Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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What sort of combat benefits should I note down for the Boiling Legion of Glass Body bonus?

My personal 2 cents upon reading it being used was a very Final Strike kind of a vibe. Like the kind of last ditch all out attack that decides the battle depending of if it succeed or not.

But since you did fluff it as a bloodline awakening, i think it will be interesting for it to accumulate new effects via cool stuff bonuses. Very curious on where it can be taken to since my first thought regarding Glass spawning is a Iceman kind of usage, clearly the most original idea ever :rolleyes:

Although i think i did read a novel once where glass shards were grounded to dust and use to blind people who thought it was normal dust, so that's a pretty horrifying usage for it ? Regardless, i'm more excited on her journey towards being our Hector in the illiad sense!
 
Also some feedback from anyone who very kindly reads this. Would Firefly or Mentor suit this piece better ? I'm kinda torn between the two.

If anyone is interested, i decided on the term Anchor to refer to the person that is at the heart of a formation, the one deciding who to attack and move, who controles the Qi provided by the others.
I think phrasing it as both is actually appropriate, since Xiao Yi is acting as both a Mentor to his juniors, while being mentored as a Firefly by Parmenion.

My personal 2 cents upon reading it being used was a very Final Strike kind of a vibe. Like the kind of last ditch all out attack that decides the battle depending of if it succeed or not.

But since you did fluff it as a bloodline awakening, i think it will be interesting for it to accumulate new effects via cool stuff bonuses. Very curious on where it can be taken to since my first thought regarding Glass spawning is a Iceman kind of usage, clearly the most original idea ever :rolleyes:

Although i think i did read a novel once where glass shards were grounded to dust and use to blind people who thought it was normal dust, so that's a pretty horrifying usage for it ? Regardless, i'm more excited on her journey towards being our Hector in the illiad sense!
The way I have it worked out in my head is as three things; which are generally encapsulated by her internal blast furnace heat that smells like cinnamon, the bio-feedback control allowing her to manipulate her own bones and muscles even when her spine is broken as it essentially turns her body into a Legion, and to put her in spiky armor that can impale people on.

Technically they're references to some of my favorite fiction, but eh, those aren't too important just side "concept" work basically. For people who want to know:

-Sandworms from Dune, as their internal spaces are described like blast furnaces with a breath that smells like cinnamon.

-The Pillar Men from Jojo's Bizzare Adventures, as she's able to control her organs, small muscles, and bones in a method inspired by them. I actually had a few ideas on how to awaken her bloodline, one of them being that she might be able to essentially have her body turn into glass dust that infiltrates their meridians and tears them apart from the inside. Some of that has remained.

-The Shrike from Hyperion Cantos, a time travelling super robot as an appearance reference because it was covered in spiky chrome armor and had a roar like a fusion torch. Its more aesthetic appearance of spiky freakiness though, since she's definitely not chrome colored and is much more pink.
--Connected to the above is also a being called Szoreny from Exalted, which is basically a living super forest of mercury trees and a metaphor for parallel universes and reflections. It has some fun magic connected to it that I'll be pulling from in future.

Anyway, at the moment its presented as a final strike kind of thing since she awoke it in a moment of desperation but its truthfully meant to be a more serious state for combat in general that she makes use of consistently. With it made and after I deal with my vengeance arc I'm going be spending time actually working on specializing Formations and training newbs, perhaps working on improving the Hoplite at Qi Condensation level for easier sustainability at the cost of some more rigidity in movement. Not sure precisely what yet.
 
On a random note that has everything to do with the fact I am currently rereading I Shall Seal The Heavens, I have been oddly certain for a while now that eventually one of our client states is going to stand up and slope out to sea without warning.

My money is on the Xin Kingdom, it looks like just the right shape.....
 
Peta Condos and Wajo 3 - The Girl and the Reasonable Bears
The Girl and the Reasonable Bears
Peta Condos and Wajo

Peta waved goodbye to the Great Mudslide bear as he meandered in the direction of the Devil Bee lands. He'd arrived at the oasis to bathe and restore his qi, displacing an entire city that depended on the natural resource. Now that his qi was restored, getting him to leave was as simple as polity informing him that Devil Bees probably make Devil Honey.

"He was very reasonable."

Bears are often reasonaable, if we are not hungry or afraid. We can eat anything, and we are big and strong for our cultivation level, so we are not often hungry or afraid.

Peta nods, absorbing her brother's wisdom.

"I guess… It makes me think why people aren't? Even predatory spirits just follow their nature. They want to eat, they want to be safe, they want to grow stronger. I used to think that nature is cruel. Now, I am not so sure. The Trials… No spirit would bother with genocide, or make a game of hunting a clan forever. Maybe the problem isn't nature. Maybe it's people?

Maybe. I heard a story of your people, that they came from a distant world.

Peta shrugged. She didn't get along well with her aunt, and spent most of her time away from the clan holds. She heard a rumor or two, just like Wajo had.

Maybe all humans are the same. Maybe you do not belong here, and this is why you act so strange.

"Then why are my people cursed by heaven?"

Hmmm… What is heaven?

"You know, that stuff," Peta gestured vaguely at the sky, where lightning would soon fall upon her in deadly waves for daring to become stronger.

That stuff. Yes, I understand as little as you. I think before we can discern the true the will of heaven, we must know what heaven really is. Heaven seems cruel to me as well. As cruel as man. What were the stages of human cultivation?

"Qi Condensation, Foundation Establishment, Core Formation, Nascent Soul, Soul Severing…"

And after?

"What was after?" Peta scrunches up her face in thought. She'd been away from cultivators for a long time now, and after Soul Severing was well beyond her frame of reference, "Demigod I think? Then…"

Ascension?

"Heaven," Peta nods, understanding his point. Heaven was people. That's why heaven is mad, why it's cruel.

"If only heaven was full of bears instead."

Their eyes met, and Peta could feel something shift in her Dao. Heaven needs a bear.

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Are you sure?

"Yes. Our fortune has been mediocre. My talent is unremarkable. At this rate, we will reach core formation on schedule and stall there. We will plant a few good seeds. We will protect them with our clan for a while. We will make a respectable contribution, and will die defending our territory against one dire threat or another. Unacceptable."

They stood before the job board and, for the first time in forty years, Peta cashed in her contribution points.

First, a pair of Rebirth Seeds, lifesaving treasures for her level. Second, access to the Qiguai Clan's secret realm. Many die in this realm, but those that emerge do so with great fortune. Enough fortune, perhaps, to jumpstart her stalled cultivation.

"Heaven needs a bear."

I want to go to the Qiguai Clan's secret realm. This will probably burn the life saving treasure from this omake.
Omake Bonus: Life Saving Treasure
 
"Qi Condensation, Foundation Establishment, Core Formation, Nascent Soul, Soul Severing…"

And after?

"What was after?" Peta scrunches up her face in thought. She'd been away from cultivators for a long time now, and after Soul Severing was well beyond her frame of reference, "Demigod I think? Then…"
It makes sense IC that they don't know this, of course, since this is high-level stuff, but OOC I'll just remind you just in case. After Spirit Severiing is Dao Seeking, then the Immortal Realm.
 
Ferenike 5 - Flood Dragon Gong Rencao
Ferenike 5 - Flood Dragon Gong Rencao
The sand blew sharply in the wind.

Ferenike mused on that phrase. She imagined in her fancy that in the Hard Shell Mountains they might say the wind whistled between the rocks, and in the Green Scale Plains they might say the rice stalks danced in the wind. Made her think of how similar people really were, even as they strove to be different.

It was a comfort.

She wondered what fresh cut grass smelled like, as she'd only seen it in her picture books as a young girl and in illuminated texts as a budding scholar of the Legions.

She idly wondered as she played with those phrases as her mount's hooves clacked on the road tiles of a small path leading to Triumphant Jade City. Somewhere to her north the great Scorpion Road passed, but here was quiet, nary another person or critter to see. She wanted some peace and quiet to compose a letter to a senior.

Pulling from a crimson glass pipe formed from her own blood she exhaled fragrant smoke, and it curled up under the rim of her wide circular turtleshell shaped hat to rise into the distant blue sky from which the sun beat down. She was garbed in a thin tunic and pants of linen and then over that a set of Spirit Bronze lamellar armor strapped to her body. Over that she wore the gauzy thin layers of a Legion travelling robe, bright golden and edged in a pattern of eight petaled white lotus flowers denoting her rank and heavenstage.

She smiled in the heat of the sun and cracked her shoulders. It was a good day.

She opened her mouth and drew in a great breath. A sound like a roaring inferno kicked up and echoed for a li in every direction as hot sand was ripped from the dunes and into her mouth. Passing between her teeth it sparked and danced in her mouth for fraction of a second before the sheer heat of her blast furnace innards transmuted it into glass which she drank down without harm. Her mount shook his head and whinnied irritably but he'd gotten used to her antics and she paid him no mind.

The scent of cinnamon and melting sand filled the air around her as she focused on the qi in her dantian, and pushed outward. To her expanding her dantian felt like carrying a great red fire in her hands between looming dunes ten thousand miles high and burning each one in turn. Melting them down first into a lump of glass, and then a river, and then another part of the quite boiling sea of glass that filled her up. As she did it, she filled herself with qi from Spirit Stones and the sea glowed with an even greater red fire beneath her feet.
A sight into hell she sometimes joked to herself.

Hmmm...

Her great breath ended and she exhaled, a cloud of sweet scent following her and making her mount sneeze.

To my skilled Senior Brother Xiao Yi this humble Junior Sister in the eighth Heavenstage by the name of Ferenike of the Golden Devils,
sends this missive as I hunt a Battle Blood Cannibal rebel by the name of Zu Jing. I will not bore you of the details of my greivances
with him, as that is not the purpose of me contacting you as I humbly am. I am aware of your superlative skill with Formations, particularly your clever manipulations of the Kataphractoi. While that esteemed work is not the one I specialize in, the equally esteemable Hoplite being my passion, I find myself on the path to in time begin training some of our newest juniors by the orders of Centurion Dragoumis, superlative Centurion of the Ninth Century of the Fifth Cohort of the Ninth Legion.

I wished to ask for your advice on training them when it comes time for me to join you on the Mustering Yard as a leader to our juniors and to seek your wisdom on the Art of Formations. If you wish to heed this humble request please accept this gift of one hundred year Silver Peach Wine for yourself and Century Scorpion Oats for your Qilin Qing Yun. A mighty beast I would say from tales I have heard and what I have witnessed in my time at the Fortress, you are both blessed by your bond. Send any responses through the Scorpion Legion mail service addressed as I have introduced myself to you.

And a simple riddle to amuse you.

Sand cuts sharply
The rocks whistle
Rice stalks dance

What drives us so?

-Ferenike of the Golden Devils


She nods. That should do for an introduction, her lessons on etiquette guiding her hand as she scribes it into the vellum of a Sand Charging Mouse with a quill. She'll keep hold of that till she reaches Triumphant Jade and a post station.

Setting off into the sands she laid hands to her reins and chuckled darkly. It was fun to be on the hunt, in the same way it was fun to beat the shit out of an enemy.



Triumphant Jade was heralded on the horizon by a spinning whirlwind of sand and smoke a thousand li high, twisting in the air like a dragon's tail. The results of a Hundred Centipede Mining Drill if she remembered her history correctly. The next thing that came into view was its towering walls rising from flattened dunes and exposed sandstone.

They were made of Spirit Metals and dark stones carved up from the mines, and towered fifty li high. To its north she could see the glimmering white stones of the Scorpion Road, fifty li wide, looking like a massive river with shining towers dotting its banks, the glittering white cooling arrays providing light at night, security from beasts and a more comfortable environment for foreign traders and Legions on the long march across their lands.

Turning her eyes from it she returned to her examination of Triumphant Jade defenses. Its gates were massive edifices as she walked through them, the tunnel to the other side of the wall more than a li long. Her horse's hooves clanked on the metal road surface and she eyed the murder holes and arrays lining the tunnel curiously. A lethal hindrance for most cultivators on her level, but she was unchallenged beyond a guard asking her business and checking the identification array she had tattooed invisibly on a fingertip.

She emerged from the tunnel onto a platform jutting out into the air over a massive pit. Distantly she could hear the roar of the mining machinery at the bottom of the conical pit. Hanging from the inside surface of the walls like dangling ivy or growing rock were hundreds of thousands of buildings. Villages built vertically and strewn about the walls, with greenery dotting them and making the inside look like verdigris. Beautiful.

Down it descended in tiers deeper and deeper into the sand and rock beneath it, more than ten li down, buildings of industry, a forest of smokestacks. The clangor of pick and shovel filled the air, accompaniment to mining songs. A loud city of half a million mortals. And somewhere within, Gong Rencao. Hopefully.

She needed to hunt down a tea house.

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It didn't take very long to do that, nor to send off her letter which should arrive in Xiao Yi's hands in a few days. Soon she was spending the day passing time and laughing with other patrons over a great deal of very good Black Dragon Tea. Wonderfully sweet and hearty. She was two thirds of the way down the wall of the city and the sound of the Mining Drill was a constant rumble of wind and grating sand against the metal exterior of the tea house. Shaking it where it was bolted into the walls. The streets of Triumphant Jade this far down ran in covered tunnels attached to the inside of the wall and buildings grew from them, giving it a very lumpy and irregular texture.

The little tea house she was in didn't have a name as such, but it was cozy and she had a pot all to herself. She'd spent about three days in this city and verified that Flood Dragon Gong Rencao was indeed present by judicious bribery of some low level officials. In fact he was doing something not unlike her, here in the city to hunt down a criminal with a moderate sum of Spirit Stones attached to his head. Apparently many of the Flood Dragon's in this area were interested in the bounty hunter life.

She couldn't blame them, it could get pretty lucrative if you managed to catch the interest of the Golden Devils from what she knew of Legion policy on interaction with bounty hunters. She poured some more tea for herself as she heard and felt the qi of his latest battle head down the tunnel street towards her strategically chosen tea house. If she was right...

"Jade Crushing Monkey Style Fist!" An incredibly loud masculine voice shouted. She leaned back, picking up her tea pot and the tray holding the tea set for two off the table.

The wall in front of her table exploded inward in a shower of wood and shearing metal as body blasted through it, followed quickly by a large shadow. "HAH HAH! Take that ne'er do well !" A voice said happily as the shadow landed with a thud on the downed man.

The dust cleared and revealed Gong Rencao as she returned to her original posture and with a sweep of a sleeve wiped debris off her table and set her tea pot and tray back in place. She looked at the Flood Dragon, now taking up the center of the room.

He was a tall man of a height with her, wearing a bright flagrantly attention grabbing pink kimono and black silk pants. His shoes were simple golden slippers. Around his neck hung a necklace of fist sized Buddhist rosary beads, with three particularly large ones sitting in front and inscribed with the words Truth, Love, and Fist in golden ink. His face was rugged and deeply tanned, though not bronzy like Golden Devils could be, and his hair was a bright shock of red. He was clean shaven and rubbing his chin with a thick fingered hand, where jeweled rings glinted. As he had been when she met him he was somewhere in Mid Foundation Establishment, perhaps a little stronger than she remembered.

He looked chagrined at the destruction. "Oh dear... Um." He said, and started looking for the proprieter. Who had fled out the back door before the dust cleared, along with many of the patrons. Admirable instincts, she'd have to come back here sometimes. She took her opportunity.

"Flood Dragon Gong Rencao, what good fortune that this humble traveler could find you today. Would you like some tea?" She said with a smile and flung a small full tea cup at him. It soared spinning through the air in a graceful line, and he caught it in his fingers and smiled.

"You want to fight me girl for this guy?" He said, tapping his foot on the downed and very unconscious man's head.

She shook her head and frowned. "I didn't realize the honorable Flood Dragon were into bullying their juniors." She snarked at him. His tone annoyed her.

He laughed. "Hah no! But I've run into more than a few juniors who wanted to give it a try and weren't as polite a lady as you are, Golden Devil." He saluted her with his cup and took an appreciative sip. His eyebrows rose.

"Didn't expect you to go for Black Dragon, bit of an odd choice for how you present yourself. Would have expected Green Thunder tea to go with your sense of timing." He mused.

Okay that was actually funny, she coughed and smiled. He grinned back and stepped off his target. By this point the tea house had emptied entirely. She'd leave some funds on the counter to repair the wall and make up for a lost day's business. And then some, for the stress.

"This humble one's name is Ferenike of the Golden Devils, Legionnaire in the Ninth Legion, Ninth Century of the Fifth Cohort." She said as she bowed over her table and spread her hands, inviting him to sit. A swift kick righted a downed chair for him to sit across from her.

He nodded, rubbing his chin. "Ferenike... Ah! I knew I recognized you from somewhere, that incident with the Flowing Stream Petal caravan a few years ago wasn't it?" He asked. "My apologies for not recognizing you, you've grown well since then. Convenient though, since you already know me."

She nodded. "No trouble Senior. How's business in Triumphant Jade?" She asked, flicking a look at the man laying to their right.

"Ah, that guy?" He thumbed a gesture at the downed man. "Serial rapist, gonna be feeding him to the Legions here in a bit. Business is going great though, lots of folks stirred up now that the Demon Altar Sect is getting uppity again."

He looked at her shrewdly. "How's that monster Old Gold doing anyway?"

"Grand Elder Konstantinos?" She asked, and tilted her head consideringly. Thinking back to the last time she saw him, returning from a council meeting and making a pass through the Mustering Yard as a Core Formation elder read reports to him. "Quite well I think. I'm sorry to hear about the loss of Mortal-Protecting Heavenly Bandit Huang Li." She said sincerely. The loss of an ally like that was a awful blow to her clan.

He nodded and shrug. "We come and go, Master Huang Li lived a good life and died choking the life from those Demonic Altar bastards."

His eyes narrowed. "What brings you here seeking this humble Senior out. Going by what I heard somebody's been seeking me out for a few days. That you?" He asked her.

She nodded and took a long sip from her tea to steady herself. Now came the part she was actually nervous about. Convincing him to help her.

She set her tea down with a clunk on the table top and rested her hands on it, clasping them together and met his gaze from under her wide hat. "I encountered the brother of that man Zu Guang I helped you slay that day we first met about a month ago now. He and his minions... killed two members of my squad and maimed a third."

"Ah. What is this villain's name?" He asked, face calm, quiet.

"Zu Jing. He assaulted my squad with six of his minions, declaring his desire to eat us for the crime of slaying his brother. We took his left arm and five of his minions, but he and the one who maimed my friend escaped." She said, sighing. It was hard talking calmly about this when inside she wanted to scream and rage. Her hands were clenched on the table top and it took an effort of will to smooth them out.

"You... bugger. You're saying you think he was after you to build up the strength to take me out?" He sighed, and rubbed the bridge of his nose. She nodded.

He grumbled, crossing his arms with a huff. "Bugger."

Then he smiled. "Well if that bastard Zu Guang had a brother and that brother wants to kill me, I'll have to help you kill him." He looked at her sharply. "Normally I wouldn't do this for free, but you gave me warning about a threat I didn't even know was coming, so I'll consider that payment. And having a monster like that running around is a problem for both of our gang's."

He shrugged and held out his hand. "You got yourself a deal."

She gripped it and shook, a weight coming off her chest at his magnanimity. She'd been hoping the legendary virtue of the Flood Dragons was as reliable as they said, and at that her first impression of Rencao from years ago was correct.

They spent the rest of the evening discussing details of what she and him knew about the general activities of Battle Blood Cannibal Sect rebels in a general sense, and then refined it down based on what they knew of Zu Jing and Zu Guang's operating habits.

What they determined was as disturbing as it was enlightening. Somewhere out there in the sands, would be small mortal towns, denuded of life and then knocked over like it was a beast attack. Hidden traps for caravans, disguised as sandstorms. Now with his crippling he was probably sending his surviving minion to towns around Zu Jing's hiding place somewhere in the south and kidnapping people for his master too feed on, as well as new disciples for the Blood Path.

"And that is something neither of us can stomach, is it, Ferenike?" He asked her as night fell, moonlight shining in through the window to their right, their location changed to a sitting room in the local Legion post where Rencao had dropped of his target with the local prison division. Their tea was long finished, and diagrams and maps and notes filled the table between them in neatly organized stacks.

"No, I cannot." She said darkly. She could see the horrors he would wreak in her minds eye clearly.

They set off with the dawn, heading south.



Here @occipitallobe another omake for you! Introducing mining city aesthetics and the wonderful Gong Rencao and exploring Flood Dragon fashion choices as we start off the Vengeance arc. I'd like to put this supplemental towards my Cultivation roll this turn.

@Mochinator I decided that it would be a great idea for my Good Seed to send a letter to yours so that we could get some kind of on screen interaction between them. Hope it works for you!
 
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Tasos Basilakes 5 - Parched Lips
Parched Lips
A Tasos Basilakes Omake


The landing was softer than expected - Tasos had braced himself for a roll, but found himself sinking thigh-deep into a sand pit instead. Cursing low, he did his best to free himself from the sand trap for a couple minutes - until Eudokia wrapped a hand around his shoulder and pulled him out.

"Oof - thanks" Tasos said, taking the time to look around for the first time. A thin stream of sand fell from the stone ceiling above, but there was no visible sign of the passage or pit that had dragged him and Eudokia below. Around the corner of his field of vision Tasos could see parts of the wood they'd used for the now-smothered fire as well as some leftovers from the meal strewn about. The architecture of this... cavern-ruin was unlike that of anything Tasos had seen. Instead of the columned, often quadrilateral rooms, Tasos and Eudokia found themselves enclosed in an arched courtyard with geometrically-carved ceilings and symmetrical facets with heavy use of arches. The walls of the chamber supported the entire ceiling - with no need for columns. The whole building was constructed out of a combination of white sandstone, marble, and a foundation of directly carved rock - and looked practically intact.

This land had been clan territory for ages - how long had this cavern laid below? Tasos couldn't even begin to imagine- then a sharp snapping sound right in his ear drew him out of his thoughts.

"Come back to reality, Anastasios" A visibly frustrated Eudokia growled out. "Any idea of how to get out of here?"

"No clue - I certainly didn't expect this" Tasos answered - making his companion huff in anger and stomp at the ground.

"Great. Great!" She shouted, her voice bouncing off the walls, and fixed Tasos with a stone-cold glare. "If we miss the caravan, you're dead"

Tasos said nothing - he couldn't really, since Eudokia was right. It was his decision that had led them to the cavern - and he didn't see any exit. Plucking at his bow, he fired at the ceiling just in case - and the arrow bounced right off.

"Doesn't look like we can get out the way we came in" He stated, securing his bow into the quiver-clamp. There was also no visible exit- but upon closer examination, one of the archway panels was slightly deeper than the others. Curious. "Look around - there's bound to be another way out of here"

Eudokia's eyes narrowed - but she nonetheless did as told, heading to the opposite side of the room. Tasos approached the sunk-in panel and found a slight gap between it and the archway proper. The panel had a carved image of an eight-armed woman sat in the lotus position with no eyes on her face and three of the four pairs of palms clapped together. The final two hands were spread wide - in the palms of which were eyes with emerald pupils. A quick look around showed that all the matching panels had similar images - with the exception of two, on opposite sides of the room. In fact Eudokia was standing in front of one.

"I'm guessing we have to fill these up?" She said, motioning to her own panel which was missing the eye on the right hand. "Don't have many emeralds on hand"

"I don't think it wants emeralds" Tasos answered back, moving towards the other incomplete carving. He prodded at the hole with an arrow - it didn't seem to have a pressing mechanism anywhere, and his cicada pendant didn't fit either. "Not sure what it wants, though - is there writing somewhere?"

Eudokia motioned to a small lantern in the middle.

"Seems to be - but it doesn't look like standard Turtle World glyphs. Translation's not my thing" She explained. "All I got was 'mirror' - let me try again"

"Alright, I'll take a look in just a second" Tasos said, eyes still on the carving. He reached out to touch the hole on his carving's left hand, curious if he'd missed something while trying with his arrow - and all of a sudden his hand was dragged against the imprint. Liquid stone flowed over and around his hand - trapping it there and making Tasos gasp out. He pulled - but the hand was stuck.

Then, with a deafening crack, five of the carvings pulled themselves out of the walls. The emeralds on the statues' palms began glowing, and the heads turned, eyeless gaze fixed on Tasos.

"Fuck" He said just as one of the statues screeched in rage and leapt at him - only to be deflected by a flying kick. Eudokia pushed back and spun in the air, landing on her feet - between Tasos and the statues.

"Well, we know what they do now" Tasos's fellow legionnaire said. "Try not to get caught in a trap this easily- ugh!"

Eudokia's chiding was cut off by two of the statues lunging at her, arms outstretched and ready to grab - which the girl barely avoided with a pirouette. Her nails raked across one of the statues' faces, carving deep gouges into the stone and making it stumble back - only for the stone to rapidly reform.

All the while, Tasos was thinking a mile a minute. Three imprints remained - the one he suspected was the exit was one, and the other was the one with the missing right eye across the room. There was a chance this whole thing was a trap - but he saw a single solution.

"Doesn't seem like I can brute-force these down - what's the plan? I can use the Eagle Formation to protect and distract them, perhaps buy us some time" Eudokia pressed - and Tasos made a choice.

"No" He said as Eudokia dodged a sweep and tanked a hit to the ribs, sending her grunting back. The statues pressed closer - they had to act fast. "How good are you at Hoplite or Kataphraktoi?"

"Hoplite's good enough - I prefer Eagle, though. Kata's not my style" She answered. Tasos nodded.

"I'll give you an opening by punching through with Kata - I can summon that one-handed. Rush through, use Hoplite to block off strikes and try to put your hand on the statue across, mirroring the blind palm" He quickly explained, already biting his free thumb. Another of the statues jumped to strike - forcing Eudokia to shoulder-check it back as the rest closed the circle further. While this happened, Tasos raised his free hand to his bow - but didn't grab it, instead just plucking the materialized arrows with his hand and throwing them at the room corners - a small formation talisman on the end of each arrowshaft.

"What if it traps me too!?" She cried back. Tasos sighed.

"Then we're dead - but if this doesn't work we're dead anyways!" He answered, rubbing some of the blood in the palm of his hand. It began to glow bronze "Go!"

Tasos then struck his hand out, an incantation circle appearing just in front of it. The hand pushed through the circle, melting into bronze-coloured liquid energy out of which a bronze armour filled with ashen smoke charged out, riding a horse and holding a gleaming spear locked under its arm. The Kataphraktoi charged into the middle statue, impaling through the upper shoulder and carrying the effigy past the lantern and into the back wall, not far from Eudokia's target. The girl wasted no time - she clapped her hands and a plume of smoke shaped into her own Hoplite behind her as the two closest statues swung at her, one low and one high. The Hoplite's dove low, intercepting the sweep, and Eudokia slid under the high strike as it took her Formation's head clean off, dissipating it. She jumped at her feet and dashed for the empty socket as the two nearest statues screeched and ran in pursuit, the two others using the now open space to instead leap at Tasos, ready to take his head-

But the instant Eudokia placed her hand against the other empty socket, the whole chamber clicked and the statues froze - one of them with its hand close enough to Tasos's head for him to smell the stone. Slowly, the five statues turned and walked to the central lantern - each pressing a palm against the lantern's cover. The lantern ignited in green fire - and the final panel, the one which Tasos had inspected at the beginning, rumbled before sliding into the wall, then to the side.

Only then did the wall release Tasos's trapped hand - allowing the archer to relax and breathe deep, releasing his tension for just a second. Eudokia stepped across the room while he was catching his breath and shoved him over.

"Hey what was that for!?" Tasos demanded, glaring - a stare which Eudokia matched.

"Be more careful - you're supposed to be the Akrites here. You almost got us killed" She spat out.

"I also got us out!" He cried back - making Eudokia roll her eyes.

"Until we're out of this damned cavern, this is your fault" She answered, moving towards the now-open archway. "Now let's go"

Tasos decided to let it go and follow - his companion wouldn't listen to his words anyways. At least she had shut up now- oh.

The archway had led to a massive antechamber filled to the brim with treasures of all kinds - gold, platinum and precious metals, weapons so powerful as to project their own sword intent far enough that Tasos felt as if his skin was being cut just from looking at them, magical talismans of all kinds - even a flying carpet zooming through the air. To his right, Eudokia had a similarly flabbergasted expression - the girl was glancing from pile to pile, seemingly unable to process what she was seeing. She reached out to grab a loose ribbon - and Tasos slapped the hand away.

"Don't" He said before Eudokia had a chance to say anything. "We need to be careful - this may also be a trap. Let's try and find an exit first, or something"

Eudokia bit her lower lip, shooting a conflicted glance towards the nearest pile, then nodded. The two moved further into the massive room, past the mountains of treasure - and eventually reached a central arena carved out of a ring of stalagmites. Compared to the rest of the chamber, the arena was shockingly empty of any treasure - with exception of a single oil lamp, placed in a pedestal where the Basileos's chamber would have been if this was a Golden Devils construction. Outside of that, it was eerily void of anything - even sound.

Eudokia's nails hardened and Tasos readied his bow - they had nowhere else to go, sure, but this was about as obvious a trap as there could be. The sound of stone gates closing behind them the instant they reached the lamp pedestal was almost conforting in a way - a confirmation of their situation.

Then a giant two-tailed scorpion dug itself out of the ground, clad in golden armor, and Tasos gulped. He dropped back and fired a prodding arrow - which bounced right off of the beast's hide. The scorpion hissed and spat out a spray of acid at the pair - forcing Tasos to dive down to the main ground floor to avoid it.

"Any clue what that thing is?" Tasos asked Eudokia who was rushing at the beast, ready to strike - only to be slapped back by a wide tail swing. The girl spun in the air and pressed against the arena wall before dropping back to her feet - the scorpion turning fully towards her, with one of the tails still trained towards Tasos.

"Two-Tailed Gouger Scorpion!" Eudokia called out. "We had a lot of them where I grew up - problem is they're usually about the size of my hand, and not armored! One hit from the stinger and the poison will put you down"

The scorpion hissed again and struck at Eudokia with both pincers and one of its stingers - forcing the girl to slide low and purposefully tank the claw sweep to avoid the poisonous tail. The hit sent her flying sideways, towards the gate. Tasos moved to reinforce, but the other tail shot out towards him the second he moved - forcing him to instead dive low and barely slide under the strike. He pulled at his bow and felt an incredibly heavy arrow materialize - which he fired at great strain, the staff-sized projectile slamming into the tail and flinging it across in a circle that gouged a deep crease into the arena wall. Tasos was now just below the pedestal with the scorpion fully trained on him, ready to strike - then an echoing shriek pierced through the cavern as a two-headed golden eagle shot into the sky. The scorpion turned, shocked at the sudden appearance - just in time to match Eudokia's diving strike and force the girl to kick off the side of one tail to avoid a hit. The tails continued on, fishing for a hit on the eagle which flew just out of reach.

Eudokia landed right besides Tasos.

"Alright, archer boy - any plans? Kata again?" She prodded. The eagle swooped for a strike, avoiding another tail strike - but its rending talons did nothing to the beast's hide. Still, Tasos noticed scratches near its pincer...

"Your claws have been the only attack of ours hurting it - Kata probably won't break through" He answered. "If I get you a clean hit to the head, can you take it?"

"I could, but I don't see how I'm getting the hit with those tails" Eudokia confirmed. "Unless you can do that?"

"I can damn well try" Tasos answered, his right hand collecting a bamboo slip and a talisman from his waist. "Going on your cue - I've only got one shot at this"

Eudokia whistled, prompting the eagle to dive down towards her position. She grabbed onto a talon and let herself be carried up into the air, twisting to avoid the scorpion's tail again as she got into position. Tasos set down the talisman on the ground in the meanwhile and stabbed the bamboo slip into it - the talisman making the slip sink into it. The inscriptions upon the slip began glowing, then spreading into a circle that became an arrow and finally an elaborate spade glyph - pointing towards the scorpion.

Tasos breathed deep as the inscriptions then flowed up his arms and legs, glowing ochre and making his skin darken. This particular talisman combination was one he'd found in the clan libraries, upon some never used and long-forgotten jade slip - a technique to empower the user's Blood of Bronze to multiple degrees of power above what they could normally achieve, in exchange for a period of rebound the day after the effect faded. It was a valuable tradeoff that would have been widely utilized if it wasn't for its key drawback - the effect would instantly fade the moment the user stepped out of the created glyph - It forced you to stand almost completely still.

For most combatants, this made the technique useless - but for an archer like Tasos whose weapon strengthened itself to match and maximize his own physical power, it was a perfect match - so long as he didn't miss, that is.

The Skycarver Basilisk extended and curved to match Tasos's new strength, two flagpole-sized arrows notching themselves into the bowstring. The Scorpion, lured by the whistle, had turned back towards Tasos and was rearing in to strike. Tasos aimed, turning his bow sideways to align each arrow with a tail, and steadied his breathing. The bow began drawing on his Qi, lines of ink-like glowing scripture carving their way up the arrows whose tips exploded in green flame.

At his current Realm, Tasos could only pull this trick when empowered. He moved his eyes away from the tails and locked them into the scorpion's beady upper eyes. Eudokia whistled sharply and dropped from the eagle's head, nails extending into foot-long talons, and spun like a drill towards the scorpion's head the instant it moved to strike.

'My pride refines in stillness. My hope refines in motion. My soul refines through change" He muttered low, releasing the bowstring as the words rippled outward. The arrows flew, each catching a tail right in the stinger and smashing them against the far wall of the arena. There was an emerald glow as the Scorpion shrieked - then the light died down, showing the arrows hadn't just impaled into the far wall. Instead, the arrows and the stinger tails had petrified, changing to match the sandstone that the arena was carved out of and almost melting into it.

Defenseless, the Scorpion raised its head and tried to raise its pincers to block - but Eudokia was faster and tore through the upper eyes, into the head cavity and out below in a spray of chitin and hemolymph. The beast gurgled and swayed in place - then fell to the ground, fulminated and dead. Then the corpse grew smaller and smaller - disappearing entirely as a golden cuirass and helmet dropped to the ground beside Eudokia. The girl didn't waste a second, and grabbed the armor.

"This is mine" She roared - making Tasos grin. Eudokia turned to him and nudged to his side. "Take the lamp - we damn well earned it"

Tasos did so, swiping the lamp - and the very moment it left the pedestal, the entire arena crumbled down. He was about to whoop in triumph when the cavern itself began shaking - and stalactites dropped from the ceiling to crash against the piles of treasure.

"Does it never end?" He said, incredulous - just before Eudokia pushed him out of the way of a falling stalactites.

"Pay attention, archer boy!" She called out - and Tasos couldn't help but feel like Eudokia's tone was slightly less condemning this time. That's what facing death with someone did, he guessed. "How do we get out of here now?"

On another hunch, Tasos grabbed at his cicada amulet - which began singing like the real thing during mating season. A flying carpet suddenly swooped down towards the pair - stopping in front of them. Tasos jumped up in an instant and offered a hand to Eudokia.

"I don't know, but I sure hope this is it!" He answered, and the girl grabbed onto his hand. He pulled her up, then grabbed tight into the carpet's side-tassels. "Hang on!"

Eudokia locked her arms around Tasos's chest just a second before the carpet shot upwards at breathtaking speed, swerving through the falling rocks and straight at the ceiling. Tasos closed his eyes just as they were about to hit the rock - which opened up, letting them speed through the sands and back out into the desert three schoenus away from their original position. The carpet then turned upside-down, unceremoniously dumping the pair into the sands, and flew away into the sunset.

"This is the last time" Tasos groaned, picking himself off the ground. He quickly made sure he had kept everything - his bow, the lamp, his other belongings - while Eudokia climbed to her knees and tossed the armor at the sand in front of her. "If this amulet tosses me into the sand one more time, I'm flinging it into a lake"

"I don't think you have much to worry" Eudokia said, looking over Tasos's shoulder. He turned just in time to see the gigantic antlion pit that had formed behind them explode into a sand geyser reaching fifty stories tall. "I don't think there's much of a cavern left"

"At least we got out" Was all Tasos could say. He lifted the lamp he'd retrieved and turned it to get a better look. "What did we get?"

"It's about time we test, no?" Eudokia said, donning her cuirass before Tasos could stop her. There was a split second where nothing happened - then the helmet flew over, covering her head, and the armor gleamed as if in direct sunlight before molding itself to her form. The cuirass resized itself and was joined by a pair of mela spaulders and a long metallic lorikion that nonetheless moved like leather. The helmet seemingly melted into Eudokia's hair, becoming a circlet and bands decorating her shoulder-high dreads. Manikia wrist guards and mouzakia greaves and sandals were next - then from behind, two golden scorpion tails longer than the girl was tall formed, coiled above her ready to strike. Eudokia gave a couple quick strikes with her hands and legs, then with the tails - which moved independent from anything else at her command.

"This is weightless" She said, awed. "I like this very much, yes. It'll take a while to get used to - but I think I can live with that. I think I'd like to doff it now, though"

The armour began melting into itself, until only an ornate scorpion-shaped gold necklace remained. Tasos whistled in appreciation.

"That was... something" He admitted. "You might've gotten the better part of this adventure"

"We still don't know what your lamp does, archer boy" Eudokia answered, leaning forward. "Go ahead, do something with it"

Tasos obliged - and spent a few minutes trying to get the lamp to do just so. The cap wouldn't come off, and it didn't seem to take his Qi no matter what he did - he eventually began trying random things, like flicking it with a finger or tapping the top, or trying to light the lamp. Finally he rubbed it to clean some sand off the side - and a stream of sand came out of the end, whipping up a dust devil that battered into Tasos and Eudokia and turned the spot right below it into glass. The dust devil then collapsed inwards, shaping into a humanoid form - bald, with eight hands and a bandage wrapped around its face. It turned its head towards Tasos and opened its hands - revealing a single green eye in the middle of each palm - then spoke.

"I am Sandcradle Al Xian - Spirit of the Sands. I have been trapped inside the lamp for a thousand years-" it said - its voice echoing through the air in different octaves. The pupils of all eight eyes fixed on Tasos "-And I ask the name of the one who freed me"

Tasos gulped, looked around, and eventually spoke out.

"Tasos Basilakes" He answered - and the being nodded.

"So be it - Tasos Basilakes, raise your hand" Tasos wordlessly did so - and the being wrapped a hand around his wrist. Tasos hissed as pain shot up his arm, the smell of charred flesh filling the air - then it stopped and the creature let go. At the back of Tasos's bowstring was now the image of an eye, inscribed in gold, with lines going down and around the wrist in the shape of a tattooed-on bracelet. "The mark of the Covenant has been given, as a return for my freedom. One time, when you call on me, I will answer. Is there any further boon you would ask of me?"

"Uh - that's plenty good" The archer said, a bit overwhelmed. "Maybe transport to the southern gate?"

"So be it" Al Xian said - and waved his hand, creating another flying carpet. "This shall take you there. Until we meet again, Young Tasos Basilakes"

Then the form of Al Xian was blown away by the wind, turning into sand. Tasos and Eudokia shared a look.

"I think I win" The archer said, making Eudokia make a rude face.

"Shut up, Anastasios - please"



I think Tasos and Eudokia would be around late 2nd Heavenstage at this point. I tried to fit in Formations and only realized that they needed some field setup like... 3k words into this, but I tried to work it out afterwards. Hopefully people enjoy my take on this! Detailed combat descriptions are kind of my thing, but I tried to dial back on the specific and let things go a bit more grandiose here to match a Xianxia feel - let me know how it went. Not sure if I want the Six-Circle Bronze Spade (the thingy tasos used to uber-boost his bronze) or his first Basilisk-centric technique to be his Fighting Across Realms thing or if I'd rather something else - any opinions?

Also, I'll add new seeds to index after dinner - I think there's a couple.
 
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Do the Godlen Devils use Demonic Tunes and Soul Investigators in their legions? Demonic Tunes cause buffs, so it should be a benefit to the legions battle formations to use them, but I don't know if anyone has mentioned they exist yet, or if the legion doesn't use them.
 
Daedalus and Nicovas added to the index so I think we're up to date there.

Do the Godlen Devils use Demonic Tunes and Soul Investigators in their legions? Demonic Tunes cause buffs, so it should be a benefit to the legions battle formations to use them, but I don't know if anyone has mentioned they exist yet, or if the legion doesn't use them.

One of the Good Seeds in the no omake category is a Demonic Tune specialist I think.
 
Do the Godlen Devils use Demonic Tunes and Soul Investigators in their legions? Demonic Tunes cause buffs, so it should be a benefit to the legions battle formations to use them, but I don't know if anyone has mentioned they exist yet, or if the legion doesn't use them.
I'm fairly sure they do. Among our Good Seeds, I recall Aretaphilia Myia, Lin Fan, and I think one other to be Demonic Tunists, and while we don't have any Soul Investigator Good Seeds as of yet, there might be one eventually.

(What I'm trying to get across is that they weren't remarked on for being unique just for being Demonic Tunists, so there's very probably more.)
 
I'm fairly sure they do. Among our Good Seeds, I recall Aretaphilia Myia, Lin Fan, and I think one other to be Demonic Tunists, and while we don't have any Soul Investigator Good Seeds as of yet, there might be one eventually.

(What I'm trying to get across is that they weren't remarked on for being unique just for being Demonic Tunists, so there's very probably more.)
My opinion is that while the Demonic Tunists are not zero among the Golden Devils. The Golden Devil legions do not rely upon Demonic Tunists as a supplement among the legions. They may have them, but the use of them is a privilege for the legion commanders, instead of a common ability of the legion commanders to call upon Demonic Tunists to supplement battle formations.

It's just that I haven't seen a single demonic tunist's abilities used in battle formations, or practice along battle formations among the legion. I may have missed something. The sole Demonic Tunist I was aware of was more of a wandering demonic tunist.
 
It's just that I haven't seen a single demonic tunist's abilities used in battle formations, or practice along battle formations among the legion. I may have missed something. The sole Demonic Tunist I was aware of was more of a wandering demonic tunist.

I think that's more the result of there not being that many active Omake writers who favour those styles. A lot of the structure and pattern for how those things work have been left to to us the 'players' - so there's a lot of spaces that have been well expanded by players while others like Demonic Tunists or Soul Investigators remain unexplored due to writers' narrative spotlight being away from them.

Occip hasn't said anything against those kinds of characters which considering there's been a couple Demonic Tunist good seeds, says a lot IMO. So, if you want to expand on that idea, I'd say go for it.
 
The way I have it worked out in my head is as three things; which are generally encapsulated by her internal blast furnace heat that smells like cinnamon, the bio-feedback control allowing her to manipulate her own bones and muscles even when her spine is broken as it essentially turns her body into a Legion, and to put her in spiky armor that can impale people on.

Technically they're references to some of my favorite fiction, but eh, those aren't too important just side "concept" work basically. For people who want to know:

-Sandworms from Dune, as their internal spaces are described like blast furnaces with a breath that smells like cinnamon.

-The Pillar Men from Jojo's Bizzare Adventures, as she's able to control her organs, small muscles, and bones in a method inspired by them. I actually had a few ideas on how to awaken her bloodline, one of them being that she might be able to essentially have her body turn into glass dust that infiltrates their meridians and tears them apart from the inside. Some of that has remained.

-The Shrike from Hyperion Cantos, a time travelling super robot as an appearance reference because it was covered in spiky chrome armor and had a roar like a fusion torch. Its more aesthetic appearance of spiky freakiness though, since she's definitely not chrome colored and is much more pink.
--Connected to the above is also a being called Szoreny from Exalted, which is basically a living super forest of mercury trees and a metaphor for parallel universes and reflections. It has some fun magic connected to it that I'll be pulling from in future.
Anyway, at the moment its presented as a final strike kind of thing since she awoke it in a moment of desperation but its truthfully meant to be a more serious state for combat in general that she makes use of consistently. With it made and after I deal with my vengeance arc I'm going be spending time actually working on specializing Formations and training newbs, perhaps working on improving the Hoplite at Qi Condensation level for easier sustainability at the cost of some more rigidity in movement. Not sure precisely what yet.

Wow. So erm, i'm not too familiar with the referenced series, but to me it comes across as a upgrade Extermis from Ironman 3. The internal furnance + Intense healing speed with maybe a dash of fire breath.

And since she can manipulate her own bones, definitely shades of Wolverine and Spike from X-men EVO. It's definitely a very Body Cultivator feel ? Although i also get the impression that she be good if she dabbles in forging. I mean any gear from it will sound epic just from the material involved

Regarding the Hoplite Formation, i think that will be very interesting to see ingame! I like the idea of our Good Seeds as a whole contributing to the Clan. What came to my mind with what you mentioned about sustainability would be something like a Phalanx formation, which maybe takes advantage of the sheer numbers of QI condensation cultivators we have ?

" Glass forged within, compressed and purged of impurities by the Qi of a Core Formation with the faint impression of 12 pillars surrounding a pillar that challenges the heavens "
Peta waved goodbye to the Great Mudslide bear as he meandered in the direction of the Devil Bee lands. He'd arrived at the oasis to bathe and restore his qi, displacing an entire city that depended on the natural resource. Now that his qi was restored, getting him to leave was as simple as polity informing him that Devil Bees probably make Devil Honey.

"He was very reasonable."

Bears are often reasonaable, if we are not hungry or afraid. We can eat anything, and we are big and strong for our cultivation level, so we are not often hungry or afraid.
Thanks for the following mental image


I now see Winne the Pooh rampaging in Devil Bees lands....
"Heaven needs a bear."
Best line so far. I too would like to joint the Church of the Holy Bear.
She opened her mouth and drew in a great breath. A sound like a roaring inferno kicked up and echoed for a li in every direction as hot sand was ripped from the dunes and into her mouth. Passing between her teeth it sparked and danced in her mouth for fraction of a second before the sheer heat of her blast furnace innards transmuted it into glass which she drank down without harm. Her mount shook his head and whinnied irritably but he'd gotten used to her antics and she paid him no mind.

This is definitely a bloodline suited for the desert! It'll be interesting to see if the glass that she forges will be improved if she has access to better sand. I mean Tamahagane is made from Iron sand, so i'm sure there will be a Xianxia equivalent.
To my skilled Senior Brother Xiao Yi this humble Junior Sister in the eighth Heavenstage by the name of Ferenike of the Golden Devils,
sends this missive as I hunt a Battle Blood Cannibal rebel by the name of Zu Jing. I will not bore you of the details of my greivances
with him, as that is not the purpose of me contacting you as I humbly am. I am aware of your superlative skill with Formations, particularly your clever manipulations of the Kataphractoi. While that esteemed work is not the one I specialize in, the equally esteemable Hoplite being my passion, I find myself on the path to in time begin training some of our newest juniors by the orders of Centurion Dragoumis, superlative Centurion of the Ninth Century of the Fifth Cohort of the Ninth Legion.

I wished to ask for your advice on training them when it comes time for me to join you on the Mustering Yard as a leader to our juniors and to seek your wisdom on the Art of Formations. If you wish to heed this humble request please accept this gift of one hundred year Silver Peach Wine for yourself and Century Scorpion Oats for your Qilin Qing Yun. A mighty beast I would say from tales I have heard and what I have witnessed in my time at the Fortress, you are both blessed by your bond. Send any responses through the Scorpion Legion mail service addressed as I have introduced myself to you.

And a simple riddle to amuse you.

Sand cuts sharply
The rocks whistle
Rice stalks dance

What drives us so?

-Ferenike of the Golden Devils
:o:o That sudden name drop!

But thanks for the prompt! I'll see if i can come-up with something so that it continues inverse!
Around his neck hung a necklace of fist sized Buddhist rosary beads, with three particularly large ones sitting in front and inscribed with the words Truth, Love, and Fist in golden ink.
Yes, FIST is perfectly Buddhist. How else can you reform the evildoers ?
Here @occipitallobe another omake for you! Introducing mining city aesthetics and the wonderful Gong Rencao and exploring Flood Dragon fashion choices as we start off the Vengeance arc. I'd like to put this supplemental towards my Cultivation roll this turn.

@Mochinator I decided that it would be a great idea for my Good Seed to send a letter to yours so that we could get some kind of on screen interaction between them. Hope it works for you!
Thanks again! i'm gonna go rack my brans!
I think Tasos and Eudokia would be around late 2nd Heavenstage at this point. I tried to fit in Formations and only realized that they needed some field setup like... 3k words into this, but I tried to work it out afterwards.
Just a minor detail, but this questwise, Formations are Group Qi Spells. Arrays are the ones that are written on talisman or need setup. But it's a minor issue! It can very easily be fluff as them just using the Qi spell since it is something all the Clansmen would know.

Feel free to ignore me!

I think that's more the result of there not being that many active Omake writers who favour those styles. A lot of the structure and pattern for how those things work have been left to to us the 'players' - so there's a lot of spaces that have been well expanded by players while others like Demonic Tunists or Soul Investigators remain unexplored due to writers' narrative spotlight being away from them.

Occip hasn't said anything against those kinds of characters which considering there's been a couple Demonic Tunist good seeds, says a lot IMO. So, if you want to expand on that idea, I'd say go for it.
I agree! A Demonic Tunes Commander or Formation specialist would be interesting!
 
On a random note that has everything to do with the fact I am currently rereading I Shall Seal The Heavens, I have been oddly certain for a while now that eventually one of our client states is going to stand up and slope out to sea without warning.

My money is on the Xin Kingdom, it looks like just the right shape.....

Who do you think the Turtle Emperor really is?

;)

On wikis and the like, I think it might be a good idea. My original idea was just a big long Google Doc, to be honest, but this might easier - it'd have history to revert as well, which helps prevent vandalism. But my main thought is more somewhere to reference techniques and places for writers.

I suppose it wouldn't hurt to add characters in as well. My main thought is just 'I would like somewhere that new players could come and have an easy reference to help them work their Good Seeds into the universe'. I think a wiki would do well, especially because it wouldn't be hard for people to put their own things on there.

Ideally I'd just have a big post in-thread, but the problem is letting people edit it.

Not sure if we need a wiki - but I'm not going to stop you from making one. I'll stick with the index so we have an easy-ish way to filter through thread that's actually in-thread.

I think a wiki is definitely overkill at the moment, but I've consistently underestimated how much this thread will grow and much how content will be added to it. Part of me is feeling maybe it's wise to err on the size of overestimation.

So @occipitallobe how does it feel that this quest eclipsed the amount of pages your old quest produced in three years, in less than a month?

edit: Apparently hitting enter sometimes just posts your post. Huh.

Bit crazy. Little sad it's so crazy and hard to split my focus to Vorstallen, but I'm sure things will calm down and I'll be able to eventually.

I've got a bunch of stuff to do, so I'll read and threadmark a bit later. Covid warning in the area, so time to mask up hard with my sanding/woodworking respirator and go do the weekly shopping.
 
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Just a minor detail, but this questwise, Formations are Group Qi Spells. Arrays are the ones that are written on talisman or need setup. But it's a minor issue! It can very easily be fluff as them just using the Qi spell since it is something all the Clansmen would know.

Feel free to ignore me!

Uh, not according to the reference document that I got linked for Xianxia stuff no. That one specifically mentions how Formations also require setup and a formation boundary thingy, and I haven't really seen in-quest diversions of that. In the scenes Tasos and Eudi still deploy their own Formations without working in tandem - he just sets up the boundary before that in the first scene, due to trying to remain consistent with the reference doc.

/shrug - it works either way. You can take it as some sort of amplifier to allow rookies to use their Formations more easily if you want.
 
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Uh, not according to the reference document that I got linked for Xianxia stuff no. That one specifically mentions how Formations also require setup and a formation boundary thingy, and I haven't really seen in-quest diversions of that. In the scenes Tasos and Eudi still deploy their own Formations without working in tandem - he just sets up the boundary before that in the first scene, due to trying to remain consistent with the reference doc.

/shrug - it works either way. You can take it as some sort of amplifier to allow rookies to use their Formations more easily if you want.
The reference document is just a general thing for Xianxia to get the idea of the setting and common features, but individual ones often deviate to varying extents. Here's the relevant quote on Formations/Arrays within this quests, btw.
Most cultivation stories when translated I've seen use formation and array for more-or-less the same thing, or two entirely different things.

For the purposes of this quest, Formations are cultivation techniques like any other, but designed to be practiced en masse. Basically 'battle formations' but magical and cultivator-ey.

Arrays are a kind of usually fixed magical artifact that can produce a certain effect in a certain area. They're generally less flexible than other artifacts (you cant pick up the Glass Spear Array and go wandering around the way you could with a magical glass spear), and less durable, but much easier to produce for the same level of effect.
 
The reference document is just a general thing for Xianxia to get the idea of the setting and common features, but individual ones often deviate to varying extents. Here's the relevant quote on Formations/Arrays within this quests, btw.

At which point, again, feel free to just take the talisman-settings as a sort of amplifier - it's not stated in-context anyways, and the Scorpion scene completely omits them. I was simply covering my bases.
 
No problem, but do you know how long the request usually takes on miraheze?
On wikis and the like, I think it might be a good idea. My original idea was just a big long Google Doc, to be honest, but this might easier - it'd have history to revert as well, which helps prevent vandalism. But my main thought is more somewhere to reference techniques and places for writers.

I suppose it wouldn't hurt to add characters in as well. My main thought is just 'I would like somewhere that new players could come and have an easy reference to help them work their Good Seeds into the universe'. I think a wiki would do well, especially because it wouldn't be hard for people to put their own things on there.

Ideally I'd just have a big post in-thread, but the problem is letting people edit it.

Speaking of which:


Needs prettying up, etc. But hey, it exists.
 
Who do you think the Turtle Emperor really is?

;)

On wikis and the like, I think it might be a good idea. My original idea was just a big long Google Doc, to be honest, but this might easier - it'd have history to revert as well, which helps prevent vandalism. But my main thought is more somewhere to reference techniques and places for writers.

I suppose it wouldn't hurt to add characters in as well. My main thought is just 'I would like somewhere that new players could come and have an easy reference to help them work their Good Seeds into the universe'. I think a wiki would do well, especially because it wouldn't be hard for people to put their own things on there.

Ideally I'd just have a big post in-thread, but the problem is letting people edit it.



I think a wiki is definitely overkill at the moment, but I've consistently underestimated how much this thread will grow and much how content will be added to it. Part of me is feeling maybe it's wise to err on the size of overestimation.



edit: Apparently hitting enter sometimes just posts your post. Huh.

Bit crazy. Little sad it's so crazy and hard to split my focus to Vorstallen, but I'm sure things will calm down and I'll be able to eventually.

I've got a bunch of stuff to do, so I'll read and threadmark a bit later. Covid warning in the area, so time to mask up hard with my sanding/woodworking respirator and go do the weekly shopping.
Its kind of unfortunate that while Thread Collaborators are a thing, its a very limited function and is just very obtuse to actually use (And I'm decently sure its limited to like two people). A long google doc and spreadsheet is probably for the best tbh, even if it is a bit ugly its basically going do what we generally need it too, especially coupled with Zephias's index.

Just going to ask again so I can clearly record things on my sheet for future reference, how much does my bloodline of the Boiling Legion of Glass Body boost Ferenike's combat power?

Wow. So erm, i'm not too familiar with the referenced series, but to me it comes across as a upgrade Extermis from Ironman 3. The internal furnance + Intense healing speed with maybe a dash of fire breath.

And since she can manipulate her own bones, definitely shades of Wolverine and Spike from X-men EVO. It's definitely a very Body Cultivator feel ? Although i also get the impression that she be good if she dabbles in forging. I mean any gear from it will sound epic just from the material involved

Regarding the Hoplite Formation, i think that will be very interesting to see ingame! I like the idea of our Good Seeds as a whole contributing to the Clan. What came to my mind with what you mentioned about sustainability would be something like a Phalanx formation, which maybe takes advantage of the sheer numbers of QI condensation cultivators we have ?

" Glass forged within, compressed and purged of impurities by the Qi of a Core Formation with the faint impression of 12 pillars surrounding a pillar that challenges the heavens "
Appearance wise when she's in a low power state, her veins and organs might show through a bit like Extremis does. As an image reference for the spikiness level I'm going for when fighting her hardest, it approaches this picture.


Behold the Shrike.

Made out of cherry red glass erupting from her glowing flesh like magma. (The four arms I'll get to later)

And its very much a case of incredibly powerful weapons forged from her blood and veins and a fire breath like dumping the molten products of a glass furnace on someone, with some improved healing.

In terms of things for Xiao Yi to say, your thoughts on the Phalanx are a great start I think!

This is definitely a bloodline suited for the desert! It'll be interesting to see if the glass that she forges will be improved if she has access to better sand. I mean Tamahagane is made from Iron sand, so i'm sure there will be a Xianxia equivalent.
I'm just fully pulling from Dune at this point, imagining the gigantic kilometer long Sandworms swallowing sand and feeding upon it.

Yes, FIST is perfectly Buddhist. How else can you reform the evildoers ?
Imagine him speaking with the bombast of Brian Blessed (though not his exact voice) and you have him about right.
 
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At which point, again, feel free to just take the talisman-settings as a sort of amplifier - it's not stated in-context anyways, and the Scorpion scene completely omits them. I was simply covering my bases.
Ofc sure that part is fine either way, I was just showing you the specifics on the quest's variation since you didn't see it yet. It's buried in the thread, after all, so fair odds a ton of people didn't see it.
 
Who do you think the Turtle Emperor really is?
I.. wha...?? :o

Legit 🤯🤯. Is there going to be a parrot as well ??
Made out of cherry red glass erupting from her glowing flesh like magma. (The four arms I'll get to later)

And its very much a case of incredibly powerful weapons forged from her blood and veins and a fire breath like dumping the molten products of a glass furnace on someone, with some improved healing.

In terms of things for Xiao Yi to say, your thoughts on the Phalanx are a great start I think!
Oh wow. For the enemies facing her due to their Asian-influenced background they're going to think she's a buddha reborn. Also, would you mind if i start a PM with you with Xiao Yi's reply ? I was thinking we could trade letters IC this way until enough is accumulated to make it an omake.

I don't really want to bloat the thread with just the reply since it'll be pretty short. I'm afraid i can't think of a scene to link the reply to...
 
Oh wow. For the enemies facing her due to their Asian-influenced background they're going to think she's a buddha reborn. Also, would you mind if i start a PM with you with Xiao Yi's reply ? I was thinking we could trade letters IC this way until enough is accumulated to make it an omake.

I don't really want to bloat the thread with just the reply since it'll be pretty short. I'm afraid i can't think of a scene to link the reply to...
Sure! I don't need tooooo many responses in order to have the right set up for my training arc.
 
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