Minervina Barda 23 - The Great Circle
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Minervina Barda 23: The Great Circle
Minervina's consciousness rested inside the comforting embrace of her dantian as she started putting the finishing touches on almost two centuries worth of work. That's what Cultivation is really. A vast construction project, with the end goal of building a brighter, stronger, more perfect self. It had to be done with patience, forethought and diligence. Simply plugging away stubbornly at the breathing exercises will only get you so far, even if you have a will tougher than spirit-steel. Much like a grand monarchs palace, if your foundation is faulty, or even only average, you can only reach so high into the starry sky before you risk total collapse. Claw too greedily at the heavens and stalling out forever was among the kindest fates you could face.
Minervina was confident in her foundation. Her Dao of Transformation could be considered peculiar, but that didn't bother her, her path was hers alone to walk. She had laid out the stepping stones almost a century past. Sketched out the blueprint in the years before she even broke through into this Realm. She would seek out elemental energies and higher concepts that wrought transformative effects on man, beast and the natural world, her Pillars would be reflections of the greatest of these forces and once she was ready she would combine them. Merging these potent forces together would form a single Crucible of Transformation, a single Core capable of transforming both the material and the spiritual as her whims desired.
The purple lake of her Dantian had swollen to a vast, tempestuous sea in the years since her breakthrough. Decades of constant effort and a fortune of potent pills and natural treasures had given its currents power and depth she couldn't have imagined back then. The churning waters never ceased in their motion, constantly flowing, testing and changing.
Her Pillars stood tall. Lonely islands in this stormtossed sea.
Guided by her choice of profession, she had started with transformative physical forces. Since the very first faltering steps of her journey, she had always had great faith in the power of Life. It had guided her through the first Tribulation with ease. Her great oaken Pillar still stood tall, its roots buried in the bones of her enemies, its bark a resolute defence against the worlds perils, its boughs and blossom a testament to Lifes capacity to take base matter and make it breathe again. It no longer stood alone like it had when it bathed in the ire of heaven during her Tribulation. It was matched with two others in what she called 'The Circle of Flesh' and stood equidistant with the other two pillars that represented physical forces. The Pillars of Fire and Water existed in an odd, contentious harmony. The Fire was that of the Alchemist, a refiners flame that sought to catalyse, to create and forge dreams into reality. It took the form of a pill furnace, roaring and teetering on the edge of a cataclysmic explosion, after all, the best concoctions always come from riding on the edge of failure. The Water Pillar was an endless geyser rising from a bronze cauldron. Water in motion, a force that turned mountains into valleys, but controlled by human ambition, cleverness and will. These were the tools with which I forged my weapons, the alchemical arsenal that had earned me my place and reputation. The conjoined forces of the trio fed upon each other, one of my two virtuous circles, ramping up and storing power for my attempt at ascension.
The Circle of the Soul stood in a similar formation beside it. The creation of these pillars had been a more personal experience. She had mulled over the contents of her mind and soul, looking for the three concepts that could drive personal growth and change. Death had been the obvious choice. Cultivation is often envisaged as a fight against it, an attempt to slay ones own mortality. For Minervina though, death was an old friend. Her father's death had put her on the long road to the Dawn Fortress all those years ago, and since then it has been a constant companion. She had resolved to work with Death, not against it, to take the fruit of the tree of bone that stood proudly in the purple lake and share it freely with her enemies.
Revelation and Intent were the remaining Pillars of the Soul Circle. Two sides to the same coin. They looked similar at first glance. Tall, transparent columns of fine glass, both representative of clear thoughts and calm decision-making. The intelligent choices of a rational mind pursing wisdom, distilled and given physical shape. Minervina was certain the mythical philosopher-kings of the ancient Optimatoi would have sat on thrones forged of similar substances. Reach out and touch them though, and the little differences become apparent. Intent is a thing of grit, determination, the discipline to get up each damned day and keep making the right choices, keep grafting, keep ploughing on through the tedium, the pain and the frustration. Its surface is rough enough to take the skin of your hand, and it's strong enough to hold up the world. Touch Revelation and you will either find it as downy as a princesses pillow or sharp enough to cut Old Gold himself. It's a wild thing, originality and imagination barely bridled and wrestled into a somewhat concrete shape. With these combined powers her mental acuity and more importantly her self awareness had reached new heights. Transformation could be a deliberate process as well as a natural one, and with these tools, she carved out each individual paving stone of her golden road, building her path to enlightenment with exacting care and precision.
By conventional wisdom, her Dao of the Eternal Crucible should be almost complete. So why did she feel like something was absent? Like a child constantly prodding the cavity of a lost tooth, the Poison Witch can simply not leave the sensation alone. Perhaps once she conjures the final Pillar, it will finally fade.
Finding the seventh pillar had been difficult, but she had achieved it after much reflection. It had always been there, every year of her life, a constant presence that guided her thoughts, her actions, shaped and moulded the core of her very being. More than anything else, it was the reason she was here. Outside of just herself, it was the greatest power her species had developed, the foundation for all civilization and advancement. The bedrock of culture and science. Without it you were lost, an animal in human skin, pitiful and sickly. It was the reason she risked her life over and over, why she committed almost every waking hour to advancement in one form or another.
It was a vast, amorphous idea. She could feel her Dao stretch and buckle trying to contain it. It was too much, too ambitious a concept for one so small to try and touch. Had she ignored her own warnings? Had she overreached in her eagerness to grasp the stars?
In the material world, Minervina clutched an iridescent jewel the size of her own head, it gleamed with light from its finely cut facets, its glassy surface unmarred apart from the wax seal of a Clan that was coming to hate her with a passion. With a shudder, it first dulled, then cracked, and finally collapsed into a cloud of sweet-smelling ashes. Divine power, wrenched from the marrow of the earth, floods the Golden Devils body. Power enough to defy heaven a moment longer, power enough to take one more step down her path.
The seventh pillar rises from the watery depths of her Dantian in a single, smooth motion. Its gold gleam a mirror of her own skin, the patina of verdigris a testament to endurance and longevity. The Clan, her service and her home, had always been at the centre of her journey. With this seventh Pillar, Community, her soul would always reflect that truth forevermore. She smiles, full of pride at this accomplishment.
Proud, but still not satisfied.
"It's not finished, something is missing. Perhaps…." Without breaking her meditation, Minervina reaches into her spatial pouch and procures two more of the plundered Jingshen Core Level Spirit Stones. An obscene amount of wealth, but she has to find the source of her dissatisfaction. If she can push just a little further.
Twice more in rapid succession, immense power rocks the Qi Sea of Minervina's dantian. Lightning storms form overhead, waves crash into the Pillar-Islands with the force of collapsing castle walls, and winds strong enough to flay the flesh from bone circle mindlessly.
Rather than shattering, the Pillars strengthen under the onslaught. Some blaze brighter, others grow taller, all of them shift position in a manner both incredibly minuscule and deeply significant. The resulting sound and sensation reminded Minervina of the first good stretch after a nights sleep when your joints and bones snap back into place, only magnified many thousand times over.
"Alignment….true alignment. So, this is the Great Circle realm?" Minervina took a moment to indulge in the miracle of her achievement. Conventional wisdom stated it was the work of fifty years to go from forging your final pillar to being ready to even attempt to forge a true Core. She had done it in a single afternoon.
"Well, the kings ransom of stolen Stones certainly helped."
Even now, she saw how it would happen. With her new Community Pillar to act as its heart, she could see how the Pillars could seamlessly meld into one another, giving birth to her Eternal Crucible, a source of power far beyond anything she had grasped before. It was in her grasp already, oh she might not find her breakthrough tonight, but the path was clear before her, it would be smooth and steady and safe even from the cursed Tribulation that was her Optimatoi birthright.
"So why am I still not satisfied?" Despite the evening's achievements, the sensation of something being missing was stronger than ever.
She had achieved her goals, the path she had drawn up all those years ago, after all the tears, pain and suffering down the decades, she was finally here. She should be jubilant.
"Is this really everything? Is this really enough?" The Legates and the Council tried to keep it quiet, but for all their praise for the Stoic virtues, her Clan members were all terrible gossips at heart. The Heavens were calling forth a wave of geniuses, a Heroic Era. Heavens Chosen would do battle for the fates of clan's, sects and empires aplenty. But the Optimatoi lacked heavens favour, our good seeds didn't get divine omens to signal their birth. Only through stubborn work and innate brilliance would our champions have a chance of standing as their equals. She had seen proof it could be done with her own eyes, her peers claiming powers previously thought of as myth and legend. She liked to think she had kept pace, contributed in her own small way. She could keep doing that, take her place as one of the Core Formation Cultivators we so desperately needed. It would be enough.
With a determined sigh, the Great Circle Cultivator waved her hand and broke her trance. With an effort of will, she halted her Pillars attempt to merge. "Its not enough, not yet."
She stood up, brushed herself down and made to leave her apartments for the first time in days. She needed to report her breakthrough to the Elders and her decision.
The first draft of that plan for her cultivation, the one she drew up as a Qi Condensation child, had not had just seven Pillars planned out. She might not have what it takes to climb into those mythical realms beyond the Orthodox path, but it seemed she would have no peace if she didn't at least make the attempt.
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Rough Draft, but I need to sleep! Will be back tomorrow to edit.
First Omake of Turn 10: Minervina is going to Quigai (First ever secret realm!) so I am going to try and beat my current record for wordcount. Figured we would start strong with 2000 words here before the Turns even properly begun!
The Plan for Min's pillars have remained pretty much unchanged since the very early days of the quest, It was good to finally put them in writing in an in-universe way though. Apologies if it made for a rather dense and description heavy read though.
For Omake Bonuses: A Life Saving Treasure would be appreciated (This will make 4 of those)
Minervina's consciousness rested inside the comforting embrace of her dantian as she started putting the finishing touches on almost two centuries worth of work. That's what Cultivation is really. A vast construction project, with the end goal of building a brighter, stronger, more perfect self. It had to be done with patience, forethought and diligence. Simply plugging away stubbornly at the breathing exercises will only get you so far, even if you have a will tougher than spirit-steel. Much like a grand monarchs palace, if your foundation is faulty, or even only average, you can only reach so high into the starry sky before you risk total collapse. Claw too greedily at the heavens and stalling out forever was among the kindest fates you could face.
Minervina was confident in her foundation. Her Dao of Transformation could be considered peculiar, but that didn't bother her, her path was hers alone to walk. She had laid out the stepping stones almost a century past. Sketched out the blueprint in the years before she even broke through into this Realm. She would seek out elemental energies and higher concepts that wrought transformative effects on man, beast and the natural world, her Pillars would be reflections of the greatest of these forces and once she was ready she would combine them. Merging these potent forces together would form a single Crucible of Transformation, a single Core capable of transforming both the material and the spiritual as her whims desired.
The purple lake of her Dantian had swollen to a vast, tempestuous sea in the years since her breakthrough. Decades of constant effort and a fortune of potent pills and natural treasures had given its currents power and depth she couldn't have imagined back then. The churning waters never ceased in their motion, constantly flowing, testing and changing.
Her Pillars stood tall. Lonely islands in this stormtossed sea.
Guided by her choice of profession, she had started with transformative physical forces. Since the very first faltering steps of her journey, she had always had great faith in the power of Life. It had guided her through the first Tribulation with ease. Her great oaken Pillar still stood tall, its roots buried in the bones of her enemies, its bark a resolute defence against the worlds perils, its boughs and blossom a testament to Lifes capacity to take base matter and make it breathe again. It no longer stood alone like it had when it bathed in the ire of heaven during her Tribulation. It was matched with two others in what she called 'The Circle of Flesh' and stood equidistant with the other two pillars that represented physical forces. The Pillars of Fire and Water existed in an odd, contentious harmony. The Fire was that of the Alchemist, a refiners flame that sought to catalyse, to create and forge dreams into reality. It took the form of a pill furnace, roaring and teetering on the edge of a cataclysmic explosion, after all, the best concoctions always come from riding on the edge of failure. The Water Pillar was an endless geyser rising from a bronze cauldron. Water in motion, a force that turned mountains into valleys, but controlled by human ambition, cleverness and will. These were the tools with which I forged my weapons, the alchemical arsenal that had earned me my place and reputation. The conjoined forces of the trio fed upon each other, one of my two virtuous circles, ramping up and storing power for my attempt at ascension.
The Circle of the Soul stood in a similar formation beside it. The creation of these pillars had been a more personal experience. She had mulled over the contents of her mind and soul, looking for the three concepts that could drive personal growth and change. Death had been the obvious choice. Cultivation is often envisaged as a fight against it, an attempt to slay ones own mortality. For Minervina though, death was an old friend. Her father's death had put her on the long road to the Dawn Fortress all those years ago, and since then it has been a constant companion. She had resolved to work with Death, not against it, to take the fruit of the tree of bone that stood proudly in the purple lake and share it freely with her enemies.
Revelation and Intent were the remaining Pillars of the Soul Circle. Two sides to the same coin. They looked similar at first glance. Tall, transparent columns of fine glass, both representative of clear thoughts and calm decision-making. The intelligent choices of a rational mind pursing wisdom, distilled and given physical shape. Minervina was certain the mythical philosopher-kings of the ancient Optimatoi would have sat on thrones forged of similar substances. Reach out and touch them though, and the little differences become apparent. Intent is a thing of grit, determination, the discipline to get up each damned day and keep making the right choices, keep grafting, keep ploughing on through the tedium, the pain and the frustration. Its surface is rough enough to take the skin of your hand, and it's strong enough to hold up the world. Touch Revelation and you will either find it as downy as a princesses pillow or sharp enough to cut Old Gold himself. It's a wild thing, originality and imagination barely bridled and wrestled into a somewhat concrete shape. With these combined powers her mental acuity and more importantly her self awareness had reached new heights. Transformation could be a deliberate process as well as a natural one, and with these tools, she carved out each individual paving stone of her golden road, building her path to enlightenment with exacting care and precision.
By conventional wisdom, her Dao of the Eternal Crucible should be almost complete. So why did she feel like something was absent? Like a child constantly prodding the cavity of a lost tooth, the Poison Witch can simply not leave the sensation alone. Perhaps once she conjures the final Pillar, it will finally fade.
Finding the seventh pillar had been difficult, but she had achieved it after much reflection. It had always been there, every year of her life, a constant presence that guided her thoughts, her actions, shaped and moulded the core of her very being. More than anything else, it was the reason she was here. Outside of just herself, it was the greatest power her species had developed, the foundation for all civilization and advancement. The bedrock of culture and science. Without it you were lost, an animal in human skin, pitiful and sickly. It was the reason she risked her life over and over, why she committed almost every waking hour to advancement in one form or another.
It was a vast, amorphous idea. She could feel her Dao stretch and buckle trying to contain it. It was too much, too ambitious a concept for one so small to try and touch. Had she ignored her own warnings? Had she overreached in her eagerness to grasp the stars?
In the material world, Minervina clutched an iridescent jewel the size of her own head, it gleamed with light from its finely cut facets, its glassy surface unmarred apart from the wax seal of a Clan that was coming to hate her with a passion. With a shudder, it first dulled, then cracked, and finally collapsed into a cloud of sweet-smelling ashes. Divine power, wrenched from the marrow of the earth, floods the Golden Devils body. Power enough to defy heaven a moment longer, power enough to take one more step down her path.
The seventh pillar rises from the watery depths of her Dantian in a single, smooth motion. Its gold gleam a mirror of her own skin, the patina of verdigris a testament to endurance and longevity. The Clan, her service and her home, had always been at the centre of her journey. With this seventh Pillar, Community, her soul would always reflect that truth forevermore. She smiles, full of pride at this accomplishment.
Proud, but still not satisfied.
"It's not finished, something is missing. Perhaps…." Without breaking her meditation, Minervina reaches into her spatial pouch and procures two more of the plundered Jingshen Core Level Spirit Stones. An obscene amount of wealth, but she has to find the source of her dissatisfaction. If she can push just a little further.
Twice more in rapid succession, immense power rocks the Qi Sea of Minervina's dantian. Lightning storms form overhead, waves crash into the Pillar-Islands with the force of collapsing castle walls, and winds strong enough to flay the flesh from bone circle mindlessly.
Rather than shattering, the Pillars strengthen under the onslaught. Some blaze brighter, others grow taller, all of them shift position in a manner both incredibly minuscule and deeply significant. The resulting sound and sensation reminded Minervina of the first good stretch after a nights sleep when your joints and bones snap back into place, only magnified many thousand times over.
"Alignment….true alignment. So, this is the Great Circle realm?" Minervina took a moment to indulge in the miracle of her achievement. Conventional wisdom stated it was the work of fifty years to go from forging your final pillar to being ready to even attempt to forge a true Core. She had done it in a single afternoon.
"Well, the kings ransom of stolen Stones certainly helped."
Even now, she saw how it would happen. With her new Community Pillar to act as its heart, she could see how the Pillars could seamlessly meld into one another, giving birth to her Eternal Crucible, a source of power far beyond anything she had grasped before. It was in her grasp already, oh she might not find her breakthrough tonight, but the path was clear before her, it would be smooth and steady and safe even from the cursed Tribulation that was her Optimatoi birthright.
"So why am I still not satisfied?" Despite the evening's achievements, the sensation of something being missing was stronger than ever.
She had achieved her goals, the path she had drawn up all those years ago, after all the tears, pain and suffering down the decades, she was finally here. She should be jubilant.
"Is this really everything? Is this really enough?" The Legates and the Council tried to keep it quiet, but for all their praise for the Stoic virtues, her Clan members were all terrible gossips at heart. The Heavens were calling forth a wave of geniuses, a Heroic Era. Heavens Chosen would do battle for the fates of clan's, sects and empires aplenty. But the Optimatoi lacked heavens favour, our good seeds didn't get divine omens to signal their birth. Only through stubborn work and innate brilliance would our champions have a chance of standing as their equals. She had seen proof it could be done with her own eyes, her peers claiming powers previously thought of as myth and legend. She liked to think she had kept pace, contributed in her own small way. She could keep doing that, take her place as one of the Core Formation Cultivators we so desperately needed. It would be enough.
With a determined sigh, the Great Circle Cultivator waved her hand and broke her trance. With an effort of will, she halted her Pillars attempt to merge. "Its not enough, not yet."
She stood up, brushed herself down and made to leave her apartments for the first time in days. She needed to report her breakthrough to the Elders and her decision.
The first draft of that plan for her cultivation, the one she drew up as a Qi Condensation child, had not had just seven Pillars planned out. She might not have what it takes to climb into those mythical realms beyond the Orthodox path, but it seemed she would have no peace if she didn't at least make the attempt.
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Rough Draft, but I need to sleep! Will be back tomorrow to edit.
First Omake of Turn 10: Minervina is going to Quigai (First ever secret realm!) so I am going to try and beat my current record for wordcount. Figured we would start strong with 2000 words here before the Turns even properly begun!
The Plan for Min's pillars have remained pretty much unchanged since the very early days of the quest, It was good to finally put them in writing in an in-universe way though. Apologies if it made for a rather dense and description heavy read though.
For Omake Bonuses: A Life Saving Treasure would be appreciated (This will make 4 of those)
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