Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Of course we do have an unreliable narrator here, I would love to read a similar report from the Demon Altar side. I imagine the logistical challenges they are facing keeping so many Blood Path aimed in one direction are significant.
Demon Altar Elder- "Ya'll see them there juicy mortal varmint's?"
Demon Altar Scrub's- "Ye"
Demon Altar Elder- "Go get em"
Demon Altar Scrub's- Whooping and hollering scream's of delight intensifies
Demon Altar Elder- Sniff, they grow up so fast
 
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I would like to change my turn 6 omake reward to lifesaving treasure. It just makes too much sense that Berserk Slayer's amulet is also a lifesaving treasure. I can't edit the omake post.
 
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Yeah, evidently, the real winning strategy against Blood Path is the one the Strength Purity Sect and the Golden Devils employ. "Secure your mortal population behind hardpoints too tough to siege down easily, and then defeat them in detail when they fan out to start blood hunting." SPS though doesn't have the experience to reliably fortify everything like we do, so once their front lines were broken they started getting into uncomfortable territory, and their ability to rely on their individual superiority in experts became less valuable in the face of their foundations getting assailed.

Hence why they were willing to do the fig leaf to get Golden Devil siege engineers working to shore up their territories.

It's also why we tend to inflict horrifying casualties on our foes. Our power projection is garbage but when we go up against Blood Path they often find themselves starved because every single significant concentration of mortals tends to be behind two or three layers of defenses with a Legion floating around to hammer you in the back at some point. We attrit them down by denying them their cultivation resources and then crush them in force concentration.

The problem is this strategy is expensive. And requires a great deal of institutional experience to handle. SPS can't really assemble the experience to do the 'Fortify everything' on short notice, and it's expensive enough that even with all of their tribute, they can't afford to keep it going.
 
Yeah, evidently, the real winning strategy against Blood Path is the one the Strength Purity Sect and the Golden Devils employ. "Secure your mortal population behind hardpoints too tough to siege down easily, and then defeat them in detail when they fan out to start blood hunting." SPS though doesn't have the experience to reliably fortify everything like we do, so once their front lines were broken they started getting into uncomfortable territory, and their ability to rely on their individual superiority in experts became less valuable in the face of their foundations getting assailed.

Hence why they were willing to do the fig leaf to get Golden Devil siege engineers working to shore up their territories.

It's also why we tend to inflict horrifying casualties on our foes. Our power projection is garbage but when we go up against Blood Path they often find themselves starved because every single significant concentration of mortals tends to be behind two or three layers of defenses with a Legion floating around to hammer you in the back at some point. We attrit them down by denying them their cultivation resources and then crush them in force concentration.

The problem is this strategy is expensive. And requires a great deal of institutional experience to handle. SPS can't really assemble the experience to do the 'Fortify everything' on short notice, and it's expensive enough that even with all of their tribute, they can't afford to keep it going.
The other issue is the Demonic altar. For this area, it's honestly more OP than quite a few xianxia protagonist super cheats, just on an organisational scale. It means that literally any casualties under nascent soul can be replaced 1:1 before getting into other blood path shenanigans.

It's literally so OP that the only logical thing standing in the way of them winning everything forever is chronic backstabbing disorder so bad that it makes memetic Loki look like the picture of a trustworthy ally to the point it prevents the Demonic altar from co-operating almost entirely. Even with their stupid inability to actually co-ordinate they're still basically undefeatable.

If the Demonic altar sect was capable of working together at all then the could just pull up a doom stack, dump it on a hard point then grab all the enemy and allied corpses and move on until it won everything forever.
 
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Yeah, that's the thing about Blood Path.

Once you're locked onto it, other Blood Path practitioners stop being allies in philosophy and turn into direct competitors as well as more resources.

Which means every Blood Path expert around is both someone taking your rightful cultivation resources and also a big resource themselves. Hence the enormous degree of fratricide.
 
Paulus 3 - Reckoning
Paulus 3 : Reckoning

He'd set me up completely.

I looked out at the gaggle of first heavenstage cultivators that I'd be working with for the foreseeable future with resignation. The vast majority of them were already breathing heavily or sprawled out on the ground after the evaluation run, with only a dozen or so looking as fresh as I felt. This wasn't even half of what Hong Li (no, its Demios, gotta remember) demanded of me back in training.

Instead of pride I felt a black emotion smouldering in my gut, making its way up my spine and tickling at the edges of my thoughts. Examiner Demios smirked from my right and awaited my inevitable reaction.

"Why the hell did you make me do all that work if this is what I'm up against?" I eventually grumbled out.

He mosied over and clapped me on the shoulder like we were old buddies or something.

"You said you were going for Officer, right? Well now you're definitely a shoe in for squad captain. Make good use of it."

He chuckled softly as he moved off, hands folded behind him.

"Oh and one more thing." he paused, turning back to face me, "Legionnaires train, eat, and sleep together during the initial training period. After we're done here go get your kit from those friends of yours and say your goodbyes. For the next few weeks the only friends you'll have are your spear, shield, and formation manual."

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I slammed my fist on the solid stone desk.

"Gimmie a flying carpet." I demanded

Filia put her hand on my chest and I stepped back with a sigh as she smiled at the confused craftsman.

"A single-use defensive charm please. First Grade if you can make it in a month." She raised the jade slip marking her as an official servant representing a Legionnaire and the man smiled broadly as they began haggling out the use of his services.

Servant was the only way I could think of to get them into the Golden Devils with me. For now they'd only be allowed among the camp followers but that was way better than the closest mortal city a few days travel away. I had to pay them from my own pocket a certain minimum amount mandated by the Legion rules, but since the money was going to our family anyway I figured it wasn't a problem.

That it let them get access to cultivation materials by requisitioning them in my name was a plus too. Nothing fancy, but way better than could be found out on the streets. Hell way better than the stuff I'd gotten years ago, come to that. I'd just have to work harder to make up the difference and save up points to get them in my Cohort.

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Demios was right. I was made a Squad Captain for the training period, one of several in this Century. The only problem was that as a no-status, no-backing, fresh faced recruit, I was definitely not getting the best of the batch. The Legion picked them well enough that I wouldn't have trouble with rebellion or anything, but that didn't automatically make us friends either.

Each Legion had a slightly different setup. This one broke us up into ten cohorts, which were made of ten centuries, which were made of fifteen squads of eight men each. Each squad was led by a captain (me!) that mostly existed to make sure each squad knew what the centurion wanted and each could form a solid Hoplite Formation.

While everyone in my squad was fresh to the Legions, not everyone was fresh to the Golden Devil Clan. Two of my members were men that were older than me who just so happened to awaken their blood and start cultivating late and rushed over to do their duty. One of them was a bronze skinned man named Marcus who was at the Second Heavenstage of Qi Condensation. He probably would have made squad commander over me if he wasn't already pushing fifty and had any combat experience at all. That being said he had access to way more general clan knowledge than I did and I intended to make use of it.

"Okay, run it by me again. How does this Hoplite Formation work?" I asked

"The Hoplite Formation is the greatest weapon and the firmest foundation of the Legions, sir." he exhorted with a smile on his face, bald head gleaming in the torchlight "When using the power of the Hoplite Formation, the Legionnaires are able to act with one heart and one will to manifest the shadow of one of our ancient defenders and strike down opponents, even those of higher stages!"

"Well yes, that sounds good but how does it work?"

Marcus looked at me as if I'd asked him how to get drunken elephants to stop tapdancing in across my spine. I cut off his blubbering with a swipe of my hand and rubbed the bridge of my nose.

"Okay, no, better yet can any of you actually use this thing?"

A chorus of 'no's and 'not really's.

I sighed. Well at least everyone here was still in training. Tomorrow morning we'd have the first squad contests and they'd probably teach us the basics after they saw how we worked together. I shouldn't have to worry about formation stuff till then.

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"HOPLITE FORMATION!"

Son of a-

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Well, one out of two ain't bad. The newly appointed 10th squadron just so happened to be filled with snooty clan kids that had been taught the basics as soon as they could walk. Our loss in the squad contests was nothing to be ashamed of but it still rankled. As soon as all the squads had shown their stuff in a few basic situations (each of which my 3rd squad lost) we'd been grouped together and ushered into a nearby lecture hall to be informed on the basics of Combat Formations. Even the ones that already knew about it had to show up for the training period.

Our teacher, Instructor Nabu, was a veteran Legionnaire with the most obvious manifestation of the Blood of Bronze I'd ever seen. His hair bore a metallic sheen and when he opened his mouth I saw that his teeth were just bronze sheets sharpened to a point. They audibly rung every time he spoke, creating a strange resonant backdrop to his otherwise standard lecture. There was no way those were real.

"Discipline, Blood, and Formations. These are the fundamental elements at the core of the Legion's strength. Not all of you have been blessed with the Blood, and those of you who have been may not even know until your cultivation improves, but all of you will be required to embody Discipline and have at least working knowledge of our three major Combat Formations."

He gestured lightly, his hand raising up and closing around an invisible spear. The air around him rippled and the shadows at his feet thickened and rose up to engulf him and even tower over him. In seconds a humanoid being made of shadow had manifested around the Instructor, bearing a spear of polished bronze in its right hand and a shield of the same in its left.

"The Hoplite formation is the greatest and most used Combat Formation available to the clan. As you can see it can be performed even by one person, but its efficacy is minimal with only one user. This formation truly shines when used by multiple cultivators at once to direct their strength to a single point or their resolve to a sturdy bulwark."

He punctuated his statements with the moves of the Standard Legion Spear Forms I'd been taught by Demios, and the construct enveloping his form imitated his moves as he made them. The speartip gleamed in the firelight and the wind from the shield's movements rustled my hair even though I was dozens of meters away. That thing was no joke.

Instructor Nabu completed the preliminary forms smoothly and easily, clearly slowing himself down so we could study the Hoplite Formation in action. When he was done he gestured again and the construct rippled before fading away, the shield and spear falling to the earth with an audible clang before they too dissipated.

"The shield and spear are the only tangible elements of the formation, any attacks you do not block with the shield will strike you, and strikes you make without the spear will be as air. Your journey to mastery will require you to become familiar with these key points, I will leave you to ponder the rest on your own."

He flung his sleeves widely and jade slips, no doubt bearing instructions on how the technique was performed, appeared in each of our laps. He allowed us a moment to store them away before continuing in a much deeper voice, the resonance from his teeth giving it a harsh edge I was sure would make a happy child cry...or a crying child shut up.

"Be warned, this technique can only be performed by the resolute. We have no fear of giving out this information as the average cultivator would only be wasting their time attempting it. If you cannot trust the members of the formation and know with absolute certainty you will all choose the same, your efforts will be in vain. After you complete your training, this certainty will be bone deep. I guarantee it."

He smiled then, teeth gleaming in the firelight.

" Dismissed."

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"I can't believe Singing Fang Nabu is our Formations teacher. I grew up hearing stories of him as a boy!" Marcus gushed as our squad arrived at our assigned tent. The middle aged man had done some variation of this three times already on the walk back and he looked ready to launch right back into praising Instructor Nabu's prowess.

"Yea, I get it, he's super great. Eats iron and spits out swords or whatever. How about we practice this Formation thing so we're ready for the squad challenge tomorrow?"

Marcus looked about to say something but as the rest of the squad sat down cross legged by their cots he muttered a simple "Yes Captain" and retrieved the jade slip containing the information on the Hoplite Formation. I joined them a few seconds later, immersing myself in the information contained on the slip.

The Hoplite Formation was actually pretty simple, way more so than a lot of the mid-heavenstage level combat arts I'd managed to get a glimpse of before, if not get to work. I didn't really understand the high level stuff, but just manifesting the construct wasn't hard at all. In a few hours every one of us had some measure of success in a solo manifestation.

"Alright Marcus, lets try a two-man formation."

The older man nodded and joined me as I walked to the center of the tent and together we circulated the energy inside us and pushed it out the way the formation diagram dictated. Shadows pooled beneath our feet and ran together, becoming ever so slightly darker as they bubbled up around us both and a larger construct standing almost four meters tall came into being. The shield was big enough to cover one of us completely, and the spear...well its reach would be ruinous for any kind of melee combat.

"Lets try moving, first spear forms." I suggested and Marcus nodded, brow furrowed in concentration. We stepped forward and thrusted in the way of the First Advance and the formation broke around us in a flash of light, dissipating into nothingness before the motion even completed.

Feedback raced up my spine from my dantian, flowing down my major channels until even the tips of my fingers grew numb. I couldn't help but close my eyes and grit my teeth as I forced my qi back into some semblance of order. When it finally dissipated I found myself on my hands and knees unsure of when I got there. Marcus was only bent at the waist, his slightly higher cultivation saving him from the brunt of the backlash.

"What happened?" I queried

He shook his head in clear confusion, unable to give me an answer. This was going to be more complicated than I thought.

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We still hadn't figured out multiple man formations by the time the next day rolled around so we ended up going into the squad contests no more powerful than the day before. Though this time at least we had knowledge about how the basics worked. The squad across from us stood in an inverted V formation and with a shout from their Captain the group manifested a twelve meter tall Hoplite over the course of thirty seconds, its spear and shield gleaming in the light. There was no way we could take this head on, a lesson I'd learned painfully the day before.

"Split up in pairs and surround the thing. These guys may be able to manifest, maybe even fight with it since it's their opening move, but I bet that they can keep up with us while doing it. Marcus, you're with me. We'll circle around to the far side, everyone else pair up as you wish. Now move!"

The men shouted affirmation and broke off in pairs after a bit of fumbling, but I was already running ahead with Marcus right by my side. Our opponents clearly didn't expect it and they reacted a few seconds late to the start of the maneuver. Still, nowhere near long enough.

Their captain shouted again and a second later they thrust out at one of our pairs, the ruinous length of that spear increasing their reach a hundredfold. The spear struck true, blasting the closest group backwards and out of the sparring grounds. The construct hung there in that position for a second before the captain shouted again and they returned to a more neutral stance.

We'd lost a quarter of the squad getting into place but we were already leagues better than yesterday so I raised my own (mundane) spear and charged at the enemy formation. If we could force them to break formation the feedback would hopefully be enough to get us time for the win. We only needed one or two of us to get through to seal the deal.

The enemy thrust out at another pair, moving too quickly for them to react to the summoned bronze. Seconds later the summoned shield smashed into the ground, putting a wall of metal between the third pair and the formation. Joy bubbled in my heart. With both arms out of position there was no way for them to turn to us in time. Marcus and I charged forward with grim determination, stepping past the giant warrior's guard.

The spear whistled through the air before it struck the ground ahead of us, blasting us back in a wave of sand. The shaft was partially through the warrior's own shadowy torso, the construct none the worse for wear as it pulled back for another strike.

"The shield and spear are the only tangible elements of the formation" Nabu had said. Of course it didn't have to move like a human. Stupid. The construct thrust its spear into the pair trying to get around the shield, pushing its hand through its own head to accomplish the feat and then without ceremony pushed the shield through the sand towards Marcus and I, burying us in grit as easily as a child playing in the dunes. It would cost us precious seconds to dig ourselves out, seconds we did not have.

Note to self: Giant bronze shields hurt when they hit you.

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Not all of the squads managed to make use of the Hoplite Formation and for those guys we could more or less eke out a win half the time. But against the 10th squad or any other squad that managed to get a basic multi man manifestation down? Losing was almost a certainty.

The formation was ludicrously versatile and at this level of cultivation there was barely anything we could pull out to overcome its sensible use. Investing a bit in ranged attacks to keep the shield locked down was a great tactic against the less experienced, but the clan brats just started using variations with less cultivators to chase us down and harry us. Instead of one massive shield and spear we ended up having to deal with two or three smaller ones hemming us in before brutally knocking us out.

It was kind of pissing me off to be honest.

I vented all of this at Filia one night when she came to deliver my newly made shield talisman, just a little thing that would hopefully help turn a bad situation into a slightly less bad situation. She listened to me calmly as I ranted and even began braiding her hair partway through. A part of me noticed that she looked different now than before we left the city. The years off the street had been good for her, good for all of us really. The exasperated smile she gave me was still the same though.

"How long have we known each other, Paulus?" she interrupted

I paused, mulling the time over in my head. "About..seven years now or close to it? The last few years have kinda passed by in a blur."

She nodded. "Do you remember what we were like when we just started working together?"

"Yea, you hated my guts; Acted like I was going to sell you off to the cannibals myself."

"No. I never thought that. But I did think you were trying to make a move on me." She said dryly

I kind of was, but I let that thought stay in the back of my head. "What's your point?"

"Do you remember when we broke into Fatty Tang's office?"

The name brought back memories, good and bad. The man had decided he wasn't going to pay any of us after a hard day of washing dishes, and I had decided we were going to get paid.

"Yea. You slipped on the windowsill and tripped the alarm formation." I reminisced

"I seem to recall that it was your rough handling of the safe that alerted him." she shot back "In any case, we ended up getting beaten up with nothing to show for it. If Spiros hadn't smuggled out some supplies in the chaos we'd have gone hungry too."

"Yea...I thought you were going to leave after that one."

"But I didn't and you never let it happen again." she smiled at me "It takes time to get good at something, Paulus. It took you years to convince Demios you were ready for the Legions, even if he was messing with you.Don't beat yourself up just because you aren't instantly a master."

She placed the shield charm on the small table beside my cot and made her way back out towards the servants area while I thought about what she said. She was right, it had taken us the better part of a year to start operating smoothly enough to stay out of trouble, and years more than that to really start getting ahead. But I didn't have years to mess around with this, the training period would be over in a few weeks and if I didn't make a good showing I could be stuck here for who knows how long?

There was some part of that talk that I could work on immediately though. The gang and I had gotten better as a team in part because I got to know them and understand where they worked best. I didn't even remember all of my current squad's names.

I sighed, knowing what had to come next. I was going to have to do team building exercises.

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Marcus, Cassius, Phillip, Atria, Galio, Julia, Titus, and me Paulus. That was my squad. We were all roughly the same in cultivation save Marcus, but we were all pretty different otherwise. Each of us had learned the Legion Weapon Forms differently and leaned towards different weapons.
Marcus and Atria used the spear, Cassius the bow, Galio and Julia preferred swords, and Titus wanted to be a doctor and really just put the bare minimum into weapons to get in.

While spear users would probably find the formation more intuitive, there was nothing in the instructions that said only people that could use the spear could use the formation. What was more important was timing and confidence. With that in mind I finally landed on a solution I thought would get us on the same page.

Dancing.

My squadmates watched in disbelief as I boogied down to the music I had my 'servants' playing for the training (Spiros played a mean drum). It seems the order to dance was one step too far past even the 'Legion discipline' threshold.

"Captain is this really...necessary?" Julia asked with some hesitation. She was a serious looking woman ten years my senior with her brown hair pulled back in a ponytail. She, like all of us, was dressed in the plain brown training robes given to us on the first day.

"I must admit, Captain, that this order seems illogical." Titus chimed in right after her. He was a round faced man with low cut hair, and he probably would have looked quite jolly if he smiled. Ever. "What possible benefit could this dance provide us that would be worth the embarrassment?"

I kept moving as they spoke, doing my best to keep in time with the beat.
"It takes years and years to really learn how to fight together with another person" I spoke, stepping forward and clapping twice as the dance demanded. I slid to the side with all the seriousness demanded of my station and took two steps back before clapping again.

"Everybody has different ticks, traits, and timing. Over time you can pick up on the other guy's thoughts and try and fit together but one of the easy ways to get a base competence is by matching timing, and dancing is all about timing.

Clap clap, spin.

Titus nodded as if what I was saying made perfect sense and joined me on the training grounds, slipping into the simple dance I'd been repeating this whole time after a few moments to get adjusted. The rest didn't look so convinced.

"Look, just try it for a day and If we can't get at least a two man formation going by tonight I won't ask you to do it again."

"Fine then." Julia agreed.

With the three of us getting into it the rest gave in and joined us. None of us really knew how to fight together, but I was right to think that following a simple beat was simplicity itself for even the weakest cultivator.

Today, the Scorpion Slide. Tomorrow the world.

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We would be facing the fools from the 3rd Squadron again. Unfortunate, as it would barely serve as warm up for the later matches. I led my men in manifesting the Hoplite as our opponents filed unto the field, smoothing out snarls of qi that would threaten the whole.

The 3rd surprised me by manifesting a towering Hoplite of their own, though I couldn't help but sneer as I observed it. The body was filled with tangles of unstable qi and the bronze of the shield and spear were dull, resembling a coat of paint on old wood more than the shining metal of our own manifestation. The 3rd had crossed the first hurdle, but it was clear their understanding was yet lacking.

The observing judge signaled us to begin and I pulled on one of the many threads of qi making up our guardian sending my intentions to my allies. Plucks and pulls signalled agreement and we marched forward with our weapons raised, intent on striking straight through the opponent. I took the center of the formation, smoothing out tangles as they formed and braiding lengths of qi together to support our impending attack. I would have preferred to lead the assault, but no one else could manage the formation as well as I.

The 3rd surprised me once again as they moved forward to meet us, their guardian almost bouncing with eagerness as they advanced. The construct visibly rippled as qi moved violently and chaotically under its shadowy skin but somehow they managed to keep it under control long enough to meet us in the center of the ring. Disappointment bubbled up inside me and I shouted to signal the beginning of the assault, threads of qi too tangled now to use for effective communication. I was a fool to begin to hope for a challenge.

We thrust forward and the construct melted before the blow like all the others before, the shoddy craftsmanship unable to stand up against our… no. The construct split in two immediately before the blow hit, the members of the 3rd sliding across the sand in opposite directions in time. In the seconds it took us to retract the spear they had already begun building smaller constructs on each side.

A clever trick.

I glanced at my second and she nodded, taking half of the braided qi from my control as we split ourselves smoothly to match them. Unlike 3rd squad we had no need to break our larger formation to act effectively. My half took command of the shield, and the other the spear. In this way we maintained our combined strength while allowing more complex interaction.

We met them bronze for bronze, easily overpowering them with our larger formation. They slid around our construct, searching for a way past my shield or desperately blocking the spear blows of my counterpart without success. Soon we herded them next to one another, using their lack of skill to block their way.

The third surprise was the worst. Instead of disrupting one another and being paralyzed by feedback as I expected they smoothly stepped into positions beside each other and thrust at our core even as their Hoplites were breaking apart in a chaotic mess of unmanaged qi. The twin spears remained solid just long enough to impact us and send us flying.

Our formation broke and feedback locked my muscles in place as we flew through the air. How did they avoid feedback from the other disrupting their formation? They would have to drop each manifestation deliberately, immediately before contact while planning the strike. Even if they had planned to do so, the timing for the execution would be demanding in the extreme to execute in the moment.

A moment earlier and we would have noticed the ruse, a moment later and feedback was almost a certainty.

Impossible.

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[Paulus POV]

Cleaning up a bunch of feedback paralyzed cultivators was pretty easy all told. Even though we couldn't get them all in the brief window where they couldn't move, the difference in numbers afterwards wasn't something they could overcome with all their qi wasted.

"Your suggestion worked, Captain." Titus observed. "Even after seeing your logic, I must admit I did not truly believe success would come so quickly."

"Don't get too used to it. We may have beaten the 10th but at least half of that win was surprise. I'd bet you anything we get blown up next time we fight them."

"I would not take that bet, Captain." Titus demurred with a shake of his head, "However the question still remains. How did you come up with this method? Do you perhaps follow the Dao of Dance or Formations?"

"What? No. I didn't even know there was a Dao of Dance."

Titus frowned. "Then perhaps the Dao of Time, or War? Forgive me captain but for all your strengths I do not believe you to be a very warlike person."

"No no, nothing like that Titus. I haven't really chosen anything like that you know?"

Titus frowned further and looked at me in a way that reminded me of Leto studying the bestiary. "You must have some idea of your path, Captain. Even if it is vague, a cultivator does not oppose the heavens without something at their core. I apologize if I am being too inquisitive, Captain, but if I do not get some manner of answer it will occupy me for weeks. As such a thing would be detrimental to my cultivation, I must request that as my senior in the clan you assist in this matter."

I snorted and looked away from him. This guy, he didn't seem like he was the joking sort but he clearly had jokes. Still he had a point about cultivators so I gave it some thought. Marcus and Cassius were talking together at the side, joking about something I couldn't hear. Julia, Atria, Galio, and Phillip were going through the motions of the Scorpion Slide, practicing trading partners while they waited for the next move. Everyone was happy at the win and our progress with the formation, each expressing it in their own little ways. As I watched them, something clicked into place and I spoke up with the certainty that this was a moment I'd remember forever.

"People. If there's anything at my Core, Tite, it's understanding people."

As Titus frowned even further at the nickname I'd given him, I felt that certainty blossom into satisfaction and I smiled.

It was a good day.

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Badabing Badaboom. That should be my last update for the turn.
I tried to show a little of what a Legionnaire might be experiencing in the rebuilding of strength. Not everybody is an elite, but certain standards have to be met for the Legion's strength to remain.
I couldn't really reflect any of the high level happenings from this perspective. Perhaps next time there will be more things 'visible' to a low level cultivator. Enjoy!
 
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The best strategy would be to back your own candidate in the blood cult and hope they succeed.

The best candidate would be someone who already has enemies. Enemies that lives in the opposite direction of where you live.
 
Ferenike 25 - Hunting, Prelude to the Journey
Ferenike 25 - Hunting, Prelude to the Journey​

Her travels had taken her to a little place called Red Noodle Village. It was a tiny little town tucked away several li northwest of the Hundred Li Soup Pot of the Simmering Soup Sect, ensconced in a small valley where the red grasses that went into their soup and noodle dough grew, sustained by arrays and magic talismans. Not much more than five thousand people lived here, and only five other cultivators lived and acted as guards for the town and arrays, though most of them made livings as maintenance workers and administrators on those arrays. She'd come here in her latest set of contracts and jobs seeking out a bandit who apparently had a habit of taming spiders and setting them on people if his extortion schemes failed, murdering them and earning him the moniker of 'Jade Spider' among those in the martial world.

Red Noodle Village was the latest in his course towards the Spider Gate the Simmering Soup Sect oversaw, and the Foundation Building Spirit Spiders that laired there. She'd pursued him quietly for about a month now, learning his habits to properly model his way of thought. The result of that had her sat in this small tea shop as she drank a sweet red tea. The similarities to her time in the west where she fought that group of Saber Disciples was eerie honestly. But also kind of funny.

The room was a lot smaller than the one from that past incident though, only four tables, all of them crammed nearly within reach of each other. There were three people in here besides her, two other customers having a quiet business deal at the table farthest from her, their heads shielded by hats that were a squarish frame of wood with linen between the spars and their robes were white linen. The proprietor, Jin Chen, was a tall and thin man with bright red hair, slowly organizing his cups and caring for the fire for the tea behind the counter. His son, a big and burly boy, was checking the water barrels by the side of the porch. What could be a quiet and calm day, if there wasn't a tension in the air causing everyone to sit nervously, eyes darting about, and how she knew for a fact that Jin Chen was particularly rich for this village and that his son was hiding their wealth in the barrels.

That tension was further increased when a tall and war hardened man swaggered in. His skin was bronzed, like the Clan's and his eyes were brownish. His cultivation was a half step from Foundation Building in the ninth Heavenstage, blaring loudly all over the room.

Ferenike was hiding her own with some tricks and tools she had picked up, presenting herself as a third Heavenstage. She hunched slightly in her seat as he walked by and she could feel his scowl deepen as he looked at her briefly before moving on. His clothing was traveler's garb, sturdy and well cared for much like hers and his black hair was bound back in a ponytail as he strutted through the room up to the counter and slammed his hand down onto it, causing the proprietor to jump.

"I'd like something strong to drink old man." He sneered, his way of speaking young, matching his youthful face. This bandit was probably younger than her, which was an odd thought. The mortal proprietor was shaking slightly, his hands kept almost completely still through years of experience in self-control, the whites of his eyes incredibly wide. Ferenike had to commend Jin Chen on his self control, not looking at her even though he knew who she was and was in on her plan.

"A-ah, may this one have your name while I serve you?" Jin Chen asked as he bowed and bent to work, fastidiously not looking at the man before him. Ferenike's eyes only looked at him from the corner of her eye. The other two customers were also ignoring the exchange and were pale with fear.

"No." The bandit snapped, slicing his hand through the air. "Bring me a drink!" He repeated his command. Jin Chen hurriedly continued, bustling about with a cup and pot. In the time it took to pull some alcohol out from under the counter, Jade Spider spent a great deal of attention looking around the small shop and gauging the worth of the woven pennants hanging from the walls and the set of sabers on the wall above Jin Chen's head. Their scabbards were decorated with flower petals shaped in golden wire and a beautiful and dark wood formed the main body. Jade Spider's eyes latched onto them.

"What's the story behind those blades, eh?" He asked in a nasty tone.

Jin Chen hesitated, his hands freezing as he set the drink before the bandit. "Those...," He swallowed, "Those were my grandfather's, a cultivator of the Simmering Soup Sect before his death a hundred years ago."

Jade Spider's eyes lit with greed and he took a drink. "Interesting! I want them." He declared, and in the silence that fell he turned in his chair and looked at everyone in the room. "In fact I think all of you will give me some money as well, so I don't kill you." Then his eyes flicked to Ferenike.

"And you woman, you have nothing to say for yourself hmm?" He shot at her, a suspicious look on his face.

She shrunk in on herself, and she hoped he bought the act.

He snorted. "Thought not, I'd crush you like a bug. You'll give me any treasures you have as well as your spirit stones." He snapped his fingers. "Hurry up and put them on the counter." He said as he turned around, his suspicions fading as he discarded her.

Her intents and thoughts calmed, falling away. She acted. Jade Spider had only just begun to dodge as he felt the faintest hint of her aura shift, but it was too late as her hand wrapped around his shoulder and tossed him bodily out of the open door of the shop. He soared through the air with a yell and then landed with a thud and a howl of pain in the sand outside, rolling to a stop.

Something clung to her hands and Ferenike looked down. Thumbnail sized spiders were clinging to her arms and hands, trying to bite through the glass armor that had been summoned around her brassy metal flesh. There was a whumpf as red fire erupted from her hands and a series of pops and shrieks as the spiders exploded and she stepped out of the tea house and into the street.

Jade Spider was already scuttling to his feet, regaining his stance from the stunning force of his impact and he took up a stance as she approached.

"Gods be damned bitch, who are you?" He growled at her, paling as he felt her aura rise to its full might in the tenth Heavenstage.

"Golden Scorpion. Heard you've killed more than a few people, Little Spider." She needled back, her voice calm and ringing like metal.

He squinted, wracking his brain and he tensed up, his stance becoming even more serious and cautious as he sized her up. "Don't know you, bitch. Doesn't matter either. You'll die too!" He shouted and then something seemed to outright burst from his skin.

A tide of fist sized black-brown spiders exploded from him, the mortals on the streets who hadn't already cleared out screaming and running faster at the sight. The wave of spiders swept towards her and then formed a towering ten foot tall humanoid figure in front of her. Hundreds of black eyes glittered at her and one amorphous arm lashed out towards her with incredible speed.

She bent to the side like a reed and it passed through the space she'd just vacated, unable to correct as she raised her spear, suddenly in her hands. Shifting her feet in a blur of hot sand, she slashed with the long head of her spear and struck the arm before it could impact the building behind her. There was a hissing, popping shriek as the 'fist' separated from the arm, some of the spiders slain, and fell to the sand with a splat. The figure flinched back and then, seeming emboldened struck out again in a huge wave that would swallow everything behind her if she moved.

His clicking, shrieking kiai rang through the air as the wave towered over Ferenike. There was a snapping hiss and then a roar of expanding air as a red-purple burst of fire swallowed him up and filled the street with red light. His screams were consumed by the shrieks of the flame, and then it bored entirely through him and exploded out of his back, lashing at the air.

A shadow leapt nimbly away from the inferno, hissing and clicking thousands of fangs.

Crunch crunch crunch. Out of the flames walked Ferenike. The sounds of her boots crushing the molten sand and glass she had created underscored the crackle of the flames behind her, and she advanced into the space he had vacated so suddenly as they faded away.

The mass of arachnids that Jade Spider had become shifted, his chitin rustling against itself, rising again into a human shape only about a foot taller than her, much of his bulk burned away and glared at her with a bloodshot human eye peering from within the mass of spiders. "You are an incredibly bothersome woman Golden Scorpion." He growled at her in a buzzing, clicking voice as dozens upon dozens of pedipalps flexed and clear drops of poison dripped onto the sands to hiss and spit as they dissolved the sand.

She raised her spear and entered a ready stance of her Golden Scorpion Style, knees bent and left foot forward, ready to scuttle to either side. Her spear waited, tip at shoulder height as she focused intently on him. While she had plateaued for now with this style until she grew stronger, it was still useful.

He jumped forward and seemed to burst again. She was already moving without thought, her body acting on well trained impulse to strike at the dozen clones he attacked her with in sweeping strikes of her spear. Each clone was a mass of spiders in the shape of a man, like he himself was. Each shrieked kiai as they struck at her with dozens of blows.

She was already in amongst them however and with a sweeping kick launched glass spears as long as she was tall into them, her inner soldiers dutifully shepherding her Qi as she attacked again and again and again. Bronze spear and glass spears lashed out, carving a circle out of the group with a dozen stinging blows as she tried to advance. Many of the clones fell and dispersed as they hit the ground. But she found that every one that fell skittered toward her in a wave of arachnids, forcing her to give ground and herding her towards the blows the others were trying to make. There were soon so many of them that they began to build up around her in a growing dome.

She stabbed her spear into the latest clone to fall before her, sticking the weapon into the ground firmly, and used it as a support as she leapt high into the air above the mass before it could fully enclose and swallow her. Rotating in midair she gathered up her qi infused shards in her throat and then exhaled onto the mass below her.

Insectile ichor and human blood burst out of the spiders as she struck, filling most of the street with a howling vortex of flame and whipping sand. She stopped after a moment and landed on the butt of her spear, balancing there with ease as the sand ceased swirling. Below her the fires ate at the street, transforming a long swatch of it into reddish glass. The spiders that had survived skittered around the pools of fire and molten sand in three streams and gathered up in a lump which slowly resolved into a much worse looking Jade Spider. His clothes were torn and tattered, smoking, massive weeping burns crisscrossing his body and face as he stared up at her and panted from where he lay. But she could feel his aura. Still strong, and this was starting to tax her.

Then he slammed his palms into the ground and sent himself flying through the air towards her with a scream, hand outstretched like a claw. She bent her knee and swept his arm aside with her hand, sending him off course. Instinct screamed to not touch a poison user for long. He soared above her, spitting curses as she dived off her spear and reaching out ripped it out of the ground and then spun in the air to smack his ribs with its haft, sending him careening through the air. He landed, bounced and then righted himself as she landed and he rushed in with a frantic, frenetic style that forced her back.

Red light bloomed from her and swept the street with blinding light. It swallowed everything, wiping out all outlines and details and bringing with it an incredible heat, though her eyes could pierce its blinding illumination, as her own power did not impede her. He shouted and Ferenike struck, her spear lashing out as she covered it with her glass, and sixty four of her qi invested stars led the charge of her soldiers.

As her technique rumbled through her meridians like an avalanche the glimmering spear slammed into Jade Spider and she felt his qi network buckle under the blow. It punched through his gut and out the other side, sending him straight off his feet and smashing into the sand. The light faded away, leaving spots in the eyes of any still watching the battle. Ferenike suffered no such impairment and stared down at Jade Spider. Red flames licked at the massive cleft she had torn in his guts and burned under his skin, eating through it rapidly. He gasped, twitching and clutching at his chest as his body burned until he choked and stopped moving.

In the next moment his skin dissolved into burning silk strands and the corpses of spiders. She was already whirling, reacting to the man falling silently on her from the sky. He'd leapt off of one of the buildings behind her. Unbeknownst to her he had expended his False Blue Spider Molt treasure for a burst of strength during his attack with the clones while her vision was obscured by the mass of his pets and had hidden himself away while she dealt with them.

In his hands his twin Ebony Gem Fang daggers sliced for her collarbones and throat, curved, viciously sharp, and filled with deadly poison that would kill her instantly. He could not correct his course when her arm lashed out with incredible speed, knocking aside his left arm, breaking it and sending him spinning in the air. Her spear thrust in a golden blur and punctured his throat in a spray of arterial blood, jerking him to a stop as he twitched on it like a trapped animal. His knives fell from nerveless fingers, and shattered as the qi he used to fuel them guttered out and they hit the ground. His life ran out of him, draining with his blood onto the sands.

Ferenike paused for a moment, her glass armor stained red with his blood like the sands. Then with a heave of effort she kicked him off the end of her spear and a quick burst of fire burned his blood off her body and set the sand at her feet to melting in a gust of hot air.

She took a breath of the hot air, and relaxed. Her spear disappeared back into storage. She took the time to settle herself, occupying her eyes by scanning for any damage to their surroundings, as the inhabitants of the town started coming out of their homes and businesses. The street for at least ten meters in either direction was a mass of superheated glass and semi-liquid sand, craters, and tall spears of red glass embedded into the sand. The corpses of fist sized spiders littered the devastation as well, and her enemy's corpse was at her feet. The buildings were mostly unharmed, though she could see smoke stains and damaged paint from where her fires had burned nearby and sand had lashed at their sides, respectively.

She took a final breath. For as similar as this might have been to the incident with those kids, she didn't feel regret for this. He'd already caused far too much harm and could not be turned aside from his path. Which left him at the mercy of herself and the Clan's opinions on bandits.

People gathered at the edges and then someone piped up as they thumped into something. "Gods damned lady, that one move was bright as hell! I can barely see shit in front of me!" They said grumpily. There was a panicked sounding argument immediately after.

She smiled slightly and bowed towards the voices. "My apologies, good sir, it should pass in a few minutes. Anyone else hurt?" She asked. She received a cascade of no's and other reassurances. Not long after that she waved the guard captain forward from where he had been stationed near the back of the tea house she had used, keeping the family there safe.

He was a short fellow in the sixth Heavenstage, the most advanced member of the guard here both in age and power. He saluted in the Clan style and then tapped his helmet at her. "Well then, I'd say that's a job well done Lady Ferenike. Would you like to take tea at the minister's home?" He said genially.

"That would be lovely." She said absently, used to the routine by this point. They always wanted to pay her in their fancy sitting rooms.



She'd been traveling east for weeks now, heading towards the Silver Grain Airship Spire, a northern stop-off point and secondary base for the Airship Fleet. Her hunting had turned up a tidy little profit and more than that had led her to some important connections from several thankful ministers which had given her an invitation to speak to the Ship Captain of the Silver Liesun.

One of the Simmering Soup Sect's fourteen airships, the Liesun was slated to be part of the shipping caravan sent to Yuan and then Qiguai when the Qiguai's mystical doorway opened for Qi Condensation. It'd be traveling with the Shafufen airship as part of that convoy, both ships carrying a heavy complement of Soup Sect disciples. She had it on good authority from those friends of hers that the head of the sect had decreed there were to be larger guard complements on this trip to Yuan and had opened the doors on limited mercenary contracts under the control of the Ship Captains for the occasion. Which left her with a useful lever in order to get a place on the ship.

The first sign of the Spire were the communities built around it, places built up with magic and clever water collection methods to allow for the growth of vital foods. She flew down the paths between these small communities, noting the people she passed, many tending the gardens and wells of their lands tucked away in the shade of the dunes. The next sign was the hazy image of its top rising over the horizon, the entire structure a sharply glinting metal spike like a giant nail sticking up out of the desert. The Spires were works of the Simmering Soup Sect's disciples and mortals, like their airships, though if she remembered her history right the Spires included architectural knowledge and assistance purchased at a premium from the Clan several hundred years ago. At its top she could see the vague oblong shape of the Liesun hovering above the flat cargo platform that made up the top of the Spire and gave it its' nail shape.

She urged her camel to go faster, trotting towards the distant construction and kicking up dust and sand from the yellowed road surface. The roads grew wider and the amount of people on them rose as she got closer, goods being transported to and from the structure. It was not too long before it fully resolved into complete solidity, a bronze monolith that towered nearly five kilometers in the air and was more than a hundred meters thick at its base. The nail head far above cast an enormous shade onto the desert below and in its shadow a much denser community had grown up around it, the city ringing the entire structure and encircling it with a huge array-inscribed walls. Even far away she could see the towers and other buildings climbing up the central tower of the Spire, several tens of thousands of people living in the city. The air had changed as well, cooler and more humid as faint wisps of cloud gathered around the walls of the Spire and under its wide head.

Apparently that wasn't a result of any magic, except the natural magic of the weather, as the clouds found it easier to gather near the Spire's immense size. Water sometimes dewed on its surface and then ran down into the city's water catch system. A fascinating little tidbit she didn't quite believe until she saw it glinting in the morning sunlight like that.

Near the gates of the city hundreds and hundreds of people moved down the road in two parallel streams separated by a median of raised stone from which rose light towers to illuminate the roadway at night. She kept moving, most of the crowd parting around her easily as they recognized her Legion robes and cultivation, and soon reached the gates.

It was a massive circular portal, the gates two halves of the circle and emblazoned with the soup pot symbol of the Simmering Soup Sect in shining silver. The enormous bronze wall had pennants with the same symbol flapping along its' top, hung under the flag of the Clan. The chatter and shouts of the people all around her were immense as she made her way towards the open portal.

Each of the two doors was opened, flung outwards to let traffic through. Across the gate a lower wall was strung, only a few tens of meters high with guard stations placed along its length. Passing through the open gate, giving the expansive arch above her head an appreciative look, she moved through the low wall without difficulty as they certified her purpose and legion identity.

The city on the other side started with a wide boulevard which then rapidly broke up into an organic growth of warehouses, bazaars, hawkers and an incredible number of shops. Animals and people moved through this little port given its proximity to the Hundred Li Soup Pot. Sect disciples of many stripes also moved about here, marked out by their robes which bore the markings of the sect and who sometimes carried oversized ladles or soup pots. They eyed her curiously and she saw many covert messages passed around as she entered and walked the city in such an obvious fashion.

Very few of the disciples were at the ninth Heavenstage, and those that she saw were usually a half step from Foundation Building. Here it seemed few went along the unorthodox paths, like her. That made her frown, saddened. Something of a loss in her mind. Those going along the unorthodox paths could discover new knowledge and new enlightened insights to bring back to their clans, which was in large part why she found the nine pillars stage of Foundation Building so intriguing. But it was each person's business how far they went on the path. If the world changed, perhaps they might explore more.

After spending a good half hour wandering around the city and taking in the sights of its towering buildings and fountains and wet air she approached a disciple of the soup sect and politely extracted directions to the Spire Lift from her. Moving clockwise around the Spire base she eventually found it, a yawning gate carved into the bottom of the Spire with three defensive towers on either side and two walls blocking off the entrance. The gate doors themselves were a portcullis and single door of Spirit Iron. Waving her invitation in front of the gate guards got her through the walls guarding the gate.

The gate itself caught her eye, as it had a clever system of pulleys which pulled the massive reinforced door up into a slot in the ceiling. She surmised it could likely be dropped in a handful of seconds if the alarm was called, the incredible mass crushing anything unlucky enough to be caught under it.

Passing through the outer wall of the Spire, it rapidly cooled further, and the sunlight was replaced by the luminescence of arrays and glowing green stones. Ferenike rode down the tunnel in a stream of people who looked like Soup Sect disciples, though they wore strange white uniforms, and cargo haulers, passing from one spot of illumination to another rapidly until the air started to warm again as humidity rose. It spiked when they reached the Lift structure itself. A massive tube in the center of the Spire, she could feel hot air rising rapidly around the edges through vents set in the footpath, and see in the center of the tube a circular floor suspended by large mechanical wheels. The entire Lift structure was an automaton of immense size, which rode rails by means of the iron wheels attached to its edge in four places.

She felt like a chickpea on a god's plate on this massive thing, giddiness making her eyes and feet bounce with energy. She could barely sit still in the saddle, to the grumbling consternation of her mount. She was so close to seeing new horizons with her own eyes!

A moment of discussion with staff of the lift had her dismounting and being shepherded around the platform to a loading dock and into the fenced in passenger compartment at its center. The animals were lead elsewhere on the craft as the cargo was tied and anchored down to the surface. She was taller than many of the other people in the area and she was strong enough to muscle her way to the edge of the fence and watched the staff bustle about industriously.

It took about half an hour for everything to be tied down and fastened properly. After the last crate was bolted down and the last bleating animal secured to their tether a warning alarm started blaring.

"Greetings travelers! I am Soup Master Shi, please prepare for launch and remember to brace!" A bombastic voice hollered, amplified by magic to echo over the entire platform.

Ferenike set her feet and felt the surge in the air as Qi flowed through it, concentrated below and she felt heat rising from somewhere deep under her feet as well. The rush of hot air intensified with a tea kettle hiss, amplified to gargantuan proportions, and then the Lift lurched into motion with a cacophonous bang as locking brakes released.

There was an immense roar, swallowing up the cries of the other passengers as it soared into the air propelled by arrays in the wheels and a massive geyser-like steam vent. The lights in the tube raced by in a blur of green, smearing together into one line. The acceleration nearly forced some people to their knees as they held on to whatever they could. Quickly however the shriek of steam quieted and the incredible acceleration of the Lift stopped. The mass of metal carried on however, skating up the rails on momentum and the stable velocity of the wheels.

Ferenike laughed, many of the other passengers nearby flinching back from her as she smiled so wide her face hurt. She was too happy to notice, and leaned against the top of the railing to watch. She wasn't sure exactly how long it took for them to see the light above them for the first time, but they rapidly began to slow as they approached, causing her to feel lighter and lighter until they came to a stop in a massive bronze and glass dome at the top of the Spire with a loud ka-chunk.

Senior Disciple Shi spoke again as the loading area of the Lift lined up with the exit dock. "Alright travelers, you have arrived at the Spire-Top! Please disembark in an orderly fashion!" He said cheerily as people started to totter off of the amazing device.

Ferenike was nearly skipping as she ran through the loading dock towards a number of booths set in the wall of the doom where more gate guards sat. Waving her invitation in front of the guards caused their eyes to widen as they saw the seal embossed on it. They let her through quickly and she stepped out onto the top of the Spire. It was an almost mirror bright expanse of hot metal, the heat radiating up from the soles of her boots and she saw more of the strange uniformed disciples running all over the place carrying tools and materials in a hectic bustle.

What dominated her vision however was the hundred meter long mass of the Silver Liesun, hanging in the air to one side of the platform and tied in place with thick lines anchored to the metal by massive bronze loops.

The hull of the ship was shaped from long planks of Qi infused wood, dark black-brown in color. She could see a thick bronze keel along the bottom going from one end to the other. The entire ship was sleek and much longer than it was wide, hanging like a knife in the air.

What caught her attention the most were the three enormous masts sticking up at least thirty meters from the ship. The foremast had a small triangular sail, the tallest main mast had two triangular sails set on either side of it which ran in a direction perpendicular to the front sail. And then the mizzen-mast furthest back had a huge square sail hanging from it.

She could see the arrays carved into the masts and feel the qi concentrating into the sails, ready to propel the ship. For these ships wind was only a helpful suggestion and source of fuel via the Qi the winds carried. The aft of the ship had a bulbous construction rising above the deck and a massive propeller extending out from it. There was a frizz of thunder in the air which tingled over her metallic skin. The bow of the ship had a silver falcon figure head, its feathers seeming to be carved into the shapes of flames. And all around the ship's superstructure she saw more of those disciples in the strange uniforms, made up of long pants which tied off at the ankles and long sleeved tunics with similar ties around the wrists. They were sailors' uniforms she surmised.

She became aware of long-suffering looks being thrown her way as she gaped at the ship and that prompted her to stop staring like a child. It did not stop her from stealing glances at everything that was going on around her and the ship hovering there in the air as she headed for the loudest voice she could hear shouting orders. Decent chance that was the captain.

The sailors cleared out as she started moving, parting around her like the sands around a rock. A moment later the source of the voice she was following revealed itself as a massive man easily half again as wide as her with a shock of gold-white hair, sideburns, and thick muscles cladding his form, standing atop a crate in front of a desk making notes in a book he held in one hand when he wasn't pointing vigorously at people and shouting at the top of his huge lungs.

His cultivation stood in the Early Foundation Building it took him only a moment to notice her, his latest order given and then his gaze snapped to her. "You got business with the Liesun?" He hollered at her across the space separating them boisterous, a crinkle of suspicion on his brow. "I don't have room for anyone but disciples or mercs, nor the time." He grumbled.

She smiled and bowed with clasped hands. "I have here an invitation to speak with one Ship Captain Huan. Would that be you?" She asked as she held it up between two fingers. By how his eyes flashed between her and the invite and one eyebrow rose she could tell he knew how powerful she was and what she was likely here for.

He grunted and crossed his arms as she approached. "Yeah I'm Captain Huan Wei. If you would?" He said, hand making motions towards the invitation. She straightened and flicked it across the three meters separating them and he caught it easily, snatching it out of the air. He examined the seal, running thick fingers over it and then unfolding the piece of paper and reading the short description of her exploits as 'Golden Scorpion' in the Simmering Soup Sect. His brow crinkled further before he folded it back up and tucked it into his uniform, suspicion being overtaken by consideration.

"Well then Golden Scorpion, if you would join my ship till Qiguai I would be your Senior." He said, standing straighter.

Ferenike nodded slightly. "That won't be an issue Captain Huan, this one is perfectly willing to lend her strength for the trip, as laid out in the decrees of the Sect Head." She said.

He snorted, rubbing his chin and thick sideburns. "Right, we shall exchange strikes." He said, sliding into a wide stance, heavy feet settling onto the metal and his hands coming up in large fists.

Ferenike blinked. That was a bit more direct than she was expecting for a test, from a man this intelligent. Maybe he was just impatient. She slid into an opening stance for Golden Scorpion Style, right foot extended and settling into a low stance. One hand was her stinger, another a pincer.

He breathed in and she saw his lead foot begin to shift forward as muscles tensed across his body in a wave. As his lead foot came up in a snapping kick she brushed it aside with her pincer hand and shot inward with a quick pitter-patter of feet and stabbed her stinger hand towards his solar plexus. What followed was a hideously quick exchange of blows, Ferenike and Huan punching and kicking and swatting aside blows with nearly unthinking instinct drilled into them by training. To the spectating sailors they saw both fighters nearly disappear into blurs of yellow and white and the rapid bang-bang-bang of flesh meeting metal.

"Hah! Enough!" Huan Wei shouted as they separated, slamming to a stop as Ferenike twisted away and landed lightly. Neither had as much as a scratch or bruise on them. "Well I'd say you're hired just for that, your style is very well polished."

"Thank you Senior, this Junior finds your own style formidable." She said lightly. And it was, the sheer speed of a Foundation Expert presenting a rather intractable problem for her. Even if she was tough enough to survive him for a good while he had the two pronged issues common to facing a Foundation Building expert in his greater speed and stamina. She'd likely lose. An idle part of her considered how that fight might progress as she straightened and bowed, glancing up at him from beneath her hat, the flame in her eye glinting.

He snorted. "Well, come. We need to sort out your pay. All you gawkers get back to work!" He roared as he walked over to his desk and pulled out a scroll, handing it to her. "This is the contract I'm offering."

She pulled it open and hummed at the dense legalese. The first few pages were basically various declarations indicating the authority of the Sect Head and Ship Captain to prosecute violations of the contract in increasingly violent and cruel ways, including such activities as staking out in the desert to be killed by the sun. It then moved on to the actual benefits of becoming what was termed a 'Traveler-Guard', which were reductions in prices for riding the Airship to your preferred destination and right to treasures found by yourself on the voyage to Qiguai. There were the general clauses about payment in spirit stones if one wished to convert the treasure, as well as healing and food and quarters aboard the vessel. All in all the Sect would still be making a profit, but as she was essentially paying for a speedy and safe trip to the wonders of Qiguai she figured most would find it worth it.

She had a general understanding that other contract offers were available for those with less to pay than her and who sought a small profit, but those were for mercenaries who were interested in being long term guards and not Traveler-Guards as she wished to become. After continued reading about halfway through the document there was something that caught her eye, a clause specifying that those 'who can materially provide the defense of the winds and air for the Sect's vessel were entitled for negotiated compensation'.

She raised her eyes from the contract and looked up at Huan. He'd continued shouting his orders as usual while she read, and the snap of paper as she waved the contract in his direction made his gaze snap back to her with a questioning expression on his face. "While Senior's test was quite thorough, I am quite capable when it comes to throwing weapons, particularly spears."

He squinted and huffed. "Can you kill a Poison-Belching Vulture at three hundred meters?" He asked.

That would be a gigantic gangly bird whose wingspan was greater than ten meters which liked to lurk in the lowest hills of the clan's mountain borders, ranging all the way up to ninth Heavenstage. "I could kill ten in the blink of an eye." She said confidently and then snapped an arm out, causing a spike of glass two meters long to slam out into the air at ridiculous speed, sailing far over the edge of the Spire and out of sight.

"Good enough. Now lets negotiate your compensation..." He said, which precipitated a long discussion over tea, which appeared rapidly as she sat in front of his desk, one leg crossed over the other and her hands clasped on her knee.

They spoke for a solid hour on the details, and she ended up negotiating for the much despised (to most cultivators) day watch hours and her spear throwing abilities in return for a greater reduction in her pricing, though he managed to kick the price up a bit when she was forced to indicate her only surface level knowledge of sailing. When all was said and done she'd still be mostly cleaned out, but she wouldn't be eating into any emergency supplies like she might have been.

When they were done Captain Huan had a tired expression on his face, and waved her off. "Go on junior, find Huan Zhi. He'll give you your station and stay there until we launch. We have about three hours." The unspoken 'so you quit bothering me' was heard loudly, much to her amusement.

"Yes Captain Huan." She said as she sprung to her feet and saluted as she'd seen his sailors do. She stepped away and made her way to the gangway strung to the side of the ship with a hop in her step.

She made it up to the deck in just a few excited hops and there found herself getting slapped on the back by a fresh faced looking young man with a power at the ninth stage. "I'm one of Captain Huan's assistants, Huan Zhi, you're to take the front bow. How much experience do you have with sailing?" He asked her.

She snorted. "I know the terms and enough to stay out of trouble Disciple Huan Zhi." She said.

He nodded, face seeming to naturally settle into a frown as his black hair blew under the hat he wore. "Then you have your orders. I must return to my duties." He said brusquely.

Ferenike didn't care what had him so tense, she was already moving towards the figure head. Moving around those running about the deck gracefully she marveled in the slight bobbing motion she could feel in the deck as the ship rose up and down slightly in the air and the way the wind howled quietly around her ears. She would have to explore the ship if she got the chance!

Reaching the figure head in another moment she found steps carved into its back which led up to a watch post behind the falcon's head. She looked out at the immense expanse of desert in front of her and her heart seemed to soar. She was traveling~

All of those horizons she needed to see were just in reach. She laughed, pure glee echoing over the ship.



@occipitallobe and this is the start of book 2! Another fate supplemental etc etc

And we're finally starting the Yuan and Qiguai journey arcs! YAYAHAHAHAH I am super excited.

As an aside on my writing process the first section of this omake was initially going to be a middle scene for the previous omake, but I decided that was terrible and I could do better and open in typical Ferenike fashion, i.e Dead People!

Hope you all enjoyed.
 
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Syntyche Theophylaktos 2 - A Gamble
Syntyche Theophylaktos

A Gamble

Trade stopped for nothing. Even during the trials, merchants flowed in and out of Seven Heavens Trade City. And wherever merchants stopped to rest, resorts, auctions halls, and gembling centers would follow. Naturally, this made the city a hub for fifth sea cultivators, looking for entertainment between hunts. Killing mortals was a sin worthy of eviction, as was unrelated Righteous cultivators. Seven Heavens Trade City was of course the hub for money and goods flowing in and out of the desert: not a single cultivator here wasn't righteous.

It was amusing to Syntyche how quickly the city could hide all evidence of Golden Devil sovereignty. Though the merchants would grumble about the way fifth sea cultivators bullied them and stole their wares, they always seemed to come out more rich for it. Where that money came from, Syntyche couldn't tell at all. One of many mysteries on the path of the Dao.

"Bones! You've finally arrived!" A boisterous young man shouted. Where he sat, he took up a full half of the table by himself, sitting across three chairs and resting his bulging arms over the backs of two more. Next to him was another, a short man with sharp eyes and a tendency to flick his sleeves in a way that screamed concealment. Sure enough, she could feel the slightest emanation of murderous qi from a pocket in the sides of his robes, tucked right against his chest. He was whispering something into the ear of the last at the table, a taller woman who, even with her arms demurely rested in her lap, took center stage. There was something artificial about her poise, perhaps the lack of Dao protectors, or something else, but she carried herself in a 'nouveau riche' style, someone playing at status rather than really having it. Something Syntyche was intimately familiar with.

Syntyche's face lit up without a single trace of uncertainty, turning to wave to the massive man. "Babur! It's been a while!"

The young master, next to him, Jai, looked up from where he was flirting with the girl at his side.

"Took you long enough. If you'd been a few days later, you'd have missed Anisha and I."

Syntyche rubbed her brown locks awkwardly, giving the girl at his side a nod. "Well, you know how it is. I get a bit carried away, and before you know it it's a week later."

She pulled out an intricately carved clay jug, obviously brimming with Qi. "How about this, drinks are on me today."

Anisha sniffed, narrowing her round eyes. "You always offer your stuff, Manas."

"Haha," Syntyche moved to slide the bottle back into her slightly oversized robes. "If the Lightweight prefers, we'll just have barbarian stuff."

Anisha yowled a protest, but Babur spoke over her. "We get it, we get it. I'd rather have piss than what passes for wine in the third sea." He picked up the chair under his left arm, tossing it at her. "Take a seat already, we've been here for hours."

Syntyche caught the thrown chair. She set it down at the last spot at the table, giving the ornately carved wood an appraising nod. "Lihua Heartwood. Not bad."

"I wouldn't be caught dead in anything less." Jai snorted. He reached into the bag resting between the pair, drawing out a deck and tossing it at her. "Since you're last here, you're dealing."

Syntyche caught the deck in her free hand, flicking the cards between her fingers as she took a swig of wine straight from the bottle. "I'm up for that. But you know, they say the House always wins."

"Not with your luck, it doesn't!" Babur cracked up in full-bellied laughter.

"Maybe in the past it didn't, but I'm confident these Trials have changed my fortunes," Syntyche laughed along, dealing out the cards and scooping up cups from a passing waiter. "So, how about a cup a round, and we punish the winner with three cups?"

"Ah yes," Jai tossed down his cup without the slightest hesitation. "The only way you've ever managed to break even."

Anisha took the proffered cup, her nose wrinkling at the smell, then looked towards Babur, already looking for his second cup. She took a sip. "I suppose I should give you all a sporting chance."

Syntyche gulped down her own glass last, then began passing out the cards. Anisha first, Babur second, Jai third, and dealt herself the final set of thirteen. She fanned out the cards in front of her, feeling the slight vibrations of Qi used to distort the deck during shuffling, minimizing Qi condensation's ability to count or track individual cards. It was a novel array, if one put towards a hedonistic purpose.

She tossed a coin into the pot, then the lowest three into the center. Anisha to her left followed with her own three, Jai with the highest four, and Babur with a seven. Anisha ended up taking the singles trick, committing the highest two in the process. She started the next round with a straight, but was quickly overtaken by Babur, who dropped both a flush and a full house, summarily winning the round.

Syntyche, sitting with the second-most cards left, mourned as she tossed more of her money into the pot. Babur celebrated with 5 cups, ostensibly because he was incredibly confident in winning the next round, too.

He did win, funnily enough, on the back of three of the twos in the deck. Heaven was a fair mistress.

Late into the night, Anisha grumbled, the only one still anywhere close to sober. "Bones, I think your shuffling is rigged."

Syntyche half laughed, half belched, arms cradling the fortune she'd just barely managed to keep even. "Wahaha. I told you, didn't I? The trials have improved my fortunes. Can you feel the power of the Dao of Alcohol?"

Babur laughed. Jai would've laughed, but he was half asleep, head down on the massive stack of treasures he'd acquired.

Anisha stared her down discontentedly, then took another cup of wine, tossing a bangle worth cities from her wrist into the pot.

Syntyche held out the jug enticingly, waving it back and forth like a pendulum. "Some liquid luck, Young Miss?"

Anisha grumbled, but extended her cup for a refill. She practically inhaled the cup, taking her second and third cups as well before accepting the cards Syntyche passed.

She did in fact win that hand, pushing Syntyche down as the biggest loser.

By the morning, though, Syntyche was the only one left at the table.
 
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Could someone add this link "Make a Friend" to the turn 6 spreadsheet for me (Daedalus Khimaira)? I thought tagging one of the named people would be enough for that, but didn't realize some more words may be required.
 
Wei Feng 9 - The Final Days at Pleuron
Wei Feng 9 - The Final Days at Pleuron.


Pleuron – the 8th​ day.

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Face open

He drops his arm to let the blade thrust above his shoulder, hammering a right cross into their nose, forcing the cartilage back up into their skull. He does not know if it is a fatal blow or not, but the body vanishes even as it falls and he has no time to wonder.

Axe, right side.

Press forward, inside their rang-

Spear

A lancer jabbed their spear over the axeman's shoulders, scoring across the side of Wei Feng's bicep. It slows him only for a millisecond, but that is enough time for them to pull their axe back into play, a reverse cut. Having to reverse the momentum of their swing and without space to wind up it is only half-strength but might still be deadly…

Yet here the enemy's greed and inexperience tells against them. The lancer, fails to retrieve his spear in time and the weapons tangle together. It is all the opening Wei Feng needs. Yanking the haft of the spear pulls its wielder off-balance, into the axeman's back. Two swift strikes to the throat break the axeman's neck and he swings the corpse sideways. The weight takes the lancer to the floor and Wei Feng hops onto his head, breaking his skull in a shower of bone and viscera as he seeks his next foe.

2 sword cultivators. 8th​ Level. Blades dripping. Poison?

His eyes dodn't flicker from his opponents, but he let them unfocus slightly to take in the situation behind his opponents. The knot of enemies forming a foothold on the wall had shrunk considerably and many of them seemed to be retreating.

Scare them?

Widening his stance, he gathered his qi. Circulating it, spinning it around and around inside his channels. Drops of water condensed and hung in the air as small fluctuations of qi leaked from his meridians.

Sensing the build-up of his power, one of the sword cultivators immediately sprang back, vaulting off the wall and back towards their camp, but the other charged forward instead.

Wei Feng's aura dropped sharply as he swayed left to avoid the first thrust. His body bent until it was almost diagonal to the ground.

As the enemy cultivator pulled back their thrust, he made a clawing motion with his right hand. Some of the water drops hanging in the air condensed further, a small sphere of water forming around the blades grip and dragging at it.

Deluge's grasp

At the same time, he exploded forward off his left leg, aiming a rising punch at their chest. His fist never connected, his opponents muscles bulged obscenely with qi, pulling back their sword with unnatural speed and strength.

"Hah! Do you think such a meagre attack could hold me, demon!"

Wei Feng ignored the taunt and charged again. He dodged one slash, then another as he tried to close it. A third strike went wild, battered away by a steel like fist. But as he tried to close the final distance to within his opponent's guard, the sun caught on the clean metal from the deflected sword and the reflection blinded Wei Fen for an instant.

His opponent took full advantage, sword flicking out. By the time he could see again it was nearly too late. Wei Feng tried desperately to dodge, going into a half slide beneath his opponent's blade, but the very tip of the sword nicked across his shoulder, on the opposite side to his previous wound. Just a scratch. Yet his opponent appears jubilant.

Even before Wei Feng has come out of his half slide, the sword wielder is spinning away, looking for another opponent.

"Hah, foul demons! Who dares challenge me next! None can resist the power of sword and this Scorpion-pit viper veno-"

Wei Feng's hand goes through his chest, he feels the heart give a beat against his fingertips before the weight of the body abruptly vanishes, token shattered. Fortunately, his opponent hadn't noticed that the water technique had served another purpose, collecting and dragging the venom from the blade.

Now who was left.

There, one more. Ninth stage?

Most of the enemy had either been eliminated or forced back off the wall, but one ninth heaven stage cultivator remained, seemingly free of the melee. No one wanted to engage them, because they were not attacking anyone.

It was an oddity of this siege. Xiao Yi's bravery and sacrifice had destroyed most of the enemy's foundation establishment cultivators. The remains couldn't engage mere qi condensations on their own without being forced back to their own realm.

Unless they could get those qi condensation opponents to strike first.

Most of the few Foundation building cultivators remaining wouldn't bother. The heaven's rewards would be near irrelevant. But some were hungry to avenge their fallen, or to gain political capital. They could hide amongst the juniors, then strike with impunity against any who attacked them unawares. Acting as mobile hardpoints for the attackers.

Rina and some of the rest of their 13 had taken out several of these false pillars, but no one wanted to be the one to risk striking the first blow.

No choice.

Wei Feng charged again, qi thrumming.

His opponent turned to him grinning. Then with a deafening roar of qi, a wave of fog erupted form them.

Instantly, techniques flew from the defenders to disperse it. Wind techniques and qi shockwaves flew, revealing battlements empty of all invaders. The enemy were gone.

They had won, for all that winning brought them.

In mere hours, the enemy would come again, refreshed and brimming with topped off qi reserves. While with every engagement the defenders grew weaker.

Wei Feng looked out towards the enemy encampment. There, invisible to his eyes but all too present to his senses, the enemy's core formation worked to make her forces tireless.

Hurry Minervina, I don't know how long we can last.

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Pleuron – Final Day – The Run

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They ran, seven men and women (and their spirit beasts) sprinting through a tunnel in an amber sea of light. Outside, an army of cultivators swam toward them in slow motion, flies fighting an entombing amber tide.

Seven of them racing an army to reach someone who should be capable of killing them in an instant.

It was the thing that stories were made of. That young Wei Feng, back in his little peasant village, might have dreamed of. A last glorious charge. Of course, in the stories, few if any of them would make it back. Young Wei Feng wouldn't have cared about that. Older Wei Feng, at nearly 96 tried not to care either.

After all, it did no good to go into battle expecting to lose.

And some things are worth the cost, no matter what it might be.

Amaranth fell behind first. Facing two Foundation establishment experts to buy time. He felt the heat of Amaranth's power on his back, a burning bronze flame ticking down his life.

The six ran on, and Wei Feng's senses became blind to Ammaranth's fate.

Diogenes and the Ninth Prince dropped away next.

Diogenes tried to draw away an enemy, but was forced back immediately, twisting around to deflect the blow of a second enemy aiming for the group. He would have died there had the Ninth Prince not charged forth to save him. They stood together battling against many experts, even as the prince lost his leg they stood again, buying as much time as they could.

Four of them ran on.

Around them, the amber tombs that had entrapped the bulk of their enemies began to fade. Bodies that had moved as though entombed in molasses grew swift once more, surging toward the four.

And were driven back as the true genius of the array that had carried them was revealed.

The remains of the amber tombs condensed into two high walls about them, a corridor to the waiting core of the enemy force, impenetrable to the army that seethed around them.

Behind them, a magnificent gate formed from the air. The one weakness in their gracefully collapsing array, but one that had been planned for.

Now it was Peta's turn to drop behind. Astride her ursine companion Wejo, they turned to face the tide at the gate. A hundreds strong press of qi condensation cultivators sought to forge the gate and were driven back. Peta swam through the air, overwhelming them from above, while Wejo's mighty paw swipes sent dozens stumbling back with each blow.

Ahead, the final three ran on. Wei Feng, Rina and Magnus.

Three left, and only you can afford to fight before the end.

They ran, lungs burning and hearts beating louder than wardrums.

They ran as behind them Amaranth burnt his bronze blood to fight an impossible battle. As the Ninth prince fell to the ground and was impaled, as Diogenes fought desperately to delay any he could. As Tasos fired in desperate support from the wall. As Peta fell, stomach pierced by twin spears.

Still they ran. Muscles burning and heartsick but with iron will propelling them.

We must succeed

Even as Wejo's engaged defence of Peta's wounded body was finally brought to a halt, a foundation building expert cracking the bears skull, the three ran on.

Wei Feng ran. Rage burning in in his heart, surrounded as the crash of outraged foes and the screams of the dying. He feels a high flash of qi behind him, hears the screech of metal through the air.

Magnus!

His left foot slams onto the ground and he janks hard right, spinning about and bringing himself into the path of the oncoming projectile.

A spear takes him on the left side, below the ribs. A sudden punch of cold sensation. He looks down to see it embedded three or four inches inside him. Not a good wound, but not fatal. Muscles tensing, he pulls at the spear.

"Beh!" He scoffs, as the spear comes free in a rush of blood. Such a little blow for a foundation building expert. It showed how pathetic these monsters truly were. Still, if he had any hope to hold them off long enough for this to work, he would have to use everything he had.

He sends his awareness deep withing his Dantian. Nestled there, serene amongst the qi flooding about it was a droplet of blood from a false phoenix. His sole, precious gain from the secret realm in which he had risked his life.

The phoenix was reborn in fire when it died. This false thing could not compare to the true blazing glory of the phoenix, but it would offer a great healing boon for a time. He had hoped to save it, to study it further and to one day purify it. Alas…

He sends his qi into the droplet. Feeding it on his own blood qi, stoking it to awaken. A gentle warmth suffused him, then suddenly transformed to a raging fire, fire qi burning out from his Dantian, up his stomach to the wound, closing it in a burst of fiery pain.

Wha-

Long decades of fighting experience allow him to keep the surprised pain from his face, but not without cost. His return throw of the extracted spear goes wild. Behind him, he hears the still running footfalls of Magnus and Rina.

Another rising flash of qi hurtles towards the group, on course to flash past him by inches. He raises his left-hand and three fingers fall to the ground, a sword spinning away from its intended course and crashing into the barrier.

He barely feels them fall, but the fiery flash of agony makes itself known again as bone, muscle and flesh began to grow rapidly from the stumps, forming into new fingers.

"Is that all you have?!" He sneers at them contemptuously. "A few foundation building 'experts' against one qi condensation and so far all you've done is cure the stich I got from running all the way here!" He gave a derisive laugh. "I'm not sure you're worth my time!"

The first foundation establishment cultivator' face transformed into a rictus of rage.

"You dare look down upon us, Demon!" He screamed. "Your suffering will be legendary!"

Wei Feng ignored him, even as his fingers finished regrowing, he half-turned to run after Magnus and Rina. Blood and water qi settled within his muscles reenforcing them. He kicked of

Spea-

A spear appeared in his thigh, but he didn't dare stop. Iron control kept his leg from shaking or collapsing under him as he ran, pulling the spear free. The flame burned out of his core once more, but this time it was more intense. The fiery healing qi scorching through his channels clashing with the water qi reinforcing his body.

Wei Feng runs, chasing his companions. Behind him he feels the oppressive weight of his opponents Qi. Another spear pierces hi shoulder, before falling out. The wound healed before it hits the ground.

A flash of Qi.

Rina

He shifts to absorb another spear with his body. Another flash.

Magnus

And again.

And again.

Spears slam into his back and he pulls them out, flinging them away. Harassing his opponents when he can.

A sword slices into his back and he flings his trailing leg out straight behind him, connecting with the weapon, jarring it in his opponent's hands. Then he is away and they no longer matter.

Again

Spears, swords, even a hammer. Blow after blow he takes and every time his body heals in burning agony.

Again

A lance takes him through the belly, spearing his right kidney and grinding against his hip bone. Thrown by a foundation establishment cultivator, the head and half of the shaft of the spear protrude from his belly. He pulls it through with both hands.

Rear left

Holding the spear in his right hand he pirouettes from his left leg, spinning and using the force of his turn to drive the spear through the throat of one of his pursuers. His stomach burns, and he feels the water and fire qi inside him violently react. Desperate agony erupts as water and fire react, becoming steam qi inside him and scorching at his veins.

Even as their token shatters and the body fades from the world he sees that his pursuers have caught up to him. He has bought all the distance he can.

Time to fight

The first cultivator to him receives a lefthanded punch to the face. A sword comes up to intercept, taking half his fingers off, but the knuckles remain intact to complete their original course, breaking the cultivators nose as his thumb, spared the sword, finds purchase in their eye socket.

A second opponent appears, stabbing at Wei Feng's feet with a spear. Unable to fully dodge in time, Wei Feng loses two toes, even as his return kick embeds still growing fragments of bone into the hand holding the weapon's haft.

A sword slashes at him from the right and he raises his arm, muscles reinforced with defensive blood and water qi.

Blood cauldron scales

The blade meets his defences and they crumble. His hand and lower arm are severed 3 inches below the wrist.

Blood fountains from the stump as even as qi floods from his wrist to fuel a now useless technique. Fiery healing qi floods up from his Dantian to his shoulder and down his arm.

Roaring in agony, Wei Feng aims the spray of blood at the face of the first swordsman blinding him further, even as he floods more water qi into his arm.

At the head of the stump, blood, water and fire qi mix explosively to form steam qi. The stump of Wei Feng's already ruined arm detonates and the swordsman's howls grow higher as boiling blood is ejected into his ruined eye socket.

Even as this happens the spearman stabs at Wei Feng's other foot, taking more toes. Wei Feng kicks out, but he can find no way through the spearman's defence.

Sensing weakness, the second swordsman rushes forward, trying to bypass Wei Feng entirely and reach the vulnerable Rina and Magnus.

Stop him

Deluge's grasp

Globules of water cling and drag at the sprinting swordsman, slowing their flight. Turning, Wei Feng makes an explosive leap after them, accepting a blow form the spearman that severs one leg entirely. He grabs at his pouch with the shattered remains of his hand, grasping for a spirit stone and dumping the power straight into his system.

Flood Dragon's Maw

This is not a technique he is truly ready for. Flooding enough qi to his jaw to risk detonating his own head, he hardens his teeth into swords. He lands half curled around the swordsman's shoulders. Leaning as far forward as he can, he rips and bites at his enemy's throat, slitting it open with razor sharp fangs.

A little longer

He falls to the earth as the enemy vanishes, token shattered by death or desperate will. Twisting, he fights to rise on the shattered remains of one arm and a leg. His channels are a seething morass of boiling qi barely under control.

He gets a leg under him, rising even as something slashes across his eyes.

"AHRAHRHHGGH".

He's blinded, all he can see is black and red, and his stumps are no longer regenerating. But still he can sense them. He feels his opponent's bloodlust, the thrum of water, blood, life in their veins. There are five of them now. And he can still feel his arms feel his legs.

An elbow flashes into the flat of a sword, driving it back. A leg stump knocks into a spear haft, pushing it into collision with a hammer. He feels his arm, hacked off, broken and trampled squirming towards him and holds out his stump. The arm flies the short distance towards him, attaching itself once more to him and he stabs the protruding radius into another eye socket.

Flood Dragon's talons

He aims the stump of his leg at another cultivator and feels the bones of his detached leg pierce their back as it seeks to re-join him.

He fights on.

Knee to spear, knuckles to wrist, stump to chest.

His qi burns, and boils within him. Great jets of power flood out him in broken spurts, clashing powers scouring and destroying his own system to keep his ruined body alive and whole.

Qi shockwave deflect. Blood Cauldron Scales

It isn't enough. His qi is guttering, dying. The power of the false phoenix should have burnt out long ago but persisting just as he has. His ruined left-hand flickers up into a perfect parry just a hair too slow and… Everything…. Stops.

Silence. The air is still. A great power vanishes.

We have won.

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AN: This fought me all the way. All 3000+ words. Battle scenes are hard.

Shoutout to the rest of the 13, mentioned and unmentioned.

As always, comments and criticism are most welcome.

Next up, the aftermath/recovery omake. In which Wei Feng comes to terms with his injuries and works out where to go from there. Fortunately, this is already partly written so hopefully it will come out this turn.


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Edit: @Tarro Threadmarked your omake. Someone else has already updated the sheet.
 
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So, I've just finished binge reading this awesome quest, and while I get that hindsight is 20/20, I still find myself questioning some of the player decisions. I'm honestly staggered that we decided to spend 20 wealth on something fairly frivolous, with only comparatively minor long term benefits, and chose not to invest in things that would massively reduce casualties, despite knowing that we would be facing a pretty devastating scouring at the hands of our enemies.

I understand that without experiencing it directly that we couldn't really know for sure how bad it would be. However, everything we knew made it very clear that it would be catastrophic - the backstory about our Clan being crushed and forced almost to the verge of extinction, as well as everything else we learned IC, makes that clear as day. As the saying goes, it's much better to be safe than sorry, and we could have minimised our casualties while ensuring that we had the best possible foundation from which to grow over the next century.

I haven't read any of the discussion before or afterwards, but I really hope that the lesson has been well and truly learned this time. We really can't afford to be complacent here, and if we recklessly gamble with our people's lives then we're liable to face a Bad End sooner or later.

On an entirely separate and far more positive note, I've read a few of the character omakes as well, and you guys have really outdone yourselves. Fantastic work all around, and it's really nice to see such a genuinely collaborative effort helping to flesh out this world further.
 
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Ptolemy, We knew the devil's price however it was anything but frivolous.
If we survive, we can rebuild the technique palace to eventually empower higher and higher stages of cultivation that will cascade our power projection through the roof.
If it was anything less we wouldn't have even entertained the thought, but it was simply far too juicy to pass up and a one time deal at that, it had to be that juicy to be worth the asking price.
So we took the gamble and paid the price, not only getting the palace but also shaking off the heaven's curse off us on our horrible luck.
 
So, I've just finished binge reading this awesome quest, and while I get that hindsight is 20/20, I still find myself questioning some of the player decisions. I'm honestly staggered that we decided to spend 20 wealth on something fairly frivolous, with only comparatively minor long term benefits, and chose not to invest in things that would massively reduce casualties, despite knowing that we would be facing a pretty devastating scouring at the hands of our enemies.

I understand that without experiencing it directly that we couldn't really know for sure how bad it would be. However, everything we knew made it very clear that it would be catastrophic - the backstory about our Clan being crushed and forced almost to the verge of extinction, as well as everything else we learned IC, makes that clear as day. As the saying goes, it's much better to be safe than sorry, and we could have minimised our casualties while ensuring that we had the best possible foundation from which to grow over the next century.

I haven't read any of the discussion before or afterwards, but I really hope that the lesson has been well and truly learned this time. We really can't afford to be complacent here, and if we recklessly gamble with our people's lives then we're liable to face a Bad End sooner or later.

On an entirely separate and far more positive note, I've read a few of the character omakes as well, and you guys have really outdone yourselves. Fantastic work all around, and it's really nice to see such a genuinely collaborative effort helping to flesh out this world further.
So, a big thing that has been sitting on our backs since the start is that on a cultivator vs cultivator basis, ours were worse because due to picking Formations and Arrays of clan specialties we gave up personal combat boosts. The Technique Palace negates that problem for our Qi Condensation members, and can be repaired to the point of being equal to a Five Point clan creation boon (equivalent to our Bronze Blood) that aids Foundation Building and Core Formation, though I personally don't think we'll really ever get the chance between other things we have to do. At the moment it is probably equivalent to a 1 point boon.

By picking it we also put us in a position where bad rolls would potentially be extremely bad if our Bad Karmic Luck spent some of its uses, which ended up baiting out our Bad Karmic Luck curse and entirely dispelling it. In terms of points we came out about break even since that curse was the result of having a -1 point debt after clan creation.

Therefore picking the technique palace solved one of our problems and made significant progress on another.

Further we've managed to arrange a safeish period for 20 years, make preparations for the potential threats in those 20 years, and are setup to be doing quite well in the next turn.

If we'd set it up that we'd minimize casualties its unlikely the curse would have expended itself to the same extent, therefore meaning we'd have had it in play for this turn and however many after that until it dissipated. A large part of the reason people voted for the option was for the sake of baiting things out so we'd have a clearer playing field.
 
So, a big thing that has been sitting on our backs since the start is that on a cultivator vs cultivator basis, ours were worse because due to picking Formations and Arrays of clan specialties we gave up personal combat boosts. The Technique Palace negates that problem for our Qi Condensation members, and can be repaired to the point of being equal to a Five Point clan creation boon (equivalent to our Bronze Blood) that aids Foundation Building and Core Formation, though I personally don't think we'll really ever get the chance between other things we have to do. At the moment it is probably equivalent to a 1 point boon.

By picking it we also put us in a position where bad rolls would potentially be extremely bad if our Bad Karmic Luck spent some of its uses, which ended up baiting out our Bad Karmic Luck curse and entirely dispelling it. In terms of points we came out about break even since that curse was the result of having a -1 point debt after clan creation.

Therefore picking the technique palace solved one of our problems and made significant progress on another.

Further we've managed to arrange a safeish period for 20 years, make preparations for the potential threats in those 20 years, and are setup to be doing quite well in the next turn.

If we'd set it up that we'd minimize casualties its unlikely the curse would have expended itself to the same extent, therefore meaning we'd have had it in play for this turn and however many after that until it dissipated. A large part of the reason people voted for the option was for the sake of baiting things out so we'd have a clearer playing field.
That point about removing the luck curse is in hindsight though. The players had always placed improving the cultivation of their forces above other actions. Like fortification and improving the economy. Because the players do not feel safe.

How are we going to solve the corruption of our economy in the future (the person put in charge of the economy is a person who would abuse their position out of kindness)?
 
That point about removing the luck curse is in hindsight though. The players had always placed improving the cultivation of their forces above other actions. Like fortification and improving the economy. Because the players do not feel safe.

How are we going to solve the corruption of our economy in the future (the person put in charge of the economy is a person who would abuse their position out of kindness)?
I don't find much point to the question since we have no means to fix it besides teaching Casia how to do her job, which we are going to do and would do for anyone we put in the position. Removing her is pointless and harmful, headhunting for a replacement both takes time and does not actually touch on that some kind of explanation needs to be present when someone rolls bad. Which leaves us with basically going "Okay we need to train someone so that their performance improves. That will take time, so we should pick someone who's flaws are acceptable enough to live with for a while," coupled to picking someone whose purchases are also acceptable.

Casia fits that bill at least for me, and enough other people that it won.

Truthfully I don't consider her issue to be corruption, but a serious flaw that is thankfully less serious than others we had on offer when it came to economics. Like Ms Petty and Ms Nepotism (and Ms Nepotism I do consider a form of corruption if she ended up in economics).

As for the point about the luck thing being hindsight you are right, I was mistaken on the details, we didn't realize that that specifically is what would happen until a few pages had passed and Occi posted the following update (went back and checked). However, the basis of my point that it was a dangerous gamble to get us into a better position, that is still intact because it was a gamble that was an attempt to work towards solving our problems. It did that.

Personally, I think we made out pretty well in that gamble since our luck curse went poof and we got the benefits of the palace which are going to help in the coming conflicts.
 
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Truthfully I don't consider her issue to be corruption, but a serious flaw that is thankfully less serious than others we had on offer when it came to economics. Like Ms Petty and Ms Nepotism (and Ms Nepotism I do consider a form of corruption if she ended up in economics).
Okay, ignoring the problem is the solution you offer?

Points that indicate Casia encourages corruption in the administration.

Casia Zimisce - Casia follows a Dao of Peace, and only kills at direst need. Late Core Formation at 700, she is gentle and kind. As a trainer she would be fair, friendly, and would offer excellent training plans, but would find it difficult to put recruits through hell to temper them fully. As a spymaster she would be focused on information, rarely killing or assassinating your enemies, preferring to find out about them only, or sabotage arrays, or steal items. She would kill on command, but the usual array of assssinations your spymaster conducts would be gone. As an administrator, she would do well, but would find it difficult to punish and reduce the incompetents out of position. Being kind, she is also likely to offer missions and the like to weaker Legions for more Contribution Points than they might strictly deserve, wasting Clan resources inefficiently. Her Legion is a support legion, rebuilding arrays and healing cultivators, and is currently split into several sections among your northern vassals, raising money and goodwill amongst them. Pulling her away will reduce that income and vassal goodwill. She will tend to offer Purchases that assist the weakest of the Clan in some way - often mortals or weaker cultivators.
- Casia will be in control of the administration for decades. Not a single year. Perhaps even centuries to allow corruption to build up.
-"As an administrator, she would do well, but would find it difficult to punish and reduce the incompetents out of position. Being kind, she is also likely to offer missions and the like to weaker Legions for more Contribution Points than they might strictly deserve, wasting Clan resources inefficiently." - Says right here that Casia will allow corruption to fester in her ranks for decades, and encourage corruption if it benefits someone weaker.

We are on the road of keeping her just because of her Purchase habits benefiting the weaker clan members.

The best solution, is to ignore her. I was hoping a better solution would be offered.
 
Okay, ignoring the problem is the solution you offer?

Points that indicate Casia encourages corruption in the administration.


- Casia will be in control of the administration for decades. Not a single year. Perhaps even centuries to allow corruption to build up.
-"As an administrator, she would do well, but would find it difficult to punish and reduce the incompetents out of position. Being kind, she is also likely to offer missions and the like to weaker Legions for more Contribution Points than they might strictly deserve, wasting Clan resources inefficiently." - Says right here that Casia will allow corruption to fester in her ranks for decades, and encourage corruption if it benefits someone weaker.

We are on the road of keeping her just because of her Purchase habits benefiting the weaker clan members.

The best solution, is to ignore her. I was hoping a better solution would be offered.
The solution is not to ignore her. It is to train her as I said, and that is a process that is already underway. Same for anyone else we'd put in the position. The other options I could see are: remove her which is incredibly bad for purposes of continuance and stability, head hunt for a replacement which just changes what sort of problems we have to deal with (which can still lead to incompetence coming through) and has the same issues as removing her, do nothing (which isn't under our control), start micromanaging things as Manuel, maybe some other stuff.

And while you may disagree, on my end I see us on the road to have her because her purchases are good, and her personality isn't completely awful and thus a good basis to start from. And that's really all I have to say.
 
IIRC we can spend Manual actions to help our new councilors and their flaws not be as bad which is good but Manual actions are kind of precious so it's a honest question if it's worth Manual's time especially since most of the flaws are also the Councillors' strengths meaning they can be good and bad depending of the dice.
 
So, I've just finished binge reading this awesome quest, and while I get that hindsight is 20/20, I still find myself questioning some of the player decisions. I'm honestly staggered that we decided to spend 20 wealth on something fairly frivolous, with only comparatively minor long term benefits, and chose not to invest in things that would massively reduce casualties, despite knowing that we would be facing a pretty devastating scouring at the hands of our enemies.

I understand that without experiencing it directly that we couldn't really know for sure how bad it would be. However, everything we knew made it very clear that it would be catastrophic - the backstory about our Clan being crushed and forced almost to the verge of extinction, as well as everything else we learned IC, makes that clear as day. As the saying goes, it's much better to be safe than sorry, and we could have minimised our casualties while ensuring that we had the best possible foundation from which to grow over the next century.

I haven't read any of the discussion before or afterwards, but I really hope that the lesson has been well and truly learned this time. We really can't afford to be complacent here, and if we recklessly gamble with our people's lives then we're liable to face a Bad End sooner or later.

On an entirely separate and far more positive note, I've read a few of the character omakes as well, and you guys have really outdone yourselves. Fantastic work all around, and it's really nice to see such a genuinely collaborative effort helping to flesh out this world further.
first of all the technique palace isn't frivolous at all, it should mitigate all future losses of qi condensation disciples by a large margin. Secondly no amount of medicinal pills is going to keep a Nascent Soul with the heavens by his side from squishing a bunch of Core Formation cultivators, so we basically traded half of our Qi condensation disciples now in exchange for reducing or losses of them forevermore. The trials are not a one time thing, they happen every century, and we have previously purchased lifesaving pills every century, and our clan was still crushed and forced almost to the verge of extinction. Safe is clearly not an option during the tirals, but we would definitely be sorry if we missed out on the opportunity that the Technique Palace offers. The timing was actually fortuitous, since we still had 40 years of peace with the cannibals to recover after the trials. This is literally the best way to permanently strengthen our foundation. It was certainly a gamble, but it was either take this gamble or die slowly. This is the first time in a long time that the Clans future is actually looking brighter than the present.
 
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