Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Victor Wulf 6: What Could Have Been - Unfinished Omakes
Victor Wulf 6: What Could Have Been - Unfinished Omakes

What Kind Of Hero - A Forced Break

Victor was practicing his pankration in the courtyard. His body moved with strength and agility he was still adjusting to as he went over the basics. But he couldn't concentrate. His thoughts kept drifting back to the Battle of One-Boat Pass. Objectively speaking, it had actually gone very well for him. None of his squad members died, he personally saved a village, and he even reached the 6th Heavenstage! By all accounts, Victor should be proud.

But how could he be?

He saved a single village. A group of around seven hundred people. But a dozen more villages were lost. In fact, the legions sent to the pass had only managed to save about seventeen thousand out of thirty-nine thousand civilians. A death count of twenty-two thousand.

So how could he be proud? How could he accept praise for his action when he had failed so many? Victor knew those weren't rational thoughts. They were downright arrogant ones. To think he could've saved any more than his fellow legionnaires. That he could've done more than the Indomitable Seven, than the Elders, than the Council.

But they were his thoughts nonetheless.

So all he could do was train. Like he always does. Desperately trying to get just a little bit stronger. So that maybe next time, he can save just a few more people. So that next time, he can do more than just be burnt by an enemy who was just a bit too strong. So that maybe next time, just a couple more parents can come home to their children.

(AN: This would've ended with Victor somehow realizing that while he can't protect everyone yet, he doesn't have to beat himself up about it.)



Legacy of a Cheapskate - A Kingly Reward

Marching through the sands of the Southlands Victor and his group were talking.

Victor said, "Y'know, the Southlands are so much nicer than I thought they would be. I don't think I've seen this much grass since I was an Aspirant."

Augustina Sphrantze nodded. "It is nice, isn't it? Especially since it belongs to the clan now."

"That's because we've been avoiding cities. Those places are apparently filled to the brim with all kinds of traps." Macedonius Bardas countered.

Victor notices a node at the edge of his senses. "Hey, I just felt something. I think it might be a node but… it's a bit small."

That caught Flavia Glyca's attention. "What direction?"

Pointing slightly to the right Victor answers, "Over there."

Flavia nodded and turned towards the Legate. "Legate Onassis, Victor detected an anomaly due south. Permission to investigate?"

The Legate regarded us for a moment before looking south. He looked curious. "I can't detect anything. Interesting. Granted. Catch up with us as soon as you're able or send a runner if it turns out to be something important."

They make their way to the anomaly and find a stone slab on the ground.

"Is this it?" Calixta Gregora sounded disappointed. There wasn't a single interesting thing about the stone.

Except for the fact that it was completely devoid of qi.

"No. The qi is under it."

"Augustina, Victor, move it," Flavia ordered.

Doing as they were asked a hole in the ground was revealed... one with so much qi even Victor could feel it clearly. The others nearly passed out on the spot. Quickly covering the hole again Victor waited for the others to recover. Finally, they managed to get everyone moving.

(AN: This would've ended with Victor finding a scroll called the Cheapstakes Divine Heavenly Celestial Archive that has average techniques that, in exchange for being super complex, required so little qi Victor could potentially have used them in battle. Never decided if I was actually going to give him this one.)



A Polished Bloodline - More Like A Rough Grind

Victor's mind was a million miles away as he chased down Bone Carbs.

It really is true what they say, the only reward for good work is more work.

After evolving his Dull Bronze Bloodline to the Tarnished Bronze Bloodline he thought things might actually get easier for him. Turns out his new bloodline makes things both easier and harder than before. Putting him right back where he started, really.

"Pick up the pace! We need to get as many of these crabs as we can before the sand dries!"

Bone Crabs are a rare delicacy apparently. You can only hunt them during o right after it rains or else they'll be in hibernation mode in which they're literally just chunks of bone. Can't even be awakened unless by natural rain.

Honestly, it wouldn't be that annoying if it wasn't for the-

"Death Crab!"

-the death crabs that live alongside them. They look identical to normal Bone Crabs except they're actually a threat.

"Spear formation!"

Victor concentrated as he linked with his teammates. If he isn't careful his qi will disperse their qi. Thankfully, it was easier to control because he can actually move it fast enough to keep up with them. Which, again, balances out to be about as good as he was before.

(AN: This would've ended with Victor getting separated from his Legion and falling down a hole. Inside he'd fight some stuff and, by complete accident, fall into a very painful liquid or something that would've "polished" his skin giving him a bit of qi deflection in addition to defense. Or something.)



@occipitallobe

I figured since Victor is going to defy the heavens this turn I'd post the remanents of his story that I never got around to finishing. Not sure if I can or should ask for an omake reward even though this is my first omake for this turn. If I can... impact I guess. For old-time's sake.
 
Vitruvian Anasc [DEAD] - Good Seed Background
Vitruvian Anasc - Good Seed Background
Origin

Born to poor mortal parents in the grand push to be ready before the Trial, Vitruvian grew up amidst the frantic preparations when times were lean and the resources to shelter mortals from more mundane hazards and discomforts were thin on the ground. Defensive arrays and alarms took priority, and so Vitruvian and his family had to shovel sand from paths and wells when the clearing arrays were allowed to lapse. He spent his childhood collecting the dung of pack animals, pressing out all moisture to aid in watering gardens and using the dry bricks for fuel. It was at an early age that it was realized that he had a certain fascination with fire, spending long hours staring into the flames in contemplation.

By the time of the Trial the fascination had been revealed as insight not into fire but the flow of qi. He first learned to manipulate the flow of air into the fires, to make them burn hotter and cleaner, but this lead to greater understanding of the underlying interactions of qi, even before he was found in the years after the Trial and brought in for proper tutelage and instruction. He readily devoured histories and theories, and he came to a conclusion: the Third Sea is impoverished, and requires cultivation itself if the people are to prosper. Grand dreams of cultivating the land, of creating oases of qi where juniors can cultivate from without requiring spirit stones. He has heard of the Dragon Lines, and dreams of strengthening them, possibly even using artifice to create prosthetic lines to smooth and revitalize the flow of qi.

Within the quiet of his own head, Vitruvian also dreams of grander and darker things. He dreams of learning how to reanimate the Third Turtle Child. While his more grounded thoughts are attached to concentrating, channeling, and cycling the qi of the desert to promote growth and life and regeneration, he knows that there are darker paths to pursue, and he squirrels away knowledge of ghosts and the arts relating to them for the future. For now though he knows that even walking the path of cultivation he probably only has a century of his own work before death takes him, and thus he seeks benefit most of all for the future generations rather than for himself.

Turn 6
Ambition: Develop a relatively cheap method of collecting and concentrating the qi of the desert
Omakes: 6-1 Sun and Sand (851 words)
Fate: Turn 6 in progress

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Current Status: 15 Years Old as of Start of Turn 6, Cultivator of the 1st Heavenstage
Starting Perk: Genius (Qi Flows) - Vitruvian has an instinctive understanding of how qi flows and interacts with itself and others.
Combat Boosts: None
Effective Combat Strength: 1st Heavenstage
Crazy Stuff: Seeks cultivation gains in order to cultivate and revive the land

Lifesaving Treasures: None
Healing Treasures: None

@occipitallobe I decided to try my hand at this.
 
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Vitruvian Turn 6 Omake 1 - Sun and Sand
Vitruvian Turn 6 Omake 1 - Sun and Sand​

Vitruvian sat in the desert in careful contemplation. He was but the most Junior of Juniors, but he had plans to help everyone, and in his free time he was pursuing his current goal. There were many steps on the path of cultivation, and now he was currently taking the first one for the desert, and possibly for the generations to come. He had sunk what meager Contribution Points he had collected into obtaining the first elements of his project: a large, curved bronze plate and alchemical reagents. The plate could have been used as a mortal hoplon, but Vitruvian had other ideas for it.

As the sun rose, Vitruvian set out the bronze and his reagents to bask in the light as he worked. Liquids and a powder were carefully mixed in a mortar, before the final element was added: some of his own blood, drawn from a cut upon his palm. Working the mixture together, he soon had a fine red paste that glittered faintly with the green and blue verdigris of the Clan's bloodline.

Carefully concealing the mortar from direct heat, he then took up a cloth and began to polish bronze with Blood Garnet Paste. While Spirit Bronze would be better, this was what he could do now, and he needed initial experiments to help guide his more expensive investments later. For now he worked as the sun rose over the sands and the heat began to grow near intolerable. Since becoming a cultivator his ability to tolerate such things had grown, and he used the polishing to meditate.

There was power in the air, power in the sun, power in the sand. It was thin, too thin to benefit anyone but a junior in the First Heavenstage like Vitruvian, but it was there. Air flowed into his lungs, and he exchanged energy between himself and the world around him. From his lungs, into his blood, into his heart, into his body where his muscles could drink it up, releasing their own warmth. Compressing and condensing more qi than normal produced pain, but he preferred to think of it like strenuous exercise.

He polished the bronze, and felt the thrum between his own qi and the qi of the desert, connected by blood and action in the substance of the metal.

A mortal might have perished as the sun rose higher into the sky, but Vitruvian had just enough stamina that he could continue his task with only mild discomfort. Finally, with the sun not quite at its zenith, his reveries broke as he realized that the metal was at a mirror polish, catching the light of the sun and transforming into a disc of white gold.

Getting up from where he was sitting, Vitruvian refilled his body's liquid reserves with a long drink from his canteen. Judging the sky above and the wind around him, he decided that he had the time and the resources to continue his path for the day.

Standing up, he picked up the bronze plate and carefully angled it so that it would catch the light of the sun, its curve focusing and concentrating it at a single point. With a bit of adjustment he got that point to rest upon the sands. The sands blazed with light as their temperature rose, little bits of organic material burning away as leaping flames, but Vitruvian just held the light on target.

Once again, Vitruvian moved into an almost meditative state as he let his breath cycle back and forth, drawing in the qi of the world and condensing it within himself. But in this state he could feel the external qi, and he extended his will outward. The rivers of energy that others said resided in the sky and snaked through the earth were simultaneously too big and too diffuse to grasp, but with the mirror as an intermediary he could just barely perceive the vaguest of outlines. He could not truly connect with them, but he could channel and mediate a tiny piece of their natural dance and flow.

The mirror, polished with his own blood, faintly thrummed with the beat of his heart and the breathing winds of the desert. Qi in the light, almost not there at all for one such as he, connected naturally with the qi sands and air of the desert. Exerting his own exercises, he pushed with his will to condense what qi was there into the sand.

He remained like this for hours, slowly moving his angle and position with the motion of the sun to keep the focus on that one spot. By the time the sun had gone down Vitruvian had a giant mess of poor quality, cloudy glass to show for it… and one chunk that was clear and almost had a residual, noon-day gold tincture. Using tools he had brought along, he carefully cut out the material while it was still hot and plastic.

Most of it would be ground and polished away, but the next time Vitruvian came to the desert, he would have a mirror and a lens.
 
Wei Feng - Good Seed Background
@occipitallobe

Good Seed submission:
Wei Feng

Early life:

Wei Feng was born a peasant in a relatively poor village. Its only virtue was that it was on one of the lesser travelled routes that straddled between various territories held by cultivator sects and clans.

The village was almost beneath notice. Yet occasionally passing cultivators would test out the children for talent. If they found one, they would shower the village with a cultivator's pittance and take them away. Yet for mortals, is not a cultivator's pittance great wealth? Each rare time this happened it would be a cause for great celebration.

Wei Feng could not be called familiar with cultivators, save that they rarely found mortals worth more than a sneer. Their contempt was brought home to him when he witnessed one of the rare talents briefly return to the village, only to beat and denigrate their own family.

Cultivation beginnings:
When Wei Feng was 16, he was lucky enough to be scouted by a member of the Flood Dragon sect, who begun to teach him the ways of cultivation. Enamoured of becoming a cultivator under one of his folk heroes. Wei Feng swore that he would not so easily forget his origins, nor be so enamoured of immortality that he forgot that no cultivator known was truly immortal.

The Flood Dragon gang were nomadic, and after a few years of travel and training, Wei Feng had witnessed many instances of the contempt and abuse even 'righteous' cultivators heaped upon mortals.

Perhaps his breaking point was when he witnessed a battle between a Demonic cultivator and a righteous cultivator. The Demonic cultivator had taken over a mortal village, and begun torture it's inhabitants to death, boiling many alive in a great cauldron and forcing the others to watch. The righteous cultivator had arrived and simply obliterated the village in an alpha strike in an attempt to strike down the demonic cultivator.

The Demonic cultivator was heavily wounded by this initial attack, and the righteous cultivator shortly prevailed. Burning at the injustice, yet unable to challenge this much greater cultivator, Wei Feng was even more appalled to see tangible evidence of heavens favour reign down upon the 'righteous' cultivator for his destruction of the Demonic one.

Arrival to the clan:
Shortly after this, Wei Feng fell into a rage upon meeting another cultivator of the same sect and savagely beat him. Worried for the enemies he might have made and concerned about his disciple's building contempt for both righteous and demonic cultivators, his master took him on the long road to study with the Flood Dragon gang's desert allies. Hoping that seeing them be good rulers and Demonic cultivators could temper his disciple's growing rage.

Trait: Love of mortals:

Weng Fei has not forgotten his origins, or the tragedy he saw that day. He is deeply contemptuous of those who mistreat mortals and will not hesitate to protect them if he believes he can help. Whilst this will not overwhelm him into challenging those far above him, it makes him more likely to be reckless in taking fights than he should be.

Starting bonus:
Blood boiler cauldron art. A body cultivation method recovered whilst burying the dead on the same battlefield where Wei Feng saw a village destroyed. The demonic cultivator Boiling Village Feaster took an established technique and further perverted this art for his own ends, and this manual contains both the original notes and Boiling village feaster's 'improvements'. In it's original form the art demands the user immerse themselves in a boiling cauldron that is filled with various reagents, including spiritual herbs or beast blood. The manual has clearly been through several owners, with it's first Demonic user inventing a way to use the remains of dead enemies to enhance the effect. Boiling Village Feaster has added several comments around increasing the efficiency via pain and suffering (surprisingly including some improvements from increasing the users pain & suffering, though this was by no means his focus) or subsuming innocent mortals instead of enemies. Nevertheless, even in it's original form it is a powerful technique. If Wei Feng can bear to read the manual. If he can be convinced to use it.

High concept: Peasant boy determined to not become contemptuous of mortals who wished to be heroic, like most teenagers. Became increasingly contemptuous of cultivators as a whole following various poor encounters. Brought to the clan by his master to get away from some self caused trouble and to try to rehabilitate his view of cultivator treatment of mortals and demonic cultivators as a whole.

Cool thing: Body enhancement method looted off a nasty demonic cultivator.

Wei Feng

Ascenscions: HS 12

Age: 296
Cultivation - Foundation Establishment, 5th Pillar.
Effective Cultivation level - Core 5
Impact:
Orthodox: 70
Unorthodox: 13
Unorthodox:
+9 - Body Purification
+4 - Qi Purification

Orthodox:
+1 - Soul Filling rasp - Allows one to disguise oneself as a mortal to Qi Condensation senses. Depreciated, likely to be folded into other factors.
+1 - Poison Resistance from Faeces Coconut tree. Marginal at current stage. Likely to be folded into other factors.
+7 - Phoenix-Salamander Constitution. (Foundation for regenerative ability.)
+6 - Phoenix Transformation. (Temporary transformation into a powerful phoenix, with ramping strength/speed/regenerative capabilities. Heavily draining. Partial transformation is cheaper than complete transformation.)
+6 - Cloud-Stepping Lotus (Petals grant 1 hour of highly maneuverable flight once per year) - Turn 11.
+4 - Light-Phoenix Constitution (explodes in a burst of Light Qi when he dies) - Turn 12.
+2 - Silver Tinges (silver nails, hair, eyelashes and brows. Largely aesthetic, but pretty badass.)
+4 - Purifying Phoenix Constitution (evolved Light-Phoenix, bursts of Light Qi when Wei Feng is simply injured)
+4 - Silver-Fire (Silvery fire wreathed around silver regions of body, burns enemy Qi to grow hotter, improving the strength of blows throughout a fight)
+18 - Advanced to Death Step True Phoenix Bloodline + Spiteful Phoenix Mirror Technique (May touch opponents to inflict injuries equivalent to Wei Feng's current state. Takes several seconds to use, but transcends Law to function.)
+10 - Death Depicting Plumage (Can express any single "death" inflicted on oneself once as an offensive technique. Deaths are depicted on feathers as engraved images. If the expression kills an individual, the depiction disappears.)
Turn 2:
Edit: Omake 1: Wei Feng Omake: A Young boy's view of righteousness. (740 words)

Bonus request: Generic cool thing?

Omake 2:
Challenging the heavens. – More musings from the mind of a young cultivator (497 words)
Second omake of turn. Not eligible for bonus.

Turn 3:
Omake 3: Days in the life ( 3744 words. Wei Feng reflects on his poor cultivation results in turn 2, studies and trains his cultivation art and fights a dangerous blood cannibal in a ruined village.)

Omake 4: Demonic cultivation and you! Or 'the blood path and why Demonic cultivators should avoid it' (1537 words. Set in turn 2 shortly after arrival at the Clan. Wei Fang get's an explanation of how the blood path of Demonic cultivation works, why it is almost impossible to use for good, and some of the things the clan does instead.)

Turn 3 bonus request: Cultivation boost.

Turn 4
Omake 5 Meditations beneath a poison tree - Wei Feng meditates, trains and reflects in the shadow of a poisonous tree. (626 words)

Turn 4 bonus: Lifesaving treasure

Turn 5

Wei Feng 6- Trials and Choices The Trials are coming. All must deal with the horror in their own ways. (1754 words).

Wei Feng 7 - Desert Ambush - Takes place during year 65 (Turn 4). Wei Feng fights to protect a small village from a raiding party of Abyssal Devil Bees. (2112 words).

Wei Feng 8 - Foundation's fall (Year 70) - Wei Feng saves a town by trapping of a foundation establishment Abyssal Devil Bee cultivator for later clean up. (2176 words)

Seeking Tips from Seniors: The contribution board - A young cultivator seeks knowledge from the wisdom of his seniors at the contribution board. (1216 words).

We must dissent – Or "Why the council won't institute a proper essay ratings system on the contribution board" - An almost certainly non-canon look at why the contribution board system is as it is. (1078 words).

[Fake] Fifth Sea Interlude: (Un)sustainable farming practices - A (non-canon) look into the head of one of higher ups of our Fifth Sea enemies. (575 words).

So you've just become a cultivator? A Health PSA - A reassuring health announcement for new cultivators and a warning about a 'serious' condition that can occur as a cultivator develops. (659 words)

Turn 5 bonus requested: Lifesaving Treasure. Saving Juniors roll x2. Attempting the Yuan secret realm.

AN: I am terrible at names.
 
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Wei Feng 1 - A Young boy’s view of righteousness.
@occipitallobe And an omake for my Wei Feng good seed.

Nothing cool happening here as it's just backstory, so can I ask for a generic cool thing bonus?

Wei Feng Omake: A Young boy's view of righteousness.


AN: All opinions are those of the character not the writer. It is important to remember that Wei Feng is from a peasant society background that promotes certain values. He'll get better I promise. Assuming he lives.

He still has a lot to learn about the world.

I remain terrible at names.

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What does it mean to be righteous?

To be a righteous cultivator one must be morally upright and virtuous. Never straying from the correct path.

What does it mean to be self-righteous? It means a belief in your own moral superiority and virtue, no matter the circumstances.

Yet to cultivate, one must be steadfast in one's convictions. Never uncertain of your own correctness. How then, can you avoid straying from the path?

For Wei Feng did not wish to become merely self-righteous.

As a child, he had seen the sneers of the so called "righteous cultivators" as they passed through his village. At first, he had felt this to be simply the truth of nature. Were cultivators not heaven's favoured children?

Young Wei Feng had heard that Cultivators were rarer than lords & more favoured than monks and priests. Wealth dripped from their fingertips and they paid it no more attention than water drops after rain.

Wei Feng doubted they were rarer than lords. He'd never seen a lord pass their village, but he'd seen several cultivators. Stories of their wealth though, he had seen for himself.

At 10 years old, he had celebrated along with the entire village when Yi Weng Fei had been chosen by a wandering member of the Labyrinthine Rapids sect and set on the road to become a cultivator. The Labyrinthine Rapids member had handed out enough coin to keep half the village fed for months. The celebrations had lasted for most of a week, until the departure of the extra trade caravan the headman had organised to the nearest village. Wei Feng's father had even brought him back a set of rough carved wooden soldiers to play with. It had been a good time.

He had been there a scant three years later, at Yi Weng Fei's return, to see the self-righteous contempt of cultivators. He had seen Yi Weng Fei strike his young sister as she ran to embrace him. She'd sat down in the dirt out of shock and Fei had started loudly yelling at her about decorum and threatening to spank her before dragging her off towards their house. It had made him squirm to watch. He knew bone deep, that you shouldn't hit girls; and she was only eight. But as her older brother he was within his rights to discipline her in his father's stead.

Then he had dragged their father out of the house. Shouting and haranguing him about:

"How could you have raised such a rude child?"

Yi Weng Fei's father went red, embarrassed and angry.

"My son, I-"

"Son?" He roared. "You claim I could be related to this rude child?" He gestured at the girl, frozen behind him. "How dare you claim I could be related to such an inadequate father! Can a housecat beget a tiger?"

Yi Weng Fei's father went white, face contorting into a rictus of rage.

A gasp flew from Wei Feng's lips, echoing from one mouth to the next among the onlookers. To dare to harangue his father in public was bad enough, but to deny their relation entirely? Such of breach of filial piety was inconceivable.

Meanwhile, the face of Yi Weng Fei's father slowly completed its journey from embarrassment to helpless rage to terror. Realising there was nothing else he could do he fell to his knees.

"Of course not, sir. Forgive this one. This one's eyes are old and his heart's hope for his son's return blinded him to the truth. Please allow this one to take his daughter and discipline her." He begged.

"Hmmph. Pathetic. Take your rude urchin and go". The cultivator sneered down at him, before turning to leave. Ignoring the shocked crowd he left in his wake.

The village stared after him. A mere three years and he had forgotten his respect for family. A mere three years and he was consumed by the glory of "immortality".

Wei Feng swore that if he became a cultivator, if he was chosen by heaven he would never forget himself and his origins so.
 
Wei Feng 2 - Challenging the heavens
@occipitallobe And one more omake for the road.


Challenging the heavens. – More musings from the mind of a young cultivator

AN: More chunni, edgy, teenage young cultivator musings!

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Wei Feng had often heard it said that to cultivate was to defy the heavens. Yet everything he had learned said that most did not. The heavens did not care that people simply cultivated. Oh, certainly it would make some effort to strike them down during each ascension stage. Many did die. Yet, the wrath the heavens brought down on a Core formation cultivator would certainly destroy a Qi Condensing cultivator attempting to establish their foundation.

If the heavens wished, they could destroy cultivation wholesale. Yet they did not.

Why?

Neither were these the random acts of an uncaring god. If the heavens had been like a man walking the path and all stepping on a trail of ants unnoticed, then tribulations would strike at random. Not at all who attempted ascension.

Even the worst Demonic cultivator rarely triggered any direct wrath from the heavens. The continued existence of the murderers of countless millions who had not reached the heavens attested to that.

No, Cultivators of all stripes were walking the path of the heavens, not defying them. Perhaps challenging was the correct term. As a skilled charioteer challenges the course he intends to race.

As a child, Wei Feng had been warned not to touch the rice pot whilst it was over the fire. This was a good rule, for disobedience would get him burned. He had also been told to avoid widow Li or she would curse him. This was a poor rule, as no one who talked to widow Li had ever been cursed. Wei Feng did not intend to defy the heavens for defiance's sake. Yet he wondered. The heavens did not care for fairness or mortal justice. So which rules were good, and which were bad?

The Golden demon clan stood as testament to the danger of truly defying the heavens. Yet their continued existence showed that even the heavens had limits.

Perhaps the majority were correct. It was much better to challenge the heavens than to truly defy them. But he had not joined the Flood Dragon Gang simply to accept the status quo and cower away from improving things. He had sworn never to forget where you had come from.

He had no doubt that he would truly defy the heavens. He would need every tool in his arsenal.

He reached out for the Blood boiler cauldron art manual, but he felt his gorge rising. He heard the ghosts of screaming. He considered having to read Boiling Village Feaster's notes on the horrific tortures he had visited on innocent people to find non-depraved insights. He thought better of it.

Eventually. He would defy the heavens eventually. Best to pick his time carefully.
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AN2: Not sure why I decided to make his cool thing a manual gift-wrapped with trauma, but it is giving me things to write at least.
 
Wei Feng 3 - Days in the life
@occipitallobe Another omake for the omake throne.

AN: 3744 words. I think this may be the longest single omake I've ever written.

This one fought me all the way. I honestly wasn't sure whether to split it into two as in some ways it's almost a series of vignettes, but in the end I feel that the last part ties into the first just enough to justify making it a single story.

Any feedback people offer would be highly appreciated.

Wei Feng: Days in the life

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Wei Feng was the subject of no small amount of mockery by his peers. 40 years old and merely in the second heaven stage. Compared to someone like Amaranth Castellanos, who had ascended to the 9th heaven stage in a mere 20 years he was utterly without talent, which here they called receptiveness.

He knew that some members of the Golden Demon clan resented him. He was an outsider. He had come from a treasured ally, but he was still not of the clan. It was natural he would be viewed with suspicion. That the clan paid him well with resources, yet he had advanced so little had turned suspicion into outright dislike amongst some.

There were days when Wei Feng shared their dislike of himself. To be 40 years old and merely of the second heaven stage was a poor showing.

And yet, Wei Feng found it hard to truly regret. He had spent his years well. With the Golden Demons focused on raiding the blood cannibals he had joined the junior raiding parties.

Some would say his contributions had been minor; and it was true that no great songs would be sung of his deeds. To a nascent soul, who might annihilate a city of 50,000 out of sheer petulance, his deeds would be insignificant indeed.

But he had still saved lives. He had killed raiders and bandits. He had found villages that might be fed upon by some young and murderous cannibal and convinced them to move to safety. He had begged, he had cajoled and sometimes even bribed them. But he had gotten people out.

He had once run so low on items to bribe these foolish mortals with that he had literally given them the finely made clothes off his back. The look of hunger the battle blood cannibal disciple that had ambushed him that evening had nearly had him swear himself into the priesthood. That and the comments Hunger for sustenance and hunger for other things should not be mixed like that. The filed teeth hadn't helped either.

So, despite the disappointment his cultivation had turned out to be so far, Wei Feng tried to be content. And when that failed, he went out again. Seeking something to distract him. Sometimes it was seeking out the sparring fields. Sometimes it was helping a mortal village raise a new house. Sometimes it was seeking out Blood Cannibals to destroy.

Wei Feng had failed to find contentment quite often over the years and was glad for it.

Yet still the persistent issue nagged at him. Could he not do more, be more, if only his cultivation improved? But what of all those that he could already help that would go unaided as he withdrew into seclusion for months or year on end? At what point does the chance of saving more lives later eclipse the value of saving more lives now?
The paradox nagged at him.

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He poured over the notes on the Blood boiler cauldron art.

At its base form, the art was simply a body tempering cultivation method. All cultivators were naturally stronger, faster, and tougher than their mortal counterparts. Indeed, much of the purpose of the Qi condensation stage was to improve the body, purifying it to be a more capable vessel to channel the Qi of heaven and earth. Body cultivators took this a step beyond. Skin more durable than steel, bones near impossible to break, fists that could break swords. They honed and refined their bodies until their flesh was weapon every bit the equal or superior to the talismanic weapons wielded by other cultivators.

The blood boiler cauldron art was originally derived from the widely known principle that heating something can purify. From steam baths to the simple kettle, this truth is known across the world. However, it takes an unusual mind to take this principal to the length of immersing oneself in boiling liquid. After all, this is widely known as a particularly unpleasant method of execution.

The essential, righteous version of this method began with special formations that were inscribed on the cauldron to help guide the Qi into the cultivator's body in specific patterns. For Qi condensation cultivators, these formations are essential. Their most crucial function is to keep the cultivator alive and uncrippled. Almost no beginning Qi Condensation cultivator possesses the innate control of Qi to precisely guide it to stimulate and reinforce the body in the correct ways.

Certainly, no early Qi condensation cultivator could do so whilst enduring the horrific pain of being boiled alive.

The art's inventor had been of the firm opinion that pain and suffering were excellent teaching assistants.

As the art progressed, simple water quickly became insufficient to truly temper the body. Different base liquids and cauldron constructions were used. Reagents and beast cores were added to temper the body even further by focusing and intensifying Qi, passing it through the body to pressure out impurities, layering and purifying as the body was pushed towards an ideal.

Yet the Blood boiler cauldron art was no longer a righteous art. It had been stolen, reviewed, dissected, and rebuilt from the very ground by demonic cultivators of immense cunning. Then it had been stolen, reviewed, dissected, and rebuilt from the ground up by more depraved and equally cunning demonic cultivators.

The blood and bones of cultivators abounded with concentrated qi, already refined for the use of humans. A similar quantity would be many times as potent for a human as beast core. The body acted as a natural attractor of and filter to qi from the atmosphere. This could be used to improve the quantity and quality of the qi being used to refine the cultivator's body. In the desert, where atmospheric qi was thin, it allowed a great increase in the efficiency of cultivation, and a reduced need for spirt stones.

One of the most difficult parts for Wei Feng had been forcing himself not to merely to read past the ghastly musings of Boiling Village eater but understand and consider them, take them apart and re-examine them for any principle that might be applied to less odious methods of advancement than murdering helpless mortals. It was hard, sickening work yet he could not abandon it, for Wei Feng had found a few priceless insights buried in the horror.

One of the monster's earliest 'improvements' had essentially disabled the formation measures that kept the cultivator alive. The remains of the victims subjected to this gruesome death would have undergone many more changes than a living being could bear in such a short period, forming more useful materials for the Demonic cultivator's advancement.

Between bouts of vomiting and hard scrubbed baths to drive away the feelings of revulsion, Wei Feng had gradually figured out a method to slowly reduce the safety measures inherent in the base method, allowing each session to refine his body to a greater extent. At the cost of greater pain.

Wei Feng had not balked at the thought of greater pain at first. Perhaps he even welcomed it, seeing it as a way to help abrogate the sin of not burning the monstrous notes forever.

Such thoughts had not survived their first session of his refined method.

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He had, with bitter experience, set up the cauldron near a larger pool of water. He begun in the dead of night, after the heat of the desert sun had long faded, so the pool nearby might soothe his aching burns.

He wore a strange metal device on his face. It looked something like an open metal cage. Its morbid function to keep his jaw closed no matter what, for he did not trust his willpower to avoid screaming.

Holding his small qi in a rigid pattern which would allow him to slip into the liquid without risking it splashing and wasting the precious liquid, he leapt into the cauldron.

He held himself as his skin began to blister, before healing itself again. As white-hot agony raced through him as his nerves tried to shrivel and die. Held in his screams by his own will as the qi flooding his body nourished his nerves and forced them to continue their function.

He took a deep breath in through his nose. Then he dunked his head beneath the frothing water.
He wanted to scream, but he couldn't. His mouth is wired shut.

He wanted to scream, he wanted to scream, hewantedtoscream hewantedtoscream hewantedtoscream hewantedtoscream hewantedtoscream toscream toscream screamscreamscream.

Air blasts from his nose in silent attempts to scream as he tumbles, spinning in weightless agony beneath the water. A foot touches something solid and he pushes.

He erupts into air.

He rolls.

He plunges into blessed cold. He does not emerge for a very long time.

He had lasted less than 10 seconds.

Worse, he knows that eventually he will have to open his mouth under the water. Eventually he will have to open his eyes.

It would be worth it eventually. It would be worth it eventually. It had to be worth it eventually, right?

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He didn't know the name of this place. It was just another village, in a long line of others he had visited.

The village was broken. Even from a distance it was obvious that things were wrong. Damaged and empty buildings with the scent of blood on the air.
Wei Feng allowed the horror he felt to show on his face. No matter how many times he saw it, the horror never truly dulled. It was important not to let himself become numb to it.

The village was not yet a slaughterhouse, but it soon would be.

Several buildings bore the tell-tale marks of spells. Doors, windows, and walls bore the marks of too durable fists or weapons. Many of the village's inhabitants had clearly not gone quietly, and the cultivators had not been shy about making their own entrances to the homes of holdouts.

Here and there were bloodstains of a size to indicate that the person who had made them was likely dead.

But there were no corpses. Not here. Blood Cannibals didn't like to be wasteful. The attack had clearly begun some time ago. They might not fear mortals, but it would still take time for low cultivators to corral them. He didn't bother considering that this might be the work of greater cultivators. Here and there were signs of failed resistance. That mortals could even attempt to resist spoke for itself.

Still, something was off. Too many houses lay broken entirely. A few fires looked more recent than others. A fight?

He shook his head. It didn't matter. He needed to find whoever remained. The village square was the most likely place. He reached into his bag and pulled out his soul filling rasp.

It was a great treasure given to him by the Golden Demon clan as thanks for his to efforts aid the mortal residents of the lands. With it he could file away at the outward signs of his cultivation, to seem merely a mortal to any qi condensation practitioner.

Useful for retreating or for hiding in plain sight. Few cultivators considered mortals threats. That could give him an advantage against the raiders. If he could surprise them, he was confident that he might kill even a third heaven stage cultivator.

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Wei Feng crept forwards towards the square. One of the few advantages of being so low in the Qi condensation realm was that he did not have to slow his pace much to appear mortal. He was much stronger than a regular human, but not that much faster as of yet.

The scent of roasted flesh met his nose. Human. All too familiar to him from his experiences boiling himself in the blood cauldron.

Ahead of him he heard sobbing and crying. The loud wailing of children. But not the screams he was dreading and expecting. It was oddly quiet ahead. Worrying. How many had already been killed?

The square was littered with corpses. Many of them lay in pieces from where the blood cannibals had begun their feast. Part of the square was fenced off by formation flags, entrapping the remaining villagers. There were more of them still alive and whole than he had expected. Had he been wrong, and the attack was more recent than he thought?

In the centre of the square a great fire roared. Apparently, the cannibals did not like their food raw. Beside it a figure in the robes of the Blood Cannibal sect sat with their back to him. Wei Feng felt a spike of terror run through him.

Qi Condensation, fourth heaven stage!

He could run. Of course, he could run. With the rasp's magic he could crawl away with no-one the wiser.

All he would have to do was leave these people to die. Could he really do that?

But could he win?

Run, or fight? Fight, or run?

Wei Feng crept a little closer, using the remain wall of a mostly destroyed house for cover. Could he get close enough? He couldn't kill a fourth heaven stage cultivator outright. But if he could get close, perhaps he could cripple them badly enough to tip the fight in his favour.

The wall shifted abruptly, and Wei Feng flattened himself against it, freezing in place. Part of the top of the wall fell in. He waited, breathing shallowly. 'Do not look' he told himself. Peeking out of cover too early would get him caught. Wait. Have patience he counselled himself.

Finally, he dared to turn his head. There were the remains of a window next to him. He peeked through it. The cannibal hadn't moved. But he saw something else. In the corner of the collapsing house, there was another corpse. It was dressed in the robes of the Blood Cannibal sect. Had they turned on each other?

He looked again at the cannibal by the fire, reaching out with his meagre qi senses, concealed by the rasp within his robes. Did the qi feel unstable? Yes. A recent breakthrough?

He constructed a scenario in his head. The cannibals joined to raid the village. They succeeded and began their macabre harvest. One begins to breakthrough right there in the village. Sensing weakness, or perhaps fearing their newfound strength, the other (or others) turned on them. The newly risen cultivator had won, but at a cost. Their breakthrough was still unstable.

He had to take this chance, before they could stabilise themselves.

Slowly, slowly he wormed his way around the fallen house. He inched towards his target, low to the ground. He didn't dare move faster. A third or fourth heaven stage cultivator was almost twice as fast as him. If they reacted before he was in range, he would be done for.

40 meters. 30.

'Was that dark patch on their robes blood? Could they already be injured?' he thought.

20 meters.

'Right arm injury. Not crippling, not enough to win.' It was the wrong area to try and make it worse with his first attack. He needed to cripple them enough to prevent them bring their advantages to bear.

15.

He slipped his belt knife into his hand. It would be utterly useless against the cultivator's skin, but it was exactly the kind of thing an incredibly foolish mortal in his position might do. If he were spotted the addition to his disguise might buy him precious seconds. Even if he were detected, a truly arrogant cultivator might allow a mortal to try and fail to injure them to enjoy their despair.

10 meters.

He began to marshal his focus to strike. His technique had to be perfect. Where should he strike? The Dantian would be ideal. Rob them of their qi in a single strike.

No, he decided. It was too unreliable. He was not certain of his ability to strike it with it's only semi physical nature.

The thigh, he decided. A major artery runs through the thigh and it will cripple their mobility. Cultivators may be able to fight longer and with less blood than mortals, but at Qi condensation they could still die of blood loss.

5 meters.

He felt the strength of the water Qi. Many may think of water as still and placid, but Wei Feng knew the power and raging thunder of the rapids. The roar of the waves crashing down. The shock of the flood.

He readied himself for the attack. To strike with the power of a roar of a great Flood Dragon.

His outstretched hand forms a knife. Skin and bone, already like iron, shoot forward as if propelled by the weight of a great flood.

It meets a thigh as strong as an aged tree branch. Alone, his fingers would fail to find purchase, leaving a flesh wound at best. But the surging power of the flood guides and propels him. The Dragon's roar bites sharp and deeply. The cannibal, truly aware now tries to twist away from the blow. He fails, his own momentum tearing the wound wider even as Wei Feng dodges backward in swift retreat, dropping his useless knife to the ground.

Wei Feng has succeeded in striking a major blow. Perhaps even a fatal one. But first, he must live long enough to enjoy it.

His opponents snatches up a sword from the ground beside him. Long and so serrated that its edge would be near useless if it were used by mortal humans. The cannibal is not mortal.

He swings; far faster than a human, but Wei Feng is already past his range. He tries to surge back forward, keeping his opponent on the ground and is nearly disembowelled by a sudden reverse swing.

Too used to fighting cultivators of his own level, he had not thought that his opponent could so easily reverse the momentum of his sword.

Wei Feng's abrupt stop has kept his stomach intact, but his momentum is not fully halted. Even as he leans his torso back his feet still slide forwards across the ground. If he tries to retreat again so soon he will fall, or worse he will have to jump and leave himself completely vulnerable in the air.

Instead he barrels forwards, bending his torso forward. The sword comes whipping round again but this time he is ready. Gathering water qi again in fist and arm he punches upwards from underneath where he hopes the blade will be, aiming to hit the flat of the blade and direct the strike upwards and over his head, leaving the cannibal vulnerable.

It costs him. His opponent must see his ploy and turns the blade. Qi forged Metal meets qi hardened flesh and flesh gives first. The sword hits bone, but then the Flood Dragons' roar completes. The sword flies upward, taking with it a chunk of flesh but Wei Feng's other hand is free and the cannibal is wide open.

And suddenly his target is flying away from him. Wei Feng's hand catching only boot leather. He'd gotten his good leg under him and kicked off the ground.

The cannibal lands heavily, crashing through the wall of one of the more intact buildings on the edge of the square. Wei Feng tumbles and rolls back to his feet, bleeding off his own momentum and retreating.

He dares not approach again. Now that his opponent has gotten his legs under him the speed advantage of a fourth heaven stage cultivator will tell in close combat.
It is a stalemate. Wei Feng cannot retreat too far, lest he allow his opponent an opening to treat his wounds. One hand is injured, but with only one good leg the cannibal will not easily be able to close with Wei Feng. It is a stalemate that favours Wei Feng.

He sees the realisation dawn in his opponent's eyes too, and smiles. He smiles as he feels his opponent's cultivation waver, their wounds and situation telling against their not yet stabilised 4th stage breakthrough. He smiles until he feels something clamp around his foot.

His eyes flicker down. An arm disconnected from its former owner has grabbed onto him. His opponent hadn't lost control of their cultivation, they'd been casting a spell! They could control corpses. Corpses and corpse parts that littered the ground around him.

By the time he looks up he is almost too late to see his opponent's near silent charge. He kicks forward, dislodging the hand around his ankle and flinging it headlong into his opponent's face.

In the modicum of time it buys him he retreats desperately retreats, dodging grasping hands and dismembered body parts and flinging those he cannot avoid at his opponent.

Hands grasp at his robes. A corpse suddenly sticks out a leg to try and trip him up.

For minutes this macabre game of cat and mouse continues. But presently, Wei Feng begins to notice that his opponent's charges are slowing.

Dodge, hop, RUN, dodge, fling. Again, and again.

His opponent is panting now, trails of blood following him around the square.

Again, and again and again until finally, finally his opponent collapses. Their wavering qi gutters out.

Wei Feng stands, stock still and vigilant for almost 10 minutes before he dares to approach, wary of a trap.

There is none. His opponent is dead. He almost collapses out of relief.

Something releases in him. A tension untwist in him and he begins to laugh. Great laughing sobs pass his throat a relief and joy and terror.

He had survived! He had taken on a cultivator two stages above himself had survived. He felt elated and giddy as he made his way over to free the remain villagers from their prison.

Then a blackness of mood descends on him, as he looks over at his opponent's corpse. How old had that cannibal been to have reached the fourth heaven stage? The blood path was faster it was true, but how far behind was he? How much could he really do languishing in the mere second heaven stage of Qi condensation.
How many thousands of Blood Cannibals or Devil Bees were there in the upper reaches of the Qi condensation realm alone? How much of a difference could he make without more strength?

He would grow stronger. If he wanted to make a real difference; he had to.

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Wei Feng 4 - Demonic cultivation and you!
@occipitallobe Another omake for the throne.



AN: Xian xia therapists, how do they work? Badly. The chief inspiration for this was me thinking, ok I've given my character a traumatising experience where he picked up his cool body cultivation method off a dead demonic cultivator. How the hell do I get him to start looking at it?

So I came up with, chat with a mentor figure.

Then @occipitalobe posted their explanation of how the blood path works and how even touching the idea of it would make like the dark side and forever dominate your destiny. No stopping with just 1 bite; and I thought "Huh, I didn't get that at all from earlier posts". Then I thought, "I bet a lot of the non-clan cultivators don't either. I wonder how they deal with that?" Et Voila!

Then I started writing this and realised I'd gotten so far into Wei Feng's head I'd forgotten to work out how he looks from the outside. The second problem was that this takes place early in turn 2, when he's just arriving at the clan. This means that his special body cultivation hasn't actually started yet, so no artefacts of that to play with, and he's still pretty poor, so no cool custom robes. Which meant I ended up with something somewhat generic.


Demonic cultivation and you! Or 'the blood path and why Demonic cultivators should avoid it'

Takes place during turn 2, shortly after Wei Feng joins the clan:


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Bryennios Sullus was not an elder in anything other than the technical sense.

That is to say, he was old. For a Qi condensation practitioner anyway.

However, whilst he was not an Elder, he was one of a number of people of all levels of cultivation that shared an important duty within the clan. He was one of those who would speak with outside recruits and guest Elders who had had bad experiences with more terrible demonic cultivators about the philosophy of demonic cultivation as practiced by the clan in order to help them over any issues that they had.

It was important to the clan that they had people of as many cultivation levels as possible able to do this. Many cultivators would not respect those weaker than them, but it was equally important that they were not so terrified of the difference in level that they refused to ask questions. It was important to make sure they fully understood the differences, or should their minds prove truly intractable, that the clan was aware of the possibility of their betrayal

Experience had been a bitter teacher for the clan.

The next person on the list for him to talk to was young Wei Feng. According to the recruitment reports, he had come across a demonic cultivator before he joined the sect who had boiled a village alive for cultivation ingredients. The demonic cultivator had been destroyed by a righteous cultivator in a strike that incinerated both the demonic cultivator and any mortals he had yet to finish.

The experience had apparently been somewhat disillusioning for the young man.

Still, Wei Feng had been part of the Flood Dragon gang, who had been steadfast allies to the Golden Demons for generations despite being a righteous sect. He hoped that this would be much more to help the young man with any lingering issues rather than patiently explain that the cultivation methods of the Golden Demons or the Magic Oak sect were nothing like those of creatures like the Blood cannibals.

Best to at least start the full spiel though. Assuming the level of knowledge someone possessed could be a dangerous practice. The worst that could happen was that he told someone what they already knew. After all, cultivating patience with rambling Elders could also be a valuable lesson to a young cultivator!

He looked up, hearing a knock on the door.

"Good afternoon young cultivator" he said, "Do come in."

Bryennios examined the young man who stepped into his office. He was on the higher side of average height, a certain broadness across the shoulders and chest served to make him seem shorter than he really was. His skin was tanned in a way that might suggest peasant origins in the North or West but here simply marked him as a newcomer to the desert. His clothes appeared to be of relatively cheap and functional make for a cultivator. His black hair was longish, clearly in the process of growing out from a peasant's short cut. As he moved into the room his hair seemed to move slightly behind where it should be, as if it was moving through liquid rather than air. A side-effect of water Qi use, Bryennios surmised, though having come from the Flood Dragon gang this was unsurprising.

"Please take a seat." He waited politely for the young man to sit. "Do you know why I'm talking to you today?

"Your note said…." He paused and cleared his throat before starting again. "Honoured Elder, your message mentioned you wished ensure I understood the Golden Devil's cultivation philosophy". His voice seemed to waver on the last point, as if he was uncertain of its meaning but didn't want to risk asking the question.

Bryennios frowned internally. Wei Feng clearly fell back on formality with authority figures when he was intimidated. Not a terrible habit, given the often belligerent attitude senior cultivators could develop, but not helpful for this conversation. Still, best not to show it. He pasted a genial smile on his face.

"Ah, lad. I'm no Elder, I'm just old." Bryennios paused to see if the informal tone had softened his guest's nervousness. "Mostly I'm here 'cause a few people over the years have seen the 'Demonic cultivation' label the clan's gets tarred with and gotten the wrong idea."

Wei Feng tensed slightly, easily visible to Bryennios experienced eye and rapid perception. Definitely a good idea to have the talk now.

"There are a few different types of Demonic cultivation. The first is the one a lot of horror stories are about. Things done by monsters like the blood cannibals, the Demonic Altar sect" He allows some of the disgust he feels to show on his face, and is gratified by the slight untensing of the young man's face. "Now you already know we're not like them. We wouldn't be such big pals with your Flood Dragon lot if we were." He flashed a grin, then let it fade.

"This is usually known as the blood path. Consuming others directly to power up your cultivation. It's an evil path that primarily depends on murdering the defenceless. Blood Cannibals will horribly murder entire cities of mortals to get a small boost to their cultivation." His lips twitch into a frown.

"Thing is, and the reason we're having this talk….the thing is that every so often we get someone come along, see the clan and all it's work and get that demonic cultivation isn't inherently evil. Which is grand. But then they'll look at the blood path and how ridiculously fast it can boost people and they'll say…"

He pulled himself up straight, tilted his chin towards the celling and puts on an enthusiastic voice.

"Ok, this is horrible and disgusting, but is it really that bad if I use people who are already dead? I'd never do it to innocents, but if I only use my enemies and only once they're already dead it might be nauseating, but not too bad. I can use this for a greater cause!" He stared at the man across from him, all wide-eyed innocence. Then allowed the farcical impression to drop into a scowl.

"You can't." he said with finality. "Direct consumption of another's cultivation forever changes you. Those that take that first step find that the effects of spirit stones and beast cores begin to degrade. Eventually, they find that their cultivation base beings to degrade itself if they have not consumed another in a certain amount of time. Eventually all who take that first step find that they have only two choices left. To let their cultivation fade away, becoming mortal again. Or to consume more and more and more, uncaring of their targets." He pauses for a moment.

"Remarkably few choose the first." Again, he pauses to let the seriousness of the statement sink in.

"But then… what do the Golden Devil clan known as Demonic practitioners?" Wei Feng finally comes out with.

Bryennios lets himself smile. This is one of the reasons he has these talks. He enjoys his little teaching lectures, feeling like he's helping young minds understand. Perhaps it is another reason he'd make a terrible Elder, even if his cultivation had been higher. Cultivation was so intensely personal that many things could not be directly taught, without directly damaging the student's potential. Bryennios hated to have to leave students struggling.

"There is much that can be done with the corpse of an enemy, or even a willing ally that does not involve the blood path." He explained. "The skin can become powerful components in formation arrays. Organs may become treasures, hardened bones may become weapons. Even the flesh may be fed to empower beasts which may then be slaughtered." He explained, trying to mute his enthusiasm. "There are many indirect methods in which they may empower us, without stepping onto the blood path. In such a way, they may give back in death some measure of penance for what they took in life."

Bryennios tried to reign in his smile, for he knew it was a bestial thing. Taking open pleasure in the way that enemies of the clan were made to atone in death for their crimes in life was ill-mannered at best, but he could not help himself. The symmetry pleased him.

"Of course, sad as it is sometimes we must also be prepared to use the fruit of our enemies labour." His mood dimmed and his smile followed. "As pleasant as it would be to say that all artefacts or knowledge born of monstrous deeds the clan recovers are destroyed, it is accepted that if it does not bear consciousness or exist in a state of suffering, it is a fine thing to turn the enemy's work back upon them." His attention wandered away from the man across from him, looking back down the years at villages long destroyed and friends long vanished.

So absent was his attention that he failed to notice the gleam of agreement slowly growing in Wei Feng's eye. Though perhaps it did not matter. Bryennios would not have been concerned anyway.
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Wei Feng 5 - Meditations beneath a poison tree
I hope this is mostly up to standard. My muse has been running dry and then I sat down to write and this came out in one session. It's not the omake I originally wanted to write this turn as it's another training/musing one, but hopefully I can still write about events that happened this turn in the next (@Mochinator maybe Snaga next turn).

For the purpose of cultivation, when does an ecosystem become a nervous system? I don't know but I find the idea of entire forests being a single cultivating entity quite interesting. This was originally going to be a training make. Then I thought that meditation should consider deep questions and it was going to be about "if the will of heaven was externally imposed, could we have a will of nature?" thing but my muse wandered down a slightly different path halfway through.]

Meditations beneath a poison tree

Beneath the leaves of the coconut faeces tree, surrounded by a pattern of spirit stones, Wei Feng meditated.

He breathed only occasionally, and shallowly at that. With great effort and training, mere mortals could hold their breath for minutes at a time. For a qi condensation cultivator, a single breath could last far longer.

Yet no matter how shallow, every breath allowed more particles of the poisonous scent into his body. Slowly, he drew out the power of the spirit stones and circulated it within his body, reinforcing and cleansing himself. Each rhythmic pulse of qi was guided into himself. He concentrated on his kidneys, reinforcing his body's natural defences and ability to filer out poisons and impurities. At the same time, practicing this circulation of qi would naturally force impurities built up from mortal life from himself. By recognising the impurities that came from the faeces coconuts and using his qi to remove them he hoped to improve how easily he could identify and remove other types of impurity.

It was a difficult balance. If he circulated his qi too slowly, then he would become overwhelmed by the poison. Too fast and at best he might expel the poison too fast, for no benefit. At worst, he risked losing control of his qi and the improper flow could cause injuries that would be difficult or even impossible to heal. It was a test of will as well as control.

A weak will would be deadly on the path of cultivation but to Wei Feng this was not the greatest test he had faced. His own body cultivation method required he virtually boil himself alive regularly. What is a mere stink to that?

So Wei Feng had thought on his first day.

Now approaching his twenty-fifth day Wei Feng had realised that he had failed to see mount Tai. His will had been strong, but brittle. For his cultivation method had never demanded such a length of concentration and focus. Concentrating through short burst of terrible agony had not prepared him for long weeks of lesser but still potent suffering. Yet he persevered. Every day, he breathed a little more deeply. Every day he dealt with more poison, never letting his concentration waver.

Beneath the faeces coconut tree, Wei Feng let his mind wander, seeking enlightenment. He came to think on the nature of nature.

Does nature have its own will? If so, is it separate from that of an individual plant or animal?

Take the tree he now meditated beneath? Could it have its own will? After all, were there not tales of plants cultivating across many lifetimes and eventually attaining enlightenment and mortal form?

If so, could you classify the tree as evil? After all it spread a poisonous miasma across the land. Yet, could it not also be classified as good? For the miasma is marked with a thick and obvious scent and is not fatal until approached closely.

Such thoughts might be absurd. For even if the tree might one day have a will and reason, at present all it could strive for was to grow and live. It is foolish to ascribe morality to a tree for growing, or a lizard for eating flies.

Yet the thought remained. Could nature have a will, not as a single tree or animal but as a whole? Mortal humans are, after all, made up of many individual living parts that could act but would not be said to think.

If even a single plant could, across many years, develop a will and gain enlightenment, then could a glade, or a forest?

Wei Feng looked out at a desert full of buried and crystallised qi. And pondered what might be.
 
Wei Feng 6 - Trials and choices.
Trials and choices

The leadup to the trials was an awful period.

Wei Feng had not even been born when last the catastrophe had come to the Golden Devils. Neither had most of the people he knew. Yet the air was full of feeling. A stilted and broken sadness, a shadow of grief yet awaiting. Like a family gathered round the sickbed of an ailing relative, not knowing when the end would come only that it would be soon.

They were holding funerals for those who still lived. The streets were clogged with great processions for those who had seen the end of their road and chosen to use their last days to cast forward a light to the future.

Even if many of the clan observed different traditions, enough funerary money burned to send a constant corona of smoke spiralling skyward.

He hated it, for it felt like defeat had already come. Wei Feng had spent 40 years fighting to save people against the odds. Even in the stalemate that the Hua war had become, he had beaten the odds, saving many innocent lives.

Perhaps he was finally coming to understand the feelings of those who had seen their leader killed in cruel ambush. Taken back to the days as a peasant boy, watching a father cower before his arrogant son, simply because he was a cultivator.

He hated it.

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In an effort to escape the atmosphere, he hurried his pace before ducking into the shopfront of little Irene Komnene. He had first met her as a girl in the village of Naissus, which he had protected from the depredations of an immature colony of bronze fiend desert ants some decades ago. A lucky thing to have caught early. Fully mature bronze fiend ants were astonishingly fast, with beasts in the late qi condensation realm almost as fast as foundation establishment cultivators. A mature colony would have hundreds or thousands of these. A plague that would require disciplined formations or higher realm strike squads to eliminate. Their deep desert cousins, the Silver fiend ants were even worse, being fully realm breaking in speed. Fortunately, they tended to dwell deep within the desert, far from human inhabited territory.

It had been a lucky find for himself as well as the village. Bronze fiend ants were prized among the Golden Devil clan as a source of powerful cultivation aids, with the similarities of their bronze infused physiques to the clan's bloodline abilities making strong ingredients for medicines made from their flesh, and strong weapons or armour made from their mandibles and carapace. Whilst as an outsider Wei Feng lacked even a hint of the blood of bronze, he had earned many contribution points from returning their corpses to the clan.

Irene ran a small apothecary with her husband. Whilst it lacked the powerful reagents that cultivators often needed, it was excellently stocked for a mortal non-cultivator shop. They also sold a variety of teas that Wei Feng enjoyed. In the cosmopolitan heart of the Verdant South an apothecary selling tea might seem strange, but out in the desert drinking tea from strange leaves you don't know that were sold by a merchant caravan held a significant chance of death. For mortals, who better to trust than someone who already dealt with strange and dangerous herbs?

Wei Feng frowned internally at himself. As he grew towards his ninety-third year he had increasingly found himself unconsciously thinking of non-cultivators by the standard denigrating term of mortals. He didn't want to fall into that trap, which treated them as lesser simply because he was stronger and longer lived.

"Good afternoon Irene. Do you have any of the Deep desert scorpion tea?"

Irene practically tripped over herself behind the counter, before rushing to bow.

"Of course, Master cultivator. Let me just get that for you." She began bustling about the store.

"Irene, please. You've known me for years. You can call me by name." He took the time to examine her while she rustled about the store searching for his tea. He hadn't had occasion to come here for a year or two, and even that short time had aged her. Her usually plump figure had thinned slightly. Her black hair was pinned back strictly, and she wore a proper head covering to help avert the hazards of her trade. Still, her eyes looked tired, though she obscured it well with cosmetics. The dread in the atmosphere was likely getting to her as well.

"How are your children? Little Anna and Theodora?" he asked. Asking people about children was usually a good way to brighten up a conversation. Irene adored her children.

"Oh, they're wonderful. Theodora's almost 8 now. We've started teaching her the basis of herb identification and she's taken to it like sand to the desert." She babbled away.

Wei Feng nodded along, relaxing and leaning against the wall. This was what he needed. To remind himself of the ordinary struggles of life rather than dwell on the behemoth ahead of him.

"Anna has been progressing really well with her studies as well. She's doing so well we were thinking about letting her help out in the shop more openly, even if it might swell her head up so much it might burst, but…." She trailed off, her tone going from irritated cheeriness to real worry.

"But..?" he prompted gently.

"The clan recruiter came around recently. They tested Anna, they said she has the potential to be a cultivator.."

"That's wonderful news!" He burst out, smiling widely. "I'm so happy for you all. Why didn't you say so to begi….. Ah." His smile drained away. "You're worried about the trials."

Irene nodded, her jaw tight and eyes on the ground.

"You cultivators, you're stronger than us, but… the stories of the trials are awful. Last time even our previous grand Elder was supposedly struck down." She looked up at him, her voice raising "How can I send Anna into that! But..but…"

"How could you deny her the opportunity this represents." He finished quietly. "Perhaps we should talk about this over some tea?" She nodded gratefully gesturing him towards a backroom door covered with a sheet. Behind it lay a small area with a hearth and a couple of chairs. Good for breaks, but close enough that any customers could easily be heard entering.

He considered what to say as the tea boiled.

Irene's dilemma was not a unique one. Everyone knew that the trial was coming, but none knew the precise date. For parents like Irene, it meant an agonising choice. Allow their children to start their journey and hope that the trials would not take them. Or at least not begin until they had at least given their children enough time to complete basic legion training to give them the best chance to survive. Or hold them back, denying them the improvement in their quality of life that cultivation could bring for years.

Technically anyone with an appropriate level of receptiveness to qi could cultivate, no matter their age. Practically however, cultivation extended life by slowing aging, not reverting it. It was theoretically plausible for a seventy-year-old to discover a heaven defying talent and cultivate to nascent soul, but it was vastly unlikely.

There being no real upper limit had not stopped the ideal age to begin cultivation being a subject of much scholarly debate. Some scholars felt that the body released its hold on its primal chi during a girl's first flow or a male's awakening to the physical attraction of others and that beginning after this would leave a cultivator forever weakened. Other scholars held that as long as the process was begun before the peak of adolescence had passed then it made difference when a cultivator begun as they would still benefit from the greatest extension to their life and youth. And of course a strong or weak talent receptiveness to qi could have its own impact on the process.

Wei Feng held to the position that, as every person's reflection of the Dao differed, so too did the ideal starting age for cultivation. If one held strongly to the ideas of purity and aestheticism, then that understanding of the dao would naturally reflect back onto your cultivation path.

Thus, a temple sect whose members would swear a vow of chastity might ideally recruit younger candidates than other sects.

Regardless of their opinions on the ideal starting age every, clan or sect was much less likely to offer greater resources to cultivators who started too late unless they demonstrated truly heaven defying talent. The return on investment was simply to poor. Still, how to convey that.

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"… but I do not think Anna is so old that you should fear that her chances would be permanently damaged by waiting. You should speak to your daughter and involve her in the decision; but as unpleasant as it is, I am told that talents who have held off beginning their journeys have often made up a sizable portion of new recruits after previous trials." He sighed, rubbing his eyes.

"Cultivation is an intensely personal journey, and what effects it for the better or worse can vary wildly from person to person, which is why I ask you to talk to Anna. For some, missing out on the chance to serve the clan during the trials might damage their self-confidence and self-image irreparably. For others, the chance to be part of the rebuilding might spur them on to greater heights.

I can't tell you what is best here, Irene. But either way, I am certain that the clan will be glad to have Anna's help in the future."

He sat quietly for another few minutes, but Irene seemed lost in her own thoughts, so he took his leave.

Outside, once he had gained some distance from Irene's shop, he stopped and rubbed his face again, breathing out a long sigh. His attempt to cheer himself up had backfired stupendously.

Still, perhaps that had been what he needed. Seeing something of the people who would continue on, not just the ones who would make their sacrifice. He would use this experience as a whetstone to sharpen his resolve.

He held his head higher and stepped off down the street with renewed vigour.

He made it another five streets before he realised that he had forgotten his tea. Laughing at himself, he carried that cheer back to his lodgings.

Around him, the trial preparations continued unabated.

AN: The bronze fiend ants and their cousins are based on the silver ants, the fastest known ant species, who are terrifyingly fast for their size. They can travel almost a meter a second. Anna is named after Princess Anna Komnene, who wrote the Alexiad. A biography of her father Alexios I.

I think this takes me over the 10,000 word line for omakes written for this quest. Which I am very happy about. I may not be nearly as prolific as BungieOni or Alectai but I think that's pretty respectable.

Edit: Fixed a couple of errors.
 
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