Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Acis Drivas [DEAD] - Good Seed Background
Good Seed Submission.
Name:Acis Drivas
Age: 36 (4th Heavenstage)
Background: Son of a pair of clan foundation building array carvers, Acis never had any talent for the art. Instead he found himself drawn to nature and found his talent as a spirit herd gatherer.

Acis is a small forgettable boy who is very shy. He has recently awoken to the first heavenstage and his parents have forced him to join the clan legions to make something of himself, but all Acis wants to do is spend time in nature and discover new spirit herbs.

Overall concept: Primarily a spirit herb gatherer who has been forced into the clan military to live up to the family name.

Good Seed Bonus: Spirit Bond to a desert wolf that will progress with him and helps with hunting for spirit herbs.
 
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Achille Adephos - Good Seed Background
Back Story: Achille was the born son of an unimportant Foundation Establishment Cultivator. By blood, he was the Great-Great grandson of the Protostrator, but his family lived a rather humble life compared to the other members of the extremely wealthy Adephos lineage. Achille's father Barak Adephos had lacked talent, and as a result ended up losing the support of the family, living with his wife Meline and son on the outskirts of the Adephos family land.

Achille Adephos was not good at talking. He had trouble understanding people. People were irrational, emotional, unexpected. Arrays were not. From the moment he had been able to talk, he had lived, breathed and spoke formations. Arrays were not like people, they would never change, never act unexpected, they followed clear and sensible rules.

Ever since he had been born, he had been able to understand Arrays. They just clicked with him. He could look at formation, feel it's Qi and read it like it was a book. Much like musicians could be born with perfect pitch, the ability to hear and decipher notes by ear, Achille had the ability to understand Arrays in a way no one else could understand.

From a young age, he had played with arrays, designing and creating small formations to clean his room, to keep his dinner warm when he was out and to warn him when his parents were near when he should have been asleep. It was only when he grew older, becoming twelve he realized other people could not do what he did, could not see the shimmering and delicate hands of arrays and decipher them.

As such, he had grown apart from the other members of his clan, those who were different from him. That was okay. More time to work on arrays. He had grown arrogant and unbridled in his isolation. Until one day, one his thirteenth birthday when the Prostrator had shown him the Glass Spear Array that covered the entire clan. Achille had never seen such majesty and beauty. An array so large and complex he could barely understand it. It was at that moment he felt his love for the clan reignite and he realized he was not alone.

Achille would later join the Array-Engineer Corps, quickly achieving the rank of a Junior Mechnaaikos and gaining a reputation as a genius. On his first mission outside the clan, he aided in preparing the Blood Path Detection Array of the Shen Kingdom, which allowed King Shen to find and kill a Great Circle Foundation Establishment Blood Path soldier who had been hidden in Shen Dou, the capital of the Shen Kingdom.

During a routine mission to repair an irrigational array on the edge of the clan lands, he was ambushed by a group fo bandits and left comatose for nearly twenty years. It would have been longer, but at that point, the Adephos family opened their treasury and ensured he received the best treatment possible.

Once recovered, he headed out into the desert to breakthrough to the tenth heaven stage, only to be ambushed by a Snow-Eyed Desert Fox and be sucked into an illusory world. Unlike most who would die, it only helped strengthen Achille's Will and his Dao of Rebellion.

Once he escaped, he broke through to the tenth heaven stage and aided in fighting off the Devil Bee invasion, creating an Array that killed hundreds of Devil Bee's.

In between missions, Achille Adephos takes place in competitive fishing tournaments, earning him the title of 'The Youths Heaenly Fishing King' and a Will of Albatross Flying Fish Pill, among other things.

The Adephos Family: Founded by a talented but low-status man named Geourgus Adephos who ended up marrying the daughter of the Prostrator and creating a powerful lineage. Due to Geourgus's smart investment and rapidly expanding business, the Adephos are one of the wealthiest lineages in the clan, but due to their young age and short inheritance the feel they lack status. Thus the Adephos pour a monstrous amount of wealth into sponsoring talents building libraries, schools, hospitals and other things that will increase their fame and prestige.


Overall High Concept: The descendant of the Prostrator, Achille is extremely intelligent. Born with the unique power to understand arrays on a deep level, he seeks to master the art of Array-Crafting and uncover the secrets and mysteries of the art. Achille is an 'overheard' character, with the ability to throw out huge amounts of wealth at his problems, and so overprepared he has an array for every situation.

All Turns:
--Turn 1: :
Exceptional talent in cultivating. Reached the 8th Heavenstage in 20 years. Was sent to Shen Kingdom to assist in repairing Blood Path Detection Arrays, King Shen offered his eldest daughter's hand in marriage after this helped catch and kill a Blood Path Foundation Building cultivator in the Great Circle. Advise we do not allow - an Adephos is worth more than a mere Shen.

--Turn 2: Reached 9th Heavenstage. Was ready to break through to Foundation Building, but was building a new array, and was attacked by bandits mid-construction. It collapsed on him, wounding him badly. He was comatose, and was estimated to spend most of the next 20 years recovering. Originally estimated 40 years to recover wounds fully. However, the Adephos branch of the Clan spent wildly on him, and managed to heal him to a degree. He is merely badly wounded, and will spend only 20 years to recover from his wounds fully.

--Turn 3: Achille Adephos [1 turn from breaking through]. Remains at 9th Heaven stage. Fortuitous encounter, meeting a Snow-Eyed Desert Fox. Such creatures are known for their powerful dream realms, in which cultivators often waste and die, dreaming forever under their glare. Achille managed to survive, and used the subjective century of time within the dream realm as experience to solidify his Dao. He is close to breaking through.

--Turn 4; Achille Adephos
Omake reward - Obtained the Will of Albatross Flying Fish Pill as a reward for his victory in a fishing contest. This has strengthened his Dao-Heart and firmed his will.
Fate - Excellent. Built an array to assist in the south, allowing almost one hundred additional Devil Bee cultivators to be caught and killed. Rewarded with an Array Scribing Anthive, a hive of ants capable of using miniature tools to follow cultivator instructions in building and repairing arrays.
Cultivation - Reached the 10th Heavenstage of Qi Condensation. [4 turns from 11th]. [8 turns from breaking through] [2 treasures from breaking through]
Health - Currently healthy.

Current Status as of Turn 16: Core Formation Misty Core(Early)

Age:
360
Items: 2 Lifesaving Treasure, Array-Scribing Anthive, Stone Fiddle
Health: Healthy
Willpower: Permanently boosted by Will of Albatross Flying Fish Pill
Dao: Rebellion

Starting Perk:
Array Whisperer, the ability to read and understand arrays on an instinctual level
Completed Omake; Total Word Count: 40,820 Words
Turn 1Achille 1: Unbridled and Unbroken: 3.9K words: Omake Bonus = Cultivation Speed Boost
Turn 2:Achille 2: Outwards and Inwards: 2.1k words: Omake Bonus = Fate Bonus
Turn 3:Achille 3: Decisions and Discovery: 1.4k words: Omake Bonus = Lifesaving Treasure;
---------Achille 4: Blood and Bethrohal: 1.1k words: Omake Bonus = Fate Bonus
---------Achille 5: A cliche Xianxia tournament... of fishing?: 1.5K words: Omake Bonus = Fate Bonus.
Turn 4: Achille 5.1: A cliche Xianxia tournament; tensions rise!: 1.8K words: Omake Bonus = Permanent Willpower/Daoheart Bonus
-----------Achille Adephos 6: Thesis I: 1.2K words: Omake Bonus = Fate Bonus.
-----------Achille 7: A World of Death and Desolation:1.1K words: Omake Bonus = Fate Roll
Turn 5: Achille 8: Treeline Shadows: 710 words: Omake Bonus: Life-Saving Treasure
---------Turn 16: Achille 8.2: The Mortal Realm
Turn 6: None
Turn 7: None
Turn 8: None
Turn 9: None
Turn 10: None
Turn 11: At the Feet of the Master Collab: 1570 words: Omake Bonus: Life-Saving Treasure
Turn 12: War Material Collab: 1850 words: Omake Bonus: Cultivation Boost(Changed to Healing Treasure)
Turn 13: Ending and Beginnings Collab: 20515 words: Omake Bonus: Life-Saving Treasure
Turn 14: One... Two... Three Heads Singing In A Choir Collab: 1655 words: Omake Bonus: Cultivation Boost
Turn 15: None
Turn 16: Achille 8.2: The Mortal Realm: 1322 words: Omake Bonus: Tribulation Treasure
 
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Achille Adephos 1 - Unbridled and Unbroken
Achille Adephos
Unbridled and Unbroken


Achille Adephos carefully moved with the practiced ease of someone many times his age. The needle within his hand elegantly carved an array onto a small metal bird. After dozens of hours, he had completed it.

Achille retrieved a small spirit stone from his pocket, placing it within the hollow metal bird. A whirring sound poured out of the bird as it came to life, flying about his room and occasionally letting out chirps.

Achille watched with a contented smile as the bird flew around his workshop, the dull bronze of the bird contrasting to the sunny yellow of his brightly illuminated room. He suddenly frowned, standing up and grabbing the bird. A small burst of Qi applied to the array and the bird ceased movement. Achille reached within the bird, grabbing the spirit stone within.

A small hair-crack in the array had been leaking Qi. At that rate, the array would have failed within only a few hours. Achille did not mind. He would merely do better next time.

"Achille, come for dinner!" his mother voice called

Achille sighed, placing his bird-array down on his workbench. Streams of bright sunlight poured in through the windows, illuminating the many, many loose sheets and documents that contained Achille's array ideas. As much as he would like to spend twenty-four hours a day working on his formations, he still had a duty to his family.

Achille opened the door of his workshop, briskly walking out of it and towards the kitchen.

Sitting at an oversize dinner table was his mother and father. Achille's father Barak Adephos sat on one hair, his green patina, the signature of those with the Bronze blood standing out in the dull colours of his home. Barak Adephos was at the Mid realm of Foundation Establishment despite being over three hundred and thirty. His father's lack of any appreciable talent was the reason Achille and his family lived in a small house at the edge of the clan's land despite being descendants of one of the most powerful bloodlines in the clan.

Achille's mother, Meline Adephos sat next to his father, smiling warmly at him.

"Achille, what did I tell you about working late," Meline admonished. "You know what they say. 'A man who misses meals misses success'!"

"Yes, mother," Achille replied, bowing his head respectfully.

Achille's mother sighed, placing a bowl of Dawn-cry congee in front of him. Achille sighed. As much as he hated the taste of the dish made from desert flowers, his mother swore by its health benefits and he had been forced to eat it daily for his entire life.

Slowly and robotically, Achille shovelled the greenish mushy substance into his mouth, trying not to gag at the sandy texture and nauseating taste. The dinner passed in silence, as these dinners often did. Achille did not mind the silence. His mind worked best in silence, the biological computer subconsciously refining ideas and concepts that would become Achille's next projects.

"You're going to be thirteen soon," Achille's father said.

". . . Yes, I am." Achille confirmed, before turning his head back to his food.

"When someone says something like that, you're supposed to say something like 'why are you asking'," Barak said, sighing after minutes of silence

"I don't get it. If you wanted me to know something, why didn't you just tell me instead of waiting for me to ask something," Achille said, not raising his head from his food.

" . . . I don't know, it's just the way you talk to someone," Barak said, placing his head in his hands.

"It's a waste of time," Achille said. "We've wasted more than four hundred seconds already that we could have saved if you had just cut to the chase."

"It's not that simple. When you're talking to someone you have to observe niceties, be polite, and slowly lead them to things," Barak said.

This time Achille did not respond, attempting to finish his food as quickly as possible.

"Alright, I was going to say, that your Great-Great-grandfather will be coming to see you on your thirteenth birthday," Barak said. "He does that for all those of his bloodline."

Achille nodding his head unmoved. Achille's Great-Great-Grandfather was Ioannes Vatatzes, the most powerful elder in the sect, boasting a cultivation of Great Circle Core Formation. He was the Protostrator of the Golden Devils, head of its armies. However, for all his lauded cultivation, he was still just an ordinary person. Someone blind to arrays and their subtle, unique beauty.

When Achille had been little, his parents had often left him on his own while they were busy. The young but mind-bogglingly intelligent boy had spent his youth reading books his father left around on arrays, drawing up his own prototypes. Before he knew it, his malleable infant mind had adapted to arrays in a unique way, learning to read and understand them the same way a native speaker could instinctively understand words or a musician could hear individual pitches in a way the layman could not.

Arrays were the clan's bread and butter, but they were outsiders to the art. They had to painstakingly study for decades to learn even the most basic of formations.

When Achille had been nine, his parents had taken him to see a demonstration. A talented young formation master had been showing off a newly created array he called the Quicksand array. It was meant to gather water and sand and artificially create deadly swamps of quicksand. Achille had taken one look at it and determined it would not work. The carvings meant to halt the intake of water from the environment were hand-carved so crudely that some were almost a whole millimetre too large. It was a mistake that would be fatal to the performance of the Array.

"Mr., your Array won't work!" Achille had cried out.

"Really? And you think a mortal child like you knows more about arrays than a Centurion like me?" the array-crafter had scoffed angrily, having felt insulted by Achille's challenge.

"The lines at the bottom are not uniform," Achille said. "Can't you see that?"

The array-master had taken out a toll and measured the lines of the array, eventually deciding that Achille was wrong. When the array had been activated, courtesy of a small pile of spirit stones, it quickly began to flood, failing to stop gathering water.

"Father, why didn't he just read it and see the error?" Achille had asked his father.

"Read it? Achille, you can't just read arrays. It requires precise and accurate measurements. You need special tools to make sure everything is exactly right," his father had explained.

At first, Achille had not been able to comprehend the idea that others could not see what he saw like a blind person could not fathom what sight was like. Yet, eventually, he began to understand.

He was special. Unique. Alone.

No matter how impressive Achille's Great-Great-Grandfather was, he was a blind man compared to Achille.

Having finished his meal, Achille returned to his workshop. There was work to be done

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On the morning of his thirteenth birthday. Achille stood alone atop his home's room. Within his palm sat the bird-array he had been working on. A freshly carved array-plate replaced the faulty one and Achille was eager to test it out. A burst of Qi to it's back and the array's whirred to life, the metal bird leaping off his palm and resuming the flight Achille had cut off previously.

Achille watched as the bird flew towards a wrinkly palm. Achille's eyes widened and he looked around noticing an elderly man seated next to him.

The man was old and bald, deep wrinkles adorning his face. The green patina of the clan covered his face and skin in splotches, yet paradoxically his beard was a brilliant, glimmering bronze that shone and glistened in the sun.

The old man looked at Achille's bird deeply, humming and hawing as he inspected it.

"You're interested in arrays, boy?" the man asked, amused. "I'm shocked to see one so young yet already so skilled in our clan's ways."

Most would be distrustful of mysterious strangers, but not those of the Golden Devil Clan. All those who held the old Bronze blood within their veins were as one and there was no room for mistrust amongst the clan.

"Yes," Achille asked simply. "Who are you?"

"I am your Great-Great-Grandfather," the old man chuckled. "You may call me Elder or Prostrator."

"Yes, Prostrator," Achille said, giving him a formal salute.

"Now boy, you are thirteen no? Soon you will begin your training as a Legionnaire. I always come to meet my descendants before they join the Legion to offer some choice words of advice," the Prostrator said. "Above all else, remember this. You are not alone. So long as the Bronze blood flows through you, then you are part of something greater. We fight in mighty formations and under world-sundering arrays. A Golden Devil is never alone, and so long as we stand together, not even the will of Heaven can strike us down.

As he spoke, a majestic aura rose up from the Prostrator. It was the aura of a veteran, a leader, a general. Someone who had fought a hundred battles, spilling blood side by side with his clanmates and fellow Legionnaires. This was the Prosecutor, the man who led the Legion, above even Centurions like Achille's father and the Legates who stood above him.

Yet, Achille knew that the Prostrator was wrong. He was alone. Like the fable of the one-eyed king living in a world of the blind.

Somehow the Prostrator seemed to sense his thoughts and let out a rumbling chuckle, his bronze skin vibrating.

"You don't believe me, do you boy? I suppose no matter how much I try to teach the younger generation, some lessons can only be learnt, not taught. Lecturing always was more of Manuel's strong point," the Prostrator said. "You like array's boy? Why don't you let me show you the mightiest array the clan has."

The Prostrator waved his palm, the air rippling like the surface of a stormy sea as Qi roiled out of him. Dense black text began to fill the air as if ink was bleeding out of the sky itself. The ink formed a massive circle, millions upon millions of tiny characters, command, Arrays.

For the first time, Achille was left dumbfounded. How could such an array even exist? What principles were behind its creation? Although he could read it, he could not understand it. The array was far too complex. So powerful it made the projects he had been oh so proud of look like trash.

For the first time, faced with an Array beyond him, Achille panicked.

"What is that? How does it work? Who made it?" he asked, bombarding his ancestry with questions.

"This is called the Shattering Glass Spear Array. It is an array that covers the entire region. It turns the sand of the desert into Glass Spears that can kill a Core Formation cultivator from miles away," the Prostrator explained. "It was made by the combined efforts of hundreds of top array-crafters, each one a master in their own right. Yet, when all of them came together, Bronze working next to Bronze, a miracle was crafted!"

Achille fell to his knees, his mind desperately attempting, and failing, to unravel the array before him.

Slowly the array faded from the air, accompanied by the rumbling chuckle of the Prostrator.

"That little show probably cost me dozens of spirit stones, but if it helped the youth of our clan, I'm sure old manual won't mind," the Prostrator smiled.

Achille stood up, having failed to comprehend the profundity of the formation It seemed to run on spirit stones, yet there was also an atmospheric component-

Achille shook his head, cutting himself off from heading further down the rabbit hole. Slowly, the young teen looked up at the bronze-bearded old man. Achille bowed his head in shame.

"To think such an Array could exist- and to think I was so arrogant before. I suppose this is what my father meant when he said 'I had eyes but could not see Mount. Tai'" Achille admitted to himself sadly.

How could he continue to call himself an array-crafter when he was so-

A strong metallic hand ruffled his hair.

"Don't be so down, boy. You may face setbacks and disasters, but you are one of us! Regardless of what your last name says, you're a Vatatzes. When a Vatatzes gets pushed down, we stand right back up and spit in the faces of those who pushed us down, be it the heavens themselves or merely an enemy sect!" the Prostrator said.

Achille looked upwards, the sight of the immaculately groomed Prostrator backed by the light of the sun, and for the first time he felt,

'Maybe I'm not as alone as I thought'.

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Achille sat once more at his brightly lit workplace. Several bird-Automaton floating around his room, chirping brightly. Achille had noticed that the pleasant melody of the bird songs helped him work.

And what work it was. A massive sheet of paper lay sprawled across the floor, covering a good ten feet. A pile of tools lay next to it, various ink brushes and pots, measuring tools and books. This was his Magnum Opus.

Ever since he had seen the brilliant, all-encompassing beauty of the Shattering Glass Spear Array, he could not forget it, even in his dreams. The endlessly complex array dominated his thoughts and consumed his mind. Achille could only understand a fragment of the array, but from it, endless ideas had sprung from his mind.

Eventually, he had created the concept of this Array, remembering the words of his old ancestors. It was to be called the Glass Spear Unbridled Array. Unlike any other array Achille knew of, it could be used by cultivators of any level. When faced with more Qi than it could handle, the excess power would be converted into more array, creating a self-repeating pattern of expansion. It was an array fit for anyone and everyone in the sect, from the lowliest of Legionnaires to the highest of Elders.

The array would gather the dust that spilled endlessly from the desert and fashion the useless sand into spears of great might that would lance out at those who dared approach it.

Achille's hand-finished placing the last touches in his notebook. The little green book contained each and every array he had ever created, from the light-colour array he had carved onto his toys as a child to the arrays that covered the Automatons that filled his workshop.

Achille stood up, walking over to where the massive paper sat. His trained and callused hand picked up a thick brush as he dipped it into a pot of black ink. It was time.

Hours turned into days and days into weeks as he slowly and painstakingly wrote out the array that had previously only existed within his mind. Not a single mistake or error covered the array by the time he had finished. Tens of thousands of inked characters and commands covered the array, interweaving inter a lattice that appeared to be the shape of a wavy desert dune.

Finally, Achille had finished his greatest Array yet. Normally, Achille would have simply moved on to his next project, but the words of his Great-Great-Grandfather stuck with him. He was not alone, and even if he was, he would defy that fate.

Achille walked outside his workshop, into the dimly light and dull house he lived. Sometimes they felt like two different worlds. Achille walked into his mother's room, where she was seated in meditation.

"Mother, there is something I would like to show you," the boy said, bowing his head in greeting.

Achille's mother, Meline opened her eyes wide in shock. That was a first. She stood up from her meditative position and she looked expectantly at her son.

"Really? What is it sweetheart?" his mother asked after waiting for him to continue for a minute.

Achille shook his head, a smile inexplicably forming on his lips.

"Come. You'll see!" he said, grabbing his mother by the hands and leading her into his workspace.

Achille's mother looked around his workshop, her eyes flicking to the chirping birds flying around, and then to the massive array that covered the floor. She let out a small gasp in admiration as she began to admire the Array.

"It's wonderful, dear," Achille's mother said, smiling sweetly. "I'll be able to brag to all my sisters about my little genius!"

Achille blushed slightly in embarrassment, turning his head away from his mother, who hugged him tightly.

"Let's show your Father," Meline said.

Achille shook his head in exasperation. When his mother got going, few things could stop her.

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Achille walked down the long, sandy roads of the clan's lands. Today he began mandatory legion training. His father had given him a brief explanation of the upcoming procedures, but many of the details still eluded him.

As Achille walked, he caught sight of merchants from the Hua Empire, garbed in the dusky brown robes that they were known for. The subtle smell of spices drifted out from the merchant's wagon. Achille's stomach rumbled. The delicious foreign luxuries of the far-flung empire far outpaced his mother's congee, 'healthy' as she claimed it to be.

"How much for a meal?" Achille asked the merchant's, mouth-watering.

"Twelve Drachma for a cut of Beef, fourteen for Mutton," one of the merchants replied.

Achille reached into his pouch, grabbing a handful of the small gold coinage. Though cultivators traded in spirit stones and beast cores, rare medicines and herbs, mortals like these still used good old gold coins such as the Drachma that most in the desert used, a currency introduced by the Golden Devil Clan.

The merchant grateful accepted the coins, reaching into his wagon to retrieve a leg of beef carefully soaked in rare verbs. The mouth-watering scent drifted to Achille's nose. Achille hastily bit off a chunk of the meat, feeling the tender animal flesh practically melt in his mouth.

"This is quite good," Achille asked. "What is it?"

"This is called Hua Lumb, it is a traditional food in the Hua empire," the merchant explained.

Achille nodded happily. Now he knew what to look for next time he visited a Bazaar. Having finished his meal, Achille finally arrived at his destination.

A massive gated field filled with dozens of bronze-skinned children, surrounding a man dressed in the armour that would denote him to be a Centurion, someone at the same level as Achille's own father.

"You're late, Aspirant," the Centurion said coldly, his voice projecting across the field.

"My apologies, Sir!" Achille said, formally saluting the Centurion, who ignored him.

"Now, all of you come with me," the Centurion ordered briskly.

Achille and the other children trailed behind the Centurion as he led them off the field towards a massive bronze spire. Thick gates covered it, and ever more Centurions surrounded the fortress of solid metal.

This was the heart of the clan, the Dawn Fortress. Here resides the leadership of the clan, old monsters who age numbered in the triple quadruple digits.

Achille and the other entered the fortress, their blood boiling. For what Golden Devil Youth would not be in awe of the monument of glory in the center of the clan's land?

The Centurion led them into a hall. A large array covered a platform. Achille could tell just by looking at it that it would measure the purity of one's bronze blood. Achille's own bloodline was top-notch in the clan, meaning he had nothing to worry about. However, there was still the ever-present worry Achille would be like his father and fail to inherit the power of the Bronze Blood.

A man walked out into the room, his feet floating in the air. Achille whistled silently. Although Achille had never seen him, the sheer presence and dignity the man walked with could only mean one thing. This was the de--facto head of the Golden Devil Clan, Grand Elder Manuel Konstantinos.

"Welcome all of you Aspirants. Today is a very special day. Today is the day you begin your journey as Legionnaires. The bonds you forge here will carry on with you till death. Once, I myself stood where you stood, where all Golden Devils stood and I took this very test. No matter your results, know one thing. You are a Golden Devil, and from this moment onwards, you will also be a Legionnaire. A member of the most glorious army to ever walk this world! When you stand united with your Centuria even gods shall be felled!" the Grand Elder declared, his every word reverberating in Achille's very soul.

The speech left Achille's blood boiling with patriotism. The history of the Legion surely stretched back eras. Achille had the feeling he was a part of something more than himself.

"Achille Adephos!" the Centurion barked, shocking Achille out of his patriotic fervour. Achille's first and last name both started with an A, the first letter of the Clans alphabet, so he always went first in lines like this.

"Aspirant, begin with what you consider to be your greatest skills," the Centurion asked.

"Arrays, sir!" Achille said. "I am also a fair hand at metal-casting and item forging."

"Any combat training?" the Centurion asked.

"Not much sir. I can handle a spear decently, but little else," Achille admitted.

"Education?" the Centurion asked, continuing.

"I can read Peng And Hua, and of course I can read our language," Achille said. "I am well educated in science, mathematics and chemistry, all the skills one needs to make Arrays, sir."

The Centurion nodded and he scribbled on a sheet of paper.

"Now, place your hand above this array," the Centurion said. Achille did so and he winced slightly as a dagger pierced his fingers.

"Impressive, you must be the kid of some big wig. This is extremely high purity blood. The Bronze should manifest in the second Heaven-stage," the Centurion said, whistling slightly.

"I'll put you down for the Array Engineers. They're always looking for more," the Centurion said.

Achille nodded and saluted. That had pretty much been what he had expected. Still, the idea of being able to give it his all in array-crafting surrounded by peers and like-minded individuals sounded great to Achille. Not only could he serve the Clan, he could do so while also pursuing his own passions.

Achille smiled. This was only the beginning of his cultivation Journey.

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Damn, that took way longer than expected. This is my own little contribution to the omake universe being built up. If there is anything within it incorrect/against canon, I will edit and fix it, @occipitallobe

Alectai, you may defeated the Rebel Cause, but we still live on!
 
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Achille Adephos 2 - Outwards and Inwards
Achille Adephos II
Achille Adephos II - Outwards and Inwards

Achille Adephos. Exceptional talent in cultivating. Reached the 8th Heavenstage in 20 years. Was sent to Shen Kingdom to assist in repairing Blood Path Detection Arrays, King Shen offered his eldest daughters hand in marriage after this helped catch and kill a Blood Path Foundation Building cultivator in the Great Circle. Advise we do not allow - an Adephos is worth more than a mere Shen.

I can work with this.

I've decided to use the word 'Mechanikos', greek for Engineer to refer to Array related positions, to keep to the greek theme.


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Achille breathed deeply. In and out. In and out. The everpresent humming of a Qi-gathering array underneath him did not distract from his goal. Within Achille's body, Qi churned, flowing through the channels of his body, to every finger, every hair, every drop of blood. Small rumbles began to pour out of the adolescent's body as he stepped forward, breaking the barrier that stood between him and the Eighth realm of Qi Condensation. Achille grunted as the pain of a breakthrough seared through his body, every nerve lit on fire for a brief moment, a single euphoric moment when the floodgates broke and he connected to the heavens and earth.

A black fog began to steam out of his every pore, bubbling filth covering his skin. From within his body, impurities were expelled and rejected, his cultivation advancing to a higher stage.

Achille stood up, flexing his muscles slightly. At the age of thirty-two, he had already reached the eighth stage of Qi Condensation. Achille allowed himself to indulge in his pride for a moment before quashing it. He was still far away from reaching his goals, from attaining the unimaginable heights he oft imagined himself reaching.

Achille sighed, stretching his body. Small drops of black fluid flew off his powerful physique like a dog drying itself of water. Most would be disgusted to be covered in such concentrated filth, but not a cultivator. After experiencing disgust so many times, one would become numb to it.

Achille released a single burst of Qi from the sole of his heel, activating a small Shower Array. Water began to pour out of the roof, slamming against Achille tanned, bronze skin. The powerful stream scrubbed him raw, removing every last remaining drop of the impurities his body had expelled.

Achille tapped his foot once more, the Array turning off. Many would call such a display wasteful or lazy, to use a tool as powerful as an Array for one's own convenience, but those people did not understand innovation. To make one's life and the life of their people easier, was that not the highest honour one could achieve? Achille had been a lonely child, but his time in the legion had hammered patriotism into him, like a blacksmith refining raw ore into a tool of shining, glimmering bronze.

Achille watched in contentment as cleaning Arrat's automatically activated, both drying the room and filtering the impurities to the special department in charge of the destruction of hazardous waste. One couldn't simply leave such stuff lying around, after all.

The beautiful symphony of dozens of small arrays collaborating in such an effortless manner left a smile on Achille's lips even as he left his home in the Array-Engineer's barracks. Achille walked through the sandy housing complex in the direction of his family home.

"If it isn't our resident genius, Junior Mechanikos Adephos! Just the man I was looking for," a familiar voice said.

Achille turned his head, bowing instinctively to the greeting of his superior officer.

"I offer my greetings to Senior Mechanikos Caius," Achille greeted, bowing his head.

As someone in Qi Condensation , Achille was a Junior Mechanikos, while Caius, who was in Foundation Establishment was a Senior Mechanikos and also Achille' direct superior.

"No need to be so formal, we're all friends here," Caius laughed boisterously before whistling. "Already you've reached the 8th Heaven stage? At only the age of thirty-two, very impressive. As expected from someone of the Prostrator's lineage. I think only that foreigner Nine Prince is outdoing you at this point. Maybe you'll be our next Elder!"

"Senior is flattering me," Achille said, bowing his head respectfully. "This junior is unworthy of your praise."

"No need to act so humble," Caius said, shaking his head. "Anyways, as for why I was looking for you, the Blood-Path Detection Array in the Shen Kingdom has begun to degrade. The elders have decided, in the name of our good relationship, to send a few Array-engineers to fix it. We'll be taking two Senior Mechanikos and five Junior Mechanikos. Of all the Junior Mechanikos, you're the best at spotting mistakes in Arrays, so I figured I'd bring you. This was you can finally get some real-life experience working on Grand-Arrays, rather than just reading dry theory. "

"Of course, sir," Achille said. "When do we leave?"

"Tomorrow at dawn. Normally I would wait a bit longer for the temperature to cool, but this year is sand storm season, so we want to get and out of Shen Kingdom before that starts. "

"Of course, Senior," Achille said. "I will be ready."

Senior Mechanikos Caius nodded his head and began to walk away. Achille trod along the sandy road, slowly speeding up until his Qi enchanted body was practically flying across the road. His bronze skin dripped with sweat, running down in streams across his skin.

Eventually, Achille arrived at his family lands. Achille's father was a member of the Adephos family, a relatively new family that had been created when Georgus Adephos, a highly talented member of the clan had married the daughter of Prostrator Vatatzez. They had had many children, who had many children and in just three generations the Adephos clan had turned from a no-name family to a powerful and influential part of the clan, consistently producing high-quality cultivators. Achille's father had been an exception to the rule, having little talent and a thin bloodline. Due to this, his branch of the family lived on a small house on the outskirts of the Adephos family lands, isolated from the clan.

However, Achille was becoming something of a rising star in the clan, and slowly the Adephos family's interest in him was growing, as they started to invite his family to events and parties they had previously been excluded from. Achille's father had pragmatically accepted the olive branch. As much as he resented the Adephos family as a whole, having their support meant free resources that would allow his son to walk further along the path of cultivation. Achille himself had little interest in the complicated politics of the family. So long as he could cultivate and work on his arrays; he didn't particularly care whether or not the family as a whole cared about him.

Achille knocked on the door of his father's house. A few moments later the smiling face of his mother, Melinda Adephos greeted him.

"Achille!" she squealed, engulfing him in a hug. "You're finally back!"

"Yes, mother," Achille said, returning her hug.

Achille had been in seclusion for the past few months working on his cultivation and hadn't been able to see his family as a result.

"Your father will be happy to see you," Melinda Adephos said, releasing him from her grip.

"I'm sure he will be," Achille said wryly. "But I will be leaving on an assignment tomorrow and I need to retrieve a few things from my workshop."

Although Achille's office in the Array-Engineer barracks had a workshop, Achille preferred to work in his personal workshop and it contained most of his current projects.

Achille's mother nodded, widening the door and letting him in. Achille walked through the dimly lit house, opening the door to his workshop.

Atop a bench in his workshop was a stack of metal plates covered in intricate carvings. These were Array plates, and they were what Achille was here for. These specific plates, Achille's own invention, contained large amounts of concentrated Qi. When activated by Achille they would release a powerful explosion that even someone at the great circle Qi Condensation wouldn't be able to ignore.

Achille picked up the stack of leaf thin bronze plates, opening a satchel and storing them. He slid a few into pockets, under his thigh and other places just in case he lost access to his bag during a fight.

Achille settled into his workshop for the night. It was time to prepare.

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The next morning Achille jogged across the sandy roads dressed in his uniform, tasselled bronze armour with the Adephos clan symbols emblazoned on the shoulder, along with the mark of the Golden Devil Clan atop the breastplate.

Achille reached his destination. At the gate of the Array Engineer compound, were two massive sandworms, each as tall as an elephant and a dozen times as long. These were Turtledust sandworms, a common mount used in the organ meat desert. They required nearly no water and fully matured would reach the equivalent of an early Foundation Establishment cultivator.

Atop each sandworm sat a Senior Mechanikos, including Caius and one other Achille did not recognize. Several of Achille's peers, Junior Mechanikos sat atop the back of the sandworms. Of course, each of them was far older than Achille, whose talent outstripped any of his fellow Array-Engineers. Achille leaped onto the back of Caius's sandworm, a burst of Qi from his foot launching his into the air. Achille landed on the back of the huge sandworm, the soft worm-flesh rippling under him likey jelly. The sandworms skin was not slimy as one would accept, but hard and rugged, like tanned leather.

Achille ran his hand over the sandworm, stroking it's back.

"You're late," said Markus Atripho, one of Achille's peers, though his senior in age.
"Sorry. I was finishing my preparations," Achille said, tapping the large satchel thrown over his back.

"This is a routine mission. There's no need for prep-"

"Junior Mechanikos Markus, what have I said about testing fate?" Caius interrupted, irritated. "Just because you said that I'm betting fifty gold Drachma on something going wrong."

"I'll take you up on that bet, Brother Caius," said the other Senior Mechanikos.

"Fine then, Brother Kalleidus," Caius responded.

The two engineers whistled in unison, the still sandworms slithering into life. For such massive beasts, they moved so fast, seemingly swimming across the sandy dunes. Achille drew a notebook from his satchel. He began to scribble in it, pouring his raw ideas and notes into the notebook.

"Can you keep that down? I'm trying to meditate," Markus atri[hos said, angrily glaring at Achille.

Markus had been antagonistic to Achille for as long as they had been in the same unit, jealous of the younger boys' talent. Achille snorted, drawing out an ink brush. Achille quickly drew an intricate pattern atop the notebook, pouring a single spirit stone worth of Qi into it. A strange, almost unnatural silence engulfed Achille, the Array stopping the sound from escaping. Achille returned to his work, ignoring Markus.

After nearly a week of travel, Achille arrived in Shen Dou, the capital of Shen Kingdom. The entire city was seemingly carved out of a cliff face. A huge Array-stone sat atop a Spire in the center of the city. Achille could immediately tell it was broken. The Array-Spire should be connected through underground wires to dozens of similar spires from across the kingdom, which would allow the Shen Kingdom to detect the unique Qi of the Blood path whenever they went, allowing for early warning and tracking of their most dangerous enemy.

However, it seemed that someone had deliberately snipped the lines. This was not an accident. Something more was at play. Achille narrowed his eyes.

"Senior Caius, it seemed that this Array was deliberately sabotaged. Someone snipped the Array-Spires connection to the rest of the network. I suspect that a member of the Blood Path is planning something."

"Oh? And how do you know that?" Markus asked, sneering.

"Shut up Markus," Caius said instinctively, turning his head to Achille. "Are you sure about that, Junior Achille?"

"Yes, sir!" Achille said seriously. "I am absolutely confident in my assessment."

"Then we'll have to be very careful," Caius frowned. "Everyone on your guard!"

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I would like to ask for a bonus to fate roll for this one
 
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Achille Adephos 3 - Decisions and Discovery
Achille Adephos III
Decisions and Discovery

"Then we'll have to be very careful," Caius frowned. "Everyone on your guard!"

The ten gathered Mehcnakios all had grim expressions as they rode towards the town. A huge gate blocked the entrance to Shen Dou, carved out of a massive boulder.

The twin sandworms approached the gate, slowing to a snail's pace.

Caius raised his palms, glowing bronze light-gathering into a projection of a spear over a shield, the regalia of the Legion.

The massive stone gate slowly moved open, spirit stones burning frantically to power the Arrays running it.

A dozen soldiers ran out of the gates to greet them. Their steel armour shone silver in the desert sun, the three-footed raven insignia fo Shen Kingdom proudly placed atop their hearts. One solider at their front sorted out, dressed in glimmering golden armour layered with elaborate carvings. Such armour would be relatively useless on the battlefield. Gold was a soft metal and the carvings would only decrease it's structural integrity, meaning it was ceremonial armour and the solider in the front was likely an officer of high standing rather than foot solider.

"We greet the Golden Devils!" the officer cried out, bowing.

The regular soldiers behind him all fell to thier knees in respect. That was the might that the Golden Devils commanded, especially compared to the Shen Kingdom which had but a single Core Formation king.

"I am Senior Mechanikos Kalleidus. Inform King Shen we have come to fix his Array," Kalleidus said impassively.

As someone in Mid Core Formation, King Shen was far above Kallaiudus in strength, yet due to his status as an Array-Engineer, Kaleidus was able to treat him as an equal. Normally one would have to request an audience several weeks in advance.

"Of course, at once," the officer said reaching into his pocket and grabbing slip of paper, crushing it in his palm.

'A message talisman,' Achille thought to himself. 'Although it is a little crudely made. It will stop functioning at a distance of less than a dozen miles'

Moments later, having seemingly received a response the officer smiled flatteringly.

"His majesty will see you at once, Seniors," the officer said.

"Then let's stop dilly-dallying," Kalleiuds harrumphed.

He jumped off the sandworm, the rest of the Array engineers doing the same. Caius whistled twice and the sandworms suddenly began to burrow into the sand, submerging themselves under the desert.

"Ths way, Seniors," the officer said, leading them within the massive stone city.

Achille looked around curiously. The city was packed with bustling citizens, running around. Many were carrying large wheel burrows filled with metals or gems. The Shen Kingdom was very much a mining kingdom, it's people skill in extracting metal from the rocks common within the Organ Meat Desert.

Achille and the other Mechanikos followed the gold armoured officer until they reached a fortified door. Unlike many rulers, the Shen Kingdom's palace was a heavily fortified underground complex rather than a gaudy or impressive fortress.

Achille had often heard this was because the Shen King was a coward, who was the first of his dynasty and the only Core Formation Expert in his power, making him very vulnerable, thus he hid like a rat under the ground.

The golden officer reached into his pocket, pulling out a jade amulet. The jade amulet glowed brightly for a split then darkened. The fortress dorr rumbled open, revealing an enormous tunnel. SLowly Achille and the other followed the officer through the tunnel randomly changing direction or splitting off into side tunnels. Achilles imagined that if anyone else tried to navigate the tunnels, they would probably end up dead.

Eventually, they arrived at yet another large stone gate. Achille was starting to think the theories of the paranoid and cowardly King Shen may be held some merit when the gate clicked open to reveal a massive throne room.

King Shen sat within the room, atop a massive throne with wings of thone. He was dressed in a bright yellow robe, his face immaculately clean and his hair well-groomed. Dozens of servants lined the walls around him, and twice as many guards. Achille swallowed as he looked at the guards. Each one had a horrifying Array applied to their body that would amongst other things, allow King Shen to kill them with a thought, prevent them from disobeying his orders and stop them from speaking any of his secrets.

"If it isn't the friends from the Golden Devil clan," King Shen greeted happily. "Luoshen! Bring some refreshments for our guests!"

A maid dressed in frilly clothing nodded, leaving the room.

"I'm afraid we don't have much time to chat," Caius said. "We suspect that something is afoot in your kingdom, your Majesty."

"Really? I was told by my head Engineer, that the Array had simply broken down. What do you think is going on," King Shen said, his gaze turning serious.

"It seems that the Blood Path Detection Array was deliberately sabotaged. Since that's the case, we think it's likely a powerful member of the Blood Path is planning something here," Caius said.

"What? That damned duplicitous engineer! I shall have his head for this! He must be in league with the Blood Path," King Shen roared angrily.

"Calm down," Caius said. "It's not like that. Most would be hard-pressed to tell if the Array had broken down naturally or been deliberately sabotaged. In fact, without our own Achille here, we might not have noticed!"

"Well, if the honoured guest vouch for him, I will spare the fool," King Shen said, having calmed down somewhat. "Which one of you is Achille? I want to give him my personal thanks."

"This here is Achille Adephos, a prized genius of our clan," Caius said happily, pointing to Achille.

King Shen stood up, walking over to Achille. The well-groomed king clapped Achille on the back.

"Good job! I'm sure in the future your prospects will be limitless," King Shen said. "So, how long do you think I will take to fix?"

"Normally it would take us a few weeks to isolate the issue and then and then a few hours to a few days depending on how bad it is," Caius said. "But with Achillhe help we can skip the first process."

"The Array is mostly intact. The only problem is that it's connection to the overall network is broken. It shouldn't take us longer than two hours to fix it since all we have to do is reconnect it," Achille said.

"Marvelous, Simply marvellous," King Shen congratulated. "Why don't you take this reward as a token of my appreciation?"

King Shen took out a copper coin, pressing it into Achille's hands.

"This is a Dharmic Dragon Copper. When activated, it will save your life from any single attack or damage by sacrificing itself. It's a rare and powerful life-saving treasure."

"Junior thanks your majesty for the generous gift," Achille said happily pocketing the coin. The assurance that it would save his life was simply incredible. "If you'll allow us, we can go fix the Array right now."

"Of course, of course! Don't let this old man delay you. Follow Officer Taiyi to the Array-Spire," King Shen said happily.

The gold-clad officer who had led them into the throne room began to lead them out through a separate tunnel, King Shen following the group of ten. This tunnel led right out into the center of the city, though the had to pass through multiple reinforced doors along the way.

Once they reached the city, Achille got a close look at the Array-Spire. A massively complicated Array was carved across the spire, one that would detect any Blood Paath Qi within its radius.

"Alright, everyone, time to get to work. Tools out, safety equipment on!" Caius instructed.

The group unfolded and began to work like a well-oiled machine, recarving lines of the Spire and painting elaborate symbols along the floor around it.

Eventually, all of the snipped connections had been repaired, pathways running through long underground pathways to the other spires. The Array glowed as it was repowered before the symbols and carving seemingly mettle away into the face of the stone. However, just as soon as the Array faded, blood red lines began to appear on it, a massive gonging sound pouring out of it.

"What does that mean?" Markus asked.

"It means Blood Path!" King Shen said solemnly.
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I would like to ask for a life-saving treasure for this one(lmao, wished I had asked for that earlier)
 
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Achille Adephos 4 - Blood and Betrothal
Achille Adephos IV
Blood and Betrothal


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"What does that mean?" Markus asked.

"It means Blood Path!" King Shen said solemnly, light flickering from within his gaze.

The massive Array-Spire continued to glow red, a path of red light pouring out of it. King Shen leaped into the air, a metallic shield flying up to the bottom of his feet. King Shen flew forward, propelled by the power of his magical treasure. He reached into the sleeve of his robe, pulling out a long-chained whip.

Achille and the others follow King Shen on foot, watching as he neared the end of the path of red light. King Then slashed the whip forward, slamming it into the roof of a house. The top of the house shattered into dust as King Shen flew downwards.

Within the house, a bone-thin old man sat in a pool of blood.

King Shen glared at the old man, slicing forward with his whip which slammed into the chest of the old man, sending him flying backwards.

"Blood Path bastard, it's time you handed over your life!" King Shen roared, his whip flying towards the old man, who grabbed the whip and tugged.

King Shen smirked,letting go of his whip and allowing it to fly towards the old man. Then King Shen formed a strange hand seal, shouting loudly.

"Detonate!" King Shen screamed, the whip suddenly exploding into shrapnel. The old blood path man screamed as his hands were shredded by the flying metal. King Shen blurred forward, slamming his hand into the chest of the old man, tearing his heart out. The old man fell onto his back, blood leaking out of the hole in his chest.

By the time Achille and the rest arrived, the old man was thoroughly dead. King Shen solemnly walked over to Achille, before unexpectedly bowing deeply to him.

"This King thanks you deeply, Junior- no, Sir Adephos," King Shen said. "If it weren't for your help, I would have not been able to find that blood path bastard. Once I left the city, who knows how much Death and destruction he could have wreaked?! I will forever be grateful to you."

"No need to thank me," Achille said awkwardly. "I was just doing my job."

"Well, your 'job' saved hundreds of thousands of lives," King Shen said. "As your reward for saving the city, I would like to offer you my daughters hand in marriage!"

Achille's eyes widened. He had not expected that. Achille was at a loss for what to do, when Caius stepped forward.

"While I'm sure Achille would be honoured to marry your daughter, he would first need his parent's permission," Caius said. "How about this, when we return to the can, we will ask his father for permission and if he agrees we will go ahead with the marriage."

King Shen, smart enough to take the polite refusal for what it was, nodded disappointed.

"Of course. One can not marry without their parent's blessing," King Shen chuckled.

"Then we will have to be off," Caius said. "May we meet again."

The Senior Mechanikos led Achille and the rest of the Array-Engineers to the gate of the city, before whistling loudly.

The massive heads of the Turtle Dust Sadoworms broke free from the sand, the twin sandworms rising from the earth. Slowly they began the journey to return to the Golde Devil clan lands.


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Achille walked through the desert alone, covered in a robe. The only thing he carried with him was a box of Array-crafting tools. Achille had been sent to fix a misaligned Array near the edge of the clan lands. Achille looked around, the sand failing to hide the flowing blue lines of Qi under the desert from his gaze. The beautiful array served the purpose of gathering moisture from the air and directing it to the farmlands up north.

Achille took out a small shovel, begging to dig the thick, grainy sand off of the Array lines. The hot sun beat down on him, the cooling Array on his clothing doing little to relieve it. Achille, having finishes shovelling sand off of the Array got to work, immersing himself in the job.

Fix that rune, re-set that circle, thicken those lines, cut that- Achille screamed, a horrible sharp pain shooting through his stomach. Achille looked, down, a sabre having stabbed right through his gut. A boot slammed into the back of his head, knocking him to the floor. Achille desperately tried to push himself up, but the boot slammed into his head over and over, his brain sloshing around in his skull.

Another pair of hands grabbed Achille's fine linen robe, tearing it off his body.

"Heh, heh," a gravely chuckled.

Not that Achille could hear him over the pounding in his ears as the world went black.

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As a new family, the Adephos felt lineage had much to prove to the other branches of the clan. While the Adephos family had built its reputation up high with the many talents born from the clan, it's fame still fell behind the long history of the Calliste, the sheer connections of the Sarantapechos or the prestige of the Myia.

Due to that, the Adephos family were constantly sniffing for new ways to prove themselves and gain a reputation, even if it meant spending huge amounts of wealth. Gorgeous Adephos had built a large shipping company and stuck in fingers in hundreds of small businesses, so the Adephos did not lack for wealth, even compared to many of the most wealthy lines of the clan, they Adephos were filthy rich.

They had libraries commissioned, hospitals built, schools founded, all donated to the public, with the name of Adephos proudly placed atop, with the purpose of increasing the glory, prestige and fame of the name Adephos.

Achille often felt that the family was made up of showoffs, braggarts and people who otherwise lacked tact. Yet, Achille still appreciated the benefits that came with the name. Ever since his talent had begun to shine, and the Adephos, hungry for glory as ever, welcomed him as a member instead of an exile, he would often be given special treatment.

Looking for a book in one of the many Adephos libraries? He would get it regardless of who had it booked. Broke a bone while training? First-class treatment in any Adephos hospital, regardless of how many were sicker than him.

Right now, Achille was grateful for that influence more than ever. As he lay in a hospital bed, barely able to move or see, dozens of doctors operated above him, pouring rare and expensive medical herbs into his wounds without care. According to the doctors, the special treatment would cut his recovery down by half, from forty years to twenty years. No ordinary person could have afforded so many rare herbs, but the Adephos family had decided Achille's talent was worth some crazy spending.

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@occipitallobe I would like to ask for a fate bonus for this one
 
Achille Adephos 5 - A cliche Xianxia tournament… of fishing?
Achille Adephos V
A cliche Xianxia tournament… of fishing?

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From within a vast, seemingly unending desert, a veritable ocean of course sand and jagged rocks, lay a crab. It's shell had once been smooth and polished, years of fending off f desert weather and the bite of predators having taken a toll on the shell, leaving behind a dull disk of bone. No longer did it refract brilliant under the morning glow

The crab knew not the vast history of the arid wasteland and its genesis, nor the masses that toiled, lived and died, under the harsh sunlight above. It's meagre intellect only enough to recognize food and not-food. Yet, the scuttling creature possessed instincts. Powerful instincts refined over hundreds of eons of evolution and natural selection, by the harsh struggle of living in the barren hellhole that was the Organ Meat Desert.

Now, the crab's instincts screamed at it, from someplace within its hindbrain.

'Run, run, death is coming!'

An indivisible aura of death and blood, a stench of rot and decay filled the air as the crab scuttled desperately across the loose sand of the desert. Alas, it was too late. Without warning, the sand underneath the crab began to fall, as if a great mouth had opened within the earth to swallow it whole. Loose sand poured into fill the gap and the crab, like so many other living beings, was forgotten by the desert.

Hours later, a boot stepped across the shade the crab had once lain in. It was a hunter, garbed in sandy brown robes designed to camouflage him.

He walked alone through the sand, dim red light flickering in his pupils. Perhaps the hunter had once been handsome, with a strong jawline and sharp facial features. Now all that remained left was mangled scar flesh and hideous red welts.

The man's skin was course and callused, a deeply tanned shade of brown. It was the skin of someone familiar with the desert. The hunters long ebony hair trailed over the back of his robes, fluttering in the dry desert weather.

In his left hand the man, a hunter gripped a small sackcloth satchel that oozed with dark red fluid, slowly dripping from the bag onto the bleached sand and sharp rocks below. In his other hand was gripped a long silver blade. It was curved, forming a long arc of glimmering metal.

The hunter reached his destination. A dune of sand, exactly like every other dune in godforsaken, condemned wasteland, where it was so accursed that even the very Qi in the air had abandoned it, retreating from the skies above the desert.

The tanned man threw the satchel atop the dune, waiting. Minutes, passed, then hours, then days. The sun rose and set. Then, without warning, the sack began to slowly sink into the sand, bubbling sound rising from the dune as if a great ocean lay below the sand.

Then, the ground burst apart, a horrid monstrosity of bubbling flesh and boiling blood rising out of the sand. The atrocity of flailing tendrils rose high into the sky, until it was a towering pillar of meat and bone, gazing down from above.

The writhing mass began to slowly shrink, condensing into the form of a hunched elder with a kindly smile, the type of old person one would see relaxing in a quiet library or atop a rocking chair.

The old man smiled gently at the hunter, his eyes wrinkling, only the blood-red glow within his gaze revealing the abomination that lay just below the skin.

"You've fulfilled your side of the bargain," the elderly man said. "Now that I've recovered, I'll fulfill mine."

For those who followed the deviant Blood Path, sacrificing morals and restraint and embracing the brutal darkness that lay within all men, the side effects were only as numerous as the benefits.

Decades ago the old man, a great cultivator by the name of 'Meastro Horrid' had been nearly slain, his body shot out of the sky by a terrifying spear of serrated glass. For years he had lingered within the sand, subsisting on the flesh of scorpions and snakes. Yet what he craved was human flesh and to sate his hunger he had entered into a pact with another, the hunter before him.

'I will bring you human flesh and you bring me vengeance' the pact had been sworn.

"What is it you desire?" the old man asked, smiling widely.

"Kill Achille Adephos!"

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Achille Adephos awoke in the morning, the loud buzzing of his clock rousing the Mechanikos from his slumber. Achille raised his hand, slapping down on the clock, the Arrays on it falling silent.

Achille Adephos was currently vacationing on the edge of the clan lands while recovering from his injuries. He had been ambushed by a group of bandits while repairing an Array in the outlands, left near catatonic.

Only the vast ocean of wealth poured into his recovery by the Adephos family had saved him from a far worse fate. Yet, it would still be years before Achille could resume his cultivation or anything more strenuous than normal mortal work.

Sometimes Achille missed his old life, galavanting across the desert with his fellow Legionnaires, fighting off blood path and going on fantastical adventures, but he had to stay careful while he healed.

The near-death experience had not left Achille destitute nor traumatized. Instead, it had only ignited the willpower within the boy, solidifying his Dao.

"Once I recover," Achille had sworn. "I will cultivate harder than ever before!"

With little commitment, due to his injuries, Achille was actually far freer to pursue his passions than ever before, discovering that the previously tedious and overworked man, did in fact have many hobbies that lay undiscovered.

Hobbies such as the fishing contest he would be undergoing today. Achille had found that the repetitive and slow pastime of fishing was in fact quite soothing and more than a little enjoyable.

The (relatively) young man threw on a long brightly coloured robe that would protect him from the sun and a straw hat that would keep his face under shade. He grabbed a long golden fishing rod, and a box filled with bait, amongst other things. These were all the tools Achille needed.

Achille strode out of the large, luxurious cottage he dwelt in, sauntering across the village he was in, past the fancy villas and summer homes to a large lake that lay outside the town. It was fed from an underground spring, one connected to a greater network of lakes that, as a whole that eventually fed into the great ocean.

Surrounding the lake were tens of massive bleachers, each filled with thousands of spectators. Betting booths were set up across the bleachers, where one could gamble away their excess money on the results of the match. Many stood to lose, or gain, fortunes on this event. Even Achille had taken out a large sum of money from the Adephos vault that he bet, on himself of course.

---(What follows may or may not be a cliche Xianxia tournament.)

Achille, while reading his fishing rod, heard someone scoffing behind him. The Array-engineer, whirled around to see the arrogant, always sneering face of Jonathon Aurelius.

"Well, look who showed up," Jonathon spat. "If it isn't Achille Adephos."

"It is," Achille agreed nonchalantly.

"Heh, today, it's time I finally wipe away that smug attitude," Jonathon sneered. "Are you ready to be destroyed?!"

"I think you'll find," Achille smiled. "That the one about to be destroyed today is in fact not me, rather, it is you!"

"You could have said that with eight less words you pompous prick," Jonathon shouted.

"Indeed, I could have, with fewer words, confer the same meaning that I have, with a multitude," Achille said. "But fuck you, I won't."

"Hah," Jonathon said venomously. "How about a little bet then? If I win the match today you must publicly admit defeat to me and you're a pompous, debauched, roguish, wretched, worthless, egoistic, pilgarlic, beggardly, knavish-"

"I get it, I get it," Achille cut him off. "If you win, I'll admit I'm… whatever that is, but what happens when I win?"

"Now do you see what it's like when people use more words than they need?" Jonathon asked. "Anyways, if you win I'll… give you my best fishing rod!"

A gasp rang out from the gathered crowd, who had assembled to watch the drama. Jonathon was famous for having inherited a powerful magical fishing rod from his grandfather, a renowned item-forger. It was likely worth more than the entire village!

"Alright then," Achille smiled. "It's a bet, a gamble, a venture, and dare I say it, a wager!"

"Shut up," Jonathon said. "The tournament is about to start!"

And so it was. Atop a tall platform, an announcer walked out, carrying an Array-device that would amplify his voice.

"Hello everyone! Welcome to the annual Grand-Emperor's Ten Heavens Fishing Trial! As always, the rules are thus: Each contestant has ten hours to catch as many fish as possible. The rarer a fish is the more points it's worth per gram, and whomever collects the most points by the end of the day wins the title of 'The Youth's Heavenly Fishing King' and a prize of spirit stones!" the Announcer shouted.

"It's time," Achille said, narrowing his eyes.

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@occipitallobe, here is my next omake. I would like to ask for even more boost to my fate roll.
 
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Achille Adephos 5 - The Youth’s Heavenly Fishing King
Achille Adephos VI
A cliche Xianxia tournament; tensions rise!

Now I know this wasn't too cliche since it only lasted two chapters instead of being drawn out over thirty, but I just don't have the patience to do that, so I won't.

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"Hello everyone! Welcome to the annual Grand-Emperor's Ten Heavens Fishing Trial! As always, the rules are thus: Each contestant has ten hours to catch as many fish as possible. The rarer a fish is the more points it's worth per gram, and whomever collects the most points by the end of the day wins the title of 'The Youth's Heavenly Fishing King' and a prize of spirit stones!" the Announcer shouted.

"It's time," Achille said, narrowing his eyes.

He began to run forward, towards the lake. At the same time, the twelve other participants, Jonathan included flood suit, each contestant leaping into the prepared fishing boats.

There were twelve of them, small wooden canoes laded with oars.. Achille leaped forward, his feet slamming into the inside of the canoe, transferring his forward momentum into it.

It was time for the first step in sighing! Selecting A Good Location! This phase was so integral to the process, fishing grandmasters called it the 'foundation of fishing.'

As the saying went 'even a good housewife cannot cook without rice'. Even a fishing grandmaster would be unable to catch a single trout, while with a good fishing spot, even an amateur could catch a heavenly roc.

As for how to select a good location, that was up to the individual. Some relied on instinct or math. Others simply eyeballed it. Only true fishing masters would employ special techniques to divine the best fishing location.

Luckily Achille had one of those arts. It was a special technique he had found in the depths of the Adephos library called the 'Bronze Monument Fishing Technique.'

Achille swirled Qi into his eyes, a lattice appealing in his vision. The grid encompassed the entire lake! This was the visual manifestation of the 'Bronze Monument Fishing Technique!'

Slowly, the grid began to deform, some spots rasing high in the air, while others fell. This was the indicator of what spots were best!

Achille immediately began to row towards the best spot, a murky dark part of the lake, that seemed full of mud.

"What is that Adephos body doing?" one audience member asked. "Any competent fisher will tell you, fish avoid dark and murky places like that! Don't tell me he is an absolute amatuer?"

"Of course, he stands no chance! Look at Young Master Jonathon! He has already secured what is in my humble opinion, the best location! The water is just clear enough fish will frequent it, while not being soo clear no fish would dare hide in it! He will definitely win this bet!"

"Oh! Is that the famed fishing grandmaster Xuege? If grandmaster said so, then it must be so! Quickly wife, put Little Zi's college saving on Jonathon's story! Don't hesitate, just do it!"

Since an expert had weighed in, public opinion had already shifted. Everyone immediately thought Achille was just an arrogant amateur who could not see the height of Mount Tai, while Jonathon was a fishing genius, and many people were now, having taken his victory as a given, bet fortunes on Jonathon, even those who were normally frugal. After all, who would give up free money?

Achille, who could hear the conversion of the crowd snorted in disdain. This was the so-called 'famed fishing grandmaster?' In Achille's opinion, he was just trash! Achille had absolute confidence in the 'Bronze Monument Fishing Technique', and it had never let him down.

Now it was time for the integral second phase! Picking Out the Bait! This second step was only slightly less important than the first step. Certain different fish liked certain different kinds of bait, so what kind of fish one attracted, and how many was decided by this phase!

One hundred types of fish from the 'Heaven and Earth Fishing Board' had been artificially introduced to the lake for the duration of the tournament, and skilled fishermen had already memorized the baits they liked best. Of course, of all the fish, the ones worth the most points were so rare and mysterious that no one knew what they liked. Except for Achille.

As someone born with an extraordinary golden spoon called the 'Adephos Family' in his mouth, not only had he seen these fish before, he had even eaten them!

Achille reached into his bag, retrieving a small ball of brown junk. To an outside observer, it looked like dirty trash, but to Achille' it was a great treasure.

After all, this ball of junk just happened to be the bait that the number one ranked 'Earth Guzzling Roc' loved to eat! If he could catch even a single earth Guzzling Roc, the tournament was in his hand!

"Look at Achille! What kind of bait is that? Don't tell me he has already given up and is just making a joke of the whole contest now? How contemptible!" One observer said, to the sounds of agreement.

"If you have no chance of winning, just give up!" another said. "Right now, all he is doing is spitting on the contest's reputation!"

Meanwhile, Jonathan reached into his bag to retrieve a small boll of golden silk. The moment the crowd saw it, everyone went wild.

"Is that… Don't tell me…."

"Yes, it must be so! The ultra-rare golden silkworm ball! He must be planning on catching Rank Three, the Golden Eyed Arowana! Unlike the bulk of the other contestants who are using low ranking bait to catch huge amounts of low-level fish, like the famous Jiang Heshou over there who has already caught a dozen Brown Skin trout, he is going for on big capture!"

Indeed, unlike the other contestants who had already begun to catch fish, Jonathon and Achille's spot on the ranking stayed at the bottom, though the perception fo each was as different as heaven and earth!

Jonathon: A young genus making a risky but awe-inspiring gamble!
Achille: Arrogant trash with no idea of what he was doing!

Now Achille began to the third phase of fishing, the easiest, but longest phase! Sitting Still!

He simply had to wait for something to bite! And so Achille sat, doing nothing.

He could see several of the other contestants using unique methods to catch fish, such as the current number one on the board, Herkacles Adente, who was suing a net of spiritual energy to catch fish en mass, or the second rank on the board Illusion Master Ophios Impetuim, who was using strange illusion arts to draw fish to his net.

Achille frowned. While he was not giving up on catching the Earth Guzzling Roc, he had to also guarantee his victory, and he had his own unique method to do so.

Unlike Hekacles or Ophios's, Achille's unique metho was his specialty: Arrays!

"Myriad Tributary Fishing Slaughtering Array!" Achille shouted. "Activate!"

A golden array carved his fishing rod began to glow, lines of golden Qi flowing out of it to create a box of light. ANy fish who entered into the killing zone would die!

Immediately Achille's points started to skyrocket!

Tenth place!
Eight Place!
Fifth place!

Already the other contestants were feeling the pressure of his advance and began t press forward harder.

"Don't think you'll surpass me!" Ophios shouted.

He cupped his hands, spitting blood into them.

"The secrecy fishing art passed down through my family since ancient times… Blood-Moon World, Illusory Heavens!" Ophios shouted, throwing the cupped blood into the water.

As he did so, an illusory image of a red moon formed on the surface of the water, and fish began to rush towards it, throwing their lives right into Ophios's hand.

Still, it wasn't enough to outpace Achill'es array!

Third place!
Second place!

Now Only Herakles stood between him and first place.

"You don't stand a chance of beating me," Heracles laughed. "Everyone knows the Adente family has won this contest for the last hundred years. Let me show you why!"

Heracles heaved his hands, a massive net pulling out of the water, filled to the brim with small fish, like sardines and the like.

Instantly Heracles pulled further ahead, nearly doubling his score.

"I suppose you do beat me in skill," Achille acknowledged.

But when skill failed... Throw money at the problem! When it came to being moneybags, no one beat the Adephos family!

Achille reached into his bag, pulling out a dozen pills.

"Oh, Heavens! Those are the ultra-expensive 'Skylark Blue Pills!' Each once costs as much as a small house! When they touch water, they release an aroma that fish find irresistible!"

Achile threw his hand, dozens of tiny blue pills flying into the lake. The moment they touched its surface, they exploded into clouds of blue colouring. Fish from all around the lake began to rush towards Achille boat, and right into his killing zone!

Achille points began to skyrocket, closing in on Heracles.

1100,
1300,
1450
1600!

He had reached the first place!

And with only five minutes left on the clock! It seemed Achille was going to win the tournament…
Second place!

Achille's eye jumped wide in shock, and so did everyone else's. That's because Jonathon had just jumped to the first palace!

Was this the so called 'reaching heaven in one stride?'

Could it be that Jonathon had actually caught the super rare Golden Eyed Arowana?

Indeed, looking over, Achille could see Jonathon holding a massive struggling fish, with glowing golden eyes and long fins!

Two minutes left! It seemed that Jonathon had one. After all his total points were more than double that of everyone else combined!

"It seems that Contestant Aurelias wins!" the announcer shouted.

"No, I do!" Achille shouted, drawing everyone's attention to him.

"What do you mean? Jonathan clearly wi-" Heracles interjected, before suddenly stopping eyes wide

In Achille's hand was none other than the ranked one 'Earth Guzzling Roc!'. O fishier of any repute would not be able to recognize the rarest fish on the ranking board!

Immediately the announcer mouth shut, and he stared agape. No had had ever caught that fish, during the one-thousand-year history of the tournament!

Achille points on the ranking board immediately jumped by one hundred thousand, putting him at an insurmountable advantage!

"How is that possible?" Ophios said, agape. "Even Foundation Establishment level Fisherman would have trouble catching that fish, let alone you!"

"-An amazing twist fold! In the final moments of the competition, Contestant Adephos caught the priceless Earth Guzzling Roc! We call him up to receive the first-place prize and the title of 'The Youths Heavenly Fishing King!'" the announcer shouted.

"... You bastard! What so called grandmaster!' Return me Little Zi's college money!" immediately the crowd turned on the armchair experts who had deceived them.

Achille smirked, walking over to Jonathon, who was visibly trembling.

"Now, I do surmise, that the time has come for you to relinquish the fishing rod you do treasure so much, to me!" Achille said, deliberately elongating his sentence just to screw with Johnathon!

".... Fine, But this isn't over, Adephos!" Jonathan spat. "I will have my revenge!

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(3) Tribulation Boosts. Bought with Omake. A Tribulation Boost guarantees a breakthrough from 9th Heavenstage Qi Condensation to Foundation Building. Other, more difficult paths may require more - likewise with breaking through to Core Formation, and then Nascent Soul
Does this apply to the higher levels of Qi Condensation as well? My plan is to basically get as far into Qi condensation as I can without dying of old age and then directly breakthrough to foundation establishment. If not, I would like to if I can get some kind of item that will permanently increase my willpower/Dao heart. If not, I'm fine with a generic cultivation boost.
 
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Achille Adephos 6 - Thesis I
Achille Adephos Thesis I

I decided to do some naming for Arrays, and Array conventions, just for internal use as part of Achilles omakes, since Canon doesn't yet have many details, though if any other good seeds authors want to use them, that's fine as well.


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A Thesis on Array Crafting: By Achille Adephos; Junior Mechanikos of the fourth division.

Introduction

The art of Array-Crafting is as varied as the myriad colours that fill the nighttime sky. To outsiders, the arcane lore and mystical codecis of the Array-Engineers are as impenetrable as darkness. I hope to, in this manuscript, shine a light on some of that obscure knowledge, so that it may become more accessible to the clan.

There are many unique styles of Array-Crafting, from the gigantic Grand-Arrays of the Golden Devil Clan to the information-oriented Arrays-Networks of the Shen Kingdom. To truly consider one's self a grandmaster of Array-Crafting, one must study and understand dozens of styles, techniques and tools.

Now, before we can begin to understand Arrays themselves, one must understand some common terminology.

Page One: Array-Engineer Ranking Terminology

First, allow me to break down the ranking methods of Array-Engineers, the name of someone who follows the art of Array-Crafting.

When one reaches the level of being able to consistently craft Arrays of the Qi Condensation level, that person is conferred the clan title of 'Junior Mechanikos', or what an outsider might call a 'One-Star Array-Engineer'.

Beyond that is the level of being able to craft Arrays of the Foundation Establishment level. Once one reaches this level, they are conferred the title 'Senior Mechanikos', or what an outsider might call a 'Two-Star Array-Engineer.'

Even further beyond that is the level of a Grand Mechanikos, or a 'Three-Star Array Engineer', someone able to craft Arrays at the level of Core Formation.

Laying at the pinnacle of known Array arts is what we would call a Supreme Mechanikos, or what an outsider might call a 'Four-Star Array-Engineer.' This refers to someone able to craft an Array at the level of Nascent Soul. Alas, such a master has not appeared in the clan for many centuries, though I hope to one day change that.

I'm sure there are levels beyond even that, to describe the enigmatic to the extreme, higher cultivation levels, though I dare say, such a thing will likely never be relevant to your journey as an Array-Engineer.

Page Two: Types of Arrays

Next, we must understand the various types of Arrays. There are broadly two types of Arrays. Combat Arrays, and Non-Combat Arrays, or what I like to call 'Utility Arrays'.

Combat Arrays are then customarily split into three categories, Defensive Arrays, Trap Arrays, and Battlefield Arrays.

Trap Arrays are generally small, one-time use Arrays set up, as the name sounds, like a trap. They might be fields of tiny explosive Arrays, or Arrays set up to catch game in a forest. Such things all land under the umbrella term 'Trap Array'.

Next is the so-called 'Battlefield Array,' though I find it more useful to refer to them as 'Soldier Arrays'.

They are generally small offensive Arrays inscribed into mobile Array-Plates that can be activated easily. They come in all shapes in sizes, such as the Golden Armor Array that generates translucent armour capable of blocking ten small blows, to the Sand-Shot Array, used to fire sand into an opponent's eyes. All such small arrays used by offensive troops land under the term 'Battlefield Array'.

Finally, we come to Defensive Arrays. When the term Array comes to mind, Defensive Array's are what people think of. They are the massive Arrays; centred around cities, headquarters and bases designed to defend from or repel invaders. They can be attack type Arrays such as the Shattering Glass Spear Array used to snipe enemies of the Golden Devil Clan to the Blood Path Detection Array used by smaller nations to track down any stragglers from the blood path within their land. Any such massive, non-mobile Arrays are referred to as 'Defensive Arrays'.

Beyond combat-related Arrays are Utility Arrays, or what most call 'Non-Combat Arrays'. These are any Arrays used for purposes aside from combat or anything directly related to combat. Due to how obviously varied such a field would be, most do not bother categorizing such things, so I have devised my own system, one that has begun to catch ablaze amongst the youth of the clan.

Cultivation Arrays, Transportation Arrays, Environmental Arrays, Labour Arrays. Machine Arrays, and for the extremely specific Arrays that can not be grouped in any meaningful manner, we have Miscellaneous Arrays.


Cultivation Array refers to any Array that complements one cultivation, whether it be a common Spirit Gathering Array that collects ambient Qi, to mysterious and profound formations that allow one to speak with, and challenge their Inner Demons. These all fall within the category of Cultivation Array.

Transportation Array refers to any Array related to transportation. Whether it be a teleportation array or simply a vehicle run by Arrays, like the trains of the Jiansgen Clan's land, these all fall within the category of Transportation Arrays.

Environmental Array refers to any Array related to manipulation of the environment, whether that be the terraforming Arrays used by the clan in places like the Uncast Molds, or to create fertile land in the otherwise inhospitable desert. They are Arrays used to clear the air of smoke or draw in water to high land. These all fall within the category of Environmental Arrays

Labour Array
refers to any Array that does work that is normally done by an ordinary person, such as farming, cleaning a room or chopping wood. These all Fall under the category of Labour Arrays.

Mechanical Array refers to any Array that does work normally done by a machine or tool, such as a Clock-Array that replaces an hourglass, or a camera-Array that replaces a window. These all Fall under the category of Mechanical Arrays.

Finally, we come to Miscellaneous Arrays. These simply refer to any of the overly specific Array not already categorized.

Page 3: Array Tools and Components

To craft an Array one needs tools and something to make an Array on.

An accomplished Array-Engineer must work on a myriad of surfaces, stone, wood, metal, parchment and even thread. Thus a multi-purpose Array-Crafting Tool, what we call an Ergeilio, and what an outsider would call an 'Aggregation-Hand'.

An Ergeilio is far more precise at cutting stone than any chisel, better at sewing thread than any needle and better at cutting wood than any axe. It is considered a coming of age ceremony for any Array-Engineer to craft his own, and I reckoned you do so as soon as possible. Mass-produced ones are not only lower quality but when you create your own, it will be perfectly suited for your specifications.

My own has dozens of different appliances and tools, from rulers to chisels to screwdrivers and more.

Next, we come to Array components.

Small Arrays intended to be mobile are usually placed onto Array-Plates, usually book-sized sheets of thin metal, wood or jade, though other materials can be used. Larger, but still mobile Arrays are often palace on Array-Flags, painted or even embroidered onto the flag itself.

When creating Arrays not intended to be moved, one would usually employ an Array Capstone, a large rock or boulder that has an Array carved onto it.

For much, much larger Arrays, usually exclusively for Defensive Formations intended to cover entire cities or nations bring us to Array-Spire.

Array-Spire's are massive obelisks of solid metal, connected by sturdy underground pipes. Arrays are often directly carved onto them, or even sometimes forged into the inside of the tower to protect the Array from the weather.

Page Four: The Grand Art of Array-Crafting…(To Be Continued)

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@occipitallobe I think you accidentally marked my previous omake Achille Adephos six as Achille Adephos five.
 
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Achille Adephos 7 - A world of Death and Desolation
Achille Adephos VII
A world of Death and Desolation

Achille Adephos [1 turn from breaking through]. Remains at 9th Heaven stage. Fortuitous encounter, meeting a Snow-Eyed Desert Fox. Such creatures are known for their powerful dream realms, in which cultivators often waste and die, dreaming forever under their glare. Achille managed to survive and used the subjective century of time within the dream realm as experience to solidify his Dao. He is close to breaking through.
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In the windy desert, Achille Adepho walked, storms of sand whirling around him. A small bubble of air surrounded him, deflecting the sand, a formation courtesy of his direct commander, Senior Mechanikos Caius.

Ever since Grand Mechanikos Chu Yuzi had fashioned and sold a Vile Blood Array, the budget allocated to the Array-Engineers had been increased significantly. Senior Mechanikos Caius had immediately gotten a grant to purchase enough Star-Magnet Sand to fashion Air Bubble Arrays for all four of his subordinates.

The mobile Battlefield Array would create a sand repelling bubble of air around the head, protecting one's face and eyes from the sand of the desert, even during a sand storm.

As for why Achille was so deep in the desert, the reason was his cultivation. Twenty years of his life had been wasted while he was injured, and only now was he fully recovered,

The now sixty-year-old was at the peak of the Ninth Heaven Stage, only a hair's breadth away from breaking through. He had come to the depths desert to find a nice, secluded space where he could cultivate.

Achille's eyes scanned across the dunes, finding a rocky cave carved out of a tall orange cliff face, no doubt battered into existence by untold millennia of sand storms.

Achille approached the cave, striding along the shifting course sand of the desert floor. He strode into the cave entrance, his eyes rapidly blinking as he adjusted to the deep darkness.

Achille reached into his bag, grabbing a thin sheet of metal. It was covered in dozens of tiny green gemstones. A burst of Qi poured out of his hands and the Array-Plate whirred to life, shedding bright green light.

Suddenly Achille flew backwards, shadows slamming into his gut. He looked up to see a snarling fox with pure white fur and blood-red eyes. The fox roared loudly, it's body rippling with muscles.

Achille rapidly jumped back. It seemed this cave was the den of the fox and he had just made it angry.

The fox glared at him, a strange red light flowing out of its eyes towards Achille. The moment the red light hit his retinas, Achille stiffed, unable to look away. He felt his body shut down falling into the ground as darkness filled him.

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Achille Adephos yawned, rolling over. He immediately regretted the decision feeling sharp rocks and twigs stabbed into the flesh of his back.

The golden devil stood up, pushing himself off the ground with his elbows and opening his eyes.

A cruel vista greeted him, vast jagged pillars of rock stabbing into the sky like fangs arising from the earth to devour the sun. Harsh astral winds blew black clouds across the crimson sky in which hung a massive red eye that illuminated the earth with a dark blood-like glow. Blood dripped from the eye to the ground, the fluid slow and thick, like a waterfall of honey dripping from a wound in the sky.

A dark jungle stretched out across the surface, towering trees of unimaginable rights stretching their branches across the horizon to greedily drink in the red glow.

A thick mist filled the air, obstructing Achille's vision and obstructing him from seeing how far the jungle stretched outwards.

An unnatural silence filled the air, devoid of even the most simply of buzzing. It was unsettling how loud the silence was. Achille had never truly considered it, but in life, one is nearly always surrounded by noises. The cleaning of steel on steel, the chirping of birds or even simply the sounds of leaves rustling in the wind.

Yet, here the air was silent, the world still. He could see branches of the massive trees swaying slightly in the wind, yet no noise o rustling leaves or creaking wood escaped them.

Achille shivered slightly.

'Where am I?'

The question broke through the terror that had unwittingly settled in his mind. Now was not the time to give in to hysteria. If he wanted to survive, he would need to figure out what was going on in the first place.

Achille closed his eyes reaching for the Qi, the force of life and power that resided in his body... and felt nothing.

For, perhaps the first time Achille felt true terror. It was almost numbing, the shock. The incomprehension. Then the panic set in.

"W-What? My- my Qi!" the boy gasped, his vision seeming to blacken around the edges.

Qi was the power that fueled cultivators, the lifeblood of all cultivation. It was their entire life, their entire world. To remove one's Qi was more cruel fo a punishment than even death or torture, then ripping or libs or tearing out eyes.

In this foreboding and desolate realm where the sky was red and black and the world was ever so still, even the Qi that Achille valued as much as his own life had been stolen from him.

Yet the blood-red eye still stared down at him from the sky, grim yet indifferent. As if The Eye was not bothered by his presence, as if, to it, he was merely inconsequential, an ant who would disappear in a blink of an eye.

Achille shakily stood up, gasping for air, his desperate breaths the only noise in that filled the world.

"Screw this!" Achille shouted. "I don't know where the hell I am, but I'm gonna get out of here, and when I do, I'll fucking kill you!"

The pain left Achille as fast as it had set on, replaced only by a powerful, spiteful rage. He didn't care where this place was, or who had made it. The only thing that mattered was that he would not give in, would not die here. He would rebel with all his might, and drag it down with him even if he died.

Achille surveyed his surroundings. He stood atop a small outcrop from the one the tall, curved fang mountains. It was only a few feet from the ground, and Achille was sure ven a mortal like him, without access could survive the fall uninjured.

Achille narrowed his eyes, took a deep breath, then without hesitation he jumped off the rock, and into the unknown world, he had just found himself in.
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@occipitallobe
Took your advice and released it, even though It was so short.
 
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