Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Yan 12- a mortal's perspective part one (960 words)
Yan 12- a mortal's perspective part one (960 words)



Yu Wang looked thoughtfully at her crossbow, her beautiful, powerful and old crossbow.

Yu Wang received the crossbow from her father, who received it from his mother, who received it from her mother, who received it from her father- Yu Wang great-great grandfather- who bought and used it in the last great gold-bee war as a militia-man for the Hua empire.

It was a powerful crossbow as Yu Wang great-great grandfather earned enough in the war to have a lord cultivator enchant it.

It was Yu Wang most valued possession, it was also the reason she was out in the ancestors forsaken desert and not back home in the city.

Yu Wang looked around the campfire, about a dozen people gathered next to the fire, some she knew and some she didn't but all of them were sitting by the fire telling stories and singing, acts that on any other day would bring certain death.

But not today and her eyes soon found the reason why.

if she didn't know better she would have thought the old lord cultivator was sleeping in his meditative pose but over the last week she saw him rip apart at least two beasts that would have normally slaughtered a whole group twice their size from that pose, in less than a minute.

He was only reason their group was so confident in their survival and the payment he offered for their services.

She still remembered how he strode into her village a top a menacing beast and offered one spirit stone for every hunter that would accompany him to accomplish a task -a task he still hasn't mentioned-, she didn't want to go at first as Yu Wang was a dutiful daughter and she remembered her ancestor stories about the cruelty and pettiness of lord cultivators.

But her all of her family pushed for her to accompany the lord cultivator, the prize offered was just too valuable, a spirit stone! It could feed her entire family for a century.

And as Yu Wang was one of the beast shots in her entire family she was the one pushed to join the lord cultivator with her ancestor crossbow, she was sure that being of the farrier sex had something to do about that choice, as she knew that her brother would have been a better choice but in the eyes of her family there was a chance the lord cultivator would claim her and her family would be elevated, she was instructed to be on her behavior and Yu Wang was a dutiful daughter.

But she was also a smart women and she didn't go into a hunt not knowing what her pray was, as that would quickly get she killed in this unforgiving desert.

And so she walked up to the only person who knew what the job was supposed to be, the lord cultivator.

"forgive me great-great grandpa for this Yu Wang is ignoring your advice about cultivators" Yu Wang thought as she sat in front lord cultivator and looked him over, he was not greatly handsome, his skin was wrinkled from old age (or so Yu Wang assumed) and working under the desert sun, his long hair and short beard were grayed, and his face was covered in wrinkles and scars, all in all he looked nothing like the stories descried a cultivator should looked but Yu Wang knew from the power he displayed that he was in fact a lord cultivator.

"honored lord cultivator I was wond-" Yu Wang was cut off when the lord cultivator raised in a stop motion, Yu Wang could hear that the music and laughter behind her abruptly stopped.

Finely, after a tense silence the cultivator spoke "you wish to know the reason that I gathered you to me?"

It Yu Wang a moment to understand that she was talked too and she hurriedly stuttered out a "y-yes".

"very well" the lord cultivator said, he opened his eyes and pointed at a dune in the direction they were heading "about half a day walk behind this dune is an old tomb of a powerful core formation cultivator, I wish to retrieve a certain treasure from it"

So were they supposed to help him carry the item back?, Yu Wang quickly discarded that line thought as she remembered that the lord cultivator puled many items from a bag that shouldn't have being able to carry them all, so that clearly wasn't what he had in mind for them.

Then she remembered one of her ancestor's stories and her bleached, he couldn't mean to use as a distraction, as he claimed his treasure, right…?

"y-you can defeat the spirits in the tomb..…right?" she asked

"I absolutely" color returned to Yu Wang face at the good news "cannot defeat the spirits of this tomb, in fact most of will probably won't need to expert themselves too much to kill me" with every word more and more of the newly returned face color drained form Yu Wang and the lord cultivator continued unnoticing her distress " fortunately for us the treasure I seek is in the position of the gate guard and all you need to do is follow my lead, stay quiet and keep your weapons close" the lord cultivator finished.

But Yu Wang was no longer listening only one thought went through her head "I should have listened to my ancestors and now I'm going to die because I didn't"

Yu Wang looked at the darkness outside the camp and calculated her chance of surviving the return journey to her village, unfortunately she was too far away to even have a small chance to do so.


"certain death ahead of me, certain death behind…. I'm doomed.
 
Janus 4 - BOSS BAI'S BIZARRE ADVENTURE
Bai Yuzhen had seen a lot of shit in his time. A guy who could make you explode from hitting pressure points on your body, a girl who could use her hair as an assassination tool, a woman with three cheeks - and he damn sure wasn't looking at her face at the time.

Suffice to say, he had enough experience to detect the immediate dismissal in the look the Praefectus gave him.

"Say again, ma'am?" he asked.

The prefect in charge of the administrative century gave a world-weary sigh, her finger tracing artistic curlicues and decorative serifs on the massive sheet of paper she was writing on. A brief glance at the text had given Yuzhen a swirling headache, as whatever technique she worked with her writing overpowered his - admittedly meagre - defenses.

With deliberate slowness, she flicked her finger into a cloth to clear it of ink, then wiped the nail to a reflective crimson sheen before meeting his gaze.

"I'll be a bit more blunt this time," she said, red eyes flickering like coals in a fire. "Bai Yuzhen. I have no use for you. This Legion has no use for you. You are, in the scale of things, useless. You are weak." She blinked slowly, interlacing her fingers and resting her chin on them. "You are too old to have any hope of being a cultivation prodigy worth devoting our precious treasures to. You are too young to be kept simply for your wisdom, especially when so much of your life was spent languishing in mortality. I admire your ability to successfully attain any cultivation at your stage of life but it is, unfortunately, wasted effort."

She sighed and leaned back in her chair, the cushion-lined throne of dark wood shining in the lamplight. The tent was lavishly decorated. Amidst the necessities of her role, the maps, the personnel rosters, the unending pile of mission reports and supply requests that needed final decisions, the room was filled with racks of wines, painted scrolls, and stone busts of unknown cultivators.

No, Yuzhen recognized that one. One of his favourites since childhood, Minervina Barda, the poison mistress whose indomitable rise and willingness to be the knife in the dark - or drop in the well, as it were - had...inspired him to do things he probably shouldn't share in polite company.

"Am I being kicked from the Legion?" Yuzhen asked. He carefully kept his emotions off his face, staying as neutral as he could.

"By the Elders, no," the Prefect grimaced, as if she were the aggrieved one. She reached over to take a smaller sheet of paper, unrolling it with care. She gave him a glance, then sighed. "Administrative headache that would cause notwithstanding, that slow expression of yours reminds me of my damnable grandson, bless the fool. I had half a mind to assign you to the support cohorts, goodness knows we can never dig latrines quickly enough…" She trailed off, dipping her fingernail down into the inkwell again.

Yuzhen smiled a little dopily, unashamedly taking advantage of the family link to avoid that fate. He'd always had a sleepy expression, his heavy-lids and narrow eyes earning him the name "Sleeping Cat", and he'd made damn good use of what did it to people's expectations. Would he stop now that he was dealing with the fabled cultivators, who used to race through his town and calamitously fight near his property?

...probably, if somebody threatened him strongly enough.

"Here, Legionnaire," the prefect said, holding the paper between two fingers and wiggling it once, sharply. The ink flashed for a brief moment as it dried under an expression of qi, and she threw the paper at him, the leafy sheet flying through the air like a rock.

"Thank you, ma'am," he said, catching the paper. He read over it quickly, pausing to give her a questioning look. "What is this, ma'am?"

"You are now a Wandering Cultivator," she said, interlacing her fingers again with a sigh. "Sponsored by the Legion, may the Legate forgive me."

Obviously. That was in the title across the sheet she'd handed him. How stupid was her grandson, he wondered, that a passing resemblance made her think he couldn't read?

"Officially, your Legion-appointed role is to travel. Train. Cultivate. And return stronger than when you left." She laughed, the sound like wind chimes in a spring breeze. "A hard task to fail, at least."

'What a bitch,' Yuzhen groused mentally, rolling up the paper.

The prefect gave him a withering look that made him freeze, his spine tingling as memories of being ambushed in bed came rushing back, the feeling of cold steel on his flesh and faintly terrified gooseflesh on his arms.

"Make no mistake, Bai Yuzhen," the prefect said, after a moment. "This is a mission. Your success is expected as with any other role, and as a member of this Legion, I expect nothing short of excellence."

Yuzhen gave her a brief bow, remembering halfway that a lot of the Legion seemed to prefer a hand-swingy salute motion. It seemed to pass muster from the prefect, at least. "I won't disappoint, ma'am."

"Hm," she said, by way of response.

Yuzhen held the bow, wondering if he was safe to look annoyed now that he was facing the ground, and decided against it. You never knew, with cultivators. How long was she going to leave him like this, anyway?

"Your proficiency with the Hoplite Formation leads much to be desired," she said. "Your thrusts are weak and lack precision, your shield lacks coherence, and the entire thing wavers with the weakness of your conviction." The prefect paused. "Except, of course, when you form Hoplite with people you've formed some prior meaningful connection with.

"The Prefect who handled your training records noted the difference, along with some...unusual abilities you've displayed. A shield resilient against qi-based attacks. The ability to form a stable, if pitifully weak, Hoplite on your own." She paused. "Can you really switch weapon hands after creating the formation?"

"Yes, Prefect," Yuzhen said, frowning now.

"Fascinating," the prefect said. The sound of rapid scribbling filled the air. "That is all, Legionnaire. You may go."

Yuzhen straightened, seeing the Prefect already back at work, finger rapidly filling out inches of paper with characters as he watched. He looked away before it could trap his gaze again, backing out of the prefect's tent before turning around.

He unrolled the page again, glossing over the writ of acquisition for basic resources and gear, to glance at the short note on where he could go for direction. A small region to the south plagued by strange beasts over the last fifteen years or so, with the occasional missing villager - likely for the same reason. The work had finally caught up with the reports, tracked the occurrences, and predicted the next danger zone in a place called Dry Gulch Village.

The map was...a little more questionable.

"Good grief..." he sighed.

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Title goes at the end. :wink2: The return of Boss Bai, who'll undoubtedly get up to his own shenanigans. A nice little way to show some stuff happening elsewhere that may or may not end up being related to the main Janus' story thread. Also, the return of cultivator trading cards. Since she's Bai's idol, I figured it made sense for Minervina to get the card. She also is of a higher rarity, so shinies! I compressed it to the point where any more artifacts would give me a stroke, but it's still around 14MB. @Katana1515

 
Oh snap is that ANIMATED FOIL EFFECT. Damn Minervina pulling the shines on her card. Maybe I can get a few in the next pack.

Looks Like Boss Bai is going to have a roaring old time. Maybe he'll even run into some other Good Seeds on his wacky adventures. ;)
 
Gaius and Amaranth Collab - A Boot Camp Fit For a King
Gaius and Amaranth Collab - A Boot Camp Fit For a King​


In the whole of the Dawn Fortress, two buildings stood out more than any other. The first was Adyta, the absolute inner sanctum and seat of the Grand Elder's power. Deep within this place, beneath the earth where the shadow grew darkest, was the sacred meditation chamber where Manuel Konstantinos spent most of his time, as did all Grand Elders before him, stretching back millenia. In another part sat the council meeting room, where the Archegetes and the greatest of his Elders conducted business and planned the Clan's future. Should the Golden Devil Clan ever be destroyed, this building would be the last to fall.

The second was the Rising Dawn Lecture Hall. Though not quite as grand in scope as the inner sanctum, it was still a massive structure, towering fifty stories into the air and able to instruct several thousand students at a time. Connected to this building were dozens of specialized training areas and arenas in which the Cadets would be endlessly drilled in every aspect of combat. There were no true non-combatants in the Golden Devils' ranks - even the physicians and array-smiths were passable swordsmen and spearmen, and capable of performing the Clan's three standard formations perfectly under any conditions.

Still, it must be said that the reason this place of learning stood out was not its appearance alone, but its importance in the eyes of every Clansman. Most Sects and Clans, upon reaching a certain size, would train their disciples in a more diffuse fashion, having many smaller academies in which those chosen few would be inducted into their ranks. While such a setup was arguably more practical from a logistical standpoint, the Golden Devils valued community.

Thus, every single cadet was trained in the Rising Dawn, continuing to attend classes until they finally reached the First Heavenstage, at which point they would be assigned a Junior Aspirant's meager housing within the Dawn Fortress. Learning day after day alongside the entirety of their generation of new Clansmen, these cadets would learn to trust their brothers and arms and stand by them, building an unshakeable loyalty to their people and their cause.

And so, when three thousand Devils of the Qi Condensation and Foundation Building ranks paid handsomely for a chance to learn from the Grand Elder itself, they once more returned to the place where they learned their culture's values. Entering this place to once more attend a lecture stirred a nostalgic feeling in the hearts of everyone present, and their feet traced a path through the gates and down to the sub-basement instinctually.

There, they found a truly grisly sight. One hundred feet deep and one thousand in diameter... was a hole. A simple, unadorned hole dug into the dirt long ago, its walls smooth and its depths so very dark. About a dozen ladders, placed at different points along the pit's circumference, sunk down into the depths. Almost no one there could see the bottom clearly, but something was squirming.

Out from the darkness emerged an old man, unassuming but for the deep bronze of his flesh, hands clasped behind his back. In a human wave, the applicants saluted this man; they didn't need to be told to do so.

"Students, I am happy to see that all of you arrived on time." Manuel Konstantinos smiled gently, something beyond human comprehension lurking behind his grandfatherly expression. "However, I am afraid that my time is valuable, and not all of you have the mental strength to endure my lessons. So as to ensure I do not waste my time overmuch, I must winnow out the unworthy among you."

On cue, a few Greater False Sun Crystals lining the ceiling along the outer walls of the chamber turned on, providing some more visibility but still leaving the pit in the center rather dim. Still, this was enough to illuminate its sickening contents.

Bugs. Specifically, huge ants, the size of beetles. They crawled around restlessly, unable to climb the artificially smooth walls of the pit. The astute among the applicants began to wonder why the lecture hall even had a place like this - even if they had the nerve to ask, they would not be told.

"Skin-Scouring Searing Fire Ants. As far as pests go, they are among the worst." The Grand Elder explained. "They do not possess the strength or techniques to wound a human-sized animal. Instead, their venom attacks the nervous system, in an attempt to drive those bitten to madness."

A collective shudder went through most of the group as they began to realize what they were in for.

"If you truly wish to learn from me, strip off your clothes and descend into the pit. You are not allowed to kill the ants or knock them off your bodies, nor are you permitted to flee from them. You must accept their attacks with gratitude. When this test is concluded, a gong will sound and you will be permitted to climb out; anyone who climbs out or otherwise attempts to leave before that time will be disqualified. Those who break the other rules will also be disqualified."

With every word out of the Archegetes, their hearts grew colder. Old Monster: on that day, and in the coming weeks, they would come to truly understand the meaning of that term.

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Skin-Scouring Searing Fire Ants. Nasty things, really. They only grew up to the size of beetles, which wasn't as dramatic of an increase in size some spirit beasts showed in comparison to their mortal counterparts, but it wasn't their size that made them terrifying. It was their characteristic venom. With a single prick, the venom created such extraordinary pain that it wasn't unheard of for mortals to scour their skin to get it to stop. (Hence, the name.)

Qi Condensation adepts, ironically, tended to be more resilient against this kind of pain than Foundation experts, as a consequence of a similar, albeit lower level feeling that they felt all over their bodies throughout the twelve hours one cultivated per day. Nonetheless, that didn't mean that they would be casual about dealing with them. It might have been only a bother in the grand scheme of things, but humanity had made a profession of avoiding bothersome experiences throughout the whole of their existence.

For that reason, in areas where it was common to get bitten by bugs, it was also common for cultivators who frequented them to learn techniques to deal with the pests.

For instance, while the oases that dotted the dunes provided a place of respite for those who lived there from the burning heat and dryness of the region, it also provided a sanctuary for many species of insects, often spiritual insects due to oases coinciding with flows of Qi that remained in the Organ Meat Desert. As a type of place Amaranth visited often due to taking on spirit-beast extermination missions, he fell within this category.

Often, use of these techniques can become so common that they become habits, which after decades, get to the point that the body instinctually activates them in response to insects.

All of this, really, is a long-winded way to say—

"Legionnaire Castellanos! Stop killing the damn ants!"

Wispy grey trails of Qi still flowed up from the carapaces of the creatures, lying motionless on their backs at this point. Amaranth finally opened his eyes, and looked around. "Huh. There's a lot less of these than it looks like from up there."

"You know, if you weren't doing this voluntarily since you already qualify, this would be grounds to kick you out by itself. And— ARE YOU STILL USING THAT TECHNIQUE!"

To take a few steps back, at the moment there were several proctors in the pit, examining the disciples who were taking the challenge in order to make sure that no one was cheating. After all, the point of the test was to weed out those who wouldn't be able to withstand the teachings of the Archegetes, so really, this was just for their own safety.

"I'm stopping, I'm stopping." As he waved his hands in a vaguely conciliatory manner, the grey trails dissipated like smoke. The ants gingerly approached, and seeing that they weren't being killed like their brethren, finally crawled onto the man.

"Ugh…" The proctor shook her head, and walked off to check the others taking the test.

A few minutes later, Amaranth heard another annoyed voice in the distance. This one was filled with the clashing tones of metal, a sign that the person who was speaking either had an exceptional bloodline or had reached Core Formation at least. A few moments later, Amaranth's back stiffened. It was Manuel Konstantinos, the Archegetes of the Golden Devils himself.

Who had managed to piss him off?

The altercation was far enough that even with the senses of his current stage, he could only catch snippets, but it didn't sound good.

"—What's the point of this test if you— and do you honestly think that you'll be able to do so when— remember, and I'll only— you'll get kicked out if you do it again."

The sounds faded out, and the usual background of screams filled its place.

What Amaranth saw was a decidedly odd-looking man, very tall, bearing lots of scars and with curly hair that went down to the middle of his back. He bowed deeply and repeatedly to the Archegetes, who didn't appear to be listening anyway.

"—I've been doing it for so long, I've begun to think of it as physical. Thank you so much for your forgiveness, Archegetes." The man said contritely.

"So, it's some sort of pain-nullification technique? When did you pick that up?" Amaranth asked casually. To hell with it, this was as good a distraction from those damnable ants as any.

The man chuckled awkwardly. "Yeah, it's something I've been able to do for quite a long time now, altering my own senses. It's sort of reflexive, like how a pupil will dilate or constrict." He twirled a lock of his hair as went along, trying to keep his cool. "Can't believe I embarrassed myself in front of the Archegetes, that's pretty bad…" he trailed off nervously.

"Well, a technique like that sounds like it'd be worth building to a reflexive level, so I can't really say I wouldn't do the same. Well, actually, I quite literally did do the same thing, so that's just a matter of fact at this point."

"If I'm being honest, I'm not sure how well I would function if I were to somehow lose this ability." The taller man confessed. "I've been using them for all sorts of things since I was thirty. Oh! I'm Gaius, by the way. But what about you? Where'd you pick up that draining technique? Seems extremely potent."

"Cobbled it together from a different pest-killing technique that I learned around a—" Amaranth thinks for a moment. "A century ago? Wow, it's been a while. Anyways, that one didn't have the convenient benefit of filling up your reserves as a bonus, but spirit stones are expensive and when you're trying to be frugal, you tend to try to optimize the qi that you have to spend. I'd imagine it wouldn't have been nearly as viable of a method without the particular variation of Bronze that I had the fortune to awaken, though."

"A mutation, huh? It's odd how common those have become in the past couple centuries." Gaius scratched his head in contemplation. "Part of that whole Heroic Age rumor, I sup- wait."

Gaius took a step back and pointed, a few ants scuttling out of the way of his foot. "Lifedrain, a mutation, that face… you're Amaranth Castellanos! What's one of the Thirteen doing taking the qualifier?"

Amaranth nodded in response. "Yeah, that's me. Technically, I don't have to take this test, that's true. But, to be honest? While I could do that, missing out on the experience would just have been unfortunate. Due to particular circumstances, picking up as much of those, preferably varied and of a specific type, is something that'd be in my best interests." Amaranth coughs a bit in apparent embarrassment. "But enough about that. It seems like you've had your share of experiences as well."

"Oh, this?" Gaius gestured at the small marks all over his limbs and body. "Honestly, I was pretty lucky, as strange as it sounds. I went to the Qiguai Realm and got really put through the wringer. It's a long story, but I ended up going straight to the Eleventh Heavenstage. Passing through the Tenth didn't fully heal my wounds but it got me in good enough shape to move." He winced at some grisly memory and cradled his jaw. "Still have a couple residual aches though."

"Ah, Qiguai. Yeah, that place tends to be real rough. What was it, a couple of enemy Sect disciples ended up chasing you down? They tend to do that to the Bronze-blooded a whole lot, though I don't need to tell you that anyway. Karmic luck is too tempting of a prize, I suppose." Amaranth put his hands on his hips and whistled. "It's very impressive that you managed to go all the way up to the Eleventh, though. You look like you're fairly young for that stage, so it must have really been something. For me it was the most demoralizing stage of all; smashing through like that is great luck."

"It was pretty amazing, yeah. Though… I don't know if 'instantly' is the right word?" Gaius pondered. "Time warps, you know? I'm lucky my brain was so concussed, or I might have gone mad stuck in there. And the wildest part is, that wasn't even the strangest thing that happened to me."

"But what hurt you that bad in the first place? Any time warp of that grade must have sunk you into a ridiculous amount of subjective time, so you must have been really concussed if you managed to maintain your sanity throughout the whole process."

"It wasn't one single thing… well, it was one big thing and several smaller ones. I got into a bunch of fights in one day, against weird stuff too." Gaius smirked, his face a mixture of nostalgia and trauma. "There was this castle, and I just had to get to it, because… look, the point is I had to get in. And a bunch of weird assholes blocked my way! There was a disciple from another sea, and a ghost that copied me, and even a giant frog-man! Still not sure who trained that thing to use an axe…"

Amaranth paled. Or at least, he paled as best as he could when his skin was made of bronze, which really wasn't much, but it was the spirit of the thing anyway. "A frog-man? Wielding an axe? You're sure about this?" Amaranth didn't sound incredulous, surprisingly enough, but sounded like he was holding back some sort of revulsion.

"Well, his fist sure felt real when it hit me." Gaius joked, his eye twitching several times when an ant bit him on the neck. "So did his blood when I gutted him. So I'm gonna have to say I was pretty sure. Like I said, he must have been trained; wasn't intelligent, just an attack animal."

"A frog man." Amaranth repeated like a broken recording array. "I'd never thought something like this would happen for a long while yet. Or no, the Qiguai realm is weird. One person meeting them doesn't mean that they'll be able to find the others. But maybe…" Amaranth started to mutter for a bit. Then he caught himself. "You must be confused right now. I'll give you some context. About a century ago, I entered the Qiguai Secret Realm. Before you ask, yes, this is linked to how I learned that original pest-killing technique, but that's irrelevant for now.

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I still remember that trip like it was just yesterday. I had received an Infernal Eagle pendant from a Core Formation elder on a whim, and I was desperate to to come out of the place with something really extraordinary, something that'd replicate that feeling of glory I had a few decades prior to that when I made the ninth Heavenstage in two decades. I know, in the modern era, that's seen a whole lot more, but back then it really was one hell of a feat. And then, I just sort of moved along. Turns out, rapid infusion of Qi from a cultivator two realms up doesn't work so well when you're not trying to go onto the actual Blood Path. It's a real shock to the spiritual system. Anyways, I digress. Feeling invincible, etcetera etcetera, I entered the realm, immediately got my ass handed to me like the cocky person that I was. It was someone in the 10th Heavenstage, you see. While the difference in bodily power is something that can be overcome with strategy, as it isn't significant enough for Bronze not to be able to offer a margin, that gap in speed was what really sealed the deal. It was after that when I found the Toad.

Or rather, it's more accurate to say, the Toad found me.

It was a massive, warty thing, radiating the aura of Foundation Establishment. Frankly, in my state back then, I thought I was done for. I was about to flee, when the Toad spoke. Apparently, it sensed the aura of the Toad treasure I had on me. Specifically, my boots. I'll explain.

See, I've killed a lot of toads in my day, and back then, that was the main thing that I was doing. These boots I'm wearing? I ripped them out of a corpse of a toad who had devoured a frankly impressive amount of spirit stones for its size, and a magical boot, and that did two things to them. First, it made one boot into two boots. I know, that's impressive. Second, it gave me the ability to leap far higher than I otherwise could.

But enough about that. My point was, I was almost certain that the sight of these would have enraged the toad into attack. Or maybe not, it might've decided to be ambivalent as well, but at the time, I had heard some terrifying things about the creatures in the Qiguai Realm, so I wasn't inclined to take that risk. At this point, it just seemed like it was just taking its time before eating me, so I was eyeing up potential escape routes. I recall, I was concerned about its ability to easily close distance with a leap, so I had pictured myself going through some twisted section of the woods, ideally into some sort of spatial warp to get me out of this place.
That gigantic mouth had a thousand tongues, and I had no interest getting near any of them at all.

When it spoke again, it reassured me that it was some sort of Battle-Trained Thousand Tongued Toad, and that it was an ally of humans. Odd phrasing, but I supposed it was a part of it being a spirit beast. I hadn't met many sentient ones, at the time, and this was the first time I had met one who was a Toad.

Anyways, in the middle of our conversation, it said something strange to me. Apparently there was some grand war between the two-legged and four-legged toads, and the time was coming soon for them to wreak their vengeance upon the world? Honestly, I'm not even sure if the toad said those exact words. On one hand, I recall it said it wasn't the time for me to learn yet, on the other, I've had dreams about that conversation that say differently. It's plain odd, is what it is.

Anyways, it ended up giving me a bit of its saliva near the end. Pulled me out of a sticky situation a while back by putting someone else in one. I'll leave it at that."


----

Gaius' eyes widened. "Damn. That's a lot crazier than the one I fought - that one was just Twelfth Heavenstage. Honestly, the frog was probably the least troublesome even if it did injure me. Just had to get creative. Everyone after that was a lot smarter." He shrugged. "But enough about that. I've spent enough nights agonizing over what I could have done better that day."

"Indeed. The past is the past, and lingering on it too long doesn't do anyone any favors. You can trust me there." Amaranth's eyes briefly took on a faraway look. After a moment, he spoke again. "Anyways, the test is nearly done, and since we've gone this long, lasting through the last stretch should be a breeze. I'll see you at the lectures, then?"

"I don't think anyone would come here for fun." Gaius chuckled. "I'll definitely be there."

As Gaius walked away, Amaranth had a thought. It was a bit of an odd thought, but it was one of those things that he felt at the edge of his intuition at the time so he didn't immediately discard it. There was a familiar glint in those eyes of his, though Amaranth couldn't discern just what exactly was familiar about it. A few seconds later, he shook his head. Maybe he was just getting tired.

----

Just outside the grand, imposing gates of the Dawn Fortress' outer walls, a small army's worth of disciples gathered to receive the wisdom of their leader. Given the torture (there was no kinder word for it) they had gone through just to earn the right to redeem their tickets, no one would be wasting this chance.

Gaius watched in awe as Konstantinos once more arrived on the scene, effortlessly flying to their position. To his keen spiritual sense, the flight of a Nascent Soul was something truly bizarre. There was literally no propulsion. No technique, no Dao Emanation, simply will. It took no more of his qi than it would have to run the same distance, plus the exact amount needed to generate force opposing that of gravity upon the old man's frame. In other words, an infinitesimal amount, unnoticeable to one of such bottomless reserves.

He remained enraptured as Konstantinos continued to speak, explaining to these chosen few their duty toward the clan and the basics of cultivation. None of it was anything new, but when this great man spoke of anything, it felt more real than it ever had before.

That's when it got really, truly interesting.

"I cannot solve all your problems, nor do I intend to. Still, one of the greatest problems of any cultivator is exploring where the true limits of your body lie. The hairsbreadth between where you exert the maximum power and your meridians burst, leaving you crippled and mortal. For most, they simply excavate nine-tenths of their power, and eventually another nine-tenths of what remains. Today, we will be reaching your absolute limit. It will be a small increase in power, but a real one."

The Seeker's eyes widened, and he barely managed to restrain himself from lustfully licking his lips. An extra one percent? Another one percent he could safely use? Truth be told, Gaius had expected the Grand Elder's lessons to be extremely esoteric; the kind of thing that no one but him could teach. But this, this was dirt-simple. Power, a whole extra one percent of it.

And so the exercises began. Painful, but not in an agonizing way. More like the warning signs that come right before agony, the scream from your body that you're bending a joint too far in the wrong direction or getting too close to a fire. This was easy enough to do even if it felt unpleasant, so Gaius set about looking around for anything interesting.

Alas, the Golden Devil Clan was large indeed, even if their numbers were still flagging in the current century. He didn't recognize any of these people.

(In that moment, Gaius missed the first chance he'd ever gotten to meet the great Rina Callista, because she was too short to see behind the other Clansmen around her.)

Wait; just there, in his peripheral vision, Gaius caught a well-built man with messy hair and a thick, neck-length beard. Well, that would do nicely - he'd been wanting to talk to Amaranth again anyway.

"Senior, nice to see you again!" Gaius called out, not missing a beat of this exercise even as he walked over to Amaranth's position to sit beside him. "This is just the first lesson and it's already worth every point."

"I know, right?" Amaranth shot back with a grin, clearly in a good mood. "Not only an extra one percent, but an extra one percent no matter how many realms we advance? If one of us were to make it to orthodox Core, that extra qi would be as much as a Ninth Heavenstage has in their entire body."

Gaius whistled as he did a bit of mental math. "Damn, you're right. There's so much you can do with that. And reaching Core after the Eleventh Heavenstage, it's worth two Ninths."

Amaranth nodded. "Yup. Good stuff."

A moment of silence passed between the two men, before they simultaneously snickered.

"A bit silly of us, getting so excited over 1%." Gaius smirked, drawing circles in the sand with his finger.

"Just goes to show how tedious cultivation is - makes you lose all sense of time and scale." Amaranth mused, with a wistful look in his eye. Reflecting on his superhumanly long life, most likely. "You said you were eighty-four, right? You've almost hit the Distortion Line."

"Distortion Line?" Gaius asked with a tily of his head, making the bulk of his long curly mane fall to one side of his head. "Can't say I've heard that one before."

A grimace passed over the older man's face - from pain rather than annoyance, Gaius hoped. "A commanding officer introduced me to the concept when I was around your age. A mortal can, in theory, live up to exactly one century before Heaven automatically plucks out their soul. In practice, they will die of injury or illness - old age related or otherwise - long before then. Making it to the age of ninety is miraculous for a mortal who is not fabulously wealthy by their standards."

"So this Distortion Line is age ninety, then?" Gaius asked.

"Precisely." His Senior nodded. "The idea is that when a Cultivator turns ninety and enters the tenth decade of their life, their mindset changes - urgh!" Amaranth stopped for a moment and gritted his teeth, sweat dripping down his face, before continuing. "Especially when it comes to their perception of time. They become a little more disconnected from mortal-kind than before, due to their brain storing more memories than a mortal's ever would."

"Ah... Makes sense, I suppose..." Gaius couldn't get much more out, as an unbearable sensation of stretching came over him. He squeezed a handful of sand, trembling as he held himself on the brink of destruction. Finally, he released his held breath as the group let some of the qi drain out as one, the inchoate energy forming a dense heat haze as it dissipated into the air above them. "So essentially, you subconsciously realize in full that you're not mortal? I guess that would make your personality get stranger."

"Mhm. It's not so bad, though. If it weren't for that, no one would have the patience to attempt any unorthodox paths, for better or for worse."

"That is true... wait a minute. Speaking of unorthodox..." Gaius screwed up his face, leaning over to look into Amaranth's eyes. "You're Twelfth Heavenstage, but..." He focused harder, shutting off his smell and taste and restricting his vision into a narrow line, focused right through the other man's corneas. The front of Amaranth's brain came into focus, and it was obviously abnormal. It was incredibly vibrant, whorls of qi making the blood-brain barrier bubble here and there like a simmering soup.

The picture was ruined when Amaranth leaned back slightly, puzzled as to what The Seeker was doing. "Um... yes, I'm currently Twelfth Heavenstage. Are you alright?" He asked, nervousness seeping into his voice.

"You're aiming for the Single Pillar path, aren't you?" Gaius asked, a grin forming on his face as his senses snapped back to normal. "You're most of the way to the Thirteenth Heavenstage after all. Extremely bold, but I'd expect nothing less from one of the Indomitable Thirteen."

Amaranth recoiled in shock, struggling to understand how Gaius knew, but quickly shrugged it off. "Yes, I am. And you're going for the Twelfth, I assume?"

"No, I'm doing the same as you."

The two men shared a moment of solidarity, a mutual understanding of the painful path they both walked. That solidarity was soon replaced with agony, as the two were pushed closer to the edge of death than ever before. But this still wasn't the end; by Gaius' rough estimation they were using 99.8% now, not 100%. After another minute, the pressure finally abated, before beginning to climb again.

By this point, many of the students weren't even meditating anymore. Some lay on their backs and others languished on their hands and knees. Everyone had their own method of enduring this ordeal. Many were being escorted out, often carried by the guards who had been watching nearby.

"That's fascinating but... I'm sorry, can we do this another time?" Begged Amaranth, looking... about as shitty as everyone else here did, Gaius included.

"...yeah, good idea."

----

Once everyone had filled in the seats, Manuel Konstantinos spoke.

"The next lecture is simpler. The Soul is the thing that understands and comprehends, the thing that understands the Dao and pursues truth. It does not obey physical laws for the most part, and once coupled with sufficient understanding of the Dao and Qi can exert its will on the world. The thing we tend to think of as the Soul, though, is the connection between Soul and Body. If broken, the body is killed and the Soul goes elsewhere, though I cannot say where. This is the truth of the Nascent Will. It snaps the connection between Soul and Body, leaning on the understanding a Nascent Soul has of that same connection."

The old man looked down from his seat in the air upon the disciples below. Those eyes felt like they were peering right at him, Amaranth felt, even though they were definitely facing the crowd in general. It was an uncanny feeling, that felt like it got even stronger as he shifted out of the way.

"For our second lecture, I will be strumming on that connection, as though a string on a lyre. Your job is to try and replicate that feeling after I do so. It will be unpleasant and dizzying. For those with the patience, even a Qi Condensation disciple can develop that feeling into an effective suicide art to prevent interrogation. I will disrupt the connection between soul and body three times over three weeks. At the end of the month, if you cannot replicate the feeling, my experience has taught me you are unlikely to do so. If you can succeed, we will proceed to the final lesson."

From there, the rules were laid out. Three sessions, with a week-long "break" after each one, after which they would be let out. Before that time, anyone who left the room for any reason would be disqualified and not allowed to return. They would receive no food, no water and no beds, but spirit stones for cultivation would be provided. With the room completely closed off, it would be impossible to tell the time, only making the physical and mental strain worse. All of this would serve to compound the immense discomfort of the lesson, by not allowing the students to comfort their spiritual pain through physical means.

In short: a marathon. A test of endurance, both physical and mental. Those in the group who had performed closed-door cultivation in the past would likely fare better, but no one would be having an easy time of this.

After his speech, Manuel began to strum on the soul-body connection of the attendees for the first time. For most of them, this would be a new feeling, as soul attacks weren't especially common due to their nature being poorly suited as a vector for attack before Nascent Soul.

Amaranth fell within that camp himself. The moment it started, he emptied out his guts, and judging from the noises in the background, it seemed like that wasn't an uncommon fate either. The air quickly filled with the acrid smell of the vomit of hundreds of cultivators, digestive acids made more intense by having to deal with the extreme heights Qi drove the body up to. In some instances, the floor began to sizzle, though not melt. This place was made to endure, after all.

Amaranth might have said something about the stench, mentally if nothing else, but his knees proceeded to buckle and he hit the floor. All he could think was a rueful "Not again." before his thoughts blanked out.

A few hours later, Amaranth regained consciousness. He still felt pain, no doubt, but in the back of his mind, he could feel a thread faintly at the edge of his thoughts. Sending his will deeper within, he noticed that the thread was vibrating. No, it wasn't mere vibration. It was sound. He almost felt like he could hear a note at the very edge of his hearing.

Slowly, he remembered Manuel's words. He had to replicate it, right? Amaranth gathered his will and imagined the sound as best as he could. The difference between sounds barely heard and sounds borne of the mind was a thin thing at best, and as could be attested by many guards across history, this gap grew thinner as one had less sleep. Amaranth may not currently have been sleep deprived, but he was distracted enough by the pain that his mind was about just as clear as if he was, so it would have to be good enough.

Tendrils of Will blindly groped for the thread, and slipped off like water when they finally did touch by happenstance. He was unsure of how long it took, but after what felt like a million attempts, one finally made solid contact. The tone imparted was weak, but the existent tone that Manuel pressed into the soul-threads of the room was strong. And for one moment, they worked towards the same purpose, and—

The feeling immediately got worse. Amaranth doubled over, and he had a vague feeling that if he pressed on further with his novice skills, something irreparably disastrous would occur.

Still, he smiled. Amaranth opened his eyes that he had unconsciously squeezed close.

Might as well see what Gaius was doing, right?

He headed towards where he was yesterday. They were having a conversation, before it ended abruptly last time, so Amaranth intended to get back to it.

"Hey Gaius, this soul-thrumming thing really is a pain, isn't it? It's really something, I'll say. Like, I thought that thing a few decades ago would be the worst pain of my life, but boy was I wrong. You know that—" And Amaranth continued talking in that vein, talking about stories related to the event, branching and branching until the listener would be unsure what the heck he'd be talking about.

Though, in this case, the listener wasn't listening in the first place. Gaius was still held in the clutches of pain, so he was in no shape to do so. Amaranth, partially due to his ability to focus being dulled, partially due to natural thickheadedness, hadn't noticed this, and just thought that Gaius felt like being quiet.

It was only when the lesson ended that Gaius had recovered enough to regain sense of the outside world.

Gaius blinked several times, his bleary vision beginning to turn from blobs of color to discreet images. His death grip on the armrests of his chair loosened slightly, revealing grooves where the constant pressure of his grip had worn down the extremely sturdy stone. The sound was starting to come into focus; he could make it work every tenth time or so, but the pain was terrible. Sensory abilities were no use here, the discomfort came from his soul rather than his nerves.

The face of his Senior came into focus, and he shook his head to dispel a few cobwebs. "Amaranth, is that you? Sorry, I didn't know when you got here." He lightly slapped his cheeks, fully waking himself up. "I seized up for a while there, didn't know what was going on. I think this might be harder without the Twelfth Heavenstage. More impurity, more inefficiency."

"—and you know, it's actually— wait, were you…"

"Ah, did I make you waste your time?" Gaius winced. "I'm sorry about that. Could you give me a summary?"

"Oh, no need to apologize. Really, it's kind of ridiculous it took me this long to realize that you weren't aware of your surroundings. I blame my tendency to ramble. Anyways, that thing the Archegetes did to our soul-connections, that thrumming, that, I don't know how precisely how to describe it. It was really something, wasn't it?"

"It was almost like flossing your teeth, wasn't it?" Gaius thought. "That sort of… grinding feeling. Tearing the muck out. Maybe it'll hurt less next time, like we'll have built up… soul-gums?"

Gaius was wrong; it would actually hurt more the next time.

As unpleasant as the practice was, there was literally nothing to do in that chamber besides practice it, and so the two did. Gaius soon managed to pull it off one in seven times rather than one in ten, and Amaranth could do it every third time. Then, like an avatar of calamity, the Archegetes arrived once more to visit despair upon them.

The soul-flossing was bad enough the first time over, but after a week of being trapped in the room, the physical discomfort made the spiritual discomfort feel even worse than it had previously. This wasn't to say that progress wasn't made. It seemed that the process generally helped those who endured it along in their progress to sense their soul-connection. However, at the same time, it wasn't something that everyone could endure all the way through. People were beginning to give up and leave.

The spherical room, while apparently closed off, actually did have a singular exit. It wasn't the traditional door or even an unorthodox one like crawling through the vents, though one individual attempted to do so nonetheless. Amaranth still remembered the screams. He had heard a lot of horrific things throughout the years, but he doubted he'd forget that for a long while yet.

The Archegetes assured the group that the individual was still alive, and that the individual had not died. He proceeded to brush over the topic whenever anyone else asked him about what happened, which did little to soothe Amaranth's paranoia, but it wasn't like he could do anything about the matter anyway.

But there was an actual exit, an exit that people reliably left through. On the wall facing to the left of the spot where the Archegetes traditionally hovered above, there were array-glyphs inscribed in the standard format for a spatial gate. Spatial gates were rather expensive to operate, but Amaranth supposed that it definitely worked well to create an aura of grandeur that a more ordinary passage would have lacked, and Manuel certainly wasn't one to skimp on that. When the attendees came within, they had to go through this gate, and if they wanted to leave at any point, they would have to leave through that same gate. The array would log this, of course, and would notify the proctors that the individual who had left had chosen to give up on the lecture.

One student, a Foundation Establishment array engineer who thought himself particularly clever, had attempted to modify this array so it wouldn't log his departure; that hadn't gone well for him either, as the Archegetes informed them. The man had indeed succeeded at erasing himself from the logs, but had been found out anyway - his effort to suppress the truth only made his guilt ring loud and clear in Old Gold's ears.

Gaius and Amaranth both continued to improve at the "technique", if you could even call such obscene self-harm a technique. It got easier to do, and ever so slightly easier to bear. They found the exact minimum of force necessary to produce the sound, and managed to hit that minimum most of the time. They still needed several minutes between attempts, but progress was certainly being made.

After the third brutal lesson and the third week of isolation, only two-hundred thirteen of the original group now remained. Many of those who left couldn't feel their soul-connections at all, and so decided to leave instead of wasting their time. Some of those who left could, but fled from the agony or the fear that the connection between their body and soul would snap before the Nascent's ministrations. Others, despite being able to detect the connection, simply couldn't influence their soul-connection enough in the time given and had thought the task was hopeless.

At the end of the third week, the Archegetes came once more, and finally told them they were free to go, and to come back to this same room in a week for the final lecture. This one, he assured them, would be only one day.

"You now know how to manipulate the connection between your soul and body the tiniest amount. For those who have stepped through the 12th Heavenstage, your connection is many times stronger, a pure link between soul and body. This is why you mastered this art in hours instead of weeks. Some of you may have come to it on your own."

"Now we come to the simplest truth. You who remain are among our greatest talents, and recent events have shown me that you are not immune to the assault of a Nascent Soul. While you cannot hope to survive a serious attack without protection, you might preserve your life for a few key seconds, or perhaps resist a mass-scale attack on an army. To assist you with this, I will be bringing your soul-connections to the breaking point. This will challenge not only your manipulation of your soul as previously taught, but also your will. Without sufficient will to persist, your connection between body and soul will shatter, and you will die. I cannot teach you to resist such attacks without truly threatening you with death. My blows will be at the absolute limit of what you can endure, and if you are not confident in the strength of your will, simply leave. I will not hold it against you."

Wary looks were exchanged. There were some who thought that they could withstand the lectures before this were frightened by the new level of soul-offense that Manuel's words implied, but most of those who remained were the bold, so after their initial worry, they firmed up, and looked ready to take it on. A hundred and fifty of the two hundred or so ended up staying.

Amaranth and Gaius had chosen to stay, though the enthusiasm they had previously brought to the lectures was long gone. Like everyone else present, they were haggard, poorly-rested and on-edge.

Gaius ran a hand through his hair, trying to settle his trembles. "Just one more, Senior. We made it. 12% and we got all the way here. I-it'd be a waste to stop now, right?"

"Just one more. Just one more. Just one more. Just one more. Just— Wait, what was I saying again?" Amaranth blinked his eyes like he had just woken up from sleep, which was odd, because that was a few hours ago. Since the Twelfth Heavenstage had allowed him to gain the basic level of the technique early on, he had been testing the absolute limits of how far he could push on the soul-connection for a few days now. However, the soul was connected to the mind, so sometimes little issues cropped up from time to time. It was about the third time that his short-term memory decided it would be a good idea to loop, and at this point he was more annoyed than worried. "Right. After that, we'll be through with that section, and we'll get to see what the next thing Old Gold has in store for us."

"Yeah, we can take this one no problem. What spooks me is the last thing. I guess it's not that different from a tribulation, right? If we're really going to take the highest level of tribulation then we've gotta see this through." Gaius grimaced, trying to accept his own words. "Damnit though, with a tribulation you've got more than a fucking hour to prepare for it!"

"Yeah, that's for sure. At least for tribulations, you'd have specific equipment prepared in advance to deal with the thing, but here we're just sort of thrown into the pool and expected to swim. I don't even think the course was described to be soul-related, it was just described as a series of lectures from the Archegetes. Though, I suppose that's part of the test. Adaptability and all that jazz."

"That, or no one would sign up if they were told what this actually was." Gaius said darkly. "Maybe that's why it's structured like this: the sort of mentality that makes you keep gambling when you've already lost money, in the hopes of winning it back. That way more people would stick around for the real deal?"

"Could be. If your guess is right, and I have a feeling that it is, the next part is gonna make this one seem like a gentle breeze, huh. Something that a lot fewer of us would accept if we heard it from the start. Though, people tend to react in different ways to the slow method. It can embolden people, make them feel like they should keep on going if they've already sunk so much into it. It can also make people who didn't really get the full extent of what they were agreeing to back out. But I guess, that was probably the point." Amaranth wasn't fully sure what he was even saying anymore, to be honest, but Gaius nodded anyway.

It was around then that Konstantinos clapped his hands, producing a sonic boom. The whole room shook, bringing all those present fully back to their senses. "It is time."
Old Gold's eyes scanned around the room, slowly. He rotated in the air, looking each and every one of the remaining students in the eye for a brief instant. There was something unfathomable behind those eyes, something darker than deep space, colder than absolute zero. Something antithetical to… anything. A nemesis which promised perfect annihilation, should the two halves meet. The real question was: What did that old man, that thing, see in them?

And to Amaranth's fledgling senses of his soul, the world rippled.

For a moment, Amaranth felt that faint thread in the back of his mind tense up even further than it ever had before, past the point where he had previously worried that it would finally give way. Then, he lost sight of it.

The pain finally hit, and the world exploded into a smear of colors.

Was that the floor he felt, under his hands? He wasn't sure. Even as the pain lanced through his body, he could see swirls that twisted and turned onto the surface in a manner more akin to a liquid than anything else.

There was something below the surface. He was sure of it. Inside those lightless depths which he was looking at so intently, there was something staring right back at him.

He tried to raise his head, but his body refused to obey him. It was like something was pressing down on his body, no, like something was pulling him downwards.

You can't deny me, for I am you, and I always have been you. The words came in a thousand different voices, echoing and harmonizing and clashing with each other all at the same time.

He should've felt terrified, or at least felt some sort of fear. But there was only a feeling of being drained, slipping through the ground like water through sand.

All Amaranth could do was stare blankly into the abyss.

----

Gaius, of course, wasn't having a fun time either.

Everything seemed to turn to deranged chaos around Gaius. It was like the taste of bland mush in every sense. All at once, a feeling over overwhelming paranoia came over him.

The air rippled, in a shape which suggested movement, suggested presence. THen Gaius' senses became overwhelmed with… something.

It almost felt wrong to call it pain, something this absolute. It was more like flipping every switch on simultaneously, an endless series of activations.

That's good, you're getting closer.

Gaius turned around, looking for the source of that voice, but he comprehended nothing. An impossibly deep dread creeped closer and closer. Something was approaching, implacable and unstoppable. Where, where was it?

Gaius curled up in a ball, tucking his head down beneath his hands. The awful, crushing feeling continued; for how long, it was impossible to say? A few minutes? A few hours? All day? Any part of his brain that could possibly keep track of the time was overwhelmed with absolute pain, absolute negative thought. His body was equally paralyzed, helpless before that overwhelmingly large presence, stalking him.

Seeking him.

Keep going. Never, ever, ever stop. I want more.

Gaius opened his eyes and was greeted by a corona of colorful stars. Oh dear, he hit his head at some point. After a moment, he figured how to move his arm, gripping at the armrest of a seat and hauling himself to his feet. His right temple throbbed painfully.

"Note to self, get out of the seat next time…" The Seeker slurred, regaining his bearings. He turned around, only to bump into Amaranth. "Oh, there you are. You good?"

"I'll be good in a few minutes. Not quite a person yet…" Amaranth said, completely emotionless, staring at himself as if trying to confirm that yes, he does in fact exist.

"Wild." Gaius said, not fully comprehending what he was hearing. "So… wanna get lunch?"

----

After almost a month, the musty, smelly room at the top of the lecture hall finally opened its doors. Disciples - the ones who hadn't tried to climb out the windows before the end of the lessons - rushed out, one and all, racing to find the nearest food vendor. In total, just over two hundred had managed to avoid washing out, remaining secluded in that chamber for three weeks without food or water, as the foul smell from the chamber pots grew bit by bit.

Of the rushing crowd, Gaius and Amaranth managed to be a little more composed than the rest, but they still looked like something between animal and man.

"So where are we going, Senior?" Gaius pondered as the two burst from the doors of the lecture hall together. There was never any question of whether the two were going out together, it was simply a given.

"No idea. I haven't lived in this district since I was a boy." Amaranth sighed. "Fuck it, I don't care. Noodles?"

"Noodles, then curry, then an entire roasted, glazed pig, and that should be enough for lunch." Gaius nodded to himself, drooling a little. "Then let's... fucking drink poison, I dunno."

Amaranth licked his chops. "Good call. We need to drink enough that we forget this trauma, but not so much that we forget the lessons we learned."

And so the two went to the nearest noodle vendor(that hadn't already been raided by other disciples) and ate several pounds, then found a curry vendor and ate several pounds of that as well. No luck on the pig yet, but there was plenty of daylight left.

Gaius spoke with his mouth a little full, gesturing with his spoon. "Compared to the first and third lessons, don't you think the second one feels off? A way to blow ourselves up? I mean, I guess that's sort of useful, but it doesn't feel..."

"Doesn't feel special enough, for a Nascent Soul's teaching?" Amaranth finished the thought, washing his food down with a cup of wine.

"Exactly!" Gaius returned, tapping the table with his finger to signal another serving. "A technique that kills you, that's dangerous to learn? There's probably multiple Elders who have something like that; what's so special about this?"

Amaranth rubbed his chin in thought, pondering the question. "Perhaps it's to prepare us for Nascent Soul cultivation? No, that's too unlikely, too far off. He would tutor a prospective Nascent personally if they made it close enough." He punctuated his statement with another heaping bite. "It must be a key to something else, though."

"It must be necessary in order to get the third lesson. Maybe those without enough soul awareness would die too easily, and Old Gold needed a lie to keep us working at that thread." Gaius concluded, nodding to himself. "That way, only the ones he knew he wouldn't accidentally kill would be left."

"And that includes us..." the older Cultivator trailed off, lost in thought. "It's funny. Never thought of myself as... exceptional. I guess I'm better than most. Good enough to reach Great Circle Foundation. But I'm just... ugh, I don't have the words to explain this."

"Amaranth... friend..." Gaius put a hand on his Senior's shoulder and spoke solemnly. "It sounds like you need to get drunker. Much drunker. Me too, in fact."

----

And so the two relocated again, finding themselves in a restaurant with a bar built in, gnawing on hunks of meat(probably beef, but they weren't certain) and pounding down some kind of liquor made from rice, berries and snake venom. The mortal workers began to eye the two warily as their drinking continued. Cultivators on a bender were always a serious problem, even in a place like the Dawn Fortress.

"So what does The Seeker actually seek?" Amaranth asked, his face twisted up in confusion.

"Whatever he wants. But the Seeking is the point. It's cyclical, just like Cultivation. Builds on itself, strengthens the mind and shit." A very inebriated Gaius explained, chomping at yet another bite of food.

Amaranth sighed and had another drink. In terms of drunkenness, if Gaius was in shambles, then Amaranth was a human catastrophe. "You... you've really got it all figured out, don't you? To be honest, I think I got all the way to Thirteen cuz' I was... procrastinating." He gripped the table tightly for a moment, steadying himself.

"Procrastinating... what, you're putting off a choice?" Gaius questioned as he took another drink, his vision beginning to swim together. "If you ask me... if it's that hard to back out of then there must be something to it."

"You're right. I know you're right, damnit, I know! I know the truth. My truth. I just dunno if I can really see it through." The Senior pounded the table for emphasis. "Like... fuck, I'm just drifting around, man. I don't know how I got here. Kings are supposed to change the world... but what do I even want for myself?"

"You're searching for a lot, huh?" Gaius pondered, leaning back in his chair and looking up at the ceiling. "Sometimes I wonder if I'm cheating my way to the top. I designed my Dao carefully, made the seeking itself the point. I gotta do something before I can start my life for real, and this is the way."

Amaranth looked at Gaius like his head had just turned inside-out. "You're telling me you just... picked your Dao out for a purpose? Then maybe I could do it too, maybe it's not too late."

Gaius shrugged, and took another swig of the foul, burning substance. "Do you really want to, or do you just think that's the smart thing to do. Damnit, just get dumb! Be arrogant, Kings are arrogant! Take your shot."

"Be arrogant. Take my shot..."

"Yeah, man, I took it. I'm still taking it. I saw a miracle, and I decided not to be afraid." The Seeker slurred. "Senior... what are you afraid of? There's something right in front of you and you're trying not to see it. But the light still gets in even if you close your eyes. Stop fucking looking for another truth, this is it. This is your truth."

Amaranth went very quiet, for nearly a minute. Then, he gulped down his entire cup and slammed it down. "My truth... in other words, my Dao. Fuck it. Fuck it! I'll do it! Barmaid, another!"

That was the final concrete memory Gaius had of the day him and his Senior spent together. He suspected that Amaranth remembered even less. There was a blur of light and sound, him hauling a weight - he could guess what he had been carrying - and then the pounding headache in the morning, at his apartment, as he awoke from a ten-hour sleep. By Cultivator standards, that almost qualified as a coma.

Half an hour later, The Seeker managed to stumble his way into the kitchen, where he found a written note - unsigned, but the writer was obvious.

"I'm sorry for my conduct yesterday, but thank you. I think I'm a little closer now."

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Three months had passed. It was time.

The Archegetes strode out in front of the remaining mass of people. From the original thousand, only sixty-three brave souls remained.

"Final chance to leave."

No one did.

There was no happiness or displeasure in his eyes at that. Simply resolve.

There was a distant rumbling, like the sound of a far-away storm approaching an area. It was no audible sound, merely what Amaranth's soul interpreted this new feeling as. A portent, perhaps, of the oncoming blow.

And then it arrived.

Amaranth had heard once, that darkness could move as fast as light left an area. It seemed that for Manuel, that wasn't the case.

The Darkness transposed itself evenly with his surroundings, just as well lit as before, yet paradoxically pitch-black at the same time.

Unlike last time, the area seemed rather calm? How odd.

And then, with a sudden lurching feeling, the blackness consumed all.

"Oh, so you think you've accepted the path you've begun to tread on?" It was that voice again, faintly amused.

"No. You're simply fooling yourself. Observe the truth."

Amaranth's left shoulder began to swell and bulge, skin folding in to make an impression of sunken human eyes, a mouth, a face, all formed from blank skin. Then, excruciatingly, piece by piece, the protrusion began to rip away from his body.. Amaranth's face scrunched up, but he held in the scream. After a minute, it simply plopped onto the floor.

Amaranth knew he should probably hold himself back, but he couldn't resist from throwing in a quip. "I'm unimpressed. This is what you were talking about? Bitch, I get this injured every single mission. If this is all— Bluh?!—"

That was when Amaranth's tongue and mouth started to swell up as well. As it expanded, the pink flesh twisted and twisted like a wire, shaping itself into a segmented, almost wormlike form. Seams ripped open from the stress, splashing crimson fluid onto the ground, but they were quickly covered over by new flesh. Teeth began to poke out at the end, forming what appeared to be an odd-looking jaw. The newly formed thing proceeded to take a few experimental bites out of the air.

At this point, Amaranth was definitely yelling, or at least, he made his best attempt at yelling with his mouth completely blocked up. Maybe it was the vibrations that attracted its attention, but this is when what became of his tongue thought it would be a wonderful idea to pivot over and start chomping on his nose.

Desperately, he brought his right hand up to his face to tear the ersatz appendage off, but a mass of odd-looking flies flew off of his arm, budding off from the flesh in a swarm that hovered a foot away from him. These flies had wings the translucent shade of stretched out skin, eyes formed of scabbed over blood, and bodies formed of drooping fat and tensed muscle fibers with tendons to bind it all together. Despite their odd construction, the flesh seemed to readily form itself into apportioned sections, almost fluid in its motion. In short order, the last bit of flesh left his arm, and bones clattered to the floor.

But no, of course, the bones weren't going to miss out on the party. One bone simply splintered into shards and oozing marrow, which was soon descended upon by a disorganized mass of insects. Soon after, each fly now held a lance of metallic bone at what appeared to be the closest analogues they had to mouths. Then, in synchronized fashion, they all turned, facing him directly.

Fuck this.

He raised his legs, which thankfully seemed normal enough, and executed the Classical Maneuver #6 of the Imperial Optimatoi. Throughout the course of history, this maneuver had saved the Clan from many perilous enemies. It was rumored to have first been done by the legendary Earl of Bronze himself against a force that far exceeded his reckoning when he first arrived into the Turtle World. It was done by the 417th Legion against the sect that would inspire the creation of the Abyssal Demons millennia later. And in more recent history, it was what the Clan had to do when the so-called Righteous Coalition had nearly led to their extinction.

In other words, Amaranth ran away.

He desperately tried to draw on his Qi to augment his efforts, but it refused to respond to his will, content to churn uselessly around.

Suddenly, his Qi started moving. However, it wasn't moving the way he wanted to. His meridians began to visibly shift under his skin, and Qi began to flood the tongue-beast, which had previously been ineffectually nipping away at his bronze nose. With a sound of keening metal, the nose finally gave way and crumpled into a mess of scrap.

He began to raise his hand to his face again, but pulled it away like it was a snake at the memory of what happened at the previous attempt. Instead, Amaranth raised his head and smashed his face against the ground with all of his might. The creature gave a terrible hiss of pain, and bit Amaranth even harder for the trouble.

Amaranth's forehead throbbed with pain and his legs began to flop around uncontrollably. Instinctively, he tried to clutch his forehead, but the stump merely twitched uselessly.

From the edge of his vision, he could see something coming towards him. The flies had caught up, and they seemed to be carrying that mass of flesh shaped like a face towards him. Metallic splinters adorned the mouth like a macabre parody of human teeth.

It seemed to be grinning.

Then, he lost sight of it, and felt a sudden piercing pain on his back.

It was on him. They were on him. They were all on him.

He tried to scream, but nothing came out. Not even a whimper.

His body was falling apart now. Senses had been overloaded to the point that the pain hardly felt like pain anymore. There was just an inexorable sense of lessening, of loss, of diminishment.

With what sight he had left, he saw his ribs, twisted and grown into a wicker-cage around his body. The flies were consuming his flesh and making more, in a process that hastened by the second. He could see serpent heads grow out of his toes, knees elongated into spurs of bone that branched out and back into thin, almost spidery legs, rooting themselves back into his skin.

He could see swellings of flesh that the impressions of the heads of toads, lizards, birds, scorpions, and an innumerable amount of creatures poked themselves through, consuming and being consumed by each other. Yet, in the end, this cycle would be returned to nothing by the flies, whose march began to chip away at the tides.

It was almost grand, in a sense. The sheer level of detail involved in the matter, he might have even remarked on it, but his will to care was being sapped every second.

This was inevitable, wasn't it? His body would end up as food for the world either way, so why shouldn't it happen now?
There was something off about that thought, but he couldn't say exactly what.

Amaranth felt for the thin tendril that bound his soul to his body. The thread felt like it was under tremendous stress, but it still held true.

What was it that the Archegetes said?

"For those with the patience, even a Qi Condensation disciple can develop that feeling into an effective suicide art to prevent interrogation."

Sharpening a sliver of Will, he slowly moved it to the edge of the connection. It was already under incredible tension, even a nick might create enough weakness for it to snap.

It would be the simplest thing in the world.

He'd just need to move it a few bits further, and his soul would escape the chains of the physical world and everything would be done with.

So why couldn't he do it? His Will wavered whenever he tried to take that final step, but what made it waver? Wasn't it evident that no matter what he did, this was how things would go in the end?

And as his body finally turned into a skeletal husk, imaginary flies drifting away in imaginary winds, one last thought clung to his mind.
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Gaius trembled as he felt the umbral tendrils of the Archegetes' immense soul wrap around him. He already knew exactly what was coming, even if he wouldn't admit it to himself. This time, the world did not distort, but was swallowed up entirely by the oppressive blackness.

Hot breath, wet and sticky against the back of his neck.

Gaius spun around, and saw nothing.

Footsteps, heavy, echoing through his bones

Gaius looked around, felt blindly with his hands, and still felt nothing. "Who are you? What are you?"

You know me.

"Leave me alone, don't touch me!" Gaius screamed, his heart racing. He took off in a random direction, but the faster he ran, the closer that presence felt.

You know me.

An iron grip took hold of Gaius by his hair, sending him screeching to a halt. He reached back to break the grip, but his hands found only inky blackness. "I've done so much for you!" Gaius sobbed, tears streaming down his face. "I'm doing my best, what more do you want!?"

Everything. It's not good enough. Why haven't I been born yet!?

Claws grazed the skin of Gaius' back. He spun around and threw a punch on blind instinct and struck nothing, only the void.

You can't let go, it's too late to stop. Come here, into my arms.

Were Gaius in his right mind, he might wonder what it was that was making him so terrified. He was not in his right mind. "I want to live! I just want to live! You're a tool to do that! You belong to me!" Gaius howled impotently, urine streaming down his leg. He stood his ground for a fraction of a second before he started running again.

No, no, no, you belong to me. You don't know me at all! You don't know one trillion-trillion-trillion-trillion-trillion-trillion-trillionth of me.

A foot emerged from nowhere and tripped Gaius, sending him sprawling across the ground. Tears of pain sprung from Gaius' eyes as something struck his ribcage from the inside. A little clawed foot stomped on his intestines. Bony hands bounced his dantian off his spine. Gaius ripped off his tunic in horror, only to see something bulging obscenely within his distorted belly.

You can't get away, I'm already here! Stop whining!

"STOP IT!"

Consciousness came quickly and slowly at the same time.

There was no resolution to the nightmare - it just mercifully ended at some point. A blurry something-or-other resolved itself an inch from Gaius' eyes. That was probably the floor. Finding himself unable to breathe, he exhaled hard, blowing a not insignificant blood out of his nose. With the air came the stench of vomit, and with a titanic effort Gaius rolled over onto his side, so as to breathe a little better.

What the hell had he just seen? Already, the images and sounds were slipping out of Gaius' memories, like forgetting a dream. It was faster than that, even; before he could regain his bearings, the memories were torn away from him entirely. It was all he could do to muster the will to call out. "A-am I alive? Amaranth, are you there?"

"Yeah. I'm… here. I'm me. I've always been here…" Amaranth said quietly, slumped against the curved wall.

Gaius tried to stand. "That's… good, that's-" Bad idea, he wasn't up to moving and talking at the same time now. His knees buckled and he found himself face-down on the ground again. "Shit… it wouldn't hurt this much if I wasn't alive…"

Amaranth softly smiled, those words seeming to deeply resonate with him. "Yeah. It does hurt, but it means it's real. What matters is what we do with it."

Now that he was back on his feet, Gaius worked on clawing back his sense of balance inch by inch. "We gotta get out of this fucking room. I don't wanna talk about it, I don't wanna think about it."

Amaranth walked beside Gaius, helping him walk out. "You know, I don't think I'd have made it to the end without you. That thing just now… it definitely would have killed me." He patted his friend gently on the shoulder. "You'd better survive, in the trials. Don't you dare fall before I can see you again."

"Same goes to you." Gaius laughed. "I have to show you the fruits of my labor when I become a King."

"Same here."

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A/N: So, yeah. Here's our Lecture omake. A bit belated, to be sure, thanks to IRL, but it's finally here.

It's been a fun time, @no.! Thanks for bearing with me throughout these weeks, but I think the end product came out neatly enough.

Wordcount: 12,096.
 
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Paulus 17 - Eye of the Archimedean
Paulus 17 - Eye of the Archimedean.

"That is indeed the name of my technique but I don't think you're a good fit for it, Captain. Ah, it's Centurion now isn't it? My apologies."

Cassius loosed an arrow to punctuate his remark, sending the shaft blurring away into the distance, far out of the range of mundane sight. A glance at the farseeing array showed what I expected, the arrow hit the 10 kilometer target dead center and now he was free to move on to the 15 kilometer target.

"Hey, I'm not that bad." I grumped.

Sure I was still on the 1 kilometer target myself, but I also didn't have any special techniques to help me while Cassius, as an archer spec, did. I lined up an attempt with the Arbalest anyway, letting my muscles shift from fallible flesh to steady bronze and instant before I fired. The bolt sunk into the target a bit off center but it was enough to allow me to move on to the 2 kilometer target. Yay.

Cassius shook his head with a smile and lined up another shot for himself.

"Of course not, Centurion. I'm certain that with some practice a Foundation Level Expert such as yourself could easily acquire any purely physical skill you desire to. But that is not what I meant."

He grew silent as he focused, unblinking on the distant target that I couldn't even see without aid. His pupils were pinpricks of light in the center of his iris, glowing with an intensity that rivaled Genius, the Librarian, but Cassius' light was a radiant gold where the Librarian's were an electric blue. I wondered idly at the difference as Cassius stood there, quietly.

And I waited.

And waited.

And waited.

"Well?" I asked at last.

Cassius smirked but said nothing, still staring unblinkingly into the distance. After another minute he exhaled slowly and let the arrow slip from his fingertips. The farseer treasure tracked it's flight across the range accurately, the viewpoint blurring over sand and stone as it tracked the slightly wobbling arrow. After a full thirty seconds of flight it buried itself up to the fletching in the 15 kilometer target, dead center.

Cassius nodded and turned back to me, smirk remaining plastered on his face.

"It is because you lack patience, Centurion."

I scoffed and turned back to my own target, recalibrating the farseer to help me actually look at what I was supposed to be hitting.

"Okay, I guess I walked right into that one but lets be real for a minute. Cultivation is the most boring shit ever. Anybody who can go a hundred years with it can suffer through some quiet time if that's what it takes."

Cassius's smirk became a nostalgic smile as he turned to watch my target with his own eyes.
"Hmm. I don't remember too many boring times back when we were fighting those Beasts."

A twitch of my trigger finger sent the bolt flying towards the 2 kilometer target. It went wide. Damn. I began the somewhat laborious process of reloading the Arbalest while I wanted for Cassius to take his turn, but he just stood there quietly looking out at the range.

"Problem?" I asked.

He shook his head and made a small, aborted laugh.

"No, but this is what I mean, Centurion. Your mind is always moving, always seeking some kind of angle around your problems. In some ways I wish I could do the same but my path is the path of The Archimedian, not the path of the Centurion; it is not a path you would enjoy."

"How about you let me decide that?" I grunted, acknowledging his point but refusing to give up such a convenient technique. From what I knew The Eye of the Archimedian could let a cultivator see much longer distances and much smaller things in exquisite detail and even give them a simple long range qi attack to round out their arsenal. It was the kind of thing that was sorely missing in my own kit and I could see myself using it on the battlefield.

And I'd be damned if Old Gold was seeing another point from me for technique requisition any time soon.

"Hmm. Very well." He began, still keeping his eyes on the horizon. "The first attainment in The Eye of the Archimedian requires the practitioner to keep their eyes open for 24 hours without blinking."

I settled in to listen, carefully stowing the Arbalest so I didn't end up shooting myself or something stupid. Cassius continued as I spoke, arms crossed over his chest and eyes staring unblinkingly ahead.

"'The hopeful practitioner must prepare their eyes to contain the mystery of the Cosmos suffusing all things. To see the true scope of the Light Eternal is to risk searing your own eyes from your head, for heaven will not countenance a true witness to its actions' is the exact quote. This is a fanciful way of saying that we cannot see The Light, or more accurately we can only see The Light and only one facet that the manual calls 'The Light that Touches'."

"The other forms of the Light Eternal, visible and invisible...well they are simply out of the reach of a beginner like myself. But through constant exposure to The Light that Touches we can gain the merest sliver of understanding of Light itself."

He shut his eyes for just a moment as he took a deep breath, and when he opened them again both orbs glowed like contained stars in his skull.

"Days. Weeks. Months. We filter the merest glimmer of the Light that Touches to help us understand the true shape of things. Then at the right moment, we share our sight with the world. Observe."

He tensed and twin beams of coruscating light flashed from his eyes, briefly overwhelming the light from the sun and casting the world into shadow save for the bright white line connecting him and his distant target. The air warped in the beam's path and a visible shockwave washed over me with a high pitched whine on the edge of hearing before the whole thing abruptly stopped an instant later and things returned to normal.

Fifteen kilometers away an archery target burst apart in a shower of flame and radiance.

"Holy crap." I said following a low whistle, "About how much charge was that?"

"Hmm. I have been building Light for about sixty years now and my proficiency has changed quite a bit since I reached the fifth attainment. At the start this would have been a much larger portion but at current rates...I'd say about a month's worth of Light?" Cassius mused aloud.

"Holy crap!"

Don't get me wrong the technique was impressive but if we were talking pure destruction then I could probably do something similar a hundred times a day with some solid kicks, if not at range. Still, if Cassius had been building shots like that for decades now… well he could probably hit harder than me if he was willing to take the loss in progress. I looked over at the man who was now trailing thin streamers of smoke from his eyes and shaking his head to remove the heat haze and re-evaluated my assumptions about the technique.

"Any way to speed that up?" I queried.

Cassius thought in silence for a moment before shrugging and reaching for his bow again.

"You could stick your head in a bonfire?"

"Yea, no, not for me."

The man just nodded as if this was a foregone conclusion and blinked away the last of the overpowering radiance from his eyes, reducing it back to pinpricks in his pupils.

"Your shot, Centurion."

"Right."

I pulled the Arbalest up to eye level, resting the stock against my bronzed shoulder. The thing had a kick that could outdo a donkey, but it was nothing to the Blood of Bronze and a hundred years of cultivation. I inhaled deeply and took careful aim-

"I suspect the Legate uses a successor technique to my own."

My finger slipped and the bolt flew free, flying through the sky only to bury itself into a dune just five hundred meters away. I turned to glare at Cassius but he was already lining up a shot at the 20 kilometer target.

"You've met the Legate?"

He continued focusing on his shot, eyes unblinking as he drew in more and more light to see his target even beyond the subtle curvature of Turtle World that would have hidden such a distant spot from his sight. Five seconds passed in silence before he loosed another arrow and the farseer followed the shaft all the way to the target 20 kilometers away. It buried itself just off center in the target and Cassius clicked his tongue in annoyance.

"Not in so many words. It is my understanding that the Legate is an archer like myself. A part of our training involves sections designed by the Legate themself and the choices are...well enlightening."

I looked out at the firing range we had booked for the hour and calmly reflected that some of these targets were literally impossible to see unless you were using a farseer treasure or had special vision techniques. I could see how he'd come to that conclusion.

"Explains why they don't need to camp with the rest of us. If the Legate is a ranged specialist this entire region is probably locked the hell down." I mused

"The region is uncommonly quiet considering how undermanned we are." Cassius agreed. And wasn't that the truth.

I thought back to the chest full of jade slips and storage treasures the Legate had given me. I was fortunate enough to have my own Century starting full strength but that wasn't true for the entire Legion. We were still reeling from the trials a hundred years ago and we were barely half strength overall, and the next trials were coming soon.

A full strength Century was a gift I couldn't afford to waste. I needed to get everyone armed and ready for what was coming ahead, and I couldn't depend on just my assigned budget to do it.

I loosed a bolt.

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The Gear up portion of the arc with the suspiciously technique named posts continues. I didn't know if I was going to continue on this route but the words want what they want.

Unless something crazy happens then soon to come is a bit of Trials stuff to give Paulus a very warm welcome to the big leagues. It'll be fun.

@no. @Quest
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Savvas Nicolidis 9 - Adminstrative Duties
Savvas Nicolidis 9 - Adminstrative Duties

His body was scorched, molten in some places. No fit state to fight after being hit by that beam of light in his.. attempts to save someone. What went wrong there? It wasn't trying to save someone.. it was how badly it went. He sighed as he continued working.

Right now he was organizing Yao's bandits into a more coherent form. Cells of them, not so easily weeded out but unified enough that they would be a major hassle to be removed afterwards. In a lot of ways, he realized he had been so used to his clan's own organization. Recruitment and organization of someone new could be processed in a few hours at most, minutes at the least via the Contribution Points Board and their shared bloodline. Here in the Heavenly Bandit Kingdoms, it took days to weeks to properly organize. No Contribution Points Board, a need for plausible deniability, requirements for a certain robustness..

The first few 'bandits' were fellow clan members, which wasn't hard. After that the difficulty started escalating as the people of the Heavenly Bandit Kingdoms themselves started joining the cell. And given his own prior experience, he was expected to train them as well! His style used quite a lot of poison which was, welll, just not acceptable under Righteous sects and clans (which he was ostensibly a part of). No feeding your enemies remains to your spiritual beast friends. Ugh, so inflexible.

On the upside at least, the key ideas were still useful to Qi Condensers. Gang up on people, don't let people see you, etc. Pit traps with snakes on the bottom was still sort of acceptable for some reason. Savvas learned that one nice way to really get rich off Jingshen was to prepare antidotes against the common poisons (from the snakes), then sell them for spirit stones, which they had far too much of. Apparently they weren't even willing to tolerate their intestines and stomach getting burned through repeatedly over a mere year as compared to trading away a precious spirit stone for the cure. He's experienced the same thing before in Qi Condensation when training his body to be poison-tolerant - It wasn't so bad. Honestly. How did they survive so long in the desert with cultivators like these?
 
Xiao Yingzi 36 - [Turn 11] [The Ring of the Dead]
Probably not the best written. Half of it was written way back and the other half I wrote stream of consciousness.

Xiao Yingzi 36
[Turn 11]
[The Ring of the Dead]

She glanced down at the abandoned spirit mine that had brought on this train of thought and the presences of several qi condensing cultivators that held the clear signature of the blood path. There was also a figure in Foundation Building that based on local reports could only be Li Chen, a blood path bandit who had managed to ambush a righteous merchant and ascend to their level.

Li Chen was notoriously slippery. He had made a name for himself among the centurions by not making a name for himself. It had taken nearly three blood-path rebellions where the clan arrived to find the members already decimated to realise that the man was killing and consuming his own men once he judged the situation too dangerous. He had a tendency to slip away and reappear in population centres on completely different sides of clan territory.

What made this appearance strange was that this wasn't a population centre. What do we know about the mine, Xiao Yingzi? Elder Teleos asked, curiosity rousing him from his slumber. He was sleeping much less often as she continued to grow in power.

The mine was abandoned three hundred years ago in the trial just preceding the one where they lost Archegetes Alexios, she recalled. In what was then considered an incredible tragedy, an entire legion was slaughtered in the region with the only survivor being legionnaires who were able to flee as the elites held the trial hunters back. I do not believe the mine has been developed since - it was only powerful enough to be useful to Qi Condensation. Not considered worth the cost.

So no one has truly been in those mines since? He asked, voice tinged with suspicion. Be careful Xiao Yingzi, there might be more going on than we anticipated.

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Sneaking into the mine was easy. There was one guard at the mine entrance who seemed like she was just in the middle of nodding off. It was a simple matter of sneaking behind her and simply knocking her unconscious. The mine itself was lit by torches but there was still enough darkness that she could slip past unseen without any use of qi.

All they had in terms of defence was a boulder trap that might have hurt someone in qi condensation if the junior in question didn't have the presence of mind to step over the trip-wire. Crossing that brought her to the mine proper, where two of the bandits were seated around a fire and seemed to be drinking merrily while making jokes and talking about their boss.

"...geez, how long will Dage be holed up behind the mine…?"

"...ugh, I want to get my hands on some more golden devils. You think they're really made out of gold…?"

Ultimately, she didn't get any useful information out of them. Nothing that she didn't already suspect. Putting two fingers into her mouth, she whistled causing the two bandits to look in her direction. They didn't see her since she was hidden, but that was enough to reassure them that no one was there.

A second whistle annoyed them enough to come take a look. "Damn that Lin, is she playing a trick on us?" One of the men grumbled as he struggled to his feet

"Damn whore's getting too full of herself." The other one replied, before a lecherous smile spread across his lips. "Maybe we should teach her a lesson she ain't gonna forget."

Both men approached the area Xiao Yingzi was hidden in, giggling to each other in anticipation. She waited for them to step over the trip-wire… and then she smacked both of them on the head with the butt of her spear. As their bodies dropped, she caught them and made sure to lower them to the ground noiselessly.

I assumed that you were going to activate the boulder trap. Elder Teleos remarked. Xiao Yingzi shook her head as she made sure they were properly unconscious and then took a moment to search through their pockets, finding nothing of value.

I want them alive, just in case I need to question them about what was going on. She answered, as she began to move deeper into the mine to where she suspected the leader would be. She was walking in crouch and suppressed her aura even more, as she came closer to where she sensed the leader was.

The entrance to the deeper areas of the mine had strange contraptions of string and bone that she was fairly sure would make a sound if she were to touch them. Some manner of simple alarms, she guessed as she slipped between them. It wouldn't deter a trained infiltrator like her but with the blood path, they had to be wary of each other as well.
It was efficient overall to use the remains that they couldn't consume in that manner. She made a note of considering less gory versions of them in her own defences. The corridors were surprisingly empty after the first few enemies. Li Chen had likely brought less bandits since he wouldn't have been able to support them here.

There were still a few moving down paths that she suspected signalled where the leader hid. Since none of them noticed her, it was fairly simple to knock them unconscious and make sure that they wouldn't wake up. It was unlikely, but there was a chance that they might have information that was valuable.

As she approached the area where the leader's aura was, she walked carefully, making sure not to make a sound and held up her spear to attack in case of discovery. The bandits so far had been qi condensation but Li Chen was a Foundation Building Expert. She entered the room she suspected the leader was in carefully, making sure to take a good look at her surroundings.

The chamber was large with stalagmites hanging from the sealing. Three other paths made their may to the chamber from each of the cardinal directions and finally, in the middle was a pit that extended downwards with a strange golden light coming from below. It was clearly an important chamber, but there was no one there despite her sensing the man's aura in front of her.

Immediately, she jumped back and sent a blast of lightning across the room. She noted the sound of something hitting the ground on the other side to duck underneath it. A slippery bandit leader!? He must be able to become invisible! That would explain how he could hide so easily!

She immediately tossed a knife into the direction of the sound but she heard the sound of steel as it was deflected. She felt her enemy's intent to kill and sensed an attack from the side. She jumped back and felt the wind from the weapon's motion. A sword, it felt like. She had an advantage in reach with her spear.

She tossed another knife in the direction of the attack and followed it up with a sweep of the spear. The knife struck the wall harmlessly but the spear caught the enemy's legs. Once more, she sent a knife at her enemy but once more it was dodged. She stood her ground and turned towards him with her spear.

It was difficult to see through his invisibility and grasp his aura now that he was actively hiding from her. She could sense his aura well enough to know where he was and to know when he attacked, but that took effort. Effort that he took advantage of as an attack towards her was barely dodged and her countering spear thrust was blocked.

Based upon the sense she was getting, her enemy was at the fourth pillar while she herself was at the first. He was much faster and stronger than her, but she had the upper hand in skill. Skill drawn from ancient wisdom that told her that the best way to fight him wasn't to go against his advantages but the disadvantages of his technique.

Taking a breath, she stopped focusing on her spiritual sense and trying to pierce through whatever treasure of invisibility he had with her own Soul-Farseer. Then she closed her eyes, because she had already memorised the surroundings and not being able to see her enemy meant that they were useless to her.

She focused on her nose, smelling the scent of sweat and desperation as he fought her. He hadn't been expecting her to spot him, she realised. She felt the air shift as he moved closer in an attempt to strike him with her sword and she shifted her stance, letting the blade move past her.

She heard the sharp intake of his breathing as tried to adjust to her suddenly moving past his swing, but before he could react she stabbed her spear forward and gutted him. Before he could do anything more, she drew upon the lightning within her and channeled it into his body, ravaging through his meridians and burning him from the inside.
With a sigh, she opened her eyes and took a moment to look over his smoldering corpse. With his death, he had reappeared. She had hoped to put a picture to her enemy but the damage she had done had rendered him unrecognizable. However, a quick survey revealed a shining golden ring on his finger utterly untouched by her attack.

She carefully removed it from the body and studied it, sensing a strong deathly aura emanating from within the object. Despite that power, as far as she could tell the object was a simple ring of unmarked gold. Well-made certainly, but something one might expect a skilled artisan to forge out of boredom rather than actually spending much time upon it.

You'd be surprised by how useful idle creations can be when you are dying. Elder Teleos pointed out. Was not the Soul Farseer you so greatly prize simply something I made in my spare time?

Xiao Yingzi nodded, acknowledging the point. As she turned the ring around, she caught the glimmer of writing carved upon the inside of the ring. It was crude and hastily written. Likely done in a rush. In the clan's old language, likely unrecognizable to most others it said: Through Innumerable Deaths, Unshaken.

A quick glance to her spear showed the same insignia. Before she could think more on that, Elder Teleos' voice echoed from the weapon. That is the motto of my legion, the 1178th Legion. I had assumed they had joined with the Taurus Clan. Was the legion revived?

It is possible. She replied. We have a tendency to recycle legions and when I was researching your past, I focused on the fate of the original legion rather than what became of future revivals.

We will have to confirm it, but it seems likely that the legion that perished here was descended from my own. He mused, thinking about that. While it is always sad to see tragedy, it is good to see that they showed such valor in the end. He paused for a moment. Xiao Yingzi, repeat the words out loud.

Nodding, Xiao Yingzi spoke. "Through Innumerable Deaths, Unshaken."

For a moment, nothing happened. Then a tremor shook the earth and the light within the pit began to shine brighter, a ripple of ghostly qi revealing itself within. She consulted the Elder and with his assent, she made her way down carefully.

Now that she had a chance to study it, she knew that the pit had been dug recently, likely by the bandit himself and as such, there was a ladder extending downwards that she could use. It took about a minute of climbing to reach the bottom, light shining brighter the more she looked.

Once she touched the ground, she looked around to see a room that seemed like it had been dug using an earth technique. The golden shine came from words carved into the walls and along them with the ghostly energy that seemed to be rising higher with her presence. Besides that there was an entire armory of weapons, useful to the clan though not to a cultivator of her power.

A desk had been set up more recently, with copies of the words in the wall and a book that seemed to translate the clan's old tongue to the native language. She examined it for a moment, noting that the words hadn't been translated entirely before turning to the walls to read them for herself.

She raised an eye as she translated it. In a manner similar to her spear, the names of every legionnaire who perished here was written down and more than that, it also showed their manner of death. Many of those who died here were slain by hunters from the Fifth Sea, but some of the deaths were stranger.

The legionnaires sacrificed themselves for the centurions? She asked the Elder, confused. While there were several who had attempted to stand in the way of the Hunters, that was noted explicitly in the writings making it clear that for these others, something different was being implied.

Ah. Elder Teleos' voice had a touch of melancholy to it. The Art of the Undying Hero. It was a secret technique of the legion invented and first used by my predecessor. A willing sacrifice could end their life, allowing one of an equal cultivation to store their sacrifice and regenerate all damage from a single deadly blow. The true skill of it however came from the ability to use it as a formation, allowing a number of legionnaires to say… die in place of their centurions.

So the legionnaires allowed the centurions to survive and fight against their enemies for longer. Xiao Yingzi realised. But they must have been overwhelmed despite that advantage and finally been forced to this room.

Xiao Yingzi. He spoke, drawing her attention. There is another inscription, it seems to repeat the motto and the energy in the room seems to be focused around it. Can you read the inscription out loud?

She let him guide her eyes to the inscription and paused as she read it through. It was an oath, not a simple inscription. After a moment's thought, she decided the words didn't bind her to anything that she hadn't already decided to do. "Even beyond death, I swear to serve." She said out loud. "Through Innumerable Deaths, Unshaken."

The energy in the air seemed to still at that declaration, before gathering in front of her at a single point. A shadow emerged from there, taking the shape of a man and the light in the room gathered towards it, forming two pinpricks of light in it's head. A shield and a spear of purest bronze formed in its hands.

It stared at her with it's gaze, judging her worth. Suddenly, it lifted the spear and a wave of killing intent swept the room. "YOU DARE TAKE OUR OATH, OUTSIDER!?" It's voice was legion, with many voices laid upon each other. "PERISH FOR YOUR TEMERITY!"

Lift the spear up. Elder Teleos commanded urgently and without thinking, Xiao Yingzi obeyed, holding the weapon between the entity and herself. It paused mid-lunge and an expression of shock seemed to pass through it as it took in the spear. Though she did not grasp it entirely, she sensed a communication take place between the entity and the spear.

After a tense moment, it lowered its arms and regarded her curiously. "I SEE." The entity simply said. "THEN YOU ARE WORTHY OF INHERITING OUR GIFT." It dropped it's spear, letting it fade before it touched the ground. Then it extended the shadowy hand towards her.

I've explained your situation. Elder Teleos explained. If you wear the ring and reach for their hand, they will allow you to inherit the power that they have stored within here.

Nodding, she slipped the ring on her finger and felt her mind extend into it. It was a storage ring or at least, something similar but when she reached inside, instead of space she encountered a strange misty power that she felt like she could draw upon. Putting the thought to test it out of her mind, she extended her arm towards the entity's own.

It grasped her hand tightly and it's grip felt like a metal vice - she knew that she couldn't break the grip even if she had wanted to. "WHEN WE WERE OVERRUN, WE TOOK OUR OWN LIVES IN ORDER TO DENY OUR HUNTERS THEIR REWARDS. OUR POWER HAS SLEPT HERE FOR MILLENIA AWAITING A WORTHY HEIR. YOU ARE WORTHY."

Xiao Yingzi nodded. "What is your gift?"

"THE RING OF THE DEAD WILL SHROUD YOU, ALLOWING YOU TO WALK THE WORLD AS IF YOU WERE A GHOST. IT WILL STORE THE POWER WE HAVE GATHERED HERE, ALLOWING YOU TO RESURRECT UPON DEATH." It explained. As it did, she felt knowledge flow into her mind - the ritual that replenished that power, provided she gathered enough lives to do so. "WITH THE POWER YOU HAVE, THE RING WILL SAVE YOU FOUR TIMES."

The entity flowed into her ring as it said those words. First the bronze helmet and shield dissolved into shadow, then it warped and twisted as it was sucked into the ring, the golden points that served as its eyes getting pulled in alongside the rest of it's self.

Finally, all the light in the room was drawn in and for a moment the ring glowed, before dimming as if it was a normal ring, and not a powerful artifact. When she touched the object with her mind, she felt the power within having grown greatly with the entity's power. With a thought, she pulled that power into herself but only the smallest power obeyed her.

She saw her hand fade and though she couldn't feel it, she suspected her qi had dimmed to any onlooker. She tried tugging upon the greater part of the energy once more, but it resisted her. It retained an awareness of some sort and she could tell that it would not allow itself to be used frivolously.

With a nod to herself, she let the power fade. This will be useful.

I would question your nonchalance, but this does seem tame in consideration of the other things you have faced. Elder Teleos noted, sighing. How a youngster like you gets so much luck I will never know. Where was all of this in my time?

Xiao Yingzi shrugged as she retreated out the tunnel. She needed to report this so that the legion could investigate it more thoroughly.

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[RING OF THE DEAD] : [Turns the user into a ghost, hiding them from the eyes and senses of others while it is worn. An intelligence born from all those who died in the mine haunts it, storing power drawn from death that can be used to resurrect and heal the user upon injury. The pool can only be added to willingly by legionnaires and refuses to be used by any who aren't of the clan.]

(+2 Impact from wiki work turned to invisibility and giving my LST so far a single narrative plot device.)
 
Xiao Yingzi and Gaius Collab 1 - [Turn 10] [Battlefield Dreams]
Xiao Yingzi and Gaius Collab 1
[Turn 10]
[Battlefield Dreams]

Behold the battle of the Beautiful and Amazing Golden Devil Xiao Yingzi against the Dastardly and Devious Fifth Sea Huntress Rohini. Can Xiao Yingzi stop the Fifth Hunter's master from ascending and slaughtering her clan for karma? Can Rohini ensure that her liege's dreams come to pass and allow him to throw off the dark world born from the shackles of heaven? Read as they pit technique against technique and stratagem against stratagem in order to realize their own ambitions.

Oh, and I guess Gaius was also there.

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Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest] Original - Fantasy

Gaius Antonius & Xiao Yingzi - Battlefield Dreams Sand covered the battlefield, blocking sight and draining qi. Not enough to harm anyone, at least not at the waning tide but the geography that gave Fort Deadsand it’s name was already showing its nature. With her Soul-Farseer, Xiao Yingzi could...
 
Aristoteles 'Aris' Kalokagathos 15 - A lesson on rulership
Aristoteles 'Aris' Kalokagathos

A lesson on rulership

Year 187

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Aris had of course immediately seen the lectures available for purchase on the Contribution Board.

When he tapped the mission, he found he had been pre-cleared and wasn't required to pass the grueling entrance test. Some part of him was disappointed.

Oh, they had lauded him for his actions in the Song Empire. Against a Core Formation, no one could stand, so they had said. His other victories had been notable and they had managed to tie up enemy elder for much longer than expected.

Yet it didn't change the calculus. He had walked into a trap, no matter that it had been a sophisticated one. Was the lesson here that conventional tactics and prudence won the day every time? Or was it that his thinking only failed him when a greater mind intentionally and at great cost wanted to set him up? That this situation had been the exception that proved the rule?

He didn't know. But he was too set in his path to consider splendid mediocrity now.

He would meet Wen again. The demon had been glad he had managed to escape. It quite literally gave him a second bite at the apple.

It was not an enviable position to be in. His every asset and skill had been used against his fearsome adversary. He had lost – no, wasted – his carefully curated centuria, the work of decades gone. Diokles, quite possibly one of the most useful assets one could have in their pocket, gone.

His enemy knew it all and had taken away his most valuable tools. When they next met, Wen would have a counter for his perfect defence, would be able to counter his Horn more reliably, would neuter the offensive advantage his flying swords gave him. All that, of course, not taking into consideration the difference in cultivation base between the two.

Aris would have his vengeance on Wen, but for that he needed new assets, to reinvent himself. And to become stronger. Much stronger.

He would have relished the chance to prove himself worthy of these lessons all over again, instead of coasting by on victories overshadowed by defeat. But there was nothing to it. Voluntarily entering the pit would broadcast it loud and clear he had something to prove, to himself or others.

A leader never had something to prove.

Aris paid the sum and signed up for the lesson series.

--​

"Firstly we come to the truth of the Body. The Body is the physical, the thing formed and shaped by the Law."

The words of their Grand Elder struck Aris' chest like a gong.

His bones seemed to vibrate, as if a note was struck somewhere that resonated with his every cell.

The lesson of his uncle Staurakios Palaiologos, the golden jade slip, his most prized technique. The Golden Deva's Immortal Body Art. The first and most important of the five lessons of Rulership. The lesson imprinted upon it came to Aris' mind immediately.

"A ruler's Body is the whole of the Law. It is inviolate and perfect."

Shaped by the law, or the whole of the law.

He was hit by a wave of deep malaise that made him weak in his knees. He stood on a precipice above a bottomless depth.

He blinked, and came to again. He stood again on the training field in the Dawn Fortress.

The lesson of his uncle might lead much, much further than Aris expected. Maybe even than his uncle himself had known. Maybe further than anyone had known in untold aeons.

Perhaps a merest fragment of the real Truth of the art would already be of immeasurable value.

The art sealed off acupoints and created a closed Qi circulation system. If practiced enough, it made one incredibly resilient towards outside forces, be they mundane or Qi-driven. It was broken by forcing the seal to come undone by forcing Qi into the system, or by simply destroying enough base matter of the body to impact the metaphysical structures on which it rested.

What if that wasn't the point, Aris thought.

What if the exercises to achieve closed circulation were training wheels, a placeholder and step towards the primordial effect of the technique?

What if the separation between body and exterior was not radical enough? What if one needed to divorce oneself from those Laws that shaped, and instead shape oneself?

There was no turning back from this way, he felt.

He could develop this technique to its utmost in its current form and it would forever remain his most useful technique, something that set him above all his peers.

Or he could pursue the true insight, and sever himself off. Abandon all things of his Dao that were outward and turn inside. Become sovereign over oneself.

Leadership or rulership.

They had commenced the first exercise, filling dantien and meridians to their bursting point, seeing precisely where one's limit lay. The pain was terrible.

Aris barked a brutal laugh in the midst of stretching his dantien to breaking. He elicited a few odd looks from his peers, but most were too in the throes of agony to pay him much heed.

But it was too funny not to laugh.

The secret was semantics.

One did not lead oneself. One could, however, rule over oneself.

Rulership was sovereignty. Leadership was servitude to the led.

But how much would he be prepared to sacrifice for sovereignty?

It would demand all of him and more. And there was no way to turn back, nor any guarantee he would reach even the lowest tiers of sovereignty.

Leo would be sacrificed. His family. His father. He would raise up thousands of new legionnaires, and they would be sacrificed too. It would serve the Clan in the longest term, but he would eat liberally of her flesh before the moment arrived when he could serve her again.

He threw himself into the second lesson with abandon, eager for the cathartic pain to be found in mastering the sickeningly painful art of disrupting the connection between soul and body.

He had expected the pain to be liberating, cleansing like a hot scourge. But it was nothing of the sort, it was dispassionate, sickening torture. The kind of pain one could not hold, shape nor use. It was unbearable and unusable both. A waste if not for the valuable technique they learned through it.

Yet Aris remembered the pain well from his Soul-Flaying Scourge Pills. The roadblock he had faced then seemed so trivial now. But perhaps it only seemed so because he had managed to overcome it.

That had taught him pain. Different than what he faced now. Less useful, but pain nonetheless.

The final exercise was nothing like either sort of pain.

The first taste of the pain their Grand Elder intended to inflict upon them left Aris lying in a pool of his own vomit for the better part of the day.

It was useful, it made him experience complete and utter physical powerlessness. Moving a single muscle was the work of hours, gathering the willpower from his depleted reservoir to do a single thing.

It was reassuring, the complete confidence in the fact that one's willpower was depleted. That one could do no more.

This thought was the only one he could keep in his mind during the final three hours of torture that followed – all other thoughts fled from his mind's gentlest touch like panicked moths.

In that cocoon of darkness, all certainty fled. He could not use it for introspection, nor for anything but a desperate clinging to the basest reality that was himself, his only companion the same thought, played over and over again.

This was reassuring. All his striving was made as nothing. There was nothing to reach for, nothing to outperform. Merely to survive was all one could do and had to do.

The thought echoed through his mind long after the pain ceased. Another had joined it after a while, when he lay motionless on the training field. A small, treasonous worm, borne by the Grand Elder's words and his technique's lessons.

The Ruler is inviolate.

Accept the lesson of the torture, or reject it. Reject all that which infringed upon his absolute sovereignty.

Not to merely endure, not to merely resist, but to deny.

The possibility frightened him beyond measure.
 
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Katha Theodoros 2 - A Fool's Decision
Katha Theodoros 2 - A Fool's Decision

[First Omake of the Turn Here]

Once, the Sea-Conquering Army committed blasphemy against the Heavens. And for millennia, they were unmatched.

But then the wrath of the Heavens descended. The Great Curse fell upon the Blood of Bronze. Heaven's fury punished all who would grasp for the root of immortality ever more harshly. Fortune would never again favour the bold.

Millennia of conquests were overturned. Legions were wiped out. Backfoot, ever on the backfoot, the Sea-Conquering Army would lose their history bit by bit until not even their heirs would ever know where they came from.

And the Theodoroi, the vanguard of the Legions, their Eyes, their Ears, the Untiring Iron Men who once went from slaughter to slaughter yearning not rest but retribution, who would later die in droves beneath Heaven's fury, would fall further than most.


----

She was four years old when her mother died.

It was a day like any other, and she was too young to do anything but play and watch her father. The dance of his blade as he practiced his katas mesmerised her and drew her eye like little else, the little girl taking in every sweep, every thrust, every step and every refrain. Her father's posture burned itself into her mind's eye, the form lingering forever, an image to aspire to.

Her father was but a Qi Condensation Cultivator, not talented and not powerful, his flesh only lightly bronzed and his essence still tainted by the nature of mortality. His marriage was done for love, only tolerated because the genius claimed by him belonged to a rotting edifice with little but dust and memories to its name. But so young, Katha could not care about such high ideals. Only that in that moment, sword in hand and glistening with sweat, her father evoked an image of strength.

But that dance would not last forever. Her father stopped suddenly, which broke her concentration, and the girl began to cry as she realised she lost something but not what. Her father went to collect her, comforting her in his arms, but his attention was not, could not be, on his daughter's confused wail.

Not when an Elder stood before him, a jade slip in hand and a grave expression on their face. An icon of power far beyond her father, even restrained as they were, primal instinct shocked the little girl into silence.

Her father set her on her feet quickly, gently patting her on the head. "Be good, Katha. Go fetch your brother and grandfather from the library."

Her father was gentle, but grave. It was the first he had ever been like this, and still a confused child Katha followed his orders dutifully. But though she lacked talent, her senses were sharp as her mind, and as she waddled on little legs through the door of her home, she heard the Elder speak.

"Shu Enya. The Grand Elder sends his deepest apologies. Another terrible fate has befallen your clan."

----

The Elder recounted the experience. Two hundred Cultivators had gathered, and mother was one of the handful who had stepped into Foundation Establishment present. Katha had not known what that meant, but she always knew her mother was special. Grandfather had remarked it in passing when he thought that she was not listening, or perhaps he did not care. Mother was 'a genius', grandfather had said, and so was Rathos. She, unfortunately, was not, just like aunt Sousanna.

"Perhaps it is fate," the old man had said, exhaling thick smoke as he lowered his pipe, "But perhaps it is fortune as well. To have one genius a generation is acceptable, even if all others are talentless."

There were few enough Theodoroi left, but mother had carried the hope of perhaps restoring them.

And now she was dead.

Ultimately, the Elder had said, it was a momentary loss in focus. Three others had died, and two more went mad, but they were simply unable to endure the torment. Mother had endured for hours, and looked set to complete it. But then, bearing a burden none of her Great Realm should ever be expected to carry, her focus frayed for an instant. Her will to fight faltered at the last moment, for whatever reason may never be known.

But the reasons ultimately did not matter. The result was the same. Not even a hundred but already in Foundation Establishment, Riala Theodoros died not to the blows of an enemy, but a teacher who considered her the future of the Clan. And whatever the concessions that would be paid, the apologies that would be given and the honours that would be granted the family of a genius that could have gone far, even discounting that she had been the best and last hope of the Theodoroi ever returning to prominence, none of it could ever make up for the fact that they had lost a mother, a wife, a daughter, an integral part of the family.

Father endured as best he could, as he would have fought alone in the upcoming Trials either way. Grandfather grew despondent, grieving at the loss of his eldest daughter and greatest hope. Rathos retreated into himself and would not emerge to play for many months, burying his nose in book after book.

Katha simply became quiet, asking one question all the while:

Why?

----

The next hurdle in her life came when the Trials ended.

Still a child, not yet a Cultivator, Katha and her brother could only witness from afar. The arrival of the Heavenly Star, the Single Pillar's onslaught, such things were beyond their awareness. As they grew older they would come to learn these things, just as they would come to appreciate that these were the lightest losses the Clan had suffered in centuries.

But when the Trials ended, those factors did not matter. Only ten years old, Katha and Rathos each saw their father return battered, limping, bearing shattered blades.

The gravebronze swords, Katha knew by then, were a gift from their mother. Or, rather, they once were. Ancient heirlooms of the Theodoroi, she knew Father practiced with twin blades and wanted to help him along in little ways, ways that he would appreciate. They were a simple gift, apparently; swords for a sword Cultivator.

But it was not enough for Father, arrogant such a sentiment might be for a Qi Condensation Cultivator to have about gifts given by a Foundation Establishment senior. But it was an understandable thought; he simply wanted something personal, to share with his wife.

The blades were old, degraded just as the Theodoroi were. But Shu Enya and Riala Theodoros reforged them until they were good as new, reinforced with fresh material such that they would be proper weapons. One would be black inlaid with white iron, red hexes tesselating across the blade. The other would be white inlaid with black, bearing wave patterns and the triple-brand of the Theodoroi.

One would be his. One would be hers. And together, they would match.

But the Trials continued to inflict their curse upon the Optimatoi. Now mother's blade was shattered, only a hilt left. And father would never dance with the blade again.

When he returned, Grandfather merely shook his head; his grief had been saved for his daughter. Rathos retreated once more into the libraries, until she dragged him out. But Katha had but one question:

----

"Why?"

Fanning the flames in the stove, her father glanced back at her and raised an eyebrow. "You will have to be more specific, Little Blade. There are a great many 'why's in life, and I can only answer five of them."

"Why did this happen to you? Why did you stop?"

"Ah." Shu Enya smiled thinly, turning on his stool so he properly faced his daughter. Then he placed his hands over his meridians, two blackened fingers hovering over each point. "Because my Meridians have been damaged, Katha. Two ruptured, five out of eight blocked. Honestly, I should be dead."

"But you're not." An image from the past. An old conversation with mother, when she returned missing a leg and a hand, still laughing. "And mother suffered worse, yet she recovered. Why not you?"

His smile was more strained now. He placed a hand on her head. "Because I'm not worth healing, Katha. Your mother survived greater injuries because her Blood of Bronze was strong, and even with shattered Meridians she was wealthy enough and strong enough to heal them using sacred treasures. But there is little left in this house of ours, and soon I will be gone." He removed his hand from her head, then pressed his forehead against hers. "I won't leave you two with nothing, just so I can die a little slower."

"...Then why were you hurt?"

He sighed, then returned to the stove fire. "Because Heaven considers us distasteful and wants us gone," he replied sadly. "Perhaps someday, we'll overcome it. Or maybe we will finally all be gone. I'm not strong enough to decide." He looked back at her with a more confident smile. "But maybe you will be."

Katha stood there in thought for a while longer, even after her father went back to cooking. Still, she wondered: Why?

A light tap on her head. Katha immediately moved her hands to cover it. Her father chuckled, a pan in hand.

"Enough thinking, Katha, you're about to overheat. Go get your brother, it is time to eat."

----

It all came down to power.

The epiphany hit her like the cane her grandfather used to beat her whenever he perceived her to be lacking, in training or in living or in filial piety. So often. Himself in the Great Circle of Foundation Establishment, Tormenos Theodoros was himself indicative of the dire straits the Theodoroi had fallen into; not for a thousand years has one of the Theodoroi risen into Core Formation, to say nothing of Nascent Soul. The reasons were unclear and fiercely debated, but ultimately it meant little to Katha.

She was beaten, because she lacked power. Rathos was not, for he had power, or at least the potential to acquire it. Mother died, because she sought power. Father was crippled, because those with power will step over those without.

It was a harsh lesson to learn for a girl only thirteen, and as she spoke to others of the Clan and delved into the libraries - often incidental browsing while she looked to drag Rathos out for training - it became clear that it was not the act of villains or uncaring tyrants, but merely the state of the world. Well, perhaps the state of the world was down to the acts of villains or uncaring tyrants, but it was all beyond Katha.

Simply put, the world cared not for morals or goodness, for all the Righteous Powers seemed to grandstand - and even at a young age it was evident to her. The world was harsh and it sought to destroy the Optimatoi, and so the Clan had to scrimp and struggle for the sake of one another. Rathos might not understand it now - may never understand it, actually - but Katha knew now that the reason her mother died at the hands of the Grand Elder was simply because that was a price she willingly paid.

Cultivators walked hand in hand with death even as they sought a way to defy it forever. Mother was no different. The Grand Elder was no different. That she died by his hand is something she will never truly forget - and she will likely never truly forgive him - but even at this young age, she understood that it was simply endemic to the pursuit of power.

Were there any easy path to power, they have long been denied to the Clan. So the Clan must look to more perilous paths, and even the most gifted and talented must seek ways to quickly amass power in great quantities lest Heaven's Fury crush the Clan wholly, as apparently nearly happened two hundred years ago and many times before even that.

But she was only a child, and untalented besides. The bronze in her blood was thin and pathetic, nothing like Rathos. The only reason she continued to beat him in spars and training was his own unwillingness to commit, an edge that he was rapidly honing now that childhood had left them both behind. Soon it would be time for them to set off on their own journeys, to join the Legions and commit to the Clan as their parents had before and their ancestors before them.

And it rankled at her as well, to think that power alone was all that mattered. Surely there was more to that? Surely the world was not so opposed to the idea that good deeds would be rewarded? There had to be more to this. Young as she was, Katha knew little, and she readily accepted that. But she refused to believe that she was the first to ever wonder why.

----

Her blade danced, gravebronze sword twirling gracefully as she struggled to turn it into an extension of the self. Her body ached, muscles burned and bones creaked as she entered the third hour of the six-hour kata. The repetition of the kata was dull and frustrating, no matter how it had mesmerised her when she was much younger, and her focus wavered easily.

"Your breath is flagging," her father had said on the sidelines, arms crossed as he stood just a bit grayer than the day before. The loss of his Cultivation had made him mortal again, and entropy wore at him harder due to his previous efforts. Even Qi Condensation was punished by the Heavens, it seemed. But though his body faltered, his mind remained sharp. "Your back must be straight and your shoulders loose. You are the sword, king of weapons. You stand proudly so you can see and loosely so you can move."

Katha wanted to retort - and the retort was already on the tip of her tongue - but it was ordeal enough just to maintain the kata. Breath was the source of power, and without strong breath you cannot forge a strong body. Without a strong body, there is no strong foundation, and without a strong foundation you will collapse like a tower of sand. And besides, her father was a better instructor than Grandfather, who only seemed to tutor her because Rathos happened to be there. It was clear who he had placed his hopes in, and it was certainly not his daughter's daughter.

Her sword nearly fell out of her grasp and it was a shock that nearly made Katha trip over. Yet she recovered and continued the Kata. "You're wavering," her father warned, his tone testy. "Your body is flagging, but only because your mind is everywhere. Be in the here and now! You are performing a kata, not a dance! Empty your mind, Katha!"

It was another empty aphorism, to 'empty your mind'. An empty mind lacks insight and sharpness. An empty mind cannot discern the nature of a man at a glance. An empty mind performs mindlessly and is cut down by a proper opponent. Rote repetition is for machines, her job is to think. How can one think with an empty mind?

"And if you think an empty mind is a mind with no thoughts you are as foolish as any teenager out there. An empty mind is a focused mind! Leave thinking and analysis to instinct! Drill these actions into your muscles and bones so that in the heat of battle you can think! Perform ten thousand actions perfectly ten thousand times and you will perform them adequately when your life is in danger!"

And she knew all this already. It all came down to focus and transcending thought, to surrender active thought so that instinct had sole domain, leaving higher thought for greater enquiries. But knowing the lesson and mastering the lesson were two separate issues, so she was left holding the ball while the hours ticked by.

Only three hours into a six-hour kata...

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"Are you insane?"

It seemed everyone was repeating the same three words. Katha pinched the bridge of her nose and ran that hand through fierce red hair. "No, Rathos, I'm not insane. You should know the definition of insanity by now, you spend all that time in the library after all!"

Her brother, his skin deep bronze and his hair black as midnight, was not so easily brushed off. "Secret Realms are dangerous even for our seniors, Katha! Even those in the 9th Heavenstage die without a trace in those places, Cultivators who have honed themselves and purified their dantians for decades! You have barely started and you're going?"

"A senior of mine was able to secure an additional spot from the Yuan Clan and offered it to me. Why would I pass up this opportunity, Rathos?"

"Why wo--Did you--I just told you that it was suicide."

Katha rolled her eyes. "Repeating yourself and hoping I change my mind is the definition of insanity, Rathos. Are you sure you spend that much time in the library? Because kudos."

Rathos slammed his fist into the wall, and the crack that split across the stone was telling both of the power he had harnessed and the restraint he held himself with; if he tried, the wall would have crumbled and he would not have felt any of it. "Stop being obstinate, idiot! There are better ways to get power, ways that don't involve going into a perilous cave at the top of a mountain and hoping for the best!"

Katha levelled her gaze at her twin brother. "I'm not hoping for the best, Rathos. That's why I go into a secret realm. That's why anyone goes into secret realms. To look for shortcuts."

"Are you even listening to me? You're going to die there if you go! It's too soon! The Yuan Secret Realm opens once every hundred years, there's no reason why you can't go the next time--"

"Of course there is," Katha snapped, and her hands clasped testily around the handle of her sword, "And you know damn well what it is."

Rathos blinked. "The hell are you talking about?"

"What happens every hundred years and nearly wipes out the Clan, Rathos? What killed grandmother, shattered father's cultivation, and continues to ravage the Golden Devils ever since we were chased into this god-forsaken desert?"

"...Katha, the Trials won't--"

"The trials will absolutely kill me if I do things the normal way." Her fists clenched tighter, until her knuckles were white even despite her bronzed skin - skin that was only the shade of bronze, lacking any of its toughness, its sheen, its vitality. "You're one of the Good Seeds, Rathos. You have talent, you're smart, you're good at Arrays, you actually give a rat's ass about bureaucracy and your Blood is actually Bronze." She pointed at herself with a thumb. "I'm a talentless hack who heals like a mortal and will probably die like a mortal. The only reason I have the curse at all is because I'm part of the Theodoroi, regardless of what grandfather wishes!"

Rathos looked at her, mortified. "Katha… You know that I--"

"I don't care if you don't care. That's not the point. Who do you think the clan will be devoting resources to preserving? Who do you think will be sent out as bait to draw away those monsters from the Fifth Sea? Which one of us is held up as the future of the Clan and which one of us likely won't even see it happen?" Katha laughed, then drew her sword and threw it blade-first into the ground, right at her brother's feet. "Face it, Rathos: I'm your cannon fodder. So I may as well be good cannon fodder when the time comes!"

Rathos clenched his jaw, the muscles tensing like cables. "You're not cannon fodder. You're my sister, and we're twins. We're supposed to look out for one another. What part of letting you kill yourself is looking out for you?"

She laughed. "If you stop me today, I'll just die slower. There is only one way this ends, Rathos, and one way that I might be able to change that. So if you really care, you'll let me go, because it might actually mean I become something."

Rathos looked at her. His arms trembled, not with fear but because his hands were clenched and twitching with frustration. Ultimately, he exhaled harshly, then crossed his arms. "...Fine. But you're not leaving without telling me. That's the least you can do, you suicidal gremlin."

"I'll be dragging your ass out of the library everyday until I leave, you nerd, of course I'll tell you."

"Better keep it that way." He pointed at the sword still embedded in the stone floor right before his feet. "Also, I'm telling father you put that massive gouge in the floors when he gets back."

"I never left." Both twins turned their heads, where their father emerged from the shadows where he had lurked this entire time. "The two of you may have taken your first steps towards immortality, but you're both blind and deaf. Absolutely disgraceful."

"Oh shit--"

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The day she left, Rathos was not in the library. He was already waiting for her at the entrance hall, holding a talisman in his hands. When she arrived, he stood to greet her, holding it in both his hands.

"I took this from grandfather's room when he was away," her brother said as he placed it around her neck. "It's an Amulet of Water's Rebuke, meant to absorb a killing blow for you and shatter in the process. Obviously, it only works once, so the moment it breaks you should leave. But you'll probably be doing that anyway, so… Yeah." Besides that, he took out a broken sword hilt from his satchel; their father's other sword, left broken since the Trials. "I also want you to have this… To keep her close."

Katha frowned at him. "Keep it." She drew her sword partway, the twin and opposite to the broken one he had in his hands. "These swords are twins, right? They're meant to be together. One way or another I'll come back, so best make sure you don't stay cooped up in that room forever, Rathos. When I get back, we're sparring."

"Hah… Yeah, I'm looking forward to it."

Then Katha set off, an amulet about her neck and a sword about her waist, knowing that the path ahead will only ever be perilous. Power was a means to an end she could not see yet, but she'd be damned if she just let the Heavens crush her underfoot like that.

Sword in hand, she'd cut her own path.

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A nice take on the "a single line of Wisdom from an Grand Elder can be priceless" thinking we see in Xiania. All it took was some hinting towards metaphysical truths towards the right person, with a technique based off those long-forgotten Truths, and Aris had a moment of relevation that will shape him for centuries to come.
 
Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 69 - [The Thunder Toad's Story]
Wrote this a while back. When I was writing my eighth omake: Toad Hunters. I had vague ideas of the thunder road who survived coming back as a villain. Never got around to really finishing it but I did write a short backstory. Coming in pretty useful when I don't have time to write but still need to do an omake for the turn. Enjoy!

Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 69
[Turn 4-ish]
[The Thunder Toad's Story 1]

I always thought of myself as a normal toad. I wasn't the great chieftain that our father was. I wasn't as strong as our oldest brother who always seemed to be one step ahead of me. I wasn't even as beautiful as my younger sister who would one day go to another tribe to strengthen our ties.

All I could do was my part for the clan. I ensured that my father was fed as he prepared for his duties. I helped my brother hunt as he sought to become our father's heir. I protected my sister as she ventured out to speak to other toad tribes who came nearby.

Then my older brother succeeded in his wish and began to reach our father in his power. The toad tribe has a simple rule - once the chieftain has a worthy heir, he would summon the Lightning of Judgement and attempt to swallow it.

Should he succeed, he would be judged King and would then seek to unite the many Least Tribes into one Great Clan. Should he fail, he would simply die and his empowered remains would serve to nourish our tribe while his heir took his place, at least until the next heir was ready.

As we had expected, our father failed. He could not contain the lightning in his body and it charred him from the inside, reducing him to electrified flesh that would now serve to feed our growth. Our brother inherited the tribe's name of Long Tongue from our fallen father and would now protect us in his place.

However, my brother was not ready. Though he had the power, he lacked the skill and resolve to protect us. Our father's flesh attracted many others and he simply could not keep the constant vigil for those predators.

One day, a giant scorpion targeted our tribe. It was the color of the desert sand and could hide from our senses. It snuck up on our brother in an idle moment and paralysed him with its venom. Then it turned to my sister and I, ready to finish us off.

I stepped forward to defend her. Though the creature had no honor, it felt confident enough to face me head on. It was stronger than I, on my brother's level but it was an ambush hunter and that made it weaker in battle than us.

Nevertheless, it was a tough battle. Though I had my tongue to match it, the scorpion's tail was hard to follow. If I moved close to face it head on, the tail moved out of view and attacked me from the back. If I stayed back and tried to hurt it with my tongue, we remained even with it's poison giving it an edge.

There was no method of defeating it without risking my own defeat. So with my life and that of the ones I loved at stake, I lashed out my tongue and wrapped it around the scorpion's body before pulling myself towards it with full force.

The scorpion's tail struck me in an attempt to strike my eyes. I bore the strikes, the attacks barely missing in my extreme speed and then I barreled into the scorpion, pusing it on it's back. In that vulnerable state, I struck it with my tongue again and again until finally it was dead.

Once I was confident in its demise, I checked to make sure that my younger sister was alright and then I looked over my paralysed brother. None of us was sure when he would move or if he would at all, but at least he was alive. We kept vigil over his body till the night when he first twitched and then for three days further until he was able to move as he used to.

Once my brother had recovered, he thanked me for my intervention and gave me a name - Scar after the marks left on my eyes by the scorpion's tail and declared me a warrior of the tribe, fit to protect the tribe and even start my own should I have the desire and find a mate from another tribe.

It was as if I had finally found my place.
 
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Ulysses 12 - Snake Wine
Ulysses 12 - Snake Wine
Ulysses was recovering rather well. He hadn't blacked out in a month, and the remaining symptoms were some mild addlement and a splitting headache that had recently developed. Ulysses knew the treatment for the first symptom at least, downing another Streaming Mind Pill. Making enough to last him for the course of treatment was expensive and time consuming, since the pill required a few spirit herbs that only grew in wetter climates and therefore had to be imported.

Ulysses was off of clinic duty until he was fully recovered, which gave him an unexpected amount of free time, and decided to revisit one of his favorite hobbies as a youth, hearing the amazing rumours about the golden devils. Most of them were salacious of course, but with effort one could find stories that were likely true. It seemed the clan had had quite a bumper crop of talents, as was common in the decades following a trial, combined with those who had begun their journey twenty years before the future of the clan looked bright indeed, apparently the goatmen actually had a genius among them, who had risen to Great Circle Qi Condensation in twenty years, a feat so impressive it was only made slightly moreso by the fact that the clan was pretty sure goatmen couldn't get that high at all. Ulysses made a note to figure out how goat man biology worked, since he apparently had the free time. Ever since Senior Muyi had gotten himself turned into a tree, Ulysses liked to keep up to date on any truly strange physiologies his fellow clan members might possess, in case he needed to treat them later.

In addition to all those rising stars, there were the Yuan clan's secret realm array activating soon, and Ulysses eagerly awaited news of which fellow legionnaires would be going, but as he looked over this list, he noticed quite a few of the names on this list were the very same people as those new juniors. Even the Builder was going too, even though Ulysses heard he was gravely wounded in the Cloud Demon Caves 20 years earlier. He should really get around to visiting that guy, his showing during the trials showed an admirable character and Ulysses was quite fond of him. Didn't they know that secret realms were dangerous? Regardless, they'd already purchased their spots, which couldn't have been cheap, so asking them not to go would be inconsiderate of him as a senior. Of course, many powerful seniors were also going, but such places had a terrible tendency to split people up, and even if that weren't the case, he doubted such ambitious juniors would agree to travel in groups for safety anyway. Such talents should be protected. How much did a slot in Yuan cost anyway?

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Too much was the answer Ulysses was seeking. Between this and the pills he was taking to manage his injuries from the trials he would be very poor for the next few decades, but as always,he felt his juniors were worth it.

Ulysses was very impressed by his journey through the mountains, he spotted several mundane medicinal plants that he had only read about, and the qi density was quite good in comparison to the desert he was used to. As he crested a hill he saw what he was looking for. A city in the Yuan Clan's territory that was very popular with those seeking entry into the secret realm. It was here that Ulysses hoped to implement his plan to better his juniors' chances, however slightly.

Since supporting his juniors directly was unlikely to work, Ulysses had given much thought as to how he could better protect them, and while he could provide them with medicinal pills, he lacked anything truly potent due to only finding out about this exodus of juniors a brief while ago. So failing that, he could only think of one thing that might help. In addition to the dangerous beasts and dangerous legacies that popped up when the Yuan activated, fellow participants also posed a danger, and unlike those aforementioned dangers, Ulysses could affect the fellow participants. Murder would not be allowed here of course, and the array hadn't activated yet so members of the Yuan Clan would be able to keep a close eye on the participants, but there were other ways to reduce their danger to Ulysses's juniors.

Ulysses saw the bait he would use to achieve this goal, a restaurant positively bedecked in jade gold and all manner of gemstones, called the Sublime Feast Pavillion. It looked as though it was designed to flaunt as much wealth as possible, so Ulysses's targets would be drawn there like moths to a flame. After all, Ulysses had never heard of a Righteous Young Master who didn't like to show off.

Ulysses looked around for the next part of his plan, quickly finding a lively group of vagrants, given away by their threadbare garments and that they were already drinking at midday. Ulysses pressed down on the small bit of bafflement the sight inspired in him, attributing it to the lingering effects of his injury. If his sources were correct there was only one thing young masters hated more than everything in general and that was a group of people they considered inferior in a restaurant.

"Hello good sirs, I am Ulysses of the Golden Devils, I assure you that any horror stories you may have heard about us are fabrications, we take our obligations to mortals and our allies quite seriously. Now, with that out of the way, I am new in town and quite hungry, but eating alone in an unfamiliar city doesn't appeal to me, so would you fine people like to accompany me to the Sublime Feast Pavilion? I will pay, of course." Ulysses said.

"The Sublime Feast Pavillion, seriously? Every young master with more face than brains is going to be there looking for juniors to pick a fight with. Are you courting death or something?" the apparent leader of the vagrants spoke.

"Whether you court it or not, death still comes, and if I don't make the effort to reach out, it may just find different dance partners. Darn and blast, I just said that out loud didn't I? When was the last time I took a pill? Apparently too long."Ulysses said, uncorking his pill jug and swallowing another Streaming Mind Pill, he found that the pill usually took a few hours to really take effect these days, both because Ulysses's injury slowed down the paths the medicinal energy preferred ot take and because, like many pills, the body slowly developed a tolerance to the effects. He knew his injury would be healed before the pills stopped working entirely, but he was currently in an awkward middle ground that was quite unpleasant.

The vagrant looked thoughtful for a moment, thankfully paying no mind to Ulysses's outburst.

"Well, that's as good a reason as anyI'm in, are you lot coming?" the vagrant says to his companions

"Yes, Senior." the others chorused. Ulysses was bemused, it seemed to him that even among such derelicts there was still propriety, so he strode confidently into the Sublime Feast Pavilion with his newfound companions in tow.

The first thing Ulysses noticed was the smell, the smell of rich meat and herbs that had nothing to do with alchemy completely filled the space, any mortal would be glad to eat here, but Ulysses had heard tales of the Simmering Soup Sect, and more directly of Yang Fangxu, so this meal prepared by mortals really couldn't compare.

The next thing was the young looking man behind the bar, moving too fast for a mortal but not smoothly enough for a professional, who was clearly a member of Yuan Clan sent here tomake sure no one got too carried away. He was suppressing his cultivation so well that Ulysses couldn't sense it, so he could be anywhere from a low Qi Condensation junior to a Foundation Building expert.

Ulysses's eyes finally wandered over to the corner, where a young man with skin as smooth as jade and flowing black hair seethed with rage. Taking a seat with his dining companions, Ulysses perused the menu. He felt that it was only a matter of time before the Young MAster picked a fight with him and swore vengeance, since if he could get a few Young Masters angry at him in particular, then they probably wouldn't get angry at any of his juniors in particular. The sort of Young Master found in this dead sea couldn't credibly make any claims of taking payback on a whole Clan after all, so they would probably settle for restraining any grudges to the person involved. With Ulysses's current rowdy company it was only a matter of time before this guy got pissed off at them.

"I shall have a fruit salad with some green tea, and don't you dare leave me waiting, or you shall face the wrath of this Du She!" the Young Master, apparently named Du She shouted at the waiter. Ulysses was glad that he had seemed to hit the man's personality on the head, but it would be rude to ignore his dining companions, even if they were mere mortal vagrants.

The fellow Ulysses had spoken to earlier had already drained two bottles of rice wine by himself while Ulysses wasn't looking, and his companions had split a bottle and a half between them. Ulysses momentarily worried that he had lost some time, until he saw the leader grab a third bottle and drain it in a single gulp, Ulysses, finally realizing there was something odd about these vagrants, sized up their leader. To his astonishment the man's cultivation did not seem inferior to his own.

"You're… not mortals." Ulysses said dejectedly

"Yeah, we're from the great drunkard sect, we took bets on how long it would take you to figure out, for the record, I bet on before we made it into the restaurant, I suppose you are even more distracted than I thought." the apparent senior disciple of these drunkards said.

"Sorry, I was afflicted with a mind affecting poison perhaps a decade ago and I have yet to fully recover, please forgive any rudeness on my part." Ulysses replied.

"Over a decade, huh, must be pretty strong stuff, and here I thought you Golden Devils mostly drank that fruit wine stuff that averages 18 proof tops." the drunkard said with a grin.

"It was actually the kind of poison that tries to kill you, rather than anything recreational, but I hear my Senior, Magnus Centenius, once made wine so potent that it was banned within the walls of his family's manor, So I think our Clan isn't lacking in such things if that suits you. ALso, I just realized that I never asked for your name, sir."

"My name is Mijiu Sake, my parents had a great appreciation for the finer things in life, you know?" Mijiu said.

Just then, their pleasant conversation was interrupted by an exclamation from the Young Master across the room

"This establishment cannot manage something as simple as this! Don't you know who I am? You, boy, bring out your manager so that I may end him rightly!" the man calling himself Gong Su shouted.

"Sheesh, that guy is getting really riled up, any second now surely he will come pick a fight with us for existing near him." Ulysses said.

"I'm always up for a bar fight, but that guy's putting off some killing intent, and none of it is pointed at us." Mijiu said, concerned.

"Surely you don't mean-" Ulysses proclaimed, a chill running down his spine as he rose to his feet.

"Then I'll tear this restaurant up by the roots!" Du She said, backhanding the mortal waiter with his full strength.

Ulysses was already moving, needle and thread at the ready, but the patient's head was a bloody mess, and Ulysses was fairly sure the skull near the area of impact had pierced all the way through to the skull on the other side. The patient was dead on impact. Ulysses gently set the man down, reaching instead for his scalpel.

"Ah, I see trash is handling trash, You've been using Flowing Mind Pills for what, a decade straight? Your breath reeks of the stuff, I can smell it from here, if you're taking that much and are still subpar then the starting point must have been phenomenally low." Du She taunted, eyes darting to the Yuan scion behind the bar. Ulysses eyes followed Du she'sto see that cultivator making no moves to stop this bastard who just killed someone who was at least nominally the bartender's junior.

"Hey you, Du She of nowhere in particular, let's trade pointers." Mijiu said, stepping between Ulysses and Du She before planting a firm right hook into the latter's face. Du She didn't budge an inch, he was clearly in at least the tenth heavenstage, and he grinned viciously. The bartender remained unmoved, as Ulysses saw the glint of something metal hidden in Du She's long sleeves. Ulysses stowed his scalpel, opting instead to engage hand to hand, so as not to make Mijiu look bad by escalating things. Ulysses lunged for the arm he saw was hiding a weapon, trying to keep things nonlethal.

Something metal clattered to the floor , and Du she's long fingernails dug into Ulysses's skin. A sharp warmth like a hot pepper began spreading from the wound. The feeling was intensifying as well as spreading, so Ulysses quickly identified it as Searing Agony Poison, mostly harmless to those accustomed to the pain of cultivation. But Du She had to know that, so what was the point? Ulysses quickly applied a tourniquet around the wound, before he noticed his skin around the wound loosening. So the Searing Agony Poison was designed to hide the painful onset of a Flesh Sloughing Pill, except Du She had somehow altered the formula to apply to his nails instead. The tourniquet would ensure that the effects were minimal.

"Mijiu, watch out, he's a poison user!" Ulysses shouted. The bartender remained immobile. Was he a coward or did he just not care if a Devil and a Drunkard died on his watch?

Poison use was at least as much of an escalation as weapon use, so Ulysses drew his scalpel once more and made an incision along Du She's wrist, trying to disable his other arm so he couldn't afflict Mijiu with something terrible. The bartender stopped suppressing his cultivation, but Ulysses was more concerned by the torrent of noxious purple blood which flowed from Du She's wrist like a river. The fumes alone were quite ferocious, and Ulysses covered his face with one sleeve before stumbling back. Mijiu had been doing the same ever since Ulysses told him about the poison.

"Ahh man, you ruined the surprise, there's no way that bartender's gonna fall for it now, and I really wanted to see if it could kill an expert too." Du She whined. The bartender moved now, beheading Du She in a single blow from his sword. Ulysses knew the blood splatter was all wrong.

"Get out of here,now!" Ulysses said, rapidly following his own advice he dived out of a window and a few seconds later, long enough for everyone formerly in the restaurant to start looking at him suspiciously, Du She's body splattered all over the walls, undoubtedly yet another fiendish poison. Ulysses tried to gather the slightest amount to study potential countermeasures, but it melted directly through his glass flask. He felt that this would not be the last he saw of Du She.

A firm hand clapped him on the back.

"Well it seems that restaurant is going to be out of commission for a while, and I feel bad for trying to get you to pay for our meal when you didn't know we were cultivators, so to celebrate, how about you and my group engage in one of the Great Drunkard Sect's most time honored traditions. Don't worry, we can work on your plan of keeping some Young Masters' eyes on us rather than our juniors at the same time." Mijiu said, assuming a serious tone for the first time since they'd met.

"Well, it is really the least I can do for such an upstanding comrade in arms, so what is this tradition anyway?" Ulysses said, truly grateful for the other man's help.

"It's called a Pub Crawl, and it starts now. You are already behind by the way, so just try to keep up." Mijiu said, with a wide grin.

A.N. I promise I didn't give Du She such a crude name for a joke, It apparently means Poisonous Snake. Also, decided that if I write another omake or two of Ulysses hanging out with his Drunkard buddy I should come up with a new naming theme, so alcoholic themed names sound fun.
 
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A.N. I promise I didn't give Du She such a crude name for a joke, It apparently means Poisonous Snake.
Yes it does. Honestly for me, i kinda predicted what was going to happen when i read the name. So kudos for that.

Katha frowned at him. "Keep it." She drew her sword partway, the twin and opposite to the broken one he had in his hands. "These swords are twins, right? They're meant to be together. One way or another I'll come back, so best make sure you don't stay cooped up in that room forever, Rathos. When I get back, we're sparring."
Oh daaaamn that poetic imagery! Would be really sweet if she gets loot that uses the hilt someway, a kind of showing how she will grow to take her mother's place as the hope of the Clan.
 
Gaius Antonius, Amaranth Castellanos & Minervina Barda - Toxic Hate Part 1
Gaius Antonius, Amaranth Castellanos & Minervina Barda - Toxic Hate Part 1

'No Devil loves the desert.'

It was a koan Gaius had learned as a boy, and one which he had come to comprehensively understand through gruelling experience. It was meant to convey that just because you get used to or adapt to something doesn't mean you actually learn to like it. It was also literally true. The Golden Devils had lived in the Organ Meat Desert for as long as it had existed, and yet still Legionnaires on patrol would gripe to each other, weary of the heat and the sand and the dry skin and the endless days of scrubbing to finally clean themselves after a mission.

Indeed, no Devil loves the desert; Gaius much preferred the mountains. There was a harshness to them to be sure; patches of verdant green were cut through by the cruel, jagged edges of stone that made up the harsh slopes of the natural towers. Spirit Beasts were both more common and more powerful, necessitating more deadly combat in one week than he usually saw in three weeks in the desert. And there was of course the thinness of the air near the peaks of the taller mountains, which snatched away his stamina and made his head feel light.

But the mountains were alive. That fact was what made all the difference. The desert air tasted of despair, of a slow, quiet, unstoppable death. To live in the desert was a violation of what it represented. To live in the mountains was not a violation, but a competition. Life flourished here, albeit only strong life. It was motion, not stillness.

When The Seeker stood astride the peak of ___, charcoal and half-finished map in hand, and looked out upon the landscape below, he felt invigorated. Nine more years to go until the Yuan Clan turned on their array. Nine more years until this fertile territory would be filled to bursting with life, like overripe fruit. He had to be ready.

Drawing a rough outline of the shape of the valley below, Gaius took notes on anything that looked interesting; a particularly broad river holding all sorts of spirit beasts here, an abandoned spirit stone mine which might be filled with riches by the array there. A Three Horned Leopard, filled with powerful, corded muscle and horns chipped from a long life of combat, stalked Gaius from behind, clearly hoping to take advantage of his distraction. How foolish.

In a single blur of motion, he turned, drew a knife and threw it. The leopard tried to leap away, only to be impaled where its shoulder met its chest. Gaius gave a satisfied smile as the big cat yowled and tried to limp away through the pain - not a one-hit-kill, but pretty good. In a few steps he was there, and the beast's life ended in one painless, merciful slash. Lipita could probably make something nice with those horns, Gaius thought as he began to extract them along with a few other choice parts.

Blood began to coat The Seeker's hands as he worked, and he pulled up his sleeves to keep them from getting any more stains. Not that it mattered that much; the brown-red soil of these mountains found a way to rub its color off on everything, as if the mountains were wet ink blots bleeding across a page.

With the most valuable and easy-to-carry parts tucked away in preservative containers, Gaius stood up and checked the position of the sun. As it turned out, the yellow orb was not yet at its apex; still morning, then. A large multitude of fluffy clouds lazily drifted through the air, and though he had left the desert many times before, Gaius still found himself surprised by their number. Even more so, he was surprised by how low to the ground they could get. Many of them, in fact, were lower than the tallest mountain peaks, breaking around the stone when the two made contact.

Beautiful. Even if Gaius got nothing out of this reconnaissance in nine years, he'd still be glad he made this trip. With long, confident steps, he began his trip down the mountain. A rust-red cloak swayed with his movements, rather than the usual black. He needed camouflage the most when he was high up in the mountains. Then, when he descended into the forested valleys, he would reverse the cloak, revealing a dark green color on the other side.

"North next, right? Yeah, north…" Gaius mumbled to himself, angling his descent toward that river. He would follow the water to the north for a while, charting this valley up close, then climb another mountain to search for other places of interest.

He didn't even realize that his decisions were not fully his own. Deep within Gaius' pack, a large ___ fang weakly pulsed, urging its bearer in a certain direction. It could feel it; other fangs were near. While the Dao Fang of Anush Naag was relatively mindless on its own, it possessed an instinctual desire to become complete.

And so, The Seeker went north.

----

Amaranth noisily munched on his twelfth raw potato as he watched the Yuan Clan members pass on by, sack slung over his shoulder.

Ever since his tribulation where he had attained the Single Pillar, his appetite had significantly increased. He supposed it made sense, taking something adjacent to the essence of Consumption into himself this deeply was the sort of thing that should have side-effects.

That being said, at times it really just felt absurd. Here he was, hiding from some Yuan Clan members while scouting the area before the Man-And-Mountain Array activated, and Amaranth couldn't hold himself back from eating all the while.

After his supply of carrots had run out, he had moved on to the beets, which he had expected to last his whole trip. Apparently not. So, all he had left were the potatoes he was planning to throw into a soup at home and a few other assorted vegetables.

He distinctly recalled disliking having his potatoes raw, but now, the feeling of actual resistance behind his bites felt wonderful. Odd, but he supposed it wasn't that bad of a quirk to arise from all of this.

If it wasn't for the fact that he was easily able to Consume any sound before it escaped too far, this would definitely be a liability.

But since he could, well. There was no real reason to hold back. After shoving the last piece in his mouth, he soared over their heads with a single bound, and walked off.

Now, where to head next?

As he considered a few locations, Amaranth noticed a wide-eyed Qi Condensation guardsman staring straight at him.

Guess he was being sloppy, huh.

Amaranth sighed. "Is there any chance that you can just forget this?"

As the guardsman proceeded to yell out for backup, it seemed that there wasn't.

Well, that wouldn't do. With a momentary pulse, the noise was strangled before it arrived to any ears.

"Sorry about this. Can't afford any witnesses, you know?"

The second Emanation was an unrefined blast, shaped only in the sense that it targeted a single person.

That was more than enough.

The last thing the guardsman saw was a Pillar, twisting and shifting with sparks, raised high to the sky and carved with images of beasts and humans. Then, there was a horrific noise of ripping and tearing, and viscera fell to the ground.

Amaranth pulled out a beast core of one of the Foundation-level beasts that lived in the area from his sack, and spread some of the Qi on the mauled remains. It wasn't uncommon for spirit beast attacks to occur in this region, so maybe this would go overlooked. It was unlikely, but it would at least delay the search for long enough that he would be long gone by the time they had realized it was a person's work.

He sighed. He really needed to get better at this sneaky stuff, didn't he? Oh well, he supposed that would only arrive with time.

So, where to go next, that was what he was thinking about before this, right? Right.

North felt good to him. He wasn't exactly sure why, but it sounded like a decent idea. Amaranth shrugged, and moved forwards.

In his sack, next to a head of cauliflower, was a smooth metal fang, flickering with energy. Grey sparks now ran over the surface of what was the pure essence of the Ninth Prince only a few years ago, but it called to its own nonetheless.

Outside of Consumption, or perhaps just related to it, there was one principle, one piece of the underlying nature of things that Amaranth tapped into rather often.

It was that like bound to like. And so it did.

----

Minervina had taken a liking to the mountains immediately. The climate was a pleasant change, with the foggy mornings and rainy evenings a stark contrast to the searing sunlight of her homeland. The rigours of mountain traversal meant little to her Bronze body, neither thin air, treacherous avalanches or vicious rapids could really stall her progress. A short burst of the Two-Headed Eagle formation was more than enough to deal with the occasional bottomless chasm or vast tarn filled with man-eating trout.

The flora was a particular delight to her, being unusually distinctive and vibrant. The Spirit Herbs here tended to be more expressive than their shy desert cousins, bursting with colour and scent that announced their presence for miles around. The sheer variety and potency of the blooms put the desert to shame, she could only imagine the bounty that would emerge once the Man As Mountain Array finally triggered. Unfortunately, it wasn't as easy as picking flowers from a summer meadow. The easily spotted Spirit Herbs were almost always heavily guarded.

"Of course, we should just see that as another opportunity to profit" The Poison Witch spoke aloud as she pulled out her skinning knives and set about butchering the remains of a Iron Blood Bear the size of a barn. The only external wound on the mighty beast was a few gashes on its snout from her fingernails. Something about the Mid-Foundation Stage beasts expression, even in death, conveyed the idea that it was utterly baffled to have met this fate.

As if summoned by her Mistress's words, Emilia the Spirit Serpent pours forth from the skin on the back of her neck. The toxin she used would spoil the hide and meat, rendering them useless apart from as a small snack for the serpent. She hacked into its belly with gusto regardless, since its Core should still be intact and viable if she moved swiftly. Another small boon of this long journey to the furthest, most isolated, corner of Yuan territory. It's the work of a few minutes to retrieve a round purple crystal from the giant beasts abdomen

"Not the biggest boon though, not at all." She mutters to herself as she returns to her makeshift camp, her prize glittering and gory in her hand. The camp is a relatively crude affair, mostly constructed from green wood hacked into shape with inhuman strength and covered with beast hides to keep the rain off and the warmth in. A handful of small arrays provide a degree of creature comforts such as light, heat and clean water. Altogether it speaks of a semi-permanent abode, the domain of a wandering Cultivator who has set down roots for a season or two.

Trespassing into the territory of a neutral power was a risky choice, yet Minervina had already found the opportunity she had set out to capture, she just had to prise it open. Beneath her rough-hewn home, a small innocuous cave led to a much larger cavern, one that contained six sealed coffers that bore the seals of the Barda family. Minervina had always known her family's legacy was old and had once been grand, but she had never expected the latest mystery the Scarlet Crow Scroll had given her. Instead of a new toxic recipe or cultivation method, it had revealed a map of the Yuan mountains, marked with the location of this ancient cache.

The coffers were safe in her dimensional pouch, unopened for the moment.The Barda family had lived up to its feared reputation with their construction and defence. It had taken months just to work through the traps in the cave, and she suspected accessing these last fragments of her ancestors' legacy would be the work of centuries.

She could have left by now, but there was one last piece of that legacy that remained, and she wasn't quite willing to leave it behind.

She entered the cavern and looked up at this last treasure. Over twenty feet tall, the guardian construct was roughly humanoid in shape, its steel skin moulded to give the impression of scales and its head shaped moulded into features suggestive of a dragon. Toxic Qi flowed from dozens of cracks and rents in its frame, polluting the cavern to such an extent that most Cultivators below Core Formation wouldn't survive the short stroll across the space. It was glancing into those wounds that made her certain the golem was Golden Devil work, the countless impossibly fine array carvings visible in its inner workings were iconically Optimatoi in style and design. But she had never seen records of the Clan deploying such sophisticated constructs, either in battle or as guardians. If she could only get the thing operational and bring it home, such a feat would surely be counted as a massive contribution to the Clan. Perhaps enough to buy the wealth of Pills and Stones she would need to smooth her path to the 8th pillar.

She took the bear's Spirit Core in her hand and pressed it to the most significant piece of battle damage, a busted open section of bronze plate approximately over the spot where a man's heart would rest. She muttered a mantra, unpracticed at channeling Beast Qi, pushing the stored power from the organic crystal into the construct. Naturally, she had tried power from her reserves of Spirit Stones first, but it had been wasted, the constructs' internal channels refusing the smooth, concentrated power of the earth. She theorised that since it was constructed here in the mountains, it might have been built with Beast Core power in mind instead.

It certainly seemed to take the power readily enough, the Core shimmered one last time before turning to dust, its Qi greedily slurped up inside the construct. Minervina tensed, waiting to see if anything happened.

----

An epoch of starvation, pain, frustration and despair. Its body and soul were wounded in a thousand places. Rendered motionless and sightless but robbed of the mercy of death or unconsciousness. Its sanity, ever a fragile thing, long since cast aside as a useless affectation. It dreamed spiteful fantasies. In each it inflicted countless tortures and bloody indignities, its claws rending flesh and snapping bone, its breath rotting flesh and its Qi mauling souls. This was its only salvation; to dream of sharing a tithe of the injustices that had been piled upon its spirit with the vile creatures that had condemned it to this failed Grave Bronze coffin.

Even eternity finally ends.

A droplet of power, angry and snarling is hovered within its reach. Like a starving dog sighting a bloody steak, the spirit snaps, gobbling the Qi as fast as it had appeared. A flicker of power flows through its leaden limbs. Life and vigour! After untold millennia, it could move!

No….. No, not yet. It's not enough power, perhaps enough to open its eyes for a minute or to lift a limb, but not yet enough to set out on its path of vengeance. After so many millennia of tortured petrification, the spirit in the statue had gained in patience even as it lost its sanity. If someone had fed it power once, it was only a matter of time before they tried again. It would bide its time, luxuriating in the relief from starvation, and indulge in freshly inspired dreams of bloody slaughter. It's time was at hand.

----

For a moment, Minervina is certain the construct is about to stir and activate, but after a few minutes of waiting it becomes clear that it remains moribund.

"I suppose I will just need to find more Cores?"

——

Gaius sat cross-legged at the edge of a rocky cliff, the wind lightly whistling past his ears. Other than that, the world was still here, no errand sound getting in his way; exactly what he needed right now. There was something out there, that much he was sure of. Something that felt familiar. More than ten miles to be sure, and definitely somewhere to the South.

He gazed down the dizzying heights of the cliff and into the valley below. It was a small valley, barely more than a canyon, and was dominated primarily by a river. There were narrow stretches of muddy, grassy land on either side of the river, enough for perhaps five men to walk side by side. If Gaius went down there and followed the river south to what he was sensing, he wouldn't be able to hide himself. And so here he sat, waiting for it to come to him.

He idly bit into a raw beast core as he waited. This was from a mere Ninth Heavenstage beast, a pittance to him by this point but not entirely worthless - a drop in a bucket was still more than nothing. The core of a beast above his great realm would be too much for him to digest - he would need to cultivate from it like a stone, which would not only be much less efficient than eating it but would distract him from following this signal. Before he knew it, the Ninth Heavenstage core was finished and he pulled out a second, eating that one in turn.

A few hours passed in this peaceful silence, and the signal grew stronger and stronger. It was only a few miles south of The Seeker's position by now, which meant it was much easier to make out. The aura was Foundation but also… not. It didn't map to either Foundation or Core very well, seeming like a mix of both. And within, there was something much more potent than the aura which surrounded it, like an ocean beneath a thin layer of ice.

Ah. That was a King. In fact, now that Gaius knew that… yes, he knew exactly which King it was.

----

Finishing the somewhat perilous climb down the rocky wall without too much difficulty, Gaius landed on the riverbank and walked toward the incoming signal, the bearer of which obviously knew that Gaius was also coming by now. After just another mile of walking, as his boots made soft squelching sounds in the mud, Amaranth came into focus around the bend of the canyon wall.

"To think I'd see you here, of all places." Gaius chuckled. "Same reason, right?"

Amaranth casually glanced over. It was almost like he had been expecting him, though with the senses of Foundation, that wasn't very surprising. "Oh hey, Gaius! Well, I'd imagine so. There's few other reasons to come this deep into Yuan territories, I'd think, especially around this time. So, have you had luck finding any place in particular you'd want to beeline for once the Array starts up?"

"Nothing overwhelmingly amazing, I'm afraid." Gaius chuckled. "But I do have a few ideas. In particular, there's this old mine; very big, but pretty much tapped out. That's gonna fill back up for sure. If I get there fast enough, maybe I could hide underground and draw from a few dozen at once…" He muttered to himself, still considering his options. "Not exactly the stuff of legends, but it'd help."

Amaranth nodded. "Areas flush with spirit stones do tend to be nice places to wait out during the chaos on the surface, I'd think. At least, if Yuan was anything like Qiguai, there's going to be a whole lot of killing and stealing going on, with us Devils targeted like usual, so grabbing hold of a place in advance would definitely help a whole lot." Amaranth looked like he was considering something for a few moments. "As for myself, I can't say I found something especially spectacular, or rather, I think I'm properly beginning to experience the downsides of getting the Single Pillar. This power is certainly extraordinary, but the sheer level of resource consumption to maintain it, forget even advance…" Amaranth shuddered. "It's kind of absurd."

Gaius sighed, leaning on the canyon wall. He looked down and winced at how obvious his footprints were in this mud - would it be worth the effort of erasing those? "It's quite something, I've heard. One King is like three Centurions and the Centuries they came with, in one body. But they eat just the same. Literally, in your case." He looked Amaranth up and down, pondering something. "Sorry if I sound like a broken array, but how unlikely is this? I can't help but feel a little suspicious. I hope you're not my soulmate, because I'm already taken." The Seeker smirked.

Amaranth laughed. "Yeah, no. I'm fairly sure that isn't even a thing. Though, I admit, I did have a strange feeling to move to the north. At the time, I just thought it was my instinct, but something feels off about that thought." Amaranth frowned. "You know, there are spirit beasts that prey on people with tricks like those. I'm not sure why that didn't come to mind earlier."

"If you're a beast powerful enough to mimic a King's aura, then you'd have to be in Core, which means I'm dead either way. As for me…" Gaius held up a hand and, with scarcely a thought, summoned the Aegis. "Test it if you'd like. I'd like to think no beast could copy it perfectly." Gaius smirked. "And on top of that… there's something else, isn't there? Some kind of pull, are you feeling it too?" He squinted, trying to locate the sensation.

After giving the Aegis a light poke, Amaranth looked satisfied. After Gaius continued, however, he looked like he was thinking of something. "Actually, yeah, a pulling sensation is exactly how I'd describe it. One second, I'd like to test something." Amaranth covered the cracks of his Pillar as much as he could, and hit the sack he was carrying with the barest piece of an Emanation. The feeling of the pull was momentarily snuffed, but in short order, it snapped back in place. "As I thought." Amaranth pulled out a smooth grey piece of metal from the sack, shaped like a fang. "It must be this thing. But why here?"

Gaius retrieved his compression pouch and dug his arm in it, rifling around through pockets. "It was around… oop, don't wanna prick myself on that. There we go." He pulled out another, nearly-identical fang. Like a tuning fork, it vibrated slightly, pulsing in tune with Amaranth's. "That would explain it, I suppose. If we were already in the same country, they might have pulled us closer together." Before he could say more, Gaius' head turned to the West. "And… wow, that's a lot stronger than before. Could that be lucky number three?" Holding the fang up in his palm, Gaius watched as the tip slowly rotated in the direction of the signal, like a compass needle.

"That would fit, considering precedent, but, hang on—" Amaranth actually lurched forward, such was the Fang's psychic pull. "Okay, yeah, that's crazy. I have to know what happens if more of these come together. Plus, if an outsider has stolen a piece of the Prince's legacy, we have to get it back."

——

While array-craft would never be her speciality, Minervina had never regretted getting a thorough grounding in the traditional crafts of her Clan. As a result of that diligence, the subtle network of alarm arrays and conjured tripwires that covered the territory for miles around her rough-hewn home gave her plenty of warning that two powerful Cultivators were approaching. They were strong enough to make her wary, but not enough to convince her to give up on her prize just yet.

She withdrew from the camp and moved instead further up the mountain to a covered spot with a good view of the valley below. She took a moment to leave a light in the window to attract her visitors' eyes and lure them closer. She was confident her perimeter defences would be more than a match for any unsuspecting Yuan patrol. Even if the Heavens had cursed her and an Elder had decided to visit this nameless and desolate valley, enough exploding caches of Forget-Me Poison should give her enough time to make good her escape.

It was almost too late that she recognised her Clan Mates. Their bloodlines were evident even from this distance, and she couldn't miss the unique fluctuations of a Single Pillar Cultivator. She had never been one to listen to tales or gossip about fellow disciples, but the number who had matched Callista's famous accomplishments were vanishingly small. She guessed this was Centurion Amaranth, perhaps accompanied by a favourite student or assistant.

She almost considered not calling out to them, suspecting some kind of ruse. Why in the Heavens would they be all the way out here?

In the end, she decided she had no reasonable choice but to call out to them. The Yuan had no reason to prepare such elaborate deception. If they knew she was out here, they would simply send a team of Experts or an Elder to arrest her.

Using the same technique she used to command legionnaires in war, she whispered and the wind carried her words to the two men just as they neared the first of seven lines of poisonous traps.

"What brings two Optimatoi so far from the desert? You know the Man-As-Mountain Array isn't due to awaken for quite some time yet. I wouldn't come any further forward by the way, unless you want to forget why you're here."

"Can, uh… can she hear us or is it one-way?" Gaius asked his friend. "Like, if she's this fortified, maybe she doesn't want us to yell. Or is having us yell a power play thing?" He thought for a moment longer. "She did call us… you know. So at least we know a foreigner didn't steal the Fang."

After a few more seconds passed in silence, Gaius decided to take the initiative. "Uh, hello!? This is Legionnaire Gaius Antonius and Centurion Amaranth Castellanos! We come in peace!" he called out, cupping his hands around his mouth. It wouldn't do to use qi this close to a sensitive tripwire.

Amaranth took some time to answer, so he ended up being late. "I'm a bit new to being a Centurion, though if my memory doesn't fail me, it depends on the variant, though I'd imagine that in this particular situation she'd be able to hear us clearly. Probably, at least. So that's probably not needed, Gaius, not like that's useful to say now that you've done it."

"If I've already offended a Senior then I'd rather keep making sure she can hear us. And if I haven't then that's great." Gaius said after a moment. "Both of us are bearers of… a certain man's legacy!" He yelled up to the listener. "If you are too, I think you'll know what we mean! They're resonating somehow! They pulled us here! Can we please come in and speak with you, Senior Sister!?"

Minervina's face twisted into a confused expression at the mention of a Legacy. After a moments thought she put a hand into the voluminous dimensional pouch she kept at her waist. Inside she grasped the Fang that the Prince had left with her. It shifted and twisted in her grasp, a subtle hissing voice ringing in her ears, full of secrets and a hint of mocking glee. Was this meeting His work? Even in death, the Prince's schemes marched apace. She sent her words on the wind once more.

"No need to shout, I can hear you just fine. I am Centurion Barda, here on a private expedition. Wait a moment and I will come and guide you through the trap field."

She came out of her concealed position, taking a moment to make herself presentable. Her dress was probably too covered in day-old bear blood for it to make any difference, but she should at least try and make an effort.

Walking through her own trap maze was simple enough, the invisible tripwires were already aligned to her Qi, taking the other two Devils through would be a bit more time-consuming. She really hadn't designed it with houseguests in mind.

As she approached the two Optimatoi she lifted a hand in casual greeting and spoke in her normal voice. "A pleasure to meet Clan out here, I can't say I ever expected that."

Gaius bowed low at the waist to his Senior. Her face seemed familiar to him, but he couldn't quite place it at the moment. "Thank you for having us, Senior Sister. We came because of these." He pulled out his own Dao Fang, which shook slightly in response to Minervina's. When Amaranth revealed his own Fang in turn, the shaking increased in intensity.

Amaranth bowed more shallowly. Similarly to Gaius, he could swear that he had seen her face before, but he remembered it being a lot more old. Perhaps a relative? It seems like she also worked with poison, that was for sure. This place was absolutely filled with the stuff, and that was only what he could sense. Someone who had reached the Great Circle of Foundation almost certainly had tricks that were less visible than these. "As Gaius said, that is indeed why we came here. I admit, I was a bit worried earlier that some of the Fangs might've gotten into the wrong hands after the Ninth Prince died and all, because as much as I trust his plans, that matter was rather direct. But now, I see my concerns were completely misplaced. Someone at your level is more than enough to make sure of that."

Minervina responded "Well, at least we know these fragments of his legacy are still intact and accounted for. I wouldn't be surprised if this encounter was part of his design somehow. What was your reason for visiting this distant region? If you don't mind me asking."

Gaius wanted to speak up, but held his tongue. It struck him how out of his depth he felt; whereas just a decade ago Amaranth had felt like a peer, now it was as if he stood at the heels of two giant monsters.

Amaranth doesn't notice Gaius's inner turmoil, and responds. "Well, it's mainly because the Man-And-Mountain Array is about to fire up soon enough, so we came to get the lay of the land in advance before heading into the chaos. You know how things are in Secret Realms for us Golden Devils, after all. It's best to get things like that out of the way before getting jumped by a group after some more luck."

"I was here for the same reason." Gaius hesitantly speaks up after a moment. "We both came alone and ran into each other later; we suspect it was the Fangs' resonance."

Minervina takes a moment to think, before replying "I suppose I'm out here for a similar reason. I got a solid lead on a cache of Golden Devil relics out here in Yuan territory. I wanted to beat the crowd and have it safely back home before the Array activated." She pauses again, clearly a tad reluctant to ask for help. "The last of the cache is proving difficult to move though. I wouldn't mind sharing the credit if you would be willing to help me?"

Amaranth visibly thought about it for a moment, and nodded slightly. "Sure, might as well. My sect point balance has been running real low as of late, so it'd probably be a good move. Besides, as a fellow Optimatoi, it's to be expected." The second nod was more decisive. "So, where's this cache anyway?"

Gaius nodded as well. "Gladly. I'm spending every point I earn right away these days, I'll take any work you have to offer."

Looking relieved at the easy acceptance Minervina gestures towards her humble hall. "It's located in a cave under the house. I'll show you through." The process of negotiating the minefield with the two cultivators is moderately laborious. Minervina makes a note to come back and move some of the mines around to clear a path if the other two Devils are going to be here for a while.

Once they are in the rough cave under the house, all three Cultivators can see the last remaining artefact. The gigantic golem dominates the chamber, its beautiful bronze lines and intricate runes clearly mark it as Optimatoi craft. "It's a treasure beyond anything I have seen before. I haven't ever seen a more potent looking battle construct. I think it's still intact enough to move, I'm just having trouble getting enough power into it for it to activate."

Gaius loudly whistled in appreciation. "Potent? You can say that again. These array-circuits, these cycling patterns…" he took off his hat and got closer, pressing his palm to the huge breastplate. "It's so complex, it's like a real meridian network. How does an autonomous construct even get this big and this complex, and still be efficient?" All previous thought of propriety had left his mind, consumed as he was by this mystery.

"A real meridian network, huh." Amaranth was speaking softly, almost like he was talking to himself. He stretched out a hand. "I wonder if... " Then, he shook his head, almost violently. "No, no, that'd be a horrible idea. Sorry about that." Amaranth proceeded to pretend like nothing had happened. "Yeah, this is one impressive piece of work, that's for sure. Based on the Qi that's left, the original must have been a peak Foundation artifact! Not too many of those."

"I suspect it might have even scraped the boundary of the next Realm in its prime." Minervina opines. "But we won't be sure until we can get it reactivated. I recently discovered that it only seems to accept Qi from Beast Cores into its reserves. A Mid Foundation Core barely seemed to touch the sides of its capacity though. I suspect It's going to be a lot of work gathering enough Cores to restore functionality."

"Well, if there's one thing I can do, that's hunt spirit beasts. You've asked the perfect person for the job, if I may be so bold. How many, you may ask? Well, how many pieces of bread have you eaten in your life?" Amaranth strikes a dramatic pose all out of the sudden, right hand raised over his face in an odd fashion, his other hand outstretched to the side. "Ah, the Ninth Prince must be rubbing off on me." He sheepishly stands normally again. "Well, that's enough of that. I should probably get to it soon."

"If I may also be bold, Senior, I… well, I'm not a King yet, but by now I don't think any Qi Condensation in the Virtuous Flipper Region is a better scout and hunter than me." Gaius' face is a bizarre mix of anxiety and smugness, as he attempts to perform the ultimate humble-brag. It just makes him look constipated. "I'll help as much as I can. I can at least bag Early Foundation beasts if I'm patient and careful enough."

Minervina turned to the Legionnaire "A skilled scout will be appreciated, though if your eyes are as keen as you say, I suspect your energies would be best spent on locating targets for myself and Amaranth. I can't speak to the Centurion but my woodcraft skills aren't up to much, which is reducing the efficiency of my own hunting."

At that, the three Cultivators withdrew back to the rough living space above the cavern, to discuss their plans over tea. They had a great deal of work ahead of them.

Over the next month, the three quickly fell into a consistent and comfortable rhythm. By day Gaius followed tracks, marked out territories and noted ideal paths of travel. By night Amaranth followed that advice and brought down the prey in question. And in between, Minervina harvested the last day's bounty, feeding the core to the mysterious construct and setting other useful reagents aside for later.

When having a discussion about spirit beast-derived regents, Gaius at one point brought up to Minervina that he had bonded with a Sacred Carp. That led down a digression about the difference between Dragonfire and regular fire, and whether the difference was chemical or entirely spiritual. Minervina was eventually forced to conclude that she could not in fact chemically synthesize Dragonfire without a sample on hand, but forced Gaius to promise to loan Scylla to her for a few weeks once she manifested the ability.

Perhaps the most eventful hunting trip came when Amaranth found himself snapped up by a huge carnivorous plant, its small and colorful flowers serving to lure in prey which it would crush between its two-ton jaws that hid beneath the surface. In an ironic bit of turnabout, Amaranth ate the monster from inside far faster than it could eat him. He was unable to bring in an intact core that day, but Minervina found its digestive fluids fascinating.

After much experimentation she discovered that the viscous liquid would dissolve an incredibly broad array of materials and even break down almost every type of Qi. While the effect was too slow and gentle to be of much use in a poison, Minervina took great satisfaction in bottling up great quantities of it to act as gifts and bribes for the various alchemists of her Legion on her return. Such a potent substance would be invaluable for any number of cleansing and bottleneck breaking elixirs. Who knows, it might even turn out to be the base ingredient for the mythological Alkahest, the mythological Universal Solvent whispered of in such erudite circles.

Finally, after months of bloody butchery and effectively dismantling the local spiritual ecology, the three Devils gather to review the fruits of their labours.

"How in the world does this big bastard need so much just to wake up?" Gaius sighed, watching as the dragonoid machine siphoned out energy from yet another beast core.

As the artificial beast core that circulated the construct's power finally, finally began whirring to life, Gaius took several generous steps back - that was quite a lot of smoke and steam pouring from its joints. "I'm choosing to assume that's a good thing, and it's purging impurities."

Gaius whipped out a sheaf of parchment and scratched out a new line of script. "So, to recap, we've fed it: Three Platinum Bears, one Devouring Hidden Tree, four Phantom Wolves, two False Rainbow Carp, one Hill Giant and…" he scratched his head. "I feel like I missed one, right? A bug, I think…"

"A Three Star Vermillion Wasp Queen. Getting into her hive was tricky even for me, though I have to admit the jelly was worth it alone. I suspect her Core was the greatest prize of the lot, though that troop of Mourning Monkeys had surprisingly potent Qi for their size as well." She looks at the Wasp Queen Core in her hand, a smooth multi-coloured pebble of congealed power. It smelled of sweet grass and spite. "I can only hope it will be enough…."

"It had better be. It's looking almost ready to explode." Gaius took another half dozen steps back for good measure and tilted his hat down to keep the smoke out of his eyes. It was incredibly acrid - these really were impurities!

Amaranth leaned closer, looking rather excited. "That's for sure! I haven't seen something this jam-packed with Qi while still in Foundation in— ever, actually." His voice took a considering tone. "You know, I'm kind of surprised that clouds aren't gathering by now. Then again, I suppose the builders must've taken that into account."

Gaius shut out his sense of touch and taste to amplify his spiritual sense further, observing the construct's artificial meridians. "The blockages are mostly cleared. That last core you're holding should do it."

With a nod all doubt falls away from the Foundation Experts face. She lifts the glowing crystal to the Construct and with muttered word and a whisper of will it dissolves. A rainbow of twisted bestial Qi coils in her palm like a snake, before being pulled into the Constructs own core with a greedy plop. Taking a few steps back, she crosses her arms behind her back. "I suppose now we simply wait."

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Power. So much power.

Crocea Mors (though no one had said that name in so very long) squirmed as it was filled to bursting. So many millennia of waste was forced out, and mechanical systems of a sophistication and complexity that no one alive could replicate whirred to life.

Set into its gold-scaled head, a pair of green eyes flashed brightly. It could move. It could really move!

Joints, servos and motors loudly protested as the weapon's head moved from side to side, surveying its surroundings. Excess qi sunk into its ammunition tanks, brewing chemical and biological horrors within.

If Crocea Mors could grin, it would. It had been so long that even its programming had fallen away, dozens of restrictions on its mind crumbling to the ravages of time. Free to see the world without blinders, it felt something far above its head - a distant but powerful intent, full of anger yet promising change.

Such things were best left for later. Step one: revenge.


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Part 1 of a huge collab between myself @no. and @ReaderOfFate. Its been a pleasure working with such fine fellows.


Comes out at 7200 words.
 
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It was a bit optimistic to hope we'd get the whole thing out this turn. It's turning out much longer than we expected; this is probably about a third of the collab's eventual length.

Still, this is just enough to put me at exactly 60k for the turn words going into Yuan(and 220k for Gaius' lifetime). Very happy about that.
 
Aretaphila Myia X4 - Beneath the Storm, Magic Rhapsody
Aretaphila Myia X4
Beneath the Storm, Magic Rhapsody

Eclipse Reversal Island.

A storied place for the Clan, and singularly responsible for one of Archegetes Manuel Konstantinos' greatest triumphs since taking control of the clan shortly before she was born.

Only Pleuron could be considered a more revered site of hope for the modern Clan than the great source of victory that drove the Battle Blood Cannibal Sect from the desert. Drenched in the inverting Shadow, it had taken a great trap laid by Sun Dixiang in the city of Fu Tong; a snare intended for his longtime rival, with an obscene amount of Light Qi intended to blind and hobble the leader of the Golden Devils and give Old Cannibal free rein on the battlefield. However, Old Gold had foreseen this, and laid a trap on that very island.

Empowered by the Dao of Heavens Shadow, the formerly nameless floating island had been turned into a facsimile of the moon - flying before the sun, it had created an eclipse enough to fuel the empowerment of an array passed down from Old Gold's own mentor for just such an occasion. Heaven's Shadow had stretched over the battlefield that day, inverting all into strength for the Grand Elder.

Strength which had been turned to immediate purpose, and Old Cannibals utter defeat. The near one hundred thousand deaths that day had broken the Battle Blood Cannibals strength as a unified force. Between starvation that had been revealed by the depopulated Blighted Lands and the breaking of the inherent promise of any Sect's Grand Elder, the pile of sand that was the Battle Blood Cannibal Sect fell apart, no longer able to act in coherent fashion.

And thus easy prey for the Golden Devil Clan's many strengths.

Uncounted numbers of desperate Cannibals threw themselves upon the teeth of Optimatoi defenses in the hopes of feasting upon the mortals safely ensconced behind them. Nearly all had fallen.

It had been less than a century since that auspicious day, and so the Dao Emanations of that nation-shaking Eclipse were still in effect. Floating in the sky was an unceasing cloud of inky darkness, ever turning brightest day into deepest ebon.

From Inversion, Strength.

There was only a single problem, aside from the obvious obstacle of the Tribulation itself: Reports of the island from surveyors after the battle noted the presence of a peculiar Spirit Beast. An owl that was theorized to have made its nest on the flying island before its transformation, and one which had in turn been affected by the Dao effects that had emanated during the Battle of Shadow-Over-Sun. Extraordinarily potent - yet completely mad - the surveyors who had seen it claimed it possessed cultivation at only the first Heavenstage, yet seemingly slaughtered any that dared to approach it including a Centurion at the peak of Foundation Establishment.

Named Oelivert - after some obscure legend about a castle which empowered the weak and cursed the strong - the spirit beast terrorized any that had attempted to investigate the site. Given the ever-demanding situation for the Clan between the end of the War, the settlement of the new territories, and then the preparation for the Trials, no Core Formation Elders had been able to find the time to clear out the creature.

Reverence for the site itself kept any bands of Clan members from arriving in force enough to strike the beast down with a Hoplite formation as well.

Aretaphila knew it for a fact. The mission to exterminate the Owl had been on the Contribution Board for 40 years, and the number of Cultivators that had signed up for the group never exceeded the single digits.

In a way, it was the height of selfishness for the Myia scion to disturb this cultural landmark for the Clan. But she did not do it for base amusement.

Beneath the seared ruins of Arcocrinth, Aretaphila Myia had risen to the Thirteenth Heavenstage. The first among the Golden Devils to do so since Rina Callista had nearly a century ago. The Clan needed power. She needed power. Even if there were sticklers and naysayers who would complain…

Aretaphila knew Old Gold well enough to confidently say that he would be, if anything, glad this place would be sacrificed for the sake of raising up a second King in service to the Clan. The way to the island itself remained unchanged. A mysterious barrel that remained equidistant from the landmass itself, even as it had moved across the sky towards the fateful battle at Fu Tong.

As the older woman hopped into the weathered wooden vehicle, she began meditating on the trials to come.

...

Within the inky blackness of the island itself, Aretaphila Myia gripped the handle of her reliable Kettleblade - a treasure carried with her since that fateful trip into the Yuan Man-As-Mountain Array over a century ago. While possessed of no great skill with the awkwardly crafted weapon, the security of its edge in close quarters was still reliable even after so many years.

Darkness defined the landmass, with no light to speak of. However, Aretaphila had long become inured to the shortcomings of mere vision. The darkness beneath the earth of her first mission. The invisible grasping hands hidden within sandstorms. And most recently the agony caused by the destruction of one eye and the near-blindness of the other. Fortunately, she had access to just the tool for handling the environment. Near her breast was held a mysterious totem. A molded lump of iron in the shape of a snake fang, carrying the faintest traces of its own Qi.

A gift from a dream, left by an old friend now dead.

"If I'm going to be bringing you along," Aretaphila spoke to an unseen ghost, "The least you can do is pull your weight in getting us there."

The Melodious Bat Contralto Art was an easily learned sensory art possessed by the Technique Palace. Ordinarily Aretaphila would rely on her own family's arts, but the sonorous techniques in the Myia archives were far too expensive and covered too wide a range for use in mass combat. By contrast, this Qi Condensation art was intended for the personal scale, to explore closed areas of low visibility. Cheap and limited, by channeling the Contralto first through her physique and then through the Venomsteel Fang Areaphila was able to strengthen the effects enough to be useful even in the midst of the Dao Emanation induced darkness around her.

There was a pit in the center of the island, where the Dao Emanations were at their thickest, according to records. Presumably the place where the Array had been activated. Normally when dealing with Tribulations, the common sense was to seek out the highest place possible to weaken the Heaven's fury by even an infinitesimal amount. But like all other things in this mad endeavor over two centuries, Aretaphila was more than willing to buck the conventional wisdom in her pursuit of strength.

A pit of the deepest darkness tainted with the power of reversal would doubtless give the Dao Emanations the greatest amount of time to make their work upon the Tribulation Lightning. The Princesses records of her own breakthrough showed that each five element cycle began with a burst of Tribulation lightning before proceeding through the typical cycle, meaning that each cycle would have just that much power stripped from it as it came for her.

The island was not particularly large.

It was only a short walk before Aretaphila's song revealed the edges of the crater in question. Standing on the edge was a large creature, it's shape somewhat obscured, it's unique properties weakening even the waves of Demonic Tunes that would otherwise wash over it. There was no great secret to it. There was only one Beast worth mentioning that made the floating island its home.

A muffled hoot accompanied the song, the blurring mosaic to Aretaphila's senses shooting through the air at speeds far greater than it's apparent cultivation should be capable of. Closing the distance before landing before the Myia scion with a brush of stagnant, filthy air.

Aretaphila opened her eye. In the darkness two pools of toxic yellow glowed, a fel light that twitched and swiveled, lambent pupils that contracted, expanded, and split to look into the unknowing distance at near random.

A beak clicked at empty air before hooting.

Whatever intelligence the vast creature had had was assuredly long gone now.

"I know just how to deal with you," Aretaphila muttered, the sea of her qi pulsing as she prepared herself.

As if sensing the threat, the strange owl named Oelivert hooted once more, one of it's puissant eyes glaring at the smaller woman with utter loathing and a hint of recognition. In an instant, it bent in half, it's beak lurching forward to snap up the diminutive cultivator in a single movement. Not for hunger, but for the sake of hatred. A grudge against those it, even through the madness and ever-looping self contradictory thoughts that often forgot, knew were responsible for its current state!

If only, if only, if only it could leave the accursed place that had once been its nest, Oelivert surely could have wreaked vengeance against those bronze-skinned devils that had cursed it so!

But first, it would settle for returning to its previous strength. One. Bite. At a time.

A purple-veined beak came to rest against a still palm, exerting no force. Even if Oelivert was possessed of a strange Dao Magic, it was still of the first Heavenstage in terms of strength. Before one who had reached the thirteenth, that small hand represented an insurmountable barrier to overcome.

The strike was halted,

The owl struggled. Straining against the absurdity facing it. The frustration and despair of loss filling its fractured mind anew, knowing that it had been cursed with weakness when it should have been strong!

It was all the fault of those interlopers! That foolish girl! One death hadn't been enough! It should have drawn it out longer, made it experience even a fraction of the anguish that was this existence!

Then came a note. Like a clear ringing chime, it traveled from the outstretched palm, fingers now delicately gripping Oelivert's beak, and traveled into the larger body of the owl. Where that resonance traveled, many things which had built up in that frame over time shook. For the first time in a long time, Oelivert felt its fractured mind focus into a single, coherent thought.

Whatever curse had overwhelmed it, infecting it, destroying and recreating its identity down to it's very base essence was now recognized as an invader by what little identity the majestic creature it had once been had left.

Therefore, the warped Beast Core churned. Beast Qi rising up to purge the unknown elements, shaking off that which did not belong. Like every other venom that had infested it from its prey had been defeated eventually. In that short-lived moment, the once-fractured mind of Oelivert relaxed. Surely, it's suffering was at an end.

The Note intensified. Empowering the Beast Qi that struggled to flush out the cursed essence which had twisted its very being. It grew stronger. Shook harder. But so relieved at this temporary reprieve of sanity, that the dulled and overworn instincts of the Owl did not react to the abnormality. That which was "normal" having long been forgotten. Proud wisdom long since lost.

Cursed flesh stubbornly refused.

The Beast Core strained, empowering the oscillating wave of purging Qi far beyond its ordinary limits, the organ instinctively realizing how dire and deep reaching the rot of the body and soul was.

Still the Brown Note rang, and with it the Owl's Beast Core strained, a loud crack the first sign of success in its purging.

A wing fell to the darkened earth with a deadened thud.

But Oelivert did not notice, the euphoria of sanity and the ringing of the Note overwhelming the deadened sense of pain that transmitted from the atrophied limb.

The veined beak of the owl cracked down the middle, the oscillations now easily visible on the creatures body even through the shape-obscuring shroud around it.

Owls parted and fell, blackened ichor pouring from a tear in the Owl's front, and still it's Beast Core churned, for there was so very much work to be done. As the tainted liquid was purged from its body, the Owl felt a sense of euphoria, a blockage and strain it hadn't even realized now undone. For the first time in nearly a century it felt true bliss, the Note ringing through its mind with buzzing clarity.

The second wing fell with the latest pulse of Beast Qi, part of its beak breaking off from the oscillations as well.

Impassively, Aretaphila watched as chunks of the bird shook themselves free beneath her light grip. The owl kept shaking, harder and harder as if in the grips of a seizure, it's puissant orbs closed in genuine peace and tranquility.

Another crack, this one by far the loudest issued through the darkened air. The majority of its body fell limp, and yet it's core still kept pouring out Qi to fuel the purging process. Between Aretaphila's fingers, Oelivert's beak shook itself into dust, but by now it was too late.

A final crack arose from the owl, it's head splitting itself in two.

Finally, the owl was free of its long nightmare.

Sparing only a short cyclopean glance to the fallen creature, Aretaphila Myia proceeded into the depths of the crater to make her preparations for the trial ahead.

...

With the monstrous owl dead, Aretaphila had climbed down into the crater at the heart of the island. A pitch-dark pit, from which even the Qi for her enhanced Melodious Bat Contralto Art was unceremoniously consumed, leaving her the cultivator truly blind.

Here, far more than anywhere else, space was twisted by the Dao Emanations of Heaven's Shadow. One's worst secrets laid bare. Hidden truths revealed. Wild, uncontained, uncontrollable. Tendrils of metaphorical shadow clawed at Aretaphila's soul again. And again. And again. Each strike inducing immense agony on that tenuous connection between her body and that mysterious thing.

If it had been the remnants of any other Nascent Soul, perhaps, it may have been enough to reduce her to a gibbering mess like Oelivert had been. But it was not. Alone among all Dao, this was one which Aretaphila was already fairly familiar with. It was an assault which - even if it had been measured - she had survived before.

The lessons of twenty years ago were not so easily forgotten.

And so the Myia scion delved deeper and deeper. One step at a time, as shadows sought to embrace her. Harrie her. Drive her mad. Each grasping assault from the mindless echoes of the Archegetes Dao was endured, finding no purchase. For no matter what else, Aretaphila Myia would not falter beneath a trial which she had already passed through once before.

Space warped. Time lost meaning. Blindly, she climbed ever downward. After a mysterious amount of time the slope came to an end at the terminus of the abyss. Evening out into a rounded bottom from which little enough sensation was possible. Still, enough feeling remained that the young woman could reach into her spatial ring, and guided through the faintest sensation of touch drew out what she knew to be a chain of bells strung together.

One hundred and eight silver bells in all, the chain could be resized at need, for their true intent was to create a partitioned space. Each link and each bell were inscribed with infinitesimally small arrays intended to dampen outside influences and strengthen the Demonic Tunes of a Myia Clan cultivator. The 108 Chimes treasure was either a weapon of last resort for Qi Condensation, or a tool to assist in breaking through to Foundation Establishment.

Here, at the bottom of the inky abyss, the spatial warping effects from the rest of the crater were absent. It was simplicity itself for Aretaphila to trace a circle around the bottom of the crater, looping the chain back to itself before enclosing herself utterly.

Once the circuit was complete, the inky blackness shifted. The atmosphere changed, ever so slightly. And so Aretaphila Myia walked towards the center of that territory to lay down her second tool to assist against the Tribulation to come: The Zhong of Deep Waters. A long time companion, having been with her for nearly two centuries and the valuable treasure that had enabled her to come as far as she had. However, the scroll left behind by the Zhong's creator had made it clear that it was a flawed prototype, incapable of aiding the cultivation of those above Qi Condensation. So, Aretaphila had considered.

Would she save the treasure for those who came afterward? Or would she, once again, decide to bet on her personal ambition? For the first time in a long while, she had come to the conclusion that, at the very least, she would push at the limits of what she could reach. A King is not timid.

She'd bet it all here.

One final trump card was held in reserve, however. This land would surely weaken the fury of heaven as it came down. The bells would weaken it further, and strengthen her Demonic Tunes. And the Zhong itself would harmonize with her constitution and the 108 Bells as well as her final card for the final phases of the Tribulation.

She came to the realization that she stood upon the precipice of the rest of her life. To either end here, and now. Or to move forward into an uncertain but glorious future.

Static rose from her bronzed skin, and the dead flesh of her destroyed eye twinged in forgotten pain.

There was nothing left but to cross that threshold.

So it was, in the depths of the abyss, that Aretaphila Myia sat cross legged and took stock for perhaps the final time. With another expression of will, a bottle of the Three Millennium Turtlemaple Brandy appeared from the storage ring - a holdover from the aperture of the Myia Ancestor who's soul had gone into forging the ring. Her family had granted her the ring - and its contents - in the expectation that she would want to hold a private celebration after this was all over.

One way or another, once she became a Single Pillar King - if she became one - Aretaphila would be Clan Elder in truth. But the Myia were rebuilding, even if not in blood, in wealth and legacy. Aretaphila's Father and Grandfather would ensure that Waycastle Myia would fulfill its role while Aretaphila would take on the duties expected of her potential station.

That's why Aretaphila resolved to drink first.

Because she would not get another chance to. Not for a long, long time. Not until she had secured her family's legacy beyond her. Not before the Myia name was known far and wide again on its own merits, not merely as one of the Indomitable Thirteen.

A jade cup appeared, cracked on one side but still carrying an incredible dignity and weight of age.

In the darkness, the diminutive woman blindly poured the rich, amber liquid into the cup. With a half lidded gaze, she stared unseeing into the abyss, seeming to draw from it two centuries worth of memories. The death of her mother. The suffering beneath the desert at the hands of a mere formation establishment bandit. A decade fleeing her grandmother's enemy and then slaughtering those who were left victims in passage of her flight from him. The people who she had saved. The many faces of those who she could not.

Avenging the Fecundity Storks suffering, and finding that badge of their legacy. Arcocrinth. Pleuron.

Ahead of her, even in the darkness of the Archegetes Dao, she saw golden hair marching steadily. Falteringly.

Like a clumsy fool.

"It's been a good life," Aretaphila Myia reflected, the scars and the triumphs both sending the Qi Sea within her dantian to boiling. Ripples forming within her metaphorical center as actinic shocks began running through her body.

Aretaphila Myia drank deeply from that priceless treasure, wondering if this was what that Princess had felt like sixty years ago.

Something broke.

Unseen above her, the Heaven's roared in challenge.

...

For the third time in a century, a 13th Heavenstage had committed to heresy within the Organ Meat Desert. The fourth time in the Virtuous Flipper Region. Though Aretaphila Myia had considered her ascension to be a crossroads for the destiny she yet sought to embrace, the guiding intelligence of Heaven's Wrath saw in her act a wholly different thing:

Another threat to the balance. Though the squabbling heretics had culled one another, holding a precipitous balance understood through time and the rivers of causality, alone did the Golden Devil's ever subvert and wear down the Heaven's strength through base cunning and utilization of any means.

Only a few scant years ago, the strength gathered to strike down a heretic King of the Fifth Sea had been diverted, a fraction of that deadly tribulation used to serve as a proverbial step leader for the strike against an ever greater heresy: The most senior, sole remaining Single Pillar Key in the region had began to drink deeply from a Heavenly Star, taking strength not meant for her.

Now drained, the Heavens had no intention to allow a comrade to rise and join her, the en between Aretaphila Myia and Rina Callista having been a firm one for over two centuries. Enabling the nascent World Lord further could not be risked.

Thus, what strength could be spared would be brought down, even as the Song hid deep within the echoes of the Shadow. This destiny would end here. The aberration burnt out before it could metastasize and become a new cancer upon reality.

Pitch black clouds gathered over Eclipse Reversal Island. An inky darkness which drowned out the sun, and brought an end to the inversions power. A darkness deeper than the shadow enveloped it, and in so doing weakened those Dao Echoes which had been counted on to blunt Heaven's wrath.

Within the darkness which rumbled, sounds like hammers and tongs clashed endlessly, rumbling through the skies for dozens of li around. Heard even from within Fu Tong, the lingering curses and scraps of light qi from Old Cannibals gambit were snatched by otherworldly force. Strength torn from the surrounding area, repurposed and compressed, warped into a single killing strike of metallic Qi.

Hungering winds swept across the desert, sands drawing echoes of a song which had hunted their target so long ago. Their experience would be incorporated into that perfect lance, to ensure that it struck without err.

The strikes came to an end, the gathering storm quenching its weapon in the skies above the one who possessed such heretical temerity.

A burning white lance of metallic qi fell from heaven, striking the flying shroud of darkness and piercing it with immense strength. Plumes of Shadow were scattered, wisps that dissolved within the greater darkness cast by the storm above. Wind howled, and yet even as that first lance burrowed ever deeper some instinct intrinsic to the Shadow struck back. Echoes of Inversion tore off base strength from that bolt, and reduced a certain-kill for any cultivator within the Core Formation Great Realm to something merely astonishingly deadly for an individual within Foundation Establishment.

There was a clap of thunder, and Aretaphila stoof back up, her sole eye narrowed in a glare at the coming tribulation.

In her hand was the sole weapon she needed. A cunningly worked bronze hammer, seemingly shaped from the scales of a fish.

The Zhong of Deep Waters was struck, the vibration of Qi ringing and harmonizing with the ease of long practice. Echoed and amplified by the Clear Summer's Bell Constitution, that singular note synchronized with the wordless Song deep within Aretaphila's dantian.

Unflinchingly, the Myia scion stood beneath the pillar of tribulation as it finally tunneled through the pitch darkness of the abyss.

As the lightning descended, she screamed defiance.

The wide pillar slammed down, dead on target, but what had been an unbroken pillar flickered, becoming a jagged, natural thing. In that instant the crash of thunder was broken by the haunting note released by Aretaphila. Not part of some secret Demonic Tunes Art, it was a purest expression of her Qi.

The lightning ceased, the metallic Qi temporarily robbed of its overwhelming killing intent. But the wound that the first strike had dealt to the island did not fade away immediately, forming a tunnel that revealed the roiling storm if only one had the eyes to spare.

Nine Cycles she would need to hold. Nine cycles, each more powerful than the last. Only then would she complete her ascension.

Aretaphila's eye shifted too and fro, attempting to grasp the location of the avatar of pure water that would be sent after her next. Too reliant upon the experience of her fellow, she failed to consider the most important advice Rina had left behind.

An arm of pure stormcloud descended upon her, the splayed fingers of Awakened Storm Lord. Brought to life by the metal Qi above, and charged with express purpose to hurl the spear that would end her hubris. Violent and violet ripples of rain clouds, the wind-that-was-flesh threatening to flense her hard-forged flesh from her bones.

The 108 Bells around her lit up with the light of their arrays, activated by the abundance of metal qi scattered into the air by the thunderbolts dispersion. Aretaphila's note of defiance shifted in pitch, and she began to sing in truth. A song of sunny days under a sun so hot as to be fit to bake clay, of a desert so dry as to lay to rest the very idea of rain.

Actinic fingers closed around the Myia scions throat, trying to seal her Song.

But all her body was a bell, and so the song reverberated. Water was something which freely carried water after all.

The Awakened Storm Lord's grip faltered, wavered, and then dissipated as its body evaporated violently, seeping into the shadows around her.

Aretaphila fell to the ground, gasping desperately as she sensed the cleansing properties of the storm, destruction and rebirth, seep into the hidden depths of the Abyss.

Within the desert, only the hardiest of plantlife can survive. A droplet of water enabling life to sustain itself for potentially eons in the absence of rainfall. On the flying islands, endlessly subjected to the headwinds that scoured the surface clean of all life, another layer of evolutionary crucibles were laid out to be survived against.

Though rain did not fall upon those islands, other sources of sustenance did. The lifeblood of those creatures which set foot upon those strange lands would seep into the earth of them, from which little by little did those deeply hidden roots drink so desperately until the day they could rise from the surface in strength enough to survive that harsh environment.

Purged of the curses of Inversion by the rejuvenating storm, tendrils and rootlets burrowed out around Aretaphila in a frenzy, and so she scrambled to her feet as those plants drank deeply of the Storm Lords flesh, growing into copse of Corpse Crucifixion Pine Trees, darting towards her like spears, the needles on their branches ready to flense her into so much meat.

There is a hiss as from the Myia's side she draws her Ketteblade, the heavy Qi in the air beginning its signature ability. Desperately Aretaphila swung, chopping the growing and grasping trees that sought to tear her apart.

Her song changed, even as she desperately dodged and hacked at her attackers; an imitation of a much more powerful, much more horrifying song. A thing of great, ravenous hunger. Which rendered all as puppets compared to her.

Though not of the Blood Path, ten years of practicing against the Devil's Music was enough for Aretaphila to understand its most basic principles. The cursed Tunes echoed within her body, and the echoes of Consumption that those notes carried stopped the grasping, ravenous trees cold. Though their growth had been explosive, the Storm Lord's rejuvenating Qi had not been infinite, and as the Devil's Music aligned itself with the Kettleblades on ravenous properties, the assault of the Corpse Crucifixion Pines began to falter. The lush evergreen growth losing its luster, rotting into a dried and dull brown.

Snapping, the trees could no longer bear their own weight and crashed to the ground as dry kindling.

She didn't have much time.

Hammer in hand, Aretaphila ran back towards the Zhong of Deep Waters as the already dying Pines spitefully burned, summoning forth an echo from the memories Aretaphila had struck them with.

The embodiment of the deserts heat, stripping the unworthy traveler bare with immense heat. A harbinger of death, and the slave-forgers said to lie at the heart of the Shattering Glass Javelin Arrays flash-forges. The sands of the desert carried knowledge of fires untempered, wild and murderous, only ever needing the barest of fuel to rise up in apocalyptic conflagration.

Here in this twisted realm the sand carried up by the howling storm held memories and slumbering embers, waiting for an opportunity to avenge fallen and enslaved kin. The deserts where it had reigned as emperor over the long-dead Shanqu were once their unyielding Domain, save for the Arrogant Father and his sons until the Golden Devils came down from the mountains and bound them in chains. Forever ending their rule.

Drawn by this chance at vengeance, to strike down a hope of those vile invaders an Illusionary Haze Efreet took form, radiating death as the Darkness around it baked and rippled from the heat of its presence.

The air is filled with the ringing of a bell, and the dog-faced spirits snout turned towards the source in recognition. A cool, calming tune. Deep waters, hidden beneath the sands and immune to the heat of the desert.

But the hated Devil did not release the note. Instead, she stood ready as the echo of hidden grottoes grew more and more powerful within her. Seeing this chance for what it was, the Efreet leapt from the edges of the crater, diving towards the diminutive girl with outstretched claw.

The edge of the Kettleblade met the Efreet's strike. It's edge turned cherry-red with the heat of its flame qi. Barely held at a stalemate as the Myia grunted and strained, refusing to give ground to the monster's charge.For a moment, she held before her wrist began to shake. The Myia were no great Body Cultivators, after all.

A shrill shriek filled the air, drawing the Efreets eye. Steam hissed out from the hilt of the blade, and rejuvenating Qi blasted into the arm of the one-eyed woman who turned a fearless smirk towards it. The fire-aspected monster growled, realizing the trick just as a song of deep pools and flowing grottoes washed over it, dampening the hungering flames of its existence even as its flames were drawn deeply and hungrily by the sword in Aretaphila's hand.

It had been a lucky gambit that the Kettleblade could withstand the power of a fire elemental of that level. One that Aretaphila wasn't sure would continue to hold true for so long as the trial continued. But this was something she had resolved to deal with. For now, the Kettleblades' rejuvenating properties filled her body with stolen Qi, restoring her stamina.

Even if it wasn't quite as effective as the war banner that the Princess had used during her own breakthrough, the trick of turning the Tribulations own Qi into her strength was one she didn't mind borrowing liberally from. As the Efreet dimmed into cinders, it's unclaimed Qi sinking into the earth beneath her feet, Aretaphila held her hammer at the ready, preparing for the Earth-aspected part of the cycle.

A hoot caught her off guard, her cyclopean gaze turning towards a puissant set of eyes, glazed over and unseeing. Enshadowed gravedirt providing a shape to hold together the broken parts of the body. Shadows and ichor pooling beneath the looming form of Oeilvert; returned in death to exact vengeance upon its killer.

"Shit!" The Myia cursed, smacking the Zhong of Deep Waters to empower another Song with which to crush the fowl revenant even as an avian claw grasped her, slamming her much smaller form into the bottom of the crater.

Heaven's Wrath had not been blind to the Golden Devil's preparations.

When Aretaphila had slain the mutanated owl, it's mind was for the first time in many decades its own. And even through the euphoria it felt at the return of its sanity, at the very very last moment it recognized its doom.

Cursing the Golden Devil Clan, and the one who had murdered it in particular. Barely enough to form a grudge, Oelivert had been unable to gain the strength to rise up from the dead with its depleted and cracked Beast Core. However, the Five Element Tribulation had strength to spare.

And a need for one who would not hesitate to dispense justice in its stead.

The Metal Qi that had been scattered by the resistance of the Heaven's Shadow had sparked some semblance of life to the ruined Beast Core, freshly dead, and in doing so nurtured the grudge it had left behind.

Showers of the storm had come next, washing away the rot and weakness, and offering rebirth to the fractured creature.

Wood Qi had come next, seeking sustenance from the corpse and ichor of the Owl, the beating undead core had taken control of the myriad rootlets that infested it, turning its hunger and growth against it.

Finally the ash fell, an offering of fire and incense upon the gravestone that was Oelivert's home.

With the infusion of earth qi that followed into the gravesoil, it was simplicity itself for Oelivert to revive as an Engrudged Soil Revenant, a type of undead that used the dirt of its grave in place of a body when it was too rotted to otherwise hold its own form. No longer living, the shuffling mass of soil and hatred dragged Aretaphila back towards its main body, its shattered beak replaced by meaty rootlets which twitched and snapped hungrily.

The note echoed, and with a triumphant grin Aretaphila Sang once more, that same note which had brought about Oelivert's death.

Now empowered by the Zhong of Deep Waters and the properties of the 108 Bells Array in addition to the two prior elements, the Brown Note sank deeper and with more intensity than Aretaphila had ever before used it.

But there was no living flesh to react. To recognize impurity. Rather, all that was, was a mass held together by Qi and the Echoes of Inversion.

Where once the gravesoil flaked, it firmed up into solid grey stone. Austere. The hungering rootlets of the Revenants beak firmed, becoming a set of cruel wooden carapaces. Feathers of pure shadow defined themselves.

With a blink, the glassy and filmed eyes cleared. Now, brimming with intelligence, the Corpsesoil Revenant Oelivert stood. Brimming with malevolence, the beast stood triumphant. Instinctively, it knew.

Once it slew and devoured the heretical cultivator beneath its feet, the Heaven's would reward it with true Life. Power to break through back to its previous peak, and now with the added strength of its new form. Even if it had become an abomination, it was still less of one than this overly arrogant Golden Devil.

Without hesitation Oelivert leaned down to enjoy this first and most fulfilling meal.

"Inversion, right?"

Another note sang through the air, stabbing deeply into the Owl's breast.

The equal and opposite of what had struck it dead. This was a Clear Summer's Sky. A wide and Blue expanse which calmed the heart and brought inner peace. In horror the revenant realized it had been too slow, it did not understand its new body. Too late to stop the reflexive interaction of the Heaven's Shadow within it, inverting the effects of the Blue Note.

Aretaphila dragged herself up to her feet as the monster above her hooted indignantly as it fell apart. It was common sense, really. The Blue and Brown Notes were her oldest held techniques, and she knew them to be equal and opposite.

Obviously something which turned the Brown Note to medicine would turn the Blue Note to poison.

As she collected herself at the center of her array once more, she looked back up to the sky where the funneling storm was still visible through the drilled open Abyss.

One cycle down, and she was already feeling the strain on her reserves.

Still, she had a final trump card aside from her overall strategy. It was a pain that the Tribulation had been able to so adroitly turn her prepared ground against her, but the One Hundred Eight Bells Array still held strong, and the Zhong of Deep Waters had been effective along with the enhancements afforded by her Physique and the Prince's black Dao Pillar.

Bronze hammer in hand, Aretaphila stared back into the forming funnel cloud, the thundering hammering of immense metal qi in the storm. Preparation for a new lance to begin the cycle anew.

Once again the bolt fell. A pillar of purest white, steeped in killing intent. Defiance alone may be sufficient, but this time there would be little and less of the Shadow to strip power from the Tribulation Cycle.

Still, the initial strike had used up far more of the gathered energy than had been intended to make that opening. From thereon, the rules of the game would stick to the level established by what had first truly stuck the heretic. Such was the mercurial nature of Heaven.

A single hammerstrike released a loud gong equal and opposite to the roiling thunder, drawn in by the unique strength of the Myia clan and multiplied endlessly in that split moment. When the array script around Aretaphila flared, they empowered an old story-

Two hundred years ago, a woman who lacked talent and fame was blessed with happiness. Last inheritor of a doomed line, she and her sole remaining parent knew that their line would end in their generation. There was no Despair to be found there, however. The fortunes of their line had declined for many centuries before then, and over the course of Millennia they had seen so very many of their peers vanish into the dust of history. Thus, unlike the last breaths of Iron which grasped endlessly, the Myia decided to accept their conclusion with a smile.

And were blessed with a miracle. A skilled blacksmith, who held no formal backing, had been nearly crippled. Saved by the daughter, he had inexplicably fallen in love and so chased her relentlessly. The father had been the same, and in joy at the serendipity - for is that not the story which had begun their line? - they had accepted the young man with open arms.

Even as Heaven sought to grind them into dust, they smiled.

Even as she was left alone at the end of a century of happiness, she sang.

But it had been enough. By living, by defying the cruelty visited upon them and pursuing happiness, a chance had been born.


Once again, the white pillar of metal qi fractured, the song breaking the fallen lance of power into a shape of natural lightning and in doing so dissipated it.

Once again, the funnel descended. The Storm Lord gripping a long funnel-spear, it's tip jagged and white, frothing endlessly with storm-water churning to a singular point. With the howl of a hurricane, the lord of the skies thrust at his intended victim. It was not a strike with any kind of skill, for such a being had no need for it. Skill was the invention of the weak, intended to cross the gap between themselves and the strong.

Easily predicted. Easily telegraphed.

The sharpened whitecap of the spear was met by a curious talisman: A set of seven bells, fused together without sound. Churning purple arms flexed, brightening with actinic might, seeking to push aside the obstruction. But Aretaphila Myia did not move from where she had chosen to stand.

A hammer struck a gong once again, and two shadows narrowed in consternation.

Once more, the heat of desert sands was sung of. An encounter that had been unasked for. But for those that lacked the creativity and adaptability of its own element, was there any need for something more complicated?

With a terrible moan promising of retribution, the Storm Lord dissolved into wisps, evaporating once again and seeding the Abyss with life,

For the first time, the loamy scent of earth after a summer's rain overpowered Aretaphila's senses. The sensation overwhelming to her who had spent so much time in the desert. In that instant of overpowering distraction did the wooden aspect of the cycle assert itself.

Closing in from all directions, the odd talisman she had used would be unable to save her.

The Kettleblade, summoned forth and swapped with the bronze hammer for the Zhong, was brought out to ward the ever-thirsting limbs of the Corpse Crucifixion Copse arose, its limbs stabbing endlessly, sap attempting to dull her blade through drenching it in the lifeblood of so very many ephemeral trees.

But the Stormwater had not been infinite, and as dull as the blade of Aretaphila's weapon became it was still one which drew deeply and hungrily from its opponents. Qi hissed unto the Singer's arm, rejuvenating her once again even as the explosive growth reached its nadir.

Time was up, and the lush greens gave way to dried out browns, the color of dried blood. Aretaphila sighed, hands still gripping her weapons as dying trees still grasped for her.

Before exploding into flame, and revealing the form of the Illusionary Haze Efreet, its grim countenance sneering blazing glass-teeth. Rather than opting for a contest of strength like those before it had, the monster blazed, its radiated haze of heat obscuring its form for brief moments as it flickered around the battlefield, seeking weakness.

The Myia grimaced, desperately turning around in order to keep it within her vision.

Malevolent intelligence burned, and whatever will guided the beast moved to test something out.

From one side, she held the odd fused bell talisman, the awkwardly shaped bulwark effortlessly warding against any strikes the Efreet laid against her. From the other side, the one with the facial scar, her weapon sliced in wide, sweeping arcs. Intended to meet the Efreets and force a deadlock rather than cut. To drain from its strength to empower the heretic before it. Just like its previous incarnation.

Yet vengeance would not be denied. The weakness of blindness was not something easily hidden. With both hands occupied, the Devil could not ring that accursed Zhong! The Efreets cowls raised, and with a flare of flame it burst into the Myia's blind spot, swinging powerfully where she could not see.

The Kettleblade swung awkwardly to meet the Efreet's strike, but it did nothing as she was blown away.

Right.

In front.

Of that accursed Zhong.

The fused bells vanish, replaced by that damnable bronze hammer. There is another ring, but time is not yet lost! It descends, mouth slavering embers, fangs reaching towards the woman's neck when-

A desperate, near death plea echoes through the deep places of the earth. Seeking succor, salvation from danger. There is no answer. She is alone. But at the end of the path is the crisp, clean smell of the strong and hidden grotto.

Beautiful and serene, even in the darkness it brings light and life.


Once more the Efreet is assaulted by a Song antithetical to its existence. A thing of flame and death and shadow. The Qi which binds it frays, and one more leaves behind a smattering of fine ash that scatters into the earth around the Myia.

There is no sound. No hooting. No indication of the next step of the cycle.

The Abyss is as silent as the grave.

Cautiously, scanning her surroundings, Aretaphila reaches to swing the bronze hammer once more as she feels the displacement of air at the back of her neck. Chilled earth clasps her torso in a talon, and with a beat of mighty wings she begins to be carried upwards, out of the bounds of her Array.

The Revenant Owl hoots in triumph, and Aretaphila meets it in kind with her Blue Note - the frequency anathema to its Inversion nature. But as the sound begins to proliferate her body jerks, along with the disintegrating limb holding her.

Oelivert's puissant eyes stare back triumphantly, the leg holding her having been torn away before Aretaphila's attack could proliferate through the rest of its body. But the momentum of the Revenant's flight carried her away as the larger creature switched directions, diving directly towards the center of her chosen battlefield; The Zhong of Deep Waters.

"No!" The Myia calls out in frustration, desperately shoving and hacking the disintegrating talon, and after a moment is free enough to leap from it to try and intercept the undead manifestation of Earth Qi.

Oelivert flips in midair, wide wings spreading to arrest its dive as its sole remaining talon reaches for its target.

With an incredible cry the Songstress falls upon the outstretched limb, her blade severing it with a mighty crack of split earth and bone.

A wooden beak clacks in annoyance, and the owl tries to retreat, buying distance. But it isn't enough. If it gets enough distance, if it can retreat into the darkness of the shadows, it can just do the same trick again, only this time leading with its beak and bulk!

Aretaphila leaps, the point of her weapon stabbing deeply into the gravesoil flesh of her quarry. With bright, clear note the collapse of the Oelivert begins again. But those yellow eyes, brimming with fel intelligence, capture her gaze.

Reflected in them is victory.

"The Zhong!" The Myia cries out, a report of thunder heralding the beginning of the Third Cycle.

She is too late. The spear of white falls upon her treasured tool with finality, the Zhong of Deep Waters vanishing beneath the pillar of lightning.

Stormclouds encircle it, then wrench it from the earth. The Storm Lord now wields a guando of Tribulation Lightning, his limbs now muscled and defined with roaring water.

Two shadows meet her cyclopean gaze, and in that instant Aretaphila understands.

She had been had, a trick that Callista had mentioned from her own experience - the intelligent exploitation of the cycle to suppress or destroy the tools brought to even the odds between the would-be King and the Heavenly Tribulation.

The Stormlord touched ground for the first time, whitecapped feet driving wet divots into the bottom of the crater before charging forth with a skilled thrust the envy of any Centurion.

Almost as if the Tribulation could have brought such technique to bare at any time. Clearly taunting her into trying to repeat the previous exchange.

Fine then.

Hands gripped a bronze hammer in one hand, and a glistening blade in the other with a firm enough grip to evoke the shrieking of stressed metal.

Aretaphila would give the Tribulation this much: Forcing her to use her trump card on only the third cycle was something she hadn't thought possible. And for the first time since the lightning had first come down, the Myia felt fear.

But not doubt. Even with the aches and pains brought by the Owl and the Efreet, she still did not doubt.

For in her breast, was carried the desperate inheritance of the Myia. Their last great paragon who attained the highest levels of the Sea Conquering Army. Driven from the Third Sea, she had struggled mightily against those who had denied her, but at the end of the end she would not be able to overcome this Turtle Child's Dao Protectors.

And though the Myia never saw her again, they still carried a fragment of a fragment of a fragment of her legacy. A legacy that had faced the mightiest the Third Sea could bring to bear, and found itself equal to them.

"Before the Song, there was the Law." Aretaphila murmured, and this declaration rose into a wondrous, stupendous, transcendent note, rocking her Cultivation Base far beyond the limits of a mere Qi Condensation cultivator.

A letter, sealed deep within the heart of the Myia estate once said;

Little Bell,

This legacy is intended to only be carried by the Elder of our family. Your grandmother's notes indicated that it was beyond her to carry, even in Foundation Building, but from what we know it was something wielded by the last true Paragon of our line before the Myia never again left this land.

However, I know this much: The world has changed much since we began to become diminished. Before the Gate of the Blood became our sole pride. It's possible that if it's you, who has cultivated and refined her physique to the very limits of Qi Condensation and the Olympian Keystones, you may be able to survive.

So I leave this with you. A last gift to try and overcome Heaven's Wrath and reach the status of Single Pillar King you've pursued for so very long.

Whether you survive or not, you are the only one fit to receive this, as Family Matriarch.

We look forward to your return.


The fragment of the Law shook the air, and caused the natural Qi of the land to freeze in abject shock for but a moment. Blood spurt from the mouth that had uttered the Song as the constituent parts that made up its body rejected it, the memory of its trespasses held even after so many uncountable centuries.

Water Qi fell apart, splashing the earth, and with renewed intensity the Corpse Crucifixion Copse arose once more, spearing hungrily towards the twice-over heretic. But this was a known trick, a solved problem, and even without the Zhong Aretaphila croaked out the song of the hungry desert. Wood was reduced to kindling, ushering forth Fire which drank deeply from the rich offering left to it.

Malevolent eyes met Aretaphila's cyclopic gaze, and narrowed in hate and resolved. The Efreet swelled, the fire qi composing it rampaging wildly before detonating into a new conflagration. The crater they stood in deepened, fine ash scattered to the shadows in a thick, gray haze.

The final part of the Third Phase began with the rustling of many wings, and the hooting of many foes.

Five sets of eyes glared hatefully at Aretaphila, the Revenants multiplied by the weight of sin. The Songstress cursed.

Five immense owls swarmed the smaller woman, ten grasping talons slashed and tore at her body, and even as she swung wildly she was unable to stop them. The fragment of Law was not something her body could easily bear after all, and the Oeliverts had no intention of allowing her to use it either.

Again and again and again Aretaphila was struck from her blind spot, sent tumbling through the softened dirt to the delighted hoots off the undead owls. Even as she attempted to purge one with her regular song, the creature would always tear away the affected area before seemingly drawing up a replacement from the ground beneath their feet.

Once more, Aretaphila was cast into shadow. Ten lambent eyes gazed down upon her in joined hatred and hunger.

If only she still had the Zhong, she wouldn't need the full power of the Law to overcome this! If only she had some way to carry the Song without having to originate it from that power entirely!

But she did, did she not?

Aretaphila's Cultivation base churned, the cracks introduced by her previous effort groaning without inducing agony. Or at least, so little agony compared to the rest of her tattered self as to be unfelt.

A wooden beak snapped downward, aimed for her center of mass.

It struck up a plume of dirt, as Aretaphila barely rolled out of the way. And in that bare instant before the remaining Oeliverts descended, she swung the weapon that overturn the situation.

The hammer for the Zhong of Deep Waters struck Aretaphila squarely in her lower stomach, the impact rocking her Clear Summer's Bell Constitution, and sending a clear, beautiful ring into the depths of her Dantian.

Four wooden beaks struck, but that was irrelevant.

It was too late.

What arose from the depths of Aretaphila's soul was a single note, ringing wonderfully. Transcendent, the Myia understood that this was the beginning of her Song.

And so she Sang, empowered with the fragment of power she had carried within it.

A song of struggle. Of strife. Of pain and the happiness that is found in between. The ache of climbing the mountain and the overpowering joy that comes from seeing the sight at its summit. A wonderful, beautiful life.

Five hoots became screams of anguish, as the cores of the constructs met their anathema. Death before Life, and the Earth before Everything Beyond It. The screams faded, coming to an end as the Song overwhelmed and cast them into the wind.

The third cycle ended, but Aretaphila still sang even as she put away her sword.

She had nothing else left, and so would bet everything on mastering this new Song before the next six cycles completed.

As Aretaphila sang desperately, the storm above Eclipse Reversal Island pulsed and roiled with anger and fury. No longer were the previous preparations sufficient. But, the rules had been set and too much energy had been expended. Two more Heresies awaited in the very near future, and there was only so much strength to be gathered in the Organ Meat Desert.

But what strength could be found, would be put to use all the same.

Like grasping limbs, funnel clouds descended upon the lands around Fu Tong city. Where the Heaven's Shadow and Cunning Cannibal had clashed were Dao emanations, but none so strong as the ones on the floating island. A hundred thousand grudges. Despair and hunger. Anger and curses fueled by greed and futility. Heretical ghosts, perhaps, but there was a strength to them. And it was only right that they repay their debt to the world by working towards erasing a far greater sin.

The Light Qi had been scoured from Fu Tong, but still there were a great many mortals there living. It had been 60 years, true, and many of those who had been victims of the Blood Cannibals had passed on.

But what of those who had immediately sided with worse criminals, hmm?

They, too, were heretics for aiding and abetting. Rather than spending their lives to overthrow the alien, they meekly accepted succor and sustenance, merely because the monsters had ruled them with the gloved hand over the crack of the whip!

Heresy! Abomination!

In the wrath of the storm there was no allowances for things such as mercy!

Dark clouds extended even to the reinforced walls of the city, and the storm's limbs touched down. Drinking deeply from the soulstuff of the apostates who served the alien. Their grudges. Their lives. Their legacies and histories.

When the winds withdrew, there was ruin and destruction. Though not absolute, it was toll enough for the crimes Fu Tong had committed.

Empowered with new fuels and new strength, the hammer-blows within the dark clouds began their work of converting strength to Qi. A forging of a mighty spear, fit for a god. Even as the wind screamed and the thunderbeats did their great work, the Song beneath the storm refined itself endlessly.

The notes were repeated, the life that had lived them enriched them. Verses added, the story of over two centuries of life adding deeper and deeper context. A great work, an epic fit for the ages took shape. A mother who died to pay back the happiness she had been given. A grandmother who had been the equal of all who stood against her. Legacy provided weight and tenor, for this tale did not begin with one life, not truly.

Storm forges cooled, flashes of white qi ceased to cast shadows. Tribulation had built itself within the darkness, been refined and sharpened to a point that would sunder even this dead world.

All to silence that accursed Law which even now reverberated in their deepest, smallest, constituent particles. The very Qi of the land quivering with the memory of the tyrant which had sought to suppress them under its Song.

The new Song rose to a crescendo, telling of an unknown future.

Tribulation fell, denying it.

Eclipse Reversal Island shuddered under the weight of the killing intent that had been tossed down, a firm and mighty spear of white light. Wielded by a noble countenance, armored in Royal Purple clouds. The Storm King descended in a peerless thrust from his throne, and where his head would be was an open faceplate revealing a great beard and moustache that were the churning waves, above which were a pair of eyes that were as clear and blue as the depths of the sea.

Grim with purpose, narrowed in intent, the mere echoes of a Shadow were cleaved in its passage and revealed the bare stone of the floating for the first time in a century. Stripping away the protection which the Song has sought to hide behind.

Two great feet alighted upon the center of the island, set shoulder width apart.

Two titanic arms flexed, raising the blazing white spear, even as its haft still extended from the clouds. Actinic light and sound screaming against the realm. With a mighty heave and kiai that was the scream of winds laying low the world, the blazing Godspear was stabbed into the pit, where no thing lay hidden.

However, there was no longer a need for secrets.

Aretaphila Myia sang - of a bright future where she and her fellows struggled. Normal days interspersed with danger. Fell beasts rising from a dying world to take them down with it, even as they too battled against the forces that had brought such rot.

Smiles that shone brightly for NInety-Nine Years out of every Hundred and were no less bright for it.

Effort to oppose cruel heavens, cruel fate, cruel circumstance. And the breakthrough of Legions, obtaining strength. How every sacrifice mattered, blood never spilled in futility. A great bronze bulwark against the trepidations of the universe.

And in this, the echoes of Law resonated. For it was with purpose that the World would be brought to heel. For it was the Directive that the Turtle World be yoked. For it was for the Imperator that they came to this world, grinding down all evil in the service of his majesty.

In the face of that inexorable march ever forward, base lightning was but a feather before the mountain that was Duty.


The haft of metal Qi once more bent, the spearpoint flattening against the fiercely vibrating Qi in the air. The Killing Intent losing coherence, losing itself within the Song.

As the Godspear broke upon the Song, a Violet Fist raged, carrying the frozen waters that dwelled at the extremity of Heaven. Churning endlessly they met their match against the ever-oscillating future, a Golden Dawn parting stormclouds, and scattering the Storm King with a scream and howl, drowning the flying island with a deluge of rain water.

Enriched, the rootlets drunk deeply and greedily. Grasping white pillars corded about the flying landmass, joining and squirming against one another to form a great mass, sheathed in rich red bark. A titan took the place of the Storm King, beneath an evergreen crown the Dracul Sequoia Ent narrowed its knothole-eyes, pits that flashed with intelligence.

Born of the land, the mass of wood-aspected Qi raised up a pillar of its very self, one of its two base trunks that would appear as legs on any lesser creature. Chunks of earth rose, rich and loamy as grasping white roots ascended with it. With a great, creaking movement the limb moved as if taking a step, and a shadow was cast over the pit at the island's heart.

It is the business of the Legions to be ever industrious. To take from the land and create tools. Implements. That which will provide shelter or succor or safety for those who fell under its command or under its aegis. The blood of the Turtle Child is fuel to power arrays and Cultivation. The beasts that wander the desert are pets, food, or raw material for tools. Even the natives of the land, mere mortals, are another resource. The source of the strength of their posture. The source from which all Cultivators are sourced and the purpose for which the Legions fight endlessly, the Imperators Directive long forgotten. Bronze axes flash, bringing a forest to heel, kindling for fire. Charcoal for writing. Lumber for housing. Shafts for spears. Materials for carts.

A place for shade, to relax in the heat of the sun.


The grabbing rootlets seek to use the Song for sustenance, but make no purchase. It's story consumes them, reduced to raw material for the ever marching war machine of the Optimatoi. The trunk descends, seeking to end the interloper with base strength, the Ents bark furrowed in consternatio.

But this tree was a greenhouse flower.

Drunk off the lifegiving rains of the storm and heaven, it can not survive the desert. Can not thrive in a harsh environment.

The tree from which the Ent was descended are said to be nearly truly immortal, able to shrug off any lingering damage so long as it was not truly immortal. But the Optimatoi are different. Where bark crusts over and scars, forever marring the growth and appearance of the tree. Bronze does not. It does not tarnish. It rends. It tears. It shatters and breaks. But all bronze is reforged, and once again serves.

A million years of legacy, unyielding and fighting endlessly, carrying scars and death and growing back ever stronger.

The trunk encounters the resistance of the Song, but it is a heavy, fragile thing. The Song does not buckle, its voice unflinching beneath the threat of violence. But the force can not be shifted; it is too late. Between the Heavens and the Song, the Drakul Sequoia Ent buckles, the massive trunk exploding into white splinters, precipitating a creaking and slow fall. With a crunch and a shaking of the island, the great wood-aspected entity collapses in full, the impact of its landing tearing it apart with the forces at play.

Truly a greenhouse flower to the end.

With a groan, the lights that marks its intelligence fade, will o' wisps dimming before exploding into a new conflagration!

Ash and smoke rise, the stone of the island turning cherry-hot as a mushroom plume connect the island to the storm. Actinic bolts fall back town, striking the corpse of the Ent and burning it away all the quicker to fuel this latest manifestation of Heaven's wrath.

Flames burn bright orange, then intensity to form a ghostly azure. Blue fire, an auspicious thing. The King of Flames, not seen since the Golden Devils had been driven to the Organ Meat Desert, where the bandit kings which dwelt there called upon their greatest protector and totem at incredible cost.

For the first time in millennia fire that burned from the deepest pits rose in a plume, forming limbs and great head, shaped unlike any beasts ever recorded. Save one other. With a great screeching, hissing, and popping cry is born the Hellfire King Ifrit, its azure claws rending all the desert to glass, and everything else to fuel for burning.

Cloaked in smoke and ash, it raised hackles in recognition of the kin that it had been brought forth to fight, terrible in majesty and wrath. Prismatic fangs glistened, bared in rage and vengeance.

Where its feet moved, the earth bled molten stone. Where its breath hissed, plumes of actinic smoke issued forth. Blue flames arced, tracing a psychedelic haze as its arms stretched, moving experimentally. Like those who had come before it, the spirit was born with explicit, heavensent purpose.

Vengeance, for the unknown twin that lay beneath the Golden Dawn Fortress. Reduced to an ever-burning source of heat to power the many formations there. And before it, was a hope for this Clan. A would-be King, seeking to grasp beyond her station.

Like a supine dog, the Ifrit crouched above the pit from where the Song issued forth. Though it nor its forebear had ever encountered it, the fuel which they burned for life ever quivered with the echoes of that Law and thus recognized that undying heresy.

An intrinsic hatred, brought forth two fold. The beast knew it had come to life because of a great need, and so sought to ensure its success. Great limbs like trowels dug around the pit, sculpting the molten earth like clay, reshaping what had been a deep crater into a raised bowl.

A furnace.

Even as the magmatic heat glazed over the air, and rendered light impassible, the sensation in its constituent Qi drew the Ifrit's aim unerringly. Preparations complete, the King of Flames stood to its full height, wild and energetic, two limbs raised up. Great, massive bolts of lightning struck the outstretched hands, even as blue flames rose and consumed all around it for energy. Roiling, feeding, growing ever brighter in intensity as the lightning eventually dyed the flames white with intensity it clasped its hands together.

Two fires became one, forming a false sun that illuminated Hell.

The great beast howled and bent forward, slamming its limbs forward and dragging its blazing construct with it. Sized perfectly, the sphere of flame passed the lips of the raised earthen pit with no spillover. A perfectly contained flagration.

But bronze does not melt easily once hardened. An alloy that is easy to make and smelt, once unified of its constituent ores bronze is equal in hardiness to any other harder metal, and more malleable besides.

Thousands of years ago, the previous King of Hellfire discovered this to its detriment. A similar flame hurled at Nascent Soul strength, that broke harmlessly against the mightiest Hoplite wielded by the clan in untold generations. The Song told of this tale.

Of a great bronze Centurion who did not falter, carrying all the hopes and desperate will of the Clan to live! And so the merely angry beast fell against the unshaking Dao Hearts of the Golden Devil Clan. Even if they were to be driven from their homes, they would simply make new ones. Derived of their treasures, they shall simply craft new ones.

All forges need a flame, after all.

On the day that the King of the Desert was overthrown, great bronze chains lined with countless array inscriptions were flash-forged and carved even as the Nascent Soul-level Hoplite contended with the creature, all the Clan's remaining Legions struggled to secure the life they needed to survive. A mere beast would not be the end of the Optimatoi.

A great bronze spear pinned it in place, and the Flame knew fear. Where the desert around it melted to glass, the bronze did not tarnish. Did not warp. Its strength was as nothing before the Hoplite, and then came the chains.


The entity of flame shrieked in terror, animal instinct causing it to rear back as the orb of white flame halted where it had been planted. Fire is not something that burns without fuel, and as bright as it burned there was no fuel to be found within that pit.

All had been claimed by the Song.

And with that realization, the Hellfire King Ifrit simply…burnt out. Ash scattering, burying the entire island beneath a layer of purified, life-giving ash.

There was no pause. The ash had been enough. The island shook, the magma cooling rapidly into pitch-black obsidian, smokey and reflecting naught but shadow.

The layer of ash rippled, and then vanished. Drained in an instant to reveal long, thick veins of volcanic glass. Earth shook and there was a great scream, as rock tore and reformed itself. The floating island shifted, now naked beneath the stormy sky, illuminated only by the bolts of lightning that struck it, filling it with ever more energy.

From death, to the earth. From the earth, life.

Outcroppings of obsidian flexed, and in so doing reshaped themselves. What had first appeared to be twisted glass reflected the actinic light, revealing cunningly worked plumage. Rocky ridges shifted, dust and pebbles falling apart to reveal a characteristic shape to their formation. Not of stone, but ridges of an entirely different kind.

The kiln that had been raised over the crater shook and cracked. The perfect round stone split evenly down the middle, the stone themselves raised and tilted over the crater like precipitous ledges.

Two thick pillars of lightning, shining yellow with qi, descended beneath the ridges. Stabbing deeply, and finishing their work. What was left behind were two great mounds of amber, blood of the great Ent, perfectly rounded and encapsulating a deep and dark glass within.

Baleful Light Qi, repurposed from miserable Fu Tong, shone within those mounds of amber. Giving the shaped eyes a grim countenance and imbuing them with a malicious intent.

The Flying Colossus Oelivert returned to life with a grim and resounding hoot, it's cry heard for hundreds of li across the desert. In exchange for size and power, it had been purged of the Dao Emanations which had infected it previously. Cleansed by Heavenly Tribulation and granted Wisdom, it did not seek to act as its predecessors had done and crush the Song with brute strength. Rather, it sought to fight Song with Sound, and as it called it clashed endlessly against the Song being sung deep within the crater that had become its gullet - long since swallowing the abominable would-be King.

Noise, noise, noise. The inexorable march forward strained against the interference. The world coming down, and matching the Song if not in quality, then at least in raw strength.

Meaningless, the Whale knew nothing, and so it was taught despair. Yet still it flew defiant. Empowered by the World, Law could only reach so far, grasping into the innermost nature to contest the Turtle Child.

Blocked at every turn, the Law had matched the Third Sea blow for blow, even to the point of exhaustion. For that was the nature of the Song. Easily a match for all things, at the fullest of its strength. Even if it could not overcome. At the end of all struggles, it would not lose either.

The Song continued. The Song endured. The Song did not rest. Did not align. It always reverberated defiantly. Resisting all things until the very, very end.


Expended, the hoots of the transmutated island fell silent. The lambent light dimmed from its eyes. The animate stone once more became inanimate.

Fourth Cycle, completed.

Even as she sang, Aretaphila Myia realized something quite critical: If she kept this up, she would run out of strength long before the Ninth Cycle, and almost assuredly die here. The Myia family's final trump card had not been enough. If anything, it had somehow...provoked an even stronger response from the Five-Element Tribulation. Massive titans of elementals, this early? The Princess hadn't experienced anything like that until the final cycle!

Whatever it was, and whatever history that Song had with the Third Sea, even in the Myia's records it was known that it had not been enough to overcome the land when sung by one of the family's Paragons in antiquity.

It was a dead end, Aretaphila realized. An echo from someone long dead, who had failed, could never hope to become the foundation for the Dao she sought.

Above, the storm roiled. Thunderclaps ringing out again and again and again, drinking deeply from the Five-Element Augmentation Cycle to prepare an ever more powerful series of blows to end her life and her Song.

There had been something there, the Myia scion realized. Something she had only begun to notice when the echo of Law had been added to her singing. There had been a resonance, between it and the forces of nature that had been arrayed against her. Perhaps…that was the key?

It made sense, based on the notes and insights left behind with the Zhong of Deep Waters. All Qi resonated to a secret rhythm, unique to the form the Qi took. The implications were strange and confusing, and Aretaphila had never truly grasped them. But hadn't that just been her own maturity?

She hadn't needed to understand them.

Even if she was a two century old lady, she was still a child when it came to understanding the Dao.

She didn't need to know the bits and bobs of why she just needed to understand it. Intrinsically. Things like overthinking everything? That was for folks like the Princess. She was Aretaphila Myia! The woman too stubborn to deviate from the path she wanted to walk, who waded into danger and made mistake upon mistake not because she deliberately chose wrong, but because she refused to be brought down no matter what!

Because the world is wro-. No.

No, that wasn't right.

(The storm churned, a new Godspear nearly forged.)

She didn't keep going because the world was wrong. She kept going because the world was rotten, cruel, and unfair down to it's very core.

(The echoes of Law begin to fray. How could the world be inherently cruel? All was as the Imperator desired it to be, the Heavens merely corrupted creation in turn.)

But Aretaphila knew, she knew down to her very core that even with all the suffering inherent to the world. You could still make it a better place. You couldn't conquer the world, but you could carve out a small slice of it for yourself. Make it right and to your sensibilities.

(Such selfishness was antithetical to the Directive. It is not enough that one Man live free while he is surrounded by Slaves. The Vision is for All, not merely a select few. To live and die and sacrifice for the Directive was the truest justice of all.)

You didn't need to destroy the world and make it anew.

(The Song shifts, echoes of the past fading more and more into the foreground)

You just needed to make it yours.

(Something within the young woman, unseen, shifts inextricably. The Sea of Qi churns. One verse ends. A new one begins.)

Aretaphila Myia's eye snaps open for the first time since she had begun singing unceasingly, the blue eye tinged silver in the light of the storm.

(The hammering ceases.)

"Hey! Assholes!"

(Fists clad in a storm fit to swallow the world grasp the embodiment of Heaven's Fury.)

"I know you can hear me!"

(Lightning sparks across the gaze of the Storm God, gazing downward.)

"So!"

(The finely worked Godslaying Spear is aimed at its only target.)

"LISTEN TO MY SONG!"

(In a flash of light, weapon and wielder descend in an instant. The winner is he who strikes first.)

A new note is sung before the light finishes flashing. Though the Heavens move faster than sound, the Song is irresistible.

The Stormgod stands, spear shoved into the gullet of the land, but it can not bear to finish its strike. A new sound echoes from within it, and though there is no resistance the feeling of revulsion and hatred has passed, replaced by a sensation of belonging.

The edge of the spear dulls, now simple lightning. It strikes, the flash and boom casting a deep shadow where the Songstress stands. Stormclouds touch ground, beginning to beat a rhythm in line with this new sound. Bereft of the intent which had shaped it until now, the Stormgod falters, the rain that filled it scattering across the island.

Two trunks rise from the earth, shoving aside the loamy flesh of the land. Reddish bark creeps up, forming a new wood elemental. Where once its visage conveyed wisdom, now its loamy bark and branches show an expression of monstrous intent. The Nosferatu Sequoia Ent turns towards its intended target, claw-like limbs extended towards the pit.

The hunger and thirst that drives it vanishes. Contentment, the feeling of the refreshing breeze after a storm brushes against its canopy. The smell of loamy earth is carried and imparted, the natural counterpart to enduring the harsh winds that would otherwise test even its venerable trunk. After lightning and winds, the knowledge that its nuts and children had been carried into unclaimed land, to fulfill their intended purpose.

The memory of once being that seed, cast into the wind and carried through a strange and unknowable journey to this tiny island flying above the Organ Meat Desert. The great wood elemental pauses, the feelings of nostalgia, of a home long traveled from filling its form to the brim. The ent turns east, limbs pondrously stretched outwards.

Lightning strikes it dead in a thick bar, carrying hatred and killing intent, and in so doing the pacified creature is unresisting as it becomes kindling for the next stage of the Cycle.

Blue flames erupt, rapidly consuming the ent. The wood elementals eyes dim, as if closing them in preparation to take a well-earned rest. But as its body cracks and shrieks, from its corpse rises a being blazing a purest white, consuming the large elemental near-instantly. Rather than a king of hell, the canine-monstrosity holds the same coloration as the stars, its long limbs a jet black glass fit to match the void.

The Starblaze Emperor Ifrit descends, born with the memory of its kins suffering and last moments. An obsidian maw opens, breathing deeply to draw air towards its iron core. If bronze would not falter before the light of the stars, then perhaps it shall perish before the fires of their death instead!

But as it draws in the air, so too does it breath in the qi already inexorably affected by the Song.

Carried by the grains of sand that had been drawn by the storm, infinite memories of the spirits of the desert are drawn forth and conveyed. Not just of the long dead Shanqu who worshiped them, crafting elaborate bonfires to safeguard the nights of their individual towns and camps, flash forging the beginnings of the Scorpion Road. Times spent fighting alongside them. Granting wishes to those who paid a price, and left all smiling afterwards.

The existence of those same smiles being unchanging, even with the Shanqu long gone. More of them, even, despite the Golden Devils not holding the Ifrits in the same esteem as those they had conquered. Those the Shanqu were gone, those who had made up the Shanqu had not. The traditions endured. Even as the flames burned out, they were kindled anew. The fire was carried on. In the memories, it caught sight of bronze skin and golden hair leading the new festivals, smiling just as brightly as those long past.

They had just wanted to survive too.

With that realization the Starflame Emperor Ifrit gasped the death of stars dying on its own lips. Guttering out, and falling to ash once more. The flames of hatred are no longer able to sustain it.

The fifth being awoke, thick bars of lightning slamming down into the island, reviving the dormant spirit of it once again. From the sides of the island two obsidian wings spread. Crags flexed, revealing sharpened talons of firmest granite. Amber eyes shone heaven's brilliance, visible far and wide through the shadow cast by the storm.

For but an instant, the Soaring Castle Oelivert hesitated. Aware of the previous four elementals failing, it turned its immense intelligence towards understanding why. In so doing, it chose, and with that choice the Song continued unabated.

Singing of a time when it was all alone aboard the island, its sole home for as long as it could remember. Feasting on those foolish enough to ride the barrel up to it or those strong enough to fly there. Upon encountering its first true equal, a second owl, scarred and haggard. It had been stronger in presence than the owl Oelivert had been, once, but even in the absence of its full intellect it understood that an injured rival would prove sufficient.

The other owl had not had a chance to even rest, upon preparing to roost on its island. Oelivert had struck with talon and beak, an ambush from shadows and preying upon weakness. It had been too weak, too exhausted to fight back. All Oelivert ever learned from its origins had been that it smelled nothing of the desert.

But then it had eaten its core, grown stronger. Strong enough to consume all other life on this floating island, leaving it all alone. After consuming the other owl it had become strong enough for its mind to mature, and its intellect to come forth.

Deep within its earthen gullet, a sense of melancholy and loss struck the revived earth elemental. Perhaps if it had not been alone, that child would not have succeeded, and the two would be keeping one another company even now.

Despair struck, for life is not merely about experiencing fortune unending.

Silently, the light left those great amber eyes.

Fifth Cycle complete.

Deep within the islands gullet, Aretaphila saw none of this. She had closed her eyes, and merely sung what her Dao Heart told her, empty hands guiding her as she danced alone on an unseen stage, the sea of her Qi churned endlessly.

Lightning struck again. Illuminating her as a backdrop. The storm provided a rhythm, beating endlessly and tempering. Wood provided fuel, allowing growth and progress. Fire came, and with it heat and drive, pushing herself. Last came the earth, who was the foundation beneath her feet, the only one who could endure the Song in full.

The sixth cycle concluded, the seventh began almost immediately. A note of desperation entered into the Heavenly Tribulation, but at Aretaphila had finally hit her stride. Each cycle now enriched her dantian, striking deeply and firmly with the five element Qi. Empowering her and her Song just as the cycle had sought to empower itself.

The Eighth Cycle was richest by far, the gullet of the island having become a kiln, a forge. Something which under any other circumstance, with any other individual, she could not have hoped to survive. Let alone continue her song.

But here and now, at this time and at this place, she continued singing unabated. Qi, thick and rich, sank into her blood, drenched her physique, filled her dantian, and as everything else burned away…

By the Ninth Cycle, the Heavens truly did Shake. The final spear was massive beyond imagination, viewable for hundreds of li around. The Austere Hurricane Patriarch wielded his weapon with transcendent skill, but that did not matter. For the Song had captured him, and even as he carved open the earth she merely shined the brighter for it. In its place rose the Laputian Heavenly Tree, and hands which grasped angrily wound up offering her a flower that wilted all too quickly.

A self consuming fire that collapsed in on itself followed, the Gravitic Abyss Demon looked upon her with callous eyes, coveting her for himself. But in that instant of comprehension it knew that she would not sing for him alone. The storm fell one final time upon the island, infusing all its remaining strength and in so doing restored all it could.

Dao-Cancelling Castle Oelivert looked upon Aretaphila Myia, shining upon its breast. To cancel out her powers would be simplicity itself, but it had already gained wisdom. The Mountain that it was had already been moved by her Song. It was too late.

The storm passed. Heaven's Tribulation, complete.

Where before had been an island wreathed in a perpetual fog of shadow and horror now lay a verdant, soaring castle in the sky.

Alone and empty-handed, Aretaphila sang the end of her song.

Yet not alone.

Every blade of grass. Every moss covered stone. Every spark of flame and drop of rain. All sang back to and with her.

Shining silver-bright, Aretaphila bowed to her audience, thanking them for listening.

Within her Sea of Qi, a pillar arose. But not a pillar.

The hammer of her Zhong of Deep Waters had been smelted into her Cultivation Base by the pressures of the Five-Element Tribulation, and now ensconced in Silver it was no longer a set with the now-destroyed Zhong.

It matched the shining Silver body that Aretaphila had grown into. The first evolution of the Clear Summer's Bell Constitution - the Silver Summer Bell. Completing its sounding was a necessary step to prepare the benefits of her physique to adapt to the strengths of the Blood of Gold, at which point it would be equal to any of the other Great Physiques of the clan.

With one hand, she held out a singular piece of dark iron. The "Pillar" of the Ninth Prince had assuredly endured the Tribulation alongside her. And so, for her temporary partner, she provided a short explanation of her Dao as he had asked for such a short yet long time ago.

"The Heaven-Shaking Song is not something which resists the heavens. It's something that carves out from them a place for oneself and others."

A beautiful, ringing note carried through the clear summer sky.

The Clan's Silver King had been born.

A.N. Hollllllllyyyyyyyyyyyy shit this Omake was a labor of love to write! But damn am I proud of the result! I can't believe this came together so well, everybody! Thanks again for reading, and thanks so much to @Occipitalobe for putting together such an awesome quest that inspired us all to churn out novel-length stuff for!

Almost a solid 15 thousand words, man. Wow! I can hardly believe it myself! Let's hope its enough to make the difference for this turn!

But yeah, for those who just want a tl;dr on the functionality of the [Heaven Shaking Song] I hope that between the allegory of the earlier omake and the way it was expressed at the end when Aretaphila began to face smash her way through the various cycles made it pretty clear. But I understand that tl;drs are for folks who dont read anyway! So with that said, let me go into a bit more explicit detail.

Aretaphila uses her Demonic Tunes as a memetic carrier for her Dao effects. Now given that Demonic Tunes are actually an extremely versatile form of Art, one which can go into esoteric effects more easily than the normal elemental wizardry stuff. What this means in practice is that Aretaphila is basically compounding that element of Demonic Tunes by compounding it with an anime physics understanding of harmonic theory, brute forced by her Dao magic.

And since this is done via Dao Magic, that means she can either align those vibrations with the properties of the Qi as its already shaped, which translates into a variety of buffs. Alternatively, she can use different frequencies to forcibly alter said Qi. At lower levels this would just be shaking of Qi constructs, or letting her various Demonic Tunes Arts hit way harder than they ordinarily would. At higher levels we get into applied Dao Magic with literally singing shit into existence, with her Songs forcibly making ambient Qi harmonize. This can be contested, ofc.

Strictly speaking, a Dao Emanation like that emitted by Rina would be a hard counter to this kind of Dao simply because its a brute force unga bunga type deal, so the usual clash of wills that Aretaphila cheats to win would be taken off the table. Which coupled with the general squishiness of a Demonic Tunes user, and Rina not likely to be vulnerable to Soul Attacks by a peer means that this is a match she loses.

But if you aren't a very explicit brick, there's pretty good odds that in a straight up fight she'll screw you over if you require any kind of set up time, barring a means to resist her Dao Emanations. Or her Soul Attacks.

Or if you happen to catch her alone rather than in a Formation, in which case you're kind of just screwed anyway.

But yeah, in Mass Combat Aretaphila's basically supreme for her level. I'm very pleased with how she's turned out!
 
Chrysanthos Krimta 4 - Adventure in Yuan Clan Array
Chrysanthos Krimta

Adventure in Yuan Clan Array

The caravan had taken another stop, and while several beasts waves had attacked it through the journey, no permanent damage was dealt, since their strength was what normal Qi Condensation cultivators could dispatch. Hired hands and few Legionnaires where more than enough for stalling the beasts, and Chrysanthos served more of a battery for the formations in the caravan. Such tactics where more or less standard, and all the kinks worked out through the millennia. The mountains contained their fair share of dangers, far higher then the desert.

Qi Condensation disciples took care most of the fighting, and while he may have stalled in early Foundation Establishment due to several in particular suboptimal decades, it was still Foundation Establishment. Not to mention that with his artefacts, he could punch well above his cultivation level.


Still, his goal was almost in sight, even now, he could see the Yuan clan array, dominating the skyscape, and with his goal being one of many minor towns spread around it, it was a matter of days until he reached his goal. It is where he purchased his spot for the treasure realm. And with it, hopefully his luck would turn around.


Still, the date of the opening was quite far away, and he had businesses to attend to. He had brought many Qi Condensation appropriate treasures, and selling and loaning such was sure to bring profit. Sure, most of the disciples had their own, but from their own adventures and their Clans and Sects, but one of follies of a Cultivator was not known when enough was enough. Chrysanthos too had such a folly, but what made him a step ahead of others was his willingness to exploit others folly. Or at least he hoped so. It sounded as one of the things which may cost you your life if taken too far.



Still, by limiting himself to selling Qi Condensation treasures, he shouldn't come to the unfortunate end of one of the treasures he will sell. And by all odds, the various treasures should find themselves in different areas of the mountain.

The next several days passed by rather peacefully, and even his entrance into the array was not noteworthy. His adventure started rather harmlessly. He had faked his death rather early on, with his Cultivation being a bit below the average for Foundation Establishment. He had to test his luck in less Qi dense areas, hoping for a lucky chance. And he found it. In form of one of the lesser known plants which the Array knew to summon.


The Fatal Truth Bearing Tree was known for dealing insight and treasures to all around it. To a fatal degree. Its mere presence from afar was beneficial, but anything else was famous for overwhelming a poor unprepared soul. And in a presence of a Cultivator which could actually exploit it, it quite often just withered away or escaped. Considering such category included Golden Core cultivators mostly, he was not in danger of this treasure escaping him.

Switch the arteries of a mortal while feeding him 10 day morning dew for a week to form a Ghost Ascending Elixir.

And judging from a random insight he just got, his slow approach had already gotten him in it's range. Any insight would be fatal or crippling, depending on the Trees whims. One had to take a look near it, to see it's effects on the unprepared.

Since it was, of course, guarded by a Guardian beast, which kept basking in it's insight. Chrysanthos was not sure what it was, but with it's power was above his in Foundation Establishment. It may have been some sort of a wolf, but with its 8 legs, wings and a tail, it was certain it had spent quite a while near the tree, which kept boosting its cultivation and twisting it into it's defenders, advancing in certainly unpredictable ways. But he already had a plan for it. In a moment, Chrysanthos golem was summoned, slowly approaching the beast.

A talisman found itself on Chrysanthos robes, and his presence faded. If it was a more intelligent opponent. On the other hand, the talisman on the golem he summoned made its presence more pronounced. While not true invisibility, the combination of the two lesser talismans would serve its purpose, and let him step closer to the treasure. Still, even with the guardian beast distracted The puppet would have no worries attracting attention, and it was almost indestructible for the Foundation Establishment level. For all intents and purposes, it was a chew toy for the beast with its strength, but a chew toy which would last.

Approaching the tree was a truly novel experience, for the tree itself kept bombarding him with insights. And not a single one was remotely even useful. For every single one would certainly cripple him in some way.

Quickly, Chrysanthos set himself on the task of looting the tree, while trying to ignore the whisperings of the tree. The fruits where poisonous, containing potent Qi and even just the attempt of acquiring it could cost one's life, as the tree was known to defend its fruits with its life trough actually channeling Qi into it insights. The various branches which fell where minor treasures. The beast mostly protected the tree due to the trees manipulations and a ever present Qi density, but such effect was useless to a prospecting cultivator. The sap however, was the real treasure which was contained inside it could be used in various artefacts and formations, in place of knowledge based ingredients. Still, taking the sap would take time, and his Qi was consistently drained by the spirit beast pummeling his golem. He would have to take it near the roots so the tree would not even consider his intrusion as a attempt in taking the fruits. For just it's active attention at this range spelled certain doom.

Feed the lifeblood to the tree mixed with Tree-coloured Metal Liquid to acquire the fruit.

Clapping down on a insight, Chrysanthos continued his work. This was, without a doubt, getting very exhausting. For his personal bottleneck kept taunting him. At least it was painfully obvious that the insights would kill him so far if he ever acted on them.

Still, Chrysanthos had to get creative in order to store the liquid. With his mental defenses active, and while making sure that his thought process isn't corrupted by the tree.

He had some experience in harvesting spirit plants, and while he had subpar equip and no possible container, he did have some options.

He had a waterskin filled with some darkness aspected water, which could be used to contain some sap, but to lose the water would be horrible. It was a important life saving treasure in the right conditions, and if he had it during the last Trials, he wouldn't have lost a head during it.


As such, there was only one option. He needed to fill his lungs with the darkness infused water. He had no need for breathing, and he could not store it in stomach, since he was no apocathery, and couldn't even begin to speculate what sort of a effect would a mixture of remains of the pills and water result.

Taking a moment to pull out a knife, Chrysanthos started to cut near the roots of the tree, slowly harvesting the sap, and collecting it into the waterskin, periodically taking breaks and consuming spirit stones, as to distract the beast. The sap was going rather slowly, so he removed the tip of his bamboo spear, and used it as a pipe. It's passive Qi effect more then enough to speed up the transfer of the sap. As soon as he finished, he sealed the waterskin, and reconstructed his spear, and got ready to cut off the Qi he kept channeling into the golem. He would need to collect it before he leaves the area.

Put the sap in the eyes while bathing in a Twelve Prismatic Leaf soup to gain the ability to see lies.

Still, one thing escaped him. It was not a insight passing through his defenses, nor the spirit beast finally losing it's attention on the golem, and checking the tree. It was the final drop of sap, falling from his knife. While it didn't affect the tree in any way, it's passive attention being on it's fruits, it did produce a minor Qi surge. Which promptly activated a formation below his feet. It seems that the tree was attracted by the formation, and . It's teleportation effect would have no bearing on the tree, it's conceptual weight too heavy except for the most complex of teleportation. Chrysanthos on the other hand, had no such weight. As such, he found himself at the entrance of a cave. With a pair of Qi condensation glass figurines puppets charging him. While they posed no threat and where dispatched in a moment, the sudden shift was worrying. For there is only one thing they could be guarding.


This was a trial for a legacy. Probably Foundation Establishment or higher.

For the the glass puppets where not a test, not even a beginning of it. They were a warning for the unprepared. The entire cave was by all odds one of lesser known Trials in the Man-As-World Mountain Array.

He had no strength for such a trial. Still, having no strength and not being able to gain anything from the trial where different things. Locations of such trials would sell for a pretty penny.

If he had the ability to talk to bargain.



Well, a change of priorities was in order. He either had to find a container for water, some pen and paper or just improvise with his Sound spells. Then, he would travel and try to find other cultivators to sell this information to. Which was contrary to his earlier planning, but allowances in plans must be made. Since he had no wishes of taking on a trial which by all odds was designed for late Foundation Establishments. He was greedy, not stupid.

And hopefully, with all the Qi Condensation treasures he borrowed to various Qi condensation cultivators, he would have a hefty return on investment. For while a single great cultivator could net a great profit in the secret realms, so could a minor boon to many count as a great boon to one. Their profit was his profit. In a manner of speaking.
 
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