Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Omake Writer Instructions:

There are four fields you need to fill out.

Omake Link, which is just a link to your first omake for the turn. This makes it easier for me to read them as I do the update - without this it's tough to know off the bat which omake were written this turn, and to properly

Requested Bonus, which is your requested bonus for your omake. You can leave it up to me if you like. You can see more info in the Good Seed infopost here.

Cultivation Aims. For those following unorthodox paths - higher than 9th Heavenstage or later than 7th Dao Pillar paths. Please put in what you are aiming for before you break through. I have left it as 'default'. If you do not edit it, I'll go with that.

Turn Notes - Do you want to do something specific? Enter a Secret Realm? Help the Clan out in some way? If you have something specific you want to accomplish on this turn, put it in turn notes so I can adjust your Fate around it.

All other fields are for QM use to record character information to properly run the flow of the game.
 
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Going through the 13th Heavenstage into Foundation Building is xianxia protagonist territory for a reason.
Yeah, I don't think my writing pace can keep up with the requirements of even going past 10th. IRL stuff takes a bit too much time to invest any more than I already am so I'll probably just go the orthodox path of 9th stage then foundation. Besides, reaching foundation building and going further, faster will probably outpace and outpower all but the most ridiculous of Xianxia protags.
 
Yeah, I don't think my writing pace can keep up with the requirements of even going past 10th. IRL stuff takes a bit too much time to invest any more than I already am so I'll probably just go the orthodox path of 9th stage then foundation. Besides, reaching foundation building and going further, faster will probably outpace and outpower all but the most ridiculous of Xianxia protags.

This is pretty much correct.

Bear in mind Manuel followed the completely orthodox path of cultivation. I've left the cool extras in as an option, but Good Seeds are 'top disciples of a minor clan in the poorest region of the poorest Sea in Turtle World', not 'Heavenly geniuses who can easily surpass others'. They don't get plot armor, either.
 
This is pretty much correct.

Bear in mind Manuel followed the completely orthodox path of cultivation. I've left the cool extras in as an option, but Good Seeds are 'top disciples of a minor clan in the poorest region of the poorest Sea in Turtle World', not 'Heavenly geniuses who can easily surpass others'. They don't get plot armor, either.
So the best way would be to have a system where old cultivators sacrifice their cultivation bases to empower people going through perfect cultivation stages. No biggie!
 
@occipitallobe a question for you. If Lady Jiao is capable of having such effects upon others simply through it being her Dao, what effects does Manuel have upon those around him? He's supposed to be a cunning old monster, so I can't imagine him not knowing, but it hasn't been discussed yet that I've seen.
 
Basically, per turn you can get one Bonus, as seen here.

Bonuses are a power increase relative to your peers in the same realm. So if you're like 'man, Xiao Yi's Secret Bacon Frying Technique lets him fight anyone in the same Heavenstage and win', that's a Bonus. If it's 'this is a technique Xiao Yi uses and is a key part of who he is', you don't need a Bonus for that. Your Good Seed is going to have techniques and treasures - Bonus Cool Things are those that make him more powerful than his peers.

Any omake above the first per turn is converted into a Fate bonus. This is a vaguely generic bonus which I am presently using which is better the more of it there is. (I actually detailed the mechanics here and deleted them - but rest assured longer omake and more omake mean more Fate - take Rina Callista's last Fate roll - her Fate was really good, but sans omake she'd be fighting one and a half Heavenstages above her level, not three.)

This means you can't just stack omake ceaselessly and become OP in one turn, but it means I will never stop rewarding you for writing omake, either.

Ah Ok, i was confused on that part. I will update my Omake Bonus for the First Omake to the mentioned Fate bonus and the 2nd Omake bonus to One Cool Thing, able to fight those 1 stage above him thanks to basically always being able to initiate a formation with QIng Yun who never leaves him

If that's too much, i'll change it to the Fight Anyone in the Same Heavenstage Bonus.

EDITED IN bonuses to Background.

Kudos on the Fate mechanic as well. I guess i'm a more burst style writer, so being able to build up Xiao Yi's story in short chapters revolving around a certain theme makes it easier for me to focus on.
he pain resumed, and with each searing moment he focused on the rising feelings for young Lady Jiao, tearing them out of his heart as he tore his Soul away from his body. A few months of this and the feelings would be gone. The pain was terrible, and the feeling of abandonment, of worthlessness perhaps even worse. He wanted to weep, to die, to rush after her and beg for her forgiveness. He did none of these things, silently enduring the pain.

This is cool. It is a rare few Xianxia that showed the more subtle aspects of Cultivator Battles. This expansion into what a Dao can do at the hands of one who knows it well is awesome.
Yeah, I don't think my writing pace can keep up with the requirements of even going past 10th. IRL stuff takes a bit too much time to invest any more than I already am so I'll probably just go the orthodox path of 9th stage then foundation. Besides, reaching foundation building and going further, faster will probably outpace and outpower all but the most ridiculous of Xianxia protags.

Haha same for me! I think i'm willing to attempt up to 10th but after that seems impossible to me. Really hoping for the RNG to bless me with a 10th so i can focus on making sure Xiao Yi survives what comes next :D
 
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@occipitallobe a question for you. If Lady Jiao is capable of having such effects upon others simply through it being her Dao, what effects does Manuel have upon those around him? He's supposed to be a cunning old monster, so I can't imagine him not knowing, but it hasn't been discussed yet that I've seen.

Some Dao just don't influence directly as strongly as others.

The Dao of Darkness seeks a counterpart to Heaven's Will, a shadow that is willing to fight against the untrammelled might of the Heavens to help seek justice, to redeem the world into something better. More generically, it seeks out things hidden in the darkness and suppressed by the light.

Manuel's Dao offers no combat bonuses, no interpersonal bonuses, and some decent intrigue bonuses. He can see the darkness hidden in the hearts of other cultivators with sufficient time - not evil, but the shadows and hidden, suppressed desires that another might have, and secrets hidden in the darkness of various kind. It's why he was the Elder of Intrigue before he rose to lead the Clan.
 
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He can see the darkness hidden in the hearts of other cultivators with sufficient time - not evil, but the shadows and hidden, suppressed desires that another might have, and secrets hidden in the darkness of various kind.

That is actually pretty awesome. I mean those are literally the " Heart Devils " that plague Cultivators when they attempt to transcend realms. Having a Senior who is able to tell you of your Heart Devils so that you can work on suppressing it/knowing your faults is probably super helpful in allowing the Geniuses to transcend.

I would love to write an Tribulation Boost Omake revolving around this. Just gotta think of a way to come up with workable Heart Devils that fit the current theme i have going for Xiao Yi
 
Some Dao just don't influence directly as strongly as others.

The Dao of Darkness seeks a counterpart to Heaven's Will, a shadow that is willing to fight against the untrammelled might of the Heavens to help seek justice, to redeem the world into something better. More generically, it seeks out things hidden in the darkness and suppressed by the light.

Manuel's Dao offers no combat bonuses, no interpersonal bonuses, and some decent intrigue bonuses. He can see the darkness hidden in the hearts of other cultivators with sufficient time - not evil, but the shadows and hidden, suppressed desires that another might have, and secrets hidden in the darkness of various kind. It's why he was the Elder of Intrigue before he rose to lead the Clan.

God, I know I had a lot of influence in the generation but you took those ideas and ran with them
 
The Quiet Peaks.

Here, there is no easy way through the mountains. No simple passes unguarded and kept clean of Spirit Beasts.

The varied powers are only of major interest every century or two, due to various secret realms opening.

Yuan Clan:

Yuan Clan is the weakest of the three Quiet Mountain powers, and has had historic difficulty in sustaining a mid Nascent Soul cultivator. Yuan Clan is named after the massive stone circles set up in parts of its territory, built before the death of the Third Turtle Child. Every one hundred and sixteen years they regain enough energy to empower themselves briefly, creating the Man-As-World Mountain Array. Spirit Herbs are increased in value, Spirit Beasts gain levels immediately, and various Heavenly Treasures burst out of the earth. This process takes about six years, during which the Array specifically offers trials, with limited numbers of spots behind which many of these things are hidden.

Given the difficulty of the trials, Yuan Clan auctions a certain number of spots off. A certain number (around 20%) are reserved for other Righteous powers in return for longstanding defense and trade agreement, and about 40% are held for Yuan Clan scions. The remaining 40% are auctioned off. Yuan Clan are scrupulous about letting others play fairly in the trials, and the relative poverty of their territory otherwise means this is a major source of income for them.

Qiguai Clan

Qiguai Clan are not dissimilar from Yuan Clan. However, they possess a far more interesting secret realm. It is suggested this secret realm is a scale of the Turtle Emperor, floating between two Seas. Qiguai Clan possess a single doorway, opening once every twenty years for Qi Condensation, once every hundred years for Foundation Building, once every five hundred years for Core Formation, and once every thousand years for Nascent Soul. Notably, two-thirds on average of those who enter never return, but those who do find themselves in possession of considerable benefits.

Qiguai Clan allow any to enter, but charge a fee of one-third of the gains.

Qiguai Clan maintain two Nascent Soul cultivators, one in mid and one in early - they historically raise a new Nascent Soul cultivator a hundred years or so before the Nascent Soul Door opens, and send them in to either death, or tremendous benefit to the clan.

(A note here. Good Seeds can choose to enter Qiguai Clan's magic doorway in any turn while in Qi Condensation. The chance of death is high, though can be reduced somewhat by Omake. The rewards are commensurate, but death is a very real possibility. Having lifesaving treasures is a must. Ideally 2 or 3.)

Magic Oak Sect

Magic Oak Sect are organised around their great Magical Artery Oak. It drops Blood Acorns, which can be consumed to enter the Blood Absorption Challenge. Essentially, those who consume a Blood Acorn may kill one another and gain their powers in full, a much-improved version of Blood Path, though severely limited by acorn numbers. Despite not being used against mortals or innocents, this is enough to make Magic Oak Sect a Demonic Sect, and is usually hated by those around them.

Magic Oak Sect allows their least promising disciples to enter the Blood Absorption Challenge, and also uses it as a punishment - betrayal of the Sect will see you consumed as well.

They are moderately powerful, but their Magic Oak is difficult to defend and requires Beast Cores to be fed, so they spend most of their time patrolling their territory.
 
For lurkers/readers, I have a question.

How much omake are you consuming? Is the average reader deep-diving and going through it all, or mainly hitting the storyposts?

I guess what I'm asking is: would it be helpful if I posted a 'character of the turn' at the end of each turn, with a bit of a description and a link to their Good Seed page (under reader mode so you can just scroll through), or are people consuming most of the writing regardless?
 
I'm reading the entire thread now that I'm caught up and went through the all the side story threadmarks after having caught up on the story, so I'm good.
 
Augustus Servius [DEAD] - Good Seed Background
Augustus Servius

Current Priority: Unable to cook at the speed necessary to keep the hungering hoards fed, Augustus unhappily resigned from the Grand Kitchens to pursue alchemical studies under the tutelage of Hadriana. Alchemy seemed reminiscent of cooking, though the solitude of it was not nearly as enjoyable. The regular meetings with his friends and pill clients help, but don't really replace the lack. He continues to donate the cultivation resources he gets to those who can actually benfit from them, save for when he can sell them in order to get more ingredients to make more pills.

NOTE: If his Qi density approaches the equivalent of Foundation Building he will become less and less willing to spend any amount of time off of the grounds of the Sect, not wanting to risk all of the accumulated easily-digestible qi the sect has invested in him being consumed by a demonic cultivator.
@occipitallobe

Augustus Servius was not so much born as made. His creators, intent on rekindling the embers of a long-lost bloodline, sought out those among the clan with the barest slivers of that ancient legacy laying dormant within their blood. With the aid of the Arrays that her wife had tattooed on her, Hadriana distilled and synthesized the samples within her womb-turned-pill-furnace.

They were brilliant; shooting for the stars but achieving at least the moon. They were monstrous; arranging "accidents" when needed to acquire their samples. And most of all they were ignorant, misguided fools.

The bloodline they tried and failed to resurrect was a grand dream of fairness and endless potential, of effort justly rewarded. And as with all such dreams, the bloodthirsty turtle-world promptly shat on it. How were Hadriana and Valeria to know that their bastardized bloodline would be a crippling hindrance in a world cruelly lacking the Pax Romana?

Augustus was raised with the expectation that the near perfect qi conductivity of his TrueBronze body would allow him to Cultivate with monstrous speed. Alas, it was not to be. His body is actively hostile to every stage of cultivation beyond 2nd Heavenstage. How can he become aware of or open acupoints and meridians that he does not have? His qi conductivity means that all qi within his body spreads to a perfect even distribution, sapping away at any attempt to structure the qi witin it.

Drilled from a young age upon the importance of duty and service to the Clan, the revelation of his infirmity was shattering to him. The sole thread upon which his fragile sense of self-worth clings is that the same stagnantly uniform density of his qi makes him more like a living Spirit Stone than a cultivator. So Augustus endlessly cultivates increasing density of qi within his body not for his own sake but for the sake of the Elder to whom he will gift his corpse to. He was born from a pill furnace at great cost to the clan, so he thinks it only right that he repays that debt in death by becoming a pill.

TLDR: his "cool thing" is that he can can't actually get more powerful, just store more and more qi at more and more density. Maybe hardening his body in the process.

PREVIOUS Priority: helping out at the kitchen, cleaning dishes and collecting the scraps of spiritually potent food waste to give to other Qi Condensation disciples, who aren't crippled like him and might someday be able to actually contribute something worthwhile to the clan..
 
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Updated and neatened up my good seed background and first Omake. Props to @Alectai since I basically copy and pasted his format.

Hopefully will have a second one up before the Turn rolls over. I am full of regret. I had the whole weekend free but thought we were capped at one Omake a turn!
 
For lurkers/readers, I have a question.

How much omake are you consuming? Is the average reader deep-diving and going through it all, or mainly hitting the storyposts?

I guess what I'm asking is: would it be helpful if I posted a 'character of the turn' at the end of each turn, with a bit of a description and a link to their Good Seed page (under reader mode so you can just scroll through), or are people consuming most of the writing regardless?
I haven't read all the seeds, but I do keep up with the ones that catch my attention, like the other poison user(especially since they killed a formation expert), and which ever one catches my attention, A seed of the turn could be fun, and you could write some small interaction between the seed and leader
 
The varied powers are only of major interest every century or two, due to various secret realms opening.
Hmm interesting, although i don't think my Good Seed will be able to benefit much from this since i have him being reliant on Formations.
Magic Oak Sect

Magic Oak Sect are organised around their great Magical Artery Oak. It drops Blood Acorns, which can be consumed to enter the Blood Absorption Challenge. Essentially, those who consume a Blood Acorn may kill one another and gain their powers in full, a much-improved version of Blood Path, though severely limited by acorn numbers. Despite not being used against mortals or innocents, this is enough to make Magic Oak Sect a Demonic Sect, and is usually hated by those around them.

Magic Oak Sect allows their least promising disciples to enter the Blood Absorption Challenge, and also uses it as a punishment - betrayal of the Sect will see you consumed as well.

Brief question about this. Is that a limit by realm for this ? Like is it a all Qi Condensation seeds only ? Because if so, i kinda want to join in on this but feed the Blood Acorn to QIng Yun. Make him stronger so that the formations made with Xiao Yi and Qing Yun are better
 
Hmm interesting, although i don't think my Good Seed will be able to benefit much from this since i have him being reliant on Formations.


Brief question about this. Is that a limit by realm for this ? Like is it a all Qi Condensation seeds only ? Because if so, i kinda want to join in on this but feed the Blood Acorn to QIng Yun. Make him stronger so that the formations made with Xiao Yi and Qing Yun are better

Qi Condensation only, insofar as the Clan knows.

That being said, the Blood Acorns are very much a Sect only thing.

Huh, when's the Yuan Clan's next Secret Realm opening?

About 60 years away (end of Turn 6)
 
For lurkers/readers, I have a question.

How much omake are you consuming? Is the average reader deep-diving and going through it all, or mainly hitting the storyposts?

I guess what I'm asking is: would it be helpful if I posted a 'character of the turn' at the end of each turn, with a bit of a description and a link to their Good Seed page (under reader mode so you can just scroll through), or are people consuming most of the writing regardless?


That sounds really cool to me! I haven't read everyone's stuff, just a selection. Particularly as more Seeds appear that would be a really helpful feature.
 
Rina Callista 4 - The Crash of Thunder
Rina Callista
The Crash of Thunder
The years since her great opportunity carried on--and Rina found herself in a strange and unusual position.

That of being a winner of all things.

It started a little bit slowly--the surge of success as her bottom-of-the-third Heavenstage cultivation rocketed up to the peak--a relatively minor gain in absolute terms but enough to be noticeable in the practice exercises. She continued to try and take best advantage of the opportunity, scoring a few victories from time to time thanks to the surprise, but all in all it just served to be getting her back on track.

That was what she thought in those early weeks, but her evolution was far from complete.

A few weeks of training later, and she broke through to the Fourth Heavenstage of Qi Condensation--officially now being back to par with what was expected of a disciple of her age. She was moved from the 'Elementary' grade to the 'Intermediate' grade, deemed fit for simple missions beyond the Fortress' walls, contributing in truth to the Clan's fortunes instead of merely being a child who consumed material but provided nothing back in turn. Her first voyage beyond the walled settlements of the Clan was... Stark.

It was one thing to know you resided in a barren desert, made habitable by unending labor and far more wealth than any more ruthless group would spend on such comforts. It was another thing to live it. Jagged rock and sand wherever the eye could see! Getting in everywhere you could think of and constantly scratching and itching! Even the powers of Cultivation couldn't render one entirely free from the confines of the environment! Her ancestor's fashion sense seemed a great deal more sensible in light of all of this--she was sure the mountain had problems of its own after all but something that didn't quite fit so loosely would be a godsend right around now!

This, apparently, was a standard hazing tactic of rookies who were spending time outside of the Clan's estates for the first time--which is why nobody had any little ointments or something to deal with the rashes and welts that came along and why was this even a thing? A shared experience that brings people together?

...

She supposed that made sense, everyone always did commiserate about the bloody damn desert when it was time for meals. Which then got springboarded to all kinds of other chatter about the day to day lives--veterans complaining about how the desert constantly puked up bandits who somehow thought that murder and mayhem was a better life than living well in the villages and towns of the desert, that and invaders from abroad who saw the rich lands of the Clan and thought they were free to take their share. By murder.

This was the mission of the day, a reprisal to a group of bandits that rose up--disbelieving that the Golden Devils would ever strike down at them while occupied with the affairs of the Blood Cannibals and the apparently recent clashes exercised between the two Great Powers of the desert. Reminding them that the Golden Devils did not require their best to put their boot in on some scrubs who found a couple lesser spirit stones and thought that made them experts.

"Usually, these kinds of things go perfectly fine" Julius would say at the table--a veteran of the Ninth Heavenstage who was getting on in years--not expected to make the breakthrough to the Pillar Construction--No, wait, the external term was Foundation Establishment--stage. Good enough to provide knowledge to the new in regional police actions and to lead mass mobilizations, but no more than that. "But every once in a while you run into some lunatic who picked up a minor legacy from the Raging Fury Sect and manages to bootstrap himself up to the top of Essence Gathering. The old barbarians were lousy about spreading that around, and the Heavens'll never pass up an opportunity to let an untreated pinprick turn into a terrible infection. Thus, we're here to make our displeasure known in a way they can't simply ignore. Callista? You'll be the backup."

Rina would freely admit to straightening up, barely keeping herself from spilling the soup that was the clan's travel meal. "I'm sorry, me?" She would ask, confused at why a barely-past-aspirant child was expected to cover for someone at the peak of the first Realm in a pinch. He nodded at her protest. "Yes, you, we've got orders to see how you do in a real world encounter, so we'll be counting on you if they're stronger than expected"

She didn't understand why this was apparently what was going on. But apparently that's what it was! She got some funny looks from the other newbies at the table, some even sympathetic! She was certain that there was probably some good reason for this and it was going to be all taken care of, she just needed to do her very best!

Naturally, this meant that everything did--in fact--get spicier than she thought it would be.

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It started out as expected--the Golden Devils and their fighters marching up on the bandit stronghold--a cave dug into one of the larger rock spikes dotting the desert--and bellowed out a challenge to the barbarian thugs. It was answered with a stream of insults Rina was far too shy to recount later, and a storm of arrows firing out and raining down on the advancing formation. Shields went up as the phalanx rallied its strength--and the arrows were either shed or buried into the bronze plates. Simple enough, straightforward and as expected.

But then came the cackling.

"Wonderful." Julius shook his head and stepped forward. "Right! Out with it then bandit! Let's get this over with, we've wasted enough time with you scum to begin with."

"Jejejejeejeje" You don't even know how to describe the noise that came out of the cave mouth--a hunched, crooked looking figure stepping out, skin blotched with poisons and looking strangely bloated despite his apparent ill form. "Fools! Did you think you were here to face a group of rabbits? You have fallen for our great scheme!" He giggled and gestured forward, two--somewhat less unhealthy looking--figures stepping out. "They have served their purpose, delivering us a great banquet! Soon, all the world will know the name of the Yellow Dune Sect! Take solace in knowing that you will be the first to feed us!"

Julius rolled his eyes. "You say all this, but we keep hearing the same story again and again. It hasn't panned out yet, and it won't happen anytime soon." He drew his blade and set his eyes on the leader. "Hoplite Formation! Soldiers! Take on the one to our left! Callista! The one on the right is yours! Don't let him interfere!"

Rina stood up straight and squeaked. "Yessir!" She stepped forward behind him, feeling the tide of Essence as the remaining soldiers of the Clan gathered their might together--not enough to jump realms, but it should be enough to handle the common bandits and the disciple.

Her job was to... She squinted, focusing her senses on him, and paling slightly. He noticed this, and gave a cruel smirk, licking his lips.

He was Sixth Heavenstage.

Wasn't this a bit too much?!?

She wasn't given a chance to complain though, as he sprung to battle with a laugh. She felt more than saw Julius leap into battle, matched by the Cultivation of his foe. The remaining enemy disciple looked to be Seventh Heavenstage--but he would probably be dealt with by the formation.

Her shield went up--her training compensating for her surprise--and it bent backwards as a claw rang against it like a gong. She skidded back, retreating ten paces as she lowered the weapon--only seeing the disciple screaming down on her anyway!

Her main hand reached for her belt, drawing the truncheon slung there, and in the same motion, she lashed out to catch the enemy at his side. He snorted dismissively, and rolled off to the side. His hands had by now been coated in congealed blood, forming a series of wicked claws.

"Arrogant, to think a little girl could face a master of the Blood Path!" He coldly laughed. "I'll take great pleasure devouring you when the Master has destroyed your forces." He lunged forward again, met with Rina's shield, this time properly angled to deflect the force. "A child of the fourth Heavenstage! Facing Me?!? I have slain hundreds in single combat! My battle experience dwarfs any you could gain in your little houses!"

Rina's lips pursed--she didn't really... Like this guy's talk.

More importantly, wasn't he kind of weak? Oh sure, she wasn't expecting him to be particularly exceptional--but for someone two Heavenstages beyond her, it shouldn't really be this easy to ward him off?

She even felt like she could strike back a little bit...

And she did so--her shield bashing into his face. He screamed as he fell back, blood pouring from his nose. "What!?!" He spat. Stunned and baffled--only to be struck in the ribs with Rina's Truncheon. "Such power... Were you hiding your Cultivation?!?" He spits blood, eyes reddened as his rage builds.

Rina doesn't see it though, because she's busy twisting her shield around, and slamming the rim into his teeth. Several broke and he goes falling back, clutching at his face. "Ahhgh!" He whines, the only thing he can think of being the pain of having much of his face reduced to jelly.

He stops though when Rina changed weapons again, clubbing him in the side of the head and caving his skull in. He looked blankly for a moment, staring.

Then fell to the ground.

"NOOOOOOO!" Came the screeching voice of the master. "My disciple! What have you done to him?!?" Rina spins around, bringing her shield up--but doesn't need to, as Julius took keen advantage of the opportunity to bury his blade under the man's armpit, wriggling into his organs and gouging most of them out. He looks, cluelessly, in no way comprehending what had unfolded.

Then he slumps over himself.

By this point, the outcome wasn't in any real doubt. Julius took over the execution of the remaining disciple--the Hoplite Formation made quick work of the remaining bandits--and the site was plundered for all valuables stolen and information on the legacies retrieved.

"Good thing we caught this early." Julius mentioned, reading the books. "It's always a pain in the neck suppressing a Blood Path power that's had some time to spin up. We caught it though before the first generation could break through or gather many disciples." He nodded, satisfied, and tucked the books away to be archived upon return. He then turned to Rina, who was looking at him suspiciously. "You have questions?"

"That disciple was the Sixth Heavenstage" Rina asked. "He shouldn't have been that weak--was there some flaw in their method?"

"None that aren't inherent to the Blood Path." Julius shrugged. "No, you beat him legitimately--the higher ups have wanted to test how much of an advantage your constitution's evolution gave you. Estimate was that it was two stages--seems like it's closer to three though."

"That doesn't seem to make much sense?" Rina frowned. "I never noticed anything like that in training..."

"You think they send people at your level for sparring practice?" Julius shook his head. "Everyone who volunteers for that is expected to restrain their cultivation to match their opponent, and wind it up as needed to keep you on the losing side. You've been fighting them without the handicap everyone else gets. Or haven't you thought it to be strange that your record hasn't changed even being moved up to the intermediate levels?"

Rina considered that for a time. "... No, I didn't" She slumps. "I've just been focusing too much on being the best I can be, instead of focusing on everyone else... That does make me feel a little embarrassed."

Julius laughed, and patted her on the head (Why does everyone keep doing that!) "You're a good girl Callista, just keep doing your own thing, and everything'll work out just fine for you."

Well, that was how it should be. So... Good?

She supposed this meant though that she could take more ambitious missions in the future...
 
This marks the 10,000 word Omake point for my ambitions to turn Rina into a Protagonist Tier Character! Huzzah!
 
For lurkers/readers, I have a question.

How much omake are you consuming? Is the average reader deep-diving and going through it all, or mainly hitting the storyposts?

I guess what I'm asking is: would it be helpful if I posted a 'character of the turn' at the end of each turn, with a bit of a description and a link to their Good Seed page (under reader mode so you can just scroll through), or are people consuming most of the writing regardless?
I am obviously not a lurker, but I try to read most of what goes on in the thread. I do think that spotlighting a character and adding a bit to them for the omake writer to work with could be cool though.
 
Minervina Barda 2 - A bouquet of life and death
Minervina Barda 2: A bouquet of life and death

Mother would be so pleased I finally found a use for those flower arranging skills she beat into me.

"I always preferred helping my father with fishing as a girl as opposed to lessons in the feminine arts." She says lightly to Lotus Hopping Toad. Apparently the ugly giant of a man had stalked and killed the other members of her small group of aspiring herbalists as they split up to scour this corner of the Vermillion Hills for suitable plants. With elegant gestures she finishes pouring a sweet smelling tea for both of them.

Her face screws up into a look of distaste. "You know, I never understand why you so called 'Righteous' Cultivators think it's perfectly reasonable to hunt down my cousins and refine their bones into pills while despising Blood Path artists for their own gore soaked Dao?"

She pauses for a moment, as if waiting for a reply. "What, no witty rejoinder? No pus-filled sermon on the divine wisdom of the mighty and how striking down those less favoured than yourselves is never a sin, no matter how callous or greedy your true intentions? Well we should thank the Heavens for small mercies I suppose." She lifts her cup to the heavens in a sardonic benediction before downing its contents.

It wasn't that she had known them very well. Despite being into her third decade of life she still hadn't mastered the art of forging close connections with her peers. It was more a feeling of obligation. She owed her clan siblings a debt of blood and pain. She glanced across the neatly laid out rugs and tea things toward the Foundation Stage Cultivator. Well she made it a point to always pay her debts in full.

As for Lotus Hopping Toad, his eyes looked like they were about to burst right out of his skull. Which would be a shame since they were pretty much the only part of his body he still had any control over. His limbs stubbornly refused to move, his breathing was increasingly laboured and whats worse his Cultivation base felt like it had been wrapped in bands of iron and dropped in an ocean of lead. Who was this Devil Witch and how dare she do this to him! He was Lotus Hopping Toad! The Cauldron Master of Black Mountain, The Alchemist Lord of the Vermillion Hills and no first realm brat should be able to best him! How had she done it!?

She looked into the helpless man's eyes a moment and she could see the question in them. "Still trying to work it out aren't you? Oh the arrogance of Alchemists never fails to amaze me. You think yourselves masters of the natural world, but your obsession with fire and crucible tends to leave you blind to more subtle forms of transformation." She sits back, pours herself more tea and observes the older Cultivator keenly. She would need to write up her observations later. After all, she was never going to find willing test subjects for this particular concoction. If her math was on point, the pain should start setting in round about …….. Now.

Right on cue, the paraylzed man's eyes widen in surprise and then glaze over. That's the extent of reaction his body will allow to the excruciating agony that begins to tear through his body and erode his sanity.

She had known he wouldn't be able to resist the challenge. He had stalked and killed her colleagues with stealth and swiftness, clearly unsure if they had any powerful talisman or unseen benefactor who would step in to protect them. After the third kill he was confident that the Golden Devils couldn't touch him.

So when he came for her, she didn't run, but instead greeted him. A warm fire, kettle boiling, elegant rugs and bedrolls set out and as fine a meal as she could muster. She had been the perfect hostess, ushering him to a seat by the fire with servile grace.

He had, of course, expected poison, and as a famed alchemist he had expected to triumph over this poor little Golden Devil girl in an art so close to his specialty.

Minervina wasn't so humble as to deny that she smirked as he tested every dish she brought him. He sniffed suspiciously over the rice and squinted at the shredded venison in its moist gravy for a full incense time. She almost cackled as he surreptitiously dipped some kind of testing tool in the drinks she brought out.

He never once glanced at the humble clay vase and its bouquet of roses that graced the centre of the rug. He recognised the roses as a benevolent variety, almost mundane apart from a small blessing of Air Qi that they used to spread their pleasant aroma into the surrounding environment. The Black Oak, Leaden Limbs Venom was at the bottom of the vase. Thick in the torrid Yang energy of a fetid swamp, the venom eagerly entered the flowers along with its water, only to then be propelled by the flowers native Air Qi out into the pleasant little campsite. The self proclaimed 'Alchemist Lord' was doomed before he even finished sitting down.

Eventually things reached their natural conclusion. She stood up and stepped around the cooling body to start packing away the campsite. She had the herbs she needed and staying out here alone wasn't safe.

She screws her face up again as she eventually gets to the grimy task of going through the dead man's things. "Important Note: Sadly, despite their elevated control of heavenly energies, I can confirm that Foundation Stage Elders do in fact shit themselves upon death like everyone else. Senior Brother Hyakles lied to me."

Fortunately the man wore his greatest treasure outside his robes. A bag, seemingly simple homespun cloth. A quick glance inside took her breath away. It was deep enough that you could jump in and wide enough to swing a cat in there. It was full of pills and lesser treasures, but she would happily tithe those to the Clan if it meant they would let her keep the bag. Most would consider it too rich a treasure to waste on one like her, but it was such a perfect tool she would be willing to fight for it.

She was about to put it away and begin her journey when a flash of bronze caught her eye. Three pills, each a glimmering, almost molten bronze colour. She drew them out the bag as a lead weight settled in her stomach. She knew instantly that this was all that remained of her squadmates. One pill for each of them.

Sebastianus Vatatzes
Eustathius Zonaras
Donus Lecapenas

Three more names to etch into her soul. Three more deaths to weigh her down and dog her footsteps. She clenched the pills in her fist, wanting nothing more than to destroy the hideous things.

No. she glanced at the poisoned roses that had saved her life today. That was the lesson. Life and death are intertwined, you cannot have one without the other. Both are by turns beautiful and hideous, they simultaneously feed on each other and destroy each other.

It wasn't much as heavenly revelations go, but it was something, and Elder Manuels lectures had made it clear that such things are to be seized with both hands when they appear, because finding them a second time is usually less profitable than chasing rainbows.

Clutching the pills she strides off, not towards the Clan, but towards a promising cave she spotted a few weeks back during their initial scouting. She would cultivate now, with the power sacrificed by her peers in her hand and these ideas fresh in her mind.

Life feeds on Death, Death brings forth Life. She would ensure todays deaths brought new life to their dwindling Clan and perhaps that new growth would be their enemies downfall.

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A supplement to my previous Omake for this turn. Ambushing and killing a Cultivator a whole Great Realm higher than her was the type of event that needed to be commemorated after all. The Pills should also be a convenient (if terribly grim) way to justify my desired bonus for the turn which more Cultivation Speed.

Also open to suggestions on what exactly to name Minervina's slowly developing Dao. I am pretty keen on the cyclical relationship between life and death being the key theme, but am short of a pithy one word way to sum it up.

Pinging @occipitallobe so this isn't lost amongst the great waves of Omake this thread has generated!
 
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For lurkers/readers, I have a question.

How much omake are you consuming? Is the average reader deep-diving and going through it all, or mainly hitting the storyposts?

I guess what I'm asking is: would it be helpful if I posted a 'character of the turn' at the end of each turn, with a bit of a description and a link to their Good Seed page (under reader mode so you can just scroll through), or are people consuming most of the writing regardless?
I mainly hitting the storyposts and the alerts ,because the good seeds don't have any importance in the story for the moment ,also surely many of them will die.
But if after they take more importance, I will read it.
 
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Also open to suggestions on what exactly to name Minervina's slowly developing Dao. I am pretty keen on the cyclical relationship between life and death being the key theme, but am short of a pithy one word way to sum it up.

One word that springs to mind for me would be Saṃsāra. It's kinda about reincarnation, but in a very even fashion ? Like that is no Up or Down, just that everything is basically the same.


Qi Condensation only, insofar as the Clan knows.

That being said, the Blood Acorns are very much a Sect only thing.



About 60 years away (end of Turn 6)

That's a shame. Hmm, i guess the Yuan Trials seemed to be the safest of the bunch. Do we need to do anything to be able to get a spot ? Like use a Omake bonus as the One Cool thing to give us a shot ?
 
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