Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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@Juugo For some reason your beginning quotation marks all seem to have become messed up after the first section break. Not sure what's happening there.

Also, threadmarked this an @no. 's post
 
I wrote the second part in my word program, which I use for work and therefore uses the german quotation system. Don´t worry, I looked it over just now. They should be changed now. @Humbaba
 
Yeah. Zalgo text is a nice novelty and all, but it's practically unreadable (that's part of the point), and when it shows up as more than a few lines, or as more than one line of text at the same time, it's not really serving any purpose other than to be a weirder-looking form of invisi-text.
 
Xiuying Ten Jiang 12 - Noodle-Lovers of the Secret Realm
Xiuying Ten Jiang 12 - Noodle-Lovers of the Secret Realm

"This is bullshit! The Huoying that originally entered the Secret Realm died decades ago and I'm what crawled out of her ashes! I'm pretty much a completely different person! There shouldn't be any reason why I can't go in!"

"I'm sorry, Lady Huoying, but despite reverting back to your youth, you still count as having already entered the secret realm. Many apologies but rules are rules. Any cultivator may enter the Qiguai Secret Realm once every Great Realm, regardless of whether they have been revitalised and regained their youth or reverted back to one of their previous states." The guide said, sounding bored, having most likely repeated the same thing to other senior-turned-junior cultivators in the past. "I don't make the rules of the Secret Realm so there's no point in complaining about it to me. Your friend can enter, however."

"Chill, Huoying. It's fine if we don't go in." Xiuying said, trying to placate her friend. "I've already got some good treasures on me and I've recently unlocked another section of Master's Manual so really, it's no big deal if I don't go to this secret realm thing."

Huoying sighed and counted to ten while taking a deep breath before turning to Xiuying who was looking at her like a puppy who didn't want to be left alone.

"Look Xiuying, we both agreed that in order for you to get stronger faster, you'd have to go risk exploring a Secret Realm. There's a war that's gonna be happening soon and we both want to be as strong as we can be when it hits." Huoying explained. "While it's unfortunate I can go back into the secret realm, having entered it before god knows how long ago in my previous life, you still have the opportunity to hit jackpot and power-up big time!"

"But-"

"No buts Xiuying! As your technical senior, I highly recommend that you go into that secret realm and gain strength!" Huoying declared in a haughty manner as though she was some young mistress of a great clan, her chest pushed forward and her arms akimbo.

"...Understood, Huoying! This one shall endeavour to meet your expectations!" Xiuying said, bowing with her hands clasped together, playing along with her friend's shenanigans.

For a few seconds, they stood there frozen in their poses before a snort from Huoying finally set them both off, causing the two girls to start laughing wholeheartedly. After taking a moment to catch their breath, Xiuying gave Huoying a hug.

"Take care then, Huoying! Remember to eat well and not use arson as an answer to all your problems!" Xiuying said, squeezing her best friend tightly.

"Haha, blasphemy. Fire fixes all problems. And you take care as well, Xiuying. Send a message once you're done and out, okay?" Huoying replied, returning Xiuying's hug.

"Oi! Are you two gonna just stand here and make out or are you gonna get going? There are other people waiting to go in, you know!" The guide shouted, having grown tired of the two girl's shenanigans.

With that, Xiuying said her farewell and after a few quick explanations and last minute checks on her gear, she proceeded to make her way into the Secret Realm.

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"C-CO-COLD!"

Xiuying didn't know what to expect when she walked through the shining glowing portal to a mystery place. She certainly didn't expect to step out a few feet above the ground and fall face-first into some weird wet cold white stuff. Despite being a cultivator, she was only third heavenstage so she was still easily affected by extreme temperatures. Quickly absconding into her noodle cart, Xiuying took a moment to collect herself and figure out where she was and why everything was so cold.

In one of the textbooks from her legion training days, Xiuying found a description of something called snow that matched what was outside her cart. Apparently, it was like rain except frozen but not like super solid. It was similar to the shaved ice coconut jelly dessert that the cart was capable of making - but without any of the coconut cream, jelly or anything to give the powdery ice any flavour.

How weird.

Despite the cold, however, Xiuying couldn't help but feel comfortable as the qi in the environment felt just like how it was when she was learning under Master Jiang. She never really understood how hard cycling her qi was compared to when she was still in the village. The best theory she had was that her master emanated qi during his stay in her village, allowing her to draw upon more potent qi than was normally available in the third sea.

It had taken several years for her to come up with this idea though she couldn't really confirm it since she hadn't been back to her village in over twenty years. She still wrote to her family but recently she hadn't been getting any replies back from them. After she was done with this Secret Realm place, she would go and visit her family and see how they were doing.

After she'd gotten warmed up and had a meal (noodles, of course), Xiuying got into the noodle cart's control seat and began her search for fortune and power. Well, that's what she was planning to do as soon as she got out of this weird cold place. Way too cold for her liking. And wouldn't herbs and plants be unable to grow in such a cold place?

Without a map to guide her way, and the cart's automatic driving mode disabled, Xiuying spent several days lost in the frozen tundra zone of the Secret Realm. Thanks to the noodle cart, Xiuying travelled in almost luxurious comfort. The bizarre appearance of the noodle cart made any spirit beasts that made the tundra their home wary and unwilling to confront the mysterious wagon-like artifact. Without good knowledge of spirit plants, particularly those that grew in such cold places, Xiuying ended up missing many valuable herbs and spirit plants as her cart trundled through the snow.

By the time she finally made it out of the snow-filled tundra, Xiuying's patient had been wearing thin. Being stuck in the snowfields was a pain and being cold was horribly uncomfortable for the desert-dweller. The moment she found herself surrounded by vibrant greenery and warm weather, Xiuying couldn't help but let out a cheer of relief.

"SCREW THE COLD!"

Free from the frozen tundra area, Xiuying was eager to finally begin her search for great treasure in earnest. With so many interesting looking places that she could see out in the distance that was away from the frozen tundra, there was sure to be something that could help her get stronger.

All she had to do was head over, and get searching.

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It had been several weeks since Xiuying escaped from the snow-filled area in this part of the Secret Realm. With her noodle cart providing both shelter, warm showers, and delicious food, Xiuying hardly experienced any discomfort while searching. Unfortunately, her search for rare herbs, mysterious treasures, and the likes was so far fruitless. Almost every hidden tomb or ruin that she found had already been ransacked by the previous visitors. She'd even found one mysterious tomb in the middle of being dismantled by a team of cultivators for the qi-infused building materials that they were made from.

All the herbs she found were common stuff that could be easily obtained outside the Secret Realm, and most of them went into her noodle pot to add a spicy but fresh flavour to her meals. Most of the spirit beasts she hunted were weakling whose beast cores were barely formed and were almost useless to Xiuying beyond what she could use in the kitchen. It was actually getting Xiuying kinda down with how pathetic her findings were.

Xiuying's poor mood only picked up when she found herself in the midst of a large encampment on the outer edge of the Secret Realm where Qi Condensation cultivators from all across the Virtuous Flipper met, traded, haggled, and fought over all kinds of treasures. It was a slice of civilisation in a mystical but hostile realm. As Xiuying explored the place, she took note of the people around her. With her noodle cart in storage, she looked like any other female cultivator, discounting her rather worn-out clothing.

One thing that Xiuying could never understand was people's obsession with fashion. Master Jiang, while his clothes were clearly made from very high-class material, didn't look all that different from a travelling cultivator from a lowborn clan. Compared to the elaborate and bizarre fashion sense from cultivators who looked more like preening peacocks in human form, Master Jiang's appearance was both humble and cheap looking. Her own clothes weren't expensive either. Though made out of better material than was available back in her village, it emphasised comfort and practical use over any kind of beauty or aesthetics beyond commoner peasant, or commoner mercenary to be more exact.

Her best clothes were her kitchenware and apron, gifts from Huoying on her thirtieth birthday. While still subdue and minimalistic in style, they were at least fancier than anything else she had in her pile of clothes. She once heard people say that appearance was important but honestly it was an idea that was beyond her meagre understanding of fashion beyond looking intimidating or beautiful in order to make people think about you in a certain way apparently. She was more content with just her normal everyday look.

Plus she was certain that the Grand Elder of the Golden Devil Clan wore simple clothing as well but everybody took him seriously. When one was powerful enough, you could damn well wear whatever the hell you damn well please.

Something to ponder on when she had free time.

Still, seeing a lot of people who looked much more well-off than her was slightly discouraging. However, she also noticed that most meals that people in the Secret Realm ate were mostly roasted spirit beast meat, fruits, wild vegetables or whatever preserved rations that they brought with them into the Secret Realm. Seeing a dearth of warm decent meals in the encampment, Xiuying knew what she had to do.

Though she had come to the Secret Realm in order to find an unorthodox means of further advancing her cultivation, she was still at heart a noodle-vendor and as her father once taught her, a noodle-vendor must always be willing to offer a hungry soul a warm bowl of noodle soup.

As a noodle-vendor, she had a duty to fulfil.

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Wang Xuegang was hungry.

He'd been in the Qiguai Secret Realm for a couple of months now. Being a seventh stage qi condensation cultivator, Xuegang had done admirably well in surviving the many dangers that the Secret Realm had in store for its visitors. He had fought man-eating spirit beasts, braved the treacherous waters that hid many underwater perils beneath its surface, and even had to contend with rivals who sought to steal his prize that he had earned fair and square.

However, exploring a secret realm took its toll on a person, especially if they had been running from one big fight to another. After barely fighting off another spirit beast, Xuegang decided it would be prudent to head to the safety zone to restock on healing pills and elixir as well as trade-off some of the less valuable stuff that he had collected so far in his journey in the secret realm. Unfortunately for Xuegang, his provisions were also reaching their limits.

Spare provisions and the likes were often sold at a premium in the secret realm since very few treasures in this place could stop a person from starving to death or dying a dog's death from an improperly treated wound. Good food was often hard to come by as well. While hunting was also a viable way to keep one self fed, the meat of spirit beasts were often difficult to prepare properly without the right tools or facilities, usually resulting in terrible food.

Many cultivators simply try to endure the many discomforts that living off the land entailed, taking it as training their convictions and willpower. However, no matter how much they might tell themselves that this was all part of their training, being qi condensation cultivators, they are still greatly bound to their earthly desires. Eating after all is both a necessity and a pleasure for a mortal person. Though cultivators like to think of themselves as beyond mortal men, they are still bound by such pleasures.

Thus when a delicious and fragrant aroma wafted past his nose, Xuegang couldn't help but follow the scent, his stomach growling with hunger for something that wasn't bland rations. His nose led him to a corner of the trading hub area of the encampment where he found to his surprise that someone had managed to bring a food cart into the Secret Realm. Not only that, they were selling bowls of what looked like noodle soup. Tables and chairs had been set up in a large area before the food cart and almost every spot was taken by other cultivators, most of whom were happily slurping down bowls of noodles.

It was a scene Xuegang least expected to see in the Secret Realm of all places. Deciding to observe the scene a little longer, Xuegang noticed that people were paying for the food with either mortal currency, common herbs, chunks of spirit beast meat, and, from what he could tell, information about valuable gathering or hunting spots in the secret realm. The fact that there was a line of customers at least several dozen people long told Xuegang that the noodles being served at this mysterious food cart was not ordinary. If it was popular enough to gather all these cultivators, Xuegang had to try some himself.

Taking his place in the queue, Xuegang waited patiently for the line to move. Despite the number of people before him, whoever was manning the food cart was quite fast and it didn't take long before it was almost his turn to order. With only a couple more people in front of him, Xuegang could finally see the owner of this food cart. By all appearance, the person manning the food cart looked like a young woman with simple humble clothing, unlike the fineries and expensive silks that many female cultivators that he knew were obsessed with. Reaching out with his senses, Xuegang could tell that the young woman was only a third stage qi condensation expert.

Not unheard of as the Secret Realm was a place with many opportunities that can easily change around even a lowly first stage qi condensation cultivator's fortunes if they were lucky enough. Many low-level cultivators who come to the Secret Realm dream of finding a lucky opportunity though most usually fail and in many cases die in their attempt to break free from mediocrity.

Still, the girl was a strange one to open up a noodle cart in the Secret Realm when her time would be better spent exploring and foraging for rare herbs herself. Regardless of the oddness of it all though Xuegang's growling stomach made him more than happy to ignore the why and how of the girl's life choices in favour of getting a hot meal that wasn't some improvised stew or roasted meat.

"Welcome! What can I getcha?" The girl behind the counter said when Xuegang finally made his way to the front of the line. She gestured to the menu that had been attached to the side of the food cart wagon thing. Xuegang frowned as he read the menu, finding himself unfamiliar with a number of the noodle dishes on offer. There were very realistic pictures of the menu items with clear prices next to them in mundane currency going from a few silver coins for the cheapest and relatively simple noodle soup to a handful of gold coins for a luxuriously decadent "ramen" that was garnished with all kinds of expensive ingredients including gold leaves. However, this confused Xuegang since he had seen several customers pay the girl with uncommon spirit herbs and even spirit stones before.

Then he saw the item at the bottom of the menu - the "Thousand-year Heavenly Noodle Soup" which claimed that it could temporarily boost a person's combat ability by several small realms for at least half a day. If it really could do as it was advertised, then it was essentially the same as a powerful pill or elixir. Not only would such a meal enable a person to fight significantly above their level, but they would also make exploring and hunting far more efficient.

However, the price of pills and elixirs that did the same thing were usually quite expensive and not something easily obtained. However, when his eyes turned to where the price was, he saw the words "Pay what you think it's worth. Limited stock per day". Xuegang's eyes widened in shock as he sensed a great bargain here. The spirit stones and herbs, and even just the information that had been used to pay the girl were nowhere near what such a potent noodle soup was worth. This girl was surely either a fool to sell such a meal at cutthroat prices. It also suggested that the meal in question might not be as amazing as it sounded.

"Hmmm, tell me about the Thousand-Year Heavenly Noodle Soup." Xuegang requested, his suspicion aroused and his heart wary. Surely it had to be some kind of fake. The girl smiled and moved aside to show off a rather large pot with an elaborate design on it. However, Xuegang could immediately tell that the pot was some kind of treasure and not only that he could smell an incredible rich aroma coming out from it. The smell immediately stimulated his appetite even more and his mouth suddenly filled up with drool.

"This here is the Thousand-Year Noodle Pot! It can turn even a whole bunch of normal ingredients into the magical and powerful Thousand-Year Noodle Soup." The girl explained, lifting up the lid of the pot. As soon as the lid came off, something that could be described as a ghostly glow of ever-shifting colours, swaying left and right, emanated from the pot. The rich smell intensified and Xuegang could no longer stop his saliva from flooding his mouth. He could hear the customers behind getting restless as they took in the smell and light show as well. "I guarantee you that it works just as advertised. As long as you eat it fresh out from the pot, it'll power you up till you're practically unbeatable within your great realm!"

"Gulp", Seeing the mystical glowing effect coming out from the noodle soup as well as that unbelievably rich aroma that was making his stomach roar in hunger, Xuegang swallow his drool and threw away his remaining hesitation. "One bowl of Thousand-Year Heavenly Noodle please!"

"Okay. How much are you willing to pay?" The girl asked and Xuegang grimaced as he recalled what he had on him. Taking a moment to take stock of his belongings, Xuegang mentally swore as he remembered that he had lost his coin pouch to a metal-eating spirit beast. He'd already traded off his less valuable herbs, leaving him with stuff that he couldn't possibly lose. He had some spirit stones left but those were for emergencies. Xuegang couldn't help but groan. He didn't even have any money for the cheapest noodles, let alone those Heavenly Noodles!

"Um...you accept information, right?" Xuegang hesitantly asked, recalling how other customers had given information as payments before.

"Uh-huh. If it's bogus though, I'm putting you on the blacklist for life and banning you from eating my noodles ever again." The girl cheerfully answered. Xuegang let out a sigh of relief before frowning. Being blacklisted and banned was too soft of a punishment for fraudulent payment. "I'll also cut your head off if I ever meet you again."

"Oh, um well...Alright then." Xuegang took a few moments to wrack his brain for any useful information about the Secret Realm that the girl might be able to use. He then recalled a half-hidden hut in the midst of a spirit beast nest that looked like it had yet to be disturbed by anyone. He hadn't been able to investigate it since he'd been injured earlier by an enemy cultivator so he was forced to give up on it. Surely giving the girl the location of this hut would work fine as payment.

After giving the noodle cart girl the information which she accepted happily, Xuegang watched in anticipation as the girl prepared a bowl of the thousand-year heavenly noodles and placed it on a tray before handing it over to him. A set of chopsticks and spoon along with several napkins were placed next to the bowl of noodles. Xuegang did everything he could to keep his drool from flooding out from his mouth as he carefully took the tray and headed over to a free spot in the dining area.

Luck was with Xuegang as he found a free spot in the corner of the dining area with no-one else nearby, just him alone and a bowl of heavenly noodles. While Xuegang was still somewhat sceptical about the noodles' supposed power to temporarily raise his combat ability several small realms higher, his hunger had gotten the better of his judgement and the noodle soup did smell absolutely delicious. If the noodles did turn out to be a fraud and tasted terrible, he would go and cripple the girl for her insolence and deception. Taking a look at his bowl of noodles, Xuegang frowned.

He could only see noodles in the bowl. Where was the soup?

It took a few moments for him to realise that there was in fact soup in the bowl. It was just so clear that it was invisible to the naked eye. And yet the smell was still there and a small light show shimmered above the bowl. Truly mysterious. Alright, maybe Xuegang won't cripple the girl. Picking up the spoon and chopsticks, Xuegang hesitated for a moment. Was it possible that this bowl of noodle soup might be poisoned?

Xuegang shook his head, pushing away those paranoid thoughts. Impossible, he had seen all the customers happily eating the girl's noodles and they were still fine. He'd never met the girl before and his clan had no beef with the Golden Devil clan so she would have no reason to specifically target him. Taking a deep breath, Xuegang finally took the plunge and slurped up a mouthful of heavenly noodle soup.

The moment he tasted it, Xuegang couldn't help but bite into the soup and noodles. The taste was rich, so incredibly rich that he had thought for a moment that he had put a minced meat steak into his mouth. An innumerable number of savoury flavours of all kinds danced upon Xuegang tongue yet it was so easy to eat and swallow. It was like thick layers of deliciousness that had been accumulating since ancient times were gradually coming undone and spreading throughout his mouth.

No, not just his mouth. It was as though his entire body was submerged in a bottomless ocean of deliciousness. And as he bathed in this endless pool of ancient yet refreshing flavour, a mysterious energy that had been hidden within this noodle soup was gradually permeating throughout his entire body. It was like being caressed by the power of the heavens. Yes, this was surely the noodle soup of the heavens.

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"Hey Wang, what the hell up with that guy? He's just drooling and staring out into space with a really bawdy grin."

"You mean that guy, Tong? Ah! He's eating those Thousand-Year Heavenly Noodles! They're so delicious that you can't help but grin like silly."

"Oh man, I wanna taste those Heavenly Noodles as well! I hear they also boost your speed and strength by several folds as well."

"Fat chance of that. We barely have enough reagents for entrance fees and for our pills."

"Yeah and we got really lucky with those as well. No information on possible hidden secret gardens and the likes from us."

"Still, that girl is really weird for setting up a noodle cart here, even if she is selling those Heavenly Noodles of hers."

"Eh, who cares as long as it's good. Have you eaten her beef pho? I've never had noodles as good as those in my entire life before!"

"How about that Tonkotsu noodle soup? Absolutely delicious!"

"You wanna get another bowl?"

"You bet!"

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As Xiuying continued to sell her noodles, she garnered both goodwill and interest from various parties. Her Heavenly Noodle Soup was by far one of the hottest items available in the encampment. Not only were they more effective and cheaper than most pills and elixirs that were normally available to qi condensation cultivators, there were no adverse side effects and, even better, they tasted absolutely delicious.

Even though only a few people were able to buy her Heavenly Noodle Soup, many were more than content with her more common noodle dishes. Indeed, it didn't take long for people to come early in the morning to line up to buy multiple servings of different kinds of noodle dishes for breakfast, lunch, and dinner. Even those who had animosity towards the Golden Devil Clan were charmed by Xiuying's noodles.

However, not everyone was pleased by Xiuying's presence and her noodle dishes. In the shadows, malicious intent was slowly making its way towards Xiuying Ten Jiang. Soon, she would meet for the very first time in her life, those who despised noodles.

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Omake Bonus: Life Saving Treasure
 
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Wow, the Zalgo text is completely messing up the page. As in, the actual page is going weird. Lines of texts are appearing where they shouldn't be, and it's just generally fucked and the best/only way to deal with it is to refresh the page multiple times and hope that that fixes it.

@BadAtScreenNames your post is making the other posts under yours unreadable. Can you please remove all the Zalgo text? It's literally wrecking the other posts under yours! Just... use red bold text or something please.

God damnit. I thought that didn't happen on XenForo anymore. Yeah, I'll edit it out. Give me a few minutes, need to eat first.
 
Year 141 - The Battle at Perepolis
Nicara swore.

"Idiot! Bumbling fool of a mortal! What did you think you were doing, touching that rune?"

Her hands itched to slap the woman's face, but she knew the mortal wouldn't survive. A slight blonde-haired slip of a girl cowering in fear of her just made her feel bad. Still, the mortals had been told. No going near the walls, no touching any runes on the walls. Stay within the protective confines of the walls and maybe they'd be able to stop the fucking Blood Path eating them all.

She stared the girl in the eye again. How old could the mortal be? Forty? Fifty? She saw the lines of age on the girl's face, and some grey in her hair. A stripling, really.

She sighed.

"Get back in the village. If I see you within ten paces of the walls again I'll have you strapped, bare-bottomed in front of the entire city. Understood?"

"Yes, mighty lord."

Nicara shook her head. The Burnished Crags had been the immediate battleground. The Clan had deployed nearly a hundred and twenty thousand Qi Condensation Disciples to the Crags, knowing it'd be the most important battleground. The north was far better defended - and more difficult for the Cannibals to assault. Not to mention the constant flow of trade from other powers to the Oasis meant Old Cannibal was rightly concerned about killing someone important and bringing vengeance down upon his head.

The opening thrust of the war had gone more-or-less as expected.

A massive strike into the Burnished Crags and Xin Kingdom. She hadn't heard how the latter was doing. Of course, there were fewer weakspots in the Xin Kingdom, and less cities full of mortals to be cracked open and eaten.

She had been deployed to help fill out Jin Muyi's ranks, on loan from the 303rd. She had been delayed. Nothing improper, but hunting down a bandit in the same realm - Late Foundation Establishment - was no small feat. A mere two months delay usually wouldn't mean much, and the kill would protect thousands of people in the north while she went south.

On the way south, though, she'd stopped over at Perepolis. A minor city of thirty thousand or so, and she was there with perhaps a thousand cultivators. A day later eight thousand Cannibals had settled in for a siege - they'd ravaged the outer city and killed five or six thousand mortals before she'd been able to organise a proper evacuation into the city proper. They'd come in like lightning, and she'd lost almost fifty of her disciples just retreating into the core of the city.

She smoothed over the map of the city she'd procured, and looked down at her position.

Displeased, she grunted.

"Legionnaire Flavia. Ever find out who the hell was meant to be in charge of Perepolis?"

The larger woman looked over at her with a forced smile.

Honestly, she appreciated Flavia. Nicara stood over six foot, and while she didn't regret fusing Giant Monkey Muscle Scorpion venom into her body, it did make her stand out rather dramatically. Flavia was three inches taller, and while she was willowy and alluring, at least everyone stared at Flavia first. It was nice to have to shout to be the centre of attention.

"Prefect... I apologise, but..."

Even Flavia's voice was pretty! Honestly, she'd never make it into Foundation Establishment that way. If you weren't willing to make sacrifices, you usually didn't make it very far.

She had a choice, when it came to serving. Both Callista's new Legion and Muyi's had needed some extra staff. She hadn't hesitated before choosing Muyi. Oh, the Callista girl - woman, she corrected herself, as anyone who could likely kill you in a single blow was a woman - was powerful, but she was too perfect. Immense talent, best in a century, yes, yes. The weird tree-man understood, though. Sometimes you weren't good enough, so you sacrificed parts of yourself and sliced and cut and sewed until you were in the shape of something that was. Maybe that meant becoming a horrifying tree monster, or maybe it meant drilling scorpion venom into your bones during your tribulation to make your body impossibly tough. She hadn't realised that she'd look like some grotesque parody of a bodybuilder until afterwards. Well, no matter. No matter that pretty women like Flavia no longer looked at her with any sort of desire, she had the power to change things. To fight and win against the Cannibals here. If she did, it'll all be worth it.

The other woman's still hadn't spoken.

"Out with it, Legionnaire."

'You were, Prefect."

Ah.

She shook her head.

"Fuck."

Flavia remained silent.

"Well, I'll pay for it one way or another. I made a choice and it killed some people. Saved some others. Still, right now we're needing to save the rest, eh?"

She elbowed Flavia in the ribs.

Flavia winced, and stepped back.

Ah, right. Legionnaires who had so little Bronze Blood... Nicara sighed.

"Did I hurt you, Legionnaire?"

Flavia shook her head.

"Just some bruises, Legate. Apologies, I didn't mean-"

"Don't apologise, soldier. My mistake. Now, we're surrounded, outnumbered eight to one. How are the Artillery Arrays holding up?"

The Artillery Arrays were the work of some artificer in the north. They weren't very impressive as arrays went, all things considered. However, they could link into other targeting arrays and fire a decent distance at enemies. It was why the Cannibals hadn't simply moved on from Perepolis. Oh, they'd tried, but every time they had tried to disengage Flavia had taken her eight Foundation Establishment Centurions, run out, and killed a few hundred of them with Array support. As soon the Cannibals turned around to attack them, she used the Arrays to cover her retreat, and slipped back into the city.

A better-disciplined force would've left a covering force to maintain the siege and headed further in, but she suspected none of the Cannibals were willing to simply sit and weather artillery fire when they could be slaughtering mortals, and none of them were willing to head further into Clan territory without a rearguard.

Not for the first time, she thanked the Imperator that the power and growth of the Cannibals was in no way matched by their ability to work together.

A loud horn rang out.

"To arms! To arms!"

Nicara sped up, the world seemingly slowing to a crawl as she moved at lightning speed, leaping from house to roof to wall in fragments of a second.

Legionnaires tended to think that Foundation Establishment Experts moved at maximum speed all the time, but the energy costs weren't small. Better to live in normal time and move at speed only when desperately needed.

She leapt onto the wall, to be met by two snarling Blood Path Cannibals, five dead Legionnaires at their feet atop the walls.

The first was a tiny man, standing only half her height. He had two wooden legs, and arms far too large for him sewn onto his body. The legs were festooned with runes, and his eyes spun madly, his sight clearly coming from elsewhere.

The second was a gorgeous woman, bedecked in red. Nicara pointedly tried not to notice her breasts, and then her curves, and- who wore a dress into battle? Was she playing to some absurd archetype for morale's sake?

While that thought echoed in her skull, she shot out a single fist, and found the man matched it with a single arm-blow, almost casually.

He spoke.

"I am Xie Paulos, slut. You will be honoured to die by my hand."

She cursed, and flung a kick at the woman in red. Her leg was caught suddenly, and Nicara winced. Two in the Great Circle, almost certainly. They both grabbed onto her, Paulos wrestling her in a few swift motions so she was restrained, the woman standing in front of her, a large knife with blood-red veins running along it. Nicara was restrained, and ready for some sort of Blood Path implement to be used to kill her.

Nicara grinned. Just where she wanted them.

She whistled, and bronze Hoplites came into being from nowhere, six of them surrounding the Cannibal duo.

The next part... she hated this part.

She roared, her muscles bulging, her hair striped with gold amidst the black, hair growing on her body until she was covered with a pelt of ape fur. From her buttocks emerged a massive scorpion stinger, nearly half her height. The tail lashed out, nearly stabbing the woman in red.

"You think you could take Xie Konstantia by surprise, you-"

With a loud hurk from her mouth, a Hoplite spear emerged from the woman in red's front. Nicara's tail lashed again, stinger slamming into the woman's eye. Damn, but that was a shame. Why did all the cutest ones have to be crazy Blood Path monsters?

Paulos had her restrained, true, but the balance of strength had drastically changed. With a simple blow, he went falling back. He threw some... salt? That couldn't be right, Nicara thought. It flashed for a moment, and Paulos reappeared a few hundred metres away, safe within the Cannibal lines.

Hoplites stood up on the wall in many places, spears shimmering and Foundation experts running about below, killing any Blood Path disciples who happened to get inside the walls. The Cannibals had probably lost three or four hundred with this latest assault. Scanning over her own troops... probably less than ten. With the benefit of walls, arrays, and superior co-ordination, only an overwhelming assault that broke those factors was likely to kill an appreciable number of her troops.

If they were willing to press the assault while the Clan were weak... she laughed, and picking up a spear, hurled it at Paulos. It missed, impaling a nearby Cannibal.

No, it was rare that Cannibals were courageous enough to do that. If they did, they'd inflict some casualties. If the Cannibals would simply disregard their own lives and go over the breach as one, well... that'd be the end. She chuckled. Lucky that was unlikely.

She descended the walls, feeling the hair continue to grow.

Twenty minutes later she reunited with Flavia.

"Legionnaire. Bring me a mirror and the soulsteel razor."

"Why?"

Nicara cursed.

"You think this monkey hair comes off on its own? No, I'm in for a long night of shaving. That, or fleas, and trust me when I say I've been on enough campaigns to know what I prefer."

Flavia schooled her expression well, but Nicara knew that there was definitely no attraction there now. Ah, well. Maybe she'd get a chance to banter some with the next pretty Cannibal she met before she killed her.
 
She hadn't hesitated before choosing Muyi. Oh, the Callista girl - woman, she corrected herself, as anyone who could likely kill you in a single blow was a woman - was powerful, but she was too perfect. Immense talent, best in a century, yes, yes. The weird tree-man understood, though. Sometimes you weren't good enough, so you sacrificed parts of yourself and sliced and cut and sewed until you were in the shape of something that was. Maybe that meant becoming a horrifying tree monster, or maybe it meant drilling scorpion venom into your bones during your tribulation to make your body impossibly tough.
Oh heyo! I never thought of it that way!

Muyi being the representation of the average cultivator who muscles through via sacrificing parts of himself for greater power is neat! The Path of the Untalented!
 
What kills me about all of this is all these normal ass houses and then smack dab in the center for the city BEETLE CHARIOT STADIUM.
Gotta have your proper entertainment after all.

Nice to see the Hoplites in action. One quick stab, none of that bantering nonsense. Seems like someone trusted in their crazy blood path body instead of good steel bronze like a sensible cultivator. Their names are interestingly GD influenced however, it does make me wonder if we could encounter some Blood Path mockery of the Legions. Child Corpse Gulper has had a bunch of time to screw around, after all.



My omake stuff is taking longer than usual so I'll say it here in case I don't finish in the next few days. Paulus is doing Growling Dervishes.
 
Looks like the war is going as expected so far? Their numbers aren't enough, emplacements are working, and they'll need brute power to smash through. No trump card out yet.
 
Zeno Angelus 9 - The Siege of Three Frog City 3

Meditation.

Others chose to be still and seem stagnant to their surroundings. I chose to meditate through slow exercises. It calms my frayed nerves more, especially with that niggling feeling of doom at my back. The Blood Cannibals are but one reason for that particular sensation. Since I do not wish to be ruled by doom, I meditate to learn of my worries and lay them to rest, as all things eventually will.

It was an exercise every Cultivator endured to perfect their path on this shell of a world. Certainly, stories told of people in other seas advancing through the early stages as easy as breathing. That doesn´t mean our endeavours are for nothing. Fewer in the Third Sea than in other seas may reach the higher stages -if the old texts are to tbe believed- but the technical excellence we reach again and again is of a different sort. My clans continual survival in the hundred years trials stand testament that fact.

In reflection to that, even the Blood Cannibals as our long-suffering enemy stand to be at least partly an argument for everyones excellency. How can one improve without a sufficient challenge, after all? They are the ones who test our defences at every opportunity and according to the grapevine, even Old God, Imperator protect him, was tested by their nascent soul 'Child Corpse Gulper'. What a terrible and pretentious name. Might as well call himself 'Bad horrible Evil Guy' for all the difference it makes. Sadly, his horrible naming sense does not impede his combat prowess and only Old God can hope to match him. So he is not the one thing I am worried about, merely one of their immediate catalysts. I am too small to worry him after all.

As I draw another liquid black strand of Darkness qi and ready my stance for the next cycle, I can´t help but ask myself; what exactly makes the Cannibal Lords such a difficult prospect for all of us?

On the greater strategic site, the cannibal Horde is one of the few honest enemies in this sea. Oh, I and my mother can buy supplies for the cleaning of our swords from the crafter of their seven divine saber sect all right. It´s nice for them to do that, considering the relative unknown we are inside the clan. There is just always the voices behind our backs and in the more obviously horrible situations treacherous actions by the so-called righteous sects. They proclaim their quest of prosperity for all through working together against the demons conspiring against the heavens everyhwere! Even our gardner at home knows about this and he is deaf. That is my problem with them, though. The same deaf person would not work directly for the cultivators, because cultivators are somehow inherently better than mortals. They then ignore in the same breath how they all started out as mortals and would give the aforementioned mortal a position, which is conveniently in the way of demons. That´s just what I gleaned from reports my mother allowed me to read.

No my worry lies closer to home, at least what I know it as. We work best in a unit, making our enemies tremble in fear as we advance on their position. Considering all I learned from Appendix -to cut and weave through my enemies- and how to seek out information about the enemy, I must admit to not fitting the mold our enemy casts us in. I can function in a unit if need be, but even Muyi accepted my irregularity decades ago and advised me with that in mind.

With that in mind, for once in my seemingly endless cycles of meditation, I cut and the past flows away from my dreaming eye. All that remains is the future. What shall I do?

I have Appendix, their book to which I am bound and their teachings. That is the personal part that sets me apart. On the other hand, thanks to Alexandrias and I´s effort to feed and train the sullen forces in the past years, we know the loyalty of the largely star-struck forces in this City belong to my divination platoon. Most of the Foundations Establishment cultivators make it a point to to only observe their duty and fewer care enough to investigate any improvements in the batterments. It´s for the good of the clan after all and why, if the divination platoon wants to care for the trencehs and the artillery arrays as well. Sure, why not? The best response we got was a leisure "Knock yourself out." by an esteemed superior of mine drinking the day away.

The reason my esteemed superiors give me for lacking to fill out the routine checks they should have done are many, but boil down to the most hazardous of all vices, lazyness. Why cultivators -who are known for their hard work- are disturbingly lazy, I vexingly don´t know, but with time we shall find out.

Thankfully Phaidron, the busy-nice-bee, that he is noticed the 'error' in the paperwork and made enough ruckus up the grapevine that someone, being me, as the new guy in the city, was the one ordained to perform due diligence. Oh, there were one or two cases of misplaced cultivation sources, but nothing that couldn´t be explained as some clerical error. That doesn´t worry me and according to Appendix, even the highest of cultivators can make mistakes. The mistakes on my level should therefore be technically proportional.

Appendix is positively ancient and isn´t exactly what one would call great at explaining the intricacies of logistics and their pitfalls in governourship of any settlement so I searched for the book every commanding officer relies on to teach their minions. Bless the imperator, because an Appendix (not a magical origami bunny) can be found in every training manual so everyone can know what to look out for in your campaign logistics. This Appendix includes normative data like charts and spreadsheets with legends to denote everything normal and irregular.

This may not be a field campaign, but by the imperator did it open my eyes to the errors in the paperwork. As it turns out, the Gate Guard Captain Zhan hunts the wildlife in the area under the direct supervision of the Commander. That in itself is not a problem. No one wants to give Blood Cannibals any walking emergency reserves, after all, especially before a big invasion. The irregularity comes afterwards. The Gate Guard Zhan is selling the hides, meat and other things one gains through the correct butchering to someone outside the City. Concerningly, he gets almost novalue out of them.

What makes it even worse, when I report strange findings of warehouses full of processed meat and their strange qi emanations to my immediate superior, all I get is a glassy eyes look and the distinct order to not bother with it. The consequences are only implied, of course. Even direct meetings of my worries with the Commander of the entire city garrison get no better response. The Commander seems to almost relish in my worries. but I am sure that is only my worries taking over. No Commander of the legion would be caught dead working for the enemy, surely?!

Then there is the incident with the girl and her array painted, strangely enough, on her calf. A quick background check through local divination and just plain sneaking where my platoon needs to go,we could absolve the family of any Blood Cannibal connections three generations back. By the imperator, the mothers only slight on her honour was the loudness which she proclaimed her relationship with the Commander. Admittedly, getting that as a written report from our most recent rookie as his training exercise was funny, but sadly not key point we need to unravel this mystery.

So my worries summarized. Who traffics the remains of thousands of of dead animals in the region and why do all my investigations stall at the commander?

*Breath out*

With the same motion I cut again and every detail that makes myself reappears before my dreaming eye. Shortly afterwards, my physical eyes open and I can feel my body coaleszing back into tangibility. The heavens may grumble at the edge of my senses about the profanity of using my own dreams to meditate and even cultivate sometimes, but the heavens are in the end fair. In the end I practice techniques previous cultivators were not struck down for after all, even if the previous user was a distant ancestor of mine. No matter, the heavens can talk to me about their worries at any time and if they don´t take their chances I can´t help them.

Now, what should I do now? Paperwork for the day is done and meditations even helped me sort out my worries.

"Boss?" Appendix called from behind the `seperator`, more of a rag really.

"Yes, Appendix what do you need?"

"Well, you were in thought so much in the last few days and we noticed your problems and maaybe found a way we can help. That sounds foreboding.

"Ok, come in. Let´s talk. There is no sense in talking over the threshold."

"Oh, right." and with that said the most magical origami slips under the heaviest rag in the city into my bedroom/meditation chamber.

"Well, I noticed you finally managed to cut your connection to the past. That´s great!" with that proclamation Appendix bounced up and down the room in joy and halted in the same breath.

"You noticed it too, didn´t you? How the world naturally repaired itself shortly afterwards?" Was that unnatural in some way?

"I thought teh cut clearing a path only for a short time was the point, was it not? I cut, a channel in a subdimension you call the the "place-where-everyone-dreams" opens up, my cut opens a path towards my baldes edge and shortly afterwards the path collapses." What is her point

"The point, silly, is that the heavens doesn´t like needing to observe you going through multiple subdimensions in quick succession regularly."

"But every technique acts in some way the heavens don´t like."

"True and the only reason I mention it is because of the inventor. It might one day think you too much effort, if you use it too much." The Heavens having a bias, who could have guessed. Wow.

"Soo unexpected, thank you for warning me." Once more the saying rings true, 'If you want unite a legion, bitch about the heavens and their alleged fairness, especially their weather!'

"I know, I know not what anyone of the clan really needs learn, but in the future be careful when opening the path. You might accidentally communicate with the one on the other end of your blades edge, ok?" the worry practically seeps out of her voice.

"Yeah, yeah not like I can´t afford anything less." Any further discussion about the overglorified weatherphenomena is sadly interrupted by a fast approaching Phaidron, eager to tell me about some apocalyptically-clerical error he has found, again.

"Captain Fleetfeet, please excuse my interruptions." Phaidron, even formal and to the point when worried. How reliable.

"You are excused. What´s the problem."

"Well, Sir. We have a sudden visitor demanding to see you."

"Oh." It seems my clear schedule just got something new added to fill it.

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@Mochinator , @BungieONI

Another Omake for the Omake throne on turn 8.
Words: ca. 1900
Time-to-write: 4h (That is short in my case.)

In the future there will be a collab between the Good Seeds Zeno Angelus and Maria. This should serve as a way for them to interact. @BadAtScreenNames What do you think?
 
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The next part... she hated this part.

She roared, her muscles bulging, her hair striped with gold amidst the black, hair growing on her body until she was covered with a pelt of ape fur. From her buttocks emerged a massive scorpion stinger, nearly half her height. The tail lashed out, nearly stabbing the woman in red.

"You think you could take Xie Konstantia by surprise, you-"

With a loud hurk from her mouth, a Hoplite spear emerged from the woman in red's front. Nicara's tail lashed again, stinger slamming into the woman's eye. Damn, but that was a shame. Why did all the cutest ones have to be crazy Blood Path monsters?

Paulos had her restrained, true, but the balance of strength had drastically changed. With a simple blow, he went falling back. He threw some... salt? That couldn't be right, Nicara thought. It flashed for a moment, and Paulos reappeared a few hundred metres away, safe within the Cannibal lines.
So about how much Impact is that transformation worth, if it could elevate a Late Foundation to match two Great Circles enough for this kind of result?

Asking for a friend
 
Yan 9- the siege of three frog city
Yan- the sige of three frog city (1,151 words)

It was early in the morning when Yan heard the sound of fighting and the breaking of stone, in an instant he dropped his breakfast, grabbed his sword and exited his inn to the streets of three frog city.

It was not hard to find what happened -as the inn Yan resided in was close to the wall- fighting, all across the wall cultivators were fighting and from the sounds off it wining.

Except in one place, where a big hole was torn in the wall, from which the sounds of pitch combat and the signs of combat formation came.

The street around Yan was in chaos, as the mortal militia started rallying and the rest of the mortals started fleeing to the protection of the inner wards in the center of the town.

The chaos became even more chaotic with the addition of four "starved ones" –demonic cultivators freshly risen and half starved to death-, Yan was upon them in an instant, sword flashing to decapitate one while his arm smashed the face of another, both dying instantly.

Wasting no time Yan kicked the third into a group of militia –whom begin laying into the starved one after some hesitation- and decapitated the forth.

With the four "starved ones" slain, Yan searched his surroundings once more and when he didn't spot any more immediate enemies he let out a high pitched whistle.

Within moments quillstreem burst through the attached barn in which he rested and trotted to Yan, he mounted quilstreem.

"To the breach in the wall and stay close to the ground" and with a quick order they were off.

Yan and quilstreem thundered down the streets towered the breach in wall, any "starved one" in their way was quickly slain.

On their way Yan spotted a fire in one of the houses along the streets –probably caused by fleeing mortals – that threatened to spill over to the other houses and he recalcitrantly continued on –ignoring the fire – for he knew it was the militias job to handle.

The fires burned ever higher, the effort to put them out abounded and forgotten by the militia who's by now are either dead or dying.

And through the flames and the scream of a young child, of no more the sixteen summers ran like the devils themselves were on his tale…

As they most assuredly were.


A little later Yan and quillstreem came upon a feeding, a "starved one" managed to grab a mortal and was now feasting on their flesh and bones.

Yan quickly dispatched of the "starved one" –who was so distracted by his meal that he didn't even notice Yan until his head was off his shoulders- before moving on but he didn't touch the body of the mortal as he knew that burning and burying the dead after had been won.

As the child ran through the fire he saw and heard many terrible things, such as the scrams of man being burned alive but the worse he heard was the crunching of flesh and bones sometimes he even heard the screams of those who were unlucky enough to stay alive as they were eaten.

As Yan and quillstreem crossed the street before reaching the breach in the wall they saw a most gruesome sight, two dead mortals were laying atop a child –most likely theirs- in what was a futile attempt to him from the "starved one" that came upon them, a "staved one that even now was reaching towards the child.

With Qi burning in his veins Yan lunged forward and in one sword strike split the "starved one" open straight in the middle.

But he was too late, the child was already dying from a wound caused by the "starved one" and while Yan could save the child it would cost both in Qi and in time, both resources Yan can't afford to lose, he may not be the most powerful of his peers able to strike across the great realms but he is old and experienced.

And his power and experience may be just the thing that will tip the balance enough for them to run off the cannibals or buy enough time for reinforcements to arrive and to sacrifice that just to save one mortal child where if the line was to fall all of the mortal of three frog city would be slain and eaten.

Hearing the fighting at the breach getting fiercer Yan mad his choice and steeled his heart as he turned away from the dying child and continued to make his way to the breach with haste.

And as he reached out to his well of stolen luck he could hope that he would be enough to turn the tides.

It was going to be a hot summer day when the cannibals arrived, their arrival was sudden and unexpected, one moment Yan and his family – his two parents and older sister- sat around their table eating breakfast, the next a man wearing leather armor and wilding an axe busted through a wall of their home into the dining room.

Yan sister was the first to die, her neck broken in an instant and her body crumbling to the floor, his mother was next, the man's axe finding porches in her head.

In the time it took the man to kill two members of Yan family his father shouted at him to run and Yan obeyed but he couldn't help but be curious as to what was happening behind him and so he looked back as he ran away.

By the time Yan looked back his father has retrieved a small spear and the man had retrieved his axe and facing Yan father, they charged at each other and when Yan could see strange energy gathering around his father and when the men and his father met, Yan watched his father die but not without causing a grievous wound on his opponent and crippling him.

Yan had not understood at the time how impossible such a feat was, for the man was in the 10th​ havenstage of the Qi condensation great realm but looking back at his memories he could identify the strange energy that was surrounding his father, for it was the same energy he used hundreds of times before, stolen luck.

And so Yan ran through the flames and the scream of dying man, his escape bought with the blood of his father until he reached an old hideout of his were he first touched upon his ability to steal luck –from somewhere- actively.

And when he went out of his hideout to the smoldering remains of his village, of which its five hundred mortal's residents he was the only survivor he could not help but cry at his helplessness and some days later he a cultivator in the dessert and began his path of cultivation.


Writing this part was weird I started the first 200 or so words at home then continued the next 400 or so while in the middle of boot camp and finished the rest today a day after I retuned but even so I'm very proud of this part, I think it is the best thing that I ever written (not that it's a big bar to clear).

As to the "starved ones" I imagine them as the blood path equivalent of a mortal militia just used for offence rather than defense as it is the blood path.
 
Rina Callista 28 - Price of Success
Rina Callista
Price of Success
Rina Callista may have underestimated the price of victory somewhat.

There were--of course--the usual platitudes and celebrations that went on when a promising scion of the Clan rose from the masses of Qi Condensation and became a true expert in the eyes of the Virtuous Flipper Region. There was the instruction on those secrets of the Clan that could not be spoken of to those who would merely stand as soldiery--after all, while the effect of knowing the true name and ranks of the council and Clan itself was a minor thing, it was a genuine thing. Apparently by claiming the role of the Devil, it mitigates the impact of the Clan's Karma on the next generation.

Claiming yourselves to be the Best Men however, was hubris. Necessary hubris of course, given the Clan's refusal to take the easy paths to power, it was necessary instead to grant a unifying philosophy and arrogance to justify the its suffering. But still, hubris.

Once all of those settled down however, the question of what to do with Rina came up. For she had become mighty in her own hubris. The council of her own household were incapable of going five exchanges with her even if she reined in her [Halo], the sheer weight and mass secured within her Cultivation Base gave her strength and solidity that could normally only be found in those who had newly settled into the Realm of Core Formation. Yet once the Legates could be spared to test her, the limitations of her state also became clear.

Her Pillar was of unparalleled strength, able to support the entirety of the colossal Qi Sea she had accumulated over her extended time in Qi Condensation--but it was still a Pillar, it generated no Qi in and of itself--and for all that her physical speed could keep pace with the least among Core Formation, that quickness of body was not matched by speed of perception and thought. She could compensate somewhat with drill and practice, but if she sought to challenge up a Great Realm, it was necessary to resolve the battle before her inability to store great quantities of Qi proved decisive.

To even try for that, her only tool was the [Halo of the World-Lord], the power she had gained from the Five Element Tribulation. A phantasmal projection of her Pillar, it forced tremendous amounts of Qi from the cracks in her Pillar--suffusing the area around with power stained with her own Truth, the weight of disregard and expectation slamming down on those who drew her ire. The effect upon her peers was tyrannical--none beneath Core Formation could withstand the pressure, forced to their knees unable to do much more than endure the [Weight of the World]. Upon those of Core Formation though, the concentration of their power had benefits, casting the force of her attention across it and protecting the owner's cultivation base from the suppression of her Dao.

Usually.

The tests had shown that one with a weak Core--or one ill shaped to deflect pressure--could indeed buckle under the weight of her aura, fracturing it across the fault-lines endemic to a poorly compressed Core, and causing a great suppression in the victim's cultivation base. The effect often translated to temporarily paralysis--more than enough to close the gaps in power and allow a critical reversal to happen.

So, in theory, Rina could defeat an elder--at least in the earliest reaches of Core Formation. But it wasn't an ability that could be relied upon, each and every Core was shaped by the Dao it sought to embody. Many would easily deflect the pressure of Rina's Dao--and against such foes, she had a tenth of the endurance and half of the speed. The outcome in light of that was clear.

So, what to do with her? She was too strong at this point for her to be shuffled in as a junior Centurion in her own Legion, but she wasn't strong enough to perform the full duties of a Legate.

The Protostrator carefully mulled over the information, and had seized upon a key detail of Rina's abilities. While she could not challenge most in Core Formation directly--not yet--she could serve the same tactical and operational role in major campaigns. That of a linebreaker and a disruptor, who charges into the mass of enemies to disrupt formations, counter sallies, and otherwise serve as critical force concentration. With the aid of Muqin Guo--capable of exhibiting greater capacity with Rina's advanced Cultivation--there were few enemies in Core Formation that could pursue her for long if she committed herself to fleeing--and the range of her suppression arguably exceeded the ability of a Core Formation Elder to deal mass destruction in an assault mission.

Rina could, in fact, operate as a Legate--it simply required an alteration in tactics.

She would be awarded a detachment of new recruits, a group of amicable Centurions to serve as officers, and deployed to a second line training camp to familiarize herself with the new Legion's forces while devising their operational doctrine.

Was this arrangement a matter of foresight on the part of the Protostrator? Good Fortune? Or perhaps the Battle Blood Cannibal Sect had heard that the Golden Child of their hated rivals was isolated and raising a Legion in an area that was in reach, and sought her head to break the Clan's will?

Regardless, when Three Frog City found itself under siege in the early days of the campaign, Rina Callista was there to meet the oncoming storm. The power of the first Single Pillar Foundation Establishment Expert of the Golden Devil Clan since the times of antiquity, pitted against the ravages of the Blood Path and the malice of its adherents. Bronze and Gold met Blood and Flesh, and the results would have great ramifications on the course of the war.
 
Gaius Antonius Omake 11 - Multiversal Tall Tales, Part 2
Gaius Antonius Omake #11: Multiversal Tall Tales, Part 2.

Bai Cao fiddled around with some acupuncture needles, bemoaning the poor lighting. It wasn't like he had any choice in it though, having snuck into this house's basement and all. Hopefully the owner would be away for a while longer.

"And that's #3, #7 and #12. Should be working just fine, so let's see here..."

He slapped the bandit across the cheek, and the reaction was immediate: the man started awake, screaming through his gag and thrashing about. "Calm down, calm down! I know it feels like your face is gone but it's still there." Bai Cao assured the man awkwardly.

Once his prisoner's initial attempts to break out proved futile, the man stopped moving around so violently, allowing him a chance to speak. "Look, I'm a nice guy, I'm gonna get some information out of you, and there probably won't even be permanent damage." Bai Cao assured, slowly taking the man's gag out. "You'll serve time as a servant back at the Sacred Blood Sect for your theft, of course, but you'll be provided for. So just be polite and talk to me, alright?"

"What the fuck did you do to me!?" The man yelled, prompting Bai Cao to scowl at him.

"Hey, come on, no yelling. But to answer your question, I've amplified your nerve sensitivity by more than an order of magnitude. It's a merciful technique, because it means I can interrogate you without injuring you." The doctor explained, hooking a finger through the loop of one of the bandit's earrings.

"W-wait! Don't do it, Let's talk!" the man said, as Bai Cao stretched the man's earlobe to the limit. "My name is Lin Su, one of the Red Shoe Gang's Four Heavenly Kings!"

So that's what they were called, the doctor thought, stroking his chin. To attack a Sacred Blood caravan with such speed and precision and get out with a big haul of spirit stones was no small feat. They had to be experienced. Or maybe he just drank too much the night before.

"Okay, that's great, thanks! Now, where are the Red Shoe Gang hiding out?" he asked Lin Su with a smile on his face.

"I don't know, they didn't tell me, since I was the one going after you." The bandit insisted, cringing away as far as he could move.

Bai Cao put Lin Su's gag back in and flicked one of the three acupuncture needles embedded in the meridians in the back of his neck, prompting him to sieze up and let out a muffled scream of pain. "Come on, don't be silly. I don't think you're telling the truth there." Bai Cao scolded.

"Okay, okay! There are two hideouts!" Lin Su admitted, his voice raw and torn. "There's one with the stuff and then a second one. There's two of us in each one. The other person at the second hideout relayed orders from the boss. I really don't know where the main place is, I swear!" the bearded man continued to spill the beans without hesitation now, disclosing the exact location.

"Hey, thanks for cooperating! You've been a big help. I'll try to make sure you get a light sentence." Bai Cao assured the man with an earnest nod. The bandit, for his part, didn't seem encouraged, muttering about how he'd wasted his life. The doctor didn't pay much attention, swiftly knocking his prisoner out with a strike to a pressure point and gagging him again.

"Alright, three to go!"

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It wasn't long before Bai Cao reached the place in question: the Painted Hand, a combination inn and brothel in the wealthy Silver District that the gang had rented to hide out until the heat died down. After scoping the place out from a distance for an hour, he decided to just get it over with and take care of business.

However, it seems he must have missed some detection array or hidden lookout, as before the doctor could get within 500 feet of the building, he heard someone laughing at him. "I can't believe that sect of do-gooders would send someone so stupid to steal from us. Are they short-staffed?" A woman's voice called out in mockery. Bai Cao wanted to tell her that it really isn't smart for someone in hiding to posture like that, but decided that now wasn't the time.

A mesmerizing melody rang out through the air, filling Bai Cao's head with a painful ringing. Looking up to the house's second story, he caught a glimpse of a sillhouette of a woman holding a flute. A mysterious force began to take hold of his body, first just a little bit, then more and more, attempting to crush, twist and tear apart Bai Cao's body. Straining his power to the limit, he managed to partially resist the technique, slowly walking closer to the house even as small rivulats of blood began to spurt from all over his body.

"You're strong." A voice, clear and sharp as a bell, said from above. "But how will you do against this?" With a final note, her tune came to a crescendo, and every one of the small wounds opened in his flesh was blasted open, like water rushing into every crack in a stone. Bai Cao fell to his knees and the mysterious woman laughed as she leaped out the window and ran off.

Struggling to his feet, the doctor attempted to give chase, only to be cut off as a whole group of ruffians began streaming out of the inn, brandishing a wide variety of weapons. Well, at least he wouldn't have to hunt down the small fry himself, that was good.

Bai Cao sighed in annoyance. "Damn, I really messed that one up. How far back did she see me coming?" And then he had no more time to think, as the first attacker was upon him, only to be knocked out in a single backhand punch. He smirked, reaching to tear off his tattered, bloodied shirt, only to realize he already wasn't wearing one. Nice.

"Okay then, if we're really gonna do this, come on!"

----

Sun Yimu was having a very bad day. First, that idiot Lin Su gets himself defeated, and now she has to get back to the hideout and tell the others to relocate everything. In fact, they would probably have to flee right away before more pursuers from the Sacred Blood Sect arrived. So much for letting the heat die down...

"What a fucking mess." She grumbled, slipping out of a crowded courtyard and into a small, out-of-the-way alley to take a side passage toward the hideout. At the very least, that idiot had defintiely died of bloodloss by now...

"You've really caused a lot of trouble. I didn't want to make such a ruckus." Someone said behind her.

Whirling around, Sun Yimu beheld that damnable pursuer, somehow still at it. He was covered in blood, having left a thin trail of it the whole way here, but still on his feet. "I take this to mean you've defeated all of our associates? How the hell are you so resilient?" The tunist asked bitterly, raising her flute to her lips.

This time, before her spatial distortion could take hold of him, the doctor saw through the technique, injecting his own qi into the fragile, complex whorl before it could form and blowing it apart from the inside. Fuck! Sun Yimu turned to run, only for her attacker to kick a piece of rotten fruit such that it slid right under where her foot would be, causing her to slip backwards, right into Bai Cao's fist.

"Sorry, really bad luck you had to fight me. I'm pretty good at stopping bloodloss." Bai Cao smirked, slapping a pair of manacles on the knocked-out bandit's wrists and hoisting her over his shoulder. Wrapping her in a tarp so that no one could tell what he was carrying, the physician went on his way back toward the house where he'd put Lin Su. He made it about fifty feet before stumbling and falling to one knee.

Well, that's probably not good. Blood Replenishment Pills were simple but very nice to have. Nonetheless, some of his wounds hadn't fully closed, so he was losing most of the new blood he produced. Troublesome. Bai Cao screwed up his face as he considered possible options. The Red Shoe Gang would probably relocate after they learned what had happened, so he would be back to square one there. Perhaps he ought to lay low himself somewhere. Ah, but taking care of two prisoners while keeping them from making too much noise? He had no idea how to do that. He dropped the tunist onto the ground beside him very ungracefully, then sat cross-legged with his arms folded, thinking.

"Oh dear, are you alright, good sir?" A lilting, feminine voice asked Bai Cao. He turned to see a tall woman in fine clothing peeking out of her door. "Did someone attack you and your friend? You must be in terrible pain. Please do come in, let me treat your wounds and find you a physician."

Before he could think too hard about his answer, Bai Cao found himself already crossing the threshold into the home. He was so very tired, after all. Besides, with all the attention he no doubt called to himself, the Red Foot Gang would relocate their other hideout, so he was back to square one. May as well relax.

Unceremoniously dropping the unconsious woman onto the floor to lie in a heap, the Cultivator followed after his new host with a dopey smile on his face. "I gotta say, you're a real life-saver, lady. I'm doing a job that I probably shouldn't have taken on alone and it's pretty tough." he laughed, noting in a distant corner of his mind that his vision was getting blurry.

"My my, a big strong man like you, having so much trouble? What ever could have happened?" The woman cooes, painted lips turned upwards into a beautiful smile. To Bai Cao, she seemed to practically glide across the fine wooden floor, so graceful was her step.

"I'm getting a little worried, miss." Bai Cao pouted playfully. "I think you may not have the best of intentions toward me."

The mysterious lady trailed her hand down his body, enjoying the contours of his muscles, her delicate touch raising goosebumps on his skin. "Sshhh. Sit down, relax. Let's negotiate~." She crooned, some kind of sweet-smelling vapor sending tingles throughout his body.

"I can't, it won't work, sorry." Bai Cao giggled, face flush.

"What do you mean it won't work, sweetie?" The seductress asked, sidling up even closer.

"I hit some pressure points when you started coming onto me." He sighed despondently, before siezing her shoulder in a steel-crushing grip. "I can't feel anything down there, it won't work at all for a week. So I'm just gonna kick your ass."

The poisoner had only a moment to scream before a whirlwhind of fists descended on her.

----

The bandit smashed through a window and fell to the ground in a heap of broken bones, and Bai Cao walked out the door, whistling and dusting off his hands. Sure, he was exhausted, suffering blood loss, somewhat paralyzed and so on, but hey! Mostly done, right?

"To think the Sacred Blood Sect would send someone so strong after us... I guess we made a pretty big impression, didn't we?" A voice called out from above, making Bai Cao wonder what possessed so many small-time cultivators to be so dramatic. A man stood atop a rooftop. He was unassuming at first glance, at least to those without spiritual senses, with long black hair tied into a tight braid and a sharp face, twisted into a sneer. "Very well, show me what you're capable of!"

Bai Cao obliged, leaping up to the rooftop and finding it pleasingly flat and sturdy; a nice choice of arena. "You really didn't to be honest. You guys just kinda suck." he replied earnestly, making his opponent snarl.

"You have quite a tongue, dog of the Sacred Blood! But I, Geng Jianhong, greatest of the Four Heavenly Kings, shall be victorious today!"the bandit leader continued to brag without skipping a beat.

The two combatants each took a stance, slowly circling around each other and searching for openings. The light of the setting sun cast the pair in eerie, colorful lights, and the faint whistling of the wind seemed to punctuate the rising tension.

"If I win, you have to tell me where you hid the stuff, okay? Fights can be fun but I don't like to hurt people more than I have to." Bai Cao said casually, seemingly not too concerned by the predicament.

"Haha! I like your guts! Very well, if you win I shall cooperate." Geng Jianhong agreed. "But that is a very big if. Have at you!"

----

"And then what happened?" Asked Zi Hong, stroking his beard.

"I kicked his ass." Bai Cao Answered plainly, scratching his neck and resisting the urge to pick at his stitches.

"That's it? Nothing crazy?"

"Nah, we just had a fight and after a while, I won."

"No insane techniques?"

"Nope, pretty standard stuff. I mean, even the last guy was just Seventh Heavenstage. I wasn't actually in much danger."

Silence fell over the pair for a moment, as Zi Hong tried to not show on his face the disappointment of such an anticlimax. Then, of course, he went right back to bitching.

As to be expected, Bai Cao was scolded for not doing things the right way, or something. To be honest, he barely paid attention. Something about loose cannon tactics, causing a disturbance, being too reckless and overconfident and general tomfoolery. Damn, couldn't that guy just be satisfied that he'd saved both of their asses from their Seniors?

Ah well, that's just what it's like being part of a cultivation sect, he supposed. The Sacred Blood Sect had already done a lot for him, so he would stick with them for a while longer, until he was strong enough to Seek the gates of time.

This one took way too long to finish and I don't really have an excuse for it, I just wasn't motivated to work. I found my motivation again though, and I'm working on the next one as well. I continued the comedy style of the last one, and made the whole thing kind of a farce. This guy does have some cool abilities, he just never really needed to use them.

@TehChron
 
Gaius Antonius Omake 12 - Thread of Stars
Gaius Antonius Omake #12: Thread of Stars

CW: This omake contains a surreal and potentially upsetting dream sequence. Nothing too detailed, but I thought I'd let you know.

One of Gaius' earliest memories came from when he was four years old('four and a half!' he would correct anyone who said so) and his brother Janus was just one, and the villa and surroundwing towns were struck by a dangerous heat wave. Temperatures great enough to kill mortals of a poor constitution assailed them at all hours of the day, and even the nights were far less cold than usual. He was trapped indoors, and at the hottest hours of the day, him and Janus would even be fanned by a pair of mortal servants, dressed in plain and simple robes so as to blend into the background and not call attention. The subtle, soothing scents of floral perfumes and burning incense wafted through the closed system that was the house, which would lull the brothers into a nap.

Gaius awoke from such a nap, bored out of his mind and unwilling to sleep again. He wanted someone to read a story to him, or carry him around on their shoulders. No one seemed to be around in this wing of the house, and the little boy had figured out how to open doors by himself, so he left his baby brother to his sleep and crept through the halls, looking for something to do. Reaching the side entrance, Gaius heard an entrancing melody, almost heavenly in its allure, sending a tingle down his spine. Drawn in by the hypnotic sound, he followed blindly to the door and slip it open just a crack.

Peeking outside with a curious eye, the boy caught sight of his father, Liu Fei, practicing his arts outside without a care in the world. A very tall man, with long hair, long arms, long fingers, a long face, everything about Liu Fei was elongated and willowy, but the man carried himself with an effortless grace which made him look incredibly beautiful. His calloused fingertips glided along the strings of a floating guqin with impossible ease, producing a simple but beautiful tune which seemed to split the very air apart and summon the starry night sky around his body like a veil.

Gaius' father suddenly flinched and ceased his melody, allowing the stars around him to dissipate back into daylight. He turned to his son with a stern look and approached. "Gaius, don't you remember what I told you? If you want to watch papa practice, you have to ask."

The boy looked down guiltily and shuffled his feet. "Yes papa, I'm sorry. I'm just so bored. I don't wanna take a nap." He pouted.

Liu Fei chuckled and ruffled Gaius' curly hair. "I know, but it's too dangerous to be running around in this heat. You'll get heat stroke, little guy! That's when your body gets too hot and it makes you sick, and you don't want that, right?"

Gaius was quiet for a moment, scuffing his shoes against the stone pathway. "But papa, you're out here. Won't you get your heat stroked?" He asked after a moment of contemplation.

"Papa doesn't get heat stroke because papa is a Cultivator." His father explained, picking the boy up and carrying him inside. "When you're an immortal, things like that can't hurt you, but it's very hard work."

As Liu Fei continued his good-natured lecture, Gaius quickly drifted off to sleep in his father's arms, still thinking about how beautiful that cloak of stars had been.

----

When Gaius was seven and Janus was four, Liu Fei invited a friend from his clan over to visit the Antonius family estate, and said friend brought over a strange contraption, calling it an old folk method which the Hong Xuan Clan used to test for cultivation ability, and which some still swore by. Liu Fei attempted to dissuade his friend from testing his children - the boys were still so young, after all - but by that point Gaius had already overheard and was ecstatic to prove, both to himself and his father, that he could be a great immortal. And so, the machine was brought out and prepared.

The test was surprisingly compact and simple: a bowl filled with some odd chemical compound which converted qi into matter, becoming denser the more qi was pumped in. A small scale made of brass and iron, using a set of pulleys and counter-weights to measure an object's mass. An untrained child would place their hand in the bowl, a Cultivator would pulse an exact, scientifically-measured amount of qi through their body, some percentage would be reflexively channeled into the liquid, and the change in weight would measure how much the child's body had successfully channeled, thus measuring talent.

Compared to actual, large-scale tests such as the arrays at the Dawn Fortress, old-fashioned little homemade systems like this were less accurate. While the results would certainly correlate with one's aptitude for cultivation, they were not an exact measurement, as many other factors such as mental strength, diseases, toxins and one's environment could also affect how well one cultivated in the long run. Nonetheless, such nuance was lost on the mind of an excitable young boy with so much to live up to.

The folk wisdom was as follows: a mortal without sufficient talent to cultivate at all would only produce a single gram. Someone with the bare minimum of talent needed to cultivate would produce three grams, an average, truly mediocre talent would make five. What each number meant after that was more heavily disputed, but the consensus was of course that more weight indicated greater talent. Three grams; that was the minimum. Three was bad, but it at least meant cultivation was possible. Little Gaius imagined the number '3' swirling around his head, tormenting him, jeering at him. "Just three grams! You can make three grams, can't you Gaius?" it taunted.

The curly-haired lad approached the machine with shaky, unsteady steps, clearly intimidated. His father knelt down and patted him on the shoulder encouragingly. "If you're scared, you don't have to take the test. Really, we can put the machine away and no one will be mad at you." His father said gently.

Gaius shook his head defiantly. "I gotta take it! I gotta show you that I can do it! I just... I'm scared that I'll be no good. Papa, what if I fail the test? What do I do?"

The father and son went back and forth like this for a while, with the boy terrified of what the result would be but too stubborn to abandon the test. After about twenty minutes of psyching himself up, Gaius finally stood before the contraption, and submerged his fingertips in the liquid as he was instructed. It was thicker than expected, and make his skin tingle a little bit. Without warning, Liu Fei lightly pressed one finger against the top of his son's head, and a surge of energy passed through the little boy's body, making his hair stand on end. This intense sensation passed after a moment, and Gaius removed his hand from the bowl as he was instructed.

The man and boy both observed carefully as some of the liquid at the bottom hardened into a black crust, and the scale tipped significantly. Dropping the one gram counterweights into the other side one at a time, the father counted them out for his son, totaling eleven grams before the scales were balanced again.

Gaius was elated. Eleven! What a huge number! That number was bigger than how many fingers he had! If five was average, and eleven was... a whole lot more than five, then that meant he was really good! Jumping for joy, the little boy leapt into his father's arms. "I can do it, papa, I can do it! I'm gonna be a super strong immortal like you, and we'll be together forever!" He giggled as his father spun him around once before putting him back down.

"I'm glad to see how gifted you are. I never once doubted you, son." Liu Fei said, patting the boy on the head.

"Since I can do it, teach me now. If I start now then I'll be strong already when I join the Clan." Gaius demanded, looking up at his father with pleading eyes.

Liu Fei chuckled and shook his head, wondering if perhaps he should have had these boys learning etiquette lessons by now. "You can't cultivate now, you're way too young. If you cycle lots of qi when you're too young, it might hurt you. You'll start when you're older, like everyone else." He commanded, prompting his son to pout and mumble his acceptance.

----

Gaius poured over an old scroll in the dead of night, a small candle burning at either side of him. He diligently studied the meridians of the human body and the unique properties of each one; even if he wasn't allowed to cultivate yet, he may as well start off with as much preparation as possible, so as to get ahead. The boy leaned back in his chair, using it to pop the vertebrae of his back one by one, spreading a soothing warmth through his body. He yawned, a tear creeping into one eye as he fought to stay awake.

A pair of hands clasp Gaius' shoulders, pushing him until his body made a straight line. "Don't lean back like that while sitting, a proper posture is key to one's health." His father's voice chided from behind him. "Now, what are you doing up so late?"

"I have to learn more. There's so much to know about cultivation, and I only have a few more years to get ready." Gaius explained, massaging his eyeballs with his palms.

Liu Fei hugged him from behind, his embrace full of warmth and affection. "I'm happy beyond words to have such a dutiful son. But Gaius, you know that good health and inner peace is just as important as motivation. You must work hard, but not to the point that you sabotage your body and mind." his father's smooth, kind voice chided him from over his shoulder.

Gaius made to stand up, so as to turn and look at his father, but couldn't get more than a few inches out of the chair before falling back into it. His limbs shook with effort, but all of his strength was gone. Something thick and warm oozed down the side of his neck.

The gentle, heavenly sound of Liu Fei's guqin began to play, and Gaius' breathing grew labored. Now even his throat wouldn't listen to his commands. Looking down, the boy saw the veins in his arms turn black and bulge against his skin and recoiled in terror.

"I'm so sorry." Said Liu Fei.

Twin needle-pricks, so precise he could barely feel them, pierced Gaius' left thigh. Another pair bit into his right shoulder. No, not needles, snakes!

"I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry. So sorry. Sorry, sorry, sorry." A hundred serpents proclaimed as they waylaid Gaius' body, ripping into his flesh, burrowing into his guts, crawling down his throat. All the while, those strings continued to strum, like a demonic lure, drawing him into damnation.

---

The boy's bloodshot eyes snapped open. His jaw hurt from how hard he'd been clenching his teeth, and his limbs cramped from thrashing as hard as they could despite the paralysis of sleep. He sat up, slowly regaining awareness of his surroundings. Fumbling around in his humble bedside drawer, Gaius found a matchbook and lit one, then ignited a small oil lamp atop the nightstand.

Gaius looked around. Simple, paneled walls. A creaky but reliable floor. A cot which wasn't particularly soft but which was at least cleaned once a month. A window, through which he saw only the endless expanse of the desert - the orphanage was near the edge of town, and he had the misfortune of a room which faced outwards. That's right; he was twelve, Janus was gone, and he was in Black Sands, drifting through the years. Existing, nothing more.

The boy, now sure he wouldn't be getting any more sleep tonight, crept past the rooms of other sleeping children as best his could, shivering a bit in the nighttime chill. He should have put on layers, but it was too late to go back now. He winced each time the stairs creaked beneath his feet, but no adults showed up telling him to go back to sleep, which meant he was victorious.

Gaius slipped on his sandals on and trudged out the back door into a small area designated with flagstones: the playground, or what passed for one. It could be worse, he supposed. He could have no playground at all. He could still be living in the ruins of his home. His fists clenched and shook. Craning his head back to look up at the stars, they appeared to him like an infinite number of peepholes, like a bunch of people, looking at him, laughing at him for not understanding what had happened. Those twinkling lights brought him no joy, not anymore.

"Sorry? You're sorry? You think you can just say you're sorry!?" the boy rants and raves, pacing back and forth with a mad rage in his eyes. "Why did you even say anything, why didn't you just kill me yourself? Sorry!? If you were so sorry then why? Tell me why!" Gaius' anger, his bitter venom, was directed at his father and the stars themselves in equal measure, as if he could move the heavens themselves to give him the answers he desired.

He could not.

----

Gaius was thirty-five now, and would soon depart to the Xin Kingdom, to play his tiny part in a massive war. But it wasn't yet time to depart, so today he relaxed. Or at least, he relaxed in the three and a half hours available to him, after four to sleep, fifteen to cultivate and one for meals. He would normally go for sixteen hours of cultivation, but he had read that a calm mind free of doubts made for a better performance on the battlefield, and thus The Seeker would permit himself this small luxury.

The man's fingers - for he was surely a man now, if still one not fully comfortable in his own skin - plucked delicately at the strings of a lyre, producing a beautiful melody. The impromptu concert had his single present audience member, Jiang Li, enraptured. Gaius smiled, pleased with how easily the music leapt from his mind to his hands and into the air.

This sensation, this sound, it had once caused him so much pain to play it, twenty years ago, when he was still attempting to reach the First Heavenstage. A corrosive, bitter brew of fear and anger, forged into a dagger and plunged into his guts, into his dantian. Why then, had he insisted on practicing for so long, until that fire burned out into a cool, crisp melancholy? If you asked, he wouldn't be able to answer, not with words.

Perhaps he was reclaiming something; a link to those days of beauty and light, before The Seeker bound up his soul. Even if it was tainted and damaged and torn, that was fine, right? Gaius sped up, building the soft, airy notes up toward a climax. Yes, that must be it. His soul must have sought out this feeling by instinct, through the bitter pain. A counterweight, to maintain his humanity, so that even if The Seeker took everything else, he could keep walking. Ariadne's thread, tracing the path he walked, so that he might proceed through the labyrinth without fear. Proof that he had lived.

The song was finished. Gaius gently put his lyre away as Jiang Li broke out into applause, complimenting his musical skills and chattering about this and that. That man, who had stuck with him since their days at the academy, was not the sound of the lyre, not an irreplaceable thing. He was as disposable as anything else should such things be necessary, not that he would ever block Gaius' path. It wasn't in the same sense as those power-hungry cannibals, who might eat their own comrades for more strength. Jiang Li was simply an earthly connection, one which The Seeker would cast away and leave behind if need be.

Gaius felt guilty; he wanted to tell Jiang Li that he was no different from his father, and that even his closest friend was expendable in the face of the philosophy which hung from his neck like a millstone. He pushed the shame down with practiced ease and smiled pleasantly. Outside, the stars twinkled brightly against the canopy of night.

So uh... this sort of burst out of me in a day and a half. I wanted to flesh out Gaius' inner world more, show some of his most vulnerable moments and such. I also wanted to make his motivation feel more real, rather than just an abstract backstory.

@Humbaba can you threadmark this one and the previous one?
 
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Paulus 5 (Part 1) - Sinking Sensation
Paulus 5 (Part 1) - Sinking Sensation


Life wasn't all hustling for missions, helping to keep the family afloat, or questionable cultivator board games. Like all full members of the Legions I had duties to complete for the benefit of the clan and the mortals under our protection. Duties like killing bandits, tracking down ornery spirit beasts, or guarding resource stockpiles, and twenty years after I'd first signed up we were finally in a decent spot. Everyone on the squad had advanced one or two heavenstages and picked up a few higher level techniques to fit their roles better.

Everyone except me, that is.

I watched with expertly concealed frustration as Atria wrestled a first heavenstage Ironbone Serpent to the ground, her metallic skin gleaming in the desert sunlight. The beast coiled around her limbs and squeezed with all its might but Atria just laughed and pulled harder on its head. Iron bones struggled against Bronze muscle and lost and with the sickening sound of warping metal and a grunt of effort, Atria pulled the head right off the serpents body. The four meter long spirit beast fell limp and Atria rose to her feet with a languid stretch and a content smile.

"You know I used to be really afraid of these things but now I kind of look forward to fighting them." she said with a happy sigh, "I think that last one worked out a kink in my shoulder that's been bugging me for hours."

"Congratulations." I grumped

She turned to me with her fists on her hips and an amused smile gracing her lips. "Captain, don't be grumpy. I'm sure you'll overcome your block eventually."

I grunted in reply and she smacked me on the back, almost sending me sprawling onto my face.

"Oops. Sorry Captain, forgot to turn it off again." Atria muttered with a wince. She closed her eyes and breathed out deeply, letting the technique she was holding on to fade away with the act. She opened her eyes and regarded her now normal arm with a smile. "Ah, it's just so easy to forget about. I can't believe some people are born like that. Do you think I could keep it on all the time eventually?"

"I wouldn't recommend it, Atria." We both turned to look at the third member of our little patrol, Titus the staid doctor. Like everyone else he had advanced in cultivation over the past twenty years of operation but almost all of his strength was focused on being better at...doctor things. He could diagnose mundane problems with a glance by now and produce a workable solution, but I was pretty sure I could beat him in a fight even with our difference in cultivation.

"The Reflected Purities Technique requires far too much to use for the average clan cultivator." He continued in a dull monotone, " While it is extremely useful to those just starting out, the qi pattern is too complex to allow other techniques to be used at the same time. This limitation is why it is generally only used by those seeking to hasten the awakening of their bloodline."

"Oh I know, but I'm beginning to think that wouldn't be so bad?" Atria replied thoughtfully. She flexed her muscles and qi in sync, causing a weak bronze tint to shimmer across her exposed arms before fading away. "I can still contribute to the formation and it's not like I'll be swimming in contribution points for anything better any time soon."

"A valid point. Our current posting leaves much to be desired where potential for earnings is concerned."

They both turned to look at me, and I winced. The Legions were famous for their discipline and Nabu had been true to his word about beating it into us before we were allowed to leave training, but even the most disciplined cultivator would be frustrated after a decade at base pay and some bonuses.

"I hear ya. I'll look into getting us moved somewhere more exciting but I doubt the centurion will budge. We're all stuck in this zone until the spirit stones are mined out anyway."

It was a known problem and so instead of arguing the two nodded in acceptance and, after Atria retrieved her unused spear from where she'd dropped it, we continued our patrol. None of us really wanted to be out here but we couldn't just up and leave without the Centurion's order and the way things were looking we would be here for another decade at least. A mortal city had opened up a new quarry only to discover that it contained not the valuable granite they had been seeking but the far more valuable spirit stone. After reporting it to the Legions we had been moved in to secure the place right out of training and after several months of surveys it was looking to be a real rich find.

So that meant long term Legion activity, which meant camps, supply chains, and patrols. Patrols like the one we were now on. The entire place was well within Golden Devil territory so we didn't expect to see much action, so even though we kept our eyes open it was more for the routine now than anything else.

The problem with patrols though, is that sometimes you found things.

The three of us abruptly stopped walking and tensed as a wave of foul energy washed over us, filling the air with the smell of filth and rot.

"What the hell was that?" Atria muttered, gripping her spear tightly.

"Dunno. Stay alert."

That I could feel it even with my low cultivation was worrisome to say the least. At the first heavenstage my sense for qi was barely better than a particularly enlightened mortal's and I usually couldn't sense anything unless it was within a few meters or way above my league. This was looking more like the latter and that was a decidedly bad thing.

Before I could decide what to do about it a figure crested a rock formation ahead of us. It was a snake, a regular ordinary desert rattler. Then another joined it, and another, and another. In the blink of an eye there were a dozen rattlers slithering over the sand and stone with more following hot on their tails. They moved with wild abandon, flinging themselves bodily down the stoney cliff in their haste to advance.

"Woah that's a lot of snakes!" Atria yelled as she fell into step beside me.

"Guess they heard about your back problems." I stated

"Hey! Don't put this on me, I didn't summon these things."

"I must comment that the timing of this event is rather suspicious." Titus muttered

"I didn't do it!"

"Hold on, we have to retreat."

The two looked at me with quizzical expressions.

"Retreat, Captain?" Atria asked, "They're just normal mortal snakes. A bit more than I'm comfortable with but we could probably squash them with the shield if it comes to that."

Wordlessly I pointed up where, falling from the sky were specs of darkness growing larger by the second. Hundreds of them. All of them, snakes.

"Ah…"

"A bit much for the shield, huh?"

"Ugh, shut up."

We started jogging away from the snakes on the ground, easily outpacing the grounded and falling snakes alike. A normal snake or two was very little concern to a Legion cultivator, but they weren't something we were suited to tangle with in such large numbers.

"Maybe if we held it above us like an umbrella?" I prodded

"Alright, alright I get it. They're still just mortal snakes. I could kill ten by accident just moving around now! Between the three of us we could probably handle even more than this."

Just then another wave of foulness washed over us and the sky ahead of us darkened ominously. Dark clouds formed overhead, writhing and twisting in anger. No, not clouds. Snakes. It was all snakes.

"Atria."

"Yes Captain?"

"Stop talking."

"Yes Captain."

"Let's pick up the pace. I don't want to be caught in whatever this is." I called, immediately taking my own advice and increasing my speed. My squadmates seemingly agreed as in short order they charged past me, their higher cultivations making each of their steps worth three or four of my own.

Snakes began hitting the ground, first individually and then in groups. Most of them I could see died on impact but some barely survived by landing on another of their brethren and the ground was quickly becoming more snake than stone.

Atria and Titus began attacking the falling snakes while I did my level best to keep up with them. A confused rattler fell on Atria's shoulders and bit fiercely but was stymied by flesh that was suddenly made of gleaming bronze. She reached up and pinched off its head before shaking the twitching body off with a grunt of displeasure.

Titus reached into his robes and pulled out a handful of needles that he flung with pinpoint accuracy into nearby snakes, nailing them to the ground or throwing them out of the path ahead.

"Captain. I sense another pulse incoming." Titus warned.

I braced myself and let the pulse wash over me. It didn't hurt as it passed, but it made the inside of my mouth taste like curdled blood and week-old refuse. I gagged and spat, gasping for breath as I tried to keep pace. The sky darkened further and I could see even more snakes raining down ahead of us.

"We can't outpace this on foot. Form Kataphrakoti, now! We'll charge right through!"

My squadmates shouted in assent and slowed till we formed a rough triangle, Titus and Atria taking the base while I formed the head. I cursed myself for not asking one of them to take the driving position but it was too late to clarify, already I could feel tendrils of qi reaching out from behind me and I had no choice but to take hold of it and complete the formation or slow us all with feedback.

I grasped the tendrils with my will and hurriedly wove them into the second of the Golden Devil Clan's great formations. Shadows deepened around us, pooling and whirling like a living liquid before ballooning outward and upward, raising us off the ground even as it enveloped us. Ethereal flesh formed first a massive horse, three meters from shoulder to hoof that carried us in its body and then an equally massive rider that rested on its back. An instant later the bronze armaments of the Kataphrakoti manifested. A lance of solid metal that reached even further than the long spear of the Hoplite appeared in a shower of bronze sparks followed by a helm engraved with the signs and sigils of the Imperial Optimatoi. Finally a shining cuirass bearing the mark of the 3rd Squad slid into position, the front and back pieces affixing themselves with an impressive clang.

All at once our speed redoubled as qi-formed legs took over from physical ones and the power of the formation pushed us forward at higher speeds than any of us could manage individually. The Kataphrakoti wasn't the strongest formation and compared to the much more refined Hoplite it cost a king's ransom of qi to manifest and maintain, the lion's share of which was currently being paid by Atria, but it had one major advantage over the other general formations we learned as aspirants; Pure unassailable speed.

We charged forward, crushing all the snakes in our path under shadowy hooves or sundering them with the mere strength of our passage for hundreds of meters. Snakes were blown off course, blown apart, and straight blown up by the might contained in the Legion's second major array. Nothing could bar our path and our pace only increased.

Another pulse of foulness washed over us but it was weaker, more distant. The subsequent rain of snakes failed to catch up to us as we retreated double time. We'd broken through.

I pushed us another six kilometers before dismissing the formation, setting us down at the peak of the largest sand dune I could find. The shadowy body rippled and deflated as the qi holding everything together was slowly cut off and shadowy flesh set us down softly before the whole construct vanished like a mirage.

"Ugh. I hate using that thing. It's like a bottomless well for qi." Atria groaned.

Titus said something in reply but I tuned them out in favor of checking out whatever had caused that crisis. No matter how we joked it was almost certainly not Atria's fault. Probably. We'd managed to get a decent gap between us and the snakes and with any luck we would be able to outpace the waves on foot from here but I had no idea what would even cause something like that.

Several kilometers away from where we'd even started was a giant creature crossing the desert. It was a man, it was a snake, it was both. The upper body of a man as big as a building attached to the body of a snake a hundred meters long. It twitched and writhed as if in agony as it moved and as I watched the creature opened its mouth in a scream I couldn't hear but could see the effects of by watching sand explode away from it. Snakes poured out of its mouth by the hundreds, most falling to the ground around it but some being flung far away by the sheer force of its wails.

"What the hell is that thing?" The question escaped me before I could even think about it.

"I...don't know, Captain. I've never seen something quite so...grotesque." Titus answered, stepping up beside me.

We stood there for another minute in silence, just observing this miserable wretch contort itself into various painful looking shapes and somehow continue moving forward despite that. Atria joined us at some point and grimaced at the unholy monstrosity before speaking.

"Ummm, Captain, do you think that thing is…"

She trailed off in concern but I could see what she was talking about. The creature was moving in a single direction despite what appeared to be a combination of random agonized contortions flinging it this way and that. The resulting motion was deceptively quick and If it continued on its current heading it would inevitably collide with the spirit stone mines, and more importantly the mortal town that worked it.

"Yes, yes I do. Send up a signal."

Titus dug into one of the many pouches he carried on his person and pulled out a tiny square of jade covered in complicated array script. With a flick of his wrist he snapped it in two and flung it into the air where it turned into a ball of bright yellow light and rocketed into the sky. The garrison needed to be alerted to this, and they needed to know way before we could get back to tell them at the rate this thing was moving.I just hoped this thing was weak.

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"Bad news is it's way stronger than us."

Leto set down a honest to goodness dusty ancient tome on the desk, sending up a puff of sandy grit and book dust into the air of the tent. Three entire Legion Squads and half a dozen array operator attaches were crammed into the command tent to hear what she had to say, the full complement of troops placed in the city.

"I could have told you that from the size." Rosetta Stone, captain of 8th squad grumbled out. She was a short, mousey woman with chocolate brown skin that was lightly dusted with freckles and curly black hair that bounced every time she turned her head. She was soft spoken but had a sharp tongue and I was pretty sure she could snap me in two like dry kindling.

"I remembered seeing the description in one of the old books in the Library. It's a Blasphemer Beast, a Blasphemer Serpent to be precise." Leto continued, ignoring the interruption.

"Wait, are you talking about the Library by the Dawn Fortress? The Core Formation Library?" I pressed

"Well, yes but-"

She was cut off by sharp intakes of breath and sudden curses from around the tent. A Core Formation Beast, even a wounded one, would destroy this place without breaking a sweat.

"A Core Formation Beast here? In the back end of nowhere?" Oman Jeru, 5th squad captain hissed. He was one of those classical heroes in body shape and had the strength to match. Tall, imposing, jaw that could break a boulder in two. His pale skin refused to be bronzed by the desert sun but it was covered in scars from a storied life before he joined the Legions.

"We'll have to evacuate immediately." Rosetta mumbled, shaking her head from side to side with a pensive look on her face. "Our mounts can carry a few each, but more than that would be unwieldy."

"Perhaps some manner of sled could be put together?" Oman suggested, "No, even with that one squad of horses isn't enough to evacuate a city, no matter how mighty they may be. If we are forced to move at mortal speeds we would be caught by this Beast in no time."

"Alert the Legate?" I hazarded.

"He's days away from here even at his speed." Rosetta shot me down, "Days we do not have if that thing pursues us."

"Hey wait I wasn't finished!"

We all turned to look at Leto who was regarding us with irritation. "Blasphemer Beasts could become Core Formation if they get enough energy, but they're actually the result of a type of failed breakthrough due to a known flaw in an uncommon cultivation school that resurges every few hundred years. They vary in strength but based on what you said this one should only be Great Circle of Foundation Establishment"

Sighs of relief filled the room and one of the array attaches actually fainted.

"Oh good, so it's only fifty times stronger than us instead of a hundred times." Rosetta mocked, "The boulder that crushes us will be smaller than we expected."

"It's a damn sight better than we were before. That thing will still crush the walls like dried leaves so we will still have to evacuate the city, but now we might stand a chance of getting away." Oman mused

"We still have to worry about the snakes. If we leave the city we lose the Beast Pillars." I reminded

"Can they be moved?"

We all turned to look at Leto who blinked at the sudden focused attention.

"Uhh, the arrays in cities aren't really designed to be moved. They're really, really heavy and if you move them you'd have to do a bunch of math so they can get power again wherever you stop."

"If it's power you need we have many spirit stones stored up for the next delivery." Rosetta said.

"They're expecting that delivery back at the fortress." Oman said sternly.

"Given the circumstances I think we'll be forgiven." Rosetta continued with a huff.

"I'm with her. We're losing the whole mine if we evacuate anyway. Can you make it work L- Attache Leto?"

She looked at her fellow technicians pensively and they shrugged as one. I wondered when they had time to practice that.

"Mmmmmaybee. Even if we forcibly activate the array it should be weaker than the fixed version and it's still going to be heavy. If we burn seven septuagenaries per hour we can-"

"The summary, please. We are in a crisis." Rosetta said.

Leto frowned. "If they're just normal snakes we should be able to do enough to keep them away. We can't do anything about the big one. Not even if we didn't have to move the arrays."

"Then the matter is clear. We can evacuate the mortals and carry enough stones to power the array until we escape." Rosetta continued

Oman crossed his arms before his chest but remained silent. This was no time for disagreement and we had him two to one. I nodded to Rosetta and turned back to Leto.

"Get it done. We need to leave before that thing gets into range."

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By the time we got the mortals to the city gates snakes were already raining all around us. A modification to the Beast Pillars by our harried Array Engineer Team (though really they were all still Technicians) kept the worst of it out by adding a visible qi barrier above us. The modification ate through our store of stones at a visible pace but it turned the impossible task of keeping a towns worth of people safe from the snake rain to a much more manageable policing of the perimeter for any snakes that fell too close and weren't immediately driven away by the array's primary function of beast repelling.

Hundreds of people huddled inside our encirclement, looking at the unnatural weather with fear and bewilderment as we ushered them out from the walls in the direction of the closest city. It was slow but orderly work thanks to the blanket deference mortals in their territory had towards the Golden Devil clan and it was going way better than I thought it would all things considered.

Still the only thing I could think about right now was why the array couldn't stop the inside of my mouth from tasting like ass.

"The Beast, it fouls the very energy of heaven and earth around it with its words." Marcus explained. Once he'd found out what it was the middle aged soldier remembered all kinds of stories about the nasty Blasphemer Beasts. The man had turned out to be a wellspring of lore and tidbits about all kinds of things over our years together. Stories about cultivators were something of a pastime of his before he suddenly awakened the Blood and rushed over to join.

"I suppose that's where the 'Blasphemer' part of the name came from?" I asked, wishing I could turn off my tastebuds.

"Just so, Captain! Or well, it's a part of it. Whatever miraculous method these...creatures use to gain power stands against the logic of the world more firmly than even we do, at times. The stench and ah, other transformations are simply manifestations of this rejection."

"受苦!"

We winced together as another wave of foulness washed over the procession accompanied by the echoes of a distant shout and a refreshed rain of snakes. The Beast was barely in sight but the range of its howls was insane.

"Mmmm. Cluster of snakes to the east, let's break it up before they get caught inside." We jogged over to a panicking tangle of snakes and made quick work of them as soon as the edge of the repulsion effect passed over them. While the array was perfect for keeping snakes from approaching it was a different matter if they were already inside. The array wasn't' meant to be moved, and we were already running into problems that wouldn't have existed if it had remained in one place.

We walked alongside the procession as it exited the city, watching for snakes that couldn't get out of the way in time for one reason or another. Oman's squad took the front, and mine the flanks, while Rosetta's handled the moving of the Beast Pillars at the back of the procession, but even with all of our squads mobilized it was still eighteen Legionnaires watching hundreds of people, and six of us were occupied with moving the heavy pillars. It was only a matter of time before something slipped through.

"前进!"

Sand fountained up in the procession of mortals up revealing a ball made up of dozens of snakes that had somehow found themselves underground. They twisted and writhed, trying to escape one another but accomplishing nothing but hurting themselves and becoming more desperate.

Three people went down under a storm of sudden bites from the snakes in a matter of seconds and the orderly procession broke apart in a chaotic sprawl around the knot of confused snakes.

"Marcus! Someone get Titus over here!"

Before we could step closer a trio of bronze arrows sliced through the ball of snakes, cutting heads from bodies and tearing bodies asunder. Cassius knocked another arrow angrily as he stared at the mess of dead snakes, daring them to move.

Titus raced over with all the power of a fourth heavenstage cultivator, easily twice as fast as the fittest mortal. He skidded to a halt by the fallen people, already pulling tools from the bags around his waist. There was already nothing for me to do, my much stronger squad members reacting much faster than I could.

I seethed and clenched my jaw in anger. What the hell was Oman's squad doing? How do you miss a ball of snakes going underground? I raged in my mind to distract myself from my own weakness just as another wave of foulness washed over the host.

"屠杀!"

Six more spots in the procession exploded into sand and snakes just as the rain of bodies around us intensified. The plop plop of falling bodies almost drowned out the sudden increase in screaming up and down the line as more snake balls began scything their way above ground.

A form blurred past me and I glanced down the line to see Marcus already charging towards one of the snake balls. I could see Atria and Julia charging towards another pair even as Cassius aimed at another. Titus looked between the bitten mortals he was working on and the new eruption with a grimace before leaping up and rushing off to the closest one. I swallowed a curse and dashed towards the last, hefting my spear and shield in my hands.

With an effort of will the Hoplite manifested around me, shadowy flesh enveloping my own and the bronze armaments sinking into my own spear and shield seamlessly and enhancing them. Qi like mist glided over the surface of my skin and sank into my muscles in the most basic enhancement I could muster, pushing a whole half of my stores into the technique.

And then I ran.

Sand and pebbles fountained up behind me as I approached the steadily destabilizing procession, a sign of my wastefulness in using a technique far above my station. I crouched for a bare moment before launching myself above the heads of the crowd directly at the ball of snakes.

"Out of the way!"

A taller man barely ducked out of the way before I slammed into the ball of snakes shield first, eliciting hisses of pain and confusion. A sound like rain on a metal roof resounded as my Hoplite reinforced shield weathered a handful of reflexive bites and then I was on them. My twice enhanced spear cut through the mortal snakes like they were made of particularly cheap fabric and I whispered mental thanks to Filia once again for forcing me to buy it. The weapon opened wounds that would bleed profusely and resist healing, and the mortal snakes had no defense against it.

The ball of snakes proved to be an easy target and after a few thrusts the rain of blows against my shield slowed enough that I could push them back safely. A few more strikes into the confusingly knotted mass of flesh silenced the snakes altogether.

I gave them a few more stabs for good measure.

I released the Hoplite as soon as I was done and with it the nameless enhancement technique and the greater portion of my qi stores. I would pay for that later I was sure, but it was one thing to lag behind in cultivation and another thing entirely to lag behind in effectiveness. I won't be left behind.

I backed away from the corpse ball of mortal snakes, thankful that they hadn't gotten to separate or cause more damage. I scanned the crowd around but gave it up as a bad job after a few seconds. I had little to no medical training and I couldn't tell who had been bitten or just been hit by gravel spray. I needed Titus. We needed to regroup.

"And I need to know what the hell is going on with these snakes." I growled.

One snake ball was bad enough. With all the weirdness in the current situation I could stomach the idea that a bunch of snakes had somehow tangled up together and ended up under the sands before they could escape. I could even believe that they had somehow gotten past Oman's squad without being detected. But seven of them? All in similar sized groups that happened to burst out of the ground at close to the same time?

No. That was a meal I couldn't swallow at all. The more likely option was obvious in hindsight. They were being controlled, and there was one guess as to by what.

"前进!"

The crowd was scattered enough for me to see straight to the edge of the Beast Repelling Array from where I stood, so I could easily see the waves of flesh slithering about outside. Layers upon layers of snakes slithered around the barrier, probing the edge for weakness with their bodies. Sand and grit fountained up outside the array as more hidden snakes tore themselves out from underground and joined the questing tide. It was as if all the snakes that had been falling in the surrounding lands had rushed over in the last few seconds to try and break through, doing the exact opposite of what the array would have them do. That they hadn't broken in completely was the only reason I knew it had any effect at all.

"Captain!"

Marcus dodged around a group of mortals before coming to a stop beside me, his armour covered in scratches from questing fangs.

"Fifth squad is encircled outside the array with a small band of mortals."

"Encircled, not dead?"

"No captain."

There was no way six people in this power range could survive what was happening out there. The only reason why they were alive is because they were supposed to be. We had made a mistake.

The truth came rushing to me as I watched the writhing snakes slithering over one another in an attempt to get inside, only to be stymied at the very end by their own instinctive rejection. There was no way a Beast like that could hide from us, so it let us see it far in advance. We saw the snakes ourselves and decided that we could get away.

"Captain. What are your orders?"

But why would it go through all that trouble? Even from here I could tell the power in the Blasphemer Beast was the real deal. The city couldn't stand up to it even if it had just brazenly advanced the whole way.

"Captain?"

But if it did that some people would undoubtedly be crushed in the assault or even hide themselves away. Even now with Oman's squad caught outside the range of the array they weren't being killed. Whatever it's intentions it wanted people alive for it, and that little punk wouldn't even give up a mouthful.

"Captain, what should we do?"

I looked at Marcus, and came up blank. I had no idea what to do.

"受苦!"


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This one kind of got away from me. This actually takes place during Turn 7, but a bunch of stuff came up and the story changed and lengthened a few times so I ended up posting it only now.
Part 2 of this should be coming soon and then I can catch up and post stuff for the current mission and war.

Since this is actually my first omake post for Turn 8, I'll take a Cultivation boost.
Requesting threadmark and spreadsheet addition from a collaborator. Pinging @BungieONI .
 
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Zeno Angelus 10 - The Siege of Three Frog City 4
The sun is glaring at three unlucky legionares as they perform their duty to the clan while they talk between them of their seeds of discord.


"Hey Zhan. Why, huff, do we have to run around in the sun anyway? Aren´t you the big cheese among the guards? Oh this heat will kill me!"

"Oh Shut up Fatty Hao!" With that said and a glaring reminder of his status among us this slob of a mountain finally stopped whining like a child.

"Instead take some cues from Barbz and start chucking these balls into the fields." *Chuck* and another one lands far away on some patch of arid gras.

"But how can I do that, if I am the sad one pulling the wagon." really, that´s your question?

"Just take one and throw it really doesn´t matter, Fatty."

"Then why do we have to be the ones doing all this dreadful mortal work? It´s demeaning to our grand stature as the the commanders chosen!"

"Dumb Hao! Stop being dumb we are his men unofficially!" Barbz, rushing headfirst to decapitate problems as fast as always, nice. "Besides, dumb Hao, we aren´t under that nosy Captain Fleetfeet anymore." True.

"What Zhan you can´t possibly agree with Barbz on this!? We can´t so much as collect some protection money and that silk-panted Devil will demand out of which ass we pulled every single well earned stone."

"Don´t be even more idiotic than usual dumb Hao. You forget his fleecing bitch!" Oh this I gotta hear. * Chuck*

"You´re supposed to hit the ground not me Zhan." Man that verbal bite was weak. I suppose it´s time for some talking for the missus.

"Spill."

"Wha-. No! I am not gonna stack tha- that bitches reputation more by talking about all of the shit she was up to!" This requires a more personal touch then.

"Ha, Barbz got schooled by the devil bitch!" Schooled!" While Zhao is good for riling customers up, I need him docile now.

"Shut it Zhao, this is important!" Ah that smile and her goosebumps. Good dumb lady.

"Yeah, dumb Zhao, you should listen!" Oh that tenseness right before a hug, just divine. "W-what is it?, Zhan?"

"Why, isn´t it obvious you wanted to tell us about 'the Silk Pants Bitch' if I got that right."

"You have not Zhan the lesser." Oh I must have hit the nerve then. Better let Fatty run into that one.

"Haha, you suck Barbz! The bitch must have gotten you good!" I should-

"No, you walking fat tank! It´s worse she´s more of a cow! Have you noticed the wood stacked in front of her?" never mind.

"Huh, what wood. Are you blind as well? SHe has not wood continually appearing in front of her Barbz." *smack* That must have been a new low even for him.

"What? It´s true, isn´t it?"

"Well, yes. Fatt Hao, but that´s not the wood we are talking about. We are talking about the fleshy kind."

"Ah, the funbags!" That expression of pure joy would be more amusing if I didn´t know how much older he is than Barbz and I. How did he get so far with Lord Gaidaros in the first place. Anyway, questions for another time.

"Yes, dumb Hao, fun bags, ugh."

"My problem lies more with the ease this cow has managed to enthrall all the new blood. They are mine to lay with, mine! *Thwump*

"Careful Barbz, the balls!" Oh no!

"Run!" Thankfully we stopped over a small dune an can just run the other side.

"Waah, the World is so unfaair" huff. Not again.

"Shut your trap dumb Hao and Put your breath where your legs need to be! And you Barbz I will-" *Swich Prick* Ouch.

As I look behind me these pointy white balls with complex arrays painted on them roll down in an unending tide down the mountain towards us. We have to run faster!

"Shit Zhan your Shoulder" Uh, is that hwat the cattle calls vertigo. The old hag from last weak may not rumble in my stomach anylonger, but she had the right of it. Anything the Golden Devils build is annoyingly persistent.

"Zhan, huff, these balls are chasing us."

"I know. We need to run faster"

"Let´s blow it up instead. then they can´t annoy anyone!"

"No/No!" Even as we are chased by pointy balls along the dunes of this podunk City I can´t help but admire the pitch of Barbz voice. It´s wasted on the Commanders weapon, but I suppose what she doesn´t have upstairs she makes up for downstairs in leagues, heh. Looking at her while running, yeah that´s how one should run away from certain doom.

"Aaah, why not!" *Shlick* And another bone pierces the largest among us. What a sorry sight with all that snot at the first sign of danger.

"What why noot, huff!?"

"Because, dumb Hao, the commander will be disappointed", yeah and that Captain will write another block full of complaints which we now have to actually fill out, ugh. Wait a minute, that´s it!

"Hao'er can you block the force in the air, to throw us like a missile towards safety"

"Like a ballista, or-" ugh, now is not the time for devilry.

"No matter. Can you, huff!?

"Y-yes Guard Captain, Sir!"

"That´s brilliant and I can smoothen our landing by pulling in some poor schmuck!" Now we are talking!

Just a few seconds later fattys stone skin allowed us to sail over the walls and we seem to be landing in the commanders courtyard. At least that makes reporting in easier. Wait.

"Barbz, Stop roping in Captain Cilix!"

"Not much of a Choice! Aah!"

"What, sto-." *Thwump*

"Ouch/ Umpf/ Oouuuch!"

Ugh, my everything. I can´t wait to become a Foundation Establishment Cultivator. Gravity is the greatest bitch and I will make her mine! Right after I get up.

"Stand up, soldier!" Oh, that´s the Commander.

"Errm, we can explain?" That glare did not bode well.
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It took some time for us to get some semblance of order. The Commander did not like that and Captain Cilix, I guess. Ah, who cares about some dumb devil. I am with the winners of a bloody good future after all!

Soon after Commander Gaiarados ordered us inside into his abode. The personal one, where no stick-their-ass Devil would ever dare to visit without direct invitation. Like taking blood from a mortal, too easy. Though reapplying the technique afterwards is annoying the potential results show in the commanders room. It never ceases to amaze how much treasure he had taken from the Golden Devil Clan. So many artifact weapons that got lost between the trials and coincidentally landed in his lap for safekeeping. A bow strung with the the fibre of a Great-Circle Foundaation Hare here, the lance of some dead Core bitch there. It was a wonder they found anything, considering how much they trusted their little Communication board for logistics. It takes just a few qi applications and nobody bothers to check where the stuff is, because it´s in the hand of 'Clan-brothers' after all. Yes, Cilix may be annoying, but his vices are very useful indeed.

"Now you three little shits, explain! Why do you have bones in your body when the reinforcements are nowhere near?"

And, uff. Yeah, Getting Blood taken as payment for healing and reinforcement of the Commanders disguise hurts. I can deal, though. The Clan may be done for, but I will live thanks the Commanders grace.

"Well, you see Captain Fleetfeet ordered us to set up traps in the nearby hills to stall potential enemies." Ugh, that look.

"Yeah, Boss it was awful. We had to drag these balls throughout the desert and toiled like Mortals, ugh!"

"On that we can agree on, dumb Hao. Really annoying and stupidly deadly as well."

"Are you three done?" That look. How can someone look so serene and yet so annoyed at the same time?

"Yes, Sir/Yes, Sir/Yes, Sir." We answered as one, like we were taught by the Commander.

"Then listen, because you three failing to plough the fields like cattle is the least of our worries." All because of Captain Fleetfeet no doubt.

"Our worries start and end with that Callista girl. I divined it myself."

"What?/What?/What?"

"Don´t give me that cheek you dumb shits. It was inevitable that the Devils would send their most treasured asset somewhere safe and that´s the doublebladed problem at the root of the capillary."

"Err, Boss. What makes the devil bitch so important? I mean they will all die like cattle to slaughter, right? Heh, yeah that will be fun.

"No." What. Even Barbz looks worried. Not good.

"Impossible. Cultivators of the Blood destroy Devils like scythe to wheat. You taught us yourself!"

"Yes, and you two will stop being students real soon, if you can´t stop interrupting your master!" Oh, everything is so grey. Well shit, minimize damage!

"We are very sorry Sir!" and with the bow the pressure on my heart finally lessens. Man the commander sure can control his qi well. Everyone else merely makes pressure for the whole body feel like the hide of cattle leather lying upon me.

"You better listen!" That silence, I never knew Fatty could stop huffing like a Dunerat. Looking at Barbz, as we bow before our master, even now her hots for him are as evident as ever. That must be the stuff of her dreams. Good for you sister.


"The good thing about that Callista girl arriving is the reinforcements it will spur from our comrades. Taking down her would be a blow to the Devil Clans moral after all." Man, is he really gonna wander around the room, while we have to bow? Ugh.

"The best Part about them is that we don´t have to concern ourselves with that pint of concentrated hell."

"That´s great Master, but how? The cunning Captain of the Divination division has the favor the people and the cattle.

"Yes, and you dear Ba Bi how do you think he got so far in his useless endeavours?" And that´s how the maiden would have fallen for her prince charming, if this was a shitty Xin Kingdom Fable of their Oh so great Sorcerors. Barbz is gonna be insufferable tomorrow. At least this will mean more booze for me and Hao tonight, nice.

"E-ehm, He marinated the minds of the cattle with drink and supper while treating the cattle as p-p-people?"

"That´s right Ba Bi and as it turns out I was so, yes, so inspired by his deeds I wished to follow in his footsteps and I invented a new way to keep the shoes of anyone entering the mortals house clean. Thanks to my new invention, of course!" Oh that smirk this is going to be good.

"Boss?" after a nod I feel, more than I can see, I speak while we are allowed to stand up again. Finally.

"If I may, are you the one giving the qi to clean the dirty cattle?"

"Well, yes. We wouldn´t want Lady Callista to arrive to an unclean house after all! If that results in my ascension to Foundation Establishment, why, that is only my just reward for my long service to the clan before I-we leave to administrate others cities just as well!"

Oh yes, This is going to be real good!

"Now you three, take these array papers and deliver them in my name! We wouldn´t want any mortal to be left out."

"Yes, Sir/Yes, Sir/Yes, Sir." Wow. These are a lot of papers.

"Dismissed." And we are leaving, without Barbz as I suspected.

"Hey Zhan don´t you think it´s funny?"

"What could possibly be funny about us delivering papers to mortals, Hao?

"Oh, it´s just, for once we do our jobs and that stupid Captain can´t complain." Heh, yeah.

"Oh yeah. Beating him at his own game, how poetic."

Almost as poetic as masters house cleaning, That´s going to cement us as worthy in the eyes of Corpse Gulper and I almost can´t wait!
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Trying to write from the enemies perspective is more difficult than I thought.
 
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Maria 7 - The Mirror (Part 4 of 7)
The Mirror (Part 4 of 7)
Maria Turn 8 Fifth Omake

They saw the place long before they got there. Or rather, they saw the hill.

"Back before the truce," said Kyra, shattering the silence they'd ridden in for the last three hours, "there was an outpost here. Glass Spear co-ordinators could see all the way to the scarred lands. Then, when our most exalted master made peace with Old Cannibal and the territories were ceded to us, it was taken down."

Maria listened despite herself. She'd never been good at the clan's history; too many dates and names. This was interesting, though.

"Why?" she asked.

Kyra's jaw tightened. Something uncomfortable, and a little afraid, flickered across her face. Her eyes strayed to Priam as he stared impassively off along the road. But after a moment *just* long enough to be uncomfortable, she answered.

"There were other battles to fight. We were preparing for the Trials and – well, and many other matters. As we always are," she added, voice taking on a school girl's piety. Maria closed her eye to keep it from rolling. Kyra talked about the clan sometimes like she was talking about a scripture, or some god or other. At least Maria knew it was full of people, not saints. "The resources were put to better use. There is a stone garden there, now. The town nearby sells tickets to tourists who come to see the moon."

"Is that a common way for tourists to spend their time?" asked Oyster. Something in his voice made Maria wonder if he was teasing. Hard to tell at the best of times. Kyra didn't seem to notice.

"Oh yes!" she said eagerly. "For rich mortals, at least. If one can afford the fee of a protected caravan, it is a very lovely way to spend one's time."

"Yes, yes, I see. Of course, they can't be expected to see the moon anywhere else."

Ah. He had been teasing. Maria tilted her head down to hide her smile.

"This hill. This hill and this hill alone. Is the only place the moon can be seen."

Kyra flushed. "Of course not-"

"The tales we fools have told for centuries will pale in comparison, I'm sure. Tonight, my friends, we will finally see. The moon."

The giggles were starting to fight their way past Maria's lips, now.

"All those years of dreaming-"

"If sir mushroom is quite finished," said Adonia, quiet but cutting. The laughter died inside Maria's mouth, unheard. Oyster's back straightened. She saw his fingers flicker in aborted patterns.

"Certainly," he responded, cool and charming.

"We need to push through to Three Frogs. We have a great deal of time to make up." Adonia's voice crackled with ice. "I, for one, will not allow my reputation to be ruined by another's incompetence."

Maria gritted her teeth. Adonia had been picking at her since they'd started out that morning. The weight of her spear across her back seemed suddenly deeply pressing.

One blow. Nothing fatal. Just one quick crack across the back of the head. Just a bruise…

"Still need to go through the town," rumbled Priam. Maria willed herself calm again. "Quickest route."

"If we continued along the hill-"

"Road's too bad. Horse will break a leg, we'll be lucky to make the city by tomorrow night."

"You underestimate our steeds."

"No, just know hills."

It would keep going on for gods knew how long, if history was any judge. Letha, it seemed, came to the same conclusion.

"The town," she said abruptly. "Even if we make it to Three Frogs tonight, we'll have ridden the horses half to death. If we were to cut through the town and stop, even for an hour, to let them drink and rest, they'll recover faster."

Adonia sneered. "You would delay us for the sake of a horse?"

"Pardon my foolishness, elder, but surely better that than to waste resources for the sake of our pride?"

Letha's face was the picture of innocence as she said it. It would have to be to keep Adonia from lashing out at a rude junior talking out of turn. As it was, the older woman's face bulged with shocked fury.

But she'd have to let it go. The war was already on the horizon; wasting resources would be the worst kind of foolishness. Not in the Clan spirit.

Priam grunted. "Settled then. The town." He turned his horse. The rest followed.

---

Not far away, Kuei watched them come. The thing that once had been the innkeeper rose up slowly, moaned.

"Good question," murmered Kuei. "I'll be honest. I wasn't planning on anyone this… developed? Is that the right term? Or advanced. Yes. Advanced. Honestly, in my head this was going to be a long thing. Start with people like you, stay there for a while, build up slowly… the war would make it even easier."

There was an awful, gritty noise behind him from the thing. After a moment, it took on texture, sound, shape. "…like…me…"

Kuei winced. "No. That- Alright, yes, I see your point. That was unfair. Mortals. I meant mortals."

There was a pause.

He sighed. "That's not better, is it. Gods damn it."

There was another awful rasp. "…like…me…strong…like…me…" The thing snarled then, a terrible gnarled gasp of a snarl, a noise like a dozen blunt cleavers buried in thick bone and old meat. It dragged on forever until it faded into a whisper. "Like I should have been."

"Yes," said Kuei. He leaned forward. "Yes, you're right. Anything else would be disrespectful."

---

They smelled the horror of that place long before they saw it; the hot iron tang of blood, spoiled meat, and the sickly sweet funk of rot. Alcander gagged, almost vomiting from horseback. The others weren't much better; even Oyster turned his head away, pressing his lips together and gulping. Only Priam seemed unphased, and Maria herself. There'd been worse things in the pit, and on her long trek to the desert.

As they closed in, the source of the smell revealed itself, and they stopped, their horses rearing up in horror and disgust.

Flesh.

Red-grey curtains of flesh, clinging to every building in the town. It blanketed roofs, carpeted the road, and climbed like particularly foul ivy across the walls and windows. All of it was streaked with thick black veins, bulging in some places, and hanging slack and distended like an empty sausage skin in others. There was no motion in that carrion shroud; no twitch of a heartbeat. It was dead, the sunlight cooking it in its own filth.

This time, Alcander really did vomit.

Take it back, Maria thought. Nothing was worse than this. The words felt far away in her head – like her mind had disconnected, fled in the face of this travesty of nature.

It took her a moment to realise Priam had dismounted. One hand was on his spear, but his face, as always, was as smooth and unreadable as a statue. He proceeded slowly to the nearest piece of the meat, leaned close, and examined it.

"Fresh," he said.

"What?"

"It's fresh. No flies. See?" He gestured. Maria followed his hand, and took hold of her mind, forcing it to turn, motivate, *work*. He was right. "Happened recently. I'd say an hour, if that."

"What," asked Leta, her voice taking on a leaden quality, "did this?"

"Don't know," said Priam. He turned, eyes darting over the rest of the town. A small place, Maria realised, now she wasn't so… fixated on the obvious details. Two streets, houses, a few small shops and inns. Tourist town.

"Cannibals?" she asked.

"No," said Zeth. "They wouldn't leave this much meat uneaten. Besides, the truce isn't up yet."

"You'd trust the honour of a blood path cannibal, would you?" asked Kyra, voice arch and thick with scorn.

"Not theirs. Their masters. Old Cannibal is cruel, but not stupid. Ending the truce early would prompt… consequences."

"Yes, but-"

"It wasn't a cannibal."

Maria turned. Oyster's voice had a flatness to it she'd never heard before. Something halfway between fury and grief was mingling on his face. "It wasn't a cannibal," he said again, slowly dismounting and moving slowly towards the meat. "It was a True Mask."

For a moment, she wondered if that was something she should know, but the guarded, blank expressions of the others suggested otherwise.

"The fuck is that?" she asked.

Oyster didn't look at her. "A blood path cultivator. There aren't many of them. They're supposed to be extinct – or dormant, at least."

"And how-"

"Not far from our territory," he said, ignoring her, "is a relic. A huge thing. They say that once, a long time ago, it was worn by a terrible being. A creature that had passed into spirit severing. Her power was beyond our feeble contemplation. In order to gain the grace of Heaven, she filled it with her essence, and flung it down into the desert to torment those farthest from the Jade Emperor's dominion."

"Can't be that," said Priam. But there was something unsure in his voice. Oyster shot him a dull, leaden stare.

"Look at this place. Tell me I'm wrong."

"It's guarded."

"Clearly not well enough."

"What are you talking about?" Maria could feel her temper fraying. This place was just… wrong. Oyster took a breath and carried on.

"The relic is a mask. If you draw close, it will speak to you. Teach you the blood path."

"Which blood path?"

Oyster's voice had the cold, dull finality of coffin lid closing as he answered. "All of them."

---

Kuei stood inside one of the houses and listened as the Devils bickered amongst themselves. It was more disappointing than he cared to admit. Most of his life, he'd heard tales of the golden haired barbarians and their unity in battle. They shouldn't be so… human.

"We carry on," said one of them, a grey-haired woman whose face was a maze of wrinkles. "No rest. Straight to Three Frogs."

"Are you mad?!" That one belonged to the youngest, a boy of (at most) seventeen. Some kind of prodigy, to make it to active deployment so early. "Our clan protects our mortal subjects - "

"We are a little late for that, Master Alcander. The mortals are either dead or beyond our capacity to save."

"But-"

"We can do nothing now. Instead, we should fetch reinforcements and return."

There was a few muttered assents, and Kuei felt his disappointment deepen. He'd consumed his servitors for *this*?

Then hope returned, growling in a voice that sounded rough with grit and scar tissue. He couldn't see the speaker from where he stood without revealing himself, and he wasn't ready for that yet.

"No."

"I'm sorry," said the old woman, her voice full of sweetness and venom. "No? You think we can find survivors?"

"Priam said it was fresh."

"Freshly dead is still dead."

"Means whoever did this is still here," growled Kuei's saviour. "Or nearby. We can still find them if we look."

"Our task-"

"Alcander's right. Our clan protects our mortals. You remember Pleuron?"

"I will not be lectured on our history by some turtle-blooded lunatic!"

There was a silence, immediate and brutal. The old woman had clearly crossed a line. His saviour stepped forward to stand close enough to kiss, at last visible to him. She had the Golden Devil's famous hair, gleaming in the sunlight, cut very long across her back, but beyond that he'd never have known she was a clan member; her skin was almost inhumanly pale, and her face had more in common with a plains gutter-urchin than it did the strange, sharp features he'd expect. The missing eye in particular didn't agree with the rest.

"'Protect the weak against the evil strong'," said the white-skinned girl. "The testament of Xiao Yi, right there. Everything he did. Everything he sacrificed. That was why. Look around you." She spread out her arms. "You can't see the strength? The evil? What else, Mount Tai?"

There was a long silence. Then, at last, the elder male spoke.

"She's right."

The others murmered in agreement. The old woman glared at them, but they stared steadily back. Her gaze broke, and she turned away.

"We spread out," the man continued. "Groups of two. Find the bastard, but don't engage. We'll gather first, and hit him in formation."

That seemed as good a cue as any. Kuei put a hand to his mask and flooded the dead flesh around him with power. It contorted under his command, animated by mockeries of his recent victims, and split in front of him.

"Excellent plan," he said. "But may I suggest an alternative?"

And he fell on them, full of hunger and darkness.

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UUUUUUUUUUGH okay at least it hasn't added more installments to it. @Humbaba @Alectai @Kaboomatic may I have this monstrosity threadmarked, please. @Juugo I am so sorry I haven't replied yet, life got away from me for a couple days. Will send you a message ASAP.
 
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