Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Where's the pet monkey ? 🤭

Also, to make sure it all goes through to form, we gotta send him to seduce the Jingshen's heiress

Personally I think I'll be going more 'story Aladdin' and less 'Disney Aladdin' with my take on this adventure - though really, the whole princess situation is the result of the Lamp Genie's three wishes in both versions and Tasos's genie isn't of the wish-granting kind, so that part of the story is kind of untenable /shrug.

Funnily enough though, Aladdin is originally chinese so the hook actually fits a lot with Turtle World's aesthetic.
 
Hmm, an idea.

How would Magnus react to Savvus going up and basically begging for all his BP research?
 
Demetrius Ceres 2 - Journal: Excerpts from volume 1.
Demetrius Ceres
Journal: Excerpts from volume 1.

After reaching the 6th Heavenstage I decided to write a journal that will note down a list of important events in my life, my cultivation, and my progress on my path to eradicate all-natural nature and replace it with something better. This Journal will assist me in following my Dao of Progress as it will show my own, and my organization's progress on the path I have chosen to follow.

#1 I am hungry, I will visit the blue-haired witch to see if she has anything edible in her kitchen. If I am lucky she isn't home, and one of her servants (who slacks off when the hag isn't home) will give me something to eat if I promise not to tell anyone.

#4 For the sake of earning more contribution points I have founded a little group that can work together to handle bigger jobs, and does not rely on the legions for these team-ups to occur. This will be beneficial to cultivators like me with the position of "guest" cultivator. Despite the training offered by the legions, many of us find them too rigid and we do not fit well into their command structure, as well as underappreciated clan members who are unsatisfied with their prospects. Our current number is eight, which includes the 3 cultivators who assisted observed was nearby during my fight against the foul spirit pine tree. A warrior who made a bet against me, a woman who I saw yelling at a tree, a man I found slacking in a cave, and an unconscious beggar I found on the streets. They are all between the 4th and 7th stage.

#23 After many minor missions we have finally been contracted for a bigger mission outside of the fortress. The Adephos family has hired us to gather medical herbs located in the oasis of silent peace. They want us to find the Red Spirit flower of Faithlessness, and they wish for us to recover it alive. Bonus applies for anything else of interest we bring back with us. According to Mai Fa who follows the Dao of Gossip, the Adephos are currently stocking up on high Heavenstage Tier medicine as they are suffering a shortage after patching up their favored scion after he was mauled by a bandit.

#25 As I am currently writing this we are being besieged from every corner and only the formation we have learned is stopping them from chasing us away. Something about our presence must have disturbed these black trees and these wolves with horns on their noses. We need to hold this position for 3 more days if we wish to take the flower with us alive.

#53 I have sent out thousands of missives in the last couple of months to the people of the world requesting knowledge on farming, forestry, mining, and other acts they have succeeded in that defies the nature that surrounds us. While some of the missives I have sent have been sent to normal towns where the nature around them is relatively tame, most of them have been sent areas where nature is more "unique". While the town of Freemen in the kingdom of Shen can always offer something of interest, the city of Scared Swans owned by the Hong Xuan Clan will probably offer more. I am curious about how they conquered that savage mine that had a tendency to eat people.


#84 A friend of a friend of mine had a brother who had a friend who had a coworker who practices the art of making her enemies die in agony. With these connections, I managed to obtain a meeting with the hag in a youthful body Minervina Barda. As payment for purchasing poison that could potentially injure enemy forest creatures that obtain their energy from the ground itself, I offered up my services as a one-time test subject and a favor to be traded inn in a future date. I was offered a tea that was supposed to be able to paralyze anyone that drank it while leaving their mind intact for future conversation. It had no effect on me. Between muttering to herself and snickering at jokes she did not tell I can say that Lady Barda is an interesting person.

#86 The captain is in the hall yelling about how his eyes are bleeding and his legs are feeling numb – Mai Fa

#102 I have received reports that the messengers I sent to the different areas in the battle blood cannibal sect have been eaten except for the one sent to Tyrus Fingereater who composed an interesting letter about how they combat the hostile territory and promises to send me a sample of their labor at a future date. His solutions seem to vary between Arrays and sending mortals at the problem until it solves itself.

#111 Despite not actively recruiting, a lot more cultivators from the 3rd to 5th step has decided to join us.

#122 Last year I received a request from Savvas Nicolidis to obtain some honey from both normal and spirit bees. We found the requested items after a short expedition to the wandering dunes of frost and fire where we had looked into how the small tribe living there actually survived in the hostile climate. After delivering it to him he pulled off the clothes on his torso and started smearing himself in with honey. Unclear why. Something about science. He did not elaborate.

#145 Yo Cap, I am borrowing your Ax. Today is the day I will defeat Fierce Fang ~ Julius Ares

#146 Julius mysteriously found himself selected for a mission to the Oasis of Decadence after his loss. How strange. Now to figure out where he lost my Ax.

#211 Reached the 7th Heavenstage

#311 After half a year of preparation we finally started our expedition towards The Dunes of Death and Illnesses. According to the information we dug out of the archives The Dunes of Death and Illnesses is a purple and poisonous desert on the southern part of the territory belonging to the golden devil clan. It was supposedly created in a battle between two nascent soul cultivators a long long time ago. It was a war between the Golden Devil Clan and the Tribe of the Seven Desert Winds. The winds were supposedly forced east after the war was over. It is unknown what happened to them after the confrontation, but it was rumored they were destroyed. The true jewel of this place is the city of Everium that houses twenty thousand people and is ruled by a branch family of the Ariadnus clan.


#312 The first feeling I had received when we arrived at this forsaken place was irritation. Huge purple dunes were stretched out as far as the eye could see. This place was dark. It was like the sand was swallowing the sunlight, and gave the area the appearance of the moment right before nightfall where everything is gray and purple despite the sun shining in the middle of the sky. That was not what had annoyed me. What did bother us where the Purple lighting Scarecrows that had assaulted our caravan. Tall sand statues with purple glass branches sticking out of every part of their body. We were able to destroy them quickly, but one of our beast of burdens where killed. As a result, we had to drag one of the carts forward by hand. We had avoided taking anyone below the fourth stage with us as any person below this stage did not have the constitution necessary to avoid getting poisoned without actively fighting the poison. We had also purchased a more sturdy set of clothes for this expedition. The common cloth that we would normally use had been discarded due to its tendency to etch away when it touched the sand.

#313 This is not a pretty city. It is like they found a mountain in the desert and then started to punch holes in it to make room for people. We were welcomed by a 3rd Heavenstage cultivator Cairon who was in charge of parts of this city's agriculture. He was one of the men who had received a missive from me and had actually responded to it. He gave me a tour of the city, and it was interesting. The clan had apparently found a way to make the mortals who live here immune to the deserts poison by tempering the food they ate with arrays while it was growing. He went into details about the process, but he had to cut himself off before he revealed something that could be considered a clan "secret". The last part struck me as ridiculous. Why would they keep secrets that prevent us from fighting the true enemy?

#314 As I left I was feeling both excited and disappointed. Here was a people who fought the cruel and unjust climate and had acquired a stalemate. Yet, that was it. They had acquired a stalemate, but not more. They had seen it as their complete victory and stopped their advance. No new arrays had been added in the last 500 years to its defense. No new way to grow its food. No new way to extract resources from the desert to sell to the highest bidder. Nothing and that was disappointing. We brought with us chests filled with purple sand back from Everium, and carts filled with the remains of the creatures that live in the desert and that keeps attacking us. Both of these things can be sold for something of value later.


#412 Please pay the debt you owe me honored Demetrius Ceres. If you do not, I will hunt you down. Flay, you like a fish, and bury your limbs in the four corners of the desert. ~ Lady Olympias Atlasius

#413 As assassins are slightly more expensive than the debt I owe I will abide by your terms and pay the debt you wrinkled old bat.
#414 You have three days young one ~ Lady Olympias Atlasius

#420 Had an interesting meeting with Peta Condos and her talking bear. I was interested in hearing how she had handled the monster who had almost forced an entire city to bend its knee to starvation, so I tracked her down. She and the bear treated each other as equals. It was strange. The bear told me I had the smell of someone that should be torn down. It has given me something to think about. Perhaps there is something more at play than bad luck. Most people only get attacked by bandits. When I travel I always get attacked by beasts, monsters, trees, and bandits.

#443 Reached the 8th Heavenstage


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The word count keeps increasing. I don't understand why.
Demetrius does not like nature very much, and nature does not like him either.

Omake Bonus: Cool Thing: Leather armor of sorts.

I tried adding some other good seeds into it. If the people concerned do not like it. Let me know, and I will delete/edit it.
 
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@occipitallobe apologies for the ping, but what does a Dao Pillar generally look like? Is it a word or phrase that encapsulates part of the cultivator's composite Dao (like @Enigma's Dao Pillar of Balance), or more of a metaphor (like @Katana1515's tree)?

Second smaller question -- are dragons regular (be they powerful and/or unusually intelligent) Spirit Beasts in Turtle World, or do they have some special (Heavenly?) significance?
 
Second smaller question -- are dragons regular (be they powerful and/or unusually intelligent) Spirit Beasts in Turtle World, or do they have some special (Heavenly?) significance?

Not sure if this helps, but most dragons in Asian culture are smart creatures. Usually Divine with the ability to basically be at the top in most Xianxia settings. The linkage behind Dragons being divine is also why only the Chinese Emperor could have them on his robes.

A dragonlike creature that isn't as smart you can use is a Snake. As there are legend of snakes eventually becoming dragons over the course of millennia. A Spirit snake just setting on the path to that might suit what you're looking for. I believed the term for it in Korean is imugi
 
isn't as smart you can use is a Snake

What cosmology are we talking about here? Snakes have long been a symbol of cunning and intelligence in most cultures, including east asian ones - and to my knowledge, its Chinese symbolism is closely related to good fortune, longevity, mysteriousness and craftiness. Also fertility, and considered sinister as well as indifferent to life in its most negative interpretations - but never unintelligent.

I guess the 'less smart' is more about being less intelligent compared to a dragon - but dragons are not at all symbols of intelligence in most cosmologies. The symbolism of the dragon is most often power, nobleness, greatness, good luck, wrath and the Mandate of Heaven if we go for more Chinese inspiration.

Consider the Koi instead - in terms of symbolism, to my knowledge, they tend to serve a similar purpose to the Fool arcana in Tarot. There's also the very prominent legend of the Koi that climbed the waterfall to become a dragon.
 
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I guess the 'less smart' is more about being less intelligent compared to a dragon - but dragons are not at all symbols of intelligence in most cosmologies. The symbolism of the dragon is most often power, nobleness, greatness, good luck, wrath and the Mandate of Heaven if we go for more Chinese inspiration.
Yeah that. I meant it along the context of Snakes ascending into dragons, with the idea that Dragons stats so to say are just superior. While there are legends of stories of wise snakes in Asian Mythology, generally they're those that have already lived for millennia or obtain wisdom so to speak.

I was referring more along the lines of stuff like the One Horned Snake or 100 year snake demon in Xianxia. Spirit Beasts whose endpoints would be the Asian Dragons but as of know only have minor shades of certain aspects of said dragons.

My suggestion was for snake because they're a staple of Xianxia, and also because the impression i got is of them being used as a foe, which is also pretty frequent in Xianxia.
 
Yeah that. I meant it along the context of Snakes ascending into dragons, with the idea that Dragons stats so to say are just superior. While there are legends of stories of wise snakes in Asian Mythology, generally they're those that have already lived for millennia or obtain wisdom so to speak.

I was referring more along the lines of stuff like the One Horned Snake or 100 year snake demon in Xianxia. Spirit Beasts whose endpoints would be the Asian Dragons but as of know only have minor shades of certain aspects of said dragons.

My suggestion was for snake because they're a staple of Xianxia, and also because the impression i got is of them being used as a foe, which is also pretty frequent in Xianxia.

I mean I'd very strongly disagree but I admittedly don't know the genre. Nonetheless, this feels like taking a trope and using it for no reason other than playing into the trope, when a trope works best if the symbology adds to the story and strengthens the product. In many ways, challenging said trope may lead to a more interesting situation.

Really, the most confusing part would be the reasoning being 'Dragons are smart, us a snake which can become a dragon and is less smart' when a snake quite literally embodies a kind of intelligence and cunning as a symbol. If anything, I'd argue the transformation from snake to dragon would be more about power - considering that dragons are a symbol of power. Their thematic intelligence should probably be about the same unless heavenly enlightenment comes into play.

Tropes and cliches exist with a purpose and a reason - and this doesn't seem like it's taking those into consideration. In the end, though, this discussion is leading nowhere - we don't really know what Occipitallobe wants to do with their dragons yet.
 
Dragons are funny, sometimes they're smart and sometimes they're not. But even when they're smart they tend to be savage and easily tricked.
 
[X] Negotiate
-[X] You are not materially opposed to this arrangement, none wish to see the Demonic Altar Sect move unopposed after all, but you must also see to the well being of your people, and the last thing any of us want would be spies from the Demonic Altar Sect slipping through and setting up camp here, or bolstering the weakened Blood Cannibals, no? The Golden Devil Clan is willing to charge reduced tariffs on those who seek the springs for healing--but the Jingshen Clan will be responsible for paying the difference--such resources will be committed to the establishment of a secure road and other methods of heightened security for the duration of this agreement.
 
Lin Fan 4 - Demonic Gift
Lin Fan Omake
Demonic Gift

Lin Fan was just taking a walk around the sect and was looking at all of the different elders and disciples, they were interesting to Lin Fan with all there different Goals and Hobby's, Life had been pretty good for him the past few years. He had Cultivated up to The 8th Heavenstage and managed to escape a Foundation expert which had been a stroke of very good luck for him. Lin Fan decided ''Im going to my parents House'', He had not seen them for a few Years and while Lin Fan would never Admit it, he was really starting to miss them. Lin Fan's dad was a Foundation expert who was a bit of a Dork and Lin Fan's mom was still in the Heavenstage, She did not have the talent his dad did but they were a Happy family all the same. Lin Fan knocked at the door and His mothers surprised face was what he saw for a moment. but then she pulled him into a Hug that lasted for minutes that Lin Fan somehow for the life of him could not get out of. She pulled him into the House and made him some food and when he told his parents all about what he had done expecting their shock and disappointment, to his surprise they still loved him all the same even with all The terrible things he had done. He broke into a Sob and cried into his parents arms as the mental weight of what he had done vanish as he fell asleep. No one noticed the dark red Bracelet that appeared on his Wrist that Day.

Bonus: Life Saving Treasure.
 
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Morgraine 4 - The Liquid of Truth
Morgraine

With a thunderous clank of metal, the immense door of the visualization room sealed shut as Olivia and I entered. The room was barren and empty with only a single item in the very center, a cauldron already filled with a viscous liquid that bubbled and frothed unnaturally. Even weak and untrained as I was, I could feel the energy wafting off of the cauldron, infusing the room with its power now that the final seal was closed.

Olivia, covered in white flames that danced as she prepared the final steps, intermittently glared at me and the surrounding room. The fire under the cauldron burned brighter under her tending, changing from a normal flame into something clearly of another world, the heat burned hot enough to beggar the desert without the city for heat and yet we suffered not the dangers of such heat. As the strange metal and liquid heated, the strange almost hypnotic movements of the liquid became ever more pronounced.

Waves and jets of the liquid broke the surface and danced within the lip of the cauldron, shimmering all the colors of the world and some that did not exist the liquid danced in light and space. I could feel something calling to me from within the liquid, waiting for me to meet with it once more and yet something repulsed me at the same time, waxing and waning in time with the shifting colors. When it shone with the sheen of metal it drew my sight and mind, when it darkened and shone the color of old blood it repulsed and so it revealed something of itself to my sight and understanding.

"The Liquid of Truth, an ancient artifact of our clan. It is said that if used by a Nascent Soul it could reveal the absolute truth of a person of a lower realm. Yet, this small sample and power will only provide the desired revelations of truth. It will show me the truth of your body and in turn you too shall understand your fate. For it is distilled Truth, formed from the sacrificed Dao of one of our ancient Elders." Olivia's voice broke the silence of the room, as she whispered the nature of the liquid before us, in a tone that I had never heard her use before. Reverence infused her every action and she moved with a purity of motion that revealed her use of her Dao to make sure that this was pure.

As I went to speak, she lifted a single finger halting my words, and shook her head as she turned back towards the cauldron of liquid. Flames danced ever larger upon her hands and glowed with energy as she unleashed the full might of an early stage Core Formation upon the arrays of the cauldron. From invisible the thin lines blazed into pure white light as her power infused the item and liquid it held within, with her power. Tendrils of power, drifted to and fro as they waved over the top of the liquid but then a splash of golden liquid touched them and the Liquid activated.

In a singular moment the liquid collapsed into a single solid rock, as its power was expended for now. Shimmering with countless colors and radiating power beyond my comprehension a mist drifted up and out of the now almost empty cauldron. The mist drifted towards me without warning and soon all I could see was the flashes of colors and energy as the mist sought the truth and revealed it. I could feel its energy digging into my body and the next thing that came forth was PAIN, the pain from the minutes after the ritual returned with a vengeance and I knew that I had only held it back by my rapid actions of reweaving and would need much more to truly master my new body. The last thing I could feel was falling.


Olivia

At least the boy could understand simple instructions, although I can tell that he is interested in the Liquid. Although no one could blame him for such a reaction, the Liquid is highly dangerous as it tempts one with the promise of knowledge, and that promise only becomes ever stronger as one grows in power. The cradle of purity I shrouded myself within, was not as he probably expected for the purpose of charging the cauldron, but instead to protect my mind against the insidious power of the liquid. Such a double edged sword, it serves as the ultimate cultivation and diagnosis aid possible, while at the same exact time being one of the single most dangerous artifacts that the clan has access to.

Holding myself against the promise of power, is a strain as Truth whispers of secrets and knowledge that could give me such power and yet I have to hold firm for such was the trap of this artifact. It sought to consume and only to consume, and only by our arts had such a thing been turned to some semblance of use, but even we could not eradicate the lingering echos of the Blood Path Nascent Soul that we used to create this relic millennia ago. As I feed power of my own into the matrix, the liquid began to react and shift in color and dance even as it tried to entice us into feeding it ever more.

I was strong enough to resist its siren call, through the flames of purity and the boy was too weak to suffer much under its call. Yet even so, I broke from the preparations to tell the boy of the official history of the relic in front of us, which has been proven to make it more effective compared to telling of the whole truth. His reaction, at the very least was neutral and frankly he seemed more inclined to examine and study the cursed relic than actually use it for anything.

The fire was set and all that remained was to ignite the arrays, and hope that father property aligned them. Sinking deep into my base of power, I called forth the purifying flame that was my Dao. I was the Puffier, I was the one to purge the darkness of the world, I was the one to wipe the world clean and so flames of total consumption tore into the world and were broken into pure energy, for nothing impure could hope to survive within my body, and fed into the arrays.

From thin lines all but invisible to even my senses, they blazed with white light the same as my flames of purity and started the final countdown. With a wave of my hand, my flames wreathe me in their comforting embrace, protecting me from the coming event. With a surge of power and energy the liquid transmuted into a solid once more, ready to be reclaimed and returned to the rest of its stock, while the energy contained within flew into the air as an ever shifting mist.

I could feel the mist calling to me, to let it reveal the truth of self and more, but I had learned my lesson well in the past and only held my flames tighter and so the mist drifted over to the one person that it could effect. To his credit the boy, didn't seem as terrified as most would be in his situation although that might be due to insanity or other disagreeable traits.

The shimmering mists slowly pushed its way into his body and past his skin, and now came the moment of truth. It would reveal in absolute detail every single aspect of his Qi systems and show them to me as well. Light blazed across his body, colors intwined in a chaotic display and the nonsensical formate of his meridians and acupoints that I had learned from my touches revealed and shown to be far far worse than I had worried them to be.

There was no resemblance to normal human systems within his body, there were almost eight systems built on top of each other and intertwined in some basic and almost certainly inefficient method, all feeding into a cluster of nine or was it one, split nine ways, Dantian. Each of the nine shown a single brilliant color except for the ninth, which shone the closest to human norm and yet even it was twisted and broken.

His dantians, all connected to each other and to the center and yet those connections between each other were wrong, pouring Qi of the wrong flavor into the other pools that were incompatible with such energy. At that moment I realized that his systems looked more akin to a spirit beast than a normal human, it was as if someone had fused eight beast cores to his body and spirit, each one tied to a single metal. Now at least the damage could be healed, although the amount of contribution points will be insane to gather enough resources to fix this massive issue of his systems, yet at the same time the potential of the mutation was undeniable.

If it took him nine times the normal amount to grow it would only stand to reason that he would become far more powerful faster than normal, but the fury of the heavens will be unrelenting and beyond furious if such is the case. It would depend heavily upon his actions and how worth while his bloodline proves to be, at least now I have an idea of how to help him repair and stabilize his mutation.

But for now, his bloodline mutation needed to be stabilized. It could always be improved later before he stepped beyond the heaven step rank after all. As such it was much more important to prevent him from dying or otherwise suffering for the time being. Withdrawing a tablet of stone, upon which was carved a single minor array, that was tossed onto the boy's writhing body and with a flash of light the three dimensional image of his Qi systems was forever captured within the stone, tied to his life force and soul it would provide all we needed to stabilize and move beyond for his life to begin anew. I could see why father wanted me to take this task, as my Dao of purity is one of the few that could probably aid him in moving forward.

A scream broke the silence, it was pure, pure pain and struck with force beyond that of a simple Qi condensation level individual, yet it came from the boy. Turning to face him, I saw his body writhing in pain and the reason was clear, the truth of his body was pain and so the mist was revealing that truth. His limited success was only a false illusion to hold his body together and to truly solve issues would have to be remade in its entirety. Picking him up, I could feel the taint of the mist trying to dig ever deeper and yet with a snarl upon my face I unleashed the flames that surrounded me and burned it out of his body, for its task was done.

With the mist purged from his body, I quickly picked him up and carried him to his own room. He would sleep for at least one day to recover from the strain of the ritual, in that time it was critical for me to create or discover a method by which he could truly cultivate and by extension heal him into a working form. Looking back at his sleeping form, as I moved out of the room, it struck me just how young he truly was, only 16 instead of the more common twenty odd years of most of the clan. Yet, even so he was far behind even the weakest and least skilled of others of his generation, his mutated bloodline will hold him back for decades at the very least. However, if he could achieve mastery and purify his bloodline its gifts could be immense, as would the costs , but it would be at least possible for him to grow to some level of power.

Regardless, such was far out of the reach of him or me at the present juncture, and with a sigh I left the room, sealing the door behind me. Leaning against the wall, I pulled out the Soul Image that was the result of the entire ritual and began to examine it in far greater detail than possible within the visualization room. The stone figurine, a near perfect replicate of the boy sleeping in the room behind me, glowed from within from countless lines of woven energy of nine colors. The weave although brilliant and beautiful, to the eyes was wrong and wasted immense amounts of energy through the interconnections. Yet, I could see why an unskilled or untaught person might fashion their systems in such a manner if they didn't understand what truly had to be done. Frankly, looking at the chaos of his spiritual body, I have no idea what to do to fix the issues. Ugh, back to father I guess, as only he might be able to shed some light upon this disaster of meridians and acupoints.

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the omake for the visualization ritual and showing just how screwed up Morgraine's Qi systems are.
no bonus right now
 
Morgraine 5 - Hospital Report
Hospital Report: Morgraine
Only for internal usage and for Elder clearance

Entry reason:
Brought in by guards at the Bronze Gates. Checked by mortal doctors, judged to be suffering from long term exhaustion, dehydration, starvation.

Original location:
Placed in standard mortal recovery ward. With arrays activated to accelerate healing process.

Notes:
Array energy levels dropped anomalously within the first hour of his placement. The master of the ward, Iatros Tai ordered a cultivator doctor into the ward to discover causation of such drainage of array; 10-21.

Iatros Tai has been given one official reprimand by order of Iatrosophist Achelous for not checking the drainage personally.

At this point, Tai personally checked the ward and discovered that patient Morgraine was a cultivator of the 1st step, and some form of cultivation based damage was the cause of the drainage. Acting appropriately Tai called for Iatrosophist Achelous after removing patient Morgraine from the mortal ward.

Iatrosophist Achelous' Notes:
The examination provided little information beyond the superficial. Namely that the patient was in fact a cultivator and that he had suffered damage to the entire body, as such under my personal authority he is to be placed in a personal cultivation ward.

Transfer:
Mortal ward to Personal Cultivation Ward 5-34
5-34 was chosen for remoteness and closeness to the locations of skilled cultivators. It had also not been in use for several decades and as such was simpler to purge and refit for an unknown person. Tertiary Iatrosophist Olivia assigned as personal doctor under order from Iatrosophist Achelous.

Justification of doctor selection:

Doctor Olivia, was chosen due to personal power and chosen Dao.
As an early Core Foundation expect her power is sufficient to handle any issue that can arise while treating patient Morgraine.
With her Dao of Purity she is able to purge and otherwise remove contamination of both physical and spiritual nature easier than normal individuals

Visualization room:
Access was request five days after arrival of Patient and assignment of new doctor Olivia. Room 1 already prepared by order of Iatrosophist Achelous, two hours before request was made. Set up for low intensity, low duration reading. Soul Stature stone was provided to Olivia by order of Iatrosophist Achelous.

Results:
Currently inconclusive. Morgraine is from the golden devil clan and bears a bloodline of metal. This bloodline is highly mutated and the Visualization ritual and soul stature provide direct proof of level of mutation.

Level of Mutation:
  • Alpha 1 - total mutation, expected to be inheritable
    • Sub Type: Esoteric - mutation unique, focused on spiritual
      • Domain: Qi storage and power, potentially Dao
Conclusion of Mutation:
An unique mutation that has either split the patient's dantian into nine parts or has given him eight additional dantians. Qi concentration much higher than normal for cultivation stage, assumed to relate to extra dantians or divided dantian. Each smaller Dantian emanates a single color, it is assumed that each of them only respond to a single energy type and as such personal cultivation ward 5-34 has been set to rotate between energy types to find corresponding energy.

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a short report style omake on Morgraine's hospital time so far
 
Achille Adephos 5 - The Youth’s Heavenly Fishing King
Achille Adephos VI
A cliche Xianxia tournament; tensions rise!

Now I know this wasn't too cliche since it only lasted two chapters instead of being drawn out over thirty, but I just don't have the patience to do that, so I won't.

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"Hello everyone! Welcome to the annual Grand-Emperor's Ten Heavens Fishing Trial! As always, the rules are thus: Each contestant has ten hours to catch as many fish as possible. The rarer a fish is the more points it's worth per gram, and whomever collects the most points by the end of the day wins the title of 'The Youth's Heavenly Fishing King' and a prize of spirit stones!" the Announcer shouted.

"It's time," Achille said, narrowing his eyes.

He began to run forward, towards the lake. At the same time, the twelve other participants, Jonathan included flood suit, each contestant leaping into the prepared fishing boats.

There were twelve of them, small wooden canoes laded with oars.. Achille leaped forward, his feet slamming into the inside of the canoe, transferring his forward momentum into it.

It was time for the first step in sighing! Selecting A Good Location! This phase was so integral to the process, fishing grandmasters called it the 'foundation of fishing.'

As the saying went 'even a good housewife cannot cook without rice'. Even a fishing grandmaster would be unable to catch a single trout, while with a good fishing spot, even an amateur could catch a heavenly roc.

As for how to select a good location, that was up to the individual. Some relied on instinct or math. Others simply eyeballed it. Only true fishing masters would employ special techniques to divine the best fishing location.

Luckily Achille had one of those arts. It was a special technique he had found in the depths of the Adephos library called the 'Bronze Monument Fishing Technique.'

Achille swirled Qi into his eyes, a lattice appealing in his vision. The grid encompassed the entire lake! This was the visual manifestation of the 'Bronze Monument Fishing Technique!'

Slowly, the grid began to deform, some spots rasing high in the air, while others fell. This was the indicator of what spots were best!

Achille immediately began to row towards the best spot, a murky dark part of the lake, that seemed full of mud.

"What is that Adephos body doing?" one audience member asked. "Any competent fisher will tell you, fish avoid dark and murky places like that! Don't tell me he is an absolute amatuer?"

"Of course, he stands no chance! Look at Young Master Jonathon! He has already secured what is in my humble opinion, the best location! The water is just clear enough fish will frequent it, while not being soo clear no fish would dare hide in it! He will definitely win this bet!"

"Oh! Is that the famed fishing grandmaster Xuege? If grandmaster said so, then it must be so! Quickly wife, put Little Zi's college saving on Jonathon's story! Don't hesitate, just do it!"

Since an expert had weighed in, public opinion had already shifted. Everyone immediately thought Achille was just an arrogant amateur who could not see the height of Mount Tai, while Jonathon was a fishing genius, and many people were now, having taken his victory as a given, bet fortunes on Jonathon, even those who were normally frugal. After all, who would give up free money?

Achille, who could hear the conversion of the crowd snorted in disdain. This was the so-called 'famed fishing grandmaster?' In Achille's opinion, he was just trash! Achille had absolute confidence in the 'Bronze Monument Fishing Technique', and it had never let him down.

Now it was time for the integral second phase! Picking Out the Bait! This second step was only slightly less important than the first step. Certain different fish liked certain different kinds of bait, so what kind of fish one attracted, and how many was decided by this phase!

One hundred types of fish from the 'Heaven and Earth Fishing Board' had been artificially introduced to the lake for the duration of the tournament, and skilled fishermen had already memorized the baits they liked best. Of course, of all the fish, the ones worth the most points were so rare and mysterious that no one knew what they liked. Except for Achille.

As someone born with an extraordinary golden spoon called the 'Adephos Family' in his mouth, not only had he seen these fish before, he had even eaten them!

Achille reached into his bag, retrieving a small ball of brown junk. To an outside observer, it looked like dirty trash, but to Achille' it was a great treasure.

After all, this ball of junk just happened to be the bait that the number one ranked 'Earth Guzzling Roc' loved to eat! If he could catch even a single earth Guzzling Roc, the tournament was in his hand!

"Look at Achille! What kind of bait is that? Don't tell me he has already given up and is just making a joke of the whole contest now? How contemptible!" One observer said, to the sounds of agreement.

"If you have no chance of winning, just give up!" another said. "Right now, all he is doing is spitting on the contest's reputation!"

Meanwhile, Jonathan reached into his bag to retrieve a small boll of golden silk. The moment the crowd saw it, everyone went wild.

"Is that… Don't tell me…."

"Yes, it must be so! The ultra-rare golden silkworm ball! He must be planning on catching Rank Three, the Golden Eyed Arowana! Unlike the bulk of the other contestants who are using low ranking bait to catch huge amounts of low-level fish, like the famous Jiang Heshou over there who has already caught a dozen Brown Skin trout, he is going for on big capture!"

Indeed, unlike the other contestants who had already begun to catch fish, Jonathon and Achille's spot on the ranking stayed at the bottom, though the perception fo each was as different as heaven and earth!

Jonathon: A young genus making a risky but awe-inspiring gamble!
Achille: Arrogant trash with no idea of what he was doing!

Now Achille began to the third phase of fishing, the easiest, but longest phase! Sitting Still!

He simply had to wait for something to bite! And so Achille sat, doing nothing.

He could see several of the other contestants using unique methods to catch fish, such as the current number one on the board, Herkacles Adente, who was suing a net of spiritual energy to catch fish en mass, or the second rank on the board Illusion Master Ophios Impetuim, who was using strange illusion arts to draw fish to his net.

Achille frowned. While he was not giving up on catching the Earth Guzzling Roc, he had to also guarantee his victory, and he had his own unique method to do so.

Unlike Hekacles or Ophios's, Achille's unique metho was his specialty: Arrays!

"Myriad Tributary Fishing Slaughtering Array!" Achille shouted. "Activate!"

A golden array carved his fishing rod began to glow, lines of golden Qi flowing out of it to create a box of light. ANy fish who entered into the killing zone would die!

Immediately Achille's points started to skyrocket!

Tenth place!
Eight Place!
Fifth place!

Already the other contestants were feeling the pressure of his advance and began t press forward harder.

"Don't think you'll surpass me!" Ophios shouted.

He cupped his hands, spitting blood into them.

"The secrecy fishing art passed down through my family since ancient times… Blood-Moon World, Illusory Heavens!" Ophios shouted, throwing the cupped blood into the water.

As he did so, an illusory image of a red moon formed on the surface of the water, and fish began to rush towards it, throwing their lives right into Ophios's hand.

Still, it wasn't enough to outpace Achill'es array!

Third place!
Second place!

Now Only Herakles stood between him and first place.

"You don't stand a chance of beating me," Heracles laughed. "Everyone knows the Adente family has won this contest for the last hundred years. Let me show you why!"

Heracles heaved his hands, a massive net pulling out of the water, filled to the brim with small fish, like sardines and the like.

Instantly Heracles pulled further ahead, nearly doubling his score.

"I suppose you do beat me in skill," Achille acknowledged.

But when skill failed... Throw money at the problem! When it came to being moneybags, no one beat the Adephos family!

Achille reached into his bag, pulling out a dozen pills.

"Oh, Heavens! Those are the ultra-expensive 'Skylark Blue Pills!' Each once costs as much as a small house! When they touch water, they release an aroma that fish find irresistible!"

Achile threw his hand, dozens of tiny blue pills flying into the lake. The moment they touched its surface, they exploded into clouds of blue colouring. Fish from all around the lake began to rush towards Achille boat, and right into his killing zone!

Achille points began to skyrocket, closing in on Heracles.

1100,
1300,
1450
1600!

He had reached the first place!

And with only five minutes left on the clock! It seemed Achille was going to win the tournament…
Second place!

Achille's eye jumped wide in shock, and so did everyone else's. That's because Jonathon had just jumped to the first palace!

Was this the so called 'reaching heaven in one stride?'

Could it be that Jonathon had actually caught the super rare Golden Eyed Arowana?

Indeed, looking over, Achille could see Jonathon holding a massive struggling fish, with glowing golden eyes and long fins!

Two minutes left! It seemed that Jonathon had one. After all his total points were more than double that of everyone else combined!

"It seems that Contestant Aurelias wins!" the announcer shouted.

"No, I do!" Achille shouted, drawing everyone's attention to him.

"What do you mean? Jonathan clearly wi-" Heracles interjected, before suddenly stopping eyes wide

In Achille's hand was none other than the ranked one 'Earth Guzzling Roc!'. O fishier of any repute would not be able to recognize the rarest fish on the ranking board!

Immediately the announcer mouth shut, and he stared agape. No had had ever caught that fish, during the one-thousand-year history of the tournament!

Achille points on the ranking board immediately jumped by one hundred thousand, putting him at an insurmountable advantage!

"How is that possible?" Ophios said, agape. "Even Foundation Establishment level Fisherman would have trouble catching that fish, let alone you!"

"-An amazing twist fold! In the final moments of the competition, Contestant Adephos caught the priceless Earth Guzzling Roc! We call him up to receive the first-place prize and the title of 'The Youths Heavenly Fishing King!'" the announcer shouted.

"... You bastard! What so called grandmaster!' Return me Little Zi's college money!" immediately the crowd turned on the armchair experts who had deceived them.

Achille smirked, walking over to Jonathon, who was visibly trembling.

"Now, I do surmise, that the time has come for you to relinquish the fishing rod you do treasure so much, to me!" Achille said, deliberately elongating his sentence just to screw with Johnathon!

".... Fine, But this isn't over, Adephos!" Jonathan spat. "I will have my revenge!

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(3) Tribulation Boosts. Bought with Omake. A Tribulation Boost guarantees a breakthrough from 9th Heavenstage Qi Condensation to Foundation Building. Other, more difficult paths may require more - likewise with breaking through to Core Formation, and then Nascent Soul
Does this apply to the higher levels of Qi Condensation as well? My plan is to basically get as far into Qi condensation as I can without dying of old age and then directly breakthrough to foundation establishment. If not, I would like to if I can get some kind of item that will permanently increase my willpower/Dao heart. If not, I'm fine with a generic cultivation boost.
 
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Dragons are funny, sometimes they're smart and sometimes they're not. But even when they're smart they tend to be savage and easily tricked.
Depends on the dragon and the QM's interpretation. Of course, if the Dragon is intelligent and powerful, justifying the MC's victory over them may be rather difficult.
 
I mean I'd very strongly disagree but I admittedly don't know the genre. Nonetheless, this feels like taking a trope and using it for no reason other than playing into the trope, when a trope works best if the symbology adds to the story and strengthens the product. In many ways, challenging said trope may lead to a more interesting situation.

Really, the most confusing part would be the reasoning being 'Dragons are smart, us a snake which can become a dragon and is less smart' when a snake quite literally embodies a kind of intelligence and cunning as a symbol. If anything, I'd argue the transformation from snake to dragon would be more about power - considering that dragons are a symbol of power. Their thematic intelligence should probably be about the same unless heavenly enlightenment comes into play.

Tropes and cliches exist with a purpose and a reason - and this doesn't seem like it's taking those into consideration. In the end, though, this discussion is leading nowhere - we don't really know what Occipitallobe wants to do with their dragons yet.

Sure, but just to briefly explain where i'm coming from as well as some common elements about Xianxia. Basically, most settings have these idea that Spirit Beasts get more and more intelligent as they age and grow in power, leading to them eventually being able to take a human form in some settings while in others, they ascend as full beasts but with the intelligence of humans.

As such, i'm basically looking at the quest through a xianxia lens like the above, so most of my suggestions are done along the lines of common tropes and cliches that are in the genre itself since i personally feel that it's what makes it Xianxia.

the omake for the visualization ritual and showing just how screwed up Morgraine's Qi systems are.
no bonus right now
a short report style omake on Morgraine's hospital time so far
Brief point here, but both by default come with a Fate bonus for next turn's Good Seed. Just remember to update them on your Good Seed background. It's just that only 1 omake per turn can be used for the unique bonuses per turn
"Oh! Is that the famed fishing grandmaster Xuege? If grandmaster said so, then it must be so! Quickly wife, put Little Zi's college saving on Jonathon's story! Don't hesitate, just do it!"
Oh god, shades of tournament arcs! Even mention of Mount Tai! :rofl:
"You don't stand a chance of beating me," Heracles laughed. "Everyone knows the Adente family has won this contest for the last hundred years. Let me show you why!"

Heracles heaved his hands, a massive net pulling out of the water, filled to the brim with small fish, like sardines and the like.
:o I was only joking about the Forbidden Net Technique!
But when skill failed... Throw money at the problem! When it came to being moneybags, no one beat the Adephos family!
There an anime this season where the Protag throws money to solve everything, and i'm getting the same vibe here. Not just from the act of using wealth, but from the nonchalant way it's been used as well as Achille's attitude to it!

Does this apply to the higher levels of Qi Condensation as well? My plan is to basically get as far into Qi condensation as I can without dying of old age and then directly breakthrough to foundation establishment. If not, I would like to if I can get some kind of item that will permanently increase my willpower/Dao heart. If not, I'm fine with a generic cultivation boost.

Yeah, i kinda want to know that as well. My current guess on it is that if it's used after a Cultivator hits the point where they're ready to ascend, they get a auto-pass compared to the roll of their cultivation + their overall fate. Still unsure on if it would affect those that choose to immediately ascend instead of waiting for the prompt in the Good Seed Report.

Same with the scale on how much it affects the tribulation of higher stages. But based on the last Good Seed report, Cultivation Boost might be more essential for someone chasing the stages beyond 9th since we saw that some of those in the 10th heavenstage need like 5 - 6 more turns before they're ready to ascend, so 11 - 13 is likely to require even more time without a Boost.
 
Same with the scale on how much it affects the tribulation of higher stages. But based on the last Good Seed report, Cultivation Boost might be more essential for someone chasing the stages beyond 9th since we saw that some of those in the 10th heavenstage need like 5 - 6 more turns before they're ready to ascend, so 11 - 13 is likely to require even more time without a Boost.
Well, based on the chart, a normal person would reach the 11th heaven stage by around 188 years of age, or 9-10 turns, but if you want to get anything beyond that it would require either a lifespan-extending treasure(on my list) or better talent.

If breakthrough treasures work beyond ninth level, then you can get one, go all-in on cultivating boosts and try and make it as close to thirteenth as possible, using your breakthrough treasure just before you die of old age.
 
Well, based on the chart, a normal person would reach the 11th heaven stage by around 188 years of age, or 9-10 turns, but if you want to get anything beyond that it would require either a lifespan-extending treasure(on my list) or better talent.

If breakthrough treasures work beyond ninth level, then you can get one, go all-in on cultivating boosts and try and make it as close to thirteenth as possible, using your breakthrough treasure just before you die of old age.
I believe it is stated/implied that you will need more breakthrough treasure(s) for higher Qi Heavenstages, ditto with Foundation Establishment and Core Formation.
 
I believe it is stated/implied that you will need more breakthrough treasure(s) for higher Qi Heavenstages, ditto with Foundation Establishment and Core Formation.
I thought it just meant you would need more for the higher realms, but now that I reread it,
Other, more difficult paths may require more
Probably means I will need at least several
@occipitallobe, how many treasures we would need for each heaven stage higher we go?
 
Probably means I will need at least several
@occipitallobe, how many treasures we would need for each heaven stage higher we go?

Yeah, like assuming 1 is enough to max the bar for 9th stage, 10 might need 2 since it's double the bar, 11 might need 3 and so on. I'm more concerned on how it can be used. As in if the application works the moment the Good Seed hit's that level or if it only kicks in when the Cultivator is ready to ascend as per Good Seed page.

Hmm, then again it will make sense if its Guranteed at 9th stage if the Cultivator is ready, but need more then 1 if the cultivator is forcing a breakthrough to negate the increased risks
 
Does this apply to the higher levels of Qi Condensation as well? My plan is to basically get as far into Qi condensation as I can without dying of old age and then directly breakthrough to foundation establishment. If not, I would like to if I can get some kind of item that will permanently increase my willpower/Dao heart. If not, I'm fine with a generic cultivation boost.

Yes, but you need to buy one per level of Qi Condensation above the 9th to guarantee a breakthrough. Along with the age requirements meaning you need Lifespan Treasures, getting to 13th and breaking through is an expensive, lengthy prospect.
 
I am strangely happy with this result. I gather Savvas managed to spread his discovery among the clan?

Yes, but no. It's a known recipe, but normally Savvas wouldn't have access to such an expensive treasure - the Clan can't easily replicate his recipe.

Ok, beast repelling brandy is really funny stuff. He is really going to need a long time to break through.

One thing, my life saving treasure this turn was recorded right?

Yes - usually if you write something yourself I won't put it in the Good Seed report - if you note that you find a Cool Thing (or omake reward of any kind), get the cool thing in your omake, and put it in your
main Good Seed sheet, I won't mention it at all. It's only when someone doesn't say 'I got this thing' I try and add it into the Good Seed post.

I suppose Yan didn't enter the secret realm he was intending to enter because of his injury?

Oh, shoot. This was just a mistake (I might start doing future good seed reports in reverse alphabetic order to spread the mistakes around more easily!). I'll redo that.

> tfw no Diogenes Aparámillos fate

RIP, boy stuck in limbo before I can even beat my muse into producing an omake for him

I'll correct that along with Yan!

Whew, i'm glad that i posted my new omake after the good seed posts. Based on the recent turn, i think i really need to direct that Fate buff to make sure he makes it intact next turn

Glad about the formation being accepted, hopefully it'll keep our 1st and 2nd Heavestage cultivators safe. New problem for me is coming up with ideas for more Omakes.

@occipitallobe i set my new goal for turn 4 as searching for ways to enhance Qing Yun, would that count as something like my Formation Roll since Qing Yun is a Spirit Beast? Or is it treated as a personal fate roll thing since he's with Xiao Yi ?

Just note it down.

Huh, looks like a bad cultivation roll, but a pretty good Fate roll?

Would this functionally count as a Life Saving Treasure for the purposes of calculating stuff like Secret Realm adventures? If it does, I think Rina'll be ready to go on schedule this turn.

It doesn't save lives, but it does give a rather favorable reroll on bad encounters. They can still go bad, though.

Currently the strongest Good Seed! Also not a very good commander... sorry @Anders. Some good stuff to hopefully get my creative juices flowing though.

EDIT: Upon closer inspection, the bit about Hektor says that Acis Drivas died, except the good seed report says Augustus Servius was the one that died? @occipitallobe

Clan paperwork demons! Truly the greatest of our foes. I'll have them exorcised right away and the records corrected.

That's a really nice Fate-roll. Cool. Was thinking of writing about him developing a movement tech this turn, so that works well- wait a moment. The 100-year trials is in two turns. (Specifically the end of Turn 5.) Would I be cutting it too close to get a lifesaving treasure between before the Turn 5 Good Seed report? My guess is yes, though ofc I may be wrong.

As a sidenote @occipitallobe, does the technique that I chose as a Cool Thing this turn allow him to fight one Heavenstage above his cultivation stage, or should I have phrased it as a burgeoning combat style instead for something like that? I'm planning to fill out the rest of the style's techniques with each individual one being their own Cool Thing bonus, BTW. (Currently thinking the next two will be a movement tech and a defensive tech.)

Usually he'll be much stronger within his small realm, sometimes able to fight across realms effectively.

Woot. FOUNDATION STAGE.

@occipitallobe I would prefer Minervina broke through. I might go unconventional and strive for 9 pillars in the Second Realm though.

Breakthrough Omake incoming!

Noted - I'll edit the report.

One more thing I forgot to ask, is the 8 turn to next stage, does it mean both 11th stage and foundation?

To Foundation specifically. I'm trying to show either distance to 11th+ (as 11th is an 80 year/4 turn on average trip) or Foundation depending on what your Good Seed is aiming for.

@occipitallobe apologies for the ping, but what does a Dao Pillar generally look like? Is it a word or phrase that encapsulates part of the cultivator's composite Dao (like @Enigma's Dao Pillar of Balance), or more of a metaphor (like @Katana1515's tree)?

To my mind, it looks like a pillar - that in some way reflects the Dao in question. It sits inside the cultivator's dantian, so you're never going to see the pillars as such. A Dao of Knowledge might be formed out of floating words, a Dao of Stone would be very obvious. But to be honest, it could look like almost anything - the 'Pillar' is just a piece of your Dao, a solidified magical thing that supports your cultivation, so more metaphorical things, trees, or good ol' fashioned pillars are all fine.

Second smaller question -- are dragons regular (be they powerful and/or unusually intelligent) Spirit Beasts in Turtle World, or do they have some special (Heavenly?) significance?

In the Third Sea, dragons are powerful and unusually intelligent. Azure dragons are incredibly rare, powerful and significant, much like Vermilion Birds, White Tigers, and Black Tortoises.

Yellow Dragons are unseen in the Third Sea, though tales said they once roamed it before the death of the Third Turtle Child.

Now, I'd better go redo the Good Seed report and rectify my mistakes, then I'll come a'threadmarkin'.
 
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