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Ferenike 25 - Hunting, Prelude to the Journey
Ferenike 25 - Hunting, Prelude to the Journey​

Her travels had taken her to a little place called Red Noodle Village. It was a tiny little town tucked away several li northwest of the Hundred Li Soup Pot of the Simmering Soup Sect, ensconced in a small valley where the red grasses that went into their soup and noodle dough grew, sustained by arrays and magic talismans. Not much more than five thousand people lived here, and only five other cultivators lived and acted as guards for the town and arrays, though most of them made livings as maintenance workers and administrators on those arrays. She'd come here in her latest set of contracts and jobs seeking out a bandit who apparently had a habit of taming spiders and setting them on people if his extortion schemes failed, murdering them and earning him the moniker of 'Jade Spider' among those in the martial world.

Red Noodle Village was the latest in his course towards the Spider Gate the Simmering Soup Sect oversaw, and the Foundation Building Spirit Spiders that laired there. She'd pursued him quietly for about a month now, learning his habits to properly model his way of thought. The result of that had her sat in this small tea shop as she drank a sweet red tea. The similarities to her time in the west where she fought that group of Saber Disciples was eerie honestly. But also kind of funny.

The room was a lot smaller than the one from that past incident though, only four tables, all of them crammed nearly within reach of each other. There were three people in here besides her, two other customers having a quiet business deal at the table farthest from her, their heads shielded by hats that were a squarish frame of wood with linen between the spars and their robes were white linen. The proprietor, Jin Chen, was a tall and thin man with bright red hair, slowly organizing his cups and caring for the fire for the tea behind the counter. His son, a big and burly boy, was checking the water barrels by the side of the porch. What could be a quiet and calm day, if there wasn't a tension in the air causing everyone to sit nervously, eyes darting about, and how she knew for a fact that Jin Chen was particularly rich for this village and that his son was hiding their wealth in the barrels.

That tension was further increased when a tall and war hardened man swaggered in. His skin was bronzed, like the Clan's and his eyes were brownish. His cultivation was a half step from Foundation Building in the ninth Heavenstage, blaring loudly all over the room.

Ferenike was hiding her own with some tricks and tools she had picked up, presenting herself as a third Heavenstage. She hunched slightly in her seat as he walked by and she could feel his scowl deepen as he looked at her briefly before moving on. His clothing was traveler's garb, sturdy and well cared for much like hers and his black hair was bound back in a ponytail as he strutted through the room up to the counter and slammed his hand down onto it, causing the proprietor to jump.

"I'd like something strong to drink old man." He sneered, his way of speaking young, matching his youthful face. This bandit was probably younger than her, which was an odd thought. The mortal proprietor was shaking slightly, his hands kept almost completely still through years of experience in self-control, the whites of his eyes incredibly wide. Ferenike had to commend Jin Chen on his self control, not looking at her even though he knew who she was and was in on her plan.

"A-ah, may this one have your name while I serve you?" Jin Chen asked as he bowed and bent to work, fastidiously not looking at the man before him. Ferenike's eyes only looked at him from the corner of her eye. The other two customers were also ignoring the exchange and were pale with fear.

"No." The bandit snapped, slicing his hand through the air. "Bring me a drink!" He repeated his command. Jin Chen hurriedly continued, bustling about with a cup and pot. In the time it took to pull some alcohol out from under the counter, Jade Spider spent a great deal of attention looking around the small shop and gauging the worth of the woven pennants hanging from the walls and the set of sabers on the wall above Jin Chen's head. Their scabbards were decorated with flower petals shaped in golden wire and a beautiful and dark wood formed the main body. Jade Spider's eyes latched onto them.

"What's the story behind those blades, eh?" He asked in a nasty tone.

Jin Chen hesitated, his hands freezing as he set the drink before the bandit. "Those...," He swallowed, "Those were my grandfather's, a cultivator of the Simmering Soup Sect before his death a hundred years ago."

Jade Spider's eyes lit with greed and he took a drink. "Interesting! I want them." He declared, and in the silence that fell he turned in his chair and looked at everyone in the room. "In fact I think all of you will give me some money as well, so I don't kill you." Then his eyes flicked to Ferenike.

"And you woman, you have nothing to say for yourself hmm?" He shot at her, a suspicious look on his face.

She shrunk in on herself, and she hoped he bought the act.

He snorted. "Thought not, I'd crush you like a bug. You'll give me any treasures you have as well as your spirit stones." He snapped his fingers. "Hurry up and put them on the counter." He said as he turned around, his suspicions fading as he discarded her.

Her intents and thoughts calmed, falling away. She acted. Jade Spider had only just begun to dodge as he felt the faintest hint of her aura shift, but it was too late as her hand wrapped around his shoulder and tossed him bodily out of the open door of the shop. He soared through the air with a yell and then landed with a thud and a howl of pain in the sand outside, rolling to a stop.

Something clung to her hands and Ferenike looked down. Thumbnail sized spiders were clinging to her arms and hands, trying to bite through the glass armor that had been summoned around her brassy metal flesh. There was a whumpf as red fire erupted from her hands and a series of pops and shrieks as the spiders exploded and she stepped out of the tea house and into the street.

Jade Spider was already scuttling to his feet, regaining his stance from the stunning force of his impact and he took up a stance as she approached.

"Gods be damned bitch, who are you?" He growled at her, paling as he felt her aura rise to its full might in the tenth Heavenstage.

"Golden Scorpion. Heard you've killed more than a few people, Little Spider." She needled back, her voice calm and ringing like metal.

He squinted, wracking his brain and he tensed up, his stance becoming even more serious and cautious as he sized her up. "Don't know you, bitch. Doesn't matter either. You'll die too!" He shouted and then something seemed to outright burst from his skin.

A tide of fist sized black-brown spiders exploded from him, the mortals on the streets who hadn't already cleared out screaming and running faster at the sight. The wave of spiders swept towards her and then formed a towering ten foot tall humanoid figure in front of her. Hundreds of black eyes glittered at her and one amorphous arm lashed out towards her with incredible speed.

She bent to the side like a reed and it passed through the space she'd just vacated, unable to correct as she raised her spear, suddenly in her hands. Shifting her feet in a blur of hot sand, she slashed with the long head of her spear and struck the arm before it could impact the building behind her. There was a hissing, popping shriek as the 'fist' separated from the arm, some of the spiders slain, and fell to the sand with a splat. The figure flinched back and then, seeming emboldened struck out again in a huge wave that would swallow everything behind her if she moved.

His clicking, shrieking kiai rang through the air as the wave towered over Ferenike. There was a snapping hiss and then a roar of expanding air as a red-purple burst of fire swallowed him up and filled the street with red light. His screams were consumed by the shrieks of the flame, and then it bored entirely through him and exploded out of his back, lashing at the air.

A shadow leapt nimbly away from the inferno, hissing and clicking thousands of fangs.

Crunch crunch crunch. Out of the flames walked Ferenike. The sounds of her boots crushing the molten sand and glass she had created underscored the crackle of the flames behind her, and she advanced into the space he had vacated so suddenly as they faded away.

The mass of arachnids that Jade Spider had become shifted, his chitin rustling against itself, rising again into a human shape only about a foot taller than her, much of his bulk burned away and glared at her with a bloodshot human eye peering from within the mass of spiders. "You are an incredibly bothersome woman Golden Scorpion." He growled at her in a buzzing, clicking voice as dozens upon dozens of pedipalps flexed and clear drops of poison dripped onto the sands to hiss and spit as they dissolved the sand.

She raised her spear and entered a ready stance of her Golden Scorpion Style, knees bent and left foot forward, ready to scuttle to either side. Her spear waited, tip at shoulder height as she focused intently on him. While she had plateaued for now with this style until she grew stronger, it was still useful.

He jumped forward and seemed to burst again. She was already moving without thought, her body acting on well trained impulse to strike at the dozen clones he attacked her with in sweeping strikes of her spear. Each clone was a mass of spiders in the shape of a man, like he himself was. Each shrieked kiai as they struck at her with dozens of blows.

She was already in amongst them however and with a sweeping kick launched glass spears as long as she was tall into them, her inner soldiers dutifully shepherding her Qi as she attacked again and again and again. Bronze spear and glass spears lashed out, carving a circle out of the group with a dozen stinging blows as she tried to advance. Many of the clones fell and dispersed as they hit the ground. But she found that every one that fell skittered toward her in a wave of arachnids, forcing her to give ground and herding her towards the blows the others were trying to make. There were soon so many of them that they began to build up around her in a growing dome.

She stabbed her spear into the latest clone to fall before her, sticking the weapon into the ground firmly, and used it as a support as she leapt high into the air above the mass before it could fully enclose and swallow her. Rotating in midair she gathered up her qi infused shards in her throat and then exhaled onto the mass below her.

Insectile ichor and human blood burst out of the spiders as she struck, filling most of the street with a howling vortex of flame and whipping sand. She stopped after a moment and landed on the butt of her spear, balancing there with ease as the sand ceased swirling. Below her the fires ate at the street, transforming a long swatch of it into reddish glass. The spiders that had survived skittered around the pools of fire and molten sand in three streams and gathered up in a lump which slowly resolved into a much worse looking Jade Spider. His clothes were torn and tattered, smoking, massive weeping burns crisscrossing his body and face as he stared up at her and panted from where he lay. But she could feel his aura. Still strong, and this was starting to tax her.

Then he slammed his palms into the ground and sent himself flying through the air towards her with a scream, hand outstretched like a claw. She bent her knee and swept his arm aside with her hand, sending him off course. Instinct screamed to not touch a poison user for long. He soared above her, spitting curses as she dived off her spear and reaching out ripped it out of the ground and then spun in the air to smack his ribs with its haft, sending him careening through the air. He landed, bounced and then righted himself as she landed and he rushed in with a frantic, frenetic style that forced her back.

Red light bloomed from her and swept the street with blinding light. It swallowed everything, wiping out all outlines and details and bringing with it an incredible heat, though her eyes could pierce its blinding illumination, as her own power did not impede her. He shouted and Ferenike struck, her spear lashing out as she covered it with her glass, and sixty four of her qi invested stars led the charge of her soldiers.

As her technique rumbled through her meridians like an avalanche the glimmering spear slammed into Jade Spider and she felt his qi network buckle under the blow. It punched through his gut and out the other side, sending him straight off his feet and smashing into the sand. The light faded away, leaving spots in the eyes of any still watching the battle. Ferenike suffered no such impairment and stared down at Jade Spider. Red flames licked at the massive cleft she had torn in his guts and burned under his skin, eating through it rapidly. He gasped, twitching and clutching at his chest as his body burned until he choked and stopped moving.

In the next moment his skin dissolved into burning silk strands and the corpses of spiders. She was already whirling, reacting to the man falling silently on her from the sky. He'd leapt off of one of the buildings behind her. Unbeknownst to her he had expended his False Blue Spider Molt treasure for a burst of strength during his attack with the clones while her vision was obscured by the mass of his pets and had hidden himself away while she dealt with them.

In his hands his twin Ebony Gem Fang daggers sliced for her collarbones and throat, curved, viciously sharp, and filled with deadly poison that would kill her instantly. He could not correct his course when her arm lashed out with incredible speed, knocking aside his left arm, breaking it and sending him spinning in the air. Her spear thrust in a golden blur and punctured his throat in a spray of arterial blood, jerking him to a stop as he twitched on it like a trapped animal. His knives fell from nerveless fingers, and shattered as the qi he used to fuel them guttered out and they hit the ground. His life ran out of him, draining with his blood onto the sands.

Ferenike paused for a moment, her glass armor stained red with his blood like the sands. Then with a heave of effort she kicked him off the end of her spear and a quick burst of fire burned his blood off her body and set the sand at her feet to melting in a gust of hot air.

She took a breath of the hot air, and relaxed. Her spear disappeared back into storage. She took the time to settle herself, occupying her eyes by scanning for any damage to their surroundings, as the inhabitants of the town started coming out of their homes and businesses. The street for at least ten meters in either direction was a mass of superheated glass and semi-liquid sand, craters, and tall spears of red glass embedded into the sand. The corpses of fist sized spiders littered the devastation as well, and her enemy's corpse was at her feet. The buildings were mostly unharmed, though she could see smoke stains and damaged paint from where her fires had burned nearby and sand had lashed at their sides, respectively.

She took a final breath. For as similar as this might have been to the incident with those kids, she didn't feel regret for this. He'd already caused far too much harm and could not be turned aside from his path. Which left him at the mercy of herself and the Clan's opinions on bandits.

People gathered at the edges and then someone piped up as they thumped into something. "Gods damned lady, that one move was bright as hell! I can barely see shit in front of me!" They said grumpily. There was a panicked sounding argument immediately after.

She smiled slightly and bowed towards the voices. "My apologies, good sir, it should pass in a few minutes. Anyone else hurt?" She asked. She received a cascade of no's and other reassurances. Not long after that she waved the guard captain forward from where he had been stationed near the back of the tea house she had used, keeping the family there safe.

He was a short fellow in the sixth Heavenstage, the most advanced member of the guard here both in age and power. He saluted in the Clan style and then tapped his helmet at her. "Well then, I'd say that's a job well done Lady Ferenike. Would you like to take tea at the minister's home?" He said genially.

"That would be lovely." She said absently, used to the routine by this point. They always wanted to pay her in their fancy sitting rooms.



She'd been traveling east for weeks now, heading towards the Silver Grain Airship Spire, a northern stop-off point and secondary base for the Airship Fleet. Her hunting had turned up a tidy little profit and more than that had led her to some important connections from several thankful ministers which had given her an invitation to speak to the Ship Captain of the Silver Liesun.

One of the Simmering Soup Sect's fourteen airships, the Liesun was slated to be part of the shipping caravan sent to Yuan and then Qiguai when the Qiguai's mystical doorway opened for Qi Condensation. It'd be traveling with the Shafufen airship as part of that convoy, both ships carrying a heavy complement of Soup Sect disciples. She had it on good authority from those friends of hers that the head of the sect had decreed there were to be larger guard complements on this trip to Yuan and had opened the doors on limited mercenary contracts under the control of the Ship Captains for the occasion. Which left her with a useful lever in order to get a place on the ship.

The first sign of the Spire were the communities built around it, places built up with magic and clever water collection methods to allow for the growth of vital foods. She flew down the paths between these small communities, noting the people she passed, many tending the gardens and wells of their lands tucked away in the shade of the dunes. The next sign was the hazy image of its top rising over the horizon, the entire structure a sharply glinting metal spike like a giant nail sticking up out of the desert. The Spires were works of the Simmering Soup Sect's disciples and mortals, like their airships, though if she remembered her history right the Spires included architectural knowledge and assistance purchased at a premium from the Clan several hundred years ago. At its top she could see the vague oblong shape of the Liesun hovering above the flat cargo platform that made up the top of the Spire and gave it its' nail shape.

She urged her camel to go faster, trotting towards the distant construction and kicking up dust and sand from the yellowed road surface. The roads grew wider and the amount of people on them rose as she got closer, goods being transported to and from the structure. It was not too long before it fully resolved into complete solidity, a bronze monolith that towered nearly five kilometers in the air and was more than a hundred meters thick at its base. The nail head far above cast an enormous shade onto the desert below and in its shadow a much denser community had grown up around it, the city ringing the entire structure and encircling it with a huge array-inscribed walls. Even far away she could see the towers and other buildings climbing up the central tower of the Spire, several tens of thousands of people living in the city. The air had changed as well, cooler and more humid as faint wisps of cloud gathered around the walls of the Spire and under its wide head.

Apparently that wasn't a result of any magic, except the natural magic of the weather, as the clouds found it easier to gather near the Spire's immense size. Water sometimes dewed on its surface and then ran down into the city's water catch system. A fascinating little tidbit she didn't quite believe until she saw it glinting in the morning sunlight like that.

Near the gates of the city hundreds and hundreds of people moved down the road in two parallel streams separated by a median of raised stone from which rose light towers to illuminate the roadway at night. She kept moving, most of the crowd parting around her easily as they recognized her Legion robes and cultivation, and soon reached the gates.

It was a massive circular portal, the gates two halves of the circle and emblazoned with the soup pot symbol of the Simmering Soup Sect in shining silver. The enormous bronze wall had pennants with the same symbol flapping along its' top, hung under the flag of the Clan. The chatter and shouts of the people all around her were immense as she made her way towards the open portal.

Each of the two doors was opened, flung outwards to let traffic through. Across the gate a lower wall was strung, only a few tens of meters high with guard stations placed along its length. Passing through the open gate, giving the expansive arch above her head an appreciative look, she moved through the low wall without difficulty as they certified her purpose and legion identity.

The city on the other side started with a wide boulevard which then rapidly broke up into an organic growth of warehouses, bazaars, hawkers and an incredible number of shops. Animals and people moved through this little port given its proximity to the Hundred Li Soup Pot. Sect disciples of many stripes also moved about here, marked out by their robes which bore the markings of the sect and who sometimes carried oversized ladles or soup pots. They eyed her curiously and she saw many covert messages passed around as she entered and walked the city in such an obvious fashion.

Very few of the disciples were at the ninth Heavenstage, and those that she saw were usually a half step from Foundation Building. Here it seemed few went along the unorthodox paths, like her. That made her frown, saddened. Something of a loss in her mind. Those going along the unorthodox paths could discover new knowledge and new enlightened insights to bring back to their clans, which was in large part why she found the nine pillars stage of Foundation Building so intriguing. But it was each person's business how far they went on the path. If the world changed, perhaps they might explore more.

After spending a good half hour wandering around the city and taking in the sights of its towering buildings and fountains and wet air she approached a disciple of the soup sect and politely extracted directions to the Spire Lift from her. Moving clockwise around the Spire base she eventually found it, a yawning gate carved into the bottom of the Spire with three defensive towers on either side and two walls blocking off the entrance. The gate doors themselves were a portcullis and single door of Spirit Iron. Waving her invitation in front of the gate guards got her through the walls guarding the gate.

The gate itself caught her eye, as it had a clever system of pulleys which pulled the massive reinforced door up into a slot in the ceiling. She surmised it could likely be dropped in a handful of seconds if the alarm was called, the incredible mass crushing anything unlucky enough to be caught under it.

Passing through the outer wall of the Spire, it rapidly cooled further, and the sunlight was replaced by the luminescence of arrays and glowing green stones. Ferenike rode down the tunnel in a stream of people who looked like Soup Sect disciples, though they wore strange white uniforms, and cargo haulers, passing from one spot of illumination to another rapidly until the air started to warm again as humidity rose. It spiked when they reached the Lift structure itself. A massive tube in the center of the Spire, she could feel hot air rising rapidly around the edges through vents set in the footpath, and see in the center of the tube a circular floor suspended by large mechanical wheels. The entire Lift structure was an automaton of immense size, which rode rails by means of the iron wheels attached to its edge in four places.

She felt like a chickpea on a god's plate on this massive thing, giddiness making her eyes and feet bounce with energy. She could barely sit still in the saddle, to the grumbling consternation of her mount. She was so close to seeing new horizons with her own eyes!

A moment of discussion with staff of the lift had her dismounting and being shepherded around the platform to a loading dock and into the fenced in passenger compartment at its center. The animals were lead elsewhere on the craft as the cargo was tied and anchored down to the surface. She was taller than many of the other people in the area and she was strong enough to muscle her way to the edge of the fence and watched the staff bustle about industriously.

It took about half an hour for everything to be tied down and fastened properly. After the last crate was bolted down and the last bleating animal secured to their tether a warning alarm started blaring.

"Greetings travelers! I am Soup Master Shi, please prepare for launch and remember to brace!" A bombastic voice hollered, amplified by magic to echo over the entire platform.

Ferenike set her feet and felt the surge in the air as Qi flowed through it, concentrated below and she felt heat rising from somewhere deep under her feet as well. The rush of hot air intensified with a tea kettle hiss, amplified to gargantuan proportions, and then the Lift lurched into motion with a cacophonous bang as locking brakes released.

There was an immense roar, swallowing up the cries of the other passengers as it soared into the air propelled by arrays in the wheels and a massive geyser-like steam vent. The lights in the tube raced by in a blur of green, smearing together into one line. The acceleration nearly forced some people to their knees as they held on to whatever they could. Quickly however the shriek of steam quieted and the incredible acceleration of the Lift stopped. The mass of metal carried on however, skating up the rails on momentum and the stable velocity of the wheels.

Ferenike laughed, many of the other passengers nearby flinching back from her as she smiled so wide her face hurt. She was too happy to notice, and leaned against the top of the railing to watch. She wasn't sure exactly how long it took for them to see the light above them for the first time, but they rapidly began to slow as they approached, causing her to feel lighter and lighter until they came to a stop in a massive bronze and glass dome at the top of the Spire with a loud ka-chunk.

Senior Disciple Shi spoke again as the loading area of the Lift lined up with the exit dock. "Alright travelers, you have arrived at the Spire-Top! Please disembark in an orderly fashion!" He said cheerily as people started to totter off of the amazing device.

Ferenike was nearly skipping as she ran through the loading dock towards a number of booths set in the wall of the doom where more gate guards sat. Waving her invitation in front of the guards caused their eyes to widen as they saw the seal embossed on it. They let her through quickly and she stepped out onto the top of the Spire. It was an almost mirror bright expanse of hot metal, the heat radiating up from the soles of her boots and she saw more of the strange uniformed disciples running all over the place carrying tools and materials in a hectic bustle.

What dominated her vision however was the hundred meter long mass of the Silver Liesun, hanging in the air to one side of the platform and tied in place with thick lines anchored to the metal by massive bronze loops.

The hull of the ship was shaped from long planks of Qi infused wood, dark black-brown in color. She could see a thick bronze keel along the bottom going from one end to the other. The entire ship was sleek and much longer than it was wide, hanging like a knife in the air.

What caught her attention the most were the three enormous masts sticking up at least thirty meters from the ship. The foremast had a small triangular sail, the tallest main mast had two triangular sails set on either side of it which ran in a direction perpendicular to the front sail. And then the mizzen-mast furthest back had a huge square sail hanging from it.

She could see the arrays carved into the masts and feel the qi concentrating into the sails, ready to propel the ship. For these ships wind was only a helpful suggestion and source of fuel via the Qi the winds carried. The aft of the ship had a bulbous construction rising above the deck and a massive propeller extending out from it. There was a frizz of thunder in the air which tingled over her metallic skin. The bow of the ship had a silver falcon figure head, its feathers seeming to be carved into the shapes of flames. And all around the ship's superstructure she saw more of those disciples in the strange uniforms, made up of long pants which tied off at the ankles and long sleeved tunics with similar ties around the wrists. They were sailors' uniforms she surmised.

She became aware of long-suffering looks being thrown her way as she gaped at the ship and that prompted her to stop staring like a child. It did not stop her from stealing glances at everything that was going on around her and the ship hovering there in the air as she headed for the loudest voice she could hear shouting orders. Decent chance that was the captain.

The sailors cleared out as she started moving, parting around her like the sands around a rock. A moment later the source of the voice she was following revealed itself as a massive man easily half again as wide as her with a shock of gold-white hair, sideburns, and thick muscles cladding his form, standing atop a crate in front of a desk making notes in a book he held in one hand when he wasn't pointing vigorously at people and shouting at the top of his huge lungs.

His cultivation stood in the Early Foundation Building it took him only a moment to notice her, his latest order given and then his gaze snapped to her. "You got business with the Liesun?" He hollered at her across the space separating them boisterous, a crinkle of suspicion on his brow. "I don't have room for anyone but disciples or mercs, nor the time." He grumbled.

She smiled and bowed with clasped hands. "I have here an invitation to speak with one Ship Captain Huan. Would that be you?" She asked as she held it up between two fingers. By how his eyes flashed between her and the invite and one eyebrow rose she could tell he knew how powerful she was and what she was likely here for.

He grunted and crossed his arms as she approached. "Yeah I'm Captain Huan Wei. If you would?" He said, hand making motions towards the invitation. She straightened and flicked it across the three meters separating them and he caught it easily, snatching it out of the air. He examined the seal, running thick fingers over it and then unfolding the piece of paper and reading the short description of her exploits as 'Golden Scorpion' in the Simmering Soup Sect. His brow crinkled further before he folded it back up and tucked it into his uniform, suspicion being overtaken by consideration.

"Well then Golden Scorpion, if you would join my ship till Qiguai I would be your Senior." He said, standing straighter.

Ferenike nodded slightly. "That won't be an issue Captain Huan, this one is perfectly willing to lend her strength for the trip, as laid out in the decrees of the Sect Head." She said.

He snorted, rubbing his chin and thick sideburns. "Right, we shall exchange strikes." He said, sliding into a wide stance, heavy feet settling onto the metal and his hands coming up in large fists.

Ferenike blinked. That was a bit more direct than she was expecting for a test, from a man this intelligent. Maybe he was just impatient. She slid into an opening stance for Golden Scorpion Style, right foot extended and settling into a low stance. One hand was her stinger, another a pincer.

He breathed in and she saw his lead foot begin to shift forward as muscles tensed across his body in a wave. As his lead foot came up in a snapping kick she brushed it aside with her pincer hand and shot inward with a quick pitter-patter of feet and stabbed her stinger hand towards his solar plexus. What followed was a hideously quick exchange of blows, Ferenike and Huan punching and kicking and swatting aside blows with nearly unthinking instinct drilled into them by training. To the spectating sailors they saw both fighters nearly disappear into blurs of yellow and white and the rapid bang-bang-bang of flesh meeting metal.

"Hah! Enough!" Huan Wei shouted as they separated, slamming to a stop as Ferenike twisted away and landed lightly. Neither had as much as a scratch or bruise on them. "Well I'd say you're hired just for that, your style is very well polished."

"Thank you Senior, this Junior finds your own style formidable." She said lightly. And it was, the sheer speed of a Foundation Expert presenting a rather intractable problem for her. Even if she was tough enough to survive him for a good while he had the two pronged issues common to facing a Foundation Building expert in his greater speed and stamina. She'd likely lose. An idle part of her considered how that fight might progress as she straightened and bowed, glancing up at him from beneath her hat, the flame in her eye glinting.

He snorted. "Well, come. We need to sort out your pay. All you gawkers get back to work!" He roared as he walked over to his desk and pulled out a scroll, handing it to her. "This is the contract I'm offering."

She pulled it open and hummed at the dense legalese. The first few pages were basically various declarations indicating the authority of the Sect Head and Ship Captain to prosecute violations of the contract in increasingly violent and cruel ways, including such activities as staking out in the desert to be killed by the sun. It then moved on to the actual benefits of becoming what was termed a 'Traveler-Guard', which were reductions in prices for riding the Airship to your preferred destination and right to treasures found by yourself on the voyage to Qiguai. There were the general clauses about payment in spirit stones if one wished to convert the treasure, as well as healing and food and quarters aboard the vessel. All in all the Sect would still be making a profit, but as she was essentially paying for a speedy and safe trip to the wonders of Qiguai she figured most would find it worth it.

She had a general understanding that other contract offers were available for those with less to pay than her and who sought a small profit, but those were for mercenaries who were interested in being long term guards and not Traveler-Guards as she wished to become. After continued reading about halfway through the document there was something that caught her eye, a clause specifying that those 'who can materially provide the defense of the winds and air for the Sect's vessel were entitled for negotiated compensation'.

She raised her eyes from the contract and looked up at Huan. He'd continued shouting his orders as usual while she read, and the snap of paper as she waved the contract in his direction made his gaze snap back to her with a questioning expression on his face. "While Senior's test was quite thorough, I am quite capable when it comes to throwing weapons, particularly spears."

He squinted and huffed. "Can you kill a Poison-Belching Vulture at three hundred meters?" He asked.

That would be a gigantic gangly bird whose wingspan was greater than ten meters which liked to lurk in the lowest hills of the clan's mountain borders, ranging all the way up to ninth Heavenstage. "I could kill ten in the blink of an eye." She said confidently and then snapped an arm out, causing a spike of glass two meters long to slam out into the air at ridiculous speed, sailing far over the edge of the Spire and out of sight.

"Good enough. Now lets negotiate your compensation..." He said, which precipitated a long discussion over tea, which appeared rapidly as she sat in front of his desk, one leg crossed over the other and her hands clasped on her knee.

They spoke for a solid hour on the details, and she ended up negotiating for the much despised (to most cultivators) day watch hours and her spear throwing abilities in return for a greater reduction in her pricing, though he managed to kick the price up a bit when she was forced to indicate her only surface level knowledge of sailing. When all was said and done she'd still be mostly cleaned out, but she wouldn't be eating into any emergency supplies like she might have been.

When they were done Captain Huan had a tired expression on his face, and waved her off. "Go on junior, find Huan Zhi. He'll give you your station and stay there until we launch. We have about three hours." The unspoken 'so you quit bothering me' was heard loudly, much to her amusement.

"Yes Captain Huan." She said as she sprung to her feet and saluted as she'd seen his sailors do. She stepped away and made her way to the gangway strung to the side of the ship with a hop in her step.

She made it up to the deck in just a few excited hops and there found herself getting slapped on the back by a fresh faced looking young man with a power at the ninth stage. "I'm one of Captain Huan's assistants, Huan Zhi, you're to take the front bow. How much experience do you have with sailing?" He asked her.

She snorted. "I know the terms and enough to stay out of trouble Disciple Huan Zhi." She said.

He nodded, face seeming to naturally settle into a frown as his black hair blew under the hat he wore. "Then you have your orders. I must return to my duties." He said brusquely.

Ferenike didn't care what had him so tense, she was already moving towards the figure head. Moving around those running about the deck gracefully she marveled in the slight bobbing motion she could feel in the deck as the ship rose up and down slightly in the air and the way the wind howled quietly around her ears. She would have to explore the ship if she got the chance!

Reaching the figure head in another moment she found steps carved into its back which led up to a watch post behind the falcon's head. She looked out at the immense expanse of desert in front of her and her heart seemed to soar. She was traveling~

All of those horizons she needed to see were just in reach. She laughed, pure glee echoing over the ship.



@occipitallobe and this is the start of book 2! Another fate supplemental etc etc

And we're finally starting the Yuan and Qiguai journey arcs! YAYAHAHAHAH I am super excited.

As an aside on my writing process the first section of this omake was initially going to be a middle scene for the previous omake, but I decided that was terrible and I could do better and open in typical Ferenike fashion, i.e Dead People!

Hope you all enjoyed.
 
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Ferenike 26 - Hunting Flight
Ferenike 26 - Hunting Flight​

Ferenike sat on the aft of the Silver Liesun, legs hanging over the edge, and smoked her pipe as she looked down at the propeller blades churning the air. Lightning arced between them, leaping out from the back of the ship into them, snapping and booming every second or so and it made the air tingle on her skin. The most impressive things to her were the arrays carved into the blades and the immense amounts of energy that thrummed through them, causing them to glow a bright orange-red as they cut the air. The wind roared behind them with the power in the propellers, and it rippled in their wake as they flew faster than most birds.

She remembered how it had looked when the propellers had started and they had set off. After throwing off the anchor lines there had been a hiss of steam and the booming thump of thunder beneath her feet. Heat had expanded in a wave from the aft along with a strange zesty, citrusy, smell. Her hair had frizzed in the static filled air and then there'd been a heavy ka-chunk and a roar as the propeller started up. The wind had shrieked as her feet had lurched beneath her and qi rushed to the sails, and she'd seen sparks arcing up and over the aft to snake through the air like serpents.

Now, she looked back up, scanning the dunes beneath her which were undergoing a slow transition from gold to brown to red as they neared the mountains, the sun beating down from overhead. When her posts allowed she'd been spending time watching the propellers, but the desert out here was a fantastic view in its own right. The setting sun had sometimes seemed to light it on fire as rays of light had bounced off of the sands.

A little part of her was jealous thinking about how birds must constantly be able to marvel at the sight. Feeling the wind of their passage whip through their feathers, like it whipped through her hair when she pushed back her hat, and seeing such wonders. Not the sort of thought she was used to, but it just added to the overall experience.

They'd only been sailing for a few days and they had already crossed more than a thousand kilometers, faster than she ever could on a mount. Training her eyes behind the ship she looked out, circulating her qi under the pounding heat of the sun, and listened to the passage of orders and movement of sailors on a ship underway.

With a squint she thought she could see a brief flicker of the Shafufen off to the starboard side and several li behind them. When she'd been told they'd travel with the Shafufen she'd thought they'd be within shouting distance of the other ship most of the time, but that wasn't the case, as their formation called for room to maneuver and weapons clearance.

And they both definitely had weapons beyond their cultivator compliments. In her moments below decks she'd seen the rows upon rows of scorpion ballistae meant to fire massive bolts as tall as her in synchronized barrages, and stranger array devices that shot fireballs and blasts of cutting wind. Some were also placed along the railing of the main deck, and on the top of the aft structure, with three on each side of the flat area behind her. Her own estimation was that the cultivators onboard were the main defensive force though, largely given sheer variety and power, but like other weapons the emplacements were useful tools.

The ship's wheel and navigational bridge were also present up here, currently manned by a helmswoman who spent her time entirely focused on the compass and other devices affixed on a plinth near the wheel.

She heard someone as they clomped up the steps and over the decking. Ferenike shifted slightly and stood, turning so she could keep one eye on the sky behind the ship while she looked at the person approaching. One of the crew, a shorter girl who sat at the seventh heavenstage, with a short and poofy brown haircut, thin and wiry limbs, bronzed skin and a pair of glasses perched on her nose in front of brown eyes. She was sweating in the heat and looked rather miserable.

"Shen Li? You draw the short straw this time?" Ferenike asked, tone moderately commiserating. She liked it up here in the sun, but barely anyone else did.

The girl flopped against the back railing and huffed. "How in all the hells do you actually like it up here Golden Scorpion. Did the sun cook your brain as a girl?" The other girl complained.

Ferenike burst out laughing. "Gods, maybe! Dunno, it'd explain some of the things I've done. Used to be I was bothered by it as much as anyone but-"

"Then you did what cultivators do, and cheated." Shen Li finished with a vaguely jealous pout. They'd had this conversation before.

"Yep!" Ferenike said and then made a gesture out over the side. "Shafufen is over there, but the only other interesting thing to look at up here is the sand."

"Joy. Well anyway save me some wine for when you come back to share the watch." She said as she pulled a hat over her head and tried to stand in the shade of the mast to escape the pounding heat.

Ferenike waved behind her as she left the other girl to her watch. "Will do!"

She smiled slightly. It was a bit like the Legions oddly enough! And thus it was incredibly comfortable, because as it so happened sailors and legionnaires complained about rather similar things, so she could just pick up the old complaints and join in like a fish in water. People opened up when you could bitch together.

She clanked quietly down the stairs, stepping onto the main deck. To her right the mizzen-mast sprouted up out of the deck like a huge tree. At this time of day while they were just cruising most of the people were up in the rigging or under shades where they could be. There was one carpenter by the main mast working under an awning with a spar of wood he had set on one knee and was carefully shaving down with a chisel. Beside him one of the cooks was working away at a metal soup pot with a heating array. Other sailor disciples were laying down caulking between the deck planks, scrubbing the boards, checking knots and a dozen other small activities.

A moment of thought and the fact that she was off-duty for the next few hours spurred an impulse to turn away from her usual route below decks. Her feet carried her right, around the mizzen-mast and to the door into the aft structure, and down the stairs beyond it. As she walked the heat decreased and the humidity rose.

The door at the bottom of the stair had a circular glass porthole placed in it and through the foggy surface she could see the silhouettes of people moving about. Popping the door open she stepped out into the below decks. Down here was a maze of cooled halls two people wide bustling with disciples, lamps and arrays providing light along with portholes in the sides.

She hadn't been in this section of below decks very much however, so she took her time dodging around the various people moving about. Some carrying crates and other objects to and fro, as she made her way towards the likely location of the engine room.

She had sensed lines of qi moving through the ship's superstructure multiple times over the past few days, and when she started following them it seemed that they were flowing from a space near the aft. And she could feel the heat intensifying again, as did the citrusy smell. She could feel the muffled booming of thunder passing through her feet and lightning tingled on her skin.

After a handful of turns she came across a Spirit Steel door with small vents on its surface and a porthole that was obscured by steam. More fragrant steam curled around the edge of the partially open door. Grabbing the hot edge she pulled it open a bit more and ducked her way into the room on the other side.

It was a large rectangular space divided into an upper balcony and a lower floor reachable by ladders descending from the balcony. In the center was an humongous cast iron soup pot, big enough to swallow a man, filled to the brim with roiling clear fluid that glowed a weak blueish-white through the column of steam rising from it. That column was lit up with a constant stream of lightning also rising from the soup. The citrus smell was nearly overpowering. Half a dozen disciples were spread about the room, maintaining prayer wheels and arrays as they murmured spells. One was using a long wooden spoon to stir the soup as she stood on a stool.

The Qi was so dense in here Ferenike felt like she was almost drowning. She could see a bundle of spirit wood burning below the soup pot in a shielded bed of metal and ceramic bricks, with several Spirit Stones slotted into power drawing arrays in the bed which seemed to be part of the source. The other was obviously the soup itself, rich with powerful ingredients releasing their Qi.

Passing through the middle of the room above the pot was a huge shaft, which she realized was the propeller shaft. Right above the soup pot it seemed to grow fins, creating a turbine that caught the lightning, steam and qi to cause the shaft to spin with a deep rumble and investing it with enormous energy. Leaning over the railing she looked down and saw that the shaft went into a gearbox of sorts mounted on the forward wall, moderating its rotation.

Near the gearbox was a bank of levers overseen by an engine man and a gauge measuring their speed. Speaking tubes sprouted near him and around the room, the various stations each having one.

"Ah Golden Scorpion, wondered when you'd go poking around here." A voice said right beside her. She felt her heart try to leap out of her mouth as she flinched away from the sudden appearance of Huan Wei. He leaned against the railing, clasping his hands and looking down at his crew.

"What do your Devil eyes see, hmm? Any interesting tidbits?" He teased.

She relaxed, partly. "Not much honestly, the array work is unusual enough that only the basic theory is understandable." She said. "The rest though, even though its right in front of me I can't really make heads or tails of it. What kind of soup is this?" She decided to throw the ball into his court.

"The Lightning God's Breath Soup. One of the special techniques of my Sect. Not easy to brew unless you have a Dao of Soup and some of our unique specialties." He said with a smile twisting his lips.

Not surprising. It didn't matter too much if most folks saw this, especially if it required specialized sect knowledge to even brew. A name, a smell, some qi senses, entirely unmentioned ingredients, and the knowledge it needed a Dao of Soup? Too much effort for most to go through to steal, especially that last point. Much like how the secrets of the Clan's formations were locked behind specialized Legion training and conditioning, they could not be copied simply by observation.

Plus they both knew there was little point for the Clan to waste time trying to steal it. It was essentially already under their control in the only instance they'd want it, moving war material to and from the front.

"Hmm." She pulled out her pipe and with a flick of her fingers lit it, taking a pull that pulled in a bit of hot steam too. She smiled. "Well, your teasing aside, I did have another reason for seeking you out." She opened.

He quirked an eyebrow and turned to look at her. "Oh? What do you need of this senior then?"

Her smile got wider. "Well I know your comment about Poison Belching Vultures couldn't have come from nothing. What do you expect as we approach the mountains and go beyond, really?" She said, watching his face become thoughtful.

He shrugged and then got up, uniform straining across his wide shoulders. "Come on then, some stuff I need to show you if we're going to talk about that." He turned and bent as he walked out the door. Ferenike followed him, leaving the fascinating device behind her.

Their trip took them down another hall which passed through storage rooms full of various foodstuffs and water barrels, down some stairs and then through another hall to a room she thought was between the mizzen and main masts, part way across the length of the ship near its middle.

The door popped open under Huan's touch and she was led into a room with a scroll shelf on each side and a wall with a large porthole pointing out the starboard side. The room was dominated by a desk carved from an ornate dark wood and the low seats arranged around it. Pinned to the center of the desk by hunks of white jade was a chart depicting the northern parts of the Simmering Soup Sect's lands.

He went around the desk as Ferenike stood at rest in front, and sat. He gestured for her to follow suit and waved a hand over his map.

She sat and took a moment to examine the map. It had two small markers carved in likeness of the Liesun and Shafufen placed upon it, close to his side of the desk and the southern edge. "We're going to travel between the Spider Gate and Poison Waterfall Fields, which are marked here and here." He said, indicating them on the left and right sides of the map respectively.

Taking up the northern expanse were drawings of the mountains, curves she recognized as topographical lines denoting altitude marked across them. In the expanse between these four boundaries was a sea of sand, and dotted across that sea she saw small sketches and scrawled names for a variety of landmarks. .

Migratory patterns of birds and crawling spirit beasts, nests of more notable flying beasts. Small settlements with such names as Iron Sand Oasis, Eternal Sandpit, or Four Rivers Gorge. Monuments left by forgotten peoples or the Clan in the ancient past.

These led in a winding trail up to the mountains and an outpost of the Soup Sect right upon the border of the Yuan Clan called Tempering Soup Valley. Huan Wei pointed there. "This is where we'll stop off for a few days to resupply and do some maintenance. There won't be any stops in Yuan lands, the tariffs to take an airship through their lands are exorbitant enough already and negotiations for a landing base have been understandably rebuffed with all possible politeness."

Ferenike nodded. That'd be too much of a vulnerability, she idly noted while considering the outpost they would be stopping at. Given its placement and traffic which only really picked up when the Qiguai Doorway opened she had a feeling only the Sect and Yuan Clan paid much attention to this place. Bandits would find it rather difficult to assault the airships unless they had flight of their own and great power so most wouldn't bother.

"After that we'll be in the foothills proper where the wind changes, and birds of many species make their nests, including Poison Belching Vultures as one of the bothersome varieties. There's rumors of other larger birds in recent years but we don't have any confirmation of it, which is why I hired you and those other three Traveler-Guards." He continued quietly. Then he sighed. "And after that is the rest of our course over Yuan lands..."

Ferenike nodded, and listened as he outlined in more detail their future course, her thoughts bent to what she might find in Yuan and beyond it, in Qiguai.



It was dark by the time she made it to the mess hall and ran into the other Traveler-Guards at a table by the door, contentedly consuming bowls of rice and some wine.

A short man with black hair in a long braid down his back and a long straight beard looked up at her and a smile appeared on his face when he saw her. He was traveling under the name 'Magic Bell-Sword'. He stood in the eighth stage, though she suspected he was hiding some of his power.

"Ah, Golden Scorpion! Come in out of the heat and share a drink!" Bell-Sword said cheerfully as he held up a gourd and his cup. The other two Traveler-Guards at his table also waved her over and saluted her with their drinks.

She sauntered over and took a seat.

"Good, good! Here let this junior help you." Said the Traveler-Guard she had sat next to, one Ao Long as he handed her a cup filled with wine. Ao was a lanky man with green eyes and no hair on his face or what she could see of his body. He wore heavy beads in a necklace around his neck and his power rested at the ninth heavenstage. On his belt he carried a horsetail whisk.

The third person sat across from her, next to Bell-sword and they were another man, this one also short but much more plump than the other two. This was Jianjiao Sha. He had ropes wrapped around his fists and forearms. He had reddish-brown eyes and short brown hair, which seemed to blow slightly in a faint wind that followed him. He sat in the ninth heavenstage as well. And given how dangerous she had heard the Secret Realm was, it made sense why they were all near the peak of the Qi Condensation realm.

None of them were Clan. She figured they probably had considered opposing her in Qiguai, possibly even together. The mosaic models she always carried now in her mind laid it out pretty simply. On this ship they were her allies, and off it her enemies.

Probably. They likely thought of her in the same way, which was honestly a pity. A part of her had started to wonder what it'd be like if she could hold a simple conversation with anyone she met, debating in peace under the sun.

She'd have to see which path they took. For now she would simply enjoy wine with them. There was little reason to make things miserable for herself.

So she drank her wine happily, and listened as they restarted their conversation. "As this humble master was saying, the recent spate of Blood Path rebels in the Sect's grounds is unconscionable. Just last week I had to kill one after it tried to steal and eat my horse!" Jianjiao said irritably, which seemed to be his usual state of being.

There were huffs around the table and a grimace from Ferenike. She hadn't encountered many, but training kept her paying attention.

"And how potent was this 'Horse-eater' demon Brother Jianjiao?" Magic Bell-Sword asked. He sounded doubtful to her ears but Jianjiao apparently missed it.

He laughed. "Pissant in the hmm fifth… no! Sixth heavenstage. I crushed him with ease, no match for my Silver Rope techniques."

"Mmmm, I'm sure my Dune-Breaking Whisk could give three such monsters some trouble Brother Jianjiao. Meticulously refined for five hundred years, they are the pride of my temple." Ao Long said with an easy smile.

Jianjiao huffed and crossed his arms. "Eh, hmm. Well the only way to settle that would be a competition under the heavens." He said and then chuckled. "Though I of course would bet on my own, refined as they are for seven hundred and twenty years."

Ferenike interjected with a snorting chuckle. "This senior thinks you both are far too humble. You could probably slay a solid dozen if you worked together, and isn't it best to kill as many as possible?"

All of them started laughing, caught up in her own amusement. "Ah, Senior Scorpion is kind. Maybe the wine is better than we thought, to bring us such blessings as your regard!" Ao Long said cheerily as he passed another cup to her. A sly glint appeared in his eye. "But then how would we split the gains? By weight? By proportion of how many enemies are slain? These are important questions!" He said as he slapped the table, causing it to shake.

And at that the table devolved into a regular topic. The splitting of loot and boasting about techniques. Ferenike laughed and joked with them about it and shared minor tidbits of her own boasts as they did.

A tense, somewhat awkward exchange but that was how it was out here, far away from any kind of community or the Clan. That brought a quiet seed of melancholy to her mind. More and more it hadn't been sitting right with her.

Eventually, several hours later she begged away from the group as they got more and more thoroughly drunk and took a jug of wine and brought it up to the deck. Climbing up the ladder onto the main deck she felt the cool refreshing wind of the night sky with the stars glittering far above her head. The moon sat like a queen amongst them and painted the desert silver and white.

A quick jaunt up the aft stairs and she found Shen Li leaning against the rails with a monocular in one hand as she scanned the horizon. She didn't move from her watch other than to wave a hand as she heard Ferenike walk up behind her. She strode up next to the girl and shook the bottle, causing its contents to slosh, watching Shen Li's expression shift from a serious frown to an ecstatic smile.

"Yes!" The wine jug in Ferenike's hand disappeared as Shen Li shouted gleefully. The cap popped off and sailed over the side as she gulped away at the drink.

"You are a godsend." Shen Li said as she lowered the half empty jug and sighed.

Ferenike half-shrugged. "Not much to do out here but wait, watch and drink. Be rather terrible if we couldn't, right?" She asked rhetorically.

That got a laugh out of her friend as she leaned back against the railing and looked out over the port side. Then Shen Li's nose wrinkled and a strange smell reached Ferenike on the wind. Thin, diffuse, but what she could smell was pungent and reminded her of feathers.

They both had their weapons in their hands in the next moment. "You recognize it Shen Li?" Ferenike asked quietly as their eyes circled the ship, looking for the source.

"No. But a bird isn't good sign up here." The other girl responded.

There was rustle and Ferenike saw a shadow swooping over the aft of the ship. Her arm slammed into Shen Li, pushing her out of the way as the shadow filled her vision.

"Shit!" Ferenike shouted as flashing talons came slashing out of the darkness at her. She had a split second to set her stance and jam glass spikes into the deck from the bottom of her boots. The claws smashed into her, bending her ribs with the force and forcing out her breath with a painful squeeze as it trapped her left arm against her body, the force tearing up the decking as it pushed her back half a step.

"Beasts! We're under attack by beasts!" She heard Shen Li shout behind her. Then Ferenike found herself being yanked up and off of the deck by an incredible force as the massive black feathered bird flapped its wings and yanked her into the sky. Wind ripped at her hair and stung her eyes as her view spun madly. Below she could see the lights of the ship, half understood through her surprise.

After her moment of surprise she could feel it in her senses now, something in the ninth heavenstage. That moment of clarity was interrupted again as the other claw started grasping at her.

Her spear struck out, glowing a bright red as her glass flashed into existence around it and stabbed into the meat of the foot. Golden scales parted around her blade and then red blood poured out in a stream that glimmered in the light surrounding her.

The bird's shriek deafened her for a moment, as her vision was obscured by a mass of black feathers and then she felt warm carrion breath on her face as she was shoved into a beaked mouth.

Ferenike found herself stuck in the beast's throat, spear awkwardly poking out of the side of the beak along with a leg while her upper body was squished into its throat. Sharp spines and hard plates ground at her bronze flesh and glass armor, doing thankfully little besides covering her in thick and nasty smelling spit.

Her shouts and struggles were limited, the beast's tissues failing to give way before her strength to her surprise and frustration. And she was still sliding down its throat, her spear hand bent uncomfortably far back in its attempt to keep hold of her damned spear and her joints were complaining terribly as she was bent into an incredibly uncomfortable position.

She'd had quite enough of this. Taking breaths of the fetid air in here she closed her eyes and marshaled her inner forces. Legions marched beneath her skin, stars were pulled out of storage and linked to the great rivers of her qi.

Holding the power in her body was a dance on the knife's edge as she built it higher and higher and higher. Her skin became lit from beneath by red light, so bright it seemed like her suit of armor contained a person made of furnace flames.

Then she threw herself off the metaphorical precipice and screamed with all her might. Her eyes snapped open and shone like beacons as a terrible conflagration expanded from her, igniting flesh and foreign qi in a sudden explosion that ripped the bird clean in half and conjured a fireball a third the size of the Silver Liesun in the night sky above it.

Out of that blaze she fell like a comet, plummeting towards the decking, which was being swarmed by a flock of dozens of birds. Black and grey plumage fluttered upon the deck and in the night sky around the ship. Distantly she could see another kind of bird, long necked reddish vultures with bulbous wattles filled with poison.

The crew was already beating off the birds on board, but the vultures were momentarily unchallenged by the scorpions, as their crews couldn't man them while swarmed. A breath and more focus and Ferenike slashed an arm out as she fell through the air. Gleaming red spears flew and punched right through half a dozen of the weak vultures. Another rotation and more fell to the desert below.

And then she was right above the deck and slamming into a bird, splattering it into burning offal. The decking was a chaos of explosions and lightning and spell fire. Shen Li was handedly beating off some of the birds, ravens she could see clearly now, with a bejeweled staff. Other members of the crew were also holding their own, including one man who was particularly memorable as he beat birds to death with massive kebab skewers and spit them on them for later cooking.

Ferenike waded into the scrum, flinging spears to clear space and let the crew man the scorpions. She also heard below Huan Wei commanding the gunners on lower decks, and the Liesun began to spit lightning and fire and cutting blades of wind she could barely see in the dark except when they split birds in twain.

Several minutes of burning feathers and crushed meat later and the flock was dead. A moment of listening and hearing only minor groans of pain told her from experience that most of the casualties would probably be light.

She let out a relieved sigh and then examined herself, absolutely covered in gore and spit and burning feathers. Ugh. Thankfully her small quarters had cleaning arrays.



With the memories of that incident happily put behind her the trip to Tempering Soup Valley took another week. The sand soon became entirely red, dotted with green and blue oases here and there. Sometimes she caught the scents of strange spices and ingredients being cooked in the lands below, but at other times it was simply the scent of the desert wind mixed with rock.

And then the sand began to climb. Up and up and up into hills that became ridges and then a mess of canyons and gullies which led into mountains until they were flying with rock on either side. Red as wine the rock whistled with the wind as they passed through it, holes carved over eons by the passage of wind and water wearing stone smooth.

In the sun it sparked gold and crimson, a striking shimmer gleaming on the smooth walls studded with shards of glass.

It took her breath away.

Nestled in the cliffs of the mountain their destination was a wall strung between two mountains with three towers rising from it with great bells in their steeples. The walls were gold and bronze and shone brightly with reflected sunlight as they crawled up the valley walls. Beyond it was an expanse of greenery, plateaus and mountains climbing ever higher and higher. Small balloons and dirigibles floated here and there and she could hear the sounds of a bustling city rising up to meet them as they descended towards a large platform sticking out of the wall.

The Soup Sect side of the wall was covered in a growth of houses and buildings and other structures clinging to the wall and spreading out onto the valley floor at least a li below like some kind of creeping plant. All of this was secondary to what she could see beyond the wall, dozens of kilometers away at the other end of the valley.

A massive mesa thrusting up into the sky like a god's anvil carved of reddish grey rock. Dozens of waterfalls fell into it and fed the massive crystal blue lake at the base of the mesa. Atop it she could just see the gleaming towers of one of the Yuan Clan's cities. They almost looked just out of reach from this perspective, tiny children's toys even though they were supposed to be massive.

She would not be visiting them on this trip, as they would sail on, but she'd drink in every sight she could see from the air and she resolved herself to riding back through this clan's lands. The immense geography called to her in a way the desert hadn't, all her life as her brain was filled with images of climbing those mesas, leaping up those waterfalls and looking at the world spread out before her like a tapestry.

Looking at all of this, her worries and troubles faded away, and in the sensation of being so small she found herself laughing and working with the crew freely as they settled in to dock.


*noncommittal noises*

Managed to finally be responsible and motivated enough to write this up. This fought me because I had to completely scrap the arc I was going to introduce here and go for something a lot different.

@occipitallobe, going to ask for Tribulation Boost of better understanding of her Dao for Turn 7. Not sure I'll actually be able to get to it by the time Good Seed Reports start being made what with the holidays.
 
Ferenike - Good Seed Background #2 (Adopted)
PROFILE

NAME: Ferenike

FIRST TURN: 3

COOL THING: Resilient Will - Ferenike's willpower and patience is absurd in her cohort, giving her resistance to the doubts brought on by Tribulations. How ironic then that it was not doubt that stalled her path.

BACKSTORY:
From the sands at the edge of the Hong Xuan Clan and the land where Child Corpse Gulper fell in battle with Archegetes Konstantinos, a girl in the 1st Heavenstage walked into the lands of the Clan. In her hands she held the broken spear and half shorn shield of one of the Legion, and strapped on her back she carried the corpse of a Legionnaire. When she arrived at a Clan outpost and stepped into the small oasis the Legion maintained there the sentries found her trailing drying blood from a dozen wounds and broken bones marring her bronze flesh and staining her sandy hair pink with dried blood, her flesh blistered by the heat of the Sun and her brown eyes dead with exhaustion. Having fulfilled her self appointed task she collapsed into the grass and lost consciousness.

When Ferenike amazingly awoke the following day the doctors there found her able and willing to move even with her horrible wounds, her force of spirit driving her on as she requested to speak to a Centurion in the tongue of the barbarians. One was already waiting for her and swiftly set about interrogating her for her story.

What came out was a tale of a journey across the sands in the lands of the Hong Xuan Clan. She had been separated from her nomadic family by bandits of the Blood Path before being saved by pair of cultivators, one of the Golden Devils and a Flood Dragon Gang member, both Qi Condensation cultivators. With her family dead and their bodies spread across the sands she traveled with these two men for two years, helping them in their battles using what little she had learned in her family as the Golden Devil regaled her with tales of the Clan to which her appearance indicated she was likely related.

Until tragedy struck again and the Flood Dragon member was swallowed by a Thousand Glass Furnace Scorpion and the Golden Devil member was grievously wounded, breaking his equipment on the chitin of the beast before it was slain. As the poison of the beast ran through his veins the Golden Devil scion directed her to bury his friend and gave her his remaining Spirit Stones. Then he told her what would be his last wish, to be carried to the nearest Clan outpost so that he could either receive treatment or be buried on Clan lands.

Ferenike carried him across the sands, fighting off beasts attracted to the smell of blood and poisoned tissues with the man's broken spear and the sharp edge of his broken shield, gathering wounds across the journey, not sleeping or resting as she walked through the day and night as the sun boiled at her flesh and the night winds lashed at her with whips of sand. The man died on the third day of her trek, just before she reached the outpost, but even as her failure crushed her with despair she kept going. Endless patience and insistence drove her limbs forward as the sands seemed to stretch to infinity before she reached the outpost.

When she finished, she asked the Centurion if she could join the Legions. Moved by her compassion for one of his former men and her willful determination he accepted the young girl and arranged to have her sent her off to the Fortress for training with a recommendation. After attending the funeral of her friend she traveled to the Fortress in a supply caravan, spending the travel there healing and going over the pamphlets on the Legion and there she was tested and found fit for the body of the Legion, those individuals who provide the mass of cultivators for the Hoplite formation.

She took to it like a bird to the sky, becoming a solid reliable core of her squad, finding the circulations and breathing regimen of the Hoplite coming to her naturally. Her incredible well of patience pushed her on, a rock for her squad-mates to center around and follow after. She excelled with the spear and the aspis shield of the Legion, one a dancing scorpion tail and the other an impenetrable bulwark in her hands. She couldn't do less than excel.

She'd decided that horrible day in the Desert when her last friend died that she wasn't strong enough now to change the world into what she wanted, and remembering his final words to her she knew that the only thing standing in her way to that strength was time and effort. Her Dao is the Dao of Patience, the grinding sands of millennia wearing away a cruel edifice which would see her happiness crushed between its gears, every breath she takes, every gasp of Qi torn from the world one more victory for her and one more loss for the Heavens.

HIGH CONCEPT: What happens when ambition dies and great expectations fade into the ash of mundane drudgery? Ferenike is an old faded legend seeing the end of her life approaching and looking back on the spent glory she once possessed. She committed the greatest sin of genius: she gave up and settled for mediocrity. Now in the twilight of her years as the Great Era dawns, she fills a flame rekindled in her breast. Old companions have fallen by the side or surpassed her entirely but the turning of the Age brings breath to the embers of her ambition. An old dream is revived, to seize the seat of Protostrator and prove that she was worth something.

DATASHEET

CURRENT TURN: 16

OMAKE BONUSES: 4 LST, 1 TT
Turn 7: 1 LST, 1 Tribulation Treasures
Turn 13: -1 Tribulation Treasure (At turn start), +1 LST
Turn 14: +1 LST
Turn 15: +1 LST
Turn 16: +1 TT

AGE/LIFESPAN: 277/500

HEALTH: Healthy
Healthy (Turn 13 Start)

DAO: Patience

CULTIVATION: Foundation Establishment 7-Pillar
1-Pillar, Early (Turn 13 Start) > 4-Pillar (Turn 13 End) > 7-Pillar (Turn 14 End)

CULTIVATION YEAR EQUIVALENT: 473
100 (Turn 13 Start) > 207 (+107, Turn 13 End) > 357 (+150, Turn 14 End) > 473 (+116, Turn 15 End)

CULTIVATION GOAL: 9-Pillar Unorthodox, Silver-Blood Core

IMPACT (Orthodox/Unorthodox): 26/13 (Effective Cultivation: FE 22)
Orthodox: 13 (Turn 13 Start) > 16 (+3, Turn 14 End) > 26 (+10, Turn 15 End)

Boiling Legion of Glass Body (+3 Impact)
– After one millennia of lying quiescent this constitution was revived within the form of Ferenike of the Indomitable Thirteen. This is a mutation well suited to the sands of the Organ Meat Desert because it transforms its bearer into a fearsome molten combatant, capable flash forging silica into weapons that can strike enemies near and far as well as belching forth terrifying flame. It is rumored that this constitution was the inspiration for the Burning Glass Javelin array network that secures the Clan's territory.

Errorless Ghost Stoneflag (+14 Impact) - A formation flag carved from ghosts that had been imprisoned for so long they petrified into a sort of stone. With it, formations are easily set up, less easily broken, and it serves as the keystone of any major formation with ease. A Hoplite led by Ferenike will not break until the last drop of Qi is exhausted from all within, and will work with immaculate efficiency.

Refined in the Trial of Formations within the Man-As-Mountain Array, the Ghost Stoneflag has been elevated. It had bonded with Ferenike perfectly, and her power over formations had grown. Any formation she was a member of she could now understand and guide perfectly, allowing those under her command to far exceed the ordinary limits of a formation. Where others might be limited to fifty, or a hundred at best in a single formation, Ferenike could keep thousands - though perhaps no more than two or three at most - in such a formation. Given command of sufficient Foundation Establishment cultivators, she could cut a great swathe through Core Formation cultivators, and even challenge Nascent Souls briefly. Of course, such a force was not easy to bring about, so it would remain merely a potent force multiplier in most situations.

Sorrowful Shrinking Mountain (+6 Impact) - This was part of the arts of the Yuan Clan around mountains – a small hill had been shrunk into a powerful artifact that could be slung at enemies, aimed with immense speed and power. It could only be used once every few years, and relied on the Qi of the cultivator to be used properly – and left one exhausted and defenseless afterwards. However, it was able to overpower enemies on the same level with casual ease, killing anyone in the same Heavenstage or even a few above with near-certainty.

Sorrowful Shrinking Mountain: Mountain-in-Man Transformation (+3 Impact) - This is a technique developed by Ferenike from contemplation of the shrunken mountain Wudang. For brief moments, she can increase her density and mass to a proportion of the mountain she possesses giving her incredible offense and defense during those moments.

Unorthodox: 13
Body Purification Stage, 10th Heavenstage (+9 Impact) - Cultivator's body is cleansed of all impurities, gains considerable strength, speed, and toughness.) 10th Heavenstage is of immense benefit to Foundation Building (offering one small realm worth of strength) and of mild benefit Core Formation cultivators (offering roughly a quarter of a small realm), but falls away during Nascent Soul.
Qi Purification Stage, 11th Heavenstage (+4 Impact) - Cultivator gains pure Qi that flows through a pure body. This pure Qi allows them to fuel more powerful techniques, and makes a cultivator unparalleled in their small realm.) 11th Heavenstage is of mild benefit to Foundation Building (offering half a small realm), and Core Formation (offering half a small realm), but falls away during Nascent Soul.

TRAITS, TECHNIQUES & SKILLS:
Century Oasis Formation: This formation is the precursor to the newly adopted Millennium Oasis Formation. It draws on the power of the desert sands, air, the sun and the moon, tapping into the dragonlines which flow through it and it concentrates this power among the members of the formation. The users of this formation share vitality, speed of healing, and endurance which is further amplified by the concentrated amount of desert Qi. Thus, cohorts using this formation find themselves expending fewer Spirit Stones to heal and march through the desert or improving the effect of Spirit Stones they do expend, thus enhancing our advantages in our home.


HISTORY

FATES:
Turn Three Fate: Ferenike and her squad were patrolling a road as they were attacked, a Foundation Building rebel expert against the Cannibals seeking to use them, as well as a caravan of five thousand mortals they were guarding as his own Blood Path foundation. The entire squad were badly wounded, but managed to hold out - after their Hoplite Formation fell, Ferenike managed to personally distract and delay the enemy enough for an allied Foundation Building expert from the Flood Dragon Gang to arrive. An excellent contribution that won her enough Contribution Points to quickly recover her injuries and cultivate frantically, reaching the 8th Heavenstage in a mere two decades. One of the mortals was the son of a Core Formation Elder, who forged her a Teleportation Amulet, 'that you may escape danger once as you have saved the life of my son once'.

Turn Four Fate: Sent south to the war. With her group of trainees, she was involved in the disastrous defeat where the Elder of War was killed. Wounded, she managed to shepherd most of her trainees into a southern city, only to find it under siege by the Devil Bees. After months of siege, the city of Guo Wo fell, and the remaining garrison of the city were driven out. They were rescued by a column of relief troops, but Ferenike was Badly Wounded, trying to save what little remainder of her command. The only bright point in her past decades was her ability to break through cultivation-wise prior to heading south.

Turn Five Fate: Lead a makeshift legion at Pleuron, leading the defense after the city was abandoned by the Elders for almost three weeks before the Foundation Building Experts arrived. Several forays into other besieged cities to rescue juniors. Seized a Dark Sin Mango from an enemy cultivator who fled, gaining much cultivation as a result. Able to gain forty years of cultivation in twenty, no small thing.

Turn Six Fate: Falling from the sky, Ferenike saw two unfortunates fall around her, thrown away by the tearing and ripping of space. Luck was with her, though, and as she reached a whirlwind, she was thrown again into the sky, flying hundreds of thousands of li away. Eventually she landed, in the home of what had clearly once been an ancient cultivator. "Kowtow three times and take me as your master, and I will acknowledge you as an honorary disciple in the art of formations.", said the notes on the grave outside. She did, and a fragment of will poured into her brain, existing for only a few seconds. In those few seconds it redesigned her Century Oasis Formation, turning it from a thing only usable by the lower echelons of Qi Condensation into something usable by all below Core Formation. 'A gift to a new disciple', was the whisper. Alongside the legacy was a small book with a number of notes on formations, a powerful Ghost Stoneflag (+4 Impact), a formation flag carved from ghosts that had been imprisoned for so long they petrified into a sort of stone. With it, formations are easily set up, less easily broken, and it serves as the keystone of any major formation with ease. A Hoplite led by Ferenike will not break until the last drop of Qi is exhausted from all within, and will work with immaculate efficiency. Lastly, some insights on cultivation, along with a few scattered herbs and spirit stones - trash to an ancient cultivator, but enough to push Ferenike into the 11th Heavenstage, and barely a step from the 12th. Escaping was not easy, however. On leaving she found herself surrounded by a series of angered Star-Eels seeking prey, and had she not used one of her precious treasures, her chances of escape would have been nil.

Turn Seven Fate: Ferenike, seeking the Dao in the Yuan Clan found much else. A conspiracy, aimed at the Clan's airship fleet - or rather, the Simmering Soup Sect's fleet. While these ships facilitated trade, they also beggared a number of merchants who relied on their own ground routes. As such, they brought together a group of mercenaries to destroy several key bases in Yuan Clan territory, and to poison wells and the like, to make the airship trade less competitive. Ferenike had travelled with these mercenaries for a year, and it was at the end of her journey she convinced a group of them to betray the others, and shattered the company into several parts. Carrying news of treachery to the Yuan Clan itself, she was hunted for months by the conspiracy, who knew well if her news reached the Yuan Clan their deaths were certain. Deep in hostile territory, those who remained named themselves the Two Thousand and marched thousands of kilometres north, hunted and savaged all the while. Ferenike served as a second-in-command to a dissolute Foundation Establishment expert, Hong Mai. In their final battle, Mai was slain, and only three hundred and twelve reached the Yuan proper. Once they did, vengeance from the Clan's elders was swift. For her services on return to the Simmering Soup Sect, she was returned Suffusing Truth-Bones Stew, a simple method of letting one discern truth from lies in all things, if only for a few key seconds. Her insight into her Dao leapt immensely. From the Yuan came another reward, the Sorrowful Shrinking Mountain (+6 Impact). This was part of the arts of the Yuan Clan around mountains - a small hill had been shrunk into a powerful artifact that could be slung at enemies, aimed with immense speed and power. It could only be used once every few years, and relied on the Qi of the cultivator be used properly - and left one exhausted and defenseless afterwards. However, it was able to overpower enemies on the same level with casual ease, killing anyone in the same Heavenstage or even a few above with near-certainty.

Turn Thirteen Fate: Ferenike had returned from retirement, and it was with no small fanfare. Upon meeting with her former protege Tisamenos, he lavished her with gifts, cultivation resources, and festooned her with various items of power (+32CY). Six or seven powerful items to be used in combat, as well as a piece of Silverblood she could consume herself to gain the power of the Blood of Silver for a few precious minutes.
She would, as it so happened, need it all. The sieges on the four forts they were sent to relieve were going badly. Ferenike used her experience in command to take command of a group of Mountain Bell cultivators, and broke through the siege at Kenshin Fort. The losses were severe, however, and as the Blood Path broke through, she relived her experiences in the original Devil Bee War - safeguarding a group of fleeing cultivators to safety. Of the eight thousand six hundred cultivators in that fort, she managed to personally save two hundred and sixty-two - or at least get them to Lu Fort, where their story continued.
One of them was the great-grandson of the Grand Elder of the Mountain Bell, who gifted her with a massive array of cultivation resources. These, alongside what Tisamenos had given her pushed her cultivation forward massively (+75 CY).

Turn Fourteen Fate: "For some, the Qiguai Realm was merely dangerous, for Ferenike it was simply a fated land of opportunity (+20 CY). Others suffered, but it seemed in this generation with the Favored rising so too did some of the Clan. The Realm shook and shuddered at her entrance, and spat her out - throwing her far into the sky-sea, and into another place entirely. Where she had come to stood above even the sky-sea, situated on the back of what after many months she realised was a giant whale of some sort, massive beyond belief - perhaps, she figured, even outscaling the entire Virtuous Flipper Region. Only the sound of its blowhole allowed her to realise this, and carved into its back was a peculiar lakebed. She stepped into it, and was immediately split into seven. The Mirrorlake split her into seven, and the seven dueled, each willing to slay the other - or absorb them, rather. Seven became six became five and eventually became one, the Mirrorlake heightening her willingness to slay the parts of herself that stood against her success (+30 CY).
From the Mirrorlake she travelled onwards, finding a shrine made of pearl entirely. In it sat a single congealed droplet of water, having been sitting there for what must have been centuries. Ferenike drank it, and in a single moment gained decades of cultivation (+40 CY).
In her attempt to chart where she was she travelled many, many leagues, and found a small city of mermaids, living on the back of the whale. An ancient prophecy said a travelled would come and rescue their holy priestess from a tribe of sharkfolk, and Ferenike saw no reason to gainsay them. Rescuing the priestess through a series of dangerous adventures, she was rewarded with a pot of fine soup made from the whale's own cast-off flesh (+20 CY).
The same prophecy told her where to return to the Qiguai Realm from - she would need to venture to the blowhole itself, a hole larger than entire provinces of the Clan's territory, and let it throw her back. She did so, avoiding three guardian beasts and making it just in time. The blast of water should have killed her, but left her untouched instead, filling her with Qi (+40 CY) and returning her to the exit of the Qiguai Secret Realm just before it closed."

Turn Fifteen Fate: "Ferenike entered the Trial of Formations, a rather extensive trial within the Man-As-Mountain Array.
It was a four-parted trial, one designed to kill rather than maim or wound, and ninety-nine out of a hundred who entered die. Naturally, Ferenike entered.
The first part was a trial that stretched out time around her, forcing her to solve formation after formation, finding the correct flags to cause them to dissolve and allow her to escape as time sped up, a process which would eventually leave her trapped without Qi in a field of sped-up time. After escaping a formation designed to burn her to death, a small gong sat in front of her. She rang it, and it burst with power (+10 CY), the shattered formations moving ingeniously to empower her.
The next set of challenges were the same, yet this time she had to fight against enemies in Foundation Establishment while unravelling formations, and yet she succeeded easily. The rewards were far larger, and despite being attacked by six puppets in her small realm, she avoided them and the gong appeared again. Striking it she gained a massive burst of Qi (+80 CY), pushing her cultivation forward, towards the final pillar she sought.
The third set were... oddly familiar. As though they recognised her. The Stoneflag quivered as it worked, and she heard whispers of her once-master's ghostly voice, though she could not make out the words. To her surprise, she managed to solve a number of formations that should've crippled her, perhaps even killed her.
The gong returned a third time, but this time in a ghostly form. She herself could not strike it, yet the Stoneflag did.
The fourth set of challenges were unlike anything she had ever faced in terms of difficulty, forced to understand and unravel complex formations in mere moments, mistakes threatening to tear off limbs, gouge out eyeballs, flense off skin. At every point she simply avoided them, her skill rising above what it had ever been. The gong rose up one last time, and a whisper came with it.
"Well done, student."
The gong was struck by the Stoneflag, and the Qi there transformed it into something new entirely. The Errorless Stoneflag (+10 Impact). Brought into reality by the sheer power wrought on it, the new Stoneflag was complete and without the slightest flaw. It had bonded with Ferenike perfectly, and her power over formations had grown. Any formation she was a member of she could now understand and guide perfectly, allowing those under her command to far exceed the ordinary limits of a formation.
Where others might be limited to fifty, or a hundred at best in a single formation, Ferenike could keep thousands - though perhaps no more than two or three at most - in such a formation. Given command of sufficient Foundation Establishment cultivators, she could cut a great swathe through Core Formation cultivators, and even challenge Nascent Souls briefly.
Of course, such a force was not easy to bring about, so it would remain merely a potent force multiplier in most situations.

OMAKE:
Total word count: 143,421

TURN 3
Ferenike 1: Clan History and Friction (4148 words, Early Training and gaining a Lifesaving Treasure – Using Omake Bonus for Turn 3 to obtain the Eight Silver Wind Binding)
Ferenike 2: Differences (1572 words, Experiences with Cultivating the Hoplite Formation and something strange with her body - Cultivation Supplemental to Turn 3)
Ferenike 3: Mortals and Direction (3629 words, Adventures in Water Wings and Golden Tile City and her statement of cultivation goals with a toast between friends - Supplemental to Turn 3)

TURN 4
Ferenike 4: Disaster in the Sands (10355 Words, Hunting for a Scorpion and a disastrous battle in the sands with a Battle Blood Cannibal rebel named Zu Jing – Using Omake Bonus for Turn 4 to obtain a Cool Thing in a special bloodline called the Boiling Legion of Glass Body that boosts her combat ability)
Ferenike 5: Flood Dragon Gong Rencao (2979 Words, Heading to Triumphant Jade City to find Gong Rencao so she could start the hunt for Zu Jing – Cultivation Supplemental to Turn 4)
Ferenike 6: Pursuit (2746 Words, Hunting down Jianxi Bai the Leg Thief in the vicinity of the City of Golden Bells and finding a lead to his master Zu Jing – Cultivation Supplemental to Turn 4)
Ferenike 7: Seeking Peace (4946 Words, Fighting Zu Jing near the City of Golden Bells and contemplating the twin threats of the Devil Bees and Hundred Year Trials facing the Golden Devil Clan -- Fate Supplemental for Ferenike for Turn 4)
Ferenike 8: Birds of a Feather (Letter Exchange with @Mochinator's Xiao Yi on Formations and our troubles, becoming friends -- Fate Supplemental for Turn 4 for both of us.)
Ferenike 9: Scorplings (2843 Words, Ferenike begins training her juniors and dealing with the burdens that brings -- Fate Supplemental for Ferenike for Turn 4)
Ferenike 10: Mother Scorpion (4407 Words, Training of the Salviati and an important realization - Cultivation Supplemental for Ferenike for Turn 4)
Ferenike 11: Settling your Grave (5117 Words , Preparing for War and finding the Scorpion - Fate Supplemental for Ferenike for Turn 4)

TURN 5
Ferenike 12: Terror or Horror? Part 1 (5776 Words, The Defeat of the Protostrator and flight to Guo Wo - Fate Supplemental for Ferenike for Turn 5)
Ferenike 13: Terror or Horror? Part 2 (9944 Words, The Siege of Guo Wo and Ferenike's Determination - Using my Omake Bonus for Turn 5 to obtain a Healing Treasure, the Seven Venoms Serpent Coffin, to fix my injuries)
Ferenike 14: Coffins (2740 Words, Ferenike heals herself and goes out to meet with Rina Callista and her fellows - Fate Supplemental for Ferenike for Turn 5)
Ferenike 15: Shadows Beneath the Sun (2961 Words, Ferenike works with the nomadic tribes of Clan lands to obtain materiel and otherwise prepare for the Trials and in her training discovers more about her bloodline - Fate Supplemental for Ferenike for Turn 5)
Ferenike 16: No Rest For the Wicked (3601 Words, Ferenike begins to write down and codify her knowledge and experience for future generations, and then kills a handful of Saber Palace disciples who wished to loot them - Fate Supplemental for Ferenike for Turn 5)
Ferenike 17: Scorpions Lie in Wait (5019 Words, Ferenike tracks down and fights a Trial Hunter in Winding Pillar City during the first phase of the Trials - Fate Supplemental for Ferenike for Turn 5)
Ferenike 18: A Bit of Light Reading (1261 Words, Ferenike recovers in Winding Pillar City and engages in some scholarly research of dragon lines and muses on her connection to the world - Fate Supplemental for Ferenike for Turn 5)
Ferenike 19: Many Grains of Sand (3376 Words, three perspectives on the Trials and their triumphs and tragedies - Fate Supplemental for Ferenike for Turn 5)
Ferenike 20: Desolate Winds (1052 Words, The end of the body of the Trials and onwards to the conclusion in Waycastle Pleuron! - Fate Supplemental for Ferenike for Turn 5)

TURN 6
Ferenike 21: At the Gates of Doom (6394 Words, the run to Pleuron and the rising crescendo of battle before the finale! - Fate Supplemental for Ferenike for Turn 6)
Ferenike 22: Through Doom's Gate (6619 Words, the finale of Pleuron, the slaying of a Core Formation elder and contemplations on what she wants - Fate Supplemental for Ferenike for Turn 6)
Ferenike 23: Paradiso (6604 Words, I finally, finally make the Century Oasis Formation and Ferenike takes the next step onto her path - Turn 6 Bonus: Century Oasis Formation, donated to the Clan)
Ferenike 24: Life's End (5241 Words, Ferenike reaches an understanding of herself in the end of Book 1 and provides companionship to her faithful servant Ales as he dies -Fate Supplemental for Ferenike for Turn 6)
Ferenike 25: Hunting, Prelude to the Journey (7029 Words, Start of Book 2 Ferenike has a fight with a bandit and becomes a mercenary Traveler-Guard for the Silver Liesun airship -Fate Supplemental for Ferenike for Turn 6)

TURN 7
Ferenike 26: Hunting, Hunting Flight (5361 Words, Book 2 continuation and guard duties on the Silver Liesun – Omake Bonus of Tribulation Treasure)

TURN 13
Ferenike 27: Look Upon My Works and Despair (540 words, omake bonus - LST)
Ferenike 28: The Dawning of the Great Era (1240 words)
Ferenike 29: Two Old Biddies Talk over Drinks (1250 words Collaboration with @Liliet)
Ferenike 30: Archive of Golden Devils Legion Addendum (4010 words)
Ferenike 31: Cursing, Cussing, Swearing, Insulting – How to Be Profane and Rude (1430 words)
Total word count: 8470 words

TURN 14
Ferenike 32: Seven Divine Saber Palace Negaverse Collab 1 (250 words with @Humbaba @CuriousRaptor , LST)
Ferenike 33: What Happened When the Grand Elder Took a Nap? (6100 words)
Ferenike 34: What Happens Behind the Curtain of Senior Command (1550 words)
Ferenike 35: Senior Advice 2, Assessment (2690 words Collaboration with @BungieONI )
Ferenike 36: Legends Are Made Not Born (1310 words Collaboration with @afterthought53)
Ferenike 37: Too Many Cooks Spoil the Broth (1210 words Collaboration with @Ambit)
Ferenike 38: To Remove Tarnish, Soak in Caustic Solution and Scour Vigorously (2540 words)
Total word count: 12,960 words

TURN 15
Ferenike 39: Meeting Old Teachers and Impossible Sights, Pt 1. (200 words, Collab with @Liliet) LST Bonus
Ferenike 40: The Weight of our Sins (930 words Collaboration with @Siual)
Ferenike 41: Soup-Shaking Showdown (1400 words Collaboration with @Xantalos)
Ferenike 42: Advice from Seniors (1011 words Collaboration with @Katana1515)
Ferenike 43: Junior, the Fire of Your Ambition Must Consume All (1250 words collaboration with @MrRageQuit)
Total word count: 4791 words

TURN 16
Ferenike 44: Pressing Onward (1650 words)
 
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Ferenike 27 - Look Upon My Works and Despair
TURN 13, OMAKE 1 [FERENIKE]
Ferenike 27: Look Upon My Works and Despair

Talent. That word had her rankled then and even more now. The great were said to possess it while the uncountable masses were united in their lack of it. But truly what was talent?

Was it the providence that saw a youth born into wealth or sound teaching?

Or rather perhaps it was the favorable hand of chance that had circumstance and opportunity conspire to send down lightning to ignite dry tinder?

Some preferred to see it in merit, in the ability to persevere in hard labour and difficult comprehension. Yet truly did such things guarantee results or was their promise only a gamble leaning into the odds?

If there was one thing she truly knew it was the scope of her ignorance. But if she was forced to give an answer to this question, she would say: talent is all of these and none in full.

She should know, after all, had not her name been once on the lips of old and young alike? Her story had been told by youths and elders, inspiration and hope to many. But time makes a mockery of all men and she had faded in deed and in repute.

She felt the ache of age in her now always, old wounds reminding her of the promise of her youth. She'd struggled so valiantly in those days seeking all manner of solution to the bottleneck she was beating her head against. None had succeeded so passion had faded and ambition was quenched in the sands of time.

Why now do the embers rekindle? She asks herself, looking in the mirror and seeing the familiar lines. It cannot be the pricks of stung pride at being surpassed by those who came after. Those pains become familiar companions with time. It could not also be the passing of old friends because she had buried many near and dear already. Perhaps she would never know.

However it had come about, an old woman left her home, passing by in unusual silence those who knew her. Into the desert she went carrying a curious staff and wearing a pyramid darker than night on a necklace around her neck.She went into the barren wastes, alone and stood under Heaven's dome.

Here I am at last, she called out. Come let us have our reckoning. The Heavens roared down at her and she whispered her response in the midst of fury and cacophony. What words she spoke were lost to any who were not there but that day, it was not faded glory that marched back to those four small walls. The sun gleamed off the eyes of stained glass and whispers followed in the wake of a crown of molten fury.

She came to the place where she had waited so long, despairing, then accepting before forgetting. She bowed once to memory of the past and turned around. A child called out to this strange but familiar figure, seeking the identity of this wondrous creature.

"Ferenike," she said, the first remembrance of many.

AN: (540 words) Please threadmark @ReaderOfFate. Kindly forgive the awful prose. It's late and I really should be asleep but wordcount for omake bonus. Yay.
 
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Ferenike 28 - The Dawning of the Great Era
TURN 13, OMAKE 2 [FERENIKE]
Ferenike 28: The Dawning of the Great Era

The great Horned Scion Beetle, Nascent Soul caretaker of the Yuan Man-as-Mountain Array stared very much nonplussed up at the sky. It had broken its convention and ascended from the bowels of the earth where it maintained the core functions of the array in its care and climbed to the highest peak of the Yuan mountain range. It had done this because a great tumult had broken out in the skies above, powerful enough to demand immediate attention. Heavenly Tribulation of the scale it witnessed should not have descended for the breakthrough of a mere Qi Condensation junior, if he perceived the figure at the center of all this rightly. Yet, Heaven's hand had come down heavily and most unexpectedly an old terrible legacy rose to counter it. The influence of the blood mists found no purchase on it for its will was tempered by the endless passing of the ages and it was ineligible for the Blood Path as a Spirit Beast in either case. But still it worried, not just for what havoc the mists would wreak on its charge, particularly through the idiot humans in its domain the mists could suborn, but what else it portended that the hand of the Third Sea's most infamous son was once more in motion. The spoor of the Demonic Altar was unmistakable on the mists and such a spirited defense against the Heavens must have cost the Will of that artifact much. Whatever prize the shadow of that great monster sought could not bode well for the decaying corpse of the Third Sea. Some things were ever true to their nature and Demonic Soup Chef had firmly laid down a path that did not balk at any sin or horror in its ends. When the tribulation concluded with the Heavens foiled, the caretaker thought that the end of the matter at least for the moment. Then another upheaval in the order of things presented itself.

天下万物​

"The Heavens declare a Great Era and my work increases," the caretaker rumbled. Already it could feel the sky-sourced qi being greedily drained by the accumulators of the grand array in its care. More followed behind, so much more flooding through the ancient structures and patterns such that there would be no need to wait a century to reset operations. It knew of other such inheritances and trials that dispensed fortune and peril in equal measure. They too would surely benefit for there was an abundance of qi fit to support all those petty mortals who had not mastered themselves to begin cultivation of the soul. Three great realms with continuous access to such opportunity did not bode well for peace of mind.

"The wheel turns and eternity grinds all to dust, great and small," the nameless beast, called Nanashi by those who demanded a designation, mused. It retreated from its perch heading back down into the depths. There was much work to be done, old protocols to reactivate and maintenance urgently needed now that false life had been given to this faded carcass of a land.

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Tenjin Haoshi swallowed fitfully as he carefully made his way through the grasses. If he ever needed a reminder that the demiplane where the Turtle-Child Scale that Qiguai Realmgate led to was a place removed from all sense and reason, he needed only look up and see a mirrored sky of screaming figures reflected back at him, his own form recognizable among the miserable wretches. Resolutely, he ignored that temptation and explored further as instructed. After the shock of the Blood Mists provoking an uprising of the Blood Path and then the followup punch of the Heavenly proclamation of a Great Era, the masters of Qiguai had not taken kindly to reports that their great treasure was acting oddly. Investigations had to be performed on both ends and poor Haoshi had been one of the unlucky lot chosen to make those assessments. He'd marched through the Realmgate, praying that there was truth to rumors of unusual stability in the passage. He'd managed not to die on entry, one of the lucky third to manage that feat so perhaps those rumors had some truth to them. Now he carefully examined the shard of splintered space-time he found himself in, taking careful notes as instructed. Already he had made one clear observation, the qi in the secret realm was stronger. It would perhaps not be noticeable to anyone in the second great realm and beyond but he was not so privileged and any change to someone of such meager capacity as himself was immediately. For a moment, he wondered if perhaps his fate in being chosen was an opportunity for good fortune and not doom. He quickly slapped himself to drive such stupidity from his thoughts and focused his attention on surviving the next day. If by some miracle, he survived to make the exit, he might then revisit such dreams. Looking ahead, he felt his stomach sink to his feet when he began to revise his goals as he caught sight of the distinctive pelts of Jade Ghost Tigers. Making it to the next hour alive and in one piece was looking increasing chancy.

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Secret Realms of the Mountain Clans Increase in Opportunity & Peril – Office of Disciples Recommends All Challengers Prepare for Extended Commitment

By order of Destasia Duca, Chartoularios Tou Kanikleiou,

The Office of the Master of Disciples is informing all Legionnaires that reports from the Yuan and Qiguai Clans indicate that their respective secret realms have been empowered by the current Great Era. Any Legionnaire attempting to seek their fortune in these secret realms are hereby informed that this change comes with increased risk. It is thus recommended that any expedition to a secret realm at a minimum commit two decades for preparation and exploration to the exclusion of any other significant responsibility including missions for the Clan. Please note that as such any Legionnaire who files a notice to challenge any secret realm will be disqualified from accepting any long-term missions starting from this year 240 E. K.

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AN: (1240 words) Please threadmark @ReaderOfFate @Alectai. Chipping away at that wordcount
 
Ferenike 29 - Eirene of Nowhere & Ferenike – Two Old Biddies Talk over Drinks
TURN 13, OMAKE 3 [FERENIKE]
Ferenike 29: Eirene of Nowhere & Ferenike – Two Old Biddies Talk over Drinks

Almost a century and half ago, the Golden Devil Clan had been on the eve of their centennial mauling. The first Hundred-Year Trial in the reign of Archegetes Manuel Konstantinos was poised to crash down upon the Legions and civilians of the Imperial Optimatoi in a tsunami of Heaven-backed predation and destruction. The remnant of the Sea-Conquering Army in the Third Sea had suffered Heaven's punishment for their ancestors' sins for millennia without reprieve, carefully sheared for the luck that the Celestial Machine dispensed to hunters from the Fifth Sea who claimed a harvest of Bronze-Blooded lives. In this long history contesting with the Rite of Karmic Purification, as the dark-skinned invaders called their presence, the decision by the Grand Elder to forsake the expected preparations and risk it all on a gamble for the future was one that would either shatter the Clan's strength or lay a foundation for resurgent growth. History would later prove that decision worth the cost but in that moment when everything had seemed darkest, a call had gone out to rally hope, to raise up strength from below and to stand as shield and sword for the weak.

Rina Callista, already burgeoning with promise and acclaim even then, had reached out to the most esteemed, renowned and fearless of her peers in the Clan's junior generation. The Ninth Prince, Aretaphila Myia, Ferenike, Diogenes Aparámillos, Peta Condos with her companion Wajo, Eirene of Nowhere, Achille Adephos, Magnus Centenius, Wei Feng, Morgraine, Amaranth Castellanos, Tasos Basilakes and, the host, Rina Callista had come together to deliberate, and agree on a stratagem to save whatever juniors they could in the slaughter to come. Much has been made of this group, many tales told of the legend of the Indomitable Thirteen in the wake of the Miracle at Pleuron but it had all began in a room in the Callista estates around a table of cultivators unfamiliar with one another.

The room Ferenike was currently draining a jug of wine in wasn't that opulently furnished chamber in the estates of one of the most venerable families of the Old Blood. This was a much smaller private sitting area of a humble establishment in Waycastle Pleuron. Simply furnished and stocked with ordinary refreshments, few would have given heed to this room as being of import. Yet as Ferenike held up a saucer, she saluted old ghosts only she could see with the porcelain container. Here was where for a brief time they had all met in the siege of Pleuron before the moments that had become as much myth as legend. Afterwards, they had occasionally gathered back in the refurbished business, as many as were able to make it. They were not all intimate friends but they had shared a bond forged in blood and defiance.

"Now where there were thirteen, there are less," Ferenike whispered into the quiet, "Some soared to shine ever brighter while others drifted onward as they were and yet another few faded away."

She'd been retired and not dead as some might have thought. News made it to her attention even in the distant reaches she'd tucked herself away into and so she'd tracked the careers and fortunes of the band of companions who had stood with her to achieve the impossible. Friends had died, some in the manner of ordinary Legionnaires and others in the grand passing of heroes. Other comrades had taken up more and more responsibility, reaching further in their cultivation to do all that she could have ever dreamed and more beyond that. For a moment, the sweet cherry wine she was sipping turned sour on her tongue as she thought about her own fortunes. Then with a long sigh, she pushed away the bitter memories of the past and indulged herself in nostalgia. Those halcyon days were gone, never to be relived, but their mark was indelibly imprinted on her.

Ferenike was deep into her fifth jar of wine when she heard the sound of an approaching person. She had asked for privacy, making sure that she was well stocked on wine so the thought of an incipient interruption did not much appeal to her.

"Go away," she called out clearly, not slurring despite the quantity of liquor she had consumed, "This is a private party."

The movement stopped and she was just downing the first swallow of yet another wine jar, when it resumed, the door to the room opening.

"I thought I said go away," Ferenike said, bent over pouring herself a drink.

"I heard you the first time but I have my own invitation to this party," Eirene of Nowhere said as she stood in the doorway.

Ferenike almost dropped the contents of her hands in surprise. Staring at the unexpected figure before her, she quickly cycled qi through her body, burning off much of the effect of the alcohol she'd been steadily drinking all afternoon. The sight in front of her remained the same, even clearer in her new sobriety.

"Hello, stranger, it's been a while," Eirene said with a faint smile as she entered fully and closed the door behind her. She made her way to where Ferenike sat and made herself comfortable.

Ferenike finally found her tongue and stumbled over her words, "How are… where did you come from?"

"Unlike certain people who made themselves akin to ghosts," Eirene said, fixing Ferenike with a look, "I was still doing much of what I was already known to do. The life of a Legionnaire is much the same for most, taking missions and turning them in for Contribution Points to claw for advancement and then repeat decade after decade. I make it a point to pass through this place whenever I'm in the area. I used to meet up with a few of the old gang early on but now it's mostly me alone here. So you can imagine my surprise when the owner informed me that there was someone using this room under the old reservation. Truthfully, you were the last person I expected. I almost didn't recognize you with the wrinkles."

"Hey, don't knock them. I earned those lines fair and square," Ferenike replied with a laugh in her eyes, "Besides you're looking a bit weathered yourself."

Indeed Eirene's golden hair was now spotted through with the verdigris common to the Clan's aging populations. Her complexion looked less aged than Ferenike's but her features still bore evidence of time's passing as compared to the memories Ferenike had of her. Most startingly was that the comfortably plumb figure she'd sported had slimmed down.

"Don't mind the waist, it'll be back soon enough," Eirene said, patting her abdomen, "I had to let go of some weight to realize some things. I like my padding as it was, besides the kids tell me it makes for comfortable hugs."

Ferenike nodded thoughtfully. "You recently made your breakthrough into Foundation Establishment didn't you? I thought I sensed the aura about you but the odds were unbelievable."

"What? Shocked that I made the leap just as you did? Imagine my own surprise to see you for the first time in decades and feel a mirror of that presence a fresh Expert has," Eirene replied.

Ferenike took a swallow from the saucer she'd set down after Eirene entered and said wonderingly, "I don't know about your situation but I'd strained at the bottleneck of forming my Dao-Pillar for so long, I honestly came to accept it as an immovable impediment. I settled. It feels so strange to admit this but that's the truth. I worked at it for half a century but each year of failure made it seem less important so I confess that I gave up."

She looked around the room and saw beyond the substance to the history that had been made within, "They called us the Indomitable Thirteen but some seemed to have a path smoothed out for them while others ran into nothing but hurdles and roadblocks. It hurt to compare myself to Rina or even Jin Muyi so I stopped but I think I lost something when I did that."

Ferenike pressed her hand to her chest, off center where her heart lay below. "The fire in me died. Not all at once but it dwindled year after year, decade following decade until I was waking up in my bed staring death in the face when I looked in the mirror. That didn't scare me. Not even the news of Peta dying or Jin Muyi's passing shook me because I'd already accepted my death, you know. I wasn't afraid of it because I thought I'd accomplished all that I ever would."

Her eyes closed as she replayed a memory. "Then the skies went mad and I saw Heaven strive with all its might to kill one man, so small against the expanse above yet it failed. Heaven failed to kill this single person, one of my clansmen stood against the Celestial Machine itself in full fury and by some means he prevailed. The cost of the means used in his salvation was ruinous but victory was his. That was when I realized that I hadn't been afraid of death in itself but rather failing."

Ferenike opened her eyes and looked down at the spotted skin of her arms. "Heh, I pretty much pulled myself back up over the edge on thread with how long I left it. I feel alive like I haven't been in a long while. The future has promise again so I want to try, to struggle to make my mark. It burns so painfully, this hope within me that there is still within me the promise of excellence but I would never give it up again for the world."

Eirene had stayed silent and attentive throughout Ferenike's outpouring of emotion but as the other woman trailed off into silence, she quietly took one of the unopened wine jars and drained it dry straight from the container. Wiping her mouth of the dribbles that had escaped her guzzling, she sighed and placed the empty vessel on the table.

"I had to give up my dream," she stated bluntly, "It was painful but I had to do it or let it drag me down into the grave like a millstone around my neck. Realizing that I truly did not have the strength or conviction to uphold that belief hurt more than I could have ever imagined. I chased after the throne of a Single Pillar King because I was convinced of the certainty of my vision but I faltered on the brink of even becoming a candidate. Being stuck on a bottleneck at the 12th Heavenstage and seeing your goal remain ever distant for several decades despite struggling so hard is not a pleasant experience, but perhaps you can empathize."

Eirene looked up, seeing something beyond the ceiling above. "If it was a matter of resources then perhaps things might have been different but truthfully that was not it. I sought the triumph of peace through pacifism but that was a hollow lie my Dao-Heart could not maintain. Perhaps someone better than me could have walked that road to the apex but I had to turn off the pure path and accept the realizations that I long sought to deny until it was almost too late."

She spoke the next words so softly that Ferenike had to strain to hear them. "Strength lies at the heart of victory and strength is violence. The Clan I am sworn to serve attacked another in an almost unprovoked war. A clansman defended against Heaven and left slaughter in his wake. Peace must be defended if it is truly prized and that means sometimes hurting others. I understand that now. I needed the strength that continued life and advancement would give me so I sacrificed part of my cultivation to drop to the 11th Heavenstage for my tribulation."

Eirene stared straight at Ferenike and her old friend felt shivers at what she saw in that gaze. "Peace is a bloody-handed embassy that secures its promises in violence. I can hear the drumbeat of an Asura declaring mercy in the finality of oblivion. Are not the dead beyond the troubles of life?"

Eirene shook her head and the intensity about her faded. "Ah, listen to me babble on about questions I do not yet understand much less hold answers to. What a fine pair of old women we are, wailing about our spent youth when we have a renewed promise of life."

"I'll drink to that," Ferenike said, fishing out an as yet unopened wine jar from her rapidly depleting collection.

"The past is memory and the future filled with possibility. Let us seize the tiger's tail and ride it to the end come what may," Ferenike toasted, saucer in hand.

"Aye!" Eirene said mirroring Ferenike and the two cultivators, downed their wine.

"I never knew you to have a taste for sweet wine," Eirene commented, "This is not bad but that's about all that can be said."

"Times change and tastes change with them," Ferenike replied, "I was planning on visiting a few old faces and paying my respects to some of the fallen. That was before I knew you were around. Would you be interested in joining me?"

"That works for me," Eirene agreed, "Counting the losses is something I need to properly do. Did you know that Tasos passed recently during the Blood Eclipse?"

"No I didn't," Ferenike frowned, "Damn too late again. No more waiting. It's time to put my face out there and return to active service."

"What exactly are you going to be telling people?" Eirene asked, "You went so silent many assumed that you had passed."

"The reports of my death are greatly exaggerated? It's not like I'm a ghost or anything," Ferenike shrugged, "Just a washed up legend going back for one more go at it."

"I propose a new toast," Eirene said, refilling her saucer and Ferenike's, "To old fools, who stand back up no matter how long on the ground."

Clinking their saucers together, Ferenike and Eirene drank deeply, for the dead who had no more to give, for the living who had expected so much and for themselves who found a new purpose.

AN: (2500/2=1250 words) Please threadmark @ReaderOfFate @Alectai. So things are looking up for the quest. An old face has popped back up and I am delighted to work with them. This is a Collaboration with @Liliet. I hope we will have many more of these.
 
Ferenike 30: Archive of Golden Devil Legions Addendum [TURN 13, OMAKE 4]
TURN 13, OMAKE 4 [Ferenike]
Ferenike 30: Archive of Golden Devil Legions Addendum

NAME (COGNOMEN): 22nd Legion, Chamber of Administration

LEGATE: Stratopedarches Casia Zimisce

MOTTO: "Five Pillars of Bronze lift high the Imperator's banner"

SIGIL: The word "διαχείριση" boldly written in gold thread at the center of a black background with the titles of the other four Pillar Legions in descending order below horizontally

DESCRIPTION: The Grand Elder is the core strength of the Golden Devil Clan and its overall commander. However the demands of necessary cultivation upkeep and the sheer value of his time means that much of the mundane affairs of running the Clan are delegated to others. Among the senior command of the Clan which consists of the Legate heads of the Legions, there are named Elders, major and minor, who see to the essential functions of the Clan. Five seats are elevated within the Optimatoi Kainon as the Council of Elders, belonging to titled pillars of the Clan who are second only to the Archegetes.

Stratopedarches Casia Zimisce is the Elder of Administration. To her fall the duties of managing mines, herbs, cities, camps – all manner of resources flowed through her hands. She is responsible for maintaining the reserve of funds that fuel the projects decided upon in the Council's two-decade spanning Great Plans. Increasing wealth is always foremost on Casia's mind, identifying sources for more Spirit Stones, finding ways to extract more taxes, refining production efficiency etc.

The Chamber of Administration collects tribute from vassals, maintains law and order in clan territory and now, supervises the establishment of coloneia. They cooperate with the other Pillars to maintain the Spirit Contribution Board to manage the financial environment of the Clan. In economic terms, the 22nd Legion use the basic Contribution Board to essentially peg a currency value (of Spirit Stones) and fix various land value taxes (good land for Spirit Herb gardens, rights to hunt beasts of sorts in easy hunting grounds, better areas with superior Qi, and so on), and otherwise facilitate a market economy. The bureaucrats of this Legion are often bookish but no less dedicated to the Clan for their lack of martial acclaim. The twin projects of the Underworld Devil Fortress and the Scorpion Trade Palace have given them an opportunity to demonstrate their competency on top of the absorption of the Jingshen production capacity.
CREDIT: Occipitallobe, Insane-Not-Crazy 1, 2, 3


NAME (COGNOMEN): 23rd Legion, Ministry of Diplomacy

LEGATE: Hetaireiarches Kleisthenes Sarantapechos

MOTTO: "Five Pillars of Bronze lift high the Banners"

SIGIL: The word "διπλωματούχος" boldly written in gold thread at the center of a black background with the titles of the other four Pillar Legions in descending order below horizontally

DESCRIPTION: Hetaireiarches Kleisthenes Sarantapechos is the Elder of Diplomacy and also the Second Elder as the younger Nascent Soul of the Clan. To her fall the duties of managing external powers and other Nascent Souls. As a Nascent Soul herself, Kleisthenes finds that her relations with the other peer influences of the region have better outcomes than before. Power in an envoy goes a long way to making good neighbors. She is responsible for efforts at building bridges with powers; giving gifts, exchanging assistance, aiming for strategic marriages and the like.

The Ministry of Diplomacy has grown tremendously in the past two centuries and more. The invitation for Legions to participate on the Great Battlefield was a watershed moment in foreign relations that was seized upon to build ties with the Righteous Path. With the defeat of the Jingshen Clan and Battle Blood Cannibal Sect, the focus of diplomacy lies now in the Plains and the Mountains. Officials are dispatched with troop detachments to negotiate trade, capitalize on relationships and boost the presence of the Clan in the dance of great powers.
CREDIT: Occipitallobe, Insane-Not-Crazy 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6


NAME (COGNOMEN): 24th Legion, Bureau of Intrigue

LEGATE: Parakoimomenos Xie Xinya

MOTTO: "Five Pillars of Bronze lift high the Banners"

SIGIL: The word "ραδιουργία" boldly written in gold thread at the center of a black background with the titles of the other four Pillar Legions in descending order below horizontally

DESCRIPTION: Parakoimomenos Xie Xinya is the Elder of Intrigue. To her fall the duties of espionage, sabotage, and assassination. The current Archegetes, Manuel Konstantinos, had previously held his position, and the lessons he learned in that role color his leadership of the Clan. Greater interaction with the Clan's neighbors has opened up wider opportunities for intelligence operations and infiltration of both ally and enemy.

The Bureau of Intrigue maintains counter-intelligence overwatch for the Clan although the 1010th Legion specifically guards the territory of the Dawn Fortress. This Legion has the greatest number of auxiliaries given the need for assets that do not bear the distinctive look of the Bronze-Blooded. The 24th Legion is also responsible for keeping an eye on vassals, sussing out any hints of rebellion or betrayal of oaths. The Archegetes keeps a firm eye on the budget of the Bureau, to make sure that the funds allocated for bribery and subversion go exactly where needed. The Bureau operates by spending Spirit Stones like water to find out everything they can about other powers; strengths, weaknesses, places to strike, rebels, and the like.

There were four (or five, depending on how one counted) orders of spies under the Bureau's auspices, all serving various purposes. Two (or three) external, and two internal. The Magistrianoi are a newly revived order previously extinguished a few thousand years ago that had served under the various Legates, a unified intelligence service for internal matters. Xinya had refunded the order and sworn in fresh blood. Their purpose was to look for minor trends, minor enemies. The Magistrianoi were not the cleverest and best of spies, but rather the newest and often the weakest. From their ranks the best would be drawn to serve the other branches. They would look for minor Blood Path enemies, minor issues, hunt down things that Legates might leave untouched, and turn them over to the Legates to action.
CREDIT: Occipitallobe, Insane-Not-Crazy 1, 2, 3, 4


NAME (COGNOMEN): 25th Legion, Office of Disciples

LEGATE: Chartoularios Tou Kanikleiou Destasia Duca

MOTTO: "Five Pillars of Bronze lift high the Banners"

SIGIL: The word "μαθητές" boldly written in gold thread at the center of a black background with the titles of the other four Pillar Legions in descending order below horizontally

DESCRIPTION: Chartoularios Tou Kanikleiou Destasia Duca is the Master of Disciples. She picks out good seeds, gives training and assistance, and manages the core of the Clan Contribution Board for Qi Condensation and Foundation Building disciples in times of peace. Destasia Duca is a genius who has taken the challenge of improving the quality of the Legions gladly and unleashed the full force of her towering acumen. Her greatest achievements have so far been the success of the Blood Purification Initiative and Project Amphora, strengthening the Blood of Bronze in junior Legionnaires and reviving the Blood of Silver in new Core Formation Elders, respectively.

The Office of Disciples are a strange lot who love their Elder and follow her trends a bit too much as seen by the peculiar fashion adopted by the officers. Members of the Office are located in every Waycity, Waystation and other clan hub to maintain the Spirit Contribution Board. The officials of the Tribinus militum maintain the standard archives and libraries of the Clan but their current prize is the Eight Hundred and Eighty Technique Palace.
CREDIT: Occipitallobe, Insane-Not-Crazy 1, 2, 3, 4


NAME (COGNOMEN): 26th Legion, Department of War

LEGATE: Protostrator Sheng Yu

MOTTO: "Five Pillars of Bronze lift high the Banners"

SIGIL: The word "πόλεμος" boldly written in gold thread at the center of a black background with the titles of the other four Pillar Legions in descending order below horizontally

DESCRIPTION: Protostrator Sheng Yu is the leader of the Clan's Legions. When the time comes to gather up into formations and strike at enemies, or defend your cities, it is he who organizes them, leads them, and manages the Clan Contribution Board to ensure the correct tasks get done. He is responsible for the strategic deployment of the Shattering Glass Javelin Array, having the privilege of controlling control tokens to the array. Historically the Legions have employed a defensive playbook but Sheng Yu brings an aggressive combat doctrine that meshes well with new advancements in Scorpion Cavalry. Many may discount his relative inexperience and unassuming voice but he is fast proving himself an able commander.

The Department of War are the tacticians and strategists who oversee the overall combat readiness of the Clan. They are responsible for ensuring that when the Clan is being prepared for active readiness, Legionnaires are trained and ready for war, practiced in their use of Formations and equipment. They are the first call when the Clan needs raids to weaken an enemy; sending teams of cultivators to pillage for resources and kill troops where possible in minor conflicts for minor rewards. These raids provide at best minor territorial gains but when much more is needed, the Department can muster a full strength invasion, striking with all the might of the Legions to seize territory and slaughter foes under the attention of the Nascent Souls of the Clan. In the reverse, the Protostrator can also direct fortification efforts in clan territory or vassal lands against outside enemies; building new fortresses, crafting new arrays, training cultivators in Formations and so on.
CREDIT: Occipitallobe, Insane-not-Crazy 1, 2, 3, 4


NAME (COGNOMEN): 69th Legion, the Wreath Bearers

LEGATE: Legate Tisamenos

MOTTO: Undecided, old creed was "Silken gloves over bronze fists"

SIGIL: A wreath of green having concealed thorns upon a white background

DESCRIPTION: Great Scribe, Noble Spirit Lord and many more titles elevate the figure of a humble junior who has blazed a spectacular ascent in both cultivation and career. This unassuming record-keeper and archivist first came to the notice of Clan superiors when he penned the definitive chronicle of the Miracle at Pleuron. It would be no embellishment to say that his works took the feats of those daring juniors during the Hundred-Year Trials and shaped them into a lasting legend, a tale of the Indomitable Thirteen. The reputation he earned (and likely convenience of availability and expendability) made him an easy choice when the Grand Elder sought out a secretary for the negotiations between himself and other Nascent Souls in the wake of the Battle Blood Cannibal Sect's fall. From that moment, he seemed to find himself at the centerpiece of pivotal moments in the Clan's relations with its peer powers. His brief tenure on the Council of Righteous Elders representing the Clan as an observer has proven very profitable for the Golden Devils. To his many accomplished feats, he adds the achievement of being the first Silver-Blood Elder the Imperial Optimatoi have seen in many centuries and a record-holder for ascent to the third great realm in the fallen Third Sea. This unexpected elevation has been a forceful learning experience for the shining prize of Project Amphora. He lacks much of the experience expected of Core Formation Elders and is doubly contesting with the innate traits engendered in him by the Blood of Silver. These have made the transition to head of a Legion much more stressful than normal.

The 69th​ Legion is an old Legion that was extinguished at the start of Manuel Konstaninos' apprenticeship to the late Archegetes Alexios and its banner was retired. Tisamenos has chosen to revive this old legacy upon his recognition as an Elder of the Clan. The Legion under his command is largely a nominal force as he is far too busy preoccupied coming to grips with the rapid changes in his person and status. At present it consists of a small retinue, just suitable to serve the needs of an Elder. With the passing of time, the new Legate has managed to mostly overcome the Silver Blood and now looks to wider ambitions. Perhaps it is serendipity or the Fates at work that in this time, word has arrived that Ferenike, Tisamenos' beloved then senior now junior, has returned from retirement and is once more drawing notice. It seems that this is a truly a time for revivals and resurrection as the new entrant to command ponders his future.
CREDIT: Occipitallobe, Insane-Not-Crazy 1, 2


NAME (COGNOMEN): 125th Legion, Grand Officials of Terrestrial Bureaucracy

LEGATE: Legate Quanli Dengji

MOTTO: "Stamp all Creation under our Seal"

SIGIL: A bronze two-headed Eagle pecking down on a jade green turtle on its back in a circle of black upon a white background
DESCRIPTION: When Casia Zsimisce assumed her office as Stratopedarches, the staffers in the Office of Administration looked to Quanli Dengji's behavior for direction. His sincere bow to the new mistress of their office earned Casia their approval and paved the way for a smooth takeover. This was the proud legacy of a lifetime of labor in the administration of the Golden Devil Clan by Quanli Dengji. This capable administrator has neither desired nor known any other life other than the career track of a bureaucrat since before he first became a cultivator. A foundling adopted by Eunomia Socrates, the Stratopedarches before Euphrosyne Sarantapechos, Quanli has always been drawn to the order of hierarchy, the civilizing influence of bureaucracy and the beauty of competent administration. He has sought to become a paragon of these ideals, serving in several roles of the clan's administration within vassals and in the core territories. The aged official was in the twilight of his service, as hardworking in the face of his impending mortality as ever when Destasia Duca's missive identified him as a potential candidate for Project Amphora. Well aware of the general nature of this project from his privileged access, Quanli only hesitated to ensure that a capable junior was in place in the event he failed his tribulation. His success was a hard won effort as his Third Sea heritage impeded his path but he grasped victory nonetheless. The strength of the Blood of Silver is a welcome thing to Quanli of course but the authority of command is a far more appreciated gift. With renewed vigor and purpose he aspires to transform the Clan's conquests into productive gain for the Imperial Optimatoi.

The 125th​ Legion can trace its legacy to the earliest presence of the Imperial Optimatoi in the Third Sea, when the Sea-Conquering Army ruled over all Nine Seas of the Turtle Realm. Their vision was to be an absolute bureaucracy in the domains under Optimatoi control, exerting such control and supervision as to seem divine. When Quanli Dengji ascended he knew that there was no more fitting match for his ambitions. While he is still a novice in his new role, Quanli is a veteran administrator. As such where others in his position would have been assigned to less critical areas to acclimate, Quanli's request to be deployed to assist the assimilation of the Jingshen conquest was given serious consideration. Quanli is currently headquartered in the newly constructed Underworld Devil Fortress, doing his commendable best to establish it as a secondary hub for clan administration along with other more experienced Elders.. He brought with him a core of reliable bright juniors and old hands from the Office of Administration to establish his new Legion.
CREDIT: Occipitallobe, Insane-Not-Crazy


NAME (COGNOMEN): 571st Legion, the Watchful Minds

LEGATE: Legate Maurikius

MOTTO: "All plans must meet with reality at some point"

SIGIL: An optio's bronze helmet with the red plume of rank on a white background
DESCRIPTION: Founded by the famed Elder Theodosius, author of the Strategikon, the 571st​ are known for producing many acclaimed strategoi and Protostrators for the Clan. They follow in the tradition of their founder in seeking to advance the usage and knowledge of formations in warfare, very much a taktika support Leion. Setting aside their reputation for producing competent tactical commanders and strategic generals, the Watchful Minds are a Legion whose combat doctrine is designed around causing terrible attrition to their enemies while maintaining a threat in potential presence, an adaptation from the conditions of the Organ Meat Desert. Enemies see and fight them off and on in irregular spurts, as though they were besieging their opponents physically and mentally. Their weakness is that their reliance on attrition makes them poor at force projection, capable of being aggressive on the defense within Clan territory but not as good in aggressive conquest. Ferenike of the Indomitable was a promising junior once among their ranks and her recent return from retirement has hopes of an eventful comeback stirring in both command and the ranks.
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NAME (COGNOMEN): 800th Legion, the Hands of Midas

LEGATE: Legate Kuan Yu Hermeia

MOTTO: "Money cannot buy happiness but it can buy opportunities to grasp it"

SIGIL: A golden hand cradling a heart

DESCRIPTION: Sickly as a child, Kuan Yu never had much of an interest for martial pursuits. She had a quick mind but learning for its own sake bored her. Where her passions drew her was the art of the deal. The ability of currency tokens to transform time and energy into transferable receipts fascinated her as well social engagement of doing business. Receiving the Blood of Bronze strengthened her frames but did nothing for her disinterest in soldiery. As a Legionnaire, she took up missions that demanded expertise in commerce and slowly built up a reputation as a wandering merchant. The accumulation of money did not hold Kuan Yu's heart, it was the challenge of acquisition that drove her. She spent wealth as freely as she gained it, exploring various ventures and schemes. Many failed, some broke even and a precious few provided abundant returns. Kuan Yu would have had nothing else. The chance to ascend with the Blood of Silver was an unexpected opportunity that her mercantile character would not let her deny even with the risk. Now she seeks to expand the scope of her businesses wider and in depth with her new status.

The 800th​ were a struggling Legion when Kuan Yu came to them, lacking an Elder in charge and much diminished in strength from disasters in their portfolios. The Hands of Midas in the past few centuries seemed to turn every opportunity that came their way into lead, fumbling investments and being on the wrong side of rapid developments in the Clan. Kuan Yu offered them a hope of revitalization, a return to the wealth and glory of their bygone years. Newly installed as legate, she is going against the market by looking away from the Spirit Stone trade in the assimilation of the Jingshen and placing her focus in the newly created Scorpion Trade Palace, seeing potential in developing a wide ranging trade network throughout the entirety of the vassal territories.
CREDIT: Occipitallobe, Insane-Not-Crazy


NAME (COGNOMEN): 1010th Legion, Stewards of the Hearth

LEGATE: Eutropia Cincinnatus

MOTTO: "Purity and Order are the cornerstones of a sound stronghold"

SIGIL: A gray bonfire consuming charred bones on a white background

DESCRIPTION: From within the Optimatoi Koinon rule the Council of Elders who supervise the Golden Devil Clan. The Grand Elder is advised chiefly by the Elders of War, Administration, Diplomacy, Intrigue and Disciples but there are other Elders of authority who oversee narrower portfolios. The Elder of Sanitation is one such office, a post given to the master steward of the Dawn Fortress' physical maintenance. For many centuries through the rule of two Archegetes, Eutropia Cincinnatus has held that title.

Many with a shallow knowledge of the workings of the Imperial Optimatoi bureaucracy consider the position of Elder of Sanitation to be that of the lowest-ranked Elder, but those with more wisdom and discernment respect the caretakers of the Clan's capital. Cultivators produce many strange and varied waste from industry, research and advancement, and the Dawn Fortress as the largest concentration of such superhuman figures in Clan territory accumulates a greater scope of such. Veteran staff of the 1010th have a plethora of tales about the horrors in the sewers to put off any inquisitive souls. The gunk that builds up in the gutters would haunt even Legionnaires' dreams. However much of the public reputation of the Office of Sanitation is an obfuscation of secrets behind obvious truths. The Elder of Sanitation is in fact actually in charge of a lot of Dawn Fortress counter-intel and sanitation duties were historically taken up because it was thought that if someone needed to guard and ensure the sewers don't see people sneaking in, they might as well work to the fullest as a guard against all intruding filth and vermin.

Eutropia is a combat-focused cultivator with a Dao of Purification. Her combat expertise as someone who attained the 10th Heavenstage and wields an artifact that strikes one small realm upwards is wholly necessary for a cleaner in her position since she occasionally has to face Core-level garbage spirits while inside the Dawn Fortress ie., conduct a Core level battle with no collateral damage. She's a Spear Artist whose techniques mostly revolve around incredible precision. She wields a spear and shield, and mostly fights by wreathing her attacks in holy fire in melee, jabbing out barrages of extremely fast and compact Spear Qi at range, and using body arts which give her brief but intense bursts of speed to zig-zag in unpredictable patterns. Her style is one based on fast, powerful, linear motions, which means she fares well against hard styles and poorly against soft styles. Her Dao of Purification lends itself to a combat philosophy of targeted destruction, striking a target but only destroying one aspect of it. In a pinch she can be a fantastic doctor, simply driving her spear through a subject and ripping out a tumor without even breaking the skin.

She's getting old, in her last century of life but is still able to discharge her duties. Most of her service was spent during Alexios' reign, and while she greatly respects Manuel's accomplishments she respected Alexios as a man more, though she'd never say that out loud, of course. Alexios' direct style and righteous manner appealed to her greatly. She herself used to be an ultra-zealous crusader in the pursuit of her responsibility, but has eventually settled down as the superlative janitor when she got older, and found that her current job is one she enjoys more than warfare. Still, that terrifying conqueror comes out again when she rides off to war. The recent stay of Yao Zhihao and the endless experiments of Destasia Duca have provided her with enough work to keep her on her toes. Bizarre amalgams of alchemical effluence and Core Formation parasites are just some of her recent opponents.

Under her leadership, the Stewards of the Hearth have been drilled into a professional custodial and counter-intelligence force. She is not an enjoyable person to work for because while she's not cruel to her subordinates exactly, she will get the job done at any cost as seen when she punishes a traitor to the clan by painfully burning their Bronze out from within such that the molten bronze burns them alive from inside. Eutropia is very severe when on the job, which is almost all the time but also being pretty relaxed and very sleepy when she's off the job. If caught off work she is actually very suggestible, as long as any suggestions don't involve creating waste in any capacity. The Stewards are not lacking in opportunity to earn contribution points from their significant salaries and earnings from turning in valuable garbage.
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AN: (4010 words) Please threadmark @Alectai @ReaderOfFate. Still chipping away at getting content out. This is an extension of the Legions Archive. Slowly getting bigger and bigger lads.
 
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Ferenike 31: Cursing, Cussing, Swearing, Insulting – How to Be Profane and Rude
TURN 13, OMAKE 5 [Ferenike]
Ferenike 31: Cursing, Cussing, Swearing, Insulting – How to Be Profane and Rude

Welcome, Legate Maurikius.

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A Brief Look at Insults among the Imperial Optimatoi by Legate Aristotle Onassis

Any student of early Imperial Optimatoi history inevitably comes across the tale of Ea-Nasir, a lesson I find very useful in enlightening my students about the ironies of fate and history. Much has been lost to the Clan of the traditions and culture of our ancestors in the Sea-Conquering Army, through the ceaseless opposition of the Ruthless Heavens, the enmity from the barbaroi of the Nine Seas and the simple entropy of passing time. It is left to us, the faded remnant of faded glory to pick through the detritus of the ages and attempt to divine some knowledge from the carcass of our legacy. One of our strongest links to our forgotten past is the testament of the merchant Ea-Nasir who managed to develop an infamy that has seen him remembered through uncountable millennia when other surely greater figures of renown have been forgotten. How did a merchant of the ancient guild Alik Tilmun come to be so well preserved? The answer lies in his apparent ability to incite a depth of fury and antagonism in his customers arising from truly offensive business practices. What I call the testament of Ea-Nasir is in truth a collection of over a dozen artifacts narrating a diatribe of complaints against the manner in which Ea-Nasir sought to fulfill his contracts. These are not politely expressed charges but invective laden, spiritually charged messages. The Tablet of Nissa is a bronze plaque that has a message written in the Old Imperial Script that is nonetheless intelligible to any reader from the profound intent its author attached to it. Such is the potency of the intent that lingers on the plaque that unprepared readers are found in a trance shouting its contents. It accuses Ea-Nasir of being distracted by his sexual relations with beasts, blood relations and corpses as an explanation for the late delivery of certain metals. The Rite of Castigation is a practice passed down through one of the families of the Old Blood where curses are levied against a certain Ei-Nesr at the dawn of the new year, damning him and all the evils of the past year to one thousand years of suffering in the Abyss. These are part a fraction of the legacy of ire that Ea-Nasir has left us.

The reason for my brief recounting of this particular subject is to highlight just how much a role insults and profanity play in history. What is history but the present at a remove and what can we learn from what is considered uncouth and taboo today? I hope to briefly explore some of the highlights of the common tongue in use as regards this topic.

Let us consider the ever popular reference to the damnation of the Fates. Clansmen, old and young, are familiar with the expression 'Fates damn you' as a curse against a subject of disapproval. The Fates are a cultural artifact of the Clan's foreign origins, a trio of great powers who have influence over the course of the lives of clansfolk. They are treated as abstract representations more than concrete entities in the present age but we can trace a continued association as far back as any history goes, as evidenced in the use of "Cracking damnation" in inscriptions from the depths of our archives.

Another popular articulation is to swear by the Imperator or varied body parts thereof. The mythical overlord who had supreme authority over the Sea-Conquering Army is an archetypical figure in Clan lore overshadowing even the alleged direct founder of the Imperial Optimatoi, the Earl of Bronze. It is interesting to compare how reference is made to either legendary figure in contrast to the other popular figure of the Grand Elder. As long as the Clan has been led by long-lived demigods whether Archegetes, Tagmatarchis or greater, the Legions have made puerile comments about their lords. I can't count how many times I heard mention of "Old Gold's saggy balls" or "Lord Alexios' mighty phallus". I have no doubt that the womanly charms of the Second Elder are soon going to become fodder for infantile commentary. Shamefully it appears that the degeneration of youth has led to certain disreputable circles marring the grandeur of our founders through the phrase, "By the Earl's shiny bollocks", forgive me for saying.

Some terms appear to have a foreign source, assimilated into popular speech from interactions with our neighbors. "May you become food for scorpions" and "Your mother was a scorpion" are some of the clearest examples, as they were unrecorded before the Clan's transfer to the Organ Meat Desert. Another is "Go jump in a gate you idiot", an obvious reference to the Beast Transformation Portal. The phrases "Heavens curse you" and "Turtle damned" have slipped into common use during the recent relaxation of tensions with the Righteous Path and the service of Legionnaires on the Great Battlefield. "May you fuck goats to the ninth generation" is one of the novel quips I find quite hilarious since certain elders might remember when "Goatforsaken mountain" was a standard reference to Mt Tai.

Classical Clan profanity has always made a reference to the Blood of Bronze. "Rusting Bronze", and "Shiny idiots" are still familiar phrases on the lips of instructors who have to deal with the antics of Aspirants, many of whom suffer the indignity of being called "Squeaky bolts' during their induction. An odd mixture of Clan speech and foreign elements has to be "By the Turtle Emperor's rusting pustules" which unsurprisingly is gaining popularity among soldiers sent beyond out borders. "Rusty spear" or "Rusted flag" are still fighting words among the Vanguard and the Array-Engineers as aspersions against martial competence and mastery of artifice.

The perennial favorite of "May you live in interesting times" is still going strong in both formal and casual conservation though the use of "bloody madmen" is quick catching up given the current movements of the Blood Path.

There are endless curse words and invectives that could be described herein but that is work for another day. Language is a living creature, and what is said in the shadows has as much import as what is boldly declared. There is always insight to be found in the manner of speech between what changes across generations and what remains constant. My parting words will merely be that words have power, to immortalize and to shame eternally.




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AN: (1430 words) Huh, no need to ping others not I suppose. Thanks to everyone on the discord who contributed to my wonderful imagining of how to make mothers all across the Virtuous Flipper Region start reaching for soap.
 
Ferenike 32: Seven Divine Saber Palace Negaverse Collab 1
TURN 14, OMAKE 1 [Ferenike]
Ferenike 32: Seven Divine Saber Palace Negaverse Collab 1

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Seven Divine Sabre Palace Epilogue - Collab with @Insane-Not-Crazy and @CuriousRaptor The Elder of the Pommel sighed as he closed the doors for the last time. Here, in the impression where once an unsurpassed jewel would have sat on the divine sabre, were the remains of his sect. With the...

AN: (250 words) I am taking an LST and Ferenike is joining the Qiguai delve.
 
Ferenike 33: What Happened When the Grand Elder Took a Nap?
TURN 14, OMAKE 2 [FERENIKE]
Ferenike 33: What Happened When the Grand Elder Took a Nap?

Nearly six decades later and Kleisthenes Sarantapechos found that it hadn't gotten any easier being a Nascent Soul. Oh that was not to say that it hadn't become more familiar with practice over the years but she definitely would not have described her new life as the Second Elder as having become more comfortable. Having her life narrowed down to almost nothing but cultivating had been an unpleasant adjustment but the experience of that cultivation was truly an agony that had to be experienced to be understood. Yet in that one hour she had free daily, the power she could express had been magnified to such heights that the bitter pain was almost worth it. She had in the past thought that the eccentricities of Nascent Souls came from becoming accustomed to the inescapable difficulty of advancing their newborn souls but now, having truly exerted her power against the environment and other cultivators, she had a suspicion that the sheer gulf in strength that existed between her and the majority had a part to play. There was nothing like standing above the masses as a godlike figure yourself to empower what weakness had kept restrained in your character.

At present, she hung suspended in the air of her private quarters in the Dawn Fortress, arms crossed behind her head and inclined at an angle as though she was in a lounge chair. Suspended above her temple with only her will hung a fist sized stone that glowed from within in the shimmering colors of a rainbow, an entrancing illumination emanating from it that captured the eye and entranced the spirit. At the start of her cultivation the stone had been much larger, almost the size of her head. Before her elevation, a High Grade Spirit Stone such as this would have been a precious treasure of the Clan, a prize secured by Manuel Konstantinos himself and one that would have been almost impossible for her to access even with the privilege granted her as Hetaireiarches. In truth even after Manuel had worked a miracle and secured her breakthrough through her Nascent Heavenly Tribulation, such a resource had been dearly obtained, drawn from the Clan's limited reserves as a necessity to stabilize her foundations and speed her as fast as possible through the vulnerability of her recent entry into the fourth great realm.

Now, Kleisthenes smiled to herself as she drew power from the stone into herself dimming its light and diminishing its size, the Clan had access to so many more such natural treasures and she was enjoying the luxury. She thought she now understood a bit of how Jingshen Jiao must have felt, being pampered by an old monster feeding her near irreplaceable valuables like they were plucked from trees. The former Underworld Spirit Palace – Underworld Devil Fortress had been a bit on the nose as a new name, she thought, but it did have a nice ring to it – was not back to full production of Spirit Stones, especially of the rare Nascent-grade minerals, but the reserves the former Jingshen heads had set aside for their personal wartime use had been easy enough for Manuel to ferret out from their concealment.

The main branch of the Jingshen clan, the Zhen line, had certainly spared themselves little from their wealth. Apart from the Spirit Stones, there were a number of trinkets and artifacts she'd looted from the quarters of the deceased lords of the Jingshen when they had taken the Palace. Nothing life changing of course but it was the little luxuries suitable for a cultivator of her realm that made life a little more tolerable.

She almost wished that she had been able to assist Manuel in his battle against the two Jingshen heads. The Stone Spear was a remarkable treasure that had more than paid back the blood spent in gaining it with the strength it had granted the old man but it was a greedy tool. For a moment she had an odd thought of the soul she was currently cultivating transformed into the image of a pig resting on its haunches while weeping tears of unrealized greed at the loss of the contents within the Soul Apertures of Jiao and Junjie, not to mention the wealth that their very corpses would have represented to a pragmatically minded Devil like herself. Alas the price for a quick victory with little injury to the Grand Elder had been seeing that potential go unfulfilled.

Kleisthenes idly checked the array formations inscribed in three dimensions around her to ensure that every bit of energy from the now depleted Spirit Stone was being captured for her use. It was remarkable really how pain became something routine enough that she was able to cultivate, suffering the strain of trying to separate soul from self and yet entertain random trains of thought. Her current session was quickly coming to an end though and her precious free time was soon going to be miserly poured out in her responsibilities as Elder of Diplomacy and Second Elder. The former was largely handled by delegation to competent subordinates of her Ministry but the latter required an exhausting use of the Thousand-Thought Qi Threading Sutra just to keep up with what she needed to catch up with. Ancient secrets, hidden caches and forbidden techniques were just the least of the restricted material she had to master to become an effective aide to the Archegetes and replacement Grand Elder if the worst ever happened. Quality mental enhancements that made any appreciable difference over the natural abilities of a Nascent Soul were rare – she'd checked, but even the Delphi lacked access to the fullness of their trademark qi techniques and they were best preserved legacy – so she was stuck with the qi guzzling mantra that made her inner spirit curl up in misery at the expenditure required.

It could not be helped though, Kleisthenes admitted to herself. The Clan was only just recovered to the strength they had before Lord Alexios had fallen. All the recent gains won by the Legions were nothing without a solid core of strength to hold them against other great powers and that meant having Nascent Soul tier power. As the last dregs of power were drained from the Spirit Stone, it crumbled into dust and even that meager remnant was seized upon by the Pneuma Awakening Array around Kleisthenes to be absorbed. Flying by the power of her soul's rejection against the strictures of gravity in a reclining position midair, Kleisthenes released the seals on her closed cultivation chamber and immediately seized upon the materials her aides had left prepared for in the work area set up outside. The chant of the Thousand-Thought Qi Threading Sutra echoed in the air around her, a ghostly refrain with no visible source as her soul employed the mantra. Her will blazed through several spiritual jades simultaneously while her eyes darted over multiple reports help up before her. The work never ceased and she could not wait until the cleansing was complete on the looted Nascent Tribulation Treasures. Let someone else deal with being the newest junior on the totem pole then.

***​

Another day's cultivation was done, pushing against the resistance of her soul as Kleisthenes relived the greatest nadirs of her life and survived them over and over ad infinitum. Today was bookmarked for a Council meeting so when she left her quarters she sprung into the air, headed for the Optimatoi Kainon. Even as she moved at a blistering pace through the sky, she was not idle. A constellation of spirit jades orbited her head like a crown, instructions and missives being penned by her will for her diplomats and foreign envoys. Her journey carried her over the towering emplacements of the Dawn Fortress, the mighty bastion built up over centuries as the heart of the Clan. A fraction of her attention spared from her jadework looked down upon the ranks of Aspirants fumbling their way through their training, observed the streams of Legionnaires – many in the colors of the Five Pillars – hurrying to and fro in their duties, and noticed the spear raised up in salute to her by Elder Eutropia from a small plaza with an open sewer cover. Kleisthenes made a note to check in with the Elder of Sanitation when she returned from her patrol in the bowels of the Dawn Fortress. The woman sometimes came upon the most remarkable finds among the effluvium of the Clan citadel.

Her transit was short and as she quickly came upon her destination she tucked away the hovering spirit jades. The Clan Hall was not a building that one called beautiful or even particularly noticeable. It was small compared to many of its neighbors and resembled a toad, squat and gray as it was. Kleisthenes knew this appearance to be deceiving. Even now the sigils etched along the entirety of its external and internal surfaces escaped her ability to physically observe so finely were they carved, yet she was unmistakably aware of their presence in the potency they emanated against her spirit as the foundation to the Clan capital's defenses.

She slowed her flight as she approached and entered. Too fast and the unforgiving automatic defenses would trigger and while she would not be seriously harmed, they could certainly sting and raise a ruckus. The interior of the building was a testament to the paranoid madness of the old man. There were no passes or exemptions to grant full access but rather a dizzying maze of traps and false trails that required intimate knowledge of the Clan. As a Core Formation Elder, making her way inside had required traversing a frustrating gauntlet of frequently changing safe passages often requiring very contextual clues but now she breezed through the defenses. Say what you would about the old goat but his methods had their uses. In the last two centuries alone, the Clan had drawn enough attention with their expansive growth that the number of infiltrators caught out by the security measures was approaching high two digits.

The final approach had been changed quite recently. No longer was a mere doorway inscribed with the Bronze Purity Array deemed sufficient. Now the last entry to the meeting room of the Council was a lengthy hallway ablaze with upgraded rune script that would see anyone without the Blood of Bronze dead several times over. The arrays tugged at her essence as she hovered across the hallway, pulling at her the building blocks of her body but the resonance of the Bronze Blood within her preserved life and limb while she reached the door. She avoided using her will on the door knowing the hair-trigger trap placed within and opened it manually. Contact with the handle sent a frisson of energy through her as the door interrogated her bloodline and permissions. Even having the Blood of Bronze would not have saved her from attack without the hidden array carved underneath her tongue but the defenses were satisfied with her permissions and the door opened to let her through.

The other Elders apart from Manuel were already present as she moved to take her seat. This meeting was intended to be an informative session rather than a full deliberation like the lengthy consultations involved in drawing up Great Plans every two decades. For that reason they were not meeting in the larger Council chambers and there would be no Foundation Establishment bureaucrats attending the gathering. These meetings among just the six Elders of the senior Clan Council were a rare break in their never ending responsibilities as titled Elders leading the most essential organs of the Imperial Optimatoi.

Kleisthenes dipped her head in greeting at Sheng Yu, the Protostrator pausing from reading a thick stack of written reports in his hands to return the gesture before returning to his perusal. She smiled faintly at his bent head. The Elder of War was the councilor with the least years of service under his belt and tended to approach any meeting of the Council as though he was anticipating a surprise examination. His nervousness had eased over time but every time he spoke up in their meetings, his squeaky voice always reminded her of an earnest schoolboy being called upon by his teacher.

Destasia Duca as always was in an excitable state. She'd cornered Casia Zimice and was pestering the rail thin, severe-faced woman over some project that she just had to have funded.

"My dear Casia, I know that you are the most understanding and generous Stratopedarches ever! Most beautiful too," Destasia rambled in an overly friendly manner, with a far too wide grin on her face, "It seems that certain communiques I had my juniors send over to your office haven't got through – I love those brats but they can be a pain sometimes – so I thought I'd put in a personal word while we are both here."

Destasia waved her hands energetically in front of Casia, accenting her words. "Just imagine it. A carpet of Qi-Devouring Scarabs covering the land, sucking dry our enemies and stripping the flesh of their bones. Efficient area denial and resource collections at the same time!"

Casia lifted an eyebrow towards her fellow Elder and spoke in the tone of a long-suffering parent used to dealing with trouble. "I actually have read the messages the Office of Disciples forwarded to me about this matter. All thirty six of them, even the ones penned in crayon and glitter ink which are somehow an upgrade from some of the communication I've received from your desk as Chartoularios Tou Kanikleiou. I'll repeat here what I wrote back to you earlier. Firm up your research proposal and I will gladly see about supplying an increase to your budget. Until then you can make do with what you already received."

Kleisthenes stepped in to rescue the other Elder when Destasia looked more motivated to double down on her appeal.

"Perhaps you could speak with Xinya about reaching out to the Souplords of the Simmering Soup Sect? I hear Little Chu Fei has a menu of delicacies made from Qi-Devouring Scarabs among other insects," Kleisthenes said to Destasia, "He no doubt has some experience in the handling and breeding of the beasts."

"Huh, never knew that. Thanks a lot, Big Miss!" Destasia cocked her head in thought, her eyes flashing through a dizzying kaleidoscope of colors. She smiled brightly at Kleisthenes and skipped over to Xie Xinya who looked up aghast from her quiet meditation at the approach of the flighty genius.

"I don't think our Parakoimomenos is going to be too enthused at the boulder you've rolled her way but I'm not going to complain. The assistance is most appreciated though, Second Elder." Casia said ruefully, bowing slightly towards Kleisthenes.

"Call it matching distraction with disruption," Kleisthenes commented as she pulled her attention from the sublime attraction that Xie Xinya exerted on her, "The old man might consider it useful training against resisting Dao effects but it is irritating having to deal with Xinya's enchantment throughout these meetings. Destasia should keep her somewhat occupied for a while."

Any further conversation was halted as the door opened and Manuel walked in, Stone Spear in hand as had become his habit. The artifact never left his grasp for any reason, which made it a good thing that he didn't need to use his hands for many tasks. The other Elders stood up at his entry and bowed, deeper than the one she gave her old friend and mentor.

Manuel nodded briefly in acknowledgment and cut straight to business as was his preference.

"Report."

His ever mutable voice was a quiet whisper, as though spoken into her ear from a lover clutching her close. The breath that carried out his instruction also bore along an umbral fog that spun outwards to cloak the entirety of the room. Kleisthenes felt a slight shiver with her nascent soul as every shadow in the room oriented to face the Grand Elder. Her cultivation allowed her to perceive the intent to obfuscate history and occlude unsanctioned perception that was embedded in the Manuel's working. Her hand with her own Dao magic was not so deft but she comforted herself with the knowledge that while she lacked the subtlety of the cunning rogue before her, as a fresh Nascent Soul she had managed however crudely to force Jingshen Junjie, an experienced Mid Nascent Soul himself, to be subject to her sacrifice which was no mean feat. Kleisthenes settled into her seat with the other Elders as Casia began her update following the standard order of the Council.

Almost an hour later, the meeting was near winding up. The reports from herself and her fellow councilors indicated that overall everything was going well. Spirit Stones were flowing in, her own efforts with the Sorrowful Blacksmiths had been well received, the Great Battlefield was still a boiling pit of combatants that made for good mercenary opportunities, the Clan's cultivators were making promising gains and the Legions were handily showing the Righteous Path and Demonic powers where to stuff it.

Of course not everything was perfect. Kleisthenes had had a rare opportunity at the start of the presentations to see the quiet woman express genuine wrath at the sheer bumbling that had led the expedition to the Mountain Bell Sect undersupplied. Heads were going to roll in the Chamber of Administration, mostly metaphorical, but several unfortunates might soon be wish that the phrase was being applied literally. A number of Destasia's prospects for Project Amphora had experienced terminal reactions to the catalyst although the innovator of the bloodline enhancement seemed none too grieved by the deaths. She herself was personally disappointed whatever Manuel said otherwise that she had only won access to half as much of the old legacies as hoped for and had needed to wield the knowledge of the Droplet of Rust and Ruin as an unsubtle bludgeon. Cultivating after that had drowned her in feelings of inadequacy and incompetency as comparisons to Euphrosyne's golden touch rose up from within. Xinya was still recovering her spy networks after the mess that was the Blood Mists so any recovery there was matched by blindness beyond their borders. Sheng Yu had brought quite a litany of complaints with solutions in tow she noted admiringly. More territory meant more responsibilities for the Legions under his control. The Jingshen lands needed settling as did the new southern lands renamed something she could not be bothered to remember. As she listened to his closing words on the coloniea, Kleisthenes made a reminder to speak to their ally Yao Zhihao about perhaps dropping by to relieve them of varied entrepreneurial cultivators in their new territory who could make better use of their penchant for being light-fingered somewhere other than in the Clan's backyard. A few crates of Spirit Wine and awful soup together should get the 'recruitment' going on.

"...several juniors performed commendably in Western Redstone Keep allowing us to recover roughly half of the Jinsghen Spirit Artillery stored there. These are going out to the Mobile Legions to bolster their force projection. I would however like to propose acquiring more such artifacts as their estimated increase to force strength is quite significant. I have the basic analysis here and more complete projections on their way…"

Kleisthenes listened to Sheng Yu's proposal, memorizing everything but paying little more attention. A quick glance around showed that everyone else was mostly doing likewise around the semicircular table they sat at facing Manuel, except perhaps Destasia who looked to be sleeping with her eyes wide open. Kleisthenes tapped her fingernails against the surface of the table without scoring the surface, the metal carefully trimmed and filed down with grooming products from among the personal effects of the late Jingshen Jiao before being painted the brilliant scarlet, purple and orange of a sunset. This particular table was one of the better set of furniture looted from Old Jingshen's upper quarters, dark heartwood from a Thousand-Year Storm oak made for beautiful and sturdy furnishings. The beat she tapped out was an old lullaby she and Euphrosyne had loved as children, one she'd crooned to Hektor herself when he was just a babe.

Manuel fell to the ground from where he'd been sitting cross-legged mid air, the spear still in his grasp clattering against the tiled floor. Everything in the room froze for a heartbeat. Kleisthenes blinked once in disbelief but the sight before her eyes remained unchanged. The moment passed. The beautiful table before her shattered like so much kindling as she burst through it towards the crumpled form lying on the ground.

"Manuel!" Kleisthenes cried out as she stood over him, "What's wrong? Are you hurt?!"

There was no response to her entreaty from the slim withered form slumped at her feet. Behind her the slower reactions of the Core Formation councilors had them scrambling to catch up to her.

"Is it an attack?! Poison, soul curse? Anyone see what happened?"

"What happened?!"

"Archegetes, what ails you?!"

"Sound the alarms!"

Paying no mind to the babble spilling forth from the alarmed councilors around her, Kleisthenes unveiled the full force of her nascent soul and swept her spiritual senses throughout the room then outwards into the entirety of the Clan Hall and into the Dawn Fortress as far she could reach. For a brief moment it felt like she touched the familiar presence of Manuel's spirit hovering about his body but then it vanished. Nothing revealed itself to her perception as out of sorts beyond the expected reactions to her aura let loose at full strength. In the halls of the Optimatoi Kainon, bureaucrats from the various Pillars froze quivering as a dreadful weight pressed down upon them, scourging and questioning with naked ruthlessnes. Outside the Clan Hall, traffic froze as those close to the building were similarly interrogated.

Nothing. No concealed infiltrators or panicked saboteurs were uncovered at hand or far off. There were no hidden arrays set off or strange contaminants in the meeting room.

"Klei...Kleithenes! You're… suff-foca-tting us!"

A strangled cry from nearby was processed and discarded as Kleisthenes let her nascent soul search everywhere else while she focused on the immediate environment. To her heightened senses it felt like she poked and prodded for hours but it was less than a minute before she relaxed the intensity of her search.

"What… what did you find?" Destasia Duca choked out once the mountain crushing her spirit, almost splintering her core, lifted off her and allowed her to take a harsh breath.

"Nothing. There's no indication of anything that could cause this," grimly Kleisthenes replied

"Don't touch him!" she barked out to Casia who was reaching forward to check on Manuel, "There are enough traps and poisons on him activated by a loss of consciousness that you likely won't live to regret the attempt. Make space around him so we don't accidentally trigger anything."

Casia immediately withdrew her hand and the other councilors took a step back. They all looked to her, seeking direction in this emergency. Kleisthenes in that moment ignored them all and looked down at her old friend, looking so frail and ancient without the sharp wit and black humor that enlivened him. Her mind immediately flashed back to that painful moment when she'd hauled like a lame sheep away from the site of her twin's sacrifice. She'd lost an irreplaceable part of herself then and she refused to lose another.

Kleisthenes rolled her shoulders and felt the weight of responsibility settle on her. She was the Second Elder, heir apparent to the Grand Elder and it was time to command like one. Call Manuel Konstantinos a paranoid bastard but he planned for the unlikely and had contingencies for the impossible. Kleisthenes mind sped through the succession protocols set up for a sudden decapitation strike from unknown vectors and rapidly began calling out orders.

"We're following Plan Styx. The Archegetes is alive but unresponsive, the source of his conditions is as yet unidentified," she spoke to the gathered councilors, who immediately snapped to attention even the normally fickle Destasia, "The Archegetes' status is to be kept confidential on a need to know basis for Legates and sealed to everyone else. I will stand watch here with him. You know what to do so move out!"

The other Elders sprung to action action at her command, slapping on masks of professionalism as they hurried out the Council chamber to execute the rehearsed contingency. In as few words as possible, Plan Styx could be summed up as "Everything is as ordinary as can be, don't mind us sharpening our swords and locking the doors just to be cautious". The actual details were more involved than that but the essence was captured. Keep news of the unavailability of the Archegetes suppressed, quietly muster up the quick reaction forces around the Dawn Fortress, move the heavier troops get into readiness along the borders with the excuse of drills, subtly query every asset for internal and external threats, and do this all without disrupting the ordinary course of business or alerting any watchers to anything untoward. They'd practiced for this with all the other contingencies, though Kleisthenes thought that Casia would need to come up with an impromptu explanation for her spectacle. That was not her concern right now though. Standing vigil over her old friend was her immediate task right now.

***​

Twenty four hours later and Kleisthenes was still at her watch. The habit Manuel had beaten into her of disciplined cultivation itched at her but she could not be spared. Anything that could fell a mid Nascent Soul in the heart of his defenses was something that only another Nascent Soul had a ghost of a chance in matching, though she was starting to have her suspicions about that. She was currently concealed with Manuel's 'bedsheet' in his personal quarters where he'd been moved after the initial steps of Plant Styx had been completed. Statue still and standing on the ground to avoid the slightest fluctuation of power, she was as undetectable beneath the Three Ghost Hiding Spirit Cloak as she could ever be.

A quiet knock sounded at the door, in the pattern she'd designated. She remained in position even as the warding arrays sealing the area off were disengaged by a token key. Destasia stuck her head in looking around carefully before entering fully. Irrepressible as ever she ogled over the belongings that Manuel had set out, casual trinkets for a cultivator like him but valuable material to Destasia.

"That's just an old spear," she spoke from behind Destasia startling her from her inspection of a worn-out bronze spear leaning against the wall, "You had best keep your hands to yourself though. Not everything in here is trapped but a lot more than you might think is warded against unsanctioned interference."

"I was just looking. I would never dare disrespect the Grand Elder's property," Destasia said, arms folded behind her back in the perfect picture of innocence. That look was immediately broken as she pulled out a retractable cane and began swinging it around trying to find Kleisthenes.

Sighting, Kleisthenes took of the concealment artifact and had to hold it away from Destasia.

"That is one impressive cloak. Say, you wouldn't mind me having a quick poke at it, would you?" Destasia pleaded, eyes glistening with a disturbing sheen that impelled Kleisthenes to pity and sympathy for her.

Kleisthene snorted sharply. "Keep your wiles to yourself. I have more important things to do than hand you valuable artifacts. What did your analysis of the samples tell you?"

Destasia shifted easily to seriousness. "I tested what you gave me for everything that I could think off. There were a lot of substances I could not identify in the vitae samples you gave me but as best as I could tell nothing in there was intended to be harmful. A poison-medicine divination gave a reading of no malice or harmful intent. I'd be surprised if anything common could actually affect the Grand Elder given the formulations I found in there. It would take a refined cocktail specifically tailored to get past his counteragents and be undetectable. That is of course not to say that there couldn't be some substance affecting him but I just can't find it if it's there."

Kleisthenes rolled her jaw as she watched Manuel lie in his bed, Stone Spear with him. It had been a hellishly tricky thing transporting him here without setting off the protections he'd place on his possession of the spear. In the end, she had had to resort to cutting out the floor where he'd fallen and transporting that, after carefully disabling the traps she could find. Actually getting into Manuel's quarters had been their own trial. Continuity of command meant that theoretically she had the necessary permissions but that theory had been sorely tested by the plethora of incovenciences that had waylaid her.

"I don't think this is an attack, or at least not a conventional one," she finally said, "I think the Grand Elder is truly asleep which worries me."

"Ehh, so you suspect a soporific or an enchantment of some sort?" Destasia's mind leapt on the lead and began running with it, "Spirit Stilling Jasmine or perhaps Midnight Witch Slumber, perhaps, or..."

Kleisthenes interrupted Destasia before she could get lost in her speculation. "No I think he's completely asleep and dreaming."

Seeing the lack of understanding on Destasia's face, Kleisthenes continued. "Nascent Soul cultivators need to sleep. It's a drastically reduced need that can happen infrequently over decades or centuries but it's still there. However it's not a complete slumber because our nascent souls stay awake as the body sleeps."

Nodding at Manuel, she voiced a suspicion that she'd been nursing for a while. "The Grand Elder is fully asleep, body and nascent soul alike. I have attempted to use my spiritual sense on him and while I don't want to try breaching his spiritual defenses as long as he's in this state I can tell that he seems healthy and present only turned inwards. He's catatonic but not unresponsive. He's just responding to something other than us."

"Okay," Destasia slowly agreed, "So when does he wake up or how do we rouse him?"

"That is a good question," Kleisthenes said, her face tightened in harsh lines, "I don't know."

***​

A week had passed and everything had changed in that it was all still the same. Manuel still slept and Kleisthenes still kept watch. Every investigation by Xie Xinya and Kleisthenes' own diplomats revealed no plan to capitalize on a sudden weakness in the Clan's core strength from external powers or internal threats. Sheng Yu had the Legions drilling in readiness, not quite at full readiness but prepared to survive any first strikes. Casia had skillfully played off the events of Kleisthenes unveiled aura as a counterintelligence operation, roping in Eutropia as Elder of Sanitation to give credence to the dissembling. Destasia was the most active of the councilors, spending endless hours in her laboratory researching ways to rouse the Grand Elder. Whatever she had thought of the Archegetes poison tolerance, the actual strength of it had her constantly going back to the drawing board to attempt to concoct an effective stimulant. Kleisthenes judged that not yet enough time had passed for her to grant permission for some of the wilder and more exotic recipes even as what she did permit Destasia to trial failed. To keep any rumors at bay about a lack of communication from the Archegetes Kleisthenes quietly announced that Manuel had entered a period of closed cultivation, which had its own confidentiality protocols that made good cover for an unplanned absence.

As Kleisthenes had stood sentinel over the slumbering form of her dearest friend, she wondered if this was how things would end. It was oddly more terrifying to have the old man alive but catatonic than to have seen him die. The latter she had considered and faced when the Clan had marched against the Jingshen but this? This was a caustic uncertainty that wore at the spirit and made her emotions raw. When would Manuel wake up? Would he ever wake up? The Golden Devil Clan had survived one Grand Elder being eliminated to be succeeded by his junior but a second such loss in less than three centuries could ruin the Clan. Manuel had had the benefit of several centuries to grow into his power and learn all that he could under the mentorship of a Grand Elder in somewhat security. She was barely into her first century as a Nascent Soul and if it came to her leading? Well the wolves would smell blood and come circling around looking to eat their fill. They might not lose the fullness of the desert if they were able to secure a more permanent alliance with the Flood Dragon Gang but any hopes of increasing their strength would be aborted shortly. That was not even taking into consideration the threat of the upcoming centennial Trials which Manuel had hinted would be a bloody affair. If they managed to survive that gauntlet, Sun Diaxing was lurking in the wings, building up his strength as he run out the clock on his exile from the desert. Bowing her head, Kleisthenes whispered a short prayer to the Imperator hoping for rescue.

By the time a month had gone by without any improvement Kleisthenes was beginning to worry. Radical options which had been set aside earlier on were now being seriously considered. As she watched Destasia attempt another remedy, this time a powerful irritant that had even her three times tempered body needing to use a face mask or suffer agonizing tears and worse reactions, Kleisthenes knew that this would be yet another failure. Several minutes of Destasia wafting the noxious fumes under Manuel's nose proved her wrong.

"Well this one's a bust also," Destasia mumbled out from behind her full body covering, "Back to the drawing board I suppose. This is proving to be a very tough riddle to crack."

"At this pace, I might actually need to bring the Grand Elder to the Nascent Wills and see if they have a solution. It's not my preferred idea but nothing else has worked so far. We've managed to keep the news limited to the legates for a month now but this is not sustainable long term," Kleisthenes groaned in frustration at the continued failure, "There are appearances the Grand Elder has to make that I can step in for him using a Puppet Simulacra but I can't do anything significant through such a connection. If the Sorrowful Blacksmiths call in their marker, we are going to be left naked and balls hanging in a glass lightning sandstorm."

Destasia stood awkwardly by Manuel's bedside, hearing Kleisthenes openly complain for the first time, a testament to how much the Second Elder was not enjoying the current situation. She opened her mouth to offer to accompany Kleisthenes in that visit to awaken the Nascent Wills – purely for support of course, not just to try and pick the calcified brains of Clan ancestors – when Kleisthenes' words cut off. The Second Elder blurred as she bent over Manuel and Destasia brightened up as she saw his eyes fluttering.

"Hey old man, how was your nap?" She cheerily asked.

Paying little heed to her, Kleisthenes fussed over Manuel as his eyes opened and he seemed to spring to alertness.

"What happened to you, Manuel?" Kleisthenes asked, "You've been catatonic for a month."

The reply they got was not what they were expecting, at all.

"I saw the truth." Manuel Konstantinos said and no matter how many times he tried to explain or elaborate those were the only words that left his lips.

AN: (6100 words) I caught the bug to explain how perhaps the Council might have reacted to their Grand Elder just dropping down for a snooze mid meeting.
 
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