Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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The thing is that each good seed can only go in once. Ever.

So there is a balance. If you go in as a peak qi condensation you can never go in again and obtain the FB or Core Formation rewards. It's going to be tricky deciding when to go.
 
The thing is that each good seed can only go in once. Ever.

So there is a balance. If you go in as a peak qi condensation you can never go in again and obtain the FB or Core Formation rewards. It's going to be tricky deciding when to go.
If you are still qi condensation at this point the cloud caves are likely to be your only chance at maybe catching up with older seeds before the end of the quest.
 
So there is a balance. If you go in as a peak qi condensation you can never go in again and obtain the FB or Core Formation rewards. It's going to be tricky deciding when to go.
It could depend. I remember during the testing the GS can go above their GR but at a increased risk and Occi mentioned he was thinking about if ascending while within is possible.

If Ascending is, then a sufficient lucky enough first mover might be able to be on par with the Cloud Floor Level via the First Clears and get far.
 
Xiao Yingzi 26 - [Turn 9] [The Patchwork Man]
Xiao Yingzi 26
[Turn 9]
[The Patchwork Man]

Heading back inside the late Legate's mansion, Xiao Yingzi began to venture beyond the front hall. Though the Legate's ghost and those bound to him were gone, she couldn't be certain that they were the only threat inside. The mansion had housed Legate Sanctius and over fifty of his centurions at its height. They each had their own experiments running, experiments that had been abandoned for nearly a hundred years.

Fortunately, while the house seemed to be filled with the remains of ghosts and ghostly experiments, there didn't seem to be any actual ghosts there anymore. As far as she and Elder Teleos could tell, most of them had been cannibalised by the Legate's ghost in order to extend the time they could last upon the Earth. What they mostly found were notes and devices, the study of which would likely require centuries.

The first sign of trouble she found was in a converted sparring hall. Standard reinforced walls designed to withstand centurion-level force and an entrance at a height with steps leading down to the floor, designed so that casual attacks couldn't easily pass through. It had been modified however and a barbed-wire gate replaced the usual door.

The first thing she noticed upon peering through was a large mechanical coffin on the other side of the room. A strange aura emanated from it - like the sickly green-bronze aura of a legionnaire dying of old age but with a discordant edge to it as if it were multiple auras. The strangeness interfered with her ability to gauge its strength.

She carefully got the gate open and went down from the stairs, keeping an eye on the coffin and looked around. The first thing she noticed upon properly entering the room was the smell. It smelt like burnt flesh and melted bronze, a terrible combination for a golden devil.

It set her on edge.

Then she saw the full scope of the wiring and mechanical contraptions running along the sides of the room. She recognised them from working with Victor - arrays designed to channel electricity and lightning though she couldn't tell their purpose. It was completely different from the rest of the house.

As soon as she stepped off the stairs and her feet touched the ground, she heard a hiss and a click. She quickly turned around to see the gate close tightly and a section of the wall behind it extending to cover the entire entrance. She had half-expected that to happen with the way the room looked.

There was the hiss of steam escaping behind her and then a loud clang as the lid of the coffin was opened. Whatever is in there is free, isn't it? Xiao Yingzi asked, her enhanced senses confirming a burst of strange, discordant qi behind her. And we are supposed to be trapped here with it?

A given definition of trapped. Elder Teleos agreed. This place is quite old. We should be able to break through if we wish. That aside, anyone could have seen this coming.

She turned to see the top of the coffin tossed aside, steam obscuring its occupant. Two large hands reached out to grasp the sides. One of them was statuesque bronze clearly belonging to a body cultivator of the clan, while the other was a lighter color and reinforced with iron gears and armor along its sides. Iron nails were bolted all both of them and then it began to pull itself up.

A Corpse Puppet. Elder Teleos warned her. Likely stitched together from multiple bodies and reinforced besides. Keep your distance until we know how strong it is.

Without hesitation, she pointed her spear at it and sent the strongest blast of lightning she could muster right between those arms. The force was enough to knock it back down but the hands maintained their grips and after a moment, it began to pull itself up once more. Grimacing, Xiao Yingzi sent another blast to it but this time it didn't falter.

Though the steam was cleared, for a moment the lightning blocked the creature from her sight. She halted her barrage for a second and the lightning cleared immediately, dispersing into the iron nails throughout its body. As the lightning subsided, it was clear to her senses - the discordant wail of its body was even louder.

It seems to use lightning as a power source. The elder noted, a touch too late. Xiao Yingzi ignored him in favor of watching as it stepped out of the coffin fully and gave her a good look at it's large bronze body.

While it's physique was more or less proportionate, even though it was clearly not from a single individual. The right hand and the left leg looked as if they were taken from a bronze statue, or at least a clan body cultivator with a strong bloodline. The rest of it was taken from other individuals and seemed to be reinforced by metal to match them.

The rest of the body was equally patchwork. There was a large metal armor over it's chest, hiding the inner workings of its body and half a helmet was bolted to it's head. The half of the face she could see had a rather attractive male face utterly devoid of any emotions.

Except for its eye.

The bloody blue eye turned maniacally, staring so fiercely that it might just jump out of it's sockets. It almost seemed like it was trapped in there. Then settled upon her and froze for a moment, as if taken aback by her presence.

Then it raised it's metallic left hand towards her and she held her spear up, bracing for an attack. A bolt of lightning jumped at her, matching in intensity the blast she had sent towards it. As it closed on her body, it was suddenly drawn away into her spear by it's defiant bronze. With a flick of her wrist, she redirected it to the ground.

For a moment, the creature didn't do anything, merely taken aback by the ease with which she deflected the attack. Then the moment passed. It stamped the ground with it's left leg and with a surge of electrifying qi, the herculean bronze arm was suddenly bearing down at her. Foot technique. She noted as she dodged to the side and spun out the way.

Physically, I'd estimate it at the third pillar. The Elder added. Probably more dangerous with that step technique and whatever other techniques it has. Her dodging the attack prompted it to shoot another bolt of lighting at her, which she blocked with the same ease as before. Though it seems to be fairly stupid, so probably not that dangerous.

With a surge of qi strengthening her muscles, she stepped behind it in a fluid motion. Making a fist, she smashed the creature in it's unarmored spine with her full strength. Though it connected cleanly, all she seemed to have managed was a bruise on her own fist. Third Pillar seems right. She remarked. Stronger and tougher than me at any rate.

She jumped back as the creature whirled around, smashing the place where she was standing with a hammer-blow. She felt the wind on her face and struck back with her spear, hoping it's sharp edge would be enough to pierce its tough skin and armor. Though her strike only grazed it's limb, she could tell it pierced through…

Only to watch with interest as sparks of lightning arced between the two sides of the cut and stitched it back together. Uncaring of the wound, it's metal arm reached for her, trying to grasp for her and she jumped underneath it, aiming for the 'elbow' of the metal mechanism.

Though the impact felt different, her spear still pierced through. She pushed it in deeper and twisted, before wrenching it to the side with qi-enhanced strength. It ripped the hand apart and the arm fell to the side. Uncaring, the creature grasped at her with its other hand but she jumped back to dodge its retaliatory blow.

As she moved, she saw a spark jump from limb to stump. Then the iron nails vibrated and then the arm was pulled back to the stump, reattaching and then healing as the previous wound had. Xiao Yingzi jumped back a few steps back, away from the creature's easy reach and took a moment to consider her next move. It's energy is depleting, the Elder advised. If you keep it up, you should be able to tire it out.

Xiao Yingzi considered that suggestion. What about striking the heart or separating the head?

A corpse puppet usually needs neither. Teleos replied. But feel free to try it. We'll be depleting its energy faster either way.

Xiao Yingzi thought for a moment as the creature turned on her. It had it's bronze fist back and leg forward to perform the same maneuver as the last time but before it could close the distance, she moved towards it. There was a momentary hesitation as it adapted to her sudden approach, switching to a downward smash into the floor.

She dodged it of course, but the sheer force from it shattering the air would have likely sent her sprawling if she hadn't already moved underneath it's legs and out behind it. Still putting all of its weight on the bronze hand, it reached towards her with it's armored left, charging another bolt. She moved towards it, deflecting the lightning mid-way as she jumped on the outstretched hand, running up it.

The creature grasped for her with it's other bronze hand but the position was awkward enough that it slowed it enough for her to strike. Her spear struck into its throat, meeting metal before breaking through even that. With a twist and a shove, she sent it flying. Then she jumped away, just as the creature grasped where she used to be.

Even as the head flipped through the air, one hateful eye focused upon her, sparks began to form between the head and the neck, altering the head's trajectory and drawing it back. The bronze hand reached up and tried to grab it but before they could, Xiao Yingzi tossed her spear at the head, staking it to the ceiling.

Sparks still travelled upwards, trying to re-connect but the spear was a heavenly treasure and drew the lightning away first, dispersing it before it affected the head. Still, the head didn't die, only glaring at her hatefully and for a moment the body froze, indecisively torn between going after her or retrieving the head.

Well, that's certainly one way to ensure it burns up energy.

Then it suddenly bent down at the knees, arms swinging back to balance as sparks rippled through the floor. Then it jumped up with a blast of electric force, not quite landing but smashing into the ceiling a distance away from the spear and its head. Rather than falling, lightning stretched outwards from it's body letting it stick to the ceiling as if it were a floor.

Interesting. It seems to have some versions of most of the standard cultivator abilities. Elder Teleos noted, unconcerned by the hulk slowly reaching for his spear-body. Don't break it too badly, Xiao Yingzi. I do want to learn how it functions.

Xiao Yingzi sighed and drew upon the whispers of the spear. They slid into her mind despite their distance from her and she felt the world slow and become redefined as she accepted them fully. She took a breath and analysed the battle.

Even as her mind worked, she began to run towards the walls acting on half-formed thoughts.

Her target was the Patchwork Man. Threat Level: Third Pillar. It's strengths were its power, healing ability and its ability to eat and manipulate lightning. It's weaknesses were it's sheer foolishness and strange anger inside it. An idea formed in her mind as information from the past joined together in just the right way in her mind.

She clung to the walls, making sure to avoid the metal contraptions as she made her way to the ceiling.

It wasn't a simple automaton or corpse puppet. She realised as she moved. The speciality of Legate Sanctius and his centurions was ghosts and spirits. They couldn't be using simple mechanics or advanced arrays. There was a method of binding heavenly lightning using spirits that allowed a highly adaptable system - the kind necessary for animating a body that was made from so many disparate parts.

As she reached the ceiling, the body began to reach for it's head and her spear. The head turned a hateful look upon her.

That hate was exactly the disadvantage of that method. The Earthly Spirit Binding Method involved binding a spirit of electricity to heavenly lightning, the former being similar enough to control it but distinct enough that it went mad in time and almost inevitably went on a rampage. This spirit had been bound for a hundred years. It had almost certainly gone mad, however…

She took a moment to glance at the room as she raised an armored hand, reaching for the spear.

It was a sparring room - even the ceiling she was clinging to with qi was a perfect copy of the floor intended for cultivators who could fight in all three dimensions. It was likely maddened far before the Legate passed and the house was abandoned. She spared a moment to recall the shadow spirit once bound to her, and thought that she should perhaps end it's misery.

Just as the creature reached for its head, her spear spun out of there, landing with a resounding thunk into her outstretched hand.

The head still staked to it. She wasn't certain that would have been the case. Sparks jumped from the head as it furiously attempted to electrocute her but the barest of attention had them discharge harmlessly into the ceiling.

The hulking body turned towards her carefully, making sure it didn't fall as it clung to the ceiling. She began moving to the side and watched the body adjust accordingly.

The way it ensured that it's full body was always pointed towards her told her it could use the rush technique it used on the ground, but that likely cancelled the technique it was using to bind itself to the ceiling. It was likely waiting to get closer to ensure that she couldn't dodge. Given the lack of lightning bursts, it could likely only perform one major manipulation of lightning at a time and as long as she was on the ceiling, it would be too busy clinging to it.

The enemy had a time limit and had limited moves, giving her the tactical advantage.

The plan was obvious.

She took a deep breath and stopped in place. Then she put a hand to the ceiling to better firm up her grip. The patchwork creature came towards her, slowly picking up speed as it realised she wasn't moving before at the final moment, it rushed towards her hand outstretched to grab her.

As the patchwork creature came towards her, she moved to the side.

The creature missed her entirely, smashing into the wall behind her and the lightning spread from its body letting it cling to that as it pushed itself up and began to climb up again. Letting a smile show on her lips, she moved away from the body, running to the other side of the wide ceiling so that it couldn't get close to her nor could it aim it's body at her and rush.

Though it was strictly stronger than her, her overwhelming skill combined with her tactical advantages meant that the battle was won.

Now the fight just had to end.

It went on in that manner for a while with her dodging and leading it to its demise.Even after a hundred years, it took her nearly ten minutes of battle before the patchwork man began to slow.

The first signs of it faltering was a momentary stumble as it turned towards her. It nearly fell, but a burst of power allowed it to pull itself back. It didn't fight her after that, instead it just sat on the same place, lightning crackling as it maintained its grip and raised its arms at her in a grasping motion.

Finally, the motion stopped.

Then the lightning shorted out.

The body fell to the floor with a great crash.

She landed herself soon after, keeping a distance just in case while she glanced at the still active head on her spear. It still glared at her with that hateful eye but she could feel it's power dwindling.

Soon the weakness came. It's eyelid drooped, but it forced it back up, still glaring at her with those hateful eyes. She could almost pretend that it was fighting sleep instead of her. Finally it closed and there was a moment of silence as she placed it on the floor.

Do you think we can get it working again? Elder Teleos asked her hopefully. It was fascinating.

Victor probably could, if we can entice him here. Xiao Yingzi replied. I'll need help to sort through all the information here and he's the only one of us with a proper century.

Then that's the plan then. Elder Teleos replied, filled with excitement at exploring all of the lore available to him.

Yes, that does seem like the plan.
 
Antaeus Rhodessus - Good Seed Background
Coming at you with the most dangerous possible turn to start another good seed, after my first one already bit the bullet. Made this basic format for my old seed, back when the rules were pretty different, so do let me know if I'm missing anything, as well as any critiques of my writing. Always appreciate feedback.


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Antaeus Rhodessus


The Blood of Bronze, a trademark characteristic of the Golden Devil Clan that has given birth to their notable title, stands as a unique mystery to historians across the continent, and even many within the Golden Devils themselves. Though the original form remains the most prevalent in the Clan, experimentation and breeding with other bloodlines in an effort to improve the Golden Devil's lot has resulted in a slew of strange variants and branching constitutions among many more esoteric members of the Clan. The Rhodessus family boasts one such variant, and with considerable pride. Even from birth, Rhodessus children appear lightly bronzed, a condition that becomes ever more prevalent as they age, Blood of Bronze suffusing their bodies in such concentrations that, as they reach their adolescent years, the hardiness of their skin and bones rivals that of most Qi Condensation clansmen. As they enter the path of cultivation, their Blood of Bronze continues to purify at an unprecedented rate, or so Elders of the family claim, and members of the Rhodessus family, whether they be within Qi Condensation, Foundation Establishment, or even Core Formation, can confidently boast of a level of natural durability and physical power that knows almost no peer within their realm.

This constitution, however, comes at no small cost. While the Rhodessus can rely on the Blood of Bronze's trademark advantages in spades, they must battle its drawbacks as well, their joints becoming calcified and stiff even before they embark on the path of cultivation, and their bodies weighing several times what their appearances might suggest. Were it not for special techniques developed by family members of ages past, the family's few Core Formation elders would crack the stone and tile where they walk, or sink into sand like a stone into treacle. No other cost, however, approaches that which all members of the family who embark on the path of cultivation must eventually face, should they not die in a more violent manner. As they ascend through the realms and stages of their cultivation, the Blood of Bronze flowing throughout their body multiplies at an ever-quickening rate, their bodies becoming stiffer and stiffer as they transition from hardened flesh into genuine mineral. By the time they reach the Great Circle of Core Formation, no matter how swift their ascension, the family member has calcified into nothing less then a bronze statue, even their veins and internal organs transforming into lifeless, unyielding bronze. The family's personal graveyard contains not headstones, but the calcified bodies of distant ancestors, a grim reminder of the fate every member of the family will eventually share.

Nevertheless, this ailment is one the Rhodessus bear with boisterous pride, hiding the doomed nature of every member of their family behind smiles, boasts, and the fond remembrance of past glories. More then any other family, the Rhodessus throw themselves into the task of self-sacrifice with reckless abandon, shielding others with bodies that they know will be lost in time regardless. Many consider Rhodessus family members almost manic in their willingness to face harm for the good of the clan, their actions seeming to have more in common with those of zealots then clansmen with a hardier than normal constitution. Still, their contributions and willingness to put their bodies on the line have resulted in no small number of merits and benefits for family members, and despite their by all accounts short life expectancy, the family have ascended to a position of relative acclaim within the larger clan on the back of this willingness to endure pain and hardship for the greater good. Among this culture of self-sacrifice, Antaeus does little to break the norm. He has thrown himself into the training and preparation expected of all clansmen who wish to embark on the path of cultivation with typical Rhodessus abandon. Yet, while he shows no difference in mindset or any divine talent for cultivation, save a greater than normal grasp of the family's hand-to-hand and grappling techniques, time will tell if the heavens (or lack thereof) will see this young scion of Rhodessus meet the fate of all of his forebears, or ascend to heights unknown.


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Overall High Concept: A scion of a seemingly doomed bloodline who might, through luck, fate, or some strange combination of the two carve out a new path for his family.


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Basic Stats:


Current Status:
18 years old, Cultivator of the First Heavenstage of Qi Condensation


Effective Combat Strength: First Heavenstage of Qi Condensation


Life-saving Treasures: Nadda


Starting Perk: Pure Bronze Constitution, a constitution shared by all members of his family that affords them benefits far greater then those of normal bearers of the Blood of Bronze, though they suffer the drawbacks to a similarly greater degree, and eventually calcify into lifeless bronze statues past a certain age or level of cultivation.


Goal: To put his life on the line, earn yet more acclaim for his family, and see the Golden Devils ascend ever-onward.


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Omakes:
 
Sounds cool. The classic and storied power of the Optimatoi -- their Blood of Bronze -- and in a noble family member. Classic stories and concepts are classic, and it's cool to see a conventional (is that really the right word here? archetypical maybe?) clan good seed. :)
 
Gaius Antonius 44 - The Cursed Legacy Part 3 - A Clash of Folly
Gaius Antonius Omake #44: The Cursed Legacy, Part 3: A Clash of Folly

"Bai Xuefeng, please be more subtle about this. Even if you hate them, we don't have to confront them directly." Gaius pleaded in vain as his temporary master led the two across the basin toward the luxuious tent of the enemy family's scion.

"She won't dare start anything, and I won't either." The ruthless woman said, not taking her eyes off the target. Already, three people were getting out of the tent, and from their posture they seemed very unhappy to have company. "Neither family wants to start a war; I just want to know what the fuck these people are doing!"

Before the pair could get within a hundred feet of the campsite, the three strangers quickly rushed out to meet them, stopping only about ten feet away.

"My, you seem enthusiastic; has something got you worked up?" Asked a tall woman in red and purple robes with a large gold hairpiece. The physical similarities between her and Xuefeng were apparent to Gaius immediately.

"Get out of our face, we've done nothing to you." Scowled a small man with a bowl cut and a smartly-tailored green robe. He stood with an exceedingly stiff posture, and his face was fittingly severe.

"Done nothing? Don't give me that." Xuefeng pressed accusatorially. "We just found you messing around near the source of the Deep attacks, isn't that a little bit suspicious?"

The Wen girl scoffed. "Suspicious? I'm here to stop these attacks, you moron! I knew your family were foolish, but to think you'd be this hotheaded."

The third member, a large and muscular man wearing colorful orange clothes anda pair of circular tinted spectacles, said nothing, merely sneering confrontationally at the interlopers.

"Do you really think for a second that I would believe that?" Xuefeng mocked, spitting on the ground between them. "The Wen family can't win in a fair fight, so they use subterfuge to steal victory. This is right up your alley!"

The big man took a step forward, grinding his teeth and glaring at them from behind the tinted barrier obscuring his eyes. "Don't pay them any mind, Wen An. They're baiting you." He said, though his agressive body language betrayed a desire for a scrap beneath the reasonable exterior.

"You sure got that right, Hao Zhenya." Wen An laughed, smirking disrespectfully at the pair. "You don't really believe that shit, you just want me to be the one who starts the fight, so you can kill me in self defense."

As Gaius expected, none of this was cooling down at all; it was escalating. Any more of this and it would get ugly very fast. But if he jumped in at the wrong moment, everything could spiral out of control. He resolved to observe for just a bit longer.

"If you're really just here to hunt The Deep, then why have you set up camp in the basin?" Xuefend interrogated. "You're right above their hiding spot, why sit around? Unless of course you're not fighting them at all..."

"We were about to leave anyway." said the shorter man, who had not yet revealed his name. "The basin's empty; we thought the same as you, but there truly is nothing hidden here. Look for yourself if you don't believe us."

There! There was the wedge he could use to pry Xuefeng away from these people! "How about we check, Xuefeng? It will be simple enough, and we'll know by the end of the day whether they're telling the truth." Gaius insisted, bowing his head a little more than he would have liked.

"Alright, we'll do that." Xuefeng decided after some contemplation. "We'll see just how innocent you lot really are."

As conclusive as the statement was, Wen An's group took a while to leave, not speeding up their packing at all. For the next two hours, Gaius watched nervously as the tension between the two distant cousins continued to simmer, only calming down a bit when their adversaries disappeared over the lip of the basin.

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The basin was of course massive, spanning about a hundred square miles. Scanning the whole place would be very costly, but it could be done in about a day. Yet no matter how many times The Seeker roved through that place at high speeds, he never once encountered any sign of significant excavation. After third time combing the place again, he swallowed his apprehension and went to Xuefeng again.

"I'm telling you, the den isn't here. I know it makes sense, but facts are facts." Gaius insisted, slumping down onto the dry ground and wiping the sweat from his brow.

Xuefeng sighed and shook her head. "It's got to be in this basin, I'm telling you. We'll scan it one more time tomorrow."

"You said we would be in the shit by now. Perhaps you were optimistic." Gaius sneered.

"Don't look at me like that!" Xuefeng spat, like a wolf re-establishing dominance. "The swarm wouldn't just hide like this, it would send an army, try to swallow us up with brute force. So why isn't that happening?" The scion contemplated, holding her chin as she paced back and forth.

"Clearly there's a factor that you didn't consider - that you couldn't have considered."

"You're not helping. We're not discussing this unless it's to actually solve the puzzle." She commanded, ending the conversation with the blunt force of a meteor. Gaius complied - he'd been doing a lot of comlying lately - and swallowed his frustration and resentment once more. He would endure this. He had to.

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They looked more; what else was there to do? Gaius passed through the ground more times than he could count, scanning for any kind of disturbance, any kind of underground network - nothing.

Eventually Xuefeng relented, and the two continued on, getting back to their aggravatingly slow hunt. However, they made sure to follow Wen An's trail as well, hoping to find some more clues to figure out the situation.

They passed out of the basin and over another mountain, with little to show for it. They dined with spirits and beastmen, but of their foe they saw little. More small, isolated groups of Deep under a hundred; tedious to kill but nothing more. They saw signs of similar events occuring with Wen An's group, burnt craters in the ground and uprooted trees. Even a few Deep corpses, half-melted into organic sludge.

In one particularly eventful - but ultimately unimportant - incident, the pair stumbled upon an ancient shrine, inscribed with a dark prophecy. Supposedly, a magical crown which could ward off an apocalyptic curse was held inside. Unfortunately, it seemed someone else had looted the crown centuries before they got there, rendering the shrine one big piece of false advertising.

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Gaius came to a stop and held up a hand, his body acting before his mind could even conceptualize the situation. Huh? Why had he done that? He scanned the grassy clearing in front of him, searching for an answer. "I've got a bad hunch."

"You can't stop us on a hunch. What is the problem?" Xuefeng barked angrily.

"Give me a second, just give me a damn second!" Gaius snapped back, gritting his teeth. "There's something, I know there's fucking something! I don't know what I'm feeling but I know that it's dangerous!"

Gaius' senses wouldn't go this haywire over nothing. There had to be something there; but what could make him this wary whilst being undetectable. His mind supplied only one answer: something too complex for his qi or senses to unravel.

"I think there's a Foundation-level illusion here, Xuefeng. Please look again." Gaius asked carefully. Xuefeng's hot temper was extremely dangerous at a time like this. "I can't break through it, but it's hiding something dangerous."

Raising her hand, Xuefeng carefully reached out, feeling at the tiny, fine filaments of qi infusing the space and finding a loose thread. With one swift pull, she unravele the whole thing, revealing a complex array painted onto the ground and charged with several buried spirit stones.

Gaius let out a breath he didn't know he was holding. "So, that was almost certainly..."

"A trap set to kill us. That lying bitch, she really had me wondering for a little while!" The scion ranted, grinding her teeth. "This proves it, the Wen are behind these Deep Attacks!"

"Xuefeng, I really don't think that's the case." Gaius pleaded. He considered getting on his knees to break Xuefeng out of this spell, but couldn't quite bring himself to do so. "Think about it from her point of view; you're the one coming after her, obviously she'd want to be rid of you."

"Gaius, I'll let those comments slide because you don't know the Wen like I do." Xuefeng growled. "Their conspiracy killed thousands of their own Clansmen, even members of the main branch. They destroyed our future. Theirs is a legacy of spies and thieves, and you need to understand how dangerous they are."

And so the pair went from vaguely following Wen An to actively hunting her down, jogging across the steppes at a breakneck pace over the next two days. The time of their second confrontation rapidly approached.

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Finally, the day of the confrontation arrived. Halfway down the slope of an unnamed mountain, the two teams came within shouting distance.

"Don't you run away, Wen An! You tried to kill us, you scum!" Xuefeng furiously yelled.

"Oh, did that little circle I threw together scare you so much?" Wen An mocked, putting her hands on her hips. "I thought you were tougher than that. And it wouldn't have been in your way if you didn't stalk me."

Xuefeng rankled under the accusation. "What did you expect to happen after you've been so suspicious? Where you go, The Deep follow."

"I expected you to follow your word! The basin was empty, this is clearly just a personal grudge!

The two women glared daggers at each other, killing intent swirling in the air between them.

"You're insane, but that's what I'd expect of you warmongering Bai scum! You want an excuse to kill me so bad? Give me your best shot!"

"I won't let you destroy the Bai family! I will protect their honor!"

And with that, the battle began. Hao Zhenya came charging in, his silver mace crashing into Gaius' Aegis. The Wen and Bai scions clashed together immediately, a dazzling lightshow erupting as their spells collided.

Gaius clashed back and forth with the brute, using Earth-Gliding to zoom around him and cut from all sorts of strange angles, but the man's defense was rock-solid, only allowing shallow hits to get through. He heard a few mournful flute notes and felt a sluggishness begin to overtake him, immediately turning to the source of the sound and throwing a knife at the mysterious flutist.

Meanwhile, in the background, An and Xuefeng continued to exchange spells at a dizzying rate, expending more arrays than Gaius could afford with a month's pay every minute. Fire and ice coated the ground in equal measure.

Zhenya charged his mace up with a mysterious green aura and struck the ground, bursting the aura and releasing an overwhelming burst of light and sound. Gaius reflexively deadened his eyes and ears to endure the attack using his sense of smell to detect the big man's charge and slip beneath the earth. No doubt, that was the flashy distraction for...

Of course, fucking ghosts. Wonderful. Spectral claws passed through the earth to tear at Gaius' back, sending a terrible chill throughout his body, but it was too little, too late, Gaius was already on the flutist, who stopped the song again and narrowly jumped back to avoid his slash.

Before things could progress any further, however, the ground violently shook, outright cracking open in places and causing them all to stumble. The earth rippled, as if about to violently vomit something out.

"Something's coming!" Gaius warned, grabbing Xuefeng and yanking her out of the way just before a big black paw erupted from the ground where she stood. To everyone's growing horror, more and more of the dark beasts began to burst upward to the surface, surging upward in a great tide of Deep.

Without thinking much about it, Gaius turned and decapitated the first one he saw. The others did much the same, blowing away tens of them over the next minute, but it was all for naught; The Deep truly were endless.

Surrounding them on all sides, the monsters began to link their qi together, entering another instinctual formation. Large stones, some nearly the size of boulders, levitated into the air, before being propelled at them in a deadly barrage. Gaius slammed both palms to the ground, expending his Aegis into a dome which covered the group. It quickly broke under the furious pummeling, but stopped the majority of the assault; the rest was easily avoided or deflected.

The slavering, snarling mass of monsters all around the group pressed in, bit by bit, no individual yet ready to commit. Soon the safety and security granted by their immense numbers would push The Deep to give into their aggression, and the carnage would begin.

"Pretty fucking interesting time for them to drop in, isn't it!?" Xuefeng yelled at her opposite.

"You're accusing me!? You obviously summoned them to save your sorry ass!" Wen An shot back.

"Not the time!" Hao Zhenya yelled, placing his silver mace into a storage pouch at his hip and retrieving a similarly-designed mace of black metal in its place.

This was strange, Gaius thought to himself. How would The Deep know to attack the group at this, their weakest moment? It could have been a coincidence, but this all seemed to line up too well. There was something he was still missing.

Still, that was something to ponder another time. Now, he had to stay alive.

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And here's the chapter I wrote an entire arc just to procrastinate on finishing. It's not my best work, just some connective tissue to get the plot moving and build more mystery. Glad to finally have this work in progress finished. I'm gonna finish my other incomplete omakes after this.
 
Xiao Yingzi 27 - [Turn 9] [Shadow Binding]
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Shadow Binding, a Primer by Xiao Yingzi


Summary:

The numbers of spirits that exist within heaven and earth are endless and uncountable. Every new art of cultivation can eventually spawn a new type of ghost. Every struggle of great powers creates spirits born from the splinters of their dao. Even as I write this and as you read this, new spirits are being born and old spirits are being snuffed out - never to be seen or understood by our people.

And it is necessary to understand them. Whether we wish it or not, these spirits share a place in this world with us and so we must learn to live with them. Those who study the path of exorcism to banish and protect others from these spirits catalogue them the best that they can. They attempt to derive trends and commonalities in order to better prepare for their next encounter with the spiritual world.

There are also those who bind or contract spirits as one might bind a beast, treating spirits as partners or merely one of many companions on their path to the dao. These individuals often have a strong personal connection to spirits, allowing them to study a spirit or a ghost at a far closer level, learning their lifestyles and habits as well as helping ghosts pass on.

There are many names and variations in the disciplines of both those who bind spirits and those who exorcise them but within this document, they will be referred to as 'spirit-binders' and 'exorcists' respectively. The series of articles that this serves as an introduction to does three things:

  1. We hope to give information on a new spirit that has been identified.
  2. We hope to give information that would allow exorcists knowledge on how it may adversely affect mortal communities and how to best identify and exorcise it.
  3. We hope to give information that would allow spirit-binders to properly capture it, bond with it and identify what kind of arts they could use with it.

This particular document will only contain a summary of these things but if these pique your interest, further articles exist that go in-depth into this subject and the author hopes that you would pursue them. Should you truly hope to pursue a partnership with this type of spirit then please, feel free to contact the author of this document.

Summary of Origin Documents

Within the bounds of clan territory, there exists a species of spirit or demon born of shadow. It is a weak parasite that can be vanquished very easily - the light of the sun erases it as if it were a normal shadow and the mere presence of a cultivator's aura can wipe it away. In its native state, it lacks even the strength to harm an ordinary mortal, only having a profound effect on newborn children and perhaps the sickly or elderly.

Despite its fragility and weak constitution, the spirit simply keeps reappearing. The phenomenon that leads to its spawning is unknown. Rather than related to any particular dao or technique, it seems to appear anywhere of great significance or where an individual of great significance dwells. There are two major hotspots where their appearance were seen and investigated, with further sightings collaborating with this hypothesis.

The first major hotspot is Pleuron with the appearance likely linked to the Last Stand of Xiao Yi and the Thirteen with their widely known heroics. The second major hotspot is the Dawn Fortress, with the cause being any number of individuals from some of the talented Aspirants to the Archigetes himself.

Furthermore, records indicate that this spirit has never been sighted before - the earliest records of it's sightings were nearly two centuries ago after the fateful trials where Archigetes Alexios passed away and Archigetes Konstantinos took over the control of the clan. There have been links drawn between his Dao of Darkness and these shadows, but that link remains only theoretical as of yet.

Summary of Lifestyle Documents

As it is a simple creature banished by simple exposure to light or even strong emotion, the shadow spirit - or demon as it may be called - binds itself to living mortals and hides in their shadow in order to ensure that light never falls upon it. It feeds upon the qi of the mortal and in the process, it drains their emotions all in order to sustain itself.

Most mortals only feel a dullness of emotion though extreme cases can cause emotionlessness or symptoms akin to depression in those who are possessed by it. They are easy to dispel with even the simplest exorcism techniques and more often than not, disappear when the mortal experiences strong emotion or a string qi emanation.

The dangers of this manner of possession fall under two categories. The first occurs when the victims are weak. The old or sickly may simply perish when the lifesaving qi that sustains them is drained but with young children who are still growing, it is possible for the spirit and the child to adapt to one another creating a symbiotic relationship.

The child will become what others describe as 'emotionless' though still retaining both logic and agency. The spirit will grow and swell as the child does, increasing in capability and complexity as the child ages. At this point, the spirit becomes strong enough to resist strong emotions and is bound to the child tightly enough that casual exposure to qi will not destroy it.

One of the unique aspects of this spirit is the difficulty in detecting it. While targeted techniques can detect it, examination through your spiritual senses will not discover it. It is important to keep in mind the symptoms when trying to detect the shadow spirit. It is still vulnerable to exorcism however, so it isn't hard to dislodge it if found, should an exorcist feel the need.

If one were to be infected as a child and the shadow was not exorcised, it is possible that this symbiotic relation would continue until the child's death. However, as there was only one subject with such a close bond examined, it is hard to do more than speculate. The one subject who had the creature bound chose to cultivate until they struck the ninth heavenstage and the creature was destroyed by their oppositional dao.

If the creature is bound through spirit binding techniques, it can be honed alongside oneself and one's techniques allowing several advantages,The progression of the shadow should the mortal become a cultivator is covered in the next section and those advantages are briefly discussed. Capture for the use of spiritual binding or other purposes is possible through the right spiritual invocation used in areas where the spirit is known to appear. Should the conditions be favorable, it will appear and combined with a binding circle be trapped.

More precise information will be shared in further documents though the most effective methods will require contacting the author directly. It should be noted that only a genuine wish for companionship seems to summon them, with even Core Formations having failed without having that genuine desire.

Summary of Cultivation Documents

While this will be covered in more detail in the following documents, it should be noted that this process of spirit-binding is only accurate to the nine orthodox stages of Qi Condensation. Cultivation to foundation establishment along the orthodox path and the effects of the unorthodox heavenstages upon the spirit is unknown and only limited to speculation so far.

It should also be noted that it does not cripple cultivation by any measure - the author herself has cultivated the orthodox path up till the Fortified First Pillar. It is simply that her particular Dao did not interact well with the spirit and caused it to dissipate upon completing their tribulation. Potential techniques to breakthrough to Foundation Establishment exist and will also be explained in the later chapters.

That being said, it is not to say that the possession of the spirit has no effect on the user once they begin cultivating. As the shadow spirit feeds upon your emotions to survive, your qi becomes free of the minor distortions produced by emotions and your mind becomes clear and logical. As a side effect, it also becomes harder to predict you by reading your aura.

It should be noted that your 'logical' self still follows the priorities of your emotional self, simply free of the overriding effect of certain forms of emotions. This is the default status of someone who bonded with the shadow spirit at birth. However, experiments have shown that those who form shallower bonds later in life can still access this state temporarily.

As a cultivator grows, as does the shadow. Merely reaching the first heavenstage, allows the shadow to move in defiance of the light. The actions of the shadow corresponds to the emotions infused within it. For those who bonded with someone late, it can mean that it acts as a normal shadow outside of the emotionless mindstate.

While being fed emotion however, it begins to act on those emotions in some manner. The exact type of act varies from person to person. The easiest emotion to experiment with was pain. Some lashed out, some retreated while others with more will could maintain their control. There are several pills designed to heighten willpower that can be taken before entering this state that can allow one to maintain control.

For those who bonded with it in their childhood however, the creature can seem to change its shape by its own will. This is because after experiencing such emotions for so long, the creature begins to develop its own mind - not sapient, but still sentient in nature. This should be accounted for before any deeper bond with the shadow is pursued.

Summary of Technique Documents

Beyond the emotional effects, the spirit can also be used for other more direct techniques. Most of these techniques involve the infusion of qi into the shadow spirit in order to allow it to manifest into a three dimensional form. Once that is done, you can use your connection to the spirit to manipulate how it manifests to use as a weapon.

During the first heavenstage, you can only manipulate the shape of the shadow and at most cause it to manifest a thin film on the ground. This can be used to communicate or show your thoughts, but the most useful technique is extending the film as a sensory organ. You retain a degree of feedback from the shadow, allowing you to extend your sense of touch as well as your spiritual senses.

It should be noted that the shadow retains its ability to hide from spiritual senses in this state, which can be used to one's advantage. Direct interaction with the spirit will allow people to sense it but stretching it into a thin line to extend your spiritual sensory radius is a useful ability for a scout or anyone who wants to detect others without being detected.

During the second and third heavenstages, the shapes you can manifest increases. Now, you would be able to shape it into tendrils or tentacles in short bursts. The most efficient shape for a battle is the blade, though manifesting one requires training and experience before one can do so in battle. As one begins to progress along the heavenstages, one can begin to manifest the previous techniques more easily until the ninth where they can do so freely.

Others who experimented with binding this spirit with shallow bonds have managed to create effects that allow the spirit to drain emotions from others or connect with the shadow of others in order to puppet them. It is difficult to say if these can be replicated by those with deeper bonds and to what degree.

Upon reaching the ninth heavenstage, one can break through to foundation establishment. The difficulty here lies in the shadow's inability to face the judgement of heaven. It is a creature of subterfuge and hiding, no matter how strong it has grown next to you and as such it is ill-equipped to face down heaven's judgement.

For those with a shallow bond, it is a simple matter of breaking their binding for a small amount of time. This option also exists for those with deeper bonds but it isn't as simple for them. Removing their shadow is akin to removing both limbs and senses. It is difficult and disorienting, a weakness one cannot afford when breaking through.

The other option is to focus on its ability to devour emotions, allowing it to devour heaven's will from the lightning so that you can absorb the now harmless electricity and greatly advance your cultivation base. Both of these options are difficult and require training. Both of these options are also theoretical.

In the case of the subject who progressed to Foundation Establishment, the second method was used and though it seems to have succeeded very well the results of it are still uncertain and muddled through other aims pursued as a part of that breakthrough.

Further and more detailed information will of course be provided in further documentation and access to the research notes taken with other spirit-binders can be made available should a reader reach out for collaboration. Anything further needs to be discussed with the author directly.
 
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The Builder 6 - The Village mission- part 3- Building frenzy start.
The Village mission- part 3- Building frenzy start.

Alternative title – praise the Sun every single day and the Moon once in a blue Moon.



So, we talked with the elder in his house (it is the nice leather one) to check some more delicates things, like stuff that could compromise morale of the village and start factions which would damage their unity. Plus, so that our 'tones' are the same for the tasks ahead for a similar reason. After those checks, we had a more in-deep talk with the adult population. My brother had succeeded in captive the attention of the young ones for all that time the adults were busy. Which make for thankful parents since their young have waste so much energy doing some body conditioning training with so many of the younger ones already sleeping as soon as they finish training (most from hyping themselves too much). We also decide to make a feast when the wall is finish tomoron. We of course will have a some candies and even cakes for the kids. Since that is their reward for the good work.

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It now the end of the afternoon. And my brothers and I are now raising pillars in the walls of village. Some of our worse fears were confirmed. The village has no array. It is relocation is a strategic one to see the dangers and for the fear of the former village being curse by some blood path 'art' in the last and final conflict that had cost the lives of the cultivators that protected this village. Which exterminated the invaders and cause death of the strongest defenders with their last stand. It seems that fight was less than a decade ago. So, the best hunter of the village, elder Qiang, now is their main protector the village , he had also tried to jumpstart a cultivator to be the new defender. Risking his life to kill spirit beasts and some other things that I could almost feel he wishing to say/share but he hold that back.
Anway He succeeded by turning his first born into a cultivator with those spirit beast's cores and armed his son with their family spear. Holding only his crossbow since both weapons were made to kill (weak) cultivators/spirit beasts. And having two, well armed, defenders is just good sense.

Anyway, we are also using the pillar raising art to reinforce the ground, until almost all the QI of my brothers that are cultivators was used (6th​, 7th​, 25th​, 33rd​ and 34th ​brothers). after that we then beat the (almost literally) crap of the dirt and sand to make for a better foundation to a more solid/heavy wall, a job that mister bull also participated with gusto beat the ground together with us.

At the night, I send the brothers that are yet to reach the first heavenstage to rest. And ask the others to either recharge themselves by cultivating or prepare for their tomorrow workload. Stuff like 6th​ helping the elder spreadsheets, looking for what benefic/help they could get. Specially after the disaster and lack of feedback/reports in the city. Which probably means that our horses will probably move a lot and our messenger(s) should go directly to the mayor. Since this (probably) touch his bottom line. Plus, we need to see the resources of the region in general to see if we can raise the priority of defense of this area in the eyes of the clan. Also, I must salute this dear Elder for paying all his taxes while maintaining a high morale and retaining so many of the village population after this disaster. He sure was an exceptionally good hunter in his prime years and still a very scary one. Well, the others that need to prepare themselves are 7th​ brother with his lesson plans after the initial lesson, since he now knows what he is dealing with; and brother Duyi. The array master did deploy his array plates as emergency solution around the village and is preparing himself to the large tasks to come in this mission of ours.

In the midnight, when only the builder was still doing the pre-work for tomorrow 'show', by reinforcing and beating a path to the ruins of the former village to this hill and selecting which of the ropes they will use. Said ropes were made from the bronze hairs/bears of members of the brotherhood. Including himself. He finishes by putting the lifting machine that they had brough and making some solid pillars to be used to roll/bring stones.

Why? The brotherhood would bring the village home back to them piece by piece if necessary. Since the morale would be greatly affected if they return to live in the area that ruins are located, including the will to cultivate that we wish to nurture. Plus, here they have a better vision of the region and that time could allow them to escape to the tunnels we will dig, and, while all those arrays are already there, one only need a good hand to bring them back here and a great one to bring them back to life.

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A new day has raised, before the sun has appear, Master Duyi already selected the stones that he wishes to be brough and after some cutting stones, by using tools, cultivation arts and the very impressive hoplite himself/herself/itself? They did make a show doing the last one. For the elder and his honor guard first impression of one of the arts all in the clan must know. Plus, the builder needs to transfer the idea of invincibility that the brotherhood had of someone reaching the 3rd​ heavenstage to the flagship art of the clan. They must be sure that shadow one is strong, that the shadow one is fierce and that, when summoned, there no need to fear. The brotherhood is not ready for war, even someone as ignorant as himself knows that. So, for his brethren future, he will do his best together with his sworn brothers. Five visions mixing and adding to one another to become one goal. Better yet more than one hundred ideas from all members of the brotherhood being tempered by the wisdom and painful experience of those of the clan to reach said goal. Of survival, grown and a circle of building. For that utopic future they most fight well.

But he is going ahead of himself. His brethren had recharge themselves, at the same time he starts to make holes in the stones using a more difficult use of stone raising art. Them moving the stones on the horizontal pillars. And finish the cut with a more careful use of the iron hands art (with his horrible claw like nails) to cut the stones in a way that will require almost no cement or other material to glue them. He still finds funny that he is making specific tools with his literal hands, nails and even his hair. Becoming part of some his creations in a literal sense.

This is how the Sun meet them, this is how the village awoke to witness. Brothers 'mortals' or not, humans or not. Moving with golden(ish) ropes massive pieces of stones on pillars moving them up the hill using their muscles and the lift machine. We even coordinate to appear at the best moment possible with the use of a mirror and the light of the sun so that the brother lesson to the young, which should be of the benefit of cooperation and the glory of the clan, to make sure we enter their vision in one of key moments/climax of said lesson for today. And before their 'victory' feast of completing the lessons.

Anyway, back to the no so evil stones that they are moving we repeat this journey many times until is close to the noon. His 'mortal' brother got to rest and we prepare some of the large amount of 'rope' that our brotherhood produced in decades of living. Using his as the core. Well not just his as the core, big sister had contributed for this as have some stronger cultivators that like the brotherhood or some specific brothers/sisters. Some pillars in the walls have holes for this purpose made by using the 'pillar raising art' on an already finish pillar.

So, with the entire village looking a bit weird at us. We summoned the shadow one again. For this a great presentation is needed. To help the dreams of the young survive the pains of cultivation and for other reasons too. Like getting an even higher morale and loyalty to the clan for the next generation. Not all will have the good instincts and head that the elder have shown. Some fool could piss a middle manager and repeat the disaster that this village had suffered. So, showing what a cultivator can do could fix many problems before they happen by showing how far the little ones and the not so little ones need to go in this heaven cursed lands.

So, with brother Duyi great aid. The shadow one fake raising himself with two hands looking like his pulling himself up with the pillars in the wall, looking at the crowd and then, by hitting the floor with the shield, bring the impression that his hands are solid, that he is real. He raises his mighty spear. And with all eyes on the shadow one puts the bottom of said spear in a loop of rope just to raise it as high as he can. Slowing, dramatic. And with us yelling and flexing our muscles as much as we could. The rope we put in those stones and pillars start to move allowing us to bring the stones to the walls, and assemble them together, almost like they are magnets. With part of the wall done (for now) Master Duyi jump on it, and with a huge bowl that had lots of 'cement' made with the traditional materials but also with some blood and a lot, and I mean a lot of platina donate by the brotherhood. He had previously melted those using an array, so he let the material flow into the wall, making it looks like is 'bleeding'/'healing' by covering the smalls gaps, making green-gold 'veins' in the walls. Some of the other portions of the walls are melt together with another huge bowl that 6th​ brother is carrying and his, now, very devoted students using some big magnifying glass using principles that they learned with information that they got in the contribution board, those were made by senior brother Abel Angelus, a good seed and a Master of arrays and a Mechaniko of heaven shaking visions for the future.

And this is how elder Qiang and many others in the village had become new brothers in the brotherhood. Personally, he thinks the problems noticed by 7th​ brother should had more credit for these conversions, because the taxes paid being higher in the record of the elder than the ones, they had access in the city is a serious matter. Or that some reports that should had remove them from paying taxes for some time should had reach our glorious mayor. So, it seems that brother Qiang will need to spend some time (re)learning laws, his rights, which responsibilities that his know are true. And improve his penmanship. But the last one is easy to fix, they have a better pen for every day recording and another that use array to booster itself to official report that also makes more difficult to modify reports and/or create fake ones. We also give to him some (good) papers, a blackboard and small number of fancy paper. Hell, fifth brother had the insight of suggesting emblem/seal for letters and a triple system to be sure they had not been altered. A system like an easy to hide smell, a small pressure applied to the letter in some key areas to make difficult to notice (and ridiculously cheap) water mark and some key words that must be used in each letter (and never be repeated in a pattern). With a trusted (aka brotherhood member) being the messenger to share some of these new letters to speak some of the information so that it does not get 'lost'. The elder requested and will pay for this fast mail way that we created with the money that they should save from these small corruptions that we had discovered so far. While we should not try to be too rightful, to avoid being smite like bugs or allowing 'mortals' to be smite like bugs when we are not close. One still need to remember that the golden devils are hegemons and which principles are dear to us and with that what we will not allow even with the risk of being smite by a 'senior' cultivator. So yeah, the bottom line of the Mayor probably was damaged by some 'smart' middle manage or something like that. There are few reasons for the great one to explore mortal resources this way so it not the Mayor, it would be even stupid given how long his rule can last. With mortal generations of small investments making him look good and help avoid the fate of death by old 'monsters'/seniors. Plus, he will be REALLY pissed from what we knows of him, from interacting with his direct subordinates and some of his previous actions, the mayor anger when he will discover that cultivator resources like blue moon cactus and a new kind of spirit beast, some kind of scorpions that don't take much to kill/be hunted, had being discovered and these disasters force the village to focus on their own survival instead of collecting resources to make his city even richer. That someone had cost him cultivation resources.

Anyway, the old hunter Qiang and his ancestors had learned these things are some other neat stuffs. And it would only need a normal golden devil getting here to have them sharing this information. So yeah, angry mayor smiting someone is a sure thing.

He would admit that weirdest part was asking and receive a positive answer of where in the region one can find fire ants. Some which are spirit beasts. Since that is in high demand in the clan for some reason. Well, what the clan wants the clan gets. And the money of that gathering mission could be used here.

end note: I not entire sastify with the quality of this chapter. but I have done more than five checks already just today.
word count: 2477 (counting everything)
@TehChron , @ReaderOfFate , @no. another omake for the glory of the clan^^.
 
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Maria 29 - Dodging Echoes (Part Seven)
Dodging Echoes (Part Seven)
Maria Turn 10 Eighth Omake

"When?"
Shu Cangquiong did not consider herself a passionate woman. Emotions, in her experience, took up too much time and energy, and worse, it got in the way of good thinking. Neither did she see herself as particularly imaginative. She could create, certainly. She could form an idea, nurture it, develop it. But that was always purely practical – an equation, almost, solved through evaluation and consideration and thought.
But she had no real option, provoked as she was, than to give in to both personal vices and just picture the irritation as it most assuredly was; something fat and reptilian and slimy, cold-blooded, dragging itself out of the turgid, stagnant pit in her lungs where it lived and clawing its way up her spinal column until it coiled, sweating, by her brain and swiped a webbed paw at it, demanding her attention.
She ignored it. She'd learnt, over the last few months, to ignore a lot of things. Having a stolen fragment of universal wisdom lodged between the hemispheres of your mind required it.

"When?"
Instead, she focused on the diagram in front of her, its nexus of mad lines and glowing qi-flows dragging her consciousness up, up, up- high as she could go, to look down at the twitching corpse of the Song empire and witness the cultivator maggots battle madly for the scraps. It was a good view. Entertaining.

"Fear-witch, you will listen to me when I speak or I shall split open your ribs and eat your heart."
The irritation swiped at her again, then opened its maw and groaned. The diagram shivered, the qi-flows weakening as her attention drew briefly away.
"I don't know," she said, as calmly as she could manage. "As I have stated, elder, at least six times before."

She was pushing her luck, said the part of her mind that still managed to cling to lucidity. Elder in particular should have been more deferential. The rest of the sentence was unsalvageable. She couldn't find it in her to care. Thousand Child Devourer was her senior by less than two months. He'd only just made it to foundation establishment. In any reasonable world, he would not be leading this… exercise.
But this world was not reasonable, and so her current superior was an imbecile with good political connections. Honestly, not even that good. If she'd tried, really tried, she could probably have taken the position herself by asking a few favors. But the truth was, it wasn't worth it. She didn't care about this. Any of it. The girl was a mild curiosity – her bloodline sounded interesting – but curiosities littered the many seas of the Turtle Emperor like fish. She was only here to distract herself.

That's what the lucid part of her thought.
The other one?
HOWLED.
She felt its maelstrom-thought patterns smash against the walls she'd so carefully constructed around it, part technique, part compartmentalization, part self-inflicted ignorance. It screamed and begged and threatened, each idea and word strung nonsensically together until the whole was a jumbled mosaic bereft of any meaning other than desperation; please. please. please.
please make it stop.
please, just for a moment, make it stop.

But she couldn't.
The Dao-piece would rend at her mind for the rest of her life.
The walls crumbled a little. Shu Cangquiong closed her eyes and forced her attention away. Thousand Child Devourer was still speaking.

"…expect to be obeyed in a timely manner, do you understand?!"
He was closer than she'd like. She stared at him, and weighed different futures against each other. She could kowtow, apologise, and explain again that no, she could not predict when the caravan would leave the granary with its new escort… or…
The irritation croaked again.
Hmmm.
That was tempting.
She'd have to dress it up a bit… but then, the Altar turned on each other all the time, right? Not hard to use that to her advantage. His second, Lung-Slice, was ambitious, too.
Yes. Time to express herself.

Shu Cangquiong smiled, suddenly, letting a manic gleam slip into her eyes. Devourer blinked.
"Do you know, great elder, why they call me the Mother of Mists?"
No point in letting him answer.
She breathed.
A thick, misty tendril unrolled from her mouth, cool and wet. It lashed across the short distance between them and buried itself in his face. He gagged.
Time to have some fun. With a blink, she shifted the chemical composition into one of the simpler poisons in her repertoire, a funky little nerve-toxin that would make his every moment of life agony. It was cute, but it didn't quite have the spark she was looking for. No. She needed something better. What…
She thought about the irritation and its long journey upwards.
Aaaaaah. Yes. Long. Slow.
The composition shifted again, layering one of her better drugs over the top. A hallucinogen, subtle but potent. It would drag out every second to an eternity.
Thousand Child Devourer keened quietly, his hands spasming. She broke the connection, letting the mist seep into him, and sat back to watch.

Another twitch of his hands. What-
Oh. Oh, clever boy.
Shu Cangquiong reached into Devourer's robes, slapping away his desperate, spasmodic fingers, to find what he was trying so hard to reach without her knowing. A heavy, golden skull, run through with tendrils of red meat. From the way it pulsed with life qi, it could only be a treasure.
"Smart boy," she said casually, before searching him more thoroughly. Two more trinkets on him. Not a bad haul. "Not quite smart enough, though."

There was a polite cough behind her. Shu turned to look. Lung Slice stood, watching her, his face composed in courteous inquiry.
"Something you're forgetting?" he asked.
…What was he-
His eyes flickered to the treasures in her hand.
Oh. Yes. Silly of her.
She tossed the skull to him. There was the briefest moment after he caught it where she could still see it, but then it was gone completely.
"Such a terrible tragedy," she said casually.
"Certainly," said Lung -lice, his face contorting into respectful sorrow. "So full of promise. So young too… commander."
She liked Lung-Slice. She liked Lung-Slice a lot.
"The poisons of the Slaughter of the Sands are mighty indeed," she said. "I could not save him in time. So lucky that you were here to save his cultivation, at least." With that, she tossed him the antidote.
"Kind of you," he said mildly, eyes fixed hungrily on Devourer's contorted face.
"Think nothing of it. Wait for him to die, first, though, just to be safe."
She turned back to the diagram again, and settled in to wait.

---

Everyone knew, before they even set off, that this was going to suck.

None of them said it out loud, of course. The mortals on the caravan were skittish enough as it was. But the threadbare handful of survivors from the escort said a lot, and experience filled in the rest. The alliance wanted Wu Diao Shi badly enough to put serious effort into getting her. Far more serious than anyone had expected.

Why was one little girl so important?

Still. At least they knew. They could plan around it as best they could. Book-of-Names had filled them in as best as he and his survivors could; previous assaults had been effective more because of how well they seemed to know the escorts' weaknesses than anything else. In particular, they'd seen no major talents; whether that meant there were none, or they were waiting for a better moment, was anyone's guess. Either way, it suggested Noble Knowledge diviners were present. Good ones too. Coalition Guerillas were warded against scrying. For someone to punch through…

That had put stealth out of the question. The alternative was speed. The mortals were exhausted, so they'd need to be carried – except that too would put the escort down cultivators they would very clearly need. The argument had flown back and forth for a while until Maria had stopped, furrowed her brow, and turned to Draconis.
"How big can we get a Kataphractoi?"
He considered, then glanced back at the squad.
"…Not big enough for all of the mortals to get on," he muttered. "Not as we are."
Ganbei had interjected then.
"Define 'as we are.' Qi generation issue?"
"Yes."
The drunkard had glanced across at the portable still her squad had brought with them and smiled.
"That," she'd said, slowly, "might not be insurmountable."

And thus they'd arrived at this lunacy.
"Imperator," muttered Nikolas, staring into the mason jug of …something… he'd been handed, "grant me the strength to drink this shit."
"And the fortitude to survive the hangover tomorrow," added Priscian fervently.
"Oh, it'll arrive earlier than that!" said Ganbei brightly. "You should really start to feel it in about four hours."
Priscian turned a horrified face to her, then to Maria, then to the bottle, and then back to Ganbei.
"…I hate you," he said, faintly. The drunkard smiled.
"Good! You're paying attention."

"Hush," said Maria. She turned to the squad. "I know," she said. "This is fucked. Won't lie to you. Might fuck you up long term, or your cultivation. Big ask. But we are the Golden Devils. Big asks is what we do, for the clan, for the world…"
She turned to look meaningfully at the mortals, huddled against the back wall of the granary, exhausted, wounded, and numb.
"…and for them."
There was a pause. She watched her juniors. They watched the mortals. Then, at last, they turned back. Priscian pasted on a bright smile, visibly smothering his fear. He raised the jug.
"Prosit, lads."
"Prosit," said Maria, smiling, her voice echoed back by the others. Brave boy. Still frightened, but doing the job regardless.

No more stalling. She brought the jug to her lips, and drank.

It was fucking foul. She felt her throat convulse, trying to gag, but she forced it open again and swallowed, draught after draught. The booze wasn't far off of neat alcohol, sharp and clear and burning like she'd swallowed a flaming coal, but there was an awful floral tinge to it too, like aniseed, that gave it a cloying sweetness.
Rotting flowers.
Shut up. Still not talking to you.


At last, the mason jar was empty. She dropped it, coughed once, and wiped her mouth with the back of her hand.
"The fuck was that?"
"The best I could do under short circumstances," said Ganbei. "Be grateful it even tastes that good. Could have been worse."
"HOW?!" gasped Cecilia, her bronze flesh starting to trend uncomfortably towards green. Ganbei shrugged.
"Could have used Wise Hearted Carp for fining. Your tongue would actually disintegrate, and you'd call it a mercy. Couldn't figure out how to balance that with the demon hedgehog urine, though, so you escaped that."
"Stow it," said Maria. "How long till it takes-"

And then it hit her stomach.

The result wasn't what she'd expected, from long experience of Drunkard battle-brews. Those were hard kicks of qi, immediate and external as the beer poured new power directly into her system. Instead, she felt her heartbeat start to speed up till it was a constant staccato rapping on her ribs. Her qi began to cycle through her meridians completely unbidden, faster and faster, sending heat running through her every inch.
"Gods," she gasped. "What the-"
"Ride it out," said Ganbei. "It'll work. I promise."
Faster, it cycled, and faster. And yet, somehow, it stayed ordered, a tight sharp stream speeding through her like lightning. A stream, she realized, that was growing. Each second, more and more power began to flood through her, the qi deepening and intensifying as it went. The energy anchored her into her own flesh – aware of every fibre of muscle, every twisting nerve.
She felt like a god.
Heaven's guts.
"I take it back," she muttered. "This. This is good shit."
Ganbei gave a wry shrug.
"We do what we can."

No time for more than that. Imperator alone knew when this madness would end.
"Outside and form up, lads. Kataphractoi. Speed and size, fuck the defense."
They nodded. Each one had the flushed, mad look she was sure was gracing her own features. She'd never heard of… of too much qi. It couldn't really be hazardous.
…Could it?

Fuck. No. Focus. This was going to have to be fast. They walked/stalked/stumbled/staggered out, one after another, out of the granary, falling quickly into position. The kataphractoi wasn't as common as the hoplite, but they'd drilled it enough to make it work. Hands dropped onto shoulders. Stances were assumed.
"Lock," she growled.
"Locked," chorused the squad.
"Cycle."
That one felt pointless, considering, but fuck it, protocol was protocol.
"Cycling."
"Sync."
And with that, she felt seven qi systems, each one relentlessly churning out qi by the second, snapped into one thrumming circuit. The mad surge rushed through her, catching her own speeding system and gunning it faster like water through a millwheel. She had to fight down an audible gasp; the sheer pressure was forcing the air out of her lungs.
As they did, the kataphractoi didn't so much form as explode into existence. She directed the torrent of power as carefully as she could, guiding it through the lines and planes of the construct, but the sheer amount of what she had to work with almost got away from her. She'd thought the increased size would be an issue, but to be honest, it might have made things easier. Trying to guide this lunacy would have been impossible through a smaller, more intricate space. As it was, she had to run her mind back over everything a few times, tightening uneven flows and pulling runaway capillaries back into sequence.
"Call that syncing, shall we?" she croaked. A few affirmative wheezes answered her. Gods. This wasn't a formation. This was a fucking engine.

The rest of the caravan had poured out behind them, dropping into position around them and shepherding the mortals like exhausted sheep. The katapractoi, standing an easy ten feet tall if it was an inch, bent its knees as much as it could. There'd be room behind the rider for all of them, at least. Fuck, there'd be room for a small house.
The mortals were helped up into position one by one by the other cultivators. A handful then settled around them for protection – Strength Purity and a few of the itinerants. Then, as it started to rise-
"WAIT!"
They stopped. Shanshu, jaw set, pulled herself up onto the back of the kataphractoi, settling herself at the back of the party.
"Better position to shoot," she muttered under her breath.
Maria, staring out of the rider's eyes, made herself turn back. No. No point reading into that. Too much to do.
"Departing," she said, her voice amplified by the qi construct, and set off.

---

Lung-Slice had decided to start at the head and work his way down. Anything else, he had confided, always felt uncivilized; too much like torture for his taste. She had to admit, she respected that. A lot of the Blood Path practitioners she'd met were sadistic as a matter of course.
"Not an inaccurate statement," Lung-Slice responded, as he finished cutting away the softer meat that clung to the corpse's face. "Something of an occupational hazard. Not much room for empathy before the Altar, so a lot of people go as far as they can in the opposite direction."
"But not you?"
"Well." He pondered, chewing. "I'm not averse to causing pain when necessary. I just can't help but think that revelling in it is rather pointless. Power needn't be so… unsophisticated."
"And yet you're the minority," said Shu Cangquiong idly, not turning away from the diagram.
"True. Then, I suppose that shouldn't be a surprise. Can one even be in good taste if there's no classless ruffians to compare yourself to?"
She laughed.
"Excellent-"

And then the diagram sparked, dragging back her attention immediately. The caravan was moving. And at its head-
The mad half of her mind screamed again, louder, as the dao-fragment pulsed in recognition. Some combination of fury and fear send black vines climbing up her skin.
"How quickly can we mobilise?"
Her voice was tight and clipped. Lung-Slice looked up at her, catching her shift in mood and following suit.
"Now. We're in position already."
"Go. Hit them. Time Shatter to distort, e veryone else scorched earth – whatever you have to throw at them, do it. Just make sure they're all dead."
He tilted his head.
"But the girl-"
"I DON'T GIVE A SHIT ABOUT THE GIRL!"

The madness crawled into her voice as she screamed, sprouting little flowers of hate. Lung-Slice flinched. She forced herself to modulate her tone.
"She's one little brat of minor use at best. The escort has several individuals in it who can cause us the worse kind of trouble. Lung-Slice. Scorched. Earth."
He watched her, face inscrutable. Then, at last, he bowed, every inch the obsequious servant.
"As you command, elder."

---

The first sign that something was wrong hit them twenty minutes out. The outbound trip had been long, but that had been dragged out by needing to be stealthy. Going back at full-pelt in a fucking kataphractoi should have cut the damn thing in half. And yet…
"I – saw – that – house – before," gasped Nikolas over her shoulder. Priscian nodded, not speaking, trying to maintain his qi cycle.
"You – sure?"
They nodded.
Fuck. Okay.
Maria shifted formation-lead back to Draconis and clenched her eyes shut, trying to focus. Flared her qi twice in tight pulses. A moment later, the other squad leaders had leapt onto the back of the Kataphractoi. She pulled herself, careful as she could, back through the formation, and pushed her head out from behind the construct's surface.

"Something – wrong," she grunted.
Liming nodded slowly.
"Lan Hua said the same thing," she said. "It's a loop."
"We'd have noticed by now if-" began Ganpei, but Book-of-Names stopped her.
"They have someone who can alter the sequence," he said tersely. "Time Shatter specialist. If they fuck around with enough of the details, and if you aren't looking for it, you might not realise."
And they hadn't been looking for it, because of course they hadn't. Either they were keeping up a full-pelt run, or they were cycling the most insane amount of qi. All they'd been watching out for was a direct assault.
Like fucking idiots.

"What – now?"
Liming considered.
"We can cut our way out if it," she said eventually. "But we'll need to slow down for that. Too many of us for a mobile strike."
"Can't – you – do – it – on – the - kataphractoi?"
She shook her head.
"No. The illusion-severing cut is about stillness. None of us are advanced enough to try it on the scale we need as is; we'll have to stack the deck."
Ganpei hissed through her teeth. "Make it obvious what we're doing."
"They'll hit us," chimed in Book-Of-Names.
Liming shrugged.
"If you have an alternative, I'll happily hear it."
We stood in uncomfortable silence. She was right.
"Well then. We stop, circle around my squad and the … horse… thing-"
"Kataphractoi-"
"I am not even going to try and pronounce that, but we defend until we can make the cut, and then we bolt again."
It was a bad plan. But then again, so was everything else so far. Why change habits?

We agreed on our signal – Ganpei would flare her qi three times – and she sank back into the construct, pulling herself back to the rest of the squad to brief. Then came ten minutes of tension, watching the orders filter back through the ranks.
Took lead back form Draconis. Gritted her teeth. Any moment, now. Any… moment…
Ganpei's qi rapped out a sharp staccato.
Now.
She yanked on the rider's reins and locked the horse's knees, and the kataphractoi skidded to a halt. The mortals and their defenders clung tightly to the construct's surface. Around them, the rest of the caravan was shifting, the Sabres darting behind them and stilling immediately in prepped stances. Priscian's qi-sense flicked out over them, filtering information back through him to the rest of the squad; their systems moving into a loose, whirling spin as they prepared themselves. A tight perimeter around the kataphractoir was already in place – dozens of cultivators in tight defensive poses, facing out.

One second.
Two.
Three-

And then they hit them.

Equal mix of Gao and Altar at the front. A lot of both. Clawed fingers and strange fleshy appendages came boiling up out of the rubble, alongside poisoned blades and thrown bottles. The perimeter was immediately a mass of shifting violence, too fast to read. Blows and techniques and weapons, locked in the eternal dance of the sect foot-soldier.
Should be down there, muttered the Red Place, but there was no heart in it.
Shut. Up.
Don't like this – distance.
I look like I'm in a place to be distracted by your shit right now?


Four seconds.
Five.
Six.
Seven.
The caravan were taking casualties. Not many, and less than they were dishing out, but it didn't matter when the assault had the weight of numbers. The mortals were muttering fearfully, staring down. Behind them, Maria watched Shanshu throwing gouts of fire down into the melee in thick streams, her face locked into a furious rictus.

Eight seconds.
Nine.
Ten-

Priscian's senses sparked with meaning; the Sabres hunkered down, their swords gripped loosely in their sheathes. Liming whispered something too quiet to hear.
Breath in.
Eleven seconds.
Breath out.
Twelve.
Breath in.
Thirt/
They cut
/een.​

It's like the world snapped in two, and everyone went with it. In one half, they went on, circling forever, moment after moment repeating like a chain of pearls on a thread. In the other-

Oh.
Oh shit.

In the other, they were three miles off course, and the rest of the assault bore down on them in a shrieking horde, directly in front of them.
Fuck.
FUCK.

"HOLD FAST!" shrieked Ganpei. She leapt, cavorting and spinning through the air with the madcap rambling grace of her sect, to perch on the kataphractoi-rider's head. "SHANSHU, GET YOUR ARSE UP HERE NOW!"
The sorcerer sprinted along the back of the kataphractoi-horse. Maria could see the weakness of Xin Sorcery in every step; she moved like a fucking mortal, graceful and skilled but too damn slow. Ganpei was a boiling pot of frustration.
Damn it. Needed to interject-
Closed her eyes, snarled, forced the whorling pattern of qi to shift-

The flesh of the construct warped and flowed like water into steps. Shanshu took them three at a time. Below them, the sabres had waded into the fray like warrior gods, their swords slicing through the descending tide in graceful silver arcs. It didn't matter. They couldn't move forward with them in the way.
Ganpei, you better have a fucking plan.
Shanshu at last arrived at the rider's head. Ganpei was gulping something potent out of a bottle, her cheeks bulging with every mouthful. Then she flung the empty bottle down into the fray.
"Fire. In front of me."
Shanshu's hands snapped into position. A tongue of flame started dancing in the air. Ganpei closed her eyes.
"Fucking better appreciate this," she muttered. And then she spat out a thick plume of qi, roiling with the oil and fire she'd just dragged into her system. It hit Shanshu's flame-

WHUMPH

An impossible second sun roared into life, searing Maria's eyes with light she could still see it through her eyelids, a blazing blue-white colour that scorched everything clear in front of the Kataphractoi for gods knew how far.
Shanshu gaped. So did Maria. Then Draconis thumped her shoulder with a closed fist and she came back to herself.
"Travelling," She bellowed, and set the Kataphractoi into a dead run. Behind them, the rest of the escort fell into a fighting retreat, disengaging as fast as they could and following. It was a bastard maneuver to pull off at the best of times; she watched another dozen casualties in that mad cauldron of seconds.
Didn't have time to think about that. She had three miles to make up and the assault wasn't done. They were still streaming after them, skirmishing over and over with the ground troops. They were going to loose all of them before we even made it to the damn route.
But Ganpei wasn't done. "Give me another," she grunted. Shanshu's hands danced through another complex seal, and a spark burst into life. Ganpei's head snapped forward like a bird. She swallowed it.
"This," she muttered, "is embarrassing, stupid, and crude as hell."
A smile slipped across her face.
"Mother always said that's how it would end."
…What?

Ganpei leapt again into the air. Priscian's senses ran up over her in the air, seemingly of their own accord; through him, Maria felt her qi twist into some bizarre shape she couldn't, for a moment, recognise. Shanshu's face stilled. Maria watched as shock/understanding/horror/rage rolled in quick succession across her features.
"Transmutation," she muttered.
The roiling, volatile cocktail of fire and oil in Ganpei's stomach spread through every inch of her system. The spark of real fire, still held tight in Ganpei's mouth, sustained somehow through a technique Maria barely understood, brushed against her contorted qi-flows.
And bloomed through every inch of her.

The second explosion was bigger than the first. It was also more controlled, because of course it was. Ganpei was that explosion. She directed it to scorch backwards across the Gao and Altar foot-soldiers with the precision and grace that hid beneath every Drunkard's rambling dance, scorching them clear one by one. Even the light seemed to flare towards them, not back at us. She was empyrean.
She was beautiful.
And then she was gone, and there was nothing but smoke.
On their head, Shanshu was muttering some prayer she couldn't quite catch. She kept running. She didn't know what else to do. The mortals had to get back. The girl had to get back.

Couldn't tell you how long they kept running. Time blurred. Had to make herself check for repetition on the route a few times. Paranoia her new, creeping friend.
Then, at last, the route was on the horizon, in front of them, beneath them. The rest of the escort gave a ragged cheer. Easier now. A straight line from here to the line, with reinforcements dotted along the way. Good news. So of course heaven had to ruin it.

The world fractured again into clean, sharp lines. I watched potential futures dance before me. Out of that kaleidoscope came our next attackers.
More Gao. More Altar. And worse, Time Shatter. Not many – they were a reclusive bunch, and the Alliance deployed them rarely – but enough. They moved through the horde with an eerie, disjointed motion, rewinding, accelerating, splitting into possibilities and resolving back again.
Another assault. Gods. How many fucking were there?
They poured in from either side of the road, leaping out of the possible future they'd been hidden in to pincer closed in front of the caravan and on either side. Less of them than before, but what did that matter? Less of their own too. She'd have to cut through to get to the first fortification, and they didn't have a way to clear the path first; the construct could only take so many hits before it would shatter like glass.

Liming and Book-of-Names were fighting already. Fuck.
Fuck.
…Can't stay.
No.
Girl first.
Yes.
…This is evil.
This is war.


Fuck.
No. Focus. Still had a little time – can't accelerate, going as fast as we damn could as it was. Needed to try something else.
Fuck.
Reached back through the construct's pattern, beneath the mortals. Distort. Bubble formed around them as the construct's surface closed gossamer-thin above them. It would just about hold their weight.
Fuck.
The rider pulled on the reins. The horse reared.
Back legs kicked. Front legs reached.
The Kataphractoi jumped.

The world became a lurching mess. The mortals crashed into one another and the shield above them like ragdolls. But it didn't matter. It had worked. The were airborne. Now they just had to survive the landing in a qi construct far too big without shattering it like porcelain while she'd already distorted the fucking flows.
Fuck it.
Fuck it.
Keep going.

They started down again. Positioning was easy enough – momentum and weight had the front pointing down, the horse's legs already extending out to take the weight. Problem was going to be keeping the surface together.
Alright. Reinforcement. Split off capillary flows from every major stream in the hooves and legs, turned them out, down, back, in – felt the construct waver a little as the flow shifted to favour the bottom.
Impact. Shock, juddering and heavy. The reinforced feet took the brunt of it, but it was rolling up already.
Took the circular capilliaries and yanked, heaving them up along the main flows to match reinforcement as it rose up through them, a single tight band of iron-hard solidity. Felt her lungs fluttering in her chest.
Almost done.
Almost.
And finished. She'd fucking made it.

On the head, Shanshu was bellowing curses, clutching to the helmet and staring back at the fight.
"FUCKING LUNATICS!" She shrieked. Then her hands moved again, and spurt after spurt of flames spun away from us to descend into the distant melee. Give the bitch her due, she was a fine shot.
Kept running. Kept running. Kept running.

First fortification gleamed, ahead of us.

---

Shu Cangquiong was watching, howling with fury.
She could stop them. She could catch them, even now.
Kill them.
But she wouldn't. Would never admit why, but the fear was an icy, laughing demon on her back, wearing Maria's face, and she wasn't ready to face it again.

---

Closer.
Closer.
Closer.

The fortification was rough as hell, a rough wooden wall thrown up by legionnaires and manned by hoplites. The most beautiful thing Maria had ever seen.
"ASSAULT FURTHER UP!" She bellowed.
The Hoplites nodded, flickered, shifted, and then two kataphractoi bulleted past them towards the fight.
And through the wall as the gates yawned open. She could see the next fort already.
And through that one.
And the next.
And the next.

And at last, the ward fortress is there, and she goes through as the last few guttering sparks of qi in her system burn out, and everything went black.
---

Think trying to write this in the third person past tense is what made it harder. @Falconis , you spoiled me! :p Going to do one last bit to sum this arc and then on to something Not Shit. @Alectai @Kaboomatic @ReaderOfFate , may I have a threadmark please?
 
Gaius Antonius 45 - Humans
Gaius Antonius Omake # 45: Humans

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It is said that humans are a species of ape which evolved to have an especially powerful brain, especially in the cerebral cortex. Specifically, we are said to have descended from the great apes of the Seventh Sea. For this reason, some philosophers link our origin the common appearance of the number seven in both fictional literature, religious doctrines and real life magical rituals. The theory is that deep within the human mind lies an unconscious desire to return to our place of birth, and thus we place importance on the number seven.

While I don't place much stock in this theory, pondering it lately has led me down a train of thought on the nature of humanity. Why has this particular species of ape come to dominate the incomprehensibly massive landmasses of the Turtle World?

There are materialist analyses one could make, of course. Humans may have just been at the right place at the right time. Our mortals are uniquely competent, capable of more than enough self-aware thought to ponder the nature of qi and discover how to cultivate it. Even in isolated communities with no written records or links to other civilizations, humans with the aptitude to cultivate will quickly discover rudimentary ways of doing so. Thus, as a species we make the fullest possible use of our potential Cultivators.

Furthermore, we possess bodies which are well-suited to building civilization. As apes, we possess extremely complex muscles in the hands, allowing for the fine manipulation of objects and the crafting of tools without any qi at all. This, combined with our intelligence, allows for mortals to be industrious and productive, supporting cultivators and freeing up all of their time to cultivate, which then furthers their progress and produces well-equipped and extremely powerful warriors. Our hands also enable us to write information down; cultures which record information in such a fashion are invariably more advanced, as their knowledge grows with every generation.

Finally, we are adaptable. The human brain has a lot of raw cognitive power, but on top of this it is especially good at learning. We take in and adapt to new information our entire lives, easily internalizing it and changing ourselves in response. This psychological malleability is thought to leave humans more vulnerable to psychological disorders than other species of a similar intellectual capacity, but it ensures that we can perform well in any environment. Physically we are much the same, able to endure a fairly wide range of climates, especially when one includes our adeptness at the fashioning of clothes. Hence, we are able to survive on most parts of every sea.

Lifespan is equally important. While not the absolute peak in this regard - mortal elephants roughly match us and mortal turtles live longer, as do most trees and many other kinds of plants - human mortals have an impressively long potential lifespan, aging at a glacial pace compared to the vast majority of species. Cultivation is generally thought to multiply what was already there, rather than adding onto it, be it intelligence, physical capabilities or lifespan. While cultivation talent is inversely correlated with lifespan, it is not an exact ratio, and humans sit close to the mathematically perfect balance of time to live and speed of cultivation. Thus, so long as they have enough resources and are not killed by external means, a Cultivator with sufficient talent to reach a stage will always do so before they die of old age. This of course assumes they take a fully orthodox path, as opposed to the myriad unorthodox ones which invariably take longer to complete, adding greater risk to the process.

Of course, it is the providence of fools to thinks only in terms of the individual - society, after all, is built upon the strength of the collective. This is another strength of humankind - like most apes, we are a social species, naturally desiring to live in groups of hundreds and delegating societal roles to each other. Hierarchy is a natural part of how we live, which makes us well-suited to the hierarchy of people which cultivation produces. In this sense, we can easily overcome enemies which dwarf us individually through our collective effort. While there are of course many species which outmatch us in this regard - insects come to mind above all others - we are still far from the solitary lives of dragons or tigers. Without delegation, even the mightiest being imaginable could only do so much in a day.

It is thought that this perfect confluence of traits is what led humans to, over the course of a few hundred millennia, populate the majority of the world's landmass, and it is a viewpoint I share. Some believe that man was granted dominion over the world through heavenly authority, but I call this bunk. To attribute the achievements of humanity solely to a higher power is to strip the great men and women of history of their agency, to crush all human accomplishments between the gears of the heavenly machinery. We ought to take some pride, I think, for being born to such an industrious and capable race. Foolish as we are, we are mighty indeed, and were that might to ever be consolidated under one banner, I shudder to imagine the force which humanity could bring to bear.

With that said, were we truly the first collective species to achieve such scope? In this world's endlessly long history, is the paltry million years of humanity really anything special? I do not believe so. In my opinion, Another dominant species must have risen and fallen before our time, and others before that one. Perhaps the early humans deposed some other mighty race in their rise to power, and neglected to record their existence? Or, perhaps, that ancient race left this world for something new, having become dissatisfied with the home in which they were born.

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Perhaps it is strange for me to take such pride in humans, when I descend from a people of a different planet. Ever since I learned of my people's origins, this knowledge has haunted me, causing me to view almost everything in a new light. By this point in time, the genes of our original species have come to be completely dominated by those of humanity. While we mostly breed amongst our own, hundreds of thousands of years have passed since we first arrived, and thus the steady trickle of the Turtle World's blood into our stock has inevitable subverted whatever we used to be. That said, the Blood of Bronze, being closer to a technique than a gene, has stayed strong.

What were we called, when we were full-blooded? What did we look like? If our current phenotypes are a result of being mostly Third Sea Turtle-Worlders, perhaps our features were a greatly exaggerated version of our unique characteristics. But what about the inside; how different was our psychology from that of humans? If more members of that original race were to descend from the sky, would we even be able to relate to them anymore, or would we be too integrated into the Turtle World to comprehend their ways, and vice versa?

But for all of my ponderances upon the differences between these species, what fascinates me more are the similarities. How could it possibly be that the peoples of two worlds could interbreed? More absurdly, how is it that they could produce fertile offspring? Convergent evolution is an observed phenomenon in which two species of radically different origin evolve into similar forms, usually to adapt to similar environments. Even so... two different planets, producing life which developed into such genetically compatible forms? It is utterly illogical no matter how I look at it.

I can only conclude one thing: somehow, humans and the people of the
Optimatoi homeworld share an origin. Whether this origin is physical or spiritual, I do not know, but some mystery of our past no doubt binds us together.

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I love the Contribution Board as a framing device, because it allows me to publish random musings that I can't work into an actual plot. I was considering making this yet another "Gaius writing down notes at home" omake, but I was all out of ideas for how to make that at all interesting. So instead I threw together this in an hours, since I was completely stymied on a 90% finished work in progress. Hopefully I can actually get that out tomorrow.
 
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Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 63 [Turn 7] [A New Character Appears]
Still figuring out the details of the Turn 7 storyline, but have a look at an intro of sorts.

Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 63
[Turn 7]
[A New Character Appears]

Charon's Curious Curiosities was the sort of place where one came to gamble. But it wasn't ludus that one gambled on, but the very curious curiosities that found themselves in his shop. Charon had a knack for getting his hands on the former belongings of legionnaires that slipped through the bureaucratic crack and the things he stocked could vary from junk to heavenly treasures.

I was here for some of that myself, though I wasn't looking at the wares so much as the buyers. While I absently examined a simple Sand-Viewing Mirror that humorously reflected everything but sand, I couldn't help but smile at my own reflection. The goatee worked well on my rugged face and it added to the exotic tinge of my skin.

There was a glint of light as the door opened and my eyes wandered towards the man who had just entered. Now isn't that a fine piece of bronze. If the man stood still, he might as well be a statue cast out of bronze. If I was a smith, I might declare him my masterpiece. But once I began to look past that, did he start to really get interested.

It was subtle but he was clearly suppressing. And he was still at ninth heavenstage. That meant either a centurion which wasn't bad per se or it meant he was unorthodox. That possibility was far more tantalizing. I'd heard of the Thirteen of course and I was certainly curious about the ones who followed in their footsteps.

In fact, I was getting to the point myself where I was debating choosing my path in the future. So that made him useful for my own future growth. This might be work and pleasure. Wasn't it nice when things came together like that?

As he walked in, I noticed he put more weight on his right leg. A foot injury? And though he tried to pretend otherwise, he had thicker armor over his right shoulder and barely moved that arm at all. A shoulder injury as well. It looked like he had quite a tale, one that might be lovely to hear about over dinner. Preferably a private one.

I watched him as he moved about the shop until he came across the old scroll shelf and pulled out one, rolling it open and froze upon looking at it. He glanced around to see if anyone had seen him pick it up and quickly rolled the scroll back before heading down to surly old Charon. I wonder what that was about?

I knew that scroll, it was something that had interested me for a while before I realized it wasn't what I was looking for. It was just a simple research scroll some old legate obsessed with dragons had made defining the migratory patterns of carp. So him finding it so interesting was worth noting. What does he know that I don't?

"Charon!" He called out as the man left. "New customer?"

His perpetual frown turned into a wide smile as he recognized me. "Young master!" He replied cheerfully. "Finally found something that interests you?"

"You know I did." I said, passing him a spirit stone with a smile. "Now, tell me all the details."

"Now, now, young master." He replied, shaking his head with a smile. "Think about my reputation. I need to at least get more than he paid me first."

That made me raise an eyebrow. He paid him to keep quiet for that? "Charon, you scoundrel." I replied, giving him a grin before sliding a pouch to him. "Here, have some more spirit stones. Now fess up."

Charon preened as if I had just given him a compliment and then leaned forward, beckoning me closer. "I'll be honest, I don't know much about him," He began, causing me to raise an eyebrow and palm my pouch. He gave me a wink. "He started showing up in the area a few days ago. Goes by the name Antonius and was asking around for elixirs and miracle cures and the like."

Interesting. Looking for something to heal his injuries? How did that fit with that particular scroll? I thought as I absently noted Charon taking the pouch away when he thought I wasn't looking. "Anything else?"

"Oh, yes. One more thing." He said, keeping his voice deliberately nonchalant. He passed a small note to me. "He didn't actually pay me to keep quiet. More the opposite."

I looked down at the note curiously and blinked. A grin spread across my mouth as I realized what had happened. "Charon, you scoundrel." I replied, not even mad at his audacity.

Charon preened as if it had been a compliment.

I glanced down at the note again and grinned. This might be interesting.

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Maria 30 - Dodging Echoes (Part Eight)
Dodging Echoes (Part Eight)
Maria Turn 10 Ninth Omake

The courtyard wasn't empty – it never was, these days – but it was close enough. The timing probably had something to do with it. That odd hour that didn't quite belong to the night on one hand or the morning on the other. Hours yet till a shift change.
Distracted. Focus.
Yeah, yeah.

She breathed out, cleared her mind, and started up again. The Contemplation of a Single Point flickered into life between her hands. She wasn't pushing it particularly hard – the damn thing was at last making sense again – but she hadn't much else to do until the others came and got her.

Four days. It had been four days since they'd gotten back, and the after-effects of that Drunkard Moonshine were still playing out. The doctors had said there'd been no permanent damage, but she was to take it easy for a few weeks; light training at most, some minor meditation… the usual shit.
It was irritating to admit, but they probably had a point. Her qi-flows still felt jittery. Still, the Point was a training technique. She'd been cleared for that, at least. And it gave her something to do. Breathe in. Breathe out. Guide the flows. Watch the flame…

"What are you doing?"
The fire winked out. Maria bit back a curse, and looked up. Shanshu was watching her, face a mix of incredulity and something halfway between disgust and misery.
"Training," said Maria, shortly.
"With that?"
She didn't have it in her to listen to Shanshu's latest rant about the flaws in her moral character. "Is it time?"
Shanshu blinked. Her face soured a little into something somber.
"Yes. You're ready?"

Maria nodded. Her dress uniform was still back in the 263rd​ Legion headquarters, but she'd done her best. The underskirt and tabard were fine, clean red linen, and she'd polished her armour until it shone.
"Where?"
"Follow me."
They walked in silence out to the walls of the fort. They could see the Drunkards' still from there, and here the quiet voices droning through their funereal rites. It was a closed event. Sect members only. Not unusual; everyone got possessive of their dead. You learnt to cope. But there was a sting in her breast at the thought of letting Ganpei go without some personal mark of respect.
She wasn't alone. Besides her and Shansu, Book-Of-Names and Liming were waiting at the wall, all in the closest they could get to dress uniforms.

It was an awkward moment. None of them quite knew what to say. But at least they knew what to do.
Maria reached back into the roughspun brown bag she wore at her hip and pulled out a bottle.
"Ghostspice Wine," she said. "Desert favourite. She liked it, when she tried it."
"Haven't had that in a while," said Book, smiling a little.
She reached back into the bag and passed out four small leather cups, pouring a generous measure for each of them, then a fifth onto the ground.

Liming coughed, politely, and raised her glass.
"To Ganpei," she said. "A fine warrior and a good friend. You brought us home."
She drank. Coughed.
"Heavens, that is foul."
"Acquired taste," said Maria.
"She liked it?"
"Said it had a good kick."

Book-of-Names went next.
"To Ganpei," he said. "Didn't know you long, but I definitely knew you at your best. Thank you."
He drank, hissed through the burn in his chest, and smiled. He did that a lot. She was starting to wonder what went on beneath.

Then came Shanshu.
"To Ganpei," she said. "You… I didn't understand what you were doing. Or how you did it. But I do understand why. And it was a good reason."
She drank, coughed a few times, hit her chest.
"You alright?" asked Book.
She nodded.
"Been a while since I had Ghostspice," she gasped. "Gods, the kick alone…"

And then it was Maria's turn.
"To Ganpei," she said. "Had the balls to call me Paleface, and laughed when I called you Pisshead. Funny, you were. And strong. I'll remember you."
She drank, and savoured the taste a moment.
"Crazy bitch," she added fondly. "Should have given you this when you were alive."

And they waited at the wall, still listening to the Drunkards singing funeral songs.
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Ulysses 9 -Two For One Sale
Ulysses 9 Two For One Sale​
I had been sent on a mission. I was to infiltrate Jingshen lands and ascertain their military readiness. I was not some master of stealth, and my interpersonal skills needed work, so I thought it would be prudent to go as a merchant, so as to smooth over any lapses in my judgement with bribery. But in order to sell my disguise well, I would not start in Jingshen lands, but rather would venture far across the lands of the golden devils, starting with buying spirit stones with contribution points from a mine, where the prices were lower because I did not have to pay for their transport. From there I spent some time peddling things from one village to another. I could hardly play the part of a merchant if I didn't know the lay of the land, so to say.

On one of these trips between far off villages, I came across a man lying face down. His chest barely moved. I rushed over, drawing my scalpel from where I'd stashed it in the arm of the robe I now wore. I could hardly be inconspicuous in full armor after all, and this should make me appear non-threatening. Appearing to come from a scholarly background could be useful if I found myself drawn into a conversation on medicine. I doubted I could keep my mouth shut if such a thing happened around me.

Back to the matter at hand, as I approached the man the first thing I noticed was the heat, palpable against the background of the noonday sun when I was three meters away. By the time I was at the man's side, I was certain that the heat was enough to badly scorch any mortals in the vicinity, so therefore this man must have been some sort of cultivator. He had a sword with green wrapping around the hilt, so this man was likely of the Viridian Blade Duchy. I tried to check his pulse, but when my fingers touched his neck, a viscous black liquid beaded through the man's skin, immediately trying to latch onto my fingers. Wiping my fingers on the only safe cloth available, the man's tunic I ran through a mental list of possible diagnoses. His spin was a bright cherry red and emitting an intense heat, and underneath it was likely a great deal of impurities if the lightest pressure let them bleed through the skin. It took me a moment to puzzle it out, because this was an intermediate state rarely seen in the infirmary. He usually only saw cases like this in a n autopsy, when the patient had a great raggedhole in the abdomen, where the impurities and the cadaver's dantian had been drawn out. I was dealing with a Baleful Basking Lizard.

These beasts, like many plants, could convert sunlight into Qi and use the energy to cultivate, unlike almost every other creature, they did not fully expel impurities as they ascended the heavenstages, rather storing them in a special organ with some refined sunlight. They expel these impurities violently, poisoning their prey and stalking them until they are too weak to resist, then reclaiming the impurities and those of the cultivator and eating their dantian, thereby rapidly increasing the lizard's cultivation.

Exact prognosis of the patient was hard to say, since I couldn't check his vitals. He could fully expire anywhere from within the hour to a few days hence. The records on the conditions progression were muddled, since the subjects were usually eaten well before the terminal stage. Now that I'd thought of it, why hadn't this patient been eaten yet? He was clearly too weak to mount an effective defense, and wouldn't a beast big enough to scare off the Lizard have eaten the patient anyway? While I pondered such mysteriesthe desert flashed briefly whtie, and my back felt uncomfortably hot accompanied by a pins and needles sensation. The feeling spread over my skin far faster than anything that viscous had any right to. It seems that the process the lizard uses to refine its attack caused the impurities to take on a quite vicious character. This was bad, two patients, one likely terminal and another in the initial onset period, and I had precious few of the usual amenities I was accustomed to from the infirmary. The few pills I had brought along to sell would be no good here, none of them were of a cleansing nature. No useful pills, and no proper cauldron to make more in, I would have to improvise. I had some spirit stones, some nurturing aloe vera, a few Sublimating Succulents, a large amount of useless metal tools, a camping kit, a mortar and pestle, and some Decade Vinegar. Mashing up the Aloe Vera with some spirit stones and exposing the mixture to sunlight should draw out the medicinal properties of the Aloe Vera, but that would only be effective as a preventative measure. I had aa large jug of the Decade Vinegar, but that was mostly useful as a base for pills and medicinal liquids, on its own its potency was just too weak to deal with any real toxins. The sublimating succulents were practically impossible to work with without a proper furnace. I shifted uncomfortably, the foreign impurities aggressively attacking my body,trying to advance from my skin to my musculature. He took a moment to make sure that the Lizard wasn't about to rush me or the other patient, but as expected, it had withdrawn to a distant hill to wait for the malaise to weaken me.

The intense itching was making it hard for me to think clearly, my own qi clashing against the affliction and being rebuffed like I had heard waves did on rocks, producing heat as a byproduct, The impurities of the lizard were quite vicious, nothing like most impurities which just sat around and made you weaker. I think I have a solution, and resolved to test it on the other guy first, since I doubted anything I could do to him at this point could really make his condition worse.First, I processed the Aloe Vera into Sun Guarding Ointment then I gathered a large jug of Decade Vinegar, and a flint and steel from the camping kit. Stashing the latter up my sleeve, I drew my scalpel and made an incision in his chest, there was no guarantee that this would be completely effective, and if I only helped part of his body, the chest had the highest number of vital organs. I began pouring the Decade Vinegar, first on the wound, and then in a long spiral around the man.

The weak cleansing energies prodded at the impurities, which lashed out violently, more and more of them flowing freely from the wound in pursuit of the trail of vinegar. Once the wound began to flow red instead of black, I applied some of the ointment to it, just in case, brought out my flint and steel, and set the now free flowing impurities ablaze. Impurities were essentially the embodiments of mortal weakness, and whatever refining process the lizard used couldn't remove that quality without making them useless as a weapon. As it tirns out, flammability is a mortal weakness, purged more and more as one ascended the realms of cultivation.

The patient began to stir, so quickly I stashed him inside the wagon. I couldn't let this lizard off so easily after it had assaulted a Golden Devil after all, so it couldn't find out that my cure had worked. In Qi condensation the beasts were not very bright, but they were smart enough to know that corpses don't usually get up and walk around. That left the question of how to draw it into battle, since they were persistence hunters, but, judging from the movement of the lizard earlier, were still faster than I was at a sprint. This next part was going to be unpleasant, but necessary if I wanted to avoid long term consequences. I opened up a deep incision, cutting into muscle, and applied Sun Guarding Ointment to the deepest parts of the wound. I lengthened the incision, leading it in a meandering pattern which was more painful than cultivation, but the only way to ensure coverage. After I had finished with that arm, I sewed the incision back closed, and passed my scalpel to the injured arm. Spreading the pattern all over and applying the ointment directly to my muscles took long enough that my patient woke up, saw me, and then fainted again. It was good that he was getting rest, I would need him for the next part. My temperature was still steadily increasing as the impurities ran wild under my skin, but since I'd barred them from going any deeper the effects should be mostly cosmetic.

I left my companion a note explaining our current predicament, and then went outside and collapsed to the ground. I had been practicing cultivating from a prone position anyway, for my upcoming mission to Jingshen lands, and that was paying dividends now. The familiar burning sensation of cultivation was no great strain considering the throbbing pain from all over my body, now it was just a matter of keeping it up until the lizard was sure I was incapacitated.

It took three days and three nights, but eventually the lizard came for its meal. My first indication that it had done so was its fangs sinking into my neck, passing straight through my afflicted skin but stopping dead when it hit my healthy, bronzed muscles. I lashed out with my hand, with speed the lizard was not expecting, and I had a strong grip on its neck.I let out a shout for my former patient, and he was by my side in an instant, blade drawn and radiating an aura that felt sharp. He bisected the lizard with a single stroke, and then doubled over himself, sweat suddenly beading his face as he sucked in breath.

"I did warn you about overexerting yourself didn't I? Those impurities nearly killed you, you'll need to recuperate for at least a few years before you start fighting again." I said, brushing myself off and going to retrieve some Decade Vinegar.

"I do not strike with anything less than my full force, to do otherwise would dishonor my blade. Since you are presumably the writer of the note and therefore responsible for saving my life, I shall forgive this insult." the man said, taking out a fine cloth to cleanse his blade, and then oiling it before returning it to its sheath.

"I meant no disrespect, sir but wouldn't it dishonor your blade even more if you had to hang it up because you ended up crippling yourself? And I don't believe we've been introduced, I am Ulysses." I responded, drawing my scalpel ro excise the impurities trapped in my skin.

"Jian Jundao is my name, and I see you take good care of that blade of yours, though it is smaller than most would prefer." He said, looking at my scalpel approvingly.

"Of course, there's nothing worse than a dull scalpel after all." my thoughts turned to Iason, whose tough skin had resulted in me needing to replace several scalpels in the past.

"Hmm, I am quite thankful for you saving my life, so I believe I shall let you have the beast's corpse." Jian said.

"Nonsense, we took it down together, and without you I doubt I could have killed it. I was practicing keeping a low profile for… reasons and as such I left my spear and shield at home, so we should split it evenly. Although, the beast core is likely worth much more than the entire rest of the corpse put together, but at the present time, me having a beast core like this one would be more trouble than it is worth, so please take it."

"If it's that troublesome, then refusing such an offer would not discharge the debt I owe you, so I must accept, but owing such a debt is distasteful to me, so do you have anything I could help you with, perhaps a troublesome spirit beast, or a town in need of rescue?" Jian asked, growing excited near the end.

"Sorry, I don't know about anything like that. Under ordinary circumstances I might ask you to stay around the infirmary for a while to deal with a certain troublesome patient, but I've been assigned to do some merchant work for the foreseeable future, so I'm not sure I can take you along."

"So you're going to be posing as a mortal and you don't see how having a Cultivator for a bodyguard could be helpful? And from what I can tell of your qi, you should have had no trouble killing such a beast, at least once you'd grappled it. Do you even know how to use that blade of yours?"

"I'll have you know that my bladework is perfectly adequate, the scalpel is simply too small to dispatch a spirit beast in a reasonable amount of time."

"Not if you limit your cuts to merely the blade, I suppose, but you must be in the upper reaches of Qi Condensation, so why limit yourself like that? Though the path of the blade is without end, the first few steps shouldn't be beyond your ability to grasp."

Was he saying that I could use Sword Intent with a scalpel? From what I knew that wouldn't work. If sabers and swords were distinct enough to have entirely different intents then there's no way that a scalpel and a sword would be closer.

"I would not even know how to begin with that, I am sure some of my seniors have figured out some things in that regard, but I would rather not trouble them with such things."

"Good, helping you figure that out should make bodyguard work less tedious, so where to next?" Jian beamed at me.\
a.n. I figure since Ulysses is trying to be a merchant for a while I would change my naming scheme from medical references to mercantile references for this little arc.
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I would like an LST, and to update my cultivation aims to 10th heavenstage, and I would like to Save Juniors
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Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 64 - [Omake] [A Tale of The First Sea 3]
Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 64
[Omake]
[A Tale of The First Sea 3]

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The Orthodox clergy seeks to understand and channel the will of heaven, but there are hundreds of priestly orders who each interpret heaven in their own manner. Each of the Knightly Orders champions the vaunted Rules of Chivalry, exemplified in their worship of the noble, but ultimately failed institute of the legendary Round Table. The Empress bears the Divine Right and through her, empowers the nobility with a fraction of her authority. Then the question becomes, what do we alchemists seek? What do we exemplify?
- M​

Alchemists are ultimately philosophers of nature, I believe. We are men of science who study the truth of the world unhindered by the faith of the clergy. We see the heavenly laws for what they truly are - a world of beautiful magnificence and incredible wonder. It is so large and incredible that it is impossible to understand in a single lifetime, even if that lifetime is one of that of an immortal. Through the knowledge that we acquire, we can deduce further truths from reading the pattern of things, or exploit them to set up our own artifice.
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You would have us be reduced to mere scientists and engineers? Certainly, those are respectable professions but we alchemists are the heirs of the likes of Merlin and Solomon. Consider the maxim: "Turning lead to gold." To the unenlightened, it is merely turning something from low value to high but we alchemists know that both have equal value when used in the right place. Lead is the heavenly substance most opaque to the flow of essence while gold is the most conductive. To be able to transform one into the other freely, not require something more than simple study?
- M​

It is hard to disagree with the idea that alchemists have long had an adversarial relationship with heaven. Chrysopoeia is merely the least of our borderline heresies. We create Panaceas to cure all ills, we mix Elixirs of Immortality to brush against the lifespan that heaven has ordained for us, even our path to enlightenment is divisive. Where others present themselves to heaven for judgement, we instead present our Magnum Opus - our great work that often seeks to improve upon heaven's design rather than simply abide by it. But then can you truly understand something without pushing it to its limits?

- S​

An interesting interpretation. Since we have come to the Magnum Opus, the Great Work that purifies our body and soul then we must surely come to the philosopher's stone. It is that metaphorical ideal that we forge in our journey for the truth in the hopes that one day it will become capable of the miracles only ascribed to heaven itself. But nearly every alchemist has their own interpretation and they vigorously defend it as the one true path. What are your thoughts on the manifold paths available for us to walk? By what metric would you judge the truth?

- M​

My search for truth has led me to a singular but rather elementary conclusion - that the truth is subjective. It is something that is often repeated in relation to psychology and politics, but I believe that it may be physically true. That is not to say that some parts are a lie. Rather, we simply each perceive the truth with a different perspective. Rather than attempting to find which truth is truer, I believe it would be best to seek the perspective that best suits us. All roads lead to Camelot, but we all find different roads easier to navigate.

- S​

It is rare to find someone with such similar thoughts as myself. But perhaps it goes even deeper than that. Consider the elemental wheel that is held true by the clergy as well as most alchemists. They claim that there are four primary elements - water, fire, earth and air. Many systems consider quintessence or as it is colloquially known, essence or life force as a theoretical fifth. Now, let's consider the records we have of the third sea - better known as hell by some. It has the elements of water, wind, fire, wood and metal. A completely different elemental wheel. Some would say it is the work of the traitor, but it even seems to have been as such even before the Fall and the other Seas supposedly have similar variations. Is it not likely possible that reality itself is subjective?

- M​

That is something that I am grappling with myself. As was once said, there are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamed of in our philosophy. Still, I believe that there are patterns to things. The element wheel is common to all the seas. So is the presence of humanity and the world turtles. Clearly there is an underlying phenomenon. By studying these patterns, we can learn to understand and predict our reality. I suppose that is my path to the truth, my Magnum Opus - simply a method to better understand the truth of the world and that of others. What of you then? What is your path?

- S​

Are you familiar with the concept of a Chimaera? A single creature formed from joining the beast cores of two or more entirely different beings. Generally, they are used to create special mounts such as griffons or hippogriffs, or other creatures designed to a particular role. My thought upon looking upon them is - here stands a creature with the perspective of two creatures and a unique perspective all of their own. Rather than seeking to slowly understand the world with a limited human perspective, why not seek something new? Men have attempted to understand heaven and earth for countless eons. What we require… is something new... something revolutionary.

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The Spirit Oasis Neutral Lands
As requested, Lady Scarletglyph, a current summary of the situation within the Spirit Oasis. I know that since the.. interlocution between the Devils and the Jingshen things have been tense, so I have prepared this information with the thought in mind that if should they come to blows, you will have the most useful information at your fingertips.

Firstly, a map.

The Spirit Oasis Neutral Lands, originally held by the Battle Blood Cannibal Sect, were opportunistically taken by the Jingshen during the Sixth Cannibal War (by our reckoning, I believe the Golden Devils reckon it the Ninth) and were subsequently ceded to us - though more accurately the Righteous Path of the Virtuous Flipper Region - for a rather hefty sum, including our financing of various mining equipments for the Jingshen, as well a promise to intervene should they be invaded by the Golden Devils. Such a promise had already existed for a long time, but I suspect the Jingshen found a great deal of comfort in having a more recent promise to lean on.

Moreover, the Spirit Oasis is practically indefensible, and its cession to us is, I suspect, part of a greater Jingshen strategy. The Glorious Sixty-Two (some of our finest and most valorous martial analysts, I might add) concur that the Oasis presented an open way for the Golden Devils to march through and link up with the Heavenly Bandits in any possible Jingshen-Devil War. Ironically, this prospect has been made entirely real by the Seventh Cannibal War, with the Bandit Kingdoms bordering the Golden Devils directly regardless.

The Neutral Lands are split up into what are effectively two sub-areas.

Firstly, the Oasis Plateau, a massive plateau in which sits both the Outer Oasis and the Inner, or True Oasis. Secondly, the Desert, much like other desert regions.

For analysis purposes, however, there are essentially two sets of things to look at. Firstly, the Oasis Trade, the set of roads and forts that protect the cities and the Oasis itself.

This is of consistent relevance to us as the healing powers of the Oasis serve as a minor but important part of our overall strategy in the current War. Our ability to rotate injured Core and Foundation cultivators in and out of the Oasis is quite useful, especially since we lack the sort of healing constitutions that the Devils do. I spent some time examining the actuarial records of Fùyuán Town - it is notable that of those Devils who have come there to heal, they average injuries that would on average cripple a Strength Purity cultivator for life, and moreover, they recover from those injures at almost fourteen times the rate that equivalent Strength Purity cultivators do in the Oasis. Four percent of Strength Purity cultivators manage to recover what are termed 'Cultivating-ending' injuries even with the advantage of the Oasis, almost fifty-six percent of Golden Devils do. Their constitutions are obscene, and this is perhaps why they have not overly coveted the Oasis in the way that we feared. I took the time to interrogate a few. For us, 'cultivation-ending' injuries are simply that, and are not divided further. For the Devils, there are six entire classes of these injuries, as those we consider an end to a cultivator's journey to immortality is for them a speedbump.

As savage and slow as they may be, they are extraordinarily hard to put down.

Secondly, the Independent Sects. Few are the Sects that are not paying tribute to a greater power, yet the peculiar nature of the Neutral Lands means these Sects do not. They were raised up from the mortals living here, as well as a number of those who wished to migrate to the desert in return for being able to help be a major power of new minor powers.

The Oasis Trade is tripartite.

Three roads run into it. The Dawn Road, built when the lands were first given over to us. The Uncast Road, built a decade later. Lastly comes the Stork Path, hardly a notable highway, but a track that is slowly becoming something more. Perhaps one-twentieth of all trade to the Oasis runs along this road, and that is generous. Notably, the Jingshen declined to have a road running into their lands, or that of their vassals.

Each road is guarded by a fort. These three forts were formerly cities in their own right before they were laid waste by the Cannibal Sect, and on their ruins have emerged three fortresses to guard the approaches to the Oasis. In truth, these are merely here to ensure we are able to charge the fees and like necessary to run the Oasis, and are not serious fortifications expected to stand up to an army.

The Purefort is held by the crippled Elder Single Blow, a Late Core Formation elder who having lost both of his arms is not all that useful to the war effort. Nonetheless, he shows the Core Formation level of strength we are expected to have, and can for brief times hurt those a small realm or two below him.

The Bearfort has since been left to Elder Grizzle Growl Roar - pronounced as per the bear noises, who is in Early Core Formation. He is completely convinced that he is a bear, and refuses to speak in anything other than bear sounds. His lifelong bear companion was slain during the Poison-Crushing Siege, and the link between their minds shattered, leaving him a wreck. However, he has an aide who is able to 'translate', and give him basic commands, making him at least a deterrant.

The Gemfort is held by Elder Shunyang Xi, who has gathered three Core Formation elders from the Gemstone Justice Sect, and has no ability to return until we are able to break the battle-lines of the Noble Devil Alliance. He consequently has been healed completely, and standing in the Great Circle of Core Formation is the greatest deterrent we possess in the region.

As the trade flows in, it goes through Tent City, a city of refugees, injured cultivators, those who could not be healed, and so on. Many who were made mortal again or were crippled live here, eking out an existence by performing basic missions, winning the rights to bathe in the Oasis to continue their lives. A sad place, but not one we are able to fix.

To there, we reach Fùyuán Town. A population of two million traders, farmers, cultivators, and the like, in the safe plateau lands. Not ruled by Strength Purity directly, Fùyuán Town is a trade city that sprung up naturally with the Oasis trade. We control only the docks leading into the Outer Oasis. The Outer Oasis is difficult to enter, as without knowing the true path past the whirlpools and Savage Oasis Crocodiles you are likely to be killed. Once within the true Oasis, though, the waters heal cultivators of all sorts, from Qi Condensation to Foundation Establishment. However, there are limited numbers of spots that crop up, and so our cultivators there identify them and auction them off, with large discounts for those injured in the War.

Further in is an island, on which sits the True Oasis. A massive fountain contains all the Oasis waters, and within it spring up waters capable of healing even Core Formation injuries. Every seventeenth full moon, the True Oasis regathers its power, and consequently we are able to heal injured Core Formation cultivators with alacrity. Thirty-two major injuries have been healed in the Oasis since the war's opening, and it has allowed us to take more and greater risks with our Core Formation Elders, holding several key battlelines in important battles. The Battle for the Pass recently was a Nascent one, but without our willingness and ability to deploy Core Formation elders en masse, we might have been forced into an unfavorable Nascent matchup and risked losing the Colossus Footstep Pass entirely.

Lastly, Bathmother. The Spirit Oasis is warm for a reason, and Bathmother is that reason. A massive volcano, pumping heat into the Oasis. Bathmother is not a particularly interesting volcano to be honest beyond its heat-providing properties.

Now come the various powers of the land. Starting in the north, and going clockwise.

The Strong-Backed Farmer Sect are headed by the First Farmer, a man who was in truth a farmer under the Battle Blood Cannibal Sect. In under two centuries he has reached Core Formation, largely through some tremendous Spirit Herb growth talents. Each one of his disciples takes up the name [Something] Farmer - his second in command is the Second Farmer, his third in command is the Straw Farmer, there is the Dirty Farmer, and so on and so on. Names become shorter as they rise through the ranks - new disciples are called something like North Pig Short Stout Brown-Hair Farmer, and are allowed to remove words from their name as they grow towards the heights of Foundation Establishment. They are not overly strong, but grow excellent Spirit Herbs that they trade.

The Wealth King's Devil Prison is beyond anything but concerted Nascent attention. The Wealth King is a mythical figure, said to have been Spirit Severing. His Devil Prison is just as it sounds - a devilish place, and if one tries to enter a massive burst of Qi will consume you. I hypothesise he is using some tremendous demonic creature bound there to power its own prison, but who can truly say?

The Sunrise Mountain Sect is the Sect of the Sunrise Mountain King. The Twin Mountains formed the old resistance against the Cannibals, and originally were ruled over by the Sun King. He was slain, however, and those who remained went deep into their peaks, and after they emerged found they no longer considered themselves one with their former Clan in Sunset Mountain. Sunrise Mountain are mostly a Clan in truth, but reordered themselves as a Sect to win our favour. A massive mountain which is also a Spirit Stone mine, they delve for Spirit Stones there and use said stones to empower themselves.

The Tomb-Defiling Justice Sect live in the tomb of Old Bone-Cruncher, a former Blood Path lord who lived in the region prior to the rise of the Battle Blood Cannibal Sect. The Justice Sect entered it, destroying relics and annihilating his legacy. They were former cultivators from the Oasis Rebel Coalition, and use his defiled tomb as their Sect headquarters in defiance of the Blood Path who used to prey on them.

Cha Xi was once the greatest city in the region, with three million mortals living there. The Cannibal Civil War depopulated it, however, Child Corpse Gulper personally consuming almost every single mortal in the city with his arts. The Nascent Dao-echoes left there are new, and difficult to deal with, usually sending those who stay there insane and with a desire to consume human flesh. The city has since been abandoned, and is off-limits for all cultivators below Foundation Establishment.

The Forge Madmen Sect was founded by Ba Lu, an old woman from the Joyful Blacksmith Sect. Disagreeing on forging matters so violently she was expelled from the Sect, she took her followers and founded a new sect around a giant abandoned forge in the desert. Bringing it back to life, they refuse to forge weapons or armour, and instead forge prosthetics - both for themselves as they remove their own arms and legs to become one with the metal, and for those too badly injured to be regenerated who have come to the Oasis for healing.

The Sunset Mountain Sect is the Sect of the Sunset Mountain Queen. The Twin Mountains formed the old resistance against the Cannibals, and originally were ruled over by the Sun King. He was slain, however, and those who remained went deep into their peaks, and after they emerged found they no longer considered themselves one with their former Clan in Sunrise Mountain. Sunset Mountain were mostly a Clan in truth, but reordered themselves as a Sect to win our favour, taking on massive numbers of disciples. Their numbers are almost four times that of Sunrise Mountain. Much like their former eastern allies, they live in a massive mountain which is also a Spirit Stone mine, they delve for Spirit Stones there and use said stones to empower themselves. However, their greater numbers have allowed them to delve deeper and they also gain Beast Cores from the beasts far below.

I hope this is of assistance, Elder. I know that the requests have gone out several times for more forces to be sent to the Oasis Neutral Lands, but it is my personal opinion as Elder of the Glorious Sixty-Two that this cannot be afforded. The Oasis is unlikely to fall even if we remove all Core Formation forces from the region, and minor losses in efficiency do not make up the possible loss of any part of the battle-lines. According to my personal analysis, the war is reaching a pivotal state - if nothing else happens, the Noble Devil Alliance should lose cohesion in under a decade, and should not be able to continue their sieges and destruction of mortal lands beyond thirty more years. Provided we hold, our victory is assured.
 
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A timely reminder that we are all cultivator terminators.

Seems a optimistic take on the war by their strategists though - might be the case if they can't finish any of these sieges, but don't see this being over long term in a 30 years.
 
"A new war is beginning. Jingshen Clan have negotiated the ceding of the former Oasis Rebels under the Cannibal Sect to us. Our plans are simple enough. The Spirit-Refreshing Oasis there is an excellent healing measure for Core Formation cultivators. We are hoping to have the Golden Devil Clan see reason and allow such cultivators to travel to be healed from the Great Battlefield for a nominal fee."

He snorted.

"Why should my Golden Devil Clan do this? What benefit is in it for us?"

"In return, Jingshen Clan will commit to spending fifteen years of our income to fortify the region against the Cannibal Sect, and will not permit Cannibal Sect cultivators to travel through the region for two hundred years. An excellent bulwark for you, no?"

Mmm.

Manuel wasn't quite sure. This was all true, but it would mean a powerful Jingshen force to his immediate east, even as it shored up his own defenses. It'd cost him some income as well, but it would mean goodwill - whatever little that meant - from Righteous Powers, and would offer an excellent bulwark against the Cannibals for at least a century once the agreement with Old Cannibal lapsed. Certainly, an advantage over the next few centuries. After that? Hard to say.
[X] Negotiate
-[X] You are not materially opposed to this arrangement, none wish to see the Demonic Altar Sect move unopposed after all, but you must also see to the well being of your people, and the last thing any of us want would be spies from the Demonic Altar Sect slipping through and setting up camp here, or bolstering the weakened Blood Cannibals, no? The Golden Devil Clan is willing to charge reduced tariffs on those who seek the springs for healing--but the Jingshen Clan will be responsible for paying the difference--such resources will be committed to the establishment of a secure road and other methods of heightened security for the duration of this agreement.
The problem with carefully preplanned notions and ideas when suffusing oneself with the pure essence of contempt was that once you left the script, even partially, the whole thing fell down, and one reverted to more crude refusals. He'd ended up simply refusing several times in a humiliatingly obvious way. He personally wasn't obsessed with the notion of face, but it impacted how people saw you. How they treated you. Lady Jiao had evidently felt she had gotten the better end of the exchange, even if he had been forced to disagree with her offer entirely. He'd ended up making a small concession as well, allowing Jiao doctors to move along the Scorpion road for ten years tariff-free.
I'm not sure what we ended up doing with the Oasis. In the text it seems that we tried to Negotiate, failed, which ended in Refusal.

It seems that we could walk right through the Oasis' defenses, but it would be seen as an act of war against the Righteous Powers. I'd rather raise the tariffs, but as it seems that Jingshen is no longer profiting from the Oasis, it's not necessary to cut them off of it.

The Glorious Sixty-Two (some of our finest and most valorous martial analysts, I might add) concur that the Oasis presented an open way for the Golden Devils to march through and link up with the Heavenly Bandits in any possible Jingshen-Devil War. Ironically, this prospect has been made entirely real by the Seventh Cannibal War, with the Bandit Kingdoms bordering the Golden Devils directly regardless.
Notice how it's accepted as a matter of course that in any Jingshen/Devil war, the Heavenly Bandit Kingdom would be on our side. I really think that we can skip right past the Intrigue and Diplomacy stages and head right for the Fortify Ally stage of our relationship.
According to my personal analysis, the war is reaching a pivotal state - if nothing else happens, the Noble Devil Alliance should lose cohesion in under a decade, and should not be able to continue their sieges and destruction of mortal lands beyond thirty more years. Provided we hold, our victory is assured.
I do not like this. The war is our cover for any daring steps, it ending now would slow down our Desert Hegemony, if not stop it. We're currently able to aggressively interfere with the Jingshen wealth generation because the Righteous Path can't forcefully tell us to knock it off.
 
its not that big a problem? the plan was to PROVOKE Jingshen into attacking us anyway.
im more worried something happens in the trials, again. but hopefully,our elders are safe this time....
also, IF our elders survive, we should get news from both the Great Battlefield and Jingshen as well
Edit: its an interesting tidbit though, that Jingshen managed to goug the RP to provide more mining equipment at that time.
 
Auspicious Nine 2 - Decision Making: The Demon Tree's Perspective
Decision Making: The Demon Tree's Perspective
Auspicious Nine Second Omake Turn 10

Athena massaged her temples and tried not to close her eyes. She'd been doing that a lot lately. Some of it was expected – the trials always had this effect on her, and quite frankly everyone else – but there was more than usual this time around. After all, this time around she had…

…kids.

Not children, she decided. She'd had children before. Four of them. Each one had presented challenges, certainly, but nothing on quite the scale of… of….

Nine (or Auspicious, as he'd taken to calling himself) gave her a stern look. It would almost have been impressive, were it not coming from underneath a hat with a brim eight sizes too big, a set of earmuffs, and what looked like a scarf she'd received as a gift years ago from a trader who didn't understand how deserts worked.

"Joining the legions," she said.

"Yes," said Nine.

"That… is certainly a decision."

"The only logical choice. Let us acknowledge the facts. Your waycastle, while certainly serviceable enough, is beginning to reach the potential limits of its stimulation."

"Is that so."

"I have read all the books," said Nine, flatly. "Some of them twice."

"I will admit, the library is somewhat rudimentary, but-"

"Limits. Of its. Stimulation. As a dedicate of Research and The Mind, this is clearly intolerable. I must therefore continue my development in the only appropriate fashion. Joining the legions."



She stared helplessly at him. She thought, before, that she'd finally gotten a handle on Nine; he liked to read, so keep him in books. He was curious, so keep a tutor around to answer any questions he had. Certainly he wasn't as manageable as poor sweet Three, who really just wanted to watch the world go by in a quiet room, but he wasn't Eight (who had recently discovered boys) or 1 (who had also discovered boys, decided she didn't like them, and now dedicated her life to hitting them with sticks) or Gods forbid, 4 (No. Just No.)

And yet here he was. Suggesting this… this thisness. Gods. She should have gotten in the new shipment of library books faster.

"You don't think," said Athena, helplessly, "that perhaps you might wait until after the trials?"

"That would take years. I do not have years."

"…I rather think you do, Nine-"

"Auspicious Nine."

"-Auspicious Nine, yes, sorry."



He harrumphed.

"I will admit, I understand your trepidation," he said.

Athen felt a flicker of hope. Perhaps this was a way to-

"Nepotism would very quickly still my progress, and with it my chances of furthering the field of Research."

The flicker gave a sad little pffut sound, and died.

"I have, however, developed a solution. Observe." Nine reached into his pocket and pulled out a mask. Quite a clever one, she had to admit; it was made of soulsteel, and jutted forward to cover the entirety of his face with a flat, featureless surface.

Completely featureless.

"…I note an absence of eyeholes."

"An early design flaw. Pay it no mind."

"But you can't see."

"I can't see yet. However, with further development, I will find an alternative! As a result, my indirect descent from the Honoured Jin Muyi is rendered impossible to discover. I will be completely incognito."



Athena, tactfully, did not to point out that his skin was made of wood, his hair sported a healthy green sheen from all the chlorophyll, and he had vine-tentacles. It struck her as beside the point.

"Ni- Auspicious, that's very sensible, but not what I was concerned about. The trials are coming up."

"I am aware, yes."

"….Aus, you could be very badly hurt. Or killed."

He shrugged.

"It is certainly a possibility, yes."

"Then why not wait until afterwards?"

"Because PROGRESS, Lady Pleuron, WILL NOT BE STOPPED."

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In which our adorable mad scientist continues to be really, really dumb. May I have a threadmark please @Alectai @TehChron @ReaderOfFate ?
 
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