Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Xiao Yi 18 - [Hollow]
Xiao Yi [Hollow]

He heard the City long before he saw it. The clang of hammers rang out continuously over the desert enticing the desperate, the Spirit Beast Hunters and the Merchants to Dragonbreath City Forge. By the time he saw the City in the horizon, the dusty road he was traveling was chocked with Merchant Caravans and Spirit Beast Hunter convoys. One seeking to purchasing the goods forged in the City, the other seeking to feed the City's appetite for raw materials.

Despite his current emotionless state, Xiao Yi felt a twinge of mild amusement at how everyone gave him and Qing Yun a wide breadth. He could see in the eyes of his fellow travelers greed at the appearance of a Qilin and caution at the fact that it was serving as a mount, perhaps no one considered the fact that He was borne for the sake of Friendship and Brotherhood.

Thanks to his fellow travelers giving way, Xiao Yi found himself reaching the City Gate faster then he expected. Looking at the pair of Blue and Green Dragon guards conducting inspections, Xiao Yi quietly pulled out his Clan Token and made his way to them. As he approached, the Green Dragon guard moved towards him with visible annoyance and gestured for him to go back.

" Get back in line! This is Dragonbreath City Forge and everyone has to undergo inspection before they can enter. Failure to do so will draw the wrath of both the Green and Blue Dragon Emperors. "

As Qing Yun continued making his way towards the city, the guard's face started to take a darker shade. Leveling his spear at the approaching trespasser, the Green Dragon Guard gave another order in a heated voice.

" Listen! Go back now. If you don't we will force you back. In fact, thanks your insolence go back to the end of the line! Are you still not moving? Guards! Gua- "

The Green Dragon Guard's cry was suddenly interrupted by the palm of his partner, causing the guard to stare at his partner with wide-eyed astonishment.

" Sorry about that lord, he's new at this. Your presented token looks accurate and correct. Welcome to Dragonbreath City Forge! If Milord does not have a Inn in mind, the palace has more then enough rooms to accommodate you and your beast. "

Nodding in appreciation to the helpful guard, Xiao Yi and Qing Yun made their way into the City and within seconds disappeared into the crowded streets. Giving a sigh of relief, the Blue Dragon Guard loosen his grip allowing his partner to shake him off.

" What was that? I'm going to report this to the Commander! He'll have your head for letting a stranger into the City! "

" Idiot. Didn't you see the Token? We have orders to allow any who bear this token into the city no questions asked. I don't know who they are or what they do, but i saw a General bow to someone with that token. You better hope he doesn't remember you and your insolence. "

" Oh... I think i need to take a day off.. I don't feel so good. "

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Entering the city, Xiao Yi found himself confronted with a crowd wearing either Green or Blue. Curiously, the only scenes of them mingling were in the streets of the City, the few shops and restaurants he was able to see were either filled with people all in Green or all in Blue.

As he made his way to the Palace to introduce himself and his purpose for coming here, Xiao Yi found his journey frequently detoured due to sudden duels breaking out in the streets. Usually between swordsmen clad in Green or Blue and to his surprise of regardless of cultivation levels. There were duels between a 1st Heavenstage against a 5th, a 9th Heavenstage against a 8th, 4th Heavenstage against another 4th and so on. It seemed that the only criteria for a duel to start was that the other party wielded a sword and was of a different color.

Interestingly enough, the duels were all done with minimal Qi making it more of a contest of technique then a Death Battle. Passerbys of the same color will stop at the presence of such duels and appear to quickly descent into laying bets on the outcome with the victorious swordsman being hoisted on the shoulders of those who profited and dragged into the nearest tavern.

Passing by a nearby marketplace, Xiao Yi found that it too was split into a Green and Blue zone, with each zone serving only customers of the same color. Only obvious outsiders appear to go between the zone though it did not escape his notice that the merchants had a disdainful stare at these " Fence-hoppers "

" Wait, this isn't the price you gave me earlier? I came back to you because the price you gave me was earlier then what the merchant in the Blue Zone gave me! "

" I'm afraid Sir must be mistaken. This is the stated price and while i have no idea on what price the dastardly blues will charge, i assure you that this is a fair price. "

Similar conversations were taking place regardless of colour, the only common point being that the foreign merchants involved all sought to use the blue and green dispute to their advantage. It was obvious to Xiao Yi that the local merchants had a unspoken agreement to prevent themselves from being taken advantage off and that only merchant who remained " loyal " to a colour would get the market rate.

Riding towards the Palace bought Xiao Yi within sight of a barracks which uniquely enough had both blue and green warriors intermingling harmoniously. He spotted tables of warriors clashing mugs with each other and drinking, warriors dueling with axes with riotous laughter and warriors clobbering each other with their fists. His curiosity appeared to have caught some attention, for a burly warrior in green laid a punch to his opponent that knocked him out and started making his way to Xiao Yi.

" Hoh Stranger! You look puzzled! I can tell you're new to our lands and our fair City! Of the Mortal Kingdoms, only us of the Sapphire Earldom Of Axes and Emerald Axe Marquisate are able to coexist in harmony! We both believe in the same values and for us the thrill of the fight is enough! This lack of conflict is why the Dragon Emperor Bodyguard consist of equal numbers of both Clans.

My name is Fu Zhanshan and i'm a 100 Man Commander of the Bodyguard. What brings a Golden Devil here to our lands? As far as i know, the tributes have been paid regularly. "

For all the politeness of the statement, Xiao Yi could tell that it was a demand for answers.

" Ah, this one is XIao Yi, and this one is here on a personal errand. I have heard of the glorious works produced by this reknowned city and have made my way here to get my Ji refined with some materials i've picked up in my travels. "

" I see. Alright, follow me and i'll bring you to one of the Lords in charge of the Forge. I'll also log a report with the Emperor for you. "

" This one thanks Brother Fu. "

So saying, Xiao Yi gave a bow of appreciation to Zhanshan who quickly pulled him upright.

" I can't accept this bow, we of the Mortal Kingdoms are loyal to the Golden Devils and we're glad to be of help. However, Sir Yi i can see from the way you hold you Ji that you used it more as a spear, there is a lack of Axe techniques in your bearing. If you like, you're welcome to practice with us on Axe Techniques while your Ji is being reforged. IF we claim to be 2nd in Axe techniques among the Mortal Kingdoms, none will dare claim to be First! "

" Then this one will gladly, accept Brother Fu's offer. This one could use some enlightenment in the intricacies of Axework. "

" Excellent! Now Sir Yi, please follow me to meet the Lord. "

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After about twenty minutes of walking, Xiao Yi found himself brought to the mouth of a Cave. The wave of heat and the increased volume of hammers clanging informed him that without a doubt this was the entrance to the Forge district of the City.

Entering the Cave with Zhanshan, Xiao Yi found himself brought to a Late Foundation Establishment Cultivator and introduced as " Sir Yi from the Golden Devils seeking our aid in reforging his weapon. "

" Ah Sir Yi, welcome! You may call me Tie Huo. I'm the Green Dragon Empire's forgemaster, and i will be more then glad to lend you my aid. You mentioned that you have the materials ready? "

" Yes. The main material i have is a Fragment of a Demonic Soul Severing weapon that i picked up in a secret realm as well as some supplementary materials i came across in my travels. Please have a look. "

Without hesitation, Xiao Yi took down a sealed box from QIng Yun's back and opened it taking out a variety of materials

" Hmm, Qilin Heartblood containing concentrated Dragon blood, Spirit Bamboo Essence Water and oh? This is. Crystallized Lifeblood containing the 7 Emotions ?? Where did you get this? Who did you get it from ? "

As Tie Huo's face ran the gamut of emotions from Joy, Surprise to Horror, Xiao Yi quickly interjected before misunderstandings could occur.

" Brother Tie please don't misunderstand. The Qilin Heartblood is from my brother Qing Yun who volunteered it to me, while the 7 Emotions in the Crystallized Lifeblood are mine. "

Xiao Yi's answer did prevent a misunderstanding, but it also made Tie Huo's face turn a shade of white.

" Are you serious? You put yourself through the Hollowlization ritual and sacrificed your emotions? How did you survive the pain of your Heart being torn out and split into Seven? I see now why you feel muted to my senses, you have no emotions left. Are you sure you want to use it for your weapon? Once i do so, you won't be able to get your emotions back for at least a mortal lifespan of 50 years.

Even then, recovering your emotions will take effort on your part and things will always feel shrouded. "

" Yes, i'm sure. I'll decided to give up everything for my Clan, my Emotions are a small price to pay compared to what i've already lost. "

Perhaps it was something in his tone, for at Xiao Yi's response Tie Huo's face turned hard. Grabbing a hammer on his desk and ringing a small bell, Tie Huo pulled the materials towards him except for the Crystallized Lifeblood.

" I see. If Brother Yi is sure, then this calls for our best effort. I shall get the Blue Dragon Empire's Forgemaster Jin Shui to come assist me as well. Until arrive, Brother Yi should hold on to the Crystallized Lifeblood and cherish the emotions within them as much as possible. "

Feeling helpless at how he was unable to convey to Tie Huo that he didn't want to feel the emotions without coming across as being ungrateful, Xiao Yi couldn't help but pick up the Crystallized Lifeblood and braced himself for the impact.

Joy at her presence, her touch. The memories shared

Anger at their Clans, at the circumstances that lead to the end, at both of them not being who they claim to be

Grief at their ending, at the tragedy that was destined the moment they met.

Worry of when their lies will be revealed to each other, of what the future would bring

Fear of the truth killing what he had with her, of her looking in disgust at him, of her suddenly disappearing.

Sentiments of the time they shared, of the little moments that lead to them falling in love, of that last night beneath the Stars.


Affection and how it was the start of everything and the end of everything, of the sheer emptiness and absence it left behind after she was gone.

Visibly shuddering from the effort, Xiao Yi forced himself to open his clenched fist and drop the Crystallized Lifeblood onto the pile of materials.

" Thank you for your thoughts Brother Tie, but i have made peace with my decision. I leave this in your capable hands and will be sparring with Brother Fu at the Dragon Emperor Bodyguard Barracks, I can be found there where the Ji is ready. "

So saying, Xiao Yi gave a deep bow to Tie Huo and left with his back straight with Qing Yun following along. Yet somehow to Tie Huo, that back seemed to be laden with grief and pain, with only Duty forcing it straight.

" Ah.. I don't know what he went through, but it appears to have turned him into Cold Iron, hard and brittle. One can only hope he doesn't shatter from the strain of his Duty. "

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@occipitallobe I'll like the bonus for this to go to the Crafting Roll for the Artifact Weapon! If there's no such specific roll, it can go to Fate! I think it should come under a Fate Roll.

Like some of the other writers in the quest, i tried to show my impression of a location. In this case, the City-Forge since Xiao Yi needed a Smith anyway. I did go a bit over the top in terms of the Green and Blue rivalry since i was semi-inspired by the Red Vs Blue rivalry. But since the City in question is a neutral point, i made sure that the conflicts in there are rather minor such as the duels of only technique etc.

The news of Green and Blue Axe bros being bros to each other screams to me of Varangian Guard which i love, so Emperor's Bodyguard without a doubt! I tried to link it to a future Dao Pillar of Xiao Yi, which is Axe Qi and techs.

Lastly, to show that no, he still isn't over Gui Xing's death i tried to covey that he willingly rip out his heart + his emotions Bleach style because every emotion reminds him of her and that the pain of tearing his heart out was nothing compared to having to kill her. Also because Xianxia, clearly they can be used as a source of power.

For anyone interested, i thought of the Hollow Ritual as a way for the Demonic side to torture a mortal to squeeze out emotions to use in their demonic weapons. So Tie Huo was shocked because Xiao Yi did it to himself. To kinda play on the No Emotions thing, i'm not going to request for a LST as a Omake Boon for Turn 6 & 7, any future LST will be earned through Fate rolls.

Hope i conveyed the relationship between the Mortal Kingdoms and the Golden Devils well, since i don't think a Gate Guard will know of the Clan beyond scary people while higher ups like a Commander in the Emperor's bodyguard and a Forgemaster should.

EDIT: I cribbed the 7 Emotions from TCM by the way since Xiao Yi has always leaned more towards the Chinese side of the quest
 
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I'm not sure why they wouldn't know?
Occipitallobe mentioned that they only see the Clan as the people that rule us. Which for the commoners would be people that they are unlikely to meet since any interaction with the Clan is at the higher levels. Hence i made it so that the most they know is that the token means something that their lords need to worry about.

It's partially from Xianxia as a whole. Where when they introduce the next tier of enemies for the protag, it's the nobles or princes that know of them. The commoners don't, so i'm pulling for that kind of relationship.
Yeah they are vassals. They probably deal with them offten enought. Like if anything gate guards see more of the golden devils than an averige solder elsewhere.
My impression of the vassals is that they rarely see us? Like we mainly just get tributes from them. Actual interactions are pretty low because most of the resources they have we don't need.

Like in my omake scenario, Xiao Yi only went there to borrow their forge + smiths. The Clan itself has it's own smiths, with the Forge-city not being that great since only 2 of their gear are being used by our Core Formations, which means qualitywise our Clan forges is likely better.

I'm just using it because i already established that my good seed left the clan to roam for a good refiner. It can be argued that he lacks the connections to get one of the Clan Smiths to help him since he has no family backing + the Trials will lead to many people getting their gear serviced.
 
" Get back in line! This is Dragonbreath City Forge and everyone has to undergo inspection before they can enter. Failure to do so will draw the wrath of both the Green and Blue Dragon Emperors. "

As Qing Yun continued making his way towards the city, the guard's face started to take a darker shade. Leveling his spear at the approaching trespasser, the Green Dragon Guard gave another order in a heated voice.

" Listen! Go back now. If you don't we will force you back. In fact, thanks your insolence go back to the end of the line! Are you still not moving? Guards! Gua- "

The Green Dragon Guard's cry was suddenly interrupted by the palm of his partner, causing the guard to stare at his partner with wide-eyed astonishment.

" Sorry about that lord, he's new at this. Your presented token looks accurate and correct. Welcome to Dragonbreath City Forge! If Milord does not have a Inn in mind, the palace has more then enough rooms to accommodate you and your beast. "
This made me smile. In general I enjoyed the omake. The focus on the seven emotions and how he's all about bonds and friendship makes me feel like he might go for a dao of bonds or love or something similar.
 
@occipitallobe I know that the chance that Euphrosyne goes out of this tribulation as a nascent soul is very low but what are the chances that she survives and enters false nascent soul? It wouldn't be ideal but it would mean that we don't lose our stewardship elder for a century or so.
 
So, do the common people among our vassals know of the trials or are 100 years far enough apart that they are immortals doing immortal things?
 
This made me smile. In general I enjoyed the omake. The focus on the seven emotions and how he's all about bonds and friendship makes me feel like he might go for a dao of bonds or love or something similar.
Hmm, i'll probably would have to consider on if i want him to recover from the heartbreak. As of now, i'm thinking i'll leave him as devastated and death-seeking, with choosing to forego his emotions because of the pain it caused him.

Writing an Omake of him gradually reawakening to the little things in life would be interesting though.
 
Got to say @Mochinator, your man knows how to make an entrance. I enjoyed the client-state perspective of seeing a visiting Golden Devil as this impossibly distant and powerful existence. The only thing missing was an accusation that someone was 'A frog at the bottom of the well' who couldn't imagine how high the heavens reach!

Also I seriously hope Dragonbreath City has some kickass Chariot Racing with all this Green/Blue imagery.
 
I have updated Index for the Good Seeds I was missing, I think - won't do the advanced Fates yet, I'll save turn updates for when the turn ticks over. Do let me know if I missed anyone.
 
Got to say @Mochinator, your man knows how to make an entrance. I enjoyed the client-state perspective of seeing a visiting Golden Devil as this impossibly distant and powerful existence. The only thing missing was an accusation that someone was 'A frog at the bottom of the well' who couldn't imagine how high the heavens reach!

Also I seriously hope Dragonbreath City has some kickass Chariot Racing with all this Green/Blue imagery.
Thanks thanks! I tried to do it from the POV of the Next tier enemies that are called in to fight the protag when the Empire's princes and lords get wiped. I view it as to most of the commoners, these people are stuff they know almost nothing off, knowing of them and the relationship with the kingdom is something you gotta be a certain rank before you know.

Also i regret that i didn't think of that! I was trying to come up with something for the Scorpions to compete with as well but came up blank. Having Scorpion Chariot races between the scorpions they breed would have been perfect.
 
Also i regret that i didn't think of that! I was trying to come up with something for the Scorpions to compete with as well but came up blank. Having Scorpion Chariot races between the scorpions they breed would have been perfect.

Spirit Beast chariot races definitely, the Scorpion team might not be the fastest, but they bite and sting anyone who dares block their path. Their fans are all the types who don't give a damn who wins the league/tournament, their all just spoiling for a chance to see the goriest possible crashes and spills.

A thought on poor Manuel's currently screwed up situation. While I understand our Admin Elders chance of a clean breathrough to Early Nascent Soul is *very* slim, I wonder if @occipitallobe is rolling to see if she ends up in one of the 'fail state' Nascent Soul stages? Half-Step or False Nascent Soul?
 
Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 5 - Emmanuel 3
I usually give a once over to what I write, but I'm too tired to do that for this one. Still, it was fun to write so hopefully it'll be fun to read as well. @Kaboomatic it's your turn to be tagged. :V

Emmanuel 3
An AEE Omake

To the gods above
Both mortal and immortal
Are equally small

The soup was sweet and refreshing.

The first feeling you had was like drinking cool water on a hot day. It was as if impurities steamed out like heat left your body and you could feel the featureless qi of the environment be drawn into you, easily being colored by your own aura.

The next effect was the sweetness. It didn't spread across your body. It crawled into the back of your mind and took the place of all the emotions you didn't need. It removed your doubts and left you oddly confident.

You didn't know how much time had passed but once you came out of your meditation, you estimated that the soup had given you over a day of progress in what you think was a couple of hours. It wasn't revolutionary but you could see how richer cultivators could maintain rapid progress with their resources.

You considered what to do next. You could just leave but maybe it would be a good idea to check on Ariadne and Eleanora first? At the very least you should thank them for all the help.

With that thought, you left your room taking a moment to glance across the hall. It was empty now and there was no one in sight. Then you went up to the room where Ariadne had been and knocked. There was no response. Maybe you should have left it at that but part of you was curious. You glanced around once more and when no one came, you lightly pushed open the door to look inside.

The first thing you felt was the aura. It filled the room and though it had no visual effect, it seemed to tint the room in an oppressive shade. Lady Ariadne was seated with her eyes closed and with her hands on her lap. Her face was empty of emotion but her eyes moved constantly under her eyelids as if she fought an invisible battle. For a second, you thought her lips twitched to say something but then nothing happened.

You slowly closed the door. "That's very rude, you know."You froze at the voice and then turned to see Eleanora leaning against the wall and watching you. She had an eyebrow raised but she seemed more amused than offended. "You shouldn't look into someone's room when they are cultivating."

You nodded sheepishly. "Sorry, I didn't realise that." You told her. "I'll be more careful from now on."

"Don't worry about it," She replied, smiling. "Honestly, I did the same thing the first time I was here."

"Were you here with Ariadne?" You asked her, tilting your head curiously.

"Yeah, some time after we first met." She replied, glancing at Araidne's door. "That was the first actual social outing we did together."

You consider that sentence. "Okay, I have to know," You said, and she looks back at you."How did you two meet?"

"Looong story," She replied, grinning. "But in short: we fought together and I saved her life."

"Huh, I can see why you'd be close." You glance at Ariadne's door for a moment and then back at her. "Were you using a private room as well?"

"Kinda," She thinks for a moment. "I wasn't cultivating but there is a room I like to eat in."

"What room is that?" You asked, raising an eyebrow.

She shrugged. "It's not part of the usual rooms and the owner only lets me use it because I did him a favor or two. I'm blanking on how to explain it though."

"Show me?" You asked her and she pauses to think.

"Sure," She pushed off the wall and pointed down the hall. "Come on."

"Where are we going?" You asked her as she began walking and you find yourself trailing behind her.

"It'll be much easier to show you if you are coming anyway," She answered and you realise you've reached the entrance hall. It was much emptier now but there were still staff present. There, he holds a hand up for you to wait and goes and talks to one of the staff.

You wait patiently at a distance and watch her point to you mid-conversation. Finally, the staff member nods and she comes back to you. "What happened?" You asked her.

"Just wanted to let them know." She replied. "Come on." She didn't go inside the building, but outside and you followed her curiously.

Finally, you stood at the gate looking up at the sign that said "The Imperial Soup". "I don't see what..." She grinned and pointed higher.

You looked up and followed the tower you had seen earlier. It rose higher than the surrounding buildings then suddenly narrowed into a chimney with smoke flowing out. Near the very end, before the narrowing began there seemed to be a room that you could see only if you squinted.

Your eyebrows rose as you looked at her. "You went up there?"

"I like it there." She replied and glanced back at you. "You can't make it up there?"

"Nope," You admitted readily enough. With your speed you were certain you'd run out of qi half-way, and with the smooth tower you'd practically fell to your death. "Bloodline slows speed, remember?"

She nodded and then frowned. "Oh and I just got permission to let you come up there. It has a great view."

You looked at her, thinking it over. "Carry me." You told her.

She blinked at that. "You want me to carry you?" She repeated.

"You are at the seventh heavenstage," You explained, laying out your reasoning. "So you should be able to carry me and it shouldn't affect you too much I think."

She just stared at you as you explained. But then she considered it. "I- I guess I could do that?" She looked up at the tower and then back at you looking bemused. "Now I want to try it."

You smile and hold out your hand. "May I?" You ask her politely.

She looks at your hand for a second and then nods. She turns around and crouches, her legs coiling ready to jump and eyes towards the tower. Then she tilts her head back towards you. "Well?"

You consider how to do this and place your hands on her shoulders. You blink as bronze wires extend from her trying to secure you and you end up with your hands around her neck and your legs secured by her hand.

Suddenly, you have second thoughts. You look around for a moment, considering how this would look. You were a large man with bronzed skin on the back of a woman with a far smaller build. To anyone looking it must be absolutely absurd.

"Er.. wai-" But you felt qi traveling through her body and you feel her move, her legs uncoiling as power explodes from her legs. You try to reinforce your own body but you are too slow. As soon as the thought comes to you, she moves.

Thump.

Thump.

Thump.

And then you stop but the world keeps spinning. You force yourself to check if there is a solid floor beneath you and then you drop off of her. You close your eyes and steady yourself by holding what seems like a wall. You are aware of her hand on your shoulder but the rest of you is focused on riding out the sense of motion.

Then finally, you open your eyes and shake your head. Then you look around to see that you are on the top of the tower. There is a high parapet that seems to keep people from falling with several pillars holding up a roof. A cylindrical chimney takes up the center and goes from the floor and through the roof.

"You okay?" Eleanora asked with concern in her voice.

"I'm fine," You replied, nodding and then turned to look at her. "I'm really not used to moving that fast."

She takes a moment to examine you and then she nods. "Well, here's the view you came for." She said, stepping aside.

You look and the first thing you notice is the Great Crane lit by the dawn's light. It was the Immortality's End Spirit Mine and though you couldn't see it, you could see the rock formations next to it. Behind it is an ever present plume of steam in the horizon seeping forth from the Demonic Soup Pot as the dregs of all the soups are gathered and excised by Shimmering Soup Sect. And if you squint, perhaps you could see an airship flying through the air?

On the ground, the city spread out below you. It was easy to see where mortal homes ended and cultivator establishments began. The latter was far more intricate and greater in size with the biggest ones dwarfing even the walls that protected the city. Still, the sprawling homes of one million mortals were impressive in its own right.

You glanced at Eleanora. "It's beautiful." You tell her honestly. "Is this why you come up here?"

She nods. "When I saw it, I just had to get up here." She explains, leaning over next to you to take a look at the city below. "I had to go through a bunch of trouble to get access to it even though I don't think it has any use but once I got up here, it was worth it."

"What part do you like the most?" You asked her, smiling. Then you point. "I enjoyed looking at the steam of the Demonic Soup Pot. It gives me the cheerful image of an actual soup cooking in that pot. That'd be a sight to see."

She smiled at that image and pointed to the city. "I just enjoy looking at the people moving about," She told you. "You can only just see it, but with my arts I can easily follow the people going about their lives. I like to predict what they might be doing and see if that matches up with what they do as the day goes on."

"What do you see right now?" You ask her, smiling. "Let me guess… it's a man?"

"I'm not following anyone right now," She explains, rolling her eyes. "Besides, it's not that simple. It's hard to track one person while talking. If I even twitch, it's easy to lose them."

"I suppose all arts have quirks," You said, considering your own. Then you looked at her curiously. "That does make me wonder where you come from. Are you from one of our vassals?"

"Nah," She shakes her head. "I was just a wanderer. My mother was a cultivator, never knew my father and eventually I made my way to the golden devils."

"That's very different from my upbringing." You replied, looking outwards in thought. You noted the rising sun as you continued. "My father died when I was young and I never knew my mother. I was brought up by my older brothers and the notes my father left behind."

"You have older siblings?" Eleanora asked curiously. "Will I be meeting them too for when we'll be working together?"

You shake your head and smile sadly. "No, none of them were cultivators." You replied. "Most of them died and the second-youngest after me moved to start a family. I haven't been in touch with him for…" You pause and think back. Ah. "It's been two decades now. I don't even know if he's still alive."

"Oh." She looks at the city below for a few moments and then turns to you to say something. Then she looks back down and sighs. You consider trying to say something but then she turns and looks at you right in the eye. "Was it because of the trials?"

You consider her question. "It might be," You replied frowning. It wasn't something that had occurred to you before. "None of them said anything but they all lived through it. I decided to be a cultivator because his cultivation notes were how I knew him."

You closed your eyes and thought back. None of them said anything. Did they just not want to discourage you? "Maybe I would have chosen differently if I had experienced it." You finally said. The trials weren't something you looked forward to.

She nods at that. "It makes sense."

You glance at her. "Elaborate?"

"Cultivating is hard." She replied, looking at you. "Do you remember the soup I took today?"

You blink at the question. "Uh… was it the… soul-severing venom?" Ah, as you remembered the name of the ingredient, you realised her point.

"It's a Nascent Soul cultivating aid," She begins and she raises a hand to stop the many, many questions arising in your mind. "As I understand it, it's meant to go to your leader. But sometimes there is a mistake in its preparation and it loses potency. It's still deadly to any lesser beings and needs to be thrown."

You nod as she continues, following closely as she continues. "The owners of this establishment found a use for it. They take a single drop of that soup and distill it with purifying waters. Then they sell it as feeling an echo of what the Archigetes feels. In my case, it was an echo of an echo of an echo but I still felt it."

"How was it?" You asked her, morbidly curious.

She considered that question for a moment. "It was… intense," She answered and then looked at you. "I could handle it and it wasn't that bad as a taste. But imagining that same feeling magnified? It's intimidating."

She pauses and looks away, overtaken by her own thoughts. You wait patiently for her to collect herself. "That's what awaits me if I succeed," She looks straight into your eyes as she continues. "I can't claim to understand the effect of the trials but a choice between all of that and a full mortal life backed by the wealth and security granted by being part of a cultivator's family? I can understand that temptation."

She stops after that and looks away. You simply stand and consider her words. "Thank you," You tell her finally and she looks back at you. "Thank you for sharing that with me. I don't think I would make the same choice but it helps me understand."

She nods in acceptance. "You know my mother always said 'Some arrows are more precious than others, but every arrow has it's worth'. I don't think she ever said what was more important."

"She sounds like a wise woman," You replied, smiling. "Maybe it's our own job to figure out what's more important."

She nods. "Maybe it is."

For a few moments, you share a silence as the sun rises.

Then you smile looking at the rays of the rising sun.

"Eleanora," You say her name. "I look forward to working with you."
 
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For future reference Kaboom, please threadmark omakes as Character Name Omake # - Omake Title.

I know in this case it's a bit of an edge case, but I usually keep it to that unless if the Omake Title is too large for that formatting to be feasibly done + it doesn't talk about their Good Seed at all. This one hits the second, but not the first. I also think I deviated from that formatting for fanart?

(For that, I just did Character Name - Art Name.)
 
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Yeah, Eury going False Nascent Soul is bad because they tend to be incurably insane. And with Manuel barely functional, he'd be able to do nothing but die.

That being said, a Eury that went False Nascent Soul but could hold on to sanity would have... interesting applications in our upcoming rebuilding period. Not the least giving us an incredibly ferocious operative to exploit our backdoor in the Blood Cannibals before it expires, who knows exactly how you disrupt logistics and loot a sect to the bone.

Given that reports are still being submitted, I have to presume we haven't entered a death spiral yet.

(I am curious though if an option to honor the Indomitable Thirteen is going to crop up next turn though? Certainly, a clan based boost to the lunatics who apparently made miracles happen would be nice--since it puts me in spitting distance of taking Rina up to Foundation Establishment next turn. and finally cash in on all that built up cultivation)
 
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Shiro [DEAD] - Good Seed Background
Name: Shiro
Age: 16
Species: Cursed Mushroom
Status: Healthy
Current cultivation: 1st Heavenstage of Qi Gathering

A small mushroom born in the large and twisting cavern's, secret's taught and lesson's learned deep in the depth's shiro knew of the world outside only in the way which stories were told, of the Golden ones and their benevolent rule to those under them and their dealing's with us. Whether that be for medicine they claim to seek from us or help growing their farmland and driving pest's away.

In exchange the Golden one's offered protection from those who would seek harm from us due partly to our very nature as towering mushroom people and the unique resources they can harvest from us and apply to their potions and aid in cultivation (If you ask shiro he'd tell you they were just jealous because they weren't born with fabulous cap's).

Shiro grew up in the aftermath of the Golden one's most recent turmoil from strange other's who devastated the land to harvest "luck" of all thing's, not food nor land nor artifact's. That perplexed shiro for what can luck do more than the constant drive to survive, adapt, grow and thrive?

With time shiro came to a decision. The Golden one's needed time, time to heal their land, time to rebuild and time to expand. With their prosperity bring's with it the Cursed Mushroom's continued safety and growth from those who would wish harm against their way of life.
With this in mind and his goal set shiro went out to join the Legion's with the teaching's of the Cursed Mushroom clan's techniques and art's to help the Golden one's and with that themselves as well.

Cool thing: Staff of Rot, accelerates rot and decay's whatever it hit's

Cultivation Goal: Ascend to 13'th Heavenstage

Dream Goal: Healing Nascent's Fall's land's making it inhabitable


Alectai Aright so this is something I've been thinking for a while now that wouldn't go away and I hope I'm doing it somewhat well since writing a story is new to me but I just had to make someone for this marvelous quest!
It started as a wandering necromancer setting up shop with the devil's but I couldn't decide whether to have him use ghost's or curses or reanimated dead to fight, then I remembered he'd be on his own and wouldn't it be convenient if we could have some groundwork for his path?
Then I got thinking to the Mushroom's and their specialty with curses and dammit theres so many cool curses to cast GIMME!
 
Name: Shiro
Age: 16
Species: Cursed Mushroom
Status: Healthy
Current cultivation: 1st Heavenstage of Qi Gathering

A small mushroom born in the large and twisting cavern's, secret's taught and lesson's learned deep in the depth's shiro knew of the world outside only in the way which stories were told, of the Golden ones and their benevolent rule to those under them and their dealing's with us. Whether that be for medicine they claim to seek from us or help growing their farmland and driving pest's away.

In exchange the Golden one's offered protection from those who would seek harm from us due partly to our very nature as towering mushroom people and the unique resources they can harvest from us and apply to their potions and aid in cultivation (If you ask shiro he'd tell you they were just jealous because they weren't born with fabulous cap's).

Shiro grew up in the aftermath of the Golden one's most recent turmoil from strange other's who devastated the land to harvest "luck" of all thing's, not food nor land nor artifact's. That perplexed shiro for what can luck do more than the constant drive to survive, adapt, grow and thrive?

With time shiro came to a decision. The Golden one's needed time, time to heal their land, time to rebuild and time to expand. With their prosperity bring's with it the Cursed Mushroom's continued safety and growth from those who would wish harm against their way of life.
With this in mind and his goal set shiro went out to join the Legion's with the teaching's of the Cursed Mushroom clan's techniques and art's to help the Golden one's and with that themselves as well.

Cool thing: Staff of Rot, accelerates rot and decay's whatever it hit's

Cultivation Goal: Ascend to 13'th Heavenstage

Dream Goal: Healing Nascent's Fall's land's making it inhabitable


Alectai Aright so this is something I've been thinking for a while now that wouldn't go away and I hope I'm doing it somewhat well since writing a story is new to me but I just had to make someone for this marvelous quest!
It started as a wandering necromancer setting up shop with the devil's but I couldn't decide whether to have him use ghost's or curses or reanimated dead to fight, then I remembered he'd be on his own and wouldn't it be convenient if we could have some groundwork for his path?
Then I got thinking to the Mushroom's and their specialty with curses and dammit theres so many cool curses to cast GIMME!
Just to clarify Shiro is meant to appear after the Trials on Turn 6 right?

E: I'll tag @Alectai for you too since the tag was the wrong format to pop.
 
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Threadmarked.

(I think every Collaborator probably knows this, but Good Seed Submission first posts are formatted:

Good Seed Name - Good Seed Submission

Remember to always sort the newly added Good Seed in alphabetical order in Sidestory. Keeps it neat that way. Every other Good Seed FP is already in alphabetical order, btw, so the proverbial signposts make it a lot easier than it sounds.)
 
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Yes I don't want my shroom boi to get murdered quite yet :V
Be careful young mushroom! These lands are truly strange. Did you know that there are men who live in giant soup pots? Take care of yourself and come! Let this Senior take care of you!

Yes, right here. I have prepared a special bath for you that will take you to a higher state of being.

What do mean it's a soup pot? Of course it is! Did I not just tell you about the people who live in one? This is simply how things are done here.

Ah are you worried about the boiling water? It is merely something based on hotsprings. You must have heard of those famous mountain spots? Very good for your chakra yes.

Oh Junior Brother you worry too much. Now you are concerned about the herbs I'm adding? It's a herbal bath of course! Only the best for my juniors.

Come. Come. Please enjoy!
 
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