Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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The Bee's had tried a new, suicidal tactic. Low tier cultivators, rumoured to be POWs or tribute from slave sects, strung in groups of 4 or 5 to the abdomens of their mounts. These slave warriors where clearly dosed with some hideously effective combat drug, they flung themselves through the air and onto the ramparts without a moments concern for their lives. Most visibly broke bones on landing only to fight on with the strength of mad men.
I like this, very Reporter on the Frontlines. While it won't do much for galvanizing support since we're already all in, it sure does give an idea of how the Devil Bees behave,
She had brought enough reagents to repeat her stunt with what she had dubbed the Wing-Killer-Resin another half a dozen times, each time with strong results. The Bee's had seemed stumped as to a decent solution, particularly since the higher ups had the foresight to keep changing her position on the wall, making it impossible to predict where the yellow death clouds might appear
I'm really hoping that this makes it somehow into the Clan. As long as the Devil Bees aren't wiped out, this will be useful.
A grim little smile emerged on her face as she dug through a pile of scrolls, looking for the one that had his name on it. Here it was, Guyuk The Great. Said to have gone mad with rage after being forced to put down his beloved mount. No doubt he thought his status as Mid Foundation Establishment Expert would make a quick night attack on her post easy pickings. She had disabused him of that notion with a torrent of conjured serpents. Reinforced by her Life Pillar, her Ash-Born-Vipers had evolved into a much more terrifying existence. A single smashed pill now gave life to a trio of the beasts, each 3 metres wide and 60 long, eyes and teeth glittering with intelligence and venom.

The report recounted that Guyuk had died of his injuries out in the siege camps three days later. Few of his followers had lasted that long.
Truly the quintessence poison cultivator. I really enjoy the imagery of him attempting a assassination, being caught out and forced to flee before dying from the poison.
Good Seed Bonus: Hidden Bloodline – Chen, Rong does not know who his father was. Yet after awakening to the 1st level of Qi Condensation he felt his blood sing and his shadow seemed to move. With that hint of talent, he requested a darkness attribute cultivation manual from the clan. For if his enemies couldn't even see him they'd be much easier prey.



@occipitallobe this ok for a good seed?
That sounds pretty cool to me! And depending on how the bloodline is handled, he might even have less trouble with the Tribulations since he has no bronze in him
You wouldn't mind if Demetrius tried to seal off the temple? He ended up being a little spooked, and the short snippet I intended to write is snowballing into its own omake.
Go ahead go ahead! No offence, but considering the dream is from a Soul Severing Cultivator, i'm sure it would be able to break through any restrictions with ease. It may even add some tension to the Secret Realm Omake since i can write a scene of Xiao Yi being unable to get out and having to dodge till a accidental blow shatters the restrictions allowing him to flee.
@occipitallobe

After you've completed the good seed report could you give us a bit more detail about how the trials will be handled from a good seed perspective? I.e. does it get treated a bit like entering a hidden realm except only negative outcomes are magnified?

Do we get trial miniturns and treat it separately from turn 5 or do we just treat it as part of the turn?

That sort of thing.

I also ask because I'm not sure how the trial interacts with timed secret realms. For example, the Yuan clan secret realm is opening up next turn for the first time and while I'm tempted to send Wei Feng in there I'm assuming that there would be a significant chance that even if he came out of there with good fortune if he lost a lifesaving treasure then he'd be at serious risk of getting ganked by the trials immediately afterward. Is this correct?
Yeah, i kinda wanna know as well. If it's like the above, i'll forgo the Yuan secret Realm and maybe set my Goal this turn to " Looking on ways to forge the axe fragment into his lance " to see if i can somehow get an artifact out of it.

But if we can still get a Omake Bonus for Turn 6 before the results of the Trials come in, i'll probably risk the Yuan Secret Realm for gear since Xiao Yi will be facing Foundation Establishment and he has no gear.
I betrayed you in the question. I told it I wouldn't consent. I trusted you to consent, so there was no reason to expose myself to the mutagen. Better I remain strong to protect you, then we both become ill.

Peta nodded. She made the choice to protect her brother without thought, but her brother had always been wiser than her. In the case the scorpion gave them, Consent/Refuse was the ideal result for the pair, not Consent/Consent. The only worry was whether or not she would chose to sacrifice herself. If she'd been selfish, they would both die.
I like this! It really shows the bond between the 2 of them. The unwavering trust is awesome! Bear Bro indeed! Bearly Nice!
Peta and Wajo spent their days as the flipper bears did, and the wounds in their bodies, and spirits, healed. Peta could feel the flipper bear seep into her soul. With it, she could let go of everything. She could be free from strife, free from worry, and free from the very bonds of heaven and earth. She learned the secrets of freedom and serenity, and flew with the bears in a dream.

One day, a plague of bees attacked the glade. With a lazy slap, the flipper bears dismissed their purpose. Without purpose, a bee is nothing. They fell to the earth, lazed in the sun, and enjoyed serenity until they were dust.
Reading this really makes me realize that the Bears are the natural enemies of the Bees. Although i'm now curious on what Devil Bee Honey is like?
"Bear with me, just let me get my bearings. I'm a bit embearassed. Are you pawsitive you want to leave? Couldn't bear to leave your clan?"

Peta huffed, "did you send us to that bear island?"

The turtle just giggled.

"Feel a bit underkoalified?"

"Please stop."

"But I've bearly begun!"

Several unbearable hours later, the turtle agreed to let them go. It even gave them a piece of its shell. They could use it to summon him to their rescue… So long as they were willing to sit through another set of bear puns after. Peta resolved to save it for only the most dire straits.
I salute your Bear Puns!
 
Syntyche Theophylaktos 1 - On Duty
Syntyche Theophylaktos

On Duty

In the days, Syntyche served in the legions, as with all blessed with the Blood. During the nights, her training was dedicated towards more specialized endeavors.

The Theophylaktos estate sprawled, but down, rather than out. Space saved was resources saved, and much of the family preferred the dark in any case. Training room four was set in a noble style, akin to the palaces of the Seven Divine Saber Palace. While the architecture held none of the power of the real thing, the skill of the craftsmen gave even the imitations an aura which could cut through weaker wills. For practicing how cannibals acted, it was highly unusual.

Syntyche mused on the thought, for a moment. That was precisely the reason her teacher selected it.

Battle Blood Cannibal Sect members often walked about with a swagger, gestures which pumped themselves up as much as the most haughty noble scion. The backbone of it was fear; all cannibals feared their brethren, and any cannibal seen as weak would be consumed by the others. Their heads were always up, and their bloodshot eyes checked every corner, without fail. A true noble wouldn't bother, as they had servants or dao protectors observing their blind spots. Having studied a dozen of them, appearing as one was simplicity itself.

Syntyche flexed her will, and felt herself shift.

Every Theophylaktos described the experience in different ways. For some, it was like being broken down into blocks and rebuilt. For others, it was being reforged in fiery heat. For her, it was like taking off a winter coat.

The Clan's bronze was heavy, and as her skin lightened to a barbarian shade she could feel it's weight receding into her core, settling within her essence. Her hair extended, carefully managed blonde strands darkening as the split and ran amok. Her face shifted, brows defining themselves more sharply, and her pupils tightened, revealing the whites below them. She looked up, hands twitchy at her sides, evidently ill at ease standing still.

Five seconds, and no mortal would ever believe she served in the legions.

"Strut." Glaphyra Theophylaktos, her instructor, ordered, and Syntyche moved as the cannibals did. Head high, neck on a swivel.

She paced, stride slightly uneven, even though it clashed with her training just hours ago. Two years ago, her stride had been too regular to be any cannibal's. One and a half years ago, her posture had disrupted a formation during legion practice. In the end, it was essence that made the difference. Even the meager drip of essence within Essence Gathering was enough to separate the two behaviors and isolate them to the positions with which they belonged.

There was little more frustrating than that. Relying on essence to solve all of her problems was a fundamentally flawed path. Syntyche had adjusted, and no longer needed the crutch.

Glaphyra drew up to her, corrective rod in hand. Syntyche hissed, backing away. As with everything else, this was part of the exercise. No cannibal would meekly accept punishment. Her teacher swung anyway, which meant that Syntyche was doing well. No blood path master would accept defiance in pupils, after all.

Rather than block, Syntyche counterattacked. Her knife was in her palm before the rod had even been raised, and she slipped it through her instructor's robes before the rod fell. It bounced off bronze skin, of course. Glaphyra had stopped transforming herself when a previous exercise went slightly sideways.

(Syntyche had overestimated how well her instructor had mimicked the Blood Path. She had failed to consider that Glaphyra considered the Theophylaktos estate to be her home, and let her guard down. She had since corrected those mistakes.)

What followed was, naturally, a one-sided beatdown. Syntyche obviously could not match one in foundation establishment, at least not without major assistance, and her attempts were further undermined by the crazed nature of the style she had to ape.

Precisely five minutes later, they switched to cultivating. Lessons lingered more easily in a meditative state.

"Your mannerisms are nearly flawless. However, a cannibal is one to flee in an unfavorable situation. Regardless, you are ready to move on to the next stages within the century." Glaphyra stated.

Syntyche considered it. It went against her internal logic when she assumed the persona, but Glaphyra had hundreds of years more experience with cannibals. It was knowledge not worth discarding.

"And in between?" Syntyche asked, partially rhetorically. Both of them knew what was coming up.

"You've been chosen as worthy of investment," Glaphyra congratulated. She'd taken a colder affectation since taking Syntyche as a pupil, perhaps to understand her more clearly. "As such, you will be given some assistance in overcoming the clan's upcoming trials."

Saying such, she reached into her robes and withdrew a small parchment, just under the size of a handkerchief.

"This is the Drifting Sands Elegy. Tear it, and it will call forth a storm capable of hiding you from even Foundation Establishment for long enough to escape."

Syntyche blinked. "This appears to be part of your personal resources, Teacher."

"It is. I am reaching the end of my life. If it is spent here, it is spent well. Given your promise, herhaps your next teacher will be Esteemed Grandfather." Glaphyra smiled.

Syntyche rarely saw her smile, even before she had adjusted her persona. She had been burdened with something, perhaps, and the notion of her death had been freeing, rather than scary. Glaphyra meditated, and her being was made more, somehow. Her duty to the clan, knowing it would likely be her end, was energizing. Was that part of her Dao?

Did it truly free her in the end? Or did it chain her to the earth, forever unable to serve in more productive manners?

Syntyche mused on her understanding of Glaphyra, but discarded the meaning from it. She served, but her being was not one of self sacrifice.

No Golden Devil was born to serve, or the heavens would have broken them long ago.

@occipitallobe My first SV omake. My mind apparently instantly burns out over 1000 words.

Shiny: Life-saving Treasure
 
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So erm, i was watching Tokyo Game Show and they just revealed a english version of this is coming out:

amazing-cultivation-simulator.fandom.com

Amazing Cultivation Simulator Wiki


The little bit i got from the trailer felt exactly like the quest so far with the building of the sect + the training of individual cultivators. I've also spotted what seemed to be bits of Formation Combat, so just a FYI in case anyone wants more of stuff along the lines of the quest.
 
So erm, i was watching Tokyo Game Show and they just revealed a english version of this is coming out:

amazing-cultivation-simulator.fandom.com

Amazing Cultivation Simulator Wiki


The little bit i got from the trailer felt exactly like the quest so far with the building of the sect + the training of individual cultivators. I've also spotted what seemed to be bits of Formation Combat, so just a FYI in case anyone wants more of stuff along the lines of the quest.
It's basically Rimworld except you're a Cultivation Sect from what I hear, yeah.
Oh, I got that game, and yeah, it's Xianxia Rimworld. Pretty interesting so far and I've been able to play the Beta Build of the English version. Still trying to get the hang of the interface and well as the game itself since there aren't any particularly good guides out there yet plus translation continues to get changed up everyday. I just wished there were more customization options when you create your disciples, appearance-wise.
 
Ferenike 12 - Terror or Horror? Part 1
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Ferenike 12 - Terror or Horror? Part 1​

They marched along the South Road from dusk to dawn, resting under the heat of the noonday sun in their quickly set up marching camp. Snake emblazoned banners snapped in the wind, pennants flying out like dragon tails behind the might of the Ninth Legion.

Ferenike and Nan Fuxi travelled with the main column, ranks upon ranks of clanking armor and stamping hooves of their Spirit Horses kicking up a small sandstorm of dust, magnified by their Silvery Sandfish Arrays as a defense against attacks from the air ready to spring up and make flying incredibly difficult as a much smaller form of the storms found in the Wind Towers. Around them marched the folded wings of the auxillia. And following after the column came their wagon train, vehicles ten times the height of a man and pulled by enormous bronze oxen, laden with supplies and mobile fortresses in their own right. There Gallius worked with the other members of the quartermasters to feed and house the Legion as it marched, and to ensure that the little things that made Legion life possible got to the people who needed it. Like the very good tobacco she had taken to smoking. Its fiery essence went well with her Spirit Stone dust.

They marched for months, messages passing back and forth between the Legatus of the Legions in flurries of messengers. Passing through the Hong Xuan Clan on roads of a smaller and narrower derivative of the Golden Devil design, adapted for a reduced economic scale, they were received with cheers and celebratory parades as they marched through their cities. Meetings between the Legate and the Hong Xuan representatives took place over only three days for resupply negotiations, haste speeding the process considerably.

Then they were traversing the Grand Hua Empire. While crossing over the border one night, with the wheeling stars above her head Ferenike could swear she felt a looming hiss as she awoke from a dream. A tremor in the air that made the sand under her hand shift slightly. A terrible buzz, suffusing the Qi in the air. When she looked out her tent door she almost felt like she could see the dark air rippling, the stars flickering in the south. But it passed. The chill pervading her limbs since they had set out intensified, as she could almost feel ten thousand feet skitter over her grave.

Over the border the roads were even smaller, even narrower, one of the smallest Golden Devil derivatives. The Legion travelled in a long river of glistening spirit bronze as it gave a wide berth to the Floating Hive Islands and approached Great Hua Lake City from the east on its Magnificent Hua Road. On the eastern walls hundreds of thousands of Hua were gathered, and their cheers reached her ears even across the gulf of multiple dozen li, mortals and cultivators gathered to welcome them. Hanging from the walls she could see golden pennants and flags with the eagle of the Legions in beautiful purple thread.

As they grew close she could feel it, a whispering weight of Will, firmly perusing them as they passed under her great eye.

The Protostrator's Will.

Then she heard it, the voice like spears ringing against spears.

Legate Wu of the Ninth Legion, proceed down the river past West Wind Tower to the Night Devil Fortress. I would match the Abyssal Devil Bees in battle upon the field soon near the foothills and have need of your forces.

Then another voice answered, an ever ringing chorus of bubbling waters. Acknowledged Protostrator, I shall take my leave to great the Grand Hua Emperor properly and then make all haste to your position.

Acknowledged Legate, proceed.


Around her Ferenike could see her Trainees sweating quietly in their helmets, the weight of the two presences crushing down on their weak cultivation and making their very souls shudder. For her, she felt it steeling her glass infused spine, and she reached out with her Qi to touch those of her command and buoy them up. Practice for her Oasis, in time, and useful to encourage them.

All was well.



They spent a little time in the Great Hua Lake City. Its lake was indeed great, several hundred li across. Ferenike got to swim for the first time in her life and discovered she utterly hated it after taking a dip in the lake. Wet everywhere and sticky as the sun cooked it off her, and Fuxi teasing her she looked like a soaked cat. Nope. Not happening again, she'd rather bake in a Ten Thousand Year Ogre Oven.

"But you looked so funny." Fuxi giggled as they sat in their rooms in the Legion post, far up on the twentieth floor.

Ferenike huffed and crossed her arms. "No, you witch. And I will most certainly not let you push me into it when I'm not looking. It won't happen!" She complained.

Fuxi relented with a glint in her eye as she lounged on her cot. "Finnnnneeee fine you spoilsport. Big wet crybaby."

Ferenike threw a pillow at her which Fuxi roundly caught and sent flying back, only to have it returned with interest again. They wrestled over the pillow until with a ripppppppppp it tore and feathers exploded everywhere.

"Oh gods dammit I have feathers stuck to my eyelashes now." One of them said, she wasn't sure which.

They broke down after that, choking on feathers when they laughed too much until they managed to escape the cloud and clean it up.

In the morning they left on barges and Ferenike found she liked these much better. Stable ground and she could dip a hand or foot into the water instead of her whole body when it got particularly hot, though it was as a whole cooler than the deep Desert she was familiar with. All along the banks were spread small iron spires, and between them flickered a haze of mirage, defenses and weather controlling arrays in one. Again she noted how they pulled energy in from the sun and the desert, most especially the sand.

There was something there and it tickled at her memories of Zu Jing and her battle with him years ago now.

Almost 44 years old now wasn't she? She hadn't changed at all in the time since she had fought that bandit, not outwardly.

Inside it was a different story and she wondered at what she found there as she rested in her tent set up on the massive barge's deck. Within her, her Dantian was a peaceful plane of red glass ground and melted smooth by her own hands and the barriers to its expansion made into material to build it further as she entered the Ninth Heavenstage. Beneath her spiritual feet she felt the subtle ridges of tiny dunes and ripples in the surface, a texture that pleased her. And shining up through it like a star was a red fire. Maybe it was like a smooth ruby sphere with fire in its heart, that was how she'd describe it to a mortal.

Far above it in the void of her mind she could feel the Heavenly Tribulation waiting to descend upon her if she tried to form her Qi into a pillar inscribed with the idea of Patience. But she had no interest in that. Instead her minds eye turned towards the process she had begun as they travelled, her little legionnaires of glass each taking a small speck of Qi from her Dantian and carrying it to every piece of her body and using it like a torch to burn out the impurities that still lingered in her body. Each little flame was like being stabbed as it burned them away, sharp, quick and then a lingering pounding pain that only faded slowly.

She had much, much further to go. Heaven's Will was that her works would come to naught and that she would die weak. She took that idea and spat in its eye. Her strength was a part of herself and she had chosen to devote herself to helping the Clan. It was all she could accept as her path in life. In the words of one of the many manuals of the Taktika Bureau.

Make of your hands spears, and give those spear-hands into the hands of the Clan.

She had made her trainees read that particular manual a lot, enough that she some times caught them joking around while reciting pieces of it from heart completely accurately to extremely funny music. Mission accomplished in her view.

Soon they reached Little Jian, a thriving place of a hundred thousand, held subdued under a pall of fear. The cheers of the mortals as they marched past were heartfelt but strained by worry, and when the Legion settled in the city and began deployment preparations with the other Legions present Ferenike heard the murmurs of terror about the buzzing.

The same buzzing that haunted her dreams.

Her trainees were quiet, seeing to their weapons and equipment in the barrack. She stayed with them, talking to them, reading writings of the Clan to them, and answering any last minute questions. Here on the eave of battle, the rules were briefly relaxed to ease tension and together they waited. Fuxi and Gallius occasionally appeared, sharing her time with the Trainees, but then they returned to their own posts.

They rested there for a day and then followed the river the rest of the way down to the Night Devil Fortress. A towering edifice, battle scarred by months of fighting, craters dozens of li deep dotting its dark and imposing walls as it sat astride the pass between two mountains that it almost seemed to loom over such was its scale.

They joined with the other Legions mustering in the Fortress yard and this time when the Will of the Protostrator touched them it was not a simple fragment, but a great entity like a mountain turning to stare at them. Even Ferenike fell back under the touch of her mind, bolstering her command as best she could.

But this time they were guided on where to set up in order to fit into the larger encampment, and a litany of administrative orders and organizational tasks that went into running a force of fifty thousand cultivators.

Eventually she met up with Fuxi and Gallius in her room. They were sitting around her small table, the Ice Peach wine she had gotten years ago freezing a small ring on the center of the table as their cups sat around it.

They had drank very little of it, aware of the high alert status, and simply marveled in the cool and intense sweetness beyond most things she had tasted in the Desert. In her tipsy haze she sat smiling as Fuxi and Gallius sat in touching range.

There was only silence between. All of their promises had already been made. They would come back together again, or go out with a scream against the Heavens and their witless minions.

There was nothing more to be said.



It was on the fifth day after their arrival when scouts spotted a massive force of over ninety thousand Devil Bees, most of their invasion force, racing for the fifty thousand encamped Clan cultivators.

The Legions war drums thundered, tens of thousands of feet stepping into the march as a golden sea wheeled out of the Night Devil Fortress's walls. Now they sallied out to meet them according to the Protostrator's will half a day's march from the Night Devil Fortress. She wanted to crush them here after luring them out with her massive forces.

And it looked like getting their attention had worked, as on the horizon that rippling in the air Ferenike had dreamed of that night months ago came again, this time followed by a drone.

Warbling, hissing, snapping buzzing filling her ears and drowning out all noise.
Even her racing heart.

Clicking, twitching, humming wings beating the air in the tens of thousands.

The sky darkened as their shapes swallowed the setting sun. The mountains seemed to grow, reaching up into the sky like claws or towering clouds.

Boom. Boom. Boom!

Three cracks of thunder spoke of their first attack, the beat of mighty drums. Three massive chunks of the invaders army broke off from the mass, howling, screaming and wailing as they fell from the sky upon the vanguard of the Clan.

Ferenike and the Ninth Century were buried deep in the middle of the left flank, greater cultivators in front and behind, and she heard boneshaking pattern of their own drums, echoing as if from deep beneath the earth.

Boom-boom, boom-boom!

"BRACE! HOPLITE FORMATION!" The clear bell voice of Tessarian Augustan called.

She repeated his command to her trainees and together their Qi rose with the great fountains blooming all around the great army.

Sound ceased as the air seemed to flee from the surge of Qi rising into the air in mighty dragon-coils. Above them a figure in bright white robes glowed with an all consuming golden light as the shadow formed, legs, then torso and arms, then crested helm visible in its incredible definition around them. In her left hand the Hoplite carried a great aspis shield one hundred li wide and in its right she grasped a great hoplon spear whose shining blade was a graceful leaf shape thirty li from tip to base. The enormous Will of the Protostrator guided their Qi like a million hands as she threw the Hoplite into action.

That blade swung out, a great slash of the bronze spear. With the sound of a ringing gong the air was set aflame with golden fire before its edge, the point trailing golden light as the massive blade crushed one of the three mighty waves and then in a burst of blinding light transformed them into ash. Slowly the Legions began to march forward, the call of the Legion drumbeat pulling them forward as their banners waved like grass around the Hoplite's feet. All around them the smell of blood and burning guts and bones filled their noses and blood rained to the ground as darkness descended, the sun a distant red spot as its light filtered through tens of thousands of blood filled bodies. Ferenike could not hear herself screaming orders, only feel her mouth moving. All she could hear was the overwhelming beat of the drums, pounding in her ears and setting her heart to racing.

In the great cloud of darkness, deeper than any sandstorm, the man of bronze and shadow fought like a bonfire against the descent of night. Golden light fought against red and black, and the screaming faces of her enemies wheeled around, seemingly wrapped in red and black cloaks as they struck again and again with sharpened steel fangs.

Wails arose all around the battlefield as Ferenike saw their lines mix, the main body of the Abyssal Devil Bees descending onto them now and using its mass to force through some of their number through the defenses of the Hoplite. Like a man being enveloped by a swarm completely they swallowed the formation and stung again and again and again.

She saw Clan members fall as they were overwhelmed by tens of Devil Bees at once, their bodies coming apart at the seams as multiple bees grabbed them in their fangs and sucked out their fluids before ripping the screaming husks to pieces. Then their attackers would be killed by their victim's fellows and pushed away, only for more to descend.

A red and black blur shot for her command and she leapt into the air, a surge of qi driving her upwards and then she lashed out with her own spear. It stabbed out in dozens of scorpion like thrusts, infused with glass to make a glimmering pink and red lance. First two, then four, then ten, then finally twenty bees and their riders fell as her spear punched clean through their mounts from end to end and lashed at them furiously, bolstered by her Trainees Qi as her shield blocked a rain of spines and stingers.

Above her and all around her the golden shield of the Protostrator stood in the path of the tide, a burning disk soaring through dark space and the apocalypse that had descended. Behind it soared a golden ray of light, sweeping all it encountered into dust and ashes.

Above her head Ferenike could see glimmers of sunlight as the Devil Bees died in droves.

Then that sunlight twisted and darkened, spinning and splitting as bodies passed in front of it.

Wait, the bees were spinning, like a great sandstorm.

A suffocating weight of Qi crushed her to her knees onto the dunes, her Trainees letting out strangled cries as they too fell. She could spare barely any thought for them though as her mind was seized with panic as pitch blackness descended and a terrifying glint in that shadow.

With a sucking shriek that ripped sound away in its passing it struck the Hoplite, passing through its shield with ease as the disk shattered into ten thousand shards, and struck the glowing figure in its middle. A great flash of red erupted.

The dragon-coils of the Hoplite ruptured like a river ripping free of its banks as the controlling mind, the Protostrator's Will, flickered.

Retreat. All forces retreat to the Night Devil Fortress, Legatus Kekao shall have command...

The Protostrator's words continued, listing a chain of command without her in it, and as Ferenike tried to get her stunned mind to process what was being said she felt a mighty force grabbing her by the shoulders and driving her to step back to retreat. In her soul she cried out, but she felt training take over as she guided her panicking trainees to retreat, bodily grabbing some of them and hurling them backwards away from the battlefield.

What followed was a controlled dash away from the battlefield as the grievously wounded Hoplite held back the tide. They broke the leading edge of the storm of bees and saw the blood red rays of the setting sun.

The war drums set a fast marching beat and the Legions obeyed. For hours they marched under the banner of the flickering Will of the Protostrator as she helped the Legions sustain emergency Twin-Eagle formations. But they weakened over the next two hours, more and more of their number dying as the Bees found more and more gaps and dug their fangs into their soft underbelly. Now Clan were dying for two or three enemies apiece, and not all of those enemies were killed after the first Clan death and sometimes went on to savage more and more of their members before finally being stopped.

Through it all was that fucking drone.

It seemed to gleefully rise as she felt her commander's life dim. And then go out.

The pall that had descended onto the Legions deepened.

Then in an opening a small flight group descended on her command. Ferenike roared as a Bee with its fucking human fanged face dived for Deimos, the black haired girl flagging as her qi guttered out and screaming as she dived for cover only to be snatched up and consumed in an eyeblink of splattering gore. Dead.

Ferenike's glass armored body slammed into the bee then, causing it to shriek as her sharp armor dug into its carapace and then it twisted. She screamed as its fangs pierced through her biceps and shoulder, swallowing her spear as it did so and then smiled wildly as her eyes became stars of red fire.

"Choke on me then, monster!" She howled as her veins exploded from her arm, trapped down the gleeful monster's gullet as she felt her blood being sucked away, and stabbed into it along with her spear. It twitched and gurgled and then its eyes exploded outward as red glass spears erupted from its sockets like branches, dozens of their fellows bursting out of its five meter long body. Before its halberd wielding rider could strike her he too was pierced and affixed to his mount by thorns of red.

Then with a leap and a roar she used the enemy trapped on her arm as a bludgeon to smear his comrades across a li. "Commander!" Her redheaded Junior Agha cried as her and the others caught up with Ferenike and picked her up. "Help me pull this off!" The other girl cried as the trainees gathered around and with Ferenike's help levered its jaw open and revealed the ruin of her arm.

It had been flayed down to vein wrapped bones, the flesh and muscle drained of fluid and shredded away by the teeth, her fingers sharp spikes of glass and fractured bone. Her bones appeared as crimson glass infused ivory, and the mass of writhing glass around it was all that was holding it together. "Medic!" She cried, dazedly, trained instinct making her tongue move even as her brain choked.

Then the pain hit her and she grit her teeth to keep from screaming as her trainees Pleminon and Agha helped her stay upright. As Agrippa, the sweet and plump medic helped her treat and wrap her arm in linen she found she could move it, barely, her incredible constitution and will pushing through the pain that stole her breath away and caused her stomach to roil. But it bled slowly and that blood was black, poison slowing her healing.

Cries of distress amongst her charges brought her head up, dizziness causing her to stumble for a moment. She blinked as she realized they had been separated from most of the Legion, and blessedly most of their enemies, as in the confusion of the retreat they had wandered into a defile and a deep canyon between the dunes. Her trainees were listlessly crying and looking about in terror, as Agha and Dana, a short girl with blonde-white hair in two braids going down her back, held each other and sobbed. ...Deimos had been their friend. Fuck. Gods dammit she hated what she had to do.

"Everyone! Shut up and pay attention!" She bellowed, as she held her arm close to her gut and the little flakes of glass in her veins began to constrict blood flow and seek out the poison. "Form up!" She ordered and her trainees fell in on instinct.

A burden rose off her shoulders lifting the burden slightly and almost leaving her light headed.

Wait, that lightheaded feeling was partly the blood-loss. She pushed that thought aside.

"We have to keep moving. The Protostrator gave us orders to retreat but we're cut off from the Fortress and the Legions. I know a city to the south called Guo Wo, and we're heading there at all speed. Understood?" She glared at them, propping herself up with sheer willpower as exhaustion burrowed into her brain.

There were nineteen tired salutes. "Understood commander!" They cried, quietly.

She nodded, then tilted her head and gestured down the canyon. "We march."

As she walked she closed her eyes briefly and let herself let go for a moment. "...fuck." She whispered.



She breathed in, jostling her arm, pain pain pain. They were in sight of the entrance to the underground city of Guo Wo, a series of small towering spires rising out of a cliff face that jutted from the dunes and around it she could see a small Devil Bee force. Had they completely overrun the Hua? What even the fuck was happening anymore...

They had marched for days, separated, out of contact and they were exhausted. This was the Heavens punishing them from on high, she could feel it.

The only silver lining was that the siege seemed to be a distant one, and the Bees were content to circle around as an ominous shadow on the horizon when they weren't bedded down in their camp like now. Hundreds of them.

Her command was hiding crouched in one end of a canyon that overlooked Guo Wo, though not the same one they started in. They'd changed, some time around... the fourth day? She was foggy on the dates, it had been sometime after she'd beaten back the poison and stopped bleeding on the second day.

"Rest up everyone, we're going to have to sprint to the city and hurry ourselves through the gate." She said to them over her shoulder as she examined the potential battlefield.

It was a distance of over twenty li to the north and the enemy camp was within ninety or so to their east, well within quick deployment range of the Bees. They'd have to do it as the sun set to the west. If she had her placement right, it'd be shining in the eyes of the Devil Bees then and give them the necessary cover they needed to reach the gates of the city.

It was noon now and so she waited, sitting upon a stone as she watched the dune valley below.

Behind her she could hear her trainees moving about with relieved sighs and nervous paranoia. She closed her eyes for a moment and sighed. It'd keep them alive until a relief column could find them. She'd kept morale from dropping too far by using her unassailable stamina as an anchor and hadn't slept at all during their run, letting her juniors sleep in her stead. Far longer than a cultivator of her level should be able to go, but she was the master of her soul and she had decided she was going to stay awake until she saw these kids in somewhere more secure than the open Desert.

She opened her eyes, an ember of red fire in her pupils as she stared up at the piercing blue Heavens.

She wasn't sure she'd live to see the Dawn Fortress again. But she'd sure as hell try.

When the sun was a handspan above the horizon she got to her feet and called them from their rest.

"Now we run. If someone falls pick them up! But don't stop running!" She ordered as she looked at them and then turned.

"Go!" She roared and they raced out of the canyon, surging down the dunes as they kicked up sand in their wake.

That run felt like some of the longest moments of her life even as she felt them happen in less than half an hour.

Just running, scrambling with frantic speed towards the bronze gates of the city in the distance.

Oven-like air sawing in and out of their throats, so hot it scraped them bloody raw. That horrible drone at their backs as the Devil Bees noticed them.

She remembered shouting for the Twin-Eagle formation and it shuddering into unstable existence as their fatigued Qi struggled to sustain it, and she remembered the fantastic speed their pace took as it carried them to the foot of the gates.

She remembered smiling and thanking the main gate guard's ancestors as she heard a loud and clear voice scream out "Open the gate for the Golden Lords!" At their approach.

As they sprinted in she heard the sound of rapidly firing scorpion bows and other siege defense arrays activating as they drove back the pursuing Devil Bees. Soft darkness encompassed them and their formation went out in a wink of gold and then the bolstering Qi faded, and they collapsed.

Ferenike was barely conscious at this point and many of her command were not at all, tired and grime covered, but alive. They were now in a courtyard on the other side of the now closed gate, and around them were several stairways up into the darkness of the tower above, from where the sound of firing siege weapons came. On the far side of the large room stood another gate, presumably guarding the way down. She stood in the middle of her trainees and watched warily as an young woman approached, descending from the interior of the defenses. She was middling height, with brownish-black hair and green eyes, wary and frightened as she took in Ferenike's force.

"My name is Jin Nu'er, are you... the commander of this force?" She asked hopefully of Ferenike.

"Yes. My juniors need rest and accommodations..." She said, rattling off their needs quietly to the woman.

Some quiet and quick logistical discussion after that and Jin had them tucked away in the city below. They ended up bunking in one of the quieter wings of their fortifications. After getting them settled Ferenike had to fend off curious soldiers poking their noses in, which got a short and sharp demonstration of her temper as she tore strips out of them for trying to bother her for news about the War, sprinkled with useful information and a command to ask Jin about it.

Once her trainees were sleeping and nosy neighbors dealt with she collapsed into a chair outside their bunkroom and promptly went to sleep.

When she awoke, hours before her trainees did, she found herself in an endless series of meetings with Jin Nu'er and her command staff. The truth of the matter was that the city was screwed if they weren't relieved and Jin had been working to slowly evacuate it with what forces she could spare, pulling the defense teams down to a skeleton crew as they sold themselves to buy time. All she asked was if Ferenike's group could help hold off the bees until relief arrived. That was one piece of good news, they had a functioning communications array, but it was soured because the Legion couldn't provide one.

It churned in Ferenike's guts, she didn't want to spend their lives at all! But she had to, so she would.

After that meeting she left to find their communication arrays. She had a call to make.

Walking through the halls, the mortals and cultivators who remained gave her cautious but hopeful looks, recognizing her uniform as Legion issue. Then their eyes would land on her bandaged and ruined arm and they'd pale, some worry returning to their faces. She did her best to talk to some of the worst ones and give them encouragement, but there was only so much she could say when her arm looked much like a wrapped twig.

Eventually she made it through the warren of tunnels of the city, like an anthill, and found the communications dome. There she gave her purpose to the guards and once passing through beelined for the Mechanikos on duty.

"Soldier, I need to send a message to the Night Devil Fortress, priority status report." She said quietly.

The man eeped at her expression and waved his hands as he kneeled on a woven mat before the arrangement of plates and curved crystals that made up the array which took up one entire wall of the house sized room. "S-sure, give me a moment. What did you say your name was ma'am?" He asked, surprise starting to dissipate as he fell into routine.

"Ferenike of the Golden Devils, Legionnaire in the Ninth Century under Centurion Dragoumis of the Fifth Cohort of the Ninth Legion." She rattled off for him.

He was nodding now as he started chanting, the crystals glowing with his humming voice as the array symbols rattled in their housing, and then with the toll of a small golden bell near the middle of the assembly the communication connected.

"Wuo Go City, this is Night Devil Fortress communications, receiving priority status update from Legion forces. Put them on, we can't make this long." A tired voice emanated from the golden bell as Third Sea symbols glowed a pale teal on its surface. The man waved her down to kneel on the mat and gestured for her to speak.

"Night Devil Fortress communications, this is Ferenike of the Golden Devils. I and my squad of nineteen juniors are currently present in the besieged city of Wuo Go and need a relief force." She told the voice.

Behind her the man left the room at speed, but she ignored him.

"Acknowledged, a relief force is not possible at this time." The voice bulled on through her attempted objection to that. "Standing orders from Tessarian Nan Fuxi are to notify her if any separated Ninth Century forces make contact. Please wait." The voice finished.

Fuxi was alive but...shit.

After a surprisingly short moment the array flashed and Fuxi's voice came through, harrowed and quiet. "Ferenike?"

Ferenike's head bowed, almost touching the array. "I'm alive Fuxi."

"Thank the Imperator." Her friend whispered fervently. "And most of your trainees?"

"We lost Deimos. The rest are exhausted but mostly unhurt." She told her.

There was a breath. "I'm sorry Ferenike... there isn't much good news over here either."

Another pained breath. "Centurion Dragoumis is dead, as are both Tessarian. Optio Kafatos is in temporary command of Ninth Century, which has been reduced to a half strength of forty three people, including your group. And..." There was a dead pause.

"Gallius is dead." Fuxi told her, voice quiet and hard edged with grief. "I killed the monster that did it."

Ferenike was silent, the hammer blow bowing her head. She sniffed, breathed deep, her eyes blinking wetly. She nodded even though Fuxi couldn't see her. "Thank you." She said wetly.

Fuxi's own voice sounded wobbly. "We'll try to get you and the Wuo Go garrison out as soon as we can, but with the Bees rampaging as they are rumor has it the Legions have barely anything to work with, spread out as we are trying to delay them."

"I understand Fuxi. Do your best to get me out and I'll do my best to stay alive long enough for you to do it." Ferenike said, confidence returning. If it was a patience game, she could do it.

"I will. I'll try and feed you what info I can so you can help the defenses prepare if a big wave comes your way." She said. "Goodbye for now Ferenike."

"Goodbye Fuxi." She said. The array dimmed and she stood. She had a lot of work to do.



@occipitallobe this omake is getting away from me and I have to split it into two parts! Oh well! For the sake of narrative pacing, needs must! Please mark this down as a Fate Supplemental for Turn 5, I'm going to ask for my actual turn bonus later, hopefully in the next omake. As a heads up I'm also working with @Mochinator on another joint project as part of this.
 
There wasn't even any excuse about it, the amount of times she heard some snot nosed Young Master ordering their servant to "Investigate their background!" And in literal days, coming up with every known feat of skill and arms that person had ever executed. She could only attribute the failure of the Clan to learn of a Formation capable of threatening a Nascent Soul with the nature of the world literally altering itself, solely for the purpose of hurting the Clan.
Or, you know, they'd never used it before where it's use would spread, if it wasn't entirely new. Really reaching there, Rina. :V
 
Ninth Prince 4 - Comprehensive Compendium 1
Ninth Prince
The Ninth Prince's Comprehensive Compendium of Serpents (Part one)


Species Name: Desert Storm Viper

Cultivation Stage: On average, the Fifth Heavenstage of Qi Gathering, though specimens have been recorded as high as the Ninth Heavenstage.

Abilities: Able to create a small sandstorm centered around itself via imbuing Qi into its scales and somehow launching said scales off its body, leaving it vulnerable. The Qi-infused scales are each able to attract a few handfuls of sand, and the Desert Storm Viper has no trouble controlling its scales up until said scales are about 500 feet away from itself.

Behavior: An ambush predator that hides itself within the sand controlled by its scales, waiting for some sort of rodent or other land-bound beast to walk over the area it is lurking in. When such a thing happens, the Desert Storm Viper springs its trap, closing a few dozen cubic feet over its prey, trapping or killing said prey and leaving it ready for the Desert Storm Viper to devour.

My Thoughts: This is a powerful beast for a Fifth Heavenstage Spirit Beast, able to create and control quite a bit of sand. For any aspiring young cultivator who wishes to contract with such a beast, I would recommend concealing it during combat, as it is incredibly vulnerable after its scales have flown off. If one wishes to increase the combat potential of their Desert Storm Viper, they have no problem whatsoever controlling glass, and cultivators with enough ingenuity have been recorded as having their contracted Desert Storm Vipers control thousands of small shards of glass, killing their enemies with the death of a thousand cuts. Care wise, remember to clean both sides of your Desert Storm Viper's scales regularly, as if their sandstorms leave debris on the interior of their scales, they will be incredibly uncomfortable and may even be in minor pain. Other than that, their diets, intellectual requirements, and exercise regimens are all identical to a normal viper's.



Species Name: Heavenly Jewel Cobra

Cultivation Stage: Anywhere between the Third Heavenstage and Ninth Heavenstage of Qi Gathering.

Abilities: The interior of the Heavenly Jewel Cobra's hood is covered with gemlike faceted scales that appear to generate some form of light. When the Cobra's hood is focused in just the right way, all of its faceted scales line up in a fashion similar to a completed array, and when Qi is poured into this 'array', it materializes a piercing beam of light, acting similar to a laser hot enough to turn sand into glass.

Behavior: Not precisely an ambush predator but not exactly a hunter either, the Heavenly Jewel Cobra acts more akin to a 'sniper' than anything else, killing prey from a few hundred feet away thanks to its laser, then slithering over to the dead animal and consuming it. Habitat wise, this snake is diurnal, and lairs inside sand dunes.

My Thoughts: This beast is a force multiplier for anyone in Qi Gathering, no matter the Heavenstage, if used properly, acting as a much-needed ranged tool in a cultivator's arsenal. If one wishes to contract with a Heavenly Jewel Cobra, or already has such a contract, then I would suggest training its muscle control. The Heavenly Jewel Cobra has total control over its hood, and this control can be used to either create multiple, smaller, 'arrays' that allow it to fire more than one laser at once, or to focus the power of its 'array' and create a laser that is nearly twice as powerful as the original. I would also recommend supplementing its diet with mortal gemstones, which appear to increase the potency of its faceted hood-scales. I theorize that feeding a Heavenly Jewel Cobra solely one specific type of gem may have some effect on its laser, but those are just theories for now.



Species Name: Bronze Ghost Rattlesnake

Cultivation Stage: On average, between the Seventh and Ninth Heavenstages, this breed may have the potential to reach Late Foundation Establishment.

Abilities: The rattle of the Bronze Ghost Rattlesnake is, as the name suggests, bronze, and in close combat, is used as a sort of mace. In addition, the rattle is able to produce a haunting tune that both attacks the psyche of the snake's enemies as well as draws hungry ghosts closer. These ghosts are completely harmless to the Bronze Ghost Rattlesnake's allies, but are deadly to its enemies, biting and clawing with attacks that damage the soul.

Behavior: An ambush predator, it buries itself head first inside the sand, covered entirely except for its rattle and uses its innate music to bewitch a prey animal, which it then commands to stand on top of its rattle, after which a hungry ghost materializes and devours the prey's soul, leaving the animal dead, but with its body intact.

My Thoughts: This is obviously an incredibly powerful companion for those lucky enough to contract with one, though not exactly in the way one might expect. The key thing about the Bronze Ghost Rattlesnake is that the hungry ghosts it calls with its rattle are not merely Qi constructs but genuine hungry ghosts, and this opens up quite a few possibilities for an aspiring necromancer. While a single hungry ghost does not have the spiritual strength necessary to animate a corpse, it is possible to stuff more than one hungry ghost inside a dead body. If you would prefer to focus more on the Demonic Tunist aspect of this snake, I would suggest teaching the Bronze Ghost Rattlesnake a few soul attacks, as it is quite intelligent, and having it pair said attacks with its melody. Diet wise, the Bronze Ghost Rattlesnake is fully capable of eating metals, and indeed the metals it consumes form its rattle. If you wish to focus on its necromantic powers, I would suggest supplements of wightsteel or ghostjade, or soulsilver and heartgold if you would like to enhance its Demonic Tunes. Theoretically, a powerful enough Bronze Ghost Rattlesnake, one at late Foundation Establishment, and its partner would be able to pass completely unscathed through the Ghostly Beast Curse Vein, but for obvious reasons, mainly not being able to find a Bronze Ghost Rattlesnake strong enough, as well as anyone brave or foolhardy enough to actually test my idea, this is only a theory.


Species Name: Blood Flame Python

Cultivation Stage: On average, around the Fourth Heavenstage of Qi Gathering, though specimens have been sighted of up to the Ninth Heavenstage.

Abilities: Almost painfully boring, but still effective, this python can control, create, and manipulate flame, while also being able to light a being's blood alight with a single bite. It uses its flames for locomotion, creating jets of fire that it uses to rocket around the desert. Despite the name, it does not practice a form of blood path, and is in fact one of the best known hard counters to Qi Gathering blood path practicioners, its venom burning out the blood qi they have taken from others, regressing them to whatever cultivation stage they began using blood path at.

Behavior: A hunter that moves incredibly fast, propelled by jets of fire, its main method of gathering food is simply spotting prey, rocketing after it, and then killing said prey with one blood burning bite. It then drags its prey to one of its various glass lairs buried under the sand dunes, and consumes said prey there.

My Thoughts: One of the premier companions for any cultivator who wishes to fight against the blood path, the Blood Flame Python, despite its simplistic power set, is an incredibly strong utility companion. Its ability to manipulate flames allows it to act as a supporter, pelting foes from afar with bolts of fire, or an enhancer, imbuing the attacks of body cultivators and weapon users with flame, allowing demonic tunists' songs to incite the flames of the heart much easier, and, of course, being an immense boon to any smith, alchemist, or physician. In addition, the venom a Blood Flame Python produces can be bottled and either used for one's own purposes or sold on the market for quite a hefty sum. A Blood Flame Python's diet will change depending on which path one wishes it to take. If you wish it to be a supporter, I would suggest incorporating ruby dust, sunmice, and hot coals into its food plan. A martial enhancer Blood Flame Python would benefit from consuming Blazing Ox tendon, Embersoot Boar tusks, and sunstones. A Demonic Tunist enhancer should have its food dipped in flame lily nectar, then covered in glimmering lava. And finally, a crafting enhancer should eat heatgold, thousand-burning coals, and just a touch of flame imp bone.

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A/N: Well, this was originally supposed to be a 15k omake, but stuff happened, and I had to redo all of it. As such, this is clocking in at about a tenth of its original size, after I managed to write up the four best entries I remembered from the original. Hopefully, more will come in the future.
 
Woah, brutal. Looks like playtime is over for young master Aris.
@occipitallobe
Two tiny questions; last turn Aris was two turns away from a breakthrough, did the poison set him back 20 years as well as halting his cultivation?
Does one acquire a Heavenly Treasure for healing only with a fate roll, or can this be asked for with an omake bonus? I imagine also relevant for @NotteBoy97

This was a mistake, and he should be 2 turns from breaking through.

@occipitallobe I was planning on staying in Qi condensation and breaking through to the tenth heaven stage, not foundation establishment

Ah, I'll update that. Normally I assume people are going the traditional cultivation route if they don't indicate otherwise on their page. This is all useful though - I'm going to be revamping the spreadsheet for things for me to record for next turn (and filling it out as I go for the remaining character this turn), so things that commonly get missed or are difficult for me to know are going to go on there in some shape of form.

Holy shit, did I roll a 100? All pure bear themed upside. I guess the emperor turtle would also like to see a bear in heaven.

No, there's only been one 100 in a secret realm. But just as downsides are magnified in secret realms, upsides are as well. A series of good rolls (60s, 70s, 80s) is enough to be really nice.

Hey nice! Honestly, I expected a crippling, so avoiding that feels pretty great. Also, Stage-Jumping Treasures are pretty useful in a pinch. While Amaranth probably won't use this in the Hundred-Year Trials against Foundation, it'll assure his life against any Qi Condensation, I think that's fair to say.

Hm, the question is, should I spring for another LST to be extra-safe, or should I push for healing the wounds? I'll have to think about it.

(Or, I could finally make that movement tech I was thinking about while Amaranth's cultivation is stalled out.)

BTW, @occipitallobe, Amaranth was 3 turns from breaking through last turn. Did the recent wounds slow down his cultivation this turn to a halt, or is it a mistake?

Yes, he made no progress this turn.

@occipitallobe just wanted to make sure I understood correctly on how long it will take Ferenike to heal, she won't be done healing until the start of turn 8?

Next turn is turn 5, so 20 years of woundedness there. After that is turn 6, and she will be wounded for 20 years there. She'll be once again healed at the start of Turn 7. I'll be adding a Healing Treasure to the omake rewards list once I'm done updating things here, and before I do the remainder of the Report.


@occipitallobe

After you've completed the good seed report could you give us a bit more detail about how the trials will be handled from a good seed perspective? I.e. does it get treated a bit like entering a hidden realm except only negative outcomes are magnified?

Do we get trial miniturns and treat it separately from turn 5 or do we just treat it as part of the turn?

That sort of thing.

I also ask because I'm not sure how the trial interacts with timed secret realms. For example, the Yuan clan secret realm is opening up next turn for the first time and while I'm tempted to send Wei Feng in there I'm assuming that there would be a significant chance that even if he came out of there with good fortune if he lost a lifesaving treasure then he'd be at serious risk of getting ganked by the trials immediately afterward. Is this correct?

It'll be a normal Fate roll for Good Seeds, but with some hefty negative modifiers applied.

In terms of Secret Realms, I think I'll play it fast and loose - and just make your character pass the Trial roll first to ensure they can enter. It makes no sense chronologically (I'll give plausible excuses in-character), but ensures that you can't die on a turn you possess a Lifesaving Treasure. Good Seeds shouldn't die because of weird rule interactions.

Not that I mind @occipitallobe because I had a lot of good fortune in the secret realm, but I don't think the scorpion's poison did anything? I was already at the 9th heavenstage 3 turns from breaking through. So the poison rocketed me to the same heavenstage. After a turn, I'm 1 turn from breaking through instead of 2. It might have bumped me up a turn from breaking through, but then the Flipper Bear Dao didn't do anything?

For some reason I had a note for you being in the 8th, just a mistake. Definitely going to be recording end cultivation statuses in the spreadsheet from now on when I do rolls. You should be able to break through at will, actually. - or go into the 10th Heavenstage

@Mr. Prokosch let me know which you'd prefer.

So erm, i was watching Tokyo Game Show and they just revealed a english version of this is coming out:

amazing-cultivation-simulator.fandom.com

Amazing Cultivation Simulator Wiki


The little bit i got from the trailer felt exactly like the quest so far with the building of the sect + the training of individual cultivators. I've also spotted what seemed to be bits of Formation Combat, so just a FYI in case anyone wants more of stuff along the lines of the quest.

Super keen for this ever since I watched a guy Let's Playing it and translating it while doing it.

Now, for threadmarks, and then more Good Seed update.
 
Next turn is turn 5, so 20 years of woundedness there. After that is turn 6, and she will be wounded for 20 years there. I'll be adding a Healing Treasure to the omake rewards list once I'm done updating things here, and before I do the remainder of the Report.
Coolio!

It'll be a normal Fate roll for Good Seeds, but with some hefty negative modifiers applied.
Nice. That'll be fun.
 
It'll be a normal Fate roll for Good Seeds, but with some hefty negative modifiers applied.

In terms of Secret Realms, I think I'll play it fast and loose - and just make your character pass the Trial roll first to ensure they can enter. It makes no sense chronologically (I'll give plausible excuses in-character), but ensures that you can't die on a turn you possess a Lifesaving Treasure. Good Seeds shouldn't die because of weird rule interactions.
Fun stuff!

Glad I decided to start stocking up on stuff now that I found my rhythm again!
 
@occipitallobe

Peta and Wajo will proceed to the 12th
heavenstage but not the 13th. She's become ambitious and wants to pass nascent soul one day, but she is not certain enough in her dao to form a single perfect dao pillar.

I'd like to visit the Yuan clan secret realm if it doesn't conflict with the trials and they aren't wounded/crippled in them.
 
So, uh.

I didn't realise this before somehow, but some kind person bought me an account upgrade a few weeks ago. Thank you!

I looked into it, and I'm a little confused by what a collaborator can actually do. I guess my question to those in the know is:

'Is it possible to offload the annoying work of threadmark reorganisation in the Sidestory segment to one or more other people who are willing to be paid in Fate bonuses for doing the part of the thread I find most annoying?'
 
So, uh.

I didn't realise this before somehow, but some kind person bought me an account upgrade a few weeks ago. Thank you!

I looked into it, and I'm a little confused by what a collaborator can actually do. I guess my question to those in the know is:

'Is it possible to offload the annoying work of threadmark reorganisation in the Sidestory segment to one or more other people who are willing to be paid in Fate bonuses for doing the part of the thread I find most annoying?'
I mean
If it is, I'd be willing to do it
god knows I don't have much going on anyways
 
It'll be a normal Fate roll for Good Seeds, but with some hefty negative modifiers applied.
Hmm, I was personally wonder if it would be something like

Turn 5
Trials
Turn 6

But is seems that to not be the case. I did wonder if it would have been like a Secret Realm as well. (Since if you do well you might well get a lot of benefits from the clan.)

Can a lifesaving treasure be used to avoid being crippled?

Um, you missed my omake here. Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest] Original - Fantasy
 
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So, uh.

I didn't realise this before somehow, but some kind person bought me an account upgrade a few weeks ago. Thank you!

I looked into it, and I'm a little confused by what a collaborator can actually do. I guess my question to those in the know is:

'Is it possible to offload the annoying work of threadmark reorganisation in the Sidestory segment to one or more other people who are willing to be paid in Fate bonuses for doing the part of the thread I find most annoying?'
If it turns out that collaborators can do that, I'm willing to help out. I spend plenty of time on the forums either way, so I might as well do something productive.
 
So, uh.

I didn't realise this before somehow, but some kind person bought me an account upgrade a few weeks ago. Thank you!

I looked into it, and I'm a little confused by what a collaborator can actually do. I guess my question to those in the know is:

'Is it possible to offload the annoying work of threadmark reorganisation in the Sidestory segment to one or more other people who are willing to be paid in Fate bonuses for doing the part of the thread I find most annoying?'
As I understand it a thread collaborator has all the same powers you do as the original poster. They can add and remove and edit threadmarks and I think you can add about 4 collaborators with your current account level.

I would also be happy to spend some time threadmarking other peoples Omakes and stuff. (Although I don't have too much spare time at the moment)
 
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Ferenike and Nan Fuxi travelled with the main column, ranks upon ranks of clanking armor and stamping hooves of their Spirit Horses kicking up a small sandstorm of dust, magnified by their Silvery Sandfish Arrays as a defense against attacks from the air ready to spring up and make flying incredibly difficult as a much smaller form of the storms found in the Wind Towers. Around them marched the folded wings of the auxillia. And following after the column came their wagon train, vehicles ten times the height of a man and pulled by enormous bronze oxen, laden with supplies and mobile fortresses in their own right. There Gallius worked with the other members of the quartermasters to feed and house the Legion as it marched, and to ensure that the little things that made Legion life possible got to the people who needed it. Like the very good tobacco she had taken to smoking. Its fiery essence went well with her Spirit Stone dust.

They marched for months, messages passing back and forth between the Legatus of the Legions in flurries of messengers. Passing through the Hong Xuan Clan on roads of a smaller and narrower derivative of the Golden Devil design, adapted for a reduced economic scale, they were received with cheers and celebratory parades as they marched through their cities. Meetings between the Legate and the Hong Xuan representatives took place over only three days for resupply negotiations, haste speeding the process considerably.
My mind is conjuring up that scene in the Disney Mulan animated movie where the troops marched off in high spirits before they hit the burned village. :cry:
A terrible buzz, suffusing the Qi in the air. When she looked out her tent door she almost felt like she could see the dark air rippling, the stars flickering in the south. But it passed. The chill pervading her limbs since they had set out intensified, as she could almost feel ten thousand feet skitter over her grave.
Ominous, that premonition of danger adds to the sense of dread that is being build up even without knowing the ending.
The Protostrator's Will.

Then she heard it, the voice like spears ringing against spears.

Legate Wu of the Ninth Legion, proceed down the river past West Wind Tower to the Night Devil Fortress. I would match the Abyssal Devil Bees in battle upon the field soon near the foothills and have need of your forces.

Then another voice answered, an ever ringing chorus of bubbling waters. Acknowledged Protostrator, I shall take my leave to great the Grand Hua Emperor properly and then make all haste to your position.

Acknowledged Legate, proceed.
Oh this is cool! Seeing the Clan moving out on a Grand Scale is pretty unique, especially from a ground level POV since most Xianxia war scenes are more Spec Ops style then the grunt at the front.
Far above it in the void of her mind she could feel the Heavenly Tribulation waiting to descend upon her if she tried to form her Qi into a pillar inscribed with the idea of Patience. But she had no interest in that. Instead her minds eye turned towards the process she had begun as they travelled, her little legionnaires of glass each taking a small speck of Qi from her Dantian and carrying it to every piece of her body and using it like a torch to burn out the impurities that still lingered in her body. Each little flame was like being stabbed as it burned them away, sharp, quick and then a lingering pounding pain that only faded slowl
I love the imagery here on what further purifying the Qi looks like to Ferenike. It's a very unique take compared to the usual excreting black stuff from the pores in most Xianxia.
In the words of one of the many manuals of the Taktika Bureau.

Make of your hands spears, and give those spear-hands into the hands of the Clan.

She had made her trainees read that particular manual a lot, enough that she some times caught them joking around while reciting pieces of it from heart completely accurately to extremely funny music. Mission accomplished in her view.
Oh i like this! It's exactly the kind of wise saying you will find in the genre;
Eventually she met up with Fuxi and Gallius in her room. They were sitting around her small table, the Ice Peach wine she had gotten years ago freezing a small ring on the center of the table as their cups sat around it.

They had drank very little of it, aware of the high alert status, and simply marveled in the cool and intense sweetness beyond most things she had tasted in the Desert. In her tipsy haze she sat smiling as Fuxi and Gallius sat in touching range.

There was only silence between. All of their promises had already been made. They would come back together again, or go out with a scream against the Heavens and their witless minions.
Oh ouch. Knowing the end of this Omake only adds to the melancholic feels when i read this portion.
"BRACE! HOPLITE FORMATION!" The clear bell voice of Tessarian Augustan called.

She repeated his command to her trainees and together their Qi rose with the great fountains blooming all around the great army.

Sound ceased as the air seemed to flee from the surge of Qi rising into the air in mighty dragon-coils. Above them a figure in bright white robes glowed with an all consuming golden light as the shadow formed, legs, then torso and arms, then crested helm visible in its incredible definition around them. In her left hand the Hoplite carried a great aspis shield one hundred li wide and in its right she grasped a great hoplon spear whose shining blade was a graceful leaf shape thirty li from tip to base. The enormous Will of the Protostrator guided their Qi like a million hands as she threw the Hoplite into action.
Ultraman/Megazord Scene is awesome.
. Slowly the Legions began to march forward, the call of the Legion drumbeat pulling them forward as their banners waved like grass around the Hoplite's feet. All around them the smell of blood and burning guts and bones filled their noses and blood rained to the ground as darkness descended, the sun a distant red spot as its light filtered through tens of thousands of blood filled bodies. Ferenike could not hear herself screaming orders, only feel her mouth moving. All she could hear was the overwhelming beat of the drums, pounding in her ears and setting her heart to racing.

In the great cloud of darkness, deeper than any sandstorm, the man of bronze and shadow fought like a bonfire against the descent of night. Golden light fought against red and black, and the screaming faces of her enemies wheeled around, seemingly wrapped in red and black cloaks as they struck again and again with sharpened steel fangs.

Wails arose all around the battlefield as Ferenike saw their lines mix, the main body of the Abyssal Devil Bees descending onto them now and using its mass to force through some of their number through the defenses of the Hoplite. Like a man being enveloped by a swarm completely they swallowed the formation and stung again and again and again.

She saw Clan members fall as they were overwhelmed by tens of Devil Bees at once, their bodies coming apart at the seams as multiple bees grabbed them in their fangs and sucked out their fluids before ripping the screaming husks to pieces. Then their attackers would be killed by their victim's fellows and pushed away, only for more to descend.
I like this grunt on the front perspective, on how it shows the little bit Ferenike can see and what she can infer via her other senses.
A suffocating weight of Qi crushed her to her knees onto the dunes, her Trainees letting out strangled cries as they too fell. She could spare barely any thought for them though as her mind was seized with panic as pitch blackness descended and a terrifying glint in that shadow.

With a sucking shriek that ripped sound away in its passing it struck the Hoplite, passing through its shield with ease as the disk shattered into ten thousand shards, and struck the glowing figure in its middle. A great flash of red erupted.

The dragon-coils of the Hoplite ruptured like a river ripping free of its banks as the controlling mind, the Protostrator's Will, flickered.
I could feel the impact of this. The imagery that springs to mind is definitely the scenes where the Hero Mech falls to their knees from a blow.
Retreat. All forces retreat to the Night Devil Fortress, Legatus Kekao shall have command...

The Protostrator's words continued, listing a chain of command without her in it, and as Ferenike tried to get her stunned mind to process what was being said she felt a mighty force grabbing her by the shoulders and driving her to step back to retreat. In her soul she cried out, but she felt training take over as she guided her panicking trainees to retreat, bodily grabbing some of them and hurling them backwards away from the battlefield.

What followed was a controlled dash away from the battlefield as the grievously wounded Hoplite held back the tide. They broke the leading edge of the storm of bees and saw the blood red rays of the setting sun.

The war drums set a fast marching beat and the Legions obeyed. For hours they marched under the banner of the flickering Will of the Protostrator as she helped the Legions sustain emergency Twin-Eagle formations. But they weakened over the next two hours, more and more of their number dying as the Bees found more and more gaps and dug their fangs into their soft underbelly. Now Clan were dying for two or three enemies apiece, and not all of those enemies were killed after the first Clan death and sometimes went on to savage more and more of their members before finally being stopped.

Through it all was that fucking drone.

It seemed to gleefully rise as she felt her commander's life dim. And then go out.
This moment is my favorite of the omake. The Calm matter of fact way that the Protostrator accepted her death and her decision to devote herself to fulfilling her duty contrasting nicely with Ferenike's stunned state and the emotional bungee all in that short scene.
Then in an opening a small flight group descended on her command. Ferenike roared as a Bee with its fucking human fanged face dived for Deimos, the black haired girl flagging as her qi guttered out and screaming as she dived for cover only to be snatched up and consumed in an eyeblink of splattering gore. Dead.
Poor Girl. Definitely a case of just bad luck. The xianxia version of being hit by a unexpected bullet.
Then the pain hit her and she grit her teeth to keep from screaming as her trainees Pleminon and Agha helped her stay upright. As Agrippa, the sweet and plump medic helped her treat and wrap her arm in linen she found she could move it, barely, her incredible constitution and will pushing through the pain that stole her breath away and caused her stomach to roil. But it bled slowly and that blood was black, poison slowing her healing.

Cries of distress amongst her charges brought her head up, dizziness causing her to stumble for a moment. She blinked as she realized they had been separated from most of the Legion, and blessedly most of their enemies, as in the confusion of the retreat they had wandered into a defile and a deep canyon between the dunes. Her trainees were listlessly crying and looking about in terror, as Agha and Dana, a short girl with blonde-white hair in two braids going down her back, held each other and sobbed. ...Deimos had been their friend. Fuck. Gods dammit she hated what she had to do.
I think learning their names here just adds to the upcoming tragedy. The knowledge that they are likely to be next and the age their behaviour conjures up really adds to the feels.
"Go!" She roared and they raced out of the canyon, surging down the dunes as they kicked up sand in their wake.

That run felt like some of the longest moments of her life even as she felt them happen in less than half an hour.

Just running, scrambling with frantic speed towards the bronze gates of the city in the distance.

Oven-like air sawing in and out of their throats, so hot it scraped them bloody raw. That horrible drone at their backs as the Devil Bees noticed them.

She remembered shouting for the Twin-Eagle formation and it shuddering into unstable existence as their fatigued Qi struggled to sustain it, and she remembered the fantastic speed their pace took as it carried them to the foot of the gates.

She remembered smiling and thanking the main gate guard's ancestors as she heard a loud and clear voice scream out "Open the gate for the Golden Lords!" At their approach.
The desperation they must be feeling can be felt. And the relief when the gates open? That must have been the greatest gift they ever gotten. All in all, a excellent portrayal of a routed force.
Another pained breath. "Centurion Dragoumis is dead, as are both Tessarian. Optio Kafatos is in temporary command of Ninth Century, which has been reduced to a half strength of forty three people, including your group. And..." There was a dead pause.

"Gallius is dead." Fuxi told her, voice quiet and hard edged with grief. "I killed the monster that did it."

Ferenike was silent, the hammer blow bowing her head. She sniffed, breathed deep, her eyes blinking wetly. She nodded even though Fuxi couldn't see her. "Thank you." She said wetly.
Ah ouch, the true fallout of the battle being made known to Ferenike. The pressure she would have felt at being knowing that help might not come and that the people she was friends with are dead.
 
easiest way to find out is to test

@Kaboomatic

@ReaderOfFate

I've added you as collaborators

Let me know what you're able to do.
Cool. This is definitely a new experience for me, that's for sure. So, I see a "add threadmark" button next to the report button on each post, which means that collaborators can help out with threadmarking omakes.

I also see a "Sort" button in the pop-up for showing all the threadmarks, so I think I could do that as well? Means that dealing with the work for organizing the sidestories in their proper sections should be possible to offload.

EDIT: Well, time for me to get started.
 
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Great! I can have up to four collaborators, so if anyone else wants in, let me know. If you clean up the Sidestory index at any point, just message me or ping me so I know who did and can apply a Fate bonus not unlike the secret one Zephias gets for his Good Seed Index

Good Seeds are sorted alphabetically, and omake are placed below them in numerical order. You need to drag them a little to the right so they go under it in a sort of folder as opposed to just below it in the index.
 
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It'll be a normal Fate roll for Good Seeds, but with some hefty negative modifiers applied.

In terms of Secret Realms, I think I'll play it fast and loose - and just make your character pass the Trial roll first to ensure they can enter. It makes no sense chronologically (I'll give plausible excuses in-character), but ensures that you can't die on a turn you possess a Lifesaving Treasure. Good Seeds shouldn't die because of weird rule interactions.
Thanks for the clarification on how it works! I think i will get Xiao Yi to skip the Yuan secret realm in this case since the intent was to use any loot from it for the Trials. In this case, i rather just survive the Trials :oops:

Considering that Xiao Yi's lifespan is now 500, i'll have other chances!
Super keen for this ever since I watched a guy Let's Playing it and translating it while doing it.
It was totally new to me till that TGS trailer showed up. I might get it if i can ever find the time to play it lol
I'd like to visit the Yuan clan secret realm if it doesn't conflict with the trials and they aren't wounded/crippled in them.
Good Luck and all the best, i wish them many many Bearcellent Treasures!

@occipitallobe for the Omake Google sheet, are you going to add another tab for Turn 5 stuff ? Or should we wait till your done with Turn 4 tab before putting up Turn 5 stuff in the same tab ?
 
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