Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Definitely good then that we made a special point of grinding up our internal cohesion and took the trade route. We may have plenty of Enemies, but that seems to be it with regards to persistent problems. The fact the Big Dick Righteous Sect would prefer us sitting on the trade route (Where they can be assured that their shipments through the Desert will arrive on time with a predictable toll, but not requiring enormous shows of force on their part to see it gets through) than most of our neighbors is very handy. Since Jingshen would probably price gouge them if they held it, and the less said about the Blood Cannibals, the better.
 
@occipitallobe Not sure how closely you keep track of Good Seed ages but I would like to know the age of mine at the current moment. If I understand the timeframe right he should be around 36 right now but I want to check. (Telios)
 
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Is trying to develop unorthodox means of cultivation a possibility? For example, trying to advance through Qi condensation in a non-normal manner. Like trying to meld two different types of Qi, etc.
 
@occipitallobe Not sure how closely you keep track of Good Seed ages but I would like to know the age of mine at the current moment. If I understand the timeframe right he should be around 36 right now but I want to check.

I barely do if I'm to be honest. Each turn is 20 years, so just increment by 20 from your starting age each turn.

My broader assumption is everyone is the same rough 20-40 age group, so at most they differ by 1 turn in age.

Is trying to develop unorthodox means of cultivation a possibility? For example, trying to advance through Qi condensation in a non-normal manner. Like trying to meld two different types of Qi, etc.

Yes, but also no.

Yes - it's possible, and a Good Seed might be able to do it with a lot of luck and a lot of effort.

No, in the sense it more than likely ends up with them stuck in a single cultivation stage, wasting away, or dead. Good Seeds aren't xianxia protagonists - leaving the beaten path can very easily be deadly.
 
A few more questions of mine

Do omakes apply bonuses to Cultivation survival rolls
In general is the bonus that a good seed gets from omake based on number or size of omakes
 
Yes, but those who go beyond 9th are invariably those with weak Dao-Hearts who the Clan is not interested in raising to Foundation Building, so they may as well make them unparalleled in Qi Condensation. Given the 11th Heavenstage comes at the end of a cultivator in the Qi Condensation's lifespan, usually you see a lot of cultivators ending their journey at the 10th Heavenstage, which isn't a bad deal. It's not as powerful as Foundation Building, but if your only other option is 'grow old and die', why not be stronk?

Hmm oh wow. I was not expecting that. Looks like the Clan's focus is on amassing Foundation Building Cultivators, which makes sense since usually only the Protag in Xianxia is the one that builds up to ridiculous levels before they ascend
 
Xiao Yi 4 - [Ruminations on Dao]
@Enigma Just borrowing some aspects of your Dao explanation for this Omake. Thanks! 🙏

Xiao Yi [Ruminations on Dao]

" Your Dao is the representation of your core beliefs, developed throughout your life and experiences and it is central to your cultivation. It is the path you tread, one does not choose a Dao, a Dao choose you. You who followed your Dao will have a strong Dao heart and your cultivation will reflect that. With these words, i conclude my lecture and would like you Juniors to consider, What is your Dao and Are you following it.. ? "

The Grand Elder's last lecture left Xiao Yi in a contemplative mood.

I've always thought that my Dao is the Dao of Vengeance, but did the Dao choose me ? I swore vengeance on the Beast that ruined my Old Clan and took everything away from Qing Yun and I, but what steps have i taken to pursue this Dao ?

If that truly is my Dao, then i should be pursuing all avenues for Vengeance. Why did i choose to approach Mother's Clan and not be a Blood Cultivator ? I would have amass strength quickly via killing Mortals, and like the Blood Cannibal pointed out i could have killed and ate fellow cultivators to absorb their Qi.

In fact, for strength could i not have delve into the forbidden arts and traded away my life for power ? If i resigned myself to death, i can wounded the Blood Tiger badly enough that it will not survive it's next challenger.

But if the Dao of Vengeance is not my path, then what is the Dao that has chosen me ?


Going through the Forms of his Spear Kata in a moving mediation, Xiao Yi reminisce on the past 20 years of his life as a Clansman of the Golden Devils.


Of the first time he was able to eat his fill since his parents passed away

Of the Cultivation Arts taught to him as a member of the Clan

Of the many Clansmen who reached out to him when news of him returning to the Clan spread



As his Ji slashed through the air, Xiao Yi threw himself into the katas, falling deeper into his memories, of what he experienced.


Of the first time he saw the Hoplite Formation by the Elders of the Clan during the admittance ceremony for the Clan Cultivators

Of practicing and drilling in lockstep with his Clansmen to form the Hoplite

Of reaching out his Qi and feeling a sense of Wholeness the first time he and his batch-mates formed the Hoplite

Of participating in mock battles pitting Hoplite against Hoplite to learn the Strengths and Weakness of the Formation and of themselves.

Of developing the Hoplon and Dory Formations with Qing Yun



Ji speeding into a blur, Xiao Yi remembered the bonds he made with his Clansmen


Laughing with his Maniple around their Campfire

Having a drinking contest with Paris

Attending Cassendra's wedding

Being named Godfather to Ajax's son

The young Clansmen excited faces whenever Qing Yun showed up to play with them.



Leaping to the air with his Ji held high, memories of the recent battle with the Blood Cannibal coming froth


Of the trust his Maniple put into him by naming him Commander

Of them giving him control of the Hoplite without hesitation when he asked for it

Of them channeling their Qi together to deflect and parry the the attacks of the Blood Cannibal 1 realm above them

Of their spear flickering and forcing the Cultivator away

Of a Clan Elder arriving and driving the Blood Cannibal away

Of falling to the ground and hearing with the last of his consciousness " Good Job Junior Xiao Yi, you have kept your Maniple safe and you have survived . "



Striking the ground with a earth-shattering strike, Xiao Yi thought to himself

I know what my Dao is. I walk the Dao Of Formations and i vow to keep my Clan safe. My past will not be repeated and I will cultivate to be better able to defend my Clan from those who seek to harm it. With my Formations, our bonds will be our strength.

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@occipitallobe
This is basically a continuation of the previous omake, where surviving a Death battle + reflecting on his cultivation progress made Xiao YI wonder on his Dao.

It also gave me a opportunity to showed that Xiao Yi has matured from the First Omake, where now that the memories of his fallen clan are no longer so fresh, he is now better able to reflect on his life and realize that the Path Of Vengeance he sworn was just that of a Mortal raging at the heavens.

For all that it's just been 1 turn, 20 years is enough for a person to change, and i like to think that Xiao Yi has matured into a more sensible person.

Bonus if applicable = Cultivation as a kind of discovering my real Dao.

If not eligible for another bonus, i'm cool with it just being Xiao Yi's development into someone mature.

P.S: I guess this is what happens when i have a Off-day, am invested in a quest and don't dare to go out lol
 
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Ninth Prince 2 - Facades and Reality, Part Two
Right, here's part two of my omake bit. Sorry for the wait, had to figure out how to write the Ninth Prince scaring off a Core Formation Cultivator

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Ninth Prince
Facades and Reality, Part Two


After a mildly embarrassing start to the Ninth Prince's true journey (it's not his fault that west and south look so similar!), the Ninth Prince was racing through the desert dunes, a man on a mission.

And that mission was GREAT JUSTICE! Specifically, bringing GREAT JUSTICE! to the three Qi Gathering Battle Blood Cannibal Sect members who both the Contribution Points Board and also that nice old mortal said were wreaking havoc among the humble villages of this area.

Why, the Ninth Prince's very blood boiled at the thought of those poor, defenseless mortals being preyed upon by cultivators, having their flesh, blood, organs, and bones refined into easily digestible qi while suffering unimaginable agony.

He could almost hear their screams in the distance…

Wait. No. Those were actual screams.

They appeared to have come from his west, meaning that the Ninth Prince was right all along! HA!

...It also meant that there were mortals being attacked right now, most likely by the foul fiends he had been sent here to capture.

Quickly pulling out a map from one of his pockets, the Ninth Prince scanned it for potential targets of a Battle Blood Cannibal Sect attack, and realized that there was apparently a city within a two hour's ride from his current position.

Huh. Why would anybody place a city here, so far away from any actual civilization?

The Ninth Prince scanned his desolate surroundings, before realizing that he'd apparently missed the fact that there were an awful lot of villages in quite close proximity to each other.

But that was easily forgiven, the Ninth Prince had no use for petty knowledge such as geography when there was GREAT JUSTICE! to bring to evildoers.

CUE DRAMATIC POSE!

But not really, since there were still mortals around, and morale would be drastically lowered if such an awe inspiring figure such as the Ninth Price were to do something so silly. Also, he needed to get to this city as soon as possible.

Via a combination of months of training, subtle changes in the position of the Ninth Prince's feet, and the Ninth Prince pointing his spear at the direction of the screams, Ulo was instructed to move with as much haste as possible towards this city being attacked by repellent ruffians.

After about two hours of standing like a badass while Ulo frantically slithered to the west, the city was finally in view. The Ninth Prince supposed it would have been a perfectly respectable city in times of peace, with white stone walls, an architectural plan that decreed that the taller buildings would be placed closer to the middle, and quite a few works of glass and marble just standing around, with the entire thing being accentuated by some tasteful fires.

...Looking back at the city, the Ninth Prince realized that the fires may not have been intended, or wanted, or really anything other than the work of a member of the Battle Blood Cannibal Sect.

Luckily, the city was maybe a 10 minute snake ride away, and a city that large wouldn't be destroyed in ten minutes by anything less than a Core Formation cultivator, and what were the chances of somebody like that coming here? Less than nothing.

Still, the time for musing was over. Ulo had effectively reached the city walls. Now was the time for action!

Step one was, of course, finding the villains attacking the mortals, who were most likely using them as fuel for their horrid little blood path. The fifth sea had nothing like what these blood path cultivators were doing, and that alone proved that it was unnatural. After all, if something was useful or good, it would already be in the fifth sea.

After sending Raj's minions around the mortal city, the Ninth Prince couldn't find a single person outside of the walls, with there being no real indication of who could have caused such devastation.

All that the Ninth Prince could see was the mortal city, and the human shaped figure hovering about 50 feet above the ground, every so often tossing a single dagger that destroyed buildings, killed mortals, started fires, and generally wreaked havoc.

Well fuck.

Flying like that was the domain of at the very least a specialized Foundation Establishment cultivator, though any Core Formation cultivator could fly. For the sake of his continued survival, the Ninth Prince desperately hoped the flying man was a Foundation Establishment cultivator, but going by his luck, it was almost certainly not.

Well fuck.

The Ninth Prince desperately wracked his brain for some way out of this situation, but even his genius level intellect offered but two solutions to the predicament he was currently in.

Option the first: Get away from the mortal city as quickly and quietly as humanly/snakely possible, hoping beyond hope that the Core Formation cultivator hadn't noticed him, and pretend he'd never even heard the screams. His life would be out of danger, the Naag mortals would still have a protector, and nobody would know. Nobody except him.

Option the second: Confront the Core Formation cultivator with nothing but a Qi Gathering cultivation base, three snakes on the same level as him, the Orb of Shesha, and immense amounts of bravado. It was almost certain death, a fool's option that would make no difference at all to whether the mortal city survived. It was the height of foolishness to even suggest this option, let alone plan to carry it out.

And yet…

The Ninth Prince would never be able to live with himself if he didn't even try. So yes, he was going to try and hold off a Core Formation cultivator. Because he was the Ninth Prince, and that was reason enough.

While the Ninth Prince was prepared to go to his death, that didn't mean he would force is Contracted Beasts, his partners, to do the same. After hopping off Ulo's head, in an uncharacteristically serious voce, the Ninth Prince addressed all three of his beasts. "I am going to try and stop that Core Formation cultivator. I will most likely die. I have no intention of forcing you to die with me. If you wish to leave, then I will not try and stop you. If you stay, know that this is a fight we are most likely not going to walk away from."

Even after a full minute, none of his snakes even tried to move away.

...It sure was interesting, how the rain in the desert made it look like the Ninth Prince was crying, despite there not being a cloud in the sky.

"Right. Thank you, my friends. Now, ONWARDS! FOR GREAT JUSTICE!"

And with those words, the Ninth Prince hopped back onto Ulo's head, and began racing to right below the Core Formation cultivator.

Flying Poison Dagger was pleased. And really, it would be hard not to be. An entire city's worth of cultivation materials - for that was all mortals were good for - just waiting to be harvested to fuel his cultivation.

And best of all, he wouldn't have to hide this! Elder Child Corpse Gulper had given him express permission to wreak havoc on the Golden Devil Clan's mortal farms - though, for whatever reason, the Golden Devil Clan preferred to call them 'protectorates' - meaning that he would get
rewarded for advancing his cultivation!

The only unfortunate part of the whole affair was that mortals didn't really offer much in the way of a cultivation increase at his level. It was why he'd harvested those three Qi Gathering members of his sect. Anything that could increase his cultivation was a good thing.

He'd spent about an hour just playing with this specific little mortal farm, sending his dagger in to start a few fires, kill a few mortals one at a time, collapse a few buildings, and other such things of that nature.

Mortal flesh tasted better when seasoned by fear. Hateful Flame Torture said that he prefered the acrid taste of pain, but Hateful Flame Torture was a plebian with no appreciation for true gourmet.

During his musings, Flying Poison Dagger noticed a small little boy riding a snake with a drop of metal in its scales, radiating the aura of Qi Gathering. Hah! It appeared as if he would have another quick meal before finishing up playing with his food.

Oh, what was this? The little boy had stopped moving, and... appeared to be pointing a spear at him. The boy then spoke, with a courage that he supposed would be admirable if it wasn't so damned foolish. "FOUL FIEND! I AM THE NINTH PRINCE, AND IN THE NAME OF THE GOLDEN DEVIL CLAN AND THE FLOOD DRAGON GANG, I WILL BRING
GREAT JUSTICE! UPON YOUR HEAD!"

Oh that was hilarious. Flying Poison Dagger doubled over with laughter for a solid twenty seconds, still hovering in the air, before getting ready to show this whelp true fear. After all, it added quite a nice bitter taste to the meat that was hard to achieve with more mundane seasoning.

"Interesting introduction, little
worm. Allow me to respond in kind. I am Flying Poison Dagger, of the Battle Blood Cannibal Sect. I have started wars, crafted plagues, and personally harvested thousands of lives, all to further my cultivation. The flying dagger that gave me my name has been bathed in the blood of my enemies, and I have used it to kill no less than three Core Formation experts. But above all, the one thing that makes it certain that you are not on my level is this: I am in Core Formation. You are in Qi Gathering. You have no hope whatsoever. All you are is a snack to me, so why don't you make this easier on the both of us and lay down and die."

That should be enough to season the meat properly. Before Flying Poison Dagger could get this little show over with, the boy spoke.

"You're right. I have no way of stopping you with my current cultivation level. The difference in power level is too great. I can't beat you."

Huh. Normally it took a little more effort to break them, but this
was a Qi Ga-

The boy spoke again, jumping off the large snake. "I can't beat you, but
he might."

Nononononono! Flying Poison Dagger sprung forward, ready to end this worm's life before it activated some sort of life saving treasure or ancestral will or something of that sort. Then he heard the chanting, and allowed himself to relax.

Nothing in Core Formation or below could threaten his life, and no Nascent Soul would
ever make an item or technique or strand of will that required more than a fraction of a second to activate. They had more pride than that.

Flying Poison Dagger ultimately decided to wait, after all, this power up wouldn't be able to kill him, and the stronger the boy was, the better a meal the boy would be.

Due to being a bit lost in thought, as well as simply not caring enough to pay attention, Flying Poison Dagger only caught the last bit of the boy's chanting. "-ake over my body and soul, great serpent!"

Flying Poison Dagger watched as the clear orb embedded in the boy's forehead glowed with a brilliant white light, before an enormous snake, easily 100 feet long and 10 feet wide, emerged from the orb, sat coiled in the air for a few seconds, then dove into the boy's open mouth.

The boy's eyes and green scales both turned a brilliant white, and, more worryingly, Flying Poison Dagger couldn't sense any aura or energy from the boy at all. That meant that either the boy was a nonentity of this world, for even mortals and corpses had an aura and energy, or… the being possessing the boy was able to hide its aura from Flying Poison Dagger.

At his level, the only people who could do something like that were… Nascent Soul cultivators.

Well fuck.

He should have killed the boy while he had the chance.

Still, there was a way out of this. Bravado. If he pretended that he still had his treasures that could both deal and withstand Nascent Soul strikes, the snake possessing the boy might decide to just leave. After all, it was only one mortal farm, nothing important.

The snake possessing the boy spoke, in a deep, resonant voice that should have been impossible for the boy's throat to produce. "Hmph. Only Nascent Soul? Truly, this body is puny."

ONLY?!! How strong was this beast before it was sealed away in that orb?!

He had to negotiate with this thing, now. In the calmest voice he could muster, Flying Poison Dagger spoke to the beast that could kill him in an instant. "Senior. A pleasure to meet you. You and I have no quarrel, so why should we fight? I have on my person several treasures that can attack with the force of a Nascent Soul cultivator as well as defend from a Nascent Soul cultivator's strikes. It would not be worth the effort for you to try and kill me."

There. Hopefully that should work. The snake possessing the boy seemed to be thinking on it for a moment, and Flying Poison Dagger allowed himself a small moment of hope, that maybe he would be able to get out of this unscathed.

That hope was dashed not a few seconds later, when the snake possessing the boy opened its mouth. "Hmm. Tempting, but even if you have said treasures, I must decline"

Shit.

"May I ask why senior? This fight would benefit neither of us." Flying Poison Dagger said, through some miracle managing to keep the terror out of his voice.

The snake possessing the boy replied with an indifferent coldness that left Flying Poison Dagger chilled to his very bones. "While I personally have no feelings one way or another about killing you, the one request this body asked me to fulfill before surrendering his soul to me was to kill you. I do so hate breaking my promises you see."

He might die here. He, a mighty Core Formation cultivator who'd swept across the desert and who had committed no crimes beyond angering a Qi Gathering Cultivator, was actually going to die here. "N-now, I-i'm sure we can come to s-some sort of an agreement here. D-do you want treasures? I have m-multiple treasures that might interest you, and if you would promise not to kill me, all of them could be yours."

"I will take them from your corpse" With those words, the gem on the forehead of the monster clothed in human skin began glowing a brilliant white. And still its aura was nonexistent. Truly, this beast must have been a master at hiding aura

In the face of certain death, Flying Poison Dagger was frozen. He didn't want to die.

And still, as the seconds began to tick on, nothing happened. "You can flee if you like. It might give you a few seconds more of life."

And suddenly, Flying Poison Dagger realized the truth. This was nothing but a bluff! A mere Qi Gathering whelp had tricked him, HIM! A Core Formation expert! This was unacceptable! With a disdainful snort, Flying Poison Dagger sent the weapon which had given him his name right at the gem on this arrogant junior's forehead. Whatever technique the worm was building up would blow up in his face. And then, the real fun could start.

The dagger flew like an arrow, straight at the orb, coated in a sinister tripartite red and bluish white and yellow energy. The gem on its handle emanated a purple light that pushed it forward at absurd speeds.

It hit the gem, still glowing with a white light, head on.

And then it fell to the floor, inert.

The Orb, and the boy it was attached to, was completely unharmed.

With a lazy smirk, the monster in the guise of a man said but five words that broke his spirit. "Is that all you have?"

Those words galvanized Flying Poison Dagger, and as the monster bent down to pick up his prized treasure, looking it over with mild curiosity, Flying Poison Dagger, not even bothering to try and summon his dagger back, since it was obviously under the monster's control now, ripped out a black canine tooth etched with purple runes from his mouth, which flew out and tore a rift in space.

As Flying Poison Dagger fled through the rift, the last words he heard from that monster were "Ah well, I tried."


The Ninth Prince stayed in that position for a solid ten minutes, just playing with the dagger, eyes, scales, and orb still glowing, before realizing that the Core Formation cultivator wasn't coming back.

After that realization, everything immediately stopped glowing, and the Ninth Prince fell to his hands and knees like a puppet with its strings cut, panting from fear.

Through his gasps, he said the same two words over and over, all while laughing like a maniac. "It.. Worked. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! IT WORKED!"

The Ninth Prince's plan was an incredibly long shot, almost destined to fail, but somehow, against all odds, it succeeded.

The Orb of Shesha did house a powerful snake spirit, true, but that snake spirit was sealed to only provide knowledge, and the seal was unbreakable. There was no way it would have been able to possess him.

The Orb did have one lifesaving function though, albeit an incredibly poor one. By reciting a lengthy chant, the bearer of the Orb could send their soul into it, swapping places with the snake spirit.

This wasn't as good as it sounded however, for a few reasons. Number one, if the bearer's body died, their soul died, so it didn't even offer any better protection.

Number two, the snake spirit had no cultivation base at all, as well as literally no aura to speak of, even less than a corpse. The entire life saving property was almost a strict downgrade from the un-Orb'd state.

Almost.

The bearer could still control their body while inside the Orb, and had some minor properties of illusion, just enough to mildly alter light and sound, such as, say, making their eyes, Orb, and scales glow white, as well as making their voice resonate unnaturally.

In all seriousness, they were parlor tricks, if that, but somehow, the Ninth Prince had used them to scare off a Core Formation cultivator.

There was, however, one last property of the Orb that came in incredibly handy. It was both indestructible as well as an incredible shock absorber. If the flying dagger had hit his body anywhere but the Orb, he would be turned into red mist. Since it had hit the orb however, it just bounced off, stripped of all its momentum.

After about an hour of just lying there in the sands and laughing, deliriously happy to be alive, the Ninth Prince tiredly hopped onto Ulo, and begun the long ride home.

Titus Varius was having the time of his life.

He'd just managed to break through to the 3rd heavenstage, had just finished a bandit extermination mission for the clan, and best of all, had an entire week without the terror that was 'The Ninth Prince'.

Yes, life was looking good.

Of course, as soon as Titus opened his stupid mouth, 'The Ninth Prince' came riding in on a snake large enough to eat him whole, with murder in his eyes.

'The Ninth Prince' made his way to the Contribution Points Board, before raising a wicked black dagger with a purple jewel on its hilt and a blade that glew three colors, and yelled to the sky, somehow still managing to look perfectly calm, "AUXILIA ULTIMATUS 'THE NINTH PRINCE' REPORTS A CHANGING OF MISSION PARAMETERS, IN WHICH AUXILIA ULTIMATUS 'THE NINTH PRINCE' SAVED XINJIEN CITY FROM CORE FORMATION CULTIVATOR FLYING POISON DAGGER, BY FRIGHTENING HIM OFF. AUXILIA ULTIMATUS 'THE NINTH PRINCE' BRINGS FLYING POISON DAGGER'S SIGNATURE WEAPON AS PROOF."

What.

Almost immediately, a Foundation Establishment officer seemingly materialized out of thin air with an angry look on his face, and snatched the dagger from the hands of 'The Ninth Prince'. "If this is a jo-"

The Foundation Establishment officer went completely pale. "T-this is legitimate. I-I need to pass this up the chain."


WHAT.

Faced with this world-shattering revelation, that a Qi Gathering Auxilia could frighten off a Core Formation expert, Titus, as well as quite a few other members of the audience, did the only thing he could possibly do. Titus Varius fainted.

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A/N: Here's part two I guess. A bit more serious than I was originally intending, but I figure that the threat of death is pretty good at making things serious. Hopefully the series of events makes sense.

Also

@occipitallobe
Where do I put the reward I would like for an omake?
 
A few more questions of mine

Do omakes apply bonuses to Cultivation survival rolls
In general is the bonus that a good seed gets from omake based on number or size of omakes

(1) Yes. Each Good Seed gets two rolls - Cultivation progress and Fate. Bad Fate can of course cause Cultivation to drop or skyrocket, but in general it Fate does all sorts of things. Additional bonuses apply to Fate, which is the roll that does or doesn't kill you.

(2) You won't get a bigger bonus by splitting an omake in two, or joining two into one. The overall mechanic is kept deliberately vague to promote people writing things they want to write, and avoid people trying to game a system.

What about cultivation artifacts which are essentially equivalent?

Yes - Heavenly Treasures is often used as a catchall phrase for 'amazing stuff I could never make'. If Manuel decided to go forge a really good pill, say, and hid it in a cave it might be considered a Heavenly Treasure by the one who found it.

You can usually make stuff equivalent to Heavenly Treasures, but usually not within your realm. They've heavenly because you personally couldn't make one. The core of the phrase refers to 'random treasures from nowhere', but it wouldn't be unreasonable to refer to something a cultivator two or three realms above yours made for you as a Heavenly Treasure.

Hmm oh wow. I was not expecting that. Looks like the Clan's focus is on amassing Foundation Building Cultivators, which makes sense since usually only the Protag in Xianxia is the one that builds up to ridiculous levels before they ascend

For a protag, 10x the resource spend for 2x the growth is a great trade. For the Clan, it's an awful one.

@Kaboomatic, please edit your request into your Good Seed background post. What Alectai has done here is pretty much the gold standard - omake, turn they relate to, boost wanted. Lets me check through the same set of posts each time to pull that information, thereby minimising mistakes on my part.
 
For a protag, 10x the resource spend for 2x the growth is a great trade. For the Clan, it's an awful one.

@Kaboomatic, please edit your request into your Good Seed background post. What Alectai has done here is pretty much the gold standard - omake, turn they relate to, boost wanted. Lets me check through the same set of posts each time to pull that information, thereby minimising mistakes on my part.

Yeah, the impression I get is that the Clan's only going to bankroll a super expert if they've got some assurance that you're an investment that'll become a badass, huh?

(So like, multiple good Fate checks combined with overall excellent Cultivation rolls I presume?)

After all, 10x the resource expense for 2x the growth is a bad trade for the clan, but 10x the resource expense for an individual who's generally two or three small realms above their actual level is potentially worthwhile, huh?

Anyway, I'm waiting until we see how things are shaking out for turn two before I get cracking on my mid-turn omake :)
 
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please edit your request into your Good Seed background post. What Alectai has done here is pretty much the gold standard - omake, turn they relate to, boost wanted. Lets me check through the same set of posts each time to pull that information, thereby minimising mistakes on my part.
I edited my background post to be a little more like Alectai, is how it is now okay?

edit: so I wont double post.

13th Heavenstage - 288 (Benefit: Dao Purification Stage - Cultivator purifies their Dao in the same way breaking into the Core Formation Realm requires. They are able to cultivate the One-Pillar Foundation Establishment path, yielding many secret benefits.)

one of those secret benefits may be sidestepping those bottlenecks
Mid (3rd Pillar) - 160 (Bottleneck - aligning three pillars is difficult, and misalignment will prevent further advancement).
eat Circle (7th Pillar) - 340 (Required to break through. Bottleneck - the seven pillars must be aligned perfectly in order to be able to fuse into a core. Reaching Great Circle is much easier than aligning one's pillars in preparation to break through. You cannot realign your pillars once you reach Great Circle, so the Bottleneck is spending more time and effort smoothing your way to a Core)

can you cultivate the One-Pillar Foundation Establishment path and still get to those realms?

True Dao Pillars (8th pillar) - 588 (Offers tremendous benefits in future realms. Creating 8 Pillars allows one to break through with relative ease, the Heavens easing your path. Incredibly difficult. 8 Dao pillars offer a substantial and permanent boost to one's luck.)
Emperor's Pillar (9th Pillar) - ??? (Benefits not known by Golden Devil Clan. Theoretical maximum number of Dao Pillars.)
 
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11th Heavenstage is of mild benefit to Foundation Building (offering half a small realm), and Core Formation (offering half a small realm), but falls away during Nascent Soul.
So it offer half a small realm in foundation and in Core formation or it's a typo?

For the player .
Do you want to go to the 10th or 12th heaven stage for the ninth prince ?
Because the diference in years between 11-12th is not high like 10 -11th or 12-13th and the 13th take too many ressource and years for worth it.

And also do you want for some people to go to the 10th heaven stage?
 
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can you cultivate the One-Pillar Foundation Establishment path and still get to those realms?

Well, based on how it's described, Emperor's Pillar is locked behind a Thirteenth Heavenstage Qi Condensation breakthrough. The other options are all plural, Emperor's Pillar is singular.

That usually tends to be how it works out, there's a lot of neat toys that are gated behind doing every previous level to the limit. It makes sense that you can only achieve the ultimate foundation in a single coherent body, as opposed to several distributed pillars.
 
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What Alectai has done here is pretty much the gold standard - omake, turn they relate to, boost wanted. Lets me check through the same set of posts each time to pull that information, thereby minimising mistakes on my part.

i'm having trouble mechanically breaking the bonuses down, so far most of the Omakes i've done is just stuff i thought would be cool or develop Xiao Yi. Can i have a ruling on what the bonuses count as ?

i have the following so far

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Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest] Original - Fantasy

Not really the best writer, but here is my attempt at a good seed. Xiao Yi (Little First/one) was a member of a Small Beast Taming Clan residing in the Turtlebone mountains that made a living taming and selling Spirit Beasts. When he was 10, the Clan was attacked by a Mid Core Spirit Beast...
 
Well, based on how it's described, Emperor's Pillar is locked behind a Thirteenth Heavenstage Qi Condensation breakthrough. The other options are all plural, Emperor's Pillar is singular.

That usually tends to be how it works out, there's a lot of neat toys that are gated behind doing every previous level to the limit. It makes sense that you can only achieve the ultimate foundation in a single coherent body, as opposed to several distributed pillars.

I would normally agree with you but it says 9th Pillar, as in the Emperor's Pillar is achieved when you have nine pillars, which make some sense as the previous stage is eight pillars (is it me or the reason that those two stages give bonuses is because you can divide them and as such have a more even and powerful foundation
 
@occipitallobe considering the "no fighting accross cultivation realms" rule of the 100 year trial, am I correct in guessing that we would be best suited to have people aim to be at the last stage of each Realm at that point in time? As in encouraging that realm breakthroughs be put on hold as we get nearer to the next cull? Because the breakthrough would transform them from "strongest of a given realm that can help the others" to "weakest of a given level, likely needing help"
 
@occipitallobe considering the "no fighting accross cultivation realms" rule of the 100 year trial, am I correct in guessing that we would be best suited to have people aim to be at the last stage of each Realm at that point in time? As in encouraging that realm breakthroughs be put on hold as we get nearer to the next cull? Because the breakthrough would transform them from "strongest of a given realm that can help the others" to "weakest of a given level, likely needing help"

My impression is that it's not a hard and fast rule, and they'll break it happily in their favor if fighting fair isn't working.
 
Yeah, they probably won't care if it's just one or two who are breaking the curve. Because losing some Qi Condensation fighters is peanuts. If it looks like a distinct habit though, they'll probably just get their own Nascent Souls or something to kill a bunch to show their displeasure.

I do hope we can figure out a way to stop this though.
 
Well, i feel we should play to our strengths. If our Cultivators are able to use their formations to gain an advantage over the those of the same realm, technically nothing can be said if they lose to us.

They might choose to intentionally ignore their rules and send cultivators 1 realm up to smack ours down if we start winning, but that's frankly a risk that always present as long as it looks like we're overcoming being used as a Proving Ground.
 
Well, i feel we should play to our strengths. If our Cultivators are able to use their formations to gain an advantage over the those of the same realm, technically nothing can be said if they lose to us.

They might choose to intentionally ignore their rules and send cultivators 1 realm up to smack ours down if we start winning, but that's frankly a risk that always present as long as it looks like we're overcoming being used as a Proving Ground.

Yeah.

I mean, if hope does exist (And presumably it does, hence why this qualifies as a Tier 4 Malus instead of the Tier 5 "This will kill you if left unaddressed, and addressing it will define the entire game" maluses), it'll probably be that they're not actually as strong as we think they are, but they're using some kind of cheat to jump Seas, and we might have a shot at sabotaging that Cheat if we do well enough on a Trial to backtrace it.
 
Amaranth Castellanos
Bandit Attack during Caravan to Shen Kingdom!​

He woke to the sound of feet shuffling around in the sand. Amaranth rubbed his bleary eyes and got out of his tent. Were they traveling again this soon? The caravan usually started traveling after a break a little later than this, he could have sworn, but he supposed that catching the majority of the hours before noon for travel meant that getting up before sunrise wasn't a bad idea. Amaranth stretched out his limbs, and got himself as awake as he could this early in the middle of the desert. Well, if he was going to be awake anyway, he might as well chat. He was traveling to Shen Kingdom for the experience of meeting people in a place where bronze was uncommon anyway, so he might as well enjoy the journey as well as the destination. He headed over to where the guard Chen Wuming was, along with several other guards.

Chen Wuming was a body cultivator who looked like a middle-aged mortal, and unlike the many body cultivators Amaranth knew from his Clan, he lacked the bloodline of bronze. It made sense. After all, he wasn't part of the Clan, so naturally he wouldn't. Still, Amaranth marveled at that ordinary fact. For the vast majority of Amaranth's life, he'd only seen body cultivators with the power of bronze backing up their motions— unlike him. Amaranth, with bronze so weak that a fall that shouldn't have left a scratch made him bleed, Amaranth, whose fists couldn't even crack stone. Lacking that, the path of body cultivation should have been the last spot he placed his efforts, yet it was. He didn't back down from the challenge, because inefficient as it may be, he loved to fight with his fists. Amaranth trained as hard as he could to keep up, but in the end clan members who spent just as much effort would dumpster him in a spar. He remembered the jeers from those who believed that he was just wasting his time doing what he did. Amaranth brushed it off as best as he could, but he couldn't deny that he didn't envy them for their natural ability. Still, he knew that there were many powerful body cultivators out there who didn't have bronze in their bones at all. He couldn't give up. He wouldn't give up.

So, when Amaranth saw a person who was a successful body cultivator even without bronze, it made him smile, since it made that intangible knowledge in his head feel like it had some weight to it beyond the weight of books and rumors.

Still, as much as he tried to suppress it, he couldn't help but remember. Remember that there were those in his clan at the very same stage as Chen who would have much more combat power, which made him uncomfortable, to put it lightly. A smile, but then a frown.

After some banal chatter about the day-to-day issues of the caravan, Amaranth mentioned his experiences to Chen, and if he'd have any advice. Chen only had one thing to say.

"That's just how Fate is at times, so you've just got to settle with it. A person with a bloodline is always going to—"

Suddenly, a dull red flash appeared in the distance. Chen quickly became alert.

"Get to your tent," he said curtly.

"What is it?"

"The Battle Blood Cannibal Sect. Now, get to your tent if you want to live."

Amaranth quickly nodded, and rushed to his tent, but watched what was happening from the opening.

He still can remember exactly what happened to this day if he just closes his eyes.

The guards try to reason with them, saying that the locals already paid the tribute so they should have no reason to do this, but the Blood Cannibals just laugh.

"Tribute? Do you honestly think that'd actually stop us?", the one in the front finally says. "Besides, all I see are some particularly juicy slices of meat, ready for the eating. What's wrong with taking advantage of that?"

And then the battle ensues.

The Blood Cannibals burst into blurs of frenzied motion, and one slashes at Chen Wuming with claws the shade of congealed blood. The guard retaliates with arms that shift to solid ice in the middle of the counter, parrying the strike and returning the attack. The cannibal takes a battering ram of freezing power to the stomach, turning the point of impact into a mess of frozen and shattered flesh and bone. He's staggering now, face twisted in a rictus of rage and hateful promise. However, Chen can't care less. After a strike like that, the guard is confident that he's got him done for, and moves in for the finishing blow. Just one more job completed, and he's gonna retire from this. As exciting as this life is, there is such a thing as too much of it. With thoughts like these in his head, he makes a rookie mistake. He's taken his focus off a cornered foe. With a look of madness in his eyes, the cannibal bites his tongue and burns his life force to boost his ability for a final, suicidal lunge. Chen hastily moves into a defensive stance, his arms like a wall of ice glinting under the light of the moon, but a crimson flare shears straight through the barrier and into his neck. His last thoughts are of regret. He was so close... The cannibal exults in his kill, sending his claws into the heart of his foe while roaring in triumph. A red haze emanates from the corpse, traveling into his body and stitching his wounds together. As the cannibal turns around to rejoin the melee, his head is crushed like an overripe watermelon by a bronze fist and sliced in half by a silvery arc of sword intent to confirm the kill.

Amaranth watches this completely horrified, but as he sees the red haze get absorbed by the cannibal, he feels a strange resonance in his body, and a faint eagerness to join in on the murder. The much larger portion of him is utterly repulsed, which intensifies even further when he sees the face of the person who just got killed. It was the guard he was talking to! Those damned Blood Cannibals, I'll tear them apart for what they've done! I'll kill them, I'll kill them, I'll KILL THEM ALL!!! There is blood everywhere. On the ground, on the swords of the clashing combatants, and unbeknownst to him, in his own eyes as he tenses to strike.

However… he can't join in. He knows that he can't join in, as much as he hates the fact, because he's just a mere mortal while these are full cultivators. He'd just get slaughtered, so he shouldn't try it, or so he repeated to himself again and again, while his body twitched and his eyes impotently glared.

The fight continues. Many guards fall, just like Chen Wuming did. Valiantly, but ultimately to the end. But, for every fallen guard, another Blood Cannibal meets the grave, and there are many more guards than Blood Cannibals. Slowly, realization comes to the eyes of the remaining Blood Cannibals, and they head to flee. The guards don't stop them. They've taken enough losses as is, and can't— won't spend more just to wipe out the rest. The Blood Cannibals aren't worth that anyway, and keeping the caravan safe is paramount, which means advancing to kill them off would be counterproductive. Still, it's not like the guards like doing this anyway. Throughout their careers, they've seen Blood Cannibals, bandits, and all sorts of others try to rob caravans, and end the lives of comrades and even close friends in the process, so the resentment can grow deep. Oftentimes, there are lone guards that break from the group to chase them, but they just as often get killed. But in the end, keeping the caravan safe is paramount, or so they repeat to themselves again and again.
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The rest of the trip wasn't nearly as exciting. Amaranth visited the stalls of the streets of Shen where there were some pretty tasty local foods that he hadn't tried out before. And of course, there was the experience of having the vast majority of people he saw not have that distinctive bronze in their skin and hair, which was nice. However, his thoughts always returned to the face of that guard, and the sound of those wretched claws shearing through the ice. He remembers the flow of the red mist strengthening the cannibal, and that strange feeling in his body when he saw it happening. He remembers that final bronze fist that ended the cannibal.

That final bronze fist. He looks at his own hands, as weak a shade of bronze as a member of the bloodline could have. Even here, the weakness of his bronze blocked him off from his dreams. With a bloodline as thin as this, how could he ever hope to pay back the Battle Blood Cannibal Sect? A memory bubbled to the surface.

"That's how fate is sometimes kid, you just got to settle with it."

No. He refused. If fate had decided that he'd have to settle with being mediocre compared to the others of his family, then he'd defy fate. He stood up in his bedroom. He hadn't noticed the details of the feeling before, but the bronze of his own fists sung to be sunk into the flesh of his enemies. Perhaps with this, he'd be able to make his body match, no, surpass the rest of his clan.

Or maybe he was just hallucinating from the stress of the battle between so many cultivators. A mortal's physique with the barest tinges of bronze would probably be feeble enough to fall to mundane ills like that. Honestly, that was probably much more likely than him awakening to some secret power. His shoulders slumped. What was he thinking? But the hope refused to be crushed by practicality. (Or was it that he just didn't want the hope to be crushed?) Either way, he resolved to test out his theory at the sect. He'd soon join and finally become a cultivator, so he might as well see if killing one of the sect's enemies on a mission would do anything special. If not? Well, he'd just keep on doing what he did. The hard route is still a route, after all.

A/N: As you might have guessed, Amaranth misunderstood what Chen meant, and it certainly doesn't help that he was interrupted in the middle of his spiel. Though, motivations born of misunderstandings can still be fun nonetheless. If it seems to you that Amaranth's character is different than described in my Good Seed blurb, you're probably correct. This is just what ended up as my end result. @occipitallobe, I'd like my bonus to be to his constitution, so his baseline isn't low enough to lead to an early death. Kind of like that cultivation bonus giving 10 years worth, but to his constitution instead. (So, considering how it grows, offscreen it would be explained by killing more enemies of the sect.)

(BTW, this was my real first omake ever. My Good Seed blurb was more like of an outline than a true omake, TBH. I hope that I managed to make a 4-5/10 one at least, but that's probably too optimistic tbh.)
Hiya @occipitallobe, could you please threadmark my omake?
 
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