Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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The concern now is whether Rina survives her tribulations.

I am not concerned, I have over sixty thousand words of content backing her on top of what will be three Tribulation Boosts.

The rest of the setting may be concerned, but Rina is getting to Single Pillar Foundation Establishment next turn, and my content production determines when next turn she reaches it.
 
Hope that we aren't going to see Old Jingshen, or some mercenary Nascent Soul, show up to surprise us. =/
Now that I'm not double-posting, I can post my idea for a gambit I thought!

Namely: Euphrosyne Sarantapechos didn't die after all. She merely failed to break into Nascent Soul, and became a False Nascent Soul. And so the Golden Devils put her into sleep/stasis/ensorcellment/whatever, to use her as a one-shot guided living weapon against Old Cannibal when he came to invade when the truce wore out.

That mountain? Full of the chromatic tribulation lightning that Manuel shucked off and sealed? That's not mere tribulation lightning. That's just a cover or camouflage for Euphrosyne's holding place.

(And then, of course, Manuel pulls the bait and switch; sucker, it really is tribulation lightning, not a Euphrosyne whose death we faked!)
So, okay, what do people think of this idea? That kind of got overshadowed by the rain of story updates suddenly arriving, but...

What do we think? We try to bluff Old Cannibal with a "Actually, Euphrosyne survived -- ascending to False Nascent Soul!" trick? Hence, the reason Old Gold is so confident in this is because he thinks he can 2v1 Old Cannibal.

Or some variant on that, anyway. Maybe we threaten with the possibility that Euphrosyne survived or was put in stasis or was quasi-controlled or chained in some way, or... Anyway. Maybe we just use the threat of it to affect the Blood Cannibal Sect's strategic deployment and movements for a while at first.
I am not concerned, I have over sixty thousand words of content backing her on top of what will be three Tribulation Boosts.

The rest of the setting may be concerned, but Rina is getting to Single Pillar Foundation Establishment next turn, and my content production determines when next turn she reaches it.
Ah. Excel sheet's different from your post then and needs updating. Your index post notes 2 Tribulation boosts, the excel sheet only notes 1.

Grats on the impending tribulation and progression tho'. Just one more turn and we get to see a 13-stage entrance into Foundation Establishment, and get that mystery/unknown/stuff revealed.

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Also, this is still like this @occipitallobe.
The Simmering Soup Sect had won the ability to trade away some of their more vital soups (especially the rare ones they made that could expand lifespan), but in return
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Wei Feng 13 - Interlude - Hualin Tales (part 2):
Wei Feng 13 - Interlude - Hualin Tales (part 2):

Set during Turn 6. Part one is here.

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Fang Shun's family had been guards for generations.

He was quite a good guard too. He knew who the biggest troublemakers were and where they usually hung out. He knew the identities most of the fences were and could occasionally lean on them to get valuable objects back even if he couldn't get all of them into a jail cell.

It was amazing how quickly items in the city could be "found" when it was realised that the alternative to the guard asking around was a bunch of angry cultivating caravan guards turning up to find their (or their master's) stuff. They tended to be inclined to take "I have no idea what you're talking about" as an invitation to wreck the place. A few examples (only some of which had been tipped off by the guard) had enabled a sort of occasional truce.

He didn't like it, but it got things back sometimes without the danger of uncontrolled fires. And if occasionally an item that had "been stolen off a cultivator" happened to belong to a widow who had been about to sell it and might starve otherwise? Well, no one needed to know.

But one of the most important lessons he'd been taught as a guard had come at his grandfather's knee. How to deal with cultivators.

The simple answer, of course, was don't. Unfortunately, the simple answer was not always available to guards. Which didn't mean there was a reason to get all your teeth knocked out and wake up to find your arms missing either. The general strategy was to wait until it was all over and then approach the caravan master who was employing them about compensation.

They were usually amenable. This was because if they stepped too far over the line, then the guard had another tried and true strategy that had worked for many years. Nod, walk away, and offer every other caravan owner a share of the goods from the offenders caravan in return for help dealing with these "wanton criminals". It had never been employed in the sergeant's career, but the threat hung over unsaid.

Otherwise, the only strategy the guard had to deal with them was to be as polite, deferential and uninteresting as possible.

In truth though, one of the great contributors to Fang Shun's rapid rise to the rank of Sergeant was his mastery of the skill of becoming blind, deaf and mute at will.

It was a skill he was employing to great effect on his assignment to "help" Miss Jia Dai find the source of the spirit beasts attacking the caravans passing through the city. Just today he'd so far failed to see: several gambling dens and a large amount of illegal gambling being engaged in by a number of caravan guards and some prominent local figures, a brothel that he was certain wasn't paying the appropriate taxes, several notables he absolutely did not recognise patronising said non-existent brothel, three people conducting carnal acts in public; and that thing happening in the corner. Which had been quite hard to ignore but deserved the extra effort for the sake of his sanity and keeping his lunch down.

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Jia Dai was somewhat pleased with her day's work.

She'd spent a relatively pleasant morning gaming with some of the guards from the other caravans, getting a better idea of the area and the variety of the typical local threats. She'd spent the evening before on the rather less pleasant task of speaking to acquaintances and friends of the guards from the fallen caravans, learning about the dead.

None of the guard details had had been particularly strong. Mostly of the caravans that had been destroyed had guards in the first or second heaven stage. A few had had one or two thirds mixed in. What was somewhat more concerning was that while there had been the usual mix of layabout and shirkers among them, they'd been professional enough on the whole. Yet no-one had made it out, instead people had only found bones and half chewed vehicles.

It was slightly worrying, since she'd taken this as a solo job. Plus, she'd lay pretty solid odds that things were being looted before anyone else got there. Or at least before anything was reported. Spirit animals might well eat a great deal of cargo, but there should have been more of it.

Unfortunately, Sergeant Fang, while being at least moderately useful otherwise, had flatly refused to tell her the location of any fences. She was certain he knew, and his protestations that if he knew of any fences they'd currently be inside a jail cell had been fairly unconvincing. His follow up questioning of why she'd think regular (read: mortal) fences would even be involved had further eroded any doubts she'd had.

Still, he'd been leading the way to half the shady or otherwise illegal places they'd been that morning, which had saved her at least half an hour of legwork and having to ask several embarrassing questions of people she might see again and who would definitely remember her. So that was useful! Even if he had then spent his time acting like an amalgam of the proverbial three wise monkeys. It was like dragging a rock along. Simple, but every so often you turned around and were surprised it was still there.

Now, what to do next? She still wanted to interrogate the local fences. Mostly in the vague hope that of finding some greedy idiot who'd looted the bodies down to the clothes before realising they had no use for mortal goods and selling them off. A slim hope, but less likely things had happened to her.

On the other hand, getting a good look at where the caravans had been attacked could be useful. Or perhaps…

"Sergeant?!" She called, causing him to abruptly refocused away from his undoubted attempt to comprehend the Dao of the cracked wall.

"Yes, Ma'am?"

"Could you help me find the best hunter in this city?"

He frowned, wrinkling his brow.

"Would you not be best placed for that Ma'am?" He hesitated for a second before continuing. "After all, most people cannot compare to immortals."

"No, I want the best of your mortal hunters." She grinned at him. "Immortals are too good at combat. A mortal is more likely to know enough about the local beast's territories to avoid them." She paused. Sadly, he failed to react to her needling. "Oh, and I'll need some good maps."

"I'm certain we can procure good maps Ma'am." He nodded. "The best hunter would probably be… Fatty Heng." He paused briefly over the name, a hint of the "see no evil" façade he'd worn for most of the morning briefly entering his expression. "I will lead you to him. But I must warn you he is not the most.." He paused, searching for an appropriate term "...well mannered type."

"That's ok!" She chirped. "Neither am I!"

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The first thing people noticed about Fatty Heng was that he was actually very lean. He was called "Fatty" because he always seemed to be able to get his hands on choice cuts of meat, year round.

The second thing they notice was the smell. Fatty actually perfumed himself religiously. Sadly, he rarely bathed while in town, so the perfumed scent was intermixed with the less pleasant smells of animal blood and viscera, grit and dirt. It created a mix that was just odd enough to be unpleasant.

The third thing Jia Dai noticed about him was the way his eyes followed her chest as she approached; and the moment of worry that washed over his face when he saw the guard Sergeant behind her. This was followed by a mildly amusing flash of terror as his eyes tracked back to her and he realised she was a cultivator.

She grinned sunnily at him.

"Heya. I'm tryin' ta figure out a bit about the local beast territories and Feng here…" She jabbed a thumb over her shoulder "told me you were the best hunter he knew."

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AN: Part 2. It's been fighting me but I'm making progress. Hopefully they can link up with Wei Feng's part of the tale in part 3. Then I can do his big turn 6 rebuild. No ETA on when part 3 will be along sadly, but I wanted to get at least this part out there before the end of the turn.
 
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Maria 2 - Arrival Part 2
Arrival
Part 2
Maria Turn 7 Second Omake
The scar across Ajax's hip tightened. It was going to rain soon. He wasn't sure how to feel about that. Rainstorms always cleaned out the air, and he liked that, but it screwed with the Qi flows that ran through the desert back to the fortress. The arrays would be jittery for weeks. That meant Array engineers, clogging up his outpost. He hated that. They always got so sniffy about maintenance.

He closed his eyes. Sighed. This was stalling of the worst kind. Imperator, he was better than this. He was not going to let himself be scared by a teenaged girl.

She'd been dragged in that morning by Orrin, one of the new assignments. A mortal peddler had come in with her, babbling about bandits. Two charming representatives of the Martial Village had apparently decided to try and part him from his goods. Stupid of them. Xia who pulled this shit either died or wished they did. The road served too many of the clans too well to let mortal thugs ruin it for them.

The girl had apparently gotten there first. Normally, great. Kid took out the trash. She'd get a rap on the knuckles for killing without the Golden Devils' permission, a completely coincidental donation (cash, food, whatever worked), and that'd be that. Except this girl had turned around, shook out gold hair, and said she was a Devil. And with that, ruined Ajax's whole day. Heaven's gutless balls. This was going to *suck.*

He turned at last from his post at the outpost balcony and started limping back into the building. The steps down to the cantina were far too steep for him, but he'd have gutted himself on a fish-hook before he admitted that out loud. He'd made it through the damn trials alive. He was not going to be defeated by a staircase.

He heard her (and the poor mortal – Lu Xu, his name was) before he saw her. Voice like a vulture chewing broken glass.

"Stop worrying."

"Honourable mistress-"

"Not your mistress."

"-The legion will not be happy. To kill on their road-"

"Killed bastards. Like killing a dog."

"Certainly they were valourless dogs, but still-"

"Lu Xu." Her tone had changed, somehow. Firmed up, warmed, almost. Still sounded like sandpaper. "Listen. You're going to be fine. Okay? I'll talk to them. Tell them you're just a pup needed looking after."

"…A pup?" The sheer offended dignity pulled a laugh out of Ajax that he had to catch in his hand.

"Yeah. Don't fight, don't kill. Pup."

And that killed the laugh stone dead. That kind of perspective said far too much. And she was seventeen. Fuck.

Time to do his job. He straightened, ignored the painful protest from his hip. Came around the doorway into the cantina. The mortal saw him immediately, and stood. He nodded back, but he didn't look away from the girl. She'd fixed her eyes on him. There was something in that look that made him… uncomfortable.

She wasn't looking at him like a jailor. She was looking at him like he was her dad. He looked away, to the mortal.

"Lu Xu, was it?"

"This humble one is honoured by your attention, great master," the man gabbled, bent almost double. Ajax hid a smile. "Truly, your presence alone is a shining example."

"Of course, sir merchant," he replied. "I am glad you are unharmed. And your possessions, you still have them?"

"Ah, great master's wisdom is far reaching. Yes. My trivial wares are still with me."

"Good. I have arranged a guard to take you back to the road. They can escort you wherever you were going."

The mortal nodded, and Ajax waved him away. He could still feel the girl's eyes on him, but he waited a while until Lu Xu had left. Then another while. Stalling again. He faced her, and those big, longing eyes.

"No name?"

She shook her head. "The man who owned me, he didn't name his slaves."

"Why not?"

She shrugged. Ajax filled in the blanks in his head anyway; slavers didn't like humanising their property. Broke the illusions they used to get through the day. But she wouldn't know that.

"So. Your hair."

She nodded again. "Golden. They said only you have hair like that. So. I'm one of you." The hope was naked and desperate in her voice. Ajax kept his face still, and tried not to think of his own daughters back in the fortress.

"And where was it that this all happened?"

"On the plains. Don't know where."

His face must have showed his scepticism, then, because she coloured a little. "They kept us in the pens," she said defensively. "Never went outside till I got away. Don't know how far I got, either."

"Surely you must know something."

"I'd gone to the red place. Never remember anything there."

"…The red place?"

She nodded. "Inside my head. When I get angry, or fight. I go to the red place. When I come back, they're dead or I've run away."

Ajax stared at her. "…The peddler said you… attacked the sand. After you killed the two bandits."

"Still in the red place. Had to fight still. Came back quick enough. Didn't hurt him."

She said it casually, like they were talking about the weather. Her own mind, fractured and psychotic, didn't seem to rate as much as the colour of her hair. Ajax breathed out.

"No, you didn't," he said, heavily.

They sat in silence for a few long moments. She started to fidget after a while, looking away from him.

"Your hair's short," she said abruptly. "Thought. You know. Everyone would wear it long."

"Some do. I like it short. Easier to clean."

She snorted. "Easier without mud in it."

"I imagine so, yes," he said, smiling despite himself. She seemed to brighten at that smile, and sat up, grinning at him. She didn't look seventeen. Not then. She looked five, or younger, like she'd just discovered her words and at last, at last, her parents had let her into the conversation. He looked at her and saw only echoes of his own children.

She was mad, this girl. That was clear. But mad was not the same as evil, and she was here seeking family. If someone was going to take it from her, it wasn't going to be him.

"I'm going to send you to the fortress," said Ajax, leaning back. She gave him a sharp, inquisitive look. "The heart of the clan. Where our elders live, and the great families. It's… a good place. They'll help you."

"Oh." She considered that. Nodded.

"Alright."
 
Rina Callista 25 - Enlightenment
Rina Callista
Enlightenment

Rina's little diversion was an unexciting chapter of her life. Therapeutic in its own way, to get away from the constant grind that had exemplified much of her life since the conclusion of the Hundred Year Trials was helpful for her attempts to formulate the rudiments of her nascent philosophy.

Indeed, she even felt the first stirrings of power touching upon something more profound, slowly seeping into the final remaining bottleneck of her cultivation. But there was still ultimately something missing--and with the War on the way…

She couldn't justify being just an itinerant cultivator teaching children anymore.

She cast aside the shrouding talismans that allowed her to appear as a local, took up her panoply again, and once again reported for duty. While a Cultivator of the Twelfth Heavenstage of the First Realm was hardly a true expert--she still had that little star power of being a headliner of the Indomitable Thirteen smoothing some wheels over.

What she was not expecting was to be pulled aside by the new master of administration, shoved a letter, and given a great pile of Spirit Stones and told to get to work.

Rina wasn't used to this kind of reaction! But reading the letter was enlightening in its own way--one part challenge, one part invitation to a Regional Junior Contest of Martial Arts. The top Qi Condensation disciples of the nearby powers gathered together, to show the strength of the incoming generation.

The Golden Devils were rarely invited to such get-togethers, it was ordinarily something only those participants within the various Righteous Powers got a seat at… But apparently the recent warming of relations had gotten them an opportunity.

Or, as the little addendum by Lady Scarletglyph included. "Shaming the little bastards into contributing instead of this half-assed moral support bullshit! So get your ass over here and I'll give you some candy!"

A brief moment of questioning as to whether that was legal or not, and Rina had to grudgingly admit that the chance to stretch her legs before the incoming War would be well welcomed--she was highly born, photogenic--and most importantly of all, absolutely dominant in single combat for her age and cultivation. She was as close to a legitimate expert that the Clan could dispatch that would have a genuine chance of success.

Rina exhaled--briefly marveling on how even her breath didn't seem to get stale when held for a time, perks of an absolutely pure body she supposed--and opened her eyes, rising from the cross legged cultivation posture she had been in, the Spirit Stone she was draining crumbling to dust as it was expended. The roar of the crowds above, and the clash of steel upon the dueling ring.

She let herself smile lightly--that this would also let the Strength Purity Sect make a killing from spectators and betting was probably also a factor. Especially with her own presence here serving as a ringer.

Ah well, this was as honest a scam as any she had ever heard of--it's not like she was taking a dive or doing anything less than her best, so much as just being exceptional.

"We have a special guest today!" The announcer--a wild haired man in robes with a voice amplifying talisman in hand. "A stranger from the desert sands! A flower blooming in the heart of darkness!"

That felt a bit inappropriate really, but she pulled herself up to her feet, smoothing her own fighter's robes while checking that her sandals were secured. She'd have preferred to wear some proper armor--but this was, after all, just an exchange of pointers and not a series of battles of life and death, right?

The prompt seemed sound enough though, and she emerged from the corridor she had been resting in--she felt a hush go over the crowd as her features--dark skinned and light haired--stood out like a sore thumb in a sea of black hair and fair skin.

"For the first time since antiquity, the Golden Devil Clan of the Desert Wastes have emerged from their seclusion, to better meet the challenges of this great era of talent!" The announcer continues without missing a beat. "Widely considered to be of Demonic bent, recent actions have hinted that the currents of history are drawing them closer to the more Righteous ideal--and what kind of experts would we be to punish such progress in the early stages? Standing at the forefront of this wave is the fine junior before you!"

Her opponent stood before her, an itinerant cultivator invited to the contest. He bore some kind of halberd, cradled within his arm. He was fairly strong for an independent honestly--a cultivation firmly in the Ninth Heavenstage--and an aura of one who had seen the trials of war and come out the other side intact. A new talent emerging in the Demon Destroying War maybe?"

He formed a cupped fist salute, balancing his halberd in the crook of his elbow. "This one is Xiahao Ren, Independent Cultivator." He introduced himself.

It was… Remarkably polite actually, what kind of person would Rina be to not reciprocate? She matched the salute, bowing her head in turn. "Rina Callista, Golden Devil Clan" She explained in turn.

He nodded. "I've heard the reputation of your Clan--human sacrifice and strange poisons, hmm?"

Rina shook her head. "Sacrifices happen in war, and we have been under siege by wickedness since antiquity. It would be the height of rudeness to waste such dedication."

Ren tilted his head, acknowledging the statement. "War makes beasts of the best of men." He took his halberd into hand, spinning it above him and settling into a fighting stance. "But that is talk for another time. Please advise this fellow Daoist"

Rina smiled softly, and flicked her wrists, her old blade (Edges carefully left unsharpened of course) and shield from her earlier adventures expanding to full size--the old charms that had carried her through her first adventures beyond the Clan's borders a good fit for this. "Another time indeed, let's have a good match."

Her perspective sharpened, discarding all that was unnecessary to her subconscious mind, concentrating her battle intent into her gaze.

She had never been good at the big picture--one of her few revelations in the past several years. A habit born when she was young, secluded within her chambers with little but books to teach her of the world at large. By focusing entirely on the subject of her attention, she could grasp material that should be above her level.

She continued to employ it in her training, and by now it had just become her default state. It was a potent asset--yes--but it was remarkably intimidating to the people around her as well--as she discovered after seeing off a minor bandit raid on the town she was teaching at. Effective--yes--but terrifying.

However, beyond terrifying, it was also blinding her--by focusing entirely on the target before her--she shrouded other dangers from her gaze. A focused gaze may defeat even the most cunning maneuver, but if that gaze could not be affixed to the target in the first place--it rendered you constantly a step behind in any running battle.

So here and now, she forced her mind and eyes to relax, to retain awareness of the moment even as she concentrated on the contest ahead.

Xiahaou Ren burst forward--reinforced flooring resisting the force of a cultivator moving fast. His Halberd swung upward, building up speed and momentum to bring down on Rina. Not quite fast enough though--her shield snapped up, crashing against the side of the weapon and deflecting it to the side. To his credit, Ren released one hand and lashed out with some kind of fist technique.

Capable indeed, a power attack that demands a response, pivoting to a disabling blow when the response came anyway.

Rina's response was clear--she stepped into her opponent's guard and shoulder checked him. She was smaller admittedly--but the explosive power of a Cultivator in the extremes of Qi Condensation were enough to make up the difference in mass. He staggered backwards, admirably regaining his footing instead of simply being blown off of the ring where he would be disqualified.

The moment's delay though was decisive.

In a flash, Rina was upon him, her blade lashing out in tightly drilled patterns, forcing her foe to dance backwards and to the side to keep the tip of her weapon from him. Counterattacks found themselves parried, intercepted by her shield, or simply sidestepped when her momentum permitted it.

From end to end, the contest was resolved in just under three minutes, before Xiahaou Ren's weapon was torn from his grip and Rina's shining blade aimed his way.

"I concede" He raises his hands, and the crowd goes wild. "A fine match, fellow Daoist."

Rina smiled, and her weapons shrunk to their charm-sized versions, granting him another cupped fist salute. "A fine match indeed, I've learned something on the usage of a polearm in single combat."

The funny thing is, she didn't need to be deceptive to save his face--even with the advantage of her cultivation granting her a mighty body, untiring qi reserves, and a sharp mind--he was still able to hold her off for longer than some of the Invaders did--despite their general edge on quality and cultivation ranks.

The tournament continued from there--Rina advancing from strength to strength in the lists. Starting first from itinerant cultivators of the region, and escalating from there to the many minor sects and societies dotting the land--largely beneath the notice of the Great Powers of the Region.

In every match, she found something to learn from it. The terror of ice magics used to bind and drain in equal measures--the unending vitality of true Body Cultivators who bent their every effort to forging an undying vessel. Weapon arts and techniques beyond her limited horizon.

And always, the matches began with a salute, and ended the same way.

Was this what they all said about honor? About righteous and virtuous deeds? Was it really just something reserved for the privileged few? That because she was strong she deserved to be treated well?

But as the tournament unfolded, Rina began to realize that her own experience could hardly be said to be comprehensive--her Clan had been surrounded by the very worst the Region could offer--greedy merchants on one side, literal bloodthirsty cannibals on another, and monster-riding murderers on the third. Every century, her kinsmen also had to deal with invaders who appeared for the sole purpose of killing them.

Of course her experiences were poor! Of course her contempt was real! That her foes were treacherous and vile though didn't mean that the entire idea of honor was dead within cultivators.

It was truthfully a humbling thing, to see the veil lifted away from the spite she had held, showing that her anger at the world--her disappointment was driven from a small perspective.

But in that too, was the search for a greater Truth, wasn't it? She steadily felt her once sluggish cultivation building upon itself, pressure pent up for decades released into the ethereal void that was the seed of Rina's own Truth.

It was the same word, wasn't it? Cultivation was ultimately a search for Truth--and one who failed to continue to challenge their own viewpoint was one who would not account for much.

Of course she had bottlenecked! She was just wallowing in her own twisted perspective in the world! It was honestly quite terrible of her and she felt mortified at how everyone was literally telling her that and she just didn't have a clue.

She'd have some apologies to make in the days to come.

As her heart and soul drew closer to her Truth, the tournament continued unabated--the minor powers had all fallen out with their own prizes--and all that remained was representatives of the greater powers invited--the ones who could afford to invest in and support experts in the extremes of Qi Condensation.

For the first time in her life, Rina found herself testing her skills against cultivation equals, people who were just as dedicated and talented as she was. The clashes between the flower of the younger generation were a sight to behold to the audience--the bets continued to rise higher and higher, and the various patrons had a grand time watching the lesser Sects and Clans fall away,

The final match was genuinely on the edge--a young expert from the Strength Purity Sect, a member of their Legacy Echelon who were identified as super talents with the potential to reach Nascent Soul and raised to the twelfth Heavenstage before breakthrough through. It was the same category Xu Zhen was actually in--though he was from an earlier cohort.

It was genuinely the most challenging match Rina had been in against a peer of the same generation. While her fundamentals were excellent, and the Blood of Bronze a hell of a force multiplier--the Strength Purity Sect had gained its reputation for good reason, and the bodies they cultivated were no weaker than even the mightiest bloodlines that existed.

It was only her slightly greater experience that edged things out in the end--her career spent adventuring edging out a mostly cloistered and accelerated training program.

She had come here to show the flag, establish that the Golden Devils were rising from the shadows and would be a player in the future, not merely demonic barbarians to be dismissed. She had left with a greater understanding of the Truth she sought, and a surprising number of new correspondents from beyond the Clan's territories.

She dangled her prize between her fingers then--a magic pearl--one to create a mental clone of oneself that your will could inhabit, able to conduct an objective, dispassionate analysis of one's own Dao, unfettered by preconceptions and inabilities.

She chose this--a treasure conventionally used by Core Formation as part of their regular cultivation budget--over anything else for a reason.

After all, while the bottleneck she was stuck at had loosened, there was still something missing from her perspective. One final revelation barring her from the perfection of form she sought.

As she sent her Essence into the pearl, she wondered what obvious mistake she was still making.

She'd know soon enough.

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The Dao of the World-Lord, an ambition to create a better world than this one.

Admirable in intent, a desire to do better than the world is a fundamental yearning within the humanity of an imperfect world.

An elaborate series of elemental interactions interpreted through metaphor. Analogous but distinctly different from modern elemental theory. intriguing and well reasoned.

Enlightenment has been achieved in regards to the nature of spite and hate, one cannot achieve a high ideal such as this by excluding those beyond one's own reach as wicked. Understanding that not all should be held accountable for the actions of others has cleared this obstacle.

Flaw detected, barring further advancement. Indeed, the final revelation cannot be achieved if reaching it will lead to one's certain destruction.

In treating the World as a living organism, capable of spite, one treats it as an individual to be battled or treated with at necessity. This is in error.

The world is a complex series of interactions, bound by Karma, if it had a true intellect and will of its own, the Golden Devil Clan as it is would have been exterminated long ago. Instead, it has been a steady decline brought on by the poor Karma of deeds of the past, paid off inch by inch.

But that debt is paid.

The virtue of recent history, building a state where people are protected, happy, and satisfied with their lot has paid down much of the debt through sheer volume of deeds. Combined with the ill fortune brought on by the legacy of prior deeds, there are no longer any obligations of karma.

What remains are the deeds of men, and they can be countered using the tools of men. Be it through steel, through covenant, or through cunning, these wrongs may yet be made right.

To dream of a better world is laudable, to seek to be an exemplar standing in its protection virtuous.

But replacing the world is the hubris that damned us in the first place, the act that cast your Clan down.

Let others be, Accept what you cannot change, and act on what you can. So long as you hold that Truth in your heart, the Dao of the World-Lord will forever be at your disposal.


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Rina's eyes opened, a golden light shining within.

She pointedly did not flinch back to see Lady Scarletglyph crouched, staring at her from an uncomfortably close position.

Definitely not.

"Enlightenment's nice, isn't it?" She drawled out. "Some people look for it and never find it, and here you are being some snot nosed kid not even in your second century, and there it is."

She smirks. "It'd bring a tear to my eye, really."

"I suppose you could call it that." Rina smiles back. "I've really been something of a disaster in the making, haven't I?"

"I wouldn't go that far" Lady Scarletglyph waves it off, then reclines back onto a chair she had pulled in at some point. "But you were well on the way to making the same mistakes as your ancestors. Things may not be perfect--no--but nothing is. That doesn't mean that people are going to welcome a legion of strangers telling them to change their ways or be put to the sword."

Rina sighs at that. "It just seemed so obvious for the longest time. I kept projecting the way we are now back into the past…"

"A common error, but you know better now, right?"

Rina nodded, and steadied herself, her golden eyes meeting the Core Formation Elder's gaze unflinchingly. "I want to be strong, strong enough that I can support my family." She said. "Strong enough that we don't need to indulge in foul methods to survive, that we can make peace with those we should make peace with, and cut down those we cannot. I don't want to carry the stigma of being from a 'Demonic' clan anymore--to have my children and cousins stared at in contempt by the others in the world. But I know goodwill isn't going to make our enemies leave us alone."

"Hence, strength--a good ambition." Scarletglyph agrees. "I look forward to seeing where your career takes you, and hope to be among the first to welcome your Golden Devil Clan to the Righteous side in the days ahead."

She reaches behind her then, withdrawing a cloth-wrapped pole. "Catch" She says, tossing it over to Rina, who climbs to her feet to catch it. Then she looks at it, her Qi sensing the power within.

"The Five-Elements Warbanner" Scarletglyph explains. "I've conducted a great deal of study on the nature of the Five Element Tribulation--originally in preparation for Xu Zhen's own Tribulation--but he's lost that opportunity now, and there's no sense letting all that research go to waste" She grins briefly, but settles back down to a more businesslike tone a moment later

"If you try to take it with your own strength, you will fail. It's beyond strength, beyond will, it's nothing less than the apocalypse taken form." Scarletglyph continues. "It's nothing less than the Heavenly Daos seeking to test a potential peer. They do not hold back, they do scale to give you a chance--however slim. They will strike with power enough to kill a Great Circle Foundation Establishment Cultivator where they stand."

"And yet, there are records of those who've achieved a successful breakthrough into the Single Pillar Method" Rina replies, and Scarletglyph tilts her head in acknowledgement of the point.

"Ordinary Tribulation Treasures are worthless against the Five Element Tribulation" Scarletglyph concludes. "Because the key is in Five Elements, it's not merely lightning. But a cataclysm of the fundamental building blocks of creation, with power that begins strong enough to scorch an early foundation establishment period and feeds itself into blows strong enough to wound a Nascent Soul."

"... But that's also its weakness, isn't it?" Rina realizes. "It builds power to an unsustainable level through the cycle of augmentation… Which means…"

"Which means if you have--say--a treasure that can strike with any of the Five Elements, suffusing the environment with its power in the same blow, you can use the cycle of suppression to deny the Tribulation its ability to scale up to a fatal degree." Scarletglyph finishes, patting the device she had handed to Rina. "Like, say, this Five-Elements Warbanner"

"Thank you" Rina bowed her head. "Any further advice?"

Scarletglyph takes a moment to think about that, and nods. "It begins with Metal, the Five Element Tribulation that is." She explains. "You'll want to conduct the Tribulation in an area strongly aspected to Fire, to give you a chance to activate the Warbanner. Be careful where you decide to begin it though, if you lose, it's going to be scorched to uselessness. Be a nice piece of real estate if you win though, few things are quite as good for the germination of heavenly treasures than the site of a successful Five Element Tribulation."

"Good to know," Rina nodded. "And… Thank you very much for your instruction."

Scarletglyph waves it off. "Nonsense! You're a sweet girl, and it's not like I'm getting nothing from this--I'll be needing that Warbanner back when you're through though so I can study the emanations left behind."

"Noted" Rina smiled. "I won't disappoint you then. I'll begin the Tribulation after I complete the rest of my preparations."

"Just don't fuck it up" Scarletglyph warns. "It'd be a real shame for your story to end as another warning against the extremes of cultivation."
 
Fierce Fang 9 - Soup for the Soul
Fierce Fang
Soup for the Soul​



Fierce Fang was cautiously walking through the haunted hills of the Demon Ghost Graveyards' outskirts.He was looking for some low level Demon Ghosts to hunt for some ghost fibers. He had prepared special equipment such as a True Silver Sword and a Ghost Storing Pot at great expense for this. This was due to the fact as a Body Cultivator Fierce Fang naturally had trouble with immaterial foes. Therefore he required equipment to be able to even begin hunting the ghosts and storing their ghastly remains.

One might wonder why Fang would go to such efforts for to get materials not suited to him as Body Cultivators preferred the flesh of beasts than the spirits of ghosts and if Fang was planning on being a normal cultivator than he would had just continued hunting powerful beasts to prepare for breaking through to Foundation Establishment. But Fierce Fang had long ago realized that his weakness to Soul Arts and the like as a body cultivator was unacceptable. So Fang decided to go on the path of the 12th Heavenstage the Pure Soul which would make his soul a harder target to damage or destroy. He wouldn't go so far that it was also because Fang thought perhaps arrogantly that he could easily reach the 12th Heavenstage and wanted to prove that to all. In fact Fang would even brag privately in his own mind that he could go 13th as well just that the enhanced costs were too rich for his blood.

And so Fierce Fang was in the Demon Ghost Graveyards to better accomplish this goal. For while his Body Cultivation and Dragon Body had given him the fortune of quickly passing by the Pure Body and Pure Qi heavenstages he knew if he wanted to purify his soul anytime in the next century he would need some help. So here he was in the Simmering Soup Sect's lands collecting ingredients for their renowned soul food. It would cost him a lot more than a mere QI Condensation junior could possibly afford but Fang had a plan. First he would gather some of the ingredients himself even if it meant risking the Demon Ghost Graveyard and searching far and wide for other ingredients. Then he would tempt an expert Kitchenhand Disciple to work for cheap by using the Ghost Banishing Mirage Salt he had luckily come across. For while the salt's primary purpose was to send away the ghastly dead it was still salt in the end and Fang was sure that a Sect focused on cooking would get some use out of it. Maybe even empower the Soul Soup Fang was aiming for beyond what it would normally be. Fang didn't expect the soup to instantly push him to the next level but he had hoped that it would at least shorten the gap by a good amount.

Anyways Fang needed to focus on hunting Demon Ghosts since with his weak Spiritual Strength and Spiritual Sense he could be fatally ambushed by even a weak ghost if he didn't focus 100% of his attention to the task. It was a good thing he had just done so for not even a moment later he came across his first demon ghost. It honestly looked like a child wearing a white sheet playing a game than a demon but the transparent and hazy 'cloth' along with the lack of feet revealed it was no child playing a trick by a spectral ghost. Fang had to resist the urge to punch it away for being too close for comfort for not only would it deal no damage but it could let the ghost attempt to possess the arm. Instead Fang pushed Qi through his True Silver Sword and made to strike the Demon Ghost trusting that the magic metal would be worth the price you paid for. The child-like ghost didn't even have a chance to react when it was cleaved in two by the silver blade proving how weak it was to a foe that could actually threaten it.The Ghost's sheet-like skin (if such a being could be said to have skin at all) then started to dissolve into string-like fibers. Fang then awkwardly twirled his True Silver Sword to collect the Ghost Fibers that he couldn't physically touch and put them into the Ghost Storing Pot where they would safely put away for later. Fang was a little thankful that the Demon Ghost didn't have a Ghost Core since not only would it have been a much stronger example of its kind it would also be more annoying to get the core into the pot than the fibers using a single sword. Sure a Ghost Core was a lot more valuable than Ghost Fibers but Fang wasn't hunting for valuables to sell but ingredients of which Ghost Fibers was one of as Chefs could weave them into Soul Noodles. But the night was still young so if another Demon Ghost dropped a Ghost Core Fang wouldn't be upset at all for he wouldn't leave until he had filled the Ghost Storing Pot completely with Fibers.

A/N: @occipitallobe or whoever has access to the spreadsheet. Kind of an abrupt end but I can't think of how else to end it and I thought I should finally finish this since I've been writing it since before Chirstmas. For my omake reward I want a Lifespan Treasure since Fang is an old man at this point with like 60 years left iirc? He's practically dead lol. I'll hopefully have another omake in this series detailing Fang finding another ingredient for next turn.
 
Rina Callista 26 - Gathering Clouds
Rina Callista
Gathering Clouds
The Thirteenth Heavenstage, the Fourth Olympian Keystone--the absolute peak of the First Great Realm of Cultivation and a height that hadn't been seen in millennia. Rina thought for a time that entering it led to a certain state of grace--an understanding that she had gone as far as could be gone and all that remained was to prepare for Tribulation.

None of the books ever said a bloody thing about what it felt like to be to stand in this position though!

Rina rubbed her forehead, pressing in to subdue her headache. Ever since she crossed the threshold, she had begun to experience the consequences of being suffused with more Qi than the human body can actually contain. Organs? Flesh? Bones? All filled to the brim--all of the unique physiology of a Cultivator had stored as much as could be gathered--her very brain and nervous system crackled with a great wealth of Qi. Much even spilled out into something deeper, the great promise she strove toward carrying a great wealth in its own right.

But now? There was nowhere left to put it--and yet she still needed to continue refilling her 'Vessel'--at least if she didn't want to fall from this state of grace. It was much akin to filling a waterskin to the limit, shoving more and more inside until the leather starts to tear and spring leaks--and then having to replace those leaks without taking the lid off of the top. It wasn't the normal pain and irritation that came with successful cultivation--but a sense of being stretched beyond the breaking point. If she couldn't replace the "Material" with something that could survive this insane pressure, she'd pop.

Which wasn't to say there were no benefits from this new state.

"I refuse to believe this uptight bitch can beat us!" The bandit chieftain shouted--more to convince himself than anything else. Early Foundation Establishment, no more than two pillars at best, with comrades at the ninth heavenstage of Qi Condensation each.

Rina stood before them, a Centurion's spear in hand, and inclined her head in consideration of the threat. The chieftain seemed to get his courage, screaming a battle cry and darting towards her.

Only to have that battlecry be stifled as Rina's spear lashed out, catching him in the side of the face and tearing a chunk off of his skull. He clutched at the spurting wound, screaming in pain--until the follow up shield strike severed his head from his bandit body.

It used to be that clashes between herself and Foundation Establishment experts boiled down to letting them get in close, to make a mistake enough to let her grapple--able to resolve a battle with her superior body strength before their advantage in speed and stamina became telling. Since achieving Dao-Purification however, Rina's thoughts were clear and utterly in tune with her body.

She was still slower of course--but the Golden Devils had trained to face swifter foes since antiquity. Her clarity of thought allowed her to drive her vessel at speeds and force that used to be beyond her.

Slower, but now close enough for skills and techniques to close the gap--and Blood Path bandits were not known for their sublime martial techniques.

The war with the Blood Cannibals would be soon--within the next year at the most, as the agreement that bound them expired. She needed to grow accustomed to her new abilities if she hoped to surpass the Tribulation ahead.

The apocalypse that had transitioned from a friendly static frisson into a cold pressure, that she had crossed a line and would not be permitted forward without a hell of a fight. She could scent it on the air and feel it in the bones of the earth--the very world would reject her the moment she released the chains on her Cultivation and began her breakthrough.

She would be a poor soldier to charge into that kind of battle while still feeling awkward with her.

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"Five bandit clans, three murderers, a few dozen Blood Cannibal spies." The list just went on and on! "Rina Callista, you can't possibly take these kinds of risks just because you've reached the peak."

"We don't have time anymore for me to train myself normally" Rina shook her head, kneeling in the hall of her… Immediate family, as her mother lectured her on her life decisions. "The Blood Cannibals will be upon us in months, at best. We need every expert we can bring to the table in these times. I'll be ten years training before I've fully gotten my current ability under control. By pushing myself against meaningful foes, I earn the contribution points needed to stabilize my cultivation after breaking through--and accelerate my learning." She raised her head and met her mother's gaze--a steel haired woman approaching the Great Circle of Foundation Establishment--Diana Callista, weaver of the Legions. She even had a shot at Core Formation some thought!

But right now, there was little of that to be seen.

"Girl, you are going to be the death of me at this rate." She sighed, and set the mission log down. "It's the Five Element Tribulation, even taking forty years to prepare would be considered horrifyingly quick! To think you can do it in one…"

"I can do it," Rina stated. "I had doubts in the past, but not anymore. I understand my Truth, I know the scope of my power, and I have been granted a great gift to stand against the assault. My only concern was that I might slip up--but the missions I've taken on have polished off the instability of my advancement." Her gaze met her mother's without hesitation. "I am ready, all that remains is finding a suitable site to conduct the Tribulation at."

"A region strongly aspected towards Fire" Diana repeated the requirements, and closed her eyes. "There are a few--the Skyscraping Plateau seems like it will be your best bet though--picked clean long ago by miners, all that remains are the Molten Slag Stones extracted alongside it, heated by their proximity to the great sun. It's out of the way of most adventurers, and within our territory deeply enough that interference is unlikely… But unlikely isn't impossible--and you are high profile enough that if our foes can tamper with it. They will." She crossed her hands before her, and steadied herself, opening her eyes again to meet Rina's gaze.

"Can you reconsider this? Regressing your cultivation--even by a bit, and taking an ordinary Tribulation?" She asked.

"No--I've been selfish up until now, too focused on my own advancement and the idea that I'll make everything right on my own." Rina shook her head. "I know better now, I don't think I'll reach for the extremes of future realms after I've seen the costs of delaying as long as I did--I could very well be approaching Core Formation now if I simply broke through at the Ninth Heavenstage. But the deed is already done, and I may as well reap the benefits of the labor that I've already. The Single Pillar method hasn't been seen in the Clan since before we were driven from the Mountains." She grinned there. "I'm curious as to how it performs, I've already touched the Blood of Gold since laying down the Fourth Keystone--the two in combination…"

"Mmm, you might be able to defeat Core Formation then." Diana reluctantly agreed. "Definitely at the head of a battle formation to cover your weaknesses, but it wouldn't be impossible. And every such expert is something we need so desperately now." She looked like she had swallowed a lemon, but nodded. "As much as I don't want to see you marching head first into doom… Your logic isn't wrong."

"You raised me better than that," Rina smiled. "I'm not just some thug who just follows orders blindly after all."

"No, just a damned fool hero--and we've had enough of those die on us that I won't see you join their number." Diana snapped back. She sighed wistfully at that. "I've had enough of seeing those. You are truly confident that you can surpass the Tribulation?"

"I'm certain," Rina claimed. "I can feel its gaze upon me… If I had taken it head on, I think I would have needed years and years to prepare. But I know its mechanism yet--and the Warbanner will allow me to stand against it. I can do this and come back in time for the upcoming campaign--with any luck, it may tilt the scales in our favor."

"I'm sure our commanders will take any such boons they can get." Diana slumped in her chair. "So be it then, you have my blessing."

And in the end, that was all Rina needed.

The rest was preparation.

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The Skyscraping Plateau--once the site of a great meteor impact--apparently taking out a major oasis and requiring an expensive redirection of trade routes to compensate for it. The upside was that the upheaval revealed great stores of Spirit Stones that could have helped fund this.

The deaths of the initial prospectors shortly afterwards revealed the truth--the meteor was a genuine star fragment, and its pieces had mixed deeply with the upturned sand and rock. The next wave was better protected, bearing talismans against the invisible, corrosive power of flame held within, and made good progress mining the plateau out of all the value it possessed.

Supposedly, the largest fragment of the meteor was employed as the core of the Shattering Glass Spear array, in the Molten Forge that flash-forged the deadly projectiles from the primordial sands of the desert before casting them off at the enemy of the day.

What remained was a pitted, barren plateau, festooned with exploratory tunnels, baked deep in the light of the sun over thousands of years--with the remaining fragments of meteor stone still pulsing in a way that made extended presence there a daunting task.

But if you were looking for a site of overwhelming Firepower? There was no better place to be.

Rina was not an Array Engineer--the opportunity to master that trade was long in the past--but all soldiers of the Golden Devil Clan were expected to be familiar with the most rudimentary wards and spell patterns in case they were called upon for aid. Fortunately, her plans did not require her to add a complex defense pattern.

It would defeat the purpose anyway.

She leafed through the manual that Lady Scarletglyph had secreted inside the bundle that contained the Warbanner.

The Five Element Tribulation is a logical extension on the Heavenly Tribulation more well known in the lore of Cultivators. Traditionally, greater degrees of power in the face of the Cultivator lead to more power being held within the lightning bolts cast down, tempering their Dao and body in preparation for further advancement. On rare occasions, an expert achieves some combination of traits or abilities that garners Heaven's greatest ire. Chief and most well known of these are the Thirteenth Heavenstage of Qi Condensation--such aspiring Kings may touch upon control of the Dao that ordinarily only begin to reveal themselves in Core Formation, reaching their full flower in Nascent Soul.

To violate the hierarchy of power draws the ire of the Heavens, and thus they send down the Five Element Tribulation to see that one of such hubris has the resolve and fate to carry the destiny they have reached for.

It begins in the sky, a bolt of white beyond white, brighter than the sun--a lightning bolt of such concentration that it condenses into a physical form. Not entirely unlike a sword descending from the heavens to take the head of the aspiring King. The blow comes at strength enough to slaughter a Mid Foundation Establishment Cultivator. If it were merely this however, the Five Element Tribulation would not be so feared.

For the introduction of such concentration of Metal Qi into a small area causes a great change in the Heavens and Earth, as the Elements seek equilibrium. The Cycle of Augmenting begins to manifest, as Azure Moonwater, Emerald Sabervines, Ruby Sunfire, and Primordial Mud manifest in succession, striking and lashing at the aspiring King in order, continually building in power as the cycle of mutual augmentation builds, stirred further by continued bolts of divine lightning.

Some might think to build a great fortress to weather the Tribulation. Indeed, the story of Cai Fang--talented young master and inheritor of the Nascent Will of his newly deceased father--is a great warning against this approach. By the third cycle, his array shattered. By the sixth cycle, his Core Formation Puppet was reduced to ash.

On the ninth cycle, the vessel holding the Nascent Will became dust, and the subsequent force directed upon the pitiful youth was enough to scour life clean for five hundred li in all directions, creating a danger zone that remains hostile to this day.

Thus, the answer is clear--to even hope to defeat the Five Element Tribulation, one must face it head on--opposing each manifestation of the cycle and depleting the qi generated before it is passed on to the next. But the Heavens are wrought well, and to know this is to only have a chance.

For the period of time that each individual cycle takes is random. One might find themselves drawing the Azure Moonwater into a cauldron only to find it suddenly shifting to Emerald Razorvine and strangling the life from you. One might battle the Primordial Stone only to be struck suddenly by a bolt of divine lightning in the middle of an attack. One must be able to alter their strategy immediately and without hesitation--for any delay increases the pressure on the aspiring King exponentially.

A test of might, heart, and purity alike. In this sense, it operates on the same logic as a standard tribulation--but on a scale that beggars the mind. There is only one saving grace--only nine bolts of Divine Lightning will be cast down from end to end. Any who can survive the nine strikes and suppress the rampaging elements will find the Heavens to acknowledge their strength--and the power of Foundation Establishment will manifest.


The document went in then on some details about the elemental manifestations that showed up--but the core of the Tribulation seemed to be straightforward enough. A multispectrum assault that needed to be repulsed in sequence until no further reinforcement was available and the line collapsed.

No different in principle to the history of the Clan.

So her strategy was simple--she did not set up any arrays to disperse or scatter the energies of the Tribulation--the manual was clear that such was a path to death. Instead, the Arrays were designed to be porous to qi manifestations, but sensitive enough to change colors when the elemental balance shifted. It would give her a moment's warning if the Tribulation was about to change tacks on her.

The Warbanner's function was simple enough--to be used as a polearm, it could shift its elemental aspect at the speed of thought--the banner itself emitted great tides of energy in a matching aspect, which would ground out the force of the Tribulation.

Of course, it had to be simple, didn't it? There wouldn't be time for anything complex after Rina was in the thick of it.

The remaining Fire elements in this plateau would be sufficient at least to drain the force of the initial lightning strike. The most dangerous one, as it came on its own time during the period after the Breakthrough began and the Tribulation started in earnest.

She even had a decent force on the edge of the Plateau--witnesses and Dao Protectors alike--who should keep out any riff raff from interfering.

Her philosophy was constructed, her body at the peak of cultivation, and her will sharpened to the limit--by all accounts, she was ready.

And yet something told her that this wouldn't be the end of it. An intuition from the bottom of her heart that the tribulation would not be that simple.

It would be a shame, to have come this far, and falter at the last step.

She'd just need to do her best, and ensure that didn't happen.

Rina checked the wards and arrays one final time, ensuring they were drawn correctly and with the backups humming with spirit stones and ready to react if they suffered damage, and centered herself in their heart, sitting cross legged and with her hands brought together. She felt the power in her body and soul screaming for release.

There would be no backing down after this, once she released her hold on her power, the Tribulation would be upon her, and she would be in for the greatest fight of her life. No quarter would be offered, and none would be given.

There were only two paths ahead, to become dust for her hubris, or to be acknowledged by the cosmos and recognized as a King among common Cultivators. Should she endure long enough to reach Nascent Soul--she will have the strength to safeguard the Clan, and lead them to a path of righteousness with her strength.

Failure was not an option.

Her focus sharpened, all extraneous thoughts falling away as her mind became a thing of cool logic, tempered by an unbending spine of idealism and humanity.

A single spirit stone was clamped between her hands, and with a thought, she drew from it. The waterskin flexed--the last few drops shaking it.

And then she felt something shatter. The sense of impending doom she labored under withdrew, and a hush fell over nature as the world seemed to comprehend that someone had crossed a line that shouldn't be crossed.

The sun faded, obscured by the rapidly forming clouds overhead, black as pitch, crackling with arcs of white lightning even as they expanded at a horrifying speed.

"Ah, that's right" Rina thought to herself as she looked ahead. "The Golden Devils have always been subject to stronger tribulations. That's what I was missing"

It changed nothing in the end.

Rina Callista would be herself, or be destroyed trying.

There was no other choice to make.

She met the sky with a laugh, and climbed to her feet, unfurling the Five Element Warbanner, taking it in both hands as she met the Heavens in challenge.

"Well, what about it then?" She called out. "Come at me if you think you're hard enough!"

It was funny--she was under the spyglass, all of creation said she was doomed.

So why was her spirit felt so light, even now?
 
Bit of a shame, considering she's got a really good shot, especially if the theory that the Nine Pillars requires the One-Pillar Path is true.
It isn't. One-pillar and Nine pillar are mutually exculsive. You can take only one. It's been confirmed on discord and somewhere in the thread I believe.
 
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It isn't. One-pillar and Nine pillar are mutually exculsive. You can take only one. It's been confirmed on discord and somewhere in the thread I believe.
Nope, not in-thread. Or if it is, it's hidden away in some corner I can't find.

Seriously, we need a google docs detailing WoG revealed in Discord.
 
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Rina Callista 27 - The Five Element Tribulation
Before I begin, I'd like to dedicate this chapter to @occipitallobe -- taking this goofy ass premise and creating a universe compelling enough to draw over a million words from its readers, with a Clan as flawed as it is noble in nature. Threading the needle about respecting the genre conventions while pointing out how ridiculous and depressing they can be.

A perfect world doesn't need stories to be told about it--and the Turtle World is a place that has spawned a legion of them.

Thanks for all of your work over the past few months, and here's to many months more working together.

Now, without further ado. Please, enjoy the fruits of my labor, one of the few pieces of writing that I can genuinely say--without ego--is a step forward in my rudimentary skills as a writer. One of the finest pieces I've ever crafted.


Rina Callista
The Five Element Tribulation
Rina had always imagined that a Tribulation began at the moment the lightning gathered--cast down the moment the Heavens had prepared their trial for the Cultivator who would seek to advance to the next Realm. So when the cloud--thick with promise and crackling with white power simply sat there--she would freely admit that things weren't going as planned.

Admittedly, it gave her time to prepare the Warbanner for action--the great flag smouldering with radiant energies, burning off into the distance as simple material gave way to unleashed energies. But power needed to be used when gathered like this.

Why was it waiting?

The back of Rina's neck stood up, her sweat cold even in the building heat of the environment, rapidly escalating with the flood of power the Warbanner was releasing into it. Of course it was waiting, what kind of foe simply walks straight into a prepared battleground of their opposition's choosing?

The curse of the Golden Devils--their Tribulations were not merely a perfunctory release of lightning where failure only occurs if one treats it lightly--but a general battle to the death against a foe equipped with at least rudimentary strategy.

Why would it be in a hurry? The Heavens can wait, but Rina was still of mortal flesh and bone, eventually, her focus would slip.

Then it could strike, assured of success.

crack

The sound of a crack pricked Rina's ear up, her gaze shifting in the direction of the stimulus--nothing to worry about, just a boulder splitting..

She realized her mistake in that instant, and lashed out blindly with the Warbanner.

KRAKOOM!!!

It was all that saved her life.

She was pulled off of her feet, driven back by a furious wave of force--all hope of maintaining her footing evaporating in the face of a will of extermination. Her eyes finally shifted forward again, and she witnessed the white bar of scintillating skyfire halted a mere foot from her face. The Warbanner shuddered as the Tribulation Lightning snaked upwards, pulling Rina up into the sky, beyond the boundaries of her defenses and warning signs.

But not beyond the borders of the plateau--and in that moment, she understood the rules of the Tribulation.

Single combat against the Five Element Tribulation, the field of contest was the Skyscraping Plateau--her defeat marked by either her extermination by the powers of the world or escaping the plateau's borders, where she would be obliterated.

Should she endure for nine cycles, the Dao of the World-Lord would be acknowledged, and her Foundation established.

The bolt of Divine Lightning shattered, splintering into ten thousand fragments as the impetus forcing Rina into the sky abruptly fled. She hung in the air for a moment on the residual momentum, suspended between earth and sky in that critical moment.

Her thoughts went to the Five-Elements Warbanner, and it spun before her, the great flag changing from a span of uttermost flame into a cloud of dust--the pole gaining the solidity of bedrock. The transformation completed in the nick of time, the first blow of Tribulation Lightning had descended, the infusion of purest metal distilling Water beyond Water from the barest traces around, augmenting them to life.

Blue, blue, deepest blue was the Azure Moonwater--dew that descended on the nights where the Full Moon coincided with the Winter Solstice, scattered across all creation in the tiniest drops. A transcendent solvent beyond all others, in trace quantities, it could wash away the deepest impurities in the body and grant a second lease of life on one who's cultivation could go no further.

A thimbleful of Moonwater could freeze a mortal on contact, their meridians and blood vessels shattering to bits, a cold deep enough to freeze the soul.

There was nearly a gallon here, condensed and collected from across the desert as the Moonwater sailed to the glut of Metal Energy to feed on--and it understood its duty. It twisted, taking the form of a great carp, roaring as it swam through the sky into the one who had drawn forth Heaven's ire.

It met the Five Element Warbanner, the dust cloud infiltrating its gills, tying up its fins. How it screeched! How it raged! Its mouth snapped open, its whiskers writhing as it pressed forward regardless, a transient spirit having no fear of death, when its life could be measured in minutes at most.

But Rina's studies had not been in vain, as her polearm lodged into the great carp's maw, suspending it just before her as it thrashed about in the sky. Earth's power over Water is to dam it--to contain the power of water and strip it of motion.

Regardless of its might, of its wrath empowered by heavenly will--the Moonwater Carp could do no harm. Its whiskers twitched, and it burst, Moonwater scattering in all directions. There was a reprieve as Rina steadily gained some control over her descent.

But she knew the next phase was beginning, the clean scent of clean water being replaced with the thickest, heaviest pollen.

Germination from the tiniest seeds, once dead matter suspended in the air--far too tiny to be noticed--given a new lease on life by the Moonwater granting them a baptism. They germinated, and understood their role in this great contest. Vines sprung into view, a jungle in the heavens exploding from the tiniest seeds. Dripping with poison and venom came the Emerald Sabervines, bearing thorns sharper than any edge. From a dozen directions did they creep forth, twisting plant matter cutting off all hopes of escape before coiling inward to the victim.

They were met by the Five-Elements Warbanner, flag going rigid and sharpening in place. It had gone from symbol of war to a great two handed axe, a jagged edge all the better to saw with.

The Emerald Bladevines could resist the blows of any edge, any tool--but the Power of Metal was always one known for its sharpness and dedication. And resistance is in no way immunity. The Warbanner's cleaver-edge tore into them, jagged tines gripping tight on each vine, and when Rina flicked her wrist, rent each vine in twain, fragments of metal mixing with the poisonous sap and neutralizing both. All thought fled from Rina's mind as she fell into the cold battle logic that had served her as well as it did.

In time, she saw her chance--striking out at a flanking duo of Bladevines with an emission of blade-wind, and sailed through the opening, escaping the reach of the Bladevine Jungle. Tendrils still arced outwards towards her, seeking to drag the prey back into their place of power.

But it could not, as the power of Wood was always slow to move, chained as it is to the earth that it rooted within. Supernaturally generated and empowered as it is, the Bladevines were no exception.

In the end however, the Tribulation would not halt simply because they had been outwitted for a moment. The Bladevines calculated their odds, and chose instead to entrust the battle to the next iteration. Igniting in a terrible flame, the Bladevine Jungle screamed in battle fury and exultation.

From the furthest reaches of the realm, drawn by such a rich harvest came the Ruby Sunfire--the gift of the Sun on high, at its greatest zenith during the longest and hottest day of the year, doled out to all who are lucky enough to catch it. Devoured and assimilated by any alchemist who sought an edge.

Even the tiniest sparks can light a wildfire though, and engorged by the power of the Emerald Sabervines did the Ruby Bird manifest, radiant voice screaming in triumph at its birth, wings spread in glory.

It understood its lot in life, and accepted it--for is it not Fire's nature to burn? That it would serve the will of Heaven was an honor, that it would live a life full of doing what Fire must be a blessing beyond comparison! And so it flapped its wings, rising to the heavens above in a crack of sound, before outrunning even that. It circled rapidly in the skies above, hiding behind the might of the Tribulation Cloud as Rina shifted the Five-Elements Warbanner to its next configuration--flag distorting in a haze of fluid matter, dripping moisture with every gesture. A field of Water formed about the disciple of the Golden Devils.

And when the Ruby Bird dove, song trilling its death-cry, it flash-boiled the barrier, steam blasting out--and extinguishing it even as it clawed and scratched with talons at the defense. It met Rina's impassive gaze, and screamed a curse as it finally burst, spending the last flame of its brief existence hurling her down towards the earth once more.

Perhaps she might have seen this as an opportunity, if she had not studied the nature of the Tribulation in the days to past--in this, she knew that the Ruby Bird's strategy was nothing less than to put her into the power of the next phase of the Tribulation. The Warbanner shifted once again, flowers covering the flag, a fresh scent filling the skies as the handle became wood drawn from the strongest spirit-trees.

It was a miraculous armament, Rina would admit in the back of her mind. While each individual form of the Five-Elements Warbanner did not have exceptional power, the speed of conversion and the emissions of each phase hid a secret of terrifying escalation, when used appropriately. To launch an attack, suffusing the atmosphere with the Five Elements in the augmentative cycle?

If you could maintain that terrifying cycle in the face of enemy action, your combat power would rise without limit--in that sense, it was the perfect treasure to suppress a Five Element Tribulation.

Constantly rising in power even as it suppressed the escalating Tribulation, turned it into a puzzle to be solved instead of an inescapable calamity.

The Primordial Stone rose as Rina entered her terminal descent--a terracotta warrior, most often found within the deepest galleries of the earth, protecting the mightiest ores of the earth from those who lack the strength to shape them. It was silent as the grave as it pulled itself from the plateau's surface, shaped into being by the powers unleashed in the Ruby Sunfire's detonation. A minor colossus at fifteen feet, it immediately understood its role, and sent a fist attack to intercept the falling Rina.

Her response was a quiet huff of disappointment, and her body pivoted in the air, meeting the extended fist with a blow from the Five-Elements Warbanner. She shook with exertion as the shock of the Primordial Stone's attack, and began to be hurled back.

But she was arrested after a single heartbeat, the Warbanner having already latched onto its prey. Questing vines of Wood Qi had already infiltrated the Primordial Stone's fist, snaking down like pulsing veins on an otherwise perfect structure. The terracotta warrior's expression could not change, but Rina felt it would be roaring in rage and pain at the trap it had unwittingly delivered itself into if it could. It flinched back, severing its own arm after a moment--but the attack had already infiltrated the titanic statue's chest. It stepped back, about to deliver strike to its chest.

But fell short, as the hungry qi began to feast upon its core. It slumped over--and Rina finally tapped down on the earth for the first time since the Tribulation had begun in earnest.

First Cycle--clear.

There was certainly pressure--Rina felt as she turned her gaze back up to the storming heavens--but between her studies and the Warbanner's shifting nature--she felt like she had the edge. She had accumulated a great deal of power within it by now--and while each successive Cycle delivered more energy into the assault than the last--she felt like she was building up faster than the Tribulation was.

Now back on the ground, her Arrays were back in play--and when they suddenly shone a brilliant gold--the Warbanner ignited back into a terrible flame--more intense than it had begun this contest with. The Heavens seemed to hesitate for a moment at that--but the second Cycle ultimately began with a new bolt of Divine Lightning. Rina grit her teeth as it pushed her back on her heels, leaving a great divot in the surface of the Plateau as she gave ground--but lacking the element of surprise the Tribulation exploited at the beginning, it failed to lift her up into the sky a second time.

Though not for a lack of trying, Rina thought as she felt the Divine Lightning twisting and testing at her guard, before accepting that it wasn't going to succeed at the same trick twice and shattering once more into fragments. The Moonwater Carp rose again, larger and more voracious than ever before, bubbling forward and driving Rina further back still--clawing and tearing at her guard of dust and stone before acknowledging defeat in turn.

The Emerald Sabervines emerged in the wake of the Moonwater Carp's dispersal--rooted in the good earth below--tempered already by the Primordial Stone's emergence earlier--it was able to increase its power--rooting deep into the Plateau and sending a series of blade lashes at Rina, parried one and all by the Metal Aspect of the Warbanner, as she scarpered back to escape its reach. She felt a huff of what almost felt like exasperation as the Sabervines ignited again, calling forth the Ruby Sunfire and its battle form--the Ruby Bird for the second time. It had fewer angles to attack from this time, with Rina's feet firmly on the ground, but it continued to beat at its wings, seeking an opening in the Warbanner's water field.

It found none, and screamed in frustration as it blasted itself into Rina's defenses once again, driving her further behind, but failing once more to do appreciable damage.

This round was arguably easier than the last.

It was that thought that caused Rina's thoughts to stop--even as the Primordial Stone rose for a second go, now sporting a suitably sized saber in hand--a correction from her previous kill maybe? She risked a moment to glance behind her, and blanched.

She was five paces from the edge of the plateau.

Each and every attack in the Tribulation from this cycle was aimed not to defeat her, but to force her to give ground if she wished to overcome them efficiently! Now, with the Primordial Stone before her, and no further room to retreat…

She grit her teeth in frustration, but there was no denying it--she should have realized it, when she intuited the rules of this contest--of course it would try and force her to lose by way of ring-out rather than attempt to out-escalate the Five-Element Warbanner!

But a tactic spotted is a tactic defeated--and now that she knew what she was up against…

She pressed down on her bracer, the drop of Purified Bronze Blood injected into her veins. Her hair shone with intensified light, a miniature sun piercing through the clouds of night.

With renewed strength suitable to a Foundation Establishment cultivator, Rina chose instead to go through the Primordial Stone--taking the Warbanner in hand as she burst into forward motion, shattering the stone she previously stood on as her force took her up in the air, impaling the chest of the terracotta soldier, and tearing through, core run through with the Warbanner's point, pulsing as the Wood Qi within drained it of what power remained, before crumbling to dust along with the rest of its body.

Two Cycles

Rina's expression was not a good one--she had expended one of her ace cards before even the half-way point of the Tribulation. She had been careful not to employ her Purified Blood since reaching the Thirteenth Heavenstage for a reason--the elementary manifestation of her Blood of Gold was simply too much to use only a portion of the droplet--even Millet's designs required a seed of the original material to reconstruct the droplet using her own blood.

Win or lose, the bracer would never work again--and she already felt the strength fading as the Tribulation politely gave her a moment to catch her breath.

While waiting for her temporary enhancement to fade.

Who was it that said a Tribulation was a dumb manifestation of power incapable of shenanigans? She wanted a refund on the points she spent researching this! Someone had to have known better!

A dark thought occurred to her then, and she chuckled grimly. Then again, anyone who was facing a Tribulation capable of even rudimentary tactics like this probably didn't survive to report about it. A present drawn out for those who trigger a Greater Tribulation maybe?

The final dregs of her enhancement faded, her hair dimming to its normal shade as she observed her wards flashing with the power of metal again. The sense of pressure she felt since releasing the limits on her Cultivation Base redoubled.

The Tribulation was done with the test, now came the extermination.

Divine Lightning descended for the third time, met by the Warbanner's Five Configuration. There were no attempts at skill, no attempts at trickery this time--it was an honest display of force against force.

It was still enough to nearly drive Rina to her knees before the Divine Lightning shattered. The Moonwater Carp rose again, and was met by the dust storm again. It drove against her counterstroke, dissolving the dust wall even as it lashed out arcs of moonwater to seek a gap in Rina's defenses.

It found none.

The Moonwater Carp died, bringing forth the Emerald Sabervines. Wise to their tricks, Rina vaulted high into the air, the spiral of Metal Qi trailing behind her in a wake of glittering light. Finding purchase even on these gossamer strands, Rina jumped again and again into the sky, twisting in the air to see the Sabervines reaching in vain to her.

They collapsed, and the Ruby Bird soared, eager to take advantage of Rina's invasion of its home territory. It was left disappointed as her water field slowed it, and a downward hammerblow with the Warbanner's head shattered it. The Primordial Stone emerged to give challenge, now sporting a pair of spiked shields, but Rina spun out of the way of the stroke, running along the shield face to deliver a fatal blow with the Wood Qi in her weapon.

The Third Cycle--and the Fourth followed immediately afterwards, the Divine Lightning shattering the Terracotta Soldier before it could fade, intensifying at the infusion of Earth Qi before crashing into the Warbanner's Fire configuration. Rina grunted as the force pressed her weapon into her body, her Cultivation Base churning at the impact, but the Divine Lightning was given no further ground from there. It burst, and the Moonwater Carp manifested behind Rina, mouth gleefully opening to devour the impertinent mortal.

It was less impressed when Rina kicked up a fragment of the still fading Primordial Stone and drove it in. The Carp flinched, choking at the sudden infusion of power antithetical to its own, and this was enough to allow her to strike it down with the Earth Banner.

The Emerald Jungle manifested in its shattered remains, but Rina was already on the move, Metal Banner striking left and right as she sprints beyond the reach of the writhing masses. At the edge of the forest, she sees one of her array runes--already fraying from the calamitous forces unleashed flickering red briefly--and abruptly changes the configuration to the Water Banner.

The Emerald Sabervines ignite while she is still in the periphery, and it grants the Ruby Bird a chance--however slim--to attack. A trill of victory fills the air as it dives down on the staggering Rina, contacting her Water Field--already depleted by defending against the dregs of Wood Qi left by the dying Sabervines.

And it punches through.

Not all of its power of course, even a berserk rush like this couldn't overcome the Warbanner's defenses, but it managed to reach its beak into the perimeter as it began its terminal ignition.

Rina cried out as she was flung backwards, spitting blood as her Cultivation Base recoiled into her organs. Her armor scorched and features covered in soot.

There was no time to reflect on the hurts she had taken, the Primordial Stone rose swinging a mighty halberd at her. She dove into a slide, forcefully suppressing her injuries, and waved the Warbanner up.

Divine Lightning flashed. what

The Fifth Cycle began before the Fourth had fully ended, Divine Lightning hammering into the Warbanner.

Still in the Wood Qi configuration.

In the moments the Warbanner shuddered, Rina understood the new tactic the Tribulation had executed. Two Tribulations of high intensity executed sequentially to get her in the rhythm of reacting instead of anticipating. Then a rapid ignition of the Fifth Cycle and a premature ending of the Fourth. All to give the Divine Lightning a chance to trigger a Cycle of Suppression on Rina's own tool!

The Warbanner screamed, and was flung from her hands, sailing up and over the battlespace, falling with a clatter down the rocks at the side of the Plateau--far out of reach.

Her great trump card, stripped from her in a tactic that she couldn't have possibly countered.

"MUQIN GUO!" Rina called out, the Cauldron expanding to full size as the Moonwater Carp manifested itself once more. The Carp gleefully lunging down at the helpless Rina.

Only to be caged within, as the Cauldron grew to a size capable of capturing even the Moonwater Carp.

There was a thing most people tended to forget with Rina's greatest treasure. Sure, it was unbreakable--sure, it could capture targets and limit their movements. With the help of the Forge Spirit, it could even make weapons and armor for her, quite valuable given the attrition hers took!

But the cauldron's first and original purpose was always an Alchemy Cauldron

"Refine the tribulation!" Rina called out--and Muqin Guo shone with light.

The light of well tilled soil.

"Goodness, you've lasted this long just off of that one treasure!" The cauldron sounded just a touch hysterical at this point. "I've gathered enough materials by now that refining this one shouldn't be an issue!"

The Primordial Stone employed by the Tribulation wasn't entirely being lost--while Rina fought the Tribulation, the Cauldron had been moving, collecting the embers and fragments left behind by each cycle.

Refine the Tribulation using the Tribulation as her reagents--this was the strategy Rina had set upon before being granted the Warbanner.

"I only have enough materials gathered to handle a single five element cycle though!" The Cauldron cautioned her. "I can handle this one just fine, and the Lightning of the next one--but after that, the rest will be on you!"

Five Cycles without taking serious injury, while remaining in control of the contest. That was…

Well, it was better than most could have expected, right?

She could do three cycles.

As Muqin Guo frantically continued caging and refining the remaining elements of the Fifth Cycle, Rina marched herself over to her camp, the arrays she had drawn in before this had begun shining--damaged and disrupted, but essentially intact.

Fine, this was fine.

"Puppet Soldiers!" Rina bellowed out, and the earth churned around her arrays.

Never built to resist the Tribulation, even if it would be legal.

Instead, they served a simple purpose--a concealment array to hide her final trump card.

The Golden Devil Clan has been besieged since time immemorial, a favored target by all who seek to wear a mask of righteousness over the face of naked greed. The sins of ages past forever being paid interest. Disciples in Qi Condensation raised by the thousands--and dying in thousands.

But not every fate is death. Some are crippled beyond recovery, others reach the limit of their lifespan and have no chance of breaking through. Others simply have specialties ill suited for surviving the Heavenly Tribulation and cannot surpass Qi Condensation.

Many of these retire, their careers complete and honored for their service. But for those who are willing to give their everything to the Clan--and submit themselves to the ministrations of the Array Engineers--another possibility exists.

For the Golden Devils have ever sought to overcome their weaknesses. A willing volunteer can be refined into a Puppet Soldier--mind blasted of thought and soul released to re-enter the cycle of reincarnation.

But their body and cultivation base remain, ready to fight one final battle in the name of the Clan.

Heavenly Tribulation is fair, while outside interference is forbidden on penalty of obliteration, all tools and techniques are otherwise permitted.

And puppets without a will of their own qualify as tools in the eyes of Heaven

Twenty Puppet Soldiers emerge from the sands, glassy eyed, modified soldiers in Legionnaire uniform, spears held at attention.

"Thank you all for your sacrifice…" Rina bowed to them all. If these heroes hadn't been willing to consign their bodies and cultivation base to serve the Clan beyond death…

But they did, and they had, and she would not spit on that sacrifice, for the chance they bought her.

"Assemble the Formation!" Her voice bellowed.

"AYE!" The Puppet Soldiers bellowed, mechanically arranging themselves as was required around Rina. She rose in the air in the light of Qi manifested, as their spears rose in salute.

Power condensed about Rina and the Puppet Soldiers, and a great spear burst forth from the masses, followed shortly by a bronze shield.

The phantom materialized, a giant Legionnaire with Rina's face, settling into a fighting posture.

"That's all I've got, good luck Rina!" Muqin Guo's voice echoed as it spat out the remnants of the Divine Lightning of the Sixth Cycle, the old black grease having been scorched off at some point during its stand.

"That's enough! I've got it from here!" Rina called out, as the Cauldron plopped down on the ground, spent. She turned her Hoplite's gaze upon the fragments of the Sixth Cycle's Divine Lightning, already manifesting in the form of the Moonwater Carp.

"I've had enough of you by now" Rina's voice boomed, amplified by the Qi of twenty Cultivators. The Moonwater Carp--delighted that its prey was finally in reach, exploded into motion, swimming through the sky as though it were the deepest sea. Balls of Moonwater formed in its wake, discharging in blasts of pressure seeking Rina's heart.

The Hoplite brought her shield up, Azure Moonwater splashing against it. It froze, cracked, and Rina felt blood streaming from her mouth as she caught each and every blow in sequence. The freezing hurt.

But she could take it, how many of her Clansmen had suffered this kind of pain while she was busy chasing this particular qilin?

The Moonwater Carp, annoyed that its attacks were ineffective, twitched its whiskers. It swam faster, faster--maw opening wide as it sought to devour the Hoplite whole.

It would be disappointed once more, as the great spear--unharmed by the successive strikes of Azure Moonwater--lanced up in its blind spot, piercing its vulnerable belly and driving it up above the Hoplite, bleeding further Moonwater across the plateau.

"It's just like fishing, you know? You just need enough leverage and a good dish to serve it on!" Rina quipped, mouth in a rictus as her Hoplite pivoted, shield shedding frozen air and reforming itself, driving rim-first into the gasping Moonwater Carp's new wounds. It gurgled sharply, twitching violently--and burst in a shower of Water Qi.

The Emerald Sabervines would avenge it, as was their purpose. The great jungle grew fat and mighty off of the Water Qi distributed, power no longer suppressed by the Five Element Treasures Rina had employed up until now. The vines lashed out, dripping venom that seared and corroded all things.

But Bronze did not rust--perhaps it tarnished over time--but it was not petty iron to corrode at the mere touch of the sky. The Hoplite crouched downward, shield raised up to defend the components of the Formation from assault. The vines quested around it, seeking a vulnerability to exploit, but found themselves met by the unerring aim of the spear, aimed by the collective combat experience of twenty one lives, fueled by the prowess of a genius in the Thirteenth Heavenstage.

The vines quested, were severed despite their resilience, and oh how they raged. The plateau splintered, crumbled, dissolved under their pressure, but the spire on which Rina's Hoplite stood strong, even as the area around them had barren stone replaced with fertile soil.

The Sabervines understood then that they would not be victorious--not in this exchange. They immolated as was their way in the face of defeat. The heat filled the air--but the Hoplite Formation was not so easily defeated by as little as the foemen setting your fortress ablaze around you.

Stone erodes, iron rusts, flesh bleeds--only Bronze endures eternally.

The Ruby Bird rose from the flames, the embers of the Emerald Sabervines still smouldering in the fresh soil of the landscape as it flapped its wings, gaze turned to the phantasmal soldier standing against it, shield scarred and pitted by frost and acid alike.

A calculating, assessing look.

Rina didn't like that--the idea of Impressing the Tribulation didn't occur to her when she began this contest in the first place.

So when it simply burst in place, she began to grow wary. The echoes of flame that reached the Hoplite Formation still singed her even through its aegis--but nothing serious.

The Primordial Stone this time was different--a hulking behemoth, twice the size of the earliest ones--as was to be expected from a three element augmentation cycle--with the most recent one having expended the entirety of its power to foster its own rise. Forged from much of the remaining stone littering the ruins that was once the Skyscraping Plateau, it was large enough to face the Hoplite Formation face to face--despite standing apart from the forming spire.

It faced her, spear and shield in hand.

"Hah! You want to challenge my Clan at our own techniques?" Rina laughed. "So be it then! Let's exchange pointers, Heavenly Tribulation!"

Her Hoplite's spear thrust out, skidding off of the Terracotta Soldier's own upraised shield. It took advantage of the opportunity to return the favor--and Rina thought nothing of blocking it in turn.

She immediately regretted it.

Her bones fractured sympathetically as the Hoplite's Shield cracked in several places, the Puppet Soldiers all spat up blood, and the sympathetic link between the participants immediately reported several of them suffering organ damage, and would be going into shock if they were capable of it in this state.

But damaged as the Formation was, it held. For a Hoplite of the Golden Devils would only fall when the heart of its components did.

More importantly, she had learned something in that exchange--while the Primordial Stone held terrific power, it was slow and clumsy.

The Hoplite struck out again with its spear, the foe's invincible shield rising to meet the blow. It skidded off ineffectually, sparks sailing across and igniting much of the rapidly growing plant life in the growing crater below. Flames licked at the Primordial Stone, which it endures without complaint--as was its way.

It brought its spear up, and thrust for the Hoplite once more.

Perhaps it would have been surprised then, if it had the thought for this--that Rina did not respond.

Instead, the spear punctured through the Hoplite Formation's head… And did nothing

It was a common mistake held by the Clan's foes, those who only had the understanding that a Formation's entire body was real. It wasn't really, the main body of the Hoplite Formation was the Spear and the Shield--everything else? Just a phantasmal projection of Qi to provide space for the Cultivators participating in it.

With a mere twenty one components, the head was entirely empty.

The Terracotta Soldier had no time to react to its mistake--Rina's bronze shield snapped up, the rim catching it in its overextended elbow, severing it in a flash of sparks and Qi. Its defense compromised, the Spear drove into its heart, cracking the Primordial Stone's core.

It stood there, transfixed at the blow it had suffered, and fell to its knees, defeated.

Six Cycles down.

But the Tribulation was not finished yet--and nor was the Primordial Stone. For the energy generated by the Cycle of Mutual Augmentation must be released eventually.

The Core sparked, visible through the gap the Spear was even now withdrawing from--and Rina understood what was coming next intuitively.

She raised the Shield before the Formation.

The Primordial Stone self-detonated.

Calamity ensued, connections winked out one by one as the Puppet Soldiers burned to ashes grounding out the power released in this apocalypse of Earth Qi. Rina's glasses shattered and her armor tore as she staggered back--her hair knocked loose from the shockwaves released in the detonation.

"I let it get a bit long, didn't I?" She wondered absently in the moment it took for her head to stop spinning, her golden hair strewn out all over the place--down nearly to her knees when left outside of the tight braided bun she normally kept it in. "Does that really make me a princess?"

She couldn't help it, she laughed at that--she laughed so hard that it agitated her new injuries.

It wasn't good. Her Cultivation Base was a mess, her Meridians were torn and it'd be easier to report the parts of her that weren't a broken mess at this point.

Six Cycles down, Three to go.

"Have to look on the bright side though!" She thought, with unreasonable cheer given the gravity of the situation, as she pulled herself up to her feet, with nothing but a chunk of rock to support her. [i}"That's two-thirds of the way through it! What's three more after I've already taken six, right?"[/i]

The crack of lightning in the distance snapped her attention forward, as the Divine Lightning snapped out into the Seventh Cycle.

Striking nothing but the land beneath.

"Wait what?" Rina asked, the power in the air doubling again as the Moonwater Carp rose in the wake of the Divine Lightning--and self detonated itself, filling the air with Water Qi again.

"Oh that's not even remotely fair" She shook her head as the Seventh Cycle executed in rapid succession, Emerald Sabervines immediately immolating and releasing the Ruby Bird, which exploded and gave rise to the Primordial Stone--which was struck down in turn by the start of the Eighth Cycle and the lash of Divine Lightning.

Nothing would be left to chance.

The Karmic Debt was paid, the suffering of the Golden Devils no longer necessary--enough good had been done over the countless years since the Fall that their punishment no longer came from the Heavens.

But they could not be trusted to rise to power again--the seeds of the calamity that was the Sea-Conquering Army still burn in the hearts of the Clan.

The Moonwater Carp--and it was looking distinctly less Carp like by the minute--rose once again, and burst immediately, a jungle of deepest Emerald growing beneath it, which immolated to release a three colored bird--no longer Ruby alone.

They would endure the trials of the mortal realm as common Cultivators, to rise and fall by the merits permitted to them--and no more.

"With all due respect, that's wrong"

The Primordial Stone rose in the detonation of the Three-Colored Bird, barely holding the image of a man--but it paused.

"If this was a world without Cultivation, you'd be absolutely correct" Rina met the gaze of the Tribulation unflinchingly. "We could find strength in our unity, we could make things better with the strength of mortals, and endure the trials of nature as is proper. To fall from grace isn't a bad thing, as long as you can live to learn from the experience, and become better people as a result."

Her eyes shone gold, deepest gold--her hair glittering like a newborn sun.

Something had shifted.

"But this is a world of Cultivation, where strength is the only virtue inherent within--where the strong do what they want and the weak suffer as they must. Where the will of Heaven itself must accept the actions of the biggest fist." She understood now.

By every Heaven there ever was and ever would be. She Understood now!

"How can we possibly learn to be better, when it takes everything we have just to survive the next twenty years?" Rina asked. "Learning… You can't learn to be better, if doing so just gets you killed before your epiphany."

The Primordial Stone gazed back, and its head tilted ever so slightly, acknowledging the point.

It crumbled this time, not a self-detonation, and the world filled with the oppression of a Heavenly Tribulation once more.

The Ninth Cycle.

"But I know, you're as bound as everyone else is." Rina continued. "If you were to intervene before things got bad, nobody could learn--they'd just grow to rely on you… And nobody grows that way. It's you, isn't it? The Shadow and the Heavens--it's the same thing, isn't it?"

The Tribulation Cloud crackled--and every soul in a thousand leagues felt Heaven itself girding its loins.

"But I can't move you with words, even if you would be moved by them." Rina exhaled, and settled into a fighting stance--her body was in tatters, and her soul was strained. Her Cultivation Base was inaccessible.

But that was okay.

Because she had the Dao in her heart.

"So I'll move you with my Fist. Please advise me, Heavenly Tribulation."

Apocalypse rained down on the spire, and time slowed to a crawl.

Inhale.

Exhale.

"VOID!" She shouted, sending her fist to meet the Divine Lightning.

In the absence of all powers lies peace, may it last for all time

The Divine Lightning parted around Rina's fist, scattering off to all sides. Mineral veins germinated throughout the landscape.

Azure Moonwater--enough to fill a castle manifested--and condensed together. It was no longer a Moonwater Carp, it had crossed the Dragon Gate long ago.

The Moonwater Dragon roared in challenge, power beyond power gathering in its maw. Its body rippled in righteous fury, and its breath an ocean.

In response, Rina chambered a second fist.

Inhale

Exhale

"FLAME!"

Intoxicated by her beauty, Flame gave chase for a thousand years

Blossoms of pure flame formed in the path of the Dragon's Breath--crashing against the breath attack. Under traditional understanding of Elemental Theory, Fire is suppressed by Water.

And yet…

These flames didn't seem to care that they boiled off into nothing--if anything, the opposition made them all the more determined to claim their prize! They coiled up around the torrent of dragon's breath, reaching up into the Tribulation Beast, and coiled lovingly around it.

It howled, and burst into steam, Azure Moonwater boiled off

The steam scattered across the newborn valley--and it knew its first rains in the days to come--there would be no desert here in the future.

The Moonwater Dragon fell to earth, bleeding steam, and burst into pieces. The Emerald Sabervines would take their place, as was right and proper--the valley growing mighty and rich with life, all with a single purpose in mind.

The Third Fist.

"WIND!"

Ever the adventurer, ever the scholar, he traveled the land, hindered by none

The coiling Sabervines lashed out--only to find themselves severed, chopped bit by bit to pieces. They attempted to parry, to resist this onslaught--but the fist wind was beyond their grasp.

The Emerald Jungle collapsed around the spire, fitfully igniting as its resistance collapsed. From the ashes rose the now Five-Colored Bird, carrying a majesty that had been absent in its prior interactions, a crest that very nearly could be considered a crown.

A monarch among fires, who looked down upon the world with disdain. It spread its wings, and gave a cry of battle, a challenge to the pretender standing before it.

The fourth fist.

"STONE!"

He tolerated their adventures upon him, making art of his scars when he thought nobody was looking

From the girl's feet came a spike of stone, tempered by eight cycles of Tribulation. Her fist struck it from the base, sending it hurling into the Five-Colored Bird's heart.

It shook as the spike pierced through, hanging in the air disbelievingly--then it shrieked in pain as its body ignited.

One breath, two.

And the world was fire. Burning away the toxins and venom left by the Sabervines, cleaning the land of the debris of a Five Element Tribulation taken to the extreme, leaving the most fertile ash soil in its wake. The valley would evermore be capable of growing the finest crops, in quantities envied throughout the desert. It washed over Rina, and found her unmoved by its fury--for Stone shielded body and soul.

But one final trial lay ahead. One final calamity.

The earth shook, the sky rattled--and the remaining ridge of the Plateau itself rose to its feet--taking the form of an immortal cultivator. Dispassionately did it gaze upon the world at its feet--no mere terracotta soldier.

It gestured, a flying sword manifesting from its own body--and sent the assault down on the ant that had provoked it.

Rina shook her head in good humor at this sight--this, of all things was the end?

Ah well.

The Fifth Fist!

"WATER!"

She found all of the secret places, making her home where she pleased--none dared stand in her way, for her temper ran colder than all others.

The steam brought up earlier responded to her call--phase shifting once again into liquid water. They caught the flying sword within it--the erosion of untold years wearing it into dust, and leaving the water unharmed. The Terracotta Immortal was unimpressed--and with a wave of his finger, a hundred more such blades manifested and struck the oncoming tide.

It was no more effective than the first attack--and it lashed out with a fist strike in challenge.

The Water parted slightly--but was undeterred as it engulfed the Terracotta Immortal, grinding and eroding it. Its immaculate features are unchanging even as it steadily erodes away. It mattered not.

Its heart was still intact--and would do its duty.

It melted away, leaving nothing but a gleaming core, pulsing with uncontrolled power. The final line in the way of any upstarts.

An apocalypse, at the end of an impossible trial. Outsiders were not entitled to a path to life, when taking a forbidden act.

"Thank you"

The Tribulation hesitated.

"If you really wanted to destroy us, all Tribulations would be like this--we would be reduced to mortals, and slaughtered one by one, we would have no power to even hope to pay the karmic debt brought on by the acts of our Ancestors." Rina asked, chambering one final fist.

"So… Thank you--for not closing off every chance, for giving us a possibility to survive, even if we have to face the winds and the rains at every step."

She clenched her fist, and summoned forth all of her focus.

Inhale

Exhale

"LIGHTNING!"

The creative force, the spark of life and light, the interaction between what is within and without.

Golden Light filled the valley.

And the Core was no more.

Rina Callista stood--alone upon the last Spire in what was once a plateau--and was now a great valley of fertile soil, dotted with channels and holes that would soon be great rivers and lakes. Riches abound within the crater, created and revealed in the clash of unthinkable forces.

It wouldn't change the Clan's fortunes--it was too small, too limited in scale. A villa at best when the Clan required a city.

But good things started off with small things that built up and became big things in the future.

There was probably something profound to be said in that. Something to consider--later.

For there was one final task Rina needed to complete, in the wake of the Five Element Tribulation.

She sat down, crossed her legs, and rested her hands upon them, closing her eyes. Breathing in, and out.

Her Qi Sea was in chaos, but shone brighter than it ever had before--tempered beyond all reason by the Tribulation. Even if she did nothing at all, assembling her first Pillar would be simplicity in itself, a moment's thought to manifest it from the sea of power.

But she didn't go through all of this for an ordinary array of Pillars.

All of her thoughts, her philosophy, and her tears flowed into her most essential being. The labor and love of nearly two centuries of adventure and cultivation. Of duty and dreams entwined into one great chain of being.

Upon Four Olympian Keystones would she raise a Pillar of unmatched strength--embodying in itself the Dao that would ordinarily be found through painstaking meditation and enlightenment alloyed together at the end of a long road.

In her case, it took the form of a ring--a structure with no beginning or ending, bound from end to end in a virtuous cycle. Where any could approach from any direction and be welcomed.

The days of dismissing all beyond her clan as barbarians and brutes had ended--the World-Lord needed to hold compassion even for those who would threaten their charge. And so rose from the sea of her mind a great ring, forged from finest Celestial Bronze. Adorning its surface were strange glyphs--never before seen in the world. She understood their nature--as was proper from the one who had envisioned them.

Stone, Water, Flame, Wind, Void, Lightning, Life, Fate, Man--the nine elements of the World-Lord.

She knew--here and now--that her cultivation path would not be the same as others. Her Dao-Pillar was comprehensive, embodying within it the sum total of her Truth. Instead, her labors would be refining and reinforcing this pillar further, to draw in further Qi from Heaven and Earth and tolerate greater pressure within. Sevenfold refinement would be enough to withstand the weight of a Core. Eightfold would be enough to bring the power of Fate out into the greater realm.

Ninefold was beyond her speculation, and she wasn't sure she wanted to guess either--even if it was physically possible, could she even justify it as anything more than hubris?

A King was already a generational prodigy, capable of running rampant over the Virtuous Flipper Region when they reached maturity. What possible use would it be to become an Emperor? Or Heaven forbid, a Saint?

The Golden Devil Clan didn't need an Emperor to find their footing. The lifespan and strength of a King would be enough to reverse their fortunes, and carve a place in the Virtuous Flipper Region where they could grow in peace, to discard the darkness they so badly needed at present.

Her Truth echoed through the land of her rebirth--and if she felt the tiniest feeling of acceptance from the World at large…

Well, that's just the least it can do. Really, Five Element Tribulation? That's just way too excessive for anyone!

Rina Callista opened her eyes, and rotated her Cultivation Base.

The phantom projection of the [World Lord's Halo] glittered like a newborn star in the night.
 
Eirene of Nowhere 15: the teeth of the beast
Eirene of Nowhere fifteenth omake: the teeth of the beast​

The phantasmal cat was licking its disporportionately small paw as it sat in thin air next to Eirene, the only reason she wasn't dead yet. The serpent's venom should have killed her by now, Heavens' answer to her stubbornness... but her stubbornness had teeth.

Very many very sharp teeth that were all grinning, somehow visible despite the paw licking. Quite frankly, it was better to not think too deeply about the exact mechanic of that part.

"That's a fine predicament you've got yourself in," the Mesmerizing Cat murmured, the patterns on its fur shifting, somehow keeping at bay everything at once - the serpent frozen in the middle of closing its jaws around Eirene, the venom in the wound, the woman herself curled up and near-screaming from pain, only managing not to because of the need to purge the poison and suture herself shut as best she could in the brief respite the cat had given her. She was held, but not restrained, unlike the rest of the scene; it seemed to have something to do with the nature of time passing, and Eirene was getting excellent practice with not thinking about things. That wasn't normally a thing she did, but here was apparently at least one situation where that was the requirement for survival.

"Mind telling me why that thing's not dead yet?"

The serpent was enormous and mighty, and yet, it would have taken barely a move on Eirene's part to drive it to its death. She'd figured out the reason it was attacking quickly enough - well, comparatively quickly, it had been a year - but what it wasn't noticing was its precious young being oh so close to a vortex of qi that Eirene could easily sense would tear them apart. She'd need only to nudge the nest to send it spinning, and the serpent's only recourse to shield it would be with its own body, giving itself to be torn apart instead, sending the nest of hatchlings soaring away with only the barest hope of survival.

It would, she knew. She'd been playing the whole while, attempting to calm or reason with the serpent, and while her entire might was not enough to actually influence the mind, too primal and powerful for that, she came to understand it well enough.

It wasn't listening, because it was afraid. Its entire being was focused on its children, right now, no room for further thought.

Well, not right now right now. Right now, the world was frozen, but as Eirene slowly drifted further away from the serpent's maw, in the gentle embrace of the curling winds that seemed to defeat gravity entirely, leaving one only with their own Dao to help tell up from down - right now Eirene saw the serpent's eyes following her.

A second chance. And she shouldn't be wasting the cat's patience either.

"Because I'm not here to attack it," she told the both of them. "I was flung here by a wind; I've no intention of picking a fight. I'd have looked for a way out, but I was a bit too busy being chased; now that for the moment I'm not, by the way,"

(that was a lie. Even just looking at speaking was sapping concentration from suppressing the venom, allowing it a better grip on Eirene's meridians and acupoints, going from a momentary wound to something that would take a much longer time to recover from. She allowed it to; she'd been fighting for this for a year, and one did not become a cultivator without a particular brand of stubbornness that was near to foolishness)

"...now that for the moment I'm not, I'm fairly certain that that," she pointed at the nest, and after a moment realized that the serpent, frozen mid-lunge, could not see them from its angle; but the world itself distorted, and while nothing seemed to move, exactly, angles changed so that suddenly the serpent was facing not only her but the nest as well. Thank you, Mesmerizing Cat, for proper drama, she thought, and continued: "...fairly certain that that is not the exit and also no place for chicks to be..."

She trailed off. Now that she could see the whole layout clearly - give or take headache-inducing funhouse-mirror-like distortions - she realized that the serpent could not move the nest away easily, or at all. The qi vertext was too close; any wrong movement would send either the nest or the serpent itself spinning to its death. The parent was desperate and angry at an intruder for a reason; for a year she'd tried to persuade it of an absence of threat from her without realizing that she was not the source of the threat it feared at all.

"...now it just needs a tiny nudge," she murmured, changing the tack mid-thought. The vortex was too close for the serpent to be able to do anything... but the tooth that pierced her was alone the size of Eirene's entire body. She was, for it, a particularly large bug, and where even a single claw could not fit without touching something it shouldn't, Eirene could do a dance without fear; and actually she didn't even need to, for unlike the beast, whose qi was entirely confined to its body, she could just... affect things... at a distance.

The distance which shrunk, again without anything particularly moving from its location in space - but the nest was in front of Eirene now, the vertex just off to the side; she could feel the serpent's gaze on her, drowning in fear and desperation and an absurd, nearly dead hope; she focused on that hope to hold herself to it as she uncurled, fighting her own body's reaction. The venom was no longer spreading; she'd kept it from vital areas, but it was seeded deeply in her bones now; no matter. This wasn't about that.

She brought the flute to her lips, carefully, slowly, despite her trembling hands; she blew, and a precisely aimed nudge sent the nest spinning away through the Cat's distorted space, further and further from the vortex until it was safely outside of its gravity; Eirene was frankly surprised that she'd aimed precisely enough to hit it just right from the first time without further course corrections... but she'd take small victories where she could get them.

The flute slipped from her grasp, and the only reason it did not float away to be lost forever among the clouds was the cord connecting it to her belt - Eirene was no idiot. The space distorted again, the nest and the vortex growing ever further away, until the stage - seen somehow from everywhere at once, she was even seeing herself from the side, and oh by the way she looked like shit - was just her, the serpent and the cat, its size oddly unclear between barely bigger than her and barely bigger than the serpent.

(She supposed she could just go with "barely bigger" as the descriptor then. That seemed the intent.)

"A marvelous play," the Cat purred, "truly I am satisfied. You may call on me again, mosaic, and I'll be looking forward to what show you put on next. Try not to die before then!"

On that encouraging note, it vanished, and the space popped back to normal.

One unfortunate effect of that was that time was unfrozen as well, and the serpent continued its lunge; Eirene was actually just far enough to be out of the way of the initial movement - she could feel the serpent's fur brushing her feet as it whistled by - but she was in no shape to dodge in the way she had for a year. Her opponent only ever needed to land a single good hit; and, well, that had just happened. She'd remembered the cat, then, in her desperation, and called on it; and frankly she was fine with what that'd allowed her to do, even if it didn't make her any less dead.

Not all who went to the Qiguai Secret Realm emerged back out; one did not enter it without accepting that simple truth.

But the serpent did not attack. It wove itself around her in curl after curl until its long body formed what might as well have been a basket, and inside that basket a giant serpent face poked in and a long tongue extended in her direction and wrapped itself around her and then held her, as gently as in a hand.

"My greetings," Eirene managed, stunned by the pain and the general numbness spreading itself around her - exhaustion? Relief? Satisfaction? Apathy? She couldn't tell anymore.

"My greetings as well," the creature hissed, not seeming deterred from speech in the slightest by its tongue's activity. "And so too my apologies. I see you are in no state to talk; I will take you somewhere that's safe, then..."

It seemed to continue speaking for some time after; Eirene could not be sure. The world swam, and bit by bit she passed out.
end omake​

First of the series~

And guess what my omake reward is going to be! I know a Healing Treasure would make more sense, but this was just... narratively necessary.

Also I'm working on an illustration of that last scene, here's a WIP preview:

 
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Good Seed Report Part 2 - But the Qi Is So Delightful
Sorry gang! I am once again gainfully employed and I drastically underestimated how much of my time and energy settling into the new job will take. I'm going to try and do the rest of the Good Seeds by dribs and drabs until I settle back into my new schedule.

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Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora
Omake Reward - LST
Fate
- Recovery from such terrible wounds takes time. Antonius, however, found his raw talent outpacing the wounds, able to move forward as other cultivators would've. He was sent on a small expedition to the Three Waterfalls Valley, where he discovered a Step Forward Herb, a simple flowering herb that pushed one's cultivation forward by about a decade. He was hunted briefly by a trio of angry lizards who had guarded the herb, but through the judicious use of trickery and inciting them to fight one another over it he escaped unscathed.
Impact - 7 (+0)
Cultivation
- 10th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 132 years (+24)
Health
- Badly Wounded -> Wounded

Chrysanthos Krimta
Omake Reward - Tribulation Treasure
Fate
- Entered the Qiguai Secret Realm. There he discovered some marvelous treasures, and had a generally easy time of things. Thrown into an isolated fragment of space, he was stuck on a piece of space that looped back in on itself. As he walked it, he gained an insight into part of the Dao underlying the universe itself, allowing him to advance his own comprehension of his own Dao massively (Tribulation Treasure). After walking the massive bizarre loop for three years, he found a way out - and a treasure cache. In there he gained two artifacts, the Thoughtsword (+2 Impact). An ordinary sword in most aspects, its great power came from the fact that once linked with an owner it could be commanded by thought alone, and could absorb Qi from the environment to recharge. While not the deadliest of weapons, it opened up another option in combat. Secondly came the Fool's Sceptre (+2 Impact). A partner to the Thoughtsword, it made one's thoughts and intentions unreadable by any below Nascent Soul. Useful in both combat and while bargaining.

Upon walking out, he prepared himself for ascension and tribulation. Rapidly taken home and given a guarded mountain to face the Heavens on, he did not speak of what he faced, but upon descending the Clan had gained another Foundation Establishment expert.

Impact - 4 (+4)
Cultivation
- Foundation Establishment (Early 1-Pillar)
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - Entered Foundation Establishment. Set to 100.
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Demetrius Ceres
Omake Reward - LST
Fate - As the Xin prepared for war, Demetrius prepared to explore their people. Aside one from one rather flagrant 80-year old claiming her great-grandson was her and his son (with forged paperwork to prove it), the people of Xin proved to be friendly, if somewhat haughty. It was here he managed to find a Seed of Water (+20 cultivation), a powerful seed that could be easily cooked into a pill to advance one's cultivation. The agreement with Xin had these seeds to be given as tribute to the Clan. However, this one had been secreted away by one of the Xin families, seeking to advance their own power once the seed flowered. Once discovered, they cowered, and offered the seed to Demetrius, knowing that war was coming and only the Clan could protect them. However, it had to be used within a week of flowering. With no other option, he cooked the seed and stepped forward quickly, reaching closer and closer to the 11th Heavenstage.
Impact - 2 (0)
Cultivation
- 10th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 171 (+42)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy
 
BTW, if anyone is curious, Rina's character sheet is now up to date with her Breakthrough completed, and people can now gaze upon the rewards for Grandmastery!

(Though going for it is still super risky holy shit)
 
I wonder if anyone else will manage to pass the Five Elements Tribulation from the THirteenth Heavenstage?
 
Year 140 Interlude - Ascension
Manuel woke with a start.

He felt... something. A hint of Nascent Soul, some Dao-power leaking from somewhere.

He wreathed himself in utter darkness in a but a moment, and flew at all speed towards it.

No.

No.

He knew where it was coming from. The Callista girl, seeking to ascend through the 13th Heavenstage.

He cursed himself for a blind fool. So what if they would have lost a few watchers to her tribulation to guard her more closely? He would've stood guard himself, if he thought it worth the risk. But he didn't know how her Five-Elements Tribulation would react to the presence of a Nascent Soul. They knew precious little about it, in truth, beyond the fact that it was possible. The Clan had lost many records in their many defeats, and he had delved into one of their libraries near Turtlebone Mountain, seeking old records.

He'd ended up being attacked by a pair of Early Nascent owls, of all things, and been forced to flee after recovering the old records. Oh, he could've killed them, but the expenditure before the war? Not worth it in the slightest.

The records had proven to be useless, and he'd written to Scarletglyph and made some rather considerable concessions in terms of information in return for some unspecified help she could offer in some unspecified way. Six hundred years of information on the Demonic Altar Sect, unredacted. He winced just thinking about it.

After that, he had turned himself away from the girl. Even exerting his Dao on her, he feared, would cause the wrath of the Heavens to multiply. He didn't know, though, and that was the agonizing thing.

He had left her to ascend, and now she was dead.

Killed by some Nascent Soul, likely Jingshen. Taunting him with just a sliver of power, left there after they'd slaughtered her and left her to rot.

He felt infuriated.

"Someone will burn for this.", a voice muttered.

It was his.

He hadn't lost control like that in some time. Still, a talent like that simply killed! The resources poured into the girl, the hope she could have represented... he understood why they had done it. It didn't make him any less angry.

The Dao-feeling got stronger as he got closer. It was... oppressive, for lack of a better word. Where Manuel sought never to confront, to seek the sly angle of approach and to win without fighting, this was different.

A new Nascent Soul? Who? He discarded and considered possibilities constantly, none making sense. He knew all the Core Formation elders who might have ascended and done this, and none of them fit. None of his hypotheses fit, but... he supposed he would find out soon enough.

He drew closer at immense speed, burning Spirit Stones like they were firewood to fuel his travel. Nobody could even detect him, every stealth art he had garnered in long centuries employed. He swept across the sky, invisible and undetectable, ready to kill.

He looked down, cleaver in hand.

...what.

Rina Callista stood there, her Dao burning like a bonfire. The metaphysical weight of who she was pushing down on reality, like she had reached Nascent Soul herself. It took him a moment to reassert himself, to not let her Dao impose over his own, as weak as it was.

He stood there in the air, in shock. For nearly thirty seconds he stood there, simply processing.

Well.

That certainly changed things.

His anger turned into something else. He smiled, and shook his head, speaking to himself. Better to ensure she didn't see him.

"Heaven-defying talents. This old man apologises, for he had eyes, but could not see Mt. Tai. But who could have expected this?"

He chuckled, and flew slowly away. He had arrangements to make.

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Six weeks later, he met Lady Jiao.

The beautiful red-skinned woman looked at him, and Manuel played another card.

She accepted, as was her way, but he discovered secrets. Without any sort of momentary pause, he carved into her mind, aiming to steal secrets, and then to cloak them, even from Jiao. Hiding her own knowledge in her own mind would make it impossible for her to accept it - she could not accept what she did not know - and could potentially cripple her Dao. It was one of the most vicious attacks he'd ever launched, and it meant discarding a trump card for mere intimidation.

Ten years of thought gone, one carefully prepared weapon turned to uselessness. Still, it would be worth it.

She gasped, hands waving in the air.

"I apologise, Lord Konstantinos! Grand Elder! We will pay the fee for the smuggling of the-"

Manuel let the darkness subside for a moment, the knowledge barely still available to her. The face of her father when she was seven, the first boy she'd ever kissed - and had never told anyone about -, how she wept in her room when her best friend of a hundred years died two centuries ago. Secrets, and painful ones. All of these things he threatened to rip away from her, covering them in shadow, leaving her some sort of broken person, unable to accept who she was because she did not know.

"How could I be so discourteous as to demand payment from our eternal friends and allies in the Jingshen Clan? No, I am simply here to talk."

Tears started crawling down her face, and she started sniffing.

"Please don't take them from me. Please."

Honestly. This would do her good. Old Jingshen had clearly not tempered his daughter at all, he had no idea how she'd reached Nascent Soul. Nepotism, most like. She spent so much time attacking she forgot that doing so was merely giving away secrets. He wasn't passive because he didn't care about face, it was that face was less important than being able to secret away the right tools for the right moments.

Fearlessness. Now there was a good one.

Her secret memories of overcoming fears - of a bandit who had raped and killed his way through three villages and nearly done the same to her. She had overcome it, of course, and that memory was the keystone to her bravery in future. If he took the memory of overcoming the fear and killing the bandit, only the fear would remain. The unrelenting terror that would have coloured the rest of her life would do so in truth - it would sour every memory, poison every great deed she had ever achieved.

He shook his head.

He genuinely didn't understand how she'd reached Core Formation, let alone Nascent Soul. This sort of mental attack was basic. Old Jingshen had pampered his daughter to absurd levels.

Her face was scrunched up, and she began to accept. Good, at least she had some skill. He would've been able to kill her in moments with this, even in the midst of battle. He renewed his attack, seizing more and more important memories. Honestly, Old Jingshen had to have expected he'd do this at some point. The fact that he hadn't so far was simply his desire to use this at an opportune moment.

"Lady Jiao, please take a message to your father. I found your little spy around the Callista scion. Only a watcher, and to that I do not object. However - if she dies by your hand - or the hand of your father, know that that is my bottom line. What I am inflicting on you now is more in the nature of a warning, something to ensure I am taken seriously. I fear you might discount that her death truly would be unacceptable, and do so while I am engaged with the Cannibals, believing I would be unwilling to open a second, suicidal front in my war."

He let her go, her eyes rolled back in her head. It took her nearly five seconds to recover, to regain her former poise.

"On my Dao, I swear this. If I find either of your Nascent Souls killed her, or merely plotted to kill her, I will wreak terrible vengeance upon the Jingshen Clan. I will use poisons you have not seen, curses you cannot imagine. I will end every single one of your family, and I will leave you personally in terror and fear before I shatter your meridians. I am quite aware this will lead to my death and the end of my Clan, so you must understand that I am very serious when I speak these words."

She stared at him, unable to speak for a moment.

He smiled, and walked over to the side of the small building they had occupied for the sake of this meeting, picking up a kettle.

He poured the brewed tea, steeped in Jade Calming Essence. Costly enough to buy a small city, but worth it here.

"Tea, Lady Jiao?"

She nodded, gulping down the tea in great mouthfuls. In mere moments, she had regained her former poise entirely, seeming unaffected by the ordeal she had just underwent.

Manuel felt a brief flare of amusement rise in him.

Losing the terror and fear would make it harder for her to accept what he had done, and would sabotage her efforts to raise mental defenses against it in future. Old Jiao would likely be angry, but he had done no lasting harm, and had been careful to steal no truly important secrets. A few minor tariff adjustments would keep the peace, there.

The main thing was ensuring that their perennial rivals didn't get any ideas. Hopefully it would be enough. He couldn't guard the girl at all times - nor would it be good for her growth - but he had to do something or she'd be assassinated before the decade was out.
 
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