Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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We can do door number three and do an all out attack next turn with intel on an ostensibly weakened, attritioned, and pressured Blood Cannibal Sect in hand instead
Wouldn't the option that outrights says "Ensure your Clan is trained and ready for war." be more effective then if we are doing an all out atack next turn?
 
Wouldn't the option that outrights says "Ensure your Clan is trained and ready for war." be more effective then if we are doing an all out atack next turn?
Only if you're confident we can steamroll the Cannibals without any intel on them beforehand.

Without eating severe losses at that

Otherwise no, it really isnt
 
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Only if you're confident we can steamroll the Cannibals without any intel on them beforehand.

Without eating severe losses at that
Our character was the clan's spymaster before becoming a nascent soul and the clan should be doing a little of everything even if it's not the focus so we won't be going blind.
 
Third was Nikephoros Theophylaktos, a Great Circle Core Formation Elder. He is a simple man to all appearances, speaking little. He is the Parakoimomenos, or in common terms, the Elder of Intrigue. You had trained him personally, and found his skills acceptable. Previously you held his position, so he is admittedly new to the task, though he had been your assistant for almost a century. To him falls the duties of espionage, sabotage, and assassination. While he was your apprentice, you are currently somewhat estranged. His voice is cold and emotionless.

"Archegetes. The Oasis Rebels continue to resist, but only just. Unless we do something to take the pressure off them, they will fall within five years. Jingshen Clan has been trying to find a new way through Magic Oak Sect to trade through the mountains, but no success thus far. Child Corpse Gulper has disappeared, and I cannot find any traces of him. He may be dead, have left the region, or be in hiding. It is hard to say."

"Also, Abyssal Devil Bee Sect has executed a crippling, immense raid, killing Little Saber God, an Early Nascent Soul from Seven Divine Saber Palace, looting the Palace itself before being driven off. My sources indicate they have slaughtered perhaps fifty million mortals across five major sects in the last twenty years, and seem unstoppable to those in the Plains. Of course, their Devil Bees consume large amounts of Qi, so I don't anticipate any immediate raids. They are digesting their gains, but I suspect they may become a greater threat in the next forty years."
This is the report of our spymaster this turn

As you can see: There is very little in terms of actionable intelligence other than "We can't find Child Corpse Eater and the Oasis Rebels are at the ends of their rope" relative to the Blood Cannibals

So yes

Without taking dedicated actions towards rectifying that lack of information you really shouldn't assume that things will just line up conveniently for us when our entire build rejects the very concept of such a course of action. If we want specific intel on them, we need to act towards obtaining it. Whether that's having Manuel do it himself, or putting Clan resources towards focusing on it, that kind of information isn't just going to passively fall into our laps.
 
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Hmmm, it looks like due to Time Differences, it's going to be hard for me to vote in time. But for discussion sake, can i ask the Thread on perhaps developing 1 action to come up with a Qi Formation specced Formation.

As they are the ones with the greatest numbers in the Clan, it would really be great if we can develop more methods to leverage their numerical advantage.


Short Omake. Just thought that it's interesting that the Grand Elder is essentially offering his personal guidance/insights to the Juniors.

Xiao Yi [Guidance]

Bonus if this Omake Counts: Personal Formations for Qing Yun and Xiao Yi

Hoplon Formation: A Hoplite Formation branchoff where the User and his Pact Beast channel their Qi to make themselves like the SHIELD OF THE HOPLITE increasing the defenses of Armor worn by the User And the Scales of the Pact Beast

Dory Formation: A Hoplite Formation branchoff where the User and his Pact Beast channel their Qi to make themselves like the SPEAR OF THE HOPLITE increasing the attack power of the Weapon wielded by the User and the Claws of the Pact Beast.

TLDR incase the fluff for the above formation is too unclear. 1 to make them tankier together and 1 to make them hit harder together.

@occipitallobe

@occipitallobe can i have the Omake threadmarked ? I will add the bonuses to the Background if this Omake counts for bonus sakes. If not i'll just leave it as a lore + future goal.
Xiao Yi - Poor cultivation progress. 3rd Heavenstage. Obsessed with fighting in formation, excellent leader. Possible future centurion? Led group of Qi Condensation cultivators into battle against rebellious Sandy Sect in Hua Empire, did not lose a single cultivator, held off Foundation Building expert long enough to ensure they all lived.

Nice. I can deal with this! I love the idea of him gradually being Formation specced. For the sake of potential Omake storybuilding, can i assume the Qi Condensation Cultivators were all fellow clansmen ?
 
Rina Callista 3 - Legacies of a Better Time
Rina Callista
Legacies of a Better Time
The seasons ground on, endlessly and inexorably--the worst effects warded off by the spells engraved in the walls of the capital. Rina had spent many years training--had gone from a waif who had barely so much as touched a blade into one holding skills expected of a true expert. She had learned to participate in the Hoplon and Kataphraktoi Formations, and was having some small success with the Twin-Headed Eagle Formation as well--she was strong of limb and near tireless--her best record was a full day of conditioning during one major test--the best out of all of her peers! Though her physique never truely expanded to match her peers in the Vanguard program as she steadily advanced from the depths of the First Heavenstage up to the Second, she began to win more often than she lost--growing increasingly accustomed to spear and shield alike, and taking better advantage of the strength of her physique.

It was in the Third Heavenstage that problems began to arise. "Acupoint Awareness" as some of the trainers would call it. "Identify the emission and absorption points of Essence within your body, and make best use of them in the steps ahead." One could break through at any point during that stage--but once one primed those acupoints and began to employ them in earnest, stopping was apparently a disaster in the making.

So all were encouraged to take their time, to clear and refine each acupoint before progressing to the later heavenstages.

Rina had one hundred eight Acupoints--the expected number for an Aspirant with her bloodline concentration. What was unexpected was how each and every one of them was a collapsed mineshaft, withered and atrophied from a life of limited health. While her Cultivation was certainly helping, it was a daunting task, taking months to sufficiently irrigate and clear a single acupoint, no matter what medicines she purchased with Contribution Points, no matter what wealth of spirit stones she threw into the deal.

By her calculations, she would be looking at fifty years to finally clear every acupoint out. The most elementary tasks of the Clan were exclusive to those within their first twenty years of Cultivation, as it was expected for one to reach the Fifth Heavenstage by then, capable of contributing to the Clan's overall welfare in operations beyond the Dawn Fortress. No matter how she looked at it, the math was saying that she wasn't going anywhere.

It was a daunting revelation. She had two choices--to open as many acupoints as possible in her training, then break through to the Fourth Heavenstage prematurely and push for the Fifth. While she would be weaker in the long run than many others--it would ensure she actually survived and continued to grow--at least by a little bit.

The second option was to damn the obstacles and just charge straight through. So what if it was going to be a long and drawn out process that'd use up half her life just to get out of there? So what if she'd be dealing with a cultivation disadvantage all the while? If she couldn't rely on her Essence Circulation to fight, she would just need to double up on her battle abilities. She could take it as a suitable handicap! So what if others will eventually be stronger than she is, if she could simply adapt around that superior strength?

She was always smart after all. That's not a meaningless trait just because she was going to be on the front instead of in the back doing something more sensible with magic!

Conceding to the environment and changing course might make things easier for now--but she could see how it would be really hard to get back on track afterwards! And there'd still be that mucky swamp somewhere that she went around--better to just drain the damn thing no matter how much time it took. It was about not letting obstacles discourage you or make you compromise!

"And so I'm going to keep doing this" She said that night, kneeling before the great altar of former heroes of the Clan, her resolve steadied after days of consideration. "If I can't do it right the first time, what have I been working all of this time for in the first place, you know?" She claps her hands together and brings herself to her feet. "I'll redouble my sparring practice and study martial lore more! If I can't cultivate well, I'll just make sure I'm good enough to make up for it all!" She bows her head again, takes a deep breath, and slaps her cheeks.

"First thing in the morning, I promise you all! I won't let all of your hard work go to waste no matter what my condition says!"

There is a flicker in the corner of her eye, a memorial plaque shining ever so slightly.

And then she is somewhere else.

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It is a realm of war

A towering mountain citadel, steadfast in the darkness.

Beams of light--shining reds and glittering whites and blazing blue struck out at it--fragments of stone and granite flying off as the attacks rained down. The defenders of the great fastness lined the walls--few in number, they yet struck back--turning strange engines of war on the mayfly attackers, shattering them to bits and being struck down in turn.

The defenders were losing, this much was clear.

But a single figure stood, stoically at the greatest height of the gatehouse. Scandalously dressed, with soft armor layered beneath silverine plates. She bore a great kite shield of jadesteel in one hand--sloped to deflect blows and pointed at the base to strike at enemies--her other hand bore a strangely shaped hammer--almost bonelike, if it were not for its lustrous glow and clear weight.

And her hair--oh her hair--shining radiant gold in the darkness, not the mere bronze of others. She smiled, and extended her arms. "Come on then!" She laughed, provoking several assaults to rain down around her to no effect. "I'm sure you thugs have somewhere better to be than wasting time with a few washed up losers now? Why don't we settle this properly, in a way even you barbarians can understand?"

The air settles for a minute, energies gathering as the attackers considered their options. But a moment later, three beams of light sprung from the skies, materializing into three robed barbarians.

One bore a thin sword, rippling with barely restrained murder. A second bore a great ruler, emanating a strange law. The third carried a cauldron. All three looked like they were carved from blocks of living jade, distinguished only by the specific cut of their robes and how long they allowed their black hair to grow out from.

"Fool" The swordsman spat. "Revealing yourself so early? Did you really think that we would fall for your treachery?"

"The Heavens have decreed the annihilation of your Clan" Ruler-man coldly stated. "Submit, and we will leave you an intact corpse"

"After we're done cooking it of course!" The Cauldron warrior laughed. "It's said that Gold-class Warriors carry enough vital Qi to fuel an expert to Core Formation! Waste not, want not!" His companions seem content to ignore the licking of his lips, and the almost certain euphemism this all was."

The Lady shrugged at that. "Well, can't blame a girl for trying" She settled into a ready posture. "Come on then!"

The Swordsman snorted dismissively, and a sword-shadow filled the space between them--the Lady's shield was already out, her shield catching the incoming attack. She dug her heels in and shifted her grip, deflecting the shadow into the expert carrying the ruler. He gestured with it, and space twisted to ensure he was not occupying the kill-zone, but it took a precious moment of his time.

The man with the cauldron laughed uproariously, bringing his implement up and spinning it in place--heat radiated from it and a boiling liquid began to spill from the opening as he brought it down on the Lady--she smirked, and snapped her hammer up, catching the lip of the Cauldron and flipping it over, before kicking the bottom back into its master. It sunk into his flesh--unable to harm its master, and the cauldron warrior lunged out with a palm strike in the expected opening.

Thunder clapped as he struck against her forehead--and a gleeful look of anticipation filled his eyes. Only to be replaced with horror to see the Lady's head merely tilted back slightly.

"Hah! Impressive of you to endure my probing strike!" He laughed--his cauldron poured back into his hand. "I'll refine you where you stand!"

"Mmm... Nah" The Lady shifted to the side as a sword thrust through the area she had recently occupied, leaving a scar on the cauldron. The Sword Cultivator's expression did not change as he pivoted to follow her--only to be caught by her shield once again.

"Your victory is impossible" He added, adjusting his footing to prevent his sword from being deflected off this time. Air ignited and multiple explosions followed as the Lady's strong arm sought to drive it off. The man with the ruler began creating a formation. "Gold-class warriors are invincible within the same realm--but you cannot defeat three Nascent Soul experts at once."

"It's never been about the rational choice" The Lady smirked, her shield glowing white hot as it resisted the attack. "It's been about staying true to ourselves and our beliefs." She lashed out with her hammer--but sparks flew as the haft is caught by a spatial warp. She frowns at that, using greater strength to tug on the hastily created binding. It cracks and gives way--but not swiftly enough to prevent the Sword Cultivator from putting his full weight behind his attack--spell runes flicker to life on the Lady's shield and wink out, and a deep carving is left within it as she is struck away. Her heels dig deep and she seeks to regain her footing--but the Cauldron Master is upon her, swinging his great device down on her from behind, bashing her back into the encirclement.

The battle from there goes poorly--with her shield damaged, she tossed it aside and took her hammer in both hands, but the Lady's attackers have her measure, and she begins to take blows. Her hammer's light winks out after a parry from the Sword Cultivator, her armor's light recedes as damage adds up, and her immaculate form grows ever more bloodied and battered under the constant assault.

Three hours later, the fight is at an end. The Lady leaning on her damaged weapon, her armor on its last legs while her opponents stand boldly before her, untouched and unruffled.

"All is as it should be" The swordsman nodded. "Let it be known that Justice is done this day for your trespasses."

"Oh go fuck your justice" The Lady laughed. "I've already won."

The ruler cultivator raised one eyebrow, showing a trace of confusion. "You are beaten and exhausted, the last Gold-class Warrior in this Sea. A single blow will see your execution, how have you won this day?"

She smirked, and tilted her head. "Well, aside from the fact I just tied up three Nascent Souls for half an hour, allowing the full evacuation of my household through the opening?" The cauldron man looked about and cursed as the Lady them tapped a specific block on the place they were fighting. "I also just killed three Nascent Souls who thought they could get away with bullying my people."

A great boundary ignited about the gatehouse, fueled by ten years of savings and the willing sacrifice of the household's defenders. She climbed to her feet as the Cultivators observed and then sprung to break through.

Futile though, their attacks flashed against the boundary line and were no more.

Her body began to glow with the light of a newborn star, and she smirked as she gathered her power up into her chest. Radiance filled her, shining through her damaged armor as her Nascent Soul began its final preparations. "Should have know better before you tried to pick a fight with a Callista on her home turf! Keep that in mind in your next lives!"

Her soul detonated, and the fury of a Nascent Soul's funeral pyre filled the tightly contained boundary.

Three enemy Nascent Souls for one Middle ranked, a fair trade.

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"Yeaaah... I was figuring that'd be a great and noble sacrifice that'd save the day for everyone..." The voice came, here in this strange blank void that Rina had found herself in after the vision of the past. "Turns out that they had a fourth guy waiting in the wings." Rina turns around to face the image of the Lady who had just fought and died in that vision. "Good news at least was that reinforcements came in before he finished killing everyone! Bad news of course is that the survivors were..." She wiggles her hands together. "Kinda... Well, mostly the literal children who were too small to be noticed first. It was really a fucking mess no matter how you look at it."

Rina stares at her, blinking.

The Lady stares back, blinking.

"Uh, you okay there kid?" She asks after a moment.

"what are you wearing" Rina asks, closing her eyes tightly and turning red as a beet. The Lady notices, and does a pose. "Ah, you like it? Silverine Battle Armor! Finest work of our best artisans! Resistant to cuts, bludgeons, and most forms of energy projection! Looks fine too if I do say so myself! Always the best for the Callista Battle Maidens!"

"but it's all..." Rina begins miming out a shape with her hands, and the Lady laughs and laughs and laughs, patting the smaller girl on the head. "Oh you are just adorable! I just poked my head out when I got your scent but I wasn't expecting you to be this little munchkin!" She giggles at that while Rina gets increasingly flustered at the attention. "I've actually got a spare set that should be intact back in our old estate in the Mountains, you might be able to grab that when you finish growing up a bit. "

"Ummm..." This, this was peak embarrassment. "That's..."

"I'll leave the map to you when we're through here--but I've done enough woolgathering now." The Lady snaps her fingers, and her power begins to swell. "Now, down to business. Rina Callista, are you willing to accept the inheritance of AtheniaCallista, Last of the Blood of Gold, Battle Maiden of the Steel Skies?"

Rina began to break into a cold sweat at that. "I'm... Not the first Callista who's come here..." She wonders out loud. "I'm not even the most talented--I'm barely into the Third Heavenstage of Essence Gathering"

"Qi Condensation" Athenia corrects, and Rina blinks. "I know we like using our own words for things, but we're literally the only ones who do that--for official business, we still use the words that everyone else does, so that nobody gets confused."

"... Qi Condensation then." Rina chewed over the unfamiliar turn of phrase. "But the fact remains, I'm not actually the best choice for this... Surely there's someone better?"

"Nope" Athenia' lips drew that last syllable out into a pop. "This little piece of my will's been poking around since we were living up in the Mountains, nobody else has qualified yet." She taps Rina on the forehead as the smaller girl tries to fix her glasses. "I'm not looking for someone who's just good at cultivating, or someone who's an innately talented expert, or has some super treasure or ultimate martial art. I just want someone who's decent, who understands just how shitty this world is, and will walk straight on through it and through anyone who tries to tell them to move. You satisfy those requirements."

Rina stared up, mulling all that over.

"That's not all of it, is it? Or you still would have come out sooner."

Athenia winced just a bit at that. "There may or may not be a bloodline purity requirement too--The Blood of Bronze is a devolved manifestation of the Blood of Gold that we once possessed, you're close enough to that standard that I can give you a good kickstart, and your bloodline should evolve accordingly should your Cultivation get high enough. You're at that standard and you're mentally suitable."

"Oh" Rina mulled that over for a minute, and nodded. "That seems... Reasonable?"

"Yeah, you're a good kid but it's also a bit of dumb luck that you're the first to qualify who's come here. Surpassing Nascent Soul is just too damn hard for us in this era, so anyone who doesn't manifest the Blood of Gold by late Foundation Establishment probably won't." Athenia crossed her arms before her. "It's pretty unfair, but we start with what we've got. It's not all responsibility though--I can definitely push you up to Tin Veins here."

Rina paled. "That's the level of a Nascent Soul's physique! I can't possibly support that!"

"You won't have to, like all aspects of our bloodline, it scales to your current level. The advantage is that Tin Veins is a complete remodel to your Essence Circulation for maximum ductility and capacity. It should go a long way towards correcting the residual damage that's been limiting your own Cultivation. Might even increase your pace a bit, I dunno. I was born with the Blood of Gold so I don't quite know what the pace for someone in the step before it looks like." She shrugged. "Well, anyway, back to the question--you in or you out?"

Rina Callista looked up at her distant ancestor, closed her eyes.

And after a moment's thought, she nodded. "I can't let my own weaknesses hold myself or the clan back, can I?"

"You're a good kid" Athenia smiled, and put her hand on Rina's head. "Now, this is probably going to be the worst pain ever. Do your best not to go crazy!"

"Wait, what?" Rina questioned, and her world was Pain

The lingering will of a Nascent Soul was a thing that could move worlds--a limited category of force representing the full attention of one of the Sea's peak experts. They could lift mountains, create rivers, and split the earth with simple blows of the hand, without even exerting the full force of their souls. It is said that the attention of a Nascent Soul could turn the most common of disciples into an expert who could walk astride the world as a titan.

And all of that force, all of that might, was being dedicated to the sole purpose of boiling Rina's blood.

Her marrow screamed in protest, forced to produce the Blood of Bronze beyond all reasonably limits. Her gilded bones shook and strained under the steam produced as her blood concentrated, distilled, and concentrated once again. Channels throughout Rina's body were carved out by molten metal, searing away the ruined dross and leaving shining metal structures in their wake. Flexible enough to expand nearly without limit as energy floods through them. Strong enough to endure such stretching indefinitely. The Blood of Bronze galvanized into its ultimate manifestation, a body forged into an engine with few peers.

Acupoints after acupoints burst open, spilling out ruined flesh and stagnant blood as the apetures were reforged in divine metal. Her Cultivation rocketed upwards as they did so--reaching the height of the Third Heavenstage as the final Acupoint opened in a breath of fresh air--and for the first time, Rina could feel like she was in full control of the flow of power through her body.

She just wished that it didn't hurt so bloody much!.

By the time the pain settled down to just something that left her whimpering on the ground below, the faded image of her ancestor looking over her work and nodding.

"That's the world for you" She supplied, as her will returned to its shrine. "Obsessed with it's own superficial difficulty, it tortures those who play its game until it turns the people into images of itself, just as cruel and dismissive as it is. Accept it, but don't ever let yourself believe that the pain is virtuous in itself. As long as you can stay true to that, you may very well have the right to challenge the fate of our Clan."

She smiled, and faded. "Just do your best and try to die without regrets, it's the best thing you can do and also the only thing you've got control over. Endure what you have to, but don't forget to make things easier for those who come after you either. The whole point of keeping to your own trail is blazing it for those who come after you after all."

And with that, Athenia Callista was gone, another victim of the Celestial Machine who could cast a light into the future. Though it may not come to anything in the end--the future was always built off the back of those little gestures. Who knows? Maybe one of these days, the right light will fall in the hands of the right person--and the world will change.

But until then, the Golden Devils will endure.
 
We do:

Those are the formations listed on the Clan status informational threadmark. The issue with them isn't scaling down, but scaling up.

Yes, true. But the impression i get from the given Formations is that they are pretty modular in the sense that everyone can essentially be a part of it. As such, i'm assuming that to make it work part of the formation has to be used to basically " smoothen out " the Qi differences between each member so that no one explodes from dealing with to much.

What i'm trying to aspire for is something more along the lines of a niche/specialized formation. Like how the Twin-Eagle formation requires the Bloodline, something along the lines of Qi Condensation only but for every 100 members, allows them do throw one flying spear at Early Core strength but unlike the main formations cannot be scaled up to Core Cultivators to use.

On a more personal note. As the Formation Clan, i feel it's a shame if we don't leverage Formations to make use of numbers in ways that other more conventional powers do not use.

Like the example i gave above, the ability for 100 Qi Condensation to launch 1 Early Core strike will be great at both fighting other Qi Condensation cultivators or tie up Core Cultivation enemies by making them have to spare Qi to parry the blows.

This also doesn't take into account potential Utility Formations, like maybe a illusionary formation etc.

@occipitallobe can i just clarify with you on how exactly formations work ?

So far i've been assuming that when a Formation is used, there will kinda be a Aura shadow/Stand that overlays the cultivators. The cultivators are still there but within the Stand.

If that is the case, for the Kataphraktoi Formation, does this means that the Cultivators charge in tandem with the Kataphraktoi ?
 
Peta Condos and Wajo 2 - The girl and her brother
The girl and her brother
Peta and Wajo


Peta meditated against her brother.

She did a lot of meditation in the fourth cycle of road duty. Twenty years of service, five in each: logistics, road patrol, border patrol, station. She'd celebrated whole-heartedly when her Contubernium was assigned the task. Finally, a chance to be in the wild again! Her first five years shattered whatever expectations of freedom she'd held. Logistics? More like hard labor at the beck and call of her superiors. The next ten years were better, they tracked rogue cultivators and deadly beasts in the Scorpion Sea. The clan let them keep all the beast flesh and cores they could hunt and a portion of the bandit plunder, greatly aiding her beast-bond cultivation.

Then came station duty. Some might see it as a reward for 15 years of hard service, to finally get five years of sitting around. For Peta it was intolerable. Can't exercise, can't cultivate, can't hunt. Just staring out at the endless desert, trying to stay alert. Wait, and watch, and smile, and take the pittance they charged. The duty was necessary, but she wished one of those green-skins that liked sitting around all day would take it.

She perked up. Someone was coming! Not the usual baggage train, a lone traveler. She sensed his cultivation level: Foundation Establishment. Following protocol, she signaled the whole contubernium to muster, just in case.

The man was handsome, even for a cultivator. He had delicate features and fair skin, and he wore the impractical flowing robes favored by some of the so called 'just' sects. Peta frowned. Trouble? Or just a traveler? She signaled Big Fatty Caesar, her commanding officer and the only foundation cultivator in the contubernium. They waited together for his arrival. He certainly wasn't in a hurry.

"Greetings sir," Peta said, in her best imitation of professional, "and welcome to Bronze Devil territory. I'm afraid there's a small road maintenance fee to travel through our lands."

The man eyed her like she was a fascinating bug, "Bronze Devil eh? I won't be paying the fee."

Trouble then? Likely. Her brother moved protectively closer to her, the rest of the contubernium shifted to surround him.

"Are you a diplomatic envoy with credentials to indicate your status?" Peta continued with the protocol. You have to follow the protocol, just in case, even when you knew where this was going. It's about discipline.

"No. I represent no one and nothing but my Dao. I am the Wandering Sage of the Lightning Fist. Perhaps you've heard of me?"

Peta sighed, "no sir. Please indicate why you refuse to pay the fee. We may be able to make an exception and send a messenger to the midpoint station for…"

"Let me show you then!" he laughed.

Big Fatty Caesar moved first, his enormous axe swinging with the force to split boulders. Strong, but slow. So slow. The curse of her clan.

The rogue cultivator lived up to his name, with a flash and a cackle he danced around Big Fatty and struck him three times before the axe hit the ground. The force of the blows couldn't even dent his bronze skin, but they each delivered a payload of stunning qi. Big Fatty Caesar spasmed as his metallic skin dutifully carried the electricity to his central nervous system.

Another flash and he was on Peta. She stabbed futilely with her spear, but with both a cultivation and natural qi advantage she had no chance of hitting him. Her bronze-infused muscles were simply too slow. He sneered and flowed around her thrust.

Right into her trap. Her muscles might be slow, but her Soaring Bronze qi was swift as the wind. With a blast of wind she launched herself at him, shield first. As she expected, he was pathetically light and easily pushed back. She did no real damage, but that wasn't the point.

The point was the other 6 cultivators unleashing their techniques behind him. Bronze Furnace Bellows, Viridian Vitality Theft, Opes Terebro, Cauldron Slam, Titan's Shackles, Acidum Lotus. Her contubernium worked with perfect coordination born of twenty long years of daily training together. This was the true strength of her clan, more than even the Bronze Blood. Peta joined them with Bronze Roar, a debilitating sonic attack she'd learned from her brother.

It wasn't enough, not to win. With a blinding flash, the rogue cultivator unleashed wave after wave of defensive techniques. They were holding with their all out attack, but they lacked the endurance to keep him pinned down like this. One slip, and his speed would let him cut through the first attacked, and the rest would fall quickly after. They couldn't beat him with ranged techniques. They couldn't beat him in hand to hand. The cultivation advantage was too much. At least he lacked the strength to simply destroy them with the sheer force of his aura.

Come on Fatty! Come on! Peta begged internally as she poured more qi into her technique. Only Fatty had the strength to end this. She spared a glance down, and despaired. Fatty was still insensate. They were all going to die.

Then, Wajo. Peta had nearly forgotten about her brother, until a great mass of iron slammed into the enemy cultivator from above. Deadly lightning qi poured into the bear, but the wild spasming it provoked didn't stop him from ripping the enemy cultivator to shreds with iron claws.

The contubernium stopped their attacks as fast as they could, but it was far too late. Fire, acid, steel, and more joined the enemy's lightning and tore into the magnificent beast.

Peta rushed to join her brother, tears in her eyes.

I forgot how fragile most humans are, even in a higher realm. No armor, no hair, not even a nice roll of fat.

Wajo spoke in her mind, their bond had long since grown past the need to speak aloud.

"Hold on!" Peta shouted aloud, "Marcus, help him!" she looked desperately at the medicos already crouched over Fatty Caesar. He glanced up but shook his head grimly. Triage? How dare he!

I forgot how fragile I am too. Armor, hair, fat. Didn't help.

You can't die. You're my family.
I already owe you my life. I can't repay you if you die now!

The great bear shook, don't worry about it. No karma. No debts. It's all just… kindness.

No.

No!

Her bloodline was not simply strength and toughness. It was regeneration. The bronze sings with the power of another world. Her very blood defies heaven. She would not allow this.

In a moment of desperate inspiration, Peta forced the spirit bond wider. She would give him more than her Qi. She would give him her blood, her nature, her very soul if she must. She forced everything she had down their bond, screaming in pain as it shook her down to her core.

She woke up a month later in the hard bed of a border camp. Vacillating between hope and despair, she looked around. She sank down in relief. He was here. He was alive. Her brother's fur was different. The silver held a strange golden tinge in the light. He was still her brother. Maybe even more, now.

Omake bonus: Wajo now benefits from bronze regeneration?
 
Aretaphila Myia 3 - Out of Depth
Aretaphila Myia
Out of Depth

Time passed by quickly for Aretaphila, training and refining her flesh as what had once been days became weeks became months and finally years. After the young Myia had learned the power of dodging the Centurion that had been her trainer had started her on basic qi circulation exercises - the technique necessary to turn the shaped metal that her body had become into a true facsimile of flesh. Metal as malleable as any muscle. Though The manifestations of her Clear Summer Bell's Constitution had been a distinct subset of the Blood of Bronze, it still fell under the same classification as that of her clansmen. Having advanced to the Copper Skin stage of her physique almost immediately upon awakening, Aretaphila knew she was more talented than most of her peers, though rumors of those who had surpassed her still reached her ears.

It didn't matter, not really, but something in the Myia girl's soul howled at the gap between her and the very best Aspirants.

Falling behind may have been tied to her initial choice of focus - The technique slips of the Clear Note, Brown Note rather than the single word offered by the Grand Elder. But she could not feel regret overmuch. One thing that Aretaphila had learned was that she had until the 9th Heavenstage to learn whether her choice in focus had been correct or not. Upon reaching 3rd Heavenstage within five years of Cultivation, she felt vindicated. As the echoing song of the Clear Note reverberated through her body, the dozens of acupoints scattered upon Aretaphila's body trembled under the results of her training, freeing up the channels to allow her to truly breathe for the first time since awakening. The pain had been sharp and acute, a ringing high pitch that had torn through and cleared through the filth in her body.

Reaching 4th Heavenstage in slightly under a decade was no mean feat, even if Aretaphila was still not the greatest seed of her generation, she could still see where others faltered where she kept advancing. If she kept to her current pace, her objective of breaking through to 10th or higher Heavenstage before leaving Qi Condensation would come to fruition after all! And so she practiced, cultivated, and worked for the Clan.

Yet one day, in the midst of doing chores to gather Contribution Points, she had been taken aside and assigned to a larger group of her Clansmen to exterminate some bandits four days travel from the Dawn Fortress. None were expected to exceed Early Foundation Building, and it was with the joy of familiarity that a well known, expressionless face greeted her at the Fortress gates on the morning of departure.

"Aspirant," The Centurion greeted her, his aura having swelled with the power of a new Dao Pillar.

"It's been a while. Congratulations," Aretaphila answered, saluting her one-time teacher as she approached him, joined by older Golden Devils at the 7th and 9th Heavensent Stage respectively.

The older of them, a man with golden mane and barely noticeable Bronzemark glanced at the younger woman with an air of suspicion, "Will this really be alright, Sir?"

Morning sunlight reflected off jadelike patina as the Foundation Establishment officer turned to reply, "Reports indicate that there are only a few hundred of the bandits, the majority not even breaking past 3rd Heavenstage." The Centurion paused, "Do you feel yourself unequal to the task, Aspirant?"

"No, sir." Aretaphila replied seriously.

"You've advanced your skill in that Art of yours, then?" She nods, and then he continues, "Aspirant Myia possess Arts effective at playing support roles in a wider battlefield of peers and near-peers. The purpose of this mission is to give you all experience in your expected roles once you reunite with your Conteburnium." A familiar bronze stave materializes in his hands, pointing at the 7th stage, "Legionnaire," He levels it at the 9th stage, his skin dusky, "Venator," Aretaphila blinks in recognition of the term, and then the cursed weapon is facing her once again, "Aeneator," The stave leveled out at the older man's side, "Each of you have advanced at different speeds compared to your peers, but once each of you have been determined skilled enough you shall be organized back among those of you who have met the minimum expected level of skill in your roles. Those shall be your true peers, at which point you will be folded into the Legion structure as a formal Conteburnium."

The Centurion turns about to face the road leading out into the barbarian lands, barely trained by the civilization that the Golden Devils had brought to it. "Now then, Aspirants, FOR-WARD!"

All four take off at a steady march down the road, their cultivation and bodies enabling them to withstand a grueling pace through the Organ Meat Desert, needing only the supplies on their backs. For three days and three nights they march, until they come across a lumpy series of massive dunes, braided together in an uneven chain.

Zha Fei Chang Hills. Territory of the Screaming Sausage Bandits.

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There is a single moment upon arrival within those myriad dunes that Aretaphila is sure shall remain with her until the end of her days; A singular, overwhelming stench. The refuse of hundreds, thousands of a Cultivator's purged impurity, seeped into the very land, tinged with the stink of rotted offal. The young Aspirant always knew that the Organ Meat Desert had been called as such for a reason, but perhaps there had been some truth to the stories after all?

She shuddered at the sheer, awful scale of the heights of Cultivation, knowing that the agony undertaken to reach such peaks must be beyond her imagination. And yet.

Aretaphila Myia would still embrace even something as awful as a stench a hundred times more potent than this to make her way into this world. Qi cycles through her few open Meridians, and a low single note rings through the quartet. Two of the older men visibly relax, the stress and fatigue of the journey and destination washed away, while the patina-covered Centurion merely nods his acknowledgement.

"Three of us shall make camp," The Foundation Establishment Clansmen grinds out before turning to the dusk-skinned 9th Heavenstage, "Search for traces of the targets camp, return after dusk."

Silently, the scout salutes and slowly fades into the sands, his dusky skin taking on the texture of the grains beneath their feet before vanishing entirely.

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Three days and three nights pass, the four of them penetrating deeper and deeper into the Zha Fei Chang Hills. Each day as the sun climbs higher, the stench of impurity and rot grows greater and greater, and Aretaphila gets more practice in using the Clear Note to clear through the psychological effects of prolonged exposure to the terrain. Beneath the bright dunes of sand that formed the hills, within valleys formed by the twisting wind, is a mass of boiling, pitch-like Impurity. The ancient rot of thousands of years of dead beasts, forever trapped into this single spot, laid to the sun's cruel and merciless gaze. The 4th Heavenstage girl wondered how anyone could stand to live here for very long, when on the fourth day since their initial arrival the 9th Heavenstage Aspirant returned, telling tale of a windswept ridge less than a day's march away, facing outwards and upwind of the stench of the hidden valleys.

"Numbers?" The Centurion asked.

"A hundred or so of the barbarians at the lowest Heavenstages, Sir." The prospective Venator answered confidently, "Less than half a dozen past the Meridian Opening Stage."

"Any sign of their leader?"

"No, sir." The dusky skinned cultivator replied.

"Likely in seclusion then." The Late Foundation Establishment mused, "Then we shall have the two of you take point. Aspirant Myia shall take rearguard alongside me while we try and smoke out their leader."

There had been no reports of the bandits being Blood Path, which made their numbers seem strange at first. But Aretaphila could understand, having been in the area for several days. It didn't seem so strange that there was a treasure hidden among these hills of rotting meat capable of awakening a seemingly arbitrary number of Mortals, but whatever resource the bandits relied upon to Awaken was nowhere near sufficient to break through to higher small realms, let alone past the 9th Heavenstage proper.

The team of four trudged through the dunes, eventually coming across the well-hidden fissure in the sandy dunes, a single gaping rock face that was only truly visible if one had been approaching from the Impurity steeped valleys behind them. Little wonder a treasure could have been hidden here; there was no better defense than the environment surrounding it. No need to draw attention with cunningly hidden Arrays or illusion wards or other works of artifice.

Night fell, and the sun no longer reflected off their Bronzesign. With the stars above, the way in was bright enough, the sands muffling their approach, stained only by the blood and swiftly buried bodies of the lower realm sentries for the bandit fortress. It is only a short time before the group is within the mouth of the crevice, marching through the narrow passageway deeper into earth.

From one moment to the next, Aretaphila feels the air shift imperceptibly, becoming just a little bit denser. The qi that had been so thin as to be nonexistant in the air of the desert is here an order of magnitude thicker, and Aretaphila realizes that whatever this place was, it had once been meant to serve as a poor substitute of the meanest of sites in the plains out west. Perhaps it had even been more than this tiny thing, before the curse of poverty that the Heavens inflicted upon the Golden Devil Clan had found this sequestered place, and reduced it even further from its former glory merely to prevent the possibility of the Clan finding a use for the spot.

"Whatever this...Suan La Tang Temple once was," The Centurion's hushed whisper reaches the Myia scions ear, "It is no longer usable for us. We get just as much for what we invest into the Receptiveness Determining Ritual."

The young woman thinks back to the effort and skill it must have taken to construct this place, and hide it within a location such as this. All gone to seed because of the march of time and the determination of the Heavens. Frustrating. What would those people who had build this Temple think, to know that it had become the den of these Screaming Sausage Bandits?

There are no answers forthcoming, and the tunnel widens into a true hall, where a dozen of the bandits mill about, busy with their own tasks or laughing at their games around fires burning merrily within the cool stone halls.

"Aspirants." The Centurion intones flatly, "You have your assignments."

There are loud clangs as the elder Qi Condensation Cultivators stomp forward, their heavy metallic footfalls ringing against the flagstones beneath their feet. The 9th Heavenrealm withdraws a bone-like cudgel, the air distorting around it's bulbous head. The 7th Realm however, withdraws a fa more typical Hoplite, the armaments smoothly appearing over his body with a flex of Qi.

The Bandits form up into a mass, giving hoots and hollers as they prepare themselves to strike against the hated Golden Devils.

They never get their chance; one and all blown away by the far more powerful Qi Condensation Cultivators. Scores of bandits are slaughtered as the two sides clash, and those that survive flee deeper into the complex, the pair of bronze-skinned soldiers given chase at a slow, methodical pace. Aretaphila and the Centurion keep their distance at the rear, anticipating a potential ambush, one that never comes as the hallway opens up into a great arch and from there into a massive hall beneath the earth.

Over a hundred 3rd Heavenstage and below Bandit Cultivators, each one leering at the pair in front hungrily.

With a cry, the mob move as one to overwhelm bronze with a sea of flesh.

Aretaphila sings. A singular, inhuman note reverberates through the air, the Demonic Tune carried upon the currents of Qi into the ears of her targets. The Brown Note pierces into the systems of these mere bandits, reverberating deeply into their flesh as it resonates with the ample amounts of impurity within their system.

They are all Cultivators, those who recognized on an instinctual level that those impurities in their body were simply not meant to there. And those bodies treated that filth like it deserved. Shaking, trembling, spasming, in an instant over a hundred Qi Condensation Cultivators fell onto their knees, a prodigious cacophony of wet and disgusting sounds accompanying the sight as their bodies desperately attempted to dislodge the impurity that was now rebelling against their bodies.

Easy pickings for the other two, who's weapons glimmered with bronze and began to lay waste to the environs. Yet, even as they move to strike down their weakened foes their attacks are blocked, at least a dozen Qi Condensation, each at minimum being past the 6th step

Bandits they might be, but their cultivaton strength, especially out in numbers, proved enough to hamstring the fight even as Aretaphila continued her assault on the helpless lower realms The clash lasts for several minutes, the time being bought by the Screaming Sausages enough to cause the Centurion escorting her to grow exasperated.

He strides forward, full on confidence, and them the Bandits begin to die.

Aretaphila sighs in relief at the sight.

"Why, hello there." An unknown voice calls out, from directly behind the girls neck. Two hands rest upon her shoulders, and before Aretaphil knows what's going on there, she is already whisked away deeper into the darkness of the Temple.

A.N.: @occipitallobe There ya go
 
Xiao Yi 3 - Molon Labe
Xiao Yi [Molon Labe]


" Oi, Xiao Yi! Get yourself and that oversized lout you call a Spirit Beast back here! Dinner is ready! "

" Yeah, yeah. Just checking our Warning Arrays! " Chuckling in response to his fellow legionary, Xiao Yi turned back with a shout. After 5 years of combat duty, Xiao Yi was glad to have found in his Maniple comrades and Clansmen that he managed to bond with.

Heading to the campfire, he allowed the background conversations of his comrades to lull him as he waited his turn for Dinner, musing about the Rebellion he found himself involved in, Xiao Yi couldn't help but voice out his thoughts.

" I'm glad that this is almost over! Before we left for the mission, I overheard some of the Centurions saying that our forces should be reaching the Headquarters of the Sandy Sect within a week. "

" Yeah, i heard that the Grand Elder wants the rebellion finished so that the Clan can get back to training. It's why they finally assigned a Core Foundation Cultivator to command the whole thing. "

" I guess they must have thought that we had enough tempering, I still have no idea why the Sandy Sect thought they could have succeeded in the rebellion. Did the Grand Elder's show of force NOT give them an idea of what they would be facing ? "

As the conversations broke-down into opinions on what the Sandy Sect was smoking before starting the rebellion, Xiao Yi finished his dinner and started making his way to Qing Yun for their Cultivation Practice. The 5 years of combat worked wonders in improving the efficiency of his self-created Hoplon and Dory Formations, ironing out the minor flaws that could have let to their deaths if it wasn't for his fellow Unit-mates.

Despite Xiao Yi's enlightenment from the Grand Elder's advice, the bonds forged between Xiao Yi and his Unit-mates weren't easy to come by. Thrown into Maniples by the Clan Centurions at the start of the war, Xiao Yi found himself an outcast with Qing Yun, surrounded by Clansmen who had known each other since birth.

Matters weren't helped by the fact that each Maniple had to compete for cultivation resources via the leaderboard. With the majority of his Maniple being new and inexperienced cultivators, they soon found themselves near the bottom of the ranks, looking in envy at the cultivation resources and equipment claimed by those at the Top.

Letting out a slight smile at his wandering thoughts, Xiao Yi remembered how things changed.

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It was 3 months into the Rebellion and they were returning from yet another encounter where they were pinned down by the Sandy Sect Cultivators until another Maniple swooped in to save them. Mustering his courage, Xiao Yi voiced out his observations

" Excuse me! I understand that none of you know me, but we cannot continue this way! Our Maniple isn't working as a group, if we continue like this we WILL start having deaths! We would have had deaths if it wasn't for Ajax's Maniple helping out today! During our fights instead of working together in one Hoplite formation, we're breaking up into multiple small units of Hoplite Formations that the enemy is able to shatter with ease. We need a Commander! I nominate Paris for it! "

Blinking in confusion, Paris pointed at himself in puzzlement as he looked at Xiao YI. " Me ? Erm well, i'm Ok with that ? "

" Yeah, i believe in Paris "

" Paris has the highest cultivation among us "

" Paris as Commander sounds good! "

As members of the Maniple started voicing their agreement, Xiao Yi let out a sigh of relief attempted to sneak away to Qing Yun when he heard his name called.

" As my first act as Commander! I called upon Xiao Yi to be our Drillmaster! Everybody here as seen Xiao Yi practicing the Clan Formations! It is clear that he has talent for it. " Blinking in shock, Xiao Yi gave the only reply he could

" I would be honoured to do so. "


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Within a Month of Paris taking command and Xiao Yi acting as Drillmaster, the Maniple started to climb the ranking.

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100th Place

Qi reaching out to each other, a shadowy Hoplite took form above the Maniple, it's Bronze Shield and Spear flashing in the Desert Sun.

" Again! That was too slow! We need to cut this down to 10 seconds or less! We almost lost Cassendra today because we weren't able to form up in time! Noticing the attack is nothing if we can't defend against it ! "


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70th Place

" Well looks like we rose to 70th Place! I guess taking out one of the Sandy Sect's Good Seeds was worth a lot of Contribution Points. "

" Don't get cocky! We only managed it because he wasn't expecting us to split into two formations. If it wasn't for Paris and his group tricking him, Xiao Yi and his won't have been able to deal that finishing blow. "

" Guess, he was too reliant on the news that our Maniple only acted as 1 Formation! "


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30th Place

" Damn, that was sweet! I mean you hear the rumors of the Kataphraktoi Formation ability to do a Great Strike but i wasn't expecting us to just crush that defensive array! "

" Yeah! I wasn't expecting for Qing Yun to suddenly breath out mirrors of the arrows used by the Formation "


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10th Place

" Maniple, ATTENTION! Receive the Mission! You are hereby dispatched to attack and destroy the Sandy Sect Cultivator Group known as the Windstorm. They have been raiding our Mortal Caravans for supplies and we have found some of the dead mortals missing parts. It is suspected that they have received token support from the Blood Cannibals and are picking up some of their Demonic Arts. "

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Returning to the present, Xiao Yi remembered that fight against Windstorm. They were clearly practicing the Demonic Arts of the Blood Cannibals, charging towards the Maniple without any sense of fear, in a horde of thousands.

Without a hint of fear, the Maniple had countered charged Windstorm, Qi reaching out to each other to form in seconds the Kataphraktoi Formation. Splitting Windstorm in twain with a single mighty blow before raining arrows in a circle to keep them back. With another flash the Kataphraktoi faded away, a Hoplite replacing it in a single breath as it started laying waste to the surrounding Cultivators as the bronze spear burned with the fury of the Sun.

The disorientated cultivators attempted to retaliate, to strike against the Warrior Of Bronze that their foes had call froth but found their blows being caught and deflected by the Bronze Hoplon that protected the Cultivators within. This was too much for Windstorm, It started with a trickle and then a flood as Sandy Sect Cultivators started fleeing. But before they could get too far, the Hoplite dissolved and the Maniple split into Squads, each pursuing a single Cultivator with the Kataphraktoi Formation.

Tomorrow should be enough to finish the Mission, we should be able to catch that sole remaining Cultivator by Mid-day.

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Things did not go as planned. The Maniple caught up to the Cultivator by Mid-Day, but they found him neither alone nor alive. Staring in horror at the Foundation Building Cultivator clad in Blood Cannibal Robes, the Maniple watched as he rose to his feet while munching on the arm of their target.

" I'm sorry, would you all like some ? There's so many of you that i think each of you will only get a bit, but you all did chase him down for me. Come now, what's with that look of shock ? He was your foe. Don't you know that the flesh of Cultivators is the greatest tonic ? For a Clan called the Golden Devils, you lot are remarkably squeamish "

Gripping and breaking the Alert Slip given to each Maniple in a single action, Xiao Yi gave a curt order as he reached out with his Qi. " Maniple, Hoplite Formation. Give me Control. "

As the Hoplite took form, Xiao Yi felt each of his comrades manifest their part of the formation and cede control to him, each member focused on purely channeling their Qi to the Formation. Feeling the strain of single-handily controlling the Qi of the Formation, Xiao Yi commanded the Hoplite to hunker over the Maniple, Shield facing the Blood Cannibal Cultivator and Spear ready to thrust the moment he stepped within range.

Quirking his eyebrow, the Blood Cannibal Cultivator dashed towards the Formation as he attacked with a flurry of Blood Qi Clawstrikes which the Hoplite parried and deflected with it's shield. After 5 minutes the number of strikes increased, after 10 the power within each strike increase threefold and the Cultivator's face started turning dark. Coming to a halt, the Blood Cannibal laid out a low huff of frustration before speaking.

" All right, you lot got me. You've survived longer then i expected and i'm sure your Clan's Experts are making their way here. However, i don't think you lot can last much longer, i can already see that quite a few of you are bleeding from the nose. And you, the Commander considering that they're only experiencing nosebleeds, you must be taking most of the toll from my strikes. I know when to cut my losses, if you lot give up the 10 weakest i swear by my Dao that i will let the rest survive. "

Spitting out a mouthful of blood, Xiao Yi took a brief look at the exhausted but resigned faces of his comrades before replying.

" In the words of our Ancestors. Molon Labe. COME AND GET THEM "




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Yeah.... I can't help it. The moment i read what happen to Xiao Yi, 300 came to mind.

The way i see the Hoplite Formation is that since it requires all members to have a Strong Dao Heart, what better way to show the bonds between them by literally believing in their leader and letting him control the Formation ? I saw how the formation works as something like a hive-mind, where everyone agreed on something before the Formation takes action. So what better way to basically go Plus Ultra then to have just one mind making the decision ?

I'm also trying to emphasis the idea of " The army being the hands and feet of the Commander " and " leading from the front " that the Combat in the Kingdom Manga is about which i always thought was freaking awesome. In this Xianxia version, i see it as the Commander commanding everyone's Qi to what he envisions as best, be it Defence, Attack or even sacrificing some of the members in the Formation for a better chance.

Cool Thing Bonus: Xiao Yi has insight into the Art Of Formations, instead of using it in it's static form, he is able to use it so that certain aspects of the Formation are enhanced. Mechnically, maybe a small boost whenever Xiao Yi is in a Formation.

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Savvas Nicolidis - Good Seed Background
The omakes quantities and wordcounts are amazing.

Anyway.. to present a Good Seed..

Savvas Nicolidis

Background
: Savvas was the son of an unimportant, irrelevant Qi Condenser. From young, he had always an interest in the science, the workings of Cultivation, studying it's methods far more than practicing cultivation itself. Why this way? Why not instead try another way? Why this Dao? What that? Why do some fail, and others arise to blazing heights? Why did even the great cultivators have to die? What was the cause of the century-disasters that afflicted the Clan so? Savvas wanted to know.

Well, not know. He wanted understand. And this was what guided Savvas as he began his cultivation.

Overall Concept: A primarily body cultivator who wants to learn all that is about cultivation, and to unlock it's deepest secrets. Uses Poisons to strike above his realm, and has an extensive guerrilla fighting style.

Good Seed Bonus: Savvas Nicolidis is a Genius (mentally speaking). You have to be, to have any hope of uncovering anything new in an art that has been practiced for untold millenia!

Goals: Savvas Nicolidis wishes to make lasting improvements to the Clan. Particularly, it's knowledge and techniques.

Current Turn: Savvas intends to hunt one of the 8th Sea Qi Condenser Good Seeds and steal their shit.

Age: ~100 (As of Turn 6

Status: Foundation Establishment. Dao: Perspectives

Omakes:

Journal #1 - Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]
Conversations with an Elder - Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest] Original - Fantasy
The Patient Hunter - Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest] Original - Fantasy
The Prey Hunts - Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest] Original - Fantasy
The Muyi Tree - Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest] Original - Fantasy
Tools and Knives - Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest] Original - Fantasy
Perspectives - Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest] Original - Fantasy
Mirages - Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest] Original - Fantasy


Techniques: The Patient Hunter Style - Combining Desert Tortoise Hibernation, Eagle's Eyesight and Spitting Spider's Spit techniques, it's essentially an assassination style for body/poison cultivators like Savvas. They lie undetected, before striking essentially from nowhere to kill.

Life-Saving Treasures:

Qi-Cloaking Oil - A Lifesaving treasure, it hides the life of a cultivator, allowing them to avoid fights - USED
False-Death Apple - Cultivator who eats it emanates the Qi of a Corpse.

Total Impact: +9, represented in the form of a guerrilla fighter, including notable cool stuff such as:

The Patient Hunter Style - A combination of techniques that combines for effective stealthy assassination with poison.
Life-Rending Heart-Crushing Thousand Needles Poison - A potent sentient poison. (Originally Fighting Across Realms item)
Resentful Flag of Sacapolis - Summons Ghosts.
Shaper's Gloves - Transmutes Qi.

Dramatis Personae:
Grigoris, Clan Elder of the Bronze Devils
Xiao Jing (Tearful Chisel), Core Formation Elder of the Sorrowful Blacksmith Clan
 
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Magnus Centenius 2 - In the Mind of a (Mad) Genius Researcher

Magnus Centenius In the Mind of a Mad Genius Researcher

First Person POV -Magnus-

Finding enemy Qi Cultivators may be harder than I thought. It looks like the clan will stop raiding for the next few years after the less than stellar results of the last few decades. Hmmm. No matter, I can just work on refine what I can with the spirit beast I can afford.

Let see, the new poison works well is decent doses, but that is with an injection. How effective is it when dispersed into the air? The ancient text says that some kinds of bacteria don't survive in the air and must in the body or some kind of liquid. I wonder which version mine is? I can't wait to find out, but first more test subjects.

That reminds me, my 2 surviving test subjects, I can remove the adapted bacteria from first and the bacteria defenses from the second and see how they react to each other. Does the new defense still work on the changed bacteria? So much to work learn. Still with I had some Qi Cultivators, its so hard to ask beast questions, and those tamers don't like it when someone might kill their beasts. Would it even work on various beast, or only the one type I tested it on so far? It should work on humans at least.

Though, with the adaptation I saw earlier, they might be willing to get me a few to work on for strengthening a few others. That also might work and helping my low funds.

Magnus Bacteria Poison Experiment Notebook

Year 10 Day 5 (Time since starting work on Bacteria)
Test 519-
New spray of bacteria poison(BP) is now ready. Concentration of BP will be the same for all at 100 cells per ml. Sprays at 10 ml, 25 ml, 50 ml, and 100 ml. Spray at 2 meter distance

Results
10ml-No effect, subject appears to have no response to dose. No new defense or adaptation found.
25ml- Same as 10 ml
50ml- Subject because moderately sick, some defenses beginning to form
100ml- Subject became unconscious within 10 min, minor bleeding, defense against BP formed, minor adaptation formed, but destroyed by new defenses.
It appears that the larger dose attacks the body too fast for defenses to form automatically, and the body has to actively adapt to the BP. If defense form at the same time as the adaptation, the adapted BP is still considered the enemy and destroyed. Perhaps a higher concentration of adapted BP needs to be produced before the automated defenses can begin to form. Still, not a useful weapon in this form.

Year 10 Day 25
Test 526
Increased BP concentration to 250 cells per ml, same quantities

Results
10ml- No effect, subject appears to have no response to dose. No new defense or adaptation found.
25ml- Subject because moderately sick, some defenses beginning to form
50ml- Subject became unconscious within 10 min, minor bleeding, defense against BP formed, minor adaptation formed, but destroyed by new defenses.
100ml- Subject became unconscious within 7 min, major bleeding for all orifices, death after 20min, effects too slow for batter

Year 10 Day 105
Test 606
Increased strength of BP with larger doses of Qi, concentration is at 100 cells per ml, testing 25ml, 50ml, and 100ml

Results
25ml- Subject became unconscious within 10 min, minor bleeding, adaptation formed
50ml- Subject became unconscious within 3 min, major bleeding for all orifices, death after 10 min
100ml- Subject began bleeding 1 minute after spray, signs of confusion and fear within 30 seconds, subject attacked bars in blind panic, unconsciousness delay to 2 min assumed pain prevent unconsciousness. Subject died after 10 min.
Note: Beast next to this subject was splattered with test subject's blood, showed some confusion and panic 1 minute after expose, but did not injure self, also became unconscious after 2 min, death in 15 min.
Side note: when trying this experiment again, Qi was able to burn out the BP, but not all of it at once. If left alone for more than a few hours, the BP will return and more resistant to Qi. Probable increase in BP strength as my own Cultivation improves.

Year 10 Day 208
Test 856
Injection of BP made with my 5th level Qi against beast who has defense/adaption of 4th level Qi strengthened BP

Results-
50ml Def- Spray seems to have no effect after 5min, then subjects begins to bleed before dying. Defenses seem to slow the effect of stronger BP, but in the end was not able to stop it. Note Beast is at 4th level.
50ml Adapt- Spray had no effect, closer inspection shows new BP had been adapted. New Adapted BP looks to be replacing the weaker BP. Note: Using weaker BP on Weaker beast and slowly increasing strength on BP may be a possible future training method for possible students.

Year 11 Day 40
Test 1010
BP Delivery System-mix of smoke with no interaction with BP

Results
Smoke cloud engulfed all test cages, beasts at edge of cloud received similar level of infection as those near middle of cloud. All subjects died within 10 mins. Weapon version of BP completed. For now...

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@occipitallobe

This is the completed version of the bacteria I started in the last Omake, I'm going to add it to my stat page as a special weapon, this is the cool weapon for my first turn. This is an army killer meant to do major damage to rank and file, but only good for slowing down strong opponents and making them waste energy. I wanted to make a poison different than the usual stuff, mass killings over assassination, I worry myself sometimes
Next Omake I think will focus in the tortures of a bottleneck

Also, how did I do on First person and experiment note book, never tried those before
 
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Yan 2 - Not Only Luck
It was a very hot day and the disciples standing in the training grounds were starting to swat just from standing around, Yan himself fund the day somewhat less miserably hot as his new clock - that he never went without those days- shielded him from the worst the sun had to offer but even he was feeling the heat.


Yan and his fellow disciples were at the training ground attending a lesson on one on one combat from one of the few combat specialists that the clan had, a tall man at the 9th​ Heavenstage and from the research Yan did on his new teacher he was stuck in it for some time already.


Yan has come to this lesson by the recommendation of one of his friends, by her account the teacher took the time to battel every disciple attending his lessons in public and giving them tips about their short comings and seeing as Yan just stood in the training ground for two hours watching him battel most of the disciples here -some two hundred or so- that would seem to be true.


It took the teacher one and a half hour to finish the rest of the disciples and get to Yan turns, which by luck or fate was the last, and so Yan took his two short swords and strode in to the make shift arena that was built which was just a bunch of send with a rope surrounding it.



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Dimitri Pateros was an old man in the 9th​ Heavenstage, either his own lackluster talent or an old wound kept him in that realm for more than 70 years and now being a hundred and seventy years old he long since gave up on braking through to foundation establishment but that didn't mean he had nothing to contribute to the clan.


Over his long life –relatively- Dimitri fought a lot of different foes and for the past ten years he started to pass his knowledge on fighting to the younger generations and every one and then he needed to beat some sense into a brat that thought that fighting was a joke, like this new student that came to his lesson.


That student had no stance, his hands were clumsily hanging around his buddy holding his swords like he wanted to not be here, he had opening everywhere, the only thing he was doing right is making one of his swords in a technique Dimitri shacked his head thinking that the kid wouldn't last a second against a trained opponent.


'well might as well teach him that lesson were he isn't going to be hurt… overly much'.


Not a second has passed since the single to start the dual and already Dimitri surged forward aiming to finish the bout in one overpowered and painful strike from his sword to teach the youth the need in respecting combat, yet something that Demetri didn't expect happened his leg sank deeper into the sand then what it should have and got caught on a stone, making Dimitri trip and making his strike lose accuracy and power, allowing the brat to doge the strike.


Unfortunately for Yan, Dimitri fought many foes including ones that had supernatural luck so he quickly understood what happened.


' a luck effect huh, well there are ways arou—' Dimitri couldn't finish his thought as a sword slash appeared in his senses, that he dodged straight into another one but he had already recovered and was able to deflect the strike.


'so maybe the brat has some promise, if I wasn't four stages above him, that would have seriously wounded me but he should learn not to rely on luck, yes, a slow and reliable strike, minima's the amount of interference luck could cause, while still damaging your opponent'.


And Dimitri went to do exactly that but he stopped before he struck.


'something different hmmm… he shifted his stance, before all of the opening were true ones yet now they are traps, he built on the fact that his opponent will assume he isn't skilled and only relays on luck, hah he shows great promise but he still has a lot to learn'.


And so Dimitri struck the boy in one of the opening that wasn't a trap and knocked him into the ground ending the dual.


Turning to the rest of the disciples and with a loud voice started to talk "alright were finished with the first part of the lesson find a partner and try to apply my advice".


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As yen picked up his fallen swords and returned the crowed of disciples to start his search for a partner, he was confused as the teacher didn't give him any advice after their bout, while he gave advice to every other disciple but he couldn't think about it for long as he was found me Melina the friend that recommended him this lesson.


"Yan you are partnering with me for now what friend would I be if I didn't help you on your first" she said he met her at the party that Lang dragged him to, he was pretty sure Lang tried to push them together and Yan himself wouldn't mind it –Melina was a wonderful women- but he will let time decide if there will be something between them.


As Yan got out of his thoughts, Melina already finished dragging into one of the vast number of arenas and they started to train, the lesson itself continued for two more hours and Yan switched between many partners and when the lesson ended the teacher asked him to stay behind.


"I've got to say when you first got into the arena I thought that you would die in your first real combat but you surprised me you have great potential, be here tomorrow before the sun rises".


"I'm afraid I don't quite understand what you want from me senior brother" Yan said a little confused.


"what is there to understand be here tomorrow, if we want you to ever get to your full potential we will need to start somewhere and even if I have to brake every bone in your body to make you learn I will" Dimitri replied.


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Well here is Yan second omake, @occipitallobe is a general skill up in fighting is alright as the bounus for this one?
 
Lin Fan 2 - Burning Hatred
Burning Hatred Omake

Lin Fan Screamed in rage at the loss of his fingers to those Mongrels! his blood red eyes filled with hate and emitting a strange glow, A haze surrounds him as his demonic Bloodline goes Haywire. Lin Fan smiles, a Positively Demonic sight to behold and says "I know what I need to Cheer up! A Massacre'' He runs and runs and kills and kills all bandits in his sight, Bandits dead, More bandits dead, Everything dead. DIE DIE DIE DIE! Lin Fan Plays his flute causing death to everything in sight. Plants wilted, Trees died, and everything he killed came towards him unconsciously to Stabilize his Foundation. Luckily everyone he killed was a Bad person and deserved it. Lin Fan did not want that on his conscious.

@occipitallobe If i get a reward i would like to get rid of the drawbacks i got for giving my guy at high cultivation. Hence '' Stabilizing my foundation''
 
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Burning Hatred Omake

Lin Fan Screamed in rage at the loss of his fingers to those Mongrels! his blood red eyes filled with hate and emitting a strange glow, A haze surrounds him as his demonic Bloodline goes Haywire. Lin Fan smiles, a Positively Demonic sight to behold and says "I know what I need to Cheer up! A Massacre'' He runs and runs and kills and kills everything in his sight, Bandits dead, Mortals dead, Everything dead. DIE DIE DIE DIE! Lin Fan Plays his flute causing death to everything in sight. Plants wilted, Trees died, and everything he killed came towards him unconsciously to Stabilize his Foundation. Luckily everyone he killed was a Bad person and deserved it. Lin Fan did not want that on his conscious.

@occipitallobe If i get a reward i would like to get rid of the drawbacks i got for giving my guy at high cultivation. Hence '' Stabilizing my foundation''
Bruh, do you want Lin Fan to get killed? Unrestrained murdering sprees tend to get civilians in the splash zone, which is very much against Sect Rules. (And no, just saying that it's fine because everyone was evil at the very end is insufficient. Show, don't tell, remember? Show that the opponents were evil by actual description, not an post-note.)

I'd highly recommend that you rewrite the rampage to be against bandits or Blood Cannibals, tbh. (Unless, ofc, if you want Lin Fan to die.)
 
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I changed it to bandits and i kept the plantlife.
He runs and runs and kills and kills all bandits in his sight, Bandits dead, Mortals dead
If the mortals in question were actually evil, that's fine, but spare a few lines to describe what they actually did instead of just telling the audience that they're evil. Write why are these mortals hanging out with those bandits, and stuff like that.

EDIT: You edited it to more bandits. Ok, that's fine, it's certainly a viable option.
 
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I just changed it to more bandits because i am way to lazy to write more right now.
 
Some brief musings, but would any of the other Good Seeds who have a Spirit beast mind if i include them with Xiao Yi in a future Omake ? I'll keep the interaction low but i just thought it would be interesting considering we have at least 3 or 4 Good Seeds with Spirit Beasts and everyone has a different interpretation about them.

Just off-hand, i noticed the following:

Peta = Is the True Beast as Kin Method, where the Beast is as intelligent as it's Partner.

Ninth Prince = Is very much of the Pet method where the Beasts are animals given a dash of training

Xiao Yi = While what i was trying to convey was a midpoint between the 2 where the Spirit Beast is intelligent but with a pure animal mentality. I'm very aware that i did not convey this well lol. Especially since Qing Yun has only appeared as a Plot Device in all my Omakes.
 
Sure! I think the discrepancy is easy enough to resolve with different beasts holding different mentalities and levels of intelligence. Wajo is Peta's unique special thing, not a talent in beast taming or anything, so he's a genuine mythical beast with the same potential she has.
 
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