Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Yue Xue - Good Seed background
(So I have a good seed and the first Omake for it do I double post or do I wait?)

Yue Xue is a young Male Cultivator who enjoys working with metal in general and aspires to work his cultivation into Blacksmithing itself. He one day hopes to create some of the swords that are wielded by those who become famous. He rightly does not care who wields his weapons in general as long as they never think about turning it on him.



He is a clan orphan; he has an Aunt and Uncle that are technically looking after him. It is more like they provide for him and make sure he is healthy, but they are quite busy with there own children leaving him to himself, they have a total of 4 kids one male child and three daughters.



When he was drifting along looking for something to do one day, he stumbled into a forge of a local non cultivator blacksmith. The sound of the clash of metal on metal was the sweetest of music to him. He had no way to describe it, to anyone who listened to him because there were no true words for what he experienced.



Everyday he would stand near that blacksmith shop and just listen until one day the blacksmith himself saw him, and well the smith looked up this child up and down and offered him a choice, clear out or follow his orders and stay a while. Xue knew right then and there that he had stumbled into his Dao completely by accident and even before cultivating.



His Cultivation does not really lend itself to combat but that does not mean he cannot fight because he has found that learning to use a weapon that he forged himself is slightly easier compared to normal. So, every time he has forged a new weapon he decided to practice until he could use it in actual combat. Most of the time going hunting with his most recent weapon of choice.



They are not a noble part of the clan itself they are just the Yue's.



Name: Yue Xue

Cultivation level: 1st Heavenstage of Qi Condensation

Age when Starting Cultivation: 16

Cool Thing: Journeyman Blacksmith at the start



Non-Cultivator Blacksmith Master: Cao Tian

Aunt: Yue Mo… Dao Path: Shadow

Uncle: Yue Su… Dao Path: Ice

Male Cousin: Yue Fen… Dao Path: Ice

Female Cousin: Yue Ping… Dao Path: Shadow

Female Cousin: Yue Ha… Dao Path: Plant

Female Cousin: Yue Heng… Dao Path: Water



Turn Accomplishments:



Things He Has Done Aka (Omake):
Journeyman Trials: Page 384
The First Commission: Page 384
The Test of Metal Marble's: Page 384


@Alectai, @TehChron, @Humbaba, @ReaderOfFate, @Kaboomatic
 
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So I have a good seed and the first Omake for it do I double post or do I wait?

I think it's ok to double post in this case but you can use this post as a buffer.

I don't think Occipitalobe has finished all the fates for this turn yet so if it's still possible and you've got an omake would you prefer to start in this turn or next?
 
Yue Xue 1 - Journeyman Trials
Journeyman Trials​



Xue was hammering metal on his final test to be allowed to be a journeyman and most likely begin his education as a cultivator for the clan. He could not help but sigh as he remembered the day he was taken in as a apprentice for the man who became like a father figure to him.



---Flashback 8 Years Ago---



Xue sat listing to the bang of metal on metal when it stopped, but the young Xue thought nothing of it because the master smith stopped quite regularly, either to heat or move metal around or put metal into the heating forge. What followed was the sound of metal hitting charcoal most likely to re-heat it so there would be no problems. Xue blinked when he felt himself lifted into the air by a strong hand.



When he looked up he saw the smith in charge of the smithy looking down at him with annoyance on his face. The smiths voice was deep and gravely but not harsh. "I told you not to sit out in the open boy, you could be hurt by the customers or by the heat, let alone the complaints I get about you."



Xue could only look up and scowl at the man. "This is the best place to listen to the hammer though, every other spot is either to far or obstructed."



The man could only sigh because there was no way he could strike one of the Bronze in any shape or form, he would probably be tortured to death, no matter how much the heavens hate them. The cotton onto an idea, no child likes hard work, so he gave him what was a sure thing in his mind. He set the boy down. "I am giving you a choice boy, become my apprentice or never come back."



Xue could only look up at the man with determination because by leaving that meant never coming back, so he will do anything he needs to do for the old man. "I will become you apprentice, what shall I call you."



The old man could only google slightly at the young child that just said he would rather work in a smithy than go play before sighing in annoyance. "I am Master Cao to you Child and what is your name young Bronze one."



"I am Yue Xue." Xue answered back just as determined as before.



"Than come Apprentice Yue, there is much for you to learn." Cao could only sigh in annoyance at his future problems. "We are making a scythe for a farmer, so when I give an order I expect it to be followed."



Xue nodded his head determined and followed behind his master.



---Present Time---



Xue slowly lowered the scythe he was making into the water and could not help the chuckle that escaped him. Afterall a scythe was the starting point for him and so it would be again as he pulled it out and looked it over for any imperfections. It was perfect which was a surprise because he could of sworn he had cracked it during the hammer phase.



He was surprised when it was snatched from his hands by his master who quickly held it and twirled it, before nodding his head. "I proclaim you Journeyman Yue."



Xue blinked and smiled up at his master who sighed before patting his head and rubbing his hand back and forth before his face got serious. "Your path will be different than mine was so I will never be able to proclaim you a master instead you must make the choice of when you are a true master yourself or find someone who can."



Xue nodded his head because this was a sad truth, he would most likely only be able to see his master rarely. Before he could get melancholy his master walked over to a chest and pulled out a hammer. "I offer this as the only gift I can give you to truly help you on your path."



Xue was surprised when he picked up a master-crafted Blacksmith hammer and looked up at his master in shock but what was a true surprise was the fist that hit him in the chest. "Now get the hell out of my store boy I have customers to take care of."

@Humbaba
 
Yue Xue 2 -The First Commission
The First Commission​



Xue sat at the small café wondering what he was supposed to do now because he has enough money to get either an order of metal or rent a store not both, it wasn't that he did not plan to become a person who ran a smithy its just, his master's place of business did not have many customers wanting an apprentice's work.



As he was groaning to himself, Xue heard someone sit down across from him, it was his older male cousin Yue Fen. Yue Fen was the stereotypical pretty boy which considering the clan is pretty rare in of itself, but Xue was pretty sure it was because of the Ice Dao that he and his father both uses. "What can I do for you Cousin Yue?"



Yue looked Xue up and down in thought before looking around making sure they were being left alone. When he turned back to Xue he hummed his voice was not soft in tone but there was this lightness compared to most males. "I wish for you to make me a spear using metals that are good with my Ice Dao Xue."



"Do you have any Idea how expensive that is, along with the fact I have no Idea what metal will blend well with your Ice?" Xue looked at his cousin annoyed because Certain metals are known to go well together, but Xue has never heard of an Ice Metal. Ice typically goes well with more natural elements rather than Metal, stuff like Staffs made of certain trees. So, in a sense the Shaft is fine, but it is the spear tip that is going to be annoying. "Also, I have never work Cultivation techniques, I have just started the path you annoying…"



Xue really wanted to strangle his cousin because he was pretty much being given an impossible task from the start by his own family. Xue would of course not back down, it was his determination that set him on this path and so he will continue to walk it with his head held high. "Fine say I find the metal that will be able to be used properly with the Dao of Ice, what by the ancestors can you give me that will be worth it?"



Yue only smirked and set something down on the table it was a pile of documents pertaining to a building. "We are giving you a test to make sure you are serious about your Dao path because as you well know we tend to be more elemental over anything else."



Xue picked up the documents and was not surprised by the fact that a building in an okay location for him to set up his smithy was being described. "How long have Aunty and Uncle been sitting on this?"



"Oh, a little over a year, they purchased it trying to figure out which business they wanted to set up there." Yue only smirked in amusement at the annoyance that his baby Cousin was radiating. "Find a metal that is good for the Ice path of Dao and Aunty and Uncle will gift the building to you or don't."



Xue sighed because that was just like Yue making it sound so simple, just give up and focus on what the family wants, but he could not Yue found himself in the path that his father had set up for him. It was not the same for Xue though because he needed to earn it, maybe his father could of helped him but Family looks after each other and in their own way Xue's Aunt and Uncle are helping.



Yue stood up and stretched out his body before looking down at his cousin understanding why his Mother and Father are giving Xue this task, because just down the street is a stack of Yin Iron. Which is created by being in slightly colder climates which while rare in clan territory is not impossible to get. "So do you have a plan Xue?"



Xue smirked and looked up at him. "I am going to have to look at all the metals available in the territory, that we currently mine and after that test them to see if any of them react to the Ice Element at all."



Yue could only sigh because the perfectionist is showing his head again making him dumb as all get out. "Whatever Xue, if you need any help any of the family is willing to help you out… well not mom and dad but my sisters are permitted to help you with your tasks."



Xue nodded his head because that sounded more than fair after all to rely on Family is pretty much the go to method along with Clan Mates. As Yue left the store Xue sighed and paid the nice waitress what he owed along with his cousin's drink and sighed because testing every metal the clan had available in territory would take a couple of months, maybe up to a year if he cultivated properly alongside that.



Xue looked at the hammer in thought before blinking because he was so focused on the metal itself that he forgot the most important part. Where was he going to forge this mysterious metal for his cousin and uncle. Xue felt his eye start twitching when he realized that he would have to rent a smith using what little money he had already.



Xue let out a groan to the ancestors of the clan and looked up to the skies themselves before speaking aloud. "I am going home and taking a nap."

@Humbaba
 
At this point, I can't see the rolling for Good Seeds who haven't had new chapters written in a while as anything but an insult. Either contact the writer and come to some sort of agreement, or put the character on ice and let the lack of progress compared to other Seeds serve as a 'punishment', if you feel one is necessary.

The mood in the Discord thread about this seems fairly upbeat, but this entire exercise just feels ghoulish to me.

Ultimately the goal isn't to punish people, but to clear off inactive characters from needing bookkeeping and Fate effort. This quest is a large amount of effort in which probably ~80% of the work doesn't involve me writing things about the core storyline. Consequently I try to set things up so any superfluous effort that isn't going towards helping active quest people see their character do stuff gets removed.

The people who suffer major penalties in this sense have largely not been inactive for a few weeks or even a few months. We're talking 5-6 months or more of inactivity. Most of them last posted in 2020. I came to the conclusion that sure, maybe it's hard to write an omake over a month and a half period, and you suffer a very minor penalty for the first turn you don't. But turns are taking roughly 1.5 months with the workload of Good Seeds I have, and so if you're in a position where you can't write 200-300 words once over a 4-5 month period, you're either in a position to DM me and say 'look, I have crazy life stuff on, please don't kill my character as I just can't be around but want them to survive until I get back', or - and this is fine! - this is not the right place for you to write a Good Seed, which it isn't for everyone.
 
Caius Venandi 3 - Taking a Loan
Caius Venandi 3 - Taking a Loan

This was nice, Caius found. After nine months of following the elder cultivator, just being able to sit down and enjoy a cup of tea with him was a breath of fresh air. It was also the only choice he had left. The cultivator before him was oddly beautiful, long straight hair tinted bronze, with flecks of green at the ends. "Well, junior, you're the second to try and negotiate with me." With a flex of their qi, the tenth stage cultivator caused the tea within their jade set to rise up and stream over to their cup. Taking a slow sip, the elder smiled warmly, waving a hand to encourage Caius to speak.

"I didn't really have a choice." Muttering despondently, as the second son of the Venandi truly wished to grab the package with his own hunting skills, the 1st Heavenstage cultivator continued to speak. "I'd need another four years to grab the treasure from an elder disciple."

"Oh?" The 10th stage cultivator's eyes twinkled in amusement. "Am I truly so intimidating? Not one of you has even touched me yet."

Shrugging, Caius responded with a description of how he would grab the treasure. "You still sleep five minutes at a time. I just have to get within 3 li of you during that period."

"And what would you have done about the traps? Any real treasure like this would have curses on it." Holding out the package towards Caius, the 1st stage cultivator resisted the urge to make a grab for it, knowing that such an action would be futile at best.

"Well, " rubbing the back of his head sheepishly, he explained his reasoning "I figured at that point you'd pass me on principle."

The elder disciple laughed in amusement, chuckling before he got a hold of himself seconds later. "Oh, to be a century younger and be young again. You need to recover this, just touching it doesn't let you win."

Caius blinked, even after 9 months no one had gotten close to even touching the treasure. Actually, recovering it and securing it? Well, there was only one way to respond to that. "Oh, we weren't meant to pass were we?"

The elder disciple leaned forward as if staring into Caius' soul. Two blue eyes stared at him, and the second son of the Venandi swallowed nervously. "The Yuan secret realm is not fit for the merely talented. And the clan doesn't want to send cultivators to their deaths." Patting the treasure, the 10th Stage Cultivator glanced at Caius' debating on something. "There's already too many damn fools that think like you. Too many first Heavenstage cultivators diving into the Yuan realm as if they're immortal. So tell me Caius, why should I help you kill yourself?"

"I … don't know?" Caius smiled awkwardly, as he sipped the rather high-quality tea. "I'm too young to offer anything, and my family isn't rich enough to buy a ticket." Taking another sip, he looked down into his cup, as if reading his fate within the tea leaves. A cultivator's work is expensive, and it only becomes more expensive the higher one's small realm is. A year of work from the elder before him would be a century of work from Caius. "If I could offer you a year's pay, would that do it?"

"It would, but I don't think you can get a loan of that size." A twinkle entered the elder's eyes, and Caius smiled at the words that followed. "Unless I gave you one."

"Would you?" Tilting his head slightly, Caius grinned, making his offer. "Let's say that my contribution points go to you until I earn enough for a Qi restoring pill?"

The elder's smile grew wider. "Two and we have a deal, it shouldn't take you more than a few decades. Perhaps even two if you get lucky in the Yuan realm."

Caius just smiled in response, and he received the ticket. Along with the treasure that was once held by an elder disciple. "My thanks, Elder … "

"If you live through the next decade, I'll share my name."

World Count: 711
 
Shennong 4 - Past Lessons Learned
(AN: Alright, I'll admit: I kinda lost interest in the thread for a while, along with wuxia in general. But, I've recently been rereading an old favorite of mine and it reignited some interest in the genre, so I'm coming back with a new Omake. Here goes!)

Shennong Omake - Past Lessons Learned

Late in the night at the Golden Devils Sect, one of the many Heavenstage cultivators was...cultivating. More Specifically, the member Shennong of the formerly extinct Golden Eye clan. For a good few decades, Shennong had been met with success, frankly too much success. And it had shown.

'I was too arrogant. I managed to fall into on of the capital pits of Cultivating.'

Despite having what some would call a Heaven sent level of luck in his early days of cultivation, Shennong had not tried to exceed expectations, instead coasting along. He fell into the pit of ennui, where his days and years had been filled with nothing but lazy alchemy. His lack of battle training had shown, with him relying on the Peacebound Scabbard too much. For now, he would need to get himself back into "the game" as it was, and if that meant reinventing himself, then so be it.

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"Look, it's Shennong!"

"The rumored alchemy fiend? What's he doing out at the training field? I thought all he did was stay in the Alchemy grounds..."

"Shh! He might hear you!"

Shennong had indeed heard the whispers on the training grounds. Unfortunately, they were all true. He had shut himself away, just to sate what was quickly becoming clear to him as an addiction to alchemy. This would not stand.

Before long, he came to the Foundation Establishment Training Master, a Achilles Myrmidon. Quickly noticing the approaching Cultivator, he gave a perfunctory bow. "Younger brother Shennong? What brings you to the training fields?"

Instead of giving a reply, Shennong proceeded to give a bow, with one hand balled up and the other clasped around it. A classic symbol of fealty...or apology.

Surprised, Achilles gave a similar, if lighter in height bow, before asking "What do you apologize for, Younger brother?"

His eyes closed and face solemn, Shennong steeled himself.

"I wish to apologize for my conduct and wish to beg for instruction."

Whispers quickly broke out on the training grounds, but neither Shennong nor Achilles paid attention to them.

"Oh? What conduct do you wish to apologize for?"

"I have committed a capital sin, and have allowed myself to stagnate. Recent...events have led me to recognizing my situation, and I have realized I must rectify it. If I must put Alchemy to the side for the moment, then so be it."

An eyebrow quirked. "And why should I instruct you? You yourself have said it is a capital sin to Stagnate, and not an easy pit to climb out of. Why should I put in effort if it will potentially go to waste?"

"Because in this brutal world, one must adapt or die. If I did not do everything to survive two tribulations ago, I would not be here. So, I must reinvent myself."

Achilles studied Shennong...before giving a very short nod. Deep within his mind, Shennong cringed. Achilles only gave nods that shallow if someone had disappointed him.

"Very well. Head to the first training field. I will come to test where you are when I have a moment."

While Shennong had wanted to argue, cite his higher level of cultivation compared to the others...Achilles wouldn't care. All trainees who weren't foundation building were the same in his eyes. So, Shennong went...with a multitude of whispers following, rumors sure to sprout from it.

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"Weak. You were not lying when you said you had fallen to sloth."

It had taken barely fifteen seconds for Shennong to find the wooden spear tip poking his neck. While he couldn't be expected to beat a Foundation building expert, he should have taken longer to 'die'!

"Again."

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"Again."

This time, it took 17 seconds.

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"Again."

Next, it took 21.

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Then, 24 seconds.

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It took over fifty matches before Shennong could last a whole thirty seconds. Over 200 to last forty five, and over 400 for him to last a minute.

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"You know, you aren't the first to come to me and declare they had been slacking. They would declare with fire in their eyes that they would not falter."

Everything burned. Even a half-dead devil bee would look better than Shennong at this moment. Achilles was standing off to the side, seemingly murmuring to himself.

"Their bodies were usually found out in the wild three weeks later, because they thought they needed to prove themselves."

Only three? It had only been a day, and Shennong had wanted to prove that he deserved this.

"You're more headstrong than those fools, and this time I won't be lenient. Until you can last ten minutes in this ring, I am using my authority as training field master to bar you from taking missions outside the sect."

Unacceptable. How would he gather ingredients?

"Until you can last three, I'm also barring you from practicing Alchemy. If I even so much as think you're making a pill, even under orders from the Sect Master himself, I'll have you locked into isolation."

"WHAT!?" That was too much! Alchemy was his passion, and this man would try to bar him from it!?

"Don't take that tone before I force you to take Array carving lesson as well. You wish to gain strength? Then you must earn it, and that means that anything that you like is a detriment. It is a shackle, one you placed on your ankle yourself. Now get off of my field and get some sleep."

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The next day, His only artifact was taken from him. He must relearn everything, and relying on something that reduces potential damage is a detriment.

It took him 3000 matches before he could last 75 seconds.

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After 3 months, he could last for 100 seconds. It was also at that point that Achilles had forced him into learning formations. Whether made by artifacts or other cultivators, he was required to know the exact positioning and requirements for every common and uncommon formation of the sect. Apparently Achilles was so hard on it that Shennong had been caught cultivating and muttering the exact requirements for a perfect Tiger's Claw formation.

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After a year, he only managed to add ten seconds. Achilles had taken notice of this, and had been even more brutal, beating down Shennong's time back to the 30 second range.

However, the last straw was when Shennong had learned he had been volunteered for Array carving lessons.

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"I refuse."

"You don't have a choice. You have been slacking, and I told you that I would do whatever it takes to force you back to competence. If that means sending you to learn, then so be-"

"I SAID I REFUSE!"

At this, Achilles froze, his posture stiffening greatly. He relaxed, but gained a murderous look in his eye.

His hand came out-

Shennong braced-

The hand came faster-

His arms lashed out-


And Shennong caught the slap millimeters before it would have slapped him.

For a moment, Achilles was inscrutable. Then, in the barest corner of his eye, Shennong saw a flash of approval.

"Good. At least you kept something. Most weren't able to react, and proved to me they learned nothing. At least you remembered the first rule."

Unbidden, the rule flashed in his mind. "Always be ready."

"I will retract the Array carving instructions, but by the end of the next year I expect at least thirty seconds improvement. This is you only chance now."

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At the end of the second year, Shennong managed two minutes.

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The third year netted him 2:30, while the fourth granted three minutes. Despite regaining his privileges with Alchemy, Shennong did not return to the Alchemy Pavillion.

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After five years, he could manage five minutes. Ten netted him seven and a half, with Achilles fighting at a first level Foundation establishing Expert.

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At a whole twenty years, Shennong had managed ten minutes. Achilles had been a harsh teacher, but an effective one nonetheless. Bruised and battered, Shennong had persevered, and in so found a greater strength of will. He would not fail.

Before his next mission, Achilles took him off to the side.

"It has been an interesting project, to pull you out of the mud. I could see the glimmer of a shining gem, but the tar of ennui had covered it, and during the first year it seemed that nothing I could do would get the tar off, merely shave off the top layer."

"Yet, the gem never cracked or broke, even when I took a hammer to it. It absorbed it, understood it, and reinforced itself with it."

"Stand proud Shennong, for even if you endure the harshest ridicule, the most scathing remarks, the most humiliating slaps upon the face, you have faced something even more frightening than all of those altogether: You have faced yourself."

"Now go and prove to the world your strength."

And with that, Shennong set off.


Final word count: 1532 Words
Preferred Reward: Cultivation bonus


(PS: I don't mind if this is put into the turn 12 omake count, but I kinda want it to be on the turn 11 count. I'll respect any judgement @occipitallobe gives me.)
 
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Missing one turn here and there isn't a big deal at all. Like, if you write an omake every 2-3 months, you should be ok - though you probably won't do crazy well. If you stretch that out to 4-6 months, you're probably going to suffer.
Sure, and I'm not here to complain.

You should still put somewhere people can see that inactive Good Seeds will eventually be killed off by you for bookkeeping purposes, and that a omake writer can RETIRE a Good Seed if they feel they no longer can play in the omake pool.
 
Sure, and I'm not here to complain.

You should still put somewhere people can see that inactive Good Seeds will eventually be killed off by you for bookkeeping purposes, and that a omake writer can RETIRE a Good Seed if they feel they no longer can play in the omake pool.

Statistically, all inactive Good Seeds will eventually die. The expected lifespan of one isn't huge. The fact that this process (on average) has been sped up from roughly 1 year to around 6 months isn't something I'm overly concerned with communicating. I have a consistently increasing penalty for being inactive, but if you're not watching at all to see what happens for half a year or more as your Good Seed slowly circles the drain more and more, trying to communicate with you is at the bottom of my priority list, sorry.

I've made note of retirement as an option for those who prefer it to death, though in the new Good Seed info threadmark.
 
Statistically, all inactive Good Seeds will eventually die. The expected lifespan of one isn't huge. The fact that this process (on average) has been sped up from roughly 1 year to around 6 months isn't something I'm overly concerned with communicating. I have a consistently increasing penalty for being inactive, but if you're not watching at all to see what happens for half a year or more as your Good Seed slowly circles the drain more and more, trying to communicate with you is at the bottom of my priority list, sorry.

I've made note of retirement as an option for those who prefer it to death, though in the new Good Seed info threadmark.

Frankly, writing fates for each and every Good Seeds each turn almost seems like an herculean task to me considering the huge number.

Hell, the reason I haven't seriously considered writing one myself is that there is a point where it might just become unmanagable as the quest grows and grows in readership. I'm quite amazed by Occipital Lobe's current success at juggling the current amount of Good Seeds and probably would be much more cutthroat were I in his shoes having to read all those Omakes and write dozens of fates every single turn.

That's some dedication right there!
 
Katha Theodoros 3 - A Prodigal Prodigy
Katha Theodoros 3 - A Prodigal Prodigy

Rathos watched as her sister departed for parts unknown for what might be the last time. He seared every detail into his mind, the deep red of her hair, the tanned bronze of her skin, their father's sword around her belt and the smile she had given him before they left; the first she'd smiled since their mother died.

It was suicide to head to a Secret Realm right now, Rathos knew; even those who had reached the peak of their Great Realm and dared to seek out the riches of those places often paid dearly for their avarice. Two thirds of such treasure hunters died without a trace; many others returned with nothing to show but crippling wounds and empty hands. But his sister was right, she had no other option. Katha Theodoros was talented at a great many things, but cultivation was not one of them.

She would either die today or in one hundred years. The path to Immortality was invariably soaked in blood, but more so than even their demonic peers and especially the Righteous Paths, the life of the Optimatoi was paved with death and sacrifice, both big and small, meaningful and futile.

Still, his hand clenched tightly about the shattered sword hilt that was dedicated to their mother, not even twenty years dead. Her body had been rendered into gravebronze, as was Golden Devil tradition, and the family had interred the heartbronze into the crypt and used the rest, as was Theodoroi tradition. She had died in a similar fashion, pursuing power through risky ventures because there was - or at least, she felt there was - no other option. Either she would die that day or she would die in twenty years.

And Riala Theodoros died that day, not in twenty years.

His grip tightened, until his skin began to grind and his bones began to creak. His whole arm tensed and shuddered as if it were a dam about to burst. Then, he relaxed it, took a deep breath, and tenderly returned his mother's sword hilt to his satchel. Rage would get him nowhere, a lesson hard-won as a child, even as it occasionally battered on the doors of his self-control. He had already resolved to let her walk her path, even if it meant she would die today, just like mother died that day. Even if Rathos were to run over to Katha and drag her back by the wrist, what would that accomplish?

Still, the decision hurt no less.

He made for the family's mausoleum, weathering the gaze of countless generations of family Elders as he crossed the halls of the Theodoroi estate. It was an old home, perhaps even brought over to the desert through ancient sorceries and rituals that the family had no point in using, and the old homes of old families had the portraits of old men and women everywhere. Their scrutiny was everywhere, the disappointment on their old gnarled faces clearly evident. How the Theodoroi have fallen, Vanguard of the Legions and victors of a thousand battles. Aggressive, tireless, prideful and powerful, they once stood as pillars of the Sea Conquering Army, heroes of the Optimatoi.

Now they were a crumbling homestead, a small spirit mine, a tiny family and a graveyard of treasure, gathering dust as they awaited a worthy scion.

Their eyes drilled holes into his back as he passed, expectant of the last true heir of the Theodoroi. He was used to it, just as Katha was used to the abuses their grandfather heaped upon her for failing to measure up.

And as he arrived at his mother's tombstone, looking up at the jade box that contained the heartbronze of Riala Theodoros, Rathos tensed. Someone was with him.

No, he realised. Someone had long been tailing him. What he thought were the gazes of ancestors long past were the expectant eyes of an old man.

He turned and bowed, his fist meeting his palm. "Good morning, grandfather. I had thought you'd already given respect."

Tormenos Theodoroi returned the greeting and bowed as well, young man and old man rising up together. Wizened and old, the Foundation Establishment Cultivator may well outlive them all. He raised his hand and stroked his chin, thumb and middle finger meeting at the end of his goatee. "Has she gone?" Tormenos asked, his icy blue eyes hard.

Rathos tensed, but he quickly quashed the frustrations welling up within him. Why hadn't he seen her off himself? "Yes," he replied evenly, unable to meet his gaze. "She will join up with the others and be off to the mountains before sunset. Then afterwards…" He trailed off, unsure what to say; not to his grandfather, but to himself. "Afterwards, she will return."

Tormenos nodded. Still stroking his chin, he stepped past his grandson and looked tenderly at his eldest daughter's crypt. Rathos knew that his grandfather spent much of his time here, quietly mourning the loss of Riala. Whether he grieved for his daughter or merely lamented the loss of such a talent for the clan, he could never be sure. And likely would never be sure, he knew. The restoration of the Theodoroi to any degree of prominence had long been an obsession for his grandfather, after he found that he, too, was incapable of ascending to the next Great Realm. Just like the ten generations of Theodoroi Patriarchs and Matriarchs before him, a truly pitiful state.

Nothing was beyond him anymore. Nothing else burned within him, either; Rathos did not know what happened to his grandfather to turn him so cold, but all that remained of the old cultivator now was the restoration of the Clan and the elegant conduct of its remaining members.

He looked at his daughter's jade urn for many long minutes, searing every grove and every curve into the well worn edges of his mind once again. Then, Tormenos sighed, shook his head, and muttered to himself. "Such a waste," he said then, just as he had said time and time again, about a great many, many topics. Katha's aptitude for cultivation. Her filial piety. Her willingness to do her duty for the clan. And always always always, the death of his daughter before she could sire more children, for the good of the Theodoroi.

Such a waste. Always a waste. Forever, it was about waste.

What were lives but resources to an old monster like Tormenos? What good was blood for, but to sire more blood and be traded for stavraton or contribution points?

Another sigh. Another shake of the head. And Tormenos turned to him.

"That is good, Rathos. I hope my amulet will do her good."

Rathos froze. It was not meant to be known so soon. Katha was still within the city. If he found out, he could easily find her and take it back, and then--

"Peace, my boy." Tormenos' hand was already on his shoulder, a soft clap of reassurance. "I will not take it back from her. You care for your sister, and such feelings are commendable, a clear indication of your virtue." His grandfather's… not quite smile, but the tenderness of the quirk to his lips faded and his expression hardened. "But such larceny betrays a lack of filial piety. You disrespect me with such actions, and so you disrespect the clan."

Rathos looked at him, stunned, but he quickly recovered, blinked, and frowned. "I mean no such thing, grandfather. I was simply watching out for my sister in what way I could."

"So you would beg for forgiveness, rather than seek permission to begin with?"

"No such thing, grandfather," Rathos replied evenly. "If I am to be punished, then punish me. But I will not apologise."

Silence. Tormenos regarded him, once more stroking his beard, middle finger and thumb trailing the contours of his jaw and meeting at the end of his goatee. Then he shook his head again and muttered under his breath. "Such a waste," the old man sighed. He turned once more to Riala's grave, once more regarding her jade urn. "Such a waste."

Anger, boiling fury, bubbled within Rathos' chest, and it was almost impossible to contain it. Only the fear of retaliation, what affection he had for his grandfather, and the sincere desire not to desecrate his mother's grave with violence, stayed his hand. Were he not a gentle soul, his fist would have flown by now.

But he held onto this feeling, clutching it tightly. Katha was not a waste. She was his sister, and she was loved, painfully so. The old man may no longer understand that, but he does. And the woman whose grave they both stand before, where he nearly disrespected his grandfather, understood it too.

Then, his grandfather raised a sleeve to his eye and wiped at his eyes.

It was the first time Rathos ever saw him shed a tear.

"I wish Katha all the best," he said, to no one in particular. Hands clapped together, he bowed his head to his daughter's grave. "Watch over her, Riala. Now more than ever, your daughter needs you."

Rathos watched, transfixed. It was a rare moment of humanity for the old man, the first he'd ever seen. A thousand questions brimmed from within him now; was his grandfather an old monster, or simply a troubled old man? Did he truly love his granddaughter or did he only realise it now? Was he simply looking to send her off to a Secret Realm, a disposable heir who may bring riches but whose loss was inconsequential?

Did any of this matter? Was it not Katha's decision, in the end? Shouldn't they all be able to pray for her, in their own way?

Quietly, he brought his hands together, bowed his head, and prayed upon his mother's grave as well.

Wishing, desperately, with all his heart, that she would be safe.

----

The mountains were, befitting the special kind of hell they were, not at all safe.

The Optimatoi did not have a monopoly over the Yuan Secret Realm. The Yuan Clan - from whom the Secret Realm took its name, hence Yuan Secret Realm - sold ballot tickets for the Secret Realm every twenty years, of which the Golden Devils had claimed a great deal but not nearly all of them. In these Secret Realms, diplomacy between great powers was often an afterthought, wholly deniable in pursuit of wealth and prestige and power beyond reckoning. Conflict within Secret Realms between participants was all too common.

And she was just weak enough, and just isolated enough from the rest of the Optimatoi who had come along for the excursion, for a number of the Jingshen to take a liking to her.

"Insolent bitch! Your muddy blood has no right to strike back against me! Know your place, Golden Devil, and die screaming!"

It had been a simple altercation. A Jingshen scion with wandering eyes and itchy hands had offered to camp with her, since they were alone and the foothills about the mountains were dangerous anyhow. She had accepted, though at a distance, because despite everything being alone was asking to be beset upon by the beasts of the mountains. So she accepted, knowing full well what might happen. She had inherited her mother's beauty - some say more than her by handfuls - and it was simply the way of boys to be… well, boys.

So when the Jingshen scion - Wu or Hu or Xu or whoever-the-fuck - decided to 'deepen ties between our Clans', she kicked him in the jaw and nearly cut his tongue out.

Perhaps she should have. Katha had stayed her blade, because murder might be deniable in a Secret Realm but it was not excusable. That had simply given the scion ample time to call upon his flunkies - brothers, allies, juniors, it did not matter at the time and it simply did not matter now - and they had beset upon her like mad dogs or irate children, whichever was the more vicious of the two.

Taking flight into the mountains was the only real option. Night had fallen and her supplies had all been left behind, but each of those boys were in a higher Small Realm than her and outnumbered her besides. They were faster, stronger, and had more stamina.

Her only chance was the mountains and the beasts that lurked within. Murderous, monstrous, ten thousand lions in a den for one hundred, even one day on those cliff faces would be a fight for survival. It was foolhardy to think that she, alone, would be a less enticing target than four or six boys in a group, but it was her only chance.

Coming to the Yuan Secret Realm was a risk to begin with. This was simply a choice between certain death and almost certain death.

Receiving the token from the silver senior had been an unmitigated boon. Nothing would ever change that.

Excel or Die. Unless she walked this path, today or in a hundred years, she would be dead.

The trees rustled in their wake, the air whooshing and the branches crackling. Great flocks of birds took flight, seeking refuge away from the least of conflicts between the least of Cultivators. Each punch split tree trunks, each sweeping kick shattered ancient wood and toppled rocky spires. An overhead chop, caught by the flat of Katha's blade, sent her groundward into the underbrush and buried her feet in ankle-deep soil. It was a ruckus, unrelenting pressure Katha could not hope to endure. Hiding and fleeing was her best option, but she was weak and they were many. She simply could not hide for long.

But then, the roar of a Jade-Crowned Tiger rippled through the forest, catching the ears of even the tone-deaf Jingshen scions. A beast in Foundation Establishment, even its errant tail flicks could spell their end in seconds. Another roar, and the Jingshen fled.

Katha freed herself as best she could too, but flight was beyond her. She was too tired, too slow, and alone. The perfect prey. Her only option was hiding and waiting out the predator.

Through the underbrush, despite the darkness, Katha saw it. A cave, too dark to see what was within, almost too small for her to fit through. But desperation was a powerful motivator, and she was driven by that and fear besides.

She charged through, the Crowned Tiger hot on her heels. She made it through, a breath from the Tiger's claws. It huffed contemptuously, then left for better meals.

Within, Katha heaved a sigh in relief. Another day won, despite the danger. She might yet get out of this place. But the entrance was untenable; she had to find another way out.

Gathering her sword and adjusting her clothes, Katha headed deeper into the cave.

----

As she ventured deeper into the cave, there was light. Faint, pulsing, but present.

Half of her felt it was a danger. The other believed it only went deeper into the mountain, no closer to freedom. Katha pursued it regardless, driven not by higher thought but simple instinct. Darkness was frightening, dangerous, and she sought safety. Certainty, if nothing else, so she could see the dangers that lurked within the mountain.

So she ventured, feeling more than hearing every drip of water, every echoing scrape of her sandals on the coarse stone, the yawning, deafening silence of her own thoughts.

"So, an aspirant finally approaches."

Then, she saw it, even though she hadn't in the moments prior. Transposed before her was the light, white and pusing, blinding yet inviting, warm but powerful beyond reason, beyond imagining. A white beetle larger than a house suspended itself in mid-air, its six legs arrayed in a mundra about it, a position of power. As it spoke, its eyes flashed, its voice thunder and its will imposed.

A Horned Scion Beetle, a truly superior beast, enlightened beyond measure to a degree she could not even comprehend.

And when it looked over her, the beetle clicked its mandibles dismissively. "Pitiful. This is the mettle of the scion presented to me? What a pathetic junior."

"...M-Me?" She asked, pointing to herself.

The beetle clicked its mandibles, a sharp and piercing sound that hurt her ears. "There is none other. Obviously, otherwise you would not be chosen. But," it continued, with a heavy heart, "You are the only applicant to use the Array. While you are inferior, the place must be given to someone. Do you wish to enter?"

And there it was, the promise of the Secret Realm. It was a means to become more, to gain the power she sought. But this weighed heavily on Katha. This power was not earned. She did not slay great beasts to claim their spirit cores, or amass the resources to cultivate herself. She simply stumbled into a cave and found power offered to her upon a silver platter.

"...Is there no one else?"

Another derisive click of the mandibles. "Many many questions. Many many words. Yet you say nothing and mean nothing. Yes or no, scion. Do you wish to enter?"

There was no one, then. Katha was the only applicant - and, by dint of that, the winner. There was no telling what this power would cost her. The trials that would yet await her, the dangers right beyond the cave. That Jingshen boy and his friends would be gearing up for revenge soon enough while they could still exact it, and alone in the mountains she could not possibly measure up to those animals.

In the end, earned or not, power was power. She sought the power to defy the heavens, and now that power was waiting for her to claim it. Such an opportunity would never come again, and as an inferior cultivator she could do nothing but take such an opportunity as it presented itself.

With a deep breath, she looked up at the Horned Scion Beetle as it rearranged its legs, forming the Mundra of Decision, and nodded. "Yes."

"Hmph. Come with me. This Array will raise a proper scion yet."

----

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It has been ten long years since Rathos has seen his sister. She had sent no correspondence in that time, no message, nothing to clarify that she still lived. By now, others that had headed to the Yuan Secret Realm had begun to return, some crippled, others moderately blessed with treasures and relics of varying power. Yet Katha remained absent.

Rathos had not been idle these ten years, of course. He continued his own journey in this time, honing both the body of bronze he had been born with and his own budding interest in array carving. Though the Theodoroi were famed as warriors and generals, there was no such thing as an old family amongst the Optimatoi who did not have a branch dedicated to arrays; they were simply too valuable to the Clan and for themselves to abandon, and the Clan had taken such care to ensure that the Optimatoi maintained a common language for the formation of Arrays.

It was good, honest work, and Rathos knew he had found his calling. Battle was not for him; though he sometimes knew rage and had learned to quell the storm that sometimes stirred within, it was not a feeling he much enjoyed. The pounding of blood within his ears and rattle of sinew about his bones did not appeal to him; war was as natural to cultivators as conflict was to everyday life, and to the Optimatoi even more so.

He could fight in a formation if need be. He had long since grown accustomed to harnessing the Hoplite or fighting as part of the shieldwall. But his passion, and his talent, was with greater mechanisms and marvels of engineering. He was still young, yes, and as eldest son - possibly only child… no, perish the thought! - the house of the Theodoroi would eventually fall to him, leaving him the modest holdings and towering legacies of an ancient house ravaged by entropy and sacrifice. But he had long been decided, ever since he had picked up the chisel and hammer and laboured under Master Romnos' exacting eye, that he would become an Array Engineer.

No, he would perfect the art. He would master his hands and his Qi, then he would create wonders. And he had already secured Master Romnos' support for this; the man's eye for craft was impeccable, even if he was lackadaisical in all other parts of life. It was any wonder how he had found time for family and the mastery of a craft, with how little he actually seemed to work.

He had progressed well in his cultivation as well. Only ten years, and already in the Sixth Heavenstage. Grandfather had praised his progress, though he critiqued his form regardless, a tempering gesture to ensure the pride never swelled his head. He needn't have bothered; if there was one thing Rathos was born without, it was an ounce of pride. Every bit had to be pounded into him by Katha and life in equal measure. Ten more years and he might even break into the Eighth, though that may be a fool's hope even for those who boast of his Heavenly-Defying Talent.

Rathos shook his head. He was gifted, certainly, but he was no such Talent. He was no Rina Callista, or Aretaphilla Myia, or Xiao Yi or Ninth Prince. Rathos possessed strong blood and a sharp mind, but any number of juniors like him possessed the same, some even moreso. He lacked the iron resolve of any of them, that desire to shake the Heavens and shake the Earth with their very passage. It was a common joke amongst Rathos' friends that if one put the Theodoroi Twins together, they might actually be a half-decent legionnaire.

Oh, how little they knew. Katha had the drive. The iron-etched resolve. The two of them learned such different lessons from the death of their mother and the wounds of their father, and as fate would decree it, that meant neither of them would have a clear path ahead of them. The one with talent found his resolve shaken and his Dao uncertain, something that must be rectified before he could face the lightning and venture into Foundation Establishment. Meanwhile, the one who emerged with a core of iron had no bronze to alloy it with, and so found herself needing to take the more perilous path in order to make even a fraction of her unsteady brother's headway on the exact same journey.

It was almost comedic. A divine joke, a puppet show with no audience and no narrative but the bitterest irony, to be codified and archived and revelled in later retellings of the tale. Often, twins were born as a complementary set or as polar opposites. They would walk similar paths or diametrically opposing ones, either becoming one soul in two bodies or two souls irrevocably linked to the other's shadow. Yet his relationship with his sister was even more comedic; a single talent split into two, the ultimate compromise that satisfied no one. In one, the talent. In the other, the drive. In both, the heavy weight of expectation. In neither, a clear path to glory.

Mother had done her best to rectify this, of course. Riala Theodoros had only been in their lives a short time, but the shadow she cast even in death was frighteningly long. Climbing to the 9th Heavenstage in twenty seven years, she was there when Sha Yu City fell, already a Foundation Establishment Cultivator, Centurion and in the line of succession to become a Legate. She had fought well, on the fringes of Kinslaughterer's rampage, and though she had not been struck by the Nascent's Dao Emanations as he sought to kill the indomitable Rina Castilla, the aftermath of the battle was more than enough to show her the desperation of the Clan.

In the end, Katha was right. It all came down to power. Young Rathos did not know why his mother died, and never truly stopped to wonder why she had put herself at risk like that. For years he hated Elder Konstantinos for his role, lamenting the path to immortality he would be expected to walk as a scion of the Theodoroi. Even as he grew and matured, the trauma of loss never truly left him; given his dedication, his progress truly did mark him as a talent. Because he did not care at all.

And even now, after he knew the truth of his mother's decision and had begun to grasp even a sliver of just what Old Gold had hoped to protect the Clan from… He still could not find his core of iron. What was his truth? What lay at the end of his path?

How could his sister so quickly grasp the conclusion of her journey and head towards it with such single-minded resolution, almost to the point of obsession?

And what would it take for him to do the same?

Another sigh and Rathos shook his head. Ultimately, such navelgazing would do him no good. He was heir and he would have to walk the Path of Immortals. Perhaps the Theodoroi would rebuild, perhaps not. Perhaps his sister would come home soon… perhaps not.

Standing at the doorstep to his own home, a satchel of array tools dangling from his hip, the bronze scion couldn't help but look outwards, once more wondering where his sister had gone. Praying that she would be safe.

Nothing. Just the sun bearing down on the desert again, mauling them all with the oppressive heat. He shook his head and turned back to the door.

Then, an impression. Familiar, but immense. It was a great power, within his Great Realm but far above it. Rathos whipped back, his xiphos already half drawn.

His eyes widened.

Meeting his gaze was a woman with a pale complexion, her long red hair streaked with a single strip of metallic grey and loosely bound into a ponytail that dangled over a shoulder. On the other shoulder rested a sword, crudely hewn but composed of a material that, on cursory inspection to his spiritual senses, was brimming with power and pressure to an absurd extent. Her eyes, bright gold, were half-lidded and exhausted. Her clothes were well-worn and long assailed by the desert heat. And around her neck was an Amulet of Water's Rebuke, dusted by sand but otherwise untouched.

She had changed, but she was unmistakable.

Rathos' mouth opened.

"Katha, what the flying fuck happened to you?"

She replied with a sheepish chuckle, before biting onto her bottom lip. To anyone else, it might be a shy gesture, attractive even. To Rathos, it was more than a little distressing; past her prickly exterior, Katha was soft and easy to push around. That tell was, well, telling that her armour had been cracked.

She was flustered. Something had happened and caught her off-guard.

"It's a long story…" She replied quietly. Her eyes darted left and right. "Is… Is father home?"

Rathos remained silent. His mouth felt dry. This was not how he expected their reunion to go. Still, he had brotherly duties to fulfill, and he was never remiss. "He's going to kick your boyfriend's ass so hard, it won't even matter that he's dying."

"Boyfr--Wh--RATHOS!" Katha's face was bright red now. Not once had she threatened to kick his ass or called him a nerd. The situation was especially dire. "There's no one! Look, I found something in Yuan, it's a long story, can we talk inside?"

Rathos thought long and hard. He looked east, then west, sought wisdom in the mountains, then in the valleys. Cupping his chin, the heir of the Theodoroi consulted the wisdom of the ancients.

Finally, consensus. The bullying had gone on long enough. She was just about ready to piss herself in anxiety and that was rare for the Sword Princess. "Yeah, sure, come in, I'll get the tea. Obviously a lot has happened."

"Thanks," Katha sighed in relief. She glanced back at the town, then hurried into the house. "Nothing's going to be the same anymore," she despaired, one hand clutching her head.

"...Right." Rathos, as elder brother - if only by minutes - was sympathetic, but not that much. "So, what the hell happened to your hair?"

"Well, I met this beetle in a cave…"

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Yue Xue 3 - The Test's of Metal Marbles
The Test's of Metal Marbles

It has been a few weeks since Xue had learned the Spirit Steel Refining method, which took over half of his contribution points from his errands for the clan, you would think it would be free to encourage clan members to maybe make more of it but nope. It cost a total of 4 points which is ridiculous because the method does not help you refine other metals. Nope the method says in the text will make it so you make lesser quality when refining other metals.


Xue could not help his groan because that meant he would have to build a method from the steel technique to refine every metal he was going to be testing. Which fine Xue was willing to do but it was going to take so much work. He sighed while looking over his notebooks full of notes detailing that lay metals are pretty much the base but if you try to use it without refining the metal it is worthless. It snaps and destroys itself when pumped with Cultivator energy.


The best metal in the clan holdings from what Xue had figured out though was Cobalt and even then, that was pretty much not what he needed. Cobalt best interacts with water not ice which fine there is a difference in there Dao's, but it is the best metal available right now, maybe when the clan takes over more territory, he will find a better metal, but this is what he has.


Surprising no one in Xue's family he turned his nose up at using a metal that he did not personally refine into spirit. While he was testing metal's, he has kept a clear record of what does what, intresting enough Iron which helps make steel and steel itself was the neutral metal. Steel and Iron do not play favorites for the elements themselves.


Xue rubbed his temples because this was becoming an annoyance, but he at least has the most suitable metal for right now. It reacts best to Ice techniques giving them a slight boost in power when used for catalysts. Water techniques are able to get a double power boosts, Xue shivered slightly remembering all the explosions.


---Flashback---


"Test three of the Elemental Ice test using the clans Bronze" Xue recorded in his notebook. As Xue pushed some Ice into the Bronze he felt it start to shake which made look at it in surprise because Iron and Steel did nothing pretty much besides breaking with pressure from the energy. Xue's eyes widened before he tossed the little marble into the air and covered his head.


The ball once in the air erupted into frozen Shrapnel and tore the ground around Xue to piece's along with Xue's cover a wooden table. Xue panted and looked at the destroyed landscape, "Test one ends in failure, also note to self never use Ice in not spirit Bronze."


---Time Skip---


Xue looked around the dessert dune he was in because he was asked not to be in the town when conducting his tests. Blow up one thing and all of the sudden you are a problem. Do those people not realize that testing is explosive?


"Test number six for the Element of Ice, this time we are using Copper." Xue sighed when he finished writing the notes because so far, he has had one explosion and four duds that were completely inert. He picked up the marble of copper and looked at it worried because he could swear this time something is going to happen again.


He blinked when he felt the Copper Marble literally light itself on fire causing him to drop it in surprise. He watched as it ate the ground leaving a pitch-black pit 12 inches down. He pulled the marble out and was surprised that it was back to normal before looking at the foot deep pitch-black pit. "Alright copper does not like Ice either, at least this time it did not explode on me."


Xue blinked when he felt the marble start to shake and sighed before dropping it in the pit it made and ducking behind his table. He heard the marble shatter but not go flying and was surprised. He pulled the shards out of the ground and looked it over. "What on earth so it burns, then shatters like ice."


Xue sighed before walking towards the bag of marbles he was carrying with him. He quickly picked out the next one in line and setting it on his table. Xue poked the next Marble slightly more nervous than before because just last test Copper decided he needed a scare. "Test number seven of testing the Ice Element with Metal, this time we are testing Silver."


Xue started feeding it energy before he felt the effect take ahold of the marble and then he watches the marble shoot towards a cactus and imbed itself an inch deep in the cactus. Xue watch for a few more seconds and was surprised that the cactus started shaking as well. He quickly hid behind his table with worry and was not surprised when the cactus explodes and cover his table in cactus parts. "Alrighty than not Silver either apparently."


Xue flicked the cactus part on his table off his table and sighed, he knows that 20 marbles might be a problem but if every single one of them is a dud, he was going to be upset. He picked up the next marble and looked it over trying to remember which one it was and nodded his head. "Test number Eight of testing the Ice Element with Metal this time we are testing Cobalt."


Xue pushed his might into the little marble with interest and was surprised when the Metal started cooling but nothing else was happening. Than the marble hit critical mass which surprised Xue and made him drop it, which was extremely lucky for him. The Marble exploded with Ice Energy and froze everything around it for a good few feet. Xue looked at the frozen ground and a pedestal holding his Marble.


"Cobalt Test successful?" Xue looked at the Marble wary because it hasn't exploded yet.


---Present Time---


Xue poked the Cobalt bar nervous because this was surprisingly expensive but than again why not. Xue looked over the various modifications he had made to the Spirit Steel Method. "Spirit Cobalt Method test number 1."


Xue looked over everything and nodded his head before starting his method with worry. He was pleasantly surprised when the first part took and than watched as a violent reaction happen in the second and watched as the Cobalt crumbled into dust. "Test failed."


Xue sat on his bed and groaned aloud and bemoaned his luck and the heavens in general because he was certain if a non-clan member was attempting this. They would have gotten it on the first time. "At least it did not explode, I really do not want to lose this apartment."

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Matthias Outi 7 - Porkchops
Porkchops

There were a lot of parts of making a metal weapon, or really, considering what the goal of this whole process was, of refining metal. But to be honest, it really came down to a few parts, when you sat down a smith and asked them some questions. They'd be really rude about it if you were a complete novice or were "that kind of person," for sure, but ask enough people and get enough answers and it really boiled down to these things. You can't really hold it against them either, since simplifying a pretty important part of your craft down for some idiot who just came into your shop and didn't even have the dignity to buy anything could irritate anyone, you know?

The first step, and pretty much the most important step, is the foundation. Actually getting your materials and your workplace ready, and having an actual plan to throw this. Seems simple, but you've got no idea how many people fuck this up. You have to actually find the right materials, make sure to not get overcharged, and all that horseshit. Make sure everything's near you, make sure everything's clean and not cluttered. Nothing more embarrassing than that.

But the metal—after planning and all that, is the most important thing. Everything is limited by its base material—no matter how hard you refine or you purify or whatever, you can only hammer out so much, and all you're left with is… a bunch of metal, you know? Super pure copper is only copper. Whatever the hell they're calling Heavenly Grade Iron is still iron. You get the idea.

What? Alchemy?

Alchemy's full of fucking cheaters, you motherfuck—






It was not a dark and stormy night. That would have complicated things, Matthaias thought.

It was actually a fairly pleasant afternoon. The sun was shining, the birds were singing, and the wind wasn't blowing all that much. He should've been having a picnic or something in this weather, eating some good food, or something like that.

Well, he'd be eating something, alright.

He stomped one foot, and the bag he left on the ground leapt up. Purchasing the array stones was hideously expensive, but it was far better than either risking the clan forges and getting kicked out again, or attracting more attention. Besides—if you couldn't get a good deal on bloody metal and rocks, what's even the point of being a Golden Devil? He'd been doing a good job of flying the radar, though, even then—

Why was he trying to not get noticed again? Oh, right, because he was an idiot trying to stay where he was because of that dumb promise, even when Ana had reached Foundation, but a promise was a promise. He wouldn't be able to face the Atreidai without fulfilling it, after all.

Anyways.

His hands lashed out, and the stones set themselves out in a geometric array. He'd figure out the mechanics one day, for sure, but he was sure they wouldn't fail him. A Golden Devil would sooner die than sell a clan member a flawed array.

Or anyone who dealt with them honestly, to be honest. Professional pride is a scary thing, and considering their status as a Demonic Path sect, they lived and died on their reputation.

And now… he was going to sit down, and eat rocks.

Oh joy. Oh rapture.




The process was simple, honestly. Nothing he hadn't handled before—or anyone with the Blood of Bronze, really. What is considered edible is a little. . . flexible on campaign, and once you've got some metal flowing through your blood tossing some more down the hatch down isn't too much of a hassle. But simple wasn't the same as easy.

The chewed up and crushed ore slid down his throat like trahana soaked in yoghurt, a sharp taste on his tongue instead of the acidic aftertaste something less spiritually clean would give. It made sense, after all—it wasn't all impurity—not that the so-called impurities of ore still didn't have their uses. But he'd have consumed it happily still if it was—he'd eaten far, far worse in previous times.

Down the hatch it went, and—steps two to infinity, heat. His body's blood lit aflame, molten metal it already was. Heat treatment was critical in two parts. First, it allowed the separation of what was desired and what was not, initiating purification. Secondly, it allowed for making the metal malleable, into making it what he wanted. But that would have to wait, wait, wait until he was better. For now—he spat out the molten metal into his hands, and watched it cool.

It was an ugly thing, to be sure, but it was purified iron. Nowhere close to wrought-iron, but he would get there. He would have to. And one day, he would make wonders.

A/N: Clocking in at a short 842 words, really rushed this one out. Kind of sloppy, but it is what it is. At least one, am I right?
 
The Unimportant Assistants to the Mighty and Glorious Hong Xuan Clan
All Fates below excepting Gaius's have been outsourced. The reading and the Fate rolls were still from me, but I gave the core information about Mission outcomes and Fate outcomes to some other longrunning Good Seed writers and let them take a crack at things. If there are any major concerns, please DM/PM me here or on Discord respectively, but know I wouldn't be posting these if I hadn't read them and felt that they were well-done.




Gaius Antonius
Bonus: Tribulation Boost
Fate: Gaius entered the Yuan Secret Realm, and quickly managed to solve a Trial. In truth, an earth-maze was no barrier to him, and at the end he gained a small cultivation room bursting with Qi, advancing his cultivation by 10 years. He gained also a peculiar tiny Dragon Waterfall, ever-flowing downwards. It empowered Scylla (+2 Impact), allowing her to generate a small bubble of water around her wherever she went, and by leaping across it she could gain minor dragonlike features for a few moments, empowering her in combat. However, this is where his luck ended. The Earth-Gliding Technique saw him enter another earth maze, but this was dangerous beyond measure - the earth itself had been infused with poisons to prevent this, wounding him. He was trapped in the middle of the maze, unable to escape. He resolved himself to leave, yet could not do so without passing through the walls once more, leaving him badly wounded, the poisons crippling his ability to earth-glide, and weakening his control of many techniques substantially.

Later on, this caused a major incident in the Hong Xuan, when he fought Hong Xuan Fang Tai, a rival of his new-found friend Hong Xuan Yuan Ming. Fang Tai had beaten Yuan Ming to near-death, and Gaius managed to take Yuan Ming's spot in the tourney to assist him, aiming to make friend with a potential power in the Hong Xuan Clan in future. However, the poison and lack of control meant his strike was overbearing, and ruined three of Fang Tai's meridians, making him a poor prospect for future advancement. Afterwards, the Fang family of the Hong Xuan Clan had Yuan Ming poisoned and crippled as well, and Gaius found himself suffering several assassination attempts, escaping, but infuriating a powerful Hong Xuan family.
Impact: 15 (+7)
Cultivation: 12th Heavenstage
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 271 (+63)
Health: Healthy --> Wounded --> Badly Wounded --> Wounded

yan
Bonus: Tribulation Boost
Fate: Compared to the more ambitious Legionnaires seeking the realm of Kingship, Yan seemed to creep across the threshold unnoticed, arriving in the Thirteenth Heavenstage during his time in the Hong Xuan lands. Spending much of his time among the mortals seeking the Hong Xuan name, he accepted many a challenge among the juniors of that Sect, besting them all. However, when invited to a feast to celebrate his victory, he found himself delayed, given a lead towards a minor splinter of the former Battle Blood Cannibal Sect. While he had no difficulty destroying the cult, his hosts found his choice of priorities questionable.
Impact: 9 (+0)
Cultivation: 13th Heavenstage
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 302 (+23)
Health: Healthy --> Healthy

Lipita Delphi
Bonus: LST
Fate: Lipita Delphi is one of our newest crop of Good Seeds--bold enough to charge into Yuan shortly after completing their initial training. While normally considered a dangerous scheme, Lipita's Resonant Bronze Compass physique gave her a knack for identifying smaller--often dismissed prizes, and she was able to accumulate a great wealth of herbs and medicines capable of driving her cultivation base directly into the Great Circle of Qi Condensation (+60 Years). This did not come without cost--as her cultivation base surged, the Harrowing struck, leaving her insensate within the Man-as-World Array, blow after blow striking as her constitution tore apart, shattering her meridians and crippling her Dantian--spitting a portion out of it as an Orienting Beozar--giving her an innate sense of Qi Interactions when fashioned into a suitable tool (+2 Impact). While she escaped with her life, she was unable to contribute much to her assigned mission, and it is unclear if she will even be able to continue as a cultivator.
Impact: 2 (+2)
Cultivation: 9th Heavenstage
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 81 (+60)
Health: Healthy --> Badly Wounded --> Dead (Overkilled!) --> Crippled (LST)

Caius Venandi
Bonus: LST
Fate: Another of the young Cultivators trying their luck in the Man-as-World Array, Caius relied on his skills in fieldcraft and stealth to preserve him in his attempts to seek opportunities passed up by the mightier cultivators of the Region. He accidentally stumbled upon a group of Noble Knowledge Juniors with a Stalker's Ruin Mirror--and employed every treasure and trap he could employ to flee. Knowing when he had pushed his luck to the limit, he left Yuan territory to focus on his primary mission, teaching and instructing the neophytes of the Hong Xuan Clan how to deal with a foe that would not face them head on. Deadfalls, nets, and trick arrows flooded the fields of our vassal territory as exercises were conducted--and he acquitted himself well, gaining no small amount of thanks from his more successful students. The ones who found themselves covered in feathers though...
Impact: 0 (+0)
Cultivation: 2nd Heavenstage
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 27 (+6)
Health: Healthy --> Wounded --> Healthy (LST)

Armus Hekurion
Bonus: LST
Fate: As with many cultivators who try their luck in a Secret Realm without significant preparation, Armus found himself picking along the edges of the array, competing with the minor powers who--through destiny or some small favor to the Yuan Clan--managed to gain a pass into the Man-as-World Array. There, he found himself swiftly encircled by opportunists seeking the good luck from slaying a Golden Devil--and found himself terribly wounded--and certainly slain if he did not manage to lure many into a cave and detonate the Brazen Thunder Bead he had been given by his seniors, killing many and empowering his cultivation base to the Sixth Heavenstage (+20 Years). He then limped to safety, utilizing his new cultivation to acquit himself admirably in Hong Xuan territory... Save for an accident where he crippled Hong Xuan Lei Fan in a sparring match--his muscles seizing up in a critical moment from his injuries.
Impact: 0 (+0)
Cultivation: 6th Heavenstage
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 47 (+26)
Health: Healthy --> Dead --> Badly Wounded (LST) --> Wounded

Helel Ben Sahar
Bonus: LST
Fate: Helel's ambitions were modest, and his goals reasonable--he exercised his craft on behalf of the Hong Xuan Clan and made no small amount of advances in the process, his cultivation base rapidly approaching the Tenth Heavenstage from the proceeds. Towards the end of his tour of duty, he found himself granted two private commissions from formidable branch households--but had time only to complete one before his return to the Clan's territories, selecting the task that had greater appeal to him and offending the other household in the process.
Impact: 0 (+0)
Cultivation: 9th Heavenstage
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 96 (+30)
Health: Healthy --> Healthy

Demetrius Ceres
Bonus: Healing Treasure
Fate: Demetrius went to Hong Xuan langs with a fire in his eye: the Devilpine Sap, which he harvested nearly two centuries ago and continued to reproduce to this day, would be the perfect lynchpin for a daring plan. Sallying forth to defend the Forge of Endless Manifolds and the incredibly valuable runic arrays within, Centurion Ceres slathered both his skin and his armor in a thick coating of the sap, nearly his entire supply. When the massive spirit attacked, he walked right through its attacks, then right into its body. His thousand axe strikes would have only annoyed the monster from the outside, but from within, he gravely wounded it.
Terrified, the fire spirit fled from Demetrius for hundreds of miles, thinking the Centurion was far more powerful than he was. The second part of this gamble, for which Demetrius had risked his life, involved the participation of two other reknowned experts...
Impact: 8 (+0)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment True 1-Pillar (Fortified Pillar)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 126 (+26)
Health: Healthy --> Healthy

Diomedes Cestus
Bonus: LST
Fate: In the Yuan Secret Realm, Diomedes sought to test his luck in a deadly game against a spirit; said game involving dice, cards and tiles, all at the same time. The game was intentionally convoluted, so stupidly complex that only a Core Formation Elder would have the thought-speed to grasp the rules as the game progressed. Rather than try to follow it, Diomedes simply burned a bit of his soul for some divine luck, and played with random moves. He didn't win the jackpot, but did win a huge pille of assorted cultivation materials. (+30 cultivation years)
After this, Diomedes went west, having heard rumors of a legendary axe that could control gravity itself. Unfortunately, before he could even get there he was bitten by a Life-Hating Viper, an infamously deadly Core-level serpent. Its venom was of such obscene potency that he burned through two precious treasures to purge it. Now vulnerable, the Centurion left rather than press his(very much depleted) luck. He did, however, have the foresight to bottle up the purged venom and sell it to a poison master, who traded him a Blood-Curdling Sword for it. (+2 Impact). Not exactly a legendary weapon, but quite a brutal tool against organic opponents.
Unfortunately, this did not help the poor man against the Hong Xuan fire spirit, which he fought several times to no avail, unable to deal lasting damage with any of the tools in his arsenal. Nonetheless, he still drove the monster back from priority targets on several occasions.

Impact: 8 (+2)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment True 1-Pillar (Fortified Pillar)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 130 (+30)
Health: Healthy --> Dead --> Badly Wounded (LST Interrupt) --> Dead --> Badly Wounded (LST Interrupt)

Simon Euaerizo
Bonus: LST
Fate: Though no Foundation Expert can truly be called ordinary, Simon was perhaps the least exceptional of the Centurions who took the job. Like Muyi, he never fought the fire spirit, his charges simply never coming under attack. As he didn't need to exert himself much during the several years he spent on the job, he was able to funnel the pay right into his cultivation, advancing quickly.
Impact: 4 (+0)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment 4-Pillar
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 194 (+32)
Health: Healthy --> Wounded --> Healthy (LST)

Xiuying Ten Jiang
Bonus: LST
Fate: When Xiuying entered the Yuan Realm, she was an Early Foundation expert, with just one pillar and eyes full of hope, When she left, she was like a ragged vision of hell itself, and walked with five pillars in tow.
In the first week of her journey, Xiuying was accosted by Long Min, one of the greatest rising stars of the Seven Divine Saber Palace. Considering the very idea of a Golden Devil mastering the blade to be a joke, he challenged the heir of the Sword Law to a duel. Though both experts brought incredible powers to the clash, her opponent's cultivation was simply too far ahead, which made the difference and cost Xiuying the duel. Unwilling to kill an enemy over as simple a matter as proving a point, Long Min went on his way, though if he had realized the power of the Thousand-Year Noodle Pot he might not have been so merciful.
Left alone and humiliated in the middle of that unaturally verdant land, Xiuying was overcome with anger, as well as a burning desire to wipe away the shame she had brought to the Sword Law.
First, she cut her way through a herd of Bronze Aurochs, brewing their flank-meat into soup. (+40 cultivation years)
Next, she defeated the ghost of an ancient weapon-master that haunted a bamboo forest. The master, grateful for one last battle, flung himself into her pot, and became soup as well. (+40 cultivation years)
Finally, she found the molten slag left by a core-formation sword burnt by Dragonfire. It was useless as a weapon, but contained within it a single flash of the dragon's attack. Releasing the divine flame, she cooked one more pot of soup, ascending even higher. (+20 cultivation years)
After the year was up, Xiuying confronted Long Min once more. The Saber Palace disciple had grown stronger as well, but not as much as she had - they were evenly matched now. The second duel was far more brutal than the first, as both fighters were too prideful to give up. When Xiuying, after nearly an hour of battle, forced her opponent to surrended, she was nearly in pieces herself(Badly Wounded). As Long Min had spared her, she spared him in turn, leaving for Hong Xuan with her honor restored.
There, she took part in Demitrius' plan. He would chase the wounded spirit to her, and in a single burst of power, she would ambush it and cut it to pieces. The last step was up to Amaranth...
Impact: 10 (+0)
Cultivation: Foundation Establishment 5-Pillar (Late)
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 225 (+103)
Health: Healthy --> Dead --> Badly Wounded (LST Interrupt)

Amaranth Castellanos
Bonus: Tribulation Treasure
Fate: Through some obscene stroke of luck, our Clan gained multiple Kings in a single decade. This is a statistical anomaly of such an extreme level that many believe foul play to be involved in our fate. Nevertheless, let it be known that Amaranth succeeded in his endeavors, though perhaps not as perfectly as the last two.
While he successfully endured the tribulation and forged a single unified pillar, near the end of the ordeal, Amaranth's entire right arm and his right foot were destroyed, along with a chunk of his upper chest. He survived thanks to the same sort of priceless treasures which enable anyone to take on a Thirteenth Heavenstage tribulation with a chance of victory. Fastening some hastily-forged prosthetics, Amaranth rushed to Hong Xuan to participate in the mission, having heard of how undermanned it was and wishing to test out his bizarre new powers for himself.
His role in Demitrius' plan was simple: eat. Once Xiuying cut the fire spirit into pieces, he would consume said pieces while it was unable to effectively fight back, killing the monster and feeding his eldritch appetite for a time. This almost worked, but not quite: Xiuying, badly injured as she was, didn't quite cut deep enough - not all of the pieces were cleanly separated, and Amaranth could only take in less than a quarter of the spirit's mass before it reformed and fled. From this power, he grew himself an arm and foot of living flame, useful for all sorts of fire techniques. (+2 impact)
Impact: 10 (+2)
Cultivation: Single Pillar 1 of ??
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 312 (+12)
Health: Lightly Wounded (LST Interrupt) --> Healthy --> Dead --> Badly Wounded (LST) --> Wounded
 
The Hong Xuan Mission Results
Second Elder, this was a failure of resourcing.

Not a failure of those involved.

We sent an eclectic array of Qi Condensation juniors to the tourney, aiming to assist possible loyal scions of Hong Xuan we could turn towards the Clan in future. This array was somewhat too eclectic, unfortunately. Both too powerful and not powerful enough, the tourneys we won, we won poorly, injuring and in some cases even crippling Hong Xuan scions by mistake or through anger, and otherwise did not show a domineering enough showing to simply frighten the Hong Xuan back into line. We have made some friends, but I fear we have made more enemies.

This is a Moderate Failure in all aspects, and while we will not see the results for a century or two to come, there will certainly be some elders rising up over the coming centuries who look on us with contempt and seek to loose their bonds somewhat.

Worse was Pyre City. We underestimated the power of the spirit there, and the team we sent to capture or eliminate it was grossly undermanned. A few personal flashes of brilliance from Demetrius Ceres - a notable Foundation lad - managed to prevent an utter disaster, as the spirit would've managed to detonate a massive storage of various weapons and arrays, sufficient, Elder Hong Xuan Yi Quan noted, to probably level the city and kill anyone below Foundation Establishment in it. Pyre City hosts nearly a hundred thousand people, and the death toll would have been tremendous. Thankfully, the spirit was redirected, blazing its way out of the city through the slums. The deaths are still being tallied, but between fifteen and twenty thousand mortals died during its rampage and subsequent escape. We have won no love from the Hong Xuan Clan here, but a Moderate Failure could at least be snatched from the jaws of complete disaster.

Many of our talents have been dispatched elsewhere, and quite frankly the absurd price Hong Xuan exacted for what ended up being a completely irrelevant piece of aid has not endeared them to the Clan more generally. This failure is one in a string thereof - the expansion of Clan lands and power is leaving Hong Xuan feeling less and less relevant, and I personally hold to the view that we should find some excuse and cut them down to size, reducing their income and forcing their Elders to work for us if they wish to consistently advance. I am aware this is an unpopular view in the Office of Barbaroi but feel I must reiterate it. Why should we continue to placate a people who are so intransigent?

- Memo to the Second Elder, Foundation Expert Alexandra Sophes, Office of Barbaroi
 
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and I personally hold to the view that we should find some excuse and cut them down to size, reducing their income and forcing their Elders to work for us if they wish to consistently advance. I am aware this is an unpopular view in the Office of Barbaroi but feel I must reiterate it. Why should we continue to placate a people who are so intransigent?

I see much wisdom here.
 
Minervina Barda Chapter 31: The turning over of a hand
Minervina Chapter 31: The turning over of a hand

Never before had Sun Mei been glad to be a mortal.

Most days it seemed that the entirety of her short life she had been consumed with envy for the many powerful Cultivators that passed through their city. It seemed only natural, how else should the plain daughter of a seamstress and a day labourer feel when confronted with such wealth, grace and beauty?

She was certain that each of these distant lords and ladies must live carefree lives, full of abundance and leisure. She had longed to join their number. To transcend the painful realities of mortal flesh, to laugh in the face of age and disease and say goodbye to the hunger pangs that tormented them when times were hard.

Then, what her grandfather called 'The Time of Trials' began.

Sun Mei resolved that she would never dream of Cultivation again as she stepped through the market square, clutching her groceries to her chest. She flinched and looked away from the dozen groaning victims staked to the same poles they normally used to hold festival banners. Their beautiful bronze skin was marred now, by blood, tears and the lashing of the whip.

It turns out crucifixion kills Immortals just like it does regular men, it just takes longer.

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It had all been going so well.

Minervina allowed herself a wry chuckle as she recalled how this, her second Great Trial, had begun. As an Expert at the peak of her realm, she had been given command of a small squadron of fellow Centurions. Equipped with some of the best of the new Scorpion mounts, they were to dash into the desert and attempt the most dangerous of tasks. They would hunt the Hunters.

The heavenly power that brought the Hunters to this Sea always scattered them in the process. Alone, they would be far more vulnerable and the incredible speed of Lady Destasia's latest projects gave them a chance to take advantage of that narrow window of opportunity.

Of course, this was where the infuriating rules of this murderous farce came into play. Qi Condensation against Qi Condensation, Foundation Establishment against Foundation Establishment. A thin veneer of gentlemanly conduct from the Heavens, or more likely a way of ensuring its favoured disciples shared the wealth from their hunts more efficiently. Either way, they had to overlook the vast majority of potential targets as a quick spiritual probe revealed them to be too weak for them to attack.

It was a very different experience from her earlier battles at distant Pleuron, when they had fought with ferocious desperation against all comers. That had been a glorious day when somehow Qi Condensation strove against Core Formation and arose victorious.

This work was necessary, worthy even, but not glorious. Of the two dozen Foundation Expert Hunters they tracked down, all but three snapped their blasted tokens and escaped back to the homeland when they realised how badly outnumbered they were. Of the remaining three, she had personally taken the lives of two of them. She had taken some satisfaction from the confused expression on their faces. Clearly even in their distant land, delivering contact poisons instantly across hundreds of metres via an ancient space warping device was an unusual method of attack.

Back in the present Minervina felt her off-hand trace the outline of the delicate enchanted hand jewelry that decorated her right one. Her time in Quigai, for all its strife and bloodshed, had been worthwhile. She had emerged from the Secret Realm stronger in mind and body, the exotic talisman was just one small part of that.

Perhaps the early work going so well had been her downfall? After triumphing again and again over the Hunters, had she let herself become arrogant? She had set aside her fear of death a long time ago, even before she planted a Pillar of its Dao in her soul, but she didn't think she had lost her good sense.

Yet how else was she to explain it? When word of a powerful Foundation Stage Hunter terrorising her peers reached her, she didn't do the sensible thing. She didn't stir her group in the other direction looking for easier prey. She didn't even send off to the Dawn Fortress to ask the Elders for permission to engage or more information on the foe. She had simply ordered the march, confident in her ability to match anyone in the same Realm.

Aasmi, The Heavenly Star. Had she even been truly human?

A slip of a girl with power almost beyond comprehension for her Realm. When she first revealed herself Minervina's first thought had naturally been of Rina Callista. Was this another of the near mythical Kings of the 13th Heavenstage?

She didn't think so. Her power had lacked that hungry edge that seemed to be the trademark of the SIngle Pillar Cultivator. That was a Path that directly opposed the will of Heaven, that shoved both hands under the skin of the world and wrestled out meaty chunks of power and shoved them in the practitioner's mouth still raw and bleeding, desperate to consume it all before the blind and merciless eye of Heaven could exact its vengeance.

This girl? She turned over her hand and Heaven meekly moved to please her.

In half a heartbeat she had been surrounded by two dozen venoms and toxic dweomers, Minervina's countless hours of patient labour at the cauldron and drilling with her new weapon showing their worth. However before that heartbeat had even ended, the Hunter was surrounded by an aurora of burning, wrathful light, and the toxins were burnt away.

Don't be fooled into thinking this was some mere chemical reaction. The Poison Witch had tangled many times with Cultivators of Flame, Heat or Light. Her finest toxins operated on many levels beyond such petty physical interactions, and she had not dared to restrain herself. Mental toxins that exist only in the perceptions of the victim, conceptual venoms that attack the soul directly, subtle vapours that warp space and flesh alike. Digging deep into her reserves she included the tiniest dose of a poison that could wound the Dao of Causality itself, rendered from the blood of dead Time Shatter Disciples. The world dimmed as it materialised an inch from the girl's forehead, a crackling mass of spiteful annihilation.

A flash of heat and light, and it was gone, a fortune of time, money and labour evaporated. Aasmi hadn't even used a technique or spell, it seemed possible she was not even consciously aware of what she was doing, instead relying on some automatic function of that Heaven Sent artefact she drew on.

The next instant, she had fallen. A single casual step had brought the monstrous cultivator within arms reach. A smile on her lips and a taunt in her eyes, the Hunter had grabbed her by the throat and tossed her aside. That simple gesture had carried the power of a collapsing castle wall and had thrown her clear across the field, into the face of a nearby cliff and several paces into the hard stone of its foundations. She would have no doubt died right there and then if not for the twin blessings of her Bronze blood and Poison body. As it was, she was left broken and gasping, bones bursting out from the skin of her torso and arms. She could hear her subordinates cry out in surprise and fear, but realistically, she could no more for them. They had all gone into this mission knowing the odds were against them ever coming back. With a tear that had nothing to do with physical pain, she activated the escape talisman she had crafted specifically for the Trials.

Her pain faded away along with her physical form. She was no longer Minervina Barda, Optimatoi and Poison Mistress. Instead she was the flock, a rush of countless eyes and wings that wasted no time reaching for freedom.

To an outside observer it would look like the centurion hit the cliff side and burst into countless tiny shadows. Each shadow took the form of a dove as they took to the skies in all directions. Just a single one would need to reach safety to reform the whole and save her life.

Aasmi didn't even move to acknowledge the enchantment. Surely she could have struck down each of these shadows with but a fragment of her Light, but her eyes were elsewhere, the poison mistress far beneath her notice as her next opponent arrived. Another of the Optimatoi had arrived on the scene.

Her consciousness shattered between a thousand spiritual constructs, Minervina still found the presence of mind to wish Centurion Ceres luck. He would definitely need it.

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She came back to herself days and hundreds of miles later, a quivering wretch as shadows congealed in the abandoned husk of a peasants house in the depths of one of the countless cities that lined the Scorpion Road. The flock-mind had proven incredibly difficult to control and she was unpracticed at dealing with the consequences of this kind of personal transformation The shifting first to shadow and then back to flesh had at least put her bones back in their rightful place, but the blood in her vomit indicated that the internal injuries were far from entirely healed.

She managed to choke down a healing pill and take a meditative pose. She had a lot to think about.

After short jagged breaths turned to longer restful ones, she turned over the day's events in her mind over and over again, inspecting her Cultivation base all the while.

Her pride had taken quite a beating. In the century since Pleuron she had worked hard to develop a certain reputation for ruthless competence both on the field and off it. In the Blood Cannibal war she had stepped out of the shadows and led men in battle, scoring victories and saving lives time and time again. Her alchemical works had won accolades aplenty and her position in her Legion had soared so high it threatened that of her own Legate. When it came to trickery and espionage, her mission report on the infiltration and destruction of the Great Jingshen Mining Drill had become required reading for the latest batches of Lady Xie's spies.

A foundation built entirely on such triumphs could be revealed to be nothing more than a loose pile of sand when put under the pressure of such a defeat. For many a prodigy, this could have been a death blow. To be cast aside like a whimpering child and forced to abandon ones juniors? It was a profound humiliation. The image of Hui Lui flashed through her mind, he must be laughing at her all the way from the underworld right now. Exactly such a blow had shattered his Dao, severed his path forward, and that of many other fine men and women like him.

As for her Dao Heart, her will to power, the internal drive to grind ever onwards in the face of Heaven's spite? It was unharmed. The more she inspected her memories the more certain she was of that.

The triumphs might well be the bricks and stone of her foundation, but her struggles had given her plenty of mortar to hold it together. How could one petty tyrant, no matter how powerful, take those away from her?

Yes, she had left her men to die. Centuries ago she had watched powerless as her father died a cruel and pointless death. That had spurred her on, not slowed her down.

Yes, to lose was humiliating, but she was no stranger to losing face. She was the Devil who had masqueraded as a mortal chef for a full half-year, serving drunks and blood path fiends for a mere chance at a treasure.

Yes, her body was wracked with pain, the Hunters raw strength and blinding Light still hurting her even now, but pain and Minervina were old friends. She had for almost twenty years been condemned to the life of a crippled, poisoned old woman who polluted anything and everything she touched. Compared to that, this was nothing more than a scratch.

Her struggles had always benefited her more than her triumphs, and Minervina cut away any regrets or indecision with a scalpel's precision, promptly deciding that running into the 5th Sea princess would just be one more stepping stone on her own path to power.

In a way, the existence of such terrible threats justified her latest steps on her Path. Her decision to forgo Tribulation and attempt the 8th Pillar had drawn many Golden Core it could foster. After Quigai, she had become a little worried they were right, the sheer quantity of power needed to reach the unorthodox realm was daunting. Now she was certain again that she had made the right decision. Could any of the Elders have actually stood up to Aasmi blow for blow? She imagined even the Grand Elder could not casually have quashed that divine instrument of hers. In an age such as this one, mere orthodox methods would never truly be enough.

She was broken from her musing by the opening of the door. A mortal girl walked in, holding a bag of groceries to her chest like they were made of solid gold. She seemed distracted and full of thoughts, so it was no surprise she didn't notice the intruder until she was well into the room and had shut the door behind her.

When she did spot her, Minervina had gotten to her feet and put a hand around her mouth before she could scream. Looking over the dark house again, she realised the pain of her wounds had addled her more than she thought, the house was run down and ill kept, not abandoned.

"I mean you no harm little one. Why don't I make us some tea and have a little chat."

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Sun Mei had daydreamed about taking tea with a Cultivator many times.

Of course, in those daydreams, she had power herself, or at the very least wealth. She would be wearing a fine silk gown and laugh merrily with the beautiful ladies and flirt with dangerously handsome swordsmen in an ornate flower garden or impossibly grand hall.

She did not foresee herself fluttering around the squalid shitpile of a one-room house she shared with her grandfather, trying to simultaneously store the groceries, surreptitiously square away the worst of the mess, and hopelessly attempt to find a teacup worthy of her unexpected guest.

Fortunately, the Cultivator seemed not to notice her struggles in the least. She ignored her obvious poverty, and instead pulled out a set of worn but fine quality tea-things from an impossibly small pouch by her waist. A simple tap on the lid of the kettle set it to boiling.

"Sit child, your fussing is giving me a headache"

Mei sat down before she was even consciously aware of her legs moving. Beyond the obvious things like her bronze skin and metallic hair, something about the woman's presence seemed deeper and more significant than the town cultivators she was used to seeing.

What followed was a polite, but thorough interrogation on the state of the town and its new occupiers. After that Mei was surprised to find herself being asked about her own circumstances, her parents passing, her life with her grandfather and their struggles to find stable work. As they lapsed back into silence, she eventually dared a question of her own.

"The Devils in the square. Are you here to save them? They're in the most terrible pain?"

The answer she got was foreshadowed with a sad smile. "Do you know the best way to catch a Tiger Scorpion when it's threatening a town?"

"Erm, no?"

"You peg a goat to a convenient spot in an open field. Cut its side so its cries and blood fill the air. Then all you have to do is sit back and wait."

She pours herself more tea. Mei notes the other woman palm some kind of shimmering silver pebble in her hand that she takes alongside it. Was that a Cultivation Pill? The type she had heard about in stories?

"I can sense at least one Core Formation hunter in town who is letting his presence leak out from behind his veils. It's a trick of course. It means there are at least two more lying in wait that I can't sense. Your entire town has become a trap for a Legate. I wouldn't be surprised if one of the poor sods down there in the market is a favourite descendent, lover or personal disciple of such an august personage. The goat and the scorpion."

She pulls herself to her feet, gesturing that Mei should clean away and pack away the utensils as she gathers herself. "I can't save them. The Cores can't kill me, not if they don't want to face consequences, but they can pin me down and block me just fine while their juniors finish the job."

She puts the kettle and cups back into that wondrous pouch before pulling something out of it. A tiny sliver of green stone. She stares at it for a long moment before passing it over. "You have been helpful. Once the Trials end, take this to any Devil you can find, they will see you are well rewarded for your efforts."

Sun Mei took the jade slip reluctantly, and the question burst from her lips despite her best attempts not to ask it. "If you can't save them, what are you going to do?"

The woman turned and looked back at her, her eyes harder than bronze and colder than the moon. She clenched her right fist, the elaborate arrangement of interwoven metal bangles that covered it clattering a little as she did so. "The most, and the least that I can. I'm going to end their pain."

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I am still not happy with the other part of the Quigai arc, but I wouldn't have been happy if the turn ended without my response to Mins defeat by Aasmi being written up and included, so apologies for the chapters not being put up in chronological order.

I will be asking our wise and beloved Thread Markers to jiggle things around so they read right when I finally finish Conspiracy in Quigai Part 2.

Another 3100 words, so I at least keep my 3 Omake a turn commitment!

@ReaderOfFate @Humbaba Threadmark if you would be so kind.
 
Worse was Pyre City. We underestimated the power of the spirit there, and the team we sent to capture or eliminate it was grossly undermanned. A few personal flashes of brilliance from Demetrius Ceres - a notable Foundation lad - managed to prevent an utter disaster, as the spirit would've managed to detonate a massive storage of various weapons and arrays, sufficient, Elder Hong Xuan Yi Quan noted, to probably level the city and kill anyone below Foundation Establishment in it. Pyre City hosts nearly a hundred thousand people, and the death toll would have been tremendous. Thankfully, the spirit was redirected, blazing its way out of the city through the slums. The deaths are still being tallied, but between fifteen and twenty thousand mortals died during its rampage and subsequent escape. We have won no love from the Hong Xuan Clan here, but a Moderate Failure could at least be snatched from the jaws of complete disaster.

(Tugs at collar nervously)

Clutch move Demetrius.

(Goes to scream into a pillow)
 
Amaranth Castellanos
Bonus: Tribulation Treasure
Fate: Through some obscene stroke of luck, our Clan gained multiple Kings in a single decade. This is a statistical anomaly of such an extreme level that many believe foul play to be involved in our fate. Nevertheless, let it be known that Amaranth succeeded in his endeavors, though perhaps not as perfectly as the last two.
While he successfully endured the tribulation and forged a single unified pillar, near the end of the ordeal, Amaranth's entire right arm and his right foot were destroyed, along with a chunk of his upper chest. He survived thanks to the same sort of priceless treasures which enable anyone to take on a Thirteenth Heavenstage tribulation with a chance of victory. Fastening some hastily-forged prosthetics, Amaranth rushed to Hong Xuan to participate in the mission, having heard of how undermanned it was and wishing to test out his bizarre new powers for himself.
His role in Demitrius' plan was simple: eat. Once Xiuying cut the fire spirit into pieces, he would consume said pieces while it was unable to effectively fight back, killing the monster and feeding his eldritch appetite for a time. This almost worked, but not quite: Xiuying, badly injured as she was, didn't quite cut deep enough - not all of the pieces were cleanly separated, and Amaranth could only take in less than a quarter of the spirit's mass before it reformed and fled. From this power, he grew himself an arm and foot of living flame, useful for all sorts of fire techniques. (+2 impact)
Impact: 10 (+2)
Cultivation: Single Pillar 1 of ??
Cultivation Year-Equivalent: 312 (+12)
Health: Lightly Wounded (LST Interrupt) --> Healthy --> Dead --> Badly Wounded (LST) --> Wounded
Yay, he finally ascended! Sure, he might've rolled a nat 1 as it appears he got the Healthy -> Dead option, but you know, sometimes thirty-two times stronger than normal tribulations go messy.

Honestly, after seeing Zeno burn 2 LSTs to help Amaranth along as his Dao Protector, it only makes sense.

I'm rather excited to write it up, now that I got an idea of the overall danger-level of his tribulation.

(Also, gotta say, even though the fire spirit wasn't properly dealt with, having a BURNING HAND (and foot) is pretty badass. I have a lotta ideas already of how to tie that in for techniques. Honestly, my first thought when I saw that was "This hand of mine glows with an awesome power!")

So that'd be the Clan's third Single Pillar cultivator now, and in the next few updates, we're gonna get our fourth in. I'm hoping that's gonna get a fun reaction in the main story, considering how rare they usually are.

The state of the mission overall wasn't that great due to a low amount of participants, but I'm hoping that Bandits fares better considering it appears a ton of Seeds signed up for that Mission. Apparently roughly half of our Seeds did? Wow.
 
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