Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Months of constant combat and travel, more than she'd ever done before. Only the commitment to Action in her heart kept her going. That commitment shuddered as she remembered the story she'd heard. Of Fuxi's Stand and the heroism of the last of her squad, her heart held out in the world. She remembered the story and the words echoed around her soul like a ripple in a lake.

...for more than an hour she had fought before the gate, her enemy's blows ringing out over the sands. The terror of the clan as the gates rumbled and shook. Then the thunderous cry of a hawk and a blast of thunder heralding silence and a miracle.

Her Fuxi was dead.
Oh ouch, i can feel the PAIN. Like Ferenike, this last member went out like a BOSS
Tiu Shen, Gallius Armenicus, Markus Salviati, Nan Fuxi. Mei Ling and Tiu Fen, Tiu's wife and daughter were dead too, his manor shattered and their bones scattered to ash when she wasn't there.

Dead.
Yeah.. I feel really bad for her. After losing her Juniors, she recovered only to now lose her friends. Now i feel kinda bad that i was telling you about me being abit neutral on Xiao Yi dying since that's gonna be another hit
She'd been feeling age creep up on her for decades now as a quiet study and contemplation of the world and her actions, a flow and confidence she could guide her irrepressible drive with.
I think this is a interesting contrast to that 5th Sea scum. As a Qi Condensation she feels the weight of the years and the responsibility her longevity brings while that guy is just ETERNAL YOUTH to go messing around.
Rendered in the most beautiful bronze whose shine remained even after a month in the sands and the wind. In its hands it held a blackened skull and part of a spine, as if strangling it, the rest of the body blasted to dust. The skull and spine were as impervious to the elements as the statue however. Hanging over the statue's wrists and neck were small brass bells. They started tinkling in the wind, adding another sound to the meagre noise of the world.
Oh that's a nice homage. I guess it's by the Juniors and mortals she saved, I guess 3 turns later she'll be treated as a local goddess who will one day wake when the mortals need her.
Ferenike stepped up next to the statue and leaned against it as friends do, wrapping her arm around its shoulders and running her fingers over the contours of its solid hair. She wished it wasn't like this. But she was coming to realize that this world was inimical to peace or harmony or true mercy unless one brought it in, from your self. It wasn't enough, you had to do more. What that more was, she wasn't sure yet.
Yeah...Ouch... That heartbreak in the first line.
Her breath shook as she stood next to the corpse of her friend, fingers moving swiftly over a bubble of glass. She barely had any time here to spare. She had to be moving soon. Not enough time to take a moment to cry. She breathed, holding up the little glass bell in her hand, not bigger than the end of her finger. It was inscribed with a small poem.

Spread your wings
Thunderous Cry
Fall in peace


Three, four, three. Fuxi liked that pattern. Carefully, Ferenike took the tiny bell and strung it onto the necklace of bells around her friend's neck. She stepped away from it and looked at her friend's final resting place. She took another breath and took out her last bottle of Ice Peach Wine, the dregs sloshing in its bottom. If she couldn't cry, couldn't spend the time to mourn, then she'd let herself feel it within her inner mind to remind her of the importance of making this world better.
That was a nice eulogy.



Finally, 2 Foundation Cultivators, Minervina Barda by Katana1515 and Xiao Yi by Mochinator also put down "Saving Juniors", but I'm not sure how applicably they'll be.
Yeah, that's what i'm a bit worried about because i don't see how we can fit in the Qi Condensation fights.

Especially now where we need to preserve the stronger Foundation Establishment Clansmen so they can go to Core ASAP. Really hoping the Saving Juniors helps in saving a few talents.

EDIT: Actually for us, it will be Saving Seniors since as Foundation Establishment we're pretty new. :V
 
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Three Fates have been requested - omake writers wanting to get into things! As always, I'm happy to oblige requests for the sake of omake. One I've rolled but not written, need to confirm what the Good Seed is doing.

snip Secret realm rolls.

Wow, these are amazing. Really amazing rolls rolls guys!

I'm not jealous at all, really. 🤢

Edit: At least it sounds like we did some really cool stuff with the saving juniors rolls.
 
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Finally, 2 Foundation Cultivators, Minervina Barda by Katana1515 and Xiao Yi by Mochinator also put down "Saving Juniors", but I'm not sure how applicably they'll be.

So that should be 31-34 rolls, depending on whether Minervina, Xiao and Keiros count with the others. If the ones that forgot to list it in the spreadsheet don't receive it, it'd have been 25-28 rolls instead.

Our Foundation Establishment Experts will be doing things, but their impact is commensurately greater.

I'll look the numbers over - thankfully the story I've established won't be that impacted by specific numbers - I can add a few more cultivators saved without impacting the arc at all.

That being said, if you are Saving Juniors and haven't noted it on the sheet, please do so as outlined here. There's no timely way for me to check and ensure I'm getting the right number of rolls, so I really do rely on it being written there.
 
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I've been reading some Xianxia lately, and i realized that there's one thing our Good Seeds are missing. Alias/Titles that can be used by friend and foe outside the Clan! Like how Ferenike is known as " The Golden Scorpion " here is my suggestion for some of the Good Seeds that have achieved memorable results


Rina Callista -
Omake Reward - Tribulation Boost


Let us exclude for a moment the Callista girl's efforts at Pleuron, magnificent as they were. Grand Elder, Rina Callista entered the Yuan Clan Secret Realm, that mighty Array transforming the world into something else entirely.

The report she has given us is sparse enough, for we have little time. But this is what we know.

Rina entered the Realm, seeking treasures and advancement as juniors do. There her Cauldron apparently underwent some manner of curse, blocking it for her. Of course, the girl's luck could not be denied. It was able to forge the curse itself into energy for advancement, using the agony as a tempering experience to purify her soul. The Soul-Consuming Curse was somehow transformed into the Soul-Tempering Curse, and her advancement continued apace, gaining twenty years in the blink of an eye. She was hunted down there as the Realm closed, though, and would have been killed if not for the use and consumption of her Hundred-League Boots. A loss of a treasure is a sore thing for a junior.

It was at Pleuron... well, another report concludes this. Nonetheless, I think the entire Clan know of the Indomitable Thirteen, Unrivalled Beneath Heaven, and their slaying of a Core Formation enemy. (Yes, I know they have been called the Indomitable Fourteen, but I hardly think the bear counts). Some say this was the least of their deeds. The gains for the Callista girl entailed something we have not seen before, Grand Elder. Heaven is forced sometimes into fairness, and needs to offer rewards even to those such as us for taking on punishments. Your enemy should not have been able to slay our Elders, but she recovered the Token-Sensing Tree, a tree a mere foot in height, and able to communicate to the wielder's mind the location of all nearby enemy Tokens during the Trials. Presumably grown by the enemy as a way of keeping track of their juniors, it is now in our hands. It has bonded to the girl, and only she can use it.

Taking cuttings is not an immediate prospect, but if the Callista girl can tend to the tree and help it grow, she may very well be able to offer us new hope in Trials to come.

Cultivation - 12th Heavenstage. [3 turns from 13th]
Health -
Currently healthy.
Rina Callista = Golden Devils Young Genius

When you mention Genius among the Golden Devils, it is Rina that springs to mind. Her Cultivation level and proficiency in the arts of the Clan have earned her that title. Young emphasis that despite all she has done, she's still at the start of her cultivation journey. Who knows how much greater she can go?

To her foes, she would be the Golden Devils Young Monster. If given the time to grow, she would devour all those of the same realm as her.

Tasos Basilakes -
Omake Reward - Tribulation Boost


As before, excluding the Basilake boy's efforts at Pleuron. Grand Elder, Basilakes entered the Yuan Clan Secret Realm, the Man-As-Mountain Array offering so much before the Trials began.

If we named him the second-luckiest to enter the Realm this year, only one would dare claim to be first.

Firstly, he claimed a Well of Magnetism from an ancient mountain, allowing him to curve any metals, deflecting those used against him, homing his allies weapons in against his enemies. All iron and steel is weak before him now, and he fights above where he did previously. It was the Well that allowed him that absurd stand at Pleuron, holding out for seven hours as the Core-Ruining Poison was brewed.

Secondly came the Thousand Arrow Mirror, a magical mirror into which a single arrow could be placed, living in a shadowy world. The longer it spends inside the mirror, the more it duplicates itself - an arrow left in the mirror for a year and a day will split itself into a thousand, and can be split further with arrow arts. It is not impossible for such arrows to be split themselves hundreds of times with other arts, allowing the wielder to potentially shoot at tens of thousands of foes. Seven of these arrows were used at Pleuron, driving back an assault seven times.

Third was the Magnetic Pig-Iron Squealing Dagger, a poor treasure for most. However, when combined with the Well it can fight independently, offering Tasos a melee ally equivalent in strength to himself for ten or fifteen minutes in any given combat.

Last and not at all least came the Blood-Burning Herb, a herb in that magnificent array. Used only at direst need, it costs cultivation - nearly twenty years worth, but in burning it Tasos can briefly become the equal of any in Foundation Establishment, slaughtering those in the Early and Middle stage, and even those in the Late stage would need to flee him.

Aside from this outside of the Realm, little enough happened. Ordinary cultivation, avoiding wounding or maiming in the Trials.

Another of the Indomitable Thirteen. Unrivalled Under Heaven, truly.

Cultivation - 9th Heavenstage. [1 turns from 10th]
Health -
Currently healthy.
Tasos Basilakes = Thousand Arrow Houyi,

Like how Houyi shot down the 9 suns that threaten Mankind, so too did Tasos shoot down the foes that threaten the Clan at Pleuron. Thousand Arrow to emphasis the start of his legend and what made it possible and Houyi like the Divine Archer to show his accuracy at stopping the foes.
Aretaphilia Myia -
Omake Reward - Lifesaving Treasure


Grand Elder, Myia entered the Yuan Clan Secret Realm, the Man-As-Mountain Array offering something peculiar.

If we named her the second-luckiest to enter the Realm this year, not even the Basilakes boy would claim to be first.

First here she found the Fused Bells, a set of seven bells fused together by some horrific art. They do not ring, do not do anything beyond serve as a powerful shield. Whatever magic brought them together has made them invincible. While they are unwieldy, they can block any attack below Core Formation.

Secondly came the Kettle-Blade, an odd treasure. A sword with a kettle fused to it, the kettle handle serving where the sword-handle should be. As one strikes with it, the Kettle steals Qi, and once full begins to boil over, empowering the user. For long fights it is of great use.

Third was the Mountain-Kicking Ostrich Eggshell, the shell of a bird long-hatched. The Eggshell is easily cracked and flaked, and can be used by flaking off pieces of shell, the grit disabling flight in the immediate area around her. Magical flight treasures and even the limited flight of Core Formation cultivators is effected.

It was here she met the spirit of an ancient bell, the gentle and lovely Mountain Song Bell, who taught her over ten years the Mountain Sky Song, a magical tune unheard by the Third Sea in millennia. It offers a simple blessing - to all below Aretaphilia's strength who hear it, they are raised up towards her. To those far below her in the first three Heavenstages, they see an increase in strength by three Heavenstages. For those in the fourth to sixth, it is but two. And those in the seventh and eight gain a single Heavenstage in strength. The Ninth and Tenth gain little to nothing, unfortunately.

The Mountain Sky Song was played for nearly a month straight at Pleuron, the girl forgoing sleep and food, losing weight and becoming gaunt as she kept her allies ever-strong. The tones echoed over the Waycastle, and even as they became ragged and tired offered hope and power to those trapped in that city thought doomed. The impossible odds were made more possible by the strengthening of the Clan there, and had the Waycastle not held so long even after the Elders left, the others of the Indomitable Thirteen could not have pulled off their audacious plan.

She begged off her loot at Pleuron, oddly enough - the Token-Sensing Tree that she was entitled to going to Rina Callista. A peculiar outcome, but who can say what transpired between these two?

The third of the Indomitable Thirteen. Unrivalled Under Heaven, it has been said, Grand Elder, and with each of them I can see why together they are named so.

Cultivation - 10th Heavenstage. [2 turns from 11th]
Health -
Currently healthy.
Aretaphilla Mya = Song Of Hope

Her Song has defined her and earned her a place in history. All Juniors with her rejoice, for the " Song Of Hope " has granted you strength and rekindle hopes of surviving the Trials! To her foes however, she would be the Song Of Woe for her mere presence will enhance the threat level of any group.



Last one that i think earns a title.

Minervina Barda = Divine Poison Genius

With her poisons having taken down 3 cultivators above her realm, are they not Divine in what they can do ? With a poison that assisted in turning the tides in the Devil Bee War, is she not a Genius? Fear the Divine Poison Genius for who knows what poisons she has ready? Would you be the next cultivator to help spread her name?
 
With her poisons having taken down 3 cultivators above her realm, are they not Divine in what they can do ? With a poison that assisted in turning the tides in the Devil Bee War, is she not a Genius? Fear the Divine Poison Genius for who knows what poisons she has ready? Would you be the next cultivator to help spread her name?
Well, that really depends on who cooked up the poison that took out the Core Formation attacker. There's a poison expert amongst the 13, and I'd say "brewed a poison that took out people two realms above them" is a bit more impressive.
 
Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 3 - Emmanuel 1
I've been waiting on the rolls to write Antonius directly and I've been writing up a story on his father in the meantime. It's actually getting comparable in size to my previous omake, but I'm having some trouble with the last bits. So decided to post it in parts. This one is a fight scene and set up for future parts. @occipitallobe actually do I need to tag you to every omake?

Emmanuel 1
An AEE Omake

Some trees grow alone
Some seek to grow together
Yet all seek the sun

If you had to choose a place to make your last stand, perhaps this would be it.

The colosseum was a place built for battle and now after a millennium of use, the echoes of its purpose are now infused into its very being. Many of those who stand beside you know it well from long hours of training.

Yet your enemy has seemingly studied it as well. Even as you had moved to secure its arena and the rich battle qi that suffused it, they had instead hidden in the galleries where spectators would come to watch. You scanned for their qi but the echoes of the crowds were enough to obscure them.

"Phalanx Formation!" The voice of your Centurion cut through your thoughts and you focused on the battle. The sound of drums filled the air as your drummer built a rhythm for you to follow. From a habit formed of training, you began to breathe in time with the rhythm and you heard thirty-two breaths blend into one.

You held up your shield to protect you from above. In front of you, your shield-sister planted her shield to the ground to protect you from attacks in the front. All around you, your brothers and sisters shifted into a protective wall. You pushed your spear through the gaps as the rhythm seeped into your heartbeats and your blood flowed with the Blood of Bronze.

Then you waited, your senses strained but with your focus on bracing your body. Those with sensory arts were protected in the center and it would be their duty to find the enemy. Sweat dripped down your neck as time passed and you waited for someone to make a move. Then you felt the spark of panic that filled you when you sensed a killing blow.

A single devastating arrow flew towards you and you felt your shield-sister brace. She would be the target. You held strong, ready to help her weather the impact. It struck with incredible force as she intercepted it with her shield and you could feel the impact travel through her to you. The formation shuddered as the arrow struck. The blow might have killed her if she were alone but you fought together and with you bracing her, the strike was pushed aside.

You sensed the path of a spear in the air, thrown when you were bracing but though it struck where the enemy should have been only stone was broken on impact. The enemy had repositioned and the battle had only just begun.

It was an exchange of arrows and spears. The enemy's intent felt as if it were one individual, but the attacks came from every direction. Was it many similar individuals hidden away or a single enemy capable of rapidly and covertly shifting their position? Arrows fell from all directions, arcing to hit from the sky while simultaneously hitting hard and fast at the one you should have been bracing.

Your defence was prodded and tested as you weathered their blows but your sensors were learning from them in turn as every spear came ever closer. Then an arrow struck your shield-sister and you felt her slip. The ring of metal filled the air and her shield was punctured as she faltered.

You could sense that she wasn't wounded but her manner told you her hand was impaired from the impact. She was in no shape to defend. With no other choice, you pulled her in and pulsed your qi. As you moved forward to take her place, you felt an attacker come forward as the center responded to your message. She took his place as though she couldn't defend, she could aid in the attack.

In that moment of exchange where there was nobody behind you, an arrow struck your shield with incredible force. You planted your feet to the ground, and pushed back against the attack. Just as you might have failed, you felt a body at your back steadying you. Then with an effort of will, you pushed the arrow back and it deflected off to the side.

The enemy redoubled their efforts now that they had tasted weakness. Attacks came forth in an endless volley. Some stronger, some faster but slowly and surely they chipped at your defence. But even as this game of battle dragged on, you knew that those at the centre did their duty. Even as their brothers and sisters were wounded, their eyes were focused on the enemy. You just needed a single sign…

Then the signal came with a shift in the drumbeat.

A spear flew from the centre and a spike of alarm from the stands showed that you had found your target. Before they could even fire, your allies had struck. But your joy was short-lived as an arrow intercepted the spear and shattered it in the air. A second spear trailed behind the first only to be stopped by another arrow. The third was shattered as well but each came closer to the enemy's position.

Even you could feel your enemy as their discipline faltered in the face of the attack but then their qi disappeared and every spear after that merely shattered stone. The enemy had managed to move to another position.

An arrow struck the man next to you and the battle continued. The exchange, while not as successful as you wished, had revealed the enemy's weaknesses. Though the enemy tried to hide it and the opening was slight, the exchange proved that the enemy could only fire three arrows at a time. With a chance to sense them properly, you could also know that there was only one enemy. The sensors would have gleaned much more.

As the next arrow struck you, you realised the blow was lighter than before. As soon as you thought that, one of your allies was struck as well. This time, the enemy was choosing speed over strength as your attackers continued to hound her. Though the attacks were faster and targeting any weaknesses, they were also lighter and easier to weather.

The enemy was on the run and you just needed to keep defending as others watched and waited. The enemy was strong. It was as if you faced more than merely a single enemy but despite that, the enemy was only human and soon they were detected once more.

This time, they were allowed to shoot. The first arrow struck your shield and you weathered it to deprive them of a weapon. A spear was thrown simultaneously and it met its destruction in the air. Other spears followed but no third arrow flew to intercept. As the sound of shattering stone filled the air, you knew that the enemy had anticipated you and already moved on.

Then another spear flew in a completely different direction. You felt the spike of qi that indicated surprise and an arrow struck the spear to shatter it. You felt a smile creep into your face as you realised that the enemy had fled to their next vantage point and found attacks already arrayed against them.

Though they seemed to have arrows ready, the spears were already too close. For a moment, their composure shattered and their actions were open for all to sense. One arrow flew to meet a spear. One spear was batted aside with a hand. The third and those that came after met no resistance.

Or at least they wouldn't have if they weren't batted aside by many invisible strings as the mock battle ended.

"Halt!" Your centurion commanded, his voice cutting through the battle fugue and you felt the attackers freeze mid-swing. All of your shield-siblings paused in their activities and then the centurion gave his next command. "At ease, squadron!"

With permission given, you took a deep breath and stepped out of the formation. Then you dropped both your shield and spear to shake your hands off. They felt like lead and sweat coated your body. You took a faltering breath and began cycling qi throughout your system.

Your mind began to clear from the effects of the battle as the aura of the colosseum was flushed from you. It was strong but made even a practise bout seem like a battle of life and death. You recovered quickly and as you looked around at your squadron, you noticed your legate with two women walking towards you from the spectator's galleries.

Legate Alcaeus was as always the first to draw the eye. He was easily recognizable with his large size and his long hair and beard turned green with age. He was wearing high-quality armor forged in the likeness of your legion standard and though it was barely leaving his skin, the aura of a Core Formation Elder burned in his body.

The woman to his right had the aura of a Foundation Establishment cultivator of the first pillar. She had the standard legion-issue armor and signature bronzed hair of your sect but she wore the design of a legion other than your own. Still, the horned spear she was turning in her right hand was easily recognizable. Though you couldn't see them, you realised she must be pulling back the strings that stopped your attacks.

The woman to his left was of the same realm as you and her aura revealed her to be your opponent. Still, she was unfamiliar to you and her strange black hair marked her as clearly not of your sect. Still, she wore your colors with a simple dress of seemingly woven bronze over leggings that were standard legion issue. A quiver at her side confirmed that she was an archer though a bow wasn't immediately obvious.

The first woman was Ariadne Taurus, the mistress of the labyrinthine thread and golden child of the Taurus Family. You knew her from rumours and from previous times she had worked with your legion. They stopped in front of your squadron and she waited, eyes going over you all critically as your squadron recovered, many taking the chance to breathe or just stretch their limbs.

"Attention!" Alcaeus commanded and you quickly placed your shield at your back and picked up your spear to join your shield-siblings. Together, you arranged yourself in a square and turned to face him. The expert also straightened at the command though she didn't have the sharpness that came with military training.

An auxiliary perhaps? Or someone who married into the sect. Her aura was hard to read and she was seemingly unaffected by the exertion of the battle."Squadron, first thank your Senior Sister Ariadne and her Auxiliary Eleanora for taking the time to assist you in your training." He continued, answering some of your thoughts.

"Thank you for your assistance." You said, your voice joined by the others. Ariadne simply smiled in response and the auxiliary nodded, her eyes looking over your squadron.

Alcaeus nodded in approval. "At ease, squadron." He commanded and then turned to the others next to him. "What did you think, Ariadne?" You all took the moment to relax as the lady considered her answer.

"Eleanora is at the seventh heavenstage and I'd personally vouch for her skill," She began, nodding at the auxiliary. Then she looked at each of you in turn as she continued. "So though she was as unprepared as you were, you did a good job in taking her down. Your formation balanced attack and defence quite well while preserving your strength."

"Thank you, Senior Sister." You answered her and she nodded in acceptance. You found your eye wandering to the auxiliary. You had just reached the fifth heavenstage and many of your allies were at similar levels. Her skill was impressive.

"However." She continued, drawing your eye. "I noticed that you could have ended the battle sooner if you had used the clan's formations during the battle. That should be integrated into your technique." She glanced at your legate who nodded encouragingly. "Besides that I think it was well done. This form of combat is something you should continue to pursue."

Alcaeus nodded at her and then turned to all of you. "Good work today! Tomorrow, we will go over your faults and how to improve them. Until then, think on how else you might improve it." He then turns to you specifically and you straighten. "Emmanuel, remain here. Others are dismissed."

You look at him warily wondering why he singled you out and you note that the ladies regarded you curiously as well. So they didn't know why you were called out either? Your legate smiled at you and you relaxed. It was a personal matter then.

"What did you need, legate?" You ask him, smiling back lightly. He held a hand up and you waited as he turned to Ariadne.

"Do you remember Ambrosius, Ariadne?" He asks, and you follow his gaze curiously. You were unsure why your father was mentioned in this context.

Ariadne gave him a puzzled look then took a moment to study you. Then her eyes widened in recognition. "Ah you are his son, aren't you?"

"Yes," You answered cautiously. "I am called Emmanuel Ambrosius."

"Your father worked heavily with my clan's smiths," She explained and then she hesitated. "And he also helped me out in the last trial." You nod in understanding. Your father hadn't made it out. Alcaeus nodded solemnly at you and the auxiliary looked at you with a frown.

"He has been cultivating based on his father's notes and most of the body cultivation was achievable with the aid of my legion," Your legate explained. You nodded along as you realised where this was going. "However, the next stage of his cultivation requires bronze smithing techniques that his father learnt from your family. I was hoping you could help him with that?"

You glanced at Ariadne. While you had requested his aid, you hadn't expected this. You bowed at her. "Senior Sister, I would be glad of any pointers you can give me."

"Call me Ariadne please," She replies, smiling wistfully. "You are currently in Meridian Opening, yes?"

You nod in response and she smiled. "What do you think?" Alcaeus asked her. She thinks for a moment and then nods.

"Give me some time to talk to my clan and see what I arrange." She said, looking you over. You nodded gratefully. "Once something is ready, I will arrange for us to meet. Would that work for you?"

You bowed to her. "Thank you for your assistance, Se- Ariadne."

She accepts it with a light smile. "It was no trouble, Emmanuel. Good luck in your cultivation."

Alcaeus waited until you were done and then inclined his head in the direction of the rest of the squadron. "Join the rest." He said. "I will see you in the gymnasium."

You bow at them one final time and then walk back to your shield-siblings. If it all worked out, it could be incredibly helpful for your cultivation.
 
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Xiuying Ten Jiang - Good Seed Background
Okay, decided to just go for it and do a good seed submission.

Name: Xiuying Ten Jiang

Appearance:
Age: 205

Current Status: (Turn 15)

Impact:
32 (23+9 unorthodox)
Cultivation: Core Formation Misty Core (Early)
Cultivation Year Equivalent: 427 years
Health: Healthy
LST: 4


Backstory: Xiuying was the daughter of a noodle vendor who made their living in one of the more backwater villages in the Golden Devil Clan territories. Xiuying's family didn't have any of the fabled blood of bronze flowing in them, having migrated to these lands decades ago to escape the invasion of the Abyssal Devil Bees when they attacked the plains. Xiuying had been content to be the daughter of a noodle vendor, never knowing hunger and enjoying the peaceful days in her village.

It was shortly after the end of the Hundred-Year Trials that her life changed forever. With the losses that the Golden Devil clan had suffered during the trials come a drop in patrolling cultivators to keep the peace. And with less security throughout the land, there came a rise in criminals and bandits. Xiuying's village would have been one of many small villages that would suffer under the hands of bandit scums if not for a wandering cultivator that had stopped by the small village for lunch.

Xiuying witnessed firsthand the abilities of this mysterious sword cultivator who beheaded every single bandit with but a single cut, without even getting off from their seat. The sight of that singular cut that saved her village in an instant was burned into her memory, the beauty of that magnificent cut made Xiuying cry tears despite her ignorance in the matters of cultivators and weapons. As the sword cultivator returned to eating their noodle as though they hadn't just killed several dozen men in a single sword stroke, Xiuying threw herself to the ground in front of the man, kneeling and begging him to teach her how to wield the sword as he did.

The cultivator gave the girl one good long look before finishing their noodles and tossing the girl a horribly chipped, rusted blade that was more rust than sword before telling her that if Xiuying truly wished to become his student, she was to take that sword and not return to him until she had shaved off every single hair from her head.

The cultivator was understandably surprised and not a tiny bit horrified as Xiuying proceeded to do as the man had ordered right there in front of him. Shaving her head with a sword that could be considered a temple to the gods of rust was impossible to do cleanly and soon her head was covered in her own blood as she desperately tried to shave off every single strand of hair from her head.

Although they tried to stop Xiuying at first, the swordsman couldn't deny the girl's bloodsoaked determination and allowed Xiuying to finish shaving her head. Once Xiuying was done, the swordmaster cleaned and bandaged the girl's wounds before finally making a decision. Unable to refuse the girl who had finished the task he had set for her, the swordmaster took Xiuying at their first student.

For the next few years, the swordmaster stayed in the village, training Xiuying in the way of "Sword Law", an unique cultivation path that hyperfocused on the Dao of Cutting. Sword Law was an extreme path that no orthodox cultivator would normally take. It made a person very good at killing and little else. Many times would Xiuying's master would try and warn her off the path of Sword Law but Xiuying wished only to someday perform a cut of great beauty that her master was capable of. There were also lessons that made little sense to Xiuying which her master admitted that he didn't really understand either, as he was simply repeating what his own teacher had taught him.

As time passed, Xiuying would eventually learn that her teacher came from a place that had much higher levels of qi in the environment and that her master was in fact lost and was waiting for his younger sister to come atake him back home. Eventually, Xiuying's master came to tell her that it was time for him to go. Not only had his sister finally found him, but he'd also reached the limit of how much longer he could sustain himself in this low qi realm through what resources he had on him.

Before leaving, Xiuying's master finally told Xiuying his name and gave her a manual that he made in preparation for this parting. This manual would contain everything Xiuying needed to continue along the path of Sword Law. There were also supplementary techniques and knowledge that would be unlocked when Xiuying reached a certain level of cultivation. Despite Xiuying's desire to follow her teacher, her master could not let her come with him for he was embroiled in a great battle back in his home realm and to bring her with him would be the same as killing her. Her master then told her that she should leave her village and see where her feet take her, that she should maybe go join those interesting Golden Devils that she knew about.

Xiuying watched her master leave the Third Sea through a shining rift in time and space that closed after him, preventing her from following after him. The last thing that her master told her was that if she manages to reach the Red City, they would likely meet again.

Xiuying decided to follow her master's last advice and head over to the capital city of the Golden and join their forces in order to further her understanding of Sword Law.

She would make her teacher, Jiang Chen Ten Meti, proud when she meets him again, should fate allow it.

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Bonus: Meti's Sword Manual (Annotated Edition) by Jiang Chen Ten Meti - Allows the user to practice Sword Law, a cultivation style that is hyperfocused on the art of cutting. In essence, it allows a person to become a combat-specced cultivator that is capable of hitting above their realm, without the use of treasures or special bloodline. It is a style that is an anomaly among anomalies, with the price being the complete inability to be anything but the most efficient method possible to murder people. This particular edition of Meti's Sword Manual has notes by one of her students, meant to help one learn Sword Law without the direct teaching of a master. It also contains additional techniques and knowledge that can only be unlocked by advancing in cultivation.

Cool Stuff:
Thousand-Year Noodle Pot (+6 Impact) -
An ancient and powerful pot, one of the ten Legendary Cooking Utensils that had been created by the mystical gourmet master chef Shui Lei. Anything that was cooked within this pot would bring forth the maximum potential of all the ingredients fused together, as far as they could in some sort of noodle soup. When eaten fresh, it temporarily grants the consumer tremendous speed and strength, easily make them the equal of those many small realms above them.
Fragment of Otherworldly Sword King's Cutting Intent (+4 Impact) - A fragment of Sword Intent that was cast off from its progenitor in another universe, well beyond the reach of anyone that lives in the world that Xiuying lives in. This fragment of Sword Intent can only be perceived by those who follow the path of Sword Law. This fragment holds memories of swordsmen who fought without ever using an actual sword, allowing those who take in this fragment to better comprehend the First Precept of Sword Law, "Consider: there is no such thing as a sword". Those who become enlightened will attain a means of cutting without a sword.
Spatial Cut Technique (+6 Impact) - One of two inheritances left by one of the Sword Dao Seekers from before the arrival of the Sea-Conquering Army. As simple as it sounded, one could cut space itself with this technique. Difficult to execute but practically irresistible, it can cut almost anything in half - including distance itself. Without mastery, the slash would merely take the user somewhere, but somewhere could be a useful escape. Such a powerful technique would drain all of their Qi Reserves, however.
Severing Strike (+6 Impact) - The other of two inheritances left by one of the Sword Dao Seekers from before the arrival of the Sea-Conquering Army. Taught to Xiuying by the echoes of the Dao Seeker who named themselves Senior Brother Long Fang, it is a technique that allows Xiuying to sever anything, in theory. In practice, due to being a Qi Cultivator, Xiuying is limited in what she can actually sever. But even as she was, Xiuying is capable of separating a thought from a mind, a minor wound from a body, the use of a technique from an enemy. Difficult to use and expensive, but in the right circumstances it would be completely decisive.
Mother of Poisons Saliva (+1 Impact) - A single drop of poison from the Great Spider, the Moth of Poisons, that gave insight to Xiuying on how poison can cut and vice versa. Collected by Xiuying, after witnessing a single drop of venom from the fangs of the Mother of Poisons cut a Core Formation elder in half, seemingly drawing from Xiuying's nature, and choosing to meditate beneath the great spider to comprehend what had happened. This allows Xiuying to create cuts that occur slowly over time, becoming larger and lethal until something is severed.

Fighting Style:
After her excursion into the Yuan Secret Realm and the trials that she faced within, Xiuying's fighting style has evolved into a much more complex and more flexible style of swordsmanship.

Originally, Xiuying's swordsmanship was almost purely focused on putting everything into a singular cut that was almost certain to cut anything in its path. This style of fighting was reliant on firm footing, skillfully utilising the entire body in order to perform a singular swing at full power, and an unfathomable Will to Cut. Emptying her mind, Xiuying cuts down her foe through her Will.

In most cases, Xiuying's goal in combat is to cut down the opponent in a single cut. A difficult task in many cases but made possible due to the nature of Sword Law and its singular focus on the principle art of cutting. Usually, a charging swing is enough to kill Xiuying's opponent.

However, if the opponent fails to die or successfully dodges the attack, Xiuying's effective combat ability briefly drops as she spends precious moments repositioning herself for another attack. While repositioning herself, Xiuying has learnt how to avoid her opponent's attack with as little wasted movement as possible.

However, as Xiuying faced off against many kinds of opponents, she soon began to realise that she could no longer solely rely on her simple attack. While her cut was almost impossibly lethal to those in her great realm, if she could not strike her opponent, it was meaningless.

After her first duel and subsequent loss against Long Min, Xiuying was made painfully aware of the flaws in her fighting style. Driven by frustration and shame over her defeat, Xiuying delved deeper into the nature of Sword Law and its otherworldly nature.

In the time between her defeat and her rematch, Xiuying attuned herself to five of the royal syllables and developed five distinct combat stances that resonate with each Word of Power that she has learnt. While she has yet to truly comprehend them as such as task would require true enlightenment or a significant amount of power and experiences, just knowing the Words of Power confers strength to Xiuying's spiritual pillar and her cut.

Currently, Xiuying has developed the following stances: -

Flame - The Flame stance is usually Xiuying's opening stance. It is the embodiment of Xiuying's passion for the sword or at least the art of cutting. It is characterised by powerful singular strikes made from various angles. Speed of action is the main attribute of this stance, as Xiuying was taught that her first strike in combat should ideally be the killing blow as well and that she needed to be able to close in on her opponent without fail. It is the stance closest to Xiuying's original fighting style. In this stance, Xiuying will usually seek to decapitate her opponent though she does not shy aware from bisecting her enemies or dismembering them.

Beast - The Beast stance is one that Xiuying uses when she has been disarmed or otherwise unable to use a sword. Originally, Xiuying made use of basic unarmed combat techniques that she learned during her legionnaire training. Realising that these techniques had low compatibility with her, Xiuying decided to try and copy wild animals. Most of her techniques in her stance are simple, straightforward yet wild, unpredictable and animalistic movements and attacks, along with a brutality not normally present in her other stances. Every part of her body becomes a deadly weapon. In Beast Stance, Xiuying seeks to rip and tear apart her foe until they are either dead or she manages to get her hands on a sword again, whichever comes first. There are also several sword techniques that she can use in Beast Stance.

Glory - The Glory Stance is a stance that Xiuying uses when Xiuying is up against an opponent too agile for her to normally strike down in Flame Stance. In Glory Stance, Xiuying strikes with flowing, graceful attacks with a high focus on agility. The techniques used by Xiuying in Glory Stance can be described as visually beautiful and breathtaking, drawing attention from all who witness her attacks. Xiuying's movements weave in on themselves, spinning and rotating, often giving the impression of multiple strikes in her attacks when in reality it is just one elaborately swung cut. By changing how she moves, Xiuying appears to create after-images that distract and confuse her opponents. Though weaker than the other stances, Glory serves to confuse and misdirect the enemy as Xiuying readies herself for a proper true cut as well as better defend herself against enemy attacks.

Tower - The Tower Stance is Xiuying's most defensive stance. Focusing almost everything on defence, Xiuying firmly plants herself on the ground and prepares herself to defend against all attacks. She parries, deflects, blocks, or simply cuts any attack before they can do her harm. Her senses are pushed to their limits to predict and precisely defend against her opponent's attacks. Though it seems like Xiuying is entirely focused on defence, in reality, Xiuying is preparing herself for when she must break down her guard for even a perfectly built impenetrable tower will mean death if one can not leave it. Upon releasing her guard, the earth shatters as she kicks off the ground, the strength she used to become near immovable transformed into movement, her sword flashing like lightning striking a tower to bring ruin to her opponent.

Diamond - The Diamond Stance is Xiuying's one of her more exhausting stances as well as her riskiest one. Pushing her senses and brainpower to the limit, Xiuying analyses her opponents' movements, visually in her mind her opponent's capabilities and fighting style as a raw unprocessed gemstone. As she fights or observes her opponent, this mental raw gemstone is processed and cut into a beautifully cut gemstone, representing Xiuying's complete understanding of her opponent's fighting style. Once this mental gemstone is fully cut, Xiuying has completed her analyse of her opponent and is able to accurately predict and counter her opponent's technique and attacks. Diamond Stance is difficult for Xiuying to use as it requires her to hold back her Will while she analyses her opponent but once the analysis is complete, her Will surges forth with far greater strength and lethal precision.

Blade - Blade Stance is Xiuying's most powerful and most dangerous stance. It would be better to call it a technique rather than a stance except that in order to use it, Xiuying needs to bring forth every bit of strength and power that she can muster from her body in order to exert the force needed to perform a cut while in Blade Stance. Utilising every technique and ability that she has, Xiuying has successfully created a cut of immense power and destruction. In essence, Xiuying uses her spatial cut technique to temporarily cut herself out of existence. In the place in between existence and non-existence, Xiuying focuses her strength, drawing out every bit of power from her body to forcibly swing her blade down with immense force. Imbuing this cut with her Severing Strike technique and the full force of her Sword Intent, Xiuying cuts her way back into reality. She cuts away the notion of impossibility in her action as she does so, and her blade emerges from the aether, coming down at her chosen target with unbelievable amounts of energy trailing behind it. As it makes contact with the air around it, the energy erupts with incredible explosive force. Everything around the point of impact is engulfed in atomic flames and force. Only those with powerful defensive items and techniques as well as Life-Preserving treasures of the evasive type can hope to avoid being slain by this attack. At her present stage, Xiuying can only unleash this technique once before collapsing from both physical and spiritual exhaustion.

Outside of certain techniques that she utilises, these stances make up the core of Xiuying's fighting style.

Fates:
It was during her adventures about the lands of the Clan that she found it. Not a sword, of course. That would be ridiculous. Rather, an ancient and powerful pot, filled to the brim with thousand-year-old Heavenly Noodles. The noodles themselves empowered her briefly, but she found anything inside the Thousand-Year Noodle Pot (+6 Impact) when cooked would somehow bring out the absolute maximum potential of all ingredients fused together - insofar as they could be in some sort of noodle soup. Upon slurping down fresh noodles made from the pot, her strength rises innumerable stages and she is the equal of those many Heavenstages above her, finding tremendous speed and strength entering her temporarily and making her far powerful than she would otherwise be. Of course, it does require some setup time, and the less fresh the noodles are, the less powerful they are, rapidly falling off once cold. Her talent for cultivation remained below average, reaching only the 3rd Heavenstage, however.
Impact: 0 -> 6
Cultivation:
1st Heavenstage -> 3rd Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent: 32 Years (+11)
Health: Healthy -> Healthy
Omake Reward: Lifesaving Treasure
Entering the Qiguai Secret Realm, Xiuying found herself in possession of several key things. While she was unable to find any treasures at first, her sale of noodles made her popular, even among those who hated the Clan. Several cultivators who would have ordinarily slew her for her nature instead gave her tips (one awkwardly flirting with her in what she presumed was an attempt to gain a discount) as to where to find valuable treasures, and eventually she was able to uncover Thousand-Year Spirit Wheat, a powerful sheaf of wheat that she was able to pound into flour, and from there, made noodles. It seemed a logical thing to do - if one had a pill cauldron, forge pills. If one had a noodle stand, make noodles. She only had enough wheat for one bowl, but it advanced her cultivation significantly (+40 Cultivation). Shortly after, she found a most peculiar thing, that nobody else could sense. A fragment of Sword Intent (+4 Impact), merely... floating in the air. As though it had been waiting for her. As it entered her dantian, she found herself on the road to cutting without a blade, able to use her mere intent to cut to actually cut, though only rarely. Shortly after, however, she was met by a band of Yuan Clan young masters who loathed noodles, and beat her viciously. They aimed to kill her, and only with the use of a treasure did she escape (Badly Wounded). She decided to leave, and they ambushed her again. Had she not used her second treasure, they would have killed her outright, but she escaped without further wounds.
Impact: 10 (+6)
Cultivation:
3rd Heavenstage -> 9th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent: 73 years (+41)
Health:
Healthy -> Dead (LST interrupt) -> Badly Wounded -> Dead (LST interrupt) -> Badly Wounded
Omake Reward: Lifesaving Treasure
Xiuying Ten Jiang. Practitioner of Sword Law. Noodle vendor. And now, accidental hero of Fire Duck Town. After spending time recovering from her wounds, she recuperated in Fire Duck Town, a small town well-known for its food vendors and doctors. Settling in for her recovery, she was experimenting with her recipes when a band of bandits attacked. Despite being badly wounded, she fought them, and as one ducked, she cut through the head of the mayor who had been standing behind them. Shortly after the entire plot came out - the mayor was a Cannibal who had been hidden in the town as a spy for thirty years, using vile blood arts to control the bandits and forcing them to raid the local area. They swore to return to righteousness now they were no longer under his control, and a small statue of Xiuying was raised to commemorate her victory. Unfortunately, this was only a moral victory - coming with few valuable material rewards.
Impact: 10 (+0)
Cultivation: 9th Heavenstage
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 75 (+2)
Health: Badly Wounded --> Wounded
Omake Reward: Lifesaving Treasure
Xiuying was sent into the lands of the Storks, and there she found great friends. The Longevity Stork Clan used cooking as well as pills for their longevity arts, and while she did not gain the option of lifespan extension noodles, she did befriend a trio of powerful chefs. Suddenly she was sent hither and thither to gather materials and ended up being gifted a Lifespan Ignition Pill (+20 cultivation), alongside a faulty Lifespan Philter for her efforts and friendship. The latter enhanced lifespan, but the effect lasted only a few days. However, the pill could turn the false lifespan into true cultivation, allowing her to stride into the 10th Heavenstage.
Impact: 10 (+0)
Cultivation: 10th Heavenstage
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 110 (+35)
Health: Lightly Wounded --> Healthy
Omake Reward: - LST
Xiuying's breakthrough was no small matter, and her rise into Foundation Establishment saw her firm her First Pillar with ease. Xiuying was involved in that matter of Kalki where she fought a Fifth Sea Cultivator named Kurma. Despite her mastery of Sword Law, she lacked the raw power and qi to break through her opponent's defensive treasures, her all-out offense eventually turning into a savage beating. She survived thanks to Wei Feng forcing Kalki back to the Fifth Sea, prompting the Single-Pillar Fifth Sea Cultivator's allies to join him less he be taken down by his enemies at home.
Impact: 19 (9 unorthodox)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment True 1-Pillar (Fortified Pillar)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 122 (+22)
Health: Lightly Wounded --> Healthy
Omake Reward: - Tribulation Boost
When Xiuying entered the Yuan Realm, she was an Early Foundation expert, with just one pillar and eyes full of hope, When she left, she was like a ragged vision of hell itself, and walked with five pillars in tow.
In the first week of her journey, Xiuying was accosted by Long Min, one of the greatest rising stars of the Seven Divine Saber Palace. Considering the very idea of a Golden Devil mastering the blade to be a joke, he challenged the heir of the Sword Law to a duel. Though both experts brought incredible powers to the clash, her opponent's cultivation was simply too far ahead, which made the difference and cost Xiuying the duel. Unwilling to kill an enemy over as simple a matter as proving a point, Long Min went on his way, though if he had realized the power of the Thousand-Year Noodle Pot he might not have been so merciful.
Left alone and humiliated in the middle of that unnaturally verdant land, Xiuying was overcome with anger, as well as a burning desire to wipe away the shame she had brought to the Sword Law.
First, she cut her way through a herd of Bronze Aurochs, brewing their flank-meat into soup. (+40 cultivation years)
Next, she defeated the ghost of an ancient weapon-master that haunted a bamboo forest. The master, grateful for one last battle, flung himself into her pot and became soup as well. (+40 cultivation years)
Finally, she found the molten slag left by a core-formation sword burnt by Dragonfire. It was useless as a weapon but contained within it a single flash of the dragon's attack. Releasing the divine flame, she cooked one more pot of soup, ascending even higher. (+20 cultivation years)
After the year was up, Xiuying confronted Long Min once more. The Saber Palace disciple had grown stronger as well, but not as much as she had - they were evenly matched now. The second duel was far more brutal than the first, as both fighters were too prideful to give up. When Xiuying, after nearly an hour of battle, forced her opponent to surrender, she was nearly in pieces herself (Badly Wounded). As Long Min had spared her, she spared him in turn, leaving for Hong Xuan with her honour restored.
There, she took part in Demitrius' plan. He would chase the wounded spirit to her, and in a single burst of power, she would ambush it and cut it to pieces. The last step was up to Amaranth...The ambush failed due to Xiuying being unable to cut deeply enough to fully separate the fire spirit's body into pieces, preventing Amaranth from fully consuming the malevolent entity.
Impact: 19 (9 unorthodox)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment 5-Pillar (Late)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 225 (+103)
Health: Healthy --> Dead --> Badly Wounded (LST Interrupt)
Omake Reward: - LST
Creeping about like a rat, Xiuying struck deep into the territory of the Jingshen, leading a raid of six cultivators to begin a plan that could lure a Nascent response. A truly dangerous mission, but her part was complete, fleeing from two Core Formation Jingshen elders, avoiding them by the skin of her teeth. One step slower, and she would've been struck terrible, but instead her light footsteps taunted her enemies as she fled. The repurposing of the All-Blinding Away could begin.
Impact: 19 (9 unorthodox)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment 5-Pillar (Late)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 233 (+8)
Health: Badly Wounded --> Healthy
Omake Reward: - Healing Treasure
Xiuying entered the Secret Realm, and found her way to a long-described door, locked against all but sword cultivators. She cut it, and it opened, taking her into a place beyond space, between the Seas themselves. There she saw terrible things, visions of swords destroying worlds and shattering lives, cutting apart souls and beliefs and the very stuff of the universe itself. The inheritance of one of the old Sword Dao Seekers from before the arrival of the Sea-Conquering Army, with two techniques left to her. The first was the Spatial Slash (+6 Impact). As simple as it sounded, one could cut space itself with this technique. Difficult to execute but practically irresistible, it could cut almost anything in half - including distance itself. Without mastery, the slash would merely take her somewhere, but somewhere could be a useful escape. Such a powerful technique would drain all of her Qi Reserves, however.

The last echoes of the Dao Seeker were there. Naming himself Senior-Apprentice Brother Long Fang, he made Xiuying cook him noodles, even though a spirit could not eat. More than a mere Will, the spirit smelled the noodles and tossed them through his ghostly form, finding it most entertaining. As his new Junior Sister, he demanded she clean up his gravestone and do a hundred laps of the bizarre space between spaces before he taught her more.

Six and a half years later she was done, and Fang taught her the Severing Strike (+6 Impact). Anything, he said, could be severed. The Severing Strike separated anything from anything else, though he noted with displeasure as a Qi cultivator she'd be limited by her reserves of Qi. But even as she was, she could begin separating a thought from a mind, a minor wound from a body, the use of a technique from an enemy. Difficult to use and expensive, but in the right circumstances it would be completely decisive. A true Dao Seeker of the Sword Dao should be able to use it to separate actions from consequences and laws from worlds, he mentioned. He then invoked the power of Fundamental Law, pushing forward Xiuying forty years in her cultivation in a moment (+40 CY), before sending her on her way.
Impact: 31 (+12)(9 unorthodox)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment 6-Pillar
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 298 (+65)
Health: Healthy --> Wounded --> Healthy (LST)
Omake Reward: - LST
Fate: Xiuying found a Supreme Spirit Stone, selling it off for a huge array of cultivation needs, and ends up ascending to Core. (+60 CY). She was unlucky otherwise in mining, winning a hand of cards with three empowered badgers to gain a small few fragments of ore.
Impact: 31 (+0)(9 unorthodox)
Cultivation: Core Formation Misty Core (Early)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 400 (+77)
Health: Healthy --> Healthy
Omake Reward: - LST
Fate: Xiuying spent time with Minervina Barda, the two of them chasing down several important seeds for Minervina's garden project. An array of rare and useful seeds, these would be the basis of the Clan being able to grow more effective poisons, potentially those that could be matured to Nascent levels in a few centuries time. While part of the wider projects, the two naturally felt it necessary to infiltrate the Poison Maze to retrieve some of the deadliest poisons possible. They split up, and Xiuying passed under the great spider, the Mother of Poisons. A droplet fell from her sleeping fangs, slicing a nearby Core Elder in two, seemingly drawing effect from her own nature. Meditating under the spider, she gained some understanding of how even a poison can cut (+1 Impact). Recovering the valuable saliva, she left the Poison Maze with Minervina in tow a few years later, the other woman having recovered what she desired as well.
Impact: 32 (+1)(9 unorthodox)
Cultivation: Core Formation Misty Core (Early)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 427 (+27)
Health: Healthy --> Healthy
Omake Reward: - LST

AN: This Good Seed is a homage to my favourite xianxia quest which is on another forum. Said quest is Sword Cultivator Quest on QQ and therefore I can't link to it.
 
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@Quest, yes, but also you can ping readeroffate or kaboomatic who have threadmark powers.

I think I might end up buying a month of upgrades at some point so I can add a couple more collaborators - definitely need to spread the workload around.

@shibosho, all good. Also, don't just write the homage without telling us the source! Or at least a few hints.
 
Well, that really depends on who cooked up the poison that took out the Core Formation attacker. There's a poison expert amongst the 13, and I'd say "brewed a poison that took out people two realms above them" is a bit more impressive.
The 3 wasn't counting the one in the upcoming legend.

In her first turn, she already took out someone above her with her poison. 2nd one was in a another turn which i think was more direct poisoning. 3rd one was during the Devil Bee war.

So yeah.. I'm not kidding about her poison being Divine considering it took down such heavyweights
Bonus: Meti's Sword Manual (Annotated Edition) by Jiang Chen Ten Meti - Allows the user to practice Sword Law, a cultivation style that is hyperfocused on the art of cutting. In essence, it allows a person to become a combat-specced cultivator that is capable of hitting above their realm, without the use of treasures or special bloodline. It is a style that is an anomaly among anomalies, with the price being the complete inability to be anything but the most efficient method possible to murder people. This particular edition of Meti's Sword Manual has notes by one of her students, meant to help one learn Sword Law without the direct teaching of a master. It also contains additional techniques and knowledge that can only be unlocked by advancing in cultivation.

Damn this is cool! What i find funny is that i was just bemoaning the lack of Sword Cultivator good seeds just before this turn i believe and now during the Trial Turn we have 2 Sword Cultivators.

I guess it's true that a Sword Cultivator needs battle!

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Nice to see his Dad! But i gotta admit this didn't draw me as in as Elenora. It's not really that it's bad, it's more that the low level fighting is not as interesting?

Like it's great at showing the Clan Fundamentals but that root makes it so that it's pretty predictable in terms of how the Combat flowed. And i guess the lack of high stakes involved was also a factor.
 
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I'm having trouble with the next part so that might take a while. This whole set of omake was me trying something new. Hopefully it works out. @occipitallobe EDIT: Actually should I edit this into the original post?

Emmanuel 2
An AEE Omake

Cobbled together
From your will and ambition
Is his legacy

The next time you heard from Ariadne was during a mission into the Shimmering Soup Sect's area. You received an invitation to dinner to an establishment called The Imperial Soup in the middle of Mogui City. It wasn't the type of place that you were familiar with. Generally, you ate food prepared by the nutritionists of your legion or on special occasions went to the thermopylae run by more specialized legions along with your shield-siblings.

That was incredibly different from this. It reminded you of the few times you had been invited by your centurion or anyone else from an older family. Rich food, private rooms and other amenities that would be available to guests from a host.

While thermopylae certainly had kitchenhands working as auxiliaries, the food there was generally prepared fast, delicious and energetic. The Imperial Soup seemed like it followed a different approach. They offered soup personalized to the eater and their cultivation similar to your nutritionists, but it seemed like a much more involved affair.

It was with some apprehension that you arrived there. It was a large building with its name written in stylized letters at the top of the building. A tower jutted from it's roof, part of some array that allowed the establishment to work. It made it seem much larger than the buildings around it.

The entrance was a large hall filled with many people, most from your realm but many also in foundation establishment. The atmosphere was rich with qi of a deliberately neutral nature. You tried to appear confident as you approached the staff. A mention of Lady Taurus had the man lead you down one of several hallways lined with private rooms until you arrived at the one you needed to be in. Ariadne and Eleanora were seated on a table talking to a man in a white uniform similar to other staff you had seen outside.

"Emmanuel, come in." Ariadne called, smiling as you entered. She was wearing an evening gown without any visible weapons, though you did wonder if a thread user would ever be unarmed. She waved you over and you noticed two extended seats on both sides of the table with both the ladies seated on each. "Have a seat and feel free to order anything from our server."

You paused as you looked at both of them and decided not to sit next to Ariadne. As a cultivator of the Taurus clan and personally powerful at the first pillar, it probably wasn't appropriate to squeeze in next to her. You glanced at Eleanora, who smiled probably guessing your thoughts and moved to make space for you.

"Thank you," You said as you took a seat. Eleanora was dressed the same as she had in training minus her quiver. Curiously, she seemed to have added a pair of jade bangles to her clothes though it was possible you didn't see them before.

You looked to the server as you settled in. He smiled at you with a pen and a piece of paper in his hand. "As it is your first time here, please allow me to guide you."

You nodded in acknowledgement and noted that no one had ordered yet. You turned back to him curiously. "What would you suggest?"

"Hmmm." The man takes a moment to think. "Can I ask you about your cultivation first? In case we need to account for anything."

You nod. "I'm a body cultivator who focuses on enhancing and manipulating the bronze in my body. Anything standard should be fine, I think."

"In that case, how about the meridian-cleansing soup paired with the demon-flushing spice?" He offered."It is a standard blend that aids the meridian opening process and encourages an open mindset for thinking."

"That sounds alright," You told him, glancing towards the others for their opinion.

"That sounds fine, Emmanuel. Mine is also a standard blend," Lady Ariadne said, answering your unspoken question. "I'm having the soul-reinforcing heartsoup and the dao-tempering hellspice."

You frowned, unsure what that did. "The Heartsoup simply reinforces your dao-heart," The server explains. "But the hellspice draws out your doubts. Together, they allow you to confront faults in your logic in order to think them through. It is popular among those in Foundation Establishment."

"That makes sense," You nod in understanding and then you glance at Eleanora curiously.

"I'm having distilled soul-severing venom." She said, an eyebrow raised. You glance at the server for an explanation but Eleanora answers first. "It's not really for cultivation. I'm mostly trying it recreationally."

"As the lady said, it's not something we've found a use for at the qi condensation level." The server explained. You nod in understanding. He takes the moment to note down your order and then hides both the note and the pen with a flourish. "Your order will be here as soon as possible."

He bows to each of you and leaves, closing the door behind him. Ariadne turns to you. "So while we are waiting on our order, why don't we start with your business? I'll be cultivating once we begin eating so we won't be able to later. "

"Right," You nod at that and then glance at Eleanora. "Should I give a breakdown of my family art?"

Lady Ariadne smiles encouragingly. "If I remember correctly, your father broke into the foundation establishment while chasing perfection of the blood of bronze. Have you made any personal changes to it?"

"I followed broadly as well as I understood it." You answered. "The art is known as the Body Sculpting Bronze Smith," You glanced at Eleanora who was listening attentively. "My father seems to be quite proud of the Blood of Bronze and was focused on increasing it. After studying under several smiths, he managed to combine it with my legion's body cultivation to create an art that concentrates and reinforces the bronze in our body."

Eleanora nods at that. "How did that affect the standard strengths and weaknesses of your bloodline?" She questioned you. You frowned at that but decided to answer.

"It amplifies both," You replied. "I'm stronger, tougher and recover even faster but my speed and reflexes are proportionally more slowed."

"And the next step was the application of the Taurus Alloying process?" You regarded her with some surprise. That was the next step but you were surprised by how she knew that. You looked at Ariadne for an explanation.

"Our arts showed some interesting effects when used together," Lady Ariadne explained. "In return for letting us explore that further, we agreed to teach her some of our secrets related to Living Bronze."

"It's the step I am currently on." You explain, looking over Eleanora with fresh eyes. With her bronze-sewn dress, you wondered if she was as unarmed as she seemed. "My father wrote that he performed it alongside meridian opening so that the process didn't accidently damage his internal qi flow."

"That would let you manipulate where in your body the bronze was concentrated." She said, thinking out loud. "Perhaps your father thought that things like concentrating it away from joints might limit the reduction in speed. Did it work?"

You shake your head. "Honestly, that was why I reached out. For whatever reason, the whole process somehow ended up weakening the effect he already had. While the increased metal concentration remained, it brought the improvements and weaknesses closer in line to other members of the clan. The only major benefits he kept was an increased mass."

"I see," She mused, looking at you thoughtfully. She glanced at Ariadne. "Did anyone from your clan have the same issues?"

She shakes her head. "We only practise our arts to create our threads and any alloying is done outside the body, so it isn't really an issue. How would you solve that issue, Eleanora?"

Eleanora shrugs. "I wouldn't know where to begin," She replies, her forehead creased. Then she turns to you. "Unless… even though the metal balances out, it's still present in high concentrations in your body right?"

You nod, wondering where she was going with this. "Yes, many of my fighting techniques take advantage of the increased mass."

She closes her eyes to think. "Then… if you could infuse the metal in your body with qi finely enough," She looked at you thoughtfully. "You should be able to amplify the effect of the bronze as long as you are channeling qi. I doubt it'll be useful to most of your sect, but it would be well worth the qi expended with your bronze concentration."

"You work with materials as well?" You ask her curiously. Obviously, she worked with bronze but as an outsider, it was unlikely she was specialised in that.

She nods. "My Jade Archer's Peerless Eye teaches the infusion of qi into materials at a very fine level to draw out their innate qualities. With your bronze, I can even selectively draw out the effects of tin and copper if I need to."

If you could add that to your clan arts... You glanced at Lady Ariadne who inclined her head in acknowledgement of your thoughts. Was that why Eleanora was here?

You turn back to Eleanora who's looking at you with an eyebrow raised. "Would you be available for a collaboration?" You asked her hopefully. "My father did a lot of research into smithing and the interaction of metal within the body. I would be willing to let you look at his notes in exchange for your own knowledge."

Eleanora nodded and glanced at Ariadne. "I can vouch for the value of those notes," She said, answering the unspoken question. "And I would hardly have brought you here if I didn't think the son wasn't trustworthy."

She nodded and turned to you. "I'd be lying if I said that wasn't on my mind when I came here tonight," She said, then paused. "Still, I'd rather not jump into an agreement so soon. How about we perform a few preliminary tests first?"

"I can make time on the coming rest-day," You offered, mind going over the logistics. You might need to skip the gymnasium.

Eleanora nods. "That sounds good."

"Well, this dinner was very productive wasn't it?" Lady Ariadne said, smiling and looking between you two. Then she settles on you. "Do you have any other questions for your Elder Sister before our soup arrives?"

You consider that for a moment. You didn't know if you'd have the chance to talk to her later and there was one question that you think you had to ask. "Well, this is something I've spoken to others about," You begin and at her nod you continue. "My shield-siblings and many others are seeking martial dao. Power, protection, battle and the like. I find that I'm not drawn to that but with the coming of the trials, I find myself wondering if I can afford not to take that path."

"What path are you drawn to then?" Eleanora asks curiously.

You shrug. "Honestly? I don't know at this point." You look at the table to settle your thoughts and then look up at Lady Ariadne. "At this point, it's hard to put a term to what I want to do. Perhaps I will seek physical perfection for its own sake? But combat doesn't call to me. I understand the need for it but the thought of dedicating my life to it simply seems… suffocating."

Ariadne looked at you thoughtfully."Are you aware of the history of my Great Ancestor?"

"Ariadne's Labyrinth," You said, nodding. It was a story you had heard growing up. "During a battle against another sect, a Nascent Soul level man-bull was released while our own equivalent warrior was occupied. Ariadne led a group of fellow creators to construct a world-maze in the middle of battle that trapped the beast until her father Minos could get free to kill it."

"It was one of the stories that inspired me to take her name. It was her purest moment of creation and it fueled her own cultivation for decades to come." Lady Ariadne smiles wistfully. "Her Dao was Creation yet her greatest creation was done in battle."

You frown. "So you are saying I should learn to apply whatever I pursue in battle anyway?"

"It's an avenue you can explore," She said instead, shaking her head. "My family is drawn to Creation but the weaving we practise primarily concerns the creations of battle. This is an issue many cultivators of our sect face and I can't give you the answer, only my answer. As they say 'To walk the steps of immortality, you must carve your own path'. I can only help you along the way."

You nod in understanding. You would need to think about that. "Can I add my thoughts on this?" Eleanora asks. "I think every cultivator faces this one way or another. In my opinion, you need to follow your heart. If your dao isn't truly your own, then regardless of the difficulties you face you would fail anyway."

You nod at that, considering both replies. "Thank you. Both of your experiences are sure to prove helpful."

Lady Ariadne waves you off. "It's no problem." She tells you.

"Well, I'm glad I could help." Eleanora adds, smiling.
For a moment there is silence as you consider anything else to ask. Then a voice interrupts you.

"I have your order." You turn to see a server stick his head into the room. He was carrying a platter of soup.

"Not at all, please." Lady Ariadne said, waving him over. He comes in, placing several bowls of soup in front of each of you.

"One Meridian-cleansing soup paired with the demon-flushing spice," He said, as he placed your order in front of you. You glanced at the other orders. Both of them radiated qi and for a lack of a better word felt incredibly spicy. Yours was a milky white soup that felt sweet.

"Thank you," You tell him and he nods before leaving.

You look at the soup for a moment and then back up at the ladies. "How should we begin?" You ask them.

"You just drink it and cultivate." Ariadne replied, mixing her soup. "Though I can get you another room if you need to do that. I'll be here till the morning and you wouldn't be able to cultivate next to me. Just don't disturb me and feel free to leave if you are done."

You glance at Eleanora who shrugged. "I'll be leaving once my soup is done. Usually you just book private rooms but Ariadne prefers company before she starts."

You nod. "Then can I trouble you for a private room?" You ask her and she nods. She calls for one of the servers and you are escorted to the room on the other side of the hall.
 
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Nice to see his Dad! But i gotta admit this didn't draw me as in as Elenora. It's not really that it's bad, it's more that the low level fighting is not as interesting?

Like it's great at showing the Clan Fundamentals but that root makes it so that it's pretty predictable in terms of how the Combat flowed. And i guess the lack of high stakes involved was also a factor.
I found Eleanora much easier to write so that might be another factor. I wonder if it works better as with the other Emmanuel parts as a whole?
 
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The next time you heard from Ariadne was during a mission into the Shimmering Soup Sect's area. You received an invitation to dinner to an establishment called The Imperial Soup in the middle of Mogui City. It wasn't the type of place that you were familiar with. Generally, you ate food prepared by the nutritionists of your legion or on special occasions went to the thermopylae run by more specialized legions along with your shield-siblings.
Hmm, this info-drop on the legion's traditions is great. It definitely shows that Legionwise, it's one that's of a more Military-style Legion.
The Imperial Soup seemed like it followed a different approach. They offered soup personalized to the eater and their cultivation similar to your nutritionists, but it seemed like a much more involved affair.
Oh this world building is cool. I like the IC introduction to Cultivation Nutritionists
"Hmmm." The man takes a moment to think. "Can I ask you about your cultivation first? In case we need to account for anything."

You nod. "I'm a body cultivator who focuses on enhancing and manipulating the bronze in my body. Anything standard should be fine, I think."

"In that case, how about the meridian-cleansing soup paired with the demon-flushing spice?" He offered."It is a standard blend that aids the meridian opening process and encourages an open mindset for thinking."

"That sounds alright," You told him, glancing towards the others for their opinion.

"That sounds fine, Emmanuel. Mine is also a standard blend," Lady Ariadne said, answering your unspoken question. "I'm having the soul-reinforcing heartsoup and the dao-tempering hellspice."

You frowned, unsure what that did. "The Heartsoup simply reinforces your dao-heart," The server explains. "But the hellspice draws out your doubts. Together, they allow you to confront faults in your logic in order to think them through. It is popular among those in Foundation Establishment."

"That makes sense," You nod in understanding and then you glance at Eleanora curiously.

"I'm having distilled soul-severing venom." She said, an eyebrow raised. You glance at the server for an explanation but Eleanora answers first. "It's not really for cultivation. I'm mostly trying it recreationally."

"As the lady said, it's not something we've found a use for at the qi condensation level." The server explained. You nod in understanding. He takes the moment to note down your order and then hides both the note and the pen with a flourish. "Your order will be here as soon as possible."
Yeah, i really like this and the conversion of basically fancy restaurant but Xianxia in style. But judging form the potential benefits, it ain't going to be cheap
"And the next step was the application of the Taurus Alloying process?" You regarded her with some surprise. That was the next step but you were surprised by how she knew that. You looked at Ariadne for an explanation.

"Our arts showed some interesting effects when used together," Lady Ariadne explained. "In return for letting us explore that further, we agreed to teach her some of our secrets related to Living Bronze."

"It's the step I am currently on." You explain, looking over Eleanora with fresh eyes. With her bronze-sewn dress, you wondered if she was as unarmed as she seemed. "My father wrote that he performed it alongside meridian opening so that the process didn't accidently damage his internal qi flow."

"That would let you manipulate where in your body the bronze was concentrated." She said, thinking out loud. "Perhaps your father thought that things like concentrating it away from joints might limit the reduction in speed. Did it work?"

You shake your head. "Honestly, that was why I reached out. For whatever reason, the whole process somehow ended up weakening the effect he already had. While the increased metal concentration remained, it brought the improvements and weaknesses closer in line to other members of the clan. The only major benefits he kept was an increased mass."
Interesting approach towards Bloodline manipulation. The idea that it's intentional instead of the usual random mutation is pretty intriguing since i feel that it shows the culture clash between the Golden Devils and the Chinese-style outside world.

In Chinese culture, there's a thing about respecting your body/blood because it came from your parents, so such wilful modification can be seen as lacking in virtue and of the Demonic Path. I like how here it's just one of the things you can do if you want, ain't no Elder Council to stop you.
She nods. "My Jade Archer's Peerless Eye teaches the infusion of qi into materials at a very fine level to draw out their innate qualities. With your bronze, I can even selectively draw out the effects of tin and copper if I need to."

If you could add that to your clan arts... You glanced at Lady Ariadne who inclined her head in acknowledgement of your thoughts. Was that why Eleanora was here?

You turn back to Eleanora who's looking at you with an eyebrow raised. "Would you be available for a collaboration?" You asked her hopefully. "My father did a lot of research into smithing and the interaction of metal within the body. I would be willing to let you look at his notes in exchange for your own knowledge."
Oh so that's how the relationship started!
"Ariadne's Labyrinth," You said, nodding. It was a story you had heard growing up. "During a battle against another sect, a Nascent Soul level man-bull was released while our own equivalent warrior was occupied. Ariadne led a group of fellow creators to construct a world-maze in the middle of battle that trapped the beast until her father Minos could get free to kill it."

"It was one of the stories that inspired me to take her name. It was her purest moment of creation and it fueled her own cultivation for decades to come." Lady Ariadne smiles wistfully. "Her Dao was Creation yet her greatest creation was done in battle."
Interesting twist of making Greek Myths in the quest! Pretty Cool idea on adding some history/weight to the Name.
I found Eleanora much easier to write so that might be another factor. I wonder if it works better as with the other Emmanuel parts as a whole?
I like this way more as can be seen by the reactions lol.

Personally, i think they can be apart. It shows 2 sides of him. All this build-up for his parents is making me wonder what he will be like, so good job on that front
 
Yeah, i really like this and the conversion of basically fancy restaurant but Xianxia in style. But judging form the potential benefits, it ain't going to be cheap
Definitely not cheap. Emmanuel could probably pay for his but it would leave him pinching pennies for a decade or two. Ariadne is being a bit free with him because she owed his father.
Interesting approach towards Bloodline manipulation. The idea that it's intentional instead of the usual random mutation is pretty intriguing since i feel that it shows the culture clash between the Golden Devils and the Chinese-style outside world.

In Chinese culture, there's a thing about respecting your body/blood because it came from your parents, so such wilful modification can be seen as lacking in virtue and of the Demonic Path. I like how here it's just one of the things you can do if you want, ain't no Elder Council to stop you.
It seemed logical. IIRC it was granted to the legion as a reward so it makes sense to me that some people might view embodying it as an act of patriotism.
Interesting twist of making Greek Myths in the quest! Pretty Cool idea on adding some history/weight to the Name.
I'm really looking forward to twisting indian myths. The Ramayana where the Good Prince Ram slays the Demon King Ravan sounds like great propaganda.
I like this way more as can be seen by the reactions lol.

Personally, i think they can be apart. It shows 2 sides of him. All this build-up for his parents is making me wonder what he will be like, so good job on that front
That's good to know. :V I'm partially waiting on the rolls to write Antonius but this also gave me a chance to experiment with ideas and get a good idea of what personality I want Antonius to have.
 
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Oh my god I missed so much of the excitement :D

I will note that The Indomitable Thirteen does not guarantee that all of them lived and Eirene didn't have an LST going in... but maybe the Elders' disaster drained all the bad luck away from our children.

Anyway yeah diplomacy other people have put forward excellent arguments.

I would also argue for the intrigue guy but... yeah. Diplomacy.

[x] [X] Kleisthenes Sarantapechos - Your sole remaining friend and diplomat. She has lost a foot and could be carried out.
 
Ah, man, this reminds me I still haven't done Index. I was waiting for Good Seed Report to drop to add everyone, but it might do me good to get a little ahead on the work.
 
Vitruvian Anasc [DEAD] - Good Seed Background
Vitruvian Anasc - Good Seed Background
Origin

Born to poor mortal parents in the grand push to be ready before the Trial, Vitruvian grew up amidst the frantic preparations when times were lean and the resources to shelter mortals from more mundane hazards and discomforts were thin on the ground. Defensive arrays and alarms took priority, and so Vitruvian and his family had to shovel sand from paths and wells when the clearing arrays were allowed to lapse. He spent his childhood collecting the dung of pack animals, pressing out all moisture to aid in watering gardens and using the dry bricks for fuel. It was at an early age that it was realized that he had a certain fascination with fire, spending long hours staring into the flames in contemplation.

By the time of the Trial the fascination had been revealed as insight not into fire but the flow of qi. He first learned to manipulate the flow of air into the fires, to make them burn hotter and cleaner, but this lead to greater understanding of the underlying interactions of qi, even before he was found in the years after the Trial and brought in for proper tutelage and instruction. He readily devoured histories and theories, and he came to a conclusion: the Third Sea is impoverished, and requires cultivation itself if the people are to prosper. Grand dreams of cultivating the land, of creating oases of qi where juniors can cultivate from without requiring spirit stones. He has heard of the Dragon Lines, and dreams of strengthening them, possibly even using artifice to create prosthetic lines to smooth and revitalize the flow of qi.

Within the quiet of his own head, Vitruvian also dreams of grander and darker things. He dreams of learning how to reanimate the Third Turtle Child. While his more grounded thoughts are attached to concentrating, channeling, and cycling the qi of the desert to promote growth and life and regeneration, he knows that there are darker paths to pursue, and he squirrels away knowledge of ghosts and the arts relating to them for the future. For now though he knows that even walking the path of cultivation he probably only has a century of his own work before death takes him, and thus he seeks benefit most of all for the future generations rather than for himself.

Turn 6
Ambition: Develop a relatively cheap method of collecting and concentrating the qi of the desert
Omakes: 6-1 Sun and Sand (851 words)
Fate: Turn 6 in progress

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Current Status: 15 Years Old as of Start of Turn 6, Cultivator of the 1st Heavenstage
Starting Perk: Genius (Qi Flows) - Vitruvian has an instinctive understanding of how qi flows and interacts with itself and others.
Combat Boosts: None
Effective Combat Strength: 1st Heavenstage
Crazy Stuff: Seeks cultivation gains in order to cultivate and revive the land

Lifesaving Treasures: None
Healing Treasures: None

@occipitallobe I decided to try my hand at this.
 
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He's a Demense engineer and I love him already!

Within the quiet of his own head, Vitruvian also dreams of grander and darker things. He dreams of learning how to reanimate the Third Turtle Child. While his more grounded thoughts are attached to concentrating, channeling, and cycling the qi of the desert to promote growth and life and regeneration, he knows that there are darker paths to pursue, and he squirrels away knowledge of ghosts and the arts relating to them for the future. For now though he knows that even walking the path of cultivation he probably only has a century of his own work before death takes him, and thus he seeks benefit most of all for the future generations rather than for himself.
OHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh baby. OH BOY.
 
Oh ouch, i can feel the PAIN. Like Ferenike, this last member went out like a BOSS
Yeah.. I feel really bad for her. After losing her Juniors, she recovered only to now lose her friends. Now i feel kinda bad that i was telling you about me being abit neutral on Xiao Yi dying since that's gonna be another hit
I think this is a interesting contrast to that 5th Sea scum. As a Qi Condensation she feels the weight of the years and the responsibility her longevity brings while that guy is just ETERNAL YOUTH to go messing around.
Oh that's a nice homage. I guess it's by the Juniors and mortals she saved, I guess 3 turns later she'll be treated as a local goddess who will one day wake when the mortals need her.
Yeah...Ouch... That heartbreak in the first line.
That was a nice eulogy.
Don't feel too bad about it if he ends up dying, I have thoughts for Ferenike's reactions either way that should provide interesting story beats. I'm not quite sure when I decided all of her squad mates and their introduced families were going to die but I think I had it finalized when I started thinking about Foundation Building Ferenike wandering around the Verdant South which was sometime during last turn.

One of the things I think I'm going to have a lot of fun with is that I want Ferenike to feel her age. What's it like to really be more than 80 years old? What's it like to be a hundred years old? Two hundred? What is it like to have age and to be older than multiple mortal generations. I haven't had a lot of chance to explore that recently, which is unfortunate, but in the mean time I've been sprinkling details around that I can make use of.

Amusingly with how Xianxia works in ten thousand years or more as Qi soaks into her statue it might actually become true that she'll awake when needed, which would be interesting.

This omake was fun to write since its essentially an exploration of how to write grief, and it gave a lot of insight in that direction for me. The biggest thing I think is evoking emotions in readers, through the two means of writing that evokes poignant memories and writing that is itself invested with a lot of emotions. They don't have to be used together I don't think, but its easier if you do.
 
I gotta say, i'm really enjoying the influx of Good Seeds recently. Based on the hints we had so far, it seems Saving Juniors was a pretty decent modifier. SO more good seeds = more Saving Juniors next Trial

I dream of the day where we crush the Trials under Saving Junior Modifiers :V

Although i am a bit worried about @occipitallobe since i think hitting like 100 Good Seeds is going to be a killer when it comes to thinking up stuff for updates. Any Secret Realm roll would become like a whole day of rolling
 
Although i am a bit worried about @occipitallobe since i think hitting like 100 Good Seeds is going to be a killer when it comes to thinking up stuff for updates. Any Secret Realm roll would become like a whole day of rolling
Good thing is that Occipitallobe has already broke up the Good Seed Turn post into a multiple update thing, so it probably should be fine.
 
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