Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 52 - Qiguai 2 - Opportunity
Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 52
[Turn 6]
[Qiguai 2: Opportunity]

They entered with strings of bronze connecting their arms. The realm beyond the doorway was one of shifting space and twisting seas. Like the fabled String of Ariadne herself, it would bind them together and let them find each other should they get lost in this foreign world.

Senior Corvina was in the back as the archer and non-combatant. Xiao Yingzi was next as the weakest in power and Senior Yahwen was second as the most-skilled. As the strongest of them, Antonius entered first.

That's when everything went wrong.

In the first moment everything was calm, as if they had caught the realm in a moment of laziness where it had forgotten to be dangerous. Then Brother Antonius took a step and he was torn apart in a storm of rending space.

Senior Corvina screamed behind her and Xiao Yingzi turned to see her pull as if to retrieve Brother Antonius before he fell. Xiao Yingzi stepped towards the Doorway but the ground gave away under her feet and suddenly she was falling down from the sky. A look towards the target saw it wash away in the twisting storm as if it was a painting exposed to water.

Something pulled on her arm and she felt Senior Corvina reeling her in with an expression of absolute focus. Senior Yahwen was pulled along with her, her face green from what she had just witnessed in front of her. Xiao Yingzi felt the pull of earth as the storm that had deposited them here disappeared, letting them fall to the ground as if it was never there.

Senior Corvina opened her mouth to scream something but the wind was blowing strongly and her words were undecipherable. Xiao Yingzi shook her head in response and she pointed to the ground. Ah. Xiao Yingzi turned towards Senior Yahwen who took a deep breath and readied her staff. She nodded at her, likely having thought of some way to survive the fall.

Xiao Yingzi's mind raced. First priority was survival. They hadn't built up much speed and while she had experimented with using her shadow for limited flight, the experiments weren't very promising. In this position, she would have to depend on Senior Yahwen to assist. She held up her hands towards her seniors and felt both of them grab her hand.

Senior Corvina tightened the hold of her string and locked her shoulder with Xiao Yingzi's. Senior Yahwen on the other hand, pulled them up to her back and Xiao Yingzi held on to her waist with one hand. She felt Yahwen's muscles shift and she brought her staff up before smashing it towards the ground.

A blast of air travelled to the ground and disrupted the wind beneath them, causing it to spin into a hurricane that pushed back upwards and softened their landing. Xiao Yingzi held on tight as they began to spin wildly before she sensed the ground beneath them and let go, materialising her shadow to soften the landing enough to survive now that her senior had slowed them.

Senior Corvina stumbled next to her and Xiao Yingzi heard a thump as Senior Yahwen's staff landed on the ground. She looked up in time to see her spin thrice on the grounded staff to bleed off her remaining velocity before she landed gracefully on the ground and turned to them. "What happened to Antonius?" She asked, addressing the senior next to her.

"I - I -" Senior Corvina stopped and took a deep breath, wordlessly held up her hand. In it was a large bronzed arm that was recognizably that of Brother Antonius. Senior Yahwen began to pale. Xiao Yingzi felt a sinking feeling in the pit of her stomach and she forced it into her shadow, deciding that she needed her wits about her. "I'm using my strings to keep the blood and qi within it from fading, but we'll need to find him quickly. I don't know how long I can keep it up."

Senior Yahwen took a deep breath and settled herself. "We will find him then," Senior Yahwen swore with a determined expression. She looked around and then suddenly shivered all over. "Where… where are we exactly?"

Xiao Yingzi followed her gaze and let her own expression curl into a frown. Now that she had a chance to focus.... The qi around them was unfathomable. It felt like the power around them had no limits. Xiao Yingzi breathed in and felt her cultivation surge. She could reach the fourth heavenstage within hours. "Senior Sisters, is the Qiguai Secret Realm usually filled with the auras of Nascent Souls?" She asked, unsure of her conclusion.

Senior Corvina looked at her and then slowly looked around, her eyes wide. As she realised where they were, her breath hitched. "I think…. I think that we're in the Nascent Soul part of the Qiguai Sacred Realm."

"Is that even possible?" Senior Yahwen asked, looking around warily.

"Anything is possible here," Senior Corvina replied, looking shaken. "But this… this was unexpected even taking that into account."

Xiao Yingzi thought for a moment and considered their first priority. "Is there any way out?" She asked her, unsure when the Nascent Soul section of the Realm even opened. It had not been a factor in any of her plans.

Senior Yahwen looked at her and frowned. Then she looked back at Senior Corvina questioningly. "Is there a way out?"

Senior Corvina looked between the two of them. "I… I don't know."

Xiao Yingzi frowned, her thoughts swirling as she looked around for any solution. How would they survive? The mere attention of any being here could kill them. She felt her shadow react to the fear within her and she ate a Soulfang Pill in an effort to suppress it. She fed her emotions into the shadow freely as her bolstered will held her shadow in an iron grip. She looked around again and noticed that Senior Corvina had fallen to her knees and Senior Yahwen was looking around with wide, panicking eyes. She didn't have much time, she realised. The shock of the Nascent Soul auras was reaching her seniors.

Xiao Yingzi scanned the shifting and twisting seas, letting her shadow bloom with all the feelings welling up within her. She ignored the strange forest of giant weeds in the color of pink and red in the distance, she ignored the coral mountains and hurricanes of frozen water reaching up to the oceans in the skies. Then in the distance, on a stone hill - not coral, not ice but a proper hill small enough to easily overlook but also close enough to reach. At the top of it, jutted out a simple bronze pole with a red flag waving at its end. She recognised it from the clan's tongue.

MCLXXVIII

A grin forced itself on Xiao Yingzi's mouth but she didn't suppress it. If there was ever a moment where an expression of joy was not out of place, it was this one. "Look there." She said, pointing at the spear. "That is a legion standard."

"Holy Shit." Senior Yahwen exclaimed, a fierce grin splitting her face. The effect of even the slightest bit of hope was enough to bolster her spirits. Senior Corvina just looked at it with wide, disbelieving eyes.

Then a gasp escaped her lips. "It's real," She exclaimed. "Oh, by the Imperator. It's real." A chill ran through Xiao Yingzi's spine as the possibility of a trap entered her mind. But she dismissed it just as quickly. If it was a trap then it was one they had to spring. They hardly had any choice of ignoring something that looked too good to be true.

"The heavens have indeed overlooked our misfortune." Xiao Yingzi agreed. "Let us depart before we attract any attention." The first priority was moving somewhere safe and that was the closest they had. With an agreeing nod, both her seniors moved alongside her, both walking quickly but without the use of qi in the hopes of not attracting any attention.

As they came closer, they began to make out craters around the banner-pole and the sight inside those craters made them freeze. Two corpses lay next to the pole, long dead but still emanating incredible power. One corpse was that of an incredibly handsome man with a skin of bronze who even laying on the ground seemed… Xiao Yingzi frowned as a word forced itself out of her mind, even if she would never normally use it here.

The corpse seemed perfect.

She averted her eyes from it but still couldn't get the image of the corpse out of her mind. She shook her head and tried to ignore it. She didn't dare look at the other corpse, despite a desire to do so. She could feel it even as far as they were, like a hot flame that emanated bloodthirst instead of heat and a faint buzzing sound just at the edge of her hearing. When neither corpse reacted to their presence, they carefully made their way to the banner pole.

Senior Yahwen reached the pole first and though she hesitated at first, she reached out to grab it after nothing happened. As soon as her hands came close to it, the pole began to vibrate angrily like the buzz of a saw - as if it would take her fingers off if she dared to touch it. She froze at that and hastily stepped back, glancing at her and Senior Corvina.

"Yeah, that thing doesn't like me at all." She said, holding her hand as if it were burnt. "It's something related to your clan, isn't it? Try touching it, maybe it'll work."

Xiao Yingzi glanced at Senior Corvina and inclined her head. As the scion of the ancient Taurus family, she was far more likely to be recognised by an lost clan Artifact than Xiao Yingzi was. Senior Corvina nodded and gingerly reached towards the banner-pole. As before, nothing happened immediately but as soon as she got close enough to touch it, the spear began to vibrate far more vehemently than before.

Senior Corvina withdrew her hand in a flash. She stepped back and frowned at it for a moment before glancing at Xiao Yingzi. "You should try it." When she saw her unconvinced look, she continued. "It might be looking for some specific characteristic. You should try it."

Xiao Yingzi nodded and reluctantly reached for it. She paused just before touching it, expecting it to act the same as before but when it didn't react she carefully placed a finger on it. Nothing happened. She grasped it with her fist.

"Through Innumerable Deaths, Unshaken"

The words went through her mind like a lightning bolt and when she tried to move her hand, she found it stuck. Instead, a spark of qi rushed from her to it and like a flame burning away parchment, the spark spread through the pole revealing the same words written in the Old Tongue and many names carved into the bronze of the pole.

Senior Corvina leaned in to read the names. "Ignatius, Aeneas, Jove, Nicholaa, Ligea… these are all traditional names of the clan." She replied, eyes widening. Xiao Yingzi felt the touch of a foriegn mind. No, of hundreds upon thousands of minds, fragmented beyond recognition. Fragments of elder wills infused into a single banner standard in order to aid the next generation of the clan.

"I can feel the infused wills of elders within this spear," Xiao Yingzi said, as she felt them behind to whisper inside her mind. "I believe those names may belong to them."

Senior Corvina frowned at that and then glanced at the spear, her face twisted from extreme concentration. "The one thousand, one hundred and seventy eighth legion." She whispered. "I have heard of a legion whose elders infused their wills into their banner, granting the wielder and all those in a formation with them incredible coordination and battle prowess much like the Taurus clan's Labyrinthian Thread technique."

Xiao Yingzi frowned and lifted it off the ground. It came out easily and when she saw the edge of the pole, she realised it had been carved into the edge of a spear. The Banner-Pole Spear, some part of her mind whispered to her. She felt something change in the way the voices spoke to her and she found herself adjusting her stance with their advice. "I think… I can feel their advice and their insight for battle," She said out loud. "But I don't think I would be able to extend it to a whole formation."

Senior Corvina nodded, her stance loose. She wasn't a strong fighter, Xiao Yingzi realised but her form was still present more out of experience than any talent or training. Still, the way she twitched every few moments showed how sharp her perception was. "You probably need time to understand how to use it or just more power." Xiao Yingzi nodded, noticing how the act of explaining seemed to centre her.

"Now what?" Senior Yahwen asked, adjusting her grip on her staff as she glanced around nervously and very carefully not at the bonfire of bloodlust behind them. The staff wasn't the weapon she wanted, Xiao Yinzi could now notice. Her hands ached to hold a sword even if she would not dare do so. Even without that, her stance was excellent, perhaps the closest one could come to the insight granted by the spear.

She glanced at the corpse of the fallen clan member, knowing intuitively that he had once been the wielder of her spear. Whatever influence it once had on her mind was gone, the spear shielding her from it. "We should search through the corpse for items that may be of use." She explained. "I will not be affected by the lingering influence of it's dao."

At Senior Corvina's cautious nod, she knelt down and looked at the corpse properly. It was dressed in bronze armor of the sort that Ciao Yingzi was certain could beggar the clan as it was. In fact, she was certain if she could bring the corpse back she would have done more for the clan than any save the Archigetes himself.

She ignored most of the things that would have otherwise drawn her attention. She knew from the whispers in her mind that most of them were designed only for the person before her and that any attempt to remove them would be dangerous for her.

Instead, she reached for a pouch at the corpse's side. It was filled with various trinkets the Nascent Soul didn't particularly care for. She carefully retrieved it and opened it, revealing several items that were worth much but practically useless. After a moment's scrutiny, she retrieved the items that seemed to have any worth.

The first was a telescope carved from high-grade spirit. It was carved in the manner of an artist who needed something to keep their hands busy during their spare time. To a Nascent Soul, it may have been useless but by looking through and seeing how her Senior's auras shone she was certain she could find some use for it. A Soul Farseer, the voice in the back of her mind once more whispered.

She retrieved a delicate compass constructed of complex gears. A Taurus Divination Compass, she realised and the voice had a note of disgust as it recited the information. The compass pointed directly at Senior Corvina, who accepted it with an awed expression. A sense of disdain came over her and she sent it into her shadow, though the source of it concerned her.

When Senior Yahwen looked at her expectantly, making Xiao Yingzi frown. After a moment's thought, the girl retrieved a small bronze carving knife that she took hold of with a strange reverence. "It's… perfect." Yahwen said, seeming incredibly moved by the gift. "It's so sharp, I'm certain it could even pierce Core Formation."

Xiao Yingzi frowned and considered the sense of disdain she was feeling. She glanced at the tip of the spear, which had similar capabilities but some part of her considered it shoddy and hastily carved. Some remnant will of the elder who had wielded this spear? She shook her head, trying to clear the feeling when the sense of oppression in the air suddenly increased.

All three flinched at the sudden presence behind them and turned towards the corpse they had all been avoiding looking at. Though dead, a blood red spectre rose from the corpse and as hundreds of bees manifested around them, Xiao Yingzi recognised the techniques of the Devil Bees that harassed the clan for generations.

Neither she or any of her seniors could move, frozen by its sheer presence. The whispers in Xiao Yingzi's mind guided her to bite her tongue in hopes that the pain would free them of the influence of it's killing intent and activating her lifesaving treasure in the hopes that she might flee but before she could, a second aura bloomed as if in response.

Perfection.

That was his Dao. She knew it, dancing as it was in the back of her head but it was undeniable as the corpse stood again bound together by a remnant will choosing this moment to expend itself to save them. "Have no fear," The voice exclaimed, more thoughts in their mind and words in the air.

Their auras struggled, thousands of intricate bronze contraptions all linked in a web of incredible complexity faced millions and millions of blood-drinking bees moving with the primal strength of a single nascent will. She felt the blows and buffets of the fight as the man moved, striking many blows and she felt their conflicting auras snake into her flesh.

She heard a scream as Senior Yahwen crumbled like a marionette whose strings had been cut. Senior Corvina, shielded by the blood of bronze fared better but even she was on her knees blood streaming out of her eyes as she Saw far deeper into the auras of the Nascent Souls than Xiao Yingzi ever could.

Xiao Yingzi grit her own teeth as their power tore through her meridians, causing injuries that would take decades to recover from and likely stall her cultivation completely until they healed. She fed all of her fear and frustration into her shadow, then reached into the bag at her side for her life saving treasure in the hopes that she could escape.

Then the elder pushed the spectre away and their battle continued elsewhere, allowing Xiao Yingzi to collapse on to the ground unsure of what to do next. All she could do was listen to the whispers in her mind as they taught her the breathing techniques and meditation to slow the damage to her body and hope that the Elder returned to aid her.

She could hear and feel the battle that occurred, it's shockwave clear despite the distance and she extended her perception to her Senior Sisters, noting them injured but still clearly alive. Finally, after an unknown amount of time, she felt the battle cease and one of the fighters made their way back, their aura clear bronze. It was the elder.

He stepped down casually, as if the battle had barely been a struggle and turned his perfect bronze face towards her with a smile. "Greetings, junior sister." He said, kneeling down next to her. She struggled upright and he placed a hand on her, stopping her. The next moment, his qi flowed into her, the perfect emotionless qi she cultivated and brought her closer to perfection.

It healed most of her wounds and in the process, it greatly sped up her cultivation allowing her to quickly breach up to the sixth heavenstage. She breathed heavily from the change inside and stood up carefully, examining the changes to her physiology. Her physical motion was unimpaired but her meridians were still damaged, allowing her the use of qi but slowing her cultivation until they recovered.

She glanced at the Nascent Soul Elder in curiosity and he nodded in acknowledgement. "It irks me to leave a job half done," He replied. "But I only have so much power and I must help your friends as well. I prioritised your capability to move and the cultivation you gained as a side-effect should be adequate compensation for the meridian damage."

She nodded and bowed. "I am grateful for your help, Elder." Was he a Legate, she wondered? Or did he hold some other lofty title? Elder seemed the least likely to offend. "If I may ask,is it possible for us to leave this place?"

As the elder moved over Senior Yahwen, he nodded at her question. "For a Nascent Soul to leave themselves is impossible, but to push a tiny power like a Qi Condensation cultivator out the exit is quite possible indeed." He explained. "Once your allies recover, I shall expend the last of my will to send you out of this realm."

She nodded gratefully and as he healed her, he looked at Senior Yahwen curiously. "This auxiliary has such a peculiar bloodline." He said, turning to Xiao Yingzi. "Their entire bloodline is connected and the lowest empower the cultivation of the highest of their blood. Where did we find such vassals?"

Xiao Yingzi bowed. "In the Organ Meat Desert," She explained. "There is an entire minor power with nearly eight different bloodlines with a similar effect."

"Fascinating." He replied, before finishing his work. Senior Yahwen stood carefully, before jumping into a battle stance. The elder ignored her, moving on to Senior Corvina. Senior Yahwen looked to Xiao Yingzi and then relaxed, quickly moving towards her.

As the Elder stood over Senior Corvina, his lips twisted into disdain. "Of course one of that damned Ariadne's spawn survived." He said to himself. "And I see that she has re-acquired the compass I was studying. Well, no matter." As he healed her, the elder turned to Xiao Yingzi once more. "Tell me, girl. Have you heard tales of the great inventor Teleos who invented the Bronze Horse Formation? The Heaven-Deceiving Island? The great automaton Nemo?"

Xiao Yingzi frowned and shook her head. "Bah." He cursed, shaking his head. "No matter." As he finished healing her, Senior Corvina stood up shakily and he quickly gestured for her to move to where both Xiao Yingzi and Senior Yahwen stood. "Quickly now, before anything else notices the battle and appears."

At that, Senior Corvina moved quickly and stood beside them before she turned to the Nascent Soul Elder and bowed. "Thank you for all of your aid, Elder." She quickly said and both Xiao Yingzi and Yahwen followed suit.

The elder looked at them and nodded. Then his eyes landed on the Banner-Pole Spear. He sighed. "It is a shame I had to deface that banner with my quick and shoddy work and even the weapon I created wasn't enough to help me survive." He raised a hand towards them and nodded. "It will do however. Good luck, my juniors."

With that he pushed his aura into them and Xiao Yingzi felt space twist around them, as it had once before. Then she felt the senior's will bear down upon the world around, forcing them out of the Realm entirely. Then, almost effortlessly the world around them faded and they reappeared in the hall of the Qiguai Clan.

Xiao Yingzi heard a clatter as a Qiguai clan member jumped back, dropping what seemed like a book on the ground. Many of the other visitors looked at them curiously and then, noticing that they were Golden Devils almost hungrily. Guided by the Banner-Pole Spear, she hit it's butt on the ground and looked back at them with a steady look.

Seeing them return unhurt and clearly having gained much from the realm, many averted their eyes and the remainder seemed content to try and meddle with them at a later date. The Qiguai Clan members quickly recovered and made their way to them, both to question the and likely to attempt to extract a portion of their earnings.
 
I don't think that his goal is to attack heaven it's both to focused on what the golden devils and manual are known to want and completely unconnected to what his actions have been so far it's also to arrogant to be believed. It's to close to a con to be believed and impossible for him to do given the Devils at there height with multiple spirit severing cultivators failed and he's still a nascent soul.

If he has a greater purpose it almost has to be limited to the third sea and it needs to make the blood path and the death of mortals a needed part of the ritual and the only thing I can think of is something Thanos like I imagine he's going to reveal a blood ritual that relies on the sacrifice of all like to bring the third turtle back to life allowing the third sea to strengthen and grow over time. I don't think that's likely but I can't think of anything else.

I also don't think it's a coincidence that this visit happened right after we kicked our blood path rival into the mountains. The most likely reason is that we are getting involved in the great battlefield and he wants us to but out but I feel that old Cannibal is involved somehow. A nascent soul appearing isn't something that a leader would overlook and This sort of approach is both strange and tailored to Manual in a way that makes me nervous. It would make sense if he had waited until old Cannibal could tell him enough about us to make sure that he won.

If we say yes the desert is both far away and unimportant and he's acting through proxies which means that if splitting himself into two changes his signature at all people might have no idea he did anything until the spirit stones stop arriving and they can't refill there spiritual energy during a fight. Which will give him a huge temporary advantage in breaking everyone

If we say no he leaks the fact that we've been talking to him and that he's offering treasures to leverage us away from greater cooperation with the righteous powers in exchange for control of the desert and at the very least the jingshen will believe it and use it to damage our relationships with the righteous powers forcing them to reposition to stop the potential betrayal. At worst he wouldn't need to deal with our defenses and at best he wins.
For one thing, the Altar Lord isn't a Nascent Soul. He's been sending out Blood Path telepresence drones (made from people, obviously) to have magic Zoom sessions with Manuel - and those drones, which contain so little of the Altar Lord's being that a Will Fragment would look substantial by comparison, HAVE THE POWER AND PUISSANCE OF A NASCENT SOUL CULTIVATOR.

The Altar Lord is Dao Seeking, at minimum. I'd bet money on it. He's still in the Third Sea because the Demonic Altar is here, because everything left by the Soup Chef is here, and because Blood Path is well-established as being faster and cheaper than other methods of cultivation. Given the scale of time and the regions in question, it would be entirely possible for the Demonic Altar Sect to push at least one person up to Dao Seeking by now, and possibly more. It'd certainly explain why the Righteous assault on the Altar failed so spectacularly: the Altar Lord unveiling his Dao and aura alone probably scrubbed any Righteous cultivators who weren't at least at Spirit Severing.

As for bringing the Turtle Child back to life... just barely possible, but I doubt it. Demonic Soup Chef doesn't seem like he was the type to leave a meal unfinished. There just wouldn't be enough of the body left to use as a cultivar for some sort of resurrection/cloning gambit. At best, there's a blasphemous Blood Path turtlebomination gestating under the Altar or something, with a lot of the Sect's resources going toward feeding and shaping it. Still terrifying and potentially a means of 'enriching' the Third Sea's Qi, though, so definitely possible.

The other thing to consider is that the Altar Lord could absolutely be overestimating himself and underestimating Heaven here. He's presumably lived in the Third Sea all his life, and that could easily give him a warped perception of how powerful things can get out in the other Seas. A "mere" Third Sea Sect managing to topple the Celestial Machine isn't as ludicrous as it might sound, though. At the heights of xianxia power, it's usually more about weird gimmicks and video game glitch bullshit than DBZ Scouter ratings.

And remember, the Demonic Altar Sect has two allies which practice strange, esoteric, and deeply, deeply exploit-conducive Arts. The Noble Knowledge Sect has turned its territory into a trackless labyrinth in which Righteous armies dissolve like salt in water, and are noted as being able to manipulate Fate itself. Heavenly Time Shatter's name alone should make us very, very worried about what their techniques could be used to do when combined with Demonic Altar 'shortcuts' and Noble Knowledge R&D.
 
Altar Lord's being that a Will Fragment would look substantial by comparison, HAVE THE POWER AND PUISSANCE OF A NASCENT SOUL CULTIVATOR.
I think that you are underestimating just how much knowing some secret technique or legendary treasure can allow for specific neat tricks. Raw cultivation level is not the be all and end all. Assuming that just because he is doing a high level trick means that he must be a super high level of cultivation is just fear mongering. If he was Dao Seeking at minimum the war would already be over.
 
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For one thing, the Altar Lord isn't a Nascent Soul. He's been sending out Blood Path telepresence drones (made from people, obviously) to have magic Zoom sessions with Manuel - and those drones, which contain so little of the Altar Lord's being that a Will Fragment would look substantial by comparison, HAVE THE POWER AND PUISSANCE OF A NASCENT SOUL CULTIVATOR.

The Altar Lord is Dao Seeking, at minimum. I'd bet money on it. He's still in the Third Sea because the Demonic Altar is here, because everything left by the Soup Chef is here, and because Blood Path is well-established as being faster and cheaper than other methods of cultivation. Given the scale of time and the regions in question, it would be entirely possible for the Demonic Altar Sect to push at least one person up to Dao Seeking by now, and possibly more. It'd certainly explain why the Righteous assault on the Altar failed so spectacularly: the Altar Lord unveiling his Dao and aura alone probably scrubbed any Righteous cultivators who weren't at least at Spirit Severing.

As for bringing the Turtle Child back to life... just barely possible, but I doubt it. Demonic Soup Chef doesn't seem like he was the type to leave a meal unfinished. There just wouldn't be enough of the body left to use as a cultivar for some sort of resurrection/cloning gambit. At best, there's a blasphemous Blood Path turtlebomination gestating under the Altar or something, with a lot of the Sect's resources going toward feeding and shaping it. Still terrifying and potentially a means of 'enriching' the Third Sea's Qi, though, so definitely possible.

The other thing to consider is that the Altar Lord could absolutely be overestimating himself and underestimating Heaven here. He's presumably lived in the Third Sea all his life, and that could easily give him a warped perception of how powerful things can get out in the other Seas. A "mere" Third Sea Sect managing to topple the Celestial Machine isn't as ludicrous as it might sound, though. At the heights of xianxia power, it's usually more about weird gimmicks and video game glitch bullshit than DBZ Scouter ratings.

And remember, the Demonic Altar Sect has two allies which practice strange, esoteric, and deeply, deeply exploit-conducive Arts. The Noble Knowledge Sect has turned its territory into a trackless labyrinth in which Righteous armies dissolve like salt in water, and are noted as being able to manipulate Fate itself. Heavenly Time Shatter's name alone should make us very, very worried about what their techniques could be used to do when combined with Demonic Altar 'shortcuts' and Noble Knowledge R&D.
Altar lord is explicitly late nascent. If he was dao seeking he'd have taken over the region
Like, not even spirit severing can survive in the 3rd sea due to lack of qi
 
Given that historically, every single Spirit Severing elder to arise in the Third Sea departed the region within a comparatively short time to seek greener pastures elsewhere, I am deeply suspicious of any claim that the Demonic Altar Sect have a cultivator who's above even that level. If they did, then why are they even still fighting against a Righteous coalition with no members above Nascent Soul?

It'd be like having two little factions out in the middle of nowhere, where one is led by a handful of 'elites' in Foundation Establishment, and the other has a Nascent Soul. How long would that war last?
 
Yes if someone hits Spirit Severing I expect them to do a bunch of last actions to benefit their clan or sect than leave the Third Sea. Maybe leaving instructions on how to summon them in their time of greatest need.
 
To further expand on the idea that a neat trick does not have to mean super high cultivation.

Flying is an ability associated with Nascent souls does that mean that if you see a unknown someone flying you should immediately assume that they must be a Nascent soul? No because Nascent souls are really rare and tend to be known. If you see someone you have no knowledge of flying in the third sea it is more likely that they have a special trick that allows them to fly because although such tricks are really rare unknown Nascent souls are even more unlikely.
 
The Hidden Master trope stop working when you are above the minimum power level of the top players.
Mostly it is the fact that the hidden master trope requires different assumptions about cultivation. In the third sea becoming or maintaining a Nascent soul requires the resources of a nation. That simply can not be hidden. Now in other seas it might be possible for someone to reach the highest peaks of cultivation just by meditating in a cave for a few thousand years, but that is not the case in the third sea.
 
As for bringing the Turtle Child back to life... just barely possible, but I doubt it. Demonic Soup Chef doesn't seem like he was the type to leave a meal unfinished. There just wouldn't be enough of the body left to use as a cultivar for some sort of resurrection/cloning gambit. At best, there's a blasphemous Blood Path turtlebomination gestating under the Altar or something, with a lot of the Sect's resources going toward feeding and shaping it. Still terrifying and potentially a means of 'enriching' the Third Sea's Qi, though, so definitely possible.

The other thing to consider is that the Altar Lord could absolutely be overestimating himself and underestimating Heaven here. He's presumably lived in the Third Sea all his life, and that could easily give him a warped perception of how powerful things can get out in the other Seas. A "mere" Third Sea Sect managing to topple the Celestial Machine isn't as ludicrous as it might sound, though. At the heights of xianxia power, it's usually more about weird gimmicks and video game glitch bullshit than DBZ Scouter ratings.

And remember, the Demonic Altar Sect has two allies which practice strange, esoteric, and deeply, deeply exploit-conducive Arts. The Noble Knowledge Sect has turned its territory into a trackless labyrinth in which Righteous armies dissolve like salt in water, and are noted as being able to manipulate Fate itself. Heavenly Time Shatter's name alone should make us very, very worried about what their techniques could be used to do when combined with Demonic Altar 'shortcuts' and Noble Knowledge R&D.

People have already covered his cultivation stage at a Nascent Soul so it's clear that at the very least he currently isn't a spirit severing cultivator. Given he's a great circle his plan could involve his breaking through and acting in the short amount of time he has before he has to leave but unless his plan is to use the darkness of heaven to hide his breakthrough from his enemies we wouldn't have to worry about his plans. Luckily even if we refused we would be a low enough priority that he would use the time he had left in the third sea to crush the righteous sects instead of the desert.

I don't know if something like bringing back the turtle is possible but if he wants our help he would either need to convince us that we have no choice or that it's worth the blood paths depravations and there just aren't that many ways that would happen. Toppling heaven through evil isn't the sort of thing that reforms heaven so even if he thinks he can do it we wouldn't want him to be able to alter heaven. The turtle was my idea of something that would be considered worth it.
 
Rina Callista 32 - Trivial Things
Rina Callista
Trivial Things

"Haha! This is lovely! Magnificent! I'd even go as far as to call it Heaven-Defying" Scarletglyph tittered, raising one hand demurely to cover her expression.

The other was busy jabbing out at Rina with a pointer.

"I'm glad you approve?" Rina replies after a moment. "Is the poking and prodding really necessary though?"

"Oh, not at all, I've already completed my analysis" Scarletglyph grins. "But one must always keep up appearances, and it's curious to see how unusual things coming together create more unusual things that wouldn't exist on their own! To think, the Single Pillar method is a path towards manifesting the Dao directly with a pittance of power! I mean, ordinarily, the process of achieving a Nascent Soul requires a nirvanic rebirth of the Dao through the shattering of the Core, and when coupled with the supernal energies emanated by the newly created spirit, it allows that Dao to project onto the greater world--temporarily supplanting the greater Heavenly Daos with a new rule." She poked Rina in the forehead, sending the younger girl teetering back with a yelp "But it's all about brute force rather than any special trait of the Nascent Soul's Dao--certainly, my "Thrice-Times-Greatest" is a step up from the old "Swordglyph Body" I practiced before my own breakthrough, but it's still mostly about arrays and cutting." She wiggles her hand back and forth. "Definitely, in either case, I couldn't project my Dao fifty kilometers on a Foundation level Cultivation Base."

"The Archgetes said the same…" Rina rubbed her forehead briefly--and then the words caught up. "Wait, before?"

Scarletglyph's eyes shone, and she crossed her arms before her and puffed herself up with pride. "You are looking upon the Strength Purity Sect's newest Nascent Soul! Hall Master of the Disciple Hall!"

Rina blinked, and her immediate distress was picked up on, because her hair was ruffled out of its bun by the hands of a demigod. "Aww, don't get all scared, I'm still the same old Scarletglyph you ever knew, I just have the power to eradicate a country with a thought!" Her smile was radiant, but her eyes opened and her lips pursed together as she pulled some of Rina's hair up. "Goodness, this is lovely, why do you keep it tied up like that all the time?"

"It''s…" Rina's cheeks pink. "It's a tradition, and it's kind of embarrassing and awkward to talk about."

"But I love embarrassing and awkward stories!" Scarletglyph whines, running it through her hands. "I promise I'll only tell them to people who can laugh it off in good humor though."

"It's… Umm…" Rina's cheeks flush, and she adds. "It's… Well, I guess a bit more on the awkward part? It's a tradition of my household, once a Callista starts to cultivate, we don't cut our hair. We might lose a bit of it from time to time in a fight, but we try to let it grow out as much as we can." She flinches back as she tries to take some of it back. "Our blood's always been a bit stronger than average--comes with being able to trace our descent all the way back from the Sea-Conquering Army and all that, so just about every part of us can be useful in the right hands, you know?"

She frowns then. "There was a story, way back in the day--that one of our founders bore the Gold, and was besieged along with her children in a great tower, as the Collapse began. They were cut off from resupply and assaulted on all sides, no real chance to get out, and morale was running low. So she stood up, cut off her hair, and wove a great binding treasure out of it, strong enough to chain the attackers long enough for a sally to flee and reunite with the other Founding Families of the First Generation." She reached back, and glanced at one of the locks that had spilled out after the ruffling. "I don't really get to keep much--most of my treasures are either rented, donated, or expendable--my uniform and armor are no different, and it'd be pointless to grab a bunch of pretty jewels too, so my hair's kind of the one vanity I get to keep, and if the worst happens--at least someone who comes after me might be able to get something from it, you know?"

Scarletglyph's eyes were full of tears--it was unclear if they were feigned or not. "Good girl!" She pats Rina on the shoulder. "You're not nearly as much of an old maid as I thought you were! I was worried for poor little Xu Zhen for a while but even you have a pure girlish heart!" She pumped a fist. "I'm rooting for you! Soon as this war is over you need to tackle him and do XXXX and XXXXXXX"

"L… Lady Scarletglyph!" Rina protests, only to be shut down by the older woman's belly laughter. "Oh, you're just adorable Little Rina! I'd love to just swallow you up myself, but that'd be the height of rudeness." She leaned over in a conspiratorial fashion then. "That being said, if you ever feel you're being suppressed and put down in that Clan of yours… Well, door's always open."

"I'm… Flattered, but hopefully it doesn't come to that." Rina murmured. Taking a deep breath. "Actually, on that note--if you're a Nascent Soul now… What are you doing here anyway?"

"Mmm, public answer?" Scarletglyph muses. "I'm here to ensure that the Noble Devil Alliance plays by the rules, and keeps their own Experts away from this theatre of operations while we shuffle Glorious Strike over to another, more critical battlefield. So long as I stay behind the Fearless Line and don't project my power anywhere? I am technically not participating in this battle." He face darkens. "Privately? I'm almost certainly bait."

Rina's expression takes on a pinched look. "Bait? They're setting you up to die?"

"It's less 'Setting me up to die' and more 'Being willing to lose me if the gambit fails', a newly raised Nascent Soul is widely considered to be easy prey for others, unfamiliar with the nature of battle in the second Supreme Realm." One of her hands briefly rests upon the handle of the sword hanging at her side--one Rina hadn't seen before. "They underestimate me, I have made the study of Dao, Qi, and the Human Body into the cornerstone of my power, and it was necessary to achieve mastery in all three fields to even hope to achieve my breakthrough. So long as I remain on the defense, I am utterly confident in holding my ground for as long as I need."

She grinned--this time showing some teeth. "Did I ever tell you how I got my Daoist Name?"

"No, but I've heard." Rina nodded. "Scarletglyph the Sword Artist, who held against a tide of Blood Demons alone for seven days, breaking each of them with fist, foot, and sword alike. On the dawn of the eighth, she was besieged by three Core Formation Elders." Her expression grew stern. "They bid surrender, they offered a seat at their table--and she simply smiled, and activated the array she had drawn in the blood of her conquests over the last seven days."

Scarletglyph tilted her head, and nodded. "Close enough--suffice to say, my skill has only grown since that time. And my Nascent Soul opens up new options that were previously unavailable. Rest assured, I am confident in holding against anything short of the Demonic Altar Master himself--and I have a trick or two to surprise even him with."

She straightened up, and stretched luxuriously, yawning. "So! You and the other fighters don't need to worry about a thing. As long as Auntie Scarletglyph has tea here, the other side is going to play nice and keep it to a reasonable scale. And I have more tea than I even know what to do with."

"That's good to know." Rina relaxed, even if her hair was a mess now. "Are there any other movements I should be aware of on your end?"

Scarletglyph thought for a moment. "Mmm… Well, Seven Divine Saber Palace is sending a force here. I guess the threat of the Noble Devil Alliance finally got them to stop reserving their blades?"

Rina winced. "Is that going to be a problem for us?"

"It damn well better not be" Scarletglyph frowned. "I've imposed a moratorium on 'Exchanges of Pointers', and made it very clear that I won't be tolerating any infighting here. So I expect you to keep a handle on your own people as well."

"I have no intention of starting anything." Rina confirms. "That being said… If they decide to start disrupting the operations of my Legion--or attacking my patrols on flimsy pretexts…"

"Then you subdue them and bring them to me or Azurebolt" Scarletglyph commands. "I know, they're prideful beyond reason--but it's not entirely bluster, and they cling to their grudges deeply. I am not going to have a feud between the two of you disrupt the battlefront--understood?"

"I…" Rina begins to speak up, but shakes her head. "Yes Ma'am, I'll keep things under control."

"Good, and I'm going to have a talk with their own escort as well." Scarletglyph continues. "I will make it very clear the nature and degree of our cooperation, and that I don't want to see a revival of that old grudge spring up on my watch. Whatever our cause or beliefs, allowing the Demonic Altar Sect victory in this War will be a calamity for all the peoples of the Virtuous Flipper Region. Any who contribute to that potential victory will be executed without mercy."

"We're in agreement there, the Blood Path must always be suppressed." Rina straightens. "For their path is one that can only lead to the destruction of all."

"Good girl." The seriousness in Scarletglyph's features fades away. "Now, why don't you show me how some of that Single Pillar magic works, since I've got nothing else to do, I'd like to see if we can start unravelling that mystery."

"Ah!" Rina went tense for a moment. "Well, I can't do anything aside from emanate it for now, but I can show you a few examples here and there…"

Was she going to be a test dummy now?

Well, it could be worse, the War's in a bit of a quiet stage anyway...
 
Wondering about blood path Spirit Severing. They have to leave the 3rd sea, but I don't imagine that they are anymore welcome in the other seas then they are here.
 
The latest scenes with a mega-powerful Blood Path practitioner made me wonder about the direction we could have taken if we had specced for maximum personal combat power (instead of maximum Clan cohesion) during chargen. I think it would have been something like this build. I will do a negaverse Turn 1 for this alt-build when time permits.

[Y] Clan
(Taken to make us eligible to take "Elemental Bloodlines" and for the purpose of the "Eating family members" chargen options)

[Y] Blood Demon (Demonic Only) - Blood Demons follow the Blood Path - killing and absorbing the lives and cultivations of others, from mortals to other cultivators. They gain power rapidly, but are anathema to the Righteous Path. They are hunted relentlessly - their merciless and brutal natures mean they cannot co-exist with others. Still, they rise incredibly quickly and are threats to all.
(Taken so that we can eat people for quick boosts in power)

[Y] Smithing - Smiths forge weapons, armour, flying swords, and storage rings. A straightforward way to make money - you mainly require precious metals, Spirit Beast bones and horns, and Spirit wood of various kinds. This increases your combat prowess directly as a Clan/Sect - your Qi Condensation juniors will find it easier to beat others in the same realm. The moneymaking potential is medium.
(Taken as this boosts our personal combat power the most amongst the available income-making options)

[Y] Demonic - Demonic cultivators have no such limitations. They tend to be more powerful, but disdain co-operation, seeking only to maximise their power. They are mostly suppressed by the Righteous Path, but individually the average Demonic Clan or Sect is more powerful than their Righteous counterparts. Their lack of co-operation however means they spend as much time fighting each other as Righteous cultivators.
(Mandatory for Blood Path)

[Y] Body Rejuvenation Herb - You swallowed this herb ten years ago. It rejuvenates you incredibly quickly, meaning if you do not die in fight, you will soon be back. Offers more combat options in times of troubles for you personally.
(Costs 1 Shiny, offers direct boost to personal combat power)

[Y] Ice Volcano Spear - A magical spear you obtained in a Secret Realm. While it can only be thrown once, it allows you to defeat any cultivator in Nascent Soul in a single blow. It would even let you escape from a Spirit Severing cultivator - if only for a few moments.
(Costs 2 Shinies, taken so that we can go forth to use it on the most powerful enemy Nascent Soul in our Region, eat that Nascent Soul and effectively trade the Spear for a permanent boost in personal power)

[Y] Secret Alloy Recipe - Your smiths can forge a superior alloy to normal Spiritual Steel, making your weapons more valuable and more powerful, your armor tougher. A valuable secret.. but one others would want to steal.
(Costs 3 Shinies, taken so that our personal equipment is stronger)

[Y] Elemental Bloodline (Clan ONLY) - Your clan carries a powerful Elemental bloodline, allowing you to cultivate more quickly and gain more strength. Such clans are rare, but stand above the common muck. Your clan members are valuable, however - not only to you, but to Demonic cultivators who would happily use them to refine pills and absorb their powerful constitutions.
(Costs 5 Shinies, taken so that we can more efficiently eat our own clan members for enhanced power boosts)

[Y] Enemy - One Sect or Clan hates you, and wants you destroyed. They are of average strength. Simple enough, but quite dangerous.
(Gives 2 Shinies, taken because everyone already hates Blood Path anyway)

[Y] Great Enemy - A major enemy with cultivators in the Great Circle of Nascent Soul seek your death.
(Gives 4 Shinies, taken because we can insta-kill their most powerful Great Circle Nascent Soul with our Ice Volcano Spear, eat that Nascent Soul for a power boost, and then attack and eat the rest of our enemy clan / sect)

[Y] Spirit Severing Enemy - An enemy seeks to destroy you, and their cultivation is in the Spirit Severing Realm. Annihilation is nearly certain without some way of protecting yourself. Thankfully, their tribulation left them badly injured, so you have two hundred years to prepare...
(Gives 5 Shinies, taken because a max-combat specced Blood Path with 200 years of prep time and eating-people-time should be sufficient to grow into Spirit Severing ourselves)

Firstly, where are you located?
[Y] The Green Scale Plains.
The sea is the best source of cultivation energy, and the Green Scale Plains absorb energy from the sea readily. Plains powers tend to have better Qi access, better herbs and farms, and far, far more people per li squared. However, your defenses are weak, and soft living means individually, your disciples are fairly weak. You will primarily cultivate using Spirit Qi.
(Blood Path wants the highest possible population for consumption purposes)

Secondly, how do you deal with mortals under your rule?
[Y] Consumption (Requires Blood Demon Path) -
Mortals are to be consumed. To be slain. To become part of you, something greater. Who cares for their mewling? Let them be honoured to be rungs on your ladder to immortality.
(The only possible choice for Blood Path)

Lastly, how do you treat your subservient clans and sects in your region?
[Y] As Enemies - None but you are fit to rule. Lesser sects and clans are driven out, mortals bow to you alone. Mines and herb fields and beast cores, all belong to the clan. You brook no compromise in this.
(The most fitting choice for Blood Path)

You treat outsider cultivators...
[Y] As mercenaries
+ Very high cost to hire wandering cultivators, cannot induct them into the clan except in rare circumstances
- Betrayal likelihood non-existant
(The most fitting choice for Blood Path)

What manner of disciple do you prefer?
[Y] Loyalty -
Choose the most loyal, the most obedient. The least likely to question your will.
(So that they are least resistant and most accepting of their fate of being eaten by us)

You climbed the cultivation ranks
[Y] Heaven-Defyingly
Start at age 300. You reached Nascent Soul at the age of 150, an absurd speed. All of the Core Formation Elders are significantly older than you, usually around 500 or so. You will continue to cultivate at tremendous speed, however, your cultivation speed left you with no time to practice administration, intrigue, and even combat. You are terribly ineffective at most of these things compared to your peers. If there were any other Nascent Souls in the clan you would be secreted away to continue your progress, not given real authority.
(This maximises growth rate of personal combat power)

You ascended to the position of Clan Head after...
[Y] Eating the previous Clan Head, who was your father
Your father was raising you and your siblings to be eaten by him in a grand ritual. You managed to distract him at the right moment and eat him before he could eat you. Now all your other siblings want to eat you because they too were scheming to eat your father.

Your personal talent is...
[Y] Eating - You gain even more cultivation than other Blood Paths from eating people.

Your personal weakness is...
[Y] Gourmet Cuisine - You would never stoop to eating raw meat, and insist on cooking your meals finely before eating them. What are you, some kind of savage?

Your family...
[Y] Is alive.

Your parents, of course, are long dead. Your father ate your mother, and then you ate your father.
However, you have ten siblings, and forty nephews and nieces, as well as twelve great-nephews and nieces! Your family members are known throughout the Clan for being delicious and nutritious. You are very protective of them, and make sure that everyone knows your family members are reserved for your own palate.

Lastly, your old master passed down a Dao to you, a path to follow. One that led you to this place, to this power. What was it?
[Y] Dao of Consumption
Eat. Eat. EAT!
 
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Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 53 - [Turn 6] [Qiguai 3: Division]
Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 53
[Turn 6]
[Qiguai 3: Division]

As can be expected, slipping into the Nascent Soul part of the Qiguai Clan Secret Realm was something that got greater scrutiny than simply braving the Qi Condensation part of it. It certainly gained the three of them attention from the upper ranks of that clan. Within minutes of their appearance, Xiao Yingzi and her seniors found themselves escorted to a private room away from the Doorway Hall.

They were summoned before a Doorway Supervisor in the Great Circle of Foundation Establishment so that the Qiguai Clan could gain information on their experience. It was a tremendous opportunity - a chance to negotiate to keep more of the items they had collected from the Nascent Soul Teleos' corpse or simply gather advantages for a future trip to the Secret Realm. Things like knowledge or limited special treatment may well have been on the table.

Unfortunately, her seniors were not cooperating.

"I apologise Senior, but we don't really have the time to sit and talk." Senior Corvina explained as soon as she got a chance to speak. She did not take the seat offered to them by the Senior Cultivator, instead just fidgeting in impatience. Xiao Yingzi wanted to frown, but the whispers from her new spear convinced her otherwise. They needed to present a united front, even if she wasn't quite sure what her senior sister was planning.

The supervisor raised an eyebrow. "Are you certain?" He asked, looking them over carefully. "While we will not force you to, it will be advantageous for you if you cooperate. We are even willing to waive a significant percentage of the tax if the information you provide has enough detail."

Senior Corvina considered it for a moment before glancing at Senior Yahwen and Xiao Yingzi for support. The former swordswoman gave her a thumbs up and Xiao Yingzi gave her an encouraging nod. Senior Corvina turned back towards the supervisor and took in a deep breath. "I am willing to provide you with my memory of the event in a jade slip," She replied and Xiao Yingzi found herself unconsciously taking in a breath. "However, I don't need the fee waived. Instead, we'd like a favor."

The supervisor leaned forward with interest. Memory recordings were detailed of course, but Xiao Yingzi knew that they were also not given out for a reason. They could be easily used against the creator by providing an insight into their thought process. For a golden devil like her or Senior Corvina, that was a lot of risk. "And what favor do you hope to gain from us?" He asked, his tone deliberately casual.

"I want to go back inside and I want you to have a medical team standing by." She answered, causing the Foundation Establishment Elder to pause. Xiao Yingzi frowned as she began to get an inkling of her senior's goal. The supervisor's eyes flickered to her expression, causing her to freeze.

"Well," The supervisor said, giving her a wide smile. "That can certainly be arranged."

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The process took ten minutes over all, barely requiring a moment's concentration for Senior Corvina to hand over a fragment of her memory to a Righteous Sect. They were quickly led into the Qiguai Clan Doorway, the hall of which had been quickly emptied as part of the deal. As the supervisor retreated, Senior Corvina and Senior Yahwen began to prepare - testing weapons and armor and ensuring that they weren't damaged.

Xiao Yingzi stood a distance away, unmoving and simply considering her move. "Senior Sister, may I ask why we are venturing back inside the Secret Realm after the harrowing encounter we have just been through?"

Senior Corvina didn't look at her, instead simply inspecting an arrow and making sure that it was still functional. "Antonius is alive." She explained, gazing at the tip of the arrow. "I can feel it. With his arm with me, I should have a good chance of tracking him down and bringing him back to safety."

Xiao Yingzi considered that. It made sense and seemed to have a large chance of success. "I see," She replied with a nod. "I wish you success on your journey."

Senior Corvina paused and then turned to look at her in full. "You aren't coming?" She asked, looking at her carefully. Senior Yahwen paused and turned to her as well.

"Wait, what's this about you not coming?" Yahwen asked her with a frown.

Xiao Yingzi turned to her and gave her a slight nod. "I don't believe I should go."

Yahwen tilted her head in confusion. "You should be more than strong enough now to make it through and all of our injuries are pretty minor. Why aren't you coming?"

Xiao Yingzi held up her spear and planted it to the ground, hearing the whispers in her mind fill her with their wisdom. "I have gained what I came for," She answered. "While the loss of Senior Antonius is regrettable, I don't believe trying to retrieve him is worth the risk of losing my life."

Senior Yahwen's face turned blank and her stance shifted subtly, in a way that the voices told her indicated rising anger. "Are you saying that Antonius… isn't worth the risk?" She asked, voice dangerously low.

Xiao Yingzi tensed in preparation for a battle. She was certain that as she was now, she would be a match for even Senior Yahwen now but things devolving into combat was hardly ideal. "I apologise for my careless words," She said quickly. "But we all signed up for this with personal goals in mind and we all accepted the risk of death and injury. I have achieved my goals and I do not wish to take the same risks again."

Unfortunately, those words only seemed to incense her further. For a moment, Xiao Yingzi considered fleeing when Senior Corvina placed a hand on Senior Yahwen's shoulder. "She's right." She replied with a sigh. "It's her choice."

Yahwen looked at Xiao Yingzi for a moment before turning away in disgust. "Fine, Whatever." She went to sit, some distance away and began to re-adjust her armor with quick, forceful movements.

Senior Corvina gave her an apologetic nod. "Are you sure you don't want to come? It would be nice to have you and you'd also get a chance to test out your new spear."

Her presence would certainly increase the odds of success, however… Xiao Yingzi shook her head. "Tell Senior Antonius thank you for all of his help." She said instead. "If you find him at least. I do hope you do."

Senior Corvina sighed. "I'm honestly not sure when or if we'll make it back…" She replied, shaking her head in bemusement. "But I have to do this or I won't be true to the kind of person I want to be."

She wouldn't be perfect. A suspicion rose inside her mind but Xiao Yingzi pushed it aside. It wasn't her business anymore. "I wish you the best of luck, Senior Sister." She said with a bow. "Thank you for all the aid you have given me."

Senior Corvina nodded, and Xiao Yingzi could sense the movement in her aura, sharpened from simply touching her new Soul Farseer. "You are very welcome." She replied, before pausing. "Oh and since it's a bit difficult to know when we will return, it's best if you return on your own." She glanced at Senior Yahwen who seemed to be trying to strangle her armor with it's lace. "Best for various reasons."

Xiao Yingzi raised her head and glanced at Senior Yahwen for a moment. It probably wasn't ideal to linger longer. She looked at Senior Corvina for a final moment, and took in the complicated smile she was giving her.

She felt a weight in the pit of her stomach. With a thought, she shoved it into her shadow and suppressed it's reactions easily with the strength of the Banner-Pole Spear in her hands. With that done, she took a deep breath.

Xiao Yingzi then nodded, turned and left.
 
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Rina Callista 33 - The Blade Pact
Rina Callista
The Blade Pact

The Fearless Line was said to be the final line between calamity and victory in the great Demon Annihilating War, the place where Destiny gathered and the greatest Heavenly Geniuses matched wits and crossed hands with one another. Righteous and Demonic Chosen rose to glory as the pinnacle of their Sects--and died to feed the legend of greater experts.

The truth of the matter of course is that this is merely one theatre of several in the greater Demon Annihilating War, noteworthy chiefly by the heavy influence of the younger generation within it as leaders and generals instead of mere officers as they might be in a more intense front. If only because they are beneath the efforts of one of the Nascent Souls that stand on reserve on both sides of the battle lines. For the Song Empire stands as the final line of defense before the mighty Strength Purity Sect's own holdings--as well as as the last defense line before the Colossus Footsteps Pass--and the tide of Spirit Stones that powered the Righteous Coalition's arrays and artifacts, permitting them to oppose the Noble Devil Alliance's terrible momentum without giving ground.

In the end though, to call forth the banners of the Coalition, one must entice them with suitable benefits to risk their lives when their own homelands are not under immediate threat.

"You'd think that they'd just realize that stopping the tide here means that their homelands won't be in danger in the first place" Millet quipped. "But in the end, short-sightedness always wins out over foresight."

"It can't be helped" Bright Iron shrugs--while still bearing some bandages from the previous battle, he had recovered much of his fighting strength--and had proven it in the recent days as he brought low a group of Qi Condensation raiders with a carefully aimed blow of his hammer, creating a crevasse that swallowed them whole. "With the Devil Bees still busy devouring themselves, they're due to enter an active phase in the next few years--everyone down South is busy securing their domains and bracing for that--especially if they manage to come up with another of those Killing Formations."

"I certainly hope not" Rina's brow furrows at the reminder. "We lost a lot of good people when that stinger came out--if it wasn't for Old Gold's foresight, it might have been him to take that blow, and we'd be finished."

The group of friends were gathered within Xu Zhen's tent in one of the rare moments of peace and rest since the campaign had begun in earnest. As had been hoped, the spears and shields of the 302 Legion were sufficient to balk the raiders of the Noble Devil Alliance--fifty Centuries distributed in a staggered pattern, with overstrength Hoplite groups occupying the many mortal run towns throughout the region, with Cataphract groups serving as outliers and fast response teams and a reserve of Eagle Formation troops responding to distress calls.

When coupled with Xu Zhen's clever schemes, Leafpiercer's bandits, Millet's divinations, and Bright Iron's engineering talents, the steady retreat of the Righteous Coalition's retreat had halted, leaving them dug in with their backs to the Line, holding despite the seemingly endless tide of cultists and sorcerers.

"We're still not winning though." Xu Zhen muttered, tapping one finger on the battle map. "Not losing is an achievement, yes, but as long as the Noble Devil Alliance remains a formalized thing, we can't count on time being our ally like it traditionally is." He moved the pieces together representing the enemy organizations. "Blood Altar can exploit openings and build momentum, Noble Knowledge provides peerless tools and intelligence to the coalition, Time Shatter brings their mysterious arts to force openings, and the Gao Clan ensures that our casualties are slow to recover. If they're restraining themselves, it's only in preparation for a deathblow."

"But if we simply ignore them, they'll take advantage of our carelessness to strike at the people." Leafsplitter concluded the line of thought. "Damn, but they have us in a headlock."

"Which means that the best solution remains getting more cultivators in our camp." Rina taps the pieces representing the allied powers, her fingers lingering briefly on the purple colored emblem of the 302 Legion. "How are the negotiations going?"

"Better than I thought, worse than I hoped." Xu Zhen tilted his head. "Jingshen is a write-off as usual. Even if they sent us soldiers, they'd be little more than cannon fodder. Bear Enslavement's freed up some breathing space on their front, but the best they can do is a few hundred Bear Riders."

"Having good cavalry is better than not having it." Bright Iron tries to look on the bright side. "And the Bear Enslavement Sect's heavy cavalry is the finest in the Region."

"Which is why I'm not calling it a disaster." Xu Zhen gestures for silence. "The Divine Tunists are sending a group of zither masters to inspire and encourage us, and the Divine Drunkards are sending some of their special wine up our way."

"How does that help?" Rina tilts her head quizzically at that, only for Bright Iron to smirk. "It stimulates your potential and allows you to cultivate even in the middle of battle. They're sending some of their best liquor-makers as well to keep our supply up, so that fighting won't have to come at the cost of cultivating."

"Useful enough for enticing experts" Rina considers the applications after a moment, and nods. "And since that's what we need the most…"

"Yeah, it should help shake loose some fence sitters, and the brewers should have the ability to secure a territory themselves." Xu Zhen confirms. "As for the Saber Palace…"

The discussion is interrupted as a cultivator bearing the colors of the Strength Purity Sect bursts in through the tent flap, dropping to a knee and saluting. "Reporting!" He shouted. "The Saber Palace's contingent has arrived!"

Xu Zhen frowned. "Sooner than expected." He muttered, rising to his feet. "Right folks, lets go greet them--united front and all that."

"They're not seriously going to try and pull something here and now, are they?" Rina asked, bewilders. Millet snorted. "They totally will." She confirmed. "The two Great Pillars of the Righteous Path. In the North, Strength Purity, in the South, the Saber Palace." Millet snorted in disdain. "In practice, they're not the match of the Strength Purity Sect, but they still stand supreme among the jokes in the Verdant South. If they have a chance to throw their weight around, they will absolutely take it."

"Which is why this deployment of theirs is unusual." Bright Iron taps his hand on the grip of his hammer. "The Seven Divine Saber Palace doesn't like committing their juniors to battle unless it's under the direction of their seniors. That they're investing heavily in a battle of juniors is…"

"Concerning." Leafsplitter agreed. "But one can't be choosy when offered a lifeline."

"Mmm, there's too much at stake." Rina agreed. "We'll just have to deal with whatever happens, and go from there."

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The courtyard of the Pavillion was ordinarily a grand, sprawling thing--a place where experts could refine insights gained in combat to advance their respective Daos in honorable combat. With the moratorium on duels imposed by Hall Master Scarletglyph however, it had been left largely deserted--save as a place to pass through on the way to another section of the forward base.

Not today.

On this day stood three thousand Cultivators, clad in sleeveless vests and trousers, to better reveal the whipcord muscles and conditioning brought on by years of harsh training in the toughest conditions. Bands of silver wrapped around their forearms, one for each century of active service they held.

Each was no less than the Sixth Heavenstage of Qi Condensation, and their auras were tightly condensed, leaving nothing to leak save for a trace of Saber Intent.

The strongest were in the middle and late reaches of Foundation Establishment--and at the front of the line stood one young--appearing man, bearing two silver bands on his forearms, and a circlet of gleaming spirit steel adorning his brow. He was a rugged, fierce figure, and even Rina felt a hint of threat from him.

Each expert of the Saber Palace carried a hand-forged blade, single-edged one and all--but the man who stood at the front was different, the blade strapped to his back a thing of terrible power, barely contained within his scabbard--less resting and more seething, waiting for the moment it could draw blood again.

He snorted dismissively. "Xu Zhen, the Strength Purity Sect must be in dire straits indeed to put you in command of this."

Xu Zhen waved back. "Fang Tai, I'd say it's a pleasure, but…" He shrugged haplessly. "Well, we're both busy men, and there's plenty of fights for the both of us."

"Hah!" Fang Tai smirked. "Same old trickster you've always been--such acts are just a distraction from the true path."

"Eh, it's worked well enough so far" Xu Zhen reached up with a pinky, picking through one of his ears. "Very nearly bagged a pile of Chosen a few months back too."

"Close only counts for mortals and demons." Fang Tai retorted. "If you had a chance to kill them, you should have had the resolve to do it." He turns his gaze to the other members of the retinue, and sneers. "A washed up loser, a common blacksmith, a treacherous witch, and a devil that thinks they can cross the Mountains unpunished."

The blade at his back rings, and a hint of golden alloy shone in the sun where the edge was exposed. "I could certainly clean up for you though, it'd only take a second."

Xu Zhen met his gaze without flinching. "Well, if you want to break Scarletglyph's peace by attacking volunteers… I'm sure she'd be happy to advise you."

Fang Tai's grin grows. "Oh, I'm sure she's made noises here and there, but is she really going to declare war on my Seven Divine Saber Palace by executing me? At a time like this?" He snorts. "Dream on, at worst, I'd have to spend a few weeks in secluded meditation, and then they'd let me out to pick up the slack."

Xu Zhen nodded. "Well, it sounds like you've got this whole business all figured out then." He gestured with one hand towards the group. "That certainly squares away Master Scarletglyph, so how do you intend to avoid me tearing your spine out?"

Fang Tai paused, and his eyes flickered. "Tch" He spits. "This whole area's your territory already, isn't it?"

"I make a point of stacking the deck when I can." Xu Zhen smiles. "So, now that we're done the posturing. What are you offering, and when can you begin."

"My Blade Pact is made up of the best and brightest of their generation" Fang Tai boasts. "Three thousand strong, all capable of jumping small realms to fight." His blade retreated to its scabbard, and the sense of threat that filled the courtyard faded into the background. "I'll bring them into enemy territory and slaughter them for a while, I think."

"Sounds like a good way to get you and your people killed" Xu Zhen comments, his cane tapping on the ground. Fang Tai scoffs. "If they can't keep up, that's on them for not keeping up with their training. I refuse to be caught up in a stalemate because you're too conservative to tear their heart out."

"I wouldn't call it conservative, to prioritize the people under our watch over taking the heads of interchangeable Blood Path cultists." Xu Zhen retorts. "Simply taking heads won't hurt their foundation."

"And spending all of your time on the defensive will?" Fang Tai shakes his head. "No, that simply cedes the initiative and allows them to gather strength." He turns aside, a mantle at his back blowing back. "Keep your dregs out of my way, and watch me win this war for you."

He raises a clenched fist, and as one, his fighters turn and march out of the pavilion, towards the battle-lines. Xu Zhen and the others watched as they left.

"... Awful arrogant." Millet whispered.

"He has the right to be," Xu Zhen replied. "He's the last son of the Nascent Soul elder who was slain when the Devil Bees launched their last great incursion. That blade of his belonged to his father."

"That's absurd…" Leafsplitter shook his head. "A Nascent Soul treasure in the hands of a Foundation Establishment junior? How has nobody taken it from him?"

"His father put his Will inside it, while dying of poison from the wound he suffered." Xu Zhen confirmed. "And since the weapon was special to begin with, it can deliver a blow capable of seriously injuring even a Nascent Soul--who's going to put themselves at that level of risk for a weapon that won't cooperate with them in the first place?"

"That blade isn't normal…" Rina muttered. "Something's off with it, I felt like I was locked onto from the moment it began to leave the sheath." She shudders.

"What are we even going to do about him?"

"We work around him." Xu Zhen sighs, lifting his cane and dispersing the qi that primed his Array. "He has neither mercy nor patience in his heart for the weak, but his hatred of the Demonic Path is real, he won't pull any stunts on us when there's a target rich environment in front of him…" He trailed off and turned to Rina. "Just take care to not be in front of him, because he's right. He can't be executed because they'll go to war to avenge him if it comes to that."

"Noted, but that doesn't mean we should just let the people behind him die…" Rina says, biting her lip in thought. "We'll have to move something in to catch anything that flows around him."

"We'll work that out" Xu Zhen pats Rina on the head. "Still need to see who else crawls out now that we've gotten our War Merits up and running."
 
Aristoteles 'Aris' Kalokagathos 9 - They have passed like rain
Aristoteles 'Aris' Kalokagathos

They have passed like rain

Year 160

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A bright sun blazed above.

Waycastle Acrocorinth had changed over the last few decades.

Aris had seen it lying in rubble after the last trials. The great walls had collapsed inwards or had disappeared outright in most places. The streets had been torn up, holes at times as large as ten men dotting the orderly criss-cross of streets like pockmarks. Some of the squad buildings had been turned into redoubts and the fighting that was done over them had been painted clearly across their facades.

Now Acrocorinth was a splendid testament to the Clan's might once again. Its wounds had been healed, but the scars had not disappeared entirely. At least if one had the eyes for it, and knew where to look. The mortar of some buildings was entirely too white and new. The parts of the grand wall that survived the onslaught looked…worn, the Arraywork on them less crisp. Here and there a superficial blemish unnoticed by nearly all was an innocent-seeming testament to the terrible fate that had befallen the fortress sixty years back.

Now it was a hive of activity, shouting decani drowned out by the bustle of legionnaires running hither and to and mortals scurrying out of the way. A force almost equivalent to a legion mustering was paltry in the grand scheme of things, but it was an event notable for a Waycastle as relatively modest as Acrocorinth.

The muster for the contingent headed towards the Song Emprie and the Fearless Line had been called here instead of at Thrake. Thrake was too close to the border, and the Blacksmiths would more easily catch on to their movements. Pleuron…Pleuron had the aura of a sacred city – such a powerful symbol was wasted on such a modest and inconspicuous deployment as theirs.

He turned around and nodded to his ten subordinate decani and officer staff, waiting at attention.

Atiphates, his optio, stood almost seven metres tall. A rumbling giant of a man, cultivating an earth-aspected Body technique bestowed upon him by the Technique Palace, which made his fists as hard as marble. Ninth Heavenstage, and had been there for nearly fifty years now. He had given up on trying to break through, and was happy enough to live out his remaining decades in relative peace, and would – Imperator willing – offer up his life in the coming trials for the next generation.

His tessarius Thyrsis was almost the polar opposite. A diminutive pale-skinned man with only the most token traces of the Blood of Bronze. He cultivated an uncommon yin sword technique that allowed for particularly artful cutting and carried an old style curved sabre. A stellar administrator, but a decidedly average sergeant. The small man with the feminine voice had however insisted for some reason on a position as a Vanguard NCO, and Aris had ultimately not withheld it. The man was a viciously effective killer, even at Seventh Heavenstage and eighty years of age.

"We shall be over the mountains and breathing in that lush plains air in a week, men. The final few elements from other legions should be trickling in today, then we march. Enjoy the sights and smells of home now you still can. Dismissed."

Twelve fists thump breastplates and march off. He watched their backs as they headed back to find their contubernia. Each one was an extension of his will – if he said to march, they would march. If he said to die, they would cast themselves into war's hungry maw with fervour.

Some of them had been assigned to his centuria by legion command, ready-made NCO's dropped into his lap. Others had required a bit more curating. Pushing out the incompetents occupying the spot of decanus, giving promising juniors some more opportunities than others, drafting mission reports to be ever so slightly more favourable towards them, even outright larding their Contribution Points income with funds from his own account.

Amopaon and Derkylos, Polydora and Phylomedusa, all elevated by his hand out of the common muck. They were fiercely loyal – they knew they owed everything they had and were to him.

Yet he would spend their lives without a thought if the situation required it of him. He had done so before, and would do so again. He would mourn for a fallen Scion of Gold, regret losing a valuable subordinate and asset, perhaps even miss some trait of them or another. He imaged he would miss Polydora's enchanting singing voice, should she die.

Yet ultimately their purpose was to die, as it was of every soldier. He had the solemn duty of selling their precious lives as dearly as possible, but not tarry or be reluctant in doing so.

He had no illusions in this regard. His purpose too was to die, to prop up the ascendancy of the Clan as part of the fathomless mountain of Bronze-blooded corpses. Even the Elders were required to spend their lives at a moment's notice when the situation demanded it. Like sixty years ago, most of the clan's Elders were thrown away like a disposable asset to abjure a greater threat.

Glory in this death was nice. It made one more likely to be remembered. It advantaged one's still living family.

Yet it remained a trifle.

His father did not – could not – understand this.

His uncle Staurakios had been vaporised by lighting called down because of a desperate Thanatos gambit. No desperate last stand, not even the honour of looking your ultimate foe in the eye. Mere collateral to someone else's ploy.

Glory was nice, but there was little glory in death itself. And all Scions of Gold were intimate with death like few others were – it lived in their skin and on their eyelids, in their bones and on their breath.

There was only one way to buy some reprieve from death. Their Grand Elder was the axis on which everything turned. Nothing was worth his life. By being the sole being of their Clan to stand at Transcendent Nous, he had flayed himself of death's infested skin and donned a guise of glory, at least for a precious little while.

Yet Old Gold one day too would lay down his life. In exceptional circumstances, yes. Few situations would justify his death, even in a future where there were again multiple Nascent Souls among the Optimatoi. But he would lie down his life for the Clan all the same.

Spend the lives of others to buy time for yours to be spent by one even higher, whose life in turn will also be used, and so on. A self-eating snake of corpses, forever trundling on until there are no more lives to spend or Heaven is dead.

That was the principle and essence of duty. All the rest was embellishment.

How did anyone achieve anything lasting, let alone true victory in the light of that?

He looked over the mustering ground, some centuriones conferring with their NCO's, other squads hastily assembling, others already standing parade-ready for inspection.

Aris had leaped at the chance of going to the Strength Purity Sect, but he wasn't sure if achieving the immortal victory he hoped for would change all that much.

His dark thoughts must have been plain on his features, as a messenger waited hesitantly some ten metres away, pointedly looking at the floor – or at least everywhere but in his general direction.

She seemed relieved that Aris noticed her, as she made a little start and scurried forward, holding a small linen-wrapped parcel. The messenger was small woman – second Heavenstage. By the colours of her faulds – cream white and midnight blue with grey details – she was of the 632nd​, the Ferrymen of Phlegethon, now an Auxiliary Legion under centurio Prokopios Odaenalogos. Small, a support legion, specialising in logistics and transport.

"My apologies, honoured centurio. This arrived from the capital for you post-haste. I was instructed to ask you to take a look at it immediately."

He took the parcel and waved the messenger girl away. She bowed and scurried off.

Blue faded linen, with a simple hemp cord. It looked like it had been untouched for decades. The seal looked inconspicuous enough, if one didn't know where to look. Black wax of the Corpse Digger Bee. He knew only one person who had routinely used such wax and had had a steady supply – Staurakios Palaiologos, his uncle and former Head of Disciples of the Clan.

He projected a trace amount of Blade Qi along his thumb, and severed the blob of black wax. He felt the hidden trap Array pass through him with its poisoning Qi, before it grounded harmlessly – he was the intended recipient.

The parcel contained a heavy box, which was empty save for a small satin bag. Within was a single ring. His breath halted with excitement. A Storage Ring – he hadn't qualified for one yet, but if this was one that would be a great boon indeed.

This one was a simple bronze and worn with age. He slipped it on.

Immediately he felt something within the ring release and pervade him like a trickle of warm water. A small dam broken, its contents flowing freely. Then it was gone. Whatever it was, there was not a lot of it. A vague tingling sensation remained.

He probed the inside of the ring, and he felt as if he passed a tripwire, sending a jolt through his body this time.

His vision of Acrocorinth faded away, and before him appeared a featureless illuminated grey room with one figure standing before him. The impassive, worn figure of his late Uncle – glorious bronze skin covered with a thick layer of green patina.

He spoke in that characteristic neutral baritone he had only heard a precious few times in-person.



"Aristoteles. If you receive this missive, I have passed away some time ago, and one of my final gambits has come to fruition. Other members of my extended family have received similar missives as the one you are holding now. Because you are young and there exists a terrible fire in your heart, I however have reserved for you one of the most precious and precarious finds I acquired during my long life. The ring you now wear is but a paltry treasure compared to the true gift I have bestowed upon you.

Luck.

An extraordinary treasure – a very small amount of luck, acquired for services rendered to the Fortune Stork Clan centuries ago."


The corner of the figure's mouth briefly twitched upwards, in what would have been an explosion of mirth in another man.

"I myself had consumed most of it, but I was able to save a sliver in a storage ring, or so I'd attempted. Checking would have released it, so I know not – and will never know – if it was successful. You receiving this message confirms it was.

If it hadn't been, you would have received another message, pointing you to the location of a hidden cache in lieu of what you now received. That cache will now wait for another lucky finder – your treasure is much greater.

You have received this treasure at a moment where hopefully you are in good health and one of the region's Secret Realms has opened up – or so were my instructions. If either does not prove to be the case, I trust you to make best use of the luck you now have.

If you have received my boon according to my wishes, then I suggest you make your way to either Secret Realm post-haste. The luck will last you a month or two, three at most. Within the ring are a sealed and stamped writ of passage, stamped orders by my hand that state that your mission is of vital importance to the Clan, and one tincture made from the liver of a Thunder Basilisk. It should grant you prodigious speed for a few weeks. Enough time to make it your Secret Realm.

My apologies for the circumspect nature of this boon – knowing its true contents would have tempted a great many people even despite my precautions, it thus did not seem safe to divulge them."


The recorded image of his uncle briefly paused, the edges of his figure becoming blurry.

"A final word then to you, Aristoteles.

Your hunger, that terrible fire within you, will find itself constrained by the chains of duty at one point. If not now, then soon when the full weight of the Clan's expectations settles on your shoulders.

That duty will feel like a carceral binding that restrains every bone of yours in order to force you to walk in the outlined footsteps, threatening to break your body otherwise.

You need not love this duty, Aris. You must love what it protects and vouchsafes.

Nourish your fire, for it will become a terrible weapon against our foes.

Γλυκὺς ἀπείρῳ πόλεμος."




Then, Aris was back at the edge of the mustering grounds.

He looked down at the ring.

The Qiguai lands were about three thousand li to the northeast. Most of the land was open desert until the Soup Sect's Qi-Draining Mesas. On a sturdy jog, doable in a week. He didn't know how potent the potion was. Perhaps he'd manage in as little as a day or two. Every day counted with a boon as potent as this one.

Though – he'd better save it for the way back. Granted he survived the inside of one of the Region's most dangerous and potent Secret Realms, he would want to make it back in time to the Song Empire. Leo would take command of his centuria until then.

He closed his eyes and recalled that same stolid baritone of his uncle. Soothing in a way nothing else had been these last sixty years.

A mere hour later, he was dashing alone across the desert landscape, leaving a long plume of disturbed yellow sand in his wake, tracing a straight line across the otherwise undisturbed landscape.

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A/N
The luck bonus is actually this omake!
 
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Blood Path negaverse Turn 1, Part 1
The latest scenes with a mega-powerful Blood Path practitioner made me wonder about the direction we could have taken if we had specced for maximum personal combat power (instead of maximum Clan cohesion) during chargen. I think it would have been something like this build. I will do a negaverse Turn 1 for this alt-build when time permits.

[Y] Clan
(Taken to make us eligible to take "Elemental Bloodlines" and for the purpose of the "Eating family members" chargen options)

[Y] Blood Demon (Demonic Only) - Blood Demons follow the Blood Path - killing and absorbing the lives and cultivations of others, from mortals to other cultivators. They gain power rapidly, but are anathema to the Righteous Path. They are hunted relentlessly - their merciless and brutal natures mean they cannot co-exist with others. Still, they rise incredibly quickly and are threats to all.
(Taken so that we can eat people for quick boosts in power)

[Y] Smithing - Smiths forge weapons, armour, flying swords, and storage rings. A straightforward way to make money - you mainly require precious metals, Spirit Beast bones and horns, and Spirit wood of various kinds. This increases your combat prowess directly as a Clan/Sect - your Qi Condensation juniors will find it easier to beat others in the same realm. The moneymaking potential is medium.
(Taken as this boosts our personal combat power the most amongst the available income-making options)

[Y] Demonic - Demonic cultivators have no such limitations. They tend to be more powerful, but disdain co-operation, seeking only to maximise their power. They are mostly suppressed by the Righteous Path, but individually the average Demonic Clan or Sect is more powerful than their Righteous counterparts. Their lack of co-operation however means they spend as much time fighting each other as Righteous cultivators.
(Mandatory for Blood Path)

[Y] Body Rejuvenation Herb - You swallowed this herb ten years ago. It rejuvenates you incredibly quickly, meaning if you do not die in fight, you will soon be back. Offers more combat options in times of troubles for you personally.
(Costs 1 Shiny, offers direct boost to personal combat power)

[Y] Ice Volcano Spear - A magical spear you obtained in a Secret Realm. While it can only be thrown once, it allows you to defeat any cultivator in Nascent Soul in a single blow. It would even let you escape from a Spirit Severing cultivator - if only for a few moments.
(Costs 2 Shinies, taken so that we can go forth to use it on the most powerful enemy Nascent Soul in our Region, eat that Nascent Soul and effectively trade the Spear for a permanent boost in personal power)

[Y] Secret Alloy Recipe - Your smiths can forge a superior alloy to normal Spiritual Steel, making your weapons more valuable and more powerful, your armor tougher. A valuable secret.. but one others would want to steal.
(Costs 3 Shinies, taken so that our personal equipment is stronger)

[Y] Elemental Bloodline (Clan ONLY) - Your clan carries a powerful Elemental bloodline, allowing you to cultivate more quickly and gain more strength. Such clans are rare, but stand above the common muck. Your clan members are valuable, however - not only to you, but to Demonic cultivators who would happily use them to refine pills and absorb their powerful constitutions.
(Costs 5 Shinies, taken so that we can more efficiently eat our own clan members for enhanced power boosts)

[Y] Enemy - One Sect or Clan hates you, and wants you destroyed. They are of average strength. Simple enough, but quite dangerous.
(Gives 2 Shinies, taken because everyone already hates Blood Path anyway)

[Y] Great Enemy - A major enemy with cultivators in the Great Circle of Nascent Soul seek your death.
(Gives 4 Shinies, taken because we can insta-kill their most powerful Great Circle Nascent Soul with our Ice Volcano Spear, eat that Nascent Soul for a power boost, and then attack and eat the rest of our enemy clan / sect)

[Y] Spirit Severing Enemy - An enemy seeks to destroy you, and their cultivation is in the Spirit Severing Realm. Annihilation is nearly certain without some way of protecting yourself. Thankfully, their tribulation left them badly injured, so you have two hundred years to prepare...
(Gives 5 Shinies, taken because a max-combat specced Blood Path with 200 years of prep time and eating-people-time should be sufficient to grow into Spirit Severing ourselves)

Firstly, where are you located?
[Y] The Green Scale Plains.
The sea is the best source of cultivation energy, and the Green Scale Plains absorb energy from the sea readily. Plains powers tend to have better Qi access, better herbs and farms, and far, far more people per li squared. However, your defenses are weak, and soft living means individually, your disciples are fairly weak. You will primarily cultivate using Spirit Qi.
(Blood Path wants the highest possible population for consumption purposes)

Secondly, how do you deal with mortals under your rule?
[Y] Consumption (Requires Blood Demon Path) -
Mortals are to be consumed. To be slain. To become part of you, something greater. Who cares for their mewling? Let them be honoured to be rungs on your ladder to immortality.
(The only possible choice for Blood Path)

Lastly, how do you treat your subservient clans and sects in your region?
[Y] As Enemies - None but you are fit to rule. Lesser sects and clans are driven out, mortals bow to you alone. Mines and herb fields and beast cores, all belong to the clan. You brook no compromise in this.
(The most fitting choice for Blood Path)

You treat outsider cultivators...
[Y] As mercenaries
+ Very high cost to hire wandering cultivators, cannot induct them into the clan except in rare circumstances
- Betrayal likelihood non-existant
(The most fitting choice for Blood Path)

What manner of disciple do you prefer?
[Y] Loyalty -
Choose the most loyal, the most obedient. The least likely to question your will.
(So that they are least resistant and most accepting of their fate of being eaten by us)

You climbed the cultivation ranks
[Y] Heaven-Defyingly
Start at age 300. You reached Nascent Soul at the age of 150, an absurd speed. All of the Core Formation Elders are significantly older than you, usually around 500 or so. You will continue to cultivate at tremendous speed, however, your cultivation speed left you with no time to practice administration, intrigue, and even combat. You are terribly ineffective at most of these things compared to your peers. If there were any other Nascent Souls in the clan you would be secreted away to continue your progress, not given real authority.
(This maximises growth rate of personal combat power)

You ascended to the position of Clan Head after...
[Y] Eating the previous Clan Head, who was your father
Your father was raising you and your siblings to be eaten by him in a grand ritual. You managed to distract him at the right moment and eat him before he could eat you. Now all your other siblings want to eat you because they too were scheming to eat your father.

Your personal talent is...
[Y] Eating - You gain even more cultivation than other Blood Paths from eating people.

Your personal weakness is...
[Y] Gourmet Cuisine - You would never stoop to eating raw meat, and insist on cooking your meals finely before eating them. What are you, some kind of savage?

Your family...
[Y] Is alive.

Your parents, of course, are long dead. Your father ate your mother, and then you ate your father.
However, you have ten siblings, and forty nephews and nieces, as well as twelve great-nephews and nieces! Your family members are known throughout the Clan for being delicious and nutritious. You are very protective of them, and make sure that everyone knows your family members are reserved for your own palate.

Lastly, your old master passed down a Dao to you, a path to follow. One that led you to this place, to this power. What was it?
[Y] Dao of Consumption
Eat. Eat. EAT!


Blood Path negaverse Turn 1, Part 1

"Human resources exist to be consumed. And consumed they will be, if not by me then by my brother. By what right does my scrubby brother seek to deny me by birthright? None I say!

Let me take what is mine, chew and eat my fill. And then my brother goes in the pot too. Mmm, yummy…"

Chairperson Maw Chi Ren, "The EAThics of Greed"


You are Chairperson Maw Chi Fuqing, the latest head of the Mmm Tastes Like Pork Clan, in an unbroken chain of Chairperson Maws stretching back to the Clan founder Maw Chi Ren.

Well, "unbroken" in the metaphorical sense. In the literal sense, each preceding Chairperson Maw had been thoroughly and tastily broken in the teeth and jaws of the next Chairperson Maw to take the position.

Starting from Maw Chi Ren, who broke into the Blood Path after eating his neighbor, discovered the Blood is Thicker Than Water ritual that let the user gain more power from eating relatives who were also Blood Path users, and spawned a Clan's worth of descendants from his loins for the purpose of funneling power upwards to himself.

Maw Chi Ren also devised and formalized a series of procedures governing (a) which Mmm Tastes Like Pork Clan members could eat which other Clan members, (b) bloodline boundaries rendering Clan members inviolate from being eaten by other Clan members until official declarations of intent to consume were issued, (c) minimum moratorium periods between the issuance of a declaration of intent and the actual consumption during which the target could try to hide or counter-eat the declarer, and other such-like formalities to ensure that the Clan wasn't a free-for-all Maw-Eats-Maw situation and there was a certain level of self-sustainability and even growth in Clan numbers, so that Maw Chi Ren didn't have to recreate a Clan from scratch every consumption cycle.

And then Maw Chi Ren was himself consumed by a particularly wily and tenacious great-great-great-grand-daughter, who managed to give him lethal indigestion by dosing herself with Soul-Grinding Tabasco Sauce and counter-consumed Maw Chi Ren from the inside out.

Ha! Loser!

Just like that great-great-great-grand-daughter (whose name you can't recall and is, frankly, irrelevant) was in turn consumed by one of her descendants, and so on and so forth. A straight line of losers all the way up to your father Maw Chi Qizi, whose liver you ate in a tantalizing risotto with a scrumptious side of Seven-Star Fava Bean salad and a glass of Thousand-Century Egg Chianti.

Suckers and losers, each and every one of your predecessors.

Not you, though. You are the strongest, the fastest, the smartest and the bestest. You will reign in supremacy over the Mmm Tastes Like Pork Clan for all time, until the concept of time itself ceases and is replaced by the concept of Maw Chi Fuqing. First the Clan, then the Horny Beak Region, then the Sixth Sea, then the Emperor Turtle, and then the bigger turtle that the Emperor Turtle is probably standing on. You wanna be already are the very best, like no one ever was. To eat them is your real test, to cook them is your cause!

Cultivation Speed – Heaven-Defying

Age (Max) – 300 (??? You will live forever, by any means necessary)

Health – Terrible PERFECTION ITSELF!

Intrigue – Terrible MAGNIFICENT!
Administration - Terrible SPLENDIFEROUS!
Secret Knowledge - Terrible BRILLIANT!
Teaching - Terrible WHO CARES! IF YOUR JUNIORS CAN'T EAT, THEY STARVE! SUCH IS THE WAY OF LIFE!
Warfare - Terrible RESPLENDENT!
Combat - Terrible for a Nascent Soul, Boosted to Mediocre by the Body Rejuvenation Herb and Personal Equipment forged with Clan Secret Alloy INVINCIBLE!

Personal Talents - You gain even more cultivation than other Blood Paths from eating people.

Weaknesses – You would never stoop to eating raw meat, and insist on cooking your meals finely before eating them. What are you, some kind of savage? (You can't heal or gain power boosts from eating people mid-battle, unless there is a sufficiently long break in the battle for you to cook your meals properly.)

Family - Your parents, of course, are long dead. Your father ate your mother, and then you ate your father. However, you have ten siblings, and forty nephews and nieces, as well as twelve great-nephews and nieces! Your immediate family members are known throughout the Clan for being delicious and nutritious. You are very protective of them, and make sure that everyone knows your family members are reserved for your own palate.

Dao – Consumption.

Eat. Eat. Eat!
 
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Just noticed that this omake doesn't seem to be threadmarked. Can someone do threadmark it for me? Putting in right at the front is absolutely fine. It's numbered 28 I think but make it 54. I'll fix that in omake when I have time.
Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 54
[Report: XCVI Legion Internal Structure]
@Humbaba
You have to @ the right people if you want your Omake to boost your good seed.
What timing. See above for what would happen if you don't. :V
 
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Blood Path negaverse Turn 1, Part 1
Threadmarked

I don't think you have a good seed, so I've put it in at the end. If you do have a good seed please let me know and I'll reposition it.

Just noticed that this omake doesn't seem to be threadmarked. Can someone do threadmark it for me? Putting in right at the front is absolutely fine. It's numbered 28 I think but make it 54. I'll fix that in omake when I have time.

@Humbaba

What timing. See above for what would happen if you don't. :V
Done. Sorry we missed it before. :( I've put it as threadmark 54. Ping me after this turn and I'll fix it when I have time to edit and reorder 20+ threadmarks. :eek2::cry:
 
Done. Sorry we missed it before. :( I've put it as threadmark 54. Ping me after this turn and I'll fix it when I have time to edit and reorder 20+ threadmarks. :eek2::cry:
Don't worry about reordering it unless like it'll crash if it isn't in order. It's a world-building background thing that can fit anywhere in my omake timeline. (Though you did put it at 55, which you might want to fix.;))
 
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