Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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"So. The vulture arrives, demanding coin for aid. What do you want? My pass? My lands? My secrets? Come, make your demands, Kleisthenes of the Golden Devils."
I find it greatly ironical that the he called us vultures when his whole sect grew on the stuff we needed to leave behind just to survive an unprovoked aggression.

Like, Heaven, I understand they are your idiots, but they are still idiots lol
 
I'd like to resubmit for consideration the possibility to visit a comically terminal level of violence upon our dearest neighbour.

It's on the docket at this point.

Just a matter of how tbh

Ideally the current deal will mean we wont have to dedicate a Nascent action to it

I'm still against being the aggressor, but yeah, I'm coming over to the idea.

On that note, how many LST does Manuel have?

I got the strangest of feelings, that weeping anwill is just as dense as his namesake from this.... Introduction. I'm afraid he will get some.... Ideas, while we prep for that nascentbowl.

Too bad he will see the spear....
 
The question is how we get the Righteous Path to simply accept it. The Jingshen were one thing, and ultimately a bit of a fait accompli- but any move on the Sorrowful Blacksmiths has to involve alienating them from Strength Purity. Ideally, we encourage Strength Purity's centralizing tendencies that alienate the other Righteous Paths, and present ourselves as politically reliable outsiders whose support is increasingly vital in the face of divisive policies.
 
The question is how we get the Righteous Path to simply accept it. The Jingshen were one thing, and ultimately a bit of a fait accompli- but any move on the Sorrowful Blacksmiths has to involve alienating them from Strength Purity. Ideally, we encourage Strength Purity's centralizing tendencies that alienate the other Righteous Paths, and present ourselves as politically reliable outsiders whose support is increasingly vital in the face of divisive policies.
The smarter long term move would have been to legitimately allow the Sorrowful Blacksmiths position to deteriorate so thoroughly as to justify nascent intervention and an invasion from our end to secure the Spirit Stone trade.

However, this route has more immediate benefits in that it enables us to use the more expensive Nascent Soul level Clan legacies in the mountains to empower ourselves, improve our position, and also establish a relationship where we sell our services to the RP for advantages in improving their own position for the War as necessary. Rather than just being the Spirit Stone supplier for the RP, we instead become the Righteous Paths de facto logistical backbone that enables them to afford to pressure things at the Nascent Soul level.

Once we do that, we can afford to play silly buggers with shit, make money, and afford more higher level purchases to further improve our position on top of the natural growth that comes with how we've settled things with regards to our gains from owning the desert in its entirety.

Ideally, we can get a final, stupefyingly big payday in negotiating the opening of a second front along our border with the Abyssal Devil Bees core territories. Use that to improve our own position to being collectively on even terms with the RP and secure resource pipelines to shoot up the growth of our Clan's talents to keep up with the Great Era.

Then.

Once we are equal to the Righteous Path, and unlike them not exhausted from several centuries of continuous war depopulating and weakening them against other Demonic Powers...

We simply.

Take it Back.
 
The question is how we get the Righteous Path to simply accept it. The Jingshen were one thing, and ultimately a bit of a fait accompli- but any move on the Sorrowful Blacksmiths has to involve alienating them from Strength Purity. Ideally, we encourage Strength Purity's centralizing tendencies that alienate the other Righteous Paths, and present ourselves as politically reliable outsiders whose support is increasingly vital in the face of divisive policies.
The answer is quite simple really.
We need power enough that between attacking us and staying allies the rightous path has no choice but to choose the latter .
For all their bluster the rightous powers has shown that when they have to choose between their propaganda to pragmatism they choose the latter everytime.
 
Ninth Prince and Chang 2 - Teaching A Junior

Ninth Prince and Chang 2 - Teaching A Junior


Pride…

It was something Chang threw away so easily just to get on his knees and beg to join the Golden Devils. There was a chance they would've accepted him even without all that shameless kowtowing, but he needed to show his sincerity. When he was accepted, though he was a true outsider, he was relieved.

He ruminated in the midst of his practice, the sun forcing out his sweat and energy, which drove him to exhaustion. He wasn't alone, as there were other cultivators draining their energy to gain further strength in their path.

However, unlike those determined warriors who were single-mindedly pursuing strength, Chang was distracted in his pursuit. He's reached the Third Heavenstage, something he should be proud of. He's gained strength, fought and killed people for the first time, and he returned fine and healthy with a nice artifact.

Even still, he's dissatisfied for two critical reasons. The first was killing. Now, he clearly understood the rules of the wild: the strong survive and live while the weak are oppressed and die. He's even followed this rule without giving it a second thought. This is more of a guideline because of course something this arbitrary wouldn't be some mandated rule all across the world.

However, maybe Chang should've actually treated it like a guideline. His nature was that of inflexible stubbornness, refusing to be swayed by anyone except himself. Could that be the wrong path though?

His train of thought is escaping.

The redhead sat down and contemplated on the idea of taking a life. He managed to do it, but there was hesitation in his attacks. Because of that, he nearly suffered a wound that would've probably killed him had he not been swift enough to evade it.

Ultimately, he killed those caravanners and decided that his life was worth more than theirs.

And he's completely fine with that. Should he be feeling torn up about killing people? No, that wasn't the issue. The people who live in this harsh land are prepared for anything that can happen to them even if they're unwilling at the events that may befall them.

Chang lived in this desert long enough to know this well even if he wasn't born here. He's adapted to this land. He has been refined and molded by it.

Chang challengingly glared at the sun with his arms crossed and a question on his mind. It imperiously glared straight back down with burning light reflected off his eyes. He sought to gain enlightenment in this conundrum he's facing, but he'll go blind long before that happens.

He'll think about this complicated shit later.

The man looked back down and racked his head over the second critical issue.

His progress wasn't good enough.

To touch upon the threshold of the apex and solidly feel the tangibility of his own wish in the grasp of his hands...Chang can't only be at the pitiful Third Heavenstage after many years. He's heard one of his peers have already left him in the dust, their talent destroying what belief he had in his own.

However, his will won't waver and his spirit won't crumble. At the end of it all, his desire isn't one that concerns others, so there's no need to be concerned over how others are faring in comparison to himself.

But still, he needs to acquire a way to gain more power. And what better way is there than to seek out someone who's been at this longer than he has?

Now, Chang heard stories about some legends among the Golden Devils. Something about 13…? Whatever, he knows there are some really strong individuals that carry themselves with dignity and power.

The hopeless redhead licked his lips in greedy anticipation.

Just how well do they stand up?

There was a question though: who exactly should he go to for advice? He's already throwing away his pride again in seeking help to realize his wish, so throwing away what little remains of it in considering a woman for help is natural, right?

The answer is blatantly obvious.

A resounding 'no' blares through Chang's mind, absolutely denying the notion that he'd ever seek assistance from a lady. Based on his own experience, it's best that a woman just not talk. They're loud, irritating, naggy, and a whole slew of other crap.

Chang clicked his tongue from reminiscing on less than pleasant memories. He shook his head and thought about other seniors who'd favorably return his plea with a positive answer and a secret to getting strong quickly...other than extraordinarily devilish means. That's a low that even he won't sink to, let alone the fact that he'd probably get executed for jumping down that abyss in the first place.

He narrowed his eyes in thought, hand reflexively twitching for something in his robes. An explosive sigh left his mouth after feeling the absence of a simple object in between his index and middle fingers.

He really misses his pipe. Hell, he can kill for a cheap pipe that's able to satisfy his cravings. It's been far too long since he's had a nice whiff of the good stuff and for some reason, he has met with failure at every turn in searching for one. It was almost like he was blind or something, but he knows that people sell them in the clan.

...He's getting off track. So, who should he look for?

"How about the Ninth Prince?" he finds himself questioning. It's an excellent, strong title. Good in the force of royalty that exudes from it; the confidence of going by that label speaks of boisterousness and boldness.

He hasn't heard anything about him recently because he's kinda ignorant about stuff going on in the clan...he might need to improve on that aspect.

Well, first thing's first at least.

He stood up, a destination not in mind, but a person stuck in there.

"Asking around for that guy should be simple enough considering he's famous as hell, right?" He nodded at his exceptional thought process and questioned seniors and peers to hasten his search and get this done as soon as possible.

Only a little bit less than an hour later and Chang was back sitting down in the same spot that he's made his own for now. There was a frown on his face and it wasn't solely due to him not getting the info he wanted, but because he just realized that he's not exactly well liked around this place.

The latter isn't all that important.

The fact that the Ninth Prince was apparently dead rang a few alarm bells for him. How could someone like him be dead? He's still hearing his name be tossed around the place like he's still alive, but everyone thinks he's dead?

Contradictions...

It doesn't bother him, but it could also mean that fellow cultivators aren't giving him information they know on purpose.

Eh, it's probably paranoia.

If people really were pansy ass bitches that they'd do something petty like this instead of expelling their frustration through their fists, then they aren't fit to be called men.

And that's not the Golden Devils he's joined.

"Yo!" Think of the Golden Devils and one shall come...

Chang laid down and turned his head upwards, spotting a group of three, bronze-skinned guys who all strode toward him with a purpose. The speaker had a smile on his face, but his eyes looked at least slightly serious.

Woah, he's a bit of a giant.

Chang responded lazily. "Yo yourself. What's up?"

He ended his sentence with an obvious yawn, garnering a look of minute irritation from one of the dudes. He should at least stand up if he's gonna have a proper conversation as he knows what manners are.

He dusted off his clothes and at least gave a small bow, though one that seemed mocking even if it wasn't his intention.

"Well…" The man in the center drew out his word and looked at both men beside him. "We've just been hearing about one of our fellow brothers being slightly rude."

Chang nodded. He is a pretty rude guy that doesn't really see anyone in his eyes. Either people are below him or above him. And these guys are solidly being placed in the former position.

The cultivator was puzzled by Chang's easy admission, but then just shrugged his shoulders.

"Look, could you just tone down the arrogance a bit? It'd be nice if everyone in our generation got along nicely."

"What are you gonna do if I decline?"

"We'll exchange pointers with you until you accept." His face was kind, but his words were anything but. He immediately switched tactics to forceful methods in order to make Chang fall in line with his orders.

Of course, it only served as amusement to the redhead as he turned his chin upward at the trio.

"Yeah? You nobody, who the hell do you think you are?" Harsh words also came from smiling lips. This is the type of conversation that Chang is used to. This dialogue resetted his own mental pacing and his mood rose back up.

He doesn't need any of that fake kindness shit. He's not here to get along with anyone or show kindness. He's here to get stronger and rush toward a flashy death.

"My name is—"

"Didn't ask~"

The exchange between the redheaded rebel and the bronze-skinned giant pissed off the one person who hadn't reacted yet.

The tall man's comrade moved faster than his mouth did, telling a story of friendship and loyalty there for Chang's careless eyes to see.

"You're begging for a beating…!"

"Huh? Speak up. You got a sore throat from some devilish activities?" Chang instantly warded off a punch with his palm, the two settling into their own fighting stances. Unfortunately, there was no crowd to see this nice fight between him and...

These people are...uh…

Who were they again? Did he even ask their names? While he contemplated their existences, the leader sighed and reluctantly mustered up some fighting spirit of his own, settling into a strong stance that would use the full advantage of his body.

Fighting two people at once should be good practice.

Chang blinked.

Wait, where did the other one go?

Chang dropped an arm to his side and blocked a hand thrust to his side. He was forced a step back from the strength contained in the unassuming sneak attack.

Shaking his arm, he spoke with cockiness dripping from his lips. "Is that all? How about you all come at me. Maybe you'll actually have a shot at winning and making something of yourselves."

A traitorous thought crossed his mind during the lull: why was he wasting his time doing this? Was he annoyed at the fact that he actually lost a duel against a fellow cultivator here?

That's correct. It's a driving reason for his reckless behavior to put some people in their place. The fact that he was challenged and was demanded to follow a line of directed behavior means that he wasn't being taken seriously at all. The current image that people have of him may be because of that brat who kicked his ass that one time even if he did make up for it.

But still, picking a fight with these people is a waste of time.

Stop, stop. That's enough. Honestly, is he a brat or something? He should have better self control than this.

"Well, this should be good practice. Let's hope there's no grudges after this, yeah?"

Chang didn't have a problem with the taller man's words. It's a simple scrimmage with no malice influencing it. A good time to practice combat techniques.

The fight began and ended.

It was an obnoxiously long fight that took much more time than Chang expected. He spat out liquid the color of his hair by the time he was even halfway through the fight. He eventually won with a roundhouse to the giant's temple, but his body was covered in bruises.

He had a particularly nasty shiner on his cheek and his forearms were bruised the color of grapes.

Walking off, he went to go call a healer for these guys because he can't just leave them unattended.

"Was a pretty good fight. Gotta give those guys props at least...uh what were their names again?" He placed a hand to his chin in thought before snapping his fingers and putting that out of his mind. It's not like it'll be all that important later.

First, healer for them. Next, the Ninth Prince's grave or whatever. This should be a hard confirmation on his life or death status.

"Is he really actually dead?" Chang asked softly. He possessed the courtesy to talk in a low, quieter tone while people were mourning the dead. He wasn't the only one around these graves after all.

He strolled to a cemetery in search of this dead guy, but he couldn't find his name or title engraved anywhere on a tombstone. So maybe that meant he was still alive?

But everybody is saying he's dead.

Chang shrugged his shoulders and took in the air of this cemetery.

If his family members were to die, would he consider making a grave for them? The normal and accepted standard is for all children to be filial and respect their parents, but Chang just can't subscribe to that notion. Sure, he thinks he loves his parents, but would he waste time going all the way back to them only to pay respects?

…If he's thinking that it's such a bother, then does he really love his family? Emotions can be very complicated.

Chang strolled around the cemetery, a strange mood beginning to take him over. What if he was buried in a grave? That thought makes him giddy, his tremors coming from both excitement and fear. There's something jubilating about theorizing his death and what comes after. If nothing were to come after, and if it was a complete erasure of his existence…then wouldn't that be the most anticipating thing of all?

The somber air of death irritated Chang's soul, so the usual arrogant rudeness flared up. "Damn, people were calling you cool and shit, but you're actually dead? Man I was gonna ask for help, but it seems like you really weren't all that."

He sighed before more figurative shit came out of his mouth.

"Those rumors about you being a ghost must be people just refusing to accept death then. What a pain in the ass. I gotta search for another guy then because of a failure here…" Chang threw his hands up in the air and blurted out condescending words like an unstopping waterfall.

Contrary to his words, he didn't walk away from the cemetery. He instead sat down in front of a random grave, legs crossed, and stared at the name engraved on it. It obviously wasn't the person he was searching for, but he was going to treat it as a stand-in.

"At least make up for wasting a bit of my precious time, will ya Ninth Prince?" He chuckled as an amusing thought crossed his mind. "I'll give you some ghost bread if you show up all transparent-like."

He looked harder at the grave and noticed a minute amount of dust on it, garnering a frown from Chang. The redhead took a hand and brushed away the dust before it got in his nose. He sneezed a little and got even more annoyed.

"Shit, this really was a waste of time. That shitty Ninth Prince…!" He climbed to his feet in an instant and began to march out of the rotten land of graves.

As Chang walked out of the graveyard, the dust he'd wiped away slowly began to gather, following him in his self-absorbed trek.

It whirled around the graves, collecting more and more detritus, the remains of dead flowers, fragments of crumbling stone and granules of sand, shards of bone and bits of bronze. It followed Chang like a black parade of the broken, the beaten and the damned.

The streams of dust and rot and death flowed around other graves, parting in front of mourners and headstones, coalescing into a gravetide, heavy with Qi. Whispers on the wind and the dust of bones, haunting melodies and a darkening sky, all followed Chang during his long journey to the exit of the cemetery.

As the sea of dust and bone grew larger, the very graves responded to its silent call, earth being pulled apart as long dead bones grabbed out. The mourners unlucky enough to be in the path of the tide were faced with a twofold calamity. The first was the tide itself, choking and reeking with death, briefly pulling air from lungs and chilling these unfortunate mortals and Qi Gatherers down to their core.
Then, after the initial shock, the graves of the deceased loved ones of these mourners shifted. Soil was unturned as bones violently threw themselves out of their graves, skeletons desperately grasping for the gravetide, for that surge of Qi to invigorate them.

Eventually however, after minutes of heartache, shock, and grave desecration, these skeletons walked back into their graves, reburied. They had given up hope of reaching the waves of death, and went back to their supposedly eternal rest.

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It was impossible for those abnormal occurrences to go undetected. Even a child would've noticed the production of odd sounds behind him, though they would flee in terror from whispers that came from the dead.

For Chang however, there was a ghost of a smirk on his lips as he turned around.

"This Qi feels like it's on the Yin side of things…" he murmured. From this sight, he could only conclude that someone pulled a prank on him or he disturbed a resting spirit.

Since the Golden Devils are individuals who respect the dead, Chang will assume that this is a spirit. That fact disturbs his emotions greatly.

The dead are meant to rest. Spirits should go undisturbed. This concept is one of the few things the redhead believes in. Once a person leaves their life behind, no matter how they sprinted through the joyful world of mortality, they should rest knowing that their actions contributed toward something.

Ugly lives and beautiful lives. Good lives and bad lives. It all amounts to equality six feet under.

The reason why the man possesses this belief is because he desires to rest once he burns his life out. Needless to say, living is painful for Chang.

But suicide is out of the question. He can't die in such a pathetic way. Death is a reward that comes from hard work pushing him forward through the road of strife onto a hill that will surely grant him a nice grave.

Chang shook his head free of introspection—a thing he doesn't like doing really.

There's a restless ghost he needs to greet.

"Now, who the hell are you?" he asked.

As Chang asked that question, the gravetide began whirling around him, howling wind and bone dust, death and the dead. Within it were grotesque spirits, horrific abominations, revenants given terrible form through rage and despair, howling and cackling as they raced around Chang.

Slowly, the dust began to coalesce, tornado shrinking and compacting into a vaguely humanoid form. As this being was given proper form, Chang could make out details, a beard, rippling abs, grains of metal in the skin, serpentine features, fangs and snake pupils, all slowly shaped until it was clear who was standing in front of him.

Nine feet tall, made of bone dust and grave soil, the ghost of the Ninth Prince loomed over Chang, arms crossed and looking for all the world like an avenging specter here to wreak bloody vengeance on him. Slowly, deliberately, the spirit opened his mouth, and spoke.

"So."

"I heard you've been talking shit."

Chang smiled.

He felt a shiver down his spine from staring at what seems to be a manifestation of death itself. His soul reacted immediately and fiercely, pumping energy through his veins and trying to resist the lull of the grave that called to him.

Because of that, Chang's words were carelessly reckless. He covered up a wince by focusing all his irritation on his mouth.

"You got good ears for being grave dust. I'd give you bread, but there was a caveat of you showing up like a real transparent type of ghost instead of a phantom possessing some stuff. Don't you understand the romantic ideal of a spirit that tries to spook people with empty sockets bleeding while they're completely incorporeal?" He shook his head mockingly, showing that indeed, he was the one who was talking shit without stating it directly.

"Anyway, I'm gonna assume you're the Ninth Prince. I honestly have to give you an eight outta ten. The metal really brings out your features. It's nothing compared to my ten outta ten self, but I can't deny the badass look you've got going for you."

The Ninth Prince is almost close to the ideal for him.

He's famous, strong, and did many fantastical things that would've led to death normally. However, this isn't perfectly ideal because he's still in the realm of the living. A spirit he may be, but he's a spirit that can commune with the living and thus hasn't accepted a true death.

"Fuck, I'm really glad I stumbled across you now."

The Ninth Prince's angry tirade was abruptly cut off by Chang's words of praise. "Well. In that case, I suppose I can forget a little bit of insubordination."

He looked down at himself. "I will admit you do have a bit of a point about the dust. It works in the context of the entrance, but right now it does nothing but detract. Still, that's pretty easily fixed." With a snap of his fingers, the dust making up the Ninth Prince's form exploded off of him, returning to the graves that he'd picked it up from.

After the dust from that explosion cleared, the Ninth Prince stood before Chang, slightly translucent but recognizably, well, himself. A tall metal snake-man with an enormous spear. "So! I assume you're here because you want something from me, and judging from the last two kids who tried disturbing my grave, I'm pretty sure you're here for some training/advice."

The Ninth Prince snaked (pun intentional) around Chang, incorporeal body stretching in a spiral. "What's it gonna be? Spear Arts? Body Refining? Poison? Demonic Tunes? Formations? Arrays? Beast Mastery? Romance advice? Something else? I'm an expert in basically everything after all."

He paused for a second. "As long as it isn't blood path anyways. You're going to want Amaranth Castellanos for that. Or just don't do blood path. Either or."

Judging from his boastful words, it can be assumed that the Ninth Prince is an all-rounder type, meaning that Chang could get a reasonably good amount of experience and knowledge on whatever topic he chooses. He looked at the man's weird form while contemplating what exactly he should veer toward.

Well, he's an aggressive fighter who prefers to get up and close with his opponents, so Demonic Tunes is automatically out. Formations should be considered considering he is a part of the Golden Devils, but Chang could care less about team fights, so that's also an out.

Even with his inflated sense of self-importance, he also realized that his sense for arrays is kinda shit, so that has to be crossed out as well. Animals never really liked him and he's peerless with women, so those are out too.

So, there's the way of the spear, refining the body, and playing with poisons. The last is no fun, and the spear doesn't appeal to him all that much, so the redhead decided on what was left.

He looked at the cultivator who lacked a body and asked an ironic question.

"How good are you at body refining?"

The Ninth Prince just. Looked. At Chang. It was one of those looks an asian parent gives their child when that child has said something so monumentally stupid that the parent in question isn't even able to whip out a lecture, instead just pinning their unruly offspring to the ground with a single glare.

He sighed. "Well, I know your question was supposed to be rhetorical, but... First of all, I'm made of metal and venom. Second, I'm the Ninth Prince."

The Ninth Prince let off with the glare. "So I'd say I'm pretty damn good at body refining."

"Now, what exactly do you want your body to do? Because there's a myriad of ways to refine the body. Of that million, there's maybe a thousand or so ways to refine the body that are good, and all of them are specialized for slightly different things. So, before I can actually help you out, I want to know two things."

"The first of course is what you want your body to improve in. The second is why you want your body to improve."

The Ninth Prince paused for a moment, before snapping his fingers as he remembered something. "Oh, also, don't lie to me. I'll know. It won't be good for you."

Lie? Hah! There's no reason for something like that.

"For starters, I want to strengthen the hardness of my skin and improve the flexibility of my bones along with the hardness of that. Muscles are unnecessary because I've never had troubles with my own strength."

He contemplated to himself, wondering if he should honestly tell him the reason for this or not. He mentally shrugged and decided he had nothing to lose if this was going to further his path.

"I just wanna get stronger, so I can fight riskier battles and become more famous. You know, the shallow stuff like that. If you're curious on why I want to chase that, then I guess I could tell ya. I just wanna die a flashy death...probably akin to taking down a Nascent Soul and being known throughout the world for it. Might aim higher if I get strong enough."

That's why he needs this more than anything else. He can't do it on his own. It's been made painfully clear to him over the course of his journey through the desert before he even joined the Golden Devils that he alone was insufficient.

He couldn't stand that, so he ignored that and continued along his lonesome path. After losing in a duel to someone, that's when he could no longer accept his own weakness and began seeking out someone else.

Since the Ninth Prince seems like a swell guy and he's a senior, then Chang can at least show some sincerity. "Please. I need your help because I'm falling behind on what I want to do."

The Ninth Prince said nothing for what felt like hours. The silence stretched on and on, as the sun slowly dipped lower in the sky. It was a cloying silence, the sort that has a noise of its own, an altogether unpleasant sound that seemed determined not to be broken.

Eventually however, Chang, deciding that enough was enough, broke it. "Hey, Prince, are y-"

"-And done." The Ninth Prince said, interrupting Chang's own interruption.

"Now before you ask what I'm done with," he said, before Chang could ask what he was done with, "I'm going to say something. I know I've talked a lot, but this is important. Just bear with me."

"Ever since I joined the Devils, I haven't really… struggled in getting stronger. It's always just been a side effect of doing what I naturally already do. I've never actually been the one catching up to other people, I've never actually been in your position."

"But that doesn't mean I don't sympathize with you. Just because I can't imagine what feeling like you can't reach your goals is like doesn't mean it's not bad. So I'll help you, if that wasn't obvious already."

"And besides," he said, smiling slightly smugly, "What kind of senior would I be if I didn't help a junior with getting strong enough to achieve their goals?"

"You'd be a normal senior if you asked me." And here's another talented person, someone far above Chang, that didn't struggle in acquiring strength. Well, it's not that big of a deal. If he puts in more effort, he'll be able to catch up. He's that confident in himself.

The redhead should be grateful to the man at least. He's taking the time out of his day to give Chang some assistance, which he had little hopes for in the first place. He can ignore the stung pride from committing to an action in the first place as long as the results are satisfactory.

However, there's still one thing that's niggling him. "What are you done with?" Because he's a ghost, he could be done with preparations for dragging him to the great beyond.

Oh, how scary!

"Oh." The Ninth Prince said, clicking his tongue. "Yeah, thanks for reminding me, I got a bit too into that speech to actually remember to tell you."

He clapped his hands. "So! In the twenty minutes of silence we experienced, I created a comprehensive training regimen that should theoretically stimulate specific acupoints, toughen your skin, and make your bones both strong and flexible. And the best part is that it doesn't lock you into any single affinity, meaning that you're still free to practice whatever techniques you want!"

Before Chang could say anything, the Ninth Prince pressed on, with a slight wince. "That being said… there is a catch."

"Just a minor one though!" He hastened to add. "Nothing too bad at all!

Power always comes at a price, huh. Chang closed his eyes and sighed, ruminating on when he eavesdropped on previous talks his father had with cultivators in the past. The old fart always had a lot of buddies he could have esoteric chats with to improve his strength, but he became lost in his own Dao even further.

If it's something similar to that, then he'll be fine.

"A catch though… I don't have any issues with the risks, but people who add stuff like that in the end are suspect." Chang can't say he doesn't like the snake oil salesmen type, but he'd prefer it if this man was selling some really good stuff.

"Come on," the Ninth Prince said, smiling disarmingly, "Don't you trust me?"

Chang thought for a moment, remembering the stories of the Ninth Prince that he'd heard. He opened his mouth…

...And then closed it, as he remembered the stories about the Ninth Prince that he'd heard. All the stories.

For a second time, Chang opened his mouth, and gave his answer. "No way in hell."

The Ninth Prince laughed. "Ha! That's probably for the best, to be honest. I wouldn't trust me either."

"But I suppose I have nothing to do but tell you." He said, sighing melodramatically. "So, the training methods I'm going to put you through…"

"Well, there's no real way to sugarcoat it. They're going to be painful. Also irritating. Potentially embarrassing. Definitely annoying. It's generally just going to be a bad time all around."

"But!" The Ninth Prince exclaimed, raising a finger, "They will be effective, and they'll get you the power and training you need to achieve your goals."

"Ultimately though, it's up to you." The Ninth Prince said, uncharacteristically serious. "Remember though, no matter what you say, after this, there's no turning back. You decline this training regimen, the story ends, you wake up in your barracks and do whatever you want to do."

"You accept, you stay in the desert and I show you how deep your potential really is. Remember, all I'm offering is power. Nothing more."

"What's it going to be?"

The price for power is pain. It's a simple exchange that seems pretty equivalent. The more pain one goes through, the greater power they receive in return. For all that Chang was born in a rich household, pain isn't really much to him anymore.

He was the crazy child who was the nightmare of parents everywhere. Playing with knives, getting up on high places, taunting dangerous beasts, and the usual. He's done a lot, so he's naturally curious about the pain and irritation that awaits him.

The redhead naturally smirked at the offer. "Of course I'll take you up on your offer." He might regret this later, but all that matters is the present. And currently, he doesn't feel any regret at this choice.

His fist clenched with resolve. "Let's get to it now."

The Ninth Prince clapped his hands, smiling. "Perfect! Now, if we do this the normal way, it's going to take too long and be way too clunky for any of us. So, to make this easier on everyone involved, I'm going to use a forbidden technique from a different sea, the ultimate time-based art."

"Are you ready?" He asked, much more ominously than was necessary.

Okay, Chang was both confused and morbidly curious. "...Ready for what?"

The Ninth Prince grabbed Chang, sweeping his arm out in an arc. "Ready for the MONTAGE of course!"

To that, Chang had only one thing he could say. "What the fuck is a M-"

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Chang races through a specially prepared field of brambles, screaming obscenities as he goes. Some portions of the thicket are sparse enough that he can dodge the thorns, contorting in all manner of ways as he does. Other parts of the field can only be bulled through by Chang, and he has no choice but to endure the thousand nicks and scrapes, along with the light poison that they inject.

The Ninth Prince hollers encouragement from a floating lounge chair, even as he drops balls of gas and thorns at predetermined points, to explode when Chang runs over them.


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Chang is suspended by a rope over a hive of buzzing bees, with orders to retrieve the honey from their hive. Every time he sticks his hands out into the hive, he's assaulted by bees. He dodges some of the stings, twisting and turning even as the rope spins and swings above him. He's not so lucky for others though, and quite a few bees jab into him, sticking to his skin even as he goes in for more honey.

The Ninth Prince munches on ghost popcorn while watching this, every so often tossing a rock at the hive to agitate it further.


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Chang is locked in a cage with dozens of rabid squirrels, imported from the Mountains. He's not allowed to injure them in any way, so all he can do is dodge their attacks. He sort of manages that dodging, twisting and flipping and turning as foamy mouthed rodents lunge at him. However, the box is very small, and there's a lot of squirrels, so quite a few do gouge into his skin with teeth and claws.

The Ninth Prince watches from outside the box, and occasionally, whenever Chang seems to be having too easy of a time, opens a hatch and releases another squirrel into the cage.


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Chang stands on the top of a cliff, staring down at the mind-bogglingly long drop down. Rings float in the air, each ring just a bit narrower than the previous one. Chang has to go through each ring on his freefall down the cliffside and into the oasis below. A single missed ring means that he'll have to do the whole thing over again, and the rings are far enough apart that for Chang to make it to each of them, he'll have to twist and dive in ways that are nearly impossible.

The Ninth Prince, tired of waiting, kicks Chang off the cliff, laughing at his screams.


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Chang squirms through an underground maze, the tunnels barely big enough for him to fit while lying down. He makes sharp right angle turns with zero room to move, forcibly twisting his body in ways he would never have been able to manage earlier. The walls are rough and jagged cutting into his skin with every motion he makes, scraping away at his shirtless body.

The Ninth Prince floats above the maze, using Qi Sense to monitor Chang's progress. Every so often, he notices Chang beginning to make good headway, and in response, the Ninth Prince molds the earth, making the walls rougher, the tunnels narrower, and the turns sharper.


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Chang races through the desert, screaming as he's pursued by an entire pack of sand sharks. The terrestrial fish comes at him from all angles, forcing the unlucky cultivator to dodge dozens of hungry bites, twisting out of the way of their lunges. Each bite that hit home shears through his qi, scraping skin from flesh and leaving him wounded. Of course, thanks to a special elixir mainlined straight into his veins, none of these attacks are fatal, but damn do they hurt.

The Ninth Prince, ghostly wooden fin strapped to his back, wearing a spiritual snorkel, swims through the desert, humming an unusual song as he prepares to strike.


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Chang stands in the middle of a horrific bronze machine, jumping and twisting and dodging as various tiny blades and stones fly at him. The contraption, built by the Ninth Prince specifically for this purpose because of course it was, is perfectly calibrated to his every move, slowly ramping up in difficulty as he grows more and more skilled. The rocks fly out faster, the blades come down harder, and through all of it, Chang has two options. Dodge the constant hail of tiny attacks, or endure them. Unfortunately, he's forced to do both.

The Ninth Prince stands in front of the machine's control panels, slowly ripping out power restrainers and off switches and other such safety features. He won't be needing those.


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Chang swims through a lake, searching for a specific snake shaped rock that the Ninth Prince has hidden at its bottom. Every so often, he's attacked by schools of slavering fish, drawn to the bait tied to his body. Some he's able to dodge out of the way until they give up, darting this way and that in the water. Others are more persistent, and all Chang can do is hunker down and endure the thousands of nipping bites.

The Ninth Prince floats above the lake, idly tossing a snake shaped stone up and down, catching it before it can hit the water. He'll drop it somewhere eventually. Probably.


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Chang balances precariously on a platform as the Ninth Prince tosses spiked balls at him, dodging and twisting out of the way of every ball he can. Of course, he can't exactly dodge out of the way of all of them, and the ones that hit Chang bite into his skin, injecting a mild poison that does nothing other than cause a potent itching sensation.

The barrage of projectiles is unrelenting, set after set after set of sea urchins finding their mark as Chang becomes a single enormous red rash. As Chang adapts, the Ninth Prince picks up his pace, shooting these urchins out with the force of a cannonball.

Eventually, even the ghost needs a break, and the Ninth Prince stops for a brief second, to judge how his shots panned out. To his surprise, he finds Chang fully unscathed, having managed to dodge all but the last sea urchin, which even now is embedded in his arm.

The two of them watch as that sea urchin slowly detaches from Chang's skin, its toughness and elasticity flinging the urchin away. That final urchin hadn't even left a mark on Chang's skin.

The Ninth Prince smiles.


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Chang bursts through the bramble field, easily slipping through the miniscule gaps in the thorn bushes. Where the vines are too thick to dodge, he simply pushes through, thorns finding no purchase in his skin.

When he exits the field, he's fully unscathed.

The Ninth Prince claps from his lounge chair.


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Chang grabs great globfuls of honey from the beehive, expertly avoiding most of the swarm's stings even as others simply bounce off him. The rope is no obstacle, his newfound flexibility letting him master moving on it.

He drops to the ground and presents the honey to the Ninth Prince, who finishes his ghost popcorn and gives Chang a hearty thumbs up.


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Chang stands in the middle of a cage filled with hundreds of rabid squirrels, easily dodging and twisting around their attacks. The few squirrels that do manage to bite down find their teeth harmlessly pinging off.

Eventually, the door to the cage opens, revealing hundreds of squirrels too exhausted to move, and Chang, unscathed.

The Ninth Prince smiles.


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Chang does a perfect swan dive off of the cliff, perfectly angling his trajectory to pass through the first ring. He then kicks off the sandpaper-like ring and aims for the second, slipping perfectly through. This repeats for the third ring and the fourth ring and the fifth ring and every other ring after that, until Chang lands in the oasis, sending up an enormous splash.

From his position at the top of the cliff, the Ninth Prince nods proudly.


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Chang wriggles through the underground tunnel maze like the snakes it was made by, taking severely angled turns like he's walking down the street. The roughened and scratchy walls slide off of his skin, not harming in the slightest.

Eventually, he bursts out of the maze end, where the Ninth Prince stands smiling, ready to pull him up.


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Chang runs through the desert, laughing as he easily dodges the bites of the multiple sand shark packs trying to eat him. Out of sheer pride and hubris, he even lets some sharks bite him. Of course, those sharks are unable to find purchase on his skin, and slide off.

The sand erupts and Chang barely moves out of the way of the Ninth Prince's lunge, the two so close that Chang can feel the wind the ghost displaces.

The Ninth Prince smiles.


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Chang stands in the middle of a mechanical death trap, weaving through the hail of blades and stones, dodging most of the attacks while the few that remain bounce off his body, even as the Ninth Prince straps every limiter and safety feature from the machine.

Eventually, the abominable contraption breaks down, wheezing puffs of smoke, and Chang walks out, completely unharmed.

From his position at the controls, the Ninth Prince gives Chang a hearty thumbs up.


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Chang darts through the lake, the schools of fish always missing him by bare inches as he twists out of their way. Eventually, he's surrounded by all the fish in the lake working in concert, and they go in for the kill. Their bites find no purchase on Chang's skin, and eventually, they give up.

Without looking up, Chang grabs the snake shaped stone that would've landed on his head.

From his position above the lake, the Ninth Prince smiles.


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The Ninth Prince raises Chang's hand up like a fighting champion. He's done it.

His training is complete.


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Time lost meaning in the strenuous exercise that threatened to push Chang's body over the border of life and death. He fell to the ground, legs criss-crossed, and hair fallen over his face due to the sweat matting it down. He was panting like a dog.

Throughout all the different types of training in the montage, Chang felt his life flash before his eyes multiple times. In those short moments in time, the contradictory urge to leap over the border to reach a true death was at war with the natural instinct to survive. It was a stalemate of two different ideals murdering each other until one of them got the edge from a different, foreign emotion.

Chang's desire for power supported the desire to live. He survived the training and he earned greater power. A smile pulled the edges of his cheeks taut when he realized the side of himself that hungered for power just as much as he hungered for fame.

Is Chang rapacious and worldly? Naturally he is. Indulging in pleasures is what makes life worth living. Death is what makes life worth living.

Achieving greater power to realize one's dream is what makes life worth living. The arrogant redhead cultivator would've probably been stuck in a slow-paced cultivation had he not sought out a senior.

If he decided to wallow in arrogance and allowed his pride to consume him, he doesn't know where that would take him. He doesn't regret his choice, but there is a certain amount of curiosity directed to the other path.

He squeezed his fist and allowed the pain to pull his mind from that direction. There's only the current path in front of him and the person who helped him on this path was the Ninth Prince.

Chang didn't have the will to stand up right now, so he merely turned toward his senior with a dim smile. He's not good at heartfelt thanks…how does one do this again?

"Thanks…for the guidance," he faltered and exhaled.

The metal reptile man-thing quirked a brow before snorting. "No big deal. It's a senior's duty to look after his juniors. The rest is up to you."

Chang nodded. This isn't even the first step yet. He's still a measly man in the Qi Condensation realm. He paused for a moment before standing up and giving a bow at the neck to the Ninth Prince.

That is the most he can do for showing respect. The senior then had his body come apart at the seams as what was dwelling within vanished. The particles of metal and sand faded into the air.

Can he be considered dead or not? He lost his body, but his spirit still remains and he still retains consciousness and sapience. In short, the Ninth Prince still counts as a living being, or at least that's what Chang chooses to believe. To lose the body and remain as a spirit…how ironic that he's great at cultivating the body.

The redhead chuckled to himself. That's not the kind of death he's looking for, but at least it's a step in the right direction. How enviable.

Chang took the moment to stretch his body and let out a large breath before falling to the ground again, limbs splayed like a cat on its back. He'll take the time to rest here for a bit before doing some more training later.

Finally, the comfortable and still ground. There's no need to worry about ambushes or hostile creatures or sharp objects, or…hm. He'd be lying to himself if he said he didn't like the training sessions.

Staring up at the sky, Chang did a little cloud watching and found a slight peace of mind. He wore a real smile as he thought about what he should do to gain more power.

"If I'm to really go all in, then I should visit that secret realm. The Qiguai Clan Doorway, was it?" It'll be dangerous, but the reward definitely matches the risk. And if he does die, well then it'll be disappointing, but he'll reach his goal in a boring manner.

He should get up already and prepare.

Kaboomatic: Well. This was a long time coming, that's for sure. Fully my fault tho, I had a bevy of college apps and stuff kept coming up and… Well, let's just say I kept on delaying and Fungus was way too nice about it. But it's done now, all 8ish thousand words, and I'm proud of what we did here. For one, I finally got to sneak a matrix reference into an omake, and that's something I've been wanting to do for a long time.

Huge thanks to Fungus for bearing with my… Well, with my everything really, and I think we did something great here. I hope you all enjoy the omake.

Fungus: I don't remember when this collab started, but this omake has been in the works for a while. Maybe at least two months? It wasn't all that bad though because it's not like I was in a hurry or anything. It was also pretty interesting to write a collab with somebody who has a senior character, so I guess I learned some stuff. I also really needed that training juniors bonus.

Though it took much longer than expected, I hope the quality reflects that. By the way, toss me a Life Saving Treasure please.
 
Chang Collab Link
Alright, here's the collab link:
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Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest] Original - Fantasy

Ninth Prince and Chang 2 - Teaching A Junior Pride… It was something Chang threw away so easily just to get on his knees and beg to join the Golden Devils. There was a chance they would've accepted him even without all that shameless kowtowing, but he needed to show his sincerity. When he was...
I had fun working on this and I hope you all have fun reading it.
 
Qinglong Shu 20 And Chang 3 - Going Ahead

Qinglong Shu 20 And Chang 3 - Going Ahead


Quite frankly, with all the shit that has been going down, Shu kinda forgot about her….her... fuck, may the Heavens forgive her, her, gagh, rival. She shuddered. Was disgusting to even think that word. It caused misunderstandings among other Good Seeds, misunderstandings she had to clear up with a healthy dose of polite violence. To make it sink it that her 'relationship' with motherfucking shithead Chang was an unhealthy dose of rude violence. But! But... well, adversary gave way to growth. And in the last two decades in which they repeatedly knocked each other out, repeatedly broke teeth... well, she learned a lot. Even if she was on the losing end. These days however? She was sure she could wipe the floor with him, if the news she heard were real.

Third Heavenstage against Tenth Heavenstage wasn't even a contest. She was never one to be filled with Hubris but the facts hit hard enough that she accepted the thought. Oh, he most likely had some sort of trump card but she trusted in the saying 'Basics Are Divine'. Anyway, the reason she was thinking about this? Well... She saw him on the premises of the Golden Devil Clan. She saw him sweating but with a wide smirk after separating from a senior. He radiated smugness. Radiated pride. Well, jolly for him. She bit her lip. Maybe... no. But... no!...Fuck. Fine, she had to admit it, she missed their equal bouts. There was something very exciting in giving it their all and then come out of top. Not to mention that he was a shithead so she didn't need to hold back at all! With that in mind, she decided to... give him some form of encouragement. She 'casually' walked past him as he was preening and cleared her throat.

"Hurry up and get on my level." Shu had her back turned to him but she stopped in her walking for a moment. "You're the only guy I can hit without any remorse."

Internally she winced. Okay, not the best ways to say it... but screw it, that guy wasn't a softie and he surely would get what she was getting at! Besides, even if he took it the wrong way, spite was a hell of a motivator so really, she was doing him a favor by knocking him down a notch!

Chang paused. It took a while for him to understand the words and realize who they were intended for.

...What did she just say?

Chang couldn't control the clenching of his fists nor the tightening of his neck muscles. He turned around very slowly, those words continuing to repeat in his skull. He stared at her back, almost transfixed by a delusion, yet he remained wordless. The inner calm, which was extremely rare for Chang to have, was disturbed.

Annoying.

Unbidden, his lips began to rise at the corners of his mouth.

His mood was oddly peaceful from a training session, yet it was completely ruined from listening to worthless garbage like this. Other people really can be a pain in the ass to be around.

There was thumping echoing, audible only to him, like a heartbeat.

It beat faster and faster until…

"Who are you again?"

The redhead winced and held his head before recalling something. "Mm. Don't you worry your short little ass. I'll be surpassing you in no time."

He managed to force out those words while concealing his deteriorating mental state. The fact that it's getting worse and will most likely continue to get worse is almost motivating him enough to see a healer and consult them. However, that will take time out of his routine in gaining power, so he'll have to suffer through these headaches and delusions for the time being. He breathed out all of his irritation and returned to the calm he carried before Qinqlong interrupted him.

Before he walked off however, there was no stopping him from returning her mocking with some mocking of his own now that he's thinking straight.

"'Hit without remorse....' The effects I have on women for them to feel so special about me really can't be understated. I'm not interested in children though, so keep things above the waist and below the sun."

Shu couldn't help it. Discipline and what not should have prevented it but it was too much. She snapped her head towards him, an expression of complete utter disgust. Then, she began to retch. She tried to keep it in, tried to stop the disgrace she was about to commit, but the natural laws were too powerful. Thus, she went on all fours and barfed out her breakfast violently. After she calmed down enough, and emptied out her insides, she wiped her mouth with heavy breathing, standing up before snarling a bit at the guy.

"I have never heard something so revolting in my life before! Fuck, that's what I get for trying to motivate you! Should've known you're a piece of shit!"

"Like hell I need you to motivate me!" He instantly rounded on her, pointer finger signaling at her lack of any good curves. "Just look at you. You're all skin and bones and look nothing like a proper woman. If you want to motivate me then just bring over a curvy lookin' gal, like your aunt or someone."

He nodded to himself, seemingly lost in thought. He doesn't know what her aunt looks like, but Qinqlong probably had the good genes pass over her.

"Also, clean up that mess."

Shu could've responded to anything. The idea that she actually gave a shit about looking like a woman. The insult that she wasn't a condensed brick of muscle. The little embarrassment of, yes, she should clean up her pukíng. However, she zeroed in on one single word he uttered.

"...What?"

Aunt. Her aunt. Her traitor aunt. Rage fueled her heart. She growled, her eyes changing, a thing that happened way too often lately, before she forced out a laugh.

"Hah. Hahaha! I'd pay to see her tear you apart!" She spread her arms open, raising a mocking eyebrow "But too bad, I'm gonna kill her so you don't get to die to her! What a pity! Guess you need someone else to make you know your place as a 'manly man', asshole!"

"You care about her so much that you want to kill her with your own hands?" He probably accidentally stepped on a landmine there. Well, there's no 'probably' about it considering her reaction and her words, but Chang couldn't bring himself to care about familial issues.

At this point, Shu was getting hysterical, her usually bottled up emotions spilling out. He knew nothing. Absolutely nothing. Here she thought everyone knew the details of her plans already but apparently he just didn't care. She shouldn't care that he didn't but each word he uttered just pissed her off! She clapped a few times in sarcasm.

"Oh yeah, I care! I care about how she murdered my Big Bro, how she betrayed everyone else in the Family! I care soooooo deeply, that I'm the only one who can do it, who has to do it! That's what duty is!" She scoffed, leaning her head back as if looking down on him, even if he was way taller than her. "Not that you would know any of that or its worth, you vagrant."

"Ah," Chang breathed out. His emotions fully stabilized at the realization of who the brat in front of him was as a person. He had an inkling before, but looking further than the surface is usually more effort than he can spare for another person.

However, he's not foolish enough to ignore what's so clearly laid out in front of him. Qinglong is the type to care about family and duty, and other irrelevant stuff like that. It's impossible for Chang to understand that mindset, but he won't rebuff it. All he knows is that his road is the correct one, for he's not the one in a miserable state at the moment.

Bonds and the karma between people are important, but they ultimately feed into the self. Spending too much time caring about the karma of others is unhealthy. Chang had to say something about this at least.

"Hm." There was nothing he could say. He was honestly stumped on how to respond to her, so he just let his emotions slip a little.

"I have a duty to myself. That's all that matters to me. If someone requests my help, then I might consider lending them a helping hand, but I don't think I could ever be a busybody and get myself involved in the affairs of others. Annoyingly enough, I don't think I can judge you here." It would be against his creed.

Being at a loss for words is a loss in general for Chang. So he let out just a small lie for the sake of getting the last word in.

Shu growled. Of course he couldn't judge her! From what he was hearing, he was so self centered, her previous claim must have hit bullseye! Was Ma also like that? A 'duty' to themselves? Ridiculous. It was just a way to say they didn't give a shit about others. They wanted to remain in their bubble, unchanging, accepting themselves even if their selves were terrible. In that instance, she saw herself, her younger self, in Chang. She should've just walked away. In that case, he was right. She didn't need to 'help' him. She wasn't responsible for his misconception. However, she wouldn't be Qinglong Shu if she let things lie like that. After all, as she took a calming breath…

She didn't understand him yet. Understand why he was so self centered. Was he born like that? Or was he raised like that? Either way...

"I take it back. I'm not going to wait." She cracked her neck and pointed with her thumb over her shoulder. "Let's raise those hands. You can use whatever you want, I won't mind."

It was unfair. It was straight up bullying. But Shu always learned best when fighting, and as much as she wanted to dismiss him as a rotten piece of shit, it would just be reverting back to her youth. When she also was a rotten piece of shit.

This little…

Targeting his own lack of power just because he irritated her too much and probably went too far? Chang crossed his arms to show his sheer unwillingness to bother with this farce. She said he could use anything, right?

He's about to pull out the stoppers on emotional damage to hurl her way, but that might make the unfair beating far harsher. Saying she won't mind was an outright lie!

Ah, and there's that annoying pulsation again. It's starting to drive him up the wall even more.

"Just what the hell is wrong with you? Don't bring out your own misery on others just because they're happier than you. I never needed the earlier motivation to begin with, so let's just go our own separate ways and interact less. If you still want a beating later, then I'll oblige and snap your spine."

"For all your big talk, you sure were open to tips with that Senior earlier," Shu commented. Yes, she was being rude and some part of her felt bad for it, but screw it. Sometimes people had to be forced to get help or else they would die. And as much of an asshole he was, Shu was unfortunately the caring kind. Tilting her head, she raised an eyebrow at him as she pointed at herself. "You wanna become strong, you need every bit of help you can get and part of you knows that. You think I reached this level on my own, living in my own little bubble of fun and rainbows like you try to do? If you wanna die so badly, fine, live that way, but it'll be a pathetic death."

Chang recoiled as he was physically struck by a particularly ruthless blow. The anger that washed over him was drowned out by the irritating drumming in his mind.

"You snake-eyed bitch...get your priorities straight before you show 'kindness.' Don't you have somebody to avenge?" Chang scoffed. He was thoroughly incited, so it's not like he can turn back now even if he will be beaten black and blue.

"Fine then. Let's get this pointless brawl over with. I have things to do." His mind is surely in a putrid state now, contaminated by the foreign sensation of wanting to live more than anything. Both contradictory parts of him agreed on one thing: he can't die a pathetic death, and that forced him on the path of recklessness.

She actually winced at that. She liked her own eyes. People always told her they were like shining rubies. To call them snake eyes... guess she really became a Demonic Cultivator huh? She should be focusing on getting stronger... but if cruelty was needed to keep others alive, then so be it.

The two of them moved to one of the sparring areas. The disciples training there became still. The two of them were infamous with their violent rivalry. Shu looked around, frowning a bit before whistling.

"Apologies, but this is a private matter. Disperse, please."

Naturally they heeded her words. Qi Condensation or not, she was still in the Body Purification Stage, far beyond them in that regard. Soon enough, the area was devoid of chatter, leaving behind only the two of them. Shu nodded a few times before looking around. She let out an 'ah' noise. Taking off her shirt to not get it damaged, her dragon tattoo was wide in the open as she walked towards the weapon's rack. She found what she was looking for and grasped the handle. She pointed the blade towards Chang, eyes weirdly calm.

She was an Unarmed Specialist. Everyone knew that. She herself never really used a sword or a weapon at all. But with all those Sword Cultivators she has been fighting, it would have been weird if she didn't pick something up. Still, if put into percentages, the sword would only be able to carry around forty percent of her actual skill at best. After all, she had to hold back enough to not shatter it into pieces, well crafted as it was. Body Purification was tricky like that sometimes.

And Shu knew that. Chang too. The Qinglong waited for his response as she held the unfamiliar tool in her hand, twisting and turning it a bit to get used to the feeling.

These stone gauntlets of Chang's are pretty handy. If there was one drawback to them, it would be the ridiculous spirit stone cost, which forces the redhead to think about when and where to use it. Right now, this fight isn't worth using them on, so it'll just serve for protective purposes.

Words were unnecessary. Everything was conveyed with Qinqlong's motion, and it bothered him immensely.

Chang started halfheartedly walking toward her, but then his emotions took over and he dashed with haste on his mind. He gathered all the qi in his body and let loose the strongest punch that carried all of his frustration, knowing it'd be pointless.

Her eyes widened in surprise. She knew those gauntlets were suspicious but this power was all him. Still, surprise or not, she let the sword flow like water. It was soft, to redirect it. But then, the motion accelerated, causing him to be knocked off balance.

'Water is strongest when it is flowing'.

She channeled the Qi, mixing it in a certain way and let loose the river. Water suited this best, as with water, she had the most control over 'soft' motions. Wood, Fire, Metal, Earth, all of those could accidentally shatter the sword as it 'excited' her too much.Well, maybe not Wood, but Wood was overkill in this scenario, as it was her best Element and it would defeat the purpose of this whole thing.

Chang blocked as good as he can, his gauntlets sturdy enough, but a few cuts still landed. She commended him in her heart that he did so well given the gap. Not that Shu tried to decapitate him or anything, but it worked. And not only that..her Qi was starting to have an effect on him. It was a simple technique, all things considered. The most basic of poisons. Mimicking a 'foreign infection', she injected it via her sword. It could barely be considered a poison, but she was trying to prove a point.

She learned. Techniques she may not like, but her library in her mind was ever expanding and she wanted to show what it meant to a loner like Chang.

The fighting style and raw movements were all learned by Chang. It got the job done well enough and it's not like it was necessary for him to directly learn techniques.

In fact, learning something didn't jive with him. Even if he's getting toyed with by the flow of water, this is something that just can't change. Techniques can't be learned, they have to be molded. It's all about him, him, and him.

But, he's losing anyway. He lost in terms of cultivation and he's losing in a fight when his opponent is barely trying. It's enough to sting at his arbitrary pride before he shook his head and gave up on any defense for the sake of offense. Even at a disadvantage, this was an extraordinarily pathetic performance from him.

The redhead let his qi forcefully boil like fire, prompting a scream from the deepest recesses of his soul. The severe disconnect forced out more qi and nearly ruptured his insides, but he couldn't bring himself to care. He needed to let out everything.

This flow… Water is one of the elements he frankly despises along with wood.

The redhead gritted his teeth and let aggravation weigh his attacks.

She saw his determination. His anger. By all means, she could just keep using Water to redirect his attacks. But instead, she dropped her stance... and took his blows head on. It was a foolish move, even with Body Purification, because those gauntlets were surprisingly tough. The blows hurt, aching, even drawing blood as she tasted iron in her mouth when her head was knocked to the side. Still, she stood tall. Grounded and sturdy, Earth reinforced by Metal. Metal, the silent supporter, for the other element. But she didn't just take them head on. Instead, she moved her body in a way to make it more painful to attack her.

'Let them break against you. Cut your flesh to cut their bones.'

He overextended, trying to break down her defenses. So focused on overcoming the pain of his blows landing awkwardly, he didn't see in time that her right arm went up and smashed the blunt side of it down his left shoulder.

The pain of Chang's shoulder dislocating was nothing in comparison to the pain of damaged pride. His fists were racked with more pain than he was doling out, even when he was using everything he had.

This battle was a foregone conclusion—there was no way for him to win and there was no way to leap over a mountain like this. Almost like fate, he was the person that tried to foolishly challenge it and was put down for his arrogance.

Laughable.

He put the rest of his strength into the arm that still worked, but his spirit wasn't in it. It already left him halfway through the battle. The only thing moving him forward was a rush of spirit that didn't even belong to him.

Power... He needs more power. It was only a little while ago that he was evenly matched against this brat and now he's getting his ass kicked and treated like a training dummy that can fight back a little. From others and himself, he's being driven insane. He needs to get stronger, so he can control himself.

Chang bit back a sigh. That would only hasten his defeat, though wouldn't that be better in the long run?

Ah...why can't he just reach his grave already?

Chang's eyes locked onto the next attack. He wouldn't be able to dodge this one. Looks like the end will be coming whether he wants it or not. It's not the type of end he longs for, but an irritating one that can't be washed away as long as he lives. This time he couldn't hold back the sigh.

Left arm raised, knuckles of the fist pointed upwards. Right arm raised with the sword, as if it was a spear. She exhaled as she lowered her center of gravity, as she used this style for the first time against someone else.

Her self made 'Bronze Style'. The arms become the tools of a Hoplite. In theory, she would bear limbs strong enough to rival mighty weapons themselves However, her Qi was thin. She was no Rina Callista. Thus, it wasn't perfect yet. It wasn't even something she'd accept to use in actual combat. Her 'Spear' wasn't up to part, so the sword had to do the trick. The 'Shield' was better, but not to her standards. But for this sparring? It did the job.

The left arm blocked the blow and she roared, knocking him back with her 'Shield'. With him off balance, it was child's play to slap him across the face with the flat side of the sword.

Now that the fight was over and the heat of battle was subsiding... Shu flinched. Shit, she really was a bitch wasn't she? Guess the stress of her upcoming trip to the Secret Realm and planning to murder someone far above her level was actually getting to her. Not that she would apologize. By now she realized that this guy really, really hated that. Either that or he just hated women. Though that would be superficial on her judgement, so it was probably the former. Staring at his lying form, she let out a sigh and shook her head.

"Contrary to belief, I don't really hate you." She spat out some blood before grimacing a smile out. "Yes, you are a rotten piece of shit and sometimes I wish you would die horribly... but damn, if this isn't fun."

She rolled her shoulders before shaking her head with a sigh. Picking up her shirt, she put it back on, turning her back towards him.

"I meant it. I'm gonna keep moving forward. But I'll still expect you to catch up." She paused before looking back, her smile turning more genuine and soft. "You're strong, Chang. But you could be so much more." She turned away again, waving her arm as a goodbye before walking off the stage. "Think about it, will ya?"

He hated the fact that he was relieved after surviving a fight that contained no malice in it. Yet, that side of him, content with something so pathetic and filthy, slept and faded to the fireside corner of his soul.

For that, he has to be thankful to Qinglong even if she did beat the shit out of him more than necessary. He was boiling inside that he felt thankful for such a thing. There was no possible way he could let anyone know of this emotion, let alone that snake-eyed bitch of all people. Chang was content on remaining in this silent solitude..

Thanking a woman? Like hell.

For now, he just needs to rest on the ground for a bit and contemplate life while staring up at the bland sky. Wow, he can't believe he's doing this again. At least it gave him another minor revelation though. Being taught by a senior and fighting against someone from the same generation as him helped.

Hmph.

He doesn't need to be more. He just needs to his obstinate self.
 
However, he's not foolish enough to ignore what's so clearly laid out in front of him. Qinglong is the type to care about family and duty, and other irrelevant stuff like that. It's impossible for Chang to understand that mindset, but he won't rebuff it. All he knows is that his road is the correct one, for he's not the one in a miserable state at the moment.
what a powerful sigma grindset

Just, my god.

I feel myself being sent into the next dimension just reading this passge
 
Qinglong Shu 20 And Chang 3 - Going Ahead (Collab Link)
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Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest] Original - Fantasy

Qinglong Shu 20 And Chang 3 - Going Ahead Quite frankly, with all the shit that has been going down, Shu kinda forgot about her….her... fuck, may the Heavens forgive her, her, gagh, rival. She shuddered. Was disgusting to even think that word. It caused misunderstandings among other Good Seeds...

In which shu keeps her rivalry up with Chang despite the tier difference
 
Cerina Polya - Good Seed Background


Cerina Polya




Born an oddity, opening a single eye to see the beauty of the world, skin the color of pale porcelain, with hair a pale white-blond. Her parents, the midwife, everyone had little idea of what to make of tiny Cerina. How could they? They were one community among the many mortals in the lands of the Dawn Fortress. A dozen mortal families all welded together to better survive in the Beast-Raising Forest. They were of the Clan, in that way that mortals protected by the Clan are subjects of the Clan, but they did not need the great libraries or teachers that the Optimatoi possessed. Why would they want them, as people able to live simple and comfortable enough lives under the Golden Lords' aegis?

The first time she turned her head completely around to look behind herself like an owl, she startled her mother so badly the poor woman could not stand to be in her presence for an entire day, frightened of her own mutant child's oddities. However, in a display of astounding virtue and kindness by comparison to most, neither of her parents abandoned her for that or any of her other oddities. Terrified of her, frightened for her, yes. But they would not let her go. Her parents fought for her with words and the weight of old friendships and debts to convince the others of her harmlessness.

They were convinced, to a point. Cerina grew up amongst the sheep and the goats and the monkeys and every other creature that the village cared for. She particularly liked the sheep. The sheep liked her too, though they were dumb as bricks. She grew and she grew quickly, gaining a maw of sharp, strong teeth it was rumored were able to crush rocks. The community's fear grew as her stature did, and by the time she was five she towered over kids twice her age. Her and the other children spoke little, so instead she talked to the sheep. All though the sheep did not respond and did not comprehend what the little girl prattled about at any given moment of any given day, in their soft bleating and wanderings for food and exploration Cerina found answers anyway. She was very good at that, seeing things no one else did, like her dreams of the golden eye in the sky. Sometimes when she was awake she could almost trace out the pattern of stars correctly.

She told the sheep how beautiful it was all the time, how sometimes it changed, and looked this way or that. She told them how beautiful everything was, in the gaze of her single eye. She had tried to tell the other children and her parents about it, but to capture the depths of hue she saw was beyond her. How to describe the sixty hues of red in a single stone retrieved from the roots of a tree, and other such dilemmas frustrated her constantly.

When she was eight and the height of most in their late teens she had already spent several years as a shepherdess caring for any flock she could convince people to let her watch. Often in a week she would care for three or four or even five different flocks and she had gained a reputation very quickly for never losing a single beast. She always knew where they were and what they would do and what to do to keep them safe. This softened the opinion of the community towards her, but she was never a particularly welcome guest on their doorsteps, even for as bright and quiet as she was.

The most memorable incident of her eighth winter was when four wolves attacked the herd of the local village head and were set to consume them, and then her, in a frenzy of starvation. Like the melons she had crushed with her mother the day before, she shattered their skulls with her shepherd's staff with ease. Frightened by the wolves howls and rage, she was surprised when the child of the headman appeared and tried to make sure she was okay and reassure her.

She had smiled then, bright and sharp, as her fear went away and relief came in its place. His joy when he smiled back was the most beautiful thing she had ever seen. In that moment she resolved to see other people make that face, to have that joy, though she didn't know how she would achieve this seemingly insurmountable task.

She got her answer shortly after she turned ten in the Clan Year 235 of Grand Elder Konstantinos during the day of the Blood Mist and the coming of the Great Era. The words she saw that day as her family hid themselves from the blood-mad were the most terrifying thing she had ever seen, and the most fascinating. The following night she spoke with her parents, and a month of rebuilding and burial later she was on the road to the Optimatoi with a good stick in hand, good shoes on her feet, and a sturdy pack on her back.



Current Status as of the Start of Turn 16: 76 Years Old, Foundation Establishment 1-Pillar (103 Cultivation Years).

Starting Perk: The Eye of Anastasi - A single cyclopean eye takes pride of place in Cerina's face and with it her sight is unparalleled in both precision and clarity, easily perceiving both the mundane and magical. Fragments of single sentences exist in the Archives of the Clan about this strange mutation. Post-Foundation she understands this to be the common feature of all Paratiritis, and has begun to understand the history of the House of Watchers.


Additional Impact: +34 Total (Foundation Establishment 12.33)
-The Four Purifications (+13 Impact) she underwent in the First Realm have been refined through her Tribulation. The true power of the First and Second are now expressed by the creation of her Threefold River-Armored Shell and Art of Vital Function Transference transforming her into a puppet-like state and increasing her Qi network's efficiency, massively empowering her while reducing her vital points to only her Eye. The Third and Fourth in the First Realm gave her insight into the Dao-Step, the knowledge and belief to move through will and ideals alone, and now in the Second Realm she has begun the long road to refining this sublime method of movement.

-The Withering Eye (+8 Impact) is a strange power, gifted by an ancient cyclopean corpse she found in Mountain Bell lands during her first mission, which was assimilated by the Eye of Anastasi. It has two effects; the first being that she can see perfectly through her own closed eyelid. The second is that opening her eye causes things she looks at to wither and dissolve, wasting away before her gaze, making her a dangerous opponent even for those greater than herself.

-The Stolen Time Panoply is a set of three powers earned by Cerina during her time in the Yuan Man-as-Mountain Array in the 290s. They give her 13 Impact in total.
  • The first is a silver ring called the Foresighted Eye (+4 Impact) which lets her see trails of motion and constantly predict ten to fifteen seconds into the future. This ring has been implanted into the roof of her mouth, to secure it against theft and leave her fingers free for fighting.
  • The second is the Shattered Gravestone Herb (+8 Impact), which grows from her left temple as a sunflower with long and pale petals. This herb was reputedly grown at a place where time collapsed and fractured inwards and by mixing its sap with her blood Cerina may enter a state of mind that allows her to perceive and manipulate the flow of time. She may slow it down or speed it up in Qi Condensation, and in Foundation Establishment the herb lets her stop time in a space for a few subjective seconds, and in Core she expects it will let her reverse time by a second or two to heal her own wounds. She wonders if this herb has some kind of historical connection with the Heavenly Time Shatter Sect.
  • The third power is her Shattered Servant (+1 Impact). One of the spectres of the Yuan trial now serves her, its broken and mangled body much weaker than her own, but still fast and able to fight. She can summon it anywhere within her field of vision out of the twisted time she controls. Just a distraction that appears from nothing, for now, but when applied with her incredible precision and precognition it can act as a useful tool.

Cultivation Goal: The Emperor's Pillar.
Omake Goal: Tribulation Treasure.
Mission or Secret Realm Goal: Helping Rina in the Colossus Footsteps Path

Dao of the Sublime: She has faith now. A faith in the idea of enlightenment, changing the path, and the acknowledgement of that sublime moment. She believes the Moment will come again, where she might be jammed into the sublime gearing of creation and singing strings of Fate to aid the Clan. She understands this world is a prison that ought to be escaped.

Goodies
Life-Saving Treasures: One (Ironwood Sentinel Talisman)
Lifespan Enhancement: 0 Years
Tribulation Enhancements: None
Plot Coupons: None

Noting what is possible to get from the Caves
Foundation Caves Floors 14-25: 5 Impact, 35 CY, Plot Coupon
Core Caves Floors 26-40: 4 Impact, 40 CY, 2 Plot Coupons
Nascent Caves Floors 41-47: 8 Impact, 55 CY, goes to floor 75
17 Impact, 130 CY, 3 Plot Coupons


Omake Word Total: 178,188

Turn 13: 31,241 Words
Cerina Polya - Year 235, Turn 13, I - A Body (5259 Words)
Cerina Polya - Year 235, Turn 13, II - A Cell (6997 Words)
Cerina Polya - Years 240-245, Turn 13, III - A Soul (7509 Words)
Cerina Polya - Year 245, Turn 13, IV - A Corpse (8592 Words)
Cerina Polya - Years 240-245, Turn 13, Side Story 1: The Run (2884 Words)

Turn 14: 41,674 Words
Cerina Polya 5 - Year 245, Turn 14 - Parents (8443 Words)
Cerina Polya - Year 246, Turn 14, Side Story 2: In Which Cerina Fist Fights a Building (3261 Words)
Cerina Polya - Year 246, Turn 14, Side Story 3: The Three Heavenly Curses (4044 Words)
Cerina Polya 6 - Year 246, Turn 14 - The Dao-Land (6699 Words)
Cerina Polya 7 - Year 246-247, Turn 14 - The Lands of Purity (6446 Words)
Ferenike/Cerina Side Story 4: Senior Advice 2 - Assessment (5380 words split between @Insane-Not-Crazy and I. 2690 Words for me)
Rina Callista/Cerina Polya Side Story 5 - A New Silverine Bracer - Recruitment and Lessons to a new Legionnaire (5211 Words split between @Alectai and I. 2606 Words for me)
Cerina Polya Side Story 6/Katha Theodoros 23 - Dinner with a Shepherd (14970 Words, split between @Swordomatic and I. 7485 Words apiece.)

Turn 15: 31,676 Words
Ajax Tripedes 10/Cerina Polya Side Story 7 (3864 Words, split between Curious Raptor and I. 1932 apiece)
Qinglong Shu 31 And Cerina Polya Side Story 8 - Eye To Eye (5344 Words, split between ObsidianNoir and I. 2672 apiece)
Mia And Katha Theodoros 27/Cerina Polya Side Story 9 - The Parable of the Board and the Nail (8720 Words, split between Swordomatic and I. 4360 apiece)
Ajax Tripedes 14/Cerina Polya Side Story 10 (5780 Words, split between CuriousRaptor and I. 2890 apiece.)
Katha Theodoros 30/Cerina Polya Side Story 11 - The Four Bandits (6010 Words, split between Swordomatic and I. 3005 words apiece)
Cerina Polya 8 - Mountain Bell Flashback Part 1, Turn 15 - A Memory of Terrible Meetings (8514 Words)
Cerina Polya 9 - Mountain Bell Flashback Part 2, Turn 15 - The Eye and Unwanted Allies (8303 Words)

Turn 16: 73,597 Words
Cerina Polya 10 - Mountain Bell Flashback Part 3, Turn 16 - Wing Cutting (7833 Words)
Cerina Polya 12 - Year 285, Turn 16 - A New State of Home (6579 Words)
Cerina Polya 13 - Year 290, Turn 16 - A Precocious Youngster Entertains Her Elders. Yuan Part 1. (4674 Words)
Cerina Polya 14 - Year 292, Turn 16 - The Doors. Yuan Part 2. (8925 Words)
Cerina Polya 15 - Year 292, Turn 16 - The City. Yuan Part 3. (13570 Words)
Cerina Polya 16 - Year 292, Turn 16 - The Shattered Century. Yuan Part 4. (9339 Words)
Cerina Polya 17 - Year 294, Turn 16 - An Invitation They Won't Refuse
Cerina Polya 11 - Year 295, Turn 16 - Letter to Brother Gabriel (849 Words)
Gabriel Pompeius 6 and Cerina Polya Side Story 12 - Lines and Circles (7450 Words, split between MrRageQuit and I. 3725 words apiece)
Cerina Polya 18 - Year 299, Turn 16 - The Teacher's Errors
Flavius 29 and Cerina Side Story 15 Collab - The First Peak (4166 Words, split between me and Theaxofwar. 2083 words apiece)

Turn 17?
Tribulation - The Revelation of Incarceration.

Post-Foundation (Written for Turn 16 Fate)
Iskander Pallikari & Cerina Polya - Curses and Endeavors, Part 1, and Part 2 (20,200 Words, split between no. and I. 10,100 words apiece)
Apalos 1/Cerina Polya Side Story 14 - For Her Sake (ObsidianNoir and me. All words to Apalos)
Katha Theodoros 37 and Cerina Polya Side Story 16 - Lunch with a Wild Friend (11840 Words, split between Swordo and I. 5920 words apiece)
Artorius Philocrates 1- Artorius/Cerina (Shining Bright and me. All words to Artorius)
Cerina and Bao'er Collab - Precious Child Collab Link (With DragonGrimoire, all words to Bao'er)

Turn 17 Continued
Bullying Blood Path
Bug Adventures.
Interlude: Kai Lin Lang



Turn 13 Fate:
Cerina ventured far and wide into the Mountain Bell lands, and while there secured a small route for a group of allied cultivators to escape, though she never saw them. Creeping through the lands and dropping caches of Spirit Stones, her efforts were dangerous and she was almost caught by an enemy Foundation Expert, but managed to hide until he left. Her life being saved, she fled into a nearby forest, and there found a head far larger than her own, bearing a single emptied eyesocket. Yet when she neared it, a ghostly eye appeared in the socket, and flew out into her own, its power merging into her. Unconscious for nearly a week, when she awoke she discovered she could see even with her eye closed, but upon opening it, the things she stared at would weaken, wither and die. From trees to flowers, to beasts and even human beings. The stronger, the slower, but in a fight her Withering Eye (+8 Impact) made her a fearsome opponent, and one that must be killed quickly. As she left her mission, she assisted an allied Foundation Expert, staying well back in a fight but using her Eye to slowly weaken an enemy Expert enough to allow her own ally to win. For such a contribution she was rewarded greatly, given sufficient stones and cultivation resources to let her reach the 9th Heavenstage in 20 years.

Turn 14 Fate: Abel Angelus, Katha Theodoros, Armus Hekurion and Cerina Polya had set off, and had been sent into the Eternal Deep on a joint bandit-hunting mission out of goodwill for the Yuan Clan… The Yuan Parasites Mission. She gained 70 years of cultivation from the core of a long dead Seven-Stinger Nascent Wasp, taking her to the Tenth Stage. In the retreat from the Yuan mountains she found more years, many more, in the flesh of the land and ascended into the 12th Heavenstage.

Turn 15 Fate: Cerina entered the Yuan Secret Realm, seeking treasures and rewards untold. Since the advent of the Great Era, many new trials had revealed themselves, Qi empowering more and more once-unused trials and the like. The first she faced was a simple puzzle trial, one she was unable to enter due to being pushed out of the way by a hasty Sorrowful Blacksmith cultivator. She confronted him on his exit, and he challenged her to a fight. Defeating him easily, she seized the Bone-Age Herb (+10 CY), a powerful herb that helped qi sit in the bones. Secondly, a new trial had opened. One that had laid dormant for centuries if not millennia.

Entering, she was forced through a series of doors in which scenes played out before her eyes, and as she changed things in one the casuality of all others was altered. As though touching onto the past, if she failed to arrange for the correct outcome, the trial punished her, draining her lifespan. Her first gain was the Foresighted Eye (+4 Impact), a ring that when activated allowed one to see trails of movement in the air, constantly predicting the likely futures to come in the next ten or fifteen seconds. It was not infallible by any means, but few in Qi Condensation would be able to resist its capacity. The second was a far more difficult trial, in which she needed to use the power of the Eye to alter another shown timestream, constantly intervening to prevent events from collapsing, to save an entire city.

Of course, it was merely an illusion, but upon succeeding a single herb lay at the reward altar. The Shattered Gravestone Herb (+8 Impact) was a sprig of a plant reputedly grown at a place where time itself had been shattered in upon itself, and by ingesting it Cerina would be able to manipulate the flow of time, speeding it up or slowing it down. At Foundation she would be able to bring it to a halt briefly in spaces, and at Core Formation even reverse time by a second or two to repair wounds she had just taken. She left, and the people she had let die in the visions to save others came to life, and tried to kill her.

Upon defeating them, she found that a single one remained. Her Shattered Servant (+1 Impact) could be conjured through the use of her new time manipulation, able to act in the seconds where time was sped up or slowed down. While much weaker than her, it could rise from nothing and appear anywhere in her field of vision, throwing weapons off-balance or striking enemies before it dissipated into nothing to be summoned again. Its body of brick and metal and flesh has had the names of her friends inscribed onto it - and eventually it will become one of those friends.

Turn 16 Fate:
 
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Cerina Polya 1 - Year 235, Turn 13, I - A Body

Cerina Polya Year 235, Turn 13, I - A Body​



Click click.

Cerina Polya blinked the grit out of her eye, rubbing gently as she hunched against the gentle wind and pulled her hood and face wraps tighter. She'd been traveling for a few months now and it was still so pretty out here, she hated to hide herself or obscure what she could see. But the weather wasn't always conducive to that.

She grimaced. Nor were people. But they were so interesting and pretty and all of their expressions were always new and fascinating! She couldn't resist saying "Hi!" even if they got all weird about her a lot. Pausing for a moment and leaning her staff against a nearby building she reached up her arms and stretched an elbow. It'd be dawn soon, the light of the sun growing and shading the rising mountains that dominated the land to her northeast. Huge edifices rendered in purple and green and stubborn black, piercing the clouds that hid their peaks from even her eye. They had been her constant and comforting companions as she traveled.

Right now though she had just passed through the town gate and things were quiet this early in the morning, as she headed for the little waystop just down the street. She wondered what her parents would be doing right now. Tending to goats? Playing with the sheep? She hummed. Given the season the bats would probably start gathering in huge numbers to mate, so her parents might be handling them as they came in for sleep. She liked the bats, having a lot of fun watching them fly or trying to catch them in the dark when she should have been sleeping. They were also a good food source for the God-Metal Brass Shrikes of the Clan. Seeing those was always a little harrowing, but very interesting! And so pretty as their bladed wings shimmered with a dappling of rose brass and gold only she could see.

Her musings ended as she arrived at the waystop, shouldering her pack a little more securely. It was a humble little thing on the town's main road, a squat round building of two levels with the doorway shaped to funnel attackers into single file. There was a stable attached to one side, a quick glance telling her it had six animals in it. She walked up to the door and went in.

The blast of smoky air and heat made her eye begin to water and she winced, coughing. A little collection of burly men, women, and a smaller handful of others so wrapped up in travel robes she couldn't tell, were gathered in the room. A good number were around the oval shaped ring of the counter that took up the center of the common room. In the middle of the ring the waykeeper reigned, manning a grill and well as he rotated between patrons. The smell of beer was also present, from kegs under the counter. The other patrons sat in ones and twos at small tables dotted here and there. The back of the room had a stairway presumably going up to rooms and the arrow slits upstairs. There were no windows on the ground floor. Another doorway at the back to the right of the stairs seemed to go to a storeroom.

No one else in the room seemed to care about her with her unusual features covered. She cared about the people though, interested in all of their little fashion quirks and curios dangling from belts and shoulders. One man alone at a table in the corner seemed really angry and deep in his cups. Scowling and red faced and snarling at everything near him as he stabbed into slices of meat with a short skewer. She went for a seat at the counter far away from him. The waykeep walked up to her as she plopped into her seat, setting her staff against the counter.

"Ah! Newcomer," he said gently, "What can I get you?" From his expression and tells she knew he hadn't realized she was a child, probably due to her height and obscured features.

She responded, asking. "Water? I don't have much to spare. Can I wash dishes to pay it off?"

The man nodded agreeably and set a mug of water in front of her, filled from a pitcher sitting near the well. This was a normal enough deal in these sorts of places, particularly those which had been set up specifically by the Clan. Do a little work, get a little back, enough to have you carry on. "Want to fill up your skins?" The man asked, quirking one blonde brow.

Cerina shrugged. "Why not. I can wash the floor for that too before I leave," she said.

He grunted. "Good enough for me," before turning to deal with some other patrons.

She didn't need to offer to do the entire floor, this water was supplied by the will of the Lords and the well was probably magic, but she was bored of walking and needed a rest for her feet anyway. Reaching up to her hood and face wraps she started pulling them down, drinking her water down in two gulps once her mouth was free. The man came back to her and her empty mug as she finished pulling down her hood. "What brings you out this--?" He trailed off, brows climbing and mouth falling open a little in surprise.

Click, click. She blinked again, her single big blue eye fixing him in place with its stare.

"I want to be an Aspirant," she said honestly, her words and the sudden surprise of the waykeeper making everyone look up at her, quite conversations ceasing. She grimaced inside, pouting as expressions twisted into concern, confusion, bits of fear. She hated all of those feelings. But her mother had told her that no one who rejected her for who she was was worth it, and she had no desire to hide from people. It still hurt though, and she hunched up as some of the gazes became darker and meaner. She scanned the room and saw trouble approaching fast. That tall and angry drunk man she'd noticed before at that corner table was staring at her like she'd slapped him.

"I don't think I heard right. You want to be an Aspirant, freak?" He grumbled, filling the room with his disdain. He leaned towards her menacingly, half out of his chair already, with a sneer twisting his face. People huddled away from the growing confrontation.

Cerina growled back at him. "What's your problem then, sir?" She glared at him too. No one liked her glares. A hot gaze with a frowning intensity, like being pinned by a bright blue spear. This man was no different, getting even brighter red in the face as he slammed his hands on the table and stood up, approaching rapidly.

"Hey hey! Knock it off!" The waykeeper shouted as he ran out from behind the counter and reached out for the man. His hands were thrown off as he tried to grab at the angry man's arm and he was shoved hard, sending the keeper stumbling back into the counter painfully.

The angry man started shouting. "I'm not giving up my spot to a wet nosed little brat who doesn't even know to kowtow to her betters! I should beat you for the audacity!" He roared, spit flying, and then when he came in reach tried to grab her.

"No!" She yelled, slapping his hands away before he grabbed her collar and pulled her up out of her seat. Like this she realized she was almost his height, but quite a bit lighter. His breath was thick with the smell of drink and made her eye almost itch from the unpleasantness. With all of her attention on him it was easy to see the scars on his hands and arms, the callouses on his fingers and the wrinkles at the edge of his eyes. This man was old, thirties at least, and those looked like training scars.

"Come 'ere you little whelp. Let Big Shen smack some sense into you!" He raised his other meaty hand. "Go home!"

"Ugh! Fine!" She yelled back, twisting. Her fist smacked into his guts, causing him to crumple, and then she smashed her brow into his face with a thwack that filled the whole room. Blood spurted. He fell like a sack of potatoes, blood dripping down his face as his eyes rolled back into his head.

The secret she'd found to raising so many sheep and goats was a hard skull. Whenever they got uppity she could just give them a soft bonk and that was that, they fell in line. A metaphorically hard skull helped a lot too when she needed to outstubborn them. This man did not receive a soft bonk and was now bleeding from a probably broken nose. Wiping away the blood on her face she huffed and looked down at him haughtily, which she was also naturally extremely good at with her singular eye placed above her nose.

"This Polya is going to Emporikipolis and you, Shen, aren't going to stop me," she said into the frightened silence of the waystop. Shen groaned, too pained to come up with a coherent response. She sat back down with another huff and a pout, throwing her waterskins onto the counter. The people around her edged away, the clunking of chairs loud as she grumbled. The waykeeper scooped his pitcher off the counter, almost seeming to use it as a shield against the girl as he approached.

"'M ten, but so what!? Can't I be one too…" She hissed, unintelligible to the other patrons, glaring down at her empty mug. The waykeeper however, did hear her, and paled. He leaned close.

"Miss Polya, please calm down," he whispered urgently. She looked up at him, eye rolling to track him as she hunched down further. His eyes flicked to the downed man and back to her. A slight twist of his expression was parsed, and she understood. A small sick feeling gurgled in her guts.

"Let me go take this drunk to the healer," she could say more to help the man's face, but frankly she couldn't be arsed. Reaching down she grabbed him by collar and belt and slung him over both of her shoulders with a hup. He struggled weakly. "I'm coming back for those," she said with a frown as she looked back at the waykeep, a small red bruise growing on her forehead. The waykeep nodded. She turned to leave. Shen was frankly lighter than some of the big sheep she'd had to haul around sometimes, so she found his weight no trouble at all. She hoped he didn't bleed on her pack.

***​

She'd been hoofing it down the dusty road for barely a minute before luck turned against her, and a trio of nearby guards saw her and her erstwhile cargo. "Stop!" The biggest one in the lead ordered. She complied immediately, anxiety growing tighter in her chest.

"What in the Lords' names happened!?" Another demanded, ruddy from what would be a future sunburn, all three of them with hands on their swords hilts.

There was the big burly leader, a slightly portly man beside him, and the soon to be sunburnt man who was built like a stone outhouse and they all surrounded her. Looking them over quickly, their expressions were angry, confused, suspicious and a bit disgusted as they examined her. Dozens of little tells and changes in expression passing by in a moment or two all tucked away into her memory. Their armor was normal enough fare, and while they all outweighed her, they didn't seem like they were tense enough to clap her in irons right this second.

She sighed. "Drunk hit his head," she said awkwardly. Desperately hoping that her messy ball of emotions would cover her poor lie and that they would hurry up and go away. Praying hard, her stomach dropped as one of the guards looked at her with a suspicious squint. The fatter one crossed his arms. None of the trio could stop looking at either her eye or her sharp teeth.

"And what are you doing with this drunk who hit his head?" The lead questioned, tanned muscles bulging under his lamellar armor dangerously.

She hunched up. "Taking him to the healers!" She said insistently.

"Right, Marik, watch her. Make sure she does," the lead strongman said, waving her off. The sunburnt one rolled his eyes and shuffled closer to the shadows, ignoring her. Her eye turned, watching the portly man slide next to her, and he just smiled a bit menacingly. With a shudder she tried to hide under shifting the drunk's weight, she started walking again.

The people she passed looked interested, confused, and then worried as her and the guard walked by.

"A cultivator?" A man sitting by the road blinked at her in surprise.

"Look, is that a beastwoman?", one woman gossiped.

"Wonder what kind she is…" another mused.

"Someone's hurt too!" Someone said as they pointed at her cargo.

Cerina tried her best to just shut her ears off, focusing on finding a healer. Then she realized after about thirty seconds or so of walking that she had no idea where she was going. Her head turned to look over her shoulder unnaturally, causing the portly soldier to twitch in surprise. "Where are the healers?"

He shrugged. "Dunno," he said nonchalantly.

Cerina's singular brow rose to almost meet her pale hairline. Overcoming the urge to drop Shen and kick this man in the balls caused her heart to race and her teeth to grind. Then she turned with a 'haughty' huff and looked towards one of the people who looked a little more wary and concerned than the others. Maybe they would do better than this asshole and the others who just looked mean and disgusted.

She marched up to them, a fruit seller hawking their wares and stared down at him. "Where is a healer?"

The small man shivered and then looked helplessly between her and everyone else, finding everyone was studiously not looking at them. He sighed in defeat. He raised a trembling hand. "Ma'am, over there. Down the street, take a right, look for a sign with an open hand on it."

She smiled, happy for once in the past half hour. "Thanks!"

Unfortunately the man just flinched at all her sharp teeth. She tried to keep her sigh bottled up, as she turned and went as he directed. The crowds of people in all of their interesting fashions and colors and-- she was getting distracted. The crowds kept away from her as she marched to the healer's and it was a handful of minutes later when she spotted the long and low building with a sign matching the description of what she was looking for. There were characters beneath it too in a very neat hand, and while she wasn't good at reading by any means, the gist she got was something like Li Hana's Hall of Miraculous something something. Something good and useful and if she'd been sent to a brothel she might just scream.

Thankfully when she walked in, the little bell on the door ringing, the sight of a large open room with couches and cushioned benches to relax on and an age bent woman bustling about at a counter mixing a thick greenish-white-yellow herb paste dispelled that notion. Herbs hung from the ceiling and dotted the walls on shelves, some growing in pots or pressed and dried to lay in thick sheets. In the back of the room to one side of the counter a large open doorway led to a hall with beds going down either side, only two filled.

"Ah! Hello there," the old healer said as she set down what she was doing and hurried over. "What happened?" The old woman, presumably Li Hana, asked. Cerina's gaze was fixed on her. Her hair was pure white, and she had more wrinkles than skin, skin tinged the faintest by green. Lady Li was a cultivator! The hints of patina were incredibly faint, fading from a dim hue of bronze yellow to a verdigris green. Wrinkles like tree bark, her skin was marked by subtle patterns in very thin lines, patterns she could barely even see. To another person she probably just looked extremely wrinkled, with a faint yellowing to her skin.

"Drunk guy hit his head," Cerina answered, annoyance, upset, simmering anger, and confused awe all curdling in her tone. The bent old woman, having stepped close to the young girl, took a look at her and raised a brow at the slowly growing bruise on Cerina's forehead. Cerina ducked her head, pouting and wincing, trying to hide behind her long pale-white blonde hair.

The healer shrugged. "Well don't just let him hang there with all the blood rushing to his head, which I now see is bleeding onto my floor. C'mere, lay him down on this couch," Li Hana said as she guided Cerina. Together they got him laid out and the healer hissed as she checked his head wound. Shen moaned, curling around his gut, holding one hand to his broken nose and not quite conscious.

"Well, that's pretty nasty, broken too" she said as she cleaned the wound and prodded around it. His nose look half-squashed. "He definitely has a concussion. How long has he been like this?" She turned and asked Cerina bluntly. Shen gurgled something incomprehensible.

The girl considered how far the sun had moved, used to telling the time very precisely from how its light changed. "Eight minutes and a few seconds," she answered.

The healer woman didn't comment other than a thoughtful grunt, turning around and heading to her counter where she pulled something out of it. A bored sigh from the soldier, Marik, caused Cerina to roll her eye to glance at him. The bastard looked half asleep, idly scratching at his chin. But under that she could see the subtle quirk of a grin, and a nasty little twinkle in his eye. He probably wasn't done causing her trouble. Returning, the old healer held a little jar of salts and another jar of ointment. The salts she held under Shen's nose and he awoke with a flinch and a growl.

His wild gaze immediately found Cerina. "Not you! I will be an Aspirant, not you! Not you, you owl-freak! Fuck, ow!" He shrieked, stopping his squeaky tirade as Li Hana deftly pressed down near his wound as she started spreading the ointment.

"So, what happened here Feng Shen?" Marik asked, thumbs in his belt as he cleared his throat and stared at Cerina. She knew if she tried to run she was fucked.

But she also knew how this was going to go, and Shen didn't surprise her. "The little freak attacked me as I was drinking, claiming to be an Aspirant or some wet behind the ears nonsense!"

"I see." Said the healer sharply as she fixed everyone in the room with a gimlet stare. Marik grimaced, interrupted and scowling at the older woman. The wizened cultivator looked at Cerina. "So young miss, what happened?" She asked pleasantly.

"You-! Ahhgh!" Shen tried to butt in, stopped by the healer woman pressing on his wound again.

Cerina winced, then took a breath. She had to speak quickly. "I was at the waystop getting water and resting my feet when the keeper asked what I was traveling for. I said I want to be an Aspirant. Then this man objected and tried to beat me, so I hit him before he could hit me."

Marik's eyes glimmered with a callous cruelty. "Well I think that's a lie," walking closer, hand on his belt for the set of manacles there.

The freezing chill down Cerina's spine made her whimper. Her eye flicked to look for any escape route. A window was just over the couch, she could leap through that! She started edging towards it.

"Well I don't, Little Marik. I may be over a hundred years old, but I'm not bloody blind nor have sand between my ears," the healer. The woman's voice stuck Cerina in place, wobbling hope, terror and confusion bouncing around in her head. Marik froze too, paling.

Shen looked absolutely livid, and Marik not far behind. But they were silenced by the presence of this little old woman. Cerina stood there shivering before Li Hana turned to her and smiled. "You can go, little girl. Go back and get your water."

Cerina nodded rapidly and ran out of the door. Kicking up dust from the cobbles she hurried as fast as she could back through the streets towards the waystop. Unfortunately her luck turned against her again when she was about two thirds of the way there. Walking down the street she saw the same guards from before on their patrol, heading towards the healer. She ducked into a dead end alley with nothing to hide behind beside some small piles of wood, before they saw her. What was she going to do?

Um. Peeking out around the side of a shop building down the road she looked at the slow flow of people going by. She couldn't sneak out, she'd be seen really obviously! Breathing hard she pulled back around the corner and scrunched herself behind a stack of wood, pulling up her face wrap and hood. She tried to stay as still as possible in the shadows as she heard them clank closer with their boots, praying they wouldn't look down this alley.

The clanking approached, and then passed, the two men joking about Shen's misfortune. They didn't look down the alley towards her at all.

The clanking faded from hearing and her head landed in her hands. Heart thudding, she closed her eye.

Click.

She opened it again and just looked at the stones beneath her feet, trying to calm down. Each stone was hexagonal, about the size of her hand, and fit tightly so they needed no mortar. The one right between her two booted feet was a pale grey in the center, leading slowly to a darker green-grey at the edges from collected grit. Hues of yellow and white threaded through the dust and thin layer of grit, little plants and weeds, or bits of wood from the stack she crouched beside pounded into the stone by passing feet.

Texture was calming too, the stone was dotted with little pinhead sized holes, or little pockmarks where water had dripped and made the dust sticky so it piled up in little craters. More water dripped onto it and she hiccuped. She was crying. She watched a tear fall, light flickering off it to paint little prism sprays on the stone before it splashed away into nothing. Like this, she could feel her heart pumping and the sting in her eye as just another piece in the palette of 'color' all around her.

She took a breath. Click click.

It's fine, it is, I'll be okay. I just, need to...


She took a huge breath, tears stopping.

It was at about this point, with a bit of calm fighting against the panic, that Cerina realized that if she didn't hurry, that bastard Marik would probably catch up with his buddies and tell them she'd run off. No cultivator around to save her would make that so much worse. She got up, wiping at her reddened eye, and rushed back out of the alleyway at a fast walk. Cerina tightened her face wrap against the wind and ducked her head, trying to be unnoticed and unremarkable.

She would have to take the chance of going now and maybe sneaking back to the waystop and hide there, or get the waykeep to help? Blossoming paranoia forced her to check for guards again. There were none. Pulling her hood and other wrappings tight, she tried to make her long body seem as small as possible and hurried on.

***​

A few minutes later Cerina scuttled around a corner and felt a surge of relief when she saw the waystop. When she entered she heard the quiet rush of conversation pause. There were a good number of the patrons who had been here that had left. There were a few less animals in the stable too. Guess they'd cleared out?

They looked at her for a moment before going back to their own conversations and meals as she walked up to the waykeep. He was cleaning off his pitcher and looked up at her arrival. He sighed and relaxed a little. "Oh good, you made it back," he said, sounding relieved. She nodded and sat back in her old chair, her walking staff where she'd left it.

The waykeep set her full water skins and a new mug of water on to the counter. "Anyone give you trouble?" He asked. She slumped and shrugged.

"Yeah, some guards," she whispered.

The man sighed again, deeper this time, then threw his towel over his shoulder. "It'll be fine, you're safe in here," he said confidently.

Click click.

She blinked at him in confusion, hands wrapped around her mug. "I saw what happened, remember? You ain't got anything to worry about kid," he told her.

"Oh…," she said, eye downcast. She hunched up.

His eyebrows climbed up his forehead. "You didn't do anything wrong, so it'll be fine."

She almost choked up again then, but managed to keep it back and just nodded as she drank from her mug. Sitting in the smokey atmosphere she tuned everything but her still racing heart out, closing her eye and trying not to think for a little while. Many breaths later and her mug of water emptied, her heart was a bit calmer. When she looked back up and checked the room, things were calm and quiet, the murmur of conversation flowing back into her attention.

She stretched, rolling her shoulders slowly then waved at the waykeep. He walked over, "The dishes?" He asked.

"Yep!" She said. He led her through a lifting section of the counter and showed her to a basin sitting by the well with a stack of dirty dishes set next to it and then left her to it. Kneeling down she got to work, scrubbing at the dishes with a cloth and soap, pulling up water from the well when she needed it. Like that she worked for about half an hour, rubbing at her eye occasionally to scrub dust and stinging smoke out of it, before something intruded into the calm.

The three guards came through the door, clank clank clanking in their armor. The burly lead man was at the head of the trio arrayed near the door. "Julius, is that girl still here?" He asked the waykeep. They couldn't see her from where she crouched by the basin behind the counter.

Julius shrugged. "Yeah, but we can talk about this outside," he said in a hard tone. Worry spiked through Cerina. Was he going to fight them or something!? She watched him go as she sat next to the basin and flinched when the door thudded shut.

What should she do?

Her eye flicked around looking for any kind of inspiration, before landing on the door again. Scurrying back out from behind the counter she hurried to the door and pressed her ear to the gap between it and the frame.

"-- in complaining and drinking away his latest failure. I let him be while he sat at a table," she could hear Julius saying.

There was a snort from the burly guard. "What happened next? Feng Shen is convinced she came in and started a fight with him then and there, all but spitting in his face," the big man said.

"What face Tang?" Julius grumbled. "No, the girl came in all wrapped up for travel, sat down and gave me more than she needed to for some water," his voice dropped, sounding a little guilty. "I asked her what brought her here, and she said she wanted to become an Aspirant. Shen didn't like that, stormed her way, and knocked me down."

Metal clanked as someone fidgeted. Julius continued. "And then he grabbed her and tried to teach her a lesson. She headbutted him and he went down, then on her own volition went to take him to the healers."

She could hear someone sigh, probably Tang? Then there was the voice of Marik, the fat man. "Boss Tang we--!"

"Yes, we can. This isn't our problem, Marik. Let her go," the bored voice of Tang cut off his subordinate.

The giant rock of anxiety stuck in her throat dropped away and Cerina stepped away from the door, making her way slowly back to the counter. When she was almost to the counter she heard the door open, and guiltily scurried behind the counter and back to the basin. Julius joined her a moment later and gave her a nod. "They've left, you're safe," he told her.

The relief was palpable and heady as she set back to work, finishing up the dishes and then moving onto the floors with a reed broom for a few more hours. Julius offered her a breakfast of meat and bread which she took happily and after that left her to her own devices as she rested. Now with the lunch rush approaching she stared down into the basin and considered what she should do.

She was tall, long and almost stretched with how quickly she had been growing. Round faced, with her big blue eye dominating it, surrounded by a corona of white-blonde hair and a lean teen's musculature. No hints of bronze in her anywhere, her flesh porcelain-like even with all the time in the sun, but from the stories she had heard, she sometimes wondered if her hair and eye were like theirs. It certainly wasn't impossible, or even that unlikely that a given mortal would have a little Bronze Blood. But the words Julius had said about Shen, a man thrice her age failing to become an Aspirant, stuck. Doubt crawled into her skull, whispered to her that she wouldn't succeed, but she had to try.

Sighing, she finished washing her final dish and weighed her options. Between continuing as soon as she could and staying for a little bit longer when Shen might know where she was, it was an obvious choice. Before the sun peaked, she had said goodbye to Julius, settled her pack, picked up her staff from where it leaned against the counter, and went looking for a caravan to Emporikipolis.



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[Omake Reward: Lifesaving Treasure, the nature of which is detailed in Part II - A Cell]

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Cerina Polya 2 - Year 235, Turn 13, II - A Cell

Cerina Polya Year 235, Turn 13, II - A Cell​


Click click.

Clunk clunk.
The wheels of the wagon thudded against the Scorpion Road as the spirit ox chuffed and groaned up at Cerina. She sat on its neck, quietly running her hands through its short bronze-brown fur. Each strand a slightly different hue and shade to the next, a slightly different length, all coming together to make a shimmering cloak across the beast's russet hide. If she stretched her imagination a little the shading could almost form pictures, like one might see in clouds. It was so much like the mortal oxen she had played with five months ago back home, but the colors and shapes were deeper.

A big brown eye rolled to stare at her, patterns shifting in its depths that could maybe be a forest, or maybe rocks. It was so much fun to trace them out and tuck them away into her mind for safekeeping. She laughed at its complaints about its sibling, who in turn grumbled and eyed her ride for a nipping. "Enough of that now you three!" The wagon master said lightly, tugging on their reins slightly. She waved at him, rolling back on the big beast's neck, coming to a stop standing and facing the man.

"Thanks for letting me play with them Elder Hektoen," she said with a bow. The old man, black beard thick with great and a fire scarred forehead waved her off. He had the bronze skin of the Lords, and when she'd asked about being his status as a cultivator he'd told her he was in 'Qi Condensation'. The beginning of the Path of Immortals apparently, where one awakened to the energy that existed unseen around them.

"Not a problem, little miss," he shook his head and shrugged. "How could it be when they seem to like you so much?" Hektoen waved her to the seat next to him, and with a running start she hopped the gap, landing heavily on the wooden seat, backrest briefly digging into her guts.

"Ooof!" She groaned, flopping on her side on the huge seat.

Hektoen shook his head. "Careful, I told you. Don't want you to fall off and all."

"I won't!" She promised for what must have been the fifth time today. She levered herself back up and kicked her feet. They were nearly five meters off the ground, each of the wheels on these wagons were like three times her height! Everything was so big. She'd seen cultivator wagons before a handful of times, and could never quite get over the idea of something so much bigger than her moving around so fast. The wheels and their bronze bandings were almost hypnotizing to watch turn too, flickering like they did in the sun.

She'd spent a lot of time watching them actually as she rode this caravan down the Scorpion Road towards the City she'd heard so many tales about: Emporikipolis, the Golden City, the City of Immortals. This was the place to be if you wanted to try and become an Aspirant. If you succeeded at their tests you would be accepted and taken across the Bronzewall. Hektoen had told her the caravan would stop at this place for probably a month or so. They would barter, trade and exchange goods here before heading back the way they had come. What they carried right now would go on the backs of other caravans towards the east and lands far away. The only bad thing about the caravan so far was that it was loud enough for sleep to be a little hard unless she ran herself ragged everyday. So she had bargained and begged her way into getting the wagon masters to let her play with and tend to the various animals of the caravan.

Now, in the distance their destination loomed, with the mountains of the Indomitable Peaks on the left hand and the open span of the desert on the right. The Scorpion Road descended towards it, a slight dip in the landscape the City grew out of like the bulk of some huge beast. The City's walls rose for an enormous height straight up for thousands of meters, five li high and built from perfectly cut blocks of red-brown stone. The blocks were layered in bronze like the scales of a lizard or snake, and the sparse morning dew gave everything on the walls a faint rainbow sheen. The top of the wall was dotted with towers and bunkers for siege engines and cultivators, pennants flying. Distantly she could hear bells, morning muster bells maybe?

Excitement thrummed through her like a taut wire, trying to pull her everywhere at once before she clamped down on it and sat. She stared, turning slowly to watch the passing wagons and carriages and foot traffic, the occasional cultivator racing by or strange beast galumphing past. They were all heading towards the huge iron gates which stood open in the distance, and through them she could see fields of grain and other staples. Many li inside, another smaller wall rose, guarding the inner city. It was built from white stone and red banners draped across its top. Between the two walls spanned the Scorpion Road, ferrying goods back and forth ceaselessly.

Closer to the inner wall, warehouses, trading halls, inns and tea shops, blacksmiths and a dozen other things grew to either side of the road. "Alright, time for you to get back in the wagon kid. Traffic can get a bit rowdy. We'll stop at the foot of the Inner City and then you can come back out," Hektoen intoned, slapping the door back into the wagon.

She pouted. "But there's so much to see out here!"

"You can use the windows inside to look around," Hektoen rebuffed her placidly, well used to this argument.

She groaned, flopping over again and bemoaning the injustice of the world and her fate. As it had prior, her complaints left Hektoen unmoved, and so after a solid ten minutes of whinging she gave up and scurried back inside the wagon. It was a lot like a two level building on wheels. The upper floor was split between some living space, some beds for Hektoen and his family, the remaining two thirds for storage of more delicate and lighter items. Bags and bags of them, herbs, spices, glassware and a ton of other things. The bottom floor was basically stacked top to bottom with crates and barrels of slightly less fragile things. And all of it could be accessed by the entire back of the wagon opening up in two great doors.

Cerina settled down at the foot of her bed, listening to Hektoen's family move about their day out while she dug her current book out from the bed sheets. It was an illustrated and basic recounting of the start of the Ninth Demon Annihilating War, which had begun centuries ago. She still wasn't good at reading by any means, she had had so few chances to practice, but… she loved it. The sweeps of the characters and calligraphy, the hues of the inks, the images conjured up from the minds of others and put together in hers, the stories people told and how they told them. What she read stuck with her.

Click click went the time, flying by as the wagon rumbled down the road. She split the wait between reading and gazing out the windows at the shimmering hustle and bustle, taking the time to think as she slowly and agonizingly pieced together a better understanding of the words. Sometimes she would murmur aloud to herself, other times she read silently, going back over old sections for more practice. A part of her wondered how much reading could be like cultivation, but for now she had so little idea of what cultivation even was that she had no hope of answering that question.

She was about done with the current chapter in her book when the wagon train slowed, the noise outside intensifying, and then stopped. "We're here!" Hektoen shouted, causing everyone inside his wagon to look up and start running around to grab what they wanted before heading out into the city. They'd be going off to see loves, find deals and interesting products, and generally go about relaxing. She'd be looking for a place to stay and the recruiting office. A small pang of loneliness passed through her, only to be brushed aside by the idea that if she succeeded, she'd probably be able to find Hektoen whenever she wanted. She'd be a cultivator with all sorts of incredible magic powers and stories to tell!

Setting the book she'd borrowed down on the bed she made her way back to the door to the driver's seat and stuck her head through. They were now settled in a large clear area with low walls dividing it from other clear lots, set to one side of a very large plaza. Around the plaza were several other caravan stops, most of them full of wagons and beasts of their own. Towards the wall the buildings ended abruptly, leaving an open space several hundred meters wide in front of the Inner Wall. Turning away from the view was a struggle, but she turned to Hektoen and smiled.

"Many thanks for the ride Elder!" Cerina said brightly.

Hektoen just snorted. "You know how to get to the recruitment office, little miss?" He asked her again.

She nodded. "Big building with the three towers over there," she pointed to the building in question, which rose over the other businesses and buildings of the outer city, girded with large columns in a Golden Devil Style. Hard to miss it really.

Hektoen nodded. "Off you get then," he said. "Remember, the Glorious Bass's Hall of Rest is a decent place to start looking for a mortal. They know people there at the very least."
She gave him a bow. "Thank you, I'll hope for your good luck," she said formally.

He gave her a bow back. "May Heaven not impede your path," Elder Hektoen said.

With that, she started climbing down.

"Oh! I just remembered, if you can find a guy named Marius Elgabalus, tell him I sent you. He's a friend of mine," the old man said as he leaned over the edge of the driver's seat and looked down at Cerina.

Cerina nodded. "Marius Elgabalus! I'll keep an eye out!" She said and then giggled and dropped onto the ground. "Bye!"

Now to find a place to sleep for the night.

***​

Hektoen hadn't known how old she was, but she appreciated the care and advice he'd given her anyway, as well as the money he'd paid her for tending to the animals. Without any of those three things she'd have floundered for sure and been lost in this giant heap of a city. It was packed. The sound and smells were nearly overpowering and her face hurt from staring wide eyed so much at the multi leveled buildings that surrounded her. Tiny parts of it were like her hometown or the other towns she'd passed through in miniature, little neighborhoods tucked away between massive thoroughfares and big city lights. The other parts were bewildering, and more than once she'd had to sit down and just process it all for a bit before moving on.

So, with Hektoen's advice and her money, she'd managed to find a room. Not at the Glorious Bass unfortunately, it was simply too expensive, apparently their prices had gone up as the Aspirants piled in. That was the story anyway. She had been able to cajole another place to go out of some of the patrons and sympathetic staff there. Apparently the Glorious Bass was part of a network of inns who had banded together to share profits, and one of the places even lower 'class' than the Glorious Bass had been affordable. That had landed her here in Laoshen's Hall of Serenity.

At the moment she was wrapped up in a blanket in her room, wondering about the different response she'd gotten in this City of Trials. There were still many people who looked at her weird or looked down at her or tried to ignore her out of disgust. But there were so many people here that the nice people outweighed the assholes. The entire thing left her in a good mood, relaxed and wrapped up in a blanket near the window to people watch.

She'd spent the last little while wrapped up in her cocoon on her room's single chair, looking out the window down at the night time pedestrians walking by four stories below. The streets had lamps and paper lanterns, but many people carried their own lanterns or candles as they went about their business. She'd watched five different thieves, three of them near her age, if not her height, filch things from passersby and not a single one had been caught yet. Everyone she'd seen she'd noted down in her memory, just in case she needed to avoid them. It was odd too, they really should have been caught by now. But the guards here were slow, few in number, and frankly kinda lazy? She'd sat here wondering why things were like this for a few hours before finally getting it.

The thieves were kind of playing a game. They weren't stealing pouches, boxes of unattended goods, or cornering people to mug them. Instead they were reaching sneaky little hands into pockets and pouches and boxes, and taking handfuls away as their prizes. She'd been counting, and while she couldn't see every coin or bauble taken, she'd estimate that it was both a small amount and slow in the grand scheme of things. People weren't ruined by this kind of thing. So maybe the guards just didn't care about it? Also she'd been watching one kid of ten or eleven, just like her, with a bright shock of red-brown hair and they were good. The best out right now, and not a single mark noticed a thing. It was kinda fun watching this thief in particular? She couldn't quite articulate why she found herself giggling any time she saw them pull off a successful snatch and grab.

It was after the Best Thief had pulled off their latest heist, as her eye turned away from them that she noticed something that made her tremble and her hands clench in fright. A familiar head of hair and a scowling squash nosed face on a man in his thirties she'd last seen two months ago. Feng Shen. Cerina's brain ground to a halt, sputtering as she saw him walk towards this building and then disappear under the curling edges of the stone archway sealing the entrance. Blurting out a word neither of her parents would approve of, she reached for the pack she hadn't even unpacked yet and scampered to her room's door. Ducking out, she locked the room behind her and rushed for the stairs.

Was he looking for her? Did he know she was here right now or was this just awful luck? She didn't know and she also wanted to be closer to a way out like the ground floor kitchen than trapped up in her room if he did know. Down and down the spiraling flights of stairs towards the common room. At the final stretch she crouched instinctively and slid up to the doorway into the common room, peeking past its edge. Behind her past the stairway lay the hall that led to the kitchen.

Out in the common room, Shen was standing at the front desk with not a care in the world. The room only had a few patrons in it at the moment, most were out conducting evening business or had already retired to their rooms with business guests of their own. Shen had walked directly up to the proprietor Laoshen Gon, a wiry and grey bearded man wrapped up in red robes bordered in green. It wasn't hard to hear them either.

Laoshen was speaking, looking down at something Shen was holding. "Hmm. You say you are this girl's father?"

He said what!? She though in a sudden spike of fury.

Shen smiled and nodded. "Yes! Her mother passed a few years ago and she's become willful ever since. She ran away from home seeking to become an Aspirant, before she was ready!" He lied like his tongue was blessed with only Heaven's truth and it sounded vile in Cerina's ears. She huddled deeper into the shadows of the doorway, listening.

"Hmpf. You're in luck. A girl that matches that sketch came to this inn earlier tonight. She even told me she was aiming to be an Aspirant," Laoshen said with a slightly exasperated tone and a shake of his head.

"Wonderful!" Shen said, bowing deeply to Laoshen. "Thank you for helping this father collect his wayward daughter," he smarmed. "Many favors I've had to spend to track her down. Once I am an immortal I will be sure to remember you sir Laoshen."

Laoshen snorted. "As a father, how could I not help another? Come," he said and waved to one of his sons. "Kang, take over the desk while I show this good sir to the little miss's room."

Fuck.

Cerina turned and sprinted as fast as she could towards the kitchen, boots thudding on the stone floors of this inn turned trap. "What? Wait, that's her!" She heard Shen shout behind her. She slammed through the kitchen doorway to the screams of the servants inside and bolted for the back door she'd seen the servants carry the slop out of for tossing.

"Polya! Get back here!" Shen roared behind her. Glancing back as she hit the back door with her shoulder she saw him bursting through the kitchen door. Scrambling in her pocket she came up with her large and heavy iron room key and threw it at him. It flew and smacked him directly in the face, causing him to shout in pain and reel backwards. She was already gone down the back alley, running as fast as she could.

The city's night crowd parted for her without protest, people looking at her and the commotion with confusion. By the time Shen burst out of the back of Laoshen's inn, she was already across the street and ducking around a back alley corner. His shouts echoed after her as she scrambled away frantically. She wove through the alleys of this unfamiliar city, heart thudding and lungs burning as she tried to escape from her pursuer. Unfortunately the man was hardy and athletic, for all his apparent inability to become an Aspirant, and she heard him getting closer and closer as he ran faster than she could. The clanking of boots chasing after the both of them was also getting stronger, and that might just be worse than Shen catching her, if the guards believed him.

The chase had been on for what felt like an hour, but from the change in the light she knew it had really only been about ten minutes, and now they were deep in the residential areas and tangled alleys that butt up against the fields. Cerina hoped she could hide in the fields and lose Shen in the man height stands of wheat and barley. Barely anyone was out here right now, and those who were scattered when they heard Shen calling for her and demanding she face him. He was so close.

"I knew you couldn't hide from me! Get back here so you can face your punishment!" Shen shouted from half a block behind her as he careened around a corner and spotted her.

Desperate, she jinked left and dove down an alley, leapt over the barrels in its mouth and then over the short fence which separated it from a garden courtyard. The back walls of several buildings enclosed the courtyard, each several stories tall and without anywhere to climb to. She stuck to the shadows around the edge, heading for another alley tucked into a corner on the right side of the courtyard, partially hidden by the shrubbery and small trees dominating the center.

Dashing into the alley beyond the garden, she found herself in a maze. Closed and locked doors lined the walls with little paper lanterns hung here and there beside them, casting everything into gentle gloom. Shen had stopped shouting, and she couldn't hear his heavy footsteps behind her anymore. She slowed down, straining to see anything, listening intently. Where is he? She wondered as she slid around a corner cloaked in shadows.

There was nothing, not even sounds of the guards they had left far behind by now. Turn after turn in the maze and there was nothing but the buildings on either side of her. Stopping in a T-intersection, she realized the slightly brighter lit path to her west would lead towards the fields. Carefully, as quietly as she could, she slid her way closer and closer to the brighter path, head turning back and forth to scan for any sign of him. Seeing none she shuffled down the alley, shoulders hunched fearfully.

She didn't see Shen waiting in a doorway a little way past the intersection, obscured by a colorful curtain and before she could react he'd leapt out and grabbed her. He yelled triumphantly. "Now I can finally fucking kill you!"

What.

Panic blinded her to everything but the flashing knife he pulled from his belt as he yanked Cerina closer and tried to wrap a thick arm around her throat. The knife flashed towards her face. Pure instinct drove her to bite. There was a hideous scream and a huge spurt of blood as her sharp front teeth tore into his knife arm. Struggling and twisting she slammed into him and the blow caused him to let her go, clutching his savaged arm to his other as the knife clattered onto the ground.

"Damn monster! You're going to scream for that," he growled, staring at her hatefully as he lurched towards her.

"You're disgusting!" She shouted at him, spitting out chunks of his arm and gagging as she backed away down the alley.

With a yell he lunged, and kicked her in the stomach. His next blow she caught on her arm, and the third smacked her in the temple, sending her stumbling down the alleyway as her head rang like a bell. Desperate, she caught his next strike in both hands and kicked for his balls, only to have her foot deflected by his thigh and as she overbalanced he tried to tip her to the ground.

Terrorized fury and desperation not to be thrown to the ground and then killed gave her a strength she shouldn't have had and his arm suddenly cracked as she yanked it hard. Pulling him close as he shrieked in pain she slammed the top of her head straight into his nose, shattering it again. He fell, moaning and coughing on his own blood.

Panting, tears leaking from her eye Cerina backed away from him down the alley. He laid there, whimpering and clutching at his injuries. "Stay away from me. Stay away, and don't come back," she begged as she backed up further and further. Not waiting to see if he would get back up, she turned and ran down the alley, heading back towards the light and sound of the city and as far away from him as she could.

Blinded by fright and tears and the star-bright pain of a headache, she couldn't dodge the guards she nearly ran into. Iron strong gauntleted hands clamped around her arms and she froze up in shock.

"Hey! I found her! The girl's right here!" A harsh voice shouted, unintelligible shouts from what must have been other guards answering. "Sorry girl but you're going to need to come with us," the harsh voice said.

Click click. Her vision cleared, revealing what must have been just a boy, a few years older than her, with thinly freckled and tanned skin. His expression was pitiless and hard and as cold as the manacles she felt clamp around her wrists. A hole opened in her stomach and she felt all of her frantic energy just bleed out of it entirely.

"No! No please! Don't put me in there with him! Please don't!" she babbled, struggling wildly against the guard before suddenly a massive wave of pain slammed into her head and she lost consciousness.

***​

She blinked in and out of awareness during the trip to the Legion dungeons, a few times anyway. When she came to properly, it was as she landed heavily on the straw strewn floor of her cell. Breathing hard and head throbbing, the terrified ten year old struggled to make sense of what was going on. Why was she in here? Did… did they believe him and his lies?

She whimpered, covering her head with her manacled hands as she curled up against the wall. Eye screwed shut tight, she tried to think of what to do through the swirling panic, and failed miserably. She had nothing to go on and nothing she could do. This was the Legion, the very same people she'd wanted to join. And they thought she was the wayward daughter of some jealous madman.

Cerina sat there in her cell, misery pulling her deeper and deeper for who knows how long. There was no light in the cell other than the lamps hung up in the hall outside. She thought she might have been underground. Nothing moved down here but her harsh breaths and the lamp flames, until the clank clank of boots echoed down the hall of cells. She looked up, the dimness not impeding her as she watched two guards stop in front of her cell. One was short and wizened with wrinkles, holding an oil lamp in one veiny and liver spotted hand. He ignored her, nodding at his companion.

"Here you are sir, the girl," the old man said with a strong and surprisingly deep voice for his small stature.

The other man nodded. He had skin of bronze, no patina visible anywhere on him, clean shaven and with hair rather similar to her own. The shades were not the same, hers was even lighter, almost like the snow on the mountain slopes, while his hair was more brassy. His eyes were a blue several shades darker than hers. He stood in his lamellar Legion armor like it was a second skin and the rank insignia on his shoulders marked him as a Centurion.

"Thank you Meng, you may go," the cultivator intoned calmly.

The old man saluted and bowed. "Yes sir," he said as he straightened and then shuffled away.

The cultivator looked her over, and sighed quietly. "Alright. I have some questions."

Of course he did. Her view was wobbling, she was shivering so hard she felt like she'd fly apart as she stood up and faced him.

"What is your name?" He asked her.

She gulped. "Cerina Polya, sir," she somehow managed to answer clearly, some instinct guiding her.

"Where are you from?" He asked.

"Three-Streams Gulch in the Beast Forest, sir" she recited the name of the little town she'd called home for most of her life.

He huffed and nodded, a thoughtful look passing over his face. "Why are you here?"

She shuddered. This question had brought her nothing but trouble it seemed. But that didn't cause her voice to waver. "To become an Aspirant, sir."

She slumped, looking down at her feet. "I just want to join the Legions."

His voice was softer. "Ah. I see. How did you meet that man?" He asked slowly, weighing his words carefully.

She sighed, propping herself up and gingerly moving along the wall closer to him. She was nearly as tall as this man, who was a few hands shorter than two meters himself, so she was able to stare him dead in the eyes. "That bastard attacked me in this little waytown two months by caravan west of here."

She had to get her side out or all of her hopes were just going to go up in smoke. She grabbed the bars, manacles clanging against them as she kept going. "I'd just stopped into this, little safe waystop to get some water. Just water! A-and when I told the waykeep, Julius, what I was doing there he, Feng Shen," she his name tasted like rot. "Tried to beat me for 'taking his spot' as an Aspirant."

She shook her head, looking at the guard Centurion plaintively. "Was he captured too?" She asked.

The guard nodded. "He was alive, and wounded. You're doing I presume?" The man asked, gesturing at her chin.

She looked down and flinched, retching as she realized she still had Shen's blood all over her chin. Frantically she scraped at it with her hands and her clothing, most of it flaking off. She heard the clanking of guard boots as she scrubbed harder at her face.

"Here, water and some soap," the man said, holding a small bowl of foamy water through the bars. Cerina snatched it gratefully and almost dumped the entire thing over her face, scrubbing at the blood till most of it came loose. She was even able to get most of the stuff on her teeth off too, and her mouth stopped tasting mostly of blood.

"Right," the guard said as she slowed down her frantic scrubbing. "Where were we?"

She twitched, then took a breath, and started laying out the rest of her story up to the point she'd been tossed into this cell. When she mentioned Hektoen, the immortal's eyebrow rose and a flash of recognition passed over his features. Cerina latched onto that faint hope, pulling herself against the bars and looking at him intently. "Do you know him? He told me to look for a man named Marius Elgabalus. Do you know that man?"

The man's other brow rose, both soaring for his hairline. "... that's my name, miss Polya," he said, amused.

Click click.

"Huh?" She blurted, shock overriding everything that had happened in the past fifteen minutes.

He chuckled a little. "How odd, Fate," he muttered, then shook his head. "Yes, I'm a friend of Hektoen. He sent you to find me, if you wanted to join the Legions?" He asked her.

She nodded.

"Hmm. Interesting. We can come back to that, after this," he said.

She sighed, rubbing her temple against the bars to soothe the headache she still had.

"What happened after you came here with Hektoen?" Marius asked her.

"I found this place called Laoshen's Hall of Serenity, to stay in for the night with some of the money I'd been paid by Hektoen. For taking care of the animals. Anyway, I was -- well, people watching?" She said hesitantly, suddenly unsure whether mentioning the thieves was a good idea.

Marius waved his hand for her to go on. Steeling herself, she bulled forward. "They were, um, thieves? Thieves out on the street in front of Laoshen's that I was watching from my room and that's how I noticed Shen. I ran away after I went down and spied on him and Laoshen talking about me. He chased me down," and now the panic was coming back three-fold as she remembered what he'd said.

"He said he wanted to kill me, when he caught me," she murmured.

Marius sighed, coming a little closer and leaning down to look her in the eye as she hunched around the pain and nausea in her gut. "I think we can stop this here, okay. I've already talked to this Feng Shen, and frankly the man was raving. Mad, almost certainly. And I don't forget faces easily,"

She looked up at him, a little confused. "Have you…? Seen him before?" she asked.

Marius nodded. "I believe I have, in previous entry tests for Aspirants. He failed all of them rather miserably. Now, that brings us to your desires."

He crossed his arms and stared her down. "You want to be an Aspirant?" He demanded.

She gaped at him. Was… was this actually happening?

"Am… am I not in trouble?" She could scarcely believe that something else wasn't going to drop on her head all of a sudden.

He shrugged. "No. His story leaks like a broken sieve, and frankly, he's a horrid piece of work,"

Cerina collapsed against the bars, shuddering. "Thank you," she whispered to Marius.

He smiled, a tiny quirk on an otherwise stiff face. It made his eyes twinkle. "You're welcome."

She took a deep breath, steeled herself and then met Marius' eyes. "I want to be an Aspirant," she said with as much weight as she could muster.

"How old are you?" The man asked.

Um. Well lying would get her nowhere, she was pretty sure, given her track record.

"...ten, almost eleven…" she said.

His eyebrow raised.

"I'm ten! Okay!?" She shouted at him, huddling down as tightly as she could against the bars.

There was a snort, and then a chuckle. "Okay then!" He said, waving his hands. She pouted at him. His chuckles turned back into a snort and shake of his head. "Hmm, well that'd make you too young to become an Aspirant proper," He said, crushing her dreams in a single swoop.

No, no no no. What was the point if she was too young!? What was-

"Wait! You can still become an Aspirant later," he told her, raising a hand to forestall her protests and confusion.

"It's a good thing because it means you can get put into a training program. Can you read?" He asked.

She winced. "Um… I can read okay? My parents taught me," She hedged.

"This place would teach you how to read well, and train you. It might well give you as many books as you can stomach," he said.

Wow, okay, that sounded awesome. Her worries were evaporating the more Marius spoke. He gestured expansively. "The way it works is that Aspirants are mostly those in their late teens or early twenties who we can put through rigorous physical training to prepare them for Qi Awakening and Blood Infusion. You're far too young for that kind of thing, even with your impressive strength," that made her feel all warm and fuzzy. Most people were a bit freaked out by how big she was at only ten.

"And thus you are too young to technically be an Aspirant proper. However, a Legionnaire needs to know how to read, and do a number of other things in order to do their duties. I can put you into training for these things and then when you're older you can attempt Qi Awakening as an Aspirant."

As Marius had continued Cerina had gotten more and more wide eyed, heart soaring, thudding in her ears like a trapped bird. This was actually happening.

This was actually happening!?

"Why?" She blurted at him, utterly confused and elated.

He huffed, raising a hand, ticking off points on his fingers as he spoke. "You were determined and resourceful enough to travel all the way from the Beast-Raising Forest at ten, you clearly have some talents in fighting, Hektoen recommended you," Marius rubbed his chin before raising the fourth finger. "And I have a hunch, which has rarely led me astray," he finished.

She gulped. That was… yeah, she could see where he was coming from.

"So what now?" She queried.

He reached down to the key ring at his belt and then unlocked her door, ushering her out. She shivered in relief as she stepped out of her cell. "Well we get you sorted out for a place to stay, and then lessons begin," he answered. "You said you had parents?"

She nodded.

"We can send letters to them, and once you become an Aspirant proper, the Clan will send them a stipend in compensation," he informed her. "You'll have a small debt to pay off for the tutelage prior to being an Aspirant, but for an immortal it is not much.," he finished.

"Just like that?" She said, doubt gnawing at the back of her mind.

He looked at her, pausing. He considered her for a long moment.

"You know what, let's run a little test," he said confidently. He raised another key in his hands. "This is the key to your manacles. I don't think I need to use it," he said.

Surprised, she looked down at her manacles, then back up at him. Was he…? His steady stare convinced her she was right. He wanted her to break out of her manacles herself. The chain between them was thin, only a few millimeters in thickness, and the material of the welds fixing each link together was even thinner. It… might be possible? One of her more ornery big rams might be able to break it. But... A sudden blot of suspicion crawled up her throat.

"I'm not going to get in trouble for this?" She asked him, glaring at him a little, uneasy.

He gave her that little smile again as he gestured to the hall they stood in. "None, I'll even leave the path to the door open," he said as he stepped to the side, leaving the path to the stairway up clear for her to bolt past him. Though a part of her whispered she still probably wasn't fast enough to actually get past him, it was enough for her to give this a try.

She hated the cold iron things on her wrists, so destroying them sounded kinda fun anyway. Looked down and furrowing her brow in concentration, Cerina carefully wrapped her hands around the middle of the chain of her shackles and gripped them tightly. With a deep breath she began to pull. Muscles strained, and veins bulged all along her arms as she concentrated as much as she could on pulling the life out of this blasted set of chains! It didn't budge, seconds ticking by as her nerves tried to rise.

She stopped, panting, then set her feet and steadied her breath before trying again. Harder and harder she pulled, veins standing out on her head around her eye, and all over her body as she growled and strained white knuckled against the iron. Everything else fell away; no more Marius, no more dungeon, no more light, no more nervousness or anything else but her and the single weakest link of this stupid chain. Energy seemed to buzz through her arms.

Hands wrapped on either side of it, she watched the black-grey of the iron beginning to fail and become silvery as it stretched. Her efforts redoubled at this sign of her success, energy and breath buzzing through her, and the chain groaned, the sound rising quietly in the silent hall. One more deep breath and she tried one more enormous pull. With a sharp ping the weakest link separated, all of the tension releasing as one half of the chain slipped free from the other, leaving the broken link dangling limply from the other half.

Marius chuckled again. "Yeah, you'll do," he said, amusement warming his tone.

She just blinked down at the wreckage of her bindings. She wasn't even a cultivator! Shocked at this, she twitched when Marius snapped his fingers to get her attention. "Qi seems to act a little unusually around you. Not quite being used, but… interesting," He said. She didn't understand what he meant but it worked well enough for now.

With that said, he reached down to a pouch on his hip and pulled out some kind of bark strip, marked with characters on the inside. It still looked fresh. "Here kid. Take this Ironbark of the Sentinel Tree, in return for all the trouble you've faced," he told her.

She looked down at it, intrigued by the depths of the whorls of wood grain and color in the hand sized section of peeled bark. Was it magical in some way? Usually only magical things had this depth to them. "What is it?" She asked as she took it from the Centurion.

"Its a piece of bark from a magical tree that grows in the Tall Wheat Fields. Break it, or have it be broken by an attack, and you'll be surrounded by a sphere of ironwood that flies through the air to carry you two hundred li closer to the Sentinel Tree it came from," he explained.

She was holding an actual treasure from a cultivator. Trembling, she gave Marius as deep a bow as she could. "Thank you Lord Elgabalus. I…," what little formal manners she had failed her as she looked down at the bark in her hands. She straightened, holding onto it tightly.

He nodded. "You are welcome," he gestured for her to follow. "Come, we have a lot to do," he said encouragingly. Hopeful, she followed after him up the stairs and out of the dungeon.



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Cerina Polya 3 - Years 240-245, Turn 13, III - A Soul

Cerina Polya Years 240-245, Turn 13, III - A Soul​


The sun beat down as Cerina walked to the wagon parked in the recruitment building's courtyard, book under her arm. She was in a crowd of other potential Aspirants, but she towered over them, having crested well over two meters tall after her recent seventeenth birthday. She was still thin and gangly, her frame only starting to fill out with lithe muscle. Her hair had gotten lighter too, an even paler white-gold now.

"Class three, load up!" Instructor Jun called, waving Cerina's group towards the Clan wagon. Cerina hurried aboard, leaping up to the back and then reaching down to help her classmates board quicker.

"Polya! Cerina!" Her friend called from inside the wagon when the last person hopped on and she climbed up herself. Zhao Hana was already in the wagon, sat near the front, her class having been called to load up earlier. There were fifty trainees all together, and Cerina was thankful once again for the scale cultivators built at giving them all foot and headroom. After she turned twelve she had become cursed with a nasty habit of smacking her head on doorways in buildings not built by cultivators. She plopped down next to Hana, stretching out her legs as she leaned against the side of the wagon. With another call from the instructor the wagon was closed up and with a loud snort from the spirit ox at the front, they set off.

"So! So so so, Cerina. You excited?" Hana chattered next to her, the girl flipping her thick red-brown hair, green eyes inquisitive. Cerina nodded rapidly. Similar conversations were starting up all along the wagon as people chatted with their own friends.

"I wonder what it'll look like! I've seen art and illustrations and a bunch of other things but I want to see it Hana." Cerina exclaimed.

"I know, I know," Hana said, laughing, "I wonder what kind of books we'll be allowed to read while training?" She asked. They'd both met about a month after Cerina met Marius, after Hana nearly tripped over Cerina in the school's archives, leading to a two way apology fest and Hana running away in embarrassment.

Cerina shrugged, setting her book on her lap. It was a small volume depicting artwork of Legionnaires. "I'm not sure?" Cerina started listing off possibilities, "Training manuals, treatises on war, lists of Legions, works by Great Scribe Tisamenos, poetry on the secrets of the world, geography…"

Hana huffed. "Those are all important, but also expected, I think?" She rubbed her chin. Her face lit up. "Want to guess what else they might have in there?"

Cerina smiled and leaned over. "Bet they have a bunch of lewd romances," she whispered to Hana.

Her friend went bright red and slapped her on the back of the head. "Cerina! Cerina, ugh!"

Cerina leaned away, laughing and fighting off her friend's strikes. Hana did always have a weakness for great tawdry epics. After a few moments of venting her embarrassment, Hana stopped and huffed. "No more of that, you," she said sternly.

Cerina just giggled. A glance around and she saw they had a pocket of privacy around them on the benches. That suited her just fine. "Okay, okay. More seriously my first guess is," she began as she leaned against the bench back, "I think they will have a lot of stuff on historic songs, not all of it is going to be mysterious koans meant to make trainee's brains hurt," she said.

Hana loved poems and songs and calligraphy, while Cerina liked art and illustrations and illuminated manuscripts more. Their second, much better meeting had happened over an artbook Hana was looking for for an assignment, which Cerina had been reading.

"I hope so," Hana said. "What's your second guess though? For real?"

Cerina hummed in thought. Something unusual. "Hmmm… poems on clock making," she answered.

Hana raised an eyebrow. "Clock making poems? Really?"

Cerina nodded. "See, its kind of like arrays. They're so good at arrays and magic, which need so many intricate details all working together correctly. So interest in clocks makes sense, don't you think?"

"Huh. Okay, I'll accept that," Hana said with an impressed look on her face as she rubbed her chin. She raised her finger. "I'll do two as well. I think that they are going to have art books on baking," Cerina raised her eyebrow as Hana kept going, gesturing grandly. "Art books with no words you see, full of baking recipes."

Cerina crossed her arms. "How do you figure that?"

Hana shrugged. "Cultivators need pills and drugs made in furnaces. A furnace isn't very far from an oven. Now the reason it'd be in art is that immortals are weird and this particular one was made by a really old and eccentric cook who didn't want his recipes stolen by the unworthy. Simple as that."

Cerina snorted. "Alright, okay that does make some sense," she said with a chuckle.

Hana smiled. "And for my second guess, I think they have books about you."

Click click. Cerina blinked in surprise, then leaned closer in excitement. "Really? You think so?"

Hana nodded, smile softer. It had been a topic of interest for both of them for years now. "I do. Not sure how much. You're the only person I've ever heard of who looks like you do, but they know so much and have traveled all over the Sea. So they've probably heard something right?"

Cerina nodded, considering that. "Yeah, that makes sense. I hope you're right."

She leaned back in thought, as they both lapsed into comfortable silence, eye on the windows set into the wagon's walls. Castles and dragons and sheep and marching armies formed and whirled in the clouds, only to disappear with the next shift of the wind.

Several minutes later Hana prodded her again. "Hey, did your parents' response arrive yet?" She asked.

Cerina smiled as she stretched upright. "Yeah! Here, let me…," she said as she dug around in her clothing and pack before pulling out a neatly folded and stamped letter. "Read it together?" She said as she scooted next to Hana and started unfolding the letter. Hana leaned against her shoulder.

Most of it was about the general trials and rewards of life in the Beast-Raising Forest, as well as amusing anecdotes. The biggest being that apparently someone had gotten into the firework stock and decided it would be fun to light one while riding an ox. They had ended up carried all around town and then rudely deposited into a mudpit by the irate beast, the lady they were trying to impress amused by their misfortune. At the end however, there was something Cerina had been looking forward to with trepidation and excitement.

… The village is growing quite happily. The renovations to the meeting hall have completed, and your contributions have helped much, our wonderful daughter.

You have worked so hard for us these past few years between school and jobs to send money back home, thank you.

We love you and pray for you and your friend's success in the trials to come.


Cerina hugged the letter to her chest. Hana sighed as leaned her head on Cerina's shoulder. "Are you gonna go back the minute you Awaken?" She asked.

Cerina was tempted to agree immediately. She really wanted to, but… a sense of something, duty maybe, pulled her away. "Cerina?" Hana asked, looking up at her.

"I'm going to try," she finally answered. Her family was important to her. The village too, she realized, a sharp homesickness poking through her heart.

Hana straightened and stretched. "Well, that's that then, you stubborn goat."

"Of course!" Cerina said, smiling at the 'insult'.

Hana shook her head ruefully, and then joined Cerina in looking out of the window. The two of them started chattering excitedly about the scenery to pass the time. The hours-long ride to reach the pass went both too quickly and took far too long for Cerina's liking, excitement becoming foot tapping nerves as they got closer and closer to the Bronzewall. It affected the other trainees too, their excited babbling rising as they arrived at the mountains and groups of them started to crowd the windows.

Within the pass the road became a thin causeway and to either side the land dipped away into ravines full of sharp rock and broken rubble, a forest of rocky spikes growing up from it. Many li away, rock walls and cliffs reaching for the Heavens flowed past them smoothly as their wagon raced along. This terrain forced the road to wind like a snake and obscured the view ahead.

But, after about an hour more along this dangerous causeway, the rocky spikes began to part, and revealed a rocky plateau. Atop that plateau the tower Ypopsifios was a great black spar. It looked like a natural spire of the Peaks that had been commanded to grow into a more pleasing and smooth shape before being clad in bronze armor and bristling weapons. She could see people moving about on the platforms and weapons emplacements that dotted its exterior wall. At its base were smaller buildings, supporting structures for staff and auxiliaries, all enclosed in a small wall.

A little further along another plateau rose to her left, and rising from it was Epitiritis Tower, older and rougher, though not smaller than Ypopsifios. And it was hewn, in comparison to the East Tower, she could see the marks of old tools and ancient hands that had carved it from the grey-white spires and cliffs that clung around its base like children around their mother's skirts. Grey and white encased in spirit bronze, she could almost imagine a haze around it from the sheer Qi invested into its stones, the spell-arrays and formations that textured the bronze cladding.

Beyond the Two Towers another edifice slowly rose into view, bronze mixed with reds and brassy tones. Bronze mixed with blood. It felt like something was watching her, some great weight pressing on her mind from outside the wagon. Her anxiety bled away in the face of a burning curiosity, her eye dancing over every section of the Bronzewall she could glimpse as they wound their way through the forest of spires. The other trainees were whispering now, awed at the sight. She paid no attention to them as they rolled forward inexorably.

When they stopped she was the first out, stepping down to the plaza before the Wall, clinging to the back of the wagon. The Bronzewall soared for several li into the sky, a shining expanse of solid bronze. She didn't understand how it could have been built at all, like some massive god had reached down and simply laid down a line of metal which was then polished until the sun's reflection was nearly blinding. She squinted against the glare. Patterns emerged as she looked at the swirling colors within its surface, tracing the arrays that were pressed into it. It looked almost molten in the sunlight, folded over and over on top of itself again and again millions of times. An accretion of power built up over thousands of years, and the colors of the sun reflected off the wall filled her mind.

"Cerina!" Hana whispered desperately, tugging on her elbow and pulling Cerina out of the trance she had fallen into. Blinking, Cerina tore her focus away from the glory and hurriedly joined the rush of trainees exiting the wagon. Looking around almost hurt as she fought through a headache from the reflected brightness, and spotted class three lining up. She thanked her fortune that she wasn't the last one of the class to line up, she didn't want the stink eye from her teachers on the first day.

She stood at her best parade rest, which was surprisingly good for someone with no training in proper parade rest, staring down at the plaza stones to avoid the Wall's glare. Out of the corner of her eye she glanced at the two people who had come to meet them, both women of the Clan. The one on the left was an absurd looking figure near Cerina's height, with a massive and complicated arrangement of lenses and eyepieces set over her face like a helmet, clad in the formal toga of the Clan. The one on the right was of a more normal height and clad in legion lamellar, helmet on her head. Ash seemed to drip from her constantly, particularly from the sword that rested on her hip and the black plume on her helmet. There was a basket at their feet.

The one on the left spoke. "Well, far too slow. Far, far too slow," she cackled. "This crop of sprouts definitely needs discipline, Instructor Agatha," she said to her companion mockingly.

Instructor Agatha snorted. "They always do Instructor Vasso, and it gets worse every year," she said, voice resonant and crisp, as she shook her head ruefully. The crowd of teenagers tensed, some beginning to whisper.

"Silence," Agatha said. The whispers died, choking in terror at her tone. Cerina felt a little of that, but the weight of the Bronzewall and the weight of these two women who must be Experts fascinated her. There was no space in her brain for entirely reasonable fear.

Vasso laughed, lenses glinting. "Well at least they can listen!" She shook her head and then stepped forward. "Pay attention you babies!" She reached into her toga and pulled out an amulet; a long heavy chain with a sun-like disk hanging from it. "These are Wall-Crossing Tokens. Each one of you will receive one! Do not lose it! If you do, the Wall will kill you!"

The crowd of children in front of her paled even further. Cerina heard someone behind her trying not to hyperventilate.

"Now! Agatha and I will distribute your Tokens," Vasso said, turning to Agatha.

The women both bent to the large basket and then in a flurry of motion fifty tokens were picked up and thrown from it, and before Cerina could react one landed around her neck. It flashed dimly. Yelps of surprise exploded from the crowd as people tried and failed to instinctively dodge the flying jewelry. A wave of exclamations and distracted muttering followed.

Cerina was not distracted like others, still watching Agatha intently. The other woman clapped and a sound like a house sized gong rang out over the trainees, silencing them and half deafening them. Menace bled off the woman as she set her hands on her hips. "You will follow us through the Bronzewall, you will do as we say, and anyone who disobeys today will be flogged five times. Am I clear?"

Cerina was the first one to respond. "Yes ma'am!" With the other trainees following a half beat behind her. Vasso looked at the girl sharply, the weight of her attention and approval wrapping around Cerina's head like a vise. A sharp toothed smile spread Vasso's lips briefly, before it and the pressure disappeared as she looked away.

Agatha snorted. "Pitiful. Do it from the chest! Again!"

"YES MA'AM!" The teens screamed in mixed terror, awe and confusion.

Both of the instructors laughed.

"Well then!" Agatha shouted. "Welcome, you hopeless whelps, to the first day of the most awful years of your life!"

***​

Three months later and Agatha's words still rang through Cerina's mind as she hefted a small rock in one hand. A basket of more rocks was in her other arm. She was standing behind a folding screen, on the other side of which were the other trainees, seated in meditative postures, many tense in anticipation. Standing next to her was another girl named Zoe Sarkiadi, stocky and with her black hair bound up with a red ribbon.

On the other side of the screen, Vasso clapped. "Alright you weak hearted babies! Those seated will close their eyes and meditate. You will not stop until we say so, am I understood?"

"Yes ma'am!" They all shouted.

"Begin!" Vasso ordered.

Agatha stepped up behind Cerina and Sarkiadi, leaning in to whisper to the two girls. "Your orders are simple. Throw rocks at them without hitting them. I want them distracted and scared out of their wits. Got me?" She growled.

"Yes ma'am!" They squeaked, and hurried out from behind the screen to the other trainees. Cerina paused for just a moment to examine them; there were forty three including her and Sarkiadi. Some hadn't been able to handle the pressure already. Weighing the rock in her hand, she had a sinking suspicion that more would be leaving before the end of this.

Cerina threw her rock, aim impeccable as she flung it past one of the trainee's ears. The boy twitched and yelped, almost tipping over in surprise, staying in place through force of will. The other trainees also jerked, many cutting off aborted attempts to look.

Sarkiadi threw her rock at a muscle-bound boy, Hao Papati, and he flinched as it soared over his shoulder. The bullish boy had been tense like a wire for the past week as the pressure mounted, argumentative and surly with everyone. He snapped and exploded to his feet, face purpling with rage and eyes blazing.

"What the fuck!?" He shouted at Sarkiadi. She flinched, holding up her basket defensively. Cerina could see the other trainees twitching again.

"Bye," Vasso said from behind the angry boy. A flick of her hand flung him away in a blast of wind. Cerina watched him tumble and then land on the dirt of the training yard, hard enough to bruise but not break bones.

"Trainee Papati will be sent home," Vasso said with a droll tone. A chill passed over the trainees as they realized their places as Aspirants were at stake here. Sarkiadi and Cerina shared a panicked look.

Their next tosses were shaky and only landed roughly near their targets. Quickly, the two girls adjusted, rocks flying rapidly from their baskets. With each whistling projectile and loud clatter, the line of trainees flinched. Hana was still holding out, thankfully. Cerina knew who Sarkiadi's friends were, so she avoided throwing rocks at them. Sarkiadi picked up quickly on what she was doing, and in a moment of shared looks and subtle head tilts, they made a quiet agreement not to throw at each other's friends.

No one was getting up yet. The fear of being sent home was holding them all down, as each rock and each clank of the instructors' footfalls ratcheted the tension higher. Vasso slid up next to Cerina, nearly causing her to jump out of her skin. "Pick up the rocks you toss," she ordered very quietly before retreating to the edge of the training yard. Surrounding the yard were a ring of gongs, and after inspecting them Vasso raised a mallet and struck one.

A hideous clatter and roar filled the training yard, the sound of tortured metal plunging inside their ears and disturbing the rhythms of their breathing. It climbed in pitch till it was almost painful, and then began to fade. Before it could mercifully end, Vasso struck another gong, this one creating a different horrific screech. As the gongs continued to ring Cerina felt a horrible and unnatural fear climbing in her guts. She swallowed down her nausea and kept going.

That became the new pattern for the next twenty minutes. Some of the trainees were trembling and sweating now, Hana among them as Cerina's rocks sailed past her head and body. Guilt that she couldn't help her friend gurgled sickly in Cerina's guts. Vasso's cold bronze hand landed on her shoulder. "More Trainee," she ordered, clearly audible somehow through the cacophony. She leaned down and looked Cerina in the eye. "Faster."

Then she was gone, leaving Cerina trembling. A quick glance around showed her that Sarkiadi was not any better off, looking pale as she gripped a rock tight. The trainees nearby were shivering, some panting from the effort of staying still. Cerina knuckled down and tried her best. The fear of failure ate at her, driving the tempo of her throws faster and faster to match the tempo of the gongs.

At least they were more reliable than bows… she thought sardonically. She wouldn't be able to do this if she was using a bow, she hated the things. With a rock, she found it much easier to get the precision she thought she needed to satisfy their devilish instructors. She could feel their eyes boring into her back with every throw she made.

But something had to give eventually. One of Sarkiadi's throws passed too close to a thin boy with a shock of blonde hair, his green eyes snapping open as he flinched away from the rock that clipped his ear, nearly falling over. Hyperventilating, eyes wild, he got up and ran away back to the barracks at the far end of the training field. Sarkiadi froze. Cerina's heart stuttered in shared fear. Agatha appeared next to Sarkiadi and told her something that made the other girl's face screw up in disgust.

"Trainee Su will be sent home," Agatha said as she walked away. Her words hung over the trainees for a moment that seemed to stretch longer and longer, until like a dam breaking another trainee flinched and fled the field.

After that over the next hour more names were called out. Some of them fell and then ran, some crawled away in shame, others burst out angrily like that first boy only to be tossed aside by the magical winds. By the end of it, twelve people had failed and were being sent home. Blessedly, when the hour ended, the gongs fell silent and Cerina and Sarkiadi were told to stop, the test now finished.

The remaining twenty eight trainees were sweat soaked and twitchy as they filed back into the barracks, many snapping at friends, and voices tense as they tried to settle back down. Cerina sat herself near a window looking out over the Tall Wheat Fields that surrounded their little training compound's walls. The fields nearby were like a sea of gold, thick sheaves of wheat crowning stalks as tall as her.

Further in there were rumored to be stalks three times the height of a man, almost small trees in their own right, and that the plants might be somewhat aware and liable to eat the unwarry. She let herself wind down by imagining what that 'forest' of wheat might look like.

Hana slowly approached, sliding in and sitting down next to Cerina. The other girl was quiet for a moment, letting Cerina come back from her imagination. Cerina turned to look at her friend. "Thanks Cerina," Hana said, shivering a bit from lingering tension.

Cerina blinked at her. Hana smirked. "I peeked, so I knew you were the one throwing stones at me. It helped."

Cerina let out a huge sigh, head flopping onto her friend's shoulder. "I needed that."

Hana's hand came up and patted the back of her head. After a moment of recovery cuddling, Cerina sat back up. The both of them settled to look out the window, quietly chatting about the weather and the rumors of sentient plants.

A step and cleared throat caught their attention. Sarkiadi had approached the pair of them, hands hidden behind her as she bit her lip. Her blue eyes flicked between them before she bowed towards Cerina.

"Thank you Polya, for not terrorizing my friends," she said.

Cerina nodded. "You are welcome, Sarkiadi. Thank you as well," she said earnestly. Then she frowned. The other girl was shaky, eyes dim as she rose and then looked away from the pair of them. She looked about to go.

"Can we join you?" Hana asked, picking up on Cerina's idea before she had it.

Cerina leaped in to support her. "That sounds fun," she said, trying for an encouraging smile.

Sarkiadi twitched, then looked back at them, eyes interested and bright again. She considered it, and then nodded weakly. "Yeah… yeah that'd be nice," she said."

Cerina's smile bloomed, frown reversing. Hana got up and pulled her along as she followed Sarkiadi.

Cerina took a moment to compare them. The other girl was a little shorter than Hana, but blocky compared to Hana's graceful dancer's build. Hana's hair was braided, while Sarkiadi bound hers up in a single bun at her neck with that ribbon. The silence was comfortable, though new and fragile as they made their way across the barracks. Emboldened by her prior success Cerina stepped up to Sarkiadi's side and her asked a question. "If I may ask Sarkiadi. What did the Instructor order you to do?"

The other girl flinched, nose wrinkling. Her mouth opened, then she blushed in embarrassment. "... latrine duty. For a week," she sighed.

Hana winced behind them. Cerina just looked at Sarkiadi intently. "Do you want help?" She asked seriously.

Sarkiadi stopped, blinking at her in surprise, before shaking her head rapidly. "No, no I was the one who disobeyed orders so I couldn't…"

There was a long pause, and then Sarkiadi caved under the earnest gaze of the girl in front of her. "... please?" Cerina smiled in triumph. Hana shook her head fondly, while Sarkiadi was pulled into their chatter. The rest of their rest period was spent in happy relaxation between the three girls and Sarkiadi's other friends.

Unfortunately, Agatha didn't let Cerina help when it came time for latrine duty, though as a silver lining she was certainly amused by the attempt and seemed to be in a good mood for the following week, to everyone's quiet relief.

***​

Out the window, the stars heralded the changing season, and her approaching twenty first birthday. Cerina dozed in the Archives of the Golden Devils and her dream was a shadowed thing, pierced in points by a feeling of being watched. Far above a burning eye glowed, acting as a shield against something cruel and pitiless that watched from on high.

As her cheek slipped off her hand she jerked up with a sniffle and shook her head, the dream fading away before she could grasp more than a sense of familiarity. She'd had that dream before, probably.

Click click.

She stretched, yawning and rubbing her cheek while she checked to make sure she hadn't drooled on the books in front of her. Designs for clocks and poems penned with amusing meters and puns about time sat at one corner of the desk as well. Nothing about her and her unique constitution unfortunately, neither her nor any of her friends could find anything in the archives accessible to Trainees. Just a disappointing tome named A Treatise on Meditations for the Blind Novice.

When she found no signs of water damage she leaned back, spine popping and looked out towards the night sky. It'd be midnight soon. I should go get some actual sleep… she thought, and sighed. Tomorrow she'd face the Infusion Trial and she'd thought to cram in a bit more studying beforehand but, well…

It hadn't helped frankly. She'd been training for three years, preparing for seven before that. A decade of her life tossed into the wind and hoping it would be enough. Looking at her hands, calloused from both pen and sword and chisel, she hoped it was enough. She seemed ready. Hana and Zoe seemed ready too.

That dream she'd woken from had set her mind off kilter, fretting again. Shadows and an eye, and cruelty beyond its protection. She couldn't help finding the starlight cruel with the memory circling in her skull. Especially with what she had begun to learn of the Devils in preparation for awakening and infusion with the Blood. They really were cursed by Heaven in very real ways.

But worries about that were simply a disguise for her deeper worries, doubt circling in her brain. It'd been ten years since she'd seen home, ten years of preparations, ten years of bloodyminded effort. And it didn't feel like enough, here in a little corner squished between two shelves on a little chair behind a little desk. She felt a bit… small, for once.

Her hands on the desk turned, clenching and unclenching. She sighed, watching the starlight play over her flesh. From another perspective though… could it actually stop her? Was she going to let it actually stop her? She had grown much, several inches over seven feet tall and her frame packed with muscle. She could read Turtle World characters perfectly now and was learning the strange script of the Devils, she had grasped the basics of formation drilling and meditation, and educated herself on a host of things that caught her interest. She had been tested over and over again and not found wanting.

Not wanting at all.

She sighed, annoyed at herself.

She looked up at the sky and in that near endless expanse of black she could almost see the burning shape of the Eye in her dreams. That thing that guarded her and watched over her since her first memories of her dreams. This path was the one that would make her able to see it, waking or sleeping.

That made it easy. Doubt couldn't stop her from trying.

Rising, she picked up the book and carried it to its proper place then left the library. Here in the Outer Walls, the corridors of the Dawn Fortress were a winding maze she had spent a great deal of time memorizing. She stuck to the shadows on the trip to her quarters, avoiding the other late night inhabitants. Some were servants, some were other trainees like her, some true cultivators who ignored her entirely.

She reached her barracks door unimpeded and slipped inside to find the six other remaining trainees of her cohort all asleep and tucked into their cots. They had been winnowed greatly in the first year, Agatha and Vasso sending away those they judged not worth their time before spending the remaining two years diving into their tutelage. Quietly she prepared for bed and slipped into her own cot. Whatever she faced tomorrow, she'd take it as it came.

Her sleep was easy.

No more dreams haunted her that night.

The harsh sun of the dawn peeking over the faraway mountains stabbed into her eye as it had everyday, and she woke with a familiar and long held annoyance. She was going to be very glad not to be in this barrack for much longer, one way or the other. The others were stirring too, Hana, Zoe, Yating, Peng (no relation to the vassal kingdom), Zervotis, and De. She was the first to start morning stretches, the others quickly joining in, quiet chatter flowing around the barracks as they prepared.

When they broke up she went to Hana and Zoe. "Are you ready?" She asked them. Like her the other two girls had grown, Hana getting a little taller and taking to a passion for dance she hadn't been able to explore before. Sometimes she entertained them by dancing and reciting poetry during their rare moments of free time.

Sarkiadi had gotten even more muscled from her work in forges. She wasn't one that liked a wide variety of books like her two friends, but she did like books and scrollwork on blacksmithing and the lives of famous smith saints. Cerina carried a knife Sarkiadi had made for her nineteenth birthday, and Hana had a hair pin made for hers.

Zoe snorted. "I don't want to go back," she said.

Hana paused while folding an extra trainee uniform, thoughtful. Then she nodded. "It's this or nothing, really."

Cerina chuckled. "Alright," she said.

When their preparations were complete, the trainees gathered together and waited for their instructors to appear. It did not take long, the light still thin as the sun struggled to rise over the mountains when they arrived. Agatha and Vasso hadn't changed at all, it seemed, over the past three years, both imperishable and intimidating women as they entered the barracks. With quickly belted orders the cohort formed up and were sent quickly marching down the halls with their instructors at their head.

The passersby and other inhabitants of the Fortress cleared the way for them. Trainees watched with wide eyes, and servants scurried from the path of the two women leading them. The eyes of cultivators passed over them briefly, some haughty, some curious, but they did not interfere as the trainees were led through the halls of the Fortress. Deeper and deeper they traveled, into paths that quickly grew less and less populated, until they reached a flight of ancient stairs and descended to tunnels thick with incense and bright stones inset into the walls.

Cerina's eye watered and she suppressed a sneeze. That tiny huff echoed quietly, the only other sounds the echoes of their footfalls and their quiet breaths. The incense was spicy and caused her nose and tongue to tingle, and she winced as the light seemed to grow even brighter. Was it drugged?

She didn't know what they were being dosed with, but her concern rose as first Zervotis and then others staggered, eyes wide and dilated. The light brightened more and more until it became piercing and she had to squeeze her eye shut and stumble forward by feel. A hand landed on her arm to guide her forward as the others groaned and hissed as their senses were also opened. It was disorienting, and a pressure began to build in her head, but she tried to keep her wits about her and keep track of where they were going as best she could.

She was uncertain for how long they had been walking when they finally arrived at their destination; a pair of iron doors festooned with embedded Spirit Stones. Their guides ordered them to stop and approached the doors, activating mechanisms she couldn't see. The doors groaned open, revealing a great chamber.

A huge circular space that was dozens of meters tall and a hundred meters in diameter, there was a massive oculus in the peak of the dome over their heads. Through it a beam of sunlight fell upon their faces, forcing them to shield their eyes and turn their gazes down to the rest of the room. In the center was a pool of crystal blue water surrounded by a lip of white stone. Around the pool were arranged seven seats, each seat placed neatly into the center of a complicated array, Spirit Stones placed at the vertices of the arrays.

Leading them to the edge of the pool, their guides turned and had them spread out. Blinking her eye open cautiously, Cerina looked around. If she squinted the intensity was bearable, so she tried to focus on her instructors and block everything else out. They turned to face the trainees, standing at the edge of the pool.

"We have been training you for the past three years; your bodies and minds, your wills and grasps of Qi. You may have sensed some flickers of the energy that surrounds you, but that has been your limit," Agatha lectured. The woman seemed cut of sharper edges, each flake of the ash dripping from her standing out to Cerina as she listened.

"We have taught you to breathe properly, and the theory behind pulling Qi from Spirit Stones. Today you will apply that theory. At each seat is a bowl of purified Bronze and a Spirit Stone. You will drink the Bronze and cultivate from the Spirit Stone," she ordered.

The seven of them separated, picking seats and spreading around the circle. Cerina chose which put her back to the entryway, so she did not have to look at the beam of sunlight coming through the oculus. Her seat was a cushion with a single Spirit Stone placed upon the red cloth. In front of the cushion sat a stone bowl filled with what looked like molten bronze. Taking the Spirit Stone, she found it warm, almost hot and buzzing with energy. Surprised, her fingers tightened around it. When she had held Spirit Stones before they were just slightly warm to the touch. The drug maybe?

She shook her head and pushed it out of her mind as she sat in a lotus position on the cushion, waiting for their instructors to continue.

Once they were all seated Agatha nodded at Vasso, who spread her hands and said. "This test is simple. Drink the Bronze, meditate, and harness the Qi from the stones to fill your dantians to their limits. If you succeed you will finally climb to the first Heavenstage. If you don't, you will remain mortal forever and will never be able to try again."

With that ominous proclamation, the trainees steeled themselves and reached out for the stone bowls with their free hands. Cerina peered into the Bronze, finding her reflection surprisingly clear in the strange fluid. She drank, and found it tasted slightly of coins and blood and a spice that spiked through her brain and nearly tipped her over. Coughing, Cerina closed her eye and focused on what she had been taught, clearing her mind of everything but her breath and the stone in her hands. The drug made this almost painfully easy, the stone a burning coal in her hands. The taste of the Bronze lingered heavily. Carefully, she reached out to the stone and settled into the rhythm.

In.

Out.

On her next inhale the stone surged in brightness in her mind's eye, other flames joining it around her as she felt the array humming beneath her. Slowly and carefully she imagined threads of energy being pulled out of the stone and into her breath, trying to tease Qi out of the stone. The pressure she had been feeling built and built with each cycle, as did the taste strangely, and she wasn't sure what to make of it but pushed on regardless.

Two hundred and four cycles after beginning something stretched within her, pulling apart until with a snap she suddenly became aware of a roiling sea of heat in her navel. Qi, much more than she expected, all being added to a cauldron within her. That cauldron of energy bubbled, rising and falling with each breath. Qi in hand she just had to grasp and shape it, compress it down based on what they had taught her.

Four hundred cycles. Eight hundred. Sixteen hundred. By two thousand cycles the pressure had built to a fine point behind her eye and each breath had her suppressing a grimace. She held that point there as best she could as she compressed more and more Qi into what she hoped was her dantian, until finally a critical tipping point seemed to be reached.

The point behind her eye exploded in agony and the energy within her rapidly compressed into a hot ball in her guts. Pain raced along her body from her crown to her feet, through channels she could just feel. The heat and pain did not stop, rising faster and faster until it was entirely unbearable.

Cerina screamed in pain as her skin flushed red. It split, bronze tainted blood pooling on the array as the last of its energy was pulled into her, her back hunching as she writhed. Her scream was choked off as more bronze bubbled up from within her throat and spilled out of her mouth.

Vasso watched in disturbed fascination as her trainee changed drastically, waving her hand to activate the sound suppression arrays. Mortal flesh faded away, replaced by shiny new bronze, wounds opening and then sealing rapidly as more bronze continually flowed forth. It seemed like the Blood was reacting to fragments of itself that had already been present in her body. But it was intense enough she could use some help and Vasso signaled Agatha. The other woman was moving before she finished the signal, and pulled the water from the pool in a great stream and doused the girl in it. They watched her ascension in silence, as the torrent slowed and the bronze seemed to cool and solidify into a single form under the healing water.

When the flow of bronze and water stopped, Cerina was left crouched in the middle of her depleted array, wrapped in a faint sheen of steam and the bronze stained remains of her trainee's robe. Her body glinted in the light now, a thick skin of bronze like other Clan members now cladding her in a statue-like form. Heavily, Cerina clanked as she pushed herself upright and coughed.

Red mortal blood had dripped from her eye as she ascended, staining her face. Her eye opened. What was once mortal flesh was now a sphere of metal, her iris the deep blue of the clan and her pupil a black pit. Stuck close to her body from sweat and drying stains, her hair was the only thing that hadn't changed, still a pale white-gold.

Click click. She blinked heavy lids and twitched at the newly emphasized sound. Looking down at herself Cerina saw her changes and felt the hot ember in her gut and realized very abruptly that she had succeeded. She exhaled, tension expelled in a half-gasping laugh. She looked around the room, not quite realizing she was spinning her head in a full circle on the new seam and joint that had formed in her neck. Everything was a little sharper now, edges between colors and shapes she hadn't quite grasped before now obvious, like everything had a little bit of that depth she'd normally only seen in magical items or creatures.

She stopped her awed blinking when Agatha walked up to her. The older woman snorted haughtily as she held out a new trainee's robe. "Dramatic, now go change," she said, indicating a folding screen that had been set up to one side. Cerina leapt to obey, clanking clumsily around, unused to the new weight of her body and its strength.

She probably spent far too long marveling at all the little details that had changed, because when she came out her two instructors were looking at her with intense bemusement. Carefully she walked with as much grace as she could muster to stand beside them. Vasso gave her a nod. "Let us wait for the others now, Junior," the older woman said, sending a thrill through Cerina.

She'd done it!

Fractically suppressing the urge to squeal, she watched as one by one, the other trainees drained their own arrays, and approached the first Heavenstage. She watched with fascination as they faced their own changes, though none were quite as significant as hers. Some manifested bronze flesh, some only coloration, while others grew visibly more muscled and sturdy. Of her two friends, Hana's eyes became more hazel, cut with inclusions of blue Cerina saw as she blinked. Zoe's black hair lightened significantly, becoming near grey and her skin darkened with bronze tinting threading through her muscles. Each transformation was subtly different, a complicated gradient of transformations. But, when the last spirit stone was consumed and the last trainee was finished, all of them had made it through the trial intact.

"Impressive, Aspirants!" Vasso said. She raised her hands and gestured to them. "Come on then you Juniors, let's go celebrate your success!"

With a tired, wondering cry, the Aspirants got up and awkwardly clanked after their older Seniors as they were led back up out of the tunnels and into the light of day. As they returned to halls busy with other people, they were given a new deference and attention, many of the trainees they passed whispering as they were recognized.

Their barracks was full of drinking and singing as they celebrated, for once not being tormented by some new task or training. Their celebrations carried them deep into the night, until eventually Cerina could party no more, and fell asleep amidst the cacophony. She dreamed then, a clear and precise dream, tracing out the lines of the great array in the sky with such skill that her dreaming self knew she'd be able to draw it out perfectly when she awoke.


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Cerina Polya 4 - Year 245, Turn 13, IV - A Corpse


Cerina Polya Year 245, Turn 13, IV - A Corpse​


Cerina finished her last stroke of the image, hand coming away covered with rock dust. On the cliff side before her was another rendition of the Golden Eye Array's manifestation in her mind's eye. Not its inner workings or anything sensitive, just a great eye carved into the rock, dark sandstone cut away to reveal lighter stone beneath to create a masterpiece of shading and hue. After a moment's examination she huffed and nodded, pleased.

Clean lines, and yet more detail in the hues. Satisfied, she swung a bronze fist and shattered the image into powder. No use in leaving that kind of thing lying around, even bereft of technical details like it was. She'd have to show her parents her latest rendition when she went back again. They'd loved the first time she'd been able to really show them what she'd always talked about as a little girl. Turning away from the wreckage she hummed a little shepherd's ditty about three blind sheep and a dog as she packed up her camp. Heavy iron staff in hand and pack on her back, she carried on down the game path through these scrubby hills.

She was hunting a very specific beast for her mission today, and had been tracking it for three days across these hills north of Seven Heavens Trade City. She hummed, kicking up dust and letting the sun warm her pleasantly. Tracking like this brought her back to the days when she was tracking down sheep over hills a lot smaller than these fellows around her, and frankly she'd gravitated towards these kinds of missions for the familiarity. Of course, she'd only been allowed out of the Tall Wheat Fields for missions a few months ago, aside from visits to her parents, so she had not had a lot of time to really get into it.

Scanning the sandy hillside, her eyes looked for familiar shapes and spoor. A crushed brush could have been what she was looking for, or perhaps a rock upturned to get at the den beneath, but both were discarded from consideration. The path wound along the hillside, then descended, and the plants encroaching on the game path changed from bramble and stickers to spreads of fleshy cactus. As she had hoped, large swathes of the cactus patch had been chopped and bitten cleanly down to the roots.

Wary, she scanned the thicket and quickly saw a lead; large scrape marks in the sand and dirt heading south east before they stopped in a hump of disturbed earth. "Hmm." Carefully she turned, checking for any other humps or signs of tunneling. The Ten-Year Bull-Headed Sandfish was only accidentally and incidentally carnivorous, but it did have extremely poor vision and thus treated everything else as a threat…

She paused that thought to listen carefully for any rumbling, and when she heard none sighed quietly in relief. They liked to avoid things, most of the time, but if you surprised one they had a tendency to leap out of the sand like a ballista bolt and crush anything unlucky enough to be in their path. For someone like her in the 1st Heavenstage a run in with one of them would be extremely painful.
She picked her way down the hillside, stepping into the cactus patch and heading through it towards the hump of disturbed earth. It was huge, at least eight feet in diameter, which was about the right size. Kicking a foot through it, it was soft and powdery, relatively fresh. Further seeking and searching turned up a vague path to follow and she trekked out into the desert along it.

It only took her about an hour's more effort to find much more recent signs.

Further down into the valleys she found another patch of devastated cactus, their thick green and purple bodies crunched and broken spines scattered about wildly. The water and juices were still dripping. She could see marks from the creature's four fingered forelimbs, having scraped at the dirt as it hauled itself around. This time she made sure she was standing on solid rock so it couldn't tunnel up under her easily. Quietly, she set her staff aside and grasped one of the large rocks resting on this ridge, hefting the torso sized stone with ease. And then she waited and watched. After a long moment of silence, a patch of sand to her left sank slightly, movement under the earth.

With a yell of effort she threw the stone in front of the patch. It sailed through the air magnificently and then landed with a bone shaking thud. There was a great blast of air like a snort like a geyser, and then a deep bellowing grumble that rose to a screech as a greenish scaled form leapt out of the sand. It smashed into the rock, cracking it, and then sprawled over the wreckage.

The Ten-Year Bull-Headed Sandfish was a twelve foot long fusion of a dolphin, lizard, and a bull. Its head was bull-like, with two thick horns and a spade shaped snout covered in scales, while its jowls were fuzzy with greyish fur and trailing moss. It had a large boney dome in between its horns. Its front limbs and shoulder were like a lizard, each of its four toes webbed, with great digging claws on the ends. Past the front however, its body became a dolphin-like taper with a fluked tail. The entire thing was covered in a thick armor of scales, some of those on its face cracking away as it started to lumber upright, eyes dazed. It was a pretty one too, with a soft blue iridescence tipping some of the scales along its shoulders and then down its back.

Cerina hefted her staff and leapt down from the ridge, speeding her fall and then dancing across the sand with blunt applications of her Qi to prevent her heavy body from sinking in. Before the thing could clear its head she landed in front of it and with a yell smacked it hard across the snout with her staff. It lurched back, snorting and reeling. Taking advantage of it's stunned state she continued smacking it as it tried to retreat to its tunnel, driving it away as best she could.

Unfortunately, its head was rock hard, and it quickly overcame her assault and got its feet under it. With a roar like grinding rock it charged at her and Cerina leaped, soaring between its lowered horns. One hand smacked into its armored skull, forcing it down and throwing her upwards. Her eye and head stayed fixed on the beast as the rest of her body spun rapidly in a circle, building up speed.

Her arc ended above its back, and her foot slammed into its hunched spine, propelled by Qi and enhanced muscle. There was a sharp crack as something inside it broke and its huge body was smashed into the dirt. It rolled, front half writhing from side to side, its rage filled thrashing churning up the sand around it into a huge cloud. She was lucky her eye didn't get as irritated by dust anymore since transforming into metal. Raising her iron staff above her head she steadied her footing as best as she could and struck its back over and over, shattering scales and bone again and again.

It finally bucked her off as it tipped completely over, sending her rolling into the desert sand. Flashing horns forced her to dodge back again and parry with her staff, but after a moment's struggle and waving of her arms to clear the dust she regained her stance and examined the beast. It was broken and bloodied, eyeing her with simmering animal rage, plant shearing teeth gnawing at the sand as it tried to lift its body. But it couldn't move, bones broken, one of its horns cracked.

Waiting a moment to be sure it was done, she straightened and set aside her staff to pull out her knife. It was simple enough to maneuver around the beast and stab it through a soft spot into the brain, putting a clean end to it. Leaning against its bulk she huffed, blowing white-gold hair out of her face. "Okaaaaay, okay you big bastard. Time to get you into town," she muttered to the corpse. After a short prayer to hope this hunt would make the desert flourish, she started pulling ropes out of her pack and tying them around the beast's large gut.

After securing it, she stowed her staff across the top of her pack, looped the rope around it and crawled under the beast. Hefting its front up on her shoulders, she huffed and puffed and started dragging the carcass out of the desert and towards the town with the crafter who had contracted the Legions to help him out. Hopefully it wouldn't smell too bad and the sun would still be up by the time she got back.

***​

Tao Zan was doing his best to hide from the evening sun under the gate post tower's roof, fanning himself quickly to try and ward off the heat, thankful for the simple cooling array set into the roof above him. Fourth-Green-Hill Town was not large enough to be put on most maps, and was a fair distance from the trading hub of Seven Heavens Trade City, but they were fortunate to be home to the cultivator Lefteris Five-Handed. That one had helped make things livable after they decided to seclude themselves in the region.

His fanning slowed as he spotted a slow moving blot on the horizon, coming down the road to the gate. With a thoughtful grunt, Tao Zan grabbed the monocular hanging on a stand to one side and looked through it. The image caused him to tense in surprise, leaning against the railing in front of his seat. After a moment of examination he chuckled and sat back.

"Cui Qing! Cui Qing! That weird one eyed girl came back, and she's got a huge catch too!" Tao Zan shouted towards the trapdoor and ladder down to the lower level of the guard tower. Cui Qing stuck his head out of the trap door with a look of a man rising from the depths of paperwork hell.

"Let me see this," the other man grumbled as he shuffled up the ladder and slumped down into the chair next to Tao Zan's. They both squinted at the now much more defined shape of the huge beast Cerina was carrying.

"Bloody huge thing," Cui Qing said as he watched her approach.

Tao Zan just shook his head. "What else could we expect from one of the 'Ladies of the Sun'," he waved a hand sardonically.

Cui Qing snorted, pulling his hat down a bit against the sun. "We'll have to see if we can catch her telling the tale at Wong's bar tonight."

Tao Zan laughed in agreement.

A couple of minutes later Cerina finally dragged herself and the beastie into speaking distance with the gate, setting it down with a heavy thud.

"Ho up there! Aspirant Cerina Polya reporting back," she called up at them.

Tao Zan looked down over the railing and shouted back. "Ho there Aspirant! Are you looking for Five-Handed?" He asked.

She nodded. "Yeah!" She waved her hand at the corpse of the Ten-Year Bull-Headed Sandfish. "I need to deliver this to them!"

Tao Zan nodded. As expected then. He waved towards the north of town and Five-Handed's workshop. "They're out at the workshop. Apparently some messages also came through, I'm not sure what they were about though."

Cerina smiled up at them. "Thanks guys!" She said as she picked up her kill and started dragging it north.

"Will you share the story of how you killed that thing?" Cui Qing shouted from his seat.

"Yeah! If I can," Cerina shouted back as she jogged into the distance, the huge body she carried bobbing amusingly as she dashed away.

Tao Zan shook his head. Cultivators! He could never be mad at them, when their antics were so entertaining.

For Cerina, the trek out to Lefteris Five-Handed's workshop was a short one, though she'd have made it in minutes instead of half an hour if she didn't have to lug this body around everywhere. But, griping aside, she reached it without incident; a stout oval dome set on a rocky prominence, temple columns adorning the front around the huge front door. Smoke stacks sprouted from the roof around a tower designed to pull in air for fueling the forges and providing cooling when necessary. The din of struck iron and hissing metal rang out from the workshop.

Cerina walked right up to the thick iron front door and banged on it loudly. They wouldn't hear her over the din of their work. "Five-Handed! It's Cerina with your delivery," she roared. A minute or so of pounding later and shouting later and there was a clunk from the door.

A voice shouted through it. "Come on in!" They said, the noise not lessening at all. Shoving the door open Cerina stepped inside, thankful it was large enough to admit her and her kill. The room was smoke filled and hot enough to make her sweat straight through the bronze, tinted red by the three active forges set against the walls. Tools hung on shelves all around the room, and a huge anvil of Spirit Iron stood center stage in the middle of the room. Near the door was a large stairway that curled away to a basement storage room.

The figure working bent over the anvil as they struck a molten bright sword into shape was a curious one; cloaked in thick grey fire retardant fabric, with an equally thick leather apron sewn to the front, the most notable features of them were their five muscled arms emerging from the cloak which each wielded a tool of the forge, and their face. Angular and long haired, Lefteris' face was deeply bronze skinned and ambiguous in gender, seeming to hold a flame that burned from within.

It glimmered in their eyes as they turned to look at Cerina, arms still hammering away. "Polya girl! Timely, set it over there," they said, one hand holding a pair of tongs pointing to an open space near the stairs.

Relieved, she set it down, watching Five-Handed continue to work. They were constantly moving, each arm on their lopsided body always in motion, with a subtle rotation and rhythm seeming to guide them. She was tempted to tap her foot to it but stilled the urge as she noted the pile of scrolls on a rolling bench discarded to one side of the smith.

"There was a batch of messages I heard?" She prompted the Qi Condensation smith.

Their face twitched in annoyance, motions uninterrupted. They turned slightly to look at her, their golden eyes flickering past to the Ten-Year Bull-Headed Sandfish. She followed their gaze and winced when she saw their frown at the damaged horn. Lefteris sighed.

"Ach! Look at the horns… no, no I can critique your hunting methods later, more urgent things needed, " they complained, then reached over to the scrolls on the bench next to them. "Where was it? Ah! Here! You have a different problem; Urgent mission, some asshole went Blood Path and broke out of a mining camp a little ways from here. I'm busy making war material."

Her chest clenched as she caught the scroll and began to unfurl it. "Blood Path? Is it confirmed?"

Lefteris nodded. "I took a peek at those while I was setting up. The escapee is some dude named Feng Shen, and he broke free earlier this afternoon."

Cerina almost didn't hear the rest of what Lefteris said as her heart tried to climb out of her throat. She glanced down at the scroll and started to read.


URGENT



All Clan members in the vicinity of Five Lotus Quarry - alert

Damage to the camp and multiple murders, signs of Blood Path usage

Escapee and primary suspect is a man in his forties named Feng Shen.

Has killed at least one Clan member in the Qi Condensation Realm.

Current Realm unknown, expected to still be in Qi Condensation.

Heading west at last sighting.



URGENT

With the message came a quick but instantly recognizable sketch of the man who had assaulted her ten years before, as well as a map to the mine and the surrounding area. It was dotted with several small mortal communities, with the largest concentration to the west.

"I know this man… how did he…," she muttered.

There was a hiss of cooling metal as the sword was quenched, and then set aside. Lefteris paused, and sighed. "How doesn't matter right now, Aspirant," they said seriously. She met their tired and unhappy gaze. "Are you going?" They asked.

She nodded. The smith smiled, setting two of their hands on their hips. "Well, that staff I gave you should carry you through then. Hurry and come back," they tapped their chest with their hammer. "This Senior still needs to lecture you on proper hunting techniques!"

She nodded, and turned, sprinting out of the door. "I will!" she shouted over her shoulder. Rushing into the late evening twilight as the sun set, she ran back towards the roads.

In the distant gate house, Tao Zan noted the fantail of sand kicked up by something moving fast away from the direction of the workshop, heading across the horizon before him. After looking at it through the monocular for a moment he sighed and got up from his chair to lean down the trapdoor into the office and armory below. Cui Qing looked up at him from his paperwork crowded desk.

"I don't think she'll be at Wong's tonight Cui Qing. I think I just saw her heading southwest at a gallop," Tao Zan said sadly.

Cui Qing groaned, leaning back and scrubbing a hand down his face. "Blasted hells," he sighed.

***​

Cerina made her way as fast as possible in the general direction of Five Lotus Quarry, referring back to the map regularly. The quarry was several dozen li south west of Fourth-Green-Hill Town, and that town was too large and too well defended to be a tempting target, she thought. That left the many li of empty desert which separated the quarry from the closest western town, small and insignificant enough to likely not have cultivators and thus be easy pickings. Others were probably hunting the man, but that was every reason to go faster. She knew of no other good tracking cultivators in the immediate area. And she knew this man and how he thought, giving her a headstart she had to use.

She had a small number of Spirit Stones in her pack and taking one she started to burn it for Qi, pushing herself to go faster. As she ran she thought, trying to tease out what he might be thinking. He'd run to gather strength, with a very specific goal in mind. Something he wanted to do, though she had nothing to go on for that except 'get stronger by killing' at this juncture.

After another look at the map, tracking instinct quickly redirected her away from the camp itself, instead heading for its western side. Hopefully she could pick up a trail there and be on her way without delay. The run was quiet, the stars coming out to shimmer in the rapidly cooling night air. Her dantian thrummed with power to the beat of her leaping footsteps that sent her soaring from dune top to dune top.

It did not take very long to reach the region of the quarry, a dry stony land of gullies and ravines. Distantly she could see smoke and light rising against the stars from the direction of the camp. Her feet urged her towards the quarry, to seek out survivors and help, but to find Feng Shen had to be the priority according to her training. The Clan could not afford him to grow stronger. And she did not want to allow him to either. A weary weight settled on her mind, a weight that she wanted gone as quickly as possible.

Soon she came upon signs of battle west of the site, dried blood pooling into mud in the dunes. She slammed to a stop, kicking up a plume of sand as she landed hard. Looking over the scene she noted half a dozen distinct sources for the pooling morass. The bodies had already been recovered. Or consumed. From where she was the camp was only a half a li or so away, and the smoke seemed to be from a fire in some building sticking up from the side of the quarry. If she squinted she could see figures moving about fighting the flames.

Cerina watched, a few moments ticking by before she was able to force herself to turn away and start hunting again. They seemed to have it under control, or enough that she could at least hope it was. She turned away and with her eye roving over the path of the blood, headed out into the desert.

She did not run quickly, jogging instead as she tracked signs and faint shapes in the sand. Heading away from the battle site red speckled the dunes for at least a li, Feng Shen trailing faint droplets of blood across the sand until it probably dried. The sands were also disturbed by the tracks of small frightened creatures, quickly fading away with the wind. Animal dens too, hurriedly abandoned and collapsed, were dotted here and there as she circled wider and wider in her search.

Two hours of searching later, she found a cracked and broken plain crisscrossed with ravines. She spotted signs of a recent disturbance, rocks having fallen on top of an animal den near one such ravine. Sliding down into it she spotted the rest of the rockfall at the bottom. Strangely one of the rocks was cut, split in half by something very sharp. Sheltered from the wind she found the faded marks of boot prints mixed among the rocks, heading into the maze.

Overhead she imagined she could feel the burning of the Eye, watching over her as she gained on Feng Shen. She directed a small prayer towards her luck and carried on down the ravine. His gait was small, he seemed to have been walking around down here, probably trying to hide as he worked to lose pursuers.

The ravines were winding, and his path doubled back on itself many times, creating a confusing mess for anyone but her. Her eye was able to discern the real path after some effort, for a while anyway, until his trail seemed to vanish in the middle of a three way intersection. That discovery froze her in place, memories of that damned chase years ago crawling back up from where she had shoved them away. She listened intently, looking all around herself across the top and sides of the ravine as she readied a Spirit Stone to burn.

However, her bout of paranoia faded as nothing came of it, and she sighed.

So his tracks had disappeared, leaving blank sand like he had simply flown out of the ravine. But that wouldn't be the case here, unless she was truly and dreadfully unlucky. Slowly she paced near the place where the tracks disappeared, tracing the shape of the sand from multiple perspectives.

It did not take much longer for her to realize he had simply just swept at the sand with something long and thin. Maybe a branch or something similar, like the scrubby ones that littered the bottom of this ravine. Sweep once, twice, and there the tracks went, completely obliterated. Cerina huffed and turned aside from the trail, hard nailed fingers digging into the wall as she climbed up and out of the ravine to get a better view.

Looking over the map while keeping half of her attention on her surroundings just in case, she tried to figure out this puzzle. Fingers tapping over the map of the region in the message, she tracked her way from this knot of ravines, circling outward to find where he might be going.

She turned over her memories of the man that were simmering in the back of her mind. Why had he been so angry at her? Envy? No, jealousy. Guarding something he thought was his. Entitlement. Petty fury. A bully in a lot of ways. Her eye scanned slowly over the map. A place where he can hunt. A place where he can gain power. A place where he can feel powerful.

She had not visited many of the towns out in this direction yet, but the closest ones to the quarry were noted with population numbers. Somewhere where he did not have much opposition but could lord it over mortals… small would work. She focused on the smaller towns to the north west of this ravine; heading away from the hard target of Seven Heavens Trade City, and towards the mountains and into the hills. There was one that seemed to suit her idea of where he might go, tucked into a small valley formed by two ridges to the east and west.

Packing up her map, she started running again, burning Qi prodigiously enough her body started to steam. She sailed over the sands, the terrain rising as she moved deeper into the foothills of Hard Shell mountains. Sometimes she slowed to take in more Qi from a stone or to catch her breath, but she never stopped moving throughout the night.

When she finally reached the valley it was just after dawn. Standing on the eastern ridge the valley extended in a cut from north to south, a small stream passing through from the northwest and winding down the valley to pool in the south. Around the north shore of that small lake was the town she had come to save, a walled crescent of houses and market places with piers off into the lake. It looked like it probably had a hundred or so people, a tiny place not much bigger than her own home. Her eye flicked over it, looking for any sign of Feng Shen or battle anywhere.

Her hand tightened on her staff when she found none. Steeling herself, she started climbing down the ridge. If she saw no sign of him she'd just have to look closer, and maybe use herself as bait. The climb down was uninterrupted by any sudden ambushes and easy enough when she could just jam her fingers into the rock. Landing with a thud she marched towards the town, kicking up plant debris from recently harvested fields and scrublands she passed through.

She grew even more worried when no one challenged her as she approached the gate house. Slowing, she stopped in front of the flung open gate and saw no one there. But something bloody tickled at her nose and stepping through the open doors the scent led her through the gate. She turned right and saw a door leading into the wall, and the guard post. It was loose on its hinges when she pulled it open and stepped inside.

The room was empty, but not unmarked. She had perhaps expected an abattoir, but instead what she found was a room that looked like a storm of blades had passed through it. Great slash marks covered the walls and the table that had sat in the middle was split in half. The weapon racks, and weapons, were in no better shape either. The cord one would pull to sound the alarm was shredded and she'd bet the Blood Path alert bell upstairs in the tower wasn't any better.

The destruction easily led her eye to the stains. Bloodstains that were drying on the walls, one below the table stretching towards the alarm. It painted a picture of a sudden ambush and death before those within could react, or even scream, if the lack of panic in the town behind her was any indication. There wasn't a lot of blood left. She shuddered, trying not to think about where the blood and bodies might have gone. She looked around, trying to pick up his trail again. The floor was a confused mess of boot prints and blood, resolving into one set that entered and then left, trailing blood from one heel.

She settled her breathing, thinking. He could be trying to kill people right now, and a bunch of mortals would be fodder for a Blood Path cultivator. But there were no screams, no panic, or cries of alarm in this small town so he was either laying low and preparing or had something to muffle the sound. She decided to hurry out in the open; if he saw her he'd almost certainly go for her over anyone else and she didn't want this asshole killing any more people.

Hefting her staff, she dashed out of the guard post, following Feng Shen's bloody footsteps. The streets of the town were quiet, people waking up and starting their daily morning routines. A wave of confusion followed her as people saw her, quickly transmuting into concern when her barked orders forced them back inside their homes.

The path of bloody steps led her into the town's alleys and neighborhoods, as they stayed close to the shadows. They did not go completely unnoticed by the populace however, some people gathering here and there before she directed them back inside. Force of will and authority blocked people's questions as she hurried.

After a few minutes she was led to a house. Peeking through the windows, she found it empty. Abandoned for a while too, not the empty of murder and consumption. She slipped in through the backdoor, peering around. It had no real furniture, though the wooden floor was littered with recently opened and drunk gourds of alcohol. The air was rank with the scent of liquor and blood. Some of the gourds were still very recent, wet from unevaporated drink, not even dry yet.

In the house it seemed he'd cleaned off his boots, or the blood had simply dried by that point. Another quick look told her there was nothing else to find here and she left. His steps led her four blocks away into a little cul-de-sac neighborhood near the bank of the lake. A series of houses circled a plaza near the city wall and the lake, with a four story tenement block near the coast being the largest building in the place. The trail meandered up behind the tenement, passing through a decorative rock garden, and then to the back door. She folded herself through the door, hunching down to fit as she hurried inside into a storage room full of boxes and spare cloths.

Beyond it was a small first floor common room. The ceilings in here were nearly brushing the top of her head. Stairs climbed the back of the room just to her left and as quietly as possible she moved up the stairs, listening and watching for any sign of the man. In the shadows of the stairway her eye tingled, a faint sense of disturbed Qi brushing against her mind if she paid attention. That sense, a hunch, more than any physical sign is what led her towards the second floor and down the hall. Cerina heard a voice as she reached the landing.

"I'll have to figure out what to do with all of you ants in here. Can't just kill you all in one go…" a familiar sneering voice drawled, someone else whimpering. Her gaze zeroed in on a door hanging slightly open just down the hall, lock cut free from the wood in one strike.

She dashed towards it, slamming through the door in a burst of shattered wood. A man screamed. "SHEN!" She roared, shaking the building.

In the room she saw a familiar tall and muscled man, his face drawn and livid with fury as he dodged splinters of the door. A straight jian hung loosely from one hand. His dark hair was longer than she remembered, and his muscles thicker, as were the scars on his hands. His nose had restored itself too, healed by Qi. To their right another man lay at Feng Shen's feet, curled up in terror.

Feng Shen's snarl twisted into a sneer and with a brutal kiai he swung.

"You, Polya?" He shouted as the wave of Sword Qi lanced above her head, slicing through the doorframe and shaving a few strands from her head. Cerina reached out, trained instinct wrapping her hand around the nearest thing she could throw.

A sitting chair was heaved at him and he stepped back, an upward strike slicing it into rough pieces. Cerina was right behind it, bringing her staff slamming in from the side. He parried her, twice or even thrice as fast as her, sending her weapon wide. She did not stop however, letting her body spin with the blow, tucking her head and shoulder tackling him. Her incredible momentum bent his arm and lifted him from his feet as they were both flung from the second story window behind him.

Cursing her as they fell, he grappled with her one handed before he got punched in the gut for his trouble, forcing them to separate. They both landed on their feet, kicking up a huge puff of dust in the midst of the rock garden. Debris and pieces of glass fell all around them. Screams rang out from the building and the few people out on the street.

The dust cleared, revealing Feng Shen, sword held before him aggressively. Immediately she could tell his stance was hodgepodge, put together from a half dozen influences, and not yet well practiced. He sighed.

"Of course the Heavens put you before me," he said, sounding both annoyed and anticipatory. "It's like they are blessing me!"

She sneered, bubbling hot fury rising, metal creaking as she squeezed her staff. "I sincerely doubt that Shen. You're a fucking insignificant stain on this Sea," she growled at him.

His face darkened and he cut again. She dodged aside, swinging her staff into the path of the Sword Qi to try and deflect it. The staff screamed, jerking in her hand and sparks flying as the wave was shunted to one side. But she was unharmed, losing a piece of her sleeve as the crimson-black Qi wave slammed into the ground.

She snorted. "A curse too on everyone who has the unpleasantness of meeting you."

He shook his head, the weight of his cultivation and intent pressing down on her. Her Qi senses were inexperienced but she could easily tell he was above her by the density of his Qi. "I can tell, girl. Your progress is pitiful. A waste of an Aspirant. And I stand above you in the Third stage, as I should," he sneered.

Ah, crap.

"I will kill you, and quite enjoy it I think," he said, face twisting into a wide smile as he readied his sword and leapt for her. Dust exploded in a wave behind him, his blade screaming through the air as it was swung.

She stumbled back, staff desperately being interposed between his blade and her. Wounds appeared on her steadily all the same, as Sword Qi scraped at her bronze hide, leaving thin gashes that bled bronze blood freely. Each cut was deeper than the last, and she watched with trepidation as her blood gravitated toward him, sinking into his hands and blade to be absorbed. Even worse, the invasive Qi within her fought against her own, slowing her regeneration and clotting. Cerina was forced back towards the lake as the people around them fled, cries of alarm filling the morning.

She swiped her staff at him as best she could, while she frantically glanced around for anything she could use. Behind her was a pier, to either side the street. In front, Feng Shen struck her iron staff relentlessly. Her focus narrowed in on the blade, trying to dodge it and parry, and she realized that it was being dulled. It was an entirely mundane steel blade, and so sections were being damaged by their strength as it carved divots into her staff. She pushed forward, trying to hit the sword more than Feng Shen. The man's smile flipped to a frown and he slapped her blows aside, pushing her onto the pier.

He yelled and attacked again in a blur of steel. Cerina screamed as blood spurted from her right arm, his sword carving away a section of flesh and muscle. Blood sprayed as her hand spasmed and she dropped her staff with a clang. Before she could retrieve it, Shen kicked it off into the water. He laughed. "Now then!"

One hand on the pommel and the other holding it securely, he thrust his jian at her throat. Half-formed plan crashed into terrified instinct and Cerina flung up her injured arm in a block. The sword, coated in Sword Qi, speared right through her bronze flesh, emerging bloodily as she tugged it aside. It sunk into her shoulder, pinning her as burning pain radiated through her body. Her idea crystalized as she pulled away, the dulled edge slowing it just enough to give her a fraction of a second. Under her stomping foot the pier collapsed, sending her tipping back into the water and she pulled the blade closer to her as she fell. The combination of her weight and strength caused it to bend, and yanked it from Feng Shen's hands. She grinned in elation, overwhelming the pain her entire arm was in as his Sword Qi cut at her muscles and bones.

She hit the water, blinded by the splash and foam. Fumbling in the murky darkness she found the sword handle and yanked it free once and then twice. It tore out messily, blood pouring from her shoulder and forearm, but now she wasn't being constantly injected with Sword Qi. Tossing it aside she cradled her arm and focused on what was happening above the water, feeling herself come to a stop on the rocky lake bottom.

She could hear Feng Shen's muffled yelling as he cursed her. Through the dark and muddy water of the lake she saw him looking around for her, unable to see her clearly. He started wading into the lake, so furious he was coming into her reach where he would be vulnerable. Good hand digging around she came up with a head sized stone and flung it at his knee with all her might.

It struck true, his leg collapsing under him as he screamed in pain. Lungs burning for air, she got her feet under her and leapt forward. Qi surged around her, shining in her eye as she burst out of the lake in a blast of spray. The force of the impact forced both of them back to the shore. Landing hard on top of him she wrapped her hand around his collar and rammed her skull into his face. Once, twice, she felt his nose and other bones fracture under her metal brow. He gurgled, blood pouring from the ruin of his face, hate sharpening in his eyes. Struggling like a beast he wrenched away her wounded hand, his other hand shooting for her eye wrapped in sputtering Blood Qi.

Yelping, she tore herself away from him. He took the opportunity to turn and flee from her as fast as he could towards the city wall that dipped into the lake a few dozen meters away, clutching at his face as he did. She lurched after him, steaming blood dripping from the dozens of deep flensing cuts all over her body, especially the enormous gash and stab wounds on her forearm and shoulder that she knew had gone into the bone. Blurry from pain and blood loss, she knew she wasn't fast enough to catch him, so she scrambled towards a large decorative stone from the rock garden behind the tenement and hefted it. Her arm flared painfully, but that didn't slow her down as she spun and flung it at him.

The foot wide stone careened through the air in a straight shot, striking him in the back with bone crushing force. His scream was bloodcurdling and he fell, legs tangling clumsily beneath him. Pressing her arm tight with her good hand, Cerina marched towards Feng Shen. He was groaning, arms struggling to pull him along as his legs failed to respond.

"My back! My back you monster!" He shouted at her as he looked over and saw her approach.

She kicked him in the head. "Monster my shiny ass," she growled at him. Reaching down with her good hand she wrapped it in his robes and with a heave lifted him and then slammed him down on the ground. More things cracked in him as he landed on his back, causing him to scream and flail at her. Seeing him in this state, broken on the ground before her had not mollified her in the slightest, to her surprise. Grabbing him by the wrist she began to drag him away towards the city wall.

Panting, he shouted up at her. "This isn't fair! I was stronger, more blessed, and then you come along and ruin everything!" His nasally voice rose as he yelled, becoming shrill at the end.

Reaching the wall she hauled him up and wrapping her bloody injured hand around his belt she lifted and flung him over the ten foot high wall. He soared, tumbling, and then landing on the far side with a meaty thud and a whimper. She had to stop a moment to wince and hiss as her arm twitched painfully. Contorting painfully she reached into her pack and retrieved the last two Spirit Stones she had stockpiled from her missions in the past few months. Swallowing them, she relaxed slightly as she felt them settle in her stomach and she began burning them for Qi.

Cycling it through her was enough to expel the remnants of Shen's Qi and allow her regeneration to finally start working properly. Crouching slightly she leapt to the top of the wall, landing and then leaping again to sail the rest of the way to the ground. She landed with a thud next to Shen, who had fallen in a tangle, clutching at his body as he stared at the sky.

His hateful gaze fixed on her. "Why the fuck haven't you killed me already!?" He smirked. "Oh I know! Can't do it?" He accused through a broken leer.

She rolled her eye, shutting him up with another kick. Grabbing his hand she tugged him after her as she walked into the desert outside the town. "We're going to talk," she told the man.

He just laughed. "About what!?

She shrugged, pulling him along easily, her wounds starting to seal with coppery scars and seams as Qi surged through her system. She scanned around for a good landmark and quickly spotted a yellow-ish stone jutting up from the dunes near the river, a few hundred meters from the town. She could wait for reinforcements there and have some privacy.

Feng Shen spent his breath cursing her and her lineage to a thousand years of more and more colorful torments, telling her his spirit would haunt her forever if she killed him and recycled his corpse. She just fed the bullshit into the curdling sea of rage in her stomach. Reaching the stone she stepped up it and then flung Feng Shen down when they reached the peak.

Crouching down at him, she fixed him with a cold glare, the light of Qi glowing dimly in the depths of her eye. Feng Shen looked up at her with rage and fear and a burning disgusted hatred.

"Why did you choose Blood Path? Why not stick it out for the Clan?" She asked him.

He laughed. "That kind of question? Fine! Let me open your eye a bit. It was unfair!" He spat towards her, the glob of blood and teeth missing wildly. "They had it out for people who couldn't 'make the cut'. And that was me apparently! Bullshit!"

"Blood Path though! That's fair! Just kill and if you suck at killing well sucks to be you!" He ranted. "No room for bullshit at the edge of a knife!" He said, hand swinging wildly.

"There were definitely a few aggressive people who were kicked out for threatening the others or misconduct," she answered, morbidly curious to see where he would go.

"Yeah! Hah, 'misconduct', more like putting weaklings where they should be. I was trying to do the Clan a favor and they spat on what I gave them," he said, a cruel glimmer in his eyes.

She shook her head. "Nah. Why bother working with a real cunt when he's too egotistical for his talent? You made your own problems there."

She watched as his face went purple, her mind slowly parsing the details of his expression. Each twitch taken apart and analyzed by her subconscious, intuition and feel guiding her to recognize the intent in his eyes. A railing against her and she thought, the Clan as well.

"Fuck you, you pretentious bitch!" He shouted, and she watched his intent twitch this way and that as it withered. He knew he was dying. "This is all your fault! Ten fucking years in that pit because of you. Why must you get in my way! My ascension straight to the highest thrones! I deserved that you fucking bitch! There's nothing left, you've broken it all!"

As his rant petered out, his breathing becoming more labored, she shook her head again, frown becoming deeper and more… bored, almost. "The only thing you deserve Shen is the things you earned by not being an ass," she said tiredly. The more she heard this pitiful, petty man, the more she regretted trying to figure him out and the more her anger drained away. There was, in a way, nothing here. Just a bitter fire burning any who slighted it.

"Why you anyway! Why did you deserve anything I should have gotten! You're a freak who got there out of pity!" Feng Shen rudely interrupted her musings.

"What you tried to do to me Shen is certainly a motivation," Cerina said coldly as she punched him in the side. He groaned. She shook her head. "But no. My goal was to learn about those fascinating words from ten years ago," she told him. He didn't deserve the complete reason; that she sought cultivation for the beauty of the Eye in her dreams and the beauty she saw in every part of the world. Seeking to look upon something divine and sublime.

He looked up at her blankly. "That's it? That's your fire, your drive. Hell, is that your Dao? That's worthless!" He seemed to be beyond anger at this point, sinking into disgusted offence at her very existence.

She shrugged. "Better than the petty grudges you devoted yourself to," carefully, she leaned forward. She was sore as hell.

"Petty!? No!-" His new diatribe stopped as she reached down, wrapping a hand around her knife and set it against his throat. Fear surged in his gaze, that little flame guttering out.

"No! No please, I can-!" He tried to say desperately.

Shunk!

He died, finally falling silent.

Wiping her blade on his robe she sat down heavily and waited. After a moment of catching her breath, the stink got to her and she took the opportunity to wash off all the blood on her in the river.

Surprisingly, it only took about half an hour for her to notice someone running over the dunes towards the town. They had the glint of bronze flesh and she raised her arm and voice. She hadn't expected another hunter so quickly. Her bad arm she'd bound in her scarf in a makeshift bandage.

"Over here!" She shouted from the top of the rock. The runner shifted course gracefully, coming to a stop at the base of her rock in a rush of sand and dust. Waving their hand in front of their face revealed a shorter man with dark hair and Turtle World eyes. He looked up at her. "Clansmate! This one is Xian Shuren. I am here on the Urgent alert, have you seen the escapee?" the man asked.

Looking at him closely she thought he might have been in the Third or Fourth stage, like Feng Shen. Certainly higher than her. She shook her head slightly, chuckling. "Clansmate. This one is Cerina Polya. Feng Shen's dead now," she cut to the chase. A wave of tiredness was starting to pull her down and she frankly wanted a bed that she could just cocoon herself in like a moth.

The man's face lit up. "Great! You killed him then?"

She nodded.

The man let out a relieved sigh. "Thank the Imperator. Commendations then!" He congratulated her. Then he considered her for a moment and nodded. "Would you like some help with all that?" He asked, gesturing at her injuries.

Twitching, she raised her injured arm and winced, the soreness becoming brighter as she paid attention to it again. The burst of Qi from her stones was also fading away. "Yeah, I think I would Xian, thank you."

The man smiled and quickly hopped up the rock. Between the two of them they had her and Feng Shen down on the ground in no time. Xian wanted to carry Feng Shen's corpse and while she was tempted to carry it, the sudden surge of revulsion she felt towards it made her allow it.

"Well! Lets see what these people can offer for your wounds and get you sorted out," he said with a bubbly enthusiasm of a bad day suddenly going well. She just nodded.

Together, they walked toward this little town whose name she didn't know. Xian chattered the whole way, asking her questions to which she gave terse, mostly empty answers, though he didn't seem to mind. There was just no enthusiasm left in her right now. She was sore, angry, tired and her conversation partner was carrying the corpse of her thrice met enemy.

She just wanted to go home and paint the Eye. That sounded really good right now.



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And that's the last one today! If anyone wants to do Teaching Juniors with Polya, I'd love to collab!
 
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Holy shit.

I click the alert, and…

1. Oh, a new good seed!
2. And an omake!
3. And another omake!
4. Wow, that's a lot of omake.
5. They just keep coming.

Time to start reading.
 
Qinglong Shu 21 - The Four Deaths

Qinglong Shu 21 - The Four Deaths

Deep within the records of the four clans. Qinglong. Xuanwu. Zhuque. Baihu. Records not written down on mere paper or the frail memories of mortals and Cultivators. But records imprinted in the most secure of vaults, in the strongest of guardians, in the mightiest of libraries. Deep within those past writings was more than just techniques gathered over the ages. Traditions developed over the years. Nay, just like the creation myth, there were stories. Great deeds worthy to be remembered, even if flesh would forget. Ancestors that gave their fleeting lives for the sake of the Alliance.

Today, those records remembered. Remembered what might have been the greatest gathering of heroes, who defied the odds, who ascended above ascension and spat the spawns of evil in the face. Today, a day that was not important itself, the Four Treasures decided to dream once more…

Of the Four Deaths( Si Si) .

During that age they were born in, it was quite peaceful. Their clans expanded across cities, a minor kingdom in its own right. Not for a lack of ability, for they were mighty and could conquer the entire region if they so desired. But it was due to a lack of ambition for such earthly desires. For what need was there for conquest, if their purpose was to gather what they could in the world? Diplomacy, friendship, trading. They could fight when needed, but the home of the Four Beast Clan Alliance was meant to unite knowledge, not worthless titles and lands. One of those cities, the largest of all, a place called Zhong, was the main stage. The area in which the four mighty heroes of the clans would be born. Contrary to believe, they were not of the main families, the heirs of the clans. Nay, each of them was born from a sub clan. Still of blood, but with no direct lineage to the first blessed of the Four Guardian Beasts. However, despite the distance of their heritage, their blood was thick and pure. Already from a young age, they were inseparable, having been raised together. And even since then, they have been graceful as mere children.


Dirt shot up, creating a small cloud as a black short haired girl with red markings, appearing like feathers on her face, furiously tackled the taller boy with deep blue eyes. He grunted, centering himself, before flipping the girl over with one arm. The other arm held a meat bun high. The girl spat to the side before snarling and rushing forward again.

"Go fuck yourself!" Qinglong Ren shouted. Zhuque Hui snarled before flicking her wrist at him, shooting out a handful of dirt. The young boy coughed as it entered his airways, leaving an opening for yet another tackle. He hit his back on the ground, grunting in pain before he pushed his palm against the girl's face. Said girl tried to claw at him, reaching for the food.

"That's my bun, shithead!"

Quick steps followed, entering the back alley. Two more people looking more like street rats than actual nobility gathered in this dark place, completely at odds with the royal blood in their veins, side branch nonwithstanding. The oldest one, a young adult man at this point, opened his slanted eyes in shock. He pulled at his own white hair before rushing forward.

"Guys, calm down!" Baihu Li yelled, trying to tear the rampaging little bird away from the equally furious dragon. But the two were practically glued to each other, fighting for a measly snack in the large scheme of things. Desperately, he turned his head to the side, yelling at the other newcomer, the second oldest boy. "Help me already, Yin!"

The Xuanwu yawned before shaking his head in exasperation. They always did this. Only because their parents were friends, they had to deal with all this instead. South and North in this relationship were like oil and fire. With a sigh, he casually walked forward, brushing the hair strands away from his eyes as he ran his hand backwards.

"Goodness me."

It would take them several minutes until the two fighting kids began to cry, the meat bun long ruined. It was one of many occasions in which they fought and it would certainly not be the last. But nevertheless, or rather perhaps because of it, the four remained together.

Truly graceful. Alas, innocent childhood in which playing was the minor's only concern, the Four would soon grow up and enter the world of Cultivators, a step above mere mortals, yet still beneath all that was Yellow. It was here, that they would truly distinguish themselves from each other, just as intended by the traditions of their clans. Seperate paths, that would soon see them reunited, to gather in the Middle of All. It would take years, many years, until they would meet again. Until then, they would develop in their own paths.

Li exhaled. The Fang within his hands glowed with a lunar sheen, despite the lack of light, for the rain clouds covered the earth. His eyes were closed, his ponytail fluttering in the wind. Standing on top of the mountain, he remained motionless for many months. Most swordsmen would test their skills with others, showing off their agility, their speed, their ferocity.

Li did not have that. The many scars marring him, some even looking like whiskers on his face, were proof of that. Each fight would add a couple more. In a sense, he was utterly clumsy in terms of swordsmanship. If his Dao were that of the Sword proper, he would have long broken his Core due to his inability to cut down all threats.

However.

He raised his blade high above his head. His flesh ached. His blood burned. Many times lightning struck him, not as tribulations but as a mere side effect of the skies weeping. He smiled. It reminded him of the cry babies he often had to play peacemaker with. Back then, he didn't understand the obsession with fighting against others, to intentionally seek out pain. But now…now he understood. To struggle meant to live. To be tempered, one had to be hit. With those thoughts in mind…Li swung down.

There was no sound at first. The first hint of the strike's effects was the sudden ceasing of rain. The spontaneous moon light shining down on him. Then, as if an explosion occurred, the world seemed to realize in a delayed manner…that the clouds were cut in half. That the Heavens were split in two. Attacked by a man without talent and only his stubbornness to show for it.

Baihu Li. Death by the Blade. Unyielding metal that protected its family from danger. May it be as a sword, a shield or any other tool that could tear away at the Heavens themselves with the simplest of motions.

Screams. Dying gasps. The smell of iron as crimson stained the grounds. Sinners, criminals, demons. All kinds of corpses spread across the ground. The ones left standing shivered, their blades, their arms, shaking and devoid of courage. In the middle of the bloodshed stood a singular man, his azure eyes glowing against the red painting his body. Glistening, his muscles were. Shining, his scales were. He exhaled steam, revealing his sharp teeth as his claws flexed.

A blink of an eye. A singular twitch backwards. The Dragon blurred, as if activated by the simplest of motions. Suddenly, the man stood far away…having piled up the heads as a small tower, the bodies they were attached to still standing, not having realized that they died yet.

Exhaling, his draconic features vanished, leaving a man once more. But the core of his being was still that of a dragon, raging, ready to come forth to the surface. Cracking his neck, he let out a disgusted grunt. Blood Cultivators really bled a lot. Still, shortcuts or not, one couldn't survive against raw overwhelming speed and power that the body of a dragon gave him. With a snap of his finger, the Qi surged from within to outside. Trees grew, drinking in the blood and erasing any trace of the enemy. pocketing his hands in his pants, he began to whistle as he wandered off, nary an injury on his body.

Qinglong Ren. Death by the Flesh. Surpassing the definition of bone and blood, to carry the weight of the world on its back. There was no need to rely on anyone, if one's body was the Apex. No technique was beyond one's grasp that way, if the body was eternally willing.

Many lives were expended to even enter this fortress. The Black Shell was worthy of its name. The amount of defenses reacting to the slightest of ill intent was staggering. Arrays upon arrays activated when the walls were hit, when the grounds were stepped on. As if nature itself was offended by such heretical acts, they would be struck down. Burned. Pierced. A large arsenal of spectral weapons, of the elements themselves, hurled against the enemies, as the Black Shell stood tall behind a strong barrier. But eventually, they would get through.

Get through and meet hundreds of warriors, fresh and ready. In the middle, a man smoked from a pipe, lazily glancing up before looking back down on the scrolls again.

"Go ahead, will ya?"

Thus, the Formations activated, this time led by the unyielding wills of Cultivators instead of liveless writings carved into stone. Giant warriors emerged. Winds beyond winds blasted out. Rain itself would become deadly needles. Soon, the warriors celebrated, clearing out the corpses. Meanwhile, their leader leaned back, humming in lazy delight as he looked down at his newest scribblings.

Now that was a nice array. It should deal with any idiot attempting to go through the underground. It didn't happen yet, but preparation was the name of the game for a peaceful life.

Xuanwu Yin. Death by Formations. Whether with written arrays or living people, they shall stand united against any attacker and thrive as they fail.

A natural base. Cliffs high enough that one would take ages to climb it. Traps and tricks imbedded inside the walls. Cave systems so vast and dark, even experienced adventurers would perish from starvation within. Truly, a natural nightmare for any invader. And that wasn't taking account the disciplined army of Blood Cultivators, whipped into shape by a dictator. For sure, their reign would be eternal and guaranteed within this region.

Alas, they made the mistake of gaining a certain one's attention. The human screams and suffering were overshadowed by noises that no man could produce. Mighty flaps and whirring of wings of muscular birds and fast dragonflies. Quick steps and chittering, howls and snarling. A large mass of ants and wolves flooded the area, led by a scarred, but bigger and sturdier leader. Traps were picked out by moles and worms, the secret lakes were plagued by bloodthirsty fish. The last survivors managed to get outside, only to face a cheeky grin. Snapping her fingers, the lone human among beasts laughed loudly.

"Aaand here we go!"

The corpses disappeared into the bellies of the beasts. The monsters roared, in their own distinctive ways. Then, they all rounded up before the human…and simultaneously lied down on their backs, revealing their bellies. The young woman cooed and jumped forward, giving out scratches as fast as she could.

"Good girl! Who's a pretty murder beast?! Yes you are!" Some whined and began to lick her, causing her to laugh loudly and shaking her head."Hey hey, enough pats for everyone! C'mhere!"

Zhuque Ren. Death by Nature. Mighty beasts tempered by human guidance, evolving and growing past their meager instincts. An army that would rush forward and overwhelm anything like a wild fire.

Together, they made their names known across the region. No matter the opponent, were they aggressors or hunted, they would meet certain death. Eventually, their title of Four Deaths would cement itself, for any they deemed unworthy of life, would lose it for certain. With such a title being shared, it was inevitable that their paths would cross. Soon, they reunited again. They shared their knowledge. Re-experienced their brotherhood. It was as if they never left each other, their familial love greater than any.


"Stop hiding behind your pets and take your beating like a man!"

"I'm a woman!"

"Would've fooled me!"

"Don't make me cut you both down!"

"Enough. We just met and the first things you do is ruin my nice clean floor?"

"He started it!"

"Me?! You are the one that made your dog piss on me!"

"I didn't tell him shit!"

"You also got less mature."

"Hey, I wanted to see where I stood in terms of ability!"

"My goodness…"

Yes. Nothing had changed. But alas. Just as the great Heavens would change, from sunny to cloudy to stormy, so did the times. Peace gave way to War, the cycle continuing on. Fortune never lasted forever. Unlike before however, the enemy came from without. Not without the clan. Not without the region even. But without the Sea itself. Like a virus, the Turtle World got invaded by foreigners from the beyond. Many mysteries surrounded them. Why did they speak in such a weird tongue? What was wrong with the color of their skin, the style of their arms? And in what kind of world did they live, that their pride and arrogance was so utterly unchecked, that they invaded another world entirely? What sort of blessed, easy realm did they reside in, that they could just come over to another world? Such slights would not stand. The Four Beast Clan Alliance gathered, with its champions, to go to the front like many others. and teach those invaders a lesson. To let them know that they were looking upon something called Mount Tai, and that their ignorance did not free them of sin. The Four Deaths led the charge, led the defenses, and clashed with the enemy. In that moment, the truth revealed tiself to everyone.

All of their techniques and experiences. All of their hard work evolving their meager talents into something more. Arrays and Formations, prepared for just such occasions. Army of beasts, grown beyond what the wild intended. A body tempered, a steel sharpened, ready to strike down and defend against all odds. Souls that could wipe out entire landscapes, facing a singular army? The result should've been obvious.

And yet.

All these things meant nothing to the Vanguards of the ones that would be reduced to the name of "Golden Devils".


The thing was massive. Armored in golden armor, he looked down on them. The Four Deaths, bleeding profusely and gasping for air as they lied on the ground. The forces around them were even worse off. Some dead. Some crippled. Men and beasts alike faltered. With such superiority, the leader nodded, a small smile on his face as he rammed his spear into the ground. His soldiers behind him stood in attention, not uttering a single word. Then, he hit his chest. Both actions could be equaled with earthquakes as existence itself vibrated. With a deep voice, he took a deep breath to address his beaten opponents.

"You have my respect. For agrianthropos, you are mighty. Know that this 4th Legion of the great Empire shall remember your deeds. Surrender, and you shall prosper underneath our banners."

He idly touched his cheek. A cut, bleeding ever so slightly, healing way too slow. Actual seconds passed until it was gone. His pristine armor was burned, bent in some places. Not only that, the leader of this army felt exhaustion in his bones. How long has it been, since he faced such challengs? Nay, an offer of mercy was the only right thing to do, for they were worthy.

Alas, the Four Deaths weren't known by their name by being sane. Spitting out teeth. Setting bone. Shakingly raising to their feet. And then, they all raised a singular finger as they roared one after the other.

"Fuck-"

"-off-"

"-bloody-"

-asshole!"

As expected. The middle finger raised in defiance. Shaking his head, the Legatus felt no slight. No, he respected even that audacity, that courage to face their doom. Alas, what a shame. Worthy subjects wiped out once more. Stepping back, he snapped his fingers.

"Aye. Then let this end with blood. Forward!"

The soldiers from another sea moved as one. The Legatus took in a deep breath, trying to gather energy. It was a slight to his enemies to let one's soldiers do the rest. But before being a warrior, he was a loyal servant of the Empire. Thus, he had to gather energy, for there were other fights awaiting his spear. But doing that, gave his opponents time.

The Metal sang and cut. Not at any opponent, but at space itself. Twice, the sword was swung. Twice, distance lost all meaning. One moment, they were face to face with the enemy, the next, the Four Beast Clan Alliance found themselves in another plain entirely, arrays lightening up immediately. It rejuvenated, healed, as best as it could. But despite their respite, the morale was bad, even among the beasts.

"Fuuuuck…!"

"What monsters…!"

"I ain't done yet!"

"I gotta hand it to them, their Formations are interesting."

Three of the Four Deaths snapped their heads towards the Black Tortoise, who scratched his chin inthought.

"""NOT NOW, YIN!"""

"Right, right, sorry."

They all rose to their feet. Arms raised, weapons drawn. Their break didn't last for long, as the invaders already reached them, space correcting itself after the cuts. The world turned into chaos. Beasts were cut down, individual cultivators burned themselves up. But the wall of discipline kept moving ever forward, mighty spirits looming over the army. For all their individual strength, the Four Deaths were losing. The Azure Blood couldn't get through the barriers of flesh, for his injuries sapped at his strength. The White Steel couldn't cut through, broken in half, a mere joke of a dagger in his hands. The beasts kept dying, with no way to be replenished, and they long ran out of Formations to throw at the enemy.

And yet, they were not known to be heroes for not having inspiration in bad odds, as was the example with the Qinglong.

"I got a plan!"

"Then shoot, dipshit!" The Beast Rider shouted, swinging her glaive as she rode on her last Golden Beetle.

"You won't like it!"

"Brother, we are quite frankly too fucked to be picky right now!" One stab and a twist of a neck. One down, thousands to go.

"Remember the Spicy Noodle Incident?"

A claw shot out, taking off a head, only for another soldier to take the place immediately after. Already, from the horizon, they could see and feel the leader, slowly flying over the Earth, as if he was so much better than it.

"You are fucking kidding!"

"That's your plan?!"

"It might work actually."

They all turned to the Black Tortoise, who was already starting to carve into the ground with rapid speeds. The White Tiger and the Vermillion Bird shared a look of concern. At the sight of the hesitation, the Azure Dragon exploded.

"Do we have another choice?! We are the Four Deaths, it's time to deliver it, damn it!"

Determination filled them. Patting her beast, the tamer roared to the sky. Immediately, the rest of her children gathered around them, ready to do their part in this asinine plan.

"Screw it, we are dead anyway! Good thing I don't have kids!"

"That's because you're a loser!"

"Bite me!"

"Never do your sister!"

"Focus, people!"

North. South. West. East. They all stood according to their designated Cardinal Direction. The soldiers were confused, but were ever marching forward, intending to slay them before the carvings in the ground activated. But in their way was a wall of flesh, beasts that were unmoving, utterly forgoing atack for the sake of defense as they bulked up, ready to be nothing more than meat shields.

The Broken Fang moved as its owner exhaled. It did not swing at anything real. No ground, no air, no flesh. No, it aimed for the barriers that protected their idenitis. Separated their very beings. At the same time, the formation activated, and the earth itself glowed. The sword cut through what it intended to cut. The walls between their identities fell. And thus, their fate was sealed.

Sealed, as the Yellow Dragon Formation finally activated.

In this moment, as they enacted this foolish of foolish plans…their minds were one. And they cried tears as their lives were about to be expended for this last resort. Their hearts were utterly unclouded. They all thought the same thing.

All the struggles. All the effort and time spent. The moment of their birth even. If was all for this day. To show any outsider that their legacy was not to be triffled with. Thus, three eyes closed. Three bodies disappeared from the grand formation, turning into nothing, not even dust left behind.

Three Souls burned up. Countless of beasts were given up as fuel, the last order from their mistress. And the last Soul would be burning up as well. Mere moments were left of his own existence. But in that moment, he…no, they, ascended once more. In that singular moment, a miraculous breakthrough was achieved, creating an entirely new entity.

The Legatus in charge of the Legion paled. For the first time in his life as a leading force of the great army, he felt fear. All his power poured out, into his divine spear. With speeds unmatched by this meager sea, it moved forward. It could not be counted in seconds. Or even in moments. It went beyond light itself as it broke time and space.

And yet, it was too slow. No, it was inevitable for it to be too slow. For speed did not matter. Only authority. Authority to act first, authority to act at all. And in that instance, in that moment when four Souls burned up…none stood above them.

A dragon head replacing the human one. The broken azure scales were replaced by perfect, golden ones. A tail twitched, cutting through the wind with no resistance. Their eyes were completely impassionate. As if nothing could concern them. They, a singular entity made of many, stared ahead, not even eying the moving spear frozen in time and space. Then, they opened their maw.

"Begone."

Thus, the entity, the Shadow of the Yellow Dragon, a fragment of a fragment of the Greatest Emperor Above Heaven, exhaled.

What followed next would disappear from the records of mortals. Even the few cultivator scriptures would lack details, unless one was fortunate. But they would never forget. That day, when a golden light exploded into existence and rushed forward. No Treasure, no technique, could stand against the raw energy rushing forward in a beam of righteousness. The Heavens gave way, fearing the might of the center. The Seas split apart, unable to withstand the almighty roar. All that's left…was the Earth. As was right and proper. No invaders. No defenders. Mere ashes of all elements, returning to the foundation of the world. For all were subject to the judgment of the Yellow Dragon. And thus, the deity spoke. To its enemies for their hubris. To its descendants for their inexperience and their mockery of the real deal. A period of silence had begun, brought forth by the sacrifice of the Four Deaths, delivering one final death upon themselves and their last opponents.

In the large scheme of things, it was nothing more than a set back for the Sea Conquering Army. New armies would come. The survivors were only bought time. Most of them would perish in the following attacks, the following wars. However, on this day, the Four Beast Clan Alliance has proven its own worth. Its own legacy. The hundreds of years of their history managed to give such a mighty enemy a bloodied nose. And for that, they would not be forgotten. Even if their descendants would forget.

The Four Treasures would never allow their deeds to vanish into the depths of time.
 
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Cerina Polya Year 240-245, Turn 13, Side Story 1: The Run

Cerina Polya Year 240-245, Turn 13,
Side Story 1: The Run​


"This next task is simple enough even a dog could understand it!" Vasso called from her chaise lounge, snacking on a bundle of grapes. Even as winter and the final months of the year encroached, the desert sun was burning hot over their heads. The fifteen mortal trainees were all gathered on a track that had been laid down in the Tall Wheat Fields. "Run!" She shouted, and they all shot off.

The track they were supposed to run along was a loop of stone with a total circumference of a hundred meters. It had been built near the Bronzewall by their trainers in ten minutes, each golden stalk shorn to the root, the earth pounded perfectly flat, and each stone perfectly fit to the next. Cerina had taken mental notes of the process, as part of her new habit in regards to her instructors.

It had been a grueling ten months of training and abuse that Cerina hoped was meant to train and prepare their bodies. Running in the morning, fighting at noon, running in the evening, obstacle courses, exercise sessions, surprise barrack inspections, meditation sessions. Strange tests abounded. Her entire body felt like a throbbing and half starved pit, their rations filling out her muscles while her belly craved more.

A further… mixed blessing, of sorts, was that Instructor Vasso had been intrigued by her from the start. It meant she had both of her instructors' stringent attention upon her, more implicity being expected from her. They were not too obviously helpful to turn the other trainees against her out of misplaced envy, nor were they hard enough on Cerina to spare the others their wrath and thus create sympathy for her suffering. No, they did it just enough to tell her she was being singled out.

Or at least she felt like it. Some days she wasn't sure whether these thoughts were the result of some exhaustion spawned delusion or a frighteningly lucid grasp of her current predicament. The good part was the small bits of advice Vasso dropped were helping her excel in the combat training.

They were just finishing the first lap when Agatha spoke up from her own lounge chair. "The slowest ones among you spineless weaklings will be failed!" She shouted. The crowd surged around Cerina, frightened faces huffing and puffing all around her. She looked around frantically… there was Hana, right in the middle of the pack when she looked back. Sarkiadi was near the front with Cerina. Determination flashed across Hana's expression at Cerina's obvious concern, and she slowly pulled forward until she was just behind the leaders of the group, plateauing again there.

As Hana pulled forward, a lens clicked rapidly, spinning around Vasso's left eye and fixed on that Polya girl. The youngster was fast, no doubt about that. Strong too, for a mortal. "Agatha dear," Vasso mused. Her friend raised an eyebrow in her direction. "Do you think that girl will have talent with the soul arts?" She said, referencing one of the most fascinating projects Elder Destasia had given them in recent years: a cataloging of the talents each Aspirant manifested as the Blood of Bronze affected their unique constitutions.

Vasso had been needling her friend with the most inane and bloody obvious conversation openers for years now, when Agatha didn't want to bother with that kind of basic stuff. This was a slightly more pleasant change of pace. Agatha still sneered, false mockery lacing her tone. "At least you're starting with a better question this time."

"Sometimes I just want to spice things up and cut to the chase!" Vasso answered.

Agatha rolled her eyes, thinking, and popped a grape into her mouth. Then she shrugged. "Long range scout and all that is my bet. That big eye has to be for something. Qi enhancement of her brain's processing ability. Someone for the Glass Spear operators to make friends with," she popped another grape between her teeth. "On that note. Wanna make a bet?"

"Oh that sounds fun. How about whoever wins takes the other's night shift?" Vasso proposed.

"I'll go for that," Agatha said, saluting her friend with a grape and then leaning forward, eyes fixed on a short tanned boy with curly black hair who was falling behind the rest.

"As I said, my guess is some kind of soul-artist, maybe even a soul flenser. That would be very fun!" Vasso exclaimed.

"There you go talking out your ass hun. Also she's doing the weird thing again," Agatha opined, still looking at the flagging boy.

Vasso had noticed it too. With each of the Polya girl's breaths, Vasso sensed the Qi in the air flexing towards the girl. Not enough to be properly grasped, or drawn in, but seemingly a side-effect of her unusual physique. It had happened every time they put her through serious physical exertion, like clockwork, like her body was trying to use Qi but didn't quite know how.

Back to business though… looks like that boy was too slow. Oh well. "Fail!" Vasso shouted faux gleefully and with a flick of her hand sent the tired boy flying off of the track to land in the dirt with a gentle gust of wind. All the trainees flinched and shot forward in panic, trying to squeeze out just a bit more speed as she cackled. Better they failed here and survived, than being killed on missions they were incapable of performing, or dying during Qi Awakening and Infusion, she thought. Ten Aspirants from this training course would be a good number, though five was most likely.

Cerina's breath was hot in her chest as she pondered her predicament, and tried not to hear the moans of the boy who had just failed. If she went as slow as that boy, she'd be failed too. She also had to go until they told her to stop. Two goals that seemed at odds… but she had an idea. Worth a try, anyway. She started to slow down, slipping into an almost instinctive marching pace. She looked around as she did and realized some of the other trainees had also started slowing down at around the same time as her, though Sarkiadi had started slowing a little earlier. Others followed their lead.

No one was immediately disqualified from the test for slowing down. Sliding next to Hana she nodded at her friend and whispered. "Can you handle this for a few hours?" She asked her, glancing at the impassive instructors. Hana frowned, showing teeth, and then shook her head.

"Okay, good news then. I think they have a set disqualification speed," Cerina whispered, tilting her head towards the trainee who was slowly crawling to his feet and stumbling away in shame.

"Thank the stars," Hana said near breathlessly and started drifting back herself as she slowed down to a more reasonable pace.

Cerina loped on, trying to keep her breath steady as she ran. Cerina had spent years running, because she enjoyed it. This was not enjoyable in the slightest. They had been running for about twenty minutes, she thought and after that first boy, the failures started to trickle in. Those who pushed themselves too hard were being removed left and right, the back of the pack seeming to almost dissolve as their bodies failed and they were tossed out by Vasso's wind blasts.

By the end of the first hour they were down to ten trainees, and everyone had settled at whatever speed they could sustain above the disqualification speed. Sweat dotted Cerina's face and her breath was hot in her guts as she tried not to overheat and succumb to the pressure of the sun above. Around her the others were haggard and sweat soaked, most worse off than she was.

How much more is there? She fretted, tinged by desperation and worry for her friends. They just told us to run… and neither of their instructors were seemingly paying all that much attention to them, bent over a board game they'd pulled out from somewhere. Agatha seemed to be losing.

A sharp twinge up her leg made Cerina yelp as her ankle almost rolled under her. She couldn't get distracted! Wiping stinging sweat from her eye she put her head down and tried to focus. One, two, one, two was the proper beat to stay in motion as her and everyone else struggled forward.

Midway through the second hour someone cried out in pain. Whipping her head back Cerina saw Hana collapsing, clutching at her spasming calf. The other trainees frantically dodged around her, their group splitting like chaotic waves around a rock. She nearly stopped, stumbling, almost bumping into someone before she dodged. Hana's angry glare stabbed through Cerina as she started to turn. Don't you dare, she seemed to say. With that rebuke, Cerina kept running, throwing glances back to see her friend slowly crawling away, holding her leg as her face twisted in pain.

She's not being tossed off the track. Cerina thought. The realization that Hana hadn't failed rang through her when she saw Vasso come and guide Hana to sit beside the track, helping her stretch and drink something. When they came around on the next lap the other trainees saw Hana sitting there and Cerina could feel the moment they realized the same thing she had. Like a collective sigh of relief she watched all the other trainees slow down.

"We didn't tell you you could slow down! Run till we say stop or you collapse, insects!" Agatha roared, suddenly appearing behind them in a flash of movement. Some of the trainees screamed and they all lurched forward like a panicked beast.

For several laps Agatha chased them, shouting blandishments about the promiscuity of their parents with increasingly bizarre animals and the complete failure of their existence the entire way. Blessedly though she was eventually satisfied, and then suddenly returned to her lounge chair. No one thought about slowing down after that.

Over the next half hour, more slipped and fell, succumbing to exhaustion. By the end of the second hour Hana was standing again and with hunched shoulders was sent back onto the field, followed slowly by the others who had fallen after her. For Cerina, it was becoming a run of slowly escalating agony, her joints and muscles begging her to just stop and rest.

There was none to be had, however, and they were still running after the third hour. The scent of vomit and exertion hung over the field, some simply too overwhelmed to keep control of their stomachs. Cerina hadn't fallen once yet, nor had Sarkiadi. A few others were hanging on behind the two of them after coming back from a break. But that group of trainees was rapidly dwindling as more and more people simply could not continue at all under the baking hatred of the sun and their own bodies rebelling.

Everyone looked like they were sweating away the blood right out of their bodies, their hearts hammering in their chests as their legs wobbled. Cerina did not feel far off from that state herself. Stubbornness, her orders, and dread of her instructors' displeasure were what drove Cerina to keep running when she felt so badly the urge to stop.

By the middle of the fourth hour it was just Cerina and Sarkiadi still running. They didn't look at each other or exchange words or do anything besides focus on the run, so it was a surprise when Cerina had to suddenly jerk and dodge out of the way of the girl when she collapsed. The girl was quickly scooped up by Vasso to be deposited next to the rest of the still semi-conscious.

When Cerina next passed the gathering of trainees and the instructors, Vasso shouted at her. "Stop!"

Cerina almost kept running, locked into the rhythm of her thudding feet on the stone. But she did as ordered, panting and shaking, looking at her instructor with a faint hope. Am I done? She wondered.

Vasso looked at her, then nodded. "Trainee Polya. Carry Trainee Sarkiadi and keep running."

Cerina's heart dropped into her guts and her feet responded on autopilot to carry her towards her instructor. The other trainees' faces were pale, and Sarkiadi looked at her in commiseration as she tried to stand up. Hana was red in the face and shaking so hard Cerina thought she might explode. Cerina reached down with shaking arms and together the both of them managed to get Sarkiadi up onto Cerina's back. Vasso raised her hands once they were ready. "Prepare yourself Trainee," she ordered, and Cerina tensed.

There was a flash of light and then bands of dark and heavy bronze formed around her limbs and abdomen. They forced her to bend and almost collapse as the weight tried to plant her in the dirt. She groaned sharply, shoulders stretched painfully as she straightened. "Go," Vasso said, gesturing back to the track.

Breathing hard, Cerina turned around and marched slowly back to the track. With an effort of will she started running again. She quickly found that before, running had been possible. She could have kept going for another hour or two, and she could easily carry this girl's weight even as exhausted as she was. Together though they were killing her, each footstep had a pounding impact of pain. But she kept running out of sheer bullheadedness.

Everything narrowed down to the run, each exhausted stride fighting to lift the weight and then slamming down heavily. The pain rapidly pounded her grasp of time out of her skull. Soon her struggling breaths and slapping feet and the pounding sun all mixed to create a trance like state of suffering. Her entire world became a mirage of throbbing pulses of pain and flashes of her surroundings.

Distantly through the haze she heard an angry voice and a smug, "If you wish, girl," from someone in response.

Then a moment later she heard footsteps joining her. "Cerina!" Someone called from beside her, causing Sarkiadi to look up at Hana from where she was draped on Cerina's back. Cerina did not respond.

Hana called again, and this one caused Cerina to twitch. Her big eye blinked and she looked over at Hana, a confused daze hanging on her features. Then the big idiot smiled, a wan and sickly thing and Hana shouted at her again. That seemed to snap Cerina out of it a little, finally.

Blinking, Cerina looked around, and then shuddered. Everything hurt so much, all of her joints screaming at her, but Hana was right here again, somehow. She'd missed what had happened, but that didn't matter. What did was that she was aware again, and she used this reprieve to adjust her technique. Crudely she managed to readjust and restabilize her gait and regain control of her breathing, which started helping beat back the pain immediately. The anger she saw in Hana's gaze pushed her on as she tried to stay ahead of the pain.

There was a groan from her back as Sarkiadi started trying to lift herself up. "I can run. I can. Let me down," she said weakly, tapping on Cerina's shoulders. She had to repeat this a few times before either girl heard it, and then Cerina nodded. With a heave, Sarkiadi dropped to the track, barely catching herself upright, and started to run again as well, a few steps behind the other two girls.

The other conscious trainees were muttering and watching the three girls. After another lap, one trainee boy with a shock of reddish-black hair slowly staggered to his feet and then back towards the track. The others watched him go, many of them reddening in shame, but slowly the rest managed to struggle to their feet and join him in a slow jog behind the girls. Cerina only dimly noted this peripherally. Too busy trying to cling to consciousness with ragged fingernails.

Vasso watched from the sidelines. A handful of trainees finding the will to keep going, she shook her head with a bemused smile. Agatha had her arms crossed, her frown missing, quietly pleased. After another lap Vasso raised her hands and clapped. "That's enough! Stop!" Her voice rang out over the runners. Jerkily, they lurched to a stop in ones and twos, many falling to their knees.

Cerina was one of the ones that flopped completely to the ground, panting as the weights were dispelled. Weakly she shielded her eye from the sun and focused on staying awake. Footsteps approached her and glancing over she saw Instructor Agatha looking down at them. "Good job trainees. The ten of you will be rewarded for your efforts, but for now, rest," she said. Cerina took that as permission and collapsed into unconsciousness.



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Last one I think for this turn, before the fate's start being written. @ReaderOfFate @Kaboomatic heyo, one more.
 
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Chang 4 - Addiction

Chang 4 - Addiction


Scritch. Scritch Scritch.

The rhythmic sound of nails raking down skin was the only audible thing in Chang's room. He was lost in a trance, staring ahead at a blank wall while sitting on top of his bedding. One would think him to be cultivating if they weren't looking at his hand.

He wasn't cultivating. Chang was thinking. For the first time ever, he decided to experiment with the sensation of a tumor on his soul, prodding it to find out what makes it tick. As a proper cultivator, he can at least use his Qi to mess around it.

What if he tried crushing his own heart? What if he sawed away at his spine? How about flaying his nerves? There's also hemorrhaging his brain. If he lacks the fine control and ability to mess with his soul, then he'll at least target the places that garner the heaviest reactions from the thing.

The redhead knows. He knows that the outgrowth is very sensitive to pain. He knows it all too well that it drives him insane. He continues to scratch the external skin and break the blood free from its containment while threatening to destroy his insides with his own Qi.

A laugh escaped him. He wasn't paying any attention to his surroundings. Fortunately, there was nobody near him that would disturb his important actions.

There's a question Chang truly wants to know the answer to. If he wasn't aware of this thing…if he could only feel an annoyance, but not actually identify where it was coming from, then would he be even more annoyed?

The truth liberates people. It allowed Chang to identify what's bothering him, but it might actually be more abhorrent that he knows what the problem is, yet he can't do anything about it.

Power is the only answer. Climbing the mountain of cultivation and achieving a high enough ability to sever this irritation from his soul once and for all is his ultimate goal.

"Soon…" he muttered to himself. "I'll soon be free to be my true self."

Chang isn't him. He can't be him as long as there's another identity attaching itself to him. He is Chang and Another.

Just that revolting thought was enough for Chang to scratch deeper until more blood spilled on his sheets. He can only be him. He only wants to be him. He's the only person that matters. Everything and everyone else is second-fiddle, so why the hell is there a person who's sharing first place with him?

Unforgivable. Disgusting. Just who the hell does he think he is trying to be Chang? Why was he born like this?

Did the heavens think this a gift or did they give him a curse from sheer whimsy.

He would rather die. But he can't accept a pathetic death. Suicide is out of the question. That's nothing more than giving up and submitting to the absolute rule of the world.

Then why is Chang scratching himself? Why can't he stop this masochistic behavior that came from his natural suicidal tendencies?

"Hah…" The almost crazed cultivator let out a breath and understood something. He always knew, but he never really understood just how severe the issue was.

Chang is addicted to pain. The mental anguish from insults and self-defeatism, self-loathing, and the rewarding pain of backbreaking labor and training against other cultivators is a hole he dug himself into. And it was all born from the outgrowth of the soul he was born with. …This thing that made him have consciousness from the very instant he was born.

It was torment being aware of existing from day one. There's no way Chang can accept the existence of something besides himself inside himself. He never entertained the idea of working together with this thing as its desires and will are diametrically opposed to his.

Chang snapped back to reality. "I need a pipe."

The only way to combat this addiction is to use another addiction. Smoking a pipe should give him the required nerves to settle down and stop scratching himself or prodding at vital organs that are necessary to sustain his life.

Chang yawned and got up from his bed. His destination was to a local store that sold the amenities he needed. He didn't bother to clean the blood that dried from his arm properly, so he wiped it hard until the dried skin flaked alongside it and fell off.

His eyes were half-closed like he just woke up and his hair was a mess. He walked ahead, not even sparing a glance to anyone around him. They didn't exist in his eyes. All that mattered was getting a smoke and the person who could help him acquire that need.

The walk to the store wasn't that long, only about ten minutes. It was a little out of ways from him and he never bothered to visit this place at least. He preferred to congregate around sellers who didn't have as many customers.

But now, he can't afford to use the noise and numerous people as an excuse to avoid this place. Chang sighed before looking around in the building for a good pipe. He had the money, so he could afford to splurge a little for something that at least reminded him of his old pipe.

He picked one up, waited in a line for a bit, and then dropped it on the counter before paying for it. Walking out of the store, his nerves were already being frayed because he forgot to purchase tobacco.

One walk through the store later and he had everything he needed. He didn't wait a second before lodging the tobacco solidly inside the pipe and lighting it on fire with a small application of his general skill manipulating fire.

"Now, that's a good element." He smiled just from using it. Fire was one of his favored elements and it's one of the ones he likes the most. Fire burns hot and a crazy enough fire could consume everything including the user. Burning out like that isn't such a bad way to die.

And to get such thoughts off of Chang's mind, he inhaled the smoke and let it linger in his mouth. This was the calm he sought.

He's a cultivator now. Having control over himself instead of having his instincts birthed by the world control him is what he needs to learn. Chang is the master of himself. He won't let anything, even another part of him, object otherwise.

The smoke in his mouth escaped as he opened his mouth. The action of breathing was therapeutic. He almost forgot everything in this moment, only taking in the calming sky above.

Now he could finally think and plan about his future of cultivation.

Addictions are truly great.

The redheaded man wandered back to his abode and sat in a cross legged position. His teeth were biting onto the edge of the pipe while a hand cupped his chin in thought. He's already made a plan to tackle the only secret realm he can access to speed up his slow progress.

The motivating factor…well, he doesn't want to think about that at the moment.

What he needs to think about is the rest. Improving his skill at controlling Qi, acquiring movement techniques and other types of battle techniques, acquiring treasures, improving his constitution, locking down his Dao, and sparring with people to improve the majority of what he already listed.

His pride rages at the thought of needing other people to succeed, so sparring for the sake of improving disgusts him. Learning techniques is also stating that he requires assistance from the people who came before him to succeed.

Chang took another inhalation of the burning tobacco.

There's also his cultivation art, which triggers his outgrowth to writhe in anguish, or at least that's what it feels like. He's never used another cultivation art, so he doesn't know if it's the very act of cultivating that makes it go crazy or if it's just his specific art. It's something for him to think about.

He shook his head, ignoring that tangent.

He can set aside his pride if it's crippling his progress too much, so he'll do it here. Sparring and learning techniques will be put on the training menu as it will help him control his Qi better.

"Qinglong seems like a good choice." A lover of women he is, but a beater of one he is too. He has no qualms about striking them in the face or anywhere else that's important to them, plus he doesn't really like that brat all that much.

In short, she's the perfect target to vent stress and to improve at the same time.

However, sparring against the same person over and over is the way to stagnation. Chang needs to seek out other potential good opponents, or he needs to fight groups of mediocre people at once.

Ah, he ran out of tobacco. He stuffed another clump in the pipe's opening and lit it up, feeling a wave of calm wash over him. He continued on with his planning session.

…What's left?

Oh, Dao. What is his Dao?

He doesn't know. It could be egoism, karma, narcissism, or anything else. He's still lacking a lock on what it could be, which isn't good. He needs to be certain what he believes in more than anything to make true progress.

"Trying to force it would only make things harder…" Chang recalled a story from his father when he was struggling in the Foundation Establishment realm.

"That was easily my most painful period of cultivation. I was always uncertain on my path and my pillars were shaky. But, I would've never made it here if I didn't keep going even when I felt uncertain. My shakiness turned into resolve and my trembling pillars became firm. You might never feel like your Dao is the right one, or you may feel that way. Since I doubt you'll ever cultivate in this lifetime, I can at least tell you this: Dao isn't absolute. People can never be absolute in anything. Hesitation and uncertainty plagues us as naturally as clouds pass in the sky. However, people can adapt. As I walked along the path, I stopped stumbling as much and my confidence grew. That was when I met your mother and let me tell you—"

Chang stopped his memory short before his recollection stumbled upon anything that would break his concentration. He took another puff.

All those tales Chang's dear old pops told him will come in handy. Jubilation fills the redhead's body at the thought of his father seething that he's actually cultivating. Now this is also an addicting feeling, though not as harmful as what he's doing right now.

He's got it now though. Chang's Dao will come naturally. A stray thought that clings to him and doesn't go away no matter what; he might feel hesitant over it and he might lack confidence in it, but it will eventually be the Dao that supports the man.

Chang is thankful to his father for being such a nice teacher here.

He stopped smoking his pipe and cleaned out the inside before setting it inside his clothes. The reckless cultivator stepped outside with the destination of training on his mind.

The training area always has some nice, durable wooden and steel posts to use. His fists and legs might bleed from repeated impacts and bruisings will naturally come as a result, but that too is an addicting feeling.

Cultivation itself is addicting to him. Anything that goes against the natural inclinations of his soul tumor turns into that.

Isn't he such an easy person? His likes are his other's dislikes.

Chang scratched himself. Is everything he is and everything he does the result of going contrary to his parasite?

He spat on the ground. …This is why he isn't Chang yet…! He can't reach his true self as long as intrusive thoughts are always omnipresent and deceiving him into thinking they're his own thoughts.

They're just slightly different enough that he can tell it doesn't originate from him, but that slight difference is all it takes to drive him up the wall! He sped over to a training post and began trying everything in his power to break it.

He filled his fists with Qi and fired rapid punches until the skin around his knuckles broke. After that, he swapped to powerful and methodical kicks that carried the full force of his body behind him.

His shin hurt. He then kicked with his foot until that began hurting too. He swapped back to punches with the intent of practicing instead of venting. Keeping his body stable, doing away with the acrobatics his family's guards love to do, and focusing on power and endurance.

Speed only came into play if he needed to target an opening immediately. Chang spaced out his punches and circled around the post until his breathing became harder.

That soul parasite was being pretty rambunctious now. That thought was enough to make him smile. The two are different and Chang is proud of that. Though the sensation is annoying, it's that very sensation that proves to him that he's alive and he's heading toward his death. The injuries that build up, even if it was just external, and the masochism that doesn't allow him to take breaks is truly the most addicting feeling of all.

Smoking just can't beat that because this garners the greatest reaction of all.

Smoking harms him. Training harms him, but there's a net benefit. Since both things harm him, he will choose what he prefers more and abandon the other.

"Hey!" The loud, masculine voice snapped him out of his trance.

Chang turned around to see three individuals whose faces prodded at his memory? Does he know these people? He might've seen them around before.

The confusion on his face irritated the man on the right, but Chang just focused on the person who called out to him. His expression was grave.

"Yeah? If you don't know, I'm training, so make this quick." The redhead's textbook rudeness grated at the three individuals.

"Do you not recognize us?" Is he supposed to?

Wait.

Chang scrunched up his face and pulled out his pipe. He lit the tobacco inside on fire to clear up his mind, clarity bringing forth the useless parts of his memory to the forefront. "Ah," he exclaimed.

"You were the three I beat up?" He wasn't sure, but their faces matched up well enough to the ones in his memory. He nodded when he became more certain of their identities due to their frowns deepening.

He then waved his hand at them. "I'm busy at the moment, so I don't have time to entertain you guys. I'm not gonna be your boss or hand you another beating…" he trailed off.

Aren't these guys mediocre fighters? They're also in a group, so this could actually be the sparring he needs.

Fortunately, they didn't go away. The rightmost man who seemed to be boiling the greatest, couldn't contain his frustration.

"We're going to beat the shit out of you!"

The middle man was taken aback by his fellow's words, but neither him nor the man on the left objected to his claim. There was probably a more polite way to say it, but…

Ah, what the hell.

"This is good timing. I need some weak bitches to help me practice, so let's get crackin'!" He grinned, showing all of his teeth and his red eyes seemed to belong to that of a tiger rather than that of a human.

However, the chance at a salty runback overran the three cultivators' wariness. Getting beaten down when they had the numbers advantage was humiliating. Even a wooden statue would be upset at this, thus they had no choice but to avenge their defeat.

It would be a fair three-on-one match. The irony of the sentence was not lost on anyone there, but they didn't have a choice.

Besides, the Golden Devils were all about teamwork. This is just sparring to further that.

Chang bent his legs low. For once, he wouldn't start the attack. He waited for the men to inch closer to them with caution plastered all over their faces. Any minute now, they would tighten their encirclement and attack Chang.

Any minute now.

…Any minute.

Chang impatiently launched the attack first.

His feet were tightly locked on the ground. It was like he slid on the dirt instead of taking proper steps, but then he took a powerful step forward at the same time he threw a punch with the same hand. The jab impacted the tough skin and sent the man backwards, seemingly about to fall over.

The gust of wind coming from behind him and the side of him couldn't both be responded to at the same time. Chang made the snap decision of blocking the attack from the side. His free hand opened its palm and parried the fist downward with a chop of his own.

He grit his teeth from the kick that landed straight on his back. He took the attack without moving back in the slightest to diminish the power of the blow. The leg that was trained into a bronze pillar did not budge the redhead in the slightest.

With the same hand that performed a knife hand chop to parry a short man's fist, Chang whipped it around and swung into the kicker's neck. His breathing was completely disturbed.

Chang was struck on the back of the head with what felt like a hammer.

He should've put more power in that initial jab.

He took a step forward to rebalance himself, planting his left foot forward and spinning around like a top. His right leg gathered momentum for a reverse roundhouse that finally knocked the large man out.

The redhead was surprised he took the punch to the chin and came back so quickly, but this should keep him down for the rest of the fight.

With the trio's most durable fighter down, Chang made short work of the remaining two. Their triangle formation falters with a man down and they're not good enough to take on the redhead in a head-on clash.

After the panting redhead's legs began shaking too much, he dropped to the ground and began lounging on the dirt, like he was enjoying a trip to the beach. He was already tired from the rough training he spontaneously did and spars take up quite a bit of energy as well.

Moving and striking at the same time can be more exhausting than one thinks. His body is also racked with self-made injuries from striking a pole, but it's more important to worry about the people who were knocked out.

He got up and squatted down at the weaklings, doing the bare minimum to check their breathing for signs of life. He didn't strike with the intent to kill or maim, but fists don't have eyes and all.

Chang was satisfied from the warm breaths on the back of his hand and went off to go call for a healer.



After all was said and done, the reckless man returned back to his abode, his training for the day over. His foul tongue can really incite some people to fights, so he should lean on that more.

Chang looked at his injured hand. The local healer offered to give him a touch up as well after he saw his bruises and scrapes, but the man declined.

He loves looking at these injuries. He recalled – in a vague portion of his memory – that the most important part of exercise is to rest. The crazy redhead did the impulsive and foolish thing, and ignored that advice to do some more pushups until his muscles felt like they were on the verge of tearing.

He hasn't exhausted himself enough yet. He doesn't feel like he's dying yet. He's not gasping for air. He's not starving for food. His head isn't pounding from a lack of proper sleep.

Chang snatched the pipe from his clothes and looked at it for a moment.

He closed his fist and snapped it.

Abnormal in both mind and soul, the man came to a simple conclusion.

Scritch. Scritch. Scritch.

"This pain is all the addiction I need."
 
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