Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Magnus Centenius 5 - Just how many everyday foods are poisonous!!??
Magnus Centenius pt. 5 - Just how many everyday foods are poisonous!!??

Magnus, a 9th heaven stage Qi cultivator, who recently made great contributions to his clan with his work in bacterial poisons, was peeling potatoes. His arrival at the Simmering Soup sect's main city and search for a master had been a bit of an embarassment. Magnus somehow ended up with food poisoning at a stall in the front of the city. Luckily, a kind chef decided to help him with a cleansing soup to make him feel better. After some begging, Magnus had a new master who agreeded to teach him cooking to keep him from hurting himself again.

"BOY! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!!" screamed Magnus's new master.

"Peeling potatoes?" Magnus asked looking up for the pail full of peeled green pototoes, unsure what he has done wrong.

"Your peeling green potatoes. Don't you know that anything green on a potato is poisonous? You eat that and you'll be parlayed while spewing from both ends! Throw them out can start peeling these carrots for the stew." insulted Magnus's master.

"Green parts on potatoes are that dangerous? But, they don't seem to be going bad."

"Not just the green parts, but also the leaves and stem and roots. Honestly, foolish young masters, like you, leave home for the first will eat whatever they find thinking its safe. Then they end up dying to normal animals because they are too sick to to stop any beast from eating them."

Magnus's master pulls out a book and throws it at the young cultivator.

"This is a book of common foods that can poison a person when eaten. Don't look at me like that, I know you work with poisons. Why do you think I make you wash up 3 extra times whenever you handle food. Now get to reading, I expect to you know that book front and back by your shift tomorrow." She then shoved Magnus out of the store and got back to work.

After reading the book, Magnus lays on his bed digesting the new information he just learned. As it turns out, many leaves and seed of food staples in the region are dangerous, including many things Magnus knows are in his family's kitchen. When he goes home, he will have so many new things to experiment on. First though, he needs sleep, tomorrow he will be allowed to chop some of the vegetables he peels.

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@occipitallobe
you know, its scary how many things contain cyanide in them, Apple seeds, cherry pits, bitter almonds and every part of elderberries that isn't a ripe berry. And nutmeg can get you high with a spoonful, and more than that will give seizures. My research for this Omake killed my like for so many foods.
 
Minervina Barda 4 - A Dao of Transformation
Minervina Barda 4: A Dao of Transformation

I find striding through the halls of the Clan a very different experience these days. Once I had been largely ignored and a little shunned; the girl from a fallen line with only average talent and an unhealthy interest in unusual and insidious arts.

Heavens I miss those days. Now it seems everyone wants to talk to me!

Take today for example. In the few minutes since I left my quarters I have been hassled no less than three times. Once by a lazy elder asking me to give a guest lecture to the latest batch of baby disciples (accepted grudgingly), then by some junior pill forgers trying to bate me into some kind of silly contest (refused bluntly) all topped off by that damned gaggle of suitors all trying to court me (subtly poisoned, lets just say none of them are going to be interested in bothering the local clanswomen for the next few weeks and leave it at that.)

I can't help but shiver at the thought of more social interaction and pull my newest dark velvet gown around myself as I complete the journey to the 4th floor of the clans archives. I do feel a small touch of satisfaction as I find the table I have been using just as I left it the day before, the relevant scrolls and grimoires undisturbed. Rank and respect does come with a few worthwhile perks I suppose.

I think I finally have a solid lead on where the Thousand Flowering Spirit Oak could be found. I just need to divine the appropriate gathering method. Tracking it down is a waste of time if I render the trees supposedly miraculous sap worthless by accident. Any useful details on this remain stubbornly elusive.

I am still beating my head against an academic wall when my forth petitioner of the day comes to my attention. The Clueless Novice. This ones only barely 2nd Heavenstage if my senses are worth a damn and she has been trying to catch my eye for about half an hour now.

It happens a lot when you reach what is generally considered the peak of Qi Condensation. Your still a lot more approachable than a Foundation Stage master, but advanced enough that starry eyed juniors think your every word is soaked in cosmic wisdom.

I generally find ignoring them is the best strategy. Look busy and mysterious. I would go for imperious but frankly I don't have what it takes to pull that off. Just don't make eye contact, works every time.

"Erm, Lady Barda? Could this one beg a moment of your time." Oh heavens above, she actually pulled together the nerve to just come over and talk to me!

I admit I lost my temper. It had been that kind of morning.

I set aside my treatise on Scarred Lands folklore with a weary sigh and look up at the girl. "Not even the Celestial Immortals can count the number of moments that pass under heaven and over earth. Yet out of all those infinite moments, I can't seem to find a single one to get any blasted work done. And now you think your entitled to waste my time too! Get lost before I flay the skin from your impertinent bones!"

I might have started shouting a little by the end of that. Perhaps a tiny bit of my aura broke free as well. Okay, a tad more than a little.

It was far too much for the novice in any case. She fled in a mad sprint, knocking over tables and chairs in her desperation to escape.

I sat back down, flushed first with victory, and then shame.

Why did I do that? I remember being just like her once. The desperate beginner trying to wring a little wisdom from distant seniors. I wasn't like everyone else here. I didn't have a dozen loving aunts and uncles to come give me pointers in the finer points of my cultivation, to assuage my worries or smooth over the painful parts with a tidbit of family lore or dropping a little 'good fortune' in my path.

I had got where I was with one rotten scroll of obtuse instructions, a desire for vengeance and the generosity of my seniors.

A lead weight drops into my stomach as I grasp at the real reason I lost my temper. In a lot of ways, I wasn't that girl anymore and though I don't like to admit it, I am really not sure who this woman is that has taken her place.

I took up the Path and the Barda arts out of a desire for vengeance. Without that, I would have likely stayed home and tended the nets my whole life. I would be an old woman by now, if I was lucky. Perhaps with a husband I loved and grandkids who drove me crazy.

I don't regret this path I have trod. I have become something more in the process. But I can't pretend its vengeance that pushes me further. Almost 50 years on, the agony of ny fathers death has dulled. I have seen too much senseless death to imagine Justice has any particular Heavenly import beyond what powerful men give it. Vengeance will not be my way, not my Dao.

I suppose its the way of living things to constantly change. In my studies I have realised that no matter what people might think, everything changes given enough time. Be it the face of a mountain, the course of a river or the heart of a person.

Something in my Dantian snaps into place at this idle thought. My mood lifts and I seem to think more clearly. If I set aside the Dao of Vengeance and don't like the me that's left behind, then I should seek a Dao of Transformation so I can transmute myself into something more fitting.

I set aside my scrolls. "No time like the present."

Finding the novice doesn't take long. She's trying her best to sob quietly in a largely unused corner of the archive, but my senses are almost painfully keen these days when I want them to be. She tries to flee of course, but I am much, much faster than she can imagine.

I arrest her flight with a single firm hand on her shoulder. "Your name Disciple."

She freezes like a startled deer for a long moment. "Long Bi, milady."

Not a clan name. A closer look doesn't reveal any obvious signs of bronze in her blood. "Your not Clan?"

She stiffens, looks like she has some spine left, good. "I was born here, but no, I don't have Clan blood."

"So you don't have the collected wisdom of generations of Cultivators to fall back on when you run into a problem. I can relate to that. I was rude before, to even the score, tell me what the problem is and I will see if I can assist."

Startled, she stumbles over her words but eventually gets out the bones of her problem. "I'm having trouble clearing my Acupoints for the third stage. None of the standard exercises seem to work, though the instructor is certain I am doing them correctly. I asked a few people for help but no one really gave me any useful answers until I got to Lord Magnus. He recommended this treatment. I wanted to ask him more about it but he left on a journey the next day" She pulls out a scrap of paper with what looks like a mess of slapdash jottings on it as warning bells go off in my head. My fellow poison master is beyond adept at his craft, but he has a tendency to forget that not everyone thinks quite like he does.

"Can I see it" I snatch the papers away from her before she has chance to answer and look them over. "I take it you sought me out for a second opinion before trying this treatment?"

"How did you know?"

"Your still alive." Looking the work over a second I nod in confirmation. "Anyone who wasn't a master at manipulating venom through their meridians would be killed by this treatment. If my maths right, and it usually is, you would feel fine for around 13 hours and then every major blood vessel on the left hand side of your body would explode. With quite some force as well, we would be digging your bones out of the walls I expect. In fairness, your Acupoints would be squeaky clean though."

Long Bi visibly pales at this news. "I.... I suppose it was a waste of time then. I thank Senior for her wisdom."

"None of that! Come with me, I have a job for you." I stride back towards my books confident she will have no choice but to tag along. "Since I just saved your life, I think I have fairly settled the debt for my rudeness earlier. Magnus always does good work, his recipe just needs refining to your specifications. I will do that and craft the mixture for you, and in return you can do a bit of legwork for me. I am looking for historical reference to a particular treasure and frankly its getting tedious, a research assistant to fetch books and such is exactly what I need. It should only take a few weeks, a year at the outside. Most fair I think."

I feel a surge of happiness as my hapless new assistant splutters a response halfway between gratitude and indignation. Yes, a Dao of Transformation feels like the right choice for me.

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Bonus Omake that came to me this evening. Still planning to write one about the quest to recover her Life Saving Treasure, the sap of a Thousand Blooms Oak.

Trying something different in that this one is supposed to be entirely first person, where the previous ones were sort of a mix. Would be curious if anyone thought it worked better.

Its a bit of a rough draft since I typed it up on my phone. Will do an editing pass in the morning when I get to a proper keyboard.
 
Tasos Basilakes - Good Seed Background
@occipitallobe made a Good Seed, since I'm a genre noob lmk if this isn't playing enough into the cliches.

Name: Anastasios "Tasos" Basilakes
Age: 43 (Started at 23 y/o)
Appearance:
Stage: 7st Heavenstage of Qi Cultivation
Cool Thing: Skycarver Basilisk,
the bow of Tasos's ancestor Alexandros Basilakes. A cultivator of great talent, at the end of his life Alexandros found himself poisoned and tracked by enemies. Unwilling to grant his pursuers the knowledge and power held in his corpse, Alexandros cast himself down a ravine and, as his last act, imbued all of his Dao into his weapon - a bow made of Living Wood taken from the Skycarver Blood Cypress. The bow locked and absorbed Alexandros's blood, draining him into a desiccated husk - but locked onto his bloodline, extinguishing the signature of Alexandros's Dao. The Dao of Adaptation also infused the bow, making it so it would adapt at change to match its wielder - arrows would materialize already ready to fire, as many as the wielder wished. The draw strength, length and speed of the bow would also adjust to perfectly match the user - the bow would never break, and would allow the user to fire with a draw strength equal to their maximum strength if that is what the user so wished, or as fast as their speed allowed. It became an extension of the user's will - limited only by the ability of its wielder, which would only be of Basilakes blood.

Background

The Basilakes family has served the Optimatoi since before arriving to the Turtle World - but their best times were long before the current age. Having hailed from the east of the Empire, the Blood of Bronze was present in the Basilakes line but channeled into the wiry bodies and darker hair of their ancestors, manifesting strongly in their bronzed, olive skin instead. Although the ages of great Basilakes cultivators had long gone, the family was still well-known for two reasons: Their dedication to their ancestral weapon, the bow, which was often seen as a dishonorable method of killing - and their willingness to serve as the vanguards and the scouts that spearheaded Golden Devil advance, often at great personal harm. Although their time as great cultivators was perhaps behind them, no Cultivator of the Golden Devils that had lived long enough did so without having many Basilakes sacrifice themselves for it - and to the family, this was enough.

But not for one Tasos Basilakes - no, the young man had always been too curious, and perhaps too ambitious for his own good. He could never really sit still - and would go into long treks and hikes up the mountains his family made home in, at the very edge of the Quiet Peaks. Agile and keen, his parents had great hopes for Tasos to be a great servant to the clan and continue the legacy of the Basilakes scouts before him - but one day, the young man went for a hike and did not return. Days, then weeks, and eventually a month passed - and Tasos's parents feared the worst. Then their son returned, at the dawn of the next day - clothes tattered, with his skin marred with cuts, but Tasos's eyes were brimming with wonder and a steel that hadn't been there before. His skin gleamed in the morning's sun as Tasos showed his father what he had found - the bow of his legendary ancestor Alexandros.

Tasos had lost his footing and tumbled down the side of a rock face during his hike, having to fend for himself and live off the land for a week before his blood splattered against a tree, and it opened. Inside, the young man had found a desiccated corpse cradling a bow - the tree having grown around it like a mausoleum. Tasos touched the bow - and received a message from his ancestor, encoded into the very essence of his weapon. It spoke of his life, and his death - and the legacy of the weapon he carried. It urged Tasos to grasp the bow, the Skycarver Basilisk - and with it, to return the line of Basilakes to its greatness of old.

The next morning, Tasos set off for the Golden Citadel. The journey would take years - but for the first time in his life, Tasos had a path he was willing to follow where before he'd been a leaf in the wind. And he was eager to find where the path's end would lead him. He would make himself a worthy wielder of his ancestor's legacy - no matter what it cost him.

High Concept: Armenian-inspired archer from a once-great family whose star may have passed, but whose loyalty remains as strong as ever. Strong of character, would have been destined to never find his place to be - but through happenstance (or perhaps Fate?) stumbled upon a family legacy and decided to prove himself worthy of it. Wields a bow which grows in power in relation to the ability of its user - and has vowed to make it the greatest weapon that ever was.

Hopefully this works!


Current Bonuses:
Thousand-Year Sandstorm Spirit (Life-Saving Treasure)


Current preferred Omake bonus: Fighting Across Realms
Chapter 0 - Inflection Point
Chapter 1 - Aim at Yourself
Chapter 2 - Sticks and Stones
Chapter 3 - Antipathy
Chapter 4 - Parched Lips
Chapter 5 - The Disciplines of War
Chapter 6 - Defiance
Chapter 7 - Crossroads
 
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Minervina Barda 4: A Dao of Transformation

I find striding through the halls of the Clan a very different experience these days. Once I had been largely ignored and a little shunned; the girl from a fallen line with only average talent and an unhealthy interest in unusual and insidious arts.

Heavens I miss those days. Now it seems everyone wants to talk to me!

Take today for example. In the few minutes since I left my quarters I have been hassled no less than three times. Once by a lazy elder asking me to give a guest lecture to the latest batch of baby disciples (accepted grudgingly), then by some junior pill forgers trying to bate me into some kind of silly contest (refused bluntly) all topped off by that damned gaggle of suitors all trying to court me (subtly poisoned, lets just say none of them are going to be interested in bothering the local clanswomen for the next few weeks and leave it at that.)

I can't help but shiver at the thought of more social interaction and pull my newest dark velvet gown around myself as I complete the journey to the 4th floor of the clans archives. I do feel a small touch of satisfaction as I find the table I have been using just as I left it the day before, the relevant scrolls and grimoires undisturbed. Rank and respect does come with a few worthwhile perks I suppose.

I think I finally have a solid lead on where the Thousand Flowering Spirit Oak could be found. I just need to divine the appropriate gathering method. Tracking it down is a waste of time if I render the trees supposedly miraculous sap worthless by accident. Any useful details on this remain stubbornly elusive.

I am still beating my head against an academic wall when my forth petitioner of the day comes to my attention. The Clueless Novice. This ones only barely 2nd Heavenstage if my senses are worth a damn and she has been trying to catch my eye for about half an hour now.

It happens a lot when you reach what is generally considered the peak of Qi Condensation. Your still a lot more approachable than a Foundation Stage master, but advanced enough that starry eyed juniors think your every word is soaked in cosmic wisdom.

I generally find ignoring them is the best strategy. Look busy and mysterious. I would go for imperious but frankly I don't have what it takes to pull that off. Just don't make eye contact, works every time.

"Erm, Lady Barda? Could this one beg a moment of your time." Oh heavens above, she actually pulled together the nerve to just come over and talk to me!

I admit I lost my temper. It had been that kind of morning.

I set aside my treatise on Scarred Lands folklore with a weary sigh and look up at the girl. "Not even the Celestial Immortals can count the number of moments that pass under heaven and over earth. Yet out of all those infinite moments, I can't seem to find a single one to get any blasted work done. And now you think your entitled to waste my time too! Get lost before I flay the skin from your impertinent bones!"

I might have started shouting a little by the end of that. Perhaps a tiny bit of my aura broke free as well. Okay, a tad more than a little.

It was far too much for the novice in any case. She fled in a mad sprint, knocking over tables and chairs in her desperation to escape.

I sat back down, flushed first with victory, and then shame.

Why did I do that? I remember being just like her once. The desperate beginner trying to wring a little wisdom from distant seniors. I wasn't like everyone else here. I didn't have a dozen loving aunts and uncles to come give me pointers in the finer points of my cultivation, to assuage my worries or smooth over the painful parts with a tidbit of family lore or dropping a little 'good fortune' in my path.

I had got where I was with one rotten scroll of obtuse instructions, a desire for vengeance and the generosity of my seniors.

A lead weight drops into my stomach as I grasp at the real reason I lost my temper. In a lot of ways, I wasn't that girl anymore and though I don't like to admit it, I am really not sure who this woman is that has taken her place.

I took up the Path and the Barda arts out of a desire for vengeance. Without that, I would have likely stayed home and tended the nets my whole life. I would be an old woman by now, if I was lucky. Perhaps with a husband I loved and grandkids who drove me crazy.

I don't regret this path I have trod. I have become something more in the process. But I can't pretend its vengeance that pushes me further. Almost 50 years on, the agony of ny fathers death has dulled. I have seen too much senseless death to imagine Justice has any particular Heavenly import beyond what powerful men give it. Vengeance will not be my way, not my Dao.

I suppose its the way of living things to constantly change. In my studies I have realised that no matter what people might think, everything changes given enough time. Be it the face of a mountain, the course of a river or the heart of a person.

Something in my Dantian snaps into place at this idle thought. My mood lifts and I seem to think more clearly. If I set aside the Dao of Vengeance and don't like the me that's left behind, then I should seek a Dao of Transformation so I can transmute myself into something more fitting.

I set aside my scrolls. "No time like the present."

Finding the novice doesn't take long. She's trying her best to sob quietly in a largely unused corner of the archive, but my senses are almost painfully keen these days when I want them to be. She tries to flee of course, but I am much, much faster than she can imagine.

I arrest her flight with a single firm hand on her shoulder. "Your name Disciple."

She freezes like a startled deer for a long moment. "Long Bi, milady."

Not a clan name. A closer look doesn't reveal any obvious signs of bronze in her blood. "Your not Clan?"

She stiffens, looks like she has some spine left, good. "I was born here, but no, I don't have Clan blood."

"So you don't have the collected wisdom of generations of Cultivators to fall back on when you run into a problem. I can relate to that. I was rude before, to even the score, tell me what the problem is and I will see if I can assist."

Startled, she stumbles over her words but eventually gets out the bones of her problem. "I'm having trouble clearing my Acupoints for the third stage. None of the standard exercises seem to work, though the instructor is certain I am doing them correctly. I asked a few people for help but no one really gave me any useful answers until I got to Lord Magnus. He recommended this treatment. I wanted to ask him more about it but he left on a journey the next day" She pulls out a scrap of paper with what looks like a mess of slapdash jottings on it as warning bells go off in my head. My fellow poison master is beyond adept at his craft, but he has a tendency to forget that not everyone thinks quite like he does.

"Can I see it" I snatch the papers away from her before she has chance to answer and look them over. "I take it you sought me out for a second opinion before trying this treatment?"

"How did you know?"

"Your still alive." Looking the work over a second I nod in confirmation. "Anyone who wasn't a master at manipulating venom through their meridians would be killed by this treatment. If my maths right, and it usually is, you would feel fine for around 13 hours and then every major blood vessel on the left hand side of your body would explode. With quite some force as well, we would be digging your bones out of the walls I expect. In fairness, your Acupoints would be squeaky clean though."

Long Bi visibly pales at this news. "I.... I suppose it was a waste of time then. I thank Senior for her wisdom."

"None of that! Come with me, I have a job for you." I stride back towards my books confident she will have no choice but to tag along. "Since I just saved your life, I think I have fairly settled the debt for my rudeness earlier. Magnus always does good work, his recipe just needs refining to your specifications. I will do that and craft the mixture for you, and in return you can do a bit of legwork for me. I am looking for historical reference to a particular treasure and frankly its getting tedious, a research assistant to fetch books and such is exactly what I need. It should only take a few weeks, a year at the outside. Most fair I think."

I feel a surge of happiness as my hapless new assistant splutters a response halfway between gratitude and indignation. Yes, a Dao of Transformation feels like the right choice for me.

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Bonus Omake that came to me this evening. Still planning to write one about the quest to recover her Life Saving Treasure, the sap of a Thousand Blooms Oak.

Trying something different in that this one is supposed to be entirely first person, where the previous ones were sort of a mix. Would be curious if anyone thought it worked better.

Its a bit of a rough draft since I typed it up on my phone. Will do an editing pass in the morning when I get to a proper keyboard.

You got an assistant, when my guy comes back... I doubt he will even notice. Good work making him a focused scientist. I like how your seed is getting use to fame. Also, never mentioned it before, but great name for your treasure
 
The Verdant South

Here, the Righteous powers dominate. The Desert Barbarians are the only true Demonic region, and the Great Battlefield sees blows of equal power exchanged between Demonic and Righteous powers, but the Verdant South is the Righteous holy land. Peaceful and heavily populated, aside from Devil Bee Raids, it is the home of exchanging pointers, tournaments, and the governance of rules.

It is a lush land, and despite holding a mere 5 of the 16 Plains Sects, it holds nearly half the Plains population - which in itself is 80% of the total population of the Virtuous Flipper Region. Around two-fifths of all mortals in the region live in the Verdant South.

If one wants to kill another disciple in the Verdant South, you had better be able to do it in secret. The rules and regulations of the Righteous Path dominate, and even Devil Bee raids do little to impact its wealth and power. Indeed, if such raids grow to sufficient height, the other powers would besiege and destroy the Bees. That they have not done so speaks more to their unwillingness to jeopardise their positions against one another, more than a lack of power.

Without constant war, this region is the most populated and wealthiest of all. The Abyssal Devil Bee Sect is the greatest enemy here - able to raid into the region with impunity. It is rarely worth the effort for the other powers to try and invade, and the last Six-Power Pact of all powers against it invaded the Devil Bees, and failed abysmally, unable to siege down its mountain fortresses in unfamiliar territory. The Devil Bees continued to run rampant in the territories of the Verdant South, and eventually the various Righteous Sects obtained an agreement to limit raids in return for various tributes.

From east to west:

Great Drunkard Sect:

A Sect of combined body cultivators and wine brewers. Their Dao of Wine is able to give them immense strength while drunk, and they live in a land of peace and plenty. Rarely involved in wars or raids, the Great Drunkard Sect is much-loved among Righteous powers for their excellent wine.

Chuan Clan:

Chuan Clan are notable for their constant attacks on various sea monsters, who rarely come onto land (even as beast tides, while such things exist, they are usually easily repelled). They have kept their lands through access to the Undersea Gold Palace, a secret realm of considerable might. They are almost irrelevant in terms of powers, however, and pay tribute to the Strength Purity Sect to ensure their independence is guaranteed.

Joyful Blacksmith Sect:

One of the two Sects following the Way of the Heavenly Blacksmith, they are a Sect who seek to forge beautiful weapons and fight with them. A Sect of weapon experts of various kinds, they are a mishmash of many cultivators, and build fascinating magical artifacts. They are a pile of loose sand, however - in war they are weak.

Yu Clan:

Yu Clan are notable for their transformation arts. Into fish, birds, and even wasps. They are the first line of defense against the Devil Bees, and are paid defense payments by other Sects and Clans to constantly and aggressively respond to raids to ensure less spill over. While a small clan in terms of population, they are some of the greatest combat experts in the Verdant South.

Seven Divine Saber Palace:

The Saber Arts are not for the weak of heart. A true tyrannical saber can sweep all away in front of it in a single domineering slash. Weight, power, and head-on confrontation. The Saber Palace is the greatest home of Saber Dao in the Virtuous Flipper Region, and they fight their enemies openly. They have declined somewhat after the Jin War with the Golden Devil Clan, losing much of their power to push them out of the mountains and into the desert.

They pay tribute to the Strength Purity Sect, mainly in disciples fighting in the northern battlefields.

Sorrowful Blacksmith Sect:

The schism within the Heavenly Blacksmith Sect took half their numbers to settle the old Golden Devil lands. Despite this, the Sorrowful Blacksmiths are ultimately a Sect typified by defense. Arrays and artifacts, forged armor - individual Blacksmiths are weak in combat, but their fortresses are things of true legend. They were paid much to ensure the mountain passes from the Organ Meat Desert remained open, and the pass from the Golden Devil Clan - the Colossus Footstep Pass - to the Strength Purity Sect is key to ensuring Sects and Clans retain a large and ready supply of Spirit Stones.

In combat they are weaker than almost any clan around, and focus on their incredible iron-forged fortresses, along with their Thousand-Li Ballista Towers, making attacking or assaulting their territory incredibly hard. Mostly, they forge new items, and collect only minor tolls - they would prefer to collect more, but the Strength Purity Sect is able to exert significant influence on them to have them lowered.

Abyssal Devil Bee Sect:

The bane of the Verdant South. The Abyssal Devil Bee Sect is a Demonic Sect par excellence. They follow a fusion of Blood and Beast Path, taming Devil Bees and riding them into battle. These massive bees are fairly weak, and vulnerable, but allow flight at incredible speeds. Of course, they consume a great deal of Qi, making raids into the Plains the most palatable due to the rich Qi in the air there.

There are hundreds of thousands of wild Devil Bees in the mountains, and while the Sect can pass their hives safely with their Beast Arts, the same cannot be said for the Righteous Sects. As such, they are mostly immune to invasion, unless they enrage the Righteous Sects enough, and can raid with impunity.

They tend to descend on minor cities, using their Blood Arts to consume them, and fleeing on their bees before enemy cultivators can retaliate.
 
So, Action economy is extremely important in this quest, given you get one Action, and one Focus per (very long) turn.

I'm not inclined to change Actions at all - Manuel is a key resource you need to spend incredibly wisely.

However, I've been thinking on Focuses. I like the 'your clan does most the stuff, you give orders', but there's no reason you can't give some more complex orders.

I'm not sure if this is going to make things more complex and less accessible, but here's what I was considering. I'm not actively going to change this immediately - this is just thinking about thread mechanics and how to improve them. I might not do this at all.

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Right now, you get 1 Action, 1 Focus, and often 1 Choice.

I was thinking of formalizing Wealth and Income into units (Income, Expenses, Income - Expenses = Wealth added per turn).

Focuses will become more generic (focus on doing x - military action, guarding a border, spying, etc), and I'll add Purchases, or maybe Wealth Options. Or something to that effect. Basically, options that allow you to either gain wealth (sell off land), or use it (train far more disciples, build defenses, etc) each turn. Wealth is basically power in Xianxia, so keeping track of your core stat might add more enjoyment to the plans and votes.

I'm not sure if this is adding an unnecessary layer of micromanagement, though. What do the questers think?
 
Hah, oof, I'm really glad I advocated for forting up then, it seems that the Devil Bees really have issues taking on hardened targets. And our Glass Spear Array looks like it's really good at skeet-shooting them. Doubly so that their strategy apparently crumples hard in the desert if they can't seize any spirit stone mines to feed their bees.

On the topic of raising complexity... Honestly? I'm pretty happy with how things are right now? The only thing I'd maybe suggest is give an estimate as to how much a given action costs so we don't need to ask you about them.
 
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I'm not sure if this is adding an unnecessary layer of micromanagement, though. What do the questers think?
It seems fine, and allows us to utilize wealth and stuff to do additional things. Assuming that we get a certain base income each turn, beyond what's needed to keep the clan functional, I see no real problem with this
 
The schism within the Heavenly Blacksmith Sect took half their numbers to settle the old Golden Devil lands. Despite this, the Sorrowful Blacksmiths are ultimately a Sect typified by defense. Arrays and artifacts, forged armor - individual Blacksmiths are weak in combat, but their fortresses are things of true legend. They were paid much to ensure the mountain passes from the Organ Meat Desert remained open, and the pass from the Golden Devil Clan - the Colossus Footstep Pass - to the Strength Purity Sect is key to ensuring Sects and Clans retain a large and ready supply of Spirit Stones.

In combat they are weaker than almost any clan around, and focus on their incredible iron-forged fortresses, along with their Thousand-Li Ballista Towers, making attacking or assaulting their territory incredibly hard. Mostly, they forge new items, and collect only minor tolls - they would prefer to collect more, but the Strength Purity Sect is able to exert significant influence on them to have them lowered.
How many of those fortifications are Optimatoi Leftovers?

That thousand-li Ballista makes me think of a more spicy version of the Glass Javelin defense array.
 
How many of those fortifications are Optimatoi Leftovers?

That thousand-li Ballista makes me think of a more spicy version of the Glass Javelin defense array.

Sucker bet, they absolutely looted the shit out of our infrastructure and then rebranded it with their own name.

A L A S

I'll admit that the revelation that they feel Attrition really bad seems encouraging though. Is this lore going with the results of our actions suggesting that they got Fucked thanks to pushing a big raid and bouncing off of our advanced defenses?
 
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Hmmm, Dao of wine. You know, alcohol is a type of poison. My seed could start doing some drink making. An accident with various fruit poisons making a strong alcohol, I think my next Omake is being formed

actions are good, being able to make slightly more complicated orders can help
 
So, quick omake question @occipitallobe - is the welcome ceremony for the seeds always as depicted in the early chaps? With Manuel dropping by and such? Tasos would be starting 40 or so years after everyone else, so I'd like to properly depict the 'norm' of one of those, since if I remember correctly there was a note about how the Archegates doesn't show up every time.
 
So, quick omake question @occipitallobe - is the welcome ceremony for the seeds always as depicted in the early chaps? With Manuel dropping by and such? Tasos would be starting 40 or so years after everyone else, so I'd like to properly depict the 'norm' of one of those, since if I remember correctly there was a note about how the Archegates doesn't show up every time.

Not usually - Manuel was showing up - in-character to shore up confidence and help the disciples who would likely be key to the Clan in the next Hundred-Year Trials in a century's time (and out of character - because we'd picked his 'Give Lecture' option). It'll usually be a Core Formation Elder of some kind welcoming the new disciples en masse.
 
How would a focus on defending the Devil Bee border compare to forting up? Cause it sounds like the Devil Bees really don't like attacking us unless they want to yolo us while we're distracted so they can feed on our mortals and spirit mines to actually invade. So forting up maybe not be the best idea if we can have a bunch of our dudes at the border daring them to attack us while we're busy with the blood cannibals
 
How would a focus on defending the Devil Bee border compare to forting up? Cause it sounds like the Devil Bees really don't like attacking us unless they want to yolo us while we're distracted so they can feed on our mortals and spirit mines to actually invade. So forting up maybe not be the best idea if we can have a bunch of our dudes at the border daring them to attack us while we're busy with the blood cannibals

I asked about that? I presume that the intent is taken that we shore up the vulnerabilities that was pointed out by our general when I used the general term there?

The Devil Bees aren't attacking us for profit, it's a grudge because we fucked them up bad in the past and came close to wiping them out until the Seven Divine Saber Palace bitched about us embarassing them and coalitioned up to hit us while we were weak. They got a big windfall fucking up the Pact of Six, and spent time to digest it before turning on us, and we were expecting an attack to hit probably sometime this turn or the next.

Forting up will functionally mean that they spend a lot of blood and treasure gaining very little of import. Because our Attrition will do ruinous damage to their build, while preventing them from getting much to make up for it.
 
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I asked about that? I presume that the intent is taken that we shore up the vulnerabilities that was pointed out by our general when I used the general term there?

The Devil Bees aren't attacking us for profit, it's a grudge because we fucked them up bad in the past and came close to wiping them out until the Seven Divine Saber Palace bitched about us embarassing them and coalitioned up to hit us while we were weak. They got a big windfall fucking up the Pact of Six, and spent time to digest it before turning on us, and we were expecting an attack to hit probably sometime this turn or the next.

Forting up will functionally mean that they spend a lot of blood and treasure gaining very little of import. Because our Attrition will do ruinous damage to their build, while preventing them from getting much to make up for it.
Oh misunderstood what the new threadmark about focuses was talking about sorry
 
you know, its scary how many things contain cyanide in them, Apple seeds, cherry pits, bitter almonds and every part of elderberries that isn't a ripe berry. And nutmeg can get you high with a spoonful, and more than that will give seizures. My research for this Omake killed my like for so many foods.

And that's not even taking into account the Qi mutated spirit vegetables! An Apple that makes your Qi Core EXPLODE! Or a cabbage that makes the cultivator unable to gather Qi etc. Cus if there's going to be Spirit Beasts, there's going to be vegetables that adapt to them lol
If I set aside the Dao of Vengeance and don't like the me that's left behind, then I should seek a Dao of Transformation so I can transmute myself into something more fitting.

The Dao of Vengeance is really having a bad time retaining subscribers! I like how our 2 Turns can mean so much to our Good Seeds, the timespan involve allows for interesting character changes.

I was thinking of formalizing Wealth and Income into units (Income, Expenses, Income - Expenses = Wealth added per turn).

Focuses will become more generic (focus on doing x - military action, guarding a border, spying, etc), and I'll add Purchases, or maybe Wealth Options. Or something to that effect. Basically, options that allow you to either gain wealth (sell off land), or use it (train far more disciples, build defenses, etc) each turn. Wealth is basically power in Xianxia, so keeping track of your core stat might add more enjoyment to the plans and votes.

I'm not sure if this is adding an unnecessary layer of micromanagement, though. What do the questers think?
Since i don't really vote, i don't have too much to say on this front Although i do notice that generally it's the QM that gets burnt out from having to track every single resource. Do let us know if you start feeling overwhelmed if we switch to this system, i'm sure that we'll all rather prefer something more abstract if the book-keeping starts turning into a chore
Hmmm, Dao of wine. You know, alcohol is a type of poison. My seed could start doing some drink making. An accident with various fruit poisons making a strong alcohol, I think my next Omake is being formed

actions are good, being able to make slightly more complicated orders can help
Well, poision wine is a thing in Wuxia stories, so i say go for it! Props if it leads to a scene where he acts drunk and spits out a mountful of wine to take out an unsuspecting victim! Also, Wine made from Snakes and insects is also a thing in Wuxia/Xianxia fiction, so White-Backed Scorpion Wine anytime soon ?
How would a focus on defending the Devil Bee border compare to forting up? Cause it sounds like the Devil Bees really don't like attacking us unless they want to yolo us while we're distracted so they can feed on our mortals and spirit mines to actually invade. So forting up maybe not be the best idea if we can have a bunch of our dudes at the border daring them to attack us while we're busy with the blood cannibals
I know Alectai already answered this, but another point to consider is that unlike the South we have no treaties binding the Devil Bees to limit their raids. Hell, the south might even give them secret support if they realize that we're growing and want to put a stop to our ascend.
 
Well, poision wine is a thing in Wuxia stories, so i say go for it! Props if it leads to a scene where he acts drunk and spits out a mountful of wine to take out an unsuspecting victim! Also, Wine made from Snakes and insects is also a thing in Wuxia/Xianxia fiction, so White-Backed Scorpion Wine anytime soon ?
Scorpion wine, viper vodkas, puffer fish poison whiskeys. He is going to corner the market on semi risky drinks real MEN will challenge each other to drink

PS: I've eaten scorpion candies and viper soup before, the candy was just gross, and soup made my mouth numb. I'm still looking for a place to try puffer fish
 
Tasos Basilakes 1 - Inflection Point
Inflection Point
A
Tasos Basilakes Omake


It'd been a week since Tasos had left his home for his latest trek up the mountains, and he was starting to really regret it. The youth's whole body ached, he was hungry, and the scratches and other injuries all over his body were a constant reminder of just how badly he'd fucked up. The path that Tasos had taken was one he knew like the back of his hand - a dangerous shortcut that saved days of walking through mountain paths in favour of cutting right through the edge of the Breakspine Black Ravine. He'd taken the path injured, in the night, and under heavy rains without ever having a problem - but this time, Tasos had slightly misjudged how much the recent rainfall had eroded the crevice paths he favoured. The sudden loss of support below his feet and the sinking void right at the pit of his stomach were the only warnings he got before tumbling down into the depths.

Miraculously, that had not been the end of Tasos. He'd sunk into the cool waters of a wide river - one that hadn't been noted in the maps of the area held in the family library. The young man didn't have the time to be confused, however - he'd waded to the shore and collected himself, making sure he'd kept at least some of his arrows, before doing his best to assess his surroundings. It took him more than an hour to finally give up - there was no way out of the ravine, that he could see. The only option he had was to follow the water downhill, and hope.

That was a week ago, of course - and this entire week had been an absolutely miserable experience ever since. Tasos was used to fending for himself, yes - but Breakspine Black Ravine was the most hostile environment he'd experienced in his life. There was a tension in the air, one that seemed to vibrate inside his bones - one that spoke of trouble but also of familiarity, in a way he couldn't understand. And the wildlife - it was the most aggressive he'd seen. Above, in the mountains, spider monkeys did not stand the size of a full-grown man with two whiplike prehensive tails. Tigers did not have another set of arms rising from the shoulders, with claws the size of daggers either. The very plants seemed to eagerly peer at him, at times - and the fauna would constantly attack each other.

And yet, Tasos realized that despite the clear aggressiveness, so long as he didn't strike at them first. He'd learned very quickly that he could not afford to hunt anything while in the ravine - he was the weakest creature in it. To keep from becoming prey, he'd survived by foraging for fruits and feeding on whatever leftovers the beasts left behind - all while following the path downstream as the vibration in the air increased further and further.

That had been until earlier that same day, when he'd missed a shot aimed at plucking a fruit from high up a tree and hit a creature roosting on said tree instead. The eagle had instantly turned on him, and it was faster - the bleeding gashes on his back a constant reminder of what he was fleeing from. He'd jumped into the river and let it carry him down - and was now hiding inside some trees, hoping against hope that the eagle had lost him.

It hadn't. A shrill cry pierced through the air and Tasos dove for the ground as a black blur shot through the canopy, dagger-like talons missing him by a hair's breadth. He stood and ran for all he was worth - not even looking at where he was heading, just wanting out. Turning for a second, Tasos saw the black eagle turn for another strike - and swerve sideways, putting the trunk of an outrageously wide tree between himself and the creature in the hope it'd buy him a second.

Except the moment his bleeding back touched the tree's trunk, the air sparked - and instead of meeting hard wood, Tasos sunk into the tree's surface.

The young man shook his head and breathed deep, a strange smell hitting his nose, and blinked as his eyes adjusted to the green-tinted light. Looking around, Tasos realized he was somehow inside the tree - the roots giving it a wide and almost cavernous appearance with vines draping down in arches. The green light seemed to come from nowhere in particular - and the whole thing was arranged around what lay at the center.

At the middle of the chamber was the mummified, desiccated body of a man, somehow preserved by the tree itself. It looked incredibly delicate - a stiff wind might have caused it to crumble into dust. And yet the body held tightly in his grasp the most breathtaking bow Tasos had ever laid eyes on. It was not ornate - no, the bow was made of simple dark wood reinforced with bone, shaped as a composite reflex and held together by metallic pins - yet the wood seemed to have grown into the reinforcements, almost making the bow seem a single, uniform piece. The weapon spoke to him - almost daring him to grasp him - and Tasos had never been one to back down from a dare. He stretched his hand and grabbed the bow - and the clearing filled with light.

"Ah" A voice said. "So this is what my descendants have become".

Tasos turned briskly, still holding onto the bow - which slipped out of the mummified body's hand with an ease that did not fit the firmness of grasp Tasos remembered. Across from him, sitting on a root, was a man - bearded, with black hair held in a high ponytail and the distinctive bronzed olive skin of a full-blooded Basilakes awakened to the bloodline of the clan. The man had a mocking smile - yet his eyes betrayed curiosity.

"I don't follow" Tasos said, hand already going to his quiver - but a sudden spike of pain from his back injuries stopped him halfway. "Who are you?".

"Even after all this time, you'd have heard of me - I am, or was, Alexandros Basilakes, and I am dead" The man answered - making Tasos's eyes open wide. "And since you're not dead, you must be of my blood as well - otherwise that bow would have drained you dry".

Tasos let go of the bow as if it had suddenly caught on fire - making Alexandros break into raucous laughter. The young archer shot his ancestor a betrayed look.

"I'm Tasos Basilakes" he eventually answered - making Alexandros nod.

"Well, Tasos - welcome to my tomb" The shade said - and only now did Tasos notice the purple streaks marked around Alexandros's eyes, matching the positions of veins and archeries. "I never expected to have hidden it so well, that my own blood would take this long to find it. Tell me, does the Optimatoi still rebel?"

"The Golden Devils will forever rebel" Tasos answered without pause. "We forge our own destiny".

"Excellent. And yet, I sense no Qi" Alexandros continued. "What has become of us? Do we still lead the charge, as we always have?".

"I have not yet initiated - much has changed since your passing, ancestor" Tasos explained. "We still lead the charge - where we can".

"Well, that will change" Alexandros ordered - and it was as if the air itself vibrated at the proclamation. "We answer the call - that is the Basilakes way. The Optimatoi will need its vanguard if they are to triumph. The Basilakes have rested long enough".

Alexandros stepped forward, looking down on Tasos - sizing him up. Tasos did not look away.

"I like you" Alexandros finally said. "You're stubborn. You have two choices, child - take that bow for yourself, and make yourself worthy of it, or give it to someone else and surrender before you even start? This won't be easy".

Now that was a challenge.

"I don't surrender" He stated - or really, he vowed. Again, Alexandros nodded in satisfaction - and placed a hand on Tasos's shoulder. A sharp cold ran through his back - and the pain stopped.

"Then take that bow and go, Tasos" The older man said. "Show the world who we are".

A wind blew through the chamber, and Alexandros was gone - the ashes of his desiccated corpse blown away by the gust. The green light dimmed slightly - but didn't quite go out.

The cry of the eagle cut through the air the moment Tasos came out of the tree - but this time, he was ready. The sudden shift in draw strength made Tasos's pull hand twang and burn in pain - but he held still - and the whistling arrow took the bird on the wing, sending it crashing into the ground and the river where the water carried it away.

Tasos didn't bother it with a look - he had more important things to worry about.



Patroklos Basilakes and his wife Antonina sat together, silently enjoying a cup of tea. Neither of them dared speak. Their son Tasos had returned that morning - and they were still pondering his words.

Antonina briskly lowered her cup, the clattering breaking the silence.

"You must convince him to surrender this foolishness" She said. "He is still too young".

"He would have had to make the journey in a few years anyways" Patroklos answered. "And you may not feel it, my dear - you are not Basilakes by blood - but I do. He speaks no lies".

"He is still too young!" Antonina cried, standing up. Her chair toppled over. "What if he's wrong? The Clan has enemies - he's inviting a world of danger!".

"One that he would have been exposed to anyways!" Patroklos answered, voice just as harsh. "I have seen Tasos grown and worried - because he has always had the talent, but he has never had the resolve to match it. That has changed - the mountains changed him. For the first time in his life, he is making a choice and taking a stand about what he wants, beyond retreating to the mountains for a week - and I, as his father, will not stand in the way of that!".

Silence fell again as Antonina grimaced and looked to the ground. Patroklos's face softened up - and he ran his hand across his wife's cheek.

"I understand - I am worried too" He said, drawing his wife into a hug. "When it was our turn, the Hundred-Year Trial had just passed - and the Clan did not have the enemies it has now. But we are Basilakes - We Answer The Call. It is in Tasos's blood, in his very own essence. And I have always allowed my children to make choices as adults do - I will not change that, not now".

The couple then raised their eyes towards the wall - where the tapestry holding the family crest hung. A scaled rooster with dragon wings and a snake tail, green on a field of bronze.

"Perhaps it is time for the Basilisk to return" Patroklos said, an air on finality in his words. "We will see whether it will be Tasos's salvation, or his downfall. Until then, all we can do is trust, and worry for him in silence".

Tasos left for the capital the next morning.



Taking lots of liberties here - let me know if anything needs changing. I think a Fate bonus would be appropriate for this, no?
 
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Taking lots of liberties here - let me know if anything needs changing. I think a Fate bonus would be appropriate for this, no?

Just a FYI, Fate Bonus is applied to all Omakes. For the first Omake of each turn, besides a boon we will also get a fate bonus depending on the quality + length of the omake decided by the QM. It's just that any further Omakes after the first one only count for the Fate Boost.

So, it's probably for the best to also pick a Boon since we can only get 1 per Turn
 
Huh, okay. An additional boon feels weird for that one - I'm writing a welcome ceremony / initiation omake tomorrow though which may fit that better.

Taking a lifesaving treasure right away felt slightly meta, but I guess it's good to future-proof. I want to actually play out Tasos's story after all. Guess I will do that.
 
Huh, okay. An additional boon feels weird for that one - I'm writing a welcome ceremony / initiation omake tomorrow though which may fit that better.

Taking a lifesaving treasure right away felt slightly meta, but I guess it's good to future-proof. I want to actually play out Tasos's story after all. Guess I will do that.
No worries! I get where you're coming from! Our glorious QM checks as per the Good Seed background, so you can always list the bonus for the omake that you feel is thematically appropriate. As long as the omakes are done before the next good seed report, they all count.

I personally did the same thing with my Omakes in Turn 2.

Turn 2
3rd Omake Bonus = Xiao Yi has insight into the Art Of Formations, instead of using it in it's static form, he is able to use it so that certain aspects of the Formation are enhanced. Mechnically, maybe a small boost whenever Xiao Yi is in a Formation. ( Fate Bonus for Turn 2)
4th Omake Bonus = Xiao Yi has found his Dao and is walking on the Dao of Formations ( Cultivation Bonus)
5th Omake Bonus = Xiao Yi exploring his Dao ( Fate Bonus for Turn 2 )

So, as long as the info is there

P.S: Turn 2 onwards is also when the risks get bigger since Turn 1 was still about fine-tuning the whole Good Seed concept. And i believe that all the Good Seed bonuses were treated as Fate bonuses? So that could have been why no one died then
 
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