Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Yes. Broadly speaking, aging more lets your cultivator solidify their Dao, and eases ascension. During that time you can still accumulate cool and useful things. It doesn't offer any power benefits, however.

Ah i see ok. So if i aim for 10th heavenstage, i get to deal with other the risks involved in advancing. Whereas if i choose to consolidate, i get a higher success rate at ascension + stuff depending on my fate rolls.
Put a note in your Good Seed background about it, and I'll let Xiao Yi try and bend his Fate to making a Formation that's worthy of acceptance by the clan instead of particular personal bonuses.
Thanks for the clarification on this! I like the idea of Xiao Yi leaving a legacy behind so that even if he bites it, he left a noticeable impact to the Clan. I'll will edit it now, i'm cool with Xiao Yi living the next 20 years with no personal gains for the Glory Of the Clan!

Time to try and write up that Omake about acquiring his new weap
 
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That said, Fortifications only cost Wealth, the Income hit is negligible. So while they take time and money, ultimately once they're in place they're not an ongoing expense. Disciples on the other hand increase your military power directly, but the opportunity cost over time is considerably larger.
Which is why such things are affordable right this second. They're useful as a one time expense that can be thrown up quickly. Whereas focusing on raising disciples is a long term investment that is significantly more at risk of loss
 
[] The Serene Devil Rules with a light hand. Golden Emperors cultivate true strength.
-[] Going Once, Going Twice
-[] Raising Disciples - You need more cultivators. Spend wealth to raise more and more disciples to higher Realms. Reduces Income, as you have more cultivators to upkeep. Probably the single biggest Action to increase Clan power.

The theory here is to try and parlay our gains into a substantial increase in the clans ability to project power. Its the type of boost our Disciples are going to need to weather the oncoming storm in Turn 5 and puts us in a better situation in future skirmishes with all of our many rivals rather than just one of them. Moreover the greatest ensurer of peace between Sects in most Xianxia is the threat of greater strength, this plan increases our ability to deter attacks from happening at all and from any direction, rather than spending 20 precious years (of which we have only 60 left) building what I fear might turn out to be a Maginot Line.
 
Why would we want to project power?

I won't really say raising them as a way to project power, i would argue that raising their Cultivation gives them better odds of surviving the next testing ground attacks. Once the disciples cross that milestone, we have another 100 years to amass resources so that we might eventually grow to a point that we're not deemed viable as a testing ground any longer...

I mean mutiple ways it could fail, but it's still a chance
 
[X] The Serene Devil Rules with a light hand. Golden Emperors cultivate true strength.
-[X] Going Once, Going Twice
-[X] Raising Disciples - You need more cultivators. Spend wealth to raise more and more disciples to higher Realms. Reduces Income, as you have more cultivators to upkeep. Probably the single biggest Action to increase Clan power.
 
Xiao Yi 8 - [Uphill both ways]
Xiao Yi [Uphill both ways]

" Come on youngling! I'm not getting any younger you know! "

Panting slightly from the strain of pulling the wagon hitched to him up yet another hill, Xiao Yi was getting the slightest suspicion that the Old Peddler he just saved was not as old and decrepit as he seemed. Since saving the old man and following his directions, Xiao Yi had crossed over 2 mountains and forded over at least 3 mountain streams as well as through terrain so treacherous that even as a 9th Heavenstage Cultivator he felt a sense of danger.

In contrast, the Old Elder seemed to be on a relaxed evening stroll, leisurely hiking up the mountains and crossing the streams as if they were puddles all while keeping his hands behind his back and chiding Xiao Yi for his slow speed.

Well, since it seems like the Elder has a plan and since he hasn't done anything to harm me, i'll just listen and obey him. I'll drop a report about him to the Clan when i returned to the Mission Office.

" Yes Elder! I'm sorry for the trouble, i'm not used to the terrain. "

" Blah! Excuses! A fit and stripping man like you should have no trouble! I bet you're just lazy! I'm going to report you to your Clan's Disciplinarians! "

Bowing his head in apology, XIao Yi continued along with the Elder, Qi spread out around him to sense for the approach of any dangers or attacks. So far in his journey with the old man, Xiao Yi had found himself fending off the attacks of a wide range of Spirit beasts although none of them were strong enough to present him with any credible threat.

It was lucky that through my conversations with Lady Minervina and Lord Magnus i was able to amass enough knowledge about fighting poisonous beasts to fend off the 4th Heavendstage VenomBlooded Spitting Spider as well as treat myself from it's bites. I would have been badly wounded without the knowledge they provided me with, i should invite them out for a drink when i return.

The sudden sensation of a spike of hostile intent drew Xiao Yi from his musing, turning his head to the source he spotted a flock of 5th Heavenstage Sun Crows making a dive towards him. Thankfully like in all the previous encounters, the old elder had disappeared from both sight and presence at the first sign of a attack.

Readying himself to receive the attack with a mental chant of Pact Beast Art: Jade Qilin's Impervious Scales, Xiao Yi called forth a layer of Qi that settled over him and the wagon in the form of a barrier of shimmering emerald scales. As the flock of Spirit birds rose from their dive, Xiao Yi took advantage of the opening presented, reaching deep into his Qi and channeling it through his fingers before flicking them at the birds with tiny blasts of Spear Qi that tore the bird flocks to shreds.

" AH! What a waste! Don't you know that a single Dan from a Sun Crow can be sold for 30 low Spirit Stones ?! Look at this, there's nothing left of them but feathers! " Used to this by now as well as the old man's sudden reappearance, Xiao Yi listened with one ear at the pedder's scolding as he kept his focus outwards to ensure that there were no more dangers around.

I hope we get to the Elder's location soon, i might be late to report if we travel for another day.

Thankfully, after crossing another mountain and another hour of travel, the Elder came to a halt at the entrance of a path that led to what seemed to be a grove in the distance.

" Er-erhm. Don't say that i don't keep my words! In that grove you should be able to find materials for forging a new weapon! You'll need to defeat the Spirit Beast guarding it, but i'm sure that it's no problem for a strong cultivator like you! Just leave my wagon here and we'll wait here till you return. Or for 2 hours, because if you're not back by then, i think you're in the beast's stomach. "

Entering the grove with his senses strained to their maximum and with his Qi revolving in him, Xiao Yi took quick but measured steps towards the tall tree that stood proudly in the center of the grove. Just as he was about to enter the shadow casted by the tree, Xiao Yi felt a flash of danger through his senses and only a quick roll saved him from being decapitated by a slash that cleaved at the spot he was just at.

Quickly rolling to his feet, Xiao Yi found himself confronted by a Man-sized Mantis, it's bladed arms glinting darkly in the shadows thrown by the towering tree. Heaving a sigh of relief that he had reach the Stage Of One With The Spear with his Spearmanship, Xiao Yi channeled his Spear Qi into his hands allowing the essence of his spearmanship to turn them into the point and blades of his Ji.

As the Mantis lunged at him with it's blades slicing through the air with a series of slashes and stabs, Xiao Yi stood his ground and deflected the strikes in a circular motion using his right arm, the windmill-like motion forcing the Mantis' arms open and away from it's vulnerable thorax. Before the beast could fix the gaps in it's defenses, Xiao Yi's left hand flashed in with a slash that hacked off one of it's arms and in the blink of an eye, decapitated it with a smooth followthrough.

However, instead of dropping dead, Xiao Yi found to his shock that the Mantis had retaliated with a slash from it's remaining arm that he was only able to guard from with a timely usage of his
Pact Beast Art: Jade Qilin's Impervious Scales. Not letting the beast make another attempt, Xiao Yi thrust his right arm forward with a quick twirl, driving it into the beast and through it's inner core. This time not lowering his guard till he sensed all life leaving the beast.

Pulling his arms back, Xiao Yi shook off the worst of the gore and once again made his way to the tree where he was suddenly once again prompted by his danger sense to make a quick jump back. Upon doing so, he found to his surprise a small crater where he stood and within it a single branch that was blown froth by the wind.

Surprised that such a simple branch could leave such a crater and not feeling any hefty sense of weight upon picking up the branch, Xiao Yi gave it a shook and found to his surprise that he had trouble preventing it from leaping out of his hand from the recoil of the branch as it swayed.

Making his way back to the entrance of the Grove, Xiao Yi found to his utter lack of surprise the disappearance of the Old Elder as well as the wagon filled with goods that he had hoisted for the past day of so.

Fully leaving the grove, Xiao Yi made a deep bow to it before quickly making his way home to give his report to the Clan as well as seek out a weapon-smith for help in appraising the materials he had gain as well as crafting his new weapon.

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" This is interesting wood you bought me. It's able to amplify any force used on it so that even a simple swing can hit with the might of a charging beast. I can use it to make a Wood Fairy Lance for you, with it all your strikes will hit with greater force and when you charge ? The combined force of you and your Spirit Beast will allow you to strike with the might to topple any foe! "

" Yes, thank you! I'll leave it to you " Giving a bow of thanks, Xiao Yi was about to exit the Clan Forge when he was stopped by the Forgemaster.

" Not so fast there. This won't be cheap and it'll go over the amount of resources you're entitled to draw from what the Clan allocated. 2 Medium Spirit Stones should be enough. Give me 2 Medium Spirit Stones and i'll get the job done. "

Hiding a wince at the price stated, Xiao Yi gave his haversack a search hoping that he had somehow missed 2 Medium Spirit Stones. Unfortunately, Xiao Yi was as broke as he remembered, his search was unable to pull up any spirit stones. Just as he was about to give up, his grasping hand nudged into what felt to be a small pouch. Pulling it out and pouring it's contents over the counter facing the Forgemaster, Xiao Yi was surprised as a flow of Spirit Beast Materials flowed out of the pouch.

As the last few pieces of Spirit Beast Materials flowed out of the pouch, it burst into flames leading to Xiao Yi dropping it with a startled cry as it quickly burnt into fine ashes. While Xiao Yi stared in shocked at the ashes as well as the small hill of materials on the counter, the Forgemaster eyes were darting from material to material as his hands blitzed through a series of calculations with the counter's inbuild abacus.

" Well then! It looks like i can forge the weapon for you after all! The value of the amount of materials here is just enough to be equal to the value of 2 Medium Spirit Stones. In fact, since it's in the form of materials we can use, i'll be generous and add this material to the Lance as well." So saying, the Forgemaster reached out to the pile of materials before him and pulled out the blades of the Spirit Mantis that Xiao Yi was sure he had left behind in the Grove.

Realizing that the materials before him must have been collected by the Old Elder, Xiao Yi was about to reject the offer with an explanation that the materials did not belong to him when a small slip of paper caught his eye. Opening it, Xiao Yi found a note addressed to him:

Brat, see the value of the Spirit Beast Materials you so haphazardly destroyed? You're lucky you have an wise senior like me who stashes away the valuable bits for you! Use them for your new weapon. Like i promised you, following me will give you materials for it.

The Old Peddler.


" It looks like my reply to your offer is Yes Forgemaster. I'll trade all the material for my new weapon. You have my thanks. "

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Last part of the Fate roll for Turn 2 done!

Like i mentioned, this Omake was about Xiao Yi getting the materials for his weapon. It's also an excellent chance for me to do the cliche fighting Spirit Beasts for materials part of the normal Xianxia journey

Also, i have no idea why the Old Peddler suddenly turned into this fussy troll. Oh well, at least it also allowed me to expand on a concept of Wuxia that i always thought was cool, the idea of the Great Swordsman being able to use sword techniques without a sword.

I can't remember the exact story, but i remembered coming across one where it was broken down into three stages, one was skilled with the weapon in hand, the next was so skilled that anything in nature could be the weapon and the last was so skilled that nothing is needed as long as the weapon was in the heard of the swordsman.

I think it was a Jin Yong novel, but i'm not sure. Here i just have it as Xiao Yi having used his weapon for so long that he is able to replicate some of the stages with the Qi and his limbs as a medium. It also gives me the excuse to play around with the idea of arms acting like spears or kicks acting like hammers as a future expansion of Xiao Yi's skills.

This Omake is for Fate Bonus. To get that Formation Creation to a Success!
 
Fierce Fang 2 - Deep Sea Starfish Body
Fierce Fang
Deep Sea Starfish Body​

Fierce Fang was randomly walking around one of the deeper patches of sand in the Organ Meat Desert and by chance noticed a wooden box buried in the sands. Thinking it strange he decided to dig it up. The box was a cube made of black ebony wood with sides larger than two hands and decorated with a weird pattern.

Naturally Fang tried to open it but he couldn't find any hinges,drawers, or keyholes to actually open the box. In fact as far as he could tell using all his sense the box was solid and not worth paying attention to but Fang's intuition told him otherwise. So he poked and prodded the box for several days even attempting to break it open but even his full power wasn't enough to leave scratch. But eventually he came upon a clue.

Fang figured out that the patterns on the box were actually tiny qi panels that changed if you touched them with qi. After this Fang quickly realized the box was a puzzle and after experimenting with it for an entire month he discovered the solution. The key was the starfish hidden in the center of the box. Fang needed to use the qi panels to quickly 'cut' the star fish into 5 chunks and then 'move' them away to different sides. He then 'grew' each chunk back into a complete starfish before 'cutting' and 'separating' them again. Fang continued this process again and again pushing his Spiritual Qi, his control over said qi, and his concentration to its limits until finally the box was covered in one giant starfish that had 'eaten' the rest. Only after accomplishing this week long test did the box finally open.

Inside the box was a mere two things scroll made up of weaved together reeds and a dried up tip of what appeared to be a giant starfish judging by its suckers and spines. Fang ignored the starfish tip feeling that it had a strange energy to it that randomly touching it would be very reckless and instead decided to read the scroll first. The words written on it were foreign to Fang and he feared that he wouldn't be able to get any use out of his good fortune and efforts when suddenly the words on the scroll shifted. It almost felt like they moved upon noticing his lack of understanding and the strokes changed to something more familiar that Fang could actually read. Even the orientation of the words switched from what seemed to be top to bottom to a more normal left to right.

The scroll's name now readable titled it as the Deep Sea Starfish Body. The foreword of the technique said this box and its context were a karmic gift blessed by the Goddess who Takes Names, Mother of the Impoverished and Guardian from Trouble at Sea in the hopes that the gift will be useful to the one who finds it. There was no mention of who wrote and prepared this gift not even the land this art called home which surprised Fang since he expected all cultivators to enjoy bragging about themselves and their clan or sect. Maybe it had to do with the box being called a karmic gift and so they deliberately cut all connection to the gift to leave no debts of karma that needed repaying?

Whatever the reasoning for the gift Fierce Fang quickly started reading the art to be able to cultivate its technique as soon as possible. But he soon found out that after it's beginner portion explaining how to cultivate the Deep Sea Starfish Body that he couldn't understand the rest of the scroll even with the translation effect. Fang eventually figured that it was merely his cultivation base being too low to even comprehend the later parts of the art. Which was disappointing but eventually Fang would be able to read it so it didn't merit worrying about.

So Fang began cultivating the Deep Sea Starfish Body and was surprised to see he had already taken the first step. For the way of moving his qi to open the box was actually the how one started training the technique. Another thing Fang noticed about the art was that it apparently required the practitioner to have not opened their meridians yet for some esoteric reason he didn't currently understand. But whatever the case Fang couldn't advance to the next heavenstage until he had mastered the first part of the body technique which was unfortunate. It would be worthwhile though since being able to heal quickly in combat and the increased power the art provided would help him in future battles no doubt.

Finally after studying the first step of the Deep Sea Starfish Body Fang learned what the tip that also came in the box. It was part of a Deep Sea Starfish as easily assumed but what the scroll said about was almost too much to believe. It was apparently called a Starfish Regrowth Death Denial and as its name implied it was a life saving treasure. It was only usable by those who used the Deep Sea Starfish Body and functioned by absorbing the treasure. Then if the user ever died the mouthful of a treasure would revive them even if only a limb survived much like the starfish it came from.

The weaknesses of such a potent treasure were few. It would only work if there was at least a intact limb so if the body was completely destroyed, cut apart, eaten or whatever else than the resulting death would be final. Another weakness was that it took time to regrow a new body depending on how intact the corpse was so while a death by a single strike to the heart could be healed in time to return to battle regrowing from a single limb could take weeks. Finally the Starfish Regrowth Death Denial only worked for deaths of the body so if its user died from attacks on their mind or soul, like what happened often at the higher levels of cultivation, the treasure wouldn't work.

@occipitallobe Here's my omake and for it I want a life saving treasure. Preferably the one I wrote in this omake and if there's any issue in how I wrote it please let me know so I can change it.
 
[X] Plan: Bite and Hold
-[X] Direct Rule
-[X] Fortifying (Vs. Devil Bees)
 
Rina Callista 6 - The Trouble With Mountains
Rina Callista
The Trouble With Mountains
It was one thing to see the great, towering edifice that was the 'Turtlebone Mountain' from the territories of the Clan--a spike of rock piercing the very firmament in a realm that only the strongest experts of the land dared climb. Perhaps it drew power from the stars and sky, bringing it to the earth--for the mountain itself was home to mighty beasts of all varieties throughout its various rivers and lakes, home to many Wandering Cultivators who sought good fortune and excellent challenges. The upper reaches were daunting even to a Nascent Soul--as rumor would have it--and the mountain proper was home to beasts equivalent to Core Formation and Foundation Establishment, the average strength increasing as one traveled across the great monument.

It was, without any doubt--suicide for one of Qi Condensation to adventure in the Mountain itself--but the foothills beneath it? Ah they were rich in beasts, home to many adventurers who sought their great lucky chances to rise to power. Even on the side facing the Great Desert, the levels of energy bleeding off of the mountain itself allowed for a lush and fertile landscape--many of the great farms of the Golden Devil Clan were built in the territory of its shadow, producing foodstuffs and herbs for the Clan suitable for its many Cultivators. Most would call such ambition suicide, with the regular Beast Tides and the occasional Foundation Establishment beast deciding to slum it in the footholls, but the defensive prowess of the Clan was enough to hold the perimeter against all comers--and there was evidently at least one Core Formation Elder residing in the region to discourage any particularly aggressive assaults.

It could be said to be a right of passage, to adventure in Turtlebone Mountain--a place of great peril, but also great opportunities. So it was that Rina Callista found herself joining in that great tradition.

She was, of course, relatively unseasoned as far as adventurers go in that place. While no greenhouse flower unable to sustain contact with the outside world, it remains true that most of her previous battles had been executed with the understanding that should things go against her, there were experts nearby willing to pick up the slack. Her first clashes against the beasts of the Mountain led to no small amount of trouble as a result--surprise attacks getting the drop on her for instance, or being surrounded by multiple foes.

Most who would seek to enter the Mountain for the first time, save those from the most bloodthirsty and violent sects--would rarely have a good time. Life-saving treasures would be employed, secret protectors used to secure them. It would either be little more than a standard, curated adventure.

Or more likely, the sign of the adventurer's death as some predator that's been killing longer than they've been alive gouges their throat out.

DING!

Rina Callista flinched back at the noise moreso than the sense of pressure as the great Obsidian-Toothed Tiger's claws rung off of her skin. She had noticed the flicker of darkness quickly enough to flinch backwards--hence why her throat wasn't bitten off--but the spirit beast's claws followed where its jaws could not reach. Where it might have expected an easy follow up though ran face first into the superlative constitution of the Alloyed Body, and its claws did little more than scratch her.

Her counterstroke--fist coming down on the beast's spine--was far more telling. Its spine shattered and its organs ruptured under the full force of the Alloyed Body, it spat up blood, rolled to the ground, and died on the spot, another victim of hubris.

Rina herself looked flustered at this, looking up at her hand and wincing at the blood and bone shards covering it. "Oh noooo" She whispered. "Eeew, eeew...." She wiggled her hand to try and clean it off, and only got specks of stuff all over her clothes. "Why'd it have to jump out like that! I could have had my sword out instead!"

Indeed, as it turns out--life saving treasures are helpful. Hidden guardians can save your life--but in the end, the greatest form of security is to be invincible among your peers. And the height of the Blood of Bronze contained within a vessel of the Tenth Heavenstage of Qi Condensation fears only experts of Foundation Establishment--and nothing more.

One can afford a great number of mistakes in that position--and embarrassment is and remains one of the best tools for learning--as long as your ego can take the occasional bruising at least.

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The good news at least is that Turtlebone Mountain had plenty of hot springs all over it! Places where you can wash up, have a comfy and relaxing time in a warm bath, and some of them even had valuable medicinal properties that could speed cultivation a little bit! A great way to get rid of something like having blood and mashed bone all over your arm and hand and oh dear. Yes, the life of a Cultivator was one of regular, gratuitous violence--but that didn't mean one needed to revel in the act.

So here she was, sunk to the chin, a lazy smile on her face as as she let the knots and tears of the day's adventuring just float away--along with the stuff on her hand, to go... Wherever it is things go in places like this. Eaten by some beast that likes hot water or something? Details, details.

It was a lovely day despite all of that, blue skies, birds humming in the trees, the clash of steel and blast of magic.

She blinked as that thought came across. That's not normal at all! Before she could get up though, a bedraggled form burst out from the trees, rolling through the grass and bouncing off a rock into the spring.

"H... wah?" Rina wondered, as the figure bounced off the water, careening straight towards her... Face.

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The sound of metal striking flesh filled the air, and the figure's movement was arrested. "Damnit, now's not the time!" With a fluttering of robes, trying to extract himself from the object he had just struck, which was...

A small, copper-skinned young lady currently staring at him, face red and steaming. "Uh, sorry miss!" He apologized quickly, collecting his cane. "A bit of a rush though! You might want to take cover before they get here and..."

There's no further time at that point, flashes of light fill the clearing, and six cultivators materialized in a six-pointed star formation. "Xu Zhen! There is no escape!" Knives and daggers were drawn as the fleeing Cultivator brought up his cane up to protect himself. "Prepare to die!"

"I'd rather not if that's any matter?" He quips, but the first attacker is upon him--a ray of light caught on his cane and deflected. "Come on then, is that really the best you can do?" A flick of his wrist and one of his sleeves deflects the next strike. "Anyone who stumbles upon a treasure has the right to pick it up! It's only natural that I make use of it myself!" Two more lunge at him, and he hops above them. "Why don't we all just call this off and quit before anyone gets hurt, shall we?"

"The only one who'll be hurt is you"

A sinister voice, full of malice fills the air, and the formerly bright day falls into shadow. The six assassins gather behind the new voice. A handsome looking cultivator, currently holding up the red-faced girl from the hot springs by the hair. A knife was pointed to her throat, and the figure laughed coldly. "It was a lucky stroke, to see the great young genius of the Strength Purity Sect so far from his territories... But your chivalry is well known at this point. Lay down your arms and accept your death, and we will leave you with an intact corpse... Otherwise?" He harumphed. "Don't blame us for being merciless--to you or this little girl here."

The man bit the bottom of his lip. "Dirty play, dirty pool there..." He hesitated for a moment, then sighed, dropping his cane. "Well, so be it, if you want my life? Come and take it!" He gestured widely.

"Fool!" The leader of the assassins laughed, throwing the girl to the ground and lunging with his dagger. "I'll refine your soul into my new flag!" Then he halted, stumbling as one leg wouldn't move.

Because the girl was holding it.

"I... Just wanted a bath" She whispered. "Nothing complicated, safe, not even competing for anything." Xu Zhen blanches at this. "But then you all had to run on me--and you even saw me in my underwear!"

She yanks back on the assassin's leg, crushing it to paste and pulling him towards her. "Don't think I'll let you get away with this!" She bellows like a tiny, angry lion as her other fist strikes true, bursting him like a bag of blood to the horror of his companions. "Villains! Perverts!" Two small charms worn on her wrists glow, and her weapons expand to their full size--a blue glass heavy sword and a great shield. "I'll get you all for this! See if I don't!"

The assassins were well trained experts, veterans of dozens of real battles--they needed only a moment to look to one another before they all began to move. In the end though, there is a simple logic to the world--one can have all the skill, all the training in the world.

As her glass heavy sword sheared through two of them in a single blow, and her hurled shield brained a third, this truth became clear. Superior power always beats any amount of cunning and cleverness after a certain point--six experts of the Eighth Heavenstage of Qi Condensation might be a danger when accompanied by an expert of the ninth.

But in close combat against a body cultivator with strength capable of challenging the Thirteenth? The outcome was in little doubt. With their leader and three of the subordinates brought low in the first moments of the battle--the remaining enemies had little chance--even against the girl's bare fists. Scattering might have helped them escape...

At least until the man they had been chasing in the first place intercepted the last of them when he veered off, took several blows from his cane, was then dropped by a magic spell that formed a burst of fire emitted from the hand, reducing him to ash.

Of course, while the assassins were dead, there still remained one problem.

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"I'm truly very sorry!" The rude man begged, hands on his knees and kneeling down. "They were using a scent tracking mechanism and I tried to get here to wash it off! I didn't have time to see if anyone was occupying this spring!" Rina had a chance to get cleaned up again and changed into her travelling clothes, arms crossed as she witnessed the apology. "I can't speak for them and they got what was coming to them, but please forgive me my trespasses young miss!"

"It's still very rude of you!" Rina sniffed dismissively. "But I'll forgive you this once, I'd be unreasonable if I blamed you for being chased." It wasn't like she was some princess who never had contact with the opposite sex after all, she was offended but not going to start a grudge over something that silly. A good apology was all that was needed! "But you could have beaten them all on your own I'm sure, why were you trying to hard to run away?"

He paused, and winced. "Ah, you noticed that, didn't you?" He considered the situation or a moment, and nodded. "I'm... Here for... Certain reasons, and using my full strength wasn't an option here, so I had to run."

"You're totally on punishment duty, aren't you?" Rina asked, and he flinched. "I knew it."

"Yeah, they sealed up some of my cultivation and threw me up in the foothills. Apparently the higher ups don't like it when you spend all your time sorting the archives after a certain point." He wiggled his hands. "You win a couple tournaments here and there, and everyone thinks you're a genius, and then start getting mad at you when you don't start running head first into combat missions for the sake of the Sect."

"Ohhhh" Rina drew that noise out a little, and then nodded. "I actually do understand! I was going to go into Arrays when the Clan started training, but they saw I had great aptitude for the whole." She mimed out a few punches. "--thing, and put me over there! I mean, I don't mind the hard work and violence too much, but I understand what you're getting at there. That's really mean of them!" She pumped her fist. "I've been looking out for adventure while I'm here anyway! An escort job will be great practice!"

"... Hold on, I feel like you said something important there..." Xu Zhen started, but was put off by the girl getting up in his personal space, getting up on her tiptoes and patting his shoulder. "Don't think too hard about it! As long as Rina Callista is here, nobody'll be able to hurt you!" She paused. "Unless they're Foundation Establishment, I'm not too sure how I'd handle one of those..." She spun about on her heel then and began to march off. "But I'm sure it'll all be fine either way! There's strength in numbers after all, and you're a fellow 'Person who'd rather be a scholar!' We'll be friends in no time!"

"No, really though, you implied something important there..." Xu Zhen tried to regain control of his life, but to no avail.

And thus, a strange friendship beyond borders was formed.
 
[X] Plan: Bite and Hold

Seeing the sheer volume of quality omake output some people in this thread can output is humbling.

Part of my problem is that it feels like it weakens longer omake, and incentivizes artificial omake breakup.

That being said, I don't have a very strong opinion on this.

While I'm writing the update, I'd appreciate more thoughts from the thread on the above.

@occipitallobe I think it depends on how you do your behind the scenes system work. I fully understand your desire to keep things behind the screen to prevent gaming the system, so please do not take the below as attempting to get you to reveal more. Just as an explanation of the assumptions I made writing this post.

  • From what I understand you make 2 rolls per turn. Cultivation & Fate.
    • Culitivation is the simple one. It dictates how fast your cultivation advances.
    • Fate is the Complex one. It can give you massive cultivation boosts, treasures etc. Or it can injure, cripple of kill you.
  • If someone writes a single omake per turn they can choose one bonus from the list in the "Good Seeds" threadmark.
  • Further omakes (or longer and better quality ones) per turn get rolled into a general bonus to fate rolls.

There are some players, like @Alectai, @Mochinator etc. who can and will output a number of quality omakes every turn, and find the deadline helpful. On the other hand there are less prolific players who's output might be of the "when inspiration strikes" variety.

For less prolific players, who work more on the "when inspiration strikes" schedule, the following can happen: I am inspired in turn 1. I have 3 ideas burning in my head and write all of them in quick succession, then post them. Therefore I get 1 bonus pick and the rest go to boost my fate roll.
In turn 2 the well of ideas has dried up. I can't think of anything to write and so nothing happens this turn. I get the flat cultivation and fate rolls. The point of concern then is that if I had instead saved up one of those 3 omakes rather than posted it immediately, I could have guaranteed a bonus pick (such as a lifesaving treasure). As this bonus is more obvious and tangible it can seem worth more than an unseen bonus on a fate roll.

I think there could therefore be value in letting a player say "I would like to sacrifice the fate roll bonus my 3rd omake would give me this turn to select a bonus next turn." As long as the players understand that by doing so, they accept the risk that if the fate roll goes bad that turn the character can die and the future bonus pick would just be lost.

Edit: I would probably still put a 1 turn or so cap on this though.
 
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Achille Adephos 4 - Blood and Betrothal
Achille Adephos IV
Blood and Betrothal


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"What does that mean?" Markus asked.

"It means Blood Path!" King Shen said solemnly, light flickering from within his gaze.

The massive Array-Spire continued to glow red, a path of red light pouring out of it. King Shen leaped into the air, a metallic shield flying up to the bottom of his feet. King Shen flew forward, propelled by the power of his magical treasure. He reached into the sleeve of his robe, pulling out a long-chained whip.

Achille and the others follow King Shen on foot, watching as he neared the end of the path of red light. King Then slashed the whip forward, slamming it into the roof of a house. The top of the house shattered into dust as King Shen flew downwards.

Within the house, a bone-thin old man sat in a pool of blood.

King Shen glared at the old man, slicing forward with his whip which slammed into the chest of the old man, sending him flying backwards.

"Blood Path bastard, it's time you handed over your life!" King Shen roared, his whip flying towards the old man, who grabbed the whip and tugged.

King Shen smirked,letting go of his whip and allowing it to fly towards the old man. Then King Shen formed a strange hand seal, shouting loudly.

"Detonate!" King Shen screamed, the whip suddenly exploding into shrapnel. The old blood path man screamed as his hands were shredded by the flying metal. King Shen blurred forward, slamming his hand into the chest of the old man, tearing his heart out. The old man fell onto his back, blood leaking out of the hole in his chest.

By the time Achille and the rest arrived, the old man was thoroughly dead. King Shen solemnly walked over to Achille, before unexpectedly bowing deeply to him.

"This King thanks you deeply, Junior- no, Sir Adephos," King Shen said. "If it weren't for your help, I would have not been able to find that blood path bastard. Once I left the city, who knows how much Death and destruction he could have wreaked?! I will forever be grateful to you."

"No need to thank me," Achille said awkwardly. "I was just doing my job."

"Well, your 'job' saved hundreds of thousands of lives," King Shen said. "As your reward for saving the city, I would like to offer you my daughters hand in marriage!"

Achille's eyes widened. He had not expected that. Achille was at a loss for what to do, when Caius stepped forward.

"While I'm sure Achille would be honoured to marry your daughter, he would first need his parent's permission," Caius said. "How about this, when we return to the can, we will ask his father for permission and if he agrees we will go ahead with the marriage."

King Shen, smart enough to take the polite refusal for what it was, nodded disappointed.

"Of course. One can not marry without their parent's blessing," King Shen chuckled.

"Then we will have to be off," Caius said. "May we meet again."

The Senior Mechanikos led Achille and the rest of the Array-Engineers to the gate of the city, before whistling loudly.

The massive heads of the Turtle Dust Sadoworms broke free from the sand, the twin sandworms rising from the earth. Slowly they began the journey to return to the Golde Devil clan lands.


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Achille walked through the desert alone, covered in a robe. The only thing he carried with him was a box of Array-crafting tools. Achille had been sent to fix a misaligned Array near the edge of the clan lands. Achille looked around, the sand failing to hide the flowing blue lines of Qi under the desert from his gaze. The beautiful array served the purpose of gathering moisture from the air and directing it to the farmlands up north.

Achille took out a small shovel, begging to dig the thick, grainy sand off of the Array lines. The hot sun beat down on him, the cooling Array on his clothing doing little to relieve it. Achille, having finishes shovelling sand off of the Array got to work, immersing himself in the job.

Fix that rune, re-set that circle, thicken those lines, cut that- Achille screamed, a horrible sharp pain shooting through his stomach. Achille looked, down, a sabre having stabbed right through his gut. A boot slammed into the back of his head, knocking him to the floor. Achille desperately tried to push himself up, but the boot slammed into his head over and over, his brain sloshing around in his skull.

Another pair of hands grabbed Achille's fine linen robe, tearing it off his body.

"Heh, heh," a gravely chuckled.

Not that Achille could hear him over the pounding in his ears as the world went black.

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As a new family, the Adephos felt lineage had much to prove to the other branches of the clan. While the Adephos family had built its reputation up high with the many talents born from the clan, it's fame still fell behind the long history of the Calliste, the sheer connections of the Sarantapechos or the prestige of the Myia.

Due to that, the Adephos family were constantly sniffing for new ways to prove themselves and gain a reputation, even if it meant spending huge amounts of wealth. Gorgeous Adephos had built a large shipping company and stuck in fingers in hundreds of small businesses, so the Adephos did not lack for wealth, even compared to many of the most wealthy lines of the clan, they Adephos were filthy rich.

They had libraries commissioned, hospitals built, schools founded, all donated to the public, with the name of Adephos proudly placed atop, with the purpose of increasing the glory, prestige and fame of the name Adephos.

Achille often felt that the family was made up of showoffs, braggarts and people who otherwise lacked tact. Yet, Achille still appreciated the benefits that came with the name. Ever since his talent had begun to shine, and the Adephos, hungry for glory as ever, welcomed him as a member instead of an exile, he would often be given special treatment.

Looking for a book in one of the many Adephos libraries? He would get it regardless of who had it booked. Broke a bone while training? First-class treatment in any Adephos hospital, regardless of how many were sicker than him.

Right now, Achille was grateful for that influence more than ever. As he lay in a hospital bed, barely able to move or see, dozens of doctors operated above him, pouring rare and expensive medical herbs into his wounds without care. According to the doctors, the special treatment would cut his recovery down by half, from forty years to twenty years. No ordinary person could have afforded so many rare herbs, but the Adephos family had decided Achille's talent was worth some crazy spending.

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@occipitallobe I would like to ask for a fate bonus for this one
 
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