Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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A note on those aiming for Foundation Building.

The formula is this. 40 years^(1+stages above 9th-trib treasures)-total omake wordcount. So 40 years for 9th, 80 for 10th, 160 for 11th, 320 for 12th, 640 for 13th. Tribulation Treasures halve your needed time.

Your formula would go 40 -> 1,600 -> 64,000 -> 2,560,000 -> 102,400,000

I think you meant to say 40 years * 2 ^ (stages above 9th).
 
Aretaphila Myia 8 - Opening Act
Aretaphila Myia
Opening Act


"The Scarred Lands are the vast remnants of a battlefield between the Shanqu Clan and the Blood Cannibals shortly after the latter's founding many centuries ago, when the Golden Devils had broken the Abyssal Demons and drove those Blood Path that remained into the desert."

Aretaphila glanced towards Ambrus Nike, guiding the team through an outcropping of stone. A natural gap of solidity in between a number of dunes, signs of the sheer upheaval that the formerly pitted land had undergone before the scars for which it had been named were buried beneath the sands.

"In that time, the Shanqu were a Demonic Path entity, who records showed had two specialities: The first was a tradition in Beast Cultivation, which Clan Scholars think was either due to the prevalence of the many types of Scorpions in this region, or the infestation is the result of the long-dead Shanqu releasing their formerly domesticated stores of the Beasts into the wild as an act of desperation as the Golden Devils came down from the mountains."

Vatatzes looks up, "And the other speciality?"

Nike pauses, his eyes tracking the terrain before settling on a spot in the near distance.

"The Shanqu Clan possessed a deep affinity for Geomancy, specialized in their control of the sand. They were the ones to originally construct the Scorpion Road, raising it from the desert in heavily compressed sand as foundation-stones, regularly maintained by their clan's cultivators." The older man smiles, "I'm sure the savages thought it would never outlive them."

Aretaphila glanced outwards towards where their guides eyes had traced, and on the horizon she spotted a distortion in the terrain. Individually raised structures in the shadow of larger dunes.

"Wasn't it only a few centuries between when the Blood Cannibals were founded and the Clan eliminated Shanqu as we were driven from the mountains?"

"That is simply how Blood Path is," Aretaphila responded, muttering as she attempted to trace the missing two members of their band, "When given room and ample lives to grow fat on, they can reach the higher levels of cultivation all too quickly. Even with the Scorpion Road as they held it, the Shanqu never had more than two Nascent Realms even at their highest."

The descendent of the Elder of War grimaced, "So while one of them was working to suppress the Battle Blood Cannibals here, the Golden Devils descended from the mountains and took everything from them."

Aretaphila clenched her fist.

"That's simply the way the world is," Nike answered, taking a long pull from his skein with a satisfied smacking of his lips, "Those who show weakness ultimately become prey for their rivals. The Clan showed weakness in crushing Old Demon, and thus we were driven into the desert. The Shanqu Clan showed weakness in underestimating both the Golden Devils and the Battle Blood Cannibals, and thus were caught between their enemies and destroyed utterly."

Even with the wind temporarily died down, a faint howling still entered Myia's ears. A wailing of the damned, their essences drained to fuel the growth of a greater power than they.

This world had caused her people to sink to such lows merely to survive. A crushing weight brought to bear for the crime of seeking to make it a better place.

The Clan records held no information on the culture of the Shanqu Clan. No memories of them. Compared to the Plains powers, the Jingshen Clan's avarice and selling of Spirit Stones, or the enmity and mutual hatred with the Battle Blood Cannibals, the Shenqu Clan had simply been…in the way.

One more power among many. Just another faceless foe, doomed to play the same game.

A bronzed hand reached up to touch the smooth stone before her, and Aretaphila found herself wondering if the Qi which had animated this stone from its resting place in the earth still remained. One final legacy of a people that had been wiped from the world because the Golden Devils could not afford to be weak, not even for a moment.


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Mopsus and the taller Phryne arrived later, the pair loping through the desert sands as they had completed their own circuit of the land around the village.

They had seen nothing of note, neither bandits nor Blood Path, but a sand storm was approaching. Thankfully, each of the group of five were possessed of the Bronze Blood in sufficient quality to be easily recognizable. And even if the well hidden village was at the very edge of Clan territory, the morals therein still offered tribute to the Golden Devil Clan.

"Thank you for having us," Aretaphila said that evening to the Village Chief, his own hut built cunningly into a wide cleft which was all but untouched by the sand-laced winds which otherwise ruled over the village.

Nike and the other members of her team had taken to exploring the village, seeking their own meager distractions while Aretaphila put her experience as her Grandfather's representative at the Waycastle to good use. Necessary courtesy and respect to be shown to those who brought wealth to her people's coffers. It was not enough that people knew that they owed the Golden Devils their wealth - it was necessary that they be happy to do so as well. Those who were dissatisfied would always seek an alternative, no matter how ill-advised the attempt would be.

Waycastle Myia was hardly the wealthiest of cities, but as one of the three trade nexuses for the Scorpion Road coming from Jingshen Clan lands, there had simply been no room to be dismissive. No face to spare for looking down on the majority of caravans that had passed through, no matter how small or irrelevant the mortal merchant may be, there must always be diplomacy.

By rote, Aretaphila walked through her conversation with the Village Chief, even as the discussion went through strange turns as she felt him start intimating more than was necessarily polite when complimenting her. With the ease of weary long practice, the Myia heir gave a noncommittal response to the Chiefs attempts to convince her take him out of his village. He was certainly nice enough, but a man who would shirk the responsibility he had taken on was beneath her.

Thankfully, the Chief had taken an entirely different understanding of Aretaphila's words, and with a smoldering grin the man excused himself, before walking back into the cooled depths of his home, returning shortly afterwards with a shining mirror, it's edges a thing of cunningly worked silver and brass. Thrumming with Qi, Aretaphila saw her own reflection shimmer, to be replaced by the stones she and her team had rested at far earlier. An entire day's march from there.

"I had discovered it when expanding my home," The Village Chief told her excitedly, "I don't know the specifics, of course, but if you put an arm in through the back-" He puts a limb in through the rear of the body-length construction, "It's possible to grasp something at the location reflected in the mirror." A particularly noticeable stone in the reflected image vanished as the Chief withdrew his limb, now holding the lump of stone in hand.

"Amazing!" Aretaphila said, forcing her lips into a warm smile, "Why show such a treasure to this one, though?"

The Village Chief smirked while puffing his chest out, "In honor of our...agreement, it would only do to offer one as lovely as yourself a gift as befitting your status." Aretaphila smiled, a hand resting on the treasure as she felt it sup lightly at her Qi. It would be difficult to carry otherwise, but perhaps…

With a twist of energies, the mirror shrunk, reducing itself to a size small enough to fit into her pocket.

"Remarkable, my lady." The Chief grinned at the Cultivator beyond him, "Now, I've kept you from your comrades long enough. Let us go and greet them!"

As the pair left the Chief's home, whatever message he had intended to shout was drowned out by a long, piercing note. Laced with a hungering Qi, Aretaphila felt the vibration of the coming song echo deeply into her Clear Summer's Bell Constitution. Carrying with it a cloying feel of iron, metal, steeped with rot and death.

A song which craved blood, and sowed death among all who heard it.

The Devil's own music played, drowning out even the ever-present sound of the wind.

So began Aretaphila's long ten years.

A.N.: Forgot to post this for Turn 6 due to my suspension at the time lol. I'll try and work out the followup tonight after work
 
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Ferenike
Omake Reward - Tribulation Treasure
Fate
- Ferenike, seeking the Dao in the Yuan Clan found much else. A conspiracy, aimed at the Clan's airship fleet - or rather, the Simmering Soup Sect's fleet. While these ships facilitated trade, they also beggared a number of merchants who relied on their own ground routes. As such, they brought together a group of mercenaries to destroy several key bases in Yuan Clan territory, and to poison wells and the like, to make the airship trade less competitive. Ferenike had travelled with these mercenaries for a year, and it was at the end of her journey she convinced a group of them to betray the others, and shattered the company into several parts. Carrying news of treachery to the Yuan Clan itself, she was hunted for months by the conspiracy, who knew well if her news reached the Yuan Clan their deaths were certain. Deep in hostile territory, those who remained named themselves the Two Thousand and marched thousands of kilometres north, hunted and savaged all the while. Ferenike served as a second-in-command to a dissolute Foundation Establishment expert, Hong Mai. In their final battle, Mai was slain, and only three hundred and twelve reached the Yuan proper. Once they did, vengeance from the Clan's elders was swift.
Hm. An idea for a potential name or a riff for Ferenike to name a sidestory or theme it about about: Half a Li (half a league, half a league, half a league onward, all in the valley of Death rode the six hundred...)
 
Whew, I finally caught up! This was one hell of a journey, and it seems it's just getting started. I'll post my own Good Seed later today when I get the chance. Just gotta work out some details to align with the timeline...

Also, does anyone wanna give poor Hektor an omake bonus to fix his crippling? His mom's the only veteran council member left, and she's grief-stricken enough as-is. :p
 
Gaius Antonius - Good Seed Background
@Alectai look at what your overachieving has done. you've given little boys and girls unreasonable goals. shaaaaaaaaame :mad:
Name: Gaius Antonius

Age: 175

Cultivation: Single Pillar Stage 4(Effective Cultivation Age: 525)

Goals: Reach the highest stage of Kingship.

Backstory:

Once, there was a minor noble house, known as the Antonius Family. Recently established, they had only a single Core Formation to their name: Liu Fei. Rather than a true Golden Devil, Liu Fei was a "Rent Elder" on loan from the Hong Xuan Clan in the wake of the disastrous Centennial Trial of MK 99. While serving at his post, he met and fell in love with Centurion Galatea Antonius, and the two of them had two young children.

The future seemed bright for the noble house, when seemingly out of nowhere, a powerful bandit gang set their sights on the Antonius Manor, for reasons no one could understand. Still, the family was safe, for Liu Fei was strong enough to handle things. But when he was needed most, Liu Fei abandoned his new family to die, even destroying the Manor's defenses to ensure a massacre. Before he could leave, he ran into his young son Gaius, and told him only this:

"I'm sorry, son. I had to do it, I needed to have the diamond."

Gaius, sequestered away in a bunker, was one of a handful of survivors, and when he resurfaced, the family was effectively destroyed. As for Liu Fei, he had seemingly fled Golden Devil territory entirely. When Gaius would return later in life to investigate, he would find nothing at all, no clues as to why a seemingly good man would commit such a traitorous act.

The orphaned Gaius was place into the care of an orphanage in the remote Black Sands Village, where he waited until he was old enough to cultivate. Gaius seethed, stewing in his confusion and desire to know more, to understand why it had all happened, but knew he was powerless to ever know. That was when, just a few miles out from the village, a miracle occurred. Rina Callista ascended to the power of Kingship, and Gaius learned that nothing at all is impossible.

Concluding that the only way to gain the power he needed to track down his father and learn the truth of that day was through the Single Pillar Path, Gaius constructed, from scratch, the ideal Dao with which to pursue those goals. Since he needed purity of mind to become a King anyway, he created one which demanded absolute loyalty in exchange for the certainty of attaining one's goals. Constructing a Dao backwards like this isn't supposed to be possible, but Gaius didn't know that, and so he did it anyway. He dubbed it The Dao of The Seeker.

Cool Thing:
The Dao of The Seeker.
Gaius follows a strange and brutal Dao, a labyrinthine trap of circular logic and bloody-minded determination that demands fanatical devotion from the very first breath he takes as a cultivator. By its very nature it cannot be built, only discovered, as the only way to become the seeker is to seek. Gaius' Dao Heart is almost impossibly sturdy for a First Heavenstage cultivator, and will only grow stronger as he progresses, so long as his will does not break. This offers no benefit to him at the start of his development. Furthermore, in accepting such a vast and rigid Dao he has forced himself onto the agonizing path of single-pillar establishment. To make things any easier on himself would require him to leave the path of The Seeker forever. Indeed, this boon is worse than useless right now. Later on... who's to say?
Update: Gaius' will, Dao and obsession have only grown more powerful with time. He has begun to manifest Dao-related abilities much, much earlier than should be possible. On the flipside, he is now trapped; he must not only enter the Single-Pillar path, but every unorthodox path of cultivation. If this abominable Dao was worse than nothing before, it is now a true curse.

Impact: 47
Impact Bonuses:

Unorthodox Impact
King(+13): The enhancement afforded to every Single Pillar adherent is drastic indeed. Though their resource needs are several times higher than an ordinary Foundation Building Cultivator, they more than make up for it with their greater physical abilities, deeper qi reserves and their flexible, powerful Dao Magic.
Weapons
Dream Sword(+7): A weapon made from the culmination of many lesser artifacts, molded into a single sword which perfectly complements Gaius' abilities. The Dream Sword possesses enough inherent cutting power to cleave through Core Formation beings, and theoretically to even cause small flesh wounds on Nascent Souls(actually hitting a Nascent is, of course, another matter entirely). It can also be easily molded into any number of shapes, far beyond a mere sword, making a true all-purpose tool. Helping it fulfil that role further is the use of Celestial Bronze in its construction, making it a great catalyst for any technique, not just Weapon Arts. Finally, the Dream Sword enhances Gaius' Dao Magic somewhat, increasing the accuracy of his predictions and the intensity of the fate-bending Find The Path.
Techniques
Stars Of Gold(+18): From the Aegis Series, to the True Aegis, to this. The culmination of Gaius' lifetime pursuit of an ultimate, all-purpose technique to match the scope of his ambitions. Applying the principles behind the True Aegis and the Earth-Gliding Technique to a more sophisticated level, and aided by the intense and detailed awareness granted by his Dao Magic, Gaius has begun to overcome the fundamental laws of matter itself.
Stars Of Gold is, to put it simply, a technique built upon the principle that light is both a particle and a wave, and that matter and energy share the same primordial source. By infusing his qi and will into un-reinforced matter, Gaius can transform it directly into photons. This enables him to pass through any physical barrier or destroy any object, unless said object carries a high enough amount of qi or inherent reinforcement to resist his power. Furthermore, by reversing this phenomenon, Gaius can transform light into matter - an evolution of the True Aegis' constructs. Finally, Gaius' qi itself can be used to conjure up photons, either as an innumerable number of laser beams or to create matter.
As mighty as this ability is, it does have one key limit that stops it from being an expression of true godhood: it does not generate energy from nothing. He must either provide the necessary amount of photons himself, or make use of ones already around him. Furthermore, Gaius cannot create anything more powerful than himself. Nevertheless, it remains the greatest accomplishment of an already distinguished lifetime.

Future-Poisoning Dao Strike(+1): A hybrid technique built on a combination of Dao Sorcery and regular qi, this attack travels through time, delaying the impact of a strike until a later time, to land when the opponent isn't ready for it. This attack can also be used to attack the future in a more metaphorical sense, using a Dao Crush to potentially damage an opponent's prospects as a Cultivator by damaging not their Dao as it is now, but as it might be. As a technique which plants an attack inside an enemy's timeline, it is nearly impossible to stop the first time around unless you already know about it. On subsequent uses, it is possible to detect the presence of the technique and destroy it if you know what to look for.
Constitutions
Blood Forge Constitution(+6): An ability incorporated into Gaius' body in the Demonic Cloud Caves, which may have some connection to the enigmatic bloody mist that caused the calamity in the wake of his ascension. A demonic flame bound directly to Gaius' heart, the flames of the Blood Forge absorb trace amounts of his blood to manifest themselves, gradually bleeding him out the more he uses them. In exchange, their power is phenomenal, carrying an unusual amount of destructive power for Gaius' level, being able to damage the soul as well as the body, and being particularly good at snuffing out other flames which strike him. Finally, due to its connection with blood, and therefore blood-iron, this ability is also Metal-aligned and can be used to mold and manipulate metallic objects - hence the name Blood Forge. When used in conjunction with the Dream Sword, it allows that weapon to radically change shape in under a second.
Companions
Beast Among Beasts(+6): Gaius' Beast Companion, Scylla, is a truly exemplary one who goes far beyond the usual limitations of Beast Taming Arts. Being a Rainbow Carp, the Foundation stage of a lifeform which eventually becomes the revered Dragon, she possesses natural strength far in excess of an equivalent Spirit Beast or Cultivator, thanks to possessing both a dantian and a beast core. In addition, she has ascended at the Twelfth Heavenstage and used the remaining qi from the climb to Thirteenth to shoot ahead into Foundation, so that now she is already at the Seven-Pillar Stage. She has also developed a Blood of Bronze with some of the excess qi, which Gaius has had strengthened through surgical alteration, increasing her blood potency over time at the cost of slowed cultivation. If this weren't already not enough, Scylla has absorbed an artifact known as the Miniature Waterfall, enabling her to transform into a False version of the next stage in her life cycle for a short amount of time. Even when Scylla is not by his side, she remains a potent asset, as each bears a piece of jewelry carved from a bone of the other, letting them communicate at massive distances and use each other's abilities. Truly a right hand worthy of a mighty King.
Weaknesses
Madness(-3) Gaius did not come out of the Cloud Caves with only strength. His five century long imprisonment extracted a heavy toll on his sanity, which, as one might expect, leads to many potential issues. Manic-depressive, hedonistic, prone to nightmares, delusions and even hallucinations, Gaius' performance in battle is as unreliable as one might expect.
 
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Gaius Antonius Omake 1 - The Carriage
Gaius Antonius Omake #1: The Carriage

In the town of Black Sands, a calamity awoke. Drawn perhaps by the hubris of man, their own predatory instincts, or even the will of heaven itself, four beasts descended. The arrived in a furious display, bearing unfathomable power and primordial rage. The Azure Dragon wound through the air, crackling with lightning and baring its fangs. The Black Tortoise strode across the desert, shaking the earth and tearing fissures in the ground with every step. The Vermillion Bird soared over the town, embers falling from its wings, its piercing cry striking fear into all within three hundred li. The White Tiger stalked through the shadows, its claws sharper than any sword, hot breath steaming from its maw as it prepared to hunt and kill.

The tortoise stomped the ground, shattering every house at once. "WHO IS LIU FEI REALLY!? WHO, WHO WHO!?" It screamed in rage.

The phoenix flapped its wings and unleashed a furious inferno, scorching the rubble into ash and sending the survivors running from their homes. "WHY DID HE DO IT!? WHY, WHY, WHY!?" Came the screeching of the bird.

The dragon sneered imperiously down upon the little humans, who seemed as insects before its divine majesty. From its antlers and its hands came bolts of lightning, smiting the foolish mortals. "WHAT IS THE DIAMOND!? WHAT, WHAT WHAT!?" Pondered the tyrant beast.

Finally, the white tiger appeared from the darkness, massive, majestic and frightful. It bared its mighty fangs and began to feast upon the living and the dead alike, as was its right by the law of the jungle. "WHERE DID HE GO!? WHERE, WHERE, WHERE!?" The apex predator questioned furiously.

Their grisly work done, the four beasts turned to the only building still standing — the old orphanage. Again and again they circled, taunting the pitiful human inside. He cowered from their wrath, but they could still see him. Over and over they asked their questions.

"WHO!?"

"WHY!?"

"WHAT!?"

"WHERE!?"


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Gaius awoke with a start, sweating and panting. The boy looked around, frantically trying get his bearings. His heartrate began to slow down as the world came into focus. He was sitting down, leaning up against the gate at the edge of town. A simple straw hat, a handmade parting gift from his friend Ptolemy, had fallen over his eyes. Gaius hadn't meant to fall asleep, but he wasn't surprised that he had; he'd been so excited last night that he didn't catch a moment of shut-eye. He was going to be a Cultivator, and today was the start of his journey!

Or it would be, if that stupid carriage ever arrived. The boy stood back up to his considerable full height, feeling his back pop pleasantly as he stretched out and scanned the horizon — still no one in view. He rose one gangly arm, mussed his shaggy mane of curly blond hair into something resembling order and sighed. "Probably should just go back in… but I can just tell, the second I do is when it will show up, that's how it always is…" Gaius muttered to himself, shifting his weight from one foot to the other as he considered this conundrum. With his simple robes and lanky body, the boy looked to all the world like a gilded reed, wrapped in cloth and swaying in the wind.

"You're rambling to yourself again, big guy." Came a teasing voice from just outside the gate. Out stepped ever-cheerful Mei; here to see him off, no doubt, even though she and all his other friends had already done so the night before. The girl seemed to be the very opposite of Gaius in every way — short where he was tall, pale(at least, as pale as any desert-dweller got) where he was swarthy, and assertive where he was nervous.

"They're late, huh? Not surprised, I hear the Devils are short-staffed nowadays."

"It's probably fine. How long has this carriage been traveling? A few hours late makes sense."

"You don't sound too confident." Mei smirked, playfully punching him on the arm. "Come on, you're becoming a hero, you can't get scared anymore! Isn't this what you spent all that time writing in those notebooks of yours preparing for?"

"I don't know about 'hero' or anything," Gaius chuckled nervously. "I'm just stubborn, and this is the best way to find what I'm Seeking." Mei looked at him with an unreadable expression when he said that.

"That word again… it's always that word, 'Seeking'. No looking, not questing, not searching, not adventuring, investigating, chasing. Always Seeking." Her round, ever-pleasant face fell into something more somber and wistful as she counted off synonyms on her fingers. "I'm worried about you, Gaius. Maybe that's weird to say to you — you've got it all planned out like nobody else! But you seem… vulnerable, I guess Like you're in danger."

"Eh." The tall boy shrugged, avoiding eye contact. "It's more like… the risk has already been taken. I did something dangerous, but the choice is already made, you know? At this point I'm just seeing it though."

The pair stayed silent for a long time after that. Several minutes passed in uncomfortable silence, only the low whistle of the wind through the sand keeping them company. All of a sudden, the small girl pulled him into her embrace with surprising strength, holding onto him like a lifeline. "Look after yourself, okay? And make sure you knock your old man's lights out!" She said, tears staining the boy's robes. Gaius put a hand on the back of her head and held her there for a while, before pulling away and patting her on the shoulder, not sure what else he could say here.

"I'll do everything I can, that's all I can promise." He said after a moment of contemplation. "I already began Seeking back then, up on that roof. Miracles can happen; for the sake of the truth, I'll Seek a miracle. I need to do this, it's the only way I can keep moving."

The conversation meandered onto lighter topics after that, the boy and girl reminiscing about the times they had shared together. Finally, a distant, hazy shape appeared on the horizon; it was time. Gaius said a final goodbye to his friend, picked up his bag and prepared to greet the future.

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The carriage pulled up at the gates, driven by a stocky man of bronze with close-cropped hair wearing the standard lamellar of the legion. when he looked the recruit he'd come for, he found a fairly common sight. A tall, thin boy, still growing and not fully at home in his own body, a deep brown in his skin and vivid blonde in his hair demonstrating a thick and pronounced Blood of Bronze. His aquiline nose and severe features further showed his Clan descent, but the shape of his eyes and deep folds of his nose showed a good deal of Third Sea genes as well. His curly hair was unkempt and long, coming down to his shoulders. He wore simple robes in white, red and grey which were a little too small on him, and carried a worn leather bag at his side which bulged with all manner of sentimental keepsakes and other personal effects. The expression on the boy's face was an equal mix of excitement and apprehension.

In short, the very archetypal image of a fresh Aspirant in the making.

"Hello there, Junior. I really must apologize for my lateness." The driver said with a small, disarming smile as he exited the carriage and took the opportunity to stretch. He looked off to the side and winces — he'd nearly made the kid wait in the freezing cold of the desert night.

"Oh, it's fine, it's fine. Nice to meet you, Senior! My name's Gaius." The boy responded with an awkward smile that didn't quite reach his eyes(awkward, that was the word for just about everything about this kid, the driver thought to himself).

"Octavius." The older man responded plainly. "It's getting late already, we need to go." And with that, he gets back in the carriage, Gaius hesitantly following behind.

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"So…" Gaius began with a false start, plumbing his brain for anything at all to pass the time; something he could discuss with the stoic Legionnaire without breaking a system of etiquette that he didn't fully understand.

"The, uh… the armor, does sand get in it?"

There was a moment of silence, and Gaius suppressed the urge to bang his head into the nearest hard surface.

"Sand?" Octavius quietly muses. "…Yes, I suppose it does. Stops chafing once you've got the skin of bronze though. So you'll be fine." He remarks in clipped tones.

"Ah, that's good."

"Yes."

"Mmm."

Once more, the steady rhythm of the horses' hooves reigned in the carriage. Just his luck, thought Gaius, to get a driver just as bad with strangers as he was. The boy gazed off into the sunset, enjoying the lightshow as vivid reds and purples painted the dunes. He took the opportunity to once again pontificate on his Dao. Did it count as a Dao if he wasn't a Cultivator yet? He supposed it was just a philosophy at the moment.

Gaius didn't see it, but Octavius noticed the boy's meditative focus and nodded approvingly. The legionnaire was proud of his instinct, and could tell that this one definitely wouldn't wash out.

But of course, a mortal's focus could only last so long, and that went for everyone. The boy's eyes began to droop, he pulled his hat down over his face, and he leaned back to get some rest — it would be a very, very long drive.

And there's the first omake, clocking in at 1,670 words! Hopefully I didn't miss any stupid mistakes while revising the draft. I still have some more stuff that I would like to establish before Gaius' first turn(which I would like to clarify I want to be next turn, since Gaius' backstory depends on Rina's ascension being before he starts cultivating). Mainly about Gaius' time in Black Sands as an orphan, and on his development of the Seeker philosophy. That said, I feel like I did a pretty decent job introducing the character himself, which is what I felt the first omake needed to focus on.

I'll take a cultivation boost. I want to ensure that even if his cultivation roll is terrible, Gaius at least makes it to the Third Heavenstage so that I can write about him doing Aspirant stuff outside the Dawn Fortress. Hopefully this slew of content will be enough to ensure he survives his first Fate roll even without an LST.


@ReaderOfFate could you please threadmark this and update the google sheet? I'm trying to get access but don't have it yet.
 
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@ReaderOfFate could you please threadmark this and update the google sheet? I'm trying to get access but don't have it yet.
Sure. This is a bit belated, but welcome!

(BTW, I can't currently access my account for spreadsheet permissions since I'm on a device that prevents that, so if any of the others see this, I'd appreciate if you could do that in my place. Or hell, I'll just ask in Discord.)
 
Gaius Antonius Omake 2 - The Long Walk
Gaius Antonius Omake #2: The Long Walk

Gaius Antonius was adjusting to this whole Basic Training thing better than he expected to. Yeah, he was still uncoordinated, though the constant drilling was fixing that little by little, and yeah his interpersonal skills were still rather lacking. Certainly, the drill sergeant's constant yelling made his ears ring by the end of the day(He supposed one very underrated benefit of being a Cultivator was the ability to scream all day and not get a sore throat). And sure, his aches and pains complained to his every day. But honestly? His career in cultivation had only just started and it was already worth it.

He only needed six hours of sleep a day! And as his cultivation base improved, that number would only get smaller. This was crucial, because it meant less time being tormented by the Four Beasts. The daily training also meant he had somewhere to put the energy that had previously reverberated through his system constantly. It was as if he'd been living his life in chains up until now, and could finally move freely.

But more than anything else, Gaius believed that this was a sign from The Seeker; that the growing anxiety had been a punishment from that so very distant figure, halfway between a personal diety and an ideal self. If The Seeker must Seek, then to not Seek was a sin. But now, he was Seeking for fifteen hours per day, if he were to add up the time he spent cultivating, training or privately studying.

So happy was the boy feel such relief that on days when the aches weren't so bad, he would put in an extra hour of physical conditioning, or technique practice, or just cultivation if his muscles were too sore. Always something to do, always some way to advance his prospects - finally, finally Gaius was taking his first, stumbling steps in the direction of his pillar, and beyond the pillar, his answers. And it was very much his pillar, singular. Having read up on the next stage, Foundation Establishment, he knew for a fact that the enlightened, perfect Seeker could not be reduced. It could only be found, and to find, one must Seek.

The hardest possible path for a Cultivator to walk stretched out before young Gaius, and he did not despair, because the alternative simply did not exist. While others in early Qi Condensation used their cultivation simply to build up greater and greater amounts of qi, Gaius pulled double-duty, meditating on his Dao at the same time. To him, that single, mighty pillar was already there, impossibly far off in the distance, so tall as to split the world before him in two, reaching out beyond the world and into the great void above. He couldn't make out any details, it simply appeared to him as a line, perpendicular to the ground, perspective making it seem as thin as a string of spider silk, so distant that he sometimes lost sight of it through the heat haze. But that was fine! All he needed to know was that he was walking in the right direction; no distance was too large.

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Indeed, there was only one problem with Basic Training, Gaius thought as he was send sprawling to the ground by a powerful shoulder-check, finding a blunt spearpoint held to his neck before he could clamber to his size 13 feet.

Just one, singular problem - he didn't like losing.

Oh, the boy could hardly be said to be the weakest member of his cohort. If anything, he won six out of ten sparring matches. But he felt that that mostly came down to his greater reach, rather than any real talent for fighting. Indeed, when Gaius fought someone close or equal to his own height, he usually lost. And the frustrating thing was that he couldn't quite figure out why.

He overcommitted by a few inches with every thrust of his spear, every swing of his sword. Even when bringing a shield up for a block, Gaius would go too far into a defensive posture, leaving himself unable to counter-attack. Those wasted tenths of a second added up, and often led to him losing a match he should have taken. When drilling, the boy could pull off the motions and forms correctly, but when it came time to put them all together, he invariably found himself not regulating his movements as well as he should.

After a full month of struggling with this problem, it was the passing comment of an instructor which led to the stirrings of thought which would themselves birth a breakthrough.

"You're trying too hard."

The phrase baffled Gaius. How could he be trying too hard? His Dao demanded his devotion in Seeking, and if he didn't train hard, he would never be strong enough to Seek his father. How then, could he try too hard? His performance got worse over the next few days, as he found himself over-correcting in his attempts to follow the strange advice.

The boy's circle of friends in the cohort weren't much help in the issue; at the end of the session everyone was equally exhausted, and in no shape to give each other pointers. Furthermore, it wasn't as if Gaius didn't understand the techniques or how they strung together; it was the execution in the sparring itself that he struggled with. At the very least, the bits and pieces of spare time he got to spend with his friends helped alleviate his anxiety. If he'd been a loner, he shuddered to think of how high-strung he might become.

This culminated in Gaius' sword-grip loosening so much that in a sparring match, he accidentally flung the training weapon thirty feet and beaned a fellow cadet in the head.

Sprinting over and looking to the eyes of all present like a panicked ostrich, Gaius profusely apologized to his peer and helped the girl get somewhere out of the way to sit down. He felt terrible - for the first time, he had taken a step backwards, and it felt immeasurably worse than just standing still.

"I'm fine, just give me a minute…" The girl said, pressing a wet cloth to the bump on her head. She winced at the sight of Gaius' anxiety and waved him off. "It's okay, really, these things happen. You're trying way too hard."

Again, 'trying too hard'! The words struck him like a bolt of tribulation lightning, and he didn't win any more matches for the rest of the day. How was he supposed to train without trying hard!? He wasn't a perfect enlightened being who could perform actions without will or thought - that's what they were cultivating to become! The anguish grew, and when the boy cultivated later that day, his qi sea - more like a qi brook, really, being First Heavenstage and all - churned painfully. In his mindscape, he was on his hands and knees, and despite all attempts to rise to his feet and continue walking toward his pillar, he remained paralyzed.

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The next day, he got up two hours early, getting even less sleep than the relatively small amount recommended for him, and trained like mad. He went through every sword and spear form he knew, he ran for ten miles, and he tempered his hands, knees and elbows against the training equipment. By the time Basic Training started for the day, Gaius was already exhausted. He didn't overextend, because simply making the motion properly was difficult. He lost most of his matches, meaning his plan had failed, but at the very least he didn't have any big slip-ups.

The drill sergeant didn't seem pleased at all at this. Calling him forward for a "demonstration" to the rest of the cohort at the end of the training session, she had him strip out of his armor and stand before his peers in a simple tunic. He had to admit, he was scared shitless. The old woman was a loud, mean bitch of a taskmaster and reveled in her job. None in the cohort even knew her name, for as the sergeant herself had said, the only thing they would ever call her was 'sergeant' or 'ma'am'.

"Cadets, this will be an important lesson for all of you," the old woman says imperiously, her scarred face scanning the ranks to ensure everyone is at attention. "As I'm sure most of you have noticed, Gaius has a chronic problem of trying too hard."

The three words were like three arrows, piercing the boy's flesh. The phrase brought him anguish once again, sending him spiraling into turmoil. He tried his hardest not to let it show on his face, but the old bat must have caught something.

"What, do you not like my choice of words, Cadet? Are you offended?" She began to shout.

"Ma'am. No, Ma'am." Gaius replied, hoping he was hitting the "enthusiastic but not performative" sweet-spot.

"That's good to hear, Cadet! If you're not offended, then I'll just call you what you are: a choker! Do you know why you're choking, Cadet!?" The verbal assault continued, unabated. Gaius could feel everyone's eyes on him like a physical presence, an immense weight that threatened to make his knees buckle.

"Ma'am. No, Ma'am." The boy once again stated, and the officer seemed at a little bit pleased with his honesty, or at least less pissed-off than she would have otherwise been.

"It's because, and I want the whole class to listen here, you're trying to force mastery." The tone of these words remained as aggressive as ever, but felt to the cadet like something wonderful. Like the good pain of a splinter being pulled out, or of a qi blockage being cleared.

"You're anxious, you're trying to get better faster, and you've got some crossed wires. Somewhere in that moldy hunk of cheese you call a brain, you've convinced yourself that the more force you put into each and every movement, the more you'll improve. Isn't that right, Cadet!?"

"Ma'am! Yes, Ma'am!" Gaius replied, and this time the enthusiasm was genuine. It was if a dam had finally burst, and insights poured into his mind.

When traveling, you don't fling yourself into a dead sprint; you just walk. Every motion has its place, all actions must be deliberate and cool-headed. He felt like a moron. All of this was obvious! Yet some subconscious part of him hadn't taken these simple facts to heart. Soon after this incident, Gaius began to win seven out of ten sparring matches, instead of six. A silly story, a foolish series of events, but a valuable lesson nonetheless.

The walk was long, and there were no shortcuts. He would walk it nonetheless.

I didn't expect to have another omake done this fast, but here it is, at 1,846 words. While I felt I had established Gaius decently enough in the last one, I figured I ought to show how he deals with setbacks(poorly. he deals with them poorly.), and thus this one came into being. I also got to go into his abnormally strong Dao Heart some more, and show how this has both benefits and drawbacks. Now that I've got a firmer grasp on writing him, I'll be able to introduce more secondary characters in future installments.

I don't know much about Roman military structure or terminology beyond what's been cribbed for this quest, so I just slapped a stereotypical R. Lee Ermey style drill sergeant in there.


@Katana1515 pinging you this time since ReaderOfFate is having sheet access problems.
 
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Gaius Antonius Omake 3 - Seniors
Gaius Antonius Omake #3: Seniors

Gaius was in a good mood today. Or more accurately, he was in a clear mood. No one believed when he said it, but he was actually the kind of person who's happy and content by default. It's just he hardly ever was default; most days, he was preoccupied with something or other, as his Dao pushed him to purify his heart and life, to clear any and all obstacles blocking his Seeking. But today, his path felt very clear indeed.

Last week, he'd broken through to the Second Heavenstage a mere two years and four months after reaching the first, which had itself only taken him four years as opposed to the typical five — he was making good time. Furthermore, he was a bit less skinny now as a result of all that Basic Training, now looking athletic instead of gaunt. Another twenty-five pounds of muscle to go and then he'd actually look imposing!

Indeed, Junior Aspirant Gaius Antonius felt good — too good. He was sure something would come along to cut him down to size soon. Such a thing would not creep up on him today, but something else would: namely, his friend Jiang Li, leaping up to hang off the taller boy's shoulders, not caring one bit about propriety.

Gaius was surprised to find himself bearing the sudden shift in weight effortlessly without swaying or stumbling. The First Heavenstage had made him stronger, but in the Second he now straddled the border of superhuman capability. The other boy seemed a bit disappointed, clearly having hoped to surprise his ever-anxious companion.

"Jiang Li." Gaius greeted with something approaching a smirk. The youth in question smiled brightly and hauled himself up to lean his head over his friend's shoulder, clearly unwilling to get off. Sighing fondly, Gaius walked to the nearest boulder, leaped to the top in one smooth motion and sat down. In response, Jiang Li transitioned to a handstand on the taller boy's shoulders and pushed off, flipping into a seating position and landing beside his friend, grinning mischievously.

A boy who'd started in the same cohort as Gaius, Jiang Li had stuck close to him ever since, for reasons he couldn't fathom. He was relatively short(compared to Gaius, at least), and was only distantly related to the Clan, being the great-grandson of a Devil who had shown the potential to cultivate and decided to get in touch with his ancestors. He was handsome, with a slender, perfectly symmetrical face, smooth skin and sharp, pinched eyes which made him look a bit fox-like, and kept his black hair long, held back in a simply ponytail. Indeed, Jiang Li was that infuriatingly lucky type of person who always looked good with a minimum of effort.

"Sooo… how've ya been?"

"I last saw you three days ago."

"That doesn't answer the question."

"I've been fine, you needy little housecat." As he said that, Gaius pulled his friend into a headlock, which said friend deftly slipped out of. "What's going on? You're usually not this awful."

"Me? Awful? How cruel of you!" Jiang Li accused jokingly, his sharp features appearing almost like the Masque of Comedy itself. "But yes, there was something I wanted to tell you: I saw Wei Feng the Phoenix! Didn't get to talk to him, but it was definitely Wei Feng, just like on the jade slips."

"The Phoenix, really?" Gaius responded in shock. "You mean he's finally back from his journey?"

"Sure is, and he seems to embody his title more than ever. I saw steam coming out of his mouth with every breath, even though it was blazing hot outside. I'm certain of it - the Phoenix has revived in full, stronger than ever!" The sharp-eyed boy whispered conspiratorially.

"As close to immortal as you can get without going through all seven steps of Cultivation… that's pretty scary." The taller boy mumbled, looking off into the distance. And to think, he'd been acting proud of a single additional Heavenstage.

"We're being brought up in the shadow of a whole generation of monsters. I think it's exciting, but a worrier like you, you'll probably find some reason to feel bad about it, won't you?" Jiang Li teased, reaching up to pat Gaius' head.

"I dunno. I've just started out, so there's not much to say yet, but I have to admit, I'm scared that I'll fail to live up to my Seniors' example." Gaius responded. "I mean, normally you see someone incredible like Wei Feng - I mean, look at that guy! He's beaten dozens of opponents on the same level as him or higher! Maybe over a hundred! - and you'd figure he's the best of his generation, but he's not, there's lots of Cultivators who started out around the same time as him and are just as scary. A few of them even scarier."

"That's for sure…" Jiang Li mused contemplatively, stroking his chin as he considered something. "I have to say, my favorite of those Seniors is probably Minervina Barda. I know, I know, controversial pick, what with the deception and the poison and all that. What can I say, I love her audacity. What about you?"

"Me? Hmm… probably Jin Muyi. I mean the man's done it all. He's been a spy, a soldier, a guardian, an adventurer. He spent sixty years making a superweapon and then used it to turn himself into a tree! Incredible adventures." Gaius explained, nodding to himself as if to reaffirm his own conclusion.

"And you can't sleep on Fierce Fang either. He's been more low-profile overall, but it's rare to see a Body Cultivator so dedicated they turn themself into a lab rat. There's some betting going on over whether he'll fully turn into a dragon after cultivating to a certain point." said Jiang Li, fishing a meat bun out of his pocket and taking a bite. "A real dragon, fighting for the Golden Devils. That'd show those Fifth Sea scum the next time they come around."

"And if we're going to talk about fire-breathing monsters, we have to mention Ferenike. Not a decade goes by that she doesn't pull off something amazing, from the things I've heard. She's a true hero, never surrendering no matter how bad things get, whether she's leading soldiers or fighting alone." As Gaius spoke, Jiang Li pressed the half-eaten meat bun closer and closer to his mouth. "I'm not gonna eat that, you already started it, that's gross!"

"You're a Cultivator, something like that won't make you sick. Come on, you don't eat enough, that's why you're skinny." The smaller boy whined, laying across Gaius' lap and pushing the bun into his mouth. "Eeeeat." He insisted, pushing his friend's jaw closed. Resigned to the other boy's insistence, Gaius ate the bun, downing it in a few bites.

"Now, as long as we're talking about amazing Seniors, we have to bring up Eirene of Nowhere!" Jiang Li continued without missing a beat, clambering into Gaius' lap and turning away from him, looking very much like an aggressively affectionate cat. "I saw her perform once, and I think I fell in love. I hear she can warp the mind and soul with music along, and banish your soul to heaven or hell. She's not even a century old, but she's already at the Twelfth Heavenstage and getting ready to break through." The smaller boy gazed into the distance with a dreamy look on his face.

"Yeah, we really do have the best Seniors." Gaius muses, leaning forward and plopping his chin down onto Jiang Li's head. "Which means the clan will be fine, won't it? It's okay for me to gamble, I'm nobody." He mumbles, closing his eyes and seeing his pillar once again, still impossibly far in the distance.

"Gaiuuuus! Don't cultivate right now, it makes you feel all tingly!" Jiang Li whined, prompting his friend to finally push him off the rock, at which point he deftly twisted and landed in a crouch. "Aww come on, you're getting in the zone now?"

"I'm sorry man, you know how it is. I have to Seek now and this is the perfect spot for it." Gaius said with an apologetic smile on his face, before closing his eyes and beginning to enter a deep meditation.

"Alright, but you owe me! Next week we're gonna hang out, and it'll be for real! I'll treat you to this fantastic rice wine." And with that, Gaius' utterly exhausting friend left, leaving the boy alone to continue his journey.

Step. Step. Step. Step.

And that's #3 at 1,504 words, bringing my total wordcount up to 5,018. I wanted to do an omake about how Gaius and his peers see the generation of monsters that are their Seniors. In this case I'm using the term "generation" to mean the period of time between one Trial and the next, since time is weird for Cultivators. It ended up evolving into a sort of clip show, but I wasn't able to get everyone in there because I felt like going over every single rising star would make the dialogue feel unnatural.

No, Gaius and Jiang Li aren't boyfriends, he's just very casually physical with people he likes. Not that Gaius would say no if Jiang Li asked. Well, he'd probably spaghetti all over the place, run away, despair about how bad he fucked it up, then after a week and a half he'd muster up the courage to properly accept.

I'm searching for some kind of big mistake or unfinished section in this omake, because I'm suspicious of my own productivity. I'm hardly ever this good at producing content, clearly I'm missing something... :thonk:


@BungieONI I don't want to annoy a single person with my rapid omake posting, so I'm pinging a different collaborator each time.
 
Gaius Antonius Omake 4 - The Duel
Gaius Antonius Omake #4: The Duel

Gaius couldn't remember what had started that inciting argument on that fateful day. All he knew is that he'd had a few drinks and it probably wasn't worth blowing up so much. Herod, an Aspirant just a few years older than Gaius who stopped by the same bar as Gaius and Jiang Li, had made some kind of passing comment after an exchange of greetings and small-talk. Perhaps he had badmouthed Gaius' devotion to The Seeker, or made a rude comment about one of his friends, or any number of things. The point was, it had started with a comment, followed by an argument, followed by shouting and posturing. They both knew deep down that it was stupid, but youth drives people to take things too far.

"Look, just forget about it." Herod said bitterly, waving a brawny hand dismissively. "Get the hell out of here, I wish I'd never talked to you."

"I think you oughta listen, bud, let's go." Insisted Jiang Li, grabbing onto the taller boy's arm and trying to pull him away.

"No. No, I don't think I can just let this go. I want you to apologize right now, and say you were wrong." Gaius responded, far bolder than he usually would be.

"I will do no such thing, Junior." The older man said, glowering up at this impertinent upstart. "Just drop it."

And so, Gaius let loose with the dumbest thing he'd said that whole discussion so far: "Then you leave me no choice. Herod, I challenge you to a duel, at the time and place of your choosing!"

The air seemed to suddenly get ten degrees colder. Gaius kept up a brave face, but a niggling feeling of regret began to creep up on him behind the facade. Not that it mattered, as the Aspirant's square jaw was set firmly into an expression of incredulity. "As if I'd bother with you." He said with a tone of utter dismissal.

Those words dragged an intense ire out of the Gaius, urging him on to get even more confrontational, even as Jiang Li, now completely ignored, desperately tried to get a word in and break up the fight. "What the hell do you mean by that, Herod?" He scowled.

"It means I don't accept your challenge. I'm Third Heavenstage, you're Second. That's a much bigger difference than, say, Seventh vs Sixth. Not only do I have some experience with real combat, I have access to the Technique Palace and you don't. At our low level that's an insurmountable gap. It would be completely unfair. like bullying a child." The other man stated matter-of-factly. "So no, I'm not going to duel you, because that wouldn't prove anything."

"It's not about that! It's about honor, don't you care!?" Gaius shouted, grabbing Herod by his collar. Unbothered, the other Devil brushed away the offending hand.

"I do care, and I can see that you do as well, so take the hint: you challenged me and I turned you down. Your honor is maintained because you stood up to someone stronger for the sake of your beliefs. Mine is also untarnished, because I wisely de-escalated rather than bully a Junior who didn't know what he was doing." Insisted the Aspirant, poking his finger into Gaius' chest.

"Fine, I'll reach the Third Heavenstage, study at the Palace, and then you'll have to accept my challenge." Gaius said without missing a beat.

The Aspirant raised an eyebrow sardonically "Reaching a new Heavenstage isn't some small thing. From what I can feel you're still getting a hang of the Second. Even if you were a genius it would take you another year and a half. Realistically, it'll be at least two." Seeing Gaius' still-uncompromising glare, Herod sighed wearily. "But fine, if you're some kind of maniac and hold onto a grudge over this of all things for that long, then I'll fight you."

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Two years later, Gaius stood at the base of the clan's Technique Palace, craning his head to see the whole thing and squinting his eyes against the sun. Today was the day; he had reached the Third Heavenstage at the impressive age of 23, and could finally enter that mysterious and deeply classified building.

The Third Heavenstage had always been considered an important milestone for Cultivators. It's said that absolutely anyone with even a hint of talent can reach it without much trouble as long as they put the hours in. But between the third and fourth lay the first bottleneck of all, where most eventually passed through, but the least gifted were left behind to languished. Thus, it could be said that up until the Third Heavenstage, a new cultivator was simply coasting, and reaching that milestone marked the point where it became a personal battle to advance.

The Third Heavenstage was also important to Golden Devils because it was the minimum progress needed to graduate from Junior Aspirant to Aspirant, and thus take missions outside the Dawn Fortress. This was crucial, because it enabled one to pull in far more Contribution Points than they ever could through mere chores, enabling them to access greater resources - resources which would of course be consumed to fuel further cultivation.

But, there was a third reason for Cultivators of the Golden Devils to look forward to the Third Heavenstage: the Technique Palace. That massive tower, constantly giving off an intense pressure from the sheer amount of qi infused within. Everything above the first five stories was closed off, awaiting repairs, but the parts that remained open offered all sorts of useful techniques and benefits for a Qi Condensation Cultivator. However, even the weakest of those techniques all assumed a minimum level of qi capacity, which meant for a Cultivator below the Third Heavenstage, those techniques would be not just ineffective, but dangerous, with a very real risk of overdrawing and injuring the practitioner.

The tower was strange, completely unfitting for the architecture around it, all of the structure's immense power focused on completing its purpose with no attempt to make it look normal. Supposedly it would gain a glamour to make it take an outer appearance of the observer's choice once it was properly repaired, but as it was now it was hard enough to just keep it running. The palace was a smooth, cylindrical structure of black, blue and purple stone, nearly half a mile in diameter, penetrating ten stories down into the earth with the Palace Core at the bottom level and stretching forty-five stories into the sky - five stories for Qi Condensation, eight for Foundation Establishment, twelve for Core Formation and twenty for Nascent Soul. It had no windows, and no doors as well aside from the single main entrance.

As for the inside… Gaius had absolutely no idea. Taking anything inside the Palace to the outside was strictly forbidden, and there were several Centurion guards posted at the entrance on the outside and inside to thoroughly search everyone when they went in and when they went out. Jade slips, charcoal, ink, pens or anything else that could be used to record or copy the scrolls and documents within were all strictly forbidden as well, all of this in the name of preventing spies from stealing the Palace's secrets. Thus, not only had Gaius never seen the inside before, but no recordings or even drawings of the inside seemed to exist, leaving the young man completely in the dark on what to expect.

He took a deep breath and steeled himself. There was nothing to be nervous about, hopefully; this place existed for learning, after all. So he would absolutely learn.

Gaius stepped forward, and a Centurion - a short, brawny man with beady eyes - began the lengthy process of patting him down, searching his pockets, scanning him with some kind of minor treasure, and finally pressing a hand to this chest and using some sort of technique to examine the inside of his body for any smuggled items. With nothing out of the ordinary found, the guards parted before Gaius and opened the door.

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Gaius had been expecting various alien images, perhaps bare stone rooms like the cells used in closed-door cultivation, or illusionary dreamscapes which would teach him techniques through abstract sequences or lessons. Instead he found… a library. It was a singular huge circular room, the walls lined with shelves containing various scrolls and diagrams. In the center was a large collection of 7'x7'x7' cubes, presumably small isolated places for cultivation and reading. Other than that, it was nothing but tables and chairs; the floor was surprisingly open. Across the room from the entrance was a spiral staircase leading up to the second floor.

This spooky, carefully guarded tower was… actually pretty normal, on the inside at least. Gaius couldn't help but feel a little disappointed. Maybe it got weirder on the higher levels, since they were designed for successively stronger Cultivators? Well, no use wondering about it now; the first floor contained the techniques designed for the 3rd-4th Heavenstage, so he wouldn't see beyond this floor for a long time.

What's more, it was important to pace himself; it wouldn't do to learn anything flashy when there were simple, reliable things to pick up. No, his first trip here, as well as all others for the forseeable future, would be to learn the most boring abilities this library had to offer. Yes, that would absolutely be the right way to Seek.

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"I've done it, now name your place and time."

Herod looked up from his plate of scorpion curry with a baffled expression. "Eh? …Sorry, do I know you? What are you talking about?"

"Gaius Antonius. Two years ago, you told me that you would accept my challenge to a duel after I reached the Third Heavenstage and made use of the Technique Palace." Said the Aspirant, dressed in his best tunic, chest puffed out and head held high.

Realization and a migraine headache hit poor Herod simultaneously, making him cradle his head in his hands. "…Oh Imperator, you!? The guy from the bar!? Fuck! Are you serious? You stewed for two years over that?"

"I'm a stubborn guy, I don't give up on anything. Now name the time and place, or admit you were wrong!"

"Wrong about what? I don't even remember what we fought about!"

"Neither do I, which means it has to be a duel!"

"Do you have any idea how deranged you sound?" The older Aspirant shouted, getting to his feet and slamming both palms on the restaurant table. "If you can't remember why then it's not a fucking duel, it's harassment and assault!"

"You see, that's what I remember being pissed off about: that dismissive attitude of yours! I can't just walk away now, damnit! Not after I'm finally ready!" Gaius yelled back, pointing accusingly. "You made me wait for so long, I Sought you for two years and this is how you treat me when the time comes!?"

"And this is why I didn't like you, you're so stubborn and bullheaded! I didn't mean for you to actually challenge me after two years, you daft motherfucker! I was giving you an out so we could both save face!"

"Well I can't just stop after coming all this way!"

"Why the hell not!?"

"Because it's my Dao! The Dao of The Seeker! I have to Seek to become The Seeker!"

"You're a Third Heavenstage Aspirant, you don't need to follow a fucking Dao yet!

"WELL I CHOOSE TO!"


"FINE!" Herod, now red in the face and screaming at the top of his lungs, flipped his table so hard it smashed into the ceiling and fell back down in pieces. Everyone in the restaurant, no, everyone on that entire street was now staring at them. All were dead-silent as they watched the two youths make fools of themselves. "If you won't see sense then I'll beat it into you! You want a duel? You're on!"

Here's another omake at 2,069 words, and the first one to be part of a longer arc. I promise this is the last one for at least a couple days.

I realized that, as far as I remember, no one has actually depicted the Technique Palace in omake form yet, so I decided to give my interpretation, especially since my descriptions of environments in my omake so far have been absolutely desolate. The way the stories work is that the first floor contains techniques intended for heavenstages 3-4 or higher, the second 5-6, the third 7-8, and so on, with no techniques designed for the thirteenth because it's so super rare. The eight Foundation Establishment stories are simple enough: one for each pillar. Like with 13th heavenstage, there's no techniques designed for nine pillars since that's so niche. The Core Formation section has three floors each for early, mid, late and great circle, and the Nascent Soul section is similar, having five floors for each small realm.

Anyway I figured that if I'm writing about techniques, then I might as well try actually having a fight scene, and so this little story came together. I was aiming for a situation in which both Gaius and Herod are well-meaning but in the wrong, and clash together because of their differences in outlook. I also wanted to show how Gaius is sometimes prone to doing weird stuff, like holding a grudge for two years for no real reason other than his personal philosophy of being a relentless perpetual motion machine.

I won't have the chance to finish this little story until at least monday night, so I decided to just release the first part now.


@TehChron threadmark and sheet update pl0x
 
Gaius Antonius Omake 5 - The Duel, Part 2
Gaius Antonius Omake #5: The Duel, Part 2

Gaius still wasn't sure if this was a good decision or not. That was probably not the right kind of thought to be having about an event two years in the making, but honestly, it was true. In his time cultivating, he had become intimately aware of the illusion of humans as singular beings - in reality, the mind is the gestalt product of many parts of the brain acting independently, clashing together and giving rise to something greater than the sum of its parts, which was then copied and imprinted onto the soul. In that sense, he had decided to spend two years following the part of him that Sought even more than he usually did, and that process had led him here. Tunnel vision? Perhaps, but he didn't mind; he always needed something to strive towards, and Herod had worked just fine.

He looked around, as if in a vain hope that some heretofore unnoticed detail of his environment would spark an epiphany for the coming match - no such luck. It was the same spartan stone corridor as ever, lined with old, sturdy bricks smoothed by the passage of time. The stone floor was covered in dirt and grit, tracked in from the training grounds it led to by untold thousands of feet over the years. Out the other end of the corridor, it opened up into a larger, circular open-air arena, far too modest to be called a coliseum. The seats could hold perhaps one thousand, and the grounds themselves were no more than fifty yards across. This was the kind of place that would serve a single Centuria, And certainly not a prestigious one. Even then it would struggle to fill that demand. Any and all equipment had been stripped away, rendering it down to nothing but a big dirt circle surrounded by smooth walls.

This would serve them fine; they had rented this space for two hours - far more than they needed, but a precaution in case something went wrong and they needed to fix it. Such things, the same as just about everything else in the Dawn Fortress, had cost them contribution points. It was cleverly priced: just high enough that it stung both of their accounts to split the difference. Such measures repulsed more casual renters, ensuring that when a duel happened, it was usually something worth dueling over.

Once again Gaius saw Herod on the opposite side of the arena in his own corridor, sat in a meditative position, with his shield slung over his back and his spear across his lap. On that note, the Aspirant once more ruminated on all the information he had managed to glean on Herod. He knew the older man favored a shield and spear, that much was obvious. He also knew that Herod had an affinity for Formations, which would not come into play here. Finally, Gaius knew that his opponent used the Royal Viper Style in personal engagements. As for what individual spins on the style Herod would employ, the Aspirant had no idea. Adding together everything he knew with everything he had planned...

"60% chance at most, and that's in the best case scenario. Depending on factors outside my control, it could drop as low as 20%." Gaius muttered to himself. Though he liked to view it in terms of numbers, a one-on-one fight was too chaotic for any serious calculations. He sighed. He was just attaching numbers to his feelings to act as if he had any certainty.

"Well, it's about time..." He remarked, walking out onto the training ground without fanfare. It wasn't like there was any need for showboating with a crowd like this. Thirty or so people in all, at least a quarter of whom were just friends of Gaius or Herod. The Aspirant heard some isolated cheers and turned his head in the direction they came from - indeed, there were some friends of his now, come to encourage him.

"Amazing. You really do have things backwards, big man. You're looking easy-breezy now, but every time you lose a bracelet or an earring you freak out." Jiang Li taunted from where he sat, feet kicked up on the empty seat in front of him.

Next to speak up was the somber Diana. Sullen-eyed, dressed in a dark gown and with her hair cut into a neat little bob, she could be said to be the rationality of the group. She did her best to reign in their worst excesses and in turn they encouraged her to rove out and explore rather than shrink into herself. "You've done a great job cultivating this fast, but um... I'll support you but I can't approve of you starting trouble like this. When this is over we have to have a talk about boundaries." She said, looking apologetic but holding a quiet intensity behind the statement.

"To be fair, he really is hotheaded when you push his buttons, isn't he?" Xie Chin commented right beside her. Tall, curvaceous and elegant, with a waterfall of black hair going down to her mid-back, this woman seemed the definition of feminine wiles... until you got to know her, at least. In truth, she possessed a vicious streak a mile wide toward those who she felt deserved it, and would drink, curse and sing with the rowdiest folks around when she was in the right mood. Indeed, Xie Chin was truly yin and yang in one. "Gaius, you just remember that whatever happens out there, we're all proud of your accomplishment. Just try not to make a habit of dueling people above your level, I doubt most of them will be as accommodating as dear Herod over there." Her voice dripped with sarcasm, but with a core of genuine encouragement.

"Don't you dare write me off yet. I've got a plan, and I'd like to think it's pretty good." Gaius smirked.

"Nonsense." Xie Chin replied with a wave of her hand. "We've got no right to speculate on you. You're the first of us to reach the Third Heavenstage. That means you're a real warrior, not a glorified cadet. We all want to see your first battle as a warrior, so make it a good one."

"That's more like it!" Gaius responded with a bashful laugh, ruffling his hair. "That's a lot of pressure, but I'll be sure to give you guys a good show!" And with that he was off, toward the center of the ring. All three watched intently, excited to see his unusual talents be demonstrated at a new, higher level.

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Herod was not in a good mood. He supposed people hardly ever showed up to a duel in a good mood, since if they did, whatever was nothing them wouldn't be serious enough to duel over. Still, while Cultivators were perhaps more famous for their stupid duels than they were literally anything else, he felt that this duel was uniquely stupid. Herod considered himself mild-mannered(most of the time) so perhaps he wasn't an unbiased judge of what was worth starting a battle over, but he was fairly certain that remembering your reason for starting a duel should have been a prerequisite.

He sighed as he strode to the center of the ring. This wasn't his first time pissing someone off by not taking something seriously enough, but it was definitely the most severe. He just wanted to live and let live amongst comrades, was that really too much to ask for? It always went this way, his head would start hurting, he'd get impatient, and so he'd try to resolve a situation quick and dirty and be on his way. But noooo, something always had to get in Herod's way, usually some dipshit going on about honor over something that didn't matter in the slightest!

The spear-toting warrior shook his head, dispelling the errant thoughts. Something to worry about another time. Right now, it was time to get this stupid fight over with. He'd be fine either winning or losing; while he would of course rather not be injured, if Gaius won then things would be settled between them, and if Herod won then Gaius would hopefully learn a painful lesson about taking things too far. Still, it wasn't like he could throw the fight - his opponent would sense the lack of intent in his qi, get mad at him for not dueling in earnest, and things would get even more complicated and annoying. No, better to just give it his all and let fate decide.

In no time at all, Herod was there, and so was Gaius. A short sword was held in the tall man's right hand and a dagger in his left, and Herod quietly adjusted his strategy to best handle that. The two stood face to face for a good half a minute before the proctor arrived, having taken his sweet time getting there, what with the missing leg and all. This being wartime, the only Seniors who could be spared for a job this petty were those who couldn't meaningfully participate in the field. A legionnaire in some higher Heavenstage, Herod couldn't place it directly, the man didn't seem particularly enthused, and recited the rules of the duel to both combatants by rote. It was the kind of stuff you'd expect: blunted weapons, no attacks to the eyes or throat, if a combatant gives up or can no longer fight the duel will be declared over, and so on.

No, Herod's eyes remained focused on his opponent, who was shrouded in an energy which was nothing like the demeanor he'd demonstrated before. Gaius had been relentlessly headstrong before, but not so hyperfocused, not in this way. It was as if every part of the being known as Gaius Antonius that was not useful for this confrontation had been cast aside for the time being. This put Herod on edge immediately, a feeling which tripled when the taller man slicked his bangs back and looked at him.

A weight seemed to settle on Herod's shoulders in that moment, for reasons he could not fully understand. Gaius' eyes were impossibly deep, in that moment. The man's perception seemed to radiate out of him and sink into his surroundings like a thick fog. This fog touched every inch of Herod's body, becoming a condensation which clung to him and made his instincts ring out in alarm. He glanced to the side, the proctor's arm was raised. Shit, he had to shake off this weight! With a surge of mental effort, he broke out of the fugue state; a tenth of a second later, the proctor swung his arm down.

"BEGIN!"

And they were off!

...Or they at least should have been. Gaius sprung backwards, entered a defensive stance and continued to quietly analyze Herod with those piercing eyes. Herod in turn dug in his heels and raised his shield for an attack that didn't come, and took a single second to ponder this. This was a decidedly unfavorable matchup of weapons for Gaius, one which would demand that he be aggressive, take the offensive and get inside his opponent's reach. Rather than follow such an incentive, the sword-wielding Aspirant hung back, seemingly content to hand the initiative off to Herod. And so, for a few more precious seconds, the combatants circled each other, already battling mentally.

Herod was no longer unsettled, he was outright perturbed. Two things he didn't understand: that immense pressure Gaius' eyes had brought forth, still pressing against the edges of his mind, and these strange, counter-productive tactics, too deliberate to be the fumbling of an amateur. One unknown variable could be accounted for, two was too much. No matter - he would herd his opponent's tactics into another shape.

At last came the first exchange. Herod obliged Gaius' timidity with a flurry of thrusts from his spear, each one flashing out with incredible speed and precise motion. Every thrust was aimed for a separate vital point, aiming to cripple the enemy before he could do anything. With a blunted spear like this, the damage would be less severe, but torn tendons and broken bones would still be inevitable.

Royal Viper's Hundred Bites

Gaius twisted and juked with exemplary quickness, avoiding several thrusts entirely, and parrying several more would-be near-misses with his dagger. Nonetheless, after enduring a dozen of these attacks, his stance began to collapse, and he gave ground, springing backward to save himself from the barrage. This was the true terror of the Royal Viper's Hundred Bites. Avoiding one strike set you up to be struck by the next - with every attack one survived, one was only drawn further into the constricting embrace of the serpent.

Hot on the heels of the first exchange emerged the second. Again Herod closed in with his deadly flurry of blows, but this time Gaius countered. The tall man's movements became hazy, seeming to bleed into each other into a single blob of color. He was like an image that had been drawn with too much ink, becoming indistinct as he seeped into his surroundings. Herod had heard of this at some point, he thought. A defensive technique which utilized illusion and mobility in equal parts. Only useful against the same Heavenstage or lower, or perhaps a single Heavenstage higher for practitioner who mastered it to the fullest extent, it was nonetheless a potent tool in the right situation.

Heat Haze Step

Herod's accuracy was thrown off, so while Gaius was still harried, the attacks were shut down with far greater ease. Batting aside the spear once again with his dagger, Gaius went on the offensive, getting inside Herod's reach and bringing his sword to bear. As if it would be that easy - the older man parried the slash aside and bashed the rim of his shield into his attacker's hastily-raised guard. A wave of force erupted from the point of impact, spreading out in a wide cone-shape in front of Herod. Taking this attack at minimum range, Gaius felt the full impact and was flung back nearly ten feet, landing painfully on his back.

Mighty Bronze Gong

That was more like it, thought Herod. He wouldn't let Gaius dictate the flow of the battle. In fact, from this point until the end of the match, he wouldn't even let his opponent regain his bearings. The tall man quickly scrambled back to his feet, only to immediately bend over backward as a bolt of qi whizzed by where his head had been. Drawing back the offending weapon, Herod thrust his spear several more times, launching another qi bolt from the end each time. This technique had no name, it was simply ordinary Sword Qi, albiet modified by Herod to be usable at a lower Heavenstage than usual. Gaius swung his sword and dagger alike with masterful precision, deflecting every last one of the bolts, and then there was no more time to think, as Herod was on him again, once more in physical range.

Yet again, a spear lashed out; there was no time to activate Heat Haze Step again, and retreating would only bring on another barrage of Sword Qi, so Gaius performed his only viable action - rather than retreat, he took the bait and advanced, batting Herod's spear aside once more and slashing at his opponent again and again. Yet no purchase was found; Herod's shield hand was quick and resolute, stopping every attack cold. His foot flashed out with the same viper-like quickness and precision as his spear, striking Gaius' ankle and making him trip. For just a moment, the tall man's grip faltered, and Herod sent the sword flying end over end out of his hand. Once more, the shield bash came, but this time it did not strike true.

Herod's eyes grew wide in shock as his opponent dropped the dagger to catch the rim of his shield with both hands. The Mighty Bronze Gong erupted immediately, sending Gaius skidding back, but not violently flung like before. No, this was from momentum. There, shimmering, caught in some kind of field radiating from Gaius' hands, was the Qi of Herod's attack - the Aspirant had caught it. Skidding to a stop, he drew his hand back and then thrust it forward, flinging the spearman's own wave of force back upon him.

Overturning Heaven and Earth

Herod rose his shield to take the impact, and it was nearly torn from his hand in the collision. In a flash, he found himself knocked prone, and leapt back up to his feet after a moment. This wasn't right. No, it wasn't right at all. Herod didn't know what technique that was, but its principles were easy enough to surmise. He thought on this as he cautiously advanced once more, kicking his opponent's fallen dagger far behind him when he reached it.

Gaius had emitted a net. No, not a net, more like a bubble. By encasing the Qi and cancelling out its momentum, the Aspirant had taken control of the attack and thrown it back. This part made sense; what didn't was why he would use such a technique in the first place. Catching the force and throwing it back would naturally be far more taxing to Gaius' qi reserves than simply deflecting it to the side, as he would have needed to not just stop the momentum, but enhance his own physical strength enough to gain control of it. In Qi Condensation, a Cultivator's qi reserves generally rose in proportion to their physical strength. Thus, Gaius would have had to put in more qi than Herod had in order to take control of the blast, on top of the qi spent to create that bubble. Why? Why would this man, who seemed to be a shrewd and capable fighter, do such a thing when it clearly wasn't worth it? Herod's mind continued to boggle, but then something happened.

Gaius took a new stance entirely. Herod knew the positioning of those legs, the bend of that back - that was Bronze Arhat Style! And it didn't have the desperate intensity of a man resorting to a backup strategy, but a relaxed familiarity greater than when Gaius held his blades! Revelation struck the older combatant in a flash, and he couldn't help but let out a bark of nervous laughter.

"So that's how you did it. Gaius... you're a Body Cultivator, aren't you? That's how you have enough strength to use that redirection trick on someone of the same level." Herod explained, leveling his spear and pointing it accusingly at his opponent.

"You're really smart, Herod. Guilty as charged." Gaius replied, gaze growing more focused and intense by the second. Indeed, what had once been a blunt force pressing on Herod from all sides now felt painfully sharp. The man's very awareness seemed to penetrate through Herod's armor and skin, peering through his very innards like the pages of a book. This marked a clear turn in the battle. Those blades had never been intended to finish the battle, they had been for defense, to tease out as much of Herod's capabilities as possible, so that their wielded could analyze him further. Now, Gaius seemed satisfied with what he had learned, and ready to put things to an end.

How naive. "You think you've read me, think you know everything I can do? You're far too cocky, Junior!" Herod jumped backward, increasing the distance between the two substantially, and breatheD deeply. He inhaled until his lungs could contain no more, then violently expelled that tension with a shout, wreathing the tip of his spear with an aura of burning embers. Outright setting it on fire would be too demanding of his qi reserves at his lowly cultivation level, but Herod had once again found a way around that.

Herod once more used his modified Sword Qi, blasting bolts of qi from the tip of his spear. This time, each bolt carried a few of the embers within it, and whipped up by the sudden and violent bursts of energy, the air around these bolts ignited, turning them from mere projectiles to small fireballs, which were fired off at an impressive rate.

Shooting Star Assault

A true elemental technique at the Third Heavenstage was extremely rare, and an unarmed opponent of the same level would have no way of easily dealing with the flames should they be ignited. Those piercing eyes widened in shock, as Gaius desperately dodged and weaved, leapt and dived, assailed by the storm of projectiles. Eventually, inevitably, he slipped up, and was struck by two of the blasts and sent tumbling end-over end.

Herod saw that his aura of embers was depleted and took a moment to replenish it, relishing in the success of his technique. This was his first time using Shooting Star Assault against a living opponent, and he was relieved to see it working as well as he'd hoped. He drew back his spear once more - as soon as Gaius was standing against, Herod would assail him with another volley, and this would continue until a surrender was forced out of him. The tall Aspirant struggled back up to his feet, blood dripping from somewhere under his mass of curly locks, as well as from a half-cauterized wound in his chest. With a roar, Herod attacked again, unleashing another barrage of fire.

The events that followed seemed to Herod's eyes as if they played out in slow motion. Gaius, burning his qi like cheap tinder to the point it slightly distorted the air around him, raised his left arm skyward. He then rotated his arm in a full circle, his hand tracing a path of bright red light through the air until it connected with the origin point, creating a gleaming circle in front of the Aspirant. Finally, Gaius swung his hand down to the middle of the circle and pointed his palm straight out. In response, the area within the circle glowed gold, and a wave of freezing air blasted out. This defense was hardly enough to stop the bolts, but that was seemingly never the goal, the cold causing the flames to gutter out and the headwind reducing their speed just a bit.

Aegis Incarnation: Fire

In a flash of movement, Gaius summoned up that bubble technique in his right hand and caught all of the bolts one after the other, then pulled his hand back to launch them all at Herod. Outright panicking now, Herod shifted back into a fully defensive posture. The bolts were indeed thrown, now having jumbled together into an inchoate mass of force. This time, rather that try to just block the redirected attack, the Aspirant exerted every ounce of might he had and parried. For several seconds the blast resisted his attempts, only to finally be overcome and knocked aside, smashing into the perimeter wall and leaving a small crater in the stonework.

By the time he turned the attack aside, Gaius was already inside his guard with a burst of intense speed, throwing a flying knee strike at Herod's solar plexus. With no room to maneuver, Herod dropped his spear and interposed his hand, catching his opponent's knee and attempting to seize the taller man's thigh and transition into a takedown. But before he could do anything more, the world before his eyes burst into a mess of blurred colors. Realization came half a second after impact; Gaius had struck him in the temple with a swift, scything elbow strike. Herod fell.

No.

Herod wasn't finished yet. At some point in all this, he had started having fun. This was no longer an obligation, he burned with the desire to claim victory. His left hand shot out, grabbing the collar of Gaius' armor and arresting his fall. Re-planting his feet, Herod made a spear-hand with his right hand and surged forward with a roar, aiming for Gaius' chest.

However, his fellow Aspirant wanted to win just as badly. Stepping into the attack and causing Herod's fingers to bury an inch into his shoulder with a wet squelch, Gaius slammed a palm strike into Herod's other temple and swept his foot at the same time. This time, for a fraction of a second, the world went black entirely. Consciousness returned for an instant, only Gaius' fist to strike the downed warrior's face dead-center, sending him into a longer sleep.

As his conscious mind receded for the time being, Herod's thoughts returned to those eyes, so impossibly deep. Like an ocean, sucking him in. How? How could a human have eyes like that...?

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"Owww. Ugh, that hurts a lot..."

The proctor declared Gaius the victor and two of the on-site medics -mortals, of course. No medical cultivator would be called in for a duel between such lowly Aspirants - went to tend to Herod. Gaius had no interest in watching this, and slowly stumbled back to the area where his friends sat, clutching his head. Reaching the spot in question, where all three were cheering and congratulating him, leaned against the wall and slid down into a sitting position. The group quieted down for a few minutes as Gaius turned away from the evening sun and waited for his splitting headache to die down.

Once he was feeling a bit better, he leapt up over the wall(immediately regretting this as he jostled the gaping holes in his shoulder) and took a seat in the stands, his friends swarming around him like piranhas. Several questions were shot his way, most of them being something long the lines of "how the hell did you pull that off?" Or "how far ahead did you plan that?"

"I'm gonna be honest with you guys," Gaius replied after a moment of thought. "A third of my success was just blind luck. All of that guy's techniques were very compatible with mine." He explained, holding up one finger. "A further third came down to information advantage. It seems Herod didn't bother to do much research about me; if he had, he might have realized I was a Body Cultivator, and without that ruse I don't think I'd have won." He elaborated, holding up a second finger. "Only the last third was my own skill and talent." He finally concluded, adding a third finger.

"Seriously, dude? You just took home the victory, but you're making excuses for the other guy?" Jiang Li chuckled, patting Gaius' shoulder(the good one).

"I mean it!" Protested the victor in question. "Herod is definitely stronger than me right now. I mean, he's a lot more proficient with the techniques he knows, for one. I'm an idiot who learned too many."

"You say that, but it seems like you don't have any offensive qi techniques at all, besides academy-standard Bronze Arhat." Challenged Diana.

"That's correct, I don't." Gaius revealed, to the incredulity of all three. "I learned seven techniques in total from the Palace: Heat Haze Step, Overturning Heaven and Earth, and all five versions of Aegis Incarnation. I'm counting on my own perception and intuition to shore up my offense."

"You seriously learned a different specialized defense against every element? That's insane." Xie Chin spoke up harshly. "No wonder your techniques are still unpolished. You would be better off learning one more all-purpose defense in place of those. Then you'd have more time for your offense."

"That's absolutely the rational choice." Gaius shot back. "For the vast majority of people, that would be more useful and efficient. But I'm not rational, I'm The Seeker. I have to be prepared for the harshest possible obstacles, and thus I take the longest, hardest path."

There was a moment of somber silence; all three of his friends knew what he meant by that: Thirteenth Heavenstage. Single-Pillar Foundation Establishment. Madness. Suicide. The group had discussed this before, and Gaius' complete devotion to his path had been made clear time and again. A shadow seemed to drape over the trio, as if they were already mourning their friend.

This gloomy moment soon passed, however, and Gaius and the others fell into comfortable, personable small-talk as another medic arrived to tend to his own injuries. Damn, the migraine headache had occupied his attention at first, but his shoulder hurt quite a bit too; if he was a mortal, this would be a serious wound. Thankfully, all he needed was some disinfection, suturing and bandages and he would be mostly healed in a month. Normally it would be more like a week - all but the worst flesh wounds were trivial for a Cultivator - but he could feel that one of his meridians had been torn clean in half, which would complicate the process.

As he held still under the medic's ministrations, Gaius saw Herod, now mostly conscious, being helped out of the arena, and felt a pang of guilt. He probably had been unreasonable after all. He didn't necessarily regret the actions that led him here; there was no room for doubt in the heart of The Seeker. Plus, he probably wouldn't have hit the Third Heavenstage this fast if not for having a milestone to chase after. Still, he had used a man who wanted no part in this for his own gain. He would definitely have to buy Herod a gift. Maybe some low-grade medicinal pills?

"Bullheaded." "Far too headstrong." "Daft motherfucker." "Don't need to follow a Dao yet." All of these were things Herod had accused him of, and, permitting himself a moment of self-awareness, he admitted that the man was right. Still, he couldn't allow himself to step off the path. No, Gaius would remain selfish for a very long time, and while he felt some degree of remorse, he would never allow one iota of regret.

5110 words, Jesus Christ. That makes 12,197 words in total. This one really got away from me. I tried to write this fight scene with the pacing and framing of a really good fight in a manga, hopefully it's not too bloated.

Not much character stuff here, I just wanted to demonstrate how Gaius fights. Also, the attack names in italics are meant to be like, big kill la kill-esque subtitles.


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Good Seed Report 3 - En Masse
Achille Adephos
Fate
- Met a powerful wounded Blazing Bear, slaying it and forging its pelt into a powerful Fire-Resistant Bear-Cloak (+2 Impact). Recovered from his wounds.
Impact - 0 (+0)
Cultivation
- 10th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 140 years (+1)
Health
- Lightly Wounded -> Healthy

Alastor Cheimos
Fate
- Discovered a Fated Sundial in the depths of an ancient battle between the the Clan and Cannibals. The artifact-spirit imparted several key pointers (+10 Cultivation).
Impact - 0 (+0)
Cultivation
- 9th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 66 years (+31)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Alex and Ajex
Fate
- Hunted down a Blazing Bear, but inflicted wounds upon it that were returned tenfold. Badly injured and burned, they returned to the Clan. (+2 Wound steps)
Impact - 0 (+0)
Cultivation
- 9th Heavenstage (20 years to FB)
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 65 years (+0)
Health
- Healthy -> Wounded

Amaranth Castellanos
Fate
- Hunted by bandits for a year, he trapped them and killed them, seizing a Mist-Command Pendant (+1 Impact) from the leader, allowing him to summon mists to hide within or escape through.
Impact - 8 (+1)
Cultivation
- 10th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 152 years (+21)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Anastasia Outi
Fate
- Cultivated for the war to come. Diligently rose into the 9th Heavenstage.
Impact - 0 (+0)
Cultivation
- 9th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 65 years (+27)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Aretaphila Myia
Fate
- Escorted caravans up and down the Scorpion Road. No major encounters of note.
Impact - 13 (+13)
Cultivation
- 12th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 232 years (+20)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Aristoteles Kalokagathos
Fate
- Exploring an abandoned temple in the south, found a Threefold Mechanical Lightning Egg. Unfortunately, it was trapped by its owner and exploded, wounding him. (+1 Wound Step)
Impact - 5 (+5)
Cultivation
- Early 1-Pillar
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 100 years (+0)
Health
- Lightly Wounded -> Healthy

Aurelius Mancinus
Fate
- Tended to Spirit Beasts in the main Clan compounds after an unfortunate encounter with a Devil-Bearded Goat. Continued to heal.
Impact - 0 (+0)
Cultivation
- 1st Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 21 years (+0)
Health
- Badly Wounded -> Wounded

Castor Tyndaridae
Fate
- Explored the temple Aristoteles returned from, hoping to find something of use. Instead, found a massive Lightning Array designed to kill interlopers, almost died. (+2 Wound Steps)
Impact - 1 (+1)
Cultivation
- 7th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 53 years (+0)
Health
- Healthy -> Wounded

Chen Rong
Fate
- Journeyed into the mountains, finding an ancient Splendid Sun-Blade. The artifact, however, was build to slay those of the Clan, and on grasping it, it stabbed at him, crippling his meridians (+4 Wound-Steps).
Impact - 1 (+1)
Cultivation
- 3rd Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 34 years (+0)
Health
- Healthy -> Crippled

Constans Herculius
Fate
- Robbed a number of bandits in a piece of turnabout, stealing a Six Second Sigil, a powerful talisman that could freeze time for the cultivator every few decades, allowing them to steal around their opponents (+2 Impact).
Impact - 4 (+2)
Cultivation
- 3rd Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 30 years (+0)
Health
- Crippled -> Crippled

Daedalus Khimaira
Fate
- Calmed a ghost through the judicious use of both legal argument and a hired minstrel in a haunted village. No rewards as the ghost itself was not overly harmful. During this time, broke through to the 10th Heavenstage.
Impact - 2 (+0)
Cultivation
- 10th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 117 years (+13)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Diogenes Aparámillos
Fate
- Chased by angry spirits after trying to loot an ancient Spirit Stone Mine. Gained nothing, but escaped unharmed.
Impact - 0 (+0)
Cultivation
- 10th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 125 years (+13)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Dmitry Kascheev
Fate
- Found a Celestial Chicken Egg (+10 cultivation), eating it immediately. Escaped from the angered parents unharmed though his clothes were badly pecked. While this did not help him overmuch, he broke through to Foundation Establishment.
Impact - 4 (+0)
Cultivation
- Early FB 1
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 100 years (+0)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Festus Sarantapechos
Fate
- Came upon a valuable nest of Celestial Chicken Eggs (+20 Cultivation) as the parents were chasing away another trespasser. Ate the valuable eggs for a cultivation boost.
Impact - 3 (+0)
Cultivation
- 9th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 107 years (+19)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Hektor Sarantapechos
Fate
- A life insurance policy bought by his family paid out, finally. Specifically to raise 'the most promising young seedling' in the event of 'the death of the most powerful cultivator in the family'. Had he not been crippled, it would've been released to him.
Impact - 6 (+0)
Cultivation
- Foundation Establishment 3-Pillar (Mid)
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 161 years (+0)
Health
- Crippled -> Crippled

Juturna Cerintha
Fate
- Quietly building up a small business empire - no notable encounters or major events. Cultivated most diligently, using her profits to propel herself into the 10th Heavenstage.
Impact - 1 (+1)
Cultivation
- 10th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 117 years (+30)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Matthaias Outi
Fate
- Attacked by two rampaging Celestial Chickens, returning to their nests. Truly unlucky (+2 Wound Steps). Without the judicious use of a treasure, would have been killed.
Impact - 8 (+8)
Cultivation
- 7th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 50 (+0)
Health
- Badly Wounded -> Dead (LST INTERRUPT) -> Badly Wounded -> Wounded

Mildgyð Galene
Fate
- Escorted a number of traders from Strength Purity along the Scorpion Road. After saving the Young Mistress in an encounter with bandits, she gave him her Glove of Forty Punches (+4 Impact). Just as it sounded, the glove empowered one's punches tremendously, though wielding such power hurt the user. Along with this, reached the 9th Heavenstage, and began preparations to break through.
Impact - 5 (+4)
Cultivation
- 9th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 73 years (+30)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Mograine (Leon12431)
Fate
- Travelling south for the war. Attacked and almost killed (+2 Wound Steps)by a gang led by a Foundation bandit, though managed to escape. with the use of a treasure.
Impact - 9 (+0)
Cultivation
- 10th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 108 years (+0)
Health
- Badly Wounded -> Dead (LST INTERRUPT) -> Badly Wounded -> Wounded

Nicovas Ceruleus
Fate
- Escorting on the Scorpion Road. No major encounters.
Impact - 0 (+0)
Cultivation
- 9th Heavenstage (1 turn from FB)
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 60 years (+0)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Orphanos
Fate
- Cultivated well in seclusion, making tremendous strides (+10 cultivation).
Impact - 2 (+2)
Cultivation
- 9th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 79 years (+22)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Paulus
Fate
- Foolishly entered the temple Castor and Aristoteles had explored. With no more traps remaining, recovered the coveted Lightning Arbalest (+4 Impact), a massive arbalest capable of throwing lightning bolts for kilometres away, and able to be shrunk to the size of a hand crossbow when not in use.
Impact - 4 (+4)
Cultivation
- 6th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 48 years (+28)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Peta and Wajo
Fate
- Peta and Wajo were sent to propitiate an ancient bear ghost, but failed to do so. After three years of propitiating the spirit, it wiped out a village and fled into the desert.
Impact - 4 (+0)
Cultivation
- 10th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 158 years (+8)
Health
- Wounded -> Lightly Wounded

Phaedo (FixerUpper)
Fate
- Phaedo was hunting bandits for the majority of his time, but failed his mission, and was recalled to the warfront. Given resources to jump into the 9th Heavenstage as his Legion prepared for war.
Impact - 0 (+0)
Cultivation
- 9th Heavenstage (-2 to FB)
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 67 years (+28)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Savvas Nicolidis
Fate
- Sent to hunt a group of bandits that had escaped several times, Savvas slew them all, but was wounded in the process (+1 Wound Step)
Impact - 3 (+3)
Cultivation
- Early FB (1st Pillar)
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 100 years (+0)
Health
- Healthy -> Lightly Wounded

Shennong
Fate
- After searching for a decade, Shennong found the site of a fabled blade. Unfortunately, it had long been taken, but the Peacebound Scabbard (+1 Impact) allowed him to weaken the combat ability of others while he had not yet drawn his weapon.
Impact - 0 (+0)
Cultivation
- Cultivation - 9th Heavenstage (-1 to FB)
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 69 years (+0)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Shiro
Fate
- One of the earliest casualties of the war, Shiro stepped into a trap left centuries ago for the Clan, but escaped with relatively minor wounds (+1 Wound-Step).
Impact - 0 (+0)
Cultivation
- 9th Heavenstage (-1 to FB)
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 65 years (+0)
Health
- Healthy -> Lightly Wounded

Su Cheng
Fate
- Sent as a scout to the south, Su Cheng encountered a clan of Goatmen, and spent her time shepherding them away from the richer lands - they were directly in the line of fire for the Cannibal invasion.
Impact - 0 (+0)
Cultivation
- 9th Heavenstage (-2 to FB)
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 74 years (+25)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Sun Yi
Fate
- Wounded along with Tasos Basilakes and Theoron attempting to guard a major convoy. Sun Yi, Theoron and Tasos managed to save the convoy containing several key Array components, but were wounded as a result (+2 Wound-Steps)
Impact - 0 (+0)
Cultivation
- 5th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 40 years (+0)
Health
- Healthy -> Wounded

Tasos Basilakes
Fate - Guarding a major convoy south, bandits swarmed onto the convoy and slew almost everyone. Sun Yi, Theoron and Tasos managed to save the convoy containing several key Array components, but were wounded as a result. Tasos managed to avoid the wound with the use of a treasure, playing dead briefly before retreating and using his archery to rescue the others. (+2 Wound-Step)
Impact - 10 (+10)
Cultivation
- 10th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 191 years (+26)
Health
- Healthy -> Wounded (LST Interrupt) -> Healthy

Tharros Ateleioti
Fate
- Tharros was in for a boring twenty years. He spent his time as a scout on the border, but in a quiet area where no real attacks were expected - and nothing happened.
Impact - 0 (+0)
Cultivation
- 9th Heavenstage (-1 FB)
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 65 years (+0)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Theoron Strophios
Fate
- Guarding a major convoy south, bandits swarmed onto the convoy and slew almost everyone. Sun Yi, Theoron and Tasos managed to save the convoy containing several key Array components, but were wounded as a result. (+2 Wound-Step). His use of a treasure saved him being badly wounded.
Impact - 1 (+0)
Cultivation
- 9th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 89 years (+26)
Health
- Healthy -> Wounded (LST Interrupt) -> Healthy

Ulysses
Fate
- Discovered a powerful, ancient artifact he was unable to identify. Managed to break the control mechanism by accident when assisting in the mission to return it to the Clan. The merits and demerits cancelled out, and Ulysses found himself without major reward.
Impact - 0 (+0)
Cultivation
- 6th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 45 years (+10)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Vitruvian Anasc
Fate
- Vitruvian was the victim of a prank gone wrong. Two Foundation experts had begun pranking one another in fun, leaving near-lethal traps and the like to keep one another on their toes. Vitruvian stepped onto an enchanted landmine and left nearly half his foot behind. (+1 Wound-Step)
Impact - 0 (+0)
Cultivation
-4th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 38 years (+0)
Health
- Healthy -> Lightly Wounded

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The remainder of those who did omake this turn will be coming shortly after.
 
oh holy crap, my cultivator didn't die. After getting would have died without lst twice in a row, I kinda just expected a third.
 
Alex and Ajex
Fate - Hunted down a Blazing Bear, but inflicted wounds upon it that were returned tenfold. Badly injured and burned, they returned to the Clan. (+2 Wound steps)
Impact - 0 (+0)
Cultivation
- 9th Heavenstage (20 years to FB)
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 65 years (+0)
Health
- Healthy -> Wounded
To be expected. They seemed like a really cool idea, but I never figured out how to write them.
 
Really, Just More Good Seeds
Gaius Antonius
Omake Reward: Cultivation Boost +10 cultivation)
Fate - Obsessive and ever-seeking, Gaius leapt into strength as others leapt into action. Advancing rapidly and cultivating absurdly, it was almost as if the Heavens were enabling the Clan for once, granting the 1st Heavenstage Aspirants the chance to reach the 9th in but a pair of decades. Gaius completed three missions, hunting down dangerous Revolution Scorpions and was gifted with a panoply of cultivation resources (+10 Cultivation). He was readied for the war to come.
Impact - 0 (+0)
Cultivation
- 9th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 63 years (+42)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Simon Euaerizo
Omake Reward: LST
Fate - Simon found speed, just as those in the Blood Path had before him. Yet his speed was born of obsession, the relentless drive to improve and grow. Merely decades from reaching Foundation Establishment, he secluded himself in the mountains, hoping to find enlightenment before the war began. He was not fast enough, however, and the war began before he could reach his new stage.
Impact - 0 (+0)
Cultivation
- 9th Heavenstage (-1 to FB)
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 65 years (+0)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Magnus Centenius
Omake Reward: LST
Fate - Magnus took another step forward, mere decades from reaching Foundation Establishment. Slowly recovering from his wounds, his mastery over his puppet-arms increasing. He judged that he would be able to ascend almost as soon as his wounds were healed and he could face the wrath of the Heavens.
Impact - 3 (+3)
Cultivation
- 10th Heavenstage (-1 to FB)
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 108 years (+0)
Health
- Wounded -> Lightly Wounded

Syntyche Theophylaktos
Omake Reward: Trib treasure
Fate - Syntyche found herself the beneficiary of much partiality. Driven by guilt, perhaps, or by a desire to assist the Clan's fallen spymaster, she was given resources as she sought to assault Foundation Establishment. A single Lightning-Divining Tablet (Tribulation Treasure) was given to her, allowing her to plot out the assault her tribulation would come upon her with before it truly did. With such a resource, she stepped into Foundation Establishment with relative easy, ready for the war to come. Cleverly, she avoided breaking through until she had ventured into the Qiguai Secret Realm. There, she was almost immediately thrown out, surviving but consuming a Lifesaving Treasure to merely escape.
Impact - 8 (+0)
Cultivation
- Early One-Pillar
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 100 years (+0)
Health
- Healthy -> Wounded (LST interrupt) -> Healthy

Wei Feng
Omake Reward: LST
Fate - Wei Feng entered the Qiguai Secret Realm. Unlucky, he fell from the sky - almost to his death. Only the use of a treasure left him able to survive, though Badly Wounded. His wounds left him crawling away, and he was spun into the sky by a massive whirlpool coming from the sea above. It was there he met a trio of spirits, each from the Clan, who had lived there since ages immemorial. Old Devil, one was called, or Theodosia Krytos. She had led the Clan prior to being driven into the desert, many years ago, and had died here during a melee with enemies above her level. She had retreated into the Secret Realm and died there. She taught Wei Feng several key techniques to absorb energy from the boundary between the Secret Realm and the waters beyond. (+20 Cultivation). Her second-in-command, Erika Theophylaktos. Erika gave Wei Feng her supply of pills - far degraded from their peak condition as Nascent Soul pills, for but someone in Qi Condensation they were invaluable (+40 Cultivation). Finally, the third spirit was her daughter, named Theodosia as well, though she went by Dosi. Dosi found her last vestiges of spirit fading, and taught Wei Feng to absorb a friendly ghost, accelerating his cultivation significantly. (+20 Cultivation). Despite his wounds preventing him from making any real progress himself, he found himself far above where he was.
Impact - 8 (+0)
Cultivation
- 11th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 190 years (+80)
Health
- Healthy -> Dead (LST interrupt) -> Badly Wounded

Xiao Yi/Jin Muyi
Omake Reward: LST
Fate - Xiao Yi commanded his Legion for the first time, preparing them for war. Spending their lives like water to prepare raids as the war begun, he found himself having difficulties. While he was able to advance with another Pillar, the Legion themselves got only a little information. What they did bring back was of importance, though, discovering the earliest Cannibal raiding routes into the northern Clan supply lines.
Impact - 12 (+0)
Cultivation
- Foundation Establishment 4-Pillar
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 196 years (+22)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Xiao Yingzi
Omake Reward: Trib Boost
Fate - Her relentless training paid off - with the help of seniors, and her own dedication, she blasted through every barrier, reaching the 9th Heavenstage. It was then and there that she decided to seek out experiences to form her Dao more strongly. Through sheer happenstance and luck, a bolt of lightning struck her as she meditated on a mountain. Surviving it without being wounded, the heavenly lightning allowed her to more properly understand what she was to face. She readied herself to leap into Foundation Establishment, but could not quite make it before the war began.
Impact - 0 (+0)
Cultivation
- 9th Heavenstage (-1 to FB)
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 65 years (+31)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Xiuying Ten Jiang
Omake Reward: LST
Fate - Entering the Qiguai Secret Realm, Xiuying found herself in possession of several key things. While she was unable to find any treasures at first, her sale of noodles made her popular, even among those who hated the Clan. Several cultivators who would have ordinarily slew her for her nature instead gave her tips (one awkwardly flirting with her in what she presumed was an attempt to gain a discount) as to where to find valuable treasures, and eventually she was able to uncover Thousand-Year Spirit Wheat, a powerful sheaf of wheat that she was able to pound into flour, and from there, made noodles. It seemed a logical thing to do - if one had a pill cauldron, forge pills. If one had a noodle stand, make noodles. She only had enough wheat for one bowl, but it advanced her cultivation significantly (+40 Cultivation). Shortly after, she found a most peculiar thing, that nobody else could sense. A fragment of Sword Intent (+4 Impact), merely... floating in the air. As though it had been waiting for her. As it entered her dantian, she found herself on the road to cutting without a blade, able to use her mere intent to cut to actually cut, though only rarely. Shortly after, however, she was met by a band of Yuan Clan young masters who loathed noodles, and beat her viciously. They aimed to kill her, and only with the use of a treasure did she escape (Badly Wounded). She decided to leave, and they ambushed her again. Had she not used her second treasure, they would have killed her outright, but she escaped without further wounds.
Impact - 10 (+6)
Cultivation
- Foundation Establishment 4-Pillar
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 73 years (+41)
Health
- Healthy -> Dead (LST interrupt) -> Badly Wounded -> Dead (LST interrupt) -> Badly Wounded

Zeno Angelus
Omake Reward: Cultivation Boost
Fate - Zeno found himself doing little, and despite this, only managed to cultivate to an average degree. Being cooped up with no appropriate missions sent him a little mad - and despite the horrifyingly embarrassing Incident of the Rat at Midnight (never to be spoken of, his friends agree), and the accidental lighting on fire of three silk dresses while on a transport mission, his time was fairly ordinary.
Impact - 0 (+0)
Cultivation
- 7th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 58 years (+22)
Health
- Healthy -> Healthy

Aliki Floros
Omake Reward: LST
Fate: As is the habit of many experts of the Clan who rise to power quickly and greedily, Aliki was tempted to set foot into the infamous Secret Realm, to test her skills and her knowledge against its dangers and learn what she could. It turned out to be something of a mixed bag, securing a strange wooden fragment that could turn to any form she desired, hungering and devouring her foes with aplomb. She made use of this hunting in the floating sky-seas of the Secret Realm's bordermarches, devouring many a fish in her quest, her power swelling to the point where the first of the Divine Abilities of her Clear Yin Constitution manifested itself. Her luck turned against her in the end however, as she first lost an arm to the gullet of a rather fast and clever fish, and while limping her way to safety, was ambushed by a forgettable Young Master who turned a terrible Life Saving Treasure on her, scattering her to the four winds... Or so the world thought.
Did a roll for Alectai early to help with inspiration - forgot some of the deets. Kept the basic stats in line to avoid keep putting off loading this onto the Fate page.
Impact - 11 (+11)
Cultivation - 9th Heavenstage
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 103 years
Health
- Healthy -> Crippled (one LST interrupt, some serious Secret Realm shenanigans)
 
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