perfect, both as a tool and a testament to my Dao.

Now I just needed to get home without having to use it. I let the bowl fall to the floor as I cycled my Cultivation base fully for the first time in far too long. With a conscious effort I dispelled the lingering remnants of the Soul Veling Pill and unleashed the power at the Peak of the 9th Heaven Stage of Qi Condensation. I pulled out a fist sized purple pill I had prepared a year ago and stepped towards the path. There I briefly made eye contact with my pursuers, Mua Dong and two of his cronies. They were undoubtedly surprised to see their favourite chef on this particular forest path.

I should have just skipped straight to killing them, but I was drunk on tree sap and feeling arrogant. "This is far too fine a treasure for a piddling little Sect who's Elders can't even claim Foundation Establishment. The Golden Devils will be taking ownership of it from now on." Without any further words I completed the requisite incantation gestures with my left hand and crushed the pill in my right. Foul ichor flies from the pearl, an expensive melange of over three dozen lethal venoms. The spell catches it in mid air, and Transforms it. The nascent seed of my future Dao Pillar seems to sing in sheer joy as my power reaches into the febrile liquid and brings forth life! A Snake, three times my size with iridescent purple scales and blazing red eyes blasts forth from the remains of the pill and engulfs the three men. They wail and flare their Cultivation in a desperate defense, but its far too late.

The Ash Borne Demon Viper only lives for the space of ten heartbeats or so, but it was enough time. As the great serpent dissolved back into being a mere liquid, it left behind nothing but the scorched bones of the Iron Tigers.

I tried not to think about how many Spirit Stones that pill had cost to make as I gingerly stepped around the still toxic remains and escaped Jade Peacock City. My pilgrimage to the Oak had reaffirmed the strength of my Dao to me and that was a reward beyond any riches even before I counted the regenerative power of the Sap flowing through my body.

I put the increasingly confused and panicked city behind me as I took the first steps on the long road home. It had definitely been an educational experience.

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This one took a while!

@occipitallobe
In hindsight I shouldn't have written this assuming our planned territorial annexation would go ahead! Fingers crossed Manuel pulls the duel back from the brink! I am personally hoping for a Naruto-esque 'Oh no, it was just a substitution' moment.
 
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A highlight of Zeph's Great Xianxia Adventure, I Shall Seal The Heavens edition: I have discovered that a treasure in Xianxia can be just about anything, since this one has a bum-exploding mirror
 
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Why so surprised? My mother would have died of shame if I had dared to leave home unable to prepare a feast from a few handfuls of rice, seaweed and half of a two day old fish. Combine that with four decades of experience as a r`efiner of obscure ingredients and the heightened dexterity, perception and reaction speed of a Cultivator and it should be obvious I would put even the finest mortal chef to shame. You have not savoured true umami flavour until you have sat at a professional poisoners dinner table.

I feel like this is a jab at the fact my seed lives like a standard bachelor and is only just now learning how to cook

As he stepped out onto the grand fighting arena, massive jade war hammer in hand, he started to shit himself uncontrollably, wept like a tiny child and then proceeded to vomit up what little liquids remained in his body. He would live, though I suspect he might wish he hadn't.

ok, that is just plain mean, just kill the poorguy and get it over with. Spewing from both ends just sucks

As he drew on his Cultivation Base for strength in his first match (This was a few seconds before Mua Ho's unfortunate accident), the whole crowd heard a mighty BANG as he collapsed, a hand sized hole in his stomach. The purity of the pearls had come into contact with the festering corruption in the man's Dantian and had an explosive reaction.

See this is what I mean, just kill the guys,no need to torture the poor guys

He didn't seem to be a particularly bad sort, so I had laced the dumplings with a simple paralytic. At the appropriate time, he turned into a statue for a few hours, utterly unable to move his body. Its not painless but I later heard he married the young woman I sent his way, so I think we are probably even.

I think the guy might actually owe you seed something if he got to marry his dream girl

It's probably for the best that I discovered he much preferred the company of his favourite stablehand to going on walks with the local women before I did anything foolish, though it did break my heart a little. With a heavy sigh I drizzled a potent draught into his soup. He slept blissfully through the entire affair.

That was nice of her, glad she didn't go crazy stalker

Loved your Omake, that poison snake Omake gave me some ideas
@occipitallobe what is your stance on constructs like puppets or golems? I won't use anything like that until mid foundation, too many other things to do first
 
Aristoteles 'Aris' Kalokagathos 1 - Origins

Aris looked at himself in the polished silver mirror, natural light filtering in through the long, rounded window, reflecting off of the golden mosaic tiles embedded in the far wall. His body was -- so he mused -- beautiful. A living sculpture of gilded brass, with only his lower body covered in a plain white linen cloth. His metallic skin shone in the light of the early dawn, a shade lighter than most of his kinsmen, with dark, coppery curls framing an angular face with full lips and bright green eyes. He smiled, his teeth shining with a silvery, golden sheen.

Magnificent.

He produced his silver lyre from its earthenware container, and strummed an easy melody. He opened his mouth, and ran through a simple set of vocal warming-up exercises. As the sibilant, pure notes drifted out of his chambers and into the streets of the oasis city under his family's rule beyond, Aris came back to the thought he so often had. His kind -- the scions of Gold, or Golden Devils as others insisted on calling them -- were destined to rule this world. Not just the barren sands around them, but the mountains and fertile plains from whence they were once driven. None were so magnanimous towards their mortals, none so cultivated, none so clearly set apart from the teeming masses as them. Their bodies were impervious and glorious, but most importantly reflected their golden souls and unyielding will within. No wonder their vassals would seek to imitate them and that the heavens hated them so -- their splendor was awe-inspiring, other-worldly even.

But he drifted off. He set his lyre down and went about getting dressed. Today, not in his richly embroidered tunics or his white chlamys, but in legionnaire garb. Less than a week ago, he broke through to the first Heavenstage of Essence Gathering after near four years of cultivation, marking his departure from the world of mortals, into the world of immortals, into the world of Clan affairs. It had not been pleasant of course, strengthening bones and lungs, muscles and organs with Qi was...disagreeable. But this was the least of all trials to be faced. He was a son of gold, his father a Core Formation Legate, his granduncle the Chartoularios Tou Kanikleiou. His legacy was glorious, and he would have to endure many more torments great and small before he would be found worthy of it.

He donned the lamellar armor and sheathed his saber, the Spiritual Bronze seemingly trapping the azure light of dawn playing across its surface before it slid into its leather sheath. His father was there to see him out, one of the only occasions he had ever seen Andronikos Kalokagathos in this house. His father doesn't need to say much, his chartreuse eyes make his message crystal clear, his Dao of Glory further enhancing the effect. His officer's lamellar seems to glow golden, the crest on his helmet casting his face in a corona of light. A statue of a hero of old, the moment of their triumph forever immortalized in unliving bronze, now living and breathing.

"Do your duty", those unyielding emeralds spoke clearly. His father nods almost imperceptibly, and Aris is into the courtyard and out of the gate.


--​


A sound like a gong struck. The instructor's dark bronze fist -- almost earthen dark, marked with countless scars like warped metal -- strikes Aris' abdomen again, and he is projected a solid meter backwards, his feet never leaving the ground. His back remains straight, bearing the immense weight of a large clay jar filled with sand above his head on outstretched arms, as he has for the past ten minutes now.

"KALOKAGATHOS! YOU. ARE. MOVING."

A light step forwards and Instructor Tsyprios' fists strike true again. A meagre fragment of his true might – Aris' Bronze Shirt technique would not withstand much more. Withstanding is relative however, as it feels as if his spine is being thoroughly shaken by each casual expression of force. His instructor harrumphs and moves to the next disciple in line, all clad in light training tunics. The next one in line – Leo Kalenos, Aris thinks his name is – is not so lucky. He flinches minutely and the strike smacks him onto the tiles, the large clay jar filled with sand held above his head crashing onto the pavement with a heavy crack, spilling its contents across the training courtyard.

"KALENOS. PATHETIC. GATHER UP THAT PRECIOUS DESERT SAND AND THEN DO TWENTY LAPS. YES, EVERY GRAIN."

Tsyprios has moved on to another victim, and Aris adjusts his hold on the disgustingly heavy jar. Near five hundred beginning Essence Gathering Cultivators in their cohort, standing in one of the many, many elevated courtyards of the Dawn Fortress, the air filling with small grunts and puffs of exertion. Trueborn clan sons and daughters, talented commoners, or even vagrants and wanderers, all supposedly with some small spark of talent which would potentially set them apart from the rest of the teeming masses, from those that might strictly speaking be called cultivators, but would never amount to anything.

Leo seems at wits end, piling loose sand onto a shard of pottery the size of his torso, only to fall off again.

Aris sneers.

This was easy of course. Not keeping the jar up – his arms were falling neigh off – but seeing the purpose. A soldier obeys, unthinkingly. The perfect legionnaire is a body conditioned to do one thing, obey as an extension of the will of the commanding officer. Whether the order was to scrub the latrines, form up in formation, or collect every grain of sand in the desert, the legionnaire obeys until he can no longer move, or his orders are changed. That is the first lesson many are still to learn here. The plight of their Clan demanded perseverance in the face of adversity, no matter how great. His comrades, each holding a similar jar above their heads, cast uncertain glances at Leo and the waist-high pile of sand at his side, the unspoken question clear in their eyes.

The point wasn't to continue for some indeterminate amount of time until you assumed the instructor would be satisfied, the point was to continue until you collapsed.

Leo cast up a look of mild desperation in Aris' direction. He looked down, the image of his father steeling his gaze and spine.

It was high time they learned this lesson.

"Leo. You will be collecting sand for days. There is no shortcut. If you get started now, you might make mess at the end of the week. Don't let the Clan do-."

A dull thud, and sand streams over Aris' head and back.

"KALOKAGATHOS. YOU ARE WASTING SAND. DO PUSHUPS UNTIL KALENOS FINISHES CLEANING UP."

Instructor Tsyrios stands with a palm outstretched in an easy form of Emperor's Flying Fist, turned towards Aris from some fifty meters away.

Aris puts the now empty jar with its bottom blown off down, brushes the sand off of his shoulders and out of his hair, and drops down without a second thought. He plants his fists solidly on the stone, and sinks his nose down to ground level, while Leo takes off his tunic and turns it into a makeshift carrying bag. A leader leads by example. Aris' nose touches the ground.

One.

Noon next day, Leo is still picking individual grains of sand from between the flagstones while the rest of the cohort practice their formation drills and Bronze Arhat fists. Five thousand six hundred twenty-six.

In the afternoon, a light sandstorm sweeps over the fortress, coating everything in a thin layer of silky reddish-yellow sand. Tsyrios casts a glance down at him. He does not so much as glance upwards. Eight thousand ninety-three.

Two days later, Aris' pace has slowed to three pushups per minute, and black spots dance across his vision like so many buzzing scarabs. Leo has managed to gather up an impressive mountain of sand, filling a dozen of the large clay jars, but he cannot walk without stumbling and his hands are trembling fiercely. He is on all fours, scraping grains from between the flagstones with his nails half a meter from where Aris is parallel to the floor. Suddenly, a weight bears down upon Aris' back, and his arms give out. He turns his head while pressed to the floor, and sees Tsyrios standing on his and Leo's backs, one feet planted solidly in between their shoulder blades.

His instructor opens his mouth, but Aris is faster, and pushes off with all of his strength, managing to lift himself half a meter off of the floor before his arms give our again. The Instructor frowns, and folds his arms, remaining stable in spite of one his supports moving.

"Up, Kalenos."

Nine thousand three hundred ninety-six. Nine thousand three hundred ninety-seven.

Leo scrapes up sand with one hand, holding himself upright with his other arm. Aris fixes him with an iron look, and gives him a cut nod.

Tsyrios looks up to face the rest of the cohort, who are running through body conditioning exercises. Slaps, palms, light kicks, repeated hundreds of times to harden bone and skin.

It is evening before Tsyrios steps off of the two legionnaires, having bellowed exercise after exercise to the cohort. While his fellow recruits are panting heavily and recuperating from the drilling, Tsyrios' foot touches down upon the sand-dusted pavement stones, and with a casual expression of spiritual pressure every grain of the blasted substance is blown off of the courtyard.

"COHORT. DISMISSED."

Aris and Leo stand up on wobbly legs, Leo needing a steadying hand to prevent him from collapsing. They move to their designated barracks with halting steps, their comrades in arms giving them – and Tsyrios still standing next to them – a wide berth, afraid they'll somehow invoke a similar body-wracking disciplining as them. That doesn't stop them from giving them cloaked stares, a mixture of fear, respect, halting resignation and careful appraisal playing across their visages.

"Kalenos. I didn't see those twenty laps."

The declaration sends a visible ripple through his partner, and he looks ready to collapse. Aris steels his spine, and starts off on a light jog. He does two laps before Leo manages to steel his courage and join him. Their drill instructor beholds the spectacle with an inscrutable look. The rest of the cohort slows down to behold the encore, pity and dread now clear as day in their eyes.

They are still running when the last recruit leaves, barely going faster than a light walk. Aris runs behind Leo, pushing him forward whenever he flags or stumbles. Tsyrios beholds the scene with no change in expression.

The twentieth lap done, Leo collapses like a sack of rice flour. Their instructor doesn't say a word, turns around, and walks out of the courtyard, towards one of the stairs leading to one of the higher outbuildings.

He looks down upon Leo, and sneers. Such weakness. His hair is golden, but his skin yet lacks the metallic sheen that sets their blood apart from the rest of the world. Yet he was a son of Gold all the same, and his blood would be spilled for the glory of the clan and its manifest destiny all the same.

Aris lifts him onto his shoulders, and carries him to the barracks. He doesn't grace anyone with a response, or even a grunt of exertion, and no one seems particularly keen to interact with him, casting questioning glances his way when they think they can't be seen.

Only when Leo is dropped off with his contubernales and Aris finds his bunk with rough-spun linen sheets, does he allow himself a deep sigh. He collapses into dreamless sleep the moment after.


--

Aris glances at the men and women surrounding him on their training courtyard. Somehow he seems to have attracted a following after that little stunt. Their basic training was coming to an end, with some qualifying for specialist training, others without particular talent would either be permanently assigned to a legion as a footsoldier or go back to whatever backwater they came from. He was a shoe-in for Vanguard officer training, his cultivation keeping pace with the fastest of his cohort.

They stood at ease, waiting for the morning roll call, all clad in their full legionnaire armor, spear held to their side, burnished shield on their back. Leo stood to his right, his chin in the air and back as straight as a ruler. He had attached himself to Aris like tin to copper and seemed to have found his resolve. He was no true commander, no leader of men, but he would make a sterling campmaster or drill sergeant one day. Until then he was a valuable right hand to Aris – he had made sure that his ambitions were aligned the same way as his. If all went his way, Leo would go to the Vanguard together with him.

The gong sounds, and everyone snaps to stand at attention.

The expert that comes walking down the stairs to their part of Dawn Fortress at the head of a gaggle of instructors is unfamiliar to them. A long bronze beard with a green-white sheen and shiny lamellar, flanked by Tsyrios on his left. No rank markings.

"At ease, cohort." The senior speaks with a carrying, sonorous voice.

"Today follows your formal graduation from basic training – for those continuing their training here, greater freedoms and access to the contribution board will be made available, along with specialist training in your chosen or assigned niche."

Aris can't help but frown – the expert hadn't introduced himself, nor was there any way to identify him. He moved his thumb downwards, and Leo picked up on the gesture immediately – be on your guard.

"You have trained and cultivated for one year in a controlled environment, preparing for orderly formations, tests of tactics and martial valor. What you have not yet gotten a taste of – is chaos."

There it was.

"The chaos of all-out cultivator warfare."

He holds up five jade slips, tied to long red ribbons.

"From now until the evening gong strikes, you shall war amongst one another. The last five standing shall receive one of these slips, charged with one hundred and fifty contribution points and one rare technique from the clan archives. Recruits going home can instead convert the contribution points to a large amount of mortal wealth."

Five for an entire cohort? Enough to encourage cooperation, also enough to foster dissent in larger groups.

"You may use whichever tactics you please, but intentionally lethal violence is prohibited."

The mysterious senior snaps his fingers, and suddenly the entire cohort is standing among more greenery than any of them had seen in their lives. Outcroppings of what look like trees – if the palm trees and small fruit-bearing trees of the clan lands had grown to a hundred times their size and gotten a layer of wood-like armor – surround Aris on all sides, the space between them filled with shrubbery, bushes and ferns the size of at least three men. Aris' comrades in arms are spaced around somewhat unevenly, and flashes of bronze can be seen from where the other recruits were dropped among the forest greenery.

"Juniors, begin." The voice of the elder echoes from somewhere.

No time for bewilderment. Leo is by his side in a heartbeat, shield raised and spear brandished.

He breathes in, and bellows on top of his lungs, the sound making the very air vibrate.

"TO ME IF YOU WANT TO LIVE!"

Hyperbole of course, but combat was not the place to mince words.

A few of Aris' followers seem to not like their odds with him, and make a beeline away from the group towards the nearest copse of trees. Most of them remember their training well enough to form up in a rough cordon around him, shields raised, spears outstretched. The few carrying a bow take up archery positions behind the shieldwall. Most of those not part of Aris' little group and within sight are visibly conflicted. Run away and be swept away by other groups, or join but risk being ejected in the endgame in favor of more loyal retainers.

An enemy taken out now is one that cannot form up to threaten him later, so he doesn't give them the chance. The loyal ones had joined him, and an indecisive soldier that could turn on you was as good as worthless.

"Split up in threes, take out the stragglers in sight, retreat at the least sign of organized resistance." Aris points at three of his most loyal sycophants. "You, you and you, stay here."

His group slowly splinters and the impromptu squads charge the indecisive stragglers around his position. Most stragglers break out into a dead run, some find their courage and put up a fight – altogether awkward affairs, both sides uncomfortable with hurting the legionnaires that were up until two minutes ago their comrades in arms. Instead of clashes, these turn into probing standoffs until one lashes out too hard for friendliness, whereafter the retaliation follows, Aris' squads stabbing at limbs with spears, but more often resorting to blunt force to subdue and disarm. They and their equipment dissolve in orange sparks as soon as they suffer any serious wounds or are disarmed and pinned down.

One or two drop down their spear and shield and raise their hands in surrender when they are charged. They dissolve into the same ethereal lights the moment their hands go in the air.

Aris eyes one of the trees thoughtfully.
--​

An hour or two had passed. It was difficult to keep track of time here. The sun wasn't visible through the canopy, and based on the patterns of light between the trees it also hadn't moved.

After taking care of the stragglers, they had taken up position around one of the larger trees, building an impromptu platform between the branches a few metres up. A cordon had been set up around the tree, driving sharpened branches into the soil, one of his underlings that had received rudimentary array training carving a basic defensive array into the tree's bark. Ferns and bushes had been cleared for a clear line of sight – barring the trees – for a few dozen meters.

Legionnaires handy with a bow had doffed their lamellar and painted themselves with mud, taking up positions in the trees around their headquarters. Barely hidden to someone with the heightened senses of First Heavenstage, but enough for a few seconds of surprise. Others crouched in the underbrush nearby, ready to ambush stragglers. A few designated scouts flitted between the trees, reporting on the movements of other groups. So far so good.

Aside from the occasional straggler, they had already managed to lure three smaller groups into their killing zone by a scout being intentionally seen, then running right into their headquarters. By the time they saw the fortifications, they had been surrounded. That trick wouldn't work on the more astute commanders, but it was a good way of thinning out the playground. Off in the distance, sounds of faraway combat and shouts could occasionally be heard, but seldom close enough to pinpoint their location with certainty.

They were down to about twenty, bleeding the occasional scout to ambush or accident, the rate of attrition having seemingly increased the last half hour or so. He guessed that no more than eighty of his cohort could still be in the running. The longer they could stretch the advantage their numbers and defensible position offered them, the better it would bode from them in the endgame. Yet some among his cohort were not entirely without intelligence, and would try and seek him out because of the danger he posed. By now, most others should know where he was – he wasn't exactly difficult to find.

Leo nudged his arm atop the platform and nodded towards a patch of brier. A heartbeat later, a scout staggered out of the underbrush and burst into the cleared area surrounding their tree, small scrapes and cuts dotting his frame, his rough tunic torn in multiple spots.

The smaller man – black haired and brown eyed unlike his kin – bellowed breathlessly towards the platform. "They've got us surrounded! They're picking us off one by one!"

Aris brought the whistle he had whittled out of a small branch to his lips, and blew a sharp note. They jumped down, and he marshalled the troops.

--​

They snuck through the underbrush, everyone having foregone their armor and shield in favor of lighter garb. Leo was fifty meters ahead of them and out of sight, but Aris knew that he would be resplendent in lamellar and with raised shield, appearing to any onlooker as if he was carefully picking his way through the forest alone, well expecting an ambush at any moment.

They stealthily trailed him in a rough V-shape, hoping to trap the would-be ambushers in a vice of their own making. Once they reached the perimeter, they could move along it, picking off small groups of ambushers one by one, like a Golden Mouth Worm ceaselessly devouring hungry ghosts one after one. A far more effective strategy than merely staging a breakout.

A tinny clang sounded from ahead, and he signed to his followers, who passed on the sign to those further along the line. They briskly moved forward, finding Leo in a small clearing, locked into combat with four other disciples.

His motions were fluid, moving shield and spear in unison like a shieldtailed snake, parrying his opponents' spear strikes with his shield, trapping their spears in the nook of his arm or between his spear and shield, closing into close quarters before kicking them away and rounding on another enemy, his viper-like spear thrusts nicking and destabilizing. His goal was to not get wounded and keep them fighting, nothing else.

The ambushers catch wind of their presence quickly, but by then it is too late. They are surrounded, and are smashed to bits onto the anvil that is Leo.

Under Aris' direction, their group splits up to root out as many of the ambushers as they can, before they catch wind of their prey now having become the hunter and flee. Well, that and to thin the herd – there were no twenty slips, and the more he could avoid messy intra-group conflict for the prize, the better. They would rendezvous back at their tree when it was clear the enemy group had fled or when they had done half a revolution.

He thought on the legionnaires they had just taken out – hadn't they all used strips of their tunic as headbands?

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They had booked a great deal of success over the last twenty minutes, only suffering a single casualty. Disguised as members of the other group with improvised headbands, they hadn't even needed to move stealthily. Aris and Leo had painted their hair and face richly with mud so as to not be recognized. Even if the rest of his ten-man group could deceive the ambushers for a few seconds, the two of them would be recognized immediately under normal circumstances. The second group they had encountered had provided them with valuable intel – one of them had surrendered immediately and had been more than eager to talk at length about their group's tactics in return for a promise to let him go. A promise which Aris of course intended to keep – he was a man of honor. One turncoat legionnaire was hardly a threat.

Apparently they were led by one Achelous and he had amassed a truly massive group of some fifty legionnaires by promising one thing – to lay Aris low. Hah – he had known some in his cohort disliked him. He supposed it fitting that talentless vermin would envy him, but the sentiment must have been more widespread than he had assumed, if this Achelous could rouse so many to seek him out specifically. Of course, numbers beget numbers, and some were undoubtedly motivated by pragmatic considerations – but a disquietingly large amount all the same.

The tattler had also told them the location of their base and their signals – delivered through brass horn blasts. Apparently one in their group had an innate bloodline ability to shape metal with his bare hands.

This opened up interesting new possibilities. With most of Achelous' group encircling Aris' previous position, their headquarters would be ripe for assault. That Aris could deal with this Achelous himself was a nice bonus. But they would need to be quick. His thoughts briefly went out to the other ten person half of his initial group. Maybe they'd manage to meet up again before this game ended. Maybe not, in which case he hoped they would sell their hide dearly. War and sacrifice went together. Here, their sacrifice would further his cultivation and enable his glorious ascent in the Clan.

He bade the tattler to lead them to his headquarters. After some convincing, he was persuaded to act as a decoy, pretending to head back to their headquarters to regroup – Aris' group of eight following on his heels, ready to strike when they were distracted. It was to his benefit really, the more recruits Aris' group took out of the running, the likelier he would end up as one of the five survivors. Or he would get caught up in the crossfire and be eliminated. That too – would be an unfortunate sacrifice.

They closed on Achelous' supposed position after a brisk jog, their infiltrator moving towards the small gorge where the group had entrenched themselves.

Suddenly a horn blasts, once, twice. According to their informant, this was the regroup signal. Aris would have to be quick, soon the encircling troops would be filtering back to fall back to their headquarters.

Their informant walks down the slope as Aris, Leo and the other six encircle the lower position. As their decoy hails his group, Aris can vaguely hear a loud voice bark orders. Between the ferns and few meters below, he can make out the figure of the legionnaire to whom the voice belongs – a tall scion of gold, his skin just every so slightly dusted with a bronze, metallic sheen. The rest of the group is partially obscured behind a rock formation and a fallen tree at the bottom of the gorge. About eleven. This would be fun.

Aris brings his wooden whistle to his lips and readies his saber and shield. His heart pounds in his head with excitement, and he needs to focus to keep himself from breaking out in a manic grin. Leo is on the opposite side of the gorge, a near vertical rocky incline compared to the more gently sloping side Aris is crouching on.

A brief, shrill note, and Aris is on his feet, charging down the slope towards where the group has formed a semicircle around their decoy, peppering him with questions. Commendably, they turn around immediately, shields raised and ready for combat. Their decoy immediately breaks out in a dead run, which makes Achelous' group waver, casting minute glances at his fleeing form and the charging enemies. One breaks rank and flees after the traitor.

Then Aris is upon them. One of the recruits breaks formation to lunge forward, seeking to impale him in his chest before he reaches the bottom of the gorge, but he overextends dramatically. Time seems to slow, as the legionnaire to his attacker's right also breaks formation to try and flank him. Aris looks over the shoulder of his assailant, moving as if trapped in amber. The first of his group have made contact with the enemy formation, one already looking perilously close to being impaled by multiple spears. In the middle of the semicircle, he now sees Achelous clear as day, a rictus of restrained, tamed fury on his visage. As seconds seem to stretch into hours, the face of the enemy commander slowly turns towards him, purpose and excitement flashing through his eyes when he recognizes Aris, played out like a jade slip recording at one tenth speed.

The present catches up, and suddenly the world is again a riot of sound and movement. Aris intercepts the thrust, holding his shield over his head and ducking under the strike, the spear point scraping against the bronze, as Aris uses his downward momentum to leap inside his guard, ducking lower and angling his feet so he slides the last half meter of incline down, leaving gouges in the soil and dead plant matter. His saber lashes out from where it was held parallel to the ground, and attempts to shear right through his opponent's knee. The spiritual steel connects with the bone, and before the weapon is halfway through, his opponent dissolves in thousands of muted, orange sparks.

Just as he thought.

He plants his leg, and uses the momentum from his previous swing – almost entirely conserved by virtue of his opponent dissolving into thin air – to follow through with an upwards swing, catching the second charging recruit on his helmet, ringing it like a bell and throwing him back a good half meter. His adversary's dazed follow-up thrust is easily parried by Aris' shield, and he closes in as his opponent retreats, using his superior reach to prevent Aris from using his weapon to its deadly effect. One, twice, thrice his spear is parried, before Aris deflects the spear outwards to his right, appearing to put his own weapon out of effective reach for a counterstrike, but Aris leans into the movement, and dashes forward with his shield. The two bronze surfaces smack against each other, and as Achelous' follower takes a half step back to avoid being thrown off of balance, Aris whips forward with his head, and headbutts his adversary full in the nose, the bronze of his skin and skull crushing bone.

As his instinct tells him his back is no longer secure, he quickly follows the headbutt through with a swing aimed at his opponent's spearbearing arm, carving a deep gouge before he kicks him squarely in the stomach, his shield raised too high in fear. Using the kick, Aris lifts himself off, blocking the jian strike aimed at his back with his shield, crashing down with his saber held aloft, using his downward momentum to shear through his flanker's sword sheath, held above his head as a parring rod, and into his opponent's head. He dissolves into sparks immediately.

Aris turns to his previous opponent, now having recovered from the headbutt but still bleeding profusely, advancing cautiously. Aris finishes his turn, and winds up with one turn more, then releases his shield, the disk aimed as a projectile straight at his opponent's face. He has but a moment to look surprised, before the edge catches him clean above his mouth with the crack of bone, and he too is whisked away.

Three down. Now he can't help but grin.

He turns towards the rest of the battle, and sees Leo jumping down onto an unsuspecting soldier from his platform meters up, almost impaling him all the way through before the recruit disappears.

Aris meets Achelous' gaze, his twin sabers wreaking havoc among Aris' followers, having just eliminated one of his with a double guillotine strike, which would have easily beheaded him were it not for the magics enforcing the rules of the little exercise.

Aris breathes, and bellows – not loud enough to shake the earth, but loud enough to be heard by all of his.

"VICTORY IS NEAR!"

He charges his adversary, blood singing in his veins.

Aris' saber clashes with his opponent's two. Achelous is a talented swordsman, Aris considers as his every strike is parried, the sharp ripostes driving him back, step by step. Once or twice he even manages to penetrate Aris' guard entirely, his sabers nicking or grazing, but drawing no blood through his bronze skin.

He is good, but not nearly as good as seems to think he is.

Achelous drives forward in a classic guarded thrust, saber pointed towards Aris' neck, the weapon as an extension of his outstretched right arm, his other saber held across his chest like a shield. The logical thing for Aris to do would be to bat the saber and its sharp point away to where it can't do him harm. But that's not what he does – he lets the point and edge slip through his guard and rasp through his mud-caked tunic and over the bronze skin of his shoulder below, this time drawing a thin line of blood, and wildly stabs at Achelous' face.

An illogical move, which Achelous easily parries with his off-hand saber, but between the force of the blow and him having bled away some momentum by managing to hit Aris' shoulder, he takes half a step back to steady himself, his main-hand saber hovering limply in the air for just a moment while he completes the movement. Aris takes advantage of the minute opportunity and lashes out with a kick, striking the pommel and his adversary's hand, sending the weapon spinning into the air and away.

Aris follows through like a starved wolf, saber clashing with Achelous' single one held in his off-hand, not giving him a moment pause. He is rattled, and forced into an awkward fighting position, Aris not giving him a fraction pause to change hands.

Then Achelous makes a second mistake, force of habit moving his right hand forward as he parries with his left. In a flash, three of his fingers are gone, his face contorting in pain and rage.

His moves become wilder, more erratic, sloppier. A sideways backhand slash goes wide, and Aris hooks his saber behind the pommel, draws his opponent's arm close, and twists it by using both sides of his weapon as a lever. His elbow pops, and the saber falls from limp fingers. It speaks to his tenacity that he lashes out with an elbow strike with his other arm immediately after, but he too slow by a league, and Aris kicks him back, knocking the wind out of him.

His opponent is nearly doubled over, his visage red with fury, seeking to stem the bleeding from his lost fingers by pressing his hand against his chest. His left arm hangs limply to his side.

Around them, the fight has nearly concluded.

Aris clears the blood from his weapon with a swing, and plants his saber tip-first into the soil, hands folded casually over the pommel.

"Do you yield?"

His opponent regains his bearing, the adrenaline of battle slowly fading from his limbs, and reason returns to his bloodshot eyes. He stands up straight and casts a furtive look around and finds his faction defeated. Aris has four men left.

He nods, his expression one of a man who just suffered a bitter, but not unexpected defeat.

"Your chances aren't looking so good any more, Aristoteles. Five against the rest of my troops. But this bout you win. I yield." He bows his head, and he and his dropped weapons disappear.

Aris can't help but scratch his head – had they even properly met before?
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It didn't take very long for the first of Achelous' soldiers to return. In twos or threes they came back, Leo and Aris lying in wait, his other three followers playing the part of Achelous' men holding the fort. They crushed four groups of ambushers, losing two men to the last three-person group, before things went quiet.

The tattler from before made a surprise reappearance, having taken out the recruit fleeing after him. Seeing as they were down to three, he argued that they might as well let him join to round the group out. He didn't know that the other half of Aris' group might still be in the running, but temporary reinforcements wouldn't hurt in this situation – Aris strongly doubted he shared the same enmity for him as Achelous did. Besides, even though he wore a wickedly long yanmaodao on his belt, he doubted the lithe man was much of a threat, going by his clumsy movements and nervous, timid demeanor.

Still, the timing was suspicious, to appear the moment they were down to three and would not turn down an extra man. Coincidence or duplicity, for the moment it mattered not.

After his appearance, everything went very quiet. No more groups came. No faraway shouts or the echoing clang of metal.

He could try signaling his remaining soldiers by whistling, but anything they might hear, anyone else might too.

The light had also begun to change – still bright enough to see, but it had a reddish cast to it. That must mean evening was approaching.

After waiting half an hour more, they set out towards their original position. The four of them crept along the forest floor, the dusklight making their movements appear stark and loud.

Halfway towards the tree, something rustled ahead of them. Then suddenly, one of larger trees sank into the soil with a great, wooden moan. Someone fell down as the tree moved, crashing onto the loamy soil with a heavy thump. Their fellow recruit – so he guessed – had fashioned a cloak from his tunic, covered with leaves and twigs, his face and hair completely matted with dried mud. If Aris had to make a guess, he had been hoping to wait the exercise out. It seems the elder in charge had other thoughts however. Reassuring.

He protested loudly, but they made quick work of him. The moment he disappeared, a grey cross symbol appeared on the backs of their right hands – the character for ten. They were closer to victory than he thought.

As they continued to make their way to the tree, the symbol changed two more times. When they reached the clearing, the two arcs on their hands spelled out 'eight' clearly. What they found when they emerged from the underbrush, was a site of battle.

The impromptu palisade was trampled or broken in most places, and the platform had fallen to the ground. Small spats of dried blood were visible here and there.

Waiting for them, were two anxious followers of his. Spears brandished, they were crouched against the bark of the tree, alternately scanning their environment, and looking at the number displayed on their hand. The cautiously rose, intently peering at the four of your as you came closer. Their eyes lingered on the newest member of their four-person group.

As he came nearer, they gripped their weapons tighter. Right.

Two more out there. Six here. Eliminating them would give the four of them a near-sure chance at one of the prizes, and they had the superior numbers to make it happen. Solid reasoning, but he wasn't just thinking of the short term. He had to win, yes. But he couldn't be seen as a callous and dishonest commander, all too happy to spend the lives of his men for own gain. If he could avoid it, he would not shed the blood of those who had been loyal to him, even if they were talentless, sycophantic hacks and parasites.

He raised his hands.

"Be at ease. I do not intend to harm you, nor will I condone violence against you. We will seek out the two last soldiers, and if we are still six, we will duel for the prize."

They lowered their weapons, and the four of them approached them. The timid traitor on his left, Leo to his right, the final survivor of their ten-man party to Leo's right.

"Now, tell me first what happened he-"

Surprisingly, he never saw the man move. In the space of heartbeat, their turncoat had his long yanmaodao out, and nothing remained of the leftmost of the two survivors but a few rapidly-dwindling sparks. His expression was stone cold, not a ripple crossing his features. Not a trace of the timid man from just seconds before remained.

The fourth member of their party to Leo's right drew his saber. Aris' follower whose companion was just struck down leapt to the obvious – but wrong – conclusion and lashed out in panic with his spear, catching his fellow soldier with the brandished saber in the throat. He was gone the moment after.

The turncoat adjusted the hold on his weapon. Aris had his saber out in a flash, aimed at the turncoat's neck. Leo moved around Aris, to strike at the turncoat's back. The sole survivor turns around, eyes darting around wildly, bringing his spear to bear against the to him unknown assailant.

The man who had surrendered immediately and ran away from violence – the man who Aris had assumed was a coward – blurred again, the wicked curved weapon shearing through the final survivors neck. Aris' saber was a breath away from the traitor's neck. Leo's spear would impale his heart in a mere moment.

Then everything flashes white, and they are on the training field again.

His saber completes the movement, sweeping downwards, the blade quivering with the force of the blow. Their cohort stands at attention behind them. Leo is to his right, the tattler to his left. The two other winners stand further to the left. His three followers who just now suffered life-threatening injuries are off to the side. Looking dazed but none the worse for the wear.

The wolf in sheep's clothing that was the nervous legionnaire flourishes his long blade, no trace of blood to be seen, and sheathes it with practiced ease. When he looks at Aris, his face is the very image of timid, mildly confused benevolence. He cast a friendly smile Aris' way, eyes near closed. Black hair, green eyes. No trace of bronze anywhere.

The elder stands before them, arms folded behind his back.

"Behold. Leo, Aristoteles, Diokles, Philo and Sun. The five winners of this trial. Though one could argue that those who learned a valuable lesson about the nature of war are the real winners."

The elder winks at no one in particular – though Aris swore that for the briefest of moments, the mysterious elder looked at and through him – and suddenly is gone. The five winners are left holding a jade slip.

Diokles – now that he knows the traitor's name – turns around towards the rest of the cohort, and manages to shrug confusedly at someone, a goofy smile playing across his features.

Aris had indeed learned a lesson here. He thumbed the smooth piece of jade in his hands.

He knew with ironclad certainty that this Diokles would grow to either become one of the Clan's greatest assets, or a mortal threat to its survival. If it was the former, Aris would find a way to bind him to himself. If it was the latter, he would destroy him.

His duty demanded nothing less of him.


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(A/N Well, this one got a bit out of hand. I wanted to paint an image of who Aris is and introduce two characters that will probably be recurring in his story (if it isn't cut short prematurely!). This is also my take on the crossbreed between crazy xianxia wushu bullshit and the organised military drilling that probably constitutes the Clan's training regimen, running with Alectai's Gold Standard but adding my own interpretation. Takes place during the previous turn, prior to the good seed update.)
@occipitallobe I'll take a cultivation bonus for next turn.
 
I feel like this is a jab at the fact my seed lives like a standard bachelor and is only just now learning how to cook.

I will admit, the story of Magnus and the Soup Sect might have inspired that little bit. My first thought was that she would get a job waiting tables, but given Mins temperament I doubt that would have worked long term. Between her humble background and specialised skills though, it just kind of made sense to me that she would make a pretty mean cook!
 
I will admit, the story of Magnus and the Soup Sect might have inspired that little bit. My first thought was that she would get a job waiting tables, but given Mins temperament I doubt that would have worked long term. Between her humble background and specialised skills though, it just kind of made sense to me that she would make a pretty mean cook!
That makes a lot of sense for her. My current plan is that when Magnus starts actually cooking, he will do Akane Tendo proud. BTW, was your seed planning to go to 10th stage or are you going straight to foundation?
 


This was what came to mine when i imagine how a Cultivation Bonus for Fierce Fang will appear as! Cigars for that huge boost! :D

Any chance of him picking up crossbows to go full western ? 🤭
Probably not since as a body cultivator Fang is more of a punch harder guy than a dual wielding crossbow-slinger sadly. He's more likely to use a really big bow for a ranges weapon
 
Good Seed to Read 2 - The Ninth Prince
I decided to drag the cliffhanger a little more and add another Good Seed to Read! Update will still be coming out today, of course.

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This was tough. I feel like Rina Callista was the obvious first choice - in part because her early scenes really establish much of the Clan's outlying areas, its philosophy, and a great opening scene to help new Good Seeds write their entrances to the Clan.

When I decided to pick a second one, there were nine I felt were all worth choosing. Among them are some great stories, great characters, and to be honest, if you asked me which was the best choice for the second recommendation, I wouldn't know.

So I decided to use the long-established xianxia tradition of nepotism and talk about my own personal favourite character. I've always had an immensely soft spot for the more absurd heroes - kind of stupid, a little ridiculous, but with immense goodwill. So:

The Ninth Prince. With around 15k words of omake and background, you're committing to a pretty decent read - in both senses of the word. He's a little absurd, but man does he have some cool adventures. The first omake is funny, the second omake is the Ninth Prince playing out his immense Fate roll on Turn 2, and the third omake has actually caused me to realise my fiancee has never seen the Indiana Jones trilogy - we're watching Raiders of the Lost Ark this weekend.

He's not stupid as such, but he's headstrong and silly. Still, he's within the bounds of 'trying to do a good thing and succeeding' - he's still a fun xianxia character with some drama around him, but he's also incredibly flamboyant and funny.

Give him a read, you won't regret it.

"Also, his mysterious background will become far more relevant on Turn 5, so there's that.
 
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I decided to drag the cliffhanger a little more and add another Good Seed to Read! Update will still be coming out today, of course.

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This was tough. I feel like Rina Callista was the obvious first choice - in part because her early scenes really establish much of the Clan's outlying areas, its philosophy, and a great opening scene to help new Good Seeds write their entrances to the Clan.

When I decided to pick a second one, there were nine I felt were all worth choosing. Among them are some great stories, great characters, and to be honest, if you asked me which was the best choice for the second recommendation, I wouldn't know.

So I decided to use the long-established xianxia tradition of nepotism and talk about my own personal favourite character. I've always had an immensely soft spot for the more absurd heroes - kind of stupid, a little ridiculous, but with immense goodwill. So:

The Ninth Prince. With around 15k words of omake and background, you're committing to a pretty decent read - in both senses of the word. He's a little absurd, but man does he have some cool adventures. The first omake is funny, the second omake is the Ninth Prince playing out his immense Fate roll on Turn 2, and the third omake has actually caused me to realise my fiancee has never seen the Indiana Jones trilogy - we're watching Raiders of the Lost Ark this weekend.

He's not stupid as such, but he's headstrong and silly. Still, he's within the bounds of 'trying to do a good thing and succeeding' - he's still a fun xianxia character with some drama around him, but he's also incredibly flamboyant and funny.

Give him a read, you won't regret it.

"Also, his mysterious background will become far more relevant on Turn 5, so there's that.
Holy crap man
Thank you so much
You have no idea how much I needed that today
 
Wei Feng 3 - Days in the life
@occipitallobe Another omake for the omake throne.

AN: 3744 words. I think this may be the longest single omake I've ever written.

This one fought me all the way. I honestly wasn't sure whether to split it into two as in some ways it's almost a series of vignettes, but in the end I feel that the last part ties into the first just enough to justify making it a single story.

Any feedback people offer would be highly appreciated.

Wei Feng: Days in the life

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Wei Feng was the subject of no small amount of mockery by his peers. 40 years old and merely in the second heaven stage. Compared to someone like Amaranth Castellanos, who had ascended to the 9th heaven stage in a mere 20 years he was utterly without talent, which here they called receptiveness.

He knew that some members of the Golden Demon clan resented him. He was an outsider. He had come from a treasured ally, but he was still not of the clan. It was natural he would be viewed with suspicion. That the clan paid him well with resources, yet he had advanced so little had turned suspicion into outright dislike amongst some.

There were days when Wei Feng shared their dislike of himself. To be 40 years old and merely of the second heaven stage was a poor showing.

And yet, Wei Feng found it hard to truly regret. He had spent his years well. With the Golden Demons focused on raiding the blood cannibals he had joined the junior raiding parties.

Some would say his contributions had been minor; and it was true that no great songs would be sung of his deeds. To a nascent soul, who might annihilate a city of 50,000 out of sheer petulance, his deeds would be insignificant indeed.

But he had still saved lives. He had killed raiders and bandits. He had found villages that might be fed upon by some young and murderous cannibal and convinced them to move to safety. He had begged, he had cajoled and sometimes even bribed them. But he had gotten people out.

He had once run so low on items to bribe these foolish mortals with that he had literally given them the finely made clothes off his back. The look of hunger the battle blood cannibal disciple that had ambushed him that evening had nearly had him swear himself into the priesthood. That and the comments Hunger for sustenance and hunger for other things should not be mixed like that. The filed teeth hadn't helped either.

So, despite the disappointment his cultivation had turned out to be so far, Wei Feng tried to be content. And when that failed, he went out again. Seeking something to distract him. Sometimes it was seeking out the sparring fields. Sometimes it was helping a mortal village raise a new house. Sometimes it was seeking out Blood Cannibals to destroy.

Wei Feng had failed to find contentment quite often over the years and was glad for it.

Yet still the persistent issue nagged at him. Could he not do more, be more, if only his cultivation improved? But what of all those that he could already help that would go unaided as he withdrew into seclusion for months or year on end? At what point does the chance of saving more lives later eclipse the value of saving more lives now?
The paradox nagged at him.

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He poured over the notes on the Blood boiler cauldron art.

At its base form, the art was simply a body tempering cultivation method. All cultivators were naturally stronger, faster, and tougher than their mortal counterparts. Indeed, much of the purpose of the Qi condensation stage was to improve the body, purifying it to be a more capable vessel to channel the Qi of heaven and earth. Body cultivators took this a step beyond. Skin more durable than steel, bones near impossible to break, fists that could break swords. They honed and refined their bodies until their flesh was weapon every bit the equal or superior to the talismanic weapons wielded by other cultivators.

The blood boiler cauldron art was originally derived from the widely known principle that heating something can purify. From steam baths to the simple kettle, this truth is known across the world. However, it takes an unusual mind to take this principal to the length of immersing oneself in boiling liquid. After all, this is widely known as a particularly unpleasant method of execution.

The essential, righteous version of this method began with special formations that were inscribed on the cauldron to help guide the Qi into the cultivator's body in specific patterns. For Qi condensation cultivators, these formations are essential. Their most crucial function is to keep the cultivator alive and uncrippled. Almost no beginning Qi Condensation cultivator possesses the innate control of Qi to precisely guide it to stimulate and reinforce the body in the correct ways.

Certainly, no early Qi condensation cultivator could do so whilst enduring the horrific pain of being boiled alive.

The art's inventor had been of the firm opinion that pain and suffering were excellent teaching assistants.

As the art progressed, simple water quickly became insufficient to truly temper the body. Different base liquids and cauldron constructions were used. Reagents and beast cores were added to temper the body even further by focusing and intensifying Qi, passing it through the body to pressure out impurities, layering and purifying as the body was pushed towards an ideal.

Yet the Blood boiler cauldron art was no longer a righteous art. It had been stolen, reviewed, dissected, and rebuilt from the very ground by demonic cultivators of immense cunning. Then it had been stolen, reviewed, dissected, and rebuilt from the ground up by more depraved and equally cunning demonic cultivators.

The blood and bones of cultivators abounded with concentrated qi, already refined for the use of humans. A similar quantity would be many times as potent for a human as beast core. The body acted as a natural attractor of and filter to qi from the atmosphere. This could be used to improve the quantity and quality of the qi being used to refine the cultivator's body. In the desert, where atmospheric qi was thin, it allowed a great increase in the efficiency of cultivation, and a reduced need for spirt stones.

One of the most difficult parts for Wei Feng had been forcing himself not to merely to read past the ghastly musings of Boiling Village eater but understand and consider them, take them apart and re-examine them for any principle that might be applied to less odious methods of advancement than murdering helpless mortals. It was hard, sickening work yet he could not abandon it, for Wei Feng had found a few priceless insights buried in the horror.

One of the monster's earliest 'improvements' had essentially disabled the formation measures that kept the cultivator alive. The remains of the victims subjected to this gruesome death would have undergone many more changes than a living being could bear in such a short period, forming more useful materials for the Demonic cultivator's advancement.

Between bouts of vomiting and hard scrubbed baths to drive away the feelings of revulsion, Wei Feng had gradually figured out a method to slowly reduce the safety measures inherent in the base method, allowing each session to refine his body to a greater extent. At the cost of greater pain.

Wei Feng had not balked at the thought of greater pain at first. Perhaps he even welcomed it, seeing it as a way to help abrogate the sin of not burning the monstrous notes forever.

Such thoughts had not survived their first session of his refined method.

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He had, with bitter experience, set up the cauldron near a larger pool of water. He begun in the dead of night, after the heat of the desert sun had long faded, so the pool nearby might soothe his aching burns.

He wore a strange metal device on his face. It looked something like an open metal cage. Its morbid function to keep his jaw closed no matter what, for he did not trust his willpower to avoid screaming.

Holding his small qi in a rigid pattern which would allow him to slip into the liquid without risking it splashing and wasting the precious liquid, he leapt into the cauldron.

He held himself as his skin began to blister, before healing itself again. As white-hot agony raced through him as his nerves tried to shrivel and die. Held in his screams by his own will as the qi flooding his body nourished his nerves and forced them to continue their function.

He took a deep breath in through his nose. Then he dunked his head beneath the frothing water.
He wanted to scream, but he couldn't. His mouth is wired shut.

He wanted to scream, he wanted to scream, hewantedtoscream hewantedtoscream hewantedtoscream hewantedtoscream hewantedtoscream toscream toscream screamscreamscream.

Air blasts from his nose in silent attempts to scream as he tumbles, spinning in weightless agony beneath the water. A foot touches something solid and he pushes.

He erupts into air.

He rolls.

He plunges into blessed cold. He does not emerge for a very long time.

He had lasted less than 10 seconds.

Worse, he knows that eventually he will have to open his mouth under the water. Eventually he will have to open his eyes.

It would be worth it eventually. It would be worth it eventually. It had to be worth it eventually, right?

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He didn't know the name of this place. It was just another village, in a long line of others he had visited.

The village was broken. Even from a distance it was obvious that things were wrong. Damaged and empty buildings with the scent of blood on the air.
Wei Feng allowed the horror he felt to show on his face. No matter how many times he saw it, the horror never truly dulled. It was important not to let himself become numb to it.

The village was not yet a slaughterhouse, but it soon would be.

Several buildings bore the tell-tale marks of spells. Doors, windows, and walls bore the marks of too durable fists or weapons. Many of the village's inhabitants had clearly not gone quietly, and the cultivators had not been shy about making their own entrances to the homes of holdouts.

Here and there were bloodstains of a size to indicate that the person who had made them was likely dead.

But there were no corpses. Not here. Blood Cannibals didn't like to be wasteful. The attack had clearly begun some time ago. They might not fear mortals, but it would still take time for low cultivators to corral them. He didn't bother considering that this might be the work of greater cultivators. Here and there were signs of failed resistance. That mortals could even attempt to resist spoke for itself.

Still, something was off. Too many houses lay broken entirely. A few fires looked more recent than others. A fight?

He shook his head. It didn't matter. He needed to find whoever remained. The village square was the most likely place. He reached into his bag and pulled out his soul filling rasp.

It was a great treasure given to him by the Golden Demon clan as thanks for his to efforts aid the mortal residents of the lands. With it he could file away at the outward signs of his cultivation, to seem merely a mortal to any qi condensation practitioner.

Useful for retreating or for hiding in plain sight. Few cultivators considered mortals threats. That could give him an advantage against the raiders. If he could surprise them, he was confident that he might kill even a third heaven stage cultivator.

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Wei Feng crept forwards towards the square. One of the few advantages of being so low in the Qi condensation realm was that he did not have to slow his pace much to appear mortal. He was much stronger than a regular human, but not that much faster as of yet.

The scent of roasted flesh met his nose. Human. All too familiar to him from his experiences boiling himself in the blood cauldron.

Ahead of him he heard sobbing and crying. The loud wailing of children. But not the screams he was dreading and expecting. It was oddly quiet ahead. Worrying. How many had already been killed?

The square was littered with corpses. Many of them lay in pieces from where the blood cannibals had begun their feast. Part of the square was fenced off by formation flags, entrapping the remaining villagers. There were more of them still alive and whole than he had expected. Had he been wrong, and the attack was more recent than he thought?

In the centre of the square a great fire roared. Apparently, the cannibals did not like their food raw. Beside it a figure in the robes of the Blood Cannibal sect sat with their back to him. Wei Feng felt a spike of terror run through him.

Qi Condensation, fourth heaven stage!

He could run. Of course, he could run. With the rasp's magic he could crawl away with no-one the wiser.

All he would have to do was leave these people to die. Could he really do that?

But could he win?

Run, or fight? Fight, or run?

Wei Feng crept a little closer, using the remain wall of a mostly destroyed house for cover. Could he get close enough? He couldn't kill a fourth heaven stage cultivator outright. But if he could get close, perhaps he could cripple them badly enough to tip the fight in his favour.

The wall shifted abruptly, and Wei Feng flattened himself against it, freezing in place. Part of the top of the wall fell in. He waited, breathing shallowly. 'Do not look' he told himself. Peeking out of cover too early would get him caught. Wait. Have patience he counselled himself.

Finally, he dared to turn his head. There were the remains of a window next to him. He peeked through it. The cannibal hadn't moved. But he saw something else. In the corner of the collapsing house, there was another corpse. It was dressed in the robes of the Blood Cannibal sect. Had they turned on each other?

He looked again at the cannibal by the fire, reaching out with his meagre qi senses, concealed by the rasp within his robes. Did the qi feel unstable? Yes. A recent breakthrough?

He constructed a scenario in his head. The cannibals joined to raid the village. They succeeded and began their macabre harvest. One begins to breakthrough right there in the village. Sensing weakness, or perhaps fearing their newfound strength, the other (or others) turned on them. The newly risen cultivator had won, but at a cost. Their breakthrough was still unstable.

He had to take this chance, before they could stabilise themselves.

Slowly, slowly he wormed his way around the fallen house. He inched towards his target, low to the ground. He didn't dare move faster. A third or fourth heaven stage cultivator was almost twice as fast as him. If they reacted before he was in range, he would be done for.

40 meters. 30.

'Was that dark patch on their robes blood? Could they already be injured?' he thought.

20 meters.

'Right arm injury. Not crippling, not enough to win.' It was the wrong area to try and make it worse with his first attack. He needed to cripple them enough to prevent them bring their advantages to bear.

15.

He slipped his belt knife into his hand. It would be utterly useless against the cultivator's skin, but it was exactly the kind of thing an incredibly foolish mortal in his position might do. If he were spotted the addition to his disguise might buy him precious seconds. Even if he were detected, a truly arrogant cultivator might allow a mortal to try and fail to injure them to enjoy their despair.

10 meters.

He began to marshal his focus to strike. His technique had to be perfect. Where should he strike? The Dantian would be ideal. Rob them of their qi in a single strike.

No, he decided. It was too unreliable. He was not certain of his ability to strike it with it's only semi physical nature.

The thigh, he decided. A major artery runs through the thigh and it will cripple their mobility. Cultivators may be able to fight longer and with less blood than mortals, but at Qi condensation they could still die of blood loss.

5 meters.

He felt the strength of the water Qi. Many may think of water as still and placid, but Wei Feng knew the power and raging thunder of the rapids. The roar of the waves crashing down. The shock of the flood.

He readied himself for the attack. To strike with the power of a roar of a great Flood Dragon.

His outstretched hand forms a knife. Skin and bone, already like iron, shoot forward as if propelled by the weight of a great flood.

It meets a thigh as strong as an aged tree branch. Alone, his fingers would fail to find purchase, leaving a flesh wound at best. But the surging power of the flood guides and propels him. The Dragon's roar bites sharp and deeply. The cannibal, truly aware now tries to twist away from the blow. He fails, his own momentum tearing the wound wider even as Wei Feng dodges backward in swift retreat, dropping his useless knife to the ground.

Wei Feng has succeeded in striking a major blow. Perhaps even a fatal one. But first, he must live long enough to enjoy it.

His opponents snatches up a sword from the ground beside him. Long and so serrated that its edge would be near useless if it were used by mortal humans. The cannibal is not mortal.

He swings; far faster than a human, but Wei Feng is already past his range. He tries to surge back forward, keeping his opponent on the ground and is nearly disembowelled by a sudden reverse swing.

Too used to fighting cultivators of his own level, he had not thought that his opponent could so easily reverse the momentum of his sword.

Wei Feng's abrupt stop has kept his stomach intact, but his momentum is not fully halted. Even as he leans his torso back his feet still slide forwards across the ground. If he tries to retreat again so soon he will fall, or worse he will have to jump and leave himself completely vulnerable in the air.

Instead he barrels forwards, bending his torso forward. The sword comes whipping round again but this time he is ready. Gathering water qi again in fist and arm he punches upwards from underneath where he hopes the blade will be, aiming to hit the flat of the blade and direct the strike upwards and over his head, leaving the cannibal vulnerable.

It costs him. His opponent must see his ploy and turns the blade. Qi forged Metal meets qi hardened flesh and flesh gives first. The sword hits bone, but then the Flood Dragons' roar completes. The sword flies upward, taking with it a chunk of flesh but Wei Feng's other hand is free and the cannibal is wide open.

And suddenly his target is flying away from him. Wei Feng's hand catching only boot leather. He'd gotten his good leg under him and kicked off the ground.

The cannibal lands heavily, crashing through the wall of one of the more intact buildings on the edge of the square. Wei Feng tumbles and rolls back to his feet, bleeding off his own momentum and retreating.

He dares not approach again. Now that his opponent has gotten his legs under him the speed advantage of a fourth heaven stage cultivator will tell in close combat.
It is a stalemate. Wei Feng cannot retreat too far, lest he allow his opponent an opening to treat his wounds. One hand is injured, but with only one good leg the cannibal will not easily be able to close with Wei Feng. It is a stalemate that favours Wei Feng.

He sees the realisation dawn in his opponent's eyes too, and smiles. He smiles as he feels his opponent's cultivation waver, their wounds and situation telling against their not yet stabilised 4th stage breakthrough. He smiles until he feels something clamp around his foot.

His eyes flicker down. An arm disconnected from its former owner has grabbed onto him. His opponent hadn't lost control of their cultivation, they'd been casting a spell! They could control corpses. Corpses and corpse parts that littered the ground around him.

By the time he looks up he is almost too late to see his opponent's near silent charge. He kicks forward, dislodging the hand around his ankle and flinging it headlong into his opponent's face.

In the modicum of time it buys him he retreats desperately retreats, dodging grasping hands and dismembered body parts and flinging those he cannot avoid at his opponent.

Hands grasp at his robes. A corpse suddenly sticks out a leg to try and trip him up.

For minutes this macabre game of cat and mouse continues. But presently, Wei Feng begins to notice that his opponent's charges are slowing.

Dodge, hop, RUN, dodge, fling. Again, and again.

His opponent is panting now, trails of blood following him around the square.

Again, and again and again until finally, finally his opponent collapses. Their wavering qi gutters out.

Wei Feng stands, stock still and vigilant for almost 10 minutes before he dares to approach, wary of a trap.

There is none. His opponent is dead. He almost collapses out of relief.

Something releases in him. A tension untwist in him and he begins to laugh. Great laughing sobs pass his throat a relief and joy and terror.

He had survived! He had taken on a cultivator two stages above himself had survived. He felt elated and giddy as he made his way over to free the remain villagers from their prison.

Then a blackness of mood descends on him, as he looks over at his opponent's corpse. How old had that cannibal been to have reached the fourth heaven stage? The blood path was faster it was true, but how far behind was he? How much could he really do languishing in the mere second heaven stage of Qi condensation.
How many thousands of Blood Cannibals or Devil Bees were there in the upper reaches of the Qi condensation realm alone? How much of a difference could he make without more strength?

He would grow stronger. If he wanted to make a real difference; he had to.

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Year 41 Continued - Blood Clone
You expected bad rolls...

The sword ran Old Cannibal through.

Corpse Gulper began to laugh, a terrible, grating sound.

As he did so, Old Cannibal began to laugh too, a deep, throaty chuckle.

Manuel quickly pulled a supreme-grade Spirit Stone from his aperture, drawing the Qi out within moments. A drastic waste in normal times, losing over half the precious Qi stored within. As of now, though, it allowed him to recover most of his Qi, bringing him back to fighting strength.

He drew a quick seal on a piece of paper - a psuedo-array, really, and pushed most of the Qi into it, and tossed it idly aside. He had seen enough to know how this was going to end.

As he finished, Old Cannibal spoke two words, and exploded into a spray of blood.

"Blood Clone."

Manuel chuckled, his chest aching as he did so. Taking that blow had been terribly unwise. He had thought he could take it, and of course his life-saving treasures would have teleported him out was he about to die, but he hadn't expected to be knocked unconscious.

Still, there was no doubt in his mind now that Corpse Gulper had a helper. Likely a Core Formation elder or three who had been sneaking around, setting things up for him. Maybe even an Early Nascent Soul. The question was, of course, Devil Bee or Saber Palace? It was a Divine Saber technique fused with Blood Path - that made him think the former, but Righteous Sects researched these things all the time, in the guise of 'understanding their enemy'.

He wasn't sure who was maneuvering his enemy, and that was all the more worrying. It had been worth springing the trap - the risk had yielded much valuable information.

He spoke.

"Child Corpse Gulper. One hundred and seventy-six years old. Talent considered exceptional, made moreso by the speed and cruelty of Blood Path."

The other man looked down at him in a fury, swiping his massive blade at him, screaming incoherently.

As the blade swung down, the seal he had written earlier exploded with a fury. A massive explosion, detonating in the air and leaving a massive fireball, with smoke in the shape of a mushroom going up, and the mountain cracked in half below. The mountain trembled, and became an avalanche, one-half of the massive stone monolith crumbling and falling, the other half left with a sheer cut, as though someone had taken the sharpest knife one could imagine and simply sliced the unfortunate mountain in half. The remaining face was glassy and reflective, the cut so precise as to create a mirror. He doubted the mirror-face would last more than a few centuries, but wondered what new name the peak would take on in that time.

Suddenly, the massive blade became slower. One didn't use two killing blows empowered to be able to defeat enemies in the same realm without spending a lot of Qi, and without a stable array holding your entire strategy together... well, the blade wouldn't shatter and disappear, but he didn't need to break the sword. Just make it slow and easy to dodge.

Manuel flew idly out of the way. Corpse Gulper had spent a lot, and the fight was more-or-less decided.

"You're very young. Even for Blood Path, that is admirable progress. Do you know why you lost?"

The other man spat blood at him, the gobbet curdling and squirming into a monster of teeth and eyes in midair. Manuel called forth a flame of Bronze, a fire for forging. It leapt out and cooked the unfortunate abomination, the teeth chattering miserably as it fell from the air.

"Let me tell you. Of course, the first reason is simply resources. Even had you managed to win here, at best you would've taken one of my lifesaving treasures. Or one of Old Cannibals. Or even both. But could you replicate such a feat again and again? Of course not."

This time the blade swung slower, but the tip exploded, smaller swords of blood chasing him.

Manuel leapt further into the air, running from them as they homed in, speaking all the while.

"A young man such as you being used... if you weren't a Blood Path criminal I'd have pity for you. But whoever used you just intended you to drain our resources, perhaps wound us. That tells me they intend to act fairly soon. Do you want to tell me who it was?"

Corpse Gulper muttered a few words, and Manuel felt the power of a Blood Curse descending on his entire bloodline - a Curse that could not harm him, but kill his entire family for nine generations.

He shook his head wearily. As if that was the first time someone had tried that on him. He felt the same Flame of Bronze that was in his hand and sent it into his own bloodstream, igniting the blood within. His Soul could sustain him easily enough - the body was a mere vessel for the soul, and the damage it could sustain and survive was immense. The fire seared his own blood, boiling it away, streams of bronze flowing out his nose and being spat out his mouth as the Curse desperately scraped and scratched at his blood, trying to find purchase. To no avail.

Spitting out the last of his blood, the Curse failed. He quickly pulled a Blood-Replenishing Pill from his aperture, and ate it, feeling his blood begin to rejuvenate.

"Perhaps not. But the truth was, the game was never yours to win. Young men see power and grasp for it greedily, not understanding the consequences. Do you think Old Cannibal here has lived so long through endless grasping? The stairway to immortality grows slipperier with every step, and as you get higher, you have so far to fall."

Old Cannibal, he presumed, was recovering from the use of his Blood Clone. Buying time helped, not that it was crucial. He could easily fight Corpse Gulper, but to do so properly meant far more expenditure of Qi. He hadn't agreed to taking on such costs, so he was delaying. Let Old Cannibal recover and come bear his share of the fight.

Corpse Gulper's sword shrank, and became a saber of normal size. In a tenth of a breath he was on Manuel, the enhanced saber striking at him.

Manuel deflected it, each time using his knife to parry it a little, to avoid the blows just so.

"You lured us into using your trump cards. But only a fool uses trump cards before they can use them to win, unless they have no other choice. So whoever led you here, led you here to die. To make some small gains against us for your life. That life is now forfeit, of course."

Manuel smirked openly.

"Still. Tell me who it was, and I may still leave you with an intact corpse."

Child Corpse Gulper screamed in rage, throwing strike after strike after strike at him, each one missing only just, the deflected forces flattening nearby trees and shattering nearby boulders. Massive bloody scars were rent in the ground, each hundreds of metres deep.

Manuel reached into his aperture, and pulled out a torch. It was a large bronze torch, with three faces - carved with a dragon, a phoenix, and a bear.

"Sun Diaxiang, let's finish this."

He lit the torch with a puff of Qi. The Torch took one-hundred years to be relit, but that was no matter. It wouldn't be of much use if he fought the Devil Bees, and Old Cannibal couldn't face him before that time. More importantly, it was only really strong in environments like the Blood Battlefield, needing to be able to connect to Blood Qi to be able to properly take effect. There was every chance this would fool Old Cannibal into thinking he was stronger than he truly was, and Old Cannibal was the real enemy here.

"Blood-Burning Torch."

Flames rippled out from the Torch, and the Blood Battlefield began to vanish, the flames consuming the blood. They ran up Corpse Gulper's saber, which he cursed at and discarded, letting it fall to the ground. He'd never learned to counter Blood-Consuming Flames? Manuel sniffed. Youngsters these days lacked a proper work ethic. His disciples would be working twice as hard as soon as he got back. He wouldn't countenance this kind of incompetence from a Golden Devil.

As he did, Old Cannibal flew into the sky, holding a bow fifty times his height, seemingly made out of hundreds of human heads - still screaming, Manuel noted with displeasure. The string appeared to be the ropy intestines of those very same heads, and when he pulled it back they screamed all the more.

"Call me Old Cannibal, you insolent-"

Manuel smirked at him as well.

"Diaxiang, aren't we friends? We're helping to put down this precocious junior of yours, after all."

Old Cannibal fired several arrows of fletched bone, Corpse Gulper dodging them easily.

"Fuck off, you pile of miserable feces. Once he's dead, and your time is up I'm coming for you next."

Manuel watched and waited, as Corpse Gulper dodged arrow after arrow. He was weaker now, falling back to an Early Nascent Soul level of strength. He'd spent too much, too quickly, and unlike the two old monsters he didn't have an Immortal Aperture full of resources to be pulled out to extend fights indefinitely.

He reached into his own aperture, and fingered the Bone Hacking Cleaver.

"Oh, Xiang'er, don't be like that! You even brought your favorite bow to show off to me! How are we not the very best of friends?"

By the Will of Bronze, he had missed this. He had made few enough jokes, done few enough pranks in the years since Alexios had died. How could one be the serious, invincible Nascent Soul as well as the Manuel who loved to prank Alexios along with Kleisthenes, keeping the Elder well-grounded as he made horrifying decision after horrifying decision? He didn't know how to reconcile the two in truth, and the first was far more important than the second.

In this moment, though, he was satisfying a part of himself he hadn't let free for decades. Ironic that it was with a deadly enemy instead of a good friend, but...

"You know, I'm glad your old Elder died! I wish I'd been there to kill him myself!", Old Cannibal yelled.

Corpse Gulper was if anything looking confused, unsure why he was suddenly not the centre of attention. As he dodged another flight of arrows, Manuel flared his Qi and struck.

The Bone Hacking Cleaver hit Corpse Gulper's leg.

The same leg he'd previously spent so much to regrow.

Corpse Gulper howled, and screamed, and fell out of the sky, Qi bleeding everywhere.

Manuel chuckled.

"So rude, Xiang'er. I cut you a nice leg of pork for your birthday celebration and you call me names? Truly, you are my least filial son."

Old Cannibal ignored him, having decided he'd lost the war of words. The two descended down, and Old Cannibal fired a few more arrows. Manuel pulled out a net, and threw it at Corpse Gulper. The Qi-Restraining Net would only give him half a breath before a Nascent Soul self-detonated, but that would be enough to kill him.

Corpse Gulper was miserably trying to fly away, but they caught him easily. Manuel raised the Cleaver again, and with a quick snicker-snack cut off Corpse Gulper's head.

In the end, how very anti-climactic.

"He really should have told me, Xiang'er. Look at his poor corpse, cut into pieces."

Old Cannibal looked down at him.

"Our agreement is concluded. I'll see you in a century, Konstantinos. We'll see who is the father and who is the son then."

...but it was me, good rolls!
 
"Child Corpse Gulper. One hundred and seventy-six years old. Talent considered exceptional, made moreso by the speed and cruelty of Blood Path."
Holy shit. I knew the Blood Path was quick, but this is just obscene. Mid-Nascent Soul at just 176 years? Even the Heaven-Defying Patriarch who would be a talent so great that he'd be unique in the whole region could only reach this at 300.

Though, I'm fairly certain Child Corpse Gulper's base talent, while high, isn't that absurd.

All that being said, the route to power on the bodies of countless innocents most certainly isn't palatable at all for obvious reasons. I'm glad that our Sect uses tools like these against actual enemies, not indiscriminately.
"So rude, Xiang'er. I cut you a nice leg of pork for your birthday celebration and you call me names? Truly, you are my least filial son."
Manuel is just the best.
Manuel raised the Cleaver again, and with a quick snicker-snack cut off Corpse Gulper's head.
Blatant Jabberwocky reference. You think I'd miss that? :V
 
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Holy shit. I knew the Blood Path was quick, but this is just obscene. Mid-Nascent Soul at just 176 years? Even the Heaven-Defying Patriarch who would be a talent so great that he'd be unique in the whole region could only reach this at 300.

Though, I'm fairly certain Child Corpse Gulper's base talent, while high, isn't that absurd.

All that being said, the route to power on the bodies of countless innocents most certainly isn't palatable at all for obvious reasons. I'm glad that our Sect uses tools like these against actual enemies, not indiscriminately.

Manuel is just the best.

He doesn't really feel like he can cut loose and be a dick to either his Clan, or people he needs to negotiate with. This is his first chance in forty, fifty years to just enjoy pissing people off.

Blatant Jabberwocky reference. You think I'd miss that? :V

Such a frabjous day deserves such a reference!

Child Corpse Gulper was in fact a Heaven-Defying Talent. If he wasn't very, very stupid about it he could have been the greatest power in the region once Old Cannibal died. Part of the problem with growing so quickly of course is that it tends to make you arrogant and greedy. Old monsters who have fought for every scrap of power they have tend to be far more dangerous because they're smart about how they use it.

As an aside, the map of Clan territory has been updated. The two new regions won't become part of the Clan's Core regions on the map until they're repopulated and integrated, a process that will take some time.

The former post was an exercise in the xianxia typical 'protagonist faces horrible trials in one chapter, only to overcome them easily the next'. The good rolls made it possible, and I wanted to try and write something true to the genre. Plus, if they had been bad rolls... well, I'll probably do the same thing with bad rolls in such a situation, just so the cliffhanger really is overhanging a cliff.
 
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