Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Aretaphila Myia 11 - Intermission
Aretaphila Myia
Intermission


Ai Jun has looked over the Bell Witch for nearly a year now, ever since that day that Chun Zang had dragged her in from the desert sands, covered in blood. Even now, even without the changes that had been brought into his daily life, Ai Jun would have never forgotten that day.

The desert sands had been kicking up strongly, far earlier in the season than they ought to have. At least as far as seasons went in the Scarred Lands. Worse still, past the particulate in what patches of sky were visible, fleeing Spirit Beasts could be seen. Colossal Scorpions, many-headed birds, even the Desert-Tilling Maggots that lived beneath the village seemed to vanish due to some unseen danger.

The Village Chief had volunteered to brave the sandstorm, to see if he could determine the cause. Old Chun Zang wasn't quite a mortal, but not quite a Cultivator either, and that made him the village's best candidate by far. There'd been an argument about it in the village square, but the Desert-Tilling Maggots were what made life in the village even possible, and so they were left with little choice but to take the chance.

He went off into the sandstorms, alone, unwilling to waste more provisions by bringing anyone else with him. Gone for days, the village had started to fear the worst. Fears that didn't abate until nearly a week later, when Chun Zang returned with a tiny figure in his arms.

Bronze of skin and gold of hair, the tiny figure was clearly different from the rest of them. Sleeping deeply, the returned Chief reported his findings to the village at large: In the direction the creatures had fled from, he'd encountered a sole cultivator: The sleeping girl he had brought back with him. She was largely unharmed, but clearly exhausted.

So he brought her back, even as she was mysteriously heavy for her size.

There had been a great debate then, as many advocated killing the girl, fearing that she had been the cause of this crisis. Surely by pulling out the root, the weed which sprung of it would perish as well? But Chun Zang argued against this view, his instincts telling him that she was a victim too, and he would have none of it.

And Chun Zang is Chief. Strongest in the village. His word and decision were final, and so they were.

Some time later, the young girl awoke, revealing her alien blue eyes.

Even more startling, she was stronger than Chun Zang.

More remarkable was that, upon being told the situation, she claimed to be able to solve it.

So it was that on the night of that day a single, low pitched ringing sound echoed through the village. Like the tinkling of a bell. Thus she became known as the Bell Witch to Ai Jun and all he knew.


That ringing note had been the beginning of great prosperity in the village; with it in place the Desert-Tilling Maggots returned beneath them, in greater numbers than before. Spirit Beasts that had been calamities were easily repelled by the Immortal Bell Witch's strikes and songs. Even the meager Meat-Thistle Cacti which Ai Jun's family desperately grew to feed the village experienced explosive growth that had been unseen since Ai Jun's Great-Great Grandfather's time.

So as the months dragged on, and the Bell Witch's work to raise up the village did more and more for them, Ai Jun decided that he could never be satisfied following his father's footsteps as a mere farmer, eking out a meager existence in the desert sands.

He would go to the Bell Witch! Become her apprentice! And as an immortal, he'd leave the hovel of his growth behind and become more than he had ever dreamed of! He'd go to that opulent adobe home of hers today! Ai Jun knew it could be done, there was no doubt she'd-

"No." The Bell Witch told him, one evening when the desert sands blew more harshly than usual. As harshly as they had when old Chun Zang had brought her to the village, "I won't be making you my apprentice, kid." She stared at Ai Jun, one eye shut while the other pinned him in place with a sky-blue gaze.

"W-why not?" The young boy said in disbelief, the feeling of rejection catching his throat.

"Setting aside that I barely know what I'm doing myself," The Bell Witch said with a sigh, "It's all I can do to maintain my own cultivation right now. My method of cultivation requires resources you have no access to, and there's no way you'd be able to get them to awaken. At most, you'd be some sad thing like your village chief, and any opportunity for you to advance would be forever lost."

The Village Chief?! "You dare?!" Ai Jun rasps, shock at the audacity filling him, "After the Village Chief saved your life?!"

The Bell Witch frowned, "And that's a debt I'm repaying. What protection I can manage, until I have enough resources to return to the lands of my people, far away from the dangers that brought me here in the first place."

Most of what the woman was saying went over the boy's head, but one thing he did latch on to, "Your people? Do-" Ai Jun paused, a curious sensation overtaking him, "Do they have enough of what you need to cultivate?"

"Yeah," The Witch confirms, "It's a wondrous place. The Golden Devil Clan rules the western desert, stretched from the northernmost border to the south with a great road where incredible wealth is moved every day to the wider world," Her lips curl, "Great cities, with enough mortals that this village is but a speck of a speck by comparison, verdant and green like the plains past the mountains bordering this region. Nothing at all like…" A bronzed hand sweeps out, gesturing at the meager village Ai Jun calls home.

But all that lies within Ai Jun's head is the notion of hundreds of thousands of mortals. Just like him. Green lands, without needing to rely on the whims of underground maggots to live while barely avoiding starvation, forever at the whims of the sands and the beasts that dwell within them.

"Take me with you."

The hope that Ai Jun had felt growing is crushed. Ruthlessly.

"I can't."

"W-why?" His scream is strangled, tears filling the boy's eyes even as the Bell Witch sighs in frustration.

"Only a Cultivator could survive the trip through the desert back to my Clan's territory, and I will not make you a Cultivator. Not unless I can ensure your awakening is a success" The Bell Witch looks away with a sigh, "I'm sorry. I promise that I'll make it back here in time before its too late for you to become one of us. But I can't help you."

Ai Jun's fist trembles, then clenches with as much force as a child can muster. The rage of a spurned adolescent filling his breast. He wouldn't stand and be insulted a moment longer!

"I can barely help myself."

He doesn't hear her, storming out of the Bell Witch's adobe home, the ringing of the air blessedly muted by the sounds of the sandstorm, the note becoming more and more drowned out as the boy approached the outskirts of his village.

Finally, Ai Jun reaches the very limit of the sandstorms stretching tendrils. The ringing of the Bell Witch wholly absent, replaced by the howling of the wind, and an altogether more cohesive beat. Hypnotic, empowering even.The sounds sink into the boys flesh, relaxing him, and all alone he gives voice to his frustrations.

His wish.

His single, fervent hope that he had discovered this past year. Now cruelly dashed.

"I just want to be a Cultivator too."

Who says ya can't, kiddo? A voice joins the sound, an almost silent whisper.

"The Bell Witch."

Scaaaaary name there, daddy-o! Tell me all about this 'witch'. The voice continues, silky and sympathetic. The very kind of voice that invited one to spill out all their frustrations, desperately seeking empathy even from a stranger.

So Ai Jun does. From that day, over a year ago. To the patrols. To the celebrations that had been had thanks to the Bell Witch. The prosperity she had brought to the village, and the gong she always seemed to ring each day with uncanny discipline. To the ill fated conversation and rejection of his aspirations at her hands. At some point, tears had sprung unbidden from Ai Jun's eyes, but errant grains of said had brushed against the boy's face and dried them before they reached the ground.

Now, now, now, that ain't riiiiiiiight, babe. The voice says at the conclusion of Ai Jun's story, Little Miss Witch wasn't exactly straight with ya, dig?

"What do you mean?"

The music in Ai Jun's ears grows louder, sinking into his flesh and relaxing it. Whatever lingering hesitation and wariness they had for this mysterious voice continues to melt away, There is, in fact, a way to awaken you to being a cultivator. Right here. Right now. All you gotta do is help me out for a bit, and I'll even show you how to get started!

The last bit of suspicion in Ai Jun's heart rears up at that, for who does anything for free? "What's in it for you, then?"

The Witch, babe! As it turns out, this little witch of yours was the reason for your village being in danger, and I'm planning to bring her to justice, you see? That girl's been running around the desert for the better part of a decade, bringing down town after town, babe. Help me put her down, and I'll show you how to step onto the Path of the Dao!

It was here that Ai Jun, in his ignorance, performed an act that could not be taken back:

Accepting the deal of the voice on the wind, the mortal boy stepped into the flaring sandstorm, skin peeling apart from the intensity of the particulate flying through the air. But he persevered. Childlike curiosity and stubbornness saw him determined to carry out his sole task.

With eyes closed for protection, two hands cupped the boy's mouth. He called into the sandstorm railing around him.

"Ju-Shui Yú! Ju-Shui Yú! Ju-Shui Yú!" Against all odds, Ai Jun's name echoed through the tumultuous sand storm, and before long a lanky figure materialized from within it, suffused with an aura of power that far outstripped that of the Bell Witch.

Red eyes glinted in mirth, a sun-kissed hand ruffling Ai Jun's scalp with an air of wry amusement. Together, the two exited the tumultuous sandstorm, back into the village. The older man, that Ju-Shui Yú, glanced around the assortment of adobo buildings, clustered together against the wind.

But the ringing sound was gone, drowned out entirely by the sounds emanating from the powerful cultivator before the young boy.

"Well, it's a shame." The Devil's Music shrugged, lifting his Brass Baroque Body to his lips, and with a single note and ample screams, a torrent of crimson was drawn through the air and into the open palm of Ju-Shui Yú.

It happens so quickly, that Ai Jun simply is not able to process it.

"Looks like the Bell Witch got away, kiddo, but a promise is a promise and Ju-Shui Yú keeps that much at least, babe." Said Cultivator says to the boy, taking a moment to shrug before turning to him with a smile.

"Welcome to the Battle Blood Cannibal Sect, kiddo. Now, open wide."

A.N.: A bit of a mess I think, given the timing that I wrote it at, but I wanted to at least try and get this much done before the deadline hit and I can get the next two omakes for this little arc done in a reasonable time frame. A supplemental omake done for the first time in lord knows how long, wooooh!
 
Why was Altar Lord hiding the truth from Manuel? What's the harm in letting him have the information that Heaven is gunning for him next? Was it to be dramatic on the third visit, or was it, perhaps, that he mind-wiped and fooled himself into believing something useful for his purposes. (On a Doylist level, I doubt it. I think that was Occi telling us that Altar Lord was on the level, making it an actual choice.)

It's an excellent deal. Both Jingshen Nascents gone with zero effort or blood from us.
It also puts us at war with a lot of factions we previously had trading relationships with.

Why would that be necessary? If they have zero Nascents, they're likely to stay with zero Nascents over the course of a turn or two. What's stopping us from being happy with the slaughter of two of our powerful enemies, preparing for the Trials, and conquering them once we've recovered?
1) The likelihood that someone else, such as one of the Nascent Souls currently embroiled in the Devil Bee Civil War, or another Righteous faction that does have Nascent Souls, will conquer them first.

2) The fact that Altar Lord probably won't be content with us promising to do all of this in forty years' time after the Trials are over and we've dug out of the rubble from them. He's not gonna want to wait.
 
Minervina Barda 22 - Reclamation
Minervina Barda 22: Reclamation

It was good to finally have a permanent home. I watched the golden sunrise filter through the daintily decorated window of my laboratory in the Dawn Fortress. A prime piece of property, it had previously been the pride and joy of Zosimus Panopolis, an early Core Formation legate with a reputation for incredible alchemical products. While the majority of his tools and equipment had been reclaimed by his family after his death in the last set of Trials, it was still a fantastic boon when I managed to secure the entire suite for my personal use. A shocking luxury for a mere Foundation Establishment junior, but I wasn't exactly struggling for Contribution points in the aftermath of the Blood War. I admit it also helped that most of the other aspiring owners had politely backed out of the auction when they realised they were bidding against the infamous Poison Witch.

Consisting of the top three floors of one of the Dawn Fortresses many subsidiary towers, the suite had all the mundane accoutrements I might need. Living space, a fortified storage vault and laboratory, guest quarters and space for the few servants who handle essentials. The library was particularly well-appointed and I was still in the process of acquiring personal copies of many of the fundamental scrolls and manuals I had used over the years to stock it with. Such a reserve would be invaluable as teaching aids if I found myself in a position of authority in one of the Clans new and distant dominions. That was something that was looking increasingly likely as more and more of the foremost disciples of my generation acquired leadership positions. A Legate was meant to be an instructor and talent scout as much as a battle commander, ensuring that the good seeds amongst her legionnaires were fostered with care and attention no matter what far-flung frontier you were posted to. It might not have been a position I ever lusted after, but I will be damned if I don't fulfil my duty properly.

I moved away from the window and up to the top floor. This area was dominated by my favourite feature. A greenhouse fit for an Elder alchemist. A light and airy space, subtly enlarged with costly spatial formations, it was perfect for meditation and cultivation as well as horticulture. The walls were carved with countless arrays that could be attuned to channel and balance the Qi flows in the room to create the perfect atmosphere for each plants development. I spend the better part of each day here lately, carefully transplanting all the best samples of poisonous flora I have collected to new beds. The rest of the time I am either cultivating or refining the kinds of destructive powders and elixirs that the Legions are always willing to buy in bulk. The damn greenhouse costs a fortune in Spirit Stones to run, and if I don't spend at least six hours a day making Hive-Killing-Powder or Demon-Turning-Dust I won't be able to keep water in the gourd. The biggest drawback of this is the tedium. The various Legates are usually only interested in parting with precious points for the same few recipes; ones with proven track records, that can be deployed by legionnaires without too much special training, that can be bought in bulk, that can be safely stored easily and that keep their potency for a long time. It's rewarding work and I know that I'm making a difference. Every spirit beast or blood bandit killed by an adroitly deployed consumable is one the legionaries don't have to face spear to spear after all. Yet I am starting to think I will go mad if I have to dissect another giant bee. I have been in dire need of some variety.

Hopefully, I can change that today a little. After a few months of double shifts and far too little sleep, I have made some time for a personal project. It's something I have been reading up on and theorising about for around a year now.

The laboratory is a much more functional space than the delightful greenhouse. Plain slabs of pale stone make up the workspaces, tools and implements on the wall on bronze hooks bolted to the walls. My three best cauldrons dominate the western wall, pristine black models the size of a tall man, they shine glossily in the sunlight. They were a gift from the King of Xin for all that work on the Growling Dervish problem.

"A nice enough little fellow, if a tad nervous." I harrumph. I was pretty sure the 'gift' was a bribe to encourage me to get the hell out of his little country before I scared the locals any more, but that had suited me just fine.

On the northern wall of the lab, I had added a dozen large chalkboards, along with diverse reference diagrams of the human body and most of the key regional variations. The chalkboards were good for occasionally helping me work through difficult problems, but I mostly used them to record the products of my occasional bouts of inspiration, wild theories and proposals for future projects. The extra hours of labour and the shuffling of my schedule had freed up enough time for me to attempt just one of these, so naturally, I selected the one I was most excited about. This particular pot of stew had been on the boil for almost a decade now.

I turned to the sealed storage space in the eastern wall and used a ward-key and mnemonic to urge it open. You could hear the snap-hiss of air rushing into the hermetically sealed chamber. I keep anything that could spoil, contaminate the lab or spontaneously resurrect in here. One small but particularly heavily scripted barrel has been slowly fermenting in here for 8 years now.

During one of the more ferocious battles with the Dervishes, I came across a powerful Foundation Building Expert who specialised in shadow techniques. The bitch nearly skewered me, but in the end, I hit her with a small shard of frozen Marrowfire. An experimental poison rendered from Core Formation level materials, it will cause a subject to go through a sudden and violent period of intense evolution. The resulting mutations are invariably fatal and distressing to onlookers.

I couldn't suppress a little giggle thinking back to the look on Leling the Wood Sorceress's face when I asked her to carefully gather the remains and put them in this barrel. What was it I said to her?

"I would consider it a personal favour, a Qi Condensation junior is certain to be covered in tumours by the time they're done and I and the other Centurion are so busy. You should be quite safe as long as your careful."

Served her right for being absolutely no use at all on that trip.

The next quiet moment I had, I introduced a new element to the fetid mess inside the barrel. I had found the skull of a Red Crested Virtue Dove for sale on a itinerant cultivators stall during a trip to Emporikopolis. Native to the Verdant South, the Doves were beloved pets, very fashionable amongst well to do maidens and ladies. While they had no value in war or impressive magical abilities, I am told they look quite stunning, and they do have one near-mythical power. The Virtue Dove is said to be able to draw nearly any poison out of a victims body and into its own. It will only do this for one it truly adores, as it will most certainly die from the poison itself shortly afterwards. I suppose that's why all those rich women treat them so well.

Now, most of a decade later, the poison should have finally lost its potency and be suitable for the next step in my plan. I placed the barrel on my workstation, cracked it open with workmanlike motions and with a hefty sigh plunged my hands into the foul-smelling and largely liquid contents. I fished out a half dozen bones before I found the bird skull, though they no longer looked the least bit human. Indeed most looked more like tree roots or sea coral than anything else, with odd growths sprouting at all angles.

Eventually, I managed to find it, and after a few minutes of scrutiny decided I was pleased with the results. The bone was unwarped, having been long dead when it came into contact with the poison, instead, the Virtue Doves innate ability to draw in venom had activated. Where before it had been a pristine white, now it was marbled black and burnt red. My Spiritual Sense confirmed my initial theory was correct. Over the years the skull had drawn both the transformative wood Qi of the venom and the shadow Qi of the victim. It would make a perfect base for the next part of the process.

I returned the barrel and the rest of its contents to storage then got out my strongest Array-Lamp and my scrimshaw tools. I had learned the basics from my father as a girl in Whitefish Village, but I had done more than just keep my hand in over the decades, having had plenty of chances to practice. I might never be one of the great Engineers, but an Optimatoi should know how to carve an array, and I have always had more luck with organic mediums. I had been toying with this particular design on and off for a long time now, so I barely needed to glance at the schematics on the blackboard as I set to work.

It was a pleasant change from the humdrum alchemy of my recent days. My artwork is sublime by mortal standards, but only passable by those of Cultivators, but I enjoy it nonetheless. Hours pass and with careful, precise, touches of the scribe I etch a design into the skull. A woman, robed and wielding power, turns shapeless and amorphous, a ghostly shadow slinking to safety from a horde of enemies.

Or at least that's the plan, but bone is tricky, it has its twists and turns and sometimes it seems to have a will of its own. The amorphous shadow refuses to appear in the design, no matter how hard I try. Instead, I find myself etching smaller figures, a flock of them, emerging from the woman's body. A flock of shadow doves.

What I am left with is the most primal sort of spiritual Talisman, the sort that our ancient ancestors must have once had to rely on. A potent base material, brimming with potential, paired with the crudest sort of spell to give it direction, a prayer more than an incantation. It would likely do something, but only the Heavens know exactly what.

I lean back and smile in satisfaction at the progress so far. Fortunately, due to generations of diligence and experimentation, the Golden Devils had a better way. This time I did need to review my notes frequently, when scribing in the language of heaven, there is scarce little room for error. Interwoven with the artistic design I etched countless tiny characters, their delicate formations would channel the power and desire of my earlier work, giving it the structure and direction it had previously lacked. Accounting for the changes in my earlier plan, I was certain that when smashed, my new amulet would transform me into a flock of shadows in the form of doves, all the better to flee to a safe place before reforming. This process took me long into the night and the following day before I declared myself satisfied. The final step would be to have one of the Clans metalworkers inlay the formation characters with Gravebronze. Expensive, as I hardly had a family supply of the precious metal, but there was no better choice for a protective talisman, particularly one that might see use during the Trials.

Putting the skull fondly to one side I stood up and stretched for the first time in 24 hours. This had taken more time than I had planned, I would lose Cultivation time today and I could forget about actually getting to sleep any time this month. I didn't begrudge it though, well, not too much. The years were flowing past faster and faster it seemed and too soon, the bell atop the Fortress would ring again. The hunters were waiting in the wings, listening for the call of the horns and trumpets. Hopefully, all this work would help her and her Clanmates keep just one step ahead of them.

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Close to the wire, but I keep my 3 Omake a Turn average! A little over 2100 here.

I figured it would be a fun twist to have Minervina create her own LST rather than the usual routine of finding one in a cave or the like. I hope the elaborate brewing process and the rare materials make a good in-universe explanation as to why this is a rare event though.

@occipitallobe @ReaderOfFate @Kaboomatic Threadmark please!
 
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Also, @Siual , I apologise, but that barely mentioned npc from my earlier omake appears to have developed a life of his own.

"Why us?" Draconis's voice was calm, sharp, and empty. No emotion. His eyes were freezing a hole in my forehead. "The 263rd has other squads that have been together longer. We're new-formed. Why are we the first to go ahead?"

I love him, he's absolutely family of Aris'! Don't mind if I sneak in a reference to him in my next omake!
 
Adhoc vote count started by TheCount on May 2, 2021 at 2:03 PM, finished with 85 posts and 54 votes.

so im putting this here, because of the omake flood.
 
Adhoc vote count started by TheCount on May 2, 2021 at 2:03 PM, finished with 85 posts and 54 votes.

so im putting this here, because of the omake flood.
Ah, the count.
 
Demetrius Ceres 14 - The Nature of arrogance
The Nature of arrogance

[Demetrius Ceres]

Why are Cultivators from the Great Battlefield so arrogant?

Is it the air that is to blame for their delusion? Qi fills the air, the lifeblood of the world. The same way the sand fills the desert, the air is filled with Qi. It clings to the ground, the winds, and the clothes you wear. Like sand in the desert, it is everywhere, from the poorest man's bedroll to the riches man's kingsized bed.

When the essence of power surrounds the seekers of power, is there a real surprise when the unworthy become arrogant? We Cultivators of the desert and mountains have to put in the work to find the lifeblood, while the plane cultivators find it in their socks under their bed. If a man is surrounded by confectionaries, he will grow up to become fat, and in the same manner, a cultivator will become arrogant if he is surrounded by Qi. After all, it isn't arrogance if you deserve it, and you aren't fat if you have to kill a monster every time you want to eat your prized confectionary.

Personally, I blame Nature, as everything wrong with the world originates from it. I suspect the Soup Chef himself was a good kid until Nature bared its ugly head. Nature has created a dog-eat-dog world for us to live in, and that's Consumption in a nutshell.

The Great-Battlefield is an unending despicable patch of greenery, where trees, herbs, and other horrendous things grow. Personally, I like the ocean more, and that is knowing what lives there. Those creatures can be considered honest by comparison. After all, who has ever heard of a backstabbing shark? Trees, on the other hand, are a treacherous lot that stabs you in the back unprovoked.

Some fools would call me arrogant, and that is incorrect. The Lord and Ladies of the Great Battlefield think they are great. I know for a fact that I am Great, and that is the difference between us. Were they walk with confidence born of delusions, I walk with confidence born of knowledge.

I walk, and I feel the grass nibbling on my sandals as their green tendrils squirm where I stand. With my ears, I can hear roots digging themselves out of the earth. In the distance, I can also hear the wolves howl in rage. I can also hear a stampede from what I assume is a flock of Caribou. With my senses, I can sense a spirit beast moving towards me. It is still far away, but it will be here soon.

Everything here is significantly weaker than me. The creatures know this, and they don't care. It has always been this way, but I would state that it has become stronger after absorbing that fragment, or was it because I reached the 12th stage? It matters not.

I swing my Thousand-In-One-Blow-Tree-Felling-Ax, and I wreak havoc. It is a foundation-building weapon that I cannot use to its full potential, but what I can do is release a hundred blows that cleave and severs. I swing one more time, and what I missed on the first round feels my wrath on the second. Someone once said this is not a suitable weapon against a strong opponent. He was wrong, and he paid dearly for it. Death by a thousand paper cuts is a strategy I have employed many times and will employ many more. It also leaves me the opportunity to be creative, something many cultivators have forgotten they can be.

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I wake up, and I start cutting myself free of the roots coiling around my body using Qi projections. I start digging using my full strength, and I quickly scan the area for threats as I do. The grave Nature has provided for me as I slept is an annoyance, but not something I can avoid. This has happened every time I have slept out in the wild since crossing the mountains.

"We need to go to the fearless line." The young whippersnapper named Qin Wu says to me. He is a small fish in a great sea. Once, he was a small fish in a puddle, but his travel to the fearless line have cured him of the affliction of being an arrogant young master. He has found his place in the world, and he does not like it. His job is to escort me to the fearless line because I am a cultivator of the 12th stage. Because I am demonic. Because I am something, they refer to as a chosen.

I have a badge that names me an Auxilary, which means nothing to him because why would it? The Strength Purity Sect is a sect that punches you in the face first and asks questions later. Why would they care how the Devils segregate their force.


"Lord Ceres, we need to move to the fearless line."

I walk ahead, following the path in front of me to Qin Wu's distress. His purpose is to show me the way to the fearless line. He will fail that task because I need to investigate something down in the south. Well, it would be unfair of me to simply make him experience failure for no reason. After all, I will go to the fearless line later. He won't fail. His success will only be delayed.

I am not heartless. I can tell Qin Wu is a good man if I close my eyes hard enough. I will, after all, allow him to follow me, and if he slows me down, I will force him to keep up. Growth is something you obtain under pressure, and this young pile of clay can still be formed into a thimble under my guidance.

I will replace the arrogance he has lost with the confidence to match.

I will track down the thief who stole my wooden skull, and I will kill one of the Lords of Natures I have heard so much about. All work and no play is not a healthy balance after all.

Chapter End






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The second Omake of this turn.

I saw someone write in an interesting writing style, and I wanted to try something similar. "Try" is the keyword.
 
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Fierce Fang 10 - White Rooster of Purity
Fierce Fang
White Rooster of Purity​

There are an uncountable number of different life forms altered by qi so much that it would be folly to claim to know every single divine herb and spirit beast on sight for there is a constant cycle of extinction, rebirth, and that rare something completely new under the Heavens. For even if you were a God of Alchemy who knew of every single herb in the heavenly realm you would still not be able to name every single plant if stranded in a random mortal realm. For even if they could instantly figure out the qualities and characteristics of the plant they wouldn't know if it was called the Peach Plum Blossom or the Plum Peach Blossom even if they could craft a pill of immortality from it. This does not go into how even with the exaggerated lifespans cultivation gives that species with thousands of years of history are extinguished everyday. Not that many would even notice if the Yellow Dragonfruit of Long Island goes extinct causing their famous Yellow Dragon Pill to become impossible to make when the variant Green Dragonfruit of Long Island was born just a decade before. And this is not to even go into how even a plant without any special ancestry through millennia of evolution both random and guided could become the exact same plant as the Yellow Dragonfruit of Long Island bringing back the species from the realm of the dead. Or for a more common example a regular carp somehow surmounting the Dragon Gate becomes a heavenly dragon no matter how common it's upbringing was.

So don't be surprised that some weird and potent spirit beast or plant comes into existence randomly from mortal creatures with no blood line or specific cultivation method employed. It is for one of these random evolutions that Fierce Fang was exploring some of the thousands of mortal chicken plantations in clan territory hoping to get lucky and find a White Rooster of Purity had been born. A White Rooster of Purity's conditions of being born are quite well known among cultivators interested in weird spirit beasts if not widespread enough to be common mortal knowledge. It required a virgin hen to give birth to rooster despite never being fertilized something not significantly rare even by mortal reckoning but still not a common event since even if an unfertilized egg could give birth to a perfectly healthy chicken many farmers would break the egg to eat it well before it could be born. And even if this egg managed to hatch and give birth to a healthy chicken if it happened to be born a hen and not a rooster it would have zero chance of being blessed by the Heavens into being a White Hen of Purity. Fang wondered why since the idea of a pure and noble birth works for both males and females but apparently the Heavens decreed that only one of a thousand Roosters lucky enough to be born of virgins could be worthy of being blessed by the Heavens. And it was a potent blessing for a White Rooster of Purity could naturally become a spirit beast equivalent of the 5th Heavenstage of Qi Condensation. Much more powerful than many cultivators could ever even dream of being and also sadly responsible for more than a few slaughtered farmers as the Rooster slayed those who would kill its family for meat.Of course few White Roosters would reach that vaulted peak for if the Rooster ever engaged in something that would ruin its 'purity' it would instantly lose its blessings and become a normal chicken once more.

It was the price of the power granted from purity it came and from impurity it would leave Fang guessed. It was a rather sad thing since it meant no matter what heights of power or intelligence a White Rooster of Purity reached it would never be able to leave a bloodline behind without giving up everything that made it special and even if it did its children would remain mere animals. A sad fate especially since this same purity made some approach the White Rooster with less than friendly inventions like Fierce Fang was. For a White Rooster of Purity's meat was so pure that with the right chef and ingredients it could be used to make a potent soup that could help one reach the 12th Heavenstage with its Pure Soul, a goal Fierce Fang had nearly half a century preparing for.

So that's why Fierce Fang was at some of the largest mortal farms in Golden Devil territory hoping to get lucky and find a White Rooster that the farmer would willing to sell on the cheap for even in a farm of tens of thousands of chicken it would still be a minor miracle to find a single White Rooster. It had taken till Fierce Fang's 12th farm to finally find a White Rooster. It was just born and still in the white 'puffball' phase of chickhood but Fang could tell by its unnatural pure white beak and legs that it was the Spirit Beast he was looking for. He managed to purchase the chick for cheaper than even a single spirit stone in exchange for simple (for a 11th Stage Cultivator) farm work. It was taking advantage of the fact the farmer didn't know what he had but chances are the White Rooster would had fallen to lust and mortal beasthood or ascended into a monster that would had killed the man's entire family so Fierce Fang didn't feel too bad about getting a good deal. Fierce Fang hoped the chick which would soon grow to become a rooster would properly awaken its intelligence as rare as it is for a Spirit Beast to gain human level intelligence cause Fierce Fang wasn't exactly keen on eating something that smart. It came too close to Blood Path for Fang personally. Anyways with the White Rooster of Purity Fierce Fang had the final piece necessary for the famous Pure Chicken Soul Noodle Soup which with luck should instantly push him to the 12th heavenstage and then he could start working on preparing for his tribulation that is if he didn't die of old age first.

AN: Here I've finished it. Hopefully it's alright for barely a thousand words compared to some of you monsters who write 100 times that much. Anyways I would request getting a lifespan extension treasure for my omake reward @occipitallobe
 
... Ah. Er. I just had a thought. Or, uh, a reminder.
A mortal might live a hundred years at their absolute most. A Qi Condensation cultivator at the peak of Qi Condensation can live to 200. A Foundation Establishment cultivator can live to around 500. A Core Formation cultivator can live to around 1,000, and a Nascent Soul cultivator can live to around 5,000 years of age
This spreadsheet has a column for lifespan, and 7th Heavenstage gets you 180 and 9th Heavenstage gets you 200.

And also further taking into account the fact that you started at age 16 rather than age 0... People who made their Good Seeds at the very start of the game? Guys, you're approaching the end of your lifespans.

If they don't make it into Foundation Establishment on/by/end-of Turn 10, are they just dead of old age then and there @occipitallobe?

(Even then, assuming age 16 at start... 9 turns means 180 years, means they're like 196 years old at end of Turn 9. Even assuming a neat-grace-period of "eh, 10 full turns for somebody at Heavenstage 9 to make it neat" and mercy, that's... Still alarmingly close to the deadline.)

Not everyone's Good Seeds were made at Turn 1. But everyone who made their character at the start of the game, and if they're still around, and aren't about to become Foundation Establishment... You're looking at dying of old age, unless you start taking Life Extension bonuses. (And if you're doing that, that's one thing you're needing to take every other turn, and can't take Life-Saving Treasures, Healing Treasures, or Tribulation Boosts.)


Fortunately, I think Life Extension omake bonuses are 40 years? They give 2 turns of lifespan extension?

And the Foundation Establishment lifespan is 500 years old.

(I actually kind of am grumbling slash fretting at the "you need to keep track of which individual Small Realm/Stage you are in, as your lifespan depends on that" thing as it feels inelegant to have to check that... It feels... I dunno. Inelegant a bit? Or easy to mess up? As in, most people will just remember a shorthand of "Okay, Qi Condensation 200, Foundation Establishment 500, Core Formation something-something I think 1000 right." and then get thrown off or blindsided by 'Whoops, actually the Early/Middle/Late/Great division matters' thing.)
(But on the other hand, it kind of did feel meaningful to read "A Qi Condensation cultivator at the peak of Qi Condensation can live to 200" as a punchy statement? Just... in practice, as a thing-you-actually-have-to-deal-with-in-gameplay... or, rather... This isn't the usual gamey quest for characters, because the level of engagement for your Good Seed is 'however much you feel comfortable writing' which means how much a person keeps in mind for their character varies, especially since there's like dozens of Good Seeds...)

Actually, a question. What happens to somebody who goes down a Small Realm/Stage due to being wounded, while being old? Say from 3-Pillar to 2-Pillar, which drops your lifespan from 400 to 300? Do you just die of old age? Or do you go by the max lifespan of your highest-achieved-Stage?
 
Based on the in-thread arguments:

[X] Yes. Declare for the Noble Devil Alliance. Invade the Jingshen Clan. Declare war on the Righteous Path.
 
Amaranth Castellanos 7 - The Long Recovery
Amaranth Castellanos
The Long Recovery.

Set in Turn 6

It had been almost a year, at this point, and Amaranth was still bedridden. Blood recovery pills did impressive work, and while organ recovery wasn't something that was historically quick or something that went without leaving a mark, the body of a cultivator of the tenth heavenstage cultivator was supposed to be good at bouncing back from injury. It was one of the side effects of the whole bodily purification process, optimizing things that normal body cultivation might overlook, so initially, the medics had anticipated complete recovery within a few weeks at most.

After a few months, the fact that it hadn't occurred indicated something amiss. It wasn't like he had lost his cultivation, his qi seemed to be flowing with full force and vigor.

A more careful examination revealed the source of the problem. The flows of his qi, etched painstakingly into his body throughout eighty years was misaligned for the state of his current body. The flows were made with the assumption that the body it was enhancing had a certain amount of bronze in it, and of a certain type, so they provided a certain amount of force-enhancement for each action with said factors accounted for.

The calibration of these flows could and had accounted for change in the body in the past, but usually that change was in the upward direction, and particularly dramatic improvements were accompanied by advancements in cultivation, due to being caused by advancements in cultivation. In the moment of breakthrough, qi flows were especially malleable, so they could slide right into shape as long as the cultivator in question knew what they were doing.

Many Clan cultivation treatises held records on this sort of thing, so in the process of cultivation, misalignments were uncommon, and usually treated without too much difficulty because they were a result of a mistake that hadn't occurred for that long.

The complete loss of his accreted bloodline power, however, was unprecedented to his flows, so Amaranth's entire qi flow and all of the effort he had put into his cultivation now counted as a mistake.

This was troublesome, but not unheard of. Bloodline destruction was always easier than bestowing a bloodline, after all, and the Golden Devils had already cracked that second problem long ago.

The classic way to solve the problem would be to break and rebuild the patterns in Amaranth's qi piece by piece until they fit his body again. This would inevitably result in a leakage of power, and would only be able to be partially done without serious spiritual damage, but it would be a whole lot better than just removing his cultivation and starting from the beginning. Then, he could slowly re-introduce bronze into his system through purchased infusion so he'd be able to adjust his flows back into place. It might take a while, but eventually he'd be able to return to full ability.

The problem was, Amaranth's qi flows weren't adapted for standard Bronze. They were adapted to a mutated variant. While he could partially re-adjust his flows in order to regain a lot of his ability to move, he wouldn't be able to just take an infusion of purified bronze and return completely back to normal.

That being said, it did help. While it may not have been a perfect match, it was closer to how he used to be than his current body that lacked Bronze whatsoever. After a year, a shipment of purified bronze elixirs came in, and Amaranth managed to recover enough of his mobility to be able to return back to his day to day life. He even regained a typical level of bronze for his stage, though his ability to absorb Qi from others hadn't returned, which was a problem considering his abysmal talent without it. Still, it was a first step.
There were a few caveats, though.

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Amaranth's body wobbled whenever he took a step. Even after a week, he still felt like he was about to trip and fall on his own feet when he wasn't holding on to something. Too often, when he tried to catch his balance, his feet spasmed and struck at the ground with devastating force, like he used to do when he was about to mimic the great leaps of the Toads.

The floor was in ruins at this point.

There were cracked tiles strewn everywhere, and even the array-strengthened foundation underneath was beginning to show some pronounced fissures.

There was a reason why, when he bought this little house, that he made sure it only had one floor. Plunging through two floors hadn't been the most pleasant of experiences.

While the damage to himself was minimal, he had ended up wrecking someone's kitchen sink and another person's indoor garden, which ended with him having to move away from that area. (While the first was just a matter of a bunch of apologies and spirit stones, the second actually still made him feel bad. There had been genuine love poured out into that thing, which couldn't be easily replaced. He tried to help out with the rebuild, but after the third flower pot that he smashed, he was asked to leave, which he supposed was fair.)

Amaranth sighed, and the floor briefly pulsed a warm orange. Strands of qi pressed into the broken pieces of stone, which slipped right into the floor like pebbles in a pond. In a few moments, the remaining tiles grew over the exposed foundation in a manner that almost seemed living.

The Technique Palace was useful for a lot more than just combat, that was for sure. He couldn't imagine how many tiles he would have had to replace at this point without the High Speed Earth Shaping Art. Traditionally, it would be used to create sudden pitfalls and other traps in the middle of battle, but it functioned perfectly well for something like this. With just a few seconds of work, they were good as new.

(Ignore those grey seams in the ground, where the cracks used to be. Or the fact that the floor is rough and uneven at this point. Or that they seem to be breaking more and more.)

That's when his knees decided that they'd rather stop holding him up, and he fell on to the floor. Grumbling, he pulled himself up and dusted his pants off. It had been the third time today. Back when this started, he used to get so frustrated that he punched the floor, but that just ended up making more work for himself, so he ended up stopping.

Amaranth was half-tempted to just learn a wind technique to move himself instead of his body, but that just felt like giving up after honing his body for so long.

And he hadn't given up, that was for sure.

He had added in some dissolved spirit copper in the mix for the infusion of Bronze, in roughly the ratio that blacksmith had talked about, all those years ago. It didn't seem to do anything, though it didn't seem to do anything negative either.

Amaranth had even asked to get his Bronze tested, and it seemed that the physical composition was similar to his prior edition. However, this didn't really have many visual effects. Turned out that bronze was mostly copper already. He supposed that meant the grey coloration of his former constitution must have been a function of Qi.
If it was a spiritual matter, then he would have to look for an insight that would allow him to replace the consuming nature of his body.

He could look within, but his Dao was not as well formed as it should have been, which was kind of worrisome, considering that most people had already had one well shaped by the point they had hit the ninth Heavenstage. He was planning to get to it, really, but it never seemed that useful until tribulation time came in and started staring him in the face. Oh well, waiting a bit longer is fine enough.

The easy answer was Blood Path, but Blood Path had a rather inconvenient restriction in that it would lock yourself out of any other method of restoring Qi, be it Spirit Stones, the ambient Qi of places that actually had that in abundance, or through Beast Cores.

And to be honest, Amaranth thought that last bit was especially antithetical to fragments of a Dao that he had managed to scrounge together at this point. He liked eating the Spirit Beasts that he had to kill, and the fact that it was productive at the same time was a neat bonus.

What seemed odd to him was that he distinctly recalled being able to cultivate using the Qi of others using his constitution, but that hadn't locked him off from other forms of cultivation like the curse on Blood Path implied.

Back in the early days, when Amaranth was still bedridden but thought he'd get out soon and leap towards a method to regain his power in short notice, he spoke to one of the medics about this. His name was Nikitas, Amaranth was fairly sure, and he had speculated about it working as a buffer. Not as a buffer for the curse, but as a buffer for the Qi. While absorbing the Qi and blood of others directly is textbook Blood Path, his skin absorbing the power and the rest of his body absorbing the power from his skin may have served as enough of a point of differentiation to avoid the restriction.

"While that's definitely an interesting idea," Amaranth remembered saying, "I honestly don't see why my skin wouldn't count as practicing Blood Path as well. After all, wouldn't my skin be— wait, do you mean—"

"Your skin would be more like a filter than anything else. I'd imagine it would be able to re-attune the blood qi, since you specified it took skin to blood contact for it to do its trick, to your own blood qi signature. What did you think I meant?" Nikitas looked quite curious at this point.

"Nothing really, I just had a vague thought of some sort of skin-beast that latched onto me and gruesomely replaced my skin as a child and removed my memories of the process, since you know, Beasts can eat humans without penalty and humans can eat Beasts without penalty. But you know, that's just silly." Amaranth tried to laugh it off, but he honestly was a bit disturbed by that notion.

Instead of immediately dismissing the idea as foolish, Nikitas gave it a moment of thought. "You know, there are some real weird things out there… Though, that probably isn't the case unless it's extraordinarily subtle. The readings we're getting off of your skin samples are pretty conclusively human, not deceased or dormant spirit beast."

"Well, that's simultaneously both comforting and not at all. At least I know what my nightmares are gonna be about tonight."

And on that note, maybe two seconds after that statement, Amaranth conked off for the day. Back then, he did that a lot. It was part of recovery from nigh-complete exsanguination, the medics said. The body needed rest in order to do its work, or whatever. He was getting rather tired of it.

Considering that, his current position wasn't really that bad. Not satisfactory, but definitely less bad.

Buffer, buffer, buffer. First he had to get to the point that his skin autonomously absorbed Qi like it formerly did, and the easiest way to do so would be forming some sort of Qi void.

Problem, forming a qi-void in his skin sounded like the easiest possible method to flay himself in a step with the reinforced strength in the rest of his body. (Which, incidentally would put him in a wonderful position for a hypothetical skin-beast to decide that he would be a suitable host.) So clearly it was a lot more complicated than that.

Still, it sounded like it might hold a piece of the puzzle, and at this point that was good enough.

It was time to head over to the Qi-Draining Desert.


A/N: Honestly, I just wanted to get out something at this point, considering my last omake was literally in November. Yeah, I know. Still, I think I have a decent idea of where to take things from here, so let's see if I can do it properly.
 
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Ulysses 8 - Home Remedy
Ulysses 8 Home Remedy

Ulysses was happy when he heard the news that he would be receiving a guard posting in a low risk area. A chance to go somewhere news nice, and if they were sending disciples to guard things like this, then surely the elders must not be too worried about the outcome of the war.

Drawing nearer to his goal, the first thing Ulysses sensed was a weak taste of Qi, as though a wounded beast had passed through here, thoughUlyssesknew better than that.As Ulysses crested the last hill the village came in sight, a rather modest affair, the major landmark of note was the village square, in the center was his charge for the next 20 years, the Sweet Soul Saguero, its bristles moving in search of any potential prey.

The Sweet soul salguero was a spirit plant with a truly immense lifespan and commensurately slow cultivation speed. Its species had developed a few ways to increase their cultivation speed during Qi Condensation. The first was its scent, tailored to be appealing to weak spirit beasts that the cactus could overcome, but generally not worth the effort for stronger beasts, in order to kill them and feed on their beast cores. That was the reason the village square was constructed as it had been, surrounded by sturdy buildings with small windows that mortals could throw javelins through. The other method the cacti had was growing a flower to rapidly convert the energy of the sun into qi. The village generally makes its living by trading the occasional beast core to the Clan for tools and foodstuffs. Of course the villagers also harvest mundane cacti fruit and animals to supplement this, but if there aren't enough beast cores then the village goes through rough seasons indeed.

Unfortunately, due to several of the teams the clan had sent to harvest the flower of the cactus in ages past being delayed, the cactus had risen to the fourth heavenstage of Qi Condensation and was beginning to attract beasts that wouldn't die to a few dozen mortals throwing javelins at it, leading to the cactus devouring the beast cores and increasing its cultivation faster, denying them to the villagers. That would be tragic but not really a clan concern if not for the fact that those Sweet Soul Saguaro that had broken through to Foundation Establishment stopped producing flowers, relying instead on their increased hunting abilities to fuel their cultivation. So the clan kept a disciple here to kill any spirit beasts that were lured by the cactus, securing a trickle of least grade beast cores and the occasional flower, the exact recipes it was used for was not shared with disciples below foundation establishment, but that alone must mean it was quite an asset for the Clan.

Ulysses gave a wave to his predecessor, a stocky disciple bearing a few scars. The town was welcoming enough, and they already had a room set aside for his use, which was quite nice, with a bed and a chest for him to place his few belongings in. After getting caught up on the cultivation he had missed while travelling, and ensuring that he would receive the cultivation aids he had paid for before he left, Ulysses found himself with a preponderance of time on his hands. Obviously he was meant to be on guard at all hours, but the mortal lookouts could come and fetch him well before any spirit beasts could approach the cactus, so he didn't have to maintain a watch on it at all times. Now seemed like a perfect time to work on his pill-making. He had it all planned out, only the most forgiving recipes with the cheapest reagents in case he was interrupted, now all he needed was to retrieve his pill furnace… which was still stuck underneath a ton of sand many days' travel away. He supposed he would have to find a different way to pass the time. What did mortals do for fun nowadays anyway?
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It turns out that most of the men of the village entertained themselves with contests of physical prowess, several ball games, wrestling and the like. Most lost their luster when you were several times better than your fellow competitors, but he did manage to brush up on the basic wrestling technique he had learned as a youth.

The elders played more cerebral games, which Ulysses found to be much more fair, since experience played a bigger role, but after a few of his newfound playmates died of old age it took on a bittersweet quality. The children naturally have all sorts of games, but being around them grew quite tiresome in short order.

The group he found himself most drawn to was the women of the village, who practiced all sorts of useful crafts. Sure, he'd learned how to maintain his own arms and armor in basic training, but these villagers had little tricks passed down through generations, and their pottery was fragile even by mortal standards, but being able to make a mostly waterproof container wherever he was could come in handy at some point. Cooking was quite interesting as well, really being the closest thing to pill making that he would get on this assignment. They used entirely mundane ingredients naturally, but he still managed to derive something useful from it. Unfortunately, none of the villagers appreciated his Condensed Food Pill, citing its "incredible bitterness" or "weird tingling in my stomach." Truly mortals had no sense of taste, This could be quite useful to mortals on caravans or long hunts, though the sect has better pills for disciples on such things.

All in all it was quite a pleasant few decades, fending off the occasional spirit beast was not too difficult for me, my martial skills aren't my strong suit, but at the eighth heavenstage the beasts of the third heavenstage or below attracted by the cactus didn't stand much of a chance. @ReaderOfFate
 
... Ah. Er. I just had a thought. Or, uh, a reminder.

This spreadsheet has a column for lifespan, and 7th Heavenstage gets you 180 and 9th Heavenstage gets you 200.

And also further taking into account the fact that you started at age 16 rather than age 0... People who made their Good Seeds at the very start of the game? Guys, you're approaching the end of your lifespans.

If they don't make it into Foundation Establishment on/by/end-of Turn 10, are they just dead of old age then and there @occipitallobe?

(Even then, assuming age 16 at start... 9 turns means 180 years, means they're like 196 years old at end of Turn 9. Even assuming a neat-grace-period of "eh, 10 full turns for somebody at Heavenstage 9 to make it neat" and mercy, that's... Still alarmingly close to the deadline.)

Not everyone's Good Seeds were made at Turn 1. But everyone who made their character at the start of the game, and if they're still around, and aren't about to become Foundation Establishment... You're looking at dying of old age, unless you start taking Life Extension bonuses. (And if you're doing that, that's one thing you're needing to take every other turn, and can't take Life-Saving Treasures, Healing Treasures, or Tribulation Boosts.)


Fortunately, I think Life Extension omake bonuses are 40 years? They give 2 turns of lifespan extension?

And the Foundation Establishment lifespan is 500 years old.

(I actually kind of am grumbling slash fretting at the "you need to keep track of which individual Small Realm/Stage you are in, as your lifespan depends on that" thing as it feels inelegant to have to check that... It feels... I dunno. Inelegant a bit? Or easy to mess up? As in, most people will just remember a shorthand of "Okay, Qi Condensation 200, Foundation Establishment 500, Core Formation something-something I think 1000 right." and then get thrown off or blindsided by 'Whoops, actually the Early/Middle/Late/Great division matters' thing.)
(But on the other hand, it kind of did feel meaningful to read "A Qi Condensation cultivator at the peak of Qi Condensation can live to 200" as a punchy statement? Just... in practice, as a thing-you-actually-have-to-deal-with-in-gameplay... or, rather... This isn't the usual gamey quest for characters, because the level of engagement for your Good Seed is 'however much you feel comfortable writing' which means how much a person keeps in mind for their character varies, especially since there's like dozens of Good Seeds...)

Actually, a question. What happens to somebody who goes down a Small Realm/Stage due to being wounded, while being old? Say from 3-Pillar to 2-Pillar, which drops your lifespan from 400 to 300? Do you just die of old age? Or do you go by the max lifespan of your highest-achieved-Stage?

I'm actually tempted to give Good Seeds the highest lifespan their realm offers (or just make it one value it across each realm which is what I did originally) for pure bookkeeping purposes. Handwave it away somehow, but it's difficult to keep track of all the sub-realm lifespans and where people are.

Largely because I forgot to start killing people off and I'm not going to start before Year 180 rolls around in any case.
 
I'm actually tempted to give Good Seeds the highest lifespan their realm offers (or just make it one value it across each realm which is what I did originally) for pure bookkeeping purposes. Handwave it away somehow, but it's difficult to keep track of all the sub-realm lifespans and where people are.
I do feel like that's the most elegant and handy way to do it, yeah. Mmmaybe for the average cultivator, max age in a Great Realm is kind of like Average Life Span or Max Life Span for a normal human? i.e. Some people will just die at age 50 from some health complication, while some people get to live to their 90s or hit 100; and your personal actions and effort and history (i.e. how good you take care of your health and how in-shape you are and how good your genes are and your medical care) can affect that number. But the average is about 75 and the max is about 120. Good Seeds would just be the sort of people who get to live to be the human equivalent of 100, rather than dying at 80 or even 50 or 60 like some people do.

(Though, I mean, given /Cultivators/... you're gonna be dying from battle, or from accumulated wounds and curses, rather than "Yeah some people just only live to be 70 years old." Still, metaphorically speaking anyway...)

Keeps it simple... and also punchy, as you'd had the text monologue about a fancy "rule of Five" thing going -- something which, even if it was an imperfect rule-of-thumb, still sort of added detail and fluff to the setting? ...Erm. And then the "actually you need to consult a brief spreadsheet to get exact numbers" thing kind of complicated it. And then there's the fact that there's several dozen Good Seeds to keep track of. They wouldn't all have the same start points either. ... In hindsight, I guess I'm glad that people in Foundation Establishment don't have to worry about age till Turn 25. That's 15 turns away.

Simplifying things to "Qi Condensation, 200. Foundation Establishment, 500. Core Formation, 1000. Nascent Soul, 5000. Spirit Severing, 25000." is, well, simple.

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You have my permission to kill of my good seed, so long as it is somewhat heroic or tragic. :whistle:
There's actually a narratively/dramatically appropriate setting or event for just that -- the Trials!

IIRC, occipitallobe said that the average Clan cultivator only advances beyond 9th Heavenstage when doing a "Well'p, I'm never going past Qi Condensation at all, so... I'm going to reach the highest Heavenstage I can, so that I can be a Qi Condensation lifer basically." The sort of thing that somebody getting on in years, or somebody who knows they'll never be able to breakthrough into Foundation Establishment, would do; so that they'll be more powerful in the only Realm they can be in, and hit above their weight-class a bit.

Golden Devils reach for 10th or 11th Heavenstage in order to be a powerful Qi Condensation cultivator. Sometimes especially for Trials. ((Can't remember the exact time and place this was mentioned though. This is just a faint memory of mine. But, I think this was the case.))

Which means that "Hanging around as a high-Heavenstage cultivator in order to be extra-effective in the Trials, for the sake of your juniors" is totally a thing that some Golden Devil clan cultivators do.

EDIT 2: Aha, found it!

Are there any members of the clan that have gone beyond 9th stage? While the benefits seem massive if you go all the way to the 13th the costs also seem to scale even worse. Seven times the resources to advance as well as whatever extra murder-death-kill difficulty settings the heavens impose on top of what there already are for the clan. Admittedly I am massively tempted to go all the way with Hektor... (Cool overpowered bullshit is cool)
Yes, but those who go beyond 9th are invariably those with weak Dao-Hearts who the Clan is not interested in raising to Foundation Building, so they may as well make them unparalleled in Qi Condensation. Given the 11th Heavenstage comes at the end of a cultivator in the Qi Condensation's lifespan, usually you see a lot of cultivators ending their journey at the 10th Heavenstage, which isn't a bad deal. It's not as powerful as Foundation Building, but if your only other option is 'grow old and die', why not be stronk?
There it was.
 
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There is already an option for good seeds to take missions for the good of the clan. And during the trials that option is also available to Qi Condensation. Maybe give an option to for a good seed to sacrifice themselves to give a bonus to said roll?

If that becomes an option I would like to do it with Alex and Ajax. I made them and thought they were such a cool idea, but I never managed to come up with a single Omake for them.
 
Konstantinos Papadoupolos 3 - An Assorted series of notes on the Stork Clans
A Qi-infused Leaflet given to all Qi Condensation Cultivators assigned to the Apoikía Bucephalus

An Assorted series of notes on the Stork Clans
By Konstantinos Papadopoulos

The following is a series of notes and observations I have made on the various Stork Clans as we escorted some of their forward elements to the lands that will be their new homes. They should help avoid misunderstandings and help you properly escort our new charges, so that they learn to see the Clan less as a feared enemy and more as a benevolent protector, as is right.

General Advice

What few tales the Stork Clans have heard on the Clan before their relocation were mostly the vicious slanders of the Divine Sabre Palace. While their own leaders have managed to convince them we aren't blood-drinking monsters in human guise, there still remains great ignorance about what the Blood of Bronze is, and what it involves - expect many to treat you as some strange bronze automaton, especially mortals. Small displays of weakness or moments of levity can get them to warm up to you - but expect whispers about you as an "it" when gossipers think they are out of earshot.

The followup from this is that once the Stork mortals learn not to fear you, they end up treating you like a pet scorpion. Expect many mortals coming up to you and asking if your skin is real bronze, or if they can touch it and feel what it's like. A True Elemental bloodline is a novelty to them, and something not even the wealth of the Plains provides. Try and be civil or welcoming for the sake of good relations with our new vassals, or if you've can' manage that try reassigning your public duties with others in your Century if you cannot handle being climbed on by a 5-year old.

Fecundity Stork Clan

As you'd expect from a clan focused on Fecundity, among mortal families within the Fecundity Storks they favour their women - being the childgivers and fonts of Fecundity. A more unexpected variation is that it is women in their child-bearing apex - roughly 30 in mortal years - who hold the status and respect, rather than the wizened old crones.

When needing to direct a family or group of Fecundity Storks, direct your orders towards the middle-aged woman with a babe suckling off her teat rather then the elderly crone. This tends to fade away among their cultivators, especially with their current head being a Patriarch. But is it still common for their Qi Condensation cultivators to use makeup to achieve an older, more distinguished look rather than focusing on portraying youthfulness.

Fortune Stork Clan

First, a warning which all legionnaires would do well to heed. DO NOT GAMBLE WITH THE FORTUNE STORKS. No, not even when you've played the game your entire career and you're introducing the Storks to it for the first time. Not even if you've got some clever plan to win regardless. They aren't called the Fortune Storks for nothing. The Legate will not let you out of your bets because they cheated with luck magic, it's kinda their thing.

If you are invited to a gathering of Fortune Stork Cultivators, a common practise (or at least common since the war began) is showing off the most unlikely lucky momentos - along with a story about how it saved their life at a critical moment, as a way of demonstrating Fortune's favour with them. Exaggeration and grandstanding encouraged, so embellish your stories from the Cannibal War to your Dao's content


Longevity Stork Clan

While lifespan is the most well-known of the Longevity Stork powers, as a clan they try and aim for longelity and stamina in all things - and that includes when on the march. Their local cultivators will foolishly try and match the Blood of Bronze, so be prepared for that on shifts and be ready to relieve them when they can't match our endurance. On the other hand, it does make their ladies more compatible partners in the bedroom than most other cultivators.

Another Omake this turn, short but ideas didn't flow like I expected. @TehChron add to the list?
 
Maria 18 - First Assignment (Part Three of Five)
First Assignment (Part Three of Five)
Maria Turn 9 Sixth Omake

"Thrust. Back. Shield wall. And hold. Thrust. Back. Shield wall. And hold. Thrust…"

Squad moved back and forth, form to form. Only not fast enough. Be unfair to call them slow – any mortal watching would struggle to see the movements between positions – but there was energy wasted with every motions. Arms coming back too far before spear thrusts. Shields misaligned by a gnat's wing, making the lock just that hint more difficult. Footwork off. Nothing I hadn't expected from greenhorns, but Gods, it was starting to drive me up the wall. Two months. Two months I'd been drilling them, and still they slipped up like this.

The trip to the Line should have taken two days. Instead, a week later, here we were, less than two hundred miles from the Colossus Footsteps. Orders had come down from on-high at the last minute; the enemy had started erecting a Hungering Abyss tower, and we'd come skittering up against the edge of its field of vision. There weren't enough of us to turn the tide of battle, and if things went wrong we might be more useful as a secret in the Little Patriarch's back pocket.

It was a good strategy. Didn't make me hate it any less. For one thing, the longer they held us here, the longer we had to deal with each other.

Cultivators aren't good at socialising, by and large, or at least not with strangers. It doesn't do to humanise the competition too much. Even the Righteous know that some day, any friend they make might be the person they have to kill to advance. The clans get around it through blood ties. The sects do the same thing by showing how much co-operation can get you. But even then, the politics can get… heated.

All of it the product of the nature of cultivation. You'd almost think Heaven was unfair.

So obviously, with all of us going stir-crazy, staring at the battle lines we'd come for but not getting a step closer, all that natural antipathy had slowly started to boil up, with no good way to settle it. The itinerants were a squabbling mass, barely kept from constant duelling by the threat of Skull-Shatterer's punishments. To make matters worse, everyone else kept getting dragged in, and it'd only take one sect or clan cultivator to eat someone else's blade before the coalition came apart and we were all killing each other like shrikes in a feeding frenzy.

And of course, that was before you counted in the history. The Blacksmiths kept quietly sneering at everyone else's weapons, ours most of all. "Grave Bronze," one had said to me the day before. "How… pragmatic." I'd had to walk away before I tore her head off. Of course, that put me in the path of some of the Bear Enslavement cavaliers, themselves avoiding the Great Drunkards for fear of starting off a feud from centuries ago. We'd made uncomfortable polite small talk, each eyeing the other's weaponry, until a Divine Sabre had shown up like she owned the place and joined in. Bears and Sabres get on, so obviously there'd been no support there, and I'd had to smile and try not to kill a fucker when the bitch brought up "demons" and "the demonic" an easy twenty-six times, give or take. It had only been when an SPS cultivator descended and made a few comments about uneven pillars that she'd backed off, and even then only just.

Maybe things were better on the front lines, but here, none of us liked each other, and soon enough, someone would snap.

Which is why I was here, four miles from camp, running drills with the squad. The alternative would not have been very… captainly.

"Hold. Hold I said. Cecilia, that means keep your shield up. Better. Now thrust."

The sun was starting to descend into the west. Outside of Draconis, none of them were above fourth heavenstage. If I kept this up, they'd be dropping like unstrung puppets in an hour. No point in carrying on, especially if we finally got the go ahead to march.

Or Old Gold himself showed up to lead us all in a fine jig. Or the world was consumed in ice and fire. Both of which felt a lot more likely.

"Alright, alright, stop, 'fore you break my heart looking at you. Out of formation, circle up." The squad came loose, crowded round. Cecilia, the youngest, was panting from the day's efforts. I tried not to wince. She'd be lucky to survive her first battle, if this was how she went about things.

"That was shit," I said, baldly. "And you all know it without me needing to tell you. Only one of you hitting the moves right was Draconis." They shuffled at that, eyes dropping to the dusty ground. I didn't stop. "We're going to war, lads. Actual, honest-to-bastard-heaven war. The other side aren't going to be like the centurions at the Dawn Fortress. They'll kill you and laugh about it, assuming they don't drain your blood for the altar-lord. The way you're drilling, you clearly want them to. That it? You all just suicidal and didn't think to tell me?"

They said nothing.

"I fucking know you heard me."

"No, captain," droned all six voices.

"So what's going on then? Hah? Because I am running out of reasons that make sense."

"It's a waste of time." Draconis's voice had gotten colder since that first day, but Gods I'd come to hate it more as well. "Our formations are flawless. In large scale combat, those are far more valuable than hand to hand. Given how many squad members are new to the legions, logic dictates we should maintain our focus on those."

His face was as blank as a block of marble, calm and disinterested. If it weren't for his eyes, dancing with malicious glee, you'd never have realised he was doing anything but being a good Optimatoi.

"So you never expect to end up outside of the Kataphractoi, hmm?" I kept my tone mild, despite the Red Place's snarling, barely leashed rage pushing on my skull. "Well. That's good to hear. Although I might point out, Legionnaire Kalokagathos, that formations break all the time. Especially in squads with such mixed skill levels."

"Then training to hold them is even more important, captain. Unless you think you can improve our capabilities enough to survive an open battle alone in the time we have left?"

I should have written him up then. He'd given me cause – what had started as honest response to a captain's question had moved into insubordination. It'd be entirely fair to beat him senseless for questioning my orders. But I couldn't. Because the bastard had a point. He'd been raised in the Devils his whole life; of course he understood Formations better than me.

I shot him a bare-toothed smile.

"Maybe you should leave the thinking to me, Legionnaire. Save you some grief." It was weak, and I knew it, but it was all I had. "Fall out, and back to camp. Assuming we've not gotten our orders, we'll be out here again same time tomorrow. Now fuck off, 'fore I lose my temper."

There was an awkward pause, as the squad's eyes flickered back and forth between me and Draconis. Then, at last, they went.

I sat down as soon as they were out of sight, and scrubbed my eyes wearily. Fucking Gods damnit. Was this what my life was now? Trying to hammer idiot new kids into something resembling soldiers, with the angriest, purest example of the Optimatoi flinging hate at me from behind the scenes because I was wearing his captain's pins? I hadn't asked for this. I hadn't asked for any of it. I'd just wanted a home.

Sat there for a while. Tried to make sense of it.

Would probably have sat there longer if I didn't hear the screams from the camp.

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Got back to Cao Pai Mei and Septimus having one of those very polite conversations where everyone's waiting on the other guy to start the fight. Hands kept drifting towards their weapons every time they paused. They were still doing better than everyone else, though; the Divine Sabers and, Heaven's fucking guts, every Golden Devil in the camp were nose to nose, snarling and bellowing at each other like fractious wolves. All but Septimus, who's breastplate smoked from a scar cut into it, and some skinny Divine Sabre woman who's sword was snapped midway up the blade.

I'd let him out of my sight for ten minutes, tops. And now here we fucking were. Gods. Alright. I had to figure out how to calm this down, quickly, before someone did something truly stupid. But how? I was a front-line fighter. Only way I knew to diffuse a situation like this was stab the other guy until he stopped moving. But no one else seemed to be stepping up. So I stood there at the camp's gate, staring, trying to think of something to say. Found nothing. My mind was suddenly empty, scrabbling for any kind of thought. Diplomatic incident getting closer with every damn second.

At which point Skull Shatterer descended from on high.

"I think that's quite enough," she said, voice calm and flinty-polite. Septimus and Cao Pai Mei stilled for a beat, before very slowly drawing a few inches back from one another. There was a moment as they kept glaring over their bland smiles. Skull Shatterer coughed.

"Back up, lads," said Septimus. "Lower your voices."

"My brothers and sisters, we have been most indecorous." Cao Pai Mei's voice rang with insincere disapproval. "Are we not amongst friends? Surely we would not be so impolite as to come to blows over a simple misunderstanding."

There was a general grumbling, at that. But the Devils and the Sabres parted, stepping back from each other and muttering, avoiding one another's gaze.

All but two. Septimus and Broken-Sword didn't move, faces frozen into rictuses of hate.

"You have shattered my weapon, demon," growled the woman. Draconis's lips quirked into a lop-sided, sneering smile.

"Forgive me. I'll fetch you a sewing needle, it will be more suited to one such as you."

Broken-Sword bared her teeth like a hungry animal. She drew back her blade to strike. Draconis's sneer widened, bloomed into a fierce grin as he brought his spear around-

And then, at last, my brain decided to work again.

I crossed the ground between me and the two of them in under a heartbeat - Tenth Heavenstage has its advantages – and snapped out a hand. Draconis's eyes widened, but he was in no position to stop me. Too committed to the strike. His spear haft snapped like a twig as my fingers cleaved through it.

That was one. Now the other-

Spark of pain. Noise like a butcher's cleaver hitting bone. I blinked. Turned my head.

...Gods, the skinny bitch must be pretty fast. Her sword was buried a good three inches into my shoulder.

The polite smile fell from Cao Pai Mei's face. In its place was something still and calculating. I saw his eyes flicker across the assembly. Septimus was doing the same, but his was more automatic. His mind was far too concerned with visibly planning homicide. Skull-Shatterer had gone white.

This was about to go very, VERY bad, but at last my mouth started working.

"D'you get the fly?"

Broken-Sword stared at me.

"...What?"

"The fly. The one on my shoulder. D'you get it?"

It was the weakest, most threadbare excuse in all of recorded history. If I'd said the sword had grown out of my bones and would soon burst into song, it'd be more likely. The silence that followed it was equal parts horrified, incredulous, and despairing.

Take the fucking hint, you idiot, it's all we've got.

Broken-Sword blinked. Once. Twice.

"...No," she said at last. "My apologies… senior."

I shot her a wry grin.

"Don't worry about it, it's only a fly. You'll have to leave your blade with me, though; have to show it to the quartermaster before he'll authorise a new one for me."

"...I… will require a weapon," she said slowly.

"My spear do?"

Another long, long pause. I could feel Draconis's eyes boring shocked holes through the back of my neck. Fuck him, though. If he'd any sense in his head we wouldn't be dealing with this shit in the first place. I held the spear up lengthways.

"Your. Your spear." Broken-Sword's voice had gone faint.

"Yeah. Not exactly one for one, I'll grant you, but the head's got a good cutting edge, it'll do in a pinch."

One last long pause. Then she nodded, her fingers wrapping around the haft.

"...My thanks, Senior."

I waved off her words.

"Just keep it in good nick. I'll have you a good blade by the afternoon. Spirit steel, yeah? Do till your honourable leader can sort something better?"

Cao Pai Mei nodded, all smiles again.

"Your generosity is matched only by your wisdom, Captain Maria. We shall have to forge Lan Hua a new blade eventually, however."

...Slimy little bastard. I nodded understandingly.

"If you'll pardon a vulgar question, that'll cost you a spirit stone or two?"

"Oh, only a trifling-"

"No, no, it will, won't it?"

"The expense is to be expected," he said gravely. "Please. Think no more of it."

"Ah, come on now. Silly mistake like this, no reason you should shoulder the cost. Let me throw in. Go on."

"Even now, you show such wisdom! But no, I cannot countenance it."

"Ah, go on."

"No, no."

"Go on! You're doing me a favour, I'll be embarrassed otherwise. Look, tell you what, how about half?"

"Half?"

"Yeah. Say, what, fifteen low-grade stones?"

I tried to ignore the sword that jutted out of my shoulder. If I looked at it, so would everyone else. The damn thing was worth five low-grade if it was worth a copper cent. But Cao Pai Mei smiled.

"To keep from disrupting your rest then, honourable captain," he said. "Fifteen low-grade. Most generous."

"I'll have someone run it over later," I said. "Left my wallet in my tent."

"Of course."

We smiled at each other. Bastard.

Then he seemed to notice… well. Everyone, staring at us all.

"Have my fellow disciples nothing else to do?"

The Divine Sabres started, and immediately fled back to their tasks. The Devils got the message before they had to be told, bustling away themselves. I turned a smile towards Lan Hua, and glared at her over the top of it.

"Keep in mind, girly girl, that the only reason you're not dead and the coalition not trying to fix this particular fuck-up, is because of that fucking fly. Next time you think of losing your temper, there may not be another one."

She flushed.

"You cannot-"

"So help me I will take back my spear and shove it so far up your arse you'll double as a battle standard unless you walk the fuck away right now."

That seemed to get through. Lan Hua turned stiffly away.

"Well done," said Skull-Shatterer, appearing behind me. I gave her an awkward shrug, before wincing as the blade twisted a little in the wound.

"Only following your lead," I said awkwardly. She gave a brief smile, before turning. Septimus and Cao Pai Mei had closed with her.

"Get the other foundation experts. This has to be dealt with. Now."

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The tent was fancy as all hell, but so crowded you could barely enjoy it. Every leader in the damn camp was crammed in here, now, and they were the kind of people where the sense of personal space went on a good foot and a half around them. Incursions were not tolerated. So there they all were, ping-ponging around the space with polite, frosty little smiles and affronted dignity all over them. It'd have been funny if they couldn't all kill me in a heartbeat. Why the fuck was I here, again?

"We were lucky," said Honey, his doleful eyes fixed on Septimus. "We've been lucky, time and time again. Continuing to rely on that is unwise."

"We're not, hic, exactly in a position to do much else," muttered Yan the Plum, pushing his unkempt mane of hair back over his head and drinking from his cup. "This many youngsters in one place, no entertainment, no distractions – old grudges are bound to make themselves felt."

"Your solution, then, is to let them kill one another and pray their next incarnation is more suited to the war we are currently fighting?" Mo Ye's eyes, the only thing visible above the mask that covered her face up to the nose, were coldly unimpressed. "I remind you we are on something of a deadline."

"Doesn't change the facts, though, does it?" Yan leaned back on his seat. "This shit, it's half of what cultivator politics looks like. Can't be surprised when the kids behave like this. We're the exact same."

"Ah, but honoured Drunkard, we have kept the peace so far." The room, willing or not, turned to look at Cao Pai Mei. He smiled, for all the world like a charming saint and not the prick who'd sell us all out for a rusty copper piece. Give the bastard his due, he knew how to work a crowd. "Managing the inevitable to achieve the impossible is, after all, the nature of our path, is it not?"

Honey snorted.

"Fine words considering your junior was half the problem."

Cao Pai Mei's smile didn't flicker, but for the briefest moment, the room shivered under the barest hint of sword intent.

"Lan Hua's rudeness is of course regrettable. But was she not provoked? Did this… Draconis… not tempt her to such foolish but understandable wrath?"

Septimus shifted slightly. He'd left his spear outside, but that meant nothing, really. You don't get to Centurion if you need a weapon to kill a man. Skull-Shatterer shot him a glance out of the corner of her eye, and he stilled.

"Be that as it may," she said, calmly, "the problem remains. The likelihood is our orders will not arrive for some time yet. How do we keep tensions from growing further?" The collection sat in silence. She rose a single perfect eyebrow. "...How inspiring."

"You have a solution, then?" Mo Ye glared daggers. Suppose that was only to be expected. "Or do you expect us to offer you the words of heaven as the great scholars do? Juniors called to war expect a fight. If we deny them one, they will find their own."

"Can't do what we normally would, either," muttered Yan. "No duels, no tournaments. Scarletglyph's orders, damn fool as they may be."

"...Do we have to tell her?"

I blinked. This whole damn argument had gone on so long, I'd forgotten the Honourable Sibling was there. They had a way, I realised, of just… blending into the background. Letting the world happen around them, and camouflaging themselves in stillness. And yet, six words in that quiet voice had silenced the whole room.

Yan recovered first, scoffing.

"She doesn't need to be told," he said. "She'll just know. She's a Nascent Soul, now. World's only got secrets to her because she hasn't gone looking for them yet."

"It would be foolish to try and hide our actions from her," agreed Honey.

The Sibling nodded, smiling slightly.

"I agree. But you misunderstand. The Honourable Lady Scarletglyph has decreed that there shall be no conflict within the coalition. No exchanges of pointers, referring here to the… regrettable… tendency for competition between our students to result in longterm injury. Yes?"

Septimus gave them a stony frown.

"We're aware of how words work, Sibling."

They smiled again.

"My apologies. My point is this. If we were to ensure that the duels were appropriately moderated- kept to an acceptable level of force, with an impartial judge- and kept to it, truly and clearly… then surely the lady would voice no objection? She is a practical woman. She knows juniors as well as any of us. A simple chance to… work off some steam, as it were. What could be the harm in that?"

Skull-Shatterer folded her hands in her lap. I could see her knuckles start to whiten a little.

"I will not tarnish the commands of her ladyship," she said, with all the calm of a mountain before the avalanche starts, "with such… sophistry. Every tournament, since the first emanation of the Dao made matter in an empty universe, has made such promises. Despite this, combatants are still ruined by them."

Sibling cocked their head.

"You think I am lying?"

"Hiding in words."

"I am not. Wait." They held up a steel-fingered hand placatingly. "Let me explain. Your ladyship's reasoning for her order is simple, yes? To keep intersect conflict from destabilising the war effort. It's a reasonable position, but consider; that conflict is already here. The situation denies us the normal means of managing it – separating our students till we might blood them, and cool their tempers that way."

"Hence," said Skull Shatterer, with infinite patience, "calling this meeting, and asking that we might come together as elders in this place-"

"But we cannot. Can we? Even here, the grudges of history are present. Look how we are sitting. Could the honourable centurion and the august Cao Pai Mei stand further apart? Do the Blacksmith and the Drunkard not hide their contempt in bickering?"

We all froze at that. They weren't wrong; none of the seniors had been subtle about their opinions of each other. But to just say it out loud like that…

Sibling nodded, like the silence agreed with them. "Thus, the root of our issue. But also the solution. We shall not compete as sects and clans. Instead, every cultivator shall put their name forward as individuals. They shall compete in masks and robes we will make for them, all black, to provide anonymity."

Yan massaged his forehead. "That's- Heaven, Sibling, the first technique any of them use will give them away!"

"It does not matter. As our wise sister proved, as long as there is an excuse, sense can hold. Think of this," and Sibling smiled, here, wise and beatific, "as a fly for the entire camp."

They looked at each other for a long moment, considering.

"...It might work," said Septimus, slowly.

"Yes," said Cao Pai Mei. "If we took… precautions."

The others muttered quiet assent, before turning to look at Skull-Shatterer. She seemed to wrestle with it for a long moment, before her eyes settled on me.

Slowly, she nodded.

"Make your masks, then, Sibling. We have little time."

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I tried *so hard* to keep this thing from growing, but then this installment got so ridiculously long I couldn't hack it any more. I promise, it will stop at five. It has to, I'll go mad if it doesn't. For timing purposes, this one takes place before @Alectai 's battle at the Abyssal Crag. @Humbaba @TehChron @Kaboomatic , may I have a threadmark, please?
 
Paulus 8 - Family Time
Paulus 8: Family Time


Forty years. It took Forty years for me to rise from the first to the ninth heavenstage of qi condensation. I had reached the pinnacle of the orthodox path at a little over half the age of a normal cultivator, and taken a quarter of the actual cultivation time to do it, and I only had to get run through and almost killed by a Foundation level cannibal once. Thankfully those days were in the past. Nowadays I was the one doing the running through.

"Damn you Golden Devils! The desert will run red with your blood! My clanmates will feast on your flesh and grind your bones to make bread!"

"SHUT UUUUUUP!"

A shield the size of a barn door slapped the raging cannibal with a resounding GONG, sending him flying into the far distance. His scream of rage faded until it was barely on the edge of hearing and the sound of him impacting a distant rocky cliff face finally ended it entirely.

"By the bronze, why are they always so chatty? It's always 'feast on this' and 'swallow that' right up to their deaths."

"The Blood Cannibals don't tend to have many friends, even in their own lands. I imagine they don't get to speak much at all except to their enemies and victims."

The voice answering me belonged to the Strategos herself. Strategos Merida was, in a word, intense. What little I could make out about her cultivation reminded me of the last time I'd met Singing Fang Nabu but whatever gentleness and restraint the man had picked up over his years of teaching aspirants was completely absent in the woman before me. Her gaze felt like thousands of small knives being drawn over my skin and for a brief moment I caught a glimpse of an iris the colour of sunlight seen through a jar of honey before my gaze was forcibly turned away and the sensation disappeared.

Normally I wouldn't expect her to be out here with me, instead moving with her gaggle of junior tacticians or carving up stubborn pockets of cannibal agents with her honour guard. My own assignment to clean up a village that had been overtaken by cannibal raiders was several levels below her concern.

Instead of trying to force myself to endure locking eyes with her, I watched my now distant opponent to see if he would get up and wiped my spear clean in the sand.

"That's depressing. I'm about ready to call this assignment complete though, so if you're here to give me my new one then your timing is pretty good."

"To the contrary, Paulus. I am here to release you from my command. The emergency situation is over and so my orders once again take second place to your own Legion's Strategos."

"I-" I knew it was coming eventually, and sooner rather than later, but even with that knowledge it still felt like the ground was momentarily pulled out from under me. It wouldn't be like last time, I wouldn't lose myself. Though I still would miss the certainty of moving with the rest of the Legion.

It won't be like the last time.

"Of course if you're open to suggestions" she emphasised, "I may have a few targets for you to pursue.".

A blur appeared at the edge of my vision and I flinched, only for a jade slip to slide into my hands like I'd been trying to catch it. She continued speaking without missing a beat. "It should be rather clear how the war effort is going, now, so I expect the Jingshen to return to their old ways as quickly as they can. This includes certain less than official business pursuits in Golden Devil lands, including the Xin Kingdom. Smuggling, in short. "

I sent a thread of qi into the slip and the arrays carved into its surface grabbed the thread and circulated it until a series of images appeared. Names, dates, cities.

"We lack sufficient proof of their actions to force anything, unfortunately, and they are very good at staying hidden once they get underway. On top of that we can't be too overbearing in open surveillance or we'll lose legitimate businesses as well and major Legion movements will be obvious. Someone like yourself could be very useful in this situation."

"Like myself?"

"Largely independent, little to no fame to draw the eye, street smart, passable at Ludus. For your age."

I tried to glare at her but my eyes slipped off her face without recognition. I settled for giving a stern look at her shadow instead.

"I'm eighty." I still looked like I was in my late-twenties, but that's cultivation for you. Haven't grown an inch either.

"Hmm, even younger than I thought."

"Ugh. Fine, I'll do it." With the emergency order rescinded it meant that the cannibal incursion was well within the ability of the standing garrison again. I could keep puttering around here cleaning up cannibals, but they didn't NEED me anymore. Having an assignment would help stave off the listlessness.

"Lovely. Now that business is settled I have something else for you. A bit of mail that came my way from your household as they didn't know how to reach you." A bulging envelope spun in from the edge of my vision and smacked into my raised hand as I tried to bat it away. I fumbled with it for a second before barely managing to get it under control awkwardly between two fingers.

"Is that the only way you deliver messages?"

"Only when it's entertaining." she chuckled. So yes, I guess. "If you'll take advice, try to keep in touch with your people. Regrets will harm your Dao Heart."

"I haven't had the time." I lied.

"It takes mere minutes to write a letter, Paulus, and it can be done while you move from place to place. Lies to yourself will also harm your Dao Heart."

"You seem really concerned about my Dao Heart all of a sudden." I grumbled angrily.

"You'll never make Core with a shaky heart, after all, and you'll need to make Core if you want to play in higher level Ludus. Most of the old fogies up here can't play a fresh game to save their lives. I'm looking forward to a new duos partner in the next hundred years."

I turned to her in incredulity and caught the briefest hint of a cheeky smile before her aura vanished and I was left alone.

High level cultivators are weird.

With nothing better to do (a quick glance revealed that Merida had taken the cannibal with her) I popped open the envelope and scanned the contents. Inside was a motley assortment of letters written on actual parchment from a number of different people.

My old squad was represented as well as Filia, Spiros, Leto, and Korina. Surprisingly I also saw a few from other squads in my legion, Rosetta's 8th, Oman's 5th, even the leader of the lofty 10th Squadron Ru Li sent something on high quality parchment bordered in gold. Well wishes, queries, and accounts of adventures filled page after page and kept me reading in that same spot till nightfall.

Then I reached Korina's letter and I knew the rest would have to wait.

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The trip back to Golden Devil heartlands took almost three weeks by caravan. I could have done it in a third of the time just by running, but I decided to take Merida's advice and start writing my own letters.

Besides, I didn't want to get there too early.

As it was I arrived in Emporikiporis, the city outside the Dawn Fortress, just in time for the celebrations to really kick into gear. For most of the city it was business as usual but for a small section of land nearby the servant lodges it was the best day of the decade. The streets were swept, the houses freshly painted, and the entire place practically overflowed with flowers and flower petals. Everyone wore their best robes and brightest smiles as they joined in the dancing and singing in the streets, determined to enjoy this rare day as much as they could. And at the center of it all, Korina danced.

Her smile was brighter than I had ever seen and the coquettish looks she shot her dance partner revealed a side of her I'd never even thought of before. Flowers adorned her hair and her many coloured dress stood out even among the cultivator sewn outfits some of the more well off wore. As befitting of the new bride. She looked…

"Old. She looks old." I muttered.

Even as I said it I knew it was unfair. She was old, all of us in the gang were, now. But the benefits of cultivation had kept me looking young and fit while Korina… Her wrinkles were closer to laugh lines and her hair had only the slightest hint of matronly grey, just a few strands, but even that was a rarity in a cultivator city. Even the servants could pick up one or two heavenstages after sixty years living among cultivators, not enough to really make them notable but enough to keep them looking young until the last few years of their extended lifespan. But Korina…

"She didn't have the talent."

A hand landed on my shoulder and I looked over..and up to face a seven foot tall man with an oft broken nose sneering down at me.

"Oi, you've been saying a lot of mean things about Auntie for a while now you brat. How about we take this outside?"

He pushed on his cultivation and the pressure of a second heavenstage cultivation washed over me. I don't know what kind of look I had on my face but whatever he saw turned his sneer into a frown and his hand tightened on my shoulder.

I suppose there were definitely some downsides to looking younger.


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I later found out that the man was a servant named Raul, barely thirty years old this year. He was something of a talent around here, having made it to the second heavenstage within a few years of starting practice. He was fiercely protective of the other servants and apparently liked to use his newfound strength to 'correct' anyone who said anything bad about them while he waited for the next Legion recruitment cycle. While I appreciated the sentiment, my new chair to watch the festivities had a lot to learn about picking fights and not judging cultivators by their looks.

"I apologize senior, this one had eyes but could not see the Bronze Gates." he pleaded on his hands and knees.

"Shut up, I'm trying to watch the wedding."

"Of course, senior. This one will be the essence of obscurity and silence. I will walk the Dao of the Ascetic for as long as you wish."

"Why the devil are you talking like that?"

"Do you like it?" he asked, actually sounding genuinely chipper for a second, "This one has read all the novels that have passed through Emporikiporis in the past ten years. The saga of Mistress Ferenike was most enlightening on etiquette and I learned as much as I could. 'Curdles with Soup' is indeed a gifted author to have gotten Mistress Ferenike's permission to write her legacy."

Oh no this was worse than I thought. I was saved from having to respond to that by Korina's gaze finally landing on me between rounds of dance. Her already bright face lit up further and she rushed through the crowd of well wishers to get to me. For a brief moment I saw the energetic little girl that I'd brought with me to the Golden Devil Clan overlaid on her form before it faded and she threw her hands around me.

"Paulus!" She exclaimed, hugging me tight.

"Korina, good to see you." I replied, returning the hug as best I could. She was taller now, taller than me even, but not so much that the hug was too awkward. If she felt any of that awkwardness at all I didn't see it in her. Just love and excitement and a rather curious looking man approaching from where she left him on the dance floor.

"Don't greet me like a stranger, Paulus! We're family! When did you arrive? I thought you were going to come see me. Also why are you sitting on Raul?" A tide of questions flowed out of her mouth one after the other like a rush of terror scorpions and I couldn't help but smile as I did my best to answer them.

"I just got here today, just a few hours ago in fact. I didn't want to disturb your wedding so I planned to wait until it ended before I came by. As for this guy, ask him."
"This one really kicked an iron board this time, Auntie Korina." Raul muttered, still on his hands and knees.

"Did you try and pull your gangster stunt again, Raul? I told you that you would get in trouble for that someday, you're lucky it was your Uncle Paulus and not someone else." she said sternly, surprising me.

The man who had been lightly beaten up and forced to act as a chair for the past hour nodded emphatically but otherwise remained exactly where he was. "Don't worry Auntie, next time I'll strike first."

Korina spent a few minutes chewing out the young man who she was apparently looking after. Following that we broke into light conversation. Korina introduced me to her husband, a wagon driver of meagre cultivation who had been courting her for fifteen years before she agreed to marry him. They seemed happy enough together and I had to quietly admit in my heart of hearts that he probably knew more about her than I did at this point. Still, I gave him the stinkeye promise of violent retribution if he hurt Korina, just to keep him on his toes.

I hung around in the city for another week at Korina's insistence and just...caught up with her when she and her new husband came up for air. She was still my 'servant', I discovered, but when I tried to do something about it she chided me and said that someone had to manage all the wealth the rest of the gang sent home and that she had apparently been doing that for decades already. I suppose that was that.

I was also apparently the proud owner of a dozen children's homes in mortal cities around the Golden Devil territories thanks to her efforts, with the biggest and best being back in our old city with funding and support from old Meathead Romanalis himself. I guess time changes things after all.

As Korina leaned into my side and chattered about her life since the last time we saw each other I reflected, maybe time doesn't change everything. And that was fine too.

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Turn 9 events continue. I wanted to have a short look at the fates of those who don't cultivate. I didn't really get to do all I wanted with this due to time constraints but I hope I illustrated some of the different kinds of satisfaction one can find on the road of life.

Korina never really got into the cultivation thing so they'll end up having less time together than Paulus expected but they can still appreciate each other and enjoy what they have. She's gotten a lot done too!

Next up, Merchant Mission activities.

Pinging for collaborator assistance as stimpulated @Mochinator
 
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Aristoteles 'Aris' Kalokagathos 10 - On the Mountain
Aristoteles 'Aris' Kalokagathos

On the mountain

Year 161

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Leo Kalenos once again found himself in a pickle because of his long-time friend. Aristoteles Kalokagathos was a brilliant man, and one glimpse from those ardent eyes was enough to rouse hearts and banish all shadows of fear.

Yet the situations the man got him into caused a very particular brand of fear in and of itself.

He had twelve officers looking expectantly at him from where he sat behind the small desk in the temporary office in Acrocorinth.

"I'm afraid that's all I'm at a liberty to say, I know little more than that it is a sensitive affair, and that your commanding officer has left command in my hands. More will become clear over the next weeks, I'd expect. For now, we merely act as a centuria at double strength. I trust and hope that we won't face serious action before centurio Kalokagathos returns, but if that does turn out to be the case, I expect you to perform at peak efficiency."

He got a round of stern nods, lightly tinged with indignation. Of course they would be mildly affronted at the mere suggestion they would perform less than outstandingly. Aris was ever the drillmaster.

"My optio Epeigeus speaks for me in all things, please heed whatever he has to say, even if he is your equal rank-wise. Optio Atiphates, a word later, if you will. Now, dismissed."

A round of salutes and nods.

Leo looked intently at the jade slip with Aris' final set of orders imprinted on it before he departed.

His friend had better return soon, and with something to show for this little jaunt.

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Ash was mixed with oil and a few drops of blood. The substance was applied liberally to arms, head, neck and torso.

To Diokles Aseius, death was sacred. It ran through his family's veins, coated his skin like a veneer of tarnished brass.

His family did not keep to the Imperator like almost all of his kinsmen. They worshiped the God of Death and his nine Sons, Erlik and Karash Han, Badysh Han and Shyngay Han. It was always thus.

He smelled the small bowl laid before him. A sour, coppery smell with bitter, herbal notes. Blood, gall, vinegar, Iron Hemlock and Death-eating Belladonna.

To wield death, one needed to be like death.

Diokles washed his hands of the ash-like substance, then dabbed his eyelids and lips with shining mercury from a small clay jar.

He then brought the blood-filled bowl to his lips.

He struggled to hold the thick substance down, as he did every time he performed the ritual. There was no getting used to it.

He heard a faraway noise, and tensed up.

Carefully, he put the empty bowl down and wiped it with a cloth.

He had requested a secluded room in Acrocorinth, making it clear he was not to be disturbed.

It was not Blood Path – but an unfortunate intruder would not be able to tell the difference.

The noise slowly died away, and Diokles relaxed a hair.

The imbibing of blood was a ritual sacred to Lord Erlik, and necessary to use his family's gifts and sacred art. It did not grant him leaps in cultivation – any profane ingestion of blood would even render him forever unable to use Erlik Khan's Arts.

But it did grant him sight.

He looked up at the small portable shrine to Elrik and the Karaoğlanlar, and saw his grey-irised eyes reflected in the tarnished glass, silvery mercury dripping down like tears.

"I am now become Death, the tenth child. I shall dispense thy mercy freely and not seek to escape thine own judgement."

He rose from seiza, picking up his yanmaodao resting on his lap. In the reflection of the blade, a drawn out death's head figure briefly appeared.

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Aris had arrived late to the Qiguai lands. Most of the Golden Devil contingent had entered the Secret Realm already.

Six days for three thousand li. He had been lucky in Simmering Soup Sect lands, waiting time at Mogui City had been minimal, thanks to his writ of passage. In addition, the departure of an airship bound for the Qiguai Clan had been delayed for a day for him.

One of the Inns reserved for foreign non-Righteous visitors had been near-empty, only a few stragglers waiting for this or that before entering the Secret Realm.

The Qiguai architecture seemed to emulate their all-important gateway. Stone, arches and natural edges smoothed to curve around windows and stone furniture. The people were used to visitors, the Secret Realm at the heart of the Clan lands the source of their wealth and continued survival. Yet their existence hinged on Righteous approval. A general rule that painted every minute interaction.

Demonic visitors were tolerated and treated with all due politeness, but the way one would treat a generous, yet cruel and belligerent patron.

In the eyes of the Qiguai guards and overseers, the mortal staff and inhabitants, there was a small, cruel edge when looking upon him or other Demonic cultivators. They knew that many who entered would never be coming back.

Everyone seized them up, hoping that the particularly vile-looking would meet a violent and painful death inside, and the righteous-looking would bring them back great riches.

Aris' eyes had grown sharper over these past few days, that he noticed such things with such clarity.

His mind was stilled.

The old wisdom that stated that a still pond reflected images more truly was particularly applicable, he thought.

He closed his eyes while seated on the rough bench, recovering his Qi, and now felt like he carried the will of two people with him. His uncle, and the strange –

Dark green eyes and pearly white teeth and beautiful dark skin and golden bracers and rings and that strange whispering --

Yes. That.

He looked over the items he was taking inside; spear, shield, bronze bow and three hundred arrows, dagger, two regular one-handed sabers made from spiritual bronze, his favored liuyedao and the brutal yanchidao with the serrated head. The Starlight Mirror shard, should all go wrong. A decent quantity of moderate-quality spirit stones.

In his ring, the golden jade slip containing his Golden Deva's Immortal Body Art. The Thunder Basilisk potion guaranteeing his rapid deployment to the Song Empire, should he come out of the Qiguai realm relatively unscathed.

While running, he had further probed the inside of the ring, and one small part of the small chamber-sized space had felt…less solid than the other contours of the space. With enough force, he imagined he could probe it. It seemed like his uncle had not shared all his secrets with him just yet.

With an expression of will, the items arrayed before him were all stored inside the ring.

He made his way to the doorway in short order.

A grandiose thing, the hall built around it fit to accommodate thousands of individuals with ease. Here, the looks grew more hostile from the few Righteous cultivators that were loitering in front of the entrance.

Inside the Secret Realm, all bets were off.

Stories from what happened inside were varied, often resembling mad dreamscapes amidst a shifting sea ocean. Yet one only heard the stories of those that came back. What those that didn't come back saw, no one knew.

A gaggle of Seven Divine Saber Palace experts eyed him like a pack of wolves, their bared arms with silver bracers crossed across their chests broadcasting their casual intimacy with violence and their position of pre-eminence over all Southern Righteous Sects.

He met their eyes and bared his teeth in a look of pure distain, broadcasting his intention clearly – "come and get me then, if you dare".

Posturing cowards. He imagined that a taste of pure all-out warfare would spoil their appetites for violence quite thoroughly.

But they didn't matter, ultimately.

He averted his eyes and stepped in front of the shifting mirror-surface, feeling a small pang of child-like giddiness. He hoped he'd find a sword – a jian – he hadn't found one that suited his fancy yet. He allowed himself a small smirk.

Then he dived through.

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Leo beheld the carnage.

Ward Thunderbolt based around Fort Ji Ren Ha, as the Strength Purity Sect and the handful of Song Empire natives called it, had been struck by a nightly raid of Demonic Altar forces.

While Leo's double-strength centuria marched in, they were doing some hasty repairs on the fort's outer wards, dragging in a seemingly unceasing stream of dead and crippled from outside of the walls, where Allied sallies had met Demonic counterstrikes. Hubris from the defenders, or the attackers had had some advantage that made turtling up a losing proposition. Or the enemy commander was a particularly skilled general who could afford to take losses making risky feints. None of those possibilities boded well.

Leo had taken his and Aris' centuriae from the Ninety-First to relieve one of the forts on the Fearless Line. They had been marching east – the Demons had been cutting closer and closer to the webs of the Ten-Ten-Thousand Year Spider – when the orders came through to reinforce Ward Thunderbolt on the Fearless Line which had been badly damaged in a daring Demon raid.

The fortress was a sad, spartan affair. Stone walls in a rectangle around an oversized muddy field, centred around three squat stone buildings on a hillock. The rest were rows of orderly tents, most of them thoroughly stained a dark brown by mud or other substances.

The walls facing west were pitted and smeared with ash, two large fissures breaching the walled cordon around the tented camp, chunks of rubble scattered here and there. At the edges of the breaches, Arraywork sputtered and sparked yellow.

Aside from the electric crackling of the broken Arraywork, the only sounds were the sucking sound of boots getting stuck in mud and a few low moans from wounded soldiers. A slight drizzle that made the air smell like ash coated the entire scene in an additional layer of gloom.

Leo had seen mass graves more cheerful than this fort.

He marched to the command buildings with his two optiones, and bade his men to help with the recovery and repairs before setting up.

The commander of the fort was a greyed expert with a plain blue-and-grey hanfu. His skin had a sheen of tarnished iron, and when he moved his footsteps made loud thumping sounds. No armour or weapons, but only an absolute greenhorn would find this suspicious – his weapons were plain for all to see.

In the small, spartan commander's office with small arrowslit windows, an iron desk anchored into the stone took up most space. The three Golden Devil officers, crested helmets in their hands at their side, nearly took up the remaining space.

"You are Heavensent, my Child-eating Bronze-bodied friends, though I wish I had had time to prepare the welcome party."

The good-natured jab was said without mirth, the commander going through the motions and saying the things expected of a Strength Purity commander greeting an allied Golden Devil centurio. Yet there was no heart in them, this was a man who was run to the bone.

Leo briefly smiled in response, acknowledging the jab, but not unduly extending the formality.

"Capitain Steelgong. I bring two hundred Qi Condensation soldiers, fifteen attached Array engineers and myself as reinforcements. I have two legionnaires who can roughly hold their own against a weak early Foundation building expert. I've already set my men to work – what are our orders going forwards, are we expecting to deploy as a counter-raiding force soon?"

"Centurion Kalenos. If we can avoid being butchered by Altar scum over the next week or so I'd consider us lucky. Until our defences are plugged, our capacity to engage in counter-raids or maintain our patrols along the line is effectively crippled. This makes us a lightning rod for every marrow-hungry band of Altar rats between Grandma Spider and One-Boat Town."

The grey commander runs a hand through his hair, the wiry grey strings of hair making a metallic tingling sound against his skin.

"Every one of them a band of loose sand, but the one that seems to have set its sights on us is run by a tyrant that has whipped his band of pathetic scum into something resembling a coherent fighting force. They attack, and fragment at the first serious resistance from my men, as every Demon force has done since we started fighting them all those millennia ago. A few platoons sally forth to get their pound of flesh – the moment they are too far from the walls to make a swift retreat, the demons converge again like wasps on a peach. We gear up for a serious fight, then we find out it's all one big distraction and they blow two holes in our rear end."

Leo nods with a troubled expression.

"Troubling. But we are drenched in large-scale cultivator warfare and my century has been stomping out suspiciously organized Blood Path demons for near a hundred years now. Captain, can you hold the fort as it stands now with your troops here and my Array engineers?"

The steely-eyed captain looks at him for five, ten seconds, then slowly nods.

"The Sons of Gold will set up, then sally forth in a matter of hours. The two centuries under my command can operate independently. With our Formations, we should be able to dissuade any enterprising raiders from taking advantage of the fort's weakness, and hopefully put our dangerous adversary on the back foot, at least until the fortress is repaired."

"Good hunting, then, my bronze-clad friends."

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Black Blood Gurgler whipped the green frothy liquid to perfection with a bamboo brush. He carefully, deliberately tapped the bamboo whisk against the edge, then placed it down next to the bowl.

He inhaled the bitter flavour, and took a small sip. He allowed himself a small sigh of contentedness. Small pleasures in the field, these were important to stay sane.

The half-molten body of one of his soldiers had stopped moving where it lay before him, bound by invisible chains, contorting his body in a near-circle. Splashes of an acid-like substance had eaten through his legs, stomach and head, every drop seemingly having left a deep hole in the now-corpse.

He supposed his subordinate looked like a particularly chewed-up round human chew toy, the things his senior colleague Tai Chen used for his Bloodbeasts as a novelty item to emulate mundane hounds. He supposed it was indeed somewhat humorous.

The rest of his red tent was unoccupied, save for the table, tea set, and his sabre leaning against the tent wall.

The rest of his soldiers were doing this and that outside, trying to look very busy indeed, never looking inside the tent.

He cleared his throat.

The five hundred-so Demonic Altar juniors immediately froze.

He spoke with a soft voice, which one would have to strain to hear from more than a metre or two away.

"Can anyone tell me what this man's crime was? Winner gets the prize."

There was silence for a second or two. He smiled heartily.

One of the younger juniors spoke. Blood Gurgler knew that in this time, they had reached a consensus on who would provide the answer. He so very much hated people talking over one other.

"Cowardice, Lord Black Blood Gurgler. He did not countercharge immediately, likely fearing that he would be overwhelmed and killed."

"Correct, Junior Ji. What is he now?"

"Killed, sir."

"You may have your prize."

He released his Ethereal Shackles Art, and the disfigured corpse sagged into a more natural position.

Junior Ji fetched the corpse, bowed, and walked out of his tent backwards.

"Carry on, soldiers."

As one, activity resumed.

He took another sip. He did hope there would be some challenge in this venture yet.

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Leo passed the gate of the fortress for the third time in two days, lightly vexed.

The Line held, and the few raiding bands that either century had faced were the same Demonic Altar riffraff that one generally expected to face. Leo's tactics had worked flawlessly each time, very much prepared for an assault from a numerically superior and equally disciplined force.

Spread the squads far enough around, centred around a core of forty with Formations experts. Wait for a raiding band to take one of the pieces of bait and commit to the engagement, then use the Cataphractoi formation to take out the leader, spread out to mop up the thoroughly-shaken and now-leaderless band. Other squads would reinforce with Eagles if the signal was given, but a few stragglers that had managed to escape had thus far hardly been worth showing their full hand for. Here, their Formations were not such common knowledge, especially among the Blood Demon juniors.

Yet no sign whatsoever of a force of the sort that had so thoroughly shaken Ward Thunderbolt two days ago.

The conventional move for the mysterious Altar force would be to seize on the advantage, keep forcing the enemy to commit to protecting their very vulnerable flank and poke at their underdefended other sides meanwhile, up until they strip the hole of some of its essential protection, then punch through with all force and wreak havoc. Cultivators – certainly those under Nascent Soul – were after all not immune to acting on instinct and faulty reasoning.

Yet their mysterious adversary had not shown his hand. Yet he must, why expend resources to create a hole you weren't going to exploit? Morale damage was significant, but these were Strength Purity juniors protecting their lands and a fortress, things would have to get significantly more dire before anyone would consider anything but fighting to the death, even if they were somewhat shaken.

Captain Steelgong was a capable commander, but more on the 'experienced and tough' side, rather than being an actual military genius. The men would hold together under him, and without him the chain of command would remain intact.

Leo tsked.

This would be significantly easier if the roles were reversed. Strength Purity ranging far and wide, crushing any enemy in single combat where they so excelled, Sons of Gold holding the fort, Hoplite Formation making forcing them into any engagement a ridiculously stupid proposition, unless they possessed overwhelming force.

But no one in their right mind would agree to surrendering a fortress entirely to the Golden Devils, unless in the direst circumstances. They were trusted auxiliaries, but if word got out that the Strength Purity needed the Devils to man their fortifications for them, the Sect would suffer significant loss of face.

These circumstances made these battlegrounds a mediocrity trap. You were shoehorned into a role that your allies saw for you or the situation demanded, and could do little but follow what was agreed upon. True excellence on the battlefield was contingent upon controlling all circumstances of the engagement.

Leo looked at the setting red sun, painting the still-relatively lush green landscape in hues of grey-crimson-brown.

Would the Altar commander perhaps wait until larger groups of raiders started converging on the fortress, and then try to take advantage of the increased pressure and chaos to try and take them out in one stroke before they managed to repair the damage done?

He felt in his bones that wasn't it. That was a patient strategy, for the sort of commander that liked to have ten irons in the fire, and would not think twice of it when he didn't get to use eight of them. It relied on chance, the actions of others and being in the right spot to take advantage of a favourable situation if it manifested itself. More typical Blood Path behaviour – though successfully putting it into practice was another thing entirely. An Altar commander consistently taking favourable engagements successfully was a dangerous foe.

Yet their adversary was a different beast entirely. Such a bare-faced assault as the one two days ago, and the amount of paradigm-defying discipline that it required was not the work of a pragmatic commander, it was the work of a visionary. A megalomaniac. It was exactly the sort of thing Aris would do, and he was intimately familiar with it.

Yet megalomaniacs had their own particular strain of weaknesses, even if they were geniuses. That was the key to anything – strip yourself of all prejudice and emotion on the battlefield and keep only your facts. Be as a newborn, examine all knowledge you possess as if looking upon it for the first time, without any emotional attachment, then adopt the strategy that counters that. Do not favour, do not advantage, have no style, no signature move. Be the tool needed to resolve the situation, nothing more.

War was an affair of hard facts.

The fact was that the fame they enjoyed among their foes was like an irresistible manna to these narcissistic commanders. As was keeping those foes forever wondering, forever uncertain.

Realisation slowly dawned on Leo.

He hoped their mysterious adversary would give him a few days to work with. He might have an iron or two in the fire yet.

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Aris' centuria was out, and Leo had just returned with his. It was late evening, fifth day after the initial attack. No further major engagements to speak of, though the intensity of raids had increased.

With his back to the red, setting sun, a sole figure appeared to the north-west, a large white banner fluttering behind him.

The breaches in the walls were filled in, the Arraywork was partially operational again. Full operationality would take a day more.

A scramble of activity, most gathering on the west wall to watch the approaching figure. Though the other walls remained nearly equally manned – they wouldn't be caught in their flanks again.

The order was given to stand down.

Leo's eyes picked out the figure at a few li distance.

A man with refined features and long, pitch-black hair approached, wearing beautifully embroidered broad pants and a light white tunic, delicately holding a sheathed sabre by his side.

A few soldiers brandished spyglasses to watch the approaching figure.

About two li from the walls, the figure stopped.

He moved his lips, making no sound anyone could hear.

"I, Black Blood Gurgler, true name Tan Qiu, challenge Captain Steelgong, true name Cao Ying, to a duel to the death. I want your fortress. If I win, I intend to take it, but I will allow you to evacuate before I attack. If you do not, we will not spare you. If I lose, my force is now fifteen li behind me. Without my leadership, they are helpless and could probably be scattered easily."

He holds up a chain of red beads, resonating with his words. A Duel Treasure, establishing the terms of a challenge. Its precise nature escaped Leo, but it would inflict some harm upon the issuer of the challenge if he did not abide by the terms.

The Sect members with spyglasses murmured the terms of the challenge to other lookers-on, looking concerned.

Leo narrowed his eyes. The Blood Demon was Late Foundation Establishment, equivalent to Steelgong. It was a rare Altar Demon indeed who could stand up to a Strength Purity Sect member in the same small realm, let alone have a chance at winning.

There was no refusing this challenge.

The image was as old as time itself, a besieging commander offering terms for a duel to resolve the situation with single combat. A bare-faced warrior standing in front of the gates, daring the defending commander to show his mettle.

Even if trickery was afoot, declining to engage an Altar Demon in honourable single combat as their founder had done was against their entire Way. Even apart from that, taking out an Altar Demon capable of whipping a loose pile of sand into a fearsome fighting force was a great victory. Single combat was what the Sect excelled at, an opportunity like this – even if it was a trap – played too strongly to their strengths to be disregarded.

The Strength Purity Sect members murmured among themselves. There didn't even seem to be a trap, the disadvantage was clear to see, the stringer exposed. If he killed their commander, there was only a Mid-Foundation building expert from a foreign fighting force to offer resistance.

He would take the castle, and use it as a leisurely base to raid the Southern Song with impunity, so the soldiers said, sounding convinced. They would even be able to throw back an assault by a superior force, behind the protective arrays. That was why he had waited until they were largely – but not entirely – repaired. Still easy enough to take, yet easy to bring to full functionality.

But the fortress being occupied by Altar Demons would be the least of the Allies' worries – there would be a breach in the Fearless Line, and every Altar Demon raider would use the convenient gap to probe into Southern Song. It would require significant force investment to uproot the organised Altar force holding open the breach in the Line, even without accounting for the thousands of Altar demons running amok. Like trying to mop up a flowing river.

Other Altar Demons would have been satisfied with sneaking over the Line alone or with a bare handful, but this commander had a more ambitious goal. He must also possess some overwhelming advantage to think he stands a chance against a Strength Purity disciple. Leo could hear the note of disgusted awe in the voices of the Sect warriors. This dragon of a man had chosen their fortress as a target, and now only their hard bodies and Arts would save them.

The voice of Steelgong rang out "I, Cao Ying, accept the terms of your challenge."

He walked forward to the edge of the wall, and doffed the upper part of his hanfu, revealing a withered and worn body like warped steel, still corded by fist-thick muscle, criss-crossed and pitted by numerous scars. A body forged in the fires of war. Steelgong looked at him, and nodded solemnly. Nothing more needed to be said.

He jumped down from the wall. Blood Gurgler crossed the distance leisurely, bowing with his fist clasped in his palm.

Steelgong returned the bow.

Blood Gurgler spoke softly, his every word a refined crystal chime sounding.

"I do so hope your troops take the chance to flee. Only the few Song Empire bites among them are really worth doing battle for. And I'd hate for the terms of the duel to be for nothing."

"They will break every bone in their bodies just to strike at you once, fiend."

"I'd feared so. Well, perhaps your Bronze-blooded successor commander shows greater wisdom and at least evacuates his men."

He looked directly at Leo, a private smirk playing on his features.

Blood Gurgler drew his sabre in a fluid movement, casting aside the scabbard. The surface gleamed dully in the waning light of day. An easy grip, three fingers on the handle, middle and index fingers resting on the flat of the blade.

He swung the dao one, two times to warm up, then took an easy pose, sabre by his side.

Steelgong presented his fists, arms outstretched, his face taking on a rictus of combat. He shifted into a tense horse stance, elbow forward, fist across his chest.

"Let's start."

Steelgong burst forwards in an explosion of movement and killing intent. A palm strike by the arm held across his chest is accompanied by a thunderclap and is barely parried by the flat of the saber's blade. Blood Gurgler flows around a follow-up kick-punch combination, his sabre flashes out to find Steelgong's side, but a backwards sweep with the back of his hand parries away the sabre with a loud metallic clang. Qi pumps in his legs, and a loud crack is followed by a full-length punch to Gurgler's face.

One second had passed.

Gurgler bends backwards under the force of the blow. Then a wet, gurgling sound emits from deep in the Demon commander's chest, and a large splash of a black, viscous liquid splashes across Steelgong's face, too committed to the blow to dodge it entirely.

He jumps backwards as the black liquid sizzles loudly. He tears off his pants to try and wipe the noxious substance off, but upon the smallest contact of the pants with the substance, the fabric practically disintegrates in smoke. His face is already a mess of warped brown metal, his eyes covered in a layer of thick acid.

"Blood Demon Art: Black Blood Acid Respiration"

Gurgler bends forwards again, and then he is upon him. His sabre flashes out like a steel viper, and the blinded Steelgong defensively parries his blows with one arm, trying to wipe the acid out of his eyes with the other.

Gurgler presses the advantage, but the Strength Purity expert parries most blows with broad sweeps or hollow palms. Yet his parrying arm is already criss-crossed by red lines, oozing small drops of brown-red blood. One, two cuts mar his sides.

Steelgong manages to wipe clear one rheumy eye, brown and puffed up, the eyelid mostly gone. The other is still coated in a thick layer of black acid, bubbling away horribly. A necessary sacrifice.

Gurgler lashes out with a broad overhand strike, aimed at the maimed part of Steelgong's face, acid still eating away at his metallic skin.

"Eight Extremities Style: Steel Tiger Fist"

The Body cultivator blurs a half-step forwards, in extreme-close range of the Blood Demon and on the inside of his swing.

A low, nearly vertical punch catches Gurgler on the slightly extended underside of his thorax, the sabre expert's upper body slightly overextended because of the overhand movement.

A painful, high clicking crunch rings out, and the Demon is thrown a few meters into the air.

Steelgong is the real deal, Leo thought. That advantage was minute, even the most agile and aggressive hand-to-hand experts would not think of striking there. It required controlled abandon, an absolute mastery of the own Body, and the absolute certainty that in extremely close range, no equal opponent could meaningfully threaten you.

Gurgler twisted and tried to move in mid-air, rotating his vulnerable belly and internals away from Steelgong, but he was too slow.

"Eight Extremities Style: Jumping Steel Tiger"

Steelgong exploded upwards, pouncing on the airborne sabre expert. His fists clenched close to his chest, almost touching. No need for limb movement or rotation, the explosive power of the jump gave the strike all the power it needed.

Like a cannonball, he crashed into Gurgler's upper body once again, either fist crushing one side of his lower ribs, pushing the mass into his crushed solar plexus. His momentum carried them both dozens of meters high, high above the walls, Gurgler almost bent over double from the impact of the double strike.

Steelgong reached around the Demon's waist with both arms, holding onto him in a bear-hug like embrace. He shifted his weight and they both tilted forwards, Gurgler's back facing the ground, Steelgong's shoulder set against his adversary's solar plexus.

"Ying Family Technique: Ten-Thousand Ton Body"

Suddenly, gravity seemed to lurch, and both dropped to the ground like a lead brick.

Steelgong's improbable weight crashed loudly into the ground, making a deep crater. Above the noise of the crash, the horrible sound of bones being crushed into pulp was audible.

A loud and horrible, plaintive gurgle was audible at the bottom of the crater before the falling motion had reached its conclusion.

From where Leo stood, it looked like an atrociously grievous wound on their foe – and for a moment, he thought that was the end of it.

Then Gurgler's chest swelled like a grotesque pustule around the point of impact, then his throat stretched to nearly three times its usual size, and the jaw of his open mouth distended, the tendons and muscle holding it to his head tearing with fleshy snaps and small crunches.

A body-sized blob of black blood shot out and into the air. Below, Gurgler's jaw had already mended, and his neck was proportionate to his body again. Brackish black blood trickled down his mouth, and he smiled wickedly.

The black blob was rendered into a humanoid figure with a long blade for an arm, which shifted in mid-air, and fell down towards Steelgong, blade-arm outstretched.

Steelgong jumped out of the crater, and the humanoid figure made out of black blood crashed into the soil.

The dust settled, and on the bottom of the crater Gurgler stood alongside a rough, faceless clone of his. Where the clone touched the soil with his feet, it sputtered, dissolved and turned black.

"Secret Blood Cannibal Technique: Black Blood Clone"

Gurgler was hunched over, his eyes tinged with madness. His white tunic was stained red and black around his solar plexus. Black blood intermixed with red dripped from his mouth.

Both Gurglers shoot forward, crossing each other two times in a helix-like pattern. Steelgong parries the steel sabre of the real Gurgler, and makes a careful attempt to do the same with the Black Blood Clone's blade, using the back of his hand in a backwards sweep. The blade's substance burns an angry red-brown line across Steelgong's hand.

The Body cultivator stops the motion, and shifts to dodge the Clone's strike instead.

The cadence of the fight had shifted. Gurgler used his real body as bait, his strikes having lost a great deal of their power, seemingly no longer capable of executing broad strokes which turn and shift his body, instead opting for rough stabbing and chopping motions. The clone forced Steelgong to dodge, always striking the exact same moment he parried the real Gurgler's strike, hampering his ability to follow through or counterattack, or even defend effectively.

A quick combination throw hurls Gurgler a few dozen meters away, and the captain attempts to strike at the clone using pure force projection and air displacement.

One, two, three cracking punches that never touch the liquid tear holes in the construct, which reform immediately, be they in head, groin or chest.

Then the real Blood Demon expert is again into the game, and the dance continues.

That technique was a fearsome weapon against a cultivator such as Steelgong, Leo thought.

His biggest asset was that in any close-range competition of force, he could afford to take much more punishment than his opponent. But his prodigious eye for an opponent's weaknesses, combined with the aggressiveness of his style made even that capacity largely obsolete, as he was able to resolve most fights before any serious damage was done. Both advantages, however, were useless against such a construct.

With ranged backup or a blade cultivator – even a weaker one – this fight would be trivial. It seemed to specifically counter Body cultivators of a certain type, which must be a priceless asset in the Altar Sect.

Yet there seemed a clear-cut counter to it – take a damaging hit from the construct, but kill its controller in one blow. Steelgong wasn't taking it. It was too obvious, the trap too clear. This setup – no matter how clever or annoying for Steelgong – was too precarious for there not to be a hidden stinger. Yet if Steelgong did nothing, he would be forced to spring the trap at some later point, exhausted and wounded.

Steelgong parried a steel sabre-strike, then turned and made to throw another air-displacement punch at the construct's head. Instead of the expected force projection forwards, the thunderclap turned the force of the blow around, and Steelgong's elbow shot out backwards towards Gurgler's head, the acupoint at the tip of his elbow glowing a vicious steely grey.

The construct used the opening to score an ugly, deep slash across the Body expert's lower back, the acid sputtering and popping in the deep wound.

But the elbow completes its movement otherwise unhindered and crunches into Gurgler's surprised face, even as he futilely tries to shift his body away from the strike, his ruined torso making evasion all but impossible.

Then the force of the blow releases, the Qi payload in his elbow exploding part of Gurgler's skull.

For a moment, all is quiet.

Then, the body of Gurgler dissolves into black blood, and the viscous mass explodes forward, covering Steelgong's entire body. The mass of viscous black liquid containing the Strength Purity captain shivers and quakes, but seems to hold its prisoner in place for now.

Gurgler's clone collapses on itself, rendering itself into a black, gelatinous mound. Out of the mound, as if out of a womb, a shaky, very naked Black Blood Gurgler rises, black viscous liquid streaming out of the sack now breached by Gurgler's emergence.

He did not seem healed, but the ruinous cavity on his chest at least seemed to have largely scabbed over.

"Secret Blood Cannibal Technique: Black Blood Rebirth Womb"

He threw back his head, and reached inside his mouth, throat and deeper with his hand, pulling out a new sabre.

He walked unsteadily and hunched over to the restrained Steelgong, thrusting the sabre through the black liquid-covered figure with little ceremony.

That moment, the prison released, the black blood splashing down and almost instantly evaporating.

Night had nearly fallen, the last light of day casting everything in gloomy shadows.

The withered Strength Purity captain was gruesomely scarred in his face and was still bleeding from the cut on his back, but aside from the sabre cleanly penetrating his gut, seemed to suffer only from relatively superficial wounds.

To Leo's spiritual sight, the now-naked Blood Demon was almost devoid of qi, having expended every little bit of reserve he had left for this pyrrhic victory.

As Steelgong collapsed, Gurgler withdrew his sabre from his gut with a metallic scraping sound.

The otherwise stoic Strength Purity soldiers seemed shaken by the defeat of their commander, murmuring darkly among themselves. Even Leo's Bronze Devils seemed lightly perturbed.

It was a dark day indeed when an Altar Demon beat a Strength Purity disciple in single combat.

As Blood Gurgler moved to grab Steelgong by the hair, a few panicked Altar warriors came into sight behind the Altar commander, running at near maximum speed.

Blood Gurgler turned around, his eyes contorted in panic.

--​

Narcissists invariably thought their enemies were stupid.

His gambit had been clever. Almost too clever.

Attack from the west side, planning to approach from the same side a week later. Make the enemy believe that you are committed to taking the fortress, and willing to expend significant resources doing so. Tie up the enemy for a while in an engagement he would not refuse, even discounting honour. The only side they would not be watching like hawks for bands sneaking past would be the side where the duel was taking place and the enemy had just said the force necessary for their objective was.

Make the enemy think you have one objective while pursuing another was still one of the best ones in the book. The wording of the challenge was crafted to leave room for interpretation in that regard. Gurgle after all would gladly have allowed them to evacuate, and he had only said he intended to take the fortress.

Blood Gurgler never wanted to take Ward Thunderbolt, merely sneak past without notice, splitting up his force and using their discipline to keep their drain on mortal populations beneath expert notice, eating Qi Condensenation forces sent to deal with one of the many nuisances. Nesting ticks, growing fat where one big one would have been pinched long before. And the defenders wouldn't be certain whether the raiders were Blood Gurgler's force, or whether they had run off in the end and it was a handful of other lucky raiders.

Or perhaps Blood Gurgler had had some specific objective in mind, some cultivator with a rare bloodline to consume somewhere in Southern Song, or perhaps even orders from above.

Yes, if Blood Gurgler had won the duel and then run off, they would know he was at large somewhere behind the Line. Yet the fortress most equipped to respond would be down their commander and most powerful asset. Mobilising a squad of experts to hunt Gurgler down would be an egregious waste of resources, provided he did not draw too much attention to himself.

Yet his gambit was half-baked, a dreamt-up victory where he runs away cackling and his enemies are left wondering.

It was clever in that more reinforcements to Ward Thunderbolt would make little difference. Another expert would be troublesome, two would be problematic – but such force commitments were irresponsible in a war where they were stretched to the bone. And even in the unlikely event they would have an expert to covertly strike at Gurgler's troops while he was tied up with the duel – so Gurgler must have thought – the troops wouldn't be where anyone expected them to be, already far behind the Line in Southern Song. They would only know trouble was afoot after it was too late.

Leo smiled as more of the Altar troops rounded the faraway hill, a dark figure flitting between them, stilling them one by one.

But he didn't need reinforcements, merely one exceptionally stealthy cultivator lying in wait at exactly the right moment for a favourable strike. He hadn't known exactly where the troops would attempt to cross the line, but conventional wisdom would state at around four-fifths to the halfway point with the next fortress on the line. If you had a genius plan, you tended to pass over the details and not account for every improbable contingency.

Yet that was what strategy was – work around the thousand small pitfalls in your head that caused you to make the same mistakes over and over again.

The flitting figure was now visible more clearly. A small, mousy Golden Devil with a large two-handed sabre, moving like a spectre between the groups of Altar Demons. Diokles Aseius. Even from here, the man's cultivation felt fuzzy, and it was difficult to map his spiritual self to the physically moving figure.

Black Blood Gurgler steeled himself to charge Diokles, casting a glance backwards at the prone figure of Steelgong.

That was the only bit Leo was still uncertain about. Even with Black Blood Gurgler's improbably impressive techniques, the outcome of the duel had been far from certain. Even if their foe had been very well informed about Steelgong's combat potential, losing or being too crippled to escape were very realistic outcomes. Was it pure hubris? Or had he had another ace or two up his sleeve that would have tilted the balance even further in his favour? Or had the desire to breathe in the awe of his foes proven decisive in hinging his plan's success on his victory in single combat over an expert of the Strength Purity's Sect? Leo could make little sense of it.

As Gurgler was about to muster his last bit of strength to break into a dead charge, he suddenly coughed up a glob of blood and looked down.

Five steel fingers poked out of his chest.

Steelgong had lifted himself up slightly on one arm and now held his arm outstretched out towards his foe. The arm now missed a hand, neatly separated at the wrist.

The hand with fingers outstretched was now embedded in the Blood Demon's back, blood dripping down from the holes made by the steel fingers.

"Ying Family Flying Fist Technique"

Not only Blood Demons were capable of deception, Strength Purity disciples only needed a bit more encouragement to engage in it, especially if it concerned their honour.

Though the doctrine those Strength Purity experts were steeped in was terrific, Leo admired privately. No strike had been excessive, each technique just as lethal as it needed to be, never overextending. The gulf in power between an Altar Demon and a Strength Purity disciple was not stronger bodies, better techniques and experience borne of continuous conditioning in live combat – at least, not only. It was the layers and layers of iron discipline, that had made it so that no fight of theirs hinged on one successful strike, never turning a slight opening into an insurmountable advantage, but rather responding appropriately and proportionally to every opening. A pragmatism that saw one party to this duel mortally wounded, the other merely crippled.

Something shattered, and starting at his feet, Black Blood Gurgler gradually started disappearing into a fine red mist.

A Life-saving Treasure. Not unexpected, considering the techniques he was throwing around.

He looked resigned for a mere second, then he turned around and looked Leo straight in the eye. Then he grinned a white-red smile, teeth stained with crimson heartblood. He shrugged with blasé nonchalance, arms lightly spread, then disappeared.

The beads he was holding fell down and shattered, and Leo felt as if a wave of static passed through him. He had violated the terms of the duel and would suffer some commensurate ill, going by the feeling probably a reduction in cultivation base.

Leo raised his voice.

"Soldiers, bring your captain to a medic immediately! First to third platoons, range out near the fortress and help centurio Diokles mop up. Devils, Eagle Formations, chase down individual stragglers further afield!"

An enemy Foundation Establishment crippled for one of their own, in addition to a fighting force of five hundred juniors taken out. A good exchange, especially as their enemy could not afford taking many unfavourable exchanges before the momentum of the war would turn against them, and sharply.

Leo inhaled contentedly. This was war – thousands of small exchanges and insignificant victories that tied the noose around your enemy, leaving brilliant commanders and visionary leaders wondering where it all went wrong.

It went wrong for them because of many merely good men that used the tools at their disposal to eke out merely good victories.

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After a few more introspective omake, one that returns (somewhat) to the business of cultivator warfare. @no. hope you enjoy!

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It's about that time again folks, and we're drawing closer to Missions and Fates being resolved--so a last minute reminder as to who's committed to what Missions is appropriate!

Apoikía Bucephalus:
Mission in a Nutshell: Lock down our new holdings, ensure our new Major Vassals get in comfortably and can begin profiting us as soon as possible while minimizing strife and wastage in the process.

Qi Condensation Good Seeds Listed as Doing This:
Konstantinos Papadopoulos, Xiuying Ten Jiang, Shiro, Juturna Cerintha, Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora, yan, Aretaphila Myia

Foundation Establishment Good Seeds Listed as Doing This:
Savvas Nicolidis, Xiao Yi/Jin Muyi

Observations:
Highest overall Impact among Qi Condensation Mission Brackets, Lowest overall impact among Foundation Establishment Mission Brackets (Though still fairly good thanks to Jin Muyi accounting for 10 net Impact in and of himself after the 3/1 conversion for FE)

The Song Empire:
Mission in a Nutshell: PR operation fighting in the Song Empire Theatre of the Demon Annihilating War to show the Clan's rising strength and forge economic and diplomatic inroads in the Great Battlefield as a whole

Qi Condensation Good Seeds Listed as Doing This:
Theoron Strophios, Maria, Wei Feng, Demetrius Ceres, Fierce Fang, Amaranth Castellanos

Foundation Establishment Good Seeds Listed as Doing This:
Aristoteles Kalokagathos, Ninth Prince, Rina Callista

Observations:
Wei Feng is a fucking lunatic who's singlehandedly accounting for a quarter of the entire Qi Condensation Overall Impact in this mission, at a whopping 27. Ninth Prince has declared he's being here but hasn't actually added himself (Or asked to have himself added) to the Spreadsheet as doing it. (EDIT: Fixed) Marginally lower Overall Impact in the Foundation Establishment Bracket unless Rina counts in there instead of another bracket entirely for SPs, if she does count, then highest Overall Impact by quite a bit.

Parakoimomenos's Merchants:
Mission in a Nutshell: Identify the timeline of the Jingshen Doom Clock and how far it is from firing off with regards to the Qi Condensation bracket, Foundation Establishment seeks ultimately to set that timeline back considerably through sabotage of one of their major pieces of mining equipment.

Qi Condensation Good Seeds Listed as Doing This:
David Pupillus, Zeno Angelus, Paulus, Gaius Antonius, Aliki Floros, Peta and Wajo,

Foundation Establishment Good Seeds Listed as Doing This:
Magnus Centenius, Xiao Yingzi, Minervina Barda

Observations:
Solid Foundation Establishment Net Impact, but lowest Qi Condensation Net Impact--could use another Good Seed in the Qi Condensation Bracket with decent Impact or high Cultivation to smooth things over, but other than that, looks to be in good shape
 
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It's about that time again folks, and we're drawing closer to Missions and Fates being resolved--so a last minute reminder as to who's committed to what Missions is appropriate!

Observations:
Solid Foundation Establishment Net Impact, but lowest Qi Condensation Net Impact--could use another Good Seed in the Qi Condensation Bracket with decent Impact or high Cultivation to smooth things over, but other than that, looks to be in good shape
Is there an opportunity cost for going on missions? if not then I wouldn't mind sending Ulysses on the merchants mission, no impact IIRC, but he is in 8th heavenstage.
 
Is there an opportunity cost for going on missions? if not then I wouldn't mind sending Ulysses on the merchants mission, no impact IIRC, but he is in 8th heavenstage.

No opportunity cost, it just flavors your Fate results--in theory, we want to have a relatively balanced spread on our missions for safest results at least.

If you're strong enough, you can do Aid the Clan, which apparently makes your Fate Roll apply a modifier to your Impact at the cost of losing any benefits you'd get while suffering the penalties for bad rolls. It seems to be what's needed to get Triumphs and the like, but who knows how it works on the back end aside from "More Impact = Better"
 
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